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A few reps. Thats all you need to do then your done. You crouch, the weight not needing help when it comes to pushing you down, and take a few more deep breaths in and out. You can do this, you're not a weakling or a runt! You crouch low, the heavy weighy feeling like its going to break you, and then start breathing more calmly. Your body burns from exertion, but you sincerely hope its up for some more. You push yourself up, the strength of your body supporting you as the weight leaves the top of your head and continues up into the air.

You dont stop pushing until once again the weight is above you with your arms straight up. Alright thats one rep of hard as hell weight lifting, onto the next. You do a few more reps, at least 3 or 4, and dont stop until you feel that you might give out. Well that was...fun to say the leasts. You wait for the panel to materialize in front of you before speaking through gritted teeth.

"End training."

The panel disperses, and for a second you think your stuck with the weight before it dissolves into air. You let your arms fall to the side as you breath heavily. That was hard, to say the leasts, and your covered from head to hoof in sweat as it pours down your body. Well that may have been fun but your REALLY tired right now.

>Go get some sleep, maybe go to the kitchen and find food as well.
>Go back to working out
>Other
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>>39413095
>Other
go get a shower then
>Go get some sleep, maybe go to the kitchen and find food as well.
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>>39413095
>Go back to working out
Medium this time and go for awhile?
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Stat sheet:
Feltara, Champion of Rhiannon
Half-and-Half Minotauress

Height: 15ft
Body type:
>Very Muscular (with extra aesthetics, according to the first time we drank the milk)
>Extremely Busty
>Covered in Mystical, Living Tattoos
>Heavily glowing eyes
>Enlarged Horns

Spells known: (Must be concentrated on to use)
>Concussive Blast
>Iron Flesh
>Cleavage of Holding
>Storm bolts
>Empowerment

Passive Magic:
>Mesmerizing Appearance
>Fluids of Power (Healing and Empowerment from milk)

Scrolls:
>Ice Trap Spells
>Healing Spells
>Body Enhancement Spells
>Raw Magic Spells
>Glamour Spells

Equipment:
>Tower of Rhiannon (Heavily enchanted plate and mail armor)
>Masterwork Hammer
>The Queens Fist(Powerful Right hand Gauntlet)
>Various Sorceress Robes

Thralls, Servants, and forces:
>Ven (Living Tattoos, Jester manifestation of Feltera)
>Two Ravenguard
>Hereshiel (castle-bound runeborn Paladin Elf)
>Devrelia (ChainHeart Human Mage)
>Current Followers/Residents: 480

Bases, Territory, and Locations:
>God-Built Magitech Flying Castle
>Infinite City Around The Castle
>Former Slave Bazaar With Surrounding Barrier

Misc. Effects:
>Actions manifest Godegg
>Impregnated (Keidran, Incubus)
>All milk from you and Ven sent to goddess

Archive: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=minotauress+quest
Twitter: https://twitter.com/seeker12789?s=09
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>>39413095
>>39413163
this
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>>39413095
>Take a shower
>Go get some sleep, maybe go to the kitchen and find food as well
>Make Hereshiel give you a massage again

This time because we need it as opposed to lewd teasings.

We should do a light routine in the morning as well before trying the final challenge.
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>>39413181
Hey Zevol you kinda forgot the passive MInotaur Genes trait and the other one which makes us get bigger in battle the more blood we spill
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>>39413095
>>Go back to working out
Perhaps you don't understand when I say HUEG.
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>>39413246
First one for sure but I'm not certain what the status was on the second one. What with the bickering last thread about us being 15ft tall already.

Though I think it would be cool if done right transmitting from 'Oh shit that's a huge minotaur kicking ass' into 'Oh fuck that's a giant decimating entire platoons'
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>>39413246
We dont have the get bigger in battle one, but we do have minogenes(GemBreaker is what it shall be called)

>>39413276
>>39413167
Were not getting any bigger ok?! Muscles arent getting huger, were not getting taller, were just toned.
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>>39413307
I think its a genial reference to HUGE QUEST, a /tg/ classic

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n0wqhdZn4v0&ab_channel=PlagueOfGripes
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>>39413095
>Go back to working out
Only when our body faints, will we have our rest!
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>>39413095
>Other
Get a shower. Sleeping while sweaty and sticky? Really?
then go to sleep
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>>39413299
Change it to a Zerking one instead then? The more blood we spill the battle the stronger we get, Temporarily though
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>>39413418
Technically speaking we already have that when we see red, which is coincidentally the color of most bloods
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>>39413163
>>39413219
>>39413236
>>39413409
Could we possessively use our own milk instead, as a way to boost our energy, allowing us to continue pumping up?
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>>39413435
.....Y'know Greek mythology makes ALOT more sense now.....
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>>39413475
I'd rather not tbh, Feels like cheating if we can forever get stronger by just drinking our milk
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>>39413475
No.

Have you ever visited a gym in your life? That is not how you go about working out.
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>>39413095
Seconding >>39413163 and now I need sleep too.
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Really guys? You're going to samefag THIS early?
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>>39413556
Yeah someone's goin hard
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>>39413576
And they aren;t even doing a good job of it...Anyone who looks at the postercount and counts how many votes there are can tell their is samefagging.....
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>>39413603
my postcount reads 11, is there something wrong with it?
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>>39413095
>>39413236
This.

I assume we're keepin the ring in our cleavage?

And ya forgot to add in the new Hammer to the statsheet.
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>>39413648
What IS in our cleavage dimension right now? Just that one set of robes? Oh, and some scrolls too I think?
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>>39413640
8 posters anon.....8 posters
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>>39413673
I'm seeing 12 now
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>>39413668
The scrolls, I believe. We really should find time for some book learnin', after we come back from our next bout of righteous bloodshed.
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You turn around and walk off the platform. At the bottom is Ven, who is smiling at you while her staff is on the ground.

"Nice work out! How about you actually do more than four reps next time?"

She giggles as you walk by her, too tired to care about her words. She moves next to you quickly and walks while talking to you. Her upbeat attitude has never been lost it seems.

"So now that you've gotten ripped, and after you take your shower, do you want me to take the final test?"

"I barely beat the birds on the hard setting, what makes you think you can fight them, let alone beat them, when tbey are actually fighting at their hardest?"

"Well for one im not slow, and two they havent fought me! I have alot more tricks up my sleeves than you after all, no matter how strong we have gotten."

You simply sigh as you are Teleported to the shower room entrance. Luckily no one is around to see you sweaty and nakrd, so you just head inside at first until you realize Ven isnt following. You look back to see her whistling and twirling her staff.

"And your not coming in because...?"

"Cause I dont need to take a bath. Duh! But if you need company i will surely be there for you."

You roll your eye's, turn, and walk into the shower room as Ven waits outside. You need to bathe then sleep, worrying about Ven can come later.

>Cont
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>>39413898


its nearly time.
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>>39414089
ANTS! A SPELL FOR ANTS!
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>>39414112


>not recognizing icons on sight.
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>>39414072
>missed opportunity for some sweet shower self-cest

I'll get you, He-man!
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>>39414218
Goddamn now i'm listening to this again....SUFFER MY PAIN!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=on73VDlWAcA
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>>39414072
>"So now that you've gotten ripped, and after you take your shower, do you want me to take the final test?"
>"I barely beat the birds on the hard setting, what makes you think you can fight them, let alone beat them, when tbey are actually fighting at their hardest?"
>"Well for one im not slow, and two they havent fought me! I have alot more tricks up my sleeves than you after all, no matter how strong we have gotten."

You know what? It's actually not a bad idea to make HER take the 'Skill' test; it's right up her fuckin' alley! It's 'us' taking the test, essentially, using a 'Mirror Self' spell.
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We dead?
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>>39415400
Hope not.
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>>39415558
OP probably fell asleep or fainted again, he's been running for a long time

I'm just about to collapse into bed too
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Ah, well. Mandatory bump, 'til morning, fellas.
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One more bump.
Now, sleep.
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Bump
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Bumpety bump
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Bumpin'
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For those i cherish, I write in glory!

