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Previous threads:
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Hot-Blooded%20Henshin%20Hero%20Quest

Twitter for the thread is: @RevengeanceQ

LAST TIME: We were temporarily taken out of action, as we were saved by our prior enemy: Knightmare. He--or she, as we found out--has been watching us as a potential ally against the conspiracy between the Peacekeeper's Union and criminals.

With a bullet in our back, it's a struggle to get back into action, but we have to.

---

You wake again with an ache in your back.

The pain of that lump of metal in you is excruciating, but Knightmare assured you that removing it would make more problems in the future for you. And you couldn't afford to get it done by a better surgeon, you simply know.

Still, today is the day you finally get your notification to your rank within the Peacekeeper's Union. It's a sour feeling, knowing you feel more like a spy than a member of the organization, but it's still an accomplishment.

Cracking your back, you slide on your costume (transferred to your room now. Being a member of the Union gives you more of an excuse with your landlord, you figure.) from the duffel bag and flip open your laptop, checking your email. Naturally, the notification email is there.

'NOTIFICATION: Your Ranking.'

Sliding your eyes over to the right confirms this email was sent by Cogmaster. Checks out alright.

Opening it, your eyes immediately scan for your rank and name, getting an eyeful of what you'd proudly be displayed under on the Union website.

'VANQUISH: SPADE-CLASS.
LOCATION: ARCADIAN SLUMS
PARTNERS/AFFILIATES: NONE AS OF YET.'

'OFFER: IF ANY NON-RANKING INFORMATION IN THIS EMAIL IS INCORRECT, OR SHOULD BE ADDED, PLEASE CONTACT US.

COLON-CAPITAL D.

-COGMASTER.'

Oh, he tried to make an emoticon. Cute.

>You got into the third-best ranking. Nice!
>It only means we have to do better!
>Forget the ranks, we have to investigate.
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>>45927028
I fucking hate when it forgets my trips.
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>>45927028
>>You got into the third-best ranking. Nice!
>>It only means we have to do better!

Whoo! Also, as requested http://pastebin.com/9yCtmXi6
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>>45927028
>>You got into the third-best ranking. Nice!
>>It only means we have to do better!
Time for more sentai!

>>45927222
>that paste
noice.
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>>45927028
>>It only means we have to do better!

How else will we fix the organization if we don't reach the top rank?

Good to see you running, MQM, I've been getting the shakes!
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>>45927222
Das lewd as shit.
I love it
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>>45927388
Don't thank me, Thank MQM, she asked for it.
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>>45927445
We'll I'll just have to thank both of you then, won't I?
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>>45927359
>>45927222
>>45927345

You clench your fist. You know that while you did good, you could've done /better/. Maybe not Diamond, but Heart was attainable. The Phoenix chose you for a reason, and you were going to prove that it was right.

You go bold, opening the window and diving out onto the rooftop just a sliver away from your bedroom. Breaking into a roll, you make it safely, and start your run across the rooftops.

The fire in your mind burns once more, as you continue to move.

'You and I both know the conspiracy must be addressed. What do you believe is the best course of action?' the Phoenix speaks.

>See if we can glean Cogmaster for info.
>Talk to Paragon Supreme. He's gotta be trustworthy.
>Tail Nighthawk or Lady Payne tonight.
>Write-in.
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>>45927470
A-aw shucks Anon
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>>45927541
>>Write-in. Ask Knightmare for an idea!
AndalsomaybeifshewantstoseeamovieIdunno
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>>45927541
>>See if we can glean Cogmaster for info.
But if we do, we make damn sure to be careful with our words.
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>>45927541
>>See if we can glean Cogmaster for info.
Didn't Knightmare say we could trust him?
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>>45927541
>See if we can glean Cogmaster for info.

>>45927222
Doing god's work, anon.
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>>45927774
Oh good, I'm not the only one who screencapped that.
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>>45927774
>Eventually it gets out the Vanquish is quite the lady's...woman?
>Everyday a different girl leaves her home
>Crime fighting becomes slightly more difficult with a sore pelvis
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>>45927639
>>45927640

Your best bet seems to lie with Cogmaster, you think. He's, if anything, an innocent third party who's just been used.

Darting across the rooftops, you make it over to the Union HQ. This time, you don't even bother to knock, just opening the door and sliding in.

Nighthawk groans at the mere sight of your costume, muttering something about the gaudiness of 'young costumers'. Ironic, coming from the one who can shapeshift.

Still, you walk down to the basement, heavy steps alerting the massive mechanical man to your presence.

'GREETING: Hello, new hero Vanquish! CONGRATULATIONS: I am very glad to have you as part of our Union! INVITATION: Can I ask you to come here sometime soon, for a friendly ritual of acquaintanceship?"

You figure that means 'hang out' in robot-man. You nod, giving him a firm thumbs up.

"Sounds good! But first, I've got a couple questions for you. Does that sound okay?" you slide around his workbench, and take a look around.

Blueprints plaster the walls, some faded from the years. A trash can full of scrapped designs.

And a locked backroom. Two thick chains keep it from opening.

Spooky.

"ANSWER: Of course! I am nothing if not designed to be helpful. WARNING: My conversations ARE recorded, for use in police records and courtroom evidence."

Well, now you know how they figured out Hurricane's identity.

>"Can you tell me about any complaints the Union's received?"
>"Has the Union ever fired a hero before?"
>"Are there any ongoing internal investigations about the Union?"
>Write-in.
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>>45927798
But anon, what if I AM you?

>>45927842
But that's the only way to go, anon. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
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>>45927856
>"Can you tell me about any complaints the Union's received?"
Act curious about anything the Union needs solved - we want to be helpful and earn our keep. Lead into:
>"What happens if I mess up? Can I get fired Has the Union actually ever fired a hero before?"
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>>45927856
>>"Can you tell me about any complaints the Union's received?"

>>45927862
Then I pity you deeply.
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I want to bully Yukari for being dateless
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>>45927856
>>"Can you tell me about any complaints the Union's received?"
>>"Has the Union ever fired a hero before?"
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>>45927856
SENPAI! You're back!

>>Can you tell me of any complaints in the Union.

She agreed to go on a date with me! We're going to go on another tomorrow!

>>45927222
Don't make me horny again! Only Senpai, and my hopefully future girlfriend can do that! You know better! Baka Anon!
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>>45927913
>>45927925

"ANSWER: Of course! One moment...accessing..."

"March 22nd, 1999. A lack of surveying a building containing a gunman who lethal force was permitted on led to the death of unknown hostages when [REDACTED] caused the building's collapse."

"Redacted...?" You ask.

"REPLY: For legal reasons, I cannot disclose to Spade-or-below heroes legal evidence in certain cases. I apologize. Identities will remain anonymous to parties that wish it."

"Was he fired?"

"REPLY: ...Not at liberty to discuss. I am sorry."

"CONTINUATION: JULY 4TH, 2002. Hero by the identification of Captain Comet is arrested on charges of public intoxication and assault. He is unceremoniously discharged and blacklisted from similar unions in other cities. He commits suicide two years later."

