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Your name is Shu, and as your eyes flutter open to a darkened room it occurs to you that you’ve just gotten the best night’s sleep you’ve ever had. A perfect, dreamless slumber, devoid of fitful stirrings or imagined phantoms. On your right, Gina’s brunette locks are a mess around your shoulder as she nuzzles under your arm, petite frame curled against yours. Meanwhile Rath has your left side on lockdown, your arm pinned to your side by the slight, yet powerful young woman. She grumbles in her sleep, her freckled nose scrunching up at some unseen threat before her right arm twitches, the echo of a thrown punch. She grins with satisfaction at the well-placed blow, and you can’t help but smirk, yourself.

Stretching as best you can without disturbing your allies, you send an empathic pulse to the outer rooms to assess who’s’ where and finding three of the Midnight Crew lounging with your pair of artists, while Keane and Amara attend to matters of extreme importance in the FuzzBuzz ball pit. Gina and Rath shift in their mutual slumber, the brunette reaching across you to give sleepy head pats to the ginger on your left, who gives a pleased shudder against your side. To think…this all started only a few short weeks ago. In that short, chaotic time you’ve met Gina, Rath, Julia, Amara, Dorian, and a host of other survivors in a world gone mad with flesh and bone. You’ve conquered Daughter of the past and present, defeated abominable Amalgams of things that once were, hunted Gods…and slain someone that could’ve been a friend, if she’d only opened her heart and mind.

You can feel the small crystal pulsing at your side, all that remains of Isabelle nestled in your dress pocket and compressed into a small, shimmering emerald. Your arms finally freed, you slip your hand into your pocket, retrieving the emerald and a length of chain, a small scarab pendant at the end of it. After a moment or two of fiddling you pop the jade stone out of the pendant’s eye, replacing it with the shining, verdant crystal.

It fits perfectly.

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Previous Vein: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive/3660660/

Archive: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive.html?tags=Body%20Horror%20Quest

Character Abilities: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/15ctgm_liaNO0e0B6zAcIUrmfDN0tWiXds3L4FvogI2M/edit#gid=0

Trypophilic Hive, Ver. 2: https://pastebin.com/SJ5wvFxr

Relics: https://pastebin.com/wfHGrYZq

Dual Techs: https://pastebin.com/2jZ5Zhyx

Twitter: https://twitter.com/bodyhorrorquest?lang=en
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Not wanting to disturb your sleeping allies quite yet, you lay in comfortable silence, the sound of their steady breathing blending with the idle chatter of your allies just on the other side of the door to ease your very soul. However, try as you might to still your mind and simply enjoy the moment, your thoughts wander to what happens next, what dangers there are yet to come your way. Francine’s offer is still fresh in your mind, holding the promise of ending West’s network of abominable proxies…at the cost of Francine, herself. Then there’s the matter of the two Hexane Amalgams that Mother generated in her own home in a desperate bid to slow you down, to say nothing of the journals you’ve retrieved, both Mother’s and Charon’s.

You have a lot to review, and it’s that nervous energy that prompts you to summon the Rook-class swarmling that slides out of your back and flits silently over to the door, despite its hefty bulk. Your world tilts, and in an instant you’re at the door, Gina and Rath’s hands entwined over the chitinous Rook that rests where you were a moment before. You make your exit as quietly as you can, gently closing the door behind you before turning to face the living room. A veil of black still weighs heavily on the Fleshscape outside the one-way windows, but the soft light from the Roost’s bioluminescent fixtures illuminates Dorian and Julia chatting animatedly with Quinn and Ace, while Amara and Keane seem to the in the middle of a quiet conversation at the edge of the FuzzBuzz pit. From the sounds coming from within the depths of the Forge room it seems November’s still hard at work, though a second and third glance around the space have yet to reveal a certain dark-eyed…

“Skippin’ out on those two cuties to look for me? I’m flattered.”

You whirl around to find Jackie leaning against your doorframe. She chuckles at your surprise, giving a little shrug before she continues. “Re-specced a little, put s’more points into this whole Neuromancy thing. Turns out it keeps me off the radar as far as thoughts go.”

“I’m less confused by that and more by the fact that you were waiting by my door.” You reply with a smirk, and it’s Jackie’s turn to be ruffled.

“Oh, uh…s’nothing weird, like...anyway.” She clears her throat, re-composing herself before casting her one-eyed glance over to the rest of her Crew. “I’ve been tryin’ to get their asses moving, but I feel like a Mom trying to break up a playdate. Broads won’t budge, so…figured I’d wait ‘til you got through bangin’ out your stress to say our goodbyes and whatnot.”

“I…okay.” You sigh, too tired to argue with Jack about what did and didn’t happen. “Sure there’s nothing I can say to make you stay?”

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“Oh, there’s lots.” She fires back, her shimmering onyx eye and half-cocked grin comprising the playful veneer she’s decided to put on for you. “If I gave you time to make an argument all eloquent-like, I’m sure you could convince me. Hell, my girls would love it…and I would, too. That’s kind of the problem, see?”

He gaze is fixed on your face, studying your features for a long moment before she speaks again.

“My Crew and I need to get stronger a unit, not as part of your family. The longer we spend around you and your family the softer we’re gonna get.”

“…Should I be offended?” You ask bluntly, and the question forces a laugh from the other girl’s lips.

“Ha, didn’t mean it as a slight. Meant the opposite, actually.” She says, her focus flitting between your eyes. “I dunno…I get the feeling that soul-searchin’s gotta be done between sisters, and too many cooks’ll spoil the broth…or soup, or whatever. Does that makes any sense?”

You nod, and her grin widens.

“Ah, there you go. Knew you were a sharp cookie, Defiant.” Jackie takes a deep breath before heaving a wistful sigh as she looks out the massive windows across the room. “So, what’re you gonna do now?”

It’s a loaded question, one that hasn’t left your mind since you woke up…and if you’re honest with yourself, it hasn’t left the forefront of your consciousness since you started your journey. You know that Francine is waiting on the delivery of the Nail and Spine, while Charon is going to be gunning for you and yours sooner rather than later. Perhaps it’s for the best that the Midnight Crew doesn’t accompany you from here on…their life expectancy might suffer if they’re by your side when the boatman comes calling.

In any case, you feel like you have a little time before you need to get moving so you could certainly use a little more personal time with your newfound family…though that could certainly be time spent preparing for the eventuality that is Charon.

>>”I’d like to make some Relics for your help, and then you said you’d consider us even, right? It’s the least I can do.” (Forge new relics for the Midnight Crew)

>>”I have a date with a West look-alike who may or may not be a nuts as her creator. I’d prefer to stay and chat, but there’s a pair of Daughters trapped in the Relics I’m bringing to her…I’d prefer to not keep them waiting.” (Bring the Spine and Nail to Francine)

>>”Honestly? I have some reading I’d like to catch up on while I take a breather with everyone.” (Read Mother’s/Charon’s Journals, or take a second look at West’s notes)

>>”It may sound weird, but I need to have a chat with a gun.” (Talk to Karma about Charon/Reyva, Write-In Question)

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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>>3729696
>>”I’d like to make some Relics for your help, and then you said you’d consider us even, right? It’s the least I can do.”
as much as its sad to say goodbyes, lets let them get on with what they need to do, as prepared as we can help them be.

Jackie;
>Gain the Prideful Calphalor.
>Get a set of Hive Phones.
im still unsure on the spear over the glaive, but having a free hand has its advantages.
Hive Phones so our favorite group of bitches can stay in touch with us.

Ace;
>Get a Kuolema Rifle.
>Get a backpack mount to aim and load the rifle for her.
gives her a nice way to force enemies to get close, or face one hell of a punch at range.

Keane;
>Gain a Queen Crimson Copy, or another gift from Amara. (BHOPS choice)
>Gain Splat Gun and Storage Sac.
Keane and Amara seem to be getting the closest out of any group of friends, though that could just be how it appears due to how similar they are in attitude, but still. It's nice and i want to commemorate and grow that friendship.
The splatgun isn't exactly the big hitter i wanted, but its still a nice addition to her kit, so long as she has some variety of ammo type at least, as i think the mucuslings dont provide enough variety on their own to make the best use of the Relic.

Quinn;
>Gain Pokopina Khrisa.
>Gain Mordere Talionis.
The poko fits her well i think, especially with her goopy arms, and gives her a surefire way to get around her cores drawbacks,which even BHOP said the statues had only mitigated somewhat. Even if the engine and additional levels helped or fixed the issue, i still think it’ll expand her options in ways she wont complain about.
Mordere does what it needs to, gives her a boost to survivability while allowing her to be less of a target while shes in the thick of things, or punish enemies who try and take her out.


also, wonderful to see this back BHOP.
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>>3729696
Shit i had sime witty comments written out, for it to convince Jackie to take the stuff we want them to, back at home...... How long do we have to vote I won't be home for another two and a half hours damn

>>3729716
If I can't make it home and vote from there before the end of voting I will support this
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Ah, it's good to be back.

>>3729696
>>Write-In
>Division of labor time, none of these tasks require the entire party to focus on. We can't read the Hexane script yet, so get Amara and Dorian translating the journals. Start with Charon's, we'll read that first before we decide whether we should heed Silvis' advice not to read Ozmas'. Then we wake up Rath and Gina, have a little brainstorming session with the Crew where we discuss what Relics we think would suit them, have Rath start working on those. While she's Forging, Shu and Gina can use their Neuromantic abilities to cleanse the Daughter-Forged Relics, including Gamma's beam cannon. And Julia can take it easy, I guess.
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>>3729719
well to be fair, she already agreed to take the relics, so we dont need to convince her.

voting for non major events is usually 1 and a half hours, with 2 being the overall standard. sometimes however he waits to post the voting time til when he promised to actually start when he gets it up early, so 8am CST i think, or sometimes waits til the time evens out, such as posting at say, 8:25, so he waits til 8:30 to post. take it how you will, both how that might line up for you and the autistic nature of the fact ive noticed such patterns.

>>3729727
depending on exactly how long it takes, gathering the biomass for the forging could take a more dedicated effort. i also want Amara around for her gift to Keane. Julia can help with the forging process, its not her fort'e but im sure she would be happy to help and an artists fingers cant hurt the process. that or sha can provide drinks and snacks to everyone.

im also curious what November has been working on.
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(Gentlemen, it's good to be back. Voting shall remain open for the next two and three-quarter hours, to allow for my commute.)
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>>3729696
Supporting>>3729727
And giving the crew>>3729716

A while back I started wondering if Mara's files had any Skintalkers in it, and if it included any notable words they had for Mara's Lexicon. Perhaps Julia can do that if she's not helping with the forging. Or actually, Gina could do that instead of forging. I'm sure she would want to go over the files anyway.
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>>3729731
>>3729736
>says all of that nonsense
>BHOP fucking throws out the oddest voting time to date in response.
well hell, im not even mad, but you could not have done that at a better time haha.

>>3729737
Ginas not forging, shes doing the thing only she can, which is purging the two relics that have ghost Wests in them of said ghost wests. honestly though Shu doesnt need to help with that, so she is free to do other things.
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>>3729731
>depending on exactly how long it takes, gathering the biomass for the forging could take a more dedicated effort.
True, but that's prep work. Once Rath gets to Forging, Shu and Gina won't be needed. Nor Dorian and Amara, actually, so I guess we should move their job to during the Forging as well. That way we can still have Amara take part in setting up a cool present for her new friend. Okay, so focus on the Forging for now. That should make a fun conversation where we explain our logic, too. "Okay, so you know your melee specialist? We're giving her a sniper rifle. No, trust me, this makes sense..."
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>>3729696
>"Got a lot of things on my plate ever since Mother's put me as #1 on her most wanted list. Lets talk Shop then. I'd like to make some Relics for your help so we can be even. I've got a few ideas and I would like to run them by you as to figure out what kind of relic best fits for all of you."
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>>3729741
yeah, i mean, the logic does make sense, but its a very 'context is key' moment right there. i also more imagined Rath(and whoever else) forging as the biomass was harvested, to save time, but that still includes said harvesting which involves them being there. which, it just hit me we are flesh harvesting ourselves of pure... stuff, thats somehow different per class, despite all being organic matter, to enact a process still implied to be done via... somehow... hammering things into shape to a degree. in a black obelesk forge powdered by a molten heart.

god the fleshscape is weird, in a very metal kickass way, if it wasn't for all the cannibalism.
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>>3729716
Just to post the list of Relic Ideas doc that we've accumulated in case we forget what each relic does.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_-8s0tin7DCQxITm6C69QULRnM_ibDfg18iV4dc7Fc/edit#heading=h.z8rqypgtrq2s

I still would like to give them the IV Staff. It'll serve as a really handy safety net/insurance Relic for the Midnight Crew. We've seen how badly their fighting capabilities go down when one of them gets put onto death's door. I really want to give this to them to help them survive better, but the fact that it's themed in a way that reminds them of their past might insult them really badly.

>INTRAVENOUS VITALIS STAFF: A Silver staff adorned with a Ring with a golden heart suspended in the center of the ring. The heart beats on its own and radiates a warmth full of life, two blood vessels branch out from the heart waiting to infuse its patient. It has no worth nor value in combat as a weapon. However, what it shuns in violence, it shines in healing. Simply holding it passively triples the health and bio regen of the wielder's innate regeneration. If a daughter does not have innate regeneration in any of its stats, it provides a regeneration rate equal 1/5th of it's total health pool and total bio pool accordingly and separately. But it's real use lies with the golden heart and the blood vessels that branch out from it. When the blood vessels are connected to a daughter on death's door, the relic becomes fully active and starts pumping Liquid vitality into the Daughter, automatically stabilizing the patient and prevents any further destabilization applied to the daughter be it cancer or any other debuffs like Neuromanctic takeover. Furthermore, the patient daughter hooked onto the relic may stay conscious and fighting while reduced to 1 ACT as long as the daughter holds or stays within close range of the Staff. A sanctified relic for those who venerate the practice of medicine and aversion to violence, but for some daughters like the Midnight Crew, the irony of a reminder of their past is not lost onto them.
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>>3729737
BHOP did once say that Mara has Skintalker abilities, which before we knew that she was the dragon had us considering that maybe she used Skintalking to tame it. She might have notes on the Skintalker language in her study. Then again, we've also got ten words coming up once Amara gets around to studying the plaques of the Ascendants, so she's hardly hurting for new spells.

>>3729749
It's been established that harvesting biomass from a Daughter doesn't take long, and can be done in advance. That's how we made the Ignition Gauntlets, remember, Mara just had Niku peel off some flesh and gave it to us to use as we wanted. Which is pretty weird, now that I think about it, because that wasn't really Mara. That was her avatar construct. Can constructs be harvested for Bio to use in crafting? Something to explore later. Point is that Rath can just take what she needs upfront, it won't get in the way.

And yeah, it's metal as hell. I want to think that the Forge is doing some other processes and it only warms up because of waste heat from them, but that doesn't fit what we know about Forge Cores from November's gear. It definitely seems like producing heat is an intended feature. Maybe high temperatures "reboot" Crucible biomass and make it no longer count as part of a person, or something like that, I don't know.
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>>3729768
Anon, late spoiler alert. Mara's real body IS the actual Dragon. The Construct/amalgam was the Human body that we see her often in.
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>>3729769
I know. That's what I am referring to. She had Niku carve a strip off the arm of her human avatar body, not her dragon true body.
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>>3729763
id like to see how much BHOP is gonna make this all cost us before we add anything else to the list.

>>3729768
well, odder actually, is that she pulled basically white calcite play-dough from her veins, in no small amount. and that was only like, 80%. part of the reason i want everyone involved and around is because all these relics are gonna be a bit costly, so after BHOP balances out the costs i want to make sure we can spread it as evenly as possible among the party, rather then just shotgunning it and hoping for the best, but that will take more effort and time from everyone than Mara just handing us an arbitrary amount to work with regardless of what we make.
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>>3729776
(Calculating the overall cost now, Gentlemen.)

>>3729739
(I'll admit, this got me. Sorry for the odd voting time, I was about to post two hours until I saw that one Anon wasn't able to post or participate for the next two and a half hours, so I decided to stretch it out a bit. It lets me run calculations foe the cost of everything, so there's that.)
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>>3729779
makes sense. though i dread whatever your commute is that its so long. long car rides never were my thing, for sure.

also i apologize if not giving even an inkling of an idea for costs slows things down, but to be fair, you have in the past outright thrown our guess out and completely redone them, so i started to figure if you would often have to redo them anyways it felt useless to keep trying to guess ourselves.
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oh right, fellas, do we want take this opportunity to make our team the Sui Interitus and Cutis Tractus? think it was something mentioned in the past.

personally? we're probably already making alot and those would probably cost a decent amount, being really good armor. we can probably afford to wait til next time on them, though when and if theres a proper next time is of course a danger here.
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>>3729797
We'll need to see the price tag for both of those on top of the relic gifts that we're making for the Midnight Crew.
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>>3729779
I appreciate it.
>>3729797

Now since I got a momentary reprieve at work
We can ask for the price tag sure but we probably won't be able to afford them right now without exhausting ourselves to a ludicrous degree
Not with all the gift we want to give out
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>>3729798
>>3729799
i now kinda wish we had further upgraded Raths forge Ability, but even if it would help greatly now its such a situational aid its hard to justify any proper focus on.
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>>3729797
I'm fine with waiting for the moment. I think that right now we'll be better served not having our Bio supply drained super low than having these new suits of armor. We could avoid that by having the Crew pay the Bio cost for their Relics, but it's meant to be a gift so let's eat the costs ourselves.

>>3729802
Yeah, it's never a bad thing to put levels into, but I don't think it's ever going to be a main focus. It'll be something we upgrade here and there.
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>>3729804
its not something to actually do, but it would be hilarious to say, use the Engine to bring back Niku, then just dump a bunch of levels on her forge Ability. the look on her face as she realizes we chose her just so she can forge for us and otherwise house sit while were away would probably be kinda funny, but for all the wrong reasons. wouldn't fit our character or course, nor would i actually want to treat her like basically just an object, but i also cant deny a certain level of silliness to the idea.
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>>3729779
at least let us know the price tag please
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(Gentlemen, the crafting values are below as a sum total for the gifts to the Midnight Crew. Below that you’ll find values for the IV Staff, Sui Internis, and Cutis Tractus, should you choose to craft them, along with a new total for those three and the Crew’s gifts.)

- Midnight Crew -

Hive Mistress: -30%
Neuromancer: -230%
Calcite Armorer: -550%
Vitruvian: -200%
Flesh Artisan: -260%
Humoral Paladin: -350%
Generator: -100%
Unnatural Predator: -200%

- IV Staff, Sui Internis, Cutis Tractus -

>Hive Mistress: -280%
>Neuromancer: -480%
>Calcite Armorer: -800%
Vitruvian: -200%
>Flesh Artisan: -460%
Humoral Paladin: -350%
Generator: -100%
Unnatural Predator: -200%
>Fibromancer: -200%
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>>3729831
(If you have any questions, then please let me know. To clarfy, the highlighted sections are the ones that changed with the introduction of the other three Relics.)
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>>3729831

Total cost after including IV Staff (For Midnight Crew), Internis (for Dorian), Cutis Tractus (For Julia): 3070% to be paid in either bio or health, with health paying 3x its value.

Current HP/Bio from each character:

>Shu: 1210hp /1280 bio
>Rath: 1120hp /800 bio
>Julia: 1310hp /580 bio
>Amara: 790hp /400 bio
>Dorian: 740hp /430 bio
Gina: 1480hp /1470 bio
>>3729834
And what of the FleshBag Relic if we are to create that? what would be the cost for that?
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>>3729831
>>3729834

whew, alright yeah lets just stick with the base package for now. thats gonna be costly enough, though its more the new total is without a doubt too much.

speaking of, ive still got the list of what classes everyone has, to help us decides who can/should take what. i THINK its correct, with maybe Halos counting as Neuromancy?

>SHU: Hive Mistress, Flesh Artisan, Gluttonous, Generator, Humoral Paladin, Neuromancy, Fibromancer, Calcite Armory

>RATH: Vitruvian, Generator, Fibromancer, Flesh Artisan, Calcite Armory

>JULIA: Flesh Artisan, Gluttonous, Humoral Paladin, Calcite Armory, Phantasmal Conduit, Fibromancer, Unnatural Predator, Vitruvian

>DORIAN: Flesh Artisan, Humoral Paladin, Fibromancer, Generator, Phantasmal Conduit, Calcite Armory

>AMARA: Skintalker, Humoral Paladin, Phantasmal Conduit, Generator, Flesh Artisan, Unnatural Predator, Vitruvian

>GINA: Neuromancer, Vitruvian, Phantasmal Conduit, Calcite Armorer, Fibromancer, Gluttonous, Hive Mistress, Generator
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>>3729834
wait, actually, BHOP, not to throw things too far for a loop here, but thinking about this, a few characters still have abilities and stats missing, so cost wise we cant really properly calculate how to spread this or even what our actual limits are as we dont know what their limits would be.
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>>3729834
What's the cost of the IV staff only?
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>>3729834
Bhop. We still don't know what the total stat boosts that we've gotten from the level up from consuming Isabelle and other various abilities.
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>>3729831
I say we keep to the base package for now
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>>3729837
(If I'm understanding you correctly, the flesh bag holders have been factored in to the base cost, since they're fairly low as purely functional items.)

>>3729842
(Bear with me a moment, I'll post them so you have a better idea of what you're dealing with.)

>>3729843
(Iv Staff: Humoral Paladin, 200%)

(Here are the new abilities gained from Isabelle's Consumption. Please note that Hungering Membrane has been replaced with Elemental Digestion, which grants a stat boost of HEALTH +260%, BIO +300%. I hope this helps Gentlemen, and questions are welcome.)

>>SILVIS’ RADIANCE (Indignant Ignition Augmentation): A shining light, a valiant fist. Rath's attacks now ignore all HEAT and RADIANT resistance or immunity. Additionally, she now gains 1 ACT at the start of combat with which she make make a free attack. (HEALTH +280%, BIO +160%)

>>OZMAS’ HOPE (Lexicon of Flesh Augmentation): Once, a very, very long time ago, there was a young soul filled with hope and light. All new words that Amara finds in her journey are automatically found one to three . Additionally, words uttered from Amara's LEXICON OF FLESH now count as one tier higher for the calculation of their effects and when they are countered by enemy Skintalkers. (HEALTH +300%, BIO +300%, ACT +1)

>>GEMMA’S YEARNING (Elemental Digestion Augmentation): Gemma's desire to see herself united as one is now distilled into a powerful boon. ELEMENTAL DIGESTION now deals damage to foes that would dare come within melee range by inflicting chip damage of any of the elements that ELEMENTAL DIGESTION currently has absorbed. Please note that the strength of this damage scales to Also, any construct that attempts offensive subcutaneous actions will be automatically converted into biomass equal to one-half of its BIO cost. Finally, you may forego the skills Julia would gain via CONSUMING an instance of a Gemma clone, and you may instead permanently increase the HEALTH and BIO bonuses this Augmentation grants by 50%.(HEALTH +300%, BIO +160%)

>>HELLHOUND’S PACE (Spring-Heeled Jack Augmentation, Tier 3): To run, to race, to flee the past and all the horrors it holds. Dorian now gains a stacking 5% CRITICAL DAMAGE and CRITICAL CHANCE bonus for every movement zone he traverses. Additionally, Dorian now ignores any and all effects that would hinder his movement, though he is still stopped by solid barriers. (HEALTH +220%, BIO +180%)
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>>3729851
(Forgive me, please note that the damage inflicted by GEMMA'S YEARNING scales to Elemental Digestion's current level. Somehow that got cut off in the copy-paste.)
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>>3729851
right, if everyone is willing, give me a moment to update the character sheets so we can get a proper read here, and thank you BHOP very much for posting these for us.

i do have one question BHOP, id assume Julia loses the base form of Hungering Membrane, including stats, but then of course regains most of it plus a small boost via the new version of Gemmas stat increases? i know it probably sounds silly to ask but just trying to be certain here.
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>>3729857
(You are quite correct, yes.)
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>>3729858
awesome, thank you.
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>>3729851
>All new words that Amara finds in her journey are automatically found one to three .
I'm sorry, but I don't understand what this means. Is it like how she gets a choice of two words whenever she finds one, only now it's a choice of three?

>Please note that the strength of this damage scales to
This sentence appears to have been cut off, what does it scale to?
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>>3729862
(My hatred for my own technology only grows.)

(Words Amara learns are now found one to three tiers higher than their base level. This will, of course, effect the words yoyll have a selection of a little later in the Vein. Also, please see >>3729855 for the answer to your second question. Thank you for asking.)
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>>3729865
Oh, dang. So Amara gets higher-tier words and her words count as being even higher-tier. Nice. Ozmas, your corpse has some good shit.

And nice on the damage scaling to level, I can see some good uses of that. That reminds me of a question I had that I can't remember if I asked, though: Can Elemental Digestion proc off of damage sources that don't actually harm Julia? Say she passes through Dorian's Neon Wake, or stands close to Rath in Ignition. Those don't deal damage to allies, but could Julia still get electricity or heat/radiant damage auras from them?
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right, everyone's stats and abilities should be up to date, including the fixes(i got ya BHOP, no worries).

new parameters we have are;

>Shu: 1210hp /1280 bio
>Rath: 1400hp /960 bio
>Julia: 1610hp /880 bio
>Amara: 1090hp /700 bio
>Dorian: 960hp /610 bio
>Gina: 1480hp /1470 bio

with
>>3729838
still being our class types.

honestly? i think we can afford the extra Relics, especially if we use a bit of that 1.5x value from Health.

>>3729865
BHOP, are those costs for the relics with or without Raths 20% reduction on each relics component trees? which id assume means each type of Biomass it takes to craft?
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>>3729872
(Not yet, but that's unlocked fairly early on in the tree.)
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>>3729878
(They include the discount, yes.)
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>>3729879
Nice. That's going to combo really well with Stormfront Waltz, then. Dorian carries Julia into battle, leaving electricity in his wake, and then she carries that charge so that she's zapping the enemy on top of what the Neon Wake does. Julia is scary. I mean, all our party is, but we've probably made her into our most viscerally unsettling party member. She's a giant humanoid badger with bloodstained fur and jagged bone claws, riding into battle on a crimson fog, blasting everything that gets near her with electricity, producing a near-tangible aura of despair, and crystallizing your flesh with every strike. She is a nightmare.
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I agree, Shu should be dead by now.
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>>3729696
>>3729716
>>3729831
for the record BHOP, my votes for the extra Relics as well, but i apologize that Votings nearing its end so i may not get the cost spread id like done before voting closes.
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>>3729878
we can probably easily afford them using our health pool by bringing the hp of rath, gina, shu, and julia
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>>3729878
In light of this I'd be for it, but with the new armors being made after the Crew leaves. This is their present-Forging party, it would be rude to make things for ourselves in the same session.
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>>3729894
my thinking aswell, though i still like to spread it between the pools. like i said, working on calculations now, and as you see above your post.

>>3729895
sure, but may aswell mechanics wise get it all done together. easier to count it all as one session even if within the world itself we do them separately.

>>3729892
>>3729881
hey BHOP i think Ozmas broke containment.
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>>3729893
i still would like to give them the IV Staff as part of their present package. it’s 200% humoral paladin more, big it’s a really good relic the can use.
>>3729831
voting for base package but include the IV Staff into the package.
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>>3729901
that is already in the increased cost calculations yes.
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>>3729848
I am this anon.

>>3729696
In light of the discussion and me being home but my laptop throwing a fit so i cant access my file for all my notes.....

I will ammend my vote to support >>3729727


With all the Relics from >>3729831

and i would like to add to forge the stuff for ourselves after the crew left(All still in one session but yeah). Also add in the MANDUCARE ET BIBERE.... if possible and talk to karma a bit to make sure the crew knows how high on mothers shitlist they are. If they want to know
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>>3729904
we already made the snack machine i think, and even if we didn't, im against adding it now.
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>>3729906
we didnt make it. we went straight to bed without forging last vein

Hm.... you have your opinon and i have mine on that. right now the relic forging is massively in favor of crafting just the relics for the crew and the two armor pieces
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>>3729887
>an elemental storm of frost, fury, blood, platinum wires, skin, terror, despair, and electricity
>two lovebirds dance together in loving embrace in the eye of the storm
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>>3729910
huh? i think everyone agrees on the vote including the Armor and IV bag. im just saying we dont need to add a snack machine on top of the already increased cost. it really doesn't give us any advantage right now and we already have a doable but high cost to even out here without it.
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>>3729914
That is pretty much what i said, i it think it would be a good idea to make the snack machine and you think it wont be a good idea.

So the people staying behind can have something nice to enjoy until we can get them out to feast. It would help with sanity loss as well if they can have some fresh produce sometimes

But i can see you not wanting it since it has no combat value and considering Charon is gonna show up soon........... I think i know where you are coming from however.
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>>3729921
they have been fine without it, both in entertainment and in sanity. the costs are already too significant to be worth it.

>>3729893
>>3729881
here my personal vote BHOP for cost allocations;

Shu; -250% Health/ -235% Bio
> -100% Health for 200% Hive Mistress
> -80% Bio for 80% Hive Mistress
> -50% Health for 75% Neuromancy
> -5% Bio for 5% Neuromancy
> -100% Health for 150% Humoral Paladin
> -150% Bio for 150% Humoral Paladin

Rath; -160% Health/ -110% Bio
> -130% Health for 195% Vitruvian
> -5% Bio for 5% Vitruvian
>-100% Bio for 100% Generator
> -30% Health for 45% Fibromancer
>- 5% Bio for 5% Fibromancer

Julia; -430% Health/ -55% Bio
> -300% Health for 450% Flesh Artisan
>-50% Bio for 50% Unnatural Predator
> -130% Health for 195% Calcite Armorer
> -5% Bio for 5% Calcite Armorer

Amara; -100% Health/ -50% Bio
> -100% Health for 150% Unnatural Predator
> -50% Bio for 50% Humoral Paladin

Dorian; -100% Health/ -10% Bio
> -10% Bio for 10% Flesh Artisan
> -100% Health for 150% Fibromancer


Gina; -400% Health/ -400% Bio
> -400% Health for 600% Calcite Armorer
> -400% Bio for 400% Neuromancy
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>>3729696

“Figured we’d read some alien journals, have my best and brightest brainstorm with your Crew to see what Relics they’d like out of our own flesh and bone, then go exorcise a couple of Relics of the PhD ghosts that haunt them.” You reply after a moment’s consideration, and Jack just glowers at you when you shrug and smile. “You know, the usual.”

“…Your life is already so goddamn weird, I don’t know why I’m surprised.” Jackie says, her sigh turning into a chuckle.

You assign Dorian and Amara to begin deciphering the Hexane journals starting with Charon’s, and Julia joins them to spend a little more quality time with her fellow artist and their little one. Meanwhile, you’re able to rouse Gina and Rath from their deep slumber, with the latter pouting over the Rook you left her with, at least until you tell her that there’s crafting to be done. When the three of you return to the main room you find November emerging from the Forge room, her armor smoking, the plating glowing in several obvious places. You just raise a quizzical eyebrow at her as she approaches where you’ve gathered with the Midnight Crew.

“Tried to upgrade my armor by myself, but whatever Francine made this out of is too complex for me to do anything with.” She explains, with Rath a little taken aback at the identity of her Aunt’s armorer. “Figured it was worth a shot. So, what’s the pow-wow about?”

You explain your idea to the older woman in brief, and after sharing a glance with her terribly excited niece she offers to assist with crafting them a suite of potent Relics. After tossing around a few ideas and offering some key pieces of advice, you and Gina bow out of the collaboration after donating a bit of biomass to the Forge, feeling a bit lighter as you return to the large, circular couch that’s recessed into the floor. You bring out the Nail and the spinal cannon that West Gamma used against B’ni in their savage scuffle, placing them on the table before the two of you as Gina settles into the seat next to you.

“You ready to do this?” You ask aloud, an unnecessary gesture given your bond, but the cautious question is one you feel better voicing, regardless. She nods, her brunette locks shifting at the movement. “Alright, what do you need me to do?”

“Honestly? Just keep being a cutie.” She replies with a wink and a grin as she takes the Nail in her palm. “I know enough about West’s defenses to where I think I shouldn’t have any trouble. In fact…”

You watch as she closes her eyes, the lines along her forearms flickering with amethyst light that makes the Nail pulse once, twice, then…she opens her eyes, her face shifting into a scowl. You’re about to open your mouth to speak before she shakes her head, a smile on her lips despite the feeling of disgust that shudders through her.

(Continued)
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>>3729967

“It’s done, and…I’m fine.” She reassures, glancing to the darkened fleshscape outside. “Just another sneering Doctor and another tortured girl. It’s…god, it just pisses me off.”

She gingerly places the Nail back on the table, her fingers hesitating over the gnarled spinal column just within reach.

“…Do you think she’s evil?” She asks, a curious note to her voice.

“West?” You blurt out, staring incredulously at the Neuromancer beside you. “Yeah. Absolutely, she’s freaking insa…”

“No no, I mean the other one, with the Disassociated Ones.” Gina elaborates, her emotions a tumultuous storm of wariness and curiosity. “Francine. I’ve never met her, but I got the gist of how she is from being around you again.”

“These Relics…she wants them back once we’re done, right? Meaning we’ll have to meet her in person.” She continues, studying your eyes intently with her hazel gaze. “If she’s earnest about wanting to do the right thing, do you think she’d be open to me doing a little mind-delving on her, just to be safe?”

“Maybe…why?”

“Well, I’m just thinking that if West’s paranoid enough to install backups of herself in Relics she just tossed in a closet and forgot about, then what does she have primed in an actual proxy of herself?” Gina shrugs. “I just wanna avoid a Manchurian Candidate scenario, you know?”

“No, that makes sense…” You relent, your answer doing little to curb the churning thoughts within the other girl’s mind. “...is there something else that’s bothering you?”

“Eh, it’s just…I get it. Wanting to change.” She muses. “I mean, I want to be careful, because I’ll be damned if anyone’s going to put our family in danger, but I…I don’t know. Like, I want her to be genuine. I want her to be being real with us, but at the same time I’m suspicious. I just want to make sure, and this…”

Her arms flicker with light once more.

“…this may be our only way of ensuring she’s being true to her word.”

>>”I think that’s fair, actually. We might be doing Francine a favor, if she has a failsafe she’s not aware of. And if she refuses, well…that’s not someone we’d want by our side, anyway. But yeah…I think it’s worth giving her a chance. Plus, I’m not going to sneeze at the chance to get November’s armor upgraded.”

>>”Gina, you and West couldn’t be more different. You’re a good person, but West, no matter her iteration, is irredeemable. Save your effort. We’ll get her the Relics, but I have no intention of helping her with whatever plan she’s made.”

>>”If you’re that worried, then we could find some other way to free the girls in these Relics. We don’t necessarily need to bring them to Francine. I’m sure there are other Phantasmal Conduits out there that we might be able to get to help us.”

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next one and a half hours, Gentlemen.)
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>>3729971
>”I think that’s fair, actually. We might be doing Francine a favor, if she has a failsafe she’s not aware of. And if she refuses, well…that’s not someone we’d want by our side, anyway. But yeah…I think it’s worth giving her a chance. Plus, I’m not going to sneeze at the chance to get November’s armor upgraded.”
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>>3729971
>Lay a hand on her shoulder and smile confidently

>”I think that’s fair, actually. And she will understand our precasution, i think she isnt sure herself if she can be fully trusted"

>"We will ask for her consent to it beforehand and you can do as much mind diving as you think is necessary."

> "If she is genuine it would be an incredible boon to have a way to get rid of the west collective."

>"If she refuses or has a failsafe against doing something like that she is unaware of we can give her the relics like we were asked to but stop all further communication with her"

>"If she is genuine but has a failsafe we should not involve her further or go ahead and end her right then and there if she wants us to. I do not want to see her shackled to West Prime. No one deserves that......."

>"Either way i would like to coax out the secrets of Novembers Armor out of her beforehand"
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>>3729971
>>”I think that’s fair, actually. We might be doing Francine a favor, if she has a failsafe she’s not aware of. And if she refuses, well…that’s not someone we’d want by our side, anyway. Plus, I’m not going to sneeze at the chance to get November’s armor upgraded.”
> " But Gina, you and West couldn’t be more different. You’re a good person, but West is irredeemable. Save your effort."
>”If you’re that worried, then we could find some other way to free the girls in these Relics. We don’t necessarily need to bring them to Francine. I’m sure there are other Phantasmal Conduits out there that we might be able to get to help us.”

minor edits to some parts, but overall i think it gets the point across.
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>>3729987
id not give her the relics if we cant read her intentions. too risky, especially the nail and spine. dont remember if the jaw had a daughter inside of it or no, but if not, then fair, but the other two i want to hang onto until she can outright infront of us aid them, otherwise we find another method.
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>>3729996
Sure.

The Throat cannon did not have a daughter inside as far as i know and remember

>Lay a hand on her shoulder and smile confidently

>”I think that’s fair, actually. And she will understand our precasution, i think she isnt sure herself if she can be fully trusted"

>"We will ask for her consent to it beforehand and you can do as much mind diving as you think is necessary."

> "If she is genuine it would be an incredible boon to have a way to get rid of the west collective."

>"If she refuses or has a failsafe against doing something like that she is unaware of we can give her
*the throat cannon like we were asked to but stop all further communication with her and find another method to save those daughters, same if she cant help them*"

>"If she is genuine but has a failsafe we should not involve her further or go ahead and end her right then and there if she wants us to. I do not want to see her shackled to West Prime. No one deserves that......."

>"Either way i would like to coax out the secrets of Novembers Armor out of her beforehand"

More like this?
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>>3729971
>”I think that’s fair, actually. We might be doing Francine a favor, if she has a failsafe she’s not aware of. And if she refuses, well…that’s not someone we’d want by our side, anyway. But yeah…I think it’s worth giving her a chance. Plus, I’m not going to sneeze at the chance to get November’s armor upgraded.”
>I think it would be hard to check using Neuromancy, given November's anti-neuromancy defenses. She likely has those on herself, and perhaps because she's worried about West Prime herself.
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>>3730003
sure, closer to what id like anyways. we'll have to see how things really go down though, once there.

>>3729972
also, you put the Ferali on the relics sheet but that was never ours, but Aces.
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>>3730014
(Ah, my apologies. I'll make that correction at once.)
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>>3729971
Ammending my vote from >>3729987
to
>Lay a hand on her shoulder and smile confidently

>”I think that’s fair, actually. And she will understand our precasution, i think she isnt sure herself if she can be fully trusted"

>"We will ask for her consent to it beforehand and you can do as much mind diving as you think is necessary."

> "If she is genuine it would be an incredible boon to have a way to get rid of the west collective."

>"If she refuses or has a failsafe against doing something like that she is unaware of we can give her the throat cannon like we were asked to but stop all further communication with her and find another method to save those daughters, same if she cant help them"

>"If she is genuine but has a failsafe we should not involve her further or go ahead and end her right then and there if she wants us to. I do not want to see her shackled to West Prime. No one deserves that......."

>"Either way i would like to coax out the secrets of Novembers Armor out of her beforehand"
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>>3730003
>The Throat cannon did not have a daughter inside as far as i know and remember
Francine claimed it did, that's why she was retrieving it. But otherwise, yeah, I like this entry.
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>>3729971
Changing my vote from>>3730005
to>>3730042
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>>3729971

“I think that’s fair, actually.” You say as you reach out, placing a comforting hand on Gina’s shoulder and flashing her a sincere smile. “She’ll understand our precaution, as I think even she isn’t entirely sure if she can be trusted, given her origins.”

Gina returns your smile with her own as she plucks the Spine from the table, while you continue to speak. “We’ll ask for her consent to it beforehand and you can do as much mind diving as you think is necessary. If she’s genuine, then it’d be an incredible boon to have a way to get rid of the west collective. And if she refuses or has a failsafe against doing something like that she is unaware of we can give her the throat cannon like we were asked, but we just stop all further communication with her and find another method to save those Daughters.”

“And if she has other failsafes?” Gina asks, her hands flickering with amethyst as the spinal cannon is purged of its defense measures.

"Then we should not involve her further…or go ahead and end her right then and there, if she wants us to.” You reply simply, watching Gina rise from the couch. “I don’t want to see her shackled to West Prime, and I don’t think she does, either. No one deserves that…but either way, I want to figure out how to upgrade November beforehand.”

Gina offers you her hand and you take it, rising from your seat to her grateful smile.

“Agreed…and thanks for hearing me out.” She murmurs, and she gives your hand an affectionate squeeze before the Midnight Crew emerges from the Forge room, proudly bearing your gifts. Dorian, Julia, and Amara stride up to you as you walk to rejoin everyone, with Dorian speaking low.

“Charon’s journal ends shortly before whatever incident Mother started at Almath, and it mainly contains records of their early days in the Crucible along with recollections of Hexane culture, but that’s not the interesting part.” He whispers, Charon’s journal clutched in his left hand. “That’s all we were able to decipher before it tried to draw us in.”

“Excuse me?”

“They’re a Hexane creation, I feel like a fool for not realizing it before.” Dorian says hurriedly as you reach the Crew. “It’s not so much as what’s written in them, but rather the experiences of the writer that are contained within them. They allow a perfect recollection, and it’s simply fascina…Amara, where are you…?”

“I’ll be right back, I wanna go make something!” Amara calls back, darting around the girls before you and disappearing into the scarlet gloom of the Forge.

(Continued)
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>>3730160

“Yo, these are friggin’ sweet.” Jackie says with a grin, giving her glaive an experimental one-handed twirl, while the other holds a Hive Phone. “Good to know you wanna keep in touch, too.”

Ace racks the bolt of her new Kuolema Rifle, giving a satisfied nod that belies the waves of giddiness that emanate across the empathic channel. Quinn, on the other hand, is busy fawning over the pair of Relics you’ve crafted for her, while Keane starts her own, clumsier twirl of the IV Staff before Amara trots out of the Forgeroom with a wide grin. She thrusts a bundle into Keane’s arms, staring at her expectantly like only a child giving a gift really can, watching intently as the other girl unwraps a freshly-made Lantern of Dreams.

“You said you had trouble getting to sleep, and about the weird dreams and stuff, so I wanted to make this for you!” Amara says, hands behind her back as Keane just stares at the lantern, her lips pursed tight. “Sleep’s really important, and now you can share your dreams with Ace and everyone, so they can protect you when you have bad dre…”

Amara doesn’t get to finish her sentence before Keane’s scooped the little girl up in her arms, holding her tight as she spins her around. Keane’s eyes are wet with tears when she finally puts your youngest teammate down, and you begin your goodbyes in earnest before Jackie calls for everyone to settle down before addressing you directly.

“Thank you, Shu. Thanks to every one of you, actually.” Jackie stumbles, her words of appreciation coming out a little stilted, a little forced…though no less genuine for it. “I think I speak for all of us when I say we had good drinks, good times, and…yeah. This was fun.”

“Let’s let it n-not b-be the last t-time, alright?” Julia adds, and Quinn nods quickly.

“Aye. In fact, I think if we let too long pass before our next drinking party then I’m gonna get an earful from this, aren’t I?” Jackie clips, shaking the Hive Phone. “Anyway…yeah. So, keep being badasses, and keep being…well, defiant.”

“See you around, Jack.” You say, and the leader of the Midnight Crew just gives a little salute before the air shimmers around them, and they’re gone. It’s quieter in the Dragon’s Roost, now…but the echoes of their gratitude and goodwill can still be felt across the empathic channel.

Now, the space is yours…though time is still of the essence.

>>Stay here and delve into the journals personally.

>>Stay at the Roost and spend time with your family.

>>Speak to Karma.

>>Write-In

OR

COMPOSE YOUR PARTY AND LOADOUT, THEN

>>Depart for the Disassociated Ones

>>Continue Westward.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next two hours, Gentlemen. Apologies for the wait, work had a busy spell before I had the chance to finish up the post, so thank you for bearing with me.)
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(Also, would anyone be up for a spot of rapid-posting this evening, starting about four hours from now? Let me know, as we may be able to do that again tomorrow as well if that works for everyone's schedules.)
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>>3730162
>that scene with Amara and Keane
geezus Christ that was adorable. and a wonderfully genuine moment. hardly what i expected that gift to be, a fantastic one too, and a great way to slip in a little bit of character development and detailzation for Keane too. certainly thought that was gonna be one of the relic ideas i crafted for the metaphorical dumpster honestly.

>>3730173
im up for it sure, on both accounts.
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>>3730160
>“They’re a Hexane creation, I feel like a fool for not realizing it before.” Dorian says hurriedly as you reach the Crew. “It’s not so much as what’s written in them, but rather the experiences of the writer that are contained within them. They allow a perfect recollection, and it’s simply fascina
Right, so that's why Silvis doesn't want us reading Ozmas' journal. Because we wouldn't just read her words but experience her thought processes. You know, Silvis, I get that you're not the best at comparative anthropology (xenology?), but I think you understand enough about humanity to know that psychic mind-journals would be notable to us. You could have told us this part, saved us a lot of internal debate.

>>3730162
Aww, we're all friends. I hope to see you again sometime, Midnight Crew. Maybe at the last town before the Cord, we can meet up and share a drink again.

>>Speak to Karma.
>>Write-In
>What does she know about this sort of journal? How safe are they?

>>3730173
Sounds fine by me.
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>>3730162
Well the Prideful Calphalor is more of a spear than a glaive unless we made her the Conquerors Glaive though that is a two handed weapon

Anyway

>Speak to Karma get our exact threat level and the threatlevel of the crew. How safe are the Journals to read for snyone. Can one get out from them if they so wish or does one have to finish them to the end.

then afterwards

>Head out to the Dos

We want to get this thing done and over with ending our little sidequest with the relics if possible and getting the possible upgrades from Francine
Afterweards we can continue westwards i would say

possible Party composition
>Shu, Gina, November, Amara

>>3730173
That wont work for me since that would be closer to one o'clock in the mornign for me but if everyone else wants to go ahead
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>>3730162
honestly, i know im probably gonna get outvoted due to the journals, but my own personal interest in them is literally nonexistent, so my votes for;
>>Depart for the Disassociated Ones

Team;
>Shu, November, Gina, and Rath.

the DOs didn't seem to like having Amara round honestly, and Dorian and Julia never showed as big an interest in them.

ill get on the Relics in a moment.
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>>3730173
Tonight's fine. Tomorrow I've got work as per usual of my job.

So what did we really craft for the Crew, and what's the price tag? I see the Kuolema Rifle, I see the Conquerer's glaive, I see Pokopina Khrisa, I see the Lantern of Dreams, I see the IV Staff and I see the Hive phone.
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>>3730162
>>3730191
Relic loadout;

Shu
>Contender, Hydra Heart, Matrons, Whistle( RHO CUNT)

Gina;
> Shawl, Sui Interitus

Rath;
>Cutis Tractus, Gutgrab Daggers, Cursas Alas, Gauntlets

November;
>Uzi, Sui Tormentis


>>3730198
we made what we asked to make.
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>>3730212
hrm, actually i guess we could give one of the suits to Shu, cuts down on her having to use up Armor slots for armor.

also for reference i gave Tormentis is at a level is can focus on speed, which could be very useful on November, while the Sui Interitus starts out with only speed/Reaction time, so felt that would help Gina more.

would love to have Rath keep the Tormentis, but felt with trying to juggle everything, the extra defense and grapple method would still fit her well. the strength is kickass on her but shes got other methods for that. still probably is best suited for her though, i was just trying to both not waste our new armor sets while putting them all to good use, and this is the best i could think up of.
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>>3730212
I think that Sui Tormentis makes more sense for Rath. It's been her standby. Cutis Tractus has some use, I suppose, given that it could conduct her Ignition touch effects, but I don't think it really fits her. Besides, I'm not even sure if November can use Sui Tormentis. Something that hooks into your skin to establish an interface probably isn't useful for someone with a metallic exoskeleton.
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>>3730198
( This >>3730212 is correct. Ignore my previous post, I am afraid I bamboozled myself in having too many notes and I referred to the old one.)
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>>3730223
im still sticking with my vote of
>>3729935
as it still prevents too heavy a load on any one person.

also wait, did we not make the new armor then? pretty sure everyone still agreed they wanted them, only that thematically it would make sense to wait til the Midnight Crew leave is all.

>>3730233
oh, well then never-mind haha.

>>3730225
fair point on November, but see
>>3730224
it was the best way to split them up without outright wasting one of them. Tormentis can go to Shu then if November cant use it.
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>>3730233
SO we craftted the Prideful? Just asking since the description of Jackie twirling a glaive does sound a bit off.... The Glaive is way to ..... unwieldy even if she is strong enough to wield it one handed. It would be just to long and unbalanced.

>>3730191
No you wont get outvoted, i will try my best to bring the story of the west relics to an end as soon as possible and get many many sweet things(Maybe some murdertentacles for Gina if we can get our hands on plans for them)


>>3730162

So i will change my vote form >>3730189
to support >>3730191
and>>3730212
with the Tormetnits going to Shu if November can interface with it
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>>3730254
(Oh, it would be far too unwieldy if Jackie hadn't hybridized her Calcite Armorer and Fibromancer trees into a defensive strength-boosting subdermal matrix. You granting them the use of the Engine has done wonders for them, I assure you.)
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>>3730239
>it was the best way to split them up without outright wasting one of them. Tormentis can go to Shu then if November cant use it.
I'd actually give the Tractus to Shu. Tractus is bad for Rath because it weighs down the user, as our primary melee fighter Rath needs to be able to get into combat fast. Shu, on the other hand, tends to fight at mid-range so the speed decrease isn't a huge problem and having some crowd control via grappling would benefit her well.
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>>3730265
so what other optimizations did the Midnight Crew go through? What did Keane, Ace, and Quinn optimize, hybridize, and made stronger?
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>>3730212
>>3730267
I know it's counterintuitive but I think it's best if we leave some relics back at home for Dorian, Julia, and Amara to use before we leave. It's best to give them some form of self-defense in relics. I know it's Mara's penthouse, which is very well hidden, but I do not want to take any chances.
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>>3730265
So she got the glaive and not the prideful...... hmm i can see her making good use of it sure.

I still can not picture her well how she wields a weapon much probably a bit bigger than herself. How big is Jackie anyway? Larger or smaller than 2 meters? The Glaive is roughly 2.5 Meters long. OWuld be an interesting spin she probably scraper the edges along hte floor or she needs lots of space....
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>>3730265
you're gonna have to show us their actual ability trees someday BHOP, they sound like a superbly enjoyable read all on their own, especially if you kept older versions to compare to eachother.

>>3730267
Shu already has numerous grappling methods though, and Rath has the Cursas Alas to offset the speed debuff a bit from the Tractus. Shu really doesn't gain as much from the Tractus as Rath could. literally didn't even take into account the touch abilities as no one has those in this party setup.

mobility also isnt an issue for Rath past getting in close to her opponent, and the Tractus and Daggers will then help her make sure mobility isnt an issue further. really, i get your argument for Tormentis over Tractus on Rath, but the Tractus really is the worst option out of them for Shu.

>>3730274
i disagree. i mean, we already are leaving some behind anyways, but the people venturing out are in the greatest danger and need what advantages they can get.
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>>3730282
I suppose you have a point about Shu not needing the Tractus. I still think that the Tormentis is much more Rath's style, though. Maybe give the Tractus to Gina? Ideally she won't be moving much at all, but being able to grapple opponents that get in close with her would be a pretty good combo with Neon Ascendant. Stun them, wrap them, spray acid with Bella's power. Then we could Shu the Interitus, have her take advantage of that speed boost.
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>>3730301
We could try and make her a mobile Saboteur. level up Gladatorial Swarm so that she can basically "Swim in the ground, then pop out like some landshark and hit the backlines with Neuromancy and Terraforming Shenanigans. Also, I really want to make full use of her newly expanded powers and playstyle. Make her a mobile skirmisher with her new abilities.
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>>3730301
Wait. I have an idea. We have Gina make her Gladatorial Swarm, and instead of using Nervous Torrent and spraying it out of Gina's mouth or other unfortunate orafices, we have her generate the acid from the Gladatorial Swarm Leeches?
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>>3730301
eh, thats the thing though. really only Rath will ever make proper use of the Tractus grappling capabilities. i already agreed the Tormentis is better on her, but the issue is the Tractus isnt really superb in my opinion on anyone else but her, except under very specific circumstances. i mean, really it comes down to certain factors, such as what do we expect to fight?

usually we face a singular opponent, in which case the Tractus only should be on Rath. if we face multiple opponents, then maybe Shu or Gina, as one or both might be forced into melee. its a gamble i guess, as it ends up extremely underutilized in my opinion if we face they type of fights we generally face.
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>>3730310
I still see Gina as more of a combat mage who uses terraforming magic to control the battlefield and stuns enemys with just a glance. Piling on Status Effects onto enemys to weaken them and then finish them off with her other powers

The Cutis is also way better on Julia but right now for our party it is best on Rath. She can mitigate the slow down somewhat by catapulting herself with her Tensile Strings and her igniton with the grappling is brutal.
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>>3730317
That sounds cool. Actually, hey, does Gladiatorial Swarm count as a touch-based ability? If so, the Tractus would work really well for Gina, let her turn her sleeves into a bunch of worm-tentacles.

>>3730319
Well, I suppose the problem is that it's an armor intended for a specific party member, Julia, and she's not going to come on this outing. So we're just left wondering "what do we do with this thing, then". I agree that Rath is probably the best user of it among the current party, but good enough that it outweighs giving her the Tormentis? I am less sure of that.
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>>3730329
hard sell, though a good thing to note is we wont be pumping out insane numbers like we have been from the Tormentis regardless of who wears it.

also, we should have BHOP clarify what counts as a touch effect here. it might have to specifically be something intended as a touch effect, like Julias Stacks, not something that just happens to be done via touching. otherwise thats alot more powerful than intended for it to be.

>>3730167
see question above, please.
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>>3730335
(What has been described is quite possible, yes.)
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>>3730347
hi Bhop im not dead. but i missed a ton of threads. i need to find out where i last was and then work my way back here XD i took a break from 4chan for a bit
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>>3730371
what was the last thing you remembered?
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i remember the trans guy but im pretty sure we were quite a bit further than that. doggo maybe? wa it doggo thats a bit closer i think. i probbably make no sense here but, i mean i generally know stuff. i remember finding out more about the old shu like didnt actuallly kill the best friend right ya know what let me track my way back ill be back in like. give me a day. and ill be up to date (or maybe a week if im slow)
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i think i actually vanished around 19 maybe 20
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i am terrible at recalling last thing remember apparently because memories come flooding back the momment i open up archives
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anyway ill quiet myself because im probbably disrupting the flow of this with my confusion see yall later
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>>3730390
If the last thing is the Tindalos well you should read vein 15 again(there we fight them) and then get to vein 16. where we meet November for the first time.


If you remmber a massive mountain of a fight in which Mara participated as well as a massive voting session about how to level the team up.

That would be Vein 19 if you dont

if you do it would be the end of vein 20
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>>3730371
(Welcome back Gen, I'm glad to see you again. I got a little worried when you dropped off, so thanks for letting us know you're back.)
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>>3730347
Oh, dango, let's give Gina the Tractus, then. Tentacle sleeves sound awesome.

>>3730371
Welcome back, Gen. Yeah, a lot of stuff went down. It's been a crazy...four days, I think?...for Shu. Very hectic, lots of running around stopping huge threats from ending the world. Things have cooled down a bit now, though. We're discussing what to do with our relative "free time", probably going to go strike against West.
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>>3730419
We are really gonna have to deal with Sam. Letting her just go insane due to loneliness, is just to cruel for Shu as a character....
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>>3730428
sorry about the bamboozle. I realized that spoiling the highlights would do Gen a disservice.

I do agree on the issue with Sam. After we drop off the relics to Francine and learning the Instruction Manual on November's forgebody, we should figure out what to do with Sam.
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>>3730420
>>3730419
>>3730418

alright so looking through

also wait who the heck is the midnight crew. XD i dont even remember that. hmmm yup lost so looking at the archives i remember the tank but dont remember midnight crew so ima just settle myself at thread 17 and work my way through.

also Bhop if ya ever actually worried about me id say go find me elsewhere but realize thats probbably difficult. considering i dont use the same name anywhere else. all ya need to know is im doing fine. just been working more on my art stuff

but uh yeah ive actually been busy running a few things elsewhere admining and working its actually nice to get back here though for a break. but yeah i found my spot now
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>>3730426
>>>3730167
im still sticking to my vote as is. i still think the Tractus will be much better suited to Rath.

>>3730212
>>3730162
keeping my vote the same with the exception the Tormentis can go to Shu if November is unable to use it at all.

>>3730390
glad to see ya back.
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>>3730435
which is why i kept my description vague but that is neither here nor there.

Should we maybe ask Francine for some kind off storage for Dreamdaughters. I would imagine that the Dos could have something like that, to maybe even transfer them over into mechanical bodys since the bionic bodies wont have much storage for any extra dream daughters.

That is maybe something we can ask November about. She probably had one or two dreamdaughters at some point in time. And the general stance towards dreamdaughters of the Dos

>>3730441
Nice seeing you. actually i dont think we have ever met before. you dropped off about the time i joined i think...

And i hope i could be off service
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>>3730444
i also have no idea where that extra link in the first section of my post came from. 4chan sometimes you just do whatever you want huh?

>>3730441
whew, yeah if you dont remember the midnight crew you are a good ways back.

>>3730428
>>3730435
probably missed the best opportunity from when Gina was clearing out the relics.
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>>3730441
I'm glad to hear you're doing well, Gen.
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(Gentlemen, I'll be heading home shortly after finishing up the work day, and I'll post in less than an hour, if all goes well. Thank you for your patience, and I hope your day is going well.)
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>>3730449
Well SHIT. Aggh. it hurts me to see that we won't be able to interact with Sam and get her back to a decent sanity level at this rate. We'll be stuck with a zombie monster inside of Shu's head.
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>>3730503
>>3730449
We have to move towards the DOs by Knightling anyway. We could have Gina take care of it during the journey.

If Shu can stay awake during it anyway at least.

Otherwise the technology of the DOs might be our best chance to keep her in a tesseract or something similar until we can find a better solution or get her to a psychiatrist.
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>>3730510
or we can invest actual time to talk to Sam and get to know her. If it soothes her, we could alter our appearance by getting a haircut or wearing that cosmetic skin patch on our face.
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>>3730503
>>3730510
well, i was just saying it was probably the best time to delete her, when we were deleting the wests, not that we wont have any other moment. really think just focusing more or less on the task at hand will do us better. as an example of why, we kinda overlooked it in the first place due to throwing everything into one order, instead of taking our time with everything we had on our list. i kinda didn't even realize that vote had won, as i was just focusing the one thing at a time, aka, the forge things, otherwise i would've brought it up.

>>3730519
nah, Sam doesn't deserve that. best to get rid of her, one way or another.
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>>3730519
That's not really Sam's issue. I don't think Sam has ever really been upset that Shu shares a face with her. The problem is that Shu has agency and control and is deciding her own fate, while Sam is locked in a box. Not that taking her out of the box would really help any. She'd still see Shu being important and mattering and having authority and try to undermine that in an attempt to seize it. It wouldn't work, Sam doesn't have the right personality to have accomplished the same things Shu has, but she's literally insanely jealous of Shu so I don't think she'd take that into consideration.
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>>3730519
She is pretty much insane at this point. We wont be able to help her anymore. And i doubt no matter what we do she hates us. And not just us but everything we stand for and everything and everyone we care about. Herr hatred is all she has left. its the only thing that drvies her now

I would be willing to try and helpo her but not while the crucible is in full swin. That is absolutely not worth it.

>>3730526
I dont care if Sam deserves it or not we have to do somethig. If that means deleting her because we have no other possibility and she would just turn insane otherwise and become a zombie. If we can store her on ice or something we can hope to have the best psychiatirsts on the planet take a look at her. But i agree even trying would be a massive waste of everyones time and recources.

Though i dont think she would be revived for a long time due to everything being unstable and dangerous. And having a madwoman running around wont help anyone.
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>>3730536
well, yes, thats what i said, or thought i did. i agree we should do something about her, i was just saying it sounded like an odd thing to try and do while flying on bees and having other things to focus on. even if people dont like it and dont want to let her sit forever, she is not currently a priority nor really a threat, except possibly under super specific circumstances, maybe.

all i was really saying is, trying to focus on too many things at once can get disorienting, and our current objective happens to already involve many parts and involve some major objectives.
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>>3730544
Okay i misinterpreted what you said. it may be foolish of me to think there wont be another complication along the way and having Gia<n on Lookout would probably be more benfical than having her delete/freeze Sams Mindstate

I should probably not constantly switch between the Thread and my own writings
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oof this is gonna take awhile going through the threads i forgot how long these threads are but im making my way through guys i should probbably step out to avoid all the spoilers
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>>3730588
Maybe. Just wait till you get to the fanfictions of the intermission thread
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>>3730596
is the intermission nessesary to read ?
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>>3730603
No. We had fun, though.
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>>3730586
yeah that too, Ginas our go too right now for looking out for danger.
honestly i wish i could do that, but having some writers block a bit myself.

>>3730588
well, thats only if you care about spoilers, but yes, if you do, without a doubt there will be info we have to discuss here that would spoil some things.

>>3730603
it is not. it was just there to keep the community going and BHOP in communication with us during his break. however, if you do enjoy reading the actual community discussions on the quest, there is a decent amount in there.
and yes, fanworks aswell.
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(Back home and writing now.)

>>3730603

(Not really, but some of the Anons here have posted some interesting side-stories and the like, and they're absolutely worth reading when you have the time.)
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>>3730603
not necessary to read at all

but there were some discussions about the way forwaard. There also was some writing from at least three anons
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>>3730603
if you're into theorycrafting and reliccrafting and general small bits of Q&A with fanfics, yes.
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alright thanks guys for the advice yall have been really helpfull in getting me back into the swing of things
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>>3730536
>>3730544
I know it's a suicidal and stupid idea, but what if we uploaded her mind into one of our Bee constructs? Granted, the first thing Sam will ever do given agency is to attack Shu on sight, I want to see how much pent up frustration Sam has to vent before she becomes mentally too tired to beat upon Sam's chest.
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>>3730621
i am outright unsure it would work properly unless it was a forge made construct. id also imagine it would require one of those elusive dream daughter based Phantasmal abilities that West wrote as if they were the more common one yet instead we have not seen one. well, i guess more so, either way would work, but we would need said type of ability, and without the construct being free of our control it might literally not be able to attack us without permission or anything like that.

granted im kinda against the idea, but the discussion to convince me or not cant be had without the actual tools to even attempt it.
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>>3730621
WE could pout her in a bsic swarmling... maybe. She would be incapable of hamring us our regeneration would outpace her. we could literally go to sleep an the most she could do would be annoy us. she could als be squasehed by an accidental swipe of one od our hands. Probably can even create it though

If we transfer her its into stasis/ getting rid of her for good entirely much more though
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“Alright then. Gina, Rath, and November? Let’s go to the Disassociated. Dorian and Julia, I’d like for you two to hold down the fort here with Amara, and feel free to use the Core Console to make yourselves comfortable.”

“Gotcha, boss.” Rath replies, about to retrieve her gear before she pauses, glancing around. “Also, I dunno if I’m alone in wondering this, but…where the hell is Claire? Amara, you got a lead on slime-girl?”

The younger girl sniff the air experimentally, her cat-like ears twitching for a moment before she just gives a small shrug. Rath heaves a small, irritated huff before she disappears into the Forgeroom alongside her aunt, and you and Gina quickly get ready in the other room. You say your temporary goodbyes to your artists and their ward, and before long you’re picking your way across the jagged, rough-hewn beach, the lapping of acid waves doing little to soften the sharp edges of the stones underfoot. You pass the time in relative silence, save for Rath’s contented whistling of a half-remembered tune.

“You seem in high spirits.” You finally say, just as the four of you approach the steep wall that you first attempted to scale in your search for the cloister of reclusive Daughters. “Are you riding the high of a good sleep, or just looking forward to visiting the labs again?”

“Ah, she’s excited for the chance to see big ‘ol Beira again.” Gina chimes in with a sly wink that sends Rath into a sputtering of denial, her scarlet cheeks doing little to bolster her objections.

“I'm sorry, what’s this about Beira?” November chimes in, breaking her focused silence with a blurt of static from her rusty speakers. Rath’s scrambling to defend herself when the wall before you slides open, revealing a towering older woman with a full head of platinum hair that falls over a suit of rugged armor.

“Ha, friends!” Beira shouts, leaning on the doorframe with a wide, self-assured smile. She scans your group with her cool gaze before it settles on November, her smile faltering for a fraction of a second before she composes herself.

“Hello Beira.” November intones, granting the other woman a curt nod before the silver-haired warrior does the same.

“November.” Comes the other woman’s reply, her smile tilted towards you, now. “Doctor West told me you all'd be coming by. C’mon in, I’ll walk you there.”

(Continued)
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>>3730645

"You caught the DO's at a weird time." Beira announces unprompted after a few minutes of walking, perhaps to override the chord of tension in the air between her and November. "Launch is in seven days, so everyone's keeping busy."

"Holy...that soon?" Rath asks, and Beira just gives her a broad smile as she leads you into the depths of the compound's labyrinthine corridors.

"Yep. We're about to head out, and everyone that's going is topside, making their final adjustments." Beira explains. "I'm down here for weapons testing, and the Doctor, well...I don't think she's planning on joining us."

After almost a half-hour of walking along identical slate-grey halls, she gestures to a door in her right, indistinguishable from any of the other four-dozen you passed on the way here.

"Doc's right through there." Beira announces, turning from you to Rath with a smile. "Hey, you came at the perfect time, actually. I was running my arsenal through its last few calibrations before packing them up. You wanna come shooting?"

It takes all of Rath's constitution not to dart off then and there, but she holds herself together well enough to play it relatively cool as she turns to you and November with a aloof shrug. While you can tell she's practically chomping at the bit to go, you sense a level of hesitation from November. There's an oddly tumultuous set of feelings whirling deep within her rusted armor, but it's hard to tell what they are given the waves of excitement pulsing off the red-head before you.

>>Keep your team together and politely decline. You'd feel more comfortable if everyone met with Francine together.

>>Urge November to accompany them to go shooting. That'll leave you and Gina with Francine, and it'll make for an easier time of the interrogation you have planned.

>>Let Rath and Beira have their fun. November should stay by your side since you'd like to have her armor upgraded, and it'll save you the trouble of tracking her down again.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next one and a half hours, Gentlemen. After that, rapid-posting will be in effect.)
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>>3730648
>Let Rath have her fun, but hand her a small Buzzling incase you need to call her back quickly.
>Hint towards November with heavy implicated words that if she has some reason to worry about Rath being alone with Beira, she shouldn't hesitate to go too. otherwise remind her Francine needs to show us how to upgrade her armor before we leave, but that it can wait if she has... other things, to attend to.
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>>3730648
>Let Rath and Beira have their fun. November should stay by your side since you'd like to have her armor upgraded, and it'll save you the trouble of tracking her down again.

Since Francine was also the one that dissuaded November from fully digitizing herself at the cost of her pre-crucible memories or something like that, she's probably good to have around when talking to Francine and convincing her to trust us.
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>>3730648
>Keep your team together and politely decline. You'd feel more comfortable if everyone met with Francine together.
>"Rath, why admire Beira's guns that will be put away after firing once and sent to space when your Aunt is a Living Walking Arsenal in an Iron Man suit? Imagine the possibilities you and November can have when we get the instruction manual."
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>>3730671
well, besides possibly insulting Beira with that, you seem to be missing minor implications its not just the gun Rath is excited for, just a major component of it. plus, i mean, woman's like ten feet tall with a cannon probably as BIG as November is. theres just no comparison to be made there. being a /k/ faggot myself i certainly would want to go watch futuristic space cannons blow shit up too.
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>>3730648
I'll change my vote >>3730671 to support >>3730661
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>>3730648
>>Let Rath and Beira have their fun. November should stay by your side since you'd like to have her armor upgraded, and it'll save you the trouble of tracking her down again.
I trust Rath to be safe on her own. We've already left her alone in the Disassociated's base one before, the last time we were here. Worst case scenario, she has to punch a handsy cyborg. But I don't think it will come to that. Whatever the tension between November and Beira (maybe Beira was responsible for November being exiled from the Disassociated?), I doubt Rath will be unsafe. More likely November is just worried that Beira will say something to Rath that she'd be uncomfortable having her niece hear.
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>>3730696
i doubt Rath will be unsafe sure, but at least giving November the option cant hurt, seeing as how shes so worried. she can always come and get her armor checked out after we finish our other business... or it wont be something that was going to happen regardless.
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>>3730707
We can try to hint at it with the empathic field. Or wait, can't we use Gina to set up a telepathic connection? She connects discreetly via Neon Ascendant, then splices the call with Crimson Cord? Or do you think her eyes lighting up will be too noticeable?
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>>3730717
i mean, we can just use wordplay, but no, i dont think her eyes would be too noticeable, the real issue is November has high Neuromantic resistances, which very easily also could be separate from any work arounds Gina has due to the nature of being an artificial daughter.
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>>3730650
oh, BHOP, did November switch her core out for the Tier 3?
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>>3730742
(Yes, she did.)
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just an update where i am finished 18th vein and holy heck we got alot of stuff at that vein
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also just casually avoiding looking at what happend in this thread just now
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>>3730761
oh... oh man... if you think that at that point... well, you're getting to the part of the quest id call 'the big three' more or less. wont say anymore than that, but im sure everyone here knows exactly what im getting at.
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>>3730770

i am intrigued
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>>3730761
>>3730776
And beyond vein 18 lies the roller coaster of emotions. You may have not been there, but you will see what we have been through through our post discussions.
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>>3730776
If you're okay with some minor spoilers, look at just the very top of the character sheet page, where it lists our Health and Bio levels. Compare what they were then to what they are now, about a week of in-game time later. What the hell happened to us? I mean, I know, I was there. But still...

>>3730780
Ugh. Don't remind me. I'm kind of embarrassed about the mood swings, in hindsight. We were all over the place.
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>>3730789
speaking of that, ive got older versions of our sheets saved, one per Act of the story, saved at the end of each one. my goodness things have changed.
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>>3730789
um ill do that right now actually

i dont mind. i wont look at our abilities but might as well look
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alright then. well thats crazy. ima just walk away and wait we went to using a google doc? when did that happen
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>>3730798
(Indeed. A kind Anon on here has been incredibly generous in creating and curating it for me, as you've acquired a host of new powers and allies.)
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>>3730798
awhile ago. i think i made it right after Isabelle first left us? ah, it appears it was first used in the opening on Vein 15, though i just realized i totally forgot to check when in the story that was... whoops.

>>3730805
kinda do wish now id made a new one for you to use with each new Act, that way those looking back to read had the old versions more in line with the content they were reading to peruse, rather than just the newest stats and abilities. like i said, still got one for each closing of an story act(so two), but doesn't do much good now that its too late to properly post them into the threads. hindsight and all that i guess.
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>>3730789
>>3730795
I hadn't even realized the massive power spike that we gained. holy crap. 10 veins ago we were still basic bitches floating under 200% hp and even less bio, Amara was suffering with sub 100% hp and even less bio being so frugal with the level ups. and look at us now. 2 massive powerspikes and some titanic ballbusting hairpulling high-risk plans later, and everyone is floating 1000% hp on average from the rewards that we reaped.
for comparision:
>Shu's stats at vein#18: 170hp/180bio
>Shu's stats now: 1210hp/1280 bio
>Amara's stats at vein 18# 120hp/80(?) bio
>Amara's stats now: 1090hp/700 bio


>>3730798
Pastebins don't work well when it comes to keeping information up to date.. Gdocs help us and bhop keep our sanity. there's LOTS of number crunching a text fluffening involved.
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>>3730814
you made it :? hrmmm

honestly I feel that about the need to get a google doc set up. Im actually trying to get my own thing set up for something else im running but i have no idea where to get started on it. like. i am the absolute worst on setting up organization for google docs/spreadsheets
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but thats bringing the convo off track i dont think yall wanna hear about my endevors off of here. unless you do
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>>3730798
It's kind of hilarious in hindsight. I remember that BHOP gave us a sort of summary of the abilities of a few other characters, and that included their Health and Bio levels. And I was intimidated, because they had them all the way up in the five hundreds. They must be so much stronger than our party, I thought, what will we do if it comes to blows. A couple threads later, and we're getting to the point where Gina of all people has nearly triple that. Dorian is the squishiest party member, and he's still rocking 960% Health.

>>3730805
Yeah, it's really nice of them to have made this. Very easy to navigate, has everything all on one page, it's a great system.

>>3730815
Remember when B'Ni having 2100% Health after two years of power-leveling seemed insurmountably strong? We're going to have at least that much on every party member after a few more in-character weeks. Shu and the rest of the Defiant Fools are kind of terrifying for how fast they've grown in power, really. Combine that with our recent deeds and we'll have major street cred for when we run into those foreign super-Daughters.
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>>3730821
id be more than happy to try and find the time to help you with your endevours, once you are caught up and feel more up to it.

>>3730823
its interesting to think about the terrifying fact we probably dish out more damage regularly than any of our character had at the end of the first Act.


also holy caonoly i was honestly just kinda guessing, but i actually did post the doc first in Vein 13, which literally was the one right after we lost Isabelle. i was honestly shotgunning that timeframe a bit and am surprised i was basically literally on the money.
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>>3730823
And then Bhop gave us a peek at Mara's stats who go into five digit numbers. We've got a bigger mountain to climb it seems.

Also, I feel like it would benefit us if you exported the thing to Microsoft Excel as a way to "Screenshot" the google doc everytime we get a level-up on our character sheets as a backup system. that way we can track our character progression using less file-size and not having to depend upon cloudsharing when their servers go down.
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>>3730835
got a discord then we can talk about it over there (or anywhere off the thread cause as i said. im more then willing to accept the offer right now. obviously im fine with chit chatting and reading right now i just dont exactly find it appropriate to talk off topic in a thread completly unrelated if ya know what i mean )

also the doc was in 13 vein? did i just not notice it for a few veins. i mustve just never looked at all our stats
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"Ha, be safe, you two." You reply, placing a hand on Rath's back that includes a diminutive Buzzling as you open the empathic line to the younger girl's mind. [Have fun, but if anything goes sideways don't be afraid to give me a ring, alright?]

Rath hesitates a moment before nodding, and you watch the two of them stride down the hall until they turn a corner and disappear from sight.

"November...Heather. I didn't want to make things awkward, but if you have a reason you weren't..."

"Never been fond of each other, is all." November calmly interrupts, wrapping her clawed fingers on the doorknob before her. She swings the door open, and you're met with the image of Francine curled up on a small couch, set in a small room that's no larger than ten by twelve feet. There's a small desk, a chair, but that's what little you can make out through the piles of well-worn books and crumbling magazines. The West look-alike startles at your arrival, taking off her glasses and dropping the book as she just stares at you, Gina, and November.

"You...you came." Francine stammers, caught quite off-guard. She stands, smoothing out the wrinkles in her black turtleneck and onyx suit-pants, her shining eyes darting to yours. "I...I'll be honest, I didn't expect you to."

"We purged the Relics of the West-ghosts, and we'd like to see what you do with them when you say you'll put the Daughters within them to rest." You explain, shifting a stack of magazines to the side to allow yourself entry into the packed room. "Also, we need to upgrade November's armor while we're here."

"Ah, absolutely." The Doctor replies, reaching out for the Relics. "I'll take you to where my associate can..."

"First thing's first." You say, cutting her off with a firm tone. "I need to make sure you're totally free of West's influence before we go any further. Here's the deal; you let Gina and I poke around, and if we find out that you're free of West Prime, then we're good to go. If we find you're still a proxy of West's, then..."

"Then I'd like to humbly request you kill me, here and now." Francine counters brusquely, catching you slightly off-guard, yourself. "Perfectly reasonable. I'm afraid I haven't increased in power since we last spoke, but you'd find my ability to your liking, I'm sure. I have a few passive you may find useful, and a Relic or two that would come with, as well."

