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The last of the quincy family stumbled down a lonely dirt road, her icy blue eyes filled with grief, rage and a recently born madness. Her hair, once well groomed and tied into a proper bun was disheveled and messy, making her look like a beggar despite the fine clothes she disguised herself with. the scent of dried blood hung around her, as it clung to her like a layer of make up, blood from her father and who knows whatelse, mingled with her own as she shakingly stepped deeper into the woods, her head twitching as she turned and glanced around, paranoia and fear holding her heart. Until she finally came upon the solid iron door in the side of a white stone house shaped into a perfect square. Her eyes narrowed, the maelstrom of emotions hardening and freezing in place as determination took the head. Pressing herself against the door, it flew open. She fell to the floor with a thud, screaming, crying and howling as she cursed the living, the dead, and that scar covered bitch Kemuri. Slamming her gloved fists into the ground she stood, her chest heaving with every ragged, growling breath she took. Wordlessly, she swore she'd have her revenge upon the soul reapers, no matter what she had to do or become. Her eyes softened as she stood, walking like a puppet over to the library/ archives her family had saved, filled with studies and texts her father despised yet refused to destroyed, so he simply kept them locked away, from his children and the world. But she was the only one left, so none could stop her or look down on her for taking this caged knowledge and absorbing it in her dark quest for vengeance.

The mad quincy grabbed the handle's of the door, and steeled herself, as what could be called humanity slipped from her heart
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Aizen Sōsuke stood in his quarters, his back to the door. he faced a safe he had hidden away in the wall, via a mixture of kido and cunning. He ran his hand over the stacks of papers, folders and books her had gathered in one of his most feverish studies. Of things most men would consider wrong, if not simply mad. Doubt plagued his mind, the words of the prodigy Kemuri kimi, her friend Tosen and that little bird that was so obsessed with him Aya sticking to his mind, fighting against the wave of pragmatic and angry thoughts he had held before. He grabbed one, frowning deeply as he flipped it open and stared at the diagrams and theories he had written himself. The mask of a hollow stared back at him, next to a blank shinigami figure which it stood next to as if they had been stitched together, circles representing their very beings sitting in the middle of them. Notes of theories yet untested covered the page, along with examinations on the nature of both breeds. Shinigami and Hollow. He flipped the page back, running his finger down perhaps the most detailed explanation of hollowification in existence.

Cont
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>>1230328

His frown deepened. He was ordered to destroy these, but couldn't as he felt the command foolish, since if he could merge hollow and Soul reapers, perhaps every soul in the soul society and beyond could be safe. Perhaps they could all be free from oppression and fear.

But....what would be the cost? He had figured out a way that could achieve exactly as he wanted but....if it didn't it might utterly destroy souls or simply create a hollow. Did progression and power out way morality and goodness. He set the book down, and grabbed the diagram he drew of this...miracle her had devised.

the Hōgyoku. That which might achieve his dream, and give the monsterous power of hollows and combine it with soul reapers. it would put the fates of the people in their hands and the power it would give could keep them safe and...and give him an equal potentially, someone he might be able to call friend.

He smirked and sighed, setting the paper back inside as he closed the safe, locking it as it seemed the vanish away. Closing his eyes, images of blood sharpening itself into a deadly blade, smoke flowing as scarred skin formed from it, the deadly purple eyes above scars and under hair as white as snow. The unique feeling of reiatsu sharpened to a surgical point, able to break through the skin of souls far more powerful than herself, a skill fashioned by her old life's sheer talent and skill in killing and mastery of the art of the sword.

Kimi....perhaps he did not need to seek to make an equal, he certainly did not need a friend anymore. She treated him casually, and seemingly had no fear or reservations because of his nearly unnatural power and skill. Maybe one day he could also call her equal but...but

She was odd. In more than one way, he had watched her for sometime. Sure her rapid progression could just mean she's like him but. He pushed his glasses up, remembering her reaction to hollow bait. She was nearly drooling from just being around it.

And...the meno's she killed. There were signs it had fired a cero, and her clothes had been burnt away but...she was nearly untouched.

Aizen opened his eyes. He'd have to keep observing her, and couldn't throw away his work. But...his former plan of testing the Hōgyoku, when he thought of it now....it sickened him. There had to be a cleaner way to achieve his dream, and maybe his only friend had some secrets that could reveal it.

But they'd have to be revealed without harming her....if she indeed held any. He knew it was possible to merge the powers of soul reaper and hollow, it was not just the dreams of a mad soul. He knew it in not only his heart, but his mind.

Shinji's voice drew Sosuke out of his deep thought and turmoil. the lieutenant smirked and then smiled. Well, he had all the time in the world, he'd just have to bring it up with Kimi some day.

but now, he had work to do and no time to reflect on his past. If what he wished was possible,

cont
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>>1230333
and if it had a "Clean" way of being achieved, he'd find it.


Kimi Kemuri
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The sound of flowing water...its actually quite calming. I'm not sure I have much to do today, since I'm on reserve as it stands and....well I'm still sore from those two quincy. I can still taste their blood on my tongue. Its a sour taste, a very sour taste. And even though I used their blood to heal my wounds and stich my flesh, I can still feel the ache of it all. But it should all pass by soon. It always does and has. I sigh, smiling as I relax next to the water fall in the middle of the kuchiki's garden, the water splashing on my face as a cold mist.

This...is heaven. I've never thought about it before but I'm....well in the best place I could ever hope to end up. I have a firm, but polite and kind lord, I have students who view me as a master and dear friend, I have comrades who will always be a challenge to face in a duel. And best of all I can show off my art and practice it as much as I want against actual threats.

Yeah, this if this isn't heaven, then I can't imagine what is.

What do I do
[] sit here for awhile
[] Find Byakuya and hang around him for awhile. maybe train him
[] Visit Aya/ Aizen
[] Visit Tosen
[] go out for lunch, by myself
[] Stop by the eleventh division, because I feel like getting mad today
[] practice my kido/ swordsman ship
[] Stop by the academy, and visit Sekiryu
[] ask one of my betters for training
[] try to visit the two young quincy
[] Just hang around the barracks for awhile
[] write in
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>>1230346
>[] sit here for awhile
>[] try to visit the two young quincy
>[] Stop by the eleventh division, because I feel like getting mad today
>[] Visit Aya/ Aizen

Alright, we've made fucking Aizen a slightly better person! And are you feeling alright HM?
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>>1230364
Yeah, just felt like crap yesterday, no idea why
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>>1230346
[] Find Byakuya and hang around him for awhile. maybe train him

[] practice my kido/ swordsman ship
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>>1230346
>[] practice my kido
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>>1230346
>[] try to visit the two young quincy
>[] Visit Aya/ Aizen
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Anyone else?
Also sorry for the wall of text.
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>>1230456
But it,s an awesome wall of text, therefore it is good.
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>>1230346
>[] Find Byakuya and hang around him for awhile. maybe train him
>[] practice my kido/ swordsman ship
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>>1230346
>Find Byakuya and hang around him for awhile. maybe train him
>practice my kido/ swordsman ship
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I smile, enjoying the serenity of this solitude and perfect spot, its nice and cool, but isn't close enough to the waterfall to be wet. Its a nice place to just let all of your worries pass on my by. But...but. my eye twitches and I tap my fingers on my knees, groaning as I stand back up, and open my eyes. But I don't like being idle, there's no use in doing nothing when there's something you can do. Sure relaxing is nice and all, but I have duties to do, even if I'm just on reserve today. I might be able to train a few of the less talented and skilled shinigami, I could just practice my own skills. As it stands, there's so much I can do, it'd be a waste to just relax by the waterfall and enjoy myself. Besides a member of the sixth division should never be idle. We have a reputation to uphold after all. and if a shinigami from another division saw me slacking, what would they think? they'd become lazy if they thought the model shinigami's could slack off, they'd think it was some loophole of the rules they could exploit.

And to just be honest, I need something to do to pass the time anyways. My white hair blows in the wind as I stare out at the rows of bamboo and trees ahead of me.

And then a familiar face walks down the stone path.

Byakuya walks into view, his arms crossed as he walks along. Judging from the look on his face, something's been annoying him. He walks along with all the confidence and dignity one would expect for royalty. But he's relaxed as well, like he knows everything around like the back of his own hand. And he probably does with how much I've trained and sparred with him here.

His eyes are closed, so he doesn't see me as he rests against a tree and sighs

"Finally, some peace and quite to think" He says smiling as the older sibling instinct Aya has given me whels up like boiling water

"OH BYAKUYA KUN!" I shout at the top of my lungs, cupping my hands around my mouth "Do you want to train with me?"

