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>>3006224

Plot Summary/Aka the story so far..:

The story takes place in a modern setting, in a high school in America. However this reality's America is different. And the country prioritizes Order above all else including ethics. The schools are run like dystopian prisons to prepare the youth for their eventual servile adulthood.

You are Thorn Prick, known at the school as 'W855'. At the school you are given a rank and number. The number is usually based on the order you arrived. You arrived late hence '855'. And the letters Rank from W to Z, with Z being the highest, and W being the lowest. The W's often being referred to as "Washouts".

The "Monitors" (whom are often Z rankers) control the school.

The Monitors can make those below them do anything they ask in the name of obedience. And in exchange the servant receives points so that eventually they can rise in the ranks. The Monitors are generally the taskmasters and the maintainers of order. But this isn't always the case.

Those that disobey the Monitors get sent to the Re-Education room. A terrible place which drills you into the patterns of obedience.
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>>3016583
Your girlfriend is Rose. A strong dominant Monitor who can be a bit psychotic and violent, but has since toned down her more insane tendencies since being with you. She grew up on the tough side of town raised by a "Way-Outer" meaning she grew up very poor. But she is also very strong, she can fling knives and fire guns, she delights in humiliating others and wants the entire school to bend to her will.

You and Rose recently overcame Z5, a deadly and powerful Monitor who used her influence to literally rape and humiliate Rose. But thanks to your help, you were able to get revenge on Z5 and humiliate her. You mentally destroyed Z5 till she was nothing but a servile dog, and Rose gained Z5's rank rising up from her previous Z12. And because she's now within the top ten that makes her part of the student council.

Z1's girlfriend was the previous Z5, and because of his pride, he challenged Rose to a fist fight! And the loser becomes the winners slave for life. Z1 is the strongest and most physically powerful student in the entire school. He fought in a secret arena which is the human equivalent to dogfighting. A brutal place where anything goes. He emerged victorious and earned his spot at the top in just one year.

So now, tasked with fighting the number one student in a bare handed fist fight in front of the entire school. Rose has been tirelessly training, and with your help is trying her hardest to bridge the gap between her and the towering lunk known as Z1.

And now you're up to speed! But if you really wanna know more, just check the archive:
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive.html?searchall=School+of+Conformity
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>>3016592
You're looking at short haircuts for women online, and you find a style that you like. You're not very skilled, but following an online guide you take your time and start cutting.

Rose sits patient as bit by bit you chop away at her luscious locks revealing more of her neck and face to you. You're reminded of when you shaved Z5 bald in the mausoleum.. Oh the screams..

With any luck Rose won't walk away screaming from this..

After what feels like a little less than an hour you have cut Roses hair into a Pixie cut. You hand Rose a mirror and she looks into it.

"Wow, you did a nice job Thorn, it's really cute!"

You sigh,

"I'm really not used to cutting hair, and.. I think there were places I could have done a better-"

Rose kisses you stopping what you were saying.

"Thank you Thorn."

"R-right."
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>>3016593
Rose goes to school for the next week with the sporty new haircut you gave her.. The people in the halls seem to like it, but maybe it's just because even with a bad haircut Rose is still beautiful..

You decide to text Britney and Cabella that the jocks might try something and to watch out. Cabella and Britney both respond something to the effect of they'll keep a lookout just in case.

The week goes by as tensions rise. Normal class periods crawl by like molasses. The entire school is buzzing about it. You saw Z3 out in the halls with a stand taking bets on who will win. It looks like Z1 is favored to win. With 5 to 1 odds.

You threw down 20 bucks on Rose that you had in your pocket. If it all works out, you'll get a cool hundo out of the deal.
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>>3016595
It's just hours before the fight which will be at 8 tonight. School got out at 3 but considering it's a schoolwide event, people are still wandering around. It's currently 6:35 on your watch. Rose is wearing a wrestling singlet with her short pixie haircut. She's hopping around looking fierce.

Amber is there scribbling some things on paper.

"Remember, it's more important to dodge him than it is to hit him. Don't get too cocky. You might be strong enough to tank some hits from some low level grunts in the arena, but this is Z1. If he gets his hands on you, there's no telling what kind of damage he can do."

Rose growls,

"Got it.. Still, I wanna punch that douche in the face so hard it's killing me."

Amber sighs,

"He's got every advantage here.. He's so strong he could probably pick you up and chuck you across the room."

"Got it, gotta stay light on my feet. Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee."

Amber seems worried,

"We're counting on him being slower with all that muscle of his.. But I don't know how hard he's been training. Speed right now is your only edge, and you might only be marginally faster, if at all."

Rose tilts her head side to side cracking her neck,

"Not exactly filling me with confidence here but ok.."

Amber is looking down,

"Look, I know you've been training hard all month, and all you wanna do is punch his lights out right now, but you need to wait. Concentrate, focus, wait for the right time, and strike."

