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Rolled 97 (1d100)

This Quest will be taking place at the beginning of the Dragon Ball Z series
You will be playing as a saiyan born on planet vegeta.

However this part of the quest will be taking place before the events of Dragon ball Z
for character creation and backstory for the how why and where you start when Raditz lands on planet earth. The choices made here will be crucial to how your charcter behaves, fights, and the starting relationships he forges

Gm Rules:
>10 minute vote times(if this gets popular enough), first vote to 3 wins, and ties decided by my roll
>Dice rolls will be counted only AFTER voting ends
>first 3 rolls, best of the 3
>I hold final say on any decisions; write-ins are allowed if not too meta or game-breaking.

Overall have fun and be creative I highly encourage write-ins
This is my first Time Gming anything so be gentle if im not great at first i will get better

You were born on the planet known as Vegeta homeworld of the mighty
saiyan race.

Not long ago the Saiyan race was annexed into The Galactic Emperor Freeza's army.
With no other choice the Saiyans have become the emperor's servents, sent first onto dozens of worlds
, exterminating all who oppose Lord Freeza's rule. As mighty conquerors and warriors,
the Saiyans quickly made a name for themselves as some of Freeza's most powerful and loyal subjects.

The saiyans have a government ruled by a one leader and a single family on the throne.
However the throne can be challenged by anyone and if defeated the king and his family are no longer royalty and are replaced with the winner.

There are three Tiers to this society. The first being The Super Elites, Then The Elites and and finally The Low Class.
You were born into the


A)The Super Elites- Member of the Royal Family and higher starting Power-Level with one Signature Attack but one Personality Flaw

B)Elites- Average Starting Power Level One Blast attack or Combo

C)Low class-Low Starting Power Level One Personality Feat


>The Personality feat or flaw will be rolled by you after this vote so choose wisely these traits could make or break your character but so could your starting power level and attacks.
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>>2516479
A)The Super Elites- Member of the Royal Family and higher starting Power-Level with one Signature Attack but one Personality Flaw
The king's our uncle or something
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>>2516479
>C)Low class-Low Starting Power Level One Personality Feat
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>>2516479
C)Low class-Low Starting Power Level One Personality Feat
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>>2516510
>>2516515
Ill call it here
Low class saiyan it is roll me a d3500 for power levels
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Rolled 1437 (1d3500)

>>2516533
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Rolled 3412 (1d3500)

>>2516533
time to activate the fail.
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>>2516549
That's actually pretty good.
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Rolled 3350 (1d3500)

>>2516533
aight
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Rolled 2112 (1d3500)

>>2516549
How old are we?
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>>2516549
Nice rolls :)
High Power Level low class
Writing
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Rolled 9 (1d100)

You were the prized child of your fathers dreams. Born stronger than he was at birth with a power level of 784 he vowed to train you as often as he could and teach you everything he knew.
Your father was a member of a low class saiyan squad led by the saiyan Bardock. With a power level of 2379 your father was the weakest on the squad but was also the bravest amongst them. He earned his respect by never backing down from a countless number of fights no matter the odds.

Your fathers unwavering bravery rubbed off on you during the countless hours of training and it seemed to show you your special trait


>Alert you are Always on the lookout for danger, You were rumored to have eyes behind your head. You can’t be surprised while you are conscious. Other creatures don’t gain advantage on attack rolls against you as a result of being unseen by you.

>Durable- You can really take a hit.Your father training improved your body dramatically. Bonus Starting Hp

>Savage Attacker- Your fathers traiing turned you into an offensive savage.You are a savage in a fight. Once per turn when you roll damage for an attack, you can reroll the dice and use either total.

>Defender- Your fathers training pushed you to become a excellent defensive fighter. You gain advantage on blocking and deflecting attacks

>Moody- as a pure blooded saiyan you seem particularly more controlled and affected by your emotions.

>Write-In??
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>>2516622
>>Durable- You can really take a hit.Your father training improved your body dramatically. Bonus Starting Hp
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>>2516622
>Durable- You can really take a hit.Your father training improved your body dramatically. Bonus Starting Hp
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>>2516622
>Durable- You can really take a hit.Your father training improved your body dramatically. Bonus Starting Hp
Extra HP means we can use dangerous techniques that harm the body more effectively.
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>>2516622
>Durable- You can really take a hit.Your father training improved your body dramatically. Bonus Starting Hp
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>>2516647
>>2516657
>>2516667
>>2516677
Durable Wins
Writing.
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>>2516680
Your father trained you day and night spar after spar. Test after test. Your fathers training paid off big time by improving your physical stature dramatically. You can take one hell of a beating without wavering.By the time you were 8 Years old you were already stronger than him. With a power level of 3412 you were one of the strongest low class saiyans and today was your day to show it.

Today was the Squad appraisal tournament. Saiyans from every class fought to determine who were squad leaders and who could even be on a squad. All of your fathers training led to this day and he made sure to show it in the stadium stands cheering louder than anyone else.

What did you hope to get out of this tournament?

>I want to be a Squad Leader of Low class warriors just like father

>I just want to make it into a squad im not really the leader type

>i just want to get stronger i dont care if i lead or not

>I am the strongest in my class i will accept nothing less than Squad leader

>I want to join a elite squad and try to raise my rank

>Write in??
> Also What name was your father screaming from the stands :)
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>>2516726
>>I want to be a Squad Leader of Low class warriors just like father
The so-called "Elites" can go fry their tails.
>Also What name was your father screaming from the stands :)
Mizuna.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mizuna
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>>2516726
>>I am the strongest in my class i will accept nothing less than Squad leader

This or raise rank is fine

Could probably help dear old dad more if we were higher up
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>I am the strongest in my class i will accept nothing less than Squad leader
We can outlast 75% of the competition
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>>2516770
>>2516789
> Your the strongest and you know it! Is that confidence or arrogance? It can be so hard to tell >:) but we shall find out as we go
Writing.
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>>2516726
>>I want to join a elite squad and try to raise my rank
>Name?
I'll support Mizun from mizuna, fits the theme.
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>>2516825
The Squad Appraisal Tournament is traditionally held in the gladiator Stadium which today was filled to the brim with shouting saiyans all cheering for their own children. The stadium itself was collossal in size not to mention the size of the fighting arena.

Surprisingly through the deafening roars of the stands you can hear your name "MIZUNA KICK SOME ASS MY BOYYY". Fathers cheers fill you with a sense of pride you have never felt before.You know your the strongest and you will not accept anything less than squad leader.You will make your father proud

You know the story of how your father placed dead last in his tournament and was the laughing stock of his class. But while everyone else was lauging there was one saiyan who didnt. Bardock. Before they were on squads bardock was the only one to actually gave a damn about him and tried to help him get stronger. Your Grandfather just abondoned your father becuase of how weak he was.With no one else in his life Bardock and your father became close friends and sparring partners. Bardock helped your father find his true unwavering bravery and power raising him from a power level of 479 to his proud 2379. Because of bardock your father vowed never to treat you like his father did him and always stived to help his fellow saiyan no matter how weak.

Thats why when Bardock abandoned his son Raditz for being a weakling your father pushed you to be there for him. Your father saw the pain in the boys eyes and it sent him back and...he saw himself.

Did you honor your fathers wishes and try to bond with Raditz?

>Yes Raditz and I have been childhood friends

>Yes I often spar with raditz and ocassionally hang out with him because father asks

>No raditz is a weakling and i will not be brought down because of him

>No i want to make my father proud but raditz has always hated my guts

>write in??

>also roll me a d100 for a general feel of how popular you are amongst other saiyans
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>>2516846
>Yes Raditz and I have been childhood friends
Having a guy that we can trust to watch our back is smart, and our dad did ask.
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>>2516846
>Yes Raditz and I have been childhood friends
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Rolled 8 (1d100)

>>2516846
>>Yes Raditz and I have been childhood friends
though slightly arrogant we are essentially a decent person.
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>>2516854
>>2516856
>>2516857
Raditz is your bestfriend but how does everyone else feel about that? Is he your only friend?

I need 2 more d100s
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Rolled 96 (1d100)

>>2516867
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Rolled 17 (1d100)

>>2516846
>>2516846
>>Yes I often spar with raditz and ocassionally hang out with him because father asks
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>>2516868
holy fucking damn.
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>>2516846
>Yes Raditz and I have been childhood friends
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Rolled 58 (1d100)

>>2516846
>>Yes I often spar with raditz and ocassionally hang out with him because father asks
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>>2516868
Popular kid huh very nice.
Writing
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>>2516887
Because of your high power level all the other lower class saiyan kids knew your name and held you up as an icon. The guys wanted to be you and the ladies wanted to be with you. You knew full well everyone wanted to be on your squad. But out of all the others Raditz was the one you chose to hang out with without even needing your father to ask. Raditz was overjoyed to be your friend and it motivated him to become stronger alongside you. You guys did everything together from sparring to exploring the nearby planets of vegeta when you werent supposed too and thus were inseparable.

You look to your right and see him with his arms crossed with a bright smile on his face looking as the other competitors warm up.

Deciding to check your progress on his power level you give your trusty scouter a click you scan Raditz's Power level..... Well look at that a solid 2250. His training has really paid off he may not be the strongest but you know better than anyone raditz is a thinker not a straight up brawler.

Speaking of fight styles you pride yourself on being a

>Brawler- You are great in hand to hand combat. Youve got a heavy hand and can punch like no one else not to mention your dabbling in grapples

> Blaster-You prefer long distance fighting with Ki blast. Youve got one hell of blast when you put your mind to it and can keep up a barrage longer than most

>Speedster- Youve got moves like no one else you are very quick and prefer medium range combat getting close with rapid blows then backing off for a ki blast finisher
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>>2516930
Pick One that you are great at, One your Ok at And one you are bad at.
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>>2516930
Speed best
Blast ok
Brawl suck
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>>2516930
>Blaster-You prefer long distance fighting with Ki blast. Youve got one hell of blast when you put your mind to it and can keep up a barrage longer than most
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>>2516945
Oh wait
Blaster great
Brawl ok
Speed sucks
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>>2516930
Great:
>Brawler- You are great in hand to hand combat. Youve got a heavy hand and can punch like no one else not to mention your dabbling in grapples
Okay:
>Speedster- Youve got moves like no one else you are very quick and prefer medium range combat getting close with rapid blows then backing off for a ki blast finisher
Bad:
>Blaster-You prefer long distance fighting with Ki blast. Youve got one hell of blast when you put your mind to it and can keep up a barrage longer than most
Ki spamming is for losers.
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> Blaster-You prefer long distance fighting with Ki blast. Youve got one hell of blast when you put your mind to it and can keep up a barrage longer than most
We are essentually an actual tank
Also i want to out last vegeta in a beam struggle just so we can destroy his pride
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>>2516930
>Speedster- Youve got moves like no one else you are very quick and prefer medium range combat getting close with rapid blows then backing off for a ki blast finisher
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>>2516944
>>2516954
>>2516953
>>2516947
We've got a tie for your main style so ill give an extra 5 minutes to break it if its still a tie then ill just roll for it
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>>2516930
Speed best
Brawl ok
Ki suck
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>>2516953
Plus better blast ability means cooler ki attacks, think about it
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>>2516963
But ki attacks are inherently fucking boring.
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>>2516971
Exactly; that's why quick combos of punches and kicks are the best!
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>>2516961
Okie dokie Speedster wins as the main and Blaster will be your secondary

Writing.
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>>2516980
Eh? Aren't Brawl and Blast tied though? Or did you roll behind the scenes for which is 2nd and which is last?
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Op here. Apparently I can’t post on my desktop for some reason and lost the last update so I’m ganna check out what’s going on and I’ll post as soon as I can sorry for the delay boys
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>>2517043
No problem
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>>2516980
You are a speedster. During your training you were able to overwhelm your father with your rapid flurry of blows and ability to finish with strong ki-blasts however he pointed out that you had no real power to your punches. Rapidly punching would only get you so far. So he taught you how to strike with precision and speed rather than power. However what you lacked in Power you made up for with your durable body. This was all part of your fathers teachings to use your speed to dodge everything you could to save your durability for when you run out of stamina or have to tank a heavy hit or tank while powering up an attack.Where other speedsters are glass canons you have your edge.

Breaking your concentration you find yourself and Raditz within a swarm of saiyan girls "MIZUNA MIZUNA ARE YOU GANNA WATHCH ME FIGHT? MIZUNA IM GANNA CHEER SO HARD FOR YOU!! MIZUNA TAKE ME IN YOUR SQUAD! MIZUNA MIZUNA MIZUNA"

Raditz looks horrified but also extremely happy. How do you feel?

>Annoyed- Ughh you hate when they do this you just want to fight.

>Confident- you love the attention you expect nothing less from being the best in class

>Content- you get this all the time and you dont care

>Write in encouraged on this one
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>>2517127
>Content- you get this all the time and you dont care

god i love dragon ball z
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>>2517127
>Could care less - You have your heart set on only one person, a girl who's also from the lower class.
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>>2517127
>>Content- you get this all the time and you dont care
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>>2517152
>>2517159
>>2517160
Content wins
Ayy i see that romance ;) i got you
Writing
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>>2517164
Coopy I think you're my favorite qm.
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>>2517164
Hopefully we can save at least one Saiyan girl.
Lord it over Vegeta that us, a mere Low Class Warrior, are the father of the entire future of the Saiyan race.
Heck if we can save two then he can be doubly pissed that it's us, and fuckin' RADITZ saving the Saiyan race while he's stuck "taking care of" himself in his pod.
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>>2517178
Isnt it a theory that half saiyans have the potential to be stronger or something?
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I'd like to try not metagaming.

If we get some girls or an all girl squad aside from raddits then we can do that by saving our squad from the end.
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>>2517164
You dont even give them the time of day. Instead you look over to the one girl you realy care about. Parslee. She leans quietly against the stadium wall looking out into the pink sky with a look of determination on her face. Her long Wild hair and the one thick bang hanging over her left eye not even glancing in your direction.
Your not sure if its because she doesn't give you the attention everyone else does or if its because of her will to fight and become stronger that starts that primal drive inside you when you see her.

Snapping out of your primal trance you also begin to notice the extremely hostil faces the other boys are making towards you. The looks of jealously roll off you like nothing. None of them could do anything if they wanted anyways, besides its not like you asked for this. But thats when you see the one face you really didn't want. Prince Vegeta.

He looks absolutely livid you see a thick vein on his head pulsing. But as soon as he realizes you saw him his look of anger quickly turns to a very sinistirly cocky grin.

Uh-oh

>Walk over to the prince and try to smooth things over

>Quickly turn away and get out of sight

>Simply stare back at him

>Walk over and apologize for any offense you may have cause

>Write in??
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>>2517219
If theres any confusion with 1 and 4
1 your ganna try to charm him or befriend him
4 your ganna straight up i apologize your highness and what not
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>>2517219
>>Simply stare back at him
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>>2517219
>Simply stare back at him.
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>>2517219
>Simply stare back at him
Try it, manlet.
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>>2517219
>>Walk over to the prince and try to smooth things over
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>>2517224
>>2517228
>>2517229
Okay Boys Roll me a d100
DC 70
This will not be a fun fail is all im ganna say hahahahaha
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>>2517219
>Stare back at him
We must show that we are not a submissive primate, but an equal standing ape worthy of their own pack.
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Rolled 93 (1d100)

>>2517234
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Rolled 94 (1d100)

>>2517234
Stare in awe and witness my high roll!
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Rolled 9 (1d100)

>>2517234
Alpha Ape Mode.
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>>2517239
uhhhhhhhh ok
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>>2517238
>>2517239
>>2517241
Enjoy the good rolls while you can
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>>2517208
Yes, but his PRIDE about being THE PRINCE OF ALL HALF DOZEN SAIYANS won't know that until AT LEAST Namek.
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... Som, is that you?
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>>2517248
Haaahaha.
And holy fuck did we just stare down the prince
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>>2517262
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>>2517242
However you hold his glare without wavering once. after about a minute of this glare much to your surprise the prince actually waves you over to the super elite chamber. This not only surprises you but everyone around as well.
Raditz looks at you with extreme caution as if to tell you "What the hell did you just do"
You simply shrug and begin your march across the battlefield to the super elite side.
As you glance back the girls have only gotten even crazier all shouting about you being the coolest and how a low class with the super elites is soooo hot blah blah blah what you do care about however is the shocked Parslee is giving you. Seeing her look at you causes you to sweat a bit and she picks up like a space blood hound and changes he look from surprise to a "sexy" grin and wink. Holy Space Shit i just impressed Parslee!! You scream in your head. You feel weak in the knees.

Turning your attention back to vegeta before you trip over yourself you finally arrive among the Super Elites. "Well Well Well so your the Mizuna I've heard so much about." He then clicks his scouter and reads your power level. "3412 huh. No wonder i heard about you you actually are pretty strong for a piece of trash." "But I could wipe you out without even blinking you low class clown."
Prince Vegetas grin has somehow grown even bigger as he continues "But somehow you've done what no other low class roach like yourself has done. You've grown as strong as the weakest of our elites. You've got the attention our elites get, you've got the training an elites got. You've even got the balls to stare down with your prince."
"Yes i find you quite interesting clown and thats why im feeling quite generous and am going to offer you a spot in the elite division of the tournament.I want to see if you actually are all that your worm friends think you are.Or you can scurry back to where you came from and fight with the rest of the rats."

How do respond?

