Now all we need is a good drawfag...

To expand, we're looking for more fluff.

The tl;dr of what he have so far is they used to be a successor chapter of the Blood Angels, and the Red Thirst was extremely strong in them. The chapter began falling to Khorne, but Slaanesh saw an opportunity and sent a Daemonette named Skin Dancer to remove their Rage and Thirst. All they had to do was sign over their souls to ol' Spikedick. They agreed, and the Inquisition declared them traitors.

Now they fully embrace the worship of Slaanesh, and charge into melee with guns blazing in order to get soaked in gore and the chaos of melee combat.

Khorne is still not too pleased he lost them, though, and fights for control as subtly as he can.

We still need the chapter colors and some more background stuff. Also, crunch/Deathwatch rules are in the other thread.

>- Enemy is Orks or specific Waaagh!/Warboss

WUTZ DIS MESS SUPPOST TA BE?! YE GAWT SUMTIN AGAINS' ME BOYZ?!

>>15076565

We figure it's a Freeboota captain who keeps attacking the raider/pirate group of cultists, mutants, and weirdos that the Host is aligned with.

Oh sing praise to The Dancer In War, who brings to us the joys of blood and terror.
Who watches over us, Her favored Opera, His beloved Ballet of Viscera.

>Marines are obsessed with getting close to their foes
>Marines are skilled with ranged weapons

How does that fit together? Wouldn't it make more sense to make them a melee-oriented chapter? It'd also add that extra bit of unnecessary brutality, slow death and inflicted pain to their fighting style.

rolled 31 = 31

>>15076604
Shotgun
Bitches
Blowing a Load on Orks

>>15076604
These guys are skilled shooters, but LOVE getting up close to hear the cries of their foes as they are cut down, to see the splatter of gore and to feel blood splash against their armour.

>>15076609
>>15076617
So, guys

Guys

Hear me out

Chainsaw cat-o'-nine-tails

Yes or yes?

>>15076631

I have no idea how that would work, but it would fit on the Flayed Dancers.

>- Marines are obsessed with getting close to their foes
>- Marines are skilled with ranged weapons and pray to Slaanesh before battle

Uh...

>>15076631
Kinky.

I could see that being a Flayed Dancers weapon.

rolled 88 = 88

>>15076617
How About something like the new Chaos Dwarfs in the sense that their Guns are their Axes

>>15076562
>fights for control as subtly as he can.
HEY, YOU KNOW WHAT'S COOL? BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!

>>15076637
It probably wouldn't work at all, but that's what makes it so great.

>>15076589

I thought we were going with Blood Dragons as the original name?

>>15076646
So, some kind of shotguns with axe-"bayonets"?

>>15076669
Typo. My bad.

>>15076646
Those crazy french bastards do love their bayonet charges

>>15076663
They're CHAOS. They have marines who literally shoot their screams at their enemies, and soldiers whose armor bleeds. They'll be able to create a nine-tailed whip out of chainsaws.

>>15076646
Boltguns with extra-length bayonets? Power spears with bolt pistols on the front? Shotguns with whips attached?

>>15076723
>Shotguns with whips attached
Wait, what?

>>15076729

It's Chaos, I ain't gotta explain SHIT!

Why not try some spin-offs of Dark Eldar weaponry? Their stuff seems to fit right in with these guys.

Also, we've got to come up with a unique daemon engine for our chapter.

I was thinking something like a defiler, only smaller, leaping and with blades all over. They would be sent in the assault groups of enemies and rip them apart with a bladestorm.

>>15076729
What do you mean what?
"Shotguns with whips attached" is self explanatory.
Let's make the shotguns have a mass of tentacle whips hanging beneath the barrel of each one.

Perhaps their pirate faction ally is a Dark Eldar group they made friends with after fucking up that craftworld and they give them cool weapons and shit?

>>15076769
A huge, walking iron maiden with multiple arms and legs. Its preferred method of killing is to stuff as many enemies as possible into itself, close and then release the mashed up enemy-gunk again for additional morale damage.

>>15076791

Wow, that makes too much sense. We could hork some DEldar tech that way too.

>>15076791
But Dark Eldar hate all things related to Slaanesh.
Maybe their pirate allies could be wannabe cultists.

>>15076791
>Dark Eldar
>Working with Chaos
>Slaaneshi Chaos

I don't think so Jim. Deldar are exactly keen on the possibility of losing their soul every minute they're near their "pals".

>>15076811
>>15076815

Derp. Sorry, not too brushed up on Dark Eldar.

>>15076811
I suggested they could be a dynasty of Rogue Traders who fell to Slaanesh and now act as pirates.

Right, my bad. Also haven't done much reading up on DEldar. Only thing I really know about them is that they have a character named after a Disney character.

>>15076849
Not anymore.

>>15076854
Then all I got left is herp and a little bit of derp.

Also, since these guys are Slaaneshi and all that, do they employ noise weaponry at all?

>>15076894
They could, but that might be stepping on the toes of the Emperor's Children.
I don't know if the Emperor's Children would care or not though.

>>15076894
Possibly. That has yet to be decided.

I think it would be hilarious, considering our marines obsession with closing in on the enemy. They'd probably end up using their blastmasters like meltaguns.

So many new marines....

>>15076894
How about powerswords refluffed as vibrating sonic blades.
They kill through bone shattering resonance.

Power Axes that double as guitars. Blast them with crazy metal while closing and once in close combat hack em apart.

>>15076796
>>15076769
What about a centipede-like device/creature that has razor-sharp for legs and huge mandibles and shit.

Let's avoid the sonic weaponry as that steps too hard on the EC turf. These guys are nice and unique for a Slaaneshi army so far.

>>15076936
So like power swords, only cooler? Sweet

>>15076947
Sounds like we're going to be needed a dedicated noise-weapons squad...

Also, I just came up with some cool fluff stuff.

Back when the chapter was still loyalist, Master Marquis de Sade (or whatever we're gonna call him) didn't know what to do about the Black Rage. So then Skin Dancer appears and he strikes a deal with her, trading his soul for Slaanesh's knowledge. He then uses this knowledge to save his chapter from Khorne and becomes obsessed with the arts of Slaanesh himself.