Rose takes a deep breath. Rose seems like she's trying to put on a strong front, but underneath it, you can tell she's nervous. Hell you would be.. There's no way someone like you could stand a chance against Z1.. But maybe Rose? She's always seemed like the invincible type if the odds are even.
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>>3016599
"Are you gonna be ok Rose?"

She laughs looking at you,

"Not really. I think my protein shake is about to come back up."

"Oh.."

"Sorry.. I know you were probably expecting me to say something like, 'no worries' or 'I got this'.. But honestly, I'm pretty fucking scared right now. It's starting to feel like maybe I took Z1's offer a little too hastily."

"Rose come on, you can't be thinking like that right now.."

"I know.. I know."

You bring her in and hug her,

"You don't need to second guess yourself. I believe you were right to accept his challenge. If there's a single person in this school who can take down Z1 in a fair fight, it has to be you."

Rose grabs your hand placing it on her chest. You can feel it beating pretty fast.

"Can you feel that?"

"Rose.."

"I want to beat him, with every fiber of my being I want to pound that lug into submission. But when I see how much bigger he is, and how small my body is.."

You bring her in and hold her close.

"Don't worry about that. Please, this isn't the time to get nervous. You have to win, I know you can. But you have to believe it."

Rose takes a deep breath,

"You're right.. Right now, I need to focus on doing what it takes to bring him down. This isn't just about me.. Like you said, you don't want to lose me to him. You don't want me to be his slave. And I don't plan to become his slave. Because I'm going to win."

"That's the spirit Rose. You've got this.. When you're out there, me and all our friends are going to be there, we'll all be cheering you on."

Rose seems touched tearing up. She wipes away her tears.

"Dammit, you always say the sweetest things, and it just makes me cry every time."

You ruffle her short hair.

"It's alright Rose. I love you."

Rose places her hands on your cheeks and kisses you.

"I love you too Thorn.. You'd better cheer loud, I wanna hear you when I'm beating the crap out of him."

You laugh,

"Definitely."
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>>3016603
It's 7:00, one hour before the fight. Amber is lightly massaging Roses shoulders as she drinks some water.

Suddenly Roses phone that you're holding onto for her starts buzzing. You unlock it and see that someone texted Rose a video from an unknown number. Feeling nervous you click it. Theres some douchey looking jock with a crew cut holding a camera,

"Testing, is this thing on? Oh. Right."

He starts laughing,

"Hello there Z5! I'm just down here at the docks, and guess who's here with me? Why, it's your friends of course!"

You see other jocks in the background laughing too. He turns his camera towards Britney and Cabella tied up in chairs.

"We've rigged the crane here at the docks for exactly 30 minutes. Which should give you just enough time to get down here to save your precious friends!"

He checks his time laughing,

"Right now at this moment it's 6:59. But the match starts at 8! You won't have enough time to get down here and get back to the match unless you hurry! If you don't show up, the crane will drop a shipping crate on your two friends crushing them flat! Your time starts now! Better hurry or else!"

Rose stands up looking determined,

Amber seems concerned,

"Lady Rose, you can't! So much is riding on this match! If you don't show up, you'll forfeit!"

Rose nods no,

"If my friends are in trouble, I have to save them. We need to get down to the docks now."

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1) Rose no you can't! If you forfeit you'll end up becoming Z1's slave!"

2) We'll go together on your bike. Cabella and Britney are too valuable to lose."

3) Write-In
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>>3016617
try to find Z1 and show him the video, see if we can get him to postpone the fight or something, really don't think he's behind this or would be okay with his people doing this
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>>3016617
>2) We'll go together on your bike. Cabella and Britney are too valuable to lose."
Lose the battle, win the war
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>>3016583
>that OP pic
>that wall of text

Yeah that's gonna be a yikes from me dawg
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>>3016689
This was my first thought too, send Z1 the video and ask if this is considered fair.
Might be bait to get Rose beat up before the fight so we have to be careful
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>>3016617
>3
How about Thorn goes to Z4 to see if he can round up a posse of armored nerds, and go to the docks while Rose fights Z1.
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>>3016617
>>3016689
If he is, I'm definitely saying we leave to get them together. If those jocks are still there, we need Rose to MURDER them.
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>>3016689
>>3016712
>>3016780
>>3016815


"Let's try and find Z1 and show him the video. I don't think he's behind this or would be ok with his people doing this."

Rose speaks,

"Amber, do you have Z1's number?"

Amber nods,

"I'll call it right now, hold on.."

She calls his phone. But nothing,

"It went straight to voicemail, his phone is off. He probably wants to focus before his match and doesn't want people bugging him."

Rose shouts,

"Damn it, we don't have time to just sit around and look for him!"

Amber nods,

"How about this, Rose, you go save your friends, me and Thorn will try and find Z1 and show him the video."

You nod no,

"I"m coming too, it's too dangerous for Rose to go alone."

Rose nods,

"Fine, Thorn you're coming with. Amber-"

Amber nods grabbing the phone out of your hand.

"I'm on it! Good luck."

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You and Rose are running out into the parkinglot in the rain. It's hard to keep up with Rose, she's so much faster you almost feel like you're slowing her down.

