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You are Raishō Naori, descendent of the Uzumaki clan and the newest member of the shadowy “Akatsuki” mercenary organization. At the moment you’re arranging a mission on behalf of Akatsuki for the hidden village Kusagakure, which has apparently been in a state of low-intensity civil war for generations.

The object of disagreement is called the “Box of Paradise”, which apparently has the power to make wishes come true. It was that power which helped Kusagakure conquer a sizeable chunk of the world many centuries ago, if the legends about it are true. One faction wants to use the Box to re-conquer the world, and the other faction wants… well, not that. It’s the latter faction which has sought Akatsuki’s help in getting rid of the Box of Paradise once and for all, presumably in order to end the more militant factions wilder dreams of supremacy.

Ryūzetsu, a dusky-skinned and pale-haired young woman in the Kusagakure ANBU, is your contact here. She seems to have a personal stake in this battle, and will serve as your guide when you go and retrieve the box from underneath the prison at Hozuki castle. But in order to make sure this works, there’s one piece of information that she really ought to know before you get started.

“My summoning contract is with an excellent clan, who have instructed me in the Sage arts,” you admit.

There’s a prolonged pause as Ryūzetsu processes that statement. You’ve just told her something that has a history of not fully registering with people, as it’s something of an outrageous claim.

“You’re a sage now?” Ryūzetsu’s eyes widen slightly. “I’ve heard of that technique, but I have no idea what it means in practical terms. I wasn’t even aware there were any living sages.”

“There’s one other that I know of,” you reply. “Jiraiya of the Sannin learned it from the Toads of Mount Myōboku, while I learned it from the Shrike clan.”

“What does it do?”

“It enhances everything,” you tell her. “Speed, strength, ninjutsu, genjutsu. I’m still a beginner though, so if I end up having to use it I’ll need you to help give me time to gather enough energy for it.”

“How long?”

“Three minutes,” you explain. “So unless I plan to go in already in Sage Mode it’d be a real pain to try and use it in battle. So either you’ll see me use it, or I’d rather you know about it before it comes up as a problem.”

Ryūzetsu nods in understanding. “I follow you.”

“Anything else?” you ask her.

She frowns. “There’s one more caveat...”
>1/3
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>>4104535
“I see,” you muse quietly. That certainly does present something of a dilemma, doesn’t it?

You flag down a hostess, dressed in a rather skimpy-looking outfit with way more frills than you’d be comfortable with wearing, and she comes over to your already rather out-of-the-way table.

“What can I do for you, Mistresses?” she asks, using the cutesy-submissive turns of phrase that tend to be popular in establishments like the one you asked Ryūzetsu to meet you in.

“A private room, please?” you request, flashing the appropriate amount of cash. “And a bottle of something nice.”

“Of course, Mistresses!” the young woman replies cheerfully… dutifully, no further questions are asked.

“Really?” Ryūzetsu asks with a raised eyebrow.

“I’m about to do something weird,” you admit.

Your fellow kunoichi leans back slightly, feigning discomfort. “Should I be concerned?”

“Maybe,” you shrug. “I think you’ll understand when you see it.”



“So that’s the size of it,” you sigh, seated as you are atop the table in your private room while Ryūzetsu sips sake somewhere. You can’t tell where exactly, your eyes are closed so that you can talk to the rest of Akatsuki, or at least the ones who are available right now.

“This box thing sounds like bad news, and the Grass Flower faction wants us to avoid anything that might lead to a prison break.”

“Well that’s no fun,” Kisame shrugs, clearly disappointed.

“Sorry to hear you say that,” you muse, “I was counting on your help on this one.”

There’s a long, dramatic pause. “You’re not joking, are you?”
>2/3
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>>4104540
“I think I understand,” Itachi-han offers. “By leaking information to Kusagakure that Akatsuki intends to rescue a prisoner to recruit them, we would force Kusagakure to seek outside assistance to prevent that from happening.”

“Probably jōnin from Konoha or Suna,” you continue the thought. “Since we have to figure the Grass Fruit already know about Amegakure’s alliance with the Grass Flower.”

“If Kisame and I fight those jōnin there would be chaos in the prison yard, especially once Kisame and Samehada got any momentum,” Itachi concludes. “It would be a perfect distraction, and would offer a plausible reason why we would not simply crush the castle’s defenders.”



“So that’s the price,” you tell Ryūzetsu, handing her a small sheet of paper with the figure written on it.

She stares at it for a moment. “That’s not a lot.”

“That’s how we operate,” you counter.

>I’d like to do some aerial recon work, if that’s acceptable.
>My summoning clan may know something about the Box.
>Are there any physical records I might be able to consult?
>Other?
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>>4104541
>>I’d like to do some aerial recon work, if that’s acceptable.
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>>4104541
I’d like to do some aerial recon work, if that’s acceptable.
>My summoning clan may know something about the Box.
Both are possible
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>>4104541
>I’d like to do some aerial recon work, if that’s acceptable.
>My summoning clan may know something about the Box.
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>>4104541
>I’d like to do some aerial recon work, if that’s acceptable.
>My summoning clan may know something about the Box.
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>>4104541
>I’d like to do some aerial recon work, if that’s acceptable.
>My summoning clan may know something about the Box.
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>>4104541
>>Are there any physical records I might be able to consult?
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>>4104541
“Speaking of which,” you continue, “I’d like to do some fly-overs of the castle in the next couple of days. Would that be okay?”

“Depends on the altitude,” Ryūzetsu replies, cradling chin in hand as she considers the variables. “Could you do it at night?”

“That would work,” you agree.

“Then I see no reason why that wouldn’t work to our advantage,” she agrees. “You’re waiting for backup?”

You nod curtly. “This will take some time to go into motion.”



The next night you summon Nyoka to you in an isolated clearing some distance from Hozuki castle, which should let you get airborne and land without being spotted.

“This is your summons?” Ryūzetsu wonders aloud at Nyoka’s magnificent, and probably much larger than expected, form.

“This one appreciates your admiration,” Nyoka replies teasingly, “but knows she must not let it go to her head. So it would also be appreciated if you were to collect yourself.”

“Right,” Ryūzetsu nods curtly. “I’ll stay here to monitor the clearing until you can return. Remember… keep above the altitude we discussed.”

Once atop Nyoka’s back and in the air, you feel the chill as your partner begins to thicken the cloud cover so that she can dart back and forth between cover, giving you brief but clear windows on the castle below with minimum risk of detection. To make best use of these openings, you form the seal of confrontation.

“Unseal: Sharingan!”

Using the visual prowess of the sharingan in your left eye, you’re able to get a better view of Hozuki castle even in the dark and at this altitude. You make careful note of the layout, of the comings and goings of guards to establish their patrols, the locations of towers and their fields of fire into the castle’s grounds.

“Why is it that we are surveying the Land of Grass, Naori-san?”

The question comes as you find yourselves slowly gliding back towards the clearing, the wind now less loud in your ears so your partner needs not call out to you to make herself heard.

“There’s something under that castle called the “Box of Paradise” that we’re going to steal,” you explain.

“The Box of Paradise, you say?” she replies as she lands gracefully in the clearing and allows you to leap down. “This one knows of it… if Kusagakure still has it after all these years, it is good that you intend to do something about it.”
>1/2
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>>4105740
“You know what the Box is?” Ryūzetsu asks, plainly astonished almost to the point of defensiveness. “How can that be?”

“This one may seem lively as a hatchling, but she has lived long and heard much,” Nyoka replies. “Tell me, young one, what do you believe the Box to be?”

“In Kusagakure, people believe it can grant wishes,” Ryūzetsu replies with a sudden frown. “At least, that’s what Mui and the others have believed while trying to open it.”

“That, young one, is utter nonsense,” Nyoka asserts bluntly. “The Box of Paradise contains nothing more than the yōkai known as Satori.”

“Satori,” you mutter. “Nyoka-han, do you mean to refer to kenshō?”

“Indeed, Naori-san,” Nyoka-han replies, pleased that you’re familiar with the concept already. “The yōkai of the Box possesses only one power, and that is to incite and then draw upon the worst aspects of human nature.”

“The Sage of Six Paths was the only one able to suppress both his fear and his bloodlust completely to face Satori, and it is said among our clan that he was able to bind the yōkai into the Box using in’yōton.”

“In’yō...” you repeat. “Yin and yang transformation at the same time?”

Nyoka-han inclines her head. “That is what this one has heard. It is a very old story though, so perhaps some details have been lost in the telling… a copy of a copy of the original cannot help but be diminished in some places, embellished in others.”

>I’ll inform Akatsuki when the other members arrive… that makes this mission that much more important.
>This information stays between the three of us. The Box should disappear from human memory entirely.
>Akatsuki should know, but the Five Shinobi Nations should never know. They’d go from fearing it to wanting it.
>Other?
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>>4105741
>>This information stays between the three of us. The Box should disappear from human memory entirely.
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>>4105741
>>Akatsuki should know, but the Five Shinobi Nations should never know. They’d go from fearing it to wanting it.
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>>4105741
Let's keep it between us
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>>4105741
>Akatsuki should know, but the Five Shinobi Nations should never know. They’d go from fearing it to wanting it.
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>>4105741
>Akatsuki should know, but the Five Shinobi Nations should never know. They’d go from fearing it to wanting it.
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>>4105741
>>Akatsuki should know, but the Five Shinobi Nations should never know. They’d go from fearing it to wanting it.
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>>4105741
>Akatsuki should know, but the Five Shinobi Nations should never know. They’d go from fearing it to wanting it.
>The last thing we need is them trying to harness it like they have done in the past. They all allready have their Chakra beasts as "deterrents". They do not need more of them.

The irony is not lost to me. Akatsuki are even more likely to try harnesses it (if not now then when Pain kicks it and Obito kicks off 4th war) but we IC do not know that.
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>>4105741
>Akatsuki should know, but the Five Shinobi Nations should never know. They’d go from fearing it to wanting it.
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>>4105741
>>This information stays between the three of us. The Box should disappear from human memory entirely.
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>>4105741
>>Akatsuki should know, but the Five Shinobi Nations should never know. They’d go from fearing it to wanting it.
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>>4105741
When you meet with Itachi-han and Kisame-han two days later, it’s with two pieces of important news.

“Welcome to the show,” you greet them coolly in the woods not too far from the walls of Hozuki castle. “Things escalated since you’ve been en route.”

“How so?” Itachi-han asks you.

“And who’s the girl?” Kisame demands, watching Ryūzetsu cautiously.

“Local knowledge,” you explain. “She’ll be with me.”

“Then it’s a pleasure,” he backs off, his presence suddenly less imposing as his muscles relax slightly.

“Continue,” Itachi-han bids you.

You nod curtly. “We found out what’s in the Box from my summoning clan. Evidently it’s a genuine yōkai.”

“A yōkai?” Itachi repeats, surprised. “What sort?”

“I’m told it incites and feeds off of human fear and bloodlust,” you relay. “So it makes sense… the ancient Land of Grass psyched themselves up on yōkai until the Sage of Six Paths is said to have stepped in.”

“At very least I find the existence of this ‘Satori’ easier to accept than a magical wish-granting fairy box.”

“I don’t believe either of ‘em,” Kisame shrugs.

Itachi however seems more wary. “That’s a good way to end up eaten by a yōkai.”

“We’ll be careful.”

After a few moments you remember the next bit of news. “Oh yeah, Konohagakure sent some jōnin chasing after our ‘leak’, just as planned.”

“Who?” Itachi asks.

>1d6, taking the first two
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>>4106222
“You guys must have touched a nerve last time you were over there,” you muse. “They sent Team Guy and an ad-hoc team of mostly jōnin and tokujō.”

“Guy-sensei?” Itachi-han muses. “Did you recognize any of the other four?”

“Shizune and Shiranui Genma,” you tell him. “One guy with a chinbeard and a swordsman with what looks like a burn scar on his face.”

“Namiashi Raidō and Tatami Iwashi,” Itachi realizes. “Shizune-san and the Hokage Guard Platoon.”

Kisame seems impatient. “Is that supposed to mean something?”

“It means that we may be set up for a meeting with the Fifth Hokage. The Fourth taught them a special teleportation technique."

You let that sink in for a moment before your palm meats your face. “Awesome! What the hell did you do the last time you were there!?”

“I may have put Kakashi-san in the hospital, a little.”

“A little?”

Itachi-han nods curtly. “I suppose they just consider me that big of a threat that the hint of my being here is cause for this much concern.”

That… would be one hell of a complication.

>If you can’t make a clean breakaway, tell her about the Box. We may be able to strike a deal.
>If you can’t make a clean breakaway, I’ll come talk to her. She MAY give me the benefit of the doubt.
>Under no circumstances drop the act. The Five Great Nations cannot know about the Box.
>Other?
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>>4106240
>Under no circumstances drop the act. The Five Great Nations cannot know about the Box.
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>>4106240
>>Under no circumstances drop the act. The Five Great Nations cannot know about the Box.
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>>4106240
Under no circumstances
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>>4106240
>>If you can’t make a clean breakaway, I’ll come talk to her. She MAY give me the benefit of the doubt.
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>>4106240
>>If you can’t make a clean breakaway, I’ll come talk to her. She MAY give me the benefit of the doubt.
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>>4106240
>Under no circumstances drop the act. The Five Great Nations cannot know about the Box.
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>>4106240
>Give Itachi-han a very flat stare of scrutiny with the sharingan Itachi gave you.
>Under no circumstances drop the act. The Five Great Nations cannot know about the Box.
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>>4106485
Fuck off with your cringe write-ins dude.
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>>4106592
this
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>>4106240
>Under no circumstances drop the act. The Five Great Nations cannot know about the Box.

Let's not loose another WMD on the world.

Also, maybe let's not run around announcing ourselves as an Akatsuki member to people we know like Tsunade? Because unless we're going to pretend to be a missing nin, which is a charade that'd be a BITCH to maintain, it's going to bring a lot of unwanted attention on Ame.
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>>4106240
>Under no circumstances drop the act. The Five Great Nations cannot know about the Box.
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>>4106240
>Under no circumstances drop the act. The Five Great Nations cannot know about the Box.
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>>4106240
“Under no circumstance should you drop the act in front of Tsunade,” you demand flatly. “The Great Nations would just see a superweapon to use on each other.”

“You’re really not a fan, are you?” Kisame muses.

You roll your eyes. “Whatever gave you the impression?”

“In any event, the Box needs to stay shut.”

“Agreed,” Itachi-han mutters. “If it cannot be controlled, Akatsuki has no use for it anyway.”



That night, the plan goes into motion.

You and Ryūzetsu leave first, heading around the storm-lashed cliffs that Hozuki castle is built atop, surrounded on three sides by churning water and hard stone spires rising like spearpoints. Thankfully it’s not only dark but raining, allowing you to hide yourself in the rain so that you can scout for Ryūzetsu. It’s still remarkably easy going considering how this would probably be even for genin, let alone “normal” people.

Eventually you find yourself at the base of the wall just below the shirō, the original keep of the castle itself from before it was converted into a prison. Beyond that rise the actual prison blocks, which have grown to dwarf the castle itself by at least a dozen floors.

At the arranged time, Itachi and Kisame crash the gate.

You can see from the top of the wall that they’ve definitely done well in drawing the entire prison’s attention. Kisame has actually flooded the entire prison yard with about twelve feet of water, which is absolutely insane to think about. It also speaks well of the strength of the gates themselves that they can hold back that much water.

“It’s in the top floor of the castle,” Ryūzetsu informs you, and so you quickly vault between the levels of rooftop until you can enter the top floor through a window. Thankfully no one else is present, and so Ryūzetsu walks towards a bookcase in what looks to be the warden’s office.

She tilts a book with a blue cover back on the shelf, and the bookcase slides back slightly to swing freely like a door.

“Down here.”
>1/2
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>>4107189
Ryūzetsu leads you down a stone tower that you didn’t see from the skies above the castle… it must have been built into the footprint of the old keep, probably using earth release to keep it a secret to the outside world. At the bottom of the tower the construction gives way to natural stone… you must have passed clear through the foundations of Hozuki castle and into the stony land it was built atop.

Down a rough-hewn corridor, you begin to hear voices.

Ryūzetsu points you at a gap between a row of shelves and the wall, just large enough for you to creep closer towards the sound of the voices.

“It seems like the Akatsuki above are having trouble,” a deep male voice decides.

“They were wrong to think it would be so easy,” a female voice declares.

You sneak a quick peek around the corner of the shelves, to find a group of four shinobi in dark outfits and bizarre, almost demonic-looking masks, along with a familiar dark-haired man: the warden, Mui.

Gesturing with a quick slash across your neck with your fingers, you ask Ryūzetsu if it’s okay to kill the other four who are with the warden. After considering her answer for a moment, she nods.

>Use the time and the cover to go into sage mode.
>Use Kongō Fūsa as a surprise attack.
>Use genjutsu to set the stage, then begin cutting them down.
>Other?
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>>4107203
>>Use the time and the cover to go into sage mode.
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>>4107203
>Use the time and the cover to go into sage mode.
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>>4107203
>Use the time for sage mode
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>>4107203
>>Use Kongō Fūsa as a surprise attack.
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>>4107203
>Use the time and the cover to go into sage mode.
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>>4107203
>Use the time and the cover to go into sage mode.
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>>4107203
>Use the time and the cover to go into sage mode.
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>>4107203
>>Use genjutsu to set the stage, then begin cutting them down.
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>>4107203
>1d6, high roll
Taking three. This isn't for success as much as for degree of shock and awe.
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Rolled 3 (1d6)

>>4107336
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Rolled 6 (1d6)

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Rolled 4 (1d6)

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Rolled 6 (1d6)

>>4107336
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Rolled 3 (1d6)

>>4107336
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>>4107338
>>4107339
>>4107340
>>4107341
>>4107342
well, that is a weird pattern ...
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>>4107336
You pause for a few minutes, holding perfectly still in seiza with one hand at the throat of your saya and the other at Umekiri’s hilt, doing nothing but gather natural energy. You also try to focus on how Umekiri reacts to that energy when you allow it to flow into and out of her blade, eventually electing to “fill” her the same way you would your own body. It takes a little longer because of that, but not long enough for anyone on the other side of the shelves to figure out you’re there.

The first move comes with a loud crash, as you knock the shelves across the room. One man has been sandwiched between that shelf and one across from it, making for one hell of a dramatic entrance.

A senjutsu-enhanced drawing cut with Umekiri is obfuscated by illusory copies, and the true strike lands before the second black-clad cult figure can finish weaving his hand seals. The cut severs his torso entirely… your blade cuts deeper than its length? It’s similar to the samurai technique, though since it’s enhanced by senjutsu chakra it must not be visible to the naked eye.

“Katon: Fireball technique!”

The third Kusagakure cultist’s attack hits an afterimage, and by the time he realizes the fact you’ve cut down another one of his companions after having used the shunshin almost instinctively. The fireball-user raises his arms to try to defend himself from the paper shuriken you unseal as his companion’s body is still falling, but that doesn’t accomplish much. It just means his guard is up when he’s hit twice in the chest and once in the side of the head by a total of three rasengans.

That’s immediately fatal.

“Katon: Onidōrō!”

One fireball, shaped like a flaming paper lantern with a demon-like face, destroys the bookcase that’s been thrown your way by the hulk of a man you hit with it before. Then the second fireball hits him in the chest, throwing him backwards. Then he’s hit again, and again, and again, each blow scorching even deeper into his flesh while throwing what remains of him down the hallway and out of sight.

“… thank you, Ryūzetsu,” you bow politely to your ANBU guide. “I’d actually written that guy off.”
>1/2
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“Now then, Mui-san,” Ryūzetsu declares, warily eyeing the warden. “It’s just us here.”

“It would appear so,” Mui agrees, his stare falling heavily on you.

You take a step forward. “Yeah no, I’m gonna need you to step aside.”

“I can’t do that,” Mui replies flatly.

“I can’t simply kill you,” you point out. “But a vegetable with chakra can still do your job as warden, and if you don’t step aside one’s gonna.”

“Mui-san,” Ryūzetsu transitions effortlessly into the voice of reasoned patience. “We know what’s in the Box, and it’s...”

“My son,” Mui snaps, albeit without raising his voice. “My son is in the Box.”

“Muku is gone, Mui-san,” Ryūzetsu insists quietly. “He’s been gone for seven years.”

… so that’s what Ryūzetsu didn’t want to talk about, and why she knows her way around the castle so well? She knew Mui’s son… no, it was something more than that. And then Mui fed his son to the Box of Paradise.

“The Box contains an ancient yōkai,” you explain. “It can’t be allowed to open again… even if the reason is a good one.”

“Then you’re condemning my son to death!” Mui declares, pulling off his white gloves in preparation for a fight. “What gives you the right!?”

You were the one who sacrificed Muku in the first place!” Ryūzetsu finally snaps. “What makes you think he’d be okay with you putting the whole world at risk to try making up for what you did to him!?”

“Our ancestors could control the power of the Box!” Mui counters.

You glare sharply at him. “Satori was the one who led your nation to ruin… you have it all backwards.”

“Naori-san, this is a problem that Kusagakure caused,” Ryūzetsu growls. “Kusagakure should be the ones to fix it. Let me fight him.”

