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You are Irue Valen, blood heir to House Valen, current warden of the Fae contract, Mayor of Carona, and most importantly, not in an Atelier any longer. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, the wind was blowing, and all of it was real! There weren't any mental probes poking at your mind, and the Mana of the world were once more completely silent and indifferent to you, despite over a decade of persistent study and meditation.

The longer you thought about that, the less happy you were going to be.

Still, the sensation of being back in the world proper was difficult to describe. It felt as if you had been trapped in there for over a year. What were you even doing before you took a trip and fell down that twisted rabbit hole? All you could remember was waking up from a several month long binge, and then... Ah, right. You immediately set out to find Ari. In other words, there really wasn't anything you were doing now, huh? Until you got word back from your aunt and uncle regarding Caylen, you were basically set to just bide your time.

Besides, of course, the fact you made a promise to Mim to clear the air with her once you got back. You had no idea how you were going to approach that, and to be honest, the fact she was the Representative of Luna made it difficult to trust her after what you'd just experienced... And any prolonged contact with her posed the risk of Ari's condition being discovered. Were you even capable of being friends with her, now?

Setting Mim aside, Carona was probably still recovering. Rinnier had stepped up in your absence to handle affairs, but you didn't doubt that she was going to have a mountain of things to dump on you once you returned. Even if she was willing to stand in for you, the fact remained that she wasn't responsible for these people, or their homes; You were. The people she was responsible for were still out there somewhere, and it was up to you to help her find and reunite them.

Then there was Kara, who had taken your encouragement to heart and blithely become the Alpha of a pack of mentally broken, alcoholic demihumans through sheer force of enthusiasm, and her own monstrous strength. To be honest, you weren't sure if that was how it worked - Snippets of complaints you had caught from her little brother, and the former pack Alpha, insisted it was not - But with the remarkably low will to live shared between the remaining members, maybe Kara's naive optimism was a good thing?

Which was still saying nothing of the uncertainties you still had in handling Dullem and the rest of your 'knights'. They suited the title about as well as you could perform kitchenmancy, and there wasn't much getting around that. Alouette had laid it out clearly that no one was born a knight, but if they were going to become anything more than brigands or serfs under any other name, they would need guidance... And not the sort you were experienced enough to give.
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"Is something wrong, Master?"

Ari looked up at you with concern. The shade of her eyes seemed to have permanently changed to a more amberish, golden hue... But with Dryad returning to sleep, they no longer shown so luminescently. Once she had a proper bath, and some fresh clothes, there shouldn't be any distinct outward signs of her affiliation with the sealed Mana... Which just left the matter of her contamination.

Despite constant questioning, you'd never gained a full understanding of what it was, or even how it was supposed to spread. Considering the subject of your interrogation, you had to wonder if there even were concrete answers to those questions at the time... And if not then, had there been any since? Somewhere, locked away in Ephlesia? Did the Luna Dominion of now have a better understanding of what was going on?

Even if they did, broaching the subject would be a swift way to attract unwanted curiosity. The last thing you needed was to try and wage a war against the Shrine right now, and you had little doubt in your mind about their tolerance of the contamination.

"No." You shake your head, clearing the thoughts away. "Just thinking about Carona."

You had remarkably less opportunity to do any time biding than initially forecasted. Returning to Carona had almost instantly become a less triumphant prospect for you, and... If you were being entirely honest, you almost felt like procrastinating on your arrival just to put off having to deal with all of that.

Luckily it was a several day walk back to Carona regardless, and you did have a house not far from here you could while away some time at. It wasn't as if anyone else knew you'd finished your business out here, after all.

Of course, there was also the option of expediting your arrival via Oakenrue. It remained somewhat active, despite Dryad's return to slumber... Though it certainly didn't seem anywhere near as lively as it once had, but having it carry you would no doubt get you back faster than walking. You probably needed to figure out what you were going to do with it, as well... Just keeping it around town as this hulking, flesh covered abomination was unlikely to engender comfort in the citizens.

Decisions. Should probably start with where you were heading to first, for now.

>Hurry to Carona!
>Stop by your house.
>Am I forgetting something...? - [Unlocks Optional Boss]
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Previous Threads:
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive.html?tags=Valen+Quest

Where things are said: https://twitter.com/Riz_QM
Where things are asked: http://ask.fm/RizQM

Assorted Supplemental:
Current Abilities - http://pastebin.com/PchcdWpw
A List of Forgotten Things - http://pastebin.com/kPEscJ3h
Irue's Memoires - http://pastebin.com/sWnicrK7

Write-ups:
Kara's Day Out - http://pastebin.com/8ZbiSKLs
Adventures with Asche - http://pastebin.com/RNviCBJu
The Reclaimed Doll - http://pastebin.com/n6miP1qT
In Your Shadow - http://pastebin.com/EfeeHFAE
Friends Forever - http://pastebin.com/Yn0QaTVB
The Woman Beneath Steel - http://pastebin.com/pMGgiHC3
Paper Flowers - https://pastebin.com/Pk0W7rEm

Misc notes:I told you, you'd instantly know when it was here.

Memo:
1. Get gifts for all our companions. Miniature Oakenrue for Ari, Tellenford Diary for Mim, Choker for Kara, mini-Vacation for Rinnier we can make Priat take her out on a social date. Maybe set up something where the people of Carona can thank her for her work and help remind her WHY she does it.
2. Invite Marchovic on adventures next time there's a chance.
3. Mim said "When are you going to tell her?" Tell what to whom?
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>Hurry to Carona!

Is Irue still on the rag? You sidestepped this important question last thread.
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And finally...

>'Hearts In Harmony' - Share our dreams. Share our nightmares. For just one day, can't we share each other?
I mentioned there were hints to this, but realized later there was no real reason to be vague about what it does.

Effect: Creates a synergistic link between Irue and one other person, which lasts for 24 hours. This link causes you to "count" as each other, as you share the very concept of yourself with each other for the duration.

You share senses, to an extent you can share thoughts and emotions. Perhaps more interesting to you, however, is that you share everything Irue is capable of with your partner. Yes, this includes access to every Atelier power you've unlocked.

The pre-req to using it? You need to have a certain level of mutual trust with your target, and sleep with them. Nothing lewd, I mean, literally, sleep alongside them. You'll know it works (the trust is there) if you share a dream/nightmare.
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>>1942873
Is this the special forgetting? Like maybe the god-damned tree that took over our house?
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>>1942904
Huh. So we're good with Ari and Kara.
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>>1942873
Time for suffering Quest!
>>Am I forgetting something...?
So you're still angry at us for staying in the Altier then.

>you did have a house not far from here you could while away some time at
The one that got wrecked by plants? I don't think it's really livable at the moment.

>>1942904
>trust
>rue
pick one

Would we have gotten a different powerset if we'd chosen differently?
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>>1943025
Honestly I'm rather concerned about Ari's reaction to the nymph wood.

And its possible growth.
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>>1942872
Didn't Luna mind rape us once too?
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>>1942873
Right, the vote:
>>Stop by your house.
We should see if Solving did anything to the plants there, at least.

Anyone else up for physically connecting Ari to us with rope or vines or something? We have a history of losing track of her in these woods.

>>1943040
We meditated to Luna, it found something it didn't like in our head, and we let them take it rather than fight them. A mistake, in hindsight.
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>>1943045
No, I think that was the right choice at the time. But we can't meditate on Luna ever again. Shit let's make sure to warn Ari about the basics and in more depth later.

Also are we supposed to talk to the Far before leaving? We should at least say goodbye.
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>>1943045
>Oakenrue
>"Something about as long as I am? That I can wrap my hands around. It needs to be sturdy."
It can move us around as it is, then return to its 'original' form when we don't want a giant, flesh-covered tree make in our likeness following us around.
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>>1942872
Can we stimulate this Oakenrue with the bracelet?

Also fuck us the Shrine has had people see it.
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>>1943061
>with the bracelet?
We've been over this, the /only/ thing we've been able to do with the bracelet is meditate while wearing it, creating Apparitions.
Though I wonder what would happen if we meditated to Dryad, now that we're outside?

>Shrine has had people see it.
It's been so long, I figure a few, high-ranked Luna adepts are the only ones that might recognize it was what it is.
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>>1943089
You keep forgetting when we linked up with the oakenrue (that got eaten by the Fae) and lost some humanity.

Like you said. We have been over this.
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>>1942878
>Am I forgetting something...?
Uhh
>knights nowhere to be found
>house got wrecked by dryad apparitions
>library getting wrecked by nymph's wood
Jesus Christ, is the place even alright? Priat punched a hole through a wall and the kitchen got destroyed for a second time. How is it still standing?
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>>1943115
How the fuck did I quote the wrong post twice
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>>1943089
It also switched with us when ShadowRue was with us.

And it's been heavily hinted that we are using it *wrong* as it is.
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>>1943056
Can the Oakenrue still return to its staff form? We should check since a lot of things have changed with it and Dryad.

Like all the flesh it wears. The fuck is with that.
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>>1943124
It was already fleshy before, but now it's extra fleshy. Don't you like having flesh on your face? I bet Oakenrue feels the same way
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>>1942873
. . . . Asche is going to be pissed we were gone for so long too. And we really need to grill her about what she is. How she recognized Shadowrue.

We should get her a gift too. Damned if I know what she wants though.
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>>1943133
> MFW you try to trap me in your fleshy prisons
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>>1943113
Right, I remember that now. But I'm remembering right, all we got out of the link was limited control over them, nothing else.
>>1943119
>Shadowrue
I think that was more her than the bracelet.
>"wrong"
yep, but I suspect that's the intended function is more than "use it to meditate on X"
>>1943124
Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.

>>1943137
We shouldn't do anything for her until we get some answers. I don't trust her at all. She keeps major secrets from us, without even a given reason. It's been implied she knows what the 'intended' function of the bracelet is, for one.


Unrelatedly, did we ever figure out what the deal with the Nightgaunts was? Oakenbears were connected to Dryad, but there's not a clear connection between Dryad and them.
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>>1942873
>Where did the Nymph Wood shoots that we brought into the forest go? Priat carried away one, but what happened to the other? Is it taking over the forest already?

Also
>""After Priat and I come back though, I'll come find you. There's still more that I want to say." Where is Mim?

>And where are our knights?

>And isn't there still oakenbears around here?
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>>1943161
I think Nightgaunts are the trapped souls of the Dryad adepts, lashing at everything in blind rage.

Or something like that.
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>wash Ari and ourselves off in the river
>tell the oakenrue to find and store some apples for Kara
>tell Ari the basics of Dryad and corruption, tell her that the corruption will be our secret
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>>1942873
>Am I forgetting something...?
We left web at house
House was a changing maze
Golem going wild at sight of Mim
Where's Priat?
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>>1943089

Did you forget? The true function of the bracelet is to command apparitions.
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>>1943467
I think it's actually to command Mana
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I laid down because I felt like shit, and woke up 7 hours later.

I think I give you guys like 24 hours for a Forgetting now? So like 17 more hours to go. Make sure to break the tie on the vote in the meantime. If that's not the case though, give me a heads up so I can make a note of it somewhere. Just woke up, so I feel a bit scattered.

>>1943004
>Is this the special forgetting?
It is, anon! The correct answer [Unlocks Optional Boss].

>>1943025
>Would we have gotten a different powerset if we'd chosen differently?
No, powers are strictly tied to the Atelier. Though I suppose it might have been more sickening to you if your reward for killing/abandoning Ari was an ability revolving around connections, and one for saving.

>>1943124
It can go staff.
https://ask.fm/RizQM/answers/143185377302
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>>1943584
Is Ari going to freak out at things now because Dryad is raging through her?

Also about the question of Rinnier coming off her rag?

But more importantly you gotta admit that as we play and you write Irulen that also has an affect on us, the players. Hating Carona is practically a meme now.
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>>1942873
>Stop by your house.

Travel with the Oakenrue.
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>>1943654
>Hating Carona is practically a meme now.
It's not a meme, anon. It's justified.

>Is Ari going to freak out
Something to keep an eye on.
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>>1943702
See? When you say it that way I remember how big of a pain in the ads Carona has been and I forget that we also met people who weren't total dicks like Priat and Bartender lady and those people.

I think some of them even wanted to be our friends too.
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>>1943723
If we're being explicit about it, Irue is well aware that most of the people in Carona are more or less blameless.

>"The Mayor is going to answer for everything he's done." You reply without missing a beat, "He's actively plotted against my family in the very land they look after, out of some misguided sense of patriotism." You crane your neck back to glare down at Carona, "The same sense of misbegotten good intentions that's going to doom every citizen down there to the royal's retribution the moment word of his actions get to the wind."

>"I guess you can't help but act on your family name..." Dullem groused, scratching at the back of his neck nervously, "But the entire town seems..."

>"Not the town, the Mayor specifically." you shook your head, "My aunt and uncle trusted this man to oversee this place, and he is the one that failed; Not the people living here. He'll be the one to pay the price." You raise your chin imperiously and snort dismissively, "That it works to the benefit of my family is simply a convenient perk, I'm doing this for my reasons."

>"Eh?"

>"His men attacked me, abducted Rinnier, tried to use Kara against me, and imprisoned Asche." You tick off the offenses on your fingers one by one, "I am no one's savior, if he thinks he can act however he wants then I'll relish the opportunity to be the first to show him the consequences."

But that said, the situation isn't so cut and dry. You have more enemies and opposition in Carona than just the Mayor, be it due to political reasons or just good old fashioned racism and resistance to your methods. While there are plenty of people in Carona who've not done you any wrong, there is an extremely small minority of them who have done you any good, and a far cry more that have actively plotted against you or are currently engaged in being obstructive. Even if you put all of that aside, Irue (and by extension the players, really) have no fond memories of Carona. Every time you went there, bad things happened.

Hating Carona is perfectly justified, even if you acknowledge that many of its citizens are innocent.
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>>1943723
The best thing I can say about that place is that some of them aren't dicks.
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>>1943769
>>1943744
Did we ever clear out the remaining mercenaries working as guards?

And I thought everyone working against us died? Goddammit.
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>>1943914
>Did we ever clear out the remaining mercenaries working as guards?
Nope! You had no idea which guards were mercenaries or not, and the destruction of the Banshee gave them all ample time to go to the ground. There are certainly plenty who have left, lacking a paycheck now that the Mayor is dead, but that does little to purge the standing guard and populace of people sympathetic to the Mayor's actions, or otherwise opposed to the noble's inactions and your presence.

Rinnier has been working on weeding out rebellious elements, but there's a lot going on in Carona. Reconstruction, reorganization, accounting for the injured and dispossessed, resource allotments... You may have chose differently had you put Carona before Ari, but Rinnier's priority is the people, and so her focus has been on helping them first, and cracking down on the splinter cells later. You'd need to ask her for a status report when you arrive.
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>>1943934
Well we can always bring in our Oakenrue to help build stuff.

Oh yeah, we also had people bitching about the demi-humans. Hrm.

We really need to figure out how to make them feel better. We have to give them some sort of religion or other.

Maybe we should secretly test them for their response to Dryad. Or get them to hang out in the forest with the Fae. Or on the Ice Queen atelier. See if they pick up attributes of those places.

I bet they would make great not so secret police though with their ability to manipulate people and be sociopathic. Sociopaths can still have ideals after all.
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>>1943967
>give them some sort of religion or other.
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>>1943975
It's the opiate of the masses.

Hrm.

Well so long as we're the only source of Faedeka it's okay.
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>>1943975
But I was thinking that if we crushed them with an apparition of Shade, maybe we could pump them full of Dryad and make them Yandere for us. While also terrified of us.

We should probably get Marchovic to talk to them about Shade and why they felt like such cap afterwards and what can be done to work through it.

But I want my secret police terror squads.
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>>1943584
>So like 17 more hours to go.
I assume that means we haven't Remembered the right thing yet. Back to the archives.
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>>1943975
We . .
Uh.

We do still have the Faedeka right?

Did we b
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>>1944075
We 'sold' it all to that trader, Remember? Who then likely sold it in that wretched city.
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>>1944062
I provide the full window regardless of whether the right answer is gotten early, or not. There are a couple reasons for that, like the opportunity to remember unrelated things, but in this case I just couldn't remember if I typically gave 24 hours for a Forgetting since swapping to update blocks. No one has complained so far, so I'm assuming I do. In the meantime, I'm just binge reading all of Panzer Commander Quest. It's interesting to see how quickly it shifted from military silliness to eldritch mysticism. Also the waifus are amusing, I guess? I seem really bad at making characters that anons get attached to, so I'm trying to figure out how everyone else does it so easily.

Also if you get this Forgetting correct, you already know the 'reward'. So naturally if you don't understand how the answer would lead to the reward, there's little chance of it being correct. But it's pretty obvious, I'm sure you won't screw it up.

>>1944075
You sold all your Faedka to Yuri, anon. He is now traveling with everything you had left, and you've no idea where he is. There's a fair bit left over in Carona from the recent Oakenrue incursions, though.
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>>1944099
Huh. I wonder if people with connections to Mana get withdrawal from it .. .

Or if it's a way to find our who is connected to Dryad preemptively.

> Getting the answer means a "reward"

Honestly I sometimes feel Irue is happiest when she has something she can just punch to solve.
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>>1944099
>I seem really bad at making characters that anons get attached to
>Says the person who wrote Elly

Who is your favorite waifu in PCQ?
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>>1944099
. . . . Seriously?

Riz we come here FOR the characters. It's certainly not to live out a power fantasy. And we're *really bad* at puzzles. And diplomacy.

You write characters that feel almost painfully real. Fuck their waifus. Their waifus? Shit.

We're just pic related.
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>>1944161
I feel like there's probably a taboo regarding talking about other quests in your own quest, but I've got nothing but time to burn until the Forgetting window closes, anyway.

I don't really have one, but Malachi is nice. Whether that one can be considered a waifu or not be damned.

As of the thread 11, Signy seems likable, but not the sort I'd consider a romantic, or even a platonic, option. Exceedingly little of her personality and background has been explained at this point other than her father having been a major player in the rebel movement that she's feeling a little outclassed in leading. Shields of Liberty in general apparently hold her in high regard, but she herself seems to doubt that she can fill those shoes, and is more or less just coasting along with the MC? I feel like the only attraction being forged there is a blatant result of the Suspension Bridge effect, and the suggestions being planted by the reoccurring gag that they're a pair when going under cover. It's a shame, because it seems clear that she has potential to be a competent and effective character in her own right, but got pigeonholed into being a follower very early on.

Maddy's got some fiery damsel stuff going on, but her characterization seems a bit too inconsistent so far. I appreciate the signs of general insecurity she has with her disabilities and general stunted growth, but the longer it goes on the more it seems she's more "damsel" than "fire". Her introduction was very commanding, and only seemed to reduce itself into something meeker and more docile as time goes on. She has a lot of confidence issues, and problems with approval - Both her father's, and the MC's, and I feel like it's obvious she's the designated waifu (arranged marriage and all), but as of now there really isn't anything there I'm comfortable with. She's a damaged character, but the damage feels forced, and if any romance comes from it being fixed, it wouldn't feel very touching.

They're both cute, but my problem with them stems primarily from something I'm still struggling to put into words. Maybe it's because the focus of the narrative is elsewhere, or maybe it gets better as the quest goes on (only on thread 11, but working through it rapidly), but they don't feel fleshed out. They're aesthetically and shallowly pleasing, and I enjoy their characters, but I don't feel like there's enough depth to either of them as it stands to constitute a meaningful relationship that could affect anything more satisfying than surface-level gratification.

It certainly doesn't help that thus far, it feels as if they'd all but lost their voice in favor of following the MC. I can't feel motivations in their actions beyond just arbitrarily entrusting their agendas to someone they just met.

That said, I'm enjoying PCQ and its characters. I'm hoping they get fleshed out more as I read further. 11 threads is hardly a fair scale to judge a quest on, so final thoughts are pending until completion.
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>>1944099
We don't attach because we don't trust, because your characters are complex and we don't trust their motives. And we can't power through that distrust because we're a wimpy noble, so if w did trust someone and it didn't work, our only recourse involves words like "collateral damage".
>>1944190
Also this. All of it.
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>>1944322
I trust Ari implicitly. Asche slightly less because I don't understand Asches motives or background very well. Rinnier is next down because she has a greater obligation to her people that could lead her to betray us. Kara I trust implicitly to mean well but less so to be able to live up to her promises.

I trust Irulen to fuck things up in an honest and straight forward manner and eventually fixing things more or less maybe by breaking some other things.

But Rue has been practically a hermit growing up who lost her family and was betrayed by the remainder who blamed her for not, apparently, raising herself better because that's totally the young orphan girls job.

Who spent a decade so wanting someone to love her that she turned to mana and was solidly denied.

And when she finally found that love it was from the Fae.

Oh and her first exposure to authority with Carona was a vast conspiracy. Which was actually pretty small time to the one we just discovered.

Oh and the first person to say they want to be our friend in a way clear enough for a dumbass like us to understand is on the part of the conspiracy we just denied. Although I wouldn't say we joined Dryad just yet either. In fact we seem to still be the only one on "Our" side.

I think she has pretty good reasons to not trust people.
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>>1944233
Oh, thread 11 is an interesting one. I feel your input on the situation established in it could be very useful once you catch up.

>>1944190
In addition to this, remember when we yelled at Mim? This is still being brought up as our lowest point. Anons would not feel that way if they weren't fond of her.

