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Your name is Shu.

Monsters, gods, and old friends…many have fallen at your hand in your time wading through the flesh-infested hell of the Crucible. However, the challenges you’ve faced up to this point pale in comparison to the engine of devastation you plan to confront, a thing that is a doctor’s cruelty given form, her madness made manifest in an unfeeling machine.

“Alright, what’d I miss?” You ask, having emerged from your bedroom after a desperately-needed nap and assembled your numerous allies into the main living area of your temporary home.

“Orwell touched base through one of Amara’s clones while you and she were resting, and she gave us some new info on Alpha that came at a price.” Gina informs you, the petite brunette to your right fixing you with her focused hazel eyes. “A pretty sizable group of Daughters decided to square off against Alpha, and it turns out that she wasn’t just built to scale to an individual’s speed – she scales her available actions to the number of combatants, too.”

“Christ…alright, well that’s good to know before going in, at least.” You say with a sigh, rubbing the bridge of your nose with thumb and forefinger. “You said this info came at a price?”

“Oh, that whole team bit it. Hard. Nothin' left of em'.” Rath chimes in from your left, the short-haired ginger folding her taught, muscular arms across her chest. “Hate to say it, but better them than us, yeah?”

"Aye, she's got a point." Jackie nods across the table, the lithe, raven-haired leader of the Midnight Crew standing opposite you and flanked by her three friends. "Now that we know, I'd like to think that lends credence to my plan of tagging out smaller attack teams to keep her on her toes, keep her cycling through her Relics and such so she can't adapt to our tactics."

You meet the other girls' dark eyes, and in that moment a truth passes between you both. Small teams, smaller losses - it's an idea that's best left unsaid, but it's one you have to bear in mind, regardless. If Magpie hadn't had reservations about pulling punches in your last (and final) encounter, you have to wonder if the room you're in would be as full as it currently is...and it's as that thought weighs on your mind that you notice Sia leaning on the table, the girl's inscrutable and hazy visage tilting towards Dorian with a slight nod of her head.

"Shu, if you don't mind my saying...I'm starting to think that Dorian would be a liability in this fight."

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"I...I beg your pardon?" Dorian stammers, affronted.

"Look man, just hear me out, okay?" The Neuromancer counters, raising one hand to halt any further protests from the young man across from her. "Last time we faced Alpha, we barely got out with our lives on account of her matching your speed. It was just you, me, and Sugar that time, and the *only* reason we got out alive was on account of Sugar swooping in to save our asses...thanks for that, by the way."

She gives the pale, Gluttonous Daughter beside her a thumbs' up, and Sugar doesn't even hesitate to lean over and engulf her ally's digit in her mouth before Sia yanks her hand out of reach with a small sound of irritation.

"Tactically speaking, Sia has a point." Ace intones, her metallic form towering over everyone present in November's absence, Rath's aunt currently being tended to by Tinker Tailor in an adjacent room. "No-one here is capable of matching Dorian for speed, and if we give Alpha that advantage, then we're done."

"Going into combat when you're a man down is foolish." Dorian retorts, struggling to keep an even tone.

"We've been a woman down for a little while now, dude." Rath grumbles, turning from the incensed artist back to you. "Speaking of which, are we gonna grab Julia for this thing?"

"We should first determine how best to proceed regarding the biomass our parties have compiled." Francine chimes in, gesturing to the pile of raw meat and remains in the corner of the room. "Despite the frustratingly randomized components of the generator and its best efforts to resist Gina's Neuromancer, we were able to summon and summarily put down four distinct Amalgams with Relic-based skill sets, though their specifics eluded me since I did not have access to the Arbiter's Appetite. So, how would you have us proceed, darling?"

You mull it over for a moment, weighing what's on your plate with the equally hefty amount of tactics to consider, to say nothing of the spoils of combat you've yet to consume. On the other hand, you can tell that everyone present is on edge, and while you've had some time to rest and recover from the day's events, that's not a luxury that's been afforded to the rest of your team.

>>As much as you hate to say it, Alpha can wait for the time being. Relax a bit with your allies and tell them to rest a while, and spend time with one or two of them...before you attend to more serious matters.

>>Formulate a plan with everyone present before breaking for a while, then speak privately with an ally (or allies) of your choice before you bring everyone together again to consume the remains.

>>You’d like Julia by your side, so send Dorian to retrieve her from Laoc and then catch up with a bit before you consume Magpie and the Amalgams’ remains...and maybe even craft a new Spiritus shell for one of your Dream Daughters.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next four hours.)
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>>4168335
>Check in with Orwell. while you're sure she would tell you if Alpha was causing immediate trouble, you want a layout of her path and area. just hoe likely is it she may wander someplace you would prefer not to let her rampage through at the moment?

>Assuming you have time, tell everyone to give you a moment to think things through, and get some rest. they'll need it once you're ready.
>Send Dorian to check on Julia and the Hyenas. if possible, you'd like to ask them to spare some time to help, if they're up for it and Laoc can spare them, but you want call them away til its time to actually strike.
>Otherwise, get working on four Spiritus Shells as tricked out as everyone here can give and is willing to give to spare. if Julia comes to help, thats fine, but dont ask or corral her into coming just for this, and otherwise just talk to whoever comes your way while you think and work.
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>>4168335
>Check in with Orwell. while you're sure she would tell you if Alpha was causing immediate trouble, you want a layout of her path and area. just hoe likely is it she may wander someplace you would prefer not to let her rampage through at the moment?

>Tell everyone to take a small break while you mull things over
>Send Dorian to check in on Julia and if she thinks she had enough time to herself or still needs more.
>Start working on a Spiritus Shell for Johanna Ask people to help pitch in with BIO if they are willing. Ask for Raths help to give it a 'strong design/ feeling' and touch base with your adorable redhead and how she feels.
>And lets not forget should Amara wake up and want to help let her. We couldn't stop her from doing modifications later on anyway

>>4168342
OP you forgot to link the Fan Fictions again in the starting post. And i forgot to remind you of that.

Also question about the Ravager Acidum. Did i hit the notes for a Humoral paladin ability with it or did i go way outside of what usually constitutes such an ability
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>>4168335
Adding in>>4168361 (You)
>Joahannas is just the first shell to get ready. If you can get more done make more with as many bells and whistles as you can make
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>>4168342
>>4168361
>fanfic doc
oh yeah, forgot to ask how you would like us to help you compile that, or if you already had an idea BHOP? or did you give up on the idea?

>>4168361
id assume regardless he has not added it as its not ready yet.
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>>4168335
>>Write-In
>"I agree with Francine. Let's take a look at the meat we've got with the Appetite, see what options we have available to us, and then eat. That will give everyone the chance to catch their breath while we digest the meal, and afterwards we can make some plans around what we've got for countering Alpha's build."
>"Meanwhile, I'm going to get on the line with Orwell, ask for Alpha's current location so we can best plan where to fight her. Also, I want to ask if she knows how conceptual Alpha's target-scaling is. Would Jackie's idea to cycle small teams through count as several smaller fights or one prolonged fight with enemies adding in as we go?"
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>>4168373
Actually, we also need to know of any other adaptations that Alpha might have been given to deal with us. For example, has she shown any resistance to Skintalking? Because REV VITA would knock out over four fifths of Alpha's Health in one opening move, but if West saw us do that against Yurei and has planned to counter it, then that's obviously a bust.
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>>4168376
it was said she was given upgrades specifically to face all our family, so yeah, we can be very assured she can probably block things like that.

hence why our plan is really to cancel out her Relics as if we cant, probably not even worth bothering to face her. i mean, yeah, we need to stop her, but we cant do that or help anyone if we're dead.
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>>4168376
>>4168379
The sniper Rifle of Magpie was still intact wasn't it........ Maybe just maybe we can see what its drawbacks are and can maybe craft some Anti Relic Ammo from it to unleash into her face during a surprise round.

Not a fan of this possibility but something me may want to consider. Especially if we can infuse a round with Raths Relic backfire ability
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>>4168384
maybe. we'll have to wait til BHOP gives us the rundown of what survived though, aswell as if we can do anything with the melted husks aswell.
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>>4168379
>it was said she was given upgrades specifically to face all our family, so yeah, we can be very assured she can probably block things like that.
Yeah, I'm assuming that is the case, because it's not like an Alpha with over six thousand Health wouldn't still be a super tough fight. Just thought we should check to make sure. Though if West wanted to be really nasty, she'd modify Alpha to subtract 1% Health from her max. Change it from 36560% to 36559%. Now inverting it doesn't take it down to 6563%, it raises it to 95563%.

>>4168384
That's not a bad idea. We don't need to use Alex's Mercy, necessarily, but can we make some of those anti-Class rounds for our own guns? Is there enough Daughter biomass left in Alpha to count for that sort of thing? She's got a Generating Halo, so we might manage to make anti-Generator bullets work against her.
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>>4168390
nothing says we cant make our own custom rounds to take on Alpha, doesn't have to be class based.

also, we're not gonna beat Alpha by smacking her health down. i just dont see it happening, even if we swapped her down to 6000+ instead. we need to counter or relic powers, then if we can do that, rip out her core matrix thing, as hard as im sure that'll be. mind you, we know its easier than actually killing her, but still. might even just shut her down if we do. or not, but i doubt she will be anywhere near as powerful without it.

...or tampering with it will just cause her to explode on us. but i mean, again, we're not beating her in a direct fight, just not happening at our current level.
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>>4168396
I'm just considering the worst-case scenario, where disabling her Relics and punching the Cores out of her chest doesn't manage to stop her and we still have to cut through thirty-six thousand Health on a rocket-cyborg. Oh god, this is going to be such a nightmare fight. And we thought Magpie was bad.

Though actually, how much Health did Magpie have? Mara's false body had five figures, so it could be that Magpie's true body was in the same range? Maybe we can put out enough damage to kill Alpha straight-up, in the worst-case scenario.
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>>4168404
yeah, and im saying if it gets to that point, we'll probably just have to back off.

as for Magpie, unsure. id actually very much not be surprised though if she had significantly less health, due ot her build simply not being built around taking hits at all. sure, she was high level, but in reality that could easily leave a very big stat difference depending on what she actually built up.
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>>4168404
>>4168396
We do have Novembers Autumn Protocol that can deal ludicrous amounts of Damage. Maybe we can make rounds that reduce WAlphas Heat resistance? maybe even knock off her immunity to it?

Otherwise yeah backing off is gonna have to be the priority. But she will be a lot less dangerous then afterwards so we can at least push her onto the backburner
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>>4168408
didnt we have some way to make Novembers attacks Radiant only, or just change their damage type? do that and it'll work just dandy, i dont think even our new info was showing Alpha had Radiant resistance. i mean, she could have it i guess, but as far as im aware we have not seen she does.
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>>4168405
Yeah, but if we back off then we're right back to where we started, being chased by a killer rocket-cyborg that we have no way of stopping. God, I don't want that. Just let me pretend for a minute that we can kill her this fight and have it be over with.

And I was accounting for the fact that Magpie probably is significantly less buff than Mara, that's why I was comparing Mara's false body to Magpie's true. I guess she could be really not buff, though.

>>4168411
We have no information on how Alpha's immunities and resistances have been altered. She's probably plugged that hole in her defenses, just to be extra annoying. But if she hasn't, then yes, Amara can turn all a target's attacks to Radiant damage. If Alpha is still vulnerable to it, then buffing everyone with a GRA OMA NUKA THA at the start of the fight is a good idea.
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>>4168411
>>4168408
>>4168405
>>4168404
If I'm reading this right, then the Fight against West Alpha would be best fought in a series of 1v1 dueling matches as West Alpha scales her strength and adaptations to the opponent(s) she tries to face. The problem with this method is that when we go for a switch/tag-in that's when Alpha will gain a boost in power.
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>>4168413
well i mean, if the Anti-Relic abilities dont work, or even are just subpar in effectiveness, then we already just dont stand a chance, especially with her being so geared towards us. but you were saying if we get past that and get out her cores and shes still a powerhouse. but sure, it would suck to back down, but if we got that far we can probably at least assure she doesn't get her cores back, and have probably thus super crippled her threat level. she might still be too high level for us at the moment, but the bar would still undoubtedly have been lowered significantly for when we try again.

it IS possible to make good and permanent progress but still not be able to finish something in one go afterall.

as for November, Amaras was not how i meant we could do that. swear we had another way, that would actually change it, over just stacking Radiant on top of it like Amaras does, which wouldn't actually fix the problem. stacking another damage type on top still leaves her getting hit with something she can react to with immunity or absorption triggers, so would still make hitting her with such attacks a bad idea.
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>>4168417
yeah, no. thats a terrible idea. no one, at all, could face West Alpha on their own. she only scales certain aspects to how many she faces. sure, powerful aspects, but still only certain ones. the issue your plan is ignoring is, she still has a baseline power level that could easily overcome anyone on their own.
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>>4168335
>Have everyone take a break while you check on Orwell for level-ups and Karma to upgrade the Contender, and get to work on crafting Spirit Shells for your dreamdaughters.
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>>4168417
If we were all Mara or hell even Magpie Level powerful... Maybe we could pull something like that off but right now no one could do that... Maybe Julia if she got a boost like the one that finished off Yureis first form
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>>4168420
>>4168335
lets not do this. we planned to upgrade the Contender after the level-ups, so we could choose her less mallable upgrades based off any gaps left in the level-up process, or better mesh with it.
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>>4168417
1v1 is not a good move even if we could do the switch efficiently, she's still massively more powerful than any of our party members. Thirty-six thousand Health, six ACTs, a huge arsenal of Relics that she can generate on the fly, and rocket punches. No way is anyone facing that solo.

>>4168418
I would accept a retreat if we timeskip past us regrouping and go immediately into round two against a crippled Alpha with our party having recovered during the skipped time. I want her dead by the end of this Vein.
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>>4168426
well, I wouldn't. thats silly. i hate her too but getting ourselves killed isnt going to do anyone any good. if she proves too tough she proves too tough. we come back later. we backed off from facing Kosi for awhile too without a time skip.

plus, it would horribly mess with the flow of the quest and even the point of backing off, which is to give us time to rethink and plan things. not to mention the world doesn't stop for us. a time skip would leave way too much to just dice rolls we're ignoring, as no way if we have to back off all we're taking is a five minute breather.
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>>4168419
Oh high excel sheet anon. This is archive anon.
>>4168426
>>4168422
You're right all, what I suggested is a terrible Idea. Still what I said still has some merit. If we are to break this fight down into skirmishes of constantly rotating teams, our best bet will be to have Alpha adopt the barest baseline adaptations while leaving herself vulnerable to unexpected events like a sudden switch.

Let me run this idea by you because I have one in the works and I'm not sure if we can pull it off. It's super risky and sounds VERY STUPID but this idea is still in it's "probably could work from creativity phase" if you could pardon the sheer riskiness and just try to play along with my perspective.

So here's what I'm proposing. We have Alpha prioritize Shu and have Shu act as a taunt tank. Everyone else can rotate in and out as they so please. Even though Shu's got the lowest Health pool of everyone in the family, she's got the Highest Bio pool out of all of them which means she has the highest armor. So while Alpha's main baseline will be Shu (the one constant), She'll be vulnerable to unexpected elements (i.e. everyone else) and will have a hard time adapting to them as we constantly rotate them.

The problem that I'm having with these fights is that arranging a massive battle where teams constantly rotate in and out of engaging Alpha will inevitably lead to a clusterfuck. Shu's the best person at keeping all the ducks in a line,

And I've noticed that over many fights that our allies tend to go down first before we tend to sit in the back on a massive health regen surplus due to dominus bloodline despite having very viable defensive melee.
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>>4168430
We can recover to full pretty fast, so long as nobody gets sent to Death's Door. We've got more than enough healing abilities in the party to manage that. So we just have to avoid anyone getting knocked out and we can make the timeskip be only a couple minutes. We burn through resources to hit her hard and fast to cripple her, retreat to refill, and then go right back to fight a weakened Alpha.
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>>4168438
Oh, Alpha will almost certainly prioritize Shu anyway, because everyone does. I don't think we'll have to work to make that happen. Having Shu draw aggro while the rest of the teams rotate around Alpha isn't a terrible idea, though. We should raise Shu's Health considerably this next level-up, get her Magpie's Core and triple-hybrid gun skill and junk them both for stats, that would at least make her break 2000%.
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>>4168442
>Magpie's innate Gun skill

You know, that just gave me an idea when we eat Magpie's core and gun skill. Lets have Shu spawn arms that hold each of magpie's guns and use them as we please. Currently Alpha's spec'd to counter just the Contender, but she'll have a hard time keeping up if we constantly rotate fire-arms.
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>>4168439
yeah, no, i disagree. you're forgetting mental fatigue, and the simple fact if things force us to back off, we simply are clearly not prepared to finish her off now. it would take much much more than just recovering our stats to be prepared to face her again if it goes that poorly. again, we simply cant brute force this fight, and if trying to go at it logically as we are already wont work, then just throwing ourselves into the ringer for a second spiff wont either. its silly as hell.

just stop ignoring the reality this may end up a Kosi situation, where we just are not yet prepared for the moment to actually finish things off here.

>>4168438
im unsure. i see what you're going for, but might just not Work. Shu might just need the breathing room of leaving herself, and the problem is a constant just puts Shu in too much danger. honestly, the Teams themselves will probably need to be random, so Alpha cannot start being prepared for each team. but Shu staying in the fight could force certain elements to be more necessary per team to accommodate the fact Shu will always be there and thus always need help in certain ways, aswell as Shu will then make certain counters always there, significantly lowering many peoples ability to be a surprise counter.

Having Shu always there basically means no one else can rely on their hive Mistress Powers at any point, for example. while rotating her out aswell could at least make those viable at times for others, and Shu too, if we force Alpha to mix things up enough.
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>>4168438
Then Shu will need a diverse set of defenses to keep WAlpha off her toes while we rotate people in and out.

Also one thing Dorian can not be allowed to intervene in this fight under any circumstances. With his speed WAlpha will turn everyone into mush in a round or two.

And we will nee dot fit everyone with Custom Ammo to target specific parts of WAlpha. Probably one anti relic ammo. One anti generator and one anti fibromancy i think she also got a lot of.

>>4168442
We will see if any of Magpies abilities will be of any use against the killer Cyborg.... but yeah they will probably be just stats.....

>>4168447
We first need to see which drawbacks those guns have before we can consider using them.
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>>4168442
>>4168447
as i always say, lets not jump the gun here, and wait til we see whats actually available for the level-up, whenever that happens.

even stat wise Magpie may not be the best for Shu, or may end up meshing well replacing something on someone else. and i mean... not like this time we have her Dream Daughter to worry about who it goes into...
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>>4168452
>>4168447
>>4168442
Dorian wont like it, but there is a good role he can play in this battle; ferrying people to and from the battle. yes, he cannot be allowed to get close enough to be counted as a combatant, but neither can anyone else for this to work. to make this run smoothly and them get in in time, he may be necessary to ferry people around to switch up both whos on whos team, and where they come in from, in ways we otherwise couldn't do quickly enough. aswell as the fact the battle probably wont stay in one location, so people will have to be a decent bit further than just the actual combat bubble away to keep out of it, so him sling shotting them in or at least closer to it will save alot of time.
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>>4168447
I remember proposing that we completely respec our skills, give Alpha the entirely wrong set of counters, but ultimately we decided that it would put us at as much of a disadvantage due to not knowing our skillset as thoroughly after the respec.

>>4168449
Alpha is already worse than a Kosi scenario. Kosi was a time-sensitive thing to consider, but she wasn't actively hounding us across the Fleshscape, forcing us to play an entirely defensive and reactionary style while we desperately search for something that can end her. We could actually advance meaningfully in the quest instead of spending our entire time glancing over our back worried that West Alpha would strike while we were distracted. I would love for Alpha to become a Kosi scenario, where we can just leave it and go off on adventures, secure in the knowledge that nothing bad is going to happen while we're gone. But if we cripple Alpha that severely, there's no reason not to just kill her then.

>>4168457
Not a bad idea.
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>>4168449
>>4168453
>>4168452
This West Alpha situation will probably be a Kosi scenario where we will have to back off. And come back for a second round.

Which reminds me.
>>4168335
>As much as you hate to say it, Alpha can wait for the time being. Relax a bit with your allies and tell them to rest a while, and spend time with one or two of them...before you attend to more serious matters.
>Consult with Orwell for the exact details of how West Alpha adapts as well as the established baseline, her current location and her predicted flight path. And ask if it's safe to reclaim (but not fully move back in) the Dragon's Roost or if Alpha isn't hanging around that place like a squatter.
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>>4168466
>respec our skills
part of that was it simply would be a nightmare game wise and mechanically too.

and its not at all that simple. because if we get that far and have to back off in the first place, no, there is every reason in the book not to try and kill her again if we fail the first time, because, we just failed to kill her. it means even in that weakened state, we did not have enough to bring her down. backing off wont change that.

and its not about what we want. if Alpha turns out to be something we're not ready to deal with, thats that. we just have to deal with it and work around it til we are and can finish her off later. it would be utterly stupid to keep pressing her if theres clear signs we are not ready, just like how we didn't just bull rush her the first time. it would suck, but all what you're proposing would get people needlessly killed and result in yet another, worse failure.

unlike Kosi, we're talking about someone custom made to kill us and made to stand up to the like of people like Mara. our potential tricks are the only reason this might even be slightly viable. if those fail or dont do enough, then we simply are not ready to face her, simple as that.
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>>4168438
oh, and forgot to say hi back, sorry.

>>4168468
i dont think we should be thinking about reclaim the dragons roost. until Alpha is gone, its simply always going to be too high a liability.
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>>4168466
>>4168457
If we're going to at least aim to Cripple, why not go for a super long range bombardment like Railgun sniping in an attempt to act least disable one of West Alpha's Cores? Take the time to craft a bullet capable of piercing through her defenses and dealing super heavy piercing damage.

Which reminds me of vid related:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EQlVYpp2EPQ

Video description tl;dr: A heavy bio-mass loaded Bullet with innate piercing damage that's capable of bypassing piercing resistance that when buried in the target, soon explodes into piercing swords of calcite erupting out of the target's body.

We could go for something like Vid related, except modify the bullet in a way that it stays stuck inside West Alpha's body, permanently crippling that core.
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>>4168475
We will have to make plans for our Alpha Strike/ Surprise round anyway so keep that in mind that is not a bad idea.
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>>4168475
first, we need to know if Novembers guns can take custom rounds.
second, im not against it for an opening, but i just cant see her not having some way to defend from ranged enough to get up close, so we would need beo be ready for when she does, which would result in the typical plan.

again, as an opener it could work, but i dont think its a good idea to rely on only long ranged fighting nor the idea it will continue to work long enough to win off of. plus, we need someone close enough to ensure both her Relics can be countered, and her cores are actually knocked out, and if knocked out, taken away from her before she can get them back.
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>>4168472
A foe being something we're not ready to deal with has never stopped us before. Not when there are more important things that mean that it's end them or suffer terrible consequences. It's the same scenario, we'll kill Alpha because leaving her alive is too awful to deal with.

>>4168475
I did suggest that a couple Veins back, actually. Hook November up to Shu and Amara via the Dominus Bloodline, give her a total of twelve ACTs to work with, and she can fire six railgun rounds in a single turn. Do it from over the horizon, using a swarmling as a spotter, and have it be MRSI (Multiple Round Simultaneous Impact, shooting the earlier shells in a salvo at higher angles so they have longer flight times and therefore hit at the same time as the later rounds) so that they all hit before Alpha can respond. Then we teleport to a new spot and fire another salvo from there. Soften Alpha up with a couple of barrages, then engage her.

>>4168482
That's why we engage her from over the horizon. In the time it would take Alpha to retaliate, we'll already have teleported out.
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>>4168482
you got that gdoc to our theorycrafted relics? I need you to pull it up as I might have a few things in that doc that we could make as novelty debuffs.
>>4168490
>>4168477

True. But I think we're going to have to take our time here in this preparation phase of hunting down West Alpha.

I understand your people's haste in wanting to kill Alpha asap and have her be done with it, but overconfidence and hastiness is a slow and insidious killer.

Right now, I just want people to come up with creative ways to weaken West Alpha in one-off novel ways that leaves her with no room to adapt to after they're used. Like consumable relic. It doesn't have to be a big one, it could be consumable relics that throws debuffs on West Alpha over time.
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>>4168490
not really, and this is without a doubt on a different scale than other times. plus, any other threat has had an actual goal, West Alpha is so far just a mindless force of nature you can possibly stop. its bad to let her go, but at worse she tries to hound us, something we have already been dealing with. at best, she just flails around randomly, which is bad, but compared to past problems nowhere near as actually bad.

and again, getting us all killed wont help the situation. getting our team mangled and cut down wont do anything helpful. she needs to be dealt with, but she is not something we should, or can, or need to, stupidly brute force ourselves against. my god Anon seriously fucking hell.

>hit her from the horizon.
yeah, may not be possible where she is, and could very well backfire. if shes under fire, she will be under some form of being in combat. on top of, all that would do is make her shift towards things to make sure she can actually close that distance, or worse, escape. relying on any barrage being able to last without something distracting her in close combat past a turn is ignoring literally everything we know about how she works.
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>>4168493
the only one being mind boggingly stupid in their hastiness to kill her now is >>4168490
this anon.

as for the sheet, here ya go. im a bit surprised you didnt have it saved, but no issue or problem at all if you have your reasons.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_-8s0tin7DCQxITm6C69QULRnM_ibDfg18iV4dc7Fc/edit?usp=sharing
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>>4168497
added to my drive. thanks.
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>>4168498
its public editing mind you, as the point was to have people archive their own relics over any one person having to try and remember to do so.
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(Good Morning, all. It's been a doozy on my end, so I'm just now getting to questions.)

>>4168361
(The fan fiction compilation isn't done yet, so that's why I didn't add it yet. Regarding the Ravager Acidum, you did well, and I feel like it suits a Humoral skillset well.)

>>4168372
(I would like some assistance compiling that if the anons here would be so kind, since I feel like I'd miss something.)

>>4168493
(For the sake of space, the Google doc for Player-Crafted Relics in at the top of the Relics Ver 6 Pastebin.)
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>>4168505
(Testing this again, since I can see my name when I'm typing up a post, but it's now showing up when it hits the thread.
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>>4168505
Ah alright so the other anon was right.

So how can we help? My own works are all centralized in one place should we go back and just gather them together wherever they may have shown up?
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>>4168505
think you forgot your Trip BHOP... or wait, damnit. can you place it? i know due to the April 1st joke, many boards have that feature disabled. otherwise, sorry to hear about your day.

>Threaysheet in Relics sheet.
oh, well thanks for adding that to the Relics sheet. makes things easier.

as for the Fan-Works, i'll compile a list of mine for you to then use as you please. if no one else is up for it, ill try and haggle what i can remember and find together, but everyone giving you a link you can then organize as you please would probably work best, over one person trying to scrounge it all together.

unless of course, they want to, are willing to, or already have, of course.
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>>4168490
>>4168497
Some consumable relics that I think we could make for West Alpha.

>RHINOVIRAL POWDER (Consumable): A bag or jar filled with Sickly mucus colored powdery pentagonal flakes. To use effectively, throw the powder at the “face” or the appropriate equivalent of your enemy daughter/amalgam/construct’s respiratory system. Upon inhalation or exposure to the relic powder, the unfortunate victim will experience the onset of the common cold for 10 rounds. Additionally during combat the unfortunate victim will have a low but increasing chance to waste one ACT on their turn entirely spent on dealing with the symptoms. Purging this disease takes up the victim's entire turn for one round. Even in the onset of the Crucible, mankind’s most common sickness persists. Bless you. (tl;dr: The powder causes the victim to have a small but increasing chance to have their intended action interrupted and wasted due to the symptoms of the common cold over 10 rounds as a relic that disrupts the enemy's Action economy over a period of time.)

>HOMEBOUND FEMUR (consumable): A Human bone bleached and fragile. It smells of pain, nostalgia, and recovery. To activate this relic, the daughter can simply break the bone as a free action. In doing so the bone teleports the user back to the spot where they last slept in the fleshscape. However, this also breaks the daughter’s “legs” and halves their mobility for one day or until their next resting period (still applies to daughters who are amorphous or lack legs, the Relic WILL cut down their mobility somehow by breaking a limb). Coming home in such short notice can be a pain one’s feet, so make sure you rest up before your next adventure.

Homebound Femur would provide all combatants an escape rope to dip out of combat without getting traced back to our new home base which is something I think everyone should have on their person if we are to fight against West Alpha. As for Rhinoviral Powder, it's not consistent, but the increasing chances and the very long debuff duration would help tip the scales ever so slightly.
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hmm...... weird.... its not showing up for me either... I didnt notice on the last post.... but now its pretty clear that its missing
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>>4168494
>not really, and this is without a doubt on a different scale than other times. plus, any other threat has had an actual goal, West Alpha is so far just a mindless force of nature you can possibly stop. its bad to let her go, but at worse she tries to hound us, something we have already been dealing with. at best, she just flails around randomly, which is bad, but compared to past problems nowhere near as actually bad.
You're right, this is without a doubt on a different scale than other times. Alpha is so much worse than all of our other big threats that we pushed beyond our limits to kill. None of them were persistent threats that would prevent us from actually playing the damn game, Alpha is. She has to be ended so we can get on with the quest. Every Vein she's alive is a Vein where we have to deal with her bullshit instead of any of the other thousand threats we have to deal with.

>and again, getting us all killed wont help the situation. getting our team mangled and cut down wont do anything helpful. she needs to be dealt with, but she is not something we should, or can, or need to, stupidly brute force ourselves against. my god Anon seriously fucking hell.
I explicitly said not to do it if we get anyone put on Death's Door. We're just doing this if we can manage to hit her hard with an initial strike that cripples her, then retreat to recover for the next round with her severely weakened.

>yeah, may not be possible where she is, and could very well backfire. if shes under fire, she will be under some form of being in combat. on top of, all that would do is make her shift towards things to make sure she can actually close that distance, or worse, escape. relying on any barrage being able to last without something distracting her in close combat past a turn is ignoring literally everything we know about how she works.
It's MRSI. The barrage doesn't last, it hits all at once. She gets hit by six railgun shells at the same time and then has to run dozens of kilometers in a single turn in order to catch us before we teleport out. It's a good move.

>>4168508
I believe it has to do with April Fool's.
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>>4168508
>>4168517
damn, yeah. think they just disabled it here too. hrm. well, theres the April Fools joke on our game, i guess. thank goodness you always put () around things, and typically have a distinct writing style i guess?
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>>4168509
(When I pause for the evening later today, Ill request that everyone post links to their works, and then I'll compile those into a Pastebin that I'll add to subsequent Veins.)

>>4168517
>>4168518
(Ah, oh well. Hopefully it'll get fixed in time.)
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>>4168509
I found this one I still had open on my phone made by some other anon

https://pastebin.com/wJu88nYi
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>>4168516
Homebound Femur sounds good. I'm not sure that Rhinoviral Powder will do anything, though, for all we know Alpha doesn't even breathe anymore. We haven't actually gotten a description of her, BHOP is holding back on that one for a dramatic reveal. But she might be so cyberneticized she can't inhale.
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>>4168518
>It's MRSI. The barrage doesn't last, it hits all at once. She gets hit by six railgun shells at the same time and then has to run dozens of kilometers in a single turn in order to catch us before we teleport out. It's a good move.
It's a good idea on paper, but I would like to remind you that bhop has confirmed that West Alpha travels the fleshscape by flying al la Iron Man. for an MRSI to work, we would have to use lots of math and planning to ensure that they all hit Alpha simultaneously in the air no less.
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>>4168527
Ah, damn, you're right. I forgot about the jet mode. We'd have to get her when she lands, that's less reliable as something we can do. Well, fuck that idea, then.
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>>4168518
>She has to be ended so we can get on with the quest
not at the cost of losing the game itself, or a family member. and yes, every Vein she is alive if we fail, we will have to take her into account. its what it is, but trying to push past her if everything fails is not at all a solution either, nor is a time-skip that regardless of size, breaks the flow, structure, and feel of the game a better solution. if we didnt do a time-skip for Alamath, we damn well arent doing on here. and if Alpha forces us back, she forces us back. we deal with it, in the time we need, over foolishly rushing in. if after both pushing past both her Relics and her Cores she still forces us back, or worse, one or the other cannot work, we simply wont be beating her now. simple as that. and trying to push her now if we fail that hard will simply result in us not being around to ever beat her.

>I explicitly said not to do it if we get anyone put on Death's Door.
yes, and i explicitly have said multiple times if she can withstand all those steps we do and is still a massive threat to the point we have to back off, we arent suddenly going to be able to beat her in a second round.

>Barrage
and i damn fucking well never said it was a bad idea or not to do it, only not based the entire plan on it and rely on it working and West Alpha not being able to adapt to even the playing field or beat it. im saying we damn well better be prepared to face her in melee, because she still will almost certainly force us to no matter how far away we try to be, and certain aspect may require us to be ready for melee regardless.

>>4168521
will do. and also means i will need to work on that, assuming this conversation ever ends.

though, if the level up votes are tonight(unsure when you plan to do them), it would be a very bad time to try and mix that into.
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>>4168516
sorry, the other anons running me ragged here.

>Powder
Alpha might be too machine for that.

>Femur
i guess thats alright. horrible drawback though and if Alpha somehow tracks us, we're fucked.
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>>4168532
yes but if she does manage to track us down we are fucked sideways either way.
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>>4168531
(Odds are that the level-up vote will come tomorrow evening, given that I'm still hammering out the level-up list, so it won't happen tonight, for sure.)
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>>4168531
>not at the cost of losing the game itself, or a family member.
Agree to disagree. The risk is not that high.

>if we didnt do a time-skip for Alamath, we damn well arent doing on here.
No, that's right. You know what we did at Almath? We crippled the enemy, healed really quick, and then got back in the fight. Just like I'm proposing we do now. The time-skip is just glossing over the five minutes that it would take for us to do it, in order to preserve the flow of the game.
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>>4168536
not necessarily. we would still stand a chance of getting everyone safely moved again. everyone having broken legs and halved movement would very much significantly drop that chance. i mena, its low anyways, but we would still want to keep that as high as possible id imagine.

>>4168538
thats fine, both with me schedule wise and with me understanding. just wanted to make sure is all.

oh, would you prefer i lay out the individual stories, or if its something like the Pepperbox Gang where all the story links are at the bottom of their page, you alright or prefer to just have me link that and maybe mention said story links are there? either is fine, honest, just want to know what you would prefer, not what you think would be easier for me/us.
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>>4168542
(Individual stories wold be fine, if that works for you as well.)
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>>4168532
>>4168528
>>4168522
I'm getting the feeling that the majority of this vein will be spent doing lots prepwork on taking down Alpha. From Karma level ups to Relic Crafting, to Consume level ups... If so, we should dedicate the time in this vein solely to downtime, prep-work, catching up on friends and family, and taking a much needed breather.

>>4168335
So some housekeeping that I think needs some attention:

>Level up (obvious)
>Karma level up (obvious)
>Asking Tinker Tailor about November's repairs
>Asking Tinker Tailor about the upgrades she made to November's Tank
>Asking Tinker Tailor about her work on the Void Orrey
>Catching up with family.
>Forging relics, repairing relics.
>Catching up on current events.
>Catching up with Orwell on the details of the last skirmish and comparing the number of combatants in each of West Alpha's skirmishes. The devil is in the details and West Prime and West Alpha are such devils that we need to look out for in said details.
>Asking Orwell on how the fuck Alpha managed to sniff out the location to the Dragon's Roost.

speaking of tracking us down...how the fuck did West Alpha figure out our home base? We don't really physically enter/exit the penthouse and mainly travel to and from the penthouse via Escher's gear.
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>>4168540
>The risk is not that high.
if she survives to the point of us needing to back off shes still such an overwhelming threat, yes, yes it fucking damn well is.

>We crippled the enemy, healed really quick, and then got back in the fight. Just like I'm proposing we do now.
no, BHOP re-evaluated some things and said he was gonna bowl through regardless, not giving us a choice. and context was still significantly different, what you're proposing now is ludicrously unnecessary and fucking retarded. im not letting you turn this into another damn Alamath situation.

>The time-skip is just glossing over the five minutes that it would take for us to do it, in order to preserve the flow of the game.
big damn fucking assumptions about how much time, and still would be breaking the flow and feel of the game.
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>>4168542
I would probably prepare at least two different fallback positions with the gear so that when we do fall back using the bones we can move out immediately if she would manage to find our new base.

>>4168545
So giving you the links to the individual stories?

Even those that have multiple chapters. Can do that if you want to sure even with a descriptor and all.

I might also then add a link to the pastebin in my own nexus once that is completed.

>>4168548
Na we did come in physically. people have come and gone repeatedly. And if you know roughly where to search even a mountain is no longer that big of a place. Shu has never done it any other way than with the gear btu Magpie that slime girl and i think at one point Julia as well as a couple other people from our family
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>>4168545
works fine for me sure.

>>4168548
probably, though that will depend on how much time Alpha actually gives us too. certainly agree we dont go at her willy nilly though yes. only thing i can think i disagree on is catching up with people, albeit in that i dont think we have the luxury of doing that by itself. maybe if it can be mixed into other tasks though sure. also dont think the Void Orrey is too important right now. Current Events again probably bested mixed into other things. important but i feel like anything more important than Alpha would either make itself obvious or be brought to our attention. lord please let nothing else pop up during this...

>speaking of tracking us down...how the fuck did West Alpha figure out our home base? We don't really physically enter/exit the penthouse and mainly travel to and from the penthouse via Escher's gear.
we use the waystation in the town it overlooks semi-frequently, and its not at all protected from prying eyes and abilities. neither is the town. combine that with West probably already keeping tabs and trying to track down important places to Mara, and she probably was able to start piercing things together id imagine.

that, or a friend/ally blabbed. possibly not even on purpose or knowing they did.
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>>4168557
oh yeah, we're gonna make sure we can get outta dodge real fast if things go fuckside upside-down.
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>>4168548
>I'm getting the feeling that the majority of this vein will be spent doing lots prepwork on taking down Alpha. From Karma level ups to Relic Crafting, to Consume level ups... If so, we should dedicate the time in this vein solely to downtime, prep-work, catching up on friends and family, and taking a much needed breather.
Well, our party can have a breather. Shu just took one. We need to work just hard enough that the increase in our stress balances with the decrease in everyone else's, so that we're all at the same level of somewhat stressed when we're done.

>speaking of tracking us down...how the fuck did West Alpha figure out our home base? We don't really physically enter/exit the penthouse and mainly travel to and from the penthouse via Escher's gear.
I figure that West studied Skintalking-based recordings of our movements and the movements of our associates, and managed to put together the likely location of our base from where we emerged. So she knew that we occasionally popped up in the Town of Rust, and that the Midnight Crew headed there to meet up with us, and so deduced we probably lived in that area.
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>>4168545
oh, BHOP!
i think i just found wasp girl from Laoc!
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(Writing now, Gentlemen. It's been busy, so thank you for bearing with me.)

>>4168605
(Oh, this is absolutely fantastic. Thank you!)
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>>4168698
No worries, BHOP, glad as always to have you running this awesome quest. Take all the time you need!
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>>4168335

“Let me check in with Orwell before we continue, just to get an up-to-date sitrep on Alpha.” You say, and as soon as the words are out of our mouth you notice a nearby Joyous snap to attention, a glint of intelligence in the constructs two-tone eyes as it strides up to you. “So, where is she, and what is she up to?”

“Alpha’s looped back to this little town and is just flitting around, looking for something. It’s actually the same one whose church you and Rath bombed out shortly after you woke up, when you and she first met.” Orwell informs you, gesturing with her hands as she speaks, the movements clashing against Amara’s normal method of emoting. “She passed by your old dorm and one of West’s labs, too, but she didn’t stick around for long.”

“When did that group of Daughters encounter her?”

“Between West’s lab and the no-name town. Yeah, big ‘oof’ on that…they didn’t stand a chance.” The teen says, the construct she’s hijacked grimacing at the recollection. “I tried to fool-proof the warning field as best I can, but there’s only so much you can do, right? But hey, at least we got some decent info.”

“Wait, is Alpha just…retracing Shu’s steps?” Gina asks, glancing to you as the Joyous just nods.

“Looks like it. I’ve stored up enough strength to make a move to throw off your scent before she gets to the swamp, if that’s cool by you.”

“Guess this whole crisis has been a goddamned buffet to you, hasn’t it?” Rath says, judgment dripping from every syllable as she scowls at the construct.

“I’ve been trickling out info so as to not leak too much of our plans, so it’s not as much of one as you’d imagine. I promised 'em a big recap later, though.” Orwell replies, pointedly ignoring the other girl’s tone. “Still, the anticipation is more than enough to sustain me. Oh, the hype’s building up something fierce, lemme tell you.”

“Thanks for the update, Orwell – it’s nice to know that we don’t have to sweat Alpha, at least for the time being. I may tap you for another distraction, but for now…” You trail off, meeting Dorian’s single azure eye as you toss Escher’s Gear to him. “…I’d like for you to go retrieve Julia and try to enlist the aid of the Hyenas for when we’re ready to strike, but only if Laoc can spare them.”

“Rath?” You continue, nodding to Dorian as he salutes you just before space wraps around him, ferrying him to the far-off city. “I’d like for you to get started on four Spiritus shells. God knows we’ll need them, and gather what biomass everyone’s willing to spare for their creation.”

“M-me? Uh, sure…I guess.” She stutters, clearly taken aback at your request for her creative efforts. Under your orders, she collects as much biomass as her freshly summoned arms can carry, scurrying off to November’s room to be close to her Aunt while Tailor continues her work.

(Continued)
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>>4168736

“Alright everyone – I took a little while to rest up, and you’ll do the same.” You declare, leaving no room in your tone for argument. “Take the time that Orwell’s given us and relax while you can. That goes for you all, too.”

Your words prompt an appreciative look from the leaders of the Crew and Barbers respectively, and at that the assembly of Daughters take up residence on the seats that Gina summons from the surrounding flesh with an amethyst-infused glance.

“Y’know, it’s cool seeing you work up-close.”

Surprised, you turn to your left end look down at meet a Joyous’ eyes, the one currently inhabited by the consciousness of a teen in some far-off, undisclosed location.

“Is that so?”

“Yep! Like, it’s common knowledge about how you fight and stuff, but seeing you take control in the little quiet moments really hammers home how you’ve come this far.” She nods, glancing around the room and your friends and family. “They’ve got all these different things that’d make them so ill-suited to work together under any other circumstances, or hell, any other leadership…and yet it just *works*. These people are so different, but you glue them together. None of them would be here if it weren’t for you.”

“If it wasn’t for them, neither would I.” You counter honestly, keeping your gaze on the short construct beside you. “The only reason I’ve made it this far is because of them.”

“Kind of a chicken-and-the-egg scenario then, isn’t it?” The Skintalker muses, steepling her fingers under her chin thoughtfully. “They’re alive ‘cause of you, you’re alive ‘cause of them – like a symbiosis.”

“Or, you know…’friendship’. Which is what most people call it.” You add, eyebrow cocked as Orwell erupts into giggles.

“Pfhaha, yeah, you got a point.” She chuckles, planting her hands on her hips as you regard the girl next to you. She’s an odd one for certain, and while you can’t deny that she didn’t exactly get off to the right foot going by first impressions, you can’t deny that her assistance has been a lifesaver…figuratively and literally, in several cases.

While the others are relaxing, by extension you have some time on your hands. As for how you spend it…that’s up to you.

>>Ask Orwell something else, while you have her here…in a manner of speaking.

>>Check in on Tinker Tailor and November, and see what sort of modifications the former’s cooked up for your resident cyborg and her beloved Metall Geschoss.

>>Take a moment to reach out to the Hexane lovers, Thelis and Veilen, to make sure they’re doing all right given everything that’s transpired.

>>While they relax, sit down with [an ally of your choice]

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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>>4168746
>Tell Orwell under what criteria she should definitely call you back before you
>"If you find anything about Alpha that has changed to cover one of her weaknesses or what she is doing Get back to me yeah. And when you have to spring that psychic lure to pull her off our trail. Also if she gets near Sam... She might mistake her for me "

>>Check in on Tinker Tailor and November, and see what sort of modifications the former’s cooked up for your resident cyborg and her beloved Metall Geschoss.
>If they seem busy go and cant afford the distraction sit down with Rath to touch base and go over the Spiritus Shell designs with her for each person.

Did your Internet break OP
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>>4168746
wait, BHOP, thought Shu had to help with the spritius shells? last time with Julia think thats what you said...

regardless i guess;
>assuming you have time before you need to help Rath with the Spiritus...
>Check in on Tinker Tailor and November, and see what sort of modifications the former’s cooked up for your resident cyborg and her beloved Metall Geschoss.
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>>4168746
>"I'm worried to ask, but just "How much" information about me is out there for the public to see? I want to know because if everything about me is completely public, then that'll just put me and my family in more danger. And we both know it'll just get worse in the future as my family and I get stronger. I'll have more hunters sharpening their fangs, claws, and blades and going after me with the intent of getting my head. It's why West Alpha seemed to be engineered to counter my family."

>Can you bring up all the records of each combat encounter that involved Alpha against groups of daughters? I want to compare and contrast the performances they had fighting against Alpha in comparison to size.
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next four hours from now. Apparently someone in my phone's IP has spammed 4chan, so I wasn't able to reply.)
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>>4168804
Well at least it's not our phone that died or the internet.
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>>4168804
oof, yeah thats happened to me before. even worse, had an odd glitch with that where i had to update my phone to stop that issue from happening everywhere once.
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>>4168808
Urgh that sounds just terrible.....

I already hate it when i have to take care of a ban when my phones not glitched.... And it happens so much... well little i can do when my phone usually switches between twenty different networks a day
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>>4168736
Huh. She's retracting Shu's steps. Well, I guess that means that she's switched out her targeting from Francine to us, so using Shu to draw aggro in the fight should work well. I wonder why she's starting from the beginning, though? Maybe some sort of data-mining/curiosity thing, she can't find us where we're supposed to be so she's going to check everywhere we've been and figure out where we'd chose to be now from what she learns.
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>>4168854
I think she's trying to learn more about us.

Didn't Sugar hint that West Alpha had a built in emotion suppressor? It's been mentioned that West Alpha clearly could feel emotions, but she couldn't express them openly unless that one forge core of hers was disabled.

I think she's trying to retrace Shu's path and journey so she could try and experience how we felt (emotionally) since we woke up.

The emotions that she missed. The emotions that she clearly craves to feel and express. And knowing that Shu could express her emotions through an empathy field, I think she's trying to learn more about the emotional side.
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>>4168871
Could be. I'm hesitant to assume such an innocent motivation to the horrible killer cyborg, but she might be looking to understand us not to better kill us but out of genuine interest. We are responsible for the biggest change in her existence, I can see her wanting to learn more about us to better come to terms with that change. I still worry that she's going to want to kill us, though. She's such a risk that coming to her trying to communicate peacefully isn't something we can really chance.
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>>4168878
>>4168871
We could leave a phone for her lying on the ground and call her form a distant waystation......

Though i am not sure it is a good idea. She could be using it to lure us into a trap. maybe with Wests control slipping she has regained some cunning and planning ability
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>>4168881
From what Francine told us about pre-cyborg Alpha, I'd think it would be the opposite, that she'd be less able to plan ahead without Prime to guide her. Though maybe there's a brutal cunning to her. I still think it's too much of a risk to try to reach out to her, though. It might leave a path open to taking her out more easily once her Cores are disabled, though, since that apparently damages the emotional inhibition. Manage to talk her down, stop struggling, be open to having her dreamstate consumed so that she can learn to come to terms with her strange new feelings in a safe environment. Or maybe that's wishful thinking, and she'll fight to the end.
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>>4168881
>>4168878
Well when you think about it, West Alpha has always fought daughters in self-defense unless under strict orders by West Prime.

Only when West Alpha was confronted by Daughters assuming a hostile intent to kill does she go all out, but she never reacts to an ambush, she never intentionally targets other daughters of her own volition. It's only when following West Prime's orders does she go for the initiative, but even then when she had to take West Tau back for recalibration, she told Tau to go in quietly and used violence when things came to a head.
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>>4168897
Yeah probably just wishful thinking.

She might turn into a feral daughter pretty much the moment the inhibition is dropped because of all the feelings that will flood her mind suddenly.

I just had a thought...... Our Empathic field... could we use it as a weapon to overwhelm her once we removed the suppressors?
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>>4168881
>>4168897
Well, West Alpha is gunning for Shu anyways, so we might as well take the time to try and talk things out with her if she's willing to talk before it turns to violence.

Another thing that I've noticed is that when West Alpha encounters scenarios, she adjusts accordingly. If her target responds with words (i.e. West Tau) West Alpha also responds with words. If her target responds with violence, West Alpha will also respond with violence.

>>4168910
West Alpha's emotions was already under a giant pressure cooker waiting to explode due to a Forge core module, trying to overwhelm her with emotions might be nice in combat, but a non violent solution might be nice.

I have a feeling what West Alpha is seeking from Shu is simply a way to be understood by others due to the Forge Core emotion suppressor module installed on her person.

Remember, when we destroyed the West Network we gave each proxy is given a chance to learn and grow onto their own. West Alpha was part of the network and was no different than Francine or Sigma.
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>>4168746
>>Check in on Tinker Tailor and November, and see what sort of modifications the former’s cooked up for your resident cyborg and her beloved Metall Geschoss.

Are we Blaster Master now?

>>4168907
Yeah, but Francine said that was because she was being restricted, and in her natural state Alpha was much more violent. Then again, what is Alpha's "natural state" now? She's spent a while with her brain full of cybernetics, her personality could have shifted.
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>>4168897
Here's the hole in your argument that I'm seeing. Francine may have said that Alpha was emotionless when she encountered her older Proxy, but that may be at a time when Alpha already had the emotion suppressor installed and it was also when Alpha and the others were still hooked onto the West Network.
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>>4168935
Can I get a sourced quote?
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>>4168935
that reference has long since been revealed several veins ago.
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>>4168941
From Vein 34:

>My neurodivergence from Prime is just evidence of a failed experiment. Maybe Prime didn't scoop out all that this girl was, or maybe she just didn't pour enough of herself into the empty mold. There's no telling where West ends and the mistake begins. Alpha came out broken, too. No curiosity, no will, just...nothing. Blank and cruel, like an errant child.

Francine encountered Alpha when she was still fresh, apparently. She wasn't interested in talking, then. Like I said, it's possible that's changed over the past year or so of having cybernetics influencing her thinking.
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>>4168953
Yeah, but I want to be more overtly Blaster Master. Let the tank jump, that would be sick. No, I don't know when it would at all be useful, but it would be cool.
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>>4168958
If we can make the tank jump we might be able to make its climb and even participate in combat with claws or shit like that. Pretty much turn it into a hermit crab that can shoot..... Maybe we can crossbreed it with a mantis shrimp for extra short range effectiveness.
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>>4168955
The thing that I'm unsure of is that Francine's testimony didn't say the time difference between her creation and Alpha's creation, nor did it state the order in which the Proxies were created.
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>>4168983
They were created at the same time, according to Orwell's data file on Alpha.
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I should head to bed now
Good Night Anons

Good Night OP

I am really looking forward to seeing what will happen next
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>>4169008
Good night, anon. Sleep well.
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>>4169008
(Sleep well, Anon.)

>>4168995
(This is correct.)
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>>4168995
>>4169010
Well then, Talk about Cain & Able, They're twins!
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pokes head in

sup im back need to catch up again

also since the things broken for today this is gen. i just saw the thread up so was like ima stop in
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>>4169030
Hi, welcome back. Nice to see you.
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i actually seriously tend to disapear a lot and then pop in for a bit binge read and then vanish again
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>>4169030
>>4169035
(Gen! It's good to see you back, I was wondering the other day what you were up to.)
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>>4169042
really. im actually running my own quest right now so I've been keeping busy XD

and working on arts stuff. so hows this quest been going since the last time I've been around. i mean in general i dont need a recap i can just read through the threads
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>>4169035
How long has it been since your last binge? Almath? Yurei? Laoc?
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>>4169049
(I'd say it's been going well. I've been having a great deal of fun with it, at least.)
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>>4169050
i think its been 10 threads give or take 2-3
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its like i cant actually remember if it was like 33 or 27 or somewhere in between XD
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which tells me i should really keep up with this quest more often
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>>4169057
>>4169063
Do you remember anything to do with giant ants? Because that plot thread is delightful, you're going to enjoy it when you get there if you haven't already. In general the quest has been going well, we've been encountering a lot of cool stuff. Right now we're kind of stuck playing defensive against our current threat, it's got me a bit testy, but I'm still looking forward to the fight where we take them out.
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"I'm worried to ask, but just how much information about me is out there for the public to see?" You posit, and Orwell's subsequent cringe tells you all you need to know. "Listen - if everything about me is completely public then that'll just put me and my family in more danger, and we both know it'll just get worse in the future as my family and I get stronger. I'll have more hunters sharpening their fangs, claws, and blades and going after me with the intent of getting my head. It's why West Alpha seemed to be engineered to counter my family, since she knew exactly how to calibrate Alpha to be effective against us."

"True...honestly, ever since you first fought Mara at the Envious City, you've had eyes on you. Your fights, your talks...everything's been compiled and archived." Orwell replies, gazing up at you with eyes that don't belong to her. "Really only your interactions with me or those you've had inside the Dragon's Roost have been out of the spotlight...and speaking as someone that's gotten used to the one-way mirror of media? It sucks, especially if you didn't ask for it."

"Agreed...though it may work to our advantage just as much as it's worked for West." You say with a sigh. "Can you bring up all the records of each combat encounter that involved Alpha against groups of daughters? I want to compare and contrast the performances they had fighting against Alpha in comparison to size."

"Sure, I'll work on rummaging through the archives for stuff Prime didn't scrub. Anything else you want me to keep an eye out for?"

"That, and if you find anything about Alpha that has changed to cover one of her weaknesses or what she is doing, then get back to me, yeah. Also, if you have to spring that psychic lure to pull her off our trail." You say, quickly adding once it occurs to you; "Oh, and one last thing... if she gets near Sam, then she might mistake her for me."

The Joyous gives you two thumbs-up before the twinkle in her eye fades, Orwell's consciousness retreating from the construct and leaving it an empty shell of the little girl that's sleeping in the next room over. At her departure, your feet carry you to a door on the opposite side of the room, and you open the door to see Rath crafting the general shells of the Spiritus quartet you commissioned, the vague forms of your Dream Daughters coming together nicely before your hand guides the final product. A gentle wave from the left of the room catches your eye, and you turn to see November greeting you, though in a way you never expected.

(Continued)
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>>4169303

The metal plates that make up the older woman's torso are splayed open, the intricacies of her inner workings laid bare as servos whir and gears tick away in time with her arrhythmic heartbeat. What truly takes you by surprise, however, is the biomass that pulses at the very core of her otherwise metallic chest; a heart that beats, a spine that twitches in the open air, and a myriad of neurons stretched between them and the mechanisms that make up the form she chose to take.

"Yo." She says simply, with Tinker Tailor striding over from the corner of the room with a strange contraption in her slight hands, a thing that is more meat than metal, at least compared to November's opened hull. "Don't mind all this, I'm about back to rights thanks to Tailor, here."

"Notroubletrulymypleasuremypleasureindeed." The Artisan quickly states, gingerly slotting in the device in a ready-made niche within what you'd guess would be November's navel, if she were sealed. "ShuIhavetothankyoufortheRelicsyouretrieved. Thebrokenoneswilltakesometimetorepairbutyou'vebroughtmeawonderfulhaultoexamine."

"Gogogo, seeforyourself." She urges you, gesturing rapidly to the table she came from, tucked into a corner of the room.

>>GUNSLINGER’S LONGCOAT: A custom-made coat with an impressively dense weave, this neuron-lined outwear offers two levels of resistance to all elemental damage types when worn. Doubling as both fashion statement and solid all-round defense, this Relic ensures that the bearer will tackle horror in style. (Chest Slot: HEALTH +300%. November gains 2 Levels of resistance to ALL damage types when the longcoat is worn, as opposed to purely elemental.)

>>PARANOID PENDANT: The red, bloodshot eye at the center of this organic pendant darts its gaze to and fro, its suspicious attention ceaselessly roving over its surroundings. When worn, the bearer's chance to evade attacks increases by 20%, and any successful evasion immediately allows the user to swiftly counter-attack, their retaliatory strike boosted by 1/4 the damage that would have been inflicted by the evaded blow. (Any Slot: HEALTH +80%. The Chance to evade increases to 25%, with the retaliatory strike's damage being boosted by 1/3 of the missed strike's power, instead.)

>>ARBITER’S JUDGEMENT: One of Mara's select masterpieces, this Relic resembles a perfect pearl, its impossibly white sheen unblemished despite the wear and tear it should have suffered. Mara's Relic allows the user to act first in combat, along with any allies that occupy the same combat zone. What sets this Relic apart from imitators is the fact that this Relic's effects ignore any enemy effect that would serve to interrupt this item's activation, though allied abilities that proc off early initiative *do* activate. (INELIGIBLE FOR NOVEMBER'S FRAME DUE TO FORGE-CRAFTED BODY - WEST COUNTERMEASURES IN EFFECT)

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"Impressive..." You murmur, running your hands over the surface of the perfectly round sphere, finding that is possesses a surprising weight when you test it in your palm. "...thanks for restoring these, Tailor. And what of the guns?"

"Alex'sMercyisundamagedthoughIhaveyettofinishmyworkontheothers.TheHungerpenaltyissomethingI'mtryingtofindawayaroundsoI'llneedsometime." She replies, sealing November's shell back as all of the older woman's disparate plates snap back into place, and she resembles the form you've grown accustomed to...plus some modifications. Her entire design's been optimized, her sleeker exterior no doubt having increased her overall speed while the subtle curvature of her frame offers greater protection against incoming attacks.

"Andifyouthinkthisisfun,thenyou'lllovewhatI'vedonewiththeGeschoss." Tailor hums, turning to you as she wrings her hands excitedly.

>>NOVEMBER: HEALTH +500%, DEF+, SPD+. November may now fire pre-constructed elemental rounds, crafted at a Forge.

>>METALL GESCHOSS: The Geschoss may now take advantage of its new thrusters, granting it considerable vertical and horizontal movement at rapid speed. When tethered to the tank, November now receives an additional ACT. What's more, the Metall Geschoss now rolls into combat with two of November's weapons spawned on its shell, and November may fire them as a free action when she attacks with the Geschoss.

"Damn, I feel like a new woman." November says, rising from her seat on the cot as she admires her improved form. "Also, what was that last bit? That cube-thing?"

"Thatwasthebestpart!" Tinker Tailor exclaims breathlessly, the vacuous glasses of her mask shimmering in the glow of Rath's luminous arms only a short distance away. "It'sanintuitiveevolutiondrivethatallowsyouto'levelup'afewofyourweaponssystems, drasticallyincreasingtheircapabilitiesbyusingapoolofspecially-culturedbiomassasapre-paidlevelingcost!"

"...Paid by whom, exactly?" You ask, eyebrow cocked.

"Meofcourse." Tailor dismisses, watching intently as November generates her Porcupine in one hand, its form tremulous, the metal shuddering as Tailor's creation prepares to optimize a selection of the woman's armaments. November catches your eye, shrugging as Rath darts to your side, admiring her Aunt's ungraded form and practically vibrating in time with the weapon the other woman wields.

"Well, you two, I've got a couple of ideas as for what to boost...but I'd like some advice, if you're willing to chip in your two cents' worth."

.She doesn't have to ask you twice...and where Rath's concerned, she didn't need to ask at all.

>>PLEASE CHOOSE *THREE* OF NOVEMBER'S WEAPONS SYSTEMS TO ENHANCE

Character Sheets: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/12N7NB6N8_CmjJJPUDMjijBBqSBNdvoYBc1um01TbXs0/edit?usp=sharing

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, I shall be pausing here for the evening. Voting shall remain open for the next fourteen hours, with posting to resume in approximately sixteen, give or take as work demands. I'll be around and writing for the rest of the evening, and I'll be happy to address any questions, comments, or criticisms, as I welcome them all. Have a great evening and take care, one and all.)
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>>4169309
huh, wasn't expecting any of this for November. as far as sheets go folks, ill update hers once this votings done.

speaking of, vote;
>PORCUPINE
>REX
>KAISER FLARE
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>>4169311
thanks for running.
also, you still want us to link you the fanworks stuff, or plans change?
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>>4169330
(That'd be great!)

>>4169327
(Yeah, Relic optimization is Tailor's specialty, so that extends fairly well into tinkering with November and the tank.)
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>>4169309
>>4169311
So any luck with the Void Orrey?

>Autumn Protocol
>Porcupine
>Nova Lung/Flare step
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>>4169305
>>GUNSLINGER’S LONGCOAT
>>PARANOID PENDANT
I'm tempted to put these on Shu for the upcoming fight. Might not be the best symbolically if it looks like we're carrying on Magpie's mantle after killing her to stop her doing bad things, but they'd give Shu a lot more survivability and if she's going to draw Alpha's aggro she'll need it.

>>ARBITER’S JUDGEMENT
Oh, very nice. Free surprise round, that's great. Very good addition to our overall capabilities, the Arbiter Relics are way OP. I hope we get a look at the rest in the line, that would be really coo-
>(INELIGIBLE FOR NOVEMBER'S FRAME DUE TO FORGE-CRAFTED BODY - WEST COUNTERMEASURES IN EFFECT)
Wait, what? West countermeasures in effect? Is this something to do with Alpha, like the Arbiter Relics were designed after Mara's fight with Alpha and she wanted to make sure that Alpha wouldn't copy any of her designs?

>>4169309
>>NOVEMBER: HEALTH +500%, DEF+, SPD+. November may now fire pre-constructed elemental rounds, crafted at a Forge.
We should craft a few belt magazines of each element type, use them with her gunpod.

>>METALL GESCHOSS:
Hover tank, nice.
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>>4169335
(That bit deserves its own post, but yes - she's completed its repairs.)
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>>4169342
(All of the Arbiter Relics are crafted to be unusable for artificial Daughters.)
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>>4169335
personally i think Rex is a better bet. Autumn drains a core and its unlikely that will be whats fixed here. its also still alot harder to setup regardless.

Rex gives her an upgrade to a hard hitting option that doesn't rely on lugging around extra cores or draining them to use. much more milage out of that. also, we plan to need Rex soon, so upgrading it would be a very good idea.

just while im at it, even though we agree, Porcupine is basically her main gun she can use at any level, so upgrading it would be the most ideal. an Kaiser Flare has simply always done us supurb, so i think giving her stun more oomph could make a big difference in alot of fights.
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>>4169347
>incompatibility due to design
Ouch.

>What truly takes you by surprise, however, is the biomass that pulses at the very core of her otherwise metallic chest; a heart that beats, a spine that twitches in the open air, and a myriad of neurons stretched between them and the mechanisms that make up the form she chose to take.

This reminds me. I have yet to design a T-5 relic that would serve as a blackbox coffin capable of letting November survive the WinterFall initiative. Either that or a Pilot's ejection pod.
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>>4169349
The issue is that the REX railgun is available only when November has a T-5 Core installed. Meanwhile the Autumn Protocol is available at any core level.
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>>4169311
>>4169332
here ya go. please, tell me if theres any changes you need to it, even if you are more or less just swiping the info up;
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1comL20X2jUrPO0p7QMdFinwAwdXHre2F9A5bdXif7_k/edit?usp=sharing

>>4169332
>Relic Optimization
thats fair and i expected something, just not so much. made it sound like earlier for balance/other reasons November was at her limits she would be at for the rest of the game, once we got her new frame.

>>4169347
oh? Artificial Daughters? not just West Related Daughters?

>>4169352
wait... thought you did? or was that another Anon? because i know someone made something akin to that, i could've sworn.
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>>4169361
>wait... thought you did? or was that another Anon? because i know someone made something akin to that, i could've sworn.
I had one in the works, but shelved it because I didn't know the exact criteria for a T-5 Relic and was uncertain if it would work. That's why it wasn't in the Relics Theorycrafting doc.
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>>4169347
I got that, I'm just wondering why. It's a strange function to have as a specific countermeasure to West. Maybe West makes much more use of cybernetics than we thought.

>>4169349
Sounds sensible to me. We should equip those two guns to the Geschoss, too. Rex as the main cannon, Porcupine as a coaxial mount.

>>4169356
But we only lose access to the Rex if we use the Autumn Protocol and have to go down to a weaker Forge Core. So we'd get more use out of an enhanced Rex than an enhanced Protocol.
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>>4169356
yeah, but that hardly matters when any use of Autumn makes her fully coreless. and she will have the T-5 in her most of the time anyways. she still will be able to do us significantly better with Rex at more times than she will with Autumn. and again, its ignoring we're about to have a fight we need that Rex to be a powerful as it can get for. its wholly worth the sacrifice of her needing a T-5 Core for Rex, for her to even the odds even a fraction more here for us against Alpha, especially without having to use an all or nothing move like Autumn that would leave her weakened and be too big a waste if she missed, which is likely.
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>>4169369
(You're on the right track, yes.)
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>>4169369
oh, me or you may be mis-reading that.
i think the two guns the Geshoss can take in on TOP of her base Cannon, not replacing it. so she gets the two new guns, plus her free Geschoss cannon shot or her free amped up usage of a weapon system through the Geschoss now.

>>4169347
BHOP can say if im wrong there though, of course.
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>>4169369
>>4169379
If West managed to jailbreak a Forge Core capable of crafting wetware compatible cybernetics with human technology, then West Prime would have been able to access the source code to Relic Technology. Given that West Prime and her other proxies have the tendency to install Conduit selves into the relics they create, it would make sense for Mara and Magpie to have anti-West countermeasures installed to prevent remote hacking/hijacking when interacting with any Relic Technologies developed by the Wests. Otherwise, West could easily hack into any Relic she so desires and take control of the entire system al la Liquid Snake in MGS4
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>>4169372
The Autumn Protocol would actually be counterproductive in this fight. Alpha absorbs heat damage. The Rex has the advantage than it ignores damage immunity, so it can actually hurt Alpha. We're going to need to craft Radiant damage bullets for all of November's other guns, but I'm not sure if that works for the Autumn Protocol given that it's fed directly from her Forge Core.

>>4169381
>oh, me or you may be mis-reading that.
I think it's me. I actually assumed your interpretation as well, I just was hedging my bets in case it wasn't as good as I hoped.

>>4169379
Lovely. I'm going to guess that Prime herself has enough cybernetics in her for the Arbiter Relics to be incompatible, something to do with stabilizing her degeneration. Because there wouldn't be much point to making something like the Arbiter's Appetite not function for the cyborg Proxies if they could take it back for Prime to use. She's who it would benefit.
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>>4169381
(The guns are in addition to her cannon, yes.)
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>>4169422
Neat. We could triple-fire the railgun, then. One from November, one from channeling through the Geschoss' main gun, one from the slotted railgun copy. I think that would actually be a good opening move, try to punch out three of Alpha's four Forge Cores.
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>>4169309
Oh, and since I forgot to actually vote

>>PLEASE CHOOSE *THREE* OF NOVEMBER'S WEAPONS SYSTEMS TO ENHANCE
>Porcupine
>Rex
>Kaiser Flare
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>>4169422
awesome.
oh, and how is Marco reacting to his new Guardians Heart, and November to the oddities him having it causes?
or, actually, has that happened yet? or did we basically just technically see it finish up, due to how to tether a Guardians Heart to an owner?

>>4169433
im still unsure we can hope to do that so easily at all, but yeah, if nothing else getting some more railgun stakes through her before this becomes a tag-team brawl match will do wonders. or so we hope. not sure how i'll react if the shots just dont work on her, or worse, she like, snatches one from the air and throws it back just as hard.
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>>4169439
>not sure how i'll react if the shots just dont work on her, or worse, she like, snatches one from the air and throws it back just as hard.
Yeah, that would be pretty horrible. I guess we could neuromancy stun her, first? There was nothing on her sheet about being immune to neuromancy. On the other hand, upgrades, so she might be now.
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>>4169309
>>>PLEASE CHOOSE *THREE* OF NOVEMBER'S WEAPONS SYSTEMS TO ENHANCE

>>Porcupine
>>Rex
>>Kaiser Flare
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>>4169309
>>4169305
Uh...... nice new toys to play with

And the tank can really jump....... I am impressed you managed that Tinker

>>4169309
>>PLEASE CHOOSE *THREE* OF NOVEMBER'S WEAPONS SYSTEMS TO ENHANCE
Gonna have to agree with the other Anons here. This is little contests
>REX
>PORCUPINE
>KAISER FLARE

>>4169332
As for Fan Works

Here is the link to my own works
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YHEpTq1YGphXNSKuIe2IsT1IEO48EbSxdHwDuILB5qo/edit?usp=sharing

It will bring you to a version of the sheet you can actually change stuff on but all other links will bring you back into my Archive version where only i can change things on. I will keep both versions up to date until further notice is given
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NOVEMBER – LEVEL UP

>>M1918 B.A.R. 'PORCUPINE': The rhythm of war, the drumbeat of victory. November's right gauntlet slides back to bring the M1918 to bear; a repurposed Browning Automatic Rifle fit to fire spontaneously generated rounds directly from November's inner Forge. Dealing steady piercing damage at medium and long range and boasting the ability to continue firing all throughout the current turn when activated, this weapon places considerable stress on November's Forge when sustained over several rounds, its cost increasing by increments of 5% each round the assault is kept up (5%, 10%, 15%, and so forth). However, keeping this assault active grants higher damage and increased critical hit chance at NO COST to accuracy, with the flaring of the Forge also granting a stacking bonus to the next use of a plasma-related ability, boosting its damage drastically if the barrage is sustained over several rounds. UPGRADE: The Porcupine’s newly installed auto-calibration module now allows continuous fire to be maintained at no cost to November’s accuracy. What’s more, the stacking DAMAGE and CRITICAL HIT CHANCE bonus is now doubled, allowing the Porcupine to keep up more efficiently with November’s endgame weaponry. (Cost: 20%, 1 ACT)

>>KAISER FLARE [TIER 2 ABILITY]: Light, heat, then...darkness. November opens her chestplate, sending forth a burst of blinding, searing light in a LONG-range conical area in front of her, automatically blinding all foes caught within its area of effect, an ailment that lasts THREE turns. Foes caught at close range are instead blinded for FOUR turns and have their critical hit defenses hit drastically, opening them up to further assault from November or her squad mates. UPGRADE: If a foe would somehow be immune to this status ailment, they are instead blinded for ONE turn, or TWO at close range as the flare’s intense roar and heat scrambles any and all sensory systems. (Cost: 50% HEALTH, 2 ACT)

>>MODEL 90 SANDIA GAUSS RIFLE, 'REX' [TIER 5 ABILITY]: An experimental weapon, too unwieldy to be used by anyone other than the walking arsenal that is Heather Neeson. Loading a single, heavy round into this miniature railgun takes an ACT to perform, with the second ACT spent sending the projectile hurtling towards a single foe, inflicting a devastating blow that ignores any and all elemental or damage resistances IN ADDITION to IGNORING damage mitigation abilities. It's no matter, though; the slug also acts as a tracker, effectively tagging the impacted foe and increasing the accuracy of subsequent shots November fires at them to 100% while also boosting the follow-up’s DAMAGE and CRTICIAL HIT CHANCE by 30%. When the target absolutely, positively needs to have a cloud of lead delivered to their door...there's no better tool for the job when judgment comes knocking. (Cost: 300% HEALTH, 2 ACT)

WEAPON DAMAGE - INCREASED

(Continued)
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>>4170536

“Holy shit, this is awesome!” Rath cheers, inspecting every inch of her aunt’s recalibrated frame as you turn to Tinker Tailor once more.

