I give you a choice

Where do you want this pod to crash.

I want this to be done well, so I am willing to give more details on each planet listed besides what is already available.

> De’lormosa
Classification: Feudal World/Ocean World/Waste World
The planet of Delomosa is a vast blue fresh water ocean. While the ocean flourishes with life the only thing resembling dry land are very small islands, and long stretches of shoals, with the rest of the planet being open ocean. Life here either survives on the shoals, the islands, or on large boat cities and rafts. Other sentient worlds in the system dump their garbage and waste on to this planet leaving some artifical islands of waste that are shifting and churning. Civilization at it’s peak is a mostly feudal society of roving pirates who fight over territory and the wastes that the other planets leave. Beneath the waves giant sea monsters run wild, as well as other creatures. Rumors of an advanced underwater hive city persist in some circles but so do rumors of mermaids. Culture varies regionally, but the people are hot tempered, decisive and intuitive.

> Hershk:
Classification: Tomb World/Dead World
Tomb Status: unknown.
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A world of shadows, flames, alkaline salt flats, fire storms and annual radioactive and electric hurricanes. Very little life is found outside ruins, mountain forts, and ornate tunnel systems. Life is extremely brutal, short and tribal as techno barbarians and darker entities roam the wastelands. The various natural forms of life here are all extremely dangerous. There are rumors of Necrons stalking parts of the planets waste as well as forbidden caches of technology in great vaults and complexes, as well as darker things hidden in the ground. The humans here are all grim, intelligent, and strong. Cultural inspirations are Mesopotamian and Assyrian.

>Colomivar:
Classification: Jungle World/Frontier World
A planet with vast continental jungles filled with exceptionally deadly wildlife and fauna, high mountains and volcanoes, dangerous and even boiling rivers. The oceans are small with various islands but run deep in pockets. Civilization is markedly different, with some civilized cities are present they are in a very small minority as most life is tribal. This divide is marked by wealth and technology. Rumors swirl of a xenos civilization and monsters in the deepest depths of the oceans, as well as other whispers of giant humans whom dwell in the mountains. The Humans are determined, resourceful, creative and hardy. Cultural inspirations are Polynesian, South American and Native American influences.

Cont-

Togyo Angla :
Clasification: Civilized world.
A world with a population of 10 billion humans, with great technical cities and is in a process of building it’s first hive. There is great political instability, as well as disparity between much of the population and a growing wealth gap. The planet is being struggled for in terraforming and government competition and activity means progress is made in a combination of slow then fast leaps. Unknown to most of the population the ruling class is not human, and it keeps the human population inline in a life that most of the population experiences as near poverty, poverty and slavery. There are savage and powerful fauna and disturbing flora in various locations. The population itself varies from tribal in some pockets to feudal, to very civilized. The humans vary in culture from location to location as well as their attitude. The planet is always on the cusp of space travel and some think that life has been here longer than said.

>>4666451
> De’lormosa
MOARI PRIMARCH

LETS FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>>4666453
Togyo Angla

>>4666451
The planet of Delomosa is a vast blue fresh water ocean. While the ocean flourishes with life the only thing resembling dry land are very small islands, and long stretches of shoals, with the rest of the planet being open ocean. Life here either survives on the shoals, the islands, or on large boat cities and rafts. Other sentient worlds in the system dump their garbage and waste on to this planet leaving some artifical islands of waste that are shifting and churning. Civilization at it’s peak is a mostly feudal society of roving pirates who fight over territory and the wastes that the other planets leave. Beneath the waves giant sea monsters run wild, as well as other creatures. Rumors of an advanced underwater hive city persist in some circles but so do rumors of mermaids. Culture varies regionally, but the people are hot tempered, decisive and intuitive.

Tropical Primarch, we could use one of those.

>>4666506
It wasn't too on the nose was it?

>>4666525
Of course not qm I'm just hyper autistic and that's what I was hoping it'd be

>>4666527
>>4666506
Sorry post id changed

>>4666442
>> De’lormosa

>>4666451
>De’lormosa
Let's be a pirate primarch

>>4666451
> Hershk

>>4666451
>Hershk:

I am going to wait longer for some more votes, but if you need any clarification its fine.

So far

Togyo Angla:1
Hershk: 2
De'lormosa:4

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Honestly kinda surprised nobody wants colomivar

>>4666569
I wanted but you can't choose 2 and between tomb world with interesting technologies and frontier, I would pick technologies

>>4666569
I would say that all your options are likeable and well written, it's like you're in candy shop, you pick what you can :) But it seems medieval world wins again, eh, cliché.

>>4666579
Feudal doesn't always mean Medieval.

>>4666451
> Hershk

Hmmm... It looks like De'lormosa but a few want Hershk.

To help assist with this I am going to outline a bit.

1. De'lormosa:
Has varied tech due to regular dumping of waste from [REDACTED]. Where you land here will mostly determine the tech level you would have access to. While the tech level varies, so does the weather. It depends on what climate band you land in, which would be determined by your selection. It could be closer to an Antarctic summer than one in Hawaii. The tech is also as varied. You could have Dark Ages to Dark Age of technology depending on what you do.

2. Hershk:
Has straight up dark age of technology golden age of man technology in it. However, while there may be a lot of tech there, the planet is constantly morphing from how deadly the weather is. I did as much research as possible to see how hellish I could make a 40k world while still making it theoretically habitable. However, there is lots of opportunity for tech here to be found as you will need it just to survive on the hell hole.

And the other two, incase things radically shift while I go for a walk and then to the Gym

3. Colomivar:
This planet has not much climate variation. It's going to be either up to 45c in some deserts or down to -1c. The tech is going to be very disparate with the top end probably being at best industrial revolution and average tech bronze age.

4. Togyo Angla;
I am going to make this real simple. Copy Paste earths climate, weather and technology- then assume that theories about alien tech being hidden by governments are true. Then you will have Togyo Angla. So civilized tech with some Mankinds golden age tech potentially up for grabs.

>>4666442
>> De’lormosa

>>4666451
>Hershk

>>4666451
>> De’lormosa

>>4666451
>Hershk

My walk was satisfying. My gym time will come later.

De'lormosa: 6
Hershk:5
Togyo Angla:1

Total votes: 12
Winner: De'lormosa

That being said, a lot of people were wanting Hershk, so I will try to accommodate a little bit of what I can when I can, it may make this more interesting! I am quite surprised with this take.
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Your pod sails through an irradiated outer cloud past a gas giant and several freighter star fleets. The speed and size of your pod leaves you ignored largely by those nearby. You had towards the fourth planet of this system, De'lormosa. A far different place from your original heading. It appears as a blue marble specked with tiny spots of green, white, tan and red. There is a large hurricane forming that can be spied from your pod. As well as small icy regions, great tropical shoals some with volcanos, small islands, a great chain of islands and one great island to the south.

Your pod approaches faster towards the planet, and cannot escape the gravity.

>Crash near the hurricane/near chain of islands
>Crash near the large the large shoal with one mighty island
>Crash near the largest island
>Crash near the icy region

>>4666767
>>Crash near the largest island

Are/Were all the Primarchs landed on their homeworlds at the same time or what? Because if we landed say a decade before Big E comes it won't matter much
>Hershk

>>4666771
Fucking captcha taking so long

>>4666767
>>Crash near the largest island

>>4666767
>>Crash near the largest island

>>4666771

Lore wise- the Primarch of the eleventh was one of the last discovered. However things are slightly different. There will be enough time for it to matter- but it may not take that long. So theoretically think more middle of the road.

Or if enough are interested- I was going to call for a vote to roll for when the primarch is found.

>>4666767
>Hurricane

Lets take the exciting option!

>>4666767
>Crash near the icy region

>>4666767
>>4666785
>Crash near the hurricane/near chain of islands
actually let me switch to this

>>4666767
>>Crash near the hurricane/near chain of islands
fuck it, changing to this

>>4666767
>Crash near the hurricane/near chain of islands

>>4666767
>crash near the Hurricane
MAUI QUEST GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>>4666767
>Crash near the hurricane/near chain of islands

>>4666767
>Crash near the largest island
Surfs up brah

It looks like we are crashing into the eye of a hurricane near the largest island.