She caps off her cold self-analysis by gesturing to the pair of glasses she's left on the couch, a modified version of the ones West Gamma wore when you first met that iteration of the mad Doctor.

"Then we're clear." You say, collecting yourself.

"Clear as day." Francine nods, kicking aside a stack of books that stand in your way before she takes the middle seat on the couch, gesturing to the spaces next to her. You and Gina sit while November looms in the doorway, watching the three of you awkwardly sit together before Gina leans, locking eyes with you and awaiting your signal.

(Continued)
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>>3730856

"Ready when you are." The Doctor murmurs, closing her eyes and struggling to maintain her relaxed composure, despite the nervous energy that floods her slender frame.

Gina's veins flicker as she closes her eyes in turn, and you watch as the two sit in silence for a long, tense moment as brief, disconnected visions whip through your mind. Snatches of concepts, thoughts, and ideas, a whirlwind of ill-remembered encounters, and...

...Gina and Francine's eyes fly open at the same time, the latter's breath hitching in her throat before she gasps, struggling to fill her lungs with air. Your eyes meet Gina's.

She nods.

{She's clean.}

"...Alright." You say, your eyes catching Francine's worried gaze. "We're good. So, let's talk shop."

"So, I'm...I'm free?" She breathes, her desperate gaze searching yours. "I'm not compromised?"

"No. It's just you in there. Nothing more, nothing less." Gina assures, as much to you as to the angular girl seated between the two of you.

The wave of pure, unadulterated relief that explodes from the woman beside you almost throws you for a loop, and it's then that you realize...

She wasn't certain she was free.

Not until just now.

So, like you said; it's time to talk shop.

>>Free the Daughters within the Relics.

>>Upgrade November's armor.

>>Ask Francine the specifics of her plan.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next hour, Gentlemen.)
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>>3730859
>>Free the Daughters within the Relics.
helping those poor souls honestly takes priority for me to a large sum. Armor and planning can wait a moment or two.

>>3730844
>Also, I feel like it would benefit us if you exported the thing to Microsoft Excel as a way to "Screenshot" the google doc everytime we get a level-up on our character sheets as a backup system. that way we can track our character progression using less file-size and not having to depend upon cloudsharing when their servers go down.
is this directed at me then? ive got backups saved dont worry. also that would honestly be a bit much i think personally, to do it every single level up. unless im misunderstanding what you mean a bit.

>>3730848
i posted it in spoiler nearer the bottom.
discord Tag is #6392. i agree that i dont like to attention whore myself, intentional or not, but im happy to try and help aswell. i suppose ive put it out there so its there for other aswell, though why anyone else would want or need it is beyond me.
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>>3730859
>Hand over West's Spinal Cannon. "As we stated back in the forest, one Spinal Cannon relic from Gamma West, and two relics made from Gamma West with Trapped Daughters within."

>"I do have something to ask about. I have a daughter inside of me named Sam. she's slowly losing it due to the Isolation, And I want some opinions on what do to with her...I want to help her calm down or at least give her a way out of the mental prison, yet at the same time I'm afraid of what she'll do the moment she has agency. Here's the thing, Sam was...who I was before the Crucible, and she had a horrible life. She and I...are separate entities, and Sam hates me for having all the agency while she languishes inside a mental prison. Is there any way that you can help? At best, I hope she could inhabit a construct body so she can interact with this world and regain a sense of who she was or Worst comes to worst, I'll have her exorcised."
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>>3730859
>The wave of pure, unadulterated relief that explodes from the woman beside you almost throws you for a loop, and it's then that you realize...
>She wasn't certain she was free.
What makes you so different, Francine? Why do you have such revulsion for what the rest of the Wests are? You're supposed to be an early fork of West Prime, but given how she makes her proxies she was still pretty evil even then. You couldn't exist if you weren't a copy of a mind that's fine with treating other human beings as spare parts. Was it just that you were the first try, and she hadn't figured out how to completely wipe the original occupant of that brain yet, leaving you with a personality made of parts of the Daughter she mind-jacked instead of purely a copy of her own?

>>Free the Daughters within the Relics.
Let's get this out of the way before we start working on any plans. They've suffered long enough.
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>>3730869
that dosnt include the name

honestly just add me here (anyone can i dont mind. just please tell me your from here please

(also how the heck i put spoiler tags ??? zona
#0102
anyway ima go back to reading now
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>>3730879
>>3730866
i am outright against saying the second part of this Anons post.

>>3730881
Francine said living with the DOs put things into perspective, is the best we have gotten from her.

>>3730882
whoops, didnt know you needed the name. my bad. its Klimino
you do spoilers via putting {spoiler} and {/spoiler} on each side of what you wish to spoiler, touching the first and last letter of the text you wish spoilered, with the '{}' replaced with '[]' when actually using it.
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>>3730889
>Francine said living with the DOs put things into perspective, is the best we have gotten from her.
Yeah, so she's said, but I feel like there needs to be some seed there first to develop. She can't have developed a disgust for the loss of individuality and personhood if she didn't have some of that of her own to begin with, and if she was just another West clone she wouldn't have that. Gamma was functionall an extension of West Prime, completely devoted towards the advancement of the original. As far as we know, none of the other Wests see anything wrong with their eventual fate of being eaten by West Prime so that she can become even more powerful. Something went wrong with Francine's creation so that she's not completely subordinate to Prime's desires.
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>>3730902
wasn't Francine an earlier model as it was? maybe the process wasn't perfect. also, disturbingly, its actually implied all the Wests are technically fully individuals, which says alot about West that all of them are still so devoted despite that...which yeah ok backs up your questions nicely, fair enough.

maybe the DOs are a bit too similar to West in some ways, and seeing that compared to herself helped? hard to disagree with a version of yourself, but its different when you see what that causes in a group of similar strangers.
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>>3730907
>>3730902
It's also something to note that West as a person pre-crucible was a Surgeon and a Doctor. of what Medical field she operated in I'm not sure, but she still applies the Hippocratic oath (a very powerful oath) in her practice. So having to do surgeries where your patients come out less than human and more machine-like instead of more-than-human-like would rub Francine the wrong way as a doctor, whereas all the other proxies and West Prime herself became focused on Surgeries that dissected and explored the biology of the Crucible.
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>>3730879
I'm in favor of getting Francine's help with getting Sam out of our head, but I'm not sure that we should lead with it. Maybe after we see what Francine is going to do with the Daughters retrieved from the Relics. I think it's likely that she does have some sort of storage method like a lot of us might prefer. I doubt there's a Sparagmos Engine here, and other than destroying the cleansed Relics and mercy-killing those Daughters (which wouldn't require removing Prime's watchdogs, first), storing them away is the only thing she can really do with those mindstates. So let's see what she does with them, and then if it is storing them away for future technology to revive we can ask for her to do it to Sam.
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>>3730879
>>3730859
Amending my vote to
>Free the Daughters within the Relics.

>Then after the Daughters are freed

>Some how segue into the issue with Sam inside our head after seeing Francine's associate in action. We want Sam out of our head, and are looking for humane options.

>>3730919
good suggestion.
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>>3730919
>>3730924
im still against the wording of that post heavily, aswell as not everyone agreed to that method.

but most importantly, i feel we shouldn't assume its just going to be exactly what we think and thus simply be something we can just bring up. id hold off on even putting it down until we actually know more about whats going on here. also id imagine doing things with relics is quite different than dream daughters in an active head.
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>>3730917
I think Prime probably gave up on "First, do no harm" at least by the time she started wiping people's brains so she could install copies of her own mind into their wetware. If not sooner, who knows when she started in on the vivisection? Maybe it's the other way around, and having patients whose well-being and quality of life she was supposed to care for that made Francine regrow a conscious. It clearly didn't always work, but the Disassociated's surgeries were meant to have positive effects on their mental state. She had to care if her patients came out alright, instead of just going "disappointing, I still had data to gather on that".
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>>3730927
>>3730924
>>3730859
Re amending the vote then.
>Free the Daughters within the Relics.

We'll see what options and what methods Francine's Associate does when it comes to freeing the Daughters trapped in the Relics.
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>>3730928
wasn't it implied she was always like this? she was probably more of a research doctor, than a 'i save lives' type. or maybe shes one of those types that got into the surgeon business specifically so they could cut people open and poke at their innards legally, just for more curiosities sake then sociopathic pleasure reasons.
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>>3730951
Now that you say that, it does make sense. I'm wildly speculating that West might've been a pathologist who does biopsy surgeries, which scratches her "curiosity" itch. Biopsy surgeries are basically surgeries that lets doctors cut people open to examine the innards legally, cut out tissue samples, and then close the patient up and not do much about saving the lives of the patient, as long as she had the tissue sample and the data, her job was complete.
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>>3730951
Quite possible. My point was simply that if the Hippocratic Oath ever mattered to West, she clearly stopped caring at some point before she started mind-jacking people. There are multiple lines in both the Hippocratic Oath and the Oath of Maimonides saying "I'll remember that my patients are people, not interesting collections of medical data."

>>3730974
Presumably she was something multidisciplinary, too. West has shown a wide range of skills in the biological sciences, though she seems to favor neuroscience. Then again, since it seems that every cell of Crucible biomass is able to function as a neuron, that might just be her applying neuroscience very broadly.
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>>3730859

"Okay. Alright, I, um...please. Follow me." Francine stumbles, rising from the couch and awkwardly bowing to November. She slides past the suit of scarlet armor as you and Gina follow close behind, the woman's rigid frame darting down the corridor to parts unknown.

"We have a Phantasmal Conduit here, a very skilled one. She was one of the first to come seeking the help of the Disassociated, but she retreated to the lowest depths of the compound when she started having odd dreams, or so my peers have whispered." Francine explains over he shoulder, her brisk pace coming to a sudden halt before a set of double-doors, and it takes you until they slide open to realize you're standing before an elevator. You crowd in, the confined space making a worrisome creak at November's entry. Francine pokes the lowest button on the control panel with a slim finger, and your stomach churns as you begin your descent in awkward silence.

{So, uh...when I was poking around in the good Doctor, I ran across her ability} Gina transmits, her voice echoing in your mind across your private channel. {Are you seeing what I'm seeing?}

Information begins to filter into your mind unbidden, a unique set of skills taking shape...though it's her augmentation that catches your attention.

>>CREATION'S STRINGS (Fibromancer/Neuromancer Hybrid, Lvl 1): A power thrust upon an unwilling vessel, this hybrid ability allows West Beta to physically unravel the very biomass Daughters are composed of, rapidly siphoning off their reserves of HEALTH to refill the user's own at a rate determined by the wielder's proximity to their target.(HEALTH +120%, BIO +140%)

>>CREATION'S STRINGS (Lvl 2): By tethering itself to a target West Beta now gains an innate understanding of its foe, granting an understanding of the target's current HEALTH, BIO, and REGEN totals. (BIO +20%)

>>CREATION'S STRINGS (Lvl 3): West Beta may now, when she begins to unravel a target, gain access to the abilities of their Core skill tree. Beta is free to use their abilities using her own HEALTH, BIO, or ACTs as required by their activation costs, though she may only copy active abilities and passive skills up to her Core's current level. (HEALTH +30%)

>>DEFIANT PUPPET (Creation's Strings Augmentation, Lvl ERROR): West Bet@ nOW pSSe$es...We$1 BbbbB...eRrRor...Francine now possesses the ability to reverse her Core power's draining effects, instead allowing her to draw from her own reserves to restore those that she is tethered to. This reversal extends to any and all draining effects her tree may gain, and this healing may not be interrupted as long as Francine is conscious. (HEALTH +80%, HEALTH REGEN +20%)

The double-doors slide open once more, and you're met with darkness. You blink, your eyes adjusting to the gloom as Francine strides into the void, heels clicking on the concrete floor.

(Continued)
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>>3730995

You catch sight of a star in the seemingly endless black, and when you take Gina's hand in yours and step forwards, a half-dozen other pinpricks of light begin to shimmer in the emptiness. November hesitantly exits the elevator, and it's at that moment that the doors slide shut, plunging you into the dark. More points of light begin to bloom, but it's when two luminous eyes open in the space before you that your hive buzzes to life.

"Hello, Cassandra." Francine says, politely greeting the face of wires and piping that takes up the entirety of the wall before you. "Please pardon the interru..."

"No need to apologize, dearest Francine." The replies serenely, the crystals that are set into the walls shining brighter now, twinkling in time with her dulcet tones. "You've granted me audience with the Defiant Huntress. Ah, and there is the one that loves her so dearly, the Heartbound. Oh, the things your Huntress has set into motion...dearest Francine, you've given me a gift I did not think I'd live to see."

"You know about us...both of us." Gina breathes, the face in the wall just chuckling softly. "You're a Skintalker, aren't you?"

"And a Conduit...and a Neuromancer." She replies, fixing the brunette with her soft, slate-grey eyes. "I became a great many things when I wandered the wastes, and when I was filled to bursting with knowledge and regret I came here to empty myself...and I found that one's past is not so easily forgotten, one's yoke not so hastily shirked."

"They've brought Relics." Francine interjects, nodding to you. At her signal, you deposit the Spine, Nail, and Cannon on the floor before Cassandra's imposing visage, and her deep eyes stare down at the collection of gnarled items before they shine with a curious, pale green light.

"They may be used as you wish, Defiant Hunter." She intones, the soft glow fading just as quickly as it came. "The souls within them have been freed of that which burdened them, and stored safely within the diadem matrix. Francine, would you be a dear and take out the three to your left?"

The Proxy complies, walking over and sliding a trio of newly-shining crystals from the wall next to her.

>>Relics Acquired; SACRIFICIAL REMNANTS x3

"They are yours to keep, Defiant Huntress. I pray you find a way to restore them to their former glory, some day." She intones, before her grey eyes lock with yours, awaiting your response.

"Thank you, Cassandra." You say, giving the curious Daughter a respectful bow. "I do have some questions for you, if you have the time."

"Please, I welcome the conversation." She smiles, the wires that make up her lips going taught with the expression. "It's the last time we shall have the chance to speak Huntress, and I do so wish to be of service to someone as momentous as yourself. I have learned much, witnessed more, and such knowledge would be useless if kept to oneself. So please, I implore you...ask this old soul anything you like."

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, I shall be pausing here for the evening to allow you all some time to compose questions for both Cassandra and myself, if you're so inclined. Thank you so very much for your time, participation, and enthusiasm, as always. Voting shall remain open for the next twelve hours, with writing to resume in thirteen, give or take. I hope you all have a restful evening and pleasant dreams, one and all.)
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>>3730985
>>3730951
Quite Ironic that for a Doctor who turns People into interesting collections of data in a machine, she redeveloped the Oaths of Medicine. It might also be the way the Disassociated treated Francine...

>>3730995
>Beta
Well then.
Assuming West Prime is Designated "Alpha", then Francine (Beta) was literally Prime's first clone...She must've also bore witness to the creation of the other West Proxies Gamma (Dead by Isabelle), Delta (Dead by Lab Accident), Epsilon (Unknown), so on and so forth...
Francine's practically a Pinocchio doll, and she's finally free of the strings that held her down.
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>>3730995
so... Francine rewrote her own ability in some form or another? thats... really interesting, and useful.

>>3731007
well this is interesting. honestly ive got no real idea what to ask here. it would help i suppose if we knew more about her, or whatnot. i apologize Cassandra... but honestly, theres nothing that really pops out i think we need to know or i just want to know. at beast all i can think is to ask more about her herself, or maybe whatever is going on with Francine's Augment, but i feel like we should just ask Francine about that, ya know?

as for the remnants, you willing to give us any more info on those BHOP? would it be amiss of us to consume them, so the dream daughters are not alone and can converse and interact with the others in our heads, or would that defeat the purpose or even be torturing them in a way, via pulling them from a peaceful sleep or something? or would we somehow gain more from keeping them as crystals, with the caveat you know BHOP we are willing to sacrifice personal advantages to do the right thing.

>>3731011
fun as always. you gonna be a round for OOC questions or best to save them?
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>>3730985
for the neurons thing, we really dont know. i get what you mean, but the fact theres distinguished classes that theres a raw biomass type of in the first place implies significant differences to some level, though self imposed differences, its still worth noting at least the cells can CHOOSE not to act like neurons... which im not sure what im even actually going for here anymore, just felt like it was a an interesting thing to point out.
sorry for the late reply, BHOP ninja'd me and i hate to interrupt post flow.
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>>3730995
Okay, I know this is a bit hypocritical given what I just said about the Hippocratic Oath and seeing people as people rather than interesting bits, but if we wind up eating Francine after she sacrifices herself to destroy the West collective, this would be a great skill for Shu. Use it together with Dominus Bloodlines and we'd be super effective. Downside: It would be yet another skill to level.

That Defiant Puppet augment, too. She managed to rewrite her Core into doing the exact opposite of what it's intended to, while also managing to force the Crucible's systems to call her by a proper name instead of treating her as a fork. Impressive. I think that probably applies in-character as well as in the interface, that the Crucible has identity data for each Daughter (it would have to, given that a Daughter's body is not actually a permanent thing) and she altered it away from what West Prime altered the original murdered Daughter that Francine was made from. Good on you, Francince.

>>3731007
Oh, it's Good SHODAN. Hi, Good SHODAN. Give me a bit to think of what I want to say to you, there's a lot you could tell us.

>>3731012
I believe we were told that OOC, that Francine was West's earliest fork. I'm glad she managed to break free. It's kind of weird, seeing a West not being all smug and distant. I think our willingness to work with Francine and extend trust towards her is messing with her head. It's almost adorable.
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>>3731025
(I'll be around for a little while,so if you have questions, please feel free to ask.)

(In the Daughters' current form as crystals, they are in a similarly dreamless sleep that Isabelle is currently experiencing within the Emerald. Consuming them will allow them to be interacted with as Dream Daughters, but with no additional effects since their Core abilities we re-formed into the Relics they were trapped in. However, installing them into Relics may grant them a substantial boost, leading to empathic weapons similar to Karma and the Contender though nowhere near as strong, of course.)
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>>3731007
>"I...I have a ghost in my head. Her name is Sam. She was who I was before the Crucible. She had a horrible life. She sought agency at all costs even after death. But after a horrible first impression, I left her alone in the dream scape out of fear and over the course of 2 weeks, she's losing her sanity, she's got little left except her hatred. I want to help her ease her suffering and lay her issues to rest, but at the same time I don't know what options I could take. I know it's a very selfish request, but can you help me out? Is there way to give Sam the Agency she craves without hurting me or my family? Or is it too late? I want to move on from my past but she IS my past. Sam's who I was before the Crucible. A broken girl who sought freedom, control, and agency from the horrible life she had."

I know that one anon is really against me bringing up the Issue with Sam, but we have a Very High level Skintalker, Phantasmal Conduit, and Neuromancer right here who's willing to help. Now would be a great time to deal with Sam while asking some questions and asking for humane options.

>"Who were you like before the Crucible? What was your life's story before you became what you are now?"

>"What world events did we set in motion? I figured that Stopping Mother's resurrection and gimping her power was a big thing, and that pulling it off would paint a target on us, but what sort of chain of events did we start in the rest of the world? not just America?"
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>>3731041
(As an addendum, I'll add them to the top of the Relics sheet along with the explanation of how they work, in case you wish to use/consume them.)
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>>3731035
I mean more that every cell seems to have the ability to process information directly, instead of the indirect interactions of chemical signals. If Crucible biomass had to use the hormone-based systems that regular flesh does, it would take months to grow anything instead of seconds. So I think that there's a multi-layered system. At base, all Crucible cell is capable of exchanging information with its neighbors and using that to coordinate about where to go when transforming into new configurations. Then some cells differentiate and specialize into dedicated information-processors for the sake of Neuromantic and Phantasmal skills.

>>3731041
That's something I've been wondering about, actually: Was Karma originally a Hexane, or did Charon make a biotech AI from scratch?
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>>3731041
>>3731048
hrm...then may we possibly talk to them, or are they locked out like Isabelle is? honestly as tempting as the relic option is, i want to do what THEY want to do, whether it be continue to sleep, become a dream daughter, or empower our relics. we happen to have three really good sets of armor, though id of course still leave it up to them what relic type at least they wish to be in.

otherwise;
>how does the whole Gemma clone thing work? Does each one stay separate if consumed, or combine with our current one mentally? Does using the special consume option affect this?
>...could we like, still get a new core from each clone, as they are technically each a separate daughter? How would that affect the first question?

>>3731040
as much as i have my misgivings abut Francine due to paranoia, i dont think we should aim for that or hope for it.

>>3731047
no, im against HOW you word it and bring it up. i refuse to brush off that Sam was an outright horrible person by choice, by her own merit, and that her past does not give her a free pass to consequences, both in how she is viewed or interacted with. until you agree to admit to that, i will actively vote AGAINST that write in, even if i have to surrender otherwise having a vote.

>>3731047
>>3731007
im actively voting against the first question in this Anons post.

>>3731053
makes sense. so like, each has the same core, but a different shell/specialized organelles?
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>>3731053
(Karma came about as a natural result from Charon/Reyva's desire to protect those close to them, chiefly Ozmas. Their potent wish along with their level of craftsmanship ended up making a very rare type of artificial intelligence, even among the Hexane. Normally most Hexane items have some level of autonomy, but to see something that's practically its own person is a once-in-a-lifetime event for the Hexane, and such creations are highly prized.)

>>3731058
>how does the whole Gemma clone thing work? Does each one stay separate if consumed, or combine with our current one mentally? Does using the special consume option affect this?
>...could we like, still get a new core from each clone, as they are technically each a separate daughter? How would that affect the first question?

(Each 'instance' of Gemma that is consumed joins with the current Gemma you have now, becoming closer and closer to her original personality. The instances' Cores, on the other hand, are just like any other. Hence the wording of GEMMA'S YEARNING, in which Julia may ignore the stat and ability gains from consuming a Gemma to instead strengthen said augmentation's stat gains.)
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>>3731066
hrm... i guess my concern there then BHOP, is i must be overlooking something, as just a 50%/50% upgrade isnt terrible, but will always be overshadowed by consuming them as a core in terms of raw stat increases, especially if we just melt the core down for stats, but even if we dont, long term the stat increases form a level-able will still outweigh a 50%/50%.

and mind answering my question on talking to the Remnant Daughters?
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>>3731053
It could be that Charon uploaded a mindstate copy of herself into the Hexane Contender. Remember Charon's Journal? That Journal is a Relic that relives the entire life experience, thought, and emotion of Charon in her journeys. The Contender is a Hexane made relic.

>>3731058
Fine, I'll try to re-word it. I'm trying to open dialogue to having Cassandra pull Sam out of Shu's head and put it in a Daughter Crystal or something. And apparently doing a horrible job satisfying your aggressive opinion.

Anything better than your horrible option of letting Sam rot into a dream zombie and having her hound our every move and mind every time we walk near Hexane Architecture. You've seen what Zombie Dream daughters do to their hosts when given form (Exhibit A: Isabelle). They're indestructible and persistent unless appeased returned to sanity or exorcised.
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>>3731080
(Hm. Perhaps my math is off, but the way I'd envisioned it is that you start with a base HEALTH and BIO bonus of 300% and 160%, respectively. Then, on the consumption of the first Gemma, the bonus goes to 450% and 240%, then on the second it boosts to 670% and 360%, and so on and so forth. I believe the issue was with how I worded the ability, as the 50% increase is actually a 1.5x multiplier that is triggered on the Augmentation's stat bonuses whenever and instance is consumed. Apologies for the confusion.)

(Regarding the Remnant Daughters, you would be able to commune with them via Gina's Neuromancy, much like the Emerald.)
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>>3731058
>as much as i have my misgivings abut Francine due to paranoia, i dont think we should aim for that or hope for it.
Well, no, but Francine's aiming for it. She wants to die along with the rest of the Wests. Maybe we can convince her to find a way to destroy their collective without sacrificing herself, but if we don't, we can at least consume her with the Arbiter's Appetite and preserve her that way. Which would also happen to give Shu a skill that is great for her, just pointing that part out.

>makes sense. so like, each has the same core, but a different shell/specialized organelles?
That would be my guess, yeah. Together with the ability to convert between cell types reasonably rapidly, break down specialized organelles for spare parts. Plus whatever weird trick they use to store biomass away, however that works. Put that all together and you'd get the abilities we've observed.

>>3731066
> Normally most Hexane items have some level of autonomy, but to see something that's practically its own person is a once-in-a-lifetime event for the Hexane, and such creations are highly prized.
Reyva really was an amazing artist, huh? I hope we can convince them not to...you know, suicide. At least not immediately after we break Ozmas' hold on them. I know they said that death would be welcome at this point, but I'd love to let Charon have the opportunity to pass on their art and their vision to humanity before they go. Leave a legacy of what was beautiful about the Hexane.
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>>3731086
huh? i already said in this threat and gave in as a compromise last thread to just deleting her. no idea what you're talking about, ive given up on that option for over a week now.

>>3731092
ohhh, yeah, see, the issue here is stats are listed as a %, so when you say 50%, im thinking a flat 50 increase to the number, not an increase of 50% of the current total. ok yes thats MUCH better and actually worth it, long term at least. im fine with using % for our stats BHOP but we can have it have a double meaning here. consuming a core still gives us a better outright boost though, unless we consume a good number of Gemmas... which might be spoilers towards future plans of yours id imagine then.

also glad to hear we can communicate with them. everyone ok with us talking to them and seeing what they want, instead of jumping to conclusions?

>>3731104
ah. well... alright. we can see if shes open to the possibilities i suppose.
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>>3731092
>>3731124
that being said, would you like me to change the Abilities wording, to avoid future confusion?
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>>3731130
(If it's not too much to ask, that would be great.)
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>>3731066
wait, and a apologize for stacking questions like this, but wouldn't Gemma getting closer to her original self be... bad? considering her original personality was shattered int FIFTY TWO different pieces, id think that would not be something to strive towards having again.

>>3731133
of course.
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>>3731135
(That depends entirely on who she interacts with in the Dreamscape, I'd imagine.)
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>>3731007
Rewording my vote >>3731047 concerning having Sam booted out of Shu's head.
>"I have a Daughter inside me named Sam. She's a dream daughter inside me that's lost her sanity. And I would like her out of my head. She is my past. She's who I was before the Crucible started, I've seen who she was, and what she did before the Crucible... I hate it. Is it possible for you to extract her from my mind and turn her into a daughter crystal or exorcise her from my mind?"

>>3731124
And now another option is available. Turn Sam into a Daughter Crystal. It does the same thing which is basically getting rid of Sam from Shu's head. No more Sam intruding in our mind, it gets us a daughter crystal out of the ordeal, and we can just have Sam stay in a dreamless sleep. End of story. No messy ordeal of having to physically fight and kill Sam in the dreamscape.

Come on, I'm trying to work with you here, but it seems that any sort of argument I try to convince you you ignore it or stubbornly dig in your heels until I cave in and appease your damn hardline because you're the first to draw the line in the sand.
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>>3731146
i... guess? i just thought a whole point was she herself wanted to avoid that, a sorta 'prove im the real Gemma' type thing, not a 'negate the point of thinking that by splitting my personality again.'?

i mean... if she wants to constantly be shifting personalities again with no control, then... more power to her, i guess? gonna get confusing as hell pretty quickly though, for anyone interacting with her.

>>3731155
Sam isnt Shus past. we have gone to great lengths IC to make a point of that. Shu sees herself as a separate entity from Sam, past included.

ive hardly ignored any argument. disagreeing is not ignoring something. i simply dont think Sam deserves to stick around. its also a useless thing, we could never trust using a crystal with her inside it. we also have no obligation to babysit her mind.
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>>3731163
(Gemma's perspective on things have shifted since she actually absorbed a few other 'Gems' that came to her seeking refuge.)
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>>3731179
fair enough. i suppose it just boils down to what the other Gemmas want then, when we meet them.... assuming they dont try and kill us and force our hand, that is.
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>>3731007
Okay, I think I've got a good question for her.

>"Do you have any knowledge of what the rest of the world is like? I've seen how easy it is for a Daughter to fall to the Hunger just trying to get from here to the Cord. What's it like on other continents, where a Daughter would have to travel to the other side of the world to get here? Is there anyone left, or is it just empty fleshscape with all the survivors having moved on?"

>>3731086
Let me try, see how this lands.

>"There's a girl trapped inside me. Her name is Sam, and she's...I don't know how to describe it, it's too complicated to explain without telling a long story. Someone I could have been, I guess, if things had gone much worse. I don't think I owe her anything, she's a pretty nasty person and her circumstances are mostly her own fault. But being trapped like that is driving her mad, and it doesn't sit right with me to just watch it happen. I'm not that cruel. Is there any way you could do for her what you did for the girls in those Relics? Extract her, store her away in hibernation, so that she doesn't degenerate further?"
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>>3731007
right, here's the questions i support voting for, in this format and wording. though only really edited the last one.

>"Who were you before the Crucible? What was your life's story before you became what you are now?"

>"What world events did we set in motion? I figured that Stopping Mother's resurrection and gimping her power was a big thing, and that pulling it off would paint a target on us, but what sort of chain of events did we start in the rest of the world? not just America?"

>"Do you have any knowledge of what the rest of the world is like? I've seen how easy it is for a Daughter to fall to the Hunger just trying to get from here to the Cord. What's it like on other continents, where a Daughter would have to travel to the other side of the world to get here? Is there anyone left, or is it just empty fleshscape with all the survivors having moved on?"

>"There's a girl trapped inside me. Her name is Sam, and she's...I don't know how to describe it, it's too complicated to explain without telling a long story. Someone who may of taken my place in the Crucible, if things had gone much worse. I don't think I owe her anything, she's a pretty nasty person and her circumstances are mostly her own fault. But being trapped like that is driving her mad, and it doesn't sit right with me to just watch it happen. I'm not that cruel. Is there any way you could remove her, painlessly, so she can pass on, where she won't be bound or trapped any longer, nor haunted by her past?
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>>3731189
>>3731155
on another note, you guys agree with talking to and asking the Remnant Daughters what they want, instead of deciding for them? Contender-esque Relics would be a great boon, but not at the cost of isolating them from other dream daughters or interrupting their internal sleep if that is so what they wish. that, and id imagine if they do want to help via relics, finding out what type of relic they would prefer might very well offer better boons, due to better synchronization and all that.

but it can, of course, wait IC before we talk to them.
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>>3731250
Oh, yeah, definitely get consent before we decide what to do with them. We're not West, we'll put them wherever they decide they want to wind up.
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>>3731250
>>3731263
Yes, I do agree. Honestly, I think we've been talking circles around each other again. Or something like that.

We've given our question to Cassandra and asked if she could do anything about Sam.
Moving on.
Do you want to see the Rocket Launch of the Disassociated Ones? Beira did give us the Launch date, and I think it would be a sight for the family to see. Especially Amara. Seeing a Rocket launch into outer space would be a spectacle and a good memory for her to remember with the family.

>>3731007
Amending part of my vote. Including the question of asking Cassandra to help us deal with Sam.

>"What made you decide you wanted to escape the planet?"

>"We have a a child who goes by of Amara in the family. She's a skintalker like you. Young, bubbly, full of happiness, loves a good story. I think you would enjoy meeting her if you had the chance, but given you and your people's mission...Do you have any Lexicon words you would like to pass on to her as something to remember you by?"

One more thing to add:

>Spawn a FuzzBuzz, cute and fluffy. Have it fly and land next to Cassandra's Face, have it snuggle next to the approximation of Cassandra's neck and cheek before becoming dormant and attuned to Cassandra.
>"You may be a face in the wall, but you're still a daughter. You're still human. I remembered reading an article that Astronauts on the Space Station ask for pictures, sounds, and various things from Earth because they feel homesick from living a long time in space. So whenever and feel homesick on your journey through space, you'll have this bumblebee that I call "Fuzzbuzz" by your side. Something to remind you of what Earth once looked like before the Crucible. Something to remind you of what you are, who you are, where you're from, and...a reason for living."
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>>3731356
>Do you want to see the Rocket Launch of the Disassociated Ones? Beira did give us the Launch date, and I think it would be a sight for the family to see. Especially Amara. Seeing a Rocket launch into outer space would be a spectacle and a good memory for her to remember with the family.
Maybe from a very great distance. Unless you're launching from one of the geomagnetic poles, the safe fallout distance on a nuclear pulse rocket is eighty kilometers. No way we're getting close enough to watch it take off. We can see it once it rises higher into the air, but we're not going to see the launch itself. None of us have immunity to radiant damage, even Julia can only absorb it for three rounds, let's stay away from the fallout zone. I'm sure the Crucible will cleanse the particles quickly enough, but until that time we shouldn't even get close to the launch site.

>"What made you decide you wanted to escape the planet?"
That's a good one to ask, yeah. We should fold it into a general "what was your life in the Crucible like" question to add to the "what was your life before the Crucible".

>>Spawn a FuzzBuzz, cute and fluffy. Have it fly and land next to Cassandra's Face, have it snuggle next to the approximation of Cassandra's neck and cheek before becoming dormant and attuned to Cassandra.
I don't know, is the Disassociated's ship even going to have life support? They're all pretty heavily cyberneticized, there might not be any air on the ship. Not to mention that even if FuzzBuzz could survive on the ship, they might not let him on because of his mass penalty. Every gram counts. It's a nice thought, but might not be viable. You know what could work, though? Let her make recordings of FuzzBuzz, store them in the memory crystals for any Disassociated who want to play with VirtualBuzz.
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>>3731007

>Write In.

>What was your pre and post crucible life like? What made you want to go to space and join the DOs?

>What happend when Isabell and by extension mother were beaten. You must have heard it. But we are not sure what exactly it means since we were a bit deaf from being so close to its origin.

>Any noticaeable events in the world we maybe should care about? How do the other continents look. Are they a a malstrom of violence and carnage or how is the world beyond america fairing?

Last question:

>I have a little problem in the name of Sam. She is isolated in my dreamscape since i woke up and is getting more mad and like a zombie by the day.
>She and i wear the same face, share the same voice but we are different entitiys and she is jealous that i am in control of my own actions and it drives her mad.
>Could you remove her like you did them and put her to sleep in a crystal? While she is a horrrible person i would like to get her some help...... After the Crucible is over

>>3731092
Yeah Modifiers are always a bit of a bitch if you use a percentile system.
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>"Gimme your Lexicon! I'm getting my little girl a freaking dictionary for her birthday!"

More seriously, I want to know if she has any more insight about the Halos and the different types we may run across.
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>>3731356
>Honestly, I think we've been talking circles around each other again. Or something like that.
not really. its just its an open aired opinion. we have precedence for both deleting her and crystallizing her, its just down to an opinion now.

what we dont, id argue, is Shu not seeing herself connected to Sam at all, like the first part i pointed out. we have very much spent quite alot of time making the statement we dont see any part of Sam as ourselves, and dont think it would make any sense to suddenly change that now.

>"We have a a child who goes by of Amara in the family. She's a skintalker like you. Young, bubbly, full of happiness, loves a good story. I think you would enjoy meeting her if you had the chance, but given you and your people's mission...Do you have any Lexicon words you would like to pass on to her as something to remember you by?"
oh yeah, we never did do Amaras word allocations yet. guess that just more for the pile then... fucking hell her word list is gonna probably double by the time we actually get around to that, if not more.

>>3731365
>I don't know, is the Disassociated's ship even going to have life support? They're all pretty heavily cyberneticized, there might not be any air on the ship. Not to mention that even if FuzzBuzz could survive on the ship, they might not let him on because of his mass penalty. Every gram counts. It's a nice thought, but might not be viable. You know what could work, though? Let her make recordings of FuzzBuzz, store them in the memory crystals for any Disassociated who want to play with VirtualBuzz.
i think the point was just to give her a cute gift, regardless of if she can take it up with her or not in the end, its simply our gesture of friendship. that, and im positive their methods of space travel is probably advanced enough to have more wiggle room for personal items. the lack of needing a massive stockpile of food probably helps there too.
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>>3731365
you're pretty spot on on the reason for giving Cassandra a gift, but it's also a way to keep them from going insane, homesick, and to ensure their humanity stays intact longer. Also, because of the nature of our power, we might be able to communicate with them post-crucible if our range in activating our swarmlings is truly unlimited.
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>>3731737
Ian not sure they can turn hunger mad anymore and they probably have packed quite a lot of digital entertainment and organized artists as well. Maybe they can become insane anymore by locking their neural patterns into certain ways of thinking to suppress emotions. A group like the DOs does not survive without a lot of planning and taking such things into consideration.

And deep space missions as they are gonna try to undertake require that more than anything else.

But maybe they will just go into some kind of sleep with minimal crew awake to bring them to another planet.

They would probably go for a nearby planet or large moon like Mars or something to build up a new civilisation or a new board to gather material to go even further...... If they manage to Pierce the crucibles outer layer

My guess is they will go splat against it's membrane and maybe some will survive to roam the outer layers of it's shell

But the communication thought is a good one we should probably do it even if she can not take it with her
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>>3731743
>I am not sure they can turn hunger mad anymore
Thus is meant to say I am sure they can't turn hunger mad anymore
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>>3731743
It's not about the hunger that I'm concerned about, it's the fact that they don't have any physical reminder of what earth used to look like. I know they can't go hunger mad, but they can go mad in different ways.
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>>3731749
the problem is many of them might not care anymore already. as it was described, their ability to probably understand things past themselves has been greatly diminished. no organization so, well, disassociated, that they both know we have a bad history with West but cant understand how we would have a negative reaction to meeting a West, is a group of people id trust to even still understand what a connection to a home really is. hell, its probably a major reason they are so willing to just leave, and didn't care to help even with a possible crucible ending event.
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>>3731749
I think their emotions areso stunted and their society so cold already they would already be considered insane by our standards.

Most of them won't care for anything but technology anymore. They are so far removed from humans as a machine is.

They can't really understand us anymore. And concepts like madness are alien to them. They are pretty much machines and machines can slow down. For most of them the journey won't be more than days even if it lasts years
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>>3731754
How about we word it so that to them the Defiant Huntress gives them her blessings on their endeavors by gifting them a FuzzBuzz. As long as one of them can understand that, then the gesture of giving them a gift will be fulfilled. It's also why I think giving a fuzzbuzz to Cassandra will have the most impact.
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>>3731761
I apologize if how i worded things was confusing, but you seem to be misinterpreting what i am saying. i was merely having a discussion and talking about the DOs as a whole, not the specific situation. i have no qualms with how you currently have worded and planned to give Cassandra a Fuzzbuzz, nor was i talking about Cassandra specifically. i was merely pointing out, in part, that the DOs probably dont care about that stuff.

Cassandra still might though, and making friends and showing our gratitude never hurts. worse case, she cant understand the gesture, best case, we made he little cave a little bit brighter, and gave her something good to remember earth by... and if we want to get depressing, also might be the only spec of emotion she can still call upon, as if she still can connect like that, she might be the only one once they leave who still can, and id imagine that might start to wear on her.
im now imagining a really depressing scene of Cassandra snuggling up to the Fuzzbuzz while sniffling as she realizes she now trapped in space with basically people no better than robots, and feels even more alone than she ever did trapped in the basement.
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>>3731007

"Who were you before the Crucible? What was your life's story before you became what you are now?" You begin, and Cassandra chuckles.

“Ha, you don’t hold anything back…though I’d expect nothing less of The Defiant, The Hunter of Gods. Oh, the titles you’ll hold.” The face muses, losing herself in thought before her focus snaps back to the present, or rather the past. “To earn money, I painted the dead. Dressed them up for funerals, back when you could bury a body. I made good money, and it funded my love of knowledge…a common theme among the Disassociated, I’d imagine. Chasing what could be, rather than what is.”

"What world events did we set in motion?” Gina interjects, her curiosity getting the better of her. “I figured that stopping Mother's resurrection and gimping her power was a big thing. It’s obvious that pulling it off would paint a target on us, but what sort of chain of events did we start in the rest of the world? Like, in other countries?"

“The Heartbound, so keen of mind…your actions in Almath have sparked a wave of defiance worldwide. It was common knowledge that the cycle was static, that Mother was the god of this trial, and that too large a group would falter and crumble…you have brought these notions tumbling down with the blow you struck at the heart of the Hexane.” Cassandra intones, her pale grey gaze fixed on Gina’s hazel eyes. “Those that wish to fight the cycle will seek you out…as will those who see your family as a means to an end, alive or dead.”

"Do you have any knowledge of what the rest of the world is like?” You say, trying to suppress the chill that her last answer set shuddering through your body. “I've seen how easy it is for a Daughter to fall to the Hunger just trying to get from here to the Cord. What's it like on other continents, where a Daughter would have to travel to the other side of the world to get here? Is there anyone left, or is it just empty fleshscape with all the survivors having moved on?"

“Oh it’s quite active, I assure you.” She says, a note of pride in her voice on behalf of the brave souls out in the Fleshscape. “There are cloisters of Daughters far and wide, each and every one with their own way of keeping sane in a cruel world. However, these settlements are vastly outnumbered by the squadrons of Daughters that march towards the Cord, to say nothing of the lone warriors that could bring this world to its knees by their lonesome. There are a great many like Mara that are coming for the Cord, Defiant…and just as many that are coming for you.”

(Continued)
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>>3731883

"What made you decide you wanted to escape the planet?" November crackles, her clumsy attempt at diverting the conversation to more pleasant matters no less appreciated. Cassandra’s attention snaps to the metal warrior beside you, and she smiles warmly.

“For the same reason you decided to stay, Heather Neeson…the past. I’ve give up much of what I used to be, and I’m afraid I’ve given up too much to get back in the hopes of fleeing the past. Running takes pieces of you, bit by bit…in my haste, I’ve become what you see before you know.”

{Well, that’s…cryptic as fuck} Gina says drolly. You catch a twinkle in Cassandra’s eyes, the crack of an amused smile just before you speak up once more.

"We have a child who goes by of Amara in our family. She's a Skintalker like you. Young, bubbly, full of happiness, loves a good story. I think you would enjoy meeting her if you had the chance, but given you and your people's mission...do you have any Lexicon words you would like to pass on to her as something to remember you by?"

“If you don’t mind a slight inconvenience, then by all means…” She murmurs in reply, and a lance of pain spears through your temples as your mind is filled with alien words you don’t understand. They’re not meant for you, as a gift from one Skintalker to another.

>>LEXICON OF FLESH: 3 New Words Obtained (Words will be awarded when Amara is next accepted into the party.)

“T-thank you.” Comes your pained token of appreciation as you squint past the uncomfortable sensation that slowly fading from your skull. “There was something else that I wanted to ask you, given your skills as a Phantasmal Conduit. There’s a girl trapped inside me, her name is…”

“Sam. Yes, I’m aware.”

You blink.

“I…yes. Sam.” You affirm, swallowing hard. “I don't think I owe her anything, she's a pretty nasty person and her circumstances are mostly her own fault. But being trapped like that is driving her mad, and it doesn't sit right with me to just watch it happen. I'm not that cruel. Is there any way you could remove her, painlessly, so she can pass on, where she won't be bound or trapped any longer, nor haunted by her past?”

“I’ve met one like you, before.” Begins Cassandra’s measured reply. “One caught between new and old, life and death. They requested that I separate them, but…the attempt almost killed both. They were faced with two options; acceptance, or rejection. They opted for the former, existing as one, and shifting from one life to another in harmony. Rejection…would require a Sparagmos Engine, which is not something they’d encountered at the time. I do wonder how they’re doing, now?”

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>>3731885

“Hey, just something that’s been bugging me a bit.” Gina announces, taking a step towards the face in the wall. “The Halos. We know that there are several, and we have one in our possession. Would you happen to know anything about them, or where we might find the others?”

“Ah yes, I think and I know things.” Cassandra hums, giving Gina a little wink as the wires and cables undulate over the luminous, artificial eyes. “Actually, I have something that may help you in that regard.”

The wall’s eyes glance towards the proxy that’s been content to stay in the shadows, until now.

“Francine, would you be so kind as to go to Storage Room six-thirty-one and retrieve item seven-seven-eight? I’d go myself, but I’m afraid I’m all thumbs today.” Cassandra jests, and you see the ghost of a smile alight on Francine’s lips before she bows, returning to the elevator and disappearing from sight as the doors slide closed behind you.

You turn to Cassandra, gaze affixed to yours as she speaks the instant the double-doors shut.

“She sees you as a kindred spirit, you know.” Cassandra declares, taking you aback. “Borne from beasts and the sins of the past, fighting against what the world calls you to become…what it says you should be.”

She smiles.

“She’d never dare to ask, but she wishes to journey with you. Regardless of how you use this information, she intends to stay behind when we take off. Whether with allies or alone, she desires to right the wrongs of her past. You have inspired that dream within her, stoked the fires of hope. You have a habit of that, you know. She’s not the first, and she won’t be the last.”

The wires and pipes shift around the face, in the closest approximation of a shrug the Daughter can manage.

“Your path is your own, no-one else’s. It’s a simple, obvious thing, but one that many lose track of in life…Lord knows I did.” Cassandra sighs. “You are in control, Shu. Just remember that not everyone is as lucky to have a hand on the reins of fate as you and yours.”

>>Ask something else (Write-In)

>>Ask about Francine.

>>Leave, and give her a FuzzBuzz as a parting gift.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next two hours.)
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>>3731885
hrm... well like hell are we doing acceptance.Sams made it very clear her feelings on us, and despite the futility of it, has never wasted an opportunity to try and harm us. the only question then really becomes how an engine allows for rejection here.

>>3731891
>>Leave, and give her a FuzzBuzz as a parting gift.
if Francine is so keen to give traveling with us a try, then regardless of anyone's opinion on allowing her to actually do that(im actually for it.), then id think she herself would be more than willing to answer any questions we have about her herself.

otherwise, nothing left to ask her. shame she feels the need to leave so strongly, im actually really interested in that odd duality she has. on one hand, she seems to whole heartily trust us and what we are doing, and its ability to succeed, yet that in no way makes her wish to stay. i suppose in a way it points out something we have overlooked, that perhaps their reason for leaving has little to do with whether the crucible can be overcome or not, at least for many of them.
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>>3731899
also, it sounds like our future endevours will get... quite interesting. seems Mother might hardly be the worst of them to have put a price on our head. and while im sure theres some fine and wonderful daughters out there hopping with joy to meet us, she said it herself, they are hardly the majority.
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>>3731891
>"What was Francine like when she first came here? How did she change during her stay?"

>"Would there be anything that would prompt you and your people to return to Earth post-crucible's end? Or do you intend to journey through the final frontier of space for eternity? Every ship needs a port to return to, and the Disassociated One's Rocket ship is no exception."

>Give Cassandra a FuzzBuzz as a parting gift. Have it land on the crook near Cassandra's "neck" and cheek. before turning dormant.

>"I remember reading an article saying that Astronauts frequently get homesick, and they often make phonecalls to Earth, and ask for things from Earth. Pictures of Forests, trees, mountains, rivers...things that remind them of home. The voyage you and the Disassociated Ones will make will be long. Very long. You may be a face in the wall as you are now, but you're still human. You're still from planet Earth. So whenever you feel homesick, you'll have a FuzzBuzz by your side to remind you...of home, who you are, where you came from, and a reason for living. And perhaps sometime in the future...when I'm strong enough, I'll be able to give you a phonecall through Fuzzbuzz between the vast reaches of space, to say hello to you and your disassociated ones."
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>>3731907
(FuzzBuzz gifting is locked-in, so no worries. It's too cute to pass up.)
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>>3731910
With how much we do this, bee-gifting is just going to become a custom of the post-Crucible world, isn't it? It's just going to be something that people do, before they part give each other bees. For those who don't have appropriate Hive Mistress powers, little bee tokens will be exchanged.
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>>3731891

>Leave with a FuzzBuzz per as a parting gift and kind words
>"I hope you can find at least some happiness on your voyage. never loose hope there is always a new dawn before you. All you have to do is venture through the darkest night and despair to get to it. Take Fuzzbuzz with you may he remind you of this world the world you leave behind. May he warm you when you feel cold and alone in the world of steel and logiuc you enter."

Having Francine as a party member could be interesting definetly should be something we at least talk over with her
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You know, now that we've asked Cassandra of the possible options on the Sam issue, we've got 2 options, acceptance or rejection.

Rejection would likely involve using a sparagmos engine with the revive function since the only way to separate the host daughter from the dream daughter is to resurrect the dream daughter.

But the issue is that resurrecting Sam uses up our last revival charge from Mara's purified Sparagmos engine. So is it worth resurrecting a girl who wanted agency and freedom, yet had to use underhanded means?

We're not going to be cruel and let her rot into zombie daughter state, and acceptance involves time intensive process of talking it out and settling the differences between Shu and Sam.
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>>3731928
no. we are simply not even entertaining the acceptance option and we are not wasting a limited resource on her. if she rots she rots. its a different situation now, before we thought we had other options, now we know the only two others are prices shes not worth or are not worth the risk.
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>>3731934
Shu has just now stated how she doesn't want that to happen. I'll give acceptance a shot to resolve this instead of dismissing it immediately. And at least ask Gina and Rath beforehand about what they think or possibly helping with it.
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>>3731936
she said that when she thought there was another option to take. we have the exact opposite of any reason to even entertain the idea of the acceptance option, it would be the dumbest thing imaginable to do it. and the Engine is highly limited resource in which any number of other dream daughters deserve that more than her, to which we still haven't let them have it. situations change, that this is a significant change in what options we thought we had available.
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>>3731928
We wont do acceptance. she is no one we want to invest the resources in to make her something which she will only throw away. She is already absolutely hateful of us. Giving her a body will only make things worse.

We will not use the engine on her she is so NOT worth it.

We can ask Gina and Rath about it but puriging her is probably the quickest and leasst painful for all involved.

Sam is no longer a full person(she lost so much) she would not be able to function she may be to far gone already
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>>3731939
>>3731928
actually that is a fair point, Cassandra never said she couldn't be deleted, only separating her intact was not an option.
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>>3731891
>>Ask about Francine.
>"I assume you know about her plan. Is there any way to do it that won't wind up harming her, too? I had my reservations about Francine, but she's a decent person. She doesn't deserve to pay for West's crimes."

>>3731928
Well, we're definitely not using the Sparagmos Engine path. For acceptance, I think it depends on what that entails. If it means integrating Sam's memories and becoming one mind...not sure I want to do that. Because isn't that just proving Sam right, with her whole "rarr, you're taken everything from me, now you're trying to take my memories, blargh!" bit? If it was just getting her to finally calm the fuck down, maybe then. I'm still not sure it's worth the time and effort, though. Then again, if it gave us her Core...I want that skin cloak, damn it! I am strongly tempted by anything that gives Shu an awesome cloak. But maybe we should just craft one as a Relic, that would be simpler.
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>>3731944
WE could get the GRIMM CLOAK id we wanted something like that that shrouds our movement. Granted only in combat but still
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>>3731941
(I'd like to clarify that deletion is also quite risky. The current options are speaking with her, shunting her into a crafted body similar to your own, or ignoring her completely, though there is considerable wiggle room for your own considerable creativity. My apologies for the confusion.)
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>>3731948
would the crafted body be something we could make at a forge? Not directly an engine?
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>>3731950
(You may certainly try.)
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>>3731944
>>3731941
If this>>3731953
is true we could forge a body for her and try and put her into it and then have a talk while she is not in our head anymore and has a modicum of freedom so she does not slip any further.
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>>3731944
read the lines. it worse than melding minds.
>They opted for the former, existing as one, and shifting from one life to another in harmony.
it would basically give us multiple personality disorder, where we shift between whos in control of the body, and absolutely fuck that to high heaven.

>Cloak
eh, i dont think we need one, but im positive we can find a cloak ability somewhere.

>>3731948
well sounds like we should just ignore her then. this is honestly a retarded situation. shes just not worth the damn effort or hassle, and certainly not the cost or time these options entail.

honestly guys, id compromise to risking deletion, or Cassandra pulling her out.
hell... actually.

>>3731891
>>3731899
Amending my vote to;
>Take a moment to let the info settle in.
>Nod, and turn to Cassandra. "Well, do it then, if you dont mind. Remove Sam from my head. you say the risks great, but im willing to risk it."
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>>3731944
>>3731941
>>3731947

So looks like we have some more options then.

We have
>Deleting: Risky, gets rid of Sam. But there's a risk of backlash with unintended consequences. I'm speculating that Shu gets a second case of Amnesia because of how much from Sam's memories Shu draws from if Shu survives. If we delete Sam, we lose the entire catalyst that makes Shu "Shu".

>Talking it out with Sam: Time intensive, Sam sticks around, but we could get Core abilities out of it in the long run after we get Sam to calm the fuck down.

>Shunting her into a body: Methods vary, results vary. Gives Sam an outlet of agency, risky due to her current mindstate.

>>3731956
So far, I'm liking the appeal of giving Sam an outlet via giving her control of a swamling construct. Deletion has an unknown risk that I do not want to incur on Shu.
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>>3731957
>it would basically give us multiple personality disorder, where we shift between whos in control of the body, and absolutely fuck that to high heaven.
Oh, god, you're right. Yeah, no way we're doing that.

>eh, i dont think we need one, but im positive we can find a cloak ability somewhere.
I just think it would look really cool with Shu's armor. It's not really about practicality.

I'm hesitant to have Cassandra try to disentangle Shu and Sam right now, though. That just might make things worse. Reading Cassandra's words again, I think it might be precisely because her attempts at it went wrong that the other example of someone like us she's seen had to compromise for acceptance. Maybe there's some way we can prepare for the procedure, though.
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>>3731964
we're not doing acceptance. id not want to divvy up and share control of our self with Holly even, and certainly not Sam.

>>3731967
this might be our best chance to do it. we have Cassandra here, we have Gina here, and we can have Francine help even. we literally will never have as good a chance to make sure removing Sam has as least a risk as possible.
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>>3731969
>>3731967
preparing for the separation procedure would require talking to Sam about it, asking how she feels of the situation. and getting her consent. We don't have much time on our table since this is the first and last time we'll be able to see Cassandra. And doing it out of the blue on the spot incurs greater risk. There's mental preparation involved.

Also I've noted that every time we've encountered Sam, we've always encountered her because she came to us on HER terms, we've never even once tired to initiate conversation on OUR terms.
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>>3731964
We should give her somethign small like a swarmling yeah. at least try it to see if it works we can work with her if she really wants to and she literally can not kill us in a swarmlings body

>>3731969

I dont want to accept her due to the multiple personality disorder. I just want to shunt her out intoa hamrless construct, she is a headache and we are to kind to make her a zombie or just kill her.
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>>3731891
Supporting>>3731907

And
>Make a swarmling with no augments or offensive capabilities. A safeling.
>"Can you try linking her consciousness to this drone? So I can start talking to her safely and keep things from worsening at least."
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>>3731975
i see nothing implying we need Sams consent to try and remove her. im talking both deletion or crystallization here too. damn be what Sam wants, we have three people who can help mitigate the effects, this is our best bet to get rid of her. we arent doing acceptance, we arent wasting an Engine point on her, this is literally our only option, unless you want to just keep her rotting away.

>>3731976
i disagree, we can and easily have any proper right to remove her, even if thats via killing her. im against putting her in any body, all she will do with freedom is cause us any and all trouble she can, no matter how harmless it is. all putting her in a construct will do is anger her more as she sees it as us mocking her, taking half measures with her situation.
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>>3731982
its not about if we have the right to do it or if we are justified. I would at least give her a chance but you are probably right I will amend my vote a bit

>>3731891
from >>3731918
to

>Take a moment to let the info settle in. give Gina a nod and tell her over the Cord "No matter what happens i will always love you and Rath. Watch over me while we try and fix this mess"
>Nod, and turn to Cassandra. "Well, do it then, if you dont mind. Remove Sam from my head. you say the risks great, but im willing to risk it."

>Leave with a FuzzBuzz per as a parting gift and kind words
>"I hope you can find at least some happiness on your voyage. never loose hope there is always a new dawn before you. All you have to do is venture through the darkest night and despair to get to it. Take Fuzzbuzz with you may he remind you of this world the world you leave behind. May he warm you when you feel cold and alone in the world of steel and logic you enter."
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>>3731991
>>3731982
If you're gonna have Sam shunted out, at least mentally prepare for it instead of doing it out of the blue.
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>>3731997
i think we are as mentally prepared as we could ever be, and like i said, have the best set of people around us to ensure it goes well.
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>>3731997
also to be fair, i actually do think Shu would be pretty mentally prepared for it, it actually kinda was one of the things we wanted to see and possibly do while here.
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>>3731891
Bringing Francine along as Party Member #8? I'm down for that. Plus, she'll be able to upgrade November over time. We could use a scientist as brilliant as her, and it would be really interesting to see how she fights the other Wests.

For other questions:
>"You keep talking about things I'm going to do, titles I'm going to hold, like this is an epic story that hasn't happened yet. How do you know all of this? Can you see the future?"

>"...What kind of story is this going to be?"
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>>3732010
well, i doubt she can actually see the future, i think it was more of...whats the word, she is just confident we're gonna end up doing alot of important stuff. we've made ourselves someone important, wether we like it or not, so its bound we are going to do more

that, and asking about your future is never a good idea.
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>>3732013
I wouldn't be surprised if she has some sort of predictive information-synthesis power, though. With all the information and processing power she has access to, it wouldn't be unreasonable for her to be able to make accurate predictions just based on knowledge of the behaviors of all participants.
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>>3732018
true, but id kinda say our entire stick is kinda working outside those bounds, and its still a case of 'self fulfilling prophecies' and all that. just an unhealthy thing in my eyes to ask about ones future or try and rely on said info. plus, you know, even if she was stupid accurate... kinda ruins the fun of finding it all out on your own, in your own time.
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>>3732010
i would not ask for our future. knowing it will change it or causes something bad to happen that would not have happened had we not known. And i would rather just learn of it when it happens. the future is a fickle thing as some people have to learn soon.

>>3732013
She may be able to make certain predictions based on possibilitys and chances she knows about.

those can be wildly thrown off once a new variable enter the field. which can happen pretty much anytime
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>>3732010
>>3731891
Veto-ing this vote. Prophecies are things that people try to fulfill subconsciously. asking for things like that is asking for trouble.
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(...Interesting. Would someone be so kind as to help me tally the votes, since there was some switching around? I just wish to be certain before I proceed with writing.)
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>>3731982
To be honest, I'm still not down with deleting Sam.
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>>3732033
sure, ill give it a shot.

>>3731991
>>3731957
two for dealing with Sam now via removal.

>>3731944
>>3731907
>>3731979
three for asking about Sam

>>3731907
>>3731979
two for asking about returning to earth

>>3731979
one for dealing with Sam via a construct.

obviously some votes covered multiple sections, but i also dont think its unfair to count individual questions and actions necessarily.
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>>3732039
you mean three for asking about Francine.
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>>3732033
>>3732039
oh, and i think everyone was up for supporting a speech along with the FuzzBuzz gift.

also that three vote is asking about FRANCINE, my bad.

>>3732040
yeah just caught that.
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>>3732039
(Thank you very much. It might take me a little while to prepare the next post, so thank you for bearing with me.)
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And I'm off to work. If something wrong happens to Shu...
I know who.
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"What was Francine like when she first came here? How did she change during her stay?" You ask, the image of the Doctor’s doppelganger fresh in your mind’s eye.

“Like the others. Cold, calculating, distant.” Cassandra replies wistfully. “She began tending to us, and that’s when the changes began. I’ve been watching her closely…and what I’ve seen is inspiring, though the biggest leap came when you gave her a chance, it seems.”

"I assume you know about her plan, then? Is there any way to do it that won't wind up harming her, too?” You ask, surprised at your own concern. “I admit I had my reservations about Francine, but she's a decent person. She doesn't deserve to pay for West's crimes."

“I do…and that’s up to her. It might take a little more effort, but she might find a way to save herself from the fate of the others…if she thinks she deserves it.” Cassandra replies slowly, watching your eyes intently before November’s speakers crackle to life again.

"Would there be anything that would prompt you and your people to return to Earth, after we put an end to the Crucible? Or do you intend to journey through space for eternity?” She asks, visor tilted towards the bizarre being set into the wall. “Every ship needs a port to return to, every soldier a home…and this ship is no exception."

“I used to think there wouldn’t be…” The face replies, wiry lips curving into a smile. “…now I’m not so sure.”

Wordlessly, a single FuzzBuzz wriggles forth from your hive’s glossy plating before flitting to your outstretched forearm.

"I remember reading an article saying that Astronauts frequently get homesick, and they often make phone calls to Earth, and ask for things from Earth. Pictures of Forests, trees, mountains, rivers...things that remind them of home.” You begin, examining the swarmling on your arm. “The voyage you and the Disassociated Ones will make will be long. Very long. You may be a face in the wall as you are now, but you're still human. You're still from planet Earth.”

At your silent command the construct hovers over to Cassandra’s face, alighting on her cheek.

"I hope you can find at least some happiness on your voyage.” You continue, smiling at the Daughter before you. “Never lose hope that there’s is always a new dawn before you, despite the dark. Take Fuzzbuzz with you to remind you of this world the world you leave behind, so whenever you feel homesick you'll have a him by your side to remind you...of home, who you are, where you came from, and a reason for living. Maybe in the future...when I'm strong enough, I'll be able to give you a call through that between the vast reaches of space, to say ‘hello’ to you and yours."

“…You truly are one of a kind, Shu.” Cassandra says softly. “Now, I do believe there’s something you’d like my assistance with, if I’m not mistaken.”

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You turn, taking Gina’s hand in yours and squeezing it as you hold her gaze, hazel eyes going wide as she realizes what you’re about to do.

"No matter what happens I will always love you and Rath. Watch over me while we try and fix this mess" You say solemnly, fear and concern welling up within the girl that stands before you.

“Oh…oh, shit. You’re really going to do this?” She breathes, and you nod before turning back to Cassandra.

"Well, do it then, if you dont mind. Remove Sam from my head. You say the risk’s great, but I’m willing to take that chance.” You declare, and she merely nods as her grey eyes begin to shine with an aquamarine light.

“Very well.” She replies, turning her gaze to the girl by your side. “This will require both of us, Heartbound. I would humbly ask that you follow my lead.”

Gina relents after a long moment, and as you sit cross-legged on the floor she joins you, tethering herself to your spine through a quartet of jacks, not trusting herself to use anything less. You feel you mind begin to numb, you vision blurring, so you close your eyes to block it out. A sound like a dentist’s abominable drill begins to reach a painful crescendo, your teeth gritting to curb the agony of the high-pitched screeching, and your world tilts…

It’s a beautiful day outside. Light streams in through your dorm’s open window, and as you rise from your seat on the couch you stride over to your mini-fridge, itching to crack open your newest…

No. No, this isn’t yours. This doesn’t belong to you.

It never did, because you and she are as different as night and day.

“It’s kind of ironic, isn’t it?”

Your head snaps to the side at the sound of your voice coming from the bathroom, and you’re face-to-face with someone that looks less like you every time you see her. Perched on the edge of a bloody bathtub, Sam’s face is drawn, body wrapped in a leathery cloak that clings tight to her frail form. Her eyes, though…as dull as they are, there’s still a spark of something indescribable shining deep within them.

“Cutting your bond to B’ni…getting rid of me…all in these cold, unfeeling walls.” She says in a raspy, worn parody of your own voice. “Maybe you should give the Disassociated a shot. You’d fit right in.”

“Hello, Sam.” You say.

“Hello, Shu.” She replies.

“You know why I’m here, I assume?” You ask, and a harsh bark of laughter escapes your other self’s dry throat.

“You finally came to me on your own terms…and it’s to end this.” She chuckles, shaking her head. You raise an eyebrow, your body tense, prepared for…

(Continued)
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>>3732268
I really want a chance to talk.
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>>3732268

“Quit it. I’m through fighting.” She interrupts, hollow eyes giving your anticipatory frame a once-over. “You’re defiant ‘till the end, but I’m…so fucking tired. It’s not like there’d be any point now, anyway. I’ve seen enough of what you and your people can do in the Dreamscape to know I’m fucked six ways to Sunday.”

“You have to understand why I’m doing this.” You begin, voice hard. “You’ve shown that you’re not to be trusted. Just like B’ni, I can’t keep looking over my shoulder, wondering if…”

“She was MY fault, she did all that because of ME.” Sam cuts in, her voice a low, hateful growl. “But did it ever fucking occur to you to ask my opinion? Did it ever cross your mind that I might want to try and say I’m sorry, before you robbed me of that opportunity? That there were things that I wanted to do to? The one decent thing I could’ve done for the person that…the one person that actually cared about…”

She just laughs again, the sound a harsh, mirthless thing.

“No. No, of course it didn’t. It didn’t occur to any of you.” She mutters, shaking her head. “I can hear them, you know. I can hear the swarm, buzzing around in your head. Arguing, picking at each other, going apeshit when you score a kill. A part of them despised Isabelle…a bigger part of them despise me, just like they despised that proxy out there. And then what? ‘Ooh, shiny new ability’ and she’s suddenly worth talking to. Your swarm changed their tune real fucking fast on that one.”

“Francine isn’t West.” You fire back. “And I’m not you.”

“No…you’re not.” She says, and you catch a curious note in her voice at the same moment that you realize you can’t feel her across the empathic line…or perhaps your own apprehension overlaps with hers. “I don’t know what thr fuck you are. You’re not human. You’re not Hexane. You’re something else entirely, I think…but you clearly don’t give a shit about where you came from.”

Long, jagged nails scrape against the tub’s edge, her eyes narrowing as she stares at your features.

“I get you being pissed at Isabelle…believe me, I get it. You gave her all the chances in the world, and she spat in your face.” She growls, staring past your right shoulder, her thousand-yard stare boring into something you can never see…before her gaze snaps back to yours. “But you never gave me a chance. You have no idea what it was like in here, watching someone wear your face…having all the control while you had precisely none. You…Christ, you even gave the Spartan a shot. But me? Nah. All that talk about the power of choice and second chances, and here I am for weeks with neither…and you wonder why whenever you showed up here I was mad as hell.”

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>>3732284

Her teeth grind so hard that you think her jaw’s about to break.

“That’s…THAT’S why I fucking hate you, Shu.” She spits, eyes burning into yours with all the rage in the world. “Because you’re a goddamn hypocrite.”

She rises, and you dart back when she stumbles forwards, catching herself on the doorframe with one skeletal hand. Here, without your powers, you instinctually reach out to grab the closest thing to a weapon that you…

“Ha, oh shit…god, that’s rich, isn’t it?” She laughs weakly, staring at how your fingers have curled around the base of the two-tone lava lamp you now hold in your hand. She stares at it for a long moment, leaning on the bathroom doorframe for support as it hits you that she’s barely able to stand.

“I wanted a choice, you know. You got a shot at life, whatever you are. You saved so many people, when they’d have died if it wasn’t for you swooping in to save the day.” She says softly. “This could’ve been a second chance for me. Start fresh. Be somebody that wasn’t scrabbling for whatever I could get.”

She scowls, her hand tightening on the plaster frame.

“Or maybe I’d have made the same mistakes all over again. Maybe B’ni would’ve killed me a second time. Maybe I’d have bit the dust somewhere along the way.” She says, her exhausted gaze locking with yours. “Who the hell knows, right?”

She shrugs.

“Do whatever you want, Shu.”

Sam just looks down, staring at the lava lamp as the amethyst and orange light reflects in her eyes.

“You’re in control…because I’m sure as hell not.”

>>Keep her (Sam will stay within your system for now, accessible only by your direct command).

>>Remove her (Moderate risk of feedback of an unknown nature, mitigated by Gina and Cassandra).

>>Speak to her (Write-In)

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next two and a half hours as I close out the work day. Thank you so much for your patience with my schedule, and I hope your own day is going well.)
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>>3732291
>>Remove her (Moderate risk of feedback of an unknown nature, mitigated by Gina and Cassandra).
oh go cry up a different river Sam. easy now for you to say you TOTALLY would've been the best little angel possible, but like hell is that true. you went down trying to frame someone for MURDER. if you had taken our place, you would've just been like any other daughter out there. if we hadn't gotten our shot at life, you wouldn't of even given thought to the idea you could've taken another path. you also are talking out your ass. any and all times we interacted with you, YOU made it negative. even back when it was the first time, and WE hadn't even realized it was possible. YOU chose to make each and every interaction with us nothing more than you being a villain. and guess what? the difference is, we didnt actually give anyone a chance, if they did exactly what you did.

Eloise, Johanna, Hera, Meg, the Hatter, even Lara? when they made themselves hostile, we didn't hesitate. no asking why, no giving them a chance to calm down. we went, guns blazing, because when someone makes themselves a threat, thats what you do. the difference is, you did that in the dreaming, and never tried a different approach. them? they took their situation and decided to give our second encounters with them a different approach. if they had tried to mess with us like you had in our head? we wouldn't of bothered with them either. its simply, plain, and dry. you made your choices, you face the consequences.

and damn if we dont deserve a break from this shit.
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>>3732333
HYPOCRITE
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>>3732341
nope, not one bit, and you know it.
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>>3732291
>keep Sam.
I’m going to give sam a second chance because she has shown herself to be someone who understands her problems, and could redeem herself. She hates us because we ignored her. now i want to take the chance to listen to her. and her calling us out for our hypocrisy is justified
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>>3732350
>and her calling us out for our hypocrisy is justified
its not, because there is no hypocrisy to call out.
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>>3732291
>Write in

>You are right we are hypocrits. Do you know why this one voice in my head writes this now because he started to understand. But it was to late. For him for you
>They were furious at you first because you tried to scare them and then because Isabelle fed us false information and they interpreted things wrongly as well at a time where they did not know that communication with you was even possible
>You getting ultra pissy every time was also a cause they wanted nothing to do with you and went on the defensive. So you want a choice? I and they will give you one.

>"Will you work with me? Give me..... and them a second chance? So that maybe we could start again. Or do you watn to sleep the dreamlesss dream forever?"

>Look a the screen and say "They are in control but you can have some input to your fate.... if they allow it"


"For all its worth i am sorry you had a shitty life. Seriously i am. Though i dont like being put on the same step as a buzzuing insect in a swarm. I went with the easy flow and the popular choice pretty often"

>Wait for her decision, if she takes more than a couple of seconds start the removal process
Probably too meta but what the hell this is the dreamscape and Sam just kicked down the fourth wall may as well kick it while its down

>>3732333
I agree she never gae us the chance to get to know her beyond what the fragments we learned were. But she was always hostile this is the first time seeing her calm i would at least try to speak to her
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>>3732291
>"You're right that I never talked to you when I should have. You honestly scared me. The first memory I saw from you made me think you were a serial killer."
>"But now I know more, and I'm through being scared. It's not an excuse anymore."
>"I think you wanted control so desperately that you decided to use others instead of letting them help you. But that's just continuing an awful cycle, where one suffers and then causes suffering to others in turn."
>"I think that's bullshit. I want people to be happy instead, and not have to hurt, and that includes you."
>"Sam, what you did to Isabelle was awful and she didn't deserve it then. But I still don't think you deserve this, and I never gave you a chance to be better."
>"So I choose to rectify that."
>Keep her (Sam will stay within your system for now, accessible only by your direct command).
>"If you want your new lease on life, then how about we start everything over? My name is Shu and I was born a few weeks ago. What's yours?"
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>>3732350
She can mabye call us anons hypocrytes but i will not allow her to call Shu one
Shu had every reason to be mad as hell at her and her timeframe was much shorter. We had months to process this for shu it has been days
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>>3732354
Sam sees us as who WE are, she’s not seeing Shu as Shu, Sam sees US Anons behind Shu. She sees us as a monster.
>>3732357
>>3732363
I’m for these two options.
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>>3732375
If you want to vote please link your post to BHOPS post makes it much easier for BHOP to count
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>>3732357
im highly against taking that 'swarm' comment so seriously. IC especially we have no idea what she even means by that or whats going on with that, or if its not just her(and BHOP) being facetious about our dream daughters. even if its not, its hardly something to just...take like that, instead of taking it like Shu is still herself.

>>3732357
>>3732363
>>3732375
also, im against Shu even hinting at being a hypocrite. we and she are not one. we didn't interact with same for the same reason we didn't try and talk to so many others; because they were hostile to us. her doing it the the dreamscape doesn't change that. thats not hypocrisy, thats actually sticking to our guns to a pretty solid score. she herself had opportunities to say something different and change how we viewed interacting with her by her own words and actions. instead, she didn't, and continued to give us every reason to see her the same way we saw so many others.

>>3732375
i also dont think thats the case, nor does it change anything. even then, the there would still be an IC explanation, and that explanation would still amount to 'being Shu', whos done absolutely nothing wrong with our interactions with her.
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>>3732388
(Given that I am both colorblind and dyslexic, this is greatly appreciated.)
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>>3732350
>>3732357
>>3732363
Sam also doesn't deserve another chance, and what the hell's your plan then? we arent doing acceptance, as theres just too many actual legitimate issues with multiple personality disorder even if she was trustworthy, and she damn well hasn't earned an engine point, then what? keep her around, exactly like you dont want? read the text, she will be in exactly the situation you dont want if we keep her. we have no reason to keep her, and keeping her doesn't even do her herself any good. and no matter what we try, we literally will not have a safer or better opportunity to do it, be it remove her into a crystal, delete her, or shunt her off into a drone or something. hell with Ginas ability to hijack constructs and Cassandra being a a phantasmal, we could probably do more for her now via a construct body than we otherwise could do. but keeping her just is silly. we dont even get that many opportunities to visit dream daughters, she'll still be isolated, and still be on the edge if we keep her.
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>>3732397
oh fuck, i forgot you're colorblind that must be hell yeah, ive already gotten confused before due to how similar some folks ID colors are, and i can see what they are.
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>>3732397
Uff that sucks my brother is colourblind and he has a bad time cant imagine something like that at all i think my glasses are bad enough

For ease of Reference i will do just that then >>3732375
this anons post is now linked to >>3732291


>>3732390
I am alcutall ynot pointing at us anons or shu at all i am pointing at Sam fo rbein ghte hypocryte. She never even considered trying to send us a positive message. Maybe its the language thing but i was trying to subtly suggest she is the hypocryte in this situation not us. We reacted on the information we anons had and the post i made was no different.

I am also trying to get a message through to Sam directly without processing through Shu. Maybe the dreamscape will allow it maybe it wont matter but i can certainly try.

>>3732405
She can still choose her own fate. Going by what she said she will jump at the opportunity to get out of Shus head one way or another and if she doesnt my write in will purge her
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>>3732417
well saying
>You are right we are hypocrites.
is...kinda outright Shu saying Shu is one. this is the part im against.

>She can still choose her own fate.
she did, like two+ years ago.
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>>3732291
I'll vote for these two options.

If Sam wants to be given a chance, we should give her one. Because finding closure with her sounds like a damn important part of the Golden Ending.

>>3732357
>>3732363
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>>3732425
The Crucible gave a lot of second chances to people, but Sam didn't get one herself.
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>>3732430
i dont think its that detrimental a decision to our final outcome.

>>3732438
thats on her and her treatment of us, not on the Crucible, nor is that a reason to ignore her actions. Kosi didn't get a second chance. the Shrubbery Girl didnt get a second chance. both of them were bound to rot and die and go insane with no real way to even pretend to do something with their lives, due to their disabilities still being incurable. the Crucible isnt about second chances, hell if it had its way, its about doubling down on your path, which is exactly what Sam did.
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>>3732425
She can choose her own fate now.

This is posssibly her last chance. I am willing to grant it to her. To grant her a last little send off if she wants to sleep forever.