“I appreciate you doing all this, Tailor. You really didn’t have t-“

Your thanks comes to a halt when you find the Void Orrery thrust into your face by the over-eager Flesh Artisan, the jet-black goggles of her mask reflecting your own bewildered expression.

“IfixeditsohardsoveryhardbutIdidit!” She exclaims, practically shoving the device into your arms...and when you touch the glossy orbs of the Orrery, you feel something in your right dress pocket practically jump, the Silver Key reacting curiously to the Relic that’s been returned to you…

>>VOID ORRERY (RESTORED): Tinker Tailor’s efforts to restore this odd device have been fruitful, restoring its unusual capabilities to full. Previously able to zoom out to view the sheer number of active Crucible’s, Tailor’s fine-tuning has allowed the Orrery to zoom in, granting you a map of your Crucible in addition to a monitoring system that allows you to run a search on any participants you’re familiar with and reveal their current location and status. What’s more is that during the restoration process, an odd link was detected between the Orrery and the Forge Cores…perhaps there’s a connection, something that could be turned into a meeting of minds across an incomprehensible gap…

“…Interesting.” You murmur, the Silver Key’s insistent thrum dying down as you place the Orrery back on the table behind Tailor before addressing her once more. “Like I was saying, you really didn’t have to do all this. If there’s anything we can do to repay you, please know I’ll be happy to make the hard work you’ve put into all this well worth your while.”

“Nononoyou’vegivenmesomanyfuntoystoplaywiththatI’vebeenrewardedseveraltimesovermyfriend.” The Flesh Artisan replies instantly, the shake of her head more a rapid snapping to-and-fro than anything natural to the human form. “Mytimewithyou’sbeenmostilluminating,andI’vemuchtoconsiderandincormporateintomyowndesigns.”

“Speaking of designs, how’re they lookin’, Shu?” Rath calls out, and you turn to see her and November standing over the rough likenesses of Holly, Uzu, Johanna, and even Isabelle…the latter of which isn’t even defaced, which you half-expected given Rath’s grudge.

“Nicely done.” You grin, the Silver Key still humming lightly against your thigh as you consider what to do next with the downtime available to you.

>>Help Rath finish the Spiritus Shells, then install your Dream Daughters as the final touch.

>>Look up a Daughter you’re curious about, just to see how the Orrery works.

>>…Just out of curiosity, bring the Void Orrery and Silver Key together, to see what happens.

>>Let Rath work on the shells a little longer, and go speak with (Write-In).

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next three hours. In addition, I’m gunning to have the level-up vote open tonight at 7:00 or 8:00PM, Eastern time. Let me know if that works for everyone, and I hope you’re having a good day.)
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>>4170540
Considering that a majority of us may be under stay-at-home orders, this is fine with me.

Also, I would like your input on this custom ammunition that I recently designed.
>Kidney Stone Shells (Customized Ammunition): The seed of a stone whose bones blossom into a flowery work of unlimited blades. This custom bullet shaped like a flowerbud behaves similarly to the Ravenous Parabellum bullet Shu's known to use. Embedding itself in its target and dealing incredible damage the longer it remains before bursting into an explosion of piercing and cutting damage. However, its namesake reveals a more terrible purpose to its design. Unlike the Parabellum bullet which leaves a hollow cavity that the target could simply heal from, the Kidney stone seed shell fills that void by rapidly growing into a stone flower of spears and blades that disrupts implanted relic augmentations and imposes a heavy blood tax on abilities that are fulled by the host's HP pool by a 20% total increase of its original cost. Heavy is the weight of such a beautiful stone flower, all will come know its terrible price.

>>4170539
>…Just out of curiosity, bring the Void Orrery and Silver Key together, to see what happens.
TIME SEE WHAT THIS DOES.

>Ask Rath to craft 5 Kidney Stone Shells (custom ammunition) as part of preparation.
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>>4170539
>while she might consider it sacrilege, hand Tinker the Artisenal Appetites and have her look over the anti-relic Abilities you plan to consume, so she can give you any insight into them, their interactions with your current power-sets, and anything else of note she may be able to help with. assuming the idea alone doesn't make her want to vomit in her gas mask.
>Help Rath finish the Spiritus Shells, then install your Dream Daughters as the final touch.

im curious if Tinker Tailors expertise cant help us here, and feel like letting our DDs get used to their bodies and relx in the real could help, aswell as would help with planning once we get to it to let them be around.

>>4170547
as for the Void Orrey and Silver key, lets not test that out just yet. that sounds like something that could end up being a massive rabbit hole, something best left for when we have more free time and less over our heads, so we can explore it and anything dealing with it to its fullest, over now when time IS limited and could be cut short depending on how things go.
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>>4170550
see>>4170551

i really really do not want to do something like that right now, at all. that just does not sound like at all the type of thing we need to be digging into, especially right before something we need to be fully focused on. we already know that could be connected to some pretty important and hefty stuff, and i do not want to delve into that at all right now considering the circumstances.
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>>4170539
>you feel something in your right dress pocket practically jump, the Silver Key reacting curiously to the Relic that’s been returned to you
Well, I guess that's a pretty strong hint that it is Crucible Maker tech. Gonna be interesting to see what that does once we have the time. Just the map and tracking is amazing, though, I wish we had this a long time ago. Can we cross-reference our Waypoint data with it? Would be neat to know the actual positions of the places we've got coordinates for but haven't been to yet.

>>Help Rath finish the Spiritus Shells, then install your Dream Daughters as the final touch.

>>4170540
Works fine for me. And my day's alright, I suppose. How's yours been?
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>>4170539
>"Lookign good Rath one second though........ I will be right with you"
>while she might consider it sacrilege, hand Tinker the Arbiters Appetites and have her look over the anti-relic Abilities you plan to consume. Assuming she is okay with that
>Help Rath finish the Spiritus Shells, then install your Dream Daughters as the final touch.


>>4170556
Yeah yeah i had changed my mind shortly after posting my first vote. This is probably a massive Rabbithole and could quite possibly lead to Shu passing out or experiencing a reset or something

>>4170540
That is fine with me.... I will need a lot of sugar to stay productive however.
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>>4170540
8-9 EST would work better for me, but yeah i can be there for sure.

as for my day. not bad. need to grab lunch and do some shopping, but i mean all things considered unless the store is even worse than before, is going and wont be bad.

>>4170557
to be fair, the fact it mapped out all the crucibles and was able to go beyond just ours was pretty good indicator of that. and yeah, gonna be interesting actually being able to, well, map things out.

does though feel a bit like what we DIDNT in part want to do with FuzzzBuzzes and such though, aka, become big brother tracking everyone and everything.

>>4170547
>custom round
its alright, not at all bad mind you. but i think it has similar issues as stated about past ideas where it feels like it just overlaps and takes the wind out of, well, the parabellums sails too much.
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>>4170557
>>4170550
Any inputs on the custom bullet I made? I plan to use it on West Alpha. If it gets the green light of approval, I'll put down an order of 6 of those bullets. One for each limb on West Alpha.

>>4170551
That's rather insightful of you for asking Tailor's opinions on the Relic based abilities with Arbiter's Appetites. I could go with that.
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>>4170547
The bullet is interesting. Could be of limited use against Alpha. Though having a couple of them for backup might be useful
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oh, also, ill be waiting to update Novembers sheet til after the level up, that way i can just lump it all in with Ver.4, if thats alright with everyone.

>>4170565
>>4170561
honestly im unsure if its worth it on Alpha. it both may not work correctly on her nor be as effective due to her metal frame nature.

oh, i did misread it and missed the anti-relic part though. but again, its a sub-dermal type round and effect on someone who simply might not have something that properly counts as that anymore.
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>>4170561
>to be fair, the fact it mapped out all the crucibles and was able to go beyond just ours was pretty good indicator of that. and yeah, gonna be interesting actually being able to, well, map things out.
Oh, sure, but there was the possibility that someone else who had encountered the Crucibles made it. But if it's reacting to a Relic that the weird void god we met called "one of our toys", then it's probably their work, too.

>does though feel a bit like what we DIDNT in part want to do with FuzzzBuzzes and such though, aka, become big brother tracking everyone and everything.
We'll just have to use it responsibly and only get broad-scope location metadata on anyone who's not an enemy. We can spy on foes, but anyone we have a friendly or even neutral relationship with we'll only check on them when we want to meet with them and can't get in touch, so we look up where they are and head to that general area.

>>4170565
>Any inputs on the custom bullet I made? I plan to use it on West Alpha. If it gets the green light of approval, I'll put down an order of 6 of those bullets. One for each limb on West Alpha.
It's a decent addition to any anti-Relic countermeasures we have to fight Alpha with, though depending on what the skills available to us are we might not need it. But hey, redundancy is good, better to have anti-Relic options and not need them than need them and not have them.
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>>4170571
definitely sounds good. No need to make more than one update to something like taht.
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>>4170561
>its alright, not at all bad mind you. but i think it has similar issues as stated about past ideas where it feels like it just overlaps and takes the wind out of, well, the parabellums sails too much.

I understand where you're getting at. It's a bullet that has similar functions to the innate ammunition that we're capable of using and there's bound to be heavy overlap no doubt about it. It would be a custom munition in our case because of our core class but it's also bound to be an innate bullet type for gunners of the Calcite Armorer variety.

But I think the same could be said from the other side of the fence if we played Shu as a Calcite armorer and me introducing a bullet like this.

Just think of this as us adopting a part of Magpie's MO, make a bullet for every occasion.

>>4170572
>>4170568
Have we ever thought of using it to run a search on West Alpha? The Void orrey is basically now the ultimate scrying orb with even better tracking than Orwell's Panopticon.
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>>4170571
I think as stated it should work on a full-conversion cyborg, but at a penalty. Wedging into the target's body and pushing bits apart would still mess up a cyberbody like Alpha's, but because there isn't a weak point of connection between flesh and machine it wouldn't be able to disrupt things as much.

>>4170578
>Have we ever thought of using it to run a search on West Alpha? The Void orrey is basically now the ultimate scrying orb with even better tracking than Orwell's Panopticon.
It's definitely going to be useful when we're tracking her down for a confrontation.
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>>4170578
we can do that just before we search her out to see her initial status and then hit her where it hurts most. Also maybe it can reveal hidden weaknesses not even the Skintalkers could get access to.
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>>4170578
>>4170581
for the bullet, im holding out full judgment and voting making it til we see the Contenders upgrades at the very least. for all we know a loophole or work around could make it irrelevant, or give us a better way to do it. i mean, possibly unlikely, but still.

>>4170578
well, we already know what West Alpha is doing and have eyes on her. would let Orwell focus on some other things, but i dont think she WANTS to. on top of the fact she can do it continuously and thats basically her job, saving us from having someone staring at the Orrey for the next while.

at the moment at least, no reason to do that. maybe double check like right before like others are saying, so we can get a better layout over the semi-limited Orwell seems to possibly have, but not really useful at the exact moment.

plus, Orwell might get upset an orb is replacing her.
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>>4170578
i will say it feels like it should focus entirely on being anti-relic, over overlapping functions with the Parabellum.
that, or as drawback/contingency move, make it a cost upgrade to pre-made Parabellum rounds only able to be done at a forge or something.
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>>4170540
Oh shit, BHOP. the lightning jaw was in Hollys old shell. That get destroyed it what? Tinker Tailor have it to repair or something?

Also linking >>4169439
Again just cause i can and Marco hasn't been seen in a bit.
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>>4170574
>>4170572
>>4170571
A thought occurred to me.
Just like how we tagged Holly with a Dominus bloodline and safely extracted her before her shell was destroyed by Magpie's Satellite laser, We should attach a Subversive Recursive Dominus Plateling (a Recursive Plateling with the subversive augmentation active with the Dominus Bloodline Modifier) onto each Spirit shell to act as Emergency life-lines for our Dream Daughter Pilots.

>>4170591
Thanks for you input. I'll go revise the bullet's design and see what I can come up with. Any thoughts on the bullet's abilities to impose a blood tax on the host (basically it increases the cost of any ability that requires HP to use)? I thought it would be in line with the kidney stone thing where passing the kidney stone is really painful.
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>>4170595
(The Lighting Jaw was retrieved, so it's fine.)

>>4170595
(Ah, sorry for missing this earlier - in the downtime post-CONSUME vote, he'll be making an appearance, no worries.)
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>>4170596
>We should attach a Subversive Recursive Dominus Plateling (a Recursive Plateling with the subversive augmentation active with the Dominus Bloodline Modifier) onto each Spirit shell to act as Emergency life-lines for our Dream Daughter Pilots.
It would be a Succling, actually, those are what allow us to connect Dominus Bloodlines without line of sight. Our biggest problem is that we've only got the two Bloodlines that we can make at a time. We can swap them fast, but we'll have to be quick on the draw if one of the Shells goes into Death's Door.

>Any thoughts on the bullet's abilities to impose a blood tax on the host (basically it increases the cost of any ability that requires HP to use)? I thought it would be in line with the kidney stone thing where passing the kidney stone is really painful.
Feels like it's kind of distracting from the anti-Relic function of the bullet. Maybe if it only affected Relic powers that cost Health, like Sui Tormentis and the like.
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>>4170596
I don't think that allows for extra Dominous, so wouldn't really help.

>Bullet
Its alright, but doubling up on too many things i think for one round type.

>>4170598
Ah, good on the relic and neat on marco too.
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>>4170539
>>4170547
Amending my vote

>while she might consider it sacrilege, hand Tinker the Arbiter's Appetite Relic and have her look over the anti-relic Abilities you plan to consume, so she can give you any insight into them, their interactions with your current power-sets, and anything else of note she may be able to help with. assuming the idea alone doesn't make her want to vomit in her gas mask.

>Help Rath finish the Spiritus Shells, then install your Dream Daughters as the final touch.
>Spawn Subversive Recursive Succ-Platelings and attach one onto each Spirit shell to act as Emergency life-lines for our Dream Daughter Pilots.

>Make small talk with Rath, you haven't actually had a one on one talk with her at all for a long time.
>"So how are things going with you Rath?"
>"Any thoughts about all of this West Alpha mess?"
>"Got any personal plans you think you'd like to share?"
>"I don't want to impose anything upon you, I just want to hear about your honest thoughts unfiltered."
>"You know...during that fight with Magpie, I saw something that might give you ideas. Magpie had crippled Ace and I thought that Jackie would simply stabilize her and leave her be. But you know what she did instead? She basically picked up Ace and fused with her, turning Ace into Power Armor and keeping the downed daughter safe while stabilizing her at the same time! I didn't even know they managed to develop a Dual Technique like that!"
>simply watch as Rath just slowly turns her head to stare at you the gears in her head starting to rev up.
>"So what if you and Heather took a page out of their playbook?"

A note to BHOP: Tryphphilic Hive is missing the entry file of the Rook Class Swarmling.
This is a bamboozled post.
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Speaking of Spirit Shells, what happens if we had multiple types of swarmling? We're almost certainly going to junk Magpie's Core for stats, but suppose we kept it. Spirit Shells get all the traits and upgrades afforded to our swarmlings, so would keeping the Core and having Magpie's crow swarmlings make our Shells start taking on corvid traits?
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>>4170653
Probably. Though as long as that Core is still pretty weak(especially considering the original power holder of the Spiritus was insect based as well) it would probably stay pretty weak in that part.
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>>4170661
>>4170653
>>4170625
>>4170595

Revised the Kidney Stone Shell.
>Kidney Stone Shells V.2 (Customized Ammunition): The seed of a stone whose bones blossom into a flowery work of unlimited blades. A bullet in the shape of a stone flower seed that bypasses any piercing resistance when embedding itself into its target. Unlike the other munitions forged, this bullet does not damage its host nor does it deal damage over time. Instead, it feeds itself upon the blood its host. Rapidly growing into a stone flower of spears and blades that disrupts implanted relic augmentations and imposes a heavy blood tax on Relics and abilities that are fueled by the host's HP pool by a growing 10/15/20/25% total increase of its original cost for each round it remains in its host. Heavy is the weight of such a beautiful stone flower, and in their attempts to pass on the burden, all will come know its terrible price.
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>>4170637
>>4170539
eh, im against bringing up the Ace thing, basically mostly due to the fact im against that idea in the first place.

>>4170653
im still highly of the opinion on not taking anymore levelables without replacing something to do so, temporary anti-relic abilities being the temporary exemption, of course.
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>>4170669
>eh, im against bringing up the Ace thing, basically mostly due to the fact im against that idea in the first place.
Yeah, we should probably leave that out. I don't think it would even work for Rath and November, even if it was something we wanted to do.

>im still highly of the opinion on not taking anymore levelables without replacing something to do so, temporary anti-relic abilities being the temporary exemption, of course.
Oh, I am too, I'm just wondering for curiosity's sake. Crow-bugs sound interesting from an aesthetic standpoint.
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>>4170637
>>4170539
>while she might consider it sacrilege, hand Tinker the Arbiter's Appetite Relic and have her look over the anti-relic Abilities you plan to consume, so she can give you any insight into them, their interactions with your current power-sets, and anything else of note she may be able to help with. assuming the idea alone doesn't make her want to vomit in her gas mask.

>Help Rath finish the Spiritus Shells, then install your Dream Daughters as the final touch.
>Spawn Subversive Recursive Succ-Platelings and attach one onto each Spirit shell to act as Emergency life-lines for our Dream Daughter Pilots.

>Make small talk with Rath, you haven't actually had a one on one talk with her at all for a long time.
>"So how are things going with you Rath?"
>"Any thoughts about all of this West Alpha mess?"
>"Got any personal plans you think you'd like to share?"
>"I don't want to impose anything upon you, I just want to hear about your honest thoughts unfiltered."

Amending my vote again.

>>4170611
>Our biggest problem is that we've only got the two Bloodlines that we can make at a time. We can swap them fast, but we'll have to be quick on the draw if one of the Shells goes into Death's Door.
Well, we could have gotten more if we invested more levels into Exsanguinating Leash and Gina's Neuromancy instead of hybridizing them immediately at level 5.
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>>4170681
>Well, we could have gotten more if we invested more levels into Exsanguinating Leash and Gina's Neuromancy instead of hybridizing them immediately at level 5.
Possibly. Dominus Bloodline has been very useful for us, though, so I don't regret it. And resolving to assemble them at level ten would just mean another ten levels we'd be missing from somewhere else to make the hybrid.
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>>4170667
much better. still feels like its doubling up on things a bit, but i think alot of that feeling is also just how out of the blue and unrelated the two are, but id still argue that does matter.

>>4170679
I mean, like i said, i withhold lot of opinions on that til i see the things. unlikely as it is, maybe it IS worth replacing something on Shu with it. again, almost certainly not, but not impossible either.

...you know, an option we do have is, we could take something and just keep it in the Goregrowth Box until we're ready to use it as hybrid material, such as something like Magpies core. wait til Shus Core is maxxed and can be hybridized with anything at a lower rung, then pop in and make crow-bugs.

not saying we do or that would be the best option, just an example of another way to use the Goregrowth box without it impeding upon using things we want to use immediately.

>>4170681
possibly, but we also dont know that for sure, nor how many or how soon. it could easily be the wait just for more would not of been worth not having the Dominus.
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>>4170690
Hmm....I think I just had a stroke of inspiration. Let me revise the bullet one more time in order to make it in line with the weaponization of "Pain and problems when passing a kidney stone" theme.
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>>4170667
>Kidney Stone Shell V.3: The seed of a stone whose bones blossom into a flowery work of unlimited blades. A bullet in the shape of a stone flower seed that bypasses any piercing resistance when embedding itself into its target. Unlike the other munitions forged, this bullet does not damage its host nor does it deal damage over time. Instead it rapidly grows into a large and heavy stone flower over time that places a growing restriction upon it's host for each round that passes. The effect is shown as follows:
>After one round, The Host's most expensive innate ability becomes restricted from use, overriding the restriction requires a paying a tax equal to 5% of the ability's original cost.
>After two rounds, The Host's second most expensive innate ability also becomes restricted from use, the same restrictions apply.
>After three rounds, the stone flower matures. The Host's three most expensive abilities and a single equipped Relic are now restricted by the bullet's heavy burden from use unless the tax is paid, and the tax is increased to 10% of the original price of any restricted ability.
>Any new Kidney Stone Shells after the first one will place their burdensome tax on the next most expensive ability that hasn't been restricted by a Kidney Stone Shell.
>Heavy is the weight of such a beautiful stone flower, and in their attempts to pass on the burden, all will come know its terrible price.

>>4170690
>>4170611
Revised the Kidney Stone Shell bullet. This is version 3. It's taken a sharp swerve from the previous design. It's more to restrict the use of West Alpha's big ticket abilities and tax her ability to create relics by putting a price that West Alpha HAS to pay in order to use them.

Thoughts?
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>>4170725
i mean, its useful yes, though still feels like the anti-relic part gets tacked on.

it also actually is much less useful against Alpha as she uses very few actual abilities. most of her stuff seems to come from permanent relics and artifacts. it would be useful against normal daughters, but not really her. only getting some anti-relic usage out of it on round three is also way too long a wait time for use on someone whos main focus is using relics.
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>>4170725
I think this is actually less useful against Alpha. For one thing, Alpha doesn't appear to spend anything on crafting Relics unless she's doing one-off boosters. She doesn't actually have a Bio pool, she just has some abstracted ability to craft Relics. For another, Alpha doesn't have many abilities outside the Relic-crafting that we know of (she's probably got some super-attack that she's never been forced to use before), just the Generating Halo's rocket thrust and a beam cannon in her chest.
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>>4170734
and lets not forget the beam could easily be related to the super forge core, which doesn't count as relic or ability.
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>>4170739
>>4170734
I did realize that as I was designing it.

I was hoping that West Alpha's Relic Creation would be count as one of her more Expensive abilities in terms of HP cost whenever she flash forges one with her HP pool where The kidney stone shell would then put a tax on it. making her spend more to create one and not get the full refund due to the tax imposed by the Kidney stone upon the relic's creation.
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>>4170777
thats a pretty big 'if' and would not at all be surprised if all of that is wrapped up in the artifact/relic itself, and is not at all effected by ability based negations and the like.
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>>4170777
As far as we know Alpha only spends Health on crafting when making one-off booster Relics, which is probably a function of the Relics themselves. For regular Relics she appears to have a pool of dedicated pre-treated Biomass that she can recycle endlessly. That was Mara's strategy in her fight against Alpha, sabotage Relics with bombs so that when Alpha consumed them for recycling they'd harm her. If the anti-Relic abilities we have to eat can't do something like that, we should make some sapping charges to plant on Alpha's weapons.
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>>4170784
>>4170791
Well i hope that the abilites we can get will devour the Biomass that is pretreated giving her less and less she can recycle if she decides to recycle. giving her less options as the fight progresses.

Even if we cant make them hurt her we can try and run her dry of her most powerful stuff. Hopefully quickly
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>>4170784
>>4170791
>>4170807

Grrr....I was hoping that I could do SOMETHING with the bullet. KSS V.3's very good in it's design and other purpose of restricting a normal enemy's big ticket ability, but it doesn't fulfill the original purpose which is disabling Relics. At the same time I don't want to introduce a munition THAT powerful.

Here's the fourth iteration.

>Kidney Stone Shell V.4: The seed of a stone whose bones blossom into a flowery work of unlimited blades. A bullet in the shape of a stone flower seed that bypasses any piercing resistance when embedding itself into its target. Unlike the other munitions forged, this bullet does not damage its host nor does it deal damage over time. Instead it rapidly grows into a large and heavy stone flower over time that places a growing restriction upon it's host for each round that passes. The effect is shown as follows:
>After one round, a single Relic slot becomes restricted from use, overriding the restriction requires a paying a tax equal to 10% of the Relic ability's original cost.
>After two rounds, a second Relic slot also becomes restricted from use, the same restrictions apply.
>After three rounds, the stone flower matures. Three of the Host's Relic slots are now permalocked and disabled for the duration of combat until the Stone flower is removed.
>Any new Kidney Stone Shells after the first one will place their burdensome tax on the any Relics that haven't been restricted by a Kidney Stone Shell.
>Heavy is the weight of such a beautiful stone flower, and in their attempts to pass on the burden, all will come know its terrible price.
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>>4170807
we;ll see
for all we know one of the abilities turns any relic we physically touch into an allied snake variant of said relic for all the info we have on them.

>>4170808
er, i think i get what you might mean, but the wording there i do think needs to be changed at least. normal daughters dont have relic slots, and as far as we are aware West Alpha does not work off that model either. its a unique trait to Novembers specific frame, as far as we are aware.
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>>4170808
Do we have something like Relic Slots? I know November has them but would the Relics she use necessarily be linked to slots?

God to know what kind of things we will need ot craft we will probably have to spy on WAlpha and then make the relics to speifically counter what she can do.

maybe make some bullets of 'West Alpha slaying' dealing tons of extra damage against her and overriding all abilites that would grant her immunity against such attacks but are expensive and only work on her......... I know a DND concept but i think something worth considering
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Fuck, how is Shu still alive
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>>4170824
Oh hey. How are you? I was getting kinda worried since you didnt show the last few veins.

Were you sick?
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>>4170824
Oh Hi there. Where have you been?
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>>4170824
im still curious who this is. no way they dont actually enjoy the quest to keep this up, but it also feels utterly weird for someone to otherwise keep that joke alive unless there was another reason. still hedging bets its someone BHOP knows to some level myself.
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>>4170841
that is a good question but probably not one anyone can answer but that anon themselves.

My bet. His wive...... This is her way of fulfilling her guilty pleasure
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(Gentlemen, I'll likely post here within the next hour or so, as work's kept me busy today. Thank you for your patience, and take care.)

>>4170824
(Hello there, good to see you're alright. I was wondering where you were.)

>>4170841
>>4170856
(It's not her, I confirmed.)
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>>4170860
its no problem. hope works not eating you down too hard.
and i didn't think it was your wife. someone you know sure, but i feel like your wife would simply be able to add more flair to it, if only because she would know you too well.
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>>4170860
>(It's not her, I confirmed.)
Ah alright then worth a shot then. The pure simplicity of it all would have been quite nice

Hope they aren't driving you into the ground at work
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>>4170539

“I know you might think it’s sacrilege, but would you be willing to use this to check out some of the Relic-based countermeasures Gina and the others were able to cook up?” You ask, extending the Arbiter’s Appetite to Tinker Tailor, hesitating when she shakes her head, tapping her goggles.

“Noneed,Icanseeanycounterstomycurrentabilitiesautomatically. MyscannerslitupthesecondIlaideyesonthepileofbiomassoutside.” She informs you, jerking a thumb towards the half-open door as a murmur of voices filters in from just beyond its threshold. “You’vegottwoskilltreesandoneaugmentation. Theskillstreesarenastyones; onecanmakenewly-generatedRelicsandConstructscomeoutstillbornandtheotherallowstheusertostealafoe’sheldRelicsandusethematnocostforafewsecondsbeforethey’rereturnedtotheowner.”

“Neat…and the Augment?” You add.

“ThatonereducesthedamagesustainedfromsuccessiveRelic-originatingattacksfromasingleRelic-user,quicklyreducingtheirdamagetonothingifthey’remainlyusingattacks.” She explains, shuddering in place before adding; “I’mgladI’veneverhadtofaceanythingwiththat.I’dbeSOL.”

Thanking the quirky Artisan for her time, you turn your attentions to Rath as November politely excuses herself, exiting the room to relax with the others that are gathered outside, granting you a moment alone with her…or as alone as you’re going to get with Tailor busily tinkering away in the corner of the simple room.

"So how are things going with you, Rath?" You ask, putting some finishing touches on the quartet of Spiritus Shells as she takes a reprieve from her swift work. "Any thoughts about all of this West Alpha mess? I don't want to impose anything upon you, I just want to hear about your honest thoughts unfiltered."

"Shit man, just...I want her dead just as much as Prime, at this point." Comes her weary reply as she lies down on the floor beside you, watching you tweak the shells' chitinous faces to be a bit closer to the genuine articles. "I dunno, I...I wanna get to the Cord. I wanna END all this so bad that my palms are gettin' itchy, if that makes sense?"

"Ha, yeah. It really does." You chuckle weakly, and Rath returns a little half-smile that crinkles the her freckled cheeks. "Got any personal plans you think you'd like to share?"

"What, for like...after we win?" She asks, and you just leave it ambiguous with a slight shrug. "Fuck...haven't really thought of it. It's not so much that I got plans, and more like...I can tell how much it's weighing on everybody right now. I'd love to keep fighting, keep getting stronger and everything, but for their sake? Hell, for yours? I just want to break this whole goddamn thing so it can't hurt anybody anymore...everything after that's just gravy."

(Continued)
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>>4171004

"I know I'm not as perceptive as Dorian or Jules, and I don't have the...mind-meldy thing like you and Gina have, but I can tell that the fighting is a lot. For everybody." The red-head continues, turning her gaze to the ceiling as you pause your work, content to allow the girl beside you to speak freely for the first time in a while. "Aunt Heather's back in the fight, and she sure as shit doesn't deserve that. Dorian and Julia deserve to have a fuckin' date that isn't interrupted by the monster of the week, or day, or hour, or what-the-fuck-ever."

"And Francine!" Rath declares, throwing her hands towards the ceiling. "I was suspicious as all hell of her to start, and now that she's just tryin' to sort herself it's been nothing but Proxy drama for her. I mean, she's taking it like a champ, but it still ain't easy. Amara deserves a childhood that isn't pumping out clones and studying how to kill from a goddamn space ninja...or maybe she does, fuck it. Maybe that's her jam. Maybe she hasn't gotten the chance to figure out what she is and what she isn't, 'cause the Crucible hasn't given her a choice in the matter. It's just thrown us all into the grindhouse, and fuck whatever we want, right? I mean, you and Gina..."

"...me and Gina?" You prompt when Rath trails off.

"I 'unno, dude. You...you love each other. It's awesome, and...but I hate that you two can't get a fucking break."

"Ha, I think we're making due." You laugh, and Rath's brow furrows.

"None of us should have to just 'make due'." Rath retorts angrily. "Fuck that noise! We're gonna kick Alpha's ass, kick West's ass, kick the Cord's ass, and whoever elses' ass until we get what we're due, and fuck 'making due'. We deserve a happy ending for all the shit we've been through."

"What's yours look like?"

"Huh?" The younger girl asks, cocking one eyebrow at you as you lean back on your palms, holding off a moment on activating the Spiritus shells on account of the conversation.

"Your happy ending." You clarify. "You've talked about me, Gina, Julia, and everyone else, but you haven't mentioned yourself. So? What's due to you, once we finish this thing?"

"Ha, uh...haven't really thought about that, if I'm bein' honest." Comes her sheepish reply. "I guess...hanging out with everybody, seein' what we're all like when we're not in Battle Royale mode. Getting Aunt Heather's body back, if that's a thing that can happen. Ha, maybe spending time with you an' GG, if you don't mind a third wheel."

"We'd make a bitchin' tricycle." You counter, forcing a bark of laughter out of the girl beside you before she goes quiet, mulling over your question from earlier. Just watching her for a moment, you wonder what else she'd be willing to share, in this simple, vulnerable moment of privacy.

>>Ask about what sort of world she'd like to see, after all this.

>>Ask about the other Crucibles.

>>Ask her again about what she really wants.

>>Ask about Lara.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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>>4171004
huh, neat. the stillborn and damage reduction both sound superb, but the relic stealing one honestly doesn't sound very useful at all.

>>4171010
>Ask about what sort of world she'd like to see, after all this.

the Lara one feels too personal and asking her a repeat question feels a bit forced. and the other Crucible ones is... a bit weird honestly. i guess BHOP is trying to give us an excuse to use the Void Orrey, but i still dont think its a time for that, and without it that question honestly feels out of place.
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open until 7:00PM, Eastern time, at which point the CONSUME vote will drop alongside a welcome reunion, per the dice rolls. Now, what I'll likely do is pause posting for the afternoon tomorrow to allow myself ample time to complete the level-up flavor text and compilation, with posting to resume some time in the early evening, as we're working at half our normal headcount at work due to state law. It's part of why things have been so hectic these past few weeks, and I once again thank you all for having patience with my chaotic schedule. Let me know if that works for you, and stay safe.)

(Bamboozled to re-add my trip.)
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>>4171028
(Ah, the Crucibles question had more text that I ended up having to cut for space. It was essentially asking that if she wants everyone to have a happy ending, then since there will still be other Crucibles out there then how she feels about a threat still swimming about in space. It didn't really have anything to do with the Void Orrery, at least not how I intended.)
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>>4171010
>>Ask about what sort of world she'd like to see, after all this. And what she thinks her place will be afterwards in the new World
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>>4171031
oof, that sounds pretty bad. i guess i dont know your job, but it sounds pretty computer oriented so im surprised they havent just made you all work from home, but i guess that may not be possible.

i suppose that works. technically a bit earlier than id like, but more for just personal reasons than anything i cant bend to. plus, i suppose compared to usual starting at 6 EST means we might all actually get to bed at a reasonable time, though the later starting time also means that wouldn't be as big an issue as usual... but hey, that just means more time to recover from it too, so alls good.

>>4171037
oh, ok. yeah if we're just asking her her opinion on the other ongoing Crucibles and possibly what to do about them, that does change things.

>>4171028
>>4171010
ill add;
>Ask about the other Crucibles.
aswell. with that explanation its both safe to ask and actually a very good question to bring up. we Anons have mildly talked about it, but more in a passing memey sense. though to be fair we also never knew just how bad it was out there for a good while.

have a feeling we're not planing to go down the 'shut down all crucibles' route, but i also dont trust that route either and what that might actually mean on said route.
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>>4171010
>Ask her again about what she really wants.
Fuck it, I'm going for the Shu/Gina/Rath OT3. Plus Shu's earned her trust and companionship, so I want to show her that she can let down her guard for Shu and share her most intimate desires with complete support.
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>>4171069
>Fuck it, I'm going for the Shu/Gina/Rath OT3
please dont, i dont need that level of joy sapped from my enjoyment of this quest...
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>>4171076
It would be doing the opposite and adding joy for me. So I'm sorry, but no.

They're all really good together.
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>>4171090
i disagree with that heavily, they really arent, especially with how people are pushing it. its already annoying enough how much people harp on those elements as it is.

but fine, noted. i ask you stop using Carter then please.
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>>4171031
You're considered essential enough that they haven't sent you home, too? My condolences, BHOP. Get some rest in when and where you can, friend.
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>>4171106
I... never used Carter? For anything?

Are you confusing me for someone else?
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>>4171116
oh, grah.
im confusing your username with another due to color similarity and my contact for some reason being dry as hell today.
figures someone with only three posts would appear only to push shipping nonsense.
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>>4171121
>>4171106
I had a write-in ready and such for this vote about asking Rath what she really wants. But because you're that... defensive about things Then, let me make this clear.

This write-in is more about Giving Rath the opportunity to be selfish for just once in her life in order to combat the mental corruption that her Vitruvian core imposes on her mind instead of a Segway for a 3-some.

Because the corruption from Tensile Strands as a vitruvian ability feels like it's about stretching yourself and being so selfless to the point that it almost feels like a Martyrdom complex. And we really don't want Rath to go down like that. Angry and hotheaded to the point where she'll constantly sacrifice her life and her future for her family's sake, which was the same struggle and trauma Rath suffered when she was a child. If we don't address this issue, we'll end up letting Rath make the same mistakes that led to her previous family's ruin.


>>4171010
>"As the leader of this family, I constantly have to weigh my decisions, between about what's best for us, what's best for the world, and what I want for myself. Every time we go out there and fight I have to balance the lives of everyone in my hands when I send out orders. And I always try my best to take care of everyone in the downtime."
>"But at times I feel like I've been stretched thin. So many spinning plates to juggle. Each of them threatening to fall off."
>"You're Courageous, you're passionate, you can obliterate a mountain with a punch, and you've been so selfless. Putting yourself constantly on the frontlines for our sake."
>"You've done so much for everyone, for your friends, for your family, just constantly stretching yourself to the limit and keep everyone safe and happy."
>"Sometimes I get the feeling that you've been stretching yourself too thin. And it scares me at times. You never told us if you wanted anything."
>"Sometimes...being selfless can be a bad thing."
>"Rath, is there anything you yourself would want? Something for yourself?"
>"I'm asking you to be selfish for once. It's okay you can't think of anything at the moment. Just think about it. But when you do think of something..."
>"Let me know what Rachel Neeson wants for herself."
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>>4171010
>>4171155
That looks pretty good. Supporting.

I've unfortunately been burned out on making the long write-ins that this quest thrives on some time ago. Wish I could find that energy again.
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>>4171155
And I now realized that there are things on that write-in that do not fit what I'm trying to convey to Rath.

Let me go take a 30 minute walk and revise this when I get back.
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>>4171155
i guess that works, not perfect but its not bad.
honestly id not have really thought you meant that without the first warning, possibly even by itself, but especially just with the actual explanation about your worries about her corruption, that alone is enough context.

as for said corruption, mind you yours isnt stepping over the line or anything, but more it brings up the topic. any more direct or even heavy indirect work on it i still think will require us to actually understand corruption a bit better, Raths especially. or well, Vitruvian i guess, but technically same thing more or less.

still also think we need to at least talk to November about it. i dont really think talking to her actual, real family about our concerns over a friend is not trusting Rath or going over her head, especially when you take into account on some level Corruption is something you actually cant fight against. i mean, Vitruvian to some level might be, but it is still an unnatural force to some level poking at you constantly. changes things a bit i think, over if it was fully just her natural emotional state we were not trusting.

>>4171174
personally i just like to save it for when it feels like it matters more, aswell as i just like seeing what BHOP himself comes up with, which i feel at times doesn't get to happen as much. not as much recently, but there have been times when its felt like our long write-ups have been excessive and unnecessary, myself included a bit.

>>4171180
thats fine i guess. personally i dont think we need to make this conversation at all even slightly heavy or pressing. her corruption actually isnt that far along and while there may be issues, i dont think they have actually shown up in any way that seems too strong to need to press.

that, and trying to go too heavy right before all this when we're trying to let people relax seems.... ill timed.
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>>4171194
is there anything you think I could get away with cutting out while still delivering the message?

As for Carter's situation in Cradleton... the rest of the chapters aren't finished yet, but somehow the Epilogue chapter is almost done. After that it's basically filling in what happened between chapter 2 and the epilogue, although the epilogue came out steamier than I expected. I hope you don't mind a bit of character development for Carter due my interpretation of Carter's backstory and abilities, I had to apply certain liberties while writing certain sections out. However, I did make sure to do my best to keep it close to what you wrote on Carter's character sheet. He will still be the same sheepish boy who tries to oversell his masculinity with a group of spiders as his friends in the end, but he'll have an experience that could be used as a springboard for future adventures. When I pass the baton back to you.
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>>4171244
honestly i dont think anything needs to be per say, over maybe cut down, if that makes sense. like, maybe some of the lines go on a bit much for a conversation not meant to be heavy? mind you, not saying it has to be a causal conversation at all, i agree and understand wanting to be a bit more in depth. only i guess im saying you can ask her the same thing you want without making it sound like she's given up and arm and leg over everything.

at worse it sounds like we're maybe a bit too worried over her and her response, especially given she was giving off a very chill and relaxed attitude, making it clear she wasn't really worried about it that much. again, doesn't mean we cant ask her about it more in depth or poke a bit at if shes just not even trying to think on it or something.

its not a bad write-up at all, nor am i against what you're trying to ask mind you, just yeah i think it could be shaved down a bit in tone and length, given the situation and context.

I will never understand how you could write the epilogue before the rest, but hey, if it works for you, it works and good job, considering the length you implied it to be getting to. and its fine, character development is more than fine but agreeable, so long as it feels like it flows and isnt re-writing the character. he can still grow and change a good amount though, im fine with that. also dont be afraid to ask any questions or explanations if you want or just feel you need them, though so long as its not twisting the point or whatnot of his backstory or other elements, im fine even with you expanding or adding to that or other elements of his character. powerset too, just like how i added the springboard ribs and mapmaking ability from his spiders.

speaking of, while im more than happy to write more of Carter, and probably will, id also like to say id be interested in sometime seeing your interpretation of him interacting with Luna. mind you, no pressure or anything like that. if it doesn't feel right or you're not up to something like that, etc, no problem, but while on the topic simply saying its something id be interested to see.
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>>4171010
>>Write-In
>"Seriously, though, Rath: You're amazing. You are one of the strongest people I know. Brave, passionate, caring...I don't know where I'd be now without you. I owe you so much."
>"Sometimes I worry that I don't tell you that enough. That I rely on that strength so much that I take it for granted. That I've given you the impression that other concerns are so important that we can't spare time for you."
>"That's wrong. It couldn't possibly be more wrong. I love you, Rath. Everyone in this team loves you. I want you to be happy, and I don't want you to feel like you've got to focus on everyone else's happiness instead of your own."
>"So whatever happy ending you decide on, tell me and I'll move heaven and earth to get you there. You deserve everything I can give you."
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>>4171358
>>4171155
>>4171010
while i kinda like the idea behind these, one i think is a bit too serious in the worry department, the other feels a bit too serious in the chipper/'id fucking die for you' department.

i support the message but write-in wise i feel like the seriousness for both needs to be toned down and shortened, so if they're used id only support them if that could be done.

so kinda vote-supporting them, but only if overhauled a good bit. think somewhere between them probably fits.
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"As the leader of this family, I constantly have to weigh my decisions, between about what's best for us, what's best for the world, and what I want for myself." You begin, lying down beside Rath as you stare up at the ceiling alongside her. "Every time we go out there and fight I have to balance the lives of everyone in my hands when I send out orders. And I always try my best to take care of everyone in the downtime."

"But at times I feel like I've been stretched thin, with so many spinning plates to juggle. Each of them threatening to fall off." You breathe with a sigh, turning your head as you meet Rath's glittering citrine eyes. "You're courageous. You're passionate, you can obliterate a mountain with a punch, and you've been so selfless. Putting yourself constantly on the front lines for our sake."

"Yeah, well...we all have. Every one of us." Rath shrugs, putting her hands behind her head. "I'm nothing special."

"You're selling yourself short, as usual. Look, Rath...you've done so much for everyone, for your friends, for your family, just constantly stretching yourself to the limit...too thin, actually." You insist as Rath averts her eyes from you and back to the ceiling. "It scares me, at times. You never told us if you wanted anything."

"I don't. Seriously." Rath says firmly, a defensive edge to her voice. "I do what I do 'cause I care about you, and GG, and Aunt Heather, and...everybody. I'm nothin' special, compared to 'yall."

"You're one of the strongest people I know. Brave, passionate, caring...I don't know where I'd be now without you. I owe you so much, so don't get all modest on me, 'kay?" You say, poking the other girl in the ribs to prompt a giggled protest. "Seriously, though - sometimes I worry that I don't tell you that enough. That I rely on your strength so much that I take it for granted. That I've given you the impression that other concerns are so important that we can't spare time for you."

Her eyes meet yours once more, and as her giggles subside, you see something shift in her eyes as she realizes just how serious you are, how much truth there is to your words.

"That's wrong. It couldn't possibly be more wrong. I love you, Rath. Everyone in this team loves you." You declare, seeing a tinge of white light start to shine in the red-head's cheeks. "I want you to be happy, and I don't want you to feel like you've got to focus on everyone else's happiness instead of your own. So whatever happy ending you decide on, tell me...and I'll move heaven and earth to get you there. You deserve everything I can give you, and that's a fact."

"Shu, I...t-thank you. That means a lot...seriously." She says finally, smiling weakly. "As for what I want, I...shit, man. I really don't think I know what I-"

The sudden clamor of voices from the main living area draws your attentions elsewhere, cutting Rath off mid-sentence as you note a familiar burst of positivity emanating across the empathic channel.

(Continued)
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"Heh...mind if I take a rain check on the sappiness?" Comes Rath's sheepish request as she props herself up on her elbows. "I...I do wanna talk, though. I'm startin' to think maybe voicing some of this stuff might...help, y'know?"

"I'd like that, Rath." You say, returning her smile with one of your own. "A lot."

Rath hops to her feet and promptly offers a hand that you gladly take, and by the time you both emerge from the room to see what the commotion's about, you're greeted to a sight for sore eyes.

Julia, dazzling in a finely-crafted leather jacket that's perfectly made for her skinless form, complete with a pair of dark jeans. Your family surrounds her, asking her a dozen questions all at once while mobbing her with a dozen matching hugs, with Dorian hanging back at the edge of the crowd with a small smirk on his face, the center of his affections now the center of attention in your temporary home. Julia's dark eyes catch yours and she smiles even wider, her dazzling grin even more stark against the black of her jacket and the scarlet of her bare flesh. The questions slowly subside as you approach, and Amara slides off of Julia's back as your prodigal hostess walks over to you, throwing her arms wide to accept the hug you happily gift her.

"I m-missed you, Shu." She says into your shoulder, holding you tight. "I know it wasn't long, but it f-felt like it."

"I missed you too, Julia. You look fantastic! How've the Hyenas been treating you?" You ask, holding her at arm's length as you admire the bold change of fashion.

"They're fantastic, and Laoc's c-coming along well. Everyone's so strong, and I'm so happy I was there to h-help." Comes her earnest answer. "The Hyenas are ready to help if you need them, thought it'd just be Ivey and maybe Reze...s-sorry, Razorback. She p-prefers Reze, but it'd just be a few, so that Laoc won't be left without d-defenses."

"That's perfect. I welcome anything they've got to offer." You say with a smile, staring into the other girl's dark, shining eyes. "I want a full recap, if you're up for it. I want to know how you've been getting along, what you've been doing, everything!"

Julia's about to reply, just before she pauses and glances over to the pile of biomass in the corner of the room. "T-tell you what...I know I'm famished, and I'm sure I'm n-not the only one. I want to catch up, but maybe that's b-best left for after we eat? You know how t-tired we get afterwards."

You're inclined to agree, and as you direct everyone towards the spoils of combat, you realize that despite the tumultuous emotions and events that went into the biomass that lies before you, there's a silver lining to it all...

...you're going to use it to do some good. Together, as one.

As a family, whole once more.

>>LEVEL-UP POINTS AVAILABLE: 36

LEVEL-UP LIST: https://pastebin.com/E9b6SCUs

>>KADATH: 2 Levels available for all eligible party members.

>>JULIA: 5 Unassigned Level-up points available.

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next sixteen hours, with posting to resume in approximately twenty-four, due to the additional time needed to type up what flavor text I can’t get to tonight and given how busy work's proving to be as of late. I’ll be available for the next few hours to address any questions you may have, and I do hope you have a good rest of your evening, one and all.)
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>>4171500
Right, so we can give everyone 5 points, with one spare, as im assuming we're including Julias as her extra five are there to catch her up to the missed one. personally im fine giving her the extra, both as a welcome back gift, and because using a thematic reason makes the decision easy.

with that though, how long everyone need/want? id say an hour, especially given how many points Julia has. also, anyone want to arbiter? id personally actually wish to not do it, but if no one else is up to it, om ok doing it.
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>>4171507
An hour should be plenty.

The extra point should go to Julia she needs it to stay up to date with us.

I dont want to arbiter either... I am guessing that at the end of this i will be the most tired person out of all of us just because of my timezone
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>>4171507
I'll take up arbitration. Although I might get interrupted by family and whatnot, so be prepared to take over.
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>>4171503
Thanks BHOP! Looking forward to the level up vote, have a great sleep!

>>4171507
In the last vote, everybody received 6 points each. So if we give everybody 5 points this time, then Julia would be best served by getting the extra point. That will bring her up from 5 points to 6, and she'll be breaking even.
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>>4171515
oh, well thats bad timing, but alight, sounds good.
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>>4171507
I'm just getting started making dinner, but it's just pasta so it should go fast. I'll be ready within an hour, probably.
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>>4171507
>>4171517
It's definitely going to be a doozy however. We have 8 daughters with their level ups to go through.

>>4171503
Although I am sort of confused as to Julia's situation. Are you saying that Julia has 5 extra points to play with as part of her catch-up/time away or is that her share?
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>>4171525
(She has five level-up points that only she may use, from her time with the Hyenas.)
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>>4171507
>>4171511
>>4171516
>>4171524

One hour sounds fine. Let's reconvene at 8:30 EST. starting now.
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>>4171527
yeah that works.

>>4171525
7 family members, due to November not being able to take levels, but yeah, so it will be.

11 points to Julia... whew.

it is jumping the guns slightly though, but i will go ahead and say honestly there not much here besides the two anti-relic abilities worth taking i personally feel.
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>>4171500
I think we should plan for what our party's going to be against Alpha, so the right members can get the anti-relic Abilities, even if we only have them for that fight and then recycle them with the Engine.

I think that Magpie's core should be made into stats. I'm against getting Psychotic Swarm though. She also had several useful Relic-based augments, if any party member can make good use of them. Militia Machination could be great for Shu and the Contender, for example.

Damn shame we can't get Eldritch Cancellation. Yet another downside of Magpie ending herself.
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>>4171531
gotta agree. i see one or two gems the rest is just stat fodder
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>>4171533
since we will be doing each character individually you can save your arguments for when we actually get to voting
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i will say as a forewarning i plan to put Muphys Mandate and Repetitions Resilience on every, albeit with at least Muphys being a very temporary measure on everyone.

normally id be very against this but i think this is contextually one of the only times being lenient on something like that makes a damn lotta sense.

also my god Julia is going to be hell.
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>>4171533
>Damn shame we can't get Eldritch Cancellation. Yet another downside of Magpie ending herself.
I don't think that's why we can't take it, actually. Some theorizing:

>Magpie's teleportation skill is called Eldridge Experiment.

>The U.S.S. Eldridge was a naval destroyer escort that according to popular myth (though confirmed as a hoax) was involved in a project called the Philadelphia Experiment, an attempt to render a ship invisible that went horribly wrong and instead teleported it to another dimension.

>Eldridge Experiment "skirts the line of what's natural to the Crucible and what is certainly not".

>The flavor text implies Mara and Magpie were deliberately hunting for this ability.

>Eldritch Cancellation's text says "that which was not given freely is not yours to take".

So, from this I conclude that Mara and Magpie traveled to another dimension. I'm going to guess it was the Crucible's extradimensional back-end, the many-angled spaces where it keeps the mechanisms that let us cheat conservation laws. Some attempt to break the system and end the Hunger by making the Crucible generate infinite food, maybe. And in the process, they wound up altering their status within the Crucible, how they relate to the extradimensional back-end, and that's what gave them Eldritch Cancellation. We can't take it because Mara and Magpie were never intended to have that ability, no Daughter was, it's the equivalent of glitching your way into accessing dummied-out content in a videogame.
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>>4171547
That is a very fair point i will take into consideration as well
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>>4171550
im iffy on the theory, though i will say it has merit.
but... er... in the end there you did kinda wrap back around to agreeing we cant take it.
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>>4171542
I'll unfortunately be likely asleep like always during those level up votes. That's why I'm putting some of my thoughts out here right now.
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>>4171558
Yes, because I didn't say that we could take it, but that I differed on my belief as to why we couldn't take it. It's not because Magpie deleted herself, it's because of weirdness to do with the ability itself.
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>>4171562
oh, pff. i misread again.
my bad.
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>>4171564
No worries.
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>>4171571
(Apologies, Gentlemen - please disregard my previous statement, as I allowed enough level-up points for the Barbers and the Crew to sample some of the defensive powers, with their totals taken out automatically. My sincerest apologies, it's been a long day.)
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>>4171573
Dont worry about it OP. Seems like the day took a lot out of you.

I was kinda thinking that even if they hadnt we could have asked them to have them trade in levels afterwards so they can at least get the resilience.... Its super useful in any instance not just WAlpha

And we would still get the full amount. That would have been of course if they had wanted to/agreed to it
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>>4171573
oh, whew.
had a long post and a very difficult decision there for a second.

i will still say IC id like to encourage them to take Muphys and Repetitions, even if just temporarily, on everyone.
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I may run a tad late despite my punctuality. There's chicken in the oven and for some godawful reason, the time it's done cooking coincides the time the voting session actually begins. So do forgive me if I'm at least five minutes late.
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also, kinda a shame Magpie streamlined her Core so much. because at level one, its kinda like with Calcite Armorers alot of times in that its no different than other Hive Mistress abilities, so we really have no view of what it might becomes at all.

not sure it would be worth it even if we could, especially given how many abilities everyone already has, but still.
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>>4171584
(I will say that it was, by far, her most powerful ability, as hinted at in the skill summary.)
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>>4171584
I am not sure if i want it to melt it down for stats or keep. We could certainly need the stats for Shu or we put it into the Goregrowth Box and then Hybridize it with Shus core to make Killer Beecrows.
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>>4171578
>Repititions Resilience

You know. that augment is gonna drag out our duel against Jack if both Shu and Jack honor the duel agreement.
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>>4171584
>>4171585
(You were referring to her Core, not the rifle, which my comment applied to. Bah.)
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>>4171588
>>4171568
>>4171527
oh right.
as i stated earlier, we could put Magpies Core into Goregrowth as a loophole to not eat up level slots but not lose.

worse case? later on we eat the extra levels and melt it down.
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>>4171588
On the one hand, Shu needs stats.

On the other hand, I REALLY want to see Shu have bees AND crows.
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>>4171591
oh.
well, doesn't change much. but thanks for the clarification. her rifle is good but i just cant think of anyone it would work on and is worth replacing on, while at least with her Core, a Hive Mistress ability is very easy to put into any playstyle.

but thanks for clarifying. you need some sleep BHOP, and i say that with the best intentions in mind.
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>>4171594
Your not the only one who want sto see that.... and the unholy abominations we can create with a Hybrid

>>4171592
So yeah probably the Goregrowth Box then.... I think i will write it down as such in my own vote tehn
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>>4171596
(Lord, I really do. I'll be around for the next hour or so, and then I'm off to bed.)
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>>4171601
Good Night OP.

Get the rest, you seem to really need it.

They were working you to the bone weren't they.
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>>4171599
im putting it under Shu as a special action, as while with the engine it doesnt matter for later, technically for the Goregrowth Box it does. also just simplifies things. plus, stats or keep later on, it probably will be on Shu.

also gets the decision out of the way sooner.

>>4171601
well i hope its a wonderful night when you get to it. cuddle up under alot of blankets with the wife and dream lovingly of eldritch lesbians tearing eachother apart.
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>>4171596
Hmm...
If anything else, Shu could still use the rifle. Just not for this encounter as West Alpha will prioritize attacking Shu. As for other eligible users, Amara could work, but she's too hyperactive for sniperwork. What about Francine? Her sentry gatling gun can be set to fire automatically if we invest enough points in it.
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>>4171601
Sleep well, BHOP.
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>>4171608
But we have Karma.....

Amara has her Artillery.... So yeah the only ones who are not in it for the close quarters are probably Francine... or maybe Gina though she is getting ever closer to a combat caster...
And they need to be far away to get the most out of it.... Not really our playstyle. We need to keep people relatively close by to issue commands and help each other out.

That ability is more suited to single player i am afraid
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>>4171608
well like i said, im not putting it on anyone unless we replace something else. and the Contender is just... everything Gun Shu needs. we can even make it a sniper coming up soon if we want, or later.

as for Francine, i just think the Gatling is a better ranged weapon, especially for her. so id not want to replace that. even if we had a good option of something else to replace(open to the argument though), does she really need two ranged weapons filling similar roles and vying for attention?

otherwise everyone else really has their fighting style down, and is medium-close ranged. at best Gina could get some interesting pot shots due to being able to appear anywhere, but again, only put it on her if we hybridized or replaced something else, and they all still bend her toward melee, and is it really worth replacing or hybridizing for her to split how she fights up?
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>>4171601
A quick question before you head to your dreamscape: Does Murphy's Mandate stack, or is each one considered separately? If we had five characters using the skill, would that give 100% chance to negate Alpha creating a Relic or 67% (the average likelihood of at least one of five 20% chances happening)?
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>>4171621
Sounds like a waste of levels. We only need to have at least one or two people with that power.
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>>4171621
(It would be averaged, with five separate checks being made for every Relic she attempts to craft.)
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Dude... Those augments are awesome. And lets not forget, that one of those powers gives someone the ability to make that ridiculous rifle that magpie used. One that also synergises with a lot of those augments, especially Iconoclastic touch. That combination would definitely screw over Alpha, due to both high damage, relic shutdown, long range and custom ammo. I definitely want a few of those hive mistress augs on Shu and probably Francine as well.
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>>4171623
nah since we will have to mix up teams on the fly we need backups in my opinion. we need it on most if not all people
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>>4171621
>>4171624
hrm, not as good as stacking, but still significantly increases her chances of failure, especially if our allies take it too.

>>4171623
after BHOPS reply, hell no its not. 7 checks from us max? plus 8 from our allies max aswell? that could cripple her.
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IT'S A LITTLE EARLY BUT COURT IS NOW IN SESSION.

Before we begin voting on the powers, we must distribute points.

Free Level up points available: 36

Daughters eligible for Level up:

1.Shu
2.Gina
3.Rath
4.Dorian
5.Julia
6.Francine
7.Amara

All listed Daughters eligible for level up are also eligible for Knowable Kadath, so each eligible daughter will have 2 extra points regardless of how many Free level up points are distributed.

In addition, Julia's time away with the Hyenas has given her 5 extra points.

Please submit your proposals here.

Now excuse me while I go get the chicken out of the oven. I'll be back in about 5-10 minutes.
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>>4171624
Okay, that's what I assumed. Being able to completely lock her down would be unbalanced. On the other hand, maybe the chance will rise with higher levels. Do we want to put more than one point into any of the anti-Relic skills?
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>>4171630
Total Points; 36 Points +2 Kadath per

>Shu; 5+2 Points
>Rath; 5+2 Points
>Gina; 5+2 Points
>Dorian; 5+2 Points
>Amara; 5+2 Points
>Francine; 5+2 Points
Julia; 11+2 Points

>>4171631
putting two on Shu but no one else myself.
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>>4171625
Psychotic Swarm.... Hell no. Just no its drawbacks are to large for us

Broodmothers Multitasking is not that valuable to us we can get more shit by getting the core and later hybridizing it with our core.

>>4171630
5 points each for everyone out of the Level Pool

Julia gets the one extra Level out of the pool for a total of 6 for her
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>>4171634
>>4171630
Those points are in addition to her 5 points she got from the Hyenas
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>>4171625
nah, besides the two mentioned Anti-Relic abilities, only one other, an Augment, is worth taking at all.
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>>4171638
>>4171625
that being Ocams on Amara, by the way.
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>>4171629
>after BHOPS reply, hell no its not. 7 checks from us max? plus 8 from our allies max aswell? that could cripple her.
That would leave her with only a 3.5% chance of successfully crafting a Relic. However, she would retain her rocket punching, and having fifteen people in the fight to boost her speed off of in addition to exceeding Dorian's speed would leave her still a quite dangerous foe.
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>>4171630
Five points to everyone, give Julia the extra.
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>>4171642
nah, i was more of pointing out our max as an example, i agree still not everyone should be in the fight.

still, everyone being in the fight stacking it will still work wonders.
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>>4171638
Are you just... Ignoring the massively powerful rifle ability that made Magpie so fucking lethal as well as the literal teleportation that made her so hard to kill? As well as the multiple other synergistic abilities/augments? There's a lot on offer here....
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>>4171647
And where do you suggest we put those powers? Our people are pretty full already with abilities. We are already running thin on level points even without taking on more Level Up abilities
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>>4171647
no, im not.
but none of them are worth it, especially the levelables like the rifle for reasons that those of us here for a long while have talked to death, and even mentioned right here in this discussion if you go back and read.

and many of those augments really are not that good, especially given the context of the battle coming up.
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>>4171634
>>4171633
>>4171644

Thank you for your input.

Point distribution as follows Including Knowable Kadath and other bonuses:


1.Shu: 7 points
2.Gina: 7 Points
3.Rath: 7 Points
4.Dorian: 7 Points
5.Amara: 7 Points
6.Francine: 7 points
7.Julia: 13 Points

Locked in.

First up on the Agenda: Our returning Artist, Julia.

You have 13 points to spend.
Please submit your proposals
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>>4171647
>>4171650
hell the rifle was specifically the example talked about, if you actually bothered to read the discussion taking place.
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>>4171651
Julia; 11+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Sculptress of Flesh(2)
>Elemental Digestion
>Artisanal Appetites(3)
>Calcite Halo(3)
>>Carnivorous Carver(2)
Her Core could use some love, and Appetites finally has a good chance to shine damn fucking bright. Calcite because Hexxane protection sounds like a very good idea right now. And Carnivorous is so damn good of course I want to give it levels.


also i was not expecting Julia first, as we usually follow the sheet order. but is what it is.
also you should probably keep the Kadath listed desperately, as they have caveats to how you can spend them.

on that note ">>"
will be how i mark Kadath personally.
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>>4171663
>>4171659
Wouldn't the Kadath applied on Carnivous Carver help out the Bloody Ripper component in the Kadath? Badger's Barbarism doesn't have a dream daughter attached to it.
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>>4171663
i think ignoring giving Artisenal Appetites a big boost is a very bad move, given what we're about to face....
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>>4171667
Bloody Ripper does have Kadath. it was Pennys. or so BHOP said when i was double-checking Kadath.

but no, leveling a Kadath does not give a freebie to any connected Kadaths under it, and Kadath on something hybridized does not give Kadath to those its made of that didnt have it before.
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>>4171651
SO Julia it is huh

JULIA x11 +2 Kadath
>Elemetnal Digestion x1 Kadath
>Carniverous Carver x1 Kadath

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE
>>MURPHY’S MANDATE
>Artisanal Appetites(3)
>Calcite Halo x3
>Carniverous Carver
>Sculptress x2

Consolidating power in a couple skills that can be useful in the battle. Better defenses and more active power to rip apart her relics

>>4171667
>>4171668
Sorry about the bamboozle. I had noticed something i had to replace something i had written down and then not corrected earlier because i got distracted

>>4171667
SInce a Kadath Skill is inside it it can be leveled via Kadath
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>>4171651
Ooph, giving us the toughest one first, huh? I barely even remember Julia's build, give me a moment.

>Murphy's Mandate x1
>Pilferer's Palm x 1
>Repetition's Resilience
>Iconoclastic Touch
>Sculptress of Flesh x2
>Artisanal Appetites x3
>Calcite Halo x2

>Kadath: Elemental Digestion x1
>Kadath: Carnivorous Carver x1

I think that Julia would actually benefit from Pilferer's Palm and Iconoclastic Touch. Artisanal Appetites and Elemental Digestion means that the moment she touches a Relic, she attacks it automatically. Iconoclastic Touch means that this single touch would be an critical, likely to shut the Relic down. And Pilferer's Palm means she can instantly touch any enemy Relic she chooses. Teleport Alpha's weapons to her hand, eat them, don't give Alpha back anything to recycle when it teleports back the next turn.
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>>4171677
hrm... ill admit Pilfers works on her due to Artisenal, but long-term i disagree on keeping it for sure, due to the fact she already has way too many abilities.

i disagree here heavily on Iconclastic. its only the first strike against a relic. its one time use. Alpha will just recycle it, and after that Julia will have spent it. if Alpha couldn't just make new relics, maybe, but because she can that ability is worthless. even then, one time uses are never worth it, even in this situation.

ill vote for Pilfers if you'll take away Iconclastic.
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>>4171677
>>4171676
>>4171659

>Locked in:

Murphy's Mandate x1
Repetition's Resilience x1
Elemental Digestion x1
Sculptress of Fleshx2
Artisanal Appetites x3

>Majority: 2 to 1

Calcite Halo x3
Carnivorous Carver x1


>singletons
Pilferer's Palm
Iconoclastic Touch

12 points total:
1 point left over.

Lightning round.

I'm abstaining.
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>>4171677
I think i would be up for >>4171684
as well
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>>4171690
Pilferer's Palm
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>>4171684
Maybe I'm misreading Iconoclastic Touch. I read it as the first time per combat that a given Relic was struck, allowing it to be used many times per fight against multiple Relics. But looking at it again I'm not so sure. I think you're right and it would only be used the first time. Yeah, okay, let's ditch Iconoclastic Touch, then.
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>>4171690
>Pilferer's Palm
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>>4171690
still really would like for you to mark out Kadath as it does matter alot when looking at things to know what votes are those..

>>4171690
>Pilferer's Palm
>x2 Caver instead of x2 Flesh

im a bit upset at how quickly you pushed things forward too, when we were still discussing things. for instance, i was gonna change my vote from x2 Flesh for Pilfers, not x2 Carver, as i think Carver will do us much much better, so im adding that change here too.
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>>4171694
I think it reads more like the first time the user strikes against any relic it will trigger but not later

At least to me that seems to be it.
Like seriously my mind is a bit on the slow side already but i think i can still comprehend the english language.
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>>4171696
>>4171693
id like to make the argument for x2 Carver. Carver can simply deal good, hard natural damage, while her core relies mostly on stacks. but we know Alpha is modified for our whole family, so stack protections might be built in, aswell as its probably easier for her to relic craft to impede stacks, while fully impeding damage might be impossible.
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>>4171690
You make a point... What was her Resistance to slashing damage again? On the other hand Julia does an insane amount of damage with those claws......

Give me like five minutes to mull this over
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>>4171707
Carver also relies a lot on bleeding effects. Does Alpha bleed? Do we know that? If so, I'm onboard.
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>>4171711
I think she can bleed. If not blood then some other vital liquid. Not many daughters have an immunity to bleeding effects i would guess. I think even Nikuzu could bleed. Even though she bled Magma
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>>4171700
Sorry about that. I'm just under a time crunch and I'm not in the right mindset.

I tried to tell my parents about this quest and that I'm arbitrating the vote, while reluctantly understanding, I tried to bargain for 4 hours before I go down for a late dinner. My mother told me to get this done in 3.

>>4171701
>>4171696

Let me get this straightened out in a second this is getting confusing with the debate.
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>>4171711
we dont.
but Carver still does significant more base damage than Flesh does, and thus will have less blocked even if she doesn't bleed, compared to if Alpha impedes or even turns out stacks against us.

that, and Carver also gives us goodies like the extra ACTs unlike our core, which aswell as less likely to be stopped, or if so, less impeding to the ability as a whole, while any level of stack impediment cripples her core. Carver simply is way more versatile in what it gives us, making anything pumped into it less likely to have as big an impact if part of it is blocked.
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>>4171690
Supporting this notion>>4171707 i think that will be a worthwhile investment

>>4171714
gettign this done in three hours...... would leave me with exactly half an hour to take a nap and then jump in on a conference call with my boss.
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>>4171714
oof.
i mean, we can try, but im not gonna rush into mistakes either. least Julia has the biggest pool to argue over, and with most seeming to agree on getting Muphys and Repetition the others are a bit easier.
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>>4171714
also, dont feel like you cant vote because you're arbitrating or have a bit of an iffy time limt. just dont rush while here, and worse case, sucks yeah, but you miss a person or two.
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>>4171714
Someone else can take over if you run out of time. Hell i would volunteer even though i will be quite tired at the time. So relax a little rushing headlong into things will just lead to us breaking our.... or more specifically Shus neck
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>>4171721
hope you at least find time to make up that sleep later then Anon....
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>>4171727
I will make up for it with a lazy day. I prepared for this and had some things done ahead of time that i can throw to my boss and say 'hey i have been productive'

And then i will probably take a nap after lunch...... even though that will murder my Biorhythm. But i can probably iron that one out over the weekend
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>>4171721
>>4171711
>>4171719
After hearing your debate, I'm reshuffling this into another vote as there is currently a contention:

>Locked in
Pilferer's Palm x1
Murphy's Mandate x1
Repetition's Resilience x1
Elemental Digestion x1 (Kadath)
Calcite Halo x3
Artisanal Appetites x3
Carnivorous Carver x1 (Kadath)

>Points spent: 11
>Points left over: 2

I've detected a debate among you anons about switching the points originally meant for Sculptress of the flesh for Carvnivorous Carver.

Is this true?

