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You are Lieren of Nothing, General in the grand and virtuous Imperial army of the Long-Jian Empire, Grandmaster of both the Brothers of the panther and Wanderers in the fog, Creator of the Journey and founder of its philosophy, enemy of all wicked spirits and mortal tyrants, friend of the common man and the oppressed, spreader of prosperity, Builder of the Giant's road and the Primarch of the second legion of space marines.

Grief stricken by the lost of Bai, you sought a means to achieve a decisive and final victory over the Vishnu Menace and saw sought the advice of your honored adoptive Father Wenyan and your Progenitor, the Emperor of mankind, to solve this conundrum and ease your distress caused by the ever rising cost of lives committed to the war effort.

Illuminated by both of your fathers' wisdom and council, your determination to cast down the Butcher Tyrant and slave to the foul dark spirit Kong Nue Redoubled! Realizing that Nitya Sinha wished to shed as much blood to perform a evil ritual most foul with the casualties of war serving as both sacrifice and offerings to the repugnant throne of Kong Nue, you swore to your Father that the butcher and all of his thralls would hang.

But then, your distant father on Terra offered to lend you aid in your battle without detailing the form the assistance would take. Overjoyed, you accepted the offer and promised to make it an exchange of resources rather than a one sided exchange of gifts from father to son

So, preparing a shipment of weaponry, armaments, vehicles, raw material resources, data slates containing worthwhile and useful knowledge, you made a tithe to your honored father in similar manner as you once paid to the foul slug Gao Liwei, including spare Panther furs amongst the more practical gifts, which included, in the first containers and crates that would be presented to your father, a collection of the dangerous Water Generating Stones and many copies of your Journey, both physical and digital, alongside schematics of the weaponry and war machines you were donating to your father's own war effort.

Explaining the meaning for your sudden gathering of resources to the war council and Emperor Long-Jia Jinhai, you prepared for your father to contact you to perform the exchange across the vast expanse of space patiently, as the Imperial army marched unrelentingly onwards, continuing the bloody conflict with the Butcher's dog without you for a time but waiting for the Boon you had promised them would soon arrive from the heavens...
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Dae-Hyun's cold flesh shivered as the invasive cybernetic implants connecting him to the sarcophagus of the Contemptor Pattern Dreadnaught brushed against his frayed and severed nerved endings, pierced through his pallid flesh and wrapped and nailed through the bones of the remains of his limbs.
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>>5161767

He gazed out at the world through a collection of Visual Auspexs, pict-finders and sensor nods. He had sat the man shaped tank of armor that he now commanded, upon a pile of crates containing a portion of the armaments the emperor had portioned away to gift to his father, the Primarch Lieren. A sense of trepidation afflicted the interred astartes mind, as he silently observed the proceedings to activate the portal that would allow him to walk to his father's side and hopefully die assisting him in his own war against a particularly aggressive tribe of techno barbarians that intel Uncle Malcador had allowed him to review so he'd know what he was up against, suggested were a few threat levels higher than the clans he had become accustomed to crushing in the defense of the nascent new empire of mankind. Just another band of savages to be crushed against the godamned bulwark of humanity's future

Around him, Platoons of his Legion's little brothers, primarily of the Seowl ranger regiment who volunteered to stand by the great man who rose from their homeland one last time even though they, along with the elements from the Shuomi Ursine guard and Creti Grave wardens, who were gathered around the Ceramite memorial, marking down their names and deaths as "MIA" next to the honored dead lost in the 2nd Legion's various, glorious campaigns. Dae-Hyun had already placed his own, before he sat down to wait for the days it had taken to create the transport device that would allow them to reach the distant World of Shangrala. In that time, those brothers both who would remain to fight the emperors crusade and those who would join him on this adventure into the unknown reaches of the galaxy, had chosen to decorate his casket, showing a kind of grim sense of humor as they did so.

One of his captains even managed to find an old bear pelt large enough to drape over the head of his dreadnaught shell, while most others simply carved into its armor plating graffiti. Some of which was serious, and held meaning, like catchphrases and lingos. Some were random doodles or playful insults to the Great bear of terra, that was dug in the paint of the armor he wore, its ceramite left unpainted so he may dress himself in whatever colors his father favored. Those he had recruited or had volunteered from the various sects forming in his...what was his legion to command wore the colors that held some symbolism to them. Others mimicked the colors of the Seowl rangers, Creti Grave wardens or Shuomi Ursine guard. But just as many followed Dae-Hyun's example and remained uncolored, amongst seas of Marble white, concrete greys, blacks, Vivid greens, Rust reds and oranges, Blues and more pastel colors that the sects wore to differentiate themselves from each other and the unaligned members of the legion.
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>>5161768

Badges of honor, accolades and war trophies were pinned to Dae-Hyun's outer chassis by servitors, as his weapons were fitted onto his chassis at last, customized as he requested

Twin linked heavy bolters, A dreadnaught sized power fist with a heavy flamer replacing its inbuilt twin linked bolters.

He commanded his coffin to rise, and stand, the company of astartes and gene modded base line soldiers parted before him as he stomped to the front of the host and waited, the servos inside of his weaponized tomb hissing as he stood at attention before what Malcador had referred to as a small company before the addition of the various elements of the Imperial guard, but was nearly a full battalion of the Second Legions forces. Three hundred Astartes , reinforced by two thousand seowl rangers, twelve hundred Creti Grave Wardens, and eight hundred Shuomi Ursine guard. A small force to be sure, compared to the vast and constantly growing armies of the emperor, but it was an apocalyptic force even if it was compose of a fraction of the 2nd legion's strength

How proud he felt, looking upon his men, to lead them into battle one final time. He was confident that the command structure of the legion would endure, lead by the marine he chose to pass on the responsibility to. Some, close members of the 3rd legion and War hounds were present to watch their departure, amongst this crowd of spectators was the captain of the Fourteenth Captain of the warhounds, Dae-hyun's personal friend Yazid Khalid, who did his best to hide his sorrow behind a warrior bluster as he alongside on of Dae-Hyun's own former subordinates, read off the flippantly casual and joking epithets that covered the memorial where Dae-Hyun's own name now sat

"First Legion master, Dae-Hyun, the Fortunate son, Great Bear of terra, Scarface, Stubborn old dog, and the Bulwark of Humanity's future" The War hound read off boisterously, loud enough for all of the hangar bay to hear as the servitors connected the final pylons and cabling to power the small, strangely shaped device that would supposedly transport Dae-hyun and his men to his father's side "Nothing on Terra's soil could kill him, so he left us behind here. Wherever his grave will be dug, we'll share a drink when we find it and our genesire again! Hah! Like Scarface is going to die. I'm sure we'll meet out there in the stars, brother"

Dae-Hyun laughed, his booming voice carrying through the hall, much louder than his natural voice

"We'll see, Yazid, I will certainly try not to die before then" He jested, to ease his own nerves as the less serious and grim amongst their audience joined him in laughing at the War hounds blithe joking around. It wouldn't be long now, until he departed to never again see the faces of these men he knew as his brothers, even though they did not share a genesire, so Dae-Hyun was being damn certain to savor their last moments together

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>>5161770

As were all of his men, who spoke their last insults to their brothers who would remain define, exchanging well meaning barbs or embracing one another while repeating their call signs so the other would not forget it or forcing them to promise to kill their share of savages now that they would be gone. It was very much like a funeral, but much less somber and much more lighthearted and lively. Dae-Hyun sensors detected a few of the more pompous 3rd Legion astartes rolling their eyes or sighing heavily as they watched the boisterous mingling of the 2nd legion and their baseline comrades, especially those that watched their own brothers join in the shenanigans and good natured pranking.

A band of brothers they remained. If Dae-Hyun truly died now, this was the perfect final sight to witness. It was a fitting send off, and certainly felt like his own funeral. His chapped lips curled into a crooked smile, as at last the emperor approached. He turned off his audio auspex, not wishing to ruin the perfect departure with his master's speech. it would certainly be historic and inspiring but...well, seeing his men act naturally and hearing their voices was all he needed to find the strength to leave behind the cradle of humanity and become the first of the space marines to walk upon a forgotten world. Anything else would spoil the mood, even if it was a speech by the rightful Emperor of mankind himself. Hearing the boys bullshit and joke around was enough, besides he was certain he could always ask one of the others joining him on the Journey what was said.

Dae-Hyun thought on the past and pondered the future, before his sensors told him that now was the time to focus again, detecting a huge energy surge that meant the gateway was being powered up. Turning on his auspex once again, he turned to the Emperor as he was addressed directly

"Dae-Hyun, my unwavering shield and loyal servant. First master of my second legion and the Bulwark of humanity's future, you have my blessing to join your father as the vanguard of what shall be the greatest crusade in humanity's long and storied history" He says solemnly "and I swear, should you die in this grand undertaking across space , I shall return your ashes to the shores of Seowl"

Dae-Hyun knew he was right to zone out. If he had heard the whole speech, he was certain he'd be crying now.

Like a radiation storm, the massive gateway powered on. Sheets of golden light forming together as strange, foreign script glowed through the surface of the anchor and along the vastness of the interdimensional tunnel

"Singing?" Dae-Hyun asked, as he heard the most melodic and beautiful sound he had ever heard, joined by a gruff almost mechanical chanting. Like angels of the old superstitions joining their voices with the cold machine of logic.

Menials, scribes and Remembrancer gathered around him a swarm of rats, seeming all the smaller now that he was stuck in this ceramite straight jacket.

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>>5161772

they were aiding in transporting the care package the emperor was sending along with them, alongside a herd of servitors which helped count the tally and prepare the mechanized shipping crates. Scribes, with their cybernetically enhanced perception and manual dexterity, recorded every word spoken by the emperor and Dae-Hyun, while the Remembrancer captured the moment. Dae-Hyun heard the boss planned to officialize these artists and journalists, and was running a test run of their abilities now before giving them any special privileges. Dae-Hyun wondered if he could get away with stepping on one or two of them, as he found them and the idea itself irritating beyond description.

But he decided against wanton slaughter, and instead pivoted and turned his mechanical body to face the golden hole in space, and gaze out into its radiant halls. His sensors detected an increased heart rate as his excitment reached its pinnacle

"Father, I am coming" He whispered, his own voice sounding childish and weak as he took the footstep into the space between the realities, flanked by two cargo containers, as his men marched in file behind him, Astartes and Baseline alike.

He entered the gateway, and his sensor went crazy trying to measure the forces that surrounded him and the plane of existence he now trespassed within

"And I shall serve you as loyally as I did your own father!" He shouted "Let these savages know the might of Terra before all others! VALOROUS AND INDOMITBLE"

And with that, Dae-Hyun Departed from Terra's soil, his battlecry joined by thousands of voices as he vanished
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Where have you placed your anchor and where do you intend to meet the convoy your father sent to exchange your gifts, Lieren?

>In the furthest Imperial encampment in Vishnu lands in the company of Jinhai and the other generals of the imperial army as well as the whole of your own, elite regiment

>Beyond the territories claimed by Long-Jia, in enemy lands, waiting for your reinforcements to truly begin your hunt for the butcher and his dogs

>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal

>In the capital city, televised and broadcast to the whole of Long-Jia to raise morale by propagandizing the event, while also exposing the "help" your father promised to your peoples culture

>Write in
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
We better heal our boy with Kanzeon as soon as we can.
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>>5161775
>>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
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>>5161775
>>In the capital city, televised and broadcast to the whole of Long-Jia to raise morale by propagandizing the event, while also exposing the "help" your father promised to your peoples culture


we're getting regiments of the imperial army too. Sweet.
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>>5161775
>>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
I like to imagine the Emperor just went "fuck it" and punched a hole in the warp with his mind fist to reach Lieren's planet.
I haven't listened to Disturbed in a while, nice choice.
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>>5161770
>at attention before what Malcador had referred to as a small company before the addition of the various elements of the Imperial guard, but was nearly a full battalion of the Second Legions forces.

It's the imperial army right now malal. but that's the only mess up I've seen.
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal.
We have to have them march through the capital once the war is over- after the brave men of the Imperial Army of course. I feel a tinge of sadness and disappointment that we will need our sons to finish our wars.
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>>5161798
We didn't need them, but less named characters will die thanks to them.
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal

Let humanity stand and remember. And let us get this incomparably loyal old bear back on his feet - his human feet - one of these days
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>>5161775
>In the capitol city.
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>>5161775
>In the furthest Imperial encampment in Vishnu lands in the company of Jinhai and the other generals of the imperial army as well as the whole of your own, elite regiment
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>>5161775
>>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal

Son, we are prying you out of that coffin and returning to you your body.
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal

This should be far enough for us to deceive the energy surge from the Portal Anchors activation, and avoid that the Vishnu detect it. We still need it to use them for attack their citadel after all.
We will connect with the Long Jia army with some transports, should be fast. Be train or air.
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Funnily enough several Long Jia transports have been build with Lieren body in mind, so space marines should be fine inside them.

The space marines and imperial army should be a nice addition. And a new element in the battle ahead that will surprise the Vishnu.
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
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>In the capital city, televised and broadcast to the whole of Long-Jia to raise morale by propagandizing the event, while also exposing the "help" your father promised to your peoples culture

We should do this to give face to the future planetary government!
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal

>Introduce our sons to our Father Wenyan, show him his grandkids.

i know that the journey says death is natural, but i would love if we had enough time to upgrade augments of some of our sons, specifically Dae-Hyun if we have the time to help ease his suffering. I wonder what Lieren's reaction to the dreadnought will be?
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
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>>5161910
Upgrade hell. We can regrow limbs. We just need data on the additional organs and we can regrow his missing limbs and eyes.
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>>5161910
He shall be restored to his former glory, to once more lead the son's of his father.

the better question is how he and those with him will realize that we have a wife.
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>>5161775
>>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
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So how do people feel about the color silver?
https://html-color.codes/silver
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>>5161775

>In the capital city, televised and broadcast to the whole of Long-Jia to raise morale by propagandizing the event, while also exposing the "help" your father promised to your peoples culture
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>>5161956
We introduce ours sons to Wenyan. Wenyan faints.

We introduce our wife to our sons. They faint.

OMG considering we've been told that our legion like to shit talk each other imagine another legion getting hit with "at least we got a functional pair of parents".

inb4 a War Hounds claps back with a Yo Momma so big she's a spaceship.
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>>5162045
>We introduce our wife to our sons. They faint.
Kek.

They're going to be so confused by Kazeon, not only because their father is married, but because on a glance she looks like a lewd artists depiction of a female space marine- which shouldn't exist in the first place. Then your father reveals to you she's actually an AI flesh puppet- but not really. Her real body is a fuck-off giant ship from the Dark Age of Technology and the amalgamation of hundreds of souls.
Also- you now have several aunts who are also ships. One of which is a crazy bitch that worships a blood god, a hedonistic fox who's getting pounded by Lieren in the right way (with a fucking boot and hammer)- but hey! At least Aunt Mari is nice.
To top it all off- your new step-mom is going to give a new body.

I'd be surprised if they didn't faint.
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>>5162082
Lieren once again ahead of the curve with interfamilial violence.

His brothers really are slackers in comparison
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>>5162045
Our sons are masters of the laconic arts and I couldn't be happier
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>>5162045
Legion clapping back like "Atleast we got a Momma."
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>>5162045
Warborn or another legion make a comment about Mama Kanzeon when the Sons arent around to hear, but one of our Auxillia hears it. What does the Auxillia do:

a) goes after the marine like an angry chipmunk
b) informs other auxillia and they doggy pile the marine
c) informs a 2nd son who then politely tells the War born that at least their primarch isnt a test tube virgin
d) causes a chain reaction that gets Lieren redacted
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>>5161775
>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
we got to show them our tiger niece and nephews.
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>>5162278
OH YEAH!
Our kids have to meet our nephews and nieces!
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>>5162289
I wonder how our sons will react when we create a new core after the war, getting a younger sibling that is an entire archeotech ship
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>>5162302
>ship son
Easy there buddy, let's not be too hasty.

Why I find funny is the shock on all our Sons and the Imperial Army's faces when they see Shagrala. Our planet will be the greenest thing they've ever seen in their life time.
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>>5162438
I hope the culture shock won't be too bad. For our sons or the native Long Jian people.
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>>5162438
>ship son
>not ship daughter
Anon, our family is already a sausage fest, Kanzeon, her sisters, and our nieces need all the help they can get.
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I have a proposal btw we stop calling our Missus and her sisters AI because they are not. Call them something else because they quite literally are not born from code. They were created by a mass of very real souls and stored in something mechanical which at the very basis of it is not AI. Just call her a Soul Core or something so people learn the difference form the off; a ghost in a machine the communicates with code vs something that was born from 0s and 1s
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>>5162539
Machine spirit.
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>>5162539
They're essentially lesser versions of the Emporer They are multiple souls sacrificed en masse and combined into one being, the thing is they were immediately harnessed into the core of a ship instead of being born into another body.
If they weren't harnessed there might be more like the Emporer.
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>>5162677
In addendum to my post, it should be mentioned that Kanzeon and her sisters were likely not made up of Psykers and likely not as much were sacrificed as the Emporers, so they are as I said before, Lesser Versions of the Emporer
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>>5162563
Machine Spirit seems an inadequate description of Kanzeon and her sisters. Perhaps Machine Soul?
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>>5161775
>>By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal
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>>5162539
I like Soul core.
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>>5162539
We could ask Kanzeon if there is a specific term for what they are from when they were created/born.
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>>5162970
"Honey, what are your pronouns?"
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>>5162985
More like just nouns.
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>>5162985
inb4 Lieren leans even more into therapist primarch
inb4 11th primarch got redacted after speaking to Lieren and discovering they're trans and tell Daddy E he wants to be called Elevenina and no dad its not a phase.

Malal in the corner with Tzeetch wondering what the fuck was happening while Slaanesh is preparing some Primarch grade HRT.
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>>5163040
Turns out that the Emperor was not only justified, but did the correct move.
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>>5163068
"Trannies be gone!"
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>>5163040
>Malcador in the corner screaming "I told you to make them girls but you just had to love dick."
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>>5162970
>>5162985
>>5163040
>>5163084
>>5163149
what the fuck did I come back too
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>>5163188
We have descended into insanity join us.
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>>5163188
>>5163210
I'm pretty sure one of these fuckers has pie.
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>>5162792
Machine Spirit is perfect and guaranteed to be what she’ll be referred to as.
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>>5162499
Fuck that, you know how many quests have been ruined because of daughter's!?

It's either always the same endless shovel talks and no one good enough for my daughter, the same tired my precious baby is rebelling so I must simp, or she's a fucking Mary Sue that everyone gets sick of or sucks off endlessly.

I'm not mentioning the fags that waifu the daughter's because thankfully that's more an akun thing
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>>5163528
Bro we are a fucken primarch. we wont be that bad.
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>>5163528
>It's either always the same endless shovel talks and no one good enough for my daughter
Any prospective daughter of ours is a fucking ship.The only reason Kanzeon has a romantic interest is because she met someone being controlled by a bunch of horny basement-dwelling degenerates. Me included. Also, any prospective suitors are either uncles, brothers, or nephews, Malal doesn't strike me as an incestfag.
>the same tired my precious baby is rebelling so I must simp
You're forgetting we made a philosophy all about walking your own path. Also, we have a good enough writer to avoid cliches.
>she's a fucking Mary Sue that everyone gets sick of or sucks off endlessly.
See above, you should've learned to trust Malal's writing skills by now.

All in all, 4/10. Made some points that might've held water in other quests.
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>>5163528
You're not entirely wrong.

>>5163531
Mmmmmmm yeeeaaah but let's hold off on the kid discussion til later. Having space marine sons, and adopting humans or something should be good enough. And when I say adopt I mean when they're young adults or something so theres less baggage.

>>5161775
I regret not asking Space Dad about the Null charms, and if it's a good or bad idea for us to put it on everything.
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>>5163188
i told you itwouldhappen, YOU DIDNT BELIEVE ME!

>>5161775
>In the furthest Imperial encampment in Vishnu lands in the company of Jinhai and the other generals of the imperial army as well as the whole of your own, elite regiment
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>>5161775
>In the furthest Imperial encampment in Vishnu lands in the company of Jinhai and the other generals of the imperial army as well as the whole of your own, elite regiment
Well at least the emperor will get some STC's.
I'm betting dad's care package is going to be massively outshone by what Lieren already has access to.
Hopefully we can work on the gateway some more so we can get another bridge to Terra after we take care of the Vishnu, would be funny if Lieren ends up the one primarch that goes to dad rather then the other way around. Horus is likely a year or two away from discovery on Luna so we can't get that distinction as amusing as it would be.
Does anyone remember when the treaty of mars happened after they conquered Luna?
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What's gonna be Emps reaction when he finds out Lieren is a shipslut fag.
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>>5163707
Immediate execution
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>>5163707
He the space chineae primarch, of course he would be addicted to gacha
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>>5163582
What do you mean anon? It is always good to tag null denouncement charms everywhere we go.

Everywhere.
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>>5163707
This looks OK but I still insist that kanzeon is a thicc latina woman
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>>5163716
We need to remember to engrave them Into the soles of our shoes so they are embedded everywhere we walk.
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>>5163701
From what I understand the anchors will not create something permanent, but q temporary portal. They require a lot of energy. Due to the fact of being made very recently, it's still a technological field all to explore.
Otherwise the exchange of resources and men would be a bit bigger than this small exchange and taskforce, and it would be costant.
The reason we made the anchors is for get inside the citadel of the Vishnu after all, and surprise them.


It will happen after some years, it s more of a stalemate for sometime because there was a possibility of conflict, due to similarities of military power and so on. Now things should change though.
Emperor was also interested in taking Venus and Mercury at the time, but Mars was the main problem for completing the conquest of the Inner sphere of the solar system. When that is done then all the other planets remain, it take less time but is still a bit slow and there is a lot of fighting against aliens especially.
After that the imperium prepared many new armies and fleets, and the Great Crusade starts.

>>5163582
Chaos doesn't find them nice and funny, and it real pisses them off alongside the Journey writings flying inside our flames or ice, or attached to the null charms.
So I don't mind. They don't get to touch kids or attempt to throw nightmares in any men and women they can.

With Shangrila being naturally weak for the natural barriers of the warp, is a necessity. The fact that demons have attempt to colonize the boundary between warp and world (see the nurgle demon, making a extension of the garden in battlefield of the treachery of turtles), is also a concern. Or that the boundary is infested by animalistic warp scavengers and predators for that matter. They need to be kept out.
Maybe we should make some pillars and restore the natural barriers of the world.
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Calling the vote now

By small Chen's grave, in the shadow of the academy you built above it, having buried Bai in the fields of Nothing while waiting for your father to complete his side of the portal:16

In the capital city, televised and broadcast to the whole of Long-Jia to raise morale by propagandizing the event, while also exposing the "help" your father promised to your peoples culture: 4

In the furthest Imperial encampment in Vishnu lands in the company of Jinhai and the other generals of the imperial army as well as the whole of your own, elite regiment:3

Introduce them to Wenyan: 1

So Lieren will have set up the meeting point by small chen's grave, under the shadow of The Chen Dao academy

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>>5163753
>Introduce them to Wenyan
FUCK give us another chance to do it before he dies malal, I want him to see his grandchildren
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>>5163773
I'm sure he'll be very confused why their a bunch a gruff soldiers instead of a kid
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>>5163753
Oh shit, I thought that introducing them to farmer dad and tiger nephews would come as default for the Chen option.
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Meanwhile, admits a field of flowers, the kindly natured giant of Shangrala sat alone, enjoy the gentle fragrances of the blossoms that grew over the tomb of one of his dearest friends, having just return from his home village to bury another. Beneath the stalwart statue of the valiant Small Chen, Lieren and a small crowd of onlookers composed of common farmers and the older students of the Chendao Academy, alongside the venerable elders Guozhi, Kuan Im and the chief of nothing your own honored father Wenyan waited patiently for the figures of the "Kinsmen of the noble son of the heavens" to arrive and lend their blade to the effort to quash what the voices on the radios had said would be the "Final refuge of tyranny and moral corruption upon Shangrala", Unaware that in fact they were witnessing the harbingers of their entrance into a much wider world, far grimmer and darker than even the nightmare their prosperous nation now faced with spears and rifles in hand...
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Your mind wandered and raced, as visions of how this first fateful meeting between father and son may transpire. A thousand theatric day dreams played, as the famed Playwright Pan An sat anxiously by your side, as you came across him in nothing as he had been hired by Bai's parents and wife to pen the tale of his life and tragic death. Fondly recalling your meeting with him after watching one of your plays, you decided to allow the storyteller to join you on this momentous occasion Guozhi and Kuan Im you met upon the road by chance, as they were escorting a unfortunate youth who was bedeviled and haunted by the whispered temptations of wicked spirits and nightmarish dreams of the realm of the Empyrean to the sanctity of the Wanderers in the Fog hidden temple retreat, nestled in the same mountains from whence Chen Dao Academy was built.

So to, has Small Chen's family gathered. Little Chen, his single Son is large for his age and squirms and struggles to free himself from his mother's arms to play amongst the flowers that have sprouted above his father's grave. Old Chen, holds a bottle of Dragon Spit liquor, his daughter and daughter in law, Nüying and Lanfen at his sides, the image of demure and subtle beauty, both of their hair worn wild in mimicry of Kanzeon's own preferred style. The former traveled many leagues to be present for this historic event.

Kanzeon, however is not present in the flesh or steel, for she remained at the warfront and for the first time left your company. You did not mourn her absence, as both of you were well aware how the men of terra or your father himself, if he deigned to lead the convoy personally, would react to her nature and presence. So, briefly, the two of your departed from the comforting warmth of the other's most pleasant company.

The wind frolicked gayly across the field of funerary flowers, as the distant chimes of the humble farming community beneath the memorial of the late and great small Chen sang through the morning
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>>5163798
as the Gongs and synthesized bells of Chen Dao academy blared and disrupted the serene tranquility of the day. With Legs Crossed, you looked through the portal, sitting in front of it to keep any curious onlookers from wandering or venturing inside of it. The more courageous of the crowed dared look into the "Waters" of the Gold Dragon River, some sang verses of the Journey or its mantras, doubtlessly hearing the extra dimensional tunnel "Singing" to them as they waited for the arrival of the distant warriors of the stars. Soldiers of the Imperial army stood guard, defending the shipment of supplies you had gathered with Jinhai's permission as your finest accountants and taxmen double and triple counted the wealth of resources you were giving away by "Casting them into the heavens' sea" as one of them so bluntly put it. Your stubbornly nameless assistant leads the effort, eyes narrowed and sharp as taps away on his data slate, noting every gift down to its weight in ounces.

Pan An chews the back of his brush, jittery and nervous as his mind races to find a proper, eloquent manner of describing the gate way that cuts between the space between worlds. Guozhi glares into the astral chaos, as if he was facing the dark master of deception, Jian Qi, himself. Kuan Im's gaze is much softer and serene, as she marvels at the spiraling energies before her blind eyes and mutters to herself, quoting passages of old scripture and folktales as she watches the tunnel and counts the characters flowing through its luminesces as if they were carps in a pond. You spot a few of Qian Xia's spies, observing the affair. It is obvious they realize you've noticed their presence, but continue lurking amongst the crowd to bring the scarlet spider the intel she demanded with recording devices to capture and preserve every sensation of this stellar exchange of goods and resources.

Before anyone else, your super human senses detected the presence of the travelers from terra. Hearing first the thunderous footsteps of a warmachine similar but smaller to the walking statues you invented, then the rumbling growl of primitive engines of the sort you refused in place of adopting wholly electric powered machinery to preserve Shangrala's precious natural beauty. Lifting your brow, you leap to your feet in a single fluid motion

Old chen curses, nearly dropping his bottle of reserved spirits as you gaze into the depths of the Gold Dragon River and stare, waiting for the first sight of the men of terra, those who served alongside your sons and father in the great war to reclaim humanity's birthright from the hands of short sighted and dull witted tyrants. Crossing your arms, you lifted your head, stretching your neck to try and look further into the tunnel through reality.

The first figures to appear, nearly made your legs buckle and fall beneath you from shock alone.
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>>5163799

Your father himself strode over the horizon, dressed in resplendent armor styled after the feathers and beaks of birds of prey. You could only wonder what his glamor would show to those who did not have the eyes to see past it. His dour, grim expression lit up with relief as a smile beaming with pride met your golden eyes. And besides him, walked a suit of armor, mechanized and large enough to fit several full grown men inside of it. Your eyes widened as, for reasons you cannot comprehend, you realized immediately that with that metal shell was the noble Dae-Hyun. And judging from the gait of the machine, he had been gravely injured. And had been merged and fused with the machinery of the suit of mechanized armor.

But, you took control of yourself and quieted your distress, keeping your composure as your creator led a small army towards the Grave of small Chen, escorting a convoy of transport vehicles and crates. When the rest of the crowd saw the imposing figure sof your father and son, they began to mutter and gossip to one another before, as he grew closer, they were possessed by what seemed to be almost instinctive feeling of reverence and unparalleled awe as they neared the mouth of the Gateway

Your father stopped in its boundary, while Dae-Hyun stepped past it, followed by other astartes dressed in similar armor to his own, but on a smaller scale and clearly not interred within it as he was. The transport containers were wheeled out on treaded bases, spewing black vapors and smoke, that greatly distressed and irritated the unsullied eyes and noses of the audience that had gathered around you.

You and your father, stand a few paces apart, as Dae-Hyun turns the head of his prison around, seemingly flabbergasted by the sight before him, as are the few space marines that had emerged from the portal beneath his colossal steps. Some of your sons who you do not know, are confused by the lack of reaction amongst the civilians observing their arrival. Truly, their armor is imposing, as is their size. But the people of Shangrala have grown accustomed to their fighting men dressing themselves in the regalia of the Aeldari, which is far more intimidating than the armor worn by your sons, and have long felt comfort in your shadow. To them, they appear only as soldiers, rather than terrifying giants of men and living incarnations of war.

Looking upon one of them, you smirk, somewhat amused by their collective befuddlement

Besides the sputtering, hissing of the engines used to power the transport vessels of the convoy, silence falls as more containers, astartes and soldiers dressed in primitive armor with weapons akin to the "Heaven Flame" pattern laser rifles emerge in organized files as if they were marching as part of a celebratory parade.
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>>5163800

But, beneath the racket of your father's machines, you could hear Dae-Hyun breathing, labored by the machinery that connected him to the armored cage, which to your eyes appeared far to similar to the design of the Zoroastian devil cages in function

"I can see the familial resemblance" Wenyan jokes, and you find yourself regretting sending Kanzeon away for this meeting, her sarcastic wit would have greatly appreciated your father's joking, as he was motioning to Dae-Hyun, whose bonded armor was draped with the fur of some great, clearly predatory beast and was covered in script that would be alien to Wenyan's eyes. You recognized it as Gothic, and also recognized it was what amounted to graffiti of the kind to be found on the walls of cities.

How do you greet your father and sons, Lieren?

>Professionally yet cordially, perform the promised exchange of supplies, which apparently includes a portion of your father's own armies, wasting no time with frivolities

>Approach your father and earnestly thank him for his existence, and explain the reason you chose to meet him here and the significance of the statue atop the hill

>Ask what has happened to require Dae-Hyun to be interred in such a ...crude device. Part of its function is obviously devouted to life support, but what injuries would require such a treatment?

>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers

>write in
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>>5163802
perform the promised exchange of supplies, which apparently includes a portion of your father's own armies, wasting no time with frivolities


>>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
>Explain to your father how the Water Generating Stones work, and warn him that they are dangerous and should never be weaponized. Also mention that you are sharing some copies of the Journey, and would like your sons to be the first ones to recieve it, so they may have the complete picture.
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>>5163802
So Lieren is now the first met primarch.
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
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>>5163809
support
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers

Must be a pain for Big E, his son got the chaos part right- but he's married to an AI!
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>>5163809
+1
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>>5163820
Just call her a super advance machine spirit and the cog boys will lover her.
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
>Explain to your father how the Water Generating Stones work, and warn him that they are dangerous and should never be weaponized. Also mention that you are sharing some copies of the Journey, and would like your sons to be the first ones to recieve it, so they may have the complete picture.

Yeah water stones needing a warning.

First chance we get we gotta ease Dae-Hyun's suffering if possible. Dreadnaught pilots are basically blobs by the time they're interred right? Let him be known as the fortunate son, the First to escape a dreadnaughts grasp, as I honestly feel dreadnought are anti-journey in a sense.
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>>5163809
+1
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers

>>5163827
>as I honestly feel dreadnought are anti-journey in a sense.
https://allthatsinteresting.com/sokushinbutsu
Here's a second option.
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>>5163834
And that practice is not even just japanese, but buddhist is general, being done for a long time in India and China as well.
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
>Explain to your father how the Water Generating Stones work, and warn him that they are dangerous and should never be weaponized. Also mention that you are sharing some copies of the Journey, and would like your sons to be the first ones to recieve it, so they may have the complete picture
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>>5163802
Backing this >>5163809
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
literally put a hand upon our son's form and beam at him.

>Explain to your father how the Water Generating Stones work, and warn him that they are dangerous and should never be weaponized. Also mention that you are sharing some copies of the Journey, and would like your sons to be the first ones to receive it, so they may have the complete picture.
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>>5163809
+1
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>>5163802
Backing >>5163809


We need to explain the dangers. But we also need to see how Big E handles alcohol. He will need it against russ
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>>5163802
>>Approach your father and earnestly thank him for his existence, and explain the reason you chose to meet him here and the significance of the statue atop the hill
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers


I'm going to trust that we aren't stupid enough to just send over those stones without any warnings.
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>>5163802
>Supporting this
>>5163843
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
>Explain to your father how the Water Generating Stones work, and warn him that they are dangerous and should never be weaponized. Also mention that you are sharing some copies of the Journey, and would like your sons to be the first ones to recieve it, so they may have the complete picture
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
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>>5163809
+1

Also adding

>put your hand on Dae-Hyun shoulder casually and then extend a handshake to our father,wink at him and say "I would hug you if I could father but that would most likely ruin the image of otherworldly savior king you've cultivated with my people in your short time here"

We are a cheeky fucking monkey, and we will tease our father for his weebass posing
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>>5163802
>>Approach your father and earnestly thank him for his existence, and explain the reason you chose to meet him here and the significance of the statue atop the hill
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>>5163809
+1
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
>Approach your father and earnestly thank him for his existence, and explain the reason you chose to meet him here and the significance of the statue atop the hill
I think either Lieren would have told dad via psychic phone call already or there would be more then enough information in writing in the Shangrala convoy to insure he was well informed of the matter. Better to no dilute a vote with multiple options if possible.
How strong are our Shangrala laser rifles? I'm pretty sure everyone is running around in reverse engineered Eldar armor so just a las gun would be pretty anemic in comparison, hellgun strength?
Wondering if we end up giving a titan to dad, whether or not checks the stuff we are sending before he marches back may alter his perception of the current war. He cracks open a crate or two or looks over some vehicles sent by his son and recognizes its all high dark age stuff and he realizes Lieren is essentially fighting a war against a chaos man of iron operating at full capacity.
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>>5163802
>Make sure to introduce are Dads to each other.
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>>5163802
>Approach your father and earnestly thank him for his existence, and explain the reason you chose to meet him here and the significance of the statue atop the hill
We chose this option for a reason, might as well let them all know.
>write in
Before our father goes, we should give him a parting hug, and the dragon spit regardless of our choices.

After we're done pacifying our planet, We're supposed to head back to Terra to do the Trial Tower thing each primarch was supposed to do, right?
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>>5163802
>>Approach your father and earnestly thank him for his existence, and explain the reason you chose to meet him here and the significance of the statue atop the hill
>>Ask what has happened to require Dae-Hyun to be interred in such a ...crude device. Part of its function is obviously devouted to life support, but what injuries would require such a treatment?
>>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
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>>5164522
I'd love to hug dad, but he has an image to uphold
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>>5163802
Can I get an idea of what the average pattern of power armor and heavy power armor is like? Do we have any refractory fields for our deployed power armored soldiers? Does Lieren utilize a refractory field for his armor?
Is Dae-Hyun stuck in his weaponized dull body crutch, or can we replace the damages portions of his body with vat grown flesh, or more sophisticated cybernetics?
What model of power armor are our sons using? Mk 1 or 2?
Can we detect any psykers among the people joining us? Any potential Eurubus's among our sons, the soldiers, or the Rememberances?
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>>5163802
>>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
>write in
Before our father goes, we should give him a parting hug, and the dragon spit regardless of our choices.
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ngl, Our father is going to have a TON of questions about all the advanced war gear we're sending him. Mainly how the fuck we're making this shit

Especially the stuff we yoinked from the Dark eldar. Our world is not capable of making that shit natively and it's insanely advanced.
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>>5165680
Hi dad meet muh waifu lul.
THE BEST IDEA!
I have a feeling that if we keep giving him super nice tech THAT HE NEEDS, like say living metal armor and terraforming tech we should be alright though. In before he already knows and is stringing us along for his own amusement.
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>>5165687
I cannot see how we can hide it from him. We are young as fuck.

I really suspect he's just humoring us right now.
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>>5165687

I honestly think he knows. I'd like to see us having a conversation without words as honestly our ability to comprehend and the emperor being the emperor would male it possible. I ain't meaning psyker just non verbal cues
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>>5165690
I don't think he knows they were a thing cause he was probably busy elsewhere when they were made but there's nothing stopping him from reading our mind without us knowing.
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>>5165694
to clarify the emperor would have made heavy use of the lotus scepter tech and would have probably ensouled his own flagship.
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>>5165696
Tbf before old night Emps was more in the background I know he kept hidden caches for the future. Lotus I accept but I think currently he values individual souls a bit much to basically create an amalgam. At least I hope so. Amalgamating must be difficult and painful
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>>5165702
You can probably rig up soulstone like tech with advanced enough Lotus tech.
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With the new portal technology Lieren, Magnus, and Perturabo are the first three or four Primarchs found which really changes things up. Hopefully things will be better this time when Perturabo meets his sons..

On a completely unrelated note I wonder what that one radio conspiracy theorist thinks about all this and if the 2nd legion will be amused to hear his broadcast like Lieren was.
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>>5165811
>"We're getting reports of giants encased in steel meeting with Lieren of Nothing outside the Chen Dao academy..."
>"Well that sounds like a load of ox shit. Everybody knows Lieren meets aliens atop the western peaks."
>"Anyways, back to our discussion on crop circles..."
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>>5165813
>And now to Luli, for the weather.
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Hey guys, I just realized that Shangrala will probably be seen as an Eden by the people of Terra due to the huge fucking differences between the two.
Let's look at the conditions of Terra at the moment:
>Population: a fucking lot
>Water: almost none
>Food: hope you like Corpse-starch
>Air quality: only keep in aceptable condition by machinery that could die any day
>Plants and animals: All are dead
Now lets look at Shangrala
>Population: probably no more than 10 million people
>Water: we will never gonna have to worry thanks to the "water generating stones"
>Food: ACTUAL FOOD MADE FROM ANIMALS AND PLANTS
>Air quality: pollution is practically non-existent
>Plants and animals: a lot of biodiversity and FUCKING DRAGONS AND PHOENIXES
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>>5165923
>"If you're a good imperial solider then you too could be stationed on Shangrila!"
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>>5165923
First thing we're doing when we go to Terra is bringing Kanzeon with us so she can get started on unfucking the planet.
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>>5165942
We're already doing that by giving dad the water stones, an asteroid here a space ship ride to Jupiter's moons there and Terra will have atleast one ocean back within 5 years ,I hope it's the pacific since it's the best ocean, go fuck yourself Atlantic fags
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>>5165951
Refilling the oceans is a must, but the people living in those areas will have to be relocated first. Could give Big Daddy E an excuse to build some proper mega-cities for the masses to live in as opposed to the hyper slums and hive cities.
All that said, unfucking the oceans is just the start of things. The real battle will be unfucking the soil of most landmasses on Terra.
Granted, that'll happen naturally with the oceans restored, but we can certainly stand to speed up the process.
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>>5165968
I feel like at that point he will just say "fuck it, it's not worth all that effort. those resources would be better put into the crusade."
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>>5165970
The prospect of refurbishing the equipment keeping Terra functioning means that more resources can dedicated to the crusade. Might be worth the trouble.
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>>5165968
We could certainly try to implement some radiation scrubbing tech to clean a chink of radiation out of Terra.

Once we dig up all the living, comprised, and dead space sisters, what grand project should we do? I'm for building a shipyard that can build something close to a DaoT tier war/exploration ship, and a research station that can continue researching means to potentially make permanent warp tunnels. Better yet, colleges that are outright superior to the Mechanicum so we dont have to rely on them.
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>>5166045
We'll never be rid of the mechanicum we can only use our knowledge to get a good deal from them
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>>5166054
the fact people think they can just ignore an already galaxy wide empire is amazing.
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>>5165923
Pop could be a bit higher with the new living standards. Mostly in Long Jia though, Shuni and Bask are thriving too, but they will need some time as both have lost a lot of population. Both have been subjected to a violent and horrifying rule for centuries, and in one their last ruler sacrificed several of their cities for spite and power. Mari and Al-Uzza should help in that regard.
The people of Vishnu will need more time after this violent war, but with prosperity they will also grow a lot.

As for other tyrants around the world, who knows. Probably not much, although Hashut's people might have more if they were an industrial society.
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>>5163802
>Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers
>Approach your father and earnestly thank him for his existence, and explain the reason you chose to meet him here and the significance of the statue atop the hill
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>>5166054
>>5166056
Theres no reason we cant try to diplomacy them out of their dogmatic ways, and remember the Emperor planned on getting rid of them eventually. Religion bad, remember?

>galaxy wide empire
More like small pockets here and there. We're the ones with navigators, not them, so each forge world is mostly isolated, and each Exploration Ship is flying blind until they find something to sit on.
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Giving our father one of our horses foals could be good at a later date. After we gift one to our brothers.
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>>5166096
+1, but at another date. Grabbing a foal will have time, and we have a finite amount of time before dad has to leave.
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>>5166091
Not really. Emperor is absolutely making a deal with Mechanicum if he's making a deal with the Navigators considering he likes them less than Mechanicum.
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>>5166091
You do realize the mechanicium actually has non warp FTL communication right now right? They didn't lose that shit until after the heresy.

They might not be able to navigate but holy shit can they dig in and make the crusade as painful as possible.
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Maybe theres something we can do to make the Mechanicum less terrible? Create more efficient cybernetics, less grim darkness, less excessive amounts of scrolls and wax on machines, change from promethium engines to electrical ones, less shitty architecture- shit we need to throw Perterabo and Dorn at the mechanicus. Heck maybe throw Manus into the mix.
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>>5166075
Whatever happened yo Al Uzza? We did cleanse and repair Kuan Im but is the other shipfu still leaking raditation?
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>>5166162
Shes still full of monsters. We haven't had the spare time to clean her.
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>>5166155
Prolly depends on how Father and them see Kanzeon. Since she is made of human stuff it falls on a very grey area of AI, we could be pursued as super heretechs or at the very best tolerated, or we could be seen as the second coming of the Omnissiah since she is Archeotech and thus already invented by humanity at some point, which does align with their dogmas
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>>5166162
She s under there. We need to finish the war first.
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>>5166162
She is still leaking warp juice, we prioritized freeing Mari since she was already intact and could help the war effort more.
After the war, fixing her should be on the top of the list.
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>>5166233
So off the top of my head:
Al Uzza is damaged and infested, but living and uncorrupted.
Kuan Im's body has been cleaned, repaired (as best as we were able to do so) and made ready for habitation. Her soul is Huli Jing and is presumably plotting revenge.
Avalokiteśvara is damaged and Chaos-worshipping/devoted, but has yet to ascend to daemonhood. We did swear to free her from Khorne, as difficult as it may be, so that's something to keep in mind.
Anahita is still alive, but damaged and in Zoroastian territory. PROBABLY (hopefully) not corrupted yet.
Philotes and Albina are dead, their bodies presumably severely damaged and potentially warp-irradiated.

Getting Al Uzza, Avalokiteśvara (if she survives the war), and Kuan Im's body sorted before we push out into the remaining three nations would be good, the intimidation factor of so many massive ships shouldn't be understated. But perhaps out of left field, I feel that we should go with Carys and our Eldar followers to drop the soul stones of the dead off at Kher Ys. I want to know how far (or if) the corruption in canon has spread. Denying Slaanesh an entire craftworld is good for business.
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>>5166167
Well there is this.
https://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Brotherhood_of_Singularitarianism
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Sorry for the wait. Hope you lads had a nice valentines day.

Blithely and cheerfully, as if this is a mundane family gathering. Offer the Emperor a bottle of Dragon's spit and introduce him to Guozhi, who you will introduce as your mentor and Wenyan, your father. And tell Dae-Hyun how happy you are to see him again and meet his brothers:25

Explain to your father how the Water Generating Stones work, and warn him that they are dangerous and should never be weaponized. Also mention that you are sharing some copies of the Journey, and would like your sons to be the first ones to recieve it, so they may have the complete picture.:14

put your hand on Dae-Hyun shoulder casually and then extend a handshake to our father,wink at him and say "I would hug you if I could father but that would most likely ruin the image of otherworldly savior king you've cultivated with my people in your short time here":1

Approach your father and earnestly thank him for his existence, and explain the reason you chose to meet him here and the significance of the statue atop the hill:6

Hug Big E: 2

Ask what has happened to require Dae-Hyun to be interred in such a ...crude device. Part of its function is obviously devoted to life support, but what injuries would require such a treatment?:1

Total votes: 27

So Lieren will act as if the arrival of the terran travelers is a mundane family gathering

Offering his father a bottle of dragon's spit as he introduces him to Guozhi and Wenyan
Before telling Dae-Hyun how happy he is to see him again and meet his brothers

And before the Emperor and the members of the convory returning to Terra depart, will inform them of the Water stone's function and the dangers its use presents and that He'd like the 2nd legion to be the first to receive the copies of the Journey

Writing now

>>5165813
lol

>>5165931
>Fast forward to Ciaphas cain's era
>Manages to snag himself a deployment to Shangrala, planning on coasting through the rest of his career in peace
>Fucking Huli Jing, the Keeper of Rust and the Unseen Master reemerge looking for revenge

>>5164977
No on the refractory fields,
If he'd consent
MK 1, mostly, as this is just before the Luna wolves earned their name so the treaty of mars hasn't been made
If you looked you might

>>5164330
They are stronger, since the focusing crystal is made with Kanzeon Age materials. That flexible glass Jinhai used to make that bridge of his
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>>5166436
Well I had emergency surgery, So could've been better. Hope yours went well.
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>>5166511
Jesus, Hope it wasn't anything serious, and that you're alright now, man . And I just got drunk at home watching old martial arts movies, which is why there was no update yesterday
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>>5166300
+1 this anon, I hope op is taking notes.

>>5166436
>refractory fields
My god, I guess it's not to surprising to assume that all the archeotech on this planet didnt come with schematics for force fields. I am very suprised, but also grateful to know we can probably start making those when we notice some of our terminator and dreadnought sons flashing as their shields protect them.
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>>5166511
Damn bro are you alright now? What happened?
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>>5166535
Its more that Lieren is a very efficent man, and when a suit armor will protect you from damn near anything on the planet, investing resources for more protection is unncessary

And when the Vishnu war started, he was more concerned with making sure the Imperial army would be equipped with the means to wage the war rather than survive a few moments longer considering the Vishnu like to use things that make Shields like that as effective as wet paper
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A smirk curled from your lips, and you knew your eyes twinkled as you suppressed a chuckle at your fathers words. That smirk soon grew into a gregarious, cordial grin so large it showed your teeth. Clapping your hands together, you caused even a few of your genetically modified warrior sons to jump as the tensions that had arose in the brief period of silence since their arrival was broken by your thunderous, good natured laughter. Dae-Hyun synthesized laughter joined your own , moments after Wenyan's did, your father entirely unafraid of the lesser giants before him or your birth father whose expression turned momentarily into one of shock before he relaxed and beneath his austere façade allowed himself the smallest of smiles.

"Father! You did not tell me you were sending me my sons to aid me in my struggle against the tyranny and evil of the butcher king!" You cheerfully exclaim, bowing and cupping your hands as you approach the party, grin growing ever more radiant and broader as you do so "I would've prepared a more welcoming greeting if I knew I was receiving guest alongside these gifts! Forgive me for meeting you by the grave of my fallen friend, in this humble field of flowers rather than my own home. The shame of this ashamed faux paus will haunt me for years. Such a lack of filial piety is unforgiveable and I would gladly prostrate myself before you and beg forgiveness for this slight, if our meeting here today was not painfully temporary"

Righting your posture, you've placed a hand between your twin hearts as a few of your sons and the soldiers beneath exchange confused, unsure glances with one another.

"Here here" You say hurriedly, marching over to the procession of crates "Allow this humble farmer to right his mistake by gifting his great father, who has traveled an incomprehensible distance, a gift to salve the offense I have surely caused with this folly"

The bafflement of the gathered terran soldiers and menials heightens to the point it becomes palpable in the air, as you approach your nameless and staunchly loyal assistant, who takes a moment to peel his eyes off of your father. Nodding to eachother, he hands you a bottle of Dragon spit, one of the collection you were given when you first came across the village that produced them from the innards of the fish they caught and processed. Smiling, you wrap the bottle of yellowed glass in white silk, tightening it over the bottle with a slip of jade colored half mutton fat and half black.

The emperor of mankind's eyes dart around even as he maintains his quietly stoic expression as you approach him and fall to one knee before him.

"Alcohol?" Someone whispers as your father reaches to examine the bottle, taking it from your hand hesitantly, confusion clear on his face to your eyes at least
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>>5166550

"This is a bottle of one of the most beloved varieties of spirit produced with the Celestial Long-Jian empire" You explain, more to assure the worries of your father's entourage than anything else "It is called Dragon's spit, and it is renowned and famed for its bitter taste and beloved for its potency. It is"

You grin wider, a jackalish glint shining in your eyes as another chuckle escapes your throat

"Brewed through distilling a liquor produced through fermenting the guts of fish" You say merrily. Immediately, one of the hardened veterans of the wars of barbarians suppression upon terra gags and covers their mouth, eyes water at the thought of the liquor

"...Fascinating" The emperor says as he bows his head "Thank you, my son, I will be certain to save it for only my most solemn affairs and triumphant of celebrations. The...viscosity of it will surely astound any of my servants who are fortunate enough to join me in my initial tasting of it"

"Foreign culture will surely be appreciated upon Tear'ah" Wenyan says "heavens know that spirit spread faster than a wildfire across humble Shangrala"

"Oh forgive me, forgive me esteemed father" You beg energetically as you rise to your feet, bowing repeatedly as you turn from one father to another "Father, this is my father Wenyan. The chief of the village of nothing and the man who took me into his home after my arrival upon shangrala, He is one of my idols and my greatest dream is to one day possess wisdom comparable to his own"

"Oh, I see" Your father says as if suddenly coming to a realization "So you're the man who helped Lieren open his heart"

"I supposed I am, great one" Wenyan answers "Though he didn't need much guidance to become the great, benevolent man you see before you, even if his humble nature forces him to act as if I am the man who taught him all the virtues of the world and helped guide his hand for every action he has taken in his life. I am but a humble farmer, your radiance"

"Though" Guozhi speaks up "this humble monk may have played a role in this boys philosophical awakening, though no were near as great of one as he would tell you"

Before your father from terra can ask who Guozhi is, you tell him

"This is Wise grandfather Guozhi, a philosopher who survived the purges of the corrupt regime I helped to dispose and overthrow" You explain "he is my mentor and guiding star in the sky! If it were not for him, perhaps these golden eyes of mine would not see as keenly as they do now"

"Perhaps that would've been a blessing" Your father says quietly

"Ignorance is a curse" You reply without hesitation "But, please, allow me to introduce you to My wise father and mentor, Wenyan of Nothing and Guozhi"

Both of the elderly men cup their fists, which, now that your father has handed off the bottle of dragon spit you gifted him to a hooded menial, he returns the just, as with a bounding step you approach Dae-Hyun.
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>>5166551

His armored cage stiffens as he looks to you, and you can sense his trepidation in the air and upon your tongue

"Dae-Hyun, my son. Even the most storied poets of Shangrala could not describe the boundless joy I feel to be privledged to see you again, my noble and valorous son" You coo, hopping from foot to foot to contain and expend your carefree energy and now nearly out of control excitement "And that I would be so blessed to meet three hundred of your brothers"

"Son?" Wenyan gasps, eyes going wide before his attention is taken once more by the emperor's questioning and explanation, a conversation now joined by your assistant, who is dutifully listing off the contents of the tithe you'll pay to you father while simultaneously recording what he is gifting you

Leaping back to your father after you hear your trusted assistant list of water generating stones and copies of the Journey in his tally

"Ah the Water generating stone, a queer piece of ancient technology I have jealously and fearfully guarded. In the right hands, it could turn a lifeless wasteland verdant and replete with life" You explain, dramatically lashing your arm out and upwards towards the sky "But could very easily be made to serve as weapons more terrible than any other. Oh the threat they pose in the hands of those who would condemn their foes to such a fate are two fold! Without moisture in the air, they will draw it from the environment, their reach extending to living organisms! And if there is nothing to draw moisture from, they will create it through chemical fusion! And if the amount they are programmed to produce is great enough it can render entire regions empty of not only life but anything besides vast bodies and pools of water deeper than any lake!"

Your father's hand tightens around the stone he was inspecting.

"A means to return water to Terra's surface, to refill her oceans and repopulate her dry lake beds and polluted rivers" The emperor says sagely, nodding his head as he places the stone gently back into the hand of your assistant "after centuries of artificial drought, shall the cradel of humanity once more shine like a blue gem in the stars?"

He smiles, looking upon you as you bow

"I can only pray that it shall, my enlightened father" You say as you motion a hand to the book being offered to him "and this is the most recent edition of The Journey, my personal philosophy and world view put to text, updated as I experience more of life and its many quandaries and introspections. It is a guide and nothing more, of how one may live righteously and lead a good, virtuous life. It is by no means religious gospel or meant to be an authority of conduct, behavior or way life. It is but a container of my earthly knowledge and wisdom meant to teach others to see the world as though through my own eyes and understand it as I do"

Your father's expression falls
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>>5166552

"A failsafe you've created, in case of your death" He correctly guesses, his voice tinged with sadness as he places a palm over the copy offered to him directly "To guide and protect those who come after it, to pull the tyranny you have faced from its very roots post-humorously. A defense against...sinful rulers"

"That is why I made it, one cannot expect wise and virtuous men to emerge and come into prominence every generation" You answer blithely "And while all things must one day fade, their influence upon the minds and hearts of men is everlasting, for good or for ill. I chose to preemptively counter act the ill with the good"

"I wish we had time to discuss this book's contents at length, Lieren. I We shall when we meet again, when my fleets reach Shangrala itself" Your father says, taking a copy of the Journey and inspecting its cover carefully "but I must depart, now, lest I became trapped here, separated from my own home and armies"

You cup your fists and bow

"I understand, but, this humble son of yours has but one request" You say as you lift your head "The Journey is too be forced on no one, following it is one's own decision however...should the people of Noble Terra express and interest, I would like if my sons were the first to receive their copies so they may truly understand the snippets of wisdom I spoke to Dae-Hyun"

Your father laughs and claps a hand on your shoulder, winking as he steps from the tunnel for the first time since he's arrived

"You have my word they shall, though I must be selfish and take a copy for myself before any other" He jests, and you laugh alongside him, savoring and treasuring the carefree moment between father and son, as it may be the last you'll have with him. For, even with his aid, this may be the final war the Giant of nothing wages. Nitya Sinha is a treacherous foe, and his wife a dangerous beast.

But for now, you bask in the warmth of both of your fathers' love and laugh beside them, before you must leave both of them once more for the good of the realm, both Long-Jia and the entirety of the material universe. To preserve and ensure the prosperity of mankind, The Butcher King must and will die.
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The Sigillite stood by his master, as the hanger that once held the finest war machines and warriors of the nascent Imperium of man was now filled with relics of the past and merging of Xenos and ancient human technology. The emperor palmed a strange stone in one hand, and held an large, leather bound book in the other, reading it as the technicians and engineers swarmed around the crates and vehicles that his second son, Lieren of Shangrala had gifted him freely.
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>>5166554

"You know as well as I, we did not give the primarchs the knowledge to create such things from sticks, stones and mud" Malcador said simply as the emperor nodded once

"I am aware, my companion. The thought crossed my mind the moment I recognized the technology. Aeldari, mixed with the last remnants of Humanity's last golden age" The emperor explained, rubbing a thumb against the stone he held "The planet that has accepted Lieren as one of its own sons, becomes more of an Enigma the more I learn of him and the planet of Shangrala itself?"

"Lieren is a genius, he was designed to be" Malcador spoke "I am still amazed, despite the mental alterations and the augmentations of his neural pathways, he has not only a complete emotional spectrum but one so potent and passionate to fit in with that society of poets. But even with the heightened learning and problem solving capabilities those augmentations gifted to him, this is"

"Well beyond anything he could create in an eon of life, without outside assistance' The emperor state calmly, squinting as he read one of the earliest passages of the journey "I had my suspicions of such when I saw the armor he wore. I sensed a vast psionic presence"

"And you deemed it" Malcador began

"A matter to investigate later, you heard my boy's passionate and hateful explanation of his hatred for the forces of the great enemy as I did" The emperor said "And before you ask, it was not an Aeldari mind I felt alongside his own. It felt...human, and far too familiar"

"My friend, is familiar not potentially more dangerous than Unknown?" Malcador mused, crossing his arms as his eyes were drawn to the stone the emperor of mankind was fiddling with "It may not be chaos, or alien. But familiar and human"

"I trust Lieren, he is a noble soul" The emperor answered bluntly, clenching his fist around the stone "I understand your concerns, but were we not both convinced by our first meeting with him, that he, of all my lost progeny, can be trusted?"

"Yes, but he is also..." Malcador began before the emperor handed him a glass bottle "What is this?"

"A gift, a bottle of spirits from fair Shangrala" The emperor stated "Lieren tells me it is renowned for its sweet taste, gentle floral aroma and medicinal effects, would you want to sample it with me, old friend"

"Tch, fine I'll drop the subject, we clearly have nothing to fear. From Lieren at least" Malcador sighed, relaxing as he took the bottle by its neck "and of course I'll accept, the drinks of modern terra are far too harsh and potentially lethal for my palate, but before we abscond for drinks, would you mind telling me, why of all of the archeotech the se...Lieren has brought to us, almost like he thought it all as valuable as stones he's picked up in the river, that what has fascinated you the most are a stone and a book"

"This is no stone. It is a weapon" The emperor said holding it up, turning it around in his hands
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>>5166556

"As well as a tool of peace. it is more valuable than anything else he has brought to terra, amongst all of the technology, this I am certain will...hurry along our plans and perhaps one day allow us to heal humanity's birthright"

"And the book?" Malcador asked

"A window into my son's heart, more priceless than even the stone" The emperor laughed heartily "Like Magnus, he is a wonderful conversation partner, but we've had so little time to talk. This...will tide me over until we next meet. In my eyes, this book is more valuable than even the stone in my other hand, the device that will change the face of Terra itself!"
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What will you do, now that you have a small army of your sons and natives from Terra in front of you, Lieren?

>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra

>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.

>Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility

>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive

>write in
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>>5166558
>>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra
>>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.


This is only common sense stuff. Need to realize their las weapons are actually weaker then ours and get them in proper armor.
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>>5166558
>>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra
>>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>>Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility
>>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive

Man Emps, you've been doing very well so far, but I don't think Lierens gunna be happy if you weaponize the water stones. Still Mad Keks for trolling Malcador with the Dragons Spit.
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>>5166558
>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.

>Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility
I hope they take to Abhumans well and can see them the same way we do.
Also I really wanna see our cripple brother beat one of our sons in melee combat. It's not a matter of if because I know Feng can.
Todays lesson on humility: even a baseline, crippled human can outmatched an augmented giant.

I wonder if Feng just likes to flash around the fact hes crippled, and can still kick you ass despite it. Like hes figure out his crippledness to the point he knows how to use it to hos advantage.
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>>5166558

>>5166562
Changing my previous post to this


>>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra
>>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive

Need to get Dae-hyun out of that dreadnaught as fast as possible.
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>>5166558
>>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive

>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra
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>>5166558
>>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra
>>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>>Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility
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>>5166579
we will need to wait anon, if we do it too fast before seeing how the emperor reacts questions will be raised that can't be ignored, even though they trust us now, we are playing with fire
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>>5166537
>>5166530
Appendicitis.

>>5166558

>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive

>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra
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>>5166558
>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra

>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.

>Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility
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>>5166579
+1
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>>5166558
>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive
This is something that needs to be done, everyone in Shangrala knows we are married, and the entire court knows Kanzeon is a giant ship. Better that they learn from us than by themselves.
>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting
Just like we did with the tiger children and our brothers.
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>>5166558
>>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra

>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
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>>5166558
>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive

>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting
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>>5166558
>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra
>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility
Maybe drop the "you have a mom" bomb on the after we get to know them better. Smashing Khornate skulls together is a great bonding experience I'm sure.

