>>40245256
OP will there be spaceship combat?

>>40245475
i hope so

>>40245492
I hope it'll be like BFG.

>>40245256

Ok, this quest is great but you really should prewrite your opening posts so players don't have to wait 30 minutes to get started.

Just a friendly suggestion

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My body is ready, OP.

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During this month you have learned much outside of your tinkerings. The people have taught you their language, a mixture of smooth and harsh words that you mastered within a day. They have also taught you about numbers, which you learned in less than an hour. You have also payed more attention to these people and their appearances and attitude towards you. Many see you as a spirit, others as a symbol of hope, but the thing they all univerally see you as, is the embodiment of the Dark sun.

These people are deathly pale, with long unkempt blonde or red hair and pupiless eyes. They are lithe, lacking any extra fat or flesh due to their constant working and lack of food. You can see and almost feel their malnutrition, and many are sick due to the lack of hygiene or care. You plan to fix this problem though, soon enough.

In front of you on a bench lies your gun, specially designed by you, and your armor that you also made yourself. The armor is made of metal that you scraped together and made to fit you. Behind you is the door leading out to the general tunnel area, and through it you can reach the others and tell them of the plan. Over to the side though is a tunnel you have been digging due to sensing something...useful on the other side.

>Head out now and begin telling everyone to be ready in a few hours
>Make final adjustements to gun and armor(write in)
>Lay down and get some rest. It is unneeded, but maybe a vision will alert you to something valuable
>Finish digging the tunnel. You can feel that whatever is on the other side will be quite useful
>Write in

>>40245475

We get discovered almost last in the Crusade but there will be at least a good couple decades of space battling I am sure

>>40245629
>Finish digging the tunnel. You can feel that whatever is on the other side will be quite useful

>>40245629

>Finish digging.

Visions will not bring us victory, only weapons and planning.

>>40245629
>Finish digging the tunnel. You can feel that whatever is on the other side will be quite useful

>>40245629
>Finish digging the tunnel. You can feel that whatever is on the other side will be quite useful

>>40245629
>finish digging the tunnel
There's gonna be loot i just know it.

>>40245629

Finish digging the tunnel.

>>40245629
>Finish digging the tunnel. You can feel that whatever is on the other side will be quite useful

Achro tech ho!

>>40245629
>Finish digging
trust our gut

>>40245822
>trust our gut

>SURPRISE COCKBAG! NECRONS!

>>40245873
But Necrons have the best tech thus the best loot.

Alright I just want to let you all know that its 15 min from post start that votes end. Im writing now.

>>40245873
>running gag incoming

>>40245943
And right now, could more than likely turn us to paste with little effort.

You decide to continue digging into the wall. You are not sure of what is exactly on the other side, but you believe it to be something very beneficial. You turn and grab the pickaxe you stole, a long piece of wood with a metal double sided head, before heading over to the hole. You walk inside of the tight passage, bare flesh scraping against the sharp rocks without a care. You would have made it cleaner and better functionally, but time is of the essence, and you do not have time currently for that.

You reach the end of the tunnel, a black wall of rock in front of your face, and put your hand on it. You can feel that something on the other side, now you just need to reach it. You step back, grip the pickaxe, and then pull back...

(1/2)

>>40246086
>Pull aside the rock
>It's Trazyn

>>40246194
>roll for luck

>20

>DOOMRIDER outta fuckin' nowhere

>gives us a free motorcycle

>>40246212
>DOOMRIDER
>Not giving us space cocaine
You had one job anon.

>>40246232
>implying Mr. Serious MC would take a mind-altering substance

Fucking plebes these days.

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You hit the wall with an approximated amount of necessary strength, and it crumbles immediately. The wall of rock falls away, hollow due to the area on the other side. You take a step back as the rocks hit the floor, patiently waiting for them to stop before walking forward and through the newly formed hole. On the other side is a small pocket of space with a pedestal in the middle, and on top of the pedestal is a solid grey metal shape.

You walk over to it, seeing that it is small enough to fit on your back, and look down at the words on the bottom left.

"S.T.C PACK TETRALOS-VX"

>Investigate it
>Put it on
>Tap one of the buttons
>Write in

>>40246296
>>Investigate it

>>40246296
>>Investigate it

>>40246296
>Investigate it
What mysteries do you hold?

>>40246296
>>Investigate it
Don't do stupid shit.

>>40246296
>Investigate it

>>40246296
>Investigate it
What's in the box

>>40246296

Aww shit

Investigate the room, hopefully there is something that can tell you what it does. If nothing, investigate the pack.

>>40246296
>Investigate it.

>>40246296
>Write in

>Have an instinctual need to slap it with our dick, functioning or no. It just feels -right-.

>all the techpriests are doing it!

Maybe we'll become doc ock

>>40246352
>Manus, Vulkan, Perturabo,The Dark Sun
The most notorious toaster-fuckers in the galaxy.

>>40246352
I'll switch my vote to this now.

>>40246296

>Investigate

By the time the Emperor arrives we'll have built a little mini Imperium based on this tech alone, I guarantee it

>>40246532
>I guarantee it

So what will my refund be?

>>40246546
One dick in your ass

You walk over to the pack, examining the letters and symbols on the bottom. You put a hand on it, feeling smooth grey metal that is of a far greater quality and strength than anything youve had the experience of working with. Upon seeing it you become extremely curious of all the technology and secrets it holds, wanting to take it apart and examine it right there. Despite this you feel that it would be nigh impossible to actually breach it with anything you could find in this pit.