"Yeesh..." you remark, taking a seat on a stool nearby and pumping it up and down to entertain yourself amidst the grim details.

"And March 22nd, 2006. Former civilian, later identified as the girlfriend of a victim of the prior March 22nd incident, ingests an experimental material that grants her temporary powers similar to Paragon Supreme. Goes on a wild rampage, injuring countless people and killing [REDACTED]. She is apprehended, but dies of a heart attack in custody. Suspected to be side effect of said material. Legal matters lead the union to pay a sum of 2 million USD in reparations for the previous incident, which they prior did not."

"...What do you think? About it all?"

"REPLY: We are all beings capable of failure. What matters is what we do with failure, and making mistakes. We could become bitter, or realize our follies. That's what divides heroes and villains."

You nod in agreement. For a 'tin man', he was insightful.

What next?

>Any previous choice.
>Write-in.
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>>45928308
>Are there any ongoing investigations within the Union?

Senpai, notice me! Desu~
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>>45928240
you dirty fucker, I hope she has a cock!
I'm happy for you anon, nice job!

>>45928308
>Write-in. "Do YOU think there's anything wrong with the organization?"
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>>45927913
Backing this
>>45928240
I reserve the right to make any and all Anons present in this thread horny if I so desire
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>>45928308
>Does the Union have systems in place to help with coping with failure? Or at least investigate and preempt heroes who are might turn bad because of it?
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>>45928386
I'll back this one, it seems like a good question
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>>45928347
Yo.

Good job, hope ya'll are happy with one another!
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>>45928365
I hope she doesn't!
I know she doesn't. I've seen her change at the gym. :D

>>45928379
Only you, Anon-kun! But no more exceptions! >:^P

>>45928462
SENPAI NOTICED ME! :D
I hope so, she's a beautiful tall 6' muscle girl who I hope will protect me and snuggle me! So perfect!
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>>45928581
AGH! STOP MAKING ME JEALOUS!
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>>45928427
>>45928386
>>45928379
>>45927913

"So, does the Union have some sort of failure coping system? Therapy, at least?"

"REPLY: Complicated. Certain crimes are considered always bannable offensese. Others...are excusable with certain pretenses. We do not grant invincibility to those of higher ranks from being fired. The details are muddy, I am afraid. What I can tell you is that those who are permitted to stay after committing an offense are paroled, and must either be subject to 24/7 surveillance by drone, or on-the-job accompaniment by a Heart or Diamond-class hero."

"What about...heroes who go bad?"

"REPLY: A shame, but they must be excommunicated and brought to justice. There has been no precedent of a hero who has gone rogue and been permitted back into the Union."

"So...if I act up, it's possible I can be fired."

He nods. "ASSURANCE: We have no indication you should be fired for any reason, however."

>>45928365

"Well, do YOU think there's anything wrong with the organization?"

"REPLY: To be totally--"

Without even hearing an entrance, you feel a stranger's palm on your shoulder.

"Excuse me." says the airy whisper of Nighthawk's voice. "But your visiting hours are over. Leave now."

"PERSUASION: But, Nighthawk, she's simply--"

"Rules are rules, Cogmaster. You know that."

With that, the shadowy man rushes and flies up the stairs with you in tow, placing you outside on the steps.

No more asking Cogmaster, it seems.

>Make a note to call Knightmare later.
>Take a break from investigation to patrol for crime.
>Write-in.
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>>45928680
I wonder what you're jealous about?
Is it the fact that Senpai noticed me, perhaps? ;P

>>45928681
>Make a note to call Knightmare later.
We must continue our quest to secure a waifu!
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>>45928681
>>Take a break from investigation to patrol for crime.

okay, Nighthawk, you shady fuck
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>>45928581
Damn Kohai, you're quite lucky. Just keep that libido in check
>>45928681
>Take a break from investigation to patrol for crime.
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>>45928742
Sh-Shut up, you braggart!
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>>45928854
Hey, I notice all of ya'll equally well.

Sidenote: anyone wanna see some faggy self-insert art of me as Jhin from League I commissioned from a buddy when it's done?
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>>45928889
oh dude, absolutely!
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>>45928889
It's slightly less faggy if it's our beloved QM
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>>45928788
Thanks, Anon!
I try, but I'm pretty sure she likes teasing me! I'll show her! XP

>>45928854
Never!

>>45928889
Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!
Anything for Senpai!
My pizza is here, I'll be gone for a bit.
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>>45928962
I-I hope you're pizza's cold! COLD!
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>>45928962
Be careful Kohai she's trying to corrupt you! I should know, I've done it to my girlfriend
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>>45928742

You put a nearby rock in your pocket for later. That way, tonight, when you wonder why you have a rock in your pocket, you'll remember!

It's a good thing you remember that one from that lifehack article from forever ago.

>>45928758
>>45928788

You run along down the streets--making a mental note you need a badass riding vehicle to cut down on how tired you get--hoping to get some sort of action today.

"H-Help! Oh please, Vanquish!" You hear called out. It sounds like some old woman--and she knows your name! Old people never bother to learn young heroes' names!

You broke the age gap!

Excited, you run down the street to the source of the noise, skidding to a stop as your feet slide on the pavement.

"Never fear, miss! What's the problem? Someone steal your purse? A villain is threatening you?
You ask.

The old woman before you is hunched over, white robes adorning her body. You can't get a look at her face, just her back. A little old a position to be in...

"Oh, you can help me young lady! Please, just..."

"DIE!"

Out of the back of the 'old woman' bursts a man in full costume, coming out swinging with a left hook. It strikes your jaw and you stumble backwards, struggling to keep your balance.

"What the hell, man!?" you say, rubbing where you were struck. It's wet under the mask...

He drew blood with one hit.

The stark white of the man glistens in the daylight, and his crescent moon adorning the helmet gleans. He takes a confident pose, flattening his hands and poising them like the heads of snakes, ready to strike.

"As no good deed goes unpunished, no hero shall either!" He says, circling you.

>"Who the hell are you!?"
>"Are you part of the conspiracy!?"
>Write-in.
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>>45929154
>>"Who the hell are you!?"
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>>45929154
>>"Who the hell are you!?"
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>>45929154
>"Nope."
>"I don't have time to entertain you when there might be people in actual trouble. If you have an actual grievance, please mail it on or call during office hours."
>Leave.
CAN'T STOP NEED TO DO JUSTICE
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>>45929154
>>"Who the hell are you!?"


>inb4 u but stronger
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>>45929316
Damn, this is actually pretty cold.
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>>45929154
>>"Who the hell are you!?"
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>>45929154
The Hell!? Did Eternal just pop out of an old woman and cockslap us!?
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>>45929396
More like Casshern, Eternal doesn't have the crescent on his forehead
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>>45929316
Backing this. Too funny!

>>45928991
Why would you say such a thing!? D:

>>45929081
R-really? What should I do!?
She's always teased me for a couple years now, but in a friendly way. But now that she knows I like her back, she's stepped up her game! I hope she starts bullying me for my height of 5'3!
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>>45929477
FUCK! FUCK! YOU'RE LIKE A BETTER ME!
FUCK!
DAMMIT! THAT'S IT, TONIGHT I'M QUESTING DRUNK!
KAHLUA, GUIDE MY HIPS!
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>>45929229
>>45929289
>>45929318
>>45929394

"Who the hell are you!?"

