>>41283501
Let's see what happens. Since english also isn't my first language, i'm ok with you.

I'm guessing you're writing up the first post? In future, have it written up first, so people don't lose interest.

>>41283501
If you want, i can try and point out some errors to help you improve.
your system is unique though, let's see how it goes.

>>41283662
Sorry, last minute problems. I have it almost ready. 2 minutes

>>41283501
A little girl sits quietly in front of a fireplace. Her face is lit by a soft fire as she looks to the window. How are things going in the city? That is what crosses her mind as she gets up and approaches to peek outside.

She is at the top of a big black tower that is the best place to look to the city. Is HER city after all. The city of Deminferus, where live all the demons of the world that are not enough powerful to be in hell. A place of depravity, tortures, bad jokes and fire. Literally. The city was on fire at that moment and the screams echoed in the dark mountains surrounding the valley. The little girl was admiring that beautiful fire, she didn't care a lot about the people in the city, her job was to watch them, not to PROTECT them. And that fire wasn't her fault this time. As the smoke went close to the tower she closed all the windows. Burnt demon was not her favorite smell. And then someone knocked on the door... 10 floors below her. Usually she probably didn't open the door but she knew that someone was there and she knew who it was, so she quickly started to go down the spiral staircase in the center of the tower.

When she opened the door a big figure coated in a black and blue robe stared at her. Well, ''stared'' because the hood of the robe didn't show his face. The man moved his arms to make a dramatic effect as the smoke from the city started to cover all around them. And then he started talking with the voice of a thousand ages.

>>41283705
-'̩͔͙̠̠̓ͦͪͥ̚ͅ'͍̟̤̰̰̆͛ͥͩͅIͣ̔̽ͣ'̪̆m͓͈͎͙̥̦̟̈̈ ̲̯̜̘͒̐͛̔̍̋ͩt͇̫̮̓ͧh͇̠͚̙e̘̖͇̜̩̾ͤ ͊ͣͨ̋Ǵ̠͉̩̇ͤ̾̀o̯̪̜͓͉̐̊d̞̞̟͙̠͇̪ͨͫ ͆o̫̳̬̳̩̳ͨ̓̌f͕̮̤͉͕ ͍̭̹̱̩T̖͋͌͛ͩ̄ͫ̀i͇͒m̻̣̱̻͂̀̓̇͌ẻ̬͉̰͖̳͙ͭ!͔̬̭͇̜̬̒ͥ̈́̅ͭ A̻̺n͙͕ͪͧ̃ͧd̩̥̰͖͊͒ ̠͍̪̆ͣ́ͯ̿̂̔I̭̯̩̙̼͗̊́̀ͯ̿̂ ͙͙ͅc̗̪͓̳̣ͩ͌ͥ̈͛̄́a̬̓̀ͮm̖̰͊̀ͮ͛ȇ̬̬̊ͣ̉̂͆ͭ ̱͇̱ͣ͆͌͋̊̽̂h̫͎̣͋ͩ̏͂e͔͉͓̼̥̩̅̍ͅrëͮ̑́ ̜̬͚̗̙ͮ̐ť͕͓ͭ̐̌͒̑̆o͖̲͍̜̝͍͒̽̊ ̝̯̐̍ͤ̽͆ͯs̜̬̅͂̚ȅ͓͖̩͈̓̔̊̈́̌́e̱͇ͅ ͌̂̊̏̃̎y͉̮͙̥͍͇͆ô̹͉͇̽ͩ͊̍ú̪̤̘͌̐̓ͣ,́ͮ̃ ̟̋͂̈͂͋̎m͙̱̣͉̠̖̊ͨ͗͗̀̋ẙ̥̫̓̌ͣ͑ ̣̘͂̎ͨͪ̃͊ͭhṳ̾ͦm̱̩̦̝͖̀̏ͣ̓b̗ͤ̊̄̈l̻̲̭ͯ͗e͎͔̤̮̘̓ͅ ̻̦ͬs̗͌ͮ͆͂̈́e͗r͈͈̫̥ͨ͋̌̚va͈̭̲̭̎ͯͥ̇ͨͬ̆n̦̞̙̗̗ͅt͚͉̔ͧͫ̂ͬ,͙̮̺̳ͤ̍͒̅ͦ ̻͔̱̩̯ͮ̈́́̓͗̊̚t̬͕͆o̍͒̑ͭ̿-̺͉̉ͮ͂̈́ͣ̄̚'̗̞̊̓ͤ͒̈ͤ̚'̳̤̮̟͇͔̃ And then the God of Time started coughing a lot as the smoke covered his ''face''. ''Stupid smoke...''