>>15076936
Sounds a lot like StarWars vibro-blades lol
Its a good idea though. Monomolecular blades vibrating at hypersonic speeds. A high-pitched whine to demoralize enemies

>>15076998
Faust references? niiice.

>Sounds
>I just came

I see what u did thar.

>>15076986
Could work. Needs to be a bit more suited to the chapter's style though.

>>15076986
Oooh ooh! Let's combine them!
Multiple segments form the great Pain Centipede, each segment is an animate Iron Maiden. The legs of the centipede shovel foes into the Iron Maidens, filling the Pain Centipede with the blood it requires to run.
Before battle, slaves and cultists are fed to it, to waken the Pain Centipede for combat.

>Figure of legend is a champion/battle-brother who committed great atrocities on the Eldar
>committed great atrocities on the Eldar
>Slaanesh
>atrocities
>on the Eldar

>>15076646
Though i have to say I like this idea for the whole ranged weapons with close combat deal.

GUNS THAT WITH AXES THAT SHOOT HOOK CHAINS.

PIC RELATED. HOOK 'EM, DRAG EM' CLOSE, THEN AXE THEM A QUESTION.

>>15077030
As do I.

>>15077025
Bit too...insane.

>>15077038
>too insane
But...chaos...

>>15077032
Excellent idea! Bolters with hookshots!

The marines can use them to captured fleeing enemies and then fuck their shit up.

>>15077025
Really cutting (pardon the pun) the difference between Khorne and Slaanesh, aren't we XD
Sounds good though. Well, "good".

We haven't touched much on the mutants/abhumans thing yet, or how they influence/recruit (aside from their homeworld, which if I recall they neglect)

>>15077049

And the pull-back is slow, so they can savor their enemy's terror as they're slowly dragged, kicking and screaming, to the twitching, drug-addled giant hedonist about to spit them upon an axe almost as big as they are.

...man, I have problems.

>>15077025
Or they ride around on mutant human centipedes.
That's where all their failures in recruiting go.

>>15077071
OOoh also a good idea.

>>15077038
It's actually pretty similar to the old Dark Eldar Talos fluff.

Also if they're obsessed with getting close they should probably have a fast attack group.

Pic related.

>>15077049

Hmm. I think there should be a special rule for these guns.

Like, they shoot at a squad, and if there are any casualties, the whole squad takes an init test. Any that fail are dragged into CC.

>>15077050
>We haven't touched much on the mutants/abhumans thing yet, or how they influence/recruit (aside from their homeworld, which if I recall they neglect)

I believe since they believe mutation to be so great, they'd try and recruit or corrupt any mutants or abhumans they come across to join them. Those who prove worthy are turned into Chaos Marines, those who fail are either used as cannon fodder or further mutated by apothecaries into inhuman beasts.

I don't know that much about 40K lore, so I might sound like a total idiot here, but maybe this army could have Chaos Tech Priests to augment captured victims with cybernetic implants that regulary switch between giving the victims immense pleasure and unimaginable pain

>>15077108
This pic screams "DRIVE ME CLOSER I WANT TO HIT THEM WITH MY SWORD", which would pretty much be the fast-attack's battle philosophy XD

>>15077126
Only 6" range or something though. Man, charging with them would be fucking deadly. Though you wouldn't be able to CC that turn if you charged into hookshot range, then shot. Still.

Hey OP, I'd be interested in making a Nurgly Chaos Marine chapter, but I'd need those nice fancy custom tables you made first ;D

>>15077187
>Hey OP, I'd be interested in making a Nurgly Chaos Marine chapter, but I'd need those nice fancy custom tables you made first ;D

Alright. Once I'm done typing them all up, I'll make sure to post them. I already got the first seven, the combat doctrine, and a few others up in the first thread. Someone else also made a few crunchy tables.

>>15077179
The Dark Mechanicus is a thing in 40k.
And Slaaneshi worshipers do tend to seek out the extremes of sensation.
What you proposed makes sense.

>>15077179
Sounds like something Slaaneshi marines would do. That's not stupid at all.

>>15077213
>>15077239
Thanks. What I was worried about was that my idea wouldn't work because the Dark Mechanicus would have been like the Adeptus Mechanicus in that they also strive to make themselves like machines, and therefore unwilling to make devices designed to cause extreme sensations.

>>15077211
That'd be great. In the meantime I'm gonna sift through the old thread and check out what you posted. Thanks :D

>>15077179
I think its a good idea. Maybe we can incorporate that into the Demonic Engine somehow? Seems like more a big weapon then an individual thing.

>>15077323
Perhaps they attach slaves to various parts of the dameon engine, and use their pain/pleasure to keep the daemon inside pleased?

Bump

>>15077323

What about >>15076796 's idea, but instead of Iron Maidens, the victims go through the extremes of sensation (through drugs or physical instruments), keeping the daemon from trying to have a sadomachochistic orgy with it's Chaos Marine allies

If we're still on the topic of the chaos engine, then I have an idea.

They're Slaaneshi, so they have a want for something that inflicts pain, suffering, and torment. They're ranged, but with a love for close combat, so maybe something fast with a truckload of slow-killing type ranged weaponry, maybe acidic, since they have a love for corruption and they have freaky skin, or fire.

Maybe something that crawls around like a defiler on several spiderlike legs, but lower to the ground, and faster. The front of it could be some sort of skin-mask of deformed flesh with a great gaping maw that swallows enemies in its path whole. The middle and back of the machine would house a furnace or storage unit in which enemies are dissolved, then fired back out of a cannon mounted on top of the machine along with shrapnel and other acidic compounds to inflict moral and physical damage. Arms could be attached to the front to scoop the most enemies possible into the mouth, and each one could have a flamethrower or plasma gun to melt flesh with.

>>15077484
Awesome.

>>15077453

You could have it use hookshot arms/flails to 'feed' its iron maiden-esque device which keeps the victims alive inside, using that pain/pleasure switch thing. Maybe like a land sarlaac, but more Slaaneshi.