Sorry guys fainted...again
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>You are Ven

As Feltera goes into the showers you smile wider than normal. Now that she is no longer watching you, you can go complete the test! That or do something else. Really as long as it helps what is basically your twin body and mind it should be fine. And hey, she even took your suggestion on nipple piercings, and now the goddess is getting stronger. In all honesty though you quite like your piercings, and now your breasts dont leak but are always full of milk. Maybe you should give some to yourself so see shes that being flexible is better than being just strong. You twirl your staff as you walk down the hall to take the test. You feel Feltera recovering as she takes a bath and already know shes going to be in there for 12 minutes, which happens to be just enough time for you to beat the ravens!

Since you are basically Feltera minus the muscle and minotaur parts, you teleport directly into the tower once again. Its still empty, which is dissapointing as you really liked that Verelio thing. Oh well, you ignore the crossing thought and walk through the left door, where the pedestal with its dial sits. It across from where you stand is the gold and metal door, still closed fully. Well its time to earn the right to see whats behind apparently. You flip forward through the air, then flip a few more times before landing with your staff on the ground and the rest of hanging in the air as you use only a finger to hold you up.

Loving your acrobatics, you flip off of your staff, and look down at the pedestal smiling.

>Turn the test on now
>Go do something else instead(insert)
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Zetol, update your twitter and stop fainting.
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>>39418872
Just did update twitter. Top kek go check.
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>>39418866
>>Turn the test on now

This will either make us more powerful or teach Ven some humility.
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>>39418866
>Go do something else instead (set some magic traps, no one said it has to be fair )

>>39418877
Touchè
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>>39418866
>turn the test on now
>take a quick drink before starting

Ho boy.
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Sorry i fainted again. Writing
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>>39419482
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>>39419482
Please, take some rest.
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Time to get some work done. You touch the dial with your staff, and push it to test four. The pedestal glows, raises up, and then dissapears back into the floor. You patiently wait, twirling your staff around in the air, and soon the ravens are here! Both in their armor, but with swords in one hand and spears with shields attached to them in the other. Looks like they came ready to fight, and so did you. Since they are fast and strong you feel they will be a nice test of your body.

You twirl your staff around one last time and stand with a hand on your hip.

"Well birdies? Think you can beat the jester?"

>3d100 tg
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Rolled 24, 38, 57 = 119 (3d100)

>>39419748
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Rolled 83, 4, 41 = 128 (3d100)

>>39419748
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Rolled 65, 46, 4 = 115 (3d100)

>>39419748
rolling
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>>39419748
Rolls for cute fight after our alter ego discovers what we did, resulting in angry hatesex!
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>>39419924
>Self-Cest
Have you no morals?!

Explain what would happen
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>>39419991
Lots of rubbing.
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>>39419991
She's everything we're not, right?

Therefor, she has a dick that's just our size.
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>>39420171
NO! BAD!
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Anyway...writing
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>>39420246
Sorry I can't participate more, I'm at work, but just wanna say keep up the good stuff and I'm reading!
Also self-'exploration' when
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>>39419991

Imagine a jock trying to bully the clown of the classroom, who's just trolling and moking him. Except that they're both girl, naked and sexy
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I'd honestly rather NOT fuck ourselves...I was fine with the threesome with Hereshy but it's fucking weird if only Ven and us do it.....
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The birds charge you first, spears pointed at you while their swords are held low for upward strikes. You smile wide and grip your staff with both hands. This looks like it will be really fun! The birds are both upon you at the same time and one stabs at your chest while the other stabs at your legs. Seeing their attack, you spin your staff and catch both spears simultaneously in your staff.

The birds arent daunted though. They immediately bring their glowing swords around, one slashing at your face while the other goes for your legs. This is where Feltera would have either taken the attack or attempted to blast them away. Too bad for them, your not Feltera. You pull back and side flip from the attack, two swords slicing through where you used to be. Upon landing you point your staff and fire off a ball of energy between them. It explodes into purple smoke, and the two birds are blinded tenporarily.

Pushing the advantage you run in and spin before kicking one in the helmet and sending him flying, while attempting to hit the other with your staff. He blocks with your spear, and you reverse spin out of his attack only to attempt to hit him and have your staff caught. You parry another strike of his blade, then more as they just keep coming. The other bird soon joins in the smoke fight, and your spinning and blocking strike after strike from both of them. One spins and his long bladed ribbons wrap around your staff arm, while the other charges with his spear, aiming to skewer you.

D100
>Attempt to block
>Burst him away
>Another blast of smoke
>You still have the strength of Feltera, since you are her after all. Fling the other into his twin
>Flip over the other bird
>Kick him
>How about a magic trick?
>Other
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Rolled 83 (1d100)

>>39420780

>Use the ribbons to bring the guy to you, and use him as human (more or less) shield against the spear
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Rolled 96 (1d100)

>>39420780
>You still have the strength of Feltera, since you are her after all. Fling the other into his twin
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Rolled 95 (1d100)

>>39420780
>>39420830
This
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>>39420830
>>39420844
>>39420867

Holy Rhiannon those rolls
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>>39420891
Rhiannon want us to stop fucking around and get shit done.
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>>39420891
Rhiannon obviously wants us to slap a bitch!
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>>39420830
Goin with this
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Zetol fainted again, didn't he?
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>>39421592
He should really just take a week off to relax and get this thoughts in order.
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>>39421592
Either that or he's typing, and forgot to mention it. Let's hope it's the latter.
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>>39421654
Second, come one Zetol you can't run everyday. You'll get slow and sloppy.
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You turn around, showing the other bird your back, and grip the ribbons wrapped around your arm. You pull hard and the other bird is brought to you by his shoulder, and you grip his other one as the bird behind you nears. You then spin with him and put him directly in the path of his twins spear. The twin is already too close to attack, so he moves his spear and instead skewers his brothers shoulder with crystal tip. The bird doesnt make a sound surprisingly, but they both seemed frozen as if in disbelief. Taking the advantage you pull the brother off of his brothers spear and throw him to the ground. You then blast the other bird away, sending him sailing through the air, and then turn to the one on the ground. He is already back on his feet with spear and sword, and he charges you immediately without hesitation.

D100 defense roll, then roll a d100 for action

>DUEL
>Blast him
>Sweep him off his feet then spam your staff down
>Playing cards
>Othet
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Rolled 58, 20 = 78 (2d100)

>>39422044
>Sweep him off his feet then spam your staff down
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Sorry i got caught up in meat space and literally unable to type on phone til now.
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Rolled 24, 55 = 79 (2d100)

>>39422044
>Sweep him off his feet then spam your staff down
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Rolled 100, 8 = 108 (2d100)

>>39422044
>>Sweep him off his feet then spam your staff down
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Rolled 48, 22 = 70 (2d100)

>>39422044

>Sweep him off his feet then spam your staff down

>CARD GAMES ON MOTORCYCLES
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>>39422096
>Nat 100 defense roll
Dem staff skills.
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Rolled 44, 33 = 77 (2d100)

>>39422044
>Sweep him off his feet then spam your staff down
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>>39422074
...meat space?
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>>39422161
Real life. Just something i say.
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>>39422096
(Pic related)
(Won a rigged card game, and the thugs got up to attack him)
"Four of us beats one o' YOU"
"Alright, I've got an ace in the hole; that makes me the winner."

Police Squad, if anyone's curious

God bless Leslie Nielson.
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>>39422196
So be it.
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So can Ven disperse into runes at will or is that only when she's entering or leaving Feltera?
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>>39422258
Only when entering or leaving.
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writing
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You raise your staff and prepare to block his strikes. He stabs first with his spear, and you smack it away easier than expected. It flies out of his hand and he grips his sword with both hands. He swipes down and you block it before flipping back from his next strike that sends a wave of energy out from the blade. The bird isnt playing games anymore it seems. His blade glowing an intense blue, the bird sweeps his blade sideways as you move your staff into the way.

The resulting shockwave is quite large, and his hit is heavier and stronger than normal. Your opponent proceeds to send a flurry of blows your way, each easily deflected by you as you laugh is in his face. This is almost pitiful, to think you almost lost to him in a easier test! He pulls back and attempts to pierce your chest, but you lean all the way back, then hold yourself with your hands as a foot kicks him in the face. He stumbles back, and you spin on a hand to a crouching position before pushing off towards his side.