You yell through the rain,

"You have the guns in the Motorcycle don't you?"

"No! I was worried that the Jocks might try to mess with my Motorcycle and find them by accident!"

And Rose wasn't carrying her knife either.. Not in that Singlet she's wearing obviously..

Rose tosses you a helmet, the rain is coming down hard as she slips her leg over the motorcycle. You put the helmet on and catch up getting on behind her. Rose shouts,

"Hold on!"

She quickly starts and revs the motorcycle peeling out of the school parkinglot.
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>>3016837
Rose rides with reckless abandon ignoring traffic lights and speeding through the rain. The way it's sleeting against you is cold and it stings. The ride is quite long, or at least it feels that way with what's at stake.

But Rose doesn't slow down, she speeds all the way to the docks. There you see the Jocks out there. Thunder cracks across the sky and lightning flashes as you and Rose dismount from the bike.

Rose sets her helmet down and walks towards them. You see Cabella and Britney all tied up. One of the jocks grunts seeming annoyed,

"You got here earlier than expected.."

Rose growls,

"You've got a lot of nerve kidnapping my friends like this.. When I get back and beat the tar out of your leader, I'll make sure you all get what's coming to you."

The jocks block the way,

"If you wanna rescue em, you'll have to get through us."

Rose cracks her knuckles,

"I don't have time for this.. But I guess I could use a warmup."

One of the jocks laughs,

"Ha! A warmup she says, like she actually has a chance against either of us."

Rose growls,

"Why don't you get over here and find out if I'm bluffing or not?"
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>>3016839
Lightning flashes again, Rose and the jocks charge at each other. Rose dodges under the punch of the first guy and uppercuts him in the gut. You're not much of a fighter but you figure you'd better get in there too. Two of the Jocks split off and come after you. They're pretty scrawny, looks like you might've gotten the weakest of the bunch. You've been training with Rose too. How hard could it be?

They both tackle you at once. You pound into the back of one of their heads knocking him to the ground, The other scrawny guy hits you in the jaw. It hurts but not enough to stop you from hitting him one back. You realize these guys are pushovers and start laying into them, beating the snot out of them and tanking their wimpy punches. These guys probably run the ball or whatever because they can't hit for shit.

Rose wipes blood off her lip as she continues her brawl, weaving and punching, dodging and parrying them,

"God dammit hold still you fucking bitch!"

One of the guys tackles her,

"Nice, get her!"

One of the other guys pulls out a knife,

"Lets see you fight when I stab you full of holes!"

Rose is pinned under a big guy. You run up and punt the guy on top of her in the head knocking him out. Rose rolls out from under the big guy getting to her feet, the guy with the knife rushes her and slashes her arm, luckily she was wearing her leather coat so it didn't impact her much. Rose grabs his knife hand and with her other hand punches the snot out of his face in rapid succession. He falls backwards onto the ground dropping the knife. Rose kicks the knife away,

"You cut up my favorite leather coat you punk!"

Rose stomps him in the stomach. He wheezes in pain. You walk over and grab the knife and use it to cut Cabella and Britney free.

Britney speaks,

"It was a trap! They were just trying to stall for time!"

Cabella sighs,

"Although if we were in any real danger, I'm glad you were here to save us."

Rose smiles,

"Anytime."

The two of them quickly embrace Rose in a hug. Rose speaks,

"Can you two get home ok?"

They both nod. Cabella responds,

"We'll call a cab. Go! You're gonna miss your match!"
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>>3016842
It's later in the arena, you and Rose rush through the parkinglot and into the gymnasium. You hear distant jeers,

"Looks like Rose chickened out!"

"No surprise there!"

Rose tosses you her jacket. The wound still fresh on her arm. You can see Z1 already standing there waiting. It's 8:02. Rose speaks,

"I'm going to go out there now."

"Are you going to be ok with that wound?"

She nods,

"It's just a scratch. You'll be there no matter what happens right?"

You and Rose quickly hug. Rose runs out there. The audience gasps as Rose emerges covered in rain in her singlet. She approaches Z1 in the ring.

Z1 speaks,

"Amber told me what happened.. Are you sure you're ready to fight after such an underhanded trick?"

"This ends tonight!"

Some of the audience is booing,
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>>3016849
Suddenly the microphone screeches and an announcer walks out onto the stage with a spotlight,

"Alllrighty then! The moment you've all been waiting for! The match! Between Z1 and Z5 is about to be underway! This match will decide which student will hold the number 1 spot! And in addition, the loser will become the winners slave!"

Silent murmurs through the audience,

"In the left corner, weighing in at a whopping two hundred and 10 pounds, standing at a towering 6 foot 5! The king of the ring! The undefeated, unstoppable, ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ1111111111111111111!!"

The crowd roars with excitement,

"AND! IN the right corner, weighing in at a modest one hundred and sixty seven pounds, standing in at five foot eight! The queen of cunning, the master manipulator, the cutthroat queen herself, ZZZZZZZZZZZZ555555!!"