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/15076519/

Archived.

>>15077484
>>15077578
This daemon engine sounds so fucking awesome.

I've got to sign off now, sadly. And we've all agreed to the Glistening Host, right?

>>15077709
Sounds good to me.

>>15077709
Hear, hear!

++Begin Inquisitorial transmission++

Field observations of the beast known as "Mother".
A massive worm shaped Demon Engine that grinds forward on earth shaking tread. A large maw at the front of the beast draws prey in using hooked lashes and the aid of its handlers.

Once the prey is brought in mechanical and demonic appendages secure the prey where it is pumped full of a constantly changing blend of orgasmic opiates and excruciating stimulants. While held in the fluxing embrace of pleasure and pain their vital fluids are pumped out slowly to ensure the survival of the prey.
The fluids are pumped to holding bladders near the rear of the beast and finally to nozzles located along the exterior skin of the construct.
Warriors of the Glistening Host will visit mother before battle to "Suckle". A process where the warrior exposes himself to the gory spray of Mother allowing the life fluid of a thousand slaves to embrace them. The fluids are absorbed by the Warriors mutated skin conveying the concentrated experiences of the tortured slaves prolonged existence to the suckling child.

Just after transmission of these observations by inquisition field operative. Communication was lost. The Emperor Protects.

++Transmission Ends++

>>15078025
Sweet Emperor that's terrifying and awesome.

>>15078025
Imperium's-fw that thing shows up.

>>15078088

>mfw, even

WRITEFAGGAN!

It was in the sweltering heat of the black holds, filled with all the filth and viscera of our twisted and mutated kind that I first met the holy warriors of the Dark Prince. An entire colony of twist brutes and mutant gangs had stowed away over the years aboard the ship, hiding in the bowels and in the deep, dark places even the most staunch of the False Emperor's servants would not dare venture. Dark things lurked those holds, hunting us in our hovels as we feasted on vermin and each other. So wretched was our existances, we were thankful for the lack of light. Better to never see the twisted forms we were born cursed with or the horrors we had doe to survive year after year in the infinite space between the cold stars.

Then they came.

Light and noise and screams, such sights my eyes had never seen in the black holds. Horror and beauty. Pain and pleasure. Such magnificence, words could barely describe it; the Dark Prince's most ardent warriors marching through the halls of the ship we called our home and slaughtering the Imperials within. THey found us in the dark, their armor so bright and beautiful. I remember that I wept. I wept at seeing such beautiful creatures walking amoungst us.

They loved us. They took us from the darkness and into the service of the Dark Prince. They tought us our flesh, twisted and mutated as it was, was a gift. Not a curse. A blessing of the Dark Prince. A sign of his favor; that all should be as beautiful as we.

I owe my life and soul to the Glistening Host and Slaanesh. My masters, now and eternally.

>>15078025
>>MFW

Bump for the Dark Prince.

>>15078374
Want to writefag but too lazy. :I

Bumpin'

>>15076519
Not to be a wet blanket, but in general don't Blood Angels not fall in large numbers? You know, cause of the whole 'Black Rage' thing that would be far more likely to overtake them before Chaos Corruption can fully set in?

>>15080344

Blood Angels fall as often as any other Space Marines. Besides, the Glistening Host were excommunicated before they fell to chaos. Its not exactly uncommon for Blood Angel successors to get excommunicated (The Knights of Blood are a renegade chapter, while there have been calls to excommunicate the Flesh Tearers).

Reminds me; we need a colour scheme/symbol.

gold and black

>>15080560

Bit Black Legion, isn't it?

>>15080492

Flesh-colored and something. Maybe another lighter color, something blood would stand out on? Gold could work.

>>15080586

Chaos Chapter Generator!
Where can I find the rules for this!
-slavers nonscensically-

>>15080586

Looks pretty good, actually.

How about a symbol?

>>15080654

Check out the archived thread link in OP's post.

Back.

>>15080586
>>15080637
I like the idea of a mix of flesh and red colouration, although I'm not sure about gold. Perhaps some purple details, considering how they're Slaaneshi?

>>15078025
Holy fucking shit that is scary/awesome/kinky.

>>15080654
It's a custom variant I made of the Rites of Battle creation rules. You can find the first seven tables and then some on the first thread. Someone also made some crunchy tables and posted them there.

What numbers does the Glistening Host have?
Since it's overstrength, Im thinking around 2000...ish?

>>15078143
Pretty good.
>>15078025
I think I just shat a brick.

>>15081182

Make it more 1500ish, I think.

>>15081257
>>15081182
Yes, I was thinking 1500 (plus some slave cannon fodder) would be good.

Their close range shooting thing could actually be sort of a denial thing. They love denying others pleasure even more than they love it themselves, these guys are crazy about orgasm denial. They love staying just out of reach, lots of rapid fire and assault weapons and dancing outside of charge range while firing. Just to be bitches and because the enemies frustrations get them off.

It also works as an excellent counterpart to Khorne's melee focus that we seem to be slipping towards with all these silly combi-weapons.

>>15081115

I went and made three variants. Here's 1.

>>15081339

2

>>15081342

And here's number 3.

>>15080492
I'm thinking something like the New Phyrexian white faction from MTG. Porcelain white with blood red glistening joints slick with blood. Not saying we should rip it off directly, but it's a starting point I like.

Also Elesh Norn and other white Phyrexians are great reference for horrible beauty in mutations.

>>15081339
>>15081342
I like both of these although I think a different shade of red (blood red perhaps?) would look better.

>>15077071

Fast-attack choice? I would love to see the models.

>>15081386
Excellent idea. I can see their colour scheme being very suitable for the Host's marines.

>>15081461
I wish it was more easily replicated in the Chaos Marine army painter though. White with red joints looks kinda crappy. I'll drawfag something quick.

>Marines have freakish skin

What use is this aside from making the marines look funky?

>>15081584
It was discussed earlier than marines could absorb the blood of dead enemies through their skin, or having a symbiotic relationship with the black carapace and Omophagea.