He sits there for a second, his brow furrowing as his lips purse. He sighs and opens his eyes

"Sometimes Kemuri sensei" He says angrily "I think you and captain yoruichi plan every morning to pester me"

"Oh no, I was just relaxing here to, and got a little bored" I say, hopping to the shore "Why, has the cat been bothering you again"

"She stole the ribbon keeping my hair together, again" He says with a blank expression before he smirks "But....well I remembered I had a tea pot nearby and, well she expected to chase me and not throw anything"

"Has she ever watch you fight?' I ask chuckling as he nods

"Oh most certainly, but....she wasn't happy about me throwing tea at her either" He sighs hanging his head, as I notice the red mark on his cheek "Not that I blame her of course, not that she's still mad"

"And she seems to have given you the ribbon back" I say happily, leaning down to look him in the eyes

"Which I am most grateful for, but not as much as I am for her stopping that annoying game of hers" He says dully
cont
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>>1230564
"So, what sort of training do you have in mind? I hope you aren't taking notes from her"

"Haven't decided yet" I say turning my back to him "And you know she's going to just do it again later, right"

"I wish I didn't" He says through gritted teeth

What do I do?
[] Set up a few dummies for us to practice kido on
[] draw my zanpakuto, and ask if this place is acceptable for sparring
[] grab his ribbon and run, telling him that yes I have in fact been taking notes from yoruichi 1d20+Mobility
[] turn to smoke, and challenge him to hit/catch me
[] write in
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>>1230583
>[] Set up a few dummies for us to practice kido on
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>>1230583
>[] turn to smoke, and challenge him to hit/catch me
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>>1230583
>[] turn to smoke, and challenge him to hit/catch me
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>>1230583
>[] Set up a few dummies for us to practice kido on
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>>1230583
>[] Set up a few dummies for us to practice kido on
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"Well you can always try and get the drop on her" I say, shrugging as I walk up to a few of the bamboo stalks by the side of the road, pushing my way past them and grabbing the already tattered dummies I've stored their, their cloth bodies spilling out random junk. I push the more offending pieces back in as I laugh "Even though that's probably impossible"

"Or I could just stop tying my hair into a ponytail" He says calmly, making me frown as I glance back at him

"Well that would stop that, but I think its a good look for you" I say, as I drag the dummies over to the wall of the cliff that the water fall comes down from

"You only think that because you wear one" He says, crossing his arms as he watches me calmly "And haven't had to deal with her taking your ribbon"

"That's very true, young lord" I say as he chuckles a very short chuckle "But I wonder why she hasn't"

"Maybe because she knows you'll try to find a way to get back at her?" He says with a smirk "Since you two love teasing eachother, or maybe she's just trying to bide her time before she pounces"

"Tch, who knows" I say shrugging as Byakuya frowns

"Oh, so we aren't sparring today?" He asks sounding a bit disapointed "Shame, and I'm guessing you're going to try and train me with kido today"

"And practice it myself" I say smiling as he smirks,

"Well, lets try and not make too much of a commotion, my proper kido teacher would be insulted if he sees us doing this" He says, looking slightly amused as he steps on the shore of the pond "And if you don't mind me asking, what type of kido are we going to be focusing on today"

What do I do
[] shrug
[] Say Bakudō, since I think he could use some more defensive skills (Kimi studies this, but does not use the spells she knows regularly)
[] Say Hadō, since I am more skilled at it then the others, and he could work it into his style (Kimi studies this kido category regularly, and uses it in combat)
[] say Kaidō, since healing is a powerful ability (least skilled, kimi knows near t nothing about this kido category)
[] Say I'd like to try to make a kido spell with him, but its kind of outside of either of our skill ranges
[] write in
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>>1230726
>[] Say Bakudō, since I think he could use some more defensive skills (Kimi studies this, but does not use the spells she knows regularly)
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>>1230726
>[] Say Bakudō, since I think he could use some more defensive skills (Kimi studies this, but does not use the spells she knows regularly)
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>>1230726
>[] shrug
>[] Say Bakudō, since I think he could use some more defensive skills (Kimi studies this, but does not use the spells she knows regularly)


Chaining people down and impaling them for their blood sounds like a good tactic to me.
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>>1230726
>[] Say Bakudō, since I think he could use some more defensive skills (Kimi studies this, but does not use the spells she knows regularly)
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"I was thinking Bakudo, since you use everything around you to your advantage in a fight, I think being able to better seal your enemies or coral them with barriers would be a fantastic addition to your style" I say crossing my arms, and smirk as I glance at the targets I've set up "And...well I could do with learning a bit more of it myself to be honest"

"Yes I've often thought of that myself, being able to control the battlefield to such an degree would fit perfectly with my methods" He says nodding "Besides it'd stop my foes from being able to flee, or even protect those under my command"

"Thinking like a true commander their, my young lord" I say bowing as he frowns "Besides, if you're quick enough you could seal someone mid strike! Sure I don't like playing dirty like that but..."

"But there's a problem Master Kemuri" He says glancing at the dummies I've set up "sure those are good for Hado or practicing with barriers, but sealing an uliving target it is...well it just won't work. Did you just forget about that Kimi"

"Well" I say dully "I did say I hadn't decided yet when I was setting them up"

"Clearly" he says with a smirk "So....that means we'll have to train on each other...if we're practicing seals that is"

What do I do
[]Just try a simple barrier with him
[] let him practice on me 1d20+will or don't resist the kido
[] practice on him with spells I know 1d20+spirit
[] try one I've been reading about on him 1d20+spirit
[] get some live *targets*
[] Ask some of my friends if they'd like to help us
[]write in
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Rolled 7 (1d20)

>>1230824
[] practice on him with spells I know 1d20+spirit
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Rolled 9 (1d20)

>>1230824
>[] try one I've been reading about on him 1d20+spirit
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Rolled 15 (1d20)

>>1230824
>[] practice on him with spells I know 1d20+spirit
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Rolled 2 (1d20)

>>1230824
>[] try one I've been reading about on him 1d20+spirit
>[] get some live *targets*
>[] Ask some of my friends if they'd like to help us


I can only foresee good things and clean jokes for this. (Especially if we get Yoruichi to help)
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Rolled 10 (1d20)

>>1230824
>[] let him practice on me 1d20+will or don't resist the kido

Struggle~
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Rolled 9 (1d20)

>>1230824
>practice on him with spells I know 1d20+spirit
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I grin widely, as Byakuya winces turning away from me as I turn to him, chuckling and turning into smoke as I leap off the rock I'm standing on, flowing over to the shore and reforming in front of him as I touch my feet down just on the edge of the water.

"Hey, since we're both practicing, why don't I go first" I say still smiling widely as he winces again "Since learning to resist this sort of thing is also incredibly important and...well I'm one of the few people who'd actually cast this on you"

"I knew you were going to do this" He groans, hanging his head "master, you know its really a pain sometimes, how easily you switch from being respectful to casual and blunt"

"Hey, no reason to treat anyone different when I'm not being polite" I say, shrugging as he looks back at me "So, can I"

"Yes" He says, rubbing his temple "Even though I know I'll regret it

What spell do I cast
[] just use all of them, one after the other
[] Seki
[] Geki
[] Sai
[] Sho
[] Tease Byakuya
[] Be respectful about it
[] write in
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>>1230892
>[] just use all of them, one after the other
>[] Be respectful about it
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>>1230892
>[] just use all of them, one after the other
>[] Tease Byakuya
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>>1230892
>[] just use all of them, one after the other
>[] Be respectful about it
Oh baby I've been waiting for this quest.
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>>1230892
>[] just use all of them, one after the other
>[] Be respectful about it
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>>1230898
"Hey, don't be so worried, I'll warn you before I cast them on you, I won't just hit you unprepared" I say, raising my index and midde fingers as my student and lord smiles happily "I'll even let you rest if you need to, now first comes Sai, tell me when you're ready"

He spreads his legs, holding his arms to his sides as he relax and his entire body slacks and goes limp. He isn't putting up any resistance

"Ready" He says confidently

I smile and point my fingers at him. He winces, as his arms twist back behind him and his chest is pushed up. He doesn't struggle and just frowns and sighs

"Release this before Yoruichi sees us like this" he sighs under his breath "neither of us want to hear what she'd have to say"

"Yeah, I know" I say, lowering my finger as his arms fall back to his side "Are you read? next comes Seki"

"Of course I am" he says confidently, spreading his legs and tightening his gut, holding his arms up as I hold my hand out, a small orb of blue energy forming at my palm

He runs up to me, and punches it on purpose, wincing as the ball pops, and he's sent flying back. But he stays on his feet, grabbing onto one of the lanterns.

"ready for geki?" I ask, smiling widely as he nods and calmly walks back into place

"I'll try to fight back against this one, so be prepared sensei" He says with a confident smile as I take a breath and begin to recite

"Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!!" I yell, as I trace the symbol in the air "Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"

[]Roll 1d20+will
or
[]go easy and roll 1d20+half will
or
[]hold back and roll 1d20
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Rolled 6 (1d20)

>>1230969
>[]Roll 1d20+will
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Rolled 11 (1d20)

>>1230969
>[]Roll 1d20+will
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Rolled 20 (1d20)

>>1230969
>[]Roll 1d20+will
Watch this.
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Rolled 17 (1d20)

>>1230969
>[]Roll 1d20+will
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Rolled 9 (1d20)

>>1230969
>[]Roll 1d20+will
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>>1230978
Oh.
I did not expect that.
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>>1230985
>>1230978
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>>1230978
Why is it that whenever Byakuya has a bad day, everyone else has a great one?
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>>1231004
Byakuya watches
Gripped with endless horror
Kimi rolled twenty
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I can feel him exerting his reiatsu, it rolls over me like a wave. But I just focus mine, narrowing my eyes as I put a bit more force behind the spell as I finish tracing the sigil in the air, lowering my hand like I'm sheath a sword. Byakuya is washed over by a wave of red light, that sticks to his body like water and flares like fire. His eyes stop moving, and his mouth freezes as he takes a breath. His legs lock up and his ares stiffen as his chest stops midrise. even his hair stops blowing in the wind as he stares ahead at me, unable to move his eyes or anything else as a rough breeze blows by and makes his body start to fall backwards, as he just remains like a perfect statue of himself. The red energy pulses, holding him in place as I stare at him.