>You are right we are hypocrites
Alright got me there i think i forgot to go over that again as i pretty much wrote the entire post twice before i was stisfied

it is because i was a hypocrite towards her in the past.............. This entire thing is pretty personal though. I have to say this because these are the feeling i hold towards Sam right now. Part off me just wants to get her over and done with and part off me wants to give her a chance. But the biggest part of me wants her to have a choice. This is what i thought at the time we slowly started to understand asmall part of Sam. It may just be too late for you i thought about Sam

I could change it too

>You are right this one here is a hypocrit. Do you know why this one voice in my head writes this now because he started to understand. But it was to late. For him for you
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>>3732291
>>Speak to her (Write-In)
>"No, you're not. You need to have self-awareness to be in control. Sam, if this is how you remember our interactions, then you are delusional. You know why I gave everyone else a chance, but not you? Because when I got the opportunity to actually talk to them, THEY DIDN'T TRY TO CONVINCE ME THEY WERE AN EVIL SERIAL KILLER WHO WOULD DESTROY EVERYTHING I CARED ABOUT! Christ, woman, have you forgotten that part!?"

>Manipulate the dreamscape to conjure up a flashback to Vein 8, when we first actually spoke with Sam. Play out this post >>3234515

>"Yeah, look at that. Here you are threatening me and implying that every dark thing I suspected about my past was true, when you knew it wasn't. Gee, I wonder why I might have come away from that interaction with a bad opinion of you? And don't think that the fact that I'd later learn from B'Ni's memories that you were lying to me helps at all, all it did was confirm that you were a manipulator who would say anything if it could let you assert power over me. Of course I wasn't going to try to talk to you after that. That's just being sensible. Don't pretend that you're the victim here just because I refused to be yours."

>"Sure, I'll admit that there was some spite in there. I hated you, Sam. I still do. Leaving you all alone to stew in your frustration was very satisfying. But I'm not the monster you want to make me out to be. I will not be responsible for your poor decisions. All these things you're claiming, that you just wanted to start over and be better and not be trapped and powerless? You had the chance to say them long ago. You threw that chance away, because it was more fun to pick at my fears."

>"You know, it's funny. It's kind of exactly like what happened with Isabel, isn't it? You could have defused things, could have fixed the situation you were in, but you just couldn't help that urge to establish dominance. And so the person you were trying to manipulate struck back. You never learned that having power over someone is not the same thing as having control. Control is power over your self. Power to ignore all your foolish and dark impulses, to do what's right for you instead of just what makes you happy in the moment. I don't think you know how to do that, Sam."

>"I do. It would be so satisfying to erase you from my mind. But in the long run, I don't want to be the sort of person who can do that without hesitation. So I'm going to give you a chance, Sam. Get out of my head, go into storage for now, and some day when this is all over...I'll bring you back. When the world is fixed and psychotherapists exist again, I'm going to bring you back to life and get you the help that you need. But you have to accept it. Don't go into sleep raging against me for being such a horrible person and taking your choice away from you. Recognize that you need to change and that what you're doing is not working. Please. Have control for once in your life."
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>>3732453
well, fair enough, but i still dont think Shu herself is a hypocrite, and im still against talking as if Shu would just accept we all are somehow in her head IC. it really makes no sense for her to just accept that, or roll with it, when she, and we, have no context of what it actually, truly means. we can guess, sure, but at the moment for all we know shes delusional and hearing our Dream Daughters cheer us on. sure, its probably not that, but i dont think Shu would just accept shes actually a bunch of voices working together, nor focus on that right now.
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>>3732454
I might go for this if it wasn't for the end. I'd rather give her a real chance to stick around and develop. To help and become a decent person. The stasis until psychotherapists should be if she refuses.
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>>3732475
That is why i am trying. Probably wont work out as intended but to be honest i am gettign kind off tired (long day at work followed by reading the thread while being Gm to a campaing wehre one missstep could sen the party down the road of causing a nuclear holocasut and wiping out not one but pretty much three civilisations bringing ruin to an entire continent and later to the world unless they then manage to stop an elder god form manifesting)

Itwouldnt even need to be her to be aware of what she is saying, she might just talk as a mouthpieceo fus anons right now.

Not the nicest thing to say sure but i got a feeling this might be what is happening as Sam did speak directly to us. in my opinion


>>3732291
I would like to slightly ammend part of my vote in this>>3732357
to replace the sentence off
>You are right we are hypocrits.
with
>You are right this one voice here is a hypocrit.
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>>3732499
well, i disagree. cant support a vote thats in my opinion acting's entirely out of character and going off a massive whim we dont actually know anything about. as far as im concerned, even if Shu is a collection of buzzers, shes still Shu, and would see and talk as herself being Shu, as in singular.
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>>3732333
>>3732291
>>3732454
its ending is not how id want to word it, but ill support this, but still the caveat that
>Remove
is the final goal no matter what.
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>>3732494
I kind of want to, too, but I have trouble seeing it as worth the bother. Not if she's going to keep being like this. Maybe if we could somehow get an assurance that she'd be all better if we just tried to talk with her more, but I'd have trouble believing any such statement.

>>3732516
Yeah, I'm not too happy with how I ended it, either. I just wanted to make sure I got something out. Give me a bit, I'll try to rework it.
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>>3732552
>>3732494
one of my issues is, she hasn't earned us giving her our very limited time to try and help her here, especially compared to others. id say basically any other Dream Daughter we have is more deserving of any and all options we possibly have to give Sam, yet we dont do it for them, and for good reason.
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>>3732552
Maybe gauge her reaction to the accusations first. She's kind of defeated right now so I don't expect her to get angry or defensive, but Shu's got good empathy (and I'm not talking about her power) so if there's regret from her expression rather than some uncaring mopping, then it's worth coaxing her to make peace and rectify those past mistakes.
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>>3732566
That's the real crux of the matter, isn't it? We might be able to help her here and now, make everything right. But it would be such an investment of time and effort, this constant uphill battle. And at the end of it, we probably can't even give her what she wants. We can't give her a new body right now. We're definitely not sharing the pilot seat for ours. So it would just further frustrate her and make her miserable, which would cause her to backslide on any therapy we might attempt to give her, and I just don't know what we can do.

>>3732584
Yeah, I think I'll add that. Give her a chance to respond, instead of just delivering a speech to her. I think that's a good thing to include just for the sake of good dialogue, even if I don't think Sam should stay in our head. Make this an actual conversation instead of just the two of us shouting past each other. It's both better writing and more emotionally healthy. I might have to rework the opening, too, though. Okay, give me a moment.
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well guys just update im doing some more reading. think i see what yalll ment these threads were an emotional rollar coster
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er, well we got 5 minutes so... guess thats probably that?
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(I just got back home, so I can keep voting open a little longer if you'd like, Gentlemen.)
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Okay, this is a bit less of an angry version. Trying to actually talk to Sam instead of give a speech.

>>3732291
>>Speak to her (Write-In)
>Sigh deeply.

>"Sam. I think you are ignoring some important things. It's true, I haven't sought out conversation with you. But that's not me being unreasonable. We have talked before, Sam, and you did not leave a good impression."

>Manipulate the dreamscape to conjure up a flashback to Vein 8, when we first actually spoke with Sam. Play out this post >>3234515

>"Look at that, Sam. Here we are, our very first conversation-Hell, my very first awareness that you're a separate personality!- and you're threatening me. You're not saying any of this business about wanting a second chance to be better, instead you're just playing into all the fears I had about my origins. Is it any wonder that I came away from that with a bad opinion of you? And it didn't actually help when I learned from B'Ni that you were lying, because...what was the point of all that, then? To mess with my head, establish dominance? Sure seemed that way. You gave the impression that you'd do and say anything if it let you have power over me. You're presenting yourself as the victim, but you were trying to victimize me. Of course I didn't want to speak with you ever again."

>"I'll admit that there was some spite in there. I hated you, Sam. Leaving you all alone to stew in your frustration was very satisfying. But I'm not a hypocrite. This hasn't been me never giving you a chance. You had a chance, but you threw it away because you wanted to pick at my fears. It's exactly what happened with you and Isabel. You had the opportunity to defuse things, try to fix the situation, but you didn't. You had to have that dominance, play on the other party's insecurities, but instead of just rolling over they struck back at you. You can't place all the blame for this on those you tried to manipulate. That things have gone wrong for you doesn't mean you weren't responsible for them. It's just the natural outcome of your choices, decisions that you made of your own volition. You were always in control."

>"We tend to think of control as deciding our circumstances, refusing to let anything move us against our will. But if we're to truly have control we need to recognize that our decisions are our own. That we have the power to choose, and accept the responsibilities for what results. We need to resist our dark and short-sighted impulses, be better and do better, if we are to get anywhere. That's what I'm trying to do here. I don't want to leave you to rot, Sam. That would be far too cruel. But I can't see how us being in each other's lives won't just make us both unhappy. If you think there's a better option than removing you from me I'm willing to hear it, but I can't see it."
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>>3732735
up to you, maybe just another 10-15 minutes or so, just so those who were on the fences waiting on the rewrite Anon just posted can decide if it changes anything for them. but we also have two and a half hours, so...
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>>3732738
Actually, no I don't know if I want to say this, either. Argh. I am having trouble expressing my thoughts. BHOP, can I just trust you to take my sentiment of "I gave Johanna a chance because she was willing to talk to me, you only ever treated me with hostility, my choosing to leave you alone was an entirely rational and non-hypocritical response, I want to do good by you but you're not making it easy!" and turn it into good writing? You are good writer.
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>>3732516
>>3732291

>>3732738
i guess i can support this ending, but still prefer the other ones opening.
>>3732454

so i guess that will be my vote then, though still dont want her to stick around in our head at the end of it.

>>3732749
i dont think its that bad Anon. sure, its still not what i really want, but the writing itself is not at all bad and clearly gets the point across in my opinion.
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>>3732744
(I'll keep voting open for another fifteen minutes then, for any last-minute changes.)

(Also, an open question for my own clarification; do you want to hear Sam out after you speak to her and have one final vote to see how to remove her, or have the dialogue and then automatically take the removal option that seems appropriate, i.e. placing her in a crystal or attempting to delete her if she doesn't want to play ball? In any case she's leaving Shu here and now, it's merely the vector for her departure and where she ends up that is key, here.)
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>>3732757
honestly? up to you? I apologize if that sounds like a cop out, but we are giving Sam a chance to say something back, but i think its entirely reasonable whatever she says at the end of this will make our decision very clear.

so... actually i guess, give our spiel, let her respond, then automatically choose the option based off how she responds. kinda dont think we need another vote, i mean, she either cooperates in some way and admits to wanting to get better, or she doesn't. if shes not willing to play ball... the options kinda set in stone, id argue.
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>>3732757
Are you saying that Sam will choose to be removed if we don't make the concrete choice to keep her? Because that's how it sounded like with the "hear her out and then vote *how* to remove her" and stuff.

Honestly I wouldn't like that. When I want to give characters the option to be better (and just to be cleared I haven't changed my vote >>3732363), it's done with the hope that they'll take it. It sucks to see someone give up and not rise to meet the offer.
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>>3732749
what are you unhappy about BTW? the ending still?

maybe something like;
>"whether you like it or not, you had your choice, and you made your decisions. and its time you faced the consequences, and accepted responsibility for them. i Dont want to see you rot, no one deserves that, but you yourself gave me every reason to treat you how I did, and honestly? im tired of it. The simple truth is, im not up to the task of trying to help you through this, and im not sure im the one who could do it. do you really think we could make this work? I dont, i dont think either of us deserve the unhappiness this has brought the both of us. So im giving you a choice. a chance to leave, a chance to sleep, and be free, in a way. If you see another option, say it, but we're both individuals, and we're staying that way, and whether you like it or not, you have given me no reason to spend valuable resources on you ive not given to others who have done so much more and earned something more. but my ears our open, and the choice is yours, just like you always wanted."

>>3732772
>>3732749
thoughts? probably doubt either like it, but maybe a little better to at least work off of?
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hey behop. might wanna hear this from me though i know isabellas dead or someone said she was here my opinion on vein 20 and 19
(coppied from discord btw)
like. i love how . i like isabella but when i see west i think shes a bitch though shes exactly like on of my ocs but said oc is the one character everyone loves to hate. including myself but i love him. so thats pretty much same on my opinion on west. anyway ima go back to reading
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>>3732757
I'd like to hear her out. I also don't want to erase her. I just don't know what I want to do anymore. I think she's wrong, that our motivations in regards to her are not hypocritical. That maybe they were unkind, maybe we could have treated her better, but she's the one that never gave us a chance, not the other way around. I don't know how to express that, though. I'd suggest a neuromantic connection, but apparently Sam perceives Shu's mind as a competing set of instincts representing her subconscious/our discussion, so that won't work.

And only the negative parts, too, because if she could really see the discussion she'd see how we express thoughts like "I don't like Sam, but I don't think she deserves to suffer" or "Francine seemed untrustworthy at first, but she appears to actually be decent, let's help her" or "let's make a ton of gifts for the Midnight Crew, they've been great friends and we want them to be safe". No, she only sees the self-motivated parts of our conversations, or the schadenfreude which is ultimately not a sincere motivation for our decision-making. And so Shu comes across as a brutally utilitarian and cruel inhuman monster. I don't know how to debase her of that assumption! It's like with B'Ni, once someone's already decided you're evil any attempt to disprove it through conversation just appears as manipulation.
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>>3732776
Well, I don't like it because I'm not voting for "remove". That's pretty much it for me.
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also btw the He im refering to is the guy i share my namesake with (Gen is his nickname ... i think you can figure out why if you think about it anyway enough about me again im just dropin by
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>>3732786
well, then congrats on being the actual hypocrite if you dont then, i guess?
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>>3732772
(Allow me to clarify; Sam wants agency. She wants to be free, and to have some measure of control. What she would advocate for is to have the chance to prove she can change, and leave the avenue up to you, i.e. have access to the other Dream Daughters, occupy a swarmling, have a false body made, have a crystallized form of her installed in a machine form that has mobility, etc. She just wants the chance to make her own decisions with the second chance she's been given, but at this point she's practically given up hope that you'd offer that at this point.)

>>3732781
(Nice, I like the commonality there, and thank you for sharing, Gen.)
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>>3732757
hear her out and make a final vote.
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>>3732776
Yeah, that's good. I'd leave out the bit about not having the resources to do it, though. Sam is already convinced we're an inhuman monster who only knows cruelty and utilitarianism, let's not reinforce that.

>>3732796
Okay, but can we actually provide any of those things? I'd like to just give her access to the rest of the Dream Daughters, but I don't know if that's a thing we can do. I thought it was remove or integrate, I kind of got that impression.
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>>3732784
Well, there's the >>3732357
write in which breaks the fourth wall and acknowledges the competing instincts part, if you want to work with that.

>>3732291
>>3732796
Okay thanks for clarifying. I'll definitely stick to >>3732363 then. Maybe with some of >>3732357 in there since other anons have voted for it alongside mine.
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>>3732796
as much as i refuse to have her stay in our head, i think the overall vote is in favor of hearing her out and putting options on the table.

>>3732738
>>3732756
>>3732357
>>3732375
>>3732430
all imply giving her a choice, with the dual votes and individuals giving support for removing her only if she wont play ball, but still giving her a chance to actually convince us of something else.

only
>>3732363
has support for keeping her under any circumstances, regardless of what she says.
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>>3732809
>>3732796
>>3732776
>>3732811
and i guess with two votes to use some version of that ending, or one you think works better, if you are going to use any of said Anons large post. but thats more semantics at this point, the votes at a point where you're gonna have to mix and match anyways, so honestly just take our ideas, and write it out how you think works and is in line with the vote.
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>>3732811
>>3732819
(You are magnificent, thank you so much for compiling this.)
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>>3732823
its no problem. despite my convictions and disagreements with other Anons, or my frustrations at moments like this, i do care about the game and am happy to help... even if doing that technically works against me, with how you seemed to have been reading the vote outcome. but regardless of what i want, wouldn't be fair to not show the truth, even if its frustrating as hell at times what that ends up being.
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>>3732835
also i apologize if this comes off the wrong way, im really just venting due to exhaustion at this ordeal, more so than poking or prodding any individuals or the outcome. ive been fighting nausea all day on top of such a heated, opinionated, and heavy discussion not entirely being what i expected today.
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>>3732836
(I'm sorry to hear about the nausea, I truly hope you feel better soon. And if it makes you feel any better, this is the last thing I expected to write today, myself.)
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>>3732841
Oh, uh, sorry, then? I thought it made sense for the thread to go this way, after the last Vein ended with a confrontation with Sam and this one introduced Daughter-extraction technology. I suppose we did kind of get sidetracked from the Francine plan and November-upgrading plot points, though. Let's pay a lot of attention to them once we're done here. Get right in on talking to Francine about her plan.
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>>3732863
(Oh, it's no trouble at all, I enjoy writing regardless. I was just thrown for a loop, but that's half the fun of writing this way, in my opinion.)
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"No, you're not." You reply, your voice hard. "You need to have self-awareness to be in control. Sam, if this is how you remember our interactions, then you are delusional. You know why I gave everyone else a chance, but not you? Because when I got the opportunity to actually talk to them, they didn't try to convince me they were an evil serial killer who would destroy everything I cared about! Christ, woman, have you forgotten that part!?"

A field of green beneath a pale blue sky. A tree in a well-kept clearing. Two of you, one with a hand around the other's throat.

"Look at that, Sam." You point, gesturing to the stark memory, one that feels like it was a lifetime ago. "Here we are, our very first conversation. Hell, my very first awareness that you're a separate personality, and you're threatening me. You're not saying any of this business about wanting a second chance to be better, instead you're just playing into all the fears I had about my origins. Is it any wonder that I came away from that with a bad opinion of you? And it didn't actually help when I learned from B'Ni that you were lying, because...what was the point of all that, then? To mess with my head, establish dominance? Sure seemed that way. You gave the impression that you'd do and say anything if it let you have power over me. You're presenting yourself as the victim, but you were trying to victimize me. Of course I didn't want to speak with you ever again."

Sam's just staring at the scene, regret writ large on her wan features.

"...I thought I'd have another chance to take control...to manifest and tell you what was..." She begins, shaking her head to clear her thoughts before she speaks again. "I was talking about B'ni. When I carved those words into the tree. I just...god, you were such an insufferable optimist, I...shit. I fucked up. I could have told you right then and there what Isabelle was, but...I spent what few seconds I had taking it out on you. God, what a fucking waste."

She turns to you as the scene fades to black, leaving both you and her in an endless, dark expanse.

"I hated you...and you hated me too. You still do, I think." She says, her gaze not quite meeting yours. "It's why you haven't reached out, until now, right when you're about to...yeah."

"I'll admit that there was some spite in there. You're right...I hated you, Sam." You say, your surroundings coalescing once more into the facsimile of Sam's old apartment, with the two of you standing on opposite sides of her small table. "Leaving you all alone to stew in your frustration was very satisfying...but I'm not a hypocrite. This hasn't been me never giving you a chance. You had a chance, but you threw it away because you wanted to pick at my fears. You can see that now, and it's exactly what happened with you and Isabelle."

(Continued)
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note of reaction right now
ISABELLA REEE

i shall go back to reading but think yall know where im at
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>>3732940

"You had the opportunity to defuse things, try to fix the situation, but you didn't. You had to have that dominance, play on the other party's insecurities, but instead of just rolling over they struck back at you. You can't place all the blame for this on those you tried to manipulate. That things have gone wrong for you doesn't mean you weren't responsible for them. It's just the natural outcome of your choices, decisions that you made of your own volition. You were always in control."

Her dry throat works to swallow, and you can see it in her eyes when they finally meet yours. She knows she was. She had control, once...and she now knows she wasted it.

"We tend to think of control as deciding our circumstances, refusing to let anything move us against our will. But if we're to truly have control we need to recognize that our decisions are our own. That we have the power to choose, and accept the responsibilities for what results. We need to resist our dark and short-sighted impulses, be better and do better, if we are to get anywhere. That's what I'm trying to do here." You say, spreading your arms wide as you gesture about the space, this echo of a place half-remembered. "I don't want to leave you to rot, Sam. That would be far too cruel. But I can't see how us being in each other's lives won't just make us both unhappy. If you think there's a better option than removing you from me I'm willing to hear it."

She blinks.

"...What?"

"I'm serious. If you think there's a better option, then say so." You reply honestly.

"I...fuck, I don't..." She stutters, eyes frantically searching yours for some sort. "You...you're serious?"

You nod irritably, taking a deep breath as you regard the withered reflection across the table.

"...Can Gina and, uh...Cassandra hear me right now, too?" Your twin asks, and a pair of voices reverb through the room, from everywhere at once.

{Loud and clear}

"Indeed." Cassandra affirms.

Sam swallows hard again, wincing as she stares into your eyes, searching desperately for some hint of honesty, some sign that it's all some terrible trick before you bring the axe down.

"I...a body." She says, finally. "Something to where I can leave, leave so we won't have to see each other again."

"Is that possible?" You ask, not taking your eyes off her.

"Indeed." Cassandra replies, her calm, cheery tone clashing with the stand-off you're having with the woman that shares your face. "If you allow me to crystallize her, then I can transfer her to any number of constructs, flesh or no. Of course, if she were to perish in any of these forms then there would be no coming back, as per Conduit limitations."

{Hey, sideways idea here} Gina interjects, her soothing voice echoing through the space. {So the last time I saw you Sam, you seemed to have a skill tree, yeah? You have a Flesh Artisan Core, Epidermal Rogue?}

"I...maybe? I think so...why?"

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{I'm thinking we can maybe do something like a skill transfer, but just half-ass it} Gina muses aloud. {Basically make like we're transferring Epidermal Rogue to somebody else, but cut the engine halfway through without using a charge of the Engine's respawn ability. Best case, the engine gets confused and Sam gets a fresh body, worst case she's a lump of biomass we can just re-integrate into a crystal or something as a fail-safe}

Sam's eyes go wide, and you see her nod ever so slightly as Gina's voice calls out again, only this time it's for your ears only.

{Actually, worst case is that she'd just fucking explode, so there's that. If she does respawn then it'd get her out of you and into the open, and then you can use your empathic channel to get a clear read on her. Same thing we did with Francine; if she's gonna be a bitch, we just deal with her then and there} Gina replies brusquely, her tone purely business.

[And if she's not?] You ask, and you can practically see the brunette give one of her little half-shrugs.

{Well, then that's up to her. She'd have the ability to grow, so we cross our fingers and hope she doesn't get strong enough to get any ideas} She replies, and then you can tell she's making a face as she finishes; {Or you could try to...I dunno, birth out a swarmling with her inside it? Since she's not really a Dream Daughter it might work...fuck, I have no idea. I'm just throwing stuff at the proverbial wall, here}

[...Gross]

{Gross} Gina agrees as you turn your attentions once more to the wraith that stands mere feet from you across the simple table.

"Well, what do you say?"

Sam's mouth makes a hard line, her brow knit tight as her eyes bore into yours, trying desperately to feel you out in the uncomfortable silence that settles between you both.

"Come on. If you don't say anything, then I'll assume you just..."

"Please, I...please let this be real." She says, finally. You can see it, in her face; it's taking every ounce of willpower she has left to not break, here and now. "I...if you're lying, I...please don't lie. Not now, not..."

You realize now that anything you give her now will be more than she ever expected from you. Perhaps if you'd given her this chance earlier, she'd have been too proud, too furious to accept your offer...but not anymore.

She barely trusted herself to speak, and she's trying not to let herself hold out hope...

...but she hopes, all the same.

>>Crystallize her for now, and install her in a Forge-crafted Swarmling body. It'd grant her autonomy while keeping her relatively weak.

>>Crystallize her and plug her into a machine-body, similar to November's.

>>Use the Sparagmos Engine to separate her skill tree from your own form, giving her a newborn body.

>>Attempt to force her out as a construct, a new type of Swarmling. She'd be tied to you, but she wouldn't be a high threat.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, I am afraid I will have to pause here for the evening. Voting shall remain open for the next thirteen hours, with posting to resume in approximately fourteen, give or take. Thank you all so much for your time, participation, and kindness, and I shall be around for a little longer this evening to address any questions you may have regarding the options presented, or any other comments, concerns, or criticisms you may have. I welcome it all, and I hope you have a restful evening.)
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>>3732993
Thanks, BHOP. I have to go rest myself, so I'll sleep on this update to vote in the morning.
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>>3732978
>Look Sam in the eyes.
>"First, a few ground rules."
>"First. you head away from the cord. i dont care where, how far or what direction. You just simply make it clear and keep it clear you dont intend to be a threat to us or our goals."
>"Second." narrow your eyes at her, "If we ever catch wind that you're causing a ruckus, that you're hurting people who did you know wrong... we will come for you, and there wont be any place you can hide or run that will stop us."
>Wait for her response.
>If she refuses, no hesitation, tell Gina and Cassandra to pull the plug on her.
>If she Agrees, Give her her CHOICE, other than the engine. you refuse to risk losing the Engines charge on her, or damaging the engine in some way, but otherwise she can take her pick and you really wont care. you'll even make the swarmling humanoid, or see if Cassandra cant make an actual human looking one, you really dont care.

id hope this seems reasonable gents.
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>>3732978
>"You saw what happened with Isabelle. We kept trying to give her second chances, third chances, even, but she never took any of them, and she only realized her mistake when it was too late. And she wound up dying miserable and alone when she could have chosen something better. But we still tried, Sam, because everybody can always change their mind and make a different choice."
>"This is your chance. You've seen my story up until now. The choices I've made, the people I've met. I'm not about to yank this away from you. That'd be way too heartless. I want you to know that you are in control, and that you can choose something better than what Isabelle chose for herself, because you can still be happy."

Now to decide how we should give her freedom.

A fully autonomous body would be best, but it would require a use of the forge. Trying to cheat the system and rig the engine would be a gamble, as it could turn her into a meatball or even kill her.

A swarmling body would be interesting, but I don't know how much she'd like it. A construct body would also be neat, but again, she might prefer a flesh-and-blood body. Making her into a swarmling would probably be the least desireable option.

Any thoughts, folks?
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>>3732993
well, its been an interesting day haha. thanks for running BHOP, you did superb as always with the writing.

a few questions/notes.
>So was Sam the opposite of Isabelle on purpose, or just a coincidence that's how it worked out? What I mean is, both had vastly different extremes on the communication issues. Isabelle hid her emotions to ridiculous levels making it hard for us to even see if she needed some support or wanted to talk, but Sam just refused to calm down and not just throw her emotions at us any chance she got, leading to her never even trying to talk to us and making us brush her into a corner. One was too emotionless, the other too emotional.

also, i do apologize, but i saw some things that might help make things clearer in the Relics Doc. Hydras Heart is only T1, so putting the LOCKED next to the rest might help people avoid confusion on what it can currently do. same with Sui Tormentis, which now has up to T3 UNlocked, and Cursas Alas, which now has up to T2 Unlocked. you also put the cicada round with upgrades, instead of the contender rounds section.

also, looking back some wording confused me a bit. did Cassandra actually let us keep the three relics we had her clean of the trapped daughters? does... that mean we can justify using the spine and nail now, and that she gifted us the jaw cannon? or am i misreading that?

also for the Contender, does the Revolver simply overwrite the Derringer, or how does that interaction work?
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>>3733030
as i stated, id like us to put down grounds rules for her.
otherwise, im highly against the engine, but otherwise... let her decide. they all have their disadvantages and advantages, both for us and her, so leave it up to her which she prefers.
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>>3732993
Awesome job as always, BHOP. Looking forward to seeing what happens next, have a great night.
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>>3732993
Thanks for running, BHOP. Sorry we got sidetracked from cyborg things. Having some trouble getting my words in order for what to say to Sam, but I'm glad that we have the chance to.
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>>3733033
(Thank you for your kind words, I greatly appreciate it.)

(To answer your first question;)
(Excellent eye, as always. They both typified two types of extremes, as they were meant to. I'd go further into the nature of their personalities, but doing so may be spoilers for things to come, so I'll leave it at that.)

(Second, please don't feel like you have to apologize for finding ways to clean up the player interface. I cannot tell you how much you've improved the Quest as a whole, so take credit where it's due.)

(Cassandra has indeed left all three Relics with you, and I'll recap all the loot you've acquired after you leave the Disassociated.)

(Revolver trumps Derringer Form as an ammo upgrade, yes.)

>>3733054
>>3733079
(Thank you very much for your kind words, and thank you for participating!)
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>>3733143
thanks for answering.
neat on Sam, nice duality there BHOP.
awesome on the relics, though mechanically im still not entirely sure what the spine actually does. the other question is, who wishes to stab a nail into themselves, and who wishes to have their throat replaced? Rath probably is fine with the nail but, whew, unsure about the Jaw.

I appreciate it, i guess i just feel like im nagging, as i understand how much work this both takes to make and involves to keep it running, so I know having such mistakes pointed out can start to feel disheartening, which is never my intention, so I guess i feel the need to somehow soften the feeling pointing them out might entail.
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>>3732978
>Take Sam's hand with your own as a gesture of reassurance. Look at her in the eyes.
>"This is very real Sam. And I'm not lying. I'm giving you a choice. A choice to choose what form you desire when you walk the earth once more. You will have agency over the body you are given."
>"You saw what happened with Isabelle. We kept trying to give her second chances, third chances, even, but she never took any of them, and she only realized her mistake when it was too late. And she wound up dying miserable and alone when she could have chosen something better. But we still tried, Sam, because everybody can always change their mind and make a different choice at any point in time."
>"And it's not too late with you, Sam. You could always change your mind and choose to be a better person at any point in time."

>"I've discussed with my friends, and we have a few options for you to choose from."

>Manipulate the Dreamworld to show living miniature dioramas of her choices on the table (presented from left to right: A swarmling with a gemstone visibly embedded on construct fresh from the forge, a Machine-Body made in the likeness of Sam glowing with a fiery heat, a newborn Sam in the middle of the Sparagmos engine weak and vulnerable that grows into a full-grown Sam with an ever-shifting visage of skin strong yet battle-scarred, A humanoid Swarmling that walks alongside Shu)

(1/2)
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>>3733193
>>3732978
>"Door #1. We Crystalize your consciousness into a gemstone, and install you into a forge constructed body like a swarmling. You will have full autonomy and control, and will not have to worry about the hunger. However...you'll be relatively weak as a forge construct, you'll be unable to grow, and you'll be susceptible to Neuromancy and the like, think Elder Uzu's puppet Construct."

>"Door #2: We Crystalize your consciousness into a gemstone, and install you into Machine-body forged by the Disassociated Ones. You've seen November through my eyes, how she fights, and the lifestyle she has to live by in a forge body. You'll have a body for your own, and can fend for yourself, and not have to worry about hunger. However, you will become like a ghost in the machine, unable to have the sensation of feeling the wind in your hair, the texture of the ground, any tactile physical sensations you crave from having a biological human body. Your body integrity will not heal nor be modified by itself unless you have the know how and the resources to upgrade it or repair it. And finally your life will be directly tied to the forge core that burns in the machine body. There are only so many forge cores in the world and those cores are prized heavily by many daughters alike If that forge core energy is used up or stolen...you'll return to the dreamless sleep state inside the gemstone."

>"Door #3: We use the Sparagmos Engine to separate your skill tree from my own. It will be very risky. You might die a true death in the process. But if it succeeds you WILL be completely reborn into a body of your own, as fresh and vulnerable as a newborn baby. You will have complete control of yourself and you'll be able to grow and fend for yourself and survive. You will face horrific amalgams not of this world, you will face daughters who may seek to use you as a tool or to fight, kill, and consume you. You might encounter daughters who'll take you into their fold and treat you like family. However, you will have to contend with the stresses of the world, you will face hard choices. You will face the Hunger, you will face the ever present battle for survival. And should you decide to head for the Cord? Me and my family WILL consider you an enemy. All bets, third chances, final chances, they will not be given should we encounter you after you've made the decision to reach for the Cord. Understand?"

(2/3)
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hey bhop . i shall have finished catching up by saturday
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>>3732978
>>3733193
>>3733208

>"Door #4...I'm not sure if it would work myself, but I could attempt to Spawn a Swarmling and have you take control over it, it will create a new type of swarmling for me, and it will give you a degree of autonomy. You'll be able to fight, have a body of your own, roam freely, and never have to worry about the hunger, because your life will be tied to mine. It's possible that even if the body you inhabit dies, I'll be able to recreate it, and let you inhabit that body again. It could work but it could also not work because I have no idea if it will actually work. But if it does work, you'll be like a dream daughter, except you'll be able to have a body you can control, you can be with my family and fight alongside them, but if the body you inhabit dies with your consciousness inside it...I don't know what will happen. I don't have the proper ability to manifest you again since that ability falls within the domain of phantasmal conduits. I'll have to consume a phantasmal conduit ability in order to make that type of construct effectively in order for you to have it, and as of right now, I don't have that ability."

>"Or Door #5: You can always wait for a better opportunity. I'm sure there's different methods of resurrection out there. And in the meantime, hang out with Johanna, Holly, and Uzu, and make friends with them instead of skulking about. Watch through my eyes and chatter in the peanut gallery. Making a new body can always wait. A better opportunity might come in the future. Sure you'll still be a dream daughter, but you won't have to contend with the hunger until you're ready to be reborn."

>"But remember this. Whatever choice you made, it will be the future you chose, it will be path you chose to walk yourself. Do not blame it on the circumstances when you had the power to choose a different option in the first place."

>"Sam. You. Are. In. Control."
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>>3732978
>>3733193
>>3733208
>>3733219
Vetoing this vote due to it giving Sam the Engine as an option. I refuse to even potentially risk it or the point in it on her.

also i really don't think we need that long winded an explanation, in matter of fact i think she literally heard all of them in the last update, she doesn't need to be reminded of them.
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>>3733223
The option to birth Sam into a Swarmling was spoken on the private channel so Sam didn't get to hear it.

>>3733143 Unless Bhop can confirm that Sam heard Shu and Gina talking about the option to put Sam into one of Shu's Swarmling Constructs.

And I wanted to lay out the options before her. Withholding information would do her a massive disservice because that just makes us a dick and she'll put the blame on us for withholding it. That's why I've taken the time to type out everything. We show her everything, and whatever choice she makes it will be all on her shoulders.

Besides, I did add in the addendum that should she choose to participate in the race to the Cord, Shu and Family will consider her an enemy with all bets and holding back off the table.
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>>3733216
(Excellent, I'm glad you've been able to find the time to catch up. In fact, that reminds me that I need to catch up on some of the fics that were posted in the last Vein.)

>>3733253
(Sam didn't hear Gina tell Shu about the construct possibility, you're quite right. May I borrow some of what you've written when I make the next post? I really liked a lot of the imagery and the wrap-up, and even if I truncate the explanation for space what you've written is too good to pass up.)
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>>3733253
still dont think it needs to be that long winded, and still refuse to let her use the engine. she hasn't earned putting such a thing even a modicum at risk, hell i dont even want her in our home either, much rather she take an option that can be done here. and i dont care, we can set grounds rules like not going for the cord without giving that option.

honestly as much as i think the ground rules i posted up top are of vital importance, ill throw away any other vote of mine to block her use of the engine. thats all i really care about here massively.
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>>3733270
don't you mean the Ischemia intermission? it doesn't really count as a vein...unless you turn it into a session of blood letting...
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>>3733320
(Ha, you're quite right.)
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>>3733270
Also, by all means, anything you find well written, incorporate it. that's what Anon Write-ins are for.
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>>3733270
hope the stories are enjoyable BHOP!
your reveal on just how well known and far flung Shus actions have become certainly gives me some ideas for the Pepperbox Gang.

but anyways, i need to get some sleep. still think the ground rules are a good idea, and still vehemently against the incredibly bonkers idea of letting her use the engine, which may just require sacrificing my vote to try and stop, but we shall see.
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>>3733275
>opts to give Sam a choice:
>"You can choose any of these options...except this one."
wow. hypocrite much? Gina even mentioned to Sam the option of the Sparagmos engine aloud.
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>>3732978

>Write in
>"You have a couple choices now and a few riules i want to lay down before you take this choice. First. If you become autonomous you head away form the cord never towards it and if that means you stnding on the opposite side of the world and everywehere you go willl brin gyou closer to the cord then so be it. Second. If you ever hurt cause a ruckus initiated by you be it by words or action we will find and we. Will. End. Your. Second. Chance"
>try and relax a bit

>"1. we put you in a forgecrafted body of a swarmling."
>Pros: no hunger can fly
>cons: cant grow, susceptible to many neuromnacers, could get picked off as an Amalgam and devoured

>"2. You get a forgebody like the DOs though this onbe comes with a bit of a catch. "
> To cassandra "you leave and you will probbaly take her with you yes? Can you keeep watch over her"
>Pros: no hunger, pretty powerful, some room to grow
>Cons: you life with the DOs or with a highly prized resource as your heart

>"3. You become a swarmling type that you can control."
>Pros: you have some autonomy, dont have to fear death until i die, no hunger
>Cons: tied to me and my goodwill, it wont be anything to large and the actions you can take are limited

>"4. You wait and i will see if i can knock down the wall seperating you from the other dreamdaughters. And depending on what happens next i might reconsider what i am about to tell you"

>Lean forward a bit ominously loom over her
>"You are in Control of what path you want to tred."

>"If you fuck up you will die. That is the reality we live in now. I am not trying to scare you but take that into consideration. And while the Sparagmos Engine might be usable. I wont use it because the risk of something completely irreplacable being lost is not worth it. And even if the Engine would work you would be a newborn with my face. The face off someone whith a massive bounty on their head from a lot of different people. Including the Admin of the crucible. This is a s much for your safety as it is mine and my familys"
A coupel rules and giving her a short breakdown of what options I am willing to let her take as well as an explanation on why i dont want her to use the engine

The Engine is too valuable. And Sam is not worth it becoming damaged or exploding in my opinion as well but Sam soes not need to know that. The reasons i listed are than enough already for me to not consider it an otion
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>>3733693
I like the explanation of why we're refraining from the use of the Sparagmos engine. And I might support that, but we should let Sam consider the additional risk of being Shu's living doppleganger. Sam and Shu wear the same face, and many could mistake her for a mistaken identity.

But I also think your explanation is a bit lacking in why we're withholding the Sparagmos engine option.
>"I understand your eagerness to get a new body back and that the Sparagmos Engine option sounds the most appealing to you, but please consider the following. My name and face is now known all over the planet. I just crippled the equivalent of God in this death world and I now have a huge target painted on my back. On top of that, We share the same look, build, mannerisms, the list could go on. And If I use the engine and bring you back, you'll be a very vulnerable newborn daughter who wears the face of the world's most wanted, wanted by the admin of the Crucible itself. Are you sure you can handle the social pressure? The Engine itself is a precious resource and to risk breaking it by half-assing the revival function. The cost simply isn't worth it.. This is as much for your own good as it is for me and my family. Not until we find some other way to visibly distinguish ourselves as separate personalities, and find a way for you to be able to survive on your own when we bring you a new body."

Also, the ground rules might be a bit too harsh and limiting. How about this:
>"If we ever catch wind of you deciding to climb the Cord, all bets are off. My family and I will consider you an enemy to be put down. There are too many ambitious daughters who are caught up in the lie of the Cake promised at the top of the Cord."
It's less harsh than forcing Sam to always move away from the Cord.
>"Behave yourself. I understand the need for self-defense considering Earth is now a deathworld, but if we catch word of you initiating the conflict as the aggressor. All bets are off. Any Ruckus you cause, any daughter we find as a victim of your manipulative actions, same deal."

It gives Sam more leeway as to the range of social options. But it will force her to consider the defensive option always. But the following conditions might be hampered if Sam decides to become one of Shu's Construct Swarmling types so we should also consider that.
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>>3733270
Will you post the response to those fics at the end of the vein it back in the Ischemia?

Definitely looking forward to your response either way I am halfway through commiting chapter 4 into writing and will post once the Vein bled out
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>>3733370
>>3733780
no, its not hypocrisy, its having legitimate concerns for a valuable piece of technology and having reasonable limits on what she has actually earned.

what is hypocrisy, you hypocrite, is literally ignoring the fact ive said some of the exact same reasons as
>>3733693
for why i do not wish to give it to her yet she he says it, you listen. just because you clearly dislike me doesn't mean anything i say doesn't have merit, nor that you can have blatant double standards and not be called out for it, you asshat.
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>>3733865
you also refuse to acknowledge anything i mention about setting ground rules, but the minute someone else brings up the same idea, you're all for discussing it. say what you will about me, but at least ive always responded and at least had the discussion with someone, regardless of our differences.
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>>3733865
That was not something directed at me was it? I don't think our interactions have been that hostile, have they?

I am unsure since I am not a native speaker. Were you using the write in as an example of what you and I said? To make the point that you and I hsve the same concerns when it comes to the engine?
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>>3733883
no, the top two in my post were the only and correct person to be linked here. everyone else has been fine and dandy. literally every single other person.
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>>3733883
It was not directed at you. >>3733870 was calling me out for being an ass and not reading things through.
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>>3733887
>>3733890
Oh shit sorry I completely missed that response while writing on my phone. Sorry if I stirred things up and ruffled a few feathers.

>>3733780
They are ground rules they can be modified a bit though I won't be able to it all that much since I will spend most my day in a meeting at work and then with a friend if mine

The Readons I think I made clear as day. She will be next to defenseless if anyone decides to fuck with her. That should be enough with what knowledge she has that the machine is probably her worst option if she wants to survive

Also if Sam starts to climb the cord we can't really stop her. Once she is inside wen can't really do anything but go in which makes it very difficult to get out after

I would rather her being as far away as possible. I would want her at least on a different continent like Europe or better yet with the DOs in Space.
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>>3733890
look, im fine if you dislike me, even hate me. awesome, more power to you. we can disagree, even heatedly. im fine with that, hell, i think it helps alot to get both sides of something properly talked out, even if in the end no compromise is made, it can still help others come to one. Im not, however, simply going to sit back and be called a hypocrite and not defend myself, but certainly not for reasons you then hypocritically are ok with and willing to talk over with someone else.

no one here has an less or more of a right to be here than anyone else. we're not going to like every other player, or agree on everything. but it does no one any good to outright ignore or shunt someone off, all it does is create a mess for everyone, especially those not involved the scuffle and not wanting any part of it. you disagree, you disagree. but you discuss it, and you dont flip flop just because of who you're talking to to jab at one person specifically. its an open forum, anyone can and will be here. besides outright obvious trolls, please, we dont have to like eachother, but it literally will not work if anyone just tries to hold two different people two two different rules for interacting with them. Ideas are what should matter in the end, not the person.
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>>3733693
i do agree we can make the rules more reasonable, like i did here
>>3733008

>>3733693
and while i do agree her not having our face is another good reason to not use the Engine on her, for both ours and hers case, i dont think we have any reason to withhold or lie to her about our other reasoning for not using it on her. she might not be happy with it... but she already doesn't like us, and honestly? we're giving her a choice, but not one we have to give, and she needs to remember that.

>>3733908
its less about if we can 'stop her' and more a trust thing. we're trusting her alot to even give her this chance, we're telling her if she doesn't want to be our public enemy, dont abuse this trust or chance.
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>>3733921
Sure make it more reasonable I had to kind of throw it together in less than 10 minutes before I left for work

Trust us nice to check that the trust not abused is better goes a saying(Vertrauen ist gut Kontrolle ist besser als the saying goes in germany)

Maybe it's a cultural thing but I don't want Sam even in the same continent. Maybe some change to make sure she has to get off the continent
I will try myself at a rewrite

>Write in
>"You have a couple choices now and a few riules i want to lay down before you take this choice. First. If you become autonomous you head away form the cord. I woul like you to leave the continent if at all possible. Second. If you ever hurt someone innocent or initiate a ruckus be it by words or action we will find you and we. Will. End. Your. Second. Chance. As long as you keep to these rules we don't have to be enemys"
>try and relax a bit

>"1. we put you in a forgecrafted body of a swarmling."
>Pros: no hunger can fly
>cons: cant grow, susceptible to many neuromnacers, could get picked off as an Amalgam and devoured

>"2. You get a forgebody like the DOs though this onbe comes with a bit of a catch. "
> To cassandra "you leave and you will probbaly take her with you yes? Can you keeep watch over her"
>Pros: no hunger, pretty powerful, some room to grow
>Cons: you life with the DOs or with a highly prized resource as your heart

>"3. You become a swarmling type that you can control."
>Pros: you have some autonomy, dont have to fear death until i die, no hunger
>Cons: tied to me and my goodwill, it wont be anything to large and the actions you can take are limited

>"4. You wait and i will see if i can knock down the wall seperating you from the other dreamdaughters. And depending on what happens next i might reconsider what i am about to tell you"

>Lean forward a bit ominously loom over her
>"You are in Control of what path you want to tred."

>"If you fuck up you will die. That is the reality we live in now. I am not trying to scare you but take that into consideration. And while the Sparagmos Engine might be usable. I wont use it because the risk of something completely irreplacable being lost is not worth it. And even if the Engine would work you would be a newborn with my face. The face off someone whith a massive bounty on their head from a lot of different people. Including the Admin of the crucible. This is as much for your safety as it is mine and my familys.

>We are giving you a lot of trust in advance. Do not abused it or you will regret it
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>>3733908
It's fine. some of those feathers would be ruffled regardless.
>>3733913
You...it's like talking to a colder more in-control version of myself in a mirror. Okay. I can agree to that. We both rub each other the wrong way sometimes and knowing that you acknowledge that somehow...makes me relieved?...I guess?

Regardless. I'll write this post down as a reminder of our talks. otherwise, goldfish memory might kick in between veins and we'd be at each other's throats again having this very same discussion in a different variation.


>>3733008
Since we're here, I'll give my honest feedback. My first impression was: "this is too strict, and somehow cold". And I was coming onto an emotional high after an exhausting day at work.

Sorry about seemingly ignoring or refusing to acknowledge your post. I just wasn't sure if it was the right approach since it came in at too harsh of an angle but couldn't formulate an appropriate response.

But after thinking about it, I'm slowly warming up to the general idea of laying down a few ground rules that you've placed down.

>>3733942
>>3733921
What I do agree on is laying down everything on the table, giving Sam the whole gamut of options and the pros/cons it entails. I'm hesitant on withholding the Engine option since it feels like a hypocritical move to withhold an option that Sam might have, since Shu is going forward with giving Sam the choice. But as long as we explain all the risks and the reasoning behind what we present, I'll be fine with the options presented.

What I don't agree initially was the aggressive laying out on the ground rules first thing in our response to Sam's question of "Is this real?" Because Sam right now is in disbelief, she's trying to do the analogue of pinching herself to see if it's a dream and yet here we are giving Sam a second chance at living. The rules I don't mind, the way it was presented I disagree on.

It's a big leap in trust and chance. We're putting the ball in Sam's court. She has control of the choices she makes. I just have to wonder what exactly is going on inside her head, her emotional state and spectrum of thought from the first bad impression of trying to Scare Shu, the 2 weeks of languishing in Shu's mind, then Shu changing her mind in to give her an 'out' when she initially came to visit her for execution.

But since we're all here in the dead of night, lets formulate a good response.
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>>3733942
my only issue with asking her to leave the continent, is theres a line between reasonable limits on what we allow her to do, and whats reasonable to assume she herself an do. we barely were able to cross a river, and not safely either. asking her to find a way to cross an ocean, while obviously not impossible, both OOC and IC we have no reason not to assume its not stupidly difficult from what information we even have. we, as a team as a family, could have difficulty pull it off. asking her to do it alone, regardless of what body she takes, might be asking for quite alot out of her, and might even be impossible for her to do with certain bodies or without an incredibly long amount of time and prep work, which could involve her traveling the continent to find the right parts or help.

Its not that i dont understand or agree with your concerns or reasoning, more even she deserves us to actually place reasonable limits and rules for her to follow, and im not sure fleeing to another continent is one of those.
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>>3733952
>>3733962
We could ask her to never cross the river of Tears to never step over it's length and see it and the distance it is from the Cord as a final barrier she is not to cross.

But you guys are fine with the condition that she can not be the agressor in a conflict? Just asking for confirmation or denial
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>>3733952
Well I. At work but the meeting I am in us pretty open and its no problem for me to use my phone but I can't do extensive rewrites
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>>3733962
>>3733942
How about this as a reasonable guideline:
>"You are not to participate in Climbing the Cord. Regardless of the Choice you make when Mother comes knocking in your head urging you to climb it. You are not to participate. You know as well as I do that the Cake on the top of the Cord is a Trap, and a lie. If you were to make the decision in going for the Cord and Climbing it and our family somehow sees you again heading west towards the cord with the intent to Climb it, we will consider you an enemy to be put down."
having her automatically moving away from the Cord seems to...arbitrary. Just prevent her from trying to participate in the Cord Climbing game and she'll be a non-issue.

>"Second, I frankly do not care about what you do once you become fully independent. But if you cause or are involved with something that does my family harm, All bets are off."
We can't reasonably Mother Sam, the whole "I will hunt you down if I hear that you fuck up or hurt some innocent daughter as the aggressor" rule is too unreasonable. It doesn't reinforce the mental mantra we want to remind Sam that "You are in Control, everything is the logical natural result of the choices you make, if you fuck up, you own that fuck up." Limit the off-limits zone to hurting Sam's immediate family and we'll be good. Otherwise, trying to hunt Sam down because of a hearsay that Sam accidentally made a daughter cry is too time consuming and unreasonable when we have bigger fish to fry.
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>>3733952
>You...it's like talking to a colder more in-control version of myself in a mirror.
i have no idea which direction to take this as, heh.

>The rules I don't mind, the way it was presented I disagree on.
to be fair, i put down my rules expecting and hoping others would pick them up, and integrate them into an actual write-up along with dialogue. which happened, but with said Anon then kinda taking them in a harsher direction than necessary with small changes. obviously, given that, i still think my initial ones work just fine, but when/how we present them to her, im open to seeing your suggestion.

i guess im also not against actually discussing each option with her, its just reading through both you and the other Anons, i dunno it feels like an exhausting mouthful to read/say. i get and understand making sure she, well, understands her options and what they entail, but i dunno, i guess im just wonder if it cant be done written up in a different way or something.

>I'm hesitant on withholding the Engine option since it feels like a hypocritical move to withhold an option that Sam might have, since Shu is going forward with giving Sam the choice. But as long as we explain all the risks and the reasoning behind what we present, I'll be fine with the options presented.
i really just dont think thats true. i agree if we withhold it we should give our reasons, but i think those reasons in and of themselves make sense and are fair. its not hypocrisy to think theres a line between giving her a choice, and thinking she hasn't earned us putting valuable commodities at risk over her. theres a difference between her earning a second chance and her own form of freedom, and her earning a form of freedom we have withheld from people who have literally saved our lives on more than one occasion. we can justify withholding that option, but we can also not lie to her about why. hell, im up for hearing what you would compromise on telling her, but honestly? we could literally justify it with something like "Holly has saved my ass and been there for me since nearly the beginning. but the Engines so valuable, well, you dont see her standing with us, now do you? you deserve a seconds chance Sam, but not to a level we haven't given those who have proven themselves to use time and time again haven't even yet earned."

>>3733969
eh... well that cuts off half the country for her if she cant cross the river. which... ok, but still.
i think no ones had any real complaints about the second rule, and genuinely if you got backhand read i think everyone agrees she cant be the aggressor yeah, or at least, not without true justification. id hate for her to not save an innocent life due to our rules, as it was.
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>>3733975
well, more or less for the first one what i was implying, so sure. maybe my wording needs help, but the only extra caveat on mine was i was trying ot hint she should keep her distance from it, not that if she even takes a step towards it shes dead.

i disagree with the second one. i dont think its too unreasonable, and we also are now responsible for her and her actions to a minor degree. we let her out on the world, the least we can do is bring her down if she starts to hurt innocents. that, and it fits our characterization to a T. we take down villains. she becomes one, shes going down. it also instills a sense into her that if shes tricking us, shes not going to get away with it just because she ran off and thought we wouldn't come after her. we will. it just doesn't fit with our character at all to let her get away with hurting others, we have never not gone out of our way to help others outside our family, and we ourselves will have released this specific villain upon the fleshscape, if she does so becomes one. i think its very fair to say we would have some direct responsibility to stop her if she goes bad. that, and again, reasonable limits. theres a line between giving her a choice and freedom, and not expecting her to actually be trustworthy with it. and frankly it would be selfish, and to me, hypocritical, not to be willing to stop her if we hear shes just started slaughtering people.

here we are, having constantly gone out of our way to help others, and even face down others for doing the opposite, then the girl we release, knowing theres risk she could be bad, does exactly that, and can only do it because we gave her the chance, yet we just shrug and say 'not our problem'? thats a very big dick move i think.
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>>3733982
>It cuts off half the country for her.
Sure it does but the land further west would just swallow her anyway. And until she is strong enough to attempt a crossing we will have further extended our lead in power. It's mostly an arbitrary border she can't miss and claim it was an accident

>Can't save an innocent life because of our rules.
She could intervene and would not be the agressor since she would be defending someone
>>3733975
Seems reasonable except the second part. We need to make sure she understands that she is not beneath our notice if she does things like she tried to pull with Shu. Especially if she starts killing and hurting people.

People like her need a tight set of rules and Damocles Sword above their heads to stay in line
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>>3733982
>Take Sam's hand with your own as a gesture of reassurance. Look at her in the eyes.
>"This is very real Sam. And I'm not lying. I'm giving you a choice. A choice to choose what form you desire when you walk the earth once more. You will have agency over the body you are given."
>"You saw what happened with Isabelle. We kept trying to give her second chances, third chances, even, but she never took any of them, and she only realized her mistake when it was too late. And she wound up dying miserable and alone when she could have chosen something better. But we still tried, Sam, because everybody can always change their mind and make a different choice at any point in time."
>"And it's not too late with you, Sam. You could always change your mind and choose to be a better person at any point in time."

>"I've discussed with my friends, and we have a few options for you to choose from."

>Present the choices

>"1. we put you in a forgecrafted body of a swarmling."
>Pros: no hunger, can fly
>cons: cant grow, susceptible to many neuromnacers, could get picked off as an Amalgam and devoured

>"2. You get a forge body like the DOs though this one comes with a bit of a catch. "
> To Cassandra "you leave and you will probably take her with you yes? Can you keep watch over her"
>Pros: no hunger, pretty powerful, some room to grow
>Cons: you're a ghost in the shell of a machine powered by a prized molten heart which many daughters seek to pilfer. Your body might break down without proper maintenance.

>"3. You become a swarmling type that you can control."
>Pros: you have some autonomy, don't have to fear death until i die, no hunger
>Cons: tied to me and my goodwill, it wont be anything to large and the actions you can take are limited.

>"4. You can wait for a better opportunity. I'll see what I can do to free you from the mental isolation, In the meantime clean yourself up. Make yourself some friends, gain new perspectives, and make sure you present yourself as a distinctively different person than myself. And hopefully in the future, we'll trust you enough be able to resurrect you in a better body in safer conditions."

1/2
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>>3733991
>>3733988
How's this for a re-write? part one of the response is here >>3734011

>"I understand your eagerness to get a new body back and that the Sparagmos Engine option sounds the most appealing to you, and I know you're frustrated that I'm withholding that option but please consider the following. You currently share my face and voice. And I have just become the World's Most Wanted on the planet. The Engine is too precious of a resource to risk. And even then? You'll be a newborn daughter, weak and vulnerable, wearing the same face as me with the same gigantic target painted on your very back. It's for your own safety and well being as it is for me and my family's safety. If you have the patience to wait, we might find that golden opportunity to fully resurrect you. But as of right now? We only have one engine that has one charge of revival left in it. It's too precious of a resource to use right now."

>"That said. I would like to lay down some ground rules for you Sam, should you decide to choose one of the options and resurrect now other than waiting for a later time."
>Hold up a finger: "One, You are not to participate in Climbing the Cord. If you were to make the decision in going for the Cord and Climbing it and our family somehow sees you again heading west towards the cord with the intent to Climb it, we will consider you an enemy to be put down."
>Hold up a second finger: "Two, Self-defense is understandable, if you were fighting to protect someone, I can also understand that as well. But if I hear any ruckus you cause that implicates you as an aggressor without proper justification, my family and I will come for you."

>"But remember this. Whatever choice you made, it will be the future you chose, it will be path you chose to walk yourself. Do not blame it on the circumstances when you had the power to choose a different option in the first place."

>"Sam. You. Are. In. Control."
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>>3734011
>>3734014
>>3732978
>>3733008
yeah i guess i can support this.

all i can think to say though is, didn't Cassandra imply she might be able to make her a humanoid flesh construct body? just that it would have major and similar limitations too?

also im unsure she would have to go with the DOs. theres risk in not, but November isnt going either, and i think its been implied theres a few other randoms out there not going too.
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>>3732978

Changed ID again since our WLAN at work just died

Amending my vote from>>3733693
To support>>3734011
And>>3734014
Instead

>>3734020
I think the DOs are probably her best bet to regain a humanoid form. She does not have stay with them if she does not want to

I have to admit that I just want her as far as possible from us and we'll space is probably as as far as she can go
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>>3734020
I think she could but given the fact that she opted for the Disassociated Flesh to Metal conversion means what little biomass she has remaining she needs to actually live and survive. She can't really spare anymore bio-mass towards constructing a manifested flesh body. also it's 4 am in the morning. I need sleep.
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>>3734034
Sweet dreams Anon
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>>3734034
true, but never hurts to see i guess. technically we're giving her the option, so maybe she still has a spark of creativity to dish out for a custom order... so long as its more cosmetic or quality of life stuff, over powerlevel stuff, id be fine with that.

night Anon.
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>>3734020
As for the risk of not going with the DOs...... She won't have a Francine to keep her running and upgrade her. So she will be limited to upgrades via Forgecore swap and all repairs. Maybe she could find her own Francine while she travels

And any constructs she would be implanted in would need to be crafted already as Cassandra said
>If you allow me to crystallize her, then I can transfer her to any number of constructs, flesh or no. Of course, if she were to perish in any of these forms then there would be no coming back, as per Conduit limitations.
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>>3732978
I'm awake now. After reading the discussion, I'll support >>3734011 and >>3734014
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Ah, that was a nice sleep, what did I miss? Looks like the consensus is "give her the choice, lay out the costs and benefits of each one, try to discourage her from using the Engine". Alright, nice. I mostly agree with all that, though I'd like to give my own entry. Not trying to countermand the other write-in, it's good, just want to get my own words in there, too. Elaborate a bit more on Sam's options, as well.

>>3732978
>"It's real, Sam. I'm not going to offer just to retract it. But you've got a choice to make now. First one of your new life, and it's a big one. I want you to think about what you want to do with your life after this, because we have a number of options and each have their own costs and benefits."
>"The simplest solution is for me to just give you control over a swarmling. Let you pilot it from within me, be able to interact with things that way. It's the safest option for you, doesn't require any risky procedures and it should require killing me to end you permanently. But you wouldn't have any real independence from me, and your body would be inhuman in appearance. It does have the benefit of being the most reversible solution, though, it could work as a trial period if you're uncertain about these other possibilities."
>"Second option is for us to extract you and install you in a Forge-built body. You'd have independence, and we could probably make your new body look human, but you'd also be static in your capabilities. That's not terrible if you have a safe community, but I don't know of many of those anymore. You might be able to upgrade yourself with access to a Forge, but again you'd need assistance from others since you'd be unable to produce aspected biomass of your own. It's better than being "
>"Of course, there is one safe community I do know of: Here. Option three is that we extract you and build you a mechanical body, let you live with the Disassociated. I don't know if they'd bring you to space, I'm not clear on what the mass limits of their ship is. They might only be able to bring essential personnel. Maybe they could bring you as a crystal and build a body later, though. Cassandra, can you weigh in? Regardless, there's also a group of cyborgs staying here on Earth, you could live with them. Safety, access to maintenance and repair facilities, it's not a bad plan. Downside is that you would be a robot. Dependent on repairs instead of self-healing, probably have diminished sensory integration, and maybe some body dysphoria from a non-biological form. But most of the cyborgs I've met seem satisfied with it, so maybe it won't be so bad."

>cont.
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>>3734228
>"Fourth is the Sparagmos Engine plan, but I am very hesitant to use that. I'm really just bringing it up for the sake of being complete. We're talking about tricking a very complicated piece of machinery into doing something it's not meant to. What if it scrambles your brain? I don't want you to die that way, Sam, not when we're doing this precisely to keep you from your brain being scrambled. On the more selfish end, what if it scrambles my brain? What if it breaks, and we can never use it again? What if it fails completely, and self-destructs like the Corrupted Engine under Dorian's house and kills my whole family? I don't like these risks, Sam. Let's not do it."
>"And the final option is that we leave it for later. I won't just forget you, we'll fix whatever is keeping you from interacting with the rest of the Dream Daughters so you aren't completely isolated. Probably should do that if we go for the swarmling solution, too. But we'd leave you in the dreamscape for now, and if we find a better solution than these ones we'd use it. And, with the exception of the robot body, there's nothing that says we can't use one of these other options later if you get tired of waiting."

>"That said, whatever we do, I expect you to behave, you hear? I want to help you, Sam, but I'm also still dealing with all that fear and suspicion I have for you. So prove me wrong for feeling that way. Don't start trouble, don't hurt anyone you don't have to, deal with people honestly and try to have real relationships instead of manipulating them. I don't need you to be perfect, but you have to try."
>"And whatever you do, don't even think about climbing the Cord. You should know by now that I can't allow that."

>"Alright. There are your options, Sam. You are in control. Now, what do you want to do with it?"
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>>3734228
>>3734231
the consensus is actually to not offer her the engine at all.

i still think both write-ins too heavily try to force her to stay with the DOs if she chooses the metal body. i dont think thats actually necessary or should be worded as if she cant go off on her own if she would like.
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>>3734238
I wasn't so much trying to offer it as explain why it's a bad idea. I can try to reword it.

And you maybe have a point about the Disassociated, but going off on her own in a body that she can't repair is not a good idea. I think we have an obligation to at least point out that if she did go fullmetal, she'd need to have someone who can maintain the body. She won't be like November where there are still biological bits in there to repair the abiological bits.
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>>3734241
actually it doesn't work like that for November either. without a forge to repair herself with, November is fucked long term, as she can only repair her actual health pool, not any physical damage. which may sound odd, and it is, but thats what BHOP said earlier. without a forge if she gets a bad gash or loses a limb, shes fucked, tank or no tank, unless she gets to a forge to remake/repair it. id imagine Sams body would work similarly, and its not the exact same, but id still say id be amiss of us to try and unfairly condemn that option to basically imprison her to a location or group when its simply not the case, and surviving on your own can be done without their maintenance.
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Okay, modifications.

>>3734228
For the cybernetic option:
>"Next is that we could give you a cybernetic body, like the Disassociated use. Potentially very strong and therefore safe, without any of the needs of a biological body. Downside is that in addition to whatever psychological issues you'd have integrating with such an alien body, you'd need to keep it maintained and repaired. That's difficult to do on your own, though not impossible. An alternative would be to live with the Disassociated, whether the group staying behind on Earth or even the spacefarers if they have the lift to bring along non-essential personnel. Cassandra, can you weigh in on that? But, of course, that might not be enough independence for you."

>>3734231
On the Engine

>"The Sparagmos Engine is a potential possibility, like Gina said, but I would actually advocate against it. Trying to trick a complicated piece of alien machinery that we don't really understand into performing a function it's not intended to sounds like it has risks I'm not willing to accept. What if it scrambles your brain? That would defeat the point of trying to rescue your mind from decaying. On the more selfish side, what if it scrambles my brain in the process of extracting you? What if the Engine breaks, and we can never use it again? What if it enters a complete failure mode and self-destructs like the Corrupted Engine under Dorian's house, killing my entire family? It's too risky, Sam."

>>3734247
Yeah, she needs a Forge to repair major damage, but she's at least capable of self-maintence for basic wear and tear. I don't know if Sam would be, in a completely mechanical body and lacking the experience with machinery that November has.
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>>3734258
Actually, wait, add one more line to the cybernetic option bit, at the end.

>"Plus, it's another big decision you'd have to make, I wouldn't blame you for not wanting to compound the important choices you're making here."
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>>3734258
well, the lack of experience does matter, but id imagine they have made some advancements in tech since they made November, or at least i seem to remember it being implied that was the case. we would have to see, but perhaps self-repair isnt as big an issue anymore.
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(Writing now, Gentlemen.)
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You step forwards, the table between you dissolving into nothingness as you cross the gap to Sam. Your eyes meet hers, and to your surprise she allows your fingers to graze the back of her hand as you gingerly take it in yours.

"This is very real Sam, and I'm not lying.” You begin, steadily holding her gaze with your own. “I'm giving you a choice. A choice to choose what form you desire when you walk the earth once more. You will have agency over the body you are given."

You continue to speak your decision aloud, watching Sam’s features shift from denial to sheer awe.

"You saw what happened with Isabelle. We kept trying to give her second chances, third chances, even, but she never took any of them, and she only realized her mistake when it was too late. And she wound up dying miserable and alone when she could have chosen something better. But we still tried, Sam, because everybody can always change their mind and make a different choice at any point in time." You continue earnestly, a mirage of emerald light glistening through the bathroom windowpane. "And it's not too late with you, Sam. You could always change your mind and choose to be a better person at any point in time."

"So.” Letting go of her hand, you step back. “I've discussed with my friends, and we have a few options for you to choose from. Gina? If you’d be so kind.”

A flicker of amethyst flares at Sam’s temples, and she winces when a distillation of the options available to her flood into her mind, with one key exception.

"I understand your eagerness to get a new body back and that the Sparagmos Engine option sounds the most appealing to you, and I know you're frustrated that I'm withholding that option but please consider the following; if what Cassandra said is true…”

“Oh, it is, Dear.” The other Daughter chimes in.

“…Cool. So the fact is I’m going to have a lot of people coming after me soon, and using the engine to give you a body that starts fresh and shares my face? I think you can tell that’s a risky move if you plan to live long enough to have choices to make.”

“I…yeah. Yeah, that…” She trails off, swallowing hard, still struggling to comprehend the full extent of what you’re offering her.

"That said, if you choose to resurrect then there are two ground rules.” Comes your caveat, and you hold up your index and middle fingers, wiggling the first one as you law down the law. "One, you are not to participate in climbing the Cord. We see you heading West to climb the Cord, we come for you. Plain. Simple."
You wiggle the second finger as Sam’s eyes bore into your soul.

"Two, Self-defense and protecting others is understandable, but if I hear any ruckus that implicates you as an aggressor without proper justification, we come for you. Are we clear?"

The words are barely out of your mouth before she’s nodding so rapidly you think she might hurt herself.

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"Alright, but remember this. Whatever choice you made, it will be the future you chose, it will be path you chose to walk yourself. Do not blame it on the circumstances when you had the power to choose a different option in the first place."

"Sam.” You finish, placing a hand on her shoulder. “You. Are. In. Control."

She’s shaking, as she speaks.

“Machine. Like Rath’s aunt, out there. I want a machine body.” Sam replies, and you nod before calling out to the void.

“Cassandra?”

“Perfectly doable, dears.” The Daughter replies sweetly. “I’ll just pop Sam into a crystal, we merge it with a new body, and she’s good to go. I even have a model in mind, Francine can lead you to the lab where we can take care of everything.”

“Alright…so, what do you say, Sam?” You ask, and she’s quiet for a long, tense moment before she speaks, her voice barely above a whisper.

“…okay.” Comes her soft reply, her gaze averted from yours.

With that, the space around you brightens as aquamarine and amethyst light floods the space, the high-pitched crescendo of your return to the waking world almost drowning out Sam’s last words to you before your eyes fly open to reality.

“I’m trusting you, Shu.”

Gina helps you to your feet, your lungs drawing in a breath of stale air. You realize your hands are clutched tight around a spherical stone, a translucent crystal that’s almost see-through, almost a mirror…but not quite both. Blinking at your reflection, Gina gives your arm a squeeze, smiling at you through her bangs. Now fully awake you sense a pair of figures behind you, and you turn to see Francine, wide-eyed holding a flat, rectangular box, while Rath stands at her side, slack jawed as she stares from the crystal in your hands and then back to you.

“Yo, uh…what the absolute FUCK did I miss?” Rath demands, and you can’t help but chuckle.

“Sam.” Comes your weary answer, holding the orb aloft. “Had a chat, got her out, and now we’re going to give her a machine body, with some conditions. Francine?”

The Doctor stiffens, still utterly confused at how things took such a turn within the fifteen minutes she was away. “Ah, yes?”

“Cassandra said you could get us a body for Sam, and do a tune-up on November? I think we’re just about ready, if you are.” You finish as Rath idles up to you, and Francine just nods awkwardly. “Also…Rath, you alright? I thought you went shooti…”

“Yeah, I’m cool. Let’s go.” She hastily replies, jerking a thumb towards the elevators.

You imagine you have a long walk ahead of you, so you might use this chance to speak with one or more of your allies.

>>Talk to Francine. You’d like to bring up what Cassandra mentioned.

>>Talk to Rath privately, she seems troubled.

>>Talk to Gina for a second. That was…a lot.

>>Head to the lab directly to Upgrade November’s Forge body and get Sam a physical form.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next two hours, Gentlemen.)
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>>3734441
>>Talk to Rath privately, she seems troubled.
hopefully nothing major, but still, not like her to just blow off an activity like that or be silent about why.
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>>3734441

>Give Gina a small signal over the crimson cord that you will talk to Rath. In private. So she can see what Francine had to get fetch for us

>Talk to Rath something is waying on her mind and we should spend some time with her on that

nice after coming back home from a stressful day having a shower and then OP posts .... The day is a good one
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>>3734441
>>3734463
Ammendment

>Do all of the above while heading in the general direction of the lab

>Our communication is via telepathy so we can talk to Rath without the need for a private room ..... unless she wants a private room.
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>>3734441
>Talk to Rath privately, she seems troubled.
>"You okay? You look like you've witnessed that you didn't want to see."
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>>3734441
Supporting >>3734463

I wonder what happened to make Rath upset? She came back from the gun range early, so it's presumably not just Shu handling this Sam situation without telling her first. Though that is bad and we should apologize for it. What happened, Rath, did Beira say something unsettling?
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>>3734520
Considering how Rath initially looked up to Beira in admiration, but then came running back to us within 15 minutes, something must've happened between Rath and Beira that caused Rath to go NOPE.avi and immediately seek Shu and Gina. Testing out giant space cannons is a time consuming process that normally don't wrap up in 15 minutes since there's a lot of fine-tuning and science involved.
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>>3734540
Yeah, that's my thinking, too. Perversely, I really hope it's something like Beira turning out to be a creep. Because the only alternative I can think of is that Beira told her something unwholesome about November, and I don't want that.
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>>3734540

Yeah she admired Beira. SOemthing must have happened to cut that short. Either Beira did something pretty inapropriate, tried to find stuff out about us or told her something about Novemeber she did not want to hear

Lets just hope its the last thing we can work that out with Rath

The first thing... could be Beira was just a creep and tried to get into her pants with the large weapons. We can deal with that as well

If she wanted to get information well lets say i dont want the Dos as enemies or helping out our enemies by getting them intel on us.
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>>3734455

>>Talk to Rath privately, she seems troubled.
Absolute support. We are not doing anyone good by ignoring the BIG RED FLAG in front of our noses.

Also, kudos to everyone for handling Sam´s situation so well (I was away and couldn´t contribute), and the very civil discussion & negotiation on the particulars. We already lost Isabelle in tragical cirumstances, it is good to see that, sometimes, the right roll of the dice happens and we still can save someone.

I still dislike her, mind. Given a choice, I would still have chosen to save Isabelle´s life over her indirect killer. But I am glad that, still as controversial as Sam´s figure is, we were not forced to pull the trigger on someone which might yet have a decent chance at redemption.
She had been abused in the cruellest ways imaginable, rejected by her own mother, and was at the end of her rope and fully expecting execution after weeks of accidental torture...

It almost seemed that the Crucible was whispering in our ear " Finish her! It is your right as a Victor! ". So, sparing her really feels as a satisfying way to tell the Crucible to go fuck itself anew. Thanks again, everyone.
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>>3734441
>Give Gina a small signal over the crimson cord that you will talk to Rath. In private. So she can see what Francine had to get fetch for us
>Talk to Rath privately, she seems troubled.

We can talk to Francine ourselves a bit later. Rath looks like she needs support at the moment.
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>>3734441
Alright i did a stupid
This is the vote i want to make
>>3734463
and the ammendment is just that we do the things mentioned in the post while heading to the lab

So you can ignore this post OP>>3734472
Sorry fort the trouble
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>>3734441

[Gina, could you keep Francine and November busy? I want to touch base with Rath for a sec, I think something’s up]

{Yeah, totally} Comes the brunette’s immediate reply via the Crimson Cord. {Hey, if she’s upset, we can take some time to hash it out, okay? She comes first}

You give her a nod of thanks as she swiftly engages with the Doctor and Soldier, and you give Cassandra a warm smile as the elevator doors slide shut behind you. The ride to the upper floors is filled with surprisingly animated chatter between Gina and Francine, the two of them discussing the more in-depth particulars regarding the advancements that have been made since November was granted her current form. When the doors slide open, you hang back with Rath as Francine take the lead down the hall. The red-head regards you quizzically for a moment before she catches sight of your expression, and her own face is suddenly going scarlet, unease clear on her features.

“Do you want to talk about what happened?” You ask softly, leaning against the corridor’s cold concrete wall as you puts your hands into the pockets of your dress, feeling the Relics and crystals in your left and right pockets, respectively. She shifts her weight from one leg to another, her arms wrapped around herself as she wrestles with how to voice her answer.

“Yeah, so, she…Beira took me shooting. We fired a few things, and we were talking. I mean, I was having fun, and she was complimenting me, and, then…I dunno, I was just so focused on the cannon I was about to fire, when, uh…”

She clears her throat, her face bright red, her brow knit in confusion.

“…ssed me.”

Her voice is so low, you barely catch her answer…but you think you understand, and you try to ignore the knot that’s formed in your stomach as you voice your measured reply.

“Okay. Alright, so…what did you do? Was that okay with you?”

“I mean, kind of?” Rath mutters, starting to pace in a six-foot line before you as she starts to ramble. It’s nice she’s opening up, but you wish it was under better circumstances. “It was…flattering, yeah, I just…it was my first time doing…anything like that, and she didn’t know that, and then I got all flustered, and…I just ran away like such a weirdo, she probably thinks I’m…”

“Hey now, you’re awesome. I’m not going to let you forget that.” You gently interrupt, giving her a small smile when she glances your way. “Hey, this is a first. It’s totally normal to get flustered over your first…”

“Dude, I punched out a god, like…a day ago!” She exclaims, throwing her arms wide. “Literally two hours after we fought a smoke giant I almost died in a wave of acid! That stuff? I can handle that shit, no problem, so why am I freaking out about…god, I’m an idiot. We’re in the fucking apocalypse and I’m losing it over some stupid shit like this.”

(Continued)
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>>3734701

You’re about to counter when she gives a low growl that echoes through the chamber’s grey walls.

“See? Now I just feel like an asshole for even bringing it up! You just got your girlfriend back from the dead after killing someone you trusted, and then you had to go deal with your past self and negotiate with her, and what do I do?” Rath fumes, too quick for you to get a word in edgewise. “I start rambling about how this cool older woman took my first kiss out of fucking nowhere like it’s the end of the goddamn world, which is just…Jesus, I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have said anything, let’s just…”

She pauses when you step forward and put your hands on her shoulders with steady, measured movements, taking great pains to not agitate her further.

“Rath, I care about you. I care about you more than I think you know. You’re not a burden, and I want to know what you’re working through, okay?” You say softly, your gaze roaming over her scowling, freckled brow to her electric citrine eyes. “I want to know what you’re feeling, on your terms. No empathic channel stuff, just your own impressions. How are you feeling?”

She struggles with her words, opening and closing her mouth several times before she begins her stumbling response.

“It’s just…it’s not who I…it’s not how I wanted it to happen. I mean, Beira’s really cool, and she’s awesome, and…maybe if things hadn’t happened so fast, it’d have been different, but...this is just all really new to me, I guess? I mean, this is my first time doing something like that, because someone liked me. I had crushes and shit when I was younger, but nothing happened. It’s…I don’t want Beira to think I was mad, but…god, I kind of am? Like, she should have asked. Hell, Gina asked when before played that stupid game, and you would’ve…”

Her face goes a shade redder, despite all odds.