>Yes Prince vegeta i accept

>I would my prince but i want to be a low class squad leader not a elite member

>I accept my prince but only to get stronger i dont care about elite status

>Write in encouraged on this one
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>>2517323
>I would my prince but i want to be a low class squad leader not a elite member
Don't forget where you come from, just because some so-called "Elite" waves condescension behind a veil of civility in front of you.
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>>2517323
>>I accept my prince but only to get stronger i dont care about elite status
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>>2517323
>>Yes Prince vegeta i accept

Shit, we're gonna need to get smart if we're gonna make an impression.
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>>2517323
>>I accept my prince but only to get stronger i dont care about elite status
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>>2517335
>I'd rather not. I want to be a low class squad leader, but I wouldn't mind duking it out with some of the elite division fighters later on.
A bit of a mix. We can still become a low class squad leader while simultaneously testing ourselves in tougher combat situations.
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Wait we almost have Nappa's powerlevel?
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>>2517350
>>2517353
>>2517364
Welp Strap yourselves in boys your fighting in the elite division now
Writing.
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>>2517378
We are nearly Nappa tier its not the worst idea
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>>2517423
That's true, Nappa is, depending on what source, anywhere between 4,000 to 8,000, and he was the most powerful saiyans on the planet. Compared to a 12 yr old at nearly 3,500 and it seems like we've got a fair shot against anyone other than vegeta.
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>>2517451
*one of the most powerful
My bad
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>>2517378
"I accept your offer prince vegeta but i must say im not interested in elite status at all i only want to become stronger."
All your met with is a the prince laughing loudly in your face "Well Well aren't we cocky hahaha we'll really see how strong you are now wont we."And with that he dismisses you.

As you walk back to the low class chambers you can see raditz rushing over to you with a look of concern on his face "What happened with the prince?" he asks "He just offfered me a spot in the elite division of the tournament"
The look on his face is one of pure terror and confusion" AND YOU ACCEPTED?! ARE YOU INSANE DO YOU HAVE A DEATHWISH OR SOMETHING?! WELL DO YOU?" You've never seen Raditz this shaken before. "No But this is the perfect chance for me to really test my strength and grow even more powerful. I dont need to win the tournament i just need to last long enough to impress the prince. And even if i do take a beating ill come back even stronger! Isnt this exciting Raditz???"

Your pretty sure he thinks your insane now judging by his face."Well what about me then? Me and you are supposed to be Squad mates. I don't want to fight with these losers."

Well?

>I'll talk to vegeta and get him to put you on my squad if i impress him

>Ill sign you up and you can fight with me

>Oh Get over it Raditz its not like we will never see each other

> Your right i should back out before the tournament starts

>Write In?
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>>2517457
>Ill sign you up and you can fight with me
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>>2517457
>>I'll talk to vegeta and get him to put you on my squad if i impress him
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>>2517451
I'm going with the one toriyama said which is 4000 for my assumption. We stronk
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>>2517457
>I'll sign you up and you can fight with me.
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>>2517468
I want to say 8,000 purely for a closer goal to beat besides vegeta's 18,000
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>>2517476
That's fair. Either way I want to get strong enough to stomp vegeta
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>>2517463
>>2517471
Lets see if you can persuade Raditz to fight with elites
Roll me a d100 and DC70
and just to clear up nappa im using the 4000 power level and hes pretty weak compared to most other elites just for reference just about everyone in bardocks crew is stronger than Nappa
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Rolled 23 (1d100)

>>2517489
Well Bardocks crew is insane
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Rolled 32 (1d100)

>>2517489
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Rolled 91 (1d100)

>>2517489
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>>2517498
Clutcg
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>>2517499
*clutch
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>>2517498
Well Raditz your fighting with the big boys now
Writing.
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>>2517498
Shit man, from the abnormally high power level, to the popularity, to being cable of staring doen the prince without shitting his pants, it's amazing how much of a chad we've made mizuna into in a single session.
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>>2517515
All with some pretty ducky dice as well
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>>2517515
Got to look out or he'll steal your girl
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>>2517528
>implying he even wants anon's nasty ass girl
There are no brakes on the Parslee train.
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>>2517504
"Then I'll sign you up for the elite division as well that way we can fight together"
"HAVE YOU LOST YOUR MIND IM WEAKER THAN YOU AND YOU WANT ME TO FIGHT THEM TOO?!?!"
"Well yeah Raditz like i said you don't have to win just think about it like your training and you'll do fine besides you'll definitely get stronger fighting guy way stronger than you. It'll be great"
You then place your hand on his shoulder and look him in the eyes with ice cold seriousness and determination "Trust me Raditz i know it will be the hardest thing we have ever done but we aren't cowards. We are saiyans and we dont back down from a challenge. Not ever. We will come out on top of all this i promise"

And with that Raditz gains all the confidence in the world. "Your right Mizuna im not a coward. I will be get stronger just like you. So sign me up im all in" You both nod and do your signature power shake... It is badass.

You quickly go to the prince and request Raditz join you in the elite division. He can hardly contain his laughter and promptly accepts.

Well its all official You have about 30 minutes until the tournament begins.
What o you spend your time doing

>Warming up for your fights. You want to be ready for anything the elites can throw

>Study your opponents scout out power levels and try to find weaknesses or advantages

>Try and talk to Parslee. She totally checked you out when you went to talk to vegeta

>Find your dad and tell him everything and maybe get some advice?

>Write ins strongly encouraged

>vote also if after next update we should keep going or cut off and return tomorrow
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>>2517528
How can it be stealing if she chooses him?
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>>2517551
>>Study your opponents scout out power levels and try to find weaknesses or advantages
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>>2517552
Can't blame girls for recognizing his superiority
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>>2517551
>Study your opponents scout out power levels and try to find weaknesses or advantages
I want to see how we stack up
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>>2517551
>>Study your opponents scout out power levels and try to find weaknesses or advantages
I like we have Raditz as an ally. He's weak but he has a lot of cool moves.
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>>2517551
>Find your dad and tell him everything, and maybe get some advice?
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>>2517551
Have Raditz scout the competition while we talk to our dad right quick for advice?
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Rolled 1202, 2599, 279, 3609, 5919, 2490, 6301, 3178, 4194, 1123, 1267, 5297, 4716, 7082 = 49256 (14d8000)

>>2517556
>>2517561
>>2517563
Scout got first to three but yeah i can split up
Writing.
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>>2517583
>279
hmm...
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>>2517583
Maaaan that 279 what the fuck hahaha
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>>2517583
We are pretty well placed for this.
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>>2517583
Only 7 saiyans stronger than us and one is very close to our power level.
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>>2517583
>>2517591
>>2517595
>279
Must be Tarble.
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Also keep going unless yer tired coopy
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>>2517583
"Hey Raditz I'm going to go speak to my father but while im gone you should check the power level of all the elites fighting in our bracket that way we know how we stand."
"Alright Mizuna ill have a list for you when you get back"

With that taken care of you make your way into the stands and after 10 minutes passes you finally find your father.
"Minuza are you alright? I saw the prince summon you to the super elites. What Happened?"
"Father the prince summoned me to offer me a spot in the elite division of the tournament. He said that i had become as strong as the weakest elites and that no other low class child had done this before.Father can you imagine how strong ill become now?"

You can hardly contain your excitement until you see your him shed a single tear"Father?"
"Mizuna you never cease to amaze me you know that? Ever since you were born i knew you were destined for greatness.To think... a low class child competing with the elites... My son even... I never thought i would see the day. You have made me so proud just participating in the elite divsion... and i know you'll make me even prouder when you KICK SOME ASS IN THERE!!"

Once your dad calms down you ask him if there is any advice he can give you before the matches
"Do not underestimate any of them. They all have been trained just like you only with far better teachers. Watch out for there attacks unlike the lower class each of the elites have a personal combo or ki-blast that is stronger than any attack you can put out. I never learned anything beyond power waves and energy barrages so i could never teach you. And most importantly remember your training and stay consistent with your fight style other wise if you try to experiment too much you'll be left wide open. Stick to what you know unless you absolutely need to change it up. My son i know you can do this"

"Thanks for everything father but i should be going back now before the tournament begins"
"Alright Mizuna Good luck"

And with that you head back down and find raditz leaning against a wall alone.
"So what are we up against Raditz?"

"Heres the list of power level in our bracket ui dont know there names but i can point them out if you want. But heres the list"
3202,
4599,
2279,
3609
5919,
5490,
6301,
3178,
4194,
3123,
3267,
5297,
4716,
7082
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>>2517627
>7082
Welp, found Veggies.
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>>2517627
>Chose 5 Powel levels for descriptions of charcters and intel from raditz
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>>2517639
Alright, let's find out the intel on

2279 - This guy is clearly an outlier. Does he have some hidden talent?
5919
6301
4194
5297

We're extremely unlikely to beat the guy with 7082 in power level, so there's almost no point in learning about him.
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>>2517627
>5919,
>5490,
>6301,
>4194,
>5297,
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>>2517639
7082
6301
5919
5490
2279
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Rolled 1 (1d100)

>>2517650
>>2517647
>>2517645
Out of these Raditz points out
5919
2279
6301
5490
4194
7082
Writing.
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>>2517636
Nah can't be, he doesn't know how to lower his energy yet and at this point he should be past 12,000 at least, surpassing his dad and being the strongest saiyan on the planet.
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>>2517659
>1
I think we drained coopy's dice.
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>>2517659
That's 6 numbers, not 5.

Also that "1". I can't wait to see what happens next.
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>>2517659
Welp its seems the toughest guy spilt his biggest secret :( i know i put 6 down the toughtest guy rolled to keep his secret from showing and uhhh well raditz is a sneaky boy
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>>2517659
>1
what did he mean by this
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>>2517668
"Mizuna You arent going to belive what i found out about the biggest power level! Ill save it for last but wow hahaha just wow"
"Anyways the first one i noticed was that guy over there with a power level of 5919. He has cropped straight black hair and green eyes a real freak if you ask me... anyways from what i heard he has no self confidence and is rarely plans ahead. But he is pretty fast and agile dont understimate him"

"Next we have the girl in corner with a power level of 2279" For a second you swear you can see a smile flash across Raditz face but only for a second.
"Yes she is the weakest of the Elites but she is also by far the smartest. She is considered a strategic genius capable of defeating the strongest of warriors. She has short black hair cut in cowl and has to wear goggles to see."

"Next we have Twin Brothers with power levels 6302 and 5490. The seem to be a power duo of strength and blast power together almost unstopabble but without one another nobody is sure how they will do. The both have wild bed hair that sticks out to the left on one and the right on thew other."

"Next we have the girl with the biggest attitude and power level of 4194. She is the most sought after mate of any and all the elites across vegeta and she wears that honor with absolute pride.She uses her beauty to distract her opponents but is the best blaster on the bracket. watch out for her"

"And finally the guy with a power level of 7082. This guy i hear is total badass he is the heaviest hitter in all the elites and can even keep up with some super elites, his Deadly combo attack will leave you broken and battered. However i know his one weakness. HAHAHA its really quite embarrassing."
"Come on Raditz spit it out"
"Sorry let me compose myself... are you ready?"
"He hasnt gotten his tail trained!"

"WHAT?! But hes an elite... all elites have that tail weakness trained out of them its mandatory its its the first thing your taught."
"I know!! but i overheard him talking with his father and his father told him if anyones grabs his tail he would be done for and thrown out of the elites and cast out he would be a nobody."

>How do you feel about this revelation?

>I will use this secret to exploit it in our match if i make it hat far to ensure victory

>I refuse beat him with this secret. I will defeat him with my own power

>I can blackmail him into quitting the tournament before it even begins bettering my chances

>He doesnt deserve to be an elite he is a weakling and i will expose him and have him removed from the tournament

>Tell him you know his secret but promise to keep it in an attempt to befriend him

>write in?
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>>2517713
>>I will use this secret to exploit it in our match if i make it hat far to ensure victory
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>>2517713
>I will use this secret to exploit it in our match if i make it hat far to ensure victory
Another low class warrior for our cause
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>>2517713
Coopy will we survive the astroid impact?
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>>2517721
Yes once we finish up this tournament we will be doing a time skip to the beginning of Dragon ball z. With Raditz being your best friend and stronger things will be very different for earth
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>>2517729
Also going to leave this vote up for 10 more minutes and then i will make the last update for the night.
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>I will use this secret to exploit it in our match if i make it hat far to ensure victory
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>>2517713
>>I will use this secret to exploit it in our match if i make it hat far to ensure victory
it's his own goddamn fault for not training properly
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>>2517717
>>2517719
>>2517736
>>2517743
Hey if you make it that far your using that secret against him.
Writing.
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>>2517729
>we get to earth
>tfw Kakkarot is barely pushing 1.2K and has no fucking tail
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>>2517757
He's barely pushing 500. Raditz was 1.2k
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>>2517757
Raditz as of currently is twice his normal strength as a kid, and might only go up from here, goku and piccolo may be kinda fucked.
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>>2517766
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>>2517768
They were already fucked before seeing as Goku had to Jihad Raditz to even win.
Things are not looking great for the warriors of Earth I tell ya.
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>>2517754
"If i make it that far im ganna use that to take him down."
"But hes still an elite and twice as strong as you Mizuna... i dont think you should underestimate him"
"Maybe... oh well lets pay attention they are about to list the order for the brackets"

As soon as you finish saying that a big burly saiyan strides to the middle of the arena
"Tonight is the night we find out which one you are Squad leaders. Which one of you are worthy of serving on a squad. And Which one of you need to go back to the hole they crawled out of."
"The rules are simple. You fight who i tell you when i tell you until i tell you to stop. Killing will not be allowed. To become a squad leader you need to progress to the Semi - Finals that means only 4 out of the 16 in each bracket will become Squad leaders. If you defeat your first opponent then you are a squad member."
"Anyone who fights beyond my says so will be disqualified from the tournament."
"Now for the Order of the matches"
Before you can hear the announcer say anything else you suddenly feel two tiny hands wrap around your waist and a soft silky yet aggressive voice in your ear "Good luck out there Mizuna I'll be watching and cheering for you. show these elite dogs the power of the lower class" and then you feel a kiss on your cheek. When you turn around you nearly faint when you see the completely recognizable head of Parslee running back to the low class chambers.
Wow... what a girl..

Then you feel nudge on your side from raditz to bring your attention back to the bracket and you see you fighting in the Third round of the preliminaries against.....

Roll me a d15
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Rolled 13 (1d15)

>>2517776
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Rolled 1 (1d15)

>>2517776
CMON TAIL-GUY
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Rolled 13 (1d15)

>>2517776
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>>2517778
Well unfortunately your wish is granted sir.
You will be fighting against Spinocha (Power level 7082) in your first fight amongst the elites. Raditz will be fighting against the Saiyan Diva Lottus (Power level 4194)

We will continue tomorrow and hopefully i will have a combat system worked out and maybe make a pastebin for Mizuna. for

TO BE CONT...
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>>2517797
Also tell me how i did for my first time i crave your feedback boys tell me stuff you liked, didn't like, improvements, and stuff you hope to see in the future
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>>2517801
Material is good for a DBZ quest.

Might want to work on the smaller stuff not related to the narrative though; stuff like proofreading for proper punctuation and capitalization can go a long way to retaining or attracting new players. It’s not mandatory but it can be a turn-off for certain people.

Hope to see more sessions in the future! Thanks for running!
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>>2517801
Make sure you proof-read, try not to lean too heavily on fan favorite characters to drive things, and don't be like SOMNIUS.
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>>2517820

DELET SOM
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>>2517801
The quest is fine and it's gonna be fun, but your punctuation is atrocious, and your grammar can be off-putting. Try to work out at least some of that before posting the update?
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>hasn’t seen the original Dragonball and the startig half of Z
Boy, this looks exciting! If our saiyanfu get’s FREEZED, can I suggest we cuck Vegetal in a literal sense by woo-ing Bulma?
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>>2517897
>hasn’t seen the original Dragonball
That takes pretty much all the surprise and drama out of the first arc of Z, but whatever
>and the starting half of Z
Do you mean the Saiyan Saga or that and the Frieza/Namek Saga?
Either way, you're missing out on what is probably the best writing in Z.
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>>2517897
Also fucking Bulma is off-limits.
It might attract evil spirits and bad rolls like the last time that happened in a quest.
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>>2517906
fucking som, i swear to shit.
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>>2517905
If I focus really hard and it’s a full moon, I can remember the sayian arc, but I mostly watched the Namek arc then Cell and the androids. That’s all that played when I was a kid. Now I’m having fun watching Super and the Buu arc of Z.
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>>2517897
No if she gets FREEZED, 18 is the obvious answer
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>>2517910
Rewatch the fucking Saiyan Saga you turd.
Also I would skip like 80% of Super.
All the movie-recaps, all the filler, and most of the Tournament of Power.
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>>2517906
It seems that cucking the main characters in a quest lead to bad things. We must refrain from doing so and either get a buff saiyan girl or go for Launch
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>>2517929
>buff saiyan girl
You have my attention good sir.
As for Launch, she's taken by THE STRONGEST EARTHLING (NO IT'S NOT KRILLIN FUCK YOU HE DOESN'T HAVE A NOSE)
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>>2517931
World’s Strongest Human get’s his shit kicked in at every turn, he deserves nothing and he will get nothing. Why IS Krillin missing his nose?
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>>2517936
>Why IS Krillin missing his nose?
because he's a fucking mutant
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If we do good enough here(i want to suplex vegeta in the finals) frieza may let us and our squad live so we can be his battle slave
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>>2517942
To be fair, the only reason Vegeta's crew was even alive after the destruction of Planet Vegeta was because he willfully ignored the call to return to the planet.
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>>2517931
>Implying anyone but an Alpha Saiyan male such as us could handle Launch
Though with that said, I still prefer the sexy Saiyan girl
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>>2517987
FUCK WRONG QUEST
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>>2517987
>>2517988
DELET THIS
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>>2517989
I had both tabs open and I've been awake for a while, shit happens.
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>>2517954
shes kinda that second option if shit goes south and frieza blows up all the females in our species like he does in canon.
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>>2517757
>>2517770
See now I'm picturing us as Saiyan Takamura.
And I approve.
How long til we fight a deadly spacebear and win?
>>2517897
>Bulma
Dear spacegod NO.
>>2517916
>18
Now, I like 18, but I think i have a better idea.
Launch. Specifically Blonde Launch because she actually has a personality unliker her opposite number.
I mean we even get a built-in arc there. Gather the Dragon Balls and wish her a body of her own, so she isn't stuck living a half life, having to share her body with that pathetic, weak-willed Bluenette.
>>2517931
Anon, Tien never actually goes for her. She just kinda becomes a pathetic, desperate hanger-on. Because Toriyama utterly hates them both. Launch's Toriyama-described fate from that one interview is utterly fucking depressing.
>>2517936
Because early Dragon Ball is weird as fuck.
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>>2517989
>>2517988
Wait what was posted?
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>>2518083
>>2517954
>>2517929
>>2517916
>>2517897
>breeding with the species of wealkings that we're supposed to genocide
You all disgust me
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>>2518114
>wanting to be Frieza's lap dog like a certain poncey little Princelet
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>>2518120
It’d be more interesting than following canon yet again.
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roll
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Alright boys i hear you.
Better punctuation, better grammar is just a better time for everyone.