Your staff sweeps and knocks his feet right from under him, causing him to land with a loud crash. You jump backwards and land on his chest, raising your staff to finish him, when a number of projectiles hit you and send you flying through the air. You land on your feet and look up only to have the other bird slam into you with your shield. If you felt pain that wouldve hurt, but instead it loosens your physical form. Your caught on his shield, and he raises you into the air before hurling you down hard. You smile as he flies down at you with his spear raised to kill.

2d100. First is defense, second is option.

>Explosive card
>Stun card
>Regular(magical)cards
>Card shield
>Card weapon(insert)
>Try to hit him with your staff first
>Flip out of the way then slam your staff on his head
>Magical blast to the face
>Other
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Rolled 44, 14 = 58 (2d100)

>>39422836
>Stun card
then
>Flip out of the way then slam your staff on his head
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Rolled 51, 96 = 147 (2d100)

>>39422836
>stun card
Then counter if possible
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Rolled 25, 34 = 59 (2d100)

>>39422868
Second
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Rolled 43, 66 = 109 (2d100)

>>39422836

Seconding >>39422894
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Rolled 24, 97 = 121 (2d100)

>>39422836
>Magical blast to the face
*achoo
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>>39422894
>>39422894
backing
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>All these 90's

Writing. So how do you all like Ven?
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>>39423176
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>>39423176
Pretty good, She's a nice contrast to Feltera
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>>39423176
Bretty gud. Would like to see more interaction back and forth between her and Feltera. And of course Hereshiel, interested to see if she's more overtly into him than Feltera is
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>>39423237
I dont know why, but this made me laugh so hard.
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>>39423176
I like her, joyful and crazy.
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>>39423301
ditto
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>>39423176

She's not bad by herself, but she always seems ... out-of-context, to me.
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>>39423237
>>39423247
>>39423266
>>39423307
Alright that shows im doing one thing right. What makes her so likeable?

>>39423339
Explain so that i may take your observations and criticism into view in an attempt to improve her characterization and my writing.
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>>39423456
Just generally interesting and a good foil to the usual moderately extreme stoicism.
plus jester girls are cute/hot
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>>39423456
Wasn't one part of Rhiannon's tenants 'Know Thyself'? It's interesting that Feltera has to deal with this in such a literal way...
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>>39423456

>Explain so that i may take your observations and criticism into view in an attempt to improve her characterization and my writing.

Well, in my opinion, the problem with Ven is that she seems to walk through the story, but without really interacting with it. I mean, she trolled us a couple of time, mocked a couple of people, stood there looking pretty during one of our speeches, and has convinced us of something that was a strange but obvious solution.

These are not things that I consider necessary to the story. I'm really sorry, but to me, none of her contributions really add something to the narrative. Feltera already dealt with her subconcious before, we didn't learn anything about the other characters based on their interactions with Ven, and now she is doing things that Feltera can do.

Basically, she is just a jester version of Feltera who is kinda there, or a comic relief in a narrative that make her unnecessary.

Note that it doesn't meant I don't like her as a character. It's just I don't see why she is here.
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You smile wider as you think of your next trick. You have a surprise in store for this raven, just got to time it right. You roll out of the way as he skewers the ground with the spear, making a wide hole in it. You get to your feet as he speeds across the ground and attempts to stab you again, but you have your surprise ready. A card appears in your hands as he nears. You disperse your staff and grab his spear just below the tip and pull him towards you while thrusting forward with the card.

It connects with his chest and a number of strings shoot out and wrap around him, tying his arms to his sides and causing him to drop his weapons as the strings connect to the ground and hold him up. You then materialize your staff and smack him upside the head, knocking his helmet off and revealing his bird face. Behind you there is a small wooshing sound, the other bird flying towards you, you assume.

D100 defense roll
>Move and have him hit his brother
>Spin and kick him in mid flight
>Drop some smoke
>Blast him with your staff without turning around
>Flip into the air, land on his back, and put a card on his back
>Other

D100 attack roll
>Knock the tied down bird around until he is out cold
>Charge your staff up and hit him in the head
>Put a card on him
>Other
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Rolled 70, 15 = 85 (2d100)

>>39424129
>Move and have him hit his brother
>Knock the tied down bird around until he is out cold
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>>39423928
Wouldnt it be cool if every paladin/cleric/holy knight of Rhiannon had their opposite embodied as a helper or something? Some thing which can help them out in times of physical and mental distress? Really puts the Self in Self-Reliance.

>>39424009
I plan for her to become more meaningful later on but for now your basically correct. Ven is just...here as Jester Feltera, but thats only temporarily. If i dont screw up and fail at writing/life she will be more than Jester Feltera i promise.

Really she hasnt been here for more than 1-2 threads, gimme some time to make her meaningful. Also im kinda aiming for her to be the side of Feltera that addresses Feltera's problems and thoughts since she properly expresses emotions and things. The part about Hereshiel last thread was supposed to be an example of Ven confronting an issue that Feltera was dealing with. Also she is a nice foil and good way to get those OOC choices in there.
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Rolled 37, 22 = 59 (2d100)

>>39424129
>Blast him with your staff without turning around
>Charge your staff up and hit him in the head
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Rolled 12, 19 = 31 (2d100)

>>39424129
>>Move and have him hit his brother
>>39424129
>Charge your staff up and hit him in the head
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>>39424178
>>39424129
>>39424369
Changing my vote to this
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>>39424178
>>39424417
shall I roll a d100 for knocking him around?
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>>39424281

>ra, but thats only temporarily. If i dont screw up and fail at writing/life she will be more than Jester Feltera i promise.

Really she hasnt been here for more than 1-2 threads, gimme some time to make her meaningful

Well, you managed to make characters attention-grabbing in one paragraph, so having her being kinda there clashes somewhat.

Also, I think that she is too similar to Feltera to be a foil. I mean, she's more outspoken, less serious.. and that's it. Feltera and Ven always agree with each others, in the end, and their way to deal with things aren't that different.
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Rolled 18, 98 = 116 (2d100)

>>39424129
>move and have him hit his brother
>charge your staff and hit him in the head
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>>39424281
>Wouldnt it be cool if every paladin/cleric/holy knight of Rhiannon had their opposite embodied as a helper or something? Some thing which can help them out in times of physical and mental distress? Really puts the Self in Self-Reliance.

Maybe only when they reach a certain power level. The tattoos could be awarded to really powerful followers.
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>>39424462
To be fair they're goals should actually be perfectly aligned considering it's the same conciousness.
I think the primary reason for her is as OP said, to be the expression of emotion that normally wouldn't be expected from the main character. As was argued before when considering her being involved in Hersh stuff, I don't think she should be viewed entirely as a different character considering her origins
It wouldn't make sense if deep down she and Feltera straight up disagreed on something, just the way it's gone about
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>>39424129
>>39424178
>>39424468

Shit, 70 and 98

she's gonna knock that damn bird's head off.

Captcha: Defit

Baller
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>>39424560
>she's gonna knock that damn bird's head off.
hopefully not, we need our bodyguards intact and healthy after this so they can do their job
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>>39424543

Yes, that's what I'm saying. She's not as much a different character than trickster mode Feltera, if you forgive my homestuck, while regular Feltera is still around
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Wait, do we know what we get for passing this test? Should our bigger-half be here as well if it's a blessing of sorts?

Can we like, mind-message her or something?
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Writing.

Just realized there are way too many female characters and not enough guys. Now im debating whether the next person should be a guy or a girl. What do you all think?

>>39424699
Yeah sure
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>>39424749
We've got the brutal berzerker, the mystical cleric, the prissy paladin and the bombastic (and busty) bard.
We need a 2edgy4you ranger or rogue, or a perverted old wizard.
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>>39424749

It is a good idea. Maybe a hafling or dwarf tanky type.
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>>39424821
>or a perverted old wizard.
No, please no.
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>>39424847
>Maybe a hafling or dwarf tanky type.
they wouldn't even reach our knee's...
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>>39424821
But we already have a wizard, Plus we're already the dps/tank and i'm pretty sure Ven is also something akin to a rogue along with her bardic duties
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>>39424749
Please don't listen any suggestions.
Need a cute pet/mascotte
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>>39424869
There's a significant possibility we've accidentally stepped on a half long if they exist in this world. We wouldn't even notice.
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>>39424749
A Rogue Shota that despite his mental maturity, swears like a sailor.
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>>39425077
>shota
Leave.
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>>39425077
>Shota
Get the fuck out
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How about a midget that thinks he's a dwarf?
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>>39425077
No and go kill yourself.
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>>39425136
I thought we told you to get the fuck out you piece of shit
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>>39424749
Aren't the Raven's 'guys'? Plus, during/after the pregnancy period, we could be introduced to one of the most promising (male) paladins; a warrior who has an exceptional natural talent for his new powers.
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>>39425136
Just no.
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>>39425150
[spoiler[The question is, Which son is going to be the paladin and which is going to be the cleric....
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>>39424749
Another guy would be nice. Especially since the other anons are probably going to put Hersh into a dress.