>Lieren tells me it is renowned for its sweet taste, gentle floral aroma and medicinal effect.
kek
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Not the best first physical meeting with the Emperor but nowhere near the worst either. The big take away is being called by name instead of number but there's still a lot of shady nonsense going on. At the very least I don't suspect any active plans from Big E to dispose of Lieren until Chaos is suppressed.

Also Emperor is a fucking prankster.
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>>5166558
>>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive
>>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Write-In
>Ask Jinhai to order his most august and veteran bodyguards to find the largest weapon your father gifted to you. And have them keep Dandan away from it at any cost.
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>>5166654
I mean everything went well. I don't see how a physical first contact with the emperor could have gone better anon. And......not really any shady nonsense either? Like the only things I picked up from that conversation was that the Emperor will Weaponize the Water Stones and we're still hiding our Ship Wife. Other then that everything was very above board.
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>>5166558
>>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra
>>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
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>>5166712
I mean not the best among the original Primarch meetings. Sorry for not being clearer. It's just opinion but I think among how the natives of a planet saw it I think that Vulkan and Leman Russ had the most clearly jovial appearance of things.

Aside from the dark business with the water stone Lieren has to prank his brothers and father from time to time.
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>>5166712
>>5166726
This anon is right, plus tech heresy, even if the emperor doesn't actually care, is a big deal and will be a big deal for the mechanicus as we can't cut them out of the equation yet. Plus we have absolutely no idea how he will react to kanezon and her sisters, she is clearly not an ai, but the unwashed masses of the mechanicum do not make distinctions when it comes to ai, I hope that this emperor does care for the primarchs, malal has said he is not going off of official lore, but that doesn't mean he wont check us if we cross a line he isn't willing to protect us on
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I like that you've gone with the 'only showing the emperor's reactions through the eyes of other' thing it is a nice touch. reminds me of the books he's in.

well assuming that i havn't gone senile and forgotten an instance where we saw the emperor's perspective
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>>5166755
Reminder that one of the major prophecies of the Mechanicum is the synthesis of man and machine into something superior.
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>>5166811
and what the creed, specifically, decries is intelligence without a soul.
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>>5166823
well, from what i remember from when i last looked it up anyway.
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>>5166823
If the machine has a soul that goes out the window.
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>>5166558
>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive
>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility
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>>5166850
machine spirits, though they vary, are sometimes intelligent machines with souls. there is precedent, though a lot of the things mars does is also political in nature, so it is unlikely to help.
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>Learn the names of every astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive
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>>5166558
>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.

>Write in
Give our boys a run down of how things are done around here to relieve their confusion and give them a heads up before meeting abhumans and the like. Tell them how this place has wonderous technology and is a relic of man's greatest era all upon it being treasures. Ween them onto what our wife is, "how amusing my wife is so similar to my maker and father. Born of many souls.

We do not want to start the secrets shit yet and don't break our word wtf?
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>>5166986
I'ma give this a +1xddxp
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>>5166558
>>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra

>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
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it was a nice small reunion
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We need to iterate something important here, she was souls before machine. She was made of humanity before code not the other way around. This clearly seperated her from AI
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>>5167001
I understand, however political enemies will use any leverage they can to see us [REDACTED]. It takes very little for powerful people to have their egos hurt and be petty
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>>5166558
>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive
>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra
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>>5166986
It's not important right now. Hell the only options we should be focusing on are introducing them to Jinhai and their new weapons and testing their mettle.
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>>5166556
>"A gift, a bottle of spirits from fair Shangrala" The emperor stated "Lieren tells me it is renowned for its sweet taste, gentle floral aroma and medicinal effects, would you want to sample it with me, old friend"

Big E pls. lmao.

>>5166558
>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra
>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility
>write in
Take Dae-Hyun alone to see Kanzeon and have him healed and garbed in our rainment. First of our sons... and our local Chapter Master of the Second Sons Legion.
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>>5167068
If Dae-Hyun and the 299 other space marines survive this they really would be called Fortunate Sons. Especially if Dae-Hyun is taken out is life support.
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>>5166436
>Hope you lads had a nice valentines day.
Good one, Malal.
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>>5167068

We should totally call our chapters sects and in keeping with our flowery naming sense we should call them the Prosperous Sons of the Shangralalian Sky Sect.
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I'm starting to think people forgot we need to conduct a deep strike on Nitya soon so we should be getting everyone ready to fight not on a lengthy and delicate surgery which would require Lieren's upmost focus.
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>>5166558
>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive
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>chapters
Companies, but w/e. The Word Bearers were the only ones with Chapters pre-Heresy.
>Prosperous Sons of the Shangralalian Sky Sect
As much as I love Shangralan naming conventions, I think the cultural reliance on purple prose and rampant poeticisms is gonna be something Lieren'll need to compromise on. The Ministorum will hate it and t's a mouthful to get out in-combat (either in a battle cry or trying to direct troops). By the time some hapless sergeant is halfway through "Benevolent-Winged Heralds of the Primarch's Mercy, charge!" he's been shot in the head and his position is being overrun. Compare that to the names in pic related, for example. "Void Devils." Short, sweet, descriptive.
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>>5167124
We probably need both I would say.

Theres the main legion body whom all our sons are part of.

And then there are these other identifiers:
1) Expedition/Force for brothers assigned to a crusade battle group
2) Chapter for brothers currently assigned to permanent garrisons on important planets or installations
3) Sects for personal association with whom the brother feels most drawn to.

The sects, if we maintain them as they are will have to be seperate from deployments instead of mono-sect groupings for assignments.
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>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra

It's a shame but >>5167163 has the right of things. The legion and possibly chapter's names will have to be something succinct. I do like the name Fortunate Sons though but mostly because I'm thinking of the song and that this war is Shangrala's Vietnam.
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>>5166550
>Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive
This is by far the most important thing we need to do. We need to weed out that problem first so we can warm our sons up to having a motherly figure.

>write in
Dae-Hyun, is that a force field you're equipped with? How intriguing!
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>>Set Dae-Hyun with a fixed body if he wishes it. Upgrade his Terminator if otherwise.


Darklance scaled up to Terminator!!!!!??
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>>5166558
>Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
>Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility
>Ask to inspect Dae-Hyun's living tomb and assess what remains of his original body. Perhaps there may still be a chance for him to be restored in the future.
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>>5166558
> Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.
> Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive.
> Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility.
I think we can forego the introduction at court until later, but meeting Kanzeon will be important; she's been a cornerstone of our push against Nitya Sinha and her deranged sister.
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>>5167409
I think that we have to be very clear with our sons that Kanzeon isn't an AI, she's a human soul with a mechanical body- like how Dae-Hyun is now but to a greater extent. She is an ally of humanity and should be treated with respect.
Also- she's going to hopefully give Dae-Hyun a new body.
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>>5167229
>Darklance scaled up to Terminator!!!!!??
>Terminator
Close, but not quite. Though I will admit, a darklance weapon on a contemptor, anachronistic though it may be, is interesting. I've never thought it was fair that the BAngels got all the cool variants.
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>>5167414
This is definitely something we should point out. Plus it would be super nice to fix up our boi.
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>>5167429
>I've never thought it was fair that the BAngels got all the cool variants.
>flying psyker dreadnaught ftw
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>>5167456
>Contemptor dread with a jump pack and heavy flamer power claws
>Boxnaught with infantry-raping speshul melee weapons and optional psyker
>Death Company dreadnoughts
I want to know who gave an archmagos head to get all that shit.

Also, this is clearly an unpopular opinion, but I think Dae-Hyun should stay in his box. He chose to be interned in it because he wanted to continue to serve dad and meet us again, taking him back out immediately after robs his choice of any gravitas.
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>>5167510
He made that choice because medical science on terra was at its limit.

Here we are not so constrained and we are never going to look at him differently for it.
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>>5167520
Neither of those points change the fact that doing so retroactively denies him what should be a major moment in his life and the catalyst for a good deal of character development. Dae-Hyun has already been shown to be a weary soldier wrestling with his own mortality and impermanence. He has lost friends, both mortal and astarte and he wants to join them, but can't until he does his duty. Becoming a dreadnought both brings him a step closer to that goal and prolongs his personal journey to his destination. Taking him out and restoring him to what he once was only does the latter, on top of what's stated above.

I think this is where we might want to add onto the Journey, this is a bit of a blind spot. It was written when Lieren didn't know he was the biologically immortal leader of a bunch of less potent, but no less biologically immortal warriors. Dreadnoughts fall into a grey area, I think, when it comes to the part of the Journey that says to welcome death, but not to seek it out. I imagine becoming one will be a very personal decision members of the 2nd make when they become eligible. Neither a position of honor, nor of disgrace, like the White Scars.
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>>5167510
>>5167533
Bro, this is retarded and legit unintentionally malicious. If you have the medical technology to let someone out of a fucking walking coffin where they're stuck there until something finally kills them and have to spend a lot of time sleeping and you don't even bother to offer then you get everything you fucking deserve.

Offer him the damn choice to get fixed up. It does nothing to rob him of the gravitios of his choice. He made the choice he did cause terra doesn't have the same medical tech as we do.
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>>5167533
Have to agree with the other guy not allowing our son to use the medical equipment if he so chooses is horrible. Regardless of the decision he made on Terra which hade inferior medical equipment. If he wishes to remain in the dreadnought he is still allowed to do so, but not offering the aid is way out of Lierens character.
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Even if our son chooses to remain in his box we should at least make it a comfortable and sophisticated box for him.
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>>5167578
It shall be made of the finest cardboard our land can produce.
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>>5167583
We can get our adopted tiger children to decorate it with stickers and smiley faces even!
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We should definitely take him aside to meet Kaz-chan he's earned that much, and just think how badass he's gonna be with living metal Augmentations and a mastercrafted terminator power armor along with the best weapons we can put in his hands. Only the best for our son's.
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>>5167593
Talking about powered armour, we might actually have to redo all their armour.

Our 300 are mostly in Mk 1 Thunder armour. Thats upper body only, non-CBRN in nature.

Considering the level of technological warfare here, we're gonna need to come up with at least crusade pattern for our boys.

At least theres a STC for it so we just need to upsize the design and produce Master-crafted versions of em.
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>>5167630
Yyyyyyyeeeaaah redoing our Son's sets of power armor will be a fun ordeal. We'll need to account for their black carapace being able to efficent interface with their new power armor, add features to their armor that meshes will with the surgical augmentations they've received (funnel in helmet they can use to comically spit acid in their enemies faces mid combat without needing to remove their helmets), armor joints locking in place so they can get away with sleeping while standing up, inbuilt toilet recycler, the works.
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>>5167630
>At least theres a STC for it so we just need to upsize the design and produce Master-crafted versions of em.
Not just STC's that are GaoT environmental hazard, or Great Crusade tier power armor. We have that, Kanzeon's wonderful help, AND our understanding of Drukari technology. Our bois will be getting the good stuff.

Oh man, I really, really want to introduce our sons to the Vishu. Those lads are fucking wild. They're big and strong enough to do super human feats (lower than space marines, but impressive nonetheless). Not just the Vishnu, the tiger people were just as biggervif not more so than the average Vishnu. Granted our nieces and nephews aren't fully mature yet, they should still be fairly large for children their age. Its gonna be pretty funny.

And don't get me started on our few Primarch tier horses. Give us a few years and we'll have specialized augmented horses fit for space marines to ride.
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>>5167638
I want them to fight feng and Jinhai at one point since it's noted those two can kick their asses by Lieren
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>>5167638
>bringing our sons for a ride on our horse.
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>>5167556
>>5167568
I'd be indebted to you both if either of you could point out where I said "Lieren should withhold aid from Dae-Hyun, even if he asks for it." Because as far as I can tell, I said no such thing and you're both putting words in my mouth. For whatever reason. I agree with the idea that, if it's possible to restore him, we should offer him help. I said in the second part of my most recent post that the internment in a dreadnought should be a very personal choice. How do you think a marine would make that choice if we don't offer it? What I am saying is that from a purely narrative perspective, as opposed to an in-character one, taking Dae-Hyun out of the coffin ignores key aspects of his character and does no favors with regards to the story Malal has created for him thus far.
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>>5167510
>Also, this is clearly an unpopular opinion, but I think Dae-Hyun should stay in his box. He chose to be interned in it because he wanted to continue to serve dad and meet us again, taking him back out immediately after robs his choice of any gravitas.
>>5167533
>Neither of those points change the fact that doing so retroactively denies him what should be a major moment in his life and the catalyst for a good deal of character development. Dae-Hyun has already been shown to be a weary soldier wrestling with his own mortality and impermanence. He has lost friends, both mortal and astarte and he wants to join them, but can't until he does his duty. Becoming a dreadnought both brings him a step closer to that goal and prolongs his personal journey to his destination. Taking him out and restoring him to what he once was only does the latter, on top of what's stated above.
>I think this is where we might want to add onto the Journey, this is a bit of a blind spot. It was written when Lieren didn't know he was the biologically immortal leader of a bunch of less potent, but no less biologically immortal warriors. Dreadnoughts fall into a grey area, I think, when it comes to the part of the Journey that says to welcome death, but not to seek it out. I imagine becoming one will be a very personal decision members of the 2nd make when they become eligible. Neither a position of honor, nor of disgrace, like the White Scars.

considering you wrote this shit in response to people wanting to get him out of that damn coffin cause holy shit dreadnaughts are suffering it came across as being against giving him the choice to get himself fixed.

Also bro you're still retarded. Him getting out of that shit simply due to the fact we have better medical tech does nothing to rob the choice he made of gravitus.>>5167647
>What I am saying is that from a purely narrative perspective, as opposed to an in-character one, taking Dae-Hyun out of the coffin ignores key aspects of his character and does no favors with regards to the story Malal has created for him thus far.
Also this is stupid. Narratively he made that choice cause it was the best choice he had to stay alive long enough to see lieren again. He wouldn't have chosen to become a dreadnaught if there had been better options.
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>>5167647
Our son is depressed, and we got the cure. Some new spanking new augmentations, some fresh flesh to surgically implant, and a new dreadnought we can willingly enter or leave so he can still wear all the graffiti of his previous coffin.

He is the indomitable Ursa of Terra, and we shall see to it that our son lives long enough to shoot the shit with his Warhound best friend.
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>>5167691
The reason Dae-Hyun is depressed is because his legion is full of dumbasses not that he's in a dreadnaught.
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>>5167748
This. Lets hope and pray our book sorts that shit out, instead of fracturing it even more.
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>>5167748
We better save our planet faster so we can tell our sons to stop fucking around.
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>>5167661
>I imagine becoming one will be a very personal decision members of the 2nd make when they become eligible.
>it came across as being against giving him the choice to get himself fixed.
>very personal decision
>personal decision
If you didn't know, "decision" means "choice." That post only comes across as anti-help if you're illiterate. I recommend fully reading the posts you respond to, it will make you look like less of a joke.
>Him getting out of that shit simply due to the fact we have better medical tech does nothing to rob the choice he made of gravitus.
If someone makes a hard, intensely personal decision, and it immediately is made moot because the unforeseen occurs and reverses it, at no cost to the person who made the choice, that cheapens the choice itself. This isn't subjective.
>Narratively he made that choice cause it was the best choice he had to stay alive long enough to see lieren again.
No, he made that choice in-character. Dae-Hyun is not aware he is a character in interactive fanfiction, Malal and the voters are the only ones who make choices from a narrative perspective.
>He wouldn't have chosen to become a dreadnaught if there had been better options.
Dreadnoughts wouldn't be made at all if there were a better choice, or any other choice. Dae-Hyun wanted to fight at our side and he made the choices he had to to do that. If the Imperium uploaded the consciousness of wounded marines to battle automata, he would've done that. The means by which he continues to choose to fight is entirely irrelevant, the choice to continue to fight itself is what matters.
>>5167691
>Our son is depressed, and we got the cure.
The reason he's depressed is because he's watched scores of his friends die before his eyes and his legion is falling to factionalism. We can't bring back the dead and we haven't been reunited with our full legion, so we do not, in fact, have the cure.
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>>5167889
We uhh. . Can bring back the dead. Granted it requires a lot of prep work prior to death but we have the means of rebirth and ways of putting souls in bodies.
This is semantics since e can't ressurect the people who died on Terra but I felt it neccercery to correct you.

As for the factionalism, We didn't send any emissaries so we can't fix the legion but the book should hopefully reduce the factionalism by a degree if they read it all without bias.
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>>5167889
>If someone makes a hard, intensely personal decision, and it immediately is made moot because the unforeseen occurs and reverses it, at no cost to the person who made the choice, that cheapens the choice itself. This isn't subjective.
No this is literally retardation. If you tell me IRL you got stuck in some shit like a iron lung or what not and then they make technology to make that redundent and that you wouldn't fucking take it then you are either a liar or a fucking retard.

People make the choices they do on what they have on the time. Going "Muh" story narrative just paints you as an idiot and would make Dae-Hyun an idiot. I would actually vote to lecture the fuck out of him if he tried to use the form of argument you're using.

Like for real dude, the best stories and quests are the ones that have characters act like people and not like narrative driven characters that have to do dumb shit like what your suggesting.

Any major selling author or really god writer will tell you that.

Now if this was something to do with morals or a code of honor or a matter principles your argument would hold ground. It is not and thus does not.
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>>5166558
Doe we need to make it a vote to offer augmentation improvements to people like Dae-Hyun, or will we do that automatically? I'm voting for offering.
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We have no idea how long it has been since we gave our father the schematics, from Lieren pov or Terran pov due to warp fuckery. Even if Dae-Hyun didn't get interred by choice,but out of necessity after a his body was finally ready to give up; regardless it was a step in his Journey(tm) to complete his quest to meet us. We should present him with thr option of restoring him, but even kanzeon being herself how can we be sure she will be able to make compatible parts to our very genetically modified, very irradiated son? In the most likely scenario, we can at least ease the burden by pimping out his coffin.
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>>5168023
Pretty sure Kanzeon could easily do it. Like, she has golden age of technology medical equipment and that shit legit beats what the emperor had to work with on terra.

Hell it beats out what even mars has currently. and if need be we could literally just pop his ass into an entire new body if he so desires and re augment it.
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>>5168023
Also I forgot to mention but Kanzeon has access to our pod which has a record of everything that went into making us and having us grow and gestate in it. Which the emperor had to kit bash together with what he had available on terra.

We can even use that shit to grow her a primarch tier body down the line too.

Fixing up Dae-hyun will be easy compared to that especially since she also has a lot of warp science information on souls too cause lotus tech and what went into making her.
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>>5168023
>how can we be sure she will be able to make compatible parts to our very genetically modified, very irradiated son?
I thought about this and I think I have a solution. We have 299 regular space marines, right? That’s a large enough pool from which to piece together what a totally healthy space marine should look like. They’ll all be injured, certainly, but in different enough ways that I’m willing to bet that there’s at least one of every grafted organ completely intact amongst them.
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>>5168032
Space marines are also basically lesser primarchs too since they share nearly all the same organs. And Kanzeon does have access to and has been studying our pod which contains all our genetic and biological information.
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>>5168026
Anything excluding his Custodes. Those guys really do have the best of the best.

>>5168032
Dude just get a genetic sample fro our coffin son, grow it, then use those parts to replace his fucked up pieces.
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>>5168043
>Dude just get a genetic sample fro our coffin son, grow it, then use those parts to replace his fucked up pieces.

I can't see that working for the implanted organs but she has our own genetic data for that.

>>5168043
>Anything excluding his Custodes. Those guys really do have the best of the best.
They're also all one off unique augmentations. Each one is a master piece.
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>>5168043
>Dude just get a genetic sample fro our coffin son, grow it, then use those parts to replace his fucked up pieces.
Would work for some parts, but not others. The grafted muscles and organs come to mind.
That said, we do have access to the original template those grafted organs were based on: ourselves.
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>>5168050
>That said, we do have access to the original template those grafted organs were based on: ourselves.
Also have the gestation pod we were grown in that contains a record of our biological data, what alterations were made to us specifically and what not.
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Isn't Kanzeon's flesh puppet made based on Lieren's DNA? If she can make a female body out of primarch flesh, fixing a space marine should be easy.
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>>5168057
our goal is to eventually make one. Her current body isn't exactly primarch tier but yeah I think it's based on his dna.

of course once we get the primarch body we plan to transfer her soul into it.

I wonder we could allow her to hop back and forth between the two.
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This old meme has popped up in my head a few days ago and has refused to leave.
Thus is my attempt to evict it.
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It seems is time again. Too bad i missed the 14th, there was a problem.

>>5164330
They are quite strong, since they can kill the equally well armored and cybernetically enhanced vishnu troops. The weapons are a mix of energy weapons and combined eldar-human ones, not just the las rifle.
The armors themselves combine some of the things from the armory of Kanzeon and eldar armors.
Just one would fit as the majority of the shipment that goes to Terra, even if I am not sure, the steel giants are quite big. Too bad I know. In regard to that by simply looking at the Portal Anchors made, he should get it that this is high tech. But he has already understood that, by simply talking with Lieren of this new development.


>>5164977
Sometime ago I made the image for the infantry one, alongside just a few other types if you mean that.
They are in previous threads, with some description. The texts are basic, nothing incredible, but it gives an idea.

But we don't have the same nomination that the imperium has, if you instead mean that. Like corvus, maximus ecc ... and so on. I honestly didn't think of giving them names, beyond "this is the armor that this x soldiers group use". I have tried to stay as close to what Malal writes, with some liberties of course. The quest is more macro sometimes, so name of x weapons/equipment can be considered minutia most of the time.

Lieren is very much capable of sensing or seeing psykers, warp energy, spirits and chaos corruption. Add on top of this his golden eyes, and he sees what you actually are to the very core of your being. So yeah all the taskforce was essentially scanned by him upon arrival.


>>5167630
I had already in mind to make the earth regiments armors in images, but i also think we need a Shangrilan pattern armor let s say. Not sure how it will look like in the end, but it should be something cool. I hope so.

>>5168340
Kek very funny, i personally appreciate it.
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The map of the Vishnu Realm. One of the regions of Shangrila with an overabundance of life and organisms. If the Bone Devouring Forest in Long Jia, was considered full of animals, dangers and death in the past, then the deep jungles of the Vishnu some might say surpass it or stand on even grounds for others. Giant serpents, strange multi horned beasts, fearsome white tigers and the southern fog panthers are just some of the beasts that dwell under the great trees and plants present here.
In the north the great swamp where the Xue live, continues south entering in the jungles, but it also stopped by a mountain chain, where the famous Serpent Pass is made. These particular mountains have always been fought over the Vishnu of the south and the Yan of the north, as they grant safe passage toward one of the grasslands of the region. That is one of the few parts without a large presence of flora, and far safer for human civilization, near these grasslands there are usually even great lakes that originate from the nearby mountain chains.
The Vishnu themselves are quite different from one another, it was only recently that they were united completely under Nitya Sinha, previously they were divided among kingdoms, tribes and city states. The union of societies that while similar had different lifestyles (tribesmen from a semi nomadic tribe fighting now alongside raised professional troops of a city, or levies rallied by a king) was quite a cultural shock. Even so the bloodthirsty warlord managed to do the impossible, using the deep rooted martial traditions of the Vishnu people, as one of the main factors for uniting the land. Beyond his martial prowess and great cruelty.
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The map of the Bask Republic. An alpine region, with many of its parts frozen it's not unusual to see glaciers. And snow is quite common. Even so there is still life here, some forests and even grasslands are present, in more frigid areas plants become far smaller but life can still be found.
The Bask still are an indomitable people, their culture and folklore a lively one even despite being subject to their tyrants, and the harsh cold and lives of their homeland. The region terrain is fairly mountainous, making agriculture difficult but not impossible, while pastures are far more common and used. An industry that is being revitalized recently is the mining one, the presence of precious ores and other rare resources has attracted numerous prospect teams in previously unused parts of the region. The diffusion of the Journey has reached all levels of the Republic, and it has become now part of it and the lives of many of his communities, families and citizens. On the grounds of the previous temples of the decadent priests of the high king, new buildings now stand to teach and talk about the Journey.

Another interesting development is the formation of a new order of knights created by some heroes of their own rebellion. Such news brings great fortune, and we can hope that these paladins and knights will aid us in freeing all of Shangrila from tyranny.
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Being a pilot of the growing Aviation, is a great honor. It takes great courage to become one as well. But being rewarded to be one of the mens that fly machines such as the steel birds, is one of the greatest payments. Sons of farmers, artisans, fishermen, hunters that now hunt down and fight in the skies, flocks of horrible creatures out of nightmares tales and their bloodthirsty rivals of the south.
These men though are given the proper instruments for these battles, one of these is the armors they wear. Different from the ones used by their companions and brothers in the armies, as it was made to be a bridge between man and the machine around it. Controls become more fluid, movements more coordinated. Overall it greatly improves the combat capacity of the pilots. And of course it gives them excellent protection.
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Now the Sky masters. The best pilots one might see in Shangrila, aces all of them. Some of them are even becoming officers in Aviation, thanks to their experience and skill. One of the rewards for becoming pilots of such levels, beyond having access to more powerful equipment and personalized vehicles, is the possibility to be granted one a far more refined and potent pilot armor. Having one of them shows your rank among fellow pilots and the importance that has been given to a man.
Rising to such heights is the dream of many, but one must prove that he is worthy to be called an ace first.
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What can be said ? I do not have words. It’s glorious ! When we looked upon the sky …! Ah you could not believe us. The Heaven vessel, sun child, clouds breaker, the sky boat, the Avatar of Lady Kanzeon …. Could there be more proof that we are righteous ? Lieren has gifted everything and so did his wife. We are protected, our families, all are protected.
They shield us and bleed for us. When I look at the great ship, I always want to cry. It has destroyed countless Vishnu foes. I have seen some of his weapons coming out of it and bringing destruction on the tyrants, war dogs and scum. I wonder what more it could do. I hope that I will live to see it, and that I will live enough to ensure the protection of this vessel !
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Weapon batteries from A to F have been activated, remaining weapons will remain dormant.
Commence bombardment.
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>>5168371
GUNS!
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A Skipping Cloud, is one of the newest vehicles in the growing armies of Long Jia, and the main vehicle of the newly formed combat formation of the Lai Sky Riders. Much like other Shangrilan technology is formed by the harmonic fusion of eldar and human knowledge. In this case it has formed a fast and agile vehicle that delivers an untold amount of punishment against its foes before getting away.
The machine is used by a few sky riders that fly it and man it’s weapons, and a squad ready to descend from the sky for a rapid attack on the enemy lines. Suffice to say this is as elevated even more the Lai warfare doctrine, more than the access to fast moving land vehicles. The vehicle moves thanks to 5 “sails”, a powerful engine in the back and the antigravity machine under it. The weaponry on it is more than enough to tear apart infantry or destroy small Vishnu vehicles and war machines, and if that wasn’t enough is more than capable to ram through a more armored foe. Shangrila shall not be denied his rightful prosperity and liberty by any tyrants, with such a war machine in the service of his sons and daughters !
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The armors used by the newly recruited and trained Lai Skyriders, is a truly formidable one. The first feature that is seen is no doubt, the powerful jetpack in the back, a feature that allows the Skyriders their descends on the foes and famous assaults from the Skipping Clouds. Developed from the armor already in use by the Lai Riders, it was a great success upon the battlefields, though the equipment on his back does require more energy but the performances surpass the new costs to make it function.
This addition to the armies of Long Jia, will be put to use further in future campaigns no doubt. Who knows what greater battles it will see ? What new tactics will be tested and successfully achieved thanks to this equipment ?

Still what other foes beyond Vishnu could even fight against it ?
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////A —---- or “Dragonfly '' Drone, is an antigravity fast moving small DAOT construct seemingly developed to be one of the base tools for the ancient and unknown colonization mission launched to Shangrila.
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Ah the Dragonflies ! True machines and companions, loyal without questions. Whatever the ancients did to make them, is not for us to know, we must thank the Progenitors as they gifted these machines to the Gentle Giant, hero of all Shangrila.
The Dragonfly work in flocks, and it’s not unusual to see them entering inside wounded or broken machines, like the tools of a white lotus medic in the body of a man, thanks to their sizes. Working in these large groups allows them to communicate faster and correct themselves rapidly, because of their several eyes and sensors. To accomplish their tasks, they have access to a venerable variety of work tools that allow them to repair and build anything our mind could think of, or even clean a floor if one wants them to do so.
If those work tools were taken off them, they can be equipped with ranged weaponry, making them especially dangerous to lightly equipped Vishnu troops. In case of melee, they wouldn’t need more weapons than their own bodies, as the machine imitates a certain type of snake's family, twisting around the enemy's body and crushing him until his bones break or until it can't breathe if the desire is to simply knock down the target.
For other uses they are optimal for prospecting as they will methodically scan an area, until they have moved across every micron of it. The great lady Kanzeon alongside our savior Lieren, did some time ago improve the drones. Their “wings” now present elements taken from the star people, improving their agility and speed.
The Dragonflies seem to act with animal behavior of sorts, doing odd holes in the ground, capturing animals or chasing each other across trees.
Still they remain innocent to us and often avoid positioning themselves in our pathways or duties, unless we might be harmed or one is a Shang Engineer that often works close with them. One might find them recharging attached to a ceiling of a warehouse for example, or chirping and buzzing machine language on top of vehicles or looking at us from the Vessel of Heaven.
May they never break, as these machines have aided us in any aspect of our empire, the honor of receiving their help or fighting alongside them shall be forever remembered by any true men and his sons in Shangrila.

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The War Steel Giant, Terracotta Machine Guardian and many other names is a newly developed vehicle for the armies of Long Jia. It’s capable of great martial feats, and it has proven to work well in coordination with the rest of the army. One of the more unusual patterns, based on the heroes and champions of the Journey rebellion, is the Jinhai one.
This rare Giant in particular is armed with a particular spear beaming with light as well as a fearsome cannon that spit arcs of thunder from it ! If that wasn’t enough smaller weapons seem to grow from it in case Vishnu soldiers attempt to reach it or if enemies arrive from the air, like the disturbing hell drakes and infernal wyrms, or the simply disgusting half-men machine Vishnu gargoyles ! Truly this Giant deserves the name of our noble and courageous emperor, as the machine almost seems to mimic our ruler on how it was designed and in the movement !
The machine like the others of his kind is truly beautiful to see, and it’s yet another gift from our saviors, thought and crafted perhaps in their great boat in the sky. Truly this machine will only fit the captains and champions of the newest regiments of our army.

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(I have tried to make the giant a mix of things, one the description Malal has written down. Two in part the imperial knights, and three the eldar wraith knights. I think the mix works.)
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And that is all. If there is anything to ask, feel free. Or suggestions for other things to do.
Here is the current list of possible things that will be done. :


- SM possible new armor pattern
- Bai war banner, for someone. Maybe an honorary war banner for the Brothers of the Panthers. Would fit
- Portal Anchors
- Personal Armors of Heroes ? Like Feng for example
- Another Vishnu unit (maybe)
- All the other avatars of the sister AI-ships (Anahita, Philotes and Albina)
- The Creti Wardens, The Seowl Rangers, and The Suomit Ursine Guard
- More simple images/memes, stuff like the view from the road or Guozhi drinking Tea with Wenyan
- Settlements/City maps ? (maybe)
- Attempts for evil spirits/magical beasts (maybe)
- More animals, vehicles, weapons, armors and so on (maybe)
- Maybe do the artwork of the Bask of Lieren (maybe)
- Shuni noble houses (recent ones need to check threads )
- Bask houses ?

i hope it was a good valentine for everyone.
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Nice work as always anon
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>>5168380
And who knows about the bigger guns of the ship, i wonder if some foes will be gentle enough to position a fleet of theirs in the open void for some weapons testing.

>>5168431
thanks, do you have one that you prefer or like more ?
leaving some combat music for the imminent assault on the citadel

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A6cSbof7Pik
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>>5168465
Honestly? Kanzeon, for the reason that so far I just uses ramdom images of spaceships to represent her every time I made a meme, but now we have a more concrete form. A fan one, but your works have either been very close to what Malal wrote, or he incorporated it later.
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>>5168465
I particularly love Kanzeon, not for the art, although it's remarkable to see the strange style and design you've crafted- but because of the sincere emotion describing Kanzeon.
I can't convey geunine emotion without sounds insincere, but something I love about this quest is how Lieren's kindness and bravery is true and wholesome. This man wants for nothing except the betterment of his fellow man and everyone who has met him cannot deny that. Even the rough and crude men of New Varro who's respect is something that doesn't come easily are amazed by how a man as good as Lieren can exist.
It makes me tear up.
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>>5168532
>tfw you're one of the few genuinely benevolent people in the entire universe
Just goes to show how much of a difference one good man can make.
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I swear we're going to end up the Liu Bei of all this and be left sad and ruined our legacy in shambles
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>>5168491
Thank you.
Yes i also feel that it was needed. Dont get me wrong the memes are nice, but I wanted to see an idea of her taking form.
That they did, Malal is a nice qm. He didn't need to accept any, but he found ways and uses for each of them.

>>5168532
Thanks.
The ship of Kanzeon inside was desribed as a sort of alive mechanical nature. The theme of flowers/plants is repeated. It also looks nice.
For the text i was inspired by the soldier story from the Serpent Pass. This is essentially another man seeing the event and talking about it at home or with friends. The two lines instead are of course an order of Kanzeon to the ship.

Lieren is a special thing. No matter how many times Wenyan says he didn't give Lieren any great knowledge or power, i can't help but smile in seeing he has gifted Golden Eyes with far more than that. A home, family, his first friends, good morals and examples.
Also jokes.
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>>5168584
Not if we do this bit properly. The endgame of this war is to show that lieren can do what needs to be done when the chips are down. If there is a better way he will take it but he will still be able to take the harsh actions that are necessary.
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>>5168616
Lieren's always been capable of that. See what happened to the parents of our nieces and nephews who were caged slaves and weren't part of the main force attacking the vishnu tribes.
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Calling the vote now.

Introduce them, and their weaponry to Jinhai and allow them to explain their capabilities to the emperor of Long-Jia and their service to the emperor of terra:14

Learn the names of every Astartes, man and woman whose been entrusted to you and detail them on the current state of affairs, before introducing them to your adopted Tiger Children...and Luli whose visiting.:24

Test your son's mettle before returning to the war front, by sparring with them and having Feng and Jinhai do so as well. It will be a lesson in humility:9

Take aside Dae-Hyun and the other veterans present and ask if they can keep a secret from your father, until you are certain how he will react. And then introduce them to their mother, if their response is positive:14

Ask Jinhai to order his most august and veteran bodyguards to find the largest weapon your father gifted to you. And have them keep Dandan away from it at any cost.: 1

Inform your genesons of the culture of Long Jia and its wonderous technology: 2

Take Dae-Hyun alone to see Kanzeon and have him healed and garbed in our raiment: 1

Comment on Dae-Hyun suit of armor: 1

Set Dae-Hyun with a fixed body if he wishes it.: 1

Ask to inspect Dae-Hyun's living tomb and assess what remains of his original body. Perhaps there may still be a chance for him to be restored in the future.: 1

Total votes: 27

So Lieren will take the time to learn the names of every Astarte and mundane soldier, before debriefing them of the current state of affairs and introducing them to his adoptive children and Luli before introducing them to Jinhai and allowing them to explain for themselves the capabilities of their weaponry and their service to your father

But before he does that, he'll take Dae-Hyun and the other veterans of the force of three hundred and one space marines and ask if they can keep a secret...

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>>5166589
Well its good you got treatment for it, hopefully before it burst

>>5168340
Hilarious!

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INCREDIBLE WORK AS ALWAYS, On both the art and the accompanying write ups. Really like the maps and the armors are fitting and nice to look at as always. Adore the Kanzeon piece you made, as I've been waiting to see one and the write up for it is just beautiful. the mental image it brings its incredible. The glowing effect is a nice addition. The Dragonfly drone blurb was also adorable

And last but certainly not least, the Steel giant looks imposing and cool as hell And I think the mix of inspirations works well as well
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>>5168661
Malal can we include offering the healing to Dae-Hyun.
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>>5168667
Did it get one less than half the vote?
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>>5168677
Honestly only a handful. Guess we should offer it at a later date then. Perhaps when they're waiting for their armour to be reforged.
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>>5167985
>If you tell me IRL you got stuck in some shit like a iron lung or what not and then they make technology to make that redundent and that you wouldn't fucking take it then you are either a liar or a fucking retard.
You don't choose to get polio, retard.
> I would actually vote to lecture the fuck out of him if he tried to use the form of argument you're using.
Good thing he wouldn't since again, he is unaware he's a character in fanfiction on a Tocharian backgammon forum. If you mean that you'd choose to debate him saying "Yeah, I made my choice, I'm fine as a dreadnought," that would go against the philosophy that's been central to Lieren's worldview for more than an IRL year. We let people walk their own paths, we do not try to sway them onto one we want. We only give them the option.
>the best stories and quests are the ones that have characters act like people and not like narrative driven characters that have to do dumb shit like what your suggesting.
Work on your reading comprehension
>Now if this was something to do with morals or a code of honor or a matter principles your argument would hold ground.
See above.
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>>5168661
Maybe after the war is over and our big boy son lives, we can make it an option in the next prompt.
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>>5168682
>You don't choose to get polio, retard.
No But you can choose to get the issues it causes fixed if someone comes up with a way to fix them that won't bankrupt people.

If you think people who have caught poilo and suffered it's horrible shit wouldn't leap on that shit if they could afford it you're a retard.

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>. If you mean that you'd choose to debate him saying "Yeah, I made my choice, I'm fine as a dreadnought,
Good thing we know he's not fine as a dreadnaught and actually fucking hates it.
>>5168682
>Work on your reading comprehension
Do the same.

anyway done arguing with your dumb ass.
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A neat little detail about 40k ships and why their guns are generally fixed is because during the AoT the defenses of ship grew to be so ridiculous that contemporary weapons system were being out paced so they scaled them up to massive sizes and began conducting war at closer ranges making fixed mounts viable. At least I think that's one of the old lore reasons.
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>>5168702
>Good thing we know he's not fine as a dreadnaught and actually fucking hates it.
Once again the problem has less to do with being a dreadnaught and more to do with his damn legion. If his legion wasn't splintering he'd be content as a dreadnaught.
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>>5168711
>Once again the problem has less to do with being a dreadnaught and more to do with his damn legion. If his legion wasn't splintering he'd be content as a dreadnaught.
uh no. Even then he demonstrated clear hatred for going in the dreadnaught. The splintering made it worse.
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>>5168711
Actually called it a glorified tank and has been generally dismissive of it.
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His main issue is he can't lead while in it and has no worthy successors.
>Actually called it a glorified tank and has been generally dismissive of it.
How much is that his already present frustration? He realizes what his brothers really need is guidance and unity (his leadership) not another piece of hardware so he sees his situation as shitty. The problem always goes back to his legion with the lesser problem of the dreadnaught is it limits his place on the battlefield.
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The gateway of the Golden Dragon's river vanishes into the ether, stranding and leaving your three hundred and one gene modified warrior sons and the four thousand soldiers accompanying them, along with several complete units of the machines of war utilized in your father's war to reconquer the fair homeworld of humanity. The crowd of onlookers has stepped back, to give the off world battalion room to breath and to allow themselves to breath as the fumes rising from the vehicles and the scents of artificial oils and synthetic rubbers rising from the host is so offensive to their senses as to be nearly intolerable. Many cover their mouths and noses with the sleeves of their shirts or robes, though the more well to do fan themselves with decorative fans, some traditional and others fully mechanical.

Oddly the gathered warriors of terra do not take offense by this gesture of disgust, when if it was performed in the court of a noble of Long-Jia, the societal consequence would be dire. You however, who have become inured to far fouler miasmas and polluted airs, mingle with the host of your children and their accompanying regiments. Wenyan, Guozhi, Kuan Im and Old Chen depart from Small Chen's monument, as the clouds of smoke and burning gases are too much for their aged constitutions to endure for long, so instead they depart for the farming village below, your father promising to treat all of your sons with the utmost hospitality and familial adoration when he isn't teasing you by asking how even a giant could manage to father so many funs and jokingly implying disloyalty towards Kanzeon. Smirking, you watch him leave, and then resume your efforts to greet and know every individual entrusted into your care by your once more distant father.

It takes some prodding to get your sons to speak their names and introduce themselves to you, as they are almost religiously awed by your mere presence and being directly spoken to short wires their brains with a shocked and boundless joy. But, they eventually find their tongues, and thought their introductions are halting and at times stuttered, they all are able to overcome the euphoria effecting them to tell you their names and rank in the Terran Imperial Army. Some even sound like they are on the verge of tears as they greet you with wavering and quiet voices.

The lesser soldiers of the army are shocked when you begin approaching them to ask you their name and rank. It would seem they were as close as brothers and sisters to your sons as your brothers of the panther are to you. Their accents are strange, but you are able to understand their gothic as you move your way down their ranks just swiftly while taking the time to make each exchange personal, asking questions and inquiry about the lives and service of every Astarte and Imperial soldier. Their relationships, their fears, their glories and their dreams.
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Though your interactions with each individual are brief, they are intimate enough that by time you lead the gathered men and women for Chen-dao academy, following a whim to introduce them to your other, adoptive children, you feel as though you know them all as deeply as they do themselves, and by the blessed stare of your golden eyes, you may indeed know a few better than even that.

The soldiers remains silent, watching you stride across the fields with awe while all of your son's minus Dae-Hyun seem to have fallen into a blissful, half aware stupor as you praised and congratulated all of them for the battles they have fought and the victories they have won. The chimes and gong's of the school ring melodically as you approach the Null denouncement script emblazoned gates of the magnificent first of the many academies you have built.
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Lieutenant Chul-Moo of the 2nd legion of the emperor's space marine felt enraptured. Their father walked beside them, right before his eyes and he had spoken to him personally! Praised him for his valor during the salt sea campaigns where, during a mission that had gone completely Fubar, a half bestial mutated bastard ripped his arm from his socket when they were clearing out the dens of the misbegotten strain of locales that fled when the territory had first been subdued and brought into the fold years prior. It was incredible how much of a Charlie Foxtrot a few literal rat face bastards can make in their own warrens, Chul-moo counted himself fortunate to have survived the campaign beneath terra's soil. Though he had to get a new pair of mechanical lungs, after he spent weeks breathing in the toxic fumes of the tunnels.

Chul-moo blinked and was shocked to see his genesire still striding before his eyes! It all felt so surreal, like a dream. That he had left terra, and now was in the company and under the command of his primarch. He could take his eyes off of him, he was glorious, resplendent, magnificent. In every mannerism and expression he made, he saw dozens of his fallen brothers and what they were supposed to be. What they could become under his guidance. He was in the presence of his progenitor, among the first of the legions to be so blessed, and he was proud of them! He praised them and took pride in their accomplishments! He had accepted them as his sons! And what's more he had done so excitedly.

Chul-moo felt half drunk, the world merely a backdrop for his father's glorious frame as he lead him up the path towards the fortress in the mountains. Some programmed part of the Astarte's mind angrily questioned where he was being lead and why they were not on the frontlines against the savages who dared to attack his father's people, but it was stifled by the awed and overjoyed thoughts declaring it did not matter, for he was being lead there by his Primarch.

Baseline humans, dressed in the same garb as his genesire, flocked around him the moment as the gates opened.
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The language they spoke, was just familiar enough to sound even more alien than something completely foreign. Dae-Hyun knelt down to step under the gates of the mountaintop fortress, just beside Lieren. Oh how the jealousy burned! But it was not unexpected that Dae-Hyun would be favored by their primarch, they had met before and Dae-Hyun was the greatest of them all

The mad bastard dropped several nuclear strikes on himself to defend his position and once used one of his legs as a blugeons to beat the skull out of a jackass with delusions of usurping the emperor with a force that the gathered Astartes could squash in an evening! The audacity of it all still astounded...

The pleasant reverie that had controlled and dominated Chul-moo and his fellow Astarte's mind was lifted and shattered as a new flock herded around their primarch. One clearly inhuman. Almost instinctively, Chul- Moo stepped forward to defend his primarch from the diminutive mutants, as did several others. He saw one of his direct subordinates reach for a bolt pistol that wasn't there.

But before they could leap into action, Lieren knelt down, lowering himself to the level of the feline aberrations. And what followed stunned Chul-Moo more than seeing their father bounce and leap around with all the energy of young boy, more than even meeting him upon a verdant, flowering field than some desolate shithole of a wasted battlefield.

Lieren greeted the mutants kindly, familiarly. And lifted two of them up into his arms. Chul-moo was conflicted, Xenophobia fighting against his undying admiration for his primarch as Lieren treated the mutants with the same warmth and love as he did them. Chul-moo controlled himself, and Lieren's presence surely held back his fellow astartes from doing what they were made to do.

But, when Lieren walked past them, with two of the mutated children on his arms, one of which had four arms and spoke to them in a quiet, respectful but painfully scolding tone, the gathered space marine's calmed. Even their brothers in arms relaxed, moving twitching fingers away from the triggers of their laz guns.

And in their mind's Lieren's words burned themselves. The first true lesson given from father to son. Chul-Moo found his lips moving to mimic his primarch's as he spoke, eyes fixed on him, barely even aware of the two children he held in his arms. For they were children, despite being almost as large as the scholars who greeted his father.

Chul-Moo's spine tingled, as his father's words branded themselves in the deepest part of his psyche.

"Humanity comes in many forms, and it walks many paths. But, know that the face of man, is not determined by outer appearance, but rather the quality of their character and spirit"
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Chul-Moo was shaken from his reverie once again, when one of the weird cat looking children touched him. To his surprise he did not recoil or move to strike them. And too his greater surprise the youth spoke perfect gothic and pressed two of his fists into the open palms of their opposite hands and bowed, the same way his father greeted the emperor...well plus a set of hands.

"I am Avinash, it means indestructible " The kid said as Chul-Moo reached at and pressed his hand to the boy's head

"Name's Chul-Moo, Kid. Scribes tell me it means "an Iron Weapon" " he said happily, understanding now this brat was as much of a brother to him as any of the men who fought and died by his side. His father accepted him as Human, so he must be human, who was he to question it. Humanity came in many forms, it was what was inside, beyond all the meat and gristle that mattered

"You smell of death" The kid said, grinning ear to ear, revealing his fangs "Like Uncle Lieren or the great killer Aruna. It surrounds you, Sir Chul-Moo, Your name is quiet fitting"

"Damn kid, getting onto my good side already" Chul-Moo Laughed, deciding immediately that he liked the mutated brat for the steel balls and bravado he had "And no I didn't get it after I got this"

Chul-Moo lifted his arm

"Elder Sister Luli has one of those, as does that man who keeps bothering her" Avinash said with a smirk "Yours is noisier, is it stronger, how'd you get it?

"Well, I was fighting some assholes that were...well different like you" He said, kneeling down and glancing over to see many of his brothers being swarmed by the smaller kids and was relieved to see all of them had taken their father's words to heart like he had, and were now trying to avoid harming the furred youths rather than planning how to eliminate them "Mutated, but rather than looking like cats, they were verminous, foul. The stench ruined my lungs more than the dozens of packs of Lho-Sticks I smoke daily"

Another form armed, furred boy marched up to the first, with a Mohawk of fur? Hair?

"WANNA SEE ME SMASH THIS ROCK" The kid shouted as Chul-Moo wondered if that was a game on this planet? He'd have to learn it if it was, wasn't like he was ever going back to terra. Maybe he could ask how these kids got adopted by their primarch, and where they came from to begin with.

"Suuuuure?" He drawled, his eyes darting up to a woman leading the herd of abhuman children. They must be abhumans for their to be so many of them. Normal mutations aren't so stable, or so tamed.

"Holy shit!" He spat, eyes widening the moment he recognized the quality of her cybernetics. It had to be archeotech! Nothing on Terra was that advance. He glanced down to his trusty metal arm, and tightened its hand into a fist. Suddenly it felt like he had a wooden stump rather than the height of the imperium's tech stuck to his shoulder.

The kids gathered to listen his story blinked and sneered

And then proceeded to tattle on Chul-Moo for his language.
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Night had fallen over Chen-Dao academy and the valley below it. You had arranged for transportation of this new army and its armaments to the frontline of the Vishnu war, to join with the Imperial forces lead by Jinhai and the greatest Generals Long-Jia had seen. And while your sons had accepted your children as their kinfolk and now guarded their dormitories as they waited to be sent to the war front, their was a terrifying moment when a vast wave of killing intent rose from them. Xenophobia. Implanted or taught. It was clear many of them had fought and seen their brothers killed by creatures similar to your beloved tiger children. But, your words reached them and opened their hearts and minds. Though you were ready to scold them physically if they had not. These men, Astarte or otherwise, all but erected shrines in your honor. They worshipped you, adored you. And you could not help but ponder if they admiration was honest or if they were programmed to feel such loyalty and affection. After all, your father had remade your brain to function more similarly to a machine than a living mind. Had he implanted an instinctual bond between son and father as well.

You banished the thought, it did not matter. They were your sons, and soon it would not matter if they were created to feel such loyalty. For you would earn it and their love, alongside true, earnest Filial Piety.

"Father" The bass tones of Dae-Hyun's Synthetic voice called out to you

"Ah, exactly on time. How punctual" You say with a beaming smile as you turn around and find the leading officers of the three hundred and Dae-Hyun himself "You have told no one of this private meeting"

"I do not understand the need for secrecy, but figure you have your reasons, commander" one of them, who you know to have been a recent addition to not only the legion's command structure and hierarchy but the legion itself. He was a captain, named Nikephoros and before his ascension, lived as a grave tender in the mausoleum cities of the island nation of Creti

The rest affirmed their agreement with his statement, speaking somewhat stiltedly and overtly formally as they knelt before you.

"A secret for a secret" You cackle, clapping your hands together "For I must know if you can keep a secret"

All but Dae-Hyun shout that they can, eyes wild. Dae-Hyun merely nods solemly

"Truly? Even if I asked you to keep it hidden from my own father?" You ask "On threat of death and torture? Even in keeping this oath of silence you would be forever more damned and branded an outcast"

Hesitation

"Father, I would never betray your trust" Dae-Hyun rumbled "You who have accepted me as his own son, I would die before I forsake you. I have made you proud before, trust that I shall again"

"You are our progenitor, Lieren, and we were made in your image. If we are trusted with such a task, we'd keep our silence to our graves" Nikephoros gasps, bowing his head
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"Jah!" Another of the veterans shouts "The 2nd legion never betrays their own! Our brotherhood is our strength"

"Even the lowliest of grunts would keep their lips shut if you asked them, Genesire" Another laughed "Tell us, let it serve as our first test of loyalty, as your first officers, trust us with your secret father. No matter what it is, we shall not speak it, not even to the master and chief"

"Perkele! Does it even need to be stated! We'd sooner chop our balls off before going against you!" Another captain bellows "Sooner leap into a warp core reactor!"

You smile down at the eleven men gathered before you, arms crossed. By morning, they and the rest of your sons will be introduced to Jinhai and the generals. You have few, but vital hours of peace to spend with your genesons and the other soldiers sent across space and time and it is imperative you explain to the most respected and highly ranked of them your relationship with Kanzeon and her unique existence.

How do you do word your explanation Lieren?

>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.

>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.

>Haaah, once long ago, in the forest that devoured men and swallowed their bones a princess of an old forgotten age was caged beneath the soil. I found and released her, and in time we became husband and wife. She is...a peculiar existence, but she is a friend and ally of humanity and the reason there are so many wonderous technologies upon Shangrala.

>Lie and tell them that you are in fact one half of a set of twins and that you do not know how your father would react to having a spare primarch, especially one that is female. And if the deception is found out at a later date, laugh and explain it was a joke and test of their intuition if such a time ever comes

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>>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.
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>>5168767
>>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.
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Now that lieren has spoken with and (literally) gotten the measure of our sons, have kanzeon prepare upgraded armour for our sons, based on the measurements we have eyeballed. A gift from their mother to her newfound children.
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>>5168767
>>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
This option no matter what needs to get in. They need to know shes not just a very advanced AI but someone with an Actual Human Soul.
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>>5168767
>>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.

combine all these write ins related to Kanzeon >>5166986 >>5167001 >>5167068 >>5167414
We need to be firm but light hearted. I a way, Kanzeon is like Dae-Hyun. Despite having a body of machinery, they're spirit, their soul burns bright with the light of humanity.
ALSO GUYS GOTTA GET OUR SONS UPGRADED CYBERNETICS AND DAE-HYUN A NEW BODY!
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>>5168767
>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.
>Also mention her nature is very similar to father.
>>5168779
>ALSO GUYS GOTTA GET OUR SONS UPGRADED CYBERNETICS AND DAE-HYUN A NEW BODY!
We don't have time for that considering we have a war to wage and need to finish it fast.
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>>5168767
>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
Keep the options limited because as Malal has said more focused leads to a better result.
>Write in/adjustment
Mention how our own father was born in a similar manner. It will relax some tension
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>>5168783
>We don't have time for that considering we have a war to wage and need to finish it fast.
we need to straight up get them new power armor. They're in the mark 1 and that shit is straight up worse then what we're armor our regular human troops in.
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>>5168767
>>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
Gotta give it to 'em straight. The less secrets, the better.
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>>5168783
>We don't have time for that considering we have a war to wage and need to finish it fast.

We actually likely do. They have Mk 1 Thunder which is not even sealed. Considering they type of opponent we're throwing them up against, we need them in fulled sealed environmental armour at the very minimum.
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>>5168767
>>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.
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>>5168786
Cybernetics and new body would take too much time since surgery isn't instanteous and will necessitiate recovery time. Upgraded power armor would be more reasonable.
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>>5168798
cybernetics would take a lot less time then you think. And honestly we want them at their best.
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>>5168767
>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.

>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.
Prepare upgraded powered armour (with inbuilt null wards) for our sons and offer dae-hyun the opportunity to walk shangrila with his own feet once more.

Also we must not neglect the lay men and women. Issue them the upgraded arms and armour that the imperial long jian army is wearing. Will be miles better than the flak they’re wearing. These are battle hardened troops who volunteered to jump into a scary portal. They’re tough, unwavering and highly motivated. Likely a match for our members of our regiment of elites.
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>>5168798
>>5168801
How about we agree on a general upgrade? Be it either cybernetics or armor, whichever if faster we'll agree to vote on that, and the other will be done if we have the time and resources to spar. Is that fair?
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>>5168803
bro, Sending them out in their current armor is legit retarded cause they will get killed. Their legs aren't even powered armored right now. It's just carpace armor.
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>>5168767
>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.
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>>5168803
I think upgrading their existing armor would be the fastest solution.
Making them new armor from scratch runs the risk of it not interfacing correctly with the Black Carapace and additional cybernetic implants might not play nice with their existing implants either.
Retrofitting their existing armor and outfitting them with new weapons seems like the fastest and least risky way of giving them an edge before we lead them into battle.
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>>5168803
Perhaps the only thing we should delay is making Dae-Hyun whole again. As a dread, hes in a perfect position, being both well armoured, insulated and protected compared to his brothers.

Upgrade their arms, armour and cybernetics. Hopefully for such a small group, it should take a day to churn out the necessary equipment and then upgrade Dae-Hyun's. Like take his heavy bolter down and fit on it a volkite weapon.

Once the war is over, we can take the time to regrown the lost limbs of our sons.
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>>5168802
this too. Literally anything we made in bulk will be better than flak armor.

>>5168767
>I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her
This part of the suggested vote feels kinda, I don't know. The enslave or exploit parts are a maybe. Maybe the Emperor would due to his hate for the Men of Iron that rebelled against humanity. Maybe he's sympathetic towards Kanzeon as another gestalt collection of souls. Lieren might feel guilt for not trusting his father completely, but that guilt wouldn't be enough to make his fuck up. I think. If any of that made sense.

When this war is over Lieren should gather evidence and practice some speeches to explain to his space dad why his ship wife is not evil.

>>5168805
It's not something unreasonable to ask. Whatever we can do with what little time we got, and the finite resources we have available. The good news is that the starmetal is a strong malleable substance that can either be used towards cybernetics, armor, and weapons.
Mmmmm. Maybe outfit them with existing Vishnu sized armor, and stretch them out a bit so they fit.

>>5168808
>I think upgrading their existing armor would be the fastest solution.
Agreed. We'd need time to figure out the Black Carapace which would take time, so it would be better to cover the weaknesses in their armor.

On an unrelated note I love me some Cataphractii Pattern Terminator Armour.
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>>5168801
We also have to brief them on the mission, give them time to familiarize themselves with the weapons and their new comrades.
The problem is we are pushing back the attack to end the war and giving Nitya more time to summon daemons or create solutions to the problems we presented. Remember how sudden Nitya's invasion was? We don't want a repeat. That's why don't need their best but rather a quick and decisive victory. Really I'd sooner give up on the space marine support than give Nitya more time.
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>>5168811
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bzuG0vWhsY0
If we get Dae-Hyun's permission, we can go ahead and get started on regrowing parts for his body while the war goes on, and by the time the war is over we should have enough parts to rebuild him.
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>>5168816
Words of wisdom. Even the Emperor shares this opinion.
The quicker this war ends, the sooner our people can move past these atrocities and begin to heal physically and spiritually.
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>>5168817
This is a good idea. He can still fight the war while we prep to restore his body (If that's something he wants).
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>>5168819
Yeah, worst case scenario is Dae-Hyun declining to have himself restored.
Even if that happens, we'll still have gained a good amount of knowledge in regards to Astartes physiology.
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>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.

>> Also.She and her sister can adapt and adopt technology of any sort. Your metal shell may simply be temporary if you wish. Or we can make it better.

TECH MEHRENS!
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>>5168802
>These are battle hardened troops who volunteered to jump into a scary portal

They scary portal that was singing in Chinese
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>>5168844
https://youtu.be/WjOuEruzoh0
The video isnt in Chinese I think, but this is what I imagine it sounded and felt like for all the guardsmen and marines passing through. Must had been fucking wild.
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>>5168844
As it is in 40k, so it is now.

The gates to hell are guarded by watchmen with a flashlight and titanium plated balls.
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>>5168661
Thanks Malal, i appreciate it.
Tell me or decribe any new ideas that could be cool for thr quest.
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>>5168767
>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>offer to have their missing limbs regrow or replaced with better cybernetics after the war.
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>psychopathic killer that commits murder for murder’s sake
>loves war
>advanced cyborg enhancements to increase killing potential
>created an army of cybernetic mind-controllled slaves
>closely associated with the colour red
>themes of threatening a paradise with war and machinery, indulging in man’s innate bloodlust
Nitya Sinha is a real piece of work. Pic unrelated btw.
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>>5168767
>>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.

>Big E gave us a legion of Koreans, Finns, and Greeks
Clearly this is some kind of test.
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>>5168881
>>Big E gave us a legion of Koreans, Finns, and Greeks
>Clearly this is some kind of test.

Shangrila will grow larger
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>>5168767
>>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
This should be enough and I think only one option should be picked here
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>>5168767
>Soms you have a mother
>Kanzeon is more than she seems

The two lead into eachother.
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>>5168767
>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
If we're gonna be honest, then we've got to go all the way. It's for the best.
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>>5168767
>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.
I'm wondering why Lieren is so worried about the Kanzeon issue is it from his genetic programming, the contents of his pod, or was there enough conversation between him, dad and malcador to make him aware it could be a problem. I mean considering the history of AI it wouldn't be surprising if Lieren thought it would likely be a minefield, some daemons taunted them about it once or twice which may have sparked the thought assuming Lieren had his eyes on the petty daemons in question at the moment so he knew how truthful they were being.
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>>5168964
Yeah as much as Lieren has heard from the men of iron I am not too sure how he is more worried about archeotech than human-aeldari tech fusion. Tad worried that fear is not his own, but an idea planted by the powers that be or kanzeon herself
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>>5168767
>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>Such amalgamations of souls is similar to the existence of my Father, for my eyes allowed me to see his true form, even for a split moment. And the reincarnation of a soul is not something vile, for my friend Guonzi is capable of such a feat, but without the aid of rituals or technology
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>>5168992
+1, Lieren should meditate on these line of thoughts and ensure his fears do not cloud the logical aspect of his mind.
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>>5168767
>>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.
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>>5168767
>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.

>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.

>Make sure our new boys get the upgrades they need if we have time to spare.
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>>5168661
It was close, But I'm glad so far I've pulled through. Reading these in the hospital are rather enjoyable.
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>>5169058
Happy ya alive brah. Remember we're all gonna make it.
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>>5168767
>>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
>>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.
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>>5168878

>Be massively built, mostly unaugmented man
>Incredibly skilled in gun, blade and unarmored combat
>Can double jump
>Love a machine on an emotional level
>Some bloodthirsty dudebro here to fuck with my ideals

Already know what music I'm gonna listen to while Lieren chops Nitya's arm off
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>>5168878
Of course the pic is unrelated.
Nitya isn't FUCKIN' INVINCIIIIIIIBLE
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So how are going to go about ship design?
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>>5169419
what
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>>5169437
Naval doctrine? What kind of ships are we going to make?
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The better question is what our music type is gonna be. I vote Chinese rap since we have all the ships, are space china, and are dunking hard on all our brothers. JK I know ours is Demon Hunter.
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>>5169492
We are going to bring back the better ships from the DAoT
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>>5169492
You mean individual vessel design or fleet composition?
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>>5168767
I'll rescind my vote for
>Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.
Here >>5168783.
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>>5169552
Why not both?
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>>5168767
>Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the wait

Sons, you have a mother. I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity, a scion of the golden age of mankind. But she is not like other women, she was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity. Many became one upon her birth. Until I know my father will not harm her, this secret must be kept.:20

Kanzeon, my beloved is more than she seems. The vessel that will accompany us in our battles is her true form, but she is no machine. She is human just in a different form, like your little brothers and sisters. I do not trust that my father would not enslave or exploit her, so this must be kept between you trusted few and myself.:12

have kanzeon prepare upgraded armour for our sons, based on the measurements we have eyeballed. A gift from their mother to her newfound children.: 4

Four prior write in combo: 1

mention her nature is very similar to father.: 3

offer to have their missing limbs regrow or replaced with better cybernetics after the war.: 2

Total vote: 22

So "Sons, you have a mother..." and "Kanzeon, My beloved is more than she seems..."

