Continuation of the story, this quest started here and I plan to continue updating here. I think that the first part of the quest got deleted, that is why I posted my DeviantArt folder where there are all the parts of the first part. Also, there is the second part of the questhttps://www.deviantart.com/boisnator/gallery/68789803/Doors>>3372650
Wowza, Uncle Skully has quite the temper tantrum. Someone who acts this way from a polite simple "no thank you" obviously does not have their patients' well being and human rights in mind. We dodged a bullet avoiding getting help from this quack. We should talk to our therapist about this next time we visit her for her thoughts... and tell this to Chimney as this can make for a funny story.Interesting how he thinks janitorial work isn't a contribution to the city. But whatevesIn any case, just tell Skullirius "Primum non nocere. Good night Doctor." And be on your way.
dumb question, Has it been considered that Dario actually isn't wearing a stupid knight helmet this whole time, and that is actually literally his head? lolHe seems to be one of those lame SJWs or those so-called white knights you see on the internet.Tease him a little: "Wait, hold up... Are you in love with my psychiatrist? That must be why you are accusing me about abusing her good will. How adorable!"Then explain: "But not to dodge the question, she spent 6-8 looong years of education to become an esteemed and professional therapist. If I was faking it, she would have noticed immediately and wouldn't have asked me herself to see her for therapy or kick me out during our session. So consider respecting her judgement from her hard earned years of experience, Dario""but if it makes you happy, I'll at least admit I feel guilty for not paying her in some way. I'll see what I can do about paying her for her services."
>>3406125You think that's his head and not a helmet?Try poking his helmet to see if it is real
"Me being harassed is that obvious, huh? Well I don't know if it is a case of me pissing off people somehow, or a simple matter of my standing in the social class pyramid compared to the rest in this building as far as wealth and career goes.""OH! nearly forgot! did you hear? Malanda said that there are weird shit happening in the halls, like locked doors being unlocked, and weird shapes in darkness. Malanda is concerned an intruder might have entered. Have you heard or seen anything weird? in any case, be careful."
But then again, after meeting with Dr Skullirius with his childish temper tantrums, and Dario with his weird knight mask that he wears in public and never takes off, let alone let anyone even touch, what constitutes as normal? in comparison, our mental health is doing OK. Not good, but OK. Could be better, but that is what the therapy is for. Once the fear of doors is conquered through therapy, things will be a little better. Cheer up, there are doughnuts to eat after this long day to look forward to. YumInspect your perfume. reminisce about how you acquired it from your neighbor.
Those are giant scissors my dude. a tool used to cut things like paper. They're pretty sharp and gets the job done.you know, I think you should probably duck? yeah, now might be a good time to duck.
AHHHHHH! DODGE DODGE DODGE!
cross your arms on your chest, then roll sideways out of the way. Afterwards, try to get up and run like hell and don't look back. Try not to scream.
Is there any first-aid in the closet? most likely just cleaning supplies, but is there something we can heal our hand with? or at least some paper towels we can wrap around our hand with to lessen the bleeding?'As for the door, we cannot be sure who is outside, but if it is that monstrosity, it would have been able to slip through the door. in any case, we're not opening the door, not that we can because of our fear"w...who's there?"
Remember you are deeply terrified of doors and quietly step away from the door. Besides, it is so obviously a trap, your mother is dead and never coming back.
Do you have those pills the therapist gave you with you, or did you leave them at home? If you have them, inspect the bottle and look for side effects before we decide to take one.
Pop a pill ! But make sure you take only Just one. Our mind is already somehow fucked up enough as is, so might as well go all the way? Besides, I see no other way out of this dilemma.these were prescribed to us after all by our trustworthy doctor, so it must be safe in some regards. I'm sure It being unlabeled might just be another stressed induced hallucination or something. Just find a spot in this closet to get comfortable first in case it causes a seizure or somehow knocks you out or other weird possible side effects.
I'm glad he didn't say "HEEEERE'S JOHNNY!"Grab the mop/broom that is leaning there, we will need something to deflect his attacks with his scissors.Make sure you warn him "stay back, I know how to use this, and I'm not in right mind at the moment. So stay away from me"
>>3422549Actually, forget the broom and mop, and go for the fire extinguisher.
With this newest update, the first chapter is officially over. So how did you enjoy the first part of this story, what was the part that you did like and what was the part that you didn't like? I would like to get some feedback from you participators
It was good so far. I do like the main character and his personality. I guess what I didn't like was missing out on making certain suggestions, but we'll see how things go.
The story is interesting, I do like the use of colors, and the artwork is decent. My only nitpick criticism is there are some spelling error, but other than that, pretty neat.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2lPKU5qSO6AAll joking aside, I am glad that you enjoy my story. I must admit that I also noticed my grammar mistakes but I see it when I already update the story and I always hate myself when I notice them. English isn't my native language and I usually want to make one update per day that is something that I placed as my deadline, so I don't notice when I make a mistake. I know that this is just me making excuses, but I will try to improve in that part