“…Is that stupid?” She asks, weakly. You draw her into a hug, rubbing circles into the small of her back as you speak.

“No. No, it’s not.”

The two of you stand like that for a while, and after a few seconds Rath hugs you back, her emotions slowly leveling out as you graze her mind with your empathic channel. Her recap didn’t take long, so you have plenty of time to rejoin everyone at the lab, but…

It hits you, as you hold the girl whose head barely reaches your chin. Aside from Amara, at eighteen years old she’s by far the youngest of your team. She’s been through a lot, and she’s just now feeling comfortable enough to open up. She’s a goddess on the battlefield, but you realize it’s easy to lose sight of the girl that’s thrown herself into the apocalypse, fists swinging.

>>Rejoin the others at the armory, Gina can lead you there with the Crimson Cord.

>>Talk to Rath a little longer. She doesn’t normally open up, but now might be a good time to ask her anything else that’s been on her mind.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next two hours, Gentlemen. As a heads up, voting will likely adjourn early today as some plans have materialized this evening require my attention. I'll be posting intermittently over the weekend, and posting shall resume at a regular schedule this Monday in the same Vein, given this week's later start if that's alright with everyone. Let me know, and I hope you're having a good Friday, one and all.)
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Oh my Rath is having a Flustered meltdown. She's just beginning to open up and yet she's overwhelmed by all the emotions and surrounded by women that trigger her fetishes.

>Dominant on the Streets, Submissive in the Sheets.
>Tomboy
>Redheaded
Jesus fuck. And I just realized that Rath hits many a patrician man's fetishes.

I don't even know how to approach a Fiery redhead who's gone into a flustered meltdown.
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>>3734709
>>>Talk to Rath a little longer. She doesn’t normally open up, but now might be a good time to ask her anything else that’s been on her mind.
>>do so as you slowly take your time catching up to the others, unless it looks like Rath still needs the privacy.
lets let Rath vent a bit more, im sure shes got a ton on her mind about everything thats happened. or not, we'll see.


>>3734718
hey thats fine, ive got stuff myself later today, so that works out, heh.
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>>3734709
>Aside from Amara, at eighteen years old she’s by far the youngest of your team.
Honestly, I've never been clear on most of our party's ages. Shu is somewhere in her first or second year of college (in spirit, at least, chronologically she's only a month old), Gina is around the same, Julia is a few years out of art school, and Dorian I think was in his final year? So that's what, Shu and Gina around nineteen/twenty, Julia twenty-four, Dorian twenty-two?
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>>3734709
> Give her a hug and talk a bit longer with her.

>"So what do you want to do. You know that a relationship is gonna be difficult, since she will be leaving soon i think"

>"Julia and the others as well would hate to see you run off. I completely get it space guns and all this tech shit is awesome and the feelings you have are probably mutual to a degree but Gina and I would loath to see you go, following Beira."
>caress her cheek a bit and make her look up into your eyes show her the deep affection you feel for her without the empathic channel

>"I just want you to know that there are many people here that would hate to loose you too"

>Lean in a bit closer before continuing

>" I was thinking about asking Francine to join us.... She has been proven to be safe and genuine yb Gina. She also wishes to join us and will not join the DOs on their Journey to space. I learned that from Cassandra. What are your thoughts?"

>Let her vent a bit more afterwards

Damn i am glad it was just something pretty harmless

>>3734725
Rath best girl i agree. If you dont know ho to approach her? give her a hug she loves hugs and cuddling


>>3734718
Will you post your thoughts on the Fics after the Vein is done?

I have nothing to do so I will continue writing my own story if you have to stop early
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>>3734728
speaking of that, im hoping Beira just read the situation wrong, and wasn't just trying to take advantage of her, but we'll see. that or November finds out and we have to stop a fight, thats an option too.
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>>3734748
>>"So what do you want to do. You know that a relationship is gonna be difficult, since she will be leaving soon i think"
I don't think she is. Beira said that everyone that was going was topside, working on the ship. She was still down in the labs. Then again, she said that Francine wasn't "joining us", so maybe she is planning on going and just hanging around the labs anyway? I'm confused.
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>>3734759
might be they still dont want just anybody somehow messing with thier labs, aswell as she was the one to meet us at the door, implying they still expect and are ok with guests, but still need someone on the lookout for them.

it is odd though, as her relationship with them sounds alot different. if she was planning to stick with them, it feels odd their situation would be one where shes a hired gun, over just another member you would want to upgrade anyways.

>>3734751
also also, isnt Beira like eight? ten feet tall? and Rath like, five something at best? honestly i wanna know what goddamned weaponry Rath had her hands on to distract her so badly she didn't notice a literal giant invading her personal space literally into her face.
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>>3734742
(Good call on everyone's ages, you're spot on.)

>>3734759
(Beira intends to leave with the rest of the DOs, she's just tuning things up a bit before she packs up what she's taking.)

>>3734748
( I certainly shall, and if I have some time this weekend between tuning the sheets and the upcoming Relic additions I'll read them then, if the opportunity presents itself.)

>>3734775
(Beira's seven feet tall in her armored form, and Rath's easily distractible when there are munitions involved.)
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>>3734759
>"Yep. We're about to head out, and everyone that's going is topside, making their final adjustments." Beira explains. "I'm down here for weapons testing, and the Doctor, well...I don't think she's planning on joining us."

Could be....... her statement was a bit unclear in that regard. She could be making her own adjustments as well

But i think she will be joining them since she did say we quite a lot and that Francine wont be joining them. She refered to herself in singular as far as i remember

Form our last encounter i infered that she usually spoke oif herself as a singular being. She wil most likely join them

>>3734785
Thanks for your confirmation OP

>>3734751
Well there is hope i shudder at the mention of this dreadful word
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>>3734759
I refer to this post No.3507719 in the 20th vein in my own>>3734789
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>>3734785
>(and Rath's easily distractible when there are munitions involved.)
well i can certainly understand the sentiment.

>>3734789
>>3734785
it seems Beira, assuming she had the right intentions, just gave herself more of a reason to flee the planet then, heh.
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>>3734775
>it is odd though, as her relationship with them sounds alot different. if she was planning to stick with them, it feels odd their situation would be one where shes a hired gun, over just another member you would want to upgrade anyways.
Yeah, she told us she was a hired gun, in it for cool cyborg parts rather than any ideological agreement. I don't know if she's actually interested in going to space.

>also also, isnt Beira like eight? ten feet tall? and Rath like, five something at best? honestly i wanna know what goddamned weaponry Rath had her hands on to distract her so badly she didn't notice a literal giant invading her personal space literally into her face.
If it was a weapon for the ship then it was probably something nuclear. Either reactor-powered or using "bomb pumping". So it's probably some huge, very imposing death ray. Plenty to get distracted by. I know that if I was in the same room as a bomb-pumped gun, actually setting off a nuke would be what was required to take my attention off of it.

>>3734785
>(Beira intends to leave with the rest of the DOs, she's just tuning things up a bit before she packs up what she's taking.)
Oh, cool, I guess she does want to go to space. Well, I can't say I blame her. She gets to be the gunner of a combination space battleship/salvation ark. Even if she's not ideologically aligned with the Disassociated, that's not an opportunity you can pass up. Oh, and escaping the horrible death-world. That too.

>>3734789
I didn't mean that I thought she was speaking in the personal plural, just that she meant "us" as the entire group of space-bound cyborgs.
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>>3734800
Probably i dont think November will be very amicable if she ever learns of what she had done to her niece. She already disliked Beira. lets hope Beira did not do it to spite November otherwise there will be blood..... or Oil shed

And here i was hoping Shu and Gina would steal Raths first kiss together

>>3734805
Yeah but she sees herself as an individual so if she had not planned to go with them she would hgave said something to the effect of

>They are making preperations for launch and i sit in the lab doing tests

something more akin to that to distance herself from the others
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>>3734816
>Yeah but she sees herself as an individual so if she had not planned to go with them she would hgave said something to the effect of
I know. That's why I was saying it was evidence for her going.
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>>3734819
Oh sorry i misinterpreted what you said later in that first statement
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>>3734816
eh, not really into the whole harem/poly angle honestly. im not into shipping at all really, but theres levels of 'eh' to these things and all that that thats just one more step up from.
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>>3734829
No worries.
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>>3734718
I am fine with adjourning early today.

Is Beira leaving for Space or is she staying on the planet?

>>3734728
Well shit. It's clear that Rath's in an emotional storm from Beira pulling a surprise kiss on Rath. Do you think there's something off with Beira? I have the feeling that something's off with Beira.

>>3734709
>take the time to talk to Rath.

>"It's okay Rath, you don't have to worry about the bigger picture. Right now, lets focus on you. You're just starting to open up to others around you and yet you're being overwhelmed by the simple things I think right now, you need time to sort out those feelings and talk things out slowly one thing at a time."

>"So how did you feel about the kiss? Did something feel wrong about the kiss? Were you repulsed by it?"

>"Did she do anything else besides kissing you without consent? Anything that felt wrong or skeevy? Have you ever felt something was off about Beira?"

>"To be honest, when you came running back within 15 minutes after leaving with Beira, I was both relieved and worried. I was relieved that you were safe and sound, but also worried something had gone wrong between you and Beira. And when you told me what Beira did to you...I'm having a gut feeling that something as awfully off with Beira."

>"Try to ignore the massive arsenal She's in charge of. I just want you to think about it. We've only met her twice. And Beira went to kiss you without your consent while everyone else was away on the second meeting with her. I don't want to throw dirt onto Beira, but pulling that aggressive of a move sounds alarm bells in my mind. I'm frankly worried."

>"Your Aunt might go full 'Liam Neeson' though when she hears about Beira pulling the surprise kiss on you, they don't get along with each other well, and I don't want them to start a fight."

>"Anything else weighing on your mind besides that incident? If not, lets to the armory and see how your Aunt's Iron Man suit works. Beira's in charge of massive Cannons for a space ship, but your Aunt? Your Aunt's a living, walking, modifiable, upgradeable, Arsenal of Guns and technology."
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>>3734709
>Talk to Rath a little longer. She doesn’t normally open up, but now might be a good time to ask her anything else that’s been on her mind.

>>3734816
Same. We'll have to steal her second kiss later then. And watch her become red as a tomato when reading Gina's fanfics together.
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>>3734839
eh, kinda dont like jumping to conclusions or trying to push Raths thinking towards jumping to conclusions about Beira. yeah, what Beira did was wrong, but its entirely possible she just read the room wrong, as it was. i feel like this is way too aggressive against her, or more importantly, feels like its jumping to conclusions about her then forcing them onto Rath passive-aggressively, instead of just asking Rath what she thinks and letting her come to her own conclusions.
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>>3734839

This feels abit to accusatory..... i just feel like first you state that we should focus on Rath tight now
>"It's okay Rath, you don't have to worry about the bigger picture. Right now, lets focus on you. You're just starting to open up to others around you and yet you're being overwhelmed by the simple things I think right now, you need time to sort out those feelings and talk things out slowly one thing at a time."

>"So how did you feel about the kiss? Did something feel wrong about the kiss? Were you repulsed by it?"
These sentences are fine

Afterwards it turns into a giant coster making it pretty much about Beira and how she could be shiffty and tired to pull something

I think a more subtle approach is better in this case since we dont want to make Beira out to be a bad person. I at least want to make sure Rath understands that there are people here that love her and dont want to loose her.

And for that she needs to be able to vent a bit i agree with your last line but between these olines it just feels like trying to drag Beira down by making her sound immoral and reprehensible
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>>3734843
She wont only be red as a tomato she will literally go up in flames and become the hottest thing for miles around
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>>3734853
You're right about that. I'll make amendments.
>>3734860
You're also correct about it as well. I sorry that I tend to default towards being aggressive. But both of your points are honest criticisms.
And I'm sorry about trying to throw dirt on Beira.
>>3734839
>>3734709
Amending my vote.

>Talk to Rath a little longer. She doesn’t normally open up, but now might be a good time to ask her anything else that’s been on her mind.

>"It's okay Rath, you don't have to worry about the bigger picture. Right now, lets focus on you. You're just starting to open up to others around you and yet you're being overwhelmed by the simple things I think right now, you need time to sort out those feelings and talk things out slowly one thing at a time."

>"So how did you feel about the kiss? Did something feel wrong about the kiss? Were you repulsed by it?"


Also. In a stroke of bad timing, I'll have to leave for work soon. So this is probably my final amendment to my current vote. What I do want Rath to understand is to calm down and learn more about herself as well as voicing our concerns that we're worried for her and worried that Beira might pull off something more aggressive than just a simple kiss the next time she and Rath end up alone together again. At least let her realize that.
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>>3734878
I dont think we will let the two of them come together alone again. Not out of malice or something but msotly because we wont be staying long now and in the next seven days i can see no reason for why we should come back.

But have a good day at work

>>3734709

I think i will amend my vote a bit as well from >>3734748
to

> Give her a hug and talk a bit longer with her.

>"So what do you want to do about this. How did the kiss feel? Did it feel wrong? Was there something that made you go like "No i dont want this"?"

Let her answer and vent a bit, then continue

>"Julia and the others as well would hate to see you run off. I completely get it space guns and all this tech shit is awesome and the feelings you have are maybe mutual to a degree but Gina and I would loath to see you go, following Beira."

>caress her cheek a bit and make her look up into your eyes show her the deep affection you feel for her without the empathic channel, just let it shine through your eyes and body language

>"I just want you to know that there are many people here that would hate to loose you too"

>Lean in a bit closer bringing your face closer to hers before continuing

>Let her vent a bit more afterwards until she is feeling better and then ask

>" I was thinking about asking Francine to join us.... She has been proven to be safe and genuine yb Gina. She also wishes to join us and will not join the DOs on their Journey to space. I learned that from Cassandra. What are your thoughts?"

I think my timin g ont he entire thing needed work...... the francine part had to come as the last part since she will have something to say about that

Also we need to make our feelings clear to her a bit as well without overwhelming her right now
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>>3734902
I'd say leave out the talk about Francine joining. Ask what Rath thinks about her, sure, but the idea of her joining feels like it's a bit far off in the discussion. We're not even sure if we can talk Francine out of dying with the rest of the West collective, even if we really hope she won't.
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>>3734902
im...against this.
the last thing Rath needs is more unsolicited advances, regardless of where they come from. it also feels like its again trying to force her opinion, instead of letting her come to conclusions on her own.
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>>3734709
>>3734728
amending my vote.
>Talk to Rath a little longer. She doesn’t normally open up, but now might be a good time to ask her anything else that’s been on her mind.
>do so as you slowly take your time catching up to the others, unless it looks like Rath still needs the privacy.

>"It's okay Rath, you don't have to worry about the bigger picture. Right now, lets focus on you."

>"So how did you feel about the kiss? Did something feel wrong about the kiss? Were you repulsed by it?"

>Let her vent a bit more afterwards until she is feeling better.
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>>3734919
maybe this anon >>3734920
was right about this she does not need the emotiuons i am trying to conjure up she need to work through her own emotions first. We will ahve enough time later after we got away from this place to tell her how Shu feels about her

>>3734920

So more like this? less touchy feely stuff and more that we would really hate losing her


> Give her a hug and talk a bit longer with her.

>"So what do you want to do about this. How did the kiss feel? Did it feel wrong? Was there something that made you go like "No i dont want this"?"

Let her answer and vent a bit, then continue

>"Julia and the others as well would hate to see you run off. I completely get it space guns and all this tech shit is awesome but we still would hate to have you leave us."

>caress her cheek a bit and make her look up into your eyes to amek sure she sees the sincerity in your eyes

>"I just want you to know that there are many people here that would hate to loose you too. You are irreplacable to us "

>Let her vent a bit more afterwards until she is feeling better and then ask

>"But anyway. What are your thoughts on Francine of what little interaction you had with her"
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>>3734945
well the cheek caress is a major part of what im talking about.
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>>3734709
Ammending my vote again to now ignore both >>3734902
and this >>3734748 vote

to insteads vote for this

> Give her a hug and talk a bit longer with her.

>"So what do you want to do about this. How did the kiss feel? Did it feel wrong? Was there something that made you go like "No i dont want this"?"

Let her answer and vent a bit, then continue

>"Julia and the others as well would hate to see you run off. I completely get it space guns and all this tech shit is awesome but we still would hate to have you leave us."

>make her look up into your eyes to amek sure she sees the sincerity in your eyes

>"I just want you to know that there are many people here that would hate to loose you too. You are irreplacable to us "

>Let her vent a bit more afterwards until she is feeling better and then ask

>"But anyway. What are your thoughts on Francine of what little interaction you had with her"
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at work, but i just had this scene in my head that is equal parts adorable, heartwarming and heartbreaking.
>Shu and the entire family gets invited to see the Rocket launch from the Disassociated Ones Mission Control tower with the intercom between them and the entire population of the DOs.
>T-minus 30
>Amara starts singing the theme song of Little Einsteins
>T-minus 15
>Shu and the rest of the family join in the chorus
>T-minus 5
>Cassandra starts singing along on the Rocket
>Liftoff
>Everyone on the Rocket is now singing the song “Little Einsteins” as the Rocket accelerates into the atmosphere
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>>3734709
>>Talk to Rath a little longer. She doesn’t normally open up, but now might be a good time to ask her anything else that’s been on her mind.
>Pull back away from her slightly, so that you can look down into her eyes.
>"Don't ever think that your emotions are stupid or wrong, Rath. It doesn't matter how insignificant they might seem, they still matter to you. And you matter to us. If you need to talk, I'm more than willing to listen. We all are, don't ever think you can't come to any of us for help working through what you're feeling. Well, maybe not November in this particular instance, but in general."
>"So talk to me, Rath. It doesn't have to be about Beira, if you want some time to just mull it over. It can be anything you've been thinking about. I care about your thoughts and want to hear them."

>>3734980
Honestly, I'm not crazy about the "please don't run off to space and leave us" bit. I feel like that's still presuming too much about Rath's feelings in this matter.
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(Apologies for the delay in the update Gentlemen, work has been fierce in Friday's closing hours. I'll endeavor to post as soon as I am able, and I do believe that update shall close out the evening for now.)
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>>3735117
take your time and focus on your work before addressing the update. we can always wait
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>>3734709

"It's okay Rath, you don't have to worry about the bigger picture. Right now, let’s focus on you.” You start to walk with her by your side, following the invisible path dictated to you by the Crimson Cord.

"So what do you want to do about this?” You begin, trying to keep your tone light, neutral. “How did the kiss feel? Did it feel wrong? Was there something that made you go like ‘No, I don't want this’?"

“No, not…really?” Rath muses aloud, putting her hands behind her head as she weighs how she feels about the whole exchange. “I mean, Beira’s…oof, she’s something else. The kiss was pretty quick, and I was so caught off-guard, I really don’t know what to think except it came outta left field, mostly. Honestly, I’d have like to have a warning or somethin’ before something like that happens again…and I don’t really want it to be with Beira. Does…that make me a jerk?”

“Ha, no. Not in the least.” You chuckle.

“Cool, okay. Good.” She mutters. “So is kissing normally, a kinda…lip-to-lip punch? Is that what it’s supposed to be? Like…I guess I’d like to practice so I don't look like a weirdo if that happens again, if that doesn’t sound weird?”

You‘re distracted from your reply when you feel a spike of excitement emanating from the lab, and you round the corner to see row upon row of mechanical frames. Gina, November, and Francine in front of an equal number of inert bodies, their cutting-edge forms suspended by a mobile rack that hangs from the cavernous ceiling. You glance up to find dozens, hundreds of similar frames in this warehouse of empty bodies, and Gina rounds on you excitedly when you approach as you feel Rath go numb with awe behind you as she soaks in the sight.

“Shu, November’s going to be absolutely bitchin’, it’ll be amazing!” Gina blurts out, catching herself as she turns to November sheepishly. “Not…not that your frame isn’t super-cool or anything, it’s just…”

November just laughs, her voxel-distorted exultation echoing in the eerie space.

“No, I get it. These are all a strict upgrade to what I’m rocking now.” Rath’s aunt muses, glancing down at the body she currently inhabits. “Doctor, would you be so kind as to catch Shu and my niece up on what you told us?”

“Oh, no, I’m sure Gina here could more eloquently reiterate the high points of my expla…” Francine begins, her protests suddenly cut off by Rath invading her personal space with terrifying speed.

“Speak. I need to know EVERYTHING about these beautiful bitches.” Rath rumbles, citrine eyes wide as she stares expectantly as the beleaguered proxy. Fran glances between you and Gina, looking for help against the demanding ginger at her heels. GG just shrugs and gives Francine a low bow, leaving the floor to her.

The Doctor sighs, rubbing the bridge of her nose before clearing her throat.

“…Ah. Lovely. Exposition it is, then.”

(Continued)
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“The frames you see before you fall into three distinct categories, and I invited the assistance of seven other engineers in order to bring them into existence.” Francine begins, and despite her weary tone you sense an undercurrent of enjoyment in her narration.

“Behold the Sniper Frame, Cliodhna.” She announces, indicating the sharp, angular body to your left, whose chest pulses with azure light, a colossal rifle making up the most of its right arm. “Now, keep in mind I’d be able to port all of Heather Neeson’s armament to each of these, but this one is specialized to remain evasive and offer long-range support. It’s equipped with a quartet of thrusters that allow it to move out of range with considerable ease, in addition to a cloaking mechanism that drains the Core to use, but renders the first rail-cannon shot more devastating than usual. It’s unfortunately the least sturdy of the frames here, and engaging in melee combat is something I’d vehemently discourage, but as far as sheer damage output and maneuverability, it’s second-to-none.”

Gesturing to the right-hand frame, you turn your attention to the traditionally-armored swordswoman that’s rendered in ornamental plating.

“I had a little fun with the Melee Frame, Macha. Whereas Cliodhna prioritized damage output at the cost of survivability, Macha’s auto-reactive free counterstrikes that ensure that engaging in close-range combat is an exercise in futility if Ms. Neeson should bring this to bear. It boasts a variety of weapon-based subroutines that function similarly to the unique abilities flesh Daughters wield, and Macha’s plasma-based armament can easily cleave through the toughest of armors."

“And last but not least, this…” Francine pauses, theatrically directing your collective attention to the rather plain-looking humanoid frame that rests between the other two. “…is the Variable Frame, Etain. Lacking any unique weapons of its own, it instead has six Relic slots, one in each limb, one in the chest, and another in the head. You see, Etain gains unique upgrades by coaxing more out of your arms and armor than most Daughters are able to naturally and gains unique powers and upgrades accordingly, usually reserved for only specialized Calcite Armorers and Flesh Artisans.”

“The names…you didn’t say their names, before.” November says, something dawning on her. “They’re all…”

“Ah, well, I had to save something for the late arrivals.” Francine replies quickly, glossing over November’s implication. “Yes, I took a little from some choice bits of mythology. I do hope you don’t mind?”

“…Not at all.” November says, a smile evident even in her crackling voice.

CHOOSE YOUR NEW FRAME

>>Sniper Frame – CLIODHNA

>>Melee Frame – MACHA

>>Variable Frame – ETAIN

AND

CHOOSE HOW YOU SPEND INSTALLATION DOWNTIME

>>Choose ally/allies to speak with.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, as I mentioned earlier I'll be pausing here for the evening, with the voting period left open over the weekend since I imagine you'll have a few questions regarding the frames available.)

(Essentially, each one is a strict upgrade to her current form and allows her to narrow down the Forge Core Upgrades and squeeze out enough power to keep her viable well into the endgame. Etain is unique in that while it has less HEALTH and stats than even November's base frame, Relics will gain a new addendum at the end of each of their descriptors that will go into effect when installed into Heather's variable system. Cliodhna is the typical glass cannon, but it's manuverability and critical-hit buffs are quite potent. Finally, Macha gains new martial abilities and weapon types depending on the level of Forge Core installed, essentially making her similar to a Calcite Armorer, in that regard.)

(Finally, I'll be posting full art for each Frame shortly, as well...just because I think they're neat.)

(I shall remain avaialable tomorrow and Sunday to address questions, comments, and criticisms as they arise, and I welcome them all. Thank you so much for your patience, participation, and enthusiasm, and I hope you all have a fantastic weekend.)
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>>3735157
>>>Variable Frame – ETAIN
nothing wrong with the other two, but id prefer November not to be stuck to a singular play-style. that, and the ability to mix and match Relics that she actively boosts the power of and allows us to heavily customize her as we see fit? hell fucking yes to that.

>>Choose ally/allies to speak with.
>>Ask Gina for help talking to the three dream daughters you have in the crystals.
id like to give our newcomers their chance while we have a moment. what they want could very easily affect what we do once we go home again, and honestly, all three were literally being tortured as a battery, i feel like nows a good time to give them a chance to finally decide what to do with themselves a bit.
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>>3735153
Dr. Fran.....would sound nice as a new Nickname Is it a reference? I feel like it is but i cant put my finger on where i heard it before

>>3735157
So the big Question is what do we want November to be. Quick and agile with long range fire or a jugggernaut or nothing of both and make her a relic powerhouse........

Its difficult but i think i would go for the ETAIN. It gives us the largest flexibility to make November fit whatever role she needs to be. And i think we have enough relics to make good use of it even now. Its flexibility will only grow from now on.

>>Speak with Gina for a bit

>"So have you asked can they get you some murdertentacles installed?"

>Via the Crimson Cord

>"Also Beira stole Raths first kiss we will have to make plans to steal the next one ourselves. Maybe by making her train her lip-punches with us"
>Hash out a small plan how that situation might come into being but dont start anything yet I think Gina would enjoy something lighthearted before we get to our new Crystaldaughters

>then get into contact with our new Crystaldaughters using Ginas Neuromancy
We also ned to seee to it that we make good on our promise with Sam and give her a new body made by the DOs once Novembers Upgrades are finished
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>>3735171
fun as always BHOP, though personally already know more than enough to make my own choice on the suits. hope you have a wonderful Day with your plans BHOP!
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>>3735174
i honestly dont think being that straight forward fits how Shu has gone with her relationships at all. id also like to get to the crystal daughters sooner than later, and very much think they deserve that.
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>>3735174
Should we also talk to Francine during the downtime, or does the installation require her attention and will keep her busy until its finished?
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>>3735153
>“…Ah. Lovely. Exposition it is, then.”
It is the fate of all iterations of Dr. Francine West to provide exposition for the Defiant Fools. You might escape the sins of your progenitor, but you will never escape this. See, this is why you need to live, Francine. Alive, you can at least beg off with the excuse of being busy. If you die, we're just going to eat you and get you in our Dreamscape and then you won't be able to say that. No projects to work on in our brain.

>>3735157
Well. Those are shiny. I'm a bit unclear on Francine's naming convention, though. So we've got three demigoddess/queens of Irish myth. Macha makes sense to me as the melee frame, Macha was a warrior goddess and in some stories is conflated with the Morrigan. But Cliodhna had nothing to do with ranged combat, and the best I can think of for Etain is that her story involves her being transformed into a lot of different things (but against her will), which could kind of fit the variable frame idea.

>>3735171
Thanks for running, BHOP. I look forward to the larger frame pics, they're pretty cool-looking.
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That is a good question i will direct at OP >>3735171 Question for you OP>>3735182

Can we talk to Dr. Fran or is she busy?
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>>3735174
(Great eye. Her full name is Francine Randolph West, a reference to the body-horror manga Franken Fran and two other characters from H.P. Lovecraft, the latter from the Re-Animator series. Most of the characters' names are a reference of one kind or another.)

>>3735182
>>3735185
(She can set everything up go automatically, so she is available to talk, yes.)
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>>3735189
Ok that changes things....... i will have to go over my write in again. but that will happen tomorrow or on sunday

Huh..... Franken Fran..... I think i will just call her Dr Fran from now on. I think i saw some cover art for that manga once. never read it..... probably should though. Could give me a couple new ideas to work with. Is it any good? Have you read it?

HP Lovecraft? Huh.... i will have to read his works again i cant remember right now if i have read something with a doctor with that name in it.......

Anyway thanks for running
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speaking of, why the heckle do the DOs have an armory's worth of cyborg combat bodies? seems very odd. i get their warriors need some backups, and they need to be prepared for new daughters joining but, i cant see them needing the implied amount of bodies prepared for sure, especially given the fact they had planned to leave for awhile now. unless they have some way to make new human consciousnesses once off the planet, they wont have much of a use for those honestly.

and if they just leave them behind... well thats just asking for trouble.
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>>3735195
>HP Lovecraft? Huh.... i will have to read his works again i cant remember right now if i have read something with a doctor with that name in it.......
It's Dr. Herbert West, the Reanimator, from the story "Herbert West--Reanimator". One of the first zombie stories, actually. Mad scientist tries to bring back the dead, only creates shambling monsters. West's middle name is a reference to Randolph Carter, a character who appears in several of Lovecraft's stories and is basically his self-insert.

>>3735202
Yeah, it is a bit odd that the Disassociated spent the time and effort on making so many different combat bodies. Especially ones like the Irish Goddess series that Francine has here, that require some biological aspects of the user to remain and so aren't compatible with their upload-centric ideology. Maybe it was part of the other plan that they were working on, the one about fighting the Crucible? Create squads of cyborg super-soldiers, have them systematically fight their way up the Cord to plant charges.
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>>3735202
They probably wanted spares and you need a lot of spares. Outer space is probably the most hostile place you can go to

They will need a lot spares if they make it through the atmosphere and the membrane not to mention if they want to set up new outposts.


They could make them remote controlle by some kind of AI to protect the true DOs or their Home Base to make sure no one fucks with it until the crucible is over and they can return to gather all the stuff left behind.

Or maybe they were preparing for a war. A war with some big powerful fucker that thinks they are hot shit and as powerful as Mara and would just like to kill them for the lols.

I would not put it past them to actually prepare acbyernetic army for that

>>3735217
Thank you I know that i dont own that story, i will have to get a copy then.
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>>3735157
>>Variable Frame – ETAIN

This sounds like the best one. A frame that can be fine-tuned and fully customized, based on the relics we have? Awesome. If anything, it gives us another excuse to level up Rath's forge powers, so that she can help out her aunt with the best gear possible.

Also, the image for Etain, in my opinion, is pure badass.
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>>3735221
>Thank you I know that i dont own that story, i will have to get a copy then.
Like all of Lovecraft's work, it's in the public domain. Have a link to an online collection that includes it. http://www.dagonbytes.com/thelibrary/lovecraft/reanimator.htm
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>>3735225
Ah thank you.

I will probably still get a paper version since i just prefer reading something on paper but this will help me in the meantime
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>>3735217
i could see it. thats alot of wasted resources though, but i guess maybe they dont care because they could only bring limited supplies anyways. even if their tech gives them an outstandingly high weight ratio for the launch compared to what we think of now, its still gonna have limits, so may aswell go ham while still on earth and dont have to worry about that.

>>3735221
eh, the thing is it was implied to be all combat suits. and an apeshit ton of them. theres a limit to whats reasonable to have as a backup supply, especially when you plan to go someplace with no life but yourself and with a limited population. but hey, unless they leave them behind, not our problem. if they do leave them behind, then thats alot of beefed up power suits for vultures to come picking clean.
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>>3735195
(It's very disturbing in a short-story format, with a great deal of visual horror and bad ends in spades. I enjoy it thoroughly.)

>>3735202
>>3735217
>>3735221
(The Disassociated's dormant members number in the thousands, and the vast majority of the bodies you saw were replacements for the sleeping members and lack offensive capabilities. There are still a large number of both replacement bodies and combat frames, as the DOs fear they may be pursued by the Crucible should they escape or that they may encounter hostile elements on the planets they seek ro settle. The three Frames that Francine's showing off are completely custom-made, and are each one of a kind. Their names are unique and specially-chosen, as well.)

>>3735225
(Thank you for linking that for the other Anon, that was nice to see.)

>>3735236
(The implication they were all combat units was an error on my part, my apologies. I was going to go into more visual detail, but I was cramped for post space without making a third post.)
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>>3735236
also, I totally missed that its implied November, being of Irish decent, was probably part of the inspiration of the names. to be fair, i know jack about Irish mythology so until it was mentioned they are Irish i had no idea where they came from.
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>>3735236
well the Melee and balanced suits if they have more of them would still be useful for many different things. They have hands they can do work but yeah maybe a bit much.

Another question i will write down i want to ask Dr. Fran

>What is the plan for all these combat units?
This is jsut a theory of mine but maybe they want to use them to pioerce the shell of the crucible with pure brute force

If they leave them behind however we need to get them out of here as fast as possible or destroy them. This stuff is to powerful to get into the hands of powerhungry assholes.

If we manage to secrue them they oculd be invaluable after the crucible to help rebuilding either by protecting it or helping if they have hands to hold tools

>>3735247
Okay so they are not all combat units then good that makes it a lot more justifiable then
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>>3735247
oh, oh damn. so they literally are a seed ship, and just have nonessentials in crystals til they find a new home or need them to fight. alright fair enough. didnt realize their numbers were so utterly massive, and i cant help but feel a bit miffed they have such manpower and resources yet decided to run way instead, but whatever.
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>>3735247
Thinking about it, Mother may have spent tokens during the DO's launch to stop them in some way. Too bad she recently wasted most of them, and will likely keep her few remaining ones for bigger fish, and favor their legal expenditure so that they come back later.
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>>3735247
>The Disassociated's dormant members number in the thousands
Thousands, wow. I was assuming hundreds at most. They're probably one of the biggest communities on the Crucible, then. Well, good for them. I was assuming they had some members in storage to "unpack" and build new bodies for when they reached their destination, but with thousands they'll be able to maintain steady population growth for some time. Awesome.

>or that they may encounter hostile elements on the planets they seek ro settle
Wait, hold up, planets? No, girls, you were doing so good! Don't go back down the gravity well! If you have to go to a planet, at least go to a gas giant so you can hang out around its moons.

>>3735256
Oh, that's a very good point. The Crucible probably has its own automatic defenses against people leaving, but we've drained Ozmas enough that she can't afford to add anything nastier to the equation.
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>>3735290
hey man, nothing beats a planet for permanent civilization. just wont be able to beat one out with spaceships and space stations in terms of proper space and storage, aswell as immediate access to resources. plus, very potentially less power intensive to keep a landed settlement running than a space one.
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>>3735174
franken Fran
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>>3735189
>Franken Fran
BHOP, you really do have top tier taste.
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>>3735294
Unless you build your own cylinder or habitat. Resources are plenty in space energy is one of the biggest concerns on a planet. In Space you got unlimited access solar power unlike on a planet with an atmosphere which they probably wont need but the cold would be better for them if they can get computers up and running again. I imagine they managed to safe some old earth tech and will probably use it to not rely on the crucible to power everything for them.

Going back into a gravity well is actually a bad idea since you need so much power to get out of one in the first place. My guess would be that they should go to the astroid belt and colonise that thing. plenty of resources little gravity and many places they can create factorys in and around that are shielded form the worst radiation. And a series of O'Neil Cylinders would provide far more space than the equivalent mass off a planet could ever hope. The fact is that a the surface of a shpere grows by the exponnet 2 and its mass on the inside by the exponent 3. A lot of mass you could safe by creating gravity with spin instead of mass.

They are partically a virtual civilisation already. Planets hold no value but as building material storage. And you can get that way easier and cheaper by just going ahead and taking apart any asteroid they see while in space
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work is winding down
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>>3735294
I'm not convinced of that. There's been a lot of analysis that indicates that the challenges a space-faring society would face are at best equivalent between a planetary surface and freefall. You're still going to have to manufacture all your habitable environments, so that's even. Planets offer mineral and volatile resources, but so do asteroids and comets. And energy consumption is easier in space because you can build huge solar collectors or magnetic tether arrays, so you're probably actually at a benefit in terms of power consumed versus produced. And then there's the big one: No gravity well holding you down. Getting into space is where most of the cost comes from, once you're in orbit you can get to more or less anywhere in the solar system for the same energy cost. Certain trips might be slower than others, but they're all as fuel-efficient.

>>3735315
I'm partial to the moons of Jupiter. Part of that is just because a Jupiter mission was one of the proposed uses of Orion back when the project was still ongoing, so sending an Orioncraft to Jupiter would be fulfilling a sixty year-old dream. But it's also pretty practical. You've got the rocky moons for minerals, volatiles are abundant (there's more water in Europa than all of Earth's oceans), the actual planet has Helium-3 to harvest if you have fusion power, the magnetic field and plasma torus offer huge amounts of electrical energy to be harvested directly, and there's actually indication that the Van Allen belts of Jupiter contain considerable amounts of antimatter. And of course, getting from moon to moon is easy, they all have weak gravity wells. Sure, there's a lot of radiation, but the Disassociated are robots. They should be more hardened against it than we are, and need less shielding. Once they fix that, Jupiter is the perfect spot for their civilization.
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>>3735315
>>3735336
nah, the need to not build everything to to such strainious standards and having to outright build any and all space completely makes a totally spacebound civilization wholly inefficient. gravity is also actually a boon in numerous ways, and planets, even 'cheap' ones, would have mountains of resources you couldn't get as easily anywhere else. the fact you cant mine an asteroid the same way as a planet simply makes it much less efficient to do so as your primary source of resources.

also planets allow for many other methods of energy production too, and you can always still make solar satellites and send the energy to earth. the benefits of actually having a planet are vastly more numerous than not, its as simple as that. the only downside is yes, the cost of getting on and off it, but if they can already even colonize another planet or leave one, they have the technology to make it work and improve it, it more becomes a matter of choosing the right planet or gather enough materials beforehand. you also are ignoring they dont have to be a wholly planetoid civilization, only that theres massive benefits to putting the majority of your population on one.
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>>3735336
The Dos might be hardened but unless they harden their equipment they will have problems with constant damage and breaking down of electronics
Not surea bout the antimatter that shit is volatile as fuck the slightest bit of matter and massive amounts of energy is released and annhihalates the matter. If there truly is antimatter in those belts well lets just say it would be bad if they accidentaly stumbled into them.

It would also be kind of dangerous there because off all the debris that is caught up in that gravity well of Jupiter itself but otherwise yeah could be a great place to start a civilisaton

otherwise yeah a good place., I was thinking the astroid belt because it had less radiation. Would let them get a foot in the door so to speak

>>3735340
small planetoids i can say sure those would be good targets they have low gravity and you can get a lot of resources form them.

But anything Earth size? Unless you build something like a space elevator you will not get your resources on and off planet in any way sufficent to supply an entiure civilisation.

You also dont want ot have atomic bombs going off every time your delivery guy comes around.

In space you can go full solar with solar sails and stuff like dispersed laser to blow ships on photon streams through the system.

And they dont even need those standarts a box ot keep radiation out is enough for them. They are virtual for the most part. They wont care for how the place looks from the ouside they can make it look however they want to. And they dont need space except to harvest enrgy which is easily achievable through solar power. Its jsut easier to not go down a gravity well. The landing also poses the risk off breaking everything
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>>3735352
>>3735336
we can just agree to disagree, as honestly im not in the mood to try and fish up and recall the numerous documents and whatnot im basing my stance on. its also a very moot point as its their decision and our discussion wont change what they already have planned, nor will it gain us anything.

its also just not a topic i actually have a strong interest in, and while i love having these discussion with you guys, id never be able to put in the right effort or interest to do it justice. at best all i could say is 'look it up' or something.

im also working on finishing a story so i can post it along with another ive finished, so im also heavily distracted by other things.

speaking of more important endevours, do like how BHOP gave us the weekend to discuss the suits, yet the consensus already seems to have been made in like ten minutes. when we all do agree, i guess we agree pretty heavily.
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>>3735369
>speaking of more important endevours, do like how BHOP gave us the weekend to discuss the suits, yet the consensus already seems to have been made in like ten minutes. when we all do agree, i guess we agree pretty heavily.
I guess yeah

and sure we can stop for now i am gettign kind off tired myself and will soon go to sleep anyway

yo i take it your writers block has resolved itself?
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>>3735375
well, when you do go to sleep, i hope its pleasant.
yeah, got one story done about how each of the Gang did their Choices that i think came out really well, and am working on one about Veronica. probably wont finish that one til later tonight though, about to go meet my family for dinner. after that, got a few ideas, but we'll see how things go. i tend to work in bursts of energy that get alot done, but then can take while, even days, to build back up.
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>>3735384
i can understand i get those at times too. I have about 13 page writen down right now which i did in such a burst but i try to figure out what exactly happens next. my notes are clear but i am a bit hung up on how i implemented it and will go and rewrite part of it

It probbaly will be i am beat. day was long and boring with a massive meeting for most off the day but it was exhausting non the less
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>>3735352
Oh, the antimatter isn't in any high density. It's distributed across the entire belt, unless you're intentionally concentrating it for harvest with a magnetic scoop it's just going to be a bit more radiation from nanoscopic annihilation events. Nothing to worry about.

>>3735369
Sure, I get it. I think we could both cite all sorts of documents, but that does sound pretty tedious. Let's drop it.

>im also working on finishing a story so i can post it along with another ive finished, so im also heavily distracted by other things.
Oh, lovely, I quite enjoy those.

>speaking of more important endevours, do like how BHOP gave us the weekend to discuss the suits, yet the consensus already seems to have been made in like ten minutes. when we all do agree, i guess we agree pretty heavily.
Well, I'm not totally sold yet. I haven't actually voted. I'm leaning towards the Etain, but the others do have their points. I'll probably wind up voting for Etain, just because my main objections to the other two suits are that they seem kind of limited in concept, so the variable frame is the obvious compromise. But I'm still mulling it over.
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>>3735397
well, my thought is, sure, the Etain will never outmatch the Cliodhna is ranged firepower, or the Macha in raw melee potential, but it can still to great degrees do both to no uncertain acceptable terms. and more. want her to have a sniper? put it into her arm? want her to have melee options? put them in.

we also then are not stuck too to their drawbacks too. we could have melee build with upgraded boosters, or a sniper build thats actually a tank instead of a class cannon. the outright potential to mix and match and augment her at will simply is too good to pass up, especially when normal Daughter dont have drawbacks like that, Etain helps bring her closer in line with one and the massive advantages that entails.

that, and we can always make or acquire new or stronger relics for her, making it much, much easier to further upgrade her than the other two, which are only based off core level.

anyways, ill catch you folks later, will probably be on my phone, but its still an hour drive+ talking with family, so dont expect much from me til later.
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>>3735409
Yeah, that's more or less where my thought processes are going, too. Customization is just a really nice ability to have, and it gives great incentive for finding a Tier 5 Forge Core. Both boosts November's main enhancements and lets us make super-strong equipment to customize the frame with.

And good bye, anon. Have a nice evening with your family.
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sooo guys

im one vein away from getting caught up. does anyone wanna hear my opinion on act 2 :? or anything. since im about caught up
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>>3735157
>Etain
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>>3735478
Yeah, sure. How've you enjoyed catching up?
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almost done with work. will be back soon
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>>3735375
>>3735397
Am this anon
>>3735369
And did out of fairity did want to say one last thing thats a big 'my bad' on my part, in which most of what i was thinking about was involving normal humans with vastly different needs than cyborg's, which would probably change things very greatly.
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>>3735542
well. to be honest i didnt feel the emotional connection i heard everyone talking about for the whole situation quote from a discord message here

anyway as for the isabella fight it was nerve wracking but honestly even if i was in there i wouldve steeled myself/ just bite down dig in. it wsnt s emotional as yall built it for me sadly. i was kinda disapointed. im used to this kind of thing and its a frequent. Gina though. i kinda realized what was gonna happen because my mind flashed back to some of her abilities. and one i beleived she had. it was obvious she was gonna survive because i knew her abilities. well atleast survive in isabellas body.
im sorry im just not hrmm
I deal with these crazy senarios in my own stories. and realized what bhop was doing
so to say
I m a storyteller and i could see where it was going because Ive done a similar story in a different universe. so it really didnt effect me. lost betrayl. are common.
sorry if im not that emotional about it its just i see things differently


as for the rest. i really enjoyed all the power boosts that we have gotten . like just the huge difference.

reading the scenes leading up to the final battle was kinda amazing honestly. yall handled things well. i mean i regret not being there for a few close votes because you guys made a few choices that werent something i wouldve done and i couldve changed em with a single vote. but alas i came a bit late

also note. call me crazy but isabella is honestly one of my favorite characters. even if she died. . and honestly it was good she died despite the fact i loved her.

as for before with the monastary. I was thinking about how we couldve changed the events. though i wouldnt have thought of them before things got that bad so i guess i wouldve been in the same boat
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>>3735567
Don't worry about it, we're good.
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anyway. IM READY TO REJOIN YALL . well almost im like 1000 posts away
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>>3735589
>I m a storyteller and i could see where it was going because Ive done a similar story in a different universe. so it really didnt effect me. lost betrayl. are common.
Nah, I understand what you're saying. I experienced something similar when I was catching up on the archives before I joined the quest proper. A lot of things are more obvious when you're not reading them in the moment. You're less emotional, less attached, and have the benefit of things being a lot fresher in your mind since you binged them. We just got caught up in the moment.

>as for the rest. i really enjoyed all the power boosts that we have gotten . like just the huge difference.
The power buffs are pretty cool, aren't they? We went from dreading the possibility that we might fight the Midnight Crew to them looking at us as the insanely strong badasses that they're glad aren't their enemies. It was weird. But we've got really neat power sets now, and it makes for some awesome action scenes that BHOP has written amazingly well, and I just love it.

>also note. call me crazy but isabella is honestly one of my favorite characters. even if she died. . and honestly it was good she died despite the fact i loved her.
Not going to call you crazy, Isabel was a good character. Frustrating as all hell, sure, but ultimately I enjoyed where our interactions with her went. She was stupid and crazy, but stupid and crazy in a way that was engaging.

>as for before with the monastary. I was thinking about how we couldve changed the events. though i wouldnt have thought of them before things got that bad so i guess i wouldve been in the same boat
Yeah, I think we all think about the what-ifs for that one. Oh, god, the Monastery. We really underestimated how bad things were getting. Oh well, nothing to it but to move on and try to make sure nothing like it ever happens again.
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>>3735626
not sure your aware i was common in the quest back like threads 1-16 and then vanished for a few months. im just recatching up. you probbably heard. but i mean that probbably dosnt effect anything too much to be honest anyway ima vanish and read up vein 27 here. be back in 30 minutes top
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>>3735638
I have heard. I was not, I came in around Vein...18, I think? I was just comparing the situations, of being detached because you're reading something that's already happened instead of being there for it.
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>>3735638
Id actually be very interested in hearing when everyone joined in(as a voter) and how they think it affected them.

I dont think time spent in the game matters in terms of... Im not sure the word to use here. But it does seem to have affected how some view certain decesions and situations, and am simply curious about how others think this has changed their views and if they have noticed that at all themselves.
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okay im done guys and im here completly.
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>>3735689
Welcome to the present, please no generator abilites indoors. All Constructs are counted as pets and must be left outdoors if not leashed.
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Back from work. Lets see what I missed.
>>3735157
Dear bhop. you beautiful bastard.
I do have a question regarding November and Sam's new Armored Core Frames. Do they come with a Forge Core by default?
And what sort of Frame will Sam get?


>"Etain seems like a very appealing frame. Lots of room for further customization via Relics and upgrades, a simple look, a shape that can accept hugs, and a design that will let Dorian and Julia go Ham with the most important thing for custom made frames: an ace custom paint job. What do you think November?"

>"I do have a question however, what sort of Frame will Sam get? Will she get to choose what sort of frame she'll inhabit? And is it possible for us to keep November's old frame in-case of emergencies?"

>Connect with Sam's Gemstone via the Neuromantic side of the Dominus Bloodline, give Shu access to your sight and let her witness the veritable Costco-esque Warehouse of DO frames.

>"You seeing this Sam? I can't speak for you but I will tell you I am excited to see what sort of body they'll make for you."

>Ask Francine a few questions: "I know the launch date is 7 days from today, but is there a chance we can see the launch from a safe place up close like in a Mission Control Tower? If the Rocket launches, what parts of the original installation will be left behind? Is this entire Mountain the Rocket itself?"

>>3735689
So what were your thoughts and impressions of the quest from catching up?

>>3735172
For a second I was going to have to make a compelling argument about taking the Macha frame on impulse, but I had to read the update twice to understand the details. I think I'm now on the same wavelength as you.

>>3735294
Reminds me of a recent Chinese Netflix movie Called "The Wandering Earth", where Humanity literally turned Earth into a space ship. It's a very compelling movie.

>>3735696
And what about Artificial DO Frames?
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>>3735671
I joined in the thread where we went hunting and met Magpie. Can't remember which thread that was, Vein 18 or 19 I think. I'm not sure how that's affected my voting. Aside from some regret that I wasn't able to participate in earlier decisions, I can't really think of anything prominent. But it's pointless to speculate over how my presence could have influenced things, so I try to ignore that regret.

>>3735689
Welcome back.

>>3735696
Can you imagine Amara walking FuzzBuzz on a leash? That would be adorable. Just a girl and her bee, going for a walk.
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>>3735780
Well, said frame is the persons body, so sure.

>>3735797
Fair enough, though id still love to hear about specific decesions you really wanted to be there for, but up to you.

And yes, Amara walking her bee would be great. We need more scenes of her with her oversized pet.

Also, on a more on topic, er, topic. I mean, not sure if it is one, and it would a big can of worms, but talking to the gem daughters now might really be the best, as it would give them the option to possibly get a suit body. Not for free id imagine, im sure either they or us would have to pay some cost, but still, its another option we could offer them.
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>>3735780
i posted it here

>>3735589
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>>3735840
Yeah, we should talk to them. But maybe have Francine leave the room if we wind up giving them bodies? I mean, someone who looks exactly like her has been torturing them in the Dreamscape for a while now. Best to ease them into having to explain that there's a good West clone.
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>>3735797
Nah. Fuzz Buzz might be the type to be Amara's Headpet or a shoulder pet. Not like some dog on a leash. That would be either November's Tankdoggo, or Ringo itself.

>>3735671
I think the word you might be looking for is "Exposure"? Immersion? Commitment? Investment? I'm not one to shove words into your mouth to complete your thoughts midway (which apparently is a very bad habit of mine), I get the general gist of emotional feeling you're trying to convey and I can't help but throw out words to help you complete your thought.

I think I remember coming across Vein #2 by chance and fully joined the quest when it was in its second vein. I binged vein #1 when it was still on the board to get my self caught up shortly after. As for how it affected my voting; me joining early led me to invest heavily into the quest setting and what few characters that we've managed to recruit into the party early on like Isabelle. Seeing the nature of the quest showing a tragedy at every death (Was there during Holly's death) reinforced that notion and consequently had me grow a bleeding heart and go for the diplomatic solutions first before resorting to violence. So when the break-up with Isabelle happened, I was left with regret, kept mentally kicking myself for seeing the signs but not doing enough to stop the tragedy from happening, and wanted to do anything to get Isabelle back. But I was never outright angry at Isabelle the entire tiem. It might be why I got onto your nerves for showing myself as a constantly having a bleeding heart when it came to Characters like Isabelle and more recently, Sam.

As for the decision I was involved in and slightly proud of:

>Posted the write-in that turned what would be our First boss battle (against Julia) into an Art Critique.
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>>3735478
Nah, not really. We're good.
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>>3735589
I'm glad I'm not the only one who loved Isabelle as a character. She was a close ally who turned antagonistic in a tragic way, but she was very memorable and left a lasting impression.

>>3735626
>Monastery
It's gonna be one of those things that our minds (and by extension Shu) will sometimes go back to when it comes to wondering about the what-ifs.

On one hand, we lost a Monastery full of innocent daughters. There were many possibilities and character development routes we could have explored. Gemma, Uzu, Niku, getting to know Mara or our family members better in the comforting safety of the Monastery...

On the other hand, had the Monastery not fallen, our trying efforts and tribulations to bring down a being capable of causing an automatic Game Over if we failed to stop it, and the fact that we succeeded... we would've not maxed out Mara's social link, we would've had Isabelle still roaming around and being set up as the quest's Penultimate boss, and we wouldn't have gotten the powerspike we needed to actually go on the hasty offensive to stop Ozma's plans.

Lots of silver linings to be drawn there, but the weight of the tragedy that our blessings had to come at the cost of losing a surviving settlement of humanity will always be there.
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>>3735944
...Amaras Fuzzbuzz guardian is literally bigger than she currently is, its human sized.

>>3735898
sure, though id hope after all we did for them they would trust our opinion on her, but i guess they still might have some PTSD from the experience.

>>3735944
oh dang, didn't realize you had been around that long, neat. been here since the very start myself. i certainly agree it made things like Isabelles betrayal super impactful.

i think the thing i myself am most proud of is pushing to make sure we didn't consume Amara in her pod. thinking back on it it actually boggles my mind i had to fight for that, just doesn't feel like something anyone would consider now-a-days.
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>>3736039
And the thing that will really keep Shu up at night? Asking herself "What if the Monastery not falling means I didn't need that power?". Because no Spiraling Fear means the party isn't at the Town of Rust when B'Ni is, so Gina never gets eaten and Hexane Rewrites her, and Ozmas doesn't try to manipulate her into being a host body and B'Ni never hijacks the plan. We could still wind up having a confrontation with her later, but that would be after the party was stronger and maybe it could have lead to defeating B'Ni straight the first time. Or maybe it would have ended the same, with us still needing to Hexane Rewrite, only now we don't have the post-Fear power boost. Shu will never know. And that lack of knowing will eat at her, sometimes.
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>>3736082
What a debate that choice was.You and the one other anon that wrote: "Character is what you are in the dark" convinced me then and there to put the foot down and make the vote to spare Amara instead of waffling about and playing devil's advocate with passive reasoning.

>>3736116
Other thoughts will keep Shu up at night as well. She might go further back and think about Sam or how she treated Isabelle. How things could have gone differently. But the real world has already provided closure for Shu. Even our encounter with the Midnight Crew, and our forging of Friendship with them was the result of Spiraling Fear.
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>>3736157
yeah, that was a wild time, though i was surprised that quote had as much an impact as it did, m glad i said it.
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>>3735247
I do have a question that's bugging me now. Was there any other possible classes Amara could manifest as a newborn daughter (since it was made from the roll of dice) or was Amara preset to have the Skintalker ability when you placed her in Rust Town?
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>>3736359
(Oh, absolutely. She had a chance to manifest as a Hive Mistress with a powerset that another NPC you've yet to encounter employs to devastating effect, a mouse-themed Unnatural Predator with a curious host of plague-based powers, or a Phantasmal Conduit, whose 'imaginary friends' were the souls of the dead. Much like your own starting classes, all four reflected different aspects of Amara's personality and past.)
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(Also, before I forget.)
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>>3736424
(I'm headed to bed for the evening, so I wish you all a good night's rest, Gentlemen. I'll address any other questions that arise in the morning.)
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>>3735375
>>3735397
>>3736406
right, so two new stories of the Pepperbox Gang. i think the Choice one turned out good, and the one about Veronica im a bit iffy on but i think it holds some merit.

two small notes too. any ability revealed or gained ive added to their character sheets, so you can better see their skills as a whole. i also add all stories to the catalog at the bottom of their character sheets page, but in order that they happen timeline wise, not as i write them, just incase anyone is curious what order they happen in.

Choices Made;
Four short stories about when each of the Pepperbox Gang made their choice.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uXQEuA6Y_sTbtvRx9p_J39GonspUkaLAwtL1OeChMZE/edit?usp=sharing

Cards Night;
When a game of cards doesn't go how it should, it's up to Veronica to save her friends… no matter the cost.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JV1M02H-vVr9cWGP7qCkzp-6HzjUMxYV2qsq3oKZxbU/edit?usp=sharing

id love to hear any questions, suggestions, or criticisms of the stories, aswell as any scenarios you might like me to try writing for them. like always, i thank you for reading, and hope they at least entertain you all.

also BHOP, if you do find the time, the Choices Made one specifically id love to hear a more in depth review of your thoughts on it, especially any criticisms of how i did the choices or wrote mother.

>>3736428
have a wonderful night BHOP.
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>>3736445
(I'm looking forward to reading these, and thank you so much for sharing!)
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>>3736445
Oh, neat. I'd read them now, but I'm starting to crash. Gonna get some sleep, read them in the morning. Good night, thread.
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>>3736462
i understand, and just realized myself how late it is, haha.

>>3736453
>>3736462
you guys get your sleep, and i appreciate your willingness to give them a shot when you find the time.
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>>3735171
I do have questions regarding the interaction between the DO Frames and the Forges. First off. How will Fleshy Relics like the spine or the skin shawl interact with the metallic body frame of Etain? Will there be compatibility issues between Etain's functionality and certain Relics (like the IV Staff or Hydra's Heart, things that affect mainly flesh) due to the nature of the Daughter and the Artificial body frame involved? Can we design Relics that can only properly function with a Forgebody? Is it possible to design and create other Forgebody Frames or is this procedure and method exclusive to the soon-to-be-departing Disassociated Ones?

I may or may not design Forge-body exclusive Relics in that pay homage to Joker Quest.
>>3735157
>"Can I have the names of the engineers etch their names onto the chosen frame? It'll give us something to remember by for those who worked so hard in putting their skills and craftsmanship into these beautiful bodies."

>>3736406
Have a nice sleep and weekend. There's so much to pour over and so many potential new relics to think of.

Oh, I haven't done much in reading fanfics, I might find time to catch up on them...when I'm done theory crafting potential relics. Here's a few that I've thought up.

>SYNTH-SKIN: A quintessential relic for any artificial daughter that craves tactile touch sensations, this translucent sheet of rubbery skin wraps is worn like a pair of bridal gauntlets on a forgebody, upon wearing it, the relic automatically interfaces with the Daughter's Core Gemstone and recreates a pseudo neural pathway that allows an Artificial daughter to regain the sensation of touch. Hair follicles optional, Tattoo compatible, Cyber-punk classic. (40% Neuromancy, 10% Flesh Artisan)

>FACE-PLATE: Another Cyberpunk classic for Artificial daughters. A sheet of synth skin that stretches over the appropriate helmet and morphs into a facade of the Daughter's face back when she was still of flesh and bone. The FacePlate mimics the lip movements of the Artificial daughter as well, giving it the appearance of a human wearing a very advanced combat suit depending on the body type.

>Nanobugs: A cyberpunk classic relic. A modular pod that stores a veritable hive of nano-sized constructs that harvest the surrounding biomass to bring back to the pod for flesh-to-metal conversion, after which the hive embarks with their completed product to cover and repair the damage inflicted upon a daughter's forge body. Superficial "wounds" like cracked plates, rusted joints and actuators and surface damage can be easily repaired with Nanobugs, but damage done to the core frame (heavy Frame damage, core damage, severed limbs) will require a Forge. Son.
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>>3735671
I joined around the time we found out the monestaary was destroyed

I think it afffected me on a more personal level since having direct input made me much more invested because now it felt like any mistake and any interaction/relationship was partially my responsibility as well

>>3736445
I will read the stories when i get into the right headspacxe. I am currently to occupied with my own writings and preparations for the evening.

Though i look forward to reading your take on the choice
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>>3735671
I've been here for a while, since around the 5th Vein. I've seen and experienced lots of major stuff - the fights, the conversations, the heartbreaks, the victories. I've really enjoyed contributing to what Shu says during important moments, as I feel that my skills with dialogue can help flesh out a situation and steer it towards the best resolution possible.

Also, the vote marathons when selecting new powers are lots of fun, I legitimately enjoy those.
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So I found this video recently.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IHLYHy7__X4

Might be good for inspiration on species that went through the Crucible, and imagining how different it was for them.
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>>3736518
>>3736466
any thoughts on the Relics used for Daughters with Artificial daughters?
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>>3736428
Okay, I'm mostly sold on the Etain, I think, but could we get an example of an upgraded Relic? One that we're familiar with, like the Ignition Gauntlets or Remembrance Whistle.

>>3736445
Okay, read them now. I like the Choices, it's some nice flash-fiction insights into the characters. My favorite was Cajun's, just because it was simultaneously depressing and funny. Ozmas trying to do her usual temptation schtick, only to find that the other person is so bland there's nothing she can tempt her with. I feel bad for Cajun now, but I can't deny I was amused by it. Veronica's was more overtly humorous, with her not even wanting to listen to the Choice, but it was that bit of depressive pathos that made me favor Cajun's. Hera's was the most interesting, though, someone taking the Fool's Choice just because they wanted a balanced build, without actually denying Ozmas' temptation in the process. Oh, Hera, that's a bad move. On the other hand, I've read ahead in your story and I know you'll grow out of it, so I'm not too worried.

Cards Night was really fun. The slow shift from just a bunch of friends playing cards to Veronica realizing that she couldn't remember how they got there and figuring out it was a Neuromancy attack. Veronica's mind-eating power is pretty horrifying, but I like that she recognizes that and takes steps to make sure she never comes into contact with her Dream Daughters. And she remembers them all, despite not ever speaking with them. Damn, Veronica, turns out you've got some hidden depths. Poor Bretta, though.

>>3737090
I like the Synth-Skin and Nanobugs. Very good tools for maintaining the quality of life of an upload/cyborg. I'm not sure the Face-Plate is needed, though. We've seen that the Disassociated can have pretty human faces built in. Speaking of, is Sam going to have a face? After her comments about how she hated someone else wearing her face, I think it might help her sanity some to not be a faceless robot. It shouldn't have the same mistaken identity issues if anyone else sees her as her being organic, because she will be a robot and Shu obviously is not one.
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>>3737247
(Of course. For example, if the ETAIN frame was equipped with the Gauntlets, then in addition to the normal benefits granted by said Relic, then it would gain the addendum (ETAIN gains +1 Lvl of HEAT Resistance, HEALTH +200%, +ATK). Meanwhile, the Whistle would passively grant ETAIN a buff based on what words are installed in the Whistle, which would deactivate upon the Whistle's use. Finally, something like the Sui Tormentis would grant HEALTH +250%, 1 Lvl of Slash/Bludgeon Resistance, in addition to the base buffs.)

(I'll be going over the Relics this weekend and adding the additional text so you have a good idea of what it's capable of, since ETAIN seems to be the favored Frame thus far.)
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>>3737247
I feel like I could expand the range of the Synth-Skins to legs and other extremities as well aside the bridal gauntlets for the arms. giving a daughter the tactile feedback of having legs helps orient their sense of gravity and weight.

Also, I do have a Forge-body only combat Relic idea in the works.
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(Additionally, Sam will not gain access to any of the current Frames, so don't feel like taking one will grant her access to one of the two you don't pick. She will be granted an evasive Frame that mimics Epidermal Rogue's functions as a stealth/evasion-based model and, while potent, is not nearly as powerful as any of the three you're deciding between now.)
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>>3737423
Okay, so it's more about upgrading the frame with the themes of the Relic than upgrading the Relic directly. Interesting. Still very good, but not what I was expecting. Those stat buffs are really nice, though. You said the Etain has lower stats than November's current frame, but I guess the idea is that it can more than make up for them with the right Relics? I can dig that.

>>3737426
I had a vague idea last night for a Relic for the Etain called the Samothrakis Booster. It's a jetpack that doesn't require any Bio or Health spent by the user thanks to an internal reactor, but at the cost that the waste heat it produces does automatic damage to the user and is therefore best used by someone with heat resistance or immunity (i.e, November). The Etain buff would cause the exhaust to collimate into a pair of plasma torch "wings" that could be swept around to block incoming attacks or deal automatic Heat damage to enemies in melee.

The name is a cutesy reference to the Wings of Light from Victory Gundam, which inspired the idea. Samothrakis, Samothrace in English, is a Greek island whose ruins include a famous statue known as the Winged Victory.
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>>3737434
can we see a picture of it or are you saving that for the update?
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>>3737505
(I'm saving it for another update, otherwise I would post it. My apologies.)
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>>3737090
the first one im not sure is an issue? but a neat idea otherwise.

the second one i understand the idea of, but unless the helm is basically a flat surface wouldn't work or would look creepy as all hell. still might honestly.

third is alright, but more of makes me worried about introducing that into the world lore. nanomachines are a potentially powerful as all hell technological route to go down, is my worry i guess, past just what those ones specifically do.

idea wise though, mind you, all of them are simple but functional, nice work there.

>>3737423
hrm, so outside the relics normal functions its all just straight up stat upgrades then? i guess thats fair, and i still think its the best option, but not as interesting as i thought it was gonna be either ill admit.

>>3737434
hrm, wasn't actually expecting her to get a more powerful body than just 'a body' but alright. speaking of that, what, if that even was their choice, would Shu and Cos personal cost be for the other crystal daughters to get a body, standard or otherwise? still trying to convince others to give the poor saps the time of day, and unless the price is too high, it would feel wholly out of place to me for us not to offer them the same opportunity we are offering Sam, and this of course, is probably our only chance to do so.

>>3737247
glad you liked them, and am certainly glad Veronica's got a bit of humor to land. and yeah, i was worried Card Night might end up too depressing, but im glad it didn't cross the line too far to be entertaining at the very least. any suggestions or criticisms on them?

Cajuns is even more sad when you realize she might only be there due to accidentally tricking the crucible too, info im not worried about mentioning due to having no idea how id ever bring it up in a story, considering she herself doesn't know it. Im going off that One Anon check list of how one might be picked for the Crucible, as so far its the best estimate of why only some are picked we got. Cajun was massively drunk off her ass when the crucible landed, so 'tricked' it due to her 'extreme want' to find some way to get the tension out of herself, via a fight or something else. i guess, technically, she did get the first option.
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>>3737519
>hrm, wasn't actually expecting her to get a more powerful body than just 'a body' but alright. speaking of that, what, if that even was their choice, would Shu and Cos personal cost be for the other crystal daughters to get a body, standard or otherwise? still trying to convince others to give the poor saps the time of day, and unless the price is too high, it would feel wholly out of place to me for us not to offer them the same opportunity we are offering Sam, and this of course, is probably our only chance to do so.
Yeah, we should talk to them. Ask them what they want, if they want bodies or just to sleep for now or to hang out in our dreamscapes or whatever. Then if they do want bodies we'll try to arrange for that, then say goodbye to Sam, and then finally get to talking with Francine about killing the West Collective which I'm sure she's frustrated we haven't gotten around to yet. Sorry, Francine. We'll get to spiting your progenitor just as soon as we're done exhausting our spite with our progenitor and making peace with her.

Speaking of which, is it weird that I feel bad for what we said to Sam? Most of that came from my write-ins, and now I'm second-guessing how harsh we were with her. I think that maybe in my anger over Shu being called a hypocrite and my desire to set the record straight, I wound up being a bit hypocritical myself. Mostly in the "you just had to assert dominance" part, when the criticism was in its own way an attempt to assert dominance. I also think I could have done a better job explaining that extracting Sam was in fact an attempt to help, not just get rid of her, because we didn't know any way to keep her in our head that wouldn't make her suffer more. Maybe I'm overthinking this, though. I don't know, I think seeing her so pitiful after she's been this dreaded boogeyman the whole quest is messing up my ability to assess the situation. Which I'm sure is exactly the point, so good job, BHOP.
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>>3737614
i think you're beating yourself up over the immediate part of the picture instead of taking into account the entire picture, is what id think to say.
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>>3737636
Yeah, probably. I just want to end this on a high note, and Sam being completely broken down and pitiable isn't. Maybe she'll be in better spirits after she gets a body, though, and we can part on good(ish) terms.
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>>3737614
>>3737636
Back from work.

The moment we went to see Sam's darkest days of her life (the death of her biological Father and the Domestic abuse that followed) and seeing the effect of us ignoring her from that horrible first impression she gave us. I wanted to set the record straight and come clean with the hopeful promise that in the future, we can have further talks and get to know Sam better instead of getting the first impression bias that developed over the course of the quest.

>>3737650
It was honestly frustrating for me to see other anons keep on demanding for her blood and suffering and to leave her to rot or just execute her out of impunity.

I kept asking to "please consider the whole story, we don't have Sam's entire story, we only know the times Sam has suffered." only to be met with angry anons who dig in their heels insisting that 'Sam was always a bitch since birth' and ignore the point I was trying to make.

In the end I feel that this was our fault as much as it was on hers. She scared us at first meeting, we reacted badly, and she suffered. We could have taken another chance and tried to initiate the conversation on our terms but we were too paranoid and fearful at the time. And now 2 weeks later, both sides have been hurting badly and it came to this scenario. But I feel that the silver lining to this was that instead of repeating another Isabelle scenario where it ends in tragedy, the scene averted the worst case scenario.

But yeah. I agree with your sentiment. I don't want this to end with us seeing off Sam being miserable and broken down in the future from. The best I can hope for is that Sam and Shu can part on Neutral terms and Shu leaving the door open for further talks with Sam in order to get to know Sam better. And...I want to apologize to Sam for the harshness. Both Sam and Shu got off on horrible terms, and as painful as the talks were for both us, Sam, and Shu.
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>>3736406
That's quite a set of possible powers for Amara. Somehow I feel that we got away with the best possible power out of the four in hindsight.

And speaking of hindsight. Those other three powersets have given me further insight into Amara's possible past and possible personality.

>Hive Mistress with an unknown devastating theme
This probably pertains to her past. Her mother was a Factory Foreman, and Amara lived in Rust Town. Amara suffered a terrible Trauma (probably her mother dying on the job) and felt powerless to do something about it. It reflects Amara's desire help out and be very useful to her family. She originally wanted to help her mother out with her job pre-crucible before tragedy struck. And now as a skintalker with the abilities of Joyous Many, she's able to fulfill that desire by being literally everywhere when her family needs her.

>Phantasmal Conduit with the power to conjure up 'imaginary friends' (aka the dead)
She had a very lonely childhood. A Mining Town like Rust Town is not a place well suited to rear a child. She might even be home-schooled by her Mother, but that would stunt her childhood and leave her with no friends of similar age. Something had to fill the void though, so she resorted to playing make-believe with Imaginary Friends.

>Mouse-themed Unnatural Predator with plague powers
First thing that came up in my mind is that Amara's a cheeky girl. She likes to have fun. She probably acts mischievous frequently and plays pranks to entertain herself. If Amara had this core ability, her gimmick would probably be her playing a game of "plague tag". So Amara would literally be Jerry from Tom & Jerry. Ironic that the first Unnatural Predator Amara has now is having Cat ears and developing cat-like habits.
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>>3738195
>Sam better instead of getting the first impression bias that developed over the course of the quest.
thats not what happened nor is any of that why anyone continued to dislike her. its fine not to agree but dont lie about why people disliked and continued to dislike her.

we have no fault in this nor does she deserve or we have any reason to apologize to her.
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>>3738195
I don't feel too guilty for our actions in the past, because I stand by the idea that it's Sam's own fault that we considered her an enemy for so long. And once we learned that she was suffering, we tried to fix it, if in a somewhat fumbling manner. But I do feel bad for how I responded now. She's so broken down, it felt like bullying. Shu should be better than that. But you know, I guess I can accept that in this moment of frustration she got angry and said things she should be above. Shu's only human, if a human with several parallel thought processes running in real time (that's how I'm going to interpret Sam's comments about the swarm in her head, not anything fourth wall-breaking. Massive parallelism explains how Shu can come up with plans so fast, it fits for me). She shouldn't be expected to be perfect, just trying.

But yeah, I would like that ending, too. I don't want to be friends with Sam, I don't think that would be good for either of us, but I want to leave the possibility that some day we can at least interact on neutral terms. I don't want our legacy to include someone out there who was completely broken by Shu and remains fearful and resentful of her forever. Let's see her off with the hopes that she will recover and grow and become the better person that she claims to want to be.

>>3738231
>This probably pertains to her past. Her mother was a Factory Foreman, and Amara lived in Rust Town.
Personally, I'm thinking modular constructs. Swarmlings that are weak individually, but can combine together to make incredibly powerful gestalts.
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>>3738195
Bluh bluh, bleeding heart for the girl that was going to frame her oldest friend for murder. She got what she deserved, a bit of time in solitary confinement to sober her up to the fact that you'll get more out of being cooperative than trying to be a psychotic dick..

Can't fix a person like she was without breaking her down all the way and then building them back up. This is a fairly optimal outcome in my book.
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>>3738242
so a swarm of nuts and bolts and gears? oh. my. god. Amara would've been a Biological Technomancer. I'm imagining Amara with a huge swarm of Bio-Legos, constructing huge bio mecha, and then stomping the opposition.

>>3738232
I apologize for shoving those words into your mouth. I agree that I disagreed on the stance of "whose fault was it" and wanted to air my personal opinion.

>>3738250
You're not wrong. I'm just saying there were other ways to resolve this. But your point is valid. Sam needed her ego be broken down so we can show her where she went wrong and then help her rebuild herself in a better way. I can't disagree on that.
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>>3738254
>Personally, I'm thinking modular constructs. Swarmlings that are weak individually, but can combine together to make incredibly powerful gestalts.
is it bad im kinda imagining cuddly but deadly lego block constructs?

>>3738254
>I agree that I disagreed on the stance of "whose fault was it" and wanted to air my personal opinion.
and thats fine, what im against is that multiple Anon on both sides of the isle, regardless of what they want in the end, have mentioned stuff like
>>3738250
and more. im simply saying to say its only first impression biased is ignoring basically nearly every argument many Anons have made for why they think of her like they do, aswell as many other points of your argument? Venting? Statement? above. its one thing to disagree with the sentiment many have stated of 'Her past does not give her a free pass to her later actions', but your post very much states that Anons didn't think that or take into account her past. they did, they just, as stated, saw it as no excuse for her later actions, nor a reason to forgive them.

normally i wouldn't care, but unsure if its been you or not in the past, dont care, but its a pet peeve of mine to see arguments that are just outright ignoring the others point of view, not just disagreeing with them, and for some reason on Sam thats come up more than once, where a singular Anon will ignore why and what anons are actually saying, while the rest simply are discussing what and how far she deserves things over it. hell's sake i guess now im just venting as i dont understand it, as even with Isabelle Anons at least acknowledged why the other side thought like they did over doing this.
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>>3738254
>so a swarm of nuts and bolts and gears? oh. my. god. Amara would've been a Biological Technomancer. I'm imagining Amara with a huge swarm of Bio-Legos, constructing huge bio mecha, and then stomping the opposition.
>>3738277
>is it bad im kinda imagining cuddly but deadly lego block constructs?
I was thinking Erector sets, personally. But yeah, something like that. Some mechanical combining toy. If we go with the idea that Hive Mistress Cores always (without hybridization, at least) make animals, then maybe they could be based on coral polyps? I think that could be cute. Just this swarm of living koosh balls that harden their shells and then snap together into robots.
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>>3738308
im not sure, i think theres better options for actual practicality when it comes to a 'lego/machine' like builder hive look. but we can always just ask BHOP what it was gonna look like.

also, just an idea i had, thoughts? pretty simple mind you, but a kinda cheeky relic when you realize it could easily trick an opponent.

>PRISMATIC OPTIMIZER; this pure, refractive crystal bracer latches onto ones arm, and is then struck by any damage type the wielder likes, be it from themselves or another source, charging the crystal. From then on, the arm and any abilities or relics used by that arm, convert any and all damage they deal into the damage type charged inside the crystal, automatically ignoring one level of Resistances and bringing Immunities down to just high level Resistance, to the damage type they inflict. The arm itself also gains three levels of resistance to the damage type charged in the bracer. The Crystal accepts any damage type, elemental or otherwise. The damage type charged inside the crystal lasts until dispelled, and can be replaced in combat, but requires two ACTS to do so, one to dispel the charge, another to strike and recharge it.
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>>3738277
Not sure Coral polyps would work considering Amara lived in the Mountain Mining town. There would probably be something more fitting than coral to make such a modular construct.

Wait a minute. I have it. Bionicle. Amara as a Hive Mistress would make Bionicle constructs. Especially the Borhok Kal.
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>>3738341
>im not sure, i think theres better options for actual practicality when it comes to a 'lego/machine' like builder hive look. but we can always just ask BHOP what it was gonna look like.
Probably won't answer, he said that another character has that power now so it would be a spoiler if he did.