The man scoffs. "Haven't heard of me? Only the greatest warrior to ever live?"

"You just popped out of a lady! Like, what the actual hell!? Who the fuck does that!?"

"Oh, her?" He whaps the lady over, which falls over. "Just a shell, of sorts. Like a pinata! But a pinata that attracts fools like you into the fight of your lives!"

You smack your forehead. You knew something about the voice sounded dumb.

"You still didn't answer my question directly. Who are you?" you adopt your own fighting stance, legs going wide.

"I am the ever-present light of the moon! The agent sent to strike down all those too arrogant to see their faults! I am..."

He bends his knees, forming a sharp 'V' with his crossed arms in front of him.

"Ivory Moon! The bloody shadow over every hero's grave!"

You crack your knuckles and hop lightly on your feet back and forth. Looks like there's no getting out of this without a fight.

>cont.
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>>45929477
Well, you can continue to try and be a pure kohai or let the corruption sink in and casually tease her back every now and then. For my girlfriend it's gotten to the point where she comes home sometimes and just flat out says she wants a tumble in the sheets
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>>45929537
I'm sorry? I think? I'm not sure what to say, really?

Senpai, I lied earlier. I don't have average boobs, and I'm not 5'3". I have small boobs, and I'm only 5'1". Plz forgive!
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>>45929597
I will remain as pure as my virginity! I swear on this, Anon!
W-wow, Anon, th-that's lewd!
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>>45929571
>The agent sent to strike down all those too arrogant to see their faults!
What about those too ignorant to see their own faults? I mean, only God and Buddha have full self-knowledge. And, come to think of it, which category do you fall under? Are you obliged to strike yourself down?
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>>45929604
DAMMIT!
YOU'RE SMALLER, CUTER, DATING, AND FEMALE!
SHIT!
FUCK!
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>>45929708
I'm sorry!? I think!? Please don't be mad!
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>>45929658
You think that's lewd? Kohai, this is only the beginning of my lewd endeavors
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>>45929751
I'M SUPER FUCKING MAD!
AAAGJH
BUT SOON I'LL BE DRUNK AND MAD!
AND I WON'T REMEMBER THAT A SUCCESSFUL RULE 63 ME EXISTS!
AHAHAHAHAHA
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>>45929821
Please calm down, anon! You're scaring me! D:

>>45929755
Oh my! That was already far too lewd! I don't think I can handle more!
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>>45929861
I've been slowly convincing her to buy more raunchy underwear. She's seriously considering it.
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>>45929571
You rush in swiftly to strike at him, but Ivory sidesteps you, clasping his hands together and slamming them down on your back. You slam down onto the ground, your chin slapping the pavement and sending pain ringing through your jaw.

Out the corner of your eye, you peek a shadow descending. Your eye widens in surprise as you realize his leg is coming down, and you roll out of the way. Chunks of pavement come out of the ground as it hits, the impact that powerful.

Kicking up from the ground, you pant. Already, this man's proven strong. You move in for him, but keep light on your feet, your fists remaining in front of your face.

Your mind flashes back to boxing lessons as a young girl. Your mother's face on the bleachers, cheering you on and patching your face up from the occasional too-strong punch...orange juice while cooling down...and...

Your fist glows, remembering why you fight people like the man before you. With a mighty cry, you punch underhanded into his stomach, then again, and again, before giving him a roundhouse kick.

"So what? You're some mighty judge? Someone who thinks he's better than everyone!?"

Ivory's head rolls back, as he lets out a raw laugh.

"No! Far from it." It rolls forward, gazing soullessly towards the ground. "I couldn't care less about judging your morals."

>"...You just want a fight?"
>"So you must be some villain!"
>Write-in.
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>>45929861
I will NOT calm down!
I will DESTROY MYSELF in SORROW!
LIKE MY DAD ALWAYS WANTED!

>>45929910
>Write-in. "Would you fight me if I wasn't a hero?"
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>>45929910
I just feel like we should just go full justice on him and mop the ground with his broken body afterwards
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>>45929884
0.0
I... I don't know what to say.
If I ever end up corrupted, I might do that and try to tease her back. But I won't! I'll stay pure! I see what you're trying to do Anon! You're trying to turn me into a naughty loli! You're the naughty one!

>>45929910
>...you just want to fight?
Is he some mean guy who tries to beat up anyone he thinks is strong?

We'll show him whose better! Right Senpai?
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>>45929910
>>"...You just want a fight?"
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>>45929910
>>"...You just want a fight?"
>>45929994
The fact that you're already considering it means that my job is done...even if I didn't intend to do it.
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>>45930149
NO! I WILL REMAIN PURE! I am a pure loli! No! No! No! No! No! Senpai, help me!
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>>45929994
>>45929999

"So you just want a fight?" You ask, po-faced.

"What else is there in life but fighting? Man evolved from hominids because he knew how to fight and scrap for survival from the elements!" Ivory says passionately, circling you once more.

>>45929972
"Would you fight me if I wasn't a hero?"

"Would you have gotten this strong if you weren't one?" he asks back, not taking a moment to think.

"...you..."

'Yesss?"

"...you...!" you repeat.

"Yes!"

"You think I'm strong!?" You say, excitement bleeding into your voice.

"Of course! Only the strongest are worthy of facing me! Come on, Vanquish! Break my record of 99 victories, or suffer becoming my 100th!"

"Okay!" You say in turn, a gleam burning in your eyes as the two of you lock fists.

Your knuckles press into each others, every blow meeting the other in a violent display of equilibrium.

As he moves in a tad too close, you grab him by the crescent moon, using it as leverage to pull him in and headbutt him, before giving him a left-right hook combination.

He replies by tackling you into a nearby brick wall, thrusting an elbow into your stomach and then flicking it upwards into your jaw. With a step back, he rolls his arm in a crescent motion.

"I call to the moon, and it answers! Go, Hallowed Strike!"

You feel fire in you once more, and grip your fist.

>cont.

>>45930259
Hey, calm down, ya crazy kids.

Nah, go right on ahead!
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>>45930259
Get bullied, you fucking success
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>>45930288
Oh no no, I'll go on and stop. Unless anyone has other story requests
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>>45930344
M-maybe Vanquish or someone bullying a cute loli, that is totally not me? P-please?
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>>45930344
I was gonna suggest something, but yeah, nah, go with >>45930391 's suggestion
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>>45930296
>>45930288
S-senpai, you like it when they b-bully me?!
D:
I'll only allow it for, y-you, senpai!
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>>45930433
I hope your date is in this thread and taking notes
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>>45930433
Your liberal use of Senpai reminded me of this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vHixvxeyBuI
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>>45930503
So mean!
I don't know if she is. But if she is, she hasn't said anything about it.