Anyone have any ideas about exactly what the figure of legend aboard the craftworld. Did he just smash up some soulstones or did he do something worse?

I couldn't find my markers, but if there's one thing /tg/ has it's imagination.

Thinking skinlessness could be our freakish skin, and the reason for our 'glistening' namesake, yes?

>>15081639
I got it.

>>15080684

There's an Eldar Craftworld being worked on, right? And it's part of the /tg/ crusade thing too?

What if...

They we're the craftworld that got raided?

>>15081663
That's a stupid idea and you should feel stupid. Go sit in the corner.

>>15081639
He... ate the soulstones? Maybe fucked up a part of the Infinity Circuit?
Man, gotta know more Eldar fluff.
But more importantly, where's the custom /tg/ Ork WAAAAAGGGGHHH?!? Everybody but the Tau got their custom /tg/ faction, but no Orks?
Maybe I'll remedy this by making a thread about it...

>Marines are obsessed with getting close to their foes
>Marines are skilled with ranged weapons and pray to Slaanesh before battle
>Combat Doctrine is a mix of close combat and ranged fighting

Something doesn't add up here.

>>15081676
>>15081639
He probably did something real nasty, like raping their farseer and then jizzing all over the Infinity Circuit after.

>>15081712

Prehaps the skin of a flayed face as logo?
Or a Golden Death mask with one side mutated/deformed?

Army colours, porcelain white (with a ever so slight hint of pink?) with golden edges? To play on their angelic heritage.

>>15081800
See >>15081386

Porcelain white with blood red sounds awesome.

Thoughts? Am I getting too far ahead of myself with this skinlessness thing before the collective has achieved consensus?

>>15081561

Have a go with the Space Marine painter, maybe? Remember, these guys are a renegade chapter, so chances are they'd have modified/mutated versions of current SM power armour, rather then older suits.

>>15081700
>Something doesn't add up here.

Chaos.

Also, for the rival, how about Chaos Orks of some sort? One of the old Codex (Codex Daemon Hunters or something? I dunno) had a section with little back stories for why Inquisitors/Grey Knights would fight various races. There were a few mentions of Orks (usually accidentally) worshipping Khorne/Nurgle. Slaanesh doesn't exactly get along with either of them.

>>15081700
Maybe they're good in boarding actions?

As for weaponry, there's a whole lot of wacky choices. All varieties of shotguns, Chimera Pistol Swords, blade launchers(extra messy!), nail guns, chains with hooks attached to them, net launchers, cutter guns completely not stolen from Dead Space, or a launcher shooting wires forward, then spinning them so fast they create a cutting torrent of steel.

Also, I'm all for the Phyrexian-like look. The Mother idea is also awesome.

If Slaanesh cured their Rage and Thirst,they should truley be without those lusts and emotions, they do not feel rage on the battlefield, they feel joy. They appear patient and kind, even when performing the most sadistic acts of torture. Never hating, always loving... in their own special way.

>>15081828

I like it!

My take on the color scheme.

>>15081828
Ooh that is cool, could you try hollow eyes? Just curious how that would look

>>15081873
Or truly skinless, with the face muscles showing and the eye-globes completely visible

>>15081872

I like yours as well, but I wasn't a big fan of all that red. So here's my interpretation.

rolled 1 = 1

>>15081828
Not that is awesome.

>>15081860
Slaanesh didn't actually cure their Thirst/Rage, just made them able to resist Khorne's influence. Since the marines view mutation is a glorious manner, I think they would actually see those with the Black Rage/Thirst as being chosen by Chaos and elite warriors.

>>15081850
Good idea. I was actually thinking their rival could be a Freeboota Warboss who worships Khorne.

>>15081872
This, this I like! It's either this or without the red being apart of the actual armor and more something that is added...as the battle goes on.

rolled 71 = 71

test

>>15081923
>Slaanesh didn't actually cure their Thirst/Rage, just made them able to resist Khorne's influence. Since the marines view mutation is a glorious manner, I think they would actually see those with the Black Rage/Thirst as being chosen by Chaos and elite warriors.

I see, but still couldn't their resistance to Khorne be manifested in a lack of fury and anger. What I am trying to get to is mirror image of the Blood Angels, where as they are the "good guys" with an Angelic theme but bloodthirsty and brutal, theese Angels appear far more calm and sofisticated. While still being mean, sadistic, chaos worshipping SOBs.

>>15081975
>I see, but still couldn't their resistance to Khorne be manifested in a lack of fury and anger. What I am trying to get to is mirror image of the Blood Angels, where as they are the "good guys" with an Angelic theme but bloodthirsty and brutal, theese Angels appear far more calm and sofisticated. While still being mean, sadistic, chaos worshipping SOBs.

Well, this guy:
>>15081330

Mentioned something similar. How they deny their impulses and so on because it helps them get their rocks off.

>>15081975
Yes, I like that idea very much. I think that worshiping Slaanesh has mutated the Black Rage further to the extent where those affect by it don't go kill-crazy over anger and hatred, but rather love for blood and slaughter.

>>15081898
I prefer this one, for the reasons >>15081926 mentioned, could be part of a pre-battle ritual to thouroughly clean their armor to prestine conditioned just to have it covered in glourious gore and blood once they enter the fray.

>>15082003
Exactly, in battle they joyfully praise The Dark Prince for their bliss aswell as thanking their victims as they oblivirate their faces with a shotgunbayonette

>>15082033
>>15082003
>>15081975
This is kinda cool, a wierd, twisted take on the humble and thankfull christian (which works in with the Angel angel)

>>15081872
I like this, but it needs finishing and it lacks that certain slaneeshi feel.

>>15081898
This, I don't like.

Maybe take out the gold?
Black helm?

Oh boy I can't wait for these guys to go up against the Abyssal Jaws.

>>15082091
No don't take out the gold, they are the Glistering Host after all.

The plain white and gold version looks cool.

>>15082091
I agree. Gold doesn't look good, blood red does.

rolled 88 = 88

>>15081872 Here
Second attempt, going with the fleshless head concept and keeping the gold.

rolled 94 = 94

Forgot the image.