Mixed cheers from the audience.

"At this point, you both can say something if you'd like.."

Some stage men come out and mic the two of you up.

Z1 speaks,

"I'd love to see if your training has paid off. I've been waiting for so long to have an opponent worthy to challenge me. I'm happy you didn't resort to cheap tricks either. I applaud your bravery. You have my respect. And when you become my slave, I'll be sure to treat you generously."

Rose growls,

"I just want to say out there to all the audience, that I'm no coward! I don't care who you are, or how big you are, or how many of you there are, heed me! If you oppose me, I'll crush you! I may look small, and weak. And maybe you think just cause I'm a girl you've got some kind of advantage over me. But I'll have you simpering like a dog at my feet and begging for my mercy! I will beat Z1, I will take his title, and I will rule over his Jocks with an iron fist! All you assholes who heckled me, get ready to be my personal bitch, now until you graduate. Because I'm taking over, and I'll start by taking down your leader!"

The audience seems shocked. But then roars of applause come out cheering for Rose.

Z1 chuckles,

"I have to say, you've got a way with words.. Announcer, take these mics off us, it's time to get this thing underway."

The stage men de-mic Rose and Z1.

The announcer speaks,

"Alright, I want a good clean fight, no groin punchin, throat punchin, or eye gougin. Everything else is completely fair game. Are you ready!? 3.. 2... 1..."

The two intensely stare at one another,

"Aaaaannnnd, FIGHT!"

The announcer runs away clearing the ring. Z1 and Rose slowly approach one another. Eying each other up. Rose is hopping around with a fierce look in her eyes.
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1) GO GET HIM ROSE! KICK HIS ASS!

2) YOU GOT THIS ROSE, I BELIEVE IN YOU!

3) Write-In
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>>3016853
>1) GO GET HIM ROSE! KICK HIS ASS!
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>>3016853
>2) YOU GOT THIS ROSE, I BELIEVE IN YOU!
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>>3016878
+1
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>>3016853
>3. "Eye of the Tiger, Rose!"
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>>3016853

2) YOU GOT THIS ROSE, I BELIEVE IN YOU!

Push our way to the front row, so we can either cheer her more effectively.
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>>3016853
2) YOU GOT THIS ROSE, I BELIEVE IN YOU!

>:(
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>>3016853
1)
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>>3016957
Aaaarrrggghh

You are making me nervous
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>>3016868
>>3016878
>>3016879
>>3016881
>>3016925
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>>3016946

"YOU GOT THIS ROSE, I BELIEVE IN YOU!"

You're not sure how, but even though Rose doesn't turn to you, you feel that she heard you. Z1 rushes up to her, he makes the first swing, Rose weaves out of the way. He goes for the sweep but she backflips out of the way.

Z1 has as serious expression,

He charges again, swinging a mighty looking haymaker, Rose dodges. He throws a series of smaller punches that Rose blocks or sidesteps. You hear the Jocks jeering,

"Stand still you jumpy bitch!"

"Just lose already!"

You shout,

"Eye of the Tiger Rose, come on!"

Rose can't seem to find time to get in a punch without getting hit. She's being calm and taking Amber's advice. It's honestly pretty scary to watch. Z1 being such a big hulking guy could really do some damage if he gets to her, but Rose isn't giving him the chance. She's waiting.. Trying to find that perfect moment. Suddenly Z1s fist connects to her chest. She tanks it, winds up, and goes for a mean uppercut!

Z1 staggers backwards rubbing his jaw. The audience gasps. Z1 growls charging at her again, he goes for the punch, misses. She hits him in the face again, but he tanks it and grabs her arm. He takes her by the arm lifting her up over his shoulder and slamming her into the mat. YEeeouch that has GOT to hurt.. Rose recovers at some kind of superhuman rate because only a second after she hits the mat she springs back up. She hits him again with a nasty uppercut as he's leaning over her. He staggers and falls over on his back. Rose jumps up and delivers a mean elbow drop into his stomach like a pro wrestler. He groans in pain. He stumbles to his feet again, Rose gives him some space staying light on her feet.

"YOU CAN DO IT ROSE, COME ON!"

Z1 has both his hands up, they're circling each other. Rose goes in for the attack. Unleashing a lightning fast flurry of punches. Z1 just blocks. She punches him hard, hitting him in the gut, but he's just tanking the hits. She tackles, going for his legs, she pushes hard. He's trying to stay up, but Rose has the right kind of leverage pushing up underneath him. He falls back onto the mat.
She jumps up on his chest straddling him and starts punching the shit out of his head.
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>>3016964
Z1 is blocking his face, trying to roll out of it.

"Come on Z1! Don't be a pussy get up!"

"Don't let some girl beat you! You're better than this, come on!"

"GO ROSE, KEEP hitting him!"

It seems like she has him in a good place when all of a sudden he connects a direct punch to her face sending her flying off him. Rose staggers to try and make a recovery. Getting up on all fours. Z1 gets up and punts her in the stomach sending her rolling away a bit.

