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You are the Second Primarch, a son of the emperor of mankind and leader of his legions. You are Lieren of Nothing, Warrior, Philosopher, Cultivator, Poet, Farmer, Hunter and friend of many virtuous and kindly souls. From the fog swept valley's of Shangrala, you now stand by the side of one of your warpswept and once lost brothers, Angron Thal'kyr, the former gladiator slaved of the wicked house of the Thal'kr, one of the lineages of the tyranical high riders who have long misruled and abused the fair sphere of Nuceria and her chained and brow beaten populace. As Angron began his war against tyranny, you sent your brother Feng, the first of your companions to join you in the struggle against those fools who believe they rode so high as to rule the heavens, to weaken the opposition by assassinating the general of the Thal'kr armies sent against the last high rider army that marched from the city of Loc'ea.

For, as blood was shed, you once more donned the wrinkled mask of kindly Kynigos, an ancient wandering sage and scholar, rarely merciful and caring Lanista and the confident and herald of the Loc'ria family, having already woven a tale of treachery and betrayal to remove from the city and house alike the stain of tyranny and the sinful and cruel excesses of those forever lost to the lure of corruption and fleeting pleasures. Setting into motion the final stroke, to remove the drunkard head of Lycuarch the patriarch of the Loc'ria house, a short sighted and blind man who considered Kynigos a close friend and indebted himself to him for saving his house from an outbreak of scurvy, you gave commands to the various virtuous sects within the city to at once act together, throw off their chains and kill the tyrants before them.

From the Beggar sect, who alone knew your identity as more than just a doddering old man even if fewer among them knew the whole truth, to the city guard and gladiators, to the wealthy merchants and even the scions of Lycuarch's own bloodline, as one, those who saw the filth around themselves marched, and overthrew the high riders of Loc'ea. Allowing yourself to be taken to trial alongside the rest of the ruling class who were not part of the glorious half hour revolution, you watched as one by one, teary eyed and trembling, the tyrants were executed by axe, incineration or hanging, until at last Kynigos was judged

And found faultless, by the council made of the leaders of the revolution, the heirs of the judged and sentence and the influencial of the city, who had taken quite an interest in the lessons of the journey. Thus, the veil of bloodthirst was lifted from the eyes of the common man, and the mob of the city saw at last the beauty of life and the rewards of selfless living.

Though you'd like nothing more to walk amongst the people of the city, and see how they enjoy their new found freedom, you cannot
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>>5437071

<https://youtu.be/9k1F3PjY948>
The time has come for you to forever cast aside the mask of Kynigos, and act only as yourself upon the blood and tear soaked plains of Nuceria. To retire the name and man is an easy task. Already all believe you to be frail, giving the last few months of your long life to teach others and guide them to better themselves and continue your work of carefully pushing aside soil salted by the apathy of the nobility and hardened by their iron fist rule, to plan the seeds of prosperity and plenty in the once arid ground of the hearts, minds and spirits of the generation to inherit the world you leave behind.

So, you adjust your cover, the illusion you wear, and act sickly and addled as the celebrations of victory begin and high born and children of the slums alike meet and see each other and know each other as both brother, friend and equal. All but the highest masters of your beggar sect, believe you to be standing on the precise, razor edge between life and death, and the celebrations are abated and eventually pause outright, as those who were relishing in their new found privilege to act kindly and generously to their fellow man, and the sense of unity and comfort that came with the newly tightened bonds of comradery and understanding between the classes and families, ceased their revelry to gather around Kynigos the ancient's deathbed.

Not all at once mind you. Proud men, warriors and warhawks, sat by your bedside, and gently poured cups of water and diluted vinegar to ask you of your long life, pleading to be allowed a glimpse of the universal mysteries you had glimpsed. One, the captain of the city guard wept as he, apropos of nothing, told you of his childhood and his early encounters with death, and how your words helped him step from its shadow, but in seeing you brought so low, the long held fear he had of death returned to grasp and claw at his soul. You offered him the truth, that all things must one day end and fade away, and eventually be wholely forgotten, he knew this, yes, but to hear it from the great teacher's own lips drove the lesson deep into his heart and taught him he should cherish the days he has, and live a life painted vividly with all the emotions the hearts of men offers. He spent many an hour by your bedside, listening to your stories closely, his eyes burning with resolve to remembering every word you speak.

He handed in his resignation, not long after, giving up the sword to instead take up the plowshare and pen.

Another who visited you, the eldest surviving son of Lycuarch, sat in solemn, guilty silence, as he peeled and cut fruit to help you eat. It took him days to finally speak, reminiscing of his fallen and lost brothers and sisters, his treacherous uncles, wastrel aunts and slain father.
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>>5437072

His heart was conflicted, between familial love, filial piety and righteous disgust and abhorrence of their lifestyle and actions. You tell him a parable, of a great warrior who hated all that was weak, who met a kindly giant, who with a wave of his hand, brought food and comfort to the lands he had ruined in an effort to force the weakness from his fellow men. You told him, how this warrior cloaked red and black, fought the giant at every turn, undermining his efforts and undoing his good, and grew paranoid that the giant was in fact a warlock seeking to offer up the land and her people as a meal to demonic hordes. You told him, the giant was eventually made to don the mask of the ogre, and unleash the black rage he had kept bottled and hidden upon the great warrior, as he sough to scour all the good he had done from the earth and root out the prosperity and comfort he had spread with his own two, blood soaked hands. How the giant, after a long, arduous battle, slew the warrior, and knelt beside his headless body as he wept.

"Not for the man he was, but the man he could have been" You rasp weakly as the young boy, barely older than Qian Xiaowen or Yin Delun. You see in his face, the face of Daiyu, as she stood with fierce eyes, ready to stand between you and her kin who had not shared her worm of a father's disgusting habits and extravagant lifestyle. You see in his tears, the pleading look of Luli. You see your students in his tear wetted cheeks. You, weakly, gingerly, carefully, lift a reed thin arm and brush your pale knuckles over his cheeks.

"For the giant wept, as in his wisdom, he knew that man could have been saved from what he had become, had they only met a few years earlier than they had" You gasp weakly, eyes wide, as the young lordling takes your hand and presses his forehead to it, without words saying he understands the truth you spoke to him

Aegeus, the urchin whom you saved from the abusive guards and who was one of the first members of your beggar sect, bursts into your rooms, drunk, wailing, crying, roaring and cursing at the heavens as he stomps around. His words become muddled and slurred, as his anger and outrage turns to sorrow as he falls to his knees at your bedside, begging you not to leave him and the other beggars, crying out for all to hear that they need your guidance and teaching. That without their tutelage they will be as blind as cave bats, and as weak and helpless as kittens once more. The scarred brat, now a fine young man with an idealistic heart and strong convictions and morals, weeps into your chest, wetting the thin blanket you wear as he releases all of his powerful, young emotions, confused and scared despite having seen and met death more times than any child should.
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>>5437073

"Grandson of mine, disciple of mine, fair and first student of a rambling old man, I am not needed for you or anyone else to learn. Enlightenment cannot be found by one man, it can be found anywhere and by anyone. No one, not even I, is all knowing and no one shall ever possess all of the wisdom and learning out there in the world and beyond the skies, in distant heavens. You speak as if I am invaluable, there may never be another Kynigos, but that is because all individuals are irreplicable, no matter their ability or talents" You whisper softly in his ear, pressing your chin against his head "But, another teacher you shall find, or a teacher you shall become. I have written and describe, the vividness of which I see the world and hearts of men, and the ideals I have kept all my life. It shall not be as if my wisdom is gone forever, like a clay figure tossed carelessly in churning waters"

"But, but those are just words, written in ink! Your living wisdom is!" Aegeus cries out

"In those words. I have written them all my life. My world view is preserved as long as others read and believe in what I have left behind. But a legacy is as transient as this mortal life. Find your own wisdom, see the world through your own eyes. Learn, teach. I have lived a long, fruitful life, it is time for me to pass on. Though it may be sad, cling not to my memory bitterly, but rather hold the brief light I shed joyfully and mirthfully laugh as you remember the short time we shared upon this discordant plane known as life" You say gingerly, chuckling as you laid back and closed your eyes "Tell the others, I shall miss them, and await to find them in my next life"

"Next life?' Aegeus asked, but you were already pretending to be asleep, and unaware.

You acted marvelously, the sad play of a man who has come to the end of his storied life, weakening and groing frailer and less cognizant by the passing day. More tears were shed, as you pretend to mistake your vistors for others, whose faces and names had been last in the ever flowing river of time's relentless march, some times you did not speak at all, and merely gaped and stared as they spoke to you, sharing their trauma and pains to a silent audience of one. Other times, your eyes sparkled, and you became aware enough to speak openly, answering questions and sharing koans and idioms to help them understand what you could not answer directly. In Kynigos final days, he spent all his remaining energy and breath acting as a teacher, determined to share final fragments of his rapidly eroding wisdom that had endured until his final days, content to give all he had left to pass on a handful of final revelations and insights of the universe and human condition.
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>>5437074

Then, with a bit of clever psykerism, you created a false fever and listened as grim voiced physicians and robed mechanophiles spoke to those who saw you as their grandfather in all but blood, and held you as their teacher, mentor and guiding light that despite its humble earthly vessel shined as brightly as any star in the night sky. They spoke, in hushed whispers, that only a few hours at most remained in the threads of the elderly Kynigos' life, and that it was uncertain how long you would remain cognizant of the world and people around you. So, quickly, the leaders of the free city of Loc'ea discussed, debated, and decided that the ones closest to Kynigos, amongst his gladiators, urchin friends and students of the high born, would be allowed to meet him one last time, to say their parting words and hopefully receive a final gift of guidance, to show them the path they should take forward once they had lost the radiant brilliance of old Kynigos

It was a heart wrenching performance to take part in, and guilt weighed heavily upon your moonlight infused heart, as you listened to these men, who did not know you would survive the "end" of Kynigos, and were terrified to be left alone in a cold, cruel world without the comforting light of your clouded eyes and the insights that had lead them to take the reigns of their future and find a new world cast in a light of compassion and sympathy. It was painful, to meet these heartfelt pleas and stumbled promise to search for the "next Kynigos" as the Nucerians haven't yet grasped the concept of reincarnation as intuitively as some have and don't quite understand what you mean when you speak of your "next life". Or have mistaken your flowery speech and metaphors for something more concrete and tangible, or have mistaken your more curt and straightforward explanations as empty flamboyance and purple prose. Once more you are reminded, most cultures are far less baroque in their speech and often do not use as much symbolism and age old phrases and poetic verse in their ever day conversations as you and most Long-Jianese do habitually. Really, it is telling that of all the tongues you have learned, the ancient words of the Aeldari are the closest to your native language in complexity and grace than any of those spoken by your fellow man.

But, you banish this wayward thought, to listen intently to the tearful goodbyes and apologies spoken by your gathered mourners, as they move on from begging you to hang on a few days more, to help lead them into the future, to quietly and calmly accepting that nothing can be done to preserve a body whose mind and soul has, apparently, already fled it to whatever lies beyond the finality of death. And, you cannot resist, despite the heavy weight of guilt and grief you feel for tricking these good men into enduring such emotional agony, to not perform a final, dramatic act in the role of Kynigos the ancient of Nuceria
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>>5437076

At first, you had intended to leave a final entry in your journal, subtly pushing them to align themselves with your brother, Angron, and leaving them to decide their own fate and future. But, your mischievous, playful side demands a little flair in your departure from this act, and while you are well in control of your whims and emotions, self control is not a virtue one should keep until they become as a heartless machine, and so you allow yourself to indulge in this harmless flight of fanciful fun.

Sitting upright, beading with sweat, you grab ahold of the nearest mourner and drag yourself to him, milky eyes blazing with impassioned understanding and sudden comprehension, and the terror of not being able to pass on the final revelation that had, in Kynigo's last breaths, coursed through him like an electrical current.

"Hear me! One who stands higher than any other, has emerged from pits drowned in blood and tears! Cast aside your collars, forsake your chains! The great liberator walks amongst us! An unseen titan, a hidden savior! Yet unknown to all but those who shared in his suffering, find him, seek him out. He is unbowed, unchained, unbroken! I..I" You exclaim, shouting suddenly enough to frighten those gathered around your bed, who leap back or recoil at your outburst "He..he is the..hah, I see"

And then you stiffen, fall forward, and are only kept from falling to the floor by the man who you had chosen to cling onto. Your burial is put aside for a few moments, as those in the room recover from their shock, shed their last tears, set you in your bed, comb your beard and position you to appear more dignified as they leave to announce your "Death" to their peers and the masses below.

You are interred quietly, in a curious stone casket set aside in the halls of the Loc'ria palace, and there you stay, as the whole city is allowed to, like pilgrims, walk to your resting place and look upon the visage of the now lifeless sage. It is remarkably and respectfully orderly, admirably scheduled and planned, with the mourners efficiently divided and guides through the palace to take part in your wake and entombment. Flowers are left atop you, dried fruit, jars of vinegar and honey, weapons held by the gladiators you raised and coins marred by grime still warm from the beggar palms they came from. Then, as the last of those who cared to give their farewells as Kynigos departed the moral coil, you were left in the dark and could hear distantly, through many layers of stone and the relentless chugging, whirring, buzzing of age worn technology left painfully unguarded and uncared, the solemn grieving of most if not all of Loc'ea.
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>>5437077

Quietly, you removed the top of your stone tomb, set it back atop the now empty container, grabbing only a single jar of wine to share with Feng as you travel to Angron's fort, and cast off for a final time, the kindly age worn mask of Kynigos. You wonder, when Guozhi departs from this life, will as many tears be shed for your honored teacher, as had been for Kynigos?

You idly pursue this thought, creeping through the shadows and atop rooftops, speaking only to the beggars who you had told of the falseness of the identity of Kynigos, to inform them of your plans for the beggar sect and war that has only just began. Then, you walk once more into the wilderness, with long, bounding strides and a bouncing rhythm to your pace as you sing to the wind and the skies, the folk-song of Kind golden eyes in your native tongue.

And as Loc'ea becomes a spec on the horizon, and the beating sun retreats from the horizon and the whole world cools and is bathed in pale violet light, your song is returned by your Brother Feng, whose eyes widen as he sees the large jar of wine you are carrying upon your back and the playful, innocent, almost bashful smile you wear.

The two of you, taking a cup each of the strange, yet pleasant red grape wine, sing a bawdy song that Lai Song taught you, of the woes of two courtesans, complaining and bemoaning their lot in life to eachother, while insulting their clients' appearance, manners and other attributes, trying to get the other to admit they have it better or enjoy their unladylike profession. It is quite amusing, for both your booming voice and Feng's somewhat rough and growling one to lighten and crisp to imitate the haughty, airy tone of two pampered, spoilt ladies of a most shameful profession, squeaking and shrilling as you two dance and laugh at each other's performance. You even break out one of your fans to hide your face and flutter daintily in front of it as you two travel through the woods, for the first time in a long time acting as brothers and friends without the weight of your shared and great responsibilities darkening over you and shading your interactions somber and grave.

Eventually, both of you tire and are exhausted by the festivity and gayety of this singing and dancing game, and begin to talk of important matters.

"I've received word the main force shall arrive soon, Dong, Hu, and Wei will arrive the day before the rest of them do" Feng explains, his cheeks still flushed as he brings his cup of wine to his scarred lips "Heard Clayton will be next, piloting that great steel giant of his, along with your sons...I'll feel more at ease with your blood on this world...well besides this mysterious brother of yours, those Astartes are fierce warriors, stalwart and unflinching. Like a whole legion of Cui Fu or Vishnu Screamers. And the normal folk who follow them are just as skilled as any Shangralan veteran"
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>>5437078

"hmm, I see. I see" You say, pursing your lips as you twirl snap closed your fan and tap it to your chin "Well, I'm certain Angron will welcome their assistance as much as our enemies scorn it. And know that you, Feng, are as much of my brother as he is, even though we do not share fathers or blood"

"Oh I am aware, I'll never lose my place in your heart, even if you live a hundred years longer than I" Feng said confidently, with a roguish smirk "I'm just curious to see if he's anything like you or your sons"

"You shall meet him soon to see for yourself" You say, eyes catching a curious weapon on Feng's side, but decide not to question it, knowing he intends to present it to you, after you had arrived at your brother's camp. But from, a glance, it seems to be a cousin to the rare volkite weapons in service to your father's legion, a distant variation, perhaps an improvement or outdated model preserved through the ages. Curious how such a relic found its way to this world, when from your understanding, only a few survived upon terran soil

How do you introduce Feng to Angron, as you arrive to hear of his first successful battle, Lieren?

>By telling your brother of your brother's great deeds and many accomplishments

>By seeing if Feng could sneak up on your brother primarch

>Tell Angron and his father and followers of your Brothers of the Panther, and have Feng appear dramatically at the height of the story

>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements

>write in
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>>5437079
>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
We are at war now, we have fallen in line so to the point, though give our brother a little flair. We dont want misunderstandings or someone trying to fight him thinking him a spy
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>>5437079
>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
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>>5437079
>>Tell Angron and his father and followers of your Brothers of the Panther, and have Feng appear dramatically at the height of the story
>>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
Sneaking up on people is a proper introduction for Feng.
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>>5437079
>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
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>>5437079
>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
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>>5437079
>By seeing if Feng could sneak up on your brother primarch
>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
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>>5437079
>By seeing if Feng could sneak up on your brother primarch
>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
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>>5437079
>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
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>Tell Angron and his father and followers of your Brothers of the Panther, and have Feng appear dramatically at the height of the story
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>>5437079
>By seeing if Feng could sneak up on your brother primarch
>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
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>>5437079
>>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
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>>5437079
>>By seeing if Feng could sneak up on your brother primarch
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>>5437079
>>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
sure
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So lads do we think Alpharius is watching us meeting the Emperor and quietly happy he has a comrade in shenanigans.
You know...given he was found first according to his Novel.
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>>5437952
Possibly. Its a posability that the twins might appreciate Lieren's use of drama.
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>>5437952
>>5438100
I am now awaiting a heavily redacted inquisitorial file titled the Panther and Hydra shadow wars
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>>5438149
instead of <Data Redacted> it's mostly <Insufficient Data> or <Data Unclear>
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>>5437952
Last I checked that was new lore.
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>>5438187
doesn't mean he can't use it.
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>>5437952
But he is Alpharius, and this is a lie
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>>By seeing if Feng could sneak up on your brother primarch
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>>5438149
It's just a file consisting of what little information is known about all of the elaborate pranks Lieren and Alpharius have played on each other
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>>5438350
The only non redacted information reads "I have no fucking idea what is happening"
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That could be cool. Kind of like a battles of lies, deception, and infiltration whereas Konrad's and Corax's legions have had wars of stealth and shadows.>>5438395
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>>5437952
Alpharius tries to pull the same trick on lierren that he tried to pull on dorn.

>Wich one of us is the real alpharius
>Lierren just responds with "It was ME the WHOLE TIME! IM ALPHARIUS" and just levitates out of the room.
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>>5437079
>Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements
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The relic that Magnus kept in a protective field intrigued him more than any in the past, while he'd observed relics and fragments of the so called Four Great Winds this so somehow both something new and old? The tome was made made of equal parts ivory, onyx and gold. He knew he'd be destroying the thing shortly but still he struggled to resist the temptation to delve into it especially after how he'd found it... simply placed open upon his desk.

The pages he saw were written in the language of his homeworld but he could tell it was more a chemelionic effect born to ensure its contents were understood. The open pages he saw were a set of mirrored images open pages of opposing black and white. On the black page the monster he'd met, witnessed and fought so very long ago alongside Lieren, the outline a crisp white. While upon the other was a figure disturbingly similar to that very dear brother, what united the two images was something that stirred his heart with worry. Golden Eyes.

The text had said something oh so simple; Destroying Chaos in service of chaos, Chaos of service in chaos destroying. He'd sealed the thing instantly and even now as he preped a specialist urn to unmake the thing...he worried about those words and a question came to him.

How had his so careful brother found his way into the depths truly?
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From the archives of Titan.
For Grey Knight Command only.

Lore: MALICE/MALAL

Titles: Hierarch of Terror and Anarchy," the "Renegade God," the "Lost God" or the "Rejected God," Also known as Pure Chaos, "The Forgotten God", the "Remembered God", "God of Contradiction", and the "God of Black and White".

Number: 11

Icon: A skull possessing one black eye and one white eye where the skull is split down the middle with each side bearing the color opposite to the eye located on their respective side.

Portfolio: Contradiction, Self-Harm, Suicide, Anarchy, Freedom, Malice, Undirected Destruction.

Cultists: Suiciders, Anarchists, factorum workers, prisoners, those who hate the gods, those who hate themselves, those who hate the universe, those who hate their superiors, Omnicidal lunatics.

Blessings: Anti-chaos properties, chields bearing its iconic symbol, visions of the future that contradict but are often true and not deceiving, resistance to the blessing of other chaos gods, the ability to inspire anarchy revolution, rebellion, or suicide in others. Contradictory states of being.

Mutations: Horns, bone weaponry limbs, insectoid,slug-like, arachnoid, carrion-like features, chitinous plating, minor strength or psychic gifts, the ability to see beyond the deceptions of other chaos gods.

Lesser Demons: appear as varied mortal races composed of insectoid, carrion, arachnoid, sluglike, or dedicated corpselike features. Wield ossified bladed weapons, mauled limbs, armored chiton, scythe-like blades, or some combination of these. May also appear as bizarre combinations of conflicting states of being melded together.

Greater Demons: Little is known about Malice/Malals greater demons beyond that they often are composed of mortal champions who achieved apotheosis. Malal/Malice unlike other chaos gods rarely fashions shards itself into individual semi-sapient demon princes. The only known greater demon of Malice/Malal not known to originate from mortals is a large humanoid demon of great color, curved horns, and a hyena/jackal-head grasping in a large taloned hand either a single greater demon of a rival chaos god or a large gathering lesser demons each belonging to rival chaos powers.

Primary goal: The destruction of all chaos entities including itself and to a lesser degree the mortal races that empower them. Malice/Malal seeks to return the warp to a quiet placide state where the beings that inhabit it lose their ability to directly affect the material universe.
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Calling the vote now, sorry for the long wait.

Introduce them properly, and tell your brother Feng has brought good news concerning the arrival of reinforcements:12

Tell Angron and his father and followers of your Brothers of the Panther, and have Feng appear dramatically at the height of the story:2

By seeing if Feng could sneak up on your brother primarch:5

Tell Angron and his father and followers of your Brothers of the Panther, and have Feng appear dramatically at the height of the story: 2

Total votes:15

So Lieren will Properly Introduce Angron and Feng to one another, and tell him the goods news.

Writing now.

>>5439392
Ooh, foreboding

>>5439435
Neat
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The hidden fortress you had revealed to Angron, that housed his followers and army, was alive with celebration and the grim cheer of victorious warriors. The excitement of battles fought and won, infected the air itself, as if it was carried by the resounding beat of drums and feat and the hollering cheers and shouted tales and praises of prowess in the killing fields or the valor one or another had shown in the brutal fighting that had been carried out days prior. Feng, at your side and matching your pace as best as he is able to with the disparity between his frame and yours, smiles as the cacophony of the song of war hawks and soldiers who have yet to taste the bitter kiss of defeat inspires nostalgia within his hunter's blood. Yes, in your own imagination, you can picture exactly who has caused him to look upon such barbaric revelry with such warm fondness. Akanksha, dressed in her cloak of many colored feathers and little more, hopping and skipping to and for like a sparrow hunting beetles. You, soon, share your brother's quite joy in the cantankerous festival of the freed men of Nuceria, but, you own smile shrinks and wilts, as in your mind's eye, Akanksha is joined first by the once cheerful now dour Aruna and the meek and humble Om, as shades of the Kamakshi, Manu and Rudra appear through within the smoke and mist shrouding the daydreamed vision that inched its way out of the depths of your mind.

Shaking your head, hoping to banish the now upsetting image from it, you stride further and faster, making Feng have to jog to keep up with you. With chest and head held high, you confidently and proudly march to the, wisely, closed gate of the strong hold, as Feng practically skips to make it to your side as You lift up a tightly clenched fist. Tightening your hand and compressing it enough that it could distort and bend steel with ease, allowing the light discomfort of pressing your fingers forcefully to your palm to clear your mind of sorrowful dreams and washing your heart of the sadness that had been brought upon it by your idle fantasies. Then, as Feng lifted his shoulders and composed himself to stand as if he was a giant of your stature or taller, you brought your now whitened knuckles against the reinforced gates, rapping it loudly four times with enough force to crack the wood and cause the stone and steel reinforcing it to buckle and tremble.

Silence immediately falls, as you shake your hand, still feeling the reverberations of your knocking rippling from it down to your elbow. Feng holds his rifle over his shoulders and closes his eyes, taking in a long, thoughtful breath as the gates creak apart and fire light billows and pours out from the sanctity behind the walls to banish and chase away the shadows gathering as night encroaches ever closer on the mountains and the citadel tucked within them.

And as if summoned by the red gold light of the camp's fires, your brother Angron stands before you.

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>>5439717

Meeting his eyes, you smile softly, as you notice upon his lips a relieved smile. He doesn't notice Feng, and neither do the gladiators who stand at his side, spears and shields raised against any threat that may dare to approach their beloved leader.

"Brother, you've returned to us" Angron says happily, his flushed cheeks telling you he had found or pilfered enough alcohol to by pass his bodies near complete immunity to all but the most virulent of poisons, something that, for yourself, required what would be a lethal dose of Dragon's spit spirits for several dozen men "I was beginning to wonder if you had become entangled in the web of intrigue you wove. Come in from the cold and dark! I have much to tell you! We've been successful in our war beyond even the wildest dreams of the most idealistic amongst us!"

Feng clicks his tongue, waiting patiently to be noticed, twisting his heel in the dirt as he tried to peak past the armored frame of your brother, who blocked most of the gate as you stood before it, hands tucked securely in the sleeves of your robes. Angron, noticed your silence, despite his slightly intoxicated state, and glanced down, as he noticed you were waiting for him to see who stood at your side.

And so, The unbeaten and the foremost of the Brothers of the panther met one another's eyes, and Angron's expression grew hard and bitter as it was when he had just freed himself from his chains. He's testing Feng's mettle, courage and will, as you often would by simply focusing your gaze for a moment or two longer than was necessary to study and learn about the character and nature of those who stood before you.

Feng, immunized to most mundane mortal fears and having long since grown used to your own burrowing sight and burning gaze, is perhaps one of the first to look at a glowering Angron with curiosity rather than terror or dread. Being met with such apathy, pleases Angron, as it immediately shows just how hardened of a warrior Feng is and the strength of his nerve and discipline. It shows on his face, beneath the scars and angered mask he wears.

"You aren't from Nuceria are you?" Angron asked gently, his eyes lightening before his expression did. Feng turned to you, eyes wide and curious. As he possessed no psykerist potential and had not studied and learned the native tongues and dialects of this world so alien to him, to him, what Angron said was rough, unpleasant gibberish.

"He asked if you're a foreigner to the great red canyons of his home" You say quietly, bowing your head as Angron turned to you, picking through your sentence with both what little Long Jianese he knew and his barely trained wind whispering

"I didn't say it like that" He barks between the pause of you translating his words and Feng thinking up a reply
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>>5439719

"Obviously" Feng stated with a shrug "The differences between the faces of men of Long-Jia and this strange world are easily seen. For one, their eyes look constantly surprised and wide open, despite the painful light they are assaulted with"

"Of course this man was not born upon the sands, but rather a world veiled by cool mists and white fog, look upon his eyes and the features of his face, bred and raised in a land very different from your own, the answer must be clear, he and I hail from the same bejeweled sphere in the night sky" You answers with a coy smirk, as Angron closes his eyes, crosses his arms and sighs, clearly annoyed by the liberties you are taking in translating their conversation

"What a strange language" One of Angron's unnecessary guards mutters in awe, after hearing the soft, almost wind like words of the gentle tongue of the Long-Jian people

"That one looks dangerous, see his eyes? They're tracking our throats?"
"What about that pelt he wears? Never seen a lion that big begore"
"Pelt? I was looking at his scars! He's a survivor, this one"
"He didn't even budge when Thal'kyr glared him down"

"They're talking about me" Feng whispered, you nodded as Angron, silently, looked him up and down, waiting for you to speak a flowery interpretation of what he's said, you allow the silence to hang and linger, as the growing crowd behind Angron gossips and whispers.

"I can tell he's important, would you care to introduce us brother, or is there some lengthy ceremony your people perform when they first meet, that he expects me to follow" Angron asked, half jokingly

"His tone is dry, and hollow. He must be growing weary of your ponderous meanderings of the tongue, or...does he simply not appreciate the beauty of your words? His words sound harsh and snappy, like breaking bamboo" Feng muses idly

"He's expecting their to be a traditional ceremony of introduction, the kind of stifling etiquette sometimes practiced amongst the nobility and those with excess of both wealth and haughtiness" You chuckle, amused by the confusion between your brother by blood and brother by sworn oath "And has asked if I, perchance, would accept the great privilege to have the honors of introducing him to you, and you to him, so my brothers may know each other by name and deed"

Feng laughed, finding the humor as well.

"Please tell me there is not an extensive, complicated ritual of saying greetings on Shangrala" Angron growled through his teeth

"Oh no, we just thought the thought to be amusing. I would be honored to introduce the two of you" You say, bowing back and pulling your hands from your sleeves "Feng"

You lash your arm outwards, and motion to your brother, who looks down at your arm and tilts his head, confused by the gesture.

"Angron Thal'kyr" You say, which Feng easily understands
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>>5439722

"He's Feng then, Feng what?" Angron asked earnestly and curiously, letting down his guard completely at last

"Just Feng. Just as I am just Lieren' You say, placing a hand between you twin hearts as you bow your head

"That doesn't seem right" Angron grumbles "But, I suppose cultures as separated as ours would have...differences"

"Of course these differences embody in part the beauty and uniqueness of each culture and people, and should be celebrated" You say with a toothy grin "Feng is one of the first huntsmen I trained in my village of birth, Nothing, to hunt the dangerous man eating beasts we call Fog Panthers, noble and proud creatures they are. He survived a mauling on his first solo hunt, and has proven, despite the injuries he's carried from that day, to be second only to myself amongst trackers, stalkers and killers upon Shangrala"

"That is quite the impressive boast, and as it was spoken by you, it is believable. There's a hardness in his eyes, he'd have done well in the arena's here" Angron said with a nod as he relaxed and lowered his shoulders

"I told him of your skills of a hunter, and the beginnings of our friends, and your great talent as a man of the wilds and kin of the panthers. He says your eyes are fierce, with a career combatant's calm and that he believes you would excel in the tournaments he was once forced to take part of himself" You say quickly, as Feng smiles somewhat smugly, enjoying the praise he cannot understand without your assistance "Angron, was taken from his birth and collared and chained, forced to fight for the amusement of the tyrants whom yet rule this plane, the cruel and wicked high riders, who abuse the technologies of our ancestors"

Feng shoots an pitying look to Angron, and bows his head, kneeling to show his admiration to him for enduring such abuse, without saying a word.

"What did you tell him?" Angron asked, taken aback by the sudden show of submission and reverence

"Only the truth, that, unlike my own upbringing, raised as equal and friend of humble farmers, that you were taken from your crib and made to fight and kill for the entertainment of tyrants" You say softly "He is merely showing his regard towards you for enduring such torments, and making a show of sharing your pain, grieving for what you had been made to endure"

"I'm starting to realize there is an entire planet of men like you, Brother" Angron said with a laugh and mock dread "Tell him to stand, I won't have anyone but the high riders kneel before me. I am no king, nor master"

You nodded, and motioned with your hand to indicate to Feng he had knelt as long as was necessary for etiquettes sake, and so he rose.

"I take it my feelings got across, despite the distance between us imposed by our inability to comprehend one another's intentions and feelings through words we do not yet share?" Feng asked respectfully.
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>>5439724

You answered with only a nod, as you stepped forward, and clapped your hands together, creating a gust of wind that removed all the dirt and grime from your shapeshifting robes in a singular motion.