As you run your hands over it the top suddenly opens up on the top, while the front glows a little and more words appear.

"MATERIALS NEEDED: 10 POUNDS OF METAL, 10 POUNDS OF EXPLOSIVE MATERIAL, 10 POUNDS OF SCRAP=50 BOLTS"

Interesting, you wonder what these "bolts" are or can do. Certainly they are for a destructive purpose, though what purpose you cannot say.

>Grab it, take it back, go get the materials
>Leave it, grab the materials, come back
>Write in

>>40246556
Twenty, no more, no less.

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>>40246532
>I guarantee it

>>40246566
Fifteen no higher

>>40246579
....16 and I get an extra ass.

>>40246557
>>Grab it, take it back, go get the materials

>>40246557
>Leave it, grab the materials, come back

>>40246557
>Grab it, take it back, go get the materials

>>40246588
Asses very pricey but I agree.

>>40246557

>Grab it, take it back, go get the materials

I mean, can we even stop ourselves from trying this out?

>>40246557
>Leave it, grab the materials, come back

>>40246557
Why does this thing, a relic of the Dark Age of Technology, speak the same language as these people?

>Leave it, grab the materials, come back
Hide the rock formation

>>40246557

>leave it, grab the materials, come back

>>40246630
we're in 30k and on a lost colony so high gothic isn't too big of a stretch.

>>40246630
Considering it was made on their planet, it would only make sense for it to use letters in their language. Besides it has changed alot since the Dark age but not enough that they cant even understand S.T.C's or old text.

>>40246557
>>Grab it, take it back, go get the materials

>>40246557
>Leave it, grab the materials, come back

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You decide to leave it where it is, and instead bring back the required materials. These bolts interest you, and how this pack will simply turn the items you bring into weaponry or ammunition sparks a curiousity in your head. You turn and walk through the tunnel back to your makeshift home, dozens of scraps and junk lying around. You begin gathering the scrap first, bad metal, broken guns, and a variety of other pieces until you reach ten pounds.

You deposit it next to the pack, before running back and grabbing a heavier gun that is exactly ten pounds. You dissasemble it and then bring it back and put it in an orderly pile. Last but not least is the rare and precious explosive material, which you have stored in various fashioned containers. You bring ten pounds worth back to the pack and insert all of the materials.

There is a silent humming sound as the packs internal workings begin putting together and shaping the inserted matter, and you watch with interest and curiousity until the humming stops. A rectangular hole opens on the bottom of the pack, and out slides a chain of what you assume to be bolts, which look like slightly enlarged bullets...

>Extraodinary mind: Grab your gun and modify it to take a line or "belt" of bolts
>Leave it there for later
>Write in

>>40247088
>Extraodinary mind: Grab your gun and modify it to take a line or "belt" of bolts

>>40247088
>Extraodinary mind: Grab your gun and modify it to take a line or "belt" of bolts

>>40247088
>Extraodinary mind: Grab your gun and modify it to take a line or "belt" of bolts

>>40247088
>Extraodinary mind: Grab your gun and modify it to take a line or "belt" of bolts

>>40247088
>Extraodinary mind: Grab your gun and modify it to take a line or "belt" of bolts

>Build pistol with explosive rounds...
>Immediately have to refit it to be an actual bolt pistol.

>>40247167
Decided to introduce some DAOT tech earlier than expected. There are probably like one or two more pieces on this world.

>>40247088
Extraodinary mind: Grab your gun and modify it to take a line or "belt" of bolts
>Write in
make a lot more of them. anything not used in the guns and ammo for our army goes into the packback.
>>40247167
even better. we refit it into a heavy bolter because we need to make it belt fed

As you look at the bolts and the pack you are struck with a flash of inspiration. Suddenly its as if you know everything about this technology that there is to know, and especiall what these bolts can do. You stand back up and run down the tunnel to grab your gun. You quickly dissasemble it entirely, before putting it back together in an entirely new configuration. Once you do that you rush back down the tunnel to the pack, and look between the bolts and your new loader for the gun. You grab a shell and pull, causing more to come out along with it as you attach the belt to your gun. It stays there, and you look between the gun and belt of ammo in knowing wonder.

Glad that you have found a new piece of technology that is actually advanced, you pick up the pack and put it on your back. With the gun in hand you walk out of the tunnel and back to your home. This is definetly appreciated, but for every second you spend not fighting the people spend seconds more enslaved by the Orks. It is almost time to go and free them, you have a number of charges and weapons, and everyone is ready when you are.

>Write in

>>40247453

We only have a couple hours before the uprising but we can definitely start mass production once most of the slaves are free

>>40247535
>Test out this new ammo

>>40247535
Call a meeting and figure out a strategy for destroying the orks.

>>40247535

Alright. Pass out our makeshift weapons amongst the people and hide them in various locations. Make sure everyone knows where to go when the revolution begins and that the slaves understand to travel in groups and conserve ammo.

We are going to create chaos amongst the Orks as the humans retreat to safety and kill the largest orks we can find to cripple the leadership.

>>40247535
>especiall what these bolts can do.
Anything special or just bigger exploding bolts?

>>40247535
start killing the orks in order of size (largest to smallest)

>>40247625
Sounds good

>>40247635
they're actual bolter rounds.

>>40247625

Some follow up for this.