>>15082156
But whit white and red being the dominating colors you look...christmas-y.

For the freakish skin, I believe it would be awesome if they shared a symbiotic relationship with the black carapace. Seeing as how this would make their armour almost literally part of their body, they would be more agile and swift than normal marines.

I think making them skinless is lazy and stupid.

these are my renegade slaaneshi chaps, disregard the dust and bases

>>15081828
That emblem is aweesome.

>>15081872
This I like.

>>15081975
>>15082003
>>15082033
I think it's a good take, too. But what about the Death Company then? They love slaughter to an extent they can't think of anythinmg else? Addicted(well, more than others)to fluid absorbtion? Nonexistent?

Also, filigree or partially holed armor(like the one on pic)could be used. You know, so that they can get soaked in blood while remaining armoured.

>>15082212
Dat lightning!

>>15082218
The Flayed Dancers work kind of like Flagellants, they are so thankfull for their lords blessings that they have peeled of their skin and...done...something with it I don't know.

>>15082202
Agreed.

Also: http://1d4chan.org/wiki//tg/_40,000

On the page it mentions Chaos Warbands under the names of Flawed Ones and Ivory Huntsmen but doesn't give any details about them. Anyone know anything about them?

>>15082202
Merged with their armour?

As for the skin, I don't really care if it's either way, but I find the Omophagea mutation thing with the through-skin-absorbtion really awesome, and if someone coming to the thread this late has any impact, I would keep it over anything else.

>>15082180
I liked the previous one better.

rolled 6 = 6

>>15082280
I do too, just giving OP some options.

...but how about the Death Companies? They would have a lot of potential. Like the loyalist Death Companies, they would consist of marines who went insane due to the instability of the geneseed. But not in the same way, of course. They wouldn't go into a blind rage. The centuries of drug-abuse together with the corrupted geneseed would slowly increase their sensitivity, eventually to such heights that it is impossible for them to restrain themselves from self-mutilation. A little bit like...if anybody has seen Naked Blood, no?

They are brought to the battlefield in special reinforced wagons where they are restrained like Hannibal Lecter, strapped down with a mouthguards. But when they reach the enemy, the straps open, releasing the Death Company. They would tear the enemy apart with their bare hands, hoping the enemy to do the same to them.

Ideas? Suggestions? Yes? No?

>>15082272

Flawed Ones are an Alpha Legion warband that got mentioned in some Emperor's Nightmare fluff (they tried to do to the EN what the Alpha Legion did to the Crimson Consuls)

The Ivory Huntsmen are a Night Lords warband who travel the galaxy searching for worthy prety to hunt. They have glorious moustaches and wear pith hats. They have a battle barge called the "Heart of Darkness" which they return to every few centuries to tell tales, smoke pipes and show of their trophies.

>>15082301
I'd prefer if the chapter all together took a step away from the bloodlust battle frenzy angle. It's a cool idea though but I don't think it fits with the direction the chapter is going.

Feel free to call me a faggot though.

>>15082301
Likin' it, but...Naked Blood? Never heard.

>>15082340
TL;DR - IMDB: "A scientist taints his mother's scientific experiment with his own drug that transforms pain into a pleasurable experience. Unfortunately for the three women involved in the experiment, the drug works a little bit too well. "

This YouTube should give a good image: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5PSnkBXIes

Yeah, it's nasty. But that's Slaaneshi we're talking about.

>>15082301
The Glistening Host's death company are the Flayed Dancers. The Black Rage and Red Thirst have been warped by Slaanesh's influence so now instead of having the urge the slaughter out of rage they have the urge to do so out of love for bloodshed.

>>15082212
They look like Nightlords if anything

>>15082366
>they have the urge to do so out of love for bloodshed.
Sounds a bit Khornate to me.

>>15082417
Slaanesh found a loophole.

>>15082428
I just mean that...it doesn't sound particulary Slaaneshi.

>>15082428
Thats silly

>>15082417
Khorne kills out of hate, rage, anger.
Slaanesh does it out of love, desire, lust.

>>15082417
Submitting to rage is Khorne but love of carnage, the emotions and feelings is Slaanesh.

Slaanesh isn't just sex, drugs and rock'n'roll. Slaanesh is about savouring the enjoyment and pushing your chosen obsession to a point of madness.

>>15082417
That's the point.

These guys were about to fall to Khorne, but then Slaanesh showed up and turned their rage into lust. The Flayed Dancers are a freaky mix of Khornate and Slaaneshi stuff as such.

>>15081850

>Also, for the rival, how about Chaos Orks of some sort? One of the old Codex (Codex Daemon Hunters or something? I dunno) had a section with little back stories for why Inquisitors/Grey Knights would fight various races. There were a few mentions of Orks (usually accidentally) worshipping Khorne/Nurgle. Slaanesh doesn't exactly get along with either of them.

Orks like cunning, right so, and they can be quite sneaky.

So Tzeentch is cunning and sneaky?

Therefore we could have TZEENTCH ORKS! also

Progess would be made by mech boyz.

>prount heterodox

Yes captcha.

Have we agreed on a colorscheme and/or an icon yet?

The Flayed skull with wings was cool and personally I prefered >>15081898 colorscheme

>>15082551

Tzeentch Orks? Seriously?

Fucking glorious! I say go for it!

>>15082580
all those schemes are boring and are no where near slaaneshi enough

>>15082622

Define "Slaaneshi".

Don't say pink.

>>15082629
No just extremes, they want to stimulate every sense sight included, white and red is too boring, it needs to be crazy. Normal stimuli does not work hence noise marines etc

I think porcelain white with a sahrp gold trim, soldi purple details (eyes, medals and such) and random splashes of blood red would look best.

>>15082697
For colour scheme painters can't get mutation. We need a drawfag to do it proper. Their armour should create such awe from the beuaty that people faint from it(it's real pyscholigcal effect I forget it's name though). Same with disgust with the mutations but the two mixing would be godd.

>>15082779
Something like this, you mean?