Will start when I get back.

So Storm Riders for our Legion name?

>>4666962
no names yet anon we gotta get a feel for how we do business and the local culture

>>4666962
Slow yer roll there, buckaroo.

So pirate primarch?

>>4666767
I was born in a crossfire hurricane

https://youtu.be/OJniq9KuDAQ
Fitting song.

Glad you're running, been waiting for this quest

god damn the suspense is killing me

>>4667208
i'm thinking more
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9fvMQ04is4&ab_channel=LaFamigliaDoorsiana

Sorry for the wait we had an emergency call in at work.

--
"If you had told me he had crashed into his planet in the midst of a hurricane I would have said that it would figure"
REDACTED
Record of the Great Crusade
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When the pod of the XIth primarch came to grace De'lormosa it was in the middle of a Hurricane the likes of which the planet had not seen in over a century. Tales would be told of this encounter. No doubt some would be somewhat fabricated.

Sometimes though the truth is stranger than fiction.

Upon entering the atmosphere the Pod was struck multiple times by the rad enhanced lightning of the planet. The Life keeping Pod designed by the emperor stronger than the lightning storm, traveling at absurd speeds breaking the sound barrier and creating a gapping hole a second eye through the hurricane caused by localized phenomena.

The locals at the time saw it as ominous.

The island chain nearby was being supplied by a friendly trading ship at the time and the first person to see the pod was on the deck manning the wheel.

One could see the green glow of ghost fire across the streaking meteor and the wind suddenly changed directions for the briefest of moments-- or so it was claimed by the captain of the ship, also on deck.

The pod, partially due to design and angle of approach skipped like a rock losing momentum and tumbled towards shore only coming to rest in the sand of an outlier island, the farthest key.

The tribal chief of the nearby Island felt that it was a sign that needed to be investigated and hopped in his dug out canoe with brother to investigate.

The captain of the boat unable to sail closer due to the terrible weather and the size of his ship that would be unable to negotiate the reef, spied it. Seeing what was going on, he and the quartermaster took an excursion dingy to go see what crashed, hoping for potential treasure and not trash from the stars.

To this day, there is still argument about who arrived first. Only the primarch could actually know for sure.

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> The Chief arrives first with his brother
> The Captain arrives first with his quartermaster
> They arrived at the same time

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Some say the lightning that touched the pod explains a lot about the Primarch of the XI

Why (Choose 1)

> Because he was a null, his spark taken from him in exchange for survival
> Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him
> Because of his stormy personality and his ability to strike like lightning incarnate like his father the emperor

> Write in

>>4667361
> They arrived at the same time
> Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him

>>4667361
>> The Chief arrives first with his brother
>> Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him

>The Chief arrives first with his brother
>Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him
Trickster time

>>4667361
>> The Captain arrives first with his quartermaster
>> Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him
Being a null doesn't seem quite right. Void combat and anti-daemon are too unrelated to both potentially specialize in down the line.

>>4667381
support
>metal band music intensifies.crusade

I will return in the morning and we shall vote then,.

>>4667361
> The Chief arrives first with his brother
> Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him

>>4667361
> They arrived at the same time
> Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him

>>4667361
> They arrived at the same time
> Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him

>>4667361
>> They arrived at the same time
>> Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him

>>4667361
>Same time
>Electricity

BIO-ELECTRICITY PSYKER LETS GOOOOOOOO

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>>4667361
>>4667381
>>4667385
>>4667389
>>4667396
>>4667548
>>4667623
>>4667652
>>4667684
>>4667688
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fSwhNk7sdY

>>4667361
from the looks of it we'll probably be Maori Pirate which I am okay with, I think it'd be pretty badass.

>>4667361
>> They arrived at the same time
>> Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him

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>> They arrived at the same time
>> Because electricity never harmed him, and he could channel it through him
https://youtu.be/VcByktP-mdE

Good Morning!
>>4667695
Thanks terry that woke up me perfectly.

>Same Time
7
> Chief and Brother
3
> Captain and Quartermaster
1
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The storm quieted a bit as the two arrived on the island at the same time, though depending on who you ask you'd here multiple conflicting reports.

When Captain Jero Avidulla arrived he hailed the chief warmly as a friend. They both had done business before, and whenever the captain would go upon the account, he would exclude any raiding from the chiefs island and always offer the chiefs men to join up on the account- as the chiefs men were strong and mighty warriors who were perfect at operating any vessel on the ocean.

Chief Ravi Kahnalaho hugged his friend. Ravi knew the captain always traded at a fair rate, and had always warned Ravi of any sea monsters if his men were willing to go a hunting.

"We saw the thing come down from the boat Ravi, any idea what it might be?" The captain said kicking the pod, accidentally changing the course of the blue planet. Ravi looked inside the thing

"Ya Jero it's a kid! Look!" Ravi said pointing to child. The world of De'lormosa had outsiders on it. While most of the population was born on De'lormosa, some were marooned. Jero's father was one of these and he had the green eyes of his father but the look of the natives. The child, had eyes like the crystal blue of the island something none of the assembled men had seen. The childs skin was like theres.

"This kid, came from out there? Them Outsiders, they gettin rid of babies now? They worse than the sea monsters!" Jero said spitting off to the side.

"This I guess his crib. Looks like something your guys would know how to use Jero."
Ravi said. Jero's eyes narrowed as if he had found treasure, then stopped.

"Nah Ravi. Laws and Code mate. It came with him, so it's his. My ship is no place for a child of that size. If he wants to join us after his name day send me a bird and I will happily take him on though. This child has got some touch of destiny. I can smell it in the wind." Jero said and his quartermaster laugh.

"That's the beached whale over yonder Jero." Quartermaster Johan said

"The slavers may come before you get back around though Jero. We have won our every last defense against them, but what if we don't get so lucky? What would they do with a kid like this and a pod like this? He may actually be better in your hands." Ravi said.

"Ravi don't get down on yourself, I know you lost your daughter to a raid once, but it don't mean it will happen again." The Chiefs brother Kai said.

"I may have a solution." The island had a hermit. A Shaman.

"Old man you almost got yourself gored by my spear." The Quartermaster said.

"The child is important. You both arrived together. So you shall share the child together like a family."

> Captain Jero gets custody first
> Chief Ravi gets Custody First.

>>4667916
>Chief

A child growing strong as a warrior true, hopping onto the seas to make his fortune before returning at the turn of the 11th hour to case the slavers into the deep?
I can dig it.

>>4667906
>>4667325
>>4667208
Also thanks lads for all the rock. It's good for getting up and ready to go for all I must do today.

>Immunity to and control/channeling of electricity
Unanimous

I am excited this path was chosen. This is going to be a joy to write.

> Chief Ravi gets Custody First.
I'm liking the Chief, and later we can join the Captain.

Maybe even work to get their lines to merge in the decades to come and leave the planet in their descendants' care.

>>4667916
> Chief Ravi gets Custody First.
I guess the captain can come and teach us various things from time to time.

>>4667916
> Chief Ravi gets Custody First.

>>4667916
> Chief Ravi gets Custody First.
Grow as a warrior and then become a sailor.

>>4667927
I'm curious to see if that power eventually evolves to something like control of machines/technopathy with enough experience and finesse. That would be interesting. Imagine the looks on people like the Adeptus Mechanicus and the Iron Hands.

>>4667948
So like Misaka from Railgun?

>>4667951
Haven't seen that one, but basically the more experience we get with this power, the more we can do with machines. So starting with simple electricity control, then understanding how machines work from touching them, then finally being able to control them by thought alone. Something like that.

>>4667951
Here's Electro's powers. They're something similar(only without the brain control and turn into lightning parts):
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electro_(Marvel_Comics)#Powers_and_abilities

>>4667916
> Chief Ravi gets Custody First.
Hug both of them upon jumping out of the pod.