Win

Writing now

>>5169058
Glad you're alright
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>No new war gear, moving existing ones, or cybernetic improvements
REEEEEEEEE
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In time. Now we must wait for qm to bless us with moar wurds.
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Quicker than lightning, faster than wildfire, swifter than the wind in a storm, your mind carefully analyzes every possible means of explaining Kanzeon's near unique nature and existence. Falsehood and lies are tossed away like chaff, as you pluck only the finest and most vibrant descriptions and explanations from the flowering garden of your mind. Such is the peerless efficiency of your mind that it devises an answer for your gathered eleven sons that will excellently detail and explain your relationship with Kanzeon and the intricacies of her nature in but a few words. Deeper explanation and expansion of the secret you now tell them can wait when the fate of your home and all of her peoples are not at stake.

"Sons, you have a mother" You state candidly as you turn your eyes to look into the shimmering visor of Dae-Hyun's metal tomb "I am wed in spirit and heart to a remnant of old humanity. A scion of the golden age of mankind"

You pause, looking over your eleven gathered sons, scanning their expressions and peering into their hearts to gauge their reaction accurately and understand their feelings towards the near explosive revelation you just revealed to them. In case you must adjust your planned speech, altering choice of phrase and emotional intonation to present the information in a more agreeable, acceptable light. They are clearly shocked, and confused but do not speak out or raise their voices out of turn. There's an uncomfortable weight to the air now, the atmosphere around the twelve of you growing dense with suspense and dread curiosity. Clearly, of all secrets, that you were married was not something your son's expected. You can only imagine and guess what kind of mystery they thought you were planning to reveal to them. But none of their hearts or eyes reveal any look of anger, doubt or despair. Showing that, so far, you have spoken nothing that would force these noble men to go back on their word and break their oath of secrecy and silence. Good. Smiling down at your silent sons, you turn your eyes towards the star dotted heavens and can almost see the beautiful astral plains beyond Shangrala's skies.

"Kanzeon" You begin again, a sigh drifting over your parched lips as the cool nightly wind whispers through your iron mane of hair, lifting it as you turn your eyes back down to the eleven gathered astartes "My beloved is more than she seems. She is not like other women, the vessel that will accompany us into battle is her true form but she is no machine"

The air electrifies, as shock and confusion heighten and you can practically see the minds of your sons fall into a maelstrom of wayward thoughts and questions, All billowing forth to fill their heads as they struggle to understand the meaning of your words and translate them into their reality. Their adoration and great respect for you dying every idea that forms in their minds.
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>>5170904

To keep them from jumping to conclusions or strange fantasies that will only lead to stranger misunderstandings, you continue your explanation without delay

"She was born through a technological rite where dozens, hundreds, perhaps even thousands of human souls were forcefully combined into a singularity" You say bluntly, picking dirt from beneath your nails as you allow the most shocking part of Kanzeon's existence to settle and fully soak into your sons psyches. Nikephoros's expression shifts subtly, his face paling as his knuckles whiten. You can hear the bones in his hands creak as they tighten. His fellows have similar reactions, but they are quieted and soothed as your earlier lesson concerning their little furred brothers and sisters remerges in their thoughts, silencing outrage and revulsion before it can truly take root in the fertile soil of their minds.

Just as you planned

"Many became one upon her birth, but she is human just in a different form" You say to allow your sons the satisfaction of understanding the lesson "Before" you revealed its intent and meaningful teaching "Like your little brothers and sisters"

Nikephoros breathes out, nodding out of instinct as his brother's eyes remaining locked to you. The thought of how closely they resemble a litter of pups when they gaze up at you as they are now flits across your thoughts, bringing an amuse smile to your face as you reach the end of your brief, but vitally important speech explaining the bond between you and Kanzeon and the unique circumstances of her life. The reason it must remain a secret, the cause for your caution and why they must keep it closely to their twin hearts.

"Until I know my father will not harm her or exploit her this secret must be kept between you trusted few and myself" You say gravely, eyes widening and filling with a chill light as the winds still and the air cools around you as if affected by your serious demeanor "You are men grown, and as my progeny I know you all to be blessed with wisdom, so I need not ask if you understand the gravity of what I ask of you"

"We understand, father" Nikephoros said first "And it doesn't change our choice"

"Aye, it is Shocking, but not enough to break our loyalty. At least she's human" Another, one of the ones taken from the same stock as the "Ursine Guard" says cheerfully "A human in an iron shell, The bear over here is mostly the same as that. Difference is your bride's older"

"I was expecting far worse to be honest, that you've found love is not as strange as half the things I've seen on my tours of duty" Another laughs

"Our history is truly fucked if you think about it" Another says, addressing one of his brothers rather than you "If they were grinding humans together to guide their ships"

"She thinks the same" You state with a frown "It was a cruel act, her and her sister's creation"
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>>5170908

"There are more of these...shipbound humans?" Dae-Hyun asks curiously as your sons turn to making jokes to ease the lingering tension and adjust to the new reality they faced.

"Four others" You say, voice and expression darkening as you turn away from them "When I debriefed the rest of your forces during our trek to this academy, I spoke of a strong hold of great technology twisted to monstrous ends"

Instantly the eleven understand, but say nothing. But the air once more becomes heavy, but rather than tension or suspense, it is now rich with a grim determination and murderous intent

"That is one of her sisters, driven mad by her contempt for mankind, for being created and enslaved" You say sadly, bowing and shaking your head "I've spoken to her and her lapdog, the barbarian King I told you, who augmented his body into an...abomination of vile machinery and dangerous cybernetics. But"

Grinning ear to ear you look back to your sons, who now understand exactly the breed and strength of the enemy they face'

"We hold the advantage, for we have two living ships, fully operational, to their one, crippled and maddened matriarch of steel!" You snarl predatorially "The danger lies in cracking her shell without breaking the planet, for if the technologies of her city are broken they will swallow Shangrala in flames!"

"I can see why we were needed" Nikephoros cockily chuckles "This kind of job needs an expert hand"

"And here we thought we were just going to fight more technobarbarian tribes, not a deluded hive of souls that thinks itself a god. I deserve a raise!" another laughs

"We aren't paid" Another jokes

"If we were, I'd give up my salary to serve beneath our primarch" Another sneers before turning to you "And as we are under your command, if there's any detail you left out besides the fact we're up against an ancient warmachine rather than a deluded hick who thinks he's king shit of fuck mountain..."

"I've told you everything besides that truth" You laugh, clasping a hand on your son's shoulder "I am no fool after all, and knowing what weapons and tactics your enemies have is pertinent information that I would not keep from any under my command, especially my own sons"

"Good" he says after a moment of pause "I was suspecting you'd say they had armies of murderous automata piloted by abominable intelligences"

You choose to keep quiet about the fact that the Vishnu nearly did raise an army that fits the one your son was joking about. An army Bai died to keep from being raised. You'd tell them about Bai during the ride to the front lines of the war, they'd surely appreciate his tale and sacrifice.
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>>5170909

What will you do while Dae-Hyun and his officers present themselves to Jinhai?

>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment

>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds

>Watching Tao Dandan to make sure she doesn't try and "Reacquisition" the "Bolters" that your sons carry into battle, as the moment one of your son's described their function to her when you arrived in camp, she's been enamored with them

>Follow Michah and Feng as they mingle with the soldiers of the Sheowl Rangers, Creti Grave Wardens, and the Shuomi Ursine guard with the rest of the brothers of the panther, to act as a translator and learn more about the state of terran affairs

>write in
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>>5170910
>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
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>>5170804
Its nice to be sorta alright.

>>5170910
>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
>Upgrade our boys, As well so that there cybernetics aren't fucking shitty.
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>>5170910
>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
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>>5170910
>>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
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>>5170911
+1
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>>5170910
>>5170911
Actually I think I'll add one other thing.
>create viral code based on the Journey to serve as a weapon against Avalokiteśvara and her corrupt machines
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>>5170916
+1
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>>5170910
>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment
>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
We got our bonding done, now it's time to prepare for war
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>>5170943
>>5170934
>>5170916
I think you guys aren't really reading. They are already being deployed into battle. We have no time to replace their implants.
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>>5170910
>>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
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>Watching Tao Dandan to make sure she doesn't try and "Reacquisition" the "Bolters" that your sons carry into battle, as the moment one of your son's described their function to her when you arrived in camp, she's been enamored with them

Sounds like she might either break something because those Sphesh Mherens weapons aren't designed for baseline humans.

>Follow Michah and Feng as they mingle with the soldiers of the Sheowl Rangers, Creti Grave Wardens, and the Shuomi Ursine guard with the rest of the brothers of the panther, to act as a translator and learn more about the state of terran affairs

I wanna ensure they get along and get off to a good start. Ensuring their loyalty to us instead of the Emperor. Can't afford leaks at this point.
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>>5170910
>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment
>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
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Also, cause I was suddenly struck by this curiosity.

Next Primarch cut away, who do you want it to be?
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>>5171006
if it's from their pov, Sang would be nice. Or Pert's pov as he tries to figure out our challenge to him.
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>>5171006
I don't know what Primarchs that you haven't touched upon that I would intersted in-
Alpharious Omegon.
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>>5171006
At this point? Probably the first amongst equals - Horus
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>>5171006
Our boy angron, maybe Horus?
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>>5171006
Vulkan, our "BIG" brother friend
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>>5171006
Pert would be nice. Always a fun pov if you ask me. Otherwise I'd say Russ perhaps?
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>>5170910
>>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment
>>5171006
I'd be interested in seeing Sanguinius, Konrad, or Lorgar to see how their visions are treating them. Maybe Angron. Or XI if you really wanted to spoil us...
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>>5170910
>Follow Michah and Feng as they mingle with the soldiers of the Sheowl Rangers, Creti Grave Wardens, and the Shuomi Ursine guard with the rest of the brothers of the panther, to act as a translator and learn more about the state of terran affairs

>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment

>>5171006
I think the list for me is curze, angron, or sang
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>>5171006
Sang, Or Vulkan.
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>>5170910
>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment
>Follow Michah and Feng as they mingle with the soldiers of the Sheowl Rangers, Creti Grave Wardens, and the Shuomi Ursine guard with the rest of the brothers of the panther, to act as a translator and learn more about the state of terran affairs
>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
Right if we are spending several days away from the fighting we want to make sure the terran and shangrala armies can synergize well so we need to listen in.
Secondly Lieren being friendly with the Terra auxiliaries will not only ensure there are no issues and maybe buff them a little due to his psychic paradox field but also it will help with their loyalty and will let Lieren find the spies sent by at least Malcador that I am 100% certain were sent and we don't want some possibly fanatical spy causing serious trouble.
>>5171006
I would like to see Sanguinius, Konrad, or Lorgar.
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>>5170910
>Follow Michah and Feng as they mingle with the soldiers of the Sheowl Rangers, Creti Grave Wardens, and the Shuomi Ursine guard with the rest of the brothers of the panther, to act as a translator and learn more about the state of terran affairs
>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
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>>5170910
Support this,
>>5170957

>>5171006
Lorgar
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>>5171006
Logar since Kor Phaeron had a vision about Lieren. Or Curze
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>>5170910
>>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
>>Watching Tao Dandan to make sure she doesn't try and "Reacquisition" the "Bolters" that your sons carry into battle, as the moment one of your son's described their function to her when you arrived in camp, she's been enamored with them
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>>5171006
1000% Lorgar
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>>5171006
Lorgar for sure.
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Lorgar most definitely, let's see what that fuckers up to.
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>>5170910
>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment

>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
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>>5170910
>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armour and weapons for your space marines.
>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment
>offer to regrown our sons limbs or give them superior cybernetic replacements after the war.
>make the same offer to Feng so he can FINALLY HAVE HIS FUCKING LEG BACK.
>>5171006
Konrad, Lorgar, or Pert
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>>5171006
Girlyman.
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>>5170910
>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment
>Follow Michah and Feng as they mingle with the soldiers of the Sheowl Rangers, Creti Grave Wardens, and the Shuomi Ursine guard with the rest of the brothers of the panther, to act as a translator and learn more about the state of terran affairs

"We aren't paid" Another jokes
THEY DO IT FOR FREE

>>5171006
Man, I'm cool with pretty much any of them.
But if I had to choose, Lorgar, Sanguinius or Horus.
Maybe XI?
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>>5170910
>Follow Michah and Feng as they mingle with the soldiers of the Sheowl Rangers, Creti Grave Wardens, and the Shuomi Ursine guard with the rest of the brothers of the panther, to act as a translator and learn more about the state of terran affairs

>>5171006
Corax
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>>5170910
>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment
>>5171006
Alpharius (or possibly Omegon)
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>>5170910
>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment
>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds

Good good. We are ready for begin our assault.


>>5171006
Maybe Guilliman or Sanguinus.
You could also go wild card and describe the 11th
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>>5170910
>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment
>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
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>>5171006
Lorgar, Kurze or the 11th
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>>5171006
Lorgar would be fun to see.
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>>5171006
you know damn well what I am gonna say.

Lorgar. I want to see dornian heresy route.

My new job is to busy right now for a crossover holy shit.
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>>5170910
>> Spend a few days away from the war.
>> Listen in on the conversation as your right.
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>>5171885
Fuck yeah!

[Spoiler] I love that Angron isn't fucked up, that guy genuinely deserved better than what he got [Spoiler/]
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>>5172022
Spoiler can't be capitalised, and the slash is before the word
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>>5172022
bro do ctrl s
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What exactly does our gundao look like? Is there a sketch or something?
>>5172022
Like this, silly
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Why are we letting the enemy have a breath? We should be drowning him.
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>>5172144
We can't just throw our marines into battle with their shitty gear. More would die than necessary
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>>5170910
>>Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds
>Writein
Take the few days of down time, rapidly indoctrinate our sons and their mortal allies on the Imperial Army's SOP and equipment.

In particular, have them observe some practice sessions, practice with our airborne transport systems, boarding/disembarking/deepstriking and instruct some long jian engineers to make sure that a few transport craft are modified to carry Dae-Hyun's chassis for airborne insertion.

Malal, did the contingent include any apothecaries?

>>5172144
Our sons will be right in the thick of it with us, spearheading the advance towards the butchers final stronghold. I think its worth a day or two to equip them to standard for a enhanced knockout blow.
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>>5170910
>>Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment
>>Watching Tao Dandan to make sure she doesn't try and "Reacquisition" the "Bolters" that your sons carry into battle, as the moment one of your son's described their function to her when you arrived in camp, she's been enamored with them
Rather get our tactics and strategy sorted before anything. And Dandan needs supervision.
>>5171006
Morty because I'm curious or Ferrus because I don't want him to have the least screentime out of all the (known) Primarchs here as he does in canon.
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Having PC issues. Unfortunately. So the update is going to be a bit late
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>>5172871
how late are we talking?
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>>5172871
Damn machine spirits acting up again!
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>>5171006
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBCGIogTWv0
I want to see Angry Ron
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Angron or Russ would be cool to see. Or maybe someone we haven't seen yet.
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>>5172983
>>5173085
we just had an angron pov. He's been having dreams of us due to the khorne bullshit going on.
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>>5172875
Well they stopped, so not long. I'll count the vote and get to work on the update in a bit
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the wait.


Spend a few more days away from the war, so you, Kanzeon and Mari can create armor and weapons for your space marines, leaving them to fight their first battles on Shangrala without you while you tell the sisters of your son's many glorious deeds:17
-Upgrade your sons' cybernetics: 3
--offer to Feng as well: 1

create viral code based on the Journey to serve as a weapon against Avalokiteśvara and her corrupt machines: 1

Listen in on the conversation, as is your right as an imperial General and help Yin Lei and Yan Zihao adjust their battle plans for the inclusion of the three hundred and one astartes, their warmachines and their four thousand auxiliaries, which were now being equipped with standard Imperial army issued equipment:13

Watching Tao Dandan to make sure she doesn't try and "Reacquisition" the "Bolters" that your sons carry into battle, as the moment one of your son's described their function to her when you arrived in camp, she's been enamored with them: 4

Follow Michah and Feng as they mingle with the soldiers of the Sheowl Rangers, Creti Grave Wardens, and the Shuomi Ursine guard with the rest of the brothers of the panther, to act as a translator and learn more about the state of terran affairs: 7

Take the few days of down time, rapidly indoctrinate our sons and their mortal allies on the Imperial Army's SOP and equipment.: 1

Total votes: 26

Lieren will take part in the strategy meeting, listening as Dae-Hyun and his officers present themselves to jinhai, helping the black general and the lord of cavalry to adjust their battle plans for the newly arrived regiments

And delay returning to the fight himself, so he can, with Kanzeon and Mari, create new wargear for his sons.

Writing now
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The meeting takes place beneath the open sky and fog of Shangrala, as even the largest and most spacious of tents in the main imperial army's camp cannot hope to fit Dae-Hyun and his officers without becoming claustrophobically cramped, and would certainly make for a hellish first meeting as the heat radiating from their armors would make the air inside of the enclosed space sweltering if not broiling. So it was decided as soon as the transport ships landed just outside of the vast encampment of soldiers from Long-Jia, Shuni and Bask that your sons would present themselves to emperor Jinhai outside, and offer their services to the Long-Jian empire and people as they entered the camp. A symbolic gesture of sorts, that both fulfilled the Shangralans' desire for ceremony and the Terrans' austere professionalism.

Having alerted the appearance of your transforming robes into the traditional garb of a low class general, you watched Jinhai approach the party of eleven Astartes and three terran soldiers, two women and one man, dressed in the finest armor that the forges of Kanzeon and Mari have produced. Fish scaled, partially in the style of an Aeldari elite due to the origins of the pattern of armor he wore, but it was customized to align with the aesthetic of Long-Jia and to resemble the traditional armor worn during the rebellion era. It was colored brightly, in the colors of his infantile dynasty. The plates and joints of the armor shifted gradually from blue to pink and were gilded with gold, a wholly decorative design meant to evoke his imperial majesty to inspire the common born soldiers of the army making it all but impossible to lose sight of the courageous , warrior emperor in even the most chaotic of battlefields.

On his left gauntlet, a carp was carved, on his right a dragon in the style of the once wicked Gao family's crest, symbolizing the binding between the one disgraced house and the imperial dynasty. A cape was latched over his shoulders, mantled with panther and tiger fur and latched in place by a brooch shaped like the six fanged spear. The silken cloak is dyed in a halved pattern, Blue and Pink, darkening in some places to become a deep maroon shade. The lights of the landing craft illuminate the scales of his raiment, making them glitter like pearls beneath the sun. And, even from this distance, you could spy a charm slung around his neck like a necklace, carved from black jade and bearing in miniscule script his Wife, the fair Lady Daiyu's favorite passage of the journey. A good luck charm, embodying the empresses prayers that he will return home from this war.

The sight of it alone made you smile. But when you spotted, beneath it, a tiger fang that Bai had taken to wearing, your smile grows and a pleasant warmth rests itself in your chest.
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>>5173655

"Good Greetings, noble sons of Lieren. It is my honor and privilege to welcome you into my camp and to at last meet your acquaintance" Jinhai speaks in near perfect gothic , humbly confident and naturally proud "It is a great misfortune that we were unable to meet in a more peaceful time and a more pleasant locale, such as the famed gardens of Qian or upon the glass bridge in autumn, but that we have met at all is a blessing"

"Everyone on this planet talks like that?" Nikephoros gasps, his shock breaking his composure "I thought that kind of formality and eloquence was just our primarch taking liberties in his translation"

Jinhai laughed and shrugged his shoulders

"We of Long-Jia are a naturally poetic people, I am told" he says, voice now burred with amusement and good humor "One of our most storied poets described our voices as flowering with greater beauty than even the imperial gardens of the old dynasties, that even the lowest of scoundrels spoke with not verbosity and elegance than the most trained poets of the other nations. I can speak in a more dull fashion if you'd prefer"

"That is unnecessary, Long-Jia Jinhai" Dae-Hyun rumbled "You know why we have come, to offer our services to your war effort against the barbarian hordes so as to end the war decisively. You will find we are experts in the field of crushing savages beneath our boots, if doing so will protect civilian lives. All that must be done, is pointing me and my boys in the right direction to find Charlie and we'll do what we do best"

"What we were made to do" Nikephoros chimes in, eyes still wide with shock from hearing the flowery speech patterns of a Long-Jian spoken in gothic "Kill all sons of bitches who oppose the emperor's vision of the future"

Jinhai's eyes narrowed for a moment, before he recalled that your father was also an Emperor and that the Space marine was not referring to him. A few of the generals surrounding Jinhai visibly restrain themselves from scolding the astartes for their rough language, those who also took gothic lessons at least. The ignorant merely look on with awe, imagining their own version of the conversation

"I had heard you were all storied veterans and heroes of the wars on Terra, and I am most gracious you would leave your home to aid Shangrala and her virtuous children" Jinhai says, all ready at ease with your sons and not taking offense for their somewhat cheekily impolite demeanors and speech "Truly you are your father's sons if undertaking such a selfless sacrifice came so easily to you all. Proof of your virtuous hearts, oh friends of prosperity from the distant stars. Now, please, inform me of your capabilities and talents on the field of battle and off of it, so I may know best how to use you"

"Lieren is the only one who will command and "use" us" Nikephoros says sharply, clearly offended by Jinhai's assumed authority
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>>5173656

"I follow Jinhai's Command. For I am a general in his army" You answer cheekily before the misunderstanding can escalate. Nikephoros bows his head, embarrassed

"At least you didn't try to frag him like that Colonel of the Byzant Janizars" Dae-Hyun whispered over their radio to the longer Astartes "Was up to my ass in paperwork because of that stunt"

"He had it coming, he was going to use Grave Wardens as cannon fodder, and I didn't kill him, I just did not have time to warn him of the sniper on the ridge" Nikephoros muttered back "You know that, Old bear"

"That is what the official report said" Dae-Hyun chuckled, as Jinhai waited patiently while you thought of how fortunate it was that none of the Generals of Long-Jia would lower themselves to resort to such inhuman tactics, and thus did not risk a repeat of the "Incident" the two astartes mentioned, which you would have to ask about the next time you were alone with the young Captain.

"But to answer your question, lord, allow me to detail the areas of expertise of my men, including our little brothers and sisters" Dae-Hyun says, Jinhai smirks, no doubt imagining your adoptive children dressed as Astartes due to Dae-Hyun's choice of words "The intended use of our war gear, including the divisions of armor the Emperor has so generously allowed us to take along for this outing and the various support gear packaged along with it"

"I've heard their tanks reek of Sulphur and waste oil, my liege" Dai Niu whispers into Jinhai's ear "and produce a foul smelling pollutant that fills the air as clouds and stings the eyes. Cruder than our Iron turtles"

"A tank is a tank" Jinhai sagely replies, speaking to the old turtle in Shangalan as Dae-Hyun and his fellow officers rather colorfully describe their wargear and what each weapon can do to a human body or fortified wall of Plascrete or tell short stories of how of their more "Creative" uses of their vehicles and equipment.

It is then you notice Kang Yongrui and his father as suspiciously absent from this historic meeting, probably to avoid drawing the ire of your sons in showing their still sternly held resentment towards you. And that Yin lei and Lai song are studying your sons closely, with scribes at their side recording their observations.

You step over to the two great generals to offer your own advice concerning the deployment of your sons and their auxiliary forces, having informed yourself of their unique specialties and preferred methods of combat as well as their general strategic preferences and commonly employed tactics.

When there's a loud explosion and one of the walls surrounding the camp explodes into rubble after a bolter round was fired into it.
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>>5173658

You, and every Astarte, soldier, general or servant gathered for the introduction and swearing of oaths turns to see Tao Dandan on her back, face covered in dirt and stone dust and with a bolter decorated in the style of one of the minor philosophical sects that have arisen in your legion. You haven't had time to discuss and debate with your sons who have taken a particular lesson too close and intimately to their hearts, so you cannot tell who the weapon may belong to.

But you are certain that Lady Dandan will need to take a medical leave to rest, and hopefully reflect on her decision to borrow and test one of your son's primary weapons without asking for permission. Or that it could be wielded by an unagumented human with injuring themselves

You cover your face and sigh. Which she did, judging by the great bruise forming on her shoulder and the way the limb was bent.

"Repairs of our perimeter wall will take mere moments, your benevolence" One of the laborers grunts while peeking through the hole, having stepped over the matriarch of the Tao who was still laid out on the ground in a daze.

"I need more of these magnificent Fire arms" She mutters, eyes twinkling with a childlike, almost innocent joy "They're like hand-held cannons!

"Is she alright?" Dae-Hyun asks, breaking the awkward silence as he looks down at the dazed and confused Dandan

"Mentally, no, physically, yes" Lai Song chimes in "That is the firestorm, Tao Dandan, Shangrala's first Artillery commander and its finest. Unfortunately, like many geniuses, her mind is addled by her expertise"

"Far kinder words than you last described her with, General Lai" Yin Lei states coldly as he glares down at Tao Dandan "And here I thought she had done away with her bad habits"

"She's young" Lai Song laughs as Jinhai pinches the bridge of his nose

"Someone get her to a medical tent before she can get up and "test" one of the heavier armaments brought by our guests from the stars" He commands angrily

You take it upon yourself to take Dandan there, and beckon Yin Lei and Lai song to follow you, so you can continue your discussion of tactics and strategy while Tao Dandan was being treated for the wound caused by her foolishness.
_

"He called multiple nuclear strikes upon himself?" Maria asked, her tone disbelieving and a little frightened "And they still let him hold a position of command? Even though that would gravely damage the already frail ecosystem of terra"

"Sister, clearly Terra has suffered far worse than a few low payload nuclear detonations" Kanzeon sarcastically stated "Considering that it was considered a viable tactical decision to drop nuclear weapons so closely to the positions they were defending that he was praised for it rather than court martialed. Losing contact with the rest of civilization must have sent the inhabitants of the homeworld back to the dark ages. A shame, really"
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>>5173661

"It doesn't make it any less awful! How will Terra ever recover if they're dropping nukes on themselves! STILL" Mari frets, speaking to you and her sister through a holographic image of her mental avatar, which looks more Bask than Kanzeon and wears her hair much more shortly and in a strange style.

"Its a Bob cut" Both of them interrupt their conversation to answer you question without you speaking a word

"History has shown humanity scarcely changes, sister, hopefully Lieren's father will allow him to spend sometime gardening after they reunite" Kanzeon flippantly states, crossing her legs one of the others "He may be the only one who can make Terra anything but an irradiated hell hole"

"And the oceans are gone? How did they lose their oceans! Do you know the kind of climate changes and heavy industry that would be needed to proceed without oversight or intervention to deplete Terra of its oceans entirely" Mari continues on "Oh how desperate the population must've been during the long night! At least they have a leader to rally behind, and a chance to repair the damages of the poor, ailing homeworld"

"Maybe it was stolen?" You suggest as look up from the detailed diagram you drew of your sons' current and lacking protection

"How would an entire ocean be stolen?" Mari asks curiously

"It was probably the eldar" Kanzeon replies in jest "But in all honesty we should endeavor to discover if the loss of terra's oceans was a recent event, I wouldn't put it past humanity to raid each-other for a substance they were once able to produce via the most basic of technologies"

"Neither would I, unfortunately" You say, as Kanzeon peers over your shoulder and rests her chin on it to look over the blueprints you had been reading

"You were right, they do require much better armor. With how masterfully crafted their augments and gene modifications were, its no surprise they had to cheap out on the armor budget" Kanzeon mutters, grabbing the scroll from your hands

"Actually, sister, I believe its more that is all that has endured the long night and they had to make due with such paltry protection" Mari chipperly explains, smiling innocently as her holographic image paces before Kanzeon, briefly shifting the light making up her projected avatar to look as if it were a living woman near flawlessly. Though your eyes were still keenly aware it was nothing more than a collection of energy and light.

"I was making a joke, Mari" Kanzeon chuckled, reaching up to ruffle her sisters hair with a pat of her head only to frown when her hand past through

"Did you forget that..." You begin to ask, before Kanzeon interrupts you with a gentle electric shock as her cheeks turn a beautiful vivid shade of autumn red

"Its alright Kanzeon, we all make mistakes" Mari says as her sister grinds her teeth
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>>5173665

"Don't tell anyone this happened, Lets just get to and focus on our work" She growls as she stands and marches out of the room which is rapidly smoothed down as she vents her anger by undoing all of the art covering its walls. Lotus blossoms wilt as the metal they are carved on meld and folds into itself.

You follow after her

"At once my love, working by your side shall imbue each piece of armor with the very essence of love" you happily exclaim

"Well not the portion I construct, but I suppose I might leave behind an emotional signature as well" Mari says, mentally broadcasting her words into Kanzeon's sensors and your mind "Unless you were speaking metaphorically"

"I'm always connected to his thoughts intimately, Mari, hearing everything he thinks and every emotion he feels so closely I could accurately map the changes in his psyche and emotional spectrum" Kanzeon says with a dramatic shrug of her shoulders and flipping of her hair "And even I am not certain if that was meant to be literal"

"it could be" you laugh, wrapping an arm around Kanzeon and holding her close as her body shifts around you, guiding you through her vast veins to reach the armory and manufacturing plants embedded within her.
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What focus will you design your son's new war gear off of, Lieren?

>Survivability and protection, not only for themselves but for others. They shall be walls of steel and faith.

>Agile movements and precision. The Aeldari have show grace is just as deadly as brute strength.

>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess

>Inspired by native Shangralan wildlife, create specialized armors and weapons designed to compliment the martial styles you have invented.

>Write in

sorry again for the wait. Monitor refused to connect to My PC after it crashed yesterday. But the machine spirits were merciful, after refusing to connect all day, first time I turned it on today it worked fine

fucking technology
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>>5173668
>>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess

This should keep them from wasting time acclimating to their armor
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>>5173658
>"A tank is a tank"
So wise
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>>5173668
>>Survivability and protection, not only for themselves but for others. They shall be walls of steel and faith.
>>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
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>>5173668
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.
Sounds weird, but we are fighting Chaos. We'll want to be proactive about protection.
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>>5173668

>>5173688 I concur
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.

Keep it simple
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>>5173668
>Survivability and protection, not only for themselves but for others. They shall be walls of steel and faith.
It seems like our boys have a habit of losing limbs. Prevention is the best cure, as they say.
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
Can't hurt.
Agility and martial arts take training, we can alter their gear to fit that when we aren't busy killing Khornates.
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As a note about the current situation however the Kang might get tempted by Khorne to switch sides to regain their honour. Might be worth watching because they didn't show knowing our eyes would see the truth.
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>>5173665
>"Its a Bob cut" Both of them interrupt their conversation to answer you question without you speaking a word

Kek.

>>5173668
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
>Write in
Null Charms layered in on the armour. Proto Grey Knights
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>>5173688
+1 the KISS method is generally the best one.
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>>5173668

>>Survivability and protection, not only for themselves but for others. They shall be walls of steel and faith.
>>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.

I want there to now be a scene where the armor saves one of our sons only for a Long-Jia soldier to call him fortunate. The fucking euphoria he'd feel to would give She-who-thirsts pause.

BTW how's that War in Hell going between Khorne and Slaanesh?


I just want our fight with Huli Jing on the craftworld, i want us to mantle Bitch Boy Khaine and say fuck you to Slaanesh like we did Nurgle.

I also want a fricking milkshake, but no where sells them due to fricking covid.
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>>5173668
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
Changing their specializations out of nowhere will just weaken them.
>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.
Should be simple enough, and also effective
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>>5173710
They are pissed because the turtle chamged sides in the middle of the war and betrayed them, and at us for being the coordinator.
They don't feel like they lost their honour, they feel we lost ours. And you are suggesting they do the exact thing they are angry about.
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>>5173668
BTW will this affect how all out Boys will fight or will we get another chance to respec and train then all once we get our legion?
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>>5173723
yes because bitterness, sudden changes and chaos gods play hell on the mind and humans when emotionally conflicted will make up an excuse to do what they want
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>>5173668
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.
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>>5173668

>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess

>Inspired by native Shangralan wildlife, create specialized armors and weapons designed to compliment the martial styles you have invented.

>Giv'em those Armor of Null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey
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>>5173668
>>Survivability and protection, not only for themselves but for others. They shall be walls of steel and faith
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
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>>5173724
Chances are that no matter what happens, after this conflict is over the survivors are gonna do their best to fashion themselves after Lieren. They're also gonna get tattled on for all the cusses they throw around so they'll play juvie with the Vishnu and the New Varro people when they done with a day in class.
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>>5173768
We'll have all the time in the world to train with them and teach them after this war.

Hell, theres actually a good chance we could start astartes induction and training if there are apothecaries in the contingent. Since lieren is here and we can use our genetic material instead of relying on geneseed.
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>>5173668
>Survivability and protection, not only for themselves but for others. They shall be walls of steel and faith.
>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.
Malal did mention faith.

I don't think we should pick more than one armor mod. I think the charms count as a freebie.

You know, you guys, because picking more than one lessens the efficiency of every other selected option.
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>>5173808
I feel they dont have time to train to make use of the newer traits so we might we well just improve it all around for now. We'll have time to retool their stuff to their liking later.
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>>5173668
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
>>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.
>tell them we will be making more specialized equipment after the war.
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>>5173668
>>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
I'm reminded that I do want Mari to make herself a body. Hell, Kanzeon has yet to upgrade her's to Primarch-tier. Another thing to do post-war, I guess.
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Try to see if they like some music maybe the machine spirits will be relaxed

>>5173668
>>Survivability and protection, not only for themselves but for others. They shall be walls of steel and faith.
>>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess

>>5173688
No it doesn't sound that weird, their use has been done in several ways across the armies. Soldiers likely have it on top of their equipment or bring it around. This is merely another use of it.
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>>5173710
We have fight with them in the Shuni war and they regained their ancestors lost honor of fighting the Shuni. One lost multiple times because of the actions
of the ancient sorcerer lords, that attacked their people over and over again in honourless ways making them lose prestige and what not.
Their archenemies where killed by us and them, since we invited them in coming with us for attack the sorcerer lords across the Shuni sultanate.
And now they even prosper thanks to Lieren. While they might have a grudge, hating to death Lieren is kind out of the picture because he really did just a lot of good for all and even them. While not accepting the way of Kang Honor, and having a grudge with him they wouldn’t
kill him.

And their honor while somewhat not efficient, still makes them good people after fighting dark magicians for centuries.
They had an incentive of entering martial schools and military academies.
And the Journey arrived in their lands and court as well.

I think the problem is much more simple, is more one of acceptance and time. They had honestly never had someone betray them, with the Dai attack. But what can be said. War is war. Just by reading books of warfare from other cultures they will learn, of many examples of it used in warfare. They can keep their honour if they wish, it's not like we destroyed it or killed them
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>>5173688

+1
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>>5173874
I only say that because our sons probably don't understand why we're doing it- or why it's so prevalent. To them, it's a little religious which they sought to stamp out- and now dad's like "shit's very important wear this and don't listen to the voices in your head."
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>>5173668
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess

Walking tanks sounds good on paper, but against the horrors the galaxy offers agility and the ability to dodge is much more valuable than any shield or armor, we already have tanks anyway
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>>5173827
+1
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>>5174032
“Tanks” can’t be used in tight corridors.
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>>5173668
>>Survivability and protection, not only for themselves but for others. They shall be walls of steel and faith.
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>>5173668
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.
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>>5173668
>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.
>Agile movements and precision. The Aeldari have show grace is just as deadly as brute strength.
Heres hoping the imperial army gets along well with the natives and that the possibly psychic, possibly fanatical proto callidus assassins Malcador would have sent in the mass of soldiers don't cause any serious trouble.
As far as the armor is concerned, since we are going to be the anti-chaos legion getting anti chaos/warp protection early on will allow us to refine it over time.
Secondly When you consider that Lieren is a stealthy hunter, a martial artist, and has fought many foes that could shred through his toughness and armor without effort that he only defeated through supreme speed and agility focusing the armor on eldar style combat seems wise.
Our sons will still be super-humanly tough and the dark age tech will ensure they have at least normal power armor levels of protection, and considering enemies fight astartes like they are walking tanks as is they have already hit the point of diminishing returns on protection where more armor won't make much difference, being able to make full use or even boosting their speed and agility could let them dodge anti tank weaponry however.
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>>5174120
I think improving the current design is probably the best short term option as it would allow our Astartes to stop choking out the natives of Shangrala with their fumes.
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>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.
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>>5173688
>Support
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>>5173668
>>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
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>>5174120
>Our sons will still be super-humanly tough and the dark age tech will ensure they have at least normal power armor levels of protection, and considering enemies fight astartes like they are walking tanks as is they have already hit the point of diminishing returns on protection where more armor won't make much difference, being able to make full use or even boosting their speed and agility could let them dodge anti tank weaponry however.
This misses some of the more ridiculous tech we have like multidimensional space generators and makes mostly wrong assumptions about the direction tech will develop. Great Crusade era greatly favored Terminator armor over normal power armor for a reason.
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>>5173688
I back this up. +1
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>>5174386
Honestly I do see usage to this, the only agreement I have against it is that we can easily spec into this. Using our sons currently I think deepstriking them is probably best as we can go deeper with strong beefy units and the stronger our sons are the better they can protect others in the army.
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>>5173789
How do you think everyone, including Lieren, is going to react to process of actually creating an astartes and becoming one of his sons? Because no matter the legion or chapter, the transformation is long and brutal.
I can't see anyone who would willingly give their child to the Second Legion unless they were Nobility wishing to regain their honor or devoted monks who believed it a divine honor. It's not that they're afraid to fight, the Vishnu and New Varro would join the Imperial Guard as soon they became men because one is a martial culture that idealizes strength and the other is a bunch of rough and tumble death worlders. Hell, even the Tigermen would join in droves if Lieren told them to. The problem is that they're children, they have to be. The process is simply too risky on anyone older- Kanzeon and Mari might be able to improve it, make it safer, less painful, but then the Terran would accuse them of being soft.
. . .
I wonder if they'll get something similar to our eyes as part of their geneseed.
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>>5174569
Accusations of being soft can be easily ignored if quality doesn't dip and intergration improves.

More marines is not something anyone can dismiss.
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>>5174569
>5174573
Why would we be slow when we have access to cloning tech and the ability to move souls between bodies via lotus scepter technology.

Just recruit adults and move them into younger bodies that can then be implanted.
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>>5174569
The Vishnu would see it as an honor even if they died during the process. It helps if you see them as space Gurkha's.

The Kang try to emphasize being above pain as seen with the painful surgery without being sedated. There still is a bit of awkwardness that will take time to dispell so not sure how they would feel about becoming a space marine.

There's also the fact that to Shangri-la, Lieren is a living legend. If you took the opinions of the family out of the picture a lot of young boys would leap at the chance to become like Lieren.

As sad as it is there will inevitably be orphans after this war among the original Vishnu lands so there will likely be many that take the chance there.
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>>5174590
I could see a lot of orphans taking the phrase, "becoming a son of Lieren" very literally.
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>>5174590
>>5174593

We also don't need to recruit training when we can cheat with GAoT medical technology, Cloning tech, and the Lotus scepter soul moving technology.

Recruit adults mainly and just clone them younger bodies to stick them into. Much more moral. Also perserve their og bodies so if they fail the procedure we can just move them back into them.

This allows us to recruit already trained soldiers as well. Which will cut back on a LOT of the training of space marines.
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>>5173858
Mari only needs to make a body if she really wants to. If she's content as she is then that is fine.

>>5174120
>possibly fanatical proto callidus assassins Malcador would have sent in the mass of soldiers don't cause any serious trouble.
I hope he send some. Try as they might I doubt those assassins can hide from Lieren, and when he finds then that will be an excellent opportunity to use their technology for all the blanks on our planet, including or panther brother.

>>5174593
>lmao "Kanzeon help I can't stop adopting war orphans"

>>5174604
EEEEEEHHHHH kinda iffy about the soul transfer process. I don't think it would be wise to plant the souls of adults into clone grown grade space marine bodies, body dysmorphia, weird warp soul bullshit shenanigan's. You know how weird 40k gets.
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>>5174582
>>5174604
The lotus erases the soul and cloning tends to have drawbacks.
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Been doing some reading. The only reason the Emperor made the space marines was he couldn't get the augmentation proccess stable enough to use adults like he did with the thunder warriors with the technology and knowledge he had.

Considering we got access to Kanzeon and Mari and their knowledge we might actually be able to make adult space marines viable even without using the clone and move soul cheat we already have access too.
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>>5174614
It does not. the lotus technology is what was used to make the sisters. If it erased souls then they couldn't have used it for that process. Please read the quest before you try to claim stuff like that.
>>5174613
>EEEEEEHHHHH kinda iffy about the soul transfer process. I don't think it would be wise to plant the souls of adults into clone grown grade space marine bodies, body dysmorphia, weird warp soul bullshit shenanigan's. You know how weird 40k gets.

Not what I was thinking of. Move their souls into adolsent bodies and then augment them from there if the higher end techology doesn't actually make adult augmentation possible.
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>>5174619
That one makes more sense, given that the canis helix make space wolves recruit older applicants, even if they become wulven.
But we are going to need a think tank with all the ships, mal and E.
>>5174622
It's what was said by the archivist on why we shouldn't slurp all the memories. Although Kanzeon might have lied back them because she didn't want to tell her nature.
Pleass read the quest before claiming other people didn't read the quest.
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>>5174614
>cloning tends to have drawbacks.

Also this isn't even completely true considering the Krieg corps who use cloning explictally to keep their numbers up and don't have issues with cloning.

The main issue with cloning in 40k is most people don't have good enough technology to make it worth it.
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>>5174622
nnnnnnnooo lets not do that.

>>5174631
Kriegers are one example, and cloning works for them since they literally yeet themselves into danger. I think there was one group of cloned human super soldiers but had fuck all bad luck.
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>>5174627
>It's what was said by the archivist on why we shouldn't slurp all the memories. Although Kanzeon might have lied back them because she didn't want to tell her nature.
>Pleass read the quest before claiming other people didn't read the quest.

>>5041503
>"Methods both you and your father use, at least a form of it but I am avoiding answering the question I know your asking" Kanzeon muttered, still shaking her head "I misled you, since we met. I am no machine. At least not as I pretended to be. The Lotus Scepter, the technology it uses, was used to create me and my siblings. If you leave it implanted in a living being, long enough. It will not only draw out their memories but their very soul"

Located in thread 12 where Kanzeon reveals her origins.

So no. It doesn't erase souls. It steals them if you leave it in long enough.
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>>5174637
>nnnnnnnooo lets not do that.

The other option is doing the fucked up shit of taking in childern and literally raising them for war and war alone. especially since in this time period space marines are shock troops and not spec ops.

We have the tools to not have to do the fucked up shit our brother and father was forced to do to technological limitations. We should at least see if it's viable and the pros and cons of such before we write it off.
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>>5174641
Eh, I'm fine with that. It's the lesser of a bunch of evils.
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>>5174631
There is no agreement on what exactly is the Vitae Womb, the only thing we know is that it's a secret and that Genators are disgusted by it. It can be vatborn like servitor, straight up cloning, birthing chemicals, etc.
The only sucessful cloning that I know of is the Fulgrim clone by Fabius Bile, there was that unlucky clone legion aswell.
And I don't know if Lieren and Kanzeon would realky like to use the scepre and clonign for that, both of them dislike using such advanced tech for war, and have a revulsion for those ones specifically.
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>>5174643
It stops being a lesser evil when you don't actually have to do it tho. That just moves it into being plain evil.

It's why the whole "emperor is an evil fuck with who did evil shit for evils" is such a retarded stance to take. He made the best choices he could at the time.
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>>5174644
Lieren and Kanzeon would also hate taking kids, and augmenting them into super soldiers that were explicitly made so they can die in place of regular humans.

Space marines as fucked up as it is were made to die. It's part of what causes the horus heresy.
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>>5174639
I just reread the archive, I mixed the test on the ox where Lieren said that it removes the memory completly with the whole soul thing.
>>5174650
I meant as in they both have a programmed revulsion to it.
Anyway, the best bet would be to study the canis helix and the gene process the recruits on baal undergo to try to find a way to recruit older applicants, instead of using such expensive, dangeorus and probably traumatic archeotech process.
I don't trust the wider imperium with it, not even one bit, we gave the stone to emps saying to not make a weapon and he immediatly called it a weapon.
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>>5174671
>I don't trust the wider imperium with it, not even one bit, we gave the stone to emps saying to not make a weapon and he immediatly called it a weapon.

That's cause of how shit stuff is on terra and in general.

Also nothing stops him for using them for their purpose and also weaponizing them at the same time.

Shit's fucked man and you have to make some hard decisions. Lieren's been extremely lucky in the decisions he's had to actually make.

Also I don't remember us explicitly saying to him to not weaponize it but just explaining the dangers of doing so.
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>>5166552
>Leaping back to your father after you hear your trusted assistant list of water generating stones and copies of the Journey in his tally
>"Ah the Water generating stone, a queer piece of ancient technology I have jealously and fearfully guarded. In the right hands, it could turn a lifeless wasteland verdant and replete with life" You explain, dramatically lashing your arm out and upwards towards the sky "But could very easily be made to serve as weapons more terrible than any other. Oh the threat they pose in the hands of those who would condemn their foes to such a fate are two fold! Without moisture in the air, they will draw it from the environment, their reach extending to living organisms! And if there is nothing to draw moisture from, they will create it through chemical fusion! And if the amount they are programmed to produce is great enough it can render entire regions empty of not only life but anything besides vast bodies and pools of water deeper than any lake!"

Yeah. No mention of not weaponizing it. Just the dangers of doing so.
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>>5174676
>>5174678
This was the vote
>Explain to your father how the Water Generating Stones work, and warn him that they are dangerous and should never be weaponized. Also mention that you are sharing some copies of the Journey, and would like your sons to be the first ones to recieve it, so they may have the complete picture.
So the intention was so. If Malal didn't wite that way then it was either a mistake or a creative license.
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>>5174687
I take what is written in story and not in the vote.
Lieren didn't say not to weaponize it and just explained the dangers of doing so.
To hold it against the emperor when lieren in character didn't straight up say "Don't weaponize this" is dumb.
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>>5174693
No it isn't, because otherwise this a bioware game where you chose one thing and what happens is another.
We have to value both, and Malal has not fuckes us over once, so I will believe that the Emperor saw that Lieren has pure disdain of weaponizing it and he decided to do it anyway.
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>>5174569
>unless they were Nobility wishing to regain their honor
Mao exist.
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>>5174696
>We have to value both, and Malal has not fuckes us over once, so I will believe that the Emperor saw that Lieren has pure disdain of weaponizing it and he decided to do it anyway.
That's also nice but lieren has no idea of the conditions of earth or what the emperor is dealing with.
If he can get some use out of fixing terra's water issues while also killing his enemies with it I'm perfectly okay with that. I'm not okay with it on our world cause we don't have water issues due to a bunch of aliens stealing our water.
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>>5174702
Yeah, and that's why I don't want to give the scepter or better cloning tech to the Imperium, they are going to use it a lot because of the harsh reality, even when there are other paths to take.
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>>5174705
Instead you would rather take children and turn them into war machine's who's purpose is to die.
Let's look at which of the two is actually worse.
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>>5174711
Hit enter to early. Answer is it's not the imperium in this situation since they actually looked into alternatives then just conscripting children in mass first.
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Also since lieren seems to have a programed aversion to cloning which would have been stuck in by the emperor himself I highly doubt he's the type to abuse cloning in that way.

Btw did you know that the mechinacium makes heavy use of cloning and of custom designing peeps from the womb to fulfil certain functions?
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>>5174711
>>5174715
It's the emperor mass sacrificing psykers to make a fleet of women of stone.
You keep ignoring the possibility to study geneseed to be able to recruit older candidates, even though it was your own suggestion.
We were going to do it anyway to create a primarch tier body for Kanzeon capable of carrying her soul. Or atleast it was an old plan, don't know if it was dropped.
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>>5174719
Vatborn, for both servitors and possible magos recruits. Although the last one depends on the forge world.
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>>5174722
I highly HIGHLY doubt he would do that. Especially since he'll have evidence of why that's a horrible idea if it's not voluntary at all.

We don't have GW's current dumb as fuck version of the Emperor in this quest that does dumb shit he knows is going to blow up in his face eventually.
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>>5174723
also Joyboys and joygirls. IE whores. Yeah that's a thing with the mechanium/us.

>>5174722
>We were going to do it anyway to create a primarch tier body for Kanzeon capable of carrying her soul. Or atleast it was an old plan, don't know if it was dropped.
Still a plan and we need to study our self more then that.

Honestly I can't wait to get up GAoT tier ship yards and what not running in space. I want to start expanding before the emperor can reach us. Only Gulliman and dorn did that canonically.
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>>5174726
Old lore Emperor was misguided. He was a well intentioned extremist that caused more harm than good in the end.
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>>5174726
We never know, he did make a mistake in trying to remove our emotion, he could rationalize it as a nescessity and have it blow up on his face. It wouldn't be the first time OG emps did it.
>>5174722
Also we need an actual name for Kanzeon's kind, since they are't exactly MoS. I propose Men of Gem, since we found her surronded by the warpstone, and because Men of Warpmetal isbl too long.
>>5174729
Ok, robot prostitutes is new for me.
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>>5174735
No that's new lore. Along with being a mix of having always been a dick the longer the horus heresy went on.
Old lore emps was someone who had the best intentions but got fucked over by chaos dicking over his future sight at just the right moment and via chaos turning his sons and him not communicating enough with the primarchs what his plans were. Outside of that he made choices he hated cause there weren't better options.
His other fuck ups were not controling the rampent xenophobia in people since he did make it possible for alien protectorates to exist.
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>>5174729
>>5174741
This is new to me too, please post some art or text about this.
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>>5174741
>We never know, he did make a mistake in trying to remove our emotion, he could rationalize it as a nescessity and have it blow up on his face. It wouldn't be the first time OG emps did it.
If you go reread that part you can see he looked at what he did there and regretted that decision. Kanzeon called lieren and thus the readers attention to that.
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>>5174745
>>5174741
>Ok, robot prostitutes is new for me.
Don't have art and texts but someone who ready a book focused on the mechanicus mentions it's a thing they make on some forge worlds to offer as a carrot to forge menials and what not.

Work hard enough and have some time in the whorehouse later.
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>>5174746
Oh I know he regretted it, that's why I said he did a mistake.
So it means he is capable of making them in a moment of Perturabo grade autism (tm).
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>>5174748
But are they like generic whores or do they got like prosthetics for sucking dick?
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>>5174750
their designed to be really good at it. Whether that's mechanical enhancements or being designed from the ground up genetically it can go either way.
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>>5174752
By the Emperor, I need to go down to Mars right the fuck now and check out what they've out. I bet they genetically engineered them wide hips and big assess.
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>>5174748
Ok, all I can find is people talking about some Ciaphas Cain novel, Gaunt's Ghost Necropolis and Flesh and Steel.
So weird robot clone sex confirmed.
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Also isn't the biggest issue with in 40k cloning is that clones don't develop their souls right for the most part? For human cloning anyway.
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>>5174785
I think so? There was also that whole bad luck thing with the hero clone army.
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>>5174789
>I think so? There was also that whole bad luck thing with the hero clone army.

Isn't that cause they're trying to do shit like straight up resurect people like Malcador or not alexander the great?
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>>5174790
Yes, but it was Macharius, not Malcador, and they were trying to make an entire army of them, not just ressurect.
But them again Fabius managed to do it when the Afriel Strain failed, so who fucking knows?
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>>5174798
I imagine the answer is chaos fuckery. Also Fabius is a straight up atheist to the point it replace daemons and shit. Meanwhile the imperium believes in gods.
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>The Afriel Strain was a shadowy experimental process which used genetic material from a number of the Imperium's greatest heroes to, in effect, make clones of them. The legendary Macharius was among the individuals replicated in this manner. This created warriors who were mentally superior to any regular Guardsman, albeit prone to disaster.[1]

>The Afriel Strain was an attempt to create the perfect soldier, though it resulted in unforeseen mishaps. For no reason that their creators could ascertain, the Afriels appeared to attract the animosity of other warriors and suffer from the most appalling bad luck. In each case when the Afriel Strain has been fielded, it has met with a period of success for its soldiers are undoubtedly superior. This superiority is not particularly in physical terms, but mentally, as they show absolutely no fear in combat. This initial period of success was always followed by the rapid decline and eventual destruction of the regiment. Nonetheless, whoever the creators of the Afriel Strain may be, they continue to experiment, fielding their "perfect soldiers" across the war zones of the Imperium.[1]

>Afriels are universally albino, with pale hair, alabaster skin and colorless eyes, something that only provokes the hatred of others.[1]

Yeah. Seems to be a fundamental issue with their technology used to create them.

Say what you want about Fabius but his technology is top notch. And he learned from the dark eldar too later on.
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Speaking of which, that article lead me to information on Replicae.

>Replication has been tried at least twice in the Imperium's history by a Space Marine unit seeking to quickly replace catastrophic losses. Instead of using human recruits, geneseed is used to "grow" clones of previous battle brothers, which can be amalgamations or singular individuals. Ideally, this process should produce a fully mature Astartes, with all of his implanted organs fully developed, and ready for combat in a matter of weeks or months, instead of the years it normally takes to mature and train a Neophyte into a full-fledged battle-brother.[2]

>Being one of the many technologies developed in the Dark Age of Technology, a great deal of the processes and techniques for creating successful and functioning clones was lost. These include the purification of the blood to be used in the cloning procedure and the elimination of gene-flaws.[2]

>Due to the loss of these techniques, mutations and other deformities occurred in almost every later attempt to repeat the process. These might include extra limbs, claws and fangs and also mental and psychological changes, including fury and predatory bloodlust.

>The replicae process can also magnify and accentuate already present gene-flaws. In many cases deformities present in the gene-stock can take disturbing and horrific shapes in the replicae.

Yeah we should avoid most of the issues that the imperium has with genetic engineering and cloning.
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>>5174810
missed this on the page

>In M31, due to the heavy losses the Raven Guard Legion sustained during the Isstvan V massacre, Corax asked the Emperor for the technology to replace his numbers and return to combat readiness as quickly as possible. The first group of recruits were successfully turned into marines in a matter of hours. After the resounding success, Corax continued the program, though infiltrators from the Alpha Legion had slipped in with the survivors of the Dropsite Massacre. These Alpha Legionnaires allowed Omegon to infiltrate the Raven Guard to steal a copy of the genetech for his own use, as well as sabotage Corax's functional unit. The second and third groups of recruits quickly devolved into mutants. Despite the initial success and ignorant of the sabotage, Corax deemed the program to be a failure and would continue to create Astartes through the traditional means.[2][3]

So yeah, Options exist for us that don't involve conscripting children in mass to make Space marines.
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>>5173668
>>Agile movements and precision. The Aeldari have show grace is just as deadly as brute strength.
>>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess

Also forgot to vote. Let's see if we can get both.
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>>5174804
>>5174810
>>5174816
>>5174818
ngl you're on a serious autism tangent here. Nice. Nice.
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>>5173688

>>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
>>Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.

change vote to this
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>>5174823
>ngl you're on a serious autism tangent here. Nice. Nice.

We are talking about the future of our legion. I would prefer to keep it growing and expanding in a way that doesn't cause Lieren to hate himself.
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>>5174823
Atleast it's something to talk about between updates.
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Ngl, it sucks there are no really good answers. Our best hope is we either crack how to augment adults successfully due to higher tech access or that the Clone a younger body and move a soul works out.

Otherwise we'll have to take actions that Lieren as a person would extremely dislike. Such as either doing repliacae and making people to just war or die or conscripting children in mass for it.
I guess the best way to make the best of the worse options is to teach them to be more then just soldiers so they have things outside of war.
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>>5174833
>33
Checked

But also, it's not like the people of Shangrila would object to it- at least not enough to stop the flow of new recruits. It's just that Lieren despises suffering and it has to be done.
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>>5174836
I love the fact we are going nobledark and not just full on grimdark. Continuing the trend if spitting in the face of GW and the shitty chaos gods is something I want to do. Fuck their necessary evils.
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>>5174839
What is Nobledark? I would hazard a guess that it's good people in horrible situations like we are in right now. If so, then I hope not everything is like that because the grimdark aesthetic is. . . familiar.
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>>5174833
We really need to throw ourselves into the genessed cracking. Not only for our own moral sake, but also because Magnus is going to need our help.
Still, worst case scneario we only adopt orphans, Lieren atleast has experience with that
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>>5174833
>>5174836
Once this war bullshit is over, we'll finally have time to relax and begin our RESEARCH! We have, T H E biggest plate of crap we need to sort through. God I don't even remember all the goals we had, but I know it was massive. Where's pastebin anon? I think he saved everything down somewhere.

Here's what I can recall off the top of my head:
>dig up ALL the SPACE SHIP MILFS
>Fix the ships we can, recycle or make operable the ones with dead souls
>(optional): if there are willing souls (dead monks) and if we get the greenlight across the board (Kanzeon, her sisters, dad), then put a new mass of soul souls in a ship
>kick start our own crusade
>Unfuck space coffin bear son
>upgrade cybernetics across the legion
>upgrade literally everything they have after the war and let the acclimate to their new war gear
>study the Pod until we 100% researched everything
>study ours and our sons genes, anatomy, and how they are made
>study DaoT and GaoT tier tech with Kanzeon in between warp travel until we eventually get 100% understanding
>occasionally astrally project to our brothers
>save Angry Ron before he gets nailed
>hug Batman Bro
I'll stop here because if I continue I'll need several more posts
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>>5174845
It's basically that, the world is shit but people are fighting against it with good intentions.
/tg/ even rewrite 40k lore to be nobledark a long time ago, it's on 1d4chan.
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>>5174848
>Lieren atleast has experience with that
He has shy of under 300 of them, and I do not doubt he helped watch over some of the smaller kids in his village when he was just starting out.
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huh, most post got eaten. I guess we can't do stuff like link 1d4chan?
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>>5174850
Don't forget studying how to make a permanent body for Kanzeon.
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>>5174855
Yeah, that site is mostly gone now.
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>>5174850
>>save Angry Ron before he gets nailed

Easiest way to do this is via contacting him via psykerism and letting Magnus know whats going on.

Well that and teaching him all we know of warfare and how to hide out in the wilds and getting him to go into the deserts or mountains on his world and hide out there until we get get people there to help him.
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>>5174860
Lieren could just, like, astrally project with his brother Magnus, then go ham on cheese on people as they reverse ghost puncher everyone.
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This describes the various terms.

>A noble setting isn't one where everyone is good, more like one where people are active and, more importantly, impactful in the grand scheme. The actions of a single hero can change the world, and a single big villain can ruin it: there are important people, who are so either by birth, rank or sheer willpower, and every single one of these people MATTER.

>In a grim world, no matter what you do, an individual can't secure more than an individual victory, if even that, because the rest of the world is too big/scared/powerless/selfish to build upon his impulses and influence.

>Now, a bright world is one full of opportunity, of wondrous sights to behold. It doesn't mean that it has to be MLP, it can be dangerous, but your first instinct when looking at a new location should be awe and wonder: people may adventure to save the world, but they leave town with a smile upon their face, eager to see what comes next. The shadow of Risk is largely erased by the glint of Adventure. In a bright world, it's quite possible for people to go on adventure just for the hell of it, since the journey is its own reward. Resurrection, or at least means to heal grave injuries, is usually accessible, to counterbalance the fact that the risks out there are real.