>>45930505
I can't find my headphones to listen to it. :(
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>>45930568
You need headphones? I take it you live with your parents or a roommate?
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>>45930627
Nah, I just like using them. Makes my apartment feel nice and quiet.
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>>45930568
Sorry, I'm a mean drunk
also I'm grumpy about finishing all of my kahlua
but ECSTATIC about moving onto the Captain Morgan!
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>>45930643
Fair enough, I can understand that. Your request will be ready for the next thread by the way.
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>>45930660
Please don't be mean! It's not nice! :(
I've never actually drank before. Never felt like it. Plus, I always look to young to even be doing that sort of stuff. Sometimes being a loli isn't fun.

Just kidding, it's always fun! :D


>>45930692
:D
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>>45930288
You burst from the wall, heat starting to radiate from you and bend the area around you. An orange glow sheens from your visor.

"My fist is the emissary of truth! With every punch, I enlighten!"

"COLD FUSION!" You cry out, feathers of blistering orange and red forming out of your gauntlet, following your fist.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h_SxVtf6Nk0

Your fists meet, bouncing one another back. The two of you grunt, reeling back and striking again.

"HALLOWED STRIKE!"
"COLD FUSION!"

Fists fly once more, colliding, as both your gauntlets start to crack, steam hissing as it escapes from the breaks.

You start to pant, as tapping into the Phoenix starts to eat at you. Sucking in breath, getting as much in your breast as you can, you cry out defiantly.

As the roar escapes your lungs, you fly forward at Ivory, your fist connecting with his stomach as you fly upwards, his body following you as you do.

Fire wreathes your body, as well as Ivory's. Your gauntlet starts to break, pieces chipping away and disappearing into ashes in the fire, and your hand starts to burn.

You finally let go of the punch, hitting the rooftop in a three-point landing as Ivory falls back-first with a thud.

The fire dies down, and you realize a crack in your visor, revealing your eye. Glancing down, you see two streaking burn scars falling between your knuckles--the gauntlet's gone that you used before for punching.

"Ha...haha..." He laughs, weakly. "Good show, Vanquish! Good...show."

You walk over, eyes hardening as you look over Moon's body. Still, you give out your burned hand to help him to his feet. He takes it, firmly grasping yours and standing up.

Something tells you he's smiling.

"Someone who can fight me...heh. Excellent." he remarks. "We'll meet again, Vanquish. And next time..."

He points to you with his index and middle finger, poising himself at the edge of the rooftop. "I'll be stronger. And you damn well better be too."

>"Feeling's mutual."
>Write-in.
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Everybody here is shit talking one another and I'm just here twiddling my thumbs. Am I truly getting the 4chan experience?
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>>45930762
>>Write-in.
"Uhhh...okay."
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>>45930726
go drinking with your lady, or make drinks in your apartment. make it a comfy night in.

also FUCK YOU!


>>45930762
>"Feeling's mutual."
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>>45930762
>Feeling's Mutual.

Senpai! I have to go now! D:
I promised my friend I'd go and see the play she was going to be in!
Back by Nine CA earliest!
:(
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>>45930762
>>"Feeling's mutual."
"Unless I'm on a date!"
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>>45930836
YES! NOW ONLY I, WORST CLONE, REMAIN!
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>>45930762
>>"Feeling's mutual."
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>>45930819
>>45930884
St-stop bullying me! Meany Anon! I haven't left yet! :(
Mou~ So mean! B-but senpai likes to see cute lolis be bullied! S-so I must bare it! For Senpai!
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>>45930819
>>45930836
>>45930864

"Feeling's mutual."

You offer your fist out to him, to which he evenly hits against yours in a mutual fist bump.

He jumps from the roof down to the street below. Before you even glance down over the edge, he's gone.

Well...that was certainly something.

>What now?

You kids are thirsty, even when there isn't any Real Henshin Hours.
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>>45930951
Get in your fucking hole, Best Clone!

>>45930956
>Coffee shop break, that was fucking nuts.

That's our secret, MQM. We're always thirsty.
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>>45930956
All hours are real henshin hours
>Coffee shop break, that was fucking nuts.
I hope the coffee isn't like 20 bucks too
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>>45930956
>>What now?
Maybe by fixing our burned hand.
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>>45931007
I'm leaving now for reals, meany anon! :(

I'll be back senpai!
>Coffee shop break.
I can't stand coffe. :(
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>>45931085
>Not liking coffee
okay, now you really ARE my Evil Twin. Only instead of a goatee, you have a vagina.
Enjoy your play, fun-sized
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>>45930956
I say we train up on using that Justice power!
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>>45930956
>Get our burnt hand looked at
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>>45931085
>>45931022
>>45931007

You walk down to your local coffee place, hiding your costume behind the trash cans outside. You figure a partly broken Vanquish costume isn't worth much to thieves.

Ordering a large class of coffee, and getting a large sugar cookie to go along with it, you chew and contemplate just how much things have escalated. First the Phoenix, then the conspiracy, Hurricane's obsession with you, Knightmare becoming an ally...

And now 'Ivory Moon' over here.

You sigh deeply. The life of a hero only gets more complex, it seems.

>Call someone: Makoto.
>Call someone: Knightmare (somehow...?)
>Head home after.
>Write-in.
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>>45931271
>>Call someone: Makoto.
She's like our best friend. She deserves to know
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>>45931271
>>Call someone: Knightmare (somehow...?)
discuss what we've found. Over coffee. Y'know, totally normal, not-a-date.
yeah
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>>45931271
>>Write-in
get your dang hand looked at.
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>>45931271
>Write-in.
Train up on JUSTICE!
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>>45931271
>>Call someone: Knightmare (somehow...?)
>>
Rolled 1 (1d20)

>>45931292
>>45931304

Gonna roll between these. Odds are Makoto, evens are Knightmare.
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>>45931493
>>45931500
Shit, didn't get this one before I rolled.

Only one thing left to do.

>Call both.
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>>45931529
Yukari sandwich!
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>>45931562
The result she secretly wants.
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>>45931529
Call them both up for one hell of a training time!
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>>45931529
You figure it's good enough to call both people. You don't actually know how to call up Knightmare, but...eh, she'll know.

First, Makoto.

RING-RING.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uceYgGsy53Y

"...Helllooooo?" You hear her energetic voice on the other line.

"Hey, Makoto. It's me, Yukari. You want to uh, head on down to the coffee shop? You know the one. I want to talk about everything going on with the Union. And also invite another friend here--is that okay?"

"Sure! I'd love to meet them!" You can hear her clapping her hands together on the other side. "In costume or out? Are we going somewhere after? Maybe ice cream? We've never gotten--"

"Out of costume, and maybe to the ice cream."

"Cool! Be right there! Literally! Get it, cause I'm fast?"

You smirk a bit at her motor mouth tendencies. "Yeah. See you."

You hang up and...kind of just pray Knightmare understands you want her there. You close your eyes and breathe deep.

"Hi." You hear her husky voice and open your eyes in surprise.

"J-Jesus that was fast! What are you--"

"Don't ask questions that don't need answers." She sips from your mug and takes a bite of your cookie like it's no big deal.