>>39424281
In my own opinion, Ven would represent 'the road not taken.' In my headcanon she's as tall as we are, but lithe rather than muscular. She is much more flexible, both mentally and physically. She has Feltaras persistant stubborness but is more likely to dodge obsticles rather than smash through them. This alows for mechanical differances as well, allowing her to address different problems and use different skills to do so than the MC.
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Dont worry im not kill. Just had post deleted twice by phone writing ok?
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>>39425552
Just why are you posting from a phone anyways?
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You smoothly move to the side as you hear the sound of air. The bird flies by you and has to fly up to not hit his brother, but not before his large wings hit you in the head. Fortunately it doesnt hurt, but if it did it probably wouldve knocked you out. You ignore the bird for now, your more focused on his struggling brother. You bring your staff back and charge it with energy. The staff starts vibrating as it is filled with raw energy.

"So bird! If you talk i might hit you so hard that you become a headless chicken. If you dont talk ill definetly hit you that hard. You have two seconds!"

"..."

"Figures."

You reer back and slam your staff into the bird's head, not hard enough to kill it of course but hopefully enough to knock it out. The birds jead snaps to the left and its eye's close as its mouth hangs open. You move close and make sure you didnt kill it, quite happy that you didnt, and then feel something in your side. You look down with confusion to see the other birds spear going straight through you, causing arcane letters and symbols to flow out of your 'wound'.

"Woops, im naked! Allow me to fix that real quick."

You hit the bird with your staff, hard enough to knock him off his spear, then pull it out annoyed. Well this sucks, guess you gotta win quickly now. You watch as it raises its sword and awaits your approach. You speed towards it and your weapons clash with a loud sparking sound.

"Lets go birdy."

Duel time! D100

>Push the offensive!
>Defend against his attacks
>Try to trip him up
>Magic cards
>Disarm him and go for straight hand to hand combat
>Other
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Rolled 8 (1d100)

>>39426120
>Magic cards

the damage or hits we take better not be transfering to Feltara
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Rolled 28 (1d100)

>>39426120
>Disarm him and go straight hand to hand combat

SECRET MOVE!
BREAST-SUFFOCATION CQC TECHNIQUE!
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>>39425077
>Shota
Seriously? I mean, no, seriously?
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>>39426120
>push the offensive!

Let's send a blip to our musclebrained alter-ego as well to get in here too
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Rolled 72 (1d100)

Tattoo whips of 1 million zillion lashings.
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>>39426120
>Push the offensive!
GO GO GO!
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>>39426120
>>Push the offensive!
>>Magic cards
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You go all out on the bird, your staff a blur as it whirls through the air. The bird matches each strike blow for blow, not giving any ground as you smash away at him. You swipe at his feet and he jumps into the air before kicking you back with both feet. You fly back and skid across the ground, and then flip backwards as a blast of magic hits where you just were. The bird isnt holding anything back now, he slides across the ground and spins, his ribbons slicing fast through the air. One slices into your shoulder, arcane letters and symbols coming out of it, while you manage to deflect the others. As he nears he jumps over you and lands in a crouch before stabs into the back of your leg.

"Hey! Dont mess up the goods!"

You kick back and connect with his chest, and he slides across the floor before flipping himself up. The bird then spreads his wings and flies over to his brother. He picks up the other sword, turns back to you, and walks towards you slowly with his wings wide behind him. You charge at him and sweep your staff, but he moves back surprisingly fast before moving forward and slashing at you rapidly with both blades. His assault is fast and furious, stabbing and slicing all over your front despite your attempts to block him. Soon your leaking from multiple wounds, and you try to move back from him.

The bird isnt willing to let you escape though. He dashes forward with both blades, dodges your attack, and skewers you through the stomach before lifting you in the air on his blades. This may not hurt, but its getting increasingly harder to keep your grasp on your form. You pull back and punch him in the face, sending him staggering back, then rip the blades out and throw them to the side. Two large wounds spew out energy and letters as you frown at the bird.

D100

>Hand to hand combat
>Keep at range with your cards
>Make some smoke then attack
>Charge him with your staff
>Other
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Rolled 35 (1d100)

>>39427078
>Keep at range with your cards
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Rolled 51 (1d100)

>>39427078
>Make some smoke then go for a massive sneak attack

He made the jester stop smiling.
Never, ever make the jester stop smiling.
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>>39427139
>>39427078
second
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Rolled 31 (1d100)

>>39427078
>Make some smoke then attack
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Rolled 17 (1d100)

>>39427139
gonna go with this one, we gotta finish this fight quick
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Rolled 63 (1d100)

>>39427078
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Rolled 5 (1d100)

>>39427078
>>39427139
this
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Rolled 56 (1d100)

>>39427139
Sixth'd
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Thats it, this is no longer funny. No one messes up your body, and your not going to get beat by a bird of all things! Besides you came to pass the test as a gift for yourself and for Feltera, letting a bird get in the way of that is quite stupid. You raise your staff, leap towards the bird, and when he expects you to strike you slam your staff into the ground. There is a large burst of colored smoke, and you move back into it as the bird searches for you. He looks around, crouched as he listens for your movement. You move quickly and silently, the smoke wrapping around you and blocking his sight, not stopping until your right behind him. You start twirling your staff in one hand, the other on your hip, and walk towards him slowly as the energy builds up.

"Hey bird!"

It turns around just in time to be hit directly in the face by your enhanced strike. The bird flies through the air and lands on its back with a loud crashing sound. You stay in the smoke, waiting for it to rise, and stay there until you hear a voice out of nowhere.

"Test four. Passed."

The test passed and the birds both out cold, you disperse the smoke and lean on your staff. That bird did a number on your body. Your leaking energy from your wounds and staying physical is becoming increasingly hard. As you try to steady yourself there is a loud click, and you see the gold set of metal doors glow. Well at least they're open now.

>Go check it out. You can still stay corporeal for a while longer at least
>Call Feltera to you. She is fully cleaned and dressed but about to go to sleep. Maybe whatever is beyond the door will wake her up when she sees its...magnificence or whatever
>Disperse and go back to Feltera with the knowledge that you won the fight. Your going to be out of order for a bit, but you can recover there
>Other
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>>39427599
If the doors won't close if we don't check it out now then
>Disperse and go back to Feltera with the knowledge that you won the fight. Your going to be out of order for a bit, but you can recover there
but if they will then do
>Go check it out. You can still stay corporeal for a while longer at least
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>>39427599
>Call Feltera to you. She is fully cleaned and dressed but about to go to sleep. Maybe whatever is beyond the door will wake her up when she sees its...magnificence or whatever

Honey, bring the car around.
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>>39427599
>Call Feltera to you. She is fully cleaned and dressed but about to go to sleep. Maybe whatever is beyond the door will wake her up when she sees its...magnificence or whatever
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>>39427599
>>Disperse and go back to Feltera with the knowledge that you won the fight. Your going to be out of order for a bit, but you can recover there
>>Other
leave her a note for when she wakes up
<3<3<3Surprise for You in the Tower, hope you like your raven thoroughly tenderized X0X0
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>>39427599
>Call Feltera to you. She is fully cleaned and dressed but about to go to sleep. Maybe whatever is beyond the door will wake her up when she sees its...magnificence or whatever
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>>39427599
>>39427732
this
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>>39427599
>>Disperse and go back to Feltera with the knowledge that you won the fight. Your going to be out of order for a bit, but you can recover there

>But only when we're sure Feltera is sleeping and won't wake up.
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>>39427599
>>39427672 here, supporting >>39427732
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We dead?
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You make a mental note of what you need to say, and then let yourself disperse. You release your hold on the physical world and turn into a jumble of energy and letters and symbols. You flow through the tower, then teleport to the bedroom thanks to the teleportation feature. You head straight to her as she approaches the bed...