I release the spell a moment later, and he catches himself mid fall, panting and looking a bit shaken up

"Sorry my young lord, please forgive me" I say bowing as he looks up at me, still pale in the face

"Don't act like a dog kimi, that was...terrifying" He says, chuckling to regain some of his confidence, standing back up as his hair falls into place "if you weren't so honorable you'd even more intimidating to fight, I imagine"

"Striking a foe who can't swing back, attacking a motionless enemy, a defenceless one" I say frowning as I look at hands and sigh "it'd leave a bad taste in my mouth"

"I know, you'd told me plenty of times" He says bowing his head slightly "you hold yourself back from using tactics you deem unfair, and even then I still have to rely on tricks to spar with you"

"Its how you fight, you use things beside yourself and your blade, nothing dishonorable about that' I say chuckling as he smirks

"Well, I just want to fight you cleanly one day, without having to use my surroundings" He says, as his smirk because a content smile

"That would be the day you surpass me, Byakuya" I say confidently, crossing my arms as he nods

"Which I will do" He says with a curt nod "Now, are you prepared for sai?"

What do I do?
[] let him practice his spells on me
[] try to give him pointers
[] RESIST 1d20+will
[] Tease and mess with him the entire time
[]Ask if he's alright
[]write in


>>1231012

Nice
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>>1231047
>[] let him practice his spells on me
>Resist the last one
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Rolled 12 (1d20)

>>1231047
>[] let him practice his spells on me
>Resist the last one
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Rolled 18 (1d20)

>>1231047

>[] try to give him pointers
>[] RESIST 1d20+will
>[] Tease and mess with him the entire time
>[]Ask if he's alright
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Rolled 5 (1d20)

>>1231062
Adding
>[] Tease and mess with him the entire time
to my vote, and rolling for the resist
>>1231047
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Rolled 12 (1d20)

>>1231047
>[] RESIST 1d20+will
[] let him practice his spells on me
[] try to give him pointers
[]Ask if he's alright
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"I am" I say, keeping my arms crossed as I watch him raise his index finger and muddle finger, frowning as I don't move my arms an inch. I do when I notice him hesitating for a moment, and drop them to my sides. He waits a second longer, trying to use the spell perfectly.

I feel it rush to me as he pushes his fingers towards me, and wince as it grabs my arms and forces them behind my back and over each other. This doesn't....feel right, it reminds me of when I was being "Escorted" "home". I frown angrily and he releases the spell

"It didn't hurt did it?" He asks, frowning as I shake my head "Oh I was worried, good"

"Just remembering things I don't like" I sigh as I shake my head

"Well I won't ask about it then" He says lowering his hand, and raising his other one "Are you okay to continue"

"The past can't hold me back, so yes I am" I say calmly

"Good, try not to hurt yourself Kimi" He says flatly as the ball of blue light forms in his hands

I run up to him, my sandals sticking in the mud as I pull my shoulder back and slam it into the ball. It cracks and I get sent back, my feet dragging through the mud and making a trench in it before I stop and get my balance back

"You know, I think Aya would like this spell" I say happily, rubbing my elbow as Byakuya frowns

"She'd like hitting it, so lets not tell her so she doesn't end up herself" He says as I shrug

"She bounces right back up anyways" I say, laughing as I cross my arms "So, now for geki"

"What else would it be?" He says narrowing his eyes "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!!"

Moving my legs so I don't fall like he did, I look up at the sky so I can have a good view while I'm frozen in place, watching the clouds float by as he continues the incantation.

"Look upon yourself with horror and tear out your own throat!" He yells, as I don't get paralyzed and freeze up, I hear a familiar noise, and look down to see a tendril of orange light with lighter yellow spirals on it emerging from in front of his index and middle fingers

"Surprised?" He asks as it snakes around him in the air "This is Hōrin, it and Geki share the same designation, and its often forgotten due to the simple fact that Geki is more effective than it is"

.....Now this is...hmm, I could actually use this since it isn't just an instant stop, it looks like I have to work for it.

'I think I read about it" I say frowning as it continues curling in on itself "But I can't be sure if I did"

"Well you should remember if you did, very shortly" he says smirking as the tendril turns and fires towards me.

I don't run, and just cross my arms staring at the light as it rushes towards me. It slams into my chest and wraps around me like a ring, and pushes me forward, carrying me around as I notice Byakuya moving his hands, making the symbol for geki.

I focus my mind and reiatsu as he repeats the incantation, as I get lifted into the air, high above the pond.

cont
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>>1231159
I don't move, letting myself go limp as I focus for a moment and wait for the feeling of my body tensing up as I close my eyes. Red light shines in the darkeness and I try to open my eyes. But it feels like someone has sewn them shut. Focusing on the feeling of opening up, the cloud filled sky slowly emerges tinted by the red energy covering my body. Its a slow process, but I manage to uncross my arms and using my own reiatsu I break Byakuya's Geki like old wooden board.

I glance down at him with a smug smirk, chuckling as I see his eyes wide with surprise and....Oh. I think he might of just dropped me from the shock.

YES HE DID, SO NOW I'M FALLING INTO THE POND!

roll 1d20+spirit or mobility or strength
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Rolled 10 (1d20)

>>1231178
Rolling for spirit
Also sup HM!
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Rolled 15 (1d20)

>>1231178
Spirit, we got this.
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Rolled 18 (1d20)

>>1231178
spirit
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Rolled 4 (1d20)

>>1231178
>1d20+spirit
Croikey!
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Rolled 18 (1d20)

>>1231178
Oh no
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Rolled 5 (1d20)

>>1231178
>roll 1d20+spirit
no idea what strength would do here
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>>1231210
We beat the pond into submission of course.
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>>1231217
Kek
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I click my tongue, taking a breath as I plummet towards the water beneath me, unable to move my arms out of the ring of light binding them to my side and keeping them locked there. Well this would be trouble for both of us, if I wasn't an...oddity. I smirk, laughing as my skin flakes away and blackens, crumbling to ash and cinders as I turn to a cloud of smoke and float through the ring, bending away from it as I float and twirl through the air simply for astetic reasons. I reform sitting down on the edge of the cliff, the ring fading away as I put my hands on the edge and look down at the young lord.

"I" He says pausing to collect himself "My apologize, I dropped my guard there, If you want revenge....tch feel free to take it"

What do I say
[] No, you just gave me an idea! don't be sorry! TEACH ME HOW TO USE THAT!
[] Eh, its fine, I've been dropped by friends higher than that
[] What? You think that could've hurt me, oh your such a sweet kid
[] Damn right you should be, you need to learn to be more focused
[]....I think we might be on to something here
[] Oh....so I can punish you then
[] Oh? so you've given me permission then
[] Hey, relax, its nothing. No harm done, at all
[] write in
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>>1231263
>[] No, you just gave me an idea! don't be sorry! TEACH ME HOW TO USE THAT!
[] What? You think that could've hurt me, oh your such a sweet kid
[] Hey, relax, its nothing. No harm done, at all
>What is it with you and trying to see me wet?
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Man, I just thought of a potential way the whole Aizen thing could pan out.
He tests the thing on Kimi (with consent)
People notice hollow Kimi, she is sentenced to death but escapes
Something happens to Aya cause she is so close to Kimi (Death? Imprisonment? Something else?)
Aizen plots revenge against soul society from the inside due to the terrible treatment of his only freind.
Kimi, who is now bitter beyond belief trains in order to Avenge? Aya.
Tosen might get involved due to his connections.
The main plot is set into motion through this, though a bit differently than the usual.
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>>1231263
>[] No, you just gave me an idea! don't be sorry! TEACH ME HOW TO USE THAT!
>What is it with you and trying to see me wet?
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>>1231263
>[] What? You think that could've hurt me, oh your such a sweet kid
>[] Oh? so you've given me permission then
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>>1231282
Adding this
>What is it with you and trying to see me wet?
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>>1231263
>[] No, you just gave me an idea! don't be sorry! TEACH ME HOW TO USE THAT!
>[] Eh, its fine, I've been dropped by friends higher than that
>[] Damn right you should be, you need to learn to be more focused
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>>1231288
Do it, prod those hormones.
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>>1231291
Also adding >>1231288
Because holy shit the keks
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>>1231263
>[] No, you just gave me an idea! don't be sorry! TEACH ME HOW TO USE THAT!
>[] What? You think that could've hurt me, oh your such a sweet kid
>[] Hey, relax, its nothing. No harm done, at all
>What is it with you and trying to see me wet?