"There, I have introduced you as properly and politely as I can possibly do so, considering the barrier erected between the two of you who do not share a common tongue." You proclaim joyously "And, now that you are acquainted, I must deliver the good news my friend Feng has brought to me!"

Sensing you intended to be dramatic, Angron stepped out of your way, allowing you to address and hold the attention of all of those who crowded behind him to see what was going on and try to catch sight of the mysterious stranger accompanying the mysterious brother of the Lord of the red sands.

"That while he is the first to arrive of the companions I have called, he shall soon be joined by others, veterans of the wars of my own world, and trusted allies and friends true of mine, whom, like he, I have fought alongside for all my life, who share the same vicious disdain I hold for all tyrants and oppressors" You say with a smile

"You did say, when we first met, that those who joined me in freedom were the only army we presently commanded, eh brother" Angron said with a beaming smile and anticipation in his eyes "I take it, this shall be our second army?"

"Our forces have already increased since you were last at the fort, Lieren" Oenomaus said cooly as he emerged from the crowd and met Feng as he flippantly entered the fortress, and began scrutinizing its defenses and defenders "And this is...another star man?"

"Apparently, he was trained by Lieren personally, father" Angron explains "And is held, on his planet, to be the second greatest warrior born since Lieren himself"

Not exactly the intention of your description of him, but it was close enough for the older gladiator to understand Feng's worth and skill.

"Even looking like he's been chewed up and spat out? Surely they could've fixed his limp at least" he remarks, and Feng, as if he could understand the reference to his injuries, narrowed his eyes.

"He could have, but he wears that limp and every lameness brought upon by his wound as badges of pride. And, even refusing treatment, he remains more deadly than the panther whose fur he wears" You say quietly, as the crowd surrounding you, Angron, Feng and Oenomaus fully grasp that you and Angron had just announced that reinforcements would soon arrive to join their struggle, and so, forgetting the excitement of your return and Feng's appearance, returned to their festivities with renewed energy and glee.

The older gladiator narrowed his eyes, clearly suspicious of Feng's capabilities.

"Most of the high rider's dogs are augmented just as much as we are, or more. Think he could match them?" He asked rudely

You tilted your head and frowned.
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>>5439729

"He has killed much stronger than anyone gathered here, besides Angron and Myself, I did not exaggerate when I spoke of and praised his talent as a killer" You say softly, yet sternly to get your point across

"Even as a near cripple" he gasped incredulously

"Feng doesn't fight unless he has to" You say, bowing to show respect to your brother's adoptive father and mentor "The order he is apart of, prides itself on mimicking the Fog Panther's natural expertise, by striking their prey and ending them before they are even noticed"

"Spooky" Oenomaus says with a smirk

"He's already carried out several assassinations, underneath the attention of all this world's rulers and kings" You say with a friendly smile, as Angron took in a sharp breath through his nose

"He was the one who killed the Thal'kr's general" He said, his tone one of amazement "No one knew who put him down, but I had thought it was just because of how violent and chaotic the battle was, that day, the first proper fight my army had was bound to be confusing, despite training our fangs earlier...but he was there"

Angron's father, losing his disbelief quickly, looked between his son and you, and then back at Feng, who hobbled into the fort's courtyard, and quickly became surrounded and hidden by curious children, gladiators and former servants, who had never seen a man like him of their size, and so crowded around him to gawk and stare.

"Yes, I asked him to. Feng has never once disappointed me with failure" You say plainly, as you watch the party thrown to celebrate the continued success of the rebel army

"Incredible" Angron said with a whistle "In the arena's, someone as beat up as he is would be put down, but even with his handicaps, he snuck onto a chaotic battlefield, took the head of one of its leaders, and vanished. If those Fog panthers are the ideal men like him wish to reach, they must be monsters worthy of myth"

"They are beasts like any other" You laugh, waving your hand "Believe me, for I have seen living myths. Enjoy yourself brother, you've earned this reward of a night's reprieve from your struggle, as the whole of your army. I shall be with Feng, my brother from Nothing. When the festivities end, I shall give a detailed ledger of the forces I have rallied to your banner"

"No, you and Him are staying with me!" Angron shouted, grabbing you by your shoulder "It is best I get acquainted with the man so respected by my brother, and make friends with him. And who better to help, than the only friend he and I share"

You sigh and smile, and follow your brother's lead
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>>5439735

What do you do now, Lieren?

>Find a chance to test Angron to see how he'll react to your relationship with Kanzeon, and her nature, to see if you can tell at least one brother of your beloved.

>Reach out with Wind Whispering, to see if you can sense the arrival of the reinforcements from shangrala

>Introduce Feng's beggar students to Angron's army, and ask him permission to lead them and Feng on "Hunting parties" against the High riders

>Spar with Angron, as you discuss the next step in his plan to liberate his world

>Write in
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>>5439738
>Wait until Angron is no longer intoxicated, then request a spar with him as you discuss the next step in his plan to liberate his world
No fucking johns and no handicaps.
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>>5439738
>Introduce Feng's beggar students to Angron's army, and ask him permission to lead them and Feng on "Hunting parties" against the High riders
>Reach out with Wind Whispering, to see if you can sense the arrival of the reinforcements from shangrala
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>>5439738
>>Find a chance to test Angron to see how he'll react to your relationship with Kanzeon, and her nature, to see if you can tell at least one brother of your beloved.
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>>5439738
>>Find a chance to test Angron to see how he'll react to your relationship with Kanzeon, and her nature, to see if you can tell at least one brother of your beloved.
>Introduce Feng's beggar students to Angron's army, and ask him permission to lead them and Feng on "Hunting parties" against the High riders
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Wait, didn't we already tell pert of Kanzeon?
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>>5439738
>Find a chance to test Angron
>Introduce the beggar students.
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>>5439738
>Introduce Feng's beggar students to Angron's army, and ask him permission to lead them and Feng on "Hunting parties" against the High riders
>Find a chance to test Angron to see how he'll react to your relationship with Kanzeon, and her nature, to see if you can tell at least one brother of your beloved.

Magnus doesn't actually know about Kanzeon does he? Honestly I think he is more then trustworthy with the knowledge.
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>>5439738
>Find a chance to test Angron to see how he'll react to your relationship with Kanzeon, and her nature, to see if you can tell at least one brother of your beloved.
>Reach out with Wind Whispering, to see if you can sense the arrival of the reinforcements from shangrala

>>5439795
Yeah he just doesn't know that she's a spaceship. I don't think Magnus knows about her at all though.
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>>5439738
>Write in minor detail
For the night spend it making sure Feng has a translator so nothing goes wrong teaching him at least some basic words so he can work things out. Poor Panther in a sea of lions

>Wait until Angron is no longer intoxicated, then request a spar with him as you discuss the next step in his plan to liberate his world

>Find a chance to test Angron to see how he'll react to your relationship with Kanzeon, and her nature, to see if you can tell at least one brother of your beloved.
^ Basically this and probe about the Journey.


aka plan: Brothers Banter then Spar
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Lieren seeing faces and memories seeping through makes me think of AI rampancy...now that'd be a brutal flaw because we'd literally think ourselves into insanity and become lost in a dream like state. If an Astates got it then double the danger, flickering through war after war and so on only broken by the meditation we introduce.
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>>5439738
>Find a chance to test Angron to see how he'll react to your relationship with Kanzeon, and her nature, to see if you can tell at least one brother of your beloved.


>Reach out with Wind Whispering, to see if you can sense the arrival of the reinforcements from shangrala
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>>5439890
>support
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>>5439738
>>Find a chance to test Angron to see how he'll react to your relationship with Kanzeon, and her nature, to see if you can tell at least one brother of your beloved.
>Spar with Angron, as you discuss the next step in his plan to liberate his world
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Kelisborne pulled her wrathbone frame from its resting shrine beneath the Infinity Circuit of Iybraesil the Craftworld of Banshees, her ancient form etched with runes and still bore her blades at her hip. She'd had many titles in her life; the Crone's Niece, She who howled at the Fall, The White Sword of Khaine. Her mind swam even as the Wraithguard rose pulling itself from the dreaming depths of eternity into cold reality, she'd been finding herself awoken from the slumber more and more of late once mundane dreams now filled with discord and new horrors. She had never been a seer but all the Aeldari had the gift to some extent, a blessing from the Gods and Makers.

She steadily moved through the winding halls of her tomb and peoples sanctuary to the temple she'd spent her life. Her own great, great grand daughter there fighting, training alongside her Sisters of the Blade. She'd have smiled were it not for both lacking a mouth but also the discipline ingrained so deep to deny such pride. She simply gave a nod when she was noticed and now having taken the time to readjust to this automation she headed to the Council chambers her latest dream to report.

She had dreamed again of her ancestor whom even now was so full of life, she dreamed that the girl would be led astray by a colossus with Golden Eyes. That like how Morai-Heg had convinced Khaine to remove her head from their wise shoulders that he could drink her blood and gain wisdom for the future...the young Banshee she'd beheld would do similar and a great schism would follow.

With sightless eyes she looked upon the Craftworlds sigil, the Crones own hand and remembered their words; no knowledge is truly claimed without sacrifice.

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I just really like writing, Malal would you have a little request? I'd be happy to try my hand at something for ya?
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>>5439738
>>Find a chance to test Angron to see how he'll react to your relationship with Kanzeon, and her nature, to see if you can tell at least one brother of your beloved.
>Spar with Angron, as you discuss the next step in his plan to liberate his world
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>>5439738
>>Introduce Feng's beggar students to Angron's army, and ask him permission to lead them and Feng on "Hunting parties" against the High riders
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>>5439738
>>Reach out with Wind Whispering, to see if you can sense the arrival of the reinforcements from shangrala
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>Wrath of the Father
Liberty watched through her hundreds of eyes in the form of security cameras. The traitors were swarming about her decks, murdering the dutiful sons of Lieren as they defended her though sheer weight of numbers alone. The Wordbearers had asked for assistance and so the Second legion came to help but how dark a turn things had taken, even now she roared in binomial fury as a hostile presence tried to force it's way through her defences which meant her own drones were inactive.

Only a handful of flesh autons remained mobile but they were struggling to pull away the bleeding and maimed form of her beloved; Dae-Hyun. He was dying in her arms, all her read outs screamed that simple fact at her...she couldn't save him. Her bodies threw themselves at Lorgar but he swatted them aside, the blakc blade he'd stabbe dinto her Guardian and Husbands back still dripping with his blood. The old bear of Terra though cupped the cheek of her last body even as the ones sacrificed to gain time were torn asunder to cruel laughter.

“Don't worry, Father...Lieren is coming. Just a little longer...I'll give you time my sweet Sparrow”

The old marine rose, missing an arm, legs scorched soot black. His chest riddled with bolter rounds and armour a ruin. He charged the Primarch, the uncle tainted by the enemy most foul. His body a wreak still fought and even as he felt the black blade stab into his neck he didn't relent. His one working eye glared into the face of evil and with his own hands he'd choke the life from it. His grip slick with his own blood found purchase and began to squeeze...hard. Alas his vision began to blur more and more, he registered pain...screams...then he registered no more, he felt a cool whisper behind his ear.

“Come in peace Son of my saviour, you are with me now”.

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Lorgar gasped for breath tossing aside the marine, his brothers favoured son aside. But he let himself smile for the Daughter of Metal was now his, no defenders left. He'd won. He'd out played the Emperors so called Dragon. His laughter filled the blood stained and empty halls alongside sirens and gunfire. But then he heard it, an automated voice over the damaged vox.

“Temporal Jump inbound; WARNING WARNING, DANGER CLOSE 3-2-1”

A flash of light filled the chamber golden and brilliant but Lorgar knew it was not their father for if it had been so he'd have felt his presence. No here instead was the hapless fool he tricked, Lieren himself the fool having apparently come alone? Maybe the fool wished to talk some more in those poetic but empty words? But was the fog and light from the jump faded he didn't behold the Scholar instead is brother was in full ivory battle regalia gundao in hand.

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>>5442153
https://youtu.be/4m_Alceujck

“Finally here Brother? Come to discuss the terms of surrender?” Lorgar spat smiling with vindication, his HUD revealing his own sons were closing on their position. Lieren was but a dead man in a shooting gallery. Lieren began to speak but he paused, instead he looked at the black blade in Lorgars hand....he followed the trail of blood to the broken body of Dae-hyun which was still cradled by a sobbing Liberty.

Lorgar then felt something, the room was growing colder? By the moment the temperature was dropping, silence? The alarms, the sounds of his mens' steps all was beginning to feel so far away. Lieren still didn't speak but he was walking towards him now.

Lorgar goaded his brother about how he liked petty tricks and illusions.

Lieren didn't speak, his form was swelling, Ivory armour turning onyx and cracking from within, golden fire was beginning to escape the seams, his helmet fracturing to reveal no face but a black abyss drawing in the golden fire, light, sound...everything. A devouring maw that Lorgar found himself unable to look away from.

The so called perfect brother didn't stand before him, he tried to move, to raise Illuminarum to do battle with his brother, to see his wish fulfilled. But he knew at this moment he wasn't looking at his brother any longer. Wordbearers poured into the scene and opened fire upon the Obsidian Ogre but they did it no harm? Instead the thing looked about and Lorgar beheld horror.

It was among them faster than his own chaos gifted sight could see, but his own sons were not simply killed, they were gone...unmade...he felt himself awash in Lieren's Golden see but it's depths had now turned to black ice. He knew in that moment that all the Rebels upon this vessel himself included were dead, they'd stirred something abominable, something sick....primal? His mind couldn't understand what he saw, each of his men dying a thousand different deaths in a moment before their souls were swallowed by the blackness.

Finally it turned to him? Time...time had no meaning? I'd had been a moment? No an age? Seconds? Years? How long had he screamed or been frozen here? The thing once the brother he'd mocked towered over him. He understood what he faced when he looked into the chasm where there should be a smile.

He faced the fury of a Father; a father facing the murder of his son, the sheer hate of a parent seeing a defiler of their family. Lorgar had felt fear, hate, anger and all there was the powers could offer but this...this was something more.

So Lorgar the Primarch of the seventeenth Legion, was no more. Could be no more, Denied existence to his core, as a man, a soul, even as an idea. He was gone and yet somehow he still felt pain.
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>>5442153
>>5442155
Thanks for the write anon but why do you offer us suffering? What would a mantling of "father's fury" even be like?
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>>5439738
And on the third day, I rose.
Total votes: 26
Total Voters: 14

>Find a chance to test Angron 10

>Reach out with Wind Whispering 4

>Introduce Feng's beggar students to Angron's army 5

>Spar with Angron 2
>wait until he's not intoxicated 3

Write-in:
>For the night spend it making sure Feng has a translator so nothing goes wrong teaching him at least some basic words so he can work things out. 2
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>>5442483
Thanks for your service
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>>5439738
I'll back >>5439890
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>>5442155
>>5442153
Very nice, sucks that my favorite Primarch killed our favorite son, but chaos is one hell of a drug
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>>5442155
>that moment that all the Rebels upon this vessel himself included were dead, they'd stirred something abominable, something sick....primal? His mind couldn't understand what he saw, each of his men dying a thousand different deaths in a moment before their souls were swallowed by the blackness.
>Finally it turned to him? Time...time had no meaning? I'd had been a moment? No an age? Seconds? Years? How long had he screamed or been frozen here? The thing once the brother he'd mocked towered over him. He understood what he faced when he looked into the chasm where there should be a smile.
>He faced the fury of a Father; a father facing the murder of his son, the sheer hate of a parent seeing a defiler of their family. Lorgar had felt fear, hate, anger and all there was the powers could offer but this...this was something more.
>So Lorgar the Primarch of the seventeenth Legion, was no more. Could be no more, Denied existence to his core, as a man, a soul, even as an idea. He was gone and yet somehow he still felt pain.
Guys. This seems like Malal getting his revenge. He doesn't even need to be around. This is chaos eating itself.

Fitting that it has devoured the greatest supporter of chaos undivided.

Good thing this destiny shall be averted by Magnus Yoinking Lorgar.
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>>5442756
or will it, because that was all part of my tzeenchian plan all along
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>>5440272
Good shit anon.

>>5442153
>>5442155
Even in fanposting Lorgar always jobs. GG.

>>5442756
Lorgar is still a big question mark. We finally got Angron, but my biggest worry is still Conrad. There still comes into question of the original Canon brothers will turn to chaos or remain loyal.
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>>5443106
I'm going to be honest much as I love Conrad I think he's a lost cause. Even with us being friend with pert I still think he's going traitor.

My bet for team traitor is Conrad, Mort, Fulgrim, Khan (renegade instead of chaos), Sang (khorn doubles down on him), Horus, Pert (hard maybe), Alpharius who's really a loyalist, and possibly the 11th but he's a wild card.
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Dorn, Mortarion, Kurze, Khan, Lion, Horus, Alpharius/Omegon who will betray them later, and Sanguinis (Who I hope gets the Mortarion treatment of stranded in the Warp, inflicted with the rage/thirst, and forced to kill each other till Sanguinis gives in).
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Honestly after we are done with Angron the wisest thing to do would be settle to affairs on Shangrala and make sure there is no blank spaces on the map where chaos could be causing trouble assuming our boys and the ship sisters are not doing that with the eldar and then when we go to Eldrad we ask if we have any other brothers presently in serious trouble and explain why we picked Angron, Lorgar is just getting bullied by his dad right now so it would be irresponsible to see to him first if there are worse cases. I'm betting that will get us Mortarion who is in serious trouble on a diet nurgle daemon world and old fatso may try to turn him early rather then risk Lieren stealing him like he did Magnus and Angron. The other option of that coin flip is we get pointed to Kurze and honestly there is a high chance Lieren just straight up kills Kurze unless the Night Haunter is something like a psuedo daemon constantly mind fucking Kurze. Though it would be better to ice Kurze and have him never be found then to allow him to rampage across the galaxy THEN fall to chaos.
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>>5443243
I think after we're done with Angron and Shangrala (if we have time) we should go to Ol' Winchesters planet and try to bring it to heel as well. it's on a planet in this system right?
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>>5443258
I don't think New Varro it's the same system as Shangrala, since the Deldar raiders where travelling all over the place. But I would need to check the archives to see if anyone mentioned anything about it's location to be sure.
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>>5443263
Ok, I found something on thread 12
>Realize, with the star charts Kanzeon has taken from the Aeldari raiders and those in her archives, you could easily find New Varro! And tell the families of the refugees of their survival
So it's probably not near Shangrala, but we would have no problems getting there
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In the current timeline the path of the heresy and the Traitors might be a little weirder. The nature of the Emperor's own actions come into question as if its set that chaos will always claim half, i hope thats not the case because thats pretty lame. All Primarch are somewhat resistent to the temptations and given the Reclamations may well happen sooner means there is less time for them to get turned on their own worlds.

But in regards to speculation we have little to go on regarding those we have not met and can only speculate in regards to those we have witnessed.

Angron: Current stuff speaks for itself
Magnus: Big Red might get tempted by Featherbrain like how khorne tried a final time on Sanguinius but hopefully he'll pull through
Perturabo: Down to others more than ourselves but we can try. he's on a better path at the moment but by no means a safe one
Leman Russ: Well he might think a little deeper than before, for a time i was worried his search of knowledge would lead him to Tzeentch getting 'crow' familliars and becoming Chaos odin but i doubt it, the dude as a whole is counter chaos and whiule Khorne might like him he's got to much other stuff going on.
Ferrus Manus: The old grump should be ok in regards to our butterflies we didn't do much.
Konrad Curze: Oh boy we are fucking with him quite a bit, he might well lose it sooner than before or who knows maybe in a weird twisted way he'll see fate is not set and theres hope?
Lorgar: Alter boy there is getting more zealous, his father is dead or weakened struck down by an unseen foe with golden eyes. Its gonna get weird.
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>>5443274
Leman would probably end up with Arianka instead of any chaos god. She is doing the Valhalla thing after all.

Heck. She might end up his consort /he becomes her eternal champion.(They might need to keep it on the down low until imperial saints become a thing.)

Then the emperor will have to deal with the bane of every parent.Disapproving of your child's spouse. x 3>>5443263
>>5443266
Hope we find another Primarch there.
>>5443151
Nah. WE Gonna slash those numbers in half. That is our nature. We are the bane of chaos. Prophecies and Fate.
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+++ TAGS OF ST AND [DATA CORRUPTED] OR [DC] REFER TO INTERVIEWER AND INTERVIEWEE RESPECTIVELY, TRANSCRIPT OF ORAL INTERVIEW BEGINS +++

+++ ST: "Hold that thought for a moment. Do you mind if I record our conversation?"
[DC]:"By all means penwoman."
ST:"This is Sinéad Thomen interviewing [DATA CORRUPTED] about the invasion of [REDACTED]"
[DC]:"By far the hottest DZ I ever had to drop into feet first."
ST:"DZ?"
[DC]:"Ah, right you are new to the jargon, DZ stands for drop zone where as LZ is for landing zone."
ST:"I see, please continue."
[DC]:"The planet was supposed to buckle within the first 48 after the negotiations broke down. Intel said they had minimal training and tech, but how wrong they were. Army command started to sweat after the 48 hour estimate turned into 48 months and casualties ballooned from the moment boots set foot on the ground. That is leaving out the space elements that were slagged trying to enter bombardment orbit."
ST:"How was the intelligence so poor? Surely weaponry that powerful would raise alarms."
[DC]:"You see, dear penwoman, our 'Diplomats' went in there throwing their weight around. No record remains of what exactly was set, but I like to imagine it was crass and snooty."
*[DC] chuckles*
[DC]:"The natives were thought to have minor mutations one the first pass through. The meddicae and later our apothecaries carried out autopsies and found that they had been gene editing and commingling with xenos for many generations. Not only this, but back in the day this must have been a military post in the Age of Strife as they had anti voidship weaponry."
ST:"... What do you mean by, 'commingling'?"
[DC]:"Nothing that you would want to hear about. But I am going into the fog here. My company, the 13th, was requested for aid along with the 2nd, 11th, and 31st. Acting Legion Master [DATA PURGED] designated the 13th for QRF duty. Quick Reaction Force, before you ask."
ST:"What of the other companies?"
[DC]:"Some of it is still classified, but the broad strokes are that two of them were tasked with hitting the void weapons, and one was ... let's just say bug hunting."
ST:"Bug ... hunting?"
[DC]:" Sorry Ma'am, but that is classified."
ST:" ... I see."
[DC]:"Anyways the 13th was the surgical sledge hammer to any cracks in the main LZ's defensive perimeter. Said LZ was located smack dab in the middle of a bombed out city that claimed one million souls just taking it. Ops were touch and go from the first minute, our strike cruisers were too slow to be on duty for QRF roles so the 13th had to be crammed into 5 corvettes to make drive by drops. Mind you penwoman, a normal drop in a geosynchronous orbit is risky. I was unperturbed and so were my brothers, even if three quarters were deluded sectarians."

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>>5443679
[DC]:"Death is not the end, simply a new beginning. Not that I exactly was looking for it. to that end I employed some basic psyops."
ST:"Excuse me what?! You never said that you were a psyker?"
*[DC] erupts into boisterous laughter lasting several seconds*
[DC]:"No penwoman, I am not psyonically touched. The term refers to psychological warfare, using mind games to buy yourself some time. You see I painted my storm shield with a bullseye right center."
ST:"Why?"
[DC]:"In the heat of combat almost every enemy kicks back into their primal instincts to survive. there is no time to think, so they shoot the first thing they see, which just so happens to be the most heavily armored section of the shield."
ST:"Ingenious strategy [DC]."
[DC]:"You flatter me, returning to the story. It was five months after we had translated into system, They mutties were desparated after the other companies knocked out the first void gun and bumping off HVTs. They pooled everything into quashing LZ primus, or as we and the little ones lovingly called it, 'The Tomb'. Heh, by the end of the campaign the title was literal."
ST:"You referred to them as 'mutties', what aberrations were there from baseline humanity?"
[DC]:"Damnedest stuff, multiple arms, hard shell like segments of body, bald, and some were big bastards that too often refused to buy the farm. They were throwing the biggest wave yet at The Tomb, on the corvette we could hear the vox channels. All of them buzzing with reports of routs and retreats and counter pushes. Then they called us in, 'Iacta Malleus! Iacta Malleus!'. Music to our ears."
*[DC] sips from a drink*
[DC]:"The captain immediately called for full burn, the translation into orbit pulled at least 9 G's. I don't know how the baseline crew handled those maneuvers, by the time we were in drop position I tuned out everything. For ten seconds the drop pod screamed straight at the ground the interior was noting but peaceful silence. Then ... a roaring crash that would have killed a non astartes instantly."
[DC]:"The servitor linked grenade launchers flung frags for 1.5 seconds before the ramps slammed open to clear the nearest rabble away. We opened up as soon as the ramps were clear, shields soaking fire while bolters barked and flamers roared, we landed right in the middle of a firefight our autosenses highlighted friendlies around us. Once we cleared the area around the pod the Sargent called for a phalanx, we all rushed to lock shields. like a well oiled machine we linked and moved forward as a group fired bolt by bolt at targets popping out from their cover. countless las bolts and autogun rounds pinged and singed the bullseye, it made me grin every time opfor falls for it. ten seconds had passed from our touchdown and the little ones had finally realized we were the reinforcements they had been promised, they bellowed and cheered in delight."

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>>5443700
[DC]:"It always filled our hearts when this happened, they surged from their own cover and rushed in behind our moving and firing wall taking their own pot shots when we heard ..."
*Warning sirens can be heard*
ST:"What is that for?"
[DC]:"Afraid duty calls, we'll continue this one next time."

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>>5443679
>>5443700
>>5443702
Lol
Lmao even.
Gotta love it when you rememberancers arent plastered on walls as bloody smears when trying to talk to space marines.
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>>5443266
Ehhhh no problems who knows, we have no idea how far away it is.
We left Shangrila, and while there was development the solar system of our world hasn't been explored and secured by us properly.
We don't even know how many solar systems are around Shangrila.
Could be many. Could be few, or none (extremely likely none or few since Shangrila was quite literally picked for get away in a far far away secret solar system from the genocidal war between machine and men).

While i like Ol'Winchester the path is clear, either we strengthen Shangrila by expanding it across the stars (which would include going to New Varro) or go around saving our brothers in need.
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This doesn't mean we can't expand Shangrila later.
But each saved Primarch will be 1 or a few more years, for travel to him and make preparations to save him, and then aid him. A decade or more flies by with 5 or 6 primarchs. It's a cut of time to consider when doing this, because this will even probably determine how Shangrila will be considered by the Imperium when they find each other.
And how strong and large the dominion of Shangrila across the stars will become, will be quite important in the future. Lieren must be the one at the head of this expansion too, any solar system integrated under the banners of the mist world should know the words of the Journey from the lips of his maker.
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>>5440272
a nice small piece

>>5442153
>>5442155
a well deserved end for such an act, if Lorgar tried to do more than that though.......

>>5443702
an interesting mini story
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Speaking of mutations. What differentiates them from genemods?
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>>5443702
Bloody jean thieves, can't lift a rock without finding a coven.
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>>5443749
Whether or not someone chose it.
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>>5443749
Genemods are intentional crafting, where as mutations are either natural or chaos induced and have random effects on the being in question.
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>>5443933
So the mutations mentioned here in the omake could be genemods?

Or is there a way to tell them apart?
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>>5443966
It's genestealers infiltration, the insectoid appearance and saying that they mingled gives it away
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Bros after we help Angry Ron, should we stick around long enough to map out the solar system, then determine its coordinate from the galactic map to figure out where our two planets are relative to the galaxy, then figure out where to find earth?

Then when we return home back to Shangrala, we can finalize repairing all the tears in reality, making the whole place anti-demon free, free of corruption, etc?

I dont know where I was going with this point. I just really want to develop aesthetically and environmentally friendly giga farms so we can make PRIMARCH ULTRA APPROVES EMERGENCY RATIONS.
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>>5444310
I imagine Kanzeon and her sisters already knows where Earth and Shangrala are in the galaxy.
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the super long wait, it was the machine spirits again

>>5440272
Short and sweet story, enjoyed it!

And yes, I do have a request. Ork/Gretchin Martial Artists. Or The greenskins races first encounter with Long Jianese Martial artists/ cultivators

>>5442155
>>5442153
Heartwrenching and really very spooky at the end, actually made me tear up at the start and shudder at the second half. Amazing work, anon

>>5443679
>>5443700
>>5443702

I do hope I get a chance to right Lieren's reaction to gazing upon the Nid Hive mind. And the metal boys, considering the Ymga Monolith, and that the canon 2nd explored it

>>5442483
Once again, I owe you one, thank you very much for the assistance

>>5442483
Though by my count there are

6 votes to spar with angron, with 4 sub votes to wait until he isn't drunk (which Lieren would do anyways)

Which is still 1 under 1 less than half of the total count of 15 votes, so only testing the waters with Angron to see how he'll react to your bond with Kanzeon and perhaps her true nature, at 11 votes, goes forward

So that is exactly what Lieren will do.

Writing now
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>>5444543
“BOSS BOSS YOU GOTTA SEE DIS!” one of the lads came bellowing, Hakkabone the feral ork warboss was drawn from his great hangover and immediately slogged the irritating sound right in the jaw sending teef and blood across the floor of his palace.

“WHAT YOU YELLIN FOR GIT!”

“IZ IMPORTANT BOSS!”

“SPIT IT OUT DEN!”

The smaller orc was cowed by the violance of the towering Warboss and remembering why he was there despite amping for a fight.

“is Gwargoz he's gone all weird again!”

“He'z always weird! HE'S A ZOGGING WEIRD BOY!”

“LIKE SUPA WEIRD BOSS COME SEE!”

Hakkabone dragged himself from the comfortable shade of his lair and began to follow the boy down into the valley the rest of the Lads had made a scrap town in. He smiled though as at the bottom he could make out the sounds of sweet fighting, he's lads already at it at this time of morning? He was so proud, none of the Storm boy marching malarkey here!

The Warband was gathered around cheering and yelling, throwing teef at one another and as their Warboss pushed his way though none dared oppose him given how Hakkabone was holding his trusty choppa half the size of most of them!

Yet in the centre of the Ring he found himself confused, their resident Weird Boy was sat in the centre of the sandy pit, around him a dozen corpses. The remains of these other orks all brutally beaten...Gwargoz had done this? Had the lad finally grown a spine and the joy of a good ol fite? Even if he had a long wispy Hair squig on his chin now?

“WOZ ALL DIS DEN!”

all fell silent a moment their leader having come, only for a moment though as soon a dozen explanations were thrown his way.

“WEIRD BOYS GONE WARP'ED BOSS”
“HE TURNED ME INTO A SQUIG!”
'EEZ DECKIN ALL THE LADS THAT DESTURP IZ MEDITATOON!”
“HE KUMPED ME MATE!”

On and on it went, well until until Hakka banged some skulls together for some piece of mind and to bring quiet again. He stepped into the ring and the lads watched patiently eyes in awe.

“e'll try to slug ya boss” a voice murmured but hakka laughed what idiot would actually try to fight h- An open palmed strike met his face before he could blink and the Warboss saw stars and roks about his head a moment.... he looked down.

Their Weirdboy was on his feet now before him shorter by a head and shoulder hopping on one leg his arms held high? What was this? Looks like the lad wanted a fight! Well ashame he'd have to be killed now but what a great way to start the morning!

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>>5444576
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The other orks watched enraptured as their Boss and Weird boy battled, the Boss fighting true and orky strong blows and swings of the Choppa threatening to cleave the upstart git in two...but that wasn't what was happening?

Gwargoz was swaying away from blows like a loose wire from a mek? Heavy punches slapped aside like he was fighting a lad his junior? It perplexed the mob whom still roared and laughed at the fight all the same. But as blows were exchanged they noticed something? The Weird boy was starting to shimmer? Flicks of colour, red, blue, green?

The Boss roared and swang his massive blade only for everyones jaws to drop, Gwargoz lept into the air still upon one leg arms flapping like a bird? But then he landed on the blade as laught as a feather?

“Eh” Said the Warboss,

“EH” said the crowd.

“WAAAAAGHHHHH” Said Gwargoz as he flipped backwards and with a powerful upwards kick tore their Bosses head from his shoulders. The towering figures body falling to the ground, pandemonium followed.
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Gwargoz walked around the ring of boys whose eyes looked like they'd pop so in shock they were but he simply ran his thick green fingers through his beard and narrowed his own.