Another thing many have already mentioned is that we can't really feel safe with any of the characters. They all think in ways we barely understand, and even when we understand, we often put our collective foot in the mouth. We just don't know how to deal with them.
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>>1944233
Reminder that Holy Sword Quest is not dead but only sleeps.
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>>1944233
Fuck Waifus. By their very nature they're shallow and one dimensional. Acquire swords and save the day. Ain't got no time for bitches.
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>>1944233
DEEPEST Snek Pussy LORE for best girl.
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>>1944368
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>>1944375
I don't know what any of this is.

>By their very nature they're shallow and one dimensional.
I have my doubts about this. There are certainly plenty of them which do fit that criteria, but I find that a flaw of the writing, rather than the concept. Hiss in Snakecatcher was an interesting, flawed character with motives and some manner of depth to her which functioned effectively as a waifu, for example. Or I guess that would be the difference between a 'waifu' and an actual 'wife'.

It's something I'd pursue more vivaciously in a different quest. Though given that I'm not confident in running 2 quests in tandem, and that FoxFire's potential reboot is next in line after Valen, that "third" quest idea seems perilously far off.
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>>1944402
Holy Sword Quest. If you have downtime then you should read it.

Also Hiss was supposed to be the BBEG.

> Or I guess that would be the difference between a 'waifu' and an actual 'wife'.

Exactly my point. Make them some hung other than just "potential love interest".
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>>1944375
>By their very nature they're shallow and one dimensional.
Especially when they're written as love interests first, instead of, you know, actual characters.
I'm not a fan of romance in quests at all, personally. It almost always bogs things down, due to anons spending large chunks of time pursuing and maintaining relationships, instead of talking to other characters, or pursuing the quest's main goal.
It also has a nasty habit of causing waifu wars; no one wins those. Even if you 'win', the losers become guerilla saboteurs.
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>>1944453
Chryssa a shit.
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>>1944402
Is nymph wood like a replacement Mana? Artificial life that pushes Dryad out?
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Gonna call the window here and try to get an update up, then get some rest.

>>1942899
Carona!

>>1943045
>>1943655
House!

>Special Forgetting
...Failed. Well, moving on with the arc, I suppose.
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>>1946874
>I have absolute confidence that everyone will get that one when it shows up.
>You'll get it though, I have faith. It's impossible for you to not get it, you know? Missing that is probably the only thing you could do to disappoint me.
>I will be disappointed if you don't get the special Forgetting, though.
>Missing that one is 100% disappointment.
Ah, there's that familiar sense of failure.
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>>1946922
I have absolutely no idea what it could be
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>>1946922
>It's impossible for you to not get it, you know?
>It's impossible for you to not get it
>It's impossible
>impossible
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>>1946922
It's probably my fault, because I know for a fact several of you know the answer to it. I suppose I didn't provide enough context clues here for you to realize the answer applied here, though.

As a hint, the answer was tied to a destination. Specifically a place you could go which would have led to the aforementioned [Optional Boss Fight]. There was a purpose and meaning to going there, and as it's a designated "fight", obviously there was meaning behind the act of fighting it.

But, ultimately it was always optional. There's nothing to be lost from leaving things as they are; As they've been, and will likely continue to be. All things take their course.
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>>1946922
Who would even be out here to fight, anyway? We only brought Mim and Priat out here, and we left Mim at the house. It wasn't the house, Dryad is dealt with, Ari is with us.

I haven't the foggiest idea what it could have been.
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>>1946982
It was the Shrine, wasn't it?
I didn't even know you were talking about a location
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>>1946982
I mean, I'd love to beat the snot out of our aunt, but I doubt that's it. We're on uncertain terms with Luna and Artemis, but that's not anything actionable right now. We don't have any other noteworthy enemies right now.
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>>1946982
>meaning behind the act of fighting it.
>fighting it.
>it

The ruins of the Dryad shrine?
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>>1946991
>It was the Shrine, wasn't it?
Yes! Though as for what you would fight there... There is something obscenely powerful lurking there, you know? It was far from defeated. The emotions that lingered here were too old, too powerful.
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>>1947028
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>>1947028
Considering all the trouble we went to to finish that mess, I figured we were finally done with all that.
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>>1947028
Well not like it's going anywhere.

We have to go back to track down the shadow creatures at some point any ways. Honestly I thought they were going to be trashing the town.
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>>1947038
> Return to Namek

Echhhhhhhh
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>>1947028
>There is something obscenely powerful lurking there, you know?
We've been there, had a vision, had that vision removed, sure. But there was nothing there last time, Us interacting with Dryad's dream shouldn't have changed anything there.
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>>1947060
Yeah I honestly don't feel bad about not getting this one.

It's in the "deal with it later" column of shit we have to handle.
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wut?
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>>1947081
Were we going to rush off there right away to look into things? Or make sure the strange plant that are our house wasn't twisting into something that could maybe kill all life? The drunken sociosads that are being led by a room temperature IQ muscle ditz? The town we hate where the only really competent person is overwhelmed and a target for possible violence and protected by our "knights" who might be getting shanked themselves? Our eldritch childhood companion who has some serious explaining to do? Contacting our Aunt to let her know the secret society thing is much more serious than anyone thought? See if our cousin is okay? Tentatively deal with Mim and her whole "Luna Adept" deal?

Nah man let's run off to a cave to fight ghosts. Ghosts that we beat once already.

Fuck. That. Noise. It's been good for hundreds of years, I don't think it's really that urgent. I mean yeah now in a *Meta* sense I do. But Irulen has a lot going on. Quite frankly even if we got the forgetting I'm not sure we would have wanted to run off right away to fight that shit.

> MFW currently reading Yotsubato
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>>1947144
To be fair, If we waited until we didn't have 'more important' stuff to do, we'd never make it out there.

If this was a closure thing, I'd be for going out there and finishing things. But we just finished things. Seems like all going there would do is reopen freshly bandaged wounds.

And honestly, Rue isn't a fighter. A boss being out there is more a deterrent than anything.
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>>1947209
Like I said earlier, I figured we'd get around to it later when digging more into the whole Dryad muster and possible source of the Shadows since that's where we first saw them.

> Rue isn't a fighter

Literally can't hold a weapon. Destroyed a town and murdered a man with her (oaken)bear hands.
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>>1947028
Riiiiiiiiz what happens if Irulens hands become lethal weapons?
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>>1947315
You don't need hands to live.
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>>1947317
But would they fall off?
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Riz, the worst part about you not describing characters is that drawing fanart is a pain. I'm going to assume nobody went shopping and that Rinnier and Ari are still using Irue's wardrobe of identical shirts and dresses.
Also, I had no idea Rinnier was supposed to be older than Irue, especially since she acts like some teenaged anime character most of the time.
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>>1947412
That is excellent, anon! You even included the best character!
I wish I had a lick of artistic talent.
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>>1947412
>Upperleft
Hey, you included Dopplerue!

I have included some descriptions of them through the quest, but since I figure most people make their own mental images anyway, only of the really iconic features. Some minor corrections to the image posted being things like...

Irue:
>No chest at all
>Less hips.
If you can discern Irue's gender, from the torso, it's not androgynous enough.

Ari:
>Shorter hair
...That's about it. Her hair is closer to Kara's length, neck length at most. I don't know if it was on purpose, but you did nail that her hair is a bit stringier.

Rinnier:
>More hips
>Slightly more chest
It's been mentioned a couple times as one offs, but Rinnier is actually fairly bountiful. When she was borrowing clothes from Irue, they strained to stay together even if a button or two loose - To say nothing of how restrictive they felt in general. She's also got the second best muscle tone, behind Kara... but Kara's blatantly unfair.

This is still amazing, though. And really unexpected. I love the general facial expressions going on between them. Except Dopplerue has never had a reason to smile.
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>>1947412
...Also I can't express how pleased I am you got the bracelet right. I imagine "dual ringed" doesn't express a proper picture most of the time, but it's exactly what I had in mind.
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>>1947028
That thing? Hell no, we'll sic Marchovich on it.
Also what the hell, how were we supposed to get this one?
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>>1947412
Goddammit anon, how am I supposed to draw my shitty reaction faces after this amazing thing? How?

I will draw them anyway.
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>>1947418
Thanks. Never forgetti
>>1947430
Thanks for these! I'll fix them up when I color it
>Rinnier is even bustier
>Irue is flat as board
Genetics are cruel
>>1947438
You did always describe it as rings meeting at an angle, so I couldn't really imagine anything else. Also, is the gem on it right? I think you talked about it once and then never brought it up again
>>1947460
Good, I like your Irue reaction faces
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>>1947464
Yeah, the gem is fine. It got mentioned really early on, but never really brought up again. I don't even remember what the gem was supposed to be now. I don't think I ever even specified. Make it whatever you want, it'll be retroactively canon.
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>>1947473
The only things I remember about the gem is the copies the Oakenrues made:
They were amber, I think, until they tasted blood, at which point they turned blood red.
They are the weak point of the Oakenrues
All of them seem to have a copy of it.
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>>1946982
> I didn't provide enough context clues
Yeah, no kidding. I kept rereading the opening trying to figure out what the fuck this was in relation to. Very frustrating.
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>>1947664
The only primary clue here being that the choice was made in regards to your immediate destination, and went over things you could do in the forest before leaving. Specifically, each of your 2 default options were your potential destinations, where the Forgetting itself would have been a third destination. Beyond that, the tag about what it unlocked was meant to help hint towards what sort of location you would would be relevant to that clause.

All it took for anon to instantly get it was to specify that it was a destination, which was something I had initially thought could be intuited from the discussion of the OP and the choices presented, but when anons began to guess wildly and none of them were destinations, I realized I hadn't been straight forward enough with it.

However, I knew for a fact (due to it being brought up during the Atelier a couple times) that some anons knew the answer, so in this case it's more my fault for not framing it more concisely, than any of yours.
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>>1947680
If you thought that you hadn't been straight forward enough about the only primary clue then why didn't you say anything? It's not like you haven't clarified forgettings before.
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>>1947733
I did clarify it in >>1946982 , and I am counting it as having been remembered. Though given the general reaction to what it may have been, it's being filed away as something Irue is keeping in mind for later, as opposed to the traditional Forgetting habit of superseding all other votes.

Falling asleep trying to get this update up, though.
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Rip
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"We'll stop by the house before heading back." You nudge Ari forward after finally deciding on a course of action. The Dryad apparitions had all but taken over your house when you had left, but most of the rooms had remained more or less serviceable... And if you were going to be heading back to Carona, you may as well check on whether putting the forgotten Mana back to sleep had affected that any.

Beyond that, you could take a shot at seeing if the bathrooms were still somewhat intact. You'd spent two full weeks in the Atelier, and Ari had been trapped in there even longer... Which didn't exactly mean much, considering the timid Testament in question smelled more like a walking stack of pancakes than anything else. Even still, just looking at the amount of dried sap that held her hair in place made you feel uncomfortable by extension, and so she needed to be cleaned up before you made it back to Carona.

Even if you had to dip her head into the river, she was getting her hair washed.

There were more pressing reasons to make a stop before Carona, though. "I've got something to talk to you about while we're there, too. It's important, so I need you to listen closely."

"Yes, Master!" Ari beamed up at you instantly, not so much as hesitating to give you her full attention. Despite her investment however, you were momentarily clueless as to where to start, or how to explain what you were worried about to her. You didn't fully understand the contamination she was likely a carrier of, which made the task of impressing the dangers upon her... Difficult.

"I don't know what happened to you in the Atelier, but it's something we need to keep secret." If you were being completely sure, you had a decent mind to try and keep Ari herself secluded away as well, but the insistent grip she had on your arm hinted towards that being an unlikely outcome. "Especially from the Shrine. If at all possible, I want you to stay away from the attendants, and any Adept you come across."

"Even Rinny?" She blinked confusedly, and it took you a moment to remember that Rinnier was supposed to have been a Salamander Adept, as much of Teranford's royal family had been before her. Just because she didn't display the powers of an Adept didn't necessarily mean she was safe from the contamination... But as one of your Testament, it also wasn't as if you could hide Ari from her forever. Especially considering the somewhat friendly relationship they seemed to share.

"...She's still safe to be around." You hedge after some thought, "But keep it a secret from her, as well. It's just between us, understood?"

A warm smile spread contentedly across her face as she gripped onto your arm a little tighter. "Yes, Master."
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"If you start to hear something... Anything, make sure to talk to me about it." You weren't sure just what the contamination was supposed to manifest as, but you had gathered it had been something similar to a song, themed around reunion. "It doesn't matter what I'm doing, I'll make time to listen." You doubted there would be anything more directly pressing to you than the resurgence of a potentially world ending contamination in your Testament, but- "...As soon as I can." You amend yourself after a moment, future proofing whatever inevitable knot of obligation you may find yourself tied up in during the future.

"Yes, Master!"

You paused after stepping out of the forest and into your backyard, glancing down with some mild suspicion at the sap-covered girl still clinging to your arm to help her walk. Despite the restrictions you had been placing on her, she only seemed to grow more pleased with every affirmation reported. "Are you sure you're listening?"

"I'm always listening, Master." The literally amber eyed girl replied, tilting her neck back to look up at you. "Stay away from the Shrine, tell you if I start to hear anything. No matter what, you'll make time for me, and it's something we'll never, ever tell anyone."

"You don't have a problem with any of that?" If someone had tried to enforce something like this on you, there was little doubt in your mind you'd have likely held a secret from them out of spite. Ari, on the other hand...

"I won't disappoint you, Master."

...Ari wasn't like you, at all. The honest smile she wore while promising to do her best didn't hold so much as a trace of the resistance, or resentment, that would have clouded your expression in a similar position. "Alright." You'd accept it for now, and hope she was true to her word. You didn't have any reason to doubt the timid Testament, and more to the point, you didn't have any other recourse than to try and trust her earnesty on the matter. "Then how about now?"

"?" Her head tilted quizzically.

"How do you feel? I don't know how conscious you were, but you were in there for at least a month before I came. Do you feel any different? Something that wasn't there before?"
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She blinked slowly, a troubled curve twisting through her lips in thought. "I feel... A little stronger?" She stressed the qualifier uncertainly, grip fastening around your sleeve as she admitted it. "I can't feel my bruises anymore, so my body isn't as sore." You remember the mottled skin that had splotched across her body. Deeply inflicted wounds from her time as a slave, which had been reluctant to fully heal even after the months you spent with her. Given their longevity, you wouldn't have been surprised if there had been some sort of internal bleeding, but such a judgement wasn't something you had been qualified to make. "Everything seems a little brighter now, I think?"

"Too bright? Are your eyes more sensitive to light?" As far as you knew, she'd been holed up inside of the wooden golem for most of the month. If that were the case, it wouldn't be unusual for her eyes to have adjusted to the darkness until now.

"Nn." She shook her head, wine red hairband catching a sheen of sunlight from between her clumped lockes of hair. "I'm just happy you came. I knew you'd come, but..." Ari trailed off quietly, nuzzling against your arm affectionately. "You really did. Even for someone like me."

You decided not to mention how close you came to having ultimately abandoned her inside the Atelier. That was that, and this was the choice you had made in the end; What-Ifs would only hurt things here.

"If your time in the Atelier helped you recover, then at least some good came out of it." Fingers run across your scalp tiredly, momentarily hesitating when you couldn't find the customary texture of your headband. "Pretty soon you'll probably be able to walk on your own, as well."

Ari tripped forward almost on queue, just barely being prevented from a sudden faceplant by your grip.

"...Well, maybe not that soon." You correct yourself with a sigh. "At the very least, you can probably get around with that apparition aiding you."

"I'll... Do my best." She hesitated for a moment before answering, glancing behind the two of you, towards the lazily following figure of the towering, flesh covered abomination. What would have inspired fear in anyone else was something of a symbol of safety as far as Ari was concerned; It had been her faithful protector for months now. Her gaze lingered on it cryptically for a few moments, before she made an effort to stand a little more solidly on her own two feet. She mumbled something under her breath, tongue darting out to wet her lips uncertainly.

One step.
And then the next.

A determined glint shimmered through her eyes, smile setting firmly. Her hand hadn't left your sleeve, but each step was more certain than the last.
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Your house was still inseperably intertwined with the roots and vines that the Dryad apparitions had ensnared it with, but they no longer held the sort of pulsing life which had filled the labyrinthine corridors. There was plenty of time for you to wander its once familiar halls to inspect what kind of damage had been done, and the outcome was... Discouraging. There wasn't any way that the original structure of your house could be extracted from beneath the invading plantlife.

You didn't know how long this place had been in your family, but you'd spent over half of your life here. It wasn't just a house to you, it had been home. Your home.

A frown burgeons as you shake your head silently, hand sliding down the roughly barkhewn walls. You could have it torn down and rebuilt, but you doubted there was enough time, or resources, to do it any time soon. Not with Carona's own reconstruction taking priority... And even if you did rebuild, it wouldn't be the same house you had lived in until now.

All things considered, if all you'd had to pay to get out of this whole endeavour were memories, then you should be thankful... But just because the price wasn't crippling, didn't make the loss any less bitter to swallow.

Fortunately, the baths still somewhat worked. You'd left Ari to get herself clean, promising to return with a fresh set of clothes before she was done... And a final parting warning that she'd have to do it again if her hair was still sticky when she got out. You doubt the bashful Testament was as peculiar about the state of her hair as you were, but if she found your insistence unreasonable, she didn't object.

Which left you a brief moment of time to wander around on your own. Time to think on your own.

For over a decade, this house had been your entire world. You had been content to while away every day of your life, secluded away reading and pursuing whatever hobby that caught your interests. If it hadn't been for the sudden arranged marriage, you'd have probably still been walking these halls, nose buried in a book somewhere.

It was hard to even recall the time before you had passed the Rite; Like a distant dream. Nondescript feelings of nostalgia, from a time when you hadn't felt chained to the family name, or its obligations. Things had changed. You had changed. So much so that it was difficult to remember what you used to be like. When your pride had driven you so readily, and every obstacle had been something annoying and beneath you. When the only thing you had cared about was passing the Rite, to seize your birthright and get back at your aunt and uncle.

You still remembered trying to grandstand in front of your assembled guests, and how petulant you had felt when your aunt and uncle had brushed it aside. The satisfaction you had felt in realizing an opportunity to empty their coffers out of spite, taking all three of the selected candidates as your Testament.
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There hadn't been a single thought to what that course of action was going to mean for you. You'd practically crowed your decision to the assembly with pride, certain that you'd struck a blow to make them think twice before trying to push you around again.

Back then, if you had only chosen one of them, instead... If you had taken the Rite seriously, and not been so preoccupied trying to be spiteful... If you had only had a one Testament to focus all of your attention on...

How much of your troubles had you brought on yourself for the sake of pride?
How many times had that same pride been wounded when your lack of experience showed?
How often were you driven to desperation to crawl out of a pit you dug for yourself?

You'd done things you would have never dreamed of doing during those months. Amazing things. Despicable things. Things that still haunted you, and things that had changed more lives than just your own. By the end of it all... Passing the Rite had been the last thing on your mind. The fact it was over was something you didn't feel had truly sunk in until this exact moment. You distinctly remember having prepared yourself to give up the family name entirely if you had to, just to fulfill the obligations you had to your Testament, and the people who had found themselves following you along the way.

The entire process had ripped the floor out from beneath you; Supported by the one person you'd felt certain wanted you to fail, and betrayed by someone you were confident would have your back. All of that effort, all of that work, and when you'd finally resolved yourself to deal with the consequences... you'd passed.

That whirlwind of emotions had left a pile of issues to sort through which you hadn't even begun to address yet.

Your aunt and uncle had been manipulating you, but to what end? How much had they known, and just not told you? Why hadn't they told you? You had admired aunt Clara - Unabashedly looked up to the woman - But now you couldn't see her without a whisper of doubt in the back of your mind. The respect and trust you'd felt was as frayed as your heart, and it hurt.

Caylen had left you behind, keeping Luna only knew what sort of secrets from you. He'd let that harlot bitch into his ear, and turned on you... Maybe even turned on the entire family, if his departure to meet with Artemis was any indication. He must have known what such an action would do to the balance in La'Fiel, but he went anyway.

The only person you'd been able to rely on since your sister and parents had died... You had no idea what to think of Asche anymore. What she knew about this bracelet Relic that she'd never bothered to inform you, or since when she had known about the Fae beyond the river. Each time she had tried to warn you away, she knew, but why hadn't she told you before now? Why wait all this time?
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You found yourself lingering before a shattered mirror; The broken debris of your personal dresser from before the hostile take over of the Dryad apparitions. Three headbands lay scattered across the root threaded floor: A muddy brown, pastel yellow, and ashen gray.

You'd no intention of taking back the one you had gifted to Ari. It was clear to see how deeply she had treasured even that casual gift... But you would be lying if you said that your hair felt too free without something in place.

Something to endure...
Or would a subtle touch be best?
And even if you didn't know where you stood, she was still so important to you.

Or, maybe...

Stupid, stupid child.

How will you wear your hair? Why?

>Brown
>Yellow
>Gray
>Braid

Additional:
>What do you want to pick up/do before returning to Ari?
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>>1947851
>And even if you didn't know where you stood, she was still so important to you.
>>Gray
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>>1947851
>Yellow
We demonstrated a serious lack of subtlety before. Let's try to change this.
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>>1947851


I think one guy wanted to inspect the glowing tree, so let's do that.

Have we left anything valuable here? Rinnier bring her staff with her? What about the oakenrue cores, would they be inert now?
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>>1947851
I think giving Ari the headband was more significant than we'd realized.
>>Brown
We'll need to be able to weather the storms ahead.
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>>1947851
Take a look at the library; books are expensive, and we've spent a lot of time reading. Let's see how badly damaged our collection is, maybe vainly try to move the less damaged ones somewhere less likely to be further damaged?

Look at the old Oakenbear remains in the yard, make sure it's not looking like it's regrowing.