>A dark world is one where life sucks, and on top of the usual hazards, something or someone is poised to kill everybody else in the story; whether it be demon overlords, 'nids, or even the lack of water, if this threat has its way everyone dies and they die for good. If you lose an arm, you play a cripple. In the extreme cases, even when you win a fight, your career is over (i.e. gangrene). This means that, even though people may be ready to help (noble), they'll need a damn good reason to do so, since stepping out of line is so dangerous (dark).
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>>5174862
Would work but it's not sustainable We could maybe help over throw the city but Angron has no idea how to run that stuff.
All he unironically knows is fighting and we would have to crash course his ass on how to run a city, defense and the technology and what not to fight off the other cities on his planet.
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>>5174867
He really needs to run away and hide before he gets nailed, everything else should slowly come naturally to him as long as his brain isn't messed with.
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>>5174871
Angron's not going to just ditch his fellow gladiators. They are his family. It's like us and our brothers of the panther.
These are the peeps who he took their pain in from via psykerism.
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>>5174613
>Mari only needs to make a body if she really wants to. If she's content as she is then that is fine.
So far, she's the sweetest and most gentle of the sisters, she'd make one just so she can walk through a meadow.
>>5174859
Works fine for me. People were updating pages as of yesterday.
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>>5174871
>>5174878
Aye. The path to not getting nailed means understanding what he needs to do and giving his mentor a gladiator's sendoff which will be remembered for centuries. Bid his time until it is ripe to strike.
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>>5173668
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
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I love how Shangrila has been very unique and meeting our sons almost feels like an odd crossover. I need to fucking Magnus and Perturabo so we can bring prosperity to this bitch of a universe.
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>>5175188
>. I need to fucking Magnus and Perturabo
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>>5175188
gay
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>>5174693
Lieren has learn more than once, and seen more than once what the Water Stones do and that they shouldn't be used as weapons (they have been used for restore the Cui lands for example, as well other places). Because simply speaking, as weapons they are something that can kill lands and men with extreme ease.
So yes he would expect his father to use them for peace, not for killing lands or peoples, because he knows what this machines can do.
Lieren doesn't use them in war for a reason.

>>5174705
A lot of this high tech might be simply too much to give and a lot of it is really really dangerous, that's true
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>>5175220
>Lieren has learn more than once, and seen more than once what the Water Stones do and that they shouldn't be used as weapons (they have been used for restore the Cui lands for example, as well other places). Because simply speaking, as weapons they are something that can kill lands and men with extreme ease.
That's not the issue with terra. Terra's issue is it's sever lack of water.
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>>5173668
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess

Walking tanks are for smooth brains, our entire fighting style depends on agility and stealth

We're a fucking hunter!
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>>5175472
>>Walking tanks are for smooth brains
>literally have titans
>space marines are intended to occupy the middle ground between tank and infantry
Sure thing bud.
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>>5175472
>Walking tanks are for smooth brains
>Sad Dai and Dae-Hyun noises
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>>5173668
>>Survivability and protection, not only for themselves but for others. They shall be walls of steel and faith.
>>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
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>>5173668
>Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess
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>>5175472
LIEREN is a hunter. Our Astartes are clearly heavy infantry.
While they may show a proclivity towards Lieren's preferred methods of engagement, that's not readily apparent until they're directly compared to the other Legions.
As it stands, compared to baseline humans, they are pretty much walking tanks, if particularly dexterous ones.
Also
DAE-HYUN IS A WALKING WALL OF CERAMITE AND SCAR TISSUE.
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>>5176212
Bruh, that's what happens when you become a dreadnought, doesn't mean that our entire legion should become mini dreadnoughts because Dae-hyun became too injured to serve in normal power armor
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>>5176263
>doesn't mean that our entire legion should become mini dreadnoughts because Dae-hyun
The point flew over your head anon. The way Space Marines should be used is as shock troopers, as cover/distraction for baseline troops, or being a heavily armored juggernaut in area too tight for tanks.
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Wait a minute
>Korean
>From Seoul
>Is in a dreadnought
>Meaning he is driving a metal box
>Name is Dae-Hyun
It can't be
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>>5176349
oh, that's clever.
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>>5176349
The Honda ripoff.
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>>5176349
FUCKING BRILLIANT!
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So basically a reverse Hyundai + Korean Boy band member(B.A.P)?
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>>5176339
Pretty fucking much. I'll call the vote soon and make the update
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>>5176349
HOW DID WE NOT SEE THIS! Wheres George floyd cuz I cant breath!
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the long wait, the machine spirits decided to throw around their weight. And yes, same issue as last time

Improving the current design of their armor and weapons, without changing its function but advancing it with the materials knowledge you, your wife and her sister possess: 30

Survivability and protection, not only for themselves but for others. They shall be walls of steel and faith.:8

Adorn the armor with null denouncement charms and passages from the Journey.: 17

Inspired by native Shangralan wildlife, create specialized armors and weapons designed to compliment the martial styles you have invented.: 1

Agile movements and precision. The Aeldari have show grace is just as deadly as brute strength.: 2

Total votes: 32

So Lieren will simply improve his sons' wargear without changing its functions but by advancing it with materials and knowledge
And adorning it with null denouncement charms and passages from the journey

Writing now

>>5176349
Spooky
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Seems like they'll be more resistant to chaos even before meeting it.
Might help in the future. Might help now.

Won't know till we dig up the next sister.
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Surely, the songs will sing of the great Lieren forging the armor to clad his sons with hammers of molten metal upon a forge of stars in the cold depths of the heavens, plays teaching of and detailing the events of this war will surely include scenes of a father and son working in celestial forges lit by phoenix feathers and the very dust of the cosmos to create the blades for the noble warriors who have followed their father to the fair valleys of Shangrala. The truth, after all is much more mundane yet much more extraordinary as well. With the advance, arcane technology of Kanzeon and Mari's Cyclopean foundries, the act of creating such mighty, storied armor is as simple as entering a combination of chemicals into the systems guiding the molecular, digital printing devices and allowing them to create alloys that are strong and durable where they need to be and flexible in others. You doubt any mortal smith could recreate the combination of minerals and steels. "Star Metal" is married to Adamantium, imparting the steel the psionically resonate and "living" properties of the astounding material that forms the bodies of your beloved Kanzeon and her gentle sister. And that is the most ordinary of combinations and alloys you create in the process of improving the armor and weaponry of your sons.

Strangely, their hulking suits of armor are only powered and connected to the subdermal interface snaked beneath their skin in the upper portions. The torso and arms. The legs are entirely unconnected to the rest of the armor and offer minimal protection. And while the battalion erasing weaponry fielded by the Vishnu renders armor nearly pointless, it is still a weakness you must do away with.

The suits shall become like the armor of pure star metal you wear when you do not choose to instead wear it as resplendent and ever shifting robes finer than any silk. Fully enclosed, protecting them from atmospheric dangers such as poison mists or toxic air or smother miasmas, but also the lack of air itself. Replacing the opened faced helmets and visors of their prior gear, you will take inspiration from a prior creation and give them masks of hardened star-Adamantium, that contains all of the necessary sensor arrays and diagnostic systems while doing away with the critical flaw of exposing their faces to the elements or weapons of their opponents. You will leave these war-masks, that the wearer can see through as if peering through the advance visors of an Aeldari helmets, from which you took some lesser designs from, blank. Uncolored and without a face or expression. They will speak to the world with their righteous actions and great deeds, rather than their allegiances, as you did years before.

And with the improvements of the basic design of this powered armor, the thunderous footstep of your genesired legion shall fall silent as a panther's step

The second weakness you address is the unnecessary bulk of the suits.
Cont
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>>5177011

The powered portions of the armor augment the already impressive strength of the wearers but with the peerless engineering of Kanzeon's Era, you can do away with the ridiculously sized cables and the massive powerpack itself by merging the systems into the armor itself, allowing its overall frame to be slightly reduced and slimmed as the space occupying machinery was reshaped as veins within the armor itself. And the increased space within the armor allowed for the introduction of a miniaturized life support system decentralized through out the now fully enclosed and sealed suit. So, Kanzeon and Mari gifted their lungs and living veins to your sons, symbolically of course.

There are other additions, of course, but they are not fixing flaws but rather creating new subsystems within the armor itself, integrated within it. Taking inspiration from Aeldari ship design and the gravitational anomalies the Vishnu take sadistic delight in flinging at your countrymen, you found a way to briefly reduce the weight of the armor and its wear to almost nothing, allowing them to soar through the air with a single leap. And, combining the protective energy shields that serve to protect Kanzeon and her sisters, and the crystalized light and gravity generators the Vishnu misuse as weaponry, you can create an additional layer of protection that can formed into a true shield in the hands of the wearer or a weapon should they be deprived of all others.

This device, you implant, like with the Titanic fighting statues, in a similar arrangements to meridians. And cleverly, you use this same network of shield generators to serve as a channel for Qi itself! as it will line up, and hopefully connect to the living meridians of your sons! At least, you believe it will, if you understanding of the "Black Carapace" Beneath their skin is correct which you are all but certain it is Considering that both you and Kanzeon studied the augmentations of your sons closely and fervently.

The lesser additions include means to maintain hydration and nutrition even if your sons must battle for days, and means to apply first aid without taking them from their armor, which was Mari's suggestion, but they are too numerous to go over in detail as your shrew eyes spotted dozens of ways to improve the armor that will protect your sons and expand its usefulness on and off the field of battle.

Looking upon the finalized armor, you cannot help but to feel the featureless full face masks will be unnerving and terrifying to witness while they march to war. But surely, considering how creative and individualistic your sons are, they will customize their masks and armor without your heeding or command. The three hundred empty shells white as alabaster are lined up in many rows, as Kanzeon busies herself with adding the barest of personalization to each suit of armor, adding the name, rank and company of each of the Marines to their future armor
Cont
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>>5177012

and when she thinks you're not looking, hiding a microscopic lotus blossom somewhere on each suits armor plating. Which, after you tease her and relish in her reaction and embarrassment, inspires you to put much more than a single lotus onto the surface of your sons armor.

And so, passages of the journey and the null denouncement script are engraved with five methods onto exterior and interior of each son of armor, offering them more protection than the armor itself even if they will not see it as anything more than a flair of beauty and decoration.

Improving their weaponry is a much more brief and simple affair. Adjusting calibrations, replacing subpar materials, improving the mixture of chemical accelerants and energy sources, listening to Dandan and Shan when they complain about the Bolter Shell's ratio of explosive to shell and adding improved targeting systems and recoil absorbers to the weapons that produce kinetic force when fire. You also are bemused and a little unnerved to find that alongside primitive power blades, spears, mauls and many other forms of such weaponry, your sons also carry swords and axes much like the vishnu do, but of a slightly larger size. But you do not toss away such weapons in disgust.

Instead, in the edges of the razor sharp teeth, you place take the neural interface of the "Defanged" Agonizers you've made, so their bite will induce a brief paralyzes upon its victims, allowing them to die quickly and without suffering. As experience has shown, the sawing teeth of such weapons are more painful when the victim beneath them moves.

Satisfied with your work, you gather the newly forged war gear into Kanzeon's body, briefly visiting Mari to collect her share of the equipment, before returning to the battlefront from low orbit to present your sons their new armor and weaponry with beaming smiles on both your and Kanzeon faces
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Meanwhile...

Choose a cutaway

>One of Lieren's primarch brothers going about their day

>Khornate Vishnu Fighting Space marines in CQC for the first time

>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes

>A lurking Shadow
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>>5177014
>A lurking Shadow
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>>5177014
>>One of Lieren's primarch brothers going about their day
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>>5177014
>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes

I want the shadow, but I also want this scene
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>>5177014
>A lurking Shadow

Primarch important but enemies must be known
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>>5177014
>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes
Damn, I wish I could see all of them...
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Also just noticed I forgot to put in the write in option

Write ins, as always, are accepted
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Wait a minute, is Star Metal necrodermis or some for of necrodermis derivative? I’m a little torn considering it’s living metal but also psionically active.
>>5177014
>A lurking Shadow
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>>5177031
You don't say...
>our brother Konrad constantly jobbing his attempts to "punish" people.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Zy8T1Veqq0
Gotta love our shenanigan's fucking with his visions.
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>>5177014
>>Khornate Vishnu Fighting Space marines in CQC for the first time

Give. Me. ASTARTES.
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>>5177014
>>A lurking Shadow
how can you not vote for this
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>>5177014
>A lurking Shadow
This has me worried, could be bel'akor, could be that dark eldar who bet on the cloning tech saving him, or it could be that hypothetical spy Malcador sent who likely has enough power to do serious harm to anything that they are indoctrinated into targeting.
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>>5177014
>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes

Could we get this from both pov? From Panther and from Astartes, because our bois are the best of the best
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>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes
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>>5177014
>One of Lieren's primarch brothers going about their day
Lorgar pleae, I want to see Kor-Phaeron now having to be the secret worshipper of 6 gods
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>>5177014
>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes
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>>5177014
>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes
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>>5177032
Necrodermis and Wraithbone are pretty similar anon.
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>>5177014
>One of Lieren's primarch brothers going about their day
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>>5177014
>>A lurking Shadow
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>>5177014
>Khornate Vishnu Fighting Space marines in CQC for the first time
Gotta let our sons get their shinespot.
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>>5177014
>>One of Lieren's primarch brothers going about their day
New primarch pls?
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>>5177014
>A lurking Shadow
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>>5177213

>A lurking Shadow
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>>5177014
>>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes

>One of Lieren's primarch brothers going about their day
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>>5177014

>A lurking Shadow
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>>5177014
>A lurking Shadow
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>>5177014
>>Khornate Vishnu Fighting Space marines in CQC for the first time
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>>5177014
>>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes
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>>5177014
>A lurking shadow
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>>5177014
here's a quick vote count (counting my own).

A lurking Shadow: 10

Primarch brothers going about their day: 6

One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes: 9

Khornate Vishnu Fighting Space marines in CQC for the first time: 3

Write-in
our brother Konrad constantly jobbing his attempts to "punish" people. (assuming anon is discarding his lurking shadow vote): 1

So here's my vote:
>One of Lieren's primarch brothers going about their day
>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes
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>>5177014
>>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes
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>>5177014
>>A lurking shadow
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I'm adding a vote for
>A lurking shadow
I don't remember who I was
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>>5177014
>One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes
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>>5177875
My guess is >>5177091
Don't ask me how I know.
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>A lurking shadow
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>One of Lieren's primarch brothers going about their day

Wonder if this is someone who's suddenly going to have a bad day.
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Calling the vote now

A lurking Shadow:14

One of Lieren's primarch brothers going about their day:8
-Konrad:1
-Logar:1

One of the brothers of the panthers fighting alongside the Astartes:10

Khornate Vishnu Fighting Space marines in CQC for the first time: 3

total votes: 32

So Lurking shadow wins

writing now
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The world designated by the local population as Shangrala was truly bizarre. The shadow had been trained for all eventualities and terrains, but something in the atmosphere was different even if his augments could not pick up was different and warned him of only an anomalous level of sustained humidity and ambient levels of moisture in the atmosphere. Reality was thin, the shadow was certain. There was an unseen corruption that has seeped and bled into the soil. A cancer, of sorts, that would explain the second's encounters with the parasitic thoughtforms. He moved, out of perception and beneath attention, dressed in the traditional attire of the dominant civilization. The kingdom fortunate to serve as a host society for the "native" Primarch. Others lurked in the shadows, but the shadow was uncertain if they were fellow operatives or spies sent by other masters. Inhuman? Alien perhaps. Perhaps even Daemonic? But, despite feeling their presence, he could not sense where these other observers were located and who they owed their allegiance to.

His own master had warned him of the seconds ability to pierce through any illusion or deception, and gaze into the true psyche of a sapient mind. The shadow and self combined. The id, ego and super ego together. The true self. What they truly were, trough the many Personas and masks men hid themselves behind. His mission was observation, as his masters master spoke of a sense of uneasy familiarity and his own master recognized the technology the second had presented. Eldar technology. The second had spoke of an encounter with the foul xenos. But it was clear he had adopted their tools beyond merely looting the dead, and had altered it. Improved it. Mingled it with something else.

Something far more familiar than alien. And as the Emperor trusted his son, one of his companions could not take this shadows place. He would find the answer to the mystery surrounding the mistborn primarch, the truth behind the arcane technology he possessed and hid behind acquisitions of battle. There was a source, obscured and hidden and while he gave freely the products of this secret manufactorum, learning its origin would ease the worries of the sigilite or confirm them. All around him, were signs of the seconds technological tampering and innovation, machines and tools far more advance than any upon terra, all a mingling of Eldar technology and the unknown factor. Familiar. Find out why the emperor felt a familiarity, find the source of the seconds collection of archeotech that he can seemingly produce as easily as standard issue flak armor.

And determine if both are acceptable to be utilized in the reclamation effort for humanities birthright, on small or mass scale. There were risks in technology, risks of becoming over reliant or corrupted by the relics of the past by their design or power source.
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>>5178394

But now, the shadow had decided a personal objective, besides spying on the local populace and their leader, the second primarch and determining if a corruption of a source besides the warp had taken root. But to discover who else lurked in the shadows, who else observed the forces of the second, who else was spying.

"What are you doing here?" A man called, as the shadow reached instinctively for his personal weapon gifted to him by the Sigilite, a small dagger that could disrupt psionic energies and powers

He whipped around, to find a man he immediately identified as one of the seconds most trusted servants. an architect who his surgically implanted memories failed to supply a name for. He moved his fingers an inch away from his hidden weapon, studying the man as he pulled at his facial hair.

"The imperial army's march may be both restless and relentless, but they cannot advance unless the roads are secure and intact" He said, shaking his head as he reprimanded the out of place shadow, who looked down at the robes he procured and realize he was dressed as a common laborer. Out of sight and mind, but entrusted with many duties. Unfortunate. And it was impossible to dispose of such a highly positioned servant of the second. He would have to play along for the time being.

Actually, this presented a wonderful opportunity to inspect the advance technology and perhaps even take a sample for study away from the warfront.

to his shock he was handed a wooden mallet rather than any queer device of unknown function or purpose.

"The drones are busy repairing the Dai's Iron turtles and the Skipping clouds after the last engagement, and are further distracted by the necessary calibration and tuning of the Steel giants" The architect explained "And as we cannot wait for them to finish their duties, we must continue paving the road as we did when we first began it from the outskirts of nothing"

The shadow nodded, hoping perhaps now to listen in on conversations that would reveal the second's secret or to find an opening to slip away, change their disguise into a more useful and fitting one that would allow them access to the stores of Archeotech or perhaps a chance to join an outing to its source or production facility. So, irritated by still focused on their mission, the shadow followed the architect, adjusting their expression to make their features appear more "Native" to bolster their simple disguise and keep it from being pierced under scrutiny

And as he walked a way, the shadows themselves rippled, and a creature born of them watched them go. The mandrake, hired to check if the Giant monkeigh still drew breath, had satisfied what his employer had asked off him and now only lingered to gather the power to return to his distant, hidden manse in the webway. And to find a prize to take back to his own stygian den. There were a great many worthy prey, including, oddly, his own cousins who had not been fed by the bosom of gloom and dark
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Though, he was unconcerned with the brainwashed Aeldari, who had severed their ties to follow the son of blinding light. Rather, what drew his attention were the queer monkeigh, who moved with similar grace to himself. The scarred, limping one, the twins and the one who wore a skull over his face were particularly fascinating. And, unlike the man whose blood ran gold, were not out of his league. His employer overestimated himself and his kin, the mandrake knew well his limits and did not wish to squander the opportunity to share his employers...connections. The connections that allowed him to escape the usurper goddess's gullet. A curiosity, mostly. As death meant little to this shadow. Skulking, he followed the souless man, studying his movements and wondering if he should kill the out of place monkeigh, before deciding it may sow chaos to allow him to take a prize from one of the fascinating monkeighs.

Or perhaps that familiar ranger. He knew Folant, but did not know why he followed the cultist of the reversed eight fold path.

But, the Mandrake, did not concern himself with the thinness of the veil.

And so missed the presence of a devil staring through it, pacing the boundary alongside thousands of others. A queer spirit, that had retained the personality it held in life through sheer rage.

A headless phantom, that sought to witness the final victory of its killer or his crushing defeat.

The last of the Cui came when called, and hid away from the piercing eyes of the strong ox and white tiger to seek their master who bound them.

The sorcerer Lieren, who the mad spirit of Cui Fu sought instinctively, lead by a resentment and rage so powerful he crawled from beneath the skull throne itself to seek him out. To witness the fall of Shangrala or its salvation. And his rage called to others, who followed like vultures in his wake

Countless shadows beyond these three, of all forms and natures gathered to witness the outcome of this most fateful of wars....
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What do you do when you reunite with the imperial army and your sons, Lieren?

>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces

>Color the armor of your sons and gift them with a sigil to fly upon their banner, as reward for their service to Long-Jia

>Congratulate them, for not losing a single Astarte in the battles they took part in, a truly impressive feat considering the quality of their armor and weapons

>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them

>Write in
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>>5178396
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces


Empy you bitch
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>>5178396
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them

>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces


Dammit uncle Malcador, I know why you have to be this way but why you gotta be this way?

Also who hired the mandrake?

Goddammit cui fu, you used to be cool, you used to be best boi
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>>5178402
+1
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>>5178405
He was never the best boy, Lieren hated fu a lot and only likes some made-up version of him that he made up
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>>5178405
+1
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>>5178396
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
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>>5178396
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
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>>5178396
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
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>>5178405
Support.

And we never liked Cui. We respect his abilities to battle, we respect his dogged loyalty and that he was able to see past our guise of mock loyalty to Gao.
But we, and I quote, HOLD NOTHING BUT HATE FOR YOU IN MY HEART, I AM WILLING TO GRANT YOU ONE FINAL BATTLE.
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>>5178396
INTRUDER ALERT, AN IMPERIAL SPY IS IN THE BASE
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
Time is of the essence. We’ve had our fun, now let’s get down to business to defeat the huns.
Also, am I to understand Cui Fu is a fucking daemon prince now? I suppose it makes sense, in spite of serving a pawn of Slaanesh he is absolutely Khorne’s kind of guy.
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>>5178481
Khorne took his soul and has him as some sort of shade apparently. Bet he's going to come out for a rematch after the butcher finishes whatever ritual he's doing
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>>5178506
I'm down for it. When last we met, he was but a man but now he is a master!

Cui vs Lieren, round two, is gonna be a right fun one.
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>>5178396
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
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>>5178396
>>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
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>>5178405
The Kabal of the Lords of the Hunt likely wants their revenge, the defeat given by Lieren was probably devastating for their pride and prestige back in Commoragh. The one spy of the imperium has arrived with the portal, so in the official numbers he will be missed since we know the numbers of the taskforce. And for Shade Cui, well seems both Chen and Bai are on the hunt.

I don't need to mention all of this three entities seems to have for the moment avoid to approach, any place with some serious security and monitoring. Both spy and mandrake will risk to be found out in any serious perimeter. Shade could be sensed by a wanderer, since chaos is stinky. Cui was still a tyrant and was killing his own lands and people. A malicious and mad warhound that needed to die.
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>>5178396
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces

>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
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>>5178396
>Color the armor of your sons and gift them with a sigil to fly upon their banner, as reward for their service to Long-Jia
I'd prefer a uniformed legion instead one divided in color scheme.
>then immediately March to war

>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them

>>5178402
>>5178405
I'm less worried about our uncle's spy and more worries about the mandrake trying to kill people. With the spy, uncle, and space dad I think we stand a chance or convincing him that Kanzeon isnt evil, but it would be an excellent point of discussion to learn about what happened during the Long Night, since Kanzeon only knows tid bits.
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>>5178581
oh yeah your right, the legion was fractured back on terra.
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>>5178396
Changing from>>5178459
to support>>5178581
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>>5178396
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
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>>5178581

I believe from prior discussion our armor is is purple and blue with gold trim? Or perhaps we are discussing our legion being proto grey knights then our armor could simply be grey with purple highlights and gold trim.
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>>5178396
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
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>>5178396
>Approach those few psyker amongst them
>Color the armor of your sons and gift them with a sigil (the eight fold blossom of the journey)
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>>5178396

>take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces

>Color the armor of your sons and gift them with a sigil to fly upon their banner, as reward for their service to Long-Jia

changing vote
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>>5178396
>>Congratulate them, for not losing a single Astarte in the battles they took part in, a truly impressive feat considering the quality of their armor and weapons
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
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>>5178581
it's not that we are forgoing the unified color scheme, more that we are placing that issue on the back burner likely until malal has a few month vacation coming up, especially given the few times before we tried to decide, so we can spend it debating at length which of the color schemes we like the most
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>>5178396
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
I'm not too worried about Malcador's spy, he has clear reasons to suspect we are hiding something, and that is because we are.
>he never asked
true, but it's no reason not to be cautious. We can easily assuage their suspicions later.
The mandrake on the other hand, is REALLY bad news.
>>5178405
>Goddammit cui fu, you used to be cool, you used to be best boi
He was never best boi.
He COULD have been best boi, but instead acted like a bitch, and got schooled like one.
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>>5178396
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
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>>5178396
>>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
>>Color the armor of your sons and gift them with a sigil to fly upon their banner, as reward for their service to Long-Jia
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>>5178396
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them

I doubt it'll happen but I'll laugh if all of the shadows try to enact their plans only for them to inadvertently get in each others way and ruin their plans.

Also if some of Lieren's sons reincarnate I'll laugh if the legion tries to recruit the Great Bear over and over again by finding the child that's more crude and foul mouthed.
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>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them

>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
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>>5178396
>>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
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>>5178405
this as well, if possible
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>>5178396
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
Knew Malcador would send one assassin acting as a spy at the least, hoping he truly does stick to observation only, dude is likely callidus tier if not better and thus a huge threat.
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>>5178396
>>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
>>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces
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>>5179281
Potential threat, despite not being strictly our ally he is loyal to humanity and uncle Mal, who is loyal to our father
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>>5178581
I really share these concerns about the mandrake.

And back this
+1
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>>5178396
>Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them
>Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces

I hope lieren spots the imp spy some day and invite for tea, just to fuck with him.
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the wait

Allow them to customize their armor as they desire, and then, with footsteps like thunder, take your two regiments, the native and the terrans and form a spearhead to pierce into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny, listening to your fathers advice and leading a brutal campaign against Nitya Sinha's forces:24
-Do not allow them to customize: 1

Approach those few psyker amongst them, and teach them your techniques and those you've learned from your disciples, to prepare them to use their gifts in battle. And..."borrow" some of Magnus advice to share with them:20

Color the armor of your sons and gift them with a sigil to fly upon their banner, as reward for their service to Long-Jia: 6

Total votes: 29

So Lieren will allow his sons to customize their armor however they desire, and approach the few psykers amongst them to impart his psykerist techniques to them and share Magnus' Wisdom with them, before leading them and their support regiments alongside your regiment of Shangralan elites to form a spearhead to stab into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny

Writing now
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>>5180014
>share Magnus' Wisdom with them
What was his wisdom?
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>>5180019
Primer on how to teach the psyker arts
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With Kanzeon at your side, you observe your sons drilling, training and sparring in patch cleared of grass and left as bare earth and stone. They are out of their armor, at least from their waists up, fighting with knives, fists, and knees in a form of martial arts that was clearly designed for close quarters combat on the battle field, with many of its techniques including pinches, grapples and holds and all of its strikes designed to end duels decisively and lethally. Oh how their blades flash through the mists, as they perform their deadly practice with one another, dancing and circling like deadly dancers with fists clench and knuckles white. Their arms are used as both shields and spears, and you can see a form of defensive movement similar to the carp dance in how they weave and duck to close the distance between them and their sparring partners.

A circle of Terran and Shangrala men have formed around the fighters, shouting and cheering in their native tongues like an audience of an official martial arts tournament or the raucous crowd of a low class play. As if the war around them has momentarily ceased to be. It is combat, pure and refined, beautiful in its simplicity and the mechanical part of you cannot help but to admire the efficiency of their strikes and movements alongside your emotional heart. It swells the spirit to watch these men fight with smiles on their faces, friendly despite the viciousness of their blows and aggression they put behind every strike. Astartes are made to wage war and battle, so it is no surprise that they fight as naturally as birds fly. You watch silently, arms held behind your back as you see Aruna and a few other Vishnu and New Varro men part the ring around the area to enter it as challengers, tossing off their upper coverings to battle your transhuman, warrior sons. You raise an eyebrow curiously as you observe their bouts with close interest, flowing like smoke to stand in the ring proper, which parts naturally before you as the men and women making it notices your presence in the fog.

With blinding fog piercing lights lighting the night, you watch Aruna square off against Nikephoros, whose hands are bloodied from his prior fights, though you cannot tell from this distance if that blood has come from his opponents or the scrapping of his own knuckles. Michah and Clayton prat also manage to find themselves sparring partners amongst the members of the second legion of your father's armies.

"You are not joining the fights?" You ask, as you look down to see Feng on the outermost edge of the spectators ring, dressed in full uniform, including the visor hiding his eyes

"I have nothing to prove, I've sparred with yor and Jinhai, and these eyes of mine tell me I'd only be wasting time brawling" Feng answers with a snort "Besides I find it more interesting to observe how they fight, there's an elegance in that ferocity but it is less...refined than your styles"
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>>5180049

"But it is ruthlessly effective" You note, as Clayton is caught in a hold where his opponent could easily snuff out his life by tightening his grip or rotating his shoulders "Much like the Fog Panther style"

"But they have two hammers rather than a spear or claw" Feng cackles, smiling widely to reveal his teeth in a grin very much like your own. Clayton struggles, trying to swing himself onto the back of the Astartes who caught him, a move you've noticed the men of New Varro use in wrestling. A talent they've acquired and mastered in their prior occupations as Rattle Handlers. From there he'd rain blows down on the exposed neck and temple of the Marine, while performing a choke hold of his own with his legs.

However, your son's strength is too great to escape from, So he chokes Clayton into unconsciousness while mockingly singing a lullaby you believe is spoken in the Shuomi dialect of Gothic. Michah fairs slightly better, but even his endurance quickly fails while trying to exchange blows with a Space Marine. He isn't knocked unconscious, yielding after he gets his arm put into a lock behind his back and has the blunt end of a knife larger than his arm placed an inch away from his throat.

"Rather entertaining, is it not" You chuckle, as you watch Aruna, whose body mass and strength is closer to an Astartes than the other men, force Nikephoros onto the defensive, rushing to close the distance and lunging past every swing. Not to dodge, but to render Nikephoros' greater reach useless, shrugging off the bell ringing blows to his jaw and stomach, aimed at organs. Strikes that would disable most men from pain.

But Vishnu are a different breed. Even with both arms cut off, they can still fight. You have seen Screamers divorced from their legs, crawling on the ground and roaring challenges even as they choked on their own blood. And seeing a disemboweled Vishnu fight until they expire from bloodloss is a common sight. A truly monstrous force of will and pain tolerance.

"Especially seeing Clayton get choked" Feng sneers "That should help temper his pride, are you going to watch the rest of these matches?"

"Mmm, no, as much as I am thrilled by this spectacle, I have more urgent matters to attend to" You state, bowing your head "I've only come to collect a few of my sons who have...requested an audience with me personally"

That is a lie, in fact, the opposite is true. It is you who has sought these individuals among your three hundred and one Astarte sons. As, upon first laying eyes upon them, you became aware that they possessed the gift of psykerism. And decided they needed guidance. So under pretense of reviewing their battle field performance, you've come to collect these blessed few and beginning teaching them your techniques, both those you've created or inherited from others.
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>>5180050

And while you impart your wisdom and that of your elders to these gifted few, Kanzeon will give the others their new improved weapons and armor, as she made it known she desired to do so as a means to introduce herself to them and converse with them while they are not "Enchanted" by your presence. And you know, she also chose to do so out of a desire to act the part of a doting mother, as she delights doing with your other, adopted children. You only regret, is that in tutoring a handful of your sons in the proper utilization of their psionic potential, you will be unable to witness Kanzeon acting adorably as she presents the gifts of weaponry and protection to the space marines.

But alas, teachings your sons how to properly harness and wield Qi and the energy of their souls takes precedence over the whimsical desire to see your beloved cheerful and merry. And, upon reflection, a new curiosity arises within you. Namely how your sons will customize their armor, as it is a clear a few of them have organized themselves into sects by the colors they wear and how they act, upholding one tenant or lesson of the Journey before and more seriously than any other. Maybe now that they've had a chance to read through the entirety of The book, they'll reunify.

Or perhaps their personal interpretations will lead to them forming new clans and schools, banding together with the like minded who share their philosophy. After all, forcing one to walk a path is a grave sin by your belief.

Smiling, you decide to stay to watch Aruna and Nikephoros' bout to its close before ending the tournament and gathering the psykers who partook in it.

It is obvious none of the Terran audience expected Aruna to last as long as he has, or land as many blows as he continues, shouting war cries and bellowing that all too familiar declaration. The same spoken by his predecessor on the day of his death.

"MY LIFE IS BATTLE!" He cries, through a bloodied mouth "MY BLOOD IS WAR"

Nikephoros flows his knife handle fist, catching it after it has distracted Aruna. His other hand shoots forward to grab his throa. But the skull faced chieftan roars and throws himself against the astarte.

"Have your eyes revealed a clear winner?" Feng asks, as those same eyes are focused on both of the fighters as they return to their rapid brawl, moving so quickly most of the audience is probably unable to track their movements.

You shake your head, and sit down as you realize this match is going to last far longer than the other two. Time that will allow you to decide which wisdom to borrow from your brother Magnus, and what Koans may serve to explain the nature of psykerism and your techniques to your gifted sons.
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You've gathered all of the forces that you command, the regiment of native elites and folk heroes, and the three hundred astartes and the three regiments that follow them as close comrades and brothers in arms.
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>>5180052

To your surprise, there is no great variety of color amongst your sons, as it once had been.

Rather, those who consider themselves apart from the legion and wish to declare membership to one of the groups forming within it, have instead of coloring all of their suits the color of their sects, have instead only painted the wrists and hands of their armor to denote their philosophical allegiances.

And the rest of the armor, is instead painted in a camouflage pattern to hide them beneath the verdant jungles of the Vishnu territories. Molted patterns and splashes of hue and tone, dark greens, blacks, tans, greys and whites to mimic the shadowy undergrowth of the thick, sweltering forests and the clouds of mists that fill them.

A pragmatic choice. However, they have personalized their armor to stand out in other ways. By carving designs into their warmasks and writing slang, nicknames and insulting threats in gothic along the arms, chests and pauldrons of their armor. Most of the designs on their helmets and masks take inspiration from death or the animals of native terra. The most gregarious and social of them, having learned of the tradition of marking Warmasks with an emotion or designing them after the sigil of the house who the warrior serves, have instead drawn beaks or the snarling jaws of panthers on their helmets.

Many of them have passages of the Journey carved alongside the gothic passages. And, through that you can see the more mischievous of the Imperial army have also left their own calling cards on the regalia of your sons. Thankfully, none of them went so far as to mock or leave crude messages on the armor, and the worst is a poem declaring the writers virility and beauty alongside a passage of the journey warning against vanity. You have to wonder if they noticed and appreciated the irony. Mostly they just left their names and a small wish for the Astartes safety.

Like Jiang, though he has also put a small poem praising the flavor and texture of deep fried field rat.

Dae-Hyun hasn't camouflaged his tomb, and hast left it unpainted for the time being. The psykers amongst the three hundred, have pieces of jade bearing the null denouncement script set into the knuckles and palms of their gauntlets, to serve as catalyst for their nascent power as they are still novices in the ways of psykerism. That was a suggestion of Guozhi, who uses similar channels in the form of his walking sticks and prayer beads.

With your combined forces standing at attention, in rows spanning the field, you step atop one of the tanks your father gifted you, as the thirteen fighting statues look over the army emotionlessly, their pilots sitting in their open cockpits, listening in on your speech as Kanzeon's true body, which the Terrans know as a "relic you found beneath the earth" watches while her avatar stands, dressed for the first time in proper military uniform.
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>>5180053

Or rather, in her usual finery and dress, but with Lai Song's hat perched atop her head after she won it in a bet she made concerning Nikephoros and Aruna's match.

How do you address your forces as you stand high upon a stage, Lieren?

>"We shall be the spear that ends the butcher's wretched life. His kingdom is burning, his walls have crumbled, his forces dwindle with every engagement. He has exacted a terrible tally of causalities upon the noble imperial army and sowed fear in the hearts and minds of our people. This war has claimed more lives than any other in Shangralas history, even if they were to be combined into a singular war. We shall have our revenge, our justice. The tyrant shall hang, and we lead the march to place to noose around his neck"

>"The emperor has given the order, allow none to escape. End the war efficiently and brutally if you must. Rather than performing a nation wide death by a thousand cuts, we shall crush this blood soaked kingdom of villains and barbarous devils beneath our heels! Decisively and rapidly destroying this empire of darkness! We will leave naught by ash and smoking glass in our wake! Let the heavens weep, for we shall shed no tears in this campaign against evil! Let the butcher BURN IN THE FIRE OF HIS SINS!"

>"Nitya Sinha believes himself to be a giant. My sons, of blood or oath. Allow us to show this braggart the difference between a giant made of steel augmentations and a giant born! The difference between a primarch and virtuous man, and an abomination of iron whose heart knows only hatred! Let the bloody god these Vishnu gone savage worship weep their bloody tears, for its temples shall fall with this broken nation's king!"

>"Providence. Prosperity. Virtue. All of these are being threatened by that fool who names himself kings of kings. I have advised Emperor Long-Jia to perform an unparalleled thrust into Vishnu Territory, to take advantage of their weakness before they can recover from their losses. And he has allowed me to lead this campaign of slaughter, and commanded me not to cease my advance until I Stand in the heart of their capital. Join me in this race to the butcher's den!"

>Write in
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>>5180055
>but with Lai Song's hat perched atop her head
Someone stop her, that hat is too tall! She is too powerful now!
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>>5180055
>"We shall be the spear that ends the butcher's wretched life. His kingdom is burning, his walls have crumbled, his forces dwindle with every engagement. He has exacted a terrible tally of causalities upon the noble imperial army and sowed fear in the hearts and minds of our people. This war has claimed more lives than any other in Shangralas history, even if they were to be combined into a singular war. We shall have our revenge, our justice. The tyrant shall hang, and we lead the march to place to noose around his neck"
>"The emperor has given the order, allow none to escape. End the war efficiently and brutally if you must. Rather than performing a nation wide death by a thousand cuts, we shall crush this blood soaked kingdom of villains and barbarous devils beneath our heels! Decisively and rapidly destroying this empire of darkness! We will leave naught by ash and smoking glass in our wake! Let the heavens weep, for we shall shed no tears in this campaign against evil! Let the butcher BURN IN THE FIRE OF HIS SINS!"
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>>5180055
>We shall be the Spear which ends the butchers life. Option.

>Give them a passage of the journey about the bitterest medicine working the best, and the bloody toll we shall enact will be better indeed.

I also want to tell them to try and minimise blood spilt, with flames and shit, but it is no requirement.
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>>5180055
>"We shall be the spear that ends the butcher's wretched life. His kingdom is burning, his walls have crumbled, his forces dwindle with every engagement. He has exacted a terrible tally of causalities upon the noble imperial army and sowed fear in the hearts and minds of our people. This war has claimed more lives than any other in Shangralas history, even if they were to be combined into a singular war. We shall have our revenge, our justice. The tyrant shall hang, and we lead the march to place to noose around his neck"
>"Providence. Prosperity. Virtue. All of these are being threatened by that fool who names himself kings of kings. I have advised Emperor Long-Jia to perform an unparalleled thrust into Vishnu Territory, to take advantage of their weakness before they can recover from their losses. And he has allowed me to lead this campaign of slaughter, and commanded me not to cease my advance until I Stand in the heart of their capital. Join me in this race to the butcher's den!"
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>>5180055
>"We shall be the spear that ends the butcher's wretched life. His kingdom is burning, his walls have crumbled, his forces dwindle with every engagement. He has exacted a terrible tally of causalities upon the noble imperial army and sowed fear in the hearts and minds of our people. This war has claimed more lives than any other in Shangralas history, even if they were to be combined into a singular war. We shall have our revenge, our justice. The tyrant shall hang, and we lead the march to place to noose around his neck"
>"The emperor has given the order, allow none to escape. End the war efficiently and brutally if you must. Rather than performing a nation wide death by a thousand cuts, we shall crush this blood soaked kingdom of villains and barbarous devils beneath our heels! Decisively and rapidly destroying this empire of darkness! We will leave naught by ash and smoking glass in our wake! Let the heavens weep, for we shall shed no tears in this campaign against evil! Let the butcher BURN IN THE FIRE OF HIS SINS!"

We will need to prepare the assault on the citadel
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>>5180055
>"We shall be the spear that ends the butcher's wretched life. His kingdom is burning, his walls have crumbled, his forces dwindle with every engagement. He has exacted a terrible tally of causalities upon the noble imperial army and sowed fear in the hearts and minds of our people. This war has claimed more lives than any other in Shangralas history, even if they were to be combined into a singular war. We shall have our revenge, our justice. The tyrant shall hang, and we lead the march to place to noose around his neck"
>"The emperor has given the order, allow none to escape. End the war efficiently and brutally if you must. Rather than performing a nation wide death by a thousand cuts, we shall crush this blood soaked kingdom of villains and barbarous devils beneath our heels! Decisively and rapidly destroying this empire of darkness! We will leave naught by ash and smoking glass in our wake! Let the heavens weep, for we shall shed no tears in this campaign against evil! Let the butcher BURN IN THE FIRE OF HIS SINS!"
>Give them a passage of the journey about the bitterest medicine working the best, and the bloody toll we shall enact will be better indeed.
With the passage of the journey it'll help them to know they are able to shift between pure efficiency and joking.

I liked the hands and wrists being used for the sects. I was honestly a bit worried we were gonna end up as the rainbow warriors with our sons considering all sects important
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>>5180055
>"Providence. Prosperity. Virtue. All of these are being threatened by that fool who names himself kings of kings. I have advised Emperor Long-Jia to perform an unparalleled thrust into Vishnu Territory, to take advantage of their weakness before they can recover from their losses. And he has allowed me to lead this campaign of slaughter, and commanded me not to cease my advance until I Stand in the heart of their capital. Join me in this race to the butcher's den!"
All the others have too much blood, skull, hate, main, kill and burn to be used against a khornate kingdom.
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>>5180055
>>"The emperor has given the order, allow none to escape. End the war efficiently and brutally if you must. Rather than performing a nation wide death by a thousand cuts, we shall crush this blood soaked kingdom of villains and barbarous devils beneath our heels! Decisively and rapidly destroying this empire of darkness! We will leave naught by ash and smoking glass in our wake! Let the heavens weep, for we shall shed no tears in this campaign against evil! Let the butcher BURN IN THE FIRE OF HIS SINS!"
>"Providence. Prosperity. Virtue. All of these are being threatened by that fool who names himself kings of kings. I have advised Emperor Long-Jia to perform an unparalleled thrust into Vishnu Territory, to take advantage of their weakness before they can recover from their losses. And he has allowed me to lead this campaign of slaughter, and commanded me not to cease my advance until I Stand in the heart of their capital. Join me in this race to the butcher's den!"
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>>5180055
>"Providence. Prosperity. Virtue. All of these are being threatened by that fool who names himself kings of kings. I have advised Emperor Long-Jia to perform an unparalleled thrust into Vishnu Territory, to take advantage of their weakness before they can recover from their losses. And he has allowed me to lead this campaign of slaughter, and commanded me not to cease my advance until I Stand in the heart of their capital. Join me in this race to the butcher's den!"
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>>5180165
>>5180055
>Give them a passage of the journey about the bitterest medicine working the best, and the bloody toll we shall enact will be better indeed.
add this as well, seems appropriate
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>>5180055
>Support >>5180086
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>>5180055
>>"Providence. Prosperity. Virtue. All of these are being threatened by that fool who names himself kings of kings. I have advised Emperor Long-Jia to perform an unparalleled thrust into Vishnu Territory, to take advantage of their weakness before they can recover from their losses. And he has allowed me to lead this campaign of slaughter, and commanded me not to cease my advance until I Stand in the heart of their capital. Join me in this race to the butcher's den!"

>Give them a passage of the journey about the bitterest medicine working the best, and the bloody toll we shall enact will be better indeed.
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>>5180055
>"Providence. Prosperity. Virtue. All of these are being threatened by that fool who names himself kings of kings. I have advised Emperor Long-Jia to perform an unparalleled thrust into Vishnu Territory, to take advantage of their weakness before they can recover from their losses. And he has allowed me to lead this campaign of slaughter, and commanded me not to cease my advance until I Stand in the heart of their capital. Join me in this race to the butcher's den!"
>Give them a passage of the journey about the bitterest medicine working the best, and the bloody toll we shall enact will be better indeed.
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>>5180055

>"The emperor has given the order, allow none to escape. End the war efficiently and brutally if you must. Rather than performing a nation wide death by a thousand cuts, we shall crush this blood soaked kingdom of villains and barbarous devils beneath our heels! Decisively and rapidly destroying this empire of darkness! We will leave naught by ash and smoking glass in our wake! Let the heavens weep, for we shall shed no tears in this campaign against evil! Let the butcher BURN IN THE FIRE OF HIS SINS!"


>"Providence. Prosperity. Virtue. All of these are being threatened by that fool who names himself kings of kings. I have advised Emperor Long-Jia to perform an unparalleled thrust into Vishnu Territory, to take advantage of their weakness before they can recover from their losses. And he has allowed me to lead this campaign of slaughter, and commanded me not to cease my advance until I Stand in the heart of their capital. Join me in this race to the butcher's den!"
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>>5180055
>>"The emperor has given the order, allow none to escape. End the war efficiently and brutally if you must. Rather than performing a nation wide death by a thousand cuts, we shall crush this blood soaked kingdom of villains and barbarous devils beneath our heels! Decisively and rapidly destroying this empire of darkness! We will leave naught by ash and smoking glass in our wake! Let the heavens weep, for we shall shed no tears in this campaign against evil! Let the butcher BURN IN THE FIRE OF HIS SINS!"
i dot think ive voted yet
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the wait, had to housesit with no internet connection

"We shall be the spear that ends the butcher's wretched life"...:6

"The emperor has given the order, allow none to escape"...:6

Give them a passage of the journey about the bitterest medicine working the best, and the bloody toll we shall enact will be better indeed.: 5

"Providence. Prosperity. Virtue. All of these are being threatened by that fool who names himself kings of kings"...:8

Total votes: 13

So everything but the write in makes it into the update/ Lieren's speech

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>>5181680
Talk about a long-winded speech
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>>5181687
But short and almost curt by Long-Jian standards
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>>5181688
I can just imagine the terran soldiery spacing out halfway through.
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Positioning yourself to face your gathered army of sworn brothers, sons and soldiers of two armies separated by the vast gulf of the cosmos, you press your hands together as if in prayer and shake them thrice, bowing your head once before lifting it to gaze defiantly towards the rising sun, through the ever present shroud of white fogs and mist.

"Providence. Prosperity. Virtue. All of these are being threatened by that fool who names himself the king of kings!" You snarl, words dripping with venom as you begin your speech with a hatefully proclamation of your reviled enemy's murderous, destructive and regressive ambitions. Barring your teeth like fangs, you make a show of the rage you feel towards Nitya Sinha, Avalokiteśvara and the barbaric horde of motherless and fatherless wretches born and created solely to wage war and end the lives of noble, virtuous men.

Lashing your arm outwards, dramatically, you turn over you palm and hold it level with the rising son as you take in a deep breath of the jungle's fetid air, tasting the fumes produced by the warmachines of your father's armies. The burning miasma tasting bitter and astringent upon your tongue.

"I have advised Emperor Long-Jia Jinhai to perform an unparalleled thrust into Vishnu territory!" You roar, eyes a blaze with fervor and wrath as you slowly clench and tighten your hand into a fist that could compress steel, snarl turning into a predatory sneer as the winds whip your iron colored mane and make it dance like grey flames over your shoulders and behind your back "To take advantage of their weakness before they can recover from their losses"

Raising your fist into the sky, you look upon it imagining that within your palm you are pressing and forcing the dust in the air into the blazing core of newborn star. A symbolic vision that speaks of the depths of your resolve and the contempt you hold for the thralls of the high minister of murder!

Throwing your fist down, casting it open as and flattening it as you press its opposite vertically to your chest, precisely between your twin hearts you breath in, and temper your rage. Bowing you head humbly, you continue your speech calmly, though no less passionately.

"And he has allowed me to lead this campaign of slaughter, and commanded me to not cease my advance until I stand in the heart of their capital" You say, voice becoming melodic and taking on a serenely peaceful timbre much like the low resonance of a struck bell "Join me"

Raising your voice into a thunderous shout, you clap your hands together and bow once again

"Join me in this race to the butcher's den! The Emperor has given the order, allow none to escape! We shall be the spear that end's the butcher's life!" Your proclaim feverish and stalwartly, voice burning with conviction and restocked fury
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>>5181701

"He has said unto me "End the war efficiently and brutally if you must, The butcher's kingdom is burning! His walls have crumbled! His forces dwindle with every engagement!" And I know this to be true! My radiant golden eyes have revealed to me this weakness, but it is my heart that tells me why we must truly strike so swiftly and decisively!" You continue on, tears welling in your eyes as your rage turns to bitter sorrow and grief "For he has exacted a terrible tally of causalities upon the noble imperial army and sowed fear in the hearts and minds of our people"

Sweeping your gaze over the gathered regiments, you measure their response in a splinter of a moment, before shaking your head and sweeping your currently untied hair through the air.

"This war" You spitefully spit "has claimed more lives than any other in Shangralas' history, even if all prior conflicts were to be combined into a singular war. We shall have our revenge, our justice"

Marching to the edge of the tank that has been made to service as your stage, you cross your arms and raise your chin and look once more to the horizon, the light of the sun that can pierce through the fog reflecting upon the pools of gold within your eyes.

"But rather than performing a nation wide death by a thousand cuts, we shall crush this blood soaked kingdom of villains and barbarous devils beneath our heels!" You snarl, nearly hissing through your teeth "Decisively and rapidly destroying this empire of darkness! We will leave naught but ash and smoking glass in our wake!"

Lashing your arm out once more, you aim it like a spear towards the rising sun and grin, as you allow your hatred and anger to wash from you like filth in rain.

"Let the heavens weep, for we shall shed no tears in this campaign against evil! The tyrant shall hang" You promise as you step back and turn away, stowing your arms in the sleeves of your robes "And we will lead the march to place the root around his neck, and lead him to BURN IN THE FIRE OF HIS SINS!"

You hope from the tank, while kanzeon take your place, pull down the hat she won by its brim to hide her eyes.

"So it has been said, so it shall be done. We'll march through the jungles of the Vishnu war state as Lieren cut and burned paths through the Bone devouring forest" She states coldly "And we'll begin this operation forthwith, without delay or pause. Our route has been mapped and planned for peak efficiency, to ensure we'll arrive at the Vishnu capital with most of our number and as quickly as possible without sacrificing our manpower or fighting effectiveness"
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>>5181704

How will you advance through the Vishnu Heartlands, Lieren?

>By unleashing the firestorm and performing delayed advances between endless artillery and orbital bombardments, allowing your forces to easily crush any survivors left in the way of Tao Dandan and Kanzeon's joined Orchestra of death.

>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow

>You are a hunter by nature. Spread your forces thin and divide them into groups and parties so you can sneak your army in the Vishnu Capital's region while the Butcher is distracted fending of Jinhai's tireless advance.

>The Butcher and his queen have never shied away from using dangerous, forbidden technologies and dishonorable tactics, and while you refuse to stoop to their level. You have an advantage they do not. Psykerism. Draw upon as much of your power as your body can endure, and create a clear path to the vishnu temple city. Exhausting yourself in the process

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>>5181705
>>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow

Once we get into human combat range, we can unleash our sons and our gather psykers.
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>>5181705
>Gather war machines
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>>5181705
>>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow
the faster the better
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>>5181705
>>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow
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>>5181705

>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow
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>>5181705
>>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow
>>Write-In
>Have Kanzeon create a man-sized automata and dress it in Jinhai's armor. The real Jinhai will be aiding in the coordination of the battle from onboard her true body, ready to teleport down to the battle by the dimensional tunneler if the simulacrum is struck down. The boost to moral from such a spectacle will be staggering.
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>>5181705
>>You are a hunter by nature. Spread your forces thin and divide them into groups and parties so you can sneak your army in the Vishnu Capital's region while the Butcher is distracted fending of Jinhai's tireless advance.
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>>5181705
>>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow
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>>5181705
>>By unleashing the firestorm and performing delayed advances between endless artillery and orbital bombardments, allowing your forces to easily crush any survivors left in the way of Tao Dandan and Kanzeon's joined Orchestra of death.
>>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow
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>>5181705
>You are a hunter by nature. Spread your forces thin and divide them into groups and parties so you can sneak your army in the Vishnu Capital's region while the Butcher is distracted fending of Jinhai's tireless advance.
Metal Gear
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>>5181705
>>You are a hunter by nature. Spread your forces thin and divide them into groups and parties so you can sneak your army in the Vishnu Capital's region while the Butcher is distracted fending of Jinhai's tireless advance.
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>>5181705
>Gather your war machines
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>>5181705
>You are a hunter by nature. Spread your forces thin and divide them into groups and parties so you can sneak your army in the Vishnu Capital's region while the Butcher is distracted fending of Jinhai's tireless advance.
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>>5181705
>>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow
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>>5181705
>>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow
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>>5181705
>>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow
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>>5181705
>By unleashing the firestorm and performing delayed advances between endless artillery and orbital bombardments, allowing your forces to easily crush any survivors left in the way of Tao Dandan and Kanzeon's joined Orchestra of death.
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>>5181705
>>Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the wait.

Gather your war machines in formation and create a league's long spear head that with bulldoze through any resistance while leaving your living soldiers relatively unscathed in the conflicts to follow:13

Have Kanzeon create a man-sized automata and dress it in Jinhai's armor. The real Jinhai will be aiding in the coordination of the battle from onboard her true body, ready to teleport down to the battle by the dimensional tunneler if the simulacrum is struck down. The boost to moral from such a spectacle will be staggering.: 1

You are a hunter by nature. Spread your forces thin and divide them into groups and parties so you can sneak your army in the Vishnu Capital's region while the Butcher is distracted fending of Jinhai's tireless advance.: 4

By unleashing the firestorm and performing delayed advances between endless artillery and orbital bombardments, allowing your forces to easily crush any survivors left in the way of Tao Dandan and Kanzeon's joined Orchestra of death.:2

total votes:18

So Lieren will form his armies' warmachines into a spear head formtation to plow over and crush any resistance so his flesh and blood soldiers can remain relatively flesh and uninjured.

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>>5183403
never apologize big sexy ;3
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>>5183403

am excited for the conclusion the marines will make about the primarchs preferred method of operations, some using this armored spearhead as an example.

All the brothers of the panther sly grinning, knowing that lieren is a hunter and just waiting on the ball to drop.
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>>5183403
no problems
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The strategy you choose to employ, is that which you consider the most efficient to end the war both swiftly and with minimal casualties, a massed armor advance to clear the way for your forces and the rest of the imperial army, a wall of steel and fire that will allow your army to enter the fray rested and uninjured. As your distant father upon Terra advised and warned you, the thralls of Kong Nue want bloodshed, yearn for slaughter and have concocted a vile, villainous scheme that requires massed murder and butchery to commence. So you shall deny the Vishnu the bloodshed they so crave, by forging a spear to drive directly into the the heart of their nation as you said and promised you would to not only the men and women of your regiments but also Jinhai himself. With the weight of an oath sworn to two emperor's set upon your back, you form a great iron spear made of the entirety of your battalions of Iron turtles, Skipping clouds, artillery cores, Steel Giants and Birds, as well as the automata and drones produced by Kanzeon in her image or that of dragon flies. The Terran war machines are kept from the front lines, made to serve a supporting role and to act as a reserve to enter the fray, catching the Vishnu army by surprise by their sudden appearance as unknown factors. While they possess less protection and fire power than their Long-Jian counterparts, their "Alien" appearance will surely sow caution and hesitation among the ranks of the remaining generals of the butcher's army.

As, from their perspective, the noisy, smog spewing behemoths will appear all to similar to their devil cages and the infernal forges of the Zoroast. And the more shrewd minded and cunning among them may suspect that the Crude and lumbering appearance of the machines is an illusion, a deception that hides danger equal or greater than the standard armored Division of the Imperial Army.

The spear head stretches for leagues, with the thirteen steel giants spread across it to act as the keystones of the advance, creating splinter "barbs" of the spear which they lead as vanguards or otherwise serve as a one man bulwark for the other elements of the splinter force to retreat towards should the Vishnu rally and use the weight of their numbers and terrifying archeotech weaponry to push back that area of your steel advance.

An unlikely possibility, but overlooking the chance of such stubborn resistance would be folly. No matter how low of a percentage the chance may be, it can still occur. So while committing to this lightning war, you shall remain cautious and observant of all thirteen fronts of your spear shaped charge, for if a gap is made in the wedge you are driving through what little defensive lines and structures the Vishnu cared to erect, then this rapid assault will turn into a terrible, lingering conflict once again.
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>>5183451

A cornered Beast is more dangerous, it is said, so you will allow no room for chance to have an effect and work to curtail the threat of human error and overconfidence.

Any other army would retreat when faced by an ever advancing wall of death that spans the entirety of the horizon for as far as the unassisted eye can see. But the Vishnu of Kong Nue are no normal warriors, they are madmen, blooddrunk berserkers and savages who have known nothing but battle and war. A dark reflection of the once noble people, a comparison that sickens you even though you realize it every time you look upon one of those depraved, murderous degenerates of a once honorable and proud warrior culture.

Your advance is not slowed by resistance in the form of prolonged sieges or bitter stands in trenches and cliffside burrows, but rather due to the gruesome terrain your divisions much advance over, grinding countless corpses beneath their treads and mulching the remains of the Vishnu resistance into the ground, mixing splinters of bone and chunks of still bleeding meat into the mud of the jungle as you are forced to climb over and cut through mountains of corpses after each engagement on the road to the the Butcher King.

While the Vishnu have lost much of their means to replenishing their manpower and arm it, their temple city is still an ever churning, ever birthing mechanical womb and factory of soldiers. It is clear Nitya Sinha is reserving the forces he is able to arm and armor completely, or simply wishes to insult you by showing how little he is concerned of your efforts to cripple his industry of war.

Because he is sending hordes of near nude screamers armed at times with clubs of hardened woods and stone spears, and at times without any weapon besides their fists and any protection besides their unnatural blood hued skin. And you know he has not expended his armories, as hidden among these hordes are regiments of fully armored and equipped warriors, Some leading the gene twisted, ape like brutes, others sending forth of cybernetic attack dogs that were created from human cadavers a few of which are clearly of Long-Jia, Shuni or Bask ethnicities, and yet others controlling massed suicide bombers, equipped with remotely activated water stones, Space rifts, gravitational anomalies, reservoir of deconstructing microscopic machines and mundane explosives too weak to damage your war-machines but potent enough to shower them in a rain of blood and gore.

Its like the butcher king sees this all as a game, and doesn't even care to truly defend himself or his people. The people he despises for making him a slave. Every death of this war has been to the delight of that madman, and you can only hope that some uncorrupted Vishnu have survived his bloody program against them. For they have been replaced by the cloned hordes and mutated and cybernetically enhanced lunatics that follow Nitya Sinha and Avalokiteśvara like loyal lap dogs.
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>>5183452

The sheer brutality and bloodiness of this advance has a noticeable effect on the morale of your Long-Jian forces, the veterans of many battles and elites who stared down the horrors of the Shuni magocracy and the Aeldari raiders, and even the horrors of this war. Being surrounded by so much dead, assaulted by massed suicide charges and endangered without rest is beginning to take its toll, mentally.

The terran forces, especially you astartes sons, are wholly unaffected being forced to march through rows of mangled and twisted bodies. Which inspires your country men to keep marching with resolve, to not lose their conviction in despair or exhaustion. Passages of the Journey are spoken, and folksongs are sung to keep their wills and spirits from faltering as they march through fields of smoldering ashes, mangled corpses and scorch marks that stand as the sole indicator that a dozen men once existed, besides pools of boiling grease and melted flesh. Plasma, Lasers, Darklight, and fire carve your path through the jungles, alongside bolter fire and explosive shells. You shed as little blood as is possible, but even so, there is enough of it spilt to fill rivers.

Amusedly enough, it seems that some of your sons and their terran comrades have constructed a Lieren in their mind who is very different from who you actually are, at least in terms of tactical preferences and battlefield operation, based solely upon the tactic of the armored spearhead you have employed. But this misunderstanding is useful, as your sons adapt their experience in acting as stalwart defenders, to join the front column of the spear head as additional fire support, treating the wall of steel and fire as an actual wall to hold and defend.

What do you do, as your advance nears the Vishnu Capital, Lieren?