>No. (Put the Warden under genjutsu to disable him)
>No. (Disable the Warden, all you need is for him to be alive)
>I’ll still step in if things go poorly.
>Other?
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>>4107407
>>I’ll still step in if things go poorly.
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>>4107407
No (genjutsu)
You contracted us to do a job and protection of the client is part of that.
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>>4107407
>I’ll still step in if things go poorly.
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>>4107407
>>I’ll still step in if things go poorly.
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>>4107407
>>I’ll still step in if things go poorly.
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>>4107407
>>No. (Put the Warden under genjutsu to disable him)
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>>4107407
>No. (Put the Warden under genjutsu to disable him)
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>>4107407
>>No. (Put the Warden under genjutsu to disable him)
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>>4107407
>>I’ll still step in if things go poorly.
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>>4107407
>I’ll still step in if things go poorly.
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>>4107407
>>No. (Put the Warden under genjutsu to disable him)
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>>4107407
>>No. (Put the Warden under genjutsu to disable him)
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>>4107407
>No. (Put the Warden under genjutsu to disable him)
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>>4107407
>I’ll still step in if things go poorly.
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>>4106602
That's . . . Quite a valid point. We can't be known to be working with Akatsuki and also still Amegakure without raising some concern.
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>>4107407
What happens if she fucks up and kills him?

Oh well. I assume she isn't scrubby enough to pick a fight this important if she isn't very confident in winning.
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>>4107906
The call is going to need to be made at some point, unless something diverges wildly from canon. Because right now, in terms of canon we're... like I *think* early on in the second year of the timeskip?

The bijuu hunt hasn't started yet, so we're at least a year and some out from Jiraiya infiltrating Ame unless we butterfly-ed something.

That's a long time to maintain a double identity and not blow our cover. Naori is fairly on board with Akatsuki's goals and the fate of the world trumps the fate of just Ame, so I feel like we're probably going to end up playing missing nin for a while.
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Putting a pin it it here, but with >>4107928 it seems the NARROW preference is to let Ryuzetsu do this but be ready to step in.

>>4107407
>1d6, high roll
>best three of four
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Rolled 4 (1d6)

>>4108586
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Rolled 2 (1d6)

>>4108586
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Rolled 5 (1d6)

>>4108586
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Rolled 4 (1d6)

>>4108586
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Rolled 5 (1d6)

>>4108586
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>>4108588
>>4108591
>>4108593
13 out of 18 not bad.
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>>4108586
You take a step back, and give Ryūzetsu an opportunity to do as she desires.

“Okay,” you agree. “But one way or the other the Box is coming with me.”

After a few seconds of sizing one another up, Ryūzetsu takes the initiative by weaving a short series of hand seals. Between that initiative and the number of seals, she beats Mui to the punch.

“Katon: Onidōrō!”

“Katon: Phoenix Flower!”

Mui’s technique isn’t meant to overcome Ryūzetsu’s, but rather to intercept her individual demon lanterns and set them off early. Ryūzetsu is forced to dodge several of the shuriken hidden inside Mui’s smaller fireballs, though after the collision of their techniques it’s impossible to say that Mui aimed them that way.

Ryūzetsu makes her next move by expelling hot ash from her mouth, without using any hand seals.

“Katon: Hajingakure!”

She uses that burning ash to cover her approach, though Mui manages to blast it away using another fireball of his own in just enough time to block Ryūzetsu’s fist with his wrist. Now in melee, Ryūzetsu would seem to be at a disadvantage: she’s just a bit slower and clearly not as physically powerful as the warden is, though her technical skill allows her to take advantage of Mui’s own fairly limited taijutsu style.

Essentially, it all comes down to “pushing hands” mixed with kicks. Mui keeps trying to put his palm on Ryūzetsu, while Ryūzetsu uses her own palms, wrists, and elbows to make sure that doesn’t happen.

While they’re scuffling, you use the smallest, simplest genjutsu through the hum of water dancing in the carved horimono on Umekiri’s surface. The goal isn’t to shift the battle in Ryūzetsu’s favor… she seems the type to take offense if you tried, and it defeats the purpose of letting her fight on her own anyway.

Instead you use it to disguise the fact that you’ve unsealed your Sharingan.

>13 (Very Hard)

With it, you can see the exact moment that one of Mui’s attacks gets through, placing a curse mark onto Ryūzetsu’s body. Between that visual prowess and your senjutsu-enhanced state, you can see the fire-release technique in action as he places it, as well as how the chakra is shaped and manipulated through a fūinjutsu key.

“Katon: Tenrō!”

The bands of the fūinjutsu wrap tightly around Ryūzetsu’s shoulders and chest, strangling her chakra distribution network even before Mui follows through with a roundhouse kick to her torso… a blow meant to stun her body and knock her back.

If she uses ninjutsu in this condition…
>1/2
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>>4108694
“Katon: Onidōrō!”

“Why you...” Mui’s eyes widen, and he grunts in pain as the first lantern hits him dead on. He’s forced to toss his jacket and shirt off, both having been set fire, and his torso and forearms end up burned anyway.

Ryūzetsu still gets the worst of it.

The Tenrō curse mark sets her on fire using both the chakra expelled from her tenketsu and by drawing it from tenketsu crossed by the marking itself. You’re forced to use the water flowing through Umekiri to quickly put her out.

“So much for that,” Mui scoffs in between panting.

So that’s how the Tenrō works… you’ve seen it with the senjutsu-enhanced Sharingan… under normal circumstances you could use it yourself. But as you quickly re-establish the genjutsu hiding your eye, you realize that for all this extra insight you still don’t feel like you can use fire release. In fact, you can quickly confirm it yourself by trying and failing to replicate the Onidōrō that you saw Ryūzetsu use while your Sharingan was active.

But you DO know the details of the fūinjutsu key that Mui is using. Which gives you a new option.

>Subdue Mui and seal the Box yourself, as you came here to do.
>Use the Sharingain to implant the fūinjutsu key into Ryūzetsu’s subconscious mind. That would allow her to kill Mui and become the new warden of Hozuki castle without a mass jailbreak.
>Other?

>SP: 6/6
>ES: 1/2 (2T)
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>>4108696
>Use the Sharingain to implant the fūinjutsu key into Ryūzetsu’s subconscious mind. That would allow her to kill Mui and become the new warden of Hozuki castle without a mass jailbreak.
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>>4108696
>Subdue Mui and seal the Box yourself, as you came here to do.
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>>4108696
>Use the Sharingain to implant the fūinjutsu key into Ryūzetsu’s subconscious mind. That would allow her to kill Mui and become the new warden of Hozuki castle without a mass jailbreak.
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>>4108696
>use the sharingan ...
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>>4108696
>Subdue Mui and seal the Box yourself, as you came here to do.
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>>4108696
>Use the Sharingain to implant the fūinjutsu key into Ryūzetsu’s subconscious mind. That would allow her to kill Mui and become the new warden of Hozuki castle without a mass jailbreak.
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>>4108696
>>Use the Sharingain to implant the fūinjutsu key into Ryūzetsu’s subconscious mind. That would allow her to kill Mui and become the new warden of Hozuki castle without a mass jailbreak.

Welly well well then. Don’t mind if I do.
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>>4108696
Question: Is Ryuzetsu willing to become the new Prison Warden?
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>>4108730
It'd be up to her whether to use the technique or not, and whether to kill Mui afterwards or not. But as things stand neither of those are options and it's a large reason why she's in the process of losing: because "winning" creates a whole new set of problems and she knows it.
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>>4108696
>>Use the Sharingain to implant the fūinjutsu key into Ryūzetsu’s subconscious mind. That would allow her to kill Mui and become the new warden of Hozuki castle without a mass jailbreak.
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>>4108696
>Use the Sharingain to implant the fūinjutsu key into Ryūzetsu’s subconscious mind. That would allow her to kill Mui and become the new warden of Hozuki castle without a mass jailbreak.
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>>4108696
>>Subdue Mui and seal the Box yourself, as you came here to do.
Rather save that last charge of sharingon in case we have problems with the box demon.
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>>4108696
>>Use the Sharingain to implant the fūinjutsu key into Ryūzetsu’s subconscious mind. That would allow her to kill Mui and become the new warden of Hozuki castle without a mass jailbreak.
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>>4108696
>Use the Sharingain to implant the fūinjutsu key into Ryūzetsu’s subconscious mind. That would allow her to kill Mui and become the new warden of Hozuki castle without a mass jailbreak.
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>>4108696
You lock eyes with Ryūzetsu and go immediately to work, implanting images and details of the fūinjutsu key that Mui was just using on her deep into her mind, below the level of her conscious awareness.

>SP: 6/6
>ES: 2/2 (4T)

As you help her to her feet you feel a trickle of blood from your left eye, and you’re forced to shut it… it’s like you’re wearing barbed wire wrapped in an itchy sweater on the inside of your skull, and the pain is only slightly diminished by closing it.

“Ryūzetsu,” you instruct your partner, “I need you to break the seal Mui placed on you.”

“That’s not how it works,” Mui insists sternly. “Next, I’ll be sealing you… your chakra may just be strong enough to open the Box.”

“You can do it now,” you tell Ryūzetsu calmly, ignoring Mui’s threats. “Use your Onidōrō again and trust me that you’ll be fine.”

At your insistence Ryūzetsu staggers to her feet and begins molding her chakra. “Katon: Onidōrō!”

Mui is stunned when the burning demon lanterns smash him about the inside of the cavern, like a child throwing around a rag doll. And more surprising to both of them is that this time Ryūzetsu doesn’t catch fire: the sealing formula for the Tenrō technique simply breaks on the spot.

“How?” Mui demands, having only just managed to survive the attack through a series of well-timed counterblasts similar to how he did it before. “What the hell is going on here?”

“You have Mui’s fūinjutsu key,” you explain to Ryūzetsu. “What you wanna do with that is entirely up to you.”

“Do what you think is right.”
>1/2
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I see /qst/ is broken yet again.
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>>4109016
no?
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>>4109020
guess not
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>>4108847
This time, the situation is different.

The battering that Mui has received leaves him slow, and Ryūzetsu quickly retakes the momentum. She leaves a kunai embedded in Mui’s right wrist before pinning him to a wall with a second kunai in his left shoulder. Then she hits him square in the chest with her palm.

“Katon: Tenrō!”

Just as when Mui struck her, the familiar braided seal markings appear where Ryūzetsu struck.

“How...” he wonders again, before staring at you. “You did this. I don’t know how, but you did this somehow.”

“You’re not wrong,” you admit.

“Give it up, Mui,” Ryūzetsu demands, raising her fists in preparation for Mui’s refusal. “Even after all this, I know Muku wouldn’t want me to kill you.”

“You say you know Muku?” Mui snarls. “You think you know my son better than his own father?”

“I believe you’ve forgotten what you knew,” Ryūzetsu counters. “Please, just stop to think for a moment!”

Mui pauses… before seemingly entering a moment of lucidity. “I lost my wife when Muku was young… in a border conflict with Ishigakure. I lost Muku to the box. The Grass Fruit faction is in shambles with the loss of the council. And now, there’s another who can use the Tenrō.”

“I have nothing left. I’ve sacrificed everything, and now I have nothing.”

Weaving a series of hand seals, Mui bursts into flame.

There’s no screaming, no overt signs of pain. Instead the burning warden simply seats himself before the Box and begins to blacken.

“Mui, stop!”

You stick a hand out in front of Ryūzetsu. “Yeah, no… if this is what he wants, there’s nothing we can do.”

“You can put him out!”

“He’d find a way,” you observe. “Sooner or later, he’d find a way.”

“That young woman is correct,” Mui agrees. “This is my decision, Ryūzetsu. Heed my final words: if you find it sad, then do better than I did.”
>2/3
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>>4109090
>See to Ryūzetsu’s health.
>Start applying sealing formulae to the Box.
>Other?
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>>4109091
>>Start applying sealing formulae to the Box.
unless ryuzetsu suddenly collapses, i think we best deal with the box asap
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>>4109091
>>See to Ryūzetsu’s health.
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>>4109090
>>Start applying sealing formulae to the Box.
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>>4109091
>>Start applying sealing formulae to the Box.
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>>4109091
>Start applying sealing formulae to the Box.
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>>4109091
>Start applying sealing formulae to the Box.
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>>4109091
>>Start applying sealing formulae to the Box.
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>>4109091
>>See to Ryūzetsu’s health.
>>Start applying sealing formulae to the Box.
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>>4109098
Also I suspect she would be better at dealing with burns
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>>4109098
>>4109091
Let's also unseal some medicine for her
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>>4109819
It seems like sealing the box is going to win, but there's no reason not to also do this.
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>>4109091
“Here,” you insist, unsealing an emergency medical pack from a scroll at your waist and handing it to Ryūzetsu. “You look like you could use this.”

After a moment, she accepts it. “Thank you, Naori-kun.”

“Just rest up,” you suggest. “I’ll take it from here.”

You touch your fingertips to the Box, lightly brushing the cold and smooth surface. It must be metal of some kind, but it’s difficult to tell what kind of metal it might be. What you do immediately determine is that the physical object identifiable as the “Box of Paradise” is really more the size of a large cubical room with faces carved into each side that form “gates”.

>1d6, high roll
>taking the first three
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>>4110097
box up the box
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>>4110097
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>>4110097
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>>4110097
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>>4110097
You have to check a second time, and realize that the dimensions of the box are literally perfect. The corners are exactly ninety degrees, the sides are all exactly the same lengths… it’s actually a little eerie how precise it is, especially considering its supposed antiquity. It’s not clear to you that it was willed into being by the Sage of Six Paths, as Nyoka told you the Shrike clan believes to be true, but if something like in’yōton actually did exist this is what you’d imagine it would look like… the concept of a perfect cube given form.

Anyway, time to put it in a scroll and never look at it again.

You seat yourself in front of the box and unfurl a scroll. Glowing chakra chains extend from your left shoulder, where the detached sleeve of your outfit ensures it doesn’t leave any holes in your outfit, and they wrap around the box you begin weaving hand seals.

“Fūinjutsu: Fūnyū.”

You swiftly seal the entire Box into the scroll, where an ink image of it appears at the center of your Enclosing Method array. Then you roll it up, tie it off, and bite your thumb.”

“Kuchiyose: Kijani.”

This time, Kijani’s head appears and extends from your left sleeve rather than summoning the whole bird.

“I need you to take this to Zenkibō-tono,” you instruct the scroll bird as his neck continues to stretch. He then swallows the scroll, before his neck begins to retract again.

“Of course, Lady Naori,” he replies dutifully. “Might I ask what is in the scroll?”

“The Box of Paradise.”

Kijani pauses before disappearing.

“… and I just swallowed it.”

“Yup.”

“That’s horrifying.”

“A little,” you agree. “Take it quickly.”

“No kidding.”

Kijani tucks himself back into the shadows of your sleeve before disappearing entirely.

You then notice Ryūzetsu staring at you.

“What?” you demand. “I’m just pulling a giant bird out of my sleeve and feeding it a scroll.”
>1/2
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>>4110118
“So both Mui and the Box are gone now,” Ryūzetsu realizes, her exposed arms now glistening with the sheen left by burn ointment. “But I have one question still in mind.”

“And that is?” you ask.

There’s a pause. “Itachi said the Box wasn’t a weapon that ‘Akatsuki could use’. What did he mean by that?”

“If I was evil this’d be the point where I’d kill you for asking that,” you observe calmly. “Akatsuki’s goal is world peace, but that’s impossible when none of the great nations take us seriously.”

“I see,” Ryūzetsu nods thoughtfully. “I guess that puts his comments in context.”

“In any event, it’s nothing your nation should be worried about,” you assure her.

“Speaking of the great nations, you and I are the only ones who know what happened here,” Ryūzetsu points out. “What… should we do about that?”

>Tell Konohagakure whatever you want. I trust you to consider my situation as well.
>Don’t mention me or the Box, but other than that say whatever makes sense to you.
>Please spin it as pure internal politics. Don’t tell Konohagakure anything important.
>Other?
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>>4110141
>>Please spin it as pure internal politics. Don’t tell Konohagakure anything important.
just a small case of gekokujo
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>>4110141
>Please spin it as pure internal politics. Don’t tell Konohagakure anything important.
>Act like an asshole, that'll make it believable
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>>4110141
>Don’t mention me or the Box, but other than that say whatever makes sense to you.
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>>4110150
>Act like an asshole

Are you suggesting we act like an asshole or tell ryuzetsu to?
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>>4110153
Tell ryuzetsu to act like an asshole.
Be huffy, dismissive, disrespectful and don't tell them anything.

Better yet, pretend to have a slip of the tongue that makes them think they understand what's going on.

You know, that kind of politician.
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>>4110141
>Please spin it as pure internal politics. Don’t tell Konohagakure anything important.
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>>4110141
>>Please spin it as pure internal politics. Don’t tell Konohagakure anything important.
They probably won't like it, but take it as believable, it should be rather typical for these type of happenings

that aside, if ryuzetsu is gonna ask us how we got that sealing formula inside her head, should we tell her?
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>>4110141
this: >>4110155
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>>4110141
>Don’t mention me specifically or the Box, but other than that say whatever makes sense to you.
>But if it was up to me... Akatsuki are assholes that just do not understand no and killed the one they wished to recruit when he refused. You were just caught in the middle of it.
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>>4110155
Sounds good, I'll +1 this.
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>>4110141
>>Tell Konohagakure whatever you want. I trust you to consider my situation as well.
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>>4110141
“Please spin this as pure politics,” you ask Ryūzetsu. “The Grass Flower faction hired us to help end the threat presented by the Grass Fruit faction, who then leaked our presence to draw Konohagakure into the conflict on their side.”

“Something to that effect.”

“I can do that,” she agrees. “If you head out the same way you came in, you should be able to leave unseen.”

“Thanks.”

“If you ever need it, Hozuki castle’s gates will be open to you,” Ryūzetsu informs you with a slight smile.



The next several weeks are comparatively calm.

You have time to get caught up with those of your fellow Amegakure shinobi who are not in Akatsuki, most of all Karin and Ajisai. It’s also well past due to write a letter to Fū, and you have to apologize to her for not writing for such a long time. You explain it as the result of your recent promotion, and the fact that you can’t talk about a lot of your missions anymore. But you do tell her about some of the places you’ve been and the people you’ve met while in Akatsuki, focusing a lot on the seemingly inconsequential parts like the foods and the festivals.

Totally unrelated to your missions, and actually more pleasant to think about. That should fascinate Fū, who barely seems to get out of her own village.

You also write another letter to Kurotsuchi, despite not really anticipating a response.



“So that is what needs to get done,” Konan-sensei concludes, having led a meeting between only a few of the Akatsuki.

“There is one other request,” Itachi-han interrupts the proceedings before Konan can adjourn.

“Oh?”

“I heard that Naori-kun strained her eye recently,” Itachi-han admits. “I too need medication for that, from time to time. There is a place where it is rumored that a rare herb has been spotted that was once treasured by the Uchiha clan for treating eyestrain.”

“You’d like me to go?” you ask.

“It would be a low priority,” Itachi insists calmly. “But it is a scenario where mastery of Senjutsu would be helpful. The valley where this report comes from is shrouded in a dense mist, difficult to see through even with a dōjutsu.”

“I would go myself, but Kisame and I will be in the Land of Water.”

AKATSUKI MISSION BOARD:
>War Mission (Iwagakure Support)
>Eye medication mission
>Bandit Suppression mission
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>>4110251
>>Eye medication mission
lets do it, should be useful for both itachi and Naori
and its also a good reason to train/test our Sage mode
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>>4110251
>>Eye medication mission

Proper healthcare is important.
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>>4110251
btw, did we hear what happend to itachi and kisame during our excursion below the castle?
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>>4110251
>>Eye medication mission
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>>4110260
This requires a rough description:
>Tsunade did not make an appearance
>Casualties were light for the prison itself
>Nobody in the Konoha teams was killed
>Tenten and Lee were mainly dead weight
>Neji was BARELY not dead weight
>The chunin in the Hokage Guard was the weak link, Itachi got him early with a genjutsu
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>Eye medication mission
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>>4110251
>>Eye medication mission
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>>4110251
>Eye medication mission
Take care of yourself before you can think about taking care of others
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>>4110251
>>Eye medication mission

Who's iwa at war with this time?
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>>4110278
Thank you

>>4110307
It's technically not war, it's strategic military advancement across arbitrary lines in the sand
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>>4110251
>Eye medication mission
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>>4110251
>>Eye medication mission
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>>4110251
>>Eye medication mission
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>>4110278
Well, at least kisame got to have a bit of fun
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>>4110251
The details of the mission are fairly simple: head to a valley in the border regions of the Land of Fire, called the Valley of Judgment. You’re meant to be looking for a perennial white flower, low-growing in leafy clumps that should favor gravel or stony soil. Luckily the valley sits in the middle of a demilitarized zone, meaning at least there should be little if any opposition. At worst you may have to dodge a Konohagakure patrol.

Complicating the mission is the typical weather in the valley. Evidently there are stories of chūnin and jōnin from Konohagakure going missing under the thick fog that’s said to shroud the valley at nearly all times.



“So this is the Valley of Judgment?” Sasori-han muses as the two of you look down onto the site you’re meant to explore.