And there are some things we should discuss
1) I would be a complete autist if i said i didn't know anything about GrandDragonQms
Quest. It's a great quest that is very well done and is the inspiration for this quest.
However this quest is going to be following the DBZ cannon and storyline (as long as we can at least).
Whereas GD's Quest is waaaaaay before that and is on its own cannon and story at this point
The reason i made this quest was because when you see a Z quest you almost always
start on earth and always pal up with goku and z warriors and waifu the same people and
so on and so forth. I want to have a Z quest where you can have the freedom to actually
choose what you want to do without being held down by some moral obligation to goku or any
of the Z warriors. You are a complete free-agent who can help or hurt anyone you see fit.
I just want a different Z quest and starting as a saiyan from planet vegeta having no relationships with earth
seems like the best way to go about it.
Anyways, Yeah i'm not trying to step on GD's toes or anything like that. I have nothing but respect for the dude.

Also ill be starting up in about an hour or so. :)
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>>2518203
Oh nice.
Sure while it's fun to play these sorts of quests it kinda gets boring to retread old ground every time, especially when it gets dropped after the 1st thread.
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>>2518120
Nah I agree, I'm not against rebelling down the line but I don't feel like switching sides and going all gaga for human waifus. We're saiyans, let's fight and blow shit up.
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>>2518203
Sounds good coopy, and don't worry about GD, odds are he'd actually get a kick out of another saiyan quest popping up. Dude is really nice like that.
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>>2518203
You do you man, and good luck to you. But just to nitpick a bit, your OP pic isn’t from Planet Vegeta at all. That is from one Freeza Planet 79, where Vegeta went after getting his ass kicked on earth, and met Cui before going to Namek.
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Sorry boys life is happening right now i wont be back until at least 5 or 6
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>>2518312
Don’t worry about it, that’s not something most will be aware of. Probably.
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_TOTOMA__ / \
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_LUFFA____/ \
\_________
_SPINOCHA / \
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_MINUZA__/ \ / \
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_ASPARA__ / \
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_RUCCOLLO/ \
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_LOTTUS__ /
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_RADITZ__/ \ /
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_DAICHI__ / \ /
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_GINGE___/ \ /
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_BEETRO__ /
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_OKARA___/ \ /
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_OKORA___ /
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_SHALLOT_/
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>>2518944
if you prepared this in a notepad or something, just screenshot it
trying to format text here is difficult
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>>2518944
Rest in pepperoni ascii art
I'm back for a bit boys

Writing.
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>>2518944
Does this work?
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>>2519055
Much better, good work! I just found this quest, but it looks really fun!
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>>2517583
>279
They’re going to pull something, I can feel it. Can just one saiyan go great ape, or does the trigger affect every saiyan in a certain area?
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>>2518950
"Whoa...looks like your facing Spinocha first. Your really going to have to give it your all against him Mizuna."
"Dont hold back back. And keep an eye out for his tail if he starts overwhelming you."
"The elites don't have the same restrictions on tail grabbing like in the low class since they should all be trained so you don't have to worry about disqualification."
"But don't make it too obvious your going for it either or he will clobber you before you even get the chance. You will probably only get one shot at it so don't miss it"

Jeez...you knew Raditz was a thinker but you had no idea the level of planning that goes on in his head.
"Thanks Raditz. I know i can beat this guy i don't care how strong he is. That tail will be his downfall."

With that you both retire back to the sidelines to watch the first matches take place.
The first couple matches fly by with Orlave and Totoma winning their matches easily.Both of them laugh in your face and spit at you as they walk from the arena.

But you don't care. You don't show any emotion when they do this and it enrages them something fierce. Your here to get stronger not engage in their childish behavior. And that's the same attitude you bring when you hear your name called as you step int the ring.Across from you stands Spinocha.

Spinocha is a tall long, wild haired boy with a scar over his right eye and wears a shit-eating grin on his face.His body is particularly well conditioned like your own with his muscles being a bit bigger and more well defined than your.
You remember what Raditz said about him being the heaviest hitter in the elite division and he definitely look the part.
"Hmph I'm ganna enjoy beating the tar out of you and showing everyone what it means to be elite you clow class dog! HAAAAAAA"
The other elite kids are all cheering loudly for spinocha and booing your name. But equally as loud are the low class kids all chanting your name. The stadium is rumbling with excitement for your match that will certainly shake the elite and low class status quo.

How do you plan on taking this guy on at first

>Get in close and try to use my speed to dodge and tire him out to open him up for ki blast counters

>Use my speed to hang back away from his hand to hand strength and blast him down before he can get to me

>Use my speed to get in close to try and quickly strike his points of weakness and wittle him down.

>Write Ins???


>Would you like to smack talk to Spinocha or give him some sort of speech before the match begins? include with your vote
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>>2519134
>Get in close and try to use my speed to dodge and tire him out to open him up for ki blast counters
Spinocha looks like a beefy boy, so take the distant blaster approach probably won't work well.
We have to make an opening and tiring him out with evasion and counters seems the best way to do that.
No shit talking, we're here to win.
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>>2519134
>Get in close and try to use my speed to dodge and tire him out to open him up for ki blast counters
Don't talk shit. Pure efficiency.
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>>2519134
>Use my speed to hang back away from his hand to hand strength and blast him down before he can get to me
If we keep far away at the start, we can lower his guard and hopefully through him off when we go for the tail later.
>Would you like to smack talk to Spinocha or give him some sort of speech before the match begins? include with your vote
“Make sure there’s no *monkey* business!” Wink at his tail, he’ll either think we’re after his tail in a homo way, and that will upset him, or a non-homo way, and that would also up set him.
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>Write in
Stay on the defensive, use our superior speed to dodge his attacks
Try to tire him out and take potshots at him when possible
Maybe grab the tail if he starts getting reckless
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>>2519144
Clueing him in on the fact that we know his one weakness is dumb
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>>2519134
>Use my speed to hang back away from his hand to hand strength and blast him down before he can get to me
Blasters are not for close range, and you don't need to dodge a brawler if he can't catch you either...
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>>2519150
Ignore this im an idiot who misread the post
>>2519134
>Get in close and try to use my speed to dodge and tire him out to open him up for ki blast counters
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Rolled 13 (1d100)

>>2519139
>>2519143
>>2519160
Dance with devil in silence wins roll me a d100+5 boys DC 50
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What would have happened if we rolled a 1 for our power level?
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Rolled 30 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519165
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Rolled 28 (1d100)

>>2519139
>>2519143
>>2519160
Dance with devil in silence wins roll me a d100+5 boys DC 50
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Rolled 65 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519165
???
>>2519174
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Rolled 9 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519165
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Rolled 97 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519174
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Rolled 76 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519174
????????????????
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>>2519191
Let’s use this one.
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>>2519168
>>2519182
>>2519184
65/100 wins. Excuse my double post i thought i aborted it
Writing.
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>>2519191
We're just destoned to be a chad aren't we
We were so strong we had to be placed with the elites and then we start off really good against the strongest of the elites
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>>2519199
Don't let Alpha Vege Tales hear you he might dick you down himself
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>>2519199
We're better than strong, we're lucky.
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>>2519167
Yamcha Simulator 2K18
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>>2519210

annnd saved.
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>>2519197
You meet his comment with cool steely silence. "GRRRRR YOU THINK YOUR BETTER THAN ME DOG?!?! YOUR NOTHING YOU HEAR ME RAAAAAAAAAAA"
Spinocha kicks off and rushes you with incredible speed leaving a small crater where he left.
But your fast too. With equally incredible speed you feint to the left and go right instead.
In the enraged state Spinocha is in he takes the feint without hesitation and misses you by a mile.
"WHAT?!?!" is all he can say before you extend your left arm and use your right to hold it for stability and pump extra power to it as you let out a >Vote for color of aura< Blast directly into his back "GRAAAAAA"causing a small explosion around him.

With a cloud of dust in front of you billowing in the wind, you know that blast didnt take him out.

>Take a couple potshots in the smoke

>Rush in and try to surprise him with quick precise strikes

>Rush in and try to grab for his tail while its hard to see

>Fold your arms and stand silent and ready knowing it'll anger him even more

>Try and charge up for a full power energy wave

>write??
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>>2519257
>>Fold your arms and stand silent and ready knowing it'll anger him even more

>"And to think a sayin elite loosing his head against a 'low class sayin.'"
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>>2519257
>Take a couple potshots in the smoke
>Fly back and make some distance between you and him
>Bright Pink aura
Low class gets candy colors
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>>2519257
>Fold your arms and stand silent and ready knowing it'll anger him even more
blue is the standard, unless we do a cool super move, that has my vote.
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>>2519267
Supporting
Also let's go for a white aura.
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>>2519257
Pure white aura.
>Take a couple potshots in the smoke
>Fly back and make some distance between you and him
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Rolled 81 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519267
>>2519272
>>2519277
Fold you arms and make him madder wins.
roll me a d100 and ill give you a bonus +5 for consistently keeping character :)
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Rolled 38 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519290
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Rolled 41 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519290
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Rolled 5 (1d100)

>>2519290
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>>2519277
>>2519285
We ain’t no Shaggy Blanco
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Rolled 49 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519290
Please give me a good roll
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Rolled 63 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519290
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>>2519298
this is the official tier list by Toei you scrub
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>>2519257
Fucsia aura

>Rush out and stand ready for him to come at you, with a prepared blast.
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>>2519294
46/100 Dc was 50 :( close failure
Spinocha rolled 86 so this will probbably hurt
Writing
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Rolled 86 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

Lets hope we get over this hiccup and still look strong at the end
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>>2519272
You know what, I’ll change to candy coated like the others.
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>>2519306

what the fuck
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>>2519360
I know right? Bateman would kick the shit out of SSJ Rolf.
Rolf even admits this in the visual novel for the ToP.
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>>2519310
You fold you arms and stand stare into the smoke
"And to think a saiyan elite losing his head against a-" is all you get out before you hear spinocha let out a mighty roar that shakes you to the core as the smoke is parted immediately and you see Spinocha rushing you again with his arm fully cocked back.

Then there was a flash. It felt like your head was going to be ripeed off as him arms rockets forward and slams into your face causing blood to shoot from your mouth. You are sent flying into the arena walls with a thunderous BOOM.

"HAHAHA NOT SO COOL NOW ARE YOU ROACH? HAHAHAHAHAHA"

There no doubt about this kids strength now. That punch rocked you harder than you have ever felt. Your durability saves you though. A direct punch like that would have knocked out any other lower class kid no doubt about it. Although your durable you know another punch like that will be devastating. You spend a good 5 seconds laying in the wall recovering from that hit. Lucking smoke once again is all around you.

What do you do now?

>Fly up and fire off a energy wave while he is celebrating

>Rush him but try to feint around him to land a flurry of rapid blows

>Clear the smoke and prepare for another rush as you taunt him further by telling him to come at you

>Fire an energy wave from the smoke and dash out to the side hoping to distract him so you can land either a ki blast attack or rush for his tail

>Write ins???
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>>2519384
>Clear the smoke and prepare for another rush as you taunt him further by telling him to come at you
go full matador mode
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>>2519384
>Rush him but try to feint around him to land a flurry of rapid blows.
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>>2519384
>"How'd you make it into the Elite tourney? Even Raditz throws better punches than that."
>Wait in the smoke, charge a strong beam attack, and wait for his tard charge
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>>2519384
>Clear the smoke and prepare for another rush as you taunt him further by telling him to come at you
“Your spinach is limp and soggy!”
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>>2519384
>Clear the smoke and prepare for another rush as you taunt him further by telling him to come at you
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Rolled 67 + 10 (1d100 + 10)

>>2519396
>>2519403
>>2519402
Clear the smoke, taunt and prep for a rush wins
Roll me a d100+5
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Rolled 96 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519421
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Rolled 30 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519421
Here we go!
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Rolled 39 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2519421
>>2519423
I don’t think we need another roll, but here we go.
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>>2519423
CCCRIT nice roll boys.
Writing.
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>>2519423
Man
We got lucky facing the tard first round
We must look like a huge bully to the elites
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>>2519439
Good. Let the "Elites" fear the "Low Class" for once.
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>>2519439
>huge bully
this guy just made us into a wall fixture, "bully" my ass.
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it seems our true speciaty is ego damage
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>>2519454
>bully my ass
Phrasing!
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>>2519459
Wow holy shit we're gonna do great against every major villain in the series then
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>>2519464
I put the quotes there, innuendo be damned
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>>2519438
Pulling yourself out of the wall you then flare your bright pink aura clearing the smoke entirely.
You can hear all the low class girl swooning and fainting over you and shouting how cool you are. You also see spinocha looking at the girls with an intense rage and hint of confusion. Thinking quickly you know taunting him further will make him even stronger but just as sloppy. So you begin charging a ki blast behind your back hoping to force him to rush you again and blast him face first.

"How'd you make it into the Elite Tourney? Even Raditz throws better punches than that"
Spinocha looks to the ground but you can FEEL his anger swelling you can hear the intense primal growl coming from him and it actually scares you a bit.
But you know your plan is coming together perfectly.

"D-D-DONT YOU DARE COMPARE ME TO THAT RUNT" His muscles begin to swell
"I AM AN ELITE WARRIOR AND I WILL NOT BE BEATEN BY A LOW CLASS PIECE OF SCUM LIKE YOU!! I WONT! I WONT! IIIII WOOOOONNTTTT! RAAAAAAAAA!

As soon as he finishes you feel your full power energy wave ready to be launched.

That's when he full speed rushes you once again this time actually shaking the arena as he takes off with a blind rage towards you
"You will lose to low class warrior because Im just...." You wait until he gets very close before you dodge his primal charge by ducking underneath his body and watching it go over you. You bring the open palm of the hand behind your back and send it rocketing into his belly and let the full power energy wave go as you finish with "Saiyan"

Spinocha just roars out "DAMN YOUUUUU"
as he is sent soaring into the air until the massive bright pink explosion in the air.
You just made a fool of the strongest elite in the bracket.And the looks of horror on the elite Saiyan kids faces only further reinforce that.

TO BE CONT......

>Probably be back in a couple of hour to finish episode 0 but i've got dinner with the girlfriends family so ill catch ya boys later
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>>2519557
Oof, he dun got GOT! Does this mean he is the biggest loser in Vegeta now?
Have fun and take your time! Tell your girlfriend that a bunch of strangers on the internet say hi!
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>>2519557
blehhhhhh excuse the second to last line it sounds so gross when i look back at it i wish i wasn't in a rush
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>>2519573
Ohhhhhhhh yeah Spinocha's reputation will be in the garbage now but hey yours is ganna get a huge boost :) if he stays down at least
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>>2519557
Jesus christ Mizuna, if that doesn't get vegeta's attention i'm not sure nothing will.
we just shit slapped the biggest dick in the tourney.
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>>2519598
No way Spinocha is falling from an average blaster from a guy that's less than half his power level. He's probably going to have some fight left in him still.
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Do you have a discord or something?
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>>2519970
please no
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>>2519993
this
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Im back boys
ill be up for about 2 more hours hopefully we will be done by tomorrow with Episode 0

Writing.
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There is not a sound in the stadium. You can hear yourself panting. That blast might have seemed flashy but it took a lot to launch. And with your head still kind of reeling from Spinochas punch your starting to feel just a bit fatigued already. Good thing it was a direct shot, your not sure you could pull another off at full power.
Everyone in the stands has a look of utter shock etched on their faces. Even the low class girls are staring with shock and awe. Everyone except for Prince Vegeta. He simply has his arms crossed and his face is drained of any emotion staring in to the smoke in the sky. You can't tell if he is impressed or disappointed or angry or anything.

You also see Raditz with a big toothy grin beaming at you. You know that no matter the outcome you have instilled a lot of confidence in Raditz's. He probably feels like he can accomplish anything knowing that you can do it too.

Then you look to find Parslee staring into the smoke cloud as well but with big hopeful eyes. "What could she be hoping for." you wonder


Suddenly the smoke disperses and you see spinocha with his red aura flaring violently around him.
He looks badly damaged in his stomach area. The armor around it is gone leaving his stomach black and scorched.The rest of his armor held up but looks pretty worn. He is bleeding from his mouth leaving a thick line dribbling down his chin.

However what shocks you is the look in his eye which tell you his rage is nowhere near wavering. Then your shock intensifies when you hear "CRATERRRRRRRR"
Oh shit is trying too..

"CRUSHHHHHH"

He rushes you again but this time you know this is that combo Raditz warned you about.

>Try to use your speed to dodge out of the way as quickly as you can and gain some distance

>Try and fire off a quick energy wave to disrupt his attack

>Try to stay where you are but dodge to try and counter again

>Make a defensive stance a try to tank whats coming

>Write ins???
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>>2520346
>Try to use your speed to dodge out of the way as quickly as you can and gain some distance
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>>2520346
>Try to stay where you are but dodge to try and counter again
Go for the tail! Finish him!
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>>2520346
>>Try to stay where you are but dodge to try and counter again
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>>2520365
Supporting

Let us show Spinocha the true power of speed with a game of chicken.
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Rolled 37 + 10 (1d100 + 10)

>>2520365
>>2520367
>>2520372
Looks like you are playing chicken with him
I pray for you boys
roll a normal d100 DC 85
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Rolled 51 (1d100)

>>2520380
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Rolled 38 (1d100)

>>2520380
LET'S DO IT BOYS!
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Rolled 48 (1d100)

>>2520380
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>>2520381
>>2520382
>>2520384
Fuuuuuuck we failed.
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Rolled 35 (1d100)

>>2520380
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>>2520381
>>2520382
>>2520384
Spinocha is ganna land his Crater Crush combo so go ahead and roll me a another d100 to see if its going to keep you down or not
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>>2520382
>>2520384
It's not fair! It was our turn to win!
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Rolled 36 (1d100)

>>2520388
WE GOTTA STAY UP!
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Rolled 6 (1d100)

>>2520388
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Rolled 29 (1d100)

>>2520388
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
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>>2520391
You are our only hope.
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>>2520391
Your definitely on your last legs but your not down yet. :)
Writing.
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We are going to get a power boost after this anyways. I mean we just got the shit kicked outta us but are still standing. Zenkai is one hell of a drug!
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>>2520406
This is where it gets good, ladies and gents. Good foresight picking Durable. It's not what I would've voted for, so I'm glad I wasn't here in time for that.