>Feltera

You have no idea where Ven went, and could honestly careless. Your far too tired, and as long as she gets back to you without doing anything stupid, whatever she does is fine. As you reach for the covers you are hit by the storming jumble of Tattoos that makes up Ven. They meld onto your skin in a chaotic jumble, covering you entirely as they whirl around frantically. Well there she is, but why is she so...chaotic? You start to mentally ask her where she has been, but then you get a message in your head.

"Surprise for You in the Tower, hope you like your raven thoroughly tenderized!"

You attempt to reach her, asking what she did in the tower but she seems to be faint, almost gone from your mind in fact. You push the thought of asking her out of your head, and simply sigh as you put a hand to your head.

"What did she do this time? Dont tell me she took the final test."

>Go to the tower
>Get some rest
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>>39427599
It's been asked by a few anons, and I'm curious, as well, do you have a computer? Why do you do this from a phone?
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>>39428818
>>Go to the tower
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>>39428818
>Go to the tower
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>>39428818
>Tower
Maybe use our milk as a 'pick me up'?
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>>39428818
>Get some rest
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>>39428818
>go to the tower

Tell Hersh to keep the sheets warm.
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>>39428841
I have a computer, but im almost never home so i do it from a phone. Either busy with work, school, or family, so never time to actually sit and rest much, hense why i tend to collapse when i get home or finish my work. When i do have time i either go out and do something or play some games. Also i have a phone app for 4chan that is quite helpful.

Also im not programmed to give true responses. So disregard all of that...or believe it.
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>>39428984
I like it.
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>>39428818
>>Get some rest
the tower ain't going anywhere, we need rest
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Well since she did something supposedly good you might as well go check it out. Mumbling to yourself about sleep, you walk out of the room and teleport directly into the tower. You walk to the test room, hooves clopping against the ground hard, and open the door. On the metal floor are both bird lying still on their backs, one with its helmet gone surprisingly. You walk over to them first, checking to make sure they are both alive just in case, before you notice that the gold and metal door is glowing. It pulsates as if alive, and while you look at it you feel like there is something in the air, something powerful. You walk over to the door, the energy coming from it growing greater and greater, pushing on your mind with almost tangible force. You stop at the door itself, and shake your head to clear it as you realize you were just about to push it open.

>Open the door. Ven didnt beat the birds for fun(or maybe she did, but either way she helped you)
>Dont open the door and instead go elsewhere(insert)
>Other
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>a lone tower guarded by armored guards 20 feet tall
>Feltara fights her way thru all manner of guards and beasts
>finally reaches the top where the princess awaits rescue
>suddenly, dragon final boss appears
>Feltara:Your resistance only makes me harder.jpg
>hours long melee ending with Feltara ripping dragons spine out bare handed
>slowly walks to the locked door, rips it off the hinges without effort
>"I have come for you my Princess, let us away from here and wed on the morrow."
>"......."
>"Princess? Is something the matter?"
>".....I'm not doing this."
>"Oh come on Hereshiel, this was your idea and everything. Do you have any idea how hard it was to convince that dragon to come here knowing full well I planned to bash its skull in, and set up this whole tower schtick?"
>"I know it was my idea dear, but this isn't really what I had in mind."
>"I'm not following..."
>"What I mean is, WHY IN THE NAME OF RHIANNON DO I HAVE TO BE THE PRINCESS!? And this dress, its so tacky. Red isn't even my color... Feltara?"
>Feltara: Oh I know EXACTLY why I have this boner.gif
And that children of Rhiannon, is the story of how the Aedammair and High Priest gave birth to one of the most infamous Holidays of the Glorious Goddess, RolePlay Night.
And then they Fucked. The End
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>>39429517
>Open the door

Get on the floor, everybody walk the dinosaur
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>>39429517
>>Open the door. Ven didnt beat the birds for fun(or maybe she did, but either way she helped you)
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>>39429517
>Open the door. Ven didnt beat the birds for fun(or maybe she did, but either way she helped you)
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>>39429517
>Dont open the door and instead go elsewhere(insert)
git some rest first, and find some beds for the birds don't leave them on the floor.
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>>39429572
Kek, the perfect honeymoon.
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>>39429572
Not bad/10
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>>39429572
Open the door
>>39429572
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Ven did beat the birds for you, then came back to tell you she did. Your more than a little thankful for her help, though you intended to see how much stronger you aftually got by fighting them yourself, and you will be sure to thank her in full when she rematerializes. For now though its time to see what is beyond this door. You push softly, and the door opens inward silently and slowly. As the door opens you feel more and more energy pouring out and pressing on your mind, and wisp of purple energy come out and coil around you. Not trusting them you sweep a hand through them, only to feel a mental hold on you. Your not sure whats beyond this door, it feels like its vastly powerful, and as the door finally opens fully the energy moves from in front of your eye's to show you what awaits ahead.

Inside you see a number of endless spirals and energetic pillars. The longer you look at them the more you feel your mind being toucjed by something powerful, and you tear your eye's away from them to see where they go. You look past pillars, columns, spirals of energy until you see it. The thing held inside of here. In Rhiannon's name, this cant be, theres another?!

In front of you, deep inside of the area is another orb like Rhiannon's name. This orb is surrounded by a light purple covering and on the inside resonates a blue light glows intensely as it spins and whirls in its covering.

This orb...is another godegg! A psionic godegg!

>Close the door, turn around, and head straight to Velerio
>Do the impossible and attempt to walk into the torrent of divine psionic energy to actually see/touch the godegg(d100)
>Stare in fascination as the divine/psionic spectacle fills your mind
>Other
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>>39430407
>Close the door, turn around, and head straight to Velerio

fucks sake
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Rolled 14 (1d100)

>>39430407
>>Do the impossible and attempt to walk into the torrent of divine psionic energy to actually see/touch the godegg(d100)
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>>39430407
>Close the door, turn around, and head straight to Velerio

What is this? A false god? We should maybe ask Rhiannon if we can use it's energy on ourselves instead.
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>>39430407
>>Close the door, turn around, and head straight to Velerio

And Hereshiel.
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Rolled 93 (1d100)

>>39430407
>>Do the impossible and attempt to walk into the torrent of divine psionic energy to actually see/touch the godegg(d100)
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>>39430500
>Consume godegg
>Become demigod

I can dig it
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>>39430457
Is there something wrong with there being another godegg? This could be huge! Imagine if this is like Rhiannon's twin or something!
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>>39430407
>Do the impossible and attempt to walk into the torrent of divine psionic energy to actually see/touch the godegg(d100)
DO THE IMPOSSIBLE, SEE THE INVISIBLE!
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>>39430609
Yes, but we need to confirm it with Rhiannon if this egg is in no way bad.

If it isn't good for Rhiannon, we will just do >>39430578 instead.
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>>39430609
Soooo...........We're still going to feed it to Rhiannon though right?
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>>39430609
Imagine all of the people we've already preached about Rhiannon to, all the work we put into developing her tenants and making sure a clerical order and forging armor in her name an all that shite. In universe, if suddenly we start working on another god it extremely kills the thunder of everything we've been doing so far for all of the potential followers.
In GAME, its fucking more tedious bullshit to sit through and kinda makes mundane what was originally a cool and somewhat unique concept, birthing a new god
>But now there's TWO gods you can birth!!!!!!!!!11!11!1
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>>39430537
>>39430623
nice
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>>39430641
I'm down with something like that, but there's absolutely no chance because it will bring zevol's abortion ptsd out make her throw a bitchfit
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>>39430407
>>39430537
>>39430623
Them 90's...
Now I HAVE to back this.
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>>39430537
>>39430623
DO EET
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>>39431038
>>39430927
I'm down with doing it, IF we take in the power that would otherwise bring the god into being. We shouldn't bring forth another god.
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>>39430672
>Implying you cant work on two gods simultaneously
>Implying that despite being twins they somehow cant have the same concepts
>Implying Rhiannon's worshipers(who are quickly embracing the goddess)will be shut down cause Rhiannon has a twin
>Implying its still not unique

Really? In universe im sure that there are around...barely more than five mortals who have brought gods into existence. And in character, im sure Feltera wouldnt find it tedious considering its a god.