“It’s pretty awesome,” you admit. “I don’t think I’ve seen fog that thick before.”

“It may not be natural,” Sasori-han offers an explanation.

You have to nod in agreement. “Yeah… you may not be wrong.”

“It occurs to me that I have hardly seen this ‘Sage Mode’ of yours,” Sasori muses. “And if this fog never lifts that may be true tomorrow as well.”

“You have any ideas?” you wonder aloud.

“Not particularly,” your partner admits. “Large explosions would run the risk of destroying these flowers we’re here to pick.”

“Yeah, maybe best if I take point on this one then,” you muse, already imagining the disappointed look on Itachi-han’s face if you returned with half-incinerated, crushed flowers.

>Let’s see if Nyoka can’t lift some of this fog for a while.
>I’ll go into Sage Mode and use that to find our way around.
>The Uchiha used to know how to navigate this place…
>Other?
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>>4112150
>let's see if nyoka can help
She also might have insight on the area, the mist or the flowers, Intel is important
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>>4112150
>I’ll go into Sage Mode and use that to find our way around.
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>>4112150
>Let’s see if Nyoka can’t lift some of this fog for a while.
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>>4112150
>I’ll go into Sage Mode and use that to find our way around.
Like king said, we learned it to use it.
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>>4112150
>I’ll go into Sage Mode and use that to find our way around.
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>>4112150
>I’ll go into Sage Mode and use that to find our way around.
>The Uchiha used to know how to navigate this place…
Curious to see if the combination if Sharingan and Sage mode reveals something more than either one alone would.
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>>4112150
>>I’ll go into Sage Mode and use that to find our way around.
>>The Uchiha used to know how to navigate this place…
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>>4112150
>>I’ll go into Sage Mode and use that to find our way around.
>>The Uchiha used to know how to navigate this place…

wombo combo
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>>4112150
You sit for a minute or two in meditation, at the end of which you can open your eyes and go into Sage Mode.

“I’ll use senjutsu chakra to improve my sensing abilities,” you declare. “But I’ll have to hold off on using Sharingan… I feel like I still have to be careful with it.”

“Understood,” Sasori-han agrees, following close. “I’m going to attach a chakra thread to you. Is that acceptable?”

“I follow you,” you agree. “Go ahead. I’ll lead you true.”

With that, you descend into the mists surrounded by fluttering paper butteflies.

It’s every bit as difficult to see through as you’d anticipated, perhaps even a bit more disorienting. But your chakra sensing is one of many things senjutsu seems to enhance, and with the butterflies acting as proxies for you it’s easy to cover a wide area.

“Damn,” Sasori curses in a low growl. “I can’t see a thing.”

“I don’t like it,” you admit. “My hair is up on end… it feels like we’re being watched.”

“Do you even have hair, Sasori-senpai?”

“Perhaps,” he replies cryptically. “Either way I share your impression. I think there’s something to it.”

You were honestly hoping for a rebuke. But if Sasori-han also feels that something is wrong here, it makes it even less likely that you’re imagining things. Having someone to check your own impressions against is a helpful tool, you’ve begun to find, especially with someone as grounded… or perhaps, as jaded… as Sasori.
>1d6, high roll
>best three of four
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>>4112489
You stop short when you notice it, and behind you Sasori-han does the same.

“I can sense something up ahead,” you declare. “Chakra, humans… quite a number of them.”

“I can’t sense anything,” Sasori-han admits. “Are they coming closer?”

You focus on them intently. “Yes. Get ready.”

Sasori-han raises the tail on his armor-puppet, preparing for an attack.

You swiftly draw Umekiri and parry a series of weapons… all stone or water shuriken, thrown at you from the impenetrable mists. Sasori-han’s armor puppet opens its mouth and shoots a volley of senbon into the mist in return, though nothing seems to come of it.

“That didn’t hit anything,” you admit.

“Then we need to change our strategy,” Sasori-han suggests.

>We need to find a way to clear some of this mist.
>We won’t get anywhere from a distance… we need to get closer.
>I want to determine how it is they’re sensing us.
>Other?
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>>4112562
>>I want to determine how it is they’re sensing us.
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>>4112562
>I want to determine how it is they’re sensing us.
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>>4112562
>I want to determine
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>>4112562
>>I want to determine how it is they’re sensing us.
knowledge
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>>4112562
>>I want to determine how it is they’re sensing us.
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>>4112562
>>I want to determine how it is they’re sensing us.
The best way to prepare a counter-response is knowing what you have to counter.
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>>4112562
>I want to determine how it is they’re sensing us.
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>>4112562
>>I want to determine how it is they’re sensing us.
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>>4112562
>1d6, DC 9 (Moderate)
>taking the first three
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>>4112768
Even if I fuck this roll up we still hit the DC.
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>>4112768
“There’s something I have to check out,” you tell Sasori-han quietly. “Wait here for a moment.”

“Fine,” he growls. “But don’t keep me waiting.”

Weaving your hand seals, you use the Hiding in Mist technique… if they’re using dōjutsu this will work. If they can still notice you approaching then they’re likely using some other means of locating you.

As you draw close to the group of enemies, swift and silent as a shadow, you come under heavy attack… a withering barrage of projectiles crafted from your surroundings that forces you to weave and dodge with your shunshin. Even with that and sage mode it’s difficult due to the sheer volume of weapons, but you eventually manage to engage one of the shadowy figures at close quarters.

“… no way!”

As soon as you catch sight of the enemy’s face you backpedal, the two of you fading into the mists as you open up the range. That brief glimpse confirms to you how these people must be “seeing” you, but even having seen the undeniable evidence for yourself it’s hard to believe.

“They have no eyes,” you tell Sasori-han warily when you return to him.

His expression behind his mask remains unseen, but his tone betrays his shock. “No eyes… how many generations must they have spent in this place for such a thing to happen?”

“I don’t know, but I have an idea,” you tell him. “Sasori-sempai, please head back up and out of the valley. I’ll handle this from here.”

“I see,” he replies calmly. “Very well. I’ll leave this to you.”



Several hours later you return to Sasori with clumps of the flower you came here for sealed into a scroll… enough for Itachi-han’s medicine recipe, as well as several clumps that you intend to try growing for yourself to save the effort.

“What eventually worked?” Sasori-han asks inquisitively.

You hold out an empty glass vial of perfume: white plum and spice-scented.

“There are no animals down there,” you tell Sasori, laying out your reasoning. “So I figured their sense of smell and their chakra sensing were probably the abilities which compensated for their missing eyes. So I kneaded some chakra into my perfume and used it in a genjutsu. Made me seem to blend into the mist.”

“I see,” Sasori-han muses. “Very clever, Naori-san.”

“Thank you for the praise, senpai.”

“Don’t call me that.”
>1/2
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>>4112851
Upon returning to Amegakure, you find Itachi-han waiting for you at the shrine.

“I assume you were successful?” he asks.

You nod politely, and produce the flowers you picked from the valley.

“Here,” he insists quietly, producing a mortar, pestle, a jar of water, and a pouch of herbs. “I will show you the recipe and method so that you can use it yourself.”

>1d6, best three of four
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>personal lessons from Itachi
Oh man too cute.
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“Just follow my lead.”

Hot water, added in small amounts with the rare eyebright herb you collected, dried honeycomb, willow bark, chamomile flowers, gingko leaves, and ginseng root. Then Itachi puts a clean cloth into the hot water, before spreading the poultice across the cloth, rolling it, and putting it across his eyes.

“Typically, a patient will lie down and cover their eyes,” Itachi-han explains, before doing exactly that on your bedroom floor. “Feel free to join me.”

With nothing else planned for the afternoon, you do exactly that.

The warmth and the soothing herbs are honestly one of the best things you’ve felt in a long while, prompting a small sigh of satisfaction.

>Just relax for now, let the medicine do its work.
>Try to strike up some casual conversation with Itachi.
>Ask Itachi why he joined Akatsuki in the first place.
>Other?
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>>4112935
>Just relax for now, let the medicine do its work.
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>>4112935
>Try to strike up some casual conversation with Itachi.
>Ask Itachi why he joined Akatsuki in the first place
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>>4112935
>>Try to strike up some casual conversation with Itachi.
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>>4112935
>>Try to strike up some casual conversation with Itachi.
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>>4112935
>>Try to strike up some casual conversation with Itachi.
Bringing up why he joined Akatsuki would just bring up bad memories. I want him to enjoy this downtime.
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>>4112935
>Try to strike up some casual conversation with Itachi.
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>>4112935
>>Try to strike up some casual conversation with Itachi.
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>>4112935
>casual conversation
Let's not think about work
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>>4112935
>Try to strike up some casual conversation with Itachi.
>So, why'd you decide to save me that day?
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>>4112935
>Just relax for now, let the medicine do its work.
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>>4112935
“So… where do you actually live?” you ask aloud.

There’s a long pause. “If you mean to ask if I have an apartment, I do not.”

“So you live on the road?” you press, suddenly curious.

“Akatsuki’s funds make that easier,” Itachi-han admits. “That is what Kakuzu’s missions are for.”

“So… what do you think of Amegakure?” you ask.

“It rains too much for my tastes,” Itachi-han tells you.

There’s another long pause.

“Is everyone in Akatsuki as bad at this as we are?”

Itachi-han chuckles to himself somewhere on the floor to your right. “Believe it or not, some are worse.”

“I really don’t know most of them yet,” you admit. “I mean, it seems like you get along with Kisame at least?”

“To an extent,” Itachi replies.

“Then you have Hidan and Kakuzu who hate each other,” you sigh, “and Sasori who… well, doesn’t really like anyone. Everyone gets real nervous around Pain except for Konan-sensei, who doesn’t really talk to anyone other than Pain and myself except to give orders.”

“We have spoken a few times,” Itachi admits. “Konan strikes me as a woman who is only as stern as she is because she remembers being happier, a long time ago.”

“That’s… actually an apt description,” you agree.

“She seems to be happier when speaking with you,” Itachi tells you. “It’s… pleasant to see.”

“I’m glad,” you admit. “Though still, I’ll admit I haven’t had as much time for my friends outside Akatsuki.”

“I find it bizarre you even try,” Itachi admits.

>Why? Surely I’m not the only member of Akatsuki who has friends.
>I can see how you’d feel that way. I don’t agree, but I understand it.
>Change the subject.
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>>4114183
>Why? Surely I am not the only member who has friends?
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>>4114183
>>Why? Surely I’m not the only member of Akatsuki who has friends.
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>>4114183
>I can see how you’d feel that way. I don’t agree, but I understand it.
Iirc we're literally the only person in the Akatsuki besides big man and Konan who isnt a wanted missing nin.
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>>4114183
>Why? Surely I’m not the only member of Akatsuki who has friends.
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>>4114183
>Why? Surely I’m not the only member of Akatsuki who has friends.
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>>4114183
>Just because you killed everyone in your family doesn't mean we all have to
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>>4114255
You are the type of person that hits people with a car when they stand in your driveway
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>>4114183
>Why? Surely I’m not the only member of Akatsuki who has friends.
>I even write to people i've met from other villages, from time to time.
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>>4114183
>Why? Surely I am not the only member who has friends?
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>>4114183
“Come on,” you chuckle. “I can’t be the only one in Akatsuki with friends.”

The length of this particular pause is enough to prompt you to remove the herbal eyemask, sit up, and stare at Itachi-han. “Wait, am I?”

“Most of us have no living relatives or friends,” Itachi explains from the floor. “Kisame has killed everyone who ever grew close to him. Kakuzu cares only for money, and Hidan for his twisted religion. Deidara seems to bear some relationship to the Kamizuru clan of Iwagakure, but has turned his back on them. I know little of Sasori’s past, but he keeps all others at arm’s length.”

“As for me... you know my reputation by now.”

>Let it drop.
>Admit that it's hard for you to believe.
>Other?
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>>4114274
>Admit that it's hard for you to believe.
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>>4114274
>>Let it drop.
Maybe a "well that sucks", but definitely want to just let it drop.
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>>4114274
>>Let it drop.
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>>4114274
>Admit that it's hard for you to believe.
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>>4114274
>That's... really unfortunate. I think it would help them a lot, even if they only had one friend to talk to.
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>>4114274
>Admit that it's hard for you to believe.
>People are not lone lands... I guess I just don't understand people as well as I tought.
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>>4114274
>>Admit that it's hard for you to believe.
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>>4114274
>Admit that it's hard for you to believe.
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>>4114257
It's called a joke, and I am not the one willing to give excuses to a kin-slayer. All Naori has heard is that he killed everyone in his clan. Every man, woman, and child except his brother. The fact Naori treats that the same as discussing the weather while having a ridiculous notion of "nindo" while also being what amounts to a mercenary who does nearly anything for money has to be treated as a joke.
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>>4114274
>1d6, high roll
>taking the first three
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“I do know your reputation,” you agree. “And it’s a little hard to reconcile.”

“In what sense?”

“The world of shinobi is full of people who kill,” you admit quietly. “But it’s also full of different motivations and philosophies, of which I can only know my own for certain.”

“And that is?”

“To end wars with the least bloodshed possible,” you reiterate. “Akatsuki’s founding principle, one which I still feel is as valid today as it was when I was a baby. As for other people, I can only guess.”

Itachi-han doesn’t move. “Give me an example.”

“Name me a subject,” you counter. “Someone I actually know a little about.”

“Kurotsuchi,” Itachi-han picks a name. “Granddaughter of the Tsuchikage.”

“We ended up fighting together,” you recount. “Since her grandfather is the Tsuchikage, that shapes her decisionmaking process. And since her grandfather is a stubborn old man who’s been in the position as long as she’s been alive, she probably sees his recalcitrance as a cautionary tale. She’s also likely to become Tsuchikage herself at some point.”

“And the end result is?”

“She was probably thinking in terms of how she would make decisions as Tsuchikage,” you guess.

“Mifune,” Itachi-han picks another name. “The leader of the samurai of the Land of Iron.”

“The samurai value peace,” you reply calmly. “So his decisions would logically be aimed at maintaining peace, with particular emphasis on peace within and around the Land of Iron. That’s why they’ve negotiated settlements between hidden villages as neutral arbiters in the past.”

“Konan.”

“Like my own views,” you surmise, “though it’s probably harder for her, considering her past.”

“Shimura Danzō,” Itachi continues.

“The leader of that defunct ANBU unit in Konohagakure?” you muse. “He probably has himself convinced that his own power and welfare are in the village’s best interests, and that he knew better than the Third Hokage the whole time. At least that’d be my guess… I may be giving him too much credit.”

“Uchiha Itachi.”
>1/2
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>>4114556
“Well, let’s look at the evidence,” you sigh. “He killed off his clan, but he also left his brother alive. He then joined Akatsuki, an organization dedicated to peace despite its often violent means, as a child. As part of Akatsuki he saved the life of a teenaged genin and her teammate who got in over their heads, and replaced her ruined eye with a sharingan taken from one of his former clansmen.”

“This last point isn’t something most people would do without a reason,” you conclude, “which suggests that there are reasons for each of those other decisions.”

“The reasons are the same in each case,” Itachi-han replies grimly, sitting up to reveal his active Sharingan. “I merely wished to test my own power. I killed my entire clan for that sole reason, and left my brother alive in the hopes that he would become someone worthy of my attention. I joined Akatsuki for the prospect of fighting strong opponents who would be able to test my power. I saved your life, and gave you the Sharingan, out of interest in what you might do with that power one day… even at that point I already knew that you were Konan’s student, and you had my curiosity.”

“That’s one interpretation,” you admit, “and it’s internally consistent. But you overlooked one crucial detail.”

“And that would be?” he asks, his eyes narrowed.

>12

“You’ve had two chances to kill your former comrades from Konohagakure,” you point out. “It would have been simple to kill that chūnin at Hozuki castle, and doing so would have prevented them from getting Tsunade-han involved for certain. Killing them all shouldn’t have been hard for you either… same for Kakashi-han and the other jōnin instructors you fought in Konoha. You could have denied Konohagakure, the ones who placed a bounty on your head, valuable military assets on both occasions.”

“But instead of doing so you held back… not a single one of them is dead. Your clan you slaughtered almost to the last child, and you say you joined Akatsuki for the same reason: to test your power. So why commit a total slaughter in one instance, but avoid killing in the other two?”

>I don’t know why you did the things you did, but I doubt you’re some kind of psychopath.
>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
>I think you had another reason for what you did to your clan… but I won’t press you for it.
>Other?
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>>4114679
>>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
>>I think you had another reason for what you did to your clan… but I won’t press you for it.
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>>4114679
>>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
>>I think you had another reason for what you did to your clan… but I won’t press you for it.
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>>4114679
>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
this is the most likely answer that would get something out of him, the reason is a hunch at best
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>>4114679
>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
>I think you had another reason for what you did to your clan… but I won’t press you for it.
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>>4114679
>>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
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>>4114679
>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
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>>4114679
>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
>I think you had another reason for what you did to your clan… but I won’t press you for it.
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>>4114679
>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
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>>4114679
>>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
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>>4114679
>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
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>>4114679
>I merely wished to test my power
Point out hownbullshit that is, guy was anbu at like 10, he knows how strong he is
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>>4114679
>I don’t know why you did the things you did, but I doubt you’re some kind of psychopath.
>I may be proud of my skills, but I don’t enjoy killing. I don’t think you do either, Itachi-han.
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>>4114679
“I may be immensely proud of my skills,” you admit quietly, “and I may even enjoy showing them at times. But I don’t enjoy killing, or even causing death, so I avoid it where I can… even if it’s an obvious enemy.”

You lay back and place the medicine back over your eyes. “I think you’re the same way, Itachi-han. I don’t know why you killed your clansmen, and it’s not my business. But something must have happened… the world twists people like that sometimes.”

After a few moments, you hear Itachi do the same.
>1d6, high roll
>best three of four
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Fingers crossed at upping our SL with Itachi
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“I will admit,” Itachi tells you from the tatami. “You cannot trust much of what I say, as even when I tell the truth my reasoning is my own. And you were right… I am not the type to do anything without reason.”

“But one of the things I told you was true… that I am interested in you.”

“Is that so?”

“It is,” Itachi insists in an even tone, the hint of menace from just a few moments ago having disappeared. “I want to see what you do with the power you have attained… how long you can live by your philosophy.”

>Without a doubt, until I die.
>I don’t know. It’s kind of naive… but it’s worth trying, at least in my view.
>You’re talking like a jaded old man.
>Other?
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>>4115002
>I'll always do what i believe is right, even if it kills me. Whatever may be "right" however, i can't say until the time comes to choose.
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Well, step 1 to conceiving the god-child cleared, eat shit Hisashi
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>>4115002
>I'll always do what i believe is right, even if it kills me. Whatever may be "right" however, i can't say until the time comes to choose.
>You’re talking like a jaded old man.
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>>4115002
>>I'll always do what i believe is right, even if it kills me. Whatever may be "right" however, i can't say until the time comes to choose.
>>You’re talking like a jaded old man.
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>>4115002
>Without a doubt, until I die.
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>>4115002
>>I'll always do what i believe is right, even if it kills me. Whatever may be "right" however, i can't say until the time comes to choose.
Seems like a decent write in.
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>>4115028
Nobody can ever truly know until they're in the moment.
Even then, whether you realize it or not, you might have done the wrong thing. There are plenty of times people have done the best they could with what they knew, only to regret it later. Hindsight is 20/20, after all.

But your best, in the end, is all you can do.
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>>4115002
>>You’re talking like a jaded old man.
like your sword skills, deflect
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>>4115002
>Without a doubt, until I die.
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>>4115002
>>4115028
Fuck it changing my vote to this:
>Without a doubt, until I die.

I'd rather be succinct.
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>>4115002
>>Without a doubt, until I die.
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>>4115002
>Without a doubt, until I die.
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>>4115002
changing this>>4115021
to
>Without a doubt, until I die.
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>>4115002
“Until I die,” you reply calmly.

“And if the reality of Akatsuki were to betray your lofty ideals?”

You pause to consider his question. “Yeah no, I was told explicitly that ideologies may vary within Akatsuki. So if an individual member becomes a problem, I expect that Pain, Konan, and I would all be on the same page.”

“And if Akatsuki itself were to become a threat to peace instead?” Itachi-han presses.

“Then it would no longer be Akatsuki,” you counter. “I’d be sad to fight Konan-sensei of course, but as her student it’d be my responsibility to bring her to her senses. Don’t you think?”

This time it’s his turn to quietly consider your words.

“I agree.”

“Then let’s cut it out with this serious stuff,” you offer. “Or do you have some reason to think that it’s not all just hypothetical?”

>1d6, high roll
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For several seconds, neither of you speaks. But eventually Itachi-han does reply.

“Many current and former members of Akatsuki were recruited by force,” Itachi tells you. “Kakuzu and Orochimaru were each defeated by Pain. Deidara was defeated by myself. Sasori and my previous partner Juzo were defeated by Konan, while she, Kakuzu, and myself convinced Hidan to join.”

“You are somewhat unusual in that you were recruited by Pain and Konan by mutual agreement.”

“And what about the rest of you?” you ask.

“Pain and Konan were already in the organization,” Itachi continues. “However, they were not the ones who recruited Zetsu, Kisame, or myself.”