Surviving the special attack of the strongest guy in the tournament will be our second win thus far. We still have a shot! Pull together and space out those rolls!
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You decide that you've got this guy pegged. Your going to dodge at the last second and counter just like before.This guy is an idiot.Or so you thought.

Spinocha is way faster than last time. In what seems like the blink of an eye he is already right in front of you with a low stance and his left arm cocked back even further than before.
Thats when all you hear is the whistling sound his fist makes as it burst straight into your gut. His fist goes deep enough to where there is a visible bulge coming from your back. The wind is thoroughly knocked out of you forcing you to let out a loud gasp.
But he doesn't stop there.
He then pulls back his arm out of your guy only to launch an insanely fast barrage of punches to your gut.
You can feel your ribs shattering from all the blows they are taking causing blood to shoot out of your mouth.
After his barrage he follows up with a sickening uppercut that cause your vision to go blurry and seem like the world is violently shaking.It feels like your head really did get ripped off this time as you are sent rocketing upwards. Or at least you would have.

Before you rocket beyond his reach you feel him grab your leg and despite the amazing force his uppercut made sending you up he uses all of his rage and strength to slam you back down into the hard floor with a tremendous crashing sounds shaking the entire arena leaving you in a massive crater.

You feel like every bone in your body is broken. "How the hell can anyone be that strong?" you think to yourself
"I-I-I can't move. I can't feel anything....what was i thinking?" Opening your eyes just a bit you can see Spinocha with another shit-eating grin on his face looking down at your broken and battered body.
"Hmph now your where you belong worm. Im going to-" but he is cut off by another voice
"GET UP MINUZA YOU CAN'T LOSE TO THIS GUY DO YOU HEAR ME?!?!" you can't believe it. Could it be?
"MINUZA YOU HAVE TO GET UP I KNOW YOU CAN DO IT!!! SHOW THIS ELITE DOG THE POWER OF A LOW CLASS WARRIOR!!! I BELIEVE IN YOU!!!" Yes you know that voice anywhere. Parslee...Shes actually cheering for you. then you hear
"MINUZA YOU CANT LOSE NOW I"M NOT DOING THIS ON MY OWN GET UP!!! GET UP!" Raditz...
"SON I KNOW YOU HAVE THE POWER TO DO WHATEVER YOU WANT.I KNOW YOU CAN BEAT HIM SO GET UP AND KICK HIS ASSSSSS!!!" Father...
You even hear the low class girl chanting your name.
All the elites look extremely pissed that everyone is rooting for you but equally pleased that you don't seem like your getting up

"Everyone is counting on me. Parslee, Raditz, and Father. They all believe in me. No...i can't give up now. I need to get stronger. I know i can beat this guy.I know i can break my limits."
With that you slowly begin to pick yourself up to stand tall inside the crater. You feel like you can barely stand. But you catch a good look at the all too familiar face of rage pulsating on Spinochas face.
Cont post >>>>
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>>2520464
I suggest we use the fact we're still standing, and the shock that will come from that, to get the tail grab in. We need to win this now, tail grab is victory.
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>>2520469
"You should have stayed down worm." RAAAAAAAAAAAAA
He once again bull rushes you at full speed

You know that you can't do much in your current state. You think you have enough left in you for a dodge but you know you can't follow it up with an attack that'll affect him, unless...
HIS TAIL!!! THATS IT
You have done an excellent job not going for it prior to this moment. You know he wont be expecting it because of that. >It's your only shot but how are you going to do it?

>Try to tank the hit so you can get close enough to grab for his tail

>Try with all your might to dodge him and then grab for his tail

>Blast the ground for cover and grab for his tail in smoke

>Write in?? Alternate plans highly encouraged here

Choose wisely boys and good luck
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>>2520469
OP I thought it was a typo the first few times, but do you not know the difference between your and you're?
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>>2520492
>blast the ground, predict where he is using how fast he was going and sound, then go under his legs and grab his tail from below
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>>2520492
>>Try with all your might to dodge him and then grab for his tail
We be a speedster so maybe this will work best???
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>>2520492
>Write in?? Alternate plans highly encouraged here

Do the one thing that has yet to be actually done in this fight. Fly over him and grab his tail. I guess that'd count as dodging but we CAN fly, right?
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>>2520492
>Try with all your might to dodge him and then grab for his tail
We are a speedy boi.
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>>2520493
one shows possession and the other is you are.
ye im aware im just tired is all. I gatta practice i'm not used to writing this much :) forgive me
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>>2520492
>Blast the ground as quickly as you can for an immediate smokescreen
>Try with all your might to dodge him and then grab for his tail
No reason we can't make the smoke AS we dodge.
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>>2520494
supporting
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>>2520500
Allg, not a grammar nazi, was just wondering if english wasn't your native language
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>>2520494
>>2520502
>>2520495
>>2520498
>>2520501
He is only about 30 or so feet away at the top of the crater so if you can't really do both your either putting your last amount of stamina into a blast or a dodge so ill extend the vote for about 10 minutes for a tie breaker
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>>2520508
*So you cant really do both*
fuck that "if" i left in there
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>>2520508
oh, well then
full-dodge for me, boss
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>>2520492
>>2520508

I'll support blasting the ground for a smokescreen. He'll be expecting a dodge anyway, since he's seen our speed.
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>>2520492

...Actually, wait. How viable a plan is throwing dirt in his eyes. Or spitting spit at his eye to encourage him to dodge?

Normally, spitting wouldn't work well because of poor range, but we're a Saiyan, so maybe our range is good enough?
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>>2520526
Would have been a viable if you had votes earlier but ill just roll for the tie
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>>2520530
okie dokie Smokescreen wins.
Roll me a d100+5 for changing it up and surprising him at the last second DC 60 for tail grab
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>>2520536
Here's to hoping for a lucky roll.
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Rolled 67 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2520536
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Rolled 35 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2520537
hope I rolled correctly
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Rolled 59 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2520536
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Rolled 46 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2520536
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>>2520536
Oof
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>>2520539
Nice roll, you saved us!
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>>2520539
67+5/100 Wins.
Congrats boys ya did it
However I'm sorry to leave you all with blue balls but i gatta call it here for the night.
I'll try my best to come back in the morning to at the very least give the last update on the Spinocha fight and then from there we can talk about what you guys wanna do.
But holy shit you guys lucked the fuck out lmao. But you also made great decisions that made a HUGE difference in how this fight went down vs how it could've gone had you made other choices that were "more consequential" which there were a lot of i won't lie. What did you guys think of the fight? Liked it hated it? lemme know

Anyways ill see you tomorrow boys have a good night.
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>>2520553
Goodnight coop
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>>2520553
down to the wire.

i now want you and granddragon to do a crossover
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>>2520553
I really enjoyed the fight. While a part of me thinks it could be a little longer, this is the first fight in a tournament episode, so I wouldn't really say that the length was a bad thing. It was actually really good for what it was. Longer fights would probably be better for big opponents anyhow.

Other than that, everything was top notch, and I look forward to seeing what happens next. Will we be able to view Raditz in his match?
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>>2520553
Is it tomorrow yet
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>>2521189
it is in fact : ) I'm back
Writing.
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"I've got to create a distraction to get to that tail...Yeah.. a smokescreen should work. He won't see it coming" you think to yourself.
As Spinocha is rushing you from top of the crater you lean sluggishly and feint to the left while simultaneously sending a weak ki blast into the dirt below you to create a smokescreen.

"YOUR NOT GETTING AWAY AGAIN!!!" You hear him shout inches away from your face as you feel him viciously break to the left, falling for the sluggish feint.
You reach out to the left hoping to catch him despite not being able to see. And you do.

Grasping his tail with and iron grip you feel his entire body freeze as he collapeses on the ground in front of you.
"H-H-How did you-" He is cut off as you tighten your grip further on his tail
"N-N-No please you have to let me go before this smoke clears! I will be cast out and shamed below even the low class.. I'll be nothing!I give up! Please if you let me go before the smoke clears i will forfeit the match and hand you victory or pretend that you knocked me out!"
"I'll give you anything you want but please you have to let me go i'm begging you! Please!!!"

Could this be a trap? Would he really hand you victory like this? Do you even want a victory like this? His repuation and life is essentially on the line. What will everyone else think?
As all this is running through your mind you can see the smoke barely starting to clear.You need to decide now.

What are you going to do?

>Demand that he forfeits the tournament and let him go before the smoke clears, hoping he is true to his word

>Demand that he fakes being knocked out so he is elimated from the tournament and let him go before the smoke clears, hoping he is true to his word

>Knock him out with a chop to the neck so he is eliminated from the tournament and let him go before the smoke clears

>Knock him out with a chop to the neck so he is eliminated from the tournament but hold his tail

>Hold on to his tail and show everyone his weakness and humiliate him

>Rip his tail off

>Release him before the smoke and tell him you can't win like this

>Release him after the smoke and tell everyone he you can't win like this

>Write ins???


Choose wisely boys this is a very important character defining moment that will shape how the rest of the tournament plays out, as well as how people view you.
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>>2521223
>Rip his tail off
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>>2521223
>Knock him out with a chop to the neck so he is eliminated from the tournament and let him go before the smoke clears
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>>2521223
>Knock him out with a chop to the neck so he is eliminated from the tournament and let him go before the smoke clears.
Also tell him you want a rematch once he loses his weakness.
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>>2521223
>Knock him out with a chop to the neck so he is eliminated from the tournament and let him go before the smoke clears
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>>2521223
>Knock him out with a chop to the neck so he is eliminated from the tournament and let him go before the smoke clears
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>>2521223
>Knock him out with a chop to the neck so he is eliminated from the tournament and let him go before the smoke clears
Fucking tard never even trained his tail
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>>2521223
>Knock him out with a chop to the neck so he is eliminated from the tournament and let him go before the smoke clears
>>Rip his tail off
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>>2521229
>>2521230
>>2521231
>>2521232
>>2521238
Alright Knocking him out and letting him go Wins.

Writing.
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>>2521230
Anyone else want to say this or something like this?

This will be the end of Episode 0 so if guys want to further develop Mizuna's character i can include a one liner or speech that you guys want????
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>>2521247
>WHO IS THE ELITE NOW, IT IS I. MIZUNA!
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>>2521230
I'll support this.
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>>2521247
What I said earlier, plus "don't underestimate someone just because of their rank. Even someone weak can rise up with courage."

Also "I LOVE YOU PARSLEE, THIS WIN IS FOR YOU!" Or something along those lines.
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>>2521247
>Esto es el fin, Espinacas
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>>2521259
Eh I'll leave it open for like 3 hours when i come back since most of the usual anons aren't here and they are around that time to make it a bit more fair since i dont a set schedule

Anyways until then enjoy this possible pic of someone we know?
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>>2521223
>Knock him out with a chop to the neck so he is eliminated from the tournament but hold his tail
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>>2521247
Wink at that new chick thats in the elites, not the smart low strength one that radditz is probably going to like or the tease that was in the shit tier
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>>2521247
>>2521230
I'll support this.

>>2521254
I'll support the warning, but I'd rather not embarrass Parslee/put a target on her back.

We can see her after the tourney.
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Alright ask for a rematch and show Parslee some love comin right up

Writing.
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>>2521455
Got you too ma boi
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Oh man, a new dbz quest. And it's actually good so far. I never thought I'd see the day in a post-SOM world. I'm really liking this so far, Coopy.
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"When this is all over i want a rematch Spinocha... and train your tail because you pack one hell of a punch."you say weakly to the downed elite

"What are you talking abo-" You deliver a swift chop to the back of his neck, knocking him out.
You then release his tail before the smoke clears and use the rest of your strength to stand as tall and straight as you can.
When the smoke clears you hear a collective gasp come from the entire stadium and silence.

The Saiyan announcer comes from the sidelines to kneel and check Spinocha. He raises a thumbs up and says "HE"S KNOCKED OUT! THE WINNER IS MIZUUUUUUNA!

"HE DID IT!" You hear Raditz shout from the sidelines which triggers a massive roar of applause and cheering for you that shakes the entire stadium.
You did it. You actually did it.
You look up in the stands to see your father with the biggest smile you think you have ever seen. You can read his lips shouting at the other saiyans in the stands
"THATS MY BOY!!!"
You then look back to the sidelines to see Parslee looking at you, so you look back at her , and your eyes meet.
For a brief second your ears tune out the deafening applause and your eyes focus only on her.You can feel your heart pounding in you chest.
She looks to be just as entranced as you are and you somehow feel connected? Only one thought goes to your mind.
"I want you so bad" You read from her lips at the exact same time as the thought runs through your head
No space fucking way... DID SHE JUST SAY THAT?!?!?!?!? Your eyes unknowingly bug out as you think this
She quickly snaps out of her spaced out state and blushes furiously and running back into the low class chambers

If your stomach wasn't full of shattered ribs and a bruised internally you know it would be full of space butterflies.
Speaking of shattered ribs you feel your knees give out as you collapse onto the arena with a huge smile on your face.

"I'm ganna get so fucking strong from this" you think and weakly chuckle to yourself before slowly losing consciousness
However while fading out you catcha glimpse of Prince Vegetas face which is fixed squarley on yours with no emotion at all but a hint of curiousness.

End of Episode 0.
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>>2521492
Noice, now it’s “next time on Dragonball Z!”
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>>2521492
Good stuff, Coopy. This was a great first thread. I'll definitely be following this.
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>>2521492
When do you think next thread will be?
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Boys thank you so much for sticking with me in this first of hopefully many episodes.

I did not expect this to go on nearly this long or expect his path you guys have taken.It honestly blows my mind

I am going to spend the next couple of days setting up a schedule for next time as well as planning out ideas for the tournament and fixing my grammar and just general shit like that.
I also should probably make a pastebin and archive this thread but i have no clue about how do that stuff.
Expect an update on friday in this thread

But until friday if you have questions about peeps you have met or the tournament or ideas for the future please lemme know I'd love to hear from you guys.

Also very important! What does Mizuna look like?
Give me a description of how you guys think he should look with him being a complete CHAD but also a very efficient kind of quiet guy.
At least that's how i have envisioned him
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>>2521518
I'd like to know about Parslee and our father. What kind of backstories do they both have?

Also really great thread! This was great, and I really look forward to what you have planned for the future.

I always pictured Mizuna as being less of a Chad and more of an average (yet fit) guy. Nothing too remarkable about his appearance. It's mostly just his strength as a fighter and personality which draws others to him.
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>>2521518
Mizuna isn’t a Chad, he’s a TURBOCHAD! His abs have abs! All the girls want his dick, which is even longer than his tail! He can carry all the groceries in in a single trip...with only ONE hand!
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>>2521528
Your fathers back story was mentioned earlier but ill post it here.

You know the story of how your father placed dead last in his tournament and was the laughing stock of his class. But while everyone else was laughing there was one saiyan who didn't. Bardock.
Before they were on squads Bardock was the only one to actually gave a damn about him and tried to help him get stronger. Your Grandfather just abondoned your father becuase of how weak he was.With no one else in his life Bardock and your father became close friends and sparring partners.
Bardock helped your father find his true unwavering bravery and power raising him from a power level of 479 to his proud 2379. Because of bardock your father vowed never to treat you like his father did him and always stived to help his fellow saiyan no matter how weak.


As for Parslee

Parslee is very much a low class rebel. She despises the elites and thinks the classes are bullshit.
Her parents weren't around nearly as much as your father was for you, but thats most low class kids.
With her parents not being around much it actually pushed her to become stronger rather than let it hinder her.
She has always been very hardworking and is always training to become stronger. And Mizuna loves that about her
She doesn't mingle with other saiyans much if at all.
That's why until now she always saw you as a puffed up wannabe elite since the saiyan girls often followed you because
of you high power level
When you were summoned by Vegeta and accepted his "challenge" but said you didn't care about elite status but wanted to grow stronger
It definitely caught her attention. Actually winning against the strongest of them further intensified her feelings toward you.

Mizuna has always had strong feelings for her because of her dedication to getting stronger and the fact that she didn't chase him down like every other girl.
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>>2521518
>Give me a description of how you guys think he should look with him being a complete CHAD
Mizuna isn’t a Chad, he’s a TURBOCHAD! His abs have abs! All the girls want his dick, which is even longer than his tail! He can carry all the groceries in in a single trip...with only ONE hand!
I'm sorry, this is all that's coming to mind right now.
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>>2521633
aaaand I fucked up the greentext on the second quote
fuck me
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>>2521518
at the current age, maybe this
minus the clothes, of course. he'd be wearing more saiyan-y shit, obviously.
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>>2521678
But where's the tail?
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>>2521684
I don't care, pretend it's behind him or something
Tails are indistinct features anyways
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>>2521690
>Tails are indistinct features anyways
See that's the kind of attitude that got us Xenoverse's lack of Saiyan tails.
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>>2521698

this guy gets it
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>>2521578
Considering how tanky he's supposed to be, I see Mizuna as more of a big, maybe a bit lanky but definitely toned/muscular, boy. longer, thicker spiked saiyan hair. Not at the crazy level of hair Raditz has but mayve to the shoulders. Maybe a scar or two on his arm and/or legs from the intense training his dad put him through. I wanna say grey or black armor and shorts underneath rather than full pants? I guess a resting bitch face, makes him look intense evrn when he's just standing there.
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>>2521684
>>2521690
>>2521698
Initially an 10x power boost will help immensely
BUUUUUUUT! Would you guys be opposed to an alternate path from a tailless super saiyan form to a more bestial Oozaru/saiyan hybrid that peaks at ssj4?
obviously might not look like Pic but something along those lines?
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>>2522217
>peaks
WE MUST GO FARTHER.
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>>2522217
i dunno, i'd stick to the canon paths personally
but that's just me
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>>2522217
I'd be cool with a more bestial/tailed variant of the super saiyan path depending on how well done it is.
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>>2522217

interesting concept
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>>2522217
That'd be fine honestly.
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>>2522232
This
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>>2521518
Here’s the suptg archive tool:
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/requestqstinterface.html
Just copy/paste the OP post number, then the rest is self-explanatory.
As for pastebin, just make an acct. Its free.
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>>2522507
Are there recommended tags to use?
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>>2522514
Should specify I'm not OP or archiving this thread, just curious about this myself.
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>>2522515
>>2522514
Not really? I just add tags I think players wouls search for, like the quest’s name, protag’s name, the source material’s name if fanfic, stuff like that.
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>>2522528
makes sense
thanks
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>>2522507
Thank you, i appreciate it :)
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>>2517936
It made him to powerful
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>>2522217
I'd prefer canon super saiyan.
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Okay boys, so i'm doing research and working on ideas for the next episode and there are a couple things floating in my noggin that i want to put to a vote.