>Reply to this post with Y to put the last 2 points into Carnivorous Carver

>Reply to this post with N to put the last 2 points into Sculptress of the Flesh.
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>>4171737
>Y
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>>4171737
>Y
think its diversity offers significant more chances for us to do more with it in this coming fight. maybe if Flesh wasnt her core and the most likely Ability for Alpha to have built in family-counters for, but that topped with the previous reason makes Caver much more viable.
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>>4171737
Y

Let's give Julia some wicked claws.
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>>4171752
Francine; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Asklepian Ward
>Calcite Halo(2)
>>Gatling Fang(2)
Asklepian because we need the healing. Halo because we need the defenses. Gatling because I want her to be able to give good support when she is in combat.
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>>4171752
FRANCINE x5 +2 Kadath
>Gatling Fang x2 Kadath

>MILITIA MACHINATIONS (She has unlimited Fishlings she can spawn so she can amas quite the powerboost to any relics we give her. The spectacles could be really useful and any support relic soar through the roof)
>Halo x2

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE
>>MURPHY’S MANDATE

Not sure what else to put on her but more survivability
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>>4171752
wait, fuck WHOA
what the hell? why does Carver have 4!?!?
thats not at all what we said we wanted or were discussing!
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>>4171758
GAH I FUCKED UP.

>>4171752
>>4171757
>>4171754
HOLD THE PHONE. LET ME BAMBOOZLE.
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>>4171757
i just dont think Francine uses Relics at all enough for that Augment to be worth it. really no one does in my opinion.
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>>4171752
i think you put one to many points into Carver. You have distributed 1 point to much
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>>4171768
Fuck I'm getting sloppier by the second.

>>4171745
>>4171744
>>4171742
Thank you Gentlemen:

>LOCKED IN
Pilferer's Palm x1
Murphy's Mandate x1
Repetition's Resilience x1
Elemental Digestion x1 (Kadath)
Calcite Halo x3
Artisanal Appetites x3
Carnivorous Carver x3 (Kadath)
>POINTS SPENT: 13

Voting for Julia's point distribution is over. Next subject of debate.

Francine:

Points available to spend: 5 + (2 Kadath)

Please submit your proposals here.
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>>4171768
I... dude.
we still wanted a point into Flesh.
and you have 3 Kadath points when we only have 2.
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>>4171772

>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Gatling Fang x1
>Asclepian Ward x1
>Calcite Halo x1


>Kadath: Gatling Fang x1
>Kadath: Asclepian Ward x1
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>>4171773
>>4171772
seriously god fucking damnit no one still wanted nothing into Flesh.

>>4171772
reposting Francine vote too.

Francine; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Asklepian Ward
>Calcite Halo(2)
>>Gatling Fang(2)
Asklepian because we need the healing. Halo because we need the defenses. Gatling because I want her to be able to give good support when she is in combat.
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>>4171772
Ammending my vote from >>4171757 (You)
to
>Gatling Fang x2 Kadath

>Asklepian Ward(AOE healing is quite useful)
>Halo x2

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE
>>MURPHY’S MANDATE
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>>4171772
>>4171776
>>4171774
FUCKING HELL. I CAN'T ARBITRATE PROPERLY TONIGHT. FUCK.

>>4171773
Just tell me what's wrong. ugh.
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>>4171782
not sure about the others, but i misread your post and would've posted to split the last two point if i had.

the idea was we technically had all 11+2 points distributed, but x2 into Flesh instead of x2 into Carver for the base points.

so i was arguing to do x2 Carver and x1 Flesh, instead of x2 Flesh and x1 Carver.
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>>4171782
Yeah what >>4171786
is saying thats how i read it as well
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>>4171782
With the 2 carver being one level from Levelpool and one from Kadath and 1 Levle flesh from the Levelpool
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>>4171794
>>4171786
Duly noted.

I'll make the changes when I finally figure compile the votes for Francine. And post it on the same update.
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>>4171799
Sounds good. Thanks for all your hard work with this, we appreciate your efforts.
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>>4171799
>>4171800
indeed.
i know how difficult it can be. lord know you guys have run me ragged with vote changes before.
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>>4171802
>>4171799
Yeah we know and that is why I appreciate you guys.... Willing to put up with my shit and that of everyone else
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>>4171799
Sounds good. Don't stress out over it too much, though, we're glad to have you doing this for us.
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>>4171806
>>4171803
>>4171802
>>4171800


FRANCINE:
>Unanimous:
Murphys Mandate x1
Repetitions Resilience x1
Asklepian Ward x1

>Majority: 2 to 1
Calcite Halo x2
Gatling Fang x2 (2 Kadath points spent)

Points spent: 7
LOCKED IN:
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Asklepian Ward
>Calcite Halo x2
>Gatling Fang x2


Due to sharp eyed anons, JULIA'S VOTE RESULTS has been corrected:

Pilferer's Palm x1
Murphy's Mandate x1
Repetition's Resilience x1
Elemental Digestion x1 (Kadath)
Calcite Halo x3
Artisanal Appetites x3
Carnivorous Carver x2 (Kadath)
Sculptress of the Flesh x1

Thank you.
Next subject: Amara, Best Daughter.

Please submit your proposals here.
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>>4171809
Amara; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Ocams Edge
>Joyous Many
>Oxygenic Artillery
>>Hunters Honor
>>Queen Crimson
Ocams helps Hunters out ALOT, and due to it only working for Calcite stuff, really only helps Amara. Joyus is just always a good choice, and Queen for some defenses, Hunters because we might need such a hard hitting weapon. Oxygenic to give said hard hitter some range as we have done before, aswell as herself.
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>>4171809
AMARA x5 +2 Kadath
>Hunters Honor x1 Kadath
>Queen x1 Kadath

>ARTILLERY
>JOYOUS
>Queen

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE
>>MURPHY’S MANDATE
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>>4171809
Amara: 5 + 2 Points

>Queen Crimson
>Joyous Many
>Repetition's Resilience
>Murphy’s Mandate
>Occam’s Edge

>Kadath: Hunter’s Honor, Hollowed Clone
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>>4171809

Proposal:

Lexicon x2
Murphys Mandate x1
Repetitions Resilience x1
Occrams Edge x1

Kadath:
Hunter's honor x1
Queen Crimson x1

I'm fine with everything else but GODDAMMIT I want points into Lexicon!
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>>4171816
now is NOT the time for lexicon. we need everyone to get as combat boosted as possible for Alpha, and Lexicon just does NOT do that, nor guarantee us the little bit of help it may give. aswell as the fact Alphas built-in anti-Family bits are probably geared towards her skintalking.
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>>4171809
Ammending Vote >>4171812
to
>Hunters Honor x1 Kadath
>Queen x1 Kadath

>ARTILLERY
>JOYOUS
>Occrams Edge

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE
>>MURPHY’S MANDATE
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>>4171809
>Murphy's Mandate x1
>Repetition's Resilience
>Queen Crimson x2
>Oxygenic Artillery

>Kadath: Hunter's Honor x1
>Kadath: Joyous Many x1

Queen Crimson has good defensive abilities, I want Amara to be as safe from the killer cyborg rocket-punching her as she can possibly be.

Also, Murphy's Mandate has crazy synergy with Joyous Many. Assuming that constructs don't trigger Alpha's "more enemies equals more speed" power (which I hope they don't, because that's just not fair to put up against our Hive Mistress main), we could spam dozens of iterations of the skill on her. By my quick math, having thirty Joyous hitting her with Murphy's Mandate would reduce her chances of successfully spawning a Relic down to 0.1%.

>>4171816
Lexicon is unlikely to offer considerable use against Alpha. I want to level it too, but Lexicon seems to benefit investigation and communication over combat and right now we need to level Amara for survival. Next level, maybe when we're scraping usable biomass off of Alpha's remains, then we can put things into Lexicon.
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>>4171818
You have a point there.
I'll trade in x2 Lexicon for something else.

Joyous and Artillery it is then.

>>4171809
>>4171816

Oxygenic Artillery x1
Joyous Many x1
Murphys Mandate x1
Repetitions Resilience x1
Occrams Edge x1

Kadath:
Hunter's honor x1
Queen Crimson x1
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>>4171825
>By my quick math, having thirty Joyous hitting her with Murphy's Mandate would reduce her chances of successfully spawning a Relic down to 0.1%.
Actually, wait, that's wrong. Joyous Many level eight gives a bonus of 20% to effectiveness if ten Joyous cooperate on the same action. That bonus rises by 10% for every additional ten Joyous. Assuming that it would be 140% of 20%, that means thirty Joyous would reduce the odds of Alpha making a Relic to 0.005%. Okay, I think I know what we're doing. Mandate spam on the Joyous is a good plan.
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>>4171825
only issue will be regardless of other issues, we'll still have to cycle out Amaras Joyus when we do her, so as to reset any relics against her/them. its not a new issue, mind you, or one not similar for others, but still, something to keep in mind.(nor am i saying you're overlooking it, so much as just double-checking everyone's taken it into account).
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>>4171811
>>4171813
>>4171822
>>4171825
>>4171826

Well this is almost unanimous with several super majorities.

>Hunter's honor x1 (Kadath)
>Queen Crimson x1 (Kadath)
>Murphys Mandate x1
>Repetitions Resilience x1
>Joyous Many x1
>Oxygenic Artillery x1
>Ocams Edge x1

Points spent: 7

Locked in.

Next subject: Dorian, The Bloody Storm. I think that should be his next epithet considering what he's evolved into now.
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>>4171834
Dorian; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Calcite Halo
>Red Death(2)
>>Resplendent Thread(2)
Calcite for some more defenses, Core because Core, Thread because only Kadath he has.
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>>4171811
>>4171813
>>4171822
>>4171825
Oh Right.

Please submit your proposals to this post here: >>4171834
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>>4171834
Dorian: 5 + 2 Points

>Red Death
>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Spring-Heeled Jack
>Calcite Halo

>Knowable Kadath: Resplendent Thread x2
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>>4171834
DORIAN x5 +2 Kadath
>Resplendent Thread x2 Kadath

>Springheeled Jack x2 (he isnt gonna fight in this and we need him as fast as possible to help us ferry people around. In other fights this will be of great use to him)
>Red Death
>Calcite Halo

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE

Since we want him to ferry people around i think his top priority should be speed. i can see him using anti relic abilites in the future much. And lets be honest if he has to intervene...... we will be toast since WAlpha will be equal to his speed.
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>>4171842
>>4171843
im not sure Jack is a good idea. he's already more than fast enough for the job we have for him, but in the worse case he DOES need to enter combat or ends up accidentally entering it, last we need is him being any faster than he already is.
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>>4171834
My Proposal:

Resplendent Thread x2 (Kadath)
Calcite Halo x1
Murphy's Mandate x1
Repetition's Resilience x1
Red Death x1
Veruteilung x1
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>>4171848
that is a point worth considering but i still believe that the one point you want to put into Murphys will not be to useful. I can agree to switch at least one point to Red Death to strengthen his core but i am not sure where i want to spend the other point . Maybe on another level for the Resplendent thread
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>>4171856
Verurteilung isn't the best choice for this mission, Alpha is completely immune to any emotion-altering effects, so that ability wouldn't affect her at all.
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>>4171848
True, that's a fair point. I'll revise my post here

>>4171842
And change it to the following:

>Red Death x2
>Repetition's Resilience
>Calcite Halo x2

>Knowable Kadath: Resplendent Thread x2

If Dorian's not going to be in combat, then Murphy's Mandate isn't necessary for him.
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>>4171858
i guess thats a good point, but i just wanted him to still have said stillborn chance incase the worse happens and he does end up in the fight.
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>>4171834
Man, I'm really tempted to put four points into Red Death and max out his Core. Just get it over with. But no, we need to put points into other things. A shame. Soon, Dorian. Soon your vampire cosplay will be complete.

>Repetition's Resilience
>Red Death x2
>Calcite Halo x2

>Kadath: Resplendent Thread x2

Dorian shouldn't be around Alpha long enough for Murphy's Mandate to be of use. As for running shuttle service, I think that he can do it with Resplendent Thread well enough. Technically he's much faster with his Threads than he is with running. He can instantly pull himself to anywhere his threads can reach as a free action costing 50% Bio, and his threads can reach out to Long range. So three zones for every 50% Bio he spends, at his regen he can move thirty-nine zones per turn without having to actually take an action or fall from max Bio.
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>>4171861
fair point. Although If we do manage to kill that emotion suppressing Core...

>>4171856
>>4171834
Amended vote.
Resplendent Thread x2 (Kadath)
Calcite Halo x2
Repetition's Resilience x1
Red Death x2
>>4171864
Please properly link your vote.
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>>4171834
>>4171837
Amending;

>Repetitions Resilience
>Calcite Halo(2)
>Red Death(2)
>>Resplendent Thread(2)
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>>4171809
Ammending my vote form >>4171843
to>Resplendent Thread x2 Kadath

>Red Death x2
>Calcite Halo x2

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE

WE will have to get Dorian out of the fight if he ever gets there. He should never be in any range close enough for it to matter.
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>>4171871
Sorry, my bad.

>>4171834
>Red Death x2
>Repetition's Resilience
>Calcite Halo x2

>Knowable Kadath: Resplendent Thread x2
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>>4171874
>>4171873
>>4171871
>>4171870
>>4171878

Gentlemen, it is completely Unanimous

>Repetition's Resilience
>Red Death x2
>Calcite Halo x2

>Kadath: Resplendent Thread x2

Up Next: Our Crimson Cord Lover. Gina

Please submit your proposals here
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>>4171882
Gina; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Nervous Torrent
>>Ivory Aeturnum(2)
Alpha probably has Neuromancy resistances if not immunity, bur Neon has a halo in it, so maybe it can bust through with a good boost.
Ivory because it's we need defenses and it not impeding other defenses makes it superb.
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>>4171882
GINA x5 +2 Kadath
>Ivory x2 kadath

>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Nervous Torrent
>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE
>>MURPHY’S MANDATE
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>>4171882
>Murphy’s Mandate
>Repetition’s Resilience
>Neon Ascendant
>Ivory Aeternum
>Gladiatorial Swarm

>Kadath: Gladiatorial Swarm, Neurotic Halo
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>>4171882
>Murphy's Mandate x1
>Repetition's Resilience
>Ivory Aeturnum x2
>Neon Ascendant x1

>Kadath: Neurotic Halo x2

>>4171884
Alpha is immune to acid, Nervous Torrent won't be useful.
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>>4171891
fair, though i disagree on upgrading the Halo, espcially not two points. with how Alpha works, she'll need to diversify more than that, and her core already covers anything it can do well enough if not better.
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>>4171882
>>4171884
Amending;

>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Gladiatorial Swarm
>>Ivory Aeturnum(2)
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>>4171891
Oh right .... god i am getting tired....


>>4171882
Ammending my vote form >>4171887
to
>Ivory x2 kadath

>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Gladiatorial Swarm
>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE
>>MURPHY’S MANDATE
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>>4171897
I just feel regretful over leaving Neurotic Halo capped at ten, I want to see it at final form. But fair, I'm going to move a point to Gladiatorial Swarm.

>>4171882
Changing >>4171891
to
>Murphy's Mandate x1
>Repetition's Resilience
>Ivory Aeturnum x2
>Neon Ascendant x1

>Kadath: Neurotic Halo x1
>Kadath: Gladiatorial Swarm x1
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>>4171884
>>4171887
>>4171890
>>4171891

Alright anons. hear me out.

I've taken a look at Gina's sheet, and from what I can tell from her kit, She doesn't really have a dedicated direct ranged attack. Ivory Aeturnum and Gladiatorial swarm are mostly Defensive Armor abilities, and Neuromancy's mostly spellcasting with Nervous Torrent being basically AOE acid.

Gina lacks direct damage. She needs a way to inflict direct damage in this upcoming fight.

That's why I'm proposing this:

>>4171882
>Kadath: Neurotic Halo x1
>Kadath: Ivory Aeternum x1

>LYUDMILA’S WELCOME x1
>Repetition's Resilience
>Gladiatoral Swarm x1
>Neuromancy x1
>Murphy's Mandate x1
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>>4171905
she can spawn calcite weaponry.
and shes way too geared towards melee now, the rifles a horrible pick for her. and she has way, WAY too many abilities to take another levelable. hell not to that. and everything else has thematic weight behind it, so you'd have to make a pretty good case to replace it with that.
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>>4171904
>>4171905
>>4171890
maybe once her core is done we could go back for the Halo, but as it stands leveling her core and other things is wholly more appropriate to aiding her than the halo, due to the overlap it has with her Core.
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>>4171905
You are correct in that but she is our Battlefield controller isnt she?. They dont usually deal much damage.

And i know its nice and shiny and you want it on her but i dont think it will be good on her forcing her into a playstyle that will lead to her having to switch around constantly..


Also she is kinda out of room. WE are spreading ourselves horribly thin here.

The only thing i could see us replacing is maybe Verurteilung as that hasnt gotten any love for a while now
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>>4171913
>>4171905
i could go for replacing Verteilung with it. though Verteilung fits her thematically better, we really never use it, and she, while melee focused, has become hit and run in that melee mostly, so she actually wont utilize it very much.

ironically Rath or Julia build wise would put Ver to best use, yet they're practically the only people without it.
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>>4171905
I don't know. It kind of goes with Gina's kit, but not quite smoothly enough for me to like it. Gina's build is "saboteur and ambush predator". She hits people with status effects, she changes the terrain, she lays acid sprays down, and sometimes she surfaces from the ground to pounce on people. A sniper rifle sort of fits with that, taking shots of opportunity, but I'm not convinced it's the best for her.
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>>4171916
Ohh, now I'm just thinking of putting Ver on Rath and hybridizing it with Unrelenting Cold for a fear + cold aura.
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>>4171917
thinking about it, as i said, she may still get more use out of the sniper than Ver. id want the new point for something else, but thats 5 points from Ver we could swap into the Rifle.

>>4171921
could work, but we can siphon Ver from Dorian or Amara if we do that(mostly just to not stir this voting up even more, mind you).
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>>4171924
Right, right, let's leave that kind of idea for later. We've got a cyborg to focus on right now.
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>>4171916
>>4171917
>>4171921
I think we can replace Verurteilung with the gun..... Teh gun sounds useful and we could explore its higher levels if we were to dump them completely into the Lyudmilas Welcome

AS was said it doesnt really fit her bild from a powers standpoint any longer. Not with her hit and run tactics
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>>4171925
thing is we wont get a second chance to pick this ability up.

If we dont take it now its gone forever
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>>4171882
>>4171884
>>4171901
Amending Again;

>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Gladiatorial Swarm
>>Ivory Aeturnum(2)

>>Replace x5 Verteilung with x5 Lyudmilas Welcome

>>4171927
i tihnk he meant the siphon from Amara/Dorian into Rath/Julia part can be done later.
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>>4171834
Ammending one final time from>>4171902
to

>Ivory x2 kadath

>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Gladiatorial Swarm
>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE
>>MURPHY’S MANDATE

switch out the Level of VERURTEILUNG for
>LYUDMILA’S WELCOME x5
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>>4171924
>>4171926
Alright, I'd be willing to take some points off of Verurteilung to experiment with the gun. Actually, if we're building for Alpha that's exactly what we should do. Alpha is immune to emotion effects. And since we've got Verurteilung on Dorian if we ever decide we really want it back we can transfer some points over. Okay, fine, let's recycle Verurteilung. While we're at it, does anyone want to pick up Eldridge Experiment? I know that we really shouldn't add another levelable, but I'm so tempted by the "this thing does weird stuff to space-time" idea.
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>>4171929
ah okay.... its getitng kinda early so i am no longer in the best postion to think about anything not pre scripted
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>>4171882
After reviewing the other proposals, I'll retract my votes here
>>4171890

And support this build instead
>>4171929
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>>4171933
i just really do not think we need it, nor its worth the risk. i mean, wont deny its interesting, but the one who would truly need it are Rath or Julia, as i think everyone else has ok movement options of similar type, or that give advantages to use over that.

and even then, just not sure i want it on Julia or Rath, even without other issues i have with it.
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>>4171933
Honestly while the Eldritch cancelation is tempting i cant imgaine what magpie and Mara must have gone through to get it... Maybe you should leave sleeping dogs lie.

And honestly not to big a fan of teleportaion. You tend to lose parts of yourself to walls and other unexpeted obstacles.
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>>4171905
>>4171882
Amending my vote:


>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Gladiatorial Swarm
>Lyudmilas Welcome

>Ivory Kadath x2

>Drain 4 points out of Veruteilung to boost Lyudmila's Welcome to lvl 5
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>>4171939
i mean, Dorian has safe teleportation(im pretty sure i remember BHOP confirming his blink is counted as teleportation, even if its not technically exactly so), but mind you, his has no drawback like Eldridge, which is the only reason im ok with it myself.
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>>4171834
Amending >>4171904
to

>Murphy's Mandate x1
>Repetition's Resilience
>Ivory Aeturnum x2
>Neon Ascendant x1

>Recycle five levels of Verurteilung
>Lyudmila's Welcome x4
>Gladiatorial Swarm x1

>Kadath: Neurotic Halo x1
>Kadath: Gladiatorial Swarm x1

>>4171938
>>4171939
Yeah, okay. The mystery is going to get to me, though. I want to know why they hunted down this specific teleportation power. I really think they used it to try to hack the Crucible's extradimensional systems. But maybe we can do something similar with the Void Orrery and Silver Key, if that turns out to work it would satisfy my curiosity.
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>>4171944
yeah that is why i am okay with Dorians Teleportation but this ability can teleport you into a goddamn mountain. And as even terminators can tell you that is lethal.

>>4171950
I think we may have the safer route to cracking the secrets of the crucible.
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>>4171966
RATH x5 +2 Kadath
>Vulcans Hand x2 Kadath

>Tormented Drive x2
>Alabaster Endoskeleton

>>MURPHY’S MANDATE
>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE
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>>4171966
that is not at ALL what the general consensus was.

you were the only one who wished to not fully get rid of Ver, with three putting all of it into Welcome, and one 4 into Welcome and one into Gladitorial. no one but you took a level-up point and put it into Welcome.
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>>4171963

When you consume Lyudmila's Welcome, you get it the first level.

Verurteilung is at lvl 5, meaning it has 5 points.

We got Verurteilung at lvl 1, then invested 4 points into it to get it to lvl 5.

Drain 4 points out of Verurteilung and you'll leave Verurteilung at lvl 1.

The math checks out.
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>>4171971
>>4171966
not to mention, thats 6 level-up points when we only have 5.

>>4171972
no, thats not what people wanted and your damn well just trying to bend thing to how YOU want to keep Ver when no one else wants to.
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>>4171966
Rath

>Indignant Ignition
>Vulcan’s Hand
>Calcite Halo
>Repetition’s Resilience
>Iconoclastic Touch

>Erupting Grasp x2

Here's my reasoning for improving Erupting Grasp. The descriptor for Vulcan's Hand reads:

>The effects of Erupting Grasp are always active at no upkeep cost and increased by an additional 20% damage and/or efficacy, and any cost-based abilities in the tree have their costs cut in half.

If we have more abilities from Erupting Grasp unlocked, which relate to disabling, reversing and destroying relics, we'll have more options to use against Alpha.
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>>4171971

Ah Damn. Sorry.

My eyes are getting tired. lemme go bamboozle.
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>>4171972
but you are then still missing one point out of the Level pool to make sure you get the 6 things you wanted to consume.

>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Gladiatorial Swarm
>Lyudmilas Welcome
These are 5 points one of which has to be weighted twice. That makes 6 points

So that would be six points out of the level up pool. The one extra level we get form taking off Verurteilung completely
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>>4171975
That's sensible. Even if it just gives a damage bonus, well that's more damage for the always-on Erupting Grasp effect. I'd like to keep away from Indignant Ignition for the moment, though, Rath needs more defenses.

>>4171966
>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Alabaster Endoskeleton x2
>Calcite Halo x1

>Kadath: Erupting Grasp x2
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>>4171968
Drive is a bad pick. we specifically dont want Alpha to get over speed hyped, remember?

>>4171975
Icon is still a terrible pick, its one time use and West Alpha can just recycle whatever we hit with it.

>>4171984
>>4171975
also Vulcan would probably give us more, and Grasp was more of powering up Relics ,not hurting them. and we will just get that from Vulcan, but with other benefits.
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>>4171929
>>4171930
>>4171936
>>4171942
>>4171950

Gentlemen. Sorry for the inconvenience. I'm getting a little bit cross-eyed.

This is the new result for Gina.

>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Gladiatorial Swarm

>Ivory Aeturnum(2) Kadath

>Use the Engine to strip remove Verurteilung, get 5 points from completely refining Verurteilun, then Consume Lyudmilas Welcome and boost it to lvl 5.

Back to Voting on Rath
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>>4171984
>>4171978
also, is Alpha immune to cold? i cant remember but i didn't think she was?
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>>4171994
>also Vulcan would probably give us more, and Grasp was more of powering up Relics ,not hurting them. and we will just get that from Vulcan, but with other benefits.
Maybe. But Erupting Grasp does have powers that cause Relics to recoil on the user when they're hit by them. I suppose that might not be necessary, though, if we're doing Murphy spam and having Julia teleport-eat anything that Alpha does manage to craft. Give me a moment, I'll think about it.
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>>4172000
Rath; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Calcite Halo(2)
>Unrelenting Cold
>>Vulcans Hand(2)
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>>4172002
She is. Here's her list of immunities. Granted, it might be out of date, this was from before her anti-Defiants upgrades.

>>WEST ALPHA
>>HEALTH: 36,560% (+6520%)
>>BIO: Unusable, generative power re-routed through Forge Core Matrix.
>>ACT: 6/6
>>RELICS: Variable, prefers augmentation-based and mix of melee/speed enhancers. Possesses four Tier 5 Forge Cores, Generation Halo.
>>IMMUNE: Acid, Frost, Blunt, Crushing.
>>ABSORB: Heat, Elec
>>UNIQUE - Unfeeling: Utterly immune to any and all positive or negative emotion-influencing abilities from any source.
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>>4172002
>>WEST ALPHA
>>HEALTH: 36,560% (+6520%)
>>BIO: Unusable, generative power re-routed through Forge Core Matrix.
>>ACT: 6/6
>>RELICS: Variable, prefers augmentation-based and mix of melee/speed enhancers. Possesses four Tier 5 Forge Cores, Generation Halo.
>>IMMUNE: Acid, Frost, Blunt, Crushing.
>>ABSORB: Heat, Elec
>>UNIQUE - Unfeeling: Utterly immune to any and all positive or negative emotion-influencing abilities from any source.
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>>4172007
grah, damn, but fair enough.

>>4172000
>>4172006
Amending;
Rath; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Calcite Halo(2)
>Alabaster Endoskeleton
>>Vulcans Hand(2)
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>>4171994
Erupting Grasp Lvl 3:

>Erupting Grasp’s most recent increase in power now allows Rath to pour 150% BIO into a single, devastating strike that boasts the unique ability to temporarily disable any active Relics the target is in possession of, rendering worn Relics briefly useless and opening the wearer up to powerful follow-up attacks.

Lvl 5:

>At a cost of 300% BIO, Rath may prime a debilitating blow that is an escalation of this ability’s Lvl 3 power. On hit, this expensive attack automatically causes all equipped Relics on the target to violently recoil, turning boons into devastating status ailments or causing weapons to misfire in the user’s face.

Erupting Grasp has a 50/50 mix of abilities. Half of them are based on self-empowerment, while the other half are based on targeting the enemy's relics. And if their costs are halved with Vulcan's Hand, then I think that EG would be a better use of Knowable Kadath than VH for this particular battle.
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>>4171966
Ammending from>>4171968
to
>Vulcans Hand x2 Kadath


>Alabaster Endoskeleton x2
>Calcite Halo

>>MURPHY’S MANDATE
>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE

>>4172002
Dont think she is... cant remember specifics though i am i had it written down somewhere but i cant find it at the moment. I did a lot of cleanign today and my notes are still missing......

And here comes the saving answer>>4172007 so unrelenting cold is useless.
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>>4172011
>>4172003
fair but Vulcan Hands could easily still give us that, while having the boosts of being a Hybrid in effect and Stats. would still be better to get any of that from it with the added stat benefits if nothing else.
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>>4172000

>Erupting Fist: (1x Kadath)
>Phantom Limb (1x Kadath)

>Vulcan's Grasp
>Alabaster Endoskeleton
>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Calcite halo

The core of Rath's immense strength lies in her Phantom Limb ability. If we can boost that through Kadath, then we can get more mileage out of Rath's Arms.
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>>4172000
>Murphy's Mandate
>Vulcan’s Hand
>Calcite Halo
>Repetition’s Resilience
>Alabaster Endoskeleton

>Erupting Grasp x2
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>>4172016
while very very true, in this specific fight Erupting Grasp or Vulcan either will still probably help us alot more, assuming they give us some of their anti-relic levels.
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>>4172012
>And here comes the saving answer>>4172007 (You) so unrelenting cold is useless.
It is, but not because Alpha is immune to Cold. Unrelenting Cold is actually not affected by Cold immunity, despite the name, we discovered that when November could still be frozen by the Kinetic Remnant. I think that Unrelenting Cold won't be useful because West will have included some way to clear Stacks in the upgrades she made to Alpha, as a counter to Julia. That's an obvious inclusion to make. Speaking of, does anyone want to hazard a guess at other counters that Alpha might have? Anti-swarmling grenades like Yurei used on us is an obvious counter to Shu, but what about Rath or Gina?
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>>4172027
probably something to use Raths momentum against her. Something like Yureis Balance stacks. Against Gian Neuromantic defences and of course the crushing immunity.

Probably also a way to ignore difficult terrain.
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>>4172027
Did you vote? I'm sorry but I had to bamboozle the previous update post. please link your proposal. to this post >>4172000
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>>4172027
getting rid of self immunity to damage, especially heat/radiant, on Rath would be a death sentence to her possibly.

Gina... unsure. the Halos are so odd she might not be able to counter them, so neuromantic backlash might not be feasible. but it most certainly will be something to impede her neuromancy, if only via very strong defenses against it.

also anti-terrarofming. we use that way too much. no fucking way she doesn't have anti-terraforming. the real question is what kind and how its implemented. if its more defensive we're good, if its counters or backlash, we might be in a spot of trouble. also depend on how far out she can anti-Terraform.
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>>4172030
I also forgot to tell you to link to the vote to the proper post here: >>4172000

>>4172034
Well...We need to remember our preferences and tactics from all of our battles back then. West Alpha tuned itself to match and counter our tactics.
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>>4172031
I did, but I think it got lost in the bamboozle. Sorry. Let me go again.

>>4172000
>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Alabaster Endoskeleton x2
>Calcite Halo x1

>Kadath: Vulcan's Hand x2

Yeah, I've come around to go Hand instead of Grasp. We'll have the Murphy spam to keep Relics from being made, Julia to eat any that do get made, just Erupting Grasp level five should be enough to punish Alpha if she manages to make any.

>>4172034
We do have Psychica Spiralis, that should protect against any attempt to wrest control of the fleshscape from us. I hope. I'd like to put Shu's Kadath points into it, it's a strong skill and I think it will carry us well.
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>>4172039
Sorry wilco


>>4172000

Vote>>4172012
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>>4172039
indeed.

>>4172040
im giving it at least a point yes, but didnt have the points to spare for more than one... well, ok, could take a point from one other thing, but ill wait to hear your argument once we're on Shu and we both have our ideas fully laid out.
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>>4172044
>>4172043
>>4172040
>>4172020
Gentlemen here are the results.

Unanimous:
>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience

Super Majority: 4 to 1
>Calcite Halo

Majority 3 to 2
Alabaster Endoskeleton x1
>Vulcan's Hand (x2 Kadath)


Minority: 2 out of 5
>Alabaster Endoskeleton x2

Singletons:
>Calcite Halo(x2)
>Phantom Limb (1x Kadath)
>Erupting x2
>Erupting Grasp x1

So far we have the following locked in with the Majority 3 to 2 as the threshold.

>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Calcite Halo
Alabaster Endoskeleton x1
>Vulcan's Hand (x2 Kadath)

We have 1 point left over. No Kadath points available.

Lightning Round time.
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>>4172056
>Calcite Halo
bump it up to x2.
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>>4172056
>Calcite Halo

Lets make her even tougher with that Halo and see how it bends to her personality and purpose
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>>4172056
>Calcite Halo

Get it and Alabaster Endoskeleton at the same level, both at level six. I'm not saying I'm planning on hybridizing them, just that I'd like Rath's defensive boosts to stay at parity with each other.
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>>4172056
>Calcite Halo

When in doubt, more defense.
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>>4172062
>>4172060
>>4172058
>>4172057
Well then. It is unanimous.

Locking in the vote:

>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Calcite Halo x2
>Alabaster Endoskeleton x1
>Vulcan's Hand (x2 Kadath)

And finally Shu. or Us. Shus.....shuuuuuuuuss...Sh(you)sssssss.....

Endgame in this court.

Post them proposals.
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>>4172065
Shu; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate(2)
>Repetitions Resilience
>Murderous Flock
>Hive
>Spiritus
>>Spiralis
I want to at least see where Magpies Core leads, and think we can afford not to take the stats. Even if we do not wish to use her Core this battle, we can shove it into the Goregrowth Box come Relic Distribution time, so it can grow from the fight. Or we can keep it for the stats. I'm just not sure I want to break it down honestly. I will say I think i'm being influenced too by the fact Shus Core isn't too far from being MAXED, meaning it’ll both free up a slot and be ready for possible hybridization. Though not sure I'd want to slap it into Magpies, only the need to no longer level it aswell as clearing up a slot, possibly two, makes it at least worth thinking about our options, even if only because we have the GoreGrowth to keep things in till we’re ready.

As for Murphys, like I said, I want Murphy and Repetition on everyone, but I also want to see where it might lead, and Shu is the best to take that risk on. While I disagree heavily she should stay in the fight the entire time, when she is in, her role as a commander and heavy support makes it best for her to have an extra boost to it.
Otherwise her core is always a good idea, and we really need to get that safety level BHOP said is in Spiritus somewhere, aswell as the one where we get allied DDs. either or would help and expand what we can do so so much. Spiralis cause i think we’re gonna need the counters and terrain control.
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>>4172065
SHU x5 +2 Kadath
>Ravenous Maw x1 Kadath
>Spiralis x1 Kadath

>MURDEROUS FLOCK not sure if rendered down or put into the Goregrowth Box
>Hive
>Spiritus

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE
>>MURPHY’S MANDATE

Well lets get this war started
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>>4172065
>Murderous Flock (Goregrowth Box)
>Repetition’s Resilience
>Militia Machinations
>Broodmother’s Multitasking
>Occam’s Edge

>Psychica Spiralis x2

Honestly, we have Murphy's Madness on enough characters, and with all of these Hive Mistress augments, we have a real chance to improve Shu's swarms.
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>>4172067
That build doesn't work, unfortunately. You've got six levels of non-Kadath skills, we only have five available for Shu. I guess we could raise Spiralis two points and then redistribute a point with the Engine over to Murphy's Mandate, if that's what you want?
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>>4172067
grah, fuck, made a mistake due to thinking Spiritus was Kadathable.
well fuck, hrm.

gah, fuck it.

>>4172065
>>4172067
amending;
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Murderous Flock
>Hive
>Spiritus
>>Spiralis(2)

thanks to Kadath rules my damn tired mind and trying to fit in Flock confused me, i just simply cannot do what i wish.
well, i guess i could abuse the fuck out of the engine technically to do so. but, no. i wont. not for something that petty and when ive already made a mistake.
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>>4172065

Murderous Flock
Repetition’s Resilience
Murphy’s Mandate
Trypophilic Hive
Dominous Bloodline

Psychica Spiralis (2x Kadath)

I would like to point out that if we're to stay in this game as the team tank, (because lord knows Alpha's going to beeline straight for us immediately) We'll need to upgrade our lifeline.

Also as a side note, We've got a fuckton of Hive Mistress Augs. I wonder if they're compatible with birbs...
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>>4172075
not taking Murphy defeats the entire point on putting it on everyone.

Militia isnt worth it, Shu only ever really utilizes the contender, and its not worth it for a single Relic, no matter how good.

we have enough Swarmlings honestly and will get plenty from our core. an augment of only slots really isnt worth it.

Shu has no Calcite weaponry, Ocams Edge is worthless on her.
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>>4172075

>Occam’s Edge
pretty worthless on Shu our main output comes not from our calcite drill.

>Broodmother’s Multitasking
WE dont truly need this Swarmlingcap Updrade. its just 10 and that i snot that huge a boost.

We can do better by having the Murderous Flock in the box and then Hybridizing it since the swarmling pools will probably just merge


>>4172080
You even had the Spiritus tagged as a non Kadathable skill in your post which i for some reason find hilarious
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>>4172088
we have the drill but getting an Augment just for that is not worth it. Especially if it isnt even our main damage output
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>>4172088
It was my understanding that Occam's Edge would apply to Shu's swarmlings, increasing all of the damage dealt by their piercing and slashing attacks.
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>>4172084
only the 'other abilities' ones.
it used to be we could get Ability Specific Augments, but Arbiter stops that as part of nothing conforming to us upon choosing the consume option.

a shame personally, as those were often more potent, but is what it is.
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>>4172065
>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Murderous Flock
>Trypophilic Hive x1
>Spiritus Ex Testa

>Kadath: Psychica Spiralis x2

I'm tempted by Militia Machinations, but I think it's much better for a Pawn-type Hive Mistress like Magpie than us. We'd have, what, sixty swarmlings on the field at max? 60% boost to Relic function is nice, but I'm not sure it's really worth a level.

And I'm going to say not to Goregrowth Box Magpie's Core yet. I really want Shu to breach 2000% Health before we go fight the rocket-cyborg, keeping that skill on our sheet guarantees it.

>>4172084
>I would like to point out that if we're to stay in this game as the team tank, (because lord knows Alpha's going to beeline straight for us immediately) We'll need to upgrade our lifeline.
We'd already be draining half of Alpha's Health regen a turn, that would be enough to let us complete regenerate entirely from any hit that doesn't kill us. Upgrading Dominus Bloodline won't give us appreciably more survivability against her.

>Also as a side note, We've got a fuckton of Hive Mistress Augs. I wonder if they're compatible with birbs...
It could make for some fun scenarios. Like, Chitinous Stalwart is a Hive Mistress Augment. Can we make bird armor instead of bug armor, now?
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>>4172094
oh, yeah true. and yeah i agree. plus the Drill can be difficult to use and is already horribly strong. it hardly at all needs it.

>>4172099
it would not, it says only Calcite Armorers. mind you, it would effect our drill ,but i still disagree thats worth it. Drill is too side a weapon and can be hard to use, aswell as is already such a powerhouse it feels redundant.

>>4172089
yeah, been a weird day for me.
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>>4172100
Such is the life of the arbiter. You can only give so much attention to the individual before having to go back to judging the masses.
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>>4172100
>>4172110
fuck, i meant Artesinal
damn fucking shit my dyslexia sometimes, i even know i fucked up the spelling on that horribly.
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>>4172105
I don't think Chitinous Stalwart works with Birbs. I think it's more of a Tryphophilic Hive specific Augmentation.
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>>4172109
I see. In that case, I'll revise my vote.

>>4172065
I'll change my vote here:

>>4172075

To this:

>Murderous Flock (Goregrowth Box)
>Repetition’s Resilience
>Trypophilic Hive
>Spiritus Ex Testa
>Murphy's Mandate
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>>4172114
No, you got it right the first time, actually. Arbiter's Appetites is what modifies the Consume process. Artisanal Appetites is Julia's Relic-eating skill.

>>4172116
It's on the Other Abilities list. Maybe that's an error, then. Well, we've still got some other non-skill specific Augments that would be fun. Diabolic Legion, for example, let our crows breath fire.
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>>4172120
>>4172065
Sorry, almost forgot the Kadath points.

>>Kadath: Psychica Spiralis x2
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>>4172105
we cannot.
it is Hive specific. got it before we stopped getting Ability Specific Augments. mind you, we could question if we would've even gotten it without that though. otherwise we probably would've just seen Gladitorial Swarm actually, or something close to it.

>>4172121
oh, grah, fug.
dont do that to me Anon....
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>>4172116
>Chitinous Stalwart
It actually would since it is a general augment and not a specific one.

They would also be able to breath fire... I dont remember the birds being so scary they were practically dragons
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>>4172125
>>4172105
wait, it is there.
hrm, ill have to double check with BHOP, as the wording and some other things might mean that is wrong. it may of been put in the wrong area/not properly asked about/ gotten mixed up, back when me and BHOP were fixing things, as i swore he said otherwise to that...
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>>4172131
then we will see tomorrow...your tomorrow at least. i will see it this evening

until then let me dream of fire spewing birds that can form into a suit of mail to protect our Cannibalistic Boss Lesbian
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>>4172120
>>4172105
>>4172084
>>4172080

Gentlemen, we made it.

Near unanimous.

>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Murderous Flock
>Trypophilic Hive x1
>Spiritus Ex Testa
>Kadath: Psychica Spiralis x2

Spiritus won a supermajority.
Murderous Flock won a majority 3 to 1 to 1 (3 votes to Keep murderous Flock, 1 to put it in a box, and 1 that's torn between)

COURT HAS ENDED.

It has taken 3 hours and 45 minutes.

Thank you for your participation.

Results will be compiled in the interim.
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>>4172140
well that's over for now. Good now i will go and pass out in my bed. i still have about an hour i just noticed to take a nap.....

I will take the chance

Good Night everyone
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>>4172140
Alright. And then next afternoon we'll get to see what our new levels do. Here's hoping that learning what Trypophilic Hive level fifteen does isn't going to make us really frustrated we didn't have it before Magpie died.
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>>4172140
whew.
honestly wasnt too bad. dont think there was any massive disagreement overall.

good work gents.

>>4172144
night Anon, hope your day goes well.

>>4172147
yeah, the next post isnt due til 7EST if i remember, right?
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>>4172144
Good night, anon. And to everyone else, it's past midnight here and I should head to bed.

>>4172149
>yeah, the next post isnt due til 7EST if i remember, right?
Yep.
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>>4172152
well, that fine. hope BHOP find the time he needs. and is also at least somewhat surprised by some of our choices.

>>4172140
you need the final tallies or working on it?
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>>4172140
Awesome, everything's wrapped up. Good night everyone, excellent work!
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>>4172156
I'll compile it in the morning. I need to eat my cold chicken.
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>>4172161
oh, well ive already got it all ready so...
but if you really want to, thats fine.
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>>4172162
oh, really? okay. You can do the compiling then.
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>>4172163
almighty then.
sorry your chicken got cold, by the way.
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>>4172140
Also, to collect all of the abilities that everyone has gained:

Shu:

>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Murderous Flock
>Trypophilic Hive x1
>Spiritus Ex Testa

>Kadath: Psychica Spiralis x2

Gina:

>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Gladiatorial Swarm

>Kadath: Ivory Aeturnum x2 Kadath

>Use the Engine to strip and remove Verurteilung, get 5 points from completely refining Verurteilung, then Consume Lyudmila's Welcome and boost it to Lvl 5.

Rath:

>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Calcite Halo x2
>Alabaster Endoskeleton x1

>Kadath: Vulcan's Hand x2

Dorian:

>Repetition's Resilience
>Red Death x2
>Calcite Halo x2

>Kadath: Resplendent Thread x2

Amara:

>Murphy's Mandate x1
>Repetitions Resilience x1
>Joyous Many x1
>Oxygenic Artillery x1
>Occam's Edge x1

>Kadath: Hunter's Honor x1, Queen Crimson x1

Julia:

>Pilferer's Palm x1
>Murphy's Mandate x1
>Repetition's Resilience x1
>Elemental Digestion x1
>Calcite Halo x3
>Artisanal Appetites x3
>Sculptress of the Flesh x1

>Kadath: Carnivorous Carver x2

Francine:

>Murphy's Mandate x1
>Repetition's Resilience x1
>Asklepian Ward x1
>Calcite Halo x2

>Kadath: Gatling Fang x2
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>>4171500
>>4171503
Finalized Votes BHOP;
the ">>" are Kadath.

Total Points; 36 Points +2 Kadath per

Shu; 5+2 Points
>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Murderous Flock
>Trypophilic Hive
>Spiritus Ex Testa
>>Psychica Spiralis x2

Rath; 5+2 Points
>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Calcite Halo x2
>Alabaster Endoskeleton
>>Vulcan's Hand x2

Gina; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Neon Ascendant(2)
>Gladiatorial Swarm
>>Ivory Aeturnum(2)
>Replace x5 Verteilung with x5 Lyudmilas Welcome

Dorian; 5+2 Points
>Repetition's Resilience
>Red Death x2
>Calcite Halo x2
>>Resplendent Thread x2

Amara; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Ocams Edge
>Joyous Many
>Oxygenic Artillery
>>Hunter's honor
>>Queen Crimson

Francine; 5+2 Points
>Murphys Mandate
>Repetitions Resilience
>Asklepian Ward
>Calcite Halo x2
>>Gatling Fang x2

Julia; 11+2 Points
>Murphy's Mandate
>Repetition's Resilience
>Pilferer's Palm
>Calcite Halo x3
>Artisanal Appetites x3
>Sculptress of Flesh
>Carnivorous Carver
>>Carnivorous Carver
>>Elemental Digestion
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now im off for the night.
thanks >>4172163
for Arbitering. dont let the mistakes get you down either, you learn by doing and i certainly was off in some ways tonight too.

cheers lads.
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Anyways. we've got 4 teams of daughters that are coming to fight West Alpha....
Hang a tick.

Shu's Family: 8 (+4 Spiritus, 1 Tank, Fuzzbuzz, and Marco)
1. Shu (and Uzu, B’ni, Johanna, and Holly)
2. Gina
3. Rath
4. Dorian
5. Julia
6. Francine
7. Amara (and Fuzzbuzz)
8. November (and Marco and her Tank)
Midnight Crew: 4
9. Ace
10. King
11. Quinn
12. Jackie
Barbers: 4
13. Sugar
14. Sia
15. Rosa
16. Betty
Hyenas: 6 (+?)
17. Ivey
18. Razorback
19. Glinthorn
20. Marco
21. Blitzen
22. Anna
Others:
Tinker Tailor(?)

This ain't a simple battle. This is a fucking World of Warcraft World Boss Raid!

And Shu's the bloody Aggro/Taunt Tank!
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>>4172178
And however many Joyous clones Amara's bringing, as well.

BHOP, as a fellow GM, I feel for you, bud.
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>>4172178
you know, while im suddenly hungry and need to grill up a hot dog real quick, two things...

one, we still do not know exactly why November allowed Tinker Tailor to touch her Tank. maybe i read BHOPs message wrong, but felt like he was implying it was more than just how awesome the upgrades were that convinced her.

and on that note, just had an interesting thought... wonder what Tinker Tailor could do to the Guardians Hearts? my first guess would be something akin to adding in something like Shus 'constructs get smarter over time" augment, but might also make them more free willed, such as having to actually treat them well or they might stop wanting to protect you.
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>>4172180
And all of the constructs.

And you know what's the worst part?

We have to fight West Alpha in small skirmishes and small teams and put them on a constant rotation!

This is a Marathon boss fight!
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>>4172178
>>4172180
>>4172196
I think OP will need something more like Pic related for this fight. At least in quantity
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And I'm up. Let's see what everyone else voted on.

I would've liked for Shu to get Militia Machinations. It goes pretty well with her since she regularly puts out lots of constructs, and might not be restricted to the swarmling cap if the Hundred-Handed arms counted (Generators usually don't have construct limits). It would've been a nice boost for the Contender.

Maybe more people should've gotten Pilferer's Palm, to try and take away a maximum number of Alpha's relics in combat. I think it would've been good on Rath at least, due to the line about the violent return of the relic could be made into an opportunity. She could place explosive boils on the relic before it's returned to Alpha and detonate them in her face when it happens.

It's not that surprising that nobody took Iconoclastic Touch. That "first strike in combat" part makes its use pretty limiting, and Alpha is known for recycling relics and pulling out new ones. It just sounds like it would've been a waste of points for the upcoming fight.
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>>4172457
>tfw I went to sleep and dreamt of browsing this thread where anons somehow who spent about 40 posts while posting porn pics in a conversation topic in this very thread despite this being a blueboard. Never in my life have I woken up so confused.

Now that I had my rest and woke up and read this post and re-read Magpie's augmentation I now feel like kicking myself for not voting it because I just realized that we don't really actively send in our constructs as active attackers. We spawn Knightlings, banelings, hundred Handed arm constructs, platelings, rooks, grapplings... But we never really lose them in such frequency that we would have to spend actions to keep spawning more, not to mention our lvl 12 core ability that lets us technically go past our slot limit by way of attaching swarmlings that give buffs to our allies (al la suiting everyone up in platelings)
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>>4172457
>>4172592
it almost certainly meant minion constructs over all types, and regardless, even with the Contender Shu does not rely on relics enough to waste an augment on a relic booster. its also really not that good a boost, even if we can get it pretty high. its just not that good at all to take over anything else.

>>4172457
i guess i can see your point on Rath maybe taking Pilfers, but only on her. and even then, unlike Julia we had much less wiggle room on votes, and i think getting her anti-relic up with Vulcans in general aswell as her defenses was a better bet. we simply didnt have the voting room on her to make it worth taking, especially when Alpha basically can negate her boils mostly anyways so without getting her anti-relic up first anyways it wouldnt serve a purpose.
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>>4172170

Initial stat bonuses gained from CONSUME options and Stat Losses from ENGINE USE:

Shu
>Murphy's Mandate (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)
>Repetition's Resilience (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)
>Murderous Flock (HEALTH +300%, BIO +400%)

Shu's Total: HP +600%, HP Regen +70%, Bio +400%

Rath
>Murphy's Mandate (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)
>Repetition's Resilience (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

Rath's Total: HP +300%, HP Regen +70%

Gina
>Murphy's Mandate (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)
>Repetition's Resilience (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)
>Lyudmilas Welcome (HEALTH +140%, BIO +250%, BIO REGEN +50%)
>Verurteilung (Disassembled for 5 points): (HEALTH -80%)

Gina's Total: HP +360%, HP Regen+70%, Bio +250%, Bio Regen +50%

Dorian
>Repetition's Resilience (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

Dorian's Total: HP +180%, HP Regen +30%

Amara
>Murphy's Mandate (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)
>Repetition's Resilience (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)
>Occam's Edge (BIO +80%)

Amara's total Total: HP +300%, HP Regen +70%, Bio +80%

Francine
>Murphy's Mandate (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)
>Repetition's Resilience (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

Francine's Total: HP +300%, HP Regen +70%

Julia
>Murphy's Mandate (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)
>Repetition's Resilience (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)
>Pilferer's Palm (BIO +100%, BIO REGEN +20%)

Julia's Total: HP +300%, HP Regen +70%, Bio +100%, Bio Regen +20%

>>4172636
I do have a thought however considering Verurteilung. Do you think we should Remove the two Verurteilung levels from Amara and transfer it to Rath to hybridize it with Unrelenting Cold? We are at home base and have the Engine available. The only thing that Amara will be losing out on is a mere 40% HP from her 1940% HP, bringing her down to a nice 1900% Health.

Because what I'm thinking is that Currently Aside from Gina (who disassembled Verurteilung for Lyudmila's welcome), We have Dorian who Wields Verurteilung at lvl 3, but that aura has GREAT synergy with Red Death and the innate FEAR effects it has. However Amara has Verurteilung at lvl 2 which can't seem to find a place in her current kit.

There's been mentions of giving Rath Verurteilung so she could put it to really great use due to the synergies between the encroaching FROST stacks as well as the concentration breaking FEAR effects due to her up-close and personal fighting style.
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>>4172717
To be honest i wanted to have that on her to hybridize it with Queen. I want the fear inducing carnage symbiote so she can be a scary ninja cat girl with a scary sidekick
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>>4172717
i mean, im for it sure. Amara doesn't use it afterall. only thing is, it wont help here against Alpha, so trying to get everyone here to convince to do that may just be too much of a hassle to try and squeeze in, assuming we have voting time left that is.

honestly im not sure Dorian needs it too, least not by itself. the issue is, while the effects Ver gives off are good for Dorian, his specific playstyle makes it usually very difficult for him to actually apply them outside of when hes more stationary with Masque of War, which itself is situational. he just has trouble actually applying it and thus we wont ever really have a reason to level him up or remember to turn it on or utilize it on him, because trying to would break and interfere with how we usually play him.
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>>4172720
its a fun idea thematically but mechanically they really dont fit together nor do i think we would really actually do much with it.
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>>4172725
yeah i know...... It can still be used defensively but its probably something we will one day scrap....

I would not know for what however.
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>>4172724
and voting ended about an hour and a half ago... so actually right around the time i finished my two hour nap..
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>>4172728
so it was.
thanks, was cooking so couldn't check myself.
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>>4172724
Also, I can't help but think that Dorian needs at least one or two defensive abilities that can help him either take a hit or dodge like he's Neo in the Matrix when he has to stand still. The Paranoid Pendant would be a great relic to boost his dodge chance and aid his already insane agility, but right now Shu will need it for taunt-tanking West Alpha.

But if we do have time, we could duplicate the pendant with the forge depending on the Pendant's Tier in the Relic Tier list. A dodge chance + counterattack accessory relic seems like a high end Tier-2 Relic.
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>>4172737
sure, and yeah its probably Tier-2, but we'll see.
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>>4172736
>>4172727

Speaking of which, I wonder what sort of Ammunition Gina will use given that she now has a gun of her own.

Neurodarts? Acid Hollowpoints? Spines? Cancer bullets? Oh god. She can put a Cancer payload into her bullets now.
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>>4172748
depends. possibly nothing yet, as it depends exactly on how Magpie turned her Core into nothing but ammo. could be she meant more metaphorically, like she just made it useful as nothing but putting it into the gun, but could also be we just didn't role a component or hybrid or something thats missing from that equation.

probably is just the gun though can eventually take other abilities and turn them into ammo though yeah, but probably only abilities, not augments, so no cancer.
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>>4172754
>>4172748
actually, Cancer Payload is pretty damn interesting. i think its the only attack.weaponized augment we have seen. only Chitinous comes anywhere close to it in terms of strangeness for an augment, and BHOP already said Chitinous is really unusual and weird in alot of ways, so that does make me really curious about Cancerous Payload, because comparatively its even more an oddball than Chitinous.
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>>4172748
The gun will probably allow for the application of nearly all of her arsenal. Though until higher levels we might have to craft that Ammo at a forge.

>>4172755
Yeah shooting out the cancer at long range will be a serious boon to Gina. Yeah those Augments are really interesting and pretty unique.

>>4172748
>>4172754
Also sorry it took me a while to answer i was making dinner and that salad wasn't gonna clean itself up
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>>4172755
My guess is that it was actually because of the cancer itself. Cancer is out of control cellular mutation and replication. Kosi's biomass apparently copied the cancer over despite replacing every cell she had, so at some level her biomass must have gotten the idea of "this person's cells are supposed to mutate". And then that causes her biomass to develop in weird directions that twist it into atypical manifestations.
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>>4172755

>After numerous revisions, re-reads, and rewrites, the epilogue chapter is finally at a stage where I can move on to working on the other chapters.
>take a step back to see the chapter length
>32 pages. enough to break them into 4 sections of equal length enough to be their own chapter.
>Jesus fucking christ.
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(Gentlemen, I've been trying to push myself through the day, but I have to admit that between a terrible night's sleep and a rough week, I'm utterly exhausted. I'll be postponing the level-up post until Monday morning at around 10:00AM, Eastern time.)

(Thank you all so much for your patience, and I'm going to go take a blasted nap.)
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>>4173081
We figured. The West Alpha prep and the fight itself will be utter hell for everyone involved.
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>>4173081
Oh, I'm sorry to hear you've had a rough week, BHOP. Yeah, go take a nap, man. Get as much rest as you can, we all want you to be well. See you Monday, then.
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>>4173081
I understand, and thank you for being honest with us about it. Hope your weekend is relaxing, you both deserve and could use it.
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>>4173073
whew, thats one damn long epilogue. But looking forward to it.
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>>4173081
Stay safe and stay healthy. You may be either working at home or on an essential business, but your safety is #1
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>>4173081
hey BHOP (and others), this little thing just released today. more of a comedy-horror vibe, but still, it got some chuckles outta me. plus, its from an artist that if i hadn't found his horror stories on his other channel, id probably not of gotten into horror at all, so ill admit a certain bias too.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RgNz7ltN-Nk
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>>4174164
You are right its quite hilarious..... What the fuck is wrong with me

>>4173081
>I'm going to go take a blasted nap
Good thing OP. Stay safe and healthy.

Have a nice weekend.

>>4173081
>>4174145
>>4173165
>>4174164

Also my buddy got back to regarding the 10th Chapter...... He didn't find anything i messed up outrageously

So lets not beat around the bush here it is
ACT 2
Chapter 10: Kingslayer 04.04.2020 *NEW*
After fulfilling their first Milk Run the crew finds that they are not to welcome in Duisburg. The weather seems to agree and when they finally do make it to England they find someone in need.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YrN28-QOeFj_kUZ8HFATyTnX0J2btrWF9p69n38QLWU/edit?usp=sharing

If you find anything you think i should fix or that makes absolutely no sense please let me know
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>>4174252
Oh neat, they have their own titles now.
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>>4174252
>>4174164
>>4173165
>>4173081
>>4172720

Gentlemen, Chapter 3 of "Carter and the Town of Cradleton" is done.

Have a read:

"Carter and the Town of Cradleton" Chapter 3: Charlotte's Parlor

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SbVu5CYKJTw99lS8rLg4ZQurpq46RsFw/edit#

Author's note: My initial draft was around 7 pages, it then tripled in length after I was done with all of the dialogue and the conversation topics that I wanted to cover. I hope to get some of your feedback on what you think of Charlotte, the owner of the establishment.

I would appreciate any and all feedback regarding the latest chapter. any questions regarding future chapters in this story will have to be under spoilers.
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>>4176430
That cult sounds an awful lot like a slanesshi cult...... I know its not but still

Filthy degenerates

That ending..... Oh boy thats not gonna be good for our little Carter boy....

Also interesting about that announcement of Mother that she made.......

Well considering what Luna did to Ozmas....... yeah probably the reasonable thing to do

I like Charlotte i have to say...... she isn't gonna survive this is she
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>>4176430
overall very good. spoilers for spoilers;
while i wont lie that i caught on to what was happening pretty fast with the bar scene and the drinks, you still pulled it off splendidly and i was reeling with laughter. seeing Carter get serious was a nice touch to it all too. fun scene and joke, though Charlotte was still a mild ass for it.

the shift towards the more serious section was done very well and felt quite natural. the Luna Bonney section was a bit strange ill admit, not not in the 'luna strange' kinda way. but it wasn't overly jarring or distracting so its fine.

nice touch on Carter being smart enough to notice her threat and plan was to actually kill him, despite her trying to play it off as a joke. nice gesture at the end too with him giving her the sack, all fit nicely together. and the ending shifted to me sputtering with a bit of laughter too. know a door probably is more shock and pain than actual life threatening damage to a Crucible participant, but still, damn, poor Carter. OUCH.

as stated, very good job.

only possible minor complaint is Carter mentioning he was a virgin did feel out of place and weird. while it probably is a question he gets more than he would like, it still feels like given his overall demeanor and how you portray him too(not that i disagree with how you do, if anything the fact i agree simply adds to this) makes that feel like something he would still not casually bring up, given his more high class attitude and overall discomfort at such topics. but its not a big complaint, only just a bit jarring in the context of how you otherwise portray him.

only other thing i can think to say negatively is during the Luna segment, some of the wording felt really off and hard to read, and not in a way really implied to be because they were talking about Luna, or if so, was then maybe a step too far affecting its actual readability too much even given the topic. probably also why like i said earlier that part didn't feel as fitting overall maybe.

as for Charlotte because you asked, very nice character. fit here theme too spectacularly. on the surface id say shes not bad, but nothing special, but the fact shes using that as buildup and cover up to her more subversive and coy traits works really well and fits her theme well too. good job.

looking forward to more, you're doing good so far for sure. best chapter by far, though i think length does have its advantages so might not be the fairest comparison, as the other chapters did do what they needed.


also, i hope to get the newest chapter of the Pepperbox Gang done today, as a little self birthday present to myself. but as im visiting my parents later no promises, though i think thats mostly no promises to myself over anything, heh.
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>>4176430
>>4176718
oh, also the implications about the town and the girl he met on its outskirts now makes me kinda sad for her, which bravo on making me feel that way even mildly for a prostitute who sexually harassed someone. but desperation is a bitch, especially when its over something that wouldn't be starving to death, but you turning into a mindless monster in constant hunger pains and mental insanity you can never escape from. still though, girl, not good for your customer base to do that. flash some tittie or something to get a mans attention instead, or something.
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>>4176718
So its your birthday then?

Congratulations form Europe then
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>>4176729
indeed, and thanks.
not the best time for a birthday though, but ill make due. could be worse, much worse actually, all things considered.
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>>4175357
I hope that is not the only thing you found remarkable

So i hope you enjoyed the rest of the story as well
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>>4176807
I did. Nice fight with the Overlord. Sorry if the comment is sparse but I'm still reading Carter right now, so I'll probably revisit this later.
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>>4176813
Sure no problem i was just kinda wondering if there was nothing else to comment on. Because whats worse than having written something bad is having written something that will not be remembered
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>>4176730
(Happy Birthday, Anon! I hope you have a fantastic one!)

(I'm looking forward to catching up on everything today.)
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>>4176912
thanks, and hope your weekend was swell and finishes off swell too.
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>>4176730
Happy birthday, anon. I know what you mean, my birthday was recently too. It's kind of a depressing time to have a celebration. But like you said, things could be a lot worse for us all.
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Right, going back through these in reverse order. Was having computer troubles the past day or so, just getting around to properly reading this.

>>4176430
Well, that's just rude of Charlotte, insisting that Carter's a girl. Like, even if Carter's circumstances are rare you have to know that there are transmen in the Crucible, lady. It's 2022, get woke.

I like the spiders all clamoring for a drink. Adorable.

Okay, Charlotte's getting suspicious with her inability to serve a proper order. It's way too blatant for her to be pulling a trick, so has her mind been compromised somehow? Or am I misreading this and she's just that bad at running a scam?

No, she's just that bad at running a scam. Granted, Carter is that bad at recognizing it. Seriously, man, you didn't notice she was serving the spiders? I'm embarrassed for you both.

And the town was founded by Mara and Magpie. Because of course it was. At least the brothel thing was not Mara's idea. Granted, if stoner town was an idea of hers, I don't know why sex town couldn't be.

>You wouldn’t believe how many daughters there are out in the Crucible who falls on some part of the LGBT rainbow spectrum.
Yeah, it's kind of weird how gay the Crucible is, isn't it? I'm genuinely starting to wonder if it was a rule set by a past Mother. Seems like everyone in the Crucible is at minimum bi. Well, Dorian's straight, but the Crucible misgenders him so it may see him as a lesbian.

Oh, and there's a super-thirsty sex cult. That want to murderfuck any male they can find. Oh dear. Oh dear oh dear. And Carter with his own hangups about sexuality. Yeah, this is not a good town for him. Get out the moment you can, Carter. Please, I fear for you. But I know that this is just part three of a seven-part tale, so I know you won't.

And now they're bonding over how crazy Luna Bonney is. Well, that's nice for them.

>Being able to go through a day without having to face a hunger check is what I consider a good day.
This feels like a bit too meta a line. Maybe replace with "without having to struggle with the hunger", instead.

Oh, and Charlotte was going to eat him but the spider pals were too cute for her to go through with it. Good on Carter for recognizing that it wasn't a joke, I'm still embarrased for him not catching on to the drink situation sooner.

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>>4176947
thanks.
and oof, sorry your own B-day wasnt the best.

>>4176952
oh, and your computer is giving you trouble. damn sorry it sounds like you cant catch a break, even if its more the timing of the posts compared to actual time between them, but still.

it is strange, but it was confirmed i think straight girls still are in the majority. I think alot of it more has to do with option in general. you may not actually be bi or lesbian, but when theres nothing around you but other females... well... couple a lack of options with the deeper connections fighting for your life will already give, and I wouldn't be surprised if alot more than you would think are willing to ignore part of their feelings in exchange for the comfort of other parts. which might be unhealthy in the long run but even those who may believe in another route to beat the crucible cant be sure said way would involve everyone suddenly coming back, so it leaves even planning for the future a dubious cause not to comprise with yourself.

and yeah, Carter was slow on the uptake. if it was just she could read private communication channels, sure, you just dont expect it enough to think to look for signs. but she owns a web themed bar and is spider themed. id almost of expected her to understand them without the other ability. ill chop it up to the fact he had a rough day though... hah, this is actually the same day he met Luna technically, or witihn 24 hours of it. yeah, Carter probably should've gone for at least a watered down drink, sex-cult town or no, poor bastard.

also, i agree on the meta feeling of the wording there, but im pretty sure in the main quest 'game' terminology has been used, so i think it gets pass out for that. i mean, i agree we dont have to like it in either case, just that its not unheard of for Daughters to see and even feel certain aspects are 'game like'.
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>>4174252
>and oof, sorry your own B-day wasnt the best.
I mean, it wasn't terrible, but current events did cast a pall over it.

>oh, and your computer is giving you trouble. damn sorry it sounds like you cant catch a break, even if its more the timing of the posts compared to actual time between them, but still.
Nah, nothing too serious, just dealing with some major slowdown issues and connectivity problems. Nothing that couldn't be fixed, just really annoying to deal with.


>it is strange, but it was confirmed i think straight girls still are in the majority.
Was it? I guess it must be a selection bias, then, Shu just keeps running into all the gay girls. Every character whose sexuality has been mentioned has been into women. I think there probably is some element of situational sexuality going on for a lot of people, but the ones Shu meets are full-on queer.

>hah, this is actually the same day he met Luna technically, or witihn 24 hours of it. yeah, Carter probably should've gone for at least a watered down drink, sex-cult town or no, poor bastard.
You know, that is a good point, Carter did just encounter Luna a couple hours ago. Him being out of sorts is understandable. I withdraw my criticism of you, Carter.
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>>4176990
You should probably link to this post>>4176967

instead of my post regarding the 10th chapter
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>>4176995
God, sorry. I was typing up my comments on the tenth chapter of your story and must have gotten some things cross-wired.
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>>4177000
No worries

Though i am sorry about hearing of your computer troubles.
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>>4176990
ah, well glad to hear on both.

and yeah, though not sure the exact dos and dahs of it all. back at the monastery when Dorian got his fanclub, it was asked of BHOP i think, and he did mention they were still the majority. mind you, how big of a majority certainly is certainly something to call into question. id say probably jumped up to like, 1/10th? 1/8th? is clam lovers, over the like, less than 1% now-a-days. various reasons, some arguably hot takes but statistically backed up, probably make them alot more common than before.

that does bring up the fact once the crucible is over, if we do bring even just a fraction of the population back, alot of hearts may be broken in both directions.
once the existential and mental horror of it all subsides of course.
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>>4174252
I really like the little biomass tokens the girls pay with. In the quest we tend to see biomass as an abstracted resource, having it be distinct objects is fun and creative.

Likewise, I really like this almost metropolitan area they're in. Lots of industry and people building on a grand scale instead of the individual work we see in our region of the Crucible. That's always been one of the most interesting parts of your story, to me, that it's set in a part of the world where people have built back up in a more organized fashion. Really changes the tone of things, to have the characters be interacting with a real society instead of just settlements.

Lydia bantering with Mina about flying drunk is cute.

Mugging in the Crucible just seems really ill-advised, though. Everyone here is an armed killer. The risk to reward ratio doing this in a crowded area just seems too high, especially when there is a very strong incentive to prevent run-away violence. Having a more organized society has made some people bold, I guess, make them forget the situation they're in.

Wow, Rara really getting bloodthirsty in response to attempted violence against her. Understandable, but still a rather chilling moment. The Avenger's commentary is not helping.

The new abilities are pretty cool. I like Mina's especially, should go well with the bird theme.

Feels like the Overlord segment starts out a bit rushed. There's a lot of tell instead of show, there, things like Ironskull chewing out Annika could stand to be written out. The Amalgam turf war is really cool, though. And the dragon has a piece of Avenger in it? Interesting. All in all, very solid fight scene.

Aww, sleepy Avenger tired from a big meal. I should not find that thing cute.

And new British friends! With London apparently being full of Titans. That's got some potential for interesting scenes. Nice place to end it, good little cliffhanger.

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>>4177064
. In the quest we tend to see biomass as an abstracted resource, having it be distinct objects is fun and creative.

I felt that it would be appropriate since while that BIO is sin storage it might as well be energy. But once it enters our reality or whatever happens with it it will need to be frozen in some way which is what we then see as their body parts/constructs they manifest


Likewise, I really like this almost metropolitan area they're in.

Yeah Duisburg is a large center of commerce since they can make ships to cross the oceans and are relatively well located to take advantage of such things as traderoutes for people searching for materials or specific abilites..... Yes they provide services to allow for the rearrangement of abilities using their engine. Also judges in matters of disputes that both sides do not wish to use violence on but can not settle any other way.

that it's set in a part of the world where people have built back up in a more organized fashion.

As a German i feel we have a very strong desire for order and hierachies.... so i thought that with that mindset organisations would pop up pretty quickly and could even sustain comparatively large settlements


I should not find that thing cute.

You are correct you shouldn't. Its a very dangerous thing..... That will murder anything and anyone calling it cute ;)


Feels like the Overlord segment starts out a bit rushed

I admit it was very difficult for me to find a better transition


Mugging in the Crucible just seems really ill-advised, though.

They mostly relied on mugging people that had just made big purchases at the market and were either alone or attempting to leave the city.
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>>4177064
The new abilities are pretty cool.

Which ability specifically i take it you mean the Fatalis Wrath. Yes?
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>>4177139
That is cool, but I actually meant Conqueror's Gaze. Enhanced vision, plays nicely into the bird of prey thing.
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>>4177161
ah okay. i was just trying to confirm

it is also why Mina wanted it.
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>>4177015
>>4176952
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>>4176615

First off, reading your feedback makes me very giddy and happy to see that you enjoyed the chapter overall.

And second: Holy shit I never knew my latest chapter would spark such a discussion.

Now for my response to some of your comments. spoilered of course. Due to the length it will be a 2-post response.