“But that’s already ten,” you observe. “All ten active Akatsuki are accounted for… so if it was none of the other seven, who would have been responsible for the three of you?”

“There is another ‘leader’ within Akatsuki, one who does not show his face,” Itachi-han informs you. “He recruited me after assisting in the… ‘Uchiha Incident’… calling Akatsuki ‘his’ organization. My understanding is that this third individual operates in cooperation with Pain and Konan.”

“But it’s not ‘his’ organization,” you counter. “Akatsuki was founded by three war orphans from my village: one died when the ‘original’ Akatsuki were destroyed, the other two are Pain and Konan-sensei.”

“Then this third must have joined afterwards promising to help rebuild Akatsuki,” Itachi-han postulates… and you have to admit it’s consistent with the results, since this mystery man brought in three of the ten current ‘active’ Akatsuki members.

“Do you have any idea who he is?”

“No,” he admits, still letting the herbal poultice do its work… his eyes must be in even worse shape than your own, yours feels as though it’s back to normal. Well, ‘normal’ for a borrowed Sharingan kept in check with fūinjutsu.

“He identifies himself as a man who should be dead, but I have no way of verifying or disproving that statement. I also know he possesses at least one Sharingan, though I have no evidence that would allow me to meaningfully interpret that fact. The Uchiha clan has a long and blood-soaked history relating to their eyes, stealing and killing for greater power. There also exist two kinjutsu which require the sacrifice of one eye, and a higher level of Sharingan which places even greater strain on the eyes.”

“The fact that I have only seen him with one eye on its own proves nothing. And I refuse to jump to speculation regarding his identity.”
>1/2
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>>4116208
“You seem wary of him,” you observe calmly.

“And I would warn you to be as well,” Itachi-han counters. “Take this all how you will.”

“You mentioned that you have your own reasons for doing things,” you agree. “So alright, thanks for the warning.”

>Change the subject
>Let the conversation end
>Other?
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>>4116271
>change the subject
Does he have any hobbies to do in his free time?
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>>4116271
So we know of the pupet of another pupet now IC. Not that by its self dose a lot for us right now.

>Let the conversation end

Honestly he has been talketive enough as is.
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>>4116271
>>Let the conversation end
this seems like a good point, the poultice has pretty much done the work in our eyes. If we don't cut it here he might do it for us
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>>4116271
>>Let the conversation end
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>>4116271
>Let the conversation end
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>>4116271
>>Change the subject

Who was Izumi to you?
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>>4116208
>Hey, thank you. Both for saving me that day, and for speaking with me now. I'd like to talk again in the future, if you'd be okay with that.
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>>4116271
>>4116282
>>4116397
I'd support that write in
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>>4116271
>Let the conversation end
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“Hey, thanks though,” you offer, setting aside the medicinal wrap. “For saving me that day, and for speaking with me today like this… whatever your reasons might have been.”

“I’d like to talk again in the future, if you’re okay with that.”

After a few moments, Itachi-han quietly agrees. “I wouldn’t be opposed.”

“Glad to hear it,” you smile. “Feel free to rest here as long as you need, I’ll be out in the garden.”



October soon passes into November, and eventually into December. The air turns cold, and the rain in Amegakure is often replaced by sleet.

“We have a new objective,” Pain declares as you and your fellow Akatsuki meet through the rings you were all assigned. “The current jinchūriki of the Six-Tails has been located, thanks to the information-gathering efforts of Itachi and Kisame.”

“At last,” Kakuzu grumbles, “our first real target.”

“Who’re the lucky team?” Deidara wonders aloud.

“I will be going,” Pain declares. “And Naori-san will be accompanying me.”

“Not Konan-sensei?” you wonder aloud.

“No,” Pain confirms. “And Sasori-san will not be accompanying us.”

“Man, that’s lame!” Hidan protests loudly. “All this time and you want me to sit here with my thumbs up my ass instead of going out there and bagging this jinchūriki?!”

“You will have your turn,” Konan-sensei insists sternly.

>Pain-han, are you sure about this configuration? Isn’t Konan-han your partner for a reason?
>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?
>Pain-han, we will need to discuss our respective abilities if we are to work as a team.
>I have no issues to raise. Let’s just get this done.
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>>4116630
>>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?
>>Pain-han, we will need to discuss our respective abilities if we are to work as a team.
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>>4116630
>>I have no issues to raise. Let’s just get this done.
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>>4116630
>>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?
>>Pain-han, we will need to discuss our respective abilities if we are to work as a team.
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>>4116630
>>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?
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>>4116630
>Pain-han, we will need to discuss our respective abilities if we are to work as a team.
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>>4116630
>>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?
>>Pain-han, we will need to discuss our respective abilities if we are to work as a team.
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>>4116630
>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?
>Pain-han, we will need to discuss our respective abilities if we are to work as a team.
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>>4116630
>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?
>Pain-han, we will need to discuss our respective abilities if we are to work as a team.

Pain soloed Utakata with the Six Paths in canon, so we're along for the obvious Sharingan/Chakra chains reasons to make his job easier. I am curious what Konan is up to though.

Also... I'm already cringing imagining how awkward the small talk with Pain is going to be.
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>>4116630
>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?
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>>4116630
>>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?
>>Pain-han, we will need to discuss our respective abilities if we are to work as a team.
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>>4116630
>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?
>Pain-han, we will need to discuss our respective abilities if we are to work as a team.
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>>4116630
>Pain-han, may I have an explanation as to why we are using an irregular team formation?

Thinking back, I seem to recall Konan had 3 elemental releases in the wiki but I can't recall her ever using them; only her paper. Were they used in some kind of technique for supporting Pain? Apart from just concealing his body I mean.

Trying to figure out if there was anything else especially relevant in their pairing, and that's the only other thing special about Konan I can think of.

Also, Konan must be very messed up from having to see zombie Yahiko like that all the time. Just a perpetual reminder of the worst day of her life.
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>>4117656
That seems to come from a databook, and the databooks say a LOT of stuff that never comes up in practice. And this is one of those situations, because Konan never uses elemental ninjutsu on-screen.

As for why they're a team, Konan is probably the only person in the world that Nagato actually trusts.
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>>4117663
Well, trust is important.

But those data book entries are still handy for fleshing out source material if you want to tread ground not explicitly covered in canon.
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>>4116630
“I have a question,” you admit.

Pain turns to face you directly. “Go ahead.”

“Why are we breaking the usual pairings?” you ask carefully. “Wouldn’t Konan-sensei be the more sensible partner for a mission this important?”

“I believe it is important that you see this battle,” Pain-han explains. “Your expertise in fūinjutsu would also be welcome, as we must ensure our first capture mission against a jinchūriki is a success.”

“Okay,” you agree. “I guess that’s reason enough, if you’re sure about it.”



The jinchūriki you and Pain are after was reported to be near the eastern coast of the Land of Fire, living in a constant state of vigilance to avoid being tracked down by the Land of Water to the east. In fact it’s closer to the ruins of Uzushiogakure than to Konohagakure, giving you plenty of breathing room on that front.

Pain-han explains it to you like this through the mouth of one of his Paths, the one with a long ponytail and a bar piercing through his nose that connects somewhere around his cheekbones: when you locate the jinchūriki with your sensory abilities Pain will use the body that is with you now to summon his other five Paths. At that point you are to stand by and observe the way Pain fights while gathering natural energy.

According to Pain, your only role in the actual combat will be to step in using Kongō Fūsa if you see a clear opening.

There’s even less small talk between you and Pain than between you and Sasori, meaning you arrive at the target area quickly but it feels slow.

“Here,” Pain insists sternly. “Your sensory ability… please use it centered on this location.”
>1d6, DC 9 (Moderate)
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You seat yourself in seiza, releasing a small cloud of black origami butterflies into the air through the Raikō Kenka seal on your left palm. As they spread into the wide coastal forest, you begin to gather senjutsu chakra.

Several minutes later, you close your eyes to see what you can ‘see’.



“There is a village near here,” you declare, reaching out and pointing southeast. “That direction, ten miles.”

“It’s of no consequence,” Pain declares. “Have you found the target yet?”

“Still sweeping the area,” you admit. “Working my focus northward.”

After a few more minutes, you open your eyes again. “There. One shinobi, jōnin-class, alone. I’m going to take a look through visual sensing.”

With your left hand forming the seal of confrontation, you release your Sharingan and move the relevant butterfly closer. The target is a young man in a blue kimono, with long brown hair that covers one of his eyes and comes down to around his jawline… a little longer in back.

“Target confirmed,” you declare. “He’s twelve miles away, north by northeast.”

The Animal Path takes a knee, placing his hand on the ground.

“Kuchiyose.”

In five puffs of smoke, the other five Paths appear: the one whose face you’re familiar with now as “Pain”, a bald one with a crown of spikes around his head, one with long hair down past his shoulders, one with slicked-back hair, and one with spiky hair and two lines of studs down his cheeks.

“Then let us go and greet him,” Pain suggests through his ‘familiar’ face, continuing the conversation as though that body had been here the whole time.
>2/3
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>>4118128
Also,
>1d6, high roll
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Utakata does not notice your approach until you’re practically right on him… or rather, he makes no effort to respond.

“The Six Tails’ jinchūriki…” Pain muses, announcing his presence as you take up a position in a nearby tree.

“You aren’t who I was expecting,” Utakata replies, maintaining his composure. “Who are you?”

“We are going to build a new world,” Pain’s ‘face’ as you’ve silently dubbed him declares. “For that, Akatsuki needs you… or rather, the power of the Tailed Beast within you.”

“So that’s it,” Utakata muses grimly.

“I’m taking you… Six Tails.”

One of the paths, the one with no hair and spikes on his head, fires a volley of what look like explosives propelled by combustion motors… that’s highly exotic technology, beyond even the realm of Sasori’s puppetry.

Utakata is forced to run to evade the explosions, each of which is more powerful than your own exploding tags by a fair margin.

As the dust clears, Utakata lets out a howl and begins to change… dark, violent chakra begins to envelop his body.

“Finally, you’re taking this seriously.”

Utakata doesn’t reply… you’re not sure that thing is even capable of replying. Instead it merely roars and attacks, projecting six tail-like tendrils of chakra towards the Paths of Pain. The six bodies immediately scatter, putting what seems to be a prearranged plan into motion.

The bald Path removes its hand, revealing a chain inside its arm that spawns more of those rocket-explosives.

The Path with the ponytail retreats to the treetops, summoning a giant chameleon which then fades from view.

The broad-shouldered, spiky-haired Path withdraws as well, summoning something you can’t quite make out even with your senjutsu and Sharingan-enhanced sight… which actually is intimidating on its own. Without it, you’d have trouble keeping up even this far.

Then the Pains go on the attack.

The long-haired Path charges, drawing a black rod about as big around as Umekiri’s saya and impales one of the ‘tails’ of chakra with it when Utakata tries to counter. It seems to pin the appendage in place, robbing it of its ability to move… so does it have actual fūinjutsu properties? Or is it simply disrupting the chakra, which comprises the entirety of what it’s pinning?
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>>4118175
Utakata responds by kneading chakra in his mouth, into a nature transformation that doesn’t seem familiar to you right away, before projecting it towards the long-haired Path. The Path with its hair slicked back steps into the shot with speed that rivals your own in this form, albeit without the Shunshin factored in, and the stream mostly disappears. A few droplets hiss and steam when they hit the ground, suggesting that this attack was intended to be corrosive.

Next the chameleon captures Utakata with its tongue, suddenly becoming visible again.

But no sooner are the words “it’s been captured” out of face-Pain’s mouth than Utakata morphs again, briefly turning from red to a deep, almost-black purple and slipping free of the giant chameleon’s grasp.

Utakata takes out both the long-haired Path and the slicked-back Path in taijutsu, before the chameleon tries to recapture him. In an instant he wraps his body around the chameleon’s tongue and burns it badly, causing it to dissipate in a large puff of smoke.

This is your chance.

>Hold back, see what the other Paths do with two of their number down.
>Step in, use genjutsu and senjutsu-enhanced kenjutsu to disorient Utakata.
>Step in with Kongō Fūsa… you’ve seen fūinjutsu counteract Utakata’s corrosion.
>Other?
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>>4118177
>Step in with Kongō Fūsa… you’ve seen fūinjutsu counteract Utakata’s corrosion.
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>>4118177
>>Step in with Kongō Fūsa… you’ve seen fūinjutsu counteract Utakata’s corrosion.
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>>4118177
>>Step in with Kongō Fūsa… you’ve seen fūinjutsu counteract Utakata’s corrosion.
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>>4118177
>>Step in with Kongō Fūsa… you’ve seen fūinjutsu counteract Utakata’s corrosion.
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>>4118177
>Step in with Kongō Fūsa… you’ve seen fūinjutsu counteract Utakata’s corrosion.
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>>4118177
>1d6, high roll
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>17
>Number One suddenly stops
>All of the blood

Writing.
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>>4118384
>And suddenly Naori was Aizen’s Mom.
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>>4118384
You spread a total of five glowing golden chains out in front of you using the Kongō Fūsa, and when you find that one has connected you terminate the other four. This lets you focus less of your attention on maintaining the materialized chakra chain and the fūinjutsu kneaded into it, and more on moving your senjutsu-enhanced body.

With a roar Utakata pulls against your chain with strength even exceeding your own in Sage Mode, pulling you towards him.

Well… if that’s how he wants it it’d only be polite to oblige.

>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eDvzOo6g790

In an instant Utakata’s side is ripped open, Umekiri trailing blood all the way back to his body.

You used the Kongō Fūsa to pull yourself towards him even faster, before using a Shunshin off a single foot, turning his attempt to take control of the battle into an amplified attack. In the moment of confusion after your initial attack lands you put your strength into pulling against the Kongō Fūsa again. This time you pull Utakata off his feet, swinging him around once, then faster a second time, before arcing him high into the air and slamming him into the ground with hammering force.

This time the ‘face’ Pain lands six precisely-aimed black rods, one through each of Utakata’s chakra ‘tails’, pinning him in place.

As he raises his head to try shooting another stream of corrosive water he’s hit in the chin by a senjutsu-enhanced Tenran shuriken, snapping his head up only to watch as dozens more explosives fall on him from the sky in a heavy bombardment.

You come to a stop, landing lightly on your toes after a backwards Shunshin near where ‘face’ Pain has decided to stand. You reasoned that he knows where it’s safe from his own attacks.

The resulting crater before you is deep, and at the bottom Utakata lies collapsed, having lost his chakra cloak and been mostly crushed beneath several bounders. Were he not a jinchūriki this probably would be the end of him.

“Shame about your two other Paths,” you mutter. “But it seems that we accomplished the...”

You stop mid-sentence as the two Paths, the long-haired one and the one who stopped or absorbed Utakata’s corrosive spray, rejoin you along with the other three Paths. So that’s summoning, blocking or absorbing, and one that revives the others, along with the shared ability to summon those black rods.

Pain’s six ‘Paths’ are turning out to be quite something. It’s no wonder Sasori considers them to be unmatched when all five are together, especially when he sets it up cautiously as he did against Utakata just now.
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>>4118427
“It was the right decision to recruit you,” ‘face’ Pain declares calmly. “Even though your style is immature, your raw power is delivered with a rare elegance befitting the daughter of an Oiran.”

“And I feel this is only the beginning.”

As you feel a faint ‘echo’ of your senjutsu chakra within Umekiri, a trickle flowing back into your body even as your yin chakra flows into her, you silently agree. There’s a lot left before your abilities fully mature, and you can blend them into a cohesive single style of combat. But your mastery of senjutsu is progressing even faster than you anticipated months ago upon joining Akatsuki, and Kongō Fūsa is proving to be an instinctive fit into your arsenal… albeit one which comes with some opportunity cost, as maintaining control while binding a target requires the use of one hand, harshly curtailing your options with the other.

And against particularly powerful targets, like jinchūriki or similar threats, there’s still a chance that you can be physically overwhelmed if you reduce the number of chains to maintain your mobility and battle awareness.

You’re still mulling over what you learned when Zetsu emerges from the ground to collect Utakata’s body.



There’s a hideout not far from where you captured Utakata, requiring you to walk across the short straits between the Land of Fire and the island which formerly was home to Uzushiogakure. But once there, Pain opens a sealed gateway in a stone cliff by the shore and leads you inside before closing the wall behind you.

In this dimly-lit cave, you find the same statue which you were introduced to in Amegakure, or perhaps a copy of it.

How strange.

Pain takes his place, as do you and Zetsu. Eventually the holographic images of the other Akatsuki.

“I see the mission went well,” Itachi-han observes dryly.

“Very,” Pain-han confirms. “And now begins the arduous task of sealing the beast. This will take three days.”

“Three days?” Kisame muses. “Better get comfortable then.”

“Naori-san,” Konan-sensei addresses you. “I would like to suggest you sit this sealing out and allow it to run its course without interference. Observe whether it kills Utakata and if so, deduce the mechanics at work which led to that outcome.”

“If one known murderer dies so that the other jinchūriki will survive, that I believe is a more than fair trade. And your chances of learning what you need to know are best if you approach this as a ‘control’ of sorts.”

>I agree entirely. I’ll remain an observer.
>Even if he’s a murderer, I plan to try to save him.
>Other?
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>>4118505
>>I agree entirely. I’ll remain an observer.
can't argue with needing a control sample, shit are we becoming orochimaru?
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>>4118505
>What IS his history sensei? What murders has he committed?
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>>4118515
Orochimaru would be using a control sample to improve his ability to do something horrible to people who don't deserve it. While I feel Naori is being asked to tread a line here, there's not a strong comparison to Orochimaru here.

Naori wants to save lives, and sometimes she will have to prioritize. Konan's argument is that she should prioritize jinchuriki who are decent people, or who are kids like Gaara and Naruto.
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>>4118505
>>I agree entirely. I’ll remain an observer.
We want peace with the least bloodshed possible, not necessarily specifically none. Sometimes you gotta crack an egg to make an omelette.
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>>4118505
>>Even if he’s a murderer, I plan to try to save him.
I'm more of a "learn through the experience" kind of person.
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>>4118505
>I agree completely
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>>4118505
Also
>the six-tails is now afraid of red heads
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>>4118505
>I agree entirely. I’ll remain an observer.
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>>4118505
>I agree entirely. I’ll remain an observer.
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>>4118505
>I agree entirely. I’ll remain an observer.
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>>4118505
>>I agree entirely. I’ll remain an observer.
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>>4118505
>>Even if he’s a murderer, I plan to try to save him.
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>>4118505
>Even if he’s a murderer, I plan to try to save him.
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>>4118505
>I agree entirely. I’ll remain an observer.
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>>4118505
>I agree entirely. I’ll remain an observer.

We're only going to get so many chances at this, so might as well make them count.

>>4118515
Orochimaru:
>has no friends
>no Sharingan
>uses his knowledge for selfish purposes
>crossdressing snake with an ass-bow

Naori
>has loads of friends
>has a Sharingan
>uses her knowledge to improve the world
>fabulous and elegant at all times

We make Orochimaru look like a BITCH.
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>>4118505
>I agree entirely. I’ll remain an observer.
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>>4118505
You’ve heard a little about Utakata, of course.

He’s wanted in his village after killing his former master, apparently in cold blood, and fleeing the country afterwards. Any attempts to capture him have been met with violence. While you don’t know the exact circumstances of his initial crime, you also know that the way Konan is presenting it you are balancing that life against the entire rest of the jinchūriki.

You know two of them now: Gaara possesses the One-Tail, Shukaku, and Uzumaki Naruto possesses the Nine-Tails, Kurama. If the Leaf considers the latter to be a secret they’ve done an immensely poor job keeping it, since Akatsuki has known about that since before you even joined. You had your own suspicions before that despite not having been told explicitly.

One of those two is trying to better himself, and seems to be succeeding to a surprising degree. The other is an idiot… but, it must be admitted, an idiot with a kind heart. If you were to weigh just those two lives against Utakata’s, you know who you would choose.

“I agree,” you bow politely in acknowledgement. “I suspect that is the unspoken reason Pain-han wanted to bring me along?”

There’s a pause before he replies. “Please make whatever preparations are necessary quickly.”



Between Sage Mode and your borrowed Sharingan, you’re able to watch what happens next from multiple angles, in minute, excruciating detail.

The Genryū Kyūfūjin, when observed from your respective fingertip on the statue, doesn’t look good. The nine blue dragons which emerged from the statue’s mouth to envelop Utakata’s body begin to draw out chakra like poison from a wound, feeding it back into the statue in glowing red globules which leak from Utakata’s eyes and mouth.

Over the next three days and nights you watch as the other members of Akatsuki take it in a rota to eat, drink, and nap, all while pouring their own chakra into the sealing technique. You notice that Itachi-han requires the most downtime, while you hardly notice Kisame letting up at all.

Close inspection shows what is actually happening inside Utakata’s body, and the reason why at the end of the three days, he falls dead to the floor of the cave.



“Even had I tried to intervene, I wouldn’t have been able to save him,” you admit.

That admission seems to surprise Konan-sensei, who asks you for clarification.
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>>4119500
“The fūinjutsu keeping Saiken inside Utakata was unusual,” you explain.

“How?” Hidan demands. “Come on, talk to us like we’re adults for cryin’ out loud!”