1). Because Spinocha wrecked Mizuna pretty bad with his Crater Crush, Mizuna is going to have to be put in the healing chamber.
That means Mizuna is going to miss Raditz's fight with lottus.
So the first vote is do you even want to see Raditz vs Lottus? If yes, would you be okay with playing as Raditz during his fight for the beginning of the next episode?
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>>2522217
Fuck yeah, monkey hybrid would be cool.
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>>2524070
Nah, main character only or bust

Time skip that shit, the closer we get to bardock and friezas confrontation, the better.
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>>2524070
skip it
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>>2524070
Let's just assume Raditz did better than he thought he would and skip to the good shit.
I WANNA WRECK KAKKAROT FOR BEING A SHIT SAIYAN!
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>>2524070
Maybe give a small recap of the fight given to us by either Raditz himself or our father.

Also off topic, but is Mizuna's mother alive?
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>>2524070
I'd be down with it.
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>>2524070
Do it. New Raditz!
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>>2524070
>>2524120
Small objective narrator recap along with the recap from a secondary character or a random NPC (let's say the doctors or engineers tending to the healing chambers, they don't have to be saiyan if the planet is already part of Freeza's army)
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I hear ya boys loud and clear :)
Raditz fight will just be recapped

2.) Before the timeskip/during leading to the beginning of Z do you want a couple mini encounters which will consist mainly of just choosing a answer and rolling for a couple small rewards or a actual mission side mission for a big reward or none of that at all and just roll for a flat out power level boost and skip the narrative of how you got it

Also there might be enough of you guys here now to roll for Mizuna's Zenkai so roll me a d1500+500
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Rolled 808 + 500 (1d1500 + 500)

>>2524245
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Rolled 557 + 500 (1d1500 + 500)

>>2524245
Is like to see a few missions and rolls
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>>2524245
I would like a couple of post by post decisions chronicling our exploits over the next couple decades.
Fleshes us out a lot and our choices will still have a good amount of impact, and it expedites things a good amount.
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Rolled 1055 + 500 (1d1500 + 500)

>>2524245
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>>2524274
>1555
Check'em
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>>2524274
1055+500
Mizuna's new power level is 4,967
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Rolled 1191 + 500 (1d1500 + 500)

>>2524245
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Mini encounters it is

3.) For combat are you guys cool with just narrative explanations or do you want a visible like numerical value added like after the description of a hit taken you get a -25 Hp loss or when you use a ki-blast or Melee Combo -2PP?
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>>2524364
just narrative please
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>>2524364
I'd prefer narrative explanations, but I also wouldn't mind something like a description based status screen. Narrative explanations are probably the best though.
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>>2524364
Narrative
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Ok keep it narrative gatcha

Thanks for your votes boys it helped a lot
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Alright Boys i have some spare time off tonight sooooo, we'll be continuing Mizuna's origin episode and doing the 24 year time skip encounter rolling adventure.

I will be starting in about 3 hours

Also you guys dig this as Mizuna?
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>>2525558
nice
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>>2525558
Ya, that's good
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>>2525558
I can dig it, Cyrus.
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>>2525558
Huh, that fits pretty well from how I thought he looked. Cool
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Alright boys i'm back and here all night

Writing
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>>2525956
Fuck yeah coopy!
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>>2525956
Jeez, I’m not used to being part of an actually running quest. This is like the fourth time I’ve closed this tab and opened it back up to see more stuff. I’m just gonna leave it open until the thread archives.
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>>2525956
After your fight with Spinocha you collapsed to the floor and were in and out of consciousness as your father brought you to a rejuvenation chamber to heal your wounds.
While you were in the rejuvenation chamber you slept soundly for an unknown period of time until you heard someone speaking outside the chamber.
Before you could tell who it was you hear the chamber begin to drain the fluids around you and the door begin to hiss open.

Your eyes flutter open and you find yourself nude standing inside the chamber within a high tech room with 5 other rejuvenation chambers as well as a bunch of other moniters and workstations with alien PTO scientists and doctors all around.

One of the Bird looking alien doctors with a cyber tablet steps forward towards you and speaks to you "Your name is Mizuna correct?" you nod.
"Well Mizuna you took quite the beating coming in here" He quickly scrolls on his tablet"Yes, shattered ribs, a pierced lung, torn stomach lining, internal bleeding, and the list goes on"
"You saiyans really push yourselves too hard in my opinion"He grumbles."But regardless i have been ordered to give you this token, You are to take it to the quarter master for your official PTO armor set"
You happily take the token from the doctors claws.
"Also the prince personally ordered you to report to his chambers in the royal palace immediately after you acquire your armor."
"Prince Vegeta wants me to go to his chambers?"you wonder silently. "Maybe i made an impression after all"

"Ahem!!" The bird doctor notices you spacing out a bit " you should also know your power level increase from 3412 to 4967
"Holy shit" you think to yourself "I've never gotten a zenkai boost that massive before"

"Now do you have any questions before i send you on your way saiyan boy?"

Do you?

>How long was i out?

>Did Raditz have to come in here?

>Hey.. listen... anyway you can get me a silver or gold token? (Roll)

>Did anyone come check on me?

>Ask about the rejuvenation chamber or show an interest for the tech?

>Write in??
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>>2526008
>How long was i out?
>Did Raditz have to come in here?
>Ask about the rejuvenation chamber or show an interest for the tech?
these three then moving on for me
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Rolled 93 (1d100)

>>2526008
>Hey.. listen... anyway you can get me a silver or gold token? (Roll)
May as well try for better stuff.
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>>2526008
>How long was i out?
>Ask about the rejuvenation chamber or show an interest for the tech?
>Hey.. listen... anyway you can get me a silver or gold token? (Roll)
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>>2526020
Apparently the dice gods love Mizuna.
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Rolled 59 (1d100)

>>2526008
>Hey.. listen... anyway you can get me a silver or gold token? (Roll)
Let’s a go!
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Rolled 30 (1d100)

>>2526008
>Hey.. listen... anyway you can get me a silver or gold token? (Roll)

>2526020
what a legend
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>>2526020
>>2526016
>>2526023
>>2526024
The dice gods do in fact love mizuna and as a side note if i ever put roll like that on a answer i will only take the first roll so nice luck here boys but be careful ;)

Also for flavor of text you guys wanna sweet talk it or intimidate?
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>>2526043
sweet talk, he did heal us after all, no reason to be a dick like some elitist prick....that wasn't intentional.
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>>2526043
“You SAW me out there! Do I look like someone worthy of such weak armor? It’ll give out before I do!”
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>>2526043
Maybe ask for a roll after a choice has been made?
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>>2526063
Eh, this way is quicker and less replys.
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>>2526065
And it can make us do meta choices based on people's rolls rather than stick with failures.

For every common mechanic there is a reason.
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>>2526043
sweet talk him, we arent a douche bag
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>>2526043
Sweet talk. I like the idea of Mizuna being the charming bastard type.
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>>2526071
this is just for quick dialogue that can fuck up or go good but it's nothing major >>2526065
what this guy said
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>>2526071
You can still pick a different option even if there is a good roll.
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>>2526090
>>2526082

I was mostly worried about people avoiding an option because of a preemptive bad roll (meaning we'd never fail) but fair enough.
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"How long was i out for?" you ask
"Hmmmmm. 52 Hours."
"WHAT?!?! Is the tournament over? Did Raditz come in here?"
"Yes the saiyan tournament is over and i;m not sure which patient you are refering to but we only had one other saiyan child that needed serious medical attention.""He is in the pod a couple rooms over. but he won't be waking anytime soon i'm afraid."
"Huh? If that's Raditz then his match did'nt go very well.... I'll have to check on him later."

Looking around the room you actually become a bit curious about the tech in the room and the rejuvenation chamber itself so you ask the bird doctor.

"Wha-? A saiyan asking actually interested in tech? I thought i'd never see the day.Well i suppose i can show you somethings." The doctor begins explaining some communications tech and medical examining tools. You actually ask questions and engage the doctor which cause you both to get lost in conversation for a bit until you realize its been about 45 minutes and you tell the doctor you need to get going

"Well please stop by anytime you like! Your always welcome in my lab, Your a very smart boy Mizuna." He beams a wide smile and waves you good bye. "He must not get to talk to alot of people." you think to yourself "I wonder...."
"Hey doc." You shout back returning to the lab "Listen do you think you could trade me this bronze token for maybe a.... silver or gold one?"

The doctor looks side to side as if checking if anyone is watching before he turns to a drawer at his desk and pulls out a shiny gold PTO token. "Here don't tell anyone i gave this to you okay? Your not the stoic or loud brutes like other Saiyans... I'd hate to see you go out because of shit armor" He smiles again and waves you off as you leave.

Did you mean all that about being interested in science and medicine?

>Yeah i actually wouldn't mind learning more

>Kinda i mostly did it for the coin

>No way it was all an act. The fool was dumb enought o fall for the ploy
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>>2526113
>>Yeah i actually wouldn't mind learning more
Having some mechanical skills on the side would actually be pretty cool. Fixing up pods and scouters on the spot, messing with tech on conquered planets, I'd be down for that.
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>>2526113
>>Yeah i actually wouldn't mind learning more
Tech is cool shit. It can take you from near death to pristine condition - how could that NOT be cool?
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>>2526113
>Yeah i actually wouldn't mind learning more
A saiyan interested in more than just fighting? Wow, i think this would be an interesting character development.
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Yeah i actually wouldn't mind learning more
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>>2526113
>Yeah i actually wouldn't mind learning more
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>>2526128
>>2526141
>>2526144
Alright boys in the time skip you will have the option to learn about PTO tech might come in handy :)

Writing.
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>>2526150
>we can bond with Bulma over tech
Oh boy, here we go!
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>>2526222
>Earth surviving the first episode
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>Bulma
Terrible taste, desu
We've got Parslee, and if she doesn't survive there's a FAR better human female available.
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>>2526249
>>2526235
Implying we won't just blow them up before we ever even meet. Let's be honest, the only way either of your waifus will happen is if we end up losing to Goku or get tricked by Piccolo/Krillin/Tien and get hit by their signiture big hitters, and team up on Namek. We'd have no in character reason to meet them and get flirty on a mission where we're supposed to genocide the human race. And all of that is under the assumption we don't go with raditz on the first trip to Earth. If we did then there's just no way we'd lose to Goku and Piccolo when at that point Mizuna would be at least 5 to 6k, if not more from decades of missions.
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You make your way to the Quartermaster which is in a Giant room fully stocked with PTO Armor, weapons, vehicles, scouters. The room is guarded by two faceless soldiers equppied with laser cannons and Ki-Whips.
"Hey Kid you here for something or did you lose your mommy?Hehehe" a voice comes the back of the shop. Behind a counter stands what you assume to be the quartermaster, A tall green fish like alien.
"Hey do they always let saiyans walk around naked? Why are you guys special? Why do i get charged with public nudity?!?!" You just pretend not to hear him "Actually I'm here to pick up my armor" You remark back and show him the gold token.
He studies the coin intensly "Yep....It's real alright you must be that saiyan kid that won the tournament." you just nod as he takes it from you "Alright kid lemme head to the back for this." He walks to a room in the back and begins shout speaking to you as he searches "I thought they already gave you elite armor. But i guess your some big deal to the saiyans." He says as he returns with Super elite armor and a red scouter

"Here ya go kid." You quickly take the armor and scouter and hurry out the door and change in an empty room and equip the scouter
'WOW! This is so light and looks so coooooool" You think to yourself as you check out your new armor "I wonder if...." You give yourself a quick punch " Yeah durable too!" You click your scouter and read the time to test it out "Well i better make my way towards the royal castle." you say as you quickly make your way there.

Upon arriving at the Prince's chamber you find no one there. Curious you wonder a bit around the castle and find yourself at the training chamber where you see the Prince surrounded by saibamen.

You then click your new scouter to check their power levels "Whoa each of those guys has a power level of 1,200 and theres like 8 of them, But HOLY SHIT PRINCE VEGETA IS AT 12,000"
as you think this all the saibamen rush the Prince and with a powerful yell he blows them all away with an explosive wave. The Prince looks thouroughly bored. Until he see you looking through the window and makes his way to the door.

You quickly adjust and compose yourself as he steps out and looks less than pleased. The commander in chief of the saiyan army, Nappa, also comes from around the corner to accompany the Prince and looks at you with surprise
"What the? Who the hell gave you that Armor?" he angrily asks

Well?

> Complete write in for this boys
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>>2526282
>It's what they gave me, but I was told you wanted to see me my prince?
Deflect it, deflect I say!
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>>2526282
The quartermaster did.
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>>2526282
Your daddy...?
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>>2526270
Ohhhhhhh idk if the threat seems greater than just raditz thennn roshi and krillin might join and they have some pretty hacky moves

Just saiyan ;)
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>>2526282
"The Quartermaster, my Prince. Is something the matter?"
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>>2526282
The quartermaster.

Just look like a dumb fuck, that helps.
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>>2526290
>>2526301
You guys wanna blame the quarter master? okie dokie

Writing.
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>>2526309
It's not wrong, is the thing.
He DID ask who gave it to us.
And the quartermaster was the one to physically give it to us.
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>>2526295
>implying the Kienzan ever hits anything
>ever
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>>2526312
>we just sentenced an innocent fish-man to death
Welp, villain run it is.
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>>2526321
Hit Frieza's tail tho, and the only reason Nappa didn't get hit was because Vegeta was there to keep him from being a retard and letting himself get hit.
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>>2526329
Anon we're going to slaughter entire planets full of people as part of an army under the evil emperor of the universe during the time skip, we're already a bad guy
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>>2526329
Vegeta murdered a shitload of planets, and he woud up one of the good guys (and also totally whipped).
Y'know I guess we could hook up with that one space pirate chick from the Bojack movie if Parslee gets offed and we stick with villainy.
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"The Quartermaster, my Prince. But i was told you wanted to see me?" you say bowing before him
"Tch whatever, where i'm sending you your going to need it." The prince grins sinisterly
"But yes we have a few things to discuss in my chamber. Let's go Nappa!" Prince Vegeta snaps at him "Yes my Prince!" Nappa quickly replies.

The three of you make your way to the Prince's royal chamber. The prince sits at a table and motions you towards the chair across from him. "Nappa wait outside. I wish to speak with him alone."
"But my Prince i'm not supposed to leave yo-" Nappa begins but is cut off by Vegeta "Do you really want to anger your prince? I gave you an order! Now beat it!"
Nappa quickly exits the chambers leaving only you and the Prince.
"I'm going to get right to the point. You work for me now and will do any and every assignment i put you on without question.You proved that you are not afraid to take on challenges i give you even if the threat is of greater power than you and risks making you look like a fool. I can feel your thirst for battle and your lust to become stronger by any means.You even somehow swindled your way into Super elite armor"
"That's why i'm ganna use you to get even stronger. Everyone else is too much of a coward to train with me especially the weakling Nappa out there."
"But don't get the wrong idea. We are not friends or allies you are my servant. And if you think this is going to be easy..."He chuckles darkly
"Which brings me to your first assignment. You are to conquer planet Stovasa within three days alone. If you don't complete your mission in that time don't come back."
"Now if you feel the need to ask me something now is the time."

Questions?

>Has my father been sent on another mission?

>Do you know what happened to Raditz?

>Write In?

>Choose only one
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>>2526442
>>Write In?
Do I get some time to train beforehand?
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>>2526451
nah this will be the semi-last update before the roll adventure

I'll say this though if you guys don't care about either we can just say nothing. I have no probs saving 30 mins
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>>2526442
>Write In?
“Wanna train first?”
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>>2526463
>>2526467
Skipping sounds good, if we aren’t going to do anything super important, let’s do that.
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>>2526451
>>2526467
Roll me a d100
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>>2526442
>What should I expect from Stovasa?
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Rolled 53 (1d100)

>>2526493
If there was ever a time for me to roll not shit!
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Rolled 69 (1d100)

>>2526493
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Rolled 19 (1d100)

>>2526493
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>>2526529
No training boys Dc was 70 close but not enough

In order to speed up a bit and save an update roll me another d100 for how successful your first mission goes
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Rolled 16 (1d100)

>>2526553
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Rolled 35 (1d100)

>>2526553
Let’s concor the UNIBERSE!
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Rolled 45 (1d100)

>>2526553
YAH
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>>2526555
Well ok then, fuck me I guess
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Rolled 15 (1d100)

>>2526553
What, no play-by-play for first mission?
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>>2526555
>>2526556
>>2526558
yikes
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>>2526563
Time to choke and fail!
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>>2526558
Eh not the worst

Writing
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>>2526561
You guys want a play-by-play of your first mission?

5 minutes extra vote time if ya wanna roll for your success or a play-by-play of the first one cause thats how the time skill roll thing is ganna go
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>>2526571
my vote's gonna be yes on play-by-play obviously
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>>2526571
Play by play, yes.
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>>2526592
kk boys i'll be a just biiiit longer then
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"No questions my Prince, I am eager to get started."You say confidently
"I'm sure you are."He chuckles "Now go, your dismissed. Head down to the docking bay and get a pod set for Stovasa."
You bow before your Prince and head out for the docking bay.