Makoto arrives in short order, zipping in like a lime-green flash of a Japanese young adult and sliding beside you in the booth.

"Hello, Yukari! And hello...!"

"Knightmare."

"Do you...have a more normal name?"

She shrugs, leaning against the back of the booth. "You can call me Nellie."

"Nellie then! I am glad to meet another wonderful friend of Yukari's! Isn't that right, Yukari?"

You chuckle nervously, sandwiched physically between two pretty good looking girls.

"Hehe, yeah..."

>What now?

>>dontbegaydontbegaydontbegay
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>>45931798
>>>dontbegaydontbegaydontbegay
BE A HERO!
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>>45931798
>>What now?
Talk about that ivory fuck.
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>>45931798
>Tell them about what went down when you started asking pretty innocent questions.
>Be GAY
>Take a sip of the coffee from the same side Knightmare's lips touched

get them almost-kisses, gurl!
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>>45931852
>saving as a better fem knightmare ref
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>>45931798
>dontbegaydontbegaydontbegay
>Tell them about what went down at Union HQ
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>>45931876
Oh man, I have an entire dropbox of stuff like her
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>>45931852
All of this
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>>45931798
Seconding >>45931852
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>>45931835
"So...I made a rival, today. I think?"

Knightmare pauses from draining your coffee (that YOU paid for...) and raises an eyebrow. "Someone in the conspiracy...?"

"No no! He just wanted to fight me and said I was strong." You correct, coughing into your palm.

Makoto takes a grip of your bicep and squeezes it. "Of course he thought you are! Look at these pythons! You couldn't be allowed into an airport with these!"

"Please keep your volume down..." You quietly beg of her.

"No association, then? Simply someone who wants a fight...annoying, but nothing to be concerned with, I bet. If anything, he sounds like an easy way to prove you deserve a rank-up. You know, if he causes enough trouble."

You nod.

>>45931907
"Also, I went to ask Cogmaster about the Union's history...turns out there's a lot of yellow tape. Unless I get to a higher rank, I won't learn names, but some heroes have caused incidents with lots of casualties. March 22nd seems to be a bit of a recurring theme with them."

Knightmare frowns and puts your cup down. "I see..."

"March 22nd, um..." Makoto thinks hard. "I think that's...my cousin's birthday? Does that help?"

Knightmare sighs, patting Makoto daintily on the head. "I don't think so. But thank you for the information."

"Also, Nighthawk threw me out when I got too deep into questions."

"That jerk!" Makoto interjects. "He rejected my application and said I was 'disgusting for plagiarizing' the dead! It's my brother's costume!! I'm his sister!!!"

You pat Makoto on the shoulder in a show of empathy. "Yeah, he's shady business. I'm sorry about that, Makoto."

She fumes, but calms visibly as your touch graces her.

You don't even notice as your lips match up exactly to Knightmare's lip-marks on the cup, something she smirks about outside your range of view.

>Write-in.
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>>45932148
>>Write-in. Offer Makoto the cookie and ask for an idea on what to do

Share them haughty ojou almost-kisses
Also, gotta sort out how not to get hawkblocked.
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>>45932181
Hawkblocked...?
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>>45932215
Nighthawk + cockblocked = hawkblocked
>>
where did all the anons go...?
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>>45932148
Ask if Nellie has come up with any more info.
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>>45932181
You slide half your cookie over to Makoto and pick it up, offering it silently. She nods...but you go a bit more playful.

You put a bit of the cookie into your mouth, holding it out to her. While she's flustered at first, she takes a little chomp of it, very close to your lips, then retracts.

Knightmare coughs. "As fun as this get together is, the matter of Nighthawk...is disconcerting. If he's trying to keep you from gaining information..."

"Anf he canff tranfform..." Makoto adds, still chewing and slurring her speech.

"Then he could be anyone while we investigate." you finish.

The three of you nod in agreement.

"Well, he doesn't know you two are involved. Maybe you both could tail people like Lady Payne or Paragon?"

Knightmare nods. "Very true. What about you...?"

You shrug. "I'm thinking of looking into March 22nd. Maybe, if there's another victim or family member around, they could tell me what we need to know."

Knightmare smiles, her bloody red lips--wow, how did you not notice before--curling upwards.

"Smart thinking. I knew you were the right one to trust."

>"Y-You too!!"
>"I wouldn't be here if it weren't for both you ladies."
>Stammer gayly.
>Write-in.
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>>45932181
I back this, just so we can make Makoto feel better. She's better off happy
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>>45932484
>Stammer gayly.
>"I wouldn't be here if it weren't for both you ladies."
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>>45932484
>>Stammer gayly.
Now I know why you asked me to make a haughty vampiress for my quest, MQM...
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>>45932484
>>"Y-You too!!"
>>"I wouldn't be here if it weren't for both you ladies."
>>Stammer gayly.

We really need to practice keeping our gay-cool
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>>45932539
s-shut up shut up shut shut up
i have other things i like that i couldve said too but i didnt to keep my 'things' secret
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>>45932560
Oh.
Oh now that's just cute.
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>>45932523
>>45932539
>>45932550
"Y-You too! I certainly wouldn't be here if it weren't for both you ladies."

What follows is a series of guttural noises your brain tells is words, but your common sense tells you is childlike babbling.

Nellie and Makoto just glance at one another knowingly, almost communicating entirely with their eyes.

>>45932462
"H-Have you come up with any more info? Nellie?"

She sighs. "It's not promising. Apparently, certain heroes recruited by the Union have already been brought into 'agreements' with local crimelords. They bust a quota of members to make it look like the Union is actively fighting them, while always being just too late to stop their escapes from jail. Convenient for them, mm?"

She makes a swinging motion. "I busted the party up, in case you couldn't tell."

Just imagining her swinging that sword with that meaty physique makes you crave a vibrator in your hand and privacy all around.

"Great. G-Great."

>Call off the meeting for the day...but not before something else.
>Keep going.
>Write-in.
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>>45932639
s-saved cause it's hot
i dont exactly have a blood kink but vampires girls make me wish i did
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>>45932539
>haughty vampiress
Is that you, quest guy?
Shouldn't you be getting shat on in the the weekend quest discussions?
I still love you and your stuff.

>>45932703
>>Call off the meeting for the day...but not before something else.
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>>45932703
>>Call off the meeting for the day...but not before something else.
Something else being that we go to the local sex shop for...uh...'justice'
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>>45932765
Are they shitting on him in there?

God, another reason why I never go in. It's a circlejerk of the same few quests getting talked over, and people being asses to those who want to start questing. I've seen constructive stuff, no doubt, but it's so few and far between.
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>>45932765
Oh no, I'm not QG! God, not by a stretch! I'm nowhere near that talented!

>>45932731
That's adorable.

>>45932703
>Keep going.
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>>45932703
>>Call off the meeting for the day...but not before something else.
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>>45932856
>>45932785
>>45932765

"Well, I think that's enough for the day, everyone." You say, trying to regain a modicum of control over everything. "We can uh, go, now."

You get up from your seat, your two compatriots doing so in turn, starting to walk out. As soon as you're outside...