>>1231275
I honestly hope it doesn't go down like that. I like the idea of Captain Kimi and Good Guy Aizen, and the main plot is kind of shit compared to whatever HM will wind up doing. I still want Ichigo to happen somehow though, if only for the opportunity to beat him into the ground with his own blood.
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>>1231263
>[] No, you just gave me an idea! don't be sorry! TEACH ME HOW TO USE THAT!
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>>1231303
Well yeah, that's the problem, ain't it. Ichigo. The way the main plot is set up, he literally can't happen unless a 3'rd party does some hollow shenanigans along with a ridiculously in-depth plan.

And beating the shit out of him is a really nice part of bleach quests.
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>>1231337
Eh, if it can't happen it can't happen. Captain Kimi and good guy Aizen are way more important to me than stabbing that idiot. But HM is a smart guy, he can make anything happen if he really wants to.
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>>1231337
we have a crazy quincy bitch with a spirit library running around, maybe she'll pull some quincy eugenics shit to get revenge on us in a fcentury or two, after all ichigo has some quincy in him.
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"What?" I say, a little loudly as I rest my head in my hands and grin "You think that could've hurt me? Oh you're such a sweet kid worrying about me like that"

"I wasn't worried, I was more startled than anything else from" He sighs, blushing slightly "seeing you plummet like that, but....thank you, I'll try to be more careful if I do it again"

I gasp and pretend to cover myself, as Byakuya looks up at me, confused and a little amused. But mostly confused.

"What?" he asks, frowning as he looks up at me

"What is it with you and wanting to see me wet?" I ask, turning away as I hear him gasp and stammer in embarrassment, sounding a little mad

"D...d..d" he says, turning a wonderful shade of crimson as he covers his face with his hands "Dammit kimi! Don't start acting like Yoruichi now, one teasing woman is enough! especially when both of you are....haaa"

I cackle, crossing my legs as the young lord's face remains as red as autumn leaves.

"are what?" I ask teasingly, tapping my fingers on my scarred cheek as he stares at the ground

"So are you done teasing me?" He asks frowning as I shrug.

"Dunno, but you just gave me an idea" I say happily "Don't be sorry you dropped me. TEACH ME HOW TO USE THAT"

"the Horin?" He asks, putting his arms into his sleeves "its rather simple, and I guess its the least I can do after all that, just come back down here and I'll show you the motions, since you already know the incantation, sensei"

Roll 1d20+intellegence
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>>1231346
Not to mention Uryu. Oh how I want to punch that stupid traitorous ass!
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>>1231376
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Rolled 15 (1d20)

>>1231376
Seriously though what was that thought about the both of us Student?
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>>1231376
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>>1231376
>teasing woman is enough! especially when both of you are....haaa"
Kek.
>[]Ask him to elaborate on the unfinished sentence "Especially when the two of them are what, Byakuya?"
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Rolled 9 (1d20)

>>1231376
Rollin
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I leap off the ledge, turning to smoke mid fall, and twirl my cloud around itself, like a streamer. I land in front of him, crouching as I start to return to my usual shape, standing as my bones, flesh and blood return from the smoke lightening from black to my usual shade.

He looks at me blankly, waiting for me to finish calmly.

"You know, sometimes I'm envious of that ability of yours" He says flatly as I shrug "it seems...very useful"

"It is, feels weird though" I say, rubbing my neck as he smiles "well it used to at least, no real way to explain what it feels like having your entire body burned up in seconds feels like"

"I can only imagine" He says, pulling his arms from his sleeves "Now this won't take long, since its a pretty simple spell, and you already have most of it down, but still listen carefully"

I nod, crossing my arms as he holds up his index and middle finger again, holding it up in front of me.

"Think of it like holding a knife....a knife made of your reiryoku, extending from these two fingers" He says calmly as he holds them out to demonstrate "Its similar to a hado spell but...softer in how you must move the energy itself"

I copy his movements slowly as he moves his fingers around slowly.

"Its meant to detain, not harm, and will break if you try to use it like that, but knowing you you'll find a way to use it as a weapon anyways" He chuckles as I follow his dance like movements "but you really just want to have control over it, the Hōrin will do all the work, you just need to guide it to where it needs to go"

"Hmm, so its like leading a leashed dog?" I ask, glancing at him as he nods

"Yes, a wild dog, but if you tame it, it'll be much easier" He says calmly, smiling peacefully "You can make two at once, but its difficult to control them"

"And how exactly do you do that?' I ask stopping as he moves to demonstrate "cause you're making it sound difficult"

"Oh it isn't, making the Hōrins is easy, the hard part is controlling them" He says calmly "it might be hard to create them with weak reiatsu, but if you manage to do it, you have to hold your hands like this"

He puts his hands together like he's holding a ball

"And move them like this, while of course repeating the incantation" He says, slowly rubbing his hands over nothing

"Which is the same as Geki" I say nodding, smirking as he nods

"See, simple" he says, putting his arms back in his sleeves "So, I take it we're done training? I think you can figure the rest out on your own"
-
Kimi has learned Hōrin!
-

What do I do?
[] Get some tea
[] keep training
[] tease and mess with Byakuya
[] Find Yoruichi
[] visit Aizen/ Aya
[] See how Tosen is doing
[] Go back to the barracks
[] Practice it on Byakuya 1d20+spirit
[] Explain to him the idea I had
[] Go out for a walk around the Seireitei
[] Try to find someone else I know
[] practice my poetry for awhile
[] write in
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>>1231479
>[] tease and mess with Byakuya
>[] visit Aizen/ Aya
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>>1231479
>Ask Byakua to finish the thought he interrupted earlier
>[] Explain to him the idea I had
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>>1231479
>[] Explain to him the idea I had
>[] tease and mess with Byakuya
>[] Find Yoruichi
>[] visit Aizen/ Aya
>[] Get some tea

We haven't seen the cat in awhile, and I think we should check in on Aya.
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>>1231479
>[] tease and mess with Byakuya
>[] visit Aizen/ Aya
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>>1231479
>Ask Byakua to finish the thought he interrupted earlier
>Get some tea
>visit Aizen/Aya
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>>1231479
>[] tease and mess with Byakuya
>[] visit Aizen/ Aya
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"Now if you'll excuse me I have other studies to attend to" He says as he turns his back on me and starts to head back down the path leading this his family's estate

"Byakuya kun" I say teasingly, his entire body twitching as he hears me using the honorific I always use when I'm messing around with him "What was it you were saying before you taught me just now"

"I don't know what you're talking about" he says, walking a bit faster now

"You know, about me and Yoruichi" I say, grinning mischievously as he picks up his pace a bit

"That I was hoping you wouldn't start teasing me like she does, at least not as much" he says sounding annoyed, not even glancing back at me as he keeps walking forward "Now please, I have duties to attend to and"

"No, you said woman who are....sure teasing could fit" I say, putting my arms under my bound chest frowning as Byakuya glances back at me, blushing furiously "But...what traits do me and Yoruichi share"

".... funny how much attention you're drawing to them depite your murderous determination to keep them a secret" He sighs hanging his head as he continues on, as I chuckle "Now if you had your fill I really need to go"

"Hey, you're a growing boy, these feelings are natural" I say giggling as he turns even redder

"You're making it very tempting to hit you right now" He says through gritted teeth "Now kimi, I really need to go now, so unless you have something VERY important to tell me I need to go....and clear my head after all this"

"Oh actually, before I forget" I say crossing my arms "the idea you gave me, Hōrin can be used as a weapon"

"Oh, that was even faster than I expected' He says dully, looking back at me "how"

"Dropping them, or slamming them into things" I say as his eyes widen and he chuckles "Simple, yes?"

"Its a wonder no one thought of that before" He laughs "I suppose no one thought to use a restraining Kido spell like that before, however"

"Of course not, why would they, its to capture, not kill" I say as I turn my back to him "Well, see you around Byakuya"

"See you"He says calmly, as we part ways.

Now, I should spend sometime with aya or Aizen...and they're both in the same place, so I don't have to choose just yet.
-

The Fifth division's barracks look different from the six's. They're more decorated, and I imagine the insides are the same, instead of the functional barracks of my division. I stand outside of it, resting my zanpakuto on my shoulders, as the two shinigami keeping watch look at me and chuckle

Well?
[] find aya
[] find aizen
[] Ask what's so funny
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>>1231568
>[] Ask what's so funny
A joke? Come on you can tell us, Promise we won't be mad~
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>>1231568
>[] Ask what's so funny
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>>1231568
>[] Ask what's so funny
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>>1231568
>[] Ask what's so funny
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>>1231568
>[] find aya
>[] Ask what's so funny
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>>1231568
>[] Ask what's so funny
>>1231582
WEW LAD THAT IS FUCKING ADORABLE.
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Tightening my grip, I look at the two slightly tubby men, smirking and narrowing my eyes as they stop and look at me, looking like I just drew my blade on them.

