>The breath of the one

Let see how it end up.

>>44391623
>The heart of the sun

Sun gods are always super powered.

>>44391623
>The breath of the one

>>44391623
The heart of the sun

>>44391774
>>44391813
>>44391799
>>44391860
The sun or the breath of the one, one more vote!

>>44391894
The Sun

Waves of the sea

>>44391894
Sun every time

>>44391933
In the cold void that surrounds this world, the one placed a big flaming orb of power. The orb radiated heath and light which... You know what the sun is right?
Well, in the heart of the sun, a god was formed.

[Character creation 2/3]
You were granted the power over one aspect of this world to start with
This is power is:
>the domain of flames
>the domain of light
>the domain of war
>the domain of music?
>the domain of... vision?
>some other domain (write in!)

>>44391992
>>the domain of flames

>>44391992
>the domain of light

>>44391992
Clearly we need to go with War

>>44391992
>>the domain of light

>>44391992
Some more possibilities
>the domain of judgement
>the domain of inner passion
>the domain of blazin' it every day

>>44391992
>the domain of light

Light powers are overpowered.

>>44392000
Second

>>44391992
>The domain of light

Full sun god. We'll be a rival to even Amun Ra!

>>44391992
>the domain of light
Praise it

>>44392015
>>44392020
>>44392039
>>44392081
This god was light, the light that blinds, the light that shows, the light that is concealed...

[Character creation 3/3]
And from the light, this god chose a form and a name.
What are they? Upload an image and pick a name!

Don’t post images of fetish stuff, /pol/ stuff or reference to other settings. Otherwise, go nuts

>not domain of fitness
A light is fine too

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We shall be called Jeffery

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>>44392121
Atet-Ri, God of the Sun

>>44392121
Sunny.

Take your time to pick out your form, most votes wins!
I could shop some together if necessary

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>>44392232
I like Atet-Ri, but this pic is better

>>44392179
This one is pretty cool.

>>44392261
This one

>>44392179
I like this pic but I hate smug bastard looking Angels. Voting for it anyways.

>>44392261
This guy

>>44392179
This

>>44392179
Im gonna have to go with this one

>>44392261
Perfect

>>44392261
Looks better to me

>>44392179
This ones humanoid so at least we can interact with whatever creatures rule the world.

>>44392179
>>44392266
>>44392328
>>44392349
>>44392383
>>44392490

His name was Atet-Ri, and he ruled over light! His light was divine, he had a mind for creation, he had the body of a god… Yes, he was a god, but I mean he was in shape. Hunky looking.

Listen to my tale friends, I’m the great oracle who knows the true history of Atet-Ri!
He created many things in this world! Many wondrous things indeed!
Like, euh… Your shoes? We’ll get back to that…

When Atet-Ri was born from the heart of the sun, he began to fall. A great fall towards the earth.
And he fell all the way…
>To the barren earth
>into the calm sea
>in the lap of the one
>Not very deep, he kinda floated around
>other

>>44392505
>>To the barren earth

>>44392505
>To the barren earth

>>44392505
>to the barren earth

>>44392505
>To the barren earth.
God of deserts incoming.

>>44392611
I was thinking dwarves or mountains or something like that.

>>44392626
Okay, that makes sense, too. Sight in the dark and such, I guess?

>>44392505
>in the lap of the one

>>44392675
I'm thinking of something different. Like, the light of the sun grew so bright on the first day of creation that the entire surface melted and began to storm as a raving ocean. Once another God came along to cool the storm what the waves were are now the mountains and the gulfs the valleys and such. Seem good?

>>44392528
>>44392533
>>44392563
And he fell to the barren earth!
He raised his head and saw the land created by the one: a dry waste, surrounded by mountains... Featureless, desolate... Because not many guys had created stuff already of course!
Yet the earth was full of magical potential, the kind of potential that is fit for creation.