Z1 rushes to try and jump on top of her, but she rolls out of the way too fast. She climbs up on him and locks him into a chokehold. She wails on his head with her other fist. Yikes, those punches from Rose look pretty nasty. Z1 stands up with her still around his neck. He tries to drop down on his back where Rose is to crush her but she lets go and rolls away.

The two of them circle around each other. Rose goes on the offense again, throwing hooks and jabs. Z1 just puts his hands up and blocks.

He tanks a hit to the face and tries to grab her but she backsteps just in time. Both Rose and Z1 are panting. Looking pretty haggard..

Z1 charges again, he swings, misses, and swings again but hits her arms. She sidesteps with grace using his momentum and taking him to the ground again. Rose pounds the hell out of his back but it doesn't seem to do much. He starts getting up. But Rose mounts his back wrapping her legs around his chest and arms around his neck again. He staggers and struggles in agony to try and get her off. She's trying to choke him out into submission. He stands up with her on his back, he drops on his back but Rose doesn't get off.

He struggles like a turtle that's been flipped over on it's shell. He tries banging his head into her, elbowing her. But Rose just won't let go. He pries with all his strength at her arms but she's got a firm grip on him. He tries again, staggering to his feet, dropping down on his back, but Rose remains stuck on him. He flails about in madness. After it seems like he's worn out, Rose lets him go. He stands there on all fours panting like an animal covered in sweat. Rose knees him in the face knocking him on his back again. She goes for the elbow drop to the chest. He yells out in pain.
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>>3016965
"Give it to him Rose! Make him suffer!"

Rose rears back and pummels him hard in the face with the meatiest of haymakers. Even from here you can hear her grunting and screaming as she lays into him.

Rose stands up covered in blood hunched over. Z1 has been knocked out cold at her feet. The audience is silent for a moment, gasping in awe. After what seems like an unnecessary amount of pause the Audience erupts into cheers. The announcer runs to her holding up her hand,

"AGAINST ALL ODDS Z5 HAS DEFEATED Z1! SHE IS NOW THE NEW Z1! EVERYTHING BELONGING TO THE PREVIOUS Z1 INCLUDING Z1 HIMSELF BELONGS TO HER!"

Rose turns to you covered in his blood. She seems tired but smiles weakly at you.

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1) Write-In
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>>3016967
Jump there and kiss her madly, she did it, we knew she could do it
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>>3016975
hug the shit out of this girl, shes probably exhausted so let her lean on us as much as she wants.
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>>3016967
>>3016975
>>3016978
these

also, she doesn't need to make a decision about Z1 today, I'd probably recommend that she makes him the new Z5 and make him swear loyalty, he is hella useful if he stays on our side, those jock that raped and those that kidnapped our friends, those guys are in for a world of pain, but we can deal with them later

Now we get those 100 that we won by betting on her(I bet she will be glad we put money where our mouth was) and treat her to some kind of spa and relaxing place, then we fuck her silly doing all the work since she's probably just gonna lay there, lol.
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>>3016975
>>3016978
>>3016985

You run up you her and hug her. Kissing her madly. She chuckles,

"Easy.. I'm.. I'm feeling really sore."

"Oh, sorry.."

Rose suddenly almost falls over, but you catch her and hold her up,

"Ngh.. I wanna get out of here and go home.."


You nod,

"Of course Rose."

The crowd is cheering wildly as you and Rose exit triumphantly.
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And that would have been all there was except.. Well Rose can't ride in this condition.. And you don't trust yourself enough to drive her home. You decide to do the only sensible thing, call Cabella at 8:45 at night and hope she's still awake.

And luckily she is.
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It's the next day, Rose is patched up, she drove you to school in the station wagon. Rose is walking down the halls, the students gasp, suddenly you see Cabella holding a few boxes with ribbbons.

Cabella humbly kneels,

"Gifts for my Queen?"

Rose laughs,

"What are these I wonder? Slave boy, open them for me."

You sigh, this power will probably go to her head. But you know, being a 'slave boy' to her isn't so bad really.. You kneel down and pick up the top box opening it pulling off the wrapping. It's an elaborate gold crown, a real one?

You decide to place it on Roses head. You open the other box. Inside is a white leather jacket. You take it and slip it over Rose.

Rose seems pretty happy about this. Cabella speaks,

"I had the crown all ready in case you won.. And the Jacket? Well I express ordered it overnight.. I figured since your old jacket got destroyed because of me, this new one would be a good replacement. Plus it uh.. Makes you look all dignified with your new crown."

She chuckles,

"Yes, it all does suit me I suppose."
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>>3017012
Rose is in the council room with Z1 who's bowing low before her. He speaks,

"Z1, I am your slave. You have every right to strip me of my rank and do whatever you want with me. I made a bet, and I lost. My life belongs to you. My jocks, have already been told expressly they are to obey you without question."

Rose chuckles,

"It's cute to see you groveling before me, but it doesn't suit you.. How about this? You become the new Z5. As long as you serve me loyally I'll let you keep your dignity to some extent."