Snag any valuables or mementos.

A walking stick might be useful for the trip back. We should grab one before we head out.
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>>1947851
Actually, we have a wooden abomination. Let's load up our books and wardrobe on her.
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>>1948026
We don't have anywhere to store that much stuff in town. We have lodgings, but nothing substantial, I think.
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>>1947851
> neither

Let's move forward. Not back. Hell let's cut our hair.

It'll freak out everyone who knows us. A new haircut. A new Irulen Valen. A short cut that works with out androgey.
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>>1947851
>What do you want to pick up/do before returning to Ari?

Check on the original Nymph wood that was left here to see if it too is dead.

Get our books together.

> Remember to warn Ari about not meditating on Luna.

Grab one of those books as a gift for Mim. Some archives or diary of an ancestor or something. A consolation prize for not being able to tell her what happened in the woods.

>>1948026
And supporting this. Also are tubs common? Should we bring ours?
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>>1948072
Let's not. we've always been meticulous with our hair. Just lobbing it off for no real reason doesn't make any sense.
Rue doesn't /want/ to look androgynous; her long hair is the only feminine thing about her.
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>>1948080
Hey it'll grow back. It can be a reminder of how far we've come and how far we have to go. Also kind of a penance for our past failures so that we can stop carrying them with us. A fresh start. Our hairs the biggest point of pride for us, the same pride that's been our biggest self imposed obstacle.

Besides we can maybe learn how to dress not like a dude then as well.

Or can you not really give up anything. Greedy child, to think that change doesn't cost anything.
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>>1948080
>>1947851
Either we cut our hair or wear a headband that matches Ari. Make her super happy. The whole "master" thing grates on me, I want to build up her self worth. Remind her that we want her to be strong enough to stand beside us, not to hold us up.

I wonder if Ari would know anything about how to contact the slavers to find Rinniers people too.
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>>1948087
Yea, over several /years/.
We already bear our failures, we have no need for penance.
We can't just dump our failures mentally by cutting it, that trivializes them.
We got over one hump, yea, but only as a part of a larger problem; a fresh start is for beginnings, and ends, not middles.
Our hair is one of the few vanities we have left; you would take that from her?
We have already paid for change. Quit trying to collect interest.
We don't dress like a dude, we just don't have any figure.
>>1948089
Or we could
>braid
it. We don't have a matching red, or it would have been listed.
I don't like the 'master' thing either, but we've got more important things to do.

>I want to build up her self worth. Remind her that we want her to be strong enough to stand beside us, not to hold us up.
Stuff like this is why I'm starting to despise her. Riz only has so much attention, can we please spend it with /interesting/ characters?
Ari wouldn't even talk when we first got her, she's not going to know anything.
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>>1948098
Ari IS interesting. We just have to pry it out of her. She's quiet, not boring.

Remember when she rode a GIANT FUCKING SURPRISE TREE GOLEM to our rescue?

And hair cutting is a traditional atonement and sign of transition and growth around the entire world.

Irulen is bound by her hair. You can't just change the packaging and claim it's totally new now.
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>>1948098
Besides. For Ari who was literally beat down as a slave to the point the bruises never healed and she needed a staff to walk, we're the one who saved her from that for no reason since she was "useless". Then we gave her everything we could including teaching her to read. Then we gave a wayyyyyyy overpowered magical protection stick. Then we went and saved her again from a crazy eldritch atelier after she fell unconscious and was protected by said OP stick we gave her.

So her position of adoring us is understandable.
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>>1947851
>How will you wear your hair? Why?
Stick bun. It usually symbolize an unconscious desire for the control you lack in your life.

>>1948072
This ain't anime son

>>1948079
>Diary
Let's not accidentally give Luna any family secrets. Maybe Irue pressed flowers or something as a child, that's a pretty standard past time for young kids. Something personal like that is worth much more as a token of friendship.

>>1948108
... Why did we never take her to a Wisp adept to get her bruises looked at?

If you look at the ask.fm, it's really meta but whatever, Ari is not a boring character. Won't be. Reading the things she's actually said over the course of the quest beginning with when Irue was bedridden after getting Rinniers staff- and then promptly getting killed again by her- she's freaking me out. I thought maybe it wouldn't be so bad since she's on our side but now she's a walking, talking kill switch for humanity...

>>1944099
>>1944233
I marathoned that quest a couple of weeks ago, caught up by thread 28. Without any spoilers I can say that based on what you just said you will be in for a couple of nice surprises.
If you like Malachi, the scenes with him and Jorgen together are rare but golden.
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>>1948106
There are plenty of already interesting characters, we don't need to work a developing them.
I suspect that was more due to the tree than the girl, but it was cool.
In some places, sure, but not everywhere. Also, this isn't earth.
She isn't bound by it, it is a part of her. It's a sign of her heritage, her noble standing, and that yes, she is a girl.
>All change must be accompanied by a physical representation.
What? We've constantly changing in little ways, do we need to be constantly changing our appearance to match?

I wasn't arguing her adoration of us; I was arguing that if we have to pry the interesting parts out of her, it isn't worth it. There are plenty of interesting characters already, and Riz has a finite amount of time.
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>>1947851
>>Brown
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>>1948079
>Remember to warn Ari about not meditating on Luna.
Seconding, but tell her not to try to get close to any of the mana. She's going to need to find a new hobby.

>>1947851
>Braid

We should meditate with Ari on Dryad later, see if it does anything now that Dryad is asleep. I mean, if we can teach Ari how to fight with Adept powers then it'd be prudent to do so.
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>>1947851
>How will you wear your hair? Why?
Is this an aesthetic only choice or is there some bigger meaning to it?
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>>1948143
In thread 1, our choice of a headband was part of the chargen.
We still don't know exactly what it meant.
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>>1948140
Who says all the Mana agreed with Luna?

>>1948119
It's not because Irulens hair is a physical example. It's because of what her hair has meant to her. A source of pride, but also a hair trigger for her to lash out violently. Remember that part? A lever for others to control her. A vanity that keeps getting in the way.

We weren't able to give up Ari. But could we give up our hair?

Can we recognize the difference between loving another person, versus loving a thing? Or just ourselves?

Are you really so different after all?

In a meta sense I could accept >>1948116 stick bun as well. Cutting ones hair is often the same thing. Imposing your will to make a visible change as a sign of feeling in control. "I can't change that, but I CAN change this".

>>1948153
Read through again and look at how angry we get throughout the quest. Our hair being touched setting us off is even in the pastebin.
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>>1948176
And seriously I have to ask. Why, WHY do you keep writing Irulen? Is it the Valen equivalent of turrent? Did you accidentally it into your spellchecker? Are you just waiting for someone to ask?
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>>1948176
>Who says all the Mana agreed with Luna?
While Luna is the only mana likely to react violently, Ari is still capable of infecting any mana she becomes favoured by.
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>>1948186
I don't think things work quite like that.
As far as I remember, infecting Mana occurs through its link with its Adepts. The Adepts think like their Mana, but if a sufficient number of them changes their thinking, the Mana will change as well. So what we have to be wary of is putting Ari in contact with any Adepts.
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>>1948191
>"We've ascertained it to be unnecessary."
We should do it anyway. Why teach her about other mana when the risk exists and when she's already beloved by a mana that she can't possibly infect any more.
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>>1948218
I think she's beloved only by a specific Oakenrue, not the whole Mana.
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Rolled 4 (1d20)

>>1948218
Because forewarned is forearmed? She can learn about them. She just can't meditate on them.

>>1948178
Irulen is the name of the House of Corrino wife to Maud'dib, a tragic figurehead who never replaced the real love of his life who bore him two children. She found refuge in her books and compiled a thorough history of the realm and chronicled the rise of Paul Atriedes to the throne.

Honestly Irue shares a lot of qualities with her and indeed if we had ended up marrying Prince McRoyalFace we could have ended up with a very similar story.

But yeah I just honestly thought Irue was short for Irulen and nobody ever brought it up before. Well. That's rather embarrassing. Wish I could say I has some plan or secret reference or even autocorrect issue but nope.

My phone actually autocorrects to Irue. I just liked the sound of Irulen better.
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>>1948239
I always thought you were shortening Irue Valen to one word. Iru-len
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>>1947851
>brown
Not everything has to have some been meaning, guys. It's just a hairstyle.
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>>1948409
> In Valen Quest

>>1947851
I like the haircut idea. But maybe a Bob or something definitely Feminine.
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>>1948448
I am violently opposed to cutting our hair.
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>>1948176
>It's because of what her hair has meant to her.
She considers it a part of her. I'd be mad is someone messed up my arm.
>
We weren't able to give up Ari. But could we give up our hair?
No. In fact, our inability to give Ari up is further evidence of an inability to give up our hair.

>>1948452
In case it wasn't obvious, I am as well.
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>>1948452
Yea, I'm not a fan either. Rue is strongly attached to her hair, there's no reason to give it up.
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>>1947851
Also, congrats Riz. You've cultivated a playerbase that is seriously considering the complex ramifications of how to wear the PC's hair.
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>>1947851
>>Braid
Because it's CUTE
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>>1948490
Yeah this is seriously unhealthy. And he whines that he believes that we don't care about the characters
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>>1948498
>>1948490

I see people never played on /tg/. Final boss battle with long term ramifications? 4 players.

Dress up for something minor? 3 threads, 40 players, 60 unique ID's, 800 posts.

Whatever. Everyone gets the same number of votes.
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>>1947851
Happy Thanksgiving! Hopefully the vote goes well.
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>>1948233
No, check the last thread near the end, it was confirmed that Dryad has found someone to share their love with.
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>>1947851
Gray. If the theme recently has been looking to the past for answers, and this loss of trust in the people around us is starting to wear, maybe this kind of grounding is what we need.

And I'll be damned if we pick brown and side with Gnome.
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>>1948608
I'm reasonably certain our hairband isn't going to give us a Mana affinity. Our red one didn't do us any favors with salamander.
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>>1947851
I want to pick braid, because big braids are cute, but I'm pretty sure the consequences of looking like Irue's mom will be terrifying.
>Gray
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>>1948608
Fertile soil is black. Brown is a meme
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>>1948616
>>1948634
>Something to endure.
We probably wouldn't gain affinity but this sounds like Gnome's personality to me.

I don't know if the others were related to mana at all but just enduring alone isn't going to solve our problems for us.
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>>1948623
>>1947851
You've sold me. Forget the terror of shears and scissors.

> Grey it is.
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>>1948680
Brown and red look like shit together though.
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>>1947851
>tell Ari that we have a name and we'd like her to start using it.
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>>1947851
> Grey

And supporting

>>1947995
>>1948017
>>1948026
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>>1948409
>>1948138
>>1948008
Brown!

>>1948623
>>1948608
>>1947883
>>1948681
>>1948794
Gray!

>>1947897
Yellow!

>>1948140
>>1948496
Braid!

>>1948116
Stick...Bun? This could have been interesting.

>Voting to cut Irue's hair
Irue will cut you.

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>>1947995
>>1948079
>>1948794
Nymph Wood!
Rinnier has her staff, Oakenrue cores are inert.

>>1948017
>>1948794
Check on library! And Oakenbear arse! We don't really have any mementos we aren't already wearing.

>>1948079
A book for mim!
Tubs are the most common thing. Showers are rare. Also you don't really have a place to put a bunch of stuff back in Carona. There is an alternative, but... We'll get to that.

>>1948079
>>1948140
No more meditating to Luna!

>>1948751
Coax Ari into using our name!

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>>1948178
Irulen never bothered me, any. I am admittedly curious why there seems to be a running gag that no one can ever spell Reiner Rinyer Rinner Renna Rinnier correctly. It happens with Cirna Carna Carona sometimes, too.

>>1948545
...Today I learned about Canadian thanksgiving! I am now slightly more worldly.
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>>1948808

You've missed a vote to use the Oakenrue as a lowly beast of burden here: >>1948026
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>>1948821
see
> Also you don't really have a place to put a bunch of stuff back in Carona.
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>>1948826
We'll put it in Rinnier's room, she doesn't sleep there anyway.

We've endured too much to not have at least our clothes on hand.
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>>1948808
See. I never had a problem with Rinnier. It's close to my aunt Rennie's name which is an alternate spelling or Renee.

So much like I identify mentally Irue with Princess Irulen, I identify Rinnier with my Aunt.

Because the redhead princess from the desert where they ruled with thwir gods blessing, whose people are driven out of their homeland and enslaved into bondage while being ignored by their God, and who is good at numbers and handles the finances - Just wondering of Roz gave her a very Jewish name by accident or ?

Anyways Happy New Year (Yom Kippur) as well!
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>>1948808
>Rinnier
huh. that looks like a bad misspelling to me.
>Reiner
seems like the correct one.
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>>1948808
>This could have been interesting.
See what you guys did? You picked something that isn't interesting! Now we'll never know what could've been.

>Rinnier
I always make sure I get it right, to date I don't think I've gotten it wrong once. I've spelled it correctly far, far more times than I've remembered something correctly...
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>>1948846
Reiner is a common German/Dutch last name.

Personally I've always pronounced it in my head rhyming with Perrier
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>>1948863
I was going to support you originally.

But I'd rather have a grey headband than a brown one. What could have been.
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>>1948808
I'll support stickbun again if the two Braids want to with that instead.
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>>1948808
What would have happened if "Haircut" won?
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>>1948883
But let's be real, a headband isn't mutually exclusive with a stick bun.

By your powers combined!
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>>1948892
All haircut votes are ignored.

>>1948896
...Do... Do you want to combine them?
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>>1948901
Damn straight I do
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I mean, we chose 3 Testaments, what is 2 hairstyles compared to that? 1 less!
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>>1948901
No
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>>1948910
Braided bun with both headbands intersecting at an angle.
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>>1948901
Nope.
You closed the vote already, anyway.
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>>1948901
. . . A braided stickbun with a grey headband sounds doable actually.
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>>1948926
This is some 4 dimensional shit you've got going there my man.

I'll just vote for it the next time we have blown our way through a wardrobe-altering, world-shattering event
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>>1948930
Let's put it in our notes.

I mean we could also braid in a grey ribbon to our hair before putting it up in a bun and have it hang down a bit.

> Never get Pixie Cut Irue though

VQ is suffering.
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>>1948901
Pass. That seems overly complicated for irue, anyway.
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>>1948930
WE CAN GO FANCIER
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>>1948945
You're going to keep going further until I suggest we use the Oakenrue as the hairpin, aren't you?
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>>1948938
Votes over I'm just having fun now.

I just despise the color brown since we have red eyes it'll look like crap, and didn't want stick bun / braid to split the vote.
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>>1948937
>Pixie Cut Irue
I don't have a reaction image for the disgust I have right now
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>>1948949
I'm not against that idea.
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>>1948930
We can also keep that hairstyle for when we have an "official" event to attend. Headband can be for daily activities.

It's not like we can't switch back and forth.
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>>1948951
Because you don't have an image for what isn't there?
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You shifted to the side critically, trying to see how the newly donned ashen band looked from different angles. The familiar pressure of the accessory pressing against your scalp was a little comforting, but you'd been wearing your red one for so long that even this replacement still didn't feel quite right.

It just needed some time to be broken in, though. There was a time when you'd swap bands more often, but even then you had kept this one around for rare and... Deliberate uses. This one in particular wasn't something you had ever worn for style, but it had a sentimental value which drew you to it even now. Especially now.

A delicate frown thinned out across lips, thoughts straying to the tenuous doubts you had started having regarding your maid. There were plenty of things you needed to take care of, but that was something that clawed at you in a different way. For so long, she had been your only constant companion; The only one who had felt comfortable enough around to not bother putting up a front, or trying to watch your step. You wanted answers. An explanation. Some kind of reassurance, to put this niggling distrust to rest.

...Had your eyes always been this empty?

Whatever, you got what you came for. Besides the new accessory, you'd snagged a change of clothes for yourself and Ari, but there was still a bit of time left before you had to finish the circuit. In the meantime, you may as well take a look at how much damage had been done to your library. It was one of the few places in this house that held any possessions you'd actually miss, and last you could remember, it had been all but taken over by the Nymph's Wood sapling.

That little tree was another problem you weren't sure how to handle. Elly had said Nymph's Wood was a tree blessed by Dryad, but the apparitions hadn't reacted well to it at all. You're pretty sure its presence was all that had kept the apparition in your house from having slaughtered Mim, and the fact it held a strong enough deterrent to prevent even something like that was baffling. Even the Fae seemed to have been averse to it somehow; It hadn't been until you gave your clipping to Priat that you had been able to enter the Imprisoned Child's Atelier.

So what was the deal, there? If it was related to Dryad, why did Dryad treat it like some sort of anathema?

It wasn't as if you'd find any answers from the plant itself, but as you approached the overgrown remnants of your library, it was clear that the sapling hadn't been absent. It had already grown trecherously fast when you were here the last time, its tendril like roots having pierced and strangled the much thicker encroachment of Dryad's apparitions and established a small sanctuary, but... In the time between then and now, that space had seemingly become more akin to a blight.
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The pale tendrils of the Nymph's Wood had continued to travel along the more natural wooden roots which ensnared your halls, twisting and clinging to them in a relentless advance that served to drain the life from their straddled hosts; Once strong lengths of wooden growth being reduced to hollowed, fragile scrap which broke apart beneath your cautious steps.

The entirety of the Library had been protectively overtaken by the Nymph's Wood expansion, with entire shelves of books being hidden behind a creeping veil of pale tendrils. The books themselves didn't seem to be damaged any, but getting to them would require no small amount of effort in tearing open a hole in the growth.

...You weren't sure if Dryad going to sleep had affected it one way or another. At the very least, it wasn't glowing anymore, but the way it looked to feed off of Dryad's growths was more than a little concerning. The apparition had refused to so much as touch it back then, and you can't help but wonder if maybe it had sensed some sort of danger within the deceptively benign little sapling.

Was it really safe to leave this alone, so close to the Fae Forest? It was something you'd have to look into later, when you had more resources to deal with it; You doubted just taking an axe to the little sapling would be enough to get rid of it, and it wasn't as if you were exactly suited to be a lumberjack in the first place.

Unfortunately, with your library all but overtaken by the Nymph's Wood, it didn't look like you'd have much success in trying to load your own Dryad apparition down with your life-long collection of books and tomes. Even getting it to come in here probably wouldn't result in anything good, which meant you'd have to leave them behind for now. It was only a temporary measure, because it wasn't as if you simply planned to abandon your estate, but... There were more important things to handle first. At least you didn't need to worry about your books getting damaged in the meantime.

...What did cause you to hesitate while leaving, however, were the discarded pile of books stacked neatly on one of the library tables. They were some of the tomes Mim had picked out... And it looks like she hadn't bothered to put them back before eventually leaving.

You had promised you'd tell her what happened when you returned, but after what you had learned... Her affiliation with Luna made confessions like that difficult. You didn't want to just reject her again, though. Not after last time.

It felt dirty, but maybe you could compromise by giving her a book like she had wanted initially? It wasn't as if the books themselves were what she had been after, but... It was something, at least. A peace offering until you could make it up to her properly.

...The silence while you wrestled over the idea felt a little pitiful. You sighed as you left, not feeling like dwelling overlong on how awkwardly you were trying to fix this.
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"Ari, are you done yet?" You'd eventually made your way back to the bathroom you'd left Ari in, book tucked under your arm. "I left your clothes inside-" The door clicked open as Ari stepped out, wet hair hanging heavily down around her face, but none the less sap free. Your wine colored hairband soaked a slightly darker shade of red from the dampness, as it flattened her hair down messily. "-The door... Do you know how to use a hair band?"

"I've never had one until now." She admitted, one hand protectively raising towards the accessory in question, "Did I do something wrong?"

"They're meant to help hold your hair in place." You slide it off of her, ignoring slightly panicked widening of her eyes as you set about brushing the little Testament's hair around. "I use them to keep mine back, but yours isn't long enough for that."

"I'll grow it out!" She insisted firmly, eyes struggling to follow the now missing hairband.

"That'd take too long, and it's not necessary besides." You mutter distractedly, finishing your rearrangement of her hair as you slipped the damp headband back on. "Did you forget to take it off before you got in the bath?"

She mumbled something evasively, craning her head back as she investigated her newly acquired hairstyle with her hands. "Is it fine now...?"

"Yes, it's fine." You hadn't changed much in the first place, just evened out the strands so her hair didn't dry into knots later. "Before I forget, I don't want you to keep trying to meditate to Luna. After the Atelier..." You trailed off, unsure as to whether this was really necessary. "...Your affinity has probably changed, and you might get hurt."

"Yes, Master." She agreed easily, not seeming to mind the sudden order to abandon everything she had been studying until now. "Is there something else I should try instead?"

"...Dryad, probably." You murmured thoughtfully. If Ari really had garnered Dryad's love, there was a strong possibility that she could qualify as one of the slumbering Mana's Adepts. Although, with said Mana currently sleeping, you had no way of knowing just how that would affect her. "I'll go over it with you later."

"Yes, Master!"

You paused as you stepped past Ari and into the bathroom yourself, turning back to the little Testament. You hadn't given it much thought, but she'd called you nothing but master ever since you'd met. Considering that she used to be a slave, you suppose it made sense, but...

"Ari?"

"Yes, Master?"

"...I have a name, you know."

"Yes, Master."
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You scratch your temple, awkwardly meeting the beaming adoration of your submissive Testament. Aside from Rinnier, you don't recall if you ever actually explained the concept of what a Testament was to... Any of them. Kara certainly hadn't cared about any of the finer details, and Ari... Honestly hadn't caused enough trouble for it to occur to you. "Do you remember how we met?"