And Atet-Ri looked at it with his smug, enlightened face and...
>Wandered around for days, looking for whatever he could find
>Wondered what lied beneath the earth, and started digging
>Fashioned a comb for his sexy hair
>Other
or
>He created a throne for himself
>He a small orb of light
>He created something...
(Whenever you create something, you do it by adding one 'feature' per turn. You could start by forming something or giving something life, and then later on give it powers, insights... Got it?
Oh, and I will often ask for images from you guys, because images are fun)

>>44392743
Ps: I'm casual with the rules btw, so don't stress about them

>>44392743
>He created a throne for himself.
Can we make one from mountains? If so, I would like to.

>>44392743
>>Wondered what lied beneath the earth, and started digging
And
>Created a orb of light so the could see, but someone ten thousand ears from now will misinterpret it in so many different ways it doesn't matter.

>>44392743
Now, while combing our sexy hair is of great importance, we shall wait a little while, and...

>Make a small orb of light

Gotta work on those sun powers early.

>>44392743
>He created a throne for himself
Golden throne?

>>44392782
I like this

>>44392743
>>Wondered what lied beneath the earth, and started digging

>>44392782
Wait. That's why the planet's core is so hot. Because the God of light took a piece of the sun's power and instilled it into the core of the planet for some reason.

>>44392823
>pushing for dorfs this hard
Please no

>>44392833
This. This one I like.

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>>44392778
Look at his face and ask yourself again: "can this magnificent being create something out of mere stone?"

>>44392855
He looks like he's about to do something, and it ain't making a throne out of mountains.

>>44392855
Right. He should. After all, he looks like he was made from lots of little mosaic stones himself.

>>44392893
Well first he needs to make the mountains.

>>44392855
He took that which all other gods saw as worthless, he he raised it to splendor. Mountains

>>44392926 (You)
>and he raised it to splendor

>>44392782
>>44392790
>>44392805
>>44392823
>>44392833
>>44392850
Atet-Ri felt the soil beneath his feet. He felt the magic within.
And then he raised his hands, his powerful, godly hands, his muscular, manly ha- Erm, he raised his hands and struck the ground with them, digging a large hole.
It was a magnificent hole indeed, quite big!
As he kept digging, the light that came from the sun was merely a spot in the distance above him.
So he called out to the light, the light that was himself, and used this call to form an orb. How can a call be a ball you ask? Trust me, it made sense at the time.
The orb was small still, it could fit in his both hands. His warm, muscular-

And then
>he dug some more, creating great halls
>he got back to the surface
>did something with mountains because some of you want that
>rested
>did other stuff

>>44393006
>>he dug some more, creating great halls

>>44393006
>>he dug some more, creating great halls

>>44393006
>>did something with mountains because some of you want that
He remembered the flat earth and sought to give it shape. So he punched the earth from below.

>>44393006
>>44393054
This. Let us punch the earth with our manly, beautiful hands.

>>44393054
We are manly. Really manly. So let us accomplish manly feats. Like punching the world and actually making an impact.

>>44393006
>he dug some more, creating great halls

The halls collapse around him, imprisoning him beneath the surface. Enraged that the earth did not do as he willed, he tried to fight his way out. He was a god, but being beyond the warmth of his birthplace -the sun- he was too weak to fully bend the earth to his will. His battle with the planet left it's scars on the planets surface (mountains) and they say that every time the earth shakes it is Atet-Ri making another feeble attempt to escape.

>>44393100
>so manly we wear a dress and have long blond hair

>>44393129
>so manly he can wear shoes with star marks on them with a confident, smug smile.

>>44393066

This, then he accidentally left the orb behind, leaving it to grow and become the molten core of the planet.

But it became an angry lava god whose struggles to reach the surface to see its 'dad' are what causes volcanoes and earthquakes.

>>44393153
This

>>44393054
>>44393066
>>44393100
The great Atet-Ri wondered what he should do with his orb of light.
Yet he couldn’t think of anything, so he kinda left it lying around.
Like a traveller who tries to make sense of a new land, Ri tried to make sense of this world.
The barrenness of this land… The feeling of emptiness… Was this the world he would wander for an eternity?
A godly rage came over him. From beneath the soil he threw his fists against the roots of the earth! They shifted, shattered under the might of his fists! On the surface, large chunks of earth erupted and flew from the ground!