“YOU GITS FINK YOU SO SMART, SO CLEVA IN THE WAYS OF THE WAAGH”

confusion upon their faces.

“I'LL SHOW YOU HOW TO BE RITE STRONG!”

He fell to his knees and crossed his legs, eyes aglow with weird power, the Waagh here was potent at this point and for a moment he could see his dream again, the dream that set him on this path. The others saw it to; a Great Scrap in the Stars, metal skellies, pointy eres, so many more fings? But then they beheld them, the biggest lads they'd ever did see; Orks?

The vision swiftly faded and with it the sheer fulfilment, but now the mob had tasted it they wanted more and so Gwargoz Furst Fisto da Waaagh would teach.

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>Ork learns to meditate with Waggh power
>War in heaven genetic memory kicks in
Ork like, Ork want more
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The party held in celebration for Angron's victory, though it is more of a festival considering its size and intricacy, is more akin to the humble, pleasant affairs often held in your honor upon Shangrala than it is to the indulgent, excessive and wasteful celebrations held by all manner of hedonists and spendthrifts. Not at all extravagant, and hosting simple entertainments, foods and beverages to quench the thirsts for exactment and base sustenance alike, though on this occasion that is more because of the lack of availability to the finer and more cloying delicacies of both dish and cop that would only clog the tongue and cloud the senses with their overly sweet tastes and alcoholic potency. Yet, despite the fact that the strongest liquor being served is watered down wine, to stretch it thin and make it last for the whole of the night, and despite the sweetest treat offered to the celebrants dried figs and pruned grapes, Angron's people are drunk. Not off liquor or the indulgence of finely prepared and pointlessly extravagant meals, but rather the atmosphere itself. As warrior pound their chests and grin manically as the pitch of battle infects their hearts and fills their mind with a blinding, numbing smoke, so too has the joy of victory and sweetness made drunkards of all present. Though the rare bottle of undiluted wine certainly helps deepen their ecstasy in this celebrations of triumph and freedom. Though, judging from the rosy tint to Angron's cheeks, most of those bottles of thick wine were presented to the beloved and respected leader of this successful yet hidden rebellion.

As such, much of his drunkenness, must come from the pride that blossoms after the rain of praise. It must be greatly gratifying to your brother, who once only knew abuse and cruel exploitations to be freely showered with earnest compliments and congratulation, spoken by dear friends and loyal followers, who once wore the same chains as he himself had. Though, his physical intoxication is caused solely by his imbuing of gallons of dark and rich wine, the mentally and emotional intoxication of the high of euphoric bliss he is experiencing from the repose of his new found freedom and the "pure" renown and honor he has earned upon the true theater of battle, war against tyrants, certainly deepen his drunkenness.

And seeing him, so carefree and blithe, brings a warm, genuine smile to your face, and so you indulge him in joining in the festivities though neither you nor Feng make gluttons or fools out of yourselves, instead choosing to uphold the tenants of common etiquette and universal procedure and the lessons of temperance and abstinences you yourself had written and record within the often highly regarded pages of the journey.
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>>5444588

Similarly, the beggars and gladiators present, whom you yourself had trained, also uphold moderation and decency, though you do count a few of the old men of your sect dancing wildly, hooting and hollering like boys a quarter their age.

After touring you around the whole of the camp, making sure you played the local games of chance and skill, including a game that you swear you saw the men of new Varro teaching the Lai and Vishnu, a crude and potentially painful game of stabbing a long, razor sharp knife between the gapes between the fingers of one's own outstretched hand. A game that you and Angron spend some hours playing, increasing the pace and rhythm to such a blinding speed that it appears to all observers, many of whom tried to challenge the two of you earlier in the game, that you are not moving at all.

Eventually, the two of you bore of this game, when the knife's tip has been worn flat and the edge so dulled it can no longer be considered a blade at all. Then, Angron, Oenomaus, a handful of beggars and a mob of gladiators, gather around Feng and you, and gauge your reaction to the cuisine of slaves with barely contained excitement and unhidden mirth. Feng, who grew up eating fried field mice and rice hulls, does not provide the outlandish and dramatic reactions of disgust or trepidation they were hoping for. And you have tasted far fouler than mash made of worms and gruel thickened with gritty mud, as you had the unfortunate privilege of standing in the presence of Na Gou's fetid progeny.

Angron himself, finds great humor in the disappointment of his followers and friends, howling and slapping his knees with all the mirth of a boy whose never known war. It is nice to see him, freed from the unseen chains of his abuse and responsibility. These are moments whom memories you shall carve deeply into your mind's organized halls of ledgers and minute details. Seeing him laugh, smile and enjoy himself without fear or concern, alights your heart with a warmth similar to.

You sigh, as the green hue of the grass Angron had fashioned into a rudimentary whistle to entertain a gaggle of urchin children, reminds of you of Kanzeon's own vivid eyes, that glitter like finely cut and polished emeralds. You stand, leaving Feng to fend for himself amongst the curious and pestering of the fort's inhabitants, as you look for a place of solitude and silence, draped in the pale silver light of Nuceria's moon, a place similar to the one where you and your irreplaceable sunlight danced throughout the night. An occasion which brought about the night crane style of martial arts.

Yes, beneath the cool moonlight, you shall allow the cold light you keep with your heart to roam freely so as to bring forth inspiration. Poetic inspiration, whispered from the warm dark of the heart's depths, where the truest and most powerful emotions dwell, ever present yet slumbering like the dragons of myth.
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>>5444589

Humming to yourself, you realize immediately Angron is tailing you as you walk to a secluded portion of his fortress' innermost walls.

Your sudden departure has made him curious, and so you change your plans. They still concern sweet, loving Kanzeon, but rather than penning a gift of words and symbolism to capture but a fragment of a fragment of the beauty of her heart and nature, you shall instead see if your family with her and her sisters, can join with your family of your nameless father and scattered brother. Eleven of your son's including Valorous Dae-hyun and Noble Nikephoros.

But, of your brothers? Perturabo knew Kanzeon, you introduced them after all, when you first met your iron minded brother with an artist's gentle soul buried beneath the rust of suspicion, bitterness and contempt. And he knows she is your wife, the one with whom you share a love beyond description or belief, the unconditional love both of you also share with the whole of humanity, unmarred by lust or desire for companionship.

Yes, Perturabo knows Kanzeon's relationship with you, but he does not know what she is. Magnus, your closest and dearest brother, he has an open mind, you have not introduced him to Kanzeon. Your conversations of philosophy and spirituality and so much more are so enchanting and enjoyable, you've never found the chance to speak to him of your engagement with the ancient who endured the fall of man. Magnus would...

Magnus would understand. He has an inviting heart, he even would have accepted the most wicked of spirits had he not been shown their true face by your struggled against the shade of smoke and spite that guarded fair and just Arianka's prison beneath even the furthest reaches of reality and sanity. Yes Magnus would understand and accept Kanzeon and her sisters as human! He's read the journey and given his thoughts and criticisms on it! He..he would understand.

Perturabo? You are uncertain, you have spoken with him fewer times than Magnus, and he is less psionically adept than you or your brother, you have seen him, but you do not know the deepest contents of his hearts or know his beliefs of what constitutes humanity. You do not know if he'd react with curiosity and wonder or if the contempt he shows for most of his adoptive family and country would in turn spread to the gentle and caring daughters of the golden age. He is an artist by heart, but that does not mean his heart is one that will accept all comers as friends and kith. It may be easier for him to accept than most, if only because he's met Kanzeon before and respects her, which would color his perceptions of her. So you shall ensure they meet again, so that his perceptions are vividly dyed before you risk reveal the truth to him.

Your father? You are wary of speaking to him of anything of Kanzeon, already his man, Malacdor, has sent a spy searching for the origin of Long-Jia's advance technology.
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>>5444590

You have mislead and deluded that particular threat, keeping him unaware of the truth hidden beneath the earth and glittering in the skies, through clever subterfuge and misdirection.

But your psyker sons, who never met aliens before, hated them by instinct before you set them straight with a stern by necessary lesson, and when they met their brothers and sisters of the tiger kin, they were hesitant and on edge until they saw they were human and adored by their genesire.

You fear these prejudices were implanted, if not by your father, than one of his close advisors and aides in the creation of the Astarte warriors.

Angron, you know him to be gruff, yet empathetic, caring despite his rough demeanor and upbringing. An idealist at heart, compassionate and brave. But you must be careful about these things, despite all of these characteristic he wears proudly upon his chest, he still may be opposed to the mere existence of Kanzeon and her sisters. And, he may have decided that, Primarchs should not enjoy the simple pleasure of mutual love and affection, deeming it too soft and unbefitting a purposefully designed engine of war. Though if perturabo didn't think as such, then it is unlikely Angron would, you're simply creating stress considering meaningless variables.

You will subtly measure Angron's response to an existence like you and him taking and sharing in the warmth of love and the chill of sorrow together forevermore, and if you are pleased with his reaction and certain he isn't sternly opposed, you shall tell him of Kanzeon. And after that, you shall raise the question of what he considers humanity, and only if he gives an answer that shows as close to absolutely no suspicion, fear or hatred for souls entrapped in machines, you shall tell him the truth of Kanzeon and her kin.

"Brother, what are you doing here, away from the party?" He asked, as you stood, gazing at the moon blankly as your mind worked tirelessly, running each and every possibility down to the smallest, most inconsequential detail so as to measure the variables and risks of this gambit you would be pulling in a matter of moments. Your brother laughed heartily

"Or did you simply become entranced by the moon and come here to write poetry while the rest of us were celebrating being alive and planning our next move" He asked, standing beside you and giving the bright orb in the sky and suspicious look, narrowing his eyes "I figured, with how murderous you get when just talking about tyrants, you'd be overjoyed to take part in planning their downfall"

"Something like that brother" You laughed, flashing a cheerful smirk "I am, after all, currently in a state of contemplation, and the moon's silver glow is helping to reveal the answers I seek within myself

"Mhm" Angron said, nodding "And what are you looking for, seems to me you already know more than you need to to survive"
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"Man requires more than what provides for their body to live" You state sagely "For, if their heart is allowed to wilt, they shall themselves weaken mentally and spiritually. One should not deny themselves the numerous pleasantries and pains of life"

"I'd ask if you had too much to drink, but you're always like this when you get contemplative, at least from what I've seen" Angron said with a chuckle "So, are you looking for what you think your heart requires"

His supernatural empathy has only grown stronger since his psykerist training had begun, it would seem. He's peering into your heart as easily as you peer into his, without any pressure or presence. Remarkable.

"Oh, I have found much of what my soul yearns for, I do not need much to be happy in life" You state, diverting the question "But, in the camp, I saw many couples, wed if not by rite then by bond and love alone, and I began to wonder"

"If things like us can find that same kind of love" Angron asked, somberly, his hard eyes softening "I...never thought about that before. I never heard you mention sisters, and we're too...large for normal woman. Giants...Primarchs like us, were made for a purpose, and it wasn't reproduction, at least from what little you and Magnus have told me. We're war machines, of a kind". His words had become progressively bitter

"You've seen my implication, but only considered it from the dullest, most industrial angle. Surely, our father did not intend for us to sow seed and spawn a race of giants" You chuckle to defuse Angron's mounting resentment "But, he had given us hearts, minds and souls. We are not just machines. He intended us to live and feel as men. Why should that exclude the emotion of affection and love, and yearning, burning desire to find one's own family?"

"I doubt he'd approve, if he left us to the wolves" He spat "He might just not care, but I don't see where you're going with this. It'd be nice, if we could have a life beyond battle and killing, but how could we?"

"There is always time to be spent as one choose, finding repose and comfort were one can" You sagely advise, nodding as Angron considers the implication of those

"It'd be doomed to tragedy" Your brother stated plainly "We can't be hurt easily, or harmed without great effort. Its been done to me before, they'd hurt the ones we keep closest to us. I've felt that pain often, too often"

"I've buried boys I grew alongside and became men with, they died following my shadow" You say sorrowfully, knives of ice piercing your twin hearts as tears filled your eyes, burning with grief but pleasant with reminiscence of the happiness you had shared with the departed "I know that pain as well, but a life with out tragedy, is no life at all. Just a hollow, meaningless portrait. Bitter flavors must counteract the sweet.

"That's a grim world view" he said plainly "So, if you, took a wife, and she was killed to weaken your resolve, you would not regret it, because sadness is natural"
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>>5444592

"Because I'd still have the memories of her and the time we shared, and the satisfaction of slaying her killers. One cannot share their lives with another, and not expect to feel the sting of their departure" You say softly, lifting your head and smiling warmly at Angron

"I can understand that, I think. I have felt the pain others have felt when they have lost their partners, it hurts more than any wound or cut" Angron said back, just as softly "But I never felt any regret from them, when their emotions blended with my own. But, brother, this seems more like you're seeking approval in your own mysterious, indirect fashion"

"Correct" You state proudly. Your brother stares at you for a long set of moments, studying your smile and posture as he contemplates and sits on what you just said

"You've already taken a wife?" he asks

"Yes" You say with a nod "Though, we are not yet wed officially, as honor and decorum states. We have both been far too busy with our responsibilities to the people, you see"

"Huh" Angron says with a shocked expression, turning back to face the moon to clear his mind of the wildfire that must be surging through it "That's unexpected, though I suppose I don't know you all to well, even if we are brothers. Does Magnus have one to or?"

"No. He is too busy with his studies, and his truest love is his research of the mysterious of spirit and thought" You say, a good natured jab at you absent brother's expense "He is unaware of my relationship, as we often wile away hours discussing the intricacies of the realm of spirits and dreams and other fascinating subjects, such as the evolution of tradition and art and how quickly history becomes myth becomes legend"

Angron nodded, clearly still struggling against the titanic shock of hearing that you of all people were betrothed

"What's her name?" He asked warmly "I'd like to meet her, if this war ends quickly enough and the path you took here can handle two primarchs on it"

"Kanzeon" You say wistfully, sighing and lowering your shoulders "She and I share a vision of what the future should be, and it was that which pushed us closer than mere colleagues or friends, or even lovers. The love she and I share, is purer, untainted by base lust or animal instinct, unconditional. A love few shall ever experience themselves, like the love of the blazing son and cold moon, caught in their endless dance of gravity, a natural occurrence, undyed by any of the detritus of this mortal existence"

"Now you're sounding like a mad man" Angron said with a snort "But you sound happy at least, even if I didn't understand all of that "What's she like?"
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>>5444593

"Motherly, kind hearted though with a sharp tongue and fierce and sassy nature. She is dutiful and responsible, caring and nurturing, yet hard when she needs to be. Her hands, like mine own, are soaked with blood shed by necessity" You answer lovingly "Headstrong, yet also contemplative. She can be stubborn, yet also understanding. The sun could hear me begin to describe the beauty of her, and the moon would hear me finish, Har!"

"Sounds like quite the catch, brother" Your brother said honestly and kindly, his eyes twinkling with delight "I'm glad you've lead a blessed enough life to meet a woman so perfect for you, judging from how you describe her"

"She is excellent. She is my water and air. Every second I spend without her by my side is one of emptiness, for she and I share a soul...a figure of speech from Long-Jia" You say with an almost girlish giggle "We have done great things together, and shall accomplish many more deeds of great renown hand and hand, but, alas, she and I are yet separated"

"I can only imagine how cloyingly sweet you two would be together" Angron says, crossing his arms and nodding sternly a few times, his face wrinkled as he imagines something like you sitting across from a table of a small, petite girl shorter than Feng and dressed in a regal, flowing dress of silk or a similar fantasy wrought by the sudden realization of the life you lead beyond appearing from nothing and vanishing just as quickly

"She is not the only one I miss from Shangrala. I also have two hundred and eighty five young children" You say bluntly, savoring every shade of pale your brother turns as his mind leaps to an unpleasant conclusion "Adopted children, beside those Astartes remade in my image, who number in the thousands"

"I can't believe even you are so generous to adopt a small army of orphan kids" Angron spits, his mouth agape and eyes wide

"I had to, they were all that remained of a once noble people who descended into barbarity and monstrosity" You explain "A people whose genocide I assisted"

Your brother's stare is piercing and judging

"They were cannibals, cultists of the foulest type. But the children were innocent of their crimes, uncorrupted in spirit" You explain quickly, much to the relief of you empath kinsman "I could only convince their enemies to spare the children, and took them under my wing and civilized them, educating them in the way of proper and virtuous living"

"How merciful, it almost brings tears to my eyes" Angron said with a hint of pride rising in his words "I'd like to meet them to, if they're your kids"

"Oh, well, see, they are somewhat strange in appearance" You say, drawing your brothers intrigue "Many of the prior generation would've named them monsters and devils, but I looked upon them and saw men"

"How awful do they look if that would be the reaction" You brother snarls

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>>5444594

"They resemble the large predatory cats of Shangrala, which are unlike the felines you find upon Nuceria, in many ways. Some have four arms, all are covered in fur, they have tails and fangs and have snouts rather than faces. Most are more tiger than man and all of them are possess a bestial strength" You explain as realization dawns on Angron's face

"They're mutants" he says

"No, they're a stable offshoot of humanity, though mutants would still be another branch of humanity, just one of uncertain viability" You explain rapidly "They are true breeding, and had culture and history. But it was all forsaken and lost under the ambition of a single mad tyrant"

That is not a lie. Accursed Vipul enslaved the Tiger men to his will, and thus the will of the unseen master.

Angron remains in silent contemplation for sometime, so the two of you merely look up at the moon as you wait for your brother to gather his thoughts. Eventually he shook his head

"We really are brothers. Most men would've just killed those kids with the rest, but...I don't think I could have, had you and I switched places at that moment" He says quietly "as easy as it would be to condemn them as beasts worthy only of slaughter. Are they accepted on your world, or must they hide"

"Those nations who have accepted the Journey understand that humanity comes in many forms and variations, recently, the Zoroast welcomed the bovine Angra into their cities. After I dealt with those who had also been set upon an inhuman way of life" You say cheerfully, Angron wincing as you allude to the purge of the corrupted Angra, of which he has no knowledge

"You make it sound so easy, removing the evil bastards from your world. Just how you phrase it. Dealt with. How cold" Angron said offhandedly "Is that how you overthrew your own "High riders"


"Oh, they were horrid" You say with wide eyes filled with lingering hatred for the old Yan family "so vile in their ways and nature, I struggle to name them human, though their deviation from the standard human form was far less severe than the Tiger folk or Angra. Hedonism and excess so twisted they could not live without torture and sadism, without glutting themselves upon enough food to feed whole villages, without drinking and killing their bodies, without reducing their fellow men into pets and play things or even meals and canvases! how I did more than "Dealt with" them, dear brother of mine. I purged them and all their filth and rot from my world, with fire and fury. And yet, their bloodline lives on, for one branch of that wretched family, remained free of the moral corruption that had so badly afflicted the rest of that putrid line and made them act like...not even animals, like living scum!"

"The more you talk, the more I realize how boundless your mercy is" Angron says, his eyes as wide as your own "How'd you find that out"
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>>5444596

"General Yan Zihao, the old crafty fox tried to die against my forces, to die with dignity and honor. He couldn't. I honestly have no idea how he did, considering how outmatched his army was and how set he was on dying for the crimes of his kin! He had hidden away his own children and their children and their children, as well as the family of their most truest vassals, and then rode off to die gloriously!" You exclaim, fondly remembering the old general who finally had his tail caught in the Butcher's city of madness, giving his life for overall victory against his endless hordes of cloned soldiers, a death that would surely be remembered in song and verse for at least a few generations

"And he didn't, sounds like a tough old dog. Hope he's still around so I can meet him along with your wife and furry kids" He said happily, but your frown told him he wasn't "Oh, a shame"

"Yes truly" You say with a nod, and the two of you return to silence, marveling at the bright, full moon

What do you say, Lieren?

>"Tell me, Angron. If you met a voice that spoke from metal, what would you believe it to be? if it claimed to be human. What if you came across something that looked nearly human, but claimed it wasn't? Hmm"

>"Many of those I wish you could meet, have died along the way of achieving peace on my world. I pray you shall not lose as many friends as I have, in pursuit of your ambitions. Tomorrow, you and I fight together, the high rides shall rue their rule"

>"Oh, before I forget, Kanzeon is not a normal girl. In fact, she's older than me. Far older. Having survived the fall of humanity's last galactic civilization. And her true body is a massive colony ship made of living gold and silver, and she was born from a terrible process of combining countless human souls to make one powerful gestalt consciousness...and our father is a similar existence! Though naturally occurring as far as I am aware"

>"An envoy from the city of Loc'ea should soon come looking for you, following a trail of hints my beggar sect has scattered for them to find. They seek to be your allies, and have already freed themselves from their ruling houses. I advise you to accept them with open arms, Brother"

>write in

>>5444576
>>5444578
YES! This is exactly what I wanted! So beautifully orky and hilarious. Thanks, mate.
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>>5444599
>write in
Use our abilities to share a choice few Select memories/emotions we have had during our life.
1) Our night in the stars with our Wife [love]
2) Our adopted Children [caring]
3) Our own father [duty]
4) with his permission give him fragments of the Butcher war and the Yan, ensure he is ready for what he's about to see. [That we fight to preserve]

>Write in
"My wife, is another being created with purpose like ourselves....but from another time long ago. Artificially born from metal and design like us, bearing a true soul like us. But I worry brother, I worry about what the future holds for my Emerald Star and I....But enough of this doom and gloom how about something more fun and suitable for brother hmm? A little Spar under moonlight?"

>>5444599
Glad you like it boss
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>>5444603
+1 supporting 2 through 4, but not 1. #1 is for us and the wife to savor.

Also supporting the sparring match.

>>5444599
Still find it kinda funny we're slightly taller than Angry Ron.
I also vaguely remember the time some of the tiger kids were biting and nibbling on Lieren for comfort that was super fucking adorable.
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>>5444599
>>"Tell me, Angron. If you met a voice that spoke from metal, what would you believe it to be? if it claimed to be human. What if you came across something that looked nearly human, but claimed it wasn't? Hmm"

>>"An envoy from the city of Loc'ea should soon come looking for you, following a trail of hints my beggar sect has scattered for them to find. They seek to be your allies, and have already freed themselves from their ruling houses. I advise you to accept them with open arms, Brother"
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>>5444603
>>5444605
Thats fair change (1) into some other nice memory with the wife
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>>5444599
uhmm a very good update. It is a difficult matter to walk through.... but not impossible. I suppose a demonstration of the share level of technological marvel we have, should indicate without shadows of doubts that the origins of our beloved are true.
Ah isn't Perturabo interested in someone too in a way.....
>"Tell me, Angron. If you met a voice that spoke from metal, what would you believe it to be? if it claimed to be human. What if you came across something that looked nearly human, but claimed it wasn't? Hmm"
>"Oh, before I forget, Kanzeon is not a normal girl. In fact, she's older than me. Far older. Having survived the fall of humanity's last galactic civilization. And her true body is a massive colony ship made of living gold and silver, and she was born from a terrible process of combining countless human souls to make one powerful gestalt consciousness...and our father is a similar existence! Though naturally occurring as far as I am aware"
>Order our clothing to change to our star metal armor
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>>5444599
>"Many of those I wish you could meet, have died along the way of achieving peace on my world. I pray you shall not lose as many friends as I have, in pursuit of your ambitions. Tomorrow, you and I fight together, the high rides shall rue their rule"

>"Oh, before I forget, Kanzeon is not a normal girl. In fact, she's older than me. Far older. Having survived the fall of humanity's last galactic civilization. And her true body is a massive colony ship made of living gold and silver, and she was born from a terrible process of combining countless human souls to make one powerful gestalt consciousness...and our father is a similar existence! Though naturally occurring as far as I am aware"
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>>5444599
>"An envoy from the city of Loc'ea should soon come looking for you, following a trail of hints my beggar sect has scattered for them to find. They seek to be your allies, and have already freed themselves from their ruling houses. I advise you to accept them with open arms, Brother"
>"Many of those I wish you could meet, have died along the way of achieving peace on my world. I pray you shall not lose as many friends as I have, in pursuit of your ambitions. Tomorrow, you and I fight together, the high rides shall rue their rule"
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>>5444685
And let me add
>>5444599
>You should worry not about my wife, brother, she too is a created being like us, truly killing her would take more effort than ending the lives of any of us. However, I would dare say she is closer to our father than ours, an ancient being guiding and protecting humanity, although she would be angry at me for revealing a lady's age. Even the nature of her soul is similar's to our father's, although I'm she and her sisters are not the same form of humanity he is.
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>>5444605
>Support

>>5444543
In my defense that guy voted after I counted.
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>>5444599
>>"An envoy from the city of Loc'ea should soon come looking for you, following a trail of hints my beggar sect has scattered for them to find. They seek to be your allies, and have already freed themselves from their ruling houses. I advise you to accept them with open arms, Brother"
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>>5444599
>>"Tell me, Angron. If you met a voice that spoke from metal, what would you believe it to be? if it claimed to be human. What if you came across something that looked nearly human, but claimed it wasn't? Hmm"

>>"An envoy from the city of Loc'ea should soon come looking for you, following a trail of hints my beggar sect has scattered for them to find. They seek to be your allies, and have already freed themselves from their ruling houses. I advise you to accept them with open arms, Brother"
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>>5444599
>"Tell me, Angron. If you met a voice that spoke from metal, what would you believe it to be? if it claimed to be human. What if you came across something that looked nearly human, but claimed it wasn't? Hmm"
>"An envoy from the city of Loc'ea should soon come looking for you, following a trail of hints my beggar sect has scattered for them to find. They seek to be your allies, and have already freed themselves from their ruling houses. I advise you to accept them with open arms, Brother"
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>>5444599
>"Oh, before I forget, Kanzeon is not a normal girl. In fact, she's older than me. Far older. Having survived the fall of humanity's last galactic civilization. And her true body is a massive colony ship made of living gold and silver, and she was born from a terrible process of combining countless human souls to make one powerful gestalt consciousness...and our father is a similar existence! Though naturally occurring as far as I am aware"

Also supporting this >>5444603
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>>5444599
>>"Many of those I wish you could meet, have died along the way of achieving peace on my world. I pray you shall not lose as many friends as I have, in pursuit of your ambitions. Tomorrow, you and I fight together, the high rides shall rue their rule"
>>"Oh, before I forget, Kanzeon is not a normal girl. In fact, she's older than me. Far older. Having survived the fall of humanity's last galactic civilization. And her true body is a massive colony ship made of living gold and silver, and she was born from a terrible process of combining countless human souls to make one powerful gestalt consciousness...and our father is a similar existence! Though naturally occurring as far as I am aware"
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>>5445272
Supporting this. It fulfills all I really want say.
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So do you guys think its possible to reinstall the humanity in custodes? No custodese could ever betray the Emperor, but perhaps some could regain what was lost in time? What about turning Shangralla into an actual Shangralla where all those seeking enlightenment may travel? Maybe get in the ground floor and help design the Librariums? Creating warrior lodges that actually help its members?
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>>5446755
Custodes don't listen to anyone but Big E and themselves so probably not and stuff like the warrior lodges do nothing but make it easier for chaos worshippers to work.
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>>5446755
No
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Happy Halloween! Sorry for the long wait. I'll try to call the vote in a bit, once the stream of trick or treaters slows down a little
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>>5448982
If the tiger children went trick or treating, what costume would they wear.
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>>5448989
they would dress like Lieren, like everyone else
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>>5448989
I would say space marines
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>>5448989
Fog panther.
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for taking so long.

Use your abilities to share a choice few Select memories/emotions we have had during our life:4

My wife, is another being created with purpose like ourselves....but from another time long ago. Artificially born from metal and design like us, bearing a true soul like us. But I worry brother, I worry about what the future holds for my Emerald Star and I....But enough of this doom and gloom how about something more fun and suitable for brother hmm? A little Spar under moonlight?":4

"Tell me, Angron. If you met a voice that spoke from metal, what would you believe it to be? if it claimed to be human. What if you came across something that looked nearly human, but claimed it wasn't? Hmm":4

"An envoy from the city of Loc'ea should soon come looking for you, following a trail of hints my beggar sect has scattered for them to find. They seek to be your allies, and have already freed themselves from their ruling houses. I advise you to accept them with open arms, Brother":5

"Oh, before I forget, Kanzeon is not a normal girl. In fact, she's older than me. Far older. Having survived the fall of humanity's last galactic civilization. And her true body is a massive colony ship made of living gold and silver, and she was born from a terrible process of combining countless human souls to make one powerful gestalt consciousness...and our father is a similar existence! Though naturally occurring as far as I am aware": 5

Order your clothing to change to your star metal armor:1

"Many of those I wish you could meet, have died along the way of achieving peace on my world. I pray you shall not lose as many friends as I have, in pursuit of your ambitions. Tomorrow, you and I fight together, the high rides shall rue their rule":4

You should worry not about my wife, brother, she too is a created being like us, truly killing her would take more effort than ending the lives of any of us. However, I would dare say she is closer to our father than ours, an ancient being guiding and protecting humanity, although she would be angry at me for revealing a lady's age. Even the nature of her soul is similar's to our father's, although I'm she and her sisters are not the same form of humanity he is.:1

Total votes: 13

Well, this is rare. The winning votes are below one less than half the total, and two only go forward cause they're tied

SO Lieren will tell Angron of the Loc'ea envoy and of what Kanzeon truly is

Writing now. Sorry I made you wait for days and days again.

>>5444632
Thanks!

>>5448989
Certainly not spooky space elf clown gods.

>>5446755
I've been planning Lieren's first meeting with the custodians since the threads were in the single digits
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The moment lingers, hanging like mist in the air or the stars in the sky. Even the winds still, as you two men, you two brothers, bred to lead and bred to war, who had become so much more than you designs, stood in solemn respectful silence to not only the night but each other. You did not look to Angron, nor ponder what he saw or dreamt when he turned his own, weary eyes heavy by the weight of the lives he was forced to take and the burden of the responsibilities he was required to rest upon his shoulders for the future and soul of not only his people but the whole world that was the only home he had ever known. A world that had mistreated him, abused and misused the power he was blessed with by birth, squandered his potential and innate expertise to turn him into a lapdog, a fighting beast, a blade of execution and nothing more. Did he recollect on those dark times, embrace the path he had laid for himself and the duties that came with it as both guide and foundation stone of a young nation of the freed and unchained? You could tell, with nary a glance, but you chose not to. The thoughts one experiences whilst bathed in the tender and cold light of their planet's moon, awash in the distant staring of stars they shall never witness beyond pin pricks of fading light upon a canvas of rich and dark violet hues and stygian black pigments, should be private to one's own heart. Whether your brother meditates on the unpleasant part or looks to the future wistfully or bitterly, is not something you have the privilege to pry into and know.

Besides, the windless silence and calm of the night is refreshing, purifying and soothing. A pleasure one can partake of, without regret or shame. But, silence can only endure for so long. Soon, that distant silver body shall tire and descend over the horizon and in its place a sphere of blinding fire will rise, proud and uncaring of the atrocities its glow reveals comes morning. And come that dawn, there will be much that will need doing by your hands or under your oversight. Ground must be prepared, equipment readied, fortifications repaired and improved and battles surely to be fought. The children of Shangrala shall soon arrive, and as surely as they shall, you will join the fray of your brothers war, as promised by and expected of you by familial piety and brotherly loyalty and oaths you have spoken with your own voice and will.

Yet, while the night is short and transient as all things are, there is still more to be said before you depart from your brother's side and begin these multitude of preparations and toil.

"An envoy from the city of Loc'ea should soon come looking for you, following a trail of hints my beggar sect has scattered for them to find" You say suddenly, sharply and seriously, breaking the silence like the crack of a whip without ever removing your eyes from the beauty of Nuceria's unclouded night sky.
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>>5449295

Turning to your brother, your hands clasped behind your back, you show him a reassuring smile, carefully crafted and styled as you notice his brow furrowing with concern and his eyes flush with wariness leading towards anger of the instinctual sort.

"They seek to be your allies, and have already freed themselves from their ruling houses" You explain happily, eyes sparkling with pride as Angron's brow softens and smooths and that wariness in his eyes become amazement and curiosity. The claim, which if spoken by any other, would be met with skepticism, doubt and outright disbelief is accepted when spoken by you, the brother who had given him the tools to make his own destiny beyond the walls he had been penned into and trapped within.