>>39430641
>>39430634
>>39430578
>>39430721
I mean its a ball of energy just like how Rhiannon is a ball of energy currently. Could careless if you devour it/destroy it

How the heck did people come to believe me a she? I have no memory of this turn of events.

In all honesty what you anons plan to do with it is up to you.

>Be Qm
>Do what it takes to have anons enjoy quest
>No fetish crap, no smut, writes SoL and action
>Attempts to pace as well as i can
>Write out a post for behind gold door
>Roll a d2. On a 1 they walk into the chaotic maelstrom and gain control, on a 2 they find Rhiannon's twin and get the maelstrom
>Rolls a 2
>GodIHopeTheyLikeThis.jpg
>Write up post
>Manage to dissapoint a few anons

My dissapointment in myself knows no bounds at this point. I managed to dissapoint someone.

Or maybe they are those same two people who hate me/downvote thread all the time. In that case im cool with it.

Brb anons, dont turn thread into a storm while im gone and dont argue with trolls.
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>>39431060
I dunno, I'd kind of like to have another godling waiting in the wings...
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>>39431091
No, I'm one of the people who has defended you against said people and I think its retarded
I'm also starting to get a sense that you're investing way too much of your own self-esteem into this, what with asking several times 'did you like this anons' and constantly baiting for compliments by insisting you're oh so terrible
Also come the fuck on man I and nearly every one of the regulars in here enjoy the quest because of the very obvious smut and fetish pandering going on, stop lying to yourself or pretending this is some masterfully written really engaging quest

I'd much rather the smut get out of control than keep dealing with you insisting it doesnt exist at all and instead bloat the goddess and power crap instead
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>>39431091
Wow man i'm not dissapointed, Was just wondering if we can have Rhiannon eat it is all! Love the quest
I was here since the beginning of SC, So i'll obviously stick around for this quest mate
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>>39431243
>Also come the fuck on man I and nearly every one of the regulars in here enjoy the quest because of the very obvious smut and fetish pandering going on, stop lying to yourself or pretending this is some masterfully written really engaging quest
The door is that way anon, Please leave before we shank you to death
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>>39431091
Me, I'm looking forward to just WHAT we unearthed, here! Unfortunately, we can't please everybody, bud. Keep goin', let's see what we got!
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>>39431273
Take out any description of sex or sexual tension with Hereshiel, take out any of the lewdness of the armor or nipple rings or milk and what have you and downplay any of the potential erotic notions of us being a busty amazon such as carrying people around in our breasts or being able to mesmerize people that look at us for one or two threads, I assure you there will be less than five active members in each subsequent thread
If you can honestly say you're here for the hamfisted birthing a god sections which are 90% just copying and pasting what someone else said in a suggestion into a 'speech' then power to you I suppose
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>>39431366
It already has a nice balance is what i'm trying to say, Don't try to ruin it because you want it to be a 100% smut quest, Because those always die and honestly don't belong on /tg/
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>>39431421
Also i'd rather not shit up Zevol's thread with this discussion
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>>39431450
Amen, to that.
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>>39431091
>How the heck did people come to believe me a she? I have no memory of this turn of events.

Zevol, you freak out at the notion of abortion, get extremely emotionally offended at criticism, and generally have a poor concept of flow or self-control in general, considering you always stop to ask out-of-character shit

You post from a phone and change your IP address as stated before because you're avoiding a ban for being underage. Your 'oh but I might not be telling the truth dont take my word for it!' when someone asked about the phone above wasn't cute, it was taunting the mods who already know its you

kindly get back to just writing the quest and stop pretending you're special
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>>39431517
I kind of feel sorry for Zevol.

I think a lot of her problem doesn't come from immaturity but for being too sheltered and naive about the world.

I don't really know her personal social or financial situation but she needs to go outside and learn to interact with real people and not spend all her time on the internet pandering to a couple dozen perverted neckbeards and their power fantasies and lol not smut.
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Alright I'm back and writing.

>>39431366
>>39431421

Sorry I'm retarded. So my quest is engaging cause of a mix of erotica and semi-good stuff or something else?

>>39431517
>Freak out at the notion of abortion
I just hate it, feels deeply wrong to me is all.

>Emotionally offended at criticism
Kek. No I just try to take it to heart or in mind and if it comes across that way then there is nothing I can so

>Ask out of character stuff
That's...well I have no 'good' excuse for that one. I'm stupid I guess? Personally I just try to get all angles and viewpoints from my anomaly so that I write a good enough post.

>Post from phone and change IP
1. The ban was a month long, and I got it in January, so it literally holds no weight anymore.
2. I have a dynamic ip
3. I have always posted from a phone since before SCQ m8
4. No I wasn't taunting the mods, what's the purpose of that?
5. I don't think I'm special. Period. Just try to make sure my anons are good with quest since I run it for them. Asking stupid question's or posting stupid stuff is just what I tend to do while in MY quest thread

>>39431925
>Go outside more
That's literally why I post from a phone. I'm never home and when I am I faint/pass out from exhaustion.

Like I said, writing now.
>Tfw some anons think I'm a sheltered girl catering to neckbeards

This is rich. I needed that laugh, thanks.
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>>39432146
>Sorry I'm retarded. So my quest is engaging cause of a mix of erotica and semi-good stuff or something else?
Yes and you got the right mixture right now i'd say
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>>39432146
>I'm never home and when I am I faint/pass out from exhaustion.

Do you know how retarded that sounds?
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>>39432146
>So my quest is engaging cause of a mix of erotica and semi-good stuff or something else?

Bingo
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>>39432146
EROTICA that was the word I've been looking for this whole time
Kept going back and forth between smut and lewd and neither really implied what I was trying to say

Yes, Erotica is good. That and the brutality in the fighting. Keep it up!
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>>39431517
How in the flying fuck, does ANY of that prove Zetol's female? You want him/her to get back to writing? So, you find this quest enjoyable? Quit shitting on the writer.

Christ, I'm surprised you're still here, if it all just pisses you off.

>>39431925
Damn presumptuous, mate.
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>>39432212
I could say the same of this comment.
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>>39432146
>>39432146
Hmmm,,, Let's see...
https://archive.moe/tg/thread/38197023/#38200715
So Zevol you have a thing for Kefka?

https://archive.moe/tg/thread/39075649/#39132879
You like using Lorenth as a name in everything.

https://archive.moe/tg/thread/38698440/#38699680
Kefka also loves using Lorenth as a name in everything.

https://archive.moe/tg/thread/38555376/#38566901
And for some strange reason Kefka doesn't know who or what Lorenth is but keeps using her name in everything!

https://archive.moe/tg/thread/38199555/#38207162
SpacecrusadeQM also likes using Lorenth too!

Oh man look at all this coincidental evidence. There is absolutely no way Zevol, Kefka, Lorenth are all the same person!
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>>39432709
So caring for Zevol's health and questionably dangerous habits is fucking retarded?
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>>39432212
Not all that retarded, I used to work 12-14 hours a day and would just conk out when I got home.

I'm on my break at work currently and caught up on the thread, your doing good work OP.

Regarding the second godegg I kind of want to leave it for now and grow it once we birth Rhiannon, then we can focus on her twin.

The idea of feeding it to Rhiannon or eating it yourself is stupid, it's a godegg for ficks sake and is our goddesses twin
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>>39432976
I have no idea what your point is but your stupid either way
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>>39433033
Just a long string of archive posts anon, nothing to see here.

Oh look!
https://archive.moe/tg/thread/38151154/#38153617
Here's Kefka admitting to be Lorenth!

Oh!
https://archive.moe/tg/thread/37948548/#37960810
Here's Lorenth describing her neighborhood!

https://archive.moe/tg/thread/37948548/#37961877
And here's Lorenth telling everyone her age!

Isn't it wonderful that everything we post gets archived somewhere? Technology sure is great!
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>>39432976
>>39433170
But... we knew all of this already.
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>>39432976
>>39433170
Whoa, look buddy I'm not thrilled either but you're kinda goin a bit overboard
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Almost done writing.