“Who’s there?”
After a time period that is hard to describe to us mortals, Atet-Ri’s godly anger finally ended. It was replaced by uncertainty, curiosity and fear.

“Who’s there?” The voice echoed again from within the dark ground.
“Well, whoever is there, could you keep it down?”

It was a god that was lying inside the cold earth. The god of sleep….

[3 things to do:]
>Post an image to determine the god of sleeps’ form
>Post his name
>How does Atet-Ri respond?


>>44393153
cool idea, but you're running a bit ahead

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>>44393343
Tenen-Ru, the winged stone head.

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>>44393343

>>44393443
I don't know about you guys, but I think Tenen-Ru is a perfect name.
Vote on the images y'all.

>>44393343
We react by being polite. While we are a beautiful man with anger issues and possible agoraphobia, we are polite.

>"I apologize for disturbing you. I flew into a rage, and did not mean to act like that."

Guys, what kind of personality is Atet-Ri going to have? Besides being smug person with anger problems.

>>44393343
>Awaken, lord of slumber! I henceforth claim this as my realm. Remove thineself at once, for there is much land left for me to claim.
With the sun comes morning, striking away sleep and awaking all life. Also, I feel as if it would be befitting that the god of the sun be prideful.

>>44393443
The god is just a head with wings. It's perfect. Terrifying horrible goblin is close second.

>>44393526
Prideful, and regal. We shall position ourselves as the sun is, higher than any other.

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This image strikes me as interesting...
has the stone head look too.

>>44393526
I assume he'll be DIO just as a god not a vampire
>>44393559i like the whole stone head thing leaning more towards >>44393443

I'm set on the looks and name. What does Atet-Ri say?
>>44393523
or
>>44393531
or something else?

>>44393602
Fucking Jojos everywhere...

>>44393443
Voting for winghead. Sleepyhead.

>>44393625
Choose the dick move, Dio surrenders nothing!

>>44393625
I'm for being a proud and assholish sun god, though presumably doting on our (intentional)creations.

>>44393625
>>44393523
I'm fine with being a asshole with anger problems, but not a rude one

>Awaken, lord of slumber!
>Fucking Jojos everywhere...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XUhVCoTsBaM

>>44393625
Well, I still stick to what I suggested. We /proud/ now.

>>44393625
prideful prick mode

>>44393625
Proud but not rude.

>>44393443
Atet-Ri gently removed some earth and uncovered the face of the sleeping god, Tenen-Ru.
Even though this god was quite handsome, a face was all he was, made from a cold stone. Two stone wings sprouted from the sides, as cold and lifeless as the rest of his form.
“Awaken, slumbering one!” Atet-Ri said with a booming voice.
“Again, will you leave me be? Who are you anyway?” Tenen-Ru responded.
“I am Ater-Ri, the son of sun! I am the light that pierces everything, and I’ve pierced this earth! This domain is rightfully mine now!”

“You can have your domain,” Ru responded, “just let me sleep. I don’t want to be in this plane.”
“No, you must leave! This is mine and mine alone!”
…
Tenen-ru’s stone eyes opened slightly.
“Listen here, mister piercing light: I do not wish to be here, yet I will be if you keep me here. I warn you, I’ve seen some of the strongest and the bravest enter ‘my’ world. Even the one once entered it. Even you will tire one day. And then, I will make you wish you never disturbed me!”

What do you do?
>Unleash our godly powers upon Tenen-ru
>Ask him about ‘his’ world
>Let him sleep
>Do some other shit
>Make more stuff?

>>44393849
While a creation myth about how light awakens you from sleep would be great, let us not attack a god who may be more powerful than us.

>Ask him about 'his' world.