"And how did they accomplish that, or rather how could they even think to try on their own. Submissiveness is an engrained quality to the masses under the heels of the high riders, though I imagine you know that all to well, Brother." He says, almost teasingly, hoping to provoke an explanation though you know he already knows the answer, clever as he is, though it was left unspoken and only hinted upon by the fact it was you who spoke those words. Your smile becomes a coy smirk, you lift and eye brow and cover your face with your sleeve as you close your eyes somewhat smugly and turn on your heel to look away from your brother as you begin to leave him alone beneath the chill of the gentle, silver moonlight.

"It must've taken some effort to break the chains of their upbringing and programing" He remarks dryly as you drift apart from him "Hard to untrain dogs, I'd know as much at that, at least"

"I advise you accept them with open arms, like you do your pets, brother" You reply with a soft tittering giggle as you float from him, waiting for the exact moment he believes, even with his enhanced senses and natural intuition, that you have gone and the conversation has ended to take a risk and break the silence with all the force of exploding ordnance striking its target. Angron is a good man, you are not certain of all of his views, but you have gazed at his heart long enough to know that you can trust him with at least one great secret, that you can hope with reason that he shall not betray the trust that had been nurtured and grown in the short time you have shared together as a both family and comrades.

That he sees you as family, unlike your father, that he knows you and feels you to be his brother where once you were a stranger. And so, you trust him to protect the family you keep separate and secret. And you will do so with Magnus and Perturabo, if the latter proves a solid foundation upon which to extend this same trust and faith.

"Oh, before I forget" You call out from the gloom and shadows "Kanzeon is not a normal girl"
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>>5449296

Angron's sigh carries along the reawakened winds

"What now?" He says, weary but permitting, thinking you mean to shower him with more praising and loving words of your betrothed, holy unaware of that you intend to make him a confidant of utmost confidence for one of your dearest and more valuable secrets

"n fact, she's older than me" You whisper to the winds curling against your lips, knowing they'll be transported back when the breeze turns "Far older"

That silences Angron completely.

"Having survived the fall of humanity's last galactic civilization" Your words dance and frolic, twisting, bending and spiraling together through the air like mating dragons in flight

"What are you..." He asks, stunned beyond words, trying to comprehend exactly what you are saying and why you are sharing such dire truths

"And her true body is a massive colony ship made of living gold and silver" You continue gayly, your voice carried aloft as the morning sun rises and casts its light across the world, your brother once more as silent as dead stone "and she was born from a terrible process of combining countless human souls to make one powerful gestalt consciousness"

He does not reply, he does not speak, he does not move. He stands, as still as the mountains on the horizon, eyes wide and white as the golden light of dawn burns around him like a halo of fire.

"Wuh?" He gasps like a suffocating fish, rubbing one of his ears with his wrist, as if he misheard what you had said and entrusted to him.

"and our father is a similar existence!" You shout jauntily back to him "Though naturally occurring as far as I am aware"

Silence is once again your only reply

"So you should worry not of my wife's safety, brother, for constructed life such as ourselves is hardier than that which is woven by natural processes. Though I would be remiss to speak much longer of her secrets, women should keep many close to their hearts and reveal them only to those closest to them. Besides, I have already spoken far too much about her age, something one should never mention when speaking of a lady, whether they be friend, kin, or lover, let alone reveal" You laugh as Angron stands in a manner very much unlike himself, loose and totally defenseless, no longer on guard or tightly wound and ready to fight, kill and die at a moment's notice "So I leave you alone to the watchful gaze of the sun, to stand by you again when battle has begun. Though my lips shall now seal, know that Kanzeon is like us, in both origin, heart, and soul"

And with that, you leave to ready yourself and those under your command, knowing already that your brother plans to March against one of the armies of a lesser, satellite city beneath the shadow of Desh'ea, after wetting his fangs with the scarlet water of victory.
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>>5449297

And what shall you do that battle, Lieren?

>Unleash a power never before seen upon this or any world. Two primarchs, fighting side by side. The high riders won't stand a chance

>Disguise yourself as Angron, and trick the High riders into chasing the "escape slave king's pitiful forces" Into a mountain pass, where the rest of the army and Angron shall block them in from behind.

>With Feng and his Students, disrupt the enemy army by assassinating its commanding officers and leader

>The High riders know nothing of psykerism and Qi. Unleash one of your strongest techniques as the fighting begins

>Write in
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>>5449299
>>With Feng and his Students, disrupt the enemy army by assassinating its commanding officers and leader
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>>5449299
>Write in
Ask Angron what he would wish for while our heart wishes us to join him in battle this is his world, his home and as a guest we will follow the rules under his stars, we will not draw adoration to ourselves.

>Write in
Should we do battle together offer him a gift, our blade of love. For what Brother is more deserving and embodies it best. Love pulled from a dark path.

>If he doesn't want us upfront lay in ambush ready for his call to attack from the flank
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>>5449299
>Unleash a power never before seen upon this or any world. Two primarchs, fighting side by side. The high riders won't stand a chance
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>>5449299
>Disguise yourself as Angron, and trick the High riders into chasing the "escape slave king's pitiful forces" Into a mountain pass, where the rest of the army and Angron shall block them in from behind.
>With Feng and his Students, disrupt the enemy army by assassinating its commanding officers and leader
Time for Jokaero warfare
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>>5449299
>>5449301
This. Put ourselves at his disposal but otherwise keep our presence quiet. Let this be angron's victory.
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>>5449299
>Disguise yourself as Angron, and trick the High riders into chasing the "escape slave king's pitiful forces" Into a mountain pass, where the rest of the army and Angron shall block them in from behind.
>With Feng and his Students, disrupt the enemy army by assassinating its commanding officers and leader
cut them down
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>>5449299

>Disguise yourself as Angron, and trick the High riders into chasing the "escape slave king's pitiful forces" Into a mountain pass, where the rest of the army and Angron shall block them in from behind.
>With Feng and his Students, disrupt the enemy army by assassinating its commanding officers and leader
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>>5449299
>Unleash a power never before seen upon this or any world. Two primarchs, fighting side by side. The high riders won't stand a chance

>Disguise yourself as Angron, and trick the High riders into chasing the "escape slave king's pitiful forces" Into a mountain pass, where the rest of the army and Angron shall block them in from behind.
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>>5449315
I support.

Get fucked high riders.
I want to place ourselves at his disposal, but I don't feel the vote will pass.
Moreover, I think this will be framed as a suggestion that Angeron won't veto. If he does Veto it, then so be it.
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>Write in
Should we do battle together offer him a gift, our blade of love. For what Brother is more deserving and embodies it best. Love pulled from a dark path.

This seems like a good idea. It turns Khorne against Nurgle.
For what is rage if not born of love? It is a dark and empty thing. Fragile and meaningless.

We shall wuxing the natures of chaos and bring them into balance.
The gods of imbalance shall die as the universe is righted once more.

A better plan than starving them out.
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>Unleash a power never before seen upon this or any world. Two primarchs, fighting side by side. The high riders won't stand a chance
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>>5449299
>Unleash a power never before seen upon this or any world. Two primarchs, fighting side by side. The high riders won't stand a chance
I want them to see just how badly they fucked up. We can get back to the cloak and dagger stuff when our main forces get here, but for now we ride together.
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>>5449299
>>Disguise yourself as Angron, and trick the High riders into chasing the "escape slave king's pitiful forces" Into a mountain pass, where the rest of the army and Angron shall block them in from behind.
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>>5449299
>Disguise yourself as Angron, and trick the High riders into chasing the "escape slave king's pitiful forces" Into a mountain pass, where the rest of the army and Angron shall block them in from behind.
>With Feng and his Students, disrupt the enemy army by assassinating its commanding officers and leader
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>>5449299
>>Unleash a power never before seen upon this or any world. Two primarchs, fighting side by side. The high riders won't stand a chance

It might not be the strongest or most effecient option, I dunno, but how can we not fight side by side with our brother primarch when finally given a chance?
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>>5449299
Backing this write in >>5449301


Its our Boys show.
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>>5449301
>For what Brother is more deserving and embodies it best.
>He says about the sword literally made from Lieren's soul and beliefs after deleting a daemon by arguing. Who also has literally almost sacrificed his entire existence for another.
Sure he is anon. Besides he seems to have his preferred weapons on him (he dual wields).
>>5449299
>Disguise yourself as Angron, and trick the High riders into chasing the "escape slave king's pitiful forces" Into a mountain pass, where the rest of the army and Angron shall block them in from behind.
>With Feng and his Students, disrupt the enemy army by assassinating its commanding officers and leader
>Unleash a power never before seen upon this or any world. Two primarchs, fighting side by side. The high riders won't stand a chance
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>>5449649
Make another weapon! An axe of righteous anger! One that protects from mental effects so his empathy bond can't be taken advantage of.
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>>5450878
Well, fuck Mr. I can't fight for my beliefs and only uphold what I believe when convenient. I say we continue with a plan "fuck Lorgar" by doing everything better than him and driving him to Kurze levels of depression and suicide.
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Also, who do we think could beat Lieran in a fight since we still need to go "Even Further Beyond!" in our training and spar with Angron? I think it would be cool if we sparred with all of our brothers and wrote down our findings. Can you imagine how worshiped a book containing all the Primarchs's fighting styles and techniques would be?

Horus>Magnus>Lion>Sanguinis>Lieran>Vulkan>Leman>Kurze>Angron.
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>>5451156
Leiren has a knack for analyzing/copying people. Sometimes outright mantling them. If he does it to primarch, does he operate at 100% power?
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>Unleash a power never before seen upon this or any world. Two primarchs, fighting side by side. The high riders won't stand a chance

Sometimes I wonder whether I'm the only woman who reads this quest, cause I know a lot of gals into Warhammer
Mostly trannies tho
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>>5451586
Let me guess. Tyranid.
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>>5451586
>Sometimes I wonder whether I'm the only woman who reads this quest
It almost certainly assured.
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Lieren is effectively TaskMaster in terms of our ability to analyse and mimic. The longer Lieren watches you fight the more fucked you are as you are disassembled into data. In a way we're that character you need to take out early game because we scale off the charts but at first are vulnerable.
We are also totally the character whom gets a tragic but heroic death so the heroes can get shit done, that or the first killed in a murder mystery and everyone's trying to work out how it happened

...holy shit if we get killed picture the wrath of Magnus
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>>5451817
Magnus, Angron, Perturabo and maybe the Emperor(because we were essentially giving him a free pass to every goal he wanted without the massive cost.)

What are these things?
Antichaos non religious non grimdark ideology.
Stable useful psyker arts
Archeotech
Better genetech/biotech
Webway and non back stabby eldar
Warp proof AI EQUIVALENT machine intelligence / human hybrids.
And most of all... A 9000% more efficient travel method. Shangrala to terra instantly.
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>>5452009
Tis true, we are best boi
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>>5451683
Nop. I generally play the video games n such but when I do tabletop it's Orks or an Imperial force centered around my boyfriend's Sisters Of Battle. More of a lorehound than a player outside of shit like Dark Heresy anyways.
I can't really afford more armies because I'm poor, my boyfriend isn't much better off, and I don't feel like doing compromising shit for money.
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Sounds like you have a good head on your shoulders. GW is wack. Lore and RPGs are where it's at. Also, WAAAHG>>5452210
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>The Crown of Nillad

Heat filled the dark chamber, blazing and furious. There was little to no light in the foundry but for the pouring liquid metal forming into a simple ring, above upon a platform Malcador turned away clutching his twin eagle headed staff tight as he hobbled out of the smoggy depths and into the final construction room where mechanics and technicians worked upon highly intricate nodes overseen by the Emperor of Man himself.

This project was conceived by the Sigillite and had taken his friend some convincing to give the go ahead but in the end caution won out over fatherly pride. This crown; this golden band of gold and archeotech was going to be both a gift and test for the Second Primarch. Both the master of humanity and his confidant had noticed the brand upon Lieren's brow, they'd also noticed its effect upon the fabric of reality and so after many nights discussing the path forward had come up with a plan. This crown would insulate Lierens' curse but it would also dampen his Psyker gifts to an extreme degree, yet those were not necessary for his designed role; a Quartermaster. Similar to the pods the primarch had been born from it was adorned in arcane sigils, intricate texts and miniature Psionic converters which meant Panther Kings' own soul would power it even in its bewitching state.

“It is done?” Malcador asked his fellow visionary,

“It is” the Emperors' own voice was purely business, dispassionate and flat knowing he was constructing something to stripe away something his son had earned, grown himself by becoming more human? But he needed Lieren to do his part and if that were to happen the Great Enemy couldn't have a back door among their supply lines. This was a necessary sacrifice.

“Do you think he will take this request on the chin? He has shown himself to be understanding and comprehensive of the greater game at work.” the old man tried to consul his friend.

“I hope so, if we are forced to press it upon him we may well anger more than he.”

“You worry Magnus will react poorly”

“He will not be able to talk to his friend as they once did and would lose a kindred spark, though it would bring him more to my side to learn and debate. We have to be careful of my Sons, they are still just boys and bitter beginnings could make for a grimmer and darker end.”

The crown was finished and placed upon an altar, locked in a small field of Stasis till the day its bearing comes.
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I made another one! Gods I hope we get a cut away to our sons and his developing bonds and the Emps thinking "yeah i know why"

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>>5449299
>Unleash a power never before seen upon this or any world. Two primarchs, fighting side by side. The high riders won't stand a chance
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the long wait.

With Feng and his Students, disrupt the enemy army by assassinating its commanding officers and leader:7

Ask Angron what he would wish for while our heart wishes us to join him in battle this is his world, his home and as a guest we will follow the rules under his stars, we will not draw adoration to ourselves.:3
-Should we do battle together offer him a gift, our blade of love. For what Brother is more deserving and embodies it best. Love pulled from a dark path.:4
-If he doesn't want us upfront lay in ambush ready for his call to attack from the flank.:3

Unleash a power never before seen upon this or any world. Two primarchs, fighting side by side. The high riders won't stand a chance:8

Disguise yourself as Angron, and trick the High riders into chasing the "escape slave king's pitiful forces" Into a mountain pass, where the rest of the army and Angron shall block them in from behind.:8

Total votes: 19

So Lieren, ever wily, will disguise himself as his brother, and lead the high riders into an ambush.
And then unleash a power unlike any before witnessed upon any world, two primarchs figthing side by side.

Writing now

>>5450878
Great stuff, enjoy the horror vibe it has.

>>5452738
Really liked this, good stuff.
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"There is no reason to fight fairly or honorably against the armies of tyrants" You state plainly, as you draw lines in the sand, altering and marring the battleplans drawn by Angron and his council of generals. They watch carefully, as you elegantly trace the trace the stick across the location chosen by them, a flat plain just below a cleft in the canyon, the only pass through the range for many miles. Pausing, you tap the small twig against your chin, analyzing the rough details of the landscape that the scout force lead by Feng and your beggars were able to map out with what little time they had before the advance of the high rider's forces forced them to retreat. The chosen medium, every shifting sand, certainly did not improve the level of the detail upon the map, nor did the constant drawing and redrawing of battle lines and troop formations. But you remembered how it had been when it had first been drawn in the sand and even if you had somehow forgotten, you would recall Feng's own detailing of the surrounding area. While the plain's were flat, they were not perfectly so. There were hills, crevices and burrows cut through them and along the mountainside, their were caverns, tunnels and cliffs. All of which would serve well to conceal the true size of your brother's army and even hide them away entirely. The landscape seemed to have been drawn from an ambusher's dream or a tacticians nightmare.

"Though such concepts have little place upon any battlefield, at least in my belief" You muse, frowning as you wipe away the battlelines drawn in front of the mountain pass, undoing the work of Oenomaus and several of the veteran gladiators, both those who were sworn brothers to Angron and those whom you had saved from Loc'ea's fighting pits. A few faces grimaced, a few twisted with irritation, but no voice was raised against you in outrage or anger as you continued drawing your own strategy into the sands beneath the shadows of over a dozen men.

"Brother Angron, The high riders have yet to accurately measure either the quantity or quality of the force you command" You explain, as you replace the battlelines in the many hidden, secret places beneath the mountain's shadow and the boundary where its roots meet the open plains "They only intel they have gathered consists of wild rumor and accounts obscured by panic and fear. Doubtlessly, they shall discount the truth of the matter, believing instead the lie in their arrogance, refusing to believe former slaves to be their equal in experience and tactical acumen. They will expect to meet a ragged, exhausted, half starved force of wild men and savages, scared and confused. They expect mountain bandits, fighting dogs turned feral. The fools forget that you have studied and learned from their greatest masters of war, living and dead, and have indeed surpassed them when allowed to unfurl your wings freely"
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>>5452738
Leiren be like. K thanks. This is a good start. I have a couple of ideas to improve it though.

>upgrades it completely cut off things from the warp. Becoming invisible to foresight and prophesy.
>Turns it into psyker shackles for his enemies.
>Magnus uses a copy of the original it as sensory deprivation training. Thus refining what little psyker powers it allows him. Boosting his already prodigious might to unheard levels. Because of his Increased control
>Emperor is left scratching his head because things aren't going how he envisioned them to.
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"You suggest an Ambush?" Oenomaus asks gruffly, arms crossed "That will only give us a brief, initial advantage. Have you forgotten? Our world isn't blinded by fog like your own. Such tactics simply cannot be carried out, no matter how skillfully they are performed"

"One does not need fog to sneak up upon a cliffjumper" You say with subtly proud smirk "We would not strike them openly, exposing ourselves carelessly and wasting the windfall of a surprise assault. They shall be lead into a cage of their own creation, surrounded and ground to red dust, unable to escape, unable to retreat. I advise, not a simple ambush, but a deceit of greater complexity"

With a flick of your wrist, you further explain your strategy without speaking a word, drawing a line from the rough squares and crosses representing the high rider forces into the mountain pass.

"Even the most pampered of high riders is not that stupid" Angron's father sighs, rolling his eyes before wincing as he felt that the air of smugness you were giving off and the assured smile you were had not vanished

"Of course not, I can count on one hand the number of generals I have met who would be foolish enough to walk so readily into their grave" You chuckle as Angron smiles with dark satisfaction as he realizes what you're planning and highly approves "They died early and easily. However, even a wise and cunning leader can fall into the simplest of traps if they suffer from particular flaws of character. Ambition, Greed, or Pride, even one is enough to render a man blind to the noose tightening around his own neck, and the hands that have tied it"

"I see, you plan to bait them into the mountain pass with a prize so great it cannot be resisted. Even a great house would fall for this scheme, but one of the lesser, poorer ones? The chance to outdo their overlords would be irresistible. The call of glory and prestige is one few men can resist. I'm fortunate I have your cunning on my side, Brother" Angron bellows, smacking you hard on your back "Seems your mistborn wiles have a place in the open air after all"

"We'd have to convince the men to allow Angron to risk himself so openly. They idolize him, and only fight because he leads. If he is wounded, their resolve might waver, and with it their faith" Oenomaus says sternly with a nod, trying to hide his own concern for his son's well being with the detached mask of a general "It'd be risky, and there is always the chance this whelp has more brains than the rest of the pack"

"Who said Angron would be the bait? You have his brother standing right in front of you!" You proclaim, altering the battleplan rapidly, sketching a panther's head in the mouth of the mountain pass and a wall of broken chains along the wall of the range "I shall disguise myself, and stand at the head of the ragged host they expect. While the real Angron and the full force of our army waits in await along the mountain's edge, unseen and unheard until the signal is given"
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>>5452924

Then, placing your hands down in the sands, your dramatically push them forward, and close off the mountain pass.

"They will seal the entrance, trapping the high riders and blocking any chance of escape" You snarl predatorily revealing your teeth with a feral grin and narrowing your eyes like a panther "Then, they shall be stuck and surrounded on both sides. Such a disadvantageous position cannot be defended, and they shall fall like autumn leaves"

"Even if you looked nothing like the undefeated, grandfather, your illusions could make you seem as twins" One of your gladiators states, even though it was obvious "But, as you two share a family resemblance, all you would need to do is wear his armor"

"So that's your scheme? Lure them in with a prize that would not only benefit their family and self, but also humiliate and shame the most powerful house on Nuceria" Oenomaus says admiringly, as he looks over the ruined map with crossed arms "How devious. And since you've volunteered to take the dangerous job yourself, none in the army will complain or falter"

"And the high riders shall know that we are not dogs to be put down" Angron declares, anger boiling in his hard eyes "But a force to be reckoned with and feared. And those still enslaved will see that there is hope for a life without collars and chains! They shall burn themselves upon the fury of those they have tried and failed to break"

"So it is decided" You say with a humble bowing of your head "I shall become your mirror, and lead our enemies into your open palm. So they may be crushed swiftly and without remorse"

"Only because I trust you to be able to carry out this ruse" Angron says, his mask of rage cracking to reveal a brotherly smile "With us together, fighting side by side, victory is assured. All of Nuceria will know the high riders can be beaten, and by a man they called slave"

"Hand in hand, we shall lift they veil of oppression the high riders cast over the eyes of the people and show them the light of hope and prosperity, that they can live and flourish outside of their wicked and unjust rule" You say solemnly, lifting your head as, almost ritualistically, the gathered officers kick what remains of the map away, having already memorized and etched the plan deeply into their minds. And with that, the council departs and you prepare those selected to make up your false army, the pitiful band of tired slaves and wild eyed gladiators the High Rider's expect to meet.

They, like yourself, will need to disguise themselves and dress in the clothes of deceit. Washing themselves with dirt and sand, tearing their clothes and damaging their armor cosmetically without compromising its efficiency or strength. They will hide the weapons they have stolen from the high riders, holding simple spears, clubs and shaped rocks and slings and throw their hair up and loose.
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>>5452927

As you shall dress yourself in shifting shadows and gladiator armor, they shall throw over themselves the appearance of raggedness and barbarity.

And so, the image the high riders have of their so called "lessers", shall be shown to them. The flames of their pride shall be fanned, and they will rush forward without thinking to capture the most valuable slave to ever escape from the foul clutches. And shall instead find themselves in the middle of his palm. Yes, you and your brother will teach them that Angron Thal'kyr is no slave, that his name is one to be respected and dreaded.
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It was a miserable day. The air was thickly wet and dense, but also hot, despite their proximity to the ice capped mountains. It felt like the whole world was thrown into a boiling pot. The sun beat down and burned all who had the misfortune to walk beneath it. Markos Des'bet was exhausted, and he knew all of the soldiers he had drafted to supplement his house's army of trained eunuchs and lobotomized thralls was just as weary. With a thought, he command his taskmasters to activate the encouragement wires forcefully implanted in the base of their spines, to rouse them with pain, before their obedience circuits were charged, preventing any ideas of discontent or rebelliousness from taking root. An animal in pain fought harder than one without. Snorting, wiping sweat from his brow and hanging jowls, Markos observed his army, smiling as he saw the Ogryns he had purchased recently stumbling along in magnetic collars and floating collars, controlled by his younger brother while his sister, with shock whip and controller, kept in line their private stock of nailed fighters, howling and drooling spittle flecked with blood.

He sighed, the heat washing over him, banishing any pleasant thought from his mind as he tried to reflect and languish mentally on his good fortune. Word had gotten out that the high and mighty Thal'kr had lost their prized gladiator, and the city of Desh'ea had lost most of its indentured and enslaved population. The capital city had also apparenlty been set on fire and torn apart. The powerful Thal'kr had been exposed for their true weakness, and all of those house forced for generations to prostrate and scrabble for influence, wealth and power beneath their feet, including the honorable house Des'bet, were gnawing at their bridles to take advantage of this newly revealed weakness and take as much as they could from Thal'kr.

Glory to the man who captured the "Slave king", it had been shouted across Nuceria. Glory and fame eternal to the man to upstage the Thal'kr, it had been whispered amongst the high riders. And Amongst his own house, it had been conspiratly decided, that it would be the Desh'ea, who supplant the wavering masters whom they had been made to serve and prop up for centuries. They had become complacent and worthless as rulers, if they had let a slave burn the jewel of the Desh'elika and escape into the wilderness.
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>>5452930

Markos groaned, wondering how it could be so hot when he could see snow and ice on the horizon, and forced his mechanical steed forward with a press of his foot, the stench of burning ozone filling his lungs as he lead his army forward, towards those hopefully colder mountains, where it had been rumored The Unbeaten had been spotted. Markos was grateful the pup had moved north, he had never liked the heat further down the Desh'elika and preferred the colder climate of his home. He had traveled in search of any sign of the Thal'kr's mistake, and had been trying to guide the lost lambs to his preferred climate, knowing slaves ran and hid whenever they caught even so much as a whiff of a real soldier's passing. They knew their masters, and were predictable. Like sheep, they'd run and pen themselves in for easy capture. That the giant of Desh'ea led them, meant nothing. He was a slave, and so had slave instincts. He'd flee as soon as he saw he was outmatched.

A simple duty, that had somehow been failed by his old masters. Markos dreamt of the glory and prestige to come, as his treaded engine cut its way through the landscape, spitting up red sparks and smoke the color of pitch. A robotic bird landed upon his soldier, speaking in the voice of one of his augmented servants, who had been using their telescopic retinal to observe the horizon ahead and study the landscape for miles for any sign of the so called king of slaves.

The hawk brought good news. Small camps had been spotted ahead, with burning fires, and a familiar, towering figure had been briefly spotted amongst them still dressed in the rags and armor given to him in the Arena, strutting about like a king in his court. An excited grin stretched across Markos' face, and to celebrate, he brought an inhaler filled with his favorite aerosolized narcotic vapor to his nose, and breathed deep. Transmitting his thoughts to his brothers and officers, all of them joined him in his silent exultation. Some shocked their slaves, others took a swig of their hot wine, and others yet joined him in his particular vice.

Rabid and wild with glee, Markos road forth, his personal chariot spitting flame and fury as it sped across the plain, followed by his officers and siblings, and by the horde they commanded. A cloud of dust clouted out the sun, as he clenched his teeth and howled with laughter of drug and ambition fueled mania. In what felt like moments, Markos spotted the hovels the slaves had made for themselves, and saw them scatter even as the tallest among them, which must be the Lord of the Red Sands stood stalwart and unafraid before the legion that had come down upon them. But, as they came closer and could be seen as much as they were heard, even the giant amongst men fled and abandoned his pitiful "kingdom" of filth and tattered hides, running from them! Running from Markos
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>>5452932

Now more high on his ego than any stimulant, Markos whipped his army into a fervor with chemical and cybernetic encouragment. A Chorus of pain and rage filled the sky, as the high riders closed in on their prey, chasing them into a little gorge cut into the Desh'elika mountains! The exact kind of places Markos had spent his youth wandering and hunting.

Another blast of drugged vapor, and he began slavering, frothing at the mouth like a rabid dog as he closed in on his prize. Just as he knew they would, the slaves backed themselves into a corner. It was almost like their instincts drove them to unconsciously sabotage themselves, like they were drawn back to their imprisonment! And why wouldn't they? They were starved and miserable! Surely even the lord of red sands would realize his place, after failing so greatly to live on his own, without the guiding hand of his masters
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"I can't believe they fell so readily for my trap" You laugh, as you sit atop a rock, watching the high riders charge into the canyon pass beneath a cloud of pollutant filled smog and dust, their rumbling war machines shaking the ground as a keening cry of pain and torment pierced the air, overpowering even the struggling bellowing of the engines and power blocks of the vehicles they road atop "I suspected they'd be blinded by their own ambition, but to so blindly throw themselves forward without any hesitation, without studying their surroundings, proves them only to be the highest and greatest of fools!"

"They're dumber than cliffjumpers" Feng laughed as the men who Angron had given you to command readied themselves, dropping the primitive weapons they had held, to replace them with the proper weaponry they had taken from their former masters and oppressors "blinder than moles, more proud than a dragon. What a lethal combination of traits to have. I'd feel bad for them, if they weren't filth"

"You know, Lieren, I can see why your brother gave you such an important role this battle. You're one crafty son of a bitch" One of Angron's brother remarks, chewing on a sharpened twig as he knelt on one knee, with a rifle on his shoulder and one eye closed tightly "Never thought the masters were this stupid!"

"Guess once you have no reason to fear them, their failings become more apparent? Say, think I can take the head of one of the lords riding in the front?" Another asked happily, eyes burning with a hatred soon to be satiated.

"Don't need to understand them to know they're insulting the fools riding towards us" Feng laughed "So, great hunter, what's the plan? Are we going to sit like fat toads, waiting for your brother to slam into their exposed rear? Draw them deeper in, making them thin their lines, or are we going to bare our fangs and go for their throat"
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>>5452934

"What's the star man saying? Sounds like he's got a plan of his own"
"I say let the head hunter loose, the mad man took down a high rider in the midst of his own body guards"
"From what I've heard from Lieren, he took down several without even being noticed, before they found eachother again"
"Shouldn't we wait until they close, might ruin the surprise if they realize we can fight back"
"High riders are as dumb as goats in heat, they wouldn't realize they were had even if they were bleeding on the ground"
"Don't underestimate the masters, they can be as cunning as they are cruel."
"He's right, we fooled them once, don't need to risk them seeing our trick, right before the trap is spun"
"What are they gonna do if we charge them? Run right into Angron's arms? They're dead men walking"
"Yeah! We should just rush them down, push them and break them against the wall"
"Goddamn that is a lot of men, feels like they brought a whole stadium's crowd to bear down on us"

What do you do, now that the high riders have fallen for your trap, Lieren?

>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge

>Use your pyskerist technique and mastery to your advantage, and cause a rock slide to fall atop the high riders the moment Angron traps them in the pass

>Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.

>Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side.

>Write in
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>Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side

Did angron use the sword of love?
Good match.
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>>5452936
>>Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side.
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>>5452936
>Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.
New ability get
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>>5452936
>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
>Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.
>Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side.
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>>5452936
>Lead them further in, signal angeron
>Pick up the axes lent to you and use the Mien of the companion loyal and true

No reason to get complacent. Make sure they are trapped before we begin tearing them apart.
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>>5452942
Oh, and this too
>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
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>>5452936
>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
>Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side.
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>>5452936
>>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
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>>5452936
>>Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side.
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>>5452936

>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
>Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.
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>>5452936
>>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
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>>5452936
>>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a countercharge
>Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.
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>>5452936
>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
>Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.
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>>5452936
>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge

>Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.
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>>5452936
>Write in: Orders for Feng
Feng: He's a marksman chief of all I think we tell him to find a high and hidden position and should target the enemies communication and recon people/units. This will stop them being able to call for a halt if they realise it is a trap but also stops them being able to call for help once it is sprung! Added bonus of by removing their detectors so to speak Feng can eliminate his targets more effectively.

>Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side.
If we are lucky we could implant some Vishnu ideals and cultural bits here, sowing seeds of their ways upon another world...we can't let them die out utterly :(

>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
Note: As we fall back we need to keep the enemy enraged so they don't think to hard upon this trap, throw some insults or something to keep the attention upon ourselves.
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>>5452936
>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
>Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.
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>>5452936
>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
>Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side.
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>>5453233
>>5452936
Support. Sniper bro can cause a blackout
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>>5452936
>Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.
>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
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>>5452936
>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge

>Use your pyskerist technique and mastery to your advantage, and cause a rock slide to fall atop the high riders the moment Angron traps them in the pass
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>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
>Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side.
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>>5452936
>>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
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>>5452936
>Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.
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>>5452936
>continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge
>Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side.
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It's a touch late but I commissioned this! 2 years of Mist swept, golden eyed adventures!

