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Belle is looking down at me and I'm looking up at her.

It sounds like a ridiculous sort of thing to say, but I learned a short while ago that just because someone is looking down at you, doesn't necessarily mean you're looking up at them. Or even that you're capable or allowed to look up at them. So, looking up at Belle while she looks down at me is an important distinction to make.

On her hands and knees, Belle has me caged against her headboard with her body. It is easier for her because I am currently tied to her headboard in a number of ways.

First, my hands are bound above my head, a U-tie that has my forearms tied together and resting on my hair.

Second, my wrists are bound to the headboard.

Third, my ankles are bound to the sides of the headboard.

Fourth, my knees are bound to each other behind my head with a strap.

That's not including the rope dress I am still wearing that lies cris-crossed and diamond patterned across my torso, waist, and groin. Framing pieces of me like I'm bits of art put together.

Needless to say this puts me in a very exposed sort of position and leaves me very vulnerable, especially since the closest to movement that I have is lowering my head a few inches to lower my legs a few inches. Which doesn't let me close them any at all.

Belle