>>44393602
>>44393631
>>44393693
Your references don't make it easier for me to understand you

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5bfseWNmlds

>>44393849
>Do some other shit
Monologue like the self-important bastard you are!
You're a young god with fire in your heart, dammit!

>>44393849
>>Ask him about ‘his’ world

>>44393849
He DARE deny us? Then let us do battle. Will this explain the Day/Night cycle, perhaps? As Atet-Ri and Tenen-Ru battle, that by which spawned them shall do battle as well. And then the other gods worked together to force us to split the day between us.

>>44393849
>Ask him about ‘his’ world
followed by making our own world

>>44393887
Not bad, OP.
Who's gonna tell op about JJBA, though...I mean our reference image IS Dio.

>>44393996
Consider it told, I'll google him some day.

>>44393849
>Do some other shit
fuck him

>>44393996
Well OP, JJBA stands for JoJo's Bizarre Adventure, or GioGio's Bizarre adventure in one case. It follows members of the Joestar family, who do battle with various evils throughout history.

They first fight with the mysterious martial art Hamon to fight vampires and Aztec gods of Fitness by channeling the power of the sun through breathing. In the later parts Stands, representation's of a person's soul, are used. These spirits have amazing powers, like super speed, pyrokinesis and time space regression.

It's pretty long, pretty old and it has a kickass anime.

“Tell me, stone one, what is this world of yours?”

“Pff, why should I tell you?” Tenen-Ru responded, “Why should I spend another moment in this blasted realm? Let me go back you.”

“I wish to know. I demand to know! What is this place that my light hasn’t reached yet? If it is yours, can I make one like it? Or… Is this my world, gifted by the one? Am I just a stone head in yours?” Atet-Ri became curiously agitated, almost filled with rage again.

Come to think of it, it was a strange sight, a golden-haired hunky god talking to a stone head in hole in the ground. But yes, that’s the tale of the dawn of our world! I hope you can still make sense of the names.

Tenen-Ru beckoned Ri: “Listen to me again. I do not wish to talk to you about anything. Every word that is spend here, is a burden on my soul. But if you are curious… I could take you with me, right now. All you have to do is look into my eyes, and you’ll be with me in my realm.
But know, if you do, you’ll be left to generosity.
Hehe.
Yes, you’d have to behave, because it’s my realm! Hahaha!
Now,how about it?”

>Follow Tenen-Ru into his realm
>Go into the offensive
>decline, leave him
>do other stuff
>creatin’ to do

>>44394201
Politely decline his offer and leave. Take our orb of light and go do something with it.

>>44394201
>>Follow Tenen-Ru into his realm

Take his offer because we are confidence as f**k

>>44394201
>>decline, leave him

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jp5y5a4Qcto

>>44394231
Agreed, sleepyhead's creepy. We do not allow ourselves to be put under another, clearly lesser god's control!

>>44394201
>Follow Tenen-Ru into his realm
>Be sickened by the void that is mere sleep
>Create dreams

“I will not accept your offer, I do not wish to be put under your spell. But if I ever change my mind, I’ll know where to find you.”

“Eh, yeah, no.” Tenen-Ru replied, “don’t ever bother me again.”

“I will make no such promises, sleepyhead, my will is mine alone.”
And with those words, Atet-Ri was off. He took the orb and left the stone face.

So, now he was on his own again, just the god of light and his orb.
>go explore some more
>go create something
>you guys can come up with things to do right? Write-in!

>>44394447
>go create something
Make a palace of shining gold suited to your extravagant nature. Show everyone how cool you are!

>>44394447
Nah, you guys know what? There have to be creatures in this realm. Ptah had his humans, Manwe its elves. Us? We, as the greatest of all gods, we shall have our own people. Our own followers. We shall take the orb, and fashion a race from our own pure golden light. They shall be the elves of this world. They shall take after our masculinity and beauty (but nowhere near as good as us), they shall revere our light, they shall be strong, fast, smart and charismatic. They shall be what people want to be and make porn of if this was a table top rpg.

They shall be our first of many masterpieces. They shall be called the Alwé, and they will be our people. Come brethren, let us make this together.