I hope we learn about mana.

>>4667916
>>4667927
Oh yeah are you familiar with the “big man” political system? It seems pretty common among islanders in the Pacific.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Big_man_(anthropology)

>>4667967
>11th Primarch:"With a wave of my finger, and a flick of my dick, one zap from me will kill you quick! So get on your knees to suck and blow! But not right now I got to go!"
>"Leman: I hate when he rhymes."

>>4667916
>> Captain Jero gets custody first
lets go sailing

>>4668016
have my (you). nice.

>>4668013
I believe that you should know what you are writing about, so I researched a lot of this stuff before hand. For each different planet, I researched a lot of stuff. This one oddly I did the second most research next to Hershk.
>>4668016
Trolling Leman
is there any primarch that actually did that? I am seriously asking because I have done a lot of reading of 40k lore and I am weak on the wolves.
>>4667948
It depends on how it's wielded. A good welder used for fixing up a tank can turn into the very flamethrower used to destroy it.

Gonna give a little bit more time but it is looking the chief goes first.

>>4667984
Who knows?

>Chief First

"Old man- who are you?" Chief Ravi asks the old hermit as Captain Jero gives a sideways glance.

"You the big man. You'll figure it out. Been a long time since anyone come to my island. Never seen it get hit by this before." The old man says attempting to pull out the child. "He's a biggun. He gonna be big man someday. I can feel the Mana flowin through him."

"Ya. He is. Looks like he'll be big and strong before you know it. Ravi. Your a good friend. You had a daughter. You always wanted a son. Maybe this is something greater. Give and Take. You raise him first like your tribe does. When name day comes, I take him out to the ocean, teach him it's ways then bring him back. Make you proud, and probably make you really rich." Captain Jero says.

"Why you gift this Jero?" Ravi asks.

"You save my life once Ravi. I was not there to save your daughter, but mayhap I can give you this gift to get a son." Jero says.

"You aint sleepin with my wife Jero. I met her first." Ravi says with a semi serious look which Jero answers back with a stern look. The pair laugh.

"I take this deal old man." Ravi Says.

"I do as well." Jero says.

"Good. Now take this big metal thing an this big lad and get offa my island." The old man says walking off.

__

Chief Ravi went home to his wife Tia and explained to her what happened, she only had one question after seeing the boy

"Ravi my love, what do he call him"

> Alika
> Keahilani
> Anewa
> Harata

>>4668149
Forgot that write in is an option

>>4668149
> Alika

>>4668149
> Keahilani
This one rolls off the tongue better for me

>>4668149
>Keahilani
Part of me wants to give him the name of one of the Bionicles, but that would be silly.

>>4668149
Huh. I'm not used to seeing names like these in fiction but if have to pick one:
> Alika
>>4668152
Don't really know pacific tribes names and suddenly I'm dreading the time we find some Hawaiian-like names. They really have some of the longest words in any language.

>>4668149
Harata. it has POWER

>>4668149
>>write in
Kolinaisi
it's a Polynesian name meaning 'storm' and we came down through a hurricane

>>4668165
Okay switching to support this

>>4668165
I'll switch my vote, it sounds nicer.

Names so far have either been Hawaiian, Polynesian, or Maori so far.

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>>4668149
I'm voting Kai. I think that means ocean in Hawaiian.

>>4668165
Cool. I’ll support this.

>>4668165
>Kolinaisi Harata

>>4668185
One name for now. More later.

>>4668149
>write in
>Tupuhi

>>4668165
Support.

>>4668149
Harata

>>4668165
Support

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Quick Tally
> Kolinaisi
6
> Keahilani
2
> Alika
2
> Harata
2
>Tupuhi
1 (sorry dude, I thought it sounded cool.)
> Kai
1 (It means other things too.)


6 out of 13 total. Maybe when second name day comes we will put some of these options back in the hat.
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"I know a good name. I am gonna call him Kolinaisi"

"Like the storm he rode in on. Great." Tia says with an eye roll and a chuckle. "He's gonna be a trouble maker just like you Ravi." She calls out as Ravi strides to the edge of the tent, the storm wearing down.

"Don't forget you married this troublemaker!" Ravi says back

"Don't remind me!" She says coming up and putting her arms around his back.

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"One of the most absurd thing about the primarchs, was the uniformity in that most of them didn't have a decent upbringing any a few didn't even have parents. Many were used by others. The Eleventh? He was in a loving home, with a loving family and a loving community. But that didn't mean his childhood was any less fierce."
[REDACTED] to remembrancer
-

How does Kolinaisi spend his time in his early childhood before he performs the many rites and tests he needs to be not only a man, but clear heir to the chief.

Pick two- the ones with the most votes will be chosen
> Hunts the monsters that lurk to close to shore
> Caring for the elders, helping the Shaman on the far island and Half Mad Har'ii over on the near island
> Learning from your pod and others, trying to help improve the village how you can
> Swimming to deep depths off the island and seeing what wrecks lie nearby
> Testing the limits of your strength and speed, becoming an athlete
> Helping the men of the village fish and learning from your father the ways of the big man
> Scrapping and salvaging any junk that floats ashore

And Pick two from here for "Fun"
> Surfing
> Fighting
> Hunting
> Boating
> Stargazing
> Reading
> Wood Carving

>>4668420
> Scrapping and salvaging any junk that floats ashore
> Swimming to deep depths off the island and seeing what wrecks lie nearby

> Boating
> Surfing

Hear me out lads, Jet surfboard, its even cooler than a jet bike

> Learning from your pod and others, trying to help improve the village how you can
> Helping the men of the village fish and learning from your father the ways of the big man
> Stargazing
> Boating
We shall be the Naval Primarch

>>4668420
>Caring for the elder and shaman.
We are the storm speaker and mystic man!
>Swimming to the deep depths where the monsters lurk.
I see no reason to not kill the monsters near the shore as we intrude on their domain.

>Boating
>Star gazing

>>4668420
>>4668420
>> Swimming to deep depths off the island and seeing what wrecks lie nearby
>> Helping the men of the village fish and learning from your father the ways of the big man
>> Surfing
>> Stargazing
Stargazing will be very important for navigating on the open ocean

>>4668420
>>> Swimming to deep depths off the island and seeing what wrecks lie nearby
>>> Helping the men of the village fish and learning from your father the ways of the big man
>>> Surfing
>>> Stargazing

>>4668420
> Learning from your pod and others, trying to help improve the village how you can
> Swimming to deep depths off the island and seeing what wrecks lie nearby
Possibly hunting the monsters at the same time. We may find some interesting things.
> Fighting
> Hunting
Because I skipped fighting with the previous options. Will we learn how to read if we don't pick reading?

>>4668451
Oh right.
>>4668464
Changing fighting to stargazing.

>>4668464
The Chief would probably get beaten up by Tia if he didn't teach his son how to read.

>>4668420
> Helping the men of the village fish and learning from your father the ways of the big man
> Hunts the monsters that lurk to close to shore

> Reading
> Wood Carving

>>4668464
>>4668420
Supporting this

>>4668474
I'm asking because I seem to recall certain tribes having only specific members read and write(for example only their shaman), though i could be wrong.

>>4668496
Of course it's more commonplace for reading in this tribe, as it is a bit different. If it was a different tribe, you probably would have been illiterate.

>>4668420
>Hunting
>Stargazing
-
>Hunts the monsters that lurk to close to shore
>Swimming to deep depths off the island and seeing what wrecks lie nearby

Great Hunter of the Depths route!

>>4668420
> Helping the men of the village fish and learning from your father the ways of the big man
> Hunts the monsters that lurk to close to shore

> Boating
> Stargazing

>>4668503
Thank you. Then I'm happy with what I chose.

>>4668420
> Learning from your pod and others, trying to help improve the village how you can
> Helping the men of the village fish and learning from your father the ways of the big man

> Reading
> Surfing

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>>4668428
So like the Ref Boards from Eureka 7?