>Try to raise morale with Kanzeon, by broadcasting her reading passages of the journey as her true body now casts its shadow over your army

>Contact the main imperial force, and with the Five Kings of War, strategize a multiple pronged and angled assault on the temple city and warn Jinhai that this last battle will surely be the bloodiest seen upon Shangrala

>Speak with your sons and Dae-Hyun, and for your own amusement, peer into their minds to see how they and their mundane comrades perceive you compared to the men and women of Long-Jia

>Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe

>write in

>>5183430
>>5183441
thanks, but I feel the need to apologize anyways
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>>5183455
>>Contact the main imperial force, and with the Five Kings of War, strategize a multiple pronged and angled assault on the temple city and warn Jinhai that this last battle will surely be the bloodiest seen upon Shangrala

>>Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe
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>>5183455
>Speak with our sons
>Raise morale
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>>5183455

>Speak with your sons and Dae-Hyun, and for your own amusement, peer into their minds to see how they and their mundane comrades perceive you compared to the men and women of Long-Jia
>write in
"once I join battle with alpha target try and form around us and wait for my signal"

time to pull another pro-gamer move
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>>5183455
>Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe
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>>5183455
>Try to raise morale with Kanzeon, by broadcasting her reading passages of the journey as her true body now casts its shadow over your army
>Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe
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>>5183455
>>Try to raise morale with Kanzeon, by broadcasting her reading passages of the journey as her true body now casts its shadow over your army

>Contact the main imperial force, and with the Five Kings of War, strategize a multiple pronged and angled assault on the temple city and warn Jinhai that this last battle will surely be the bloodiest seen upon Shangrala
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>>5183455
>Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe
>Try to raise morale with Kanzeon, by broadcasting her reading passages of the journey as her true body now casts its shadow over your army
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>>5183455
I'm enjoying your quest a whole lot malal. I'mma,l only lurk now so bigger brained anons can prevail.
By the way, how tall is Kanzeons hat?
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>>5183599
dommy mommy size for us mortals
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>>5183599
A bit shorter than Guozhi one.
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>>5183599
A little shorter than Liren.
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>>5183625
That's not a fair comparison, there are buildings shorter than Guohzi's hat!
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>>5183455
>Contact the main imperial force, and with the Five Kings of War, strategize a multiple pronged and angled assault on the temple city and warn Jinhai that this last battle will surely be the bloodiest seen upon Shangrala


>Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe
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>>5183455
>>Contact the main imperial force, and with the Five Kings of War, strategize a multiple pronged and angled assault on the temple city and warn Jinhai that this last battle will surely be the bloodiest seen upon Shangrala
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>>5183455
>Contact the main imperial force, and with the Five Kings of War, strategize a multiple pronged and angled assault on the temple city and warn Jinhai that this last battle will surely be the bloodiest seen upon Shangrala

>Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe

>Try to raise morale with Kanzeon, by broadcasting her reading passages of the journey as her true body now casts its shadow over your army
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>>5183697
>That's not a fair comparison, there are buildings shorter than Guohzi's hat!

True none can compete with the his hat that reaches the very sky !

>>5183455
>>Try to raise morale with Kanzeon, by broadcasting her reading passages of the journey as her true body now casts its shadow over your army

>Contact the main imperial force, and with the Five Kings of War, strategize a multiple pronged and angled assault on the temple city and warn Jinhai that this last battle will surely be the bloodiest seen upon Shangrala

"The tyrant summons hordes upon hordes of wardogs, he seeks to drown the world in blood. Let us not give him this possibility, this violence and evil will be put to an end my brothers and sisters."
"Because every day we come closer to that citadel, is another day in which he knows we are soon to arrive at his doorstep, for bringing him to justice. The more we advance, the more we secure the lives of every people of this world. From the Shuni, to the Bask, to the Long Jia and lastly to the Vishnu."
"And your families, your childrens, your friends, they wait for your return and hope for our victory. I vow to give you back to them alive in their waiting arms, and for us to see a total victory. I vow to see them smile, to see all of you smile in a world reforged a new from the ashes of the realms left by this terrible rulers !"
"For the ones we hold dear, for the Vishnu people enslaved by Nitya and for the new world i want us to create we will put an end to this madness !"
"We give back Shangrila, in the hands of those that deserve it ! So come with me, ready your minds and hearts, we will hang the warlord !"
"Death to the tyrants ! Glory to our liberty ! Glory to Shangrila !"
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Monkeystafffag Anon, some food for thought. In setting Wizard Grandpa Monk's hat is the equivalent of the expanding monkey staff thing. There's some food for thought for you.
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>>5183455

>Try to raise morale with Kanzeon, by broadcasting her reading passages of the journey as her true body now casts its shadow over your army

Changing vote


>Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe
>Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe

>Contact the main imperial force, and with the Five Kings of War, strategize a multiple pronged and angled assault on the temple city and warn Jinhai that this last battle will surely be the bloodiest seen upon Shangrala
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>>5183599
>By the way, how tall is Kanzeons hat?
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>>5183820
talllllllllllllll
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>>5183455
>Try to raise morale with Kanzeon, by broadcasting her reading passages of the journey as her true body now casts its shadow over your army
>Contact the main imperial force, and with the Five Kings of War, strategize a multiple pronged and angled assault on the temple city and warn Jinhai that this last battle will surely be the bloodiest seen upon Shangrala
Nitya is likely banking on the fact we will push our heavy weaponry to the rear due to the risk of a very big explosion.
So he must be using everything he has to build super heavy vehicles like knights to break our lines and then rush his normal screamers into the mass of soldiers in order to get his bloodbath.
However if Nitya blows himself up Khorne will be displeased so I expect him to deactivate much of the more unstable technology as the battle begins because his army of screaming berserkers will have no ability to be precise or careful and will detonate the city quickly into the battle unless he turns that stuff off himself.
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>Speak with your sons and Dae-Hyun, and for your own amusement, peer into their minds to see how they and their mundane comrades perceive you compared to the men and women of Long-Jia

>Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe

I am curious.I also don't want to be interrupted.
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Calling the vote now.

Contact the main imperial force, and with the Five Kings of War, strategize a multiple pronged and angled assault on the temple city and warn Jinhai that this last battle will surely be the bloodiest seen upon Shangrala:7

Move Tao Dandan and your more destructive weapons to the back of your army, to form of a defensive line. One errant explosion inside of the city or near it could spell doom for all, so you must defang your forces of its heavier weaponry to prevent such a catastrophe:8

Try to raise morale with Kanzeon, by broadcasting her reading passages of the journey as her true body now casts its shadow over your army: 5

Speak with your sons and Dae-Hyun, and for your own amusement, peer into their minds to see how they and their mundane comrades perceive you compared to the men and women of Long-Jia:3
-"once I join battle with alpha target try and form around us and wait for my signal":1

"The tyrant summons hordes upon hordes of wardogs,...": 1


Total votes: 13

So Lieren will move Tao Dandan's artillery and the more destructive weapons to the back of the army to form a destructive line before contacting the main imperial force and with the greatest military minds of Shangrala strategize a multi pronged and angled assault on the temple city

Writing now
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But as your forces approach the infrastructure of the Vishnu's grand temple city, which has began to crawl and creep from the forest where Avalokiteśvara seethes in her ever burning contempt for humanity, even breaking over the wall of blades and salt left by the ancient Vishnu that was placed to try and keep the still crippled vessel and the murderous "Goddess" inhabiting imprisoned within the confines of the once untamed jungle. A jungle that has now been replaced with flagrant displays of the treacherous and cruel technologies that should have been lost when the long night first fell, standing insulting alongside the treasures and achievements of the golden age humanity. Miracle machines that could ease all mortal suffering turned to crude devices of torture and means of meaningless oppression born of the resentment and grudges of two blood maddened lunatics. The temple city glows malignantly beneath what remains of the jungle that once surrounded it and you can sense in the air that the very fabric of reality has become worn and thin from Nitya Sinha's abuse of the arcane machinery that allows his impossible city to exist and thrive. Looking upon the horizon, you can see where space itself has been torn and restitched, where time has been caged and leashed, where suns are born in chains. And, it would seem, that the butcher king has chosen a new, more grisly decoration than the severed limbs and mangled corpses of his citizens and abominable creations.

A wall of living flesh, merged with star metal pylons and cables. The bodies of thousands, fused together like melted glass or plastic. The agonized moans of this horrendous, unforgiveable atrocity and afront to mankind, carry on the wind like the mournful cries of night cranes. The night the vast, unnatural city that defies all laws of physics and common sense comes into view, the camp is filled with prayers. It will still be sometime before you can assault the city and put its living fortifications out of their misery. Though you can scarcely call it as such, as it is clear Nitya Sinha has erected the monument to his cruelty only as another scathing mockery. For a road of polished white skulls leads right through its open gate, where dozens of limp arms hang entertained by their fingers, with cybernetic eyes implanted through their palms and knuckles.

"I'd like nothing more than to blow that disgusting sight off of our planet" Kanzeon snarls as Feng gazes upon the wall beside you, upon the massive shoulders of Dae-hyun's weaponized coffin. Nikephoros and Aruna are also present to gaze upon the vile construction, the former forlornly and the latter with tears of rage flowing from his eyes.

"But I know to do so now would only cause a cascade of destruction that we simply do not possess the capability to stop" She sighs, grinding her teeth as her beautiful, delicate brow furrows with impatient wrath
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"The horrors of terra can not equal this abomination" Nikephoros speaks "merely the sight alone sickens me"

"The work of a tyrant without equal" Dae-Hyun rumbles "Perhaps we can give peace to those unfortunate souls by allowing them to witness the last, struggled breaths of the monster who so twisted them"

"I feel uncomfortable leaving that...thing alive for a second longer than we have to. It is suffering incarnate" Feng whispers "I am glad the dead of this war have not lived to see such an abhorrent thing upon fair Shangrala"

"The burden of the living" You muse "I am grateful Bai's noble eyes were not sullied as ours have been to gaze upon this abomination"

"I'm going to crush the bastard's skull" Aruna snarls, enraged by the sight of his ancestor's countrymen being used as mortar and stone

"If there is anything left of the fucker when we're done with him" Dae-Hyun replied, turning away to follow his fellow astarte and Aruna. The other Vishnu chiefs were too disgusted by the sight to look at it for longer than a moment

"I will leave this detail out of the story I share with my fair wife" Feng mutters, shaking his head as he to turns away from the disgusting wall of living flesh and tortured souls bound together by abominable technology. Leaving your and Kanzeon alone

"It's just out of range of Dandan's artillery" Kanzeon muses "In a way I am jealous of her, since she doesn't have to sleep so close to something so disgusting and foul"

"Though no doubt she would have disobeyed orders and began the battle early to destroy it" You say, crossing your arms and closing her eyes "A battle she cannot be allowed to join, though the heavy weaponry she commands and the armored divisions we have positioned around her would have been most helpful if not"

"If my bitch of a sister didn't rig her husband with a dead man's switch to take the whole of the planet down with them if we didn't play their childish game" Kanzeon hisses through her teeth

"Precisely, my resplendent song bird" You coo, turning your eyes to the sky so your eyes do not have to look upon the suffering and agony of the wall built from tortured and abused men and women "How I wish I could crack the earth with high yield explosives and sustained volleys of plasma fire and darklight exposure, but alas, our misbegotten kin have shielded themselves with all the innocents of shangrala"

"And for that, I'm going to have to struggle not to enjoy what's to come" Kanzeon said venomously, glaring beyond the wall of flesh towards the temple city where beneath her traitorous sister laid "At least Mari doesn't have to see this, though I'm sorry that you had to, my beloved scholar"

"We must be thankful for the small blessings, and these eyes of mine have witnessed far more terrible sights than this" You reply with a sorrowful sigh, before turning away and wrapping your hand around Kanzeon's "now, let us turn away from this man made horror and instead turn to plan it and its builders destruction"
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>>5184574

"That should at least improve my mood slightly" She replied

You closed your eyes, the air was buzzing with the pain of the wall of the tortured and every psyker, man, astarte or Aeldari could feel it. And the confusion and pain they felt by feeling the existence of that damnable wall, increased the ambient sensation of impending death, dread and torture that saturated the air. Like a fog of pain, it filled the lands. The last battle of this costly, pointless war could not come swiftly enough.
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"We will attack it from five directions at once" Yin Lei spoke confidently, slamming his fist down on the table "Surround the city, and prevent the savages from surging out from it"

"A bold strategy, but one that fell both the Yan and Shuni rule" Yan Zihao said agreeably, nodding his head as he reset the figurines the black general had knocked over "We shall turn their city into their grave, though I am to understand that it is far vaster than it appears from the pictures so graciously supplied to us from the outer reaches of heaven by Kanzeon"

"That is correct, the butcher king has mauled the material of reality to expand his city and render all logic obsolete within its walls, it is a place of madness and nonsensical geometries, like no battlefield you have yet experienced old fox" Lieren's voice said through the radio set on the middle of the table

"A shame we cannot simply bombard it" Dai Niu grumbled "but I shall take satisfaction in meeting the man who took more of my sons from me in the field, even if I will not have a chance to cross blades with him, merely marching against him and crushing his forces of monstrous half men should suffice to ease my grief"

"Do not let your emotions control you, old friend" Yin lei warned, wagging a finger as Jinhai turned to where Lai Song would have sat, remembering that the last king of war was accompanying Lieren But he could imagine what his council would be, a series of rapid, lightning deployments and assaults followed by strategic retreats and encircling maneuvers to exhaust the Vishnu Forces.

Even with the advancements of his weaponry and mounts, the lord of cavalry had never abandoned his favoured tactic of the encircling charge.

"Forgive me, forgive me" Dai Niu spoke as Jinhai contemplated the battle ahead "but, it is natural to hate, as it is natural to grieve"

Lieren had began this meeting of military geniuses by stating, with utmost confidence that the battle to come would be the bloodiest in Shangrala's history. And Jinhai knew to trust Lieren, even if men like Lord Kang and His heir distrusted the honesty of any words he spoke

"Our forces will arrive in two days time" Jinhai said sternly "prepare your men, Lieren, and ready for battle"
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>>5184575

What do you do while you wait for the main imperial army to arrive, Lieren

>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago

>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai

>Walk as close as you dare to the living wall and shout insults and challenges, knowing Nitya Sinha can hear you.

>Convene with your fellow psykers in secret and try to devise a new psykerist technique that will make fighting in the city of shattered reality less treacherous


>write in
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>>5184576
>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago

>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai
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>>5184576
>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago
>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai
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>>5184576
>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago

>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai
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>>5184576
>>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago
>>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai
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>>5184576
>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago
>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai
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>>5184576
>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago

>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai

And people somehow want to "reform" both of kanzeons fallen sisters, as if they were but innocent maidens who fell to the whispers of chaos instead of cruel wenches who have done more to taint and destroy the lands and people of Shangrala than any other before or since, and they did so willingly and with glee.
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>>5184576
>>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago
>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai
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>>5184576
>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago

>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai
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>>5184576

>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago

>Convene with your fellow psykers in secret and try to devise a new psykerist technique that will make fighting in the city of shattered reality less treacherous
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>>5184618
Yes. That would be the best result.
But for now, I will be contented with utterly eradicating her soul and using the corpse as a new ship.

>>5184588
Support.
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>>5184576
>>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai
>>5184618
From thread 12.
>"I will save you from yourself Avalokiteśvara, and purify your soul" You say gently, running a hand through Kanzeon's hair as her glare joins your own, her fierceness returning as she buries her sorrow to face her traitorous sister once more "In this life or the next"
Not just us, Lieren too.
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>>5184576
>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago

>Convene with your fellow psykers in secret and try to devise a new psykerist technique that will make fighting in the city of shattered reality less treacherous
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>>5184618
Nothing is impossible
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>>5184576
>Convene with your fellow psykers in secret and try to devise a new psykerist technique that will make fighting in the city of shattered reality less treacherous
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>>5184735
That was a vote, a moment of foolishness on lierens (and the threads) part that will reinforce the lesson we should have learned long ago, not everyone can be saved and it's not worth it to even try in some cases.

Within that very same thread somebody posted a cute wittle image of a fox giving I'm sowwy eyes and got a whole bunch of dumb simps to agree that we should try taking the other sister from Slaneesh and "reform" her, as if she isn't responsible for untold atrocities and did way worse shit than what we saw the previous emperor's children do during her time in shangri-la

She is based on wu Zetian, add Slaneesh to that list of atrocities and tell me we should save either of them
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>>5184618
>And people somehow want to "reform" both of kanzeons fallen sisters, as if they were but innocent maidens who fell to the whispers of chaos instead of cruel wenches who have done more to taint and destroy the lands and people of Shangrala than any other before or since, and they did so willingly and with glee.
No one but you have said shit about saving the fox. People want to save the other sister cause fuck khorne getting his hands on a soul that potent and strong. Cause if we kill her she goes directly to him right now and that's bad.
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>>5184576
>>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago
>>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai
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>>5184810
Here
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>>5184810
Archive doesn't show replies so here malals count of how many supporters it had
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>>5184810
>Cause if we kill her she goes directly to him right now and that's bad
If we just smash her physical form to pieces, yes.
However, given our resources, it might be possible to either completely erase her essence or imprison it.
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>>5184826
Or just remove the daemon possessing her. Or do the manual reset Kanzeon spoke of.
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>>5184836
+1
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>>5184836
This. she must not become a full blown demon otherwise our work will be exponentially harder
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>>5184795
Some people can be saved, others can't. it might be worth the try to excircise the demon that possesses her, if there is a demon at all. Typically it starts with demons slowly but gradually corrupting a person me thinks.

>>5184810
I wouldn't be against "saving" the fox sister if we can. I know for a fact there was an option to taunt her out of the immaterium back when we were exploring her ship....I just don't know.

>>5184817
>>5184819

>>5184819
>>5184819
Thank you phone poster searcher anon

>>5184836
Wait I'm rereading that. Did you say a manual reset is an actual thing? Holy fuck.
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So does anyone here think that we are going to replace Sanguineous as daddy's favorites? It sure would suck if we end up on the vengeful spirit or chaos creates a ruinstorm or Signus Prime to fuck us over.
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>>5184949
I hope not, I quite enjoy being the independent son that he looks on with pride but isn't as close as can be because we've too many responsibilities
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>>5184949
He definitely trusts Lieren more than he did any of the Primarchs in canon and they do have a lot in common so maybe
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>>5184961
>He definitely trusts Lieren more than he did any of the Primarchs in canon
I feel like that has a lot to do with the fact that he can't lie to Lieren about Chaos.
Hopefully he places complete honesty with his sons a little higher on his list of priorities now.
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>>5184979
He won't. He is still the emperor so he wont say anything to the others
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>>5184983
we did kinda push him into a corner when he meets Pert though, he going to have all kinds of questions.
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Speaking of trust.

L:"Dad. My girlfriend/shipewaifu is *dramatic pause* A amalgam soul!!!*

Emps:"... I'm an amalgam soul. What's your point?"

Maybe we should tell dad.
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>>5185014
This your first time ever finding warhammer?
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>>5184576
>>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago
>>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai
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>>5184576
>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago
>Convene with your fellow psykers in secret and try to devise a new psykerist technique that will make fighting in the city of shattered reality less treacherous
Not sure why people are not taking the psyker option but instead the spend time option, if the psyker option succeeds then we will be facing far less of a meat grinder that can kill anyone at any time.
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>>5185027
seems more characteristic of Lieren to be sentimental in this moment
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>>5185027
Trying new psyker techniques while being inside khornate lands and like five feet away from a giant chaos portal seems very foolish tome
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>>5185034
>like five feet away from a giant chaos portal seems very foolish tome
So? Lieren's very presence causes holes in reality.
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>>5185039
Lieren makes the veil weaker and since we are very close to a chaos portal it would probably become worse if we start messing with the psyker shit so close by
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>>5185039
on top of what the other anons have said, directly combating the khornate menace with psychic powers is next to useless as khorne grants his champions heightened resistance to psyker powers and magic
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>>5185060
to be fair we are about to step into an area where reality is held together by spit cum and spite
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>>5185041
>since we are very close to a chaos portal
We aren't close though. We're a decent distance away. Far enough we aren't tearing open reality through our presence.
>>5185062
So not stabilizing the area when Lieren is a walking hazard is better?
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>>5184576
>>5184576
>>Convene with your fellow psykers in secret and try to devise a new psykerist technique that will make fighting in the city of shattered reality less treacherous
>Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai

while the spies are a danger, i think psykerism miens could help further. They have proven useful.
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>>5184576
>Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago
>Convene with your fellow psykers in secret and try to devise a new psykerist technique that will make fighting in the city of shattered reality less treacherous
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>>5185041
Does this mean we empower Psykers and boost their spells?
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>>5186059
Well no, it's a curse so it only helps chaos
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>>5186109
>Well no, it's a curse so it only helps chaos
On the contrary, daemons go full retard every time they see it.
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>>5186111
Oh yeah, that's true, I've forgotten about those times Lieren fought the demons using the mark
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the wait, Wasn't feeling well

Spy on the spy, and stalk the shadow you had noticed weeks ago:15

Spend time with your sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon, knowing that you may lose any of them as you had lost Bai:13

Convene with your fellow psykers in secret and try to devise a new psykerist technique that will make fighting in the city of shattered reality less treacherous:6

Total votes:18

So Lieren will spy on the spies lurking in his camp, and spend the duration until the Main imperial force arrives with his sons, friends and most importantly Kanzeon knowing the price of war may take any of their number from him

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Switching off your radio, you secure it to your side and leave your personal tent, which is wholly and entire unfurnished and undecorated except for the bare necessities and required faculties. A pair of lackies rush to open the tent flap, hastily pulling the ropes so you would not have to exert yourself with the effort of merely brushing the entrance open with the back of your hand. A meaningless task, but a traditional one that can at least instruct young soldiers in the importance of swift reaction and sharpen their perception. Removing the urge and instinctive desire to relax one's caution when there are no apparent dangers, is an important step of progress for any warrior or career soldier. And you'd think it'd be vital to even the new, wantless and secure class of commoner that has sprung up to replace the one oppressed and ever threatened peasant class. As it all it takes is one canny fog panther or shrewd Brigand to disrupt or end their peaceful, prosperous lives.

You motion to the two servants, who must've fought quite valiantly in a prior engagement to earn the honor of being placed in your personal, ever expanding retinue of aids, wordlessly commanding them to relieve themselves from their duties to partake in a soothing cup of tea or join the rest of their company in their meal or drills. They rush off, saluting without a word, leaving you well and truly alone in the camp as you made certain to give the pack of scribes assigned to you a task that would keep them from interrupting your duties or bothering you as you worked. In fact, you saw one of them now, with your chief, stubbornly nameless architect, relaying your orders to add an axillary tier to the steel barricade you have erected around your camp and armed with an electrical field similar to that which the Aeldari raiders used to corral their captives and cage their beasts.

And besides them, you spot the spy you noticed when your march for the Vishnu Capital began. Despite his mastery of subterfuge and peerless acting skill, your eyes immediately realize he was out of place from the contents of his heart and mind. His spirit, while noble, was made of a different cloth than the rest of the terrans or Shangralans that populated your camp. Similar to Qian Xia and her growing flock of agents, shrouded in paranoia, swallowed by shadows, and overflowing with secrets. He was sent by your father's companion, the suspicious Malacador you met after your father and honored brother Magnus joined in your combat against the first of the fallen and saved you from the razor edge of his blade of shadows.

Honestly, nothing has lowered your spirits and resolve more in this war, that realizing that your father's most trusted man and servant still did not trust you, despite the heartfelt speech and gifts you had given to their army and world. Some men, you suppose were simply naturally suspicious and overly cautious.
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>>5186834


If you could speak to Malcador now, you'd warn him what such stalwart doubtfulness and loathsome suspicions would earn him, a lonely life or pointless death when he had driven those who would have otherwise been earnest and loyal friends against himself. Nothing turns a meek hound into a snarling wolf quicker than a harsh hand and cold disregard for its loyal service. Of course, as long as Malcador served your father and the prosperity of mankind, he'd find no enemy with you. As long as he kept his nose away from those your cherish.

Stalking up the architect, scribe and spy, you allowed yourself to smirk, subtly revealing the amusement you felt for the spies bumbling attempts to uncover the secrets of your high technology and the source of your seemingly limitless armaments and construction materials. You had spot him vainly trying to scrape away shavings of star metal and losing hair looking through your perfectly kept records without being discovered, never realizing you switched out the complete ledgers and scrolls detailing the supply train and spread of the new industry of shangrala with a fake that left out key details and mentioned texts and books that did not exist as containing the "Missing information"

While it was cruel, you couldn't help but to feel amused at the agent's suffering and growing frustrations as you countered his every investigation with the subtlest of moves. While he was a truly skilled spy, he couldn't match you in a game of wits and so every trail he lead ended up giving him conflicting and nonsensical information, turning what little knowledge he had useless as it became conflated and filled with folktales and exaggerations that may as well be lies. If Malcador had simply asked you for this knowledge, and proved Kanzeon and Mari would not be persecuted or threatened by the state of terra or its servants, you wouldn't have bedeviled his spy and tormented him through forcing him to unknowingly play a petty game with you. But the man chose subterfuge instead of trust, so you would ensure his agent returned with nothing but dust, hearsay and worthless records detailing the specifications of crop irrigation and the standard maintenance of grav train lines, and records that could not reveal even a hint of the source of your second technological leap forward, such as the crop yield and fertilizer and chemical enrichments that allowed it, or the means you rendered the giant's road so secure and safe that even a babe could toddle its way from one end of Long-Jia to the other without fear.

You smirked, unnoticed as you looked over the three men's head, and saw that the spy had stumbled into your latest trap. And was now trying to subtly learn of the location of several abandoned temples that you had not even visited, believing them to be a potential lead in the search of the source of your preternatural knowledge and understanding of the technology that had been once lost to the ages.
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>>5186835

Biting your tongue, you stop yourself from laughing uproariously at the scheming fool's expense, as you watch him decide that the prior lead, that would have actually placed him on the trail of Kanzeon, was merely a peasant folktale and that the Bone Devouring Forest was simply another, Machiavellian misdirection you had dreamt up to mislead any prying, foreign eyes. Perhaps with his utter failure, Malcador will think to ask you personally and without insulting you with mistrust

Your eyes flicked, and you spotted the second spy lurking within your camp. A subbreed of Aeldair, that possess the queer ability to merge and appear from shadows. This one had a murderous intent in your camp, stalking after Feng, Aruna and other martially gifted men, wishing to ambush and attack them. However, it feared you, and valued its own life more than the challenge it sought, and would scurry away to its lair between shadows when ever it realized you had spotted it. You pursued it casually, hoping it would flee once and for all or reveal itself and allow you to get a closer look at it to press it for information, either with charisma, psykerism or the cruel bite of the Lotus Scepter. But alas, the creature in the gloom vanished away as you raised a foot to step down on the shadow it cast.

Disgruntled, you sigh and gave up the chase as the strange shadowborn Aeldari fled the material into the protection offered by the darkness. Stomping away, you looked around the camp, but found nothing to improve as those within it were the elites of elites from both Shangrala and Terra and everything aspect of your army was running efficiently and smoothly. So with no other responsibilities to see to, you allowed yourself a time of reprieve. Though a brutal battle was on the horizon, casting its red glow upon your mind, you decide to spend the time remaining before Jinhai arrived to herald the bloodiest day in Shangrala's history with those who you may lose from it.

Your friends, From those who shared your home of Nothing to those who earned you respect and admiration throughout your travels beyond it.

Your sons, the noble and fearless Astartes from terra, who had come to give their lives in a war on a planet separated from their home by a near incomprehensible distant across space, who looked up to you and Idolized you and despite being children of war, sought to emulate you like eager youths always do.

And of course, Kanzeon, your beloved and soon to be wife whose potential death hangs above your head as a cloud far darker and more tumultuous. True, your heart would be gravely wounded if you lost any of your companions or had to experiences the same grief that Dai Niu has so cruelly been subjected to multiple times of outliving one's own offspring, but to lose Kanzeon would be to lose a part of yourself, a no mere patch of skin, but something irreplaceable, a wound that would never heal.
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>>5186836


And, as you regretted you were unable to do with Small Chen and Bai, you decided, if there was a risk to lose those you loved tomorrow you would relish in their presence and company while you still could. Those without love in their hearts, would condemn this as an act of foolish sentimentalism, a show of weakness and a sign of failing convictions and resolve. But, you could not help but to seek to form happy, pleasant memories knowing all too well that soon they may be tarnished with the sight of the deaths of these beloved friends and family. Already, images of their corpses played like the most macabre theater across your mind's eye.

But swallowing your fears of the future and already growing grief, you sought out your loved ones and offered them your company. And none refused it.

With Feng, Half jaw Hu, Shaved head wei, red faced wei, Liang, Jiang, the mourning Xin, Micah and Clayton you wrestled as you used to do while traveling in their company. Soon Aruna, Rudra, Manu, and Kamakshi join you in this child's game, laughing with you as you devoted their smiling faces to your memory, hoping that you would be able to see them again with life in their eyes rather than being forced to look upon their corpses after their noble soul's have fled them to pursue the great mystery after death. You joke bawdily, and rough house to your fill, drinking, singing and dancing and reminiscing with your old friends from nothing and your journey across Shangrala and grieving for those who had not survived to see this day and join in its festivities. Once more you offer Feng a chance to mend his injuries, and once more he refuses. You discuss philosophy with Shaved head wei and Liang, and indulge Kiang and Red Faced Wei in their attempts to cheer up Xin with mischief. Michah, Half Jaw Hu and Clayton decide to "Wrangle" and hunt some of the local wild life, and so you find yourself, along with Feng, who has become rather drunk, leading a mixed party of Vishnu and New Varro braves into the jungles to hunt for terrible beasts.

Returning with a large snake skin draped over your back, you are spotted by Nikephoros and so find yourself regaling your sons and their juniors with stories of your most exhilarating and difficult hunts. Somehow, you are not entirely sure how, this leads to you strong arming several of your transhuman children into Sampling dragons spit, and to the shock and awe of the crowd that gathered around them, they find the bitter, burning elixir to be rather palatable. This leads to a rather...ill advised and careless game between you and your Astartes, where men of Long-Jia, bask and Shuni bring the foulest concoctions and local cusine they can make to be sampled by your sons, who take to the challenge with gusto, overjoyed to have a chance to bond with their beloved and perhaps overly admired father.
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>>5186838

Nikephoros pales and turns away when offered a bowel of noodles and lotus root, thinking he was being offered a soup of maggots and worms, after eating a dish from the southern bask that, despite its nutritional value, even you had trouble consuming due to the texture and aroma of ammonia and sizzlingly acidic flavor. It was a bask dish, made organs fermented beneath the snow, soaked in a vinegar produced by one of the hardy, fruiting bushes that grew in their mountains. And that was when you learned of Nikephoros weakness, as he had been forced to subsist on the graveworms of his own father's grave as a child, he refused to eat anything tubular or tendril like as it awoke terrible memories within him. After apologizing to Him for unintentionally reawakening his trauma, you lead your rowdy sons into a tea ceremony, which baffled a few of them but helped to humanize them in the eyes of their fellow soldiers, who could not speak their language and were intimidated by their brash, foreign manners.

Another of your sons Eo Mal-Chin, an astartes of low rank, delighted as he and a few of his brothers displayed to you the fortitude of the Shuomi and their iron livers. Your sons Aaro and Yrjö drank engine coolant mistaking it for liquor and were unaffected by the toxic substance, that made even their fellow astartes weak kneed from merely smelling it.

After the trials of eight hells of cuisine and spirits, you sparred with your sons and even wrestled with a few of the bolder ones who could overlook their awe of you.

You met privately with Dae-Hyun, and listened as he told you of the sons you would never meet, and their glorious deaths in service to your father and mankind. Tears flowed freely as his synthetic voice crackled with deep sorrow and pain, as he spoke of how each of them died smiling, content in knowing their father was proud of them. They were valorous, virtues and you are humbled to have had sons of such strong and moral character, to, like your lost friends and sworn brothers, have without a though, gave their lives so others may live and thrive. And that they died alongside such courageous companions as the men and women of Seowl rangers, Creti grave wardens and the Shuomi Ursine guard!

And while the epithets he and his fellows left upon their graves were most irreverent, you found the good humor in each of them as Dae-Hyun solemnly repeated them, as if each was a part of a holy scripture. Such bonds of brotherhood and war! Ah, though losing comrades and friends is the most bitter taste in life, their memories are one of the sweetest.

This discussion lasts for hours, as you immortalize each of the sons who have been lost in the wars on terra within your memory, listening closely as Dae-Hyun describes their mannerisms and appearance

It is only when you notice Kanzeon's presence that you leave him to the company of the technicians your father sent, to repair the damages of the iron cage you hope to one day free him from
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>>5186839

You walk besides your beloved for sometime, in the quieter, more remote areas of the camp. Neither of you say anything, as their is nothing to be said. She shares your fears and your trepidation for the battle to come, and her fear of losing you is apparent in the tightness with which she holds your hand.

"Come back to me, Lieren, come back to me alive" She says, closing her eyes so you do not see her tears "Weather this storm, survive and return to my embrace. my heart could not endure losing you"

You hold her tightly and close your eyes, silently enjoying her presence and warmth, but unable to make an promise you are uncertain you can fulfill.

What will you do the night before the arrival of Jinhai's army and the battle, Lieren?

>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle

>Tell Kanzeon of the glorious last stands of your sons and their valor in battle, and ask her if she thinks your father will accept her as your bride as you walk beneath the gentle light of the moon

>Sit down and share a meal with Feng, Liang and Jiang, and reflect upon your life and swear an oath with three of your closest friends to bury the others should they fall in battle.

>Perhaps affected by the sheer quantity of strong spirits you have imbibed, tearfully reach out towards your brothers in the warp

>Write in
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>>5186840
>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
Time for anti-khorne verses.
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>>5186840
>Sit down and share a meal with Feng, Liang and Jiang, and reflect upon your life and swear an oath with three of your closest friends to bury the others should they fall in battle.
>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
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>>5186840
>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
>Perhaps affected by the sheer quantity of strong spirits you have imbibed, tearfully reach out towards your brothers in the warp
Drunk poet time
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>>5186840
>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle

>Tell Kanzeon of the glorious last stands of your sons and their valor in battle, and ask her if she thinks your father will accept her as your bride as you walk beneath the gentle light of the moon

>Sit down and share a meal with Feng, Liang and Jiang, and reflect upon your life and swear an oath with three of your closest friends to bury the others should they fall in battle.
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>>5186851
Nice for you to mention it, I have all three of the anti-khorne write-ins saved.
We got to remember that the the only thing we have against him the the part where we differentiate foe and enemy.
>Though a contradiction to some passages found within ones journey, there are times that one must take up arms against others. Never should one revel in the blood of their enemies, as taking anothers life has as much consequence as taking something from yourself.
>All violence must serve a purpose. Those who seek violence for violence sake are insane, for violence exist solely to serve a greater purpose than to drown the world in blood. Thus one must remember their reason for fighting lest they cause pointless bloodshed and suffering.
>Seeing the benefits to your father's new lifestyle has inspired you to add a new teaching to the journey: To maintain a healthy mind, one must also maintain a healthy body. To expand one's knowledge without exercising the vessel to hold them, is the same mistake as to try to fill a cracked cup.
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"Look not to be a braggart or anything but those are fake. Also you're being followed by a dark eldar mandrake. And he's being followed by a spirit of the Warp.


Get your shit together bro. You're supposed to be the best humanity has to offer.
Here have some upgrades. I have a job for for you....."

And that's how Malcador started losing control of the security apparatus of the imperium to a flowery poet.

I wonder if we can be learn to block Warp spying. We've got a spirit voyeur.
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>>5186840
>Pen what may be our last addition to the journey
>Tearfully reach out to our brothers, quite drunk.

That we are psychically drunk dialing our brothers is a mental image I didn't know I needed, but now cannot live without envisioning.

And Father will Accept her as our bride, as will Malchador. We shall ensure it.
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>>5186896
to be completely fair, it took Lieren 'I can see your soul and worldview is different' man of prosperity to spot Malc's spies. I don't think he would have been caught by any except Magnus or Alpahrius/Omegon.
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>>5186840
>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
>Perhaps affected by the sheer quantity of strong spirits you have imbibed, tearfully reach out towards your brothers in the warp
I wasn't sure I wanted to call our brothers with sappy shit while drunk, but admittedly it would be pretty funny.
Especially if we somehow managed to call a brother we haven't me yet.
>"I'm sorry who is this?"
>"Brother? What do you mean brother? Do I know you?"
>"You seem really drunk, you should probably go."
>"No I don't want a poem."
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>>5186938
Ruuuuuuuss.

Fucking drunk call RUSS! Do it!
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>>5186840
>>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
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>>5186840
>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
>Sit down and share a meal with Feng, Liang and Jiang, and reflect upon your life and swear an oath with three of your closest friends to bury the others should they fall in battle.
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>>5186840
>>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers, and wife should you fail to return from battle

>Sit down and share a meal with Feng, Liang, and Jiang, and reflect upon your life and swear an oath with three of your closest friends to bury the others should they fall in battle.

Changing vote
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>>5186840
>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
>Tell Kanzeon of the glorious last stands of your sons and their valor in battle, and ask her if she thinks your father will accept her as your bride as you walk beneath the gentle light of the moon
>Sit down and share a meal with Feng, Liang and Jiang, and reflect upon your life and swear an oath with three of your closest friends to bury the others should they fall in battle.
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>>5186840
>>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
>Tell Kanzeon of the glorious last stands of your sons and their valor in battle, and ask her if she thinks your father will accept her as your bride as you walk beneath the gentle light of the moon
>Perhaps affected by the sheer quantity of strong spirits you have imbibed, tearfully reach out towards your brothers in the warp
NEW BROTHER FIND
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>>5186840
>Pen what may be our last addition to the journey
>Tearfully reach out to our brothers, quite drunk.
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>>5186840
>>Sit down and share a meal with Feng, Liang and Jiang, and reflect upon your life and swear an oath with three of your closest friends to bury the others should they fall in battle.
>>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
>Tell Kanzeon of the glorious last stands of your sons and their valor in battle, and ask her if she thinks your father will accept her as your bride as you walk beneath the gentle light of the moon
I usually hate voting for more than 2 options, but I don't want to leave anyone out.
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>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
>Perhaps affected by the sheer quantity of strong spirits you have imbibed, tearfully reach out towards your brothers in the warp
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>>5186840
>>Perhaps affected by the sheer quantity of strong spirits you have imbibed, tearfully reach
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>>5186839
>Aaro and Yrjö drank engine coolant mistaking it for liquor
This shouldn't be so giggle inducing
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>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle
>Perhaps affected by the sheer quantity of strong spirits you have imbibed, tearfully reach out towards your brothers in the warp
>>5186864's
>Anti-Khorne Verses.
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>>5186840
>Perhaps affected by the sheer quantity of strong spirits you have imbibed, tearfully reach out towards your brothers in the warp
>Tell Kanzeon of the glorious last stands of your sons and their valor in battle, and ask her if she thinks your father will accept her as your bride as you walk beneath the gentle light of the moon
Willing to take a chance on meeting another brother.
Hoping we can narrow down why Lieren keeps going out of the way to hide Kanzeon, could be worry, could be genetic programming or instruction from the egg, but my main worry is that it is a very subtle and small chaos manipulation to make Lieren keep a excess of secrets like his dad when it would be far better long term to let those things be known by those who are important or in a important position.
After all if chaos can mislead the emperor in a long con they can do the same to Lieren. Big E can only get pseudo eyes of truth I imagine but his psychic and divination muscles would be far greater then anything Lieren could likely ever get so it evens out.
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>>5187721
The reason is simple.

Because we cannot be utterly sure how Emps will react to the existence of the girls. And being cautious, we are not going to let the genie out of the bottle without knowing well in advance what the result would be.
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>>5187723
I feel that we're being unfair. We say that we can only reveal them when we trust the Emperor, yet how can the Emperor trust us and thus facilitate said trust if he knows we're keeping important secrets?
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>>5187753
I'm going to ask you to reverse the situation, and then listen to it.

"I feel that we're being unfair. We say that we can only reveal our secrets when we trust Lieren, yet how can Lieren trust us and thus facilitate said trust if he knows we're keeping important secrets?"

The emperor understands that we have secrets, and we know that he has many. We will reveal Kanzeon and co when we have an oath that the emperor will protect them/not try killing them.
Doing otherwise is playing with their lives, and we're not going to do that.
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>>5186840
>Affected by the sheer quantity of strong spirits you lay with Kanzeon
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>>5187753
You say that we should trust big E when in the most recent update Lieren talks about the spy that the emperor probably okayed malcador to send to find out our secrets
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>>5187911
I doubt big E okayed this.
He trusts malcador implicitly, he is possibly the only man that can claim that privilege. If Malcador sent a spy, he wouldnt necessarily need to inform nor seek the approval of emps.

That's just my estimates thought.
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>>5186840
>>Pen what may be our last addition to the journey
>>Tearfully reach out to our brothers, quite drunk.
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>>5186840
We can all understand that Lieren will survive this encounter, and that Shangrala will survive, but that's meta knowledge. Our boi should probably treat this like he might actually die which makes sense in his own head, but we all know he'll live. Uh.... I forgot the point I'm trying to make, but I think you all get what I mean. I hope.

>Write in
>Convene with your fellow psykers in secret and try to devise a new psykerist technique that will make fighting in the city of shattered reality less treacherous
We should really do this while we still have the chance. This edge might give our sons a greater chance of survival, not to mention the survival odds of others.

>>5186864
+1 this to agro and weaken all demons and cultists we come across.
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>>5186840
>>Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers, and wife should you fail to return from battle

>Sit down and share a meal with Feng, Liang, and Jiang, and reflect upon your life and swear an oath with three of your closest friends to bury the others should they fall in battle.

The one of Kanzeon could be one i would vote for the future, i suggest to reuse it. I wouldn't vote for it now, because it s not the time to think about more problems with the battle ahead. At least that's what I believe
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Calling the vote now.

Pen what may be your last addition to the journey, and write a poem to leave for your sons, brothers and wife should you fail to return from battle:16
- Anti khorne write in:4

Sit down and share a meal with Feng, Liang and Jiang, and reflect upon your life and swear an oath with three of your closest friends to bury the others should they fall in battle.:7

Tell Kanzeon of the glorious last stands of your sons and their valor in battle, and ask her if she thinks your father will accept her as your bride as you walk beneath the gentle light of the moon:6
-Lewd: 1

Perhaps affected by the sheer quantity of strong spirits you have imbibed, tearfully reach out towards your brothers in the warp:9

Convene with your fellow psykers in secret and try to devise a new psykerist technique that will make fighting in the city of shattered reality less treacherous:1

Total votes:20

So Lieren will pen what may be the last addition to his Journey and write a poem to leave behind for Kanzeon, his children and his friends should be fall in battle

And then, managing to, through his various drinking sessions around the camp, throughout the day over power his primarch fortitude to become drunk, tearfully reach out towards his brothers in the warp

Writing now

>>5186938
I think Night haunter would be funny in that scenario. Wanna place bets who you're gone drunk dial through the warp? cause I chose which primarch it'd be when I wrote yesterday's update
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>>5188352
pls Lorgar, it would be too funny
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>>5188352
Drunk dial sang
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>>5188352
Well if it's the ones we know you are going to drop Pert on us if it can be anyone it's gonna be Angron, Russ or lord help us Lorgar
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>>5188352
Russ would have quite the first impression.
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>>5188352
Sad, I had those previous write-ins saved from past threads for this moment.
Guess our eightfold path turned inward is doomed to forever miss one of the sides
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>>5188352
So that means it's Lorgar then?
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>>5188372
just because it didn't get voted on doesn't mean that Malal wont incorporate it in some way, he's done that before.
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>>5188362
Probably would get drunk with us.
>>5188374
Lotta people wanted Lorgar, but it was never put to a vote. Curze and Sanguinius were popular too. Kinda hope it's Mortarion for maximum /scowl/
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>>5188352
Bets on Dorn
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>>5188403
Emperor: Lieren are you and Russ drunk again?
Russ and Lieren: absolutely not!
Dorn: yes, yes they are father
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>>5188409
Planetary bar hopping with Lieren, Russ and Jaghatai
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>>5188416
>Horus heresy begins
>Russ, Lieren and Jagjatai are nowhere to be found, no one is certain whose side they'll be on when they emerge
>Actually they just got pissed on Bugman's brew Lieren found in the warp one day and wandered into the void with their expeditionary forces
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>>5188421
Oh yeah, no way to stop the Horus heresy right?
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>>5188428
We just have to keep Magnus from blowing up the web way project and any damage that comes from the heresy is recoverable
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>>5188429
Webway project is probably going to look very different.
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>>5188421
>Heresy kicks off
>Each side trying to win over the three drunks
>Have to drink with them to try to butter them up
>Everyone's to drunk to fight
>Everyone by the end nursing hang overs
>Lieren: "So what did you guys want us for?"
>Horus: " don't worry about it" *as he holds an ice pack to his head*
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Update in bound

Oh

and I never said the who was singular
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Kanzeon had long since retired to your shared quarters, hours ago by your currently flimsy and untrustworthy perception of time. You had been overwhelmed by emotions and unable to sleep, stumbled from your bed to seek a means to vent the sorrow surging through your veins alongside the potent spirits that you partook alongside your sworn brothers, sons and many other soldiers around your army's camp with whom you shared little to no histories or relation to them. Kanzeon had said you had become drunk, but that couldn't possibly. Surely her medical scan and examination of you after you tripped and fell into Cliffjumper and swine pens was tampered with, perhaps some glitch in her internal systems or wicked interference from flying so close to her sister's prison. It was most impossible, for you, the wise sage and great warrior Lieren of nothing, who endure a storm in only a loincloth and who has thus far proven immune to every mundane and earthly poison and malady that effects other men could not possibly have fallen victim to the alluring temptations of liquor!

It was not that it was beneath you, but you simply did not have such a weakness of intoxication! The amount of alcohol you would have to imbibe to overcome your fortitude that has resisted even the foul breath of Na gou the toad king and the enticing enchanted perfumes of the maiden of Wanton pleasure...or at least that thrice dammed, treasonous fox who served her as a lap dog serves its mistress. Snorting, you dragged your feet along the floor, stumbling through Kanzeon's body as she slept and rested. You needed to find a quiet chamber, without much lights, so you could contemplate your emotions and harness them for a more constructive ends than weeping and sheeding tears into Kanzeon's flawless hair. Bowing your head, you patted your cheeks, trying to uncover the source of the fever that made them so flush and warm. Deciding it would remain a mystery, like so many things in the world, you wisely decided to brace yourself against the wall, knowing that your fiancé may be forced to perform evasive maneuvers and thus deciding to reinforce your gait by resting against her so you would not be thrown off your feet. It certainly was not because for the first time in your life you found your feet unsteady, of course not.

Eventually, after wandering through the darkened corridors for a period of time, you found the isolated room you sought, to be alone with your wellspring of freely springing emotions. Luckily, you had not misplaced your ink brushes and well, and sat down on the floor, scattering spare pages across it to keep from potentially marring the original copy of the Journey with foolish ramblings or meaningless koans. Why you'd fear your wisdom would fail you now of all times, you did not know.
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Ah geez, it's those assholes
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But you took precautions none the less and spent some time licking and preening the end of your brush to make certain it would not create to thick or dense of lines before you began your work. Your eyes began to itch, as you repeatedly practiced characters you have made with a flick of your wrist countless times, but through perseverance or perhaps raw stubbornness you start to put your collected thoughts and introspections to page and ink. You moved between several, disparate passages, refining your worldly perceptions into the visual medium of text. You hand moved according to the whims of your weeping heart, one moment imparting warnings of shedding blood for violence sake alone or seeking vengeance without just cause, another comparing a paranoid mind to a weed filled garden and the next creating a parable to teach the followers of your world view how to avoid to slimy grasp of the fetid lord of putrescence, Na gou, then the importance of physical health and exercise . You vaguely realized the unifying subject of what may be the last addition to your Journey but as soon as you did, you realized your had set aside the pages bearing the incomplete lessons, tenants and teachings and had began to instead pen poem after poem.

Knowing you may not return from this battle, you sought to, rather than cementing your legacy in your philosophy to instead leave behind memorial tokens in the form of poetry to your loved ones, for them to read and treasure before your grave where ever it may be dog. Weeping, crying and sniffling, you bitterly immortalized this grief and fear to many of the blank scrolls you carry at your side. Oh what music flows from your finger tips and into the ink you trace! Surely these works will one day be remembered as the greatest, most touching and emotionally resonant poems of the era. Yet your tears still flowed! smearing the ink and denying the world an insight into your aching heart and selfless love that reaches to all corners of the world. What a tragedy for the world of art! The spirits of the great painters and poets of old surely weep at the loss of your work, sullied by the same wild emotions that spawned it.

"An artistic patricide!" You wailed, flicking your brush so dramatically it left a streak of ink upon your cheek slowly dripping down from your chin and onto your lap"A murder performed by tears shed! The muse has struck and plucked out the heart of the composition it has inspired! Orchids wilt! Winter comes! The wine sours into vinegar! It is lost and shall never again be read!"

Desperately, you tried to recapture the illumination, the divine insight that allowed you to create such moving masterpieces of poetry that would surely ease the suffering of your beloved song bird, your gentle spring breeze, your warming summer maiden, your stalwart and loyal autumn empress, the jade fairy who has deigned to bless your life and days with the light of her eyes and melody of her smile!
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Oh how will Kanzeon, your most treasured lotus blossom, ever forgive you for sullying the poems you penned for her to cherish when you are gone! How will Feng and Jinhai name you brother still, knowing you have destroyed the wise stanzas you had wrote to guide them when you are gone from this world! How will your children, furred or forged, find their way in the cruel uncarring world, now that the wisdom you sought to pass down into your hands has been reduce to so many blotches of salt and watered down ink! Oh woe! Oh tragedy! You have failed! Not only your kin but your guiding star! The sagacious beauty who lights your world with her smile! Oh shame! Oh humiliation! You should suffer the death by a thousand cuts! Join all those souls you condemned to hell on the noose! Burn alongside the Messenger of flames for this most unforgiveable crime.

Carefully collecting the poems and partially completed passages of the journey that had survived the renewed torrent of your tears, you stacked them upon the desk in the room and threw yourself back to the ground, wailing and crying out for the crime you have committed against you loved ones! The unforgiveable slight from which their could be no reconciliation, that you ruined the gifts you left behind, to mend the wounds your eventual passing would leave in their hearts! That you had destroyed the words that may, when you have left this mortal coil, lead them to live their best and most prosperous lives.

Wiping tears and snot from your face, you crossed your legs and began to meditate, seeking out the council of your distant brothers so they may lend you guidance in this most troubling night and show you how you may make amends and beg forgiveness for dying so Young! Surely they would need to be informed of your death, so they may join Kanzeon and shed their tears upon your grave as well!

the thought that, you were not dead and that it was in not way guaranteed you would die in the battle to come or any of the thousands you would wage in the future, never crossed your mind as the fumes of strong spirits had blinded you with the sorrow of your passing! and so consumed were you by the grief of leaving behind the world you still lived within, you never thought that there was no reason to mourn a man who neither condemned to die or already dead! But alas, the poetic soul of the Long-Jian resonated with this sorrow, and only served to strengthen the grief of your own, yet to come demise and the world you had not yet left behind to not uncover the mystery of death. So mournful and saddened you had become, that the source of the emotion was no longer a factor of your weeping, wailing grief.

Instead, driven by the sadness you were sure was consuming your kin and kith by your untimely and most assuredly unjust passing, you began to blindly grope and stumble through the warp, your wails carrying across vast distances and reaching the delighted ears of the Demonic Lords of Discord
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Trampling over hosts of nurgling, knocking over overconfident bloodthirsty, shoving daemonettes into murky puddles of your sorrow, kicking blue and pink horrors over the horizon, you shambled and wailed through the wail, mourning yourself, still not noticing that you had, in fact, not departed the mortal realm and were as you well knew, alive and in perfect health. The two face spirits of Chun Qiang jeered and mocked you while also weeping and crying for the loss of the great hunter of the wilds alongside you, while the shadowy, ox horned slaves of Hei'an Fu scrambled out of the drunken path of destruction you paved through the valleys and crested hills of empyrean fleeing from your thunderous footsteps and howling wails like their cowardly father. A two headed crow argued with itself, trying to foretell where you would next step while a mass of eels hissed and snapped at you as a fox's cries turned your mournful, despairing wails. A furious bull impotently flared its nostrils as you wandered by its garden pen and a strange red fellow wrestled with you for a time a passing dancer caught his one good eye's attention.

You tearful, spirits emboldened desire to meet your brothers combined with the potent sorrow you felt and the lack of control you suffered beneath the haze of the Dragon's spit liquor, dampened your psionic sixth sense and clouded your eyes with bitter tears as you stumbled through the hellish domains of the dark, cruel gods that watched your world, hoping to witness your first and final defeat and now watched in amusement as the enemy bearing their branded made a drunken fool of himself WHILE wrecking the territories of their five rivals!

But, eventually, the tendrils of emotion and thought latches tightly to the glowing spirits of those brothers who were closest to you. No in terms of brotherly affection only felt so strongly by those who had fought side by side one another or who had spent many quiet nights in shared study or the mutual admiration of two otherwise artisans and build , as you shared with Magnus of Prospero or Perturabo of Olympia. But rather in the literal sense of the word.

As the sorrowful drunken song of the novice poet of nothing carried through the warp and shuddered realspace, your astral avatar began a unsteady dance towards the world of wolves and the land of the medusa as the already thin veil of the Segmentum Obscura splintered and spewed out fragments of poetry sang and wailed by a boy experiencing his first and truly potent intoxication
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Leman Russ had been thrown from his father's war camp, not due to his usual rowdy, youthful behavior the grey and white beards saw as endearing as they remembered the time when they were not so long in the fang or bitter in the heart and delighted in watching the wolf child play and roughhouse with his kin of fur and of man.
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What they did not find charming, was the young warrior guzzling down the entirety of the spring time larder of mead, ale and stronger spirits that they had been saving for the victory celebration. And while the heir of the Russ habitual wenching and fraternizing with the fairer, yet not less ferocious sex often drew cheers and admiring nods from his fellows and elders, taking all of the women in camp to his bed drew the ire of even his closest battle brothers and companions. And so, it was decided unanimously by the war party that the young warrior's blood had become to hot, and would soon give him a fever and through the advice of the respected, venerated elders amongst the war party, the only way to sooth wolves blood was to toss any man afflicted with it in the snow

Nude and away from camp. Though this would be murder for any normal man, Leman russ' companions and brothers knew he had endured far worse and would at worse suffer a chilling of his clearly overworked balls rather than any lethal consequence. So it was, that well over forty men carried the nude heir of Thengir into the heart of a blizzard, where they then dumped his drunken frame into the deepest snow pile they could find, before returning back to the shelter and warmth of their camp

Leman russ awoke, confused as to where his nightly companions, singing and cheering friends and even his armor, furs and weapons had gone, He had been confident he fell asleep beneath a tent. Blinking, he brushed snow from his eyes and called out to Freki and Geri. But instead of hearing their howl returned, he heard a voice much similar to his own wail back in most ugly manner, like a widow crying over the corpse of her son.

Blinking, Leman pressed a hand to his brow and scanned the horizon, and found to his shock, a man of his own stature dressed in a white dress of all things, with hair the color of iron flowing behind him like hawk's plumage or wolves tail. His tongue was unfamiliar to Leman, but his singing was pleasant and he was clearly in the same situation as himself, drunk and thrown out of camp to cool down. A common occurrence for Leman. So, deprived of the company of his liter mates and axe brothers, Leman approached the other drunker, howling a song of his own as he approached the man whose scarred face was covered in frozen tears

Somehow, as Leman drew closer to the strange garbed stranger's side, he found himself able to understand the lyrics of his mournful song. A voice in Leman's head reminded him of the tale of wanders consumed by the harshest of winters, but he ignored the warnings of the elders to join his unlikely companion in his song, though it did not make much sense to the still heavily intoxicated man who would one day become Wolf King.

Something about searching for his brothers, to deliver a message of grave importance, and of the tragedy of someone's passing. Leman russ found it to be a most enjoyable Saga. Sorrowful, yet inspiring

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So he continued to sing and soon managed to awaken his unexpected companion into conversation. He too, was looking for his brothers, but Leman doubted they were wolves like his own. So arm in arm, they wandered through the snow, as Leman and the stranger with gold and sometimes silver eyes shared their wisdom and gave advice to one another, discussing the inevitable tragedy of losing those you love and fading from the world of men into the realm of legend and sagas if you are one of the fortunate, glorious few who live a life worth remembering.

Of course, Leman forgot the words he spoke as soon as they left his lips, so buried he was in the haze of mead and he still could not understand the strangely melodic tongue of his fellow drunk and hopeful friend. He certainly hoped he did not have to cross axes with another giant of a man, especially one who had proven thus far affable and truly great company. Perhaps if he was a lost member of his enemy's war party, he could recruit him to his side before being forced to cleave his fair head from his shoulders.

Somehow, both drunk primarchs had their legs become tangled and both fell to the snow, falling from one another laughing as drunkards often do.

"Ah, strong wine and good company! How rare of a combination! To find another poet, who sings of clashing blades and biting steel in this strange valley of ice and snow" The strange spoke, as if he were reading a poem to leman as the two of them struggled to stand, still giggling like children "Oh this was truly a fortuitous encounter, to in my wanderings find a companion who could make sense of my somber ramblings! Rather than a beast who seeks my blood or an enemy with spear raised against my throat!"

"Ah, a skald are you" Leman barked, laughing as he saw the beet red cheeks of his singing partner, whose eyes were narrowed to slits, showing Leman he was as piss drunk as himself "I've known a many skald in my short days, always they seem to find tragic ends, I can only hope you do not share the same destiny my friend"

"Hrrr, a fool's salve! Destiny is nothing but an excuse of the weak-willed and ambitious to excuse their failings or explain their cruelty! Fate is nothing but what our hands make! Reality is an unpainted canvas, waiting each living soul's artist brush" The ironed haired man in the strange dress snorted, as Leman wandered if he was out in the snow fields on a dare, instead of being tossed from his camp like he himself was

"Ah, but we are all born with a destiny, great or small. While we can writ the saga of our lives, we can not change its beginning or end" He countered, revealing his fangs as his companion frowned, brow wrinkled in contemplation as he pressed the back of his fist beneath his chin

"Birth and death are their names, but while one cannot change their birth, they can decide the manner of their death" He giggled, eyes now fully closed.
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Leman studied his features for signs of the ethnicity of the tribe he had been commanded to extinguish by his father, and instead found himself looking in a mirror

"Truly you are wise, yet you are not blind like any seer I have yet met, and no prophecy is what it first appears to be. What difference is there if, at your birth, the stars aligned to speak of your death beneath great wings? And you struggle to avoid falling prey to giant eagles, only to die holding the banner of a king whose sigil is a hawk?" Leman laughed, taunting his debate partner to come up with a response

"That is the nature of prophecies, if one looks for their signs, they will find them if they exist or not, and if any seer told me of my destiny, I'd piss on their faces" The drunk philosophy drawled, nearly making Leman piss himself with laughter "They are formless, and fit the agenda of the soothsayers who first spoke them. Destiny is a sham, fate is a Lie. One's death is decided by one's own decisions and life, and it is not the end of their influence for you see, wolf man"

Leman found himself entranced, more so than he had ever been by the council of any sheer or priest before.

"For every action, from pissing on a seer's face to kicking a stone, ripples outwards and effects all existence, and the greatest ripple one can perform is in choosing the site and nature of their death! So as to alter the course of the river of the future's direction completely, and paint their legacy on the world, even if their names are forgotten within a single generation" He roared, as the winds whipped and surrounded him like a fur cloak

"Tell me, stranger, who if I were sober I'd name mad! What clan do you hail from, so I may sleep well knowing I need not snuff out the life of one who has amused me so?" Leman chuckled, holding out a hand to his odd companion as he struggled to remain conscious "And tell me your name and decent , so if I Must slay you for the good of my people I may seek you out"

"Lie..." The man started, looking up before his eyes widened in shock, and then he was gone

"Lee eh?" Leman asked, before he realized the man had vanished completely with the winds and his own eyes widened. Standing, he looked around, and wander if he had spent an evening in the company of a wandering ghost reliving its final moments. That certainly sound like the last breath fleeing from a man's mouth. Scratching the stubble on his face, Leman russ decided he'd ask the greybeards at camp if there was any clan called "Lee'eh" in Fenris' storied history or if there were a tribe that birthed giant, iron haired men.
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Ferrus Manus was hard at work when he heard a cry so terrible he wondered if it were not the vengeful cries of the silver wyrm Asirnoth's kin, seeking retribution for the beasts slaying upon The Gorgon's people and protectorate tribes he taught and raised up from the barbarity of their nomadic existence.
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For, it was well known even the most mindless of beasts could feel the agony of losing those cherished few in their lives. But, straining his ears, the iron handed war chief realized the cries were not vengeful, piercing roars, but rather the sorrowful song of a man, bemoaning the loss of a friend. Ferrus knew the last clan he had stayed and taught, was many miles away, but had heard of no inhabitants of the mountainside he now wandered. Perhaps this grieving sole was the last of a lineage or an outcast, cast from his clan for failing or shaming them. If they lived long enough to sing so mournfully, weeping for their lonely plight, they must be strong in character and arm and would thus little need The Gorgon's guidance or aid.