“Ordinarily a fūinjutsu formula merely acts as a barrier between regular spacetime and a ‘bubble’ formed out of a pocket formed from that same spacetime…” you begin.

“I’m out,” Hidan admits.

“… rather than creating and manipulate a new spacetime region, like a true space-time ninjutsu such as the Summoning technique does. Activating the seal with chakra triggers a pre-programmed set of transformations, which move the sealed target from one side of the sealing formula to the other through normal spacetime.”

“We know this already,” Itachi-han observes calmly.

“Yeah, course we do,” Hidan mumbles.

Itachi continues. “So where are you going with this?”

“The tailed beast sealing process doesn’t seem to work like that in two ways,” you explain. “First, the barrier of a typical fūinjutsu has to be impermeable or else it wouldn’t be stable long-term.”

“It would be inconvenient if weapons or chakra fell out of a sealing marking over time,” Konan-sensei agrees.

“Exactly,” you nod. “But this seal wasn’t. It was designed to be slightly permeable to chakra. The second difference is that this seal placed an entire living being into the jinchūriki’s chakra network. When a tailed beast is extracted it will normally kill the jinchūriki by destroying the chakra network it’s been bound to… chakra leaks out like a sieve, and the victim dies.”

“And that is why you could not save him?” Konan-sensei realizes.

You nod curtly, already preparing a scroll to seal Utakata’s lifeless body into. “I figured most of this out on day one, and had time to think. But coming up with a solution will take me weeks.”

“It’s a set of problems I didn’t realize existed before we started.”

“You said it will take weeks,” Konan-sensei presses. “Does that mean you have an idea?”

You’re mindful of what both Pain and Itachi-han have said… about the differences in ideology within Akatsuki, and the shadowy presence of an unseen member. You can’t be sure how responses to the sole solution you can think of, particularly from that unseen force, might vary. It’s entirely possible that if they know what’s involved they won’t let you do it.

>Yes, I believe that I can repair the seal and thus the damage to the chakra network (Lie)
>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a large amount of my chakra inside it (Half-Lie)
>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)
>Other?
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>>4119503
>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)
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>>4119503
>>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)
fuck this secret society bullshit, lets fight their evil schemes with open truth
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>>4119503
>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)
>Like couple of drops compared to an ocean that was there before.
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>>4119503
>>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)
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>>4119503
>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a large amount of my chakra inside it (Half-Lie)
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>>4119503
ignore this one, i go with the half lie option instead
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>>4119503
>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a large amount of my chakra inside it (Half-Lie)

This has a good chance of fucking up Zetsu/Tobi's plan, while still keeping to the plan that Naori was told; that is, concentrating the Tailed Beasts under Akatsuki's control.

We see from Nardo that Tailed Beasts are still super powerful even if split in half, so a small amount of chakra left in the former host won't result in a meaningful reduction in power.
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>>4119503
>>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a large amount of my chakra inside it (Half-Lie)

We’re playing a dangerous game.
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>>4119503
>>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a large amount of my chakra inside it (Half-Lie)
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>>4119503
>>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)
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>>4119503
>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)
>The tailed beasts are hardly lacking for chakra, so a small portion shouldn't be an issue.
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>>4119503
They should be fine with it iirc, they dont need the entire tailed beast to enact their endgame and they know it too, as shown in canon. Also, does Naori not know Fuu is a jinchuuriki?
>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)
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>>4119503
>>4119598

Seconding
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>>4119598
This plus
>It’s effectively a sliver of a sliver. A thumb tack compared to a Nodachi.
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>>4119503

>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)
Rather than draining a lake and killing all the fish, leave enough water so that the lake becomes a pond and some fish will survive
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>>4119503
>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)

Lying to people who are literally lie detectors in a couple cases is a bad idea. We also don't know how much Pain knows about his ritual, so he could well know enough to catch us out in a lie.
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>>4119503
>>Yes, by repairing the seal and placing a portion of the tailed beast chakra back inside (Truth)
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>>4119503
>will update later this evening
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>>4119503
You decide that in this case the truth is probably best, since you’re not sure it’s possible to hide what you’d be doing from literally the entire Akatsuki while they’re in the process of sealing the same target that you are… especially not from Pain’s Rinnegan. So you explain your thought process.

“Even if I fixed their seal a jinchūriki would still die after their tailed beast was removed,” you explain carefully. “So I would also have to seal something back into their chakra network to compensate for the lost tailed beast chakra.”

“Like what?” Konan-sensei asks curiously. “Senjutsu chakra?”

You shake your head. “Without the ability to control it, senjutsu chakra would only cause fatal internal damage in the amounts I’d need.”

“So… what then?” Hidan asks.

“I’d need to seal a portion of the tailed beast’s chakra back into its former host,” you declare. “That’s the only thing that’ll work.”

There’s a long pause.

“You’re talking about partially undoing all of our efforts,” Pain summarizes.

“And you’re talking about draining lakes,” you counter angrily. “I’m talking about filling a bathtub by comparison. Maybe a koi pond at most.”

To your surprise, it’s Sasori who speaks out next. “If taking the tailed beasts is to be considered an act of principle, then their lives should be spared if possible.”

“Sasori, my man?” Deidara asks, clearly as surprised as you. “Didn’t think we’d be hearing from you, let alone that you’d be taking Naori-kun’s side.”

“An act of principle should itself follow principles,” Sasori-han offers calmly. “Don’t you think?”

“There’s a ring of truth there,” Kisame agrees.

Eventually, Pain seems to agree. “Prepare the method for achieving this by the time of the next extraction and you may try it in practice. But remember that our mission must always come first.”

“Understood?”

“Of course, Pain-han,” you bow politely.

The ghostly images of the other Akatsuki disappear one by one, with Itachi then finally Konan-han disappearing last.
>1d6, high roll
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>You decide that in this case the truth is probably best, since you’re not sure it’s possible to hide what you’d be doing from literally the entire Akatsuki while they’re in the process of sealing the same target that you are… especially not from Pain’s Rinnegan. So you explain your thought process.
Well shit I completely failed to recognize that fact.
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Oh well harma for our fight with Pain.
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>>4120257
For the rest of December and into January you find yourself on standby, giving you some time to just be in Amegakure working. Your senjutsu prowess develops at roughly the rate you expected, although you have to admit that your progress with Umekiri has stalled. You’re now aware that the blade is indeed capable of storing natural energy, which means that “Okuni” has to be aware of it now. But you haven’t been able to trigger another one of those lucid dreams where you might be able to explain to her what you want her to try doing.

There’s one reason to be hopeful though, since it’s clear that your facial markings when you enter sage mode match the ones on the face of the girl you’ve seen in your dreams, which you have always assumed to be “Okuni”.

As for the sealing method you need to turn a jinchūriki into a pseudo-jinchūriki after their tailed beast has been extracted, it mainly relies on sealing chakra. So you take the time to bounce your ideas off the only other skilled fūinjutsu expert your age that you know. Between yourself and Ajisai you’re able to devise a new seal based on what you know of the old Uzumaki sealing styles that will reinforce an otherwise disrupted tailed beast sealing method, meaning that you should be able to shove the correct amount of the tailed beast’s chakra back into the seal and basically shove a proverbial cork in after it.

Perhaps not the most elegant solution in terms of its design, but certainly elegant in terms of its functional simplicity.

It’s also nice that you had the chance to work closely with Ajisai again… that’s not something that’s happened as often as you’d like.



One rainy afternoon, you seek out Sasori in the mossy woodlands outside the village.

He stares at you, a deeply calculating look, as you produce a wooden training sword from your Raikō Kenka seal.

“What is this?”

“A bokutō carved to exactly match Umekiri-maru’s length and balance,” you explain, carefully but swiftly testing those claims and finding them just as valid as you thought before when you’d finished carving and polishing it.

“I see,” Sasori-han muses. “Sparring, is that it?”

“Exactly,” you bow politely. “Sasori-han, I’d appreciate the assistance of your puppets. Are you familiar with the mu ren zhuang training technique?”
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>>4121634
“The wooden man?” Sasori-han asks. “I’m familiar.”

“Could you possibly design a puppet that replicates that functionality,” you ask.

“I already have several,” Sasori replies calmly. “Including mechanisms of the sui sau jong.”

A dummy with arms in positions mimicking attacks, as well as a turning mechanism with a sandbag designed to replicate counterattacks? “Sounds like a dream come true.”

“Why do you need them?”

Sasori’s question does have some merit, so you also reach behind your back and retrieve a stiff cloth guantlet that slides over your left wrist.

“I’m not used to chain weapons,” you admit, unsealing a length of weighted chain from the gauntlet. “And I’ve only briefly practiced in hojōjutsu. So I have no clear idea how to use a single-manifestation Kongō Fūsa in combat.”

“So you want to use my puppets to train?” Sasori asks.

“If it’s not too much trouble.”
>1d6, best three of four
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See the chain, feel the chain, think the chain, become the chain!
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The first two days of continuous training are intense.

After getting a feel for how the Kongō Fūsa will be naturally inclined to move in three dimensions, and how it responds to your input, you start to devise ways of incorporating it into your kenjutsu. At first Sasori’s puppets can occasionally get in a blow, or take your back, or pull off various movements and combinations that not only count as “wins” for him but call attention to what you may be doing wrong in terms of your approach to combat.

But you manage to refine your movements by the second day, and by the third day you’ve started to determine what Kongō Fūsa should look like in use.

Its most useful trait, aside from a successful binding of the opponent and their chakra, is actually in terms of spacing and control. When you move your opponent moves, and how you move the Kongō Fūsa determines how your opponent responds. Using those principles you gain a better measure of control over the angles and distances Sasori-han’s puppets can engage you from. You even learn that the ideal way to close the distance can sometimes be anchoring the Kongō Fūsa and pulling yourself towards your target, using a hirazuki flat thrust entirely with upper body strength.

You also learn that by grasping the chain with only a four foot length or less, you can spin it rapidly enough to form a barrier ninjutsu technique capable of repelling physical attacks and disrupting transformed chakra. You still take any physical force from the attack, and an attack can absolutely go around the edge of the disk-shaped barrier, and you have to believe that there’s a point of failure to this barrier as with any other technique. But its potential usefulness can’t be overstated.

In addition to these two functions, you start to put more finesse into your control to use what few hojōjutsu techniques you’re familiar with in practice. Mostly this involves getting control of one or both arms, then wrapping the chain around a target’s neck. This is capable of total incapacitation of a target using just a single Kongō Fūsa chain, though in practice with an opponent who is violently resisting it’s a lot trickier to pull off. You develop two broad “end states” for this technique: one for male targets, and one for females which avoids crossing or inappropriately “framing” the breasts.

For his part, Sasori seems to actually be improving his control as well… as if something long-dormant within suddenly awoke as you started fighting.

By the morning of day eight, you’re treated to a bizarre sight.
>1/2
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>>4121718
>one for females which avoids crossing or inappropriately “framing” the breasts.
Come on Naori, release your horny.
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>>4121718
“So that’s your actual face, Sasori-han?” you muse, seeing your partner in Akatsuki outside his armored puppet for the first time.

“With Hiruko I’m essentially using puppets through another puppet,” Sasori-han explains, this time in a more youthful tone which matches better with his new face. “I’ve seen what you can do firsthand… you’re both artist and medium in one. So if I want to give you a proper canvas, I’ll have to actually start trying.”

“I appreciate the consideration,” you reply with a smile, raising your training sword. “Just be careful not to try too hard and end up poisoning me.”



After three more days of training you think you have a new series of hybrid kenjutsu-kusarijutsu forms more or less fully fleshed-out. If you consider Baki to be an “average” jōnin, you can probably use just this style to take on ten or more jōnin without too much difficulty, barring any more exotic techniques that can overcome the massive advantage knowing how to weaponize the Kongō Fūsa places you at.

“Fantastic,” Sasori-han praises you as you both seat yourselves to relax after a particularly intense bout. “When I joined Akatsuki I had hoped to find an artist of this caliber… but beyond Konan I found little to interest me.”

>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
>Who even ARE you, Sasori? Like where do you come from?
>Why did you back me up on the pseudo-jinchūriki issue? Pain’s reservations were logical.
>Other?
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>>4121767
>Why did you back me up on the pseudo-jinchūriki issue? Pain’s reservations were logical.
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>>4121767
>>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
>>Who even ARE you, Sasori? Like where do you come from?
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>>4121767
>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
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>>4121767
>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
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>>4121767
>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
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>>4121767
>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
>Who even ARE you, Sasori? Like where do you come from?

>Naori's face when she realizes Pain stuck us with Sasori so we could be Team Ginger.
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>>4121767
>Why did you back me up on the pseudo-jinchūriki issue? Pain’s reservations were logical.
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>>4121767
>>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
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>>4121767
>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
>Who even ARE you, Sasori? Like where do you come from?


>Naori's face when she realizes Pain stuck us with Sasori so we could be Team Ginger. And that's fine as they both are shells with no souls. (JK)
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>>4121767
>>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
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>>4121767
>Why did you back me up on the pseudo-jinchūriki issue? Pain’s reservations were logical.
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>>4121767
>>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
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>>4121767
>Explain your own art to me, briefly.
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>>4121767
“Explain your own art to me,” you ask, taking a moment to relax. “Give me the short and simple version.”

A few moments later, Sasori-han begins to tell you the story of who he is, and how he got to be here.

“I was about your age when I left my village, nearly twenty years ago,” he explains. “My parents were killed in the Third World War, as was the one friend I had growing up. My only living relative would be granny Chiyo… assuming the old bag is still alive.”

“I already knew how to make human puppets when I left Sunagakure. The first was my own best friend… an outgoing boy but a mediocre shinobi at best, who accidentally poisoned himself with the prosthetic arm I made for him.”

“A human puppet?” you repeat, not quite understanding what that entails.

“It requires removing the internal organs of a corpse and reinforcing the body, creating a puppet that preserves the abilities its materials possessed in life. It’s a natural evolution of the Hitomi Gokū technique which uses chakra threads to control a corpse, or in some cases even the living body of a weakened human enemy.”

Controlling corpses… you assume that technique would have come into being on a battlefield, where a puppeteer had run out of usable puppets and was forced to improvise using whatever was on hand.

“How many human puppets have you made?”

You’re not even sure what made you ask the question, or why you got an actual response.

“More than two hundred and fifty. Those include Hiruko, once a powerful shinobi of my village who was sent to kill me after I defected, and the former Third Kazekage. I also have two former Uchiha clansmen, with fully mature Sharingan.”

“So you’re saying my dōjutsu is weaker than two of your puppets?” you muse. “That’s… unnerving.”

>Hang on… how many of those “corpses” were people you killed?
>Hang on… are you planning to make ME into a puppet some day?
>Hang on… how did you “get” the Third Kazekage and two Uchiha?
>Other?
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>>4123566
>Hang on… how did you “get” the Third Kazekage and two Uchiha?
>I understand the what of your art, but the why still eludes me.
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>>4123568
>>4123566
supporting this, including
>Hang on… are you planning to make ME into a puppet some day?
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>>4123566
>I understand the what of your art, but the why still eludes me.
asking about yourself feels like a track to end this conversation, we got him onto a cadence, keep him on it
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>>4123566

>Hang on… are you planning to make ME into a puppet some day?
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>>4123570
>>4123576
You guys really want to fuck up the convo this early? It’s like directly asking Itachi why he killed his family. It’s a convo ended.
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>>4123578
self preservation is a question any sane character would have, it can still be the last question
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>>4123566
>"Chiyo's still alive last I saw her..."
>Hang on… are you planning to make ME into a puppet some day?
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>>4123591
Supporting
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>>4123591
>Hang on… how did you “get” the Third Kazekage and two Uchiha?
>Chiyo is still alive, last i saw her
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>>4123581
It also is a slap in the face as it blatantly screams we do not trust him.
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>>4123566
>Hang on… how did you “get” the Third Kazekage and two Uchiha?
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>>4123775
fair point
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>>4123566
>>Hang on… are you planning to make ME into a puppet some day?
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>>4123786
>>4123617
>>4123591
>>4123576
>>4123570
Seriously why are we slapping him in the face off the bat?
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>>4123817
You are taking this too seriously. And there's always time for reflection about what you want to happen to your corpse when you die.
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If anyone here either hasn't voted yet or is considering changing their vote, please do so. It's currently tied (at the time I'm writing) and I'd like to start on the next update.
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>>4123570
>>4123566
i still support the mentioned vote and the write in, but ignore the question about making naori a puppet, if it gets us out of the tie, i am fine with just that
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>>4123566
>>4123825

voting against asking about making us into a puppet
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>>4123844
That's not how this works.

I'm going with the current winner, which is asking about the Kazekage and the Uchiha.
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>>4123566
“She’s alive, last I checked,” you reply, before a thought occurs to you. “Wait, how did you ‘get’ the Third Kazekage and two Uchiha?”

“The Third Shinobi World War lasted for three years after I left Sunagakure,” Sasori explains, “and at the time, the Uchiha clan was still in full form. Even some of the great heroes of the clan from the time of the First World War were still alive.”

“From the first war?” you repeat. “That would have been… what, thirty years before?”

“Uchiha Naori only passed two years before the rest of her clan,” Sasori adds as an aside. “At seventy-five. When she was born, a shinobi would be fortunate to last for twenty.”

“So you killed two Uchiha in battle?” you ask to confirm.

Sasori-han nods. “Yes. Of course, to not turn them into human puppets would be wasteful.”

“Can you see through them?”

“I can see through Hiruko, can’t I?”

“You know what? Fair point.”

“As for the Third Kazekage, I’ll confess that was something of a personal grudge of mine,” Sasori-han continues. “It was his fault that our nation got involved in the Third World War in the first place… which makes many other things his fault as well.”

“So even if I did not want his Magnet Release as a tool, I would have wanted him dead.”

“You have an interesting sense for ‘materials’,” you frown. “I can’t really say I agree with you.”

“I suspected you would say that, Raishō Naori-san,” Sasori-han admits rather nonchalantly. “And I will admit, my own works lack something that I cannot recreate or preserve… immortality is something many powerful shinobi contemplate as they grow older.”

“Kakuzu, myself, and Orochimaru are prime examples.”

“You wanted to turn yourself into a puppet,” you realize.

“And I succeeded,” Sasori-han informs you calmly.

It takes you a few moments to digest that revelation. “You actually did it?”

Sasori-han nods, before rolling up his sleeve to show you his wrist joint.

“… how?”
>1/2
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>>4123910
“I removed my heart and implanted it into a puppet body I prepared,” he informs you.

“… how?” you repeat.

After a moment, Sasori offers his response. “Carefully.”

“This left me somewhere in-between,” Sasori continues. “Neither fully like my immortal puppets, nor fully mortal like other humans. Orochimaru I gather has corroded as a human, sacrificing of himself in more ways than the physical. Kakuzu has also become something inhuman in his quest for immortality.”

“The weakness of my puppets, which I referred to before, was my inability to preserve the soul. It is your soul which gives your ‘art’ meaning. That is something I can respect.”

>Thanks, I suppose.
>I guess I can understand… I don’t like it, but I can understand it.
>I still don’t really understand where you’re coming from. Maybe I’m just too young.
>Other?
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>>4123917
>>Thanks, I suppose.
That's cute.
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>>4123917
>>I guess I can understand… I don’t like it, but I can understand it.
>Thank you though, i think.
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>>4123917
>>Thanks, I suppose.
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>>4123917
>Thanks, I suppose.
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>>4123917
>Thanks, I suppose.
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>>4123917
>I guess I can understand… I don’t like it, but I can understand it.
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>>4123917
>>Thanks, I suppose.
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>>4123917
>>Thanks, I suppose.
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>>4123917
>>Thanks, I suppose.
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>>4123917
“Well… thanks, I guess,” you reply. “I’ll take that as a compliment.”

“It was intended as such.”

>1d6, high roll
>best three of four
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>>4124163
Over the next several weeks, moving into January, a few things happen. The first is that you’re informed through Pain that Yagura, the current Mizukage, has died. That’s a bit of a complicating factor since he was also a jinchūriki, meaning his tailed beast Isobu is now back in the proverbial wild. Since it’s a creature of pure chakra Isobu technically can’t “die”, but it will take a while to re-form. Until then Akatsuki will have to be on the lookout for that moment, as it should go without saying that all the major shinobi nations and Orochimaru will be scrambling to capture Isobu as well.

There’s another development: your senjutsu skills advance to the point where you’d be comfortable using them in battle without first taking prep time. Essentially, it’s now a usable technique for you.

You also start to play around with natural energy while in Sage Mode, learning that you can affect its flow outside your body. It really is everywhere in the environment around you… specifically, in the earth and in the wind. It’s as if the entire world is alive on a fundamental level.

Now that you think about it, while you’re in Sage Mode there’s really no reason not to harness that.