''Hello Dad. Let's get inside to talk.'' As she said that the God of Time entered the tower a little bit disappointed as his big entrance was interrupted.

As they went to the top of the tower the God of Time walked awkwardly as his robe hinder him to climb the stairs properly. ''So... tell me, dad, how is that you finally had a MOMENT to talk to your daughter?''

''I'm the God of all time, the most powerful of gods. I'm a busy man... and I remember you different.'' The God looked at his daughter, he was bigger than a human and she was... well, a kid.
''You know, I like this form, it allows me to wear this cute clothes... And all was easier when I was a kid. But dad, you didn't tell me why you have FREE TIME now. TIME IS GOLD for the God of time. You can't spare a SECOND to talk to anybody.''

''Stop ''

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>>41283739
''What?'' The girl looked to her father whit amusement.

''The time puns, just stop. I know, you are a time mage and I'm the god of time, but that doesn't give us the right to just say puns every SECOND.''

''Dad, you are not really funny-... wait...''

''I have no TIME to be funny''


At the top of the tower the God of time was waiting for his daughter to change into more ''magicy'' clothes as he reached into his robe searching for a book. It was a big, red book with no title, just an infinite symbol.
''The book of time... okay, this is serious business.'' The girl walked off her room. She was now more mature. Her clothes were some blue mage robes with a big clock in her waist.

The God opened the book sitting in a big armchair. ''Come here... you are going to read a story...''

''So... the readers reading the quest are going to read how I read a giant book for at least 30 threads?''

The god of time sighed and looked at the girl in the eyes. ''What I told you about breaking the fourth wall, missy?''

''If you acknowledge the fourth wall you are breaking it too.''

The God of Time stared at the girl a second before giving her the book. ''I'm a God and I can do it if I want. Now SIT AND READ THE BOOK''

>>41283808
The girl quickly sat and start reading to not anger more the time god as she giggled a little but then she looked serious at the book. ''This... is the story of THAT man... but why I'm going to read it? I know what happened, I know almost everything. We can't change anything''

''Almost is not everything. You don't know the details. Read and then you will understand.'' The god had recovered all his seriousness.

And then the girl started to read the story.

The Story of...

>How is our MC called? Vote time.

>>41283676
Yes please, I need to know all my errors.

I invented that system because the 1 roll are just a 50/50 succes and the 3 rolls ares just... too easy.

>>41283842
Bob

>>41283866
Johnson

>>41283842
Johnson.

>>41283866
Bob Johnson might be ok.

>>41283842
Michael Johnson

Jack

>>41283842
Max

Ok, so Johnson. But...

>Jack Johnson
>Michael Johnson
>Max Johnson
> Bob Johnson
>Johnson

>>41284002
>Just Johnson.
Including the 'Just'.

>>41284002
John Johnson

>>41284002
Droped the trip, sorry

Jack Johnson

>>41284002
Bob Johnson

JJ

>>41284022
John "JJ" Johnson, son of John

>>41284002
Jack Johnson

>>41284002
Jack Johnson it is. ''JJ''

Writing

>>41284169
You are Jack Johnson. You were born in the outskirts of a big city called Aselo, the capital of the region. It was an era of pace even when demons and angels had their own cities in the world the wars had stopped. Elves, humans, dwarfs... all races united in the war between demons and angels are now living in harmony. You are now a little kid that spends all his time at home. Your mother taught you a lot of things and you dream of...

>Becoming a fighter at the colloseum like your brother and father. The fights are not as dangerous as your mother things and that job gives you all the fame, all the money and all the bitches. You don't know what bitches are but is what your father's friends say.

>Becoming a powerful mage. You know a little of magic but you never had a teacher, they are really rare in this region and your mother probably dont want you to start throwing fireballs at everything.

>Becoming and alchemist. You spend a lot of time helping your mother to craft medicines to sell in the market. She was a white witch or something back in the days before knowing your father and she is probably the best teacher around... but just for teach medicines, not the cool and dangerous stuff. That is only for grown ups.

>...Nothing. You have no dreams. You spend your free time in a lot of things but never focus in anything for now.

>>41284312
>>Becoming a powerful mage. You know a little of magic but you never had a teacher, they are really rare in this region and your mother probably dont want you to start throwing fireballs at everything.