>also, just an idea i had, thoughts? pretty simple mind you, but a kinda cheeky relic when you realize it could easily trick an opponent.
I like it. Would be really useful for November, regardless of whether we get the Etain or not (why haven't I voted yet, what am I doing? Okay, I'll write up a vote after I finish with this post). All of her weaponry save her claws is Heat elemental type, enemies immune to that are a serious problem for her. She can do some damage, because they're Heat plus an appropriate physical type, but her output does go way down.

>>3738342
Yeah, Bionicle would work. With those little chitinous bug-mask things that control the bigger robots. That's good.
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>>3738342
As a fan of Bionicle, i approve.

>>3738365
My thought was its just somewhat cosmetic what they look like, to a degree, but i guess it might still give too much away maybe.
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>>3735157
>>Variable Frame – ETAIN

>>Write-In
>Try to contact the memory crystals of the recovered Relic Daughters, see if they're lucid enough yet to ask what they want to have done with them. If they want to be robots, we're probably in the best position possible to do it right this moment. Get Francine's opinion on the matter as well, she is the expert, but don't bring her in on any dreamscape conversations since a doppleganger of her has been torturing these poor girls.
>Also, if we get the chance, express admiration for Francine's work on these frames. Sure, she had seven other people helping her, but it's still damn impressive that she made three different superpowered cyborg battleframes in...what, six months, while working on other projects? Damn.
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also, not sure if the Anon who was interested is even around, but while i still dont see the point of it, it turns out GD has a trashcan feature i somehow totally did not see, so most if not all versions of past character sheets still 'exist', if they are interested in me trying to compile them or something for...i actually dont remember why they wanted more versions actually, but it is apparently an option thats still on the table regardless.
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>>3738341
Cheeky idea for a relic. But it would get its biggest use if it can hold multiple charges and hold its charge outside of combat. I wonder if it's possible to make it Modular and infuse the stored damage type into other weapon relics? Like elemental enchantment? (example: using Conqueror's Glaive, but then infuse Frost damage into the blade on-top of the Glaive's bleed debuff with the optimizer.)

Here's my idea for a relic.

>Shifting Swarm Shroud: A flowing ghost-like cape composed of a hive of miniature interlinked recursive platelings (worth up to 250% bio). The wearer gains 1 level of resistance against piercing and cutting damage with the shroud serving as ablative armor, reducing the damage of incoming attacks. In addition, the wearer can do the following with the relic:
>Jettison parts of the shroud to create afterimages to create confusion and feints.
>Spend half of the shroud hive's current bio reserves to create a mobile decoy.
>Spend 1 Act to create super dense fortress wall that locks down and protects the user in a small dome until the end of the round (Shroud Hive must have more than 100% bio in order to activate this ability).

This relic is basically Joker Quest's Assault Shroud. I'm trying to do my best to not design Relics that would turn November into Red Joker from Joker Quest, but it's hard when Bhop has already gave Ace a Golgotha look-alike.

And fuck. I just remembered. We need to record these relic ideas onto that doc.

>>3738411
dear lord. Yes, I was the one that raised the interest. Compiling the Character sheets for each vein would be neat for stat-tracking and seeing the general progression of each character as the quest goes on. Still. It's a massive undertaking.

>>3738405
If there's anyone in the room that's gonna express admiration for Francine's work, it's Rath. Rath's the resident /k/ and /m/ enthusiast, seeing Francine be involved in making literal robot frames and power armor for DOs instead of mad science biological dissection would raise Rath's opinion of the doctor.
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>>3738450
well, it can hold its charge outside of Combat. my thought was it would feel to powerful if it could store multiple and shift them at will, which isn't my style. i dont like to powergame. im uncertain of the second idea, aka, sticking it onto a Relic and having it just affect the relic. granted, im not against the idea, more of im unsure if and how relics interact with other relics.

>Relic
neat idea for sure. i dont know anything about joker quest though so it being related to it has no bearing for me, so take that how you will.

>dear lord. Yes, I was the one that raised the interest. Compiling the Character sheets for each vein would be neat for stat-tracking and seeing the general progression of each character as the quest goes on. Still. It's a massive undertaking.
really not something im up for, but if you want, ill restore them and dump them into a folder for you, then you can do with them as you please.
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>>3738450
I kind of want that for Shu. I'm not sure why, I just want Shu to have a cool cloak. I guess just because I think cloak plus armor looks really good, and also maybe because Charon wears a cloak and I think it would be neat to draw some visual parallels to them. But there's some practical use, too, Shu stays decently mobile and so after-images would be useful for her. Plus, since it's made of swarmlings, you might be able to justify her restocking its Bio supply in combat.

Also, a though just occurred to me: What are we going to do about November's tank? We've been kind of ignoring the Metal Geschoss, but it is important to her. Is there a way to upgrade that, too, so that if we need to take it into dangerous territory for whatever reason it's not at risk?
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>>3738490
actually, November said the tank was entirely on her for getting it working again, so it should easily be upgradable by November alone.

i dont think its weak either, its just its, well its big. its hard to find a place to properly take it, is the problem, not any vulnerabilities it has. we simply haven't gone or done anything where we can really use it is the problem.
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>>3738504
I assume at least some of its internals were modified by Francine, given that it now can perform life-support functions for November's cyber-body (side note: Will November still need that with the upgraded model?). So her expertise might be needed in some capacity.

As for it being weak, I mean that while it's decently strong, it's also probably not up to spec for areas closer to the Cord. I'd like to upgrade it for if we ever have to bring it in there, just in case it gets slagged. Though, if November's new body doesn't need the Geschoss for maintenance, then that wouldn't be a huge loss in that case.
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>>3738517
>>3738504
I think we need to ask Bhop about the power source that the upgraded frames use. Do they still use Forge Cores or do they run on a different power source? Also, the thought of the DOs hoarding Forge Cores to power their frames is ridiculous.
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>>3738533
they still use forge cores, see:
>>3735171
>Essentially, each one is a strict upgrade to her current form and allows her to narrow down the Forge Core Upgrades and squeeze out enough power to keep her viable well into the endgame.

also, for you or anyone else interested, heres the older sheets, go wild.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Z5G0cW8HNSwfywYtoWmR5w6VmvWQdmzy?usp=sharing
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>>3738533
I think they still use Forge Cores, at least the Cliodhna and Macha have Cores mentioned in their description. The Disassociated probably do have other power sources, though, I would assume that. No way they have enough for all those thousands of bodies. I imagine that the Forge Cores are just used for really high-performance models, and that the average cyberframe uses super-capacitors or some other "twenty minutes into the future" energy storage technology.
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>>3738538
>>3738536
It also raises another important question yet to be answered. "How does one create a forge core?"
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>>3738553
Something to ask our Hexane head-buddies. Silvis might know, they were a powerplant engineer. If not them, then maybe Charon's journal has that information.
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>>3738553
it might not be possible, as they are Hexxane tech made from methods before the Crucible. i mean, fair they are and were made to be compatible, but it could be a sorta 'locked out' feature where only the Crucible itself has the method/blueprint to make them, or even it cant and each one is basically a hold over from the last crucible.

but if it can be done, its either only T5s can do it, and/or it is related to that one piece of Hexxane tech we still have yet to encounter. id say probably the second one, as i cant see a T5 being able to make another T5, or not without something else being added to the mix to boost it.
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>>3738504
>>3738490
>>3737508

>Metal Geschoss
>Geschoss means "projectile" in High German
>"Projectile can mean bullet, missile, or slug
>Metal Slug.
>November can fire Grenades, has a heavy machine gun, Knives for fingers, and a shotgun.
>The "Metal Slug" Tank has a machine gun, a powerful, and can run and jump with its tank treads.

Okay Bhop, which metal slug character did you base November off of?
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>>3738685
>>3737508
Was it Fio Germi?
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>>3738685
actually, he based the tank on master blaster. November though no idea.
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>>3738689
He based November and the Tank together based on Blaster Master, I understand that because I was the one that pointed out the reference in the first place. What I'm pointing now, is the coincidental reference to "Metal Slug" the Arcade Games.
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>>3738277
Look, just because I don't couch my arguments in hugbox language doesn't mean I'm ignoring an anon's argument. To be frank, this is an anonymous japanese underwater basket weaving forum anyway, and there's way too verbose 'arguments' that go on for far too many posts and contain far too little substance for you to expect everyone who feels the need to interject to address every goddamn point someone's made. When someone appears to disregard someone else's arguments maybe you should try reading between the lines. For instance, in your referenced post, I'm not really ignoring the others' point of view but rather implying they're wrong from a basic level and any argument that comes from the perspective of 'someone who was honestly going to frame someone for murder deserves a shot at redemption' is not one that I can even acknowledge until my point has been demonstrated false.

If you can't read between the lines and need someone to write a 2000 word essay to refute somebody point by point, maintaining civil language the whole while, and not receiving any interjections from external sources, then go do it somewhere else maybe. Otherwise you should probably just consider carrying on as-is an exercise in getting over your pet peeve.
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>>3739261
er, take your own advice dude, and re-read my post? my post was not even talking to you at all, look again, all linking to your post was was giving the other Anon an example of the type of arguments he, not you, were ignoring.

there was no 'reading between the lines' in the other anons post, he was blatantly lying about what others had said and the points they had argued, simple as that.
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>>3738718
(Fun little facts incoming: Hotel November is phonetic alphabet for H.N., which happens to be Heather Neeson's initials. I came up woth Hotel November as an off-hand reference to the song Hotel California by the Eagles, which happened to be playing as I was conceptualizing the character, and is one of my favorite songs. The Metall Geshoss was based off of BOTH Metal Slug [as the name roughly translates to 'Metal Slug'] and Blaster Master, since both games are near and dear to my heart. Finally, and something that should be fairly obvious, her mechanics are loosely based around my initial reverse-engineering attempts at creating Joker Quest's system.)
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>>3739269
Aah, I see. Looked like you were talking to me and the structure was kinda confusing. My mistake.
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>>3739286
its fine. ill admit it can get iffy to tell when somethings a link to yourself or a reference to your post not intended for you, though im unsure myself of better methods to avoid confusion based around that.

>>3739276
oh, why you're (possibly) here, random question that got stuck on my mind;

>How would stuff like General Generators Succulent Sauce interact with Artisanal Appetites?
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>>3739276
so was November's Macha's based off of November's old Frame? because looking back on it, November's old frame unlocked new abilities and sub-routines based on the Forge Core level installed, and the Macha Frame does basically the same thing except the melee abilities have been boosted considerably and the weaponry has been tuned to plasma damage (which apparently is an all powerful damage type.)

Will Etain do the same thing like unlocked new subroutines and abilities if we install more powerful forge cores?

Because the difference that I'm seeing here is that Macha is mostly based off of November's old frame, where she unlocks new abilities when she installs stronger forge cores, but has additional powerful subroutines has been upgraded to plasma whereas Etain has the same subroutines as November's Old frame (like the shotgun and BAR) but swaps out the powerful built-in weaponry for being specialized in enhancing the Relics installed.
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>>3739286
>>3739276
>>3739269
>>3738718
>>3738538
>>3738376

Hey Guys just finished my latest entry for the Journeyy through Europe Story

Chapter 4: Encroaching Darkness 11.08.2019 *NEW*
The Crew reaches the Airport and first tries to supply themselves with some new clothes when they find themselves having to contend with the natives of the Airport

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1giSonKDh7mMT63kKbdCE_SYiuvGd1kCXkcDOFhvMxoM/edit?usp=sharing

I would like to get everyones opinions on how they liked it and what worked and didnt work for them.


>>3736445
As for your stories

Athens Choice
i liked the mech bit i am a suker for giant robots

It definetly made sense fo rher to choso ethat way even though she can not speak of them she knows her mistakes.

DAmn Cajun... Mother was completely unsure of what to doo. felt good watching someone so high and mighty and so full of themselves be like "The fuck is this i cant work with this" Gave me a good chuckle

Veronice.... I get the feeling the entire crew is just to weird for mother to handle.... adn Veronica just doesnt give a shit

Hera was pretty straight forward pretty much what i expected her to do from her description on the Character sheet but still interesting how she is so quick to agree to anything to get what she thinks she wants and then later finds it never needing to climb the cord at all


Cards Night. Certainly an interesting insight into Veronica. Pretty much wht i expected her to be on the inside, lots of Trauma and she i trying ot keep people at arms length not because she feels to little for them but she feels to much.

How she remembered all of them and where/why/how they died shows a person that at their core cares about people but has problems comping when they have to hurt other people once it is no long ernecessary
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>>3739317
sure, may take a bit but ill get your chapter read today for sure.

glad you enjoyed the stories at least. yeah, Athens is certainly a fun character to write. she has alot on her shoulders for her age, and ive been trying to make it show through at times how much that affects her.

i dunno why, but it amuses me how vastly different the two sides of Cajuns choice both you and the other Anon focused on were.

and yeah, Veronicas really fun to write for that, especially when its times like that where the other side of her personality is directly responsible for said trauma as it was.
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Just tried my hand at making a species that went through the crucible, like other anons did a while back.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iEqAnJXO1X_ttq7H-yVV4CqlRd2A_cCluShkZwjPRcE/edit?usp=sharing

Honestly, I'm not satisfied with how it turned out. I thought up the species before the story snippet at the start which makes it seem pretty bland and tacked on (which it is), yet I didn't show off the changed classes in that snippet which would've better justified its existence.

Maybe the next one will be better.
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>>3735157
Ammending my Vote from >>3735174
to

>Speak with Gina for a bit until West has set up the automation

>"So have you asked can they get you some murdertentacles installed?" wait shortly for an answer then continue "Anyway can you stay around here i will talk to Dr, Fran a bit about the options we can give our crystal daughters"
>Via the Cord "I also think i am a bit jealous that Beira stole Raths first kiss......"

>Then have a small talk with West about our Crystal Daughters before jacking in to them

>"These Suits look impressive Dr. Fran but i have a question about something. So these crystal daughters. How much would it cost us to get any one into a forged body? I want to have a talk with them and this would be useful to know beforehand..... Also i cant take you with me since they will probably be pretty pissed if they see your face."

>Then Jack into the Crystal Daughters
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>>3739317
Just read your latest chapter. I liked it.

For a second I thought Lydia was going to hybridize Cresent Eye with Raijin Charge.
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>>3739928
For a second I thought Lydia was going to hybridize Cresent Eye with Raijin Charge.

Not yet.....

Anything specific you liked about it?

Or that jumped out at you?
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>>3739933
The talking sword of course. Good on Slene for upgrading that. It's an interesting relic/power that may shape up into a character in its own right.
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>>3739952
Do you mean the Avenger or the RED BLADE?

The Avenger is something Mina has in her posession (that is the talking sword)

Selene has the Red Blade Power
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>>3739956
Ah. I must've mixed them up.
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>>3739354
not bad, interesting to see a race whos very biology made the crucible actually a living nightmare even compared to other races, yet whos culture made them think of it as a blessing, despite the fact both worked together to make them super ill suited for it. i do think you could've touched on just how much the immobile nature affected their crucible a bit harder, but not bad for sure.
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>>3738688
(Realized I didn't answer this; you're correct, it was Fio.)

>>3739293
(Two things; First, the sauce would take effect as normal, then if you decide you want to boost the stat gains of Elemental Digestion using it's augment, then it would take effect then. If there's a specific interaction you're curious about that eluded me, please let me know and I'll be happy to answer you. Second, every time I read that Relic's name it makes me chuckle like an idiot, so thank you for that small pleasure.)

>>3739297
(Indeed, it was. Each Frame gains advanced abilities with higher Forge Core levels, but Macha's the most distinct in that the Frame gains unuaula moves.)

(Your assessment is quite accurate, nicely done.)
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>>3740398
ah, well i was mostly curious how it would affect AAs ability to always show us Cores. would AA override the sauce and still show us the core, would GGSS override it and remove the Core as an option, or would the Core(and possibly others) basically just be auto-converted into augments?

also yes, it is a wonderful name, probably the best ive come up with so far. nothing wrong with the more formal names like the Sui Tormentis, but just doesn't have the same mental effect as something straight out of an old 70s-80s commercial.
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>>3740398
>Macha's the most distinct in that the Frame gains unuaula moves.
What moves? do you mean unusual moves? Because the only moves I can imagine the Macha-Frame having as unusual are straight up sci-fi tech like Hardlight plasma weapons (Lightsabers, Plasma Axes, etc.) and Manifold field systems that disgorge Fusion Annihilators and Singularity Cannons.

>Heather Neeson looking like Fio Germi prior to being stuffed into a Warframe.
I see you're a man with a refined palette of culture.
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>>3740426
(They would be auto-converted into augments.)

>>3740437
(Bah, I meant unusual, my apologies. As far as unusual moves, some would include making the foe detonate upon death, dealing catastrophic plasma damage to any other foes tethered to it or in range, or other, simpler ones such as allowing a weak-mid-range attack for every melee strike made as Macha generates throwing knives.)
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>>3739317
Overall Thoughts;
Not bad at all. They took a big risk honestly heading for the airport right away instead of going back first, but i guess they didn't want to have to make too many trips. Did feel a bit more straightforward than the last few, more of just going through the motions before and after the fight, than heavy character interactions. Which, mind you, nothing wrong with that at all, just something I noted. It was still done well enough to not be boring so good job there.

The fight was pretty good. Felt interesting seeing them so outclassed and only winning honestly out of luck it felt like. Dust Girl just had no defense against heat damage and was clearly setup for the usual 1 vs 1 a bit too hard. The sword is… interesting. Feels a bit powerful for how long the story has gone, but also feels like it might end up being more trouble than it's worth long term, we’ll see I suppose.

Otherwise nice little scenery bits hinting at some very deliberate damage going on, looking forward to seeing that explained.

I feel kinda bad for Lydia though. She really seems to want to get close to and protect Rara yet Rara constantly almost outright ignores her to jump to Minas side. Unsure why she cares so much but that still probably stings.

I will say at the moment Selene feels like she's just sorta there, but it also doesn't feel unnatural with how you write that, so it's not a complaint but more of an interesting note on her position in the party at the moment.

Good job, i'll say overall you are improving greatly, honestly, with only one thing I do want to note for your sake there was a few very minor parts where your speed typing/tiredness showed through. Take your time my man, its ok, trust me I understand but it does show you were working through grogginess a bit here or there.


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>>3740681
>>3739317
Minor/Oddball Thoughts;
(don't take this section too seriously mind you.)
>Selene formed a longsword instead of an axe to cut down a door.
as both a lover of axes and a lover of logic, c'mon girl, know your tools and what job they fit best with.

>Calcite Globs
honestly Calcite would more of just char and turn to dust, rather than melt. Bones actually closer to wood than stone, in how it operates, minus the whole super flammable part.

>Measurements
don't change them mind you, but as an american who doesn't use the metric system, its alot harder to visualize some of the heights and whatnot. a good example is my mind sees 'meter' and jumps to 'miles' but i quickly reel back as i'm like 'ok, no, that just can't be right.' for obvious reasons. just something I found amusing is all.

>I don't know what to title this one
another thing is our tastes in story aspects and parts of why we are participating in BodyHorror Quest could not be made more clear by some aspects of your story. not anything wrong with that really but it sticks out like a sore thumb to me.

>Rara
Just a fun thought of how strong a contrast she is to Athens, considering the two are about the same age. Rara is certainly more honest with herself it seems that's for sure. Athens probably wouldn't get along with her despite both being a bit more high class in attitude, due to being a constant reminder of the part of herself she tries to hide and ignore, that being the fact she's still a kid at heart.

As for her abilities, a saber is really a slashing weapon, a rapier would be more a thrusting blade.

>Page 12
I think here you got Rara and Minas names(and possibly dialogue) mixed up a bit at the top.

>Lydia and Selene
Totally imagined Lydia as a blonde. Both pictures really threw me for a loop as it wasn't what their ethnicity was described to be at all.

>Mina
Hard to tell, but it does feel like her Unnatural Predator ability is mutating her a bit slowly compared to what we have heard they do.

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>>3736445
>Cajun confusing Ozmas because Ozmas literally couldn't find anything good to work off of Cajun's history to do her usual theatrics
>The sheer impatience hinted in its tone when Ozmas interrupted and said "DONE" and gave Cajun the ability to be more accurate with her attacks, and then tried to half heartedly salvage her planned scripted theatrics before fucking off.
>Somehow Cajun still gets her aim thrown off by the other members of the pepperbox gang shooting the shits despite Ozma's choice.
I had a hearty laugh.

>Veronica asking Ozmas to hurry it up.
>Ozmas getting her funk thrown off so badly and so frustrated at Veronica.
>Ozmas stealthily insulting Veronica through the augmentation it gave Veronica (Labeling her a "Biblical bitch").
Veronica pls.

>Ozmas giving Hera the middle ground option with warmth and a smile because Hera's has the drive to win the cord.
Wow. Clever.
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>>3740725
yeah the Pepperbox Gang are impressive, just not in the usual and always good types of ways, and Cajun feels that all too well at times.

Veronica is way too fun to write at times. glad someone caught the insult in her ability.

yeah, Hera without a doubt was on the path to being one of those 'stop her at all costs' level daughters. Mother must be pissed as all fuck yet another one of her potential fallbacks fall through. honestly im just imagining her flipping through her notebook and grumbling in frustration as all her plans just seem to rot away. Even West is still mulling about not doing anything it seems... though granted, i have a feeling our actions have probably spurred her into action id imagine. we shall see i suppose.

love to hear from you(and any other anons) on my older stories too, though ill personally admit Heras Heart is probably the only other one id recommend, the other two i dont think are bad but im personally not as proud of, but, maybe thats just writer self deprivation? i dunno.
my next story is gonna take a bit to write, but involves a town being put under seige as a direct result of a certain Defiant girls recent actions, so im excited for that one.
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>>3740778
I just dawned on me. If Mother Ozmas was responsible for maintaining the Wild Amalgam population (She spends her token pools to respawn them) and we gimped her down to 3 tokens, wouldn't there be an incoming massive shortage of Amalgams for Daughters to harvest?

Because logically, the way that the Crucible world maintains the static status quo was that Ozmas spawns wild amalgams. Cloisters of Daughters that banded together to make settlements would venture out to harvest them and consume them to maintain sanity and keep the hunger at bay. Settlements too large would be culled by Charon or face a cascading collapse the Hunger Frenzy. Daughters on Cord Pilgrimage would prefer to hunt Amalgams instead of head-hunting other daughters to level up safely by picking and choosing their game.

But after Shu severely gimped Ozmas, Ozmas would theoretically not have the appropriate level of power to respawn all of the amalgams on the globe. It would theoretically cause a severe shortage of Amalgams for the daughters to harvest.
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>>3740849
oh yeah, ive mentioned that before, it could be entirely possible things are gonna go south fast because of that. it all depends on just how the automated part of the crucible works. the fact it can operate without a Admin implies anything she can do it can do to some degree, but the question is, is its automated systems on lockdown as long as shes around? or does it start activating as she runs out of permanent points? aswell as of course its limits in general compared to what an admin can do.
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>>3740868
I think this is a question that should be forwarded to Karma since she's an AI that has all the information Charon Reyva has and can answer questions that Charon normally can't answer.
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>>3740873
sure, we'll add it to the list.
...wherever said list is.
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>>3740875
It's a laundry list for sure.
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>>3740849
The Amalgam population was always meant to steadily be used up. Charon told us that way back when we first met them. It's precisely to prevent any sort of status quo or permanent stability and ensure that sooner or later someone will go for the Cord, if for no other reason than that the last remaining Daughter would be Hunger-mad and unable to resist the compulsion to climb it.
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>>3740892
well yes, but that doesn't mean things haven't unintentionally sped up significantly in that regard due to side effects of our recent actions, nor does it mean we shouldn't try and figure out to what level it has.
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>>3740896
Maybe. But we're pretty late in the Crucible's lifecycle anyway, it should already be going pretty fast. Something to investigate, for sure, but I wouldn't be surprised if our impact wasn't actually that big.
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(Gentlemen, posting shall resume approximately thirteen hours from now. I believe that the consensus is the Etain frame, and taking a bit of time to speak with the Crystallized Daughters and see what they want to have happen to them, and possibly transfer them to artificial bodies if you can. Is this correct?)
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>>3741151
Sounds good to me.
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>>3740896
Regardless, what it DOES mean is that our actions have accelerated the timetable and made things more dire and dynamic. We still have to climb the Cord and hack the system, it's just that we don't have the luxury of time and resources to go about our own pace.

Given our recent explosive growth and the stage of the Crucible, it's somewhat safe to assume that we're a group of low-level players whose made good use of the rare end-game loot and and the rewards gained from high-risk plays have propelled our family into mid-tier in raw power with the relics giving us the support to punch well above our weight class.

For the slice-of-life family time, I really really want to bring the family out to see the Disassociated Ones Rocket Launch. >>3734981 had a charming scene that I really want to see come to fruition.

Some Relic ideas (some of them possibly exclusive to Forgebody daughters):
>Spear of Dáinsleif: It was much too big to be called a spear. Massive, thick, heavy, and far too rough. Indeed, it was like a heap of raw material. With an obsidian bone shaft of extreme durability and a Spearhead even blacker and denser than the shaft, this "spear" ignores 2 levels of bludgeoning and piercing resistance. This relic cannot be lifted by anyone except by daughters who have either invested enough strength augmentations of Fibromancy or inhabit Forgebodies, and even then it is wielded with great difficulty. However it's true power is not as a melee weapon, it is used as ammunition for heavy weapons. Taking 1 entire Round to load and another round to fire, with the projectile launching at the end of the round. When fired, the spear ignores all resistances and deals true damage to the target it hits (always apply the critical hit modifier when calculating damage). A veritable war crime for Iron orphans of war that know no peace.
Internet points to those who can guess the reference the relic is actually based off of. Hint: It's one of the shows from the Gundam Franchise. Which Franchise I won't tell

>Crimson Jester's Blood-Iron Masque: The terrifying BloodBrass visage of a fool who deals death as the setup, punchline, and tagline of his never ending joke of eternity in a world of Red and Black. Activating this relic automatically reduces your hp by 20% of your total maximum hp in exchange for augmenting the wearer's speed agility and perception. The wearer will never be unaware no matter the circumstances and will automatically counter any sneak attack and ambush. In addition, by spending 5% of their maximum hp from their current health at the start of a combat round, the wearer can fuel the masque's power to give them a burst of speed, ensuring that they act first at the start of combat, and given heightened initiative in the following rounds after combat has begun. First to act, last to laugh.

Your thoughts?
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Right, getting around to comments on writing. Sorry for being so late on it, been kind of sick today and having trouble focusing on text.

>>3739317
Okay, I am loving the Avenger. It's like Karma, if she was much more enthusiastic about being an agent of destruction. This thing with the Morrigan is interesting, too, lot of weird mental entities in Mina's head. I look forward to finding out what that's about. I'm a bit confused why they went to the airport, though, I'm not sure what they expected to find there. All the other machines have been destroyed. But hey, they found a chopper, so good for them. Gonna take a lot of work to make it flight-worthy again, though. Is that going to be their next adventure, having to perform some quest to barter for the parts and tools they need to repair it?

>>3739354
I like these guys a lot. You've got some creative takes on their unique class types, , some great pathos in their misinterpretation of the Crucible, and the description of the countless little fortress-shrines they made as they communed with the divine was really cool. Just these bunch of zen fungus-people, not even realizing what's killing them as they're too busy meditating, until they inevitably turn into monstrosities.

>>3741243
>Internet points to those who can guess the reference the relic is actually based off of. Hint: It's one of the shows from the Gundam Franchise. Which Franchise I won't tell
Iron-Blooded Orphans. It's the Dainsleif railgun, you even named it the same thing.

>Your thoughts?
Pretty cool. The Dainsleif is a nice heavy weapon, definitely something we should forge if we ever need to hunt another behemoth-class enemy. The Masque is also pretty strong, though with enough of a cost that it's not overpowering. I would change the numbers, though. Not the actual magnitude, just things like "one fifth" instead of 20%. Given that Health is already in percentages, it can be a bit confusing.
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>>3741151
That appears to be where we're leaning, yes. Variable mecha frames and talking to crystals, what's not to love? Actually, we should maybe ask Francine what she was planning on doing with the crystals, is there a procedure she has for cases like this?
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>>3741151
Here BHOP, so you don't have to dig through all the discussions for it.

>>3735172
>>3739885
>>3735223
>>3735525
>>3735780
>>3738405
all Frame Votes... well all votes in general actually, as everyone has voted for the Etain thats voted.

>>3735172
>>3739885
>>3738405
Votes to talk to our Crystal Daughters

>>3739885
Vote to talk to Gina

>>3735780
>>3738405
>>3739885
Votes to talk to Francine

>>3735780
Vote to talk to Sam
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>>3741151
>>3741339
we also yes are willing to transfer the crystal daughters, but if thats what they want of course. whichever of the many choices they have they want is theirs to choose.
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>>3741243
well, Mara is buying us at least some time and we still probably have a little bit of wiggle room. but yes things are certainly getting closer to time to crunch, we just also dont need to let panic rush us towards the cord too fast either.

>Spear of Dáinsleif
its neat, but id change the wording a bit. technically, Forgebodies are not stronger in physical limits than other bodies, in terms of weight they can carry, we have no reason to assume one would always be. its also entirely possible non fibromancer abilities could add strength, so on both accounts i think it would fit better to just imply a strength cap, rather then limit it to two arbitrary things that might not even be the case.


>Crimson Jester's Blood-Iron Masque
20% and 5% seem pretty cheap for those effects. unless you are pulling a BHOP and forgetting our stats are done via percentiles and you mean something like 20% of the whole 1600%, meaning you lose 320%.
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>>3741401
>20% and 5% seem pretty cheap for those effects. unless you are pulling a BHOP and forgetting our stats are done via percentiles and you mean something like 20% of the whole 1600%, meaning you lose 320%.

I meant the whole 20% of the maximum and such by the meaning of like 20% of the whole 1600% hp, meaning you lose 320% hp.

In hindsight I should have worded it using Fractions to imply that it was taking a percentage of the total maximum to make the cost scaling with the daughter's powerlevel.
>Activating the relic reduces your hp cap by 1/5th of your maximum hp. Spending 1/50th of your maximum hp at the beginning of a combat round grants you increased initiative, and guaranteed to act first at the start of combat.
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>>3740685
Oh yeah the Saber Part i could have sworn i changed it back into a rapier....... Must have missed that in me taking it over from the Write up sheet

A lot of Minas changes have been to her internal anatomy as well. She is changing but i havent described the changes as much recently

>I don't know what to title this one
>another thing is our tastes in story aspects and parts of why we are participating in BodyHorror Quest could not be made more clear by some aspects of your story. not anything wrong with that really but it sticks out like a sore thumb to me

sorta like you being here for funny character moments and I more for pure Awesome?

>Selene formed a longsword instead of an axe to cut down a door.
You know that i know that Selene dooes not. She just formed what came into her mind first

>>3741319
> I'm not sure what they expected to find there
Mina hoped that with enough wrecks they could salvage one
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>>3741538
>sorta like you being here for funny character moments and I more for pure Awesome?
no, those are both reasons im here.
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>>3741542
If you dont mind me asking then. What do you think are the reasons I am here?
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>>3741546
well, i wasn't saying those weren't reasons you were, just not as much as other reasons, but i was hoping the joke on the point was more obvious but my bad for it not being so.
shipping and yuri nonsense. many of the things you write hint at that type of stuff heavily. its actually stuff i really dont like and prefer to avoid, while you actively encourage it and have points in your story that could be seen as such, while in mine i actively avoid even accidentally implying as its not story points i want to encourage.
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>>3741557
Ah okay those things......

Now i understand what you mean. sorry for not picking up on it. I just got out of bed like 40 minutes ago to get ready for work so my mind is still in sleepmode

And with that i am off to work have a good Night Anon
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>>3741566
later Anon,hope works not too bad on ya.
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>>3741557

Am this Anon >>3741566
now at work

Did those things reduce your enjoyment of the story drastically?

Or is it more annoying you than anything else?
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>>3741678
not too much, but you shouldn't take me mentioning it too hard to heart. its just not part of my personal tastes and didn't affect the actual quality of the writing. if its what you enjoy writing then write it, i still greatly enjoy the other aspects and one person's opinionated tastes shouldn't stop you from writing what you get enjoyment out of. id of course be lying if i said it didn't affect my enjoyment at all, but would be absurd of me to say its your fault or on you to change anything about it over it, because its simply based off objective taste that you couldn't ever change. it was otherwise not poorly written either, for what its worth, just again, even perfect writing of those aspects of the story wont be as interesting to me due to my particular tastes in what i want out of a story.

really, in general its more ive seen similar elements put into a story thread and people push it too hard and try and force those elements to overtake the story, so ive just been turned off to including them at all, rather than naturally disliking their possible inclusion, and is why ive been not entirely silent when people try and interact with those elements.
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>>3736445
well, seeing as how I just cannot properly fall asleep for some reason, ill just put one of the questions on my mind up, maybe that will help somehow. would those interested in the Pepperbox Gang be interested in or like for me to actually make them fully fleshed out character sheets? i was against it originally due to the non-linear nature of how i write for them, but if its anything people are interested in its certainly something id enjoy making. that, and my latest story will be more or less caught up with the current timeline, so it might help put things in perspective perhaps or something.
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>>3741920
I could take it or leave it. It would be interesting, but not enough that I'd push for it if it was a hassle for you.
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>>3741926
hardly would be a hassle, would even be fun and help give me something to do at times, but just not enough of so if no ones interested in it.
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>>3741695
Okay sure just wanted to make sure it wasnt a total dealbreaker I quite enjoy detailed responses to the storys i am writing so thank you

>>3741920
Sounds interesting if you make them i would be interested but i dont require them.

We got their Key powers but i wont ask you to make them if you feel your time is better spend elsewhere

The Main reason i made the character sheets like they are for the main Thread was so that i could give people the possibilty to understand how Minas and company powers worked, what their limits were and how it progressed throughout the story
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(Writing now, Gentlemen. Apologies for the wait, as there were a series of chaotic workplace events that prompted the delay. Things are slowing down, so I'll review what I've written as post as soon as I am able.)
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“Hmm…” November muses, playfully tapping a talon on the chin of her rusted helm before turning to Rath. “If you were to choose, which one would…”

“Etain. Friggin’…yeah, no question.” Rath answers, her reply immediate and gushing. “Think about it! I get better at making Relics, then you get better at wrecking face, it’ll be…holy fucking shit it’ll be so badass!”

“Etain it is, Doctor.” November chuckles, and Francine busies herself with some minor preparations as Rath continues rattling off all the Relics she plans to craft for her patient Aunt. Glancing towards Gina, you open the Crimson Cord even as you turn to walk over to Francine, a flurry of information passing between you and your comrade in an instant.

[Going to see if Fran has the resources to give these Crystal Daughters bodies, if that’s what they want] You say, and a pulse of appreciation warms your heart from the other end of the cord.

{Aw, yeah, that’s…wait} Gina hesitates, your other topic of conversation automatically filtering into her mind’s eye. {…Wait, Beira…bitch did what?! That’s seriously not okay, is Rath…!?}

[Yeah, I think she’ll be fine. She’s a little stirred up about it, but I think if we’re there for her then she’ll start to open up a bit more. Girl's processing a lot, and she'll open up when she's ready] You conclude, clearing your throat to catch Fran’s occupied attention. She rounds on you, her eyes wide as she suddenly realizes how close you are.

“The crystallized Daughters that Cassandra exorcised;” You begin, glancing towards the legions of artificial bodies hanging on the racks high above you. “Is it possible to get them machine forms, if they want them?”

Francine follows your glance, weighing the question for a long moment before voicing her reply.

“…Potentially. You have an empathic field, correct? The result of your Choice?” Francine segues, and with a nod you open the channel to her for privacy.

[Open. Go ahead] You speak directly into the Doctor’s mind, a small smile tugging at her lips.

“Ah, lovely. Not quite what I expected, really. It’s a far gentler interface than I…” She titters, pausing her assessment of your channel when you arc an eyebrow at her. “…The Daughters, yes. I may incur some…disfavor with the Disassociated, but it’s the least I can do if they desire rebirth. I can…I *will* make it happen, if that’s what they want.”

She gives a little shrug, her coat-clad shoulders more angular than even you’d imagined.

“It’s the least I can do, after what West put them through.” Francine finishes, casting her gaze towards November.

“Ms. Neeson, if you’d be so kind? I can go ahead and start the process, if you’d like.”

November glances at her Niece before reaching out and squeezing the girl’s shoulder affectionately, giving her a nod as she follows Francine deeper into the facility.

(Continued)
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>>3742330

“Oh, and one other thing.” Fran adds, just as she and the hulking warrior round a corner and disappear. “My room is likely the comfiest place in here, so make yourself comfortable, if you wish.”

You nod, turning back to Gina with the Relics in hand. A short walk later, you, GG, and Rath are trying to get comfortable in the cramped, messy space, with a horde of Swarmlings working around you to tidy up the Doctor’s room as the three of you settle in. Crossing your legs on the couch Gina does the same next to you, while Rath sits backwards in a rolling chair recovered from the corner of the room, freed from the avalanche of magazines it’d been buried beneath. The younger girl crosses her arms, resting her chin on her forearms as you place the trio of Relics in your lap, looking to Gina.

You’re ready, and so is she.

When you next open your eyes, you’re standing in a barn, the warm light of spring outside illuminating rolling fields of green and a sky of peerless blue. Hay crunches underfoot behind you, and you turn to see a tall, well-built young woman in overalls, striding up to you, coming to a stop two yards away as she regards you with dark green eyes. She folds her tanned arms, making her muscular forearms even more pronounced as she looks you over.

“You’re Shu, right?” She asks, a pleasant southern drawl hanging on her words. You nod, and she nods as well, glancing behind herself and back towards the white, two-story house that rest atop the hill a further ways off. “I’m Jessica. I’m guessin’ I got you to thank for getting me out of that Nail, right?”

“Good to meet you Jessica.” You reply, and before you can follow up she’s already asking another question.

“My sister Jan and I, we got separated. I’m not sure what Relic that Doc put her in, but did you fi…”

“Jess!” A voice shouts from behind you, and you turn around in time to see a slender girl with glasses dart past, her long black hair trailing as she leaps into Jess’ arms. “The Spine was…god, I was so scared, but you’re okay!”

Jessie catches her sister in a bear hug, spinning her around as the barn rings with their relieved laughter. Past them, an older woman peeks around the barn door’s corner, her dark skin and brown eyes lit by the sunlight that shines down from the cloudless sky. You give her a little wave, and she reluctantly steps out from behind the doorframe, smoothing the lines out of her professional suit pants and jacket.


“Sorry to interrupt, but…you’re Shu, correct?” The woman asks, obviously the oldest among the Daughters gathered before you. She strides forwards, heels clicking awkwardly on the barn’s concrete as the dark-haired sisters regard the stranger in silence. The older woman stiffly thrusts out her hand, and when you take her offer she gives your fingers a firm shake.

(Continued)
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“Shauna…I was a Generator, and then I was in the ‘Cannon’ as you call it.” She begins, glancing around the rustic space before turning her attentions back to you. “And now I’m…dead, it appears?”

“Not quite.” You reply and, catching sight of the sisters’ alarm at Shauna’s hypothesis. You take the lead, telling them what happened, how they were found, and where they are now. The sisters take a moment to process while Shauna seems more intrigued at the turn of events, than anything. After everyone present has had a little time to process, you slowly begin to detail their available options. Jess is the first to answer, holding her sister close with one arm thrown around the slender girl’s shoulders protectively.

“There’s no point in going out there again, if I’d just be throwin’ Jan back into that flesh’n bones bullshit. If we can help you, I’ll do it.” Jess says, looking down at her sister. “But I want to stay by her side, and she’s not going back out there again.”

“Understandable. Shauna, your thoughts?” You ask, turning to the dark-skinned woman to your right.

“I feel similarly to the girls, yes.” She replies with little hesitation. “I’m not keen on going back out there, but if my consciousness could be bound to something that could assist you in your endeavors, then…I’d be amenable to that.”

>>INDOMITABLE STONE (Consumable Forge Item): The essence of the powerful, resolute Jessica North, binding this crystal to a Relic allows the item to either 1) Increase the user’s base attack damage by 20%, or 2) Grant the user one level of resistance to SLASH, BLUDGEON, and PIERCING damage.

>>BRILLIANT CRYSTAL (Consumable Forge Item): The essence of the keen, quick-witted Jan North, binding this crystal to a Relic allows the item to either 1) Reduce the cost of Neuromancy or Phantasmal Conduit effects by 30% BIO, or 2) Grant one level of resistance to Neuromancy OR Conduit emotional manipulation.

>>VOLTAIC CRYSTAL (Consumable Forge Item): The essence of the eclectic and ingenious statistician Shauna Hayes, binding this crystal to a Relic allows the item to either 1) Grant ELEC immunity to the user, or 2) Change the damage type of the Relic to ELEC and increase the damage the Relic deals by one level.

“…Thank you for being willing to help, everyone.” You say with a smile. “I don’t blame you for not wanting to go back out into the Fleshscape again, and I appreciate your willingness to stay by our side.”

Well, you have your answers. Now all that’s left is to decide where to go from here.

>>Exit the Dream, and talk with Gina and Rath over some things you’ve wanted to bring up to them.

>>You figure you can just kill time in the real world until Francine comes to retrieve you, and then you can get started on Sam.

>>Speak with one or more of the Dream Daughters present…or one of the ones available to you now, if possible.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, thank you so much for your patience. Voting shall remain open for the next two hours, and I hope your Monday is going well.)
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>>3742338
>Speak with the three girls before you.
>Get to now them personally.
>Then, ask them if they know any interesting places or happening in the fleshscape.
>Finally, ask if they know anything that might help against West, as unlikely as it might be.

>>3742340
hey BHOP, you said once in Relics they would act similarly to the Contender, does that mean those are just their starting level 1 choices essentially and they would still level up with use, but with less potency in what they give?

also, im more than fine keeping the sisters together if thats their request, but it does mean where we put them is all that more important. could easily just choose an armor set and go for the defensive upgrades.
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>>3742338
>INDOMITABLE STONE
>BRILLIANT CRYSTAL

If we put these together into a relic these could become really useful either for Rath or Gina


>Speak to them for a short while. "We will see about keeping you girls together, should be possible. YOu can hang out for a while if you want to. I am sure Gina can keep this up while we are going to discuss something in the waking world"

>Exit the Dream and talk with Gina and Rath

>"So girls i want to know how did you perceive our good Dr. Fran? What are your impressions of her right now?"

>"Gina already knows this but i would like you to know as well Rath. Dr. Fran wants to start adventuring and Cassandra told me she wanted to do it together with us. I know you have bad memoires of West buti think Francine is different and safe to keep around. We did a check which returned something interesting"

>Look at Gina and tell her over the crimson cord "Could you show her like you showed me?"

> After both had said their part

>"How are you feeling of letting her join us?"
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>>3742348
(Ah, I meant that they could be interacted with like Karma in the Contender. However, spending time with them does have a chance to enhance their effects, much like with standard Dream Daughters and their abilities. The Contender's level-up frequency is unique. Apologies for the confusion.)
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>>3742357
ah dang, but alright.
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>>3742355
I feel like this should also include a discussion of the fact that Francine has suicidal ideation and thinks she needs to die along with the rest of the Wests.
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>>3742357
When Jess and Jan say that they don't want to be split up, does that mean they'd like to be forged into the same Relic, or that they just don't want one of them to be a Relic and the other have a body. Like, would they accept being a paired set of Relics? I'm having trouble imagining a Relic that conceptually fits both their bonuses to Relic creation at the same time. I guess some sort of psychic Faraday-mesh subdermal armor?
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>>3742376
(The North sisters would be alright with being in separate Relics as long as they remain with the party. One being a Relic and the other in a body wouldn't sit well with them, however.)
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>>3742355

>Speak to them for a short while. "We will see about keeping you girls together, should be possible. YOu can hang out for a while if you want to. I am sure Gina can keep this up while we are going to discuss something in the waking world"

>Exit the Dream and talk with Gina and Rath

>"So girls i want to know how did you perceive our good Dr. Fran? What are your impressions of her right now?"

>"Gina already knows this but i would like you to know as well Rath. Dr. Fran wants to start adventuring and Cassandra told me she wanted to do it together with us. I know you have bad memoires of West buti think Francine is different and safe to keep around. We did a check which returned something interesting"

>Look at Gina and tell her over the crimson cord "Could you show her like you showed me?"

> After both had said their part

>"Right now she has suicidal tendencies and thinks she needs to die with the rest of the West collective. Cassandra thinks she is a decent person and i think she deserves a chance to redeem herself. And maybe even learn to ..... pardon me dissacoiate from the West collective and their deeds. How are you feeling of letting her join us and givin her a second chance and puropse?"

>"I know that she may decide to die with the rest of them when the time comes but maybe we can make her realize that she can helpo the world far better as a physical person than a Dreamdaughter"


More something like this? I took into accaount all the information we had from our encounters with her up till now and what Cassandra told us about her
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>>3742376
i think they want to be in the same relic, so they can still directly interact with eachother. and if we go for the second choices they easily thematically fit together, as both are just extra defenses. which, honestly, seems like a really good deal to me.

honestly my votes probably just to put them into the Tormentis probably. cant think of any other relic we have that they would fit better in, and we certainly dont need another set of armor.

>>3742385
>>3742376
ah, well alright. i still think it would be a nice gesture though to put them together, and their defensive additions certainly pair well together too.
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>>3742388
I have to agreee puting them into the Tormentis is the best place i can think of now.

No other Armor relic we have is as used as the tomrentis and resistances are always very good to have for a brawler

They also could not be sepperated again

>>3742385
One Question OP
What would happen if the relic they are in gets destroyed? Like in annihalated or devouered by an ability like Jullias?

Would they persih or be spit out and could be collected again?
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>>3742338
>Talk with Gina and Rath.

>Ask Gina and Rath of their opinions and impressions of Francine. Discuss the fact that Francine's developed a death seeker approach when it comes to seeking atonement for the atrocities of Francine West Prime and the other proxies.

>Show Rath the Francine's Character Sheet, highlight the Defiant puppet augment.

>Speak to the girls: "We'll try and figure out some good reliable relics to put you three in. Jan and Jessica? We'll do our best to put you two into a paired set or a singular Relic if possible. It'll take time, and biomass, but it'll be worth it."

>>3742348
I think Jessica and Jan should be paired up together and used as Defensive Relics for Gina. the Resistances to Slash, Bludgeon, and piercing damage would do good for her while increase in Neuromancy and Conduit resistance would give Gina a better edge fighting against other Phantasmal Conduits and Neuromancers.
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>>3742391
eh, i just dont think Gina will come under fire enough to prioritize her gaining those boons compared to Rath, Dorian, or Julia.

>>3742390
yeah, plus, the two Sui suits technically dont give any Resistances so its a major aspect they are missing.
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>>3742401
didn't we discuss to have Gina take a more active combat approach now that she's got suitable physical core abilities to fight on the frontlines? we gave her the core abilities of Eloise, Meg, Bella, and Kosi. Some of those are pretty useful. That and the fact that Aside from the Spine which enhances Gina's Core hybrid, she doesn't have much in the way of other defensive relics or physical combat relics.
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>>3742410
yes but just like Dorian she would still be more of and excel greater at being a supporter of the frontline, not the actual frontline, meaning someone else should still be protecting her and taking the hits for her whenever possible. to do that, they need to have much greater defensive measures then she will ever need, and will be much more likely to ever need those upgrades too.
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>>3742338
Ammending my vote from >>3742355

to
>Speak to them for a short while. "We will see about keeping you girls together, should be possible. YOu can hang out for a while if you want to. I am sure Gina can keep this up while we are going to discuss something in the waking world"

>Exit the Dream and talk with Gina and Rath

>"So girls i want to know how did you perceive our good Dr. Fran? What are your impressions of her right now?"

>"Gina already knows this but i would like you to know as well Rath. Dr. Fran wants to start adventuring and Cassandra told me she wanted to do it together with us. I know you have bad memoires of West buti think Francine is different and safe to keep around. We did a check which returned something interesting"

>Look at Gina and tell her over the crimson cord "Could you show her like you showed me?"

> After both had said their part

>"Right now she has suicidal tendencies and thinks she needs to die with the rest of the West collective. Cassandra thinks she is a decent person and i think she deserves a chance to redeem herself. And maybe even learn to ..... pardon me dissacoiate from the West collective and their deeds. How are you feeling of letting her join us and givin her a second chance and puropse?"

>"I know that she may decide to die with the rest of them when the time comes but maybe we can make her realize that she can helpo the world far better as a physical person than a Dreamdaughter"
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>>3742391
also, theres no reason to have Jan and Jess not be in the same relic, and it would allow them to more directly talk and interact with eachother, which i think they would prefer still over being individual relics.
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>>3742422
Still, I do want to invest defensives Relics for the Frontline Support. That way they can survive the backline assassins.

It does make me wonder though... has there ever been a Daughter who does exclusively backline fighting? I can imagine her solo playthrough would be akin to a Hive Mistress playstyle, but how would that mesh well in a group?...wait Shu's technically a backline fighter.
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>>3742390
(There is a small chance that their conciousnesses could be salvaged, but there would be a high risk of their death should the Relic be destroyed or consumed, I'm afraid.)
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>>3742441
Shu's really more mid-line, these days.
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>>3742449
Okay. then its a good thing relics are very hard to destroy.

Could their Minds be extracted again after inserting them into a relic?

I imagine if they can be we would need someone like Casandra to do it?
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>>3742441
yeah i was literally gonna say thats Shu. id say theres simply too easy an overlap with some abilities to technically be a 'pure' backline fighter, but then again that can probably be said for any... what would what were discussing be called? combat class? Combat Role?

regardless, if i had to say as of current;
>Shu, Mid/Backline Fighter
>Rath and Julia, Frontline Fighter
>Gina and Amara, Battle/Support Mage
>Dorian, Mid/Support Fighter
>November, Backline Fighter
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>>3742454
(It would require a Phantasmal Conduit, but it's certainly possible.)
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>>3742462
Sounds right, though given November's mobility options from Nova Charge and her close-range shotgun I'd say she makes a decent midline fighter, too.
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>>3742476
eh, the mobility option literally hasn't been used once, but fair point on the shotgun. its just so far higher cores have greatly focused on increasing her backline capabilities id say the most.

but yeah, same as Shu id agree to that. might just be another case of 'the current situations we have been in have pushed her into a specific role' moreso than that she cant fill another one.
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leaving for work. I hope I get to be there to give Sam a good "goodbye" speech when I get back home from work.
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>>3742493
Take care anon see you again soon
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>>3742486
>>3742476
Given that much of November's built-in arsenal is geared towards backline artillery fire, I think Crimson Jester's Masque would be a really good fit for November.
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>>3742499
well, true her base is, but id argue especially with the 6 relic slots, we can easily gear her toward any role we want and have her be acceptably proficient at said role, given the right relics.
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>>3742499
Yeah, being able to interrupt enemy actions with a well-timed mortar strike would be delightful.
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>>3742501
True, though she'll always be at least somewhat geared towards ranged given that her guns transfer over to the new frame. At worst she'll have a hybrid build where she's good at something else but can still lay down some heavy fire.
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>>3742338
>>Write-In
>Tell the girls we're always up to talk further if they want to, and that for now we'll leave them connected so they can talk.
>Leave the dreamscape, talk to Rath and Gina about opinions on Francine and how she should be handled. She's apparently sincere about being better than her progenitor, but seems to have some martyr complex about it, we should probably try to get her over that. Thoughts?
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>>3742501
>>3742499
>>3742502
it’s also for countering backline assassins. We would have solved the issue with picking the Macha frame, but we’ve already decided on etain, which is why i wanted to design a relic that can substitute for the missing feature.
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"We’ll see about keeping you girls together.” You say to the North siblings, just before you turn to Shauna. “Feel free to hang out for a while, I’ll have Gina keep this up while we are going to discuss something in the waking world.”

Your stomach drops as you’re drawn back to reality, the warm greens and blues of the farm’s rolling fields and luscious skies replaced with Francine’s slightly more presentable space, a squadron of swarmlings putting the finishing touches on fixing the chaos that surrounds you. Quickly recapping the events of the Dreamscape, you turn the conversation to the slightly more pressing matter that’s been weighing on your mind since you left the basement.

“I’d like to hear your opinions on Wes…on Francine.” Your start, uncrossing your legs and smoothing out your legs as you glance from Gina to Rath. The brunette looks to her left, giving Rath a prompting nod.

“Oh, uh…I mean, ‘s kinda hard to say.” Rath replies, her brow knit in consideration. “I mean, she’s…well, she’s West, or really close to her. She gave Aunt Heather a new body though, and…I guess I kinda owe her. If it wasn’t for this version of West, I wouldn’t have ever realized I had family left here…n-not that I mean you and everyone else aren’t my family or nothin’, I just…”

“I understand, Rath. I think you make a good point.” Gina gently interrupts, chewing her bottom lip as she plays with a strand of her chestnut hair. “Francine may be free of West Prime’s influence, but as for what kind of person Francine is, well…only time will tell, unfortunately.”

"Gina already knows this, but I would like you to know as well, Rath.” You say after a moment of contemplation. “Dr. Fran wants to start adventuring and Cassandra told me she wanted to do it together with us. I know you have bad memoires of West…hell, we all do…but I think Francine is different and safe to keep around. Plus, Gina ran a ‘diagnostic’ of sorts, which returned something interesting. Gina, could you show Rath what you found?"

GG relents, projecting Fran’s skills into Rath’s mind as the other girl’s citrine eyes go wide.

“Woah. So…w-what, did she just freaking hijack her own skill tree through force of will?” Rath stammers, and Gina simply shrugs.

“I’m not sure. If our hypothesis is correct in that our abilities are tied to the kinds of people we were before the Crucible, then this may be evidence of Francine deviating from the West paradigm. But as for what that actually means is anyone’s guess.” Your Neuromancer explains. “In any case, I’d be open to having her join, if only to feel her out and get headway on the plan to destroy the Collective.”

“Yeah, alright. I can back that, but only if we keep an eye on her.” Rath replies, her scowl deepening as a though occurs to her. “Actually, wait…if she’s looking to destroy all the proxies, then what’ll...?”

(Continued)
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>>3742655

“Well, that’s the other half of it.” You sigh, stretching out your legs as your brood alight on the towers of magazines they’ve stacked along the room’s walls. “Right now she thinks she needs to die with the rest of West's proxies. She has a chance to redeem herself, and maybe even learn to…well, ‘disassociate’ from the collective and their deeds. Given that, are you still open to her coming along, even if it means she decides to go the way of the others, when the time comes?”

“…I think she deserves the chance.” Gina murmurs, studying your features as she speaks. “We’re giving Sam a chance to do right. To not give this person, this girl who’s trying to make up for the mistakes and cruelties of the past the same chance as we’re giving your past self seems…unfair.”

“Character’s what you are in the dark.” Rath mutters, snapping out of her thoughtful reverie when she realizes you and Gina are staring at her, awaiting an explanation. “Oh, uh…it’s something Heather used to say. Well, the world likes to plunge us into the black often enough, so…let’s see who Fran and Sam are when the lights’ out, then.”

As if on cue, the door swings open to reveal a grinning Francine, and the air she carries of satisfaction from a job well done is unmistakable.

“Ladies, I would like to present…” She begins, moving aside as a slender, powerfully-build Frame strides into the room. “…Heather Neeson, Mark Two.”

Luminous, electric blue lights shine down at Rath, and November flexes the fingers of her right hand before standing up straight and addressing her niece.

“Well?” She asks, her voice coming through with crystal clarity, devoid of static’s distortion. “How do I look?”

You turn to see your friend’s reaction and her face is utterly priceless, her citrine eyes as wide as diner plates as she marvels at her Aunt’s shining frame. Without warning she darts forward, and immediately begins her inspection, replete with a barrage of questions as Francine steps further into the room to give them space.

“I can see the next patient, and it won't take nearly as long.” Francine announces, casting a glance at the orb you hold in your hands. “If you’re ready, that is.”

You share a glance with Gina, and your Crimson Cord springs to life.

{We’re okay with letting her join, and with whatever you want to do with Sam…but you’re in control, Shu} She assures, placing a hand on your knee as you smile. {I’ve got your back, no matter your call. Okay?}

Alright…here goes.

>>Talk to Francine with everyone present, and offer her the chance to join you and yours.

>>Install Sam in her Frame, and set her up to start on her own path before speaking with Francine.

>>Delve back into the dream to talk with the other Daughters a bit more.

>>Explore the Facility more before you proceed, and talk with some of the other Disassociated there.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next two hours, Gentlemen.)
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>>3742660
>>Talk to Francine with everyone present, and offer her the chance to join you and yours.
i mean, seems like as good a time as any.
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>>3742660
>>Install Sam in her Frame, and set her up to start on her own path before speaking with Francine.
I think that offering to have Francine come with us will impact harder if we do it after she overhears the "you deserve the chance to become someone better than you were, Sam" speech. You know, priming, have her already be thinking about Shu being willing to accept her.
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>>3742677
thats fair. my thought was she might feel more comfortable getting the new in her safe space, as it was. so she has the couch or chair to sit down in, and a familiar to help ease her into making her decision.
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>>3742660
>>3742660
>>3742660
>Install Sam into her forge body.
>when Sam wakes up, greet her. “It’s a Girl! I jest. But here we are. You put your trust in me. Now I’ve fulfilled what I said. You have a body now. Reborn.”
>grasp Sam’s hand
>”You’re free to go. You are in control. Remember that. The choices you make are yours. And someday in the future, I hope we can meet again, on even terms and get to know each other better. I’ve only known you through your bad memories, so the next time we hopefully meet, why don’t you tell me about your biological dad?”
>”After all, you deserve the chance to become a better person you were than before.”
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>>3742683
There's nothing that says we can't go back to her room after installing Sam. I mean, we're going to talk about business together in regards to dealing with the West collective, retiring to a more comfortable space to do that in seems pretty sensible to me.
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>>3742693
>>3742660
amending the vote to ask to talk about Sam’s happy memories, while leaving th rest of the writein intact
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>>3742702
Yeah, let's not ask about anything in particular. Just leave it as more of a "Someday I'd like to get to know you honestly, without either of us trying to hurt the other". Asking about her father in particular is unlikely to get a good response.
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>>3742693
eh, i think we should leave out specific topics. especially not jump to something like that. part of the very issue might be she was so young she cant remember him properly, i doubt that feeling is the first thing she wants to be reminded of once free.
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>>3742660

>Install Sam in her Frame, and set her up to start on her own path before speaking with Francine.

>Once Sam is revived reach out to shake her hand

>"Hello Sam..... Welcome to this hellhole of a world."

>Smile at her and pat her on the shoulder

>"You have been granted a new life. Dont squander it by forcing me to come after you okay. You are free now and that brings responsibility for your actions. Remember Control is bearing responsibility for the choices you make. I am placing a lot of trust in you that you can be someone better. I want to believe everyone can become someone better and impact the world in a good way."

>Let her go when she is ready to leave
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>>3742668
>>3742660
>>3742728
ill change to support this. it feels alot more logical to say personally. we aren't friends with her, far from it, true friendliness can wait til she proves she wont stab us in the back.
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>>3742660
>>Install Sam in her Frame, and set her up to start on her own path before speaking with Francine.
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Adding in some dialogue

>>3742660
>>Install Sam in her Frame, and set her up to start on her own path before speaking with Francine.
>>Write-In

>To Francine:
>"So, the Daughters in the memory crystals aren't interested in gaining new bodies. Not while the Crucible is still ongoing, they don't want to go back to that and I don't blame them. We can ask them again after the Crucible falls, but for now I'm going to respect their wishes."

>To Sam:
>"Welcome back to the world of the living, Sam. Make it count. I'm going to choose to believe in you, when you say that you want to do good this time. You deserve that chance, to prove yourself better than your past. You have control, you're free to choose, and I trust that you'll make good choices. And maybe someday, we'll be able to speak and get to know each other honestly, without thinking about we could be hurt. I'd like it if we could do that. Someday."
>"And Sam, for what it's worth...I never meant to make you suffer. Spite you, yes. Torture you, no. I did not realize how the isolation was affecting you and I'm sorry I let it get that far."
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>>Install Sam in her Frame, and set her up to start on her own path before speaking with Francine.

(glad i can join sorry im a bit late had work but im here to join the voting
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so anyway hi guys
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>>3742878
Hi, Gen. Don't worry, it's been a slow update schedule today, BHOP's been busy. You haven't missed much, just us talking with the crystal Daughters about what they want done with them (turns out they're fine with being made into boosted Relics) and talking with Gina and Rath about what to do with Francine (we're going to try to convince her not to kill herself along with the rest of the Wests, see if she wants to hang). And now we're putting Sam in her cyberbody while Rath geeks out over her aunt's cool new frame.
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>>3742900
Sorry, not slow, late. We've been doing it at the usual pace. I misspoke.
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(Headed back home to write now, Gentlemen. I may make dinner before posting since time didn't afford me a proper lunch break, but I intend to at least make one final post to cap off the evening. I hope your Monday has been going well, and thank you for your patience with my work schedule.)
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>>3742978
oof, sorry to hear that. missing meals is not ok. get yourself some food BHOP!
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>>3742987
Indeed. We don't want our favorite QM to go hungry. Go eat dinner, BHOP, we're fine with waiting.
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>>3742978
stupid thought, but is there any other snack one should be allowed to eat while writing this up but meat based products? i think not. the cheaper the better aswell, to add the horror half to the 'bodyhorror' themed snack foods.
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>>3742999
I'm thinking canned meat could do it properly. Just that sort of vaguely slimy/greasy feel you get from canned meat that you haven't entirely cooked through. And not good canned meat. We're talking like...Klik-brand canned meat.
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>>3743018
That works yeah, or anything Oscar Meyers. Bastards make me wonder if their meat is even real sometimes.
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>>3743018
Why not a classic, in that case?
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>>3743018
>>3743070
what about vegan food? (as memetic as vefan food is on the internet)
also, work is still a harsh mistress. someone called in and we were lacking in spare hands
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>>3743171
we'll leave pretend not-meat for the Disassociated Ones. basically what they're doing in a round about way anyways.
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>>3743070
Spam is too high-quality, people will eat that willingly. Mostly because of endemic poverty rewriting their culture's taste buds until they've forgotten it's terrible, but still willingly.
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"I think we're ready." You reply, rising from the couch as you stare at the reflective orb clutched tight in your grasp. Your own face stares back at you until you look up, meeting Francine's eyes with your own.

"Both of us." You add.

Ten minutes later, you're standing with everyone before a skeletal frame, a hooded red cloak draped over the slender form.

"Nanite weave for defense, slight build and lightweight polymers for mobility. The shoulder spines are the external projectors of a fairly simplistic hologram array, but the cloak is built similarly to the Shawl, only with a more selective output." Francine brusquely explains as she taps the Frame's chest twice, stepping back as the chest cavity blossoms to reveal an intricate system of wires and plating beneath its cold steel plating. An empty cavity beckons, a slot where the crystal you hold in your hand would call its home.

"Care to do the honors?" Francine asks, gesturing to the flayed, mechanical rib cage. You glance to your right to see Gina smiling, her apprehension hidden behind hope and trust, both of which rest on you. To your left Rath stands with November behind her, concern obvious in her large, worried eyes. You face forwards, and take a breath as you reach out, nestling the crystal within the frame. The innards move as one, tethering themselves to their newly-acquired heart as the rib cage curls back in on itself like a dying spider.

A hum. A whir.

Then...

"Hello Shu." Your voice intones from within the metallic body.

"Hello, Sam." You reply, stepping back as she rises standing eye-level with you as the cloak trails down her slim new existence of chrome skin and myomer musculature. "Welcome to this hellhole of a world."

She flickers once, twice, then she's gone, Rath cursing under her breath before Sam reappears where she stood a moment before, curling and uncurling the fingers of both hands as she marvels at her constructed body.

"This...this is..."

"A chance to make things right." Francine supplies, a wistful note in her words. Sam tilts her skull towards you, her static face immovable, unreadable. Even now, much like with November...it's hard to tell just what she's feeling, nestled in a cocoon of wires and circuity. You reach out slowly, placing your hand on her shoulder as you bring a smile to bear.

"You've been granted a new life." You say, your voice run through with warmth and warning in equal measure. "Don't squander it by forcing me to come after you. You are free now, and that brings responsibility for your actions...control is bearing responsibility for the choices you make. I am placing a lot of trust in you that you can be someone better, and I want to believe everyone can become someone better and impact the world in a good way."

She's silent for a long moment, her fingers twitching as she adjusts to her fantastical new form, and when she takes a step forwards she tilts suddenly, lunging at you with incredible speed.

(Continued)
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>>3743244

You reach out, catching her in time to prevent her from collapsing on the hard concrete beneath you as her legs fail her utterly. You're both on the floor, her body surprisingly light to hold as you both kneel before her cradle, the place of her rebirth.

"Are you alright?" You ask, painfully aware of the heat from Rath's tense body, of the racking of November's arsenal as munitions slide into place, her barrels aimed at your doppelganger, at someone that once shared your body and who it occurs to you, now, shares nothing in common with you at all.

"I'm...yeah. Yeah, it's a little hard to handle at first, but..."

You can hear the smile in her voice, the barely-constrained and delirious joy of someone that's received a gift they never thought they'd be blessed with.

"It's amazing." She says.

You help her to her feet, and after a few moments of adjustment she's able to stand and pace capably enough on her own, though Rath's still poised to ignite at the slightest sign of trouble.

"Where are you going from here?" Gina asks, her tone level, her body taught and at the ready.

"Not to the Cord, obviously." Comes Sam's blithe reply, still marveling at every little twitch or gesture she's able to make as she inspects herself with awe and curiosity. "And that's fine by me. I'm thinking about going back to my old apartment. B'ni probably ransacked everything of mine, but...it's worth a shot to see if there's anything of mine still there. Something that reminds me who I used to be."

She glances back up at you, staring for a moment before she speaks again.

"I never...I didn't think I'd ever have this again." She says quietly, her soft words hanging in the cold, silent space. "I thought I'd fade, I thought I'd go insane, trapped in you."

She makes a strange little gasp, the ghost of breath she can no longer inhale.

"You...this. This is because of you. I can't...I don't know what to s..." She finally manages to utter, faltering before she finally blurts out a stilted, confused phrase. Something you never thought you'd hear from her lips, either flesh or steel.

"Thank you, Shu."

A curious silence settles between the two of you, and for a moment it's like you're the only two people in this room, this facility...this world. You're staring into her optics as they whir and turn, studying your face's features...her features.

She's waiting on you.

You're waiting on her.

You wonder if anything remains to be said, here and now, at the point of resurrection. Actions speak louder than any words, but...words have their place, all the same.

>>If there's anything else to say, now's the time. There's no guarantee you'll meet again, given your path to the Cord (Write-In)

>>Stay silent. You've said all that can be said...the rest is up to Sam.

>>Cut Sam loose, and take Francine back to her room to discuss her wishes.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, as much as I'd like to continue I am afraid I must turn in for the evening to try and catch up on missed sleep. Voting shall remain open for the next twelve hours, while posting shall resume in thirteen, give or take. Thank you all so, so much for your patience with my rather chaotic day, and thank you again for your kindness, enthusiasm, and participation, one and all. I'll be around for a little while longer to address any questions, comments, or concerns that you may have, and I welcome them all. I hope you have a restful evening, and an even better night's sleep, Gentlemen.)
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>>3743257
>Give Sam a gentle, reassuring Nod and smile.
>"You can thank me by proving all my fears wrong, by proving me wrong, and... being someone the crucible needs more of."
>Chuckle slightly, and thorw up your arms.
>"Well? are you waiting on permission? You're free Sam. When you leave, where you go, and what you do... thats up to you..."
>Lower arms, and nod.
>"Goodbye Sam."
>Cut Sam loose, and take Francine back to her room to discuss her wishes.

>>3743262
hey man, i understand. you catch up on your sleep BHOP. thank your for running what you can, despite clearly being busy, its appreciated.

a minor thing, mostly related to my own projects, but how does the level 20/15 max level unique work? is it just level 20 is an exceptionally powerful upgrade, or is like, level 20, then a free level 21 on a technicality, which acts in a unique way compared to how the rest of the ability tree has gone? do you use the unique property if you later hybridize them, or is that not a thing to encourage the clear limitless growth intended by never having an ability unable to be hybridized?
also, man im impressed BHOP, truly and honestly. just filling out a single 20 levels for ONE of the Pepperboxes Cores was a fun but difficult task. im boggling my mind at the rest, as all of them have at least two maxed out abilities. how you seem to so easily have all of these abilities planned out so well for not just us but secondary characters and even background characters is utterly impressive, truly.
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>>3743262
Thanks for running, BHOP. Go get some sleep, man, it sounds like you're pretty tired.
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>>3743274
(Essentially it's a massively powerful ability that persists like the rest of your skills, but is akin to a 'capstone' ability in D&D classes or in the skill trees of Borderlands. Also, you're correct in that it's 'not a thing' so as to encourage growth and experimentation.)

(Thank you, it's a lot to keep track of considering that there are a vast number of characters that I'm tracking that you may or may not encounter, too. It's been quite the undertaking, and your help has made it much less of one. In either of the other Quests I'm considering running when this one wraps up, I'll have gathered enough experience to make the system a little easier to handle for everyone involved. On another note, I'm actually looking forward to wrapping up this Vein so I can catch up on your writings and everyone elses', too.)

>>3743320
(Thank you, I will certainly try.)
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>>3743367
hrm, actually had to look up both of those as im not familiar with either system. well, actually i did play BL1, but damn was that a long time ago now. but i get the general gist of what you mean, thank you for answering.
its not problem. wont lie and say it wont be sad to see this amazing quest come to an end, but certainly trust that your future ideas will be wonderful aswell. hope the stories are enjoyable when you get around to them, feel free to ask for fresh links if you need them so you dont have to hunt them down.

speaking of, it'll be interesting to see if we ever get an ability maxed out, and if we do, man, what to do with it next will be one hell of a debate im sure.
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>>3743391
I think we'll probably manage to get at least the core maxed out on each character. Not sure if we'll get the others, but I feel confident that there will be enough points remaining before the quest ends to do that.

Also, I am really having trouble thinking of what to say to Sam. Yours is pretty good, I might just support that, but I do want to try to say my own words to her. But nothing is quite coming out.
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>>3743404
maybe, it'll depend on how much Quest we have left to go, though seems like we still have quite a ways to go for sure. it more of the habits of alot of Anons when it comes to level ups that worries me, not if we will in numbers alone be able to do it.

well,obviously im n favor of what i wrote more than less, but if it has a foundation you like, you can always take it and reword it/ add to it as you feel your inner thoughts wish for. know its not alot of Anons style but if you both feel you need to add your touch to it but also have nothing coming to mind, then theres nothing using a base another provided to work off even to just get your mind flowing.
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>>3743257
And I'm back from work. Work was utter horseshit. One of the staff called in today, we were left shorthanded and had to call some outside help, we managed to get through the dinner rush but then thunderstorm hit, parts of the building got flooded, power went out, and we had to stay to do damage control.

>"I never...I didn't think I would see this happen between the both of us."
>Look down at your pendant in contemplation.
>"I thought I would have to do something I didn't want to do. I thought I would have to put you down out of spite."
>Give Sam a smile. A genuine smile. You wear what was once her face, so give Sam a smile to remember by.
>"But you proved me wrong. You proved that you are capable of becoming a better person. Thank you Sam."
>Hug her. Briefly.
>"Thank you Sam. Without you...I wouldn't be here. You wouldn't have given me the chance to become the person you see before you."
>"But you can do better than that. Prove my fears wrong Sam, prove yourself wrong that you can be a better person than before."
>Spawn A stealth version of FuzzBuzz with red and black patterned fur that can go invisible whenever Sam activates her cloak.
>"I know it's not much, but here. A little gift for you. Whenever you're pressed with a hard choice in your new life, whenever you feel mentally stressed or lonely, Fuzzbuzz here will keep you company. To remind you that you can always be a better person, that you are always in control."
>Open your arms out wide, give Sam a happy smile of confidence and anticipation.
>"Well? what are you waiting for? You're free! When you'll leave? where will you go? what will you do?
>Let your arms drop.
>"That's now up to you..."
>"You are in control."
>"Goodbye Sam."
>Let Sam go. Wave her goodbye.

>>3743320
>>3743418
I'm open for critiques and edit suggestions on my write-in. It's sappy I know, and there are parts that some of you clearly might disapprove but I really want to air out the pathos that's been building up inside me ever since Sam was introduced as a character in the quest. I mostly like the general foundation, but since Sam is a character that reacts with exaggerated emotions, I thought if we showed Sam the same sort of emotional emphasis, she would react and understand. In addition I feel like this is also an underpining moment that I feel needs to be built into Sam when it comes to her perception of Shu after getting her new lease on life, as well as a crucial moment for Shu to finally let go of her misconceptions of Sam and let Sam go with a clean slate while revealing something that hasn't been said aloud: "Shu would not have been born if it weren't for Sam." But I'm uncertain if this is a good thing to air out. So what do you think?
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>>3743439
(I'm sorry to hear work went so poorly, Anon. I sincerely hope it gets better, and know that I've been there. I salute you, it's an insanely tough job, so well done for sticking it out like you do.)
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>>3743439
Oh my, that sounds like a truly awful day. I'm glad you're home safe and out of a flooded building now.

As for your entry, I like it. It's still not quite how I'd want to say it, I'm having trouble pinning that down, but it covers the ideas I want to say. That we're glad that it didn't have to end badly, that we might have hated her but we don't actually want to hate her, and that we hope she can find happiness. I'm not sure on the "we wouldn't exist if not for her" part, though. I mean, that's really all incidental anyway, and I don't think she'd enjoy being reminded of all that mess right now. That's the unpleasant part of this story, let's focus on the positive.
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>>3743439
>I thought I would have to put you down out of spite."
i think its unfair to say spite was the only reason we had, or even a major one, IC at least. you again gnore she gave us very genuine reasons to not trust her or want her around, and that she is in no way a good person.

>"But you proved me wrong. You proved that you are capable of becoming a better person. Thank you Sam."
she hasn't actually truly proven anything to us. desperation to accept an offer she didnt think she would ever get =/= actually having fully reformed or having proven it. we're giving her a chance, but she has yet to prove she will do well with that chance.

>Hug her. Briefly.
no, and honestly more importantly, i genuinely dont think shes ready for that from us.

>"Thank you Sam. Without you...I wouldn't be here. You wouldn't have given me the chance to become the person you see before you."
im highly against this. on a technicality is true, but we exist due to her being a terrible person, hardly anything to tank anyone over for any reason.

>Spawn A stealth version of FuzzBuzz with red and black patterned fur that can go invisible whenever Sam activates her cloak.
>"I know it's not much, but here. A little gift for you. Whenever you're pressed with a hard choice in your new life, whenever you feel mentally stressed or lonely, Fuzzbuzz here will keep you company. To remind you that you can always be a better person, that you are always in control."
personally iffy on this. i dont think shes earned a FuzzBuzz.

>Shu to finally let go of her misconceptions of Sam
we literally have no misconceptions of Sam. ill spell it out for you once again.
Sam. Is. Not. A. Good. Person.
Sam. Tried. To. Frame. Her. Best. Friend. For. Murder.
Sam. Constantly. Tried. To. Manipulate. Us. and. Isabelle.
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>>3743482
>Sam. Constantly. Tried. To. Manipulate. Us. and. Isabelle.
Well, she tried to manipulate us once. All our interaction after that were her just shrieking in impotent rage. But yeah, she's not a nice person. Still, she wants to try to be, and I think at some point Shu should let go of preconceptions about Sam. Just not all the way yet. Take it down from a nine to a seven, I'd say.
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>>3743508
its been implied she pushed for the bathroom memory, then she outright admitted in the tree scene she was trying to make it seem like she had more power over us than she did, even if the actual message on the tree was a fluke. after that she still did seem to want us to think she had more power than she did, but yes ill admit it was much more just her being angry. her instead yelling at us and trying to demean us hardly is much better though, just has a twist to it where her bitchiness was extremely self defeating.

hopefully thats the first thing she grows out of, as otherwise trying to do good or bad, her emotions are gonna get her killed damn quickly.
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>>3743257
Supporting>>3743274
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>>3743861
>>3743482
Makes sense. Granted. I was tired when I was writing the write-in at the time.