>Focus on trying to manipulate those qualities in Earth
>Focus on trying to manipulate those qualities in Wind
>Try to “sacrifice” natural energy to the Edo Tensei.
>Other?
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>>4124254
>>Focus on trying to manipulate those qualities in Wind
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>>4124254
>>Try to “sacrifice” natural energy to the Edo Tensei.
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>>4124254
>>Try to “sacrifice” natural energy to the Edo Tensei.
nothing ventured, nothing gained.
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>>4124254
>>Try to “sacrifice” natural energy to the Edo Tensei.
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>>4124254
>>Focus on trying to manipulate those qualities in Wind
Walk before you run.
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>>4124254
>sacrifice to Edo tensei
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>>4124254
>>Focus on trying to manipulate those qualities in Wind
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>>4124254
>Try to “sacrifice” natural energy to the Edo Tensei.
want
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>>4124254
>Try to “sacrifice” natural energy to the Edo Tensei
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>>4124254
Alright, time to knock out for the evening. Please pick exactly ONE of the three following options to revive and speak to:

>Utakata (The Six-Tails Jinchuriki)
>Tenran (Naori's mother)
>Uchiha Izumi (The source of Naori's Sharingan)
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>>4124324
>Tenran (Naori's mother)

I need some feels
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>>4124324
>>Tenran (Naori's mother)
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>>4124324
>>Tenran (Naori's mother)
while I'm also interested in what Izumi might have to say, I figure this is more apt
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>>4124324
>Uchiha Izumi (The source of Naori's Sharingan)
Not ready for that one
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>>4124324
Definitely not Utakata. Last thing we want is for him to go berserk on our ass.
Izumi is alright, but we don't know how she will react since she probably died violently.

Her mother seems to be the safest one.

>Tenran (Naori's mother)
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>>4124324
>>Tenran (Naori's mother)
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>>4124324
>>Tenran (Naori's mother)
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>>4124324
>Tenran (Naori's mother)

The other options are a man we murdered, and someone who was murdered by our... friend/coworker, who then took parts from her corpse and basically replaced her with Naori.
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>>4124324
>>Tenran (Naori's mother)
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>>4124324
>Tenran (Naori's mother)
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>>4124324
>>Tenran (Naori's mother)
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>>4124324
>>Uchiha Izumi (The source of Naori's Sharingan)
I'd rather not guinea pig our mom, but...
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You have everything you need at your fingertips. It’s a little distasteful, but simple enough to do with a little time. For you, it takes three days to get it right.

“Kuchiyose: Tensa Jōdo Tensei!”

By redrawing the Edo Tensei sealing key into a new scroll, but also creating a seal at its center into which you can coax natural energy before smearing a “sample” from the person you wish to summon, you create a work-around that only a Sage could possibly use. You have Kijani on hand for the occasion, since you can see some potential differences between your “Pure” version and the original Edo Tensei.

However, all those details and precautions are momentarily forgotten as the seal spreads across the Ame shrine’s kagura dancing stage, where you’ve decided to perform this technique away from even the local priests’ usual routines.

Dust and ash begin to cling to the invisible framework of natural energy, into the shape of a human whose features soon come into view. A familiar face, framed by familiar red hair, and clad in a rather revealing black dress, as though your most cherished memory has been projected into the world and had life breathed into it.

“… mom?”

Uzumaki Makoto, “Tenran”, looks towards the sound in confusion. It takes a moment for the situation to even begin to register, by which point you’ve already embraced her.

“… Naori? Is that… how can this be?”

You hear Kijani cough somewhere behind you.

“Oh!” you realize abruptly. “I almost forgot… mom, this is Kijani. Kijani, this is my mother Tenran.”

“An unexpected pleasure,” Kijani greets your mother, extending his neck to expose the contract scroll. “Mom, I don’t know how much time I have to explain, but I need you to sign this real quick.”

“This is a summoning scroll?” she realizes, even as she takes the brush you had ready for her and does as you requested. “You have summoned me… using the Second Hokage’s reanimation technique? Naori...”

“I know what you’re thinking,” you quickly reply. “And no, it’s only based on his technique.”

“Let me get a better look at you,” Tenran insists after signing the contract. “Your eyes are different… one is not your own, and both have those markings. Not tattoos… I can feel something is different, but it is unfamiliar. This chakra of yours…. is it?”

“Senjutsu,” you confirm. “Instead of a living sacrifice, I gathered natural energy and created your body around that.”
>1/3
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>>4125279
“Incredible...” Tenran marvels at herself, at your handiwork, turning her arms and looking down at her own body. “The soul must have some sort of residual memory of sorts that facilitates a perfect reproduction of the body as in life… not distorted by the frailty or subjectivity of the human mind. And you created this technique specifically to avoid having to sacrifice another life?”

You nod. “Well, duh. I’m not gonna kill someone like that. I’ve known how to do this the wrong way for ages.”

This time it’s her turn to embrace you instead. “I can tell your life has been difficult… but it makes me happy to know that your heart has not been changed.”

“So you have become a Sage!” she abruptly changes topics. “I assume you learned that from your summoning clan?”

“The Shrikes, yes,” you nod in confirmation. “I also have Umekiri-maru, the sword you gave to dad.”

“… is that what that is?” Tenran’s smile fades somewhat. “I take it you have met Okuni then?”

“So you did as well?”

Your mother nods, encouraging you to sit on the edge of the stage next to her. “I was aware of her… so you have made contact with survivors from Akatsuki? Who?”

“One calling himself Pain, and Konan,” you explain. “Konan became my sensei as a genin… for how long that lasted.”

“Konan...” Tenran muses to herself. “And Pain, you said? An assumed name, but for whom I cannot say without having met him. Many things could have happened since Hanzō’s betrayal, and if Konan-han hasn’t told you who Pain is I doubt I would be of much help.”
>2/3
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>>4125281
Upon a close inspection of how this technique is working in practice, you find that it actually requires you to constantly balance and replace natural energy within your mother’s reincarnated body. Were you to leave Sage Mode for any reason the summoning would certainly end within a few seconds, and while the demand on your stamina is negligible it does take some awareness on your part. The more summons like this you have active at any time the harder it will be to focus on anything else, to the point where there’s likely a hard cap on how many things you can divide your attention between.

You could probably use shadow clones for micromanagement, to a certain degree, but there would be a limit to the number of shadow clones you could create and still be able to stay in Sage Mode… for you, that limit is probably two and you would be limited in terms of the maximum amount of chakra your real body could use at once...

“You seem distracted,” Tenran smiles at you. “Trying to work out the exact limitations of this technique, no doubt?”

“Of course,” you sigh. “I forgot you can practically read minds… that used to annoy me so much when I was little.”

“I know,” Tenran keeps right on smiling. “You were a child, and children are easily annoyed. They also forget to be annoyed just as readily, so it balanced out.”

“So, how can I help?”

“Hm?” you reply blankly, not having expected her to be this forward.

“Come now,” Tenran huffs playfully. “I know you did not summon me for my keen battle prowess.”

“Getting to come back from the Pure Lands to help your daughter in need is a rare opportunity, so by all means, tell me how I can help you.”

>Uzumaki Makoto… I wanted to thank you, for all that you did for me without my knowing.
>I have some reservations about the current Akatsuki that I’d like your advice about.
>I wanted your help in determining how… and WHETHER… to use this technique in the future.
>Other

Note that these are NOT mutually exclusive. Vote for any and all of them that you feel like saying.
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>>4125283
>>Uzumaki Makoto… I wanted to thank you, for all that you did for me without my knowing.
>I have some reservations about the current Akatsuki that I’d like your advice about.
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>>4125283
>Uzumaki Makoto… I wanted to thank you, for all that you did for me without my knowing.
>I have some reservations about the current Akatsuki that I’d like your advice about.
>I wanted your help in determining how… and WHETHER… to use this technique in the future.
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>>4125283
All of it, in order
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>>4125283
To clarify the differences OOC between Naori's Tensa Jodo Tensei and the Edo Tensei:
>Sage Mode is required instead of a living sacrifice
>Naori's summons are about as close to original power and appearance as Kabuto's
>Naori's limitations on numbers are similar to Tobirama's
>Naori's version requires negotiation with the reincarnated person, or subduing them in a fight
>Souls that Naori summons return straight to the Pure Land upon release and can't be stored long-term
>Naori can re-summon any souls she has a contract with much more easily, though she should be mindful of how often she does so as it IS still a violation of nature every time
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>>4125283
>>Uzumaki Makoto… I wanted to thank you, for all that you did for me without my knowing.
>>I have some reservations about the current Akatsuki that I’d like your advice about.
>>I wanted your help in determining how… and WHETHER… to use this technique in the future.
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>>4125294
So it's closer to demon/devil summoning from pen and paper, without the inherent evil of those summoned
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>>4125297
It's a lot closer to just plain Summoning in this setting, though with a mechanical difference that's necessary to get a soul rather than a living being.

You also see a very similar technique being used by the Sage of Six Paths, who probably just uses Yin-Yang release to create bodies for the previous Kages' souls from nothing instead of compressing natural energy into a form.
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>>4125283
>>I wanted your help in determining how… and WHETHER… to use this technique in the future.
>>Uzumaki Makoto… I wanted to thank you, for all that you did for me without my knowing.
>>I have some reservations about the current Akatsuki that I’d like your advice about.
the order is the priority
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>>4125283
>>Uzumaki Makoto… I wanted to thank you, for all that you did for me without my knowing.
>>I have some reservations about the current Akatsuki that I’d like your advice about.
>>I wanted your help in determining how… and WHETHER… to use this technique in the future.
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>>4125283
>Uzumaki Makoto… I wanted to thank you, for all that you did for me without my knowing.
>I have some reservations about the current Akatsuki that I’d like your advice about.
>I wanted your help in determining how… and WHETHER… to use this technique in the future.
>Other: One more thing....How did you meet dad?
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>>4125283
“I wanted to thank you,” you begin by admitting, “for all the things I didn’t know enough about to thank you for when I had the chance.”

“Is that so?” your mother asks quietly. “Naori… could you be referring to my given name?”

You nod. “Yeah… I learned that last year.”

“I wrote my name as Uzumaki Makoto in your scroll,” your mother admits with a slight smile. “Had you not learned it I intended to tell you now. I see that was not necessary.”

“There are other reasons of course,” you admit, “and other things this gives us a chance for.”

“Such as?”

“I’d like to try figuring out how, and actually whether for that matter, I should use this technique in the future,” you add cautiously. “Working out its exact mechanics, that sort of thing. I also wanted your advice on the current Akatsuki.”

“Is that so?” she wonders aloud. “Do you have some concerns about them as they exist today?”

You nod quietly. “No, yeah… they’re what you could call an ‘interesting’ bunch. But before that, there are some things I’d like to determine.”



Over the next hour or so, you work to establish a few baselines.

By your mother’s own estimations her techniques are perhaps ninety percent as strong as they would have been when she was still among the living, and none of her attacks require you to provide her with more chakra beyond what it takes to maintain her presence… so in other words, it’s negligible. She feels no pain when she takes damage, and you eventually worked up the courage to take an arm off without even causing her to flinch. Furthermore, her body actually regenerates at a surprising rate after you do so, something she showed evidence for the first time you tested if she could feel pain.

Her abilities, which she can use in their entirety, are mostly water release and genjutsu with a strong focus on supportive techniques. She can also perform a fūinjutsu you never knew about that seals elementally-transformed chakra or naturally-occurring material into a tag, as well as a simple but effective tag-based barrier. As for the Kongō Fūsa, she has to admit reluctantly that her own mother never taught her how to use it, but her sensing ability is every bit as sharp as yours… maybe even approaching Karin’s.

Funny… you’ve learned that your mother is more powerful and versatile than most of the students you took the chūnin exams with despite being literally dead.
>1/2
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>>4125666
“There’s one last thing we should figure out,” you eventually decide. “Whether I can ‘dismiss’ you and resummon you using the normal summoning technique. But before that… Akatsuki.”

“Of course,” your mother nods with a sad smile. “Please tell me what has you so concerned.”



“That is certainly concerning,” she eventually admits after you tell her everything. “Akatsuki were always considered subversive, but to actively recruit S-ranked criminals is a very different way of viewing the organization and its priorities.”

“So the original members, like dad, were there for ideological reasons?” you ask.

She nods. “Yes… they were there because they found the three orphans who trained under Jiraiya of the Sannin compelling. People believed in their message and lent Akatsuki their strength.”

“There are still some believers,” you offer a defense, “and gathering the tailed beasts does follow the original reasoning and message, don’t you think?”

“Especially if your method of creating a pseudo-jinchūriki works as intended,” your mother agrees. “Though you must be wary… I have seen how you do things. You care deeply about doing them the right way, and it makes me immeasurably proud to see that from my daughter.”

“But please remember… yours is the ideology that Akatsuki should have. They are the ones who should be compromising for you, as Pain has for the pseudo-jinchūriki technique. Not the other way around.”

“Thank you again, mom...” you embrace her one more time. “For having faith in me.”

“It is hardly faith when you have proof,” she replies with a slight grin. “Now, one more experiment.”



As it happens, you can summon your mother normally from the Pure Lands without the scroll, and she remembers everything that happened.

“This time, it’s goodbye for real,” you admit. “At least for a while. This… is probably the hardest thing I’ve ever done, you know.”

“Do not let it weigh on you,” Uzumaki Makoto tells you calmly, gently brushing your hair with her hand as you hold each other for a moment longer. “I cannot feel my daughter in my arms, I cannot smell the rain or the flowers, I could not taste a home-cooked meal nor would I have need of it. In this form the only pleasure I can know is that of helping you accomplish an important task.”

“That is a wonderful and fulfilling thing, to be here for you when you need me… but it is not life. And letting go of me is not the same as forsaking me."
>2/3
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>>4125712
You cry your eyes out that night.

Even knowing that it was the right thing to do, even hearing again in your mother’s own words that she’ll always have you in her heart even on the “other side”, and this time knowing that the “other side” isn’t just something the adults told you about to soften the blow, it’s not easy to let go of something so important to you for a second time.

But perhaps you’ve come through stronger for having done so.



“So that is what we require at this time,” Pain explains at the end of the next meeting of Akatsuki’s membership. “Naori-san, you are the sole member who could pass as a jōnin-sensei from Amegakure. The plan is for you to infiltrate these chūnin exams with that in mind, to ensure our success.”

“And that the teams we send do not end up arousing suspicion,” Konan-sensei adds. “Do you understand?”

>It’s only a question of who the teams will be.
>What should I do if there are… “complications”?
>No questions.
>Other?
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>>4125722
>What should I do if there are… “complications”?
oh, we teacher now
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>>4125722
>It’s only a question of who the teams will be.
>What should I do if there are… “complications”?
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>>4125722
>>What should I do if there are… “complications”?
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>>4125722
>>What should I do if there are… “complications”?
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>>4125722
>>It’s only a question of who the teams will be.
>>What should I do if there are… “complications”?
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>>4125722
>What should I do if there are… “complications”?
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>>4125722
>>What should I do if there are… “complications”?
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I'm confused. I know we like our mom and all but if we really wanted info on akatsuki why didn't we just summon our dad instead of asking our mom about what dad would know?
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>>4125863
cause we still don't know who that is and don't have any cell samples to use in the summoning?
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>>4125863
See >>4125869
The "distasteful" bit mentioned in the narrative is that Naori had to basically rob her mother's grave to get a sample of her DNA. Since she has no idea where her father is buried, summoning him is currently impossible.
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>>4125869
for some reason I thought we did
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>>4125871
Okay thanks for the clarification.
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>>4125722
“And if there are any complications?” you ask. “I assume that maintaining my cover has a high priority, but where does it stand compared to sensing out powerful chakras?”

“Mission security will be rated as the first priority,” Konan declares.

“What?” Kisame muses. “Why would that be?”

“Because at the moment the world does not know that Akatsuki is based out of Amegakure,” Pain explains. “If Naori is discovered to be a member of Akatsuki, it would raise suspicions that the two are linked… and we would lose a useful albeit secondary base of power.”

“Siphoning off funds from Amegakure helps us undercut other villages and still remain financially solvent,” Kakuzu adds in a harsh growl. “The current mission ranking system is intended as a low margin high volume profit model that we simply cannot replicate, so were we to take nothing but regular missions we would never be able to amass funds. That is why we use Amegakure’s profits to meet our costs.”

“Yeah, yeah, we get it,” Hidan grumbles. “As usual.”



You ditch the Akatsuki outfit for the first time in months, exchanging it for an Amegakure flak jacket, along with mesh shorts and a slightly longer kimono top instead of a skirt. Honestly, it’s not quite as cute but it feels a little more comfortable. You also pick three weaponized parasols, and take your headband out of its drawer in your quarters before meeting with the genin teams that will be participating this year.



“So you’re our ‘jōnin’?” Ajisai smiles faintly. “Good to have you back for a while.”

“You ready for this, everyone?” you ask, glancing deliberately in Karin’s direction.

She nods curtly. “This time… yes. I’m ready for anything!”

“Well, maybe not everything,” you chuckle. “Nara Shikamaru’s supposedly running the first exam.”

“That shadow guy from Konoha?” Karin asks you. “Why’s that a big deal?”

“Because he was smart enough to ace the written exam without cheating,” you grin wickedly. “It’s gonna be fun to see what he comes up with ~ !”
>1/2
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>>4126133
Your arrival in Konohagakure reminds you why you like the place so much. Bright sun, a nice cool breeze, not a cloud in the sky. It seems to make a lot of your genin uncomfortable, so once you check them into their hotel rooms most of them stay right where they are instead of going out.

You, on the other hand, make a beeline for food.

“My, it’s been a long time!” Ayame greets you with a beaming smile as you grab a stool. “What brings you back to Konoha? Or… am I allowed to know?”

“I’m escorting a bunch of chūnin candidates,” you reply, snapping your chopsticks apart. “Including some of my friends from the academy.”

“They didn’t want to come out with you?”

“It’s been a long trip,” you shrug. “And a lot of them aren’t too used to this much sunlight. I might be able to coax a few of ‘em out of hiding for lunch tomorrow.”

“I had no idea you were going to be here!” another familiar voice greets you.

“Temari!” you recognize the kunoichi immediately as she grabs the stool next to you. “So you’re here as part of the joint exams too, huh?”

“I’ll be proctoring the second stage,” she explains. “So I’m here to join Shikamaru in overseeing the first… someone has to make sure he doesn’t slack off completely.”

Her outfit has changed dramatically since the last time you saw her… a simple black yukata with a red obi that wraps around her waist and holds her sleeves out of the way. Though her hairstyle is the same as ever.

“So you’ve been promoted to jōnin already?” Temari chuckles as you slurp your noodles. “Congrats.”

“It’s a pain in the ass,” you tell her truthfully. “But it’s not all bad… it’s just gonna be kind of boring, you know? Sitting out the first round entirely?”

“I remember,” Temari chuckles. “You were the one who was messing around the whole time, am I wrong?”

“Guilty.”

“I don’t know what I’d do with a candidate like you,” Temari sighs dramatically. “Thankfully, most of the candidates this round didn’t even make the finals last time… though I know it’s going to be rough on the Konoha teams with Naruto and Sasuke both gone, and Shikamaru having been promoted. But at least it shouldn’t get too out of control this way… is what I’d like to think.”

“I’m sure it’s nothing to worry about,” you assure her.
>2/3
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>>4126215
>“Temari!” you recognize the kunoichi immediately as she grabs the stool next to you. “So you’re here as part of the joint exams too, huh?”
>“I’ll be proctoring the second stage,” she explains.

Wait what? So she already married Shikamaru? I thought that was a post-canon epilogue kinda thing? Not that I'm complaining, just curious about the details.
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>>4126235
ah no, not at all and the two haven't even realized they like each other, they are overseeing the first stage of the exam, the written test
exactly like in canon
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It's a joint sand leaf event to show solidarity after wrecking Oro’s shit
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>>4126243
I didn't realize foreign ninja had administrative roles in the exams held in other villages, so good to know. This exam happened in canon too? I thought we were still in the canon timeskip?
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“This is something to worry about,” you quietly admit to no one in particular as Fū shakes you excitedly. “Hi, Fū.”

“Wow! I know you told me you made jōnin, but I totally wasn’t expecting to see you here of all places! Oh yeah, I convinced Shibuki to let me take the exams, isn’t that great!? I’m gonna make a hundred friends by the time we’re done here, just you watch me!”

“So literally all of the candidates,” you observe as she continues to cling to you gleefully. “And several of the jōnin-sensei… not counting me and your… teammates?”

You spare Kegon and Yōrō an unimpressed glance, just to remind them that you could absolutely end their mission with a few choice words to the Hokage, or to either of the proctors.

“Sure. Go for it.”

“Just. You. WATCH!” Fū joyfully proclaims. “It’s gonna happen!”

“Anyway, be careful you three,” you reply, slipping your arm out of Fū’s enthusiastic clutches. “I’ve gotta go say a few words to my own teams, so good luck Fū!”

“Ya-huh!” she replies cheerfully.

“And you two?” you follow up with an instant of the best bloodthirsty glare you can muster. “You’d better take good care of Fū here...”

Then your expression returns to normal. “Okay?”

… has her chakra always been this… strange?

You hide your concern for now, and address the Amegakure teams.

“Just remember,” you tell them, “so long as Amegakure is represented in the finals, it’s a successful mission. So look out for yourselves… and look out for each other, too. Represent us well.”

Only teams Ajisai and Ibuki are aware of your true mission here, and they say nothing of it.