Once we establish safe zones, we can lead raiding parties and reclaim territory. We should utilize IEDs and traps to inflict asymmetric losses

>>40247635
Their honest to Emperor Bolter rounds

>>40247535
Speech time

Before THIS BATTLE IS DONE YOU SHOULD KNOW THAT THIS EVENT IS THE STAR OF A REVOLUTION
REVOLUTION. ALL HUMANS WILL REMEMBER THIS DAY AND WHAT YOU DO WILL BE WRITEN DOWN IN THE ANNALS OF HISTORY.WE HAVE THE WILL OF HUMANITY IN OUS AND WE CAN'T FAIL

>>40247787
Nah man, No speachs

>>40247787
Why don't you leave stuff like that to op.

>>40247808
But speaches are delicious

>>40247858
Only when their good

>>40247858
Not really, Honestly i'd rather we be the quiet Primarch

>>40247858

I feel due to the lack of human interaction we would be very bad at speeches. Maybe when we get ready to retake the planet, but not now.

>>40247897
>Russ never shuts up, always boasting and talking

>Sol says nearly nothing, but Russ treats him like his best bro anyway

>Speech
Now now the Sun rises on our time and as it does, the Age of the Orks sets, never to rise again.

You have endured hardships, hate and suffered, but now one this day we rise toether as one, we shall lay waste to those who tore apart your families, we shall burn away the green stain that has scoured this world for to long.

It begins today, a new day a day for us and our own, seize this chance for today you become legend.

>>40248022
>Oh, Russ-sempai is talking to me

>>40247998

This is a good point. Maybe once we spend some time ruling the humans we can be inspiring, but for now we work better a symbol or a legend

>>40248022
>Sol says nearly nothing, but Russ treats him like his best bro anyway
>It's mainly because we're the only one who will put up with his bullshit.....

>>40248022
I really hope we become the Primarch of: Just as Planed. When we first meet Russ should exchange names and then spar say surely this is the best way for two wayward brothers to get to know one anothers metal.

>>40248022
>>40248047
>>40248076
I would really like this

>>40248097
Nah

>>40248097
I'd be down for this.

So I was doing some more thinking, and while we might not use aerial assaults, we might use jet bikes and land speeders extensively for their high mobility and the force concentration they allow.

It is time, time for the people to be freed. You begin grabbing weapons and taking them to designated storage areas only the slaves know about first. You do this for a while, passing through the rock walls as Orks yell and people work, until a good number are stocked. After that you move to a specific boulder and move it slightly out of the way to see a man using his pickaxe. He is dirty, his pale features hidden under dust and dirt as long blond hair rolls down his back. He looks down at you with a glance, and you nod to him silently.

He nods back, and you close the tunnel as he taps another slave and nods to him. You move to a special area, the one where all the guns are kept, and find a number of slaves silently grabbing and moving munitions and weapons. They all silently acknowledge you, some making a symbol on their chest as they proceed to pass along and move guns in almost complete silence.

The plan is ready, where will you begin the fighting at?

(As a group)
>At the pit entrance far up. Kill all the Orks so the people have a clear route and work your way down.
>At the bottom of the pit, where it would be easy to kill the orks as they stream down a central area.
>Write in

OR

(Solo)
>Find the largest Ork, the leader, and kill him along with all the other large orks
>Find the Ork ammo and explosives storage. Begin setting them up and rigging them for detonation as the fighting breaks out
>Write in

>>40248203
>Find the largest Ork, the leader, and kill him along with all the other large orks

>>40248203
As a group, working with support is a big benefit.
Also seeing this riot through.

>>40248203
>>At the pit entrance far up. Kill all the Orks so the people have a clear route and work your way down.
be seen and heard. It will give the slaves a rally point and the orcs something to fear.

>>40248203
>At the pit entrance far up. Kill all the Orks so the people have a clear route and work your way down.

>>40248265
>orks
>fear
I don't think you understand orks.

>>40248203

We should operate on our own for maximum effectiveness.

We should boobytrap the ork munitions while the humans start the rebellion at the pit entrance. It's more important that the humans have a clear route of escape than killing every Ork in the mines.

We should keep an eye out for really big Orks though, killing the Boss would be a huge nlow

>>40248203
>>At the pit entrance far up. Kill all the Orks so the people have a clear route and work your way down.
We must enable our forces to move. We can only do so much by ourselves. Besides, the biggest orks will come to where the fighting is the hardest.

>>40248203
(as a group)
>At the pit entrance far up. Kill all the Orks so the people have a clear route and work your way down.
I think streamlining this for all the humans is a priority.

>>40248203
>At the pit entrance far up. Kill all the Orks so the people have a clear route and work your way down.

>>40248203
>Find the largest Ork, the leader, and kill him along with all the other large orks

Makes it so the smalla orks have to decide who's the biggest an' the strongest!

>>40248203
>Find the Ork ammo and explosives storage. Begin setting them up and rigging them for detonation as the fighting breaks out

>>40248203

Solo
>find the largest Ork, the leader, and kill him along with all the other large orks.

>>40248203

Rig the Orks ammo and munitions to blow, the Orks will get slaughtered with no gunz

>>40248203
>At the pit entrance far up. Kill all the Orks so the people have a clear route and work your way down.

>>40248203
>>At the pit entrance far up. Kill all the Orks so the people have a clear route and work your way down.

As I write, I must say...

>30k Deathwatch intensifies

Personally, if our legion turned into the early deathwatch and then our sons or us secretly founded the deathwatch centuries later I would be really hyped.

>>40248746
Well xenos are disgusting so it makes sense we would want to kill them, hey maybe our legion can exterminate the tau

>>40248746
Might explain all those marines in stasis

>>40248746
sure why not? that's pretty interesting

>>40248746
Hell yes.