Because Magic Johnson

>>41284312
>>Becoming and alchemist. You spend a lot of time helping your mother to craft medicines to sell in the market. She was a white witch or something back in the days before knowing your father and she is probably the best teacher around... but just for teach medicines, not the cool and dangerous stuff. That is only for grown ups.

>>41284312
>Becoming a fighter at the colloseum like your brother and father. The fights are not as dangerous as your mother things and that job gives you all the fame, all the money and all the bitches. You don't know what bitches are but is what your father's friends say.

>>41284312
>>...Nothing. You have no dreams. You spend your free time in a lot of things but never focus in anything for now.

>>41284312
Nothing. Though money and street cred a common thoughts on your mind.

>>41284312
>Becoming a powerful mage. You know a little of magic but you never had a teacher, they are really rare in this region and your mother probably dont want you to start throwing fireballs at everything.

>>41284380
>>Becoming and alchemist. You spend a lot of time helping your mother to craft medicines to sell in the market. She was a white witch or something back in the days before knowing your father and she is probably the best teacher around... but just for teach medicines, not the cool and dangerous stuff. That is only for grown ups.

>>41284312
>Becoming a powerful mage. You know a little of magic but you never had a teacher, they are really rare in this region and your mother probably dont want you to start throwing fireballs at everything.

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>>41284312
>>Becoming a powerful mage. You know a little of magic but you never had a teacher, they are really rare in this region and your mother probably dont want you to start throwing fireballs at everything.
Just imagine trying to cast something we don't even know.

>>41284312
Mage it is, writing. (Sorry for some delays, it's more difficult than I thought)

>>41284572
>>41284572
Since you were little you knew how to do some magic. A little of ligh and smoke. You can conjure some water and make some rocks move. Not too many people are gifted with magic talent but you are lucky.

It's morning. You are just 9 years old. Your room has two beds and one of them is still occupied, your brother's bed. He is 18 years old but is probably ten times lazier than you. Your mother doesn't like when you are late for breakfast and he is probably going to be late. Maybe you can awake him.

>Just try to wake him like a normal person should do.

>You have a mug of water near your bed...

>Scream ''The bandits are coming''.

>MAGIC

>>41284747
>Scream ''The bandits are coming''.

You have a mug of water near your bed...

>>41284747
MAGIC

>>41284788
Magic the mug! "Accidentally"

>>41284747
>Levitate water on him

>>41284747
>>You have a mug of water near your bed...

>>41284747
Untrained magic time

>>41284839
try to do that

>>41284747
Use magic on mug, use water on brother.

>Writing

I need rolls. 1d100 (Type in options ''dice+1d100'' If you don't know how to roll)

>>41284924

dice+1d100

Rolled 16 (1d100)

>>41284896

>>41284924

>>41284943
Sorry, i'm inexperienced with rolls

Rolled 71 (1d100)

>>41284924

Rolled 82 (1d100)

>>41284946

Rolled 2 (1d100)

>>41284924
crict 1 to blow a hole at our brothers side.

Rolled 16 (1d100)

>>41284924

Rolled 88 (1d100)

>>41284924

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>>41284978
Fuck, I was so close!

>>41284971
>>41284977
some solid support rolls

16 Main (Bad)
71 Support (Good)
82 Support (Very good)

Not bad, you saved the fail.

>>41285009
>First action roll in the quest a 1 = good start

>>41285067
Do you do critical?

>>41285103
Yes. 1 crit fail. 100 is crit succes. A 1 or a 100 in the first 5 rolls is automatically the main roll.

>>41285103
>If there is a crit/fail (1 or 100) in the first 5 rolls it becomes the main roll.

>>41285124
You go to wake him but in that moment you have an idea. You can use your magic to do it. You like to play with your powers a lot when nobody is watching (your mother). But how can you wake him? You are not going to throw him a fireball, the walls and the bed are made of wood and probably your mother is going to slap you hard if you burn the house... and your brother. You need water and the mug next to your bed is the perfect target for your levitation powers.

You need to focus hard to make it but the mug starts to fly slowly and just over your head but then you lose some focus. It's really difficult to do it and your head hurts, your body tells you to finish te magic quickly... and then the mug flies out of your control crashing to the wall next to your brothers bed showering him in water and mug bits. Well, he is awake now and is looking at the mess that you made.

He is a good brother and protects you from everything but probably you don't need to test your luck. He is looking at you and he seems a bit angry.