Exactly, the color scheme itself is pure, elegant and simple. The armor itself and the actions of the Marine will speak for itself.

>>15082838
Was supposed to link to >>15082800

What are peoples opinion on the Icon that was drawn before?
>>15081828

>>15082820
Another.

>>15076519
Your pitiful OP for choosing SLAANESH of all gods. In reality it's only the idea of being some manipulative bad ass using others lust and desires against them that I could really see anyone liking such a useless army theme but the fact is Slaanesh doesn't do that (plus that sounds more like Tzeentch's thing.) All they do are drugs and even then it's not like some awesome thing it's really a point sink.

Use Nurgle or Khorne and your conman sense
Ever think there might be a reason why GW hates Slaanesh?

>>15082951
>choosing SLAANESH

It was rolled for using tables.

>>15082962

I would recommend re-rolling

>>15082892
>>15082820
Uh...not exactly the best looking design. It looks like some kids with red crayons drew all over their armour.

Although I DO like this >>15082779
Random red splashes would make sense and work with Slaanesh's style.

>>15082951
>Slaanesh doesn't manipulate.

oh wow. I bet you think the hight of Slaaneshi corruption is a dick girl ogry.

>>15082972
>>15082951
You know, you're free to go make you're own Tzeentch warband if you want to. The OP posted most of the tables he sued in the previous thread.

On topic, I like the white/gold armour with red splashes too.

>>15082951
>Slaanesh doesn't manipulate.

He does now. The entire reason this chapter got corrupted was because Slaanesh tricked them.

>>15083001
Red splashes should be blood and gore, not painted patterns and symbols.

>>15083034
>>15083034
Perfect. They rub blood over parts of their armour before going to battle. This could also work REALLY well with the symbiotic carapace-skin relationship idea, since then they would feel the sensation of the blood and would desire to fight more.

>>15083062
I like the idea with them actually cleaning their armor before combat, meaning they can enjoy the first blood even more (imagine going no sex/fap for a month before getting great oral, that's how it is for them)

rolled 94 = 94

Here ya go, sorry it took me a few minutes.

>>15083096
Now THAT is fucking good!

>>15083085
Why do I have the mental image of ritualized sensory deprivation in order to make stimulus even more powerful.

>>15083096
Awesome!

Now what do you guys think the Flayed Daners (death company) would look like?

>>15083096
Now we are getting somewhere! What do people think of having the icon in gold aswell?

>>15083137
*Dancers

>>15083137
Maybe we use the all white (but still covered in blood) version for normal marines and the "skinless" version for the Flayed Dancers?

>>15083137

I figure they'd remove part of the armor to let the skin shine through. Maybe remove the gauntlets and the breastplate?

>>15083114

This, so much this. They'd sequester themselves in sensory deprivation tanks on board their battle barge in order to emerge on the battlefield and experience the contrast in all its glory.

>>15083096

Jesus christ ITS A MASTERPIECE

>>15082951
So, tell me, has the doctor told you about possible treatments for your asspains?

>>15083172
THIS have them go from nothing on purpose (excess of lack of excess) to total fucking carnage enough to make khorne worried

>>15083172
Flayed Dancers could actually be skinless, having flayed themself and now wears their own skin as robes? Could be even cooler with the fact that the Host takes great pride in their mutation (their skin), it could be the ultimate sign of gratitude towards their bountyfull Lord.

>>15083114
>>15083172
>>15083199
I like the sensory deprivation idea, however I think it would be reserved for the Flayed Dancers so to increase the fury of their desire for blood.

>>15083206
>wears their own skin as robes
Err, the Brotherhood of the Megalith (a loyalist Blood Angels successor and a /tg/ homebrew) already has their own Death Company do that.

>>15083206
I like this.

Oh! I just had an idea. What if they wear their own flayed skins as clothing, but they retain sensation in the flayed skin. they could even add to their robes as they flay newly regrown skin off of themselves to prove their devotion.

>>15083227
Don't they just wear skin? I don't think its their own. A lot of canon chapters (mostly chaos) do that.

>>15083227
Oh.
Well.
Never mind then.

>>15083235
>mfw
I mean that in the best way possible.

>>15083235

Skin Dancer Nazgul: Oh god, please don't hit me.

>>15083235
Love it all, exept the adding part. Their own skin and their own skin only.

>>15083240
Yes that is true. Although I'd like to avoid our death company getting too close to another one.

>>15083284
>>15083284
It would only be their skin, they would just be adding new "editions' of their own skin as it regrows due to a marine's enhanced healing ability.

>>15083303
Can we have this? Please OP, pretty please?

>>15083303

How about a mutated Black Carapace? The Flayed Dancers remove their own skin and the Carapace grows over it. It mutates and fills the gaps in the armor, enabling the Dancer to feel the armor as if it is his body to a greater extent than normal marines can.

>>15083285
The Megliths where the taned hides of their enemies like cavemen. Canon Chaos marines nail faces to their armor. These guys where volumous cloaks of skin that still lives and glistens with blood and sweat due to the the patronage of Slaanesh. Glistening Host and all.

>>15083378
Exactly, total win-win

>>15083342
>>15083378
Very well. I suppose the Flayed Dancers can do the wearing skins thing and still be unique.

>>15083359

Oooh, I like that idea.

>>15083378
I rather like that idea.

>>15083096

So are we all happy with this as our chapter colours?

>>15083583
Aye, that.

So Flayed Dancers wear robes out of their own flayed skin (and as their skin regrows the keep flaying themself and add it to their robes) to honour Slaanesh.

I love it. This combined with the various skinmutations they can have (scaley, different colors etc) can make for some reeeally cool models.

>>15083583
I would prefer the all white version but if this one is more popular I wont cause a fuss

Hurray this is back up. And I'm Glad to see everyone liked the Mother Demon Engine so much.

> /voting for double-chainblade wielding close assault teams that defile and hack apart the enemy in a glorious spraying of blood and semen.

>>15083583
Yup.

>>15083631
Well they still do wear the white armour majority of the time. They just soak it in blood once they're about to enter battle and clean it off afterwards.