First of all I'm glad that many people here liked Charlotte. She was originally a one-off daughter who would provide exposition for Carter and establish the true dangers of the town (that being almost every resident in Cradleton is thirsty as fuck), but as I kept writing, she developed a personality of her own and just took off with her quirks. As you've all figured, she can be a bit of a sadistic troll/tease. And as Carter had stated, she tends to "play with her food", which naturally led to her getting nervous and shy when Carter went on the proverbial offensive. She's can be very terrifying when she's in her element and plays for keeps by holding all the cards in her many hands, but as you saw, a few choice words from Carter can almost instantly disarm her of her fangs. It also helps that she thinks Carter's cute.

For Carter to admit he's a virgin to Charlotte, on top of revealing his true gender. Yes, it feels like it's a bit jarring, but I also felt that given the location he's currently in (a settlement that's essentially one giant whorehouse), he would preempt the virginity question to prevent further teasing from the bartending spider. Not that it stopped Charlotte from teasing Carter an opportunity to have sex with her just to enjoy his flustered flailing at his sexual inexperience.

For the Drink order shenanigans, Carter's first glass (when Charlotte served him Everclear) was her best opportunity on ambushing Carter when he had least suspected it. Charlotte had an ability doubled the effect of any current poison based substance, which would've made the already high proof everclear even more toxic. He would've been a goner had he actually drank it. Except Carter knew his drinks due to his experienced palette and wanted to make sure his drinks weren't spiked. He may be frazzled and desperate for a drink, but he still understands the situation he was in so he decided to be cautious. So when Carter tested his drink to see if it was actually water and saw that his drink caught fire, Charlotte's plan fell apart. The subsequent drink servings was Charlotte trying to improvise and scramble for fallback plans to keep him around while waiting for a better opportunity to strike. And when Carter showed no signs of terror or fear under Charlotte's Death glare conduit ability, she couldn't convince herself to follow through with attacking even after her hand has been fully revealed. In essence, Carter sprung the trap, but Charlotte lost her nerve halfway through and admitted defeat.

1/2
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>>4177229
>>4177015
>>4176952
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>>4176615


As for why the Everclear dialogue exchange. I wanted to replicate a gag that I saw on youtube as seen here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XxcxskVPSwc
Obviously if Carter fell for the gag as seen in the video he would've been toast, but I still wanted to include it to both a) see if someone got the reference. and b) still try and evoke the same comedic atmosphere.

The Luna Bonney segment: I see that some of you have said the text warping and altering certain words and phrases was a bit too jarring. To that I say that I'm sorry about that. I couldn't help myself.
The segment where Carter asks about Charlotte about Luna Bonney and her subsequent reaction to it was to provide exposition to Carter that he's not the only one who has to suffer through Luna's madness.

Short story where Metal Maw and Glow Bug had the misfortune of suffering Luna's Lunacy (the rabbit was originally trying to ask for directions in a very sideways roundabout way), was an attempt to shine a bigger spotlight on how dangerous Luna's reputation is through Metal Maw's Hivephone call with Tyrian Rex, but I felt that a simple phonecall to the leader of one of the factions and having a request for a vacation approved by simply namedropping Luna Bonney couldn't really encompass the sheer hazard potential that Luna posed to everyone. Thus having Ozmas make a global announcement to have everyone stay away from Luna after Luna made her lvl 5 choice. And the story that Charlotte heard about where Luna basically wrecked the local physics was actually one of Ozma's idle attempts to contain her in a local temporal prison bubble. Ozmas managed to lock away the Omnicore daughter and the daughter with the broken Tindalos power, so it would make sense for Ozmas to try her hand at caging the mad rabbit. It went horribly wrong of course, hence Charlotte's tale and the reason why Luna Bonney still roams the globe to this day. The which led to next best thing Ozmas could reasonably do which is basically tell everyone on the planet to stay away from her. If Ozmas tried to lock Luna's twin innate cores, then her foreign augmentation would kick in and infect the Crucible's operating systems from the Admin console, which is why certain words and subject matter that has relevancy to Luna's existence tend to get the altered text that you would sometimes see.

To chime in on your discussion on the brothel and sex cult's existence related to the Crucible's population demographic with Heterosexuals, the LGBT spectrum, and the speculation of the many straight girls who are heartbroken.
There's a reason why the brothel was founded and it's similar to the reason why the spiritual leader of the cult made the "Mythical Male" prophecy. But that's to be explained in future chapters.
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>>4177229
>>4177231
glad you enjoyed out comments.

yeah, you did good with Charlotte and Carter both. looking forward to seeing you write more of both of them.

also, ill most certainly have the next part of the Pepperbox Gangs story done before i meet my parents for my birthday, so, glad for that. not the most exciting chapter though, ill admit, but hey, not all need to be.
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>>4177229
>>4177231
I am definitely looking forward to the next chapters.

I really want to know what happens next to Carter. And i am not just saying that as someone who likes to make fictional characters suffer

>>4177251
Looking forward to it. I am also excited to see what Hijinks they will get up this time. I really like their story and how messy things can get
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>>4177251

As for Chapter 4 of "Carter and the Town of Cradleton", I should be able to crank it out within a week or so if my pace keeps going steady as is. It's already go part of the framework done. I just need to fill it in with events that flow naturally. However, to make it better fit the situation that Carter will suffer through in Chapter 4 the title of the chapter has been changed to: "Naked and Afraid"
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>>4177259
.......................... That title.................

Poor poor Carter........... what is that cruel Anon doing to you

Its a good thing Lydia would not be there.. she would pass out from embarrassment of seeing a man nude
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>>4177257
thanks, and glad to hear.

>>4177259
whew, oh boy, poor bastard. he better get something good outta all this-
-no not like that, i know what you all were thinking!

jokes aside, looking forward to it.
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>>4177259
>>4177251
>>4177161
One Question for you anons.... In which tier would you place this Relic?

LUCERNA AETERNAM: A small crystal roughly the size of a human's palm. It gives of a cool white light and smells like Ozone. Just holding it sends small jolts of electricity into the holders body. This relic needs to be attuned to a user with Generator powers and then fuses with their sternum/closest available equivalent. Once attuned the user may put part of their Maximum BIO permanently into the relic to receive a buff to their speed, initiative and Strength in proportion to the BIO spend. This BIO can be redrawn at any time at the cost of 1 Act to increase the Maximum BIO Pool of the User by the withdrawn amount. If the user dies while attuned to this relic all stored BIO is lost and can not be recovered even should the user be revived and become attuned to this Relic again. If the Relic is instead removed while the user is still alive the BIO is not lost and a new user can draw out the BIO stored within. Just as you once fed to grow stronger so do you now feed this BIOReactor to grow even more.

I hap personally placed it in tier 3 but after reading it again i have become unsure of my assesment.....
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>>4177277
neat relic.
i think it fits with Tier-3, albeit probably a bit lower end. but it kinda works like the Sui sets in some ways, so yeah, Tier-3.
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>>4177259
Oh. Oh dear.

...I've been saying that a lot when it comes to Carter, haven't I? Something about the poor guy just brings it up. Stay safe, Carter.

>>4177277
I'd say Tier Three. It's got a lower cap on its benefits than the Sui armors, since it's sacrificing a resource that doesn't regenerate, but it's in many ways a safer resource to sacrifice since Bio is less vital than Health.
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>>4177283
thanks i was kinda doubting myself while doing some cleanup and housekeeping to keep the Act 2 version of their character sheets up to date.


>>4177283
>>4177259
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>>4176912
And i stumbled upon this relic which i also forgot to grade... like completely forgot to grade

>NIGHTMARE CRADLE: A last desperate attempt of a daughter to save herself from what she believed to be oblivion. Intended as a measure to keep herself safe from being consumed by the fleshscape in case of her death at the hands of an Amalgam. This might have worked if it hadn't been the Crystal Overlord that finally ended her. Corrupted from its original purpose to keep her safe until someone would be willing to give her shelter has this marbled stone turned into a prison of unending torment and pain. The Daughter inside had been dominated and enslaved to the Crystal Overlords will. Attuning to this relic while it is in this state will grant the user immunity against Phantasmal Conduit Fields until the spirit inside has been overcome by them.

Like even after reading up on the Relic tiers i am completely unsure where to place this
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>>4177300
it also is not too bad since Lydia broke through a Thousand % MAX BIO during the last Chapter.
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>>4177301
Is that a corrupted version of Hope's Last Cradle? WHAT HAVE THEY DONE!?
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>>4177301
Ooh, that's a nasty little trinket. Maybe Tier Four, actually? Druid's Death-Knell, the anti-construct grenade that Yurei used against us, was Tier Four. I think that establishes a pattern of consumable Relics that temporarily hard-counter entire classes being Tier Four.
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>>4177301
whew, thats horrible.
possibly Tier-4 actually, due to making half of Phantasmal Abilities just worthless. though its still only specific abilities, so still iffy.
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>>4177314
It was supposed to be a safety net made by a daughter that feared she would be lost if she should ever become consumed by an Amalgam........ She hoped the Amalgam would ignore it and send out an SOS Signal to ask for help from nearby daughters.

It didnt work out as intended........

>Hope's Last Cradle?

Is this a reference i am not getting?

It is more a Soulgem intended as a temporary Storage vessel until she could be rescued though the Overlord nipped that in the bud pretty quickly

>>4177317
Did you overlook it in the actual Story because the Crew found it after the fight and Rara nearly passed out because of it.....

>>4177317
>>4177320
I think i will write it down as Tier 4 since the Anti-Hive Mistress Grenades were also Tier 4 and those were also very specific
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>>4177331
Hope's last cradle was a relic that I made for Bhop to use as a in-quest key story relic as a fall back plan-B option for new game plus should this quest fall to pieces somehow via bad end or if Bhop decides to make a Body Horror Quest Sequel.

It works by taking one of our family members (most likely Amara) and putting them into Crucible-proof stasis while bhop cleans up and wraps up the statlines and notes and sets up the stage for the next crucible cycle.
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>>4177331
>Did you overlook it in the actual Story because the Crew found it after the fight and Rara nearly passed out because of it.....
I must have, my apologies. Yeah, re-reading it, I somehow got it confused with the crystal that got fed to the Avenger, thought that's what they were so upset about.
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>>4177342
ah okay

I had completely forgotten about it.....

>>4177344
Selene was very vocal about not feeding Avenger close to anything valuable.

And Rara vomited once she touched her Jack to the Nighmare Cradle. Its on page 30 the lower half
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>>4176912
right well, its finished. glad I got myself to do it for sure.

Finding Ones Trajectory;
>On their Journey to find a new goal, the Pepperbox Gang runs into another group in the middle of an execution, and come to have a less physical type of battle...

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FyiteeqpvD8G_XcGQsLJHJcAuyCzlF-mmvd53fADxC0/edit?usp=sharing

overall i like it, though certainly is a more... serious type of thing. which im unsure if it doesn't just come off as a bit silly because of it, but we'll see.
hope you all at least do enjoy it, even if its not the best one i've put out.
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>>4177380
>>4176912
oh, and i already added it to the Fanworks Doc i linked you to earlier BHOP, so no worries on your end.
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>>4177380
So Inquisitors....... with a hard on for killing Neuromancers...... Damn i hate people that will kill other people just because of some arbitrary reasons. While they had good cause this time i would not be surprised if they hadn't kille dozens of Neuromancers who were just going about their days trying to survive

And regarding their reasoning. Its fucked. Like seriously. If you want to work towards a brighter future you have to be strong in the darkness and that means not bending your knee to schmucks like the society of Humanism......

When Mina gets to America she and her friends will have fun with those schmucks from the Society

And they will seriously try and get the old constitution?

Well they are certainly ambitious. And i would not be at all surprised if that thing got turned into like a Tier 5 Relic....

The entire thing was enjoyable i have to say

Certainly looking forward to how they will go about this plan to remake Merica or a new America
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Finally caught up after more than a week of archive binging. You're doing a prime exemplary sort of quest, BHOP. The whole thing just feels like a novel, always got my attention with every twist and turn and the occasional bamboozle. Characters are very fleshed out, if you pardon my pun. I can immediately see them in my mind's eye as soon as they were described. Keep it up!
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>>4177264
>>4177273
>>4177300
He'll be fine. The question you should be asking instead is "How long can he hold out?"

>>4177462
And hello to you sir! Welcome to the Crucible. I hope you also took the chance to enjoy some of our fan-submitted content.
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>>4177439
yeah, the Inquisitions got some morals twisted up.

thanks for reading, and glad you enjoyed it.

>>4177462
welcome to the Quest.
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>>4177462
Hey. Welcome to the Quest
Grab a drink and some medicine for your blood pressure. They are right over there next to the fan submitted content

>>4177473
No i am asking the question of how twisted of an individual you can be to condemn him to such torture. Just curious if I am dealing with another GM that likes to makes characters suffer.

>>4177481
I will also now head to bed Good night anons

>>4176912
Good Night OP
If you find time to read the latest chapter i would appreciate feedback and i have added the link to the Doc i made available for you to use
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>>4177487
night.

>>4177473
im not sure those two statements go well together.
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>>4177487
For your question of whether or not I'm a GM. I have never GM'd. At all. And I suck at rping on the tabletop in person. I'm just very good with my prose whenever I write. As such, I can take on a different persona with my prose, such as the prose when I write this post.

*ahem*

Let me be clear, I am very aware of what I'm putting Carter through. I myself have an easy time putting myself in his shoes. Enough to get a good grasp of where his limits lie and what pushes him over the edge.

Keep in mind that Carter lives in the world of the Crucible, where far crueler fates can happen to daughters anytime anywhere. If I were to be that cruel, then I would not have asked for permission from the other anon to write an entertaining story about the boy's accidental adventure in a town where he does not belong, and would have instead written a snuff story out of the blue without the permission of the boy's father that would be sure leave you and he enraged at my audacity.

I can be sadistic when provoked, and I have entertained such fantasies of sadism whenever I'm in a vengeful mood. But this tale exists because I wrote the premise in a playful mood as I wished to see the boy go through the highs and lows of life and come out wiser for it. When I step back and look at the broad strokes, I find it less a tale of angst and tragedy and more a coming-of-age story where I try to question what masculinity means in a world such as the Crucible. Tales of sadism and angst will take a man and torture them to a point where it leaves them a hollow husk in the end, For the climatic moment where the fire of hope inside a man's eyes are snuffed out like a candle in the dark.

This is no such tale.

Begone. Do not question me further about the matter of cruelty. Leave me to my writing and let me take you and Carter through the ride that has yet to come in this tale. In this small cycle of the Hero's Journey for Carter in this tale, he has yet to reach the belly of the beast.
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>>4177462
(I certainly intend to keep at it, and thank you so much for posting! I'd also heartily recommend the works of several of the other posters here, as their works are fantastic.)
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>>4177380
I think in a different context I'd agree with the Inquisition's stance. Mind control powers are pretty terrifying, and just having them makes you suspect. Not to the degree of automatically killing anyone with telepathy, but enough that I'd be very uncomfortable with them.

That said, this isn't that context. It's the Crucible, everything is horrible. Shu's preferred method of killing things is to burrow parasitic insects into their flesh and have them erupt in explosions of hazardous chemicals. And we're one of the good guys. I don't think there are any non-terrifying powers. In this context, I think that what you do and who you do them to and why you do them is far more important than the potential for temptation. Because we've all got the potential to do monstrous things if we were tempted.

Though that scroll does make things simpler. I guess it's a Skintalking-based Relic, has some of the psychometry that Amara is capable of. I wonder how much context it gives. Would it make the Eagles consider Gina an acceptable target, since her list of recent actions would have things like "exploded peoples' brains"? Given the Inquisition's zealotry, I'd be very suspicious of anything that could potentially be twisted to justify their actions.

On the other hand, these girls actually seem fairly decent once you get past the murder. Friendly enough, and willing to debate their position in good faith. Maybe they've just had some really bad experiences.

>“Let's go steal the Bill of Rights, shall we girls?”
This better turn into a Nick Cage movie. A cannibalistic lesbian monster Nick Cage movie.
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>>4177902
>Maybe they've just had some really bad experiences.
well, as implied Gin at least had some rough patches in the past. I'll leave any idea about the rest up to the imagination for now.

>Though that scroll does make things simpler.
its very resistant to meddling, however while it draws the events from the Crucible, the context if gives for them it draws from the person being tested is naturally much more suspect, just by the very nature of what that means.

>Would it make the Eagles consider Gina an acceptable target
Gin would just because she is a Neuromancer, but in the context of her power itself, actually we never use Neuromancy past the stun at the worst, so honestly theres really no justification there they could make Scroll wise.

actually, thats kinda ironic. supposedly the Halo makes it alot safer for Gina to try and use the more dubious side of Neuromancy, but the implied still existing risk still makes her(through us) use it just about the least of any Neuromancer out there(that even has the option). a kinda iffy instance where the necessity of seeing things as a game brings up the question of if Gina herself would or should actually be so against it in actuality i suppose.

>This better turn into a Nick Cage movie. A cannibalistic lesbian monster Nick Cage movie.
hah, while indeed there was such a reference a bit, despite me usually avoiding those, not sure i planned to go exactly that route. mostly because i just cant see a hidden fetch quest maze work like in that movie, at least not in the context of the Crucible that already has that going on in some ways. we'll see though. certainly wont be just so simple as finding what they're looking for right where they want it to be.
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>>4177678
I think you may have overreacted to what i have written. I do not want such a cruel story for Carter. And i have already written a worse fate.... Just look at the NIGHTMARE CRADLE man.

So if i offended I am sorry. I know tones like Irony and how serious one is, carry very very badly on the Internet


or i am getting trolled who knows.... except for you of course
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>>4177380
I kind of wonder why exactly the Inquisition has problems with Skintalkers as well. I see that class of part of the versatiles with Humoral Paladin and Flesh Artisan, and it's not exactly known for affecting the mind like Neuro and Conduit unless one has some specific spell words for it. Maybe due to a potential for body hijacking?

It did make me think that they would have a problem with Hera due to her past before joining the Pepperbox Gang. And it makes me wonder if they have a policy for people that used to be bad but changed, or if they don't care for that distinction. Probably the later.
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>>4178580
actually thats a hold over of an old idea i had for them i forgot to take out. been fixed.
originally the idea was the fact skintalkers tend to be more 'in tune'with the crucible itself, so they were gonna see them as basically 'natural traitors' and stuff, but that idea didn't pan out as much.

and lets just say, its a good thing they didnt know Heras past.
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SHU - LEVEL UP

>>TRYPOPHILIC HIVE (Lvl 15): As your swarm evolves so, too, do the fruits of the choice you made when you were just beginning to carve your legend into this forsaken world. You now possess the passive ability to detect the truth behind what other Daughters say around you, and at no cost you may hone your focus on a target you're engaged with, allowing you to 'view' their motivations and innate self-perceptions, granting you greater insight into your allies (and foes) than ever before. Finally, at a cost of 200% BIO and 1 ACT, you may force a conversation check with a target that would be otherwise unwilling or unable to communicate with you in such an open manner, though this action may only be performed once per target, per Vein. No target is immune to this ability, though you fear that such an invasive method is only a prelude to something even more egregious...(BIO +60%)

>>SPIRITUS EX TESTA (Lvl 6): Now, when crafting a Spiritus Shell, you may choose two levels of resistance to grant your construct as opposed to one, or you may forgo granting the shell any resistances using this method in order to render the shell completely immune to a single damage type. (BIO +40%, BIO REGEN +10%)

>>PSYCHICA SPIRALIS (Lvl 2): The protective field you summon now extends its effects to all allies within its area of effect. Additionally, when your or an ally's Neurotic Halo counter triggers when in the AoE of the SPIRALIS, the resultant counter attack's damage in increased by 30%. (HEALTH+ 60%, BIO+40%, HEALTH REGEN +20%)

>>PSYCHICA SPIRALIS (Lvl 3): To stand one's ground with Defiance is something your family's become notorious for, and perhaps it's for that very reason that this power is evolving the way it is. When in the SPIRALIS' AoE, neither you nor anyone eligible for the field's boons may be removed from its zone by hostile means. If you or an ally would be dragged, blown, teleported, etc. out of the SPIRALIS' doman against your will, the forced movement instead ends at the field's bounds. (HEALTH+ 60%, BIO+40%, HEALTH REGEN +20%)

>>MURDEROUS FLOCK (Magpie’s Core - Hive Mistress, Lvl 1) - (HEALTH +300%, BIO +400%)

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE (Flesh Artisan Augmentation) - (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>MURPHY’S MANDATE (Flesh Artisan, Lvl 1) - (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)

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RATH - LEVEL UP

>>CALCITE HALO (Lvl 5): When the user teeters on the razor’s edge between life and death, the Calcite Halo truly shines. The first DEATH SAVING THROW the user makes in combat is now an automatic success, while the second is made at advantage. Additionally, if the user is stabilized then they have a 10% chance of springing back into action at 1% HEALTH. (HEALTH +100%, HEALTH REGEN +50%)

>>CALCITE HALO (Lvl 6): This stalwart Halo now grants an additional level of SLASHING, PIERCING, and BLUDGEONING resistance. What’s more, the wearer also gains a level of BLUDGEONING resistance, rounding out the physical damage types that it will eventually allow the user to weather with ease. (HEALTH +40%, HEALTH REGEN +20%)

>>ALABASTER ENDOSKELETON (Lvl 6): One can only take so much before a breaking point is reached. Now, Rath gain the ability to prime a REVERSAL on her subsequent turn, re-routing her defensive boons into a singular offensive boost of equivalent power that lasts through her next turn before reducing her defensive gains from this skill tree to ZERO for the remainder of combat. (HEALTH +50%)

>>VULCAN'S HAND (Lvl 2): Now, when Rath causes a foe's Relics to recoil, there is an additional 10% chance for Relics effected by this skill tree or its components to not merely reverse their effects, but shatter entirely. Addiitonally, any Relics that detonate this way deal scaling HEAT damage to the holder equal to their Tier. (HEALTH +80%, BIO +40%, HEALTH REGEN +20%, BIO REGEN +10%)

>>VULCAN'S HAND (Lvl 3): No longer content to merely protect her Relics from destruction, any hostile attempts to damage Relics in Rath's possession will allow her to automatically retaliate with a free attack, at no cost to her. (HEALTH +80%, BIO +40%, HEALTH REGEN +20%, BIO REGEN +10%)

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE (Flesh Artisan Augmentation) - (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>MURPHY’S MANDATE (Flesh Artisan, Lvl 1) - (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)

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GINA - LEVEL UP (1/2)

>>NEON ASCENDANT (Lvl 6): The capabilities of Gina's Neurotic Counter expand, granting her TWO uses of this ability per combat. Additionally, if Gina would reduce a foe to 0% HEALTH with this counter-attack, then a single use of the Neurotic Counter is refunded, though this refund may only trigger once per combat. (BIO +50%, BIO REGEN +30%)

>>NEON ASCENDANT (Lvl 7): The domain of the mind is one Gina is comfortable with, though her effects are anything but. If Gina would bring a foe to a state where they would make a death saving throw with the effects of her Neuromancy, they continue to make saves as normal but Gina gains the ability to command their unconscious form with 1 ACT per turn until they either stabilize or die, forcing them to assist her and her allies in the current combat. (BIO +40%, BIO REGEN +20%)

>>GLADATORIAL SWARM (Lvl 7): Now, for every movement zone that Gina traverses with the effects of her Swarm, she recovers 50% HEALTH & BIO per zone. Additionally, underground movement has been boosted by 1 zone, to further assist with this regeneration. (HEALTH +40%, BIO +30%, HEALTH REGEN +10%)

>>IVORY AETURNUM (Lvl 2): Attacks made by the Aeturnum's blades now ignore two levels of SLASHING resistance, with their chance to inflict a critical hit increased by 10% per successful hit inflicted in a single turn, though this boost fades at the end of Gina's turn. (HEALTH +150%, BIO +150%)

>>IVORY AETURNUM (Lvl 3): When Gina scores a critical hit with Ivory Aeturnum's blades, she is now allowed an extra attack with the same ACT. What's more is that this additional strike may also trigger a critical hit, though its chances are reduced by 50%. (HEALTH +100%, BIO +100%)

>>LYUDMILA’S WELCOME (Calcite Armorer/Flesh Artisan/Generator Triple-Hybrid, Lvl 1): While not her Core power, the ability that granted Magpie the use of her trademark rifle is nevertheless one of the most potent weapons in her lethal arsenal. At a cost of 200% BIO, you may construct a rifle capable of inflicting extreme piercing damage at LONG range, with its efficacy decreasing the closer the target is to the sniper, with each shot posing a cost of 50% BIO. Fully capable of being loaded with custom ammunition like many ballistic-based Relics, this specialized Armorer weapon will only grow stronger, eventually becoming a devastating construct to rival the strongest Relics. One has to wonder why it wasn’t used against you… (HEALTH +140%, BIO +250%, BIO REGEN +50%)

>>LYUDMILA’S WELCOME (Lvl 2): Though accurate, there's always a chance that the Lyudmila's user may miss their intended target...and the gun simply won't have that. If a round misses the target, it will ricochet off the Fleshscape and hurtle towards its original mark with a 75% chance to hit. If it connects, this deals 20% of the damage it would have dealt on hit, though this hit may not trigger a critical hit. (HEALTH +100%, BIO +210%, BIO REGEN +30%)

(Continued)
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>>4178710

GINA - LEVEL UP (2/2)

>>LYUDMILA’S WELCOME (Lvl 3): Swift hands bring swift ends, as the first round fired by her per combat may be done as a free action and at no BIO cost. However, this free attack does not yet trigger any of this skill tree's critical hit or ricochet effects, though that may change with time. (HEALTH +140%, BIO +250%, BIO REGEN +50%)

>>LYUDMILA’S WELCOME (Lvl 4): Gina may now infuse a round fired by Lyudmila's Welcome with the effects of another skill tree's or augmentation she possesses, spending an amount of BIO equal to 100% times the skill's level, or 500% BIO if she's imbuing her shot with an augmentation's effects. Additionally, critical hits scored by Lyudmila's Welcome promptly ricochet the round at another valid target, automatically striking them and dealing 20% of the damage the original target suffered. The ricochet effect may trigger multiple times for the same fired round. (HEALTH +140%, BIO +250%, BIO REGEN +50%)

>>LYUDMILA’S WELCOME (Lvl 5): A single shot, a single strike, a single death. Now, each round fired from Lyudmila's Welcome possesses a 1% chance to instantly reduce a target to 0% HEALTH, ignoring effects that would allow the target to remain standing in combat. What's more is that targets brought to Death's Door this way automatically fail their first three death saving throws. (HEALTH +140%, BIO +250%, BIO REGEN +50%)

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE (Flesh Artisan Augmentation) - (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>MURPHY’S MANDATE (Flesh Artisan, Lvl 1) - (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)

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DORIAN - LEVEL UP

>>RED DEATH (Lvl 12): Inspiration's struck the young painter, and no one will ever be the same. When Dorian shifts into one of his available forms, they are automatically Inspired. Additionally, when Dorian reduces a foe to 0% HEALTH with a critical hit, the overflow damage is added to the next critical hit that Dorian inflicts. This effect may stack an unlimited number of times. (HEALTH REGEN +40%, BIO REGEN +30%)

>>RED DEATH (Lvl 13): If Dorian reduces a foe to 0% HEALTH via this skill tree's Lvl 5 ability, he temporarily gains a boost to his HEALTH and BIO equal to the fallen foe's own totals. Though this boost is merely temporary, it may trigger multiple times per combat, albeit with each subsequent boost (HEALTH REGEN +30%, BIO REGEN +20%)

>>RESPLENDENT THREAD (Lvl 8): When Dorian evades a foe's attack, he now automatically makes a sever chance against them is they are within his melee range, targeting the offending limb that struck out with ability or Relic. Duck, dodge, dive... (HEALTH +30%, BIO +10%)

>>RESPLENDENT THREAD (Lvl 9): ...Decapitate. Now, when Dorian has robbed a foe of their arms and legs, the next sever chance may be directed against their neck (or neck analogue) with a 20% Bonus to severing. Though robbing a foe of their head isn't nearly as lethal as it was before the Crucible, for most such a theft would prove to be incredibly troublesome, to say the least. (HEALTH +30%, BIO +10%)

>>CALCITE HALO (Lvl 5): When the user teeters on the razor’s edge between life and death, the Calcite Halo truly shines. The first DEATH SAVING THROW the user makes in combat is now an automatic success, while the second is made at advantage. Additionally, if the user is stabilized then they have a 10% chance of springing back into action at 1% HEALTH. (HEALTH +100%, HEALTH REGEN +50%)

>>CALCITE HALO (Lvl 6): This stalwart Halo now grants an additional level of SLASHING, PIERCING, and BLUDGEONING resistance. What’s more, the wearer also gains a level of BLUDGEONING resistance, rounding out the physical damage types that it will eventually allow the user to weather with ease. (HEALTH +40%, HEALTH REGEN +20%)

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE (Flesh Artisan Augmentation) - (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

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AMARA - LEVEL UP

>>THE JOYOUS MANY (Lvl 9): Now, if at least 20 Joyous are active they may combine their biomass into a single towering entity, the massive construct gains a bonus to its HEALTH, BIO, and combat statistics, thouhg it has half of the ACTs that the component constructs would have. Proving to be far more resistant to damage and status effects than any individual Joyous, this colossal hivemind may also serve as a considerable form of protection for your young ward, as Amara may situate herself at the center of the construct at the cost of a single ACT, shielding her from harm as she pilots her 'mega-me'. With their powers combined, they're...still Amara, but a more sizable threat than they might be otherwise. (HEALTH +20%, HEALTH REGEN +10%)

>>OXYGENIC ARTILLERY (Lvl 5): Precision-shooting wasn't this power's strong suit...until now. At a cost of 200% BIO and one closed nostril, Amara may make a focused, ranged strike at LONG range, directing her explosive firepower at a single distant target with a high chance of knocking her target prone. (BIO +60%)

>>HUNTER'S HONOR (Lvl 8): First you see her...then you're dead. At the start of combat, the first attack Amara makes allows her to dash at incredible speeds towards her target, enabling her to cross up to three movement zones with a sword strike that is an automatic success. Additionally, this opening strike consumes no charge stacks, but may freely benefit from them as if they had triggered. (HEALTH +40%, BIO +30%)

>>QUEEN CRIMSON (Lvl 9): Queen Crimson’s desire to ensure its wielder remains alive at all costs now manifests as a selfless sacrifice. When Amara would be reduced to 0% HEALTH by a foe's attack or effect, Queen Crimson activates, automatically spending 300% BIO to absorb the blow entirely at the cost of Queen Crimson going dormant and it's effectsbeing unable to be used for the remainder of the combat. (BIO REGEN +10%)

>>OCCAM’S EDGE (Calcite Armorer Augmentation): This simple, yet effective tool for a Calcite Armorer increases the piercing and slashing damage dealt by all constructs crafted or spawned by the wielder, ensuring that whether by blade's edge or needle's point, victory will be swift and merciless (BIO +80%)

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE (Flesh Artisan Augmentation) - (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>MURPHY’S MANDATE (Flesh Artisan, Lvl 1) - (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)

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FRANCINE - LEVEL UP

>>ASKLEPIAN WARD (Humoral Paladin/Neuromancer Hybrid Core, Lvl 1): At a cost of 300% BIO instead of the original 200%, the field generated by Asklepian Ward now has a 30% chance to randomly heal a status ailment suffered by each of the allied Daughters within the ward's area-of-effect. Additionally, if this enhanced BIO cost is spent to generate a superior field, then the affected Daughters' HEALTH gain also increased by an additional 50% HEALTH. (HEALTH +200%, BIO +280%, BIO REGEN +40%)

>>GATLING FANG (Calcite Armorer/Generator/Humoral Paladin Hybrid Core, Lvl 2): No prayer is needed where this hellish spray is concerned, as Francine is now able to spend 400% BIO to hose down the entire battlefield in a shower of gunfire, dealing slightly less damage to all effected foes than a more focused spread would deal. (HEALTH +100%, BIO +160%)

>>GATLING FANG (Calcite Armorer/Generator/Humoral Paladin Hybrid Core, Lvl 3): Now, allies caught in the Gatling Fang's line of fire are healed for 20% of the damage that it would deal to foes affected by the same barrage. Additionally, enemy projectiles that would enter or leave the Fang's area-of-effect have a 25% chance to fail, as they find themselves shredded by Francine's merciless barrage. (HEALTH +80%, BIO +140%)

>>CALCITE HALO (Lvl 3): The Calcite Halo’s defenses are a motile, changing thing. Now, repeated strikes from the same target suffer a stacking 10% damage reduction for each hit inflicted on Dorian, though this penalty fades at the end of the turn. Additionally, when Dorian suffers a single large hit, the Calcite Halo bolsters him and prevents forced movement from heavy strikes. (HEALTH +60%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>CALCITE HALO (Lvl 4): The touchstone ability of the Calcite Halo expands to now boasts a total of TWO immunity slots, and also gains the ability to drop one immunity per turn as a free action at the end of the round. (HEALTH +60%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE (Flesh Artisan Augmentation) - (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>MURPHY’S MANDATE (Flesh Artisan, Lvl 1) - (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)

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JULIA - LEVEL UP (1/2)

>>SCULPTRESS OF FLESH (Lvl 11): Blow for blow, she'll match them all. Now, when trading blows in melee, for each blow Julia recieves her chance of applying STACKS inscreases by 15%, ensuring that anyone who dares to wade into battle against your resident sculptress will face dire consequences for their error. What's more, her STACK maximum is increased by another 2, for a new maximum of 17. (BIO REGEN +20%)

>>ARTISANAL APPETITES (Flesh Artisan/Gluttonous, Hybrid Lvl 2): Now, every time a melee Relic is used against Julia, she automatically deals damage to the Relic equal to half the damage she recieves. Additionally, if this results in the offending Relic being devoured, then she automatically makes a free melee strike against her attacker. Foes beware...Julia bites the hand that feeds her. (HEALTH +30%)

>>ARTISANAL APPETITES (Flesh Artisan/Gluttonous, Hybrid Lvl 3): When Julia devours a Relic of a given Tier, her damage dealt by this skill tree against that Tier of Relic increases permanently by 10%. Additonally, HEALTH and BIO gains from this skill are boosted by one-fourth. (HEALTH +30%)

>>ARTISANAL APPETITES (Flesh Artisan/Gluttonous, Hybrid Lvl 4): A ravenous yearning, satisfied swiftly. When Julia first lays hands (or mouths) on a foe's Relic in combat, she automatically makes a free attack against it, though this free attack may be turned off on any given turn. Additionally, each Relic that Julia consumes allows her to stave off the Hunger to a small degree, though this ability has diminishing returns, thus rendering it ineffective at long-term Hunger management. (HEALTH +30%)

>>CARNIVOROUS CARVER (Lvl 6): The thrill of the hunt, the howl of dominance. At a cost of 300% BIO, Julia may issue a wild howl, targeting a single foe with a primal challenge. Both Julia and her target suffer disadvantage in attacks against anyone else, drawing each other into a single-minded confrontation...one that Julia herself is uniquely poised to emerge victorious from. (HEALTH +60%, BIO +50%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>CARNIVOROUS CARVER (Lvl 7): The visceral, pragmatic nature of predation comes to a head with Carnivorous Carver's most recent evolution. When Julia downs an enemy, the fallen foe is struck again, prompting another death saving throw as Julia tears a revitalizing chunk out of her enemy, restoring 300% HEALTH and 200% BIO. Additionally, the blood crystallizaton that is granted by Cernivorous Carver's Lvl 5 ability now grants a 10% boost to attack and defense per each wound siphoned, instead of a mere 5%.(HEALTH +40%, BIO +30%, HEALTH REGEN +10%)

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>>4178721

>>ELEMENTAL DIGESTION (Lvl 5): Julia's palate deepens, allowing her TWO levels of resistance against her devoured elements instead of one. Additionally, her resistances now last for up to FIVE turns before going on cool-down. (HEALTH +80%, BIO +100%)

>>CALCITE HALO (Lvl 3): The Calcite Halo’s defenses are a motile, changing thing. Now, repeated strikes from the same target suffer a stacking 10% damage reduction for each hit inflicted on Dorian, though this penalty fades at the end of the turn. Additionally, when Dorian suffers a single large hit, the Calcite Halo bolsters him and prevents forced movement from heavy strikes. (HEALTH +60%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>CALCITE HALO (Lvl 4): The touchstone ability of the Calcite Halo expands to now boasts a total of TWO immunity slots, and also gains the ability to drop one immunity per turn as a free action at the end of the round. (HEALTH +60%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>CALCITE HALO (Lvl 5): When the user teeters on the razor’s edge between life and death, the Calcite Halo truly shines. The first DEATH SAVING THROW the user makes in combat is now an automatic success, while the second is made at advantage. Additionally, if the user is stabilized then they have a 10% chance of springing back into action at 1% HEALTH. (HEALTH +100%, HEALTH REGEN +50%)

>>PILFERER’S PALM (Flesh Artisan/Vitruvian Hybrid, Lvl 1) - (BIO +100%, BIO REGEN +20%)

>>REPETITION'S RESILIENCE (Flesh Artisan Augmentation) - (HEALTH +180%, HEALTH REGEN +30%)

>>MURPHY’S MANDATE (Flesh Artisan, Lvl 1) - (HEALTH +120%, HEALTH REGEN +40%)

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The last of Magpie's biomass slithers beneath your skin, and with a sigh you turn to face your family, reunited once more for a macabre meal.

"A good recommendation as always, Julia." You commend, gesturing for she and the rest of your allies to take the round-table of seats at the center of the room, with Gina generating more on the spot out of the ground's supple biomass in order to accomodate your party's greater, if temporary, numbers.

"I understand that w-we're about to deal with W-West Alpha?" Your kind artist begins, sitting down and patting the seats next to her with pointed glances to both you and Dorian.

"That's the idea, yeah. I'm not sure how much Dorian explained on the way over, but the gist is this..." You reply, taking a few moments to explain the high points of both your plan and Alpha's abilities...that you know of, at least.

"O-okay, I know Ivey and the Hyenas would be w-willing to help." Julia adds, thumb and forefinger on her chin as she weighs what you've told her. "I'm g-glad that everyone's here to lend their support...h-have you gotten anyone else to chip in?"

"Not yet." You admit. "As for right now, this is it...we're hoping it's enough."

"Damn right it's enough." Jackie chimes in from the seat across from you, a confident smirk slashed across her face like a leering razorblade. Behind her, you catch Rath's suspicious eye, her citrine gaze narrowed at the back the other girl's head. You have to admire their confidence, especially given what just happened with Magpie...but you and Rath both know that what you're about to deal with is on a different level entirely, and as you turn your focus back to Jackie, you intent to te-

Doubt. Fear. Anxiety.

A bluff, in the hopes of inspiring morale. Be bold. Be brave. Be Jackie, the leader of the Midnight Crew.

It's all I can do. It's all I did, those long hours in the sick ward, trying to keep everyone's spirits up. Is this why my power's like this? Is it all just a con, am I lying to myself just as much as I'm lying to Shu, to the girls that look up to a loser like me? Am I really that pathe-

You blink, the rogue train of thought continuing to run its course in Jackie's head, the Midnight Crews' leader none the wiser of your unbidden intrusion. Rubbing your temples, you will away the other strands of concern that begin to worm their way into your subconscious, the snippets that your mind keeps trying to latch onto in a storm of worry and thought as your newest power begins to aggressively manifest.

You will your Core to hold back, even as you worry where it will lead...

>>Take a moment to catch up with Julia, and maybe ask her one or two more specific questions.

>>Allow Julia a little while to say hello to everyone, while you attend to the Contender.

>>Take Rath aside, and continue your conversation from earlier.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next three hours. If you catch anything off about the level ups that might’ve been lost in the shuffle then please let me know, and also if my wording is less clear than I'd intended. I hope everyone had a good weekend, and that your day is off to a good start.)
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>>4178724
oof, to be honest not a fan of the new Hive effects at all. think its a level and route best left ignored honestly.

Vote;
>>Allow Julia a little while to say hello to everyone, while you attend to the Contender.
that, or Rath if folks would prefer we save the Contender level-up vote for later due to scheduling reasons, but i do feel we should let Julia catch up with everyone, then catch up ourselves once things calm down a bit.
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>>4178726
Alright OP

>>4178719
>>CALCITE HALO (Lvl 3): The Calcite Halo’s defenses are a motile, changing thing. Now, repeated strikes from the same target suffer a stacking 10% damage reduction for each hit inflicted on Dorian

Francine not Doiran

>>ASKLEPIAN WARD (Humoral Paladin/Neuromancer Hybrid Core, Lvl 1)

We need the Second level not the first one

>>4178722
Same Calcite Halo problem

>>4178724
>>Allow Julia a little while to say hello to everyone, while you attend to Rath and continue your conversation from earlier.

Let her catch up with everyone while we talk a bit mroe with Rath and Julia can then come to us when she feels she is ready
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>>4178733
i think Wards is correct in its description, he just gave it the wrong level indicator. its certainly not the first level we already have.

i can also correct a simple name change easy enough as im making V4 of the Character Sheets.
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>>4178726
No wait forget what i said about hte Ward>>4178733
It is just showing hte wrong level in its status but it is the Seconed level
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>>4178705
I'm immediately thinking that Alpha is herself vulnerable to the communication check.

BUT I don't know when we'd use it on her except for as she's dying, since preferably we'd want to ambush her and not give away our position. Perhaps if she ambushes us instead as get a bit of room to recover from being caught flat-footed and let everyone reposition themselves, or as she's about to finish off an ally to try and stop her.
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>>4178724
>>Allow Julia a little while to say hello to everyone, while you attend to the Contender.
Yeah, let's get the Contender level-up out of the way early, so we can get into planning our assault with full knowledge of the options available to us.

>>4178730
I'm more okay with the second effect than the first. Forcing someone to at least try to talk instead of going straight into combat seems less of a violation to me than listening in on their private thoughts. It's not mind control, just requiring them to hear you out before they do anything else. That's not so bad. And I think it may actually be useful when dealing with Alpha. After we punch out her Forge Cores she's going to go berserk, probably make for a really dangerous final stage as she burns through her remaining resources frantically. But if we could get her to talk then instead of fight, get her to go peacefully like we did with Yurei's Gashadokuro form, that would make things much easier. Also, from a purely selfish perspective convincing Alpha to power down would mean we could safely take the Generating Halo off of her without having to jump through hoops to disable its security, and I want that for Rath and Dorian.
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>>4178735
yeah i noticed that.... and corrected it. It just felt so familiar to me that i thought we already had it. and a cursory glance seemed to back my suspicions up but in the end I was wrong
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>>4178724
>>4178730
amending vote to;
>>Allow Julia a little while to say hello to everyone, while you attend to Rath and continue your conversation from earlier.

>>4178740
i horribly highly disagree. forcing someone to do anything, regardless of the reasoning, is still forcing them to do something. thats absolutely horrible and robbing them of their ability to choose to talk to us or not. i will always, 100% vote against using that on anyone. it goes against everything our group has said and built up they stand for.

the only time it may be applicable is on amalgams or hunger mad daughters, where its ability to communicate shouldn't be possible anymore for several reasons, but that ability does not exclude from its use.
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>>4178744
>>4178740
It could be interesting for use to open an Amalgam up for Amara to negotiate with it..... Having some of the smarter Amalgams on our side could be quite interesting.....
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>>4178726
Also i hope you had a good weekend OP
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>>4178744
>i horribly highly disagree. forcing someone to do anything, regardless of the reasoning, is still forcing them to do something. thats absolutely horrible and robbing them of their ability to choose to talk to us or not. i will always, 100% vote against using that on anyone. it goes against everything our group has said and built up they stand for.
Maybe I'm not understanding it correctly, but it sounds like all it's forcing anyone to do is stop for a moment and listen instead of attack us. It's not preventing them from fighting us, it just pauses things for a bit. That's no worse than our Neurotic stun abilities, it's just that we're using the moment of reprieve to talk instead of shoot them. I can see plenty of scenarios in which that's a valid and moral option, not just against the Hunger-mad.
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>>4178752
and we only use the stun once combat has already been initiated. this is trying to corral their choice in the first place. if they want to fight us, they want to fight us. its not our place to make them listen to us or not, and forcing them to is a blatant and disgusting violation of both our stance to let people choose, and their freedom to choose.

we may aswell not be so worried about the cult if we're just going to force people to listen to us anyways. if we're gonna do that, we cant complain about the cult, at that point we're implying we're willing to enforce it, by saying our word is above everything, and must be listened to regardless of what you wish.
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>>4178759
There's a difference between forcing someone to listen to you and forcing someone to obey you. This power doesn't do anything to compel obedience, if we present an argument that our opponent doesn't agree with they can go right back to attempting to kill us. All this does is allow us to interrupt an enemy that might be too irrational to otherwise communicate with and make our case. I'm not saying we should just use this on anyone. But there are lots of circumstances where it would be a moral option, not just against Hunger-mad Daughters. There are plenty of things that could keep a Daughter from being able to make an informed, rational decision about whether they should be fighting us. Geasa, or rage, or mental illness, or broken cybernetics like with Alpha. This is giving them more choice, not taking it away, because it enables them to better make intentional decisions.
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>>4178770
no, there isnt. forcing someone to listen to you is forcing someone to obey you, otherwise they would not be being forced to listen to you.

it is, outright, an immoral option to use on anyone not basically incapable of making their own decisions.
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>>4178777
I'm okay with it due to the part where it allows the option of dialogue with those that are usually *unable* to talk, as in it's normally not an option even if a part of them might be receptive to the action. >>4178745 has pointed out the potential to use it on Amalgams and there's of course West Alpha more immediately that this could potentially help out for.
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>>4178784
that was me who pointed out the Amalgams, if you would bother to look at what that Anons responding to. and thats also you ignoring even in the message you're replying to and others yes i have said things like Amalgams are an exception.
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>>4178777
>no, there isnt. forcing someone to listen to you is forcing someone to obey you, otherwise they would not be being forced to listen to you.
Oh my god, fine, you pedant. It exerts a tiny amount of control over them, no more than our Neurotic stun does. Do you want to get rid of the Neurotic stuns from our arsenal, too? Because I figure that if it's unacceptable to make someone stop fighting us for a moment so we can try to talk to them, it's definitely unacceptable to make someone stop fighting us for a moment so that we can stab them. Death removes their agency and free will much more thoroughly than making them talk to us does.

>it is, outright, an immoral option to use on anyone not basically incapable of making their own decisions.
Yeah, that's what I've been saying. Interrupt an enemy that is incapable of making rational decisions as to whether to fight us.
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>>4178791
context matters asshat. the stun is a purely offensive measure only usable as part of combat, and only made to be used once combat is started. this is trying to circumvent them being allowed to start a fight at all, in order to force them to listen to us, when we have no right to make anyone listen to us, regardless of the circumstances.

the possibility of death is their choice by choosing a fight. their willingness to listen to us however, is not ours to decide for them, not matter the circumstances.
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>>4178795
Yes, context does matter. In the context of people who are not already attacking us, this power is useless. Because then we can communicate with them normally. It's only got value against targets who have already attacked. And even then, I think we'll probably take cues from context to decide whether or not to use it on them, it will probably be clear in most cases whether they're making a decision with intentionality. No one's saying that we should use this power to try to subvert the free will of rational actors, because it can't do that.
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>>4178724
Those thoughts of self-doubt. That's a big OOF.

Mental thought intrusion and the ability to glean the truth from them is uncomfortable, but forcing a conversation check on a target who's not ready nor willing to talk? that's just plain mean.

I've had to suffer from the latter part of this in my actual childhood where my mother calls me down for a "talk" and then spends one entire hour lecturing me about what she thinks I'm doing wrong with my life. Each little secret she pries out of me felt like she's intrudes a little further into my private life and like pulling out my teeth.

It's been happening for so long that I just can't do anything because she just constantly shuts me down whenever I want to talk back and leaves me with absolutely no room for a counterargument. She's turned me basically toothless in the ability to have a decent serious verbal conversation, and those mental scars still affects me to this day.
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>>4178810
I'd agree that if the power can be drawn out that long and force an extended conversation, it would be wrong to do. Forcing someone to stand still while you browbeat them is horrible, yes. I will concede this point. I'm sorry your mother did that to you. I don't think that's possible with this power, though, and I'm not suggesting we should even try.
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>>4178805
wow, you're a daft.
people have and can be a foe without being an active hostile, aswell as refuse to talk or listen to us without being attacking us. the ability very clearly makes it clear we could use it on, say, Uzu, when she just refused to listen and tried to get us out of her room, for example.

if they're already attacking us, there no point to using it if we dont sense hunger in them. if they dont want to talk, they dont want to talk, and we have no right to make them, combat or not.

and yes, it both can and you are saying we should use it for that. hypocrite.
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>>4178810
yeah, both halfs of that are very fucking bad. hopefully we can just keep that first half off aswell, otherwise we'll need to forge a relic to prevent that. gleaming emotions is kinda iffy, but alot less dubious. usually you can get that just from tone and body language anyways.

prying their hidden thoughts out without permission, regardless of their mental state, is wholly wrong.
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>>4178814
it can be possible anon, that's why the mental intrusion in gleaning the targets thought is there to pair with the forced conversation check. Glean the target of their deepest darkest worries, their secrets, their fears, and then force a conversation check to make them face their weakness and leave them no counterargument to defend themselves with a very long winded speech as they try to defend themselves while you mercilessly browbeat them with precision counterpoints after precision counterpoints that prey upon their hidden thoughts and doubts that leaves them toothless and unable to talk in the end.

That's how it can happen. That's why I don't think we should even use it to force conversation checks like that.

The moment we use that ability, that's when the kind motherfigure that Shu's built up for herself becomes this smothering Matron who knows your secrets and will mercilessly sting you where it hurts when she opens her mouth to talk.
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>>4178724
Ach, kind of torn between talking to Contender and somehow reassuring Jackie. The way Karma's been buzzing hot lately worries me.
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>>4178818
>the ability very clearly makes it clear we could use it on, say, Uzu, when she just refused to listen and tried to get us out of her room, for example.
And that would have a different result from us talking to her normally? No, seriously, I'm not getting it. Maybe there's something I really don't understand about this power. It's a single check, and there's no guarantee of success, so wouldn't it be exactly like what happened when we talked to her otherwise? We'd say our piece, she'd pass her conversation check to ignore us, and then it would be over.Or am I getting this wrong, what am I missing?

>if they're already attacking us, there no point to using it if we dont sense hunger in them
No, there are other contexts in which we could have good reason to use it. Against someone we believe to be controlled in some way, or someone who isn't acting rationally but not in the sense of the Hunger. Like the plant Daughter way back when, the one who had Alzheimers. Getting through to her would have shortcut the difficulty in dealing with her and been completely valid since we could tell she was not acting rationally. In the current quest, I'd like to give it a try against West Alpha once we've damaged her enough to remove her emotional inhibitors, see if we can calm her down. It might not work, but I'd like to try.

>>4178822
Fair point on using the telepathy to best target insecurities, I hadn't thought of that because to me using the telepathy invasively was without question wrong to do. Honestly, even the passive truth-telling function is kind of skeevy, that's got the potential to really screw up a lot of social interaction if even benign lies get seen through. Or if a person is trying to avoid thinking about something they're uncomfortable with, and so avoids talking about it, that's another way this power could be invasive.

But if I'm understanding it right, we still can't do anything extended with this power. It's a single check, we can't force people to stand there and take it while we browbeat them until they give in. We'd have to get in all of our emotional needling in a single check. Possible, especially with the telepathy as you point out, but it's not going to be drawn out like that. And I hope that the ability doesn't develop in a direction that would enable us to bombard people with conversation checks until they break down. That would not be good.
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>>4178834
we cant console Jackie without revealing we have heavily impeded on her privacy. it also wouldn't make sense contextually, as shes not outwardly at all acting like she needs it, and pulling her aside would be kinda suspicious.

as for the Contender, it can wait a bit i think, while we catch up with Rath and/or Julia.
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>>4178724
>Allow Julia a little while to say hello to everyone, while you attend to the Contender.

>>4178818
>>4178814
Horrible ethical applications of our lvl 15 power aside (the ability to force your target to engage in a "talk"/lecture and have the listen to you is a horrible experience for those on the receiving end), I do think we should have a talk with Jackie at some point. Probably after the fight with West Alpha.

Even if our truth seeking intrusion kicked in at the latter half, we did notice that there was something off with Jackie as we saw Rath cast an eye of suspicion at Jackie's boast.

I think that's why Jackie requested that duel with Shu. She wanted to make be sure and engage in the duel to try and reassure herself that what she's the best choice as the leader for her crew, but after seeing how her crew fared against Spiraling Fear, the Hexane Statues, and now Magpie. I think she's having serious doubt and self-confidence issues and questions her leadership.

I think I can even empathize with her. What sort of leader is she if she can't keep her crew mates safe at the end of those battles? Why did they all entrust her with duel techniques that mainly benefit her and her only? Those are the thoughts that are swirling in her mind right now.

I think Jackie's having confidence issues, but she's also envies Shu's ability to lead and manage a group of daughters far larger than her midnight crew.

For that, I want to find a time slot to have honest talk with Jackie about leadership. I want to tell her that even though we may SEEM like a better leader, we still face the horrible issues of doubt and confidence. But it's also because we have a hive mistress core whose powers that even WE doubt its ethical use as one of its aspects aggressively manifested much to our chagrin and made us very uncomfortable about its use. We're even afraid of using it as we feel like it's a line that shouldn't be crossed. Jackie may be the leader of a relatively small group of daughters, she may not have a Hive Mistress core like ours, but she's got one thing going that Shu really doesn't have. Time and the weight of friendship. She has the luxury to spend more time with her crew to get to know them better, and forge such strong bonds with each other that even when she stumbled, her crew can still place trust in her leadership and help her pick herself up.

As for Shu/us on the other hand? we were literally born about what? one month ago?, we didn't have the time and luxury to spend those pre-crucible times hanging around together chatting and laughing and getting to know each other before the shit hit the planet. We're basically riding the wave of our own success, and are pretty much leaning on much of our core to keep it together, but now a new unsettling facet of our core has manifested and we're now having doubts again. Sure Shu gets to enjoy the bigger payoff, but the weight Shu has to carry is much bigger. And when she does kick the bucket...
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>>4178836
what? it would literally be forcing them to stand there and listen to us, over having a choice. its 100% different. its forcing them outright to talk to use even if they dont want to, via a power of wills. in a normal conversation, they could regardless just walk away. if we succeed in the check, they do not have that option, even if they still do not inwardly wish to. its not literally us convincing them to stand and have a conversation, its forcing an ability on them that if a die roll is passed, they essentially are frozen in place until we have said our piece.

it is 100% stripping of their will if they fail to overcome the ability.

>No, there are other contexts in which we could have good reason to use it.
not really no.

>Against someone we believe to be controlled in some way
falls under my repeated exemption of them literally not being able to communicate under their own will, and even then its worthless, as they have no free will so the conversation is worthless.

>someone who isn't acting rationally but not in the sense of the Hunger.
still robbing them of free will, and still useless if they're already that insane.

>Like the plant Daughter way back when, the one who had Alzheimers.
still both impeding on her free will, and would involve both knowing ahead of time, and hoping it would work and not make things worse. he issue wasnt communication, it was sanity. a conversation isnt going to help that, the only reason we had any conversation with her was she just so happened to cycle into a moment of clarity that we had no control over.

>I'd like to give it a try against West Alpha once we've damaged her enough to remove her emotional inhibitors, see if we can calm her down.
nope. even Alpha doesn't deserve us to force that on her. not to mention, she is still very clearly in control of herself. if shes still after us without her cores, thats on her.
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>>4178724
>>4178841
changing votes to.
>Take Rath aside, and continue your conversation from earlier.
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>>4178841
Yeah, that does sound plausible. I wonder if Jackie's subconsciously modeling herself after Shu. She's started forming her swarmlings into a suit of armor like Shu does, and she's picked up an evolving alien Relic weapon (though I sincerely doubt it's Hexane) like Shu wields. I think there could be some attempt to base herself off of us, be the leader that she sees Shu as, and so the duel is not just "how do I measure up" but going even further to "how do I measure up to the original".

Talking with Jackie about her worries about leadership is a good idea. I'm not sure where we could slot it in, though. Maybe after the Alpha fight, commend Jackie on her job leading her team and use that a segue in to discuss leadership styles. How she's awesome, and her team clearly trusts and respects her and they do amazing together, and we're sorry that we keep bringing them into scenarios where we have to punch above our weight class and don't give them the opportunity to show off. That might help.
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>>4178836
>But if I'm understanding it right, we still can't do anything extended with this power. It's a single check, we can't force people to stand there and take it while we browbeat them until they give in. We'd have to get in all of our emotional needling in a single check. Possible, especially with the telepathy as you point out, but it's not going to be drawn out like that. And I hope that the ability doesn't develop in a direction that would enable us to bombard people with conversation checks until they break down. That would not be good.

No, it's possible anon. All we would have to do is to keep that truth/motivation/self-perception-gleaning field active long enough to gather all of their secrets and then, use that information to force a single conversation check by giving them an armor piercing question that hits all of their buttons.
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>>4178841
i really dont think we can properly have that conversation with her, not based off us invading her privacy to even think to do it.

especially id Jackie is that worried about being a leader, she will react VERY negatively to us bringing forth her doubts, especially through such a dubious method. she also probably would not like another leader, one she clearly compares herself, treating her like that. Jackies the type that needs to prove to herself she is worthy, not have other console her about if she is. us trying to bring her up to our level or us down to hers will just make it worse. she'll either see it as confirming her suspicious and us simply being as bad as she is, or us try lying or exaggerating to make her feel better. with again, the source of us wanting to talk to her at all being dubious and ruining any chance of her listening at all.

best we can do until she gives an outward reason to suspect anything, is without being suspiciously long winded encourage her somehow.
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>>4178851
>>4178852
>>4178846
So can we all agree that the power should only be used in very specific situations and never to try and control other people that are in command of their faculties?

While i could have added my own salt it would have served no purpose since i agreed with only using it very sparesly


>>4178858
She might let something slip during the duel as things get heated up. At least enough for us to bring it up to her
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>>4178864
i mean, everyone does, its just what that actually means that is being argued.

>She might let something slip during the duel as things get heated up. At least enough for us to bring it up to her.
possibly. i will say i am now worried losing the duel might break her. it feels like its more than just her competitive nature. or well, now it does. still technically could just be that, but much more likely now its her trying to prove shes the better leader.
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>>4178846
Okay, so what you're saying is actually kind of my point. There's no good reason to use this on a rational actor, the positive outcomes would be redundant with ordinary conversation. We can talk to (or talk at, in the case of people who refuse to acknowledge what we're saying, like Uzu back then) people normally, it doesn't require a power to force it. But using a power to force it would have negative outcomes, because it would feel like an awful violation and betrayal of trust. So I'm saying that there's no good use of this power on a rational actor, it's at best unnecessary and more likely to be harmful. I think we agree on this, yes? It's the definition of "rational actor" that we're getting hung up on?

On that topic, I guess I just don't see why you've pegged the Hunger at the level of rationality you have. All the other circumstances you've placed at either not having enough rationality for communication to work even with the power or having enough rationality that using the power would be an excessive affront on their dignity. What makes the Hunger different, in your view?

>>4178852
Yes, that's what I said, get all the emotional needling in in one go. But I don't want to use the telepathy part at all, so the setup for that is something I wouldn't even consider.
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>>4178851
>>4178858
The honest talk with Jackie will be difficult I will agree on that. It boils down to the timing and whether or not she's willing to have that honest talk.

Prior to meeting Shu, Jackie was basically riding the high as a leader and was being a bit of an ass.

But after Spiraling Fear and the hexane statues, Jackie began having self-confidence issues so she's trying to model herself off of Shu as a way to support her self and power through her doubts. Finding someone to be your role model is fine, but it also leads them astray if they try to become their role model instead of being inspired from their role model to become their own person.

Jackie will need that honest talk at some point.

>>4178878
>i will say i am now worried losing the duel might break her.
I also agree on that. That duel may become one of the break points in Jackie's development. But it's also a good time to have that honest talk with Jackie at that point.

>>4178868
You're a monster for giving us such a powerful ability. Like giving us anons a nuke with no strings attached and waiting to see what we do with it.

>>4178864
Anon, it's not about if we should use that power.

That power is an ability that we should never use. it's an ability that forces a choice upon others. it forces them to engage in a conversation that we can take full advantage of. But it's also a power that completely goes against the philosophy that we and Shu ascribe to: Freedom of choice.

The moment we use it, we cross a line that we can never return from.
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>>4178899
>Jackie will need that honest talk at some point.
Maybe after the duel we can lead into it by talking about her new sword? Ask her just what it does, why looking at it makes our brain bleed the Elder Speech. That can get into a conversation about what she's been doing differently lately with her fighting style and her team's fighting style, round from there to a more general discussion about how she leads the Crew.
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>>4178910
The problem is the results of the duel. That's what worries me. If we win. Jackie might take it hard on herself and not be receptive to talk. If Jackie wins, she might suspect Shu of pulling her punches.
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>>4178899
>it's an ability that forces a choice upon others.

Yes Absolutely.

It is an ability we have little control over. At least the hearing lies part and all that

This is like telepathy that is constantly on. Have tried not looking through an open window when you can not close your eyes or turn away?

That is this power. Shu will wield it unless we devolve our Level 15 ability again. Which is something we could do.

And i completely get what you mean but the only real choice we do have here is either devolve this ability, never use its active components and try and block out the other part as much as possible or get a relic that blocks that ability like the one that blocked the cord we had with Isabelle

because no matter how you slice it this power already takes away the choice of people and that is the choice of not disclosing their thoughts to us. This power makes it impossible without a Will and self control made of titanium to resist Shu's mind reading powers
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>>4178898
>It's the definition of "rational actor" that we're getting hung up on?
what you just said is not at all what you were actually implying, but sure, whatever.

>What makes the Hunger different, in your view?
because a hunger mad Daughter we have been told is considered basically an amalgam in alot of terms, meaning unlike many of those other situations normally trying to talk to them literally may be impossible. ill admit im just assuming based off the wording it would allow us to talk to Amalgams at all(and thus Hunger mad Daughters), but it sounds like it would possibly. again, ill admit it very much depends on how this actually works on Amalgams, which we really dont know.

>>4178899
>Jackie will need that honest talk at some point.
sure, im not disagreeing, im just saying we have to come up with a better excuse and approach it like a minefield. Jackie already didn't at all seem like the type who would take well to a conversation like that. i do not at all think hidden underlying self-worth issues will make her more open to it, especially if its obvious we had no reason to bring it up but a highly invasive ability.

>>4178916
>>4178899
>>4178910
yeah, that duel just became a bit more dubious. kinda wishing we had waited on lvl 15 now actually.
though mind you i dont think we should pull our punches or anything. wouldn't do either side any good. we probably just have to hope shes not weighing as much on the duel as we think she might.

hrm, best i can think up of is, we could simply ask her why she wants the duel. it wouldn't be overtly suspicious either.
worse case, she just has an excuse, best case, she lets something slip to work with.

just a "hey, why DO you want to duel me? not like either of us have anything to prove, we're friends afterall. I dont really care whos stronger. i mean, hey, neither one of us would be here or where we are without those around us, so i guess im just curious why you want it is all."
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>>4178916
I think that Jackie and Shu will probably give the other enough difficulty that no matter who wins, it feels like it was an earned victory. Either Jackie wins and we give her such a hard time that it doesn't feel like we could have thrown it, or Shu wins and is visibly tired enough that it clearly wasn't something casual for us.

But we should prepare for the eventuality that one of us does handily overpower the other. We need to make sure that there are no hard feelings. Maybe us trusting Jackie to work effectively and lead her team to success while skirmishing with Alpha will help that. Just give her a confidence boost from knowing we trust her to work on her own and lead her team without us micromanaging.

>>4178925
>because a hunger mad Daughter we have been told is considered basically an amalgam in alot of terms, meaning unlike many of those other situations normally trying to talk to them literally may be impossible.
Okay, but you also shot down things like severe mental illness as making communication impossible, so I'd think that the Hunger would have a similar problem. Maybe there's no good use of this ability, then. At least not within the ethics systems we can agree on. This would be so much more useful if Shu was a less morally-upright solo player like BHOP originally expected she would be, but then again I don't think Shu would actually even get this power in that case.

You know, why don't we just remove that ability for now? If we're not going to use this on Alpha, how about we just go back to level fourteen? Not permanently, I want maxed-out Trypophilic Hive eventually, but this power isn't going to help us and +60% Bio isn't enough on its own to be worth it. So put that level into Spiritus Ex Testa, go back and figure out the ethics of telepathic communication at a later time.

>yeah, that duel just became a bit more dubious. kinda wishing we had waited on lvl 15 now actually.
I don't like the precedent it sets by using our power like this, but it's not like not knowing would keep Jackie from feeling this way. At least now we can do something about it more effectively. We definitely should not rummage through people's thoughts in the future, but if we've done it by accident I think there's nothing wrong with using that information to help our friend, so long as we go no further with it.

>hrm, best i can think up of is, we could simply ask her why she wants the duel. it wouldn't be overtly suspicious either.
Sounds good to me. We should probably talk with her about what she wants out of the duel just for the sake of organizing it properly, anyway. How intense are we going. Is it going to be to first blood, to first dismemberment, to Death's Door, what? We can use that as an excuse to ask about what she wants.
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>>4178949
>>4178921
>>4178916
>You know, why don't we just remove that ability for now? If we're not going to use this on Alpha, how about we just go back to level fourteen? Not permanently, I want maxed-out Trypophilic Hive eventually, but this power isn't going to help us and +60% Bio isn't enough on its own to be worth it. So put that level into Spiritus Ex Testa, go back and figure out the ethics of telepathic communication at a later time.
while im very ok with this plan, i also have to say it feels like its circumventing the issue. honestly we're gonna have to deal with it sooner or later, so we have two options;
find a way to block it, or ask Francine if she can even pull that trick a second time and later the level.
so probably either trust Rath or Francine to help us here, take your pick. unless we just want to avoid family alltogether on this and go to Tinker Tailor.

i mean, we have time probably to get this out of the way. worse case, we get one of them started on helping us for the future, but still remove it into Spiritus in the meantime.

>>4178949
>Duel
definitely not Deaths Door. too easy to accidentally overlap damage into causing auto-failures on the save.
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>>4178949
>Death's Door,
Hard no from me. Maybe half health or something.

Deaths door is way to risky especially considering Jackies eldritch demon blade.

>>4178954
>Rath or Francine
I would say we can ask both of them for help regarding this. Francine to draw up the plans and Rath to create it....

I just realized we could learn Raths true feelings about Shu and Gina with this power........ We definitely will need to deal with this ability quickly or i might have difficulty restraining myself with the shipping.........
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>>4178960
well, that depends on the route. if we want to alter it over just block it, we only need Francine. you're right on the other one both would be useful though.

and lets not intrude on Rath like that.

actually, damnit, too late fuck, but id actually want to change my vote to dealing with this first, over risking it being uncontrollable with our conversation with Rath. damnit, and me having been too distracted by updating the sheets to be able to move the conversation along enough, may of had a smidge of time otherwise damnit...
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>>4178966
i also realized it to late.......

Well this will become awkward.....

I hope Rath will be able to find it in herself to forgive us......
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>>4178954
>>4178960
Yeah, I wouldn't want to go to Death's Door, either, just listing out the options for clear marks.

Getting Rath and Francine to build a restraining system for the power sounds like a good idea. They'd probably have to update it when we got whatever upgrade the text is hinting at, though. Or maybe the act of restraining it will influence our development so that we get no further powers of this sort.

>>4178966
Altering would be nice, keep the level from being a waste. Maybe they can change it to a voluntary mind-sharing thing, let us do something like Battle Meditation from Star Wars where a telepathic network helps coordinate people.
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>>4178968
>>4178973
well, depending on how things go, i think our next step should be getting Francine and Rath aside to deal with this quickly. ask Francine about her altering of abilities, and have both there to put forth the backup plan.

id argue at least IC our haste could be reasonably said to not want this ability hanging over our heads in the middle of one of our most important battles, nor it bring up or cause anything right before such a battle.

again, worse case we temp scrap the ability level.
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>>4178724
>>4178726
I get its way past voting closing BHOP, and you would probably need significant time to rework the update, but just this once id personally both see if possible and be more than ok if we couldn't change the vote to deal with this. im just not up to taking the risk of talking to Rath about deeply personal things while we have this.
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>>4178982
worded that horrendously
*more than ok you taking extra time with the next update to allow us to change.
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>>4178925
On the other hand, without us knowing about Jackie's doubts and self-confidence issues, we would not have this wonderful opportunity to help her clear herself of those doubts and grow into a better person.

She was once overconfident and arrogant as the leader of a group, taking group techniques that boost her powers selfishly at the near fatal expense of the lives of her friends. She's taken her licks and has learnt of her lesson of humility when it comes to leadership. She wants to be the leader she strives to be and looks to Shu as her role model, emulating her style, her weapon preferences, revamping their group and dual techs to be more beneficial to the group as a whole. But now she's suffering from confidence issues, she isn't sure how she stacks up to the original, she's seen how Shu lead her family into victory after victory with their battle records apparently umblemished and come out reaping the rewards with ballsy play after ballsy play. And so to try to assure herself that she can still be as great as Shu, she's challenged Shu to a 1v1.

But what she doesn't know is that our plan in the Raid boss fight against West Alpha is to have Shu basically be the entire Raid Team's taunt tank and keep West Alpha's attention completely occupied while everyone else has free reign to Alpha strike West Alpha. Once she sees us do that, she may think "If Shu's able to TANK West Alpha's attacks and live throughout the entire fight, then what chance will I have against Shu in a 1v1?"