>RUN! To the safety of your mother down the stairs. He is not going to do anything to you in front of her, right?

>Just say ''Hi''. He does some pranks too, this is your revenge. Probably he understands that.

>write in

>>41285334
Hi and Run

>>41285334
>write in
Slowly walk outside your room and warn him you have freezing water stored away just in case he tries something (bluff)

>>41285334
Tell him about your magic, turn his angerto pride.

>>41285334
RUN
and scream "Accidental Revenge"!!

>>41285334
>>Just say ''Hi''. He does some pranks too, this is your revenge. Probably he understands that.

>>41285422
I dont think it was too ''accidental''

>>41285334
angry with him for having slept

>>41285495
Sorry, I forgot we didn't overdid it. That to confused me.

Scream "VENGEANCE"

I forgot to say: Writing

>>41285663
Okay, come on Jack, think fast. You need something...

''I-I have water. Veeery cold water so don't come near me.'' You walk slowly to the door that is open. You don't break visual contact, he is like a tiger, if you do it he is going to jump on you. But you can't go down the stairs walking backwards.

''I used my magic and you know... sometimes it just goes crazy and... IT WAS MY VENGANCE.'' You start to run and go down the stairs as you hear your brother nearly grabbing you. He was really fast. You are now in the mid of the stairs and you feel his hand in your shirt but then the two of you hear your mother. ''KIDS! STOP PLAYING AND COME HERE TO EAT YOUR BREAKFAST''

Without words you and your brother pact temporary peace to not face a common enemy, your mother's wrath. Your brother sighs. ''You know, it isn't fair. You can't attack a man in his sleep. That is not vengeance. You need a lesson. You are coming with me to train after breakfast... we will train aaaall day.''

Is not the first time that you go with your brother to train. He likes to give you a wooden sword, 0 indications and make you fight him. He is a good teacher without words but sometimes you want to know how to defend yourself from his attacks. This is just HIS vengance.

Breakfast is quiet. Your father isn't home, probably is already at the colosseum. The tournament is in a couple of weeks and he needs to train a lot if he wants to keep the champion title of the city. Your brother has his own toughts about the tournament.

>>41286242
''Like I said, this year is MY year. I'm going to beat father. That's why I'm training alone. I want to surprise him in our fight.'' Your brother starts to trow soft punches in the air like fighting and invisible opponent. ''And then, in a few years my little brother is going to beat me and keep the title for my future son.''

''Oh, no, he isn't going to be a barbaric fighter like you and your father.'' Your mother always speaks with authority. You think she is the only person that can scare your father or your brother. ''He is going to be a great mage. I'm going to send him to the angels city to be a disciple of a great healer and then he is going to be the archmage of this region. We spent enough time without one.''

And you just sit quietly. This was the same as allways. Everybody wants to tell you what to do. You want to be a mage but the angel city is so far away... It can be fun but you are a little scared. You finish your breakfast, now what you want to do?

>Wait for your brother. He said that he wants to train you, it can be fun.

>Tell your mother that you want to help her at her job, making healing potions is... fun?

>Just sneak away from your family and go outside.

>>41286265
>>Tell your mother that you want to help her at her job, making healing potions is... fun?
It's a worth-while thing ti do and it makes you feel accomplished knowing you saved some hero from a dying every time you help mom make one!

>>41286242
Normally you would spell out 'zero' instead of using the numeral. It's common to only use numerals for larger numbers.

>>41286265
>Tell your mother that you want to help her at her job, making healing potions is... fun?

>>41286265
>Wait for your brother. He said that he wants to train you, it can be fun.

>>41286364
I will remember that, thank you.

>>41286265
>>Just sneak away from your family and go outside.
Go try to find the stray cat you love to keep company.

>>41286265
>>Tell your mother that you want to help her at her job, making healing potions is... fun?

Potion time! Maybe we can make some non-healing potions.

So potion time it is. Writing

I'm too slow posting? Sorry If I am. I need more practice.

>>41286548
Around average speed. There are much slower QMs

>>41286548
as long as you post faster than hexer, you're at a good start.

>>41286732
>>41286648
Well, for me English is a foreign language. ''Average speed'' for me is a great success.

>>41286779
You want to help your mother. You like to go with your brother but probably is better if you don't interrupt his own training. You are better at not-fighty things anyway.

''Mom, can I help you to make potions today? I want to know more about alchemy if I'm going to be a mage.'' At that moment you can see your mother eyes beam with light.