He bows low,

"You are too kind. I humbly thank you. I will serve your every whim with unquestioning obedience."

Rose has an evil grin as she sits there on the council table looking down at him.

"That being said.."

You speak,

"Rose no, you wouldn't-"

"Lick my boots."

Z1 seems a bit reluctant but complies, dragging his tongue along the top of Roses boots.

"Mmm, that's a good boy. Remember who owns you from now on ok?"

"Yes ma'am."
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Z5 is made to wear a collar saying "property of Z1". Z5 accompanies Rose as she stands before the Jocks who raped her, and the jocks who kidnapped your friends. There are other jocks around them standing up. But the criminal jocks are tied up with their heads down. Before them is a mess of phones, discs, pictures and drives documenting Roses rape. One of the Jocks salutes Rose.

"Ma'am! We have gathered all of the shameful pictures in every format. We offer not only these criminals to you, but these insulting pictures as well.. I was one of your hecklers, but I am in awe of how you defeated our previous leader. As such I will devote myself to serving you. The other standing Jocks feel the same and will serve you unquestioningly!"

Rose looks down at them grinning cruelly,

"Oh what to do, what to do with all of you.."

Rose looks to you,

"Thorn, what would you say I do with them?"

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1) Send these fools to the Re-Education room

2) Strip them and have them be sodomized by a bunch of girls with strapons.

3) Make them wear sissy dresses and force them to suck each other's dicks like a bunch of homos. (film it too)

4) BEATINGS, MUCH BEATINGS

5) Write-In

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>>3017014
>3) Make them wear sissy dresses and force them to suck each other's dicks like a bunch of homos. (film it too)
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>>3017014
>2)Strip them and have them be sodomized by a bunch of girls with strapons.
makes sense right, repay sexual violence with sexual violence. Just make sure none of them are enjoying it kek.
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>>3017016
and then
1) Send these fools to the Re-Education room

I don't know what it is but it sound rough
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>>3017020
yeah whatever we do, we should still do >1)
there still rapists at the end of the day.
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>>3017018
Agreed
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all of the above
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>>3017014
>1) Send these fools to the Re-Education room

>2) Strip them and have them be sodomized by a bunch of girls with strapons.

Both
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>>3017037
+1
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>>3017014
1) Send these fools to the Re-Education room

2) Strip them and have them be sodomized by a bunch of girls with strapons.

3) Make them wear sissy dresses and force them to suck each other's dicks like a bunch of homos. (film it too)

4) BEATINGS, MUCH BEATINGS

They raped Rose.

So why not give them literally all of it?

We go 2 first, after restraining them

Then have them kick the shit out of each other, claiming that the victors in the brawl will be given lighter punishments. This is a lie.

They are then made to do 3, and make them act really slutty about it too.

Then they get beaten to shit in the dresses and fucked with more

Then they get Re-Educated.

And THEN we're 'even', after demoting them to washout scum and offering points to any who torment them from this point on, effectively making their lives hell.

Sounds good to me.
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>>3017014
Backing >>3017096
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>>3017030
changing two
>>3017096
i know its technically the same answer but i love this guys ideas
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>>3017024
>>3017018
ok forget this
>>3017096
do this
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>>3017096
>>3017096 #
As long as Thorn can participate in the beating the shit out of them I'm down for it, then we go back to Rose to watch the spectacle, damn I want to fuck her in that crown of hers, maybe a good time to try that anal she was considering
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>>3017096
>>3017016
>>3017018
>>3017020
>>3017024
>>3017030
>>3017037
>>3017048
>>3017114
>>3017121
>>3017124
>>3017137

Well gosh guys, as much as I'd love to continue, apparently the nazi mods have decided all of a sudden it's not cool for me to continue my quest.


Erotic roleplay isn't allowed.. You fucking babies. You can write a quest where millions of people get murdered, but you write about sex and all of a sudden you get censored.

Fuck you Nazi Mods. And fuck whatever cunt reported me. I've been busting my back for all of you. And this is the thanks I get?

You want me to leave? Fine, I'll take my shit to Akun if that's what you really want.. Keep your dumb dice rolling hyper nerdy killfests to yourself. Oh sure, it's TOTALLY COOL TO GENOCIDE MILLIONS IN HYPER GORY DEATHFESTS BUT OOOH NO DON'T TALK ABOUT BOOBIES!!

I'm beyond fucking triggered.
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I work day and night tirelessly for you people and this is the kinda thanks I get. What a fucking load of shit.

Are you proud of your board for actual babies? Oh no we wouldn't want to talk about boobies here. Someone might get offended..
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>>3017184
I think it says on the board rules mate...
There is a lot of smut on /qst/ but most qms just put those parts in a pastebin.

That said it's a shame if u wont be running this anymore, was really enjoying your quest
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https://fiction.live/stories/School-of-Conformity-Your-only-Option-is-to-OBEY-SO-EROTIC-IT-WAS-CENSORED-ON-QST-/EEPSFpzrWrz7Zv8BJ

Alright guys, if you wanna continue reading the story, just peek in here. This Is Monitor posting for what is perhaps the last time on /qst. I look forward to seeing each and every one of you guys there.