Thanks for it all Malal! Here's to many more!
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>>5455478
Nice.
The gundao having the bull to representing how we made it in Chen's memory is absolutely kino, but the lotus on the Jouney being a normal artistic rendition instead of the eight pointed one loses point though. Got to style on chaos by turning their eight folded path inwards.
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>>5455483
Although one could argue that it's the eight pointed lotus, just being seen sideways instead.
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>>5455478
>2 years
Bull fucking shit. It has not been that long.
I refuse.
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>>5455494
You're right, It's only been 1 year 11 months and 26 days.
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>>5455478
Rather based of you, anon
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>>5455478
Looks cool as hell wish he had the sword of life instead of his gundao
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>>5455511
The sword is sick, but be honest, swords are a little overrepresented in fantasy art.
The Chendao seems like a much more personal item to Lieren anyways.
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I'd love for Lieren to make a Celestial Armoury, just a collection of cleansed weapons sat adrift in our golden sea. In times of fire need sometimes a Son managing to suddenly draw one
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>>5455613
Now THAT is an idea my friend. The Golden Sea's very own Drifting Panoply.
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>>5455478
Yo that's cool as fuck, how drew it and how much did it cost you? And do you think they would be willing to work for exposure on a Hungarian whittling forum?
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>>5455938
A guy I found on the commission discord from /ACO/ if I'm honest, $200, nah they a pro whom do t do nuffin for free especially on this Taiwanese strawroof making forum. I recommend people checking the server out there are none lewd artists there whom do solid work
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>>5455938
free lol
one can only do it if he think the quest deserve it. And likely not forever. And there isn't much exposure here, most of the time people say "cool" once you post an image and that's it lol
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the wait.

Pick up the axes your brother had lent you, and use the "Mien of the companion loyal and true" and channel Aruna as you unleash the "Cloak of the ever burning will" and try to cut your way through the high riders to meet Angron on the other side:11

Try out a new technique you had been practicing with, and bring the mists and fog of shangrala over the eyes of the high riders.: 9

continue the chase further into the mountain pass, giving the signal to Angron once you're sure they've entered it completely. Then turn around and lead a counter charge:19
-Hurl insults to keep their attention solely on yourself: 2

Order Feng to get into a sniping position: 2

Use your pyskerist technique and mastery to your advantage, and cause a rock slide to fall atop the high riders the moment Angron traps them in the pass: 1

Total votes: 23

So Lieren will pick up the axes his brother lent to him, and continue the chase further into pass, giving his brother the signal to attack once the whole army has entered the mountain pass

then turn around, channel the Mien of the companion loyal and true aligned to chief Aruna, along with the cloak of the ever burning will, and counter charge and attempt to cut through the highriders to reach Angron on the other side of the army

Writing now

>>5455478
Holy shit that is incredible. love the lotus details on the left pauldron, the belt buckle, the scale details on the legs, arm and loincloth, and I especially like the silver moonlight shrouded journey and golden flame enshrouded Chen Dao and of course the Fog panther pelt.

Love the imposing stance Lieren has, and the silent fury in his gold burning eyes.

>>5455979
Damn! well I'd say it was well worth the price. Thanks a ton for commissioning.

>>5455613
This makes me imagine someone like Luli managing to summon the sword of love in the face of demonic threat. Which amuses me greatly

Or like, some traitor astarte tries to kill an ancient Yin Lei for bragging rights, and out of nowhere a Guandao falls out of the air ontop of their helmetless head
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Without saying a word, you slide down the face of the stone you were sitting atop. Landing without a sand, in one fluid motion as you stand to your full, imposing height, you lower down your arms to lift up the set of twin axes your brother had loaned to you to further sell the illusion that you were the lord of the read sands. Pulling them from where you had stuck them into the hard, rocky ground of the mountain pass, you look over the horde of techno barbaric despots and their unfortunate army of chattel and chem thralls, a painful reminded of the high riders abuse of the technology of their forefathers and their cruelty to their fellow men. The Butcher King would have found himself in the good company of kindred spirits here, though villains and tyrants rarely consider their peers anything more than competition, whether they serve or are served by their fellow blackguards.

Sighing, you turn around, acting with a sense of false urgency and begin to feign a retreat further into the pass. Without having to speak a word, the soldiers assigned to your command and Feng and his students from this world, follow your lead, some even joining you in the performances you're putting on to encourage and incense the high riders to act with further recklessness and follow you deeper and deeper into their open grave. So while your host appears to be panicked and stumbling over each other, struggling to keep hold of their weapons, in truth they are diligently performing their roles in this deception you have writ. The Maneuver, while simple, is relatively difficult to pull off as it is hard to fake true panic or terror and uncoordinated stumbling and running is hard to coordinate en masse. But the men under your command perform it marvelously, acting so well you wonder if they could have a future in theater should they survive the war against the high riders.

The high riders take the bait with gusto, surging forward with even greater fervor and vitality than before, pressing and squeezing their host forward into the canyon, as the heads of the army lead the charge on their crude mechanical steeds. Soon, the whole of their army shall be stuck inside the mountain pass and at your signal, Angron and his army shall slam into their rear as you lead a counter charge against the leader of this wretched force with the breakneck rapidity of a raging storm. Surely, no matter how many monstrosities and indentured warriors they command, and no matter the augmented strength they posses or the deadly technology they wield, the high riders shall be shattered and ground to dust beneath the combined might of true brother primarchs. They will be crushed between Angron and your own hands, never realizing they had so carelessly leaped into their palms until it was too late for them to right their mortal mistake of underestimating their enemies. Their foolish pride shall be their undoing, how fitting.
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>>5456320
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Spittle frothed and flew from Markos Des'bet's cackling mouth, his jaw hanging open as rushing air shrieked in his ears and threatened to tear the nasal tubes that provided him with his beloved elixir from his nostrils as he pressed his heel as hard as he could against the pedal of his chariot, urging it to burn its fuel and quicken its internal mechanisms to propel him faster and faster, headlong towards the retreating giant. Black clouds of miasmic smoke and crud spat from the darkened gold pipes rising from its front and back, blotting out from sight his siblings and trusted underlings, who were right at his back, forcing their own machines to their limits just to try and keep up with him, so they may greedily lap upon the glory that spilt from his cup the moment he took his prize! This day would be one that would last forever in memory, embrazoning his name in the pages of history. When Markos the slave taker began his acension to power and glory. When the weakening Thal'kr's downfall began at the hands of the ascendant Des'bet.

So deeply he had fallen into his fantasies, that Markos could barely see the world except for the mountain child. He was vaguely aware of the escaped slaves who ran before the brute, but they were little more than shadows cast by ghosts to his eyes. His thrill to, had made him ignorant of the flying stones and splintered shale thrown up by his burning chariots charge down the mountain pass, and the chocking fumes he surrounded himself with. He hadn't even noticed that his supply of narcotics had run thin and then empty, so focused and enamored he was with Catching up to the lord of the red sands, and taking Angron Thal'kyr as his property to rub his triumph in the once proud and arrogant faces of the Thal'kr!

Despite the sheer winds whipped up by the speed of his approach, his eyes remind wide and staring, even as his tongue dried on the air and drops of drool flew past his lips as he pressed his heel down, further and further. In his hand was a trident with three barbs that when broken, would freeze a patch of space and suspend all within it, stilling them and preserving them like a statue until they were brought to the proper altar of arcane and ancient technologies.

Oh he'd parade the Unbeaten for sometime in that state, then implant the rowdy slave rebellious brain with cybernetics to dull his wild temper without rendering him docile. The Iron Nails might make him a more ferocious dog, but Markos knew those devices to be lethal not only to their victim but their owner as well. It'd be a waste to ruin a specimen like Angron with those cursed nails. Lesser slaves only increased in value when nailed, but a prize like the lord of the red sands? It'd be simply wasteful to expend such a fine fighter, limiting their life to bless them with a rabid, all consuming rage.

Markos blinked, as the world briefly filled with bright red light.
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>>5456322

Something bright and burning drew him out from his mind where he had been busy planning a future that had not yet been made certain. A crimson star had rocketed into the air, as Angron held a strange pillar that seemed wrapped in some kind of papyrus or thin sheep's skin, but bright colored as if dyed. A stench filled the air, acrid and sulfurous, and his eyes watered as a grey cloud of burning smoke expanded from the giant's clenched fist as the burning red star whistled as it flew, spitting out sparks as it left behind a comets trail of billowing, burning clouds.

Instinctively, Markos slammed his other foot down on the breaks, nearly throwing himself from his chariot's throne, feeling the wires connecting his lower back and legs to its metal frame tearing in the ports in his flesh and bones, trying to tear themselves free from the whiplash of his sudden stop.

His eyes followed the small star, its whistle growing fainter and fainter until. With a sound like fun fire, it exploded into a swarm of amber and gold sparks. Shaking his head, he forced his eyes down from the now vividly colored and glowing sky, to resume his pursuit of the giant.

And to his further confusion, saw that Angron Thal'kyr, the lord of the red sands, had some how caught fire! Was he trying to kill himself with that strange tube the star had flew out of. Markos panicked, and so didn't notice the queer golden tint of the flames that cloaked "Angron" and ran down his shoulders, flowing and dancing like streamers in the wind, even though there was not so much as a stifiled breeze in the heart of the mountain pass.

He did, notice, however, when the burning titan roared, and raised up his dual axes and charged towards him as he rushed to capture him before he was reduced to ash. The sudden aggression drew Markos from his panicked state of mind, long enough for him to see the flames upon Angron's face shift and turn white, forming into the front half of a skull as the still golden flames darkened in places and became striped, shifting to assume the shape of strange armor and stranger furs upon his hulking frame. His heart leapt, as two balls, the color of freshly spilt blood, burned in the socket's of the white flame skull.

He thought, in the moment before "Angron" closed the distance between them, for a moment, that he heard a warcry in an unfamiliar tongue, guttural and snarling, yet faint and raspy like the whispers of death itself.

This thought was interrupted by a near molten axe blade impacting in the exact center of his skull, held by an ethereal hand of gilded fire, held in the air by telekinetic force after Lieren tossed his axe forward before leaping into the air to avoid colliding with the now dead Markos' chariot.

The ambitious son of Des'bet, died without realizing what had killed him or the true scope of his folly in deciding to chase giants.
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>>5456323

His flesh melted before it charred, and so to did his bones. What remained crumbled into ember and ash, as Lieren pulled what remained of the burning axe free and landed atop the back of the chairot, facing down the other high riders who had followed Markos into battle, and unknowingly into death

Beneath white and gold flames, a fang like grin filled with malice and hatred beyond reckoning spread on the Giant of Shangrala's face.
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With a kick, you threw up the three pronged spear into the air, and caught it in your hand, holding it next to the ruined axe, which had been unable to withstand the intensity of the fires of your will.

The strange vehicle the high rider had road, listed to the side lazily, losing momentum and speed as the black cloud of filth dissipated on the winds whipped up by your sudden burst of moment.

Before you, stood a pack of baffled tyrants, staring with drug addled eyes as they witnessed their leader vanish in a burst of radiant light to be replaced near instantly by a colossus cast in an inferno of shimmering flames. With a glance, you studied the weapon in your hand, and saw beneath its metal that it contained three stasis fields held contained within vessels of a fragile, glass like material that was made of crystalized energy. A curious device and one clearly created for kidnapping men, women and children intact and unharmed, to serve and be sold as slaves.

"How despicable" You hissed in your native tongue, as you felt Aruna's strength surge through the muscles of your arms, complimenting and adding to your naturally massive reserves of power "Truly a tyrants tool. To hold it in my hand is to soil it with the taint of its purpose, I can feel in its wiring, the foul will of its inventor and the cruelty of its wielders. This is a cursed thing, an evil thing, a wicked thing. Worthy of destruction alone. Just like its owner"

And so, you leap from the carriage as it swerved to the side and impacted and crumbled upon the mountain walls. Airborn, you dismissively discarded the contemptible tool over your shoulder. Forming the molten metal of the ruined axe around its surviving twin, you formed a protective barrier of liquid metal around it, and took the short hafted axe in both your hands as you began to plummet back to the earth.

The impact of your decent, formed a hole in the ground and lifted up slabs of rock. The fall of your axe's head, however, split the second foremost high rider in two, along with the queer contraption they road atop. The others, realizing they were facing an actual threat, struggled with their machines to stop from slamming into the barricade of stone you had erected and lifted up with your fall to the earth

And this gave you an opportunity, as they struggled with their mechanized mounts to avoid being pulverized against stones, their was a lull and halting of their charge.
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>>5456324

Allowing you to with a bellowed cry to charge, to call the soldiers under your command forward and swarm the high riders in their stalled vehicles.

Then, bowing your head and lowering yourself to the ground, you charged forward, still connected to Aruna's noble spirit as you moved like a panther born of flame and death. From the edge of the axe in your hands, crescent blades of molten steel and enchanted fire erupted forth, carving through stone and tyrant alike as you made your way to meet your brother in the middle of this heinous host. Already some of the smarter High riders commanding it were retreating back, trying to use their soldiers as living shields, while their duller counterparts were dragged to the ground and stabbed to death, or cut down or incinerated the moment they stepped before you brazenly, thinking they could challenge a hunter of wicked spirits as ill prepared as they were to face your brother.

However, their quick deaths gave time for their smarter brethren to gather and plan, and bring to bare the dangerous relics they wielded without caution or wisdom, forming barricades of lobotomized cyber slaves behind the first charges of men turned rabid by the horrible technologies implanted within their scalps, as they readied and prepared these ancients tools of destruction and death.

Things that could make even a primarch bleed. How troublesome.

How do you try to overcome this latest obstacle, Lieren?

>Clench your hand, turning the remaining axe in your hand into molten metal like its twin, compress it into a ball with spirit's touch, then throw it at the emplacements before releasing your grip on it, creating an explosion of heat and liquid metal.

>Grab one of the slabs of stone you forced from the ground, and use it as a shield, while directing Feng to snipe the high rider's who actually know how to use the weapons

>Perform the carp's dance, and close the distance between you and them and continue cutting your path through the high riders without pausing.

>Stop channeling Aruna's mien, and instead turn your cloak of flames into Cloak of the ever burning will: Spirit Subjugating Blade", and swing your axe, slamming a razor edged pillar of radiant soulfire upon them

>Write in
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>>5456325
>Grab one of the slabs of stone you forced from the ground, and use it as a shield, while directing Feng to snipe the high rider's who actually know how to use the weapons
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>>5456325
>>Grab one of the slabs of stone you forced from the ground, and use it as a shield, while directing Feng to snipe the high rider's who actually know how to use the weapons
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>>5456325
>>Grab one of the slabs of stone you forced from the ground, and use it as a shield, while directing Feng to snipe the high rider's who actually know how to use the weapons
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>>5456325
>Grab one of the slabs of stone you forced from the ground, and use it as a shield, while directing Feng to snipe the high rider's who actually know how to use the weapons
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>>5456325
>>Stop channeling Aruna's mien, and instead turn your cloak of flames into Cloak of the ever burning will: Spirit Subjugating Blade", and swing your axe, slamming a razor edged pillar of radiant soulfire upon th
death to the tyrants
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>>5456325
>>Perform the carp's dance, and close the distance between you and them and continue cutting your path through the high riders without pausing.
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>>5456325
>Perform the carp's dance, and close the distance between you and them and continue cutting your path through the high riders without pausing.
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>>5456325
>>Perform the carp's dance, and close the distance between you and them and continue cutting your path through the high riders without pausing.
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So what do you guys think an Evil Lieren would look like? We never really discussed that before. I know there's fanart of the Emperor turned to Chaos and we have an idea from alternative Heresies but Im curious so here's a little.

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[Unknown Observer/psyker]

"There he stood. The primarch of the Second Legion that was once known as Lieren of Nothing. One of the few primarchs the Emperor viewed as anything more than a tool to be discarded. It was once whispered that his name was put forth for consideration for the title of Warmaster. A name said in the same reverence as Sanginious and Horus. There he stood or should I say where the being that was once Lieren stood. The being resembled a walking monarch that had been stripped of all luxury, flesh, and ostentation. The being bore more in common with the ancient icons of the tomb kings of Urartu. I should know I was there. I raided those tombs on the orders of my Lord.I fought at Mount Ararat. The being was composed of nothing but bones appearing to be made of the whitest and darkest of jade. Its skull if could be called such bore nothing but a peaceful expression as though everything before it was a book it had already read. It had no teeth, lips, or tongue yet it smiled a relaxed smirk the kind a scholar bore when solving a mathematical proof. Its eyes however were the worst. One made of the coldest of ice and the other the hottest flame. Upon its back was a shredded gold cloth bearing the Legion's herlaldy of a lotus only it had blossomed to contain a cold burning sun. Wherever the being walked reality broke down and recontructed. All nature became technological circuitry all metals became golden plantlife that should not have lived but did. I did not lie when I said the eyes were the worst for all falsehoods broke down in its presence. Every lie I ever said or believed fractured and only blinding painful unavoidable truth remained. Upon Its brow existed a third eye similar to the now defunct navigator houses only this eye did not pierce the viel it evaptored it. In it I saw the death of every man I killed, every dream I've never had, I saw my families souls being reincarnated and devoured, I saw countless beings and creatures I have never met, but worst of all I saw truths I was not meant to see. I now spread his word. The teachings of Lieren. But I am no slave. I wage a war against all falsehood and am his son despite not bearing his blood. My name was taken from me when I was four years old. My title was Ra Endymion and I am a tool no longer. I am a man."
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>>5456325
>Grab one of the slabs of stone you forced from the ground, and use it as a shield, while directing Feng to snipe the high rider's who actually know how to use the weapons
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I don't think we should have broken the spear. It sounded like it was useful. Especially when subduing rouge primarch... Or making non lethal riot deterrents. Or kidnapping a necron kidnapper.

Basically it sounded like fun. A lot of fun.


That stasis tech sounds like it has potentialto stop titan scale weapon attacks and redirect it.

Gentlemen. We must make a gourd shaped storage item for this purpose. A place to store our stuff and defense to lol nope biggaton energy blasts.

It's not like we haven't purified a Great Unclean one. A non daemon weapon sounds like a breeze.

>Grab one of the slabs of stone you forced from the ground, and use it as a shield, while directing Feng to snipe the high rider's who actually know how to use the weapons
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>>5456325
>Perform the carp's dance, and close the distance between you and them and continue cutting your path through the high riders without pausing.

Keep the mien, let us become a whirlwind of death, a brutal onslaught that uses its enemies' momentum and slices them gently with our brutal weapon
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>>5456947
Dont think we actually broke the spear, we just tossed it behind us.
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>>5456325
>Perform the carps dance
>Tell Feng to start sniping.
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"Ahh, may Chaos take the world. MAY CHAOS TAKE THE WORLD!"
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Cygarus of the Pale Nomads watched a dozen marines from a distance, atop his perch in the ruins of an ancient Comms tower. His scoped rifle held close and Auspex allowing him to quietly listen in and watch the gathering of cousins at the behest of the Legion Master whom it seems had received a sealed scroll in the night. Gather information, observe and report; a simple task but to act in this manner to his fellow Astartes? It felt foreboding.

War Hounds, Chimera, Thousand Sons...even the Corpse Grinders? It was something strange the Legions being so different yet often they met, were friendly and spoke? There was more brotherhood between them than even some legions internally?

They spoke of past battles, they spoke of aspirations but then they spoke something new; The Journey. The Chimeras among them brought out tomes and together they all read. They debated, argued, laughed...drank? It was almost like watching oversized baselines on leave.

Cygarus observed them over and over up to a dozen encounters, he'd picked up a lot of this Journey's teachings by now and having had so long to contemplate them he saw value in a lot of it, yet was this wrong? It was not the Imperial Truth his Lord Grand Father the Emperor himself had penned. Was this something to report? No... no this Journey was good and frankly it almost made him feel a little at ease? Strange...

Eventually however he turned over his recordings and filed his closing report; shortly after he was called to the Inner Palace...He wondered why?
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A Ravenguard does what they do best, nothing dramatic per say.
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>>5458310
Nice. I kind of like how the 2nd legion is the Chimera and the 20th legion is the hydra. We should also post heresy take in whatever Astartes choose to leave their legion. I especially hope we get some traitor word bearers, night lords, or ultramarines. No reason why that honourless bastard Guilimen should get to have a legion and we dont.
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>>5458411
Why would Guilliman turn traitor?
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We dont know how this heresy will play out and Guilliman is a self righteous, hypercritical, jealous prick, and I like the idea him and Lieren having a rivalry over who can better handle logistics and administrating. Also, fractions of loyalist legions turned traitor and fractions of traitor legions stayed loyal. Whose to say that when presented a third option besides chaos or the emperor they instead choose to side with us. That and he sucked up the remnants of legion in canon and hate that.
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>>5458591
I think you're exaggerating his character flaws a little there.
It would take quite a lot for Roboute to defect to Chaos in any continuity, willingly or otherwise. So much so that I'm fairly certain he'd just split from the Imperium and do his own thing long before even considering the Ruinous Powers.
I'd say the same thing about Khan, but I figured that's a given.
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>>5458724
yeah the khan was already preparing to go independent/rouge before he heard of the heresy.
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I'm really hype for the Custodes meeting, what do or will they think of us? What have they heard about us? Is Alpharius among them and will we spot him? Gah I wanna know so bad.

Then our interactions with the other Primarch!? Hell after this we need to set up a warp call with dad so Angron and he can meet then from what our own Legion master told us of the war hounds introduce Angron to our boys old mate!
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>>5459331
The custodes like nobody. Mostly by design, I think.

Probably wouldn't like us on the basis of being individuals rather than utterly devoted to Big E. But might have a good opinion of us, based on knowing about and facing the machinations of chaos.
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“Any progress with your investigation Malcador?” The Emperor of man resplendent and grand asked having just dismissed several Pale Nomads, Malcador emerged from the shadows before his friend to answer.

“While I am not personally handling this matter my must trusted are, while no clear answers have emerged upon how the Second awoke his Psyker potential nor how it allowed him to reach out across the stars to speak to several other Primarch...we have noticed something.”

The Emperor sat and began to shuffle the cards of his Tarot before placing it down and resting his palm atop of it, he closed his eyes and with his free hand gestured the Sigillite to continue.

“Examining the Star charts gathered by the Fifteenth on your request, Chronographs, information shared by the Second himself in his book and some input from myself we have discovered your Dragon is not simply meeting his brothers through chance, he's on a path? Each time his soul wanders further and further from the Galactic core ever eastward.”

“The eye calling to him?” The Emperor infers

“No, he passed by it upon meeting the Fourth moving next to the Twelfth still again further eastward.”

“So what do you think it means old friend?” the Emperor chose to remain silent on how his second in command was still not using the names of his sons, in time he would.

“Your Second Son bares a Paradoxical Soul, it brings with it a stillness in the warp and a thinning of the veil both. His so called Golden Ocean is growing by the day, soul by soul he encounters connecting to him. Now factor in his encounters with the Great Enemy and awakening the Old Devil whom is yet to claim a domain within the Empyrean.-”

The Emperor remained quiet but felt a cold breeze within the sealed room, a low grating chuckle in the dark as Malcador continued.

“- What if he is being drawn to the boundary of the Galaxy for it is where the Warp is most still? Right now think of it was if the Warps density is greater than that of his phenomenon, it keeps him...it contained. It stops that Golden Tide sprawling outwards... now if he were to reach where the currents are calm and shallow, less dense so to speak...would his soul ocean not flood outwards unending no longer contained within a denser space.”

The Emperor's eyes slowly opened as he drew a card, turned it without looking and spoke.

“Lieren's Golden Ocean would grow and grow spread through it's connections, it would wrap around the Galaxy like a maw. But then what?”

Malcador stayed quiet and frowned,

The Master of mankind looked at the card he'd turned; it's surface was gorged with black scratches hiding the truth....he heard the low laughter once more.
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>>5456325
It has been a while since I've done this. at least 2-3 updates.
Total Votes: 13
Total Voters: 12

>turn the remaining axe in your hand into molten metal like its twin

>Grab one of the slabs of stone you forced from the ground 6

>Perform the carp's dance 5

>turn your cloak of flames into Cloak of the ever-burning will: Spirit Subjugating Blade 1

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>tell fang to start sniping 1
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Sorry for the really long wait, my computer just wouldn't connect to the internet for some reason for nearly all last week. It did today, so I'm taking my shot to write while I can!

>>5462696
Really appreciate the assist.

So Lieren will grab one of the large stones his landing forced from the ground, using it as a shield as he directs Feng to snipe the high riders who know how to wield the archeotech weaponry they've brought to battle

Writing now

>>5456809
Now that is incredibly horrifying , good work painting the scene so vividly and capturing the horror so well.

>>5458310
Might not have been dramatic, but it was very good. And heartwarming

>>5460076
>>5460580

Oooh, foreboding, I like it.
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Troublesome, yes. But you have yet to meet an obstacle that is truly insurmountable. And the horrific power and force of the horrific creations of the golden age of mankind certainly do not begin to approach the peak of what could perchance be named, undefeatable. Your experience with the high technology of ages past, especially when misused by hands who do not fully comprehend its capabilities and the price it reaps upon life and landscape, will make surmounting and overcoming the obstacle in your way as easy as a child's game. Despite the devestation they can wreck and the horrors they can unleash, they are still just tools. Dangerous tools, yes, without a doubt, but that danger passes when they are not being held. And, without a wielder to command them or technician to input activation codes and data strings, they are as harmless as any stick or stone lining the roadside.

Reaching back with your mind, you, without gesture or even a shifting of facial expression, summon one of the great stones thrown up from the ground b your hard landing moments before, pulling it towards you with spirit's touch. Increasing the potency and haste of the simple technique, you draw the several ton mass through the air as swift as a swallow in flight, and still cloaked in flame, grab hold of it fiercely. The psionically and soul charged flames spiral down from your shoulders, wrapping tightly around your arms before draining and intertwining themselves around your fingers like strangling roots or crawling veins. Rapidly, the golden soul fire spins and twirls around your clenching hands, compressing and condensing itself into a greater, more powerful energy. No longer flame, but the pure, glowing essence of the stuff of your ever blazing spirit and unquenchable will. And, upon the tips of your fingers, they form first into claws, then into drills. Drills that pierce the stone as it soars past you, faster than any bullet, slightly slower than a lance of darklight. With a shearing of rock, and shower of sparks, you anchor your hands deep into the slab. Of course, with strength of arm and grip alone, you could have pushed your hands through the slab of rock with ease, but that ease did not matter. Only efficiency and speed. And the moment it'd take to drive your limbs through stone, you would be bombarded from five different directions, and with a quick calculation you know the wounds you'd bare would impair your ability to fight drastically enough that a second barrage could be unleashed upon your recoiling or defending form, which could injure you enough to cause deeper and more troubling injuries.
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>>5463680

Swiftly, you swing the wall of stone around, using its own momentum to reposition it and slam it into the ground, then, using the your cloak of flame like the thrusters on a primitive rocket or aircraft, you push your feet into the ground and lower your shoulders and charge, pushing the immense rock forward while using it as a shield though it would more aptly be called a mobile wall or fortification. A great tide of soil is pushed up before you advance, as large chunks of the shield you have made are reduced to sub atomic particles and a putrid smoke that stings they eyes and dries the skin and throat.

"FENG!" You bellow over the sudden eruption of noise released by another of the high rider's archeotech weapons, that creates a moving vortex of air molecules hardened like steel and sharpened down to an infinitesimally small edge. In a moment, he is by your side, moving through the fire and flames you left behind to kneel beside you, using what remains of the stone wall as cover

"Yes, Brother?" He asks simply, as a spear of light that displaces matter in space ricochets and carries a quarter of the stone slab forty feet in the air, behind your left shoulder

"Only one in each of the groupings knows how to make those dastardly tools of theirs function properly. Unlike the butcher's abominable strain of fatherless scions of war" You quickly explain, as Feng nods along, eyes intensely focused and completely unworried about the danger surrounding him "Those who surround the gunners have no training or comprehension of the weapons beyond their perilous and lethal nature"

"Cut the serpent's head? I was worried you'd ask something of me akin to wading through a sea of flame and blades" Feng laughs, boastfully as he stands and sets his rifle through a hole bored through the stone, where it had been softened and molded away "Just point out my targets, and these devil weapons will fall silent and still once more"

Nodding, you, pull forth a clump of stone from the wall, breaking it up in your palm. Then, with precise flicks, mark each of Feng's Target's with a single pebble launched through the air to land at their feet. The second most hunter of Shangrala's eyes widen and then narrow and sharpen. The air grows still and the atmosphere tense, as his trigger finger twitches. He moves quickly without wasting any time with unnecessary movement or theatrics. So honed has his skill with a rifle become, that he moves less like a man, and more like a well programmed automaton.

Even bearing as many scars as he has earned in battle and the hunt, even with the muscle and nerve damage he has sustained from those wounds that have marred his flesh and hide, Feng moves quicker than thought, moving more by instinct that conscious action.
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>>5463681

And that, is why he can line up his shots and fire faster than could otherwise be possible. His limbs may be weighed down by scars, but his mind remains sharp as it ever was, and by allowing instinct to guide his hands and eyes, he casts aside the handicap imposed upon his body.

The next lethal ball of tearing steel winds goes wide, soaring into the air as the rider manning the device that produces them now lacks a head, the woman holding the matter atomizer falls still, eyes widen with confusion as a well placed bullet to the throat renders her first a cripple and soon a corpse, the wielder of the displacement ray slumps over, half of his head blown away, the last to fall is the one you deemed to pose the least threat, the one with the tool to melt and shape stone and soil. Feng hits that villain directly through the eye before falling back behind cover as the guards surrounding the trained high riders realize what's happening, and respond with suppressive fire.

"Fuckers" He snarls, one hand shooting to his cheek, which is now wet and red with blood "They're aim is terrible, but shrapnel got me, at least it only hit my cheek, would've been most unfortunate if my hand was wounded while I still have targets to shoot down"

"You performed your duty marvelously, now, let us continue onward!' You shout, roaring as you lift up the battered wall of stone, and feel its weight press down on your back, with the assistance of spirit's touch, you hurl it through the air, directly at the line of high riders and augmented slaves fighting to keep possession of their deadliest armaments.

Most retreat as they see you toss the stone, some waiting until its shadow is nearly upon them. Those that retreat find themselves exposed to a counter barrage, started by Feng and soon joined by the other soliders under your command, including your brother's students.

One man, however, is foolhardy enough to, as you sprint forward practically flying through the air, to try and grab the Steel Wind Fan from the hand's of its deceased wielder.

You pause as you leap past him, pitying the fool with a frown as he presses a glowing symbol on it and is reduced to a shower of blood and skin so torn apart it has become as a mist.

"THERE'S TWO OF THEM!" You hear one of the fleeing high riders shriek, before a red arc flows up towards the sky. The ground shakes, as Angron's army charges directly into the exposed rear flank of the high rider's forces.

In just a few steps, you could reach him and fight by his side.
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>>5463682

>Harness Aruna's raging and barbaric fighting style and natural strength, and literally cut a path deeper into the trapped High Rider's army, throwing yourself into their center.

>Release Aruna's Mien, and center yourself, emptying your mind as you harness the silver moonlight in your heart to empower a Cleansing Rain psykerist technique.

>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury

>Reach Angron immediately, by running and hopping off the walls of the mountain pass, ignoring the army before you entirely.

>write in

Hopefully my computer and internet will play nice together now.
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>>5463683
Literally the moment I hit send on the last part of the update, my computer disconnected for a minute.

Hope I haven't jinxed myself.
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>>5463683
>>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
a classic maneuver
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>Harness Aruna's raging and barbaric fighting style and natural strength, and literally cut a path deeper into the trapped High Rider's army, throwing yourself into their center.

They said there were two of Angron. Let's not give them an excuse to doubt the illusion.
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>>5463683
>>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
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>>5463683
>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
>Write in
Use the Fill a thousand vessels technique upon our army...and Angron, behold a buffed Primarch!?
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>>5463683
>Release Aruna's Mien, and center yourself, emptying your mind as you harness the silver moonlight in your heart to empower a Cleansing Rain psykerist technique.
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>>5463683
>>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
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>>5463683
>Hatrness the barbaric style

SMASH
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>>5463683
>Release Aruna's Mien, and center yourself, emptying your mind as you harness the silver moonlight in your heart to empower a Cleansing Rain psykerist technique.
>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
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>>5463683
>Release Aruna's Mien, and center yourself, emptying your mind as you harness the silver moonlight in your heart to empower a Cleansing Rain psykerist technique.
>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
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>>5463683
>>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
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>>5463683
>>5463788
I'll add to my vote
>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
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>>5463683
>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury

>Release Aruna's Mien, and center yourself, emptying your mind as you harness the silver moonlight in your heart to empower a Cleansing Rain psykerist technique.
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>>5463683
>>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
Betrayal of the Turtles, but noble.
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>>5463683
>Release Aruna's Mien, and center yourself, emptying your mind as you harness the silver moonlight in your heart to empower a Cleansing Rain psykerist technique.
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>>5463683
>>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
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>>5463683
>>Release Aruna's Mien, and center yourself, emptying your mind as you harness the silver moonlight in your heart to empower a Cleansing Rain psykerist technique.
>>Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury
kill
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The Primarch of the Lunar Wolves looked down upon the Mistswept world of Shangrala from the viewing deck of his personal vessel the 'Endurance of Cthonia'. Thinking of his vessels name he compared the world of his upbringing against this one; the home of Lieren the brother he had heard so much about and whom he would finally meet.

