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((With apologies to the lateness of this thread.

twitter: @RevengeanceQ
Previous threads: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Hot-Blooded%20Henshin%20Hero%20Quest

LAST TIME: We went in for our physical examination, meeting the young hero Showstopper (but don't call him that), Soul Samurai, and Makoto tagging along for the ride.

Our instructor was none other than Paragon Supreme himself, who gave us our examination and send us on our way. We last left off on talking with our younger hero friends over pizza.

---

"Please, everyone--" You start. "I'm not better than any of you. Even if my rank is higher, or if I'm a few years older, or maybe my powers do more than yours. What matters, between ANY of us, is our heroic spark. That burning passion in all of us to fight for a better future, THAT is what makes a hero. You could have no powers at all and still be as much of a hero as Paragon Supreme himself."

Soul nods his head fervently, his hands moving to clap. Makoto's already there, her palms slapping quickly in adulation.

Still though...

"...the big names are never gonna let us on their level." Showstopper says pessimistically, glancing out the window.

>Is there something wrong?
>That's no way to think for a hero.
>Write-in.
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>>45803452
>>That's no way to think for a hero.
Heroes are A rank from the start (most of the time) but they work to that position. But, still
>Is there something wrong?
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>>45803452
>That's no way to think for a hero.
Rank is a nice thing to have, but the foremost concern of a true hero is what they can do for others. Even if you fall to the lowest of ranks, even if you are rejected from the Union entirely, never stop fighting for justice. Everything else pales in comparison.
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>>45803653
>>45803696
"That's no way to think for a hero. Think about it--are you going to let a rank named after a deck of cards tell you you aren't good enough? When you save a family from a burning apartment complex, are they going to look at you and be ungrateful because a Club did it and not a Spade? No. They'll say 'you're MY hero'."

Something in his eyes winces, and he bites his lip. That hit something.

"...maybe if they're open minded."

"I've saved people before I ever registered, and never once did they mention rank. You are a valid hero no matter who you are, or what your rank is, or what your powers are."

"...I can't use my powers to save people. I don't know why I thought I'd change that by getting a high rank."

You pause, looking deep at Showstopper. One of his bangs still covers his other eye, but the one you can see is fervently avoiding looking at you.

"Why are you so uncomfortable talking about them?" you ask. You're thankful Makoto and Soul haven't interjected. You feel somehow, they're both a bit too misguided to help him alongside you.

"Because they aren't powers." He says through gritted teeth. "It's 'a tool'. It's 'something to use in emergencies.' It's something that's going to get me killed."

Makoto taps the table a bit to direct attention.

"Well...if it's not a power, then why not rely on other things? I...don't have natural abilities, but I'm still a hero." she says, solemnly. It's a far contrast from her usual pep.

Showstopper just sighs.

"I don't want to talk about this anymore." he says bluntly, before fishing in his pocket for a twenty. "There's my cut for the food. Come on, Soul, we have a test to study for tomorrow."

"But today was--" Soul starts.

"At school, dipshit." He cuts him off.

>"What the hell is your problem!?"
>Drop it. The issue is going no where.
>Just leave with Makoto, get her home safe.
>Write-in.
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>>45804007
>>Just leave with Makoto, get her home safe.

HI MQM! I had an AWFUL day, glad I caught this running.
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>>45804007
>"I'm not going to pry any further, but I do suggest you think over what you want to gain out of being a hero, before you commit to something you might end up hating."
>Drop it. The issue is going no where.
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>>45804007
>>Drop it. The issue is going no where.
>>Just leave with Makoto, get her home safe.
Nothing more. Just leave it.
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>>45804132
Seconding on this
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>>45804086

((Glad to have you in the thread too, Anon. Really hope this at least makes up for whatever made the day shitty. Here's an o7 just for you, pal.

O7))

>>45804086
>>45804119
>>45804132

"I'm not going to pry any further, but I do suggest you think over what you want to gain out of being a hero. Before you commit to something you end up hating."

The two of you glance at one another before you gesture for Makoto to follow you out, leaving Soul and Showstopper to themselves.

"...Gee...I never thought he'd get so intense about this rank thing." Makoto says, a few minutes after you're out of the pizzeria. "Why do you think the Union even has ranks if it's so dividing?"

You don't have much of an answer for that.

"Do you think some heroes really are just...better?" She finally asks.

"No." The answer comes quick. "No one's inherently better than anyone. Everyone has an untapped, limitless potential."

Makoto pouts a bit, looking down at her shoes as you walk. "...the three of you may have all that trouble with ranks, but I haven't even made my interview yet. And what with this assassin after me making it so I can't be Hurricane..."

You turn around, putting your hands firmly on Makoto's shoulders. She's stunned at the suddenness of the gesture.

"Makoto. Listen to me."

"L-Listening!" She peeps.

"If you were an animal, what would you be?"

"A-A ferret, because they are energetic, cute, and friends for life!" She answers a tad too quickly.

"Now imagine I'm a cardinal. Can you judge a ferret by how well it flies?" You ask.