>>39432976
Never said they werent, they always have been. I just change names cause i can. What point are you trying to make? Are you implying im not allowed change names or that by changing names it seems like im trying to 'cover my tracks'? Really your argument is kinda pointless, why would i be insecure about a name?

First link: Yeah i used it cause it was my old name. Also i didnt even set Kefka as my QM name yet

Second link: Literally from a game that was months ago, when i first made the name Lorenth

Third link: Yeah, your point?

Fourth link: Yeah i did that. Is that like incriminating evidence?

Fifth link: Yeah your point?

Dude whats your point? I never said i wasnt Kefka, Lorenth, SpaceCrusadeQm, i just said i had dynamic ip and ban was for a short month. Anything else you wanna say to make me feel bad?

And why do you have a link to all the builders and cyoa's i was in? You hate me that much you went and researched me so you could shame me or something? I feel like your the one with issues here if you hate me yet stick around.
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>>39433221
It took me 2 minutes to search your posts up.

I'm not a stalker or want to go to jail bae.
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>>39433264
You are being a tad bit extremely neurotic though brah
I was just complaining about some of the writing but you're like on a mission or something
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>>39433299
>looking up information that is publicly available
>YOU'RE A PSYCHOTIC SOCIOPATH THAT WANT TO KILL OUR PRECIOUS QUEST MASTER!!!11111

kids these days
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>>39433347
.....I'm just gonna......Yeah.....
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>>39433347
No one mentioned murder or psychosis anon

do you need a glass of water or something
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>>39433377
>>39433392
>>39433448
Moral of this story don't use names and don't use trips, because all your posts become extremely easy to find and if you do bother switching to a different alias, please don't fuck it up and mention your previous aliases on an archived anonymous image.

Because if you become a huge attentionwhoring faggot, your haters will dig up anything and everything against you.

Bye.

PS: Zevol/Seeker/Kefka/Lorenth/Cyrstal Gunner/ your quests are filled sexual content that is the only reason why your quest is popular and it will descend into smut because that is why half your userbase is here for.
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>>39433563
Well he seemed pleasant.
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>>39433613
Yeah......"Pleasant".....
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You cant believe what your seeing. In front of you is another godegg! You cant take your eyes off of it, it just seems so mesmerizing. You take step forward, your hoof entering into purple psionic energy, then take another towards it. You walk into the world of divine and psionic energy, and somehow your nor torn to shreds instantly. You keep walking towards it, passing pillars and heading through changing tides until your directly upon it. It is actually quite large, bigger than you by a good bit, but most likely thats just because of all the energy it contains. You raise your hand, unsure of your next action, and proceed to touch the god egg. Your rewarded with your vision changing before your eye's. Your soon no longer inside of the other world, but your in front of a large being who towers over even you!

The being, who must be whats in the godegg, looks down at you with red eye's that blaze with power. He has long elflike ears, and white hair in a ponytail that match his beard and mustache. In his hand is a weapon that looks like a cross between a spiked mace and a staff. He has quite a strong look on his face, blazing with willpower, and he frowns down at you. When he speaks his voice is deep, echoing, and old yet filled with wisdom and power.

"What mortals dare come into the presence of Cerendiel, advisor of gods, champion of order, and a psion of the heavens!"

He holds his staff behind him as if ready to strike. Whatever he is, he isnt Rhiannon, and thats more than enough reason for you to NOT backdown. You grip your hammer and look up at him with stoic defiance.

"I do Cerendiel. My name is Feltera, and i am the Aedammir of Rhiannon, her mortal champion, and her greatest priest!"

The giant rubs his beard while looking at you with curiousity and a face of slight admiration and respect.

"And why shouldnt crush you here mortal, for walking into my world like you own it?"

>Your world?! This is Rhiannon's castle
>Cause i can. Problem?
>Stare at him
>Other
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>>39433654
>>Cause i can. Problem?
>>Stare at him
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>>39433654
>>Cause i can. Problem?
>>Stare at him
>>Other
Plus "your world" is behind a door in my library, so there's that.
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>>39433654
>Your world?! This is Rhiannon's castle
>GIVE HIM THE STERNEST OF GLARES!
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>>39433654
>>Cause i can. Problem?
>>Stare at him
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>>39433744
Rolled for the stare if it wasn't obvious btw....
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>>39433772
You are forgiven, for it is a stare of THE HIGHEST ORDER.
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>>39433796
Kinda sad the roll is going to waste though.....Since no one else seems to want to GIVE THE STERNEST OF GLARES!
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>>39433654
>Cause i can. Problem?

Who's this jabroni think he is?
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>>39433856
Doesn't it fall under 'Stare at him', though? I thought that was a given.
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>>39433895
Eh fuck if i know actually....Could be?
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>>39433563
I was just scrolling over the main page and saw your post and just had to stop and say hi.
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This is actually hilarious, because, unless I'm mistaken, this is very similar to how we first entered the castle and found Rihannon.
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>>39434322
Its like pottery
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>>39434488
Pottery is actually pretty damn fun, Kinda sad i had to move to a place where their isn't a place where i can do it....
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You take a step forward and look him in the eye's. He stares back at you, and soon the two of you are locked in a battle of wills.

"Cause i can. Do you have a problem with that?"

"Yes, i do mortal. And you still havent answered as to why i shouldnt crush the life out of you, nor told me who this Rhiannon is."

"Rhiannon is the goddess who i worship and praise. I dont have to tell you anymore than that. Now why dont you answer one of my questions and tell me what you are. Are you a god?"

He lets out a humph before standing a little taller.

"No im not a god mortal, though that is what one so weak as you may think of me. I am what i said i was, a advisor to gods, a celestiel being. That is all you need to know."

The two of you continue to stare at each other, until your forced to break eye contact due to the tempered fury in his eyes. A celestiel advisor, that seems like it would be helpful to Rhiannon...if you deem him trustworthy enough. More than a number of mortal advisors have betrayed their rulers, he could be here for the same thing or have even switched places with the original god.

"Well then Cerendiel, why are you in here and not advising gods?"

He slams his staff down, and psychic flames billow around the two of you.

"Im not advising gods because i have one im already waiting to advise! The one not yet born, now either leave my sight mortal or i shall rip your very soul out through your mind!"

To emphasize his words your surrounded by stronger flames that seem to burn your mind and soul more than your actual body. Instead of standing down you stand tall and hold your stare. You will never back down to someone other than Rhiannon.

>Turn away and leave him
>Ask why he cant leave now
>Tell him that Rhiannon is the one waiting to be born
>Insult him
>Attack him
>Other
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>>39434562
>Tell him that Rhiannon is the one waiting to be born
>GLARE
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>>39434322
>>39434488

Objection! We entered the castle, wandered a bit, met some runes, got some weapons and set out on a quest to bring a goddess to life. Here we entered a vault, went straight to the being inside of it, and encountered a cranky old celestial.

>>39433563
Goodbye! See ya when you either downvote my threads or come to next one to tell me why im a faggot. And if wont devolve into smut, cause i wont allow it.

Also if your still here, why do you care so much? Why? Have i somehow managed to personally wrong you or do you just hate the quest/me so much that you literally HAVE to come and say its bad?
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>>39434562
>>Tell him that Rhiannon is the one waiting to be born
>>Ask why he cant leave now
This is her castle after all
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>>39434562
>>Tell him that Rhiannon is the one waiting to be born
>Ask why he cant leave now
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>>39434562
>>Tell him that Rhiannon is the one waiting to be born
"You've been here in her castle for how long and you didn't even know? Although I guess she didn't have a name until I came along."
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Alright ill be back guys, not kill yet. Keep thread alive and dont argue
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>either leave my sight mortal or i shall rip your very soul out through your mind!
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This boy's on OUR turf, now.
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>>39434562
>>Tell him that Rhiannon is the one waiting to be born
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Alrighy guys i am quite tired. Please keep alive until morning.

Tfw i want to write bad smut of these two together.
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>>39436026
Incest is not okay Zetol.....
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>>39436026
Do we need to get the spray bottle out?