''Oh my little boy I'm SO proud of you. Your are going to be the best mage in the world. See? He is not a brute like the fighters at the colosseum. He is going to save lives, not punch another man to get coins.'' Your brother just sat and glared at you, he was thinking ''you can't run forever from me'' and you knew it.

You and your mother went to the back of the house. In the back yard was a little shack in the middle of a beautiful garden, it was your mother's laboratory. Inside it the scent of a lot of different herbs was in the air. A table sits in the middle. A lot of empty flasks and strange machines to process the plants sat in top of it. Your mother starts to pick some dried herbs and you did the same.

You don't know the name of a lot of this plants but you knew which ones where the ingredients for the most basic healing potions... more or less. You still need some advice from your mother to pick the right ones but today is the day that you learned for sure how to make them.

>Congratulations, you learned the recipe of [Minor healing potion]
>With the help of your mother you learned where to find the ingridients of the [Minor healing potion]

>>41287009
After a while is lunch time. Your mother is going to keep you working with her all day probably. She stops working and speaks to you. ''Jack, I'm going to make something to eat for you and me. Keep working on those healing potions. You already know how to make them.'' You nod and then she exits the shack closing the door behind her. Now you are alone in the middle of an alchemy laboratory with more ingredients that you can count. What to do?

>Be a good boy and make more healing potions

>Let's try something different, combine random ingredients
.
>Make a random potion and try to use magic to make it. You heard that is what real alchemist do.

>>41287121
>>Let's try something different, combine random ingredients

Just like the pros do

>>41287121
>>Make a random potion and try to use magic to make it. You heard that is what real alchemist do.

>>41287121
>>Make a random potion and try to use magic to make it. You heard that is what real alchemist do.

It will blow in our face, definitely.

>>41286242
>He likes to give you a wooden sword, 0 indications and make you fight him.
"indications" is definitely not the English word for whatever it is.

>>41283501
>Wish me luck and let's start this.
Good on you for taking this comprehension thing in your hands

Git Lucky

>>41287276
I was thinking something like ''to hint something'' or to point out how to fight. Well, one error. Thank you.

>>41287121
So, random magic potion it is. I need some d100 rolls

Rolled 8 (1d100)

>>41287411
.

Rolled 43 (1d100)

>>41287411

lets do it

Rolled 79 (1d100)

>>41287424

well shit

Why Jack, why?

I need another d100 and a d10 for secret things.

Rolled 14 (1d100)

>>41287411

Rolled 9 (1d10)

>>41287465

Wow, that is... really bad.

Writing

>>41287465

I really hope we just didn't burn the house down.

We made combustible lemons?

>>41287507
If that 79 was a little lower, probably.

>>41287581
A lot of light.

CRASH

You feel fine. Why are you feeling fine? You saw an explosion, it was not a huge explosion but some of the glass probably stabbed you or something, but no. There is no glass to stab you. The red liquid is everywhere from the celing to the door, even you have a little on your face.

Fssssss...

Acid, of course, that sounded like acid. All around you starts to dissolve but you don't feel anything. Your clothes are dissolving too and in a matter of minutes you sit naked in a pool of what was before the shack of your mother. You are fine but you probably aren't going to be fine when you mother comes.

''WHAT HAPPENED HERE?'' That's it, you are dead.


-Still writing-

>>41287581
Probably is a good idea to make more healing potions, but all these shelves full of strange ingridients... and is that the alchemy book of your mother? You quickly grab it. In Elvish, of course. Maybe you can do something just looking at the pictures but the dried plants are too different from those pictures. Maybe you can just do some random combinations.

At first you make something that resembles a healing potion but brown and it makes a really awful smell. You just throw that liquid out of the window and try again with other plants.

After a while of trying you didn't accomplish anything. What are you doing wrong? Your mother says that you need the right ingredients in the exact proportions but how alchemist do new potions? Magic, of course. Real alchemist use magic.

You look at the last of your attempts. A red bubbly liquid. You didn't see a liquid like that in the book. You tried to pour a little in a plant, in the table and even in the tip of your finger but it did nothing. Maybe it just needs some MAGIC. And then you do it. You grab the flask and start to transfer raw pure magic from your body to the liquid.

A lot of light.

CRASH

You feel fine. Why are you feeling fine? You saw an explosion, it was not a huge explosion but some of the glass probably stabed you or something but no. There is no glass to stab you. The red liquid is everywere from the celing to the door, even you have a little on your face.

Fssssss...