"What's so funny?" I ask sweetly as both of them look at eachother and shake their heads and go back to looking ahead without a word "What? I just want to hear the joke, you can tell me, promise I won't get mad"

"Well" the one with a well groomed beard and sun glasses says, with a hand over his mouth "Kemuri its just that...your sister is uh quite the artist and well, tch how do I say this"

"Well, the walls have been practically covered with the scrolls she makes" the other one says, looking in the reflection of his blade, picking his teeth as he talks to me "Ahn well...you're the subject of many of them and"

I narrow my eyes more, still smiling as I realize what's going on now

"Ah yes, she's quite imaginative isn't she" I say cheerfully as both of them wince as I walk up to them "Must be a hell of a suprise that I'm not a giant white skinned ogre, hmm"

"Actually" the bearded one says, pulling his glasses down says "She's drawn a few of you like you are....in battle or practice, its rather hard to tell"

What do I say?
[] Awww, that's so sweet
[] Oh, she did? that doesn't sound like her
[] And she never told me?
[] You don't have to lie to me
[] Eh, shame, I like the oni ones
[] Well, that's nice but can you tell me where she is
[] she's such a sweet girl, also mind telling me where your lieutenant is?
[] write in
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>>1231643
[] Oh, she did? that doesn't sound like her
[] And she never told me?
>doesn't explain the laughter though.
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>>1231643
>[] Awww, that's so sweet
>[] You don't have to lie to me
>[] she's such a sweet girl, also mind telling me where your lieutenant is?
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>>1231643
>[] Awww, that's so sweet
>[] You don't have to lie to me
>[] she's such a sweet girl, also mind telling me where your lieutenant is?
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>>1231643
>[] Awww, that's so sweet
>[] You don't have to lie to me
>[] she's such a sweet girl, also mind telling me where your lieutenant is?
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>>1231643
>[] Awww, that's so sweet
>[] Oh, she did? that doesn't sound like her
>[] And she never told me?
>[] Eh, shame, I like the oni ones
>[] Well, that's nice but can you tell me where she is
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"Awww that's so sweet" I say tilting my head slightly "But you don't have to lie to me"

Both of them chuckle nervously, staring straight ahead as I chuckle and laugh.

"Yeah, she's such sweet girl, very imaginative" I say dully as I walk closer to them and smirk "So do you mind telling me where your lieutenant is?"

"Why?" the bearded man asks, narrowing his eyes "Do you have buisness with him"

"He's meeting with the captain currently" the other says calmly "Can you wait"

"Yeah, also why are you just dropping by?" the bearded one says, smirking with a glint in his eyes "I know you two are friends but, you have to wonder"

"Wonder what?" I ask angrily as the other one cackles

"If you're the envy of every woman in the gotei 13" he says with a crude sneer

What do I do?
[] Smack him in the face 1d20+str
[] walk past them, and wait for aizen's meeting to be done
[] Just walk past him and barge in on Aizen's meeting
[] Laugh, and say no, no
[] Sigh, and say I wish I was sometimes
[] Glare at him, and ask if he thinks I am
[] Pretend to be naive about what they're saying
[] angrily tell them off for gossiping at their posts
[] I'm scarred and blunt, what do you think?
[] write in
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>>1231717
>[] Glare at him, and ask if he thinks I am
>[] I'm scarred and blunt, what do you think?
>Go find Aya while Aizen has his meeting.
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>>1231717
>[] Pretend to be naive about what they're saying
>[] Laugh, and say no, no
One day they will regret shit-talking us
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>>1231717
>[] Laugh, and say no, no
>[] I'm scarred and blunt, what do you think?
>Just freinds who drink together and spar occasionally.
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>>1231717
>[] I'm scarred and blunt, what do you think?
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>>1231717
>>[] laugh, and say no, no
>>[] I'm scarred and blunt, what do you think?
>>Go find Aya while Aizen has his meeting
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>>1231717
>[] Glare at him, and ask if he thinks I am
>[] I'm scarred and blunt, what do you think?
>Go find Aya while Aizen has his meeting.
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I laugh, craning my head back as the two shinigami watch me, like they're expecting me to suddenly attack them for having the gal to ask me that.

"No no" I say shaking my head, grinning as I look back down at them and chuckle "Look at me, I'm scarred and blunt, why would I be"

"Rumors are rumors I suppose" the bearded one says with a nod "Guess a few are too mad to believe"

"Well you always have to ask to be sure" the other says calmly "Still, it would be a slap to their faces wouldn't it, the scarred broad catching someone like him?"

"Yeah, it'd knock a few of them down a peg or two" the bearded one chuckles before they both notice I'm still standing in front of them "Ah, well I uh"

"Bite your tongue before you use it" I say as I walk past him and his friend, past the open gate and into the fifth division barracks.

Flowers are blooming around the paths, kept away from the sparring and training half of the barracks. All of them are well groomed and cared for, and some Shinigami are moving tending to them or even cutting them and arranging them idly as their fellows spar, their zanpakuto's meeting as they duel...some much more graceful than others and

"SIS!!!" Aya screams as I turn my head to face her, seeing her head of bright gold hair running towards me

Roll 1d20+Endurance, mobility or spirit
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Rolled 7 (1d20)

>>1231790
End.
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Rolled 2 (1d20)

>>1231790
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Rolled 16 (1d20)

>>1231790

Rolling
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Rolled 1 (1d20)

>>1231790
End
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Rolled 20 (1d20)

>>1231790
>Use Seki on her

You thought it would be you doing the hug, but it was I Kimi!
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>>1231818
Reroll so we can get that sweet twenty?
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>>1231820
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>>1231818
Ah, so close to shenanigans.


>>1231820
And I meant the arm binding kido here, in case I said the wrong one.
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Rolled 13 (1d20)

>>1231790
Once again. Rolling for end
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>>1231820
Glad I made it to thread just in time to see this
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>>1231851
Every once in a while my luck decides to be badass in one way or another. I look upon each of those moments fondly, rare as they are.
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"You know Aya" I say calmly as she leaps at me, trying to hug me and knock me to the floor like she always tries to "You really should learn what this leads to by"

I tense up as she slams into my abs, my instincts making me straighten and stiffen up for the oncoming hit. Aya hits me with a thud and falls back, Looking dazed with a stream of blood rolling down her lip.

"Now" I sigh as I crouch down as she blinks and wipes the blood from her face "You alright sis?"


"Uuuh, yeah I am, just feel like I headbutted a statue" She groans, rubbing her forehead

"You sure?" I ask, helping her up as she nods

"Yeah, I'm sure, just a bit dazed" She chuckles "head hurts like I split my skull open though"

"You really need to stop doing that" I say, ruffing her hair as her sparkling blue eyes glimmer in the sunlight as she smiles cheerfully

"I know but I just can't help myself!" She yells, as every soul reaper around us continue on their day, one or two sighing heavily as they walk past us "Besides, one day I'll knock you down, I know it"

"Suuuure you will" I chuckle as she huffs, and crosses her arms

"I will, also why you here sis? You just wanted to visit or do you have something important you need ta do?" She asks excitedly.

I sigh and smile. Its amazing how she can still be so chipper after all she went through last week. Guess she's just an eternal flame, a little bird who simply can't stop her song for even the greatest storm

"Oh, I just wanted to check in on aizen, maybe do something since its basically a day off for me" I say, sighing as she smirks

"OH, you're on reserves to?" She chuckles, grinning as she turns around "Well that sounds fun"

"Not sure what I want to do yet, or if I'm going to do anything, I just want to talk to him" I say dully as she laughs

"Well, if you wanna talk, I can show you were his quarters are" She says happily

What do I do?
[] just wait for aizen
[] go to his quarters
[] Ask Aya about her past
[] Ask why she has such a crush on Aizen
[] draw my zanpakuto and challenge my sister to a duel
[] Embarrass her
[] write in
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VFEu0U7Gcrs
Also this song's lyrics fit pretty well for Kotei/ Hollow kimi

Also, here's a thought That Aizen betrayal reveal scene, but replace momo with Aya
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>>1231903
>[] Embarrass her
>[] Ask Aya about her past
>[] draw my zanpakuto and challenge my sister to a duel
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>>1231903
[] Ask Aya about her past
[] Ask why she has such a crush on Aizen
[] Embarrass her


If he did that bad things would happen. Kimi can fight angry unlike ice midget.
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>>1231903
>[] go to his quarters
>[] Ask why she has such a crush on Aizen
>Make sure to bring some of that golden drink to his room

>Aizens face when
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>>1231903
>[] just wait for aizen
>[] go to his quarters
>[] Ask Aya about her past
>[] draw my zanpakuto and challenge my sister to a duel
>[] Embarrass her
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>>1231903
>[] Embarrass her
>[] Ask Aya about her past
>[] Ask why she has such a crush on Aizen

>Aya gets stabbed
>illusion fades away
>it was Momo the entire time
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>>1231921
Adding
>[]Go to his quarters
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>>1231903
>[] Ask Aya about her past
>[] go to his quarters
>[] Embarrass her


You stop that right the fuck now HM, my heart would implode if Aizen pulled that shit. And that's the second time you've mentioned that happening.
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"Well alright" I say as I start to follow after her "Seems a bit risque to me though"

She pauses as we walk down a bath lined by white flowers

"Tch" She clicks her tongue, shrugging as she goes back to walking "He lets me in all the time"

She turns back at me as I stare at her blankly, making her blush, and giggle

"Well, once or twice, it was more because I got lost but shut up!" She yells at me as I chuckle as she gets herself all flustered "Don't look like that kimi"

"What" I laugh as I walk behind her "I was just listening"

"Yeah right" she huffs, crossing her arms as we walk into the barrack proper, two scrolls hanging by the open door, one's of a golden bird flying around over a sea, and the other is of a one eyed tiger standing over a silly dressed man, as a group of hollows surround them. Hmm, guess that's one of the missions she went on without me on. She does do a lot of stuff without me doesn't she....actually what did she do before she became a shinigami

"Hey Aya, what was your life like before all this" I ask as she stops, frowning deeply as the light leaves her eyes and she stares at her feet

"Well I...well I've always sort of been here" She says glancing back at me "I had a family before, a mom and dad but...."