>>44394447
>>go explore some more
What have our little violent renovations done and did we accidentally kill someone?

>>44394500
>>44394565
Golden throne or golden people? YOU DECIDE! (or at least the people voting)

Also, If you want to create something, you are very welcome to include an image

>>44394565
You know what? You're completely right. Palace idea revoked, let's make cool worshippers in our likeness.

>>44394614
Let's make the Alwé. That'll be cool.
Anyone have any idea what they should look like (apart from blonde and elf-y)?

>>44394649
I'm not sure if I want them blond, I'd rather they have hair as if touched by the flames.

>>44394649
I want them to have ashen hair. Be humans except white is the dominant hair color instead of brown/black.

>>44394673
Actually, make that three variants. Golden, like the light we bring. Red, like the flames with we will grant them. Ash, to remind them that unlike us their light will one day flicker and die out

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>>44394649
Glowing eyes, as if the sun was behind them?

>>44394714
>>44394724
Glowing eyes, and gold, red and white hair. Yes please.

>>44394565
>>44394627
>>44394649
[Race-creation mode]
which was always a part of the game mechanic and I didn't just make up or anything
Creating complex life is something that takes time, but it has to start somewhere.
We have a name: the Alwé
You guys are of course working on a form, this can be an image or a description.

But next you have to fill out the following characteristics with kinda abstract concepts:

>Primary drive: (to populate the world/ to worship nature/ to guard the whatever...)
>Primary gift: (foresight, free thinking, shapeshifting...)
>Primary boundary: (mortality, greed, immobile)

You can ask me for clarification.
I'm just trying something out here

>Drive: To bring light to darkness.
>Gift: Free Thinking.
>Boundary: Mortality.

Any other thoughts? Not too sure on the "gift" myself, if there was something more fitting I would go for that.

>>44394860
Primary Drive: To keep the light of the world intact. Whether this is through ridding the world of evil, enlightening others through knowledge, or having some crazy extremist cults think this means burn everything, they try to keep light in a metaphorical sense.

Primary gift: Innate divine blessing. They are all our clerics by nature. They have minor healing, smite evil, basic levels of intelligence from birth (higher than normal), and photokinesis, and very rarely pyrokinesis.

Primary Boundary: The same light they strive to bring is their greatest downfall. They are the bringers of light, good and caring for their god and others... Often to a level of fault. They are good, occasionally too good for what can be a good world.

>>44394860
>To populate
>Free thinking
>Mortality

I'm not sure how to fit this in the form... but I'm imagining them building massive shining cities on the mountain-tops as a way of being closer to our light.

>>44394965
I like this one, just because I like the idea of everyone being a cleric.

>>44394965
That boundary?
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/LightIsNotGood
>Boundary: They are just as proud and vain as us, often believing themselves higher than other beings and enforcing their/our view of right and wrong whether it is wanted or not.

>>44394965
but with the boundary from >>44395065

I think I've got the consensus, but let's just check to be sure:
>>44394920
Drive: to bring light
>>44394965
Primary gift: divine blessing
>>44395065
Boundary: proud and vain

>>44394967
Aren't you just describing humans?
>>44394991
with time my friend

>>44394860
>>Primary drive: To spread our light and secretly to show that they are the greatest of "The Chosen"
>>Primary gift: Ambition, Hope and forward thinking
>>Primary boundary: Mortality, Superiority complex, vanity

>>44395135
sounds good to me

>>44395135
Yeah, this is good.

Damn it captcha, burgers are burgers, not sandwiches.

>>44395155
This sounds best to me.

>>44395180
Does captcha even know what burgers are? I've seen them as sandwiches and as steaks.

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So, are we looking at something like pic related in terms of look? Also, how large should we make them?

>>44395277
Hell yeah, approved. Make 'em midgets because why not.

>>44395277
as the supreme creations made by the supreme god they should tower over everything else

>>44395277
Little taller than a human average... So what? Uhh... 5'11-6' average?