Acid, of course, that sounded like acid. All around you starts to disolve but you don't feel anything. Your clothes are disolving too and in a matter of minutes you sit naked in a pool of what was before the shack of your mother. You are fine but you probably aren't going to be fine when you mother comes.

''WHAT HAPPENED HERE?'' That's it, you are dead.

-Still Writing-

>>41287874
After a While your mother calmed down. You have now new clothes and are banned from making potions forever. She is so angry that didn't even shout at you and that was really scary. It was a relief when she sent you to the forest to search for more plants, that Acid dissolved all dead matter, including all the dried herbs and the book so now you are on your way to the forest. Probably your mother can buy more, but she just wants to be alone some time.


You love being alone in the forest. After crossing the river the only civilization is the hunters camp and it was far away, nearly at the monster territory.

You walked down a path to a quiet place whit a lot of flowers to start searching and then you saw it. It was a little puppy wolf not so far, playing with buterflies jumping between the flowers.


>Approach the wolf. He is going to be your new friend.

>Go back and search in another place. Wolf are dangerous.

>Just stay low and watch him.

>>41288097
>Approach the wolf. He is going to be your new friend.

Sorry for the delay, I wasn't ready for you to just blow up the laboratory.

>>41288097
>Approach the wolf. He is going to be your new friend.

As we go through the forest, maybe we could look for some herbs, hopefully to replace some we destroyed.

Also, do we remember how to make the acid, or was it a pure bad luck sort of thing?

>>41288097
>Approach the wolf. He is going to be your new friend. Also save recipe for that acid. It could be useful sometimes in future.

>>41288165
Maybe you can do again the bubbly liquid but it was the magic what made it into acid. And you have no idea on how to use your magic.

>>41288097
>>Approach the wolf. He is going to be your new friend.

We need a wolf friend. Writing

>>41288325
I'm sure his parents won't object in any way whatsoever.

>>41288422
Of course not. A strange human is aproaching my son? Totally fine.

>>41288325
You approach the wolf. At first it doesn't see you but then his nose starts twitching a little and looks at you. His ears drop and is ready to run but then you stay quiet and stop moving until he relaxes. Little by little you approach the wolf until he starts to come to you shyly.

At first he just starts to smell you a little and to go around you to take a good look. You are a little kid in the middle of the woods without a weapon, probably the least treatening thing around. The wolf puppy is scarier than you.

You breathe slowly. Your father taught you that wolves don't attack when are not hungry unless you are a danger for them. Maybe this puppy is hungry? Luckily you have some dried meat in your pocket. You took it from the kitchen before being exiliated to the forest by an angry mother. You give a little bit to him.

The wolf accepts the dried meat happily and starts chewing on it until it eats the whole bit and looks at you. ''You don't seem like a bad human. Want to be my friend?'' His tail started to move more and you just stared at him.

The wolf talks.


>Friends with a wolf that talks? Of course.

>This is too weird. Say no and just go elsewere.

>This is too weird. Run.

>>41288690
>>Friends with a wolf that talks? Of course.

>>41288690
>>Friends with a wolf that talks? Of course.
We have werewolf friend now or that acid has hallucinogenic effects?

>>41288690
>Friends with a wolf that talks? Of course.
>"That's what I was hoping for in the first place!"

>>41288690
>Friends with a wolf that talks? Of course.

Our first party member.

>>41288751
Who knows. Maybe is neither of that. Maybe is just our spirit animal or a prankster little druid.

That's all for today people. I'm running again this weekend proabably if all of you liked the quest so far. Today it was just a test run. I'm new in all this of writing in english or doing a quest.

Maybe tomorrow at the same hour. Check my twitter if you want to know what happens with the talking wolf.

>>41288931
It was ok. Not much happened, but i'm interested in what will come of that.

>>41289031
I know, I wanted the first big event to be in the first thread but today I don't have enough time. The next time is going to have probably a time skip. Jack Johnson is not going to have 9 years forever. This is like the tutorial (For me, to learn how to do all this).

>>41288931

I like the universe and want to see what happens with the kid so yeah I would call it a success

>>41289150
This universe is from a story that I was wanting to write since I was like 13 years old. I have a big universe in mind with his own mytology, wars and adventures.

You didn't even know WHY is called ''Ring Quest''

Archived.

I need to say something, it wasn't the most intensive thread but I had fun. I want to know all your reactions when big stuff happens.

>>41289402
I liked a lot the time god and the time mage. Keep writing, you are doing a good job.