Cthonia was a grim and barren place, a world in decay with gangs and warlords competing for scraps upon its corpse. He'd battled and clawed his way up before bring brought to Terra, to his fathers side. He'd battled decades beside the Emperor, the greatest years he'd ever know. But then came Leman, the barbarian king of the Russ... it hurt his pride to even admit he felt hurt that their fathers attention was now divided.

But from his fathers' stories, from the tomes he'd read and reports he'd studied, Lieren was a different manner of man to those he'd met thus far. This world that shaped him? How did such a pearl in the dark raise such a man as his Father's Dragon? It looked so peaceful, it's feudal culture while seeped in intrigue and the machinations of nobles would be nothing to a Primarch surely? Then to discover his fabled brother had not made himself 'Emperor'? While he chuckled at the repeated title he remained confused... Lieren was an enigma and that concerned him.

He turned away and headed for the Thunderhawk he was going to take down to the surface alongside an honour guard of his sons and as he strode through the halls he felt something unfamiliar? A twist in his stomach; he realised he was nervous, anxious even! Putting on his helm he hid his scoff at such a notion.

Then he swore he felt something? A presence so close he turned suddenly but saw nothing, slowly he turned and boarded his ship. His only hope was this Panther of the Mists would get along with a pair of Wolves.
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>>5465948

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Lieren watched his new Brother board a terran craft from the realm of Spirits, he recognised the design and frowned as it's smog belching engines roared to life. His astral projection taking a few additional moments to look about this 'Endurance of Cthonia' before he sighed heavily and returned to the realm of men.

He inhaled the cool even air of the courtyard rising slowly to ensure the final preparations were complete, it seemed this Luprical was a guarded sort, cunning and fearsome to be sure but a crack of pettiness marred his polished persona. This meeting would have to be overly formal for things to go smoothly and while such things caused a groan from the Golden Eyed giant it would put his younger brother at ease allowing for a better relationship to flourish. He knew it only logical, the best path forward; analyse, appease, advise, alter.

“You know such a sinister look under moonlight does you no favours my dearest Scholar, you could look every bit the villain” the Jade giant teased her husband emerging from behind a pillar.

“The Imperium of Man has come my Songbird, now the Journey truly begins.”

She smiled sadly “that it does my sweet love, that it does”

The two watched hand in hand as the Luna Wolf vessels entered the atmosphere bringing with them the end of an era and the beginning of something new.
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Calling the vote now, sorry for the wait.

Become the anvil for Angron's hammer, forming a defensive line behind the fleeing High riders amongst the fallen stones and prevent them from running from your brother's fury: 12

Harness Aruna's raging and barbaric fighting style and natural strength, and literally cut a path deeper into the trapped High Rider's army, throwing yourself into their center.: 2

Use the Fill a thousand vessels technique upon our army...and Angron: 1

Release Aruna's Mien, and center yourself, emptying your mind as you harness the silver moonlight in your heart to empower a Cleansing Rain psykerist technique.:6

Total votes: 15

So Lieren will become the Anbil for Angron's hammer and form a defensive line for the the high riders to be dashed and shattered upon.

Writing now

>>5465948
>>5465949
I really enjoyed this, it was great.
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But, that was the call of passions wild and foolish. It'd be folly to give up a position as defensive as the one you have found here, amongst the dead and in the footsteps of fleeing corpses who have yet to realize their is no escape from the trap they have so brazenly trodden into. Calming your self with a single, deep ponderous breath, you run your thumb down the length of your loaned axe and stand firm, the boyish desire to frolicky and fight with your brother draining out of your heart and leaving your thoughts the moment you chose to prune it from the immaculate garden of your mind. With legs spread far apart, you strike and imposing figure amongst the smoking debris and falling stones. Feng is at your side, nearly wrapped in the cloak of your every burning spirit as he falls to one knee and leads his protégés in firing upon the retreating high riders with commendable accuracy and discipline. The rest of your forces, who had busied themselves with executing those soldiers who had been left listless by the death of their masters or were pinned or otherwise trapped beneath the vehicles they had ridden atop, rush to join you. Lashing your arm out to the side, without speaking, you command them to halt their advance. Immediately, these men you have been entrusted understand the unspoken orders you have given and form into a line behind Feng and his apprentice riflemen.

They form a wall of shields, and you notice in the first line, that some of the gladiators and former slaves under your command have taken weapons from their bested enemies. A remarkable show of initiative, and wisdom as none of them have grabbed tools with which their hands are unfamiliar. Their looted weaponry may be more technologically advance than their previous armaments, but it is not unknown to them, and even a simpleton can learn quickly how to wield an evolution of a mundane weapon equipped with a powerfield or similar improvement.

Waiting for the tide of battle to turn back towards you, you idly begin to calculate how long it will take Angron to push the high riders back against the defensive line you have created and quickly determine, even if there are men amongst the high riders present with a rare blessing of unusual valor and steely resolve, it shall only take at the longest a few minutes for them to be forced back and made to rout if they are not simply completely slaughtered by the furious assault of Angron's complete army. They might have greater numbers than the force he commands, but his are of higher quality and discipline. A cybernetical lobotomized or mentally crippled thrall soldier shall never be a match for an experienced warrior. And when said warrior is wholly under the command of talented and worthwhile leader, one knowledge not only of battlefield tactics and stratagems but battle itself, it would take a truly gross discrepancy to overcome those advantages.

Still, a lion may be devoured by mice, if there are enough of them.
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>>5466039


But you would not call these slave hunters mice, or any other kind of rodent. They are a lower breed of vermin. Witless, and lacking in any admirable quality. You mourn for those poor souls they had enslaved and broken beneath their will, the minds they had eroded and erased, replacing with cold unfeeling code or chemically induced hazes of animalistic rage. This kind of war is the most repugnant kind. At least, these tyrants have not struck dark pacts or have access to an endless supply of fresh bodies and the industry to equip them with weaponry powerful enough to end worlds.

But, still, their tactics and use of maimed and mindbroken slave soldiers disgusts you to the point your disdain for them easily matches that you felt for the dead tyrants of Shangrala.

And soon, the slave drivers throw themselves at your position, choosing one death over another. They are mindless with fear and panic, having been utterly trounced by Angron and his personal vanguard of high trained and highly augmented gladiators turned rebels. Behind the mismatched horde of nobles and their witless slaves and soulless automatons of flesh, you catch glimpse of Angron, moving through the battlefield like death incarnate. And he is joined by his honor guard, empowered by his awakened empathetic abilities and aided further by the lesser psykerist abilities he has grasped, which he already wields with as much ease as he does the axes in his hands.

The tide of high riders breaks against you, and for a moment, you stand in their mob, motionless and pushed on all sides by men driven by blind survival instinct, that are met with spears and rifles. You, despite your own well honed and innate discipline and diligence on the field of battle, are briefly entranced by your brother's martial skills. He is a master without a teacher, a true prodigy of war, a natural killer.

An epithet that was shared by brothers you have lost, who have been taken from you by your mortal and eternal enemies. Despite yourself, and knowing he can well and easily defend himself, you feel a pull to protect him. Protect him where you could not protect the other brothers you have failed. Liang, Jiang, Xin, Red Faced Wei, Michah, Bai, and Small Chen. Your knuckles whiten, and the mask you wear shifts briefly, as with a single swing of your axe, you cut through a dozen men, creating space to walk forward and swing again, as if you were scything down stalks of rice.

A deep, disdainful fury has roused itself in you, and you do not repress it. A brother's love and anger must be expressed, so you can show those brothers who have gone ahead of you that your affection for them remains as strong as it was when they were at your side and amongst the living. And to show the brother before you and the brother at your side the same love.
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>>5466041


Aruna snorted, standing in the empty plain of the foreign land the dragon emperor had sent him, along with the Beast kin of the Zoroast territory and a handful of the strange warriors that accompany The Great hunter of the fogs' sons, to give aid to The natives of this place whose name he could not pronounce and assist them in their battles against tyranny . He was in rare form today, powerful and stronger than he was when he awoke this morning. The air was crisp, cold and it revitalized him as he surveyed the foes he had defeated, as the vast shadows of the sun devouring ships that rose from the earth covered the field of dead as what remained of his tribe's warriors celebrated, joined by Lieren's sons and their underlings. Their native allies, were much more hesitant to join them in the almost ritual cheering and gayity, staring in terrified awe at the great gold silver vessel that covered the skies.

And yet, Aruna found no joy in victory. Or satisfaction. As suddenly, the memory of his peers returned, and the paint of their passing increased ten fold, as it had felt when he first looked upon their ruined bodies.

Raising up his Dao, he dedicated this victory to the last great leaders of his people, swearing an oath in his heart of hearts to protect their tribes, as he did his own, at least until a worthy successor could be found to truly take on the mantles of leadership that had fallen after their...deaths. Aruna wasn't able to call them good or honorable deaths. He had always found thrill in danger and battle, excitement instead of fear when faced with death. But what the butcher king did to his friends...was too monstrous to look upon with admiration, from any angle.
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"They were simple prey" Feng states plainly, as Angron's men pick through the carnage, taking weapons and armor where they can find it and stripping even what is apparently unsalvageable to be repaired or repurposed. To your surprise and joy, some of the slaves of the high riders were able to be saved from the doom of their masters, not many, but a few still retained enough of their senses or spirit to know who was their enemy and who was their friend, in truth. Some of these fortunate souls, have still been ruined, by despicable and cruel forms of augmentation the existence of which enrages and offends you.

One technology in particular awoke the blackest of your rages, upon merely glimpsing it.

One of the gladiators you raised, in a hushed tone, told you they were called Iron nails. and they had the power to reduce a man to rabid beast. A practice you had seen used by the Yan princes and the Butcher King alike.
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>>5466044

What do you do, now that the battle is won, Lieren?

>Congratulate Angron for his victory and offer to spar with him, so you can truly measure the incredible prowess he displayed in the battle

>Instruct the wisest and most trustworthy of Angron's soldiers in the use of the Archeotech that was captured, and inspect it yourself, to see if any of it can be used without soiling one's virtues and befouling their hands

>Depart the field, and commiserate with Feng about the brothers you have both lost

>Sensing a familiar presence, move to greet your beloved songbird, whose beauty surpass that of all the stars in the sky, and introduce Kanzeon to Angron.

>Write in
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>>5466047
>Sensing a familiar presence, move to greet your beloved songbird, whose beauty surpass that of all the stars in the sky, and introduce Kanzeon to Angron.
>Instruct the wisest and most trustworthy of Angron's soldiers in the use of the Archeotech that was captured, and inspect it yourself, to see if any of it can be used without soiling one's virtues and befouling their hands
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>>5466055
+1
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>>5466047
>>Sensing a familiar presence, move to greet your beloved songbird, whose beauty surpass that of all the stars in the sky, and introduce Kanzeon to Angron.
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>>5466055
+1
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>>5466055
+1
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>>5466055
Supported

It's time to bring our family into contact with one another
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>>5466047
>Instruct the wisest and most trustworthy of Angron's soldiers in the use of the Archeotech that was captured, and inspect it yourself, to see if any of it can be used without soiling one's virtues and befouling their hands
>Sensing a familiar presence, move to greet your beloved songbird, whose beauty surpass that of all the stars in the sky, and introduce Kanzeon to Angron.
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>>5466047
>Sensing a familiar presence, move to greet your beloved songbird, whose beauty surpass that of all the stars in the sky, and introduce Kanzeon to Angron.

>Congratulate Angron for his victory and offer to spar with him, so you can truly measure the incredible prowess he displayed in the battle
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>>5466047
>>Sensing a familiar presence, move to greet your beloved songbird, whose beauty surpass that of all the stars in the sky, and introduce Kanzeon to Angron.
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>>5466047
>Congratulate Angron for his victory and offer to spar with him, so you can truly measure the incredible prowess he displayed in the battle
And afterwards
>Sensing a familiar presence, move to greet your beloved songbird, whose beauty surpasses that of all the stars in the sky, and introduce Kanzeon to Angron.
Oh she's gonna be fucking PISSED.
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>>5466338
Supporting this. Kanzeon needs to meet Angron! Also needs Primarch tier weapons and armor!
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>>5466047
>>Congratulate Angron for his victory and offer to spar with him, so you can truly measure the incredible prowess he displayed in the battle

>Sensing a familiar presence, move to greet your beloved songbird, whose beauty surpasses all the stars in the sky, and introduce Kanzeon to Angron.

>Instruct the wisest and most trustworthy of Angron's soldiers in the use of the Archeotech that was captured, and inspect it yourself, to see if any of it can be used without soiling one's virtues and befouling their hands
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>>5466055
+1
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>>5466047
>>Instruct the wisest and most trustworthy of Angron's soldiers in the use of the Archeotech that was captured, and inspect it yourself, to see if any of it can be used without soiling one's virtues and befouling their hands
>Instruct the wisest and most trustworthy of Angron's soldiers in the use of the Archeotech that was captured, and inspect it yourself, to see if any of it can be used without soiling one's virtues and befouling their hands

>Sensing a familiar presence, move to greet your beloved songbird, whose beauty surpass that of all the stars in the sky, and introduce Kanzeon to Angron.
>Write in addition
"Angron my brother there comes a time when all men must face that which truly vexes them, that which is as unknowable, fearsome...yet also as beautiful as the infinite night sky. His wife, or the fury there of."
Rest a hand on his shoulder and go face our wife, call out to the stars a poem, a ballad we wrote for her and our longing for our reunion, then brace to get shot, slapped or otherwise pummelled.

THis is going to make an amusing sight for Angrons' lads, watching us get hen pecked after what they have seen of us before.wkjhg0
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>>5466055
Changing vote
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>>5466047
>>Instruct the wisest and most trustworthy of Angron's soldiers in the use of the Archeotech that was captured, and inspect it yourself, to see if any of it can be used without soiling one's virtues and befouling their hands
>Sensing a familiar presence, move to greet your beloved songbird, whose beauty surpass that of all the stars in the sky, and introduce Kanzeon to Angron.
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>>5466055
support, oh hell yes two day update cycle? sign me up
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Can we agree to both finish the anti-khorn verses of the journey and spar with angron after the planet is liberated.
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>>5468329
>finish
sounds like anti-journey rhetoric to me
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>>5470292
I said finish because we wrote a bunch of stuff down after getting shit faced drunk after (I think?) the butcher war. besides I didn't say finish the journey just the anti-khorn part.
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>>5466047
Thus three days did pass.
Total Votes: 31
Total voters: 16


>introduce Kanzeon to Angron 16

>Instruct the wisest and most trustworthy of Angron's soldiers in the use of the Archeotech 11

>Congratulate Angron for his victory and offer to spar with him 3

>Depart the field, and commiserate with Feng about the brothers you have both lost

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>Angron my brother there comes a time when all men must face that which truly vexes them, that which is as unknowable, fearsome...yet also as beautiful as the infinite night sky. His wife, or the fury there of." Rest a hand on his shoulder and go face our wife, call out to the stars a poem, a ballad we wrote for her and our longing for our reunion, then brace to get shot, slapped or otherwise pummelled. 1
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>>5466055
support
damn lost an update
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>>5470325
low and behold. I had to update the count beacuse some came after I put up the tally

Total Votes: 33
Total voters: 17


>introduce Kanzeon to Angron 17

>Instruct the wisest and most trustworthy of Angron's soldiers in the use of the Archeotech 12

>Congratulate Angron for his victory and offer to spar with him 3

>Depart the field, and commiserate with Feng about the brothers you have both lost

Write-in:
>Angron my brother there comes a time when all men must face that which truly vexes them, that which is as unknowable, fearsome...yet also as beautiful as the infinite night sky. His wife, or the fury there of." Rest a hand on his shoulder and go face our wife, call out to the stars a poem, a ballad we wrote for her and our longing for our reunion, then brace to get shot, slapped or otherwise pummelled. 1
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>>5470300
When there is another good example or thought of Lieren, we already wrote something that involved Cui i think. And the journey in general is fairly corrosive to chaos, even without "special" parts.
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Calling the vote now, sorry for the long wait.

>>5470798
Thanks as always for the assist

So Lieren will welcome Kanzeon and Co to Nuceria and introduce her and them to Anbgron, as well as instruct the wisest and most trustoworthy of his brother's men n the use of Archeotech weaponry and inspect the captured devices to see if any can be used without staining one's self with needless cruelty.

Writing now
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Moving swiftly, with the assistance of Feng, your beggar sect and gladiators, you were able to procure and take hold of any Archeotech weaponry that survived that battle, before it could be claimed as bounty or reward by any man who would become a risk to himself or others by merely possessing such dreadful tools. None of Angron's men complained or challenged your collection of the high rider's technology, and the older and wiser amongst them even assisted you in reclaiming the handful that had been mistaken for mere jewelry or decoration by the young and careless amongst their ranks. Your brother gave official permission and orders to gather the terrible weaponry, long after you had already began your efforts to contain and guard it from curious eyes and prodding hands.

"This reminds me of when we fought those slavers from the stars. You lined up their armaments just like this, and then Bai grabbed a Shard Carbine that he kept with him until he died his hero's death" Feng said in reminiscence as he dropped the last of the advance rifles wielded by the honor guard of one of the more higher ranking High Riders, along with said high riders outer and impermanent augmentations, that seem to function similarly to the armor provided for your sons by your nameless father, that is, connecting to subdermal ports and nodes implanted and buried within the users own flesh.

"I remember the day well. When Xin nearly lost his life to the treacherous poison of the dark natured Aeldari, and when Dong proved vital to ending the threat of the Shuni Sorcerer while Bai battled the Vishnu madman" You reply forlornly, as you turned a small pendant ring around in your finger, sensing within it that complex wiring connected to a firing mechanism smaller than a grain of rice connected to a plasma furnace smaller than you had ever seen or constructed "A mad man though corrupted in spirit and mind, was at least a true born vishnu, rather than the wretches his master replaced those once noble people with"

"Aruna is painfully aware of that unfortunate truth. He and Akanksha are leaders of a dying culture" Feng answers somberly as he watches you carry out your inspections "Even if their people flourish, their warrior way of life is waning with the loss of so many of those who devoted themselves to that vicious life-style. And the few survivors of the butcher king's genocide, are as different from them as they are to us Long-Jianese. It is a tragedy, one that reminds me of that poem. You know the one"

"The last flight of phoenixes and dragons" You answer, as the sorrowful tune that often accompanies readings of that old poem plays in your mind "The end of an era no one believed could end"

"Never liked it. Too sad for my tastes" Feng stated, as you continued your study of the captured weapons "Besides, that moping song has lost much of its bite, ever sense you brought back both dragons and Phoenixes on a whim"
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>>5471267

"If only I could do the same for the Vishnu" You sighed as you hefted up an engine block that had been wrongly categorized as a weapon by your beggar sect, who had more or less grabbed anything that they thought looked sufficiently advance to be one of the dangerous devices you forewarned them about "Resurrecting a culture is much harder than recreating extinct creatures, no matter how fantastical they are"

"I'd be content in knowing they'd be remembered, at least for a little while. You said it yourself brother" Feng said, shuffling away from you, leaving your side to clear his head somewhere quiet and isolated away from his fellow man, even yourself "All things must one day fade and vanish from the world, even history. Even memory"

"It is still painful to witness first hand" You say, thinking out loud as you busy yourself with the cataloguing and categorization of each piece of captured technology, no matter how small it is.

Separating those that require inhuman cruelty, sadism or apathy to use in anyway from those machines that can repurposed or reconfigured to kill without pain or otherwise used for less barbaric means and ends. Amongst which include the stasis field pearls, the Steel Wind Fan and the matter displacement ray and the stone and soil softener device, which you intend to give more fitting and poetic epithets when you have time you can safely and guiltlessly waste on pursuing aesthetic endeavors.

You had just began to tutor and inform the most trust worthy and sharp witted amongst Angron's army, when like the rays of the sun piercing long night or dense clouds, a familiar, supremely comforting presence washed over your mind. Standing as upright as shoot of bamboo, you turned your head to face the source of the all encompassing warmth, radiating love and concern even as distance as she was from you.

Kanzeon had arrived on Nuceria! Unable to speak, you cupped a fist and bowed to the men you were teaching and began to take long, almost leaping strides towards your beloved emerald eyed muse. This showing of sudden, uncharacteristic urgency draws the attention of the whole camp besides Feng, who can tell from the moment you begin to make haste towards something unseen in the distance that you must have very good reason to act so suddenly and with such hurried swiftness as to not explain your sudden flight and excitement. Unfortunately, he is still struggling to learn Nucerian and you are in no state of mind to explain yourself and so your sprinting towards the horizon causes something of a clamor as the confusion caused by your rush to reunite with the other half of your soul as the soldiers of your brother's army shout amongst themselves.

Some trying to figure out what is going on, others warning of a nonexistent attack they imagine you to have foreseen or yelling at you to explain your sudden madness.
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>>5471269

They are disciplined enough to not panic, and when the majority of them realize they are not under attack or threat, calm down and return to their idle duties and labors.

But word of your sudden shift in behavior and seemingly causeless run away from the army and into the deeper wild had spread as swift as wildfire through parched grasses, and reached Angron's ears swiftly, though it is possible he had just seen you suddenly leap to your feat and begin to sprint away in a seemingly random direction. Having enjoyed fighting beside you and spending time in your company, he ran after you, easily keeping pace, no doubt suspecting you were about to vanish like morning mist again or wishing to at least hear where you going and what you were planning on doing now that the war against tyranny of Nuceria had truly and properly began.

It was...fun running from him. It was a simple pleasure you had been denied by your peculiar birth, same as he. the joy of running with one's own siblings. Flashes of the children of Nothing at play danced at the edge of your perceptions, as a smirk curled on your lips. You recall exactly what you had thought, when you sat and pondered the games of children and their reasons, before you began to wonder why you had never had a period of such carefree innocence yourself. It was a brief period of time, a question you quickly answered and had rarely thought back to in the years that had passed since that first winter of life. A bittersweet memory and one that brings a sense of great accomplishment, as those children were only able to be so carefree and happy because of your actions and intervention and had lived lives free of fear, worry or hardship.

"Why are you smiling like that?" Angron barked as he came to your side

"Just reminiscing on the past, thinking how we're running like boys without a care in the world. A small, fleeting pleasure denied to us both by the circumstances of our birth" You answered back, without slowing or shortening your striding pace "The games of young children, the freedom of childhood"

"I'm not sure how you find this fun or think this is anything like that" Angron snorted through his nose, flaring his nostrils "Is there a reason you decided to start running, or did you just want to try and trick me into playing childish games?"

"Would you be so opposed" You asked with a laugh. He gave no answer, so you relented and answered him

"I sensed the presence of my beloved Kanzeon, and knew I must greet her as the moon greets the night" You answered swiftly, which made the childish feeling you had briefly felt alight on Angron's hardened features in an expression of brief but potent excitement

"Well, what better time to introduce me to her!" He shouted back "Could've at least told me I'd be entertaining family before sprinting away. Half the camp thought we were about to be ambushed"
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>>5471271

"I am well aware, and will offer my sincere apologies when we both return" You shout, your own joyful excitement growing from just how honestly overjoyed your brother sounded at the prospect of meeting your fiancé.

And so her and you ran together, briefly forgetting the weight of your shared responsibilities and the great shadow cast by war and the struggles yet to come. Your scarred brother grinned, with an innocence you had thought lost to him, as wind and sun beat down on both your faces and he was allowed to truly taste the freedom he had earned for himself and countless others. No more words were exchanged between the two of you as you raced to the location where you had first arrived upon Nuceria and where you had stowed away the craft that had carried you through the webway

A trip that would have taken days for normal men, if not weeks. But for you it would take but a handful of hours at most, as even the most treacherous and difficult terrain was easily passed by men of your great physical stature and aptitude, and so you passed through the mountain range with as much ease as if it were an empty, faultless city street.

However, as you get closer to the site, where Feng had been so kind as to leave hidden signs to denote it as the rallying point of the reinforcements from Shangrala after he had arrived as the first of the scouting force, you were met by several of the brothers of the Panthers. In fact, the only one missing from their number was Dong, which was to be expected as his nature made his presence unpleasant to most especially those who possessed awakened psionic potential, like the whole of the aeldari race.

"You weren't lying when you said you weren't the only giant" Shaved head Wei said with a sharp whistle, standing on the branch of a towering tree "Good evening boss, Feng had left orders for us to secure the landing zone"

"Lots of queer animals on this planet" Half jaw Hu remarked, wearing one of said queer animal's hides as he emerged from the gloom beside a New Varro man playing a harmonic, an instrument they had introduced to Shangrala not long after their arrival.

"That one's different" Angron immediately noted as he recognized the obvious difference in the appearence of Long-Jianese men and New Varro Men "A different race than Feng and the others"

"He is no more native to Shangrala than he is to Nuceria" You answered, smiling as you waved to the man, who you recognized as Dewey, a man of few words but great action

"So this is your kin?" Dewey asked, as his two elder Brother of the panthers greeted Angron with cupped fists as your brother lifted his eyes brows in quiet astonishment as he regarded the gather huntsman and found them worthy of his esteem and respect, being able to instinctively measure their skill with a momentary look, a talent the most skilled of warriors honed in themselves.
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>>5471273

You nodded as Angron clumsily cupped his fist and lowered his head in what would be seen as a curt and forced bow, but Wei, Hu and Dewey didn't care in the slightest

"Guessing your heart chimed the moment she stepped foot on this dustball?" Hu asked with a smirk "She told us you'd get here soon, just didn't expect you to bring your blood brother with you..er, I mean, your actual blood relative brother"

"I thought he'd be prettier. I'll have to tell Zian you weren't blessed with Good Looks by your father, when I next visit his memorial" Wei joked "That ought to cheer his ghost up, don't you think?"

"He ain't ugly, has a certain rough charm about him. Like poor ol Michah" Dewey grumbled as Angron glanced to you, catching enough of their conversation to know they were all but calling him ugly

"Its your scowl, brother" You lightheartedly explained as he rolled his eyes, his chest shuddering as he repressed a chuckle

"I do not scowl" he snarled, scowling as he often does, as the two of you continued up the mountainside, now joined by your other, non blood related brothers. Each step you took, your heart raced further and your body felt lighter, as you felt a slowly deepening blush spread from your cheeks up to your ears as you felt Kanzeon come nearer and nearer.

But as you came closer to reuniting with your beloved jade star, you felt another presence as familiar as hers. Which soured your otherwise cheerful and thrilled mood.

Jinhai had come here as well, you could feel it. Jinhai, the ruler of most of Shangrala. Who Feng has said had been made to remain upon his throne in Long-Jia, due to the risk of war. You were going to have a very long talk with your friend and brother, even though you knew he had come with the best intentions in his heart

"If it brightens your mood and wipes the glower off of your handsome face, I tried to stop him, darling" Kanzeon sighs heavily in your mind "But I couldn't really trump his "I'm the emperor, I can do whatever the hell I want, and damn the consequences" card, and you're right, he does have a good reason to act so petulant. He was worried sick about you, especially after A certain Eldar Farseer told him exactly the dangers you were facing"

"And you were as well" You reply, immediately feeling her concern be replaced with relief.

"Of course. This place enslaved your brother" Kanzeon said sharply "but, I would've rushed just as recklessly as you had if my sisters had been in his place. I'm just glad you're alright. Had nightmares waiting to make sure you were. You aren't going to be leaving my side for awhile, until I'm satisfied you're okay"

"as you wish" You say softly, feeling your cheeks turn even redder with delight as you practically skip up the hill side.

"Wait a minute..." Kanzeon mutters, having peeked into Angron's mind and read his thoughts "Lieren, why did you tell him what I am?"
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>>5471274

"I was worried you'd be angry" You admit, as Angron looks at you, wondering why your expression keeps shifting and sensing Kanzeon presence with his novice ability of wind whispering, but being unable to pry into his thoughts

"Love, you have eyes that relay to you nearly everything their is to know about something or someone, even information they do not know or consciously realize about themselves" She explained "If you trusted him to know the truth of me and my sisters, that means he can be trusted with it. I would have just preferred to tell him myself, is all. Its cute that you were worrying I'd be mad, My beloved scholar. And its really adorable how excited you are to see me again"

"As if you were not just as enthusiastic to be at my side again" You reply coyly, delighting in her embarrassment

You smile, and run a bit faster to meet her just a bit sooner and

"WHAT IN THE HELL IS THAT!?" Angron shouted, as he spotted one of the thirteen Steel Giants of Shangrala kneeling on the mountainside. The one modeled after Tao Dandan, and on its shoulder, was her younger brother, Tao Shanyuan. And a bit further a head stood two more of the thirteen, the Yin Lei model, atop the head of which sat old Man Tingfeng and the Qian Xia model piloted by its reference's cousin, Qian Tian the "First son of the western wind".

"War machines" You answer simply "Though I cannot claim them as my own creation, brother, as I merely altered the blueprints I had found, left behind by those who had long since passed the veil from this world to the next"

"Oh don't be so humble!" Kanzeon shouted, having grown tired and dissatisfied with speaking to you through wind whispering. You turned, with a goofy grin and shining, joyous eyes, to see her standing, cast in the light of sunset, at the top of the hill, hands on her hips and a similarly blithe and overjoyed grin on her own face. Her emerald hued eyes were sparkling in the light of the setting sun and was all but shivering from happiness

"So are you, asshole!" She barked back, laughing as she ran down to meet you and...so did Anahita!

You deftly dodged your beloved's overly physically affectionate sibling, wincing as you calculated her trajectory, as she had already leap from the ground and outstretched her arms to tackle you. Kanzeon pushed her heels into the ground, a look of horror dawning in her eyes as she came to the same conclusion you had with her own calculations.

Anahita was going to slam into Angron.

"YOU IDIOT!" Kanzeon shouted, right as Angron turned, having heard Kanzeon yell and begin to run down the hill. The greatest poets of Shangrala, Prospero and Nuceria, could not possibly capture in written text and prose the expression of sheer shock your brother made, as he came face to face with the amber eyes of a woman of his own stature, and her wild mane of braided hair and the countless cogs and iron beads she threaded through it.
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>>5471276

You had never seen him be caught so completely off guard before, and covered your mouth as he reeled around and tried to catch the woman leaping at him. He should've dodged

"Well, there they go" Kanzeon growled, brow furrowed as she pinched the bridge of her nose, as her sister and your brother tumbled down the side of the hill, bowling over one another as one of them gave a girly shriek "Should've known she'd ruin our moment like this. Your brother is a forgiving type, I hope"

Kanzeon frowned and then turned red as the skies above her as you kissed the back of her hand and smiled roguishly. She turned away, enjoy your shameless show of affection as Your kinsmen now at the bottom of the hill made quiet the ruckus. Angron through yelling and Anahita through her boisterous laughter.

"He has absolutely no experience with women" Kanzeon tittered "How unfortunate that of all my sisters, he met Anahita first, the one who can't resist infringing on other's personal space. Poor boy"

"I think they'll get along" You say, as the first punch is thrown between the two of them, much to the scrappy girl's delight

"Father" Dae-Hyun says politely

"Son" You say warmly, winking at him as you watch the brawl between Your brother and Sister in law

"Lieren" Jinhai said, in a tone that told you he knew how disappointed you'd be in his reckless decision to travel here.