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The fighting shall start up at the pit entrance, with a group slaves following you. The Orks up there must be killed first while the others begin the fighting down in the pit. This way you can free up a path for them to retreat, and work your way down until you crush the orks between a hammer and an anvil. You look down at the dozens of slaves and pick out twenty of them before gesturing for them to come with you. As you turn away you hear them following behind you, and your group heads up the many tunnels in the walls until you reach the top.

Ahead of you is a large entrance with Orks moving in and out of it. Some have materials, some are yelling at each other, and almost all have gunsin their hands. You heft your gun, hit the switch for full auto, and prepare to fight.

>d20 tg

Rolled 12 (1d20)

>>40249101

HOOPPPE

Rolled 8 (1d20)

>>40249101

Rolled 3 (1d20)

>>40249101

Rolled 19 (1d20)

>>40249101

Emperor guide us!

Rolled 19 (1d20)

>>40249101

Let's do this shit

>>40249101
...!

Rolled 17 (1d20)

>>40249101
I'd like to go a more radical route on Xenos by virus bombing any planet with xenos on them. there are so many planets in this galaxy it's of no consequence if a few hundred thousand planets are turned into lifeless husks.

>>40249182
I'd rather we actually y'know CARE about human's unlike most of the other Primarchs.....

>>40249182
It's still wasteful, but i agree with putting xenos to the sword and gun.

>>40249182

Eh, we're more tactical than mass virus bombing though. Also we're trying to win Dad's favor and he likes bloodless overthrows and one day conquering, that kind of thing.

>>40249182
CRYPTMAN?

>>40249237
>Also we're trying to win Dad's favor
HAHAHAHA no he can go fuck himself, We fight for humanity not him

>>40249101
So how do you take rolls? First, best of three?

>>40249211
of course if there are humans or it's a lost colony then it's a different story but if we find an alien planet it's just cheaper in both humans and ammunition to just take out the entire planet. easier to extract minerals from an asteroid field than a planet.

>>40249293
Best watch how you talk about the God Emperor.

>>40249182
Not a good plan. Even with millions of worlds, habitable worlds are still a finite resource. Do not waste them.

>>40249297
Were a Primarch, best of all rolls with no critfails but crit successes. Only time is when we fight/talk/meet someone or something actualy able to..ya know, look at a primarch and not die in mere seconds.

>ITT: the voices in Sol's head argue about where his loyalties lie

>>40249330
Oh yeah definitely
>>40249352
Oh? Then what's he done for us then exactly? Also he never wanted to be considered a "God"

>>40249293
he should earn our disrespect personally before we decide how to feel about him

>>40249373
>tfw we finally meet Russ, get into a fist fight, win and then go out drinking

>and still only say less than ten words to him

>>40249391
In that same regard he also has to earn our respect
>>40249407
It's fucking official, We're the silent Primarch! It has to happen!

>>40249182
Gasing planets is a finale resort. We need all the planets we can grab.

>>40249391
meant to say "we should meet him before we decide how to feel about him"
>>40249407
hahaha alright

>>40249362
no we have around 100 BILLION STARS with each holding 0-??? planets and moons in our galaxy. besides living on a planet is far less efficient than just building massive space stations that are kept stationary by the solar pressure. yes I want to make a dyson sphere.

>>40249424
yeah that's what I meant

>>40249424

Silence is boring though, we should talk but we can certainly be succinct

>>40249480
Silence can be fun

>>40249463
And? Most of these planets are inhospitable. And even then, there are only so many. You do not get rid of even a single one, as many will be lost over the course of millenia. There may be many of them, but they are still a finite resource. You do NOT waste them. That is why Exterminatus is only a last resort.

>>40249480
>>40249498
let's just learn how to be really expressive with minimal effort, "speaking through our eyes" or something, which sounds fitting as efficiency appears to be what we're all about

>>40249531
Sounds fun!

>>40249480
>>40249498
Doesn't one of the Primarchs already do the silence thing?

I would prefer if we were willing to talk, but only when necessary, and we speak in a rather terse, to the point and efficient manner.

I mean, why would you talk to Russ when he wants you to punch him in the face to prove who you are to him?

>>40249519
my point is that planets are worthless beyond the minerals they possess. it makes far more sense to colonize space near the star, blow up any planets in it and pick the rubble for valuable materials.

>>40249568
And that is not how 40k does things. Each planet is an invaluable resource, even if it doesn't have much value compared to others.

>>40249542
But then we're Dorn, the autism might be less prominent but still.

>>40249583
we do what we want not what the universe canonically does. hell our very existence is proof this is non-canon.

>>40249531
I dislike the whole silence idea. There is less flow of information that way.

Plus, then we'll just stand in the corner of parties with Curze, silently sipping our beverages.

>>40249586

We are the Emperor's autism, anon

>>40249622
so that's what the will of the emperor means. makes sense that we're an idiot savant.

>>40249611
This is just how the universe works in this setting. Don't like it, door's that way. What we can do is influence our little part of it.

>>40249622
>>40249645
Oh god no please no.....

>>40249650
wait are we talking about how the universe itself works (planets are a source of materials only as long as planets remain planets) or how the people in the universe act (people have never thought to use stripmining on a planetary scale)

>>40249463
Dyson spheres are unweildy, Dyson swarms on the other hand... Statites work too I guess.