When you arrive at the docking bay you see hundreds of saiyan pods all lined along the walls with saiyans coming in and out.
You feel your shoulder tapped, so you turn around to find an orange skinned alien with stubby horns and red eyes.
"What mission have you been assigned saiyan boy."He asks
"I have been assigned to conquer a planet called Stovasa, i need a pod headed for there quickly it is a timed assignment." you explain.
"Stovasa? The jungle planet with the snake people on it? Damn... i see your a super elite but good luck out there kid."He says as he walks you to a pod. "Get in there and i'll launch you in a minute."
You hop in the pod and await launch.

While waiting you see your Fathers squad leader, Bardock, in a hurry speaking to the dock bay manager. You quickly open your pod and see what's going on.
"Yeah Planet Meat, i need to get there fast my crew left without me." he says
"Yes.. okay i'll get a pod ready. Sit tight." the docking bay manager sees you approaching. "You got 5 minutes kid" before walking over to another pod and punching in numbers on its menu

"Mizuna? Hey. I just got out of the rejuvenation chamber and found out your old man and my crew left on a big assignment from lord frieza himself.Heh. Old dogs never are patient."he chuckles.
"Anyways congragulations on your fight i heard you took down an eite twice you power level and met with the Prince."He ruffles your hair" Your dad would be proud i know that... Unfortunately i heard my son also fought an elite but lost easily as usual... Raditz..." He spaces out for a second

"Hey both of you on your pods now your out of time!" the docking bay manager yells out

"Well Mizuna it was nice seeing you." You both clasp arms " and thank you for looking out for Raditz.I haven't been there for him and he needed someone. I'm glad its you."he says with a serious face.

"No problem Bardock." You give a small grin. With that you both get inside your saiyan pods and launch into space. "Now I will face my first personal assignment from Prince Vegeta and conquer The Jungle Planet Stovasa. What sort of trouble will you these snake people give me?"you wonder as you slowly drift to sleep.

"BEEP BEEP approaching PLANET STOVASA. Atmosphere breach in 25 minutes"
Your saiyan pod explains to you as you look out to see the lush huge green planet from space.

>Roll me a d100 for landing and a d20 for a secret
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Rolled 15 (1d100)

>>2526695
ooger
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Rolled 87 (1d100)

>>2526695
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Rolled 20 (1d20)

>>2526695
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Rolled 6 + 1 (1d100 + 1)

>>2526695
>Mizuna found dead in Miami
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>>2526695
Wait a sec is this best of 3 or regular?
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Rolled 15 (1d100)

>>2526695
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Rolled 18 (1d20)

>>2526695

>>2526699
Yessssss
>>2526702
YESSSSs.
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Rolled 2 (1d100)

>>2526695
And the other roll
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>>2526702
Hohoho
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>>2526704
im taking the best of three on the d100 and the first d20
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>>2526703
I thought I did that right. Wouldn’t it be “dice+1d100+1d20”? Either way, you can not count that.
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>>2526699
>>2526702
The dice gods smile upon you today boys
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>>2526722
If memory serves, you can't roll multiple dice sizes in a single post.
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>>2526731
Thanks! I thought Coopy did, but that was a 8d4000, not multiple seperate dice.
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You look around the planet to find 5 moons orbiting it.
You give a small grin as you approach the soon to be doomed planet.
As you break through the atmosphere, you land on a rock plateau high above the jungles.
Stepping out of your pod you look out onto the vast green jungle/swamp and hear all sorts of alien screeches, calls, and croaking.
The smell in the air is pungent and foul, it appears to be daytime but the sky is covered by sickly green clouds.
You walk to the edge or the plateau to find the swampy marsh waters full of giant bizzare looking monsters with many eyes and teeth with legs and flippers and of all different colors that look right back up at you. The vegetation has yellow spores and thick vines everywhere. there is even a light haze setteling on the water "Good thing i didn't land in there" you say to yourself
"Well let's see the average power level on this planet....... 1,000 - 1,500.But damn is there a lot of them all over the planet. Huh? Theres a couple more...3,000 among different directions and one power level higher than the rest.... 5000!"
"I've got three days to do this so i should start by...."

What do?

>Establishi a camp

>scout the planet further than this swampy biome

>Immediately head for a large group of power levels

>Write In??

This mission will be updated a bit quicker and will have more rolls than usual. All rolls will be best of 3 in the first 10 minutes unless i say otherwise
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>>2526781
>Head to the greatest powerlevel. Try to be subtle and stealthy - if you can pull of assassinating this planet's strongest individual before anyone notices you're here, everything else should be a lot easier.
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>>2526784
pull off* i meant to say in my vote.
Ree....
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>>2526784
I will back this. If they can't sense power levels (hopefully) we can easily sneak up on them and use a Ki beam through the heart to kill that high power level while they're unaware.
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>>2526781
>>scout the planet further than this swampy biome
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>>2526784
Supporting, we take out the strongest first and the rest shouldn't be as difficult. Though we'll have to be careful not to get to hurt, and maybe rely on ozaru form if needed.
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>>2526791
>>2526788
>>2526784
Mizuna is ganna try to be a sneaky boy
Roll me a d100 for stealth
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Rolled 25 (1d100)

>>2526808
sneeki breeki
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Rolled 26 (1d100)

>>2526808
Stealth Mode!
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Rolled 15 (1d100)

>>2526808
CAN I CLUTCH?!
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>>2526811
>>2526815
need one more roll and may the dice god bless you boys DC 50
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>>2526817
Nope.
>>2526818
The dice gods are telling us off for flying too close to the sun.
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>>2526818
Well...
That was just the stealth portion, at least
Looks like it's a fight now

Unless we can talk his guard down and gank him when he's not expecting it, I suppose. But it's hard to tell with potentially murderous lizardmen.
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>>2526820
It's ok anon, we'll just go with plan B.
>Giant monkey shenanigans
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>>2526817
26/100 Dc 50 Failed

Writing....
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Rolled 6 (1d100)

>>2526827
fucking hell.
im gonna roll for fun
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>>2526852
You find that you cannot have fun at all. In fact, quite the opposite. You're having un-fun. How frustrating.
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Rolled 89 (1d100)

>>2526852
me too
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Rolled 87 (1d100)

>>2526860
you think this is a game, boy?
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"Taking out the most powerful power level now, will make the rest of the planet easier.But if i can sneak there and get the jump on it that'll make it even easier." you tell yourself as you kick off to fly the north most part of the planet
You fly along the jungle for about an hour before it abruptly end and a frozen wasteland begins.Flying into the freezing weather makes you very uncomfortable and wears you down a bit you feel slightly tired. Clicking your scouter again you track down the level 5000 power level to a giant ice cavern.and its accompanied by two others with power levels of 2,000
Landing at the mouth of the cavern you crouch down and sneak your way in. Its very dark in the ice cave, It's barely illuminated by these glowing mushrooms everywhere. Travesing the cavern you notice the glowing is getting brighter and you begin to hear a sort of chanting.
You come to the edge of a cliff that leads to a HUGE ice temple like room. At the top of the Alter stands a 8 foot tall giant white and blue viper with horns, arms and glowing blue armor.It has to be at least sixteen feet long. Below it praising it are two solid blue vipers. But what most concerns you is the wall to wall coverage of eggs.
"Holy Shit" you unknowingly say out loud before quickly biting your toungue.

All three vipers vision snap toawrds you and give you a deafening Hiss. Well... so much for stealth

What do?

>Fire off an energy wave at the leader

>Fire off an energy wave at the two blue vipers

>Fire off an energy wave at the eggs

>Rush the Viper (Specify which one)

>Let out a volley of ki- blasts

>Charge up a full power energy blast?

>Write in???????????

If you guys wanna come up with a strategy or something i haven't listed go for it
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>>2526868
>Write in???????????
“Nobody move, or I’ll
>Fire off an energy wave at the eggs
Just threaten them for now.
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>>2526868
>>Let out a volley of ki- blasts at the cave roofs, bury them all and run
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>>2526868
>Fire off at the ground to create a smokescreen. Fly back out of the cave, and do a full-power energy blast to try to collapse it on them and the eggs.
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>>2526868
>Fire off an energy wave at the two blue vipers.
Follow it up with backing off a little.
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>>2526882
>>2526884
>>2526885
I'll extend the vote time for another 10 minutes get one to 3 votes or i'll roll out of these >>2526895
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>>2526903
I'm good for pretty much any cave collapsing plan, personally.
So you can safely assume i'll vote with
>>2526884
if need be.
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>>2526884
Supporting
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Rolled 19 (1d100)

>>2526884
Volley of ki-blasts at the roof and run gatcha
roll me 2d100
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Rolled 72, 67 = 139 (2d100)

>>2526929
High-roller!
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Rolled 98, 37 = 135 (2d100)

>>2526929
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Rolled 27, 74 = 101 (2d100)

>>2526929
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Rolled 97, 59 = 156 (2d100)

>>2526929
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>>2526932
>>2526934
>>2526943
>>2526945
98 and 74 both pass :)

Writing.
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Rolled 88, 70 = 158 (2d100)

>>2526929
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Thinking quickly you flare your bright pink aura and gather a large amount of Ki in your hands.
The King Viper also seems to gathering Ki as you see the icy bright blue ki blast in each of its hands
The two blue vipers however Hiss and quickly shoot out their tremendously long tongues at you.

You swiftly spin out of the way of their tongues and then launch a unrelenting barrage of bright pink ki blasts at the roof hoping to collapse the cave on the eggs and the vipers. "HAAAAAAAAAA"
You are met with great success as the roof of the cave quickly crumbles down ontop of top all the eggs and vipers. Your witness first hand the eggs being crushed hundreds at a time filling the cave with green ooze from the pre fertilzed eggs.
The two blue vipers look around in horror and claw at the demolished eggs hopelessly before they are both completely crushed by ice boulders. The sicken crunches of their bones squishing send a rather pleasant chill up your spine and you chuckle for a second.
The Viper King however looks absolutely furious as it combines the two Ice blue ki balls together and launchesit at you in a beam, hissing violently.
You barely dodge the attack as it goes by inches from your face. Being that close you can feel the absolute zero temperature coming from it. Had that hit you.... you don't even want to think about it as you turn back towards the entrance and quickly blast off towards the entrance firing off ki-blasts on your way to further collapse the tunnel

You rocket out of the tunnel and back out to the cold weather and look back at the collapsed tunnel. Clicking your scouter you can't see any more power levels.
"Well i guess that takes care of that." You think to yourself. "I need to get out of this cold before i freeze to death."You say as you notice the sun on this planet going down.

>Establish a camp

>Hunt the other higher power levels on this planet at night (No Oozaru)

>Transform and rampage across the planet

>Explore a biome

>Write in???
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>>2526996
>Hunt the other higher power levels on this planet at night (No Oozaru)
Oozaru is a larger target for the freezing techniques...
We should eliminate all the serious threats before scouring the planet clean of the natives.
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>>2526996
>Establish a camp by taking over one of the snakeman's campsites.
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>>2526996
>>Establish a camp
AFTER MAKING SURE THEY ALL DIED
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>>2526996
>>Hunt the other higher power levels on this planet at night (No Oozaru)

So do saiyans genocide planets completely or leave some to be slaves?
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>>2527017
Genocide for this mission. You will need to transform to do this but the more you fight and kill in your base form the better chances you have at raising your power level buuuuut you also have a better chance of dying so its up to you
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Rolled 21 (1d100)

>>2527002
>>2527005
>>2527009
>>2527017
Boys roll me a d100-10 ;) Dc 60
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Rolled 39 - 10 (1d100 - 10)

>>2527028
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Rolled 1 + 10 (1d100 + 10)

>>2527028
Here we go. Come on lucky die, don't fail me now.
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Rolled 10 + 10 (1d100 + 10)

>>2527028
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Rolled 15 - 10 (1d100 - 10)

>>2527028
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>>2527033
That's some kind of luck.
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>>2527033
I'm so sorry...
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Rolled 21 - 10 (1d100 - 10)

>>2527028
fuck i forgot that to do - you gotta do some stupid shit
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Rolled 5 - 10 (1d100 - 10)

>>2527028
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Kinda impressive how shit these rolls are...
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>>2527033
This guy knew>>2527009
This will hurt though.
Writing
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Just as you are about to take off you hear a soft hiss.... But its too late.
Before you even turn around the Viper King shoots out of the ice and coils its body aound you in a deathly tight grip.
It positions its face in front of yours and opens its mouth to reveal rows of dagger like teeth and giant fangs with a whip-like tongue as it lets out a immensly loud hiss and squeezes you even tighter.

You can feel every single bone in your bone crunching and shattering as the Viper King continuously tightens its grip forcing you to call out in a horrified scream to world.

"NO NOT LIKE THIS!GRRRR I-I-I WILL NOT DIE HERE! I AM A SAIYAN!I WILL DESTROY YOU! RAAAAAAAAAAA"
You feel an immense surge of energy coming from your gut it feels like your going to EXPLODE

Roll me a d100+10
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Rolled 79 + 10 (1d100 + 10)

>>2527063
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Rolled 4 + 10 (1d100 + 10)

>>2527063
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Rolled 56 + 10 (1d100 + 10)

>>2527063
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Rolled 81 + 10 (1d100 + 10)

>>2527063
Here's a better roll (hopefully)
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>>2527064
YOU PASSED now vote for you new attack
>Mouth-Break cannon
>Body-Super explosive wave
>Eyes- Eye cannon

you can change the name if ya want
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>>2527082
>Body-Super explosive wave
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>>2527082
>Body - Hyper Desolation
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>>2527082
>>Body-Super explosive wave
I mean the mouth canon is tempting as no one would really expect it.
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>>2527082
>Eyes- Eye cannon
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>>2527086
>>2527087
Hyper desolation sounds cool i like it

Writing.
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>>2527095
You violently flare your bright pink aura "HYPER DESOLATION!!!" you shout as you compact all the energy as tight as you can in your gut and then when you cant hold it anymore you just let it explode out of your body causing your massive wave of bright pink energy to consume the viper king entirely and cause a blinding flash of light.

You feel yourself fall and hit the ground with a loud thud against the ice. You can't move at all. Every single bone in your body is broken. The weather is freezing. "No... Not like this..." is all you can mutter as you slowly fall out of consciousness.

You lay there in the frozen wasteland broken, freezing, dying. Your body is durable and holds out for a very long time however. But you don't know how long. It feels like hours maybe days.

That's when you it "MIZUNA!!!!!!" What?

To be cont.....
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>>2527119
>That's when you it "MIZUNA!!!!!!" What?
What?
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>>2527119
I hope it's not days
I actually want to finish this mission in the timeframe
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>>2527119
Well boys what did ya think? enjoy it? Hate it?
And yes i purposefully left out the option to check if you killed them all just too see if that was going through your noggins

>>2527126
I meant
"That's when you hear it.... "MIZUNA!!!!!!!" ....What?"
im just a wee bit tired so imma fuck up
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>>2527134
Great so far! I got no complaints, other than the grammer, but you already know that. I’m really looking forward to more of this quest. You’re a really good QM!
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>>2527138
Thank you i'm glad your enjoying it so far :)
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Alright boys, so I thought I would have a set schedule for days by today but life sucks and i can't guarantee anything yet. However, for the current weekend i will be available most evenings starting at 5:00 Pm CDT until however long i can go.

Tonight is a night i have free so, In about 5 hours i'll start posting and we will HOPEFULLY finish the origin episode and move onto the time skip adventure. I have a bunch of tables for rolling that with you guy so i am very excited to try them out.

Any questions let me know and i will answer as best i can throughout the day.
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>>2527846
You should get a twitter.
A ton of us use twitter to follow quests so we know when they're running (because qst is so slow that keeping an eye on the catalog is shit)
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>>2528145
Thanks you can now follow me @CoopyQm on twitter for notifications :)
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>>2528255
I'm not finding results for that
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>>2528300
Worked for me.
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>>2528300
taking the @ out works for some reason
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>>2527846
Woke up at 7 on a saturday for you op
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>>2528826
I'll try to make it worth your while :)
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"MIZUNA!!" it echoes.. it rings in your mind and in your ears... rattling you awake as you try to open your eyes.
"Wha...Who could?" you weakly stammer.Your eyelids have frozen shut and you struggle to get them to open.
You manage to break your eyelids free of their frozen bondage and your eyes see none other than Raditz.

"Raditz?.... How did you find me here?..Ho-How long have i been here?"

"Mizuna your the biggest fool on Planet Vegeta you know that?!" Raditz says sternly as he kneels down to examine you

"Hehe... Nice to see you too.." You chuckle weakly

"When i got out of the rejuvenation chamber Lord Frieza had sent out a planetary order that all saiyans were to immediately cancel all assignments and remain on Planet Vegeta."
"I asked around and found out you had already been sent on a mission and hadn't returned yet. I later found out you went to CONQUER PLANET STOVAVSA ALONE!!!!"
"WHAT KIND OF FOOL ARE YOU?" Raditz yells in your ear.

"That kind that...works for the prince directly haha..."

"What? Prince Vegeta sent you on this mission? But? Lord Frieza must not know your out here. Or me... I snuck out and stole a pod to come find you before anyone noticed."He says as he spaces out for a second.

That's when you notice your scouter in gone. You must have accidently destroyed it when you used that new attack.
You also noticed raditz doesn't have a scouter.
"Raditz what happened to your scouter?"

"HUh? They stopped giving us armor or at the very least me. They said that all saiyans were supposed to wait for an update from Lord Frieza. So i stole a set of armor but couldn't grab a scouter."

"Do you know.. How long i've been out here?"

"No idea. but we need to get out of here Parslee is waiting back at the pods."

"Parslee?"

"Oh yeah, I met her while i was asking around about you. She wanted to come with me to find you."

Parslee....

"Anyways we need to get moving can you walk or fly" He asks as he tries to help you up but it just causes you to yell out in pain.

"Guess not. Well i'll have to carry you then."

would you like to ask anything or tell him something before you take off?