>>3743439
>>3743257
Changing my vote to support >>3743274
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>>3743439
I dont think giving her a gift that reminds her of Shu constantly is gonna be a kind thing to do. Already having Shu on her mind as a Damocles Sword is gonna be hard enough already. No need to make it more obvious with a physical reminder

>>3743367
Definetly looking forward to your Feedback

>>3743871
Sorry for the Bamboozle i was unhappy how my post turned out and thought i just had messed up on the editing and format
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>>3743871
trust me, I mean this wholly to help you, but trying to Artie things while tired is not the best idea. also finally found a meme that fits this quest thats not bee related. im shocked, both that i did id and it took so long.

also, Athens least used main ability ended up being the one im so far the most proud of so far. gosh, thats an odd feeling. i also intended for these girls not to be broken, but strong, but that may not turn out as much as i wanted, but also in part Artisanal Appetites is so fucking potent with those Cores stat wise its alot more potent than i gave it credit for i thinks the problem here, heh. if Athens ever does meet the... Defiant Family(?), shes gonna feel even worse than she already does haha.
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>>3744515
>>3743257
Generally supporting >>3743274
but I want to get the following point across:
>Show Sam a genuine smile. a smile she has forgotten. A smile of happiness with the face she used to wear. A smile for her to remember by.
>Open your arms out wide, give Sam a happy smile of confidence and anticipation.
>"Well? what are you waiting for? You're free! When you'll leave? where will you go? what will you do?
>Let your arms drop.
>"That's now up to you..."
>"and if we do meet her again, hopefully it's on better terms. Whether we become better people...it's up to us."
>"We are in control of ourselves."
>"Goodbye Sam."
>Let Sam go. Wave her goodbye.

We may have hated her, but we don't actually want to hate her. We hope that she can find happiness, and if we do meet her again, hopefully it's on neutral terms where the door's left open for better dialogue. If she's become a better person.
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>>3744517
Yeah, I like that.
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>>3743257
Supporting>>3744517
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The silence continues as Francine and November lead you to one of the compound’s many exits, the door sliding open before you to a stretch of acid-drenched beach, dark waves lapping at a rocky shore under the dim light of eternal dusk. Sam gazes out at the vast expanse, her speakers shuddering with an airless breath, and she almost takes a step before she stops to glance back to you. Granting a nod of reassurance, you flash a warm smile to the stock-still frame before you.

"You can thank me by proving all my fears wrong, by proving me wrong, and by being someone the crucible needs more of." You finally say, a FuzzBuzz struggling to free itself from your hive. It hovers over to the frame’s hood, unfurling its malformed wings into a short, scarlet scarf.

"I know it's not much, but here. A little gift for you.” You explain as Sam tentatively pats the scarf with one hand, seemingly resisting the urge to pet your swarmling. “Whenever you're pressed with a hard choice in your new life, whenever you feel mentally stressed or lonely, Fuzzbuzz here will keep you company. To remind you that you can always be a better person, and that you are always in control."

Opening your empathic channel, you allow a burst of hope and optimism to reach out towards the person you used to be, the person you’ve moved beyond.

"Well? What are you waiting for? You're free.” You chuckle, throwing your arms wide. “When you'll leave? Where will you go? What will you do?”

Your arms drop to your side.

"That's now up to you, now...and if we do meet again, hopefully it's on better terms. Whether we become better people...that’s up to us."

"We are in control." Sam replies, echoing your words. You nod one last time, as the door begins to close.

"Goodbye Sam." You say.

“Goodbye, Shu.” She replies.

The doors grind shut, and silence reigns once more as Sam disappears from sight.

{Didn’t expect the FuzzBuzz. It’s a nice touch} Gina says through your bond, the hint of a wry smile playing in your mind. {Makes a great tracker, too}

[Hope for the best…] You say, turning your attentions to Francine. […but expect the worst]

“Should I be worried?” Francine says, voice on edge as you all remain standing once you arrive back at her room. You scoot past her, sitting on her couch and gesturing for her to do the same. After a half-second’s hesitation she relents, stiffly taking the seat next to you as your allies sit on the floor around you.

“No. I just wanted to ask you something, actually.” You explain, and Fran’s eyes narrow.

“Exposition? I’m afraid I’m fresh out, Darlings.” She says with a droll smile, glancing back towards Gina. “I’ve already given her the notes on the Halos, and as far as Prime’s research goes, I haven’t been in the loop for quite some…”

“What do you want?”

Your interruption causes Francine to freeze, her narrowed eyes going wide again as they snap back to yours.

(Continued)
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“E-excuse me?” She stammers, and you lean back on the couch as you give a little shrug.

“It’s a simple question…but not for those that haven’t been asked it before, I’d imagine. So…what do you want, Francine?” You repeat, and the Doctor’s reply hitches in her throat.

“I…I don’t…” She begins, collecting herself enough to give her stock reply. “…West. I want to stop what she’s doing with her proxies. I have a plan, I need a little more data, but…yes. I want to stop her.”

“And after that, then what?” You counter, once more catching the woman off-guard as she weighs her response.

“…I’d prefer not to count my proverbial chickens before the hatch.” She replies coolly. “I intend to stop her. If I do, then my experiment is a success. If I fail, then…at least I tried to accomplish something worth doing. It’s the essence of science, in a way.”

“What if you find something worth sticking around for, when you’re out there trying to stop her?” November chimes in, tilting her gaze towards her niece. “Something to keep you going?”

Francine regards Heather for a moment, her eyes boring into the other woman’s chrome hull.

“Let me be perfectly clear.” Fran breathes, her back stiffening. “West does not deserve to exist. Nothing of her deserves to survive the Crucible. I still fight against West’s curiosity every day, that desire to *know*, at all costs. I still…I still want to…”

“So you’d want us to destroy Shu and Sam both, right? No questions asked?”

You all turn to look at Rath, her pointed question catching you all by surprise.

“Sam was a monster, there’s no arguing that. Do Shu and Sam have similarities? Yeah, they do. They plan, they manipulate, they cut right to the quick and are stubborn as hell. No offense, boss.” Rath says as she tosses a sideways glance your way, her citrine gaze re-focusing on Francine as she continues “Are they the same? Does Shu deserve to suffer because of what Sam did? Does Sam deserve to die for what all she did, before she got shoved into solitary? I think we can all agree the answer’s a resounding ‘fuck no’, or else we wouldn’t have gone through all this silly shit to get that nutjob a body.”

Rath groans, leaning back against the wall as she props her elbow on her knee.

“Look, I guess what I’m trying to say is that you keep kicking yourself for the past, and that’s fine. Guilt? Regret? That’s healthy…s’long as you don’t let that stop you from moving forward. You stop to wallow? THEN it’s a problem.”

“That was…surprisingly eloquent, coming from our little hot-head.” Gina teases, cutting past the tension.

“Oh, fuck off, shortstack.” Rath fires back with a scowl and a smirk, the latter she tries to hide behind one freckled forearm.

Francine’s pensive beside you, staring at her lap in silence.

Her eyes meet yours, and you speak.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Gentlemen, voting shall remain open for the next two hours.)
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>>3744574
>"Francine... I understand."
>"Ive seen it, hell, ive even felt it a bit."
>"That fight against yourself, to wonder if you cant change."
>"And for some..."
>Pet the pendant from Isabelle.
>"For some, it really is impossible... But dont make the mistake Francine, of not even trying."
>"because until you try, really try, really leave your comfort zone and see who you really are, what you will do when doing the right thing has no benefit for yourself... you wont know if you can break the cycle and change."
>smile, and put a hand on hers.
>"And if you want, just incase, we can be there to stop you, if you fail."
>Give her hand a squeeze.
>"Maybe there is some West in you, but its up to YOU to try and make that not matter, to make yourself truly something different... and well, once you're something different, you're not West anymore, see? so even if you're right nothing of West should survive... that wont be a worry for yourself anymore."
>Shrug, and look into her eyes.
>"But, thats all up to you, and what you want. You, too, Francine, are in control."
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>>3744576
i gotta admit BHOP, you are putting me in a situation im really unsure of how to personally handle.

on one hand, i despise the idea of suicide, and could never sit by and let someone go down that route. i also way too heavily understand the idea of not forgiving yourself, or being afraid to think too much of yourself.

but at the same time, ive seen it and know way too strongly that certain things about a person may never change, not even after years of trying... and those parts of Francine that are West? those a terrifyingly dangerous things to leave around or forgive. my utter hatred of West doesn't come from nowhere, the plethora of things i despise about her come from seeing and understanding just how destructive and deadly those traits can be for those around her, and for humanity as a whole... and hearing her admit to still struggling with those... it unnerves me greatly. i want and think everyone should be treated as an individual... but by utter god does this also feel like loading a gun and handing it to someone who has admitted they dont know who they'll point it at once it really matters. ive never been more conflicted over a choice in this quest before honestly.
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>>3744574
>"Dr. Fran..... i think you have to give yourself a chance. I understand you very well. For some time i also tired to find my placve by following the traces of the girl we just send out into the world."

>"You see Cassandra told me a couple things about you while you were away. With her account and form what i have experienced with you..... I think that you have started on a good path."

>Pet the Pendant with the emerald and look into her eyes

>"For some it is nearly impossible to change. I think you would agree that West is one such person. She thinks she is right and she will not change. You however Dr. Fran are not West. You have already started to distance yourself form her the moment you called yourself Francine. You can change you can become someone you can be proud of. "

>Take her hand in yours

>"You say you still have those urges to learn at all cost. If you truly want to no longer feel them you can do it. The path wont be easy it will be hard fought and wrought with perils. Ther will be times you will curse yourself for the choices you made to do the right thing and it made your way that much harder . But in the end you can be yourself free from West."

>"I wont force you to stay alive when we kill the collective. It will be up to you. But until that time comes i will try and help you to walk the path you chose to walk."

>Let go of her hand and lean back a bit

>"What do you say Dr. Fran? Care to walk the stony path to make your heritage meaningless in face of the person you have become? Care to share the path you walk with other people to make sure nothing of West remains?"


>>3744576
To be honest Wests modu operandi reminds myself of Josef Mengele she gets results but is extremely unethical in her pursuits
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>>3744592
Well I don't think West had anyone telling her to stop, advise alternatives, and generally restrain her tendencies. The only people West has as partners are her doppelgangers, which due to being a bunch of hers and in a hive mind with her at the top, means they were more like enablers instead of voices of reason. Francine would have us and the Defiant Fools in contrast.
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>>3744608
maybe, but thats no guarantee that will be enough.
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>>3744592
>>3744576
Is this a talk an episode of suicide intervention for Francine?

I'm writing this down so I can try and understand the context somewhat better.

So we're talking about Francine's futures, and Francine has admitted that she's struggling with her rampant curiosity habit that hasn't been chained by West's lack of ethical moors (a trait copied onto Francine)

>>3744574
>"Francine, even though you've been struggling this constant battle against your darker impulses, you've already made a big breakthrough, by talking about your struggles."
>"That's what friends and family are for. To support each other when someone's feeling low and needs help, and to rein each other back when they begin to fall to their base temptations."
>"For some, it is nearly impossible to change. I think you would agree that West is one such person."
>But in you, we've seen the potential of self-control that you had, we know you're capable of changing into a different person, not just in name and face."
>"Would you like us to help you with that problem? I can't say that we'll fight those struggles alongside you, but what we can do is be there to help you rein back those darker impulses and keep you on track towards the goal and path you want to walk."
>"And maybe then... somewhere along the way, you might find something worth living for."

>>3744608
Funny thing about Mad Science.
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>>3744623
(It could be, you're not sure. I left it open-ended so that you could speak freely and address the points that you yourselves wished to prioritize. I never give you choices that are trivial, no matter how simple they may seem, at times. Timing and wording is, and has always been, critical.)
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>>3744623
>Is this a talk an episode of suicide intervention for Francine?
in part, but said potential suicide is more tied to her fears of who she is or what she cant escape from being, which given some of the oddities of the situation, isnt an unfair question for her to have. its more of convincing her to give herself a chance to prove to herself she isnt West, rather than convincing her right here and now she wont need to die. because as much as we may not like it, we cant actually be sure she wont be right in the end, or when it actually matters, only that she has a chance to prove otherwise.

she wont ever be convinced this isnt the path she has to take from words alone, not until she has gone through something that proves it to herself that she isnt West.
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>>3744637
I see.

I think the big turning point for Francine is when the time comes for her decision to decide what character she is in the dark.

We can convince her to give herself a chance, and we can do our best to foster an environment for her to build her own character that's separate from Dr. West and support her however we can, but the moments where Francine is alone in the dark, we can't control that. It'll be up to her.

I've also noticed that Francine's core ability is only lvl 3. Which means she'll be forced to make THE CHOICE when her core ability (Creation's Strings) hits lvl 5. That'll be the big defining moment for what Francine is in the dark.
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>>3744645
(You are quite correct about her having yet to make her Choice.)
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>>3744602
>You however Dr. Fran are not West.
Please change this to
>You called yourself Francine, Not Dr. West.
Emphasize that Francine is her own person. Not like some offshoot of Dr. West.
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>>3744645
>>3744649
oh, well BHOP ninja'd me, as i was just about to question whether she would get to make the choice, due to being a clone. i was gonna guess 'yes' due to being fully disconnected from West, which might prevent the others from getting it.

certainly, it'll be a major moment for her, but she does have an 'unfair' advantage of knowing all about it and mother ahead of time, so she might not see it as a 'natural moment' or indicator of her true self, due to how much outside influence could be affecting the actual decision she makes.
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>>3744651
i mean, no ones actually agreed to the same vote anyways so its still up to BHOP/a dice roll right now anyways.
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>>3744651
Good suggestion.I have to admit some of the finer points of the english language still elude me

>>3744574
Ammendign my vote slightly from >>3744602
to >"Dr. Fran..... i think you have to give yourself a chance. I understand you very well. For some time i also tired to find my placve by following the traces of the girl we just send out into the world."

>"You see Cassandra told me a couple things about you while you were away. With her account and form what i have experienced with you..... I think that you have started on a good path."

>Pet the Pendant with the emerald and look into her eyes

>"For some it is nearly impossible to change. I think you would agree that West is one such person. She thinks she is right and she will not change. You call yourself Francine, Not Dr. West. You have already started to distance yourself form her the moment you called yourself Francine. You can change you can become someone you can be proud of. "

>Take her hand in yours

>"You say you still have those urges to learn at all cost. If you truly want to no longer feel them you can do it. The path wont be easy it will be hard fought and wrought with perils. There will be times you will curse yourself for the choices you made to do the right thing and it made your way that much harder . But in the end you can be yourself free from West."

>"I wont force you to stay alive when we kill the collective. It will be up to you. But until that time comes i will try and help you to walk the path you chose to walk."

>Let go of her hand and lean back a bit

>"What do you say Dr. Fran? Care to walk the stony path to make your heritage meaningless in face of the person you have become? Care to share the path you walk with other people to make sure nothing of West remains?"

>>3744657
Well he does like to splice them together if there is a tie i would say. especially considering they all say similar things just in different ways
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>>3744653
Regardless. It's still a major moment. So there are several points that I feel like we should address.

>Francine's struggle with her own identity and her baser impulses (a holdover from Dr. West)
>Francine's current thought of suiciding herself in order to get rid of Dr. West with her crazy plan.

I think addressing Francine's struggle with her own identity and helping her grow as her own person and character would help her better in the long run.

>>3744661
>>3744657
The general sentiment we all share is there. The issue finding the proper wording. that best fosters the result. It's like parenting...Fucking hell. Shu's practically the defacto Team mom.

I think a good start is to remind Francine that from the ability standpoint in terms of clone connection, she's free from West, it's just herself in that body. That she's now in control. Then have the same principle apply to the choices she makes.

Tell her that she's already made a huge breakthrough and has taken the first crucial steps towards crafting her own identity. The road will be long and hard, Shu and the family will be there to either stop her if she falls or support her if she needs help. But ultimately when the crucial moments that define her character in the dark arrives, Francine will have the final say. She is the one in control of making the choices.

Also. Hoo boy. How will we explain this to Dorian, Amara, and Julia? Some of them still have the big conception that all the West iterations are evil. They might not give Francine the right environment.
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>>3744574

>> "Hey, you heard the lady. We don´t take people unto the gang to let them throw themselves unto a meatgrinder. Besides, we are a close-knit family with a little kid onboard and quick to adopt new members, so we have a strict "no dead heroes" policy. Either you try your best to survive and find a solution that doesn´t imply your death, or chances are you are not coming".

(Crack a smile and let irony and actual caring filter through the empathic link)

>> "I don´t want to say that I can understand what you went through, because I was lucky to wake to a fleshcape that had friends in store for me. Neither will I belittle you by "forbidding" you to come if you don´t find a way to end West alpha without your death."

(Pause, send a snippet of your skill tree against her latest evolution)

>> "But I know something. Even the gentlest daughter that I know has a bodycount, and our core skills? They are often a hangman´s noose, and the thread is made of our soul. I was a control freak, so bad my noose took the form of a well-deserved case of decapitation with a lava lamp. And I am grateful for it, but the kicker? It was the stuff that I made when alive again that caused any positive change, my death only made things far worse than they were."

(Grin to her)

>> "Compared to that? Your latest skiltree evolution is positively made of white linen. So come, and please live, Francine. Take it from me, righteous death is overrated. It just robs those living with you from their due. So let´see where a living Francine does lead us to instead"
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>>3744687
We will have to send them a warning beforehand.... Could we reactivate one of the Fuzz Buzz in the Ballpit to write out a message for them ? Just so we dont throw them under the bus
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>>3744574
>"I think you're a better person than you're willing to give yourself credit for, Francine. I don't know your experience, how hard it is to resist the impulse you've inherited from West. But I do know that despite them, you still try to treat people with consideration. Maybe that's a learned behavior. But you have to be willing to learn."
>"West isn't. She can't imagine that her behavior isn't completely rational and therefore right. The fact that you're having these doubts about whether you're able to do the right thing is why I believe you are. Evil doesn't doubt itself, Francine. I think you might struggle at times, I don't mean to make light of your difficulties, but I don't think you're some indelibly tainted thing for your connection to West."

Blarg, been struggling over this. I know what I want to say, but I'm having a lot of trouble putting it into words. Best I've got after like an hour of staring at the screen. If anyone else wants to cannibalize it for theirs, go ahead.

>>3744649
How does Francine's Core even work? It's a hybrid, without any of the component skills, but still counts as a Core. I'm assuming it's a result of experimentation on West Prime's part?
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>>3744701
(It's a result of copying over the initial Hybrid without porting over the base skill trees, yes.)
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>>3744698
(You certainly could do this, yes.)
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>>3744706
So could one roll it into a hybrid again without watering down the effects?
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>>3744688
eh, im not really for this. especially line three very much goes against our 'we are not Sam' stance. very much against that line. i also feel the first lines much too... direct? harsh? way too on the nose, when we can more softly imply the choice to come with us and let her decide on her own.

we also can understand her, via Isabelle at least. i also dont like the skill tree stuff. we a body-count doesn't matter in this context, especially given that all of ours were in self defense. her were given to her, but came from a source that was not. really doesn't make sense in the context to use it like that or as an example.

>>3744687
eh, i think Julia will give her a chance, just like we did her. Dorian might think similarly enough, though he did have that one moment of pure rage and the like we may have to see about.

you make a good point on us having similar overall ideas, i guess ive just not seen wording that will convince me to change my own yet. she doesn't need a lecture, she just needs support and confirmation she has a chance here, thats all.

>>3744698
i mean, maybe, but im not sure its that big a deal. or moreso, i think having Francine wait outside and telling them in person will work better, than over a fuzzbuzz.
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>>3744715
(Absolutely. Triple-hybrids are fine as Indignant Ignition is proof enough of, it's just when you get to Quadruples that things start to get muddled.)
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>>3744715
>>3744720
yeah as Wests Notes said three is the limit without muddling things, after that it has a higher and higher chance of muddling things. think she got one of.. x5? that actually resulted in something not muddled?

here, until BHOP gets his own, more detailed set released, ill link my holdover of her notes, though keep in mind BHOP has said our characters know more details than this due to the IC versions, so dont feel like you cant ask further questions, of course.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10tiCL66515aiM-cooxe2x-B4GL_wOvx1AXa1t8woWUI/edit?usp=sharing
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>>3744706
Yeah, but that doesn't make Cores, from what we know. That reduce it to regular ability status. You need to bring over the Dream Daughter who provided the Core to make it count as a Core. West would have had to have done something weird.
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>>3744720
So it still counts as a hybrid even if it does not have its componetns with it.

Interesting so that means that Hybrids can in theory be completely sperated from a Skill


Could in theory a Hybrid be given away by lets say a Sparagmos engine and would that free up the Skills again or would they be transfered as well?

>>3744717
Maybe just a heads up then that if she decides to come with us that they are warned(that we have soemone with us) since, if we move by teleport back, we would appear in the living room.

or we go back on swarmling. takes longer but we could leave her outside the door for the moment and bring the others out to meet her

>>3744726
Oh i know that the chances of things geting muddled is very possible i was wondering if it was countign as a hybrid or had the basic ability tag attached to it to transfer it without transfering the base skills
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>>3744701
>>3744688
>>3744687
>>3744661
>>3744651
>>3744645
>>3744608
>>3744602
>>3744586

I think there are a lot of wonderful write-ins, but surprisingly, as a community, we have a lot of overlapping consensus points:

> We consider Francine her own person, fully separate from the original Dr. West. With a responsibility for the same sins, but able of redemption.

> We generally wish for her to live and not charge ahead heroically to a righteous suicide. We don´t have the arrogance to tell her she should not take that choice if it comes to it, but definitively wish for her to find a reason to live, and will support her for it.

> While we agree that she has identity issues, we think that she has already started on a new path. She is her own individual, never an extension of anyone else´s will. She cut that rope herself, and we fully understand how frightening it must be.

> She will be tempted, and there will be a moment that will see her alone and in the dark. Maybe at level 5 choice with Ozmas, maybe facing West Alpha, maybe elsewhere. She will have the power to choose, for good or evil.
Good. We wouldn´t have it any other way.
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>>3744729
(To be fair, West has done a lot of goofy shit that plays with what the system's capable of. Half of what she's accomplished in-universe has been the result of my tests in trying to break the system, actually.)

>>3744730
(You could absolutely port a hybrid skill tree over to another Daughter, provided their Core power isnt wrapped up in it...unless you've done something terrible to both donor and host to make such a thing possible, of course.)
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>>3744717
>>3744586
Overall, I like your basic foundation. but you're missing one key thing. We aren't helping Francine build her confidence. We have to reinforce the idea that Francine is her own person. Might I add this amendment?

>"We can agree that there are people who can't change, but you Francine, you have that capability to change. You can become the person you want to be. You have that potential. You called yourself Francine instead of West Beta. That's a big breakthrough."
>"And the biggest breakthrough for you? You're talking about your struggles, you're seeking help."
>"Until you really try, until you leave your comfort zone to learn what sort of person you are as Francine, and learn what sort of person you are in the dark...you won't know if you can break the cycle and change."
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>>3744701
>>3744661
>>3744623
i guess one of my points of contention is, we dont actually have proof of just how much better she is. she was in an environment where even if she had still been part of the West web, her goal with the DOs would've kept her in line, aswell as the DOs themselves. im not saying she has no obvious signs of being better, only i dont think its fair to HER to jump the gun too far, if that makes sense.

>>3744729
i think its a loophole of 'this is an individual daughter who needs a core' in some way.
also porting over a hybrid without its base components still has it count as a hybrid, in terms of stat increases and number of hybrids within it.

>>3744730
i was gonna say, drop a pin, teleport back alone, explain things, then go back for her.

>>3744735
more or less.

>>3744740
maybe. still iffy on that first line mostly, for reasons said above.

>>3744739
>unless you've done something terrible to both donor and host to make such a thing possible, of course.
well we know what West has done before then.
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>>3744717

> "Bodycount"
Was thinking about Mara for the Bodycount and, to be honest, we are a separate person from Sam, but I think almost everyone can agree that we feel responsible for some of what she did, even if only to clean her past messes. Like "nevermore this, nevermore a Sam, nevermore an Isabelle".

> "Skilltree stuff"
The skiltree stuff actually mattered into our decision taking. I consider it one of the few actual insights we have into her mind, and if you remember our party, the lines on the core skilltree entry and their evolution are a very good window into what they are, what we are.

I can understand anyone being conflicted about it (fuck, she came from the line of the Quack) , but that last skillset evolution was a dead giveaway. This is one of the most blatant "fuck you" I have seen against what the Crucible and West Alpha are, so I am very willing to extend a chance. Color me impressed.
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>>3744739
>Half of what she's accomplished in-universe has been the result of my tests in trying to break the system, actually.
You mean you've been stress testing your quest mechanics to see what breaks the quest, and then putting it as Dr. West's many experiments on looking for game breaking limits as the IC justification?

Clever.

>>3744735
A good summary of the concensus points. Now to put it all into simple words to tell Francine.

I have an earlier than usual work shift today. So I hope our wordsmiths can write up something well written.

>>3744744
good point. I still would like to express the sentiment that Francine has the capability to change, and she's already made the first crucial steps of becoming a person she desires to become. Would pointing out that She's changed her Creation's strings augmentation to override the description from sheer force of will be a good example? Or is it an iffy example?
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I thought the original West was referred to as West Prime and that West Alpha was the name of her right-hand woman. I think it was mentioned in Gamma's notes about how she was "the closest to the Prime aside from Alpha".
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>>3744744
oh, another thing id like for sure is to keep my ending at least. besides the fact 'you are in control' is basically our catch phrase, i think reminding her of that will hit home and help her more than any amount of wordy wishy washing on other points(mine and others) will do, in my opinion at least.

>>3744752
dunno, would literally depend on how she did it. if her sheer willpower did it, yes. if she just has that much knowledge of the crucible, no. we would need more info on it to decide that, which we dont have right now.

>>3744749
no... i really dont think we are responsible for anything related to Sam or her actions. at all.

see above for the skilltree, and i meant more of showing off ours. it also feels way too.. meta? like the idea of using our skill trees as points or talking about them in that context im against, especially because IC its already been described to us they dont actually work like they do in the games mechanics, its just setup that way because you have to run the game half of this Quest somehow.
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>>3744763
Yeah, but Francine is West Beta.
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>>3744739

I would like to open the discusion about something.

> Discuss what Francine makes about her upload and communication lines with the West collective. Do they know about her intentions? Should we try to feed them disinformation through Francine periodic thoughtform reports, , simply go dark, or send them a gigantic glowing middle finger through it as parting gift?

So Dr West Alpha is the system´s resident powergamer and "that girl". And Francine has a good fraction of the knowledge held by Alpha...(I am sure that she was starved of the juiciest bits, I doubt Francine was as discreet in her disapproval of the "SCIENCE!" carried out by Alpha as she seems to believe)

(Shit eating grin)
So we may field a powergamer Vs powergamer play. Final destination, no items, FIGHT!
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>>3744770
it just turns into the bodyhorror equivalent of a fight between wizards
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>>3744770
she doesn't have it anymore. she used the same device we used to cut ourselves off from Isabelle to cut herself off from it fully. she seems to have also gone further and cut herself off from West Prime completely, meaning its probably doubly gone now.
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>>3744765
Yeah I know. The notes also mentioned how Beta was a traitor and we had soon pegged Francine as being Beta. I'm saying that Alpha may not be the real Dr. West. Merely her strongest and most high-end proxie. The one that would still be left and we'd have to get through to end West if Francine's plan to destroy the collective succeeds.
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>>3744781
Yeah, we've been referring to West Prime as someone distinct. From what we know, West Prime doesn't actually look like West anymore, she's gone so overboard on acquiring new skills that her body has mutated out of control. Going by the hints we have, her corruption was probably going to turn her into a jellyfish-monster, but BHOP said that corruption effects get confused if you acquire an unreasonable large arsenal and make you mutate into something much more freakish. That's probably why she thinks she needs to acquire Vitruvian powers to be stable enough to climb the Cord, she needs to return to a human-ish form to fix her mutation. Right now she's probably one big old shoggoth.
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>>3744776

Nice she got rid of it. Have to say I don´t believe this is permanent (Isabelle device is explicitly described as a neural inhibitor, not a surgical removal), Francine surely has it neutered but not gone. Any viable plan to end the West collective besides a biological plague needs it, so we should plan accordingly.

Wouldn´t do for her to pull a noble suicide at our back, botch it, and have to contend with an ASSUMING DIRECT CONTROL in the middle of our homebase, when most people are sleeping.

This is one of my justifications against outright forbidding suicide plans; if she thinks she needs to do it at our back, BOTH her and our chances of survival go steeply downhill.
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>>3744735
I will try my best

>"Francine...... You are not Dr. West. You have proven that when you took your new name. While she sits there believing herself to be right in every way under the sun. YOu have doubts. YOu struggle to find what is right. Those are not the actions of a villain that just has their own selfish desires at heart. YOu want to be able to stand above the urges of your progenitor."

>"You have already taken the first step on the road to redemption. You have started disascotiating from Dr. West already. And whiel i do not wish you to die i will not stand in your way if the time comes for you to make that decision. I just hope to show you that no matter how stoyn the way no matter how difficult and tempting everything else is , no matter what happens. If you wish for us to be there to support you when you falter to, or to stop you should you fall we will be there."

>"All that remains for you Fran.... is to decide. Because you are in Control over your actions. Not Dr. West nor Shu the Defiant.. However you choose we will respect your choice."


probably a bit late and unorganised but i thought i would give it a go. This is probably a mess
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Leaving for work. See you in about 7 hours.
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>>3744787
i dont think anyone was against her taking herself out if it was totally necessary, only that if its not it shouldn't be done just because she hates she was once West.
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>>3744792
Yeah. Worst case scenario, if it needs to be done, she should do it. But Francine shouldn't kill herself unnecessarily.
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Regarding the consensus summarized earlier at
>>3744735

There is still a small thread that wasn´t included:

> Two votes for factoring her skillset evolution as proof of redemption (>>3744688
& >>3744752); one explicitly against it (>>3744717).

Should some acknowledgment about it be included, even if it seems a bit "meta"? There was a lot of quotes and near unanimous support for it when the decision to take Francine onboard was made, so I guess it would be a sahme to drop it out on matters of "meta" or not alone.

It would be easy to justify that reference (it was supported by BHOP description, and Gina & Rath dialogue). I mean, we had an undiluted, full neuromantic access to her head, so we could say we got the general "why´s & how´s" from there.
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>>3744803
>There was a lot of quotes and near unanimous support for it when the decision to take Francine onboard was made, so I guess it would be a sahme to drop it out on matters of "meta" or not alone.
these two issues are totally unrelated though.
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>>3744574
>>3744788
Looks good to me.
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(Attempting to write now, Gentlemen. It's been a day, so I hope yours is going well.)
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>>3744852
off, sounds rough, sorry to hear. Days going well enough.
just finished Athens character sheet. only 3 girls to go and...217 more levels or so to write up!)
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>>3744852
Sorry to hear that

>>3744859
Ouch.... thats a lot. Kinda glad i only need to fill out my crews sheets little by little
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>>3744852
Day's been okay. I'm sorry to hears yours hasn't been.

>>3744859
Huh. I did not get the sense the Pepperbox Gang were that high-level.
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>>3744852
take your time bhop. i’m at work, you’re at work, and work comes first.
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>>3744869
yeah its alot to do all at once.

>>3744890
well, thats entirely on me, and the fact ive just been writing one off stories with no timeline. you're technically right, they weren't in all the stories so far more or less, due to them all taking place in the past, but as of the latest story im writing and the current time of the actual Quest, they would be quite high level. Heras Heart would be the closest to now, for reference, but upwards of a few weeks to a month in the past, give or take, compared to events of the actual quest. so, again, to some degree, you're spot on in feeling that way, just more of how much you felt it that would matter.
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>>3744903
also, literally nearly half of that is Heras levels.
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>>3744906
still at work, but I’ve got an idea in my head about a daughter who is basically a complete loon and a wild card that Ozmas can’t even figure her out
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>>3744906
She was a busy fish wasnt she. Couldnt blame her if she really was as desperate as she sounded with Ozmas during the choice
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"Francine... I understand, and I get what you’re going through. For some time I also tried to find my place by following the traces of Sam, the girl we just sent out into the world. That fight against yourself, the wondering if you can’t change. For some..." You trail off, fingers grazing the emerald pendant that hangs around your neck. "For some, it really is impossible...but as much as you doubt yourself, I think you're a better person than you're willing to give yourself credit for. While I may not know your exact experiences, or how hard it is to resist the impulse you've inherited from West, I do know that despite them you still try to treat people with consideration. Maybe that's a learned behavior. But you have to be *willing* to learn."

She hasn’t blinked once, in the time you’ve been speaking. She still doesn’t, her eyes wide as she hangs on your every word.

"West isn't willing, like you are. She can't imagine that her behavior isn't completely rational and therefore right. The fact that you're having these doubts about whether you're able to do the right thing is why I believe you are. Evil doesn't doubt itself, Francine. West doesn’t doubt herself, and you’re are not Dr. West. You have proven that when you took your new name. While she sits there believing herself to be right in every way under the sun, you have doubts and you struggle to find what is right. Those are not the actions of a villain that just has their own selfish desires at heart. You want to be able to stand above the urges of your progenitor."

“So don’t make the mistake of not even trying, Francine." You continue, holding her gaze as you place a hand on her knee, which she surprisingly doesn’t flinch away from. "Maybe there is some West in you, but it’s up to you to try and break that cycle, to make yourself truly something different... and well, once you're something different, you're not West anymore, see? So if you’re that adamant that nothing of West should survive, then you’ll be exempt…maybe. I don’t have a PhD, so who’s to say?”

You shrug, and she cracks a weak smile that fades when she catches sight of your solemn expression.

"All that remains is for you to decide, because you are in control over your actions. Not me, not West. Just you, Francine. However you choose, we will respect your choice."

She nods, and keeps nodding, as if to herself as she contemplates your offer. Slowly she begins to look around the room, meeting the waiting eyes of your family one by one until her gaze settles back on yours.

She swallows hard, and speaks.

(Continued)
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>>3745058

“If you’ll have me, then…I would be honored to travel with you and yours, Shu.” Francine says, and with your hand still on hers you give her fingers a squeeze of acceptance.

There.

The pulse of emotion across your empathic channel is a familiar one. It’s something you felt before, when you called her by the name she clings to, the name that separates her from the monster she seeks to destroy.

That inimitable flicker of hope.

>>DOCTOR FRANCINE WEST HAS JOINED THE PARTY

“I…alright. I’ll…I would like some time to organize my things. It wouldn’t do well to travel with undue clutter, Darling.” She mutters, rising quickly as shaking the wrinkles out of her stark white coat. “If I may have a moment of privacy, I’ll set my affairs in order.”

“Grim way of putting it, but sure.” You reply, and you, Gina, and Rath exit as one. You glance back to see November placing a hand gently on the Doctor’s angular shoulder before she exits as well, closing the door behind her as you confer with your allies.

“Okay, so, just to recap.” Rath starts once you've walked a little ways down the hall, planting her hands on her hips. “We just yeeted Sam out into the apocalypse with a skinny-ass robot body and recruited a Doctor who may or may not be a psychopath. We’ve had some weird days, but what the fuck?"

“We need to keep moving, if Charon’s on their way to us.” Gina muses, tapping at her phone as she examines the half-rendered maps she’s in the middle of making. “You all made solid headway west when you chased Isabelle to Almath, and we can warp there directly to save us another trip through the forest, if we want.”

“Yeah, but with who? I’m not exactly comfortable with leaving Fran in our home, at least not without me and someone else to keep guard. I mean, she may be weaker, but I still don’t trust her.” Rath continues, and November folds her arms as she listens to her niece until she finishes, before turning to you.

“I agree that we need to keep moving. Rath filled me in about Charon, and I think we’d have a tough time if she’s on the hunt.” Rachel adds, her voice hard, with a soldier’s edge. “Now, with Escher’s Gear we don’t have to rely on the waystations she uses, so that gives us mobility she doesn’t have.”

“So, how do you want to play this?” She asks, and once more you find all eyes in the room trained on yours, waiting for you to take control.

>>Return to the Dragon’s Roost after Francine’s gathered her things. You need to tell your family what’s happened, and confer with how to deal with Charon when the time comes.

>>Investigate the Disassociated’s compound a bit further before you leave.

>>Continue Westward with your team as-is, and choose a place to begin your journey. You’ll be able to get Francine up to speed as far as her abilities go and stay one step ahead of Charon, with any luck.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next two and a half hours as I close out the work day, Gentlemen. My apologies for the lengthy pause, and I appreciate you bearing with me.)
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>>3745067
>>Return to the Dragon’s Roost after Francine’s gathered her things. You need to tell your family what’s happened, and confer with how to deal with Charon when the time comes.
>Make Sure Shu enters first, and explains the situation to the rest, so as to not surprise them with an sudden West look-alike.
>After Shu lets them have their say and calms them down, bring in Francine and the others. once they arent gonna jump the gun, we can further discuss anything those not present feel needs to be discussed.
>Then, we can work together on a plan to deal with or avoid Charon.
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>>3745067
>Drop a spoke quickly and fill in the rest of the group who you just recruited and give them a bit of time to vent.

>After you return talk a bit with Francine. "What is it that Cassandra wanted you to get for us?"

>Take the thing (probably a halo) with you and then bring Francine and the others together. A nice peaceful first Meeting for Dr. Fran and Shus entire Family
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>>3745080
well, we'll have to see about that 'peaceful part'. im thinking probably much closer to awkward and tension filled myself.
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>>3745067
>“Okay, so, just to recap.” Rath starts once you've walked a little ways down the hall, planting her hands on her hips. “We just yeeted Sam out into the apocalypse with a skinny-ass robot body and recruited a Doctor who may or may not be a psychopath. We’ve had some weird days, but what the fuck?"
Look, maybe all of this is one big fuck-up, but we're trying to do right by people and we're going to at least attempt things first. Besides, name one member of this party who didn't seem like a potential psychopath when we first met them, huh? It's pretty much just Amara.

>>3745080
>After you return talk a bit with Francine. "What is it that Cassandra wanted you to get for us?"
It was notes on other Halo types, actually, Francine mentioned she gave them to Gina a few posts back.
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>>3745088
probably should have put that one in quatation marks.

>>3745067

>Drop a spoke quickly and fill in the rest of the group who you just recruited and give them a bit of time to vent.


>Take the thing s she wants to bring with her and then bring Francine and the others together. A nice "peaceful and totaly relaxed" first meeting for Dr. Fran and Shus entire Family

>>3745092
>Look, maybe all of this is one big fuck-up, but we're trying to do right by people and we're going to at least attempt things first. Besides, name one member of this party who didn't seem like a potential psychopath when we first met them, huh? It's pretty much just Amara.

Too be fair Amara was practicly a newborn at the time and her entire personality is very open and talkative. So she naturally seems more social.

>It was notes on other Halo types, actually, Francine mentioned she gave them to Gina a few posts back.

Huh must have missed that then......
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>>3745092
Dorian. sure, his constructs attacked us, but upon actually meeting him himself, he was clearly not in control of the situation and a terrible drunk, but otherwise kind. which is bad in its own way, but not psychopathically so.

Rath too, id actually argue didnt seem so. wild, sure, but we met her being kidnapped and then upon freeing her, she was naturally weary but was more than willing to cooperate to some degree. i mean, she had just escaped a kidnapper after a random bug did a suicide rush, then met two random individuals. hardly psychopathic behavior.

November also didn't really treat us poorly. she bombed us on accident due to a relic, which sucked, but wasn't really her fault.

Gina too, was total friend right off the bat, taking us into cover and being willing to talk.

actually only Julia really seemed like a psychopath on first glance, and only due to her odd asthetic choices, even she still asked us about her art shyly instead of attacking us. Isabelle was a stalker sure, but made it seem less like she was a threat and more scared of what we would do to HER if she didnt hide, not her to us.

overall id say our party has hardly shown such tendencies to any level at all actually.
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>>3745103
I didn't ask whether they treated us poorly, I asked whether they seemed like potential psychopaths who could be threats to us. Rath was cagey, Gina was involved with some meat-moss monster, Dorian was spooky with how detached he seemed, Julia you stated, and November was a giant killer robot. Sure, they all turned out to be good people who we love, but they all could have turned out to be enemies.
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>>3745108
yes, and im 1000% disagreeing with you any of them really showed psychopathic or even potentially psychopathic behavior.
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>>3745109
besides Julia, and even then that was 100% on us for not yet understanding the crucible and its mechanics. her missing skin was corruption and of course, what else but flesh stuff would she use to make statues out of in this place?
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>>3745109
But they all easily could have turned out to be. Fuck, we don't need to drag this out into a big thing, I'm just saying that Shu is the sort to extend trust and let behavior play out instead of going "they seem creepy" and reject the idea immediately.
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>>3745112
>>3745108
no, they couldn't. you also changed the goal post, as it were. psychopathy is entirely different then them being potential enemies, which them just being potential enemies is an entirely different thing. you were talking specifically about us letting Francine in, who we have at least minor reason to believe has psychopathic tendencies, or once did. equating that to our allies is simply wrong, and all you were doing. anyone can be a potential enemy, but that is an entirely different subject matter than psychopathy. on a technicality, a psychopath could be entirely reasonable with us and present themselves as a non-threat, or even join our team for purely logical and personal reasons, such as 'its clear climbing the cord is a bad idea for anyone, and all that leaves is stopping anyone from doing it, to which you are the best person to work with to do that.' sorta thing.
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>>3745114
Oh, for fuck's sake, I was making a flippant joke. I'm sorry my humor fell flat. I was not using "psychopath" in the medical definition, I was just making a cutesy little comment on how we're all scary. Again, let's please not drag this out into a thing.
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>>3745119
that didn't sound like a joke in any possible sense of the wording nor did your second response.
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>>3745125
Fine, I'm utterly terrible at communicating. Congratulations. You win the conversation.
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>>3745067
>>Write-In
>Connect to the FuzzBuzzes back home, use them to give a summary of the situation in regards to Francine before we explain it in person. She's seemingly sincere, we've offered her a chance, we don't expect anyone to be super happy abut the idea but we'd ask them to not be outwardly hostile.
>Return to the Lair, introduce Francine properly, discuss with the whole group her plan to stop the rest of the West collective. We never actually did that part. So when we get to it, let's have the conversation with the whole party to minimize the amount of explanations that need to be repeated. I'm sure Francine will appreciate not having to deliver more exposition than she has to.
>Decide where to go from there, whether we aim for a specific goal we need to destroy the collective with or just explore in general.
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>>3745127
i dont care about winning, simply with what you were saying, i felt you were totally misrepresenting Raths genuine reasons for being weary and seeing this situation as a different sort of danger, by falsely equating past situations to this one. and, obviously, it didnt at all look like a joke to me.

>>3745128
im against the first line. simply doing it in person will work, we dont need both, and doing it in person first will give a more sincere feeling to it, in a way you cant do via..."cellphone".
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>>3745125
>>3745127
Good Night Anons

I will head to bed now desperatly gotta catch some shut eye

>>3745125
and thank you for the summary of Wests notes that will help me greatly when writing my story. up till now i only ever used my own memories as reference matrial of what the Powers/Choice powers should be like for each class
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>>3745138
night Anon.

its no hassle, glad they were of use to someone.
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>>3745136
>and, obviously, it didnt at all look like a joke to me.
Alright, sorry. I'm just...feeling sensitive about my communication skills right now, clearly, not sure why. I'm sorry for getting sullen on you.

>im against the first line. simply doing it in person will work, we dont need both, and doing it in person first will give a more sincere feeling to it, in a way you cant do via..."cellphone".
I think we should at least send a "hey, guys, don't freak out, we've got a clone of a mad scientist but she's the good clone" message.
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>>3745138
Sleep well, anon.
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>>3745158
eh, i mean i get the worry, its just, non frontal(is that the right ??) communication just naturally has emotional disconnect to it, and never handles long conversations aswell, especially when important. the problem is hearing such news in a method that leaves you wanting to say more, ALOT more, but then getting cut off and told to wait naturally will leave one anxious and let their mind go wild. hearing it in person lets you properly read the facial and bodily emotions of a person to their fullest extent, and then properly choose the time and how you go about the conversation and absorbing such important facts. it just feels like a major dick move to just be like 'hey, BTW, Bringing in a Francine clone, one sec while i get there."

i dont know a single person who would be entirely ok with that, on such an important topic, even if im only a minute or two from home. its just not the type of topic you pick up and instantly drop like that, no matter how short a drop it is. like an emotional sledgehammer to the gut and expecting them to be entirely reasonable once you come in and say 'ok NOW lets all be rational about this!"
maybe ive just had bad experiences with phone calls though, idk, i just know its not how id want important info to be handed to me if avoidable.
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>>3745174
Well, you're not wrong. But I just don't want to blindside them too much. This is the problem with party size limits, it's really difficult to get everyone in on the conversation at once. We should have had Julia, Dorian and Amara in on the first part of this conversation, that would have saved a lot of trouble. Maybe we should make some sort of livestreaming Relic, so that the people back at the base can keep up with what we're doing? Send back an information feed from Shu's swarms, give the Lair team the ability to call in on a HivePhone at any time and chime in on what's going on.
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>>3745191
i think just showing up first is enough not to blindside them at all.
maybe if we keep upgrading Joyous it can eventually stream to others not just Amara? who knows. maybe an augment to let her/ her clones turn themselves into basically a living projector. they are half all about proper information sharing afterall.
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(Gentlemen, I am afraid I must pause here for the evening. Given that I've tried to write this next section seven different ways, I believe that it would be prudent to wait until I've had some rest before I tackle a scene that I wish to do the justice it (and you) deserve. Thank you for your patience with my work schedule as of late, and thank you as well for your participation, enthusiasm, and time. I shall resume posting in roughly fifteen hours from now give or take, and I shall consider voting open until that time period ends. I wish you all a restful evening, and I'll be around a little longer to address any questions, comments, or concerns you may have. Take care, and thank you again.)
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>>3745390
oof, was work that hard today? sorry if that was the case, please, dont feel bad if you just clonk out instead of sticking around.
or is it in part the worse option, and one of our allies didn't take the news well? yes yes i know, spoilers.
regardless, heres a bit of art to soften your day. ive noticed its the same style as the one i used for Mother Bubbles, and one other vie got(though that ones less bodyhorror), and am now curious who the artist is.
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>>3745405
oh wait, found it.
what the hell google this didnt appear last time.
neat stuff here though, some of it fits the setting well.
https://www.deviantart.com/discommunicator

clearly, my terrible luck still exists, haha.
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>>3745405
(Ha, it wasn't that difficult, but it was compounded by lack of sleep, though certainly not by lack of trying. Also, thank you for sharing the art! I really like this style, and it's always good to pad the folder of...more images than will probably ever make it into the Quest, really.)

(Also, have no fear reagarding your decisions. You've handled this entire section better than I ever expected, as one outcome was for Francine to simply kill herself outright and leave the plans to kill West in your possession. She was very close to taking that route before you all started being kind to her.)
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>>3745423
hey man, more art never hurts. if it gets the ideas flowing, it gets them flowing.
you saying that about the art does bring up an interesting question ive wanted to ask you for awhile, but it without a doubt is better suited for an 'end of vein' question, especially because if you tried to answer it seriously it might keep you up. so look forward to that then.
ah, well good to hear then.
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got out of work and getting food.
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>>3745390
Ooph, sorry to hear that, BHOP. I understand that feeling, when the words just won't come. Get some rest, man. See you in the morning.

>>3745405
>>3745418
Oh, this is the person you used for the art for that Mother Bubble character. Nice, thanks for linking the gallery.
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>>3745423
Was she at least going to leave some message to let us know to come back and eat her? What a wimpy bitch otherwise.
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>>3745760
(She'd have shipped her remains to you, so that you had access to her skills. She is nothing if not practical.)
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>>3745158
Back from work.

>Return to the Dragon’s Roost after Francine’s gathered her things. You need to tell your family what’s happened, and confer with how to deal with Charon when the time comes.

An explanation fit for storytime for Amara when explaining Francine's situation:
>"Once upon a time, there was a certain Doctor who was curious about everything. One day she decided to make a clone of herself for the age old reason any doctor or scientist would explain when performing 'mad' science: FOR SCIENCE."
>"Dr. West made many clones, and the clones obeyed the doctor like puppets to a puppeteer."
>"One day, the Doctor sent a clone to help the robot people and gather data for more mad science. In the meantime, the clone would perform surgeries to save the lives of many girls by turning them into robot girls. But over time as she saved the lives of daughters who sought a way out, that clone grew a heart and conscience, and gave herself a name. Francine. You see, Francine is hurting because she remembers what Dr. West did after she was created. And remembering what Dr. West did gives her bad dreams and makes her sad. She did not want to stay a clone of the Doctor. And so, she decided to cut the strings that lets Dr. West control her."
>"Mrs. France is a bit like Pinocchio. And just like Pinocchio Mrs. France wants to become a real girl. A good girl, a girl who made it her goal to defeat Dr. West."
>If Amara asks if Francine has no strings on her (if she did watch Pinocchio before), Francine could humor Amara by unwinding some of Creation's strings and quote a few lines of "I've got no strings on me".

If we have time:
>"Amara, Robot City is going on a trip in a gigantic rocket ship to travel through the stars. One of the Robot girls wanted to give you a gift to remember her by before she leaves."
>Give Amara skintalker words.

>>3745088
We also have to account for our family member's differing philosophies. Dorian's the sort of gentlemen that sees things in black and white on first impression. And he's got a preconception of the Dr. West clones, I'm not sure about his stance about Francine even though he did see us interacting with her in Lewis Carrol's Forest. But we will have to talk to him and Julia as well.

As for Charon... We will need to come up with a good plan.

>>3745760
Francine was suicidal. She was on the brink of killing herself because she couldn't stand the fact that she was made from a mad doctor.

>>3745423
Bhop, so what sort of changes did the Artists make to the interior? And will we be able to expand Amara's library when we have the chance?
Here's some art of a girl I call "Afrobrain" that I found on the internet.
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>>3745843
(The vote for Amara's Lexicon will be in the first or second post tomorrow, so yes. Also, I think you'll find the Roost to your liking, as Julia, Dorian, and Amara have had some fun designing their own rooms.)
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>>3745862
I do have a question regarding November's Etain Frame. Are the 6 Relic slots made for relics that can count as "built-in modules" for November's frame? Because I get the impression that those 6 Relic slots basically function as abilities for November's Suit to empower and thus aren't subject to being easily stolen or damaged since they're installed as modules to the main suit. Which also means that Relics like the GD Uzi can simply be worn as accessory Relics.

Also, is November Right handed or left handed? This matters because I want to make sure her shooting hand doesn't get overburdened while making sure her offhand can still be of good use.
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>>3745843
my plan and what i wanted to do, was simply tell Them three in person what was gong on in the most simple and honest of terms, then let them mull it over and respond to any 'whys' or 'nos they have'. the issue i have is less with your story, more this is a very serious situation and we have two adults who are MUCH more likely to be vocal about any dislike at the situation, who it would be much much better to focus on them and hashing things out with them first, before we try and explain things to Amara. plus, Amaras not just our child, and it would only be fair to hear out anything Julia and Dorian have to say first, as if we cannot convince them id say we dont have a right to then try and convince Amara, at least not just outright infront of them.
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>>3745957
she might be ambidextrous, as she has a gun in each arm, and being a gun lover i certainly know anyone who tells you a shotgun does not require good aim and a steady hand to use is an outright liar.
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>>3746094
She probably has built-in stabilizers. A bunch of gyroscopes in her wrist or something like that.
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>>3746145
yeah, meant to mention that aswell, but that simply negates the issue before it even comes do two hand coordination really. a good thing, mind you, but just more reason shes probably good with either hand at firing off cannons.
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>>3746087
Fair enough. I honestly don't know what to say to Julia or Dorian preemptively. So we'll see how they express their opinion and react accordingly. I think Dorian will have more to say since we did get a glimpse into his philosophical musings when we had that talk about choice and "the possibility his musings on whether if it's ethical to force people down the path of good without them choosing" after nearly killing Lara (the Cheshire Worm) by accident.

>>3746094
>>3746087
In the meantime I'm currently figuring out future Relics that can be more specialized for November's use.

>>3745437
I also think we should come up with a better and more personalized Relic load-out for November with Relics that function better with November's Frame.

Here's my thoughts on November's 6 Relic slot modules:
>Head Slot: A sensory Relic or one that enables November to react better, something defensive. There will be enemy daughters that will have the idea that November's giant bulk and heavy armory will make her vulnerable and slow. So I recommend Crimson Jester's Blood-Iron Masque.

>Body Slot: This one's a tricky one since the relic that goes into the body slot will be the main relic that takes the majority of the damage November will incur in battle. But Ideally, it is also the Relic that empowers November the most by giving her more utility to bring more Armaments to the field.

>Right Arm Slot:
>Left Arm Slot:
>Left Leg Slot:
>Right Leg Slot: I've yet to decide. Working on several possibilities

Here's a relic idea. It works for both flesh daughters and Daughters use a forge Frame
>Sutyr's Stakes: A pair of Molten Blood-Iron Spikes attached to a pair of footwear. From the sole of the foot, The Spikes are thigh high (Grade A). An unorthodox pair of relics to say the least as this relic is meant to be worn on the legs of a daughter. When activated as a swift action, the Spikes drive themselves into the Earth, rooting the daughter in place as a swift action. However, if the daughter commits a full action to activate the Relic, the spikes begin to siphon raw vitality from the heart of the Earth and channel it into the wearer. Each spike active grants a regen rate equivalent to 1/10th of the wearer's maximum hp each round (a total of 1/5th the wearer's maximum hp per round with both spikes active). Yet clever usage of these relics can yield surprising results as the spikes can inflict surprising amounts piercing damage while ignoring 2 levels of pierce resistance. Should the Relic be activated when the spikes are embedded inside a daughter or an amalgam, they begin to drain the enemy of its health (drain is mitigated by enemy's own hp regen).
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>>3746228
I've got a vague idea for a "Dionysian Cyst" Relic that is specifically meant to be installed in the user's leg already. Reference to Zeus sewing Zagreus' heart into his thigh after the rest of him was incinerated by collateral lightning damage, which eventually led to Dionysus popping out like a parasitic wasp larva. I figure it would work with Dionysian themes, madness and savagery and emotion. Phantasmal Conduit, naturally. I'm seeing it as an "electronic warfare" module for November, messing with the emotions of enemies on the a battlefield-wide scale to throw off their aim and keep them from coordinating among each other.
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>>3746228
yeah, i think Dorian will be the only one actually vocal, with at worst Julia trying to find a way to support him. however, i think Julia will see herself in this situation a bit, its not a perfect match but it has been implied even if it was mostly look that offput us about her, i think she did say mentally she was teetering a little before we gave her a chance. really, im more worried she'll feel like she has to back up Dorian, due to their relationship, more than anything, as she basically admitted to having no idea how to do relationships and this would be the first time she might have to make such a decision in said relationship.

>In the meantime I'm currently figuring out future Relics that can be more specialized for November's use.
sure. though do keep in mind, id be surprised if we wont already usually have at least an Armor relic laying around for her to use when shes on the team. i mean with 3 sets and Shu able to form her own, its actually basically guaranteed.

>>3746228
>>3746246
>I also think we should come up with a better and more personalized Relic load-out for November with Relics that function better with November's Frame.
to a degree, but again, like i said above, we will probably always have a few relic laying about, and i dont think we have any reason to make Relics only usable by her, especially when you consider the whole point of this frame is to keep her malleable and not stuck with a singular playstyle, thus not a singular set of relics, but that means we want to at least keep relics shes not using an option for others id argue.
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>>3746228
>Sutyr's Stakes
honestly it would make more sense for them to restore BIO from the ground in my opinion.
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>>3746258
>to a degree, but again, like i said above, we will probably always have a few relics laying about, and i dont think we have any reason to make Relics only usable by her, especially when you consider the whole point of this frame is to keep her malleable and not stuck with a singular playstyle, thus not a singular set of relics, but that means we want to at least keep relics shes not using an option for others id argue.
That I understand. Which is why I'm doing this design exercise of theory-crafting Relics that could see possible use in both Shu's Family and November herself with creative application.

Can you give me some feedback to Surtyr's Stakes? The main idea that I started was finding a way for November to recharge her Forge reserves (aka her hp pool) on the off-chance we don't bring along Rath to fight by November's side. I then tried to find a way to give the relic enough flexibility that it could also be used by other members of the family while maintaining usefulness. End result: a pair of pile-bunkers attached to their feet that act as heavy duty spikes that siphon large quantities of hp the moment they drive the spikes into the fleshscape...or a daughter/amalgam with an impaling kick.
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>>3746258
>but that means we want to at least keep relics shes not using an option for others id argue.
Very true. I'm trying to avoid things that are too obviously for her. Like, the Dionysian Cyst could still be used by others, burrowing into their flesh, it's just most easily used by someone who has interchangeable slots. In general I'm trying to avoid apparel, too. No boots or gloves or pants that we might have to worry about how they'd fit into her slot system (does a pair of gloves fill both the Arm slots, even though they count as one Relic?), rather tools that could be justified as fitting on hardpoints or talismans that could bolt on or be installed internally.
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>>3746305
>>3746298
well, i guess i was too slow or fast.
but ill further explain. siphoning from the ground already used to be a thing, and directly replenished Biomass, so it feels like thats what trying to draw from the ground would continue to do.

>>3746310
good point, and i think the other Anon raised it too. do these relics basically 'slot in'? meaning we get the 6 relics that her body itself reconfigured to be a temporary 'part' of her, meaning they dont take up any outward space, thus meaning we can then technically pile more relics on her outside, just without the special stat increases?

im thinking we should get this question answered, before we get too wild, as it'll matter alot. if say, the gloves will just slot in and fill up a singular slot, then there no point trying to make 'modules' as it was as the Etain itself basically just turns every relic into that. but that again, depends on how this works. i mean, he did say the Armors still work, but the slots are internal, so its totally reasonable to assume one sets just folded up inside her, then she could wear another one on the outside with no ill speed effects most likely.
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>>3746328
Ok, I understand that part, but I think you're missing the point of the Relic and why the thigh-high stakes exist. My logic was that if the surface level of the fleshscape provides bio for the daughters, what if we went and dug deeper? My other line of thinking was that November doesn't really have an innate source of HP regen. Aside from standing near Rath when she "flames on" or tethering herself to her tank, she doesn't have a way to replenish fuel for her Forge reactor.

I know it's counter intuitive since it's pushed towards becoming a singular relic where November benefits from it the most, but it is an idea on the table. Anyways, thank you for your feedback. I'm going to think of other Relic ideas.
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>>3746379
well, its implied the fleshscape goes very deeply into the ground, and to be fair i think part of the point is that we are supposed to be using her with the tank. i think its also been described she cant actually get Regen outside of the tank or her meditation method already, so unless Etain changes that it wont work for that anyways.
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>>3746397
I wouldn't be so sure of that. I might not remember exactly what's been established, but I don't recall Bhop explicitly stating that November can't regenerate her hp through work-arounds and other methods. She might be unable to regenerate bio or health the normal way, and it's been established that the Dusk subroutine and Tethering herself to the tank is a surefire way to regenerate her hp, but bhop didn't say said methods were the only methods to regain hp, nor did he confirm nor deny the existance of other methods and work-arounds to getting November a source of HP regen to fuel her forge-frame. So lets leave that possibility open please?
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>>3746427
i seem to recall he had. but regardless, i already think this is an iffy subject as without knowing how Etain works more we cant properly design relics for her at all in my opinion, so best to just hold off til these questions get answered sure.
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>>3746397
I think the Hydras Heart still worked on her. So i think that implies that she can get REGEN from other sources. Just probably not form her normal moveset
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>>3746435
im not sure if it did. i dont recall her having any regen in any of her fights.

yeah just looked it up, he just listed she had the relic, but not if she had any Regen. so we have no way of knowing without asking, hes always been busy the last few times we have asked about her compatibility with relics on her old frame in the past too, and we have no idea how this new frame changes things regardless.
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>>3746443
>>3745862
forwarding the question to bhop:
>"Do Relics that give hp regen work on November?"
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>>3745862
>>3746555
also, we would like a more in-depth explanation of how Etains slot mechanics work, if you dont mind.
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>>3745067

Francine exits her room, a backpack slung over one shoulder as she turns to close the door behind her, tapping the frame twice with her knuckles before striding down the hall to rejoin you.

"That's all you're taking?" Gina asks incredulously

“The less I carry with me, the more room I have for what matters.” The doctor replies, turning to November with a cocked smile. “You said that, I believe? Shortly after we first met?”

“Good memory, Doc.” November replies, and you watch as the imposing frame gives the other woman a thumb’s-up.

“I’m going to go back home and let the others know what’s happened before we just teleport back there.” You announce, and Fran’s eyebrows shoot up as you retrieve Escher’s Gear from your dress pocket. “I’ll be back soon.”

“I’m terribly sorry Darling, but did you just say you were going to…?”

Your world tilts, the cold, grey corridor replaced with the warm, comfortable space you call your own. Glancing around, you find the main living area empty until you call out for the rest of your family. They emerge from a doorway three rooms down from yours, and it’s as they walk up to you that you realize that those rooms weren’t there when you left.

“Having fun with the Core Console, I take it?” You chuckle, getting the breath almost knocked out of you when Amara collides with you at the end of a high-speed tackle-hug. Luminous, two-toned eyes look up at you as Julia and Dorian arrive next to you.

“We made rooms! Super-cool ones for me, Rath, Aunt Julia and Uncle Dorian, too!” Amara cheers, throwing her arms wide at the door ways they just left.

“Good to know, I’ll have to check it out when everyone’s back. So…would you all be open to making one more?” You ask, prompting an arched eyebrow from the scarlet-clad painter before you.

“D-did you f-find someone else who wants to j-join?” Julia asks excitedly, while Dorian’s already picked up on your mounting nerves. “I n-need to make t-tea! D-do we have any sugar left, D-Dorian?”

“I kind of wanted to catch you all up on what’s just happened, actually. So if the tea can wait…” You begin, gesturing to the table and chairs to your left. “…I think you all should have a seat.”

They take it as well as can be expected, with Julia’s sweetness and questions tempered by Dorian’s reluctance and quiet contemplation. Amara stays silent, her brow furrowed in concentration as she listens intently to your tale.

“So, I think the one big takeaway from all this is that we really need to have Rath make some sort of live streaming Relic.” Dorian says, leaning forward and placing his elbows on the table, his amorphous fingers steepling before him.

(Continued)
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>>3747262

“Regardless, is this something you’re comfortable with?” You ask, meeting Dorian’s single, electric blue eye with your own unblinking gaze. “The question goes for everyone present; if anyone’s not on board with Francine coming with us, this ends now. You’re my family, and I don’t want you to have reservations.”

“S-Shu…of c-course we have reservations.” Julia replies, hands folded in her lap. “B-but you had reservations about t-talking to me, when we f-first met. Dorian knows t-taking him with you was r-risky, since you d-didn’t even know him.”

Julia rises from her chair, walking over to Amara and placing her hands gently upon the other girl’s slim shoulders with a smile.

“I g-guess what I’m trying to say is that our family’s founded on second chances.” She continues. “If we were to t-turn this woman away, wouldn’t we be turning our back on what brought us together in the first place?”

Dorian nods, looking from her to you, once more. “Alright. Whenever you’re ready, let’s meet her.”

[Gina, think everyone’s about ready to come back to the Roost?] You ask, the Crimson Cord flaring to life.

{Yeah, and make it quick…Francine’s chomping at the bit to experience teleportation, I had to answer about half a dozen questions the second you vanished, so…} She trails off, and your world tilts again, then a third time as you arrive back at the Dragon’s Roost with your entire family in tow…plus one.

The tension emanating from Francine is palpable as she adjusts the backpack on her shoulders.

“Greetings.” Francine stiffly announces, swallowing hard. “It’s a pleasure to meet you all.”

“I’m Julia P-Pickman.” Your sculptress replies warmly, moving forwards with her hand outstretched. Francine hesitantly extends her gloved hand in return, and Julia shakes it with a formal bow. “W-what sort of b-beverages do you like? We have t-tea, coffee, and D-Dorian has some very n-nice liquors if you’d l-like!”

“Oh, I…tea, if you’d be so…” Francine begins, halting when Dorian strides up, his cool blue gaze trained on the Doctor for a moment…before he gives a smile to match Julia’s.

“Good to have you with us, Doctor. May I take your coat and bag?” He offers, and you watch Francine flounder as she’s overwhelmed with her hosts’ kindness. She shakes her head, muttering that she couldn’t possibly impose when Dorian just chuckles. “Come now, it wouldn’t do to have you lugging all that around when you’re our guest. Please, make yourself comfortable while I help Lady Julia get the tea in order, I insist.”

(Continued)
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>>3747268

The Doctor reluctantly turns over her bag and coat, looking around the space with her lips pursed, her awkwardness at the entire situation evident even as she takes a seat at the far end of the table. You sit at the head, and watch as Amara trots around to the chair opposite Francine, sliding it out with a child’s deliberate, forceful movements and taking the seat with intention. The little girl just glares at Fran for a long moment, and you’re about to defuse the standoff when Amara finally speaks.

“Are you a dentist?” She blurts out, leaning across the table with a sudden burst of speed.

“I…no. No, I’m not that sort of Doctor.” Francine stammers, leaning back until Amara blinks at her, then grins.

“Okay!” She declares, plopping back down in her seat as Francine glances your way, hoping for some sort of explanation. You just shrug while Julia brings Francine a cup of tea, arranging her cups and napkins with care before you gather your family around the table. Gina and Rath take their places on your right and left respectively, while Dorian, Julia, and Amara it on the left-hand side of the table. You note that November’s taken a seat next to Fran, the two of them speaking in hushed tones before you clear your throat, calling your impromptu meeting to order.

“Alright, so now that everyone’s caught up on the situation at hand, we need to prepare for the biggest threat that may be headed our way, sooner rather than later.” You start, leaning back as you address the table. “We need to know where Charon is so we can plan for their arrival, though whether that plan involves delaying them, fighting them, or something else entirely…I’m open to suggestions.”

“Trap them.”

“Kick their ass.”

Gina and Rath lock eyes, their simultaneous responses echoing in the cavernous space.

“Dude, we fought and beat Isabelle-turned-Mother, I think we can handle the Hexane that got their ass handed to them by Ozmas.” Rath says, arms thrown wide.

“Two points; first, we only beat Isabelle by the skin of our teeth, with a small army backing us up.” Gina replies calmly, her gentle tone softening the blow of her counter. “Second, it was clear that B’ni wasn’t a perfect vessel for Ozma’s powers, and she didn’t have a full handle on what she was doing. If Charon and Isabelle had fought, then I think the victor would have been exceedingly clear.”

Rath huffs, leaning back in her chair in time with Gina leaning forwards.

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>>3747272

“Now, I’m not entirely opposed to fighting, mind you.” GG continues. “It can be done, but I would want us to get much stronger than we are, now. Or choose a place to fight that would let us fight Charon on equal footing, if possible.”

“M-maybe some p-place like…Almath?” Julia offers, and Gina snaps her fingers in agreement.

"This may be somewhat silly to ask, Miss Shu, but...are we absolutely certain that Charon's coming for us?" Dorian posits, and you realize you don't necessarily have a concrete answer. "I’d hate for us to devote time and resources to countering something that may not occur.”

“You could always just ask Mother.”

You turn as one, Francine’s words hanging in the air for an uncomfortable moment.

“I…sorry, I didn’t mean to…” She stumbles, and Gina raises her hand.

“Honestly, that’s a possibility.” She muses, turning from Fran to you. “We could have someone reach out, try to finagle some info out of Mother. She could be vulnerable right now, and she’s proven she’s not exactly the sharpest Hexane around, given her talk with B’ni in Almath. Maybe we get her talking, get her gloating about how she’s going to turn things around…we get some ideas as to what she’s planning to do.”

You mind churns, turning over the possibilities that have been voiced, along with a host of others that tumble about in your mind. You know you’re the last word in how to proceed, but as for what that word is…you have to weigh your options carefully.

>>Begin hunting the Fleshscape for Amalgams to strengthen yourselves with. It might be leaving your growth up to chance, but it's better than involving anyone else.

>>Go to Golgotha to inspect the bounty boards Magpie alluded to. It might be a decent way of strengthening yourselves while also staying on the move...but it runs the risk of catching others in the crossfire when and if Charon comes calling.

>>You need to get a lead on where Charon is, and that requires information. You have the Amara network, the Skintalker in Golgotha that Jackie told you about…you have options, certainly (Write-In).

>>Reach out to Mother and feel out her intentions. You could be worrying for nothing...but you'd rather not hope, and maneuvering her into revealing what she plans to do could help you plan your next moves. Though as for who should talk to her…that’s another matter, entirely.

>>Write-In

YOU ARE IN CONTROL
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(Voting shall remain open for the next two hours, Gentlemen. Thank you for your patience, and I hope you’re having a good day.)

>>3746555
>>3746580

(HEALTH REGEN Relics do work on November, and on top of their current effects they also tend to grant her additional HEALTH REGEN when slotted in to Etain.)

(The way her Frame mechanics work is as follows; the six slots are coded to her arms, legs, chest, and head. Certain Relics are fairly limited in how they’re supposed to ‘lock-in’, such as the Crown having to be locked into the head slot, the Ignition Gauntlets having to be locked into the arms or legs, but not the head or chest, and so forth. Some Relics, like the Nail, aren’t tied to a specific body part and can be slotted anywhere you like. Slotted Relics grant November additional stat, regen, and other bonuses on top of the Relic’s additional effects. However, if you equipped the Sui Tormentis in the chest slot, then tacked the Spine onto November, both would normally take up the same slot, so November would only gain the additional stats and such from the Tormentis, but she would benefit from the originally listed abilities of both Relics. Thus, you’re free to equip as many Relics as you like on November, but with the caveat that she’s only going to gain additional benefits from slotted Relics.)

(I hope this helps.)

(Oh, and she’s ambidextrous, so no worries about impacting her shooting hand as she’s trained extensively with both.)
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(Regarding the write-in about Amara storytime, I have that saved for later, since it's a safe bet she's going to have questions regarding Francine and morality coming soon.)
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>>3747274
>we are a team, a party, a family... we have options.
>Split jobs.

>>Amara, Julia, and Fran team up to start gathering information, using Frans intellect, Amaras clones, and Amara and Julias ability to team up to coax Information from the fleshscape.

>>Shu, November, and Dorian team up to go amalgam hunting, using Novembers tank to offeset the lacking teammate. its a bit of a risk, but with the etchers Gear we have options to run, and the Tank will keep us mobile. our plan is to hunt for the entire family, not just those out hunting.

>>Gina stays behind and uses her wits, charms, and unique abilities to coax info from mother, then help Rath and the Info team afterwards.

>>Rath stays behind with a collection of Biomass from everyone, her job is two part; Forge Relics specifically made to help counter Charon, and Forge Relics specifically to catch November up to speed power wise.
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>>3747299
Then it may be interesitng to get her the Hydras heart at a higher level......

>>3747274
Supporting>>3747309
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>>3747306
nice thinking BHOP.

>>3747299
nice, but you missed one question, but thats fair as we didn't link it; when slotting relics, would things like the Ignition Gauntlets take two slots, or one, due to being slotted?obvious normally they use up both hands, but does slotting change this, as that means were putting them in an internal compartment? how does this work with weapons? say, if we put the Uzi in an arm, can then then, say, open up her hand to use the internal gun, with the uzi then popping out the top to use both at once? what about for melee weapons and the like?

>>3747313
it would also be a work around to the very real question of who to keep they Hydra heart on, as at level 2 it becomes stuck to the wielder.
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>>3747318
The only questions that remains is this. How would the heart replacement affect her? Since her Forge Core is pretty much her Heart
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>>3747331
im not sure thats an issue? she might be like Dorian where shes immune to Relics fusing with her, but due to the nature of the suit and it being metal instead of flesh, rather than her being liquid, of course.

otherwise? we may see something VERY interesting where it fuses WITH the core and creates something entirely new.
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>>3747299
Thank you very much. This clears up the issues me and >>3746580 were having.

>>3747309
I'm iffy on the idea that we should keep making new relics. We've already spent a big portion of our health and bio pool making gifts for the Midnight crew. with the following debuffs listed here. >>3729935

>Shu; -250% Health/ -235% Bio
>Rath; -160% Health/ -110% Bio
>Julia; -430% Health/ -55% Bio
>Amara; -100% Health/ -50% Bio
>Gina; -400% Health/ -400% Bio
>Dorian; -100% Health/ -10% Bio

>>3747313
Personally for a playstyle that November has when it comes to her heavy arsenal and ranged playstyle, I think Surtyr's Stakes would be a better fit for her since the Rooting effect would help with any recoil issues, the stakes would give November a substantial source of health regen, and serve as a useful close combat weapon when pressed. Something to think about. There's also the issue that Hydra's Heart makes the wielder very weak to fire damage as getting burned would shut off any health regen directed towards the cauterized area. And we have two daughters that rely on Fire damage as a source of healing and whatnot. It just seems counter intuitive to equip a relic that makes a daughter weak to fire damage when you have a living flame as part of your party.
>>3747342
It's risky, and I'm not sure what sort of interaction it would bring.

>>3747318
Now that I think about it, I'm not sure if Charon would directly gun for us immediately. Given that Shu struck a very big blow against Mother and prompted a global revolution, wouldn't Mother devote better time and resources stamping out the little fires instead of trying to kill the leader? Lets look at it from Ozma's perspective Killing Shu and her family would simply make them Martyr figures and make the revolt more difficult for her to stamp out now that she's down to simply one personal enforcer and 3 admin tokens per vein. Not only that, Shu and the Family have proven that they are capable of overwhelming and beating the odds. So sending Charon in would yield significant risk in losing her only proxy to the Crucible surface world, Shu might drag Charon down with her even when she dies. Right now, after Shu has crippled Ozmas, Ozmas would be more worried about the scores of daughters flocking towards Shu as well as other significant pieces like Mara who are stalling out the Crucible. It'll be inevitable that Shu would gain such a large following, but what Ozmas can do is limit how much support Shu would draw from the globe. So to conclude, I think Ozmas is trying to play the long game. She'll do her best to limit the amount of support Shu would get from the world-over, and what she couldn't stop, she'll have to leave it to the daughters that still play by Ozma's rules to weaken and hopefully corrupt Shu's influence over time.
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>>3747356
while its true we have already used up alot of biomass, and i get the worry, Charons not something we are ready to face, and our arsenal could use a little bit more due to having November around now.

i get what you're saying about Ozmas and Charon, but two things; We would need to know that and learning what Mother is up to wont harm us at all, n matter of fact, Doing an info gathering run could help us learn alot more than just our goal via happenstance. id also say if that is what Mother is doing, it might be important for US to then go after Charon ourselves, which again we have to learn whats going on first to make that decision, and would still need to be prepared to face Charon too.

also Raths fire cant hurt allies, so it would only be enemy fire damage we have to worry about. Novembers natural heat immunity with a T3 Core might overide that too, aswell as the fact Novembers body already cant regenerate limbs or similar wounds anyways, so that literally doesn't effect her at all.
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(So you may plan accordingly; I shall open voting for both a second crafting session and Amara's new words in the next update. Importantly, given the timing of the Veins you will be fully recovered from whatever you spend when the 28th Vein opens, so do with that as you will.)

>>3747318

(Given the construction of the Etain model and the fact that your ‘slots’ are really just re-worked Forge Cores located throughout November’s new body, paired items like the Gauntlets would draw power from a single slot, despite being on both arms. Thus, November could absolutely slot the Gauntlets in one arm, the Uzi in another, and then manifest the Uzi in her armored hand, all the while benefitting from stat boosts from both Relics. I hope this helps to explain it a bit better.)