"Why, no. That's absurd." She says. "A ferret can't even fly. Sure, it can roll and jump and spring, but--"

"Exactly. We are different heroes, so what sense does it make to judge us all in the same way?" you finally say.

"...Ohhhhh! That...makes a lot of sense!" Her smile starts to return. "You mean the Union needs a test for ferret heroes like me!"

>"...That's kind of what I meant, yes."
>"Sure." (Smile)
>Write-in.
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>>45804329
>>"Sure." (Smile)
I guess
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>>45804329
>"Actually, I meant something more like 'Everyone will always have things they can and can't do, so having tests for a vocation as broad as "Hero" is pretty ridiculous.' But if that's the conclusion you've reached, then don't let me tell you otherwise; your opinion is just as valid as mine."
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>>45804455
>>45804501

"Sure. Actually, I meant something more like 'Everyone will always have things they can and can't do, so having tests for a vocation as broad as "Hero" is pretty ridiculous.' But, if that's the conclusion you've reached, then don't let me tell you otherwise; your opinion is as valid as mine."

Makoto's lip curls upwards in the corner in a semi-smile at that. "You talk to me like my brother did, you know. Never treating me too much like a kid, but always willing to explain...that's nice. I...kinda feel like I'm a little dumb sometimes."

The wind picks up briefly as you both walk, leaves sliding past your feet.

"Please, Makoto. You were smart enough to trick ME into that ridiculous little gambit of yours."

"Hey!" She giggles, punching you in the arm. It actually kind of hurts. She's been hitting the gym, lately, for sure. "I'm so embarrassed to have even tried that. I'm actively cringing at the memory."

"Oh, pshaw. Really, it's fine, Makoto. You're all forgiven..." You trail off as your eyes glance at Makoto's chest.

A single, fuzzy red dot.

Your eyes widen in surprise.

>"Makoto, get down!!"
>Get in front of her!
>Find where it's coming from, before...!!
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>>45804815
>>"Makoto, get down!!"
>>Get in front of her!
Cover her body with yours.
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>>45804815
>>"Makoto, get down!!"
>>Get in front of her!
We are justice!
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>>45804815
>>"Makoto, get down!!"
>>Get in front of her!
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>>45804850
>>45805077

"Makoto, get down!!"

"What do you--"

You rush in front of Makoto, just as something searing and hot enters your lower back. All the wind is taken out of your lungs, and you can only wordlessly cry out in pain.

"A-Aghhh!!"

Makoto looks down, horrified, as the dot repositions to her once more. Your eyes slide up, and the horrifying thought crosses your mind that you won't be able to save this girl.

Suddenly, time...seems to shift. All your spilling blood is now on the ground, when it was at a drip moments before. The shadow of someone standing behind you is also suddenly there.

"I'm sorry I wasn't faster."

Showstopper.

He drops a gun by your side, broken in half.

"...head to a hospital. I'll get her home." He says, taking Makoto by the hand and walking away.

You gasp for air, struggling to get your phone out and calling 911.

"P-Please..." You wheeze, the shock settling in.

"9-1-1, what's your emergency?" The operator begins.

"S-Shot...on...on..."

"We'll be right there to get you." The voice distorts.

A shadowy figure descends over you.

>"W-Who..."
>Just black the fuck out.
>WHOCARESYOUHAVENOOTHEROPTIONS
>Write-in.
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>>45805345
>>"W-Who..."
>>Just black the fuck out.
>>WHOCARESYOUHAVENOOTHEROPTIONS
Fuck.
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>>45805345
>>"W-Who..."
Dammit man....
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>>45805345
>>"W-Who..."
>>Just black the fuck out.
>>WHOCARESYOUHAVENOOTHEROPTIONS
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>>45805345
well, you were talking about making people feel sad in SibellaQuest, MQM...
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>>45805386
>>45805400
>>45805423

You awake to someone wrapping your torso in bandages.

"Who...?"

"You're lucky I arrived in time. You were just mashing the '9' key on your phone when I found you."

You weakly glance, your eyes glazing.

"K-Knightmare." You sputter.

"The assassin was aiming for her. Good thing you care about her. You really ARE nothing like the Union."

>"Why did you save me?"
>"Who are you?"
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>>45805553
>>"Why did you save me?"
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>>45805553
>>"Why did you save me?"
if Knightmare turns out to be a cute gril...
I will ship it real hard
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>>45805553
>>"Why did you save me?"
>>"Who are you?"
Can we also say something like 'It hurts to breathe'.
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>>45805591
b-but m-muh shota...
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>>45805683
We'll get ya another shota.
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>>45805591
everyone is a qt reverse trap

>>45805565
>>45805591
>>45805622

"Why did you save m-me..." You turn your head, coughing up a palmful of blood. "I-It hurts to breathe, sorry."

"Because you're a good hero. The way you care about that girl..."

You cough at that, intentionally to get him to shut up.

"The point is, I've been watching you. Ever since our fight, I've noticed that you have some...fire in you."

Like he wouldn't believe.

"Who are you??" you ask.