>>4668420
> Helping the men of the village fish and learning from your father the ways of the big man
> Caring for the elders, helping the Shaman on the far island and Half Mad Har'ii over on the near island
Tribal chief primarch
> Boating
> Wood Carving
Carve out smaller boats

>>4668537
Yes

Here is a ramshackle tally As I am about to head out for my second afternoon walk

Scrap 1
Dive 7
Pod 4
Monsters 3
Fishing 6
Care 2
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Boat 4
Surf 4
Stargazing 7
Hunting 3
Reading 2
Wood Carving 2

When I get back I shall do a final tally after I am done and write from there. Some of these may be done in tandem with how this looks.

>>4668552
Have a nice walk. So surfing using boats? Primarchs are pretty big aren't they?

>>4668420
> Swimming to deep depths off the island and seeing what wrecks lie nearby
> Learning from your pod and others, trying to help improve the village how you can

>Surfing
>Srargazing

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JwN1f0ofbFg
What do you guys think about pet sharks and sea monsters?

>>4668583
Depending on how this Primarch's power works, we might be able to even use it to influence animal behavior, eventually even sea monster behavior. So possibly aquaman?

>>4668607
Hawaiian Aquaman but also Zeus but also in space but also a mad surfer

>>4668607
Literally telepethy. Just develop our psychic abilities in those directions without making consious efforts to notice that we are restricting ourself subconsiously.

>>4668613
All of the above apparently.
>>4668617
Are we restricting ourselves and if so why?

>>4668623
Maybe we are. If so because it's just the only thing we have tried and practiced doing.

So Kolinaisi Grew!

He would spend his days surfing and boating out to help the fishermen and his father, learning the way to be a big man, Helping his community grow through his actions. He was a good and patient fisherman, and he would usually be able to bring in a good haul. But unbeknownst to even him, even a primarch could have trouble catching fish on a bad day. On the shores he would take guidance from his father, and watch how he handled other tribes, and he would often lead from the front. Even when dealing with the occasional pirate.

When he wasn't on the surf or on the water, he could be found diving deep near the island. Wrecks were frequent, so he would occasionally find the jeweled necklace or trinket he would get for his mother or his cousin, who was practically his sister, Arona. These dives would net him treasures and weird items, and the occasional weapons cache he would give to his father, his uncle, or keep for himself and maybe the one time Arona "borrowed" a weapon. These dives and his surfing and boating would make Kolinaisi strong, but lean. It would also keep his humor good, and he would occasionally find the big monster lurking near the shore, he would drag back up for food. With this he would build an interesting necklace made from the teeth of the beasts he slew under water.

At night he would gaze up at the stars with wonder, sometimes going back to the pod he was found in, and learning about the stars he was looking at, as well as the world above. He would be good at stargazing, allowing him to take night voyages out to the other nearby islands, farther than all the boys, and even further than some men. His nightly rambles to look at the sky, and even sometimes surf under them would often, however find him sleeping at odd hours of the day. Though he was known to occasionally be napping, he was very active. And even if napping, he would not be unprepared.

So when the day of his announcement of the rites, the time that is normally supposed to catch a lad by surprise. It didn't. The Haka Troupe, the men of the tribe not including the father and family approached the boy. To challenge him to be a man.

---

You hear them coming from about 500 meters out. This is normally intentional. But they are supposed to be a little bit more quiet when they get closer. You can tell that they are trying to be their sneakiest.

That's part of the goal. Part of the fun. The rites are serious, and the Haka, is important. You cannot move. You cannot shake. Once it is performed you must be dead still. Only then can you respond. Then you either answer the challenge, or rarely, challenge back. Though the challenge back is harder. It means you compete against others and you must win. To challenge back and succeed first go round is to be next in line for chief. Next big man.

---

>>4668714
You must pick one Kolinaisi!

> Pretend to be sleeping until the last minute till right when they get close enough. Then surprise THEM. They'll be singing about that for a few years.
> Lazily get up and do some stretches. This should be fun.
> Get up, walk towards them, sing something some shanty along the way
> Sit perfectly silent on your rock staring at them until they get there. Then stand right up, cross your arms and smugly, grin.
> Write in

>>4668716
>> Pretend to be sleeping until the last minute till right when they get close enough. Then surprise THEM. They'll be singing about that for a few years.

>>4668716
> Write in
>challenge back
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BI851yJUQQw

>>4668721
So
You want to challenge them, before they even get there? Not even give them a chance- that's a respectable move, but you need to give me a Haka for that.

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>>4668724
Oh no, I mean wait for them to finish, then do a haka in turn.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yiKFYTFJ_kw

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>>4668726
Ah okay. That was going to be an option after the performance. However, if yall want to get that out of the way now you can.

Or

If everyone is feeling bold, you can challenge outright if you guys vote on it of course.

>>4668716
> Sit perfectly silent on your rock staring at them until they get there. Then stand right up, cross your arms and smugly, grin.
Smug is the way.

>>4668716
> Pretend to be sleeping until the last minute till right when they get close enough. Then surprise THEM. They'll be singing about that for a few years.

>>4668716
then
> Sit perfectly silent on your rock staring at them until they get there. Then stand right up, cross your arms and smugly, grin.

>>4668716
>Pretend to be asleep until the last minute.

WE SHALL CHALLENGE THEM BACK!

> Pretend to be sleeping until the last minute till right when they get close enough. Then surprise THEM. They'll be singing about that for a few years.

And I think I found our Primarch's voice
https://youtu.be/oAqxJmHHy84
Just a bit deeper, and when he gets angry you could swear thunder was distantly rolling from his chest

>>4668716
>> Lazily get up and do some stretches. This should be fun.
Are we not the most chill of ours brothers?

>>4668753
support. rest in peace Israel.

>>4668734
Support

>>4668760
Even the most chill, must sometimes flex, though it looks like that may be the result.

> Pretend to sleep 4
> Smug 4
> Chill 1

It's a tie for now. I will let it go a little longer, then write up.

And so far it seems we do want to challenge afterwards.

>>4668753
Oh man, that guy was good. It will be canon in my heart no matter what.

>>4668716
> Pretend to be sleeping until the last minute till right when they get close enough. Then surprise THEM. They'll be singing about that for a few years.

Pretend to sleep 5
Smug 4
..
I think I can write this half way.
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You patiently wait, pretending to sleep. Snoring, but not loudly and obnoxiously. You hear them approaching and through a just a small part in your long hair your able to gaze upon them as they approach. The group is large. They look excited. You do understand a bit. You are the chiefs son. So it would be important. Your uncle probably also decided to have some special for you, to make it more fun. They close a bit, they look relaxed about twenty meters. You stop snoring. You smile.

You flip up to your feet causing a few of them to back off scaring Tiny Aata and Slim Rongo. Your Uncle shakes his head as you cross your arms and smile smug and stand calmly. They get into ranks and raise their clubs and axes. Your uncle his favorite saber. The one you got him from the wreck a little while back.

They shout to you to be ready and they say to be strong in voice as a choir of the dread whales in their hunt song.

They come close, bringing their clubs and axes close trying to get you to move, trying to scare you.

You move not. You stay cool and calm as the ocean breeze.

They stamp their feet, telling you the road will be long and painful such is life for a man.

They bring the axes down next to you, you can smell that Slim Rongo ate the fermented pineapple and puff fish for lunch. Again.

You move not. You are as steady as a rock in a storm.

They shout about how men must brave, to face death for it is give and take. Life and death. The clap is like thunder. Their stomps like an earthquake. Their faces trying, begging you to react.

You move not. Your smug smile, your eyes bright, your arms crossed yet unmoved.

They get within inches of your face as they clap one more time near your face, shouting loud and together of what it takes to be a man, what it means to be in the tribe, a warrior and you do not move.

They stop. They step back in file. Everyone is smiling now you wait a beat. They all then shout again and clap, before returning to a relaxed pose. Now is the time of the challenge, if you so choose. And in your heart you chose. You chose a long time ago that this is what you would do.

---
Tell me the nature of your challenge Eleventh Primarch Kolinaisi. Pick the nature of your Haka! Pick just one.