She bites her lips crying, forcing herself to grin again, giggling as she looks back at me.

"They were soul reapers like us, but...well they never came home one day" She says frowning deeply as my heart twinges in my chest, like its being pulled "I can't remember if they adoppted me or if I was there's, both of them had black hair so I always suspected, but ....I was always with them so...they were my parents, like your my sister"

She pauses and shakes her head

"Lets no dwell on the past alright, its gone already" She sighs "I'll tell you more about it later, since you've told me so much about yours"

"Thanks but if its hard I won't force you to, sometimes the past is just too painful" I say, ruffling her hair as we walk along "also I have another question"

"Oh, well fire away, also stop that" She squeals as continue ruffling her hair

"Stop what?" I ask as I crouch down, messing with her hair and bangs as she turns redder and redder

"THAT also what do you want to ask?" She squaks, flapping her arms like a bird angrily, trying to make me stop

"Well, I was wondering why you have such a big crush on Aizen" I say pursing my lips as I pull on her cheeks

"I SAID STOP SIS" She yells at me as I pull my hand back giggling as she crosses her arms and glares at me "and that...well he's just so handsome, he's an artist, and he's very patient and kind as well, just being around him soothes my soul, and...and"

She covers her face, turning as pink as a peach as she stops outside a door with a small plaque reading "Lieutenant's room"

"He's a veteran, he has an experienced air about him"She says, biting her lip "He just makes me feel so safe"

cont
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>>1231974

"He's just so" She begins as I tap on her shoulder, making her stop as the man himself walks down the hallway

"Oh?Kimi and Aya?" He asks, pushing her glasses up "Now one of you is a pretty common sight around here but...you kimi, what brings you here?"

Aya turns red and glares at me, with a pleading look

What do I say?
[] Oh, just heading to your room, thought I'd take a peek
[] Heeeeeey Aya, could you repeat all that, I didn't hear it
[] Aizen? was the meeting that short
[] Oh didn't you know, I got promoted to captain...why do you think I'm here
[] Just checking in Sosuke
[] Wanted to talk
[] Tell me, is Aya bothering you
[] Oh, well I learned a new trick friend, want to see it?
[] write in
>>1231932
Well I just imagined it again, imagine how heart broken she'd be
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>>1231990
>[] Heeeeeey Aya, could you repeat all that, I didn't hear it
>[] Aizen? was the meeting that short
>[] Oh, just heading to your room, thought I'd take a peek
>[] Just checking in Sosuke


>"He just makes me feel so safe"

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Fair enough at this point though.
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>>1231990
>[] Heeeeeey Aya, could you repeat all that, I didn't hear it
>[] Aizen? was the meeting that short
>[] Wanted to talk
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>>1231990
>[] Oh, just heading to your room, thought I'd take a peek
>[] Oh didn't you know, I got promoted to captain...why do you think I'm here
>[] Wanted to talk
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>>1231990
>[] Heeeeeey Aya, could you repeat all that, I didn't hear it
>[] Aizen? was the meeting that short
>[] Oh, just heading to your room, thought I'd take a peek
>[] Just checking in Sosuke
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>>1231990
>[] Oh, just heading to your room, thought I'd take a peek
>[] Heeeeeey Aya, could you repeat all that, I didn't hear it
>[] Aizen? was the meeting that short
>[] Wanted to talk
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>>1231990
>[] Aizen? was the meeting that short
>[] Wanted to talk
>[] Oh, well I learned a new trick friend, want to see it?
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>>1231990
>[] Heeeeeey Aya, could you repeat all that, I didn't hear it
>[] Aizen? was the meeting that short
>[] Oh didn't you know, I got promoted to captain...why do you think I'm here
>[] Wanted to talk

Rolling for vizardry.
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I just grin widely and look down at her as she shakes her head, her twintails bouncing as she waves her arms, trying to tell me to stop without saying a word as Aizen looks down at her, bemused.

"HEeeeeeeeeeeeey" I say, leaning over her, grinning even wider as she covers her face, turning even redder "Could you repeat all that? I didn't hear it"

"Shut up shut up shut up" She chants, like its going to ward me off

"Oh what did she say?" AIzen asks as I chuckle

"Shut uuuuup" She hisses as I shrug

"Oh, just something womanly" I say teasingly as I turn to him and return to my usual blank expression "Oh Aizen, was the meeting that short"

"Yes, it was just shinji giving me the new formations and squads her had came up with over the month" He says, folding his hands together "But what did she say just now, I'm curious"

"Nothing, just nothing!" Aya shouts as I smile

"Yeah nothing much like she said" I say happily "And I'm hear because I wanted to talk with you sosuke, and well I was hopping I could get a peek in your room"

"Oh," he says pushing it open "Well feel free to, it isn't much but I don't have any paper work so we should have time to"

the second the door is open, Aya is inside, running around it almost faster than I can see

"So filled with energy" Aizen says as I walk in a whistle.

the walls are covered in painting and tactics he drew up, notes sitting in a neat pile on his desk, with two bookselves sitting next to his bed, with books and journals with titles like "Observations of the hunting paths of hollows" or "Imperial flower arrangement" and several other books an various sciences, arts and shinigami arts. nearly Half of them appear to have been written by him and titled to simply keep track of his various writings, I stare at them as he walks in and over to his bed, sitting down on it as Aya stops by the art work he made and stares at it like a critic.

My eyes are drawn over to where aizen sits and I see him staring at something behind me, I turn and just see a table with another small bookshelf next to it.

"See, nothing much" He says warmly "So anything in particular you wanted to talk about"

"No, not really, just want to talk, did you have any conversations in mind?" I ask, I sit down at the table and he tilts his head and laughs

"Yes, but it wouldn't be appropriate with Aya around" He says chuckling as Aya huffs

"Hey I may be short, but I'm not a kid" She huffs, puffing her cheeks out...like a child

"No no" He says shaking his head "It just wouldn't...its something for later and only for kimi"

"Hmm" I grunt as he turns to me

"Oh don't worry about it" He says shaking his head "it just a question I'm...afraid to ask"

Aya glares at me

"Tch well, maybe some sake would help" I laugh "Haaaa, I could go for a drink right now, what about you two?"

Aya goes a little pale and Aizen just keeps smiling

"Hey, what I was joking, I'm still on duty anyways" I laugh

"Oh I was scared there for a second" Aya sighs as Aizen laughs
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>>1232082
"Well a quick lunch does sound fun, so long as we all stay sober, my treat" He says closing his eyes as Aya smiles

"Well I am a little peckish to" She giggles

What do I do
[] get lunch
[] Ask Aizen what's the question he wants to ask
[] Ask about all the books he wrote
[] look at the art he drew
[] Mess with aya
[] Discuss tactical stuff with Aizen
[] Say I'm not hungry, winking at Aya as I walk out of the room
[] Tell them a meal isn't a meal without at least a cup of sake
[] write in
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>>1232089
>[] Mess with aya
>[] Ask Aizen what's the question he wants to ask

Ids habbenin
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>>1232089
>[] look at the art he drew
>[] Tell them a meal isn't a meal without at least a cup of sake
>[] get lunch
>[] Ask about all the books he wrote
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>>1232089
>[] get lunch
[] Ask Aizen what's the question he wants to ask
[] Ask about all the books he wrote
[] look at the art he drew
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>>1232089
>[] get lunch
>[] Ask Aizen what's the question he wants to ask
>[] Mess with aya
>[] Tell them a meal isn't a meal without at least a cup of sake
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>>1232089
>[] get lunch
>[] Ask about all the books he wrote
>[] look at the art he drew
>[] Mess with aya
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>>1232089
>[] Ask Aizen what's the question he wants to ask
>[] Ask about all the books he wrote
>[] look at the art he drew
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>>1232089
>[] look at the art he drew
>[] Discuss tactical stuff with Aizen
>[] get lunch
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"Yeah, I could do with some food in my belly to" I say as I glance at all the books filling the bookshelves along his quarters walls "So what's with all that, you wrote most of them right? What are they?"

"Oh, yes I did" He says proudly, running his hand down the side of one of them "And they're not books, they're studies and research I've made and gathered over the years, everyone of them is....a personal struggle I've put down on paper, you can learn a lot from these pages"

"Wow that's really amazing Aizen sama, what did you write about?" Aya asks, standing up as he chuckles

"Everything, one can't be prepared if they don't study all that's around them" He says with a smile "but enough talk about my hobbies, we should get lunch"

"Of course" I say with a nod as Aya says the same, much more excitedly.