"KICK HER ASS! SHE NEEDS A LESSON!" Kanzeon shouted down the hill as you turned and saw your friend dressed in the full regalia of war, that he had last donned during the war against the butcher king, the blue and pink scales of his armor glittering in the warm rays of evening light

"You're a fool. But, you are a commendable fool" You state plainly "How virtuous it is, to seek out the oppressed to aid in their liberation. To chase down tyrants to end their rule"

"I am sorry, friend, but I could not stand idle while you fought and struggled on a distant world. You saved countless lives on Shangrala, it is only just I repay the favor and help your brother" He stated simply "By the way, Kanzeon didn't want me to tell you this, but she was so excited to reunite with you she"

"Stop" Kanzeon threatened with a glare

Now your curiosity was peaked.

What do you do now, Lieren?

>Break Angron and Anahita up, and properly introduce your brother to her and Kanzeon, and Jinhai, with all the reverence and respect they deserve

>Watch Angron and Anahita fight, and ask how Mari and Al-Uzza are doing.

>Tally the volunteers from Shangrala, so you can present an exact count of their contributions to Angron and his officers

>Gather your sons who know what Kanzeon and her sisters are in private, and introduce them to your brother, after you present the rest of your forces to him.

>write in
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>>5471278
>Break Angron and Anahita up, and properly introduce your brother to her and Kanzeon, and Jinhai, with all the reverence and respect they deserve

>write in
Get some simple and basic introductions done then have Angron head back to camp bringing his new friend should he wish. Let them know we're coming to them.

Once we arrive formal and proper introductions can be handled
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>>5471278
>Break them up and introduce them to everyone
>Scold Jinhai

YOU HAVE RESPONSIBILITIES JINHAI, YOU CAN'T BE RUNNING OFF TO OTHER PLANETS LIKE THIS!
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>>5471278
>Watch Angron and Anahita fight, and ask how Mari and Al-Uzza are doing.

>Tally the volunteers from Shangrala, so you can present an exact count of their contributions to Angron and his officers
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>>5471278
>Gather your sons who know what Kanzeon and her sisters are in private, and introduce them to your brother, after you present the rest of your forces to him.
>Tally the volunteers from Shangrala, so you can present an exact count of their contributions to Angron and his officers
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Which one was Anahita? Butcher's Bride 2.0?
Mari was ice princess
Al-Uzza is Shunii ship
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>>5471350
Anahita was the one we rescued for Hashut's cult.
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>>5471350
>Butcher's Bride 2.0?
That was Liberty
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>>5471278

>Gather your sons who know what Kanzeon and her sisters are in private, and introduce them to your brother, after you present the rest of your forces to him.

>Watch Angron and Anahita fight, and ask how Mari and Al-Uzza are doing.


This is adorable as fuck.
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>>5471350
- Anahita was under the Zoroast main mountain region. With a temple of Hashut above her (they were trying to reach her. As some of us believe Shangrila was essentially a contested planet between chaos gods, with evident great prizes to take). She is quite friendly and more industry oriented.
- Mari was under the ice and creating cold in the entire Bask region (with nurgle demons frozen or blocked by ice in her ship). Far more pacific than the others. I don't remember if she had a specialization. But she was fitted with everything the others had, and ready to make war robots, equipment and weapons for the war against the Butcher King.
- Al Uzza was under a palace in one of the Shuni deserts (malfunctions and tzeentch demons). Calm, more specialized in research than the others.
- Kuam Im lifeless body was in a secret valley between the Long-Jia and Vishnu border. (Degenerate creatures and some infested ship parts). Social/Cultural gone wrong.
- Avalokitesvara was the one building first just a military structure that became a temple (first that activated from sleep then got betrayed), then full on military citadel. Military gone wrong.
- Kazzy was under a full mountain keeping her enemies far away. Similar to Lieren, but very fierce/protective. Considered one of the best by the researchers that made them.
- The others well, died during their approach to the planet. Liberty was born from Kuam Im parts instead. Dae-Hyun is acting has one of her guardians.

>>5471278

>Gather your sons who know what Kanzeon and her sisters are in private, and introduce them to your brother, after you present the rest of your forces to him.
>Watch Angron and Anahita fight, and ask how Mari and Al-Uzza are doing.
Good
Very good. Except for Jinhai being here, which to be fair he is one of our best men but at the same time..... Well it's not much of an issue since Shangrila is in good hands, and Jinhai help would be great even here. Beside our army can grow stronger from the experience gained here. And we can create sooner a friendship between the two worlds and different peoples.
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>>5471278
>Watch Angron and Anahita fight, and ask how Mari and Al-Uzza are doing.
>Gather your sons who know what Kanzeon and her sisters are in private, and introduce them to your brother, after you present the rest of your forces to him.
>Inquire into the risk of war on Shangrala that Feng alluded to.

Wondering if Feng was referring to something serious or just standard customs that force Jinhai to act conservatively.
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>>5471278
>>Watch Angron and Anahita fight, and ask how Mari and Al-Uzza are doing.
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>>5471278
>Watch Angron and Anahita fight, and ask how Mari and Al-Uzza are doing.

>Gather your sons who know what Kanzeon and her sisters are in private, and introduce them to your brother, after you present the rest of your forces to him.
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>>5471465
Kuam Im became the fox deamon, we know her real name now given we figurd it out.

Liberty was born from reformatting Avalokitesvara
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>>5471278
Total Votes: 18
Total Voters: 9

>Break Angron and Anahita up 2

>Watch Angron and Anahita fight 6

>Tally the volunteers from Shangrala 2

>Gather your sons who know what Kanzeon and her sisters are in private 5

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>Get some simple and basic introductions done then have Angron head back to camp bringing his new friend should he wish. Let them know we're coming to them. 1

>scold carp son 1

>Inquire into the risk of war on Shangrala that Feng alluded to. 1
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the long wiat. Wasn't feeling well

>>5475894
Thanks once again for your service Tally Anon.

So Lieren will Watch Anahita and Angron fight, while asking how Mari and Al-Uzza are doing.
Then gather his sons who know the truth of Kanzeon and her sisters and introduce them to his brother, after presenting the rest of the reinforcements from Shangrala to him

Writing now
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>>5476868
Oh, and happy late thanksgiving, if you celebrate it.
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>>5476869
he had it on the 9th in Canada
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But you yet it settle and drift away like dust on the wind, no reason to pry into the matter, ladies need their secrets and there is no cause or just to embarrass your beloved at such a pivotal moment.

"A pivotal moment marred by a punch" She herself observed, smirking wickedly as she watched your brother and her sister exchange blows that shook the earth and caused cracks to form in the ground they stood upon. A reckless scuffle had begun, between two titanically strong beings, without purpose or need. But it was amusing, even if it did ruin the atmosphere of your reuniting with your dearest companions and countrymen.

"I can see now, more than ever, how Anahita and the late Avalokitesvara were designed as twins, she certainly shows the same enjoyment of combat as her closest sibling's wayward sons and daughters" You remark through windwhispering, as Kanzeon brow furrows and then smooths, as she gives a quiet sigh.

"She's as excitable as she is diligent, you know that well enough with her usual manner of greeting" She said with a chuckle "She's just having fun playing around after all her hard work, but I'm sure you already noticed, as supernaturally perceptive as you are, dear"

"of course" You softly answer, bowing your head and stowing your hands beneath the sleeves of your every shifting robe of many colors "But, it has just been made more readily apparent the similarities behind their upbringing and purposeful design because"

"She's giving your brother a fight?" Kanzeon asked outloud, amused "Honestly, I'm as surprised as you are, and disappointed. Being laid flat on her ass would've done her some good in all honesty. At least it'd teach her to stop tackling people like she were a dog"

"I find that habit of hers endearing if impolite" You state with a rolling shrug of your shoulders "Speaking of our kin, I noticed the gentler of your sisters and the youngest have not joined in the campaign, may I ask how they have been since I departed to these arid lands?"

"Why couldn't you ask?" She teased, smiling warmly as she took a breath and gave a moment of thought "Al-Uzza is busy at work repairing Kuan Im's empty chassis, Mari last she told me was helping clear some toxins in the environment that used to be the Vishnu States, and all of us have been tracking down the exact coordinates of the resting sites of poor Philotes and Albina. Philotes we should be able to recover once the local wilderness has been pacified"

You raised an eyebrow, intrigued and worried by her choice of words and phrasing.
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>>5476976

"Oh don't worry, the moment the new Zoroast nation met with Long-Jia, they, like the bask, entered into a peaceful alliance. Well, I say alliance, but Arash Zaandia has more or less subjugated himself to Long-Jia, though he retains the title of king and still rules of the Zoroast independently. I think the Qian Xia and Daiyu had something to do with it" Kanzeon answered dully, picking at one of her nails, no longer pay attention to the fighting just down the hill "Certainly, the broadcast made Jinhai and his escorts seem...rather more imposing than they actually were. Or Ya know, the non conspiracy theory answer of "He was intimidated by your sons despite them assisting in his taking of the throne"

"But to answer the question you actually had, not long after that treaty was signed and the rest of the Long-Jia became aware of the Zoroast and the rest of the world beyond the Vishnu Badlands, we shortly encountered another culture in dire straights. One that actually approached us after Arash recommended they seek out the "Dragon Court" for aid" She continued, grinding her teeth "Unfortunately, it would seem Philotes collection of her genetically modified creations had been running rampant and evolving without restriction since her untimely demise. That, and the usual problem of misrule and misconduct committed by the traditional governing body of the nation, I don't know the details to be honest, but suffice to say Jinhai and Arash sent armies over the border to deal with both, armies that includes your sons by volunteering"

"Seems I missed quite a bit of excitement, and speaking of the Zoroast, how have the Angra been fairing?" You ask, wincing as Angron throws sand in Anahita's eyes

"Adapting well, your other children have become quite affectionate with them. It's actually cute, seeing them try and act like you, reading from the Journey as they speak to their elders like innocent children" Kanzeon says happily

"That is one worry lifted from my mind, and how is liberty doing? Whose watching her?' You ask, your smile turning to a frown

"Luli. She needed some...less Dae-Hyun teaching and she was the only person who knows what we are who I'd considered suitable as an etiquette teacher. Liberty is still a little hellion with a foul mouth, who respects your son more than she does her sisters" Kanzeon says, in a way that tells you she is actually quite fond of her rude little sister "Of course I am, she's adorable when she isn't annoying"

That returned your smile to your face instantly.

"I should probably break up their fight soon, before one of them gets hurt" You say with an amused snort

"Eh, Anahita can always build herself a new body and the probability of her harming Angron accidentally is low" She stated simply "Like astronomically so, primarchs are built sturdy"
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>>5476977

"Even so, it is the proper thing to do, and I'd like to prevent their first impressions of one another being soiled by such a thing" You say with a gentle smile, and a reassuring hand on your beloved's shoulder "I'll be right back"
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"You didn't say there were more of them" Angron growled under his breath, a large, violet bruise on his cheek. Anahita stood beside him, grinning as Kanzeon silently scolded her with her glare, with more bruises on her tanned face than your brother and dried blood clinging to her upper lip

"It didn't seem pertinent to our discussion at the time" You say playfully, which brings a smile back to your brothers face

"Well, I have to give her my respect, she hits harder than any of the nailed Ogryn I've fought in my time" Angron said "I'd like to spar with her again, just not by surprise like this first time. It was unsporting"

"She was aiming for me" You cackle as Jinhai stands bored before you two, as his herald reads from the list of his titles and offices , deeds and accomplishments and the shortest part, the current lineage of his dynasty, even though Angron doesn't know much Long-Jian. You flash Jinhai a sympathetic smile, as he sits atop the Qilin you had gifted to him, which has recovered well from its torturous imprisonment by the dark ans villainous natured Aeldari. He returns it with a smirk of his own, as the herald continues his reading, his voice amplified by a small speaker he wears around his neck, disguised as a mundane if ornate locket.

Behind the emperor and his speaker, stood the whole army he had commanded to follow him through the webway. An army that included Astartes, Angra, and even Aeldari, wearing colors unfamiliar and seemingly unaligned to the two craftworlds you had encountered thus far, and clearly not of the same cloth as the raiders you crushed for daring to predate upon Shangrala's people and wildlife. Among them, are familiar faces. Yin Lei, Lai Song, and Dai Niu, as well as Tao Dandan and Old Man Shan. All four of the Kings of war and two of the Four Heavenly Geniuses have come to aid in your brother's war against the high riders. There could be no clearer sign of Long-Jia's committal to combating tyranny wherever it may be found.

Most of your sons were also in the formation raised from Shangrala, as well as the survivors of their accompanying regiments from Terra, who stood as bold and ready as ever to march into battle. The Terran natives, be they Astarte or normal man, were standing proud and tall, having now officially become the first of your father's legions to step upon two worlds beyond the homeworld of mankind. But, most of them were silent with awe, staring at the magnificent and imposing figure struck by two primarchs standing side by side one another, not even seeming to notice either Kanzeon or Anahita, also standing beside the both of you.
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>>5476979

Also joining the fray, were Bask knights, including Elazar himself, flying dignified banners of the chivalrous orders they belonged to. And There were also Shuni irregulars, lead by Qadif, the husband of Queen Aiza and King of the Shuni provinces, and small contingent of Zoroast volunteers, who stood beside the larger force of Angra soldiers, lead by one of the cousins of Arash, who seemed rather out of place and meek amongst the heroic legends and myths he found himself surrounded by,

And besides the three steel giants, who did not match Feng's earlier reports as Clayton was not amongst them but troop assignments change just as troop orders do, Dong was also not present and you can only assume he was kept on Shangrala as an allowance to the Aeldari who rule the webway, due to the effect her has on psionics, There were two complete Battalions of Iron Turtle tanks and a Full flock and a half of Steel bird fighters and bomber, as well as a stable of well bred war horses and pristine skipping clouds. Including your personal steed, whom you still remains nameless, despite his progeny bearing names of their own.

Besides the count of soldiers and vehicles, there were also crates of firearms and munitions, as well as the standard issue armor of the imperial Long Jian army, and enough medical supplies, water supplies and rations to keep two armies marching no matter how dire of circumstances they find themselves in.

Truly, the generosity of your home was peerless. It almost brought tears to your eyes looking upon it

"They're still listing off his titles?" Angron asked, clearly growing impatient with the wait to introduce himself to his new allies and to take an account of the supplies and men they have brought to him

"No, now they're listing the titles of the other noble parties present, and their accolades, after that, they shall move onto the individual regiments and the notable victories they have achieved" You explain

"The Long-Jian are a long winded people" Kanzeon said with a giggle

"They also diligently keep and update their records, which is quite admirable" Anahita says happily "They might be flowery and hoity-toity , but I've never met harder and more diligent workers!"

"That much was obvious the moment my brother came into my life" Angron laughed, causing the herald to glare at him with daggers in his eyes and pause his announcement for a moment to make his aghast and insulted shock apparent by reeling back as if he he had been slapped across the cheek "Can we move this one, we all have work to do, they should understand"

"Traditions are traditions, but Jinhai would understand" You say with a nod "In fact, he's been wondering the exact same thing"

"Don't need those special eyes of yours to tell that much" Anahita jokes, grinning as the herald continues on, as Jinhai slumps in his saddle and even Yin Lei begins to lose his patience with the extent of the introductions.

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>>5476980

When the herald has finally ran out of scroll to read from and breath with which to speak, you, alongside Jinhai and the veteran generals accompanying, show Angron the entirety of the Shangralan forces, though the few Aeldari present take care to hide their presence amongst your troops, seemingly content to observe the procession as outsiders. Carys is present, as is Folant and Kellas. Jinhai and Feng chat with Angron, with Feng interpretting as he has learned passable Nucerian during his stay on the planet by now. The three of them are getting along well. Dae-Hyun is at your side, politely silently until he is called upon to present his brothers both big and small to Angron, and stumbles on his words when speaking to a second primarch. Angron admires your sons, after hearing of their valor and fortitude in battle and war, and after hearing their stories seems to take a shine to them, accepting them as as warriors if not his nephews, despite his wariness of them as creations of your nameless father. Their accolades and accomplishments have won him over enough to trust them and accept them as fellow warriors, if nothing else.

And you know exactly how to win him over to them. He does not trust your father, from what he has heard of him from you and Magnus, but a select few of your sons, eleven in total, including Nikephoros and Dae-Hyun, have sworn to keep a secret from your father, a secret that Angron now shares.

And so, you covertly gather the twelve of them in the woods, sneaking away while the exact tally of the munitions and supplies being gifted are recounted per your request, and while Feng shows Jinhai and the three other kings of war the maps of the region so they can more accurately plan their troop movements as Kanzeon and Anahita's true bodies take to the skies of Nuceria, and stand amongst the clouds as equal to the world's own sun.

"Greetings, Genesire, and Honored Uncle whom now shares the secret we keep" One of them says, having already learned Nucerian by your brief tutoring, Surprising Angron

"Perkele! I can't believe we're the first space marines to meet not only our primarch, but another!' Another boasts, grinning ear to ear "It is an honor above any other"

"Calm yourselves" Dae-Hyun reprimands

"It is hard to be calm in the presence of two great men" Nikephoros muses beneath his helmet

"They know as well? Do all of your sons know?" Angron asked, curiously

"They will when they are ready" You state sagely

"When they are ready" Dae-Hyun repeats

"Some of our battle brothers may never be" Nikephoros adds sorrowfully "But, secrets are not meant to be spread far"
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>>5476982

"Though those who will share it with us, will be honored to be entrusted with such knowledge, for it shows we are trusted by our genesire enough to know not only that we have a mother, but what she is" Another states proudly, almost sounding as if he may cry "And there is no greater gift than that. To be a part of this hidden pact"

"A part of our primarchs own inner circle"

"They speak reverently of you, will my sons speak of me in the same way? I may only understand a little of what they have said, but I can tell they adore you, truly love you and look up to and respect you more than any other. I was worried their loyalty was implanted...controlled, like you and I were designed for a purpose. Will my sons look up to me, Lieren" Angron asked suddenly, interrupting the conversations of your sons "Despite my past and the things I have done to survive?"

"Perkele, that's..." Daedalus, the son who has learned the language of Nuceria says, hesitating and pausing as he ponders that hard question and feels all of its weight

What do you tell Angron, Lieren?

>Your past? Mine is more shameful, though it was a means to an end, I served a tyrant before I overthrew him. They will admire your perseverance, if they have half as much sense as the dullest of my own sons.

>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons

>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing

>Do not worry, they will be desperate to have your approval. My sons here are so euphoric and walk with such pride, because I have given it, freely and earnestly and they walk taller than most because I have given them a responsibility that shows the strength of my faith in them. If anything, you should worry your own sons will be so captivated by you, they seek to emulate you in all ways

>Write in
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>>5476984
>Do not worry, they will be desperate to have your approval. My sons here are so euphoric and walk with such pride, because I have given it, freely and earnestly and they walk taller than most because I have given them a responsibility that shows the strength of my faith in them. If anything, you should worry your own sons will be so captivated by you, they seek to emulate you in all ways
>And adhere to your words. When I had the option to impart a few words of the Journey, before meeting them in person, they splintered into groups. Even though I also had highlighted the importance of balance.
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>>5476984
>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons

>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing
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>>5477000
You know what? Also this
>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing
>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons
Let's not lie to Angron, even by omission.
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>>5476984

>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing

>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons
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>>5476984

>Write in
"We were crafted with purpose as were they uplifted. Our father did indeed place a little upon them but they are strong willed and cunning. While some loyalty may be felt like a many a son to his father it is how we treat one another, guide and learn from one another that will define your relationship. Like any Father and Son maybe you will have disagreements or argue but it is the measure of a man, a patriarch...a Primarch is revealed when he handles such matters.

I have seen you in battle and as close to peace as time has allowed, you will be a good father to them Angron"

>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons

>Now with the aid of Magnus set up a meeting for Angron to meet one of his sons, we need not pry but if he wishes to let him have that opportunity as we did.
[Also an excuse for a fun cut away]
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>>5476984

>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing

>Do not worry, they will be desperate to have your approval. My sons here are so euphoric and walk with such pride, because I have given it, freely and earnestly and they walk taller than most because I have given them a responsibility that shows the strength of my faith in them. If anything, you should worry your own sons will be so captivated by you, they seek to emulate you in all ways
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>>5476984
>>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons
>>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing
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>>5477000
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>>5476984
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>>5476984
>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing

>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons
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>>5476984
>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons
>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing
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>>5476984
>>Your past? Mine is more shameful, though it was a means to an end, I served a tyrant before I overthrew him. They will admire your perseverance, if they have half as much sense as the dullest of my own sons.
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>>5476984
>Daedalus
>That is a fear all fathers share.
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>>5476984
>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons
>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing

When we next have a opportunity we should have Lieren go over the details of what happened on Shangrala while he was gone, then possibly use divination and/or astral projection to further investigate while still on Nuceria.
Rogue rapidly evolving and hostile science experiments seems a bit similar to skaven and maybe GHR is just hiding like a coward like Hashut was.
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>>5476984
>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons
>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing
Good good
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>>5476984
>>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons
>>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing
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>>5476984
>That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing

How would the space marines know which legion is angrons?
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>>5478655
They might not know, but Lieren might be able to deduce which Legion was spawned from Angron's genes if our Inner Circle can provide sufficiently detailed descriptions of each Legion.
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>>5478655
>How would the space marines know which legion is angrons?
Gene-seed fuckery can lead a Space Marine to look just like their Primarch.
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>>5478655
Each legion is numbered as long as we know Angron's the 12th we can connect him back to the war hounds
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>>5478682
Space maury show
Its just every primarch sitting in a row in huge chairs and a video of the astarte
You are not the father
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>>5476984
Total Votes: 33
Total Voters: 16

>Your past? Mine is more shameful 1

>Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? 12

>That is a fear all fathers share. 13

>Do not worry, they will be desperate to have your approval. 3

Write-in:
>And adhere to your words. When I had the option to impart a few words of the Journey, before meeting them in person, they splintered into groups. Even though I also had highlighted the importance of balance. 2

>"We were crafted with purpose as were they uplifted. Our father did indeed place a little upon them but they are strong willed and cunning. 1

>Now with the aid of Magnus set up a meeting for Angron to meet one of his sons, we need not pry but if he wishes to let him have that opportunity as we did. 1
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>>5480652
And thanks as always for the assistance

So Lieren will tell his brother "That is a fear all fathers share. And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts, though your fears are unfounded. I had found evidence of such alterations myself, namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome. Though I could not see the purpose of such a thing" and then ask his son "Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from his genetic template? And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them? Surely veterans of the terran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons"

Writing now
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"That is a fear all fathers share" You state with utmost certainty and belief in the words you speak, continuing on from where your son trailed off, providing the answer he could not grasp due to the circumstances of his life and the experiences it has lead him to and the common wisdom of the lives of ordinary men thus denied to him by his ascension and remaking as your son and augmented warrior of your father's legions. A delicate, considerate silence falls, as your sons reflect on your words and Angron contemplates them. Their continued quiet is a sign of approval and agreement with the seemingly humble statement you have made with as much boldness as a declaration of war or battlefield command. Turning, you look upon your brother's eyes and meet his stare and he meets yours, without showing the slightest sign of discomfort or pain upon being exposed by your heart piercing study.

"And you were right to worry about tampering of their thoughts" You say, much quieter, barely a whisper, slight enough your powerful voice may be lost beneath the comparative clamor of the rustling of leaves and meandering of the wind. Angron's eyes narrow, as he recognizes immediately the importance of the words to follow, by how conspiratorially and warily you speak their predecessors to them. And you can see how quickly his wariness grows and strengthens, darkening towards paranoia due to the suspicions he already holds towards your father and the circumstances of his own birth.

"Though your fears are unfounded" You state, slightly louder, to try and relax Angron's nerves and keep his temper from flaring and leading him to make unfound assumptions

"Then why would you mention it to begin with?" He asks simply, not accusing nor suspicious, merely deeply curious "Do you think it's a danger presented by the others? That their minds have been molded or perverted in some manner? We are speaking of brainwashing, are we not? Mental conditioning like...well I don't have to say, do I?."

Others. Other brothers. Other nephews. Other Kin. You frown, understanding implicitly the implication of Angron's hushed question.

"I had found evidence of such alterations myself" You explain, nodding your head, seeing the slight increase in your brother's heart rate by the near imperceptible reddening of his skin around his eyes and throat, and the sharp breath of air he takes "namely an implanted xenophobia that I helped my sons overcome"

"Xenophobia?" Angron blurts out, clearly having expected something much more concerning than that

"A shameful belief our genesire helped us overcome" Daedalus helpfully explains "That we still held to it, despite professing ourselves followers and believers of his world-view, still weighs heavily upon my soul. It is an affliction of the mind that still haunts my younger brothers on Terra, if they were as Ox headed as us veterans were even after receiving the gifts of our father's writing"

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>>5480910

"I suppose that makes sense" Angron grumbles "Our father has dreams of conquering the stars, an easier task when one's elite soldiers are taught to hate the other, the alien, the unknown. A pragmatic decision, though, I cannot agree with it. One's thoughts should be their own, and certainly what one hates should be their own decision, not their master's"

"Personally, I could not see the purpose of such a thing" You say with a blithe shrug and harmless smile

"That is because you, despite your expertise as making men destroy themselves or ending their lives personally, believe the best of others and would sooner seek understanding than destruction. Its one reason I've become fond of you. You're the sort of warrior who'd much rather be commanding a plow rather than a sword" He answers with a slight twitch of the corner of his lip, a fond smile in his expressions "Of course your find Xenophobia purposeless, I wouldn't be surprised if you'd seek parlay with an actual inhuman threat, if such things exist"

You smile remains, but your eyes darken knowing the truths that you have witnessed and the inhuman enemies you have met with scorn and bottomless hatred

"Of course" is what you choose to say in response "Have my words at all assuaged your fears, Angron?"

"They have done enough, Lieren" Angron says kindly, patting your on the shoulder after some hesitation as if he is afraid the contact will hurt you "And I appreciate them, I truly do. Despite how odd you can be, I value your wisdom"

"Thank you, but such praise is wasted on one as humble as I" You titter, shaking your head before bowing it slightly, before a thought occurs to your "Daedalus, tell me, do you know of the legion risen from my brother's genetic template?"

Your son looks back to Dae-Hyun and Nikephoros, as a younger brother often will when seeking the guidance or assistance from his elders. The other eight stand firm though clearly are devoting as much thought as answering your question as the remaining three of the eleven. You had, after all, asked Daedalus directly, and it'd be going against your command and wishes if any of them spoke. So you decided to fix that issue

"And if not you, then do any of you know of them or have fought beside them?" You appended, turning of your hand and reaching out to them "Surely veterans of the Teran wars would have met them at least once. You've told him stories of yourselves, why not share a few of his own sons"

"Unfortunately, Pater" Dae-Hyun sighed heavily "We are all unaware of which legion is connected to which Primarch, beyond you and Uncle Mag, we only know Angron and Perturabo, and even those three we have no idea which uh, Primarch they were"

"He speaks the truth, we only know them by their nicknames or number, though some of them we count as our brothers" Nikephoros said proudly, thumping his chest once "Though, the geneseed could provide a means for us to ascertain which legion belongs to this uncle"
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>>5480911

"That's true, that's true" Duck-Young rumbles, pinching at his beard as he turns his eyes skyward "By his looks alone, we could narrow down the list to a handful of the other legions, perhaps even so far as to make it a question between two"

"And if we take into account his personality, habits and natural talents and ability, figuring this out will take a matter of moments, if we contemplate it deeply enough" Toivo confidently brags, as the eleven of your most trusted of your sons begin their discussion, sitting down, huddling together and debating and arguing as you and your brother are left out of the discussion as the spacemarines chatter in the Terran dialect of gothic.

"They certainly act like brothers" Angron remarks, tapping his foot somewhat impatiently "And not what I'd expect from profesional soldiers"

"They remind you more of your brother and sisters raised in the fighting pits?" You ask as Angron smiles but says nothing. You notice Dae-Hyun is standing, and not partaking of the discussion, just crossing his arms and furrowing his brow as he listens intently to their conversation. Before, suddenly his eyes shot open as he was struck by sudden realization

"Fourteenth Captain of the 12th Legiones Astartes, Yazid Khalid" He spoke in awe as he turned to Angron, who reeled as he heard the name of his son, even if he did not fully grasp what had been said due to the language barrier between him and Dae-Hyun

"I've heard of Yazid before, a personal son of Dae-Hyun. And I have heard tales of the 12th legion before" You whisper to your brother "They are known amongst their allies and enemies as the War Hounds"

"And are they my sons?" Angron asked wistfully

You shrugged

"If Dae-Hyun is correct" You answer

"I am positive" He bellowed, sounding like he was once more in the iron coffin of the dreadnaught he had shed "I've fought alongside the twelfth, and Yazid especially, to recognize them in him. Besides the 2nd, the 12th are known for their brotherly comradery. It is half the reason they are called War hounds"

and the other half is their capability to commit violence and merciless savagery upon their enemies when they were rarely sent to the field of your father's war to unify Terra. Constantly training and improving themselves in preparation for battle. You had listened closely to every story your sons told you, but had never connected them to the three brothers you had truly met, since before Angron, none of the legions your own sons have told you of had resembled Magnus or Perturabo. Certainly not the 3rd or 1st, which had led you to believe your were, currently, the eldest amongst the brothers whom had found eachother.

But, thinking back on it, you can now see the similarities between Angron and the stories of the War Hounds. Their deep bonds in their legion must be a result of a lesser form of his empathetic ability, heightening the already strong bonds of brotherhood and comradery between Astartes.
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>>5480913

"Then, tell their tales of glory and victory, and the stories of their bitter last stands and defeat to their father" You say quietly, bowing respectfully and cupping your hands "I have heard them all before, and it would feel...impolite to intrude upon Angron's first impressions of his sons and the battles they have fought in his absence

"There is no need for that!" Angron himself barks

"Courtesy dictates" You begin to argue, believing that he deserves privacy in matters such as this, feeling that it'd be denying him something vital if you were present as he heard of the martial history of his sons and the best amongst them, even though you had already recorded such stories to your memory

"To hell with Courtesy!" He then Bellowed, grabbing you by your shoulder and all but forcing you to the ground with him "You're staying"

"I am staying" You laugh along with your sons, who would've once bristled at the roughness Angron had shown to you. But, you do make an unspoken promise to yourself to remain silent, so as not to interfere with your brother's opinion or perception of his sons.

What do you do, after Your sons have finished telling Angron tales of the War Hound's deeds, Lieren?

>Return with him, and your fellow Shangralans, and introduce them to his rebellion and welcome Feng's students into the fold of the brothers of the panther and introduce the brothers to the beggar sect

>Take Angron aside, and privately discuss an idea you had, involving him, Magnus, and Perturabo. A dream, of the four of you brothers, and hopefully the sixteen others, working together closely. An Exchange program between your legions...

>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother

>Ask Kanzeon and Anahita if they'd be willing to give the high riders a demonstration of their firepower, come the next battle between them and Angron

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>>5480915
>Take Angron aside, and privately discuss an idea you had, involving him, Magnus, and Perturabo. A dream, of the four of you brothers, and hopefully the sixteen others, working together closely. An Exchange program between your legions...
>Ask Kanzeon and Anahita if they'd be willing to give the high riders a demonstration of their firepower, come the next battle between them and Angron
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>>5480915
>Take Angron aside, and privately discuss an idea you had, involving him, Magnus, and Perturabo. A dream, of the four of you brothers, and hopefully the sixteen others, working together closely. An Exchange program between your legions...
>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother.

We need to keep working the Eldar threads and not fall behind on them. Plus given we just sorted the Xenophobia angle we can expand naturally from there.
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>>5480915
>Discuss exchange
>Speak with Carys
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>>5480915
>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother
>Return with him, and your fellow Shangralans, and introduce them to his rebellion and welcome Feng's students into the fold of the brothers of the panther and introduce the brothers to the beggar sect
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>>5480915
>>Return with him, and your fellow Shangralans, and introduce them to his rebellion and welcome Feng's students into the fold of the brothers of the panther and introduce the brothers to the beggar sect
>>Take Angron aside, and privately discuss an idea you had, involving him, Magnus, and Perturabo. A dream, of the four of you brothers, and hopefully the sixteen others, working together closely. An Exchange program between your legions...
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>>5480915
>>Return with him, and your fellow Shangralans, and introduce them to his rebellion and welcome Feng's students into the fold of the brothers of the panther and introduce the brothers to the beggar sect
>>Take Angron aside, and privately discuss an idea you had, involving him, Magnus, and Perturabo. A dream, of the four of you brothers, and hopefully the sixteen others, working together closely. An Exchange program between your legions...
>>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother
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>>5480915
>Return with him, and your fellow Shangralans, and introduce them to his rebellion and welcome Feng's students into the fold of the brothers of the panther and introduce the brothers to the beggar sect
>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother
>Inquire into the details of what has happened on Shangrala while you were gone, if anything truly concerning is discovered then use psykerism to try and get a better understanding of what is occurring on Shangrala without leaving Nuceria.