He sighs. "The honest answer is no one you would know. But I can promise that you and me are on the same side. The Union isn't all bad...but it is rotten to the core and needs cleansing."

>"Is this about that 'conspiracy'?
>"Who else have you been watching?"
>Write-in.
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>>45805683
shota, much like whipped cream, should serve as a garnish to cute lewds, not the main course.
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>>45805761
>speaking of lewds
you all have full permission to greentext fluff or smut during these threads
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>>45805750
>>"Is this about that 'conspiracy'?
>>"Who else have you been watching?"
>>
>>45805750
>>"Is this about that 'conspiracy'?
>>"Who else have you been watching?"
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>>45805844
>MC lewdly bullying Hurricane greens
I desire this
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>>45805913
>>45805851

"Is this about that conspiracy...?"

Knightmare's expression makes the answer clear.

"Who else have you been watching...?"

Knightmare presses hard into your back, where you were shot. You wince in pain.

"Every single hero who went in for exams. I need to make sure someone isn't trying to blackmail them, or hurt them."

"Well, what the hell makes you so sure the Union is behind all this? Do you know who's the leader of the conspiracy?"

Knightmare sucks in air through his teeth.

"...I don't know. All I know is that there are more heroes who have been killed than just that poor girl's brother. But heroes...why kill them in secret if it wasn't from the same organization they're hired by? Why would a 'villain' not just kill them out in the open?"

You nod. "Should I not join them...?"

"On the contrary. I was going to ask that you stay in there...ascend the ranks as much as you can. Maybe work as...a mole?"

>"No fucking way."
>"I-I'm no stealth expert."
>"...go on."
>"I don't know if I can trust you."
>Write-in.
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>>45805920
>Vanquish and Hurricane are showering together
>Vanquish offers to help thoroughly 'clean' her
>Hurricane tries feebly to resist, but can't put up a good resistance
>Vanquish is rubbing her all over focusing a lot on 'sensitive' areas
>You know...for justice
>They left the shower 2 hours later
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>>45806066
>>"I-I'm no stealth expert."
"No seriously, I ended up revealing to a friend earlier that I-nevermind"
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>>45806066
>"I-I'm no stealth expert."
>>
>>45806066
>>"I-I'm no stealth expert."
>>"I don't know if I can trust you."

>>45806097
>Vanquish bridal-carrying Hurricane out
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>>45806122
w-what did we reveal
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>>45806066
>>"I-I'm no stealth expert."

>>45806151
We kinda sucked our own metaphorical dick with a normie friend.
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>>45806151
I believe we were hanging out with a friend right before the whole conspiracy reveal and Vanquish pretty much revealed she was a extreme lesbian in the most hilariously embarrassing way.
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>>45806139
>>45806144
>>45806191

"Buddy, I couldn't keep my sexuality under wraps. You think I can keep a life-or-death secret like that away from those around me?"

"Trust me, I saw that go down. And believe me--the human mind learns to adapt. Vanquish, you're perfect for the job."

You sigh. "Can I at least wait until I recover?"

"Of cour--"

"To make the decision, I mean. Not to start."

"I still say of course."

"...Cogmaster."

"Hm?" Knightmare looks up at you.

"I...I said 'she' when I gave Hurricane's costume over to him. Someone had to have talked to him about it, he had no clue that there were two Hurricanes otherwise."

Knightmare solemnly nods. "That seems so. I'd recommend you keep a low profile for now. As for Hurricane...well, I'll seed some rumors that she's got no clue about the conspiracy. They're far too eager to believe they're invincible, believe it or not. Lazy bastards..."

"If she's busy being a hero, at least she can breathe down my neck at the hospital, heh..." you say, rolling onto your side.

"She really does care about you, you know. She needs some kind of figure to look up to, before she can become better herself."

You nod sadly.

>"...I hope she can become stronger, and not rely on someone."
>"...I care about her, y'know? I want the best for her."
>Say nothing.
>Write-in.
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>>45806366
>"...I care about her, y'know? I want the best for her."
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>>45806366
>>Write-in.
I will protect her since she is a very good friend but I want to get her stronger where she can defend herself
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>>45806480
I'll back this one.
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>>45806366

Changing my vote from >>45806435 to >>45806480
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>>45806480
This is good. Backing.
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>>45806480
"I'll protect her since she's a good friend, but...I want her to get stronger so she can defend herself. I want her living and fighting for her, not because someone else told her to and taught her to."

"...Admirable. You are truly a good friend to her."

Something about that word feels awkward to hear.

"Will you take me back home, at least? Let a girl have some privacy in her home?"

Knightmare laughs at that, snorting towards the end in a display breaking his stoic image.

"...You've been home." He says.

You glance around, realizing it's your apartment.

"H-How the hell did you get the key!?"

"You leave it under the mat. I don't need to stalk you to know that one. Everyone with bad security does that." He smiles again. "Also, yes. A /lady/ will let a lady have her privacy."

...What.

"...What?"

Knightmare sighs, waving a hand over his face, as the facade fades over, revealing a youthful woman.

"Look, using this disguise is an easy way to not be found while in civilian clothes. You have a helmet, I have a separate gender." 'He' says.