>>15083583
But the one that >>15083682 linked have actual red details on the armor itself, my vote is for the armor just being white and gold with the red coming purely from splattered blood.

>>15083096
My votes still for this one.

>>15081662
So this, basicly?

>>15083970
You're a little late :P

bumpan

I think we need more opinions on the armor scheme or has a desicion been made?

>>15083992
Well, shit.

On another note, seeing as how we've got most of the armour done apparently, does anyone have any ideas on the Marquis de Sade chapter master? I think someone on the last thread said something about him having power armour made out of naked bitches.

>>15084143
I believe that was a joke.

>>15084143

Have him be a Daemon Prince or something. He should be like that one alien from Gantz who was composed of female bodies.Then some guy just jumped up and raped its face.

Gantz is weird like that.

>>15084190
I'm OK with the Chapter Master being a Daemon Prince, some sort of skinless angel could be cool.

>>15084213
I like this idea. By now this time he probably has become a daemon prince.

>>15084143
I've got nothing on de Sade, but what does tg think about having our chief apothecary being Sigmund Freud?

>>15084213
or possibly an angelic figure who's skin mutation takes the form of being head to tow covered in faces. None have eyes, not even the ones on his head.
As he speaks the faces take turns, finishing each other's sentences or speaking in unison.
He speaks with the voice of a choir. Faces composing epic poems, sonnets, songs, or just screaming their hatred and blasphemies.

>>15084143
Well first we need to come up with an actual name for him. How about Marki Desade?

>>15084265
>>15084265
Awesome idea is awesome.

>>15084275
This could be cool yeah.

>>15084265
fucking capta ate my pic

>>15084277
>Marki Desade

Not very subtle. But then again, when has anything Warhammer ever been subtle?

>>15084265
This, I don't get. What is the relation between Freud and The Glistering Host?

>>15084409
Just read up on his wikipedia article. It should be pretty obvious.

>>15084409
well hes kind of the psychology equivalent of "DIcks Everywhere" so slannesh is right up his ally.

Other than that not much.

>>15084409
What is Freud if not penis? And what is penis if not Slaanesh? The Glistening Host are devote worshipers of Slaanesh, therefore, Freud.

Also your denial of such an obvious relationship is clearly caused by your repressed homosexuality and desire to screw your mother.

So it's just the Slaanesh "dicks and you want to fuck your mother" angle?

>>15084509
Frued also studied the human mind and treated mental illness. Sounds like something an apothecary would be good at.

Bump.

Is this thread autosagging?

I'm liking the idea of Marquis de Sade being an angel, as well as the multiple faces thing. I also think we should refer to him as Marki Desade unless a better name comes up.

Not sure about Freud being the apothecary. Seems like a bit of a stretch to me.

>>15084796
>bit of a strech

Teehee

Someone mentioned something about a Chainsaw Cat o' Nine Tails, it seemed like a cool idea and i kinda wanted to expand upon that idea. Just instead of a single chain belt like in chainswords I was thinking it could be made of seprate rotating bladed links and be built around a power cable like in the power armor for enhanced swinging power or some shit. Also please bear in mind I'm not a drawfag and have no talent to speak of.

>>15084997
That sounds AWESOME.

>>15084997
Not sure what to call it, Agonizer Tails or something? And I was thinking their primary users would be the guys in the Flayed Dancers death company.

>>15085068
Flayer Tails.

>>15085134
Second.

Crunchnon back again after being gone most of the day.

The chapter colors/proposed symbol is great, I love it. The idea of power armor mutating into skinless muscle and back skeeves me out in a good way.

bump

So did everyone leave or something?

>>15084529

He also thought cocaine was the best stuff ever invented by mankind and prescribed it for fucking everything.

After one of his friends died of an overdose, he cut down on the cheerleading for it though.

rolled 6 = 6

Is the thread autosagging or what?

I added some more material to the wiki page. We still need a coherent fluff writeup, and some well-written additions in general.

>>15084275
This is perfect, also, there's an angel that's similar to this who we could use for his name.

>>15083970

Is there a .psd that you guys use to mess with this stuff so quickly?

Couldn't we actually use the Marquis title? Other than that I guess we could call him Marcus D'sade

I like the Flayer Tails wapon but less hook-y on the top, the focus should be on the rending of the whip itself. No?

There were earlier talk about chainhooks attatched to firearms along with long fucking bayonettes, those are som cool ideas.

Bumb for the Dark Prince!

THE PRINCE OF PLEASURE ACCEPTS ALL!

Going along with the whole Angelic theme, somekind of version of the Sanguinary Guard prehaps? The idea of golden armor and angel wings does suit pretty well with The Glistering Host.

>>15091836

Yeah, I was thinking of something similar before I went to bed last night.

>>15091836
This gave me a pretty decent idea, I think. What if the figure of legend who fucked up that Craftworld was a corrupted version of the Sanguinor?

>>15092615
That would be cool yeah. Have we agreed on exactly what the great atroceties were? Someone mentioned the eating of soulstones. That's pretty badass.

>>15092680
Sounds a little too similar to that fluff in the GK codex where a Keeper of Secrets rampaged around Malan'tai and ate their soulstones.

>>15092680

Maybe they fed the soulstones to the Mother daemon-engine. The resulting fluids, rich with the suffering and tortured screams of the Eldar souls, were like the finest wine to the Chapter. The Marquis still keeps some bottled up, which he serves to his honored guests.

>>15092877
How devilishly delicious. I like it.

>>15092877
There's some stuff with the DEldar about how they turned the cracked soulstones of eldar exarchs into weapons that can boil an enemy's blood or something. Maybe give Mother a weapon that shoots blood boiling lasers powered by soulstones? Or maybe it condenses their tormented souls into a devastating anti-infantry artillery shot?

>>15092925

I'd rather have it convert the soulstone energy into something that boosts the stats of the Marines. "Mother's Milk: All units reroll failed Ld tests" or something (I suck at crunch, but you get my drift).

Alright, so have we pretty much agreed that our hero stole a fuckton of soulstones?