I can't honestly fucking believe this dumb fucking website is CENSORING ME. Like are you actually fucking kidding me.

The story link is bare bones right now, but I'll probably update either immediately or a few hours from now.. I was in the middle of sleeping, I just went to check my thread and I get this, so it was something of a rude awakening.
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>>3017192
>There is a lot of smut on /qst/ but most qms just put those parts in a pastebin.

You can literally write the most hyper gory edgy kill-fest where people get chopped in half, shot and killed.

But MY story get's censored? What dumb american soccer mom runs this fucking site?

But yeah, check this link, I'll update in a few hours guys,
https://fiction.live/stories/School-of-Conformity-Your-only-Option-is-to-OBEY-SO-EROTIC-IT-WAS-CENSORED-ON-QST-/EEPSFpzrWrz7Zv8BJ
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I just woke up and read the entire thread. I was happy I made it into the OP pic, but apparently we can't have nice things.

Fuck the mods, and fuck Gookmoot for wasting his time on the retarded Vtuber "idea" instead of getting decent mods.
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>>3017193
Congrats you're literally another MCU quest under a different name now.

Also your formatting is garbage.
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I like the quest OP and plan to join in anon kun but you need to work on this insecurity issue. You get super worked up over people being busy one weekend, or one asshole reporting your quest. It's life.
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Wah!!!! I broke a rule and got punished for it! Wah!
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Just popping in to say I really enjoyed this quest, QM
Really sorry this had to happen mate, ive never seen someone as dedicated as you to a quest.
Thanks for the run anyway, hope you wont be scared off by the mods for good.
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>>3017196
Thank you for your tireless service Rose. I enjoyed your depraved fantasies, on top of being hot they reminded me how idyllic my own time in secondary school was. Bless your soul.
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Don't get mad a the janitor. He's just doing his job cleaning up trash.
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>>3017179
>Well gosh guys, as much as I'd love to continue, apparently the nazi mods have decided all of a sudden it's not cool for me to continue my quest.
>Erotic roleplay isn't allowed.. You fucking babies. You can write a quest where millions of people get murdered, but you write about sex and all of a sudden you get censored.
>Fuck you Nazi Mods. And fuck whatever cunt reported me. I've been busting my back for all of you. And this is the thanks I get?
>You want me to leave? Fine, I'll take my shit to Akun if that's what you really want.. Keep your dumb dice rolling hyper nerdy killfests to yourself. Oh sure, it's TOTALLY COOL TO GENOCIDE MILLIONS IN HYPER GORY DEATHFESTS BUT OOOH NO DON'T TALK ABOUT BOOBIES!!
>I'm beyond fucking triggered.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
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>>3017757
>>3017791
>>3017812

T. Janny
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>>3018035
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>>3017812
What is this Schadenfreude ? When a good quest dies, nobody wins. When a good QM is put off QMíng, you can't think that is a good thing unless you hold some immature grudge.
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And Monitor, please don't delete this thread or the other ones on suptg. I just started and I still want to read the rest.
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>>3018255
He was going to leave eventually anyway, mods or no. They just pushed it up a bit.
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>>3018255
With everything I've seen about this quest and it's QM 'good' is not a word I'd use to describe anything here.

You can make a tasteful smut quest. This is just edgy trash made by an insecure, narcissistic incel.
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>>3018255
>a good quest
>a good QM
>implying
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>>3018278
Like I said, you have a immature grudge against him, …. Why do you get so butthurt if somebody confirms Monitor is good.
And..why did your quest(s) never catch my eye, while Monitor's did ?
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>>3018262
You don't improve unless you write and get feedback. Thus, I see no fault in him. He was reported by some who held a immature grudge against him.
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>>3018307
It hit some of your kinks? I mean I just caught up as it got banned and it's structurally well written but the narrative and pacing are pretty garbage. Plus the qm is crazy narcissistic and whiny.
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>>3018307
>you have a immature grudge against him

Why would I have an immature grudge against some guy I don't even know who is both less popular than me and a worse writer?

Like, if it wasn't for the fact that he started sperging out about not being able to write smut on /qst/ I wouldn't have given a flying fuck.

The guy who wrote Modern Satyr quest and the guy who wrote Orc Lord were the two QMs who actually had to undergo the period where smut quests got categorically banned off 4chan permanently.

And even they didn't get as salty as this guy did. (they're also better QMs with better smut quests)

hell, that FUCK QUEST came back recently and got its smut scenes told to fuck off and the QM took it in stride.
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>>3018319
I'm a goddamn asexual , but it quest still caught my eye. Yeah, there were flaws but I saw some potential. You can kick a budding QM down or give him/her constructive advice and help improve.
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>>3018400
well that's what I'm doing over on akun right now
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>>3018400
Congrats on your sexuality. Asexual people can still have fetishes. Plus he's already gone so it's not really kicking him while he's down. But if you want some advice then sure.