"Yes, Master!" Her expressioned brightened considerably. "I was terrified, but you were patient with me, even when I kept crying."

...Ah, you remembered that. You had absolutely no idea how to handle people when they broke down, and ended up almost crying in the middle of the kitchen yourself. Come to think of it, you still weren't any good dealing with crying people. It was so much easier if they were just angry with you, like Rinnier usually was.

"I didn't take the three of you in as slaves, or servants." You forged along regardless, "You three were... Are my Testament. Legally speaking, that means that your words and actions reflect my own. You're my partners. Peers." You hesitated for a second, eventually letting your shoulders sag gently. "Friends, I guess."

"Yes, Master!"

"..." Your lips purse, "So call me by my name from now on, alright?"

"Yes, Master Irue!"

"...Is the 'Master' part nonnegotiable?" You query in a deadpan, watching her brilliant smile flinch at the first signs of your disappointment.

"I'm... I'm not ready to let it go." She confessed nervously, fingers curling around the hem of her shirt. "Rinny and Kara told me too, that I'm not... A slave, anymore. I understand that! B-But..." So it wasn't a misunderstanding? Come to think of it, she and Kara seemed to have a good relationship as well. How much time did she spend around her fellow Testament, anyway? "I'm happy with this much." She murmured, voice dropping until you weren't sure whether her words were meant for you, or herself. "Just this much is fine."

>Let her do as she wants.
>Insist on something else. (what?)
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>>1949758
>Insist on something else. (what?)

Miss or Sir. She can call us Mistress Valen since that's our formal title in public, but when it's in private we want her to be a little more informal.

She might be happy with just that much, but we want her to have so much more. Because she deserves it.

She went into the woods alone for us.
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>>1949758
Do we have a title as Head of House that's useful for conversation? "Head of House" is kinda a mouthful.
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>>1949781
Not really, no. You could shorten it generically to "Head", but that's not very attractive. Of course you could also be called Master of the House, which shortens to "Master". I'm helpful.
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>>1949842
Is that her tit she's holding?
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>Nymph's wood ate our library
I wonder if Ari can even enter our library anymore after being injected with Dryad's love juices. Or if this affected/will affect her progress in learning to read at all. What would have happened if we named her Luna in the beginning instead?

>>1949758
Can't even make the obvious joke and ask her to call us big bro/sis.

I'd suggest coming up with, or letting her come up with a personal nickname for us if there were even anything to work with for "Irue" and if telling someone to give you a nickname wasn't shitty.

Master is fine. As far as anyone's concerned she's like Asche - a retainer/attendant/maid.
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>>1950083
>What would have happened if we named her Luna in the beginning instead?
https://ask.fm/RizQM/answers/139675003926
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>>1950105
> Ari is uninteresting he said

Jesus fucking Christ.
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>>1949774
1. Insisting on something else! We're not your Master!

>>1950083
2. Master's fine! You can call Irue whatever.

We're tied. Should I flip?
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>>1950199
Sure.

Or like I said, compromise. Master in public, but less formal when it's just us.
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>>1950366
Writing a compromise, then.
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If it wasn't a misunderstanding, then there wasn't much point in trying to correct her. Whatever hang up she seemed to have on the phrase was enough that she had clung to it this long. If you were being honest, it was rare that Ari resisted anything you asked of her. Letting her have something like this wouldn't be too much of an issue.

Still, while you were used to most people showing some degree of respect or formality when dealing with you, 'Master' was a little...

"If it's something you insist on, then doing it in public is fine. If we're alone though, I'd prefer you come up with something a little less formal." It felt strange trying to negotiate less respect, particularly in private, but this was something of a unique case. It wasn't like you could have tried to argue it in reverse either, and convinced her to only call you 'Master' in private... That could end disastrously.

"I don't mind what you settle on, but think of something besides 'Master' for times like this, alright?"

"...Yes, Master."

...You couldn't expect her to come up with something immediately, huh. "Think about it, at least. One day I'd like to be able to rely on you like I do with Kara and Rinnier. You're one of my Testament after all, same as they are." It didn't take someone well versed in Shade's studies to realize that Ari had issues she needed to work through. She'd been all but broken when you met, and it was only recently that you could venture to say that she was even beginning to properly recover - Even if it was just in a physical sense.

Mentally, maybe she was still just as battered and bruised as she was back then. Since she had been so quick to give you her loyalty in the first place, you had spent most of your time trying to handle Kara's obtuse issues, and make a breakthrough with Rinnier. You should probably make a point of trying to bolster her confidence every now and then.

These thoughts swirled around while you bathed, before you finally gave in to the long awaited opportunity to actually wash your hair. No more twigs, no more dirt, no more bugs. No more strands stuck together in horrible mini-knots due to tree sap. No more dried sweat matting it against your neck. No more disgusting river scum film soaked in.

If only this bathwater had been hot. You'd have been more than willing to just spend an entire day lounging in it after the wreck you had been through... But as it was, even this room-temperature pool was starting to give you a chill.

...It would still be nearly an hour until you managed to pull yourself out, though.
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It was getting closer to the end of the day by the time you had dried yourself and redressed. Some minor foraging in your twice ruined kitchen produced enough edible food to tide both Ari and you over through the coming night, and it was thanks to that you were currently gnawing on a piece of jerky while making a final round of inspection of your house and yard.

The towering ass of an oakenbear which had become the most iconic and permanent fixture in your frontyard still hadn't done anything particularly concerning. You feel like having the front half of the torso planted imposingly at the head of your estate would have been more dignified, but there really wasn't much you could do about that. In part because you don't remember where the front half of this thing had been left in the forest, but also because the only one of your employ currently capable of removing the gargantuan wooden statue of an arse wasn't here.

...Vague memories of the month you spent drunk seemed to imply that your knights may have tried at one point, but discovered Kara had planted it too deeply into the soil.

Aside from that, there wasn't much to note of the outside. There were some scorch marks in the grass where you'd had Priat set that legion of Dryad apparitions on fire, but even that had was partially recovered already. The worst part of your house really was just that - The house itself.

You'd need to think about how to deal with that. Even if you were Mayor of Carona, you didn't have any ambitions towards living there any longer than necessary.

As for the interior, the structure of the house itself was basically a lost cause. Priat's own rampage had destroyed several halls, and while you probably could keep it standing after removing the wooden overgrowth, the sheer amount of holes and compromised...

You weren't an architect, but... It looked fucked.

Luckily most of the furniture inside was still in decent shape, and your Library had been spared any serious damage by the presence of the Nymph's Wood... So the only things you would have had problems replacing were still salvageable, with some effort. All you really lost here were the memories.

"We'll stay here for the night and get moving in the morning." You decide, watching the shadows grow as dusk approached. "Ready, Ari?"

"?" She blinked up at you, a piece of half-chewed jerky still stubbornly refusing to break off from the strip in her hands.

It was better you get this out of the way now, when you were alone and had some spare time, than wait and try to find an opportunity once you returned to Carona. "I want you to help me try some things, so I'll be teaching you a different way to meditate."

"Yes, Mas-" Her reflexive answer hiccuped, leaving the little Testament fidgeting uncomfortably. "Yes!"
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So you spent that night trying to teach Ari how Dryad's meditation worked. Considering your own lack of talent in that regard, you were primarily just doing your best to recite the instructions Elly had given you, and hoping Ari could make use of her natural affinity to procure some results... And from there, maybe start making progress on her own.

"So first, try to imagine someone you love."

"..."

"If it helps, just think of Kara, or Rinnier... And then try to imagine everyone is Kara. Or Rinnier."

At least with Ari, she seemed to make friends easily enough. As far as you knew no one she loved had ever betrayed, or tried to use her. On the other hand, the fact she had been in such a beaten down state, and a slave, at her age really didn't speak positively about her past. It was another aspect of her life you really knew nothing about, but it also wasn't something she had ever expressed any interest in speaking about.

Still, her amber eyes remained rapt on you as the lesson went on, attentively drinking in every instruction and tip you could think to give. "The end goal as far as I can tell is to facilitate... Openness, I guess? Unconditional love, or acceptance." With any luck, Dryad's natural predilection would make it easier for her. "So, try to think of everything as a world full of things you might like. New friends, you haven't gotten to know yet. Try to get a feel for that kind of excitement."

"...Is this how you did it, Master?"

"...No." You admit flatly, "I am uniquely unsuited for this Mana, but these were the only instructions I was given."

"Oh." Ari mouthed a soft acknowledgement, devoid of inflection. For a few minutes the only other sound in the room were the creaking of the root-snared house, and the occasional owl from outside the open window. "Will I feel different if it works?"

"Fundamentally, the results of meditation shouldn't change from any other Mana, so if you had success with Luna before this, I don't think it will be much different." You explained thoughtfully, trying to dig out what you knew of the process from your studies. "Dryad is a bit of an odd case though, and is actually sleeping right now... So I'm not sure if it's even possible anymore."

"This is part of our secret, isn't it?" She closed her eyes, shuffling across the gap between you to lean her head tiredly against your shoulder. "I shouldn't tell anyone else about this."

"Right. When we get back to Carona, you probably won't have many opportunities to try this... So do your best now, while you can."
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"Mm." She yawned a sleepy acknowledgement, "Can you tell me the instructions again?"

"Which ones?" Your lessons with Elly had gone on for several hours, but hadn't exactly born you any fruit. It wasn't until you had abused your late sister's Relic that you'd gotten a peep out of Dryad. While that wasn't too surprising to you, if Ari really was beloved by the forgotten Mana, then polishing that affinity could yield some amazing results.

"Maybe... All of them." She answered hesitantly, "In case I missed something."

"...So first-" You began with a sigh, wearily reorganizing your thoughts to start from the top.

You hadn't even gotten through half of them again, before realizing that your erstwhile potential Adept had fallen asleep on you, instead of meditating. She'd never been very good at staying up late, now that you thought about it. Even back when you had been studying with Rinnier in Caylen's library, she'd end up curled into a ball on a nearby bench long before either you, or Rinnier, called it a night.

Guess you would try again in the morning, before you left.

You were hesitant to use the bracelet and try to contact Dryad yourself, if only because every other time you had meditated with it, disaster had followed shortly afterwards. That, and you could still remember the searing pain that had wracked your body when you'd used it on an apparition the last time you were here.

Asche had warned you that you still needed time to recover, but you'd probably be well situated inside Carona before that time came. Was it worth the risk of trying again, now that you were no longer within the Divine Mana's Atelier?

>Get some sleep
>Meditate (Dryad!)
>'A Spider's Web'
>Other? (write-in)
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>>1951066
>Meditate (Dryad!)
>Don't use the bracelet
>Imagine everyone is Ariel

Even if we fail, maybe we'll become a little bit less paranoid.
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>>1951066
>Meditate on Dryad without the bracelet

Next time we're teaching Ari about Dryad I think it would help if we held her hand. It maybe it could help now?
>hold her hand
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>>1951107
Or maybe *
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>>1951066
>Meditate (Dryad!)
>Don't use the bracelet
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>>1951094
>>1951107
>>1951125
Meditation! Without a bracelet.

>>1951107
Holding hands is lewd, anon.

Writing!
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>>1951127
>Holding hands is lewd, anon.
Do it anyway!
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I'm actually going to try and update tomorrow. I've rewritten this a couple times, and realized I've reached the point of exhaustion where I'm trading atmosphere for verbose, black humor.

Time to sleep before I accidentally canonize Irue's irreverence.
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>>1950159
I told you!

>>1950083
She'll start calling her Irulen

>>1951164
Why is this a bad thing?
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>>1951066

>Get some sleep

I want to try out the connected hearts thing we just got.
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>>1951383
Maybe don't try it with an infected person. Kara might benefit from our social stats, she's a good pick.
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>>1951692
Point.
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>>1951692
True, Kara is unlikely to yell at any little girls without our help.
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>>1951692
Why turn the one demihuman who isn't a sociopath into one?

I bet the only thing she'd get out of it is our paranoia.
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>>1942904
>Yes, this includes access to every Atelier power you've unlocked.
Including Don't Leave Me? Would they get their own use, or would it use up ours?
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>>1951998
Adding to this, would they have an instinctive understanding of the powers or would we need to explain it to them?
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>>1951692
Then again, is there even an "infection"? If their goal was to genocide the adepts to traumatized Dryad, it makes it jseem more like a sketchy cover story.

"There's an infection that we can't tell you about that means we have to kill them all together, but don't worry about future adepts or the ones we miss / don't know about".

I'm skeptical about it being present in a contagious form if at all.
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>>1951736
Look I said I was sorry about that write in okay?

Besides it turns out she was working for the enemy anyways.
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>>1952280
Seeing as how an offshoot of Luna is actively working for the Goddess, the same mysterious entity we're reasonably sure regularly cull or purge humanity... Last thread some discussed that the old quotes from the first ruins visit were between Luna and Dryad but I think they flipped the lines.

It's more likely that Dryad with all their love decided to work against the culling and Luna orchestrated this to stop them from interfering. Honestly I think it's all bullshit, all we know we've learned from unreliable sources. The one 'expert' we talked to could only answer demands of explanations with "ehhh we don't know but Luna kinda said so" and "I don't know and I won't tell you where you can learn more."
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>>1952323
It sounds like they were making their own Mana/Life and fucked up creating the dead spots. What with the honhonculus, the dead spots, human nature, and the nymph wood all coming out from the East.
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>>1952323
Also are we sure it was Dryad doing the culling? Maybe it was Luna and Dryad loved her too much to stop her before. Maybe this was Lunas compromise, genocide everyone who had access to the source of life and seal it from the world instead of treating the "symptoms".

Wild speculation here. Just pointing out how little we truly now about the reasons behind what happened.
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>>1952355
Rather than fucking it up, if the Goddess really is a being above the mana and created them, couldn't they just have nixed whatever they were trying to do?

Slapping an unruly child on the fingers.

>>1952367
We'll find out in another, oh, 2 years real time.
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>>1952371
Maybe she isn't conscious in the same way the rest are. Maybe she gave up too much of herself to do so if they unite against her like how feudal kings had the biggest army, but not bigger than the majority of the Nobles together. Maybe Lunas genocide took her by surprise before she could do so.

Maybe it was Luna doing the genocide and Dryad/Goddess loved her too much to stop her like that, and could only create a new instead and the constant cycle is Dryad passively resisting to make her mortal children crippled so that they don't have the ability to oppose Luna and call down her genocidal wrath.

I'm just saying, we know that genocides have happened in the past, but we only know which Mana was definitely responsible for one of them, and we know that the trauma of that genocide was enough to put Dryad into a catatonic state despite being only a relatively small portion of humanity.

It doesn't make sense that Dryad would have had the capability for the previous genocides, maybe at best releasing new competing life into the ecosystem that had the potential to push the old life out but that isn't what it sounds like the previous genocides were.
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>>1952410
I'm gonna tie Maran to a chair with A Spider's Web and strangle the life out of her if she doesn't give satisfactory answers. This I swear
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>>1952371
Or it's the Goddess that did the genocide and Dryad would have told her the honest truth whereas the other Mana are hiding it from her realization. The infection might be some sort of taboo knowledge that has to be kept from drawing the Goddesses attention and Dryad was unable of concealing it.
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>>1952421
> Not drugging her up with Faedeka and Oakenrue sap and dragging her the Fae and letting them tear it out of her soul using the braclet+Web combo.
Side note: Should we blackmail the Shrine into publicly giving us credit for reducing/removing the Oakenbear/Rue threat?
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>>1952429
No. Just say there should be less oakenbears around. Don't elaborate.
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>>1952547
It's not like they won't know what happened. It's been done before after all. And a Luna Adept saw us go into the forest.

They sure do like the Valens to do the dirty jobs.
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>>1952603
No reason to tip our hand, someone /might/ know that Dryad is in there but no one knows what went on in there but us and whoever we choose to tell. Added to this, neither the compact nor the memories contained in the atelier is known about outside the family. All anyone can do is speculate so let's keep it that way, for the shrine at least.
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>>1951998
Every power, so yes. It would tie the fading life to the person who uses it, rather than you. However, it has 1 overall use; Making use of it in this way wouldn't create more uses.

Time to write.
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>>1952686
I thought Luna knew.
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>>1952810
Luna knows, but not every adept does.
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>>1951127
Did Riz ded?
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Using the bracelet was probably too dangerous for now. Whether or not you doubted Asche for having kept things from you, she had never lied to you. At least, as far as you knew. Everytime she had stepped in, it had been to try and warn you... So if she said you needed time to heal, then you'd trust her.

That still left the old fashioned option open to you, though. As you'd admitted to Ari, you considered yourself to be honestly unsuited to Dryad. On one hand, it was the only Mana you had ever succeeded in communing with, but the circumstances behind that were... Extensive. Trapped deep within an Atelier which was not only saturated in Dryad, but had also been built specifically to contain the Mana itself, trying to listen to a Mana that had specifically been trying to speak to you. If there were more fortunate circumstances to appeal to a Mana under, you'd certainly never heard of them.

But even then, you had only barely succeeded, and doing so had required you to dredge up memories you'd much rather have left undisturbed. Remembering your sister purely to abuse the feelings elicited as a tool didn't sit well with you. There were limits as to how far you would go, and this was stretching it; Whether it was ten years, twenty, or even two hundred, if trotting out the memory of your family was what was required to commune with Dryad, then you were perfectly content to go on failing to find affinity in your meditations.

...In the end, though, even that was a waste of your time. Hours of silence, forcing yourself to try and find it a part of you to be open with the world again, and all it had left you with were the sour dredges of your past. Whether you'd have a better result returning to the Fae Forest to contact Dryad, or if your actions in the Atelier to soothe its slumber had made it that much harder to speak to, your efforts tonight had yielded nothing.

You didn't know if it was possible to commune with a fully sleeping Mana in the first place. Dryad surely hadn't woken when it spoke to you, but its restlessness had likely brought it closer to the surface of waking than was safe. Now that it was peacefully resting again, it was possible that your voice simply couldn't reach it. If anyone could still reach it, it would probably be Ari... But without experience in how to guide her, you had no way of helping her.
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The potential Adept in question was still softly snoozing away, curled as tightly into a ball as she could manage while still leaning into you. You knew of two factors which led to favoring that particular sleeping position... and as temperate as it was tonight, you doubted it was because she was cold. She'd always been like this, though; Prone to sleeping under desk, in corners, and even when she had found her way onto your bed, she'd scrunched herself into taking up as little space as possible.

You'd woken up in much the same position too many times to count since coming to this house, but it was an occurence which had gotten rarer over the years... In no small part thanks to Asche. The taciturn maid had been the rock in your life ever since, and you'd woken up to her presence nearly every day of the past ten years. Shade bless, you'd fallen asleep next to her in just the same way until you had finally recovered enough to start pulling yourself together.

But Ari didn't have that. Her life hadn't been bad since you'd taken her as a Testament, but you weren't going to delude yourself into believing that you'd given her a safe one. A better one, certainly, but safe? Hardly. Your own life was too tumultuous, and she'd barely even lived under your care for a week before you'd set out across the forest. She'd been kidnapped by brigands, rescued, survived a cave-in, kidnapped again... To say nothing of how little security she'd had before meeting you.

Still, you hesitated. You didn't have the time, or luxury, to dote on her as Asche had with you. You... You didn't know where to start, even if you did. It wasn't that you didn't want to help, but...

"Do your best."

...You were scared.

Of her. Of screwing up. Of putting yourself out there and making it worse, or not being enough. It wasn't hard to see that she needed help, but the tremble in your hand screamed that you couldn't do it. That you couldn't even help yourself, much less anyone else. The more vulnerable she looked, the harder it was for you to approach; When she was smiling, when both of your guards were up, it was different. But just like when she had broken into tears on the day you met, you had no idea how to handle this. Getting close to try was like approaching the edge of your own abyss, and your heartbeat grew weak when it seemed like you might slip back in.

That indecision was almost a shield between Ari and yourself, and one you were admittedly nervous to put aside... So those words were meant as much for your sleeping charge as they were yourself. It was the only thing you could really say, as your fingers tentatively laced around her own and your eyes drifted shut for the night.
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"Not my first choice for an order like this, but I suppose the man has his reasons."

Oily, unwashed brown hair, and a body covered in bruises. If you didn't know any better, the girl would have passed as a corpse sprawled across the floor. Chains clamped around her limbs, but there was little chance of someone this weak moving, even without them. The manacale around her neck was meant for someone much larger, but it served its purpose just fine when she was forced to her feet at the hand of her cell's visitor.

"Chin up now," Sewn leather gloves caught her jaw, roughly twisting her lifeless face skyward. "you won't have to come back after this."

She had no name, but that was hardly unusual. Slaves didn't need names, and their masters wouldn't care what they were called anyway. It was something she had learned during training. Or retraining.

"How many times have we had to reeducate you, I wonder..." Her captor mused neutrally over the chained wastrel. "Bad luck, or just a faulty product?"

Obey your master.
Stay silent.
Be docile.

There was no telling who would buy a slave, and unless you were important, there wasn't any reason to expect you'd find mercy. The trainers had drilled that into their heads, each and every time. The Crown had outlawed the practice, but that just meant the customers had changed.

Not that it mattered to her. This gritty floor and stale air had been her home for the past ten years. It was the place she kept coming back to. Kept being returned to.

"I've never met someone who screwed up so many times, and somehow kept out of the gutter. If you're a lucky girl, it must be something else that's screwed you over, hm?"

A slave's price was indicative of their expected worth. In a twisted sense, information like that was what formed the pecking order in these cells... Because when it came time for punishments, the overseers had an obligation to protect their profits.

"How long has it been since your last owner abandoned you? A year? Two? There's not much price left to slash."