>>15093073
Along with painting the wals of the Craftworld with Eldar blood. Two coats.

>>15093092
Then stuck his dick in the Infinity Circuit for good measure.

Then Ejaculated in the primordial soup?

So since he stole an apparently large number of soulstones, how about each marine has a soulstone embedded in his armor and feeds off the torment of the eldar inside.

Hey guys, we're working on a new loyalist chapter >>15092844 and we have a Chaos faction as their enemy but we're not sure who. We were thinking perhaps the two chapters could interlock, and the Glistening Host could be their main enemy? Doesn't need to be mutual, they could have done something to piss them off and forgotten about it.

>>15093182
>Slaanesh worship among the nobles
I think we could work something into that.

>>15093182
I could definitly see this work. The angels of The Glistering Host decending upon the moorish knights of the Brotherhood of the Gauntlet.

>>15093220

Could the Marquis hail from the Gauntlet's homeworld? Or maybe he was the Marquis of some region there?

>>15093182
Sounds like it could be fun. Why not?

>>15091836
>>15092877
Lovin' both of these ideas.

>>15093284

I mean, since there's a Slaaneshi cult among the nobles there. And since the Marquis is a former noble, he could be the origin of said cult.

In my mind it goes something like this:

>Andalus becomes the homeworld of the Host
>They rule the populace directly, prominent Marines taking noble titles and becoming important politicians and landowners
>The Marquis starts a Slaaneshi cult among the inner circle of the Chapter, kills the Chapter Master and the Chapter goes rogue
>Gauntlets are brought in to purge the Host
>They drive the Host from Andalus and are awarded the planet to be their new homeworld

What say you?

>>15093319
Perfect. Works great with the Iberia theme.

>>15093319
Well the Host's backstory was that back when they were the Blood Dragons (loyalist name) they were suffering from the Black Rage and Thirst. Then Slaanesh sent a daemonette who corrupted them and saved them from Khorne. The Ordo Malleus later found out and sent the Grey Knights to fight the chapter.

It would be unlikely that the Imperium would allow a known Slaaneshi chapter to rule over one of their worlds.

>>15093319
Would this be after The Host fell for chaos or the reason behind it?

On a related note, shouldn't we develop the whole "fought heresy with heresey and then became devoted to Slaanesh to beat the red thirst" thing?

>>15093366
>>15093319
I've got an idea.

How about when the Blood Dragons were corrupted by Slaanesh, they were on Andalus with the Brotherhood? Then they began corrupting the nobles of the planet, and when it was realized the chapter was Slaaneshi a combined force of Grey Knights and Brotherhood marines expelled them from the planet?

>>15093366

So they ruled that homeworld when they were the Blood Dragons then. Maybe they had the belief that civilized and refined behavior would counter the Thirst. That's why they got so involved with the civilian populace, they wanted to put on an air of nobility and grace, believing it would keep the animal in them at bay. But it didn't work. The Marquis had a huge palace where he entertained many guests, he was an excellent performer and writer of theatre, played electro-dulcimer and hosted salons for writers and nobles. But in his heart he was being consumed by visions of slaughter. The pretty servant girls that attended to his chambers, how he longed to rip their heads off their spines. The arrogant, pretty nobles that came to his receptions, he would have the most intense impulse to murder them all with their dinner implements and then spread their innards all over the table and feast... He couldn't restrain himself.

And one night, when his urges were unbearable, his party was visited by a strange guest. A woman of unknown lineage, but obviously noble, for what other woman could carry herself so proudly and gracefully? She embodied all that he strove for. Elegance, refinement, civilization. So he pursued her, not for sexual pleasure, but for her calming effect on his secret, shameful urges. Because whenever she was nearby, the Thirst receded in him, the blood calmed itself.

And finally, she revealed her nature to him, and he was overjoyed when she told him of her master and the gifts she could offer, not just to him but to all her brothers...

>>15093366
How about; when the Gauntlet was out on the crusaded they were created for, The Host moved in and conquered their planet and then The Gauntlet took it back. A fleeting loss in the books of The Host but a great atrocity for The Gauntlet.

>>15093424

>but to all her brothers...

Should be "all his brothers". Anyway, you get the picture. I see the Marquis still going to great lengths to maintain the appearance of a refined nobleman. His inner sanctum on the Host's battle barge would be a sparkling and beautiful palace.

>>15093424
>>15093447

>>15093444
But there is still cults devoted to the Host on the planet.

>>15093447
>>15093424
This is really cool, we just need to work in how they fell using "heresey to fight heresey"

>>15093533
Perhaps there was a small Khornate insurrectionist group of the planet, and the marines were helping to eliminate it. The Blood Dragons would have been affected by Khorne's influence due to the Rage and Thirst.

On a side note, this thread is autosagging.

>>15093533

Well, it could be related to the Marquis' fall. He knew that the woman was a daemon of the Prince of Excess, but he had the idea that he was the one using her for the benefit of his chapter. He saw her as a tool, a means to cure himself and his brethren of the affliction that raged in them. Little by little, her suggestions were accepted as Chapter doctrine. Icons of the Emperor were replaced by other symbols, their meaning obscured. Daily prayers and supplications to the Throne on Terra were substituted for "meditation sessions" using Warp-enhanced foci that throbbed with sensual energy, calming the Battle-Brothers and soothing their spirits. But instead of the Thirst, the Chapter was visited by other afflictions. The amulets and meditations lost their power over time, requiring gruesome recharge rituals that involved mutilation and death of civilians. The Marines became ensnared in the web of addiction and thrill-seeking that Slaanesh spun for them, until there was no way out. The Brethren that rejected the inevitable fall were killed as sacrifices, the Chapter shrugging off all remaining pretense of Loyalism and descending into hedonic orgies of pain and pleasure, all to overwhelm the senses and keep the Thirst at bay.

currently drawfagging a glorious hosts marine although if there's a new thread to post it in rather than the autosaging one, please direct me to it?

I will be making a new GH thread. Loving this backstory thing with the Brotherhood so far.

>>15094060
GET OVER HERE