>We need to conquer this planet for Vegeta

>Tell him your parents are out on missions as well

>Ask him about his fight (Long story or short is up to you)

>Ask him about parslee

>Ask him about the "Quarantine" on planet vegeta

>Thank him for rescuing you

>Write in???
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>>2529048

>Tell him your parents are out on missions as well

>Ask him about his fight (Long story or short is up to you)

>Ask him about parslee

>Ask him about the "Quarantine" on planet vegeta

>Thank him for rescuing you
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>>2529048
>>2529067
Yea sure
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>>2529067
I feel like this vote will make the QM cry internally
All the dialogue
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>>2529067
>>2529071
>>2529088
My fault for not setting a limit... But nice to know ya wanna hear it all heh

Writing.
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Raditz picks you up and carries you over his shoulder as he takes off at a steady pace back to the jungles and swamps.

"Raditz... How'd your fight with lottus go?"

He looks down shamefully and says "About as well as a fight between a low class and an elite could have gone...Terrible...she destroyed me."

Noticing his face you try to change the subject, so you ask "Did parslee win her matches in the lower division?"

He perks up "Yeah actually she won the low class division. She is an excellent fighter when she's pissed off. Your a lucky dog to have her crawling after you now." He winks at you slyly. You give a weak smile.

Continuing into the jungle the foul and pungent odor returns causing you to wince at the stench.

"So whats with... Lord Frieza quarantining our planet."

"I'm not sure but from what i heard it was extremely abrupt and important that everyone was there, but beyond that no one knows what its about." he says

"Well my father and your father were sent to Planet Meat for missions when i left for this one. Maybe they already went back?"

"No i didn't see my father anywhere when i was there..." He grows quiet after the mention oif his father. You are well aware that they don't have the best relationship.

"Raditz i just want to thank you for saving me.... I would be dead without you." you say wholeheartedly

"OH I KNOW... haha It's what battle brothers are for so don't mention" He says with a grin

In another hour of flying you finally make it back to the saiyan pods. As you descend and touch down you see her. Parslee.She turns around and to your confusment looks pretty angry.

What do you say?

>"Hey Parslee...... you come here often?"

>"Parslee... thank you for coming to find me."

>"Before you beat me to death i just want you to know... I'm really happy to see you."

>Simply wait for her to say something

>Crawl as fast as you can into a pod

>Your feeling have faded... Stay silent

>Write in???

>Choose one plez or mix two at max
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>>2529225
>"Parslee... thank you for coming to find me."
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>>2529225
>>"Parslee... thank you for coming to find me."
PARSLEE A FUCKIN CUTE
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>>2529225
>"Parslee... thank you for coming to find me."
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>>2529225
>"Parslee... thank you for coming to find me."
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>>2529251
>>2529266
>>2529269
>>2529281
Read you loud and clear. Play it cool

Writing
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>>2529305
"Parslee... thank you for coming to find me. I-"But you are quickly met with a strong punch to the head from her.

"WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE?!?! WHY WOULD YOU TAKE A SQUAD MISSION SOLO? ARE TRYING TO GET YOURSELF KILLED?!?! JUST CAUSE YOU TOOK ON AN ELITE YOU THINK YOUR SOMESORT OF BIG SHOT? HOW BIG OF A FOOL ARE YOU?!?!"

Raditz shakes his head in a "I told you so" fashion as the saiyan girl continues to berate you but all you can hear or focus on is her face. Wow. "SHE actually came back to find me...and she punches like a space truck" you wonder off

She grabs you by the collar of your armor "ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME?!?!" she looks you dead in the eye filled with rage.

Are you?

>Try to kiss her

>Try to calm her down by intimidation (Write in how)

>Try to sweet talk her to calm down (Write in how)

>Simply nod in a spaced out state

>Something else?????
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>>2529393
>"Prince Vegeta ordered it. He said that I was to conquer this planet in three days, or not bother returning at all..."
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>>2529401
this
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>>2529401
>>2529450
Roll me a d100
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Rolled 64 (1d100)

>>2529468
YEEART!
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>>2529401
Hindsight is 20/20>>2529401
>>2529401
>>2529401
>>2529401
>>2529401
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Rolled 77 (1d100)

>>2529468
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Rolled 87 (1d100)

>>2529468
Okay
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>>2529480
87/100 Passes :)

Writing
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"Prince Vegeta ordered it. He said that i was to conquer this planet in three days, or not return at all." You explain to parslee

Her face switches from anger to a look of sympathy and understanding. "I get it...If Prince Vegeta ordered it then we need to finish where you left off." She looks over to raditz "Let's go, this planet has 5 moons on it so by nightfall we can transform and destroy everything on this planet." She turns back to the pod and retrieves 3 scouters" I recognized your voice as I was flipping through channels on my scouter. Then I heard your scouter blow up. That was about a day and a half ago when i got my armor after the tournament. You still have time." She tosses you a scouter, which just lands on your chest as you lay on the ground still broken from the Viper King.

"We will leave you in the pod and come back for you once we exterminate this planet for the Prince. It will probably fetch a high price, so he might not care you had help" She tells you as raditz drags you into your original pod.

"Stay put" She grins as both her and Raditz blast off into the jungle.

You slowly fall asleep in your pod awaiting their return.

Roll me a d100+5 for how well they do
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Rolled 58 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2529579
YEEART!
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Rolled 37 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2529579
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Rolled 79 + 5 (1d100 + 5)

>>2529579
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>>2529592
79+5=84
Parslee and Raditz Successssssssssssss

Also roll me d1000+500 for Zenkai of Mizuna
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Rolled 515 + 500 (1d1000 + 500)

>>2529608
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Rolled 174 + 500 (1d1000 + 500)

>>2529608
HERE WE GOOOOOOOOO
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Rolled 990 + 500 (1d1000 + 500)

>>2529608
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>>2529616
YYYYYOOOOOOOOOOOO
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>>2529616
WE ARE THE ÜBERCHAD!
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>>2529616
CLUUUUUUUUUUUUUTCH
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>>2529616
Having friends to save you when your near death helps

Mizuna now has a power level of 6,457

Nice rolls boys
Writing.
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>>2529616
>Mizuna comes back with a powerlevel almost as strong as the strongest elite from the tournament
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>>2529635
It's called "Fail Forward".
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Throughout the night you hear the sweet sounds of roaring, explosions, and complete destructionary mayhem. "Parslee and Raditz must be having one hell of a party out there... Damn it... i wish i could be out there" as you drift back off to sleep dreaming on being an oozaru and destroying a planet.

Later on you are awakened as you pod hisses open and you see parslee and raditz smiling while covered in swamp muck with three collassal beasts dead behind them." Come on its time to eat" Parslee says as she drags you out and onto a rock near a makeshift fire. "Last we must have partied hard, i checked the scouter and there is no life left on the planet. Too bad we can't control ourselves in oozaru form, that would have been amazing." She dazes out in bliss for a moment before recomposing herself "Anyways we found these big juicy things so we decided to cook them up.You should probably contact Prince Vegeta and let him know the planet natives have been wiped out." She says as she stuffs her mouth full of the giant beasts legs." And we have to get you back into a rejuvenation chamber"

She's right. You slowly lift your arm, wincing through the pain, and click your scouter to contact Prince Vegeta. "My prince, Planet Stovasa has been cleared of all natives and is ready for sale. I had help from my two saiyan comrades and wouldn't have been able to complete my mission without them." You say and wait for a response

"None of that matters right now. You need to set your pods for frieza planet 739 and meet me there immediately. Planet Vegeta has been obliterated and everyone on it. No one knows how yet so just get there now."

How do you feel?

>I mostly want you guys to decide how this will impact Mizuna and in turn how he will explain it to Raditz and Parslee

>If ya can't think of anything just vote for an emotion and i'll do the rest :)
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>>2529729
Shock and Anger.
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>>2529729
A Cold sweat runs down our spine...."Father...." then get into the pod and do as we are told. We're feeling somewhat shocked and confused but most importantly we are wondering...How?
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>>2529729
Shock and anger sounds appropriate.
Our people were wiped out. Almost everyone we knew, dead.
And we won't even get that rematch.
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>>2529729
>I mostly want you guys to decide how this will impact Mizuna and in turn how he will explain it to Raditz and Parslee
Sadness. “Oh god, Dad! Oh god...Bardok... Raditz...” I feel like having OUR planet destroyed would make Mizuna less violent or hostile in the future. “It’s only fun when it’s someone else” after all.
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>>2529729
>complete shock
“Guys, Planet Vegeta has.... Its gone.”
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>>2529740
>>2529739
>>2529736
>>2529731
Shock and Anger.... I love it boys. Worry about dads too

Writing.
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>>2529729
>>complete shock
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>>2529729
I know I'm a little late, but...

>Sudden, direct order from Frieza to return to planet Vegeta.
>Planet Vegeta is gone.

We're smart enough to understand tech. We should be smart enough to put two and two together here, right?

Of course, we can still *pretend* to buy the bullshit.
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>>2529832
Hmm...
I agree that we should at least suspect it, deep down.
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>>2529832
Well no the better question is why Did Freiza not STOP the object from destorying the planet.
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The weight of Prince Vegeta's Words hit you like a sack of boulders... "How.. could this have happened." You say,shock competely overtaking your body. Your fists begin to clench extremely tight with rage.

Parslee and Raditz both look at you confused "What are you talking about mizuna? What did Prince Vegeta say?"

"Planet Vegeta....It's gone...Our people... gone...EVERYTHING!" your fists begin to bleed from your clenching and a single tears slide down your face.

Parslee and Raditz both give looks of pure horror and confusion. "What?! How?!"

"No one knows.." you say trying to control yourself "We need to go to Frieza Planet 739 now!" you say as you begin drag yourself into your pod restlessly. Then you feel a chill run down your spine, a cold sweat forms on your brow as you remeber.

"Yeah Planet Meat, i need to get there fast, my crew left without me."
Bardock's words ring through your ear like a giant gong.

"Mizuna? Hey. I just got out of the rejuvenation chamber and found out your old man and my crew left on a big assignment from lord frieza himself.Heh. Old dogs never are patient."
No. No way. You quickly try click your scouter but are shaking too bad to settle

"Anyways congragulations on your fight i heard you took down an eite twice you power level and met with the Prince."He ruffled your hair" Your dad would be proud i know that..."
More tears form in your eyes. Raditz and Parslee look at you even more confused "What is it Mizuna" Raditz asks

"Thank you for looking out for Raditz.I haven't been there for him and he needed someone. I'm glad its you."
You manage to steady your hands and contact Prince Vegeta again. You try you best to compose your voice as tears are now streaming down face. "Prince Vegeta do you know the status of the saiyan crew that went to planet meat?" you wait in agony

"Yes. It seems they were all wiped out by the natives on the planet." He takes a long pause. You feel like your world just broke apart into tiny pieces. "Father..."

Raditz quickly looks towards you " What about your dad?" then almost as if it connects in his head you see tears well up in his eyes "No... It can't be."

Parslee is simply frozen staring into the jungle with a look of shock stuck on her face

"How! How could this have happned" you scream to yourself in your head. And then it hits you. "Frieza...? He ordered a quarantine on Planet Vegeta days before its destroyed... and he sent Bardock and Father on a personal mission that ended with them being wiped out...No.. It can't be... BUT WHY?!?! WHY WOULD HE DESTROY US SAIYANS?! WE HAVE BEEN NOTHING BUT LOYAL TO HIM!! WE DO EVERYTHING HE ASKS OF US!!! WE ARE HIS BEST SOLDIERS!WHY?!" You shout in your head with rage, confusion, and a hint of fear.
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>>2529947
As all of this is running through your mind you unknowingly exclaim "It had to be Lor-" but get no further as Prince Vegeta cuts you off immediately" That's enough! I dont want to hear another word until you get here do you understand?! Turn off your scouters and leave NOW!" Vegeta yells into the scouter

You click your scouter and turn it off. "Parslee, Raditz we need to leave. Turn off your scouters too." you say as your voice cracks a bit.

You all climb into your pods and blast off into space leaving Planet Stovasa behind and head for Prince Vegeta.

Alone in your pod you feel an immense rage swelling again and you begin to clench your bloody fists and begin to mutter "Everything is gone...and its all because of HIM... I will avenge you Father.., Bardock.., Planet Vegeta.., and all the Saiyans." You look out into the vast openness of space. Broken body, bloody fists, and tears running down your face. "Frieza. I'm coming for you."
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>>2530002
We're gonna punch the smug right off of freiza's face when we git gud.
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whewwww i am ganna take a 1 hour break and eat for a bit and chill out.

What did you guys think of that ending? We are like 95% done with Episode 0. All that's left is the 24 year time skip rolling adventure that'll end with Mizuna growing up to be 32 years old :) I'm excited boys

Be back.
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>>2530029
I just hope we don't end up anywhere near earth, too many DBZ quests do the "Go to earth, follow the show" formula.
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Its weird how we metagamed a hate boner for freeza
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>>2530034
I just hope we get to go to Dairy Queen
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>>2530031
That's sorta the plan with the 24 year time skip
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>>2530034
It's not really metagame, it's a reasonable logical conclusion.
Vegeta made the same conclusion in canon, you know.
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>>2530034
If your talking about these guys >>2529832
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>>2529875
I didn't see them until after all my posting

I left the seeds of a hate boner scattered for a reason. I wanted Mizuna to have the same conclusion that vegeta made but actually care about his planet and people and father dying. Where vegeta just don't give no fucks
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>>2530052
>vegeta just don't give no fucks
really? goddamn, after all his prince of all saiyans shit
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>>2530052
Is Nappa still going to take us to Dairy Queen?
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>>2530067
He gives a fuck he just bottles it up and doesn't show it until he dies and tells goku

He never even told nappa and raditz until YEARS later and even then he just wants to rule the universe himself.
He worries less about avenging his people and more about universal domination
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>>2530039
>>2530070
Shut up and take me to the damned Queen, anon.
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>>2530031
Go find a little corner of space, set up a pirate kingdom, with Parslee as our queen?
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>>2530121
I like you anon :)
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>>2530121
The Turles route of abandoning the PTO, huh?
Hmm...
Well, it'd be interesting if we did so.
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>>2530121
Only after we steal a bunch of Freeza's shit and research.
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>>2530211
That's just painting a target on our back.
No, we disappear into space, and train our ass off until we're strong enough, and THEN we come for Freeza.
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Okay boys i'm back

Few key things before we begin again
I am going to switch into a sort of recap mode for the rest of this Time Skip stuff and the posts will be kind of short but will need a lot of rolling. I have a bunch of tables so Mizuna's life will be pretty varied.

Now It is no spoiler that frieza is the over arch bad guy of this story. So if you decide to go rogue during these rolling events you can earn Galactic Credits to spend in the universal market to buy things like a new ship or training from an alien school, or alien armor and weapons or maybe even buy a sector of space to conquer a planet and pay someone to build you a stronghold for you and vegeta and raditz and all your possible rebel boys to stay.You are hell bent on revenge against frieza, so you and the other remaining saiyans want to gain the power and numbers to overthrow him.

That means yeah some planets you can spare people and recruit them to your cause.

This is 24 years so yeah your ganna be busy and your space pirates so if your going to go down that route of building an army against Frieza you have to do it in secret.

Or you can say fuck all that noise and stick to the PTO and work exclusively for them and try to go the Vegeta cannon route
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>>2530264
*You're space pirates
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>>2530264
Fuck Freeza. We'd be stifled under his rule, committed to doing whatever orders us to do.
Fighting for the PTO?
Fuck that. Saiyans should fight for what they believe in, not because someone tells them to. Not for money, not for resources, not for any organization or sovereignty. Just for ourselves.
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>>2530264
>24 years time skip
So, how many babies do we put in Parslee?
I mean, the saiyan race needs to be restored
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>>2530284
what we believe in?
we believe in fighting to fight.
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>>2530301
Fighting to fight is fine, but we don't need to cause unnecessary destruction, or you know, kill people just because we want a good fight.
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>>2530264
Hell yeah having our own section of space to rule over sounds hella fun. It'd be interesting to see what other aliens there are out there. We'll have to get gud at diplomacy, but at least we have a slight advantage over other Saiyans for that.
>>2530284
Normally I'd disagree, seeing as we could do backstab shenannigans if we worked for the PTO. Y'know, lost paperwork here, dumb monkey accidentally a space pod there, etc. And we *do* already have a friendly contact in the PTO. But space pirates sounds way more fun. Also, if we start a secret rebellion, we can just get agents to do that shit for us. Nobody expects the Saiyan to be a sneak, but maybe there's a reason for that.
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>>2530309
We could hide out on Frieza Planet 419, nobody ever goes to Frieza Planet 419.
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“We need more saiyans, Raditz, do you know of anyone else that might have been off world? A brother perhaps?”
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surprisingly, there's art of vegeta cosplaying as captain harlock...
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Arriving on Frieza Planet 379 Mizuna was rushed to a rejuvenation chamber where he spent 3 days recovering fully.

After making a full recovery Mizuna met with Raditz, Parslee, Nappa, and Prince Vegeta to discuss the destruction of Planet Vegeta.
During which you present your suspicion that it was Friezas doing. Vegeta confirms your suspicion but reminds everyone that "there is nothing any of you could do about it. Your all children except for nappa and aren't nearly strong enough to oppose Frieza. We are going to go back and belive whatever lies they tell us, let them think we are idiots and will continue working for the PTO until I am strong enough to overthrow him and take his place as the strongest in the universe!"

Do you agree with Vegeta?

>Yes we should stick with the PTO and backstab them when strong enough

>No offer a counter solution of going rogue and building a rebellion to fight frieza eventually

>Yes and No Stick with the PTO until you are 16 and try to go rogue later to build a rebellion so you can get inside info before

>Write in?? If you have any ideas now is the time to let them be heard
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>>2530343
>Yes and No Stick with the PTO until you are 16 and try to go rogue later to build a rebellion so you can get inside info before
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>>2530343
>Yes and No Stick with the PTO until you are 16 and try to go rogue later to build a rebellion so you can get inside info before

Nobody would join the rebellion of a bunch of kids anyways. Doing it when we're more mature is better.
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>>2530343
>>Yes and No Stick with the PTO until you are 16 and try to go rogue later to build a rebellion so you can get inside info before
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>>2530343
>>Yes and No Stick with the PTO until you are 16 and try to go rogue later to build a rebellion so you can get inside info before
>>Write in?? If you have any ideas now is the time to let them be heard
Ask Vegeta if he knows about any other survivors, anyone that might have been offworld and ignored the return order.