'I know your heart.' Truth pulses in you.

'Do it, and do it earnestly.'

You stop Makoto. Nellie pauses where she is.

"Makoto, I...I know we haven't known each other long. But we know each other."

"Yukari...?"

"Please let me finish! I don't know every feeling in my body very well, and I don't know how I should respond, but this is what feels right!"

You grasp her hands in yours, holding them. "M-Makoto Matsushita..."

You swallow, thinking of countless rejections from other girls. Being written of as 'some lesbian', a 'freak', and even losing friends over it before...you pray your passion will pay off once.

"Makoto...d-do you want to go out with me!?"

>cont.
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>>45932792
yeah, they're.... not helpful. Which was why I was so grateful for your feedback!

[spoilers]So grateful that I'm gonna bully you with pretty vampire ladies[/spoiler]
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>>45932968
...you made this folder just for me, didnt you you smug fuck

i-i hate you im never telling you improvements you could make to make them more appealing to me
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>>45932792
Typical quest drama. Apparently he put a gypsy curse or something on Chuckle's Digimang quest.
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>>45932968
It's part of a reason why I didn't make a quest myself.
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>>45933011
Actually, I put that curse on them.
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>>45932968
aw dammit, I AM drunk, fuckin up spoilers an' stuff... shit...

>>45933006
You can't prove that I did.
Now tell me your weaknesses.
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>>45932968
P-please spoiler them, I have a fear of blood! D:

>>45933006
Did you miss me senpai?
I'm so happy that Yukari is going on a date with Makoti! :D
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>>45933029
>>45933036

Yo, realtalk to break up the thread.

/Fuck/ that elitist shit. If the guy who did Ruby Quest didn't go balls-deep and make it, we would NOT have quests on this board at all. Risks are part of the game, and I fucking hate those risk-averse asses who just shut down other's quests.

I made my first quest with no help, no nothing. I had a fanbase, and I did admittedly quit out on it with no ceremony. Anyone who was there for it, I apologize. But I did it. Those guys are NOT the be-all end-all, and if I relied on them you wouldn't be reading this quest.

So please, follow YOUR passion. It may not be the best. I'm not gonna delude you and say there isn't skill involved. But skill isn't honed without practice, and god-be-damned if this isn't good improv and writing practice.
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>>45933049
...i really like chubby AND muscular girls

a-and straight up fat girls

fuck you
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>>45933075
Intermission is over, I'll be back later!
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>>45933097
how lewd.
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>>45933075
YES! WORST TWIN IS BACK!

>>45933097
Well, I WAS playing around with the idea of the MC visiting various monster princesses to secure alliances... No reasons one of those couldn't be a big, strong orc warchief...
and Gluttony IS a sin, MQ...

>>45933129
No, goddammit, you get back here so I can bully you!
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>>45933182
you fucking monster

>>45932960
She pauses, breathless, putting a hand to her chest to think.

"I...I-I..."

Her eyes light up anew, just like when you brought her up from her lowest point.

"Yes! Oh, please, yes!"

She tackle hugs you, spinning you around in the air and putting you back down again.

"I promise that I'll do the best for you if you do the best for me! Oh...I was so nervous thinking you might ask me...but, I have to get home on time! I love you! Ah, I finally get to say that!"

"M-Makoto, wait. You..."

She stops. "Huh?"

"...You might not be the only person I want to date. Are you okay with...multiple people being involved, here? Whether they like both of us romantically or not?"

She pauses for a moment.

"...I have to think about it...but I'll give you a 'yes' for now, and a notice if anything changes!"

She gives you that trademark Hurricane thumbs-up and runs off.

Nellie walks up behind you, putting a hand on your shoulder.

"I know what you're going to ask."

"...your answer?" you squeak.

Nellie turns you around and plants a kiss on your forehead.

"I'm certainly interested in you, Yukari. But I don't know you. And you certainly don't know me. When we know each other better, I'll say yes. Is that okay?"

You nod, and with that, Knightmare disappears into the night.

...we're not single anymore, at least.

>What NOW?
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>>45933312
>>What NOW?
Go home and write in our livejournal about what happened today I guess. Oh and, TAKE CARE OF OUR HAND.
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>>45933312
>you fucking monster
That's not a no~...

>What NOW?
>Go home, do the thing with the stuff, try to do research on the 22'd, fail, squee into pillow

oddly enough, the 22 is four days before my own date of birth

now I want to write a story about Yukari being attacked in her apartment and ravaged by a vampiric Knightmare and Hurricane...
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>>45933358
Seconding. Time to blog!
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>>45933312
Get our burnt hand looked at
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>>45933358
Backing this. All while giggling like a school girl.
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>>45933358
>>45933385

You head back home, flopping onto your bed and rubbing some toothpaste on your burn scar. (Hey, lifehacks said it worked as a salve.)

Oddly enough, there's no pain to it. It's...not doing anything. Maybe it's more symbolic than a real scar?

Weird.

Anyways, you get on your blog and just start smashing it out on what happened today.

'Guess who's finally no longer part of the Single Club~?' you tease and leave it at that, letting the notifications ping repeatedly as inquiring minds all try and figure out what girl you landed.

You giggle at how you can literally say your girlfriend is 'super'.

Amongst other things you find while looking up March 22nd in history...

-Amerigo Vespucci was granted his charter that led to him finding America.
-MCR broke up on a March 22nd (literally who)
-The Comet Hale-Bopp was at it's closest to Earth on a March 22nd.

The third is the only interesting one. I mean, didn't the Phoenix SAY that they can't go directly onto Earth?

But what if the Comet passing by then...

Wait, weren't you a kid around that time!?

Your eyes widen.

"P-Phoenix, did you--"

'What you call comets, we call couriers. When that Comet graced the stars above your Earth, we selected a new set of four Avatars to eventually clash for dominance. I hope this is not too disturbing to learn.'

"No, no, it's just...eerie. What if I never became a hero?"

'Destiny's course is unshifting, Yukari. Don't delude yourself--the course you walk is not so strongly influenced by everything you choose.'

You shudder.

>cont.
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>>45933600
Trying to get your mind on your lack of free will, you think more about how nice it'll be to date Makoto. Go to the movies...patrol together...

You imagine yourselves in the park, holding hands on a bench and taking off your helmets to kiss...!!

O-Oh, and maybe you'll both get married! H-Have kids, and...

Wow, you're thinking ahead. Very far ahead.

But still...Knightmare likes you too.

You smoosh your face into your pillow, clutching your cheeks and sighing as you fall asleep.

CHAPTER 5: END.

real henshin hours are go boyz
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>>45933385
also:

all i ask is you tell me what kinda monstergrill g-gluttony-tan will be
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>>45933683
I'm not him, but I can imagine a hippo girl. Don't ask me how that'd work.
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>>45933666
HENSHIN!

>>45933683
no
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>>45933732
i-ill shit on your whole quest if you dont
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>>45933749
I'll kill your waifus.
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>>45933772
It seems we're at an impasse then!
>>
Speaking of Henshin, I have been throwing around the idea of a Mahou Shonen quest, but not sure how I want to go about it.
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>>45933793
It's a goo girl, an alchemical mistake grown sentience and a fondness for humanoid forms. And sweets.