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You raise your gun and aim it, fanning the lines of Orks as they walk around. As you watch you see a large a larger cart coming in, full of what appear to be explosives. You immediately gleam the tactical options opened to you by the explosives, and you plan on exploiting them to the utmost of your limitless abilities. You look at the Orks moving the explosives, two of them, and then squeeze the trigger with 100% sureness in your heart.

There is a crack as two bullets fly out, each hitting an Ork in the head and blowing it off. The other slaves immediately open fire in perfectly planned unison, having realized the same thing as you upon seeing the explosives. The sound of firing guns roars through the area as dozens of Orks are suddenly mowed down by fire. Despite the large number that drop instantly, they are still Orks and they have both toughness and numbers.

Less than ten seconds after the fighting starts you see Orks charging at your group, while others open fire with the loudest guns they have. As the wild bullets fly by you feel one whiz by your head, and you dont even look back as one of your guns goes silent. Another flies by and hits a woman in her neck, and she falls back clutching her throat before dying. The firing goes back and forth, with Orks surviving many shots as you keep on taking them down with precision headshots.

Meanwhile down below you hear yelling and the sound of hundreds of guns firing, accompanied by Orks screaming WAAAAGH all around. For now though you focus on the current fight going on, and the best way to minimize your casualties.

(18 slaves left)
>Keep up the fire and hold your position
>Have(write in number)move to other tunnel spots and open fire
>Shoot the explosives now. It would be a VERY big explosion, and cause a cave-in, but you would cut off Ork reinforcements and there are more explosives below
>Leave the group and(write in)
>Write in

>>40249686
Look at 40k. See it? How does the setting work Also, please start using capitalization.

>>40249616
>implying Russ wont be hauling us around all the time cracking jokes that only Sol is willing to laugh at.

>>40249710
I know but Dyson sphere is how the common person knows them. I personally believe in the solar sail method for capturing the energy needed. we don't even need to worry about gravity since it's possible to make artificial gravity without spinning.

>>40249727
>Have(write in number)move to other tunnel spots and open fire
10

>>40249727
>Keep up the fire and hold your position

>>40249727

Leave the group and run to another tunnel ourselves. We can rally them towards the entrance.

Once the humans are out, we can blow the explosives and seal the Orks in behind us. We can't risk blowing them up now and leaving our people behind

>>40249727
>Have 11 move to other tunnel spots and open fire

>>40249728
Everytime I look at the setting I see a lot of different technologies that would work well together. The technology that could help humanity wasted by doing things the old way rather than the better way. what I see is a setting written by people who weren't anal retentive optimizers.

We hold position with 4 of our best and hold this point, the rest go aid the others, when it looks like we are about to get overwhelmed at the last moment shoot the depo. Then kill the Orks left, loot and bail.

>>40249542
yeah let's not be an imperious asshole like Dorn; let's just be emotive without trying too hard.
furthermore let's not be all prideful and just keep trying to learn and understand; we already seem quite inquisitive by nature. If Russ punches us in the face, let's take it in stride, think about what kind of communication that is, and respond back in "his language" (punching him back, probably)

>>40249727
>Write in
Push for the explosives, cut the orks down.

Alright, I am game for this quest. Seal of approval.

>>40249844
Do you see Dyson Spheres or the like? No, you don't. It isn't the setting for it. Don't change that just for your whims.

>>40249855
>gets punched, holds his hand up to signal a stop for a couple seconds

>Oh, so -that- is why he punches things.

>thumbs up then headbutts Russ

>>40249616
Okay, I get where you're coming from. I think there's a middle ground to be had, though: we can be somewhat withheld without being a creepy or imperious twat. I think what's important is that we become someone who understands how important it is to LISTEN instead of another boisterous, headstrong problem child, and then just pick our words carefully

>>40249897
damn I loved that headbutt in ME2

>>40249897
yeah exactly, doesn't that sound great?
>>40249942
haha perfect

>>40249727

>Have 12 move to other tunnel spots and open fire

Fire and maneuver is how battles are fought.

>>40249942
That headbutt was the only good thing about that game. That and Legion.

So how do you guys think we can lessen the damage of the civil war? I mean if we bro it up with Magnus or Perturabo we could perhaps stop either of them from going bananas. Should not be to hard since Perturabo also builds things and Magnus also wants to know things so we have something in common with both.

>>40250028
>Not loving kicking the guy off the tower paragon or renegade

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Lets be Odysseus the Primarch, charismatic and friendly on the surface, yet deep down the creative, calculative and ruthless within...

OOooorrrrr we could become pic related.

>>40250225
If we bro it up with Magnus, we have the highest chance of achieving real good.

Of course, we will be hunted down long before that.

>>40250225

We might be able to pull Magnus back from the brink if we turn out to be a Psyker of some kind

>>40250225
>implying that the emperor wouldn't sense the dozens of voices inside his son's head and remove them

i would like to not meta-game so much

Alright im back and writing, sorry about the delay. Glad you all are liking this so much. Any writing tips?

>inb4 yeah stop writing period

>>40249293
The Emperor would actually probably approve of that.

>>40250289
Ahh, fair enough I suppose.

>>40250225
can someone remind me what Perturabo's canon personality is like? I remember reading that in one version of the story he practiced decimation, but in another he was generally a cultured and good person who grew very tired of being spited for petty reasons

Rolled 3 (1d3)

Alright rolling for how many we have move.

1. 10
2. 11
3. 12

>>40250322
I'd say give your text a spell check before posting as that seems to be the primary concern at the moment. Other than that I suppose there is nothing major, nothing that a writing habit wont fix.