>>44395277
Looks nice, though I was picturing the glow to be a liiittle subtler. And I'm thinking relatively tall.

“Enough!” Atet-ri exclaimed, “I will bare this barren plane no more! Nor shall I submit to the likes of mister sleepyhead to get rid of the loneliness!
On this day that is mine, I shall create life, not unlike me! Life born from light!”

And then he did some light magic, for the light that was him and the him that was the magic through the word that was his own and that was the way he created life! That’s how all life was created back then! No really, trust me I’m an oracle, that’s how it happened.

And thus, he created the Alwé!
They were strong and masculine, with arms, legs and heads not unlike their maker. Their skin was made from golden light, their hair was long and flowing in shades of gold, red and white. Through their eyes and mouths, one could see their core: the light from which they were made.

The Alwé were light themselves, like their maker, only contained within a body.
They wished to spread the light, it was the only thing on their mind at first. If there would ever be darkness, they would fight it.
And they had the power to fight it! Because they were almost one with their maker, and their maker watched over them, granting them the powers of light!

All seemed well, a bright future for a bright race and their bright god. Alas, neither of them knew how narrow their ways were, how little they knew of the other things that were to come to this earth. They only saw themselves as divine…

Atet-Ri looked at the Alwé with his smug face and was content, and they looked back with the same smug faces.
Then Atet-Ri:
>Commanded the Alwé to do something
>Went away
>Took the Alwé to some place
>did something with his ball
>made some other stuff
>had a chat with the Alwé or something
>are suggestions even needed? Write-in!

>>44395338
Have a chat with the Alwé. Let them know that they come from us and are to act to keep the light, but to keep in mind that they are not perfect, they are not us.

>>44395338
I think it's time to build our golden throne in the mountains.

>>44395369
seconded make them build monuments to our glory

>>44395338
>He lead them to the location on the planet where the sun shone the brightest and longest.

>>44395277
Love the pic.
3 votes for midgets, 3 votes for tall guys.
You can always elaborate on the Alwé a bit more.

Btw, a few more posts before I go to bed probably, but tomorrow there will probably be a second episode. Probably. And then I will make a summary of the world, the Alwé, the story...
Also I'm wondering: have you guys noticed English isn't my native language?

>>44395369
>>44395384
Why not both? Let them know we made them and get them to build proper places of worship and a nice big fancy palace for us.

>>44395407
>>44395378
why build our own golden throne

>44395395
I haven't notice at all

>>44395378
>>44395384
How about we make THEM build us our golden throne?

>>44395395
I did not in fact notice, you write spectacularly.

>>44395395
Please continue this. This is the most fun I've had in a quest in ages. I got to name two gods, choose both their pictures, and name a race. It was amazing.

And no, I didn't notice at all. Your English has been perfect throughout.

>>44395395
Fire midgets, man.

>>44395395
Remember to archive it.

>>44395395
Just make them slightly taller than humans.

>>44395395
Alwé pic guy here. I asked mostly because I didn't have a strong opinion on it. They could be anything from hobbit sized fae to regular fantasy elves (a bit taller than humans). I had not, in fact, noticed. Good work, I quite enjoyed this. I look forward to continuing this someday.

>>44395432
>>44395442
What about mixed heights? They can average from a foot high to larger-than-human

>>44395519
Yes please. With the taller ones being "Closer to the light". Creating internal societal rankings through bodily dimorphism.

>>44395519

>A race with Shortstacks AND amazons.

This pleases me.

>>44395519
I was about to suggest that myself.
>>44395532
This too. A really shitty caste system for our actually-kinda-shitty-people elves.

>>44395519
Great compromise, works for me.
Must be weird when a shorty wants to get with an Amazon though.

>>44395519
Hmm, how about this:
Their height is like that of a flower.
In the absence of light their bodies will reach out to the skies in hopes of getting closer to the father they've been separated from while the shorter once a confident in their bond to us and stay relatively short.