Ironically, her price had been highest when she was a child. Rebellious, weak, and unmannered... Children made for terrible slaves. There were still uses for them though, or so she had been told. It must have been true, because she had seen others go.

They were bought for potential. For what they could become, given time. To be trained from a young age, and molded for a given purpose. Maybe she never had potential.
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Sold and returned. The story of her life.

Too clumsy for a servant.
Too weak for the fields.
Too skittish for a craft.

Self-esteem was something that died a long, long time ago. Too many failures had driven that out of her.

"Too pitiful to be a whore?" Her captor snorted in surprise, scanning the contents of some paper. "Wondered why they sold you back. Never had a complaint like that, though."

Her body had failed her in every other way. The fact she was still alive at all was probably the only thing it had done right, so of course it wouldn't have grown like the others. The time for her to have developed was long past, and this frail form was the only thing she'd to show for it.

It matched her mind, piece for piece.

Whoever had been waiting for her to bloom into something worth selling must have been sorely disappointed.

"Up against a princess and a demihuman, though." They chuckled pitiously, "Can't say I envy your odds. Maybe your luck will hold out, and the customer'll be sick enough to take you."

It wasn't difficult to outclass her. Time and time again, she'd had an opportunity to prove her worth... And she had. As many times as it had repeated, there really could be no mistake.

This girl was worthless. Unfit even as a warm body, be it to sate lust or do chores. One look at the slaves she would be competing against was all her dull brown eyes needed to know that this 'last chance' was a bad joke.

She shouldn't be here. It was a bold trick by whatever auctioneer had decided to include her, and it was plain to see; Even to the young noble they were to be judged by.

"So what is the despondent one even doing in their company?"

Despondent.

That was a good word for her.

Point by point, they'd laid out the highlights of the other two slaves... And when their crimson eyes turned to you, their only question had been 'why'.

Why was she even here?

"I'll take the demihuman." That's not what happened. "I can't be bothered with a slave that talks back."

A reason for forsaking the princess, but as for that brown haired girl... There was nothing.

She was never even an option.
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You jerked awake with a start, cold sweat chilling your body in the morning light as you gasped for breath. Twin heartbeats pounded in your chest, their paces slowly finding a common rhythm.

"Master?" Ari tugged at your sleeve anxiously. "Are you okay? What's wrong? Master!"

You swallowed tightly, becoming acutely aware of how dry your throat was as you brought your breathing under control. One hand cupped your throat gingerly, tracing the phantom pain of the manacle's metal edge digging into your skin. There was a persistent sense of anxiety bundled somewhere in the back of your mind, but it wasn't yours. It didn't seem like it was going away, either...

>Hearts Harmonized

"...Calm down, Ari."
"Yes, Master."

You glanced down at her, finding the timid Testament to have grown obediently still... But if anything, that anxiety only seemed to be increasing. Unlike 'A Spider's Web', you didn't think it was possible to tune this connection out. It was just always going to be passively 'On'.

>Set out for Carona (Ride Oakenrue? Walk?)
>Ask something (what?)
>Have Ari meditate while you take care of something (what?)
>Other? (write-in)
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>>1954019
Dammit.
I don't regret us having taken all three Testaments. Leaving Ari to that would've been too horrible.

>Try and summon as much inner confidence as possible to project it into Ari
>Have Ari meditate while we take care of breakfast
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>>1954019
>>Other? (write-in)
Tell Ari that she has come a long way and that we're proud of her.
Hold her fucking hand.

>>Set out for Carona.
Walk while Ari rides the oakenrue. Try to keep up a good pace, jog if possible.

>>Ask something (what?)
Ask Ari if she had a dream or nightmare.
Ask her about her friendship with Rinnier and Kara.
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>>1954110
I don't think Irue can jog for days on end.
We really need just a normal fricking horse cart.
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>>1954110
Re reading I see now that we did hold her hand, but do it again anyway!

>>1954112
Yeah, I'm not expecting to do a marathon, just break out for a short jog once in a while if the terrain is suitable. Get our endurance up.
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>>1954110
>>1954019
These are all good. Ask her about going into the forest.

Thank her and tell her she did a good job while we and everyone else were sadly fucking up.
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>>1954169
>Thank her and tell her she did a good job while we and everyone else were sadly fucking up.
Are you talking about back before our right ended when she earned Clara's respect by threatening to kill her with the oakenrue?
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>>1954019
>>Set out for Carona (Walk)
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>>1954019
>>Set out for Carona (Ride Oakenrue? Walk?)
Ride until we get close, then walk.
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Great job guys, you gave Irue anxiety, now there's nothing left to stop her from developing clinical depression.

>>1954019
Seconding >>1954110

I just hope that saying we're proud of her doesn't mean she'll understand it as approval to keep killing people with the Oakenrue
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>>1954386
Sometimes you just gotta murder people with an oakenrue anon it was a good call.
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>>1954398
Give her the diary of reflections and we have the perfect assassin. Emotional Dependency, eternal devotion, loyalty and a complete lack of morals.
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>>1954019
>Set out for Carona
>Ride Oakenrue
I just want to see everyone else again
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>>1952009
I missed this earlier, but you need to explain the Atelier powers to your linked subject. They have access to use them, but they missed the 'tutorial' that told them what they do. All of those powers require deliberate intent to use, so they can't really activate anything you never tell them about.

>>1954148
You can't just keep voting to hold hands, anon! It's lewd!

Vote will remain open until I get up later tonight. Skyfire has taken its toll on me, since I was forced into its blaze until recently.
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>>1954710
It's only as lewd as you make it to be. Embrace your inner chastity and innocence!
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>>1954710
W-wait a minute. We can just teleport to Carona!
Could we catch Ari if we teleport first? Would the oakenrue be able to find its own way back to town or would it run out of energy before getting that far?
Assuming the oakenrue is capable of the journey, I'd like to -

>>1954019
>explain "Jinn calls me" to Ari
>send oakenrue to Carona
>jinn calls me
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>>1954947
Holy shit anon you're a god damned genius
We might break our ass but this is perfect otherwise
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>>1954193
I meant her following the Oakenrues into the fae forest and entering an atelier - alone - when she thinks she is weak and useless. She did more than most people ever could bring themselves to do, that's strength there.

To stare down failure and decide to try anyway? It's a virtue that we share with her and what has seen us through our many failures to our treasured successes. One of which was picking her for our testament, because we don't know if the anyone else would do that for us. Maybe Kara, out of ignorance. Maybe Rinnier, out of necessity. But only she would do it just because it was us who needed her despite the danger and thinking they might not have a chance anyways.

That's what I feel we need to tell her. Even if it didn't work out, she had already won against the world when she made that choice. And us and her will keep winning eventually so long as we don't give up.
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>>1954990
>>1954019
This is my write in. There are many like it, but this one is mine. 7.62 steel jacketed feels directly to the heart.

Also

> If you want strength, I can share some of mine with you. But your strength is already there and I will always need it.

Being needed is like crack for her.
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>>1954962
>>1954947
Sure let's just send a giant mute flesh covered abomination apparition of a "dead" mana alone through town.

I'm sure Rinnier will be cool with it once she makes the connection with the Oakenrues.

And now I want 1 art of the OakenRue clamoring into town and Rinnier charging to attack it. Only to stop when she sees the hand drawn picture (by Ari) clipped to its chest like a gardeschooler with a drawing of her and rue holding hands saying we're fine and we'll be there soon.

More practically. How will we know it's in the right position?
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>>1955418
It can turn into a stick.
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>>1954990
She didn't deliberately go into that Altier, she as lured. She could tell the difference between Dopple and Rue, but the Oakens never let her get a good look.

>>1954947
Ari should be able to use it, but the Oakenrue shouldn't.
Remember that it drops us hard onto a steep roof, that we then fall off of for a floor or 2, into a dirty alley. There's not really a way to help someone using 'Jinn calls to me'
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>>1955509
She thought it was us. Good enough.
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>>1955516
And she was aware of what she was walking into? No. She was just trying to follow us. There's nothing particularly special about that.
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>>1955534
Yeah I forgot that part. I started drinking and got excited.

> nothing special about that

Okay you follow me into creepy monster woods. I promise you'll be fine.
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>>1955577
She didn't know or care where she was going. All she know was that 'Rue' wanted her to follow her. That's nothing different from what she does all the time.
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>>1955604
She did kind if follow us into a hell.

Seriously man what's with your hate on for Ari?
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>>1955614
She did, unintentionally. She doesn't deserve praise for that. If she'd done something while in that hell, sure, lay it on her, but she didn't.

I don't hate her. Everyone else seems to absolutely adore her, though. Anytime I want to do something not involving her, I have to defend not wanting to fawn over her.

I could flip that pretty easy. What's with your infatuation for Ari?
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>>1955657
She's completely loyal and tries her best despite having crippling self confidence issues, but she's getting better? Everyone loves an underdog.

She's the one person we trust completely as evident by harmonizing our hearts? The only thing that can repay unconditional love is love in return. Agape love not Eros.

She's the person Rue is most directly responsible for that appreciates all Rue has done for her, even more so than Kara? Kara appreciates us being nice to her as well which is why we care so much about her. Rinnier respects us mostly which is as good I'm another way.

Most of us have basic human empathy that makes us want to help someone who was hurt so badly for so long as well.

And Ari is an interesting character. She has many hidden depths. Read Riz' answer on ask.fm about if we had picked different names for her.

And she has always 100% gone to bat for us. She's never let us down.

Honestly I can't understand your annoyed reaction.
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>>1955910
I'm tempted to tear this down, but I'm tired of arguing about Ari /again/, so I'll put it simply: a character I don't particularly care about occupies a large amount of the PC's time and thoughts.


>Honestly I can't understand your annoyed reaction.
>Anytime I want to do something not involving her, I have to defend not wanting to fawn over her.
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>>1955978
It's rough sometimes playing with other people.
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I'm just happy we didn't let someone die and we get to keep just one more person we can trust or that doesn't implicitly hate our guts.

It's a scarce resource.
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>>1956199
Kara likes us. We can trust her so long as we keep her limitations in mind. It's a shame she's retarded because she's otherwise Ari tier.

Rinnier is trustworthy so long as we keep our obligations to her. She believes in us but doesn't really like us.

We can't trust our Aunt, although she does love us. In fact it might have ended up that Caylen is in his position with the Cult because they thought he was the head. But she doesn't really believe in us.

Ari loves us and believes in us. She's more capable then she believes herself to be (especially after reading the ask.fm).

All of these relationships can be improved.

Asche is a mystery that we need to figure out but I'm inclined to give her the benefit of the doubt. Still. We only know that she is fiercely protective/possessive of us. We have to clear that relationship up.

Caylen is for bullying.
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>>1954947
>Could we catch Ari if we teleport first?
No, but she could land on you to break her fall at the end.

>Would the oakenrue be able to find its own way back to town
Yes. Oakenrues aren't hyper intelligent, but they are trees, and have previously shown the capability of sneaking about in Carona. If you don't want it causing a fuss, you can tell it to just lurk around outside, or near the burned out Tier estates.

As this is possible, do you still want to walk, or just talk with Ari briefly and then literally scene-cut to Carona?
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>>1957275
Do we know what happened to the building we were landing on, after the disaster? I'd rather us not end up impaled on rubble again.
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>>1955910
>She's the one person we trust completely as evident by harmonizing our hearts
It requires a certain extent of mutual trust. This does not imply complete trust, and there are plenty of reasons you can trust someone which aren't positive.

I won't comment on the rest. Some of it is wrong, some of it is debatable, some of it is right. All of it is up to you as players to discern, and none of it is my business.

>>1957319
You don't, but it was always meant to be lightheartedly unfortunate, hence why you've never actually had to deal with any long term, or serious, consequences. I guarantee you there won't be any kind of death or maiming going on as a result of its use.
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>>1957335
Let's go for the teleport, then. It'll suck, but I think saving several days of travel is worth it.
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>>1954947
Let's not teleport. It hurts.
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>>1954038
Ari meditate while breakfast!

>>1954038
>>1954169
>>1954386
Try to project confidence!

>>1954110
>>1954169
>>1954386
More holding of hands! When did Valen Quest become lewd...?

>>1954110
>>1954169
>>1954386
Ask Ari if she dreamed, and about Rinnier/Kara.

>>1954110
>>1954169
>>1954386
Praise Ari for trying hard.

>>1954990
I will continue to parse this message until I can extract meaning from it and figure out how to filter it through Irue.

>>1954372
>>1954381
>>1954615
To Carona!

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>>1954947
>>1954962
>>1957345
Teleporting to Carona!

>>1957348
Pain hurts.

Looks like we're about to get a bird's eye view of the reconstruction effort.
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>>1957275
>teleport

As for how to address the oakenrue, just tell it to wait at the burnt out estate and post a guard there to alert us once it arrives so we can go pick it up.
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>>1957401
>post a guard
maybe not. The whole point with it waiting outside is to not scare people.
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>>1957401
We can just turn the Oakenrue into a stick and take it with us.
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>>1957407
Oakenrues are universally needy, I'm a bit apprehensive about leaving this thing unattended by either us or Ari.
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>>1957397
I dare you to write slower
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>>1957911
There is a lot to write, anon.
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>>1957924
Yeah but time's almost up
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>>1957941
?
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>>1957947
skyfire, presumably.
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As miserable as that dream had been, you knew for a fact it wasn't yours... But Ari's only source of concern seemed to be your own reaction. You'd need to address this before you moved on, or that distant sense of anxiety was going to drive you up a wall the rest of the day.

"Dreamed about something I wasn't expecting. It was... Unpleasant." An understatement. "Did you get enough rest?"

"Yes, Master." Her reflexive two-word answer was the only input she seemed to have.

"..." You hesitated in the ensuing awkward conversational gap. You'd not really had a reason to think about this before, but dreams were fairly private things. You didn't exactly want to just admit you had accidentally become a voyeur of that sort of thing. "Did you have a good dream, at least?" Still, if that was her dream, it felt... Wrong not to try and reassure her somehow.

"Nothing unusual, Master."

While her reply felt like she was trying to comfort you, it was probably the least reassuring answer she could have given. "That doesn't really answer the question. What if you had nightmares often?" Was it her anxiety, or yours, that was shifting so unsettlingly? "If something's bothering you, it helps to talk about it."

So said one who had bottled up everything to the point of spontaneously spawning a Shade apparition. Which went on to hurt you further. Maybe you should work on taking your own advice before trying to help someone else...?

"..." She blinked once, passing a beat in hesitation. "Do you?"

You didn't even attempt to stutter a reply to that. The longer you thought about the question, the less you were sure whether she was asking if you regularly had nightmares, or if you talked about your problems, and neither of those answers were going to help your case here.

"...Nevermind." Time to try a different approach. "So what did you dream about?"

"The day we met, Master." Your timid Testament didn't so much as glance away at the candid answer.

"...Do you do that often?" It wasn't like you didn't dream about the past, but with a few traumatic exceptions, there weren't many which reoccured enough to be considered normal events. If that really was a normal dream for her though, it would explain why she didn't seem all that perturbed about its contents.

"It's an important memory." She defended weakly. "I dream about other things, too."

You made a strained face, silently wishing she'd pick better moments to be important memories. Or at least, remember them correctly.
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You tried to counteract the general raise in anxiety you'd been dealing with by projecting some sort of confidence, but... Life's not that simple. It didn't feel like anything was changing. Ari didn't seem conscious of the fact that anything unusual had happened between you, so you doubted what was transmitted across the connection had any kind of conscious, deliberate factor to it. If that were true, and this shared empathy was mutual, then she would be feeling... Confusion? Concern?

Neither of those were going to help anxiety - Panic would be there too, wouldn't it? - This wasn't something you could bluff your way through.

Fine... Alright, fine. You were plenty confident, depending on the subject. It's not like your entire life was a pit of crushing insecurity and regret, right?

There was... Uh. Erm.

That time you...

Y-You definitely... Hm.

There really wasn't much you'd done in the past year or so which hadn't been accompanied by a great deal of posturing. Your entire debut as nobility could have been described as a spine-tinglingly tense example of 'Fake It Till You Make It', with the addendum that you were still trying to get to the 'Make It' part.

In reality, there wasn't a whole lot you were confident about. You could affect the image of confidence easily enough, but any real confidence you'd had was bled out of you while bumbling through your Rite. In retrospect, it even that had been pretty fragile in the first place - Untested, and built on misconceptions and isolation.

What you had left was broken, battered, and injured. You had marched forward through sheer stubbornness more than anything else, and somehow managed to preserve bits and pieces of your pride along the way... But what it came to resemble was so different, it hardly bore in any resemblance to its original state.

It was your pride now. Not House Valen's pride, not a noble's pride, and certainly not a politician's, scholar's, or warrior's pride. Yours. It was more akin to an emblazoned crest than a flag, with scratches carved across its surface... And as your pride had changed, so too had what lay beneath it. The fact your pride bore injuries at all was proof that it wasn't held aloft on some tenuous bubble of baseless confidence anymore. It rested on something harder, that you had found tested and tempered.

You may not have much in the way of confidence that the future was going to turn out okay, but you had the resolve to bite down and deal with it when it came.

...And maybe that would be enough to help Ari find something similar.
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"I didn't really understand what picking all three of you as my Testament meant, back then." There's nothing wrong with being anxious, if she could still find it in her to keep moving. It was something which applied just as much as to you, as it did to her. "There's a lot of things I wish I could have done differently, but you three aren't one of them."

She stared up at you quietly, almost forgetting to nod her head in acknowledgement.

"No 'Yes, Master' this time?" You snorted, easing yourself off the wall and onto your feet. "You're included in that, you know."

"Yes, M-" She hiccuped, the exasperation in your parroting taking slightly longer to sink in than the contents of the words. That indecision lasted only a moment, before passing in favor of a reserved smile. "I am my Master's Testament."

...She still wasn't going to give up the 'Master' part, huh.

"Yes." You deadpan, holding out your hand. "Yes, you are. Now come on, we've got things to do."

It was success enough that you didn't feel as much anxiety rolling off of her now, so you'd let it pass for now.

"Yes, Master!"

Dammit.
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"I'd planned on having you try to meditate one last time before we left this morning." You muttered, scavenging through your twice-ruined kitchen for something to constitute breakfast. "But we'll be moving a bit quicker than I expected initially."

"I'll try not to slow us down." You handed a stick of jerky made from... Some manner of mystery meat. You weren't sure what had been in the Oakenbear's arse when Kara brought it back, but Asche had taken great effort in salvaging as much of it as possible for reuse. As a result, there had been quite a bit of these dried meat strips cached away, even after the full month of drunken revelry.

You made a point to not question too deeply what kind of meat you were eating, however. It could have been anything from rabbits to wolves. Or worse, considering Oakenbear weren't averse to killing and eating people as- And there you went, questioning it.

"The way we'll be travelling won't really let you slow down, and that's why we're skipping meditation. I need to make sure you understand how it works, and that you can do it... Otherwise, you're probably gonna be stuck here on your own for at least a a day or two. Or three, if Kara's busy."

"...Oh." There went the anxiety again.

"It's not hard, so I have faith you'll manage just fine." You reassure her quickly, "As far as I know, you'll just need to get the words right, and we'll be on our way. The worst part about it is just gonna be the landing."

"I'll... Do my best?"

You popped your head out of the pantry, catching Ari's amber eyes swimming in confusion. "If you're nervous, you can stay here and I'll just send Kara back for you. You two are pretty close, she'd be fine coming to get you." Kara had always acted pretty protective over Ari in the first place, you imagine she'd have no problem dropping whatever she was doing to go fetch the timid Testament.

...On the other hand, letting Ari out of your sight was what caused this whole mess in the first place.

"Just promise me you won't go wandering back into the woods again. Why'd you do that in the first place, anyway?"

"I thought you were calling me, so I went." She answered apologetically, "It was not you."

"It was not." You confirm flatly. "I appreciate the loyalty, but it's going to be troublesome if someone else figures out how to mimic my voice and they kidnap you, too."

"...Sorry." Anxiety rising. It was impossible to scold her without that happening, wasn't it? "I'll do better next time, I promise. I'll fix it."

"There's nothing to fix, just be more careful, alright? I managed to save you this time, but you had me worried."

"Yes, Master."
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Unlike Kara, or Rinnier, Ari really was a weak link for you. There was no questioning her devotion, but she was also undeniably... Frail. Without someone, or something, to protect her, there's not much she could do to defend herself. It's why you'd assigned the flesh abomination to her in the first place.

Said abominable apparition had actually served rather faithfully in protecting her. In fact, had its opponent not literally been the very Mana that spawned it and an Atelier built with the specific intention of containing that self-same Mana, you're relatively certain it would have succeeded. There wasn't any room for you to blame the poor thing for its failure.

That didn't change the fact that you'd need to look into other methods of self-defense for Ari which did not rely on the wholesale wanton slaughter of her aggressors. Something more subtle, preferrably. Maybe one day she could figure out how to handle herself as an Adept of Dryad, but until then... You'd have to think about it when you got back to Carona. Maybe Rinnier would have some ideas.

Speaking of which... "You get along pretty well with Rinnier, don't you?"

"Yes. Rinny's very patient with me, and always knows what to do."

"..." While you were thankful your Testament seemed to mostly get along, you sometimes felt like they knew each other differently than you knew them. "When did you get to know her, anyway? I didn't think you spent much time with her."

"...At your cousin's, to start." She replied thoughtfully, "And also when everyone came back from Carona."

"Guess you got to know Kara during that month, too?" You withdrew from the pantry, more or less satisfied with what you'd found. Considering you were going to be in Carona shortly, it wasn't as if you needed much more than a snack.