"...so wait, which are you--"

"Girl."

>"WHY ARE SO MANY PEOPLE AROUND HERE PRETENDING TO BE MEN!?"
>...Don'tadmireherdon'tadmireherdon'tadmireher
>"Can you go now?"
>Write-in.
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>>45806732
>"WHY ARE SO MANY PEOPLE AROUND HERE PRETENDING TO BE MEN!?"
>...Don'tadmireherdon'tadmireherdon'tadmireher

"WHY IS GOD MAKING MY FANTASIES COME TRUE?!"
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>>45806732
>>"WHY ARE SO MANY PEOPLE AROUND HERE PRETENDING TO BE MEN!?"
>>...Don'tadmireherdon'tadmireherdon'tadmireher
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>>45806732
>...Don'tadmireherdon'tadmireherdon'tadmireher..

Time to ship this so hard right now.

Also, new anon.
Please take care of me senpai! Desu~
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>>45806732
>>Write-in.
"Does that mean your a newhalf too?"
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>>45806868
>not unless you're a big breasted middle aged mom

>>45806766
>>45806835
>>45806868
"WHY ARE SO MANY PEOPLE AROUND HERE PRETENDING TO BE MEN!?"

Knightmare shrugs.

You glance over her face. Those soft, supple cheeks. Two lips, pursed like she's about to ask you something, but paused looking at you. And those eyes...pure amber, that must say so much, as you can see yourself reflected--

"Are you okay? Are you still in shock?" She asks.

"D-DOES THAT MEAN YOU'RE A NEWHALF TOO!?" You suddenly shout.

You're a solid 0/10 on the dateability scale. You know it.

"Ask someone I've dated." She says bluntly. "Anyways, I said I would go, so I will go." She gets up, grabbing her massive blade and dragging it right through the hardwood flooring to the door, closing it behind her.

...You suck at talking to your own gender.

>What now?
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>>45807178
>Scream into pillow, shower (cold, cold shower), call friends and check on them so they know we aren't dead.
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>>45807178
>What now?

Get something to eat?
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>>45807178
>I only have mid sized breasts, and am 22. I wish I had a girlfriend. :(

Ooh, a write in!

>Think of something to do. Like getting Knightshade's number.
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>>45807178
Bash our head against the wall because we are horrible with pretty girls.
That doesn't explain how we can talk to Makoto so well.
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>>45807178
>What now?

Start to figure a way to train Makoto and also call her to see if she is safe
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>>45807178
>>Scream into pillow, shower (cold, cold shower), call friends and check on them so they know we aren't dead.

You know MQM, you shouldn't have given that okay for fluff and lewds. I'm slightly tempted to do some silly lil' one-shots
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>>45807246
"MMMMMMMMMMMHHHH!!" You scream into your pillow, punching the sides on your air mattresses futilely.

God, you are SUCH a fucking idiot. Why did you mention the newhalf bit?? Is your mind set to fucking danibooru!?

You grumble, grabbing your clothes and heading to the communal shower, locking your stall and leaving the water as cold as it will go.

Just before you step inside, you send out one mass-text to everyone you know who may have heard about your injury with a flat 'I'm okay.'

Once you're out, still dripping wet and sexually frustrated, you put in more Minute Rice (you are a master of nutrition, after all) and call Makoto.

"...Hello?" You hear her speak up.

"Hey, I'm alright. Are you...?" you quietly ask.

"Yes! Oh, I got home just fine. I'm just surprised that someone tried to...anyways, how are you!? I was worried sick! And then that guy--"

"I'm doing fine. I'm just going to be resting for a while. He told me it's okay for you to be Hurricane again."

You hold the phone away from your ear, as you hear screams of joy.

"Yeah!! I can save the day once more, and be the hero of the downtrodden! I'm gonna start writing down all my special moves to shout!" She hangs up, and you sigh.

How to train Makoto...how to train her...

>Contemplate that.
>Do something else (Write-in.)
>contemplate the many waifus around you
>Anon: start the waifu wars
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>>45807654
No, seriously. Do it. I dare you, fucker.

>vanquish comforting makoto on the anniversary of her brother's death and letting slip an 'i love you'
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>>45807663
>>Contemplate that.
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>>45807663
>>Contemplate that.
How quickly can we get her swole?
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>>45807822
>im gonna break character to say that makoto's pretty buff already
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>>45807663
>>Contemplate that.
>>45807676
I'll have it ready when you make the next thread.
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>>45807876
Never can be too swole.
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>>45807895
>ends thread and starts a new one

>>45807802
>>45807822
>>45807895

Well, she'll need a new diet regimen, certainly. She must be in high school, even though she's maybe a year or two younger than you, you know how a high school girl eats. And that's not good enough for being a hero!

...You say, hypocritically having subsisted on a diet of OJ, Minute Rice, milk, and the occasional bite of fast food.

But you work out! And she needs some sort of gym membership too, not just that running regimen she has.

You said you wouldn't be her mentor, but you will certainly be her fitness coach.