Honestly. Jackie's such a good friend, but I now worry that she's beating herself up too much and has set the bar too high. She's and her team survived Spiraling Fear, survived fighting the Hexane Statues, survived fighting against Isabelle, and now Magpie Blackwing. We dragged them through big risk big ticket fights and they survived them all. They deserve some credit where it is due.
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>>4178949
>You know, why don't we just remove that ability for now? If we're not going to use this on Alpha, how about we just go back to level fourteen? Not permanently, I want maxed-out Trypophilic Hive eventually, but this power isn't going to help us and +60% Bio isn't enough on its own to be worth it. So put that level into Spiritus Ex Testa, go back and figure out the ethics of telepathic communication at a later time.
I'm against this. Even temporarily, that's just running away from the issue. I think it would be best to let Shu acclimate to it and gain control. And also I think her family would be fine with it, she just needs to tell them that she has this ability now.
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>>4178994
i disagree. plus, our family being ok with it doesn't suddenly make it alright to have or use. plus, us blocking it or changing it is a sure sign to us, our family, and anyone else that we wont tolerate things like that, over letting anyone question us over simply having it in the first place.

>>4178993
>On the other hand, without us knowing about Jackie's doubts and self-confidence issues, we would not have this wonderful opportunity to help her clear herself of those doubts and grow into a better person.
not worth it, especially given how we learned and the fact how we learned it could very well make trying to do something worse. its not worth the tradeoff, hell arguably learning things that way is a detriment to solving the issue.

>Shu basically be the entire Raid Team's taunt tank and keep West Alpha's attention completely occupied while everyone else has free reign to Alpha strike West Alpha.
its not. not mine though. its a shit plan and a terrible one to not cycle Shu out aswell. defeats the entire purpose of team cycling.
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>>4178973
>>4178968
>>4178949
I think a good post-duel speech for Jackie should go like this regardless of the results of the duel:

>"You're stronger than you know and a better leader than you may realize, Jackie. You and your midnight crew have something that I look on in admiration, something that I wished I had more of. A deeper bond of friendship and trust forged and built up naturally by sheer amount of time you and your crew have spent together bonding over the little things prior to the Crucible. I was born a little over a month ago into this hellish world that I've come to grow accustomed to as a splintered separate personality of the girl's body I now wear, and whose bonds I made with my friends and family by simply having a way with my words while trying to accommodate for them as much as possible, with a Hive Mistress Core whose broad powers scare me and even makes me doubt myself about their use. I may be able to lead a larger group that I now call my family, and may be able to lead them into battles even tougher and be able to come out on top, but you run a crew whose integrity and trust is tighter than a thicket of thieves and whose bonds between each other run thicker than blood itself."

>"Without that integrity, trust, and bonds between you and yours, you and yours wouldn't have been able to participate in many of our major battles and live to tell the tale. You've fought against Spiraling Fear, you've fought against a group of Alien statues each were on par with 10 of the Hexane race's most powerful daughters, you've fought against Mother's chosen favorite daughter elevated to demigod status, you've fought against Magpie Blackwing, the legendary partner to the equally legendary Mara the Marrow Dragon. You did all of that and lived to tell the tale.

>"So be proud Jackie of the Midnight Crew. Raise your head and be proud of what you have accomplished so far. You may not be the one to lead the entire team in the charge, but you were in charge of your own crew, and your leadership ensured that they can make it out alive. A leader that I'm happy and proud to fight alongside with as equals."

>>4178994
>I'm against this. Even temporarily, that's just running away from the issue. I think it would be best to let Shu acclimate to it and gain control. And also I think her family would be fine with it, she just needs to tell them that she has this ability now.

I think that's a good idea. Let our family know what's going on with our core ability, tell them about how we feel about the lvl 15 power we just gained and tell them why this matters. We're scared to use it, we don't want to intrude upon their innermost thoughts, we don't want to cross the line and become a smothering matron to the family or even worse, a horrible motherfigure for Amara.
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>>4178982
>>4178985
(No worries, it's been dealt with in the fiction, in this instance. I'll be posting soon, but I wouldn't worry about it too much.)
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>>4179005
Just going to say this is starting to sound like Gin the Inquisitor from the latest Pepperbox story. "Just having the ability is bad, not how you you use or having the choice of not using it." We're more mature than that line of thought.
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>>4179009
im not sure about that. on top of just solving the issue being simpler, trust me, they might think they're ok with it, til we accidentally pull something out they didnt expect. theres nothing wrong with having secrets or taking your time to be ready to talk about something, even with family and friends. this could easily make that not an option, and in ways they might overlook.

>>4179010
we'll see then i guess. but no, im worried about it.

>>4179014
not really. its not crucifying anyone, even ourselves over it. its avoiding a temptation and something connected to something we already dont always have full control over, but now is alot worse for us to do when it does slip up. how you regulate yourself is also a wholly different context and situation than how you condemn and regulate others.
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>>4178994
We're going to address it eventually. Just not at the moment. We don't want to deal with the distraction while we're planning a fight against a killer cyborg. And yeah, maybe it would help against the killer cyborg, like it helps us realize what she's thinking and that helps us talk her down and damn it am I talking myself into wanting this power? No, bad me. We've already got an empathic field, we can rely on reading her emotions to figure out what she wants, if we try that at all.

>>4179005
>its not. not mine though. its a shit plan and a terrible one to not cycle Shu out aswell. defeats the entire purpose of team cycling.
I think that Alpha targeting Shu should be how we cycle the teams out, actually. Give each team a Rook, have Shu fight with each team briefly before teleporting to the next while the team she just left withdraws. Alpha changes priorities, heads off to the next group, where the process repeats. Shu gets periods of rest in between each fight while Alpha has to relocate, preventing her from getting too drained, while Alpha being the one to move gives us the opportunity to prepare multiple ambushes for her. Like, we could have the team Rath's on be in a place we've prepared with terraforming, so that when Alpha arrives there we can Ignite and detonate the place.

>>4179014
The problem is the passive involuntary nature of the power. We don't have the choice of not using it.
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>>4179014
the problem is not the ability itself but that we have so little control over it

>>4179022
>we can rely on reading her emotions to figure out what she wants
What emotions? I dont want to use the power on her but aren't her emotions suppressed?
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>>4179022
except even with that it allows Alpha to constantly have relics up to use against both Shu and her Class types, over being able to try and force that to change too. she could very well end up stopping us from teleporting if she keeps having to face us long enough, as one example.

Shu staying in just causes problems we specifically are trying to avoid.
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>>4179018
>not really. its not crucifying anyone, even ourselves over it. its avoiding a temptation and something connected to something we already dont always have full control over, but now is alot worse for us to do when it does slip up. how you regulate yourself is also a wholly different context and situation than how you condemn and regulate others.

That's surprisingly insightful

>>4179022
>The problem is the passive involuntary nature of the power. We don't have the choice of not using it.

We may not have the choice of not using the passive involuntary nature of the power,
but we have the choice to either act and take advantage of such information, or choose to leave it alone entirely and ignore it for the sake of letting them keep their secret.

That's the power of choice. To know that the easy option is there, but to also be able to not choose the easy option.
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>>4179039
we do have a choice though, as we can try and do something about the ability itself.
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>>4179039
But there is one thing we can not change. The way people will act around us. god how do think the family will feel when they know that we involuntarily hear their thoughts. And try as we might there is a real chance when things get heated that Shu may use this power and what she learns involuntarily. Shu is still human and i she doesnt crack down on this now. No matter what we do she will eventually crack under all this knowledge she is constantly having poured into her head and let something slip

That would destroy us, our family trust and our reputation. And we make the choice to deal with this problem before it can arise.

We make the choice to make sure there is not too easy choice. How often have you said something in the heat of the moment that has hurt someone
And how easy will it be to just do that more and more to get your way.
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>>4178868

Here's a song that basically exemplifies the bonds between people.

It also makes for a very good song to play to whenever you want to have heartwarming/tearjerking moments happen in your writing.

Whoever composed this piece just knows how to gently tug at those heartstrings...guh.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xce-UFzUPT8

>>4179043
That is also a valid choice.

But I do have to question: is it really that necessary to go to such extremes to put that lvl 15 ability under that tight of a lock and key?
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>>4179050
in my opinion? yes.
for alot of reasons. from the issues wit accidentally using it, to issues with just the temptation regardless of how bad that aspect is, aswell as just the implications of having it. not to mention, yes, mechanical issues with having it be there at all. not to mention the fact blocking it off can be used to our advantage to our overall message we stand for, and is a good way to help show our seriousness and consistency over such things.
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(Apologies for the delay, Gentlemen. It's been a Monday, though the next update has also run a little long. I'll be posting shortly.)
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>>4179025
>What emotions? I dont want to use the power on her but aren't her emotions suppressed?
Not after we hurt her enough. Knocking out a Core apparently weakens the emotional suppression. Though she'll probably be pretty overt with her emotions at that point. We'll see.

>>4179029
I'm not sure. Mara soloed Alpha, and there's no mention of Alpha making specific anti-Mara Relics. Instead Alpha made Relics to deal with Mara's combat style, and by switching things up Mara managed to keep Alpha from adapting effectively. If Shu changed how she fought as she slots into each group then it would prevent Relic adaptation. Although, if Shu teleporting away was a constant, then Alpha could adapt to that, you're right about that part. So okay, so Rook-swapping, Shu kiting Alpha around would require different transport methods each time. Yeah, that might not be viable, then.

Alright, but I still think that we should lure Alpha into an ambush by kiting her. I'd like our first skirmish with Alpha to be interrupted by the second team sniping her. November with her railgun and tank, Gina with her new rifle, and Rath with her Boils and her strength enhancements to throw them miles (also Caster's Curveball to give them accuracy, and Silvis' Radiance so that they penetrate Alpha's immunities). Alpha chases them down, with the sniper team firing upon them as she advances with more or less impunity, since Alpha loses most of her combat functions when in long-distance travel mode. Alpha lands, starts trying to wreck their shit, Rath Ignites and detonates the battlefield that's been prepared with terraforming. Sniper team then withdraws and next team attacks Alpha at this new area.
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>>4179049
What you said right there is a very good point that I must concede to.

>>4179025
Read the fine print:
>You now possess the passive ability to detect the truth behind what other Daughters say around you, and at no cost you may hone your focus on a target you're engaged with, allowing you to 'view' their motivations and innate self-perceptions, granting you greater insight into your allies (and foes) than ever before.

The lvl 15 power doesn't detect emotions, it detects the truths that they say, their motivations they have, their perception of how they view themselves, and the ability to force a conversation check.

>>4179054
Even though the general consensus that is shared among this council of anons is in agreement that this ability should never be used and should be placed under lock and key to prevent accidental misuse, the question that now brews in my mind is this:

Should we let our family know about this power, how it scares us, and how we wish to put it under tight lock and key?
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>>4179055
Take your time bhop.
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>>4179059
maybe, we'll see once we get to planning.
w might be able to add Shu to that team though, depending on things.

>>4179067
eventually, but now feels like a very iffy time to do so potentially.

>>4179055
we understand. im just surprised you could run on a Monday at all honestly.
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>>4179055
No worries, BHOP, we know that Mondays are rough for you. Take as much time as you need.
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>>4179055
Its fine OP. No rush. i think we have enough topics to keep ourselves entertained for at least another hour or so
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>>4179067
i was asking what emotions we were going to read during the fight. And even after we remove the cores. Its gonna be a doozy trying to figure stuff out while her suppressed emotions run wild and rampage in her head
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>>4179088
My guess is the trademark curiosity that each west has. but also frustration, rage, followed by exhilarating joy that she is once again able feel such emotions inside herself and able to express her emotions after the initial outburst is over.

She was born emotionless, had an emotional suppressor installed, and eventually over time throughout many battles and patrols, she gained a curiosity about who people feel such emotions and wondered what it's like. But her emotions were suppressed. these feelings that have been built up have been always there, but unable to find release.

Eventually on one battle when Yurei led a raid against West Alpha, the forge core that suppressed her emotions was temporarily disabled, and allowed all of those emotions that have been dammed up inside to burst forth. I would imagine that all of those feelings that West Alpha has never felt would frighten her and almost overwhelm her because it was the first time she had ever felt emotions before, but the came out bursting like a flood and she was nearly overwhelmed even in the midst of combat.

West Prime probably took West Alpha in for maintenance after that encounter, but I would suspect that West Alpha would now be curious as to what emotions she had felt, until West Prime ordered to hunt down Francine and by extension, Shu. Because that almost all the data on Shu is made available to the public, West Alpha may have taken the time to find out that Shu's Core has the ability to channel and detect emotions through empathy. Which is why after the West network went down, West Alpha made it her own personal objective to hunt down Shu by going to places Shu has been before. Motivations? I don't know. Our level 15 Hive mistress core may be able to coax out the answer with a conversation check, but the ethical problems it has posed for us when it made itself known is already discouraging us from use.
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Reaching over, you gently squeeze Julia’s hand as you flash her a smile, along with a pulse along the empathic channel. She glances between you and Rath before meeting your smile with one of her own, dazzling white against the bright red of her…everything, really.

Making a slight motion for your redheaded brawler to follow you, Rath obliges as you and she occupy one of the many rooms that branch off from the central meeting area. Like most of the other hastily-constructed spaces of your temporary home, it’s little more than an empty rectangle of a room, lit with the pale, eerie light that pours forth from the bioluminescent spheres set into the walls at even intervals, at least three or four to a wall.

“Thought you’d be jazzed to have Julia back, so what’s up?” Rath asks, stretching her arms behind her back as she fixes you with a questioning eye.

“I’m very happy to have her back, yeah…but you and I were in the middle of a conversation, and you know what they say about rain checks.”

Rath blinks.

“Wh…what do they say?”

“They get wet.” You reply with a deadpan look, and Rath just makes a face at you before she just chuckles.

“…You’re really goddamn weird, Shu. Anyone ever tell you that?”

“You. All the time.” Comes your swift reply. “I was serious about that rain check, though. I’m not going to force you to say anything, but if you’re up for it, then…”

You trail off with a shrug, watching Rath continue to stretch her arms as she weighs how to respond.

“Fuck it. Sure.” She finally relents, popping the knuckles of her left hand against the palm of her right before reversing the motion, and it’s then that you get an idea.

“Would it help to keep your hands busy? I can give you something to hit.” You ask, generating an hefty Rook from your hive, its bulk little more than an empty, mindless mass of chitin in your hands. “I figure I tend to pace when I’m talking out loud, and you don’t really seem the pacing type.”

Rath gives a little laugh along with a shrug, putting her hands up in the boxing position Meg taught her as you brace yourself, a collection of hands writhing from the bare flesh and chitin of your back as they plant themselves against the floor and wall behind you, preparing for impact. Rath leads with a jab, and when your teeth rattle in your head from the vibration that runs through your rigid arms, you instantly redouble the limbs to compensate.

“You asked me what I want earlier, yeah?” Rath begins, her second jab mercifully weaker than the first…though as for whether that’s on account of your preparation or her pulled punches, you’re uncertain. “Broad strokes are pretty simple. Live well. Have fun. Fight hard. Beat the Crucible. Basic stuff, y’know?”

“Fair.” You concede, peeking out from around the Rook as Rath tests just what your chitin is able to take. “It’s the details I’m interested in, though.”

(Continued)
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>>4179118

“Jeez, I don’t even know where to start.” She sighs, a hardy right hook almost lifting you off your feet before seven new hands brace your right heel against the soft, porous floor. “I just…wanna be able to have fun without feeling like this guillotine’s hangin’ over our heads all the time. Don’t get me wrong, I love spending time with everyone, but it just kind of…spoils things, knowing what’s outside. Knowing that as we’re laughing and drinking that people are getting fucking eaten alive out there.”

“I don’t think you’re the only one that feels that way.” You comment, rolling your shoulders to alleviate some of the stiffness before Rath resumes her pugilistic endeavors. “I think until this is all over, we’re all going to feel like we’re Damocles…but after, what’re you hoping to do? Maybe find someone special? Open up your own dojo, show Daughters how to kick as much ass as you do?”

“Tch, flattery doesn’t work on me like it does on Gina.” Rath jokes, sticking her tongue out at you before hitting your shield with a one-two combo. “I gotta say that the whole dojo thing doesn’t sound half bad.”

“And what about the first part of what I said? I noticed you bobbed and weaved around that one pretty well.” You say with a wink. “C’mon, I saw how you were with Lara.”

“C’mon man, that’s a low blow.” She groans, getting in a series of three quick jabs that does nothing to dissipate the radiant blush in her cheeks. “Lara’s…cool, yeah. I guess the whole Beira thing got me thinking about how I feel and whatnot, and I kind of think that…shoot, I dunno. It’s kinda like the party thing I said earlier. Easy to feel guilty about having that stuff on your mind when there’s a bunch of other stuff going on out there that we can’t control, to people we’re not in a position to help as long as the Crucible’s being a dick.”

“Makes sense…post-Crucible, then?” You posit, and Rath casts her eyes down as she gives you both a much-needed breather.

“I…I don’t even know what the world’s going to look like when all’s said and done.” She sighs. “I know Aunt Heather’s hoping that she can bring our family back, but…”

“Oh. Wow.”

“Yeah.” Rath nods, staring at the wall to her right as she flexes her hand while you repair your battered swarmling buckler. “She wants to bring everyone back, but…”

She’s quiet, after that.

“…Ah.” You say, in the face of Rath’s silence, her sister’s name going unsaid despite taking up the rest of the room.

“She was gone before all this. Before the Crucible had the chance to take her, like it did with Mom, and Dad, and everyone else.” Rath continues, drawing in a shaky breath. “But if they’re back, I don’t…god, I feel like a bitch for even thinking that I…”

She shakes her head before she says under her breath-

“…I don’t know if I want them back.”

(Continued)
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>>4179121

You nod slowly, holding off on speaking as you wait for the young woman in front of you to gather her thoughts, and lend voice to something she’s never dared voice before.

“They’re family. Heather’s been talking about being able to see them again, if we can mess with the Cord, but…whenever she brings that up, I just don’t know what to say. What DO I say to that?” Rath exclaims, throwing her arms wide. “It’s not just like I can go ’Hey Aunt Heather, I know you miss ‘em and all, but can you do me a solid and tell the folks that I just fucking died in the Crucible? Maybe spare them the trouble of wishing I was dead?’ They’re my Mom, my Dad, my freaking parents, and I...God, I just…I don’t know. I want to bring them back for my Aunt’s sake, ‘cause she deserves her brother, but…I can’t go back to that. I just…I can’t, man.”

“Fences make good neighbors. You could bring them back, but do your own thing. They’ve got no control over you, anymore.” You muse…but even as the words leave your lips, you can feel the fear their resurrection strikes into the heart of the fretful young woman before you.

I’ve done so much they couldn’t forgive, she thinks. I’ve thought things that they won’t tolerate, felt things that would turn their stomachs. I’m the kind of girl their Sunday sermons warned about, the kind of person th-

No.

NO, goddamn you.

Shutting your eyes tight, you lock down your mind from further intrusion. Jackie was far enough, and you’ll be damned if you’re going to let the bullshit that Mother gave you become a crutch in dealing with the ones you love. Drawing in a breath, you exhale slowly as the invasive power recedes like an unwelcome wave across the sands of your thoughts, until you and Rath are left alone, once more. She’s gone quiet, just staring at the wall as she chews on her bottom lip a moment or two before she violently boxes at her ears, returning to the here and now as she establishes her guard once more.

“Can we, uh…can we keep going, if you don’t mind?” Comes her quiet request, blinking away something in her citrine eyes. You nod your assent, bringing your shield as you wait for the next blow…and when it finally comes, it’s ferocious, a fierce strike that lashes out at something only the girl before you can see. One, two, three, four more blow, each one more powerful that the last – and you hold your ground against each and every one as Rath works through her frustration, her fear, her guilt. Her knuckles crack against chitin, eyes sharp, teeth clenching tighter with every punch, every bone-shattering strike that lands against your patient bulwark.

One that will not shatter. One that will not break.

One that Rath needs right now, your own sore arms be damned.

(Continued)
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>>4179126

You don’t know how long you weather the storm of her displaced fury. You only know when the blows begin to come out weaker, and slowly but surely they die down as Rath finally doubles over, hands on her knees as her bare arms and legs shine with white-hot radiance, boiling sweat dripping from the tip of her nose to scorching the ground at her feet.

“Fuck.” Rath says quietly, shaking her head.

The broken and battered chitin of your Rook begins to dissolve, the slick green shards of biomass slipping back beneath your skin as you take a knee before the girl as she continues to speak.

“It just…it feels like no matter what I do, I’m making a mistake.” She says miserably. “If they come back, they’re not going to take me back, not like…like this. I can’t go back like this, and…god, I don’t want to. I *can’t* go back to that, man.”

Her fists tighten on her knees, her teeth grinding together.

“But…what do I fucking do, then?” She demands of herself. “Not bring them back? Aunt Heather, she’s lost so much, I’m not going to be the one to tell her ‘no’. Jesus, but even the thought of having to face them again makes me want to-“

She pauses when your hand finds her shoulder, your skin burning as you fight to not wince from the unbelievable heat. She waits for you to speak, her citrine eyes searching yours for a long moment until you simply squeeze her shoulder and offer a small smile. Rath sinks to her knees, exhausted, the sweat pouring from her sizzling form as she fights to catch her breath. You reach out again, this time with your other hand as you wipe a tear from one white-hot cheek, and she just stares at the spot of floor between your knees and hers.

“S-sorry I ended up cashing that raincheck for more than you wrote it." Rath finally says, chuckling weakly as she runs the back of her hand under her nose.

"I don't think you could ever overdraw that account." You fire back, and when Rath looks up at you, you make a face at your own remark. "Fuck, I'm really stretching that metaphor, aren't I?"

She just laughs, and you smile, hand still on her shoulder as you watch her struggle for what to say next.

>>"I stand by what I said earlier, Rath. You're one of the best people I know...and what you're thinking doesn't make me think any less of you."

>>Just...hug her. You can handle the heat, and she's always been the sort of girl to appreciate action over words.

>>Let Rath speak. Allowing her to voice her own thoughts right now is more important than anything you have to say.

THEN

>>Go from the frying pan to the fire, and seize the Contender's white-hot handle to finally speak with Karma.

>>You hate where the knowledge came from, but you're worried about Jackie...though you won't let on as to why.

>>Speak with Francine to catch up with her after everything that's happened, and ask her advice regarding your Core's latest power.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next four hours.)
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>>4179136
>Let Rath speak. Allowing her to voice her own thoughts right now is more important than anything you have to say.
>THEN
>Go from the frying pan to the fire, and seize the Contender's white-hot handle to finally speak with Karma.
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>>4179136
>>Let Rath speak after you gave her a good hug. Allo her to voice her own thoughts right now is more important than anything you have to say.
>>"You will always have a home with us no matter how hard it gets. Gina, Amara and me. You can be another cool aunt for Amara"


THEN

>>Go from the frying pan to the fire, and seize the Contender's white-hot handle to finally speak with Karma.

I think Karma needs our attention finally. Julia will find us when she wants to find us.
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>>4179126
I mean, BHOP, this is exactly what i was trying to avoid, so, not sure what you were getting at earlier.

>>4179136
vote;
>Bring Rath into a hug, before pulling back and giving her your response.
>"Rath... its hard to hear i know... but if its possible to bring them back, its the right thing to do."
>"No one whos been lost to the Crucible deserves to be overlooked, its not our choice to make."
>"Doing whats right.. often isnt whats also the best for yourself..."
>"But. that doesn't mean YOU have to go back to them. YOU dont have to change back to the way things are."
>"Im not gonna say i can truly understand, im not gonna say i know how you feel but... Facing your fears and finding a way forward is something i know you can do Rath. You're a firecracker, an unstoppable inferno. And if they wont accept you? Well?"
>Motion out to the room.
>"they're not your only Family, and we'll be there for you, no matter what."

>Go Speak to Francine, to see if you cant get a solution from her over your latest Core level. maybe she can work her magic on it, or come up with a Relic to help block it.
>>If she cant do either or needs time, swap level 15 out for another Spiritus level for now.
>Also, catch up with her and what her Dream Team was up to.

>>4179142
>>4179151
the Contender can wait, we have more immediate concerns.
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>>4179138
Right, so here's Version 4 of the Character sheets for ya BHOP(and others);
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1IGq15jshM2iDN8J2yvYF6fdP9yu9JSPDs2FCEYAJ6As/edit?usp=sharing

Lemme see, anything to note?
>Francine is almost at 4,000% Health, and Gina is almost at 4,000% Biomass.
>Dorian lost his Biomass Regen lead to Gina.
>Dorian and Julias Biomass still feels behind, and Amaras stats in general feel behind.
>Julias doesn't feel like she caught up as much as i was expecting her to, stats wise at least.

I think Amara could use a triple hybrid. If you look, those typically give fucking amazing stats, even compared to double-hybrids.
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>>4179164
you are right yeah.

>>4179136
Ammending vote from>>4179151
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>>4179136
Well now we can clearly see what Rath's mental corruption is focused on. What her status quo and change both are, and it's centered on her old family (minus Heather).

supporting>>4179164 on Rath.

THEN

>Go from the frying pan to the fire, and seize the Contender's white-hot handle to finally speak with Karma.
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>>4179170
(Thank you so much, Anon!)
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>>4179191
no problem.
as always, let me know what folks see that needs work.
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>>4179170
Amara has several good components that can be made into a triple hybrid.

>Joyous Many with Holistic Lexicon (Phantasmal Conduit/Hexane Neuromancy/Skintalker)
Result would probably be called "The Holy Chorus"

>Joyous Many with Queen Crimson (Phantasmal Conduit/Hexane Neuromancy/Humoral Paladin)

>Joyous Many with Hunter's Honor (Phantasmal Conduit/Hexane Neuromancy/Calcite Armorer)

The thing is with Amara is that we've been putting those levels off by investing more into them before hybridizing them into a single hybrid so we can get more mileage out of each individual components before cashing in on the giant stat boosts of the hybrid ability system.

I still want to level up the lexicon to it's max lvl 20 cap because of just how potent those spells can be.

And aside from Amara's Lexicon, her Calcite sword, her Oxygenic Artillery, Queen Crimson, Veruteilung, and Joyous many, she's really lacking in other offensive options that could allow her to solo 1v1. if she can't kill her enemies with Hunter's Honor immediately, she's pretty much a goner.

So I think we should give Amara another offensive ability that could boost her survivability as well as allowing her to hold her own if the clones aren't there.

Also, I have noticed that you have not placed an entry to the Red Devil's Engine Mechanical Augmentation on Hunter's Honor. It's a relic, but it's a relic that we made to work for Amara as a way to amp up her Calcite katana strikes without having to rely on Crits.


As for Dorian and Julia...hmm....it's tough for both of them because their powersets have turned out to be the sort where they literally depend on each other to be together in order to be a super-effective single unit. Dorian's speed and range taking out constructs with his burst damage while ferrying Julia who dishes out Stacks upon stacks of afflictions and goes to town on the singular enemy with multi-hit DoT attacks.
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>>4179209
honestly not sure Joyus and hunter would be a good fit. the other two i could see, but Joyous and Hunter feel a bit too apart to really mesh well.

and i mean, unless we want to slap Verteilung into something, i suppose i would be alright replacing it with something. I do think you're underestimating Oxygenic a bit though as an offensive tool.i mean, its blasts do deal damage themselves afterall. the sword also relies on its charges sure, but its seemed to be able to do ok even with a low count of them.

>I have noticed that you have not placed an entry to the Red Devil's Engine Mechanical Augmentation on Hunter's Honor.
its not a perma-bound relic, it can be passed around or applied to other abilities or Daughters. we made it for Amara but that doesn't mean it may never be used on someone else.

>powersets have turned out to be the sort where they literally depend on each other to be together in order to be a super-effective single unit.
thats... just not true. besides possibly Julia not having a quick way to get into melee, both are pretty heavily built in a way they can easily stand on their own. Dorian doesn't really complement Julia any better than he does say, Rath.
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>>4179136
>Hug her.
>"You're not alone, Rath. And I don't just mean that we're here for you. Nobody is the person they were before the Crucible. Everyone has changed. When we bring the old world back, we're all going to have to face the people we left behind. And it's scary, to think of how they'll judge us for who and what we are. Even I'm not an exception, I've still got to talk to Amara's birth mom. Oh God, am I terrified of that."
>"But it's something we need to do. No matter how painful it's going to be, we've got to put this back to rights. We can't just leave anyone in limbo. We're better than that. You're better than that. And if your family can't appreciate that, what you did for them, and they focus solely on how you're not the thing they want you to be? Then that's their loss, because the Rath I know is fucking amazing."
>"You're not a bad person for being scared of their judgment, Rath. Just remember that it doesn't have to hold any power over you. You've got nothing to be ashamed of. And you've got more options than submitting to their disapproval or not bringing them back at all. You have a home with us, we're your family too, and we're happy to have you if they're stupid enough to reject you. So don't be too scared, okay? And don't beat yourself up over this."


>>Go from the frying pan to the fire, and seize the Contender's white-hot handle to finally speak with Karma.
I bet Karma wants to tell us about Jackie's new sword. "Yeah, I don't know what she thinks that thing is, but it's definitely scarier than she knows".
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>>4179230
I think i will go to bed now... the day has taken more out of me than i thought and trying to write up the Conquerors Gaze from my notes has proven to be even more tiresome

Also have a Ratgirl
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>>4179232
night Anon.

>>4179230
thought you agreed we need to do something about lvl 15?
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>>4179209
I'd actually say that Amara needs better defenses if she's going to face the risk of having to solo things. All she's got is Queen Crimson or her Joyous intercepting attacks for her, and while they're decent they could be better. She's okay on offense, the sword accumulates charges quickly and Oxygenic Artillery is shaping up to be a pretty strong ranged weapon (I guess that makes sense, it was the preferred ranged attack of Ozmas, the winner of the last Crucible). Put a few more levels into each and I won't be worried. But Amara's still decently squishy and could use something to protect her better. Maybe a hybrid of Queen Crimson with something.
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>>4179232
Good night, anon. Sleep well.

>>4179239
>thought you agreed we need to do something about lvl 15?
I do, but how urgent Karma is acting has me worried and I don't think that the involuntary telepathy will be an issue when talking with her. I think we can put it off until after whatever Karma thinks is so important to tell us.
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>>4179244
i was under the impression it was just her typical vibrations when relating to her having a level up available, which while nice isnt really as important to get to. i mean, worse case, we could very literally probably do it the moment before we hit Alpha, if it really came down to it.
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>>4179249
Normally the Contender only warms up a bit, if it's white-hot then something is serious. Or maybe that's just BHOP joking about how we've been putting it off and Karma is exasperated with us, but it's got me paranoid.
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>>4179257
doesn't really seem any different to me, and as you said, we also have never REALLY put it off like this before. still seems less important, than something that directly makes having conversations with others difficult to get through.

would not be a good idea to talk to Jackie and might sour the reunion with Julia too.
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>>4179136

Pulling Rath close, you envelop the radiance that is the other girl as she wraps her arms around you, in turn. You just hold her like that for a time, the sounds of conversation from the main room fading out as you whole world shrinks to just the two of you in that small, simple space, in the aftermath of her worry given voice.

"Rath...it's hard to hear, but..." You begin gently, pulling back just enough to let you meet her shining eyes. "...if its possible to bring them back, then it's the right thing to do. No one whos been lost to the Crucible deserves to be overlooked, because that's not our choice to make."

"No, I...I know." She sniffs, clearing her throat as she glances up at the ceiling. "I know that regardless of how I feel, that...bringing them back's the right thing to do. I know that, I just-"

"Rath? Doing what's right often isn't what's best for yourself." You interrupt gingerly. "But that doesn't mean YOU have to go back to them. YOU don't have to change back to the way things were."

"Look, Rath...I'm not gonna say I can truly understand, that I can genuinely know know how you feel, but...out of all of us? You, me, Gina, Julia, and therest of the family? Facing your fears and finding a way forward is something I *know* you can do, Rath. You're a firecracker, an unstoppable inferno. And if they wont accept you? Well..."

You tilt your head towards the door, towards the welcoming crowd that waits just outside before you catch Rath's citrine eyes.

"They're not the only family you've got. We'll be there for you, no matter what...no matter what anyone says or does. Okay?"

"...Okay." She nods, wiping away the hot tears that threatened to roll down her cheeks. "Fuck, man. Just...fuck you."

"Huh?" You say lamely, confused as Rath starts to laugh.

"For making me cry by being all fucking sweet...asshole." She says, clearing her throat between sputters of laughter. "I freaking hate that you're so good at it. I hate crying, and I hate how good you are at saying such nice shit, so let up on it, okay?"

"No promises." You grin, laughing along with her as you feel the tension in her chest fade for now, your earnest words having served to lighten her load, if just a little. "Hey, there's something I'd like to bring up to Francine, but that can wait if you-"

"No, go ahead, Shu. I'll be alright." She interrupts, and you don't need the empathic channel to know that she means what she's said. "I may do s'more stretches or touch base with my Dream girls for a sec...just take a little while to cool off, y'know?"

"Absolutely." You say, and as Rath rises she pulls you once more to your feet before you seek out Francine.

(Continued)
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>>4179534

She's not in the main room as you pass through, and after a bit of searching you find her close to the entrance of your base, the furthest from the noise of the central area as she leans against one side of the narrow corridor, scribbling away in a small notebook.

"Before you ask, and because I know you're going to, Darling - no, you're not interrupting." She declares, peering at you over her glasses as you approach. "In fact, I was expecting that you'd seek me out after recent developments regarding your empathic abilities."

"How'd you-?"

Francine merely taps her glasses.

"...oh."

"Indeed. Very handy." She hums, all business as the gives you a once-over. "Now, if we're going to mitigate your Core's more intrusive capabilities, I'm going to need a quick sample...do you mind? I'll make it a swift as possible."

She gestures at your hair, and you give her a shrug by way of consent. It's a decision that you immediately regret when she tugs on a strand, painlessly but nauseatingly unwraveling almost a third of your skull and grey matter into a long, discolored thread. She examines it thoroughly for a moment, your stomach doing knots at the sensation before giving it a sharp tug, releasing the strand as your biomass snaps back to its original shape like a spring pulled against its natural form.

"Intriguing...I need to refer to some of my older notes, but that shouldn't take long...no, not long at all, if I'm on the right track." Francine muses tapping her chin with one thoughtful finger as you massage your scalp, ensuring everything is back to rights. "Please, follow me."

"So, how'd your meeting of the minds go earlier?" You begin, obliging the good doctor as she leads you back her her private room, arranged in much the same way to the forge room from the Dragon's Roost, sans a working forge, of course.

"Oh, were you close?" Francine asks over her shoulder as she gestures to a chair woven from the surrounding biomass before she begins rifling through her files.

"I was outside the tower, with Viola." You explain, prompting the physician to sigh.

"My condolences." She groans. "I do hope she wasn't too forward?"

"Oh, she was forward, but when I told her I was taken she respected it...in her own way." You add.

"Hrm...well, to answer your first question, I do believe that we have some solid hypotheses to bring to the table once everyone's had some time to unwind. Speaking of which - may I be so bold as to ask how Rath is feeling?"

"Oh...better now, I think. Why? Was it that obvious that something was on her mind?"

"To me? By no means." Francine continues, shifting a few files to one side of the table as she continues her search. "November's been worried about her, and considering the rate at which you catch your family members by their lonesome when they're processing some existential quandry, I suspected that either you or she had some such thing to work out."

...You feel a little called out, at that.

(Continued)
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>>4179544

"Well, in keeping with tradition, then..." You say with a slight smirk. "...how're you holding up?"

Francine makes a small sound of amusement as she cracks open one of her files, cocking one eyebrow while she levels a withering stare in your direction.

"Dear me, I suppose I walked right into that one, didn't I?" She comments, turning her attentions back to her work even as she continues to speak. "After all that's happened, I would venture to say I feel...odd."

"Oh?"

"I'm not sure what I was expecting, really. Perhaps I thought that there would be some great shift in the world, when I set them loose. Maybe I imagined that Sigma would thank me, or that there would be some sort of...feeling, that would let me know that what I'd done would work out for the best."

"So what do you feel, exactly?" You prompt, watching her eyes rove the page, then stop as she looks up.

"Nervous." Comes her answer. "Nervous about what the collec...hrm. About what the *Proxies* are going to do next. I've been sorely tempted to ask Orwell if I could peek in on the forum she made for them, but I believe that would be stepping too far."

"How so?"

"What they do is out of my hands, now. I fear that any attempts to pro-actively reach out to them may be tinged with a desire for...control, as it were." She says, retrieving a slip of parchment from within the folder that's promptly snapped shut. "The more I learn and the more I hear, the more certain I am that West's curiosity is merely a means to the end of control. Control - borne to combat a singular emotion that is at the very seat of the human condition, and one that is perhaps the oldest and greatest of them all. One that's directing the actions of everyone in this base, in fact."

"Which is?"

Francine gives you a wry smile.

"Fear." She answers, sliding the paper across the table and into your waiting hands. Studying it, you immediately recognize the general design of the device Francine originally used to cut herself off from West Prime's all-encompassing oversight, and one that she modified to allow you and Mara to do the same for people that you'd rather not have in your heads. "I believe that a heavily-augmented version of this could essentially act as a stopper for your empathic abilities, allowing you far more precise control as to when and how you use them. If emotion is a river, then this can be the dam that's under your control."

"Excellent, when can we-" You say, pausing when she raises a hand.

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>>4179546

"Alternatively, with a few tweaks would could craft a Relic that would shut down that aspect of your power entirely, should you so wish." She explains, folding her arms as she sits on the table's edge. "One variant could give you the power to use it as you see fit without those intrusive thoughts I'm sure you've been dealing with, granting you a far higher degree of control than would be capable otherwise. Alternatively I can enact a more permanent solution, where empathic transmission and recpetion would be cut entirely...except, of course, for your unusual bond with Gina,as that operates via methods that are quite different to what we're dealing with here."

"Why's that?" You ask, genuinely curious as Francine just shrugs.

"Pending further research, I am frustrated to say that I have no idea." She sighs. "Gina's been kind enough to allow me some time to research her end of the unique bond you both have forged, but while the underlying framework of your empathic channel is something rooted in the macro-level manipulation archetypes of both the Hive Mistress and Phantasmal Conduit classes, what you and Gina share is more of a...neural gateway, in a sense. One that does not appear to have any precedent among the known classes."

"And when Mara and Magpie came to you with a similar issue, was theirs like this, too?" You prompt, and the good doctor nods. "Do you think it could have something to do with Mother, and how she structured this as a result of Gina's choice?"

"Perhaps..." Francine concedes, though with a caveat on her lips. "...though Gina herself posited that it could have arisen as a result of her early interactions with - and affinity for - the Neurotic Halo. You see, eve though they were creations of Charon's, they straddle the line between ability and Relic both, while simultaneously being neither. Such a thing simply shouldn't be possible, just going by what we know of Flesh Artisans. Artisans with Relic leanings focus on either creation or destruction, not...evolution, as this appears to be."

"Could've been a hybrid." You muse. "Those can get pretty niche."

"Possibly...it's one of the many things that Gina and I would like to ask Charon when we finally meet them face-to-face. As for now, though..."

She pauses, and you just look at her for a long moment before she pointedly glances down at the paper you hold in your hands.

Oh.

Right.

The reason you came to her in the first place.

"The choice is yours, darling. And I'm sure I don't need to tell you that it'snot one to be made lightly."

An ironic choice, then. One that can grant you control, and another that robs you of it.

Whatever happens now, you are in control...for better or worse.

>>Greater control.

>>Cut the empathic channel permanently.

>>Wait a little longer to decide, and simply use the Engine to shift power away from your Core and to something else, at least for now.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next three hours, Gentlemen.)
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>>4179551
>Cut the empathic channel permanently.
i mean, again, theres no reason to keep it if we are going to do this. basically the whole problem is, its not something to be used. while the lack of control is the biggest issue, its hardly the only one. i'd be gaining control over something we plan to never use, but for some reason are keeping around as a temptation? doesn't really make any sense.
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>>4179553
oh, also. kinda an unnecessary question ill admit, but is she just gonna modify the machines already in our head, or shove another in there? cause i just remembered, we currently have a useless ball of wires in our head, given Isabelle is dead and all.
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>>4179542
>She gestures at your hair, and you give her a shrug by way of consent. It's a decision that you immediately regret when she tugs on a strand, painlessly but nauseatingly unwraveling almost a third of your skull and grey matter into a long, discolored thread. She examines it thoroughly for a moment, your stomach doing knots at the sensation before giving it a sharp tug, releasing the strand as your biomass snaps back to its original shape like a spring pulled against its natural form.
Sometimes, when we're using our cool superpowers and mutating in aesthetically-pleasing ways, I forget about the body horror part. Thanks for reminding me, BHOP.
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>>4179561
>>4179559
(Francine would be reaching in and modifying what's already there, on account of the tech still being in your head and perfectly usable.)
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>>4179553
Bhop, would this affect our ability to relay orders via Heart of the Swarm? Would cutting it off permanently affect our level 5 and 15 ability?

>>4179561
The entire basis of our ability to become a macromanaging master controller in the battlefield was based on our ability to send orders through the empathy channel. That's why we had the Heart of the Swarm ability developed and applied it through our battles ever since we made our choice.
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>>4179551
When Francine says "entirely" is she referring to just the new evolution of the empathic field that allows for deeper scans? Or is that including our emotion-sensing and transmitting abilities? Because I'm fine with those. I would...well, I'd accept losing them in order to get rid of the more invasive and voyeuristic powers, but I wouldn't be happy about it.
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>>4179567
>>4179553
could've sworn that was a mix of things that allowed for that. i mean, it wouldn't make sense for that to be our empathic channel, at least not alone. we dont randomly have long-form communication with everyone, nor are we able to communicate outside of combat with folks even when nearby, so its gotta be other things allowing for that. aswell as we seemed plenty capable of relaying strategies before then.
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>>4179563
>>4179553
yeah, that was a gnarly mental image, good job on that BHOP.
it also is an interesting difference in how both characters perceive things. Shu clearly though Francine meant a more... well, i dont want to say 'normal' method of sample taking, but certainly not that.
but Francine has an ability and no matter how odd it is, why would she use any other method in a fleshscape horrorverse?

>>4179565
gotcha, thanks. id say the idea of her digging around for it might be a bit uncomfortable, but she did just casually and safely pull our head apart, so...
...ok its still uncomfortable but in a less difficult way i suppose.
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>>4179551
>Greater control.
I thought we were going to do the contender instead, since there's a time and place for this stuff in regards to the upcoming engagement, but whatever.
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>>4179576
Found it:

>>4179565
Bhop, would the Relic modifier affect our passive UNITY OF THE SWARM ability?

(Passive Ability Unlocked: UNITY OF THE SWARM: In combat, you no longer need to vocalize your commands to B'ni or Gina for them to understand the actions you wish for them to take. This ability has an effective range equal to that of your swarmlings' maximum distance.)
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>>4179559
I just remembered something. Even though we just don't want the empathy channel to advance so far into intruding, we have used it to convey our feelings and emotions to others so that they're able to tell precisely how we feel.


The issue that I'm having between cutting it off completely and having greater control over it is that if we shut it off completely, we might find ourselves in a situation similar to West Alpha where all implanted and equipped Relics are disabled (including the one that regulates our empathy field) and we're suddenly finding ourselves overwhelmed by the sudden information rushing into Shu's head when the empathy blocker goes offline.
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>>4179613
thats not really so big a thing we cant do without it. most people have to and do deal without such a thing. we're adaptable, we can live without that in exchange for not lugging around a metaphorical weight.

as for the Alpha thing, dont think thats at all a concern. this just simply doesn't work like that. its a semi-uncontrollable mind reading and emotion reading device that SOMETIMES is active randomly. but theres no reason to think the blocker suddenly being gone would cause an influx of information. no part of it has worked like that before, nor on that scale. and if it did, we probably would've done this a long time ago simply based off the issues with that much emotional information constantly intruding on Shus mind. that just wouldnt be fun for Shu at all and impede on her ability to function.

but instead, we typically have to be focusing on someone for anything to work. yes, an issue is both parts can work without us wanting them too, which for this newest one is a very very big issue, but no part has ever just gobbled up an entire crowds emotions or anything, and has always been pretty focused, so if it did get shut down, its very possible we wouldn't be in a position for it to even auto-proc, much less would it overload us.
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>>4179631
I'm absolutely not giving up Shu's empathic powers. It's so ingrained into her character now and has helped her so much that it shouldn't just be waved off casually. Unless those powers had drastic consequences, it would feel too reactionary and fearful to justify like that.
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>>4179661
>>4179581
thats just simply wrong. and also feels like your using that as an excuse and crutch. Shu did just as fine before it, and lordy knows it clearly hasn't prevented anything by having them.

and its also ignoring the crux of the issue. having and using something like level 15 is simply unjustifiable, especially within the context of how we have built up our families morals and the message we try to teach people. if we can block it, its the right thing to do, because theres no reason to ever allow ourselves or anyone else to use such a thing.

but what does it say if we keep it? that we're infallible, never prone to weakness or mistakes? thats very damn well not true. we're still human, Shu and Us OOC. we know, right here and now, this is something we should never use and never have. but if we keep it, what happens if we run into another Isabelle or Magpie situation? one where despite all our efforts, they just wont listen, wont tell us whats going on, and just give us the cold shoulder?

are you really gonna tell me you wouldn't be tempted? that if we kept it, you could be in that situation and know for sure you wouldn't vote to use it? you cant, because we already have had to have long, lengthy conversation to each and every one of us to prevent what we have, and even then people still think we have made some dubious choices. we're human, we're not perfect. we're prone to having our bad days and our worries where despite everything, something like that would look like a godsend despite the fact we know its wrong to use.

its like when folks get those boxes where you can press a button, and get a wish or money in exchange for killing someone you dont know. you know its wrong, you know you should never use it, but... then why keep it around? financial troubles could be right around the corner, or you could just need a bit of a cash boost for something important, or something bad happens you need that wish for... but your sudden situational change does not make it any less morally bankrupt to press that button.

its a temptation we have no reason to keep around, and should not keep around. we can talk all we want about how we never would use it, how we would always be able to talk the temptation down, but the crux of the issue is its putting Shu and ourselves on one damn high pedestal above everyone else in the Crucible to say we would never have an off day just once. hell we know thats not even true. there is no justification ofr keeping it around, even if a price to getting rid of it is attached, because our entire message and point has been to say we and Shu are not above anyone, that we're still human. and humans have temptations and make mistakes. but here, we can lock the potential for a big one away, and avoid it ever being a possibility. THAT is sticking to our guns, and trying to be a person worthy of the respect and admiration we get, especially if there turns out to be a price attached.
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>>4179567
>>4179589
(Yes, it would. You could transmit, since that's a key part of how you commune with your Swarm, but not receive like you can now.)

>>4179573
(It would halt the empathic aspects of your abilities, both those you possess now and those that will crop up later in your skill tree.)
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>>4179661
>>4179613
>>4179686
as we told Rath.
doing whats right often is not good for yourself.
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>>4179691
That pretty much clinches it. I'm sticking with my vote of getting control over getting rid of it.
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>>4179691
Can you elaborate further? It's still fairly nebulous as to what parts get snipped and what parts get left alone.

Like how would it affect our swarm control? We could send commands but not receive status updates from them?
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>>4179691
>(It would halt the empathic aspects of your abilities, both those you possess now and those that will crop up later in your skill tree.)
Huh. I'm conflicted, then. I really don't want to give up our empathic field entirely. We've made good use of that, moral use. Is there anything we can do to replace it safely? Like a Neuromancy/Phantasmal Conduit hybrid that boosts our mental processing when it comes to analyzing emotional cues, so we get the benefit of the empathic abilities without having to read minds. There must be something we can assemble out of the skills we have access to, right? Hollistic Lexicon crossed with Neurotic Halo, maybe? Communication power mixed with mental processing boost, it makes sense to me.
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>>4179711
(In terms of your swarmling's form and function, they would remain unaffected, since they are the core of the tree. Cutting the empathic function would only affect your interactions with Daughters as fair as their emotions are concerned.)

(I hope this helps.)
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>>4179694
But your reasons are less about the moral right thing and more about reacting to what-ifs, with all that talk of temptation. You could at the very least try the control option first, and then go back to the removal option if that doesn't work out.

>>4179714
I don't think we're going to cobble up some convenient ability that does the same thing on the spot.
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>>4179719
And how would this affect our Hive lvl 15?

You say it directly cuts off our ability to see the truth of their words, their self-perceptions, their motivations, and insecurities on top of our ability to feel their emotions as well as the active ability to force a conversation check.

What part of that level gets affected if the empathy channel gets cut off?
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>>4179721
>I don't think we're going to cobble up some convenient ability that does the same thing on the spot.
Well no, not on the spot, we don't have enough levels for it. I'd hope it's possible, though. I like the empathic field, though. It's a good power, both in the sense of utility and in the sense that we do good things with it. Having to give up on it just because the Crucible screwed us over on another ability feels like letting Ozmas win. "Ha ha, I told you that you'd regret going down this path, now don't you feel silly?"
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>>4179721
thats a pretty lackluster counter argument. and no, its not. the minute we decide to keep this, we decide we're above everyone, and go against everything we have stood for. the minute we decide to keep something we know no one should have just because it has a cost to get rid of, we become a hypocrite to everyone else we have told or asked to make a sacrifice of themselves for something greater.

its selfish to say we have any reason to take a risk we have no reason to take, for something we know we can live without others do, have, and are. its not about the 'what-if' alone, but the idea we're above the temptation and that if it does happen, it was an acceptable risk given the options. its not, because what we are giving up in exchange for avoiding that risk is something not at all worse than others have given for the cause, for us aswell. we're also not asking anything of anyone but ourselves, and its only right we choose to be someone worthy of being looked up to, by not saying we are above our own humanity.

we have said we stand for something, and if we actually do, we'll do it here, and not keep something that by its very nature goes against everything we have said we believe in, damn be the cost.
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>>4179727
(All of it, since every piece of your Level 15 power relates to other Daughters/Amalgams, not to your swarm.)
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>>4179737
You know, cutting off the empathy channel affects our ability to converse with the Pyre Ant Kingdom, and with the Hexane couple Thelis and his wife as the two hexane statues are classified as Amalgams
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>>4179737
You're right. I don't want you to be, but you're right. If you don't stick by principles when it's tempting, then they're not really principles. We've got to put the restraint on.

>>Cut the empathic channel permanently.

Still, I just hate that we're going to have wasted levels in this skill because they give us things we find morally reprehensible. BHOP >>4179740, can we get an estimate of how much more of this skill is going to be empathic stuff, or is that too much of a spoiler? I don't want to put levels into something that we're never going to use, if there are a lot more empathic abilities I'd like to avoid leveling Trypophilic Hive anymore. Make Murderous Flock the Hive Mistress skill we see the cap of.
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>>4179758
Damn it, I linked wrong. Derp a herp.

>>4179551
>>Cut the empathic channel permanently.

>>4179756
Yeah, it does. But Amara can translate using Skintalking. We'll have to have her explain for us.
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>>4179758
(I'm afraid that answering that would be spoilers. My sincerest apologies.)
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>>4179732
I also just thought: if we could make a similar ability, then why wouldn't it develop to eventually get similar capabilities as well, thus starting this argument all over again? I certainly wouldn't want to go in circles on this, especially when this is already starting to feel like the fears players had when Hive reached level 7 and some wanted to avoid leveling it up for a while.

And yeah, I also don't want to have, if not Ozmas then the Crucible itself, mock us for going back on our chosen path. We made our decision and want to prove it was the right one, and the empathic field is great at doing that.

>>4179737
Then here's a better argument then: we could already intrude on the thoughts of our comrades. For a long time in fact, but we have literally never been tempted to do so since. It didn't even come up as an pre-writen option. It's silly to bring it up now when we've been "above the temptation" the whole time. Shu's actions (or maybe lack thereof in this case) make a better case for how little risk of her abuse there actually is. She's already proving that she's worth looking up to as is.
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>>4179756
dont think thats true.
they can communicate because they were already above an Amalgam and technically had the ability to. but our actual communication is possible because we got kinky with then ant Queen with a jackling. BHOP never actually has said the jackling we were using to communicate was ever removed afterall.

>>4179758
for better or worse, this is the level 15 ability for our core.
dont want to either, but at least its a good hybridization point if things do go sour.
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>>4179770
we could intrude upon them if we used Neuromancy which we know they very much would know we are using, even the tetherless one. they can also resist Neuromancy, even at a level such as Ginas. this is us unavoidably being able to wrench things from them without them even knowing, very much different.

Im not a fan of Neuromancy either, but it has its built in safeguards. this doesn't besides our own goodwill.

and i simply again disagree. this is on a whole, massively different level and context than anything we have had before. and unlike most of what you're talking about, this specifically focuses only on us breaking our morals in a very intrusive way.
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>>4179766
So it's a gamble whether any given further level into Trypophilic Hive is even going to do anything, or if it'll have been preemptively sealed away. Ouch, that's going to make level-up sessions difficult.

>>4179770
>I also just thought: if we could make a similar ability, then why wouldn't it develop to eventually get similar capabilities as well, thus starting this argument all over again?
I was thinking we could just leave that skill at a low enough level to not manifest the invasive abilities. We don't want to do that with the Trypophilic Hive since we want to level it for the swarmling stuff, but a different skill could be safely left low.

>>4179774
>dont want to either, but at least its a good hybridization point if things do go sour.
I guess. But what if the hybrid does this stuff, too? God, this is going to make leveling Shu really difficult, from here on out.

Also, the thought occurs to me that we should tell our family about this before we move forward. A quick heads-up that we're going to have to restrict our empathic field because it's started being shitty, so be prepared for us suddenly being less aware of their emotions.
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I'm just going to leave part of the description for Trypophilic Hive level 7 here.
>In addition, your empathic powers have reached even greater heights, and you may now choose to peer into the minds of those close to you to accurately read their surface-level thoughts, though this ability's efficacy is diminished if you attempt to use it on someone you are unfamiliar with.
That's something we just sort of forgot about.

I have to go to sleep, but I'm imploring everyone to please reconsider this decision. I honestly think we have more to lose from this.
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>>4179792
>>4179787
>>4179793

We have an engine anons. We can simply pump in 5 points into Hive skill tree, see the level abilities that they grant plus the capstone, and if we don't like it? we just go to the engine and level it back down to lvl 15 and make a hybrid ability at that threshold.

Cutting it off permanently immediately after getting it to lvl 15 and getting frightened by the invasive properties feels like it's such a fear-based reaction. Justifiable due to the ethical quandaries that empathy field brings but still it feels too hasty.

As for letting our family know that we've decided to not stop being an empath, yeah. We seriously need to let them know. They've been living with the fact that Shu's become a really good empath for quite some time now that our decision to cut it off will be super jarring for them.

We still have the Neurotic Halo lvl 2 for thoughtform conversations, but we won't be able to directly sense what they're feeling.
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>>4179793
we forgot about it because it literally only happened once, and we actually couldn't actively do it, despite what that says.
and also even with Isabelle didn't seem to be deep as this. it was tolerable because it simply couldn't do, and never did, anything like this has or could.

like, with that, even if we tried to abuse it, we might just get them thinking about how much they miss apples. level 15 would very much gut punch the apples thought, step over it, and rip open the vault to their nightmares.

>>4179792
we can tell them once its over with, in part just to make sure we ourselves even IC and OOC a bit too, fully understand what it looks like on the other side, if that makes sense. plus, gives Shu a moment to prepare for it.

as for the hybrid. fair, though we'll have to see i suppose. overall though this isnt really a major part of Trypohilic Hive though. not a minor, insignificant part, yes, but small enough to reasonably guess it could get ignored or muddled up in a hybrid. that, or changed. i think what we hybrid into it would matter alot though, and would have to be taken int account more now too. basically play the system as it was, or something like that, over going directly for combos that look perfect.
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>>4179804
you say that like level 15 isnt alone enough of a reason to block it off. id argue even level 7 still was, but at least then it wasn't so obviously as horrendous.

I also disagree its too hasty. again, its like comparing a rocket launcher to a pistol in terms of what this one can do compared to before. its just immediately obvious how bad and dubious it is to keep around.

i also, as ive said, dont think its fear, or at all at least entirely fear. theres legitimate concerns and issues with keeping it, even if we could trust ourselves to not use it. i think ive said more than enough honestly that anything would just be repeating myself over points already made.

all i could think to add is that fear isnt inherently a bad thing either. its a warning, and one to not be ignored. i again disagree this is a fear based reaction, but even if it was, so what? so long as we think through it and why we fear it, which i think we all are doing for sure, coming to the conclusion its not worth having or the risk of keeping isnt bad or the wrong one simply because there might be some fear involved in there too.
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>>4179804
oh, and as for checking.
im not against it i guess. wouldn't change my thought or vote we need to block level 15, all it would do is help me and us decide if its worth continuing to level it in spite of level 15 and needing to block things. which, is fair of a thing to want to see, but im more of not seeing why we have a reason to do so now.
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>>4179804
I'd be willing to look ahead. Though there's also the possibility that having restricted it will cause it to evolve differently, and actually avoid powers like that. We've seen that, that big decisions accompanied by surgery can alter how a power works. It's the basis of Francine's Core turning into a healing ability. I'm not sure we could trust looking ahead.

From an OOC perspective, it also means that we'd be making BHOP write out another five levels of the ability. That's why we've never used the Engine for exploratory respeccing before, it's kind of mean to do to BHOP.
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>>4179551
>Cut the empathic channel permanently.
As with the Crimson Cord between us and Isabelle, same with the Empathy channel.

I'd rather make that line drawn in the sand a hard wall that I cannot pass.

To have that power of that magnitude, to glean truths, motivations, their dirtiest secrets and insecurities without their consent and have them face it with a Forced conversation...it's too much for one person to wield.

If I had a power like that I would feel horrible for being the biggest asshole after using it once.

It's too much for an anon like me. And given Shu's reactions IC, it'll be too much for her too.

>>4179792
>>4179809
I remembered us planning to have our original core ability a complete mono-tree complete with a skill cap. There's got to be some swarmling only ability in the lvl 16-20 range that we could benefit from.

What's making me toss and turn at this is the fact that if we hybridize now at lvl 15, we won't be reaping some of the higher end benefits of our core tree that don't affect daughters/amalgams, even if parts of them do get gimped by the implanted Relic. Also is the fact that because of the implanted relic, our original core ability will have gimped abilities lvl 5, 7, 15, and possibly 14.

So even if we do hit lvl 20 cap, we may have at least 4-9 abilities that have been neutered or gimped due to the implanted relic in the end.
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>>4179848
>Also is the fact that because of the implanted relic, our original core ability will have gimped abilities lvl 5, 7, 15, and possibly 14.
Oh, man, I didn't even think of level fourteen. BHOP, would that ability be nerfed by not having the empathic field? I guess it could change to only be usable on Gina.
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>>4179841
while i do agree and dont want to abuse the engine either, i guess maybe seeing the last five levels of the main characters most important ability aka their core might be the one time i might be ok with it.

also, once the surgery is done, we could trust it. because we arent snooping, the way the engine works we would actually be gaining those levels, but just putting them back where they belong after we check things out. so if the surgery does change things, we would be seeing the changed version.

but as the person who does the Character Sheets.
yeah, i know exactly what you mean. and if BHOP wasn't up for it or asked us not to, i'd be more than willing to make that concession for sure, and also agree i dont want to unnecessarily work him into the ground regardless. its just it might be an exception to that. possibly.

>>4179848
that was before we learned you technically could still get the capstone and still hybridize, albeit in a bit of an odd, more time consuming way.

and like i said, id not be against seeing how things look after the surgery, i was only asking when you think we should, as i was unsure right now was the best time. hybrid or continuing the level-up, it wouldn't matter til next level-up session anyways.

also, id think a Triple Hybrid might make up for the 'lost levels' due to the massive stat increase. and possible potential power, assuming we avoid a combo that just causes problems again.
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>>4179858
Oh shit I forgot, it would also affect lvl 12 as well as it could basically restrict our ability to offload our swarmling capacity onto our allies as well. God fucking dammit.
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>>4179858
>>4179870
might be wrong, but you guys might be panically reading to deeply into some of those. alot of that reads more like its just based off the same network our Swarmlings work off of, not specifically the Empathic network, which there seems to be some level of separation between. that, and anything done via physically touching like the swarmling cap is probably safe i would think, due to its physical nature.
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>>4179881
Maybe, which is why I'd like BHOP's commentary.
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>>4179870
>>4179858
>>4179881
>>4179896
>>4179766
then lets at least link this all to BHOP, just to make sure its not lost or accidentally overlooked.
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>>4179899
>>4179896
>>4179870
>>4179858

(They would not be affected, no.)

(Essentially, the criteria is this; Does the ability interact with emotion, particularly where non-construct individuals are concerned? Then it's effected. If it doesn't involve emotions, then it is not affected.)

>>4179860
(I would be willing to show you all your upcoming skills, save for the capstone, if you all decide you want to see them. This would be the only time I would wish to do this though, primarily for the aspect of surprise that I personally enjoy. I believe that would be fair, if that sounds alright to everyone. I'd only do that if that course of action was voted on, however.)
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>>4179909
(Lvl 20 plus capstone, is what I meant to say.)
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>>4179909
thats fair yeah.
to be fair BHOP, you built your own grave here with that by so heavily involving a moral based dilemma into our core ability.
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>>4179916
(Oh, I'm fully aware, and this was absolutely intentional.)
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>>4179909
>(Essentially, the criteria is this; Does the ability interact with emotion, particularly where non-construct individuals are concerned? Then it's effected. If it doesn't involve emotions, then it is not affected.)
Okay, so skills that represent a bond with people but don't directly read them would still get through the filter. It's only things that Shu could consciously perceive that would be blocked. That's good. Still would rather keep the basic empathic field, but eh.

>I would be willing to show you all your upcoming skills, save for the capstone, if you all decide you want to see them.
I admit I'm tempted. What do you think, fellow anons, should we take a look?
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>>4179927
possibly.
it really is some damn important info, even compared to most abilities. knowing whether its worth continuing down the line would very much be useful. mind you, again, now? im unsure. it wouldn't fully matter until next level-up vote anyways, but i suppose i also see the concern with getting it out of the way now.

I think its something we should probably do, but when im very unsure of myself, and would be quite open to suggestions on.
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>>4179914
>>4179909
You are sorely tempting us bhop. We would like to see it, but we're currently out of level-up tokens and we're about to head into a World boss level raid.

>>4179920
I hate you so much for doing this to us. You give us such incredible power, and tempt us with such power, and then sit back and cackle as you watch us debate, discuss and resist said temptation as best we can. as we treat said moral based dilemma like a live nuke. What is this? Jesus's 40-day trial in the desert?
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>>4179935
mean, all we're doing is checking it out. all we would need to do is have Shu temporarily swap some levels around then swap them back regardless of what we see, just to get the info.
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>>4179909
>>4179920
yes please. show us the goods and let us either groan in regret or sigh in relief.
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>>4179932
Well, if we decide it's not worth it, at worst it means we can take the level off of Hive level fifteen and put it into something else.

>>4179935
It feels like a betrayal in some ways, you know? Trypophilic Have has been our most trusted tool, the one thing we could always rely on. Even more than our allies, they could be knocked out or separated from us but our swarm and the power that generated it was a constant. And now it's doing this to us.
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>>4179954
To be honest, I'm almost not surprised.

Because how else, where else, and from who could the sting of betrayal and treachery be felt the greatest?

From the tool, from the friend, and from the power whom we placed our trust in the most.
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>>4179954
well, we would still need level 15(eventually anyways) if we do want to hybridize it, or at least test that option out. so the level itself is probably best just saved for that regardless.
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>>4179959
>>4179954
From lvl 15 to lvl 20 + Capstone, how many "dead levels" do you think we'll get?
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>>4179965
Two, three at most.
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>>4179920
>>4179948
oh, ill back up this Anon BHOP, albeit personally am ok if you want it done more naturally via an IC way and another vote, over a tack-on to this vote.

>>4179965
2 at most, plus the capstone.
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>>4179975
(I'd prefer for it to be an in-character vote, yes.)

(Also, writing now.)
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>>4179920
Hey bhop, just a quick question regarding fluff and mechanics, if you knock a Solo hive mistress to either death's door, unconsciousness, or completely out cold from a hard hitting attack do their constructs stop what they're doing and just drop back into dormancy barring autonomous functions?
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>>4180007
(Yes, they do unless they have one of the rare augments that prevent that from happening.)
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>>4179551

"Do it." You say, those two syllables forming a hard, unwavering line that you intend to stand by, no matter the cost. "Permanently."

Francine nods sharply, seizing her folder in one hand and your wrist in the other as she leads you out to the central area. Everyone's a bit scattered now, focused on their fellows or on the select vintages Dorian had moved out of the Roost's stores, and they don't pay you much heed beyond a cursory wave or incline of a head as you come to stand with Francine before the Forge. She extends a slender tendril of biomass to the hearth's core, another finger on the same hand slithering up your arm to your ear, the very same one that she implanted a certain Relic in to address the problem of a power gone rogue.

It almost seems like a lifetime ago, now.

"Ready?" She asks, a strand of golden threat poised centimeters away from your ear drum. "You may feel some slight discomfort, but the re-calibration will only take a moment.

With a sharp nod as your final affirmation, your world goes dark, then white, then...

ha

>>EMPATHIC CHANNEL (RECEIVING) - SEVERED

fascinating

...it all comes back to you, save for the lack of a sound, a murmur that you'd grown accustomed to after hearing it for so long. Flickering emotions, errant thoughts, ideas run rampant - they all blended together into an empathic tinnitus that you only noticed just now.

Now, when it's all so very, blessedly quiet.

"How do you feel?" Francine asks, genuine concern in her studious gaze.

"...Fine. Didn't realize how accustomed I'd gotten to it, actually." You admit, glancing around the room at your friends and family, the noise from them gone, and replaced with their smiles, their laughter. "I think I'll get used to this, though."

"Good. Now, if you'll excuse me, November owes me an inspection of her frame after Tailor tinkered with it." Francine brusquely declares. "Unless, of course, there's something else I may assist you with?"

You smell a laugh.

You hear a smile.

Neither belong to anyone present.

"Uh..." You trail off, focusing your senses on Francine as she cocks her head to one side, curious. "Would there be any residual-"

The word's barely out of your mouth when everything snaps into place, reality suddenly coming into starker relief, all at once.

"Residual effects? There shouldn't be, no." Francine says with a slight shake of her head. "Let me know if you feel anything out of the ordinary, though."

You can't shake the impression of a smile, somewhere at the corners of your being...

...of a pleased spot of laughter, somewhere in the dark edges of what you are, and what you're not.

>>Ask Francine something else, before she goes off and critiques Tailor's work.

>>Test a theory of yours with the Engine, and to see what heights your Core will eventually reach.

>>Speak with another one of your allies [Write-In].

>>Bite the bullet, and talk to Karma.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next eleven hours, with posting to resume thereafter. I wish everyone a restful evening, and I do hope you have a good night's sleep, one and all.)
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>>4180060
>Bite the bullet, and talk to Karma.
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>>4180060
>First, Test a theory of yours with the Engine, and to see what heights your Core will eventually reach.

>While in the Engine Room, Bite the bullet, and talk to Karma.
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>>4180060
>"er, actually Francine, somethings up. im not sure... but i thought i heard someone talking as you set the device up, and now... its like theres someone new there in my head, or here, or something, who wasn't before... and no, its not Isabelle."
>"...is it possible the device just happened to be in tune to be blocking something else aswell, or maybe more likely, the constant emotional feedback was making me deaf to something?"

>Assuming this doesn't go anywhere though, Test a theory of yours with the Engine, and to see what heights your Core will eventually reach.
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>>4180064
hope your nights restful aswell BHOP.
you couldn't make it just as simple as blocking it, could you?
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>>4180074
Anon. That's Nothing/Everything that's been scrying upon Shu. She's just very fascinated at our decision to go back down to mortal levels of connection.

Even if Shu cuts off her empathy channel, Nothing/Everything can still access other forms of observation, that's why Shu can feel Nothing/Everything laugh and smile in amusement and fascination at Shu's decision.
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>>4180091
(From the moment you made the Fool's Choice, nothing was ever going to be simple. Then again, simple doesn't necessarily mean bad, in this case.)
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>>4180093
(I'm sure >>4180074 is fully aware, it's just that Shu hasn't brought up what she experienced to anyone, yet.)
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>>4180060
Oh, I was hoping for something like this. The Nothing wasn't expecting us to do that, was it? Good. Whatever that thing is, whether good or evil, us doing what it expects is a bad thing. "What it expects" is what's lead to every other Crucible over the eons ending in failure. Let's break the pattern.
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>>4180093
>>4180101
yes, i know.
we OOC have ascertained that, but both OOC and IC its only to many degrees still an assumption. and the only time she has at all communicated with Shu was through very specific circumstances, despite hinting she knew about Shu and was rooting for us.

first off, we can guess its that, but we dont actually know for sure. on top of that, its still super, highly odd, and something to not ignore. im merely wording trying to look deeper into it in a more IC excuse kinda way, over just saying "oh Francine by the way, did i ever tell you about the time i met god? well, sorta did. she reversed time so it may of technically not have happened anymore? anyways, yeah, i think i might be hearing her aswell as feeling her looking in on me now. think i should be concerned? oh, and lets hope me being this blatant doesn't cause her to undo things again!"

on top of the obvious fact its still very odd and there no reason for Shu not to double check nothing went wrong here, considering what is happening.

>>4180095
simple indeed does not at all mean bad. simple in fact would be very welcome right now, this decision was packed to the brim as it was.
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>>4180064
Thanks for running, BHOP. See you in the morning.
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>>4180114
it is what it is.
we'll deal with it, whatever comes, we always have.

anyways, unless someones got something they wanna say or need from me real quick, i really need some sleep.
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>>4180163
(What did I miss?)
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>>4180168
the other anon saying this is the seed we planted and the harvest is soon more or less, though different wording.

also, a really good picture he though fit Dorian, so hopefully he at least reposts that.
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>>4180176
(I'd very much like that picture, if said Anon is willing to share it again.)
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>>4180176
Sorry about the bamboozle. Here's the picture.

I just took a step back from writing Chapter 4 of Carter and the town of Cradleton, and hoo boy, I'd reckon the chapter's going to be even longer than Chapter 3 due to the amount of events and dialogues I have to write out.
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>>4180201
neat, glad to hear its coming along.