>>40250343
I do think he was hating on politics and the like. Sort of like "Fuck that, do what I say cause I am smarter than you right this god damn instant or you can become an ornament on a spike." Brutal in way but effective. Also he was a great artist

>>40250322
Proff read man

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As the fighting grows more intense and more Orks fire upon your group, you begin your plan. You form the hand signals that you have taught them for over a month, and the slaves automatically follow your silent order. Twelve of them depart from the main squad, breaking up into smaller groupings of three as they head through the tunnel systems. You keep up the intense fire, realizing that your now down to approximately 28 bolts as you chew through Orks with head and chest shots.

Another slave is hit directly in the chest, sending him flying back, and you sidestep a trio of shots that couldve ended you right there. After fighting for a while the Orks are suddenly assaulted from all sides of the tunnel as your men and woman get into position. The greenskins are soon cutdown, and eventually the greenskins at the entrance are all dead. You mentally check and find that you have only 17 shots left, and you come out of cover slowly with the rest of your squad. You look outside and see that ALOT more Orks are on the way, charging straight for the tunnel.

>Make a killzone, have everyone in position to continue the firing from all angles
>Send down a man to bring up twenty more slaves
>Blow a few explosives and seal the entrance
>Trust them to take care up here, and head down to assist the others while sending more up top
>Write in

>>40250603
>>Make a killzone, have everyone in position to continue the firing from all angles

>>40250603
>Send down a man to bring up 20 slaves

>>40250603
>Trust them to take care up here, and head down to assist the others while sending more up top
Sending anyone else would be a death sentence.

>>40250603
>Make a killzone, have everyone in position to continue the firing from all angles
>Send down a man to bring up twenty more slaves
>Trust them to take care up here, and head down to assist the others while sending more up top

A killzone is good, we have a good position here and can drain their numbers until the odds are more even. With a bit more people here then can probably hold while we can help out downstairs by being a beacon of moral and hope.

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>>40250603
>Look over entire post
>Worry about spelling errors, my greatest weakness
>Find literally no spelling errors

>>40250603
>Make a killzone, have everyone in position to continue the firing from all angles
>Send down a man to bring up twenty more slaves

>>40250603
>Blow a few explosives and seal the entrance

>>40250603
Oh, right, Primarchs are actually able to dodge bullets.

Fuck I forgot just HOW broken they were.

>>40250603
>Make a killzone

>>40250685
Nobody we send down there could survive the trip besides us.

>>40250603
>Make a killzone, have everyone in position to continue the firing from all angles
>Have someone push the explosives towards the tunnel they're coming from.

>>40250603
>Make a killzone, have everyone in position to continue the firing from all angles
>Send down a man to bring up twenty more slaves
when the people are here
>Trust them to take care up here, and head down to assist the others while sending more up top
we need to find the biggest ork we can.

>>40250603

Establish a kill-zone, then head downstairs to finish up there while sending more to the entrance. Also, we could find more stuff top resupply the pack after securing the bottom.

Establish kill zone and trade places with a bunch of slaves while they go up we go down. Gotta make sure things are working out down there.

Give them the instruction if it gets to dangerous and only 5 of you remain blow the bombs.

>>40250722

Voting for this

As soon as you see the Orks coming you act. Spinning around you look up at the other men and woman and begin making signals and gestures. One nods and runs down to get you twenty more soldiers, while the others all move into position and set up a proper killzone for the Orks. You take up your position with them, and the group of you wait for the Orks to reach the entrance in dead silence. You can hear the breahthing of your allies, their hearts beating furiously in their chest as they prepare for the next assault.

With eyes focused on the hole you begin multitasking mentally. When the orks come in your going to scythe them down, but as soon as the other soldiers get here your going to head down to support the other slaves and get more ammo. If the situation deteriorates you will have them blow the main entrance, and then clear out the remaining Orks.

As soon as your mind crosses that line of thought two things happen. First off, the extra twenty soldiers arrive and fill in other spots. Immediately after the Orks arrive at the cave, and 38 guns open fire on them. You drop Ork after Ork with devastating Headshots, and dont stop until your gun finally runs out of ammo. With reinforcements here and your gun dry you turn away and head deeper down the tunnel to assist the others...

(1/2)

As you rush down you find many pieces of abandoned junk and metal, left by the Orks in their mad dash to fighting. Luckily none came up behind the group, that would have been particularly devastating to your plan, but not entirely ruining it at all. You stop and set your pack down as you prepare to restock on bolts.

>2 minutes=25 bolts
>4 minutes=50 bolts
>6 minutes=75 bolts
>8 minutes=100 bolts
>Leave your pack somewhere safe and continue heading down. There is no time to waste
>Write in

>>40251199
>4 minutes=50 bolts

>>40251199

>2 minutes= 25 bolts

Carefully aiming, that should take care of most of the Orks left at the bottom, then with the reinforcements arriving to the top, we can take a little more time to make more.

>>40251199
>4 minutes=50 bolts
>Write in
get a slave to constantly feed the packback.

>>40251199
>>2 minutes=25 bolts

And if we can get to a weapons cache then grab an improved choppa

>>40251199
>2 minutes
We've been chewing through ammo and haven't picked up a secondary yet.

>>40251199
>8 minutes=100 bolts
Better we take the time to restock properly than be forced to restock again so soon.

>>40251199
>4 minutes=50 bolts

>>40251199
2 minutes=25 bolts

>>40251199
>4 minutes=50 bolts
This isn't too long, and lets us take out another 20 orks + Boss/Nob

>>40251199
>>2 minutes=25 bolts

>>40251199
>Leave your pack somewhere safe and continue heading down. There is no time to waste
we need intel before we can endanger our people's lives with an ammo break

>>40251349

Voting for this.