She nearly skips out of the room as Aizen slowly stands up and follows her looking amused. I move to follow him, but the paintings on the wall catch my eyes. They're...odd, a style that isn't...like anything I've seen. the brush strokes are heavy, and thick, and the art is hard to understand, but beautiful. Birds flying through black waves, and old men carving masks, and monsters surrounding a lone figure, laughing. But the newer ones look different, and use much more color than the older ones. I frown, remembering how Aizen was not too long ago at all, this must've been his way of venting his frustration and anger at those who tried to hold them back

"Hey Sosuke!" I shout loudly at him "What exactly do you want to talk about, and don't worry Aya, I'm not trying to steal him"

Aya pouts and crosses her arms, turning away from me

"Oh" Aizen says as he turns back to me and smirks "Just...something I need to know, and well can't ask you know"

"Why not, I mean I'm sure Aya won't mind" I Say teasingly as Aya looks a little flustered

"Well...its just something only you and I could understand, we have talked about similar things before" He says calmly

Ah so its like that then

"Alright alright, I get it, besides its best I stop asking before Aya's heart stops" I say chuckling as my little sister says "Shut up" Under her breath, pouting adorably.

"And lets get something to eat" Aizen says warmly "I'm starved"

And we
'll end here
I've archived
and will answer questions

time skip going to come around soonish, and I think want to run fresh soul reaper more often
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>>1232165
>I think want to run fresh soul reaper more often
Would be nice, but what other quest would get the axe if any?
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>>1232175
None, I'd just put the other two on this rotation on a bi weekly schedule if I did that
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>>1232165
Please do run it more often, that would make my month.

Anyway, question: Will we ever end up in the Quincy/Vandereich/Kubo-is-pulling-shit-out-of-his-ass arc?
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>>1232165
Great thread as always HM, thanks for running. Aya a cute. And soon we'll be one step closer to Lieutenant Kimi, yay!
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>>1232165
>I think want to run fresh soul reaper more often
WOO!
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>>1232181
>Kubo-is-pulling-shit-out-of-his-ass arc

You mean every arc after Rukia get's captured?
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>>1232181
OOOOooooh, I have plaaaaans for that.
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>>1232189
Oh boy. You gonna nerf some of those guys to be slightly less utter bullshit?
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>>1232189
Stabbing fake angels and potentially gutting Uruy? Sign me up! Though that Zombie chick worries the hell out of me.
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>>1232202
>chick
Gigi is a dude, dude.

Also the people who read TLS want to gut the little shit.
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>>1232202
But what if we got our blood in her first?
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>>1232202
Oh wow, I just read up what gigi was, and jesus would Kimi be pissed at her ability. Like godamn

>>1232212
Oh sweet, delicious Irony, your name is Kotei/ Emperor

that could result in a stalemate
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>>1232209
Not according to the wiki

http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Giselle_Gewelle

Though Bleach does have a few more traps than I would have thought.
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>>1232222
>Thread 156 -> 178 is just Gigi and Kimi staring at eachother angrily, paralized by their respective abilities
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>>1232222
Yeah, she FUCKED isn't she? Though I suspect we could use her as leverage to steal a Sternritter or two, given the right circumstances.
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>>1232231
Shinigami "Well that solves that problem"
Quincy "Well that solves that problem"
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>>1232244
More high level Sternritters than there are captains though.
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>>1232244
What about that fat midget that had the ability to make "Anyone and anything" love him? How will that mesh with kimi's sword-waifu?
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>>1232269
HFW the zanpakuto spirit he just used the love ability on just keeps attack him,

>>1232268
But I think when two people with abilities like that knock eachother out, its best for both sides to just not fuck with it until they win
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>>1232283
>But I think when two people with abilities like that knock eachother out, its best for both sides to just not fuck with it until they win
Or since one side has 13 captains and the other has 26 effecctively, double team each of them.
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>>1232292
>26

GODAMN KUBO
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>>1232296
26 letters in the alphabet m8, thus 26 utter bullshit tier sternritter.
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>>1232292
Considering Aizen is looking to be on our side if we keep things up... he can probably take 4 or more of them.

plus we haven't reached that high a level yet, at that level we may have developed our own utter bullshit powers.

If our bankai is what we've discussed before ... kimi'd effectively be an army unto herself, and what happens to that army when kimi goes all hollowish with bankai active...
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>>1232299
They probably also have punctuation and number themed sternritter that kubo didn't have time to implement.

A sternritter for every value of PI
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>>1232306
I suspect those ones would be like the triple digit arrancars and are drop outs from the top 26.
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>>1232309
They are only Half as bullshit as all the other sternritter
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>>1232306
Plz anon plz no

>>1232304
It'll be crazy. Kotei and bloody

>>1232309
We can only hope
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>>1232304
Each of the samurai Kimi's Bankai summons can fire a cero blast, as much as they want, whenever they want. We have officially reached Half-Kubo.
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Honestly I really hope you just don't use fucking bookmark and that diaper wearing sternritter, Shit is just fucking uhg.
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>>1232322
What in the actual
fuck
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>>1232304
unless he goes butterflaizen which is looking unlikely, they can table him by eating his bankai. Or in a few of their cases, tanking getting hit by the blade, grabbing it and nuking his ass(Which is how Gin and OMG dealt with him, and is his weakness)
Miracle would be especially adept for this as he gets STRONGER every tiem he gets hurt, the point he shook of Kenny cutting him in half while Kenny was in bankai, from head to toe, and put himself back together. Or Yhwach going "lol nope" with Almighty, or Haschwalth negating getting hurt with his bad luck displacement, or etc.
>kimi'd effectively be an army unto herself, and what happens to that army when kimi goes all hollowish with bankai active...
Did you forget OMG could summon all the dead he's ever killed and there were more than the amount of people who have ever lived? All captains are bullshit, all arranacars are bullshit, but it's still 26 to 13, and even with all of them not being equal it's still a REALLY bad fight.
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>>1232322
Oh right, fucking bookmark. The literal personification of shitty retconing.
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>>1232322
EXPLAIN BOTH OF THOSE THINGS
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>>1232324
>OMG could summon all the dead he's ever killed and there were more than the amount of people who have ever lived?

wuuuuuut
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>>1232324
>Did you forget OMG could summon all the dead he's ever killed and there were more than the amount of people who have ever lived? All captains are bullshit, all arranacars are bullshit, but it's still 26 to 13, and even with all of them not being equal it's still a REALLY bad fight.

I don't think I ever got far enough in bleach to learn that, I suppose the solution is to get rid of them before they achieve full bullshit if possible?

if not then were fucked and there's no point to the quest cause kubo's bullshit is too stupid.
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>>1232333
But anon. To beat bullshit, we must become bullshit.
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>>1232334
but that tends to get boring and unfun after a while, just look at german hollow quest.
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>>1232334
Why was the first thought in my mind

FUSION DANCE WITH AIZEN
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>>1232326
Bookmark is the guy who if he cuts you he can retcon your entire life and circumstances to be favorable to him. He cut Byakua once and learned all his techniques.


>>1232329
His Bankai has multiple facets based on the four direction gates. One of them summons the souls of the dead he has slain to fight his enemies. There are 17 BILLION souls, which is more than the sum total of humanity, he could summon. That's why he got the nickname Old man Genocide.


>>1232333
Not possible, they come back at full power, and he an and WILL use them as such against his enemies. Yhwach only beat him because he actually had enough power to use one of the bankai stealing amulets he made on Yamamoto, none of the other sternritters could, just because they'd die from overload. That in turn gave Yhwach full ability to use Yamamoto's bankai against him and kill him.
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>>1232337
Oh god Futa Kimizen.
What would Aya think?
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>>1232329
Yeah, according to the wiki that's his SECOND best ability too. And yes, he uses it to mindfuck people whenever he can.
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>>1232337
Even Elliot is afraid!

>>1232341
I... I can't do this right now.
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>>1232343
jesus

>>1232340
What the fucking shit man, that's.....crazy

>>1232341
I dunno, I imagine she'd be very very confused
If you want to write what you think would happen, feel free

>>1232348
Neither can I
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>>1232356
Hey HM, what if most of Kimi's body is just scar tissue, and if you cut all of it away it turns out that Kimi was a loli all along?
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>>1232356
his abilities are in order
An cloak of fire (invisible unless eh elts you see it) that is as hot as the sun
The tip of his sword is about a 100 times hotter than that
The aforementioned undead summoning
And basically burning an object that has met his displeasure out of existence on a conceptual level.
Keep in mind this is the guy who killed THREE sternritter alone with only shikai, when each and every other captain was jobbing hard even before they got their bankais stolen and sued against them. He tanked the best shot of the sternritter who stole his Lieutenants' bankai, said "Chojuro was not this WEAK" and obliterated the poor fucker.

And Yhwach is even more bullshit than he is. his ability is the "Almighty" which is basically "lol I am god."
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>>1232356
His best ability is to BURN AWAY THE CONCEPT OF EXISTENCE FROM ANYTHING HIS SWORD TOUCHES. THE REASON HE DOESN'T USE HIS BANKAI IS THAT IF HE LEFT IT ON FOR TOO LONG, HE WOULD LITERALLY DESTROY THE UNIVERSE. Let. That. Sink. In.
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>>1232367
What about Ink dude? Wasn't his ability to completely remove concepts and names from existence?
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>>1232362
I don't think she'd be a nice loli. Since she'd still be able to filet you like a fish. But then again, I imagine she'd still be a cute loli..

and there's at least four people who'd fight to get her as shoulder loli

also, I do like this idea, its funny/ cute

>>1232366
>>1232367

Godamn
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>>1232376
Loli omake wen?
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>>1232372
Head of the Royal guard, and yeah, he could turn your true name into an ant and you'd have that much power.