>>3747331
(While the Heart would be locked in, it would function simply as an extraneous organ. However, be advised that Relics that lock-in to the user are still able to be removed from Etain, since she is not bound by the same physiological rules as other Daughters. Relics that would normally bind themselves to the user on a physical level have nothing to hold onto when it comes to Artificial- and Liquid-class Daughters, as November and Dorian are examples of.)

(As a bit of fun spoilers…your current Tier of Forge Core does grant some fun benefits as to what bonuses November gains, so a Tier 5 Forge Core can certainly allow permanent fusion of Relics to Etain. The given slot would be permanently locked, but the benefits are…worth it, to be sure.)
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>>3747394
ah, yeah thats all awesome, thanks for the info. neat to hear we can turn November into a weapon porcupine basically now, heh.
im looking forward to getting November, Francine, and Amara hashed out on the character sheets too, any suggestions for a color for Fran? think Novembers title and color scheme should be updated too?
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>>3747380
I've been thinking hard about how to optimize November's Loadout.

Given Bhop's explanation about Etain's Relic Slots, and how they're slotted in,

>>3747394
>Thus, November could absolutely slot the Gauntlets in one arm, the Uzi in another, and then manifest the Uzi in her armored hand, all the while benefitting from stat boosts from both Relics. I hope this helps to explain it a bit better.
>November has HyperVector Trap Manifold-fields when manifesting slotted Relics.
Oh boy. Now this is INTERESTING. This makes things easier for me to design Relics.

I do have a question however. For relics that use Cursus Alas, would it be fair that those relics draw the fuel from November's HP pool? Because when I originally designed Cursus Alas, I didn't know Artificial daughters existed. That and the idea that November would keel over from one use of Cursus Alas lvl 2 given her tiny bio pool is just ridiculous.
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>>3747394
Okay, I have one last question about the Etain that others haven't addressed yet: Slotting Relics has cosmetic effects, right? Whether to the Etain or to the Relic installed. Because half the fun of a customizable super robot body is playing Fashion Horror with it.
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>>3747411
i mean... to be fair... November basically has a built in Cursas Alas.
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>>3747414
I wouldn't be surprised if Nova Lunge upgrades to a full jetpack at a higher Tier.
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>>3747413
Oh shit. We still haven't given November her desired Ace Custom paint job.
>>3747414
good point.

Still. I'll be trying to design some relics that will be made by the beginning of the 28th vein.
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>>3747413
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>>3747417
same.

>>3747417
>>3747423
so, BHOPS hinting that we wont get to any actual fighting this Vein, which given many aspects is fair. but honestly? i kinda like seeing and was just gonna let Rath herself make relics based off the criteria we gave her, with the one caveat we of course have her insert the gems into relics.

and i think im gonna keep my vote to that. she has all but two people to draw biomass from ,so that wont be an issue, especially with said others not going out to fight, leaving just where to put the 3 gems, and whether to leave any relics behind for upgrades.

my votes still for keeping the sisters in the same relic. its a nice thematic and IC thing to do, to make them able to outright directly communicate with each-other and have them team up. the question is where? their defensive options are honeslty the better ones in my opinion, so one of the armor suits i think would be best.

and what of our shocky girl? i think the shock damage is the better option, but where? maybe the ignition gauntlets? we have enough heat/radiant damage a think, so changing them to be shock gauntlets might finally make people stop forgetting we even have the poor things.
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>>3747411
(Relics that would normally drain from BIO drain from HEALTH, instead, at a rate of 1.5% the original rate.)

>>3747413
>>3747423
(Yes, they have cosmetic effects much like corruption on normal Daughters. Body Fashion Quest is in full effect, Gentlemen.)

(Also, the odds are high that the Vein will conclude before day's end, to allow me some time to address questions and catch up on tweaking Relics, their stats, and such.)

>>3747404
(As far as November goes, I leave it up to everyone present, though a red or yellow would work for Francine, I believe. Also, I'm quite looking forward to Amalgam-hunting with November and Dorian in thr next Vein. They're both characters I've wanted to write for as of late.)
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>>3747440
will the relics that we theory craft in this vein have a possible appearance by the 28th vein's incision?

>Also, I'm quite looking forward to Amalgam-hunting with November and Dorian in thr next Vein. They're both characters I've wanted to write for as of late.
You've been waiting to bust out Stormbolt Artillery aren't you?

>>3747437
>Flaming shock gauntlets
>useful as hand warmers
>makes for an impromptu Defib paddles.
Well then.
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>>3747440
hrm, well 'Veteran of Rust' i think still fits, not due to her being rusty, but due to all shes been through even before the Crucible. her color scheme, however, i leave up to others if that changes. same for Francine, im up for either color, but ill let others give their word. or they wont like they always do, and ill decide when i get to it.

>>3747444
is... that a vote in favor of putting her in the gauntlets? thoughts on others aspects of what i said?

>>3747440
also, fair point. BHOP, would it be amiss of me to ask if we could both abuse the ending of the vein to please those who want to directly craft relics, but then still have Rath stay behind for the plan in the 28th so she can then do her own thing with the criteria we gave her? please both crowds, as it was?
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>>3747448
(By all means. Rath will use what resources are left over with the criteria you've provided, and full-blown crafting can occur during or after this Vein. For those of you that want time to craft, I can certainly leave the voting open past thr end of this Vein, since I'm sure you will have questions and I'd hate to compress your ideas into such a constrained timeslot. It's up to you all.)
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>>3747437
Personally, I'd like to make an armor for Gina and put the sisters in that. Yeah, she's not front-line, but that doesn't mean she doesn't need protection. We get the physical-type damage resistance from Jess, and the Neuromancy cost-reduction from Jan. So Gina would be more secure, and she'd be able to throw out Dominion Leashes for free.

As for Shauna, I could see putting her in the gauntlets, yeah. I'd like to put her in the Contender, maybe, let us shoot lightning in addition to bugs, but that would probably take a Tier 5 Forge and Level 15 Forgemistress' Fingers. So yeah, let's go for lightning punches, instead.
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>>3747448
It is not a vote in favor of the gauntlets. I was simply listing down some off-tangent yet creative ideas of mundane utility for the gauntlets.

What I'm thinking is November Electricity Immunity with the Shock Gem.
November with a T-3 core is immune to Neuromancy, Phantasmal Conduit abilities, Heat/Fire, and Cold/Frost. Given that her body is an artificial super robot body, She would logically be weak to Electricity and be susceptible to Acid damage. I want to rectify that so that November would only have to contend with Acid Damage on the table of Elemental damage and weaknesses.
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>>3747454
By all means, thank you very much for leaving the vote open ended. It will give us time to do all our theory crafting as well as organize what sort words Amara will pick and choose in expanding her library.
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>>3747454
that works. i just really love the idea of letting Rth go wild, and it always ends up working out for us. i cant imagine Rath would do anything but be MORE pumped either preparing for a hard fight and helping her Aunt out aswell.

>>3747455
eh, i just dont like that. our frontline fighters would benefit so so heavily from neuromantic protection, and more protection in general. its just wasting powerful resources on Gina in my opinion.

im not sure she could go in the Contender honestly.

>>3747456
eh, i think the shock damage will do us better, due to it increasing damage aswell. if it was more than just a single level, id be for it, but plenty of things knock down resistances, so a single level isnt worth it for elemental protection.
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>>3747457
(Very well; I shall open the vote at the end of the Vein, and provide you with Amara's possible words at that time, as well.)
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>>3747455
>>3747456
i think so far my vote is;

>Sister, Sui Tormentis or Cutis Tractus
>Shock crystal, Gauntlets
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>>3747470
>>3747468
Is it possible to stuff two daughter gemstones into a singular relic? Because I'm thinking of putting Jan and Jessica into the same Armor Relic.
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>>3747473
(Oh, absolutely.)
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>>3747309
Thinking about it, I'm not sure Rath would be happy about this party split. She expressed a desire for caution with Francine, putting her in a group with Amara and only one other person would probably be against her desires. Also, I'd like to be there to backup Gina when dealing with Ozmas. She's got the stronger Neuromancy, but I'd still be more comfortable if she had another Neuromancer to help her out with this. I'd like to propose that we add Gina to the information-gathering team to assist with any Neuromantic insights she has, and have her attempt to interrogate Ozmas later once we all reconvene and we can assist her. Also, we should give the information team one of the Escher's Gear spokes, and make a set of HivePhones so we can communicate between all our groups.
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>>3747502
Gina can handle Ozmas, have some trust in her. also, Francine is pretty weak, and can help out from the home base where Rath and Gina can watch over her. all she needs is a clone really to communicate with Julia and Amaras clones out in the field, and keep in mind Julia herself would only need to leave every now and again if the clones find a specific place they need a boost to get info out of.

90% of the Time, Gina will have Amara, Julia, Francine, and Rath there to support her, and 90+% of the Time Francine will be watched by Gina, Rath, Julia, and Amara, if not at least two of them all the time.

we have multiple party members, and all of them are competent, and we have alot of things we need to get done that are of great importance. please, for once, trust our family to be able to do things without Shu babysitting them.
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>>3747511
I think I misunderstood what you were proposing, then. I didn't realize you intended for the information-gathering group to be dispersed like that, with Julia and Francine back at the Lair with the rest. I thought you wanted Julia, Francine and Amara to all go out in the field, not just send clones out and have Julia and Francine analyze what they report back. Okay, that's fine, then. I'm not personally worried about Francine, I just don't want Rath to be. But that should prevent the issue. I'm not sure how well Julia would be able to go out and help the Amara clones, though, that probably would require some intervention fro Shu with Escher's Gear. Like we give the Amara clones a spoke, and when Julia needs to head out she calls up Shu on the HivePhone (still think we should forge some) and asks to ferry her over real quick.

As for Gina, I suppose you're right. Ozmas is weak enough now that she can't afford to do anything to Gina over psychic contact. I shouldn't worry. Though I'm still wondering if we should save that until after we've read/experienced Ozmas' journal. Just for the extra bit to needle her with our knowledge of her past, get her to drop details in anger.
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>>3747524
Gina can always read the journal on her own first if she so wishes.

i will admit it may be difficult for Julia to help, but not impossible. maybe we should make her a motorcycle real quick or something. that, and Amara could always mark places her clones find down then get to that second part later. i just wanted Amara to have that dual tech available just incase she finds something they should jump on quickly. keep in mind too of course, if danger is a worry, Gina, Rath, and Francine can probably afford to drop what they are doing for a moment to go help her check the place out. Especially as Ginas supposed to potentially join their team anyways and i doubt her talk with Mother will last long.
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>>3747532
you mean Ozma’s journal? didn’t we say that one is off limits because of the emotional bleedover from the hexxane nature?
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>>3747583
no, some wanted it off limits to respect our Dream Hexxanes wishes for us not to read it in order to spite Ozmas legacy and not have her be a source or how we think about the Hexxane. the emotional thingy they do has nothing to do with, it as of now anyways.
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>>3747593
Personally, I'm of the opinion of reading Charon's first, then judging whether we should read Ozmas'. Also, getting the opinion of the rest of the Dream Hexane. We know Silvis thinks we shouldn't read it, we don't know the opinions of Cheruem, Mulvath or Vultha. I think Vultha would probably not want to, just for the sake of not dragging up bad old memories, while Cherurem would for the sake of knowing the enemy and Mulvath would because they're always up for new experiences.
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>>3747622
maybe, we can ask but we'll see. im fine with waiting for sure if nothing else. my worry is Silvis is right and none of them will forgive us for even bringing it up.
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>>3747626
if your worry is that big, then don't read Ozma's journal.
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>>3747668
well, im not. never was saying i was voting for it, i was just reminding the other Anon Gina reading it on her own was indeed an option on the table, if he was so worried. to which he seems to agree waiting to read it is probably best, so the issue seems to have been resolved.
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>>3747456
IF we give her an artifact with the electricity resistance and then also give her a plateling armorset (which grants considerable acid resistance) then we’ve got a real tank.
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>>3747678
It'll make her a pseudo tank, not a true tank. the issue with November and how we're stacking armor is that it has the onion layer dilemma where each layer is resistant to a single type of elemental damage instead of all the elemental damage types.
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>>3747678
>>3747723
she'll also possibly be lacking in outright defense compared to others, and unless we build her other relics around it she would never make use of those resistances. her standard weaponry doesn't lock her into anything, but it makes her flow better as a character focusing on trying to make her more mid range or support, rather than the actual front line.

i mean, it can work im positive on that, im just saying her entire thing is she probably wont ever excel at any one position unlike other characters, and when making her things its best to keep that in mind.
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>>3747723
Yeah, but it would actually only be two layers. The outer layer which is immune to acid and resistant to heat. Then the inner layer which, thanks to the electricity-immunity Relic being installed in November's torso slot, is one solid layer of null-psychic/null-heat/null-cold/null-electric, with whatever other defenses her Relic loadout produces and significant Health increases from installing those Relics. Going by the examples BHOP gave, filling all of November's slots should be expected to give somewhere between a thousand and fifteen hundred bonus Health, depending on which Relics are used. She's going to be beefy.

>>3747729
I think the biggest advantage of November's immunities will be not so that she can intercept big attacks on the frontline but so that it's much harder to suppress her. Anyone relying on three of the four most common types of elemental ranged attacks will be unable to take her out or even force her to dodge. So she can continue about her business, whatever her role on the battlefield happens to be with her current loadout, with much less worry.
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>>3747762
eh, i still think it would work better on someone else, if thats the route we even went down. November has the advantage of not usually being in melee, others wont.

i still think one level of Resistance is a waste though, compared to going for the damage.
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>>3747762
>3k average in bonus health
>still doesn't hold a candle to Mara's Five-digit health bar.
Either we need to find more high level forge cores to swap of November's Main reactor or install them into November's Relic slot modules, or we need to make some very high level relics.
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>>3747769
we cant make high level relics without a new cores though, so both go hand in hand. who knows? maybe the Amara clones will spot one while out information gathering?
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>>3747768
It's not resistance, it's immunity

>>3742338
>>VOLTAIC CRYSTAL (Consumable Forge Item): The essence of the eclectic and ingenious statistician Shauna Hayes, binding this crystal to a Relic allows the item to either 1) Grant ELEC immunity to the user, or 2) Change the damage type of the Relic to ELEC and increase the damage the Relic deals by one level.

>>3747769
Yeah, she's going to need some heavy gear forged by the time we're ready to climb the Cord.
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>>3747777
fucking... why the hell do i constantly misread that shit?
still though, at that point, we may aswell just put all three together, and it still doesn't change the fact any resistances or immunities would fit better on others compared to her.
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also, after thinking about it, i thought, why not make something for the sisters to be put into, where its not bound to a single armor set, but we can choose which armor set they enhance?

>DELIVERANCE OF EGO; Made to accompany another set of armor without further slowing oneself down, this over-armor, somewhere between a bikers jacket and a trench coat, is made to actively boost the effects of any other armor, Ability or Relic, worn by the wearer, by a magnitude equal to one's level of positive thinking. In other words, the more hope, excitement, happiness, and self worth one has, the more powerful the effects. If one were to put it mechanically, for every 10% one has as a “stack” of these emotions, as if from a Phantasmal Ability, the other armor one wears has its effects increased by 5%. This jacket also natural provides an extra level of Slashing, Heat, Cold, and Acid resistance, due to its leathery, hardy nature. Oh, and a symbol appears on its back related to the inner Ego of the one wearing it, because style should never be ignored.

sorry for the bamboozle, my god, i have no idea why my mind is so out of it today. fuck me.
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>>3747796
I like it. Longcoat over armor is a good look, and it's got some nice effects. Plus, it encourages us to give cheezy speeches about the power of love and friendship, it's great.
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>>3747787
It's something to think about. A trait as rare as an outright immunity to Electrical damage is worth putting it on a defensive relic. Sure others can benefit from it more than November. But it does highlight the value.

>>3747796
I'm having a thought, what if we added a toggle option for the Relics that have the sisters gemstones inside, that can switch from Offensive properties and defensive properties on the fly?
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>>3747825
would have to ask BHOP. i think making us choose is a two part thing, in part for balance and to further highlight that they arent as good as the Contender. or so is my guess. they technically can get further upgraded over time via dream daughter stuff, so that may also be something he has taken into account. i mean, whats next after shock immunity afterall? given they can be upgraded, he might thus be already seeing their power potential as too high to give both.

>>3747824
glad you like it. thoughts on who to put in? certainly the sisters but if everyone's going the Defensive route it would be a good work around to just put all three together.
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“We’re a team, a party, a family.” You say, meeting the eyes of each of each of your allies. “We have options, so we’re going to use our number to our advantage.”

“Julia, Amara, and Francine.” You call out, the three girls snapping to attention. “I want you all to team up and start gathering information. Collectively you probably know more about the Fleshscape than anyone here, and what you don’t know, you can ask the earth itself. Gina, I’m trusting you to use your charms to get as much out of Mother as you can, then join up with the info team or help Rath with her task.”

“Asking me to get close to another woman? For shame…but I’ll do it for you, fearless leader.” Gina teases, giving you a little wink as Rath crosses her arms.

“So what am I doing, again?” The redhead inquires.

“What you do best; I need you to make November as badass as possible and help make things we can use to counter Charon, if it comes to that.”

“Shu?”

“Yes?”

“You’re the fucking best.” She adds with a wide grin. “Just sayin'.

“Duly noted, and likewise.” You reply with a smirk before turning to Dorian and November. “I’d like for you both to accompany me to hunt down some Amalgams for the family. We can load them on the tank and come back here so we can split the haul as we like, but I don’t know how long we’ll be out there. We’re after nothing less than Titan-classes, so bring your A-game.”

“Affirmative.” November intones, giving you sharp nod across the table as Dorian gives Francine an uncomfortable glance.

“Does anyone have any questions before we get started?” You ask, and you’re met with the shaking heads of everyone present. Rising, you catch Julia whispering something to Dorian before she takes Amara to Francine’s side, extending the offer for another cup of tea to which the doctor readily agrees. Gina stands on her tiptoes to give you a peck on the cheek, giving you a dazzling smile and a playful wink as she runs off with Rath to the Forge room. As one, Heather and Dorian join you, the former flexing her fingers experimentally while Dorian’s clothes undulate in anticipation of the bloodshed to come.

“November? Dorian? Get everything you need together, and warm up the tank…”

The image of the ferryman flashes across your mind’s eye, followed by the fleeting image of hordes of Daughters, drawn to the ones that’ve brought gods to their knees.

Drawn to you.

“…We’re going hunting.”

>>Twenty-Seventh Vein: Closed
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(Gentlemen, I want to thank you for your patience and participation, as always. To reiterate, voting on new Relic creation and the list of new words for Amara [which you’ll find below] will remain open through the weekend. Additionally, the 28th Vein to open on either Monday or Tuesday of next week at the usual time, and I shall keep you all informed here and on the Body Horror Twitter. I shall be around for the rest of the day to address any questions, comments, or concerns you may have, and I welcome them as all, as always. I hope you have a great day, and that the rest of your week goes wonderfully. Finally, I’ll be spending the rest of this week catching up on the writings that you all posted this Vein and during the intermission, and if you’ve written anything else then please post them here, as I’ve been looking forward to sitting down and going through them without distraction. I cannot tell you how much I enjoy seeing that you’ve been inspired to write, and there’s nothing more rewarding as a creator to see your creations, in turn. Keep it up, and know that I’m looking forward reading to every line you’ve made, every sentence you’ve constructed. It means a lot.)

(Thank you all once again for reading, participating, and being the best group of players I could possibly hope for, and until next time, Gentlemen.)
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>>3747835
>glad you like it. thoughts on who to put in? certainly the sisters but if everyone's going the Defensive route it would be a good work around to just put all three together.
I think that since the defensive ability is just an elemental immunity and not specifically an armor, we can put it safely on other equipment. Put it on a talisman and anyone can just wear it along with anything else they've got going on.

>>3747854
Thanks for running, BHOP. This was a heady Vein, but it went to interesting places.

And now, to deliberate over oh Christ so many new words.
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>>3747854
Take care and have a nice weekend.

>>3747858
>>3747870
>12 new words
>Amara can choose 8 of them
>Amara gets to rename 8 of those words
Oh...oh my.
I think the problem we're going to have is choosing which "4" words we're leaving out.
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(Apologies for the bamboozle on the word list, the other part of it is on my home computer, and I don't have access to it at current. I'll post the full list when I get home this evening, Gentlemen.)
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>pic related from getting bamboozled
CURSE YOU

I've been....BAMBOOZLED
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>>3747854
thanks for running BHOP, lovely as always, and a decent cliffhanger for sure.
hope the stories are to your liking, and look forward to hearing your thoughts on them.

>>3747846
Rath, initial forge orders;
>Put the Sister Crystals both into a new Relic, the Deliverance of Ego, both defensives options being chosen.
>Put the Voltaic Crystal into the Ignition Gauntlets, choosing the offensive option.
>Upgrade the Sui Tormentis to level 4
>Upgrade the Cursas Alas to level 3
>Upgrade the Cutis Tractus to level 3
>Upgrade the Sui Interitus to level 3
>Build us a bottle of General Generators Succulent Sauce

im still open for changing the Voltaic crystal around, mind you. the GGSS is because i think our kits are honestly pretty good, but Augments have shown themselves to be potent at times, so it wouldn't hurt to see what they cant give, rather than stacking on new abilities.
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>>3747895
actually, the gauntlets are also armor, i guess we could just put the ELEC immunity on them. someone should always be wearing them anyways afterall.
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>>3747858
>SULK
We don't have that damage type in our arsenal.

>NUKA
Hell yes for Radiant!

>ZAIR
Very useful, both offensively and for support.

>FRAC
Relic buffs!

>SKRA
Anti Neuromancer and Generator.

>VIE
Actual support word.

>SIHL
I'm a bit torn on this one since Shu could do that by applying Subversive Armor to her allies, which could also use the Cuttlefish hypnosis technique in a pinch. I'll vote for it anyway.

>MUR
Again, I'm torn because Amara just got an augment that hides her words. Still, more mage duel stuff.
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>>3747858
>>3747917
Whoops, missed HIR.

I'll trade out MUR for it.
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>>3747895
Can I add one additional order?

>Crimson Jester's Blood-Iron Masque: The terrifying BloodBrass visage of a fool who deals death as the setup, punchline, and tagline of his never ending joke of eternity in a world of Red and Black. Activating this relic automatically reduces your hp by 1/5 of your maximum hp in exchange for augmenting the wearer's /speed agility and perception. The wearer will never be unaware no matter the circumstances and will automatically counter any sneak attack and ambush. In addition, by spending 1/20th of their maximum hp from their current health at the start of a combat round, the wearer can fuel the masque's power to give them a burst of speed, ensuring that they act first at the start of combat, and given heightened initiative in the following rounds after combat has begun. First to act, last to laugh.

We don't have much in the way of Helmet/mask relics. And I feel that the increased initiative and the automatic counterattack system when flanked/ambushed would serve us very well.
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>>3747917
>We don't have that damage type in our arsenal.
We actually do, it's just inconsistent. Julia can do Cold damage with the critical she stores up from Frozen Fury.
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>>3747917
jumping the gun a bit, as the list was incomplete it seems.

>>3747922
sure. though its possible non helm/mask relics can still go in there. we'll have to see i suppose, just how much things get limited.
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>>3747933
I counted. There are 12 of them and no missing words.
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>>3747941
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>>3747880
this, plus the fact he you know, deleted the list?
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>>3747854
I do have a question. It's shown that we can upgrade November, but is it possible to upgrade...THE TANK?

Have a high class lounge girl with body horror fashion.
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>>3747953
i uhh... have no idea how to feel about that image.

>>3747953
>>3747854
thats a good point, id love to add the TANK to her list, once you get me all the info ill need for her and Francine's sheets.
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>>3747963
>i uhh... have no idea how to feel about that image.
Perfect. That's exactly how it should be.
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>>3747953
Not sure if disturbing or erotic.... for now i feel neutral.....

>>3747895
Could we put the Tempus Recuiperatio in that lsit as well? I know we dont exactly need it if we go amalgam hunting but we never know if it might not come in useful to drasticly increase regen on a character. even iof there is a risk if we get into combat

We could also build the Mauler Cannon as an additional Weapon we could Mount on Novembers Tank
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>>3747922
>>3747870
speaking of, as i said here
>>3747895
>>3747899
i guess i see the point of getting an immunity, though i think just putting it on the gauntlets still would work perfectly fine. keeps the immunity easily passed between characters without ever being useless on anyone, or impeding another Relic slot to any major regard. nor does it impede the gauntlets weapon side, though to be fair we hardly use them as such.

>>3747982
im still unsure of the real value of the Tempus honestly.

i feel like the Mauler is maybe a bit redundant with the tank, also we still technically have a limited amount of BIO to spend, and that is probably not on the cheap side to just add on top of everything else.
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>>3747982
>Tempus Recuiperatio
I can't remember that relic's name nor is description.
>>3747993
Can you be a gentleman and repost that relic ideas doc?
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>>3748001
>TEMPUS RECUPERATIO; Coming in the colours red, yellow, black or white is the bottle itself crafted from the crystalized fluids of a humoral paladin and a Vitruvians blood. To use it one has to first charge it by inserting up to 1000% BIO. Every full 100% BIO amounts to one charge to a maximum of ten that can be stored at any given time. The BIO is then converted into a yellowish to orange somewhat viscous liquid similar in texture to honey over the course of 24 hours. The liquid tastes like ash mixed with singed chitin and burned potatoes. Tasting questionably and smelling even worse the drink is nonetheless very healthy.
>One can take a sip( a sip can contain from 1 to 5 charges depending on the desire of the drinking party) by spending 1 Act to drink from the bottle. Each charge consumed increases the Health regen of the daughter by her original health regen per round or 50% per round whichever is higher. This lasts for 1 Hour or the daughters Health has maxed out. It is not advisable to go into combat while this effect is active as too much violent movement can cause the aftertaste to come back up which makes it nearly impossible to maintain concentration effects for longer than the end of the round. The liquid is also somewhat combustible during digestion. If the stomach of a daughter were to be punctured the liquid has a small chance of igniting and exploding inside the daughter. Causing massive fire and acid damage in the movement zone of the daughter. This can be prevented by drinking any kind of liquid other than Tempus Recuperatio before a stomach punctured can occur. This ends the regeneration effect instantly as well.


A Tier 2 relic in the doc for healing between fights especially useful if you run a gauntlet
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>>3748001
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_-8s0tin7DCQxITm6C69QULRnM_ibDfg18iV4dc7Fc/edit?usp=sharing

sure, here you are.
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>>3747854
Have a great week as well OP

And if you find the time i would like a detailed explanation on what parts you think worked and which didnt in the works i uploaded https://docs.google.com/document/d/17ejDZVktHJJvuFtSNEbglCiuxXcksnRv7pNXLXdA1v4/edit?usp=sharing
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(Finally, a good reason to use this image.)
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>>3748110
I just remembered, Cassandra said that Francine has something that will help us with the Halos. Care to explain that? For reference, refer to >>3731891

>“Francine, would you be so kind as to go to Storage Room six-thirty-one and retrieve item seven-seven-eight? I’d go myself, but I’m afraid I’m all thumbs today.” Cassandra jests, and you see the ghost of a smile alight on Francine’s lips before she bows, returning to the elevator and disappearing from sight as the doors slide closed behind you.
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>>3748154
It was Cassandra's notes on them, I believe, based on a comment Francine made.
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>>3747854
Thanks BHOP, it's been awesome as always!

Francine is a very unexpected but extremely welcome addition to the party, I'm looking forward to seeing what she's capable of.

Can't wait for the hunt next thread!
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>>3747854
>"Shu says goodbye to the Midnight Crew, goes to meet Good SHODAN, finally lets go of Sam, takes in a good Doctor, and prepares for THE HUNT"

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive/3729692/

>[IT IS DONE MASTER]

>[THE 27TH VEIN HAS BEEN ENSHRINED]

Have a picture of what appears to be a surgeon/dentist. it could be a good useful reference to a daughter who is a fellow surgeon pre-crucible.
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Say, BHOP, I understand that you'll be posting info soon on a few topics such as Amara's new words. Would it be possible, when you have a moment, to get Francine's character sheet as well?
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(Well Gentlemen, I got home yesterday, laid down to take a nap, and promptly woke up about an hour ago. Having involuntarily caught up on missed sleep, I'll be posting Amara's Words shortly along with answers to the various questions that have been posited. Apologies for the delay.)
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>>3749760
Well you clearly needed the sleep so don't worry about it too much. Your health should be more of a priority and since the vein ended there is a lot of time for you to catch up
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>>3749760
well, it sounds like your body knew what it wanted, to say the least.
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-LEXICON OF FLESH-

PLEASE CHOOSE 8 FROM THE LIST BELOW

>>IGIL (BIO-10%, *1): A word denoting the passion in one’s heart, this word carries the power of HEAT, imbuing the target with the element and granting one level of resistance to it, as well.

>>VOLA (BIO-10%, *1): A word for the spark of creativity in one’s mind, this word carries the power of ELEC, imbuing the target’s attacks with the element and granting one level of resistance to it, as well.

>>SOLU (BIO-10% *1): A word for caustic wit and biting sarcasm, this word carries the power of ACID, imbuing the target’s attacks with the element and granting one level of resistance to it, as well.

>>SULK (BIO-10% *1): A term for calm, collected thought, this word carries the power of COLD, imbuing the target’s attacks with the element and granting one level of resistance to it, as well.

>>NUKA (BIO-20%, *2): A word that has no precedent until the Crucible’s arrival on Earth, this word carries the annihilating power of RADIANT damage, imbuing the target’s attacks with the element and granting one level of resistance to it, as well. Additionally, all of the target’s RADIANT attacks now deal an extra 10% damage.

>>ZAIR (BIO-50%, *2): A word denoting forgetfulness, this word allows the user to lock a foe’s skill trees that are at or under Lvl 5, while using it on allies instead strengthens all skill trees of that level, instead.

>>FRAC (BIO-20%, *2): A word denoting the seemingly willful minds of one’s belongings, this word allows the speaker to target all Tier 3 or lower Relics on a given individual.

>>VIE (BIO-10%, *3): A word for the friend of one’s friend, this word targets all enemy or allied constructs, and upgrades the effects of the words that follow by one tier.

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>>3749880

>>HIR (BIO-10, 2*): A word for one’s true aims, this word greatly increase the base accuracy and critical hit chance of a given target, though with a proper turn of phrase it can easily do the opposite.

>>MUR (BIO-30%, *2): A word for those that choose a path of silence, placing this word at the start of a string renders the entire utterance completely silent, though the speaker still appears to be moving some form of mouth.

>>SIHL (BIO-40%, *1): A word for that which should never see the light of day, this word renders the target invisible to the naked eye. A simple thing, but one that can create havoc if used cleverly.
>>SKRA (BIO-30%, *2): A word denoting a serial escalation of a chaotic event, this word drastically increases the chance of Generator and Neuromancer backlash, and greatly boosts the direct and splash damage of the reverb when it occurs, as well.

>>VAR (BIO-20%, *3) A word describing the accumulation of like things, this word has the ability to increase or decrease the STACKS of a given type by *3* on enemies or allies, depending on the placement of the word.

>>VITA (BIO-100%, *?) A word for the very essence of life itself, this word’s applications are rather vague. Useless by itself, perhaps this word’s true use is not alone, but rather…

>>ECT (BIO-50%, -1 OR -2 ACT, *3) A term for decisions that shape the world around the individual, this word allows the speaker to transfer *one or two* ACT from their reserve to a target of their choice.

>>BAUM (BIO-60%, *2): A word denoting how time has the power to both heal and harm, this word can either increase or decrease the target’s HEALTH & BIO REGEN by ¼ of their current totals.

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>>3747953
(I believe you’ll be pleased to know that the tank can be upgraded, and as a bonus its biotech systems will automatically mirror the abilities that November currently has access to. However, if you’d like to have a more in-depth crafting system for the tank instead of having it mutate to mirror its owner’s current Relic Loadout, then let me know and I’ll see what I can do.)

>>3748036
(I'll be happy to look over it soon when I settle down and read over everything, thank you for posting!)

>>3748154
>>3748172
(Indeed, the package was filled with Cassandra's notes on the Halos. The way you receive this information is up to you, however; Gina can hit the high points in character, I can simply post the major points here, or however you prefer. They’re more a loose collection of thoughts and hypotheses about the Halos, but there are some considerable revelations to be had, including the location of at least three of the other Ascendant Halos.)

>>3749004
(Thank you so much for archiving the Vein, I greatly appreciate it!)
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>>3749880
>16 new words
>Can only choose 8 of them.

why must it be so difficult?

>VITA (BIO-100%, *?) A word for the very essence of life itself, this word’s applications are rather vague. Useless by itself, perhaps this word’s true use is not alone, but rather…
Guys, I think we found the second half of the "INSTANT DEATH SPELL". But should we pick it up?
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>>3747846
>>3749880
>>3749882
>>SULK
>>NUKA
>>VIE
>>HIR
>>SIHL
>>SKRA
>>VITA
>>BAUM

is my vote for words.

>>3749884
heres that question i had saved for you. mind you, its an entirely curiosity based one, and fully understand if its something you would prefer not to answer.

>what are some story elements we missed out on you’re kinda disappointed you didn't get to use? Whether it be characters, locations, or events? I understand the Quest is still going on and such a list could of course greatly grow and change, but as of now i'm more talking ones you already know wont get used, due to the character dying, the event already happening, or the location being destroyed or something.
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>>3749882
I'll be keeping note of the other words, but as for the ones I want most.

>NUKA
>ZAIR
>FRAC
>VIE
>HIR
>SKRA
>VAR
>VITA

No way I was going to pass up NUKA. What if we could make the ground radioactive with TER? And it's easier to act as a medic for November in case of a bad situation with one more heat-using power.
ZAIR and FRAC are great to have, locking minor but troublesome powers of enemies while boosting our own under-leveled trees and allowing us to boost our relics. I debated with VIE, but I think the thing it does that THA doesn't is that it also boosts constructs directly, plus it upgrades a word effect.
HIR boosts the party's offense.
SKRA is an instant anti Neuromancer and Generator word, and while we have no real problems with feedback in our party (except maybe Amara and Dorian with their Elec and Wind generators), I do wonder what it would do if paired with REV.
I think we'll use VAR more often since it's an easy way to exponentially increase Stacks.
And of course, VITA is that expensive word that is the second half of the death spell.

I wanted SULK as it was the damage type we had the less reliable use of, but I dropped it for better words. The other elemental words, we have good coverage on so no real need to get them, though I'll admit that I wonder if combining any of them with REV would create new damage types we haven't encountered yet (though IGIL would probably turn into SULK and vice versa; it's not guaranteed to give us a glimpse at rare Generator powers).
MUR and SIHL are the stealth words, with the former allowing Amara to silent cast without giving away her position. But while I'm on the fence for MUR, for SIHL we already have a stealth relic and an adaptive camouflage augment on our swarmlings, which we can use to creative effects. Though then again, invisible ground could help us find hidden bases and buried treasure.
With ECT, I just don't think we'll make much use of transferring Acts. Our plans typically give everyone something to do.
And with BAUM, I think the Bloodline will eventually do what that word does but better.

Thoughts?
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>>3749907
>And it's easier to act as a medic for November in case of a bad situation with one more heat-using power.
No, it's not. November doesn't heal from heat (yet, anyway, maybe the Tier 5 version of Heart of Flame would let her do that). Rath just has a power that lets her heal allies with Indignant Ignition so long as they're immune to heat, and November is immune to heat. Anyone else using heat on November would do nothing.
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Ah, I just thought that REV SIHL would be a reveal spell against stealth targets. But then again, with the number of Neuro Halos we have that might not be necessary.

>>3749915
I mean that heat is the only thing that can stabilize November if she's on death's door. BHOP confirmed that Shu's ignited acid could do it if Rath wasn't available.
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>>3749907
>ZAIR
not worth it at all in my opinion. we're heading into a much harsher environment going forward, the likelihood of enemies ever having enough of or relying on such low level abilities to ever be worth using this, especially mind you, over another spell, is simply not worth it over taking other words. i literally cannot see us ever even using this word once. we also, mind you, have limited if any ways to see enemy abilities, usually relying on seeing what they can do or simply being able to handle any surprises, so we wouldn't even know when TO use it too, and using a spell entirely off of luck or a guess is a terrible idea with how many Acts they use and how much Bio they can end up using.

>VAR
not worth it. only Julia relies on stacks, and already has a more than adequate method of increasing it herself. we also dont see stacks very often on allies or enemies, not worth it over other words.

>SIHL
my problem with not taking SIHL is Shu armoring up her allies significantly eats up her Swarmling slots, which has becomes a problem before.

>BAUM
Shu has and will most likely continue to have a significantly limited number of leashes. even if it might not be so much further down, being able to stack both effects aswell as immediately having access to one thats not limited in number is insanely powerful. Shus Dominous also has a limited hit to the enemy, so staking these against certain enemies would be immensely powerful. not taking seems foolish to me, especially considering how slowly our abilities grow.

>SULK
im not married to Sulk theres just no better word. FRAC isnt bad but really not worth it either, again, you have to think about when we would actually use these over another, and i can see us fiddling around with damage types significantly more than ever boosting relics, especially if its a fight we didnt have time to prepare for, which would be often. we would always choose different boosts over Relic boosts, almost without a doubt.
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>>3747846
Supporting>>3749888
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>>3749924
> we also, mind you, have limited if any ways to see enemy abilities, usually relying on seeing what they can do or simply being able to handle any surprises, so we wouldn't even know when TO use it too, and using a spell entirely off of luck or a guess is a terrible idea with how many Acts they use and how much Bio they can end up using.
I think Francine can probably do that eventually, with what we know about Creation's Strings. But I agree with the rest of your analysis, that going forward we're unlikely to face many enemies for whom level five or lower skills are useful. The one possible exception is West Prime, with her neophilia, I imagine she likely has a lot of low-level powers. That could knock out a lot of her arsenal. But as satisfying as that would be, I don't think it's worth the opportunity cost in the meantime.

>not worth it. only Julia relies on stacks, and already has a more than adequate method of increasing it herself. we also dont see stacks very often on allies or enemies, not worth it over other words.
Gina can do it, too. In fact, thanks to Virulent Persistence she can do it better than Amara could. Gina can quadruple stacks, not just add three. There is no situation in which VAR is superior to Gina multiplying stacks.
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>>3749882
>Vita
It's the second half of Ozma's signature "INSTANT DEATH" spell. I feel apprehensive about this yet I feel relieved that we instilled the storytime lesson into Amara of "Being careful with her skintalker words" before picking this word up. Said lesson literally had the cited an "instant death" spell used in the story time.

>Nuka
Nuclear power. Nuff said.

>Vie
Construct targeting! we can target constructs now! also, all following words after this word in the same spell chain will be boosted by 1 tier. Indispensible.

>Baum
Increased recovery rate would help get our allies back on our feet faster. Not to mention that Gra is made free and I think it's been doubled? I'm not sure. >>3749924 We should double check which words in Amara's library has been upgraded to a different tier, because it seems our library is beginning to become outdated.

>Ect
Amara can make clones who themselves have 2 ACTS (3 ACTS with the skintalker pendant relic). With a sufficient platoon of clones, Amara can literally transfer so many ACTS to her allies it would be ridiculous. Imagine this. A platoon of 12 Amara clones, They cast (ECT THA) and transfer their remaining ACT to one of Shu's Family members, suddenly. Said Family member has their base ACT + 12 additional actions, allowing them to do so many ridiculous shit in a single round, or it could be transferred to Amara so that Amara can cast a super huge spell chain (provided that she has the bio to cast it)

>Sihl
Stealth spell. Amara could put this on terrain or allies and turn them invisible! It's deadly clever if it's done on a piece of terrain (like a spike or a pitfall trap), or even a projectile.

>Hir
Crit boosting and anti-crit wards.

>Var
Increasing and decreasing buff stacks is useful.
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>>3749941
Amending my vote, I'm dropping Var and replacing it with MUR.

>>3749940
>>3749924
Hear me out on why I'm picking up MUR. Skintalkers are reputed to be one of the most fragile yet deadly classes if left alone. the fact that we have a skintalker in our group means that if she's caught out, our enemies will not hesitate in taking her out. Therefore, Mur is the perfect word to disguise the fact (for a limited time) that Amara does not have a skin talker as her primary core class. if we have Amara use her Calcite Armory, her generator skills and her clones, we can mislead our enemies into thinking she's a tough Calcite Armorer who picked up Generator skills and a high leveled phantasmal conduit ability to grow into a cohesive ninja theme.

Also, instilling the idea that Amara's turning into a Magical Ninja Catgirl is adorable and funny.
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>>3749941
>VAR
see
>>3749924
>>3749940

>ECT
fair point, but its rare for us to have a large sum of clones, or will be going forward. most battles also dont last long enough for us to really get a large sum unless we wish to waste the point of the clones in the first place. it also feels like it eats up and negates the point of the clones, espcially going forward, as we get alot of good use out of them casting varied spells or completing varied tasks. i just cant see us dumping all the ACTS onto singular characters all that often or it actually being as useful as having them spread out all that often.

>>3749949
i disagree. especially taking it over another, and especially as we have to use up an ACT AND BIO to silence a word. if we are doing our job right, she wont be in danger in the first place, and we already are trying to build her(and Gina) up to where they dont NEED or can handle not being under protection for at least a moment.

its not worth ever using over other words nor is it worth it over making her actually have more spellcasting options.
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>>3749924
>not worth it at all in my opinion. we're heading into a much harsher environment going forward, the likelihood of enemies ever having enough of or relying on such low level abilities to ever be worth using this, especially mind you, over another spell, is simply not worth it over taking other words. i literally cannot see us ever even using this word once. we also, mind you, have limited if any ways to see enemy abilities, usually relying on seeing what they can do or simply being able to handle any surprises, so we wouldn't even know when TO use it too, and using a spell entirely off of luck or a guess is a terrible idea with how many Acts they use and how much Bio they can end up using.
Currently we have a lot of new hybrids, so ZAIR allows us to punch up until we leveled them up to higher tiers, which may take some time, since as you later mention, our abilities grow slowly. We might obtain an upgrade to the word that affects higher levels by that time.

>not worth it. only Julia relies on stacks, and already has a more than adequate method of increasing it herself. we also dont see stacks very often on allies or enemies, not worth it over other words.
Fair. Maybe that'll change later, but for now only one party member can benefit from it, and we don't have a "remove" or "heal" word to get rid of stacks inflicted by enemies.

>my problem with not taking SIHL is Shu armoring up her allies significantly eats up her Swarmling slots, which has becomes a problem before.
Also fair. I might switch VAR for SIHL.

>Shu has and will most likely continue to have a significantly limited number of leashes. even if it might not be so much further down, being able to stack both effects aswell as immediately having access to one thats not limited in number is insanely powerful. Shus Dominous also has a limited hit to the enemy, so staking these against certain enemies would be immensely powerful. not taking seems foolish to me, especially considering how slowly our abilities grow.
I suppose you're right, but I don't think we'll rely on it.

>FRAC isnt bad but really not worth it either, again, you have to think about when we would actually use these over another, and i can see us fiddling around with damage types significantly more than ever boosting relics, especially if its a fight we didnt have time to prepare for, which would be often. we would always choose different boosts over Relic boosts, almost without a doubt.
It's fantastic with prep time though. Especially with November's new body which will have new relics to use.
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>>3749957
>Currently we have a lot of new hybrids, so ZAIR allows us to punch up until we leveled them up to higher tiers, which may take some time, since as you later mention, our abilities grow slowly. We might obtain an upgrade to the word that affects higher levels by that time.
im not making my vote on a 'what if' potential upgrade. also Hybrid abilities often have alot of their uses rolled into or outright overruled/negated by the hybrid they make. we simply wont stop or upgrade enough even with that for it to be worth it.

>Fair. Maybe that'll change later, but for now only one party member can benefit from it, and we don't have a "remove" or "heal" word to get rid of stacks inflicted by enemies.
not enough of a reason to take it over other words.

>I suppose you're right, but I don't think we'll rely on it.
rely on it? maybe not, but it is a word still with immense immediate power that will never not be the case, and doesn't rely on any possible 'what ifs' or even specific scenarios to be useful. we could always make use of it and outright amazing use of it.

>It's fantastic with prep time though. Especially with November's new body which will have new relics to use.
taking it just for Novembers not worth it in my opinion, especially as its implied her suit itself will boost its own abilities with higher Forge Cores. we also cant rely on prep time, we dont actually get it all that often, and again, we will almost certainly focus on other boosts first. its just not something i think we will use enough to be worth it.
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>>3749951
I can't help but wonder if later levels of the base components of Hollow Clone and Neurotic Halo would make Joyous many would give our clones additional ACTs.

>>3749967
Something to consider, Most of our often used relics are tier 3 and lower. Frac would help boost the other relics that we have that are being used by our other family members. And we can't assume that we're the only group that uses relics. There might be some groups of daughters that use Relics as their main source of offense with their abilities supplementing that. Gra Rho Tha Fracc would greatly boost the resilience and durability of our relics while Gra Rho Cunt Fracc would make enemy relics weak and brittle and more susceptible to Julia destroying them by touch. Penny's group used a ECM Jamming relic, so we can't write off that possibility.
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>>3749976
>I can't help but wonder if later levels of the base components of Hollow Clone and Neurotic Halo would make Joyous many would give our clones additional ACTs.
depends on how Hybrids are affecting by that. hard to tell really, as some hybrids are so different they almost have no real correlation to their makeup, others basically completely override what they are made of, and others still find an odd balance. its a good question, but not one we know enough about hybrids to answer. maybe IC we do but not OOC.

>FRAC
i never said none of that was the case though, my argument against it is based on completely different reasons is the thing.
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>>3749967
>also Hybrid abilities often have alot of their uses rolled into or outright overruled/negated by the hybrid they make. we simply wont stop or upgrade enough even with that for it to be worth it.
I'm talking about the new level 1 hybrids themselves. There's Dominus Bloodline, Carnivorous Carver, and Neon Ascendant. Plus the hybrids we're planning to make and so, so many low level powers that we will be using for some time. It will be worth it for a long while as thongs currently stand.

>not enough of a reason to take it over other words.
...I'm agreeing with you though?

>taking it just for Novembers not worth it in my opinion, especially as its implied her suit itself will boost its own abilities with higher Forge Cores. we also cant rely on prep time, we dont actually get it all that often, and again, we will almost certainly focus on other boosts first. its just not something i think we will use enough to be worth it.
Not just November. She's just the most obviously beneficiary, but everyone in the party uses relics and this is the enchantment option. We can bless our weapons with this word.
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>>3749888

(Had to re-post this, as I hadn't intended to make so much of it spoiler text.)

>>What are some story elements we missed out on you’re kinda disappointed you didn't get to use? Whether it be characters, locations, or events?

(Ah, that’s a fun one. Honestly, I was saddened when Ceres and her team [The Humoral Paladin Mara-fangirl, the leech Hive Mistress, and the balloon-based Flesh artisan little girl] ran afoul of West Gamma. I was rooting for them and they put up a good fight, but they were just no match, unfortunately. There are actually a lot of scenes and interactions I had planned that I never got to use, either through roll of the dice or the paths that were chosen.)

(For example, Mara was chilling at the monastery and mulling over her encounter with you, and I fully expected you to meet her there. The first person to go rest in the bath house area of the Monastery would’ve encountered her, but you instead hung around the City of Rust longer than I expected, so she ended up coming to you. On a somewhat more somber note, Dorian and Rath haven’t interacted as much as I’d intended for them to, given the fact that both of them are still mourning the loss of their respective families while Julia and Gina are rather dismissive of their own familial bonds, though for different reasons.)

(If I’m being honest, given what I know of the /qst/ board and 4chan in general I really expected more shipping, and given that precedent a vast majority of the cast was and still is, to some extent romancible. I started the quest expecting it to be overrun with bloodthirst and waifu wars, and instead I got the nicest group I’ve ever found online and a pleasant respect for all the characters…It was a very welcome surprise.)

(In other, random bits; the arenas were fun, and you would’ve run the chance of meeting the Midnight Crew much earlier on as Jackie was planned to be a potential love interest/rival. There was also an Alice-themed Daughter that was making the rounds of the Forest, and…actually, now that I’m thinking about it, the biggest event that was missed out on due to both the roll of the dice and your own actions was that West Gamma and B’ni were going to the Disassociated. They’d have gone there, B’ni would’ve discovered that Gamma was there to replace Francine and offer Isabelle as a potential fuel source to the DOs, which would’ve prompted a catastrophic fight that you could have stumbled upon. That could have gone one of many different ways, but it would’ve been interesting to play out if B’ni hadn’t decided to stop traveling with Gamma.)
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>>3749994
If that had ahppened?
Would the DOs have stood a chance in that fight at all or would they have steamrolled West and Isabelle? Once they had ammassed a couple warriors?
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>>3749984
>while Julia and Gina are rather dismissive of their own familial bonds, though for different reasons.
We should ask Gina about her family sometime.
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>>3749994
I love these little peeks behind the scenes. You clearly put a lot of work into making this a living world that progresses on its own time rather than just event triggers. It's nice.

Also
>B’ni would’ve discovered that Gamma was there to replace Francine and offer Isabelle as a potential fuel source to the DOs
Wouldn't B'Ni be a terrible fuel source? The Disassociated have been building their systems with the assumption that being off-planet won't prevent the Crucible's apoptosis mode from destroying any biomass they brought with them. So B'Ni would only last them a few months, not even enough time to get to their destination. Also, is the energy density of B'Ni that high? I guess Crucible biomass has to use some pretty energetic compounds, but more than the nuclear fuel they'd be using?
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>>3749994
>>3749984
>I was saddened when Ceres and her team ran afoul of West Gamma.
so was I. it honestly helped further solidify my unending hatred of West. they were wonderful people and characters and seeing more friendships we had blossoming get cunt down by her is something ill never forgive her for.

>Mara was chilling at the monastery and mulling over her encounter with you, and I fully expected you to meet her there.
hah, well that would've changed how we saw some things for sure id imagine.

>Dorian and Rath haven’t interacted as much as I’d intended for them to, given the fact that both of them are still mourning the loss of their respective families while Julia and Gina are rather dismissive of their own familial bonds, though for different reasons.
thats an interesting one, im sure you'll get your chance though.

>If I’m being honest, given what I know of the /qst/ board and 4chan in general I really expected more shipping, and given that precedent a vast majority of the cast was and still is, to some extent romancible.
im a bit surprised too and honestly hoping it stays that way. im fine with a little bit but most go way too far and ruin things with it, which id hate to see happen with this quest. sadly im already seeing some start to push it, but we'll see how things go. ill be fighting against it for damn sure myself.

>the arenas were fun
my issue is it just still doesnt make sense for our family to go to those, its just not the style or personalities we have... besides Rath, but she alone isnt a good excuse, and i think even she herself understands and accepts why the rest aren't for it.

>that West Gamma and B’ni were going to the Disassociated.
holy shit, im glad that didn't happen. all of it. also, you may of just spoiled some things about the DOs that makes me question if maybe we shouldn't be so gung ho on them surviving their escape attempt...
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>>3749991
i just disagree, as we still plan to get those abilities up. long term it will just be a waste of a word we never use. not one im going to vote for.

>Not just November. She's just the most obviously beneficiary, but everyone in the party uses relics and this is the enchantment option. We can bless our weapons with this word.
and i still think we will never use it over other boosts instead, is what im saying.
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>>3750014
>im a bit surprised too and honestly hoping it stays that way. im fine with a little bit but most go way too far and ruin things with it, which id hate to see happen with this quest. sadly im already seeing some start to push it, but we'll see how things go. ill be fighting against it for damn sure myself.

I think that is also because the game is such high stakes that people that come with that as the main reason wont stay long enough to see it through

And while i will continue pushing for the SHU x Gina x Rath Ship and will cheer for Julia and Dorian i wont push anything else. And while i love me some lewd writing like the next guy. It would just not make sense to push much more into that territory. Anything beyond this level is gonna become a mess i think no one here wants to see happen. It would just destabilise the family

I also wont try to force lewd options. I have been willing to compromise on them in the poast though i like the awkward interactions and the dance they do around each other. At least Rath does the awkward dance around Shu and Gina who are pretty open with their feelings
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>>3749994
>I started the quest expecting it to be overrun with bloodthirst and waifu wars, and instead I got the nicest group I’ve ever found online and a pleasant respect for all the characters…It was a very welcome surprise.

I'll be straight with you bhop. I haven't been pushing the shipping route as often because over the course of my years on /tg/ and /qst/ and akun, I've been getting sick of the blatant pushing and aggressive flirting when it comes to the waifu wars, and much of the good quests that I enjoyed had their MCs go full y/u/ri (which I find a pity). The occasional tease is fun, but the straight up aggressive flirting with the intention to dive into another's pants thing is something that I'm trying to cut back on.

The events that were a consequence of mishandled waifuing and waifu wars in Joker quest (Hecate "dying" early, anons acting like a playboy to cybele and Mio, and the usual too-intense waifu wars on other quests) have played a big part in my aversion. Had your setting given us a gender demographic with equal parts male and female, you would have had me as one of the more rabid and aggressive shippers had Shu's gender be designated as Male.

I still ship, but I don't ship as hard as I used to.

But seeing the beginning of the quest where Shu was on the recieving end of the flirting attention and the natural tragic and exhausting chain of events that happen when you break a girls heart (the Isabelle Break-up arc) tempered my impulses and was a wonderful change of pace.

>There was also an Alice-themed Daughter that was making the rounds of the Forest
Funny thing. I've been homebrewing a fan-character for this quest with a similar theme.
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>>3750018
It let's us apply those boosts to relics as well. It's worth it for that, without also considering that it lets us nerf enemy relics when we finally encounter some that use them, which is likely with the increased difficulty and traveling towards the Cord.

>>3749994
>>3750014
I'd love to check out the Arena even if we don't participate in it. Just for a new location and characters to interact with. And while Shu wouldn't agree to step into the ring for a quick level up, if she finds someone there that's cheating or tortures their opponents before finishing them off, she'd step into the ring to end them.

Interesting scenario regarding the DOs. This was before B'ni decided to cut Shu out of her life by force, so we might've teamed up with her to kill our first West proxy. Francine being there would've complicated things since since this would've been our first meeting with her or right after, and we didn't know for sure about her nature then and thought it was just a case of West having her fingers in all the pies, placing an agent with a group that has unique resources. There might've been speculation among us about seeing a West trying to kill another West, or miscommunication where we think they were in league and targeted her along with Gamma. Butterflies, man.
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>>3750028
>I think that is also because the game is such high stakes that people that come with that as the main reason wont stay long enough to see it through
Plus, I think we just all like our party members enough that no one is really upset with the thought of any particular pairing. Waifu wars are driven as much by distaste as desire, see the jokes about Worst Girl and your waifu being shit. But we've got a solid core cast of characters that we all really life, and so there's really nothing all that much to war over. Whatever the pairing, I think we'll be happy.

>>3750036
Yeah, that too. I think most people are just tired of waifu wars. The only thing I find more tedious is harem protagonists having to waifu everyone.
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>>3750040
>too many butterflies
You mean too many bees.
We don't know what sort of events our lack of presence will bring. Like bees skipping out on a flowerbud.
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>>3749949
>>3749957
that being said im not married to SULK, but id prefer it to win over some other options put forth, with the one exception being i could be convinced to take ECT potentially.

>>3750028
eh, i just dont like 'harems' is my issue with the three way. but if its done well and naturally over the course of the game, rather than people trying to break character like they have been trying to do in my opinion, or push other quest elements or decisions to the side to try and push it, then i could live with it. im just starting to see signs that not what people will allow to happen.

>>3750036
>I haven't been pushing the shipping route as often because over the course of my years on /tg/ and /qst/ and akun
i outright avoid Akun in part of how smutty it is and how much ive heard peple say the community pushes that shit. even here, ive quit quests or been averse to giving them a chance over people pushing those elements too hard. romance should be addition in my opinion, like a small bit of spice on the quest dish, not the meal, unless its specifically a quest made to be about that.

>>3750040
right, well, we can just agree to disagree as now you are just ignoring what im saying so clearly we are just talking in circles.

>I'd love to check out the Arena even if we don't participate in it.
im still against it and will fight against it anytime it comes up. we have plenty of other locations to visit or find and plenty of other characters we can meet, without going against our values.
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>>3750045
>Harem protagonists

dear lord no. those quests have never ending flaming waifu wars.
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>>3749994
Did the Midnight Crew gain an increase in reputation due to their participation in the hunt for Isabelle and being there to Cripple Ozmas in the final battle?
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>>3750051
I'd assume so, though it's probably subsumed into ours a little bit. "That group who helped the Defiant's team" rather than something noteworthy in their own right. It's a good thing that they're going off to do their own adventures again, let them re-establish their independent cred.
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>>3750069
hopefully they dont run into anything too bad from all that trouble we are apparently pulling into the area. thinking about it we probably made thins alot harder for everyone in the areas, good and bad. probably not going to win us any favors even with some of the otherwise nice daughters now that i think about it.
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>>3750049
Players trying to have the MC get all the waifus do tend to annoy me, and I always wonder how they would divide their time between their numerous love interests without devoting all of their time and still be capable of advancing the plot. And it of course gets more difficult when they decide to add another new waifu to their harems. I think people need to be more willing to play matchmaker between cast members instead hoarding every girl.

Now I wonder if this opens the gates to shipping our dream daughters with one another.
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>>3750078
please do not.
and im probably gonna regret saying this, but Meg and Eloise seem to be growing close anyways without our help.
also thats Kosi's job, dont take that away from her its all she has left.
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>>3750078
Please don't. The only ship that I am concerned about is Dorian and Julia. All I can do with that ship is to root from the sidelines.
Gina, Shu and Rath's relationship will progress naturally and I don't want to tamper with it any more than it needs to be.
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>>3750088
>also thats Kosi's job, dont take that away from her its all she has left.
Nah, Kosi's more interested in shipping fleshscape Daughters. God help us if she ever starts shipping the Dream Daughters. Uzu coming to us and asking us to explain to Kosi that no, really, she and Niku are just friends and the fact that they fused together into a giant monster once is actually a very unhappy memory and not evidence that they want to bang.
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>>3750136
well, how do you know? we haven't talk to or asked Kosi that, and last time Shu herself talked to her was awhile ago when our heads were much more empty and much less connected and less often connected.
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>>3750136
>>3750143
also, shes out of people to do that with in the living anyways. unless shes really gonna try an ship an 8 year old. which i dont think she would.

...ok yeah lets stop this now.
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>>3750136
>>3750088
The end result will be the same regardless if it progresses far enough to its natural conclusion: A giant orgy in the center of everyone's mind.

It's as squicky as Body horror can be.

>>3750152
I concur. this is drifting into /d/ territory. How long has it been since we made the last course correction? 3 veins?
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>>3750143
I was thinking that whether they are or aren't interested in each other isn't the real issue, just that Uzu would be uncomfortable with being shipped. She'd deny anything, when presented in that format.

>>3750152
You're forgetting November and Francine. Big tough lady-cyborg and the scientist maintaining her parts, I can see it. At least, if I leave it at that extreme oversimplification, I doubt it would happen with their actual characters.
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>>3750159
I think right now we can easily make that correction since we move out to hunt. Its gonna be a nice change of pace to all the social stuff.

Some violence that requires different parts of the brain is gonna be a wholesome expercience for Shu and we can see Dorian in action again with his new upgrades something i am really hyped about

>>3750168
That would be a real longshot..... probably is never gonna happen just because of Dr. Fran probabbly being uncomfortable to allow herself emotions and let go of her tightly controled mind because she fears the old West imprint going out of control
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>>3750168
yeah no im done this this line of thinking.

>>3750159
not fucking long enough.

lets shift focus. ive been tallying the votes, granted with only 4 so far not worth posting yet id think.

hrm... still... haven't heard opinions on what color Francine's sheet should be? or if Novembers should change? best ive got honestly, and hardly matters til BHOP gets me their information to work with...
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>>3750179
>Some violence that requires different parts of the brain is gonna be a wholesome expercience for Shu and we can see Dorian in action again with his new upgrades something i am really hyped about
Agreed on both points. It's going to be nice to have a fight that isn't for the fate of the world. And Dorian has some really cool abilities that I want to see in action.

>>3750180
>lets shift focus. ive been tallying the votes, granted with only 4 so far not worth posting yet id think.
Oh, sorry, give me a bit to sort some things out here and I'll go over the list to make my vote.

>hrm... still... haven't heard opinions on what color Francine's sheet should be? or if Novembers should change? best ive got honestly, and hardly matters til BHOP gets me their information to work with...
Yeah, we're running out of super-distinct colors. Maybe a darker green than Shu's, for Francine?
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>>3750180
probably a nice Yellow would fit her as some of her hair is yellow.

If you have seen the yellow of Minas Character Sheet that could work for her i think or maybe something darker?
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>>3750186
green doesn't feel like it fits... too... natural, for how Francine operates. BHOP suggested yellow or red, but im not sure we could really get a yellow distinct enough from Julia.

i guess red is kinda open? Raths more a pink(which may be a problem in and of itself), and Amara is very much an orange, just more orange-red.

though granted, even if i made her a more standard Red, which im not sure fits, that leaves us alot of heat based colors. Rath, Amara, Julia, and even November is tinted a bit red to get a rust feel to it.

>>3750191
i guess a more gold/mustard yellow base might work alright. Yellows just dont tend to differentiate themselves as easily as other colors though is my worry i suppose. hrm... maybe a more bronze? maybe? not sure bronze fits her characterization though.

i could go for white, hah, well more bone-vanilla/light gray is what it would end up being. but that might be a bit too on the nose?
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>>3750152
>>3750136
>>3750078
Anyways I've made a fan-character/Daughter of my own for this quest.

Go and have a read on what you think:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_u1-kSC7zdM16gk_36vUHlbSjLXt9X1GPGziMul1VjI/edit?usp=sharing

>>3749994

>>3750180
What about Magenta for Francine? I'm just looking at the available color options. But didn't Bhop say he was color blind? We need to know which color he's blind to so we can avoid that.
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>>3750201
I think a bronze might work very well for her. it is an intermediate colour kind of between red and yellow. So it might work for her she is at an intermediate stage. Itr could be symbolic for her struggle to become someone who can hold high the gold of Victory after redeming herself for crimson past

The white would fit her as a scientist but i think that is what she is trying to leave behind the purely "for science"

But its up to you what you want to do
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>>3750201
>i could go for white, hah, well more bone-vanilla/light gray is what it would end up being. but that might be a bit too on the nose?
I don't think so. White both ties into her role as a doctor and her desire to wipe the slate clean, but with an ever so slight tint to it all.
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>>3750208
A Lunatic..... eh why not she seems interesting not a character i could see myself reading a story about(at least not form her perspective)

But she could make for fun cameos and sometimes serve as an antagonist for a story
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>>3750216
Thanks for the feedback. Luna was an exercise on what sort of daughter would turn out if there was a daughter who was so insane that she became a wildcard to everyone including Ozmas.

I had fun with the word salad dialogue Luna would sometimes spout.
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>>3750212
thats a fair point.

>>3750211
fair point aswell.

>>3750208
Magenta might be a bit too bright. but also, fair point on BHOPS colorblindness. no offense to him though, but depending on its severity that might negate his color suggestions, other than trying to make sure he can tell the characters apart.

>Character
whew, well shes interesting. im not a fan of 'meta' or 4th wall breaking myself ill admit, but she without a doubt has the crazy down in a very oddly satisfying way. i could see something being done with her... not sure what, but something.

>Abilites
interesting ability for sure, though i do feel more can be done besides just "This+ Lexicon" personally. like, for example, Heras Lexicon she has, 'Grudgeful Lexicon' outright cant properly learn or use friendly words, and shifts even things like slowing to being more aggressive in how they are implemented.

Lunatic Time feels just a little bit too powerful honestly.

the rest of the abilities are fine and dandy though.
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>>3750227

Fair point on the meta break when it comes to Luna's word salad of insanity. And to be honest, I didn't invest as much time as you did with Luna as you did with the Pepperbox gang. I only had the notion to pursue that I wanted to make a Daughter who was so insane that everyone including Mother would only dare interact with her if they had a metaphorical 10-foot pole.

The Lunacy will make sense better if she has someone in the fleshscape universe to bounce off of. When I wrote her character sheet, her lunacy infected the Character sheet itself because she had no one else with her in the fleshscape to bounce the insanity off of hence the "meta-speak". It also reflects the recent traits of characters being able to alter their own character sheets by sheer force of will (i.e. Francine), and thus Luna's character sheet was an example of Luna's insanity infecting. How Luna managed to infect her own character sheet and how Ozmas handled Luna when it was time for Luna to make her choice, well...that's a story in and of itself.
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>>3750240
well, fair and interesting points, but i would still like to point out that 'abilities' and stuff do have an IC/In-World explanation or however you would describe it. what we see is just a representation of Fran hacking/will-powering the ability to be different, but in reality it was still probably more like gene-editing or coding, rather than her bringing up an actual character document and typing new words into it.
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>>3750240
I dont think Ozmas did handle her at all but i would like to see that story written by your feather and your take on the choice
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So, back on to Amara's words, should we try to reach a consensus like with the mass level ups. We can at least knock out the words that have unanimous support.
>NUKA
>VITA
>VIE
>HIR

That's four out eight down.
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>>3750254
we have 7/8 tied down actually. 4 votes, 5 with one we know WILL vote, 3/5 is a winning vote as of now.

>IGIL
>VOLA
>SOLU
>SULK (2)
>NUKA (4)
>ZAIR (1)
>FRAC (1)
>VIE (4)
>HIR (4)
>MUR (1)
>SIHL (3)
>SKRA (3)
>VAR (1)
>VITA (4)
>ECT (1)
>BAUM (3)

Current Winners;
>NUKA
>VIE
>HIR
>VITA
>SIHL
>SKRA
>BAUM
>SULK

with only SULK not being past the current threshold.
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>>3749880
>>3749882
>>VITA
Combined with REV presumably becomes Ozmas' instant death attack. May have other uses, possibly healing with right words? Still good just for the REV combo, though.

>>BAUM
Makes a really strong opening move, together with GRA can knock off half the enemy's Health. Also has the potential to be life-saving when used on allies.

>>SIHL
Lets Amara share that sweet stealth with us, without Shu having to fill up Swarmling slots. Lovely.

>>HIR
It's a good general buff, plus being able to debuff enemy accuracy is always useful.

>>NUKA
It's a rare damage type, which means both that we want to capitalize on our access to it and gain some ability to resist it, since we're unlikely to find abilities that resist it.

>>VIE
Buff constructs? Nice. I wonder how this plays with the Joyous Many being, themselves, constructs? Can we get some sort of feedback loop going, buffing their ability to buff?

>>SKRA
A bit of a risky one. The fact that it has splash damage worries me. But we've seen how bad backlash can be, making enemies more likely to harm themselves with their own powers could lock down a lot of their stronger options.

And I'm not sure what to do for the last pick. SULK would give us more convenient access to Cold damage, which would be nice if we ever fight someone weak to it. While FRAC could let us buff the majority of our Relics, including the Relic that buffs Amara's Skintalking. Eh, flip a coin. Heads it's SULK, tails it's FRAC.

Heads. SULK it is.

>>SULK
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>>3750285
>>3750258
>>3750254
>>3750252
>>3750240
well, that certainly is a thing.

all that are currently winning are then at 4 or 5 votes, only one that a vote change would currently affect really is SULK, and it would currently just tie two at 2, or still have it be winning at 2 with multiple others at 1.
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so, i still have to finish(and start) Veronicas and Heras character sheets, but with how much work is going into these, id very much appreciate anyone who wants or is willing to look over Athens and Cajuns finished sheets. let me know your thoughts on the Abilities really. too bland? too powerful? ideas on how to improve them overall or individual levels of them? really, any an all ideas or criticisms are welcome, its just, this is fun, but its also so much work im feeling antsy about diving into the rest of it too hard without any feedback, or trying to ask people to go over it all at once. especially Hera, as shes by design leagues above the rest of her team, so she could probably be a thing all on her own.

oh, and Veronicas Bubbling Burst is finished too, if you want to look that over i suppose.

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1g3FoPRbyS_Wr4-yAm395e_oJJl7BOC5o-LPUEpVIA6U/edit?usp=sharing
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>>3750399
God i am too tired to do this now. I will take a look over it tomorrow when i come back form work

Have a good Night Anon

I am looking forward to seeing them however
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>>3750408
alright, i understand that for sure. hope you have a good night then.
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>>3750399
I'll take a look, sure. Please forgive me if it takes me a while before I review, though, that's a lot to go over.
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>>3750461
i understand, like i said, part of why im posting it now too. thanks.
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>>3750399
Okay, given it a read and a half, let's actually comment now.

Forgecore Striker is really strong. Starts out pretty weak, but as the conversion rate rises and the critical explosion chance increases it becomes devastating. I think it's mostly balanced by the need to convert biomass in advance, though. Also, I'm not seeing anything about any immunity or protection from friendly fire, so at some point I think that the melee weapons would actually become a liability and Athens would have to resort entirely to ranged fire. I would note though that I think it could use a definition of what "complex" melee and ranged weapons mean as opposed to simple ones, and why those would be advantageous to use. I'm unclear on that with the existing version.

Impish Shadow is interesting in that its component skills aren't very strong, but the hybrid is. I think the stealth and accuracy penalty stuff is pretty solid, those are good. The other bits I'm less certain on. The "undoing" movement is fitting for a shifting shadow, but the carapace seems to offer way too much protection even given the levels it's acquired. Five levels of resistance against slashing and piercing seems too much for a skill that isn't about defense. Likewise for the claws ignoring defenses, this isn't a primary combat skill. Maybe swap that for something about sneak attacks from stealth? And I'm just unclear what Impish Delights is meant to do. Boost Bio regen by absorbing light, sure. But the Augment has confusing language. Can't she allocate her regenerated Bio to other abilities already?

Conjurer's Hairday is solid. Sorry, I just don't have much to say there. Does what it needs to, pretty straightforward, neither over nor underpowered. It works.

>cont.
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>>3750745
Now, for Cajun.

So, for Veined Vigilante, I'm pretty sure that hybrid Cores still have a max level of twenty. You also didn't give a MAX upgrade for Vigilante, so is calling it maxed a typo? As for the skill itself, it's good, though the magazine limits I don't think would ever be a huge issue. The Health costs to pressurize the gun should be more of a concern than the Bio costs to make more bullets. Though I guess with Cajun not having any Bio regen, that could still have been a concern early-level, so magazine size upgrades aren't pointless.

For Curled Crusher, I'm not sure that Crushing damage is a thing. I think it's the same as Blunt, actually. I can only remember it coming up once, during the final fight against B'Ni and I think that was just a typo given that it was supposed to represent her having adapted to the Blunt damage of Rath's punches. Otherwise the skill is good, gets to pretty high damage levels but the need for wind-up is a good compensation for that in my eyes.

And as for the skills hybridized, I like those. Windsong Daggers is pretty weak, but it's supposed to be so I'm onboard. Has some nice utility features as it levels, though, distracting enemies and inflicting bleeding, so even if Cajun would have a hard time fighting with them they're still totally viable. Pressurepump Purpose is the more interesting of the two to me. I like the reactive defense pressure-beams, and the supplemental ability to heal bleeding damage faster, that makes perfect sense. The rocket boots are also an excellent ability, though I have some doubts about the plausibility of the upgraded version's ability to damage enemies in passing. Feels like you'd have to jink around a lot to get the pressure stream hitting them, with how narrow it is.

Passives are good, I like Hardy Brawler encouraging Cajun to take Health damage and then recover, it's a nice twist on the typical "bonuses from taking damage". Synergizes well with using blood for propellant, too. Sure Shot is good, though it took me a second read to get it for some reason. I think that's on me, though, in retrospect it's perfectly clear. And I hope the Gang got Cajun some welding goggles, because Bug-Eyed Binoculars making her weak to damage to her eyes sounds like a very poor thing to combine with an ally who throws nuclear bomb-spears around. Lot of blinding effects from Athena.
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>>3750745
for your Athens response:
>definition of what "complex" melee and ranged weapons mean as opposed to simple ones, and why those would be advantageous to use. I'm unclear on that with the existing version.
hrm, fair. could've sworn i gave it at least for ranged weaponry though, ill have to go back and look then.

>but the carapace seems to offer way too much protection even given the levels it's acquired.
>Likewise for the claws ignoring defenses, this isn't a primary combat skill.
hrm, fair, but that might be in part my fault, as thats a side effect of Uroplatus, which is a lizard based power that long term would've given her pretty solid of both claws and defense, which i didn't think it would make sense for the hybrid to not give aswell, if not better.

>I'm just unclear what Impish Delights is meant to do. Boost Bio regen by absorbing light, sure. But the Augment has confusing language. Can't she allocate her regenerated Bio to other abilities already?
hrm, i suppose i could use some help here. her normal ability gives her Bio Regen, BUT she would have to wait until the end of this turn/the start of the next(i cant remember which regen happens at?) when regen kicks in to get anything out of that, via, or course, regaining regen. the augment would allow her to skip that and count as if it was Biomass she already had available, rather than simply being more Bio Regen, mean in a pinch she would have it instantaneously instead of having to wait a moment for it to kick it. if any of that made sense.

>Conjurer's Hairday is solid.
glad to hear it, it was the one earlier i mentioned was my favorite to write up, despite it being her least used of the three.
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>>3750748
for your Cajun response;
>So, for Veined Vigilante, I'm pretty sure that hybrid Cores still have a max level of twenty.
i thought only pure Cores had a max of 20?

>You also didn't give a MAX upgrade for Vigilante, so is calling it maxed a typo?
hybrids do not get a Max level unique, thats the tradeoff for them being a Hybrid.

>For Curled Crusher, I'm not sure that Crushing damage is a thing. I think it's the same as Blunt, actually.
BHOP has confirmed Blunt and Crushing are different damage types.

>The rocket boots are also an excellent ability, though I have some doubts about the plausibility of the upgraded version's ability to damage enemies in passing. Feels like you'd have to jink around a lot to get the pressure stream hitting them, with how narrow it is.
its less about how likely it is as to give them less of a reason to chase you down if you need to flee.

>Lot of blinding effects from Athena.
haha, theres a reason Cajun still prefers the back lines despite being decent at melee.
also the Pepperbox Gang has never had a Forge or Forge Core last long enough around them to get to try and use it, think of that what you will.

thank you for your initial responses, and ahead of time for any further responses to this.
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>>3750830
>i thought only pure Cores had a max of 20?
Core hybrids have been confirmed to be able to attain level 20. This has been reconfirmed a few times. For example, Dominus Bloodline has been made from Gina's core gained through acceptance, and thus it is a core hybrid capable of attaining level 20. Carnivorous Carver was made from non-core abilities and will cap at level 15.

>BHOP has confirmed Blunt and Crushing are different damage types.
I wonder if there's a 'pulling' or 'torsion' damage type for went someone is torn apart or has limbs twisted off.
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>>3750861
>Core hybrids have been confirmed to be able to attain level 20. This has been reconfirmed a few times. For example, Dominus Bloodline has been made from Gina's core gained through acceptance, and thus it is a core hybrid capable of attaining level 20. Carnivorous Carver was made from non-core abilities and will cap at level 15.
hrm...i really dont remember him saying that ever or at all. if he did, then thats annoying at hell as i am entirely unsure of how to redo thing ti fit in 5 extra levels. id like confirmation on him actually saying this, if anyone has it, as that feels like it defeats alot of the purpose of making the choice to hybridize or not.
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>>3750870
Well, the whole hybridize at 15 is for the girls who get abilities that aren't the cores of other daughters. So we really lucked out when we maxed Mara's Social Link and got Arbiter's Appetite. Being able to be picky and select core abilities to hybridize at lvl 20 gives you a very high growth curve potential.