Lieren should be able to astral project to Shangrala without time distortion nonsense occurring and he could just zoom around the trouble spots and inform others of what he finds who are still on planet if necessary.
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>>5480915
>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother
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>>5480915
>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother
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>>5480915
>>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother
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>>5480915
>Take Angron aside, and privately discuss an idea you had, involving him, Magnus, and Perturabo. A dream, of the four of you brothers, and hopefully the sixteen others, working together closely. An Exchange program between your legions...
>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother

Whgat brothers do we throw aside? I worry deeply.
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>>5480915
>>Take Angron aside, and privately discuss an idea you had, involving him, Magnus, and Perturabo. A dream, of the four of you brothers, and hopefully the sixteen others, working together closely. An Exchange program between your legions...
>Return with him, and your fellow Shangralans, and introduce them to his rebellion and welcome Feng's students into the fold of the brothers of the panther and introduce the brothers to the beggar sect

not voting for the following but didn't we already get a answer for that?

>>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother
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>>5480915
>>Return with him, and your fellow Shangralans, and introduce them to his rebellion and welcome Feng's students into the fold of the brothers of the panther and introduce the brothers to the beggar sect
>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother
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>>5480915
>>Take Angron aside, and privately discuss an idea you had, involving him, Magnus, and Perturabo. A dream, of the four of you brothers, and hopefully the sixteen others, working together closely. An Exchange program between your legions...
>>Meet with Carys and Folant, and ask them why they and the other Aeldari are being so cautious around your brother.
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The Council of Ulthwe was in an uproar and all Eldard could do at this point was focus his mind about the buzzing arguments and posturing. Only shortly after Lieren had left it seemed as if every Exarch upon their home had stormed into the hallowed chambers demanding to face the primarch.

“I shall cut him down as surly as any Mon-keigh upstarts! Such is the Scorpions duty to hunt down our enemies!” bellowed the green armoured Caerbyn, but Elrad saw we the scorpion to go on this chase he'd have his claws torn from his body before he could land a strike.

“Nay! It is the duty of Kaines' daughters to strike down this so called Fate Breaker” shrieked normally so quiet Meneris as she thumbed her sheathed blades...Eldards' eyes strained tighter closed as he saw Lieren simply remove her head with a flick of his wrist.

On and on it went, futures appearing before him, strands showing the deaths of so many Aeldari at the monk like Primarchs' hand yet it seemed nigh always in defence. Finally it was to much and he stamped his staff hard upont he ground letting his power flow freely for but a moment quieting the hall.

“I know you all fear this son of their Emperor but hear me, while I do not put full belief behind this Eightfold Path turned inward and Denounced which infects our youngest it has done something but a decade ago seen as impossible, a path unseen by all of us.”

“But Lord Uthran! You ca-” an Avenger bagan before silencing himself when the ancient Farseer simply looked at him.

“He restored Arianka to existance;God reborn. Even the rising of the fifth darkness. Lieren told no lie when he was here and I glanced back...he did set eyes upon Isha herself in that fetid garden.”

All were silent.

“The Hunter of Shangrala's story is a grimly familiar one, maybe some cosmic joke by the universe but I tell you this now. While Lieren is a possible threat to us...especially those whom linger in the webways in their depraved state he also could be something more. I will not call him saviour for we shall forge our own way but as he builds his road he may yet unearth more of our past...and just maybe we might glimpse the divine again.”

Murmuring spread, then more shouts...the ruckas began anew but Elrad let it be for atleast now they were taking it outside once more until finally it was but a distant buzz.

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“You sung high praise for him” another farseer spoke quietly “-you speak of a great good he can do but tell us, what if things take a turn for the ill?”

“Lieren is a creature of discipline, order...pragmatic and when needed ruthless beyond imagining.”

Elrad glanced forward centuries in but a moment feeling a whirlwind of emotions before opening his eyes once more.

“If we strike at him and manage to slay him then three brothers will lay siege to our kinds homes and I was say it plain...we die in flames, the Infinity circuits crumble and they who lurk gain back the champions snatched away.”

He frowns

“and if we strike at them and not lieren or even fail to slay him...then a far grimmer fate awaits than simple death-”

the most venerable of the Farseers living looks about the Council Hall as future overlays with present... bones, blood and a a mountain of gems. All being taken, ground to dust for the Second Son is seldom in letting resources go to waste. They would be harvested down body and soul to fuel the Journey, their blood mortar, their bones brick....of their souls he would not speak.

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Eldar content always good. We'll find you Stag boy!

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"xenophobia is bad"

Big E was partly right since they did try to screw over humanity during-after the men of iron rebellion (some say a certain xeno race made that happen) so hating on them is justify to his pov.

It's just that many good xeno that could help out humanity was killed along with those that wish it harm.
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>>5480915
I'll add to my original vote
>Inquire into the details of what has happened on Shangrala while you were gone, if anything truly concerning is discovered then use psykerism to try and get a better understanding of what is occurring on Shangrala without leaving Nuceria.

Votes: 28
Total Voters: 14

>Return with him, and your fellow Shangralans 6

>Take Angron aside, and privately discuss an idea you had, involving him, Magnus, and Perturabo. 8

>Meet with Carys and Folant 11

>Ask Kanzeon and Anahita if they'd be willing to give the high riders a demonstration 1

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>Inquire into the details of what has happened on Shangrala while you were gone 2
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Time: Early M31
Location: Istvaan System, Istvaan 3, Aboard the Flagship of the Second Legion the "The Prosperous Spirit".

From the personal archives of the remembrancer seconded to the 211th Expiditiary Fleet.

" I do not know how long I have left to live. I am leaving this message in the hopes that somebody hears the last words of a man who lays here trying to build up the courage to take his own life. I will not let myself be taken and my mind and soul twisted by the lies of the enemy. It all began in the Choral. Astartes from almost all the legions gathered to participate in a competition of martial excellence. I attended to sketch the combatants. All was fine until the sky ignited. Colors I had never seen before, bestial shapes that caused my one remaining organic eye to bulge and bleed, sensations I had only felt at the very heights of my many manic flow states. All was calm until all these occurred at once causing me to collapse. I remember when it happened. One moment Argel Tal was being congratulated by a member of the sanguinary guard for his victory over a blood angels champion and the next he was stabbed through the heart by a dark crystalline blade. I never saw the attacker but all at once Astartes from all the legions started to collapse either from wounds inflicted by unknown assailants or from psychic attacks I lack the words to describe. Somehow with each death, the world seemed to become less real and somehow more painful. And with the pain came a voice of both spine-chilling beauty and bone-grinding masculinity whispering and screaming at me to take my own life or someone else's to alleviate the pain. I have lived my entire adult life under the teachings of the 2nd legion and I will not betray them even to save my own life. The pain is more than physical it is a piercing burning cold thing that does not force me to do anything but feel malice toward it. I will not give into despair, bloodlust, release, or hope that I will survive this. Let these words be what define me. Death is nothing, Life is nothing, and pain is an illusion. There is the only truth. May my journey continue in my next life. Hail humanity and the Second Legion. Humanity Protects.
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Time: Mid M36
Location: Ghoul Stars, Aboard the Battle Barge "Qillin of the Void", Deepest Depths of the Ships Reliquary.

"Awaken oh ancient and venerable one. The legion has need of you once more. Awaken from your dream-filled slumber and defend humanity once more." Brother Castasan of 2nd legions 3rd company 5th assault squad was jarred from his long memories. He was there. He was there when his brothers were slain on those black sands. Just another trooper of the line hoping to prove himself worthy of promotion through martial ability against one of the fourth legion. He and his opponent had just been about to conclude their bout in a draw when the unthinkable happened. His opponent had had his head removed from his shoulders while he had his dominant heart impaled. He remembered crawling along those swords towards a land speeder. The next he was older. His armored scarred yet adorned in marks of distinction for his service. He remembered being aboard the Fidelitas Lex and watching his father hunt that cowering wretch Lorgar through his own ship. One moment he was delivering the killing blow to some nameless word bearer and the next that word bearer mutated into some looming creature I only had the fainted idea what it might be through whispers overheard from the highest chains of command. I remembered being carved in half by two of such creatures after killing the first one. I was offered the chance to live on by my squad's apothecary and I took it. I awoke in a body of metal that's only equal were those wielded by the emperor's custodians. Father always did provide for his sons. "Why was I awakened? Is it time to once more bring the word of Lieran?" Venerable and Ancient one we have awakened you for your knowledge of the enemy. For we face an empire of humanity corrupted by the false teachings of the 17th legion. "I understand. Come brothers let us show these worms that truth is the superior of faith in all things".
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Calling the vote. Sorry for the long wait. Had a bad case of the blues. Will make a new thread next update or the one after, probably, unless I encounter difficulties again.

>>5484799
Thanks for the assist, I really, truly appreciate it.

So Lieren will Take Angron aside and privately discuss his idea, then return to his army with the Shangralan reinforcements before meeting with Carys and Folant to raise the question of their caution around your brother.
Writing now

>>5481873
>>5481875
I really, really enjoyed this. Fantastic work.

>>5484838
Spooky, I also enjoyed this

>>5485734
And I enjoyed this one even more
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"What are you doing, still lurking around like my own shadow?" Angron asked as you approached him as he began to leave the forest where your sons had met with the both of you and told him of the brave warriors whom are most likely his gene-sons "Do not tell me you have another secretive meeting planned, too mysterious even for the most trusted of your own sons"

"Oh, nothing of the sort, I did not approach you before they returned to see to their duty and carry out their responsibilities as leaders of their battle brothers, simply for efficiencies sake. The march back to your forces will take slightly longer if they do not prepare now" You explain with a warm, brotherly smile as you walked beside your brother, who slowed his pace, anticipating a long, ponderous discussion

"Then what did you want to discuss? Surely if pragmatism is on your mind, surely you wouldn't waste time strolling through the woods with me, or talking about something meaningless" he correctly guessed

"Right you are, brother. I simply thought now would be the best time to prepose to your a proposition of sorts. See, I've had a vision of our future, not only yours or mine, but Magnus' and Perturabo's, and all the yet nameless brothers scattered across the stars yet beyond your reach" You explain excitedly, hands folded away in the sleeves of your robes

"Well, what would you suggest, haven't given me bad advice yet" Angron said after a moment of thought

"I'd offer, to each you, Magnus, and Perturabo, when we are reunited in full totality an agreement that all four of us and our legions of sons would only benefit from" You proclaim, lashing your arm outward as you step atop a rock, Angron frowns

"You're thinking that far ahead into the future?" He asked, with some disbelief and skepticism "We still have to slaughter the high riders and free Nuceria"

"A simple task, even if it were just you and I" You state confidently "And I often plan far ahead, if one does not set the first stones of their path forward, they will find taking it much more difficult than it has to be"

"Hmm, I suppose you have a point" Angron grumbles as you stand on one foot atop the boulder, balancing on a single toe "Thought still seems rather foolish from my point of view. Our enemy is still right in front of us, after all, but say your peace, Lieren"

"Well, all of the brothers I have met, they have learned from me and I have learned from them. Together, by consolidating our knowledge, expertise and experiences, we have been able to refine and develop ourselves further than we otherwise could have" You begin

"Like my psyker training" he notes, nodding his head

"Precisely! And meeting so closely and as the brothers we are, has allowed us to view the world from new perspectives" You continue on, switching to you other foot as you spread your arms out

"And you wouldn't offer something already given" your brother ponders, rubbing his chin

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"It'd be most inefficient to do so" You chuckle, smirking as he closes his eyes to think

"Considering when you approached me, I have to guess this concerns our gene-sons, as they call themselves" He said, turning over his hand, but keeping his eyes tightly closed.

"Correct!" You exclaim, clapping your hands together and leaping into the air, using cloud walking to levitate in place with your legs crossed, purely for theatrics sake

"An exchange of soldiers, to train with others and thus expand their skill-set and broaden their battlefield experience" Your brother once again, correctly surmise "A good idea, as simple as it is. They'd bring back what they learned, and teach it to their fellows, benefiting the whole rather only the development of the individual soldier. Clever"

"And, as they mingle, it'd improve relations between the legions" You say, floating in the air beside your brother as he returns to the staging ground of the Shangralan reinforcements "Strengthening and creating bonds of brotherhood across the whole of the legions and thus the whole of the galactic army, if the other legions treat the mundane rank file with as much respect, care and equality as my own sons would"

"Once I'm given my legion, I'll consider this offer, but I shall not promise something I do not yet hold" Angron said with a tone that told you he had already accepted your offer, though he wished to seem as if he was still on the fence, to encourage you to work harder to make your dream a reality "Do you think Magnus and Perturabo would join in this exchange? The inter-force training would be much more effective and worthwhile to devout my soldiers to, if there was a wider pool of mentors and experts and a more varied field of disciplines and techniques to teach and learn"

"Magnus will. and I am sure Perturabo will join as well, if only for the benefits it shall bring his own army" You answer without a second thought "And of course, they would not only learn the art of war and martial skills, I've been encouraging my sons to pursue and learn more peaceable crafts and talents, to awaken the sleeping artists and poets in their soul"

"Hmm, I suppose I should as well, if only to deny our father will-less tools of war"Angron mused outloud, kicking a stone ahead of himself "Though I'd first need to study the arts myself, teach these hands of mine to create instead of just kill and destroy"

"I'd be more than overjoyed to assist you in the endeavor to train your creativity, brother" You say with a deep, belly laugh "Though, I would describe your sheer talent as a warrior as an art in of itself"

"Don't sell yourself short, you aren't half bad yourself. Still need to see which of us is the better fighter though" He laughed right along side you

"When the high riders fall" You promise

"When the high riders fall" He repeats with a solemn nod.
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"Gods be good! They found an entire army of giants out there!" One of the gladiators raised by the ancient, and now dead sage by the name of Kyngios gawked, drawing Oenomaus attention from his sparring partner, who, as expected of a gladiator raised in the fighting pits of Desh'ea immediately took advantage of his momentary distraction to try and crack the veteran fighter's skull open with his blunted sword. Oenomaus caught the swinging sword in his armpit, tossed its wielder to the ground and with well practiced movements, placed his own dull blade against his throat, and forced the wind out of his chest with a solid stomp. Forcing a yield with a glare, he let the cocky bastard go, and then gave his attention to other man, who, along with his own partner, one of the mysterious old men who hid their faces with hoods and and tight masks of cloth, was looking to the horizon.

As were the rest of the soldiers scheduled to train from morning to midday, before being allowed their meals and rest to give their bodies time to recuperate and encourage the growth of the muscles they'd need to tear the high riders limb from limb. Cybernetics could only do so much, and fire arms and other advance weaponry didn't scratch the same sort of itch as beheading or chopping apart someone whom you truly despised with all of your heart and breath.

Oenomaus dropped his sword for the first time in his long career as a fighter, as he saw the sky darken as if the sun had been swallowed hole. He knew it hadn't, but his mind could not comprehend what happened. It was if the whole sky had been replaced with a sea of liquid metal! Of glittering gold and shining silver! It flowed like water and filled the skies, hiding the clouds and covering the sun. The world became as might, as his tightly clenched jaw loosened and his arms fell slack. Following protocol, the non combatants of the freed men army fled to safety at the first sound of alarm, but none of the warriors moved. Mostly because the scarred man, who spoke like Angron's brother, seemed more pleased than ready to fight at the sight of the day being taken away.

There was a rush of wind! An ear splitting shriek, as massive birds flew over head, performing aerial acrobatics like hawks in dance or hunt, diving and soaring through the mountain pass where the army had set up its camp, waiting for the return of the two giant brothers. Yet, Oenomaus did not feel threatened, he was certainly surprised and more than a little frightened simply by being met with something his mind could not understand immediately, but his warrior instinct told him there was no danger present. Some of the new soldiers, who had not been gladiators in their old life or not very good ones, fled to join the non combatants in hiding away from the swooping, titan birds, that Oenomaus saw were also made of metal.
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But, he noticed the scarred man was now hopping around, hooting and hollering and moving with an almost manic energy. So the old gladiator remained where he stood, content to watch the event transpire, even if it was terrifying to know nothing of what was going on.

The birds lopped back into the air, and released their enchantment, allowing his eyes to fall back to the earth, and see the army of giants the other men around him had been shouting at. And they were giants. Smaller than Lieren or Angron, and dressed in a queer sort of armor, colored to match their surroundings except the armor of the wrists and gauntlets, which were painted much more vividly and with different sorts of colors. Some held shields and spears of solid light in their hands, others had lines of blue fire running throughout their suit gathering in certain places as miniature stars, many others held more familiar but still bizarre weapons in their hands and others yet road upon what seemed to be some kind of personal vehicle, without treads, wheels or anything else to move it forward or keep it off of the ground, yet it still moved and did not fall as they skipped and flew with a supernatural grace. As the army of giants marched, shimmering lights cascade down their bodies, flickering as the rain fell upon them and as they grew nearer, He could see they all wore masks that hid away their faces entirely, and some began to leap and soar through the air, as if they were flying before they fell back to the ground and skipped up into the air again

There is a terrible, grinding roar, as dozens of these armored, mask wearing giants raise up their arms and the teeth on their edge whir! as if they were living creatures snarling and gnashing their teeth in anticipation of the kill! While others, surrounded by a halo of white blue light, burned and sizzled brightly with a dull, foreboding hum that felt more dangerous to Oenomaus than the feral yell of their metal toothed counterparts

At the front of this host, road his son, and his brother, who was astride a horse larger than any lion he had seen! So large it could carry an ogryn on its back and still have weight left for cargo! And that was proven by the beauty behind him, another giant! A female giant with eyes like green gemstone, and long, flowing black hair, who seemed from her dress and manner to be noble and unfit for war. Another giant marched confidently beside them, darker skinned than the first woman, and much more brazen and confident. Angron was riding another horse, with surprising skill, as he had never road a horse prior to this day to his knowledge.
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And there were other, lesser men, dressed like Lieren or his scarred man, who road as if they were the equals of the four giants. And behind the army of lesser giants, giant birds, was a row of floating tanks, with massive guns unlike anything Oenomaus had seen or dreamt of, and strange, metallic insects larger than most men, flitting back and forth, inspecting the floating hulks of metal and the armor of the soldiers both great and small in front of them.

There were dozes of banners flying amongst the strange army, all garishly colored and overly intricately designed and few of the symbols or creatures gracing them were familiar to him, and those that were...were wrong. A bearded turtle with two long tails on russet flags, Three headed snakes on aquamarine, a horse of sky blue, a many tailed fox on gold and white, Some foreign flowering branch on dark purple and blood red, bolts of lightning and a storm cloud on pitch black beside a cloud on spotless white cloth, some kind of bird that must be fantasy with the beauty of its feathers on pink, some kind of strange insect like snake on cream and lavender, more foreign flowers on green, and the four largest of all, a strange, scaled monster holding a spear on blue and pink, a multi colored flower on white, black and gold, the number two, and a collection of the silver hiding white furs of the things Lieren and his companion call "Cats".

And then, other flags were flown, held by soldiers dressed neither like Lieren, the other giants or any culture upon Nuceria, much more tattered and low quality than the dancing, flowing cloths proudly held by the strangers, though they were born with no shame or humiliation. And there were other, lesser banners, of different designs and styles, One in particular seemed to evoke flames and had three birds fighting over the bones of some monstrous creature. Some which Oenomaus' keens eyes noticed were painted or carved onto the surface of the armor of the soldiers, their fantastical and surely magical war machines or simply glowing in the air, following the army like mist.

And then came the true giants, with metal skin and blazing eyes, they dominated the horizon and there were but three

"I...I thought that was as big as he was going to get" Oenomaus wearily thought out loud, his thoughts blurred and only witnessing the procession through a dreamlike veil. He could still barely understand what he was seeing, but he knew what they were. They were the soldiers and supplies Lieren had promised his brother when he had first revealed himself.

It was then he noticed a great banner he had missed in the excitement, yellow and red, depictting a bird, flown besides tanks with strange cannons attached to them.

Then the sky shook, as explosions filled the air and paradoxically dark light pierced the heavens.

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"Dandan!" You bellowed, scolding Lady Tao as she laughed manically as she began her orchestra and terrified Angron's people just to show off
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"Holy shit!" Your brother gasped, before a wicked sneer crawled over his lips "Oh I can't wait to use those against the high riders, what are they"

"Oh, are you talking about my babies?" Tao Dandan said excitedly, eyes crazed with glee even as you held her in the air by the back of her robe

"Hmm, commendable discipline, I would praise your brother for raising such stern and fine soldiers, Lieren of nothing" Yin Lei remarked.

"Guessing we're dealing with enemies with similar fire power, usually bumpkins run when they here the traditional Tao Dandan greeting" Lai Song joked

"Uncle, I would ask your permission to meet with the generals under Angron of Nuceria's command" Yin Delun asked humbly

"I would escort your nephew, of course, Sir Yin" Dai Nui stated as you set the master demolitionist down on the ground and slipped off your horse, and moved unseen through your own army as Anahita laughed and Kanzeon pinched her nose in frustration

"Greetings, Lieren" Carys whispered, as you found her hiding amongst the Ursine guard along with Folant "I knew you'd seek me out for a private talk sooner or later"

"As is the nature of a curious man" The ranger beside he remarked "its been too long, great teacher"

"You then must know why I've come" You state plainly

"Your ancient bride informed us of your worry, based on the caution we hold towards your brother" Carys whispered "So we shall reveal the cause"

"Your brother has killed Aeldari" Folant continues with a drawl, very New varro of him.

"So have I" You reply "but that sheds more light on Eldrad's initial unwillingness to assist me in this endeavor, favoring the lives of aeldari over others as he does. As many of the craftworlds do. I was unaware he had met other intelligent species before, yet alone your fair race, though I presume they were of the darker cut of cloth, such as the slavers I have slain"

"More because, this is not the first time our kind has tried to avert the future they foretell for him" Carys says quietly, almost guiltily as if she herself had something to do with the bloodshed they speak of now "Destiny, the salve of fools"

Ice forms where you stand, and black smoke curls from your nostrils as you narrow your eyes, fists tightening and drawing blood from your palms, clenching into fists so forcefully pressed you can feel and hear your bones creaking beneath your flesh.

"I see, an assassination attempt. A clear picture draws itself in my mind. Those foolish soothsayers and prophets are the ones who lead to him being captured and enslaved. How else could a primarch be caught, if they were not already bloodied" You say with a quiet menace

"Utter fools. They should've known killing one of the children of the gesalt would've been no easy task" Folant spat, sharing your anger

"if it brings you any comfort, I would have given you there names if he had not killed them with his own hands" Carys snarls, nearly feral with contempt, her pretty face drawn into a furious grimace.
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>>5486577

"But I doubt the one who gave the orders to snuff out his innocent life were amongst the dead" You hiss through your teeth

"Your words are kinder than the ones spoken by your bonded" Carys said guiltily "Though none the less passionate, her language was much...cruder and colorful"

"Of course I'd be pissed off to hear you Eldar carried out such a colossal fuckup" Kanzeon said with a fake cheerfulness as she appeared by your side "This is second only to the creation of the eye of terror, in my opinion. The only reason I didn't march back to Ulthwe to kick Eldrad in his ass for keeping quiet about that particular detail. And all the seer council!"

"He was right to be cautious, but I'd be lying if I said this did not sour my memory of our meeting" You mutter under your breath "So you worry he'd remember his assailants"

"And die gruesomely, yes" Cary said cheerfully "I may not fear death, but I'd prefer a less painful one"

"And we haven't had a reason to seek him out" Folant said with a smirk

"Coward" Kanzeon huffed, half teasingly "See why I don't like most Eldar yet?"

"I always have, I just don't agree with your reasoning" You say innocently

"You know that was rhetorical" Kanzeon sighed, smiling as she grabbed your hand

"And Most Eldar?" You teased, deciding to quell your anger as it had no target or direction to it, with your brother having at least slain those who were foolishly bold enough to take on the misguided and villainous command given to them

"I like the ones who've realized their society and its rules are stupid, and follow you like puppies" Kanzeon admitted

"What a high honor!' Carys sarcastically

What do you do now, Lieren

>Introduce Angron to the Shangralan leaders and generals and defer to his command, and explain to his army the tools you bring are not magical.

>Explain to Angron his past with the Aeldari, and show him that not all Aeldari are out to kill him

>Contact Eldrad via Wind whispering and give him an earful for his deception

>Offer Angron armor and weaponry like those you wear and wield.

>Write in
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>>5486580
>Explain to Angron his past with the Aeldari, and show him that not all Aeldari are out to kill him
"Remember what I said about Xenophobia? Well time for a live practice! Remember just as many men are good just so is true for others among the stars. So don't let the memories that may well flood back taint what you know now." Make ready to intercept him if it looks like it could get bad.

>Introduce Angron to the Shangralan leaders and generals and defer to his command, and explain to his army the tools you bring are not magical.
>Write in
While that is happening have our guys run drill and get internal communication down so our armies can function together. Don't want any cock ups in cooperating. We need to get this campaign well underway so we can head home ourselves~ (after our spar naturally)
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>>5486580
>Explain to Angron his past with the Aeldari, and show him that not all Aeldari are out to kill him
>Introduce Angron to the Shangralan leaders and generals and defer to his command, and explain to his army the tools you bring are not magical.
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>>5486580
>>Introduce Angron to the Shangralan leaders and generals and defer to his command, and explain to his army the tools you bring are not magical.
>Explain to Angron his past with the Aeldari, and show him that not all Aeldari are out to kill him
>Offer Angron armor and weaponry like those you wear and wield.
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>>5486591
>Support
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>>>5486580
>>>Introduce Angron to the Shangralan leaders and generals and defer to his command, and explain to his army the tools you bring are not magical.
>>Explain to Angron his past with the Aeldari, and show him that not all Aeldari are out to kill him
>>Offer Angron armor and weaponry like those you wear and wield.
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>>5486580
>>Introduce Angron to the Shangralan leaders and generals and defer to his command, and explain to his army the tools you bring are not magical.
>Explain to Angron his past with the Aeldari, and show him that not all Aeldari are out to kill him
>Offer Angron armor and weaponry like those you wear and wield

As always pretty good update. Perhaps at the end of the war, we could put down some warp anchors and do a second attempt of creating a golden dragon path. This time between Terra and Nuceria, so a second expedition force can be sent. There should be less problems than Shangrila, Nuceria natural warp barriers should be far thicker.

I ll say this 3 options are all pretty needed (while a talk with Eldrad should be done in private when there is time), some time will need to pass but it will be worthed. Some weeks should be enough.

The High Riders have still suffer a serious defeat they didn't expect, and while they will be cautious in the next battle ..... they will have no clue what they are truly against. Beside a army of free slaves and gladiators that somehow, was able to defeat them.
Our eldars and Angron knowing eachother, will be quite important for the war since they will be fighting with us.
In addition some drilling together between the two armies would prove beneficial on the battlefield. Even in the future.
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>>5486580
>Introduce Angeron
>Explain the Eldar

Fuckups. Honestly.

It's only efficiency that stops me yelling at Eldrad.
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>>5486580
>>>Introduce Angron to the Shangralan leaders and generals and defer to his command, and explain to his army the tools you bring are not magical.
>>Explain to Angron his past with the Aeldari, and show him that not all Aeldari are out to kill him
>>Offer Angron armor and weaponry like those you wear and wield
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>>5486580
>Introduce Angron to the Shangralan leaders and generals and defer to his command, and explain to his army the tools you bring are not magical.
>Explain to Angron his past with the Aeldari, and show him that not all Aeldari are out to kill him
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>>5486580
>Introduce Angron to the Shangralan leaders and generals and defer to his command, and explain to his army the tools you bring are not magical.

>Explain to Angron his past with the Aeldari, and show him that not all Aeldari are out to kill him
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Leman, King of the Russ narrowed his eyes as he climbed the peak of Thunder Mountain even as the blizzard howled and lightning illuminated the starry sky in brief flashes. Fighting the cold, his bleeding hands and concern for the army that awaits below on his order. Finally reaching the peak the Wolf King found the fabled Runestones and the entrance to a small cave decorated in the bones and hides of great black wolves.

The Primarch felt a thrum pass through him as he crossed the rune marked boundary and pushed aside a leather curtain finally escaping the biting cold and dark. Now he stood to his full height in a warm cavern lit by torch and central pyre. Sat across from him and that fire pit sat a crone shrouded in hides her hair woven together with etched charms and though her visible hands seemed blackened by the cold yet they remained nimble? Leman spoke first.

“You know why I am here Seer?-” He asked simply at the womans none reaction to his appearance “-then you know whom I am.

“I do-” she answered quietly as her dark hands picked up a collection of small bone shards each marked with small runes. “-You are Leman the Great Wolf, King of the Russ...child of...the Golden Father....so many titles and names to know...or could be known. But you do not seek those now?”

“It is as you say Seer, I seek understanding, tell me of the other Giant I saw...Ironhaired Lee'eh, Skald in the Wandering Snow.”

The old woman gestured for him to side, he did. She shook the bones she had gathered and held them forward, together they cast the runes upon a great flat stone which waited in the fire. The clattering sound was all there was as both focused quietly upon them till they settled. Leman waited quietly even though his patience was thinning, the seers were to be respected even if their craft is a slow on.

“Wolf King your missing Skald does not linger here any longer.” She looks upward as if tot he sky

Russ frowned saddly “he is dead then?”

“No...in upland....he...he wanders the Night sky....a Wyvern with golden eyes. A harbinger of one more radiant. Beware Leman, King of the Russ...A great war, conquest beyond the skies themselves...the wyvern among those you will call brother. Yet beware what lurks in its shadow, beware for he shall break all Wyrd.”

Leman listened quietly entranced to more prophecy and warning. His climb down was swifter but done in deep thought, even as he returned to his tent and army, Leman pondered what waited in the future.
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>>5487993
"I beg your pardon!? Break all Wyrd? I'll have you know that we are practicing well documented and studied skills that are peer-reviewed and farseer-approved to be as stable and safe to use as possible."-Leiren probably

"I SHALL NOW FRUSTRATE AND SURPRISE MY FOE WITH THIS NEW "TOTALLY SAFE" PSYKERIST TECHNIQUE THAT I HAVE ONLY JUST THOUGHT OF!-Leiren Definitely

There is a reason why Russ and Magnus like him. He's just as crazy as they are.- Dorn discussing his analysis of his brother with the new and less immature perturabo
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the wait, got introduced to darktide and got carried away being an ogryn.

I've archived this thread, and will make a new one. Hopefully I'll be more regular and quick on the updates in it.

Explain to Angron his past with the Aeldari, and show him that not all Aeldari are out to kill him:10
-"Remember what I said about Xenophobia?:1

Introduce Angron to the Shangralan leaders and generals and defer to his command, and explain to his army the tools you bring are not magical.:10

While that is happening have our guys run drill and get internal communication down so our armies can function together. Don't want any cock ups in cooperating. We need to get this campaign well underway so we can head home ourselves~ (after our spar naturally):1

Offer Angron armor and weaponry like those you wear and wield.:4

Total votes:10

So Lieren will explain Angron's past with the Aeldari to him and introduce him to the Shangralan leaders and generals, whilst also explaining to his army the weapons he brings are not magical, and offering his brother an upgrade to his armaments

Writing now.

>>5487993
Great stuff, Skald of the wandering snow is a pretty snazzy epithet btw

>>5488172
And a very spot on observance. Lieren is very logical in the batshit insanity he regularly performs. Sometimes the most efficient means to win in a fight is to curl up into a ball and knock down a wall after being thrown at it by a giant flaming daemon fox
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New thread

>>5489667



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