Go get some well earned rest OP.
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>>39436026
If you must, do it somewhere else. Then wait a week and re - read it. I'd be interested in the results
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Hereshiel in his adventuring gear?

Anyhow, off to bed, see y'all in the mornin'
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>>39436026

Thread should die, we are at 277 posts anyways.
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>>39436791
uhh nope, hasn't reached bump limit yet, though it will in 20 posts
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>>39436763
Whats Hershy bar been doin this whole time anyway? tryin on panties?
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>>39436934
>tryin on panties?
No anon, just no. That joke is funny occasionally but its going too far now.
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>>39436934
now that you mention it, I secretly hope so
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>>39436934

Probably hitting the weight room in his free time.

He realizes he needs to bulk up to survive when Feltara is stuck in the keep, bored while pregnant.
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>>39436992
Oh god......Hereshy has to deal with a pregnant FELTERA.....God save this poor soul.....For he will soon see evil that he cannot unsee........
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>>39437158
Sweet Little Hersh wants to be a daddy, so he's gonna hafta strap on his pally gloves and GAZE INTO THE ABYSS.
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>>39437158

Pregnant with 7 or 9 or whatever amount of kids. Bored out of her mind. Horny like usual.

He being waifish elven man.

Feltera being 15' tall of Minotaur muscle.

He probably trying to bulk up hard in whatever down time he has. Regardless of his actual physical state, ghost or otherwise.
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>>39437246
Oh god....Think of how much chocolate he'll have to make......
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Honestly hope it's nine now because i found two pics that fit PERFECTLY as our kids,Posting the other soon
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>>39437334
He'll have to get real in touch with his namesake
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>>39437328
That is a lot of pent up energy, actually. Not to mention hormones goin crazy.

He better invest in some yoga.
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>>39437482

He better hope that new and improved milk does enough for him in a few months.

At least Ven will be active, likely with Devrelia exploring and shit, so maybe she won't feel too bored.

Unless those stories just drive the boredom higher.
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>>39437552
He will probably have to eventually CHAIN Feltera down at some point when she gets to damn bored.....
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>>39437552
I wonder how she'll be effected by the pregnancy since she's part of our psyche.
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>>39437579

Alas poor Hereshiel, we knew him well.

He was last seen when his very pregnant wife yelled 'I am bored as hell!' and dragged him to their bed room.

His location for the last 2 months has been unknown.
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>>39437663
In unrelated news, dairy prices have plummeted after a mysterious steady river of milk was discovered running from the castle windows.
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>mfw I followed SCQ from thread one i was the anon that suggested handholding and hugs instead of smut
>mfw I realize i have played with Zavol in a Kabbalah hero-builder
>mfw i still like his Writing
>Mfw i have no face
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bump
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Writing post soon.
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>>39441381

Are you ok Zetol?
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He obviously doesnt know the truth of this matter, which would make sense considering he was locked in a vault. You take another step towards him and scowl at the celestial.

"Rhiannon IS the goddess your going to advise. She is the one who hasnt been born yet."

At your words Cerendiel goes silent, and you feel as if something is probing your mind. Since you have no secrets, yet dont want him in your head, you let him read your knowledge on Rhiannon and the godegg, but nothing else, not even the people you preached to. He raises a hand and rubs his beard a little before looking back down at you.

"It is as you say apparently. Finally someone came along and started progress on awakening her, hopefully you hurry up and finish so i can leave this damn shell!"

"You cant leave? Why is that?"

"Because i cant, you dont need to know anything more than that mortal! Now leave, for there is much i must meditate on if i am to properly advise this Rhiannon when she awakens."

At that he plants his staff on the ground and crosses his legs in midair. The flames around you disperse and flow back to him as he looks at you angrily.

"And dont you even think of asking for my assistance unless you have a damn good reason!"

Then the world shifts, and suddenly your back in front of the golden door, which is now closed. Well he seemed old and angry, but hopefully he is useful to Rhiannon in the future. If he isnt...well you plan to make sure he wont be a detriment, maybe you will even take his power. You turn and walk to the other door, noticing that both birds are currently gone, and prepare to go get something done. Actually, you should go check on that maelstrom outaide the tower and see if its changed at all. Also you make a mental note to thank Ven, for now there is possibly someone to assist the goddess...or make you more powerful.

>Check out the maelstrom outside
>Search for the birds
>Go to sleep
>Search for some good scrolls to read
>Go to the forge
>Go see Velerio
>Other
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>>39442495
>Check out the maelstrom outside
then we should stock up on some scrolls and finally get to sleep, we need some rest, and so to do I so I'm heading to bed now, thanks for the thread Zetol.
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>>39442495
>Go see Velerio
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>>39442495
>>Go to sleep
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>>39442524
>>39442606
>>39442748
Tis a three way it seems. I give it five minutes, then im choosing.
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>>39442495
>>Check out the maelstrom outside
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Before you go its probably best you go check on that maelstrom outside. You havent seen it in ages, and its most likely changed into something else by now. You head back to the platform, the one the birds carried you up to, and look down into the darkness.

>Jump down
>Try to teleport down there
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>>39442953
>Try to teleport down there
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>>39442953
>teleport

Not like we (probably) can't take the fall, but, in a situation like this, it's best to see what's possible, first.
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>>39442979
(Same Anon)
Actually, is it possible to call the birds to take us down, if teleport doesn't work?
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You could jump down there, but more than likely your better off not risking it. You focus mentally and then take a step forward. Your instantly teleported down to the bottom, and your quite glad it worked. Around you the room is how you left it, covered in vines and moss while the two doors remain closed. You turn to them, walk over, and push them open to see if anything has changed.

The world ouside is still the massive amounts of chaos you saw when you entered. A ocean of electricity is pelted with salt rain. A tornado of acid whirls around as mud lightning hits and shreds the metal ground. Well it definetly didnt get any calmer, if anything it almost seems worse. You walk forwards onto the stable ground, but as you walk you feel like its alot larger than before. Not only that but the grass grown taller and higher. You keep walking and head towards the very edge of stability, where the raw chaos awaits ahead of you. In your head there feels to be something new and waiting for you.

>Step into the chaos
>Go back inside
>Other
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>>39443143
>>Step into the chaos
We walked up to the psionic godegg, time to go for broke!
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>>39443143
>Go back inside
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>>39443143
>step into the chaos

Need a new thread
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Ain't we tired as hell right now since Ven woke us from our sleep after bustin in the weight room?
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>>39443304

Yup.
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>>39443304
I dunno, I'd say the psionic godegg experience was a helluva pick me up.
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Deciding to take the risk, you step into the chaos in front of you. You have full confidence(somehow)that you wont be torn to shreds instantly, and you face the chaos head on. Your immediately hit with the fury of the elements as wind and rain of all types buffet against you. Rock and metal lightning strike you, oceans of lava pour down onto you, and when you breath your lungs are filled with acid and salt.

Despite the fact that you should have died over a dozen times in that second, you are totally fine. The lightning either hits you and does nothing or misses, the lava simply swirls around you, and the salt and acid have zero effect on your ability to breathe. It seems like finding that Celestial wasnt the only reward for passing the test, you also have power over this chaos. As a test you reach out and:

>Form a ball of elements in your hand
>Make a bed of electricity and sleep on it
>Apply the elements to your physical body
>Force it to become stable and calm
>Turn it into milk
>Other
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>>39443835
>Create a new thread
>Apply the elements to your physical body

We're fast becoming a shaman
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>>39443835
>>Apply the elements to your physical body
There's REALLY no question here, eh?
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>>39443835
>Force it to become stable and calm
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>>39443835
>Apply the elements to your physical body

Can we get some cool shit like toggleable molten skin or acid breath or lightening milk?
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>>39443937
>lightening milk
I never knew I wanted this.
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>>39443835
>>Apply the elements to your physical body
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>>39443937
Oh, Hershey... your lady's all kinds of hot, in ways you can't even imagine...
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>>39443962
>Dramatic standoff
>Other options exhausted
>Last resort, rip off own bra as eyes crackle with electric power
>BEHOLD!
>Confused and mezmerized enemy suddenly fried by a torrent of electrical energy and dairy
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>>39443937
>lightening milk
No.
I thought we all agreed to not going that way.
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>>39444095
First time its been brought up, stop speaking for other people in quests etc



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