>>44395555
>shorter ones are more confident in their bond to their god and father, Atet-Ri

>>44395519
>>44395532
>>44395537
Make them long lasting, but with an EXTREMELY slow growth. They reach human size after a century or more, and they keep growing taller and taller, after millenias, the patriarch of their race is the size of a Titan and he's about to equal his god.
They also grow arrogant the more time passes.

>>44395575
Oh my lord, I want to play in this setting. I love it already.

>>44395575
You. I like you.

>>44395575
This could lead to interesting challenges, I like this idea. Kinda like the downfall of the actual Titans of old...

>>44395575
this is great

So there are three options
1. Make them live extremely long lives, start short and grow taller over a long time
2. Make them grow taller and make their light fainter if they grow up in darker regions and short and bright if they grow up in brighter regions
3 just random genetics

We probably want to vote to make clear which one we want.

personally I vote for 2.

>>44395575
>They also grow arrogant the more time passes.
I like this
>and he's about to equal his god.
...is what he believes

>>44395645
Vote 1 for epic godfather/son titan clashes.

>>44395645
I'm liking 1.
>>44395646
He's not entirely wrong.
On the arrogance front.

>>44395645
I vote 1.

>>44395645
By the light, our father, I don't know what too pick.
I, of course, like my own idea (2) and yet i love the potential crisis that could arise from 1.

>>44395645
1

>>44395645
option 1 for future arrogance fuelled clashes over who is the true god of lightus

Atet-Ri stood before his creations for the first time, amidst the mountains, next to the really big hole. The Alwé knew who Atet-Ri was, they knew the light and they knew their purpose, yet they did not know this world. They could not yet make sense of it, but then again, Atet-Ri couldn’t really either.

“Father. We wish to spread the light! Show us, where must we go?” a large Alwé asked.

“First, you must build me a golden palace, a monument. A throne from which I will watch over this world! Build it from the mountains that I have created with my strength!”

The Alwé looked confused at their maker. “…A throne… For you? Why should we do that? Aren’t we just like you? Aren’t we light, just like you?”

“You are, but you are not” Atet-Ri responded, “You are light, like me. The light which must cover all. But you are not my equals. I have created you, you get your powers from me. You will be above all that is on this earth, but I am above you.”

The Alwé talked among themselves. Some were still confused, others understood that they were lesser to their father. “But…” One smaller Alwé asked, “If you are above us, who is above you?”

“None is, I made what you see here, I made the mountains from the soil.”
“Then who made the soil?” The Alwé asked.
“… The one did…” Atet-Ri responded, slightly agitated, “He was here before me, made what came before me.”
“So isn’t he greater? Where is he now?”

“I do not know” Atet-Ri concluded.

So the Alwé went to the mountains and started fashioning palace out of the mountains. It took them long, for they had no experience with building stuff. Have you ever built a palace/throne/thing for a god? I can tell you, it’s tiring work!
Atet-Ri will:
>Aid his subjects
>Explore
>create more stuff
>what about this orb?
>what about the one?
>what about mister sleepyhead?
>what does it all mean?

A pic of the monument/throne/palace to Atet-Ri is also welcome!

>>44395645
I'm going for 1.

>>44395645
It seems option 1 is far more popular. I guess we will have some big Alwé in the future.

>>44395778
Just put the orb in the core of the world to bleed energy into the land and then go and explore while our people make monuments and civilizations in our name. Then go and explore, see what other gods and creations we can find.

>>44395778
We aid our subjects, and demonstrate that the ball of light is their origin. We gift it to them to grant them knowledge of light, of fire, of how to cook and how to light their darkness. But most importantly of all, we need to aid them. We cannot be cruel, nor can we have them hate us. They need to love us. They need to love our light and all we stand for. They need to grow peacefully and perfectly.

We also need to do something about how harsh the land is. We need to give them a fertile place to grow in, maybe the ball can help with that.

We also need to move away from where sleepy is. He'll just be a bother otherwise.