We don't have time! Pick up an Ork choppa and slugga and get moving!!

>>40251290
>get a slave to constantly feed the packback.
We really should do that.

>>40251518
True

>>40251518
definitely nominate a bullet caddie

>>40251518
supporting

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Unwilling to spend too much time here, you quickly gather enough materials for twenty-five bolts and put them in the pack. It begins humming softly as it fills with more and more ammo for you to use. You hear the sound of constant fire, both human and Ork coming from above and below you. As you patiently wait you hear the firing above become more and more frantic, along with a number of screams and the sound of bones breaking or bodies slamming against walls.

Your pack finishes filling itself, and you put it on and rise up just in time for a VERY big Ork to walk down the tunnel. This one wears yellow and red armor, splattered with gore, and upon seeing you he smiles wickedly.

"Aww, da litle uumi found im'self sum dakka. Wut yu gona do wit so litle dakka to an Ork like me, sting mey?! HAR HAR HAR!!"

He lets out a harty laugh, and you calmly point your gun at him as he underestimates its firepower and strength.

>Aim for the head, d20

Rolled 2 (1d20)

>>40251847

Rolled 1 (1d20)

>>40251847

Fuck you too, buddy.

Rolled 13 (1d20)

>>40251847

Rolled 26 (1d100)

>>40251847

Rolled 14 (1d20)

>>40251847
here we go.

>>40251863
thank god we can't crit fail.

Rolled 13 (1d20)

>>40251847

>>40251863
>>40251859
Damn.
>>40251864
at least someone rolled decently.

Rolled 14 (1d20)

>>40251847

>>40251859
>>40251863
>>40251864
EMPEROR SAVE US

Rolled 14 (1d20)

>>40251847
>>40251863
Uhg....

Rolled 17 (1d20)

>>40251847

About time he showed up

Well, we cant critfail against things we heavily outclass.

I think a Warboss or Meganob could give us a workout.

But he is standing there acting all smug so who knows?

>>40251893
We don't critfail mang.

>>40251915
>Were a Primarch, best of all rolls with no critfails but crit successes. Only time is when we fight/talk/meet someone or something actualy able to..ya know, look at a primarch and not die in mere seconds.

Quoted from QM, I don't know what counts as tough enough to take on a young Primarch.

Rolled 9 (1d20)

Rollan

>>40252025
I think that's a Nob so we should be good.

well we are not the Primarch of Crit, that's for sure

>>40252117
Looks like a Mega-Nob to me, but I don't know the specifics.

Without hesitation you focus and pull the trigger, firing off a trio of bolts directly at his head. The Ork moved surprisingly fast for one of his size, having been hit by one bolt before his klaw managed to block the other three. He moves the claw from his face, a ruin of blood and bone with an extremely angry look. He opens and closes his claw one time before charging you angrily.

"WAAAAAGH!!!"

You immediately open fire again, bolts blowing away chunks of armor and even flesh as he rushes you without fear. The Ork nears and raises his claw before slamming it down and crushing the rock you were just standing on. You already dived backwards, sliding along the ground as you loose five more bolts. Despite the fact he should be dead several times over, he merely staggers back angrily while blood and flesh leak out of his wounds.

(12 bolts left)

>Dump the rest of the belt into him
>Aim for his head again
>Grab a choppa quickly and prepare to fight
>Head into a wall tunnel and attempt to trick him
>Move down towards the slaves in hopes of getting more guns to bear on him
>Write in
(Roll a d20)

Rolled 14 (1d20)

>>40252201
>Aim for his head again

>>40252201
Aim for his head again, but don't aim where it is, aim where it's going to be.

>>40252201
>Head into a wall tunnel and attempt to trick him

Rolled 17 (1d20)

>>40252201
>>Aim for his head again

Rolled 13 (1d20)

>>40252201

Rolled 10 (1d20)

>>40252201
>>Aim for his head again

Rolled 14 (1d20)

>>40252201

>Aim for his head again

Won't miss this time

Rolled 5 (1d20)

>>40252201
I just want to roll.

>>40252291
>Won't miss this time
we are off to a rip-roaring debut here

>>40252201
>>Grab a choppa quickly and prepare to fight

>>40252345
shit sorry I misread the die. Didn't realize it was a d20

>>40252322
Well your rolls don't mean jackshit if you don't pick an option

Rolled 4 (1d20)

>>40252201
>Headshot!

Rolled 6 (1d20)

>>40252379
Are you in charge?

>>40252399
Stop behaving like a 12 year old. Not even that anon.

Rolled 3 (1d20)

>>40252417
Are YOU in charge?

>>40252434
Fag

Rolled 17 (1d20)

>>40252456
No thanks, I don't smoke.

>>40252434
You sure as hell aren't.

>>40252474
Of course I'm not.

I lack the talent and creativity to be a QM.

>>40252473
>>40252473
Finally you roll something good, to bad it's a waste

Rolled 3 (1d20)

>>40252502
I just want to roll.

I don't care if it is valid or not.

>>40252541
Go do it in a different thread then, Please quit moving this one towards bump limit

>>40252541
Then why don't you go to some dice program instead of bumping the thread to death?

>>40252201
What's taking him so long?

>>40253418
Ded OP

>>40253418
internet's been shitty for quite a few QMs lately.