"Nn." She shook her head, "We talked more during Carona. She looked out for me."

"...Weren't you two on opposite sides of the wall back then?" You remember going rounds with Kara back then, trying to get her to trust you to figure things out.

"She came out to see me a few times." Ari explained vaguely, a small frown finding its way across her otherwise distracted face. "She would warn me about when people were going to come, and then I'd make sure they didn't find us."

You rolled that around in your head while chewing on a strip of mystery jerky. Kara had mostly kept to herself during your time in Carona, and you had no way of knowing what either of them were doing during the Ice Queen's Atelier... But you'd never given it much though. Since Kara had been acting under the Mayor's orders back then, it'd make sense that he'd have eventually sent her and the demihumans out to try and stop whatever had been kidnapping his mercenaries... Which was a pastime Ari had certainly engaged in, with the aid of her flesh-abomination protector.

...So even before you'd met her in Carona, your demihuman Testament had been doing her best, huh?
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Carona really hadn't been just your victory. Even if you weren't there to give them orders, each of your Testament had played their hand as best they could, right alongside you. That was... This was a really strange feeling. You can't even say you were proud of them, because it implied you had something to do with it.

"Master?"

"Nothing, just thinking." You shake your head, "I hadn't realized there was more going on during Carona... You three really are the best choice I've made."

"Yes!"

For a brief, blessed moment, you didn't feel a shred of anxiety from her. Just simple joy.

"Alright, pay close attention so we can get back to Carona. The sooner we're back, the sooner we can all get back together again."
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It really was as simple as needing the activation phrase, and a general intent to go. You suppose it made sense, considering how its purpose was very straight-forward and simple: Go to Carona. Once you had become relatively confident in Ari getting it down, it was just a matter of putting practice into execution, and this whole journey would finally be over.

"Nervous?" You had finished giving the abomination instructions on where to wait, and made doubly sure that Mim's peace-gift was tucked away. This left your Testament and you standing in the cool, and overgrown, grass of your frontyard. "You've seen me do it once before."

Ari nodded with an almost imperceptible scowl. "Yes. I can follow you this time, though."

"...I hope so." You held up your hand as an offering to the anxious Testament. "If you're scared, you can hold-" She had seized your hand tightly before you'd even finished. "-My hand. Alright. Remember, it'll be scary, but we should be fine." For a given measure of 'fine'. There wasn't a Banshee to teleport into this time, so you shouldn't need to worry about a repeat performance, at least.

You felt her slender fingers intertwine with yours tightly as she drew closer. When you'd explained the concept to her, she'd skipped wondering how you could do this and went straight to just accepting that you were amazing. It was like eating an entire jar of sweets - At first it was the greatest thing, and then you quickly got a stomach ache.

"Three, two, one..." You counted down for her sake, with the final words issuing in stereo. "Jinn Calls Me!"

A familiar wind picked up, encircling the two of you in its intangible wings... And the next moment, the forest was empty.
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"...Rinnier's been busy."

From your customary arrival in the peak of the sky, you were treated to an overview of just how much progress had been made on the reconstruction. Much of the town was still in shambles, but she'd certainl made a visible chunk of improvements since you'd been gone.

"Master."

Newly built houses, the makings of freshly constructed roadways, a glut of raw resources waiting to be used. Even from this high up, you could hear the bustle of Carona's populace working and going about their slowly recovering lives.

"Master."

Not that you'd expected any less. You'd left Rinnier in charge of all of this fully confident that she'd be able to handle it, but the sheer difference was still impressive to see. As wrecked as it had been, what she was doing was honestly less of a recovery effort and more the complete reconstruction of the town. Sure there were a fair few sections which had survived with minimal damage, but...

"Master!"

...Really, you could probably justify rebuilding the town however you wanted during the reconstruction. Shade Bless, you were the Mayor. You could justify whatever you wanted, and just build it into the town. You could remake this entire place in your image if you wanted. Your literal image, even! A giant statue of yourself!

"MASTER!"

Rinnier probably wouldn't let you do that.

"MAAAAAAAASTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR-"

You closed your eyes as the rushing wind drowned out Ari's screams, and accepted the sweet embrace of gravity as Carona rushed up to greet you. Even if you knew what was coming, it wouldn't make it hurt any less.

Thud.

>Welcome to Carona!

"....I hate this place."

>To the Headquarters
>Check on the town first
>Visit the Shrine
>Seek out someone in specific?
>Other? (write-in)
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>>1957978
>>To the Headquarters
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>>1957397
> Parsing the message

You only lose when you give up. Orks are made fer winnin' because either they win, or they die an' come back to krump ya again!
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Okay, that was a lot to write
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>>1957978
>To the Headquarters
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>>1957978
Also we should build a platform or something for us. Or at least something soft to land on.
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>>1957978
>Go to the healer
We're the goddamn mayor, we can't do our job with a sore bum.

>To the Headquarters
"Rinnier, we're building a tower right this instant."
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>>1957978
>Check on Ari
She isn't miraculously tough like us
>To the Headquarters
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>>1957978
>>To the Headquarters
Wait, did we bring fleshstick-kun?
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>>1958039
She got pumped full of 2 years of clumpy Dryad juice though.
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>>1958053
I find the fact that I understood that reference disheartening.
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>>1958053
>>1958039
Right, I'll take back >>1958031 going to the healer. Might not be a good idea to let them see Ari right now.

We should get the diary of reflections back and see if it can hide the dryad stuff when Ari uses it.
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>>1958055
As much as I find the fact I made the reference.
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>>1958059
I think that being a walking popsicle is more noticeable than going eyes
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>>1957978
We have some heavy socializing to do.

First...
>Headquarters
We should chat with Rinnier about everything(?) and find out what Kara's up to, then
>Shrine
For Mim, and to figure out where Priat went too. Probably need to drop off Ari before we go though.
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>>1958174
Shrine stuff I figured we'd get around to with a vote after this scene. Riz wouldn't immediately set us up with a do or die situation forcing us to abandon everything again, would he?

He wouldn't.
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He wouldn't.
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>>1958262
I always thought that Riz was a girl because the men in this quest had been shallow and poorly written compared to the rest of the cast, although that could be because the main characters are all women
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>>1958360
What men?
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>>1958381
I think Dullam is a man?
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>>1958360
So I'm not alone.
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>>1958360
>>1958399
I admit that I have also wondered about this.
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>>1958381
None, because this is a yuri harem quest.
As a serious answer: Byrn, Marc, the mayor, Dullem, Jack, royal cousin, and Tim. Rarely do we get to see a different side to them than besides first impressions. None of them have been particularly complex or multi-faceted, save for the Mayor, and most of the things we learned about him was offhand. There's a Roderick defender in here, but I never saw him other than a righteous jackass that swings his own weight around. I felt that every time a male character was established, Riz only developed them with an attempt at an interesting introduction and never bothered to do anymore than that. Priat has barely been the exception so far, but that's mostly because we never really know what he's thinking. We probably know Caylen the quest, but the entire time he's just been weak to Irue while following his ideals. That's all he is, his ideals. Hell, the Jinn attendant was more interesting.
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I still love Valen quest, Riz
Please don't hurt me
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>>1957978
>To the Headquarters
>Seek out someone in specific?
Reiner

>>1958360
This has crossed my mind before.
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>>1957978
>>Seek out someone in specific?
Rinnier and Jill's dad. If she's alive we owe her an apology.
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>>1957978
>>Seek out someone in specific?
Let's find and talk to Reynad already
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>>1959975
>>1959084
Is this misspelling on purpose now?
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>>1958360
You're shallow and poorly written!

That said, I feel like that judgement is a result of the players never really interacting with them for any extended reason. Everyone in Valen is introduced to give you a general idea of who they are, and if you never bother to get to know them, that's all you'll ever really know about them. In this case, we have a roughly even split of male/female characters (10/11, favoring men and NOT counting Roderick/Mayor/Taggart) in the cast, but there's been an overwhelming interest in interacting only with the females, so you got to know them the best.

Notably, it took a bit of effort to get past the first impression for most of them. If you only ever interact with someone casually, you'll only ever know them casually... And subsequently, most of the male half of the cast has been relegated to that category. You can think of it as a business relationship. Caylen is a deliberate case, in that an important angle of Irue's relationship with him is explicitly that they DON'T know him nearly as well as they thought they did.

There's more going on behind the scenes for most of them, a fair bit of which there have been signs of. Does anyone recall the conversation Rinnier and Dullem had during the interlude? Or what was going on in Caylen's head that led up to him failing you during the Rite?

But most of the immediate cast is females, and it's been commented on before - https://ask.fm/RizQM/answers/135893323798 - Which outlines most of the reasoning behind it. It's a bigger issue than I expected initially, in large part because your primary interaction will always be with them - Whether this means traveling or working with them. Dullem is someone you could count among them now, but he's been mostly relegated elsewhere because both sides are kind of nervous about the relationship, for various reasons.

>>1958441
You're a yuri harem quest!

Even saying "you just don't know them!" as an excuse, the fact we've been going this long and you guys almost universally don't seem interested in getting to know any of them is probably a sign I've screwed something up. I'll try and pay closer attention to it, and see if I've just been slacking somewhere in their execution. Also I'll retool every character in this entire upcoming arc to be a male, until the entire cast is forced to climb a looming tree of dicks.

I didn't realize so many people thought I was bad at men, though. I'll work on it, soon as I figure out what I'm doing wrong.
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>>1960958
See what you did, anons? You've doomed us all! DOOMED!
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>>1957987
>>1958006
>>1958031
>>1958039
>>1958048
>>1958174
>>1959084
HQ!

>>1958031
Healer!

>>1958039
Checking on Ari!

>>1958174
Checking on Mim/Priat at the Shrine!

>>1959084
>>1959119
>>1959975
Searching out Rinnier and Jill's dad.

Odds seem good we're going to the HQ, and looking for Rinnier. I'll get to work on it, but may not get much done today. Circumstances arranged themselves such that I was forced into a death march beneath the skyfire, followed by too many hours of programming. I expect a similar fate today, as well.
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>>1960958
Everyone always vote against me when I want to talk to the male cast
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>>1960958
It's not that they aren't interesting, it's that there was never really any time to just get to know someone. We always had to be careful with who we talk to, to get the most bang for the buck. If it wasn't readily apparent that talking to someone meant we'd get closer to our goals there just wasn't any point.
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>>1960972
I like Dullem. He seems very Vimes to me, a man who definitely knows he's out of his depths by because people depend on him, he copes by focusing on the job in front of him. Intrinsically uncomfortable with the necessary when it conflicts with his ideals of how things work, but willing to compromise those to uphold his values of what's important to protect.

And Marchovic is an awesome shade adept. I see him as sort of a smiling stoic. Definitely not a Cynic.
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>>1960972
I reread the interlude, and one post there says Irue ounched Roderick, which eventually snowballed into almost all of our problems, based on a single joke vote that was later deleted. Is this true, veteran anons?
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>>1961585
From what I remember, choosing to fight was the popular vote, but biting him, which left something that could be used as proof, was a single suggestion.

If you want to track it down though, archive.moe keeps deleted posts, it just greys them out.
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>>1961585
Yes, this is what happened. It happened because players wanted to clean up the mess that joker made by doing the only thing fa/tg/uys know how- to set up an elaborate plan, avoid taking any sort of responsibility and when it all fails just go murderhobo.
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>>1961626
>>1961642
Oh wow.
I wonder if that anon is still around.
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>>1961585
That's why we try to solve fewer problems with punching these days.

>>1961626
Unknown person punches priest? I don't think it was just the Bite vote.
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>>1960958
>second spoiler
I didn't need that image in my head
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>>1961585
Actually to address this while I have a moment's respite.

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/40461200/
>40471889 for reference
Valen has a long standing history of barely clinging to life. A lot of the earlier choices were decided almost entirely on the backs of like 1-2 votes total Which became the origin of my persistent reference to loving all four of my players. As I recall for that particular moment, one anon voted to "kill them all" - Which was effectively the same as the "start a conflict" option. They were also the only anon to vote at all in the 20m voting window (standard time span for quests back then), and so I went with it.

Joke vote or not, it was also the majority vote, despite being... Well, one vote. That would also not be the last time a single vote was the majority vote to handle otherwise delicate matters.

Frankly it's a miracle Valen is still alive today. Anons get mad at me if I despair too much over it, but it's legitimately survived off the dedicated effort of like 1-2 anons sleepily staying up all night just so there was a single vote on what to do next. If they, or I, hadn't been so stubborn, I seriously doubt Valen would have even been alive when /qst/ was made.
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>>1961862
Well, you were running quite often for over 12h back in the days so people came and went but usually it was daytime for me.
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>>1961674
I was the vote late by a minute.

I regret nothing. Fuck the police!
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>>1961862
So when are we going to give Ari our last name since she's our testament?

Ari Valen.
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>>1962025
Well we do need a heir to the house, because I don't see Irue producing one the normal way ever.
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>>1962042
This is true, but she doesn't seem like one for running a major royal house. Reiner would make an excellent heir, if she didn't already have a kingdom.
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>>1962078
We can't adopt Rinnier, she's older than us!
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>>1962092
We could marry her.
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>>1962247
1. Yuri is shit.
2. That would make her a consort, not an heir.
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>>1961862
How old is Ari?
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>>1962426
I just realised that Ari could be older than us and we'd have no way of telling since she was so malnourished growing up.
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I'm home and exhausted. Also miserably sunburned. Going to poke at some answers before crashing, and update tomorrow.

>>1962025
>when are we going to give Ari our last name since she's our testament?
As an orphan, Ari is technically capable of being adopted. As a slave, she is legally your possession, but as a Testament it's a bit different. Your Testament, legally speaking, are you. Their words and actions reflect on you, which is why the relationship is meant to be so close. If one of your Testament were to order a genocide, it would be acceptable to lay the blame for it at your feet as equally as theirs. Your Testament, notably, aren't actually aware of this. Rinnier understands that her position grants her authority on behalf of your status, but she doesn't really understand how much.

It's likely that Irue didn't either, until your most recent visit to the Valen Archives.

House Valen technically gets around the royalty's major issues with slavery because they don't own slaves. They may purchase them, but they are acquired with the intent of becoming a Testament, or... Handled if the Rite is unsuccessful. However, even that's a gray area since the very business of slavery has become illegal, so the act of purchasing them is still technically a deliberate association with illegal elements of society, and could be misconstrued as undermining the Crown.

>>1962042
>we do need a heir to the house
Not necessarily. If the primary bloodline ends, a branch takes its place - Your aunt and uncle are good example. If you had died, they would have officially been the heads, and Caylen the official heir.

>>1962078
>>1962247
>>1962268
>We could marry Rinnier
I mean, you could. It wouldn't be very favorably looked on from a political standpoint, but no one can actually stop you. Doing so would have some weird implications, though.

In her current state, Rinnier is a Fallen Princess. She was royalty, technically still is, but has no holdings, no people, nothing. Her royalty is name only, with nothing to back it. In this situation, a hypothetical marriage would imply Valen throwing their lot in with Teranford, or Teranford seeking an official asylum under House Valen - In the "worst" case scenario, the latter may be construed as Teranford giving up its rights to sovereignty in exchange for aid. This is assuming Rinnier takes your name.

If you could somehow change her status back into legitimate royalty, you could take the Lamandra name and throw it in reverse with Teranford accepting an alliance from House Valen, and potentially seceding from La'Fiel's crown and siding with Teranford... Which would have consequences among the other nobles, and the brewing civil war.

You could do similar things as the above without any marriage, it'll just be more difficult to pull off/convince others of.

>>1962417
>How old is Ari?
10 years of slavery, could have entered between 5 and 10.
15-20? Malnutrition is tricky.
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>>1964217
Are high level political marriages really allowed to be gay or are we just so androgynous that no one questions who we step up to the alter with?
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>>1964693
I bet Riz just doesn't want to reveal Irue's true gender.
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>>1964695
I think Riz takes great pleasure in being ambiguous.
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>>1964758
Clearly Riz and Irue are both futa.
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>>1964773
You misspelled sexless homunculus
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>>1964693
>Are high level political marriages really allowed to be gay?
This is going to be long. The short answer is "Yes"; The long answer and implications on the world and setting are below.

The creation of offspring isn't something tied to wedlock. This is touched on a bit in Paper Flowers, but it's perfectly acceptable for an heir to be produced via a consort - The important factor, specifically in noble houses and in regards to royalty, is that an heir is both produced and acknowledged.

As you learned in the Atelier (and also expanded on in an Ask: https://ask.fm/RizQM/answers/142694246422), with the sealing of Dryad, the potential for creating offspring in general has continued to drop every generation. Some people are just completely infertile, and were simply born that way - In your hypothetical situation, a man and a barren woman would have the exact same chance of producing offspring as a man and another man, or two women, or even just one man/woman who just refused to get married.

This is where deviation occurs. Marriage in general has always been something heavily tied to politics, but most people consider it integrally tied to childbirth and the mixing of bloodlines as well. In our past there have been many times where childbirth was impossible, and an important figure instead had to be produced via a consort; Due to the fertility circumstances in Valen, that's become a relatively normal occurrence in setting. Providing a "marriage" between two of the same gender theoretically doubles the chance that one of them could produce an heir for a family via consort.

>What if they're both infertile?
Depending on how strict your situation is, it's acceptable to name an adopted individual as your heir. For royalty, this wouldn't fly at all. Noble houses, on the other hand, can often get away with it. This is also where branch families come into play; If the given head is just incapable of producing an heir, then the "heir" becomes a scion from the extended family.

This is particularly common for families like the Lamandrans, who must have their bloodline continued, because it is specifically beloved by the Mana supporting their claim to royalty.

>Isn't Rinnier the THIRD scion? That doesn't sound infertile!
There's a reason for this. You may recall East Heaven boasts a large number of Adepts compared to most other nations - This is considered to be due in part to East Heaven being more heavily saturated in Mana... Including Dryad. It's been mentioned a couple times, but there are suspicions that Rinnier's mother hailed from there.

>What does this have to do with us?
Depending on your choices, maybe nothing? As the eventual head of House Valen though, no one can really stop you from doing whatever you want in your personal life. Irue could probably get away with having snuff as a primary fetish, in all honesty. Who's going to tell House Valen "No"? You answer to the Crown as a ]i]peer.

Anyway, writing!
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>>1964939
> Who's going to tell House Valen "No"?

Uppity Gnome priests and mercenary guards? Did not work out well for them DESU.
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As persistently as Carona had been a thorn in your side, it didn't seem like it was ever going to go the distance and actually try to kill you. Even without the buildings to break your fall, you didn't feel all that much worse after landing you normally did... And more fortunately, you weren't even impaled on anything this time! A minor miracle, considering the state of the place.

You groaned pitiously, managing to roll yourself over and plop Ari off your back.

"Ari?"
"Mmrgh."

Nothing on her looked broken. Considering you had broken her fall, she should be fine. Your first trip hadn't been very pleasant either, and no amount of forewarning was going to cushion that kind of fall. Luckily for both of you, the circumstances weren't nearly as dire this time around as they were back then. Both of you could afford to just... Lay here for a while. Stare into the bright blue of the cloudless sky, and collect yourselves.

"Did it land back here?"

...

"I swear, I saw it falling over this way."

"You said that last time, to- Whoah." A pair of citizens rounded the wreckage, catching sight of you and Ari sprawled out painfully. "Hey uh... Are you two alright?" Their voices sounded almost familiar, but you couldn't remember any names for them. "...Oh man, alright, hang on, we'll get you to the medics."

You wave them off as they start to approach, gritting your teeth through the pain as you raised your arm. "We're fine. Probably." Your body was complaining heartily, but only in regards to the general shock and abuse. "Ari, how are you doing?"

She twitched and tried to curl up with a groan.

"..." The interlopers joined you in watching the timid Testament whimper silently.

"Are you sure you don't want any help?" One of them offered after a beat. "It's no problem, really."

"I'll handle it." You sigh, forcing yourself to sit up. "Point me towards the reconstruction's headquarters and that should be enough."

Thankfully it wasn't too far away. You waved off one last offer of aid, thanking the two men for the sentiment while taking the time to recover. Your arrival had caused a bit of a stir in the area, likely due to Ari's panicked screams all the way down, and sent most of the resource reclamation forces in the way into a scurry to find the source.

"Reclamation, though?" You massage your temple gingerly, "Don't we have plenty of money to just bring in more resources?"

One of them shrugged. "We can't rebuild on a bunch of trash, and since we're clearing out the wreckage anyway, the Mayor wants us to try and salvage whatever seems usable."

"We're also still finding bodies occasionally." His companion chimed in grimly, "We used to be searching for survivors... But it's been so long since the incident, that's really all there is left to find."

"A body's better than nothing."

"Yeah."
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Carona's recovery was still coming along, it seemed. As the one responsible for this conversation even taking place, you felt like there was something you should be saying... But as much as you wanted to, your throat was - For once - empty.

"Hey, you're with the Valens, aren't you?" They didn't seem keen on giving you a chance to brood however, "I didn't think you guys would be out here with us." You quirked a brow, frowning at the man. "No offense! It's just that, well, Carona's not really seen many nobles. We knew you guys were around and all, but it's-"

"-He means he's grateful for your support." His friend cut in tightly. "Grunt work like this isn't something we expected to have help with. The contingent of knights alone were more than we could have dreamed of, but seeing one of you here in person means... A lot."

"Leaving Carona to fend for itself wasn't an option. We couldn't do that and still claim to worth your loyalty." They still didn't recognize you as the Heir on sight, but being acknowledged as being part of House Valen was a more heartening step forward than you expected. You... You were actually a little irritated at how happy that made you. "Shouldn't there be demihumans helping you, though?"