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>>44395778
Complain when the palace doesn't look like pic related
then most likely leave to find some better builders, forgetting about the failures of the Alwé

>>44395852
Agreed on all fronts except moving away, sleepyhead can stay in his hole for all we care.

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>>44395778
The sphinx, the back of the head is carved out in the shape of the throne, the face is a depiction of Atet-Ri.
No matter where you stand, you're under Atet-Ri's gaze.
He also has a chimera/sphinx form. plz ?

>>44395871
he can't hope to challenge our power anyway

>>44395889
All the Egyptian gods had an animalistic form, so yeah. Give us a winged Sphinx form since all the names are derived from how Egpytian God names sound, with ours being derived directly from Amun-Ra.

>>44395852
Cut open one of our wrists and let our blood enrich the land. I think that sounds properly god like. I don't agree with being chummy with our subject though.

>>44395778
>what about mister sleepyhead?
I love how my stupid pun has stuck around.
That said, time to make shit. This land is pretty ugly right now, make it more beautiful. Make rivers of liquid light or something, I dunno.

>>44395925
>>44395933
combine these so we slit our wrists to create luminescent rivers from our blood

>>44395925
>>44395933

This. Cut our wrists and let our blood make rivers of light to bless the land.

Soooo...
Sfinx-throne?
Teaching our Alwé the kindness of our love or cut our wrists and let the light flow like rivers?

>>44395999
Sphinx and Rivers, no love for the rabble, love is for pussy gods. I bet the stonehead is dreaming of love, I should flood his cave with river of fire. Hey, let's do this !

>>44395999
love is for lesser beings, lets make the world shine with our divine blood

>>44395999
I think we can do both, but the Alwé loving us takes major priority. They carry our blessing and our light, we need them to love us.

>>44395999
Go to the highest mountain in the region and cut our wrist there to create the source of all rivers of lights, which in comparison to regular old rivers bless also bless the land and people who are in contact with it. Place the or there to replenish the river.

>>44395999
As Amen-Ri's namer, I vote we show love to them. As a god, we love only two things. Ourselves, and the people we created.

>>44395999
They will love us for the gift we bring them, the fertility of the land as given by our divine blood!

>>44396134
They say narcissists/sociopaths like their kids because they see themselves in them. Let's show our little creations some love, even if it's because of how much we love ourself!

The Alwé worked day and day (the saying doesn’t really apply without night) to build a great monument for their father. Just like they were shaped in his likeness, they shaped the monument with the face of a young sun-god. The stone creature rested on its arms and legs. There was a seat for Atet-Ri so he could face the opposite way of the statue.

It was a strange feeling for Atet-Ri, he had made them, yet they had made something that he did not picture this way. Were the Alwé wrong? Did they make a lacking statue?
He could not make sense of these feelings, so he remained silent.
Hey, don’t these old lessons usually have a lesson in them? Yes, listen to your Oracle friends, and let this be the lesson for today: If you don’t understand something, just keep your mouth shut for Atet-Ri’s sake!

“Alwé,” Atet-Ri exclaimed, “whiteness my gift to you!”
And with those words he climbed onto the highest mountain. And when he reached the top, he cut open his wrist. It was a deep wound that would certainly leave a mark, even on godly flesh. But from it, liquid light began to pour.
The light streamed down the mountain, branched out and spilled into the valley. The Alwé were so grateful, they bathed in it, drank it, felt their life-power grow just by being in its presence.

Atet-Ri climbed down, followed the river he had made all the way to his throne and climbed on top.
He looked at the Alwé, at the land he had claimed, at the river he had made and the sun above him.

A smug smile formed on his face, as the river streamed down the hole.


And with that my friends, I will go to Tenen-Ru’s realm. Thank you all so much for playing, you were truly great. I can’t make any promises but I will try to get the second episode running tomorrow.
May Atet-Ri shine upon you!

>>44396273
Thanks OP, it was fun! Rest well.

>>44396273
This was the most fun I've had in ages, please try to run a quest again. Also, can someone archive this? This is premium world building.

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/44391623/
Boom, night y'all