>>4180201
>>4180138
now, im gonna go pass out. all i can really think to say is i'd like to not ignore the strangeness going on, just seems like we shouldn't. 'Nothing' or not, at the very least double checking we didn't just catch on to a spy or arent just going insane just seems like a good idea after you start hearing and feeling things after having a device in your head messed with.
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>>4180201
It's a pretty good picture. Personally I'd imagine the helmet of his armor as being smoother than that, but the chest and cloak are great.

>>4180214
I agree, just lagging on voting. I've been having slowdown problems again, I think I should run some antivirus software to see if anything's taking up clock cycles. Gonna do that after this.
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>>4180060
>>Ask Francine something else, before she goes off and critiques Tailor's work.
>"I'm definitely experiencing something. Like a presence on the edge of my mind. It feels kind of familiar. Do you think this is new, or is it possible my empathic sense was drowning out something else?"

>Afterwards, finally check on Karma. We've put her off for long enough, Core testing can wait until after we see what she's so frantic to tell us is.
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>>4180060

>>4180070
>>4180068
Amending these votes

to
>Ask Francine something else, before she goes off and critiques Tailor's work.
>"I'm definitely experiencing something. Like a presence on the edge of my mind. It feels kind of familiar. Do you think this is new, or is it possible my empathic sense was drowning out something else?"


>Bite the bullet, and talk to Karma.
Then
>Test a theory of yours with the Engine, and to see what heights your Core will eventually reach.
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>>4180060
Supporting>>4180276
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>>4180385
Oh also am >>4179232
Not sure why my ID changed
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I'm back and it went as I expected. God fucking damn it.

I'm fairly certain that Shu's capstone, one of the most anticipated things in this quest, is going to be crippled. The empathic field was all but stated to be unique to Shu as one of the only Fool's Choice Hive Mistress ever encountered and the thing that set her apart from the rest, and its gotten rid of.

And I'm pretty mad that this decision wasn't consulted with the rest of the family except for Francine. Not even *Gina* knew about this stuff before getting rid of it. What the fuck? And "telling them afterwards" comes off as not trusting them or respecting that they might have a different opinion on this.

This was pretty literally giving up control, as that was the other option, in a story all about being in control.

Fuck couldn't even wait until after the Alpha fight at the very least. I'm going to maintain this as one of the worst decisions made in this quest.

>>4180060
>Bite the bullet, and talk to Karma.
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>>4180625
nah, you're wrong, and not doing this would've been the worst decision made in this quest.
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>>4180625
if it cripples our capstone we will force the crucible to change it. Francine has done it we can do so as well. Especially if we have her there to help out
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>>4180801
thats still kinda what i wanted Francine to do in the first place honestly for this, but didn't appear to be an option. guess it would help if we knew more about all that, not sure shes gone into details over a very minor rundown at best.
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>>4180805
i kinda figured....

and while i had woken up to being capable of participating in the original discussion over whether or not to remove the ability completely it was like 2 in the morning so i went back to sleep instead of typing out a vote or an argument

well we will see if we can bend that ability into something we might be able to justify wielding. For the moment removing it was probably the best move.

They will understand, especially if we tell them that we absolutely did not want to intrude upon their thoughts like that
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>>4180060

"Hey, Francine? One last thing - I'm definitely experiencing something.” You say, prompting the doctor to regard you with a measure of concern. “Like a presence on the edge of my mind. It feels kind of familiar. Is it possible my empathic sense was drowning out something else?"

“Well…it certainly *could* be possible, given how little we really know about the Crucible’s inner workings.” The older woman replies, pondering your question as she steeples in her fingers in front of her nose. “Tell me; this…presence. When did you first encounter it? What precipitated that meeting?”

You tell her the whole story - about interfacing with the Forge Core, the Silver Key’s resonance, the Entity that seemed amused by your unexpected arrival. When you finish, you find that Francine’s attentions is not on you but rather the Forge you both stand beside, its radiant light shining in her eyes.

“Had you interfaced with a Forge since this encounter, even indirectly?” She asks, and after a moment’s recollection, you shake your head. “Hm…perhaps when I tethered you to the Forge, that may have allowed you to gain its attentions once more?”

“Maybe…though I feel like it was what I just did that had more to do with it, as opposed to anything purely mechanical, if that makes sense?” You forward, and Francine purses her lips in consideration. “Also, one more thing before you go – your abilities, how did you change them?”

“You mean my Core? I’m…rather uncertain about that, myself.” She admits, a little sheepish. “There were so many factors that went into my…creation…that parsing out what’s my own doing and what’s a by-product of my unique circumstances has proven exceedingly difficult.”

“Alright...well, if you end up figuring anything out, would you mind letting me know? And thank you…for everything.” You say appreciatively, and Francine just gives you a short bow before striding off to see November. You’re left alone by the Forge, staring into its flickering warmth as a more insistent sort of heat finally draws your focus to the Hexane weapon that’s strapped to your leg. Unholstering the Contender, you close your eyes, focusing on the consciousness that rests within its calcite frame…and when you open your eyes, the ivory, ethereal form of Karma floats a mere meter away from you, hands clasped before her expectantly.

“Master Shu!” She exclaims happily, hovering back and forth in place. “To what do I owe this visit?”

“You…I thought you were calling me?” You answer, confused as Karma begins to stammer.

“M-Master Shu, I…my sincerest apologies if I gave you cause for alarm. I did not intend for my yearning to be so aggressive. I’ll do better to curb my emotions in the fut-“

“Wait, Karma…” You gently interrupt, trying your best to not grin. “…are you saying that you were just…missing me? Is that what this was?”

(Continued)
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>>4180888

“I…um…” She falters, scrambling for a change of subject. “…ah, it appears the Contender’s d-due for an upgrade, Master Shu.”

“Wait a second Karma, you didn’t answer my q-“

CONTENDER – LEVEL UP x2

PLEASE CHOOSE TWO UPGRADES FROM THE LIST BELOW

>>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD: Rounds that impact your foes now boast incendiary properties, with repeated hits allowing you to set enemies ablaze for as long as your rounds’ effects remain active while applying stacking levels of HEAT damage. What’s more is that the otherworldly nature of this blaze ignores HEAT resistance and immunity, as this power’s vengeful flames ensure that there will be Blood.

>>LAST RETORT: Firing the last round from a full-capacity Contender now imbues the final bullet with a drastically boosted effect, along with increasing the round’s CRITICAL CHANCE and CRITICAL DAMAGE.

>>GUNSLINGER’S DRAW (! – Upgraded - !): Your first shot fired PER TURN is now guaranteed to strike with perfect accuracy, and will automatically take place first in the combat initiative regardless of other modifiers.

>>[NEW FORM] ÜBER SCHROTFLINTE: Sound and fury, signifying carnage. The Contender unfurls into a form that, while antiquated, belies terrible power. This form splits the Contender’s ammo into a shower of individual pieces, diminishing its efficacy at long and medium ranges in exchange for devastation up close. The BIO required to load the break-open barrel increases by 10%, but now boasts a far greater chance for critical hit, guaranteeing catastrophic damage in melee range. Rip, tear, and repeat to your heart’s content. (Lionheart’s Bayonet: The bayonet may now be fired before releasing your rounds, lancing into a foe to deal damage and boasting a high chance to haul them up to two movement zones closer to you.)

>>[NEW FORM] PAVLICHENKO’S EMBRACE: The Contender’s barrel and stock lengthen, requiring two hands to wield as it assumes a rifle-like shape that boasts peerless penetrative power, easily capable of tearing through calcite armor and flesh-weave coatings to bring a swift end to your foes, though the increased penetrative power requires an additional 15% BIO per shot to generate such a powerful round. Boasting far greater accuracy than any other form, it gains the additional benefit of making its rounds incredibly difficult, if not impossible, to remove from their target, ensuring your payloads reach full and lethal maturation. It is will a keen eye and a patient heart that you will usher your foes unto eternal peace. (Lionheart’s Bayonet: Twisting to form a spiraling needle as an extension of your barrel, the CRITICAL HIT chance and CRITICAL DAMAGE of this form is boosted dramatically, all but ensuring killing blows from afar.)

>>Choose 1 AMMO type to LEVEL UP (This option may be chosen multiple times, and this effect stacks on rounds that have already been upgraded.)

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next three hours.)
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>>4180891
>Karma missed us
why... why is that so fucking adorable? BHOP just made me feel bad about not talking to an eldritch firearm more often, what the fuck.

as for my vote... personally? with the changes to Draw being per turn now, and the flames ignoring even immunities, i dont think we have any bad options, so ill let people make their argument.

only thing i can think to say is, Last Retort and Gunslingers Draw should probably be taken together if we take either, as making both out first and last rounds have bonuses helps even out the drawback of both being a specific round significantly
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>>4180891

>give Karma a hug after we select the Upgrade.
>"No need to be embarrased about it and sorry if i should have hurt your feelings by shoving you aside for so long"


>>4180895

>>LAST RETORT: Firing the last round from a full-capacity Contender now imbues the final bullet with a drastically boosted effect, along with increasing the round’s CRITICAL CHANCE and CRITICAL DAMAGE.

We empty our magazine nearly every round so i think this will be a good if not great upgrade.

>>GUNSLINGER’S DRAW

I don't think we need the upgrade to our bullets right now. by... shooting first..... and emptying our magazine especially since we get half back for free we should have a much higher damage output.

Especially since loading and firing the weapon already is one action that will only benefit us. We use Karma for anything.... Well maybe not for picking our teeth but for nearly everything
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>>4180891
>Pavlichenko's embrace
It's about high time we got a rifle. Also, the Lionheart's Bayonet interaction now makes it have Gunlance properties.

>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD: Rounds that impact your foes now boast incendiary properties, with repeated hits allowing you to set enemies ablaze for as long as your rounds’ effects remain active while applying stacking levels of HEAT damage. What’s more is that the otherworldly nature of this blaze ignores HEAT resistance and immunity, as this power’s vengeful flames ensure that there will be Blood.

Good. a damage upgrade. Finally our shots will deal full damage even when our enemies are immune to heat. Like a certain cyborg.

>Free action: Hug Karma. Give waves of affection.
>"Karma. calm down. take three deep metaphorical breaths with me. One. two. three."
>"Feel better?"
>"Now, tell me how you feel, what is it that makes you feel giddy?"
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>>4180891
Pavlichenko's bayonet and Last Retort go great together, doubling down on crits. There's a shotgun now, and upgraded quick draw that's useful for the rest of combat. They're all good, though I admit that the Burning Blood has a bit less appeal because all our swarmlings have built-in flamethrowers already.

I think I'll go with
>GUNSLINGER’S DRAW
>[NEW FORM] ÜBER SCHROTFLINTE

I'm starting to think that the Contender should have its own section on the character doc to list its ammo types, forms, and abilities.
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>>4180900
>>4180896
>>4180895
I would like to posit an argument that we will be facing West Alpha in our next encounter.

Last Retort and Gunslinger's draw are a great combo, but our bullets might have little to no effect if we're unable to get past her immunities and resistances.

At least take Chernobog's burning blood to ensure that the shots that we fire have full effect.

After that, my second choice would be Gunslinger's draw as it doesn't matter if we half-load or full load the gun, our gun will fire and hit with perfect accuracy.

If we combine that with Pavlichenko's embrace's (single round magazine), then we will have an always accurate rifle shot.

Last retort operates on the condition that we fully load and reload the Contender each round in order to get the dramatic increasing crit boost and crit damage.
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>>4180900
>>4180896
>>4180895
Should we also ask Karma about Jackie's sword?
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>>4180901
while i can see that loading and firing the weapon is one action. there is no reason to not reload the magazine to full. But i can see the argument for the burning blood

The rifle could be useful... especially since it doesn't decrease at the short ranges that WAlpha will probably engage us at and it does pack a nice punch.....

>>4180903
Possibly. Though Karma may know nothing sincr she is a Hexxane creation and not whatever that weid energy being is.
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>>4180901
yeah, but we always fully reload and unload the contender. that specific concern really just wouldn't be a problem with us.

Also, not sure West is immune to our bullets. could be wrong ,keep forgetting to save her profile, but dont remember it looking like we would need the flames to get any damage off on her.
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>>4180903
Wow i really derped there didnt i

>>4180904
This
>while i can see that loading and firing the weapon is one action. there is no reason to not reload the magazine to full. But i can see the argument for the burning blood

while i can see the argument for the burning blood. The loading and firing of karma is one Action. SO there is not reason to not load the magazine to full anyway
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>>4180905
Let me pull up West Alpha's profile, I'm sure it's somewhat outdated given her last upgrade.
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>>4180901
wait, Pavil doesn't at all say it overrides or limits our magazine capacity. we would still have six shots with it. same with the shotgun.
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>>4180905
>>WEST ALPHA
>>HEALTH: 36,560% (+6520%)
>>BIO: Unusable, generative power re-routed through Forge Core Matrix.
>>ACT: 6/6
>>RELICS: Variable, prefers augmentation-based and mix of melee/speed enhancers. Possesses four Tier 5 Forge Cores, Generation Halo.
>>IMMUNE: Acid, Frost, Blunt, Crushing.
>>ABSORB: Heat, Elec
>>UNIQUE - Unfeeling: Utterly immune to any and all positive or negative emotion-influencing abilities from any source.
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>>4180910
oh right. my bad. I kept imagining that Pavil's embrace had a single shot capacity limit that boosted the power of its heavy piercing shots.
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>>4180911
she absorbs heat so that blood is pretty much out of the question since it does nothing against absorption
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>>4180911
yeah, not even slashing or piercing resistances, as i remembered. thanks, was just double checking, but that does mean as far as we know the Contender can hurt her still.

>>4180911
>>4180893
also, we need to ask BHOP some things. she Absorbs heat, not is Immune to it. thats a step up above Immunity, so she might still block the Fire Rounds, or at least still get a resistance from it, as its only ignoring up to immunity, which would leave some level of resistance left, once you take into account these are all just levels of Resistance stacked making new effects?
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>>4180914
wasnt it changed so that immunity and resitances and absorption are now each different effects?

Specifically since absorption would be just one level behind immunity but still be immune to many things that would reduce immunes and resistances into worthlessness.
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>>4180917
no, they are still all Resistances that build up to those effects, BHOP just extended the amount of Resistance levels you need between all of them to get the next effect. or so was how i last remember it being described.
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>>4180893
>>4180914
>>4180919
seriously, not to harp on you too much, but having a Doc with even just the revealed game mechanics in it would save so so much heartache and issues with us having to go off pure memory...
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>>4180914
Absorption is a step above immunity which is probably Immunity plus absorbing damage at the rate of her heat resistance. She would be immune but the absorption rate would be dependent on the level of resistance.

Chernobog's description says it ignores Resistance AND Immunity, which means it ignores Absorption altogether.

However, we still have to consider Rath's main schtick which is that her fires will also heal West Alpha as much as it harms her unless she switches her main element type to Frost via Pangean Arsenal and Northern Lights.

And in consideration to that, I'm changing my vote.

>>4180898
>>4180891
Amending my vote to

>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD: Rounds that impact your foes now boast incendiary properties, with repeated hits allowing you to set enemies ablaze for as long as your rounds’ effects remain active while applying stacking levels of HEAT damage. What’s more is that the otherworldly nature of this blaze ignores HEAT resistance and immunity, as this power’s vengeful flames ensure that there will be Blood.

>GUNSLINGER’S DRAW (! – Upgraded - !): Your first shot fired PER TURN is now guaranteed to strike with perfect accuracy, and will automatically take place first in the combat initiative regardless of other modifiers.

I can't argue against Gunslinger's Draw now that Bhop has balanced the upgrade so that it's actually useful.
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>>4180926
im not sure thats true, because again, thats not exactly how Resistances, Immunities, and Absorption work.
it might just be meaning it knocks off enough levels of Resistances to where it ignore up to Resistances and Immunites, we really dont know, due to the ambiguity of how the mechanics actually function.

Its a mistake to take Burning Blood without BHOP at least confirming how things work, at the very least.

I also disagree with that combo, i dont think they go good together at all. no way i'd vote for both of those together.
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>>4180926
unless i get confirmation from OP about this i will not go for the blood. For all we know we will only heal WAlpha with that Upgrade.

Because that is not how resistances and immunites work under the old system.
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>>4180926
I'm personally not going to risk it until I get confirmation from BHOP.

>>4180891
I think I might change my vote>>4180900
for
>LAST RETORT
>[NEW FORM] PAVLICHENKO’S EMBRACE
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>>4180933
>>4180929

If that's the case, until we get word from bhop about Chernobog's interactions with West Alpha's Absorption trait, let me go change my vote one more time.

>>4180891
>>4180926
Amending my vote again:

>Gunslinger's Draw
>Last Retort

>Free action: Hug Karma. Give waves of affection.
>"Karma. calm down. take three deep metaphorical breaths with me. One. two. three."
>"Feel better?"
>"Now, tell me how you feel, what is it that makes you feel giddy?"
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(Gentlemen, regarding Burning Blood; I accidentally left off where it ignores HEAT absorption as well, since its wording was altered when I adjusted the system.)

(Thus, to clarify in plainer language; Burning Blood nullifies ANY attempt to mitigate it's damage via the resist/immune/absorb mechanics. The shots may still be dodged, deflected, and whatnot, but their HEAT damage cannot be lessened in any way if they hit. I hope this clarifies things, Gentlemen.)

(It's one of the Contender’s most potent augments, considering its an homage to one of the coolest GPS games of all time, in this QM's humble opinion.)
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>>4180955
alright, thanks for the clarification, but a rundown of how Resistances work again sometime would still be welcome.
that, or as i said, posting the revealed rules someplace so no one has to keep reposting things as much.
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>>4180959
(Yeah, I'm going to add that to either it's own pastebin or re-tool the Swarmling sheet to be a general doc that highlights some of the system's particulars.)
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>>4180955
Okay that makes that augment significantly better then.... I think it can be valuable especially considering the pure volume of shots we can pump out

>>4180891
Ammending my vote from>>4180896
to
>give Karma a hug after we select the Upgrade or durign it whatever works best .
>"No need to be embarrased about it and sorry if i should have hurt your feelings by shoving you aside for so long"
>"So tell me what has you so excited.... Is it that blade Jackie wields?"
>>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD
>>LAST RETORT


And then we end every round by pumping out a significantly boosted shot. Since it is the last shot it wont be affected by Gunslingers Draw anyway

>>4180961
That would be nice OP thank you
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>>4180891
>>4180937
*sigh*
RE-amending to
>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD
>LAST RETORT
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>>4180891
Vote;
>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD

>[NEW FORM] ÜBER SCHROTFLINTE

>"Karma, are you... feeling ignored?"
>Pull Karma into a hug, before continuing.
>"I apologize for that. im sorry, things have been so busy, i just, didnt think about how you might feel, and thats no fair."
>Pull back and give her a smile.
>"Here you are, the ally always by my side, and im letting you feel like im ignoring you. im sorry, and i truly do appreciate the strength you lend me."

my opinion that Blood and Last Retort/Draw is a bad combo still stands. and while the sniper would be great, being able to horribly punish Alpha for getting close to use with a powerful shotgun sounds like a really really good emergency maneuver. however its a shotgun. if we're using it, its doesn't need an accuracy bonus, and i just dont think the last shot getting a boost is really necessary on the shotgun either.

id be willing to change my vote to Gunslingers Draw and Pavlichenkos though if someone wants to convince me, but thats really the only other Combo im interested in.
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>>4180891
Coming to the thread a bit late today. Karma, you're fucking adorable. Sorry we don't spend more time with you, it's just hard to do when you're a gun. We should find a way to hook you into the dreamscape network, let you hang out in our head and meet the dream daughters. If that still works with the empathic field restrained, I just realized that might be a problem.
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>>4180966
BHOP said Relic DDs can connect to whoever is holding them, and in situations clearly not influenced by our Empath Field. id think Karma could do the same, given permission/what caveat allows for the other. might just require a bit of Neuromancy unlocking.

oh, also, we have the Silver key, so we might be ok on the DD connections.
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>>4180961
gah, missed this.
that would be great, thank you, though being its own sheet i think would work best.
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>>4180965
yeah you could be right on the whole Shotgun thing...........

It is tempting......... Considering we could send out burst of Fullbores or Parabellums....... I think i just sold myself on the idea....

>>4180891
Amending vote.... again from>>4180963
to
>give Karma a hug after we select the Upgrade or durign it whatever works best .
>"No need to be embarrased about it and sorry if i should have hurt your feelings by shoving you aside for so long"
>"So tell me what has you so excited.... Is it that blade Jackie wields?"
>>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD
>>[NEW FORM] ÜBER SCHROTFLINTE
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>>4180891
Do Gunslinger's Draw and Last Retort apply per gun, with the Gemini form? Do we get two auto-hit/boosted effect shots per round because we have two guns, or does it apply across the Contender as a whole?
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>>4180970
Yeah, good point, Karma should be able to get to our dreamscape. I hope the rest of the dreamscapes can still connect, though, I don't want to cut people off from any friendships they've made. But you're right, we've got the Silver Key, maybe that will let us forge those connections anew even if they were severed.
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>>4180974
we still have our connection to Gina and she has complete access to the dreamscape network.... So it might just become a bit more difficult for us to meet other people in the dreamscape
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>>4180941
>>4180891

Another amendment:

>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD
>[NEW FORM] ÜBER SCHROTFLINTE

>Free action: Hug Karma. Give waves of affection.
>"Karma. calm down. take three deep metaphorical breaths with me. One. two. three."
>"Feel better?"
>"Now, tell me how you feel, what is it that makes you feel giddy?"


We're going to be fighting in melee most of the time against West Alpha. Pick up the shotgun for massive damage.

Bhop, I do have a question however.

How would this play with Gatling Maxim's 12 round capacity? Would the shotgun carry 12 rounds in it's clip? And does the Shotgun fire 2 rounds per shot due to the double barrel design?
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>>4180973
(They do, yes.)
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>>4180980
well, its a different form than the Maxim, so it wouldn't get Maxims ammo increase. so we're just down to 6 shots, or 3 each if we split it.
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>>4180980
>How would this play with Gatling Maxim's 12 round capacity? Would the shotgun carry 12 rounds in it's clip? And does the Shotgun fire 2 rounds per shot due to the double barrel design?
The gatling gun is a form itself, so switching to shotgun mode would get rid of the doubled ammo capacity.

>>4180981
Hmm, tempting then.
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>>4180981
Bhop: a question in spoilers

Is pic related one of the next upgrades available for the ÜBER SCHROTFLINTE? And if you're asking what game pic related is from, it's Shadow Warrior.
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>>4180974
>>4180977
speaking of which, we still haven't inserted the key into the Orrey.
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>>4180986
we've been busy to be fair, and i think as stated when we first got home and saw that reaction, we wanted to wait til after West Alpha, as that could be a massive plot thread all by itself.
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>>4180984
(That, and also a flaming meat hook. )

>>4180980
(This Anon >>4180983 is correct.)
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>>4180986
we can certainly try that just before we start our planning session for WAlpha. Though not the insertion part. But we can certainly use the Orerry for our scrying on her

To confirm what we know about her and maybe spy a couple new weaknesses even west was not aware off
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>>4180891
>>4180980

Probably the final amendment.

>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD
>[NEW FORM] ÜBER SCHROTFLINTE
>Free action: Hug Karma. Give waves of affection.
>"Karma. calm down. take three deep metaphorical breaths with me. One. two. three."
>"Feel better?"
>"Now, tell me how you feel, what is it that makes you feel giddy?"

>I do have a question however, do you know anything about the sword that Jackie wielded in the last fight?
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>>4180982
>>4180983
But then how would it play with the Gemini upgrade?
Gatling's Maxim would ensure 12 shots, but the Gemini upgrade would split it into two revolvers. And now that we've unlocked Super shotgun, would we still be able to dual wield a 6-round revolver in one hand and a 3-round shotgun in the other?
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>>4181034
I asked BHOP that way back when we got the Gemini. Yes, it works exactly like that. We can have each gun be in different modes, and the ammo capacity increase of Gatlingguner's Maxim would only apply to the individual gun. Three round shotgun, six round maxim.
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>>4180891
>>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD

>>[NEW FORM] ÜBER SCHROTFLINTE

>"Give Karma a hug.
>"I'm sorry, Karma, have I been neglecting you? I'll try to be better about that in the future."
>"Is there anything in particular you wanted to talk about, or did you just want to see me?"

>After that: "Do you know anything about the sword that Jackie's picked up? She said she got it from a Hexane ruin, but it doesn't feel Hexane to me."

Yeah, I guess I'll go with the flaming bee shotgun idea. I'd really like to upgrade the Ravenous Parabellum too if we're going with this combo, though. We don't have the upgrade points for it right now, but the Parabellums hanging out in the target and eating away continuously goes very well with both the burning ammo and the inability to extract bullets. We should be using the Schrotflinte with the Parabellums near-exclusively, and upgrade the Parabellums the next chance we get.
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>>4181044
its the sniper that makes shots unable to be taken out.

however, before you get to upset, i want you to remember the shotgun splits bullets into a spray function without negating what they do.

its still superb with the Parabellum, because now thats dozens of mini-parabellums all eating into them, while also procing fire, and making it to where they have to rip out all of those one by one, also making it much more likely at least one reaches a vital to munch on. not being able to remove them at all would be rad yes, but i think the sheer numbers it does instead basically does just as good.

>>4181034
>>4181039
yeah, as that Anon said. Gemini can still take forms, but any effects or ammo increases would only apply to the one in that form.

>>4180893
also, i just realized i didn't catch the fact you didn't end up putting our DDs in the shells once Rath finished them up as i kinda wanted. mind you, think we forgot to put it in our next vote, but also i think Julia ended up cutting that off.
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>>4181051
>its the sniper that makes shots unable to be taken out.
Yes, yes it does. Don't know how I misread that. Sorry. I still think that Parabellum is the way to go for this fight, though, if we're trying to proc the flame effect. Those stay in the target's flesh for a long time, should keep Alpha burning.
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>>4181051
(Julia's actually putting the finishing touches on the Spiritus Shells right now with Gina, actually, then Gina can siphon them out of your head, so they'll be active shortly.)
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>>4181070
oh, ok.
we'll have to tank Julia for that. didn't ask her to do that, but thats still a nice gesture.

>>4181066
no problem.
and as i said, yeah, it still is a good combo. im fine upgrading the Parabellum too. while i guess the fire does technically solve the issue of it feeling like the Fullbores just better than it in almost every circumstance, getting the Parabellum some more distance between the two still wouldn't be a bad move.
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(Posting soon, Gentlemen. Work's been busy, so I appreciate your patience.)
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>>4181105
Sorry to hear your day has been so busy. I hope it will get better.

But still as always take your time
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>>4181105
Sorry to hear that your day's rough, BHOP. As usual, take as much time as you need. We can wait.
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>>4181105
as always and others have said, we understand and take your time.
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>>4180891

>>CONTENDER UPGRADES SELECTED

>>TCHERNOBOG’S BURNING BLOOD & ÜBER SCHROTFLINTE - UNLOCKED

The Contender’s upgrades selected, you sweep away the information that lingers in your field of vision with a wave of your hand. What’s left is Karma, hands primly folded in front of her as she hovers a meter or two away from you, watching as you cross the gap with a series of quick steps. She’s about to speak when you wrap your arms around her ivory torso, the Contender’s consciousness making a small sound of surprise as you hold her pleasantly warm frame.

"No need to be embarrassed about it, Karma.” You begin, squeezing her even tighter as you continue. “I apologize if I’ve hurt your feelings by shoving you aside for so long. Things have been so busy, I just… I didn’t think about how you might feel, and that’s not fair."

“Master Shu, I beg you, don’t feel bad on my account.” She pleads, leaning back a bit to look at you even as you flash her a smile.

"Here you are, the ally always by my side…and here I am letting you feel like I’m ignoring you. I’m sorry, and I truly appreciate the strength you lend me. I’m not going to let you doubt that again, okay?”

“I…u-um…” She stammers again, quite uncertain what to do with herself in the face of your earnest appreciation in response to her own feelings. “…I greatly appreciate your concern, Master Shu. I must stress that I do not blame you for focusing on other issues that were far more pressing. I do hope I didn’t draw you away from-“

“Karma?”

“Y-yes?”

“Just let me hug you.” You say with a small laugh.

“…Much obliged, Master Shu.” She replies after a moment’s thought. When you and she finally part, you can feel that her initial anxiety’s lifted considerably from when you first arrived, her emotions filling your mind like...

...well, like you were used to in the waking world.

"If I may..." She begins, snapping you out of your reverie. "...I must admit some surprise regarding the haste of your decision to suppress your abilities. I do not wish to offend, but...how are you feeling?"

"Ah, pretty well, I suppose." You admit, taking stock of yourself before continuing. "It's just...I knew if I dragged it out any longer then it'd get more and more intrusive. I mean, I started practically seeing through Jackie and Rath's eyes, and that was all in the course of, what? A half hour? Maybe less? I don't want that, and I want the temptation to use it even less."

Karma just nods thoughtfully, and you can tell even now that while she respects your decision, she doesn't quite understand why you'd limit yourself in such a way.

"So, tell me what has you so excited...is Jackie's new sword?" You ask, shifting the conversation away from what you've yet to even bring up to your family.

"If by 'excited' you mean 'exceedingly cautious', then...yes." Karma replies, her tone shifting in an instant from warmth to suspicion.

(Continued)
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>>4181197

"I can verify without a doubt that that thing is by no means a Hexane Relic. I do not doubt that the Midnight Crew found it in one of the Hexane ruins, but the way it...no. In all my time at my previous Master's side, I can verify that we never encountered anything that behaves like that...thing. It has far more in common with the Silver Key and the Void Orrery than anything else you or they have wielded, but even still - it's something innately 'broken', if I am to put a finer point on how it appears to me, Master Shu."

"Broken?" You echo, pacing in front of the Contender's resident. "Like it's a shard of something bigger?"

"Ah...in a way, I suppose so." She replies, struggling to define her perspective. "When I say broken, I mean it more as a...well, as a feeling, as opposed to anything concrete. It's every meaning of broken. A piece of something, a device that's not working the way it was meant to, and a thing far too powerful for it's own good, all at once."

"Do you think it puts Jackie in danger?"

"I'm afraid that I have no idea." Karma admits, disappointed at not being bale to supply you with a concrete answer. "Just observing her actions during your duel with Magpie, it appears that it is acquiescing to her wishes...though as for whether it stays that inert forever is anyone's guess. I'm not sure what you could do to ascertain what it is, exactly...I certainly wouldn't let it get near any Forges or Engines, that is for certain."

"Lovely." You groan, filing Jackie's mystery sword away as yet another wild card in a deck that's already stacked with jokers. "I appreciate your perspective in any case, Karma."

"Pleased to be of service." She says with a bow, before hesitantly adding; "Master Shu...may I have your permission to be...ah...'sassy', is what I believe Miss Gina would call it?"

"Uh...permission granted?" You say, cocking one eyebrow.

"Ahem...'I can be very helpful, but only if you come to visit'."

You blink.

"...*That* was you being sassy?"

"Y-...yes?" She replies, uncertainly. "It *felt* 'sassy.' Was it...was it too much? It was meant in j-jest, as a call-back to our earlier miscommunication and its pleasant resolution. I'm terribly sorry if I..."

"Karma...that was great." You say with a grin, and she bows once more, clearly pleased with how she dipped a toe into a method of communication that isn't dryly informational. You have to admit that while other matters had you pulled in hundred different directions, it's nice to see her friendly, featureless face once more.

Karma missed you...and the feeling was mutual.

>>Spend a little longer with Karma, and ask her about [Write-In].

>>Part ways with Karma for now, and experiment a bit with the Sparagmos Engine and your Core.

>>Emerge back into reality, and talk with Jackie about your impending duel...and her blade, is she's willing.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next three hours.)
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>>4181203
>>Spend a little longer with Karma, and ask her about

>"It was an absolute pleasure..... Say karma i know i can be a bit neglectful what with pushing things further away form me during a time of crisis that are not immediately related to that crisis...."
>"How would you feel if i were to try and grant you access to my dreamscape....."
>"I have to take my leave now there are things i have to learn about"

>>Part ways with Karma for now, and experiment a bit with the Sparagmos Engine and your Core.
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>>4181203
pff haha, where was this Karma earlier, shes fucking adorably great!

i do have to say though, and nothing agasint Karma or the Hexxanes, but i dont really trust the perspective of a weapon or race that was born with abilities like the one we dont want. being born with it and everyone having it simply changes the context and perspective massively. also, er, id argue it didnt actually turn out too well for them, and their nobility living in a place that blocks it says alot aswell.

Vote;
>Spend a little longer with Karma, and ask her about Her and Charons adventures, whatever it is she wishes to mention is fine.
>Also inquire as to if its possible to open her space up to allow her to visit at least your dreamscape. you cant always visit her, but at least then she wouldn't have to be alone when you cant.

>then, Part ways with Karma for now, and experiment a bit with the Sparagmos Engine and your Core.
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>>4181204
>>4181210

Oh yeah before i forget

I finished writing down the Conquerors Gaze power about an hour ago.

Would you care to take a look.... I could use a second, a third and even a fourth opinion......

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AGsxP2nkBOuKImAZraSnGo7PVelr2H389ZaCxpoqGbE/edit?usp=sharing

And OP sorry to push this on you but i have to know did i hit the notes for a Vitruvian Power?
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>>4181203
Yeah, thought so. More similar to the Silver Key and Void Orrery, it's Crucible Maker tech. These things keep turning up. I'm starting to wonder if maybe there's something out there, something less principled than the Nothing we met, that's trying to interfere and corrupt the experiment. Plant down a lot of neat toys for the little three-dimensionals to play with, see how that influences the outcome.

>>Spend a little longer with Karma, and ask her about [Write-In].
>"Would you like me to try to connect you to my dreamscape, Karma? I'm not trying to put off spending more time with you, but it could be nice for you to get to talk to the Dream Daughters. Someone to keep you company while I'm unavailable."
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>>4181215
(I think you hit the points of a Vitruvian tree quite well, and the tree itself would make a potent addition to any Daughter worth their salt, honestly. Nicely done, overall.)
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>>4181203
>Spend a little longer with Karma, and ask her about [Write-In].
>"Would you like me to try to connect you to my dreamscape, Karma? I'm not trying to put off spending more time with you, but it could be nice for you to get to talk to the Dream Daughters. Someone to keep you company while I'm unavailable."

So should we convince Jackie to get Tinker Taylor to look at her sword sometime?
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>>4181226
After all. More information can NEVER be a bad thing eh....

Thanks for the assesment.
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>>4181215
Personally, I feel that it's a bit atypical for a Vitruvian power. You keep to the mechanical theme, simple powers with broad applications, but the outward focus makes it distinct from the typically inward focused Vitruvian powers we've seen. That's not a bad thing, though, just something unusual about it. There's plenty of room for non-standard abilities.

As for the powers themselves, I really like the critical hit mechanics in this skill. Level five is especially nice, crits piercing resistances while you're scanning the target. I can see some cool narrative manifestations of that mechanic, realizing weak points in protective layers and targeting them. Nice stuff. The buff negation also plays into that well, the idea of surgically stripping away the enemy's tools is a good one. And the capstone brings the two ideas together well, crits that invert buffs to debuffs. That's a really potent power, but one that requires proper set-up and so encourages clever play. I like it a lot.

I'm honestly not too keen on the evasion bonuses, though. It just feels to me that when taken in combination with sensory abilities that those are more like a Neuromancy ability. It's not bad, and it does fit with the rest of the skill, it just doesn't quite work for me as a Vitruvian power. I think that any Vitruvian power that grants evasion bonuses should work on a more instinctive level, like how Rath's body automatically unspools to avoid attacks. It being something done with forethought lands it in Neuromancy to me.
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>>4181227
not until after the duel i think. she might see it as us being scared or something. mind you, we could probably get through to her on it, just feels like our chances would lower greatly and the conversation would be more difficult.

>>4181219
possibly, though might not be meddling. afterall, Nothing said it was 'their' toy, implying whatever she is and is working for made it. but you dont make something like that not to be used, nor did she try and take it or anything. could be something like the underground, or your idea about Mara and Magpie stepping into the pocket dimension, or even like Shu visiting the Nothing. just something that they either threw in or slipped in or was oddly created via loopholes and breaking things, but is not outright something the Crucible... controllers? watchers? architects? whatever they are, dont want in their game, so much as seeing people getting them as a boon or interesting caveat to unexpected plays.

>>4181215
interesting enough i suppose. still feels a just a bit unfocused for my personal tastes. the fact alot of its costs actually significantly increase instead of lower is a neat change of pace though.
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>>4181248
>>4181249
Thanks guys. I was struggling a lot with this power to both mold it more towards Minas personality and to make it a vitruvian power... even with my cliff notes it was a difficult thing to write.

>>4181249
>significantly increase instead of lower is a neat change of pace though.
Well to get more power out of an engine you have to pump more fuel in.

It hybrid will also be a lot and i mean a lot more focused
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>>4181203
>Let Karma get access to the dreamscape network.
>Part ways with Karma for now, and experiment a bit with the Sparagmos Engine and your Core.
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Chapter 4 feels like it's about halfway done, but I've got a few new cast members to introduce and write out.
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>>4181203

You and Karma spend a bit more time together, with your half spent discussing recent events, while she spends hers telling tales of Charon's exploits, with her by their side. It's your recollection of your allies that sparks the idea that makes you pause in your aimless walking, turning on your heel ninety degrees to face Karma in full.

"Would you like me to try to connect you to my dreamscape?" Comes your sudden question, and it's one that Karma certainly wasn't expecting if her slight, hovering jolt is any indication. "I'm not trying to put off spending more time with you, but it could be nice for you to get to talk to the other Dream Daughters. Someone to keep you company while I'm unavailable."

"Master Shu, I...do you think they would find that arrangement amenable? Your Dream Daughters, I mean?"

"For one, I know that Holly'd welcome you with open arms...and knowing Johanna, she's challenge you to a sparring match as a matter of principle." You say, naming the most welcoming pair off the top of your head. "Uzu can be a little stand-offish, but only for, like...the first five minutes, since she's chilled out a lot as of late."

"And your most recent guest?" Karma inquires, her even tone giving nothing away...and everything, when you read between the lines.

"She's...not Ozmas." Comes your equally measured reply. "I know the parallels between Charon and I are numerous, but B'ni's taking steps to try and be someone different. So, to answer your original question - I think she'd give you a chance...and that you should give her the same courtesy. If she doesn't play nice, well...it'd be her loss. You're amazing, Karma, and any of my friends would be lucky to meet you."

"I...thank you for your candor and kindness both, Master Shu." She replies, tilting her head towards you by way of appreciation. "I understand that they'll be accompanying you into this upcoming battle...and I will be honored to fight by your side, as well."

"Likewise." You say, stepping forward and hugging her one last time as you feel reality begin to sharpen around you. "And any time you're feeling lonely? I'll be here - always."

"I believe that to be the highest honor of all." Karma replies, her obsidian eyes crinkling at the corners as she gives you a mouthless smile.

You blink, and you're back home, the dim light of your base casting everyone and everything present in a curious, yet cozy light. There's only a handful of paces between you and the Sparagmos Engine, and only a handful more between you and Francine's back as she continues towards November, your entire conversation with Karma having taken only the blink or two of an eye in the real. Shaking your head to filter a semblance of reality back into your muddled perceptions, you stride over the the Engine, placing a hand on one of its black onyx spires, uncomfortably cool to the touch.

You reach out, and it's then that reality

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>>4181577

If you weren't in such awe of the sights that swirl before your uncomprehending eyes, you feel like you might throw up...though it occurs to you that such a thing would be quite impossible without your body. Sight, sound, feeling - you're at the center of an storm of sensation, the very essence of you assaulted from all sides by things that defy definition by words of any language. You look...not with your eyes, but rather something akin to vision, or focus, or intent...meet in the middle of this cesspool of creative chaos. Indescribable vastness has reached out, occupying a diminutive form that you can stand to percieve before you.

A measure of courtesy from the immeasurable.

you never cease to amaze

and amuse

but mostly amaze

A familiar voice. A laugh in the dark edges of the vomitous color that undulates around your very being.

"You..."

The single syllable takes immense effort to utter, hurling the word like an epithet into the face of a hurricane as the Silver Key pulses in your hand.

me

"...I didn't...reach out to-"

oh

but you did

forges

engines

gates

keys

conduits through which I flow

"What..." You breathe, air filling your lungs countless universes away as you fight for every word you utter. "...what do you want?"

a great many things

but only one from you

so many have walked your path

greater in number than the stars of a thousand skies

but none have done

as you have done

just

now

that power you threw away

without a second thought

without fanfare

without consultation

without regret

is one that could have done so much

you could have stormed the Cord with an army

you could have turned the Titans to your cause

you could keep your family sane when the Cord takes its terrible

terrible

toll

You breathe, agony and ecstacy filling your lungs in equal measure.

you ask what i want

it is simple

it is so complex

now

for you

who speaks in paragraphs

i ask you

for a sentence

i very much wish to know

WHY

>>?

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next three hours, Gentlemen.)
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>>4181581
>"Because that power is too much for me to wield."

A simple answer. A single sentence. It encompasses what we all think about that level 15 power.

It's too much for us to use. It's too much power in the hands of a single person alone. Power like that should not be freely given.
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>>4181581
>give her her one sentence. nothing more, nothing less.
>"Because it was the right thing to do."

firstly, i dont think we owe her a longer explanation.
secondly, i dont think we need one.
thirdly, im not sure we could utter one, given even single words can barely be spoken here.
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>>4181599
Don't put words in my mouth. At least have the decency to say "most" since I'm still salty and I'm staying out of this.
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>>4181599
eh, i dislike this one because while not wrong, it feels like it could be construed too wrongly, in the sense as in that wording sounds like Shu is saying she was too weak to wield it. technically, she could've, and clearly others have before. leaves things a bit more open to interpretation than we need to.
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>>4181581
>>4181599
Switching my vote to:

>"It was the right thing to do."

A close second would be "It is too much for me to wield" but that upon thinking about it, it would be the wrong answer when viewed with a different context because we have used such power before.

So the above answer "It was the right thing to do." feels best.
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>>4181605
I'm sorry about the word shoveling...

>>4181608
Good point, which is why I switched my answer to support your answer.
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>>4181605
whew, you're being even more of a dick than me, and im a pretty big dick.

he means 'we' in the general term my man, not that he literally means everyone who reads or participates in it. its not indecent to simply use a generalization whe he does know a good portion do indeed think generally close to that.
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>>4181616
Can it with the insults, less I start writing something I'll regret later myself.
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>>4181615
honestly im a bit miffed she is using such a flimsy excuse as us literally touching an engine to say we 'called out' to her.

i mean, its the bemused type of miffed, over angry kinda miffed, but still. feels a bit... i dunno. surprisingly... pedantic maybe? for someone so powerful. mind you, like i said, more of an amusement than actually angry, but still. i guess its more like, if she wishes to talk, than she doesn't need an excuse.

>>4181628
what the hell about how i have ever presented myself makes you think i care?
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>>4181633
>>4181628

Both of you enough..
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>>4181613
do you think 'Nothing' is talking about waystations when she says 'Gates', or think thats something else we haven't encountered yet.

also, weren't Engine and Forges Hexxane creations? or, well, as im starting to guess, they only thought they were their creations, but it seems like the idea may of been an implant into their culture. the only question i guess would be why it happened so late as only the Hexxanes being used to insert those functions.
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>>4181633

I get what you mean, so let me try to delve into a mindset similar to Nothing

If I were an omniscient and omnipotent being in charge of the crucibles...

>I find myself looking at a participant who have chosen the fool's choice. A hive mistress, but still. she chose the fool's choice instead of the usual binary that Mother gives. Amusing. Her choice revolves around the fool's choice. To choose friends as her conduit of power. to become an empath almighty and empathetic, able to guide and care for her loved ones before their problems should even arise. I make it so and plan out her path.

>I see her go through her adventures, her highs and lows, but overall, her stunning victories and seemingly relentless ability to advance and turn the tide.

>Every choice that she makes amuses me and amazes me. She stays to her path and the philosophy that she has adhered to. She amazes me that a nobody like her, a splintered substitute personality of a girl who died on arrival of the Crucible, has developed such a philosophy. I am amused by her antics, I am amazed by her actions. Almost nothing sways her.

>Eventually her core power, the power I've granted her originally reaches the third quarter. It is nearly ripe. It is nearly full. Eventually she'll bloom and become unstoppable.

>And then I see her ask the doctor to cut it off. Neuter her powers of an empath.

>Why?

>She had so much potential, her future was almost dead set. If she made the right choice, she would've conquered the cord.

>All that power that awaited her in the end, that golden ending she could have achieved, and she simply threw it away.

>Why?

>I must ask.

>I must know.

>She speaks in tongues and paragraphs when a simple sentence would do.

>I must hear her answer. Her purest answer.

So. After delving into that mindset and letting the muse flow into greentext, I find that entity's mindset would be bemused, amazed, yet overall confused at why Shu would simply throw away all of that potential power. It already saw the ending due to her omnipotence and omniscience, and was waiting to see if/how Shu would achieve it. But when Shu got the surgery. It felt like Nothing was looking forward to such an ending (as if it was an ending that was old yet familiar), but when it came to ask us the question, Nothing had confusion on its mind. That route was suddenly closed which kinda made Nothing confused as well as it was completely caught off guard.

So. the miffed feeling gives me a vibe of an outside audience who has the entire script and knows the ending front to back and was comfortable with how the world works, but then suddenly something happens that manages to throw it out of its comfort zone, which made it angry because it doesn't like being outside the comfort zone.
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>>4181581
Hmm, one sentence, huh? Tricky. Okay, how about:

>"They deserve better than that."

Maybe a bit opaque without context, but it's the reason. We gave it up because we're trying to be good and decent to other people, and violating the sovereignty and privacy of their thoughts would not be that. Being able to read their thoughts would lead us to treating them just like systems to be managed, input-output flowcharts of behavior rather than actual people. They deserve better than that.

>>4181633
I think the Nothing does need an excuse. As it said, it's got a role to play. It's not supposed to be talking to the test subjects. It needs to contrive some justification so that, no really, we're the one who contacted it.
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>>4181694

>Forges
that drive relic creation

>engines
that refines power

>Gates
that allows vast spaces to connect with one another

>Keys
that allow one to delve into the dreamscape

>conduits through which
"Nothing" flows

I think 'Nothing' is talking about waystations when she says "Gates".

The Hexxane think it was their creation

>>4181699
Huh...that's a surprisingly insightful answer. I never thought about it.

>>4181694
What say you? do you want to debate the merits between

>"They deserve better than that."
Vs.
>"It was the right thing to do."
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>>4181695
while you have some clever insight there, i think with that last line it feels like you misread who i was saying had certain emotions...

>>4181706
>>4181699
i still think
>"It was the right thing to do."
rings alot better.

the "they deserve" better really doesn't work as well in the context of only a sentence in reply to her only listing the technical positive uses of the power. "it was the right thing to do." is more solid, even if opinionated, saying we saw it as what was good to do.

saying "They Deserve better than that" here rings a bit iffy due to the fact we're saying getting an army, turning the titans to our cause, and protecting our allies isnt enough or possibly what they deserve, depending on the interpretation.

if we had, well, our usual freedom of letters, the "deserve Better" might be able to be extended better perhaps, but scrunched down i think its merit gets a bit muddled up and more open than id like this to be able to be interpreted as.

>>4181699
i suppose you're right, but still.
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>>4181699

The issue that I'm finding with "They deserve better than that" is the scale in which "They" encompasses. It could mean just Shu's friends, it could mean Everyone on the planet. And "Better than that" puts into question of the moral ambiguity of what "They" deserve. Do they deserve death? Do they deserve kindness? do they deserve cruelty? There's many ways for "God" to twist those words into something within their domain or comfort zone.

"It was the right thing to do" Sounds cliche, but morally for us to give up and throw away that power for the sake of treating people like other people, it makes sense, but the problem is interpretation of the context of "what was the right thing to do?" as it's so nebulous without a concrete context.
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>>4181718

>i think with that last line it feels like you misread who i was saying had certain emotions...

The green text line or the conclusion that I drew after delving into the mindset. reply to this post with the highlighted text you're referring to.
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>>4181706
aaand i totally forgot to respond to the list part of this, grah.

and i see how it could be waystations, i suppose my thought is, it feels like she wouldn't shorten it, or 'stations' would be more fitting if she did. she certainly has said words as long as 'waystation' before, so not sure i see why she would shorten it here.

as for the Hexxane i mean, sure? i think that ignores the fact they still had to build them, and thus someone think them up. sure, again, maybe the idea was implanted in one of their heads without knowing, but that still feels like a lackluster answer personally to the oddity of the Hexxane saying they created them, aswell as the implications to something making them and thus wanting them to think it was theirs if it wasnt.

>>4181723
>>4181695
>So. the miffed feeling gives me a vibe of an outside audience who has the entire script and knows the ending front to back and was comfortable with how the world works, but then suddenly something happens that manages to throw it out of its comfort zone, which made it angry because it doesn't like being outside the comfort zone.

i was saying i was amusingly miffed, this sounds like you're saying i was saying she was amusingly miffed. though i could be misinterpreting things i suppose.
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>>4181719
>>4181699
well , i think no matter what, some potential blanks will have to be implied.

but with "It was the Right Thing to do." its pretty obvious the "thing" is what she is asking about.

with "they deserve better than that." then only "that" being put forward to immediately be implied again, is the power we just cut off, but again, the context of what we means then gets muddled due to her asking us based off her only listing off potential positives of it, so it makes what we think people 'deserve better than' alot more dubious.
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>>4181718
>>4181719
Yeah, I guess you're right. Though I think that "it was the right thing to do" is lacking, too. Not a knock on that vote so much as thinking that any one-sentence answer is going to be insufficient. English isn't a language like that, Nothing! It's not like German where I can convey a concept as complex as "a mood of weariness or sadness about life arising from the acute awareness of evil and suffering" with a single word.
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>>4181725
I agree that she's amused and amazed by our actions as Shu, but in this case, it was my interpretation that Nothing was angry at Shu at the last second when it witnessed Shu tossing away the powers of empathy that it had planned out for Shu/us.

From the the context and the feeling in which Nothing said when it said the word "WHY"

It was in all caps, as if it was screaming at us in anger.

Miffed is still a verb defined as being "offended" or "annoyed", so there will always be a tinge of anger in the feeling.

Our choice to throw away our powers of empathy has both offended and annoyed Nothing. We offended it by refusing the power it would have given us, we annoyed it by denying it the pleasure of seeing the pre-scripted ending she has already seen.

So while it is amused and amazed at the performance we have showed her, it is still prone to anger, which slipped let slip when she asked the one word question: "WHY".
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>>4181729
yeah, as i said above i dont think any one sentence could fully explain it without some level of 'hole' in it.

i still think it does have a nice enough ring to it, but we're so used to being able to explain our points like we're professors i think everything is gonna be lacking, because, well, it technically is.

at this point its just about locking it down in the details like ive been pointing out, if for no other reason than to be a bit pedantic back.
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>>4181740
yeah,i agree the capitalization of WHY was certainly her showing mild anger and confusion.

not sue she feels offended though, but we'll see.
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>>4181740
I'm thinking it's more bewilderment than outright anger. It laughed at us doing it, so I don't think it's too angry. More like "wait what no this isn't what I expected explain this nonsense, Shu".
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>>4181741
It's ironic isn't it?

"Nothing", god of Crucibles. Omniscient, omnipotent. It could spend all the time it could ever wished to give us a pedantic detailed philosophical answer like a professor. But it acts and roleplays like a bemused if petulant child if something goes off script demanding a single sentence answer as if it was a child itself playing by the rules it itself made to follow.
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>>4181753
Well, I doubt it gets a ton of socialization, it probably doesn't know how to talk to people. No matter how mighty or intelligent it is, if it's lacking in experience communicating to us "lesser beings" it's not going to be good at it.
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>>4181751
>>4181753
you know, and this is gonna sound weird... but given her reaction, even if others haven't had our exact power, they had had things similar enough and not turned it down. and she made it sound like us only using it for good was just a given, or moreso, any bad we commit with it would be worth because of the good we do with it.

...again, gonna sound odd, but im beginning to suspect humanity being an asshole of a race in alot of ways before the Crucible is actually on the rare side of things, to the point even 'Nothing' doesn't entirely know what to expect from such a race, and in a twisted way it may of given us an odd sorta advantage here most races dont have.

because, Nothing is just assuming everyone would be ok with us having this power, nor that it would be abused. but, er, it can, and possibly would, and yes people would have issues with it. should they? thats certainly a discussion to have, but that doesn't change the fact they will, which would make us an ass for using it on them regardless.

dunno, just the whole idea its such a mind boggling move to her is interesting to think about, considering it very much was because we're human and because of what humanity is in alot of ways we decided to get rid of it.
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>>4181751
When I delved into "Nothing"'s mindset, I never included the laughter bit. It felt so jarring if I were to actually try to act out that laughter in that mindset.

So if I played a game like dwarf fortress, and followed a dwarf around expecting it to follow the script only for it to go off kilter and subvert my expectations: Yes I would be amused, yes I would laugh, smile, and chuckle at the novelty of the unscripted, but I would still be frustrated because what had happened will be completely out of my predictions/domain/control. And thus I would examine the dwarf closer, I would read up everything about the dwarf. I would know their philosophy, their background, their traits, but it would still not explain their actions.

>>4181765
We are but mortals. A god who makes mortals play a game of godhood will expect mortals to clamor and scramble for the glory of godhood. Gods can never understand mortals, and mortals can never understand gods. Gods want to control mortals so they created a medium to bridge the gap by granting divinity (aka Motherhood).

You know...
This just reminds me of Fate Grand Order's Babylonia anime.
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>>4181765
So other races are too nice before the Crucible, and so the brutality surprises them and leads them to not be able to handle temptation, but humans are inherently jerks enough that we have established social context for turning down power. I can kind of see it. I think that there are probably other assholes out there that have been hit by Crucibles, the Void Orrery showed that there are probably billions out there. I'm sure there are jerks out there in the infinite heavens. But maybe they're too jerkish, and so lean too far the other way and never develop this sort of power. Too focused on dominance, don't have a power based on trust that could then be corrupted. It could be that humans are in the Goldlilocks Zone for shittiness, just shitty enough to understand and avoid getting caught by the trap but not shitty enough that we don't face entirely different problems.
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>>4181777
>humans are in the Goldlilocks Zone for shittiness
pff, honestly couldn't of put it better myself. horrendously beautifully put Anon, honest.
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>>4181777

first off. Nice triple digit post on your post number,

Second, I think it's more that Humanity has gone through the entire spectrum at some point in their civilization from Brutal rape/pillage/burn tribes, to warlords, to peaceful countries in search of academia all within a short span of years with the knowledge of their history still fresh in their minds. The other thing about humanity is that even though they're a social creature, they aren't a unified whole. We have a U.N. ruling council body, but we're still a tribe of factions who squabble with each other over resources.

But your summation is beautiful. We're shitty enough to overthrow kings and establish kingdoms, but not enough to fall for the trap of how power can corrupt those who have it.

>>4181785
In other words, we can be assholes and saints at the same time and have the tendency to swing between the two from one moment to the next. and it can confuse everyone who observes us from an outside lens.
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>>4181751
What I also forgot to mention is that when I tried to delve into that mindset with the laughter in mind, I had a sinking feeling that it was the "Laughing Mad" sort of laughter. It felt like it was there, but I couldn't quite pin it down if it actually was the sort of laughter associated with insanity. the laughter and smiles felt so gentle with amusement but I couldn't help but feel that undercurrent as well.
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>>4181581

You take a breath, every cell in your body fighting to eke out the seven words that defined a decision that so baffled a being that holds the building blocks of reality in its hands.

"It was the right thing to do."

Seven simple words form an even simpler sentence, one that hangs in the air for a second that feels like an eternity...until slowly, with painstaking care, all of creation's chaos grinds to a halt. Nothingness itself draws close to you, your focus hones to a single point at something you can barely describe. You're not looking away...you're staring it down, your heart hammering in your chest somewhere in the far-flung reaches of existence, so very far from where you are now.

And still, your words stand like your gaze - unwavering. Unbending. Unbreakable. It is what you do. It is who you are. Simple and complex, all at once.

It is your unstoppable answer to a question posed by an immovable object...and that object?

It smiles.

Warmly, and with a heart that bursts with something you could almost call joy.

simply

magnificent

It pulls back...everything pulls back, as reality is once more moved just out of your reach.

you

who would see yourself break

before you turn your back on what you have decided is right

to find one such as you in a single strain is a treat

to find two in this Crucible is simply

indulgent

Just as easily as it was broken, as it was unwraveled around you - reality is woven back together, familiar sights and sounds manifesting out of the leftover strands of primordial chaos that surrounded you.

reaching out again this boldly would be ill-advised

even for me

so to you

i say

farewell

It's a thing uttered with care, the single word laced with something you'd almost call pride.

Shu

The Defiant

Hunter of Gods

You blink, staring at your own reflection in the polished oxyx of the Sparagmos Engine, the entity's final words to you still ringing in every cell of your being.

i look forward to seeing you at the top

You're not sure how long you stare at yourself, your gaze unblinking as you study your features, almost afraid to move...as if a single errant movement will cause everything to fall apart around you once more. A hand on your shoulder makes you jump, whirling around to meet Gina's concerned eyes.

"Shu, what the hell just happ-?"

(Continued)
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>>4182075

Your arms are around her neck in an instant, and she doesn't even hesitate to hold you tight. Eyes clenched, they fly open when you feel another pair of arms encircle you - Rath, her citrine eyes wide with worry. You glance around, finding Julia, Dorian, Francine, November...everyone's gathered around you with a fighting look in their eye, ready to pounce of what dared to rattle you so.

"GG, Rath, I...everybody, I'm fine." You insist, inhaling a deep breath and half-turning back to the Engine. "I'll explain in a moment, but for right now...there's something I need to see."

Reaching out again, you're not alone. Gina's hand is on yours...not to stop you, but rather to interlace her fingers with your own. Rath's arm stretches alongside yours, the pinky of her left arm looping around the pinky of your right, her steady arm bracing yours for whatever you're about to do.

They haven't even asked what you're trying to do, but they're supporting you, all the same.

With Gina to your right, and Rath to your left...you see what the future holds.

>>TRYPOPHILIC HIVE: https://pastebin.com/69a4pLRq

Your mind frays at the edges, the final stage of your power eluding you as you quickly withdraw your hand from the obsidian pillar, wincing at the discomfiting sensation you just experienced. Looking down at your arm, you watch as your fingernails scramble along the back of your hand, sliding back into position at the end of your fingers while the rubbery flesh of your elbow squirms away from your palm and back it its proper place. Flexing your digits, you're confident that most everything's shuffled into it's original order after the traumatic alteration you just underwent for the sake of...curiosity.

"Find what you were looking for, darling?" Francine asks, as if on cue.

"Yeah..." You sigh, breath a little short as you feel your lungs rattle with what feels like the tell-tale vibration of a bee's wings. "Yeah, I did."

Gina and Rath haven't said a word as they just watch you intently, on either side of you to support you on your still-unsteady legs. Everyone's quiet, you realize...they're waiting for you to speak, as always.

They waiting for an explanation. For instruction. For guidance.

...or maybe they're all just worried for their friend.

In any case, you take a breath - and do what's right.

>>Tell them...tell them everything, and let come what may.

>>Tell them about what you had Francine do, but leave the Entity out of it.

>>Your troubles can wait - everyone's here for a reason, and that reason is Alpha. Prepare your plans.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, I shall be pausing here for the evening. Voting shall remain open for the next eleven hours, with posting to resume in approximately thirteen. I'll be around to answer any questions, comments, or concerns you all have for the next hour or so, but if I don't get to them tonight, then I'll address them tomorrow, so please link them to this post if you'd be so kind.)

(I wish you all a restful evening, and sleep well.)

(...and before anyone asks, the Spritus Shells are waking up now, so they'll be barging in arriving shortly after the results of your vote.)
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>>4182075
Well, that's mostly the reaction I expected, but...two? Who else are you talking about, Nothing? Should be interesting to find out who that's supposed to be.
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>>4182103
Have a nice night, BHOP. Thanks for running.
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>>4182075
oh? two? interesting.
but, uh, the way you worded that is... well i dont like it, at all.

nor your 'at the top' comment.

>>4182086
Vote;
>Tell them...tell them everything, and let come what may.
>no fancy words from you past that, give them their chance to mull it over and respond, should they feel the need.
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>>4182104
>>4182110

I think...I think Nothing's talking about Mara.

Remember how Mara has Eldritch Cancellation? I think it's a skill that was given to her by Nothing.

Mara sacrificed so much of herself to set up settlements, to stall the crucible, to build up power in hopes of stopping the Crucible until it broke her hope in humanity, until Shu arrived.

Here, Shu showed the same backbone. to follow her principles of giving people a choice, to treat people as people, and to give them a second chance should they fail the first.
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>>4182086
So what is that, a half dead level, plus... whatever the hell the Capstone ends up being? That's not bad at all.
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>>4182122
Capstone is a power that's purely based on the empathy gift. That's why it has an error message because we made the choice to sever our empathy ability.

Level 17 has the empathy feat of hijacking and converting Amalgams into part of our swarm. Which I find it funny because we managed to talk to the Pyre Ant queen and enter a kinship with them long before lvl 17.
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>>4182086
>Tell them...tell them everything, and let come what may.
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>>4182103
hope you have a good night BHOP.

>>4182086
>>4182118
>>4182104
>>TRYPOPHILIC HIVE: https://pastebin.com/69a4pLRq
hrm, honestly wish we could see level 20 at least. doesn't really make sense mechanically honestly.

but i guess its alright to level up. i mean, all but half of level 17 is worth it and wont be effected, and the half of level 17 we keep honestly feels so strong im 100% surprised it has anything else tacked on with it.

i am 1000% worried however level 20 wont be at all worth it though, and same for the capstone. however, i guess it doesn't matter? because once we get level 20, we can then hybridize it with something else, and no longer them both having to be the same level. so, even if level 20 is another dud, at least nothing inbetween was, and it gets us to the same situation as level 15, where we're at a good point to hybridize to make up for the lost levels.

>>4182118
could be Mara, but hard to tell. Mara has been implied to have done some shady things, and possibly been more like what we just avoided; an anything for the greater good kinda morality, which seems to not be uncommon for 'good' people in the Crucibles.

it also a bit meta wise feels like its too obvious, and beating a dead horse with the Mara plot point. not to mention i can imagine at least 3 other Daughters we know of that could potentially be that. or maybe four, but 'A' feels too forced into her sacrifice to fit.
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>>4182086
>>>TRYPOPHILIC HIVE: https://pastebin.com/69a4pLRq
So only one more empathic power, aside from the possible capstone. That's not so bad, then. And the level it would be at also comes with a really nice power, so it won't be a complete waste. Our swarmlings penetrating all damage immunity/absorption makes our Shells a bit broken. And those Queens are super powerful. Plus two ACTs for five turns is amazing, even with it being limited to once per combat, because most fights don't last for longer than five turns anyway. I think the longest we've gone is seven rounds. And having more ACTs per turn will let us win the fight faster, so that helps remove the downside. Turning Allies into Queens is also pretty strong, them taking up so many slots is unfortunate but we'll have a minimum of a hundred slots at that point so not that bad.

>>4182118
I don't know, Mara doesn't feel right to me. It could be, maybe when we learn more about her, but "sacrifice an incredibly powerful tool at personal cost because you can't accept the ethical implications" doesn't feel like what she'd do, in my opinion. I think she'd go for the equivalent of the restriction idea, make it harder for her to use but still leave the possibility just in case. This was a woman who was fine with one of her settlements going all cannibal Darwinist, she's very much a "just in case" sort of personality.

>>4182129
Nah, BHOP said he just didn't want to spoil level twenty, leave some surprises. It's not because it's an empathic power.
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>>4182129
no, the capstones is an extra level you get in addition to level 20, or so is how BHOP explained it before.
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>>4182149
Ah, my bad. I thought lvl 20 was the capstone itself.

>>4182140
So you're saying we're still good to stay our course in keeping our hive as a mono focus ability tree even though we had to have some parts of that ability tree pruned for ethical reasons.
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>>4182149
>>4182140
(I just didn't want to spoil Lvl 20 or its associated capstone, is all.)
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>>4182143
Turning Allies into Queens is also pretty strong, them taking up so many slots is unfortunate but we'll have a minimum of a hundred slots at that point so not that bad.

The ethical problem that I'm having with that is that while yes, we're granting them incredible power and entrusting that to our friends and family, but it's almost basically the same thing as treating them as a tool/chess piece to be used and discarded at the end.

>>4182158
Well, you gave us a good preview and a teaser for what's to come.
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>>4182086
>Your mind frays at the edges, the final stage of your power eluding you as you quickly withdraw your hand from the obsidian pillar, wincing at the discomfiting sensation you just experienced. Looking down at your arm, you watch as your fingernails scramble along the back of your hand, sliding back into position at the end of your fingers while the rubbery flesh of your elbow squirms away from your palm and back it its proper place. Flexing your digits, you're confident that most everything's shuffled into it's original order after the traumatic alteration you just underwent for the sake of...curiosity.
You know, is this the first time we've gotten a description of the visual effects of using a Sparagmos Engine? Very cool stuff, the bodily features getting all scrambled around. Makes sense, "sparagmos" does mean "tearing apart". You've been killing it with the background detail body horror this Vein, BHOP. Good job.
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>>4182143
>>4182140
>Second soul with Shu's sort of "it was the right thing to do" purity

Hmm....Orwell? It could fit, but the fact that she feeds upon emotions of audiences to sustain herself is self-serving so it may or may not count.
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>>4182163
(Thank you. I was reviewing the older Veins, and it was sorely lacking, in my opinion.)
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>>4182158
the capstone i can understand, but i still dont really agree with level 20.

>>4182155
depends on level 20 honestly. aswell as regardless im not sure not abusing the hybrid mechanics is a good idea. i mean, hybrids rarely cancel out the abilities that made them, and if they do, its at least to equal or improve upon it.

Unless im misreading what you mean, as yes, leveling it up to level 20 should be safe. unless BHOPs planning to punch us in the gut by having level 20 or the capstone basically force something horrible on us, but, he wont even show us level 20 so, not really something we can predict.

>>4182161
>>4182158
im not sure that was the implication? i didnt get the impression we were literally stripping them of free will to that degree, only giving them a boost that costs alot of Biomass and Swarmling slots. but BHOP can correct me if im wrong there, or if its up to us if that happens or something.

>>4182170
i meant the true Alpha, the 'Nothing Girl', or the "Everything Girl'. for the latter two, less about their abilities, and more focusing on Mother locking them away bit.

Orwell... not gonna say impossible, but just doesnt have enough kick to her in my opinion. its not like she hasnt helped anyone, but some implications of her might be said to be saying before we came about she wasnt actually doing much to truly help.
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>>4182161
>The ethical problem that I'm having with that is that while yes, we're granting them incredible power and entrusting that to our friends and family, but it's almost basically the same thing as treating them as a tool/chess piece to be used and discarded at the end.
I think this is another issue of us interpreting a power differently. It doesn't say anything explicitly about taking control over them, so I assumed that they'd retain their free will and just get a powerful transformation. Basically no more unethical than a Spirit Shell. But you might be right, just because it doesn't say we have control doesn't mean we don't, that could be implicit to them being part of our swarm. So yeah, something to check with BHOP before we use it.
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>>4182172
It's funny how we kinda get desensitized to the body horror. In the initial veins, the stomach-turning details were enough to evoke the horror of the setting, but soon it turned into biopunk fantasy where the horror of the body horror element is played more for some good laughs and put into the background to make the setting look metal as fuck after fuzzbuzz came about.

But now the timing of having Nothing make her second, third, and final appearance... that body horror's stomach-turning elements is starting to settle back in.
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>>4182172
Hey Bhop, a question. How would Nothing react to Luna?

I'm curious.
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>>4182182
I think a large part of that comes from our becoming comfortable with the rules of the setting. Early on, everything was a mystery, and so the body horror hit harder because it emphasized the idea of us being lost in this strange world. As we learned more and more about how the setting functions and the rules of the Crucible, it stopped being so frightening. We were at home here, comfortable in our circumstances because we had the knowledge to not be afraid. But now things are getting weird with the Nothing, and combined with our Core betraying us our fundamental assumptions are being upturned and body horror is more horrific again. Good horror is built on violating expectations, so it fits that it's coming back in force when we're caught up in mystery once more.
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>>4182193
>>4182182
also honestly didnt help that we shifted away from things like Shu having to actually remove an eye and stick it into a Swarmling. we kinda shifted pretty hard from things having to be implemented in a kinda horrorish way, to at worst abilities just being weird or kinda horrorish, but even things like Francine pulls our head apart kinda feels... i mean, that one hit home dont get me wrong, but the fact its more us overlooking the obvious of how she would do it due to her powers, over feeling like we're having to creatively abuse our new bodies in ways even our abilities dont mean for us to, still makes it hit differently in my opinion.
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>>4182181
>>4182180
(The 'Designated Queen' power acts more like a buff the target may choose to accept or decline, so you're not forcing anything on them.)

>>4182186
(He'd be immune to Luna's abilities, the same as all Daughters, but I believe that he'd be thoroughly delighted at how much chaos she causes.)
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>>4182201
Yeah, that too. Our mutations are becoming more streamlined as they become more powerful, and that removes some of the more visceral elements. Like, Shu has covers on her back-holes now. Used to be she had a bunch of gooey orifices showing on her back all the time, now she's...well, still got gooey orifices, but she can put protective covers over them when not in use which makes her back much less gross to look at.
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>>4182207
>(He'd be immune to Luna's abilities, the same as all Daughters, but I believe that he'd be thoroughly delighted at how much chaos she causes.)
>He
Bhop. you gave away something very important.