...god that sounds gay. You're doing nothing but sounding gay today.

You wrap a towel around yourself and go back to your room, sliding on a fresh pair of panties and getting under the covers, adjusting yourself to sit upright. You grab your laptop and go online, starting a Google Doc for your workout plans.

>Stay on-topic.
>Get off-topic.
>Accidentally write something gay
>Write-in.
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>>45808006
>>Stay on-topic.
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>>45808006
>>Stay on-topic.
100 push ups! 100 Sit-ups! 100 Squats! 10km Running!
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>>45808006
>Write something Gay
>Oh shit!
>>Stay on-topic.
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>>45808006
>Purposefully write something gay. Something along the lines of cute yuri erotica.
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>>45808072
>>45808172
>>45808121
>>45808111

"Well..."

You begin to write.

'I've got to get her to a good level. Let's see...I weigh about 130, mostly muscle...if she can bench that, bench me--'

BACKSPACEBACKSPACEBACKSPACEBACKSPACE ANDDDD IT'S GONE.

'She should be able to lift 130 well enough as a midrange goal.'

"Better."

'Something like 100 push-ups, 100 sit-ups, 100 sq'

"...is every facet of my life going to be anime and superheroics...?"

You wonder what the hell is so wrong with that before continuing.

'uats, and 10km of running.'

Still, it would be nice, to have an actual girlfriend. You haven't dated anyone aside from beards, and it would give you someone you could relate to...romantically reveal your identity to...maybe even hold their hand.

...o-or even marry them, perish the thought.

You glance at the door to make sure no one's walking by, before you open up a new page and begin to write.

'Yukari waited patiently by herself at the coffee shop--her blind date would be arriving soon. She sipped calmly on a mug of their best marshmallow-and-whipped-cream cocoa. Of course, she was lucky the mug was on the table when /she/ walked in.'

You cringe at how much you're blushing writing this dreck.

'She was 6'2, quite a bit taller than Yukari. Long, flowing black hair that looked soft as pillows, and a face that rang of physical strength and almost matronly warmth. While her body was wide, it definitely wasn't fat--far from it. Muscular and well-built all over, her thickish thighs made a satisfying rhythm as they walked over. Her voice, a smooth contralto as she spoke.'

''Yukari?,'' she asked.'

''T-That's me.'' Yukari girlishly stuttered.'

'Her date smiled, teeth gleaming. Yukari's mind was racing at her sheer thick, strong body. How she wanted her to just caress her in the warmth of a winter's night beneath the covers, whisper lovingly in her ears and hotly say how she wanted to ravish--'

You slam the laptop down. Bedtime.

END OF CHAPTER 4.
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>>45808508
>Just who IS behind the conspiracy after Hurricane's--and perhaps now OUR lives?

>Just what is the nature of Knightmare?

>And man oh man, are we ever going to get a girlfriend as PASSIONATE as us?

>T U N E
>I N
>N E X T
>T I M E

>And now the thread's up for fluff/smut greens, discussion, hopes, dreams, SAVE the World, etc.
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>>45808597
We seriously do need a girlfriend, if only to help calm our thirst down. I mean goddamn. Also I'm gonna get to work on that story probably tomorrow. Just one question: Hurricane is shorter than us right?
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>>45808597
>hopes, dreams, SAVE the World
Considering this for our theme song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PUwmlXR_Zn0
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>>45808634
Yeah. We're about 5'9 IIRC, and she's a rough 5'5-5'6.
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>>45808650
5'4 manlet reporting in, would get bullied by them
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>>45808650
Good. Get ready for some high impact affectionate cuddling
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>>45808671
>you're gonna be bullied for being straight, not your height
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>>45808650
>Vanqy is 5'9
>I'm 5'7
>Hurry is 5'6
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>>45808734
I think Vanquish would be the last to bully anyone for sexual orientation after her uh...'confessions'
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>>45808734
>even better
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>>45808742
what's the matter anon, feeling...
be-little-d?
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>>45808508
Oh wow senpai! That was some amazing writing! I wish I had a girlfriend even more now, one who would snuggle with me, embarass me, bully my shortness of 5'3, reassure me that I'm perfect for her, and maybe even hold hands with me!

>Now I'M sexually frustrated. Thanks Senpai. :(
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>>45808809
If you make anymore puns I will toss the story straight into the digital trash!
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>>45808809
U WOT M8?
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>>45808825
p-plz

Also, I need a Penn Pacha. Now.

I also need a Pacha for Vanquish and Hurricane. Will contact my local drawfag.

>>45808810
One day, Kohai. There's a lot of people out there for you, but you can't let 'fate' just hand you a girlfriend. You have to get out there and find someone who works with you to make a communicative, prosperous, and happy relationship that lasts a long, long time.