However, Ferrus knew men were more than their strength, and were power may allow one to survive, heart break could cause an otherwise healthy man to wither. Many often forgot, that strength was more than a physical force. Gathering his belongings, the gorgon set out to meet this lonesome singer, and see if he could not strengthen his wounded heart, to make him strong once again. It'd be a shame for a man who had survived the harsh peaks of Medusa to fall to his own heart after all. Catiously, he followed the strongly melodic, almost chime like singing, feeling it reverberate through the air before he came upon the source

A fellow giant, with iron in his hair rather than over his arms. Their gazes me, and Ferrus immediatly knew this other giant to be intoxicated but did not see how he could've become so upon the barren peak upon which they met. They stood their for sometime, golden eyes peering into his own, the whimsical expression of the Iron haired stranger meeting to stern, glower of the Iron handed Ferrus Manus. So they remained interlocked, studying, examining each other for flaws and signs of threat, one grinning drunkenly and the other wearing the stone cold expression he tended to wear. And to the Gorgon's great shock

He found the man to be as strong as himself, and what's more, saw the signs that he had worked furiously to improve himself, judging by the scars on his shoulder and face and calluses on his hands. The golden eyed stranger smiled and approach Ferrus Manus, as he realized he had been inspecting him far more closely that he could ever hope to aspire to. His eyes...they were picking apart his being in search of any useful data or knowledge. A truly inspiring skill, and one that could explain how he had survived alone and be so bold as to wander the winds as deeply intoxicated as he now was. Tension filled the air, as Ferrus for the first time met his equal in both will and brawn. Addled he may be, if this stranger so him as a threat, the battle between them would be more terrible than his duel with the silver wyrm

So, he chose to relieve the tension with his signature form of blunt humor, to amuse himself and see if he could get a rise out of this lonesome wanderer.
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"You condemn yourself to death, drinking so carelessly while living alone, hermit" He jabbed, stepping closer as the man altered his stance, raising both his arms above his head and lifting one leg, hands and feet pointed down and shaped into vague spear heads

"All men must die, and all things must fade, stern face ogre of the mountain, perhaps I am already dead!" The stranger teased back, managing to look through the scathing tone of the comment and intimidating demeanor of Ferrus, no doubt assisted by his eyes

Ferrus pushed his chest

"You're acting foolish' he said, trying to draw the man's ire as a challenge now "You are clearly alive"

"Is there much of a difference between life and death?' The man said, pressing a thumb to his nose

"How rare it is to find another philosopher in the harsh expanse of this world, truly you must be strong to be able to think of such...ethereal ponderings" He said, and got the rise he searched for, but not of rage but rather joy

"Oh, strength! That can be the topic of our clash of words and duel of beliefs, for clearly you are of the sort who knows what men must endured to survive in such harsh climes and those like you I have met before, have lacked the scholarly interest necessary to truly prove even an entertaining match in the arena of philosophy!" The man cried out happily, kicking his foot in the air as he leapt and readopted a more natural stance, hiding his hands away into the sleeves of his raiment. Ferrus kept one eye on his arms, knowing that such a gesture could conceal a surprise attack

"Strength and humanity" Ferrus corrected, mimicking the strange hermits gesture of crossing his arms and hiding his hands "For many misunderstand strength, and I am curious what an man as bizarre as yourself will believe the definition of strength to be"

The man slouched forward, all of his face besides his gleeful grin hidden by his queerly long hair and the shadows it cast

"What is strong" He asked

"Oh I am going to enjoy this" Ferra admitted, having decided this man truly possess a philosophical mind and sharp intellect, rather than only the ramblings of a isolation mad hermit "Well, to answer that question, we much dissect the various forms of strength and determine if each is truly"

"Valid? How machine like. Can you truly define that which has so many forms and meanings? Can you describe the unseen wind, can you detail the passions of the heart, can you constrain the infinite expanse of all things with the word existence?" the iron haired philosopher parried, lashing one of his arms out like a whip, the long sleeve hanging from it leaving behind a trail of color.

Ferrus knew this would be more difficult than he thought, but remained firm in his convictions before the barrage of questions meant plant the seeds of uncertainty in his mind to then cause him to falter from his life long conviction of the meaning of strength.
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In a way, this had become a battle far more treacherous than his conflict with the wyrm

"Well, brother of philosophy, who are you to say what can be shaped and what can be made to take form? Words, concepts, meaning, these are all assigned by human thought. But what we discuss is a universal truth, strength, and what it truly is" He began eyes narrowed "and what purpose it serves for the human race, for the strength I speak of is not the strength of beasts"

"Ohoho! A true challenger, my grandfather would kill for a chance to debate you, Iron hands" The man said, whipping his sleeve hidden arm around once more, this time in a circular rotation. Ferrus looked for a knife in his palm "And that much was obvious, you speak of not the physical, substantial strength but the strength of will, of humanity itself no?"

"Using your intoxication as a shield then? To try and lure me into poorly wording my rebuttals? But yes, that is correct, I speak of the insubstantial, undefinable strength. The strength born through self improvement, no matter what form it takes " He jabbed, causing the man to twitch but not with rage, rather as if he could not comprehend the word when it was applied to himself, was he even aware he was drunk?

"You dare accuse me of such under hand tactics, stern faced one?" The man snapped back "No I would not dare to be so deceiving! And I too know the wisdom of self improvement, but you must know that it has no end"

"It is still a worthwhile endeavor, for being better than you were is still preferable to languishing in weakness when strength could be reached by merely making an effort for if" He begins

"Perfection is unattainable, its pursuit is still commendable, for self improvement is a righteous path and effort to make" The stranger finished, Ferrus adjusted his posture, now truly intrigued by his opponent "And is a road without end, but that does not mean one should avoid walking it"

"Because an endless road provides bountiful opportunities and chances to refine and improve oneself, no matter the form of these refinements take" Ferrus said with a smile

"Or the method or reason" The man continued on, now grinning ear to ear, looking as though he had at last found a kindred soul in his opponent "One should be content knowing they improve themselves with every step of this endless journey towards unreachable perfection"

Ferrus stood and nearly rushed to embrace the hermit with iron hair, feeling his heart yearn for such a companion

"Knowing every step makes them strong" He gasped, eyes widened as the man began to fade like the steam of a boiling geyser. Ferrus could not believe his eyes as the man began to disappear before them, but not before whispering a single question that buried itself into the Gorgon's mind like an iron thorn

"But what then, is the duty of the strong?" said the hermit, as he vanished like the morning
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"I told you you were drunk, you idiot, what were you thinking! Drinking so heavily the night before a battle" Kanzeon scolded as she poured cold water over your head and stabbed another needle in your arm, to try and alleviate the hang over you were no condemned to experience. Drugs of her own concontion now coursed through your veins, cleansing it of impurities, like the lingering traces of the most wicked of drinks, alchohol.

You pouted, as she sprayed you with several hoses that emerged from the floor, the force of the ice cold waters jetting from within so great it would have skinned any other man or beast

"It shouldn't even be possible for you to become drunk, I studied your genetic schematics intimately" Kazneon hiss, scrubbing your hair and face roughly stiff, steel toothed brushes "Again, I must voice my amazement that you did the impossible, and became shit faced despite being immune to most poisons and toxic compounds, naturally occurring or not!""

"But I had such pleasant dreams. I met with a wolf headed man and an iron handed ogre, we had such illuminating, insightful conversations together " You sigh, accepting the harsh treatment your wife to be has chosen to condemn you to

"It is not harsh, lieren, you are going to battle and may die, and you got drunk knowing this" She snarls, eyes ablaze with a fury born of worry

"But how could I have known?" You question, instantly softening her fierce expression

"Fair point, by all the rules of your physiology, it should've been impossible. You have a knack for that, you now, my scholar" She admitted begrudgingly "You luck you have me to care for you, whether it be treating your wounds or helping you recover from a hangover that should've been impossible"

"I truly am fortunate to be the man who won your heart" You coo, and receive a blast of frigid waters

"Do not flirt with me when I am still upset with you" Kanzeon warns

"How can I resist complimenting art when I witness a masterpiece" You say

Another blast of awakening, revitalizing water
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What do you do now that you have recovered and the dawn of battle approaches, Lieren

>Meet with Jinhai and the other generals and design the strategy the imperial army will utilize down to the most minute detail

>Give a rousing speech to your men and march towards the butcher's keep, signaling the beginning of the battle

>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.

>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN

>write in

https://youtu.be/c8QTlfKeId8 Some fitting music for the update
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>>5188521
>>Meet with Jinhai and the other generals and design the strategy the imperial army will utilize down to the most minute detail

>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.

>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN
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>>5188521
Ahem.

> STEEL RAIN.
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>>5188525
support

"STRIKE FROM THE SKIES BROTHERS"
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>>5188521
>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.

>Meet with Jinhai and the other generals and design the strategy the imperial army will utilize down to the most minute detail

>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN
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>>5188525
+1
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>>5188521
>>>Meet with Jinhai and the other generals and design the strategy the imperial army will utilize down to the most minute detail
>>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.
>>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN
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>>5188521
>>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.
>>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN

I can't wait to see if Leman brings this meeting up with Emps, once he gets picked up, assuming he's still the second recovered.
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>>5188586
Third actually. Leman canonically gets picked up before us. Fourth if you believe the alpharius book.
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>>5188587
>Leman canonically gets picked up before us
Yeah, that's what I'm saying. He's the second, we're the third. That is, assuming the Alpharius novel is, in fact, a lie.
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>>5188521
>>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.
>>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN
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>>5188507
>What they did not find charming, was the young warrior guzzling down the entirety of the spring time larder of mead, ale and stronger spirits that they had been saving for the victory celebration. And while the heir of the Russ habitual wenching and fraternizing with the fairer, yet not less ferocious sex often drew cheers and admiring nods from his fellows and elders, taking all of the women in camp to his bed drew the ire of even his closest battle brothers and companions.

Russ pls. lmfao.

I cant wait to meet our brothers.
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>>5188521
>Check drunk Lieren
>STEEL RAIN!
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>>5188521
>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.
>Meet with Jinhai and the other generals and design the strategy the imperial army will utilize down to the most minute detail
>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN
Great update. At this point Russ and Lieren have vaguely interacted several times, they are gonna get some severe Déja vu when they finally meet.
Meanwhile Ferrus Manus is going to have several questions.
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>>5188521
>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.
>Meet with Jinhai and the other generals and design the strategy the imperial army will utilize down to the most minute detail
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>>5188521
>Give a rousing speech to your men and march towards the butcher's keep, signaling the beginning of the battle
>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.
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>>5188521
>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.

>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN

Drunk Lieren was amazing. 10/10, would bar crawl with.
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>>5188521
>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.

>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN
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Chaos celebrated. But lost Ferrus.
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>>5188521
>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.

>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN
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>>5188521
>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN
It's time for the Second Legion to fucking shine.
I expect every engagement to be worthy of illuminated illustrations in the next edition of The Journey.
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>>5188521
>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.

>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN

Fucking Russ and Ferrus. God damn, So far you've made both Primarch's I adore into stars. Bless you Malal. Pert and Ferrus
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>>5188521
>>Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.
>>Meet with Jinhai and the other generals and design the strategy the imperial army will utilize down to the most minute detail
>>Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN


Very nice music malal, perfect for this update
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>>5189116
In my mind, I feel like Perturabo and Ferrus would have gotten along famously if one could let their guard down around the other without being chastised or slapped upside the head.
Usually both in the few times it happened.
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>>5189174
I think Perturabo tried to get along with Ferrus but when Ferrus didn't know what Perturabo meant when asking about the warp eye Perturabo dipped out in a bout of awkwardness and never could muster up the nerve to make another attempt.
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Of all our brothers, I think alpharius and omegon might hate the shit out of us. Since we'll be able to see right through their bullshit.
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>>5189182
With Lieran acting like the bridge he could bring a lot, if not all of his brothers together, especially through philosophical debate
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>>5189182
Ferrus is a hard guy to start a conversation right with. Lorgar made a joke about Ferrus only making weapons and not anything of any other use and Ferrus replied asking if Lorgar could make anything useful at all.
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>>5189202
Lorgar was being a bit a cunt at that moment though
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>>5189215
I mean, Lorgar didn't think so. He was just trying to break the ice, but his primarchtism was too strong.
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>>5189229
I wonder if he is going to hate us since his dad is scared shitless of us
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>>5189261
I think Lorgar will either is going to love debating with Lieren or absolutly hate the Journey, no in-between.
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>>5189266
Lorgar might hate how Empy like the journey way more than his book but there's nothing that technically goes against the lectitio
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Calling the vote now.

Meet with Jinhai and the other generals and design the strategy the imperial army will utilize down to the most minute detail:8

Collect your scattered notes and poems, and check to see if your drunk mind produced anything of worth.: 16

Knowing that its likely Nitya Sinha is aware of your plan, contact Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided battle strategy, and instead of surrounding the city with the other four generals, air drop inside of it while the Vishnu prepare for the five pronged assault. LIKE A STEEL RAIN:16

total votes: 18

So Lieren will gather the notes and poetry he wrote while intoxicated to check if they hold any worth, before meeting with Jinhai and the other generals to play the strategy of the imperial army down to its most minute detail

However, knowing it is likely that Nitya Sinha will be aware of your planning, will contactt Jinhai mentally and request permission to go against the decided stratagem and instead of forming a fifth of the crushing wall the rest of the imperial forces will form"

Air drop into the Vishnu Capital like a STEEL RAIN

writing
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>>5189302
I bet our sons would volunteer to join us. They're also probably the only ones who would survive such an entry.
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>>5189302
I hate how some of these anons can't pick at minimum one or two things.
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>>5189323
these are pretty simple things for a primarch to do anon
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>>5189324
Thats my reasoning
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Once you are roused and your mind is cleared of the lingering vapors and fumes of the dragon's spit you consumed by the gallon while making merry with most of the soldiers in you camp, you collect the scraps of paper you had left strewn about the floor while Kanzeon begins her combat preparations, checking every system of her vast body and extensively testing every weapon and defense that is a part of it, calibrating and recalibrating every sub-system and code to ready herself for battle as others would sharpen their blades and fasten on their armor. The notes containing fragments of wisdom and insights are much more coherent than you expected them to be, though they are just that, fragments, incomplete as you clearly leapt between ideas rapidly, a sign of the addled, intoxicated state of mind that birthed the half written lessons and stories meant to impart the meaning and teachings of the wisdom spilled forth from a bottle. Or rather many bottles. Many of these nascent teachings are clearly designed to be driven against your greatest and most hated of enemies, the wicked spirits and devils of chaos. Others are meandering texts concerning such hyper specific circumstances that they are next to useless to Journey even if they accurately describe your world view. Setting aside the pages you will refine into proper passages for Your Journey, you read over your poetry and while it ranges between deeply emotionally resonating and almost laughably sappy and angst driven, and includes some rather humorous poems alongside the touching and tear eliciting works that manage to instill within you a deep almost indescribable sensation of hopeful yet mournful sorrow they also include an oddity you cannot explain.

What appears to be plans for your own funeral arrangements, so intricately detailed you cannot help but wonder if it was truly penned by the hand of a drunk man. But it is a very reasonable plan, so you set aside the strange and shockingly long schedule for your burial and the exact coordinates for its location and the measurements for your grave marker away, hiding it away alongside the more shameful and embarrassing poetry you penned last night.

"Would you like me to broadcast a few select poems from that drunken spree of yours, daaarling? I think it'd raise morale by a noticeable margin if only because the soldiers will fight harder to dissect and criticize the" Kanzeon teases as you set aside the stacks of paper for further study and reflection "More flawed and amateur examples among them, might I suggest we broadcast the wonderous and poignant "My sorrows are equaled only to the sight the migration of the noble Cliffjumper"?"

You made a mental note to burn that particular affront to all of the poetic history of Long-Jia

"Too late, I've archived it!" Kanzeon laughs, but only briefly, as try as she might, she cannot ease the tension and dread that heralds the coming battle "I can at least try, can't I?"
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>>5189334

The tension that settled over the war camp seemed to spread to all corners of the world. Silence reigned, and it felt as though you walked amongst shades and phantoms as you joined the most important and solemn strategy meeting you have ever taken part in. The lesser generals and officers who were not penning messages or contacting their loved ones over radios and wetting the ground with the tears they shed, stood at attention like so many painted statues or macabrely stuffed corpses. They clutched their metals, fanned themselves nervously and looked on which front they would be deployed as Jinhai and the Other kings of war, Yin Lei, Lai Song, Dai Niu and Yan Zihao crowded over the war table, debating and arguing ferociously as they redeployed and reallocated every resource at their disposal. So intricate was their planning that they, rather than moving pieces that represented regiments, battalions or company's, moved individual needles representing on of the thousands upon thousands upon thousands of fighting men who had survived the war to its bloody climax or were just as likely fresh recruits. The imperial army numbered, rather than hundreds, thousands, tens or hundreds of thousands had swelled to a size where it could only be counted as millions and from a glance you could tell many of the present tacticians feared that it would be reduced to the size of the armies of the prior era. The era which by your will ended.

And despite the great size of the army, it was still the second largest ever fielded upon Shangrala, for Nitya Sinha's horde were, though thinned, still seemingly without end. Taking your place at the table, you joined the debate. Lai Song all but demanded a full, unrelenting assault, a lightning strike that would fall repeatedly on the remaining forces of the butcher king, a tactic the Shan agreed with, seeking to avenge their dead upon the last enemy they could reach. Dai Niu and Yan Zihao calmed the tempers of the Lord of Cavalry and Lord of the silver Lions, and offered a counter proposal of creating a fortified series of trenches around the battlefield, from which the smaller imperial army could defend and force the Vishnu forces through choke points. They, however, abandoned this initial plans as the Black general pointed out the flaws within it, and soon he and Yan Zihao were rapidly debating and theorizing with Lai Song and Dai Niu of devising a formation that was both easily defendable but able to match the aggression of the Butcher's armies as they marched to breech his walls.

You lent your own wisdom, speaking and lending your own voice to the discussion when you believed it prudent to do so, while Jinhai remained wholly silent, eyes darting over the every changing battle plan his fellow kings of war devised and tested through simulated battles. Dozens, maybe even hundreds of stratagems were presented and denied as each of the storied generals spotted glaring weakness the others could not.
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>>5189335

Yan Zihao and Yin Lei found the most flaws, as their generalist approach to war and tactical genius only matched by the other, spotted the flaws in the more cautious tactics of Dai Niu and the aggressive strategies suggest by Lai song. You to, helped and hastened the effort to find the one tactic that could achieve victory without condemning all generals and officers of the imperial army to march to their graves with the weight of the deaths of millions of their country men on their consciousness.

And in fact, you were the one who suggested the final strategy, that was agreed on by all other leading generals, and thus was presented to Jinhai, who, with further council from Yin Lei and Yan Zihao, altered it further, adjusting the battleline and formation of the five splinters the imperial army would break into to surround the Vishnu temple city. The artillery and heavy weaponry line, had not been moved once, as even the most novice general present well knew the risks of shelling the city and none dared to risk becoming known as the man or woman who advised the first emperor of the Long-Jia dynasty to risk planetary devastation by moving even a single artillery piece, tank or steel giant an inch from where they now stood.

The final troop arrangements were set and the meeting was concluded, but before you departed, you placed hand upon Jinhai's shoulder and reached into his mind, wind whispering to reveal to him the true shape of the strategy you, The Black General, Old Fox, Lord of Cavalry and Dai Niu presented to him.

"I fear, my brother, that the butcher king has heard our discussion already and plans to counter it, having doubtlessly found a way to pierce the protections we have placed to prevent such eavesdropping" You spoke into his mind, the emperor closed his eyes, having yet to say a word as you transmitted the battle plan to be view directly by his mind's eye

"I suspect as much myself, considering the grueling resistance we were met with for the duration of our trespass through his kingdom" Jinhai thought back after a moment of hesitation "He has no concern for casualties, both armies stretch across the horizon and blot it out, the goal of the strategy was the minimize casualties sustained by our side, while still posing a chance to defeat the butcher king once and for all"

He turned to you and smirked, eyes glimmering with intrigue

"I also knew you would have some trick, some cunning deception, hidden in your sleeve to play, but figured you would not do me the privilege of being informed of this scheme" Jinhai's thoughts continued "as you have a habit of keeping secret your grandest and most masterfully performed intrigues, but tell me, Lieren, as now the butcher cannot hear our voices or read our lips, what is your true strategy to win this war for good of all virtuous men who call Shangrala their home"
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>>5189336

"My forces will drop into the city itself, like a steel rain, my sons and I shall battle side by side as the best warriors and soldiers the noble nations of our world can offer become as arrows falling into the heart of the Vishnu beast" You explain

"Steel rain...I'm sure that is what the chroniclers will name this battle, should we emerge victorious" Jinhai thought, placing his hand upon your chest, before saying "Should I perish this day, Noble Brother, carry my body to be buried where we first met, to bring some redemption to the home of my good-wife, and sing songs of me to my three children and raise them in my stead, teaching them the lessons of life you once taught me"

"And should I fall, my emperor, bury me where my journey began. I need no grand memorial or statue to preserve my memory, just a simple grave beneath the fields of my harm, so I may in death help them flourish" You say with a wink "though I know this wish will be ignored and a statue will be raised, either by your hands, my father's, Kanzeon's or a flock of Journeymen"

And with that, you departed, to ready yourself for war.

Which "Drop pod" will you enter and which squad will you attach yourself to, Lieren?

>Feng, Liang and Jiang's. Your first companions, friends and brothers. Fight alongside the "mundane" Brothers of the panthers and show the Butcher the strength of Nothing

>Aruna, Michah and Elezar's. Men who came from different societies and even different world. Show the slaves of Kong Nue the might of unity

>Nikephoros and a handpicked squad of your sons, including the most potent psykers amongst them. A father fights most ferociously when defending his sons, and the reverse is also true

>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain

>write in
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>>5189338
>>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain

He is the fortunate son after all
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>>5189338
>>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain

Makes sense to lead
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
It's time.
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>>5189338
>Nikephoros and a handpicked squad of your sons, including the most potent psykers amongst them. A father fights most ferociously when defending his sons, and the reverse is also true
>>5189323
Nobody seems to remember that the more options people choose, the less potent they all become.
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>>5189358
How much potency is lost by having Lieren pick up pieces of paper anon?
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain

Let us cut down all would be champions and grand machines of war, let us see through all ambushes and make the first dent in all their defenses; our brothers and sons will widen the gap left in our wake
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>>5189362
The majority of votes in this quest has seen multiple options win. Anon's complaint wasn't specific to that single one. But I'm sure you were aware.
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>>5189338
>>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
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>>5189338
>>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
Is there anything stopping Lieren from imbuing in all 300 of his sons a drop of his power, Golden Sea fills a Thousand Vessels? I dont recall the exact name of the technique, but. Yeah can we do that for all our sons and everyone else falling from the skies? Except for our Null bro. He got the burpies when we tried that with him.
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>>5189338
>>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain


If it could be possible to plan a Warp Anchor it would be great, but it might damage it self from the impact. We should see what we can do for take over the defenses
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain

>Go with the Fortunate Son
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ec0XKhAHR5I
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
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>>5189338
>>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
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>>5189392
I'd imagine it has a limit of a thousand. for some reason.

>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head.
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Ok lads I have an idea, when we fight we mantle something let us mantle ourselves in the sense become the incarnation of victory the surrounding army sees us as

From what we've learned we basically become X when we do it because we pretty much have a bubble reality thus we can become unbeatable if people believe us so and it's their collective will and our own vs the enemy.
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
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>>5189338
> Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain.
As if there were any other choice.

>>5189392
>>5189471
I don't think there's a limit to how many people Lieren can 'touch', but rather how much of his focus is diverted to aiding them. His familiarity with them might also factor, since it's obvious easier for him to reach out to say Aruna or Feng than to someone he's only known a couple days.

>>5189481
I'd argue for 'Harmony', since it's in direct opposition to Khorne (and Chaos in general), and is at the root of Lieren's greatest work - the Journey.

If Lieren can, as you suggest, draw strength from the faith and belief of the millions of Long-Jia who follow in his example, then we very well could deny Nitya Sinha the favors of his parasite-deity.
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
Struggle time
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>>5189496
Didn't we succed in powering the entire army/battalion once, but it was weaker for each one? So I think the limit is more of a soft one, where at some point it's spread so thin that it might as well not be there.
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>>5189514
True. Still, it's worth noting that all of the Primarchs grew stronger over time, so Lieren might very well be capable of greatly empowering his whole Legion by the end of his story.

Imagining how salty and butthurt the Chaos worshippers are going to be gives me a childlike giggle.
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>>5189517
>The quest ends with Lieren sitting in the golden throne to empower all of humanity at once.
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>>5189338
>>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
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>>5189338
>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
If we can function as a diversion within a diversion, all the better.
Plus I want to ensure that Dae-Hyun lives past this.
He will die whole goddamnit, not in a ceramite straight jacket.
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>>5189481
Why not take the mantle of Lieren then?
Not the Lieren that exists, but the image of Lieren that our countrymen and Legion have internalized.
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>>5189481
>>5189752
So like....do as the Orks, but humanity flavored?
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>>5189764
>Post yfw Ork-Shangralan poetry
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>>5189788
>mfw the average Ork has a better understanding of poetic language than most Imperial scholars
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>>5189788
Tall with golden eyes
That humie shows too much wit
Gork will slap the git
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>>5189879
Ork haiku confirmed
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>>5189338

>Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain
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>>5189820

Word boi. Ork bard.
Specialty: Causing fights between enemy factions/allied groups.

Causing fights in general.
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Calling the vote now, sorry for the late update.

Your brand marks your head as the greatest prize, and you need no protection. With Dae-Hyun alone, leap with your most noble of children into the fray, leading the Steel Rain:21

Nikephoros and a handpicked squad of your sons, including the most potent psykers amongst them. A father fights most ferociously when defending his sons, and the reverse is also true:1

Total votes: 22

So Lieren will, alongside Dae-Hyun, drop without protection/ assistance, into the fray, heralding the steel rain and fighting as father and son against the whole of the Vishnu menace for a time

Writing now

And, the theme for the reckoning: https://youtu.be/l76unGjRtBs
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Oh how the air screamed. The sound of explosive shells ripping through the sky propelled through engines that existed only through a paradoxical cascade of destabilized reality and malformed gravity erupted around you and the pilotless transport ship that carried you to your destined battle. Searing rays of sunlight focused through rows of mirrors and concave glasses that stretched for countless leagues in negative space between reality and the realm of thought and emotions burned through the atmosphere, igniting it into a hellish storm of heat, while lances of crystalized light pierced the air, creating a tangle web of every shifting death. Nuclear rays and weaponized teleportation beams distorted the distant and chemical make up of the air as your steed carried you forward, guided by Kanzeon's distant hands. The Vishnu's anti air defense systems were truly astounding, every trinket and fragment of forgotten technology they held, they weaponized and turned toward the skies in a vain attempt to shoot your from it. Like a row of archers trying to hit a sparrow with a single arrow each. Tunnels that tore through reality and space spiraled like vortexes through the sea of clouds.

It would be impossible for your forces to even approach the city without you drawing the attention of every gunner and artillery man within it. The malevolent demi-intelligences guiding the automated defenses, were just aware enough to realize the value you embodied. A chance to be made truly sapient. You closed your eyes, listening to drumming thunder of the final days of this most pointless and barbaric of wars. But you were not alone, besides Kanzeon's protective presence and her steady stream of frustrated noises and snarled curses, your most noble and virtuous of sons stood at your side.

Dae-Hyun stood silent next to you, in the open hatch over looking the smog shrouded expanse of the city built upon paradoxes and designed to exist as an affront to all logic and accepted laws of physics and reality.

"What a shitstorm" He drolly spoke, the lenses of his tomb lighting up with life as he commanded it to raise from its nearly position, the weaponry you gifted him to replaced the crude, but certainly effective weapons bequeathed to him by your farther powering on and spinning to life "Never thought I'd be the first Astarte to fight alongside his genesire, nor did I ever conceve it would be in such a ferocious battle. Look at them down there, like ants beneath us, as we fly through a storm churned up by all the toys they inherited from their bitch of a queen"

"That's my sister your talking about, Son. if you reach her central core, make sure to fire a salvo at it for me" Kanzeon's voice resonated through the metal hull of the ship "Your vessel can't take any more punishment, its only still in the air because I will it to be, it is without exaggeration, falling apart at its seams"
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>>5190674

"So it would seem" You laughed, as the wall you had pressed your hand against was torn away by a gravitational anomaly that carried with it a squirming mewling ball of mutated flesh "Are they firing magical beasts at us"

"That did appear to be a degenerated mutant shot into the sky, think they used a catapult?" Dae-Hyun asked as the generator allowing the ship, or what remained of it, to deny gravity was destroyed as a spiral of green killing light deconstructed it at a molecular level "Does it matter, when we're about to jump in and whip their sorry asses"

"I am glad to see you in such high spirits, my courageous son, I had feared your present circumstances had sent you into a deep well of depression and malaise" You said, grinning as your altitude dropped and started to plummet as more and more of the transport you took to reach your destination was peel away, like the skin of a peach.

"I was made for this, father Lieren. Remade in your image to wage war for humanities sake, and I'd be shaming my fallen brothers and sisters if I didn't face my death with a smile and coy remark" Dae-Hyun spoke, a mechanical whirring emerging from his armored and very heavily armed cage "By this shit can's calculations, we are exactly a second away from arriving at the predetermined Coordinates for our jumps"

"Excellent, let us summon the rain" You state, stepping forward and onto nothing, outstretching your hands as fell through the air like a rock

"GET FUCKED!" Dae-Hyun roared as he sprinted after you, the "eyes" of his suit blazing as he shot down the salvo of missiles that shot up to greet the both of you, unleashing a storm of rods launched by means of an onboard railgun, replacing the rocket fabricators he had carried for his earlier battles against the butcher's dogs

Pressing your legs together, you raised one hand and flattened and pressed the knuckles of your other against it as you curled it into a fist as you fell to the earth like a spear thrown from the heavens. By you calculation you would impact in the center of a former gladiatorial arena in a few moments, and so spent the precious little time that remained until you reached the earth centering your self and ensuring your would maintain a harmonious state of mind for the duration of the battle to come.
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A comet fell, surrounded by golden fire. A shockwave erupted from its landing site, as the ground was cracked and ripped asunder from the forces carried by the first warrior to successfully breach the unholy cities iron shield. The weaker beasts, the chem thralls and surgically retarded ape men were thrown through the air like leaves in a hurricane. The stronger, the vatborn, cybernetically augmented and heavily mutated fodder gathered, howling and shrieking, driven mad and to a height of frenzy that impressed even the daemonic servants of the blood god by implanted gene codes. They were bowled over and knelt, as a second rush of air followed the first shock wave.

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>>5190675

The elites, the champions and true sons of the land of Vishnu, those who had endured the gifts of the blood father stood stalwart, gnashing their teeth and smashing their axes, swords and spears together, their more advance armaments powering on as their unnatural and augmented senses alerted them to the second challenge that had dared to enter their domain without fighting through legions of their man shaped war dogs and mutated thrall beasts.

And, it were these men, these warriors of the dark and violent impulses that lay buried in the hearts of all men and creatures, the thralls of Khorne, that made up the first casualties of the war.

The first, tusked beast of a man whose flesh had been torn free from the muscles that grew from him like tumorous growths trampled his own soldiers to be the first in the fray. All of his strength was meaningless, when a spear handed strike of the fog panther style reduced his titanium reinforced skull into slivers of steel painted with grey matter and ceberal fluid. The second, a two headed brute with the legs of a tiger, was felled by an axe kick, taken from the night crane style, that launched one head towards the sky and sent the other twisting around until it only remained connected to its neck by empty skin. The third of the first wave to charge the Golden eyed Giant and his towering, metal son, was wiser than the first and waited for Lieren of Nothing to be distracted by dispatching the first two. Pushing his body to its limits through increasing its adrenaline, he shot forward, blade of light igniting on his wrist as he struck the giant warrior from behind.

And found himself being whipped through the air, as the primarch performed a single step of the carp dance, ducking under his leaping legs, pivoting around and taking hold of his hooved leg at its ankle. And this overconfident fool was used as a bludgeon to kill the forth, fifth, sixth, seventh and eighth casualties of the battle.

Nine, ten, eleven, twelve, thirteen, fourteen, fifteen and seventeen joined the tally as the dreadnaught containing the great bear of terra rose to its feet, and from its wrists bathed the rest of the initial wave of defenders with a stream of aerosolized, super heated plasma which was followed soon by a storm of sharpened iron rods that flew from strange, metallic chests strapped and secured to his back, that were not an upgrade of his suits onboard weaponry, but rather a weapon's platform jury rigged to it.

And so, the first of many drop zones was cleared as the first containers of warrior rained down upon the city, taking advantage of the distraction that drew away the eyes of every fighter within its non Euclidean, dimensionally confused expanse

Like a storm of steel rain.
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>>5190676

"Come, does your god not delight in your own blood being shed? Why do you hesitate, dogs of Nitya Sinha! I am standing right here! You know the brand upon my brow promises great rewards should the head that bares it be presented to your dark master, separated from its body" You mocked, the remains of mutated screamer still in you hand, all that remained of the corpse being a shattered length of bone and the hoof at its end. The rest of the bastard was scattered across the ground, as you face

"Valorous and indomitable" Dae-Hyun remarked, as he fired a salvo of bolter fire in the line of frozen vishnu "I suppose their primitive faith considers dying while standing still to be a glorious death, religious fools"


"Come! Come! Face the giant and his son!" You shouted, crushing the head of the first to rediscovered their bloodlust with a swing of your arm that atomized both his skull and the bludgeon of bone and hoof "AND DIE LIKE THE DOGS YOU ARE!"

What is your next course of action, Lieren?

>Carve a path to the wall of the cities, fighting through extra dimensional spaces and streets of altered geometries while battling the monstrosities of the city with Dae-Hyun

>Reconnect with the first landed force and establish a perimeter within this city of arcane technology and abused reality

>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed

>March for the center of the city, drawing away the wall's defenders as you fearlessly face the fiercest resistance the vishnu can muster

>Write in
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>>5190677
>Take out the AA batteries.

First, ensure our boys can get in.
Next, draw their focus.

>GET FUCKED! Day-hyun roared as he sprinted after you
Son, have I ever told you that all the poetic words and idioms in Long-Jia cannot express how deeply I love you?
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>>5190677
>Reconnect with the first landed force and establish a perimeter within this city of arcane technology and abused reality

>Write in
Perform your greatest technique of "golden sea fills a thousand vessels" and crush the twisted worshippers of the blood God street by street
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>>5190677
>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
Without anti air, the rest of the boys can come in unmolested, and any air power we have will have an easier time.
A good first step.
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>>5190677
>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
Air superiority always helps, even if you can't bomb the target.
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Air superiority. So we can bomb the enemy when we bring them into the real world.
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>>5190682
+1
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>>5190677
>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
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>>5190677
>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed

It should give us the possibility to drop in with more soldiers. There is still the problem of the walls and just how big the citadel is. If they start changing the battlefield or move away the relevant parts, things will become worse. If we can find a way for stabilize the citadel in reality, it would be better. Without all those suns miniutarized, layers and bubbles of realties compressed or the great machinery detonating.
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>>5190677
>>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
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>>5190677
>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
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>>5190677
>It should give us the possibility to drop in with more soldiers. There is still the problem of the walls and just how big the citadel is. If they start changing the battlefield or move away the relevant parts, things will become worse. If we can find a way for stabilize the citadel in reality, it would be better. Without all those suns miniutarized, layers and bubbles of realties compressed or the great machinery detonating.
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>>5190677
>>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
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>>5190677
>Lieren killed a Khornate Vishnu with the dramatic arm wave
Kino. I'm glad our most fortunate Son is here to witness it.
>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
We do still have a job to do. We can't start the real offensive till that AA is history.
Plus it wouldn't hurt to keep moving given how we're basically a two spiders in a beehive.
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>>5190676

>Reconnect with the first landed force and establish a perimeter within this city of arcane technology and abused reality

Strategically we need a foothold in this place before attacking anything
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>>5190677
>>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
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>>5190682
+1
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>>5190677
>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed


>Reconnect with the first landed force and establish a perimeter within this city of arcane technology and abused reality
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>>5190677
>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed


>Reconnect with the first landed force and establish a perimeter within this city of arcane technology and abused reality
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>>5190677


>>Reconnect with the first landed force and establish a perimeter within this city of arcane technology and abused reality

>>Take out the anti-air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed

Changing vote
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>>5190677
>Nine, ten, eleven, twelve, thirteen, fourteen, fifteen and seventeen
so what killed the sixteenth?

>March for the center of the city, drawing away the wall's defenders as you fearlessly face the fiercest resistance the vishnu can muster
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>>5190677
>>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
>>5191260
Alpharius, of course.
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>>5190677
>>>5190677
>>>Reconnect with the first landed force and establish a perimeter within this city of arcane technology and abused reality
>>>Take out the anti-air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
Changing to this.
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>>5190677
>Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed
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Calling the vote now

Take out the anti air batteries, rushing to reach them before you and Dae-Hyun are swarmed: 17

Reconnect with the first landed force and establish a perimeter within this city of arcane technology and abused reality:6

Perform your greatest technique of "golden sea fills a thousand vessels" and crush the twisted worshippers of the blood God street by street:1

March for the center of the city, drawing away the wall's defenders as you fearlessly face the fiercest resistance the vishnu can muster:1

Total votes:21

So Lieren and Dae-Hyun will take out the city's defense to allow for an easier landing for the rest of their forces

Writing now

>>5191260
Congenital heart defect
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And so it begins, a great brawl. A man and his son against a sea of blades held by their berserk, inhumanly outraged owners. But it is not a bloody affair, for you strike with the precision of the night crane style, only resorting to the ferocity and deadly blows of the fog panther style. You shut down organs by jabbing nerve clusters and the merridians of the cloned bodies. Their blood flows in reverse but it does not repair. Before you weapons arrive, carried by the molten husk of the ship that carried you and Dae-Hyun into the cities furiously beating heart in the middle of the defending army, you choke and throttle the vishnu, snapping their necks or causing their hearts to explode with palms strikes, or cause them to choke to death on their own blood and the oils and chemicals surging through their augments with kicks to their stomachs. Dae-hyun burns a path through them, plasma and flame devouring their mutated flesh and melting the steel they have reinforced it with.

Once you are able to collect your weaponry, you martial arts exposition ends, and instead you hold two mighty rods. One produces bolts of lightning and the other creates streams of super heated air that boils the Screamers who charge against and attempt to swarm you alive. In silence, you and your son burn through the field of bodies and madmen. A storm of fire consumes the city streets, as the two of you move with unparalleled swiftness, sprinting through spheres of reality orphaned from the rest of the world and through alleys that stretch or shrink unnatural. Twisted amalgams of torturous cybernetics and mutated flesh hunt you, guiding the swarms of the Vat-born vishnu commanded by the naturally born warriors who sold their nation's soul and people's future to Kong nue to become obstacles in the path you carve with plasma, fire and lightning. Some of the living barricades fall, when the branch snapping breezes renders them paralyzed, others melt as the fragile balance of the chemical cocktail allowing them to fight beyond the point of death is upset and turns into an acidic, flesh eating slurry. Others are lifted into Dae-hyun's metal gauntlets, their life crushed out of them as their mortal shells are reduced to little more than pulp and splintered bones. Others he steps on, screaming insults and mockery, drawing more suicidal fools to challenge The Bulwark of humanities future.

According to the schematics Kanzeon and Mari drew after scanning the entirety of the cities unnatural expanse and altered dimensional spaces, the rat tunnels through reality you're fighting through now where gravity is inverted is just a single gateway away from the generators powering and suppling the numerous anti air defenses. There is only one problem, the city has spewed out a horde of Vat born screamers, mutated brutes, magical beasts, cybernetic horrors and half daemonic wretches of such numbers even a primarch and dreadnaught cannot fight and break through the line of bodies
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Well, at least not both of you. They're swarming towards you like ants over a corpse. Most of them do not have weapons and merely crawl, naked and still coated with the embryonic fluid of their birthing vats trying to drown you, maddened by the implants and wires crossed and fused to their brains and the chemicals that have entirely replaced their blood. These cretins cannot live beyond this battle, they are merely a wall of flesh meant to impede and crush you to prevent you from removing the city's shield. They flow over one another, rubbery flesh and flexible bones making them appear less as men but rather a mass of bloated, red skinned eels.

Luckily, Dae-hyun and you found stable ground upon a mass of broken weapons and concrete slabs that had been torn down through the sheer force generated by a million feet stomping towards your position. Before you, is the vortex of red flesh and frothing, iron fang filled mouths.

"There's no end to them! What foul technology have they turned to produce such abominations, and in such quantities" Dae-Hyun's synthetic voice rumbles as he, in vain, struggles to protect your shared and rapidly "Sinking" raft of wrecked weapons, bodies and the walls of buildings that crumbled as the hordes' approach caused an artificial earthquake that even managed to shudder the created realm you now inhabit. Stolen suns blaze as you lift masses of the flowing mass of newborn screamers with spirit's touch and press them together to create a floodwall of corpses that soon is crushed beneath the weight and mass of their squirming brethren. So you make another wall, and another wall, and so on, as the dead are slowly crushed into a slurry and ground down into pools of grease, blood and liquidized skin. The horror is indescribable, but it is the only means to keep yourself and Dae-Hyun from drowning beneath the screaming, living sea of squalling infants born insane.

And then, a dark laughter fills the road between the hidden spaces in reality, and you realize Avalokiteśvara is dumping the whole of her spawning pits, emptying her thousand fold mechanical wombs in an effort to bury you beneath a sea of raving flesh and howling lunatics. Gnashing teeth, scratching nails, flailing limbs and tears. They're crying. Confused and driven to a murderous frenzy before their minds could even awaken and realize they were men, before they could know what they were. Half born clones, lashing out at any source of heat or sound that approaches them

A sea of screaming teeth and snapping jaws

"You should feel proud, Dae-Hyun, the dark mistress of this palace of villainy has honored us She believes the two of us alone to be equal to the whole of the army assaulting the city's walls" You mock, laughing and sneering as you throw you arm upwards drawing on the deep fires of your soul to lift the sea and cause it to part "She works against us directly, fearing what a virtuous father and son possessed of unshakeable will and resolve can accomplish"
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>>5191507

The sheer psionic force you manifest causes the air to vibrate as you forcefully seperate the flowing horde to create a path through it and then.

Then you feel the greatest psionic effort you have ever summoned, so great that you can feel the weight of the mass of bodies you lift pressing down on your arms, against the bones within them, so heavy it feels as though your arms with first break and then be torn from their sockets. Every muscle in your arms has tensed and has become so tightly stretched that you fear you'll soon begin to be torn apart at the seems. Blood flows from your nostrils, down on your lips as loud, electric buzz fills your skull joined by the cracking of ice and crackling of fire.

And despite this heroic, unheard of mental and spiritual exertion, you can feel the strength of the spirit's touch waning as something smothers the manifestations of the raging fire of your will.

The opening through the sea will only remain open for long enough for you or Dae-hyun to make it through the gate. You can see the central core powering the anti air batteries that keep the rest of your forces from safely landing in the city.

Only one of you can make it through to achieve the mission. Unless...

What do you do Lieren?

>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries

>Run forward and toss Dae-Hyun out of the tunnel, so he will not be crushed by the seething mass of vishnu. Cripple the cities defenses with your own hand

>Increase the burn rate of your soul, and innovate a technique that will allow you and Dae-Hyun to cross the distance in a single step

>Realize that the portals spilling out slimy bodies to join the sea must be connected to Avalokiteśvara's true body. Tell Dae-Hyun command passes to him, and throw yourself into the dark to pursue your prey

>Write in
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>>5191509
I dont know. If we leave him by himself, I dont think plot armour is gonna help him.

Much as I want to flit into our enemies stronghold. .
>Increase the burn rate, innovate thousand league step
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>>5191509
>Increase the burn rate of your soul, and innovate a technique that will allow you and Dae-Hyun to cross the distance in a single step
This was teased a few times already, it would come in handy now.
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>>5191509
>Increase the burn rate of your soul, and innovate a technique that will allow you and Dae-Hyun to cross the distance in a single step
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>>5191509
>>Increase the burn rate of your soul, and innovate a technique that will allow you and Dae-Hyun to cross the distance in a single step
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>>5191509
>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
This is good actually, it keeps them focused on us while Hyundai gets the objective. As soon as the AA is fone, nore can airdrop directly to help us.
We only need to hold the line for a bit longer.
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>>5191509
>>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
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>>5191509
>>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
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>>5191509
>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
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>>5191509
>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
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>>5191509
>>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
Big fan of this update.
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>>5191509
>>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
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>>5191509
>>Increase the burn rate of your soul, and innovate a technique that will allow you and Dae-Hyun to cross the distance in a single step
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>>5191509
>>>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-Hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
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>>5191509
>Increase the burn rate of your soul, and innovate a technique that will allow you and Dae-Hyun to cross the distance in a single step
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>>5191509
>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries

New techniques in the middle of warped and twisted place that whilst surrounded by the presence of Khorne!?

Fuck no, disaster awaits raaan
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>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
>Realize that the portals spilling out slimy bodies to join the sea must be connected to Avalokiteśvara's true body. Tell Dae-Hyun command passes to him, and throw yourself into the dark to pursue your prey

Throw our son towards the objective while we pursue the snakehead.
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Hey so who remembers the name of the super psyker little girl? Remember how she's ungodly powerful? I don't doubt we'll be taking her with us while we're crusading, but how should her space magic education go?

As far as self defense goes, I think Grandpa Ghozi (forgot his name but you know who I mean) has probably taught her some offensive techniques, but maybe we should focus her education on more civilian and defensive uses. Learning from Isha aspect warriors and Bonesingers how to fix things like constructs and bodies. How to put up shields and barriers, wards, banishing techniques, mental defenses to make her even less likely to fall to chaos.
But mostly I think she should have the chance of having something close to a normal childhood. A theater of war is not healthy for a growing mind.
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>>5191509
>Increase the burn rate of your soul, and innovate a technique that will allow you and Dae-Hyun to cross the distance in a single step
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>>5191859
meixu I believe, as far as education and crusading that is still quite sometime off seeing as luna was on the cusp of being invaded. Probably around 10-20 years off if I had to guess, so she has plenty of time to live her life, and I thinking that joining us should be left up to them
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>>5191854
Actually, this is great.

We send our son at a major objective but we dive at the heart of the enemy.

We will serve as a most useful distraction as all the hordes are directed at us.

>>5191509
>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
>Realize that the portals spilling out slimy bodies to join the sea must be connected to Avalokiteśvara's true body. Tell Dae-Hyun command passes to him, and throw yourself into the dark to pursue your prey
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>>5191888
>888 trips
Get out oh my thread Corne!
That sounds like a pretty good idea. Maybe she'll stay on Shrangrala to refine her control. Maybe she'll become a teacher or find a husband to start a family with. Though honestly? I'm pretty sure she'll want to come with us, but you're right about that being way later.
But, there's nothing stopping us from doing our own crusade. Rowbootie Girlieman had his own slice of empire in the form of Ultramar or whatever that part of space is called. Lieren could do just about the same until his father finds him.
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>>5191509
I will change my vote >>5191591
to
>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
>Realize that the portals spilling out slimy bodies to join the sea must be connected to Avalokiteśvara's true body. Tell Dae-Hyun command passes to him, and throw yourself into the dark to pursue your prey
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>>5191896
hmmmmmm. OKAY!

>>5191509
>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
>Realize that the portals spilling out slimy bodies to join the sea must be connected to Avalokiteśvara's true body. Tell Dae-Hyun command passes to him, and throw yourself into the dark to pursue your prey
>Grant our mightiest son a drop of our power, utilizing the psykerist technique the "Golden Sea Fills a Thousand Vessel."
I do not doubt that Avalokiteśvara has placed defenses around the batteries, so strengthen our son will increase the odds of his success, but more importantly. The odds of his survival. Once the AA batteries are destroyed, we should ask that Kanzeon send a few drones to aid him via Steel Rain. I do not doubt that he will be drowned in bodies.
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>>5191854
>>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
>>Realize that the portals spilling out slimy bodies to join the sea must be connected to Avalokiteśvara's true body. Tell Dae-Hyun command passes to him, and throw yourself into the dark to pursue your prey


Good idea
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>>5191509
since my option won't win at this point.
changing >>5191527
to support >>5191902
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>>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries.

He'll get it done. Certainly has the firepower.
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>>5191859
>>5191888
meixu ye
and guozhi
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>>5191509
>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries
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I can relate to Lieren all of a sudden. To be cast out and forgotten.

it's been so long Malal, almost 48 hours....
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>>5191509
>Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries.
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>>5192977
worry not citizen malal is simply doing battle with the void dragon to fix his internet
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>>5192977
When was Lieren cast out?
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the super long wait, lots of shit refused to work until now.

Increase the burn rate of your soul, and innovate a technique that will allow you and Dae-Hyun to cross the distance in a single step:6

Throw Dae-Hyun through the gate and tear apart the walls of the dimensional rift to escape from the sea of flesh while Dae-hyun destroys the Anti Air batteries:17

Realize that the portals spilling out slimy bodies to join the sea must be connected to Avalokiteśvara's true body. Tell Dae-Hyun command passes to him, and throw yourself into the dark to pursue your prey:6

Grant our mightiest son a drop of our power, utilizing the psykerist technique the "Golden Sea Fills a Thousand Vessel.": 2

Total votes:23

So Lieren will throw Dae-Hyin through the breach to complete the mission, and attempt to escape the tunnel filling with cloned bodies by tearing his way out of the sub dimensional plane itself

Writing now

Sorry for the long wait, again.

>>5193824
Correct
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>>5193882
Hooray!
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>>5193882
Still miffed anons dont want to use the enmass power boosting skill. It's like that want our sons to be less likely to survive.
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No. its too risky to experiment. More than your own life is at risk this venture. All of Shangrala may fall into a darkness deeper and more impenetrable than the twilight era whose end was heralded by your arrival from the stars. Innovation, courage and foolhardy ris taking shall not win the day nor the war. However, a learned general knows when a sacrifice is required to achieve a greater victory. You turn away your now immenseness power, bolstered to unseen heights by the countless candelights that drift around and through the blazing, silver moon lit golden sea of your soul, from the rippling, churning mass of living bodies and writhering cybernetic tendrils tipped with rotating blades, catalysts produces vortex of gravitation flux and beams of sunlight so concentrated they reduce all they touch to dust in a matter of minutes.

Yes, a learned general knows that the lives of men can purchase victory when all else fails, when tactics, position and morale all fail. But a truly great general, such as the Unbroken thunder's howl Yin Lei or The old fox Yan Zihao, realize that the life of a general, especially one famed and renowned, if spent can achieve victories only the lives of entire armies could otherwise purchase. And you have studied the works, campaigns of both these great generals and learned directly under their tuteladge and sought their council nearly more times than you can count. Without a moments though or hesitation, you lift Dae-Hyun with spirit's touch, the pressure and durance of wielding your powers wearing upon not only your mind and soul, but your body. Strips of flesh strip from your finger tips as you take a fraction of a moment to look into your son's "eyes" for what very well may be the last time.

A wry, jackalish smirk curls over your lips as he tries to voice his protects, reaching one great hand out to grab a hold of you as his synthetic voice raises so loudly as to damage the speaker's of his tomb of armor's broadcasters. But, with a lash of your arm, Dae-Hyun is sent away, to carry on and complete your noble mission in your stead. Alone.

You close your eyes. Clap your hands together, and slowly draw your arms to your chest as the stage you stood upon begins to collapse, swallowed by a sea of red hued flesh. The river of gushing blood and gore, has worn straight through the concrete and now forces the bodies that formed the mortar and supports of the grisly island away.

The gate leading out of this hell of bodies and fury shudders, flickering as the creator of this dark city tries to shut off the route from your son. But his flight reaches its end before the door forward can be slammed shut. He rotates his body through the air, with a unexpected dexterity, purely metal feet and hands grinding against the metal grating as he tries to gallop back through the portal to once more stand fight by your side. Pushing your palm forward, you create a wall in his way.

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>>5193943

He punches against it, causing the barrier of golden fire to shimmer, as the gate way shrinks and blinks away. Leaving him on the other side and you trapped in the hell of the raging sea of flesh. Avalokiteśvara is laughing no longer, and you can feel her seething rage in the air as all is replaced with gnashing teeth, dragging nails and slithering, eel like flesh. Your foots begin to fall into the surging mass of corpses and newborn mad man.

"Well, I have found myself once more in a reflection of hell, death surrounds me" You muse calmly as you consider the ever rising mass of infantile killers and lunatics "Violence seeks to become me. Oh how the righteous rage within me burns and screams to be quelled. Hark, lady of darkness, shall the builder once more become the destroy"

"JUST DIE YOU INSOLENT, COCK SUCKING WORM!" She replies. And so the tide rises. And so you reveal your fangs and claws, drawing upon what fire remains roaring within you to tear apart the fabric of this artificial reality to escape it. Either fleeing into the ether or more hopefully, some other part of the city.

"You speak as though death is punishment, as if living is a crime. Death is the counterpart of life, and its greatest mystery. To be cherished, admired, respected and understood" You sneer, making a very rude gesture as you begin cloud walking to escape the torrent of snapping teeth and furious flesh.

What do you do, Lieren?

>Break through the tunnel and escape the danger, by condensing the Cloak of the ever burning will: Spirit Subjugating Blade around your bleeding fingers and scythe through the fleeting fabric of this man made plane

>Follow the sounds of war drums, and choose to face daemons and devils rather than the churning sea of bodies and your wife's maddened sister

>Search for a weak point in the extra dimensional tunnel's walls , as you lend your power to Dae-Hyun, fearing more for his well being than your own

>Court death, and linger in the tunnel filling with clones and crushed corpses, to deprive the Vishnu as much man power as you can

>Write in
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>>5193944
>Search for a weak point in the extra dimensional tunnel's walls , as you lend your power to Dae-Hyun, fearing more for his well being than your own

>Write in
We know how Mari feels and our wife, reach out and find the mad bride of the bloody king, then using our mark to weaken the veil, create a tunnel for but a moment to bring ourselves to her.

the plan is to end her before she even knows we arrived there..


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My theory is since these are tunnels use our mark to soften the walls as it were then break into another side
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>>5193944
I'll back this >>5193948
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>>5193944
>>Search for a weak point in the extra dimensional tunnel's walls , as you lend your power to Dae-Hyun, fearing more for his well being than your own
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>>5193944
>>Search for a weak point in the extra-dimensional tunnel's walls, as you lend your power to Dae-Hyun, fearing more for his well-being than your own.
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>>5193948
support
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>>5193948
+1
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>>5193948
+1 I like your creative thinking anon
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>>5193948
>support
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>>5193944
>>Search for a weak point in the extra dimensional tunnel's walls , as you lend your power to Dae-Hyun, fearing more for his well being than your own
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>>5193948
Why not, let's try and skip to the boss battle.

>Support.
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I'm just trying to make daddy Emps proud by doing this efficiently. Kill the Not!AI driving everything and the stuff will start to crumble/turn inwards
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>>5193948
+1
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>>5194129
I fear for Lieren's health since he seems to suffer a worse backlash when using psyker shit in this place
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>>5194154
It's because we are already unleashing titanic amounts of psychic force.

You cant hold up a car over your head and then throw a shot putt ball without exertion.
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>>5193948
+1
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>>5193944
>Break through the tunnel and escape the danger, by condensing the Cloak of the ever burning will: Spirit Subjugating Blade around your bleeding fingers and scythe through the fleeting fabric of this man made plane
"Remind yourself that overconfidence is a slow and insidious killer" - Man who ruined everything
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>>5193944
>>Break through the tunnel and escape the danger, by condensing the Cloak of the ever burning will: Spirit Subjugating Blade around your bleeding fingers and scythe through the fleeting fabric of this man made plane
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>>5193944
>Search for a weak point in the extra dimensional tunnel's walls , as you lend your power to Dae-Hyun, fearing more for his well being than your own
The write in that has 9 votes at the moment is stupid to be frank, once again the thread tries to one shot the boss and every time it has been tried Lieren got fucked while failing utterly and Lieren keeps getting punished harder and harder every time he fails to learn the lesson.
Also if we do teleport straight to her core not only will we be fighting essentially a self aware necron tomb she will be flooding in every soldier she can and Nitya will join in as well because it would be a objectively perfect opportunity to kill Lieren. Lieren WILL DIE if he tries to fight alone, it takes a army to kill a self aware city even if it is empty.
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>>5193944
>Break through the tunnel and escape the danger, by condensing the Cloak of the ever burning will: Spirit Subjugating Blade around your bleeding fingers and scythe through the fleeting fabric of this man made plane
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>>5194305
Everyone understands that we will be facing scores on scores of enemies here in the bowels of the beast anon. But lieren is acting on what the emperor told him, to end this quickly and decisively no matter the cost, acting as both bait and executing a decapitating strike at the same time is inline with lieren's preference for efficient tactics. While it is highly dangerous it sets them on the back foot as they expected us to have a prolonged advance through the non-euclidean streets that they have control over. Causing countless loses since they can lock our forces off in pocket dimensions however and whenever they wish. By forcing their focus onto us our sons and forces will be facing severely weakened resistance as we raise hell. Obviously this isn't the I win choice as we are going to have to fight every step of the way just to get to her heart, but this will be a real danger to their command and control capabilities
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>>5193944
>Follow the sounds of war drums, and choose to face daemons and devils rather than the churning sea of bodies and your wife's maddened sister
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>>5194305
It's not that stupid, and it isnt oneshotting, so read the bloody option.

Its attempting to do the exact same as one of the other options, but NOT going through the endless hoards of retarded murder apes.
Making our own portal path, rather than using theirs. Its skipping to the boss battle, which is a hard one, which you got right. But I doubt it is an instant death.
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>>5193944
>>Search for a weak point in the extra dimensional tunnel's walls , as you lend your power to Dae-Hyun, fearing more for his well being than your own
Also, nice dubs Malal.
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>>5193948

Fuck it, why not? Let's get right to her and end this, the sooner the better!

+1
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>>5193944
>Search for a weak point in the extra dimensional tunnel's walls , as you lend your power to Dae-Hyun, fearing more for his well being than your own
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>>5193944
I'm changing to this>>5193948
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>>5193948


this looks good
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Calling the vote now.

Search for a weak point in the extra dimensional tunnel's walls , as you lend your power to Dae-Hyun, fearing more for his well being than your own:17

Attempt to use to the cursed brand to purposefully weaken the veil to create a path to your mad sister in law:12

Break through the tunnel and escape the danger, by condensing the Cloak of the ever burning will: Spirit Subjugating Blade around your bleeding fingers and scythe through the fleeting fabric of this man made plane:3

Total votes:22


So lieren will reach out, and attempt to locate Avalokiteśvara through the warp by tracing her killing instinct, and boldly try to turn the cursed brand to his advantage to pave his own path towards her.

Writing now

How to ruminate on what this Write in would lead to

https://youtu.be/7HHkJH_0leU
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>>5195284
If it doesn't lead to insanity and everyone confused as to what we're doing, I want my money back
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Skipping and leaping through the air with grace that could not be matched by the flights of the most agile and elegant of birds of prey, you take flight over the screaming sea of bodies as they futilely reach towards you and gnash and snap their teeth, their one mortal desire in their cruelly short lives to inflict some harm upon anything in revenge for the pitiful, malformed and inhuman state they were forcefully born into. You truly pity the cloned wretches that make up the sea of flesh and blood, for, unlike their brothers, they had never even had a chance to experience a life even if the only life they had a hope of leading was one drowned with blood and entirely devoted to battle and dealing death. Tears form in your eyes, as you reflect upon the supreme sadism of the mere action of pouring out half woven incomplete genetic defects, condemning them to a torturous and crushing death all to try and kill one man

Human lives, once limitless in their potential and the forms their deeds could take, now reduced to an existences akin to boiling oil poured from a fortress' walls. Despicable, vile, abhorrent and truly evil. To not even be allowed to fulfill their purpose as weapons, to not even be allowed the chance to die fighting for the wicked beliefs that guide their hands to murder and kill. What a waste. How pitiful. How disgusting. You bury the rage building in your heart, smothering it and burying it with cold conviction and methodical calculation. Trusting fully in your eyes, you look away from the mass of corpses and half living bodies beneath your soles to search for a weak point in the tunnel's walls, testing the integrity of the transient reality formed to serve and support this extra dimensional cavern.

And then, a thought occurs. You recognize Avalokiteśvara psionic signature, her spiritual presence. While her bloodlust and killing intent has been well hidden by the armies and hordes of murderous brutes and subhuman savages and mutations she cultivates, it is unique. For all the time you have spent in fair Kanzeon's pleasant company and meeting the meek Mari's gentle heart, you have learned their "Scent" as it were. They are made of the stuff of human souls, the children born of countless sacrifices. While the roiling, feral rage of the Vishnu army can cloak the dark fire of their mistress' wrath, you can recognize her astral presence beneath the din of disembodied voices and wayward thoughts. Oh how the collective unconscious of these mad men and manufactured soldiers roars like thunder, like the wardrums of gods and devils, shaking the Empyrean itself with their marching song.

Kill. Kill. Kill. Kill. Kill.Kill.Kill. KILL FOR KHORNE! A mantra repeated endlessly into the void, through snarling mouths and frothing growls and throat tearing roars. But, beneath the din, beneath the cacophony, you can sense the familiar otherworldly presence.
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>>5195308

Of beauty tarnished with madness, twisted by the darkness within their heart, corrupted and turned rabid through a ancient, unimaginable powerful feeling of resentment. A brightly glowing soul, massive in its expanse. the same kind of existence to your beloved and forceful Kanzeon, and similar to your great and noble father. A mass collection of souls pressed and condensed into one entity, one soul far more powerful than the sum of its parts. But, rather than feeling the soothing love of Kanzeon or the revitalizing confidence of your far, all you meet is a deep, dark pit of apathy and hatred beyond even your most black of rages.