> A powerful Haka shaking the earth, "Send me the best you got!"
> A violent and sudden Haka fast as the wind "Tell the chief your going to need more men!"
> A frightening and loud Haka like thunder "Let every island know so they may witness!"
> A stoic but moving Haka steady as the ocean tide "I accept this haka and choose the rite to challenge!"
> Write in. Tell me the tone of it and the crux of the challenge. Give me a story to tell and a picture to paint.

I need to get some rest, I will tally this tomorrow.

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> A frightening and loud Haka like thunder "Let every island know so they may witness!"

>>4669044
> A frightening and loud Haka like thunder "Let every island know so they may witness!"

>>4669044
>> Write in. Tell me the tone of it and the crux of the challenge. Give me a story to tell and a picture to paint.
Open with a thunderous clap then chant quiet, stamp and shake the ground but keep our voice calm. Opening slow and building, building before finishing once again quiet.
"I rise to your challenge and beyond it because my story has only just begun"

>>4669059
>Open with a thunderous clap then chant quiet, stamp and shake the ground but keep our voice calm. Opening slow and building, building before finishing once again quiet.
>"I rise to your challenge and beyond it because my story has only just begun"
I'm really tempted t ochange my post >>4669054 to this one

>>4669044
>> A frightening and loud Haka like thunder "Let every island know so they may witness!"

>>4669044
> A stoic but moving Haka steady as the ocean tide "I accept this haka and choose the rite to challenge!"

>>4669044
> A stoic but moving Haka steady as the ocean tide "I accept this haka and choose the rite to challenge!"

>>4669044
>Let ever island know so they may witness.

>>4669063
Support

>>4669044
> A violent and sudden Haka fast as the wind "Tell the chief your going to need more men!"
> A frightening and loud Haka like thunder "Let every island know so they may witness!"
Be like the storm.

Good Morning /qst/ and ones again thank you for joining me for this tale.

>"Let Every Island Know" 4
> >>4669059 Beautiful write in btw I may have to incorporate it anyway 1
> "I Accept this haka and choose the rite"2
> "Tell the chief you need more men" 1

9 votes, none at over half. hmmm.

I am going to give it a bit more time. I have much to do this morning, so it may give more time for more development.

>>4669438
That's fine

>>4669438

Im an idiot. 8 votes. I should drink my coffee before doing maths. Still not quite to over half yet. I will give more time still, and see what happens then I shall tally the votes and write.

Weapon Ides
>Generic MC Heavy Bolter and Power Sword in case his normal preferred weapons aren't good for the situation (Enclosed spaces etc.)
>MC Spear, he can empower it with his lightning when throwing it turning it into a Thunderbolt (D-Strength 5+ blas marker)
> Fish Hook shaped power/force axe

>>4669063
Support

>>4669487
https://www.armymuseum.co.nz/maori-weapons/
How do you feel about these?

>>4669487
How about a power club?

>>4669495
I can see the Taiaha having the most potential, if only as symbols of authority for say Legion Captains, Chief Apothecary etc.

Maybe we could hand craft one for each of our brothers and the Emperor later? They don't have to use it but they'd understand the symbolism of their position

>>4669533
>>4669487
>>4669495
All very interesting. I think the gifting of a Taiaha seems very thematic. It is still early in our primarchs development.

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You have been trained as a fisher, a warrior, a big man. You know there is just a small time you can challenge. Nobody you are aware of in your age range, or you think size range, you are not that old has done this.
--

You clap your hands together as loud and hard as you can. It stings, but the loud clap could be mistaken for an explosion or thunder. You step into a bold, robust stance as you bring your foot to the earth with a mighty stomp that shakes the ground around you. They gather together, arms over shoulders, gathering up as a line.

The men, even your uncle, their eyes grow wide before you even open your mouth.

When you do open your mouth out comes the thunder of your voice

"Let every island know! Let every Island know! " You chant loudly clapping then outstretching your arms showing your hand club and your fishing knife

"Let them come and see! Let them come and see!" You say intentionally dropping your weapons making a show of it . You flex your muscles and show your hard earned strength. You make a fierce and frightening face.

"Bring all the chiefs! Bring all the chiefs!" You clap once again then stomp quickly in a dramatic show

"Let them know I choose to challenge!" You are incredibly loud now, your voice having growing louder and stronger each time like a mighty storm.

"Let them come! Let them see! I rise to this challenge and beyond! My story here has only begun!" you let out like a mighty roar and you stamp your foot a last time you look up directly at them and put your arms together. Your Haka complete. You pretend that you didn't pay attention to the fact a few of the men flinched. You nod. The men of the tribe gather nod completing the ceremony. There is a serious moment. Then it is all smiles once again. The men coming up led by your uncle to give you a pat on the back

"This is my Nephew! He's gonna be the big man someday!" Your uncle says. Your uncle, still a little bit taller than you is considered probably the best fighter on the island.

"Go get your things. Your challenge will be eagerly accepted by the chief. You may want to talk to a few friends first, maybe ask for some advice. Know Your dad is gonna throw his best men at it, which is deserved. He wants a good challenge for you." Your uncle says hugging you but whispering close.

"I wouldn't expect anything less." You say with a nod ending the embrace. He then smiles as the men give some smiles and disperse. The pair of you start to head back to the village

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Pick two.

>Uncle how do the rites work as the challenge, I just have to do better than each person against me right?
> Uncle who would you go talk to if you were me?
> Uncle was the Haka good? Anyone flinch?
> Tell me the sleeping trick was at least funny.
> Any news from the village?
> Write in

Also heads-up, I will be going to work soon, and be there for a while. I will keep tabs on my phone, but I don't think I will be able to respond on it.

I am really happy with the interest, and I hope the Haka was ok.

>>4669559
>Uncle how do the rites work as the challenge, I just have to do better than each person against me right?
> Tell me the sleeping trick was at least funny.

>>4669559
>Uncle how do the rites work as the challenge, I just have to do better than each person against me right?
> Tell me the sleeping trick was at least funny.

>>4669568
Dis

>>4669568
Support.

>>4669559
>Uncle how do the rites work as the challenge, I just have to do better than each person against me right?
> Any news from the village?

>>4669559
>>Uncle how do the rites work as the challenge, I just have to do better than each person against me right?
>> Uncle was the Haka good? Anyone flinch?

Good evening!

I apologize for the long time between posts. Work is new and exciting for me as life is interesting right now but enough personal.
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6 out of 6 for Asking Uncle the rites
4 for the sleeping trick.
--

"Tell me the sleeping trick was at least funny Uncle." You say. Your uncle lets out a mighty laugh.

"I swear Rongo almost fell over. It was good, I haven't seen that kind of cleverness in a while. I myself pretended they were catching me while fishing off the coast . The look on your fathers face when I just turned around and flung the fish was a classic too" he says putting his arm around your shoulder Your uncle, is not too much older than you, and definetly not that much older than you physically. Looking at the "pod" you were given you have been aging faster then most people should. Your Uncle, is tall and powerful, young and a mighty warrior. Still a bit taller than you and still a little stronger than you.

"What happens now that I have challenged? Are the rites different." You ask.

"Your kill has to feed the village and then some. Many people gonna come now. Normally it's just all your family, but you trying to be big man. So you need a big kill or a lot of small kills." He says as the two of you take a detour to look out on the nearby islands as ships are diverting all over.

"Which is gonna be complicated because the Big Boy returned. So unless you can deal with the big boy, which nobody alive can remember the last to hurt em, much less kill one you gonna be stuck with gathering food on the other side of the islands."

"Murder birds, Shoal stoats and Gator" You say and he nods.

"Then there is the fight. You probably fightin me for ten minutes or blood to chest. I Aint gonna go easy on you. Normally it's just five or to knock over, but first blood to chest aint so pretty. Give you a big scar. You can't trust a man who never fight, you can't have a big man without a scar. " He says. You aren't surprised by this, but you are not thrilled either. Your uncle is a better fighter than your father, and probably the best warrior of the surrounding islands.