...SPIRIT!
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>>45808597
Cant we be a bisexual female hero?
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>>45808894
That depends if we find a dude who makes us question our gayness.
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>>45808894
No cute shotas anon.....yet....
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>>45808921
>shotas
>not mature big breasted milfs who'll--

fuck you im not magical realming even though its /tg/
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>>45808921
I don't think the Shotas are gonna do anything for Vanquish...
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>>45809013
Do you want a lewd Vanquish one-shot of her being tended to by a mature big-breasted milf who'll make her cookies and a warm cup of milk?
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>>45808885
Thanks, senpai! I think I will. The other day I heard one of my friends slip that she thought I was a cutie. She covered it up quickly, but I hope she'd be interested if she knew I was interested too! And then, maybe we could have hot, sweaty, lesbian sex, and maybe even hold hands in public!
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>>45809040
Go for it, ya nerd. Just TRY and make this indomitable spirit blush.

>>45809053
Just take it slow and make sure she's not uncomfortable with anything. If it doesn't work out, it doesn't work out, but that's no reason to give up.

Good luck, Kohai.
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>>45809087
I'll give it my best shot. Have written too many Yuri Lewds
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>>45809087
>unconsenting hand holding
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>>45809142
Surprise hand-holding is a good way to make a woman blush
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>>45809203
>>45809142

Still a poor idea for getting a real long-term relationship.
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>>45809040
>>45809122
I would like to see this.
For science.
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>>45809379
MQM, I wouldn't be here if I made good choices.
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>>45809449
But, if I'm here because I made good decisions...and you're here because you made bad choices...

Who's writing the yuri greentexts??
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>>45809437
I'll get on it after the first story
>>45809477
That'd be me though, I'm not doing it in greentext style (please forgive me)
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>>45809477
I have no idea.

But now I really want to watch/read some yuri.

>Senpai, please stop making me more and more horny! D:
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>>45809501
Well, it's not like I'm trying.
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>>45809547
That's cruel of you. You keep this up and you'll have to take responsibility
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>>45809547
Do you have any reccomendations, Senpai? It would help a lot, you know. I would help myself, as well.

Would be nice to see something Senpai likes!
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>>45809678
Heck, honestly, gay people legitimately tend to just be around gay people. Even if your current girl doesn't work out, you are gonna meet someone. If you've got an LGBT club at your school or college, or even in your city, it's a nice place to meet friends. Just don't go looking straight for hookups, cause you'll seem shallow. Friends first, then lovers, you know?

Once you're in a relationship, seriously make sure you communicate. Skypes, phone numbers, etc. And make sure you learn about each other! Nothing tells someone you're committed to them like remembering things they like, or knowing how they like being spoken to.

And shit, make sure to always make at least a little time for each other when you can.
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>>45809678
>>45809747

As for actual porn--I got nothing. Just the odd pic I like on my Tumblr which I basically use to archive porn at this point.
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>>45809747
Wow, that was heartwarming, Senpai! Thanks a lot, I'll use your advice. I hope it works out between me and her, and if not, then hopefully with someone else!

>>45809764
That's alright, I'll just go and look around. You've been so helpful though, thanks!
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Don't usually do the quest thing beyond passing glances ,but this one caught my eye for some reason. ...Ok, not gonna lie, for the "you're a newhalf too" line.

I probably won't do more than read stuff, but hey, it's an interesting read so far.
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>>45809828
Hey, that's alright! I'm glad you still made yourself known. I'm super glad to have people reading.
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>>45809890
I might toss in a vote or two if I actually see threads active. spent most of this one catching up on the story so far.

And it just struck me that between the yuri and the strange conspiracies, this is reminding me a bit of Gamma, which was a really interesting little superhero manga.
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>>45809925
Did you need the link to the archived prior threads? It's up above in the OP.
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>>45809988
I'm good. Found it on the way in.
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Also: As a just for fun aside, I guess I'll just keep the thread sort of going with what I feel like the character's themes are.

Feel free to agree/disagree just know that since I wrote them, I'm automatically right

Anyways.

Vanquish: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PdW4P2O95B8

Vanquish, MAXIMUM TRUTH MODE: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h_SxVtf6Nk0

Makoto: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMQ4ynaEn4k

Hurricane: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-V1ar_jTQ1A

Showstopper: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=auYMuchUa_Y

Knightmare: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hV0qK53UCVw

das all i got mane
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>>45810280
I like them, Senpai.

Still horny, :( Off to go and masturbate to my strange kinks and fetishes, hope that helps!

I'll tell you when/if she agrees to go out with me!
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>>45810280
sweet deal, I always love coming up with character themes for my games.
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>>45810317
Coolio. Hope it goes well!
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>>45810280
I was gonna riot if there was no Bang Shishigami there.
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>>45810351
Admittedly, I don't play Blazblue, but even I know that Bang is hype as fuck.

My favorite character is Tager though. I can't play grapplers for shit, but he's easily the hypest character aside from Bang.
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>>45810386
It's a fun series. My personal favorite is Makoto, and no it's not because of squirrel tits
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>>45810397
Litchi is my favorite QT girl.