You know... now that I think about it. If we take West's Notes into consideration and what Bhop has told us. Here's the following:

>Core abilities gained from daughters can reach a level cap of 20. Abilities consumed from daughters that can be leveled up but are not cores can go up to 15. Augments and passives are static but can be upgraded by consuming abilities of the same type.

>Focusing on the Core abilities, One can fuse them into hybrids at lvls 5, 10, and 15, with Core abilites fusing at lvl 20.

>The most efficient path in optimizing an ability would be a triple hybrid featuring three core abilities as the tri-hybrid's components with all of them at max level (20). That would be 60 points invested into each branching component plus 1 for the resulting lvl 1 hybrid with 3 capstone abilities gained from having all three core components reaching max level. Finally, investing 19 points into the core triple hybrid to put it at max lvl 20 and gaining a capstone ability.

>The result would be investing 80 lvl up points to merge 3 core abilities into one max lvl 20 tri-hybrid core and receiving 3 component capstones and a single tri-hybrid capstone ability. And this is for a single skill tree.

>Conclusion: That's one hell of an ability gimmick if we were to see the result of that. I wonder if Mara's skill tree is the result of this optimized progression?
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>>3750895
Well, 79 points since the hybrid automatically starts at level 1. 78 points if one of the component cores is the daughter's original core, also starting at level 1.
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>>3750895
im still very positive he has more than once confirmed even core hybrids do not get a captstone ability. its the one drawback to hybrids he has been consistent on.

i also still dont remember him ever saying hybrids with cores can go to 20.
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>>3750902
oh right. I forgot about that. Mono classes get specialized capstones.
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>>3748110
that picture might be a good fit for one of those foreign super-daughters. One who has kept her human image. Evil is sexy at times.
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>>3750902
Best example from the intermission. If there is no picture... Just go to the intermission and search 'hybrid'
sorry if the picture is too small I write this on my phone after making a screenshot
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>>3751531
fair enough. swear he said something very differently in past Veins but i guess it was either a misunderstanding of what was being asked or something changed between here and there. not sure how i feel about it, but honestly i think its more miffing me off for reasons related to its so hard to remember every detail and keep all of them in line when its all spread out over multiple Veins, rather than that being what he decided on. theres no proper source to go to to avoid these miscommunications or make sure you're remembering something correctly.
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>>3751559
Since I needed it for my planning I just asked him. I think it was stated by him in an early vein. I will go back after work and collect all of his statements about hybrids.

Maybe something did change and I will find out the whats and whens
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>>3751864
well, i was talking more about mechanics in general, not just hybrids. no need to go through all that over this, especially not for me. i mean if you want to then sure, but thats kinda my point that id not ask or expect anyone to try and dig through 27 Veins plus one for any singular specific question/answer, regardless of importance.
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>>3752011
I think I will sideline it as a project. (Maybe one vein a day or so)Though I will probably dig through it anyways using bullet points as there are still a few things i am sure were answered at some point but I forgot again
When I am done I will present my compiled research
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Relic ideas:

>A DISARMING CAPE: A fashionable cape of Leathery structure with a silky texture. When worn, it conceals a single level of corruption and diverts all corruption aesthetics into the limb hidden by the cape or into the cape itself until combat begins. On Flesh Artisans, if the artisan in question has a multi-form function, the cape can take on the aspect and functionality of one of the daughters other form not currently used by the daughter. The Cape can be dyed to a desired color. The cape can be worn over one shoulder or both shoulders. Cloak and dagger for sure, but for Dorian it just makes him a more interesting man in this world.

>BRUSH WITH DEATH: Like an Artist with their preferred palette of colors, so too flesh artisans with their tools ranging from sculpting knives to the various shaped brush heads of painting to the giant Janitor’s mop of Japanese calligraphy. This Variable sized Paintbrush can grow or shrink and change forms. By infusing bio into the tool, the flesh artist can inflict a guaranteed stack of a debuff their abilities can inflict by painting or carving the debuff onto an enemy’s body with the effect activating instantly. If used upon allies, they gain a resistance stack against said debuff. This stays into effect until the paint wears off or is disturbed.

>ATOMIC BULLETS: With the world gone and the apocalypse here, the nuclear war has gone hot. This dense Calcite slug of Irradiated bone emits RADIANT energy constantly. Enemies without radiant damage resistance will take a steady amount of radiant damage until the bullet in question is removed.
Questionable usage.

>FALLOUT FOOTBALLS: Mini nukes from the Fallout Series. Now in a Body Horror football shell. I hope you have Radiation Immunity or high Rad Resistance, because this will likely herald another Arms race.

>LIGHTNING RODS: Instructions: Impale rod into target, Release electrical generator ability. Suffer no backlash damage. Attack bypasses Electrical resistance. Target suffers 1.5 times more Electrical damage.

>MEGAMOUTHPIECE: A Megaphone where the end piece is replaced with a gigantic mouth. A functional Megaphone by itself, its use becomes deadly in the hands of ever-talkative SkinTalkers and daughters who have breath attacks in their arsenal. When a skintalker spell is channeled through the relic, the ‘normally loud’ volume of a SkinTalker’s voice is amplified to ear-shattering decibels, generating a sonic wave of wind damage in a cone while having a chance to overpower enemy skintalker spells through sheer force of volume. In addition, any Elemental attacks that come from the mouth and channeled through the relic has their area of effect amplified by the mouthpiece. However, this also amplifies the generator backlash damage that would incur on the user if the daughter mixes generator abilities with the megaphone.

Your thoughts and tier rating of said relics would be welcome
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>>3752335
>A DISARMING CAPE
Interesting not something that would be too useful but could be an interesting way for Dorian to be even more active in combat(Probably Tier 2)

>BRUSH WITH DEATH
Nice for Julkia but prettty limited in the amount of attacks made and painting on an enemy is probably more difficult than jsut pounching them. How many charges can it store and how much Bio is neede to make one charge? (Tier 2 as well i would say)

>ATOMIC BULLET
Tier 1 useful for the Uzi but little else since you need a sealed container to store it in that is immune to radiation

>FALLOUT FOOTBALLS
Sounds really dangerous for all involved. Tier 2. Little use outsiode of combat and bad for all involved

>LIGHTNING RODS
I think i will take this relic as something Lydia could get (Tier 2. it has very specific uses in combat but little outside of it)

>MEGAMOUTHPIECE
Sonic Damage nice. and amplification is nice as well with the possibility of counterspeliing (probably tier 3)
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>>3752335
>A DISARMING CAPE
not my kinda relic and the corruption mechanics feel a bit like they serve no real purpose.
Tier 2

>BRUSH WITH DEATH
interesting idea but in practical terms feels too much like a gimmick and too difficult to actually pull off to be used.
Tier 2

>ATOMIC BULLETS
not bad, might be good for area denial a bit. against actual targets though it would be iffy. you would have to guess if the target is that threshold of defensive level where the bullet will pierce into them but not come out the other side, to make it really useful for direct fire.
Tier 2

>FALLOUT FOOTBALLS
not really a fan of direct references really. otherwise if the damage threshold is the same as in fallout im not even sure if a forge could honestly make it, and it would be absurd to ever try and use. Tier Unknown, due to the forge having to actually be able to pump out that much energy into a single relic without going cold or detonating itself, so we would need to know more about their limits.

>LIGHTNING RODS
ok well now its just obvious you had Dorian on the mind during this batch of relics from start to finish. not bad, not great. simple, plain. really i just cant see a reason to try and use it over just hitting an enemy with something else, if you get such an opening in the first place. but i guess if you're lower level or you rely alot more heavily on lightning damage as an individual or a team, then sure maybe, but not something our team would use i dont think. Tier 2.

>MEGAMOUTHPIECE
interesting, so a Vocalis Nocere focused on skintalkers and damage specifically though. to be fair i think i made that relic before we knew the class existed, heh. interestingly enough too actually, damage types didnt really exist back then either. man, the mechanics have changed(from our perspective at least) a great deal since the beginning, though in good ways ind you.
oh, right, Tier 2.
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speaking of Relics, we have two now that are permanent attachments to apply to a Daughter, and said similar fact has also been keeping us from upgrading the Hydra Heart for the same reasons. after this coming round of upgrades, the Sui Tormentis next level will fuse it, and the Sui Interitus starts out starting to accumulate affection for someone.

Sui Tormentis im not worried about, Raths its main user and would have absolutely no qualms i think about having it fuse to her.
Sui Interitus was made for Dorian and its last level drawback isnt as bad anyways, so thats not a big deal unless Julia is capable of getting jealous of a suit of armor.
the Nail, Throat Cannon, and Hydra Heart at the real problems to decide on.

we could just jab the Nail in Rath, but does she really need MORE strength stacks? maybe Julia?.

Hydra Heart im at a loss at. we could double up on Julias monster form perhaps, a badger-hydra sounds terrifying.

only thought i have on the cannon is a conflicting one. first is 'anyone but Fran, to not traumatize her'. the other one is 'this would be really good to help offset Frans low level.' otherwise, no idea.
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>>3753127
We could put that cannon on Dorian. It would work well with his Electricity attacks i think

I think the Nail would be best for Julia she needs more movement speed and the Nail would give her that (especiall if she is alone without Dorain to ferry her around. Also more Melee Power for her sounds great)

The Hydra Heart..... I would say either Rath or Julia. Rath would get some extra Regen and the ability to regenerate destroyed limbs into more limbs which could be devastating

As for Julia more regen as well and the increase to defense would be pretty useful for her .... and yes i agree a regenerating reptilian badger sounds terrifying.

More Options i htink would be interesting but not really viable
We could put it onto November as well to give her some regen without her tank... and we could still remove it afterwards if we find someone more suitable.

Or we put it on Dr Fran..... just to give her some resistances and some regeneration for her Creations String so she can become a more proficent healer.(it would also visually distinguish her from West to turn her inta a lizard person and give her the impression we are trusting her to invest something like that into her)

Also i am sorry for not giving you feedback on the Pepperbox Gang Sheeets to be frank with you i read a couple entrances and Lady Inspiration hit me in the face with a Monstertruck of Inspiration. In the face and then backed up all over me again to drive the point home. I have been sitting here for over 6 hours now and brought to paper about 9 Pages of Dialogue and i just cant stop
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>>3753175
unsure on Dorian, it will depend on how the cannon works.

with Rath getting the Tormentis, im fine with Julia getting the Hydra and Nail.

my thing with the Hydra and November is im certain theres probably better options for her center slot we can find, and i feel like we could put it to better use on someone else even if it does become permanently attached to them. Cannon might go good on her, again though depends on how it actually works. guess im jumping the gun on that one a bit, seeing as how we dont have its description.

i understand, take your time with it and your own writings.
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>>3750745
>>3750748
>>3750804
>>3750830
right, so i've added descriptions to what each type of weapon is for Forgecore Striker.

i lowered Impish Shadows defense down to four and the claws only work ignoring armor with two ACTs, seem fair?

still unsure of what to do for changes to Impish Delights though. at a loss for it.
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>>3753127
Is the Throat Cannon intact enough to fire? The impression I got was that it was non-functional after the damage B'Ni inflicted.

I'd give the Nail to Dorian for the sake of this current outing. For later use, probably give it to Julia. She could use a bit more speed for when Dorian can't be there to ferry her, and her Health regen isn't so high that halving it would be a huge loss. The Spine we should have Shu use right now, but later on should almost always be equipped to Gina. I'm not sure who to put the Hydra's Heart on, got no real strong opinions on it. Maybe Rath? Sprouting more limbs would be very useful for her Phantom Limb shenanigans. She'd enjoy being some sort of armored dragon-girl, too. It might be better off on someone else, though, not sure. I'll think about it.

>>3753221
Looks good to me. Though yeah, not sure what to do with Impish Delights. Maybe let Athens spend Bio regen from light on Health regen, at a diminished ratio?
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>>3753409
>Is the Throat Cannon intact enough to fire? The impression I got was that it was non-functional after the damage B'Ni inflicted.
well no offense to Cassandra, but no point in letting us keep if it its not at LEAST repairable, no? otherwise that just sounds like asking us to take out her garbage.

well, i was talking long term yeah.
my issue i guess is, Raths already got the Tormentis and Alabaster... and technically Ignition. despite how often she takes bigs hits, i think she might actually be our most defended individual. does she really need the Hydra Heart too? im... actually legit asking this, by the way, not being rhetorical or whatever it is when you ask something to technically be against it.

>Looks good to me. Though yeah, not sure what to do with Impish Delights. Maybe let Athens spend Bio regen from light on Health regen, at a diminished ratio?
that works.
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>>3753444
>well no offense to Cassandra, but no point in letting us keep if it its not at LEAST repairable, no? otherwise that just sounds like asking us to take out her garbage.
Fair. I'm sure that if it is inoperable that Francine can repair it. She's apparently got degrees (or the brain imprints of degrees from West) in every field of science and medicine except dentistry. I guess even West Prime's hunger for knowledge can't overcome the historical rift between dentists and the rest of the medical profession. But yeah, you're probably right and it's repairable.

>my issue i guess is, Raths already got the Tormentis and Alabaster... and technically Ignition. despite how often she takes bigs hits, i think she might actually be our most defended individual. does she really need the Hydra Heart too? im... actually legit asking this, by the way, not being rhetorical or whatever it is when you ask something to technically be against it.
I don't know. It's bit up in the air right now. She's definitely taken some heavy hits lately, but we've also increased her defenses, too. I guess we could wait until after she's been in a few more fights with upgraded Alabaster Endoskeleton, see how much more durable she is now? Nothing says we have to upgrade the Heart to fusion-level immediately.
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>>3753473
i still find it funny Amaras litmus test for if Fran was evil was if she was a dentist or not. its a bit stereotypical but i still somehow wasn't expecting it.

>I don't know. It's bit up in the air right now. She's definitely taken some heavy hits lately, but we've also increased her defenses, too. I guess we could wait until after she's been in a few more fights with upgraded Alabaster Endoskeleton, see how much more durable she is now? Nothing says we have to upgrade the Heart to fusion-level immediately.
seems fair, its kinda why i was waiting to upgrade it anyways with my vote orders for Rath.
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>>3753127
at work, will comment when done with work. i have objections.
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>>3753127
>>3753175

Throat cannon... I'm not sure if Amara would like it...scratch that. Amara won't like it one bit. But I had this crazy idea of installing the throat cannon into Amara so that Amara can use the cannon to fire a combination of Ionized electricity/laser beam, a hurricane force of wind, and a skintalker spell all in one giant shout.

It's also the reason why I developed the Megamouthpiece, have Amara amplify the throat cannon laser attack, the hurricane cannon, and her skintalker spells with the megamouthpiece, having the megamouthpiece amplify the breath attacks and shout of a 7-year old into a giant sound wave of pure destruction.

But considering that Amara has a hatred of dentistry...The only way that I could even think of Amara going along with having the throat cannon installed is by modifying the cannon to automatically keep Amara's teeth in top health without Amara having to brush nor visit the dentist (if there are dentists). Or spin some wild tale about dragons and their firebreathing keeping their teeth clean. I'm just pulling straws at this point.

I disagree with you on Interitus's sentience on the last level and developing an armor infatuation being a "minor" drawback. That drawback irks me to no end. I think it's a major drawback. What you've done there is basically created a pseudo character (think Dr. Strange's Cape) who has the ability to be picky and has the possible ability to act on its own. And We've just dealt with Isabelle and Sam. I don't want to deal with another character that's capable of sentience, infatuation, and acting on jealousy can fracture the entire family. It's fine if it was put on a solo player, but you intentionally designing a pseudo character with traits like that with the possibility of locking Dorian out of wearing other relics? You're asking for disaster. end rant/.

I'll be honest with you. I'm generally not a fan of permanent enhancement Relics. I've re-read Interitus's lvl 5 description twice and the infatuation aspect still doesn't jive with me. It may be because I've grown paranoid of relics capable of malevolent jealousy, but since the infatuation's already baked into its design I can't do anything about it except express my emotional opinions about it.

On the topic of armor relics.

I think Amara Prime will need a set of armor if she is forced to fight in close melee without the use of her clones. I'm not sure what armor relic would best fit her, but at the moment I can only think of Hen Corporis Sona Shin. It's a holdover, but giving it the calling card module would make Amara's day. I've also tweaked Hen Corporis Sona shin in the relic ideas doc. I've lowered the amount of power the armor can amplifiy on an ability tree in exchange for the utility of picking and choosing which ability tree to enhance when the Armor is active.

In the meantime I'll keep on coming up with other Relic ideas:
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>>3754180
>has the ability to be picky and has the possible ability to act on its own. And We've just dealt with Isabelle and Sam. I don't want to deal with another character that's capable of sentience, infatuation, and acting on jealousy can fracture the entire family. It's fine if it was put on a solo player, but you intentionally designing a pseudo character with traits like that with the possibility of locking Dorian out of wearing other relics? You're asking for disaster.
>I'll be honest with you. I'm generally not a fan of permanent enhancement Relics. I've re-read Interitus's lvl 5 description twice and the infatuation aspect still doesn't jive with me. It may be because I've grown paranoid of relics capable of malevolent jealousy, but since the infatuation's already baked into its design I can't do anything about it except express my emotional opinions about it.
you're being unreasonably paranoid about something that cant actually do anything you think it can. at worse it can choose to not give its effects to others if it so wishes and has very specific and very hard-line limits to what it can and cannot do. it cant lock him out of wearing other relics, it can only lock others out from using it, and even then can be convinced to let them. it simply wont let anyone else gain its effects if Dorians on the team, not that it can in any way stop him from using or wearing other relics.

>I think Amara Prime will need a set of armor if she is forced to fight in close melee without the use of her clones. I'm not sure what armor relic would best fit her, but at the moment I can only think of Hen Corporis Sona Shin. It's a holdover, but giving it the calling card module would make Amara's day. I've also tweaked Hen Corporis Sona shin in the relic ideas doc. I've lowered the amount of power the armor can amplifiy on an ability tree in exchange for the utility of picking and choosing which ability tree to enhance when the Armor is active.
its entirely possible both hers and Ginas Calcite trees could give them armor down the line.
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>>3754205
oh, and the armor was literally designed and chosen to be made specifically to be his armor suit whenever he is on the team, so im not seeing the issues anyways, when unlike other relic designs being put forth it by design is still useful when worn by other characters and its one caveat can literally be ignored except for in a situation it wouldn't even matter.
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>>3754205
>>3754215
Fair enough. And you're right on my unreasonable paranoia. It's unreasonable since you were the one that designed Dorian's Armor.

Some ideas that I would like implemented:
>Forge Hen Corporis Sona Shin as a spare set of armor
>Forge at least one Dainsleif Spear for the Tank as a set of Heavy Ordinance.

Random musings:

>Francine
Her core ability would work well with Resplendent thread of Platinum Edge given that it's a hybrid ability that's Fibromancy primary, Neuromancy secondary.

But in all honesty, Francine's a bit of a one note to start with. Putting her into the Medic role would be a disservice to her since it would heavily remind her of West and the sins she feels burdened with which would make her "Not so different". Sure, her core ability is literally based around draining her enemy's health via string unraveling but she needs something to supplement it yet set her apart thematically.

>When to have Francine make her choice.
She's got 3 levels into her core, has one augmentation that literally sets her apart from Dr West, and no secondaries. She's a fresh face, and still struggling with herself and trying to make herself more distinct and different from her progenitor. Not to mention her suicidal thoughts. She'll need constant interaction and reinforcement. And also someone to develop bonds and Dual techs with.

>Francine's core ability: Creation's Strings
String Theory is in my head and it's trying to connect the dots with Francine's ability. Sewing is also floating around in my head and trying to connect the dots with Francine's core ability. Maybe forge a Sewing Needle the size of a longsword for Francine? Something to amplify her core ability. Either way it's a good start in diverting her path of bio science into something more mundane and wholesome...I think. Also the thought of Francine messing with her enemies by sewing or tying their bodies into knots using strings of their own bio is neat.

Relic ideas:

>Surtyr's Nails (aka. Surtyr's Stakes mk.2): Same principle as Surtyr's Stakes, Bio-Pile-bunkers except they're not limited to being attached to the foot. Big-O references might be tossed in there somewhere but I'm a bit tired.

>Sewing Needle Sword/spear/rapier: Not sure where to go with this, but it's a useful supplement to Francine's core ability. I'll have to figure out the specifics of the enhancements. It's definitely going to be a tier 3 weapon that grows with Francine.
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>>3754271
>It's unreasonable since you were the one that designed Dorian's Armor.
ok, so keep in mind im not trying to start anything here, i just genuinely have no idea how to word this without saying this first to point out im literally just curious and not understanding this, so.... i am unsure how me being its designer matters in the unreasonably of your paranoia or not? only thing i can think, and i guess might be defense of your argument? is i constantly ask BHOP questions about relics, even if i designed them, due to knowing their actual implementation and rules will change once actually made, to fit into the background rules we dont fully know. so... ok ill admit im not even sure where im totally going here, im just airing my confusion is all i suppose.

>Forge Hen Corporis Sona Shin as a spare set of armor
i honestly am unsure we really need more armor sets. even the EGO was more of a work around to make the best use of the Sisters without locking them to any one Armor Suit, though granted i guess its also not traditional armor because of that and is a bad example or anything.

i mean outside of specific circumstances, we will always have 3 people on our team, and we now have 3 suits of armor. Shu i suppose could be argued to need one that doesn't take up swarmling slots, but she gains such personal benefits and synchronization from the Stalwart others dont that using up 5 just for her isnt so bad, its when we start to armor everyone it becomes a problem. i suppose there is the point that eventually the Tormentis will be locked down, and fiar point, but we control when that happens and unless we just wanted to go ahead and do it(id imagine we can afford it), we dont really need another suit at the moment.

>Forge at least one Dainsleif Spear for the Tank as a set of Heavy Ordinance.
id like to actually see what the tank can do and how it upgrades before we decide if we need to stack other things on it. especially with the tank being super situational in when we can use it. also, im not finding this relic on the sheet.

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>>3754271
>>3754316
>Her core ability would work well with Resplendent thread of Platinum Edge given that it's a hybrid ability that's Fibromancy primary, Neuromancy secondary.
i think it fits better keeping it on Dorian. we should look to try and make Francine her own person, i mean, she almost committed suicide over such issues i think it'll help her mental state alot to focus on actually making her fully unique as a way to grow and build her sense of self worth and individuality.

>She's got 3 levels into her core, has one augmentation that literally sets her apart from Dr West, and no secondaries. She's a fresh face, and still struggling with herself and trying to make herself more distinct and different from her progenitor. Not to mention her suicidal thoughts. She'll need constant interaction and reinforcement.
maybe but i still think i agree her making her choice on her own is something she needs to do. both for herself and for us.

>And also someone to develop bonds and Dual techs with.
thats entirely up to her and the other character honestly, and how things develop naturally.

>Also the thought of Francine messing with her enemies by sewing or tying their bodies into knots using strings of their own bio is neat.
eh, sewing sounds like way too difficult a move to pull off in the middle of combat.

>Relics
im just gonna level with you, you probably should've waited to post those til your ideas were hashed out as... i just cant give my opinion on those. theres really nothing to work with, and even if i agreed on this or disagreed on that, the final product might change my mind in either direction depending on how it actually turns out.
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>>3754271
Francine is actually pretty versatile as-is, even with just the one skill, because she can copy the Core of anyone she's connected to. Jack into the target, copy their powers, attack with those. She does need things to support that with, but she's not as one-note as she seems.

>Surtyr's Nails (aka. Surtyr's Stakes mk.2): Same principle as Surtyr's Stakes, Bio-Pile-bunkers except they're not limited to being attached to the foot. Big-O references might be tossed in there somewhere but I'm a bit tired.
Nah, not Big O. Alteisen. Big O just uses the pistons to add striking force to regular punches, not to drive in a stake. The Alteisen has an actual pile bunker. What's more, "Alteisen" literally means "old iron" but more properly translates to "rust". November is the Veteran of Rust, it works perfectly. Actually, saying this, I kind of want to make some NPCs based on Kyosuke and Excellen. Kyosuke would be one of the rare few biologically male Daughters that got in thanks to a glitch, and who went cyborg like the Disassociated, making him into the Alteisen Reise. And then Excellen would be a weird Calcite/Unnatural Predator hybrid core to have a body that looks like the Rein Weissritter.

>Sewing Needle Sword/spear/rapier: Not sure where to go with this, but it's a useful supplement to Francine's core ability. I'll have to figure out the specifics of the enhancements. It's definitely going to be a tier 3 weapon that grows with Francine.
How about something to let her maintain contact with more than one target at once by looping a string through the eye of the needle? Generalize it, make it for any power that works by connecting via strands, just in case we want someone else to use it.
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>>3754338
>>3749994
So Francine's basically a Ditto fighter but requires to be constantly tethered to her target and actively siphons hp from her target on top of being squishy to boot due to how low leveled she is.
I do wonder about the rate she drains their hp because she would be a very good ally to fight with since she could basically double-up on the current core abilities that our family has. Another question is this: Considering the fact that Core abilities come with stat boosts, if Francine copies another daughter's core ability, does she also gain their stat boosts as well?

I also do wonder about another thing: If A daughter as multiple core abilities (Rath having her own core and Niku's Core ability), is it possible for Francine to copy the secondary core as an alternative instead? Something to think about.

>Double Red Death
Oh my. The terror. Dorian might have reservations about Francine copying his artstyle though. But having two daughters that use two different forms would eviscerate armies of constructs.
>Double Neon Ascendant
two hackers, one screwed daughter. Mind rape will happen.
>Double Holistic Lexicon
More spell casting. More shouting. But Francine's spellcasting is limited to 2 acts...which makes it pitiful.
>double Sculptress of flesh
tentative, but Francine would look like a rank amateur in Julia's presence.
>Double Hive
Honestly the most economical in terms of ability copying in getting the most utility, but the swarmlings are left wanting.
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>>3754560
the problem with targeting allies is she might still need to be either draining them or draining herself to get the ability. which wouldn't be too big a problem if switching targets wouldn't cut off access to the abilities. its neat but relying on keep the same ability for too long might not be a good idea for her. plus it kinda defeats the purpose of her being able to snatch up enemy health and give it to allies anyways, but doing so will naturally interrupt her use of anyone's core.

id also point out she's probably more than ok being a medic, as saving lives is quite the opposite of what her creator did or intended for her to do. id think she had other options for changing that augment if she was just trying to rebel, but i dont think turning a dissection ability into a self sacrifice healing ability was a mistake or random action on her part.

also, does she still have the mecha tendrils, or did she have to give those up? its hard to tell if she simply doesn't have them, or if its just an understandable detail BHOP didn't focus on to save space and make the story flow better.
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>>3754962
Right, well Veronica's sheet is done. would appreciate a look over like always.
also, ive been doing little tid bits differently on this sheet than the main stories, so if you see anything you think works better that you'd like me to change to doing on the Defiant Families, please feel free to say so.

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1g3FoPRbyS_Wr4-yAm395e_oJJl7BOC5o-LPUEpVIA6U/edit?usp=sharing

Heras... will be done eventually.
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>>3755384
Right, been piecing my way through Veronica's sheet since I got home. It's a bit intimidating, got a lot more moving parts and a lot more hybridization than either of the other two so far. Gonna take a while before I can make any cogent analysis of mechanics. That said, one bit strikes me immediately: Why does Veronica have Nightmare Diet when she doesn't want it? Why didn't she reject that hybridization?
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>>3757008
because up until that point Throwing together hybrids in order to gain stat boosts from abilities had worked out for her, and she didn't pay attention to what they even did.

Veronica is a very... march forward kinda girl. she would see something she thought was neat, take it, then not pay attention to how it evolved because, well, she would figure out what it did when she used it. once she accidentally discovered her first Hybrid, she figured that must be the way to go, so just started throwing things she liked together and things she didn't like together, not paying attention to what either actually was making. the way she figured it, Abilities were made to be a benefit to you, so hybrids were made to be a bigger benefit, so what was the point of paying attention to the small details until they actually came into play? afterall, if something wasn't to your liking, a hybrid could only potentially be better, and otherwise at least it gave better stats, no?

until, of course, this mindset ended up having drawbacks for her. morally at least. Veronicas not a bad person but shes by no means actually smart. before she made some big mistakes and met the Pepperbox Gang, she was basically just a wild animal in how she went about her business, that had the lucky fortune to had good survival instincts. take it how you will i suppose.
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>>3757071
Ah. That is...really stupid on her part, then. Yeah, definitely sounds like animalistic behavior, then. I'm glad she's with friends now, have that social interaction encourage her to actually think.
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so, just because technically there is a vote going on and we got a day left to discuss it, thought it best to at least confirm everyone is ok with the current vote;

Rath, initial forge orders;
(In order of importance*)
>Put the Sister Crystals both into a new Relic, the Deliverance of Ego, both defensive options being chosen.
>Put the Voltaic Crystal into the Ignition Gauntlets, choosing the offensive option.
>Upgrade the Cutis Tractus to level 3
>Upgrade the Sui Interitus to level 3
>Upgrade the Sui Tormentis to level 4
>Upgrade the Cursas Alas to level 3
>Build us a Crimson Jesters Blood-Iron Masque
>Build us a bottle of General Generators Succulent Sauce

*Note it probably wont be an issue, and anything she cant build before the Stat Reset she can probably build while we’re out hunting, just felt incase our limit does get hit best to note this.

only point of contention i can think of is some wanted the Voltaic's defensive option over offensive, though i still think this is best done in the gloves and no ones actually said anything about it, so maybe its not a big deal to anyone.


Amaras Word Choice Votes Current Victors;
>NUKA
>VIE
>HIR
>VITA
>SIHL
>SKRA
>BAUM
>SULK

technically this is more of just saying what the winning vote actually is but of course further discussion never hurts.

oh, also, a silly relic i thought up;

>CATNIP DUST(Consumable); an odd, cheeky relic, this fine dust made from only the finest of powdered Biomass, sits in a nice, homely little bottle. upon encountering an Amalgam or Daughter with an Unnatural Predator core, though any daughter with at least a level of the class will feel some of the effects, one may throw this dust in their face, acting as a strong and potent mix of a sedative and hallucinogen, putting the target into a calm, blissful, and outright high off their rocker state. this substance is made more to calm others down, or to make a quick get away from an opponent, rather than as a weapon, as the effects do not last long and any pain one feels while under its effects will, as the saying goes, 'take the trip south', instead making the target snap somewhat out of it and go into a violent rage. still though, if that one daughter you know just refuses to behave...
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>>3758850
>Catnip
as amusing as it is, it's probably going to become the bodyhorror equivalent of painkiller addiction or cocaine in any society. A drug that lets you get high and forget the apocalypse never happened? you bet all sorts of daughters would do anything to get their own stash.

Some of those daughters might even be drug junkies pre-crucible.
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>>3758850
We should make sure that no one uses that catnip agaisnt us or it will be a disaster if they manage to hook Amara with that stuff. Especially if she gets Multi Powerword Kill.

Otherwise i can see a lot of daughters developing problems..... especially after the crucible. When the world is on its way to recovery many daughters might decidce. "Now is a good time to forget all the horrible shit that has happened to me." and become addicts now they dont have to fear ebing eaten by an amalgam if they overdose to much

otherwise i can agree with the things listed here
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(Gentlemen, the 28th Vein will open on Tuesday, August 20th at 9:00AM, Eastern Time. I look forward to seeing you all there, and I hope your weekend is going well.)

(Also, the Catnip Dust is hilarious.)
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>>3759467
Weekend is going well. I hope yours is also going well.

Have you made progress on reading the stories or were you busy?
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>>3759471
(I've been busy, and that's part of the reason Im pushing the Vein out a bit. I'm going to carve out the time to read what everyone's written, regardless of my weekend obligations.)
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>>3759488
(To clarify, this weekend's been a bit of a mess, so I haven't even had time to wrote the intro to the 28th Vein yet.)
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>>3758850
If we do have some leftover bio and aren't going over budget I think adding the FleshBag (the training dummy relic) and the Refleshment Vendor would be a nice cosmetic touch to our house, providing two outlets of stress relief and a method of optimizing our fighting prowess.

>>3759442
Of our family, we have 2 people who have Unnatural Predator abilities. Julia with her Badger claws and Amara with her Cat ears. Julia will be more affected by the catnip.

I do not think the Catnip is a good idea. It's a horrible idea considering that the entire fleshscape is alive and sentient. Once word spreads that the Defiant family has the equivalent of Cocaine for Unnatural Predator Daughters, shit will go for a dark turn.

>We should make sure that no one uses that catnip agaisnt us or it will be a disaster if they manage to hook Amara with that stuff. Especially if she gets Multi Powerword Kill.
Looking back at vein #25, I remember managing to decode Ozma's Multi word Health swap.
>OMAREV#?!&@*THA!
>Oma: all applicable targets
>Rev: Reverse
>#?!: Health (Now decoded as VITA)
>&@*: (word denoting Exclusion, makes following word an exception)
>Tha: ally/self

As for Ozma's Multi-Power Word Kill:
>OMA-=+{}|/\@$%$&@*THA
Huh....There's three-four other words that go into Ozma's Multi-power word kill, and I can't decode it due to Voice of Babylon. I'mma try to decode it.
>OMA: all applicable Targets
>-=
(This looks like a conditional word, since the symbol Bhop used is -=, with math/algebra, it means "Does not equal")
>+{}
(A fancy way to disguise it, but it looks like bhop's describing the word for "More than zero")
>|/\@
(reading the math symbol, its Vertical bar, foward-slash, back-slash, at sign. I think it's a verb of sorts.)
>$%$
(Currency sign, Percentage, Currency sign. Is this a symbol for the concept of nothingness? it's the only way that Ozma's "power word kill" spell could put someone down to death's door)
>&@*: (word denoting exclusion, makes following word an exception)
>Tha: Ally/self


With the current vocabulary that Amara has right now, she can't pull off the same Multi-target Power word Kill. The only other feat that Amara can replicate from Ozmas is the Multi-Target Power word health swap.

>>3759510
>>3759488
Take your time as always. In the meantime I found an interesting picture for an unusual amalgam. this is part one of two pictures that describe the picture in question.
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>>3759488
and part 2 of the picture.

Fair warning. I'm doing some retweaks on my fan-submission when I have the time.
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>>3759529
If i made it sound like i wanted it, that is not the case

An even if she does not have that Multi Powerword Kill she could deal quite a bit of damage if she woul dgo a on a bad trip

>>3758850
>>3759442
Just to make sure its not misinterpreted. I am not voting for the creatiion of the catnip.
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>>3759529
Come to think about it, how did we learn Oma? The first time we saw that was B'Ni using it, so Voice of Babylon should have hidden it from us. Was it one of the statue words, and Amara learned it while we were trudging towards Almath?
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>>3759563
Good question. It might be that Voice of Babylon is the kind of enhancement that encrypts the words and deciphering them requires a high DC.

hmm...now that I think of encryption. I'll think of a cipher relic to further encrypt Amara's skintalker speech. The overall theme I'm thinking is going to be a homage to Cicada 3301, but I'll need time to mull over it while I'm at work today.
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>>3759570
Don't we already have an idea for a cipher Relic in the form of the Tindalian Daggerflute?
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>>3759578
you can never be wrong with more encryption
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>>3759578
oh yeah, the Daggerflute!
>>3758850
add that to the list of things to forge. The whole world knows about our family and we don’t want our potential enemies to listen in on our communication
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>>3759616
I suppose, but at some point you hit a point of diminishing marginal returns.

>>3759627
Daggerflute was Tier Four, I believe. We can't forge it yet. I'd argue that it should also require getting a biomass sample from a willing Tindalos, for the sake of its summoning function.
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>>3759627
We cant......
right now we dont have a Tier 4 forgecore otherwise it would have been on the list already

>>3759616
More than three layers of encryption(renaming words, Voice of Babel and the daggerflute eventually) are lets face it ridicoulous.
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>>3759637
>More than three layers of encryption(renaming words, Voice of Babel and the daggerflute eventually) are lets face it ridicoulous.
Oh, yeah, we've got eleven words we can rename, don't we? What should we rename? I'm personally in favor of altering all the target words, in order to keep enemies from ever really being clear what a spell is going to do. What others should we change, though?
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>>3759710
We have CUNT to target enemies dont we?

What else do we have for target words.....

Renaming NUKA maybe to LIGHT

BAUM should be useful since it has no overt signs of what happened probably something like WIND (as in second wind)

Definetly VITA to maybe it into something like LEBEN. Life in german

VIE make into ..... DIENER(for the puppets that dance to the tune of thier creator)or servant in german

Cant really think of much more right now
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>>3759747
>What else do we have for target words.....
We've also got THA for allies, TER for terrain, and VIE for constructs. Arguably OMA for "apply to all valid targets", as well. So that's four renamings taken up, leaves us with seven to use on effect words. I can see changing NUKA and SULK being useful, too, not let the enemy know we're swapping elements until they get hit. BAUM is a good one, too, as you say it doesn't have immediately obvious effects. And I'm not sure what to do with the other four. Maybe VITA and REV so that anyone who survives the insta-death spell doesn't know what it was?
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>>3759848
TER --> HEIMhome... like the home one can build form the ground

THA -->FLOCK a group of asscotiated creatures

OMA --> WARUDOyes jojo reference to affect all

VIE --DIENER Servant

Otherwise not sure i have given a couple examples i could think off

Any other ideas?
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>>3759881
I'm against increasing number of syllables for a word. I know it doesn't matter from a mechanical perspective, it's going to take one ACT per word regardless, but I'd rather keep them as quick to say as they already were. Not sure what to do for OMA, all that comes to mind is dumb Kamen Rider references, but for a more intellectual one we could do RUR for VIE. R.U.R., short for Rossumovi Univerzální Roboti (Rossom's Universal Robots), is the Czech play from which we get the term "robot" to refer to an artificial servant. I think that works well for affecting constructs.
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>>3759926
That would be a good one i have to say. Would also make it very difficult for anyone trying to figure out what exactly the word means
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>>3759881
Nix Flock. It's too common a word for me to be comfy with.
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On a completely unrelated note, I saw this on Imgur just now and want FuzzBuzz to have something similar. Little bee sleeping bags, adorable.

https://i.imgur.com/hhzXAsd.gifv
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>>3760022
We could probably make a swarmling construct like that.... just a bunch of platelings conneting to each other to make a comfortable sleeping bag with a fuzzbuzz as a pillow.

We should probably make something like that for Amara, something that she can share with her Guardian Heart Fuzzbuzz or invite a cuddle friend into....... I just have in mind this adorable picture with Amara and Fuzzbuzz just spending time like mother and daughter as Shu tells her good night stories
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>>3759467
>>3759488
>>3759510
oof, im sorry to hear that BHOP. hope you find some time to yourself and to relax.
anything we could help with even mildly perhaps?

>>3759419
>>3759442
i do genuinely like how i can make just a silly idea not meant to be taken too seriously but people will see uses and interactions for it. somehow only makes it more worth creating, so thank you for that.

also i was not suggesting creating it nor thought anyone wanted it or would want it. just to put minds at ease as some seemed worried.

>>3759529
>If we do have some leftover bio and aren't going over budget I think adding the FleshBag (the training dummy relic) and the Refleshment Vendor would be a nice cosmetic touch to our house, providing two outlets of stress relief and a method of optimizing our fighting prowess.

Rath can maybe make that on her own time, im not personally interested in either for this list. also, Julia still has not run out of tea, so im starting to wonder if the second truly is actually necessary.

>>3759627
besides what everyone else has said i actually disagree with making something for the sake of something we already have more than well enough of.

>>3759747
>Renaming NUKA maybe to LIGHT
thats just lame, im sorry but it is. both Nuclear and Radiant are both neat, and NUKA is both a fun word and nice reference. light is just way too common and plain a word for my liking.

>>3759747
>>3759881
>>3759926
honestly besides very specific words i dont see the point of changing them. outside of things like 'CUNT' the alien language is actually more interesting to me.

>>3760022
honestly we haven't seen Amaras room yet for all we know she's already made him one...
speaking of, you think she's added anything to his name to differentiate him from the other FuzzBuzzes? considering he is her personal one with added autonomy and all that.
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>>3758850
>>3747854
>>3747846
also, just linking ya BHOP so you can keep track of things easier hopefully. no ones against this at least as a base so far.
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>>3760114
>Rath can maybe make that on her own time, im not personally interested in either for this list. also, Julia still has not run out of tea, so im starting to wonder if the second truly is actually necessary.
I am 100% convinced that her "tea leaves" are actually made of her own skin.

>honestly besides very specific words i dont see the point of changing them. outside of things like 'CUNT' the alien language is actually more interesting to me.
It's interesting, but I really do want to encrypt Amara's words. At the very least do the target words like I said, make it hard for enemies to predict what a spell is going to do because of the conditional nature of Skintalker words.

>thats just lame, im sorry but it is. both Nuclear and Radiant are both neat, and NUKA is both a fun word and nice reference. light is just way too common and plain a word for my liking.
We could do CURIE, from the woman who did foundational research into radioactivity and even invented the word "radioactivity".

>speaking of, you think she's added anything to his name to differentiate him from the other FuzzBuzzes? considering he is her personal one with added autonomy and all that.
I propose that he be Sir FuzzBuzz, having been knighted (literally, he's a Knight-class swarmling) and promoted above his peers.
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>>3760152
>I am 100% convinced that her "tea leaves" are actually made of her own skin.
so am i honestly, but i dont think ill be asking to figure that one out.

>It's interesting, but I really do want to encrypt Amara's words. At the very least do the target words like I said, make it hard for enemies to predict what a spell is going to do because of the conditional nature of Skintalker words.
i was under the impression it did not count as encryption and others could still 'understand' what word she meant to be saying, and it was purely cosmetic for our own enjoyment.

>We could do CURIE, from the woman who did foundational research into radioactivity and even invented the word "radioactivity".
NUKA is one of the few words im against changing. plus, Amara would probably love its reference to a mythical soft drink anyways... and also probably demand we find her a bottle. Hope Rath was planning to get into the cola business.

>I propose that he be Sir FuzzBuzz, having been knighted (literally, he's a Knight-class swarmling) and promoted above his peers.
...i like it. he's also already apparently taken at least one hit for her i think? regardless, i bet Amara would love to have a knighting ceremony for him.
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>>3760173
>i was under the impression it did not count as encryption and others could still 'understand' what word she meant to be saying, and it was purely cosmetic for our own enjoyment.
Maybe, but I think it should interact with Voice of Babel. That encrypts any words the listener isn't familiar with, so if we change Amara's words they should therefore be unfamiliar and be encrypted. I think, anyway.

>NUKA is one of the few words im against changing. plus, Amara would probably love its reference to a mythical soft drink anyways... and also probably demand we find her a bottle. Hope Rath was planning to get into the cola business.
Well, if we don't change it (I do want to, though), then it shouldn't be any huge loss. I imagine that there aren't a lot of people familiar with NUKA in the first place, it's a rare damage type and therefore the word for it should be rare as well.

>...i like it. he's also already apparently taken at least one hit for her i think? regardless, i bet Amara would love to have a knighting ceremony for him.
He has. A hit that should have killed him, too, it had anti-construct powers. But he clung to life for the sake of his lady. What a gallant bee, that Sir FuzzBuzz.
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>>3760192
>Maybe, but I think it should interact with Voice of Babel. That encrypts any words the listener isn't familiar with, so if we change Amara's words they should therefore be unfamiliar and be encrypted. I think, anyway.
well, thats what i was saying. i dont think us changing the word counts as another Skintalker not knowing it. im saying i dont think changing the word is supposed to be in any way a mechanical change, only a cosmetic one, so it wont change if Babel works on them or not, or if the enemy can understand them or not.

>What a gallant bee, that Sir FuzzBuzz.
well now im just imagining her wears a hat with an oversized feather in it in his downtime.
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>>3759747
Back from work
>Nuka to light
>Tha to flock
>Oma to Waurdo
>Vie to Diener
I'm vetoing these suggestions. "Light" is a very common word that's used in everyday english language. I don't want Amara to accidentally spout off a skintalker spell in everyday conversation. Your suggestions goes against the aesop we've taught Amara (being careful with our skintalker spells). On top of that, some of those suggestions to rename the spell words make it a mouthful to cast and lengthens the channeling time to cast the spell. I would like our spells to be short and succinct and not have to fumble on vowels and extra syllables.

>>3760173
>>3760152
>>3760206
Amara's FuzzBuzz is a Quad-knighted Nomling iirc. So it warrants an equally opulent name or something to distinguish him from the rest. how about "Fuzzbuzz, Grand knight of the Hive."
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>>3760616
honestly NUKA is the only one im outright against changing. its just a fun word and has a nice touch with it being a legacy of humanity to keep around. plus, lets be honest, something like NUKA is very likely what we would've changed it too if it didn't start out as that.

otherwise, i agree, if we are going to change them, we need to keep it to the standard 3-4 letters like they are unless it is a otherwise very easy word to say, like 'bitch'. they also shouldn't be even close to common words to say. i also think IC we really dont have much of an excuse to use foreign languages.

>how about "Fuzzbuzz, Grand knight of the Hive."
well, it needs to be something that can be shorthanded id imagine, but 'Sir Fuzzbuzz, Grand knight of the Hive' does have a nice ring to it. should we make him a little set of armor to wear into battle? maybe start soldering medals to it as he gains accomplishments? im sure if nothing else Amara would go wild at getting to play dress up with him and having little ceremonies for him when he does something spectacular.
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>>3760646
>>3759710
I feel that what bhop has given us when it comes to the ability to "rename" a spell is he's given us an a chance to scramble the spell library into our own coded spellbook. Like a cipher. We should hold onto our 11 chances to rename 1 spell word from Amara's lexicon.

Voice of babylon will keep the skintalkers guessing for a while, but once the code's cracked, our enemies will start countering them unless we can forge a relic that enables us to encrypt skintalking spells further in another layer of encryption like a Tindalian daggerflute.

In the meantime. I've made a set of relics used specifically for encryption.

>CICADA CIPHER: A set of circlets. Each of them bear a Cicada. The Cicada drones ceaselessly on an unheard frequency when active. When the Relic is active, all communications heard by anyone that doesn't bear the Cicada cipher with the correct encryption code (including the fleshscape) will hear a set of scrambled encrypted dialogue/messages. Resetting the cipher to create a new encryption code costs 50% bio x number of Circlets with the same encryption code, and causes the Cicadas on the Circlets to shed their shells and go dormant for 17 minutes before re-activating with the new encryption code.
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>>3760775
it really felt like just a gimmick for the sake of giving us something fun to do personally. and id kinda prefer for that to be all it is too.
can we hang onto them? i mean, i dont see why not, im just asking.

im also really not that worried about encrypting our lexicon either.

>>3758850
>>3760135
>>3747846
one small amendment;
>Have an Amara Clone scout out the forest for out humvee. if its still there, the Information Team, or all of them if they prefer, should find the time to go and retrieve it. maybe they can visit Lara while there, or invite her home for tea... or coffee, she might have an aversion to tea for... reasons.
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>>3760813
And your thoughts on the Cicada Cipher?

What about our other communication methods?
Considering that the entire planet is a planet-wide entity that's prone to telling secrets to skintalkers, I thought about making a relic that encrypts what the fleshscape hears about us just incase our potential enemies have skintalking in their repertoire.
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>>3760823
>CICADA CIPHER
its alright, though im unsure of what exactly the limits you intend for this are? sounds to me like its just an AOE that would make even our own team hear everything as a jumbled mess. not something id want active all the time for sure.

>What about our other communication methods?
those (and the relic too i suppose) really depends on the limits and power of the fleshscape and if it even is possible to block it out. theres also of course the possibility that if that does work, we are now creating a 'dead zone' in both location and time, meaning it might act as just as powerful a beacon to our location and where we have been as not having it, assuming said daughter care that much about finding us. scrambling isnt meant to hide your location or the fact you have something planned, its meant to simply slow others down when you know they are already 'closing in' but want to make things harder on them. otherwise like i said, if they're just, say 'shotgunning' out to draw in info from all around, making an area suddenly just static or suspiciously saying 'nope, nothing to say here' is probably a bigger attention grabber than not doing that could be.

but again, alot of this in both directions depends on just how the fleshscape information network works and can be influenced, aswell as how we and others can interact with it, which we really haven't delved that deeply into. despite it honestly being a potentially powerful tool we do mostly just sorta let Amara give info as she pleases and hardly ask her to even ask singular questions. granted, again, to be fair we also have been a bit busy to try and experiment with it, guess this will be a good test now to see just how Amara(and Julias) powers can really work and how far they can stretch it.
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>>3760842
Maybe leveling up Amara's Core would let her convince the fleshscape to lie for her? That feels like a plausible extension of the "I am friends with the flesh" theme to her Skintalker powers.
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>>3760842
I believe you didn't read thoroughly or perhaps I didn't write it clearly then, but I intended that those who have the Cicada Ciphers can communicate with each other clearly (since they share the same encryption code) while everyone else including the fleshscape that tries to listen into the communication will get only garbled messages.
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>>3760853
The issue is that if someone has a distributed enough network to be able to pay attention to a wide region, having one specific place where they're just getting scrambled readings from reveals that they should be paying attention to it. The Cicada Circlets are good for if you know someone is already listening in on you, let's you buy time to take them down. But if you're just trying to block people who are still looking for you then you're just confirmed that you're something worth paying attention to. What we need is not scrambling but a way to offset our presence entirely. Convince the fleshscape to record something else in our place.
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>>3760861
fair point. Which reminds me...

Source: Vein #18

>They nod as you hear Amara begin to whisper animatedly to the ground at her feet, taking off her Shawl before a chittering throng of voices echoing around you as she speaks to the very flesh you walk upon. After a moment she turns to you, her brow furrowed as your Stealthlings scout the surrounding area, showing no other foes in range that you can see.

>"The floor bits say they're tired of the big one stepping on them all the time, but they're also glad that he's really light, so he doesn't hurt them." She says as you spy one of the taller structures around the other side of the city, a covered tower that you assume to have once been used as an office building, unsightly and looming at one side of the area. "I don't get it through, how could something so big be so light?"

I wonder if it's possible to take quests from the Fleshscape though...I remember a scene when we were hunting amalgams that the Fleshscape had their own sentiments about things. If its possible, we could help out the fleshscape, and be rewarded with hidden nuggets of secrets or favors from the fleshscape.
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>>3760848
maybe, depends on how it all works again. is the fleshscape friends with others too? who does it lie for and who does it help over another?

>>3760853
no... thats kinda exactly what i thought and was asking, but thanks for clarifying. guess it rolls around to more of what i and the other anon have said.

>>3760861
that also becomes a problem potentially, but depends on some factors. as id imagine our range for affecting it would be limited, we would basically be making glitches that might not line up with whats happening in areas around it. would still possibly be harder to spot, but certainly a keen information daughter or over time such rewrites, especially constantly in the same place like our base, would becomes a very obvious sign.

>>3760876
that would be really neat, we shall have to see if that is a thing.
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>>3760884
>>3760861

A possible set of relics for Francine. It also serves as a good mundane surgical tool since stitching and suturing are important procedures during life-saving surgeries. I'm open to feedback and suggestions for balancing the relic strength.

>STITCHING STILETTOS: A set of Stiletto knives in the shape of Oversized sewing needles. Said stilettos can vary in size. The eye of the needle allows easy handling and throwing while allowing Fibromancers to "loop" their fibers through the handle. Looping a Fibromancy skill through the Stiletto's eye handle allows the daughter to easily manipulate it like a tendril or an extension of their own body. When thrown or stabbed into an enemy or terrain with a Fibromancy skill, the Stiletto creates a thread that connects the limb to the daughter and creates a "Suture" stack that tethers the Fibromancy ability onto the target. Multiple Suture stacks increase the difficulty of removing the tethered skill and amplifies the on-touch effects by an additive 5% for each "suture" tagged onto the enemy. Multiple targets can be connected by the same Stiletto thread (up to 5 per stiletto). The lives saved or slain, the fates weaved, entangled by the needle, that follows the hands that guide its path.

>THE DOCTOR'S BAG: The life of a patient hangs under the knife. This set of Surgical tools (Forceps, Scalpel, Needle Diver, Clamps, Retractors, etc.) made of brass blood, bleached bone, and bodily fibers come in a small case of white Calcium. If used while stabilizing a daughter on death's door, the Surgeon can attempt to perform "surgery" to stabilize the patient without having to spend bio. The patient will receive a growing advantage on death-saves while the surgeon operates and only needs to succeed their death save throws once in order to stabilize. If the surgery is successful, the patient will regain health and bio at the combined rate of their own hp regen and the surgeon's hp regen rate until healed to full.
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>>3760876
Maybe. From what I understand, the fleshscape isn't normally that conscious, and it only develops opinions when around a Skintalker. The rest of the time it's just performing its pre-programmed functions, it needs a Daughter to wake it. So any missions it could request we perform would be ideas that came to it when it was last in contact with another Skintalker.

>>3760996
I'm not sure she'd be that interested in the Doctor's Bag, that doesn't feel like it needs to be a Francine-specific item, but the Stitching Stilettos are nice.
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>>3760996
>STITCHING STILETTOS
how much do the strands cost? is it based on the fibromancer ability being woven into it? i guess my other thought is back towards the want to make relics at lease viable on more than just a single character to some degree, and the fact most fibromancer abilities would get absolutely nothing out of that, Fran only does due to hers being a hybrid, with those traits probably not coming from the fibromancy if we take into account the abilities we have so far seen. mostly thematically due to that it feels odd for it to be fibromancer based or only fibromancer based.


>THE DOCTOR'S BAG
interesting, but feels underwhelming for some reason honestly.

>>3761023
i still disagree on some anons earlier thoughts, i think saving lives and healing others is exactly the kinda work Francine wants to do, over causing more harm to others, even if they force her or deserve it. i mean, if they attack us/her, im sure she can justify it enough not to be traumatized or think 'oh god im just like West', but that still doesn't mean mending lives and helping others wouldn't be a change of pace she would be against, and really would show her under a different life than West.
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>>3761045
>>3760996
mind you, the base idea for both relics im not against. just difference of opinion on focusing relics too much to one individual, and more importantly, making its mechanics based around that when its not really lore wise logical in my opinion. Fibromancer abilities from everything we see arent really the 'effect' type of class in that sorta way, so making a relic based around fibromantic effects seems extremely limiting and an odd thing to waste resources on. would be like making a neuromantic ability based around enhancing the physical defenses neuromancy abilities give you. not impossible such an ability might exist, but certainly not something we have seen or have a reason to so far believe we will get proper use out of.
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>>3761088
>>3761045

Are you saying I should expand the criteria for the Stiletto threads? I could do that. Besides, my design philosophy with the stilettos was "playing with tethers".
If you're looking for me to broaden the stiletto's utility, I could just port the Resplendent thread bio costs for the thread length, but add an extra 10% bio cost for the utilitarian purpose of channeling touch-abilities through the thread. Of course, I'll also expand the criteria for what counts as a "thread" in order to make the Stilettos have more utility. I'll add in Humoral Paladin "Liquid threads" and Neuromancy Cords as valid mediums too.

And what do you propose for the Doctor's bag in giving it more utility other than being an emergency tool for emergency stabilization surgery? what about optimization surgery or cosmetic corruption removal?
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>>3761358
>Are you saying I should expand the criteria for the Stiletto threads?
overall yes. i was saying Fibromancer doesn't really do touch abilities or effects in general, so its not a good thing to limit it to. Humoral Paladin and Neuromancy seem to do it the most... and flesh Artisans but im not sure you can justify thematically doing a thread for those classes really. but both Neuromancy and Humorals certainly do those kinda abilities, both in 'threadable' functionality and in giving off effects and such. no reason Fibromancers couldn't do it too mind you of course, only like i said, they have much less reason and even less abilities it would make sense to be able to do it with.

>And what do you propose for the Doctor's bag in giving it more utility other than being an emergency tool for emergency stabilization surgery? what about optimization surgery or cosmetic corruption removal?
i was thinking more along the lines of stack and effects removal and the like. kinda like how Isabelle dug the cancer out of her head, but at great costs to both her ACTs and i think also her Health. instead, a dedicated surgeons kit could still require say, 1 ACT from her and her target, but at no cost, and still implied that 2 ACTs is alot less than it costed Isabelle to do similar. it also then allows removal of things we have seen very rare methods of removal for, but would make perfect sense for such tools(in the right hands at least) to be able to do. it could also do things like untether Her own Ability or things like Dominous Bloodline and Neuromancy cords from allies. again, at ACT costs, but making the removal 100% safe and being able to do it without needing to have a specialized ability to do so.
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>>3755384
So since my computer crashed as i was writing this the first time i will try againI will also not go as in depht as i am growing quite frustrated at my day right now. Sorry about that

Athens

Solid Core Power Exploding Nuclear death nuff said.

Impish Shadow is a bit too powerful. the movementstuff should stay but the extrem elvel of resitance should go. This power is about avoiding stiuff not taking it on the chin. Give it a chance to just deflect piercing/slashign attacks instead of reducing the damage

hairday A solid Power overall

Caijun
Daggers: I like how the crucible had so little to work with taht it made her hobby her core
Veined Vigilante: I can just imagine her shooting missing ehr original target ad then th eprojectile zoons acfoss the planet eventually hitting a poor daughter on the other side of the planet.
Crusher: Solid Damage Dealer Power takes a bit to wind up but deals massive damage not the best agaisnt agile opponents but that is what the rifle is for

Little more to say the other anon did a good job analysing it

Veronica
Gelatinous Gentry: Probably makes her the best elemental Attacker in the game. Her Mode shift is a bit quick when she gets attacked. To stay a bit more true to the power it was created form i would suggest makign the shift take time until the end of the round Personally i would also either reduce the damage at later levels a bit or lower the elemental penetration slightly This just seems a bit to powerful overall
Bubbles: Who doesnt like bubbles. Very useful i have to say. They are pratical to soften enemys before they reach Meleecombat or to block line of sight. Especially versatile no taht she can have them as any element. I just imagine her chucking balls made from Radiation at the enemy and they just burst drenching everything around in 10.000 Röntgen
Crystalized Keratin: Very useful especially for the Autoblocking of Crits and then dealing damage back. The Auto reactive nature of the power is soemthing i hope we can achieve with Raths Alabaster endoskeleton and erupting grasp

And Damn Nighmare Diet: Powerful but only for thos with a cold heart Something similar is the power that Norn had in her shortstory

Calculating Halo. This is probably what makes her really dangerous. Otherwise she would be little better than an nuclear airhead. dangerous for sure but easily outmnaeuvered and destroyed afterwards
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>>3761411
>>3761358
>>3761023
>>3759510

There is also a chapter of Minas Journey i finished

I will greatly appreciate any and all criticism and thoughts

Chapter 5: A Goal set 19.08.2019 *NEW*
The Crew has a small chat, Mina talks to a Staubteufel, meets some strong people and a new problem reveals itself in the city
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uDFh6SHJ_0vyTcZw_wTLzZ7BhReCHA3UhVrvgxVv65Q/edit?usp=sharing
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>>3761411
thank you for the excellent feedback. I'll work on rebalancing and making the additions you've suggested.
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>>3762823
>Her Mode shift is a bit quick when she gets attacked. To stay a bit more true to the power it was created form i would suggest making the shift take time until the end of the round
it would defeat the point of the ability if it went slower on the shift. it also already takes up an entire ACT to shift, or locks her into the element and the element she just got hit by, to shift.

its also not actually that powerful, or maybe its more like its Achilles heel is really potent? sure, whatever element she does have is powerful i wont deny that, but its the only element she has and can easily be manipulated. she has no protection from or ability to deal another elemental damage type than the one she wields which is a pretty significant drawback. ignoring others resistances or even immunities also isnt all that uncommon from what we have seen too honestly, so ill admit maybe im not seeing that part or her own defenses as all that powerful when the precedent is kinda already set that defenses really arent all they're cracked up to be in this system. as far as i can tell if you're looking to actually be a tank raw stats are the only actual way to go, as Armor and Resistances can easily be ignored by simple augments or even decently low level abilities. which honestly im not a fan of, but again, its what we're easily starting to see happen so its a moot point how i feel about it compared to how the games going.

>I like how the crucible had so little to work with taht it made her hobby her core
yeah thought it was a fun thing myself.

>I can just imagine her shooting missing ehr original target ad then the projectile zones across the planet eventually hitting a poor daughter on the other side of the planet.
im not sure anyone would have the health to do that with, but its a fun thought.

thanks for the feedback and any further feedback given in response!

>>3762828
neat, ill try and get it read today.

>>3762838
no problem, looking forward to the changes.

on a very slightly random note, i was gonna say something about how it would be neat to meet a daughter that was our vulture bee counterpart... then i realized the nature of the crucible already made all our bees vulture bees. and... basically all hive mistress constructs their 'vulture bee' equivalent of the standard animal. ah well, they're a really neat bee type but guess its not their game to shine in... or they already have been?
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>>3762828
right, done reading
Overall Thoughts;
not bad, and not much to say. the fight was entertaining and the plots moving along with enough to keep me interested. honestly not much to say, but at least want to mention i mean that in a good way. its just simply a straight forward chapter that does what it needs to do and does it well. sorry if overall you wanted more said but i just dont really have much. its a good decent read but overall this chapter was simple, but all done good and well.

still feeling a bit of... no idea how to word it, and it still feels unfair to mention, but sometimes characters feel a bit odd to me. not poorly written, and trust me when i say you are improving so no worries but its... like when you read something translated from another language, and even when done well, the structuring still has leftovers you might not do if it was your native language, if that makes sense. really, dont beat yourself up or take this too seriously, its just honestly me being way too nit picky over something thats not even that bad, but also saying it just incase you would want to know it is still there.

overall though, good job. kept me reading if nothing else, and has enough going on to keep me reading.


Major Thoughts;
>30,000-120,000 Biomass
Oh holy hell i think even end game level daughters would nearly faint at that price. thats a bit high. The Humvee certainly didn't cost nearly that much. I get a helicopters a bit different but it isn't THAT much bigger or more complicated id say to go from a less than 1,000 cost Humvee to a Helicopter. Id like to point out that even 10,000 would be a pretty bloody expensive cost even for someone like Mara, who is very heavily implied to be in the upper echelons of power levels. Sure she could afford it but thats still a pretty big hit even for her.

Further reading of course makes it obvious as a plot point for the bounty, but that still doesn't make it any less insane a cost on both regards.


Minor Thoughts;
>Titles
i dont think and am not really a fan of saying Mothers the one that gives titles. sure, she has, but not consistently and i dont think its actually her job. not every title comes from her either, for instance Amara and Dorians are wholly independent of hers and happened before they even made their choice. Raths is too, Mother didn't give her one and technically IC shes never fully been called it, the only hints of it are how Shu thinks about her. its pretty safe to say Novembers probably didnt come from her either. im not saying she cant, not at all, i guess im just against implying its something she regularly does enough for anyone to think its her job or odd to not get one from her.

>the Forges
Why are these folks forges so dangerous? Sure Forges are hot but all signs we know point towards them still being made to be safe to use by anyone without flesh sloughing off.
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>>3763983
Rebalanced the Relics. "Doctor's Bag" has been renamed to "Surgeon General's Essentials" to fit the surgery motif better.

>SURGEON GENERAL’S ESSENTIALS: The life of a patient hangs under the knife. This set of surgical tools (Forceps, Scalpel, Needle Diver, Clamps, Retractors, etc.) made of brass blood, bleached bone, translucent flesh, and bodily fiber bags come in a small briefcase of white Calcium, to be used in medical procedures as well as emergency operations. With the cost of a single act between the “Surgeon” and the “Patient”, the “surgeon” can operate on the patient and excise and remove a debilitating status effect (Including Cancer, severe bleeding, viral/bacterial/fungal/parasitic Infections, and other severe effects) of the patient and surgeon’s choice without the need to spend health or bio. In addition, if used on a “patient” on death’s door, the “patient” will be stabilized and regain health and bio at the rate of the sum of both the Surgeon’s and Patient’s Health and bio regen respectively.

>STITCHING STILETTOS: A set of Stiletto knives in the shape of oversized sewing needles. Said stilettos can vary in size. The eye of the needle allows easy handling and throwing. Pouring (30/50/90/120%) Bio into the relic produces a thread of (short/medium/long/distant) length. This can be repeated to increase the thread length. Humoral Paladins, Flesh Artisans, and Daughters who have the ability to produce fibers or threads can substitute the thread-making abilities of the stiletto with threads of their own. Daughters who process touch-effect abilities can channel them through the thread. When thrown or stabbed into an enemy or terrain with a skill, the Stiletto creates a "Suture" stack that tethers the thread onto the target. Multiple stacks increase the difficulty of removing the tether and amplify the on-touch effects by an additive 5% for each "stitch" tagged onto the enemy (up to 15 stitches per suture). Multiple targets can be connected by the same Stiletto thread (up to separate threads 5 per stiletto).

Thoughts? I'll be moving onto reworking Luna Bonney. I've come to realize that the types of insanity Luna has is starting to blend together with a different sort of madness, and I think this warrants a rework.
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>>3764267
(Am other anon out at dinner)
Both look great now, good work. Looking forward to seeing what you do with Luna too, shes an interesting character for sure. Seeing her drive other characters up a wall even she somehow isnt a direct threat to them would be fun to see.
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>>3764267
Oh, removing status effects, that's good. We could use more of that. And the Stiletto has been streamlined and made much less clunky. Very nice.

Working my way through your latest chapter right now, sorry that I'm going slow. Got some other things going on occupying my attention. Only about a tenth of the way through, but the Avenger continues to be amusing and the Morrigan continues to be creepy as all hell.
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>>3764328
Wait, shit, you're someone else. Sorry, similar ID colors is getting me confused, I apologize for this mistake.
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(Gentlemen, here's the posting for the Relic Sheet, Version 4. If there's anything missing or out of place please let me know as soon as you are able, and you'll also find that November's bonus stats are present on each Relic that she may equip. I hope you are doing well, and I look forward to seeing you when the 28th Vein opens in less than twelve hours from now.)

(And in case you're curious, Rath couldn't help herself from making the Spear of Dainsleif.)

Relics, Ver. 4: https://pastebin.com/c4J9mpPK
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Okay, more thoughts on the writing. I like the Hunter fight, the idea of there being distinct breeds of Amalgams instead of the mostly-unique one-offs our party has been facing. That was cool.. The fight was good, too, had some really visceral descriptions. And Mina finally grew proper wings, nice.

The XK Troupe seem interesting. I'm loving that this is a region where enough of a community exists still that you can have these groups that have their own reputations among that community. I look forward to seeing more of them.

And yeah, definitely going to agree that the costs for those parts are super high. Sure, they're going to be in short supply, but Mara is the only Daughter we've met whose stats go into the five digit region. It would take even a large group of non-epic warrior Daughters
many refreshes to get that much Bio put together.

Huh. Fleshscape drugs. I suppose those make sense to exist, I'm sure plenty of people would want to escape the horrible circumstances of their current existence. And it's not hard to make mind-affecting substances. Still feels weird to have people making drugs, though, pretty foolhardy thing to do when you've already got the Crucible pressuring you to turn into a berserk monster. It doesn't need help from psychotropics. No wonder there's such a high bounty on the supplier.
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>>3764573
We greatly appreciate that. Care to give your thoughts on some of our fan works?

I've compiled the list of posts where each of us has posted either a story or a character sheet.

>>3736445
>>3755384
>>3750399
Pepperbox gang

>>3739354
Past Crucible participants

>>3762828
>>3739317
Lydia, Mina, and Rara's journey through Europe

>>3750208
Luna Bonney. A daughter who's clearly off her rocker, and somehow the Crucible has turned it into her superpower. I'm currently reworking Luna's character sheet on a different doc.
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>>3764623
And it all loops back to that discussion of Catnip for Unnatural Predator daughters. Somehow.
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>>3764573
absolutely stunning work BHOP, i dont see anything missing, but ill let you know if i find anything. thought you has said Relics weren't gonna add more than stat upgrades for November, so i both thank you immensely for deciding to do that, even if earlier was a miscommunication, as it really fleshes out the choices and even makes some otherwise probably unused choices now totally viable, and i know deciding to do that must've added to the work.

i look forward to the 28th Vein and the probably massive discussions on what relics to put on her, as our choices are quite varied and significant. it does point out we have less weapon relics than we probably could use though, heh, though id not want us to make them just cause either.

>>3764627
thank you for compiling this list by the way, even if that seems an odd thing to be thankful for.
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>>3764573
really not a massive thing, but just for the sake of consistency, Hydras Heart is still only level 1 so the rest should be LOCKED. shame as I do want to level it up and im not against the fact even level 2 really makes it not worth taking off of the person again, im just still not sure we really have a consensus on who to keep it on.
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>>3764573
>(And in case you're curious, Rath couldn't help herself from making the Spear of Dainsleif.)
Rath needs to just build a mecha. There's little reason to do it now, or even for some time after the Crucible ends. But some day, when she gets the chance.

Anyways, yeah, these are some nice buffs for November. Definitely want to give her the Remembrance Whistle, that's good stuff on her. Hydra's Heart, too, Health regen on November is really strong. Sui Interitus plus the Crimson Masqu is insanely strong, too bad we're bringing Dorian on this outing. Lot of really nice options.

One minor complaint, though: You've got the Cicada's Cry listed as an upgrade for the Contender, not an ammo type. That's probably my fault, though, I just lumped all the changes to the Contender together when I gave you that paste of our new Relics and upgrades.

>>3764630
Relic drugs, not even once.
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>>3764627
(I want to post my full, detailed thoughts in a write-up soon, but everything I've read has been phenomenal.)

>>3750399
>>3755384
>>3736445
(The Pepperbox Gang continues to entertain me immensely, as their dynamic is something that makes for an intriguing look at a group that isn't quite as cozy as the Defiant Ones. I'm still finding the time to thoroughly inspect the Character sheets, but the combat and dialogue is well-written, with both granting a strong sense of character.)

>>3739354
(The modifications to the Humoral Paladin skill trees along with the others is exactly the sort of integrated world-building I adore, and the Yarrum would be utterly fascinating to run a Quest with.)

>>3762828
>>3739317
(This tale of a group of overseas Daughters continues to offer a fantastic look at how things have evolved across the sea, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where the author continues to take the tale. Of particular note is the excellent formatting and use of German and French to characterize the Daughters involved.)

(Avenger is best waifu.)

>>3750208
(Luna is a fantastic Daughter, and the use of scarlet letting in the sheet really works well to showcase the utterly unhinged nature of her as a character. Also, I appreciate the Touhou music, as I have several remixes on the BHQ playlist.)

(As an aside, I must stress that despite my somewhat reserved typing style on here, I am thrilled to see the characters, settings, and abilities you all have created. Thank you so very much for sharing, and I look forward to posting my full thoughts soon and seeing what else everyone here comes up with. If there's anything else anyone wants to share, I welcome it wholeheartedly.)
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>>3764682
Or we could give it to November and have her TOSS THE SPEAR like a Javelin projectile and reap the same benefits. It also has the "return to hand" feature built into it. A solid heavy weapon If I say so myself. Not to mention it's a good melee weapon despite the absurd strength requirements. Rath could even use it too as a weapon. Too bad no one else can lift the spear aside from November or Rath, the Neesons are the only ones with Strength Augmentations (or has a ForgeFrame for a body)

>>3764673
I agree with you on the permanence of Hydra's heart if we do ever decide to level it up. the fact that it introduces permanence so early and has an elemental weakness is what turns me off.
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>>3764703
>Or we could give it to November and have her TOSS THE SPEAR like a Javelin projectile and reap the same benefits.
No, I just meant that Rath's a huge nerd and clearly wants to build a Gundam. I'm not talking about any practical considerations, just that some day she should get to fulfill that dream. For now a man-portable (well, superstrong Daughter-portable) Dainsleif Launcher is an excellent weapon, but in her heart of hearts I know she wants to build a full-size version wielded by a twenty meter-tall robot.
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>>3764702
i look forward to that write-up for sure then.

>>3764703
>I agree with you on the permanence of Hydra's heart if we do ever decide to level it up. the fact that it introduces permanence so early and has an elemental weakness is what turns me off.
i get it, but its still overall a good relic and i still think it would be amiss of us not to aim to get full use out of it now that we have it. honestly Julia is probably the best for it, looking at everything.
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>>3764309
>>3764673
Do you think we'll have the time to craft the Stitching stilettos and Surgeon General's Essentials? before vein #28? I hope we don't go overbudget.

>>3764719
I also understand it's a good relic. I'm just worried on how wound cauterization would interact with Julia's Gluttonous Membrane. Having a growing patch of skin and flesh wounds becomes cauterized and prevents regeneration from fire damage when Julia's kit was built to take advantage of absorbing elemental fire damage just seems very counter-intuitive. I'm being a worrywart, but its the small details that might become our undoing, so please understand.
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>>3764702
oh wait, i did notice a big thing missing.
you said the Throat Cannon was now ours, but it is not on the list.
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>>3764745
(Ah! Thank you for noting that, I'll add it tomorrow at the start of the Vein.)
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>>3764743
>Do you think we'll have the time to craft the Stitching stilettos and Surgeon General's Essentials? before vein #28? I hope we don't go overbudget.
think probably a little late now, and to be fair its not as big a rush, as we're not taking Fran with us and all things going well she wont be needing them for a little bit.

>I also understand it's a good relic. I'm just worried on how wound cauterization would interact with Julia's Gluttonous Membrane. Having a growing patch of skin and flesh wounds becomes cauterized and prevents regeneration from fire damage when Julia's kit was built to take advantage of absorbing elemental fire damage just seems very counter-intuitive. I'm being a worrywart, but its the small details that might become our undoing, so please understand.
to be fair honestly, i could've sworn fire and radiant damage could interrupt regeneration like that anyways, and it could be interpreted as simply interrupting the Relic own regen and limb regrowth abilities alone, not a daughters natural regen or her ability based special regen. its just the instant limb regen and multi-limb regen is interrupted, meaning a daughter that takes heat/radiant damage with it simply loses the extra benefits of the relic, not that she takes anything extra due to the relic.
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>>3764743
I don't think it will be a problem. Julia diverts elemental damage to Bio instead of Health, consuming the attack instead of being actually harmed by it. I think the wound wouldn't cauterize as a result, because there would be no wound proper.
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>>3764702
Thanks...

Avenger is best waifu
The can of Worms you have just opened


>>3764623
Yeah the drugs are turning into a problem. And the Troupe is something that shows there is enough of a community so that selling drugs on a large scale can become a problem

>>3763983
Okay maybe gonna go back and revise the prices a bit again

If you want to know the reson for the danger of the forges i will add a post after this one that explains it but it does go into spoiler territory.

Titles. Good old Averna did not talk to a lot of people and never until recently even thought fo speaking with people if she could just eat them insted

>>3764703
>I agree with you on the permanence of Hydra's heart if we do ever decide to level it up. the fact that it introduces permanence so early and has an elemental weakness is what turns me off.
Its not really a weakness to fire damage as this anon >>3764769
pointed out. Its an interruption of the relics own effects. At least thats how i intended it to be when i wrote the first draft for it
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>>3764958
>If you want to know the reason for the danger of the forges i will add a post after this one that explains it but it does go into spoiler territory.
nah, or well, if you plan to reveal it in the story then no need to spoil things, but if it otherwise isn't something you think you could find a good reason to explain in the story id like to hear it sure.
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>>3764958
>>3764972
Since it is not something i will explore in great detail i will post a small spoiler
The Danger of the Forges of the order of the smith

SPOILER WARNING FOR A JOURNEY THROUGH EUROPE!!!!

The Forges of the order of the smith are not powered by any normal forgecore one could find lying around. They usually require at least fire resistance to use but Lydias Tentacles allowed her to only have minor burns in comparison, with some of her skin sloughing off

The specifics are gonna be something i will come back to later as they still have story relevance
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>>3764995
So they've kitbashed their own power source, then? Interesting.
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>>3764995
oh, well yeah that explains all of them being burned too, alright neat.
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(The 28th Vein is now open, and I look forward to seeing you there, Gentlemen.)

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