"Then the walk. You aint just walkin on coals like the other kids. Thats easy. They gonna poke you with the hot spears. No talkin, no screaming no wincing. Gonna make those cool scars your father has" He says and you nod.

"Then you get your tattoos. You succeed you get your Big Man Tattoos. Like your father. Your shoulders gonna have a tattoo of your kill too on one side like normal. Otherside gonna be whatever the shaman see. Hope he aint drunk. Then you get your belts. " Your Uncle says and then as he is about to open his mouth

"No shouting no wincing no laughing." together you both say and he smiles and rubs you on the head.

"Then you get to name yourself. The next time you do it is if you have a kid, when you officially become big man, or kill an enemy warrior or a great beast with your bare fists."

>>4670245
"And if I kill one before the night is over for the meal?" You ask.

"You just trying to collect names like shells?" He laughs.

"It's an honest question!" You say back play punching and he taps back.

"Ya you bring it in, you name yourself twice in a night I guess. Never heard of it happening but sure." He says. You nod.

You make a noise.

"Go to your hut, get your things an hurry up. I may ask a few things, get a bit of wisdom. Don't be dumb. I gotta kick your ass later." He says.

"Ha. You wish." You say as he runs off.

You have till supper time to get enough meat for a feast for not only the village, but guests. It's still morning so you have some time to pick up some tools from your hut, or scout a location for the hunt.

--
Pick two

> Go talk to your dad as about a good plan for the hunt and what he did maybe see how many people are coming.
> Go talk to the hermit on the far island, see what he is up to.
> Go see your mom.
> Go to the top of big hill, see what food source you can see.
> Go to the near island, maybe Half Mad Har'ii has dealt with the Big Boy before
> Get some Bait from the nearby pools
> Go do a deep dive nearby and see if you can spot signs of a big shark or predator nearby
> Write in

>>4670275
>> Go do a deep dive nearby and see if you can spot signs of a big shark or predator nearby
>> Write in
Go drift upon the sea conserving strength by floating, in our hands a spear and the other a short blade, for we shall be the bait and appear as death. When the predator comes we shall slay it! Should smaller ones come we kill them and the bog one shall be drawn to blood.

>>4670275
>> Go see your mom.
>> Go do a deep dive nearby and see if you can spot signs of a big shark or predator nearby

>>4670275
> Go talk to your dad as about a good plan for the hunt and what he did maybe see how many people are coming.
> Go to the top of big hill, see what food source you can see.
How big is Big Boy?

>>4670303
It's not that easy, only a few ways to find out. But he's a big boy. A bit chonky for sure.

>>4670310
I just thought it was common knowledge thats why i asked. If we need to ask someone to learn about Big Boy, ask dad.

>>4670324
I don't mind elaboration and it's a fair point. Here you go.
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You know the big boy from what others say. He's like a boogey man almost. You are too young to have seen him. He doesn't come around often but when he does, island activity practically stops. Islanders would only use the shoals and the most sturdy boats to travel to another island. No surfing. No swimming. When big boy is around going in the water is almost certain death.

This is what you would know.

>>4670275
> Go to the near island, maybe Half Mad Har'ii has dealt with the Big Boy before
> Go talk to the hermit on the far island, see what he is up to.

Since tomorrow is going to be quite the day, and this is quite the decision, I am going to let this vote go a bit longer.

>>4670294
Supporting this

>>4670275
> Write in
Lets tame a giant sea monster

>>4670389
>Kill male giant squad
>Spare female one and its clutch to be pets

>>4670390
>giant squid
>not giant mythical vortex sucking beast with hundreds or tentacle heads.

>>4670275
>> Go do a deep dive nearby and see if you can spot signs of a big shark or predator nearby
> Go see your mom.

>>4670275
>> Go see your mom.
>> Go do a deep dive nearby and see if you can spot signs of a big shark or predator nearby

>>4670329
Thank you. While we might consider facing him, i don't believe now is probably the right time. How much time has passed since arrival in this planet? While Primarchs are superhuman and can deal with regular humans easily, some are not made to be that powerful in combat as others i think.

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>>4670624
Judging by canonical Primarch growth raes, I'd say around Ten by now

I am going to do a finally tally at about 1720CST tonight, but it looks like we are closing in on a decision.

>>4670702
You are a little off. He's seven.

>>4670589
Supporting

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>>4670872
Not too far off though.

And I can't wait for us to show off to our sons with all our hunting trophies

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>>4670872
So physically he'd be around his teens I wager?

>>4670889
>not family pet

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>>4671130
Kinda hard to bring Sea Monsters along for galactic conquest anon.

Sorry about being late. Traffic.

> Go see your mom III
> Deep Dive nearby IIII
> Write in II
> Sea Monster pet II

Well this is going to be interesting to write. But okay. New information is fine.

--
Tales of the Eleventh Primarch, as by his brothers
" One time he asked if I wished to go fishing with him. If I would have known what the bait was for the 'fishing excursion' on this planet I would have packed appropriately."
---

You have an idea. You take your knife and make a quick pile. You hop off the nearby shelf and try to spot any predators that would make for a quick kill that could feed a village, ideally a yum shark or some big fish. You have been doing this since you were smaller, helping feed the village when the fishing was rough or when thing were bad and they needed to be something to be happy about.

As you dive down to near the edge of the shelf, very deep, it seems a bit more barren. You only see sword sharks, and they seem a bit more on edge. You swim around the edge and you see that many of the predators are hiding. Including ol' cranky, a slightly larger than normal poison octopus that you have taught to help you hunt. Ol' cranky is normally pretty brave, and he comes out to follow you briefly before retreating. You give him a look. Maybe the other shore side. As you get up to the surface after a little more investigating, you see Ol' Cranky follow you up.

"Oh so not so cowardly now are ya." You say to the octopus that changes colors.

"Fine." You pick up a nearby tree crab and toss it to the beast who quickly and efficiently takes it.

You follow along the beach and you notice no shoals of fish on this half of the island. Nothing. You follow it long enough to your Mom's normal place where she mends the nets and boats.

"Eh Momma." You say coming up as you give her a hug and kiss she smiles.

"You have time to visit you Momma on a day you declare a challenge. You are either the best son a mother can have or the worst." She says.

"Which is it." You say with a nod and a smile.

"I haven't figured it out yet silly. I guess you wondering while all the fish gone. Big Boy scare em off. Last time he was here that's what happen."

"You see him do that?" You ask her, curious about what beast could scare off sharks.

"He almost kill me. Almost Killed Your Auntie too. Had to drag her out of the water." She says looking a little scared, as if she still recalls it.

"What is he?" You ask

"Most people think he a shark. That's because they haven't seen him. They just see what he do. He's like a big Zap Eel. Really big. Longer than most sharks. He got a head like the snake shark though, not like an eel. And his teeth are nasty. Got so many of them." Your Mother says.

"Zap Eel huh? They never bother me. Never saw why there a big deal." You say.

"That's because you special! You are seven years old and you are taller than your momma. You come out of a metal comet during a hurricane! You stay under the water for hours not minutes and you bring in yum shark. We didn't used to call them Yum shark you know" She says hitting you on your forehead.

>>4671197
I love the fact most everyone here speaks in broken gothic.

"Yeah you used to call them bane sharks cause they would take all your food and when they came in you couldn't get rid of them." You say and your mother hits you again. With her sandal.

"Don't be making it out like its something easy! Those sharks are why you don't get to see your aunty because she starved! We always have food now. Fishing aint good? I'll just ask my boy to go get a murder bird and we have meat for a few weeks! You know it's a good thing you actually showed your uncle that hunting trick for them, cause now most the men know how to stalk them. We thinking about raising them now, so that way we have meat and eggs huh." She says and you nod.

"You got a plan for what for you doin for dinner tonight? Three other chiefs comin, other people from the other islands comin. Even Jera is coming." She says.

"Yeah. Ma. I think I have a plan." You say as you now grin.