Don't ever say I wasn't nice, MQ

I'm hoping that if I can pander to one person, I can pander to people with similar tastes who'll become invested as they partake.
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>>45933821
Well, what's your first thought of when you think Mahou Shonen?
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>>45933821
As far as I get it, it's superheroes with the MG flavor behind it. Nailing a male character dynamic between the MC and the team is probably the goal.

Also, it's good to have the idea of things in mind, but not hard write them in.

example in thread: the comet and march 22nd thing was pure coincidence
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>>45933600
>Hale-Bopp

Oh shit. Any chance we're going to run into creepy cultists?
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>>45933864
>>45933883
Well no, I do have an idea for the world, just not the overall story.

Basically, The MC is the first ever MS in a MG filled world. And that's about as far as I gotten. No villain, a few characters, maybe a city name, but that's it so far.
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>>45933933
That's fine, start with characters. Populate the world with characters, then shape it to their actions.

I'm using a pretty generic fantasy setting for my quest, but I'm hoping that interesting characters will be the way myself and players breath life into the world.
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>>45933933
Mm. I see.

Well, I think a good idea is getting your tone in mind, as well as what you at least want to DO with the Quest.

Plus, what >>45933971 said. Characters are an easy way to get a plot going.
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>>45933864
Could be cool. One of QG's quests ideas he threw around was a quest where we play as an ex-magical girl who already defeated the shadow monsters that menaced her town. Now years later and out of college she heads to the big city under an alias (because she hates the attention her magical girl life gave her) and tries to live a happy and social life while keeping our true ID secret. But the shadow monsters start to show back up, and a new magical girl appears to fight them. We have to fight back while training the new magical girl.

QG described it as part Kiki's delivery service part Superman.

Personally I hope he goes through with it. It sounds interesting to play as an ex-magical girl mentoring a new kid.
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>>45933933
>Villains
These are the key to a successful cape game. A good rogue's gallery. Will we be fighting monsters of the week or continual adversaries?
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>>45934025
Yeah. This.

I sorta set up Ivory as a quasi-antagonist, but he's not exactly evil.

There are more proper villains in store, and some we've already met and don't know about...
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>>45934025
Probably Monster of the week type, but I'm also throwing around the idea of the MC just butting heads with the MGs a quite times due to their....contractors not agreeing well.
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>>45933907
Super hero worshiping cultists? Could make for fun enemies. They'll be like ultra-fans of Vanquish and friends. They want to help but just end up creepy and annoying and get in the way.
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>>45934059
How anime do you wanna get with this?

Like, is he the first male student at an all-female Magical Girl Academy?
Is the source of his powers at odds with theirs?
Do they blame him for something that happened on the same day as he got his powers?
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>>45934081
Nah, I think he means like the IRL group that worshipped the Comet and ended up committing mass suicide in order to board a UFO following it.

That DOES sound like a good creepier arc...
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>>45934119
Do we end up fighting zombie cultists?
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>>45934119
>Her Archenemy is the combined mass of those forsaken souls, vengeful and convinced that they DID make it to heaven but her empowerment caused them to end up back on earth as they are now, a dark mirror to our beloved Vanquish.
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>>45934059
I like the idea of having a rival, like a female Lee from Cardcaptor Sakura.

How much will they dislike us? Will any of them challenge us to semi-friendly magical duels to see who has the stronger magic?
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>>45934160
Perhaps!
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
>>45934169
Again, all I can say is...perhaps!
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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>>45934119
>>45934160
>>45934169
The idea of fighting a big ghost ball of Heaven's Gate cultists has potential. Maybe we run across a group trying to repeat the ritual with another comet?

>Meet a bunch of creepy but super polite guys that all dress the same
>They think super heroes are awesome. They like us a lot. They wish they could be us
>If we ever need anything from them all we need to do is ask
>Some wear funny shirts with our helmet on them

>Later we find out they're planning a mass suicide when a certain comet is close to Earth in a misguided attempt to become super humans.

It would provide an interesting group of enemies. The challenge isn't to punch them out, the challenge is to convince them not to an hero.
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>>45934195
>>45934250
>>45933907
>>45934119
I just want us to fight someone as creepy as Marshal Applewhite.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AqSZhwu1Rwo
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>>45934116
>How anime do you wanna get with this?
Depending on how I continue building it, probably very much so.
>Like, is he the first male student at an all-female Magical Girl Academy?
No, it's a normal high school with some of the female students being MGs.
>Is the source of his powers at odds with theirs?
Possibly. Or some MGs just don't like him and think he's a irregularity that needs to be studied.
>Do they blame him for something that happened on the same day as he got his powers?
I....haven't actually though of that. I might actually take that idea.

>>45934184
>How much will they dislike us?
Some depending on actions would think the MC is a nice guy. Others would see him as a oddity, cause no guy was a MS before. And the rest don't know what to think of him.
>Will any of them challenge us to semi-friendly magical duels to see who has the stronger magic?
Quite possibly.

Keep in mind, some of this is bound to change.
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>>45933666
NOOOOOOOO!
I missed the end! :(

Senpai, comfort me!
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>>45934195
So, for my Sin Princess quest, the setting I'm thinking is; The Old Kingdom was the height of civilization, mighty and arrogant from their abuse of magical artifacts called Heart Gems. A dark outcast from the Kingdom, seeking vengeance against those who had cast him out and wronged him, called upon a Terrible Power to destroy the Old Kingdom.
The Great War between them wrought the Kingdom down to its stone bones, but also mightily weakened the Dark King. Using the scavenged Heart Gems that survived the Great War, rag-tag bands of barbarians made Mighty Warriors who assaulted the Dark King and struck him down, casting the remnants of his Shadow Tower and the blighted Monstrous Forest into a realm of Nothingness.
This is where you begin. It is decades since the Great War and the New Kingdom has grown proud and flawed, ruled by the last surviving barbarian made King and guarded from lowly foes by their mighty Heart Knights.
Deep within the remains of the Dark King's holds, a flower blossoms, a Daughter born of her Father's Sin. How will you return to the world? How will you leave your mark upon it? And what Sin will guide your monstrous hands?

whatcha think?

>>45934365
FUCK YOU! HAHAHA!
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>>45934365
yo it ok

theres always chapter 6

enjoy some real henshin hours in the meantime
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>>45934388
Anon, why do you bully me so? :(
Why does Senpai love to see lolis be bullied? I let you bully me only because senpai likes it! If senpai says I have to do it, then I'll do what she says!
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>>45934388
Seems fine enough--my only complaint is the usage of capitalizations seems a little weird. Maybe cut down on that?

Otherwise, it's a fine enough starting point and backstory that you can put in more depth later.

Things to address, maybe, as things progress?
>Are there other Sin Daughters?
>Did the Old King have loyalists?
>What groups are totally opposed to the MC, what ones are neutral, and what ally naturally with her?
>Something about what actions will make certain groups withdraw their support from you being explored is good too.
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>>45934445
CAUSE YOU'RE BETTER THAN ME!
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AND I'M PRETTY DRUNK!
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>>45934289
>His name is literally Marshal Applewhite

Man. Some people come straight out of comic books. Could someone POSSIBLY have a more cult name?