I'm gonna admit my patrician tastes and say I can't get into any fighters except Smash, SF, kind of Tekken, and Mahvel.
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>>45810416
Eh, that's not too bad a line up really. Can't say I like Litchi anymore. She got worse and worse as the series went on.
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>>45810490
It's purely aesthetic and me being gay I assure you. The only characters I'd actually play is probably Arakune and Bang.
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>>45810571
.... I don't now how to play the punching games...
I was gonna get MKX, but WB Games shafting the final pc version turned me off of it...
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>>45810590
Neither do I, to be quite honest. I really do want to git gud at SFV and hopefully make a name for myself at it.

my Ken/Urien/Alex game will be legendary
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>>45810605
I'm more excited for DS3.
Love the Souls' series and this being the last one has me very interested.
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>>45810571
Oh lord Arakune is terrifying, more so because he can jump off the edge of the screen at will
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>>45810634
I got DS1 for Christmas, and since I finally got a PS4, I'm definitely grabbing Bloodborne. I cannot fucking eat up a dour, gothic Lovecraftian atmosphere up enough. That's why I love Innistrad from MtG so much.
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>>45810709
Excited to go back to Second Best Walker's home plane?
Ob is Best
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>>45810709
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sgUafsJfbcc
using this as the basis for the theme of a quest I plan on running.
if I could find the courage
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>>45810754
You.

You're my favorite fucking Anon.

Ob a best. Ob a literally the reason I started playing Magic, cause I loved his looks and the dickery his creature cards cause.

But yeah, Shadows looks really great for drafting, and it seems like a genuinely good set. Once they spoil more Mythics and some PWs, I'm gonna finally be excited for Standard again.

>>45810790
Do it! The worst that can ever happen is that you don't get a lot of responses. And so what? I had maybe 3-5 posters the first three threads. And that's been doubled by now! If you do it passionately, and you do it with honest effort and inspiration, then it's a good work.

>that and I'll endorse it if I like it when it's posted
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>>45810813
AAH! ALL THIS SUPPORT!
I just want to rebuild my BU Demons Control deck and Ob's card's have been fucking amazing, but the lack of demons from Zendikar really fucked me. I adore making theme decks.
I hope he runs off and becomes a Fucking Problem for the Stupor Friends later on. His fight and banter with Gideon was amazeballs.

I've been workshopping the quest for some time (and in class) and I think, particularly with the death of Evil Precure Quest, it might have a chance to stand on its own.

would you mind if I pitched the idea to you? This is your thread, after all. It would be rude not to ask.
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>>45810876
Hey, go right ahead, dude. I'm all ears.

I really do feel like the Quest community is overly hostile (no shit, it's 4chan), so I do want to at least be a force of positivity and encouragement, as faggy as that sounds.
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>>45810913
It's super faggy. Thank you.

Basic idea is this. The Big Bad of a fantasy world lost the war, his crumbling castle and the dark forest surrounding it banished to the abyss. Deep within the castle, years later, a plant hatches, freeing the dark lord's alchemic daughter, crafted from magic and monster parts, to take her birthright as princess and try to return to the world. Opposing her are the good king's daughter and her retinue of female knights.
The basis of interactions would stem from the character's first interractions with the world, forming the sin she was crafted from and coloring her interactions, her skills and weaknesses, and the choices available for her.
I'm thinking Wrath for an aggressive Fighter, Pride for a arrogant Mage, and Envy for a greedy Thief.
Thoughts?
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>>45810913
It's one reason why I've never really tried running a quest here myself
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>>45811016
Honestly?

Sounds fucking ripe. As typically bland as a fantasy world can be, the perspective of the main character(s) you follow is key. Making the MC monstrous in a fashion lets you see a side of the world you don't always see, and has plenty of potential for subversion.

Also, the Sin system is particularly clever. I'd like to suggest that the other two Sins you don't choose come back in some form, typically for other (possibly rival?) characters.

But yeah, sounds good. Make her a haughty poofy-shouldered big-cape vampire and she'll be my waifu forever.
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>>45811069
Oh man, that's some good feeling feedback. Is this what it feels... to be a QM who is praised?

the unchosen Sins would definitely effect things in the game world and would be reflected in the npc's, particularly the initially hostile enemy kingdom and the team of magical knight girls.
I'm just worried about railroading players and leading things to a satisfying conclusion.
But yeah, a Wrathful Princess of Sin might have minotaur horns and be able to shrug off lots of damage with draconic scales, a Prideful Princess with Harpy wings and the ability to tap into a Siren's song, an Envious Princess with a chimera's venomous snake tail and a mimic's easily-altered bones.
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>>45811202
Conclusions, while good to keep in mind, definitely won't formulate until you're a good way through the story. After all, there is the ever-present factor of your audience influencing the game and making it go in a whole nother' direction, making a pre-planned ending moot. Just keep in mind your vision, and what would fit with the current direction. When it comes to end, let it end.

As for railroading, just try and give people choices, or do as I do and keep allowing for write-ins. Honestly, the goal to avoiding railroading is to make people WANT to do what you want them to do, not to just MAKE them do it, if that makes sense.
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>>45811229
that's fair.
I just need to flesh out characters more, like the enemy team and the kingdom.
Probably this weekend.

Player enjoyment and input is important. Recruiting party members, usually by offering them Deals of Power in exchange for service, seems like a good place to interest players.