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Choose One

> Go take your spear and be the bait for big boy. When it tries to shock you, you shock it- with the fact that you cannot be shocked. Shocking.

> Go out the farthest shoal, try to find out the best bait for maybe something bigger than Big Boy as all the predators may have moved out that far.

> Go get a murder bird and use it as bait, they usually can bring in anything once they get out in the water.

> Write in

>>4671211
>> Go take your spear and be the bait for big boy. When it tries to shock you, you shock it- with the fact that you cannot be shocked. Shocking.

>>4671211
>Be the bait

Oh, you want a shocking match? WE ARE THE LIGHTNING SHOW!

>>4671211
> Go take your spear and be the bait for big boy. When it tries to shock you, you shock it- with the fact that you cannot be shocked. Shocking.
> Ride Big Boy and use him to catch other big prey, like whales.

>>4671211
> Go take your spear and be the bait for big boy. When it tries to shock you, you shock it- with the fact that you cannot be shocked. Shocking.
But find something else for a bait. While we are immune to electric shocks we aren't immune to huge teeth. When he's distracted by the bait attack him with possible extra surprise due to our immunity. Also we can't produce electricity right? We are just immune to it(at least for now).

>>4671211
> Go take your spear and be the bait for big boy. When it tries to shock you, you shock it- with the fact that you cannot be shocked. Shocking.
Thunder and Lightning

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> Go take your spear and be the bait for big boy. When it tries to shock you, you shock it- with the fact that you cannot be shocked. Shocking.
>Shock Eel: *Pic related*

>>4671211
Why do I hear Tito all the time with this quest?

>>4671216
Support

>>4671272
>https://rocketpower.fandom.com/wiki/Ancient_Hawaiians_Quotes
It is now canon Kolinaisi will hand out 'Ancient De’lormosan Wisdom'

>issue #11 of Sororitas Magazine
>11th Legion space marines dancing in palm leave skirts
>big sweaty tan colored men surfing and turfing
>tattoos and body scars for days
>can cook as well as they can fight
Imagine

>>4671715
I am no drawfriend. Find someone else to do it lol.

>> Be the bait Unanimous
> Avoid teeth.
Noted and will proceed.

"Kolinaisi you better not be planning to do something really stupid." Your momma says as you are about to run off.

"No Momma, just something no-ones done." You say giving her a peck on the cheek and the running down to the beach. You run down a few are also heading to the beach, you get a few smiles here and there on your way down.

There is a small group of villagers, including the men who did the haka. You swim out of the shallows and into the deep. Everyone watches.

You wade and float for a few minutes, not really that long then you notice it.

You feel Big Boy before you see him. The electricity. The shock. It does nothing to you but you still sense it.

Then you see him: Big Boy. The longest Eel you have ever seen, with the face of an angry drake shark. It's eyes see you and it comes towards you expecting you to be shocked.

As it comes up to pull you down you twist and with a sudden move you hit him with the spear, causing the lumbering beast to swim to the side, trying to make another move at you. He violently swipes his tail at you, but you are once again unaffected by this. The beast, sensing something is a miss tries to make a rapid escape but you grab him by the tail. This offends the beast and turns around to strike again

Pick two on how to handle the Big Boy

>> Taunt the beast. Cut its tail then swim deeper and try to stab the spear through and drag him to the shoal.

>> Try to brain him by pulling him to you, when you get to the head you strike at his brain killing him instantly

>> Try to cut his head of when he comes in to strike you.

>> See if you can manipulate the electricity going through you from the Big Boy. You sense it, maybe you can redirect it it a different way (Write in how)

>> When he comes in use a rock and place it in his jaw so he can't cut you

>> Write in

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>>4671715
I can see the 11th holding on to copies of Grav vehicles as much as they could, simply because I can see them loving them so much

>> When he comes in use a rock and place it in his jaw so he can't cut you
>> Taunt the beast. Cut its tail then swim deeper and try to stab the spear through and drag him to the shoal.

Idea
>Kolinaisi unites De’lormosa and begins to seek conquering/unifying the rest of the system, and the rest of the planets, stations etc. are very scared and worried about this seemingly immortal unstoppable conqueror
>Because they're in space, they get word of the Imperium so they get in contact to get aid/support in putting dwn this would be Warlord
>The aid sent? A detachment from the 11th Legion
>This leads to Kolinaisi fighting his won sons after some disasterous battles, culminating in a Primarch-Marines Newtype Flash as they realize who the other is
>The Marines and Kolinaisi are horrified by what has occured. The Marines for attacking not only their father but killing many of his people. And Kolinaisi for the same.
>This leads to the detachment joining up with Kolinaisi and renaging on thier deal with the rest of the De’lormosa system and helping him conquer it
>Kolinaisi then etches a great monument by hand of all the Imperial Marines, Men and Women he killed in battle before/after he Imperials help rebuild the system while the Emperor comes to De’lormosa

>>4671926
>> Taunt the beast. Cut its tail then swim deeper and try to stab the spear through and drag him to the shoal.
>> Try to cut his head of when he comes in to strike you.

>>4671926
Come on guys, don't pass up this chance to develop our electrical powers.

>Manipulate the energy going through big boy, Forcing all of it into his head and into his brain then keeping it there until his grey matter melts.

>>4671952
Seems good, I will change the head cutting part of my vote with this.

>>4671932
Changing to
> Taunt the beast. Cut its tail then swim deeper and try to stab the spear through and drag him to the shoal.
>Manipulate the energy going through big boy, Forcing all of it into his head and into his brain then keeping it there until his grey matter melts.
Because >>4671952 is right

>>4671926
>>> Write in
Thrash and draw him in then respond depending on his action
1) If he lashes his tail grab it and force the power from the tail end all the way up to his head poping it!
2) If he goes for the bite wait for the jaws to upon then with our knife shift to the side and slit from his mouth all down his body carried by his own momentum!

Then drag the lug to shore

>>4671926
I would say:
>> See if you can manipulate the electricity going through you from the Big Boy. You sense it, maybe you can redirect it it a different way (Write in how)
by making a flash to blind him then:
>> Try to brain him by lunging at him, when you get to the head you strike at his brain killing him instantly

>no giant sea monster pet
>sad

>>4672176
There plenty more in the sea Anon... literally.

after reading on primarch biology, hawaiian/ pacific fauna, how electricity interacts with water in certain condition and on the mantis shrimp

I may have made an interesting discovery.


Off to round two of my double, I will tally and write later tonight and keep an eye on this at work.

also support II primarch quest if you dont already.

>>4671926
>>> Try to brain him by pulling him to you, when you get to the head you strike at his brain killing him instantly
>>> Try to cut his head of when he comes in to strike you.

>>4672192
>also support II primarch quest if you dont already.
Don't worry about that

Another area of inspiration for our homeworld I thought of is FFX

>>4672232
at least there's no Yevondamned Al Bhed lurking about

>>4672311
Hey Waka good to see you again brudda.

>>4672339
better dead than Al Bhed, brudda

>>4672344
You dropped this brudda *Hands you a copy of Mein Kampf*

https://youtu.be/QExghSNXwJ4

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>>4671939
Does anyone else have any thoughts on my idea or is it too out there? I rather like the train of thought I had for it with an implication the Marines would later become the Star Sharks

>> Try to brain him 2
>> Cut off Head 2
>> Harness Electric 4
>> Put a rock in a jaw 2
>> Taunt the Beast 3

I am sorry for not being as activity today I had to pull a double. I am going to do a final tally tomorrow unless more write ins

>>4673266
I liked what you wrote a lot anon.

>>4673266
To me it seems early to begin discussing names for the Legion and it kind of takes for granted that the Emperor will not know that his son is in this planet nor that He will be near here. Can happen but how many Primarchs were in a similar position?