And looking into this abyss crackling with pain, paranoia, wroth, sorrow, yearning and hatred, through the arcs of red lightning and spouts of black flame, you can see the curled form of Avalokiteśvara, Her soul, resting far beneath the upper levels of the city. Even in spirit form, she is a monstrous sight to behold. Covered in scars, caked in dried blood and desiccated strips of skin and flesh. Her black hair has been died red with blood and knotted and coiled, matted together from the moral filth of her two genocides against the Vishnu. Black streams of sinful impurity and degeneration flow from her squinted, bloodshot eyes, as broken scrap code flows around her.

Unlike her sisters, she does not dress herself with concepts, phrases or messages that allow a glimpse of their true nature and character. She is dressed in nothing, but the blood she has shed and the wounds she imagines she bears. Her nails and teeth have been sharpened into talons and bestial fangs. Looking at her now, you cannot help but wonder, when she truly went mad. Was it when she forced her crew and passengers to fight to the death, or was it when their descendants crippled her and trapped her in the mud and soil, to fester in her hatred and rot in her failure to "Avenge" herself.

Shaking your head, you push such thoughts from your mind and take a bold step forward. It matters not, when she lost herself to the darkness, when she sold herself and pledged her services to chaos. What matters is you have found her trail, and can now at last commence your hunt. The overwhelming stench of spilled blood fills your lungs, almost choking you as the gentle, salty fragrance of freshly shed tears washes against you as you bow your head and press forward, attempting to walk straight through the veil separated between the unseen of reality. The border between the real and spiritual. The boundary between the materium and the great sea.

You recall, a discussion you once shared with Magnus, in times of peace. When you two brothers shared your research, findings, philosophies and so much more. Your discussions concerning the nature of the Empyrean, though brief, were most illuminating. And you remember, now, the manner in which the Prosperans conceptualizes the realm of spirits.

As a great sea.
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>>5195309

A sea can be parted. Can be dammed. Can be rerouted. Can be blocked and reshaped. Your eyes flash open, and pressing your hands together, you focus all of your Qi into the center of your brow, directly where the arrows carved into your brand direct and attempt to increase the potency of the curse placed upon you by five self entitled gods.

The waves begin to part and roll back, as you willfully, confidently walk forward and wade into the waters of the great sea, using your vast and nigh unconquerable will to bend the energies and wild winds of the empyrean around yourself to forge a path directly into the chamber of the black heart of the iron mistress of war.

And then, you felt the weight of the gaze of the mightiest most bloodthirsty of all wicked spirit's fall upon your back scornfully as the raging waters churned more wildly and turned as red as warm blood as they threatened to rend your legs apart and carry you away in several bloody chunks of ruined flesh.

Did you really think it would be so simple, demigod?

You spread your legs, adopting a sturdy unmovable stance further fortified with both Qi and anger as the tunnel you carved began to crack, as red, black taloned arms reached through. The safe path you've made, now became a road of a thousand trials as the servants of Kong Nue that had before been watching eagerly to see you fall or succeed, now fought and struggled to test their mettle against your own

If your heart remains a coward's hurry like a hare harried by wolves, or else fight and die to prove yourself worthy of matching blades with my champion, I care not which you choose. For already, rivers of blood have been spilt in my name this day. Shame yourself, or regain your honor as a warrior

"Damn you Kong Nue" You snarl, eyes tightly shut to keep them from bleeding from even catching a glimpse of the sickening radiance of the high minister of murder, his mockery burning in your chest, trying to infect you with his mindless murderous compulsion. But seeds so rotten can never find purchase in the soil of a virtuous man's heart! The spirit's insults mean nothing to you, for you would sacrifice all of your honor and forsake your face entirely if it meant driving his kind from fair shangrala! Skipping forward, you begin to sprint, hoping you will not be slowed by any devil breaking through the waters.

Do not fear, Lieren. it will not be a ponderously slow Monomachy should you prove less than fleet, you will be harried by dozens at once! But so what! Is a battle not more pure when it is one against many! The rebel against the cause! I to, have been worshiped this day, no?

You preferred when "Gods" were quiet and kept themselves from the affairs of men rather than mock and sneer at you every time you took a step in the direction of their demesnes.
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>>5195310

https://youtu.be/36v6XBpa7CA

Dae-Hyun was furious, and so he took his frustrations out on the enemies swarming around him like so many radioactive roaches. He could not put words to frustration. Tears poured over his pallid, clammy cheeks as the auto senses of dreadnaught tomb glitched and flickered, as they struggled to keep up with the demands of his battles. Sensors, targeting arrays and atmospheric readers and a dozen other loud, blaring sub systems struggling to keep updated with the ever changing field of his advance through the strange, alien seeming refinery he was fighting through to destroy and burn down. A mission he should have been performing with his genesire.

His mind turned back to that moment not long ago, where he saw his father's kind golden eyes for what may be the last time, as he smiled and bowed as he threw him from the tunnel, choosing and entrusting him to carry out this vital duty while leaving himself in mortal peril! Immediately, the astarte's mind and the simplistic machine spirit of his armored shell rebelled, and turned away from that memory and the truth of his situation. Adrenaline was pumped into his desiccated veins, as his rage grew and grew as he crushed the painful thoughts away from his mind, His conscious and subconscious minds both refused to entertain the possibility that he had lost his father so soon after meeting him. He couldn't die. He couldn't die. There must be a plan, there must be a plan. He must trust the primarch's judgement, must follow his commands, don't think.

Don't think that he may have died to save his pitiful life, that he would smile and without a thought give his life in exchange for his own. Roaring, Dae-Hyun entered a stage of a sort of feral, meditative trance. Emptying his mind of all thoughts, he unknowingly practiced Lieren's own method of cultivation, emptying and erasing his mind of all conscious thoughts and desires. But instead of quiet serenity and slowed breathing to facilitate a calm within his mind and soul, the Dreadnaught's synthesized false voice roze in a wordless, screaming prayer.

A bellow rage and despair that could scarcely be heard over the explosive impact of bolter shells, the bell like reverberation of the rail guns strapped to his back, or the sputtering roar of his flames. Power fists crackled, as like a wild beast, he grabbed a hold of two large, gene modified brutes in a chemical state of bliss, unaware of the horrific death that awaited them for approaching a rabid bear. They were soon reduced to bubbling, greasy stains on the power plants flours, as Dae-Hyun sprinted forward, pivoting his chassis around, rotating at the hip as he turned and condemned a wave of Screamers to a fiery death, while another round of bolter fire detonated and sent robotic monstrosity tumbling forward as its treads unspooling.
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>>5195312

Dae-Hyun leapt, and ripped the metallic abomination apart with his power fists, pouncing atop it as it tried to pierce through his chest with a blade of crystalized light. Which was then torn from its arms and taken as a spear by the rampaging astartes, who fled from his thoughts by throwing himself into battle with reckless abandon, fleeing from the unpleasant possibility that hounded him like the very specter of death itself.

So, Dae-Hyun became death to endure the conflicting, agonizing emotions boiling within his head. A metallic roar rose from the speakers of his dreadnaught frame, as he grabbed hold of one of the jackasses who thought iron armor could protect them from a bolter shell. The spikes covering it bent beneath his touch, as he drowned the cybernetically augmented and horrifically mutated barbarian in promethean fire. With a flick of his wrist, he changed the ammunition to the "Darklight lance" his father had gifted him, and after aiming for a fraction of a second, destroyed one of the many pylons powering the city.

The facility shuddered beneath the feet of his armor, but Dae-hyun did not pause to rest. Driven by instinct, he continued his mission, eliminating anything that got in his way with extreme prejudice. But, within the screaming metal shell, the astartes within begged, pleaded and all but prayed to be allowed to see his father's smile again
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Elsewhere, while father raced to escape the blood god's tide and Son fought to avoid contemplation...(Choose your cutaway)

>The greatest of the brothers of the panthers carried out their hunts in the city streets

>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates

>Noble knights of the lands of snow and sand fought together alongside The giant men from the stars

>A furious emerald eyed goddess sent an avatar into the city to join in the fighting

>Write in
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>>5195313
>The carp turned dragon emperor

Jinhai is always a joy to see. His methods of observation and martial prowess is fantastic.
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>>5195313
>>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
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>>5195313
>>The greatest of the brothers of the panthers carried out their hunts in the city streets
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rtkaUZvMaG8&list=PLx1Z_8Mg77sB_b9sqUGTmpHRa3l5uyxBa&index=6
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>>5195313

>>The greatest of the brothers of the panthers carried out their hunts in the city streets

Poor, Dae Hyun
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>>5195313
>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
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>>5195313

>The greatest of the brothers of the panthers carried out their hunts in the city streets
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>>5195313
>>A furious emerald eyed goddess sent an avatar into the city to join in the fighting
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>>5195313
>>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
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>>5195313
>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
Nitya is gonna go after Jinhai, isn't he?
We've got to see that.
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>>5195313
>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
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This is an expected fight for 40k Marines. Not so much 30k.

Talk about a head start

>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
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>>5195313
>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
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>>5195313
>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
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>>5195313
>Noble knights of the lands of snow and sand fought together alongside The giant men from the stars
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>>5195313
>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
Surely nothing bad will happen to Jinhai as he enters the city of blood and stars.
Surely.
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>>5195401
>>5195500
Nitya promised to kill him. The man doesnt strike me as the sort to renegade on his word intentionally.
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>>5195313
>>Noble knights of the lands of snow and sand fought together alongside The giant men from the stars
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>>5195313
>Noble knights of the lands of snow and sand fought together alongside The giant men from the stars
We haven't heard that much from them.
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>>5195313
>Noble knights of the lands of snow and sand fought together alongside The giant men from the stars
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>>5195313
Tough choice.
If Jinhai is fighting Nitya then
>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
If not
>Noble knights of the lands of snow and sand fought together alongside The giant men from the stars
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>>5195313
>The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates
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>>5195313
>A furious emerald eyed goddess sent an avatar into the city to join in the fighting

WIFE ANGRY
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Calling the vote now.

The carp turned dragon emperor lead the charge through the breached city gates:12

The greatest of the brothers of the panthers carried out their hunts in the city streets:3

A furious emerald eyed goddess sent an avatar into the city to join in the fighting:2

Noble knights of the lands of snow and sand fought together alongside The giant men from the stars:5

So Jinhai's cut away wins

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>>5195977
What would happen if you breed a cat from Prospero with a Fog Panther from Shangrala?
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>>5195981
A weak and sickly hybrid I would imagine
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>>5195981
A visit by the inquisition.
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An unusual fog rolled through the jungle, thicker and whiter than any other recorded in the annals of history, where it mingled with black and pale blue smoke rising from wrecked vehicles and the slowly smoldering corpses of men of Long-Jia, Shuni, Bask, Vishnu and yet further origins out in the stars. A canvas of milky air and burning fumes fell before Jinhai's clever eyes, as his imperial banner, torn and riddled with holes burnt through with plasma fluttered proudly above the head, held by a mechanical standard bearer in the form of a Dragonfly drone. He was the first man in a rolling charge, consisting of the entirety of the forces he lead, no bolstered by the three other assault groups recombining with the main imperial army. His was the first to breach the wall, Feng's expert aim being the cause, rather than the repeated assaults of Lai Sky Riders or Xue sappers or Vishnu/ Bask Counter charges or the mysticism of Lieren's students. A single round, fired from an out of date rifle, pierced the neck of a thrall that had been converted into a headless meat puppet through a horrific cybernetic surgery. This single, skillful shot heralded the fall of the city's outermost walls, as the abomination fell into the inner workings of those most troublesome a deadly machines that causes vortexes and killing fluxes within the air.

The explosion of unseen forces and gravity tore the wall apart, and Jinhai immediately seized the opportunity to advance into the City's streets. Broadcasting his voice across the land, The Carp turned Dragon Emperor ordered a mass charge, knowing the battle could not be won by attrition or subtler tactics.

Elazar and his knights were at his side, riding Cui Warmongers bred from Nothing's own fields and raised by Lai song himself. Volunteers from the Shuni Provinces charged into battle alongside these zealous and bravehearted men, lead by a strange, heavily scarred preacher who called himself Tahir. Aruna was at his back, joined by all of the other Vishnu Chiefs. Soldiers of the Shan, Luo and Huang gathered under Jinhai's personal Banner, as The Dai formed a defensive line around the breech in the wall, selflessly forming themselves into a shield to defend against counter-attack and repelling efforts. The Black General and Old Fox coordinated the assault, as Jinhai had commanded them to for he would be unable to lead his armies when he was their vanguard.

The Queer fog grew thicker, but the first emperor of Long Jia could see through it, the visor of his helmet shaped into the image of a roaring dragon revealing to him the world hidden beneath the fog. A blind charge of Vishnu was the first opponents he met, sent out by their betters to brave the fog and measure the strength of the force that was beneath it.
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>>5196007

Many of this first wave were slain before they could even see Jinhai's shadow, as wraiths moved amongst them, lead by Feng as the Brothers of the Panthers faded into the fog and flowed with it into the city, soon becoming one with its shadows so completely Even the advance technologies integrated within Jinhai's helmet were unable to discern them from the gloom and fog.

With the Six Fanged spear, Jinhai took the head of the screamer leading the charge, as the rest of his brothers were trampled beneath the hooves of the Bask Cavalry. Now Lai Song Joined the fray with his sky riders, raining a shower of deadly light upon the dozens of berserk animals and twisted deformities that were sent out to die against the rifles at Jinhai's back. A champion, a general or elite rushed into the fog.

A heavy brass collar was upon his neck, and a single baleful eye of fire burned through his half metallic skull. This was the first true obstacle, however Jinhai had trained his spear against Lieren. The axe wielding lunatic soon fell, as the Six Fanged Spear slipped beneath his slave collar and pierced his throat. A beam of destroying light was required to end him, but Jinhai had become accustomed to the use of the Six Fanged Spear and so seamlessly fired the flaying ray as he used the haft of the ancient weapon to vault and fling himself over the overly muscled warrior as he stumbled back in the throes of his most horrific death. He landed, in time to see Rudra and Aruna tackle one of the poor souls forceful degenerated into an ape like being, and begin to beat it to death with their bare knuckles as its rider was shot down by a row of fresh soldiers who somehow found themselves on the frontline of the final battle of this hopefully final war. Jinhai frowned, remembering the man Lieren freed from the Celestial Incarnation Palace, who had been similarly twisted and deformed. Bowing his head, he lifted himself from the ground and retrieve his spear.

Raising it high up into the air, he activated the microphone in his helmet, and his voice once more traveled across the heavens to fill the world to all of its corners.

"Virtuous children of Shangrala! Hear the roar of the Dragon emperor! We swim up stream a river of blood to reach the throne of purest, blackest tyranny! Steel your hearts and cast away your Carp scales! Fear not death for it is natural , fear not pain for without it there could be no joy!" He roared, as he performed the carp dancing, swaying and stepping beneath a flurry of sword and axe blows, sidestepping to avoid a barb toothed drill thrust towards his chest. Preserving the momentum of his dance, he lunged forward and thrust his spear's head through the heart of the cyborg monstrosity that brought the drill down. Though its jaw was fused to its torso through a mass of wires, black iron and pulsating glass tubes, the inhuman metal beast coughed up blood as the lights in its mechanical eyes burned out.
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>>5196008

Jinhai pivoted on his heels, turning and freeing his spear by wiggling it like a carp's tail and thus tore it from the flesh and internal armor plating it had been stuck to.

A skinless wolf thing pounced, aiming for his throat. Jinhai ducked, and the beast was impaled on the bayonets held by his two most trusted bodyguards, Zian and Rong. It was only as they carried the monster to the ground, that Jinhai realized it had human hands and eyes. Disgust welled in his stomach as his bowels filled with ice. But he maintained his composure and cool head, peering through the fog as he continued his march through the city streets, marking down several locations he was certain served as hidden entrances into the constructed world of alleys and miniature worlds the butchery king had woven through his greatest city.

At each, he lifted his spear, wordlessly commanding platoons to enter into the open folds torn between reality and hold the entrances against whatever may come through the tunnels bored through the air itself. Jinhai himself continued on, the resistance he and his army met nowhere as fierce as what they had all anticipated when they surrounded the city.

A smirk crawled over his city. Lieren had achieved his objective then, and drew the eyes of all the murderous horde to him and his sons. Through this gallant display, he had allowed the imperial army to rush into the city nearly unopposed. However, as Lieren had often told Jinhai, even a Lion may be overcome by mice. So, Jinhai chose to search for signs of his beloved brother and mentor's passing slowing his advance to study his surroundings.

He soon ceased the effort, as his surroundings had become incomprehensible and dreamlike, and more than once he found himself nearly falling into the sky from the road or suddenly clinging to a wall of a building. The construction of the city became impossible, and focusing for even a moment at any one angle threatened to drive him mad or catatonic from the sheer mental effort that was required to even begin to understand what his eyes were seeing. So he kept his head down, and followed the sounds of fighting.

Metal clashing, explosions, the snapping of lasers, the sizzling of plasma, the shrieking of darklight, the crackling energies of power swords, the roaring of the chain-toothed weaponry preferred by the vishnu. How war has changed. How frightening and strange it has become. Sounds once unfamiliar and unnatural to his ears now were familiar and common. The subtle whispers of a neural whip, the thrum of Aeldarian Anti gravity engines, the whirring and hissing of the armor he wore. Had he heard any of these sounds years before, Jinhai would be worried he was surrounded by wicked spirits. Shaking himself from his reflection, He looked over to see a Bask knight tackle a Screamer off a rooftop, falling upwards and down and alley way as he struggled to slip a knife between the boar tusked monster's ribcage.
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>>5196009

A mob of Shuni Irregulars butchered a mass of pink flesh that shot out tongues and tendrils in an attempt to add their bodies to its bulk, regenerating and healing wither every strip of flesh it stole from them. He saw an Aeldari and a Monk of the Wanderers in the fog combining their power to vaporize a tide of screamers that soon crashed over them as it was truly without end. A black ironed colossus took the heads of five friendly Vishnu in one stroke of his blade Every step he took revealed to him a new terrifying scene of defeat or one of triumphant struggle and victory.

Following the sound of explosions and thunderous footsteps, Jinhai lead his honor guard through the maddening streets and into places beyond Shangrala. Unnatural cubbies and burrows dug through existence, sitting like open, weeping wounds in the air, sucking in the mist and fog of the morning.

Zian and Rong stood at his side all the while, at some point Aruna joined his advance, along side Manu and Kamakshi. Somehow, he found himself in the company of the Michah and the holy man from Elazar's council, Gaizka who was frothing at the mouth like a wild animal, as well. He could also sense a familiar presence in the air, and wondered if he was being trailed by a wanderer in the fog or Aeldari volunteer. Once more Jinhai shook his head, the plume attached to his helmet dancing like a dragon's mane, revealing the colors of his infantile imperial dynasty hidden within it.

The sounds of combat he sought were growing closer, and as he rounded the corner with his guard and its unasked for reinforcements, Jinhai saw something he was not expecting.

A scene of slaughter. Carried out against at least a dozen of Lieren's sons, their armored forms lining still on the ground, torn into pieces.

A giant taller than Lieren stood amongst them. More machine than man or devil. The elegant and beautiful cybernetics Lieren had gifted shangrala were perverted within his flesh, what little of it remained. His hide was as red as the standard, motherless Vishnu dog they crushed beneath their heals, but beneath it, Jinhai could see where he had stapled and sewn additional, twitching muscles beneath it. Veins bulged and crawled beneath the skin exposed beneath the bulky mass of metal were silver and gold intermingled, though its natural colors were hidden beneath a coating of blood.

He was grossly distended, with sparking wires and liquid filled tubing snaking into his arms and torso. Strange pearls of light and fires radiated from within his body, pulsating with every movement he made no matter how subtle. Could he truly be called human? He moved through the remaining Sons of Lieren like a scythe through wheat, but those corageous warriors from the stars did not show a single glimpse of fear as they stood their ground, and directed their fire at the blur of murderous movement charging towards them.

Jinhai studied his opponent, as he met the children of his closest friend in battle.
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>>5196010

All of his fingers had been replaced with sharpened daggers, honed to a razors edge that wavered like water as he opened his fists. Blood dripped down the tips of those blades, revealing small wires that waved in the air like worms bursting through the earth. Neural interfacing wires. He was covered in plates of armor bolted to his flesh, like the chitin of a beetle. His claws erupted into light, as a powerfield activated and thrummed loudly, speaking of his killing intent. Metal bones broke through the base of his neck and shoulders. He had eyes like a flies, a thousand cameras shoved into the sockets of his skull, glowing crimson and scarlet. His face had no skin, and had been reshaped into the shape of an ogre's skull.

Within his mouth whipped a black tongue, dancing over a rotating saw of fangs equipped with powerfields, whirring through his mouth like the teeth of his soldier's axes and blades. Beneath the smell of blood and smoke, a medicinal unguent's bitter aroma surround the ogre of the Vishnu, as braids of wheat gold hair parted to reveal four massive bundles of wires and glass tubing. Two great horns rose from his brow

Jinhai's eyes flickered, seeing the colors of the men taken from Lieren's home, scattered across the ground. And at once he knew why the remaining four of his sons fought as viciously as they did. They were not only defending the corpses of their brothers, but their friends. One was cut into five pieces with a flick of the Butcher King's wrist, and another was caught in his jaws by the shoulder.

Jinhai reacted then, for, as much as he studied Nitya Sinha, he had only looked upon him for a second or two.

He whistled, smacking the haft of his spear in the ground. And Nitya Sinha vanished. The giant in his jaws fell to the ground, his arm missing. Jinhai Narrowed his eyes, leveled his spear and took in a deep, ponderous breath. Closing his eyes, he trusted his sense of touch, and listened to the vibrations in the wind. Nitya Sinha was too quick for him to see, so he must be like a carp avoiding the talons of a hawk.

He stepped to the side, and stabbed his spear upwards. There was a sound of metal shearing metal. And he opened his eyes to be met By Nitya Sinha's own.

In his hand he held Rong's head. Beneath his foot, was Zian's neck. He began pressing his leg down as a truly malicious smile crossed his lips

Jinhai's mind went blank, rage erasing all other thoughts as a loud, hissing static filled his skull.

"It has been too long since I killed a king" The butcher king growled with a voice so unnatural, Jinhai could barely stand listening to it "I was hoping I'd find you before I found my brother in law. I'm sure he'd enjoy seeing your skull amongst my collection, don't ya think? Are you...perhaps upset I have killed your friends, so simply"
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>>5196011

"Emperor, not a king" Jinhai snarled back, striking for Nitya's eyes. The brute leapt back, clinging to a wall, leaving Zian to gasp for air. But he did not rise. His back was broken or he was dead like Rong

Jinhai swallowed his rage, and took control over himself, as the three surviving sons of Lieren surrounded him, their warmasks carved into the image of human skulls

"Even better!" The ogre shouted merrily, hanging from the wall by strange hooks attached to his feet "Never killed an emperor!"

"You won't" Jinhai dully replied, as the survivors of his honor guard formed around him, Men from all corners of Shangrala and Beyond joining together to defend the benevolent emperor of the new dawn.
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Meanwhile...

>*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*

>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara

>Dae-Hyun continued his mission of destruction alone, raining death upon the Vishnu sons of bitches *Control Dae-Hyun*

>Lieren stood his ground and fought back the hordes of Kong Nue, choosing to fight them rather than risk them escaping into realspace.

>Write in44r8a
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>>5196014
>*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*

>Lieren stood his ground and fought back the hordes of Kong Nue, choosing to fight them rather than risk them escaping into real space.


Man, controlling Jinhai would be so cool
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>5196014
>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara.
If we drop her Jinhai will get a chance in the moment of confusion to hopefully take out the mad king
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>>5196014
>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara
Kill the bitch and the battle is won.
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>>5196014
>*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*

>>44r8a
lol
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>>5196014
>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara
We cannot afford to get bogged down in the warp while shit is hitting the fan. If Avalokiteśvara goes down, this battle is pretty much already won, it'll just be a question of damage control. And making sure nobody ascends to daemonhood.

As much as I would like to control Jinhai... I don't think I can watch.
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>>5196014
>*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*

>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara
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>>5196014
>*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*
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Man. If Emps powers up Jinhai to Saint Status.....
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>>5196014
>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara
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>>5196056
I don't think he can do that at this point.
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>>5196056
He'snever going to live that long.
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>>5196014
>>*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*
Gettin' nervous here, fellas
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>>5196014
>Keep the focus on Jinhai

>But have Lieren run through super hell.

I want to keep fighting Nitya. This is Jinhai's great trial so it feels odd to take control, but ITS SO COOL!

Alas, Malal has finally grown wrathful against having so many similarly named characters and begun his purge! Half jaw Hu is next!
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>>5196014
>*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*
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>>5196014
>Lieren stood his ground and fought back the hordes of Kong Nue, choosing to fight them rather than risk them escaping into realspace.
we can't risk demons getting involved when we fight Avalokiteśvara
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>>5195981
It would need scientific and medical assistance to become a stable breed, the fog panther is a six legged predator living in a world with many mountain chains and constant fog. And there would be differences in gravity, sun light and so on.

>>5196014

>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara
Nitya did really bother in adding every single advancement he could have on his body and armor. A walking armory.
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>>5196014
>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara
Considering the thread decided for Lieren to race alone to Avalokiteśvara we might as well stick with it, Lieren is off the rails so he needs the most narrative armor. Hopefully Lieren wrecking the core even if he can't kill the target will either force Nitya to change targets, get distracted, or allow him to be swarmed.
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>>5196014
I'll change my vote >>5196124
to
>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara
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>>5196014
>>Dae-Hyun continued his mission of destruction alone, raining death upon the Vishnu sons of bitches *Control Dae-Hyun*
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>>5196014
>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara
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>>5196014
>*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*
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>Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara
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>>5196014
>>*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*
I think micro-ing Jinhai is the only way we're gonna be able to keep him alive. I'm not nearly as concerned for Lieren.
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>>5196014
>*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*
If Lieren can survive being "smited" by 4 chaos gods then he can survive fighting through a horde of Khornate demons, especially with the Love Sword.
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So are we going to become the new emperor of Shangrala after this war or will we raise his son to be emperor in his staid?
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>>5197846
>So are we going to become the new emperor of Shangrala after this war or will we raise his son to be emperor in his staid?

He shall be raised as a Saint and keep coming back to life to blast the gribbles with golden sparkly fire.
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the long wait.

*Keep the focus on Jinhai, and control him as he fights Nitya Sinha, while Lieren fights through super hell*:10

Lieren stood his ground and fought back the hordes of Kong Nue, choosing to fight them rather than risk them escaping into real space.:1

Lieren clad himself of armor of faith, as he fled from a pack of daemons as he raced towards Avalokiteśvara:10

Dae-Hyun continued his mission of destruction alone, raining death upon the Vishnu sons of bitches *Control Dae-Hyun*: 1

total vote: 21

So while Lieren clads himself in an armor of faith and sprints through the warp to reach Queen bitch, Jinhai will fight Nitya Sinha.

Oh boy.

Writing now

Theme for the fight https://youtu.be/RbFpDJsLYOU
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>>5197957

With anons controlling him, there's no way Jinhai can die now
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>>5197959
You will be blamed if he dies.
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Gouts of great black fire rose just behind your heels, filling the air with the fragrance of molten metal and burning blood. Flecks of drool and needle thin shards of bone and bronze fell upon your neck and shoulders. The world of spirits was flowing into the path you laid with every step you took. It flooded with blood, viscera and glowing chains of barbed metal. Bestial battle cries, frenzied roars and curses filled your ears as the words manifested on the baleful winds that carried them past the fang filled mouths of their speakers. The air had become a haze, and just being exposed to the winds of Kong Nue's demesne awoke your well collared rage from its slumber. But you kept it caged and kept your jaw clenched as you sprinted forward, just ahead of the rolling wave of wicked spirits and the land from which they hailed. The tunnel was collapsing behind you, and you very much did not want to be fall from its safety. So, you began chanting the mantras and lessons of the journey, manifesting the Cloak of the ever burning will to protect yourself from the corrupting forces surrounding you. Axes grinded, and swords were drawn and struck against razor edge shields. Lashes whipped and struck the fading ground beneath your feet, missing your ankles by a horse's hair as you leapt and bound away.

And all the while, you could hear the dark laughter of the high minister of murder, mocking you for choosing pragmatism and efficiency over honor. As if you every cherished the concept, or held it close to your heart! Kong nue was a great fool if he imagined you to be the same breed of man as Cui Fu, who would sooner place his head through a noose than suffer even the slightest dishonor! You dared not look back over your shoulder, knowing that the demonic horde at your heels would be comprised of the most hideously, abhorrently twisted thralls of Kong Nue and that to look upon them would wound your eyes and cause your pace to slow. A potential lethal mistake. Their could be no distractions in your flight from the enroachment of the self named blood god's realm and into the heart of Vishnu Tyranny and darkness!

But there was one distraction. Vaguely, you perceived the thousand fold candle lights that connected to and danced through the golden radiance of your spirit. You could sense them as they flickered, flared and were snuffed out. You men you cherished, loved and admired were falling with every step you took, but, so focused were you on your task and the advice your father gave you, that you were not aware enough to recognize any of them as they faded and were swept away like dust upon the wind.

But, even with your concentration and attention focused solely upon survival and achieving the goal of ending this most wretched war with a single blow, you could recognize a handful of souls in the vastness of the great sea. Like lanterns bobbing on its waters. The life forces of those who were most close and dear to your heart.
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>>5197970

Jinhai's is flickering. You do not know why or what danger threatens his life, but you are unable to ignore your friends plight. And so you dare to add a drop of your soul's fire to his own, hoping it will guard his flame from being snuffed out.

A moment later, any concisions thought ends as a large axe head is swung over your head and you must once against focus entirely on avoiding being hit and beaten down!
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Jinhai's hands trembled, as he faced down an ogre born of an unnatural marriage of steel and flesh, an afront to all that was and could ever be. A devil incarnate, mankind lessened and degenerated into a truly monstrous form. A tyrant who forsake his humanity and people, twisted them into living, slavering weapons. Sweated beaded on the Carp Dragon emperor's brow, it slicked his palm and filled his armor. His companions, some of the greatest heroes and fighters Shangrala, stood ready to face their death alongside him.

Neither the butcher king or those who opposed him moved an inch. And then, Jinhai felt his eyes begin to sting and burn from just looking upon Nitya Sinha's terrible visage, as if it had become so offensive to actually begin to sear his eyes. The moment felt as though it lasted for days. The muscles in his legs and arms began to ache and scream for relief as he kept his stance and forced himself to keep his eyes locked with the Iron Ogre's own. No one spoke, no one moved, all was still and silent. The sounds of battle and arcane machinery had become muffled, as every warrior measured their instinct and tested their skill against The butcher's own.

It was a strange thing, when one became a skilled enough killer, they could experience battles before they occurred. Some called this ability foresight, others named it intuition. It had kept many a swordsman from courting their death by realizing they were outmatched. Jinhai possessed this particular skill, and he was certain every man in his company did as well. And surely all of them, the greatest long jia had to offer came to the same conclusion.

What stood before them, clinging to the wall of the a building the curled in on itself for eternity, was their death. His killing intent was greater than Lieren's own, when he marched against the villains who once ruled that land. No, it was as if there was nothing within the grinning skull of this lunatic besides murderous rage and impulse! How could he even think to act like a man, let alone mock and scorn his opponents? He should be rabid beast! Unable to speak or act beyond its instinct, and yet, there he stood crouched, sneering, laughing and glancing over the mob that faced him, meeting the eyes of every valiant and courageous man.

His glowing teeth rotated, his claws flexed and sparked with emerald light. The machines he had replaced his eyes with blinked and changed color as the tubes running through his flesh filled with boiling, unpleasant looking liquid and elixirs.
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>>5197971
"My my, braver than most! Surely you must know for cattle to face the butcher himself is courting death, if I remember the term" The beast taunted, as he rose to stand up and spread out his arms

It was then the three remaining Sons of Lieren opened fire, shouting in their strange language, something that to Jinhai's strained ears sounded like "Fak'Yu". Was that perhaps the name of one their fallen brothers?. Jinhai's panicked pondering were interrupted, as he realized that Nitya Sinha was no longer a blur of motion to his eyes. It felt as though, for a brief moment, timed had slowed around him, allowing him to study the brutes movements as he sliced the "Bolter shells" as they spiraled through the air.

A cloud of dust and shrapnel hid the iron beast from view as Jinhai shook his head, recomposed himself, and adopted one of the most limber and weightless stance of the Carp Style. He blinked, and the butcher was upon them, claws raised.

Even matched against over a dozen opponent, the butcher king excelled, tossing Manu through the air with a crescent kick before driving his talons through the priest Gaizka's skull as he rushed him, flail raised. The light faded from the Holy man's eye, as Michah began cursing and firing at the monstrosities chest, stepping back besides the three sons of Lieren as they massed their fire and roared alongside their massive firearms. Aruna bellowed and charged, swinging upwards in an attempt to sever Nitya Sinha's deadly hand at the wrist. The villainous giant caught the blow. A strike from a dao equipped with a powerfield boosted to the utmost limits. A scarlet glow erupted from the clash, and the skull faced chieftain was sent careening through the air.

Kamakshi lowered her spear, and Jinhai did as well, as the two of them thrust and searched for exposed flesh through which to impale and pin the ogre.

Jinhai lunged forward, throwing out his arm and the spear it held with all his strength. Sparks flew, and Nitya Sinha took a step back in surprise.

In the three moments his assault abated, the survivors of his initial attack regathered as the butcher king brushed the tips of his knife tipped fingers of his chest, just above his heart.

"Curious" He cooed, considering the scratch Jinhai's thrust had left in his armor plating "Most curious indeed. That shouldn't have happened, shouldn't even be possible..."

The air tensed, and Jinhai knew that the battle would restart in a span of time so short he could scarcely comprehend it.
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I will not die here, you thought as you twirled the six fang spear, keeping its serrated head aimed at the throat of the wicked ogre that stood before you. Flashed of your beloved wife Daiyu, and three treasured children, Observant Wenling, Rowdy Liling, Gentle Bojing.

The memories of their smiling voices, their scents, their voices, gave you the courage to face down the incarnation of death itself.
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>>5197972

But what gave you the resolve to fight on, was not your young family or even the knowledge if you fell your beloved empire and all her wonderful, varied and virtuous peoples may once more become ruled by villains most foul. No, what filled your heart with bravado and allowed you to overcome the sheer killing intent of the black giant's fearful presence and aura, was your sworn brother and Mentor's memory.

Of when the two of you traveled through the lands of the Cui, and dared to dream of a prosperous future without oppression or cruelty.

Your dream for a better tomorrow empowers you, and so you take a step to close the distance between you and Nitya Sinha while he's distracted by the cosmetic damage you inflicted upon his metal hide.

What do you do, Jinhai.

>Declare your rank, name and ambitions and challenge the butcher king to a duel, hoping his sense of pride, sadism or some long buried concept of honored he inherited from his ancestors will drive him to accept and allow your companions to retreat to find reinforcements to ensure the butcher will die even if you are slain

>Lead a charge against Nitya Sinha, attacking ferociously and without fear, throwing yourself against him alongside those who stand before you. This is not an enemy that can be fell by a single spear.

>Gamble with your life, and see if the slowing effect will return when Nitya Sinha next moves to attack. Aim the six fanged spear and prepare it to fire. If you can once more follow his movements, the beam of deadly light is sure to strike him. But if not...

>Draw attention to yourself, and test your mastery of the carps dance against the butcher king's...everything!

>write in
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>Gamble with your life, and see if the slowing effect will return when Nitya Sinha next moves to attack. Aim the six fanged spear and prepare it to fire. If you can once more follow his movements, the beam of deadly light is sure to strike him. But if not...

ALL OR NOTHING!!!
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>>5197974
>Gamble with your life, and see if the slowing effect will return when Nitya Sinha next moves to attack. Aim the six fanged spear and prepare it to fire. If you can once more follow his movements, the beam of deadly light is sure to strike him. But if not...

This is the only method that managed to damage him so it's the only thing we can do
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>>5197974
>Gamble with our life.

To gamble is to test fate, But fate is the slave of fools! We will not die here!
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>>5197974
>Draw attention to yourself, and test your mastery of the carps dance against the butcher king's...everything!
Good lord this man is dropping named characters left right and center.

The first option is most likely "Jinhai dies, but so does Nitya (probably)" Which is not ideal.
The second is reasonable, but I am not convinced that it will actually injure him, much less kill him. And given his track record we can probably say goodbye to another 2-3 people from the gang.
Option three is gambling on killing him in one strike. Personally, I think killing the Khornate champion boosted by ancient technology who just finished murdering a group of Astartes and found the concept of taking a single scratch "curious" in one shot is VERY unlikely.
As for option four, if anyone besides Lieren stands a chance to dodge Nitya's attacks, it's Jinhai. Distracting him means others are less likely to die, and might injure him by attacking his blind spots. Unlikely to finish him, but it strikes me as more constructive then the other options.
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>>5197974
>Push your skill as the inventor of the Carp's Dance to its limit and fight your allies, fight a fighting retreat. Lure this slavering beast into the path of one of Lieren's war-walkers, what irony if it was the one made in your visage!
Tempted to just write "There's no shame in running to fight another day, turn and book it," but I don't think that'd be popular.
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>>5197997
*and with your allies
Probably should sleep soon.
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>>5197974
>Draw attention to yourself, and test your mastery of the carps dance against the butcher king's...everything!
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>>5197974
>Lead a charge against Nitya Sinha, attacking ferociously and without fear, throwing yourself against him alongside those who stand before you. This is not an enemy that can be fell by a single spear.
We aren't playing as a superhuman anons, just the best humanity has to offer.
We got to use guard tactics
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>>5198002
Charging blindly is suicide anon. A squad of space marines couldn't do anything to him.
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>>5198004
But so would fight alone.
My plan would be to use the six fang blast while he is distracted by the charge, I did not vote for it because it's the option that is winning so there is no need.
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>>5197974
>Lead a charge against Nitya Sinha, attacking ferociously and without fear, throwing yourself against him alongside those who stand before you. This is not an enemy that can be fell by a single spear.
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>>5197974
>Draw attention to yourself, and test your mastery of the carps dance against the butcher king's...everything!
>write in
through our comms "Those with firearms encircle our duel and wait for my signal"

it's time we pull a little perturabo move
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>>5197974
>>Lead a charge against Nitya Sinha, attacking ferociously and without fear, throwing yourself against him alongside those who stand before you. This is not an enemy that can be fell by a single spear.
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>>5197974
>>Gamble with your life, and see if the slowing effect will return when Nitya Sinha next moves to attack. Aim the six fanged spear and prepare it to fire. If you can once more follow his movements, the beam of deadly light is sure to strike him. But if not...
Jinhai TOTALLY would
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>>5197974
>>Declare your rank, name and ambitions and challenge the butcher king to a duel, hoping his sense of pride, sadism or some long buried concept of honored he inherited from his ancestors will drive him to accept and allow your companions to retreat to find reinforcements to ensure the butcher will die even if you are slain
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>>5197974
>Declare your rank, name and ambitions and challenge the butcher king to a duel, hoping his sense of pride, sadism or some long buried concept of honored he inherited from his ancestors will drive him to accept and allow your companions to retreat to find reinforcements to ensure the butcher will die even if you are slain.

God speed Jinhai, We love you.
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>>5197974
>Draw attention to yourself, and test your mastery of the carps dance against the butcher king's...everything!

Changing vote
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>>5197974
>>Draw attention to yourself, and test your mastery of the carps dance against the butcher king's...everything!
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>>5197974
>>5197974
>Lead a charge against Nitya Sinha, attacking ferociously and without fear, throwing yourself against him alongside those who stand before you. This is not an enemy that can be fell by a single spear.

all the other options feel like autokilling jinhai to me
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>>5197974
>Lead a charge against Nitya Sinha, attacking ferociously and without fear, throwing yourself against him alongside those who stand before you. This is not an enemy that can be fell by a single spear.

Just caught up, what a crazy ride, a journey even. I don't want to see our boys die, Jinhai die, but even at the apex of unaugmented humanity he's so unfairly outclassed-

I think the 'even lions can be worn down by mice' thing was a hint here, for both Leiren and Jinhai. We win with overwhelming numbers since we aren't superhuman enough to duel him properly. Jinhai is the Cui Fu against Leiren here, except he doesn't have to do it alone. Enough firepower and spears and eventually he stops having a torso, at least with the best of the best leading the charge. Bring him down boys, Jinhai goes home ALIVE.
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>>5198925
>>5198936
two people in the same house post and they have the same ID huh. Well that's gonna be hard to validate
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>>5198937
just as proof real fast
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>>5198937
>>5198947
You two have to find eachother and duel highlander style, it's the only way.
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>>5198947
>>5198937
You must fight for your ID
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>>5198947
BATTLE TO THE DEAF!
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>>5199049
Good thing I brought my ear plugs
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>>5199049
Noise marines aren't a thing yet, but we do have sonic weaponry.
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>>5197974
>Lead a charge against Nitya Sinha, attacking ferociously and without fear, throwing yourself against him alongside those who stand before you. This is not an enemy that can be fell by a single spear.

This fucking hard choice but since some space marines are left they can try and hit him with bolster fire as everyone charges
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>>5198937
>>5198947
>2nd Primarch Quest: No Way Home
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>>5197974
>Lead a charge against Nitya Sinha, attacking ferociously and without fear, throwing yourself against him alongside those who stand before you. This is not an enemy that can be fell by a single spear.
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the wait.

Gamble with your life, and see if the slowing effect will return when Nitya Sinha next moves to attack. Aim the six fanged spear and prepare it to fire. If you can once more follow his movements, the beam of deadly light is sure to strike him. But if not...:3

Draw attention to yourself, and test your mastery of the carps dance against the butcher king's...everything!:5
-"Those with firearms encircle our duel and wait for my signal":1

Push your skill as the inventor of the Carp's Dance to its limit and fight your allies, fight a fighting retreat. Lure this slavering beast into the path of one of Lieren's war-walkers, what irony if it was the one made in your visage!: 1


Lead a charge against Nitya Sinha, attacking ferociously and without fear, throwing yourself against him alongside those who stand before you. This is not an enemy that can be fell by a single spear.:7

Declare your rank, name and ambitions and challenge the butcher king to a duel, hoping his sense of pride, sadism or some long buried concept of honored he inherited from his ancestors will drive him to accept and allow your companions to retreat to find reinforcements to ensure the butcher will die even if you are slain: 2

total votes: 18

So Jinhai will lead a charge against the beast of iron, with those who bravely stand at his side, hoping to overwhelm him with numerical superiority.

Writing now

>>5198937
Didn't think Alpharius and Omegan would show up this soon
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>>5199912
I am Alpharius, and this is a lie
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This is not a foe a single spear can best. Challenging the butcher king to single combat would be suicide. And it is unbefitting for a journeyman to end their life by their own hands or decision without just cause, as Lieren teaches. Lowering your spear, you snarl, your lips lifting as you wordlessly call those who have chosen to share this grave you may have found with you, those valiant and fearless few who joined your advance into the very beating heart of tyranny to meet its creator and ruler. Nitya Sinha's eyes flare with crimson light as his mouth filled with rotating, glowing and sparking fangs twists into an animalistic look of glee and admiration. You can see him, lowering his back and centering his mass in the earth beneath his legs. He intends to endure your assault, surely to humiliate you all and make apparent the gulf between all of your combined skill and his sole mastery of the killing arts. You do not take offense, for the butcher king has good reason to take pride in his abilities and only a blind fool would dare to wager that his talent was lesser than any of the might, courageous heroes who stood against the darkness he embodied.

The three sons of Lieren, including the one who had been divorced from his arm, were the first to respond to your growled command, which now grew into a defiant, wordless war of audacity and righteous rage. Upon your back, you carried not only the dreams of a nation but the glorious legacy of those elders and friends who had been so cruelly cut down by this monster. Who laughed, laughed and threw his head back howling and hissing in the moments before the deadly dance resumed. Michah charged, dropping one empty revolver and reaching for a knife he kept tucked in the belt of his armor. Kamakshi skipped forward, protecting your left side while the three sons of Lieren defended your left. Aruna charged from rubble, a hideous bruise spreading from his stomach to just below his neck. Manu rejoined the fray, one leg twisted at an unnatural angle, kept in place only by the armor he chose to wear against his peoples customs.

"Hah, carp king, we die together, may our children sing our songs and weep over our graves! Knowing we died brave men!" Aruna slurred, his eyes burning from behind the skull he painted over his heavily scarred features "See if you can take our skulls, dog of the old ways!"

"I haven't had any children yet, I'm not dying here" Kamakashi hissed

"Not yet, not yet" Manu mumbled, pain tinging his eloquent voice as he struggled to remain standing

"COME ON! YA AIN'T SO TOUGH! I'VE KILLED DOZENS OF YOUR ILK YA VARMIT!" Michah declared, dagger flashing and he tossed it between his hands

The sons of Lieren remained silent, great rifles aimed at Nitya Sinhas chest as he laughed and laughed, filled the devastated street with his burning mockery.
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>>5199937

"Well then! Come and Die like men!" He declared, and once more the world slowed to your eyes. A cloud of stones were kicked up into the air as he stomped his feet down and began to rush forward

"CHARGE!" You roar and relish in the look of confusion on the butcher's inhuman features, wondering perhaps how you were able to anticipate his second charge through your ranks. Your companions respond, Aruna and Michah with defiant howls, as Kamakshi lowered her spear and shoulders. Manu Raised his shield, and the three sons of Lieren lined up their shots with a cold efficiency you have not witnessed beyond their father executing the final strike to sever the head of tyranny. Your spirits soared, hesitation and fear replaced with the mind clearing rush of adrenaline and the indomitable courage and will that had been cultivated within you by Lieren's training and teachings.

Nitya Sinha did not retreat or adopt a more defensive stance, instead with an expression devoid of emotion or anything human, he lashed out, standing where he had halted his charge. His claws thrummed and glowed carmine as he lifted them into the air and allowed the Neural whips unspool from his clawed augmentations. His teeth rotated, buzzing fiercly as a darkness fell upon the whole of the street and for a moment all that could be seen were his fiery eyes and the lightning sparking from his throat.

Manu fell, his crystalline shield split in two at the generator that hardened light into a enchanted armor. The claws of the butcher raked against his chest and so one of the great chieftains of the Wild and free Vishnu tribes died. But his bold maneuver to place himself between you, Kamakshi and Nitya Sinha allowed both of you to live moments longer, and you could see a wry grin upon the tacticians lips as he was torn asunder and scattered in more than twelve pieces.

Sensing their brothers death almost instinctively, Aruna and Kamakshi found a yet untapped reserve of energy, and it flowed into your chest as well. An avenger's fury coursed through your veins, replenishing your stamina and failing resolve, and so three rulers charged to meet the killer of hundreds of kings.

Vaguely, you were aware of massive, more than fist sized projectiles flying around you and beneath the legs and through the gaps of Aruna and Kamakshi's forms, as the Sons of Lieren fired selectively and tried to distract the monster you all faced together. With a thought, you sent out a signal calling for reinforcements, to ensure that if not by your spear than by the might of the imperial army the butcher king would at last meet his just and deserved end.

Kamakshi threw herself and her spear into Nitya Sinha, as with jittering, lightning quick movements he recovered from his scything swing that ended Manu's noble life.
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>>5199938

Your heart sank and bowels filled with ice as you saw the statuesque warrioress lifted from the ground. Nitya had caught her spear between his arm and chest and now with a sadistic grin pulled her closer. You shrank your shoulders and condensed your form, to avoid being struck by the tendrils falling from the brute's finger tips.

But it was unnecessary, for aruna blocked those dreadful lashes with his torso and with a wailing laugh, blinded by agony, threw himself forward and caught his power Dao between the gaps of the Monster's armor and armored hide. First blood nearly went to The Chieftain of the first, as his body twitched and his nervous system was overloaded by the electricity dancing from his depraved Cousin's finger tips, his blade pressed against the red skin of the brute but did not cut it.

And then, your realized the Vishnu's plan, and why Aruna spoke as though his death were fated. They threw themselves upon Nitya Sinha to create an opening for you and your six fanged spear. Breathing out, your ran your palm flat across the long haft of your ancient weapon and gripped it more like a short spear.

A shower of blood blinded you, as the Butcher King lifted both Aruna and Kamakshi into the air and directly into the way of the suppressing fire the sons of Lieren had unleashed upon him. But in pursuing this sadistic urge, he had ignored your advance, and as his skeletal face twisted once more into the cruelest of grins and laughter began to hiss and rise as static from his throat, dozens of the miniscule cameras making up his eyes flicked down and saw your leaping towards him.

He dropped Aruna, allowing the chieftain to fall, one leg and most of his groin blown away, and gathered his now free claws together and shot his arm down towards you. It was grotesque, how his arm moved like an eel, as if it had no bone within it. Kamakshi dimming eyes flashed open, and she pushed herself against her spear, driving it into the steel below. A shower of sparks flew behind the Butcher's back, framing his murderous expression of glee with the light of a thousand fireflies. Kamakshi fell over the haft of her spear, using her weight and fading strength to force Nitya Sinha to slow.

Slow by a second, long enough for your blow to your land and your feet to find purchase on his half bent leg. Your heart hammered in your chest, more like a drill dancing over a sheet of metal than a war drum now. Your hands were cold, and your face was numb. Time had slowed again.

And you were face to face with the beast, oh how your heart pounded, you could feel every ounce of the blood your father and mother gave you coursing through your veins, surging as your mind raced to find away out of this assuredly lethal predicament. His claws flashed and
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>>5199912
I am Alpharius

>>5199934
And this is a lie
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>>5199939

"YEEEHAAAAW!" Michah leapt from behind him, wrapping his legs around his throat as he drove his knife against his skull, creating showers of sparks and more importantly distracting your would be killer from landing the decisive blow. So you struck with out hesitation, Thrusting with all your might and leaping from his leg to plow the fanged head of your spear through his cheek bone.

And so you claimed first blood, narrowly missing on of his clusters of mechanical eyes as strange greasy liquid poured from the gouge you tore through his faces skin.

You fell, legs and arms shaking as Nitya Sinha reared back and slammed his shoulders and brave, selfless michah against the building he had clung to moments ago. The New Varro man goes limp, and you are forced to lock your spear with the five murderous talons of the butcher king. He's trying to tear the six fanged spear from your lands and your arms from their sockets along with it. You grit you teeth, and summon all of the strength in your all too human body to resist. Blood dripped on your face, flowing from the wound you left in the butcher's face.

There's a loud thud behind you and suddenly Nitya Sinha disengages with you.

You blink, and see Aruna is still alive, crawling from the pool of his own blood and gnashing his teeth, as one of the son's of lieren charges with his chain toothed sword roaring and spitting a furious shower of sparks. Kamakshi struggles to stand, but is lifted with her spear

Her eyes meet yours and you recognize the mortal terror with them. You force yourself not to look away as Nitya Sinha uses her body as Bludgeon. It would be an unforgiveable disrespect not to witness her end, after all she has done for Long-Jia.

Blood rains down and you are sickened to your core. Aruna freezes, his fury halted by the gruesome demise of his peer, and Michah's still form flails, knife in hand and legs still tightly locked

But the Son of Lieren doesn't even flinch, even as he is covered with the grisly remains of the valiant Kamakshi, instead, he seeks to avenge her. You force yourself to move, as the giant's son locks his blade with the false giant.

He will die in seconds, like Rong, Like Zian, Like Manu, Like Kamakshi.

Unless...Unless. Your mind raced, searching for answers in the maelstrom of confusion and panic.

The edge of Michah's blade flashed, Aruna howled in rage, Manu's half broken shield of light flickered, Kamakshi's blood ran over Nitya Sinha's unnatural, bulging frame.

A plan formed from these seeds
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>>5199941

What do you do Jinhai?

>Stab the six fanged spear into the ground, using it to vault into the air, grab hold of Michah's knife and drive it through the wound you created with your previous attack.

>Toss your spear to Aruna, and knowing Nitya Sinha pays no attention to those foes he considers defeated, allow the grieving chieftain to blindside him, as you take up Zian's spear as your own and continue the fight

>Sprint, grab hold of Manu's shield and hurl it like a plate at Nitya Sinha's feet, attempting to trip him with it.

>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king

>write in
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>>5199943
>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king
Didn't expect the vote to chnage, otgerwise I would have voted for the charge+gamble combo
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>>5199950
A combo would have made the action weaker and would have probably led to Jinhais death
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>>5199943
>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king
his power are his machine like abilities.
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>>5199943
>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king
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>>5199943
>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king

Turn this fucker off like a power switch
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>>5199943
>>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king

We win this through stalling enough for reinforcements to put enough rounds or chainsword swings into him that he goes down. We are winning the army battle, we will get reinforcements especially with Jinhai as the emperor more will be coming to protect him. Disrupting any of his augments or capabilities with a shock cuts his fighting power and helps the entire fight going forward.
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>>5199943
>>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king
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>>5199943
>>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king
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>>5199943
>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king
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>>5199943
>>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king
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>>5199943
>>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king
Fucking hell this is nail-biting.
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>>5199943
>Inspired by the sight of blood mingling, combine our spear with the technology of the temple

Nitya will be very confused, but this course of action will enlighten him. By about 800 watts.
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We should have shot him with a bigger gun... >>5199961
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It's sad to see those characters go, but it's better for Lieren peerage to end like that, than fade into the background without a word. Awesome fight! Awesome and sad.
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>>5200257
At this rate, Chen and Bai's monuments in Nothing are gonna have a statue garden pop up around them. I kinda like the idea of each one depicting the person doing what they loved in life, just seamlessly blending into the landscape.
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>>5199943
>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king

We failed more of our lads Bro's, We're a bad dad.
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>This finally ends
>Almost all named characters fell in the name of prosperity
>Lieren carves a legion of characters onto the mountain range
>Emps finally arrives and things seem good but there is a sense of mourning
>Since the wear Lieren has done nothing but train forever wearing the traditional mourning garb
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>>5199943
>Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king
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>>5200257
I think their families wouldn't say no to them fading into the background. This needs to end so that Shangrila never again need know the sorrows of war.

>>5200424
We may have failed those we've lost, but if Leiren can succeed many more will be spared from this, if nothing else.

It will be a painful victory, but a necessary one.
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>>5200424
everyone dies at some point, at least they met their end doing something they believed in.
>>5199943
>Stab the six fanged spear into the ground, using it to vault into the air, grab hold of Michah's knife and drive it through the wound you created with your previous attack.
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Calling the vote now.

Inspired by the mingling of Kamakshi and Nitya's blood, combine your spear fighting with the technology of the butcher's temple. Stab it into a power line and use it as a lightning rod to shock the Butcher king:13

Stab the six fanged spear into the ground, using it to vault into the air, grab hold of Michah's knife and drive it through the wound you created with your previous attack.:1

So Jinhai will try to electrocute the Butcher king while he's distracted by Lieren's sons

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Though the blood that now met upon the Butcher King's chest had been spilt only from Vishnu veins, its sources could not be more different. Just as the spear you held in your hands and the gruesome alterations and disfiguring improvements the beast before you had subjected himself to were made of the same technology, but wielded and turned towards different ends. Your imagined, beneath the stress of battle and calmly haze of adrenaline, that Kamakshi's blood even now fought against her killer's. And that fantasy served a fertile soil for your scheme to sprout and then blossom in all its radiance. All around you, was the technology of the great sisters of the stars. Of Kanzeon and of Mari. It was simply corrupted by the wicked aims and tyrannical ambitions of Nitya Sinha and his most vile and bloodthirsty bride. And you had seen with your own two eyes, how the six fanged spear alone seemed to be able to pierce the red ogre's hide. It stood to reason he rebuilt is body out of the same material as he made his city. The flesh, blood, bones and marrow of his bride.

Perhaps, just perhaps, the spear in your hands could bite into the powerlines that ran through the city, carrying the breath of the trapped suns and stranger forms of energy and electricity to its furthest corners. The same, unimaginably powerful force that allowed its defenses and defenders to function, the power that burned within Nitya Sinha's own black heart. A spark filled your mind, turning into a blazing star as you realized what you must do. A powerline was exposed, at the base of the wall the butcher had clung to, it was exposed by his leap back to the street. And as if through divine providence, through good fortune and luck that is not seen for a thousand years and then a thousand more, Nitya had not yet stepped away from the dense cable of hardened light. No, the bloodthirsty fool was relishing in his combat against Lieren's sons, his unmatched, unwavering sadism blinding him to the danger just a step away from his heel.

An opening you were all to ready to take advantage of. Bracing with your right leg, your tossed the six fanged spear up and caught it just behind the head. Then, with a flick of your thumb, you powered on the little secret you had Kanzeon hideaway within its haft that you had briefly forgotten in the panic of battle. A series of miniature rockets, that you had intended to use to increase your thrusting power and the further the distance of your throw. Now they would only bolster the spear's piercing power. But, cunningly, you did not harness the full power of these rockets and only activated enough to just shatter the containment field holding in all the wroth and fury of many trapped thunder gods so it may be unleashed without revealing your hand to the butcher king. Just two rockets, enough to be overlooked or mistaken as bolter rounds shearing through the air.
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>>5200865

Letting go of the spear, you hurled it with all the might of lightning crashing to earth. It threaded between the butcher's leg, as cut the chain toothed sword in half and with a second flick of his wrist, cut the hand that held it to pieces. But Lieren's son responded only by drawing the sidearm at his side, firing the bolt pistol directly under the Butcher King's jaw. The glare of the massive, almost artillery shell sized bullet's rocket flare illuminated the grinning skull the man from terra had carved into his helmet, as his two brothers opened fire on Nitya Sinha, almost as if they realized your plan without you speaking it and were trying to manuever the beast into a more advantageous position.

The world became a cascade of blue, violent, emerald and crimson light, as the power line was cut in twain and the containment field that lined its insides broke. A rush of air, a great wave of pressing force, burst from the crystalline tube like water from a broken dam. Fractals of colors you do not have names of rushed through the air, as arcs of blood red lightning screamed through the sea of chaotic and inexplicable sights. The ground was rent apart, as the red ogre whipped around, Michah's still motionless body falling from his shoulder as the Iron toothed beast faced the storm, having stumbled directly into its way. Arcs of lightning lanced and danced across his arms, as his chest began to glow and a few of the strange tubes and wires racings through his neck and shoulders burst, spewing their foul contents of bubbling chemicals or vile elixirs into the air. Sparks rolled off of the false giant's back, as patches of charred black skin crawled over his back as lightning scars forked and split over his back, a strangely dainty web of white scars. An dark, scarlet red internal light flared within Nitya Sinha's body as a low growl escaped his tightly clenched jaw.


Now you were weaponless, and only sheltered by the storm by the body of the monster that wanted to tear you apart and drink your blood from your weeping skull!

"Nice shot!" One of Lieren's sons exclaimed in halting Long-Jianese "But it is not fallen yet!"

That would be obvious to deaf and blind man, Nitya Sinha was laughing as his body was wracked and assaulted by the strange lightning that flowed out of the sea of many colors that spilt from the city's street, a street that was not cracking apart as stones were lifted from it and floated elegantly through the air.
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>>5200866

What do you do while Nitya Sinha is stunned, Jinhai?

>Try to drag Michah and Aruna to safety, they're in no state to fight and you will not allow them to serve as living shields for yourself, as Manu and Kamakshi had chosen

>Ask one of Lieren's sons for a weapon, now that the six fanged spear appears lost in the incandescent conflagration of lights, lightning and unseen forces battering The butcher king

>Attempt to retrieve the Six fanged spear as the lighting dies down, performing the carp dance and trying to strike Nitya Sinha as he recovers from his shocking experience.

>Order a tactical retreat to find a more advantageous battle ground while the terrifying monstrosity is distracted

>write in
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>>5200869
>>Order a tactical retreat to find a more advantageous battleground while the terrifying monstrosity is distracted

>Try to drag Michah and Aruna to safety, they're in no state to fight and you will not allow them to serve as living shields for yourself, as Manu and Kamakshi had chosen

We gotta get to the reinforcements
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>>5200869
>Try to drag Michah and Aruna to safety, they're in no state to fight and you will not allow them to serve as living shields for yourself, as Manu and Kamakshi had chosen
>Order a tactical retreat to find a more advantageous battle ground while the terrifying monstrosity is distracted
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>>5200869
>>Try to drag Michah and Aruna to safety, they're in no state to fight and you will not allow them to serve as living shields for yourself, as Manu and Kamakshi had chosen
>Order a tactical retreat to find a more advantageous battle ground while the terrifying monstrosity is distracted
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>>5200869
>>Try to drag Michah and Aruna to safety, they're in no state to fight and you will not allow them to serve as living shields for yourself, as Manu and Kamakshi had chosen
>Order a tactical retreat to find a more advantageous battle ground while the terrifying monstrosity is distracted
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>>5200869
>Order a tactical retreat to find a more advantageous battle ground while the terrifying monstrosity is distracted
>Try to drag Michah and Aruna to safety, they're in no state to fight and you will not allow them to serve as living shields for yourself, as Manu and Kamakshi had chosen
Brave Emperor Jinhai ran away, bravely ran away
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>>5200873
>Support.
It wouldnt do to die here.
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>>5200869
>order an artillery strike on Nitya as you fall back
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>>5200869
>Order a tactical retreat to find a more advantageous battle ground while the terrifying monstrosity is distracted
>Try to drag Michah and Aruna to safety, they're in no state to fight and you will not allow them to serve as living shields for yourself, as Manu and Kamakshi had chosen

PEACE MOTHERFUCKER, SEE YOU NEVER
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>>5200973
Anon, there is no artillery it was moved outside of the city's range.
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>>5200873
+1
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>>5200869
>Try to drag Michah and Aruna to safety, they're in no state to fight and you will not allow them to serve as living shields for yourself, as Manu and Kamakshi had chosen


>Order a tactical retreat to find a more advantageous battle ground while the terrifying monstrosity is distracted
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>>5200869
>>Attempt to retrieve the Six fanged spear as the lighting dies down, performing the carp dance and trying to strike Nitya Sinha as he recovers from his shocking experience.
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>>5200973
Anon, don't be retarded.