"It'll take another two tornados before I work with one of them." One laughs scornfully, "The current Mayor's tried strong arming them onto some of us, but we'd rather do it ourselves than have to watch our back around those slit-eyed bastards."

...The other guy wasn't going to cut in this time?

"Fuck 'em. I don't know why they're being pushed on us so hard, but I'd be happier if they stayed out of Carona altogether."

You scowl. "That's just going to make reconstruction take longer. Are you really in any position to complain about who is helping you?"

"Hey now, don't tell me you're supporting the Mayor on this?" You are the Mayor, so yes. "They're demihumans. No one around here in there right mind is going to put up with them nosing in. Luna knows we've tried telling the knights this, but it's not like they can veto the Mayor's decisions."

You'd just spent two solid weeks wishing you had brought Kara with you, and these people had spent your entire absence complaining that she and her pack were trying to help? ...Although, the previous Mayor had been using them as mercenaries to support his burgeoning rebellion. The only one of them you had any reason to actually trust was your Testament. Even if she was nominally the Alpha of her pack, the notion of relying on the merit of her leadership to keep the otherwise suicidal pack of alcoholic demihumans in line was.... Discouraging.

"The Valen Heir's knights are more than enough. I gotta admit, I didn't expect people trained to fight and serve nobles to be so adept at craftwork, but damned if I'm not impressed. The Mayor could just let you guys take over completely and we'd be fine. None of that demihuman nonsense."
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"..." Crimson eyes stared up at the two men flatly. Your capacity to be outraged by this had been running on fumes for a while; All you could bring yourself to feel was tired resignation. "I'll take that into consideration."

"Thanks, Ser Valen." Despite your internal misgivings, their smiles were full of genuine appreciation and admiration. "We really appreciate everything you've done for us."

"Noblesse Oblige." You deadpan, climbing to your feet once Ari started to show signs of recovering. "I should get going. Good luck with the reclamation."

"Have a good day, Ser Valen!"

You supported Ari as she limped along beside you, until you'd finally split ways with the citizens that had run across your untimely arrival. It was only after you were well away that Ari finally tugged on your sleeve.

"...Aren't you the Mayor now, Master?"

"Yes."

"Then..."

"Yes."

"Oh."

You walked on in silence for several blocks as Ari's head swivelled around to take in the town curiously. The pace you made was slow to account for her, so it gave the timid Testament plenty of time to drink in the recovering atmosphere of Carona... Which was important, considering she'd probably be here for a while.

The small frown that fit snugly upon her lips said she wasn't impressed.
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"Ser Valen, you're back!"

Your knights, unlike the rest of Carona, recognized you for who you were instantly. "Welcome back! And Miss Ari, as well!" It was more of an upbeat welcome reaction than you expected, actually. You stood there flat-footed in the face of it, frozen somewhere between muted surprise and some unfamiliar feeling of warmth trying to elbow it's way up from the pit of your stomach.

After a moment of hesitation, you felt your mind begin to whir back into action. These were your knights after all, you couldn't afford to falter in front of them... But... Well, they were your knights, so...

"Have I been gone that long?" You very deliberately relaxed your muscles, affecting a more composed stance. Faltering was one thing, being so formal was another; You could stand to interact with them a little more casually in this case, couldn't you? If it kept the puzzlingly warm little butterflies around, that was an acceptable compromise.

"About three weeks?" One answered, "Was starting to wonder if we'd need a search party. Man, you should have been here when the Salamander Representative came back and told us you'd just disappeared in the Fae Forest."

"Representative or not, I'm pretty sure Miss Lamandra was about to set him on fire. We had a betting pool on whether he'd get out of town with his hide intact or not."

Someone from the back commented blithely about having won half a week's worth of pay off of that, and that somehow only raised further concerns in your mind.

"Not long after that, a lot of our missing ranks started showing up outside town, all covered in some kind of sap." The first knight to greet you continued the conversation without a comment, "Dunno what you did out there, but we're glad to have them back. Have you met with Miss Lamandra since getting back in town?"

"No, not yet." You shake your head, feeling a crick in your neck that you'd need to crack later. "It's why I'm here. Is she out?"

"Should be back soon. I'd be careful, though."

"Careful?" You echo warily.

"She's been mumbling about feeding you to a Behemoth for the past couple weeks." One knight laughed, "Can't imagine that bodes well for you."

Why would she be mad at you? You told her where you were going, she even accepted it! You came back successful too, with all the knights and Ari! What more did she want from yo- Oh. Right, the Behemoth. If she found out about that on her own, then... That would do it. It was still sleeping though, so it's not like it was going to be a threat any time soon. You had plenty of time to figure out how you were going to deal with that.

"Thanks for the warning. Is Asche around?"

"The little maid? She's usually shadowing Miss Lamandra, so I'd expect them both back around the same time."

Well, that gave you some time to prepare yourself at least.
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>Ask the secretary knight something else
>Compile a list of things to talk to Rinnier about when she gets back
>...Convince your knights to not inform Rinnier you were back, and wander off.
>Other? (write-in)
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>>1965606
>Ask what exactly happened to Priat
>Compile a list of things to talk to Rinnier about when she gets back
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>>1965626
You need to mention what you want to talk to her about, anon!
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>>1965610
>Compile a list of things to talk to Rinnier about when she gets back

Nymph's wood
Faedka
Oakenrues
That the Oakenbears are gonna go back to sleep
The house ;_;
Dryad
The Atelier
The sap
Luna and Artemis
Doppelrue

Don't mention the behemoth.
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>>1965610
>>1965645
Geez I forgot about

>The Prophecy
>The Goddess
>Fuckin' Maran

Also
>Ask the secretary knight something else
About the Tier girls
How have the demihumans been doing
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>>1965633
>>1965610
Oh, right

>Talk to Rinnier about:
All of this: >>1965645, except maybe Dopplerue because why?
The state of rebuilding efforts
The missing Tier girls
Mim and her offers of help
The townspeople's stance on demihumans
The Oakenrue we sent to the city
The similarity of the Teranford situation to a Manaless zone
Try to determine if she's contaminated
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>>1965684
As I've said for the past six months, we need to build some trust between us and stop with this shaky arms-length business relationship with her. Irue and most of us still feel like shit about doppelrue it would do us all some good to talk about it.
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>>1965709
Doppelrue is a really bad idea. Telling Rainner about it will do nothing for the situation but make her lose trust in our ability to use the bracelet, or make any sound judgement. She'd have a point, but I'd rather not hear it from her.
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>>1965676
>>1965645

These but definitely tell her about the Behemoth. We can't afford to *forget* it again.

We also need to clarify what being our Testament actually means.

And to maybe pull back the Demi-humans. Perhaps they can reconstruct the farm that the Behemoth was kept in?
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>>1965606
And no Dopplerue either.
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>>1965811
I really want to see her reaction, but I'm afraid it'll do more harm than good.
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>>1965610
If Reinner isn't here, we could go check on Priat
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I have made a mistake.
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>>1966186
It's not like you didn't have months of advance warning.
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>>1966186
This has been a quest of mistakes since the very beginning.
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>>1965610
>>Ask the secretary knight something else
Shoot the shit with our knights, ask their names, ask what else we missed. Maybe make them some tea while we wait for Rinnier.

The good company is unexpected but not unwelcome!
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>>1965610
Oh and tell Rinnier and Asche that we missed them, then
>hug Rinnier
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>>1965626
>>1965676
>>1966285
>Talk to the knights about...!
About the Tier girls
How have the demihumans been doing
things in general.
What happened to Priat?
I'm bad at names, anon!

>>1965645
>>1965676
>>1965684
>>1965821
>Talk to Rinnier about...!
Nymph's wood
Faedka
Oakenrues
That the Oakenbears are gonna go back to sleep
The house ;_;
Dryad
The Atelier
The sap
Luna and Artemis
The Prophecy
The Goddess
Fuckin' Maran
The state of rebuilding efforts
The missing Tier girls
Mim and her offers of help
The townspeople's stance on demihumans
The Oakenrue we sent to the city
The similarity of the Teranford situation to a Manaless zone
Try to determine if she's contaminated
the Behemoth.

... I have decided the Behemoth has woken up ahead of schedule. Please go save Carona.
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Oh speaking of Maran, I always had thought she was the one that made the Nightgaunts. Her and the brigands were the only people who knew about it, and I doubt the brigands would have their own men get fucked up by mysterious shadow monsters.
Then I thought how weird it is for her to make shade apparitions while also having a wisp flashlight.

>you make idle note of how easily Maran had conjured a Wisp apparition into her hand to light the corridor
>"Nightgaunts." Maran mutters, "They're afraid of light, but only fire can reveal them."

She also knew about Ari's name.

>"What about Jenseits?" you resist the urge to sigh when she drifts to mind, "The girl we found in the woods?"

>"I don't like her." Ari bit out swiftly. You slipped a step at the unexpected vehemence, from Ari of all people. "She kept trying to talk to me."

>"About what?" You blink, curious despite yourself.

>"Don't know." Ari muttered, "She kept asking me about things I don't remember."

>"...She knew about your past?" you venture suspiciously, trying to figure out how Jenseits even got that kind of information. "Nn.." Ari shook her head though, derailing your thoughts. "It's like... The things she asked me about never happened? I'd.." Her head dropped away as she spoke, gradually finding the floor more and more interesting, "I'd never forget those things."

>"Like what?" You press mildly, "Can you give me an example?"

>"Ah...Um.. Hm." Your Testament clammed up, choking a little at the question, "Like... about..." She trailed off again, indistinct mumbling nearly too faint to catch. "A stuffed wog?" You boggle, the image of a tadpole roughly the size of a housecat coming to mind. They were carnivorous things that lived in swarms within swamps mostly. "You mean food?"

>"No, a doll." Ari corrected faintly, "That you gave me."

And then at some point, an anon off-handedly asked if Maran was a Luna adept or something for knowing all of these things that had never happened. Personally, I think she's the god damn motherfucking prophet. I wouldn't be surprised if she had a way to hide herself, especially since we have a relic that straight up changes our appearance.

>"But how?" You lace your tongue with deliberate wonder as Caylen begins to talk himself into a deeper hole. "To think you would go out of your way to call an audience with a Prophet who travels the very nations, whose time alone is worth more than even the royal family's whim, all for me?"

>"Er... Yes, of course. You know I am always concerned for how you are doing, Irue. I had to call in several favours, to be sure, but I was quite worried." He nodded, an uneasy smile slowly gaining legitimacy on his face.

He called in a favour for his childhood friend, who he already have good relations with.

There's also some stuff going on with Artemis and the Goddess and Maran's meddling, and to boot she found an atelier. She's the only person I can think of who's slithering around our feet like a fucking snake.
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>>1966395
Don't forget the most important part, the age of a physically intimate Irue has arrived!
>>1966361
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>>1966425
If you read the discussion between Caylen and Maran about the prophecy, it sounds like Maran isn't the Prophet.
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>>1966452
I did read it, that's how I found some of those quotes. If everyone knew who the Prophet looked like, then there's no way they could get around so easily. Maran was really hesitant to talk about the Prophet when anons nudged her in the forest, and she also somehow appeared and disappeared in Caylen's place without any other person spotting her. The amount of funky shit going on with her completely outweighs the possibility of Caylen not being tricked like a goon. Again, I wouldn't be surprised if she could change her appearance or something like that.
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>>1966395
I just realized that with all of that, we still didn't manage to squeeze in a thank you.

Irue is such an awful person.
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I have no idea when this update is going to come out. We will be... Working through it in pieces. The rest of this thread belongs to Rinnier, now. If you remember anything else to talk to her about... The conversation is going to be on going.

In the meantime, I am going to be opening a bottle of vodka. Drunkanon, where ever you are, I'm coming to join you before this is over.
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>>1966580
>If you remember anything else to talk to her about
I'd like to emphasise the fact that we've found a previous case of a mana up and leaving before Salamander.
I'd like to secure our privacy before we start talking about Dryad and the atelier too.

Good luck Riz!
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>>1966580
i'll toast a nice refreshing glass of water to that
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>>1966580
I'm with you, in body and spirit.
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The casual environment was so alien to you, and part of you wondered if you were really supposed to be a part of it. You didn't know... Any of them. They were your knights, of course, but as people, you barely knew their faces. Could never hope to remember their voices. The only interaction you could remember ever having with them was through Dullem as a proxy, and watching them work from afar.

Yet they were the first ones to welcome you back. They welcomed you.

You could have just left immediately, but... You didn't want to let go of this just yet. So you asked the first thing that came to mind; Anything to keep the conversation going. "Was Priat alright in the end?"

"He made it out just fine." The secretary-ish knight smirked as he reminisced. "Not for any lack of Miss Lamandra trying, though. Seems like they have a... History, and this wasn't the first time he'd stepped wrong."

Priat had mentioned wanting to leave town fairly quickly. You'd not pried too deeply into how he knew Rinnier, but she had seemed somewhat stand-offish regarding him when you last spoke. "Is he still around? I was the one who convinced him to leave it to me, so..."

"'Fraid not." The secretary waved laughed, "Never seen a man clear that many flights of stairs in one leap, either. I'd be surprised if he hadn't fled town that hour, trying to escape Miss Lamandra."

...She was hard to deal with, but Rinnier wasn't that scary. Especially since she lacked any affinity with Salamander now. "Did he mention some way to get in contact with him?"

"Just said there was a mutual contact if you needed him. Didn't say who, though." The secretary shrugged, "The whole thing felt unnecessarily hush-hush, but my best guess is that he didn't want Miss Lamandra finding a way to track him down."

"Well, I guess it can't be helped for now." You shrugged resignedly, "How's the reconstruction going? Have the demihumans been behaving themselves?"

"Aye, it's been... Well, going." The secretary gestured to the paper spread across his makeshift desk, leaning back against it. "I'm Dullem, or Miss Lamandra, could tell you about it better, though. As for the demihumans..." He looked over to the other assembled knights in askance. "Hey, how are the dogs doing?"

You appreciated the moment of absolute silence which spread through the otherwise jovial environment as each of your knights sseemed to very rigidly realize they had just casually slurred your Testament's pack... And probably your Testament, as well. You quirked a brow as one of them coughed awkwardly.
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"They've been a great help. Very beneficial to work with." Your lips thinned, prompting another of the knights to clap the speaker about the chest amiably; A not so subtle sign to shut up. "Err... To be honest Ser Valen, it's been rough dealing with them."

"Why?"

There went the atmosphere you had been trying to savour. You shake your head, trying to recall what you knew about body language. They were tensing up, you knew this wasn't comfortable for them... And you had spent so long being guarded, you'd just naturally taken that stance here, as well.

You raised your hand to forestall their hesitance to answer. "I hoped there would be some success, but I didn't expect it to go smoothly. If it's only been rough, then it's fine... I just want to know why."

"Ah... Apologies, Ser Valen." Some modicrum of relaxation had crept back in the room, but they still stood at what could roughly be described as casually attentive. "To be blunt, they're lazy and unreliable. Unless we keep a close eye on them, they're liable to just wander off in the middle of the job. It's caused a lot of delays, and sometimes there've been accidents."

Not terribly surprising. On paper, they were powerful and potent additions to any workforce... But in practice, you could count on a single hand how many of them may have had any motivation to actually assist. You'd hoped Kara's leadership would have been enough to compensate. "Has anyone brought this up to Kara?"

Unfortunately, they meet you with a collective shrug. "The only one that really talks to her is Dullem. We've told him about it, but your guess is as good as ours as to whether he told her. If he did, we ain't seen anything come of it." So either Dullem hadn't brought it up, Kara didn't care, or she couldn't fix it... Each of those possibilities were concerning, in different ways.

Although, there was one other thing that bothered you for entirely different reasons. "Do Dullem and Kara work closely with each other?"

"Uuhh..." You looked between the group of assembled knights, and the secretary, curiously. "Well so far as we know, they really only seem to listen to her, so the captain's always having to organize things through her. She seems to just ignore the rest of us, and Shade take me if I know why."

"Aye, that demihuman's some scary shit. I saw her lift an entire house on her own, once." Another knight piped up helpfully, "Personally, I'm perfectly happy being ignored, if the alternative is annoying a monster like that. No offense, Ser Valen." You sighed at the hastily tacked on apology. "You can never tell when those demihumans are just going to leave you high and dry, and the notion of one of em just bending me in half is straight terrifying."

"Kara's the only one that can do that." You assauge them idly, "...And she won't. Probably. Is it really just Dullem, though? She doesn't listen to Rinnier?"

Your response was a rousing round of shrugs.
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"Miss Lamandra mostly leaves orders with the captain, I don't know that I've even seen those two in the same place since we've been here."

"...Do you know if Dullem has been reporting the demihuman's issues to her?" Your eyes narrowed, that lovely feeling of warmth in your gut giving way to a more familiar sensation of irritability and stress. Rinnier had expressed doubt over working with the demihumans in the past, and... Well, you'd never actually seen them interact at all. Were Ari and Dullem really the only go-betweens?

"Sorry, boss." You blinked at the knight, stopping his apology mid-sentence as you stared at him strangely. "...Er... Ser Valen?"

"..."

You were his boss, weren't you? It wasn't wrong to call you that. It wasn't, but...

"Can you repeat that?"

"Miss Lamandra-"

"No, after that."

The knight looked to his fellows uneasily, almost studiously trying to avoid the fact you hadn't so much as blinked after fixating your crimson eyes on them. Unfortunately, any solidarity they were seeking was scarce to be found. "Er...Sorry, Ser Valen?"

...He wasn't going to do it again?

"..."

"..."

He fidgeted uncomfortably as the silence stretched out, before clearing his throat. "Sorry... Boss?" You blinked almost reflexively, trying to figure out why that made you feel so weird. Dullem had called you that before too, hadn't he? You tried to remember...

"What's your name?"

"Gene, Ser Valen." He saluted you stiffly... Or tried to. It was an attempt at a salute, but you doubt he ever actually learned how it was supposed to be done. "It won't happen again, I'm very sorry."

"...I'm not mad." Your reassurance seemed to do little to convince the man, who remained more rigid than most trees you'd seen in the past two weeks. "You can relax, I won't do anything to you."

"Erm, excuse me then, Ser Valen. I should get back to work." You frowned at the blatantly shoddy excuse, keeping your eyes on the newly named Gene with vague disappointment as he made a hasty exit to... Somewhere. The empty doorway to the streets were well observed by evey occupant in the room for a beat, before you turned back to the rest of the assembled knights and tilted your head curiously.
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"...What does he do?"

"Ah... Uh." Their mouths opened to answer, but nothing actually seemed to come out. You looked towards the secretary in mounting confusion, as several of the other knights began to make their own excuses to get back to work. "I... Can find out for you later?" The secretary offered tentatively, unsure of what to do about being put on the spot.

"I'd appreciate that." You knew his name now, you could hunt him down later. Actually- "While I'm at it, what's your name as well?"

"Fen." He answered easily, "Fen Lumenchild, at your service. Before you ask, Miss Lamandra mostly has me acting as her aide. I help handle paperwork, sort messages, receive visitors..." He wore a dimly self-depreciative smirk, "Not the valiant duties that typically come to mind when you think of knighthood, but I'm happy to help however I can."

You had hoped to keep a tenuous grasp on that strange, warm feeling from earlier... But it didn't seem like that was possible, anymore. You're not even sure what had caused it in the first place, but now the knights had already scattered. "Has their been any word regarding the Tier family?" You stifled a frown and moved on, fully turning your attention to the only knight that hadn't taken the opportunity to make himself absent.

"Tier... The burned out estate outside Carona, right?" Fen licked his lips thoughtfully, "Can't say I've seen anything come in related to them. That place was a wreck when we got here, too... I doubt we'll be getting around to the stuff out there any time soon- Ah!" His fingers snapped triumphantly, "Maybe not what you're after, but a guy from the Shrine named Marchovic took care of an Oakenbear that had spawned from around there. Miss Lamandra said you'd approved it?"

"Mm." That was old news. The Tier sisters were still missing, then...? It'd been almost two months since you'd inadvertently destroyed the previous Mayor's plans for rebellion. If they were still around, they should have shown up by now.

...Or, worse, if they had been held hostage somewhere, then it was probably too late. There were only bodies to be found now.

"Has anything else interesting happened while I've been gone?" You set those uncomfortable thoughts aside for the moment. "Weird people showing up, visits from the Crown..."

"Nothing like that." stretched, "I don't know what it'd have to be to qualify as interesting to someone like you, but we had another snakemeat party about a week ago. Wisp bless that we didn't end up with as many left overs as we did last time. The knights pulled together to cook it up for the town, and it only lasted till the day after."
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"Huh." Hunting that snake was one of the few happy memories your Doppleganger had experienced. You still needed to finish sorting through the recollections that it had left you, sometime. Back then, you'd simply sealed them up as best you could, and tucked them deep into the recesses of your conscious, hoping to forget about them. The prospect of looking through them now was still intimidating, but being bitten didn't scare you as much. You knew full well it was going to hurt.

You'd been hurt before; You were becoming more comfortable dealing with it. That didn't make the prospect any more appetizing, but at the very least you could acknowledge it without trying to deny its existence, or... Getting furious with yourself over it, again.

"Ser Valen?"

"Oh." You close your eyes, deliberately withdrawing from the slippery slope of your own spiral of thoughts. "How was the snake caught? Were there any casualties?"

"None that I know of, but you'd have to ask Dullem about the specifics." Fen shrugged, "I don't leave the HQ much. Although, I recall Miss Lamandra was particularly incensed over getting rid of the alcohol during the celebration."