Get over yourself. If you're going to throw a shitfit because you had one slow session and bitch at ANYTHING negative, then maybe you need to take a step back. Your quest isn't as original as you think it is and you need to actually listen to criticism you get to be better.

Maybe use the rules of your setting more than just for humiliation. There's points but we never get any. None of our friends that were high ranking elevated us and trying to get points on our own happened once, wasn't voted for, and was only used for more humiliation.

Have your MC actually do things. Aside from getting shat on and or cuddled we did next to nothing for large swaths of time. Any potential storyline we had was given to another cast member.

Actually have a chance of failure. Alternatively have your MC actually capable of success on his own. Our only success that we thought of was when we used Rose's playbook. And it went off without a hitch. Our only punishment was Rose getting raped and that was just to show how tough the new person was.

Need more?
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>>3018434
Lol, I'm not a budding GM.
Go back and read again. The MC had plenty of successes on his own, just not in the regular shonen way. Every time Rose doubts or flounders he picks her back up.
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>>3018464
That's not the MC doing anything really. That's us getting Rose on her feet so she can do things. If the most ever done was being a glorified cheerleader then your quest is from the wrong perspective. I'm aware your not the gm though I have my doubts but you were the one asking about criticism not the qm. So I addressed it to you.
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>>3018476
I'd say that's more the fault of the players.
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>>3018326
>Why would I have an immature grudge against some guy I don't even know who is both less popular than me and a worse writer?

My my, that does explain things...
What quest do you run anyway?
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>>3018476
If it makes any difference, I'm not him/her.
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>>3018410
When are you going to write some quests Nigger?

Or you just like hopping back and forth from websites blowing your load to anons on how shit their quests are?
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>>3018255
MCU trash never belonged here in the first place, at least its been moved to its rightful place on akun
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IMAGINE BEING THIS BUTTBLASTED
Come on people, I know /qst/ barely has any standards and rules but the least we can do is uphold the few remaining.
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>>3018990
>but the least we can do is uphold the few remaining.
A strawman. You can uphold the rules just fine by telling a QM in the quest that he overlooked a rule. But in this case somebody anonymously reported the quest just to spite the QM.
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>>3018930
>akun
Where is this ? I googled it but found nothing like a forum or fiction site.
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>>3019021
It's fiction.live they used to be called anon-kun (akun for short) but changed the name. I forget why.
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>>3019019
Except he SHOULDN'T overlook the rules. If it was a small rule tucked away somewhere I could understand but it's in the goddamn stick.
Plus this is a blue board.
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>>3019147
My bad, it's not in the sticky...
It's in the fucking rules!
http://www.4chan.org/rules#qst
>Erotic roleplay is not permitted. Frequent explicit descriptions of sexual encounters by a quest author may result in mod intervention.
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>>3018925
I'm out the game for good, son.

You'll learn some day about why I had to take a step back.

You'll understand.
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>>3016583
Smut is great, femdom is shit, and your taste in writing this is questionable. Stopped reading after the first session. Just wanted to tell you this. You would have more players if it wasn't for a shit fetish, feet being one of them.
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Well that was sad in so many different ways.
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>>3018930
It doesn't belong there either, MCU is a blight no matter where
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The way that I acted out was unacceptable, and I realize this now.

Thinking back now that I've had time to cool down, I may have been overly harsh. I realize that /qst is actually a pretty ok place to be. However I will be remaining on Akun for the foreseeable future.


I am well aware that my works are far from perfect. And you have every right to feel that they are shit.

I hope to leave you all with some warm words of kindness to smooth out any bad blood between us.

I truly appreciate having been here for 5 threads and being able to write for such a nice audience. You were wonderful, and perhaps better than I deserve.
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>>3019908
>femdom is shit
It's a existing type of relationship and you can't seem to deal with this reality. And it's a breath of fresh air compared to ALL the other quests on /qst where the girl(s) are submissive or not strong.
>>3023230
Good.
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>>3023230
Looks like things did smooth out. Guess I'll anticipate the next update.
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>>3023259
The femdom is fine. I'd say the real problem is that more time has been dedicated to Rose's growth with Thorn just benefiting from it while not having to do much himself.
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reading on that other side, the responses have brought the story in a fucked way :(
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>>3036104
What happened? I'm not following it, I'm just here silently waiting for the thread to die.
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>>3036104

tell us what happened on the other side anon
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>>3036106
>>3036203
Not sure what he's talking about, things are fine. We had a short spat with Rose again but made up.
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Rolled 73, 86, 24, 85, 5, 82, 3, 72, 5, 86, 26, 2, 59, 35, 20, 88, 94, 38, 64, 68, 3, 23, 22, 95, 28 = 1186 (25d100)

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Rolled 68, 82, 88, 29, 68, 87, 28, 24, 9, 10, 27, 28, 71, 45, 22, 32, 10, 48, 37, 68, 91, 14, 75, 92, 94 = 1247 (25d100)

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