>>45934338
>Quite possibly

It could be a great set piece to keep things interesting between main game stuff.

We get formally challenged, and that provides something for the cast to discuss. Then the day of the duel approaches, and a crowd gathers. And then the actual duel takes place and the cast comments on the action from the sides.

And then (assuming we win) we take the loser aside and tell her she fought well and that there's no hard feelings.

It's just something nice that can break up main story segments.
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>>45934486
Wow, I literally learned about that statue in Art Appreciation not a month ago.

Weird.
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>>45934425
Hug me senpai! Shield me from the anons who like bullying lolis!

>Reaches out to hug senpai
I tried to put a picture, but all the ones were either with two girls, or lewd! I just wanted to put one with a girl reaching for a hug! D:
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>>45934546
But...hugging is gay.

...I got a pillow you could use.
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>>45934480
I'll work on names. Don't want it to get too generic. I have a notebook around here, full of ideas, but fuck it, it's out of reach.

>there are NOT (probably) other Sin Princesses. As far as the MC starts off, She's IT.
There ARE Loyalists! It's been a while, but some monsters and cultists will help, provided your up to snuff.
>Also, magical constructs that were around during the Great War that helped make you. Specifically an ancient scarecrow called Old Crow who helped to make the Sin Princess.
The New Kingdom is Super Against you, though that's mostly the monarchy and anyone old enough to remember how terrible the War was.
>Various monsters are neutral and can be earned as Allies or new Enemies. The Vampire Courts in particular tend to be a little fluctuating, due to Klingon Promotions.
>As for Allies, there's cultists, constructs, and your own little minions, humanoid plants called Mandrakes, who are utterly loyal but not particularly bright.
>Actions will ABSOLUTELY effect who reacts to you how.

>>45934518
it's my favorite reaction image.

>>45934546
GET BULLIED!
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>>45934623
fuckin shitdicks, my TYPING!
>>>>>>>>>>FUCK
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>>45934609
...Is it a nice pillow?
A gift from senpai!? :D

>>45934623
Mou~ Anon, so mean!
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>>45934664
Whatever anime grill is on it that you like, I guess...?
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>>45934664
Sorry, speak up, can't hear you from down there, shrimp!
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>>45934690
Nonna is my favorite girl!

>>45934700
Senpai, Anon keeps bullying me! Make him stop!
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>>45934771
Uh...

Alakazam, bullying be-gone...?
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>>45934793
What's that? You DON'T want a haughty vampiress, a brutish, muscular orc girl, or a pillowy, voluptuous goo girl...?
Well, okay, if you insist....
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>>45934496
Well, I noted that down, so I'll try to make duels a thing.

What's surprising me is no one is talking about waifus.
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>>45934825
hey no shut up i want all of that

ill grant you one wish of this thread (within reason) if you make all those happen in yours
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>>45934838
Oh, silly me, my hearing must be getting poor from straining to make sense of the cries of a certain tiny gnat... >>45934771

Can I spend my wish on you writing that lewd vampiric threesome that I mentioned earlier
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>>45934831
It depends on who you throw at us.....unless you want us to start making suggestions....
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>>45934884
Hey, I can take a few if you got any, not going to say no to help.
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>>45934877
Technically, that's the greentext anon's thing...

But I DO have their contact info, so I CAN make it happen...
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>>45934918
yes
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>>45934933
there we go
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>>45934877
I thought you were going to spend your wish on bullying rights! Thanks for not being too mean, Anon!

Wait... You got the wish by having Senpai give you bullying rights! D:

I would like to read it. Maybe.
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>>45934979
I'm so glad you can be bought with waifus, MQ.

>>45934998
You're not allowed to read it. If you do, I'll know. And I'll yell at you.
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>>45935018
>posting blight

Dude, stop reminding me how fucking awesome Batman Beyond was.
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>>45935029
no schway
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>>45935018
I'm s-sorry Anon! I w-won't! I p-promise!
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>>45935048
LIAR! YOU'RE A DIRTY LIAR!
THE L WORD STANDS FOR LIAR!
WHO IS YOU!
WHO LIES!
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>>45934915
.......

A dog girl. Extremely loyal and protective of her friends, and slightly paranoid because she knows first hand how unpredictable magic can be having hung out with kitsune. She is initially suspicious of the protag but can easily warm up to him. She works as a shrine maiden, and is teased constantly because she was abandoned as a child and raised as the only dog in a family of kitsune.

Another waifu would be a rough and tumble tomboy who uses magic to augment her martial arts. Captain of the school's judo and karate team, wants to go pro MMA. She takes on the "cool big sis" role among the MGs. Acts like she isn't interested in a relationship, but is actually nervous that boys don't find her tomboy ways attractive.
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>>45935063
St-stop bullying me Anon! Or I'll call my Girlfriend and have her tell me how much we love eachother!
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>>45935070
Another waifu would be a Chuuni. No, she actually IS a magical girl. She has the powers and everything. The delusion comes form her believing that she's actually an elf princess from another dimension. She dies her hair, wears contacts, and wears fake ears. She believes she was cast out of her kingdom by an evil wizard and seeks to return "home".

She uses her magic to summon adorable 8-bit pixel monster familiars based on creatures from her "homeworld". She plays too many JRPGs.
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>>45935083
Coward!
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>>45935117
Meany Anon!

I'm going to bed now. Goodnight, Senpai!
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>>45935070
>>45935104
>Dog girl
Wasn't really going for the whole "monster girl" angle, but I'll take a Genki adpoted girl.
>Tomboy
>implying I wasn't going to include one
Tomboys are my fetish bruh
>Chuuni
I like this one. I like this one a lot.
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>>45935137
G'night, Worst Twin!
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>>45935142
A genki girl adopted into a family of shrine maidens works surprisingly well.

She's not the most studious or devout, but she's the one that ended up with the most magical powers. That makes some of her siblings jealous.
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I'll spitball some more MG

A MG that styles herself after a western witch. Snooty. Comes from a long line of magic users. Feels more than a little out of place having moved to japan recently and covers for her inadequacy by insisting that western magic is better than eastern magic. Lives in a huge mansion. Is more than a little embarrassed by her family's wealth.

A goth magical girl. Socially awkward. Wears skull earrings. Grumpy and sarcastic but with a heart of gold.
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s-so uh

survey time

h-how ya'll folks liking things as of late in the threads

y-ya like this chapter

c-cool
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>>45935354
I'm having a great time with it, MQ.
I feel like the individual posts could be longer, holding more details, I dunno.
Might just be feeling that because Hellborn quest was running at the same time and Languid tends to be pretty verbose.
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>>45935221
Thanks anon.
I took these and figured out names for them. Again, thanks!

>>45935354
The threads are nice. But my fighting spirit demands more fight scenes.
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gotta pass out, MQ.
Love the quest, see you in the next thread.



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