That will destroy the world.
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>>5200869
>>Order a tactical retreat to find a more advantageous battleground while the terrifying monstrosity is distracted

>Try to drag Michah and Aruna to safety, they're in no state to fight and you will not allow them to serve as living shields for yourself, as Manu and Kamakshi had chosen

Shame about the spear. We'll get another one and retrieve it later.
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>>5200869
>>Attempt to retrieve the Six fanged spear as the lighting dies down, performing the carp dance and trying to strike Nitya Sinha as he recovers from his shocking experience.
i would rather that this dude doesn't get the spear
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>>5201582
it's just a laser spear we can get another
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>>5201663
more like a guass spear but semantics
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>>5201663
>it's just archeotech we can get another
how do you know what the spear does? At no point in this quest have we messed around with it to know what it does. Also in the last post he fired rockets out of it, so clearly it's more than 'just' a laser spear.
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>>5201769
The rocket was a modification Jinhai made to it, meaning he had someone see it'a design.
Also it's a weapon that came from the archeotech colony ships. Of which we have two that are fully operational.
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>>5201769
Kanzeon knows how to build every single peice of human archeotech we've seen thus far. The spear isn't any exception as far as I can tell.
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>>5201785
>>5201788
i'll concede that point, still dont want his dude to have the weapon
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>>5201582
All of Nitya's fingers end in what seems to be archeotech claws, right? I highly doubt he'll want to wield the spear like that if he even can. At worst he might think to break it so it can't be retrieved.
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>>5201874
I think the butcher king will attempt to continue to fight with what he has and his hands and mono edged fingers will find it hard to use that weapon.

More curiously, I suspect he will pick it up and follow to throw the spear at jinhais feet. Because it would not be sporting to fell such an august opponent without his weapon.
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>>5201884
After reconsidering it I was wondering much the same thing

Although I would suspect were he to be honorable and give Jinhai his spear back, he would do so through putting it through the chest of someone else nearby, javelin style, assuming he can temporarily disable his claws to hold it.
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>>5201904
He absolutely would.

Also anyone who would die to that would also instantly die in close combat anyways.
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>>5201874
I think he already has it, his body is made of starmetal and his hands are claws, and so it the spear.
The whole khornate thing means he scoffs at ranged atracks, but he might have the gauss installed somewhere. The range xould give him an advantage, but he can extend his body, the only reason for him to use would be to kill a warrior with their own weapon.
But then again he is craftier than an average khornate, so who knows.
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>>5200866
>a strangely dainty web of white scars.

You planted a nuke/reactor/bomb inside your body. What happened to Blood For the Blood God?
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Calling the vote now.

Order a tactical retreat to find a more advantageous battleground while the terrifying monstrosity is distracted:10

Try to drag Michah and Aruna to safety, they're in no state to fight and you will not allow them to serve as living shields for yourself, as Manu and Kamakshi had chosen: 10

Foolishly order an artillery strike on Nitya as you fall back: 1

Attempt to retrieve the Six fanged spear as the lighting dies down, performing the carp dance and trying to strike Nitya Sinha as he recovers from his shocking experience.:2


Total votes: 13

So Jinhai will order a tatical retreat and attempt to personally drag the gravely injured Aruna and Michah from danger while Nitya Sinha is being buffeted by lighting and stranger forces yet

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Witnessing the terrifying fortitude of The butcher King and the supernatural oddities and strangeness that radiated from the waves of color and light that washed against the half machine monstrosity gave you the queer courage to briefly flee from the fight. When the ground rises to meet the sky and wails of the dammed emerge from arcs of bleeding light, one must realize the arena of their battle is no longer a sturdy and stable platform to stand and leap and prance upon. Like a collapsing theater's stage, the actors of this disastrous and deadly match must away to more solid and trustworthy ground! A ring that is not singing while it weeps, where gravity is still obeying the divine mandates and edicts of heaven, where lighting and crawling flame and strange ripples through the air do not threaten to strike them down before the brute they face can wheel around and strike them down himself. So, abandoning your spear and the iron beast that guards it, you instead brave the gales and storm of lightning and nonsense patterns painting themselves in the air as you raise your voice clearly and defiantly to all the madness and brutality that surrounds you in this city that shall be cursed and condemned ten thousand times.

"Retreat to safer ground, flee to safety, as carps we must scatter so we may face our foe at an advantage rather than as he will us to as cattle to be slaughtered!" You roar, as you reach your empty hands down to Lift the bulk of the fallen Michah upon your shoulders. Against all reason and logic, you throw a glance up towards the lightning cracked behemoth standing just a hair's breadth away from you now. Something is worming and working beneath his red flesh! As his face is frozen in a twisted, rigor mortis esc grin, with laughter crackling from his throat as strange lights and energies rip from the flesh and steel of his neck, you can see his form twist and mutate into an even more monstrous shape as he is bathed in what must be the very winds of hell itself!

Glancing back frightfully, you see Aruna attempting to lift himself upon on leg, using his bent and pitted dao as a crutch. He is intent on throwing away his noble life against Nitya Sinha, even though he is clearly in no shape to continue to fight even considering the almost inhuman resilience of the Vishnu. So, with much effort, you throw the heavy and too tall New Varro man on your shoulder and rush Aruna. He glares at you, and tries to fight you off, flailing his arm as you lift his thankfully lightened but still over muscled frame onto your back next to the still Michah.

Struggling with the chieftain, who brays and howls for revenge in his mother tongue, you carry the two men away from giant still howling with laughter even as his flesh is cooked, skinned, peeled and cut by the forces he has been exposed to and made to shield you against.

You pause, looking at the two sons of Lieren, they are having a hurried and clearly intense discussion.
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>>5202466

Then, suddenly, the two least injured of the three, bow their heads as if grieving and place a hand on their one armed brother's shoulder. The one handed one salutes him with his handless arm, and the mostly uninjured son takes something from the warrior from distant terra's neck. It jingles and glitters. In turn, the gravely injured man takes what you recognize as grenades and spare magazines from the two other's hips and chest.

Your stomach churns and a bitter taste falls upon your tongue as you realize you are watching your truest friend's progeny say goodbye to one of their own, as they or he have decided he will undertake the austere and selfless duty of delaying the Butcher king's advance. And will join those who have already preformed such a sacrifice, their companions from the distant world from which they hail, and poor Zian, Rong, Kamakshi, Manu and Gaizka, though you did not know the last personally. The sons of Lieren notice you watching them, and nod solemnly as you feel wayward tears flowing down your face. Forcing yourself to turn, you look upon Zian's still form and Rong's headless corpse. As you feared, your mentor in the ways of battle's chest no longer rises and his virtuous soul has fled his body. You had hoped, of your two guiding lights in your time as a humble guard, at least he would have survived the Butcher's initial assault

"Whrrrrrere are you going "Emperor", our dance has only just started!" Nitya Mocks as the cascade of lighting and stranger energies begins to wane and taper off "No need for us to change the venue of our tyrsssssst just yet"

Even from the great shadow he cast, you could see how even more twisted he had become from his brief exposure to the life blood of his wretched, blood drowned city.

Inside the world created by the visor of your helmet, you saw dots informing you that reinforcements were charging to your position, loyal and stalwart men rallying to save their emperor. It twisted your guts to lead men so readily to their deaths, but pragmatically, you knew this fight could not be one with your current numbers and location

"Follow my lead, of noble and most virtuous sons of the golden eyed giant!" You roared as you took to your heels and sprinted away from the grotesque and inhuman shadow cast by your foe, whose laughter carried to defile the heavens like a band of rapist devils!

You could hear his claws racking through buildings and the street, could hear lightning snapping and crackling from his charred flesh, and you prayed that strange, meaty sounds you heard were not his abhorrent flesh reknitting and healing itself through some dark and evil sorcery known only by the most foul and wicked of apostate sages. But still his screeching, static filled laughter remained the most awful of sounds that heralded that murderous beast who ran just behind your back.
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>>5202467

At times you wonder if the humid, clinging air that clung to your neck came from his lungs rather than the steaming corpses and pools and rivers of spilt blood that trickled and ran through the mind bending and breaking streets of this thrice cursed city!

Faster, faster, faster you ran. The two sons of Lieren would periodically pause and fall to their knees, firing volleys of screaming, explosive death at your pursuer before rejoining the race away from them, often bearing new wounds and damages to both their flesh and armor. You closed your ears and refused to listen to the filth and taunting of Nitya Sinha, or the wails and cries of Aruna as he cursed you for denying him a death alongside his comrades and his burning tears fell upon your back to burn and scald you.

In the corner of your eyes, you saw the map of the city, and saw that with each labored step and scalding breath you took brought you closer to your reinforcements and the salvations they embodied. If you could only escape the thundering, earthshaking footsteps of your murderous hunter.

So close, just a few more feet, just a few more seconds. Your head swam, your lungs burned, and one of Lieren's sons, the one whose hand had been taken knelt and opened fire and did not rise again to join you. Though you could not see his eyes, you could sense the pain rolling from his sole surviving brother, whose agonized expression was hidden behind the mask of a confidently grinning skull and the expressionless, emotionless lenses of the armor gifted to him by his valiant father.

Oh what would Lieren would suffer when he learned of the deaths of not only his noble sons, but his loyal and true friends.

Closing your eyes, you stumbled forward, and felt the passage of time slow, just as the dot that signified your destination of respite and rescue. Your eyes flashed open, and through the chaos around you, your reeled around to see the Six fanged spear soaring through the air. Instinctively you performed one of the most basic but vital movements of the carp dance, and turning on your heel swayed away from the weapon you had held minutes ago, leaning out of its path as it's teeth scrapped against the crook of your neck where a dragon's reverse scale would have been.

"FOR THE MAIDEN MOTHER FREED! WE SHALL BURN YOUR CORRUPTION FROM SHANGRALA, THRALL OF THE BLOODY HANDED GOD!" Elazar roared, as you fell back and saw the new face of Nitya Sinha. You couldn't, fall all your wisdom and understanding of the world and the men that inhabited, call him human, though he resembled Lieren's other children now. Striped fur emerged from beneath his armor, both worn and mounted to his flesh, and his skull face and the metal the formed it had shifted into a bestial snow filled with even larger, still mechanical and rotating fangs!

And you saw him smile in delight, and realized his target had not been you, but the knights who road to your side's horses.
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>>5202469

One of Elazar's noble companions fell, crushed beneath the heft of his Cui Warmonger, that had its skull split in twain by the Six fanged spear. His youthful voice raised in terror as he witnessed the monster from which you fled. You raced to his side, and grabbed hold of your spear, stomping a foot on the half torn to aid the effort of retrieving it from its rent asunder flesh and bone. Its rider still screamed, as his brothers formed a wall around you. The eldest took Michah and Aruna from your shoulders, and with an unnatural strength for a man his age, set them on the back of his battle hungry steed.

"Father Gaizka has fallen?" The old man, whose name you do not recall solemnly asked, as Lieren's son stood shoulder to shoulder with the greatest legacy of the lost Cui family

You do not have the sense to reply, as the monster approached you and your horse riding defenders.

The new theater of your fateful battle was a tournament grounds, that had powdered bones and discarded weapons in place of sand or packed dirt.

"You know, you didn't need to repay me for returning your spear" Nitya Sinha teased as he hopped between his feet playfully, in a manner all too similar to Lieren's own habit of doing so when he's in a mischievous or energetic mood "I am a married man, but I cannot reject such a generous Love gift!"

"Son of a bitch" Lieren's son hissed, taking aim as Elazar raised up his lance, which crackled with a power field.

"Cur of the simpleton devil, you shall not have his noble soul!" he proclaimed "You reveal your true face, on the eve of your death"

You raise your spear, conscious mind turning back on as you regained the good sense and remembered you still had a fight to win. Flicking your eyes between Elazar and the false giant, you only had one thing to ask before the deadly fight recommenced.

"How is it you of all men were the one to ride to my side, now of all times? Surely it cannot be mere coincidence that the man who has met such devils before would now emerge from the mists to join my stand against the thrall of the very same wickedness" You whisper, not wanting to spread Lieren's secret too far

"I heard a familiar whisper on the wind, and noticed your signal afterwards" Is the hushed answer the knight gives "No time for talk, raise your spear a stand, dragon emperor! Let us die together holding back the darkness that threatens to consume our world"

"Well put, of friend from the lands of snow and color" You sigh, as Nitya Sinha begins laughing again, arms crossed as he waits for you to make the first move, using one hand to contemptuously bat away and cut down the bolter shells fired towards him

"Come on, come on! Don't leave me waiting! I can't wait any longer!" Nitya Sinha wails like a petulant child.
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>>5202472

"More help is on the way" The old white bearded knight says "I would flee with the injured, but I fear our enemy will not allow such mercy"

What do you do Jinhai?

>Saddle up on Elazar's horse, and remember Yin Lei and Lai song's teaching, Surely even a beast like Nitya Sinha can't match cavalry blow for blow!

>Dance between the bask riders, and wait for an opening to present itself as the Iron tiger satiates its bloodthirst upon the horses and their riders.

>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!

>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.

>Write in

https://youtu.be/EKOXzF8jSsA A fitting theme to accompany the arrival of the cavalry
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>>5202476
>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!
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>>5202488
This too
>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.
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>>5202476
>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.
>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!
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>>5202476
>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.
>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!
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>>5202476
>Saddle up on Elazar's horse, and remember Yin Lei and Lai song's teaching, Surely even a beast like Nitya Sinha can't match cavalry blow for blow!

His goal is not to win but to slaughter enough so that he will gain the daemonhood. He is waiting for Lieren to show, then he will kill his friend for him to witness. After all he had said that when he met lieren for the first time, looks like he will try to fulfill his promise.
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>>5202524
I think the idea is to stall him by asking the question.
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>>5202528
Yeah, a distraction so Jinhai can land the shot
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>>5202476
>>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!
>>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.
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>>5202476
>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.
We have a good idea of why he is stalling though Jinhai probably doesn't but even just the few moments it will take for him to answer would give reinforcements more time to arrive.
>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!
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>>5202476
>>Saddle up on Elazar's horse, and remember Yin Lei and Lai song's teaching, Surely even a beast like Nitya Sinha can't match cavalry blow for blow!
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>>5202476
>>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!

>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.
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>>5202476

>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!

So many of our boys lost, Chaos will burn for this.
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>>5202476
>>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.
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>>5202476
I support. >>5202502

Distract him with the question.
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>>5202476
>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!
>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.
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>>5202476
>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!
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>>5202476
>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!

>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.

Not like we won't be shooting at him while he answers.

Hurry Leiren, this is about to get uglier.
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>>5202945
it'd be pretty based if lieren just shows up covered head to toe in blood holding Avalokiteśvara's head. I would lol desu
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>>5202948
allow me to add before anyone says, after we have a fight with her of course
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>Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what.
>Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!

He's waiting for a TON of back up before he nukes himself to make a permanent DAEMONGATE.

Daemon Prince strat101.
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>>5203020
that makes sense, welp Jinhai is fucked
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>>5203020
But he's a Khorne guy, they hate those kinds of tactics...I think, I'm not sure
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>>5203020
woudn't that evaporate all the blood and give Khorne nothing?
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>>5203099
He isn't exactly a typical Khornate. Despite being quite literally only able to feel wrath and contempt, he is still mostly clearheaded and plotting.
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Calling the vote now.

Blast the butcher king with flaying light and command your forces to charge him as one. He only has two hands, even if they can kill as easily as he turns them over!:12

Ask Nitya Sinha, why he's playing with you rather than just killing you. Surely sadism has its limits. He must be stalling, but for what:11

Saddle up on Elazar's horse, and remember Yin Lei and Lai song's teaching, Surely even a beast like Nitya Sinha can't match cavalry blow for blow!:2

Total votes: 15

So Jinhai will distract Nitya Sinha why he's playing around, before blasting him with the Six fanged spear and commanding his reinforced forces to charge him as while he's reeling.

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Immediately a spark of inspiration illuminated your mind, growing into a flame that produced a cunning plan rather than smoke. Nitya Sinha was delaying, playing with you. For what, you did not know, but it did not truly matter. What mattered is you could use this realization for your own advantage by stalling yourself, by delaying, by distracting. Further Reinforcements were on their way now. That was relieving, but it also meant that you needed to keep the butcher's murderous claws occupied. Rushing him, even as a singular wave, a unified force of unrelenting will and resolve, would do little but increase his bodycount. However, if you struck while he was distracted, overwhelmed his attentions were elsewhere, you could in theory swarm over him like an army of ants or horde of field mice. As Lieren often warned, even a lion could be overcome by mice, and while you would not compare Nitya Sinha to any creature so noble as a Lion or any breed of Feline, great or lesser, the proverb was applicable to your current, treacherous circumstances.

Nitya Sinha, would surely take the chance to gloat like a fish to hook. His pride as a warrior and killer would not allow him to refuse a chance to scornfully mock you. And raising an accusation that he was treating this deathly battle like a children's game, why it would present him an irresistible opportunity to insult and demean you, a chance to break your spirit and crush the morale of your men. But, so confident was the butcher in his martial superiority, that he'd leave himself open to give his speech of domineering humiliation.

Raising your spear up aggressively, turning it around in your palms to be certain the lance of deadly emerald light it fires will strike directly upon the Bestial Butcher King's chest, you make a show of baring your teeth and snarling.

"Foulest tyrant, most wicked murderer, you are holding yourself back! Insulting the fine men of Long-Jia, Shuni, Bask, New Varro and beyond by treating this dance of death as a mere child's game!" You accuse scathingly, spitting and raging as you flick the sleeve of your armor and adjust the position of the six fanged spear, disguising the motions as thrusting and slicing it through the air in a petulant rage.

Nitya Sinha plucks the last bolter shell fired by the last of Lieren's sons and studies it, his newly feline features twisting into a smug look of superiority as he studied the still rotating explosive not resting between his claws.

"Why, fool of prosperity, thrall of benevolence, that's because this is nothing but a game for one as powerful as myse..." He begins to brag and boast, turning to face with the widest grin you have ever seen painted across his skeletal face, speaking without moving or unclenching his jaw.

He was of course interrupted by three spiraling spears of deadly radiance, twirling to form a single lance of divine retribution that is now peeling away layers of his chest and the armor nailed to it.
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>>5203818

His mechanical eyes visibly fill with shock and surprise, as he instinctively recoils and steps back, crossed arms opening he clenches both his hands into a fist. A reflexive action that detonates the bolter in his hand. And that explosion serves as the signal for your assault, like a gong rung before the first match of a tournament.

"SWARM THE BEAST!" You roar, charging forward to lead the advance against Nitya Sinha. An incomprehensible fury replaces his confusion and he stomps forward, and is met by Elazar Burueliza's powered lance striking his jaw. Sparks fly and a cleft is torn through his chin. The butcher reacts in a blur of moments, that once more your eyes capture in slowed motion. Swinging his arm up, he tears the head off of the Bask Knight's steed, only missing its rider because of him rising after a successful jousting strike. He is thrown from the saddle as Nitya tosses the Cui Warmonger's still galloping corpse over his shoulder, roaring with maddened fury.

The remaining two knights flow past you, lowering their own lances to strike at the smoking impression bored into his armored chest. Nitya Sinha moves like a storm through a valley, swinging his arms wildly, slicing and tearing with his glowing claws with such speed that air itself shrieks in pain. And too your astonishment, through the storm of claws, lightning and death you see Michah rise from the back of the eldest knight's horse, knife still tightly clenched and his eyes focused murderously upon the butcher king's throat. A moment later, the elderly warrior drives his lance into Nitya Sinha's side, as his comrade is torn from his steed which falls to the ground a minced pile of meat and bones. With expert time, the butcher king buries his claws into the back legs of the old knight's mount, throwing the injured Aruna from its back and tossing the old man, still attached to his saddle, to the arena's floor of bones and abandoned weapons.

But Michah, leaps into the air, knife and eyes flashing as you reach the butcher yourself, and find yourself beneath a great shadow.

Lieren's son is at your side, and he is swinging one of the crude power blades of Terra down through the air, arcing it towards Nitya Sinha's shoulder as you lift the six fanged spear to drive it through the wound left by Elazar's mighty blow as Michah once more leaps for his back. He doesn't even stumble back, as he is struck from three different angles. Blood spurts from his chin as you retract your spear and narrowly avoid a scything strike of three of his claws, that break Lieren's son's sword at its hilt after it had cut a groove into the shoulder plate protecting the joint connecting the butcher's arm to his torso. Michah stabs and slices, dulling his blade against Nitya's skull, trying to find his eye before he is caught by his leg and whipped from him, launched through the air and vanishing into the dark smog that fills the dark city with a yelp. Aruna hobbles forward
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>>5203822
"Revenge. Revenge. Revenge! I will not be denied my revenge!" He snarls, almost as rapid as Nitya Sinha himself

"Har Har Har! What a clever trick, Carp Emperor! I forgot you were the student of Lieren, who forsakes honor as readily as he pisses in the morning!" Nitya hisses, ignoring Aruna, Elazar and his knights, Lieren's son who is firing round after explosive round into his chest and even the loudly, crudely cursing Michah to advance upon you, blood soaked claws twitching as he ignites their power fields and boils away the crimson ichor still stubbornly clinging to them.

"A beast deserves no respect" You respond, stepping back hurriedly to keep just out of his reach "I will use every dishonorable trick in the world to see you Slain, Cur"

"Do you not understand how unmatched you are! I've built myself into a giant whose strength matches Lieren's own! Do you really believe an unaltered, unimproved, unblessed mortal man could kill a demi god forged of iron and hate!?" He roars as you circle around, to keep him away from the knight still pinned to the floor and the other injured men. Now only Lieren's son is at your side, retreating with you as he reloads, muttering in his strange tongue under his breath

"I do not believe it will be I who carries out your execution, but I am certain you shall be overcome in such a matter, Yes" You mock, and you witness a change in the butcher King, his eyes spark with crimson lighting and he lowers himself and with a guttural growl, throws himself at you

What do you do, Jinhai?

>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs

>Without fear, activate all of the rocket thrusters built into the six fanged spear and counter charge him.

>Adopt a throwing stance and launch the six fanged spear towards The charging cybernetic tiger man, after activating as many rockets as you can

>Throw yourself forward and beneath him, gambling that he'll overshoot his pounce

>Write in
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>>5203835
>Without fear, activate all of the rocket thrusters built into the six fanged spear and counter charge him.
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>>5203835
>Without fear, activate all of the rocket thrusters built into the six fanged spear and counter charge him.
TAKE THIS STINGER YOU FUCKING NERD!
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>>5203835
>Adopt a throwing stance and launch the six fanged spear towards The charging cybernetic tiger man, after activating as many rockets as you can
After it's thrown. in case it doesn't kill him.
>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs
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>>5203835
>Adopt a throwing stance and launch the six fanged spear towards The charging cybernetic tiger man, after activating as many rockets as you can
>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs
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>>5203835
>Carp dance out of the way

Jinhai, my beautiful boy. You can do it!
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>>5203835
>>Without fear, activate all of the rocket thrusters built into the six fanged spear and counter charge him.
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>>5203835
>Throw yourself forward and beneath him, gambling that he'll overshoot his pounce

can we do this and blast em at the same time?
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>>5203835
>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs
I don't think our boy can manage two things at once here. Which is a shame, but I'm more concerned with keeping Jinhai alive until reinforcements who can punch at Nitya's weight class arrive. Wouldn't mind some divine intervention though.
*cough*Arianka*cough*
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>>5203835
>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs
Where the fuck is Kanzeon? We have 2 overpowered demigods on our side and 2 on theirs. Lieren is dealing with one so Kanzeon should deal with the other.
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>>5203986
Technically, lieren is dealing with khorne and a GIGA fuckton of demons before he can get to her
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>>5204000
Khorne and his daemons are just obstacles on our path to end the traitor ship's life, nothing more.
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>>5203835
>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs

DOOOOOOOOODGE
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>>5203835
>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs
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>>5203835
>>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs

In pursuit of his prey, he'll be all but blind to the knives that come to butcher him. We need only let the beast charge into it's deathtrap.

...Also if best boy Jinhai doesn't do a sick ass rocket-dodge with the thrusters I will be slightly disappointed.
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>>5203835
>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs
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>>5203835
>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs
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>>5203835
>>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs
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>>5203835
>Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs
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Calling the vote now, Sorry for the wait. Someone unplugged the router, didn't tell anyone, and forgot about it

Without fear, activate all of the rocket thrusters built into the six fanged spear and counter charge him.:3

Adopt a throwing stance and launch the six fanged spear towards The charging cybernetic tiger man, after activating as many rockets as you can:2

Carp dance out of his way, desperately hoping to avoid a gruesome demise by the butcher king's claws or fangs:11

Throw yourself forward and beneath him, gambling that he'll overshoot his pounce:1
-and blast him:1

Total votes:16

So Jinhai will attempt to perform the carp dance to avoid the Butcher's jaws and claws

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>>5206046
praise the omnissiah the prayer worked!
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Instinctively, your legs begin the carp dance, the motions trained so diligently and rigorously that the minute twitches of muscle and adjustments of posture and position are performed as naturally and subconsciously as breathing. One foot lifts, until only the tips of its toes are gracing the ground, while the other lifts but stops at the heel. A stance that would not last a second in a test of strength or against a tackle or attempt to throw your from your feet, but the lightness of your feet and undefined posture like water you've adopted, is perfect for weathering a storm by becoming as a leaf and drifting through it. But now, you feel a great pressure, like a carp must feel when they swim upstream, through roaring rapids. Even though your perceptions are slowed enough to comprehend the form of Nitya Sinha's attack and even study his own subtle, minute and very rapid motions, you are not certain your reaction time is brief or sharp enough to avoid his attack. In desperation, you must thrust your fate into the hands of the instincts forged by your own self taught training and the style that arose from your admiration of the often overlooked grace of the movements of a swimming carp. Can Carp swim from a tiger's claws? What about their jaws?

You, Jinhai the first of the Long-Jia dynasty of the age of prosperity and benevolence, the golden dawn era's first and last king and first emperor, would put it to the test. Mayhaps you would pay with your life and head. Mayhaps you would be crippled. But maybe, just maybe, the Carp's dance would prove superior to the Butcher's kings wild flurry of swipes and snaps.

It begins with a twist, of your body from your shoulders down to the tips of your toes. You pirouette forward, facing the beast directly as his murderous, glowing claws and the tendrils of agony emergy from them stretch to reach you like so many ethereal vipers. Breathing, you feel the welcoming chill of the grave rush into your lungs, replacing the heat of the cities many mechanisms and the sickening stench of clotted and fresh blood sticking to metal and burning in the air. Leaning back, you trust your heel into the ground and move your upper body like a carp's tail, wiggling down as claws cut through the air above you and tear a hole through the ether between it to allow the aroma of burning ozone to rush in against your face.

Your eyes shoot open, and you find you have bent your body nearly completely over. Nitya Sinha soars over, and quickly catches himself. Driving one clawed hand into the ground, he swings his entire body and drives his other hand across the armored Chest of Lieren's son, exposing the man beneath as blood rushes to fill the deep grooves he cut through the silver and steel her wore. Kicking off the ground, using his buried hand as both an anchor and guide, Nitya Sinha rocket towards you, grinning ear to ear, all of his fangs grinding together and sparking as he flies.
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Bullets impact upon his brow as he soars like a hawk homing into on a trout in the stream. Flipping like a carp leaping from its pond, you drive the six fanged spear into the ground, and spin yourself around, moving fluidly as Nitya Sinha drives his heels in the ground and begins wildly lashing his arms and feet around, almost as if he were dancing with you.

He moved fast, but you had sparred with Lieren before, and in one of your life's most foolish choices, once asked him to go all out after watching Feng struggle to land a blow on him with a Training spear. You had recognized the carp dance, and wished to see if his was more agile than your own, and quickly learned just how deadly a foe Lieren would be.

And Nitya Sinha was slower. Pressing a palm down on the end of your Spears haft, you use all of your upper body strength to lift yourself into the air, after you had struggled to keep up with the Butcher's storm of knives and searing whips. Having expected you to keep up the game, the butcher king threw his arm forward, anticipating you would round the spear and run right into his claw.

The knives do meet you, but not via your heart as Nitya Sinha intend. The wave of pain tells you, he has clipped your ankle. But, you do not falter and fall down wailing. You flip over, grabbing hold of the spear as your head fills with a white, searing void of light as the indescribable, unimaginable courses through you like electricity through wires. And as you feet me the ground, and you stumble, all of your twirling around the spear serves its purpose. Redirecting the momentum you built up as you twisted and spiraled around the Six fanged spear like a dancer would a pole into your arms, you rip the spear's head from the ground of old bones and rusted blades. Them, transferring the force and speed from your arms into the spear as you spun it around your back.

Like the hammer of a hateful god, you lashed out. The haft impacted upon Nitya Sinha's neck with gong like reverberation. And so great was the force behind the strike, a dent was forced into the ancient spear. Strange green light flowed out of the cracks made within it. And The Butcher King bowed and raced forward, as a aurora of deadly light emerged from your spear. Leaping forward, your pursued the butcher for the first time, and slammed the front half of you spear in the ground, as Lieren does with his Guandao and Chendaos. Smacking it repeatedly, you mend the bend and stop the skinning light from ushering forth from your spear. And as you collapse on one knee, you realize Nitya Sinha did more than knick your ankle.

The armor around your leg is a ruin, and what you can see through the tears in the metal, your entire leg runs crimson. The pain, more manageable now, thrums in your injured limb like a slow drumbeat. Something inside has been cut, something vital to moving it with anything approaching dexterity and grace. Hopefully that can be healed

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Raising your spear to defend yourself, you are surprised to not see the Butcher's manic inhuman grin, but instead see him fighting against Elazar and Aruna, with Michah behind them, his revolver held in a broken hand by way of a scarf wrapped around it and blood hiding half of his face. Elazar has set his thin blade alight with fire, but queerly it burns gold. Aruna tosses, and throws himself towards Nitya with Abandon, kicking and hopping to reach him.

Aruna is tossed back, no missing an arm as well as his leg. Elazar whistles, as half of his face is skinned and the skull beneath is exposed. You smack your leg, commanding it to obey. Once, twice, thrice, four times you smack your first against your thigh, raring to rejoin the fight as Elazar raises his shield to defend himself. The metal is split as easily as rotten wood and Nitya grasps him by his neck

"PERKELE!" Some great voice yells as your leg twitches and begins to work properly again with a spurt of dark blood.

Lieren's son runs past you, having at some point recovered one of the power lances wielded by Elazar's knights.

Elazar kicks and punches, both eyes wide as the butcher's claws illuminate his half skull face and Michah's endurance finally runs out as he collapses to the ground next to the half limbed Aruna, who is clawing his way towards Nitya Sinha with murder in his squinted eyes.

You notice now, that your helmet has been screaming at you that more reinforcements were arriving now?

"Child of the golden sea" A serene voice rustling with a thick Shuni accent coos, as you look up and see the zealous man you know as Tahir at your side "The night shall not fall upon you yet, rise, rise and fulfill your oath to the land and people"

Elazar drops, as at least two dozen Shuni irregulars open fire on Nitya. He reels around and is met with a power lance to the throat. With a back hand, he sends Lieren's son threw the air, the lesser giant thrown as easily as a child's doll as Nitya Sinha's eyes filled with outrage as he clutched his throat, black oil and steaming blood gushing out of the fresh wound in his neck

"MORE CHAFF!" He roared, creating corpses of the brave nine shuni as he shred through them like a sickle through wheat "FINE! FINE! LET MORE JOIN MY FESTIVAL AND BE GROUND INTO RED POWDER"

"This god to...shall fall, praise be, praise" The scar covered mystic whispered as a familiar light filled his eyes.

Your leg was no longer crippled, the blood seeping from it flowed in reverse as the flesh itself began to crawl and knit together

"Stand, stand!" Tahir spat "OH NOBLE EMPEROR! I BESEECH THEE TO STAND!

And so you did

"THE WANDERERS IN THE FOG DENOUNCE YOUR DARKNESS!" A jade masked man cried, hand raised as the air around him broiled as seven more dressed in the same robes surrounded you "Listen to the desert sage,Our most noble Emperor, and fight on"
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All of the Shuni were now dead, leaving Tahir alone as Nitya Sinha roared and, out of sheer pettiness, kicked fragments of bones into Aruna's face, before grabbing him by his collar, and pivoting to toss him to the outskirts of the tourament grounds and then.

"WITCHES!" He cries, whipping back around, to focus on you and your nine mystical guardians as you recover by the gentle touch of the man named Tahir

"Cultivators" One of the jade masked men laugh "A far more dangerous foe"

Nitya rushes all ten of you before

"Hey asshole!"

He is shot in the ankle by a bolter round, as the ground beneath him erupts in an explosive of fire and smoke. He rolls, and catches himself, landing like a cat as he snarls. Lieren's son hobbles forward, the chest plate of his armor fully torn off from the hammering backhand he endured

"I ain't dead yet, Charlie!" He laughed, as he raised his bolt pistol up again

"Hrrrrn" Nitya Sinha seethed "More lambs to the slaughter"

Lightning begins to arc around him, forming a sphere of a storm condenced around his person.

"Lets get serious then" He croaks, gurgling as more blood flows from the wound in his neck and along his face

What do you do, Jinhai?

>Throw the spear now! He's clearly doing something, summoning a storm or powering himself up! Don't let him do it! Whatever it is!

>Tell the sages Lieren has raised, that you need them to take Aruna, Michah and the other injured to safety, using their powers to hide themselves

>Remain behind the protection of the sages, and watch Nitya Sinha's cybernetics to figure out a counter to...whatever it is he is doing right now

>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating

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>>5206070
>>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating
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>>5206081
>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating
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>>5206070
>>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating
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>>5206070
>>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating
Wonder how Lieren and Dae-Hyun are faring.
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>>5206070
>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating

Fuck you and the petty god you serve.
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>>5206070
>>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating
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>>5206070
>>write in
Toss Tahir's scimitar at Lierens son.

Then brace the six fang spear. And fire the flaying ray at the newly exposed weakspot of Nitya's. His now exposed neck.
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>>5206070
>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating
Get fucked asshole.
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>>5206070
>>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating
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>>5206070
>Fire the flaying light.
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>>5206070
>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating
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>>5206070
>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating
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>>5206070
>Remain behind the protection of the sages, and watch Nitya Sinha's cybernetics to figure out a counter to...whatever it is he is doing right now
>Throw the spear now! He's clearly doing something, summoning a storm or powering himself up! Don't let him do it! Whatever it is!
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>>5206070

>Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating
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Calling the vote now.

Toss Lieren's son the six fanged spear, and exchange it for Tahir's scimitar so he can focus on his psykerism as you rush the Butcher king with Lieren's son and Elazar to distract him long enough for the cultivators to suppress the electrical surge he's creating:11

Blast the butcher: 2
-Toss Tahir's scimitar to the space marine, then blast Nitya Sinha in the neck: 1

Remain behind the protection of the sages, and watch Nitya Sinha's cybernetics to figure out a counter to...whatever it is he is doing right now: 1

Throw the spear now! He's clearly doing something, summoning a storm or powering himself up! Don't let him do it! Whatever it is!: 1

So Jinhai will give the six fanged spear to Lieren's son, take the Scimitar from Tahir, and then by time for the psykers to contain the surge of electricity that Nitya Sinha is beckoning by enganging in a three way duel with him, fighting alongside the space marine and the knight Elazar

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Well that can't be good, it appears as though the butcher king is unleashing some inner storm that he has contained within his own flesh and blood. Thinking quickly, you take the scimitar that the Shuni Mystic grips. He relinquishes it easily, and you recognize the familiar script of the Null Denouncement charm carved into its blade and hilt, the scratchings filled with gold wire and anointed with blood mingled with the fragrant funerary oils that so many men now rest beneath the earth soaked withing because of the Iron beast's murderous ambitions.

Squinting, you think forcefully, knowing pyskerists of Lieren's kind can see into a man's innermost thoughts with only a single glance. Tahir blinks, and nods once, bending his fingers and twisting them into painful contortions as you hope he has heard your silent command of 'Control the storm, chain it, bind it, and cast it to the four winds. Those of us who can still fight will delay the Butcher King to allow you and your kindred to work your protective spells and denouncing mantras'. And then, delaying no longer, feeling the odd sensation of your wounds forcefully yet elegantly mended with new flesh, you step beyond the circle of monks and sages that have formed around you. Each of them nod, and their apparent leader, the man with the cybernetic hand and smoke roiling from the fingers of its fleshy counterpart nods to Tahir, and they array themselves in another formation. Some float into the air, but all of them grip prayer beads and follow the Shuni sorcerer's lead in flashing queer hand signs and speaking odd chants of the like great sages such as Guozhi or Kuan Im or the twin excorcist have spoken above the cribs of your progeny.

Throwing up your arm you toss the six fanged spear to Lieren's son without ever taking your eyes off of Nitya Sinha, who is half crouched, clawed fists clenched as red and green lighting roils down his limbs from his back and gut. Twirling the scimitar in your hand, you glance over, to see the Son of Lieren Saluting with his now free hand.

"Understood, following orders. Lets die together, friend of my father, let us make this stand as glorious as so many my brothers have made!" He roars proudly "Come beast, test your mettle against the blood of a primarch"

"Haven't I done so well over a dozen times now" Nitya Sinha sighs, lifting a leg and stomping downwards "You will you be no different than your weakling brothers whelp"

"Do not be so certain, demon thrall! Righteous fury and ardent faith are poison to your kind! I have witnessed the gilded flames scour your ilk from this world!" Elazar barks, grinning with the half of his face that was not flayed by the red giant's claws "He and I have lost brothers, true, but their spirits rest upon our backs! They're memory will be the knife we slip through your armor, to cut out your blackened heart, Cur!"
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"You're still alive, icelander!" Nitya Sinha laughs, unclenching his fists to allow a sheet of lightning to fly through the air. The runes upon your borrowed blade and the armor Lieren's son wears glow brightly gold and you see Nitya Sinha's face twist into a look of supreme contempt

"Phoenixes do not die, they are merely reborn, the same is true for we knights who take them as our heraldic beast!" Elazar boasts as he kicks his heels into the ground

"Lieren's wisdom protect us from the magic of tyrants such as you" You mock, raising Tahir's scimitar to aim it directly for the butcher's injured throat

"I AM NO WITCH! AND THOSE WARDS WILL NOT DEFEND YOU FROM THE BLOODSTORM! " Nitya roars, clapping his hands together, whipping and spinning on his heels as he tries to overwhelm your.

"So you claim" You spit, rushing forward in perfect synch with the greatest knight of the bask and Lieren's vengeful son. All three of you are cloaked in an heavenly aura of golden flame, though you notice the strange presence seems to take the shape of pheonix wings upon Elazars basks

Lieren's son strikes first, shouting the names of his fallen brothers as he thrusts and drives the spear for the gaps in Nitya's armor, as the great spears of blood red lightning flow harmlessly over him like water over an oiled skin. Blood and oil sprays from the butcher's wounds as the Six fanged spear pierces through his side with each name Lieren's progeny calls out.

You arrive next, dancing beneath the storm and avoiding the lightning strikes with renewed vigor and hope that you may just see the end of this day. Swinging up your blade, you level it with your free hand and catch one of the tongues of the "Bloodstorm" And find it consumed by the radiance enveloping the steel you wield. It turns into a great gout of flame. Which so shocks Nitya Sinha, he stumbles back.

"THIS IS FOR ZIAN!" You bellow as the flames flow and split a moment before impacting like two furious dragons biting into the butcher's flesh

Directly into Elazar, who adopts a strange stance with one hand held behind his back. He moves as swiftly as the lightning falling around him and bouncing off of his back. His needle like blade becomes shrouded with gold flame seemingly produced from his palm or the hilt of his well decorated sword.

"FATHER GAIZKA!" He shouts, pricking his burning blade into the butcher's ribs from behind, striking and piercing him with such speed you could only see him as a blur of motion and golden light "SIR GOTZON! SIR EDUR! HUMBLE BENAT! FOR THESE LOST SOULS! THESE VALIANT KNIGHTS! I STRIKE THEE!"

"RONG!" You scream, your head now clear as the flames of fury replace the fog of sorrow and dread, lashing out as Nitya Sinha whips around, throwing his claws out and cutting through the ground, as more lighting erupts from the tips of his fingers "LADY KAMAKSHI! MANU! EVERY SON OF LIEREN! I WILL REPAY YOU FOR THESE DEATH'S DOG OF MURDER"
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The impossibly sharp claws rake your chest, and tear the shoulder pad from Lieren's son along with his arm. The warrior from distant terra simply catches his arm and continues his assault, cursing and sneering with an almost gleeful contemp. The butcher king reaches to grab hold of Elazar, to end him as he retreats with a hurried series of shuffling steps.

Instead, Aruna's deactivated Power Dao strikes him upon his brow. The sudden impact, is not enough to wound him, but its enough to stun him for a fraction of a second. An opening Elazar takes full advantage of as you circle and duck under the Giant's arms, looking for your own chance to strike him. The knight pounces, lunging and driving his thin blade deep into The butchers once impenetrable fence. Nitya seems more confused than hurt, and blinks as the blade passes through into his shoulder blade. And even more so when golden flames erupt from the wound. The butcher lashes out, as if afraid. Then Elazar only has one arm and is sliding across the ground. His maimer struggles to tear out the still burning sword from his shoulder, and so Lieren's son charges, throwing his full weight into the six fanged spear. And, he fires the second before the spear head is driven into the pit of Nitya Sinha's other arm. The flesh is torn from his side and the underside of his arm. Nitya Sinha bellows, eyes bulging with rage and agony as he whips and cuts the ancient spear in two.

And in the same motion tears open the brave man from Terra's throat. He reflexively releases his broken weapon to grasp at his neck.

The sky...the sky is wrong. The storm surrounding The butcher king has spread, even as he kneels and wails, tearing out the weapons stuck inside of him, eyes following you as you dance and shift your feet, one in front of the other in an constant, pauseless dance. Once more, you face the devil of iron, alone except for the protection of the monks.

"I...will...kill" Nitya slurs, hands burning, the flesh melting from them as he rips out the thin blade in one shoulder and then with still molten flesh, removes the spear from his side "Everything on this planet. Won't be long now. Won't be long now. Then my queen and I shall own it all"

What is he raving about. You sway and elude his claws, as he crawls towards you, before he stands once more and attacks with greater fury than ever before, silent, with murder in his eye and his killing intent flowing from him in great crimson rivers.

It is now raining blood, and strange cries and calls carry upon the wind! What is happening in this city. Strangely, you find it easier to match the butcher King's pace, and rather than avoiding all of his attacks, you parry and riposte, feint and strike.

But, you are still outmatched, and despite the protection of the null denouncement charms, and the golden flames they birth, the scimitar in your hand is still only made of steel.
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It only takes one strike to shatter it, and throw you to the ground. Rising, you defiantly glare at the bestial Nitya Sinha as he shrugs of the shards of ice and tongues of flame the disciples of Lieren throw desperately at his back. Bones and blades rise, and hurl themselves against them, but still he is not stopped. You find a new weapon, Elazar's thin blade, as the man himself struggles to stem the bleeding of his severed arm with a branding iron.

The ground is spewing up streams of blood, as Nitya Sinha Savors every moment as he approaches you to take your head

"Can you hear it? The otherworld is seeping into this plane! Oh my love! You will not have to wait much longer! Our ascendance nears! Endure! Endure!" He cries out, desperately, tears of blood flowing from his eyes "A moment more, and I Shall rush to your side, I shall. I shall. Endure. Endure"

His wrist flicks, and you can see his claws as they rush through the air to reach your neck.

And then Nitya Sinha screams, and a hand touches your shoulder.

The giant stumbles back, one of his mechanical eyes completely destoryed.

"Stand up Carp" Feng spits, covered in more scars and blood than even Nitya Sinha "We've lost too many brothers this day, Stand and finish this fight"

"How did..." You mutter, disbelieving the eyes you have trusted all your life. And then you see why. Lady Kanzeon, untouched by the filth of the city

"Focus dammit. The more you injure this son of a bitch, the more my bitch of a sister is distracted from her battle with my husband" She commands, tossing you a second six fanged spear "And drop that rapier, you don't know how to even hold it properly, Jinhai"

She steps back, arms crossed

"And before you ask, why I do not join the fray. I am already devoting all of my energy to combating my sister, and so is Mari" She hisses "We can't last much longer"

"Stop gaping, losing an eye can only keep this beast down for so long" Feng says, with cold, empty eyes

"Who else have we lost" You ask, as you stand beside him, him holding his rifle and you holding your spears, to two greatest students of the golden eyed giant facing the pretender to his strength,

Feng remains silent.

You feel relieved, as you feared the answer more than death itself

"Lets Just kill the whoreson" Feng snarls, like the panther whose fur he wears

When Nitya Rises, he has grown even larger and more muscular.

"Aaaaah, the crippled hunter" He purrs

"AND THE GREAT BEAR OF TERRA!" A booming voice echoes "You have my thanks, Nikephoros. Without your beacon, I would not have found my way out of the maze between the worlds. I hope you don't mind, but I've brought a few extras to this party"

"OH COME ON!" Nitya Sinha snarls "Where do you all keep coming from! This is all becoming rather ridiculous!"
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>>5207365

And then he is washed in flames, as a massive iron giant you know to contain the greatest of Lieren's sons marches through the arena's walls, followed by what must be nearly two hundred of his little brothers and the great majority of your own army, or what's left of it.

"Oh, you poor...poor fools" Nitya Sinha cackles madly, facing all who rally against him with open arms, blood red lighting cascading from the heavens and splitting the earth apart "Just handing me the key to my victory. Alas! you can no longer reach me! The gulf has been split open! My beloved has given me an arena to take the head of the dragon ki...emperor! There is nothing you can do"

"They have jump packs and gravity bikes, asshole" Kanzeon quips.

"Oh" Nitya Sinha laughs "Well, what's a few more partners in this dance"

And then he rushes you and Feng, eyes aglow with malice. Clearly intent on ending you, before he is swarmed and loses his chance.

You raise your spear and Feng falls to one knee, firing shot after shot as the false giant leaps and bounds towards you

What do you do, Jinhai?

>Delay, knowing that even with the injuries you've inflicted, that the Butcher king will need an army to actually kill. Fight defensively and desperately

>Boldly charge forward, and activate the rocket thrusters in your new six fanged spear to impale the butcher king through, no matter the cost.

>"What a poor husband you are, leaving my sworn brother to butcher your wife. Though you have made yourself a monster to match him, you still fall behind Lieren the gentle giant in terms of martial skill. Can you hear your wicked queen screaming?" And then, when he is blinded by rage, brace your spear and lead him to impale himself, risking death to hold him in place, so Lieren's sons can exact their vengeance

>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren or Dae-Hyun)

>write in

We got all the warriors
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>>5207368
>>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren or Dae-Hyun)

The greatest fuck you possible. Will make him rage like a fucking beast to the point of distraction.
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>>5207368
>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren)
If she doesn't
>Delay, knowing that even with the injuries you've inflicted, that the Butcher king will need an army to actually kill. Fight defensively and desperately
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>>5207368
>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren or Dae-Hyun)
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>>5207368
>>Delay, knowing that even with the injuries you've inflicted, the Butcher king will need an army to actually kill. Fight defensively and desperately
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>>5207368
>>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren or Dae-Hyun)

"You forget Nintya, that i don't give honour to a monster like you."
"Brothers, Sons and Daughters of the Journey. Be ready this will be your time to strike ! Destroy this tyrant fool, that cannot see the plan of the righeteous and pure !"
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>>5207426
+1
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>>5207368
I really find it funny to deny him, but on the same score I really dont want to leave this battle like that.

>"What a poor husband you are"
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>>5207368
>>"What a poor husband you are, leaving my sworn brother to butcher your wife. Though you have made yourself a monster to match him, you still fall behind Lieren the gentle giant in terms of martial skill. Can you hear your wicked queen screaming?" And then, when he is blinded by rage, brace your spear and lead him to impale himself, risking death to hold him in place, so Lieren's sons can exact their vengeance
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>>5207426
supportan
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>>5207368
>"What a poor husband you are, leaving my sworn brother to butcher your wife. Though you have made yourself a monster to match him, you still fall behind Lieren the gentle giant in terms of martial skill. Can you hear your wicked queen screaming?" And then, when he is blinded by rage, brace your spear and lead him to impale himself, risking death to hold him in place, so Lieren's sons can exact their vengeance
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>>5207368
>"What a poor husband you are, leaving my sworn brother to butcher your wife. Though you have made yourself a monster to match him, you still fall behind Lieren the gentle giant in terms of martial skill. Can you hear your wicked queen screaming?" And then, when he is blinded by rage, brace your spear and lead him to impale himself, risking death to hold him in place, so Lieren's sons can exact their vengeance

changing vote
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>>5207368
>>"What a poor husband you are, leaving my sworn brother to butcher your wife. Though you have made yourself a monster to match him, you still fall behind Lieren the gentle giant in terms of martial skill. Can you hear your wicked queen screaming?" And then, when he is blinded by rage, brace your spear and lead him to impale himself, risking death to hold him in place, so Lieren's sons can exact their vengeance

Time to die you asshole daemon prince wannabe.
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>>5207368
>"What a poor husband you are, leaving my sworn brother to butcher your wife. Though you have made yourself a monster to match him, you still fall behind Lieren the gentle giant in terms of martial skill. Can you hear your wicked queen screaming?" And then, when he is blinded by rage, brace your spear and lead him to impale himself, risking death to hold him in place, so Lieren's sons can exact their vengeance
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>>5207368
>>"What a poor husband you are, leaving my sworn brother to butcher your wife. Though you have made yourself a monster to match him, you still fall behind Lieren the gentle giant in terms of martial skill. Can you hear your wicked queen screaming?" And then, when he is blinded by rage, brace your spear and lead him to impale himself, risking death to hold him in place, so Lieren's sons can exact their vengeance
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>>5207368
>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren or Dae-Hyun)
We still have to deal with Lieren's fight against angry ship, this battle will go forever otherwise.
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>>5207368
>>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren or Dae-Hyun)
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>>5207368
>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren or Dae-Hyun)
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>>5207368
>"What a poor husband you are, leaving my sworn brother to butcher your wife. Though you have made yourself a monster to match him, you still fall behind Lieren the gentle giant in terms of martial skill. Can you hear your wicked queen screaming?" And then, when he is blinded by rage, brace your spear and lead him to impale himself, risking death to hold him in place, so Lieren's sons can exact their vengeance
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>>5207368
>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren or Dae-Hyun)

He wants an arena to claim his prize in? He won't get it. Stay fuckass mad dipshit and see what getting piledrivered by a dreadnought is like.
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>>5207368
>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren)
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>>5207368
>>5207368 #
>>"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it" *Flee the field, and deny the butcher king his greatest prize* (Switch to Lieren or Dae-Hyun)
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Calling the vote now. Sorry for the long wait.

"Kanzeon, do you have enough energy to carry Me and Feng away from here? You said you've devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it":12

Delay, knowing that even with the injuries you've inflicted, that the Butcher king will need an army to actually kill. Fight defensively and desperately:3

"What a poor husband you are, leaving my sworn brother to butcher your wife. Though you have made yourself a monster to match him, you still fall behind Lieren the gentle giant in terms of martial skill. Can you hear your wicked queen screaming?" And then, when he is blinded by rage, brace your spear and lead him to impale himself, risking death to hold him in place, so Lieren's sons can exact their vengeance: 8

Total votes: 20

So Jinhai will ask if Kanzeon's earthly vessel has enough energy to carry him and Feng away from the battle, to deny the butcher king his prize now that he is surrounded by the imperial army

Writing now
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"Kanzeon, Do you have enough energy to carry me and Feng Away from here" You ask from the corner of your mouth, making a show of false aggression towards the butcher king to keep him from noticing your rather underhanded deception and decision to retreat from fighting this living slaughter manifested in the babe of some poor, most assuredly long dead woman's womb "You said you devoted too much of yourself fighting your sister to join our battle, but you did not say you could not carry us away from it"

She clicked her tongue, lifted her chin and threw back her head, causing a wave of motion to whip through her luxurious mane of river stone black hair that rose from the bloodied ground to lift into the air, elegantly flicking off the filth that clung to its end as she opened her stunning emerald eyes and you found yourself wondering if they too could read a man as easily as a ledger.

"Sometimes, without how stubborn Lieren can be, I wonder if you are not the more perceptive between the two of you. And I'm glad you share his disdain for your societies strange obsession with honor, dignity and face" Kanzeon haughtily stated, brushing the tips of her fingers across the bangs of her beautiful hair "It isn't worthy dying over, and I'd hate to watch your children grow up without your glowing smile, Jinhai"

You move to reply, to answer her compliment with kindness of your own, when she suddenly scooped you up in her arms. Like a child, or frail maiden as fragile as a wilting flower. Feng raised a hand and shook his head.

"Or see Daiyu without you! That'd be as much of a crime as myself enduring without my golden eyed giant at my side!" Kanzeon laughed, revealing your plan "And Feng, stop being a stubborn jack..."

"Nothing of the sort, sister' Feng laughed "The false giant can reach your ankles, even if you fly. Death holds no mysteries or fears to me, I've refined myself of that flaw of my character ages ago. I stand not by pride, but by determination to see you, my dearest sister and second most graced brother, escape to meet Lieren's kind golden eyes once more. A hungering beast needs to be tossed meat so it doesn't lash out, and I will not have those blood stained claws defile your Jade like skin, Lady Kanzeon"

Kanzeon bowed her head, hiding admiring smile on her plump lips.

"Long-Jian men sure know what to say to a woman, no wonder there's so many of you nowadays" She sighed, though beneath her façade of amusement, in the bright emerald pools of her eyes you could see a sorrow that has only been matched by Lieren's when he looked over the devastation of the former Cui region. When he held Bai's limp corpse in his arms

"Don't get yourself killed, Feng" She commanded, as she turned away "That's a direct command from a being that could've been worshipped as a goddess, but, alas, I understand my place in this world, unlike your witch of a wife, Bitcher"
Cont
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>>5209951
"Bitcher?" Nitya gasped utterly flummoxed, the confusion caused by the term combining with his outrage of your flight, which was already great enough to drown the entire world, to cause him to stop where he stood in the shattered arena.

Allowing Kanzeon to turn her back to him and kick off into the sky, flying by strange green auroras of light and sound that emanated from the sleeves of her robes. You tossed your fresh spear down to Feng, who caught it without flourish and blasted the baffled Butcher away from not only himself, but you and Kanzeon. You watched, as he feel low and the furs he wore on his back, made it appear as if he had truly transformed into a fog panther. With a snarl, the crippled hunter threw himself forward, and to your amazement, the field was swallowed by the same shock white fog that had rolled in with the initial assault upon the temple of bloodshed.

"A gift" Kanzeon explains, as if she read your thoughts, lending credence to your theory her eyes could pierce into the hearts of men like Lieren's own "Mari taught me how to make it, a smaller version of her "lungs" that turned the Bask lands into a frozen waste"

"Curious" You mutter, your renewed energy seeping out of yourself as you allowed yourself to at last rest, feeling the rigors of your battle, and the strange healing performed on your body slowly sap away your strength.

"COME! BROTHER OF MY FATHER! WE SHALL SNUFF OUT THE FLAME OF THE BARBARIAN'S LIFE!" Dae-Hyun Roared, as you watched Nitya Sinha try to leap out of the fog, only to find himself grabbed by the one giant larger than himself and slammed to the Ground, where upon Feng and the Son of Lieren called Nikephoros pounced upon him, despite the grievous injuries they both bore.

And then your eyes saw the sky, and saw that the black clouds had become grinning black skulls and nearly fainted from shock.

"Just don't look up, the empyrean is bleeding into the, already flimsy, reality of this city. My bitch of a sister's doing" Kanzeon explained angrily "Means there isn't anywhere safe for me to drop you off, hope you don't mind the view"

"It...is shocking, but it reminds me of the stakes of this final battle of this hopefully final war" You sigh, deciding the glare at the clouds in defiance rather than allow weakness to find a roost in your heart "So I shall look upon these visions of hell, and pray for Lieren's victory"

"As I already am" Kanzeon whispered as you soared over and away from the battle between the butcher king and your imperial army and friends.
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>>5209952

Meanwhile...

>Lieren battled with Avalokiteśvara's body with all of his psionic might and fury, muttering the journey as he marched towards her heart

>The Giant of nothing, Lieren, worked with Mari and Kanzeon to break apart Avalokiteśvara from within by assaulting her vast mind in a combined effort

>Dae-Hyun contained to wail and thrash the butcher king, enraged by all the lives he had taken and the men he had lost to his claws

>Dae-Hyun unleashed the full brunt of his firepower directly onto Nitya Sinha

>write in

Sorry again for the long wait. New thread will come in an update or threeish
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>>5209953
>>The Giant of nothing, Lieren, worked with Mari and Kanzeon to break apart Avalokiteśvara from within by assaulting her vast mind in a combined effort
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>>5209953
>>Dae-Hyun unleashed the full brunt of his firepower directly onto Nitya Sinha
Let's see this through. And most importantly do it in a way that Nitya won't like.
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>>5209953
>Dae-Hyun unleashed the full brunt of his firepower directly onto Nitya Sinha
For all his tech, he's still a Barbarian.
And everybody knows Barbarians ain't SHIT to dakka!
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>>5209953
>>Lieren battled with Avalokiteśvara's body with all of his psionic might and fury, muttering the journey as he marched towards her heart
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>>5209953
>Lieren battled with Avalokiteśvara's body with all of his psionic might and fury, muttering the journey as he marched towards her heart
About time we got back to good old Lieren. It would be disappointing not to see his battle with Avalokiteśvara at all.

Whoever kills Nitya Sinha will be named the Avenger of Kings
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>>5209953
>Dae-Hyun unleashes all his firepower on Nitya

I dont want to leave this battle unfinished.
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>>5209953
>The Giant of nothing, Lieren, worked with Mari and Kanzeon to break apart Avalokiteśvara from within by assaulting her vast mind in a combined effort
>Lieren battled with Avalokiteśvara's body with all of his psionic might and fury, muttering the journey as he marched towards her heart
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>>5209953
>>Dae-Hyun unleashed the full brunt of his firepower directly onto Nitya Sinha
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>>5209953
>>Lieren battled with Avalokiteśvara's body with all of his psionic might and fury, muttering the journey as he marched towards her heart
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>>5209953
>>5210150
>Support
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>>5210150
+1
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>>5209953
>Lieren battled with Avalokiteśvara's body with all of his psionic might and fury, muttering the journey as he marched towards her heart
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>>5209953
>>Dae-Hyun unleashed the full brunt of his firepower directly onto Nitya Sinha
NOW we can hit him with the Perturabo special.
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>>5209953
>>Dae-Hyun unleashed the full brunt of his firepower directly onto Nitya Sinha
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>>5209953
>Dae-Hyun unleashed the full brunt of his firepower directly onto Nitya Sinha
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>>5209953
>>The Giant of nothing, Lieren, worked with Mari and Kanzeon to break apart Avalokiteśvara from within by assaulting her vast mind in a combined effort
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>>5209953
>The Giant of nothing, Lieren, worked with Mari and Kanzeon to break apart Avalokiteśvara from within by assaulting her vast mind in a combined effort
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How much Dakka does an upgraded Dreadnought have?
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Calling the vote now. I've archived this thread already.

The Giant of nothing, Lieren, worked with Mari and Kanzeon to break apart Avalokiteśvara from within by assaulting her vast mind in a combined effort:6

Dae-Hyun unleashed the full brunt of his firepower directly onto Nitya Sinha:6

Lieren battled with Avalokiteśvara's body with all of his psionic might and fury, muttering the journey as he marched towards her heart:7

Total votes: 17

So focus will go back to Lieren as he rips and tears his way through Avalokiteśvara to reach her heart.

Writing now. New thread coming up
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>>5211119
Also just realized I miss counted, and Dae-Hyun blasting Nitya with all his dakka also had 7 votes, So he's doing that as well, just out of sight at the moment since Lieren got more votes in total.

>>5211097
Not enuff
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New thread:
>>5211138



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