>>1232376
Seriously every single one of the sternritter were absolute fucking bullshit. One survived getting his head exploded by Kyoraku's bankai.
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>>1232381
Hell, Loli Kimi cannon wen?>>1232376
>>1232376
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>>1232381
Well
would it be the lolification incident
or Loli Kimi


>>1232386
How, Kyoraku is a bad ass
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>>1232386
Don't forget about Smashmouth and his immortal cheerleader.
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>>1232372
And if you say his name and you're unworthy, you go mute. That guy is some scary shit, but nothing compared to Old Man Genocide. At least in my opinion.

>>1232376
And who would they be? Lolification when
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So... I take it the bullshit level for the quest may be nerfed somewhat for the sake of sanity.

cause at this point i'm really glad I stopped following bleach. Most of this is just stupid to me, the powercreep is too strong and pretty much only gets countered by more powercreep or plotarmor.

cause if the bullshit level isn't nerfed kimi'd have to reach elder god tiers of power. I suppose we could do bloodborne crossover stuff then.
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>>1232406
I am now imagining Kimi and Lady Maria having an honorable duel for fun and competition. Feels good man.
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>>1232393
the guy who's head he exploded made another out of pure energy.
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>>1232406
Kotei's natural blood lust fucks up/creates a new world, and kimi has to deal with it.


>>1232404
At this point, I'm thinking for sure

Tosen, due to respect
Aizen, because your his friend
Byakuya
and Yoruichi

But I could see
Aya
Yasu
Sekiryu
Tora
William (only because everyone else is doing it)
and Asagi Kenpachi joining in the raffle as well


>>1232410
..............

>>1232409
Godamn that boss arena would be coated in blood
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>>1232409
I guess add in zombie quincy for a bloody threesome.
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>>1232419
Yeah, or Kanpachi getting bankai, and cutting a dude or in half who immediately pulled himself to gather, and was stronger for it.
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>>1232419
>and Asagi Kenpachi joining in the raffle as well

Yes... YES. We could have a shoulder loli fight with Zaraki!

>Godamn that boss arena would be coated in blood

And fire, don't forget the crazy ass fire. God she was my favorite boss of that game, and one of my favorite Souls bosses ever.
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>>1232443
I never got to her, since I always went to cain hurst before I was leveled for it, and slammed my head into the boss, since I just did not no where to after shadows of yarham
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I mean if we REEEEAAALLLY wanted loli kimi as a thing just make it happen as part of hollowification and fluff it as her body becoming more mobility focused by getting rid of her "assets" and compacting itself down.
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>>1232450
HM, do dis.
>>1232448
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>>1232450
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>>1232448
She was part of the Old Hunters. You know that classy bitch with the awesome hat and beautiful sword in all the cover art? That's her. And yeah, if she and Kimi fought I'd be more worried about drowning than her swordsmanship.
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>>1232450
Oh god. OH GOD. HM could do this and we would have no basis to complain or even contradict it. All I can say is... THANKS KUBO!
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>>1232448
But yeah all the YHWACH shrift powered sternritters are bullshit. One of the Reason's I like Last Sternritter is because while the Mc is strong he still sue quincy abilities and doesn't have godmodding letters.

>>1232450
frankly that'd be more likely if our soul sleeve was damaged, like Neliel taking that head wound.
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>>1232462
I know

>>1232469
Or I could pull a nel
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>>1232448
Maria was a DLC boss, you reached the DLC by getting picked up by an amygdala outside the church area where NPC's you've saved gather

as for shadows of yharnam, its a straight path to bergenwerth out the back of their boss room which is a short area and another boss fight which then warps you to the next area you need to reach which is really nasty.

>>1232450
as side note, the loli stuff is getting a bit old for me. I like kimi as she is and would really only be ok with loli nonsense as an alt form where we trade endurance for mobility.

I guess sorta like that one girl from Hunter x Hunter but less scary steroid muscle and more scars.
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>>1232473
>Or I could pull a nel

Also possible, though I hope we never suffer a wound like that. God she was awesome though.
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>>1232475
I was thinking an alt form to
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>>1232475
>>1232480
Honestly there's no real reason for loli-form other than blatant fetish fulfillment. Kimi isn't so big she's slow, and she's actually pretty fast when she needs to be.
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>>1232485
i just like discussing it for fun
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>>1232480
A Nel might be interesting tho, though instaid of "Grevious wound" maybe make it a self imposed limiter. Like those weighted jackets in literally every anime ever.
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This loli shit trying to get taken seriously is getting really fuckin annoying.
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>>1232485
>blatant fetish fulfillment
thats why I find the loli talk getting a bit old, I only suggested it as an alt form cause I know some anons will push for loli kimi and I'd rather it be a temporary form than some permanent thing.

Besides we have Mali in HM's YDFQ for blatant fetish fulfillment and she already has a tiny imp form.
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>>1232492
Like, Kimi figures out Hollowfication, then says "This is some unfair bullshit", and through sheer force of will turns herself into a loli to make her fights more of a challenge? I like this idea.
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>>1232496
I just wanted a one or two shot Omake thread where all the heavy hitter in SS got turned into lolis. Anything other than that should be fine as long as it's either a mode or otherwise non-permanent though.
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>>1232498
Thing is she could just hold back. Like Kenny does MASSIVELY, or pretty much all the captains so they don't cause their subordinates to die from getting crushed under their own power.

>>1232504
rather save those for pastebins, because it's basically showing fetish into people's faces.
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>>1232509
Which I've said you guys could write if you want to. I only write pastebins when I'm in the mood
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>>1232509
speaking of pastebins... we've got a few that were supposed to happen that seem to have basically been discontinued...
ah well its been a hectic few months so I can't blame HM
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>>1232517
>speaking of pastebins... we've got a few that were supposed to happen that seem to have basically been discontinued...
>ah well its been a hectic few months so I can't blame HM

Sorry, as I said. Need to be in a particular mood to paste bin
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>>1232516
Yeah I was saying I don't want to piss away a whole thread on fetish stuffing. You know what I mean?
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>>1232509
I know, that was mostly me just taking a stupid and fun idea and joking around with it. Anyway, I'm falling asleep in my chair here, so goodnight all. See ya tomorrow.
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>>1232522
I save omake threads for what ifs and AUs, when I rarely do them
also my cat is laying on my back, send help
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>>1232520
all good, I'm not gonna bitch and moan (too much) about not receiving even more free entertainment.

also... since blood has iron in it could we potentially pull off some magnetic stuff with proper training? or use it to conduct electricity? or aerosolize it and control people that way when they breath in the bloody mist?
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>>1232530
that is some jojo shit, I love it. Not sure how much would be too much though
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>>1232534
I mean utilizing bloody mist with the oni's smoke ability would be hellish, especially if we could make mist mirages that could actually cut people.
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>Inb4 Vizard Kimi winds up with Nega-versions of Bloody and Koutei laying about.
>Suddenly full abilities split as
>Hot Dry-Bloody(Ash/Burning!)
>Hot Wet-Koutei(Blood)
>Cold Wet- ???
>Cold Dry- ???
Sort of a 4 directions thing but a wildly different way to parse it than most.
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Fuuuuck I went to sleep again. Damnit!
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>>1232406
Narrative coherence was in steady decline from the story's outset, but by the time it hits the Sternritter arc it has progressed past uncontrollable power creep and into stupefyingly, incoherent, inconsistent, bad writing.

For example, there is "My power is to literally make shit up!" kid and "Killing me only makes me stronger!" male valkyrie dude. The latter is especially funny because they never even come close to beating him, Bach has to kill him off himself so what is left of the story can move forward. And the kid who makes stuff up only loses because . . . well no coherent reason really. Somehow the fact that he was fighting against Zaraki causes his powers to kill himself, nevermind that he could have turned Zaraki's bones into cookies just by thinking about it.

Oh, and as for inconsistent? When the G13 are getting mugged for their Bankais and having their asses handed to them by sternritters, we eventually get the shocking revelation that hollow essence is anathema to Quincies and the hard counter to them. So just take a small dose of hollow essence and bam! Get your Bankai back. But wait, what about Opie Quilge? "J" for jail guy, remember? He freaking ate the Tres Bestia's hollow chimera beast, Ayon. Woops. Also, all the Vizard forget to pull their masks out for the entire Sternritter arc, even after they learn about the hollow thing.

Quite a few threads back I brought up the issue of how far down the "Kubo" hole HM is going to go. Kubo had some cool ideas for his setting and characters, but he makes a lot of mistakes too. I still strongly advocate for only using the most coherent parts of the story and jumping off from there. Trying to include and emulate all the garbage writing Kubo was slinging together towards the end is frankly not interesting to me--especially if you don't do anything to clean it up. The filler and movie stuff is also pretty weak. I suppose you can make a good story out of anything, though you are in for more of a challenge depending on what you start from.

For example, one of my major complaints with SSQ is its tendency of using elements from bad filler and movie arcs and doing so mostly verbatim without really expanding/improving on their concepts to make them more interesting. Maybe if more of an effort was made to better interpret things, it could have been much improved.
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What would they be like. Like would they be exact opposites or what?




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