Also, whatever we do, DO NOT build our base in South Galaxy.
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>>2530347
Supporting.
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>>2530343
>No offer a counter solution of going rogue and building a rebellion to fight frieza eventually
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>>2530343
>>Yes we should stick with the PTO and backstab them when strong enough
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>>2530347
>>2530348
>>2530355
>>2530356
>>2530357
Wait until you are 16 wins

Roll a d100 Dc 50 to see if Nappa and Vegeta will agree
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Rolled 93 (1d100)

>>2530366
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Rolled 92 (1d100)

>>2530366
BIG ANIME TIDDIES FOR YOU NAPPA
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Rolled 63 (1d100)

>>2530366
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>>2530368
NIceeeeee

Writing.
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"For a time yes i agree, but we should plan to go rogue and build a rebellion of our own my Prince. We have to avenge Planet Vegeta and all our people. The best way to do that is by building our own army and taking frieza on together. But not before we learn all we can about his army now while we are young.When we come of age we just leave and never look back. We will go where he can never find us and plot his downfall!"
All your saiyan compainions look at you with Hope and determination in their eyes.

"I'm with you Mizuna. Always have and i always will. For Father" Raditz says standing firmly by your side

"I'll go wherever you go Mizuna. I will follow you to the end of the universe and beyond. For the Saiyans." Parslee says also joining your side

"My loyalty is too Prince Vegeta." Nappa says looking down at vegeta waiting for a response

"Agreed. In 8 years time we will strike out on our own and build an army to crush that bastard Frieza. Until then we need to report back to him and bide our time." Prince Vegeta says sternly

With that you all report back to Frieza, who tells you planet vegeta was destroyed by a giant meteor shower. He is curious about your whereabouts during the event but says your insignificant enough and gives his condolences, but then quickly reminds you however that you have work to do. He assigns you all as a squad together. He even dubs you the "Monkey Squad" and sends you on your way.

And so begins your 8 years of conquering planets for the PTO

Roll me a 2d100
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Rolled 80, 26 = 106 (2d100)

>>2530458
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Rolled 66, 72 = 138 (2d100)

>>2530458
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Rolled 63, 90 = 153 (2d100)

>>2530458
OOF
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Rolled 97, 56 = 153 (2d100)

>>2530458
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>>2530459
>>2530460
>>2530463
80 and 90 good job boys

Writing
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During Mizunas first couple years with the PTO he and the saiyan squad became a force to be reckoned with in Frieza's army. Conquering planet after planet. With 5 Saiyans on 1 squad there weren't many missions that they couldn't take on despite being children.They impressed Lord Frieza and earned Themselves a bit more freedom (-5 to escape Dc)

Mizuna also grew closer to his saiyan companions allowing them all to connect in battle easier and fight as a unit.(+5 assualt rolls)

During one of thier assaults on a planet they all actually stumble upon a hidden thieves cache of 10,000 Galatic Credits. They quickly gather them all and take them off planet with them for later purposes.

I'm actually ganna have to pause here i've got a bit of an emergency to take care of boys i probably won't be back tonight but i'll update you guys tomorrow for sure

Sorry boys.
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>>2530503
all good mang, just don't die
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>>2530503
Good luck
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>>2530503
Hang in there Coopy. I hope everything works out alright.
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>>2530503
What opinions do the other characters have regarding us?
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>>2530634
I feel like we’re respected by Vageta, and liked by our friends.
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Weren't we going today?
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>>2533505
I thought so too...
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>>2533777
DEAD
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:(
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>>2533505
>>2533777
>>2534346
>>2534394
It was a good run boys, let's pack in it and put Mizuna's picture up with the other protags of dead Saiyan quests.
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>>2534346
>>2534405
don't jump the gun, maybe the emergency is bigger than we thought
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>>2534417
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BOYS we ain’t dead!

I just got a lot of bullshit I gatta deal with right now :(

i archived earlier today just in case but uhh as soon as I get this dealt with i’ll Let you boys know

BUT WE AIN’T DEAD
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>>2534672
Take as long as you need! Only dumb-dumbs on the internet want you to put quests above life.
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>>2534672
No problem mate
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>>2534672
Man, this quest is so dead I keep imagining Coopy posting. I miss it.
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>>2536076
What was the emergency?
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>>2536267
Quick version is i’m apparently going to be a dad in 9 months!

Don’t go cheap on birth control boys
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>>2537628
Congratulations! You’ll name them Mizuna, right?
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>>2537628
I will try my best to be back tomorrow @6:00 CDT so we can continue Mizuna’s journey!
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>>2537643
Obviously ;)
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>>2537628
Just that? Op the birth of your quest is more important than the birth of your child
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So how closely are we following canon on this?
we going pure Dragon Ball/Z or are we including the movies, GT, Super, some fanmade stuff what's the general plan
Because I'll be honest if we end up against Freiza I'd prefer badass 5th form Freiza to Lakers Freiza
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>>2539350
I would like to follow canon at least until Frieza. Beyond that i have not thought about it yet
(This is my first quest as Qm so i'm still gauging peoples likes and dislikes)

Movies will Probably be included but because Mizuna isn't a "good guy" it depends on how these first few interactions with goku and co. go.

Another thing is fighting frieza will be the toughest part to write just because he is soooo OP as fuck, to the point where everyone was getting 100k zenkais in the show. And plus Kakarot is Op as fuck too so finding the balance between not just making Mizuna an Op as fuck character for the sake of the quest and making him completely irrelevant will just be tough from a narrative perspective.
He was born low class so it will be a steep climb but i think you guys will do well. :)
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>>2539607
You might want to dig into some of the more esoteric DBZ ki powers if you want to have Mizuna be effective but not OP

Stuff like Tien's Split Body, The Evil Containment Wave, telepathy, the various "stun" moves characters pull off, Ginyu's Body Swap and stuff like that
Basically things that aren't just beams

But this is a DBZ quest and we are a Saiyan so being OP is a given, don't feel bad about giving power-ups just make them meaningful or unique and no one will complain
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>>2539722
Its true, DBZ is always giving power ups. just dont forget reason
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>>2539722
We should totally jist steal Tien's moveset.
His actual, varied and effective moveset from before Japan's collective hatred for him reduced him to popping off one kikoho and then getting taken out in every fight. Seriously they just SHIT on him constantly in Super.
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>>2539722
Honestly, with our noticeable intelligence and interest in technology, I could see our 'deal' being mods of some kind. Technology in the dragonball universe can be used to get to CRAZY powerful levels.
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>>2539775
Are you saying some sort of Techno-Saiyan? Are you saying Nanomachines, son?
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>>2539775
>Technology in the dragonball universe can be used to get to CRAZY powerful levels.
True if we go with pure canon examples you get things like the Androids, Cell, Bebi and Hatchiyack in terms of pure offensive tech and robotics
If you go with fan made stuff you can do whatever you want but an example of something useful is the Ultra Armor from Dragon Ball Multiverse which is basically power armor that boosts you up to at least a power level of 20,000

Plus magic is a thing in DBZ so we could always go that route

Really the world of Dragon Ball lets you pretty much do whatever bullshit you want and justify it in one of 4 ways Ki, Tech, Magic, Racial Ability
You want to freeze guys in ice, seal them in an object/location, power yourself up, grow more limbs/organs, stop time, turn people into candy whatever as long as you can justify it with one of the above four ways you can do whatever you want
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Followed.

Also kind of wanting to start a Dragonball Quest of my own. I've got the grammar down, but do I have the excitement that Coopy has? I guess we'll see.
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>>2539866
do it now
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>>2539860
>>2539722

If i could give you boys a little smooch i would

Time to do a little research

Thanks gents for the heads up

>>2539866
Lazi grammer iz mi charme
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>>2539870
Too late for tonight. Maybe tomorrow?

>>2539911
Your endearing way of writing is definitely at the top of that list though. I like how you handle a lot of the situations and it has inspired me to give it a try.
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>>2539956
Post it here when you do run, Anon. So we can follow if able.
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So, is GT non-canon? I barely remember it, but I do remember it doing a bunch of weird stuff that doesn’t show up in Super. (Pan and the black star dragonballs)If it is a different timeline, do we go down the GT route, or the Super route?
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>>2539911
>If i could give you boys a little smooch i would
Thanks Coopy

Seriously though the world Akira Toriyama set up in Dragon Ball and then expanded on in DBZ is rife with creative possibility, any cool thing you can think up can be done. Shame Toriyama and others have failed to capitalize on this and just kept throwing beams with higher and higher numbers.

Long story short is be creative, take liberally from other shonen, don't sweat the small stuff, power levels are bullshit, and in the words of Jackie Chun at the end of the day martial arts is just two dudes punching each other
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>>2539975
Non canon but it shows up in practically all the games

Personally I would love to go more GT since I feel it does more to incorporate the earlier parts of Dragon Ball lore into the later parts of the series
SSJ4 making the Oozaru form relevant again and remembering that Saiyans are alien monkey men, Bebi being a creation of the Tuffles and wanting revenge for the Saiyans genociding his people, and the Dragon Balls themselves having a huge downside are all good ideas

I'd love to see Mizuna get SSJ4 because he's the only one who actually kept his fucking tail and achieved super saiyan
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>>2539975
As bad as GT was. Super is worse. At least by my opinion. Mainly because in Super it feels more like the show is changing to "Look at the pretty colors" than anything else. Seriously, Battle of Gods was fine, then Revival of F bringing in the stupid blue hair went and jumped the shark. Then Super decided to turn that shit up to 11 and throw on some silly Microsoft Powerpoint transition-tier color bubbles when things happen. Also the power scaling takes the PL bullshit in Z and fucks it until it bleeds. GT at least gave more interesting transformations, Golden Ape was pretty cool, and even SSJ4 had a decent design to it despite Goku's yellow pants. Of course Pan was insufferable. I think Super introduced more interesting characters (bar a couple, because literally reskins) but GT had a better feel to it as strange as that sounds.

That being said I hope we'd get GT stuff because more planets is never a bad thing when you are conquering the universe.
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>>2539975
I think it's officially considered an alternate timeline now, at least that's how games have been treating it.
Honestly, I hope we get GT and Super stuff. With SSj4 and SSG both being potential routes for us to go down.
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>>2540022
Plus, at least GT was never actively spiteful to a character. Whereas Super seems dead set on treating Tien like shit.
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>>2540022
>>2540600
And while I'm bitching!
Super fucked up Battle of Gods' best fucking scene!
In Battle of Gods, when Beerus bitchslaps Bulma, Vegeta IMMEDIATELY loses his shit and goes at him.
In Super's version of the same scene, he spends fucking FOREVER just maling weird noises while the music swells before he FINALLY attacks him.
The film version feels much more like an actual response to his woman getting smacked by that up-jumped little catman.
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>>2537650
He's dead boys, pack it up
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>>2540674
Can you just stop already?
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>>2540674
Don't make me do it

Just set a timer for 7 hours
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>>2540799
you meant 6pm =(
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>>2540604
>>2540600
>>2540022
>>2540000
Personally I'd rather Coopy just take the good parts from GT and Super, drop the bad stuff as needed, and ignore all the time patrol and alternate timeline stuff. Going SS4 sounds cool and if SSG is done I'd want it to be far later and maybe require a bit more to the requirements. I also definitely want SS being something hard to earn. Also dropping Broly and his bullshit if possible but that's more just a personal preference, the whole concept is just retarded. An angry greenish SS transformation sure, just none of the "legendary Mentally Retard" crap.
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>>2540856
Broly wasn't initially retarded, just super fucking pissed off at Goku. The reason was stupid as shit, sure, but think about if you met someone who you hated with 110% of your being through and through, you might get a little obsessive and screamy too. When he was in his full on LSSJ form he was hardly stupid, he was capable of speech and talking shit. After his first appearance though he did straight up go full potato. When Broly isn't a braindead beatstick though he is a psychopath. And having that weird mind-control headband on all the time probably does fuck with his brain. You can make Broly work if you tone down some of the mindnumbing hate of his and instead focus on his sadism. Some part of me also wants to believe the way Paragus raised him just intensified Broly's worst aspects but thats because the only good Dads in the entirety of the DB franchise are Krillin and Vegeta. Maybe Yamcha.
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>>2540856
>take the good parts from GT and Super, drop the bad stuff as needed, and ignore all the time patrol and alternate timeline stuff.
sounds like the best way to do it honestly
either way we're still a long way off since the quest is still pre saiyan saga so there's no rush to decide just yet
let's worry about fighting Feiza before we take on Cooler, and let's go Super Saiyan before we worry about 4 or god
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>>2540957
I'd say change Broly's hatres target to Vegeta and he works far better.
Remember Vegeta tried to have Broly and his father KILLED. That's a valid reason for that level of hate, and makes the story NOT be just about fucking Goku.
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>>2541000
That makes more sense. Specially sense baby Broly wouldn't even know who Goku is just because he cried next to him as infants. But Paragus telling child Broly how much of a dickhead Vegeta and his family are would definitely take root.
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>>2541000
>>2541005
y'all never had to deal with a baby cry have you?
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>>2541087
Do you remember your time in the nursery in the hospital? I sure don't. Goku and Broly were the same age, born on the same day apparently. Neither one would remember the other at all.
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>>2541093
You are correct about humans, but do remember Goku had retardism to the extreme and Broly was just a fucking snowflake.

Fair points good sir.
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>>2541102
That's true, but Goku suffered genuine cranial trauma. Literally dropped on his head as a baby. Broly's still a piece of shit I'll concede to that. All of his problems would make more sense if Broly was older when all the shit on planet Vegeta happened so then he'd actually have enough brain to remember it. There's no way he would have enough awareness to have psychological trauma from his injuries and the planet being destroyed as a newborn. The only excuse for it would be "Well he is an alien, so human rules don't apply" but that just leaves a sour taste in the mouth don't it?

I want to like Broly but Toriyama makes that shit so damn hard. If only Frieza would have been more thorough in wiping out the saiyans.
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>>2541102
If only grandpa gohan had just missed that banana peel and not dropped babby kakarot
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>>2541116
>I want to like Broly but Toriyama makes that shit so damn hard
HE'S SO COOL, BUT HE'S FUCKING DUMB!
And if you think Toriyama makes THAT hard, try having your favorite characters in Dragon Ball be Tien and Launch.
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>>2541136
Dude I remember in Dragon Ball when Tien was the baddest fucking dude. Then it goes to Z and he starts okay, then immediately goes downhill.

Out of all of the Z fighters I think he may have the most technical skill. Dude invents moves left and right and does nothing but train and teach people 24/7. But somehow he winds up weaker than Krillin? Krillin is fucking great but he has other shit to do than practice all day. At least Yamcha just up and actually leaves the fighting scene so he doesn't have to worry about being relevant or anything but Tien just gets fucked. Man, Tien is suffering. Toriyama doesn't even know who Launch is.
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>>2541136
>Launch

I'm not even kidding, Who the fuck is that?
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>>2541162
The OG Super Saiyan, just in human form.
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>>2541162
http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Launch

Real answer she's just a human with a completely random and unexplained condition to switch personality and for some reason hair color and style when she sneezes. Also really in love with Tien.
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>>2541172
Fuck, I didn't even remember this person was a fucking and She just faded, huh alright then,
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>>2541162
The two people they REALLY should have gathered the Dragon Balls for.
Because the two Launches are functionally two completely different people. Neither remembers what the other one does, completely different personalities, values, et cetera. And they never bothered to GET THEM SEPARATE BODIES.
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>>2539968
So I realized (when I sobered a bit) that I'm going on a vacation next week so starting up a Quest and then immediately having to bail isn't the best idea. Gonna work on the idea for it over these next two weeks and put up something when I get back.

>>2541343
I was always really curious why they didn't do that considering that they are two different people in one body.

>>2540856
Agree with this 200%. GT did have some cool things in it, and getting to see the best of both it and Super would be absolutely stellar.
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>>2541368
Well, the Doylist explanation is because it would have killed the joke. When Launch was still present in the story, Dragon Ball was a comedy series, and Launch was built around that single joke of the perfect Japanese woman sneezing and turning into a crazy, gun toting, American-esque chick. And then after the timeskip and the series shedding its jokes, she was completely absent.
And there is no Watsonian excuse. The Z Warriors are a bunch of selfish dicks happy to curse those poor women to each have only half a life.
For the record, Blonde Launch is a far superior waifu, due to actually HAVING a personality.
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>>2541373
Yeah for sure. Blonde Launch was badass. My friends and I created a table top DBZ system and ran an alternate telling of Z where she and Murasaki got androided instead of 17/18. She ended up almost wiping the party.
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>>2541417
I like to picture a world where the Z Warriors aren't total selfish cunts as resulting in Blonde Launch hanging out with 18 a lot and teasing her for being such a sappy wuss over Krillin.
Admittedly I like to picture ANYTHING where 18 gets to be more than a fucking prop after their wedding, because I like her a lot too.
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>>2541485
>tfw of all the Z-fighter wives Bulma is the most physically present despite being the least physically capable
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>>2541417
Why would you create a DBZ system when an official one already exists
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>>2541491
I still wish Chi Chi would've gotten a power boost, I mean she was a finalist in the World Martial Arts Tournament
The only time you see her fight is in Dead Zone where she takes on Garlic Jr's minions when they try to take Gohan and I think when Videl shows up she mentions she married Goku after fighting in the Budokai but that is the only time here martial arts skill is ever mentioned
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>>2541506
Because it's bad.
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>>2541534
In fairness to Chi-Chi, SOMEONE has to:
Look after their children, keep the house from falling into disrepair, manage their finances, do all the shopping, and so on and so forth.
Woman has the patience of a SAINT for putting up with Goku's bullshit for all those years, and she deserved FAR better than an emotionally distant fightard.
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