You gave Nothing a gender.
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>>4182207
see, thats another thing about 'Nothing', and like i mentioned in my first post of this vote. they just... honestly i dont WANT them to be pleased with us. sure, i dont regret any action that lead to it, them being pleased with us does not automatically mean we made the wrong choice, however the way they talk, seem to think about things, and view the Crucible in general, on top of bein a complicit actor in it... honestly? kinda makes them seem worse than West Alpha.

Because as much as a detest giving West Alpha any ground, they still too are a victim of the Crucible, and take it seriously.

>>4182212
>>4182207
oh yeah, we really haven't been getting corruption updates these last two Level-ups. just not much change BHOP, or just no room to mention it due to post restraints?
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>>4182213
(Indeed, I did. I will say Nothing's gender is not plot-relevant, and more a product of whose voice I imagine when I'm writing Nothing's lines.)

>>4182222
(When Shu takes a breather, you'll see just how much it's progressed. She's just not had reason to look at her back or how far it's progressed. As for the others, you'll see it more here soon. You all just ate and have been relaxing, after all, so that bit will come soon enough.)
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>>4182228
fair enough.
guess we'll get to see that alongside the shiny new Spiritus Shells.

ah god, is this gonna become the Crucible Bodyhorror version of a fashion show?
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>>Crucible Body Horror Fashion Show
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>>4182222
>oh yeah, we really haven't been getting corruption updates these last two Level-ups. just not much change BHOP, or just no room to mention it due to post restraints?

>"Yeah..." You sigh, breath a little short as you feel your lungs rattle with what feels like the tell-tale vibration of a bee's wings. "Yeah, I did."

I think the corruption has expanded to the point where our lungs have been turned into a bee hive nest structure, complete with honeycombs and larva. but given the fact that we're using the bumblebee archtype...

Just look at the nest structure of bumblebees in this vid. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bpPyTxIjgS4 which is like a huge bunch of random honeycombs haphazardly pasted together compared to the usual hexagonal patterns of honeybees. Now imagine that occupying what used to be your lungs.

>>4182243
Goddamn you bhop. Have a Briar Rose ballerina lady.
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>>4182262
possibly.
actually, you bring up a good point.
why do we not have anything based around larvae? i get they stay in the hive til they grow up, but still. no mention of like, infecting others with larvae or larvae spilling out of our wounds or anything.

ah well, guess just a sad step on the whole aesthetic we skip over due to the need to auto-spawn 'adult' bees.
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>>>4182222
The sense I get with the Nothing is that they value benevolence but don't actually appreciate it. Kind of like the inhuman spirits in Jenna Moran's writing.

>The flaw in Scerascaling Leetha is that she cannot hear the noise of life. She does good things, but only in response to her own character—to a kind of inborn duty, like that which drives Grain Waker. The Elysian fields that Scerascaling Leetha has built are to her something like a dollhouse—she makes the people there happy because that is what she is meant to do with them, but she doesn't see them as people. They're just things, just things, like the mountains, sea, and stars. When she is at her most sophisticated, she imagines them as clever mechanical automata with pleasure and pain outcomes built into their mental states; then the game becomes to maximize the utility of her Heaven as reflected in those states. When she is at her least sophisticated, she goes by the classic ideals of what things make people "happy," relying on the fulfilling character of her dominion to cover any gaps. The fact that life typically considers itself to be more than a set dressing cipher or an automata with many states is a matter of fascinating irrelevance to her, like a doll's ability to burp or recite a poem. Such a cool doll! But that doesn't give it meaning.

The Nothing likes it that there's someone who is benevolent and good and empathetic. But that's not because it cares about what happens to the tiny little people of our world. It's because us being good and empathetic is novel. The Nothing doesn't get to see this sort of thing very often, we're an unusual data set and that's why it likes us. Maybe us being benevolent will cause progress in whatever arcane process or experiment the Crucibles were created for. Maybe it won't. But even if we don't give it any utility, at least we're something interesting to watch. It's gotten bored of all these amoral Hard Women Making Hard Decisions. A decent person is a fun change of pace.

Derped up the greentext copy-paste, bamboozle now.
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>>4182262
(Ha, thank you for sharing.)

>>4182235
(And because I just replied with a goofy gif instead of saying anything, thank you for sharing that fantastic image, as well.)
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>>4182272
>why do we not have anything based around larvae? i get they stay in the hive til they grow up, but still. no mention of like, infecting others with larvae or larvae spilling out of our wounds or anything.

You mean using them as substitute ammo for our Parabellum rounds? We won't get the same effect of exploding teeth when the bullet detonates, but we'll get something similar to a Hollowpoint spawning a bee out of people's backs painfully.
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>>4182273
yeah, i could see it being something like that, for sure. which is horrifying, but, is what it is. ah well, shes a very big problem to deal with at a very far off date. horribly, the top of the Cord it sounds like. yeah, as if that wasn't already implied to be a hellhole enough, and difficult to do what we wanted aswell. i just cant imagine 'Nothing' making it easier, even if she isnt actually trying to make things directly more difficult.

>>4182286
you're quite welcome. have its sister image, while you're at it.

>>4182287
not what i meant, no.
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>>4182293
If Nothing is what sets up the game for all crucible games, then what makes Mother?

Getting to the front door of the Cord is hell, there's a designated warzone right on the front lawn that implies that the land there is so chaotic that even prepared daughters can't pass through without major losses.

Grandma Uzu got past it but had to suffer severe losses to her construct army just to meet Saragatamas(?) before entering the cord proper.

>>4182286
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>>4182321
>If Nothing is what sets up the game for all crucible games, then what makes Mother?
The loser of the last session, forced to GM the next one.
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>>4182321
>If Nothing is what sets up the game for all crucible games, then what makes Mother?
the last Mother. the previous winner acting as Mother typically is not supposed to off themselves. hell, even despite everything, technically Ozmas is even still alive, assuming a different daughter than us got there to win traditionally.
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anyways, bout that time. night Anons. have another picture to inspire everyone's dreams. or nightmares, i dont judge.
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>>4182362
Good night, anon.
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>>4182362
(Sleep well, Anon.)
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>>4182086
>>Tell them...tell them everything, and let come what may.

They deserve to know the truth about what we jsut went through if Nothign reaches out again to stop us so be it but i think they deserve to know the truth.....
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>>4182086

You speak, and they listen.

They listen as you tell them what happened when the Silver Key first opened the way, they’re quiet as you describe how it felt, when time itself was lost to you. Eyes widen as you describe what you’ve just cut from yourself, and hearts warm when you tell them the seven, simple words that formed your brief answer to a complex question. When you finish, they’re quiet for a long moment, waiting for silence to break.

“Th-thank you.”

Julia’s voice reaches you from the middle of the group of Daughters, cutting through the silence with a volume and boldness you’ve not heard her use before, even as she continues. “Thank you f-for doing that for us.”

“I’m a…little confused.” Jackie grumbles, narrowing her eyes as your family. “Shu just tossed away one of her strongest abilities, what’s there to-“

“She’s been gung-ho about choice and control from the day I first started traveling with her.” Rath interrupts, though with no measure of irritation in her surprisingly calm explanation. “Yeah, that empathy junk was one of her biggest tools…but if she was gonna be popping into our heads without warning, then no way in hell she’d go for that.”

“That level of control has no place in a family. Shu’s well aware.” Dorian declares, putting his arm around Julia as he fixes you with a knowing smile.

“Tactically, the power made a lot of sense.” November admits, folding her massive arms and nodding towards you. “Interpersonally, forcing people into talks like that goes against everything we’ve said that we fight for. I stand by her decision.”

“Me too!” Amara chimes in, darting forward and puffing her chest out proudly in front of you, arms folded in front of her as she flashes Jackie a wide grin. “Of course she’d get rid of it! Who the he-“

Julia shoots Amara a glare, forcing the girl to backpedal swiftly.

“…Who the heck do you think Shu is?!” Amara recovers, prompting a cheer from both Keane and Rosa in the back of the group, while Quinn just rolls her eyes…but she’s smiling, despite it all.

“See?” Gina says, looking up at you with her bright hazel eyes. “What, did you think we’d be mad?”

“No, I…” You stumble, overwhelmed by the appreciative looks you’re surrounded with. “…I’m not sure what I expected, but it wasn’t-“

“INCREDIBLE!”

The enthusiastic bellow from across the room causes you all to collectively jump and round on the source of the explosive interruption. Looking out over everyone present, you’re treated to the sight of Johanna standing proudly in front of the door to Tailor’s workshop, hands on her hips and a smile on her face. Behind her, Uzu just buries her face in her hands while Julia tugs forcefully at the hem of the body-builder’s shirt to get her out of the way…attempts that Johanna’s oblivious to as tree-trunk legs carry her over to you in a few short strides.

(Continued)
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>>4183139

“Incredible self-actualization, my friend!” She roars, seizing your hand in hers and giving it a shake that threatens to dislocate your shoulder. “A leader, casting aside the temptation of power? Absolutely splendid!”

“Volume, dude!” Holly laughs, playfully punching the other girl in the arm before throwing her arms around your neck. “Long time no see, huh?”

You pull back, glancing between the three Daughters as you take stock of their new bodies. The finer points obviously owe a great deal to Julia’s eye for detail, their faces and hair impressively life-like, avoiding the uncanny valley that would be an all-too easy thing to tumble headlong into. Rath did a superb job on their bodies, with Holly, Uzu, and Johanna all appearing surprisingly close to their original forms, each of them sporting matching black uniforms – Holly and Jo in tank tops and shorts, while Uzu’s wearing a simple dress that flows around her ankles as she gives you all a polite bow. Finally –and much to your delight - each of their tops is emblazoned with the image of a cartoonish FuzzBuzz, discretely placed just above their hearts.

“We tried to curb this one’s enthusiasm while you were talking, but she’s a veritable Vesuvius after that little speech of yours.” Uzu says dryly, a wry smile tugging at the corners of her lips as she glances towards the taller girl. “Though I have to voice my appreciation as well…a much quieter version, of course.”

“Ha, well…I appreciate it all, right now.” You grin, giving both Uzu and Johanna a one-armed hugs, the former around her shoulder and the latter around her powerful torso, her muscles rippling as she cranes back to yell at the door from whence they came.

“Izzy! You coming or-?” Johanna starts, cut off when Holly jabs a fist just under the other girl’s sternum, complete with a pointed glare.

“Just give her some time, like we talked about.” Uzu hisses under her breath, glancing back at the door’s darkened frame. “She’ll come when she’s ready.”

“Glad of you all to join us, in any case. For anyone that hasn’t met them yet, let me give you all some introductions!” You declare, shifting everyone’s collective attention away from your justifiably shy Dream Daughter’s inevitable entrance and to the far more pleasant task of fresh meetings…and in the midst of that, it suddenly occurs to you that in the time you’ve set aside to relax, you’ve dealt with Rath’s deepest doubts, changed your powers forever, and justified yourself to something that defies explanation.

No rest for the Defiant, it seems.

>>Give everyone time to relax…including yourself, since you’ve more than earned it. [Choose ally to speak with]

>>…You need a drink, and to just sit down to chill for longer than five seconds before another crisis has a chance to manifest itself.

>>Peek in on B’ni, while everyone’s momentarily distracted.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next four hours.)
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>>4183140
>>…You need a drink, and to just sit down to chill for longer than five seconds before another crisis has a chance to manifest itself
>prepare a drink for you dreamdauhgters as a welcome to the waking world including for Isabelle for when she decides to show herself.... She might need it as much as you do
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>>4183139
oof. poor Jackie. i just realized. Jackie has been worried sick if shes strong enough to be worthy of being a leader, and looking up to us as an example.
...and now shes seeing us be praised for technically making ourselves be weaker. thats gotta be confusing the hell outta her.

>>4183140
yeah, the Crucible really doesn't like to let rest just be rest, huh Shu?

Vote;
>…You need a drink, and to just sit down to chill for longer than five seconds before another crisis has a chance to manifest itself.
>Ask Dorian and Julia for some quick aid getting everyone something to drown down the craziness a bit, including your shy hideaway for when shes ready.
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>>4183147
I wonder what sort of drink order would Isabelle order...

Well. we threw away our empathy, we're not one to intrude. Isabelle has the choice to grow her own courage of her own initiative. It's hard I know. Spent the first 18 years of my life doing nothing except follow people's orders.

>>4183152
We seriously ought to talk to Jackie about this, because right now all she's doing currently is playing copy cat. And that's a bad thing. She was more true to herself when she was a dick when we first met, but after that? It now has the sense that she's trying to compensate for something that really isn't Jackie Spades.
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>>4183140
>Finally –and much to your delight - each of their tops is emblazoned with the image of a cartoonish FuzzBuzz, discretely placed just above their hearts.
So this is officially our logo now, then? I have no problem with this. Although, now that we've got another Hive Mistress power, should we expand the brand? Baby ravens are pretty cute, we could give FuzzBuzz a partner in the form of FluffSquawk.

Also, um, is nobody reacting to the "so, I may have met Yog-Sothoth" part? Like, good that they're dealing with the telepathy issue well, but there's another pretty big deal we just told them about. Did we tell them about it? Did the Nothing unmake us talking about it like it unmade our first visit?
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>>4183159
>Did the Nothing unmake us talking about it like it unmade our first visit?

As far as we could tell.... No it didnt interfere...... At least not with Shu.....

Though it might have altered their perception of what was said since we apparently can tell when it tries to influence shit specifically if it influences us since we have the key.
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>>4183157
agreed.
i guess if you think we need to, we can talk to Jackie, but i really feel like Shu both needs and deserves at least a bit to unwind. she did just cut off her Empathy Channel, Have a Talk with a god-like figure, then have to deal with the tension and stress of telling er family about it.

think Shu can(hopefully) spare a moment before digging into the very real minefield that is Jackies current state of affairs. geezus, not to mention we may have to bring up the sword.

>>4183140
>>4183152
Mild Vote Amendment, though im 50% positive BHOP probably planned this anyways, but i actually kinda like the idea enough to not risk him overlooking it;
>…You need a drink, and to just sit down to chill for longer than five seconds before another crisis has a chance to manifest itself.
>Ask Dorian and Julia for some quick aid getting everyone something to drown down the craziness a bit, including your shy hideaway for when shes ready.
>Then, once Drinks are about, both to ease the mood and stem your own curiosity, try and coax everyone into a 'fashion show' to show off their latest corruption changes, aswell as let the art of Julia and Raths Spiritus designs be shown off.
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>>4183159
eh, i love birds, my favorite group of animals. and crows are great.
but lets at least use the ability first and see if we want to keep it, before we do that id say.

>>4183159
>>4183161
nah, they reacted to our 'It was the right thing to do' line if you look. they heard the whole thing as it was. same with the fact Francines reaction made it clear what we said wasn't altered.

i think it was both the interruption, them focusing on comforting and defending Shu, and the fact as odd as what just happened is... its still not actually so much odder as to not break the desensitization wall, as it was. especially as im sure they all know about the Orrey and how massive the Crucible game really is. 'oh, theres like, a moderator watching off of this? of course there is.' isnt too odd a thought for them to have i think.
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>>4183140
>>…You need a drink, and to just sit down to chill for longer than five seconds before another crisis has a chance to manifest itself.
>>Write-In
>While resting, poke around our neck and shoulders where the chitin plating is, see how it's expanded. Get Gina to take a look at any parts of our back we can't reach. Ask her about her own mutations in return, let that segue into a general showcase of how everyone's changed at this latest level-up.

>>4183166
Maybe. I guess it could just be that things are so weird that they're jaded to it, yeah. Nothing phases our friends anymore. Oh, of course Shu met the Elder God, why wouldn't she have? It's not that much weirder than the time FuzzBuzz befriended the Ant Queen.
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>>4183159
(Their main concern was your own state of mind and reassuring you, while grappling with you interacting with other bizarre entities is still concerning, though somewhat lower on the totem pole.)

(Then again, you dealing with weird entities isn't exactly new, so they're less surprised than they'd be if you hadn't deal with as much trippy garbage as you already have.)
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>>4183169
the fact we and our family is so jaded to weirdness mentioning we met and elder god does almost nothing to them will never not make me laugh.

honestly im pretty sure Rath is probably thinking 'ima punch that thing." which the mental image of her thinking that while cutely nodding her head while everyone like 'fucks she doing that for?" just made me laugh even more damnit.
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>>4183140
>Give everyone time to relax…including yourself, since you’ve more than earned it. [Choose ally to speak with]
>Talk with Gina. Center yourself a bit, and look at how your body may have changed.

By the way I was looking over the Spiritus levels, particularly its level 5 skill. Does this mean Johanna has access to Ravenous Maw then?
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>>4183163
>>4183140

I'd be down for this.
Body horror fashion show.

Although I do wonder if it's possible for everyone to find out what they looked like prior to the crucible for compare and contrast...
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>>4183177
would probably have to do some Neuromancy linking about, but technically yes, as they could pull from their dream self images.

>>4183140
>>4183163
also, i just remembered you said BHOP we didnt have to give the Barbers or Midnight Crew any Levels because you had already accounted for that, so we should make sure they get in on the fun too.
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>>4183169
Ah, so it is them being jaded. We've blown out the gauge on their weirdness meter, Shu being watched by a void god is less notable than us developing telepathy and wanting to not abuse it.

>>4183170
That is definitely Rath's reaction, yes. "Asshole space god giving weird foreshadowing to my friend? Punch."

>>4183171
It should mean that, yes. Also that Uzu has Psychica Spiralis, though that's less significant since we can hand that out to allies via psy-platelings anyway. And Holly and Isabel get nothing, because we don't have a Vitruvian power for Isabel to copy and Holly already has Ravenous Maw.
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>>4183183
Actually we do have a vitruvian power in the form of an augment: you know the one that ensures that our regen rate can never go down below its original rate?
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>>4183185
I guess. I was assuming that power didn't count Augments, for some reason. But maybe. Wouldn't be a huge thing, on Isabel, but at least it's something.
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>>4183185
>>4183190
actually, we met Holly pretty early on in both hers and our journeys. she might at least get a level boost from our Maw.
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>>4183193
In my case I was talking about Isabelle.
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>>4183200
miss-clicked one of the messages i was trying to respond to.
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>>4183190
It does count augments. It's just that we don't really have a lot of non-Hive augments to give out. Though to be fair, Hundred-Handed, for example, is pretty non-standard as a Generator ability, not really having an elemental leaning like most others encountered, and so we haven't really found augments that would go well with it. Same for Fear To Tread which is a primarily terrain-based Flesh Artisan power with no Stacks. And we do have one Calcite augment, but no dream daughter that can benefit from it.

Magpie would've benefited the most if we could've gotten her dream daughter.
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>>4183207
Dammit magpie...
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>>4183193
Well, yes, but I meant entirely new skills. I'm sure that raising the effective level of the Dream Daughter's Core is going to be something that Spiritus Ex Testa gives eventually, so this is just a sneak preview through us. You're right, though, still good for her to get it now.

We actually might want to hybridize Ravenous Maw with something to benefit Holly and Johanna. Give another Gluttonous skill for them to use. I'd suggest either Heaven's Drill or Dominus Bloodline, make a triple-hybrid. Probably Dominus Bloodline, since we're likely to raise that to a hybridization point long before we do Heaven's Drill (the drill is at the level five point, obviously, but I don't want to lower Ravenous Maw). Probably would play up the draining aspects of the Bloodline, Gluttonous consumption themes and what not.

>>4183207
Yeah, she would have. But we probably wouldn't have trusted her to be let out and have access to weapons again for a while, so maybe it wouldn't have mattered.
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>>4183207
i am very certain it would be a massive long shot for us to be able to bring out Magpie, even if she hadnt offed herself for good.

>>4183213
id not be against it, but am unsure on a combo. i guess Dominus plus it would probably make a leech tongue, but would cut off the ethereal aspect of the Dominus powerset in exchange for more damage and/or faster draining. not sure thats what i'd really want outta it, on top of it wouldn't feel like anything particularly new we need or can truly utilize well, and we still need to make whatever it is worth it on Shu herself.

that, and as stated, Maw and Hands are pretty good, so its hard for me to want to hybridize them as much unless it feels like we're not losing too much from them.

Drill and Maw... ive got literally no idea what that would make, besides just a Drill on the end of a tentacle, but that im both unsure id want and feel a bit bland too. that, or another 'just the two tacked together' Hybrids i really do not like.
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>>4183224
>Drill and Maw... ive got literally no idea what that would make, besides just a Drill on the end of a tentacle, but that im both unsure id want and feel a bit bland too. that, or another 'just the two tacked together' Hybrids i really do not like.
Easy: Drill teeth. Or Drills created can also unfold into tooth-filled jaws like some sort of fucked up pincers
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>>4183224
>>4183213
>>4183207
I'm not ready to hybridize any of those three abilities (Maw, Hands, Dominus). The components don't seem to match up well in any combination for a good hybrid. Maw and hands maybe, but dominus feels like an ability that's more spell-casting focused.

>>4183228
I'd like to keep my drills as hands, weapons, and lances please. not drill teeth. Drill teeth just changes the damage type to our Guilotine jaw from burst into DoT.
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>>4183224
>Drill and Maw... ive got literally no idea what that would make, besides just a Drill on the end of a tentacle, but that im both unsure id want and feel a bit bland too. that, or another 'just the two tacked together' Hybrids i really do not like.
I was thinking some sort of grinding vortex of teeth. Like Shu's body unfolds into a bunch of organic buzzsaws surrounding her torso.

>>4183229
>I'm not ready to hybridize any of those three abilities (Maw, Hands, Dominus). The components don't seem to match up well in any combination for a good hybrid. Maw and hands maybe, but dominus feels like an ability that's more spell-casting focused
Well, it wouldn't be any time soon. Give us the chance to raise these abilities to a higher level. Hell, maybe by that point we'd have a "Spirit Shells get all abilities of summoner" upgrade and we wouldn't need to worry about it at all.
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>>4183228
Drill Teeth doesnt at all sound useful. and the second one too heavily defeat the point of the Drill aspects too.

>>4183229
well, no one was actually technically talking about Hands really, i was more making a call back to previous statements of mine about how those two stand on their own really well, so the Hybrids for either has to be pretty specific for me to want it.

>>4183213
>>4183228
>>4183229
i guess we do have the Crows now to use fro something, but that will depend on if we keep it, if it seems too good to not level on its own, and if that wasn't our fodder for once Hive is level 20 anyways(which probably also depends on the other two caveats).
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>>4183232
as stated, not exactly different than the other Anons idea of Drill Teeth, and just seems like limiting the Drill too much to just being the mouth aspect of the Maw. not a fan personally at all.
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>>4183229
I don't think hybrids prevent you from accessing the skills of its components. So summoning a drill to act as as those things should still be possible.
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>>4183240
depends on the hybrid, but usually no.
it still often does discourage it at least a bit though, and is also cutting the base ability short in its growth for something potentially very different, so if it doesn't give you what you wanted from the base ability, it can be not worth it. even if you hybridize at a higher level, it depends on what you want, and if you want more hand weapons and its not that, it very much is still not worth it.
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>>4183237
Well, it's not my preferred hybrid, anyway. I don't really want it, just proposing something a little more aesthetically distinct.
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>>4183229
Also, we had the option to hybridize Maw and Hands once, and the result seemed to be anti-construct focused (Abbadon's Grasp). But voters at the time said no at the time since it didn't seem to build on the utility of its components, so no Apollings. Those two seem like the type that are better hybridized at higher levels when most of their functions have been unlocked, to then use with the hybrid.
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>>4183250
also didnt help i think it had overlap with a Maw Augment we turned down in the past, but with the added negative its cutting the growth of Maw and Hands short unlike the Augment, like you dais.
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while only semi on the topic, looking through things, not really a fan of Julias Seasonal Oppression either. feels like another mistake to me. personally doesn't feel like its giving enough to halt the other tows progress, at least at their current state. especially level two. just... honestly so worthless feeling. we so rarely meet other groups to fight, and when we do, so rarely in numbers that group based abilities would be all that useful in, or just well, it can take so much to put them down by the time abilities like that would proc, theres no real use for it.

still not really a fan of Hand of the Queen on Francine either. i mean, im not a fan of the copy-cat aspects of it or her core at all, but its other half just feels pretty cumbersome for her to use, aswell as slow building, especially for her. not really something im interested in keeping either.
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>>4183347
I'm okay with Seasonal Oppression, at least to the degree that I'd be willing to see another few levels in it before giving it up, but I agree on Hand of the Queen. It's an awkward power to use, and has some redundancy with Creation's Strings. We might want to hybridize it, we've got too many abilities on Francine anyway and cutting down her list wouldn't be a terrible thing. Maybe put it together with Unyielding Spirit, I feel like there's some interesting potential for an analysis power combined with a Vitruvian defense-booster. Or we could always just scrap it down to level one and resolve to leave it there.
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>>4183362
for Hands, dunno. would depend on what we got out of it i guess. Spirit is a pretty good passive defense for her, so i'd certainly not want to change trajectory from that. and if we got rid of it, id prefer to just melt it down for stats, no reason to keep it at level one at all.

as for seasonal, i really dont want to put the levels into that to see. too much stealing levels from better options, including what its made from, for something that in my opinion already isnt really worth it. its certainly not getting my votes to see where it leads, not at all worth it over other options on her.
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>>4183372
>and if we got rid of it, id prefer to just melt it down for stats, no reason to keep it at level one at all.
I was thinking of taking it down to level one and then refining just the first level for stats. Those other three levels can be put to better use raising other skills than just being turned into stat boosts.

>as for seasonal, i really dont want to put the levels into that to see. too much stealing levels from better options, including what its made from, for something that in my opinion already isnt really worth it. its certainly not getting my votes to see where it leads, not at all worth it over other options on her.
Honestly, I was never that crazy about Seasonal Oppression's components. I like the two skills hybridized together, gives them some more depth than the individual ones do. If we were to remove the hybrid, I'd say get rid of the components, too. Take the eleven levels we'd free up that way and put them into Sculptress, Digestion and Carver.
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>>4183391
>I was thinking of taking it down to level one and then refining just the first level for stats. Those other three levels can be put to better use raising other skills than just being turned into stat boosts.
oh, well, thats what i meant too. im not even sure you can refine more than the base level into stats.

>Honestly, I was never that crazy about Seasonal Oppression's components. I like the two skills hybridized together, gives them some more depth than the individual ones do. If we were to remove the hybrid, I'd say get rid of the components, too. Take the eleven levels we'd free up that way and put them into Sculptress, Digestion and Carver.
i completely and massively disagree. hell no am i getting rid of those. the hybrid is horrible, its base is just the two now giving a bit to eachother, but thats not at all more depth, and isnt really at all better than what they seemed to be gaining by themselves. its taking away their potential to give what appears like less due to the caveats on how they gain them. its second levels just worthless. compared to the base abilities, what the hybrid is giving us is really janky and worthless.

individually, the components are pretty amazing too, especially for Julia who is our most pure melee fighter and a tank. getting rid of them would be a mistake, aswell as i think cutting off their growth was aswell.
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>>4183400
>individually, the components are pretty amazing too, especially for Julia who is our most pure melee fighter and a tank. getting rid of them would be a mistake, aswell as i think cutting off their growth was aswell.
It's possible that Depressive Weight is strong at high levels, but it's way too weak right now for me to want to put more levels into it to find out. Despair Corruption accumulates too slowly to be useful, most fights are over before it gets anywhere. It's not worth the investment, to me, I don't want to keep putting points into it just in case it becomes really strong.

Frozen Fury is better, I admit, but Elemental Digestion and Carnivorous Carver have it beat for its role. Elemental Digestion is a better ability for making enemies inflicting damage on Julia allow her to deal damage to them. And Carnivorous Carver is better for high burst damage. I think it's a better investment to keep making those skills stronger than playing catch-up with a weaker skill.
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>>4183410
actually, Depressive Weight doesn't say how its accumulation works in terms of speed. so.... yeah. thats actually a pretty big oversight. keep in mind, we cant rely on what it was when we faced it, as its clearly not exactly the same as the one we faced. and honestly? that accumulated fast enough for us to put to damn good use, if it was based on that.

but regardless.

>>4183143
BHOP, can i get both how fast Depressive Weight accumulates, and a re-write for that? seems like pretty important information for it to be that vague.

>>4183410
Frozen Fury doesn't rely on elemental damage, which is pretty specific to face. it also doesn't rely on kills or as many caveats like alot of Carns stuff does, but is instead a very simple evening out of any and all damage Julia takes. also, you forget. Carn relies a decent bit on us having other defensive abilities on Julia. getting rid of Frozen would be a blow to Carn, while upgrading Frozen would be a boon to both.
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>>4183420
(I'll work on that after the next update, sure. And I agree, apologies for how vague it is, I'm not sure why I did that when I have the numbers available.)
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>>4183434
alright, sounds good, and thanks.
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>>4183420
>actually, Depressive Weight doesn't say how its accumulation works in terms of speed. so.... yeah. thats actually a pretty big oversight. keep in mind, we cant rely on what it was when we faced it, as its clearly not exactly the same as the one we faced. and honestly? that accumulated fast enough for us to put to damn good use, if it was based on that.
It's never reached a high enough level to have noticeable effects in any fight we've been in (and many of its effects are pretty tactically important, so I don't think it's just a matter of BHOP not having the space to say it), so I think it's probably slow.

>Frozen Fury doesn't rely on elemental damage, which is pretty specific to face. it also doesn't rely on kills or as many caveats like alot of Carns stuff does, but is instead a very simple evening out of any and all damage Julia takes. also, you forget. Carn relies a decent bit on us having other defensive abilities on Julia. getting rid of Frozen would be a blow to Carn, while upgrading Frozen would be a boon to both.
Elemental Digestion doesn't rely on elemental damage either. Anyone who hits Julia takes damage. There are other effects for if they hit her with elemental damage, but she still punishes anyone who strikes her. In a way, this is better than Frozen Fury, because it damages in the moment instead of having to save things up. It's also an automatic process instead of increasing the critical hit chance on another attack, an attack which could be dodged or redirected. And since it's triggered on hit rather than on taking damage, adding defensive boosts to Julia won't make Elemental Digestion less effective the same way it would Frozen Fury. The one way in which Elemental Digestion is worse than Frozen Fury is that it only punishes melee-range attacks. I will concede that point, that if we're worried about Julia being trapped away from melee range with her enemies, Frozen Fury at least lets her build something up while she's charging through their attacks.

As for Carnivorous Carver, maybe. Frozen Fury's defense isn't that great, requiring that Julia take a lot of damage before it gets anywhere good. It's also a fluctuating level of protection, since the defense bonuses drop whenever Julia spends her stored energy, and it can only be spent all at once. I think she should rely on a better defensive ability than that, like the Calcite Halo. But maybe its flaws would be fixed as it levels, I don't know. I guess I'd be willing to give it a shot under that logic, then, see if it becomes a good defensive skill.
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>>4183442
>It's never reached a high enough level to have noticeable effects in any fight we've been in (and many of its effects are pretty tactically important, so I don't think it's just a matter of BHOP not having the space to say it), so I think it's probably slow.
we haven't actually used it all that often is the issue. not something we've turned on i think more than once, if ever, with i think some enemies like Yurei probably being immune, or us simply not having Julia around to see if its working.

>Elemental Digestion
what? Elemental Digestion only gains resistances to Elemental Damages, and doesn't even block non-elemental damage at all, only re-directs it to her Biomass. which is useful, but so is directly mitigating the overall damage like Frozen Fury does, hell i honestly prefer that as a base, and would consider Digestion a secondary defense to base damage mitigation. really, getting rid of either would leave a gap in her defenses that Carn certainly doesn't cover either.

Frozen may need time to build up, but blocking any and all damage for a direct damage mitigation is in my opinion way more useful than only gaining resistances to some elemental effects, and otherwise not actually reducing the damage at all, only redirecting it. and being able to switch that out for a powerful boost to any attack not based off needing to hope the enemy isnt resistant to that element is also a better damage boost in my opinion aswell. ill admit it being either/or is worse than elemental, but the lack of other caveats i still think is better.
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>>4183442
>>4183420
Depressive Weight/Seasonal Depression strikes me as the type of power that's a passive hidden ability that grows in power if you give it enough time.

So while it's effects of depression stacks don't really show up in the story updates, they are there but aren't really that noteworthy despite putting in tons of work that allows Julia to debilitate her enemies from being in proximity until the depression debuffs reach a threshold.

Likewise the other half of seasonal depression: Frozen fury, shines when it's brought to the fore in the massive burst damage.

So a thought has occurred to me. Elemental Digestion is a mono-tree gluttonous ability, what if we hybridized it with Her Calcite Halo?
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>>4183457
think honestly Frozen Fury would fit better into the Halo. or hell though, we could see what all three together look like.
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>>4183456
>we haven't actually used it all that often is the issue. not something we've turned on i think more than once, if ever, with i think some enemies like Yurei probably being immune, or us simply not having Julia around to see if its working.
Wait, is it not one of those powers we're just assumed to have activated when we're in a fight, like Ravenous Maw or the Neurotic Halo's primed counters? Huh. Maybe that's my mistake, then.

>what? Elemental Digestion only gains resistances to Elemental Damages, and doesn't even block non-elemental damage at all, only re-directs it to her Biomass. which is useful, but so is directly mitigating the overall damage like Frozen Fury does, hell i honestly prefer that as a base, and would consider Digestion a secondary defense to base damage mitigation. really, getting rid of either would leave a gap in her defenses that Carn certainly doesn't cover either.
Yeah, it only blocks elemental damage, but it inflicts non-elemental damage on anyone who so much as touches Julia. I was talking about Frozen Fury being beaten out as a counter-attack power. As a defense, yes, Elemental Digestion doesn't offer any protection against non-elemental damage, so maybe Frozen Fury will be worth it for that. Like I said, if you want to try Frozen Fury out as a defense power, I'm willing to try it. I think it will probably still be eclipsed by the Calcite Halo, one more skill added to Julia's levelables won't be so bad.

>>4183465
>think honestly Frozen Fury would fit better into the Halo. or hell though, we could see what all three together look like.
I agree with you on that. Adaptive defense mixed with mounting defense, could be pretty potent.
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>>4183465
>>4183457
>Halo+Seasonal Oppression
This might work nicely.

It's a shame that Seasonal Oppression's individual components aren't Kadath Candidates so they're stuck at lvl 5 with basic mileage.
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>>4183472
>Wait, is it not one of those powers we're just assumed to have activated when we're in a fight, like Ravenous Maw or the Neurotic Halo's primed counters? Huh. Maybe that's my mistake, then.
dont think so. thinking thats screw us over with things like Raths auras before too as far as im aware.

>>4183474
i disagree. i dont think Depressive works well in the combo its already in, much less with the Halo.
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>>4183472
>>4183476
actually, mind you, BHOP may of changed things on that too, so it might NOW be auto-counted as on, but keep in mind, we used to have to have to say when to prime the Halos for them to be primed, and i know it used to be like that for Auras too.

again, BHOP may of changed it now, but we haven't really had Julia around since he did if he,well, did.
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>>4183472
>>4183465
I just realized. We gave Julia the ability to Fly al la Iron man. via Cursus Alas
>werewolf barbarian sculpter + Stormblood painter + stormfront waltz + bio-Jetpack = PAIN
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>>4183479
oh yeah. we did.
because the one thing missing from her ability set was a good way to get into combat in the first place.
well, yeah, thats solved. dont think she really needs the flying bit too much though, but the movement itself and ability to not care about the terrain is super useful yes.
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>>4183479
It is somewhat funny that our two most genteel and mild-mannered party members are the ones with the most terrifying appearances in a fight. Shu, Gina, Rath and November just look like Warframes. Amara is an anime catgirl ninja. Francine is a doctor with a minigun. And then Dorian and Julia are a skinless werebeast riding into battle on a thunderstorm of blood. Jesus Christ, is that not something you want to have chasing after you.
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>>4183488
>Julia when someone interrupts teatime to cause trouble and makes the teapot smash on the ground.
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>>4183488
>Vampire+Werewolf combo
>A true gothic horror
>in a world of body horror
>Yet have a love story that's better than twilight
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>>4183514
hah, yeah, i didn't realize we ended up doing the vampire+werewolf thing.
how very victorian gothic of us, yes.
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>>4183514
Well, werebadger, but close enough. Actually, there's this really good scene in the horror anthology movie Trick 'R Treat where a group of werewolves transform by pulling off their skin to reveal the beast form beneath. That fits Julia pretty well. So yeah, we've got our werebeast and vampire pairing, how cute.
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…You need a drink, and to just sit down to chill for longer than five seconds before another crisis has a chance to inevitably manifest itself.

“Julia, Dorian? You think you two could whip something up for everyone?” You ask, only to find that they've already slipped away with Gina, the latter of whom's constructed a simple bar setup at one end of the circular room. The freshly-cafted shelves are swiftly stocked with the surprising volume of spirits and wines Dorian smuggled here, the young man zipping back and forth from his room to the bar to fill it before your very eyes.

You expect everyone to clamor for a good drink, but to your pleasant surprise everyone's civil about the whole affair, with the Midnight Crew even urging the Barber and your family to go first...though that's mainly Keane and Ace's doing, with Jackie scowling at her fellows. Julia beckons you over to the bar with a friendly wave, and when you take your seat on the slightly squishy barstool you find a Bee's Knees, ready and waiting.

"You still l-like them, right?" Julia asks, half-joking as she watches you with her wide, dark eyes set against the bright red of her bare flesh.

"You haven't been gone so long that I'd have changed my tastes that much." You reply with a wink, enjoying the taste of honey on your tongue. "Speaking of which, I know you've probably told everyone already, but how'd things go at Laoc? Any highlights?"

"Ivey made me f-feel right at home, but we kept busy pretty much from the m-moment you left." Julia begins, handing out two more Bee's Knees when Holly ambles over, dragging Johanna by the wrist as the bubbly blonde flashes you a grin. "Laoc took a heavy b-blow, but I think th-they'll recover alright, if we g-give them some TLC."

"Good to hear...looks like the time with Ivey and her crew influenced your fashion, a bit. In a very good way, I have to say."

"Why, th-thank you." She says with a smile, glancing down at the leather jacket she's still sporting. "They were k-kind enough to lend it to me, since Reza said that my d-dress was too nice to get messy. So, wh-when in Rome...speaking of f-fashion, it looks like your shell's c-coming in nicely."

Giving her a quizzical look, you reach around to touch the back of your neck, your fingers grazing hard chitin cresting just over both shoulders. You'd been so wrapped up in everything that you hadn't even realized how it had progressed...and now that you take a better look around the room, it starts to dawn on you just how alien you're all starting to look.

(Continued)
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>>4183537

Tufts of blue fur peek out from the sleeves of Julia's jacket, to say nothing of the bestial features that are becoming ever-more obvious the longer you stare at her raw, skinless musculature. To her right Dorian's working tirelessly to supply your friends and family with a respite from the stress they've been under, his lithe form spotted with jagged rubies, his every movement precise, yet jittery, as he holds back the storm of electricity that's building in his bones as though they're over-charged batteries. As horrific as it should be, you can't help but stare between the two of them, admiring how they've grown, almost as if they've managed to somehow turn body horror into a-

"Fashion." Holly breathes beside you, and you turn to see the gears turning behind her emerald eyes before she jumps up from her seat, running over to Gina with an idea on her lips. Johanna, for her part, is utterly bewildered at what's just transpired, merely shrugging before pouring the contents of her glass into her companion's. You gaze lingers on Gina as Holly breathlessly explains something to her, and you watch as GG's eyes go wide, a mischievous grin spreading across her lips before she announces to the room-

"Corruption fashion show!"

All eyes in the room snap to Gina, her half-empty wine glass thrust high into the air as Holly flings her hands to the sky in excitement.

"CORRUPTION FASHION SHOW!" Quinn suddenly screeches from across the room, with none of the context and all of the enthusiasm.

"Here's how it's gonna go!" Gina declares, her eyes shining with amethyst as she elevates herself to be heard and seen by all. "The Crucible thinks it's gonna make us ugly! It thinks it's going to drive us apart, make us less than human...and what do we say to that?"

"FUCK the Crucible!" Rath howls from somewhere in the crowd, and as the rest of the Daughters present join echo her words you have a sneaking suspicion that Amara's just gotten away with another swear.

"So we're going to show everyone just how hard we've worked to look this damn good! We're going to get up here and strut our stuff like there's not tomorrow!" Gina laughs, and she's met with another cheer as she rounds on you, much to your chagrin. "The only question we have to ask ourselves, is this!"

Your girlfriend smirks, damn her, as she playfully puts you on the spot.

"Who goes first?"

>>The Defiants

>>The Barbers

>>The Midnight Crew

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next three hours.)
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Rolled 1 (1d3)

>>4183539
1 for Defiants

2 for Barbers

3 for Midnight Crew
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>>4183539
>The Barbers
while we've known the Midnight Crew longer and they're great friends, we have had the Barbers helping us for a good while comparatively, least this time around. so let's give them the honor of showing off first.

we go last, of course. give all our guests their dues to be good hosts and all that.
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>>4183539
>>The Barbers

give Isabelle a bit more time to collect herself. And we should as the hosts be on our best behavior and go last.

>>4183542
I will head to bed now the painkillers are making me sleepy and my back is still killing me.....

Good Night OP

And good night anons
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>>4183553
night Anon.
hope whatever you need those painkillers for isn't anything serious and goes away.
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>>4183539
>>The Barbers
Because I don't think we've gotten a good look at their aesthetic. My image of them isn't as solid as the Crew's. Rosa has some sort of mask, Sugar is made of sugar, Betty has headphones and walks like a muppet, and Sia is faceless. But other than that I don't really know how they look.

And then after them the Midnight Crew, because I want more details on how Ace's armor has changed. Is she biomechanical Sinanju now, BHOP? Be honest with me.

>>4183553
Good night, anon. Sleep well, and dream of cannibalistic monster ladies. You okay? Are the painkillers for anything serious?
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>>4183539
>The Barbers
Might as well.
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>>4183553
(Rest well, and I do hope you feel better soon.)

>>4183560
(Oh, you'll see.)
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>>4183566
know its not at all how Sugar looks, but due to her constantly eating herself and her general weirdness i still always think of this image, but with a head of blonde hair.

hrm, wait. ive got GIMP again. i could add said hair.... hrm....
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>>4183566
>>4183560
>>4183567
ah, there we go! just what it was missing!
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>>4183592
Yep, that's...that's horror, alright. Ugh. It's hypnotic, I want to look away but I can't.
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>>4183539

Ah, screw it.

"The Barbers!" You decide on a whim, cheering them on with your glass held high. You watch Sia and Rosa exchange glances before the latter toasts her glass of clear liquid against that of her friend, while Gina summons a runway in the middle of your living space before darting off to Francine's side, of all people. The older woman listens to Gina's request, too far away for you to make out...before rolling her eyes as she gestures for November to join her.

"If I'm going to do this, then I need another drink." Sia mutters loudly, draining her drink in time for Betty to take a page out of Johanna's book by emptying in own glass into that of her friend, which the Neuromancer promptly downs...and almost spits out when there's a terrible screech that rips through the base, instantly putting everyone on edge as they round on the source of the unwelcome sound.

Gina, Francine, and November freeze before GG flashes everyone a sheepish grin, her phone clasped in her hand and tethered to a slight gap in the cyborg's frame. With a flash of amethyst she makes one last tweak to to her improvised creation, a low hum emanating from Heather Neeson's armor as she spreads her arms wide, clearly enjoying herself.

"Behold!" November proclaims, her niece burying her face in her hands as she goes beet red, then bright white. "I have achieved my life-long dream of becoming a sub-woofer! Bask in the glory of my sound!"

It's quiet, at first...the music slowly building, reverberating through November's frame as the mood begins to shift, nervous tension dissolving in the solution to what ails you.

"And now, to announce our illustrious models, I'd love to introduce you all to our resident party-girl!" Gina cries out, and with a theatrical sweep of her arm, she points to...

"The Doctor of Doctors herself! Francine!"

For a single, fleeting moment, you think you're going to gave to resurrect Gina a second time as Francine glares daggers at the shorter girl.

"C'mon...you love explaining stuff." GG prompts, giving Francine a gentle nudge in the ribs.

"Darling, if I'd know that you'd use November's sophisticated bio-mechani-"

"And you're eloquent."

"...Gina, I have a PhD. My vocabulary merely comes with the terr-"

"And you're super-professional~" Gina coos, working her magic as you watch Francine's left eye twitch. "Seriously, you've got this cool mystique around you that just would make you the *perfect* announcer...plus you'd get to explain how everyone's power wor-"

"Oh my god, just let me do my work." Francine sighs, stepping forward with her lab coat trailing behind her with a flourish as she raises her voice to address the crowd.. "Ahem! I do believe that we shall get this event in order, hm? Who shall be first on the runway Darlings?"

Flattery doesn't just work on Gina, it seems.

(Continued)
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>>4184023

Rosa and Sia dart up to the catwalk, the latter quite at the mercy of the former as the two of them get things starting, the beat of the music pulsing through the room, shaving away at your stress in time with the warmth of the drink on your lips. Rosa still wears her mask, though she's ditched her jacket for a white shirt and red skirt, and when the Humoral Paladin takes the lead down the stage, the girl's red eyes shine with glee as she throws her arms wide.

"Here we have the illustrious leader of the Barbers, a perfect specimen of the Humoral Paladin's potency." Francine explains as Rosa's limbs begin to bleed, the scarlet ichor flung wide as she twirls in place...and then it just stops, hovering in mid-air and tethered by slender red strings to the countless gruesome autographs she's carved into her pale flesh. The strands of liquid begin to throb, and you think it's in time to her heartbeat until you realize what she's done - she's dancing to the music, the concentric rings of floating blood having formed waves that dance and undulate in time to the melody. She's not alone for long, Francine's explanation of Rosa's powers fading away as you watch her go pale, the levitating ichor thickening, congealing in mid-air before converging on its host, all at once...and she's fully clothed, a long, stylish trench-coat hanging off her slim shoulders, the mask completing the girl's Scarlet Sukeban style.

"Form and function in an armored Humoral package, Ladies and Gentleman." Francine says, a hint of appreciation in her voice as she catches Rosa's eye. "Now, I do believe that a particularly skilled Neuromancer it to take a turn on the stage, if I'm not mistaken?"

With a final spin, she leaves the space to Sia, who struts down the aisle with a mixture of irritation and defiance informing every forceful step she takes. Though her face is as incomprehensible as always, her button-down shirt and jeans lean decidedly more masculine, her painted nails (where'd she get that?) lending a subtle touch of femme. She doesn't seem to be using her powers, until you catch a flicker of movement out of the corner of your eye, and there she is across the room, and right beside you, and...she's suddenly everywhere and nowhere, all at once. She reaches the end of the catwalk, doing one final spin before you vision fills with a blurt of static, and she's suddenly gone. Your eyes rove the room, finding her exactly where she started - off-stage, raising her drink in a little toast to everyone she fooled...including Rosa, who looks thoroughly miffed at her friend's little prank.

"Now, who would like to volunteer to be the third to- oh. Very well then."

A black-and-white figure bounds over to the stage, Betty having decided that it's her turn as the raven-haired young woman steps atop the catwalk with a too-long step, her shoulder-length ebony locks static and unmoving.

(Continued)
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>>4184026

She practically wiggles to a stop when she stops at the start of the runway, her headphones hanging around her neck, their checker-patterned design blending well with her black dress and striped leggings, the design of it all so simple as to be almost cartoonish. Taking her first step in time with the music, her foot suddenly gives way, and you're not the only one to gasp as you watch the tall, slender girl's form just collapse into a perfectly flat puddle that stays on the ground for but a moment before she springs back into shape, no worse for wear.

"Liquid art, in motion! A Flesh Artisan's mastery of their own form coupled with a Humoral Paladin's aqueous skill set allows the Barbers' own Betty to boop along with a loony sense of motion." Francine explains, and when you catch Gina's eye across the space, you're both thinking the same thing;

Francine's enjoying this more than she'd ever admit, ridiculous jokes and all.

Betty flounces down the runway, swinging her boneless arms in a way that would look perfectly natural on a Saturday morning cartoon, and winds up perfectly nauseating in reality as you watch her move in ways that humans were never meant to. Halfway through, she stops, putting her half-closed hand up to one eye like a pretend telescope - and after a moment her eye pops through it, the delicate orb taught and bulging as she surveys the room with an eyeball inflated like an obscene balloon before it snaps back into its socket with a comical 'pop'.

Upon reaching the end of the stage, Betty just keels over head-first, her body scrunching up like a slinky and repeating the process at least three times over before she springs back up to full height in front of Dorian, raising one thin finger to order a refill, her expression as blank as when she began.

A moment of silence, and then...applause, from all present.

Sugar's lanky frame ambles over to the stage as Betty gives her a little wave, her dull expression tinged by the slightest bit of color in her ivory cheeks, indicative of satisfaction at a performance well played. The Barber's strongest member clambers up the side of the catwalk with the ungainly grace of an intoxicated ballerina, her short-shorts and too-small shirt showing off what might be an uncomfortable amount of skin, if it didn't look more like wax candy than anything remotely salacious.

"And...lastly, we have Sugar, a fascinating example of an inspired hybridization and the power of clever selection!" Francine gushes, though you have some serious doubts that 'inspired' and 'clever' being the right adjectives to describe how Sugar's done anything.

Ever.

(Continued)
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>>4184030

Ignorant of the good doctor's praises, Sugar just tugs at one corner of her mouth, a thin trickle of sap oozing down her lips as she tugs again, then again...and with one final tug, she tears a strip of flesh from her cheek all the way down to her clavicle. The collective cringe that ripples through the room is one you think even Mother could feel all the way at the top of the Cord, but when you dare to look a little closer, you're treated to a disgustingly delectable sight.

Licorice muscle twitches beneath taffy flesh, candy-apple red blood running down the slight girl's chest in thick, congealed rivulets. She yanks again, harder this time, and you watch with as much revulsion as awe as her entire body turns inside out, the tangled ball of double-bubble intestine and wintergreen bone suddenly erupting with rainbow-colored crystal - a shining, shimmering ornament of rock candy that takes up the entire stage. You all just stare in awe, wondering what fresh hell Sugar will see fit to unleash upon you next when the crystal begins to crack, a hundred hundred hairline fractures skittering across its glimmering surface.

A pause, a beat, and then - it shatters, the room filled with a diamond dust of candied snow, Sugar standing at the center of the explosion, mercifully whole. Rath and Amara stick out their tongues to for a sample, and Sugar just gives everyone a sharp little salute before jumping offstage, having clearly had her fun for the day.

In the course of watching her stride over to Betty and throw an arm around the other girl's shoulder, your eye catches a small movement in the shadows of a distant doorway, a furtive figure leaning inconspicuously around the corner to watch the proceedings. You reach out across the gap, extending a sense of ease and welcome into the other girl's...

...oh.

Yeah.

Realizing that the lack of an empathic field is going to take just a little more getting used to, you quietly order a second and third drink from Julia, whose intently listening to Francine's breathless recap of everyone's Cores, the nature of the show slowly and inevitably changing into something of a fashion exhibition-meets-competition. Rising from your seat with a drink in each hand, you hear Jackie loudly declare that it's the Midnight Crew's turn on the stage as you approach the figure in the doorway, who tenses as you approach.

"You're free to join, y'know." You say to B'ni, who takes the drink you extend to her after a moment's hesitation. "Everyone's just having a good time. No one's going to be upset if you do, too."

"...I don't want to bring everyone down." She replies, clutching the glass with both hands as she stares out at the crowd of your friends and family.

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"In the words of a certain red-head? That's bullshit." You say, your old foe's emerald eyes alighting on yours, filled with confusion. "Those people out there welcomed you back. It's no surprise you're here...everyone knew that I was going to bring you, Holly, Uzu, and Johanna out to help. They've given you a second chance, and you're here right now because you said you wanted to help us. I'm not going to say there aren't some raw feelings..."

She makes a sound that's somewhere between a cough and a laugh, at that.

"...but that chance doesn't stop at you being in my head. You helped us with Yurei, you're helping us with Alpha. I don't want to force you to do anything you don't want to, but I just wanted to bring you a drink and let you know that you're-"

"Welcome to not creep in the corner."

The two of you turn at the sound of Uzu's voice, revealing her coming to a stop just short of you with a drink in either hand. "Well, it seems Shu was a little quicker on the draw than I was. Though I'd imagine that we're both here for the same reason."

Delicately placing both glasses one hand, Uzu offers the other to her roommate.

"If it changes anything..." Uzu says quietly. "...Johanna's over-excited to be in the real again and she gets even louder when she's been drinking, and it's getting only just a *little* insufferable being by myself over there."

Isabelle chuckles, looking between the two of you for a moment...and when you reach out your other hand to bring it level with Uzu's, B'ni's fingers find both of your hands at once, and the three of you return to the bar.

Johanna's being kept busy by Holly, the two of them loudly talking in part of the room furthest from the stage as Jackie and Keane enthusiastically corral the other two members of the Crew to the back of the stage. They're preparing to strut their stuff as Francine gives a long-winded, though well-meaning preamble to the Midnight Crew's 'synergy', a word that causes Quinn to heave a heavy groan a deep that it practically echoes through the base.

You have to say, as you watch Uzu and B'ni sample their drinks beside you, and everyone lean in to the ridiculousness of what you've undertaken...

...this is going better than you expected.

>>Strike up a conversation with B'ni and Uzu while you all watch the Midnight Crew show off what they're capable of.

>>Stay quiet...you're actually pretty curious about how the Midnight Crew's powers have evolved, since your fight with Magpie was too hectic to appreciate it.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, I shall be pausing here for the evening. Voting shall remain open for the next thirteen hours, with posting to resume in approximately fifteen. I'll also be posting the updated Depressive Weight wording here soon.)

(Thank you all for your patience, participation, and enthusiasm, and I wish everyone that reads this a restful evening. Take care, and know that I'll be around for a little while longer this evening to address any questions you may have. Rest well, one and all.)
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>>4184023
>"Behold!" November proclaims, her niece burying her face in her hands as she goes beet red, then bright white. "I have achieved my life-long dream of becoming a sub-woofer! Bask in the glory of my sound!"
fucking christ i was not prepared for this and my sides now hurt.

>>4184030
damn Betty has one interesting powerset.

>>4184042
vote;
>Stay quiet...you're actually pretty curious about how the Midnight Crew's powers have evolved, since your fight with Magpie was too hectic to appreciate it.
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>>4184046
thanks for running. this little section before Alpha certainly isnt what i expected, but its so far been interesting and oddly this little part is already pretty fun. nice going.

also, the image i posted earlier with "sugar" removing her face was uhh, much more on the nose than i actually expected it to be. did not expect that edit to be that close to the reality for her, even given her tendencies.
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>>4184023
>"Behold!" November proclaims, her niece burying her face in her hands as she goes beet red, then bright white. "I have achieved my life-long dream of becoming a sub-woofer! Bask in the glory of my sound!"
Okay, November just officially took the "best character" position.

>"...Gina, I have a PhD. My vocabulary merely comes with the terr-"
I don't think accreditation can be transferred to clones like that, Francine.
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>>4184046
Thanks for running, BHOP. See you in the morning.
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>>4184065
(When you posted it, I freaked out just a little bit with how close you really where to some of the stuff she pulls off in combat.)

>>4184056
(Betty's probably the second-strongest member of the Barbers. Her skill set's just so versatile and fun, given that it runs more on comedy and cartoon logic than anything innately horrific.)
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>>4184077
>Betty runs on cartoon logic and comedy

Ju̻ͨs̼̖͑̓t ̻̰̣ͬ̏̈t̍̔h̳̏e ̆J̜̘͕im̞m̱͚̬iṉ͗y̗ͫ ̹͔͋ͣCri̖͚̙ͤ̈ͦc͎̾ket ͈t̻̩͊̊hͭ̈ͯat̚ ̣̜Ac̤ͅm̼͙͋̚e'͉̤s ͙̬͐́b̰̘̆ͧẽen͖ ͛s̰e̠̿l̎͒l̍̔̄i̪ñ ̦̫ͨ͐f̼o̘̟̼̎̇͂r͕̫ ̥̭d͕̰̼̂͊̈i̋ld̘̝̉̈́os͖̘͔͛͋̐!̐

Luna says: she would like to meet up with Betty and see what sort of Looney Tunes shenanigans they can get away with for a day.
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>>4184077
hah, well besides the heart attack i gave you, hope you liked the edit still.

>Betty's probably the second-strongest member of the Barbers. Her skill set's just so versatile and fun, given that it runs more on comedy and cartoon logic than anything innately horrific.
yeah, she seems very interesting. you do a good job of making even side characters catch my eye alot of times. shame we've only had her around in mosh pit fights where you cant show off her powerset as much due to space constraints. might get her shot with Alpha though.

>>4184067
yeah, when November goes 'Full Aunt" mode, she is great.

as for the PHD credit... good point, but i think she more of meant the education and any quirks learning such a thing and the environment around it might give one. she may be a clone that didn't technically earn it, but that doesn't mean the PHD has no effect or connection to her and her traits.
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>>4184042
>Stay quiet...you're actually pretty curious about how the Midnight Crew's powers have evolved, since your fight with Magpie was too hectic to appreciate it.
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>>4184042
>>Stay quiet...you're actually pretty curious about how the Midnight Crew's powers have evolved, since your fight with Magpie was too hectic to appreciate it.

>>4184077
>(Betty's probably the second-strongest member of the Barbers. Her skill set's just so versatile and fun, given that it runs more on comedy and cartoon logic than anything innately horrific.)
Stretch-y characters tend to have a lot of potential for fun applications of their powers. Comics tend to only scratch the surface there, because they don't want things to get too gross, but this is Body Horror Quest, the grossest stretching power uses are probably still well below the average here.

>>4184101
>as for the PHD credit... good point, but i think she more of meant the education and any quirks learning such a thing and the environment around it might give one.
Honestly, I just wanted to deflate her by being pedantic. I know exactly what you mean, I just thought it would be fun to poke holes in her sense of dignity.
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>>4184077
So...bhop.

What's the Runway music that the catwalk's playing to?
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>>4184120
I was imagining No Healing In Wonderland, personally.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MpHkH4ayBYc
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>>4184030
>you have some serious doubts that 'inspired' and 'clever' being the right adjectives to describe how Sugar's done anything.
>Ever.
also, bit disappointed in Shu here. c'mon girl, you've heard Sugar talk serious before, no way theres not a brain in there. it might usually be mulled down by sugar high, but shes shown her quirkiness isnt all thats to her for sure. certainly isnt an act though, ill give you that, and certainly probably leans more towards inspired, but still.
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>>4184120
(Uh, in an odd bit of serendipity...)

(It's the music in this post >>4184129. That's the exact track I was listening to when I wrote this section...and that's also the third time or so that someone's said that a scene reminded them of music that I was legitimately playing as I wrote the scene.)
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>>4184227
It really is the perfect runway music.
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>>4184056
>>4184065

>>DEPRESSIVE WEIGHT (Lvl 1 Variant): The Core Ability of the Daughter at the heart of the Fetid Conglomerate, this Phantasmal Conduit skill emits a SHORT-range depressive field that may be toggled on and off, effecting only those in direct opposition to Julia. Accumulating at a rate of 25% per turn and affecting all those that end their turn within range of the weighted field, gradual build-up of Corruption will eventually render the foe unstable at 50% Corruption, with a foe hitting 100% Corruption rendering them Stunned and Prone for one round, and the next attack against them from any source is an automatic critical hit that deals three times damage. (BIO +20%)

(The updated stat block, per your request. Thank you for bringing this to my attention, once again.)
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>>4184343
ah, thank you, its much appreciated.

also, huh, 25% is more than i expected, albeit only because of the cut-down in % cost later on. mind you, i suppose with how few rounds combat tends to last, it needed to be a decent amount, but still a bit more than expected. neat, and certainly makes the ability worth keeping.

also, picture. good picture.
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>>4184343
Alright, that's pretty good, then. Though 25% per turn still leaves the level four ability very rarely going to happen, that's seven turns in close proximity to Julia. But hey, maybe later levels will speed it up or lower the threshold further. Okay, I retract my objections about Depressive Weight, then, if it works that fast it's worth it to level further.
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>>4184356
What is that, Biollante? Yeah, looks like Biollante from the Godzilla movies. She always was one of the scarier-looking kaiju. Has a pretty body horror origin story, too, the soul of a human being trapped inside it and slowly having her horror at her imprisonment overwritten by the hunger for destruction inherited from Godzilla.
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>>4184380
>>4184356
>>4184343
That's 2 rounds staying within melee range of Julia in order to reach the first threshold of debilitating effects from the depressive weight.

Staying in melee range of julia in 4 rounds would give her the opportunity to unleash 4 rounds of damage via frozen fury and take advantage of the 100% depression threshold effects before the depression debuff resets.

I think our average length of battle that we've fought so far have been about 4 rounds each fight, with some battles taking more than 4, so if we do utilize Julia, we should be able to see at least 1 Depressive Weight stun going off followed by a round 5 burst damage.
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>>4184396
....that's practically the perfect backstory for a daughter in Body horror to have that sort of appearance.
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>>4184380
it also means without a doubt i was right we never actually properly turned it on, because for sure we have had her in at least one fight it should've been obvious it proc'd.

we really need to be more on top of that stuff, i guess.

>>4184396
you know, i love Godzilla, and have seen a ton of movies. yet despite loving the absolute hell outta the look of Biollante and loving what of that movies fight scenes ive seen, i have never been able to find a way to watch or buy the full movie. and it annoys me to all hell.

>>4184400
One round. level 5 reduces all thresholds by 25%.
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>>4184415
>it also means without a doubt i was right we never actually properly turned it on, because for sure we have had her in at least one fight it should've been obvious it proc'd.
Yeah, I guess. And here I came away with the assumption that it was just really slow, because we never saw it doing anything. Hey, BHOP >>4184343, can we have a standing order from now on for Depressive Weight to always be on in fights? If it doesn't deal collateral to the party, there's no reason for us not to have it turned on.
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>>4184429
(Consider it done.)
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>>4184450
Cool.
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>>4184450
neat, thanks. albeit honestly i assumed you had it the way before moreso incase we had a reason to not want it on, but still.

also, why i remember, just an odd thought.
with our Dream Daughters, can the old method of them gifting us levels or however it worked still happen, of does Kadath just completely overide that? also could've sworn they could give us unique augments or something too, BUT mind you that part may be me just remembering Holly from before you made changes to the system and such, due to how long we have had her and Maw.
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>>4184415
(It's really worth a watch. I legitimately think watching the Godzilla movies along with John Carpenter's 'The Thing' when I was around 6 or 7 really cemented my love of kaiju, horror, and the bizarre.)
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>>4184471
id love to watch it, but like i said, the issue is finding a means to do so.
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>>4184470
(Yeah, considering that was still when the system was geared around either solo play or small teams, that was going to be a method of gaining bonus levels, though it would still be relatively rare. However, Kadath takes that chance and makes it a certainty, so it's been effectively overridden. It's one less thing to roll for...and there's a lot to roll for.)
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>>4184491
alright, fair enough.
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>>4184491
How many dice do you end up having to toss each round?
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>>4184491
We really need to delve deeper into the vision Shu had when using it that first time. Once we get the time, which may well be never given how busy Shu's life is, I want to try to make it manifest again with the Silver Key. There has to be a connection there, right? Silver Key of Dreams, Randolph Carter, Dream-Song of Unknown Kadath, there's a logic to it. I just don't know enough to put it together in-character instead of going by OOC reasoning.
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>>4184500
(On average? Probably upwards of four dozen for a normal fight if I'm being conservative, depending on how many swarmlings and Joyous are running around.)

(I've resolved that the next Quest I run is going to be only a slightly re-tooled pre-existing system, like Lancer or Blades in the Dark, or at worst a *heavily* overhauled BHQ system that I'd have fixed up via player input post-game.)
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>>4184510
Well the first thing we're gotta do is to put the Key into the Orrey.

We have the key to the dream dimension that houses the City of Kadath, but we could only get a glimpse of the city on a far away plateau.

The Void Orrey is a Map. An all encompassing map that shows the map to the crucible and to all crucibles in the stars. And if possible, all dimensions.

So if the the Orrey is able to map out the Crucible and all other crucibles, what's there is to say that the Orrey can map out the dream dimension?

>>4184517
Would the system in its current state still work on single player-only mode?
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>>4184517
oof, damn thats alot of dice.

for what its worth, at its base at least, from a player perspective this is an absolutely wonderful system, and while i wont lie i think it does need some work, id hate to see you give up on it, as you really do have something good here.
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>>4184517
Ouch. Yeah, definitely streamline it for next time, then. You do a great job of making the end-user experience smooth for us, but sounds like it could be a lot simpler for you.

>>4184523
Hadn't thought of that interaction between the two Relics. That could work.
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>>4184523
(It's be a hell of a lot easier to run, that's for sure. But yes, I feel like it would still work perfectly well.)

>>4184525
(I'm really glad to hear, and I can't tell you and everyone else 'thank you' enough for your help in fine-tuning it to something that's vastly improved from its original iteration. I appreciate the modularity of it all, and rest assured that regardless of what I do in the future, a modular, highly customization system is always going to be in play.)

(...and copious amounts of body and/or existential horror.)
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>>4184549
hah, no problem, just giving credit where credit is due.
as is the obvious, take the lessons from here and just improve upon them, both the good and bad.
...and mind boggingly and mentally scarringly ugly too!

if you put the same love and attention you give us and this quest into your later works, you'll do good then too, im sure of it.
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>>4184549
You did a wonderful job on showing Sugar's Corruption flair....
Having her Stripping out of her own skin inside-out and having it turn into crystal candy while showing your candified organs before making it explode into sugar powder makes me squeamish yet amazed. Just the initial part where she just flays off her skin starting from the mouth to the clavicle was enough to make me squirm from reading it.

well done.

Have a meat suit.
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>>4183557
>>4183560
>>4183566
Thank you all for the concern.
Its nothing too bad just my back acting up and going: "you have sat for an hour....... now i will give you extreme pain until you lie down in an awkward position to take care of me until i feel better."

But i asked my mom for help she is a therapist and i have a program down that should help me get off the meds in two maybe three days again by helping me strengthen my back musculature. I caught it early due to knowing what to look out for now.....

>>4184023
November.... is now Soundwave.....

We need to find her a relic so she can have sonic attacks....


>>4184042
>>Stay quiet...you're actually pretty curious about how the Midnight Crew's powers have evolved, since your fight with Magpie was too hectic to appreciate it.
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>>4184042
>Stay quiet...you're actually pretty curious about how the Midnight Crew's powers have evolved, since your fight with Magpie was too hectic to appreciate it.

>>4184077
That isn't to say that stretchy powers don't have the potential for horrific body horror. Quite the opposite, as demonstrated by Ultimate Reed Richards/The Maker.

Spoilered for open brain surgery related gruesomeness.
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>>4184967
>>4184773
>>4184572
>>4184534
So. Question for all of us to think about:

What sort of catwalk flair will we perform?
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>>4185121
honestly i was gonna leave that up to BHOP due to the fact we dont know the full length yet of our own changes. i mean, then again, only hive is still at level 10, but thats assuming everything else has the level 10 start for corruption and isnt one of the few that starts earlier, and its just something we haven't noticed yet.

but the obvious is out low-cut back dress and probably something to do with Fuzzbuzz.
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>>4185121
we will probably have a set of bees (Fuzzbuzz probably) be our partners to go out and do something great like a shower of fluffy Fuzzbuzz. Though i think we can leave the specifics to OP
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>>4185121
I was imagining something with the Hundred-Hands, personally. Like if a Hindu goddess was voguing, a half-dozen arms being used in a flashy dance.
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>>4185136
not sure a goddess is the impression we want or fits Shu.
plus, as much as i love Hundred Hands, i think that aesthetic fits Rath and her Phantom limbs more. plus, Raths the one with 'Goddess' in their title.
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>>4185139
I was just drawing the comparison because Hindu gods are often depicted as multi-armed dancers. It would not be the same style, not evoking a divine image. Instead, go with the rich queer history of voguing. If you're gay and you're on a runway, vogue is how you dance. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TMan2FRprb0
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>>4185143
im... still very against that. that doesn't seem like Shu at all, or anyone we have met honestly.
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Resolving to let B’ni and Uzu acclimate to their new surroundings without having to carry one side of a conversation, you remain silent as you turn your attentions to Francine and her introduction of the Midnight Crew.

“And now! For the infamous, the inimitable, the-“

“Classy as FUCK!” Quinn bellows from offstage.

“…the *classy*…Midnight Crew!” Francine finishes with a wave of her hand and a glare of irritation as Keane bounds up to the runway, her wide-brimmed hat bouncing with every step the young blonde makes. “First on the catwalk is the King of Diamonds herself, the Phlematic member of the Crew, whose restorative powers are unrivaled!”

With a dazzling grin filled with child-like joy, Keane doffs her hat and tosses it skyward, a shower of yellow gems raining down around the young woman only to halt in midair with a clap of her hands. She dances, spinning down the aisle with arms thrown wide as she traipses through veils of golden droplets. You’re so enraptured by the sight that you almost don’t notice the diminutive constructs that are forming in her wake, their round, jiggly forms resembling a cross between the cuter parts of a jellyfish and a bunny rabbit. They undulate skyward, orbiting the space between their creator and her headwear which hovers a good two meters in the air, spinning in time with its owner.

Lines begin to flicker on Keane’s skin, running up her neck, around her nose and under her eyes as her constructs begin to merge with the golden gemstones before combining with each other, forming a monstrous blob with a pair of beady citrine eyes. It lands just in front of the catwalk, and with a snap of Keane’s fingers her hat returns to her scalp just as she dives off-stage, bouncing off her congealed creation as though it’s a Humoral trampoline. She lands feet-first, poised like a gymnast before she erupts into a fit of giggles, promptly turning around and throwing her arms around her construct as the crowd erupts into applause.