>>4673275
Thanks Have a bit more

>"It is a father's duty to not simply punish his children's wrongdoings, but to teach them to learn from their mistakes. Simply exiling these sons of mine on a penitent crusade or even executing them for their over eagerness is not the correct path! For far too long have they been cast adrift in the ocean of blood with only brief respites and fleeting lights to guide them. Without the guiding hand and love of a father, how else could one expect them to be upstanding men and warriors. No, I will not cast them away! They will be mine to command and to teach, so that one day they can be an example to all humanity to follow!"

>>4673285
It's not the Legion name but rather the detachment of Marines that came to the De’lormosa system. I imagined them as the problem children of the XIth legion and are kept away from the rest as a Terror, Shock Troop etc. Chapter group.

>>4673266
How about instead Kolinaisi begins uniting the system and his enemies pull out archeotech that was kept hidden and use it against him out of desperation, the war swings in their favor and at a critical moment the XI Legion and the Emperor appear? Kind of like what happened with Angron only with a good(?) ending.

>>4673303
Not a bad idea, but I think I've done enough of my own fanfiction of old man's work.

The ideas keep coming to me

>>4673296
Ah. Well it's an interesting idea, I just don't know how likely it is to happen. It is tragic enough to be a Warhammer story however.

>>4673308
Just write what ideas you have. I am not a writer myself but you should exercise your imagination anyway and as long as other people don't mind, try writing what you came up with. Even if it will not be used, it might give ideas to others.

>>4673309
It being Tragic was the intention, in most Primarchs meeting the Imperials it is always the Emperor who meets them with Alpharius the only one I'm unsure about.

Here, Kolinaisi meets his sons first in the worst possible way

>>4673317
So you also tried to make it a unique meeting right? Hmm, in that case we might have our future enemies use some kind of biological weapon against Kolinaisi's armies. While he might be immune, his people's plight will add both a tragedy and a feeling of anxiety to finish the war quickly and find the antidote in the mix.

>>4673334
Unless we go with him to the capital too. Start the try to not get executed and maybe get a pardon act.

Good Morning!
I enjoy the theory craft, but let's get back down to business.

>>No clear consensus other than electrical use

I can fix it.
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The beast is massive, and underwater it's very agile, and you see that it's teeth pose a very real threat to you. You grab a nearby rock and shove it in his mouth as you try to feel the electrical currents and how to mannipulate them. Seeing as you have only done the party trick before with the zap eel and the strange items that Half Mad Haarii makes. You grab on to Big Boy with your hand and you notice that it seems to hunt and act by feel, less than site, despite it's very large eyes.

Then something dawns on you.

You are moving more efficiently. Your moving faster than you would normally. It feels like the electricity is interacting with the water around you, allowing you to move faster, which allows you to easily keep up the pace with the Big Boy, and the big boy knows this.

In desperation it tries wrap you cutting you with it's thresher tail.

You remember the Rainbow Snap Shrimp on the island that eats zap eels.

It's sudden strike changes the water. It punches as fast as it can.

You have never punched that fast before under water, you only use your spear and quick strikes. Actually you don't think you ever have punched anything as fast as you could before, it's hard thing to do to punch as fast as you can.

You feel the electricity moving around your arm, instinctively.

The water around you almost feels like it boils as the water around you is almost different.

Light forms in the deep around you

You strike the Big Boy so fast there is a loud noise.

It's body falls limp, it was a worthy foe. You smile, despite the foul smell that the body has produced having died.. This food should be enough for about everyone, maybe with something else. Hopefully the foul smell doesn't ruin the flavor. As you pull it up you see predators start to come out of their caves and small game fish become more active.

Then you step out of the water and realize that aside from the small crowd gathered, this beast is heavy! Now you know why he's called Big Boy.

The men who gathered for your haka are starting to cheer. Your father smiles "That's my son!" He calls out.

Slim Rongo approaches, the best in the village as far as cooking is concern to help you with it, as other men do to.

"How you kill it?" Rongo ask.

"My bare fist, in one quick strike." You say and Rongo whistles low

"Eh Big Man! Your son killed Big Boy with his fist! It looks like he get two names today!"

"How does that work?" You ask

"Oh it's really easy, You get a hero name. Like Your dad. Or your Uncle." Rongo says.

"That easy? I just pick a name?"

"Yeah, you just killed Big Boy. You kill yourself a sea monster like that you can call yourself whatever you want. Just don't do something stupid, because nobody calls people by stupid flashy names and they start making up nick names."

>>4673821
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"Rongo that sounds like personal experience." You say as the two of you finally haul all of Big Boy out of the water in it's entirety.

"Yeah. Everyone say Slim Rongo because it's easier than the name I gave myself. Keep that in mind when you naming yourself before dinner. Speaking of dinner, I am cooking this Big Boy. It looks like it can feed everyone, but I don't know how I am gonna dress it up to taste good, I think I am gonna smoke it and get some garnish for it. Part of the naming is"

"Of course Lulu ʻole Rongo, I gotta get more food. What would go good with Big Boy?" You say using his proper honorific for what he killed, and he smiles and pats you on the back.

"I don't know. Personally I'd get some yum shark."

"You always want yum shark."

"Well it isn't my fault they taste so good, some kid decided to go get one of the mad beasts and smoke it."

"Actually it is your fault because you were the first to eat it." You say and Rongo laughs and your father comes up.

"So you collect two names on your name day. I am so proud." Your father says

"Thank you Da." You say and he gives you a hug as he looks proudly.

"So you get your name for this now if you want. No rush because you got so much to do." Your dad says.

"Rongo here says the Big Boy may not be enough."

"It would have been enough had Jera not send a bird back and tell me a whole crewed ship was comin son." Your dad says holding a note.

"I guess I better go getting more food." You say, but before you run off.

"Getting food is easy for you. Go get your weapon first for your fight when you bring it in, then fight your uncle." Your father says looking over the horizon.

"Something wrong dad?"

"Storm. I can feel it." He says. You nod as he and Rongo start debating on how to cook big boy.

>>4673837

Before you walk off, Rongo gives you the jaw of Big Boy, it's teeth large and sharp, with two massive retractable fangs, that may as well have been big knives.

"I don't think these could be on the necklace." You say and Rongo laughs.

"Naw bro feel the teeth. They got metal to em." Rongo says, and you feel the teeth.

Metal. Strange.

"Yeah that is something new. I wonder why he didn't use these on me." You say.

"Probably because there was a big rock in it's mouth." Rongo says holding on to the rock.

It's about noon, you have time, but you cannot be slow.
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You have a lot to do primarch of the eleventh!

Decide on what food to get

> Dive down deep, see if another big monster is lurking, that should feed a whole ship
> See if you can find a really big Murder Bird.
> Get a Yum Shark, it would be enough to round it out.
> Get a really big gator

Decide what to do for a weapon

> Go to your hut, see what you have that may make a good weapon
> Go talk to Half Mad Haarii, he is always making weapons, and he is good at it.
> Swim out to the Shaman, he had something he was waiting to give to the right person
> These teeth would be a good tip for a spear.
> Go see if you can get a sword from a sword shark, you already fought Big Boy, sword shark will be no trouble and they might taste good, so it could be a good part of your name feast.

>>4673845
>> Dive down deep, see if another big monster is lurking, that should feed a whole ship
>> Swim out to the Shaman, he had something he was waiting to give to the right person

>>4673845
> Dive down deep, see if another big monster is
> Go see if you can get a sword from a sword shark, you already fought Big Boy, sword shark will be no trouble and they might taste good, so it could be a good part of your name feast.

>>4673845
>Deep sea diving
>Shaman has something he wants to give

ELECTRICAL BITCH SMACK GAUNTLETS!

>Deep sea diving
>Shaman has something he wants to give
Super Mantis Shrimp Power Fists!

>>4673845
> Dive down deep, see if another big monster is lurking, that should feed a whole ship
> Swim out to the Shaman, he had something he was waiting to give to the right person
Show him the teeth and ask him about them.

I cannot believe that I forgot to mention this.

You have another decision to make

You have to choose which to do first

Get the Food
or
Get the weapon

>>4674035
Weapon.

>>4674035
Weapon

>>4674035
Weapon

Weapon

>>4674035
Weapon