"There shouldn't have been enough alcohol for a celebration." You state flatly, feeling a little knot begin to twist in your stomach. You regret trading the warm little butterflies back for this familiar roiling. "What happened?"

"Far as I can tell, not much." Fen shrugged off your concerns, "After a couple days, the drink all dried up and we were back to work."

...Was that something you did? Or had Rinnier handled it? If nothing came of it, that was good enough, wasn't it? You raised a hand to your temple, feeling a headache begin to come on. You needed more information, you needed to make preparations, you hadn't been here and something was probably going to bite you over it later because of something you missed. You-

"Irue?" A familiar red haired Testament stepped through the front door, calling out in wonder. "When did you get back? Ari's with you?" Her pace sped up as she approached, "Priat came back saying you'd handle it, are you alright? What happened? Did you... I mean, are they...?" She trailed off, either unwilling or uncertain whether to vocalize her questions.
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Not far behind, Asche's placid gait finally caught up to the much longer strides of her erstwhile flame-haired charge... And briskly carried the little maid past Rinnier in its entirety, as she very resolutely claimed a small piece of territory directly behind, and to the left of you.

"...Hey, Asche." Your attention flickered away from Rinnier's questions, and towards the petite figure of your most loyal childhood friend... And also the one that had apparently been keeping secret after secret from you, the entire time.

Never the less, her pale sea-green eyes met yours unblinkingly. Laconic and expresionless, you could still pick out the subtle signs of emotion that bled through her otherwise placid facade. "Irue." Her customarily soft spoken voice whispering a greeting, "Welcome home." ...Which would have been so much more touching, if you weren't currently standing in the foyeur of a repossessed building in the middle of Carona.

You resolved to talk to Asche later, and turned your attention back to Rinnier as you tried to figure how to go about this. Or... What you even trying to do.

"Well?" She prompted you impatiently, arms crossed under chest as she waited for an answer to her questions. "Where do we stand now?"

Besides the potential relation to Teranford, did you need to include her in this? The events of the Atelier, and Ari's contamination. Caylen's departure, and Maran's inevitable involvement. Artemis, the Shrine, House Valen's contract with the Fae. Was any of this really her business? You could just tell her what she needed to know, and... And then...And then what? Handle the rest yourself? Like you had everything else?

You...

>Keep it formal. Well informed allies can help you.
>Take a risk. What you need isn't an ally, anymore.
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>>1969286
>>Take a risk. What you need isn't an ally, anymore.
She's our Testament. I'll vote to punch her straight in the face again if we have to.
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>>1969286
>Take a risk.
I don't think we should keep secrets, especially of this magnitude. We're never going to establish a working relationship with her if we keep hiding important details for her to learn at the last minute. She gets to hear everything.
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>>1969286
>>Take a risk. What you need isn't an ally, anymore.
Tell Rinnier we missed her!
Hug Rinnier!
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I'm going to get some rest. I'll see how I'll try and handle this depending on what page we're at when I get up.

It's looking like it may be a better idea to just start the next thread with Rinnier's conversation, but I don't know how fast/slow we'll sink through 3 pages.
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>>1969286
>Take a risk. What you need isn't an ally, anymore.
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>>1969286
>>Take a risk. What you need isn't an ally, anymore
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>>1969286
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>>1969286
>>Take a risk. What you need isn't an ally, anymore.
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>>1969286
>tell her the golems won't be a problem anymore.
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>>1969286
>take a risk
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>>1969286
>>Keep it formal. Well informed allies can help you.
I'm, not adverse to the risk, but we tried to be friendly with Reiner when we first got her, to no avail.
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>>1969386
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>>1969829
Risks!

>>1969925
Formalities!

Well, this seems pretty one sided.
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>>1969819
We're getting there.

We're already on page 8, so we'll take this up in the next thread. Until then....
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>>1969925
Because she was being fucked up by survivor's guilt back then. Probably still is to some extent but she kinda mellowed out after murdering us twice.
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...You didn't want to keep doing that. You were tired.

"Rinnier, we need to talk."

Tired of jumping at shadows. Of holding every card to your chest, and struggling to keep them all in your hand. Of scrambling to try and find a solution to every problem on your own. Of never being able to trust anyone.

"I... Need to talk."

You didn't want to keep doing this. You didn't want to always feel as if there was no one else around. To keep everyone in your life at arm's length, trying to protect yourself. Trying to find the 'right way' when you struggled just to find 'a way'.

You'd made the mistake of breaking in the Imprisoned Child's Atelier... And the cracks were still there. Even now, what had once been tightly wound away felt as if it were straining through the gaps, and you had no idea how much more you could take before it broke again.

You couldn't keep doing this.

"Please...?"
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http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive.html?tags=Valen+Quest

Something is terribly wrong with my internet connection, and I am unable to upload the traditional ending gif, but we are archived.

I'll lurk the thread for a bit to try and answer some questions if I can.

Apologies to all anons who participated in Valen Quest but died at their keyboards wondering when QM would finally stop.

To those who did not make it to the end, we will never forget your sacrifice.

Also if anyone else can do the ValEnd thing, I'd appreciate it. This is stressing me out.
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>>1970384
So, how badly did we fuck up this time?
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>>1970409
Locked in the fourth Bad End route.
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>>1970409
You're the good one, anon.

Also I'm not sure fucking up is even possible in this thread. This is a decent time to talk about it, but with the Atelier finally over, you're officially in the second arc of the quest. No more hold overs, no more "one more thing".

For most of the cast, it's not a blank slate anymore. They know you, they have history with you and vice-versa. You're not fighting to earn anyone's trust among your Testament/Knights, or trying to prove your worth to them before it's too late. You've done that already. Anything, and everything, you could have proven has been done already. In short... You're not strangers, anymore. Most of the cast has already made up their mind about you, one way or another. No one is going to expect you to continuously reprove yourself to them.

The second arc is going to be... Different. We'll see how it goes. This decision is probably the first big one you've made for this section. It's not necessarily a good or bad one, but you'll see the results of it quickly. Or you could, at least; You may not realize what the results are, and just glaze over them.
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>>1970460
>You may not realize what the results are, and just glaze over them.
>may
Ahahahaha
Hahahaha
Hah
;_;
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>>1970460
Ah, and another question: when did that Irue pic acquire that watercolor-like coloring?
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I was bored and tossed it into https://paintschainer.preferred.tech/index_en.html then spent a couple hours screwing around with it.

I don't know if it's just a temperamental program, or if it's just because I suck at art, but getting the colors you want to be in the places you want them is real pain.Also the bigger the picture, the more likely you are to just fuck everything up and have horrible color bleed everywhere. So for example, the Irue faces kind of work? But larger images like the massive page-wide Snakecatcher character arts seem to kind of break without extreme cropping... And even then.

That's the only face I've messed around with, though. I dearly adore my fanart, and tinkering with it via stuff like this just feels kinda dirty to me. Something something perverting the purity of my precious anons.

That stigma, notably, does not persist in regards to other people's fanarts! It's fine if those get perverted, because they don't contain the dreams and love of my anons. Here's a test result of throwing some of Hiss' aformentioned fanart from Snakecatcher in there.
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>>1970598
I don't understand this tool, I upload a black and white sketch and it auto colors it on the right hand side and just does whatever it wants when I doodle on it.
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>>1970598
You're making me want to draw something else for you, your sly person.
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This is completely unrelated, but I kept thinking about it and it's taken me to darker, and darker places.

>>1958441
>Yuri Harem Quest
Part of me began to wonder if I should run a Yuri Harem Quest I'll give YOU a yuri harem quest, PREPARE YOURSELF, ANON..

If it were just that much, it wouldn't be notable, but I find the idea of just running a quest that shallowly to be kind of repulsive, so I started thinking more about how I'd run something that blatant. What kind of setting would it be? What would be the point? The point can't just be harems, that's stupid. I'd get bored and drop that by the the second or third thread. No. If I were to do this, I needed something that could keep my interest.

So my mind kept coming back to that, and somewhere in this spiral of obsessive mental reconstruction, I started to world build. Establish lore. Ideas. At some point I decided that if I were ever going to run something so bland, I'd just go all the way and make it the worst sort of satire... Played completely seriously.

And so, somewhat facetiously, I present to you...
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Yuri Harem Quest

The setting takes place in a world where the only civilized inhabitants are immortal women, each adorned with tattoo-like birthmarkings which signify both their eternal life and virginity. Everyone is a lesbian, everywhere, forever.

You spend the first two threads or so just doing slice of life lesbian things in a village. Going hunting, getting to know a handful of cast, whatever. Then, towards the end of the second thread, a monster appears. In legend, there are dark whispers of something known as "Man", who are the antithesis of everything this world stood for. They possessed a singular spear of terrible power, born of their body and wielded with the sole intention of bringing ruin.

From this spear the legendary Man could draw upon unbridled power, and in its presence, all would quiver and weaken. It possesses an aura which drives you to madness, corrupting and luring the immortal lesbians towards the most forbidden act... And it is through that terrible spear, that the Lord of Man could violate the natural order, and steal away the world's purity - Consuming the immortality of someone and washing away their birthmarkings as their mind is twisted and enthralled in the drug-like addiction which came from having been impaled.

While their immortality fades, and death becomes inevitable, they are no longer who they once were. Driven by a fanatical lust, countless innocents fall before Man, joining his army - Becoming Haremsoldiers, who exist only to serve their lord, in the hopes that they might find their mind and hearts be twisted and dirtied even further by the arcane magic of his nightmarish spear. Berserking, viking like thralls which violently raid the country, capturing more and more of their previous friends and yuri lovers to be sacrificed to the Haremlord, as the walls of his expanding territory are erected.

The MC is one such victim of these raids, and must flee a raiding party of these Haremsoldiers with a small portion of your cast, trying to escape being captured and sacrificed to the growing harem. You would spend several threads fleeing, with your group slowly being picked off by pursuers before finally managing to escape... But the war has only just begun. You must rally the others to try and stand against the Haremlord, and find a way to reclaim the purity of Yuri, which is your immortal birthright.
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Possible events in this quest include...

finding a male child and having the opportunity to either try to kill him, or raise him in an attempt to nurture goodness into his heart so that he may wield his terrible Spear against the oppressor - Straight Shota will be a constant temptation as you try to resist the ever strengthening presence of the adolescent Haremlord. Can you change his nature to one of monogamy, and sacrifice yourself to bind him to your cause? Or after all that work, would he choose someone else? Is it futile?!

Rescuing your best friend and designated yuri waifu from the early threads from a concentration camp. She supports you whole heartedly, and is always open and loyal to you.... But the Haremsoldiers are always quick to find you, and the war is taking a harsher turn. You eventually discover that your yuri waifu was a spy, and has long since fallen to the terrible Spear of the Haremlord - She was trained as a double agent through butt stuff, which is why she technically remains a virgin. Your rescue of her was all a trap!

The possibility of pursuing a sacred spear said to have once opposed the Haremlord and his hellish hyperweapon in the past. It can only be wielded by one pure of heart, willing to sacrifice their own life to oppose the rising darkness. Upon finding it, you realize that this spear will fuse forever with its wielder, draining their immortality and physically transforming via flesh-horror into the Valkyrie; A spear wielding woman of war.
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...I have no plans to actually run this, but after how unsettlingly easy it was to put that together with the intent to throw as many vanilla fetishes and questing memes into a parody pot, then attempt to make a somewhat serious and straight-faced quest attempt out of it, I felt like I couldn't just not let the anon know what kind of miserable writing prompt they'd inspired.
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There's a 90s anime just like this but I can't remember the name of it
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>>1970851
I dunno how you managed to make such a miserable idea sound interesting, but congratulations. I think.
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>>1970836
Oh God, this reads like a Chick Tract. I'm having to laugh with a horrified expression, and that's not easy.
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Romance in quests shouldn't be main plot, it should be by the way.
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>>1971000
That's the trouble. Anons are lonely and horny, any potential romance /will/ be relentlessly pursued, often to the detriment of things like plot and character development.

I was reading a quest a ways back about a paladin escorting an angel of his faith (war in heaven, didn't have usual powers, god busy, etc). Despite the stated fact that if they got together they'd /both/ fall, anons kept pursuing her.
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>>1971058
First Girl Syndrome is a really sad thing.
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>>1970988
I... Don't know what that is.

>>1971000
I want to run a quest that focuses completely on romance, one day. Rather than an idle thought, I've put a lot of preparation into building the world and concept for it... But I can't justify doing it until FoxFire concludes, which I have issues running in tandem with Valen.

The general premise is that the setting is divided into 12 territories, and within each of them there exists a singular entity known as a "Witch". They are deathless creatures, masquerading as human, who feel nothing for their fellow man. In their wake, they bring tragedy and catastrophe; Cruel plagues, cataclysmic flame, relentless rain and tearing winds.

They are heartless monsters, with countless deaths attributed to their names. Civilization has been stemmed by their presence, and repeatedly destroyed and set back due to their flippant malice - While some are so brazen as to commit routine and persistent abuse upon their territories.

And you... Well, you encountered one of them while exploring a ruin, and died for your troubles. Death, you're finding, isn't quite as permanent as most would have led you to believe. You're bound to this Witch now, to serve as her Knight; A guardian empowered by the Witch to protect and aid them.

The quest is primarily about the nature of love. The Witch is your designated waifu (though you may stray?), but... There are no misunderstandings. The myths are not wrong, and there will be a great deal of death - Some more personal than others. Make no mistake, there will not be an option to redeem anyone. Least of all yourself.
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>>1971098
First Girl Syndrome only happens because you let anons get too comfortable. All you have to do is add some brutal deaths sprinkled with some betrayal.
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>>1971103
This is cool and all but you're not gonna get away with procrastinating on the talk with Rinnier
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>>1971103
I would not want to play a bad guy.

>>1971098
I find that FGS occurs when a waifuable characters is introduced before the players are invested in the quest's plot enough. They just find an easily investable thing for themselves.
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>>1971121
That's next thread, anon! The only way I can procrastinate on it now is to put Valen on an indefinite hiatus to reboot FoxFire for the next 4-6 months.

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>>1971103
Sounds like the only love there would be from Stockholm syndrome. If you have literally no other option, does it really count?
Same for needing redemption. If you are forced to do those terrible things, with no other recourse, are they your fault?

So dark, depressing, and full of despair. Sounds familiar...
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>>1971129
This happened in artificer quest. We had a thread to create the setting and the MC, and in the first actual thread the QM posts a picture with the first female we encounter. I think it broke some kind of record or I've just put all similar events out of my mind

>>1971131
I've been thinking that maybe FoxFire would find some new blood that could trickle into Valen, but then Valen would be put on hold...
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>>1971157
I tried Foxfire when he first ran it, but it didn't hold my interest. Riz is good at characters and worldbuilding, so having a blank slate MC with no world knowledge didn't work for me.
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>>1971188
I didn't even notice the quest. I just opened the catalog and refreshed a few times a day to see if Valen was back. I actually still haven't looked at it from the archives, I don't even know what it's about
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>>1971129
>I would not want to play a bad guy.
I don't like black and white mentalities. People can be villainous, but no one is inherently evil. Everyone thinks they're doing the right thing, or something that's necessary... If they weren't, they wouldn't be doing it. I feel like that's human nature. The closest thing to being pure evil is the "I'm doing all these horrible things because it's FUN!" sort, which... I mean, they exist, but they make for very poorly engaging antagonists.

>>1971153
Similarly, it's complicated. I can't explain a whole lot of it without spoiling bits of the setting's lore, but your Witch isn't very demanding of you. It's a quest focusing on the nature of love, but that doesn't mean you are in love, or that you're even particularly affectionate with each other. You'd have restrictions, but it's not like you're being forced into relentless slavery that makes you do horrible things in cutscenes all the time.

>>1971188
>>1971157
Ironically, FoxFire seemed far more popular than Valen. It was frustrating to me, because I was just screwing around with it on a whim to test out /qst/ - The whole thing was just a spur of the moment writing prompt that I got attached to.

There are a number of reasons it stopped running, mostly having to do with a severe lack of time on my part, and the inability to satisfactorily run two quests simultaneously, but one reason it's still not running is that I realized I was always comparing it to Valen. It's a sweet child, and I know it has potential to be loved on its own, but I looked at it and just felt kind of bitter over its success.

When I run it, I want to run it because I love it, not to test waters, or accidentally refer people to a different quest via it. I've been putting some work into rebooting FoxFire (since 3 threads over a year ago does not warrant a continuation), and there's elements I'd like to fix in it. A reliable system for power usage for one, and a bit of an outline regarding how time flows.

Since we didn't get very far it probably wasn't apparent, but FoxFire wasn't meant to have normal time in it. You, as a spirit of Faith, were effectively timeless, and the world was going to pass you by quickly. It was meant to span out over generations, where you could see the effect your presence and actions were having on the world and its people. I really want to capture that kind of "I'm an outsider, looking in on a world with mixed emotions" kind of feeling, and that requires a bit more planning than just "Alright where do we go now?"

>>1971269
It's about hope and faith, anon! In a world that has long since lost one, and perverted the meaning of the other.
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>>1971279
>Everyone thinks they're doing the right thing, or something that's necessary... If they weren't, they wouldn't be doing it. I feel like that's human nature.
I concur completely, but I still wouldn't want to play a villanous person. You don't have to be Capital E Evil to be a bad guy.
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>>1971279
>Ironically, FoxFire seemed far more popular than Valen.
A handful of threads is a lot easier to go through than 64
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>>1971279
>I don't like black and white mentalities.
I don't either. You're right, they make for dull antagonists. I'm not sure how the Witches as described are anything but blatantly evil, which was I assume what prompted anon's comment.

>Similarly, it's complicated.
I don't see how the nature of love will come about with that setup, but you obviously know your setting better than me, so I'm sure it'll come through.
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>>1971330
>I don't see how the nature of love will come about with that setup
Gradually! Any other way and it'd come off as forced and cheesy. It's difficult to explain the premise behind it, but the nature of the Witches are a bit different. Since it's basic stuff you'd learn early on anyway... And since it'll be years/never until I can run it

The stories about them aren't wrong. They do bring tragedy, they are willfully and deliberately responsible for countless deaths, they are eternal, and they don't have any empathy or regret for the misery and loss they cause. Some of them are twisted, though they're the weird ones.

The thing about them being mostly mythological in the setting is that these things don't constantly happen. Most people have no idea what their territory's Witch even looks like. They can, and do, just live and pass time among normal people for years, decades, centuries, or whenever they decide to bring forth the latest calamity.

Most of the quest has you learning more about the Witches, and their Knights (the quest is specifically titled Witch Knight, after all!), and finding out there's more going on with them, and the world. You travel, you meet the other Witches, and you learn about history.

I say it's a quest which focuses on the nature of love because that's really the overall purpose of it. Most conflicts would be unrelated and inconsequential in the grand scheme of things, and you'd be traveling with your Witchfu to look into and resolve various incidents that introduce you to her sisters (other Witches)... But the core theme of your journey is just encountering various aspects of love, and wondering if you actually think of your designated waifu that way.

Love isn't always pretty, and it's more than Happily Ever After. How shallow is love to you? How deep can it become before you drown? Are you the type of person who would fake it, just to get what you want? What are you willing to accept because of it? What principles will cause you to forsake it? ...What does it even mean?

It probably won't be super interesting to everyone, but I'd love to run it.
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>>1971541
They still sound like pretty cut and dry villains. How often you do terrible things has no relation to how terrible they are.

By the way, if you want anons to empathise with the PC, my suggestion would be to let the PC have a few threads of life before they get caught by the Witch. Otherwise, based on what I've seen in other quests, anons won't actually care that they're bound to her, as far as they're concerned it's always been this way. If you do this, a different or temp name might be on order.
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>>1971646
>They still sound like pretty cut and dry villains.
There is more to them, but since I can't really explain without spoilers, that doesn't mean a whole lot. Unfortunately I really have no way of knowing if you'd still think that afterwards.

At the very least, they're meant to be somewhat sympathetic, but not in the sense that it's going to suddenly make them out to be great people.Considering them villains is perfectly fine, since in some sense, they do serve that role.

>if you want anons to empathise with the PC...
That's something I've been toying with, actually. I have some tentative ideas (and am open to naming it something a bit more ambiguous to correlate). To be blunt, the quest won't matter at all if the anons don't consider the choices they make personally. The quest isn't meant to be "Eventually you fall in love", but an actual journey to discern whether you are, or not, and if so, if it's worth it.

Amusingly, in a quest that's designed to revolve around the waifu, its entire structure is meant to question having one at all. I feel like it'll be tricky to do that, but the first step I need to nail is making sure the potential players are invested in the question beyond the surface level. (un?)fortunately, I have plenty of time to think about how to execute it.

One thing I've been thinking of specifically is how it'd be nice if I had a drawfag to tap for it. The Witchfu is meant to be particularly personal to the players, and while I can affect that to some degree via text, having tangible images to associate her with through out the quest would be fantastic.

Unfortunately I am personally terrible at that, and don't actually know any that would be interested in doing something like this. I'd probably have to commission stuff, but considering how I'd likely need specific circumstances scribbled together, they'd still need a tertiary knowledge of the setting, and then there's the question of when it'd run...

It's basically just daydreaming on my part.

Still, thanks for the advice! I don't get an opportunity to talk about this very often, so I appreciate letting me screen some of the progress past you guys.
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>>1971852
It makes me think of the Last Unicorn.

She's a fucking sociopath because she's divorced from mortality.

And after being turned human she's faced with an eternity of loss as the only unicorn that can love.

She freed the Harpy based on principles not attachment, but still principles based on emotions. It's not that she doesn't have emotions but that her frame of reference for them is alien.

Sounds like we would be her Molly Grue




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