“Incredible!” Francine exclaims with a smile. “An utterly dazzling performance by the youngest member of the Mid-“

“Second youngest.” A youthful voice intones from beneath a heavy suit of rust-red armor. Ace lumbers aboard the stage, her twin axes left to one side as she creaks down the catwalk. She tilts her helm toward Quinn and Jackie, who promptly cheer her on as a ripple of movement shudders through Ace’s defenses. Every gap, every rusted joint begins to part as the lumbering exoskeleton comes undone at the seams, every piece tethered together by thick, oozing strands of viscous black liquid…and at its core is Ace, in the flesh.

(Continued)
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The girl’s only slightly taller than Amara despite being older, her brown eyes sharply scanning the crowd as her simple black nightgown billows out from her skinny ankles. She’s bald, her wan face half-covered by the same stygian mucus that stretches from her spine to the fragments of armor that float around her. Lazily flexing her right hand, the flayed gauntlet moves in time with its bearer’s whims, each piece of her intricate battle suit matching Ace’s movements, held just out of reach by her Humoral power.

“Do the thing!” Keane shouts pleadingly, and Ace just rolls her eyes before running a hand over her bare head, a cap of black slime forming atop her scalp as a long coat of ichor trails manifests on her shoulders. Her armor comes together behind her, hovering with its arms folded like an intimidating guardian, standing at attention as Ace slips her hands into pockets that’ve manifested in the faux-clothing she’s made to indulge whatever it is that Keane has in mind.

“Oh? You're approaching me? Instead of running away you're coming right to me?" Keane taunts, trying to make her voice deeper than it’ll go as her skin flickers with golden light.

“I can't beat the shit out of you without getting closer." Ace replies, pointing at Keane before her floating armor unleashes a flurry of dramatic punches against Keane’s golden blob as the other girl cheers.

“Yare yare…” Ace mutters, the ghost of a smile on what little you can see of her features before she snaps her fingers, the armor behind her exploding out before converging once more, this time on Ace herself as she hovers a meter off the ground, each piece slotting into place within the span of mere seconds. She lands on one knee, her fist driven to the ground before she rises to her full height, Keane practically squealing with joy as her fellows give her a round of applause.

“A bold display of raw talent by the Midnight Crew’s own Ace of Clubs!” Francine declares, her tone betraying just how impressed she is at Ace’s considerable skill, despite her age. “And now, for-“

“Me, bitches!” Quinn interrupts with a laugh, leaping onstage in a single bound, the muscles of her powerful legs tensing as she lands. She reaches down as she stands up straight, Quinn peels off her shirt in one fluid motion – and just as you’re about to look away, you realize that she’s crafted herself a bra of her own Humoral Power, a stark ivory against the blonde’s slightly tanned skin. Daring to look, you realize that pure white ichor runs through her entire body now, her fit body now a marbled masterpiece of flawless skin and peerless alabaster.

You feel almost guilty for admiring the other girl’s stunning form, at least until Gina screams out a ‘yaas queen’ that’s absolutely fueled by a little too much drink.

(Continued)
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Quinn’s movements are a bit less ‘runway model’ and a bit more ‘exotic dancer’, but you can tell she’s enjoying herself as she saunters down the catwalk…and with every step she takes, her body adapts. Standing a little straighter as a her feet twist and distort into a pair of ivory-heeled boots, her inhuman skin billows out to cover the rest of her, forming a slinky white number that’s a monochromatic reverse of a little black dress, complete with a plunging neckline and a slit that runs all the way up one leg. An appreciate whistle behind you makes you start, and to your surprise you find it’s source to be Julia, with Dorian clearly as taken off-guard as you are by the meek girl’s vocal support of your mutual ally.

Quinn reaches the end of the catwalk, striking a pose before making a sharp turn that flashes one long, powerful leg before she sashays back down to where she began, her dress receding into her body’s marbled physique. The statuesque blonde blows the room a kiss before prancing back down the steps and over to Jackie’s side, shoving her friend-leader towards the stage with a good-natured laugh…and just behind them, you catch Rath’s eye from where she stands next to her aunt, her citrine gaze fixed on the spot to your right. On a certain Dream Daughter, to be more precise.

“Last but certainly not least, who else could follow after the Queen of Hearts but the Jack of All Spades herself?” Francine announces, completely immersed in her role as the impromptu event’s master of ceremonies. “Introducing…Jackie!”

Where Keane and Ace had been playful, where Quinn had leaned into the flirtatious – Jackie’s clearly cut from a different cloth. Every movement, every step she takes down the catwalk exudes a calm, collected confidence that practically drips off her lithe, angular frame. Her black jacket’s cut perfectly…half-armor, half-fashion statement that’s open just enough to show off what she’s proud of, and when she takes her last step on the runway, her coat takes flight.

Her overcoat explodes into dozens of bat-like constructs that scatter about the room, forming a swirling vortex of stygian wings that surges above the stage. Jackie’s face remains impassive as her thin fingers alight on the handle that protrudes from her chest. She withdraws it, this time taking the form of a short, glimmering knife that still hurts to observe. With a flick of her wrist Jackie slices the air before her, cutting through space to stand mere inches from you, her dark, shining eyes piercing into yours – and when you draw in a slight, short gasp, it’s only then that she allows a thin smirk to cross her otherwise stoic expression.

It’s a challenge, playful and pointed, all at once.

(Continued)
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>>4185194

With a twist of her narrow hips Jackie turns away from you, cutting the air once last time to re-appear back on stage as you struggle to reconcile the bold young woman that was just before you with the doubt-stricken girl you glimpsed, when your powers took a turn you wish they didn’t.

If Jackie’s putting on airs, then she’s a damn fine actress.

“Displaying powers that…clearly need demand further study…” Francine begins hesitantly, thrown off her groove by the unexpected use of whatever Jackie has at her disposal. “…Jackie, leader of the Midnight Crew, everyone!”

The room erupts into applause…save for Rath, who you see striding over to the Forge just behind the stage before the red-head disappears from sight.

“Now! Who would like a turn on the catwalk?” Francine asks, sweeping her arm over the crowd. Gina’s practically chomping at the bit to go up, and behind you Julia and Dorian whisper between themselves as for wether or not they should get things started. Meanwhile, Holly’s finally convinced Johanna to join in the fun, and the enthusiastic blonde is frantically waving to Uzu and B’ni, trying to usher them over to her side as the two girls pretend they don’t see her.

Your turn’s coming up soon…it’s only a matter of how you want to slice it.

>>Go over and push Gina onstage, then prompt the rest of your family to follow suit.

>>Urge Dorian and Julia to get things started…and have them take their time as you go see what Rath’s up to.

>>Your four Dream Daughters…or Holly and Johanna, at the very least.

>>A leader should never ask her soldiers to do what she’s unwilling to do, first – you’ll start things off.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next four hours.)
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>>4185197
>>A leader should never ask her soldiers to do what she’s unwilling to do, first – you’ll start things off.
>>Write-In
>If Francine winds up taking a turn on the catwalk, take over announcer duties for her.
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>>4185197
>A leader should never ask her soldiers to do what she’s unwilling to do, first – you’ll start things off.
>Keep it simple, keep it fun, keep it FUZZBUZZ.
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>>4185197
>>A leader should never ask her soldiers to do what she’s unwilling to do, first – you’ll start things off.
>take your Dreamdaughters with you so they are next in Line. Might as well get all parts of yourself out there
>Get Fuzzbuzz fashion for all of them and yourself

Yeah let us start things off. We have a good idea that Rath is probably still uncomfortable seeing Isabelle again.

She can bring it up to us later
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>>4184773
oh, missed this.
glad to hear its nothing serious Anon, and hope that routine works!
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>>4185214
it seems like it does. I didn't wake up with any backpain today and only needed half the dosage to get through my day. So that is nice. And my vacation started today so i can fully concentrate on that when i am not painting.

Here a sneak peak for Selene. I only started coloring her like half an hour ago so it is quite unfinished right now
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>>4185197
>A leader should never ask her soldiers to do what she’s unwilling to do, first – you’ll start things off.
>If Francine winds up taking a turn on the catwalk, take over announcer duties for her.
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>>4185197
Time to flex my fashion Catwalk plan. Give me about an hour to think of some good choreography as well as writing it down please gentlemen?
>>4185231
>>4185227
>>4185214
>>4185204


Never before has a grocery run been so nervewracking for me during a time of plague
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>>4185233
im very certain i dont want a long in depth catwalk plan though.
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>>4185227
Ooh, neat design. All spiny.

>>4185233
Sure thing, anon, I'm interested to hear what ideas you have for choreography.

Stay safe on your grocery run.
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>>4185235
Anon. please, let me have this.

You've seen how bhop flexed his creative muscles to showcase their abilities and powers.

have some fun.
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>>4185237
Selene will be quite awkward to hug at the end of her evolution......
The path of the Tyrants Wrath is not one for the one who follows the paths of the cuddles.

Though she would be quite good at giving bone crushing hugs
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>>4185238
I'd have more fun keeping it simple and seeing what happens, then trying to complicate or overblow a simple runway run.
especially because you tend to go way too far with some things at time for my liking.
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>>4185227
(Oh, this looks absolutely fantastic! Thank you for sharing, Anon.)

>>4184773
(Goodness, I somehow missed this, too. I wish you best on that routine, and that you feel better soon.)

>>4185238
>>4185233
(I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with...goodness knows that I've spent enough time staring at my screen trying to think up a decent routine to where I'd appreciate some extra inspiration.)
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>>4185197
>>4185264
Here's what I came up with for Shu's catwalk routine.

>Make some preparations before hand, use Neurotic halo to come up with a collaborative choreography plan with all your dream daughters.
>Gather your dream daughter pilots, and make some modifications to their spirit shells, Apply the Rook Class onto their spirit shells so that you can do Teleport swapping shenanigans.

>have Gina play the song heard in this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zyMfpJh3h4A
>But the dance choreography will also be inspired by the aforementioned video and this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eKBm9RZs_Ks

>Start off simple, walk onto the catwalk elegantly with a single Fuzzbuzz swarmling in your hand, then do some hundred-handed finger tutting playing around with the fuzzbuzz, sometimes squishing it in your palms before showing that you've transformed it into a different class, sometimes you convert the Bee into a Black Raven, sometimes you multiply them and convert them into platelings that form up as Chitinous stalwart armor that explodes into a mass of Arms with whirling calcite drills that extend out as if to spear the audicence but stop just short where the drill opens like a flower to deposit a Fuzzbuzz or a baby raven into their hands before violently retracting into the armor where the armor melts back into your skin. Sometimes you multiply the fuzzbuzz by activating the Recursive feature to make multiple fuzzbuzzes, but in the end of the first act it's just you and a single fuzzbuzz.

>look at it, let it flit around as if curious before your Ravenous maw suddenly snaps it up with bungee tongue and swallows it, have the swallowed fuzzbuzz cry out a small squeak of horror. Lick your lips as well as your stomach mouth.

>Then Feign stomach pain as you slowly birth out four rooks one at a step onto a spiral turn table that you've set up during your multi-handed finger tutting session, but as each Rook steps out, you do a Kansas castle shuffle, as you teleport swap your spirit shell dream daughters into position. Each one that does teleport into position, they do their own mini catwalk act while you raise the stage with dominus bloodline.

>As a final flourish, Shu, Isabelle, Johanna, Holly, and Uzu do a synchronized dance number that ends with a closing act where after each dream daughter finishes their personal routine they position themselves to enter Shu's back, where Shu does another teleport shuffle to teleport them off-stage while making it look like they re-entered Shu where in fact it's just a rook class swarmling that re-entered Shu's hive.

>When the final dream daughter shuffle is finished, the moment the final rook is re-absorbed back into the hive, appear to give a final bow but then suddenly clutch your stomach as if something's about to regurgitate.
>Have your ravenous maw burp out a Fuzzbuzz. Look sheepishly at audience.
>Have both you and fuzzbuzz bow to the audience before leaving the catwalk.
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>>4185283
>>4185197
yeah voting heavily against this. dont like this at all.
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>>4185289
Too much?
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>>4185291
way too much, on top of im not sure theres a single individual piece i like at all.
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>>4185283
We are participating in a fashion and not a talent show. I know the midnight Creew made a lot of flourishes but this is a bit to much in my opinion.

This is something you can maybe pull post crucible in a Miss World Daughter talent competition.

I think we can do Fuzzbuzz fashion for us make them weave into a scarf and maybe some accessories.
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>>4185296
>>4185292
Fair. I will admit that my mind went from a fashion flair into a choreography dance routine. So yeah. that. Let me come up with something else then and see what I can salvage from my over-the-top dance number.
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>>4185197
>>4185283
Amending my vote

>>4185296
>>4185292
how's this?

>Walk on stage spawning a procession of swarmlings from your back.
>Each step you take, you spawn a pair of swarmlings of a different class and a different modifier, each pair varies and none of them are the same.
>At the end of the catwalk, all of the swarmlings are kneeling or prostrating at your presence. spawn a fuzzbuzz from your back, play with it with your hands, your many many hundred hands.
>then have your Ravenous maw snap it up with bungee tongue and swallow it.
>At the same time, your back explodes with hundred hands that grab the constructs behind you and converts them into platelings where they immediately retract and assemble your Chitinous Stalwart form.
>Show off Chitinous Stalwart form by having the ground beneath you slowly spin like a turntable showing off the latest model car.
>Experiment with plateling modifiers by growing drills from your arm, spawn wingling wings from your back to briefly hover, have your helmet plateling spew small flamethrower to make it look like you breathe fire, pull out the Contender in Gemini Revolver form and give them a gun twirl al la revolver ocelot.
>Upon holstering the twin revolvers your armor bursts into glittering chaff and melts back into your skin.
>Respond to Jackie's challenge with a playful wink and point two finger guns al la revolver ocelot.
>half a beat later, your ravenous maw burps up the fuzzbuzz you had swallowed, ruining the moment.
>Smile sheepishly like the goof you are and then leave the catwalk.
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>>4185308
>>4185197
not a fan of the swarmlings prostrating themselves, the eating and burping of the Fuzzbuzz, or reacting to Jackies challenge in any way or form.

still voting 'no' on it for sure.
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>>4185308
>>4185197
Another amendment.

>Walk on stage spawning a procession of swarmlings from your back.
>Each step you take, you spawn a pair of swarmlings of a different class and a different modifier, each pair varies and none of them are the same.
>At the end of the catwalk spawn a fuzzbuzz from your back, play with it with your hands, your many many hundred hands.
>Then your back explodes with hundred hands that grab the constructs behind you and converts them into platelings where they immediately retract and assemble your Chitinous Stalwart form.
>Show off Chitinous Stalwart form by having the ground beneath you slowly spin like a turntable showing off the latest model car using Psychica Spiralis
>Experiment with plateling modifiers by growing drills from your arm, spawn wingling wings from your back to briefly hover, have your helmet plateling spew small flamethrower to make it look like you breathe fire, pull out the Contender in Gemini Revolver form and give them a gun twirl al la revolver ocelot.
>Upon holstering the twin revolvers your armor bursts into glittering chaff and melts back into your skin.
>leave the catwalk.

>>4185312
Better?
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>>4185318
Yeah, I like that. The concept car turntable showing off the armor is a good bit.
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>>4185318
I guess that works yeah.
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>>4185318
this looks a lot better. it shows off what we can do like the midnight crew did but not going completely overboard.

I would have commented earlier but i wanted to use the last half an hour of sunlight for a small walk and then i ate dinner. But good on you for figuring this out
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also, heres an idea i thought up for an ability. balance ill admit probably a bit iffy, but its more of a rundown of the overall idea, than specifically a level one or max level form of it.

>BANEFUL CLIMAX(Phantasmal Conduit);in a sharp reversal of the Phantasmal Conduits usual aura based abilities, this ability instead draws from the emotions of those one faces, over affecting the emotions of those around oneself. Greatly encouraging one to be as mean, annoying, and outright antagonistic as possible to one's opponents, this ability draws on and grows in strength the more anger and rage one's opponents have directed towards oneself. With its buildup rate equal to just how pissed off one has made their foes, for each 10% of built up ANGER directed at oneself, the owner of this ability gains a 1% boost to all their base stats, from crit rate and hit chance to strength and speed. What's more, for each 25% total ANGER one has built up directed at themselves, their Health, Biomass, and Regen stats gain a 10% boost to their current maximum and total, including giving a much needed automatic increase to one's current Health and Biomass. Finally, upon reaching 100% ANGER directed at oneself, one may consume all the rage directed at you, not only temporarily distracting ones foe as all their anger suddenly disperses into you, but also makes one go full RAGE for a turn, in which one's ACTS and base stats both DOUBLE for one turn, but one loses all control over themselves, internalizing their foes anger to temporarily become nothing more than a wild, mad beast. Certainly, a climax to a most baneful show one may put on...
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>>4185368
I'm trying to think about what other abilities would go well with this. You want to troll your opponents and be as annoying to fight as possible, so I'm thinking Expressionist Flesh Artisan. Hit them with stacks, terraform difficult terrain, overall make it really unpleasant to go against you.
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>>4185368
definitely sounds interesting. Speciifc levels would be nice but hammering those out can comer later.

It has a lot of potential since it also is a way to control aggro
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>>4185379
could work yeah. Betty and Doom were the inspiration honestly, so i was more thinking actual hijinks than what abilities might help you trigger it, but you're probably on the right track for more direct annoyances.

>>4185393
ill fully admit the idea of making a full level tree just... isn't always what im up for. 15-20 levels honestly isnt fun to think up of for me personally. think for my own stuff going forward, its just gonna be a more overall ability for things, no more in depth levels. just no fun it for me to try and think all of that out, in good part too because unlike in the actual quest, its not being properly used like the level-up functions was designed for(and even then as ive stated, i do think we started drowning in too much level and ability wise for my liking in the actual Quest even.)

mind you, if you or anyone else has a use for this or other abilities ive posted, feel free to both use it and flesh them out.
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>>4185416
i was more saying that one could hammer those levels out if needed. So far the synopsis is completely fine. I have no wish to hammer those out since i have more than enough on my plate already.
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>>4185200
(It's been a day, Gentlemen. I'm headed home now, and I'll wrap up writing once I arrive home.)
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>>4185499
its fine. sorry to hear about your day. hope whatever lined up for dinner can make up for it a bit!
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>>4185499
Sure thing OP. Feel free to go to sleep if you don't feel capable of writing anymore Not sure if will still be awake then but i guess we will see
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>>4185197

Taking one last swig of your Bee's Knees, you place the glass on the bar, rising from your seat and striding to the stage defiantly as the the crowd goes wild.

"The Godhunter herself takes the stage!" Francine shouts, fighting to be heard over the cheers and applause that threatens to overwhelm even November's sick beats. "The Defiant, our Leader, and my Model Patient...Shu!"

Stepping up to the plate, you give Gina a little wink as you make your way down the catwalk, a procession of swarmlings billowing forth from your hive. Every step produces a vastly different pair, no set alike in form or function as you fill the air with Bishops, Rooks, Knights - the air is alight with their gleaming chitin, the room sizzling with their shimmering wingbeats. Stopping at the end of the runway, a last diminutive creation pops out of your spine, the final FuzzBuzz flitting into your palm, hopping between the numerous hands that bud off your actual limb as Hera's power makes the redundant a thing of beauty.

Suddenly, you double-over as your back explodes with flesh, dozens of limbs reaching out to snatch your swarm from mid-air. They return to you, reshaping at your command into Platelings that snap into place in the blink of an eye - and just like that, you stand proudly before all present, clad in the fully-formed Chitinous Stalwart. With a tap of your foot the runway's end is laced with the dizzying power of the Psychica Spiralis, slowly turning clockwise as your armor manifests the fruits of your journey. Drills whirr from your pauldrons as a pair of wings briefly hold you aloft, your helm issuing a billowing cloud of flame as proof of your allegiance with the Pyreant Queen. You land, unholstering the Contender as one revolver becomes two, and you show off your trusty sidearm's calcite majesty by spinning both pistols, their perfect balance allowing you to effortlessly showcase the weapon - and friend - that's never leaving your side.

A round of applause erupts once more as you deftly recombine the guns, pausing just before you holster Karma after one final twirl of both the gun and yourself, your back to your adoring audience. You slide the weapon back into the holster at your hip, and the second you finish, your armor erupts into a billowing cloud of chaff, that whirls around you like a blinding hurricane for but a moment before it constricts, spiraling back into your skin and leaving the air completely clear. The room suddenly falls silent as you shoot a smirk over one shoulder before walking back down the catwalk, having had your fun for now.

The room - collectively - loses its shit.

Gina's screaming with pure, unadulterated joy while Dorian and Julia both whistle, and Amara's in the center of a group of Joyous at least two dozen strong that are chanting your name.

As a blush creeps into your cheeks, you have to admit that you had more fun than you'd intended to with that bit.

(Continued)
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>>4185628

"I'm sure I don't have to ask for another round of applause for our fearless leader." Francine says with a smile as you step offstage, striding over to the good doctor as she continues to speak. "Truly an exemplary...what are you doing, Darling?"

"Taking over so that you can get the turn in the spotlight you so deserve." Comes your answer, jerking a thumb at the stage.

"M-me?" She asks incredulously, shaking her head. "No no, I'm a researcher, not a-"

"Tall drink of water who'd look fantastic up there on stage?" Gina interrupts boldly as she walks up to the two of you, a freshly-emptied glass held loosely in the fingers of her left hand, the other looping under your arm and she pulls you close. "C'mon Francine, you've been awesome as an MC...so get up there and show us what you can do!"

"Seriously...cut loose a little." You add with a grin. "You've earned it."

Francine glances towards the stage, and upon catching November's eye, the cyborg gives her an enthusiastic thumbs' up...and to your pleasant surprise that's what seems to seal the deal, steeling the doc's resolve as she storms over to the stage with purpose, slipping on her gloves as she goes.

"Now, Defiants of all ages, I welcome to the stage our very own Doctor, our Master of Ceremonies, the one, the ONLY!" You cheer pointedly, with Francine smirking as your choice of words is not lost on her;

"Francine!"

The good doctor wastes no time, pacing down the runway as she tugs at her gloves fingers, one for every step she takes. With a yank of her hand, Francine's glove comes off as her hand itself unwravels into a tangle of golden threads, her entire arm coming undone as ribbons of shimmering flesh trail behind her, the music amping up as November cheers her friend on. You're about to comment on the action when Gina's hand starts trailing down your back, the brunette standing on her tip-toes to whisper in your ear.

"Looks like your Hive's expanded...can't wait to see how far down it's gone." She purrs, voice slurring a little as her hand slides down your-

"H-hey now. Down, girl." You protest, cocking an eyebrow at the shorter girl. "You're drunk."

"You're sexy." She counters with a sloppy grin. "So who's up after Fran, cutie?"

Well, that depends on who Francine calls up to the st-

Wait.

Francine's still on stage.

Shit, *you're* the MC now. In that case, after the good doctor's had her turn, you may as well call on...

>>Dorian and Julia, since they'd just look adorable up there.

>>Rath...if she'll come out to play from wherever she's slunk off to.

>>Push Gina up on stage...if she can walk a stright line, that is.

>>While you're fairly certain Uzu and B'ni don't want to be put on the spot, you'll oblige Holly's efforts and let both her and Johanna have their turn.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next three hours, during which I am going to try and take a nap, if I can. Thank you all for bearing with my tiredness, and I do hope everyone's day is going well.)
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>>4185633
>Master of Ceremonies
>MC
Is this a monster hearts reference.......

>>4185635
Take that Nap OP.
I will go to sleep myself. My eyes are burning after finishing up coloring Selene's Hair....... Her hands are a whole other story i just cant deal with right now....

Also good Night everyone

>>4185633
>>Dorian and Julia, since they'd just look adorable up there.

Also damn you Gina. Now is not the place for such inappropriate things. hell the daughter you adopted by enterign a relationship with Shu is here and several other underage daughters as well. Get a grip girl you cant be that drunk already
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>>4185633
vote;
>Push Gina up on stage...if she can walk a straight line, that is.
kinda wanan save Dorian and Julia for last, and while i wanted the Spiritus Gang to go next, thats orders already broken, so lets uhh, get Gina some fresh air before she does something to us that shouldn't be done in public.

>>4185635
you know, if you need to, theres no harm or shame in calling it a night early.
but regardless, hope you have a wonderful nap. and if it turns into full blown sleep, ill just assume 'have a good night' will apply instead after two or so hours extra.
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>>4185645
(A good eye on the reference. MC is a general term as well, but I had Monster Hearts in mind when I wrote it, so well played.)

>>4185647
(I appreciate it, and I'll see how I feel once I wake up.)
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>>4185633
>Push Gina up on stage...if she can walk a straight line, that is.

Get Gina's over with before she does something to embarrass herself. But given the fact that she's a Neuromancer...we may need to stop her before she does something "too lewd" on stage.

>Jack into Kosi and ask her to purge Gina of the Drunk debuff with Immutable form.

>>4185647
>>4185645
Gentlemen, Gina has Immutable form which is a status debuff clear ability. Gina's clearly not in her right state of mind. Lets ask Kosi to clear the drunkeness.
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>>4185669
>>4185658
actually, christ, both just how strong is this alcohol and just how much has Gina drank?

in our first party with the Midnight Crew, Dorian had to become a regen mule so everyone else could get drunk without their regen interfering, aswell as overpower his own.

now everyone has regen outpacing what he had back then for sure yet these drinks are apparently kicking some folks butts to the floor without a regen mule making it easier. has Dorian been secretly brewing Crucible Alcohol without telling us or something?
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>>4185679
Well I did create The Bloody Bottle as a relic...you know the T-2 relic that guarantees the drinker to be drunk and grants massive debuff resistances in exchange for a killer hangover?

One of the party members must've brought them over and added it to the collection.
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>>4185679
(He and Julia whipped something up after a conversation on their Laoc date, a little tweak to the drinks that they haven't been able to put into use until now.)
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>>4185697
huh.
yeah figured Dorian had a part in this, but surprised Julia did. being ok with it or encouraging him? sure. but actually helping is surprising.
thanks, and get that sleep damnit.
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>>4185697
The Bloody Bottle's involved as part of a cocktail somehow isn't it? A relic like that would satisfy Dorian's booze hobby due to its effects of guaranteed drunkenness.
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>>4185702
You know how she's all meek, docile, and mousey? I think her time with the hyenas has unlocked the long repressed party animal within her.
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>>4185703
(Bingo.)

>>4185702
(She just wants everyone to have a good time...and if that means people getting sloshed, then so be it.)
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>>4185707
fair, though, also a bit dubious of a train of logic there.

>>4185706
possibly, but hopefully not too far of one.
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>>4185669
>>4185633
Amending vote:

>Jack into Gina, ask Kosi to try and clear the drunkeness from Gina's system with immutable form. If she can't then transfer part or all of it to Shu, leave enough for Gina to walk the carpet with a clear head and for Shu to commentate.

>Push Gina up on stage...if she can walk a straight line, that is.

>"Thank you Doc."

>"Up next. The Girl who a devious mind in battle, a devil with Neuromancy, and a kinky demon in bed...my girlfriend. Gina."
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>>4185633
>>Dorian and Julia, since they'd just look adorable up there.
>>Write-In
>Try to siphon off some of Gina's blood alcohol content with the Dominus Bloodline, split the drunkenness between both your regen factors to get her sober enough for when it's her turn.
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(Gentlemen, I do believe that I need to turn in for the evening if I have any hope of writing something decent. I'll leave voting open for the next four hours, with posting to resume in approximately 11:00AM tomorrow, Eastern time. I greatly appreciate your patience, and I do hope you all have a restful evening.)
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>>4186024
Sure thing, BHOP. Go get some sleep, friend. See you tomorrow morning.
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>>4186024
Have a wonderful night BHOP.
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>>4186024
Go ahead an sleep OP. I hope you will have good dreams

>>4185658
It was a shot in the dark i admit but that specific combination of words made something in my head rattle.... and when i looked well..... yeah
Not a game i would play myself. I have been a teenager for long enough i dotn need to go and try to capture that feeling again. not even if i am a monster doing it
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Still a better world than ours
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>>4185633

Placing your hand on Gina's, your Neuromancy interfaces with a particular Dream Daughter whose skillset would work wonders for this situation.

"Kosi?" You ask aloud as Gina gives you confused look. "Think you could do me a solid?"

"What's in it for me, guv?" She demands, though Kosi’s smile is evident in the familiar voice that echoes in your mind.

"A front row seat, if you play your cards right." You reply, giving your girlfriend a wink as she cocks one eyebrow.

"Aw shit , dude! You filthy! Man, gimme a sec."

Gina's body involuntarily shudders, the effects of Immutable Form cleansing her body of the surprisingly potent effects of whatever Julia and Dorian have cooked up behind that bar of theirs.

“Whew…well, getting un-drunk isn’t something I ever expected to feel.” GG mutters, a little shell-shocked at the after-effects of the favor you did her liver. “Oof. Thanks for that, babe.”

Applause draws your eye back to the stage, where you're flabbergasted to see that Francine's shed her coat, now slung over one shoulder as her arm stitches itself back together. She gives the crowd a bow as she turns on her heel back down the runway, wearing a self-satisfied smile on her thin lips that lingers in your eyes even as you turn your attentions back to Gina.

“No worries…but think fast, ‘cause you’re up next.” You smirk, giving the brunette a gentle shove towards the stage. “Ladies and Gent! I’d like to welcome the one we have to thank for this event, the one who’s always down to party and-slash-or bend the Fleshscape to her whims…but I repeat myself! Give it up for the one, the only…Gina!”

Your favorite Neuromancer obliges you as she bounds up the steps to the catwalk, hazel eyes tinged with Amethyst as she takes a page out of your book...and then some. Worms begin to slither out from underneath her hoodie, slipping out of her sleeves in droves as they cover her in seconds, the writhing armor undulating before your eyes for but a second before calcite explodes from her petite form. Peerless bone overlaps the writhing mass, forming a bulky suit of armor that would put Ace - or Mara - to shame. Gina playfully flexes for the crowd, and you end up cheering her on as she goes through one or two more routines before the armor shrinks, merging with Gina's skin as she spins...and keeps spinning, on one calcite ice-skate. Veins flicker amethyst as the stage curves, making a little obstacle course for her as she lazily glides back down the runway, setting the catwalk back to the way it was just before blowing you a kiss as she bounces off stage.

Gina’s barely three paces away from the runway when Holly darts past her, dragging Johanna along at a breakneck pace as they lunge for the stage simultaneously.

(Continued)
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>>4187088

“We’re going at the same time!” Holly shouts over to you, a prospect that Jo doesn’t seem nearly as thrilled about as the girl that’s currently strong-arming a bodybuilder.

“Everyone! I’d like to bring your attention to some dear friends of mine that have just taken the stage, two of the friendliest people I’ve ever had the pleasure to meet!”

“Us!” Holly declares, waving to the crowd as the taller girl behind her just gives a sharp salute. The blonde takes the lead, strutting her stuff down the catwalk with a playful pout and clearly hamming it up for all to see. Striding quickly to the end of the runway, she strikes a pose for a split-second before her composure breaks, the young woman’s torso splitting open as she promptly helicopters both her hair and tongue in a ludicrously head-banging display.

With sudden boldness, Johanna begins to stride up to her companion with a grin that doesn’t stop at her face. One by one, countless mouths begin to smirk along her toned arms and down the lengths of her powerful legs as they carry her to her friend’s side where she suddenly flexes, winking at Gina almost as if she’s giving thanks for the inspiration. Holly laughs, stepping back to showcase the other girl when every single mouth on Jo’s muscular frame promptly blows a raspberry, making the blonde erupt into a fit of giggles and leaving Amara in stitches.

You can’t help but smile yourself, thoroughly enjoying the much-needed diversion from the Alpha situation that continues to loom overhead. It’s a confrontation you dread, if you’re being honest…a thing that, if it comes to blows, will not hesitate to pull its punches. The Spiraling Fear, Isabelle, even Magpie – West Alpha is something that is a league apart, if what you’ve heard and researched is to be believed.

But for now, right here? You’re just watching two of your Dream Daughters goof off onstage, and you can’t thank them enough for the welcome respite from your own creeping worries.

The pair’s improv set almost at an end, you scan the room for Rath, finding her walking swiftly away from the Forge. You're about to call out to her when you realize just what her squared shoulders are aiming at – she’s striding over to B'ni, a determined look in her eye and a clenched fist at her side. Throat going dry, your focus narrows on the redhead you’ve seen that look before, the one that tells you she’s on a mission that no power in the Fleshcape can dissuade her from…

...maybe not even you.

>>Stop her. You can't tell what she's doing without your empathic field, but you don't like the look of it.

>>Let her do what she needs to, but keep an eye on her, just in case.

>>You trust Rath, and since she doesn’t seem to be in a dancing mood, call Dorian and Julia up to the stage.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next four hours. The next update will likely be the last for this Vein, as I’ll be running a continuation of the one-shot I ran a few months ago due to popular (?) demand. I do hope everyone’s day is going well, and thank you all for your continued patience and participation.)
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>>4187096
Oh unexpectedly running more i can empathize.

>>4187093
>>Let her do what she needs to, but keep an eye on her, just in case.
>Give the announcer role back to Francine. She did a marvelous job anyway
>Stay ready to extend a Dominous to Isabelle. While you trust Rath and think she will not do anything to Isabelle now its best to be prepared. And you also need to be prepared in case she drags Isabelle into the party itself
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>>4187093
>Watch Rath, and be prepared to intervene in a moments notice, but trust her to not make a scene at least.
>>If she tries to force Isabelle somewhere private, at least take up a position to see if Isabelle gets into trouble to intervene, but not full on eavesdrop.
>since Rath doesn’t seem to be in a dancing mood, call Dorian and Julia up to the stage, handing Francine her role again.

if its just mean words, whatever, not our place to solve their relationship problems. its mostly just making sure Raths temper doesn't flare into the physical, and this seemed like a good balance between the two. if folks werent worried about Raths mental state probably would take the risk though, but, compromise.

>>4187096
well, i do hope that all goes well BHOP. though knowing you, im sure it will.
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>>4187096
>The next update will likely be the last for this Vein, as I’ll be running a continuation of the one-shot I ran a few months ago due to popular (?) demand.

Is this going to be an Ischemia side story?
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>>4187115
i think he means a game he ran for his wife and a couple of his/her? friends i want to say

He ran a One Shot for his wife a while back if i remember correctly
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>>4187115
i think he means in real life. he mentioned awhile ago offhandedly he ran a tabletop RP for some RL friends that was a one shot, and despite never doing it before, they loved it.
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>>4187093

>Let her do what she needs to, but keep an eye on her, just in case.

>If Rath wants to fight out their frustrations, offer to take it to the dreamscape where they can pummel each other to their hearts content barring dream daughter deletion, if they want to keep it physical, then supervise the match.

>Rules will be clean, match ends when one of them reach a death's door state that requires outside assistance to stabilize. If their opponent is on death's door, they are not allowed to attack while the other is down. Rath's Second wind is allowed, Overkill is Forbidden. If Rath is about to go down after her second wind, the match is over.

>Shu won't interfere unless a daughter on death's door reaches 2 failures on death's door or if Rath is about to go down after her second win.

I think Rath is scrapping for a pummeling match with Isabelle, as she still hasn't worked out all of her frustrations.
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>>4187148
>>4187093
yeah, hells no to that.

not only am i not at all letting any fight go at all to deaths door, but thats also just not at all something i want us to encourage, be a part of, or arbate over given the reasoning behind it.
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>>4187093
Amending my vote form>>4187105
to support>>4187112
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>>4187093
>>Let her do what she needs to, but keep an eye on her, just in case.
>>Write-In
>Trust Uzu to interfere if need be, she's sitting with Isabel.
>Return the announcer position to Francine, take a seat back in the audience where you'd be able to watch the doors in case Rath took Isabel to another room. But surreptitiously, don't make it look like we're trying to keep watch.
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>>4187148
i dont like this..... this feels like we are being the matron, we rejected those powers for, we wanted to not become
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>>4187173
Good point. And thanks for bringing it up.

>>4187148
>>4187093
Amending my vote.

>Let her do what she needs to, but keep an eye on her, just in case.
>You trust Rath, and since she doesn’t seem to be in a dancing mood, call Dorian and Julia up to the stage.
>Hand the MC over back to Francine.
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>>4187096
>>4187105
>>4187112
>>4187169

Update on Chapter 4 of Carter and the Town of Cradleton:

It should be done by tonight or tomorrow morning at the rate I'm going and if I don't see any continuity errors. It's definitely longer than Chapter three in terms of length.
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>>4187443
neat, and good timing aswell it seems. looking forward to it.
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>>4187443
Here's hoping Carter gets out of this with his pelvis intact.
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>>4187443
Interesting timing definetly.

With any luck i will be able to start Minas portrait tomorrow as well. I only have the shading on Selenes armored hands and coloring her clothes left to do as well as some detail work so here is hoping i wont have to spend a third day on that.
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(Wrapping up writing now, Gentlemen.)
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>>4187093

“Francine?” You say as you walk up to the taller woman, trying not to let the swiftness your steps betray your haste. “You were great up there, but I have to admit that I like your take on MC’ing much better than my own attempts...mind taking over?”

"Oh! Quite gladly, Darling." She replies happily, her coat still slung over one shoulder. "Since dear Holly broke a new precedent, perhaps its the artists' turn onstage?"

"Good idea." You say, keeping an eye on Rath as she hovers near the bar.

"Everyone, if I may have your attention?" Francine says,her clear, authoritative tone making all present shift their focus to the good doctor. "If they'll be so kind as to step away from hosting to do us all the pleasure of stepping to the stage - I'd like to welcome our very own Julia and Dorian!"

Julia jumps at the chance, her skinless fingers finding Dorian’s as the two of them emerge from behind the bar, hand-in-hand and passing Rath on her way to her target. They take to the stage as the room's murmurs die down, all eyes on the pair as they stand before you, hands clasped tight. November's slowed the music, reading the mood as she, too, watches as Dorian turns on his heel to face Julia, and she responds in kind, their other hands meeting just above her shoulder. He taps his foot - one, two, three, four - and then...they're off.

You cast a glance over to the bar, finding Rath extending her fist to B'ni as Uzu tenses protectively, eyes narrowed until the standing red-head uncurls her fingers. She’s presenting something, you realize, as Isabelle just stares at it a moment...and it's only a second or two before her eyes widen with recognition. Uzu looks confusedly between the two girls, as B’ni just reaches out with a tentative hand to take the offered item - a simple square of thin flesh, a quite ordinary Relic whose form is familiar, but whose function you can't quite place. B'ni looks up at Rath, her lower lip quivering, her eyes asking a question she dares not voice...and with that, Rath gestures to the seat beside her as you chance a look back to the stage.

And what you witness is something extraordinary.

Dorian and Julia...they're performing their Stormfront Waltz on a smaller, more elegant scale, their bodies whirling in a mesmerizing cyclone of crimson. Her flesh, his blood – their scarlet dance almost makes them indistinguishable, a perfect match as they spin down the runway, hands clasped tight, each one's eyes lost in the other's.

You glance back to find that Rath's taken a seat next to B'ni and Uzu, Rath keeping one eye on the show as she speaks quietly, with B'ni just staring at the girl beside her, stunned. Your brawler nods - first to the Midnight Crew, then to the Barbers, and finally to the stage, speaking softly all the while. Perfectly calm, with her hands clasped in her lap as she finishes with something said as-a-matter-of-factly, finally meeting B'ni's eyes...and then?

Rath just smiles.

(Continued)
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>>4187726

It's a small thing, tinged with something like regret, maybe akin to sadness...but behind it is something greater and brighter than either of those. Hope, understanding - a certain sort of peace that you don't need an empathic field to sense. One that's clear in your friend's eyes, and you can tell that B'ni sees it, too.

Your hair stands on end just before the unmistakable crackle of electricity makes you turn to see that both participants have shifted, their powers on full and comfortable display. Julia's frame has gone from slight to swole, her powerful, bestial form laced with patches of cobalt fur over rippling red muscle. She's smiling, a mouthful of fangs bared with joy while her bloodied talons hold on to Dorian's for dear life as she looses a bark of laughter. He laughs in kind, his chuckle causing electricity to dance in the air as he spreads himself around the stage, engulfing them both in a sheet of flickering sparks, shining like short-lived stars around them as they spin in time with the warm melody that is November's perfect selection.

It might be their first dance, but as you watch your beloved artists lose themselves in the moment, and in each other…

…you resolve that Alpha won’t make it their last.

Looking around the room, your eyes alight on every person that's here for the simple fact that what you stand for is something they're willing to fight for, to lay down their life to see come to pass. Alpha. The Cord. The Ascent...and then?

'What comes after' - it's a frightening thought, that intimidating unknown. Neither you nor anyone else in this room knows what tomorrow will bring, what the future holds...but you fight for past, present, future, all the same. Dorian and Julia, they fight of you, for Amara, for each other. Amara fights for the family she never had, while November fights for the family she thought she'd lost, even as Rath fights to carve her own path, regardless of the family she once knew. Gina's fighting every day to be a person worthy of what she has, as Francine fights just as hard to be so different from the person she feared she was.

The Midnight Crew fight to keep the second chance they were granted at Earth's end, while the Barbers live every day to the fullest, content with that they've found...even your Dream Daughters fight, brought together through the strangest of means, they're friends that've formed the strongest of bonds.

As for you?

You fight to give them the chance to find their own futures, them and everyone who never asked for the world that's been thrust upon them. Alpha, the Cord, the Crucible itself? They'd stand in the way of the future your friends and family deserve.

As the artists' dance winds to a close, and you join the room in rapturous applause, you realize that though you may not know what tomorrow brings, you're certain of one simple truth.

Whatever stands in the way of your family's happiness won't stay standing for long.

>>Forty-First Vein: Closed
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(Gentlemen, thank you all for your continued patience, participation, and enthusiasm. The 42ndVein is set to open on April 21st, at 9:30AM Eastern time, and while the 41stdealt with a little prep-work and leveling, Orwell will have new and updated information for you to allow for a well-planned attack. The next Vein is set to move swiftly, and given how vast a confrontation it will surely prove to be, I’ll be taking the next week to rest and ensure I have a firm grip on both personal and professional matters before I dive into the fight alongside you. I’ll of course be keeping an eye on this Vein going forward, and there’s even a *slight* chance that I’ll do a little side-story, just to keep my writing flowing, but we shall see.)

(I wish you a good day and a pleasant weekend, one and all. Keep writing, keep creating, and I’ll be here if you need me.)
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and wait a second.... cobalt fur..... wasnt that something Ivey had for her team?

........ was that something Julia picked up together with the leather jacket?

>>4187741
Have a nice weekend OP

I will go to bed as well though i do want to share how my Selene drawing looks now...... and i just noticed i will have to still paint her lips together with her clothes.... great the two things i am worst at.....
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This has been a wonderful Vein Bhop. And quite a relaxed vein among such "interesting times" in the world.

I'll archive it as usual. And I think I've got a good description ready for the thread. After I'm done writing, editing, and making finishing touches on Chapter 4 of Carter and the Town of Cradleton before publishing it.
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>>4187726
ah, glad to see Rath was justing giving her a lost gift again. technically, an even more unnecessary one, considering they probably just made Isabelles new shell without the mouth she dislikes, but still, obviously, its the thought that counts.

>>4187736
godamn was this a beautiful end to the Vein BHOP. seriously, fucking felt like reading a work of art, if that makes sense. damn good wrap up for damn good sure.

>>4187741
gah, and the dreaded week haitus. I understand, truly, but will never deny the wait sucks aswell.

well, like you said, i understand. get everything in order BHOP. i know we'll need Relics and other Sheets all in order alike to do this properly on our end, and i wish you a wonderful weekend, and following week, though obviously ill be around for all that aswell. 42nds gonna be a fucking hell of a doozy though, and the wait wont do my nerves on that much good.

no pressure on that side story BHOP, but hey, if you do find the time, looking forward to it. thanks as always for running, and looking forward to the next one.
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>>4187755
I'd give this thread about another 4 days or so before it completely falls off the board as it's already on page 5.
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>>4187736
Aww, that was really cute. Julia and Dorian having a special dance, and Rath trying to mend bridges with Isabel. So sweet. I wonder if the veil that Rath made is different from the old one? Shell-B'Ni probably doesn't have the fang mouth like flesh-B'Ni did, so the exact same wouldn't really be appropriate.

>>4187741
Thanks for running, BHOP. See you on the 21st. I look forward to what you have for us, and I hope you face no problems with your personal issues.

>>4187750
>and wait a second.... cobalt fur..... wasnt that something Ivey had for her team?
Oh, yeah, Julia definitely copied it from Ivey. Those biker girls were good for her.
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>>4187784
Could've sworn it was described as blue even before she met them?
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>>4187803
I don't think so. I'm looking back and I'm not finding any mentions of its particular color at all, just that it's pale. Could be meant to indicate it's white fur, could be it's just a light hue.
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>>4187816
Hrm, never got the impression it was white myself. For some reason i always thought blue honestly. Maybe it had a scene with Dorians lightning that got the image in my head or something.
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Well the loss of the empathic field is still kind of sore for me for a couple of reasons at the moment but I guess there's no point dwelling on it anymore.

At level 19, will Shu be able to make a Queen Chitinous Stalwart and pilot it like a mech then?

I made a doc where I put some Daughter concepts and intend to update from time to time. Unlike my previous character concepts, those only have two paragraphs introducing them and then their core ability or hybrid which is usually two paragraphs as well... mostly (damn it Letitia). There are four right now and I'm fine with anyone making use or taking inspiration from them for anything. Hope you like it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sGpsgXlk3t5Ovecdsk_kQx7cFMNRh29PaLgrdzPiXYg/edit?usp=sharing

Have a doggo.
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>>4187945
having a sore spot over something in the quests just about an initiation at this point, so welcome past the last hurtle for better or worse.

Vanilla is an interesting idea. reminds me of Mother Bubbles, but moreso for anyone over just kids. her swords certainly at its core a very neat idea, though unsure of how i feel about the balance of it.

Letitia and the traveling circus is an interesting idea, but also feels just a bit odd to me. guess the thought is, the Crucible is so weird and allows everyone to be so weird, i just cant see anyone really being impressed by a circus, cant really see it working honestly. her core is an interesting idea, she reminds me of a shoggoth-bat for sure. did feel a bit heavy how far each form went though, but the heavy caveats to change is a nice touch.

Steph ill admit doesn't feel like anything special, and both my dislike of copy-cat abilities and, well, the nature of them, doesn't really help her image in that department at all.

Sally unsure what to say honestly. something about it feels a bit out of place for the Crucible to me i guess. dont like her ability at all though, not at all. way too broken, way way too broken, given the context and setting of the game.
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>>4188025
The abilities aren't necessary at level 1. Progression is something I'm still working at so I almost never say how strong they are exactly unless they're maxed out. I'm actually revisiting the Pale Harvest ability from the Claire doc to get a handle of it, adding stat increase as well. The ability docs for some of the Europe team stories have inspired me so I want to do something like that.

Sally is a bit of a puzzle enemy. Figuring out what her ability does is the way to success, as you learn to not use debuffs and the like against her and stick to straightforward attacks that mainly just deal damage without any other effects (at least on the enemy, as you can still buff yourself without worry), or even better: find a way to apply buffs or healing on her to bring her down, as there are almost no other abilities or skills that can defend against that if exploited.
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>>4188050
I get they're more in general and not level one, so im taking that into account.

And no, i just still disagree heavily on Sallys ability. The way the meta as it is is setup, her ability just as a concept is way too horribly imbalanced in my opinion.
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>>4187945
>At level 19, will Shu be able to make a Queen Chitinous Stalwart and pilot it like a mech then?
Kind of? There's an unlisted mechanic where turning a swarmling into platelings gives the resulting Stalwart attributes of the swarmling class, like Rook armor being more durable. So turning a Queen into platelings should give us the biggest bonus. Though that would also be way more Bio liberated from the Queen's transformation than we'd need for platelings, we'd have to figure out something to do with the other 600% Bio. A bunch of Rooks, maybe.

>I made a doc where I put some Daughter concepts and intend to update from time to time. Unlike my previous character concepts, those only have two paragraphs introducing them and then their core ability or hybrid which is usually two paragraphs as well... mostly (damn it Letitia). There are four right now and I'm fine with anyone making use or taking inspiration from them for anything. Hope you like it.
My favorite is Letitia. Traveling performers are a really fun idea for the fleshscape, you could go creepy or friendly equally well. Poor kid getting such a spooky monster form, though. At least she looks cool, even if she's typecast as villain roles.

I agree that Sally's ability is kind of weird. It's not unprecedented, we do have similar things like how trying to slow Dorian down just makes him speed up, but I'm not sure on having it be the entire basis of a skill. Feels like the sort of thing that is either incredibly powerful or absolutely useless depending on the opponent, with very little middle ground. I'm not really sure how you'd balance something like that. I do very much like the idea of her Corruption making her Comic Book Pretty in an uncanny valley sort of way, though, that's clever.

Also, this is reminding me that I've got a 95% complete write-up of a Daughter sitting on my drive that I need to finish. That's been there for like a week now. I should go work on that.
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>>4188337
Sally is a concept in the end, and I used her to explore a bit of what happens when the usual mechanics of the Crucible get turned on their head. I'd say leveling up would see her do stuff like turn damage types she deals out and receives into another like HEAT into COLD, turns failures on Death's Door into successes and vice versa, and identify enemies as allies (and vice versa) which would make it easier to deal out her reverse buffs but also leave her more open to receive them, effectively making the fight straightforward again but with the difference that the fighters are trying to kill each other with kindness. It wouldn't grow in power, but in complexity instead as you have to keep track of what does what now on her and not get tripped up. Every new strength technically comes with a new weakness rather than being a straight powerup.

But I guess that's hard to balance that. It's why I didn't bother making resistances and immunities inversed since there's few to no extra vulnerability mechanics to also reverse and turn into a strength, so in practice it would just nullify all defenses on herself and who she's fighting. It wouldn't be like a pokemon inversion battle where super effective becomes not very effective (and vice versa).

Maybe I should've called the ability Vice Versa?
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>>4187741

>Dinner and Downtime before the Big Raid. Shu hosts a body horror fashion show, and God itself talks to Shu asking why she got brain surgery.

>41st Vein Archived.

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive/4168332/

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>>4187750
Chapter 4 for Carter and the town of Cradleton is almost done. I've got about one more scene to fill out before I enter my review process and tidy up the document with pictures. After that, I'll post the link to the doc for all of you to enjoy.
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>>4187750
(I did have a good weekend, and I hopes your went well, also.)

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>>4189387
(I'm so glad you've enjoyed it, and thank you again for archiving! Also, I'm very much so looking forward to your next installment.)

>>4187755
(I'm really glad you enjoyed the wrap-up. I was completely stumped as to what to do, and then it just hit me with the ending train of thought. The beginnings and endings of the Veins are always so hard to write, I've found.)

>>4187945
(Ah, I look forward to diving into this shortly, and thank you for sharing!)
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It went well at first (Pic related)
and then..... well i have to say drawing wings that dont look like I broke Minas Arms is more of a challenge than i thought.
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>>4193413
>>4188807
>>4188337
>>4188077

Gentlemen, the latest installment of "Carter and the Town of Cradleton" has been finished. Here is the link.

Chapter 4: Naked and Afraid.

Chapter synopsis: Things go downhill. No, I won't tell you how shit hit the fan.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1obMxpr-i4iUKHNhzUjvfvvYKIVtscjMY/edit#

Author's Notes: There are links to youtube videos that provide musical ambiance that fit the mood on certain sections of the story. For best reading pleasure, please play them when you reach to a word with a hyperlink.

This was more pages than what I expected for a single Chapter. I knew it would be longer than Chapter 3, but I didn't the true extent.

For any discussion, questions, and feedback about this chapter and future chapters: Please post them under spoilers.

Enjoy.
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>>4194100
Not gonna lie, probably needed another read-over. Some wording was iffy for your usual standard, and one or two places you more or less repeated yourself. you also fell into the issue of swapping between first and third person a few times too.
Not unreadable, didn’t ruin it, but again, especially compared to your usual level of quality it was much more noticeable. But moving on however…

The first third-ish was a bit slow(up until the joke mentioned), not terrible, but still feels like it could maybe have somehow been skimmed down juuust slightly. Still had some good moments though, and the bathroom joke was amusing, and then turned horrifyingly inappropriate.

By god that one relic should not exist. Horrifying.

Will say Carter using the Mantis body as a signal for her total stats was… just really out of order. The Crucible just makes it so clear things like that have no bearing on actual Health and Biomass stats, and he himself is even without a doubt an example of how those stats can be way higher than looks would make you think.

Geezus though Karey is a psychopath. Threatened Mantis lady over just being angry, then goes straight for cutting off the arm before she has even fully committed to the price or had a chance to pay up more traditionally.

Really honestly disagree with him taking the Relic. Bit too far i think, regardless of what it can do. Not a fan of that, just doesnt fit him to ignore what it actually is, regardless of anything else. Especially adding in on top of that the overall demeanor you had written him to have. Yeah, not a fan of that, last thing i want is Carter casually using something like that as a weapon.

Charlotte felt like she was going a bit far for her character going into a full fight, especially once it was revealed that she took Wendy as far as Death's Door. Think it doesn't help you made it seem like Wendy had regained control of herself, only for Charlotte to just start whaling on her. Try and corral her? Sure? But beat til death's door? Dunno, didn't feel like it fit the character as so far had been presented.


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>>4194345
Fuji is… something. But I think the basis for her is just wrong. The Crucible couldn't really exist at all if it cared about blood types. It's an issue that really feels like it goes way too against the grain of what we have seen and would be necessary for its existence. Otherwise, the word ‘gross’ is all I can think to describe her. She also will be a very disappointed customer. Or well, assuming Carter even had any say in anything if it got that far. As said before, so it shall be said again; Carter, don't get caught. I will say overall it was an oddly amusing scene. A guttural, disgusting scene, but amusing. Girl needs some Tums, or something.

Some of Carter's lines do feel like they could use some… flair. Sometimes he feels a bit too much like a kid for how he presents himself, albeit im talking in more the scenes he's not horribly out of his element, of course.

Yeah, see. I really wish you would not have done that relic. Instantly ruins all mental images and feel of him and any serious scene to have him have that, saps my enjoyment of it just having to see him try and be himself they have… that, even just on his person.

Carter literally hiding in a box as… ok it got me. Actually pretty clever. So ordinary they might naturally overlook it, even if it is technically odd to see in the crucible. Though, that being said, biomass and goods still exist, so im sure flesh-cardboard boxes exist, or something.

Overall, didn't enjoy it at all as much as the last chapter. Not terrible, but didn’t at all hit the mark for me. Too many things that just felt off i really didn't like at all, though oddly not the things as expected.

Also Carter. Seriously. Let that be a lesson. Dont listen to merchants who cut first and ask for permission never.


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>>4193422
She's very pointy. I like it.

>>4194100
I like Wendy. Feels like she'd be a good gym buddy. Kind of a meathead, but a nice gal. Way too forward for Carter, though. There's nothing in this town that's good for his hang-ups.

Of course Australia went full deathworld. Why wouldn't it? Oh god, there are probably stinging gympie Amalgams, aren't there?

Aww, Carter expressing his own insecurities about his masculinity when asked to describe his ideal man, that's kind of sad.

And Wendy imagines a huge musclebro, because she's a huge musclegal and that's what gets her going. Nice.

Oh my, that's a serious invasion of personal space there, Wendy. No, why did you have to do that, I liked you. Now you're all molest-y.

Oh, hey, Karey. I remember that character concept, she was fun. Nice to see her in a story. Please don't try to sell Carter a Saints Row-esque dildo bat, though. Please don't adopt this as an actual weapon, Carter, no matter how much she tells you you're suited for it.

Man, Carter, you are being way too forceful in your denial of being male, it's going to get you found out. You're lucky you have Jedi Mind Tricks, otherwise nobody would fall for that.

Oh, god damn it, she did give him the dildo bat. Great, just great. Carter, ditch that immediately. The hint is interesting, though. I'm guessing some sort of symbolic destruction of a Daughter's past to save them from how they're tied to it, but it might be more literal.

And Charlotte beat up Wendy and made her behave. Good. I don't want you to have to die, Wendy, you're cool.

Ooh, it's the rotten girl! Yes, you went with that suggestion, fantastic. She is exactly as gross as I was hoping for, in every way. Why do we delight so much in making Carter deeply uncomfortable?

And Carter is having to use the dildo bat after all. Oh no. This is just a really unfortunate weapon for him to use, I hope he gets to exchange it for something a bit less tasteless that doesn't trigger his issues as much. I'm not too offended by the thing, I just want Carter to not have to deal with it.

Oh. Of course the cult leader is Kiara Sessyoin. Yeah, that makes too much sense. She even named her base Heaven's Hole. Ugh.
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Thank you for your feed back. I'll separate some of the specific responses according to the specific post. And forgive the bamboozle.

>>4194346
>>4194345
I will concede on several points on your criticisms.

Chapter 4 as a whole got to me due to the sheer length that I found myself having to type out certain events and I was more or less in a rush to push it out and be done with it.

Carter's behavior: Honestly I was slipping in and out in trying to figure out part of the situation falls into his comfort zone and what brings him to the gray area of "Not sure if I want." That, and figuring out which part of his mind has matured into an adult mindset and which part of him stayed immature like a child. The philosophical question of what Carter's ideal vision of a man was the hard part because there was so many things that I felt like I could get wrong.

Karey's market transactions with Michelle the Mantis nun. I get that it's confusing, but I wanted to try out an in-universe terminology for the whole Crucible HP/Bio stats. As for Karey lopping off Michelle's Abdomen (not her arm claw), and having it count as 500% Bio or "50-pounds of Bug Meat", I wasn't sure how to convey the idea that Michelle's bio levels aren't high enough, which caused her to balk at the price. And for the record, all transactions with Karey when paying her price is having the daughter who purchased a good from Karey suffer the same hp/bio debuff as forging a relic. Hence why Michelle balked at the 500% bio price. The issue that I find now is that I didn't really manage to convey the sense the justification of how serious making a purchase from Karey can be.

Fuji and the whole blood type rejection: I know it's a huge stretch for the Crucible to make an exception for Fuji when everyone else could hot-swap humoral paladin powers without a problem, but it felt like it fit her character.

I do have a question for you however: Are you okay with the IGNORANT SUGGESTION Technique I made up for Carter? I was running on the half assumption that Carter managed to level up and gain new techniques/augmentations from the solo-play system of body horror quest, and tried to stretch overshadowed presence's descriptions from what you gave me on his character sheet.

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>>4194358

I couldn't resist choosing her as the cult leader image. Honestly, she felt like a picture perfect fit for a setting such as Body Horror quest. Something divine, sexy, yet evil enough that her near perfect human figure would come off as unsettling and eldritch in comparison to the common mutated gristle, was what I was trying to go for as the cult leader, and she checked off all the boxes.

Yeah. I went with making Fuji. Thank you for the idea, she was sorta fun to make. You like her?


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First off. The Relic. yeah. I wanted to include it as a joke and as a one-off thing due to the setting of Cradleton. After hearing your feedback, I'll be sure to scrub that thing off future chapters. It was originally planned to be discarded anyways, but I figured that it might as well be put to use in a few select situations in this chapter before I finally can it. I'm terribly sorry for having the dumb and horrible mind to come up with that relic.
I just wanted to get that immaturity out of the my mind because it felt too good to pass up on at the time and I couldn't help but laugh at the idea.
Yeah. I know it's completely undignified for him to use it, and I'm very sorry about that.

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>>4194358


Charlotte pummeling Wendy to Death's Door: Yeah, those two are the sort who can get away with that kind of viaholic even though it feels a bit too extreme. Charlotte had to make sure due the message was sent and received on Wendy's Death's door because she's that tough of a girl due to where she hailed from. That and wendy

Fuji: The Fujoshi wordplay "rotten woman" was creative, and I had a picture that would fit such a character so I went with it. And honestly, it wouldn't be the full experience unless Carter actually found out that there's a demographic of women who actually get off from that sort of pairing. Fuji's corpse explosion and the frequent habit of barfing blood was something I came up on the spot as I had to come up with an event that would trigger the next plot point for Carter.

Karey: To formally a concept character that I introduced about a dozen veins ago, Karey was a character that I wanted to apply the mysterious/shady/helpful merchant archetype in the Crucible. She can get you the goods and hints you desire, but she sets the price point and leaves no room nor tempramental tolerance for additional negotiations unless you somehow manage to impress her.
I felt like she would make a really good random encounter for Carter while acting as a setup for subtly aiding Carter in preparation of future chapters. As for her crazy personality when she threatened Michelle with the cleaver. Keep in mind that Michelle already knew about Karey beforehand made the first transaction but overstepped her bounds and made Karey angry, while Carter was completely new and declared he was window-shopping (meaning he was still on the fence about making a transaction and thus free game for Karey to push for a sale) and was still in Karey's good graces (his Jedi Mind trick allowed Karey to give him a hint that will help him throughout the Cradleton experience and a free relic of Karey's choosing.) Yes I'm sorry that she sold Carter "that Relic".

Michelle: Couldn't resist the idea of a praying Mantis daughter that served the pun in all senses of the term. You'll see more of her later.

Wendy: She's basically Charlotte's Foil, as well as the Betty to Charlotte's Veronica. Or the other way around from certain perspectives. She and Charlotte tend to get along together even if they disagree on certain things. Like Men. Yeah, I still haven't figured out the overall animal archetype for Wendy's Unnatural Predator Core.

Any other feedback on the characters or other story elements introduced so far?

I will admit some of my writing has gotten away from me and a tad into the silly/"dude not funny" parts. I do deeply apologize about that.

I just hope I can put the other chapters back on track and into quality writing as I'm now concerned of the elements in future chapters will make you greatly disapprove of my work that my license will be revoked.


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>>4194424
well, on the Biomass cost, i guess i get what you kinda wanted to go for, but the issue was still that physical indicators simply dont translate to actual Biomass and Health maxes or costs. so even with the yes overlooked caveat to Kareys transactions, doesn't really solve the issue im talking about.

as for Fujis blood, id honestly suggest just changing it to being HER ability that affects things. we have seen things like that before, and while being anemic i dont think is a good excuse, i could see a specific core doing that.

as for ignorant suggestion and whatnot, no real problems. would have to be an augment, due to his core now being with the Spiders, but as a concept for him to have, no, no issue. ill be adding new and introduced abilities and augments to his sheet in a new section as some point, to help folks keep track of it.


>>4194427
the relic was a bit much yeah.

>>4194436
nothing else i can think to say, besides dont try and rush it or push it next time i suppose. never ends up being anyones best work if you do that. sucks for things to take longer, but, sucks for it to cause issues aswell.
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>>4194454

>as for Fujis blood, id honestly suggest just changing it to being HER ability that affects things. we have seen things like that before, and while being anemic i dont think is a good excuse, i could see a specific core doing that.

I'll keep that in mind. It'll probably be an augment or part of her vitruvian core that causes her instability and tendency to explode like a sensitive bomb then. I have half a mind to take the time to flesh out all the stat sheets for some of the main cast, but it'll be hard for me to keep it close to canon mechanics.

>as for ignorant suggestion and whatnot, no real problems. would have to be an augment, due to his core now being with the Spiders, but as a concept for him to have, no, no issue. ill be adding new and introduced abilities and augments to his sheet in a new section as some point, to help folks keep track of it.

I'm glad to see that you have no real issues with it. However, I was originally under the impression that Overshadowed presence was Carter's Original Core he was born with in the Crucible and the Mindful Spiders was a powerset that he picked up as a secondary.

My original impression of Carter was that of a traveling loner who would get by with his silver tongue, his overshadowed presence and subterfuge and tendency to sneak and stalk with his spiders acting as support units that he slowly came to call his friends instead of Carter having a Hive Mistress Core as his birth ability.

And I think I just realized that Overshadowed Presence is a sub-component ability of the Mindful Spider triple hybrid...well shoot. If Mindful Spiders is Carter's Triple Hybrid, with Neurogateway and Overshadowed Presence as his subcomponent, then what's the spider hive mistress component?

And for Ignorant suggestion's mechanics, the idea behind it that I wanted Carter to have a technique/augment that allowed him to treat a target's accumulated IGNORANCE like a Flesh Artisan Stack debuff and spend those stacks like currency to impart suggestions to a target as a concentrated action before the Amnesia effect that makes his targets forget his existence/identity kicks in. Something that allows him to weaponize and proactively use the accumulated Ignorance in people to his advantage instead of making him slowly fade into the background like a growing stealth field, which felt boring to me. Or something to that effect. Hence why Karey was impressed that it allowed Carter to turn focus a power that's passive in function and have it actively affect people like a Jedi Mind trick.

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>>4194511
oh, Overshadowed is his core as his sheet says, he just hybridized it into his spiders once he had gotten it pretty far along and saw the fruits of his Hive Hybrids limits.

Gateway Override is still by itself, not part of the Spiders.

the Spiders are a combo of a base Spider Hive Mistress ability he got semi-early in his journey, and quickly too mixed with a Neuromancy ability based around mental and sensory enhancements. he eventually added in his core to them once he saw just how far the potential for them to become individuals was in exchange for them not gaining specific forms unlike more Hive Mistresses, but because of that and their ability to learn, they are and have the potential to beat out even high end Constructs of other hive Mistresses, and can get some pretty peculiar benefits if they last long enough. if it hadn't been for the Augment though, the Jumping Spiders would've been pretty stock standard for a Hive Mistress ability, just, you know, spiders instead of bees or leeches.

as for Ignorance, ehh, i was under the impression he was just having to use old fashion words to help the process along due to Michelle being stubborn or having a bit of resistance to it, over actively spending Ignorance to force a change. personally would prefer that, or something more active or forceful like your talking about. YOU may find it boring, but Carter would prefer it to just be that, as he is more than fine with it being boring and just disappearing. if its doing that, its doing its job, and it doesn't need to be more complicated than that. i mean, its already supposed to be an aura so strong even in combat his opponent can forget about him with enough time, so not sure he needs it to be more complicated than that.
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>>4194561

>as for Ignorance, ehh, i was under the impression he was just having to use old fashion words to help the process along due to Michelle being stubborn or having a bit of resistance to it, over actively spending Ignorance to force a change. personally would prefer that, or something more active or forceful like your talking about. YOU may find it boring, but Carter would prefer it to just be that, as he is more than fine with it being boring and just disappearing. if its doing that, its doing its job, and it doesn't need to be more complicated than that. i mean, its already supposed to be an aura so strong even in combat his opponent can forget about him with enough time, so not sure he needs it to be more complicated than that.

Oh. I thought you needed an augment to add to Carter's Character sheet in order to add the Ignorant Suggestion technique and make it part of his abilities. Hence my flip flopping on my stance on Ignorant suggestion.
Sorry for the confusion.
So yeah, it still stands that Carter's technique Ignorant Suggestion is a simple technique that he can get away by using just his wits, words, subtle shifts in his aura instead of using the Crucible augmentation system.

I wonder what else I can do when to creatively stretch Overshadowed presence. I was hesitant on the creative use of the aura (Jedi Mind Trick) at first, but now that I have your approval, I think you will find Carter getting into his more natural element of sneaking, subterfuge, and infiltration that I imagined him to specialize in in conjunction with his Mindful Spider support friends as I will try and stretch the creative limits of what his original core can do. I was originally hesitant on putting Carter into combat scenarios but now I feel like I'm getting a bit more confident into throwing him into a fight. This may warrant some changes in the course of events in future chapters.
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>>4194571
well to be fair on combat, i never imagined he couldn't handle it or hadn't been in tough fights. Hence him having the muscle enhancers mentioned and things like the ribs, because he knows he can avoid every fight. plus, like i said, his spiders arent supposed to be pushovers, even despite their cute nature.

what is so far shown on his sheet and how i do everyone is just supposed to be their 'core abilities' to understand their character overall, not necessarily everything they have. hence me saying he has other things and having said and saying again not being against people adding some stuff to his kit as it was, and of course, being up for people asking questions about him.

also, if we did make Ignorant Suggestion an augment(which i never said i was technically against, only discussing on what i thought and kinda may prefer for it to work and actually be doing), his Spiders would have access to it. just something to keep in mind, both if you want to do that, or if his Spiders having it is something you would prefer not to be a thing, in how we go about that.
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>>4194100
Alright i dont really have anything to add from a writers point of view except what that other anon already said.

So dont be afraid to push something back a week or longer if it could need more polish in yopur opinion.

I like the artwork for the corpse explosion. Slay the Spire is a neat game

The chapter was alright otherwise.I have definitely read worse... from professional authors no less.

And Carter should invest into some relic clothing for the future...... Then he wouldn't have any problems with getting exposed.

He could even make it have a memetic effect that anyone who forces him to strip only sees girl bits down there. Unless he takes it off voluntarily
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>>4194100
also, added two of the mentioned Abilities to Carters sheet in a new section, so both feel free to tell me what you think, and of course use them as you see fit.

i was gonna let you write up the actual entry for his Cores Augment, if you wanted, unless you dont feel comfortable doing that, or want to shift what it actually is, but regardless at least know im fine with you writing it yourself as you introduced it.
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>>4195027
I'll write down the entry. I feel comfortable writing it down.
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>>4195032
also, it just hit me just how heavily the cult and his part in it contrasts exactly opposite of what he wants for himself, and with nothing to do with the lewdness specifically either.

im thinking this whole day for him, from meeting Luna to Cradleton, might be one he skips logging in his adventure journal... that, or it gets twice the detail, if only to serve as a self warning, not sure which.
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>>4195173
I will say this, the entire Cradleton experience will be a very memorable one for him. It's probably going to be the equivalent of the back-to-back events of relentlessness starting from Shu's fight with Spiraling Fear to suddenly killing Demigod Isabelle, except with probably less ass pulls. Maybe. I'll need to tread carefully with my words. But I do intend on having Carter finish that trip on a high note as to not completely scare him off on his outlook with the opposite sex.
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>TFW I'm having to write up the entire history and backstory for an amalgam to explain how they somehow avoided the attention of Mara and Magpie in order to grow into such a late-game monster that still lives to this day in canon timeline.

Sometimes I feel like this quest is less Body Horror Quest and more Dwarf Fortress.



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