It's exciting and worrying to think about running it. I might aim for Friday nights, like you do.

Your feedback has been super helpful. Really, I just needed the kick in the ass to stir me to action.
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>>45811289
THEN [SPOILER]BELIEVE IN THE ME THAT BELIEVES IN YOU![/SPOILER]

But yeah. Easy ways to make characters endearing is establishing either an inherent usefulness to keeping them around, their competence in a certain field, or positive emotions from them (such as being funny, being determined, or just kindly/well mannered.)

If I made Makoto unapologetic and simply someone who tried to trick Yukari into losing her Union position, she wouldn't have the longevity factor she has now.
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>>45811349
Very true. I take this quest, Hellborn Quest, and Evil Precure Quest as inspiration for how to build engaging characters. Some will fall flat, probably, but if anon's latch onto even one, then I can build from that.
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>>45811392
Shit, dude. It's weird to be the figure that people like so much, or at least, the figure that makes figures people like so much.

its kind of a dream of mine to make a character that people call waifu material
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>>45811421
Every QM's true dream.
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>>45811446
The guy doing all the Sibella/Phanty/etc. Quests DID say, and I quote, 'Hurricane a best'...

>i very ironically got 'kicked out' of a group while using hurricane as my PC.
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>>45811466
Hurricane a cute, but clearly Knightmare a best.
Gotta go for them brooding, rival ojous, give 'em all the hugs they need.
>dat spoiler
and now she is being waifu'd by faceless people on the internets.
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>>45811497
Honestly, it can hardly be called 'kicked out' since it was due to out of game drama that the DM has backed me up on as being unreasonable. Jokes on them--the group's dissolving and reforming with more trustworthy people.

The Howling Winds blow through the streets, defending all those whom evil would pervert.

Also, food for thought--Vanquish has TWO pseudo-stalkers following her around now.
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>two stalkers
Woohoo! Waifu warsbegin! Who will waifu Vanquish the best!?

GM's siding with you are usually a sign that you're in the right. Thought I wouldn't know, my group is all close friends so most stuff we just talk out on the side. I've never had a group break down because, aside from group quests like this, they're the only group I've known.
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>>45811565
To kind of quote Jhin from League of Legends...

"I swear each waifu will be the last...but I lie every time."
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>>45811584
Truer words were never spoken.
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>>45811584
Would they end up waifu'ing each other?
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>>45811621
Pshaw. They have too much bizarre obsession with Vanquish to consider the other.

fight fight fight kiss kiss kiss
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>>45811643
>Vanquish smooshed between them, trying to keep the peace but also sort-of stoking the aggression because watching waifu's fight over who gets you is kinda hot

Everyone wants to be wanted.
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>>45811672
>Vanquish being LITERALLY smooshed between their gazongas

just right
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>>45811702
Does it have the chance of becoming this bizarre set up where Vanquish somehow gets both but has to keep them on a tight leash or they'll kill each other?
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>>45811716
I'll never rule out a harem, but I'm a huge softie who couldn't stand not writing a totally loving, healthy relationship, no matter how many people are in it.

I've been through one too many a shitty relationship to put my fictional characters through it ;-;
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>>45811736
Hey, I've got no problems with that
I'm the same way, except, I'd do it more so for the reason that a lot of harem shows don't go through with the harem at all.
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>>45811788
>all these people wanting normal relationships for their characters
>all I want to do is hurt my characters more and more
>my latest is in a belligerent, hate-sex fueled "relationship" with a prostitute

you guys are weirdos...
who wants a functional, healthy, mutually supportive partnership?
r-right?
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>>45811830
Maybe cause I've got the sweetest girlfriend in the world, but I just can't do it, mang.

My girl made me a softie, I admit it.

I-I wanna marry her...
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>>45811848
>that spoiler
that's fuckin cute, MQM.
I ship it.
MQM x GMQM a best
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>>45811848
Best of luck to you if you ever go through with it.
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>>45811830
If it counts for anything I made one character up who was experimented on to the point where she has really bad PTSD, had temporary bout of insanity and to top it all off, she can never speak again
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>>45811934
it does
I love it when my good characters get bad ends
My last good one got turned into the campaign's final boss via dragon-ification.
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>>45811893

I can do emotional pain (planning on putting Makoto through the ringer alright), but relationship related...yech.

That said, bad ends are planned and coming.

For some characters you already have met.
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>>45811980
>excited
awesome
right, it's 4AM and my body is screaming at me to PASS OUT
so, thanks MQM for the confidence-boost to my quest plans and thanks other anons for continuing to support this awesome quest.
night
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>>45811975
Well to be fair, that's her bad beginning. She gets better, but not before she gets put through the ringer even more. One of which has her being chased out of a small German village for showcasing her abilities
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>>45812085
Personally, when I put characters through hardship, I try to walk the line really well about how they react. Too much response to an event is a real possibility, and it can turn the audience off from a character, which isn't a good thing.
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>>45812114
I get what you're saying. in the particular case I mentioned, it's more a case of 'Trauma Conga' or whatever that trope was.



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