Right at the good part to

Rolled 9 (1d20)

>>40252201
>>Aim for his head again

Rolled 2 (1d20)

>>40253770
>and again

someone mind archiving, OP is obviously kill

archived
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/40245256/

Just wanted to bump and apologize for falling asleep. This will continue later around five or six, that way all the anons can be here and miss nothing.

>>40257514

You going to make a new thread or continue this one?

>>40257541
probably best to make a new one, this threads at 283 posts with barely any life left in it

>>40257541
Continue this one and finish what we started. Due to my sins against anonkind and the glorious Emperor I shall repent and give you all a longer couple of post before I end this.

>>40257586

This thread may not exist by the time you start running again.

I appreciate the sentiment but starting a fresh thread is most practical

>>40257966
Well I plan on bumping every now and then, finishing up when everyone gets here, then making a new thread. Thats the plan anyway.

Bump for final post.

Amother bump.

>>40261241
Pretty sure we're just waitin on you to restart the thread mate

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Do we ever encounter some kind of 'kor phaeron' style character that we can bro-out with and watch all father-like as we help them ascend to marine-hood when we eventually take over our legion?

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Since we're a very mentally-minded primarch and have shown an adeptness at dissembling and restructuring machinery, is this going to cause problems with AdMech further down the line? I can imagine them getting butthurt when we start tinkering with our legion tech to make it better.

>>40262536
>I can imagine them getting butthurt when we start tinkering with our legion tech to make it better.

>Sol just stares at them for a whole fucking day....Not even blinking....
>Mfw we just beat the Admech at a staring contest.......

>>40262536

The AdMech are less retarded in 30k, but I can definitely see them getting pissed off

>>40262501
10/10 would use as Imperial Army pic.

Ill decide when we reach that point. As a matter of fact ill just restart the thread...at six. For now use this as discussion I guess.

>>40262536
Probs, but your a primarch in 30k. If they can trick out other legions tech then as long as you keep a tech priest or two around they shouldnt mind too much.

>>40262536
Well if the AdMech wants to get pissy because we invent superior technology and find ways to duplicate STCS then they can be pissy. We wont need them after we've turned this planet into our own forge world after all. That aside I do not think they have quite gone technology bananas yet and still are somewhat reasonable.

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>>40262611
>>40262592
>>40262638
>>40262655

I'd imagine Sol would realize that they're pretty touchy on the tinkering and just make small adjustments that'd be hard to notice. Though in the end our legion is doomed, so this could be one problem in a line of problems that led to our downfall.

>Sol starts getting angry at AdMech because they are being less than efficient.
>Pisses Admech off, breaks off ties with them and relies on legion forge worlds and manufactorums
>Only wants to fight at maximum efficiency
>Everyone else see's it as him breaking off ties and teetering on the edge of secession.

>>40262741
Wait it's guaranteed that daddy will turn on us and wipe us out? Because that would be kind of shitty.

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>>40262741 here

I'm Sorry Kraven I'll shut up now, my brain is running on a whole other line of thought. Don't mean to derail

>>40262792
I havent pre planned how we end or anything. Considering its 30k, we could roll a d100 and have each number be a reason(logical or bull)for pur legion to be obliterated from history.

>>40262834

No reason to follow the Canon, things are more fun if Russ falls to Chaos and Mortarion ends up being a huge bro.

>>40262741
This quest my chance the story we my see the horus heresy

Alright im writing up thread four intro right now.

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>>40262834
That would be a big, deliciously evil list to write, though our end should reflect our legion's actions somewhat.

>>40262875
And I feel it'd be better keeping it in the normal canon, would feel like it's lifting the veil on the mystery of the XIth legion.

>>40262834
Seems like a kinda shitty thing to leave to the dice tbh

I don't like the idea that we are destined to all get killed off at all. Takes out player choice and renders our actions moot if we are getting killed no matter what we do.

>>40263037
Its all about the journey, not the destination. We all know we're going to die, it just matters what we do until that day.

>>40263037
Yeah seems kinda shitty tbh.....

>>40263037
Just dropped in to say that there is no guarantee we will be killed at all, let alone our legion obliterated because of heresy or something. Heck we could have been obliterated from history because the emperor needed a secret weapon for a terrible future he saw that was very possible(end times 40k). In the end im trying to keep us away from death, and give us a plausible reason to be wiped from history.

Also theres like...40-100 threads before we even reach that point, so dont worry about it.

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>>40263037
>>40263090
It's just a Greek tragedy story, like >>40263079
said, it's about what we did with the short life our legion had that matters. Maybe influencing other primarchs with bro-ships, helping turn the tide of a great battle no-one knew we were at. All the while knowing that with great sadness our great deeds and victories will go unsung.

At the end of the day that'll be decided by the choices we make and the way Kraven tells the story. I'm just happy that I'm along for the ride.

Pls no meta

>>40263037
Not necessarily iirc the 2 unknown legions records were wiped from history. It doesn't mention us all getting killed, so it's equally likely our legion gets fed up with how big E runs stuff and we just take our legion far away from the imperium and start doing our own thing.

>>40263037
That's wrong. While the ending has been written, the journey is still the most important part. We will end up being wiped from the history books, but why? Why will that happen? That is what makes it interesting.

>>40263385
>Mfw our legion is the original Death Watch......

Its up >>40263494

>>40263297

I dunno, this also kind of forces us to follow the Canon storyline of how the Heresy happened in all that. If we can't change what happened, why play the Quest at all?

We should have free reign to act in character and have those choices change the setting naturally, not artificially adhere to the established storyline