>Wait outside the building for the test to finish.
>See if you can convince Shikamaru and Temari to let you watch, you’re DYING to know what the test is like this year.
>Try to find the other jōnin-sensei in the standby room and make nice with them.
>Other?
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>>4126258
>>Try to find the other jōnin-sensei in the standby room and make nice with them.

Gossip time? Gossip time.
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>>4126248
There was a jointly-held chunin exam in the second year of the timeskip that was co-sponsored by Gaara and Tsunade. Temari is in the Leaf because she's set to handle the second stage in the Land of Wind, and needs to be there to anounce the second stage.
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>>4126258
>>See if you can convince Shikamaru and Temari to let you watch, you’re DYING to know what the test is like this year.
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>>4126258
>See if you can convince Shikamaru and Temari to let you watch, you’re DYING to know what the test is like this year.
>Offer to assist with our sensory techniques
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>>4126258
>>See if you can convince Shikamaru and Temari to let you watch, you’re DYING to know what the test is like this year.
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>>4126258
>>See if you can convince Shikamaru and Temari to let you watch, you’re DYING to know what the test is like this year.
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>>4126258
>See if you can convince Shikamaru and Temari to let you watch, you’re DYING to know what the test is like this year.
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>>4126258
>Try to find the other jōnin-sensei in the standby room and make nice with them.
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>>4126258
>Try to find the other jōnin-sensei in the standby room and make nice with them.
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>>4126258
You can’t help but sneak a paper butterfly into the back of Temari’s obi as she heads into the building where the exam will be held, and using that you track her to a room on the third floor… the security station?

You collect your butterfly from the wall before knocking at the door.

Temari pokes her head out the door. “Naori-san? How’d you get here?”

“I walked,” you reply. “Mind if I watch? I’m dying to know what Shikamaru has planned… this is the fun part.”

“And also… I’m supposed to keep an eye on the genin I brought.”

“There’s… actually no rule against that,” Temari admits hesitantly. “Shikamaru?”

Shikamaru joins Temari at the door. “What’s up… oh dear god what is she doing here?”

“Nice to see you too,” you grumble.

“Naori wants to watch,” Temari explains. “Will that be a problem?”

Shikamaru thinks about it for a moment. “Whatever.”

“Awesome!” you reply happily, quickly settling into the cramped office covered in CCTV monitors.



Shikamaru clears his throat.

“My name is Nara Shikamaru, and I’ll be your proctor for this round of the exams. Everyone please take one sheet from the teacher’s desk, then take any seat you like.”

The candidates have been split up, with one member of each team in each of three sealed classrooms… there’s about thirty-five teams, from what you can quickly count based on the CCTV footage.

Once they’ve followed his instructions, Shikamaru continues. “Alright, this is gonna be a drag so let’s get right to it.”

When some of the genin begin complaining about his tone, he just laughs it off. “You’re just lucky, cause I’m the one in charge this year.”

“This is a written test,” he declares, leaning back into his seat with his arms above his head. “There are three questions in total: one worth thirty points, one worth forty points, and one worth fifty points. Each of you will answer only one question, and your team’s total points will determine your final score.”

“If your team’s total score exceeds one hundred points, then the whole team will be disqualified.”
>1/?
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>>4127417
After taking a brief moment to yawn while a genin asks to clarify that what Shikamaru means actually means what he said, Shikamaru continues. “Then we’ll average all the scores together, and any teams falling below the average will also be disqualified.”

The genin are still demanding explanations when Shikamaru declares that the exam has started. His feed to the classrooms cuts, and is replaced with a thirty-minute timer that’s already counting down.



I DO NOT UNDERSTAND THIS TEST!” Rock Lee shouts, rising from his seat after a few moments of awkward, stunned silence. “AT ALL!”

“So… what’s the catch here?” Temari asks now that your end of the feed isn’t on camera.

“The point is to figure out the score that your other two team members are going to get,” Shikamaru explains. “Or, failing that, how to ensure that your teammates get a certain score.”

“Wouldn’t that give a huge advantage to teams that can already contact each other?” Temari asks.

“That’s fine,” Shikamaru admits, leaning back even further in his chair. “If that’s their solution to this, then I’ve got no problems with it. All that means is that teams with those skills will get one hundred points.”

“And the rest have to suck it up and figure out something else, is that it?” Temari muses. “Sounds familiar.”

“Yeah,” you agree. “And I’m assuming that contacting their teammates too easily can become a double-edged sword.”

Shikamaru chuckles. “See? Told you that you were scary.”

“Hang on...” Temari realizes. “You said those teams would get one hundred points… you’ve never said that getting one hundred points means your team passes.”

“The point is to assess who’s team captain material,” Shikamaru continues. “If the point was to test strength, then I wouldn’t be a chūnin.”

“You can say that again,” Temari teases him.

“… thanks for having my back.”
>2/3
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>>4127422
The genin begin to assess their options.

Neji is the first, carefully testing his surroundings for options. Strangely, Haruno Sakura takes control of the discussion in her own classroom, going over what you figured out immediately while the rules were being given out: that to pass for certain you really need to get a perfect score. And there’s no way to know what your teammates are thinking without communicating with them somehow.

There are a few students you notice who get to it immediately.

Both that blonde-haired girl you saw fighting in the preliminaries last time and Karin form hand seals, performing some sort of technique… so it seems that those two teams will have the requisite score at least. You also see Ajisai stick her hand into the air, showing four fingers. As team leader she can be confident that her sensory-capable teammates will see her and take the thirty-point questions, adding up to a perfect score as well.

Fū, on the other hand, simply walks over to the back wall of her classroom and places her hand on it. A few seconds later, Kegon and Yōrō start dutifully scribbling, so she probably told them the same thing that Ajisai told her teammates.

By the time ten minutes have elapsed, most of the candidates have resorted to shouting at the windows.

“Shouldn’t we put a stop to this?” Temari muses.

“Nah,” Shikamaru replies calmly. “That’d ruin the point. Now then… let’s see who does what.”

>Make small talk while helping observe from here on.
>Point out what you’ve already noticed. They may have missed it already.
>Ask Shikamaru what he has planned for the “trick question” portion.
>Other?
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>>4127423
>>Make small talk while helping observe from here on.
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>>4127423
>>Make small talk while helping observe from here on.
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>>4127423
>Make small talk while helping observe from here on.
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>>4127423
>Make small talk while helping observe from here on.
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>>4127423
Things start to get tense in Neji’s room after he knocks hard against the wall, five times in quick succession.

“Hmm...” Temari muses. “That’s certainly a lot easier than shouting, but will it work?”

“Of course,” Shikmaru shrugs. “There’s no permutation of signals that you can’t work out based on the assumption that the sender of the signal has to be the one to choose which question to answer.”

“Or in this case,” you add, “which one he won’t answer.”

“Well, that’s getting a bit too intense,” Shikamaru grumbles as a Sand ninja starts to cause problems. Eventually it escalates, and the Sand ninja draws a kunai.

“Knock it off,” Shikamaru orders over the intercoms. “I made it clear, round one is a written exam… no fighting. Just keep quiet and finish the exam before time runs out.”

“That Neji,” Shikamaru grumbles. “He just forced me to confirm that those signals were sent by another student, not something created by me.”

“So everyone gets one hundred points,” you shrug.

“And it comes down to your final question,” Temari grumbles. “This trick of yours better be good, or the second exam is going to be a real pain.”

“I wouldn’t want to cause a problem for Sunagakure,” Shikamaru grins before flicking on the intercom as time runs out. “Alright, everyone stop writing and flip over your papers… for the second part of this exam...”

An immediate commotion in all three rooms.

“… a practical question. Consider this scenario: your team is on a clandestine mission and you’ve been spotted. One of you has to stay behind as a decoy so that the other two can escape. Who do you choose, knowing that whoever acts as the decoy faces certain death?”

“Write down your answers on the back of your papers before submission. In order to pass all three members of your team must submit the same answer… otherwise, all three are disqualified. In addition, whoever you choose will be considered ‘killed’, and will be eliminated from the exams.”

“You have three minutes.”
>1/2
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>>4127560
“You know the next phase requires a full team, right?” Temari muses.

You have to chuckle at Shikamaru’s deviousness, even as the tough-guy from the Sand uses some technique to communicate with his teammates. “Of course. They’re already showing who among them is qualified to become a chūnin.”

Thankfully, you notice that Ajisai at least sends a clear indication that she understands the situation: she holds up a closed fist, an instruction not to write anything. You have some faith that Karin will come to a similar conclusion, at least because she probably suspects the second round will be of a similar format to the last time she took the exams.

“Our village can get a little cut-throat,” you admit. “So some of our teams are going to crash out right here for certain.”

“One of ours has already knocked themselves out,” Temari admits rather frankly. “So I guess the problem’s the same anywhere.”

After three tense minutes… it’s all over, and Shikamaru has their test forms collected.



Unfortunately you have to wish them luck with the exams, since you find yourself called elsewhere. After all, you have pretty much no choice when Tsunade-han’s the one asking to see you.

You knock politely at the door, and Shizune-han allows you into Tsunade’s office.

“Hokage-tono,” you bow politely. “You asked to see me?”

“I did, yes,” Tsunade-han replies, somewhat more sternly than you anticipated. “Sunagakure has raised some issues with the next stage, citing security issues. Only proctors for teams which have passed the first stage will be allowed to accompany those teams to Sunagakure.”

“Yeah, no, I’ll accompany all the Amegakure teams which passed,” you agree quickly. “So that shouldn’t be an issue.”

“You already know that teams from Ame passed?” she asks.

“I convinced the proctors to let me watch along with the CCTV footage,” you explain. “I was super curious to see what Shikamaru-han had planned… and so I could tell from the footage that at least one of the teams I brought coordinated themselves perfectly.”

“I see,” Tusnade-han sighs. “I guess if both Shikamaru-kun and Temari-kun were okay with it, then there probably wasn’t a problem. Besides, I’ve read Morino-san’s reports about the exams you participated in and suspect that you’d only be a potential problem if you were bored.”

“You aren’t wrong.”
>2/3
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>>4127590
“Is something else bothering you, Tsuna-han?”

Tsunade’s discomfort suddenly loses even the thin veil that was present before as you point it out. “Yes, actually. It’s about your village, Amegakure.”

“Recently, our intelligence sources provided some evidence that would seem to indicate problems within Amegakure,” she explains. “May I ask you about that?”

You pause for a moment, wondering for a moment if there was some sort of problem that would make them think that. “Sure, by all means.”

“Is Hanzō still the one in charge of Amegakure?” she presses you.

“Shiranui-han spoke with him personally the last time we participated in a chūnin exam,” you point out. “I was there as well, and though I do not get such invitations often it’s my understanding that nothing has changed since that meeting.”

None of those are technically lies, of course.

“May I ask what sort of source made you think something had changed?”

Tsunade shakes her head. “It’s… something of a dirty secret even within Konohagakure. Nothing that threatens the security of Amegakure, of course, only our pride as a village.”

“Right,” you nod along thoughtfully. “I’ll tread lightly then.”

“Thank you.”

“Of course,” you nod. “To be fair, given Hanzō’s default state of paranoia I’m not sure what would change for most people even if he had been secretly killed and replaced. No one ever really sees him… even I only ever come when called.”

“I see,” Tsunade frowns, shutting her eyes. “If anything seems suspicious… can I count on you to mention it? Our villages are notionally allies after all, and having to suspect your own allies is hardly a good situation.”

>Of course (Lie).
>To the degree that I can.
>I don’t think I can promise that.
>Other?
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>>4127675
>>To the degree that I can.
yah, no, really don't want to get on hanzo's shitlist, paranoid powerful people really don't like being right
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>>4127675
>>To the degree that I can.
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>>4127675
>To the degree that I can.
Our village has it's own views on things, after all. It's not that we're suspicious of our allies, it's just in our nature not to trust anyone. I'm a bit of a black sheep in that regard.
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>>4127675
>>To the degree that I can.
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>>4127675
>To the degree that I can.
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>>4127675
>To the degree that I can.
Yeah, let's only commit a little bit of treason.
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>>4127675
>To the degree that I can.
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>>4127675
“Yeah… no…” you mutter quietly. “I can’t promise you too much in that regard. We Ame-nin aren’t that trusting by nature, though I can be a bit of an exception.”

“But despite that I feel like we’re seeking the same thing, Tsunade-han. So I’ll do what I can, when I can. That’s all I can say.”

She nods politely. “Thank you for that. I wish you luck with your teams… for normal candidates the survival phase can be rough.”



As it turns out you were right, out of the Amegakure teams only teams Ajisai and Ibuki made it to Sunagakure in time to be considered for the second phase. The location is the Demon Desert Checkpoint, a large facility in the middle of the Land of Wind’s expansive desert regions, where you meet the arriving genin teams three days later.

“How did you get here so fast!?” Fū asked excitedly as she and her team arrived first.

“I flew,” you admit Nyoka’s involvement in your feat of speed. “You might have sensed me overtaking you.”

“Ah, so that was you up there!?” her eyes practically glint.

The other teams take longer, with team Guy being the next quickest, and the only other team that isn’t obviously wiped out when they arrive.

“How...” Ajisai demands breathlessly. “Literally how?”

“Summons,” you shrug. “That ninjutsu lifestyle.”

Once ten teams total have arrived, Temari gives her new orders: the candidates are to assemble in a specially-prepared hall within the walled checkpoint compound, where they will be fed and are to sleep. Her explicit orders are to not leave the building under any circumstances, for their own safety.

Then she approaches you.

“I see you made it easily enough,” she greets you. “And two of your teams are here too.”

“They’re the two I figured to have the best candidates,” you shrug. “So yeah, that went well for us.”

“Anyway, come with me,” Temari insists. “The jōnin and proctors have our own building.”

Before nightfall you’re joined by Kurenai, Asuma, and Guy-sensei from Konoha, who were responsible for telling the latecomers to go home.

“You made it just in time,” Temari tells them as she has the doors locked behind them. “Storm’s coming in.”
>1/2
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>>4127755
“Looks nasty out there,” Asuma muses, looking out one of the small, round, and unbelievably thick windows as sand whips by in the dark. “A storm like this will be a real challenge for any team of genin.”

“It’s a good thing that it’ll probably clear up by tomorrow,” Temari agrees. “Because if a storm like this hits, an unprepared genin team will probably die.”

Your two teams are fine. Ajisai certainly has a shelter stored away in a scroll somewhere… she was the one who gave you that idea, after all. As for team Ibuki, Karin’s Kagura Shingan will give her hours of time to prepare, which will be more than enough given their average level of skill.

“Anyway, dinner’s ready,” Temari informs you all.

In the next room there are fairly large platters of food, much like when you ate with Temari and her brothers the last time you were here. All desert foods, served with lightly-flavored icewater.

>Try to strike up a conversation with the Konoha jōnin as equals for the first time.
>Stick to speaking with Temari, you get the impression that the Konoha-nin are on edge.
>Ask the Konoha-nin why they all seem so nervous. We’re all allies here after all.
>Other?
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>>4127761
>>Try to strike up a conversation with the Konoha jōnin as equals for the first time.
networking
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>>4127761
>>Try to strike up a conversation with the Konoha jōnin as equals for the first time.

Bludgeon them with social niceties.
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>>4127761
>>Try to strike up a conversation with the Konoha jōnin as equals for the first time.
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>>4127761
>Try to strike up a conversation with the Konoha jōnin as equals for the first time.
>Ask the Konoha-nin why they all seem so nervous. We’re all allies here after all.
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>>4127761
>>Try to strike up a conversation with the Konoha jōnin as equals for the first time.
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>>4127761
>Try to strike up a conversation with the jonin
Last year they watched us win and now we are here, funny how life plays out
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>>4127761
>Try to strike up a conversation with the Konoha jōnin as equals for the first time.
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>>4127761
>Try to strike up a conversation with the Konoha jōnin as equals for the first time.
>impress upon them the values of CUCUMBER WATER
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>>4127761
>>Try to strike up a conversation with the Konoha jōnin as equals for the first time.
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>>4127761
>Try to strike up a conversation with the Konoha jōnin as equals for the first time.
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>>4127761
“So this is what it’s like from the other side,” you muse playfully as you serve yourself. “I have to admit I’m enjoying the experience a lot more this time around.”

“That’s right,” Guy-sensei muses as he heaps protein onto his own plate. “You were in the finals with Gaara and Sasuke last time, and now you’ve already been promoted to jōnin.”

“I was there too,” Temari-han mutters.

“It must be frustrating for Kakashi-han though,” you continue. “At least Haruno-kun has something immediate to concern herself with.”

There’s… not much of a response to that. You’d almost think you’d said something to offend them before you were even in the room together, but you know that can’t be the case as the most recently you’ve spoken to any of them it was Asuma, briefly, several months ago.

“Did I… say something to offend you?” you ask, honestly confused about the situation.

Asuma and Kurenai share a look of discomfort before the latter speaks to you. “We’re just not sure what to think about you. It’s rare for a young girl to be promoted through the ranks as quickly as you’ve been.”

“Most of the guys we know who got promoted that quickly… didn’t turn out well,” Asuma admits. “At least not at first.”

“I see,” you frown. “I remember Mitarashi-sensei mentioning something like that in the Forest of Death. Something about the last guy to take the test solo?”

“He ended up wiping out his entire clan,” Asuma tells you. “So you should be able to understand why we’re a little wary of ‘geniuses’ at this point.”

“… ah.”

Well,” you eventually continue, “I’m not any of the guys you know, and I’d appreciate a fair chance.”

After a moment, Kurenai-sensei sighs abruptly. “My name is Yūhi Kurenai. Nice to meet you.”

“Sarutobi Asuma,” Asuma-sensei follows her lead. “Yes, that Sarutobi.”

“And I’m Might Guy!” Guy-sensei greets you with an emphatic thumbs-up. “A pleasure to make the acquaintance of a fellow taijutsu master!”

“The pleasure’s mine,” you greet them in response. “My name is Raishō Naori.”
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>>4128795
Over the evening, you learn a little about your counterparts from Konoha.

First, you learn that Kurenai is one hell of a champion drinker… it’s always the quiet women, you figure, who don’t seem like they can hold their drink. She doesn’t like sweets though, and isn’t too fond of fighting.

Guy on the other hand is something of the opposite: a lightweight drinker and Kakashi’s self-proclaimed rival since back before his decade of service in ANBU. You also learn, by way of conversation about your sealing script style visible on your palm, that he’s an agnostic. He once admitted to Kakashi that he wasn’t a believer in things like patron deities… and since this exchange took place at the Uchiha clan’s Nakano shrine on the day of their slaughter, his feelings on that particular deity seem to have received immediate validation.

Asuma is almost as straightforward as he’d seem. Like you he’s an infamous expert with chakra flow techniques, who used to be one of the Fire Daimyō’s personal shinobi guard as a rebellious youth. Now his main passions are for shogi and grilled meats, particularly sausages.

And unless you’re mistaken, based on the way he and Kurenai look at each other…

“What are you smirking about?” Kurenai demands with an uncharacteristic forcefulness, her sixth serving of shochu having finally pushed her to the point of obvious intoxication.

“Nothing,” you shrug, finishing your third and likely last cup of sake for the evening. “Nothing at all.”

“It’s good that the mood’s finally started to improve,” Temari admits, obviously relieved. “I was starting to think it might be more relaxing to go outside with the giant scorpions.”

“Giant scorpions?” you repeat. “No wonder you told the genin to stay inside.”

“Speaking of outside,” Guy muses, having had the least to drink so far besides yourself, “doesn’t it sound like someone’s shouting outside?”

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>taking the first three
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You’re momentarily stunned by what you see: a giant scorpion with four massive pincers and three stingered tails has got Chōji, Sakura, and Ino of Konohagakure in its claws while Fū is standing on its back. All four genin are shouting when you arrive on the scene with a shunshin, though for obviously different reasons… Fū looks like she’s having the time of her life.

>Tell Fū to knock it off and kill the thing already, it’s obvious that she can at any moment she chooses.
>Cut off the scorpion’s pincers with Umekiri at close range to free Sakura’s team.
>Fū’s enjoying herself, why can’t you? Try using the Samurai’s ranged technique to slice off the scorpion’s tails in one stroke.
>Other?
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>>4128844
>Cut off the scorpion’s pincers with Umekiri at close range to free Sakura’s team.
The lives of genin are at stake. If we fuck around and someone gets hurt, it'll only make people think poorly of us.
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>>4128844
>Fū’s enjoying herself, why can’t you? Try using the Samurai’s ranged technique to slice off the scorpion’s tails in one stroke.
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>>4128844
>>Fū’s enjoying herself, why can’t you? Try using the Samurai’s ranged technique to slice off the scorpion’s tails in one stroke.
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>>4128849

Gotta support this logic.
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>>4128878
You gotta tag queen's post or it doesn't count.
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>>4128844
>>Cut off the scorpion’s pincers with Umekiri at close range to free Sakura’s team.

How did they even get caught? What were they even doing outside despite being warned? I’m just doubly disappointed lol
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>>4128879

Thank you for the tidbit of info.

Fixing my mistake >>4128878
by tagging >>4128844
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>>Fū’s enjoying herself, why can’t you? Try using the Samurai’s ranged technique to slice off the scorpion’s tails in one stroke
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>>4128844
>>Cut off the scorpion’s pincers with Umekiri at close range to free Sakura’s team.
We’re jonin now so let’s not fuck around infront of our peers
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>>4128844
>>Cut off the scorpion’s pincers with Umekiri at close range to free Sakura’s team.
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>>4128827
>Fū’s enjoying herself, why can’t you? Try using the Samurai’s ranged technique to slice off the scorpion’s tails in one stroke
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>>4128844
>>Cut off the scorpion’s pincers with Umekiri at close range to free Sakura’s team.
muse around swords later, job comes first
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>>Cut off the scorpion’s pincers with Umekiri at close range to free Sakura’s team.
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The first thing to do is use another shunshin and draw Umekiri, easily slicing off the pincer holding Sakura at its joint before reversing Umekiri in your hand and kicking off the stump to dodge a tail, spinning through the second pincer holding Chōji.

Both these genin fall free, while you hold Umekiri’s hilt near the kashira so that you can reverse your grip again as you kick away again to slice off the pincer holding Ino.

That task having been accomplished you land lightly on your toes just in time to see the jōnin-senseis arrive with Gaara, who Temari ran to fetch.

“Woo-hoo!” Fū continues to cheer excitedly from the back of the scorpion.

“Shouldn’t we...” Temari starts, before Gaara holds out an arm to both stop and silence her.

“Fū!?” you call out. “Quit playing around, you’re gonna make a mess!”

“Already?” she calls back, drawing a kunai. “Aw, maaan… just when it was getting interesting!”

She leaps into the air, turning to throw the kunai before bringing her heel down on it so hard there’s a small shockwave. The kunai itself disappears, and before the scorpion falls dead you see it reappear underneath the monstrous insect where it sinks into the sand up to its ring-pommel.

“What do you think you’re doing out here?” Asuma demands of his team, plus Sakura. “The rules were pretty clearly stated, breaking them was reckless.”

“I’m sorry, Sensei,” Ino bows deeply. “But Chō...”

“We’re starving over there!” Chōji protests. “There was a big fight and all our food was ruined!”

“All this over one missed meal?” Guy-sensei muses, unimpressed by Chōji’s desperation. He simply tosses him a small bundle with some snack food in it.

“Missing a meal won’t kill you, but as a chūnin you’ll need to follow instructions,” he continues. “Next time this happens just consider it a part of your training and tighten your belt.”

This time it’s your turn to speak up. “Fū, what’re you doing out here in the middle of the night riding scorpions? You should be resting up for tomorrow.”

“Yeah, but I heard the screams and I couldn’t stay put!” Fū admits.

Gaara glances between you. “You know this girl?”

You nod curtly in response. “Yeah, we’re friends. We keep in touch even living in different villages.”
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>>4129166
“Nakkun tells me all sorts of stories about the missions she does and the people she meets and the places she goes!” Fū proclaims excitedly. “You know, except all the S-rank jōnin stuff.”

Then she looks over your shoulder at Gaara. “So who’s this guy, Nakkun? You know him?”

“You dummy!” Kegon scolds his charge as he and Yōrō finally come running. “That’s the Fifth Kazekage, so please mind your manners!”

“Sorry for the commotion, Lord Kazekage,” Yōrō bows deeply. “We’ll take her back inside now.”

“Wait,” Gaara insists momentarily. “You say you came running when you heard the screaming, but wouldn’t it have been better for you with three fewer competitors? They’re from a rival village after all, not allies from your own village.”

“Stuff like that doesn’t matter!” Fū asserts. “We can still be friends even if we’re rivals or whatever, that’s just what I think! So of course I’m gonna help them!”

“That’s just Fū,” you shrug. “Not a single mean bone in her body.”

“I see,” Gaara muses, the traces of a smile tugging at his lips. “I understand, but the rules are for your safety. So please try to follow them from now on.”

“Can do!” Fū replies with a crisp salute.



“Well, that was interesting,” Gaara admits, taking off his hat as soon as he’s back in the correct building. “We’ll have to have a team patch the wall in the morning.”

“Tell me, Raishō Naori, how much do you know about that girl?”

>I suspect she’s an outcast in her village, for something outside her control.
>I know she just kicked a kunai clean through a giant scorpion and I like it.
>She’s kind-hearted, energetic… and naive. I wish more people could be like her.
>Other?
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>>4129187
>>I suspect she’s an outcast in her village, for something outside her control.
>>I know she just kicked a kunai clean through a giant scorpion and I like it.
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>>4129187
>I suspect she’s an outcast in her village, for something outside her control.
>I know she just kicked a kunai clean through a giant scorpion and I like it.
>She’s kind-hearted, energetic… and naive. I wish more people could be like her.

why not all 3?
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>>4129187
>>I suspect she’s an outcast in her village, for something outside her control.
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>>4129187
>>I suspect she’s an outcast in her village, for something outside her control.
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>>4129187
>>She’s kind-hearted, energetic… and naive. I wish more people could be like her.
>>I suspect she’s an outcast in her village, for something outside her control.

Isn't it odd that no one comments on Karin is attending again, for a different village when she was "killed" the last time around?
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>>4129187
>She tackled me through a window and wouldn't let go of me until I played shogi with her. And that was how I first met her.
>I suspect she’s an outcast in her village, for something outside her control.
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>>4129200
its one of those issues, where everyone is better of *not* saying anything
konoha just pretends they never saw her in the first exam, just like they pretended that they didn't notice her leaving
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>>4129187

Supporting >>4129195
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>>4129187
>>I suspect she’s an outcast in her village, for something outside her control.
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>>4129187
>I know she just kicked a kunai clean through a giant scorpion and I like it.
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>>4129187
>I suspect she’s an outcast in her village, for something outside her control.
>She’s kind-hearted, energetic… and naive. I wish more people could be like her.
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>>4129187
“The first time I went to Takigakure on a mission they put my team up in a guest house on the edge of the village,” you recount patiently. “That night there was an intruder… that intruder broke in through the window, grabbed hold of me, and didn’t let go until I promised to either take a bath with her or play boardgames.”

“Since our guest house only had a shower, we ended up playing boardgames… that’s how Fū and I met.”

“So she really is as kind a person as she seems,” Gaara muses.

“There’s nothing else to her than what she seems,” you agree. “No sinister agendas, no deep personality twists, nothing convoluted or pretentious. I wish more people tried to be like her, rather than ostracizing her.”

“She seems a little… naive,” Temari admits.

You nod in agreement. “But she also just kicked a kunai clean through that giant scorpion… so she’s not unskilled.”

“I’m going to bed,” you declare. “If any more giant scorpions turn up, don’t bother waking me unless they’re inside the building.”

You fall asleep thinking about what Tsunade mentioned, about Sunagakure’s security concerns and her concerns about them...



The next morning, bright and early, you assemble teams Ajisai and Ibuki. After having given it some thought, you slip a tracking seal into each member’s clothing, hidden from sight.

“I’ll be tracking you,” you inform them, “using these sealing tags. Tsunade-han of Konohagakure raised some concerns with Sunagakure’s security measures… she thinks something else may be going on here. But for the sake of appearances I’m not going to be able to just come running to help you.”

“Understood,” Ajisai nods curtly.

“Awesome,” you reply calmly. “I look forward to seeing what you all are capable of, but remember to be careful.”

“Since when are we not?” Arashi smirks.

Harusame rolls her eyes. “Don’t answer that.”

Karin suppresses a giggle.
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You’re also sure to wish Fū luck, clapping her on the shoulder with a smile and placing a seal into her clothing… if anything happened to this sweet girl’s smile you’re not sure what you would do to the perpetrators, but it would probably mean a premature end to the chūnin exams so the proctors could collect the individual body parts scattered throughout the Demon Desert.

Temari explains the terms of the exam, and it turns out to be the same format as before… gather both a Heave and an Earth scroll, and arrive at the tower in the middle of the Demon Desert. So it’s just a hot and dry version of the Forest of Death.

As the sun rises and the individual teams take their positions on a high, curved wall, the tension is thick in the air.

It’s almost a relief when they take off into the desert.

And of course, you’re not allowed to head out into the Demon Desert as a jōnin-sensei.

It’s not even midmorning when you see a messenger hawk arrive, which seems to excite Guy-sensei. He immediately heads towards where Asuma and Kurenai are.

>Follow him and eavesdrop.
>Follow him. Tsunade did involve you in this after all.
>Head out into the Desert to do some aerial surveillance.
>Other?
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>>4129608
>Follow him. Tsunade did involve you in this after all.
Oh Naori...
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>>4129608
>>Follow him. Tsunade did involve you in this after all.
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>>4129608
>Follow him. Tsunade did involve you in this after all.
>Hey guy, what's crackin'?
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>>4129608
>>Follow him. Tsunade did involve you in this after all.
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>>4129608
>Follow him. Tsunade did involve you in this after all.
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>>4129608
>>Follow him. Tsunade did involve you in this after all.
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>>4129608
Man, the point where we throw down for jinchuriki rights is gonna be when they tell us to betray Fu. It's gonna hurt.
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You decide to follow Guy up to a round tower overlooking the Demon Desert, where he meets with Asuma and Kurenai-sensei.

“I’ll read it to you,” you overhear Guy-sensei declaring. “According to intel just received from agents in the field opposition forces have been recently on the move within the Land of Wind: in other words, the anti-Gaara faction. An assassination attempt has already occurred. In spite of this supervisors from other nations have been prohibited from entering the Demon Desert, and Gaara himself intends to supervise the second phase of the exams as a proctor. Needless to say, the risk not only to Gaara but to the stability of our alliance is immense if he intends to set himself up as a decoy.”

“Our orders are to enter the Demon Desert and investigate Sunagakure’s movements, and if there’s any threat to Lord Gaara we are to protect him.”

An anti-Gaara faction within Sunagakure? It’s not hard to believe... until recently he was considered more of a risk to their own village than an asset, so there were bound to be those who opposed his becoming Kazekage. And you assume they have no association with Akatsuki, otherwise your orders would be different. Killing Gaara not only interferes with your own plans to remove Shūkaku while keeping Gaara alive, it would also complicate Pain’s broader plans since then the One-Tail’s location would no longer be known.

“So what do you think, Naori-san?” Asuma sensei asks, surprising Guy and Kurenai.

You pull yourself up the outside of the tower, where you were clinging to the outer wall just below view, with a single smooth movement and land on one knee.

“I can understand where he’s coming from,” you admit, slowly rising the rest of the way to your feet. “He knows that the only way to gain the acceptance of his village is to prove his intentions through action, and that backing down now would be a display of cowardice he would never recover from... as Kazekage such a mistake at a critical moment would be inexcusable.”

“I see a bit of myself in him,” you continue. “Which is why I can also see what he’s overlooking.”

The jōnin-sensei seem somewhat confused at that declaration, but you don’t bother to address their confusion. Instead you summon Nyoka on the spot.

“Has something happened, young one?” Nyoka asks you, leaning down to draw closer in order to speak more quietly and carefully.

“The Fifth Kazekage will likely be attacked in the next two and a half days,” you inform her. “We’re going to step in when that happens and ensure that nothing happens to him.”

“The Fifth?” Nyoka muses. “This one asks your patience, she was unaware the Fifth had been selected.”

“It’s Gaara,” you tell her. “Jinchūriki of the One-Tail beast of the Sand.”

“The boy we fought before?” she asks. “My, how allegiances change.”
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“And how people change,” you admit. “This time, for the better… had he been the same Gaara we fought I wouldn’t be bothering with it.”

“This one can only hope Sunagakure does not come to regret their decision as Kirigakure did,” Nyoka muses as you leap atop her and kneel, the better to stick to her back. “Though your judgment in his character is to be trusted in this case, despite this one being unfamiliar.”

“We won’t know for sure if he dies out there in the middle of the desert,” you shrug. “So let’s just make sure he gets the chance.”

“We’re going now,” you declare to the jōnin-sensei. “We’ll cover a lot more ground this way… best of luck to the three of you.”

“We’ll have to count on you for deep reconnaissance then,” Asuma-sensei admits. “Just don’t get caught.”

“That’s the idea,” you agree. “Nyoka… let’s head for the center tower and set up there. We can use it as a base to conduct nighttime patrols. I’ll use ninjutsu to disguise you using the water vapor in the air.”

“Understood.”

>1d6, high roll
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It’s interesting that Asuma spotted us first. Is that born from experience as one of the 12 Guardians or whatever that body guarded the Daimyo?
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Correct.
>12, brief update and vote incoming
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>>4130665
Nyoka flies high into the air, actually backtracking a good distance so as to fly you through one of the wispy clouds that line the skies over the Land of Wind.

You flit through a few hand seals. “Kirigakure!”

Using an adapted technique you’re able to position a “cushion” of water vapor underneath Nyoka’s wings and body, bending light so that her underside should simply look like blue sky from the ground. Then she carries you unseen to the large tower at the center of the desert, which is an awful lot like the one at the center of the Forest of Death, before swooping in for a landing.

“Thank you, Nyoka-han,” you say, stroking her feathers appreciatively. “I’ll be calling on you again tonight.”

“Of course,” she bows politely before disappearing in a puff of smoke.

“Now then...” you grumble, shading your eyes with your hand. “Let’s find some shade...”



Having secured a spot under an eave you settle in for the long wait until nightfall.

>Track the tags you left out with Team Ajisai, Team Ibuki, and Fū.
>Use your Sharingan to extend your field of view, and actually do some active scouting from here using your tags as relays.
>Just wait until nightfall.
>Other?
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>>4130672
>>Track the tags you left out with Team Ajisai, Team Ibuki, and Fū.
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>>4130672
>Track the tags you left out with Team Ajisai, Team Ibuki, and Fū.
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>>4130672
>Track the tags you left out with Team Ajisai, Team Ibuki, and Fū.
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>>4130672
>>Track the tags you left out with Team Ajisai, Team Ibuki, and Fū.
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>>4130672
>Track the tags you left out with Team Ajisai, Team Ibuki, and Fū.
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>>4130672
>>Track the tags you left out with Team Ajisai, Team Ibuki, and Fū.
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>>4130672
Of the three teams you tagged with tracking seals this morning, only one seems to find themselves challenged at all by the chakra you sense. That would be team Ibuki, who clearly survive their ordeal and continue progressing slowly towards the tower. Team Ajisai tends to be following a strategy similar to yours, mostly taking it slowly during by day so that they can use their sensory abilities to overwhelm a potential target team by night. Both approaches have merit.

Fū of course seems to be mostly wandering aimlessly, albeit much faster than any genin or chūnin could hope to under these circumstances.



“We’ll depart immediately,” you inform Nyoka upon resummoning her after night falls. “I’ll be using my Sharingan to scan the deserts, looking for Gaara’s chakra… once we identify him I’ll go to ground and rely on Isoka to track him more precisely.”

“This one agrees with this plan,” Nyoka replies calmly as you take off into the night sky.

It takes you hardly any time at all to canvass the entire area, and using your Sharingan you identify Gaara’s chakra before… ah.

“It seems to this one that he knows we are here,” Nyoka suggests, as Gaara uses his sand-eye technique to track you even in the air.

“I forgot to factor in his sensory technique,” you admit, sealing your Sharingan. “Sorry… but in my defense it seems he’s improved significantly.”

The eye slowly floats down to the ground, and waits for Nyoka to land as well.

Sand from the desert itself begins to coalesce around the eye, forming a complete sand clone of Gaara.

“What are you doing out here?” Gaara demands… not angrily, you understand. His tone is quite calm and even.

“First, what gave us away?” you ask.

“There are no birds quite as impressive as your summons in this desert,” Gaara explains.

“Do you mind?” Nyoka asks you politely. “If there is no further need, this one would like to go back to sleep.”

“By all means,” you incline your head.

“Young man,” Nyoka briefly addresses Gaara. “Consider this one flattered by your compliment.”

Then she disappears.

“And now my question,” Gaara insists. “What are you doing here?”
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“Konohagakure received an intelligence update,” you admit. “The Hokage was concerned that you would use yourself as bait to draw out those in your village who… aren’t thrilled at your rise to Kazekage.”

“So I decided to monitor what was going on within the desert.”

“This is a problem that I must solve,” Gaara asserts.

“Yeah no, I don’t disagree,” you interrupt him. “You’ve had faith placed in you, and you need to prove that people were not mistaken.”

“Do you remember why I let you and your siblings retreat the first time we fought?” you ask.

“To limit the chances of there being a war,” Gaara recalls.

You nod curtly. “Same logic applies to this. Resolving Suna’s internal issues doesn’t do much good if you end up dead and Iwagakure invades.”

After a few moments, Gaara sighs wearily. “You’re not incorrect.”

“I told Asuma, Kurenai, and Guy something before,” you continue, “that I could understand how you feel.”

“And why do you think that?” Gaara presses cautiously. “You are not a jinchūriki.”

“I’m the daughter of a courtesan,” you explain. “It doesn’t take much for kids to single you out, and something that shapes even how adults see you is more than excuse enough. Some of my graduating class still don’t think I should be a shinobi even now that I’m a jōnin.”

“Don’t you see a similarity?”

“Point taken,” Gaara admits. “But where are you going with this?”

“Nobody gets by just on their own,” you assert. “After my mother passed I had Ajisai, and my former teammates Hitsugi and Ukemi. Surely you have people like that?”

After considering it for a moment, Gaara nods thoughtfully. “Temari and Kankuro… I also have a student who has placed her trust in me. And, also… I would consider Naruto and you to be my friends as well.”

You ignore the sense of mild embarrassment and make your point. “I learned that accepting help or kindness isn’t a sign of weakness.”

>You have people who want to help you handle this. Let us.
>You’re far too concerned with the image of the Kazekage. Your people should come first.
>It’s not my place to tell you what to do, but please at least consider the bigger picture.
>Other?
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>>4131136
>>You have people who want to help you handle this. Let us.
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>>4131136
>>You have people who want to help you handle this. Let us.
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>>4131136
>You have people who want to help you handle this. Let us.
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>>4131136
>You have people who want to help you handle this. Let us.
>You're not alone.
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>>4131136
>>You have people who want to help you handle this. Let us.
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>>4131136
>>You have people who want to help you handle this. Let us.
*Naori and Gaara, sitting in a tree ...*
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>>4131136
>>You have people who want to help you handle this. Let us.
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>>4131136
“You have people who want to help you solve this,” you declare. “Please let us.”

After a moment, the Fifth Kazekage nods in agreement. “Very well then. Raishō Naori, I would ask that you keep a watch over events in the Demon Desert, but that you remain discreet in doing so.”

“Can you do this for me?”

“That’s why I’m out here,” you shrug, before handing him a sealing tag. “Here. If you get out into the desert I can keep track of you this way.”

“Of course,” the sand clone replies, pulling out its eye and affixing the sealing tag to the eye. “Hopefully nothing will come of this.”

“Always,” you agree as the sand clone disperses back into the desert terrain it was made from.



Sun soon rises on the desert.

It feels like Ajisai is underground and isolated from her team for most of the day, but it doesn’t seem like she’s in particular distress and she soon rejoins them… your chakra sensing through the sealing tag she’s carrying suggests that she was with Tenten the whole time, so she probably ended up helping each other out of a tough situation.

That’s actually good. It’s nice to know that she’s at least relaxed her mistrust of the great nations to work together with a Konoha-nin in a pinch.

Isoka provides you with some company, as well as sharper senses that help you avoid the notice of the many genin teams that are sharing this desert with you.

That doesn’t work on Karin, who at one point is within sensory range of you. You’re forced to warn her off by making script appear on her tracking seal tag that tells her you’re here on business and to stay away from you.

It’s only because of Isoka that you manage to evade Fū when she nearly discovers you as well… were she not upwind of your position things may have ended differently.



It’s on the third day that a great sandstorm rolls in, first thing in the morning… far more powerful than even the one which hit when you were at the checkpoint station.

Gaara’s tracking seal also begins to move… it seems he wasn’t even IN the Demon Desert with you to begin with… and begins to move through the storm.

>Something’s not right. Rely on Isoka’s help and meet up with Gaara.
>This can’t be a coincidence. Summon Nyoka and have her help clear some of the weather.
>Check on your teams first, then on Fū. Gaara is probably doing the same for other teams.
>Other?
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>>4131401
>>This can’t be a coincidence. Summon Nyoka and have her help clear some of the weather.
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>>4131401
>>Something’s not right. Rely on Isoka’s help and meet up with Gaara.
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>>4131401
>>This can’t be a coincidence. Summon Nyoka and have her help clear some of the weather.
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>>4131457
Calling it now. He threw away our sealing tag.
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>>4131401
>>This can’t be a coincidence. Summon Nyoka and have her help clear some of the weather.
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>>4131401
>>Check on your teams first, then on Fū. Gaara is probably doing the same for other teams.

If Gaara is gonna be just fine anywhere, it’s gonna be during a sandstorm. We have time to make some rounds.
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>>4131401
>Check on your teams first, then on Fū. Gaara is probably doing the same for other teams.
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>>4131401
>Something’s not right. Rely on Isoka’s help and meet up with Gaara.
>This can’t be a coincidence. Summon Nyoka and have her help clear some of the weather.
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>>4131401

>>4131483
Seconding this
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>>4131401
>Check on your teams first, then on Fū. Gaara is probably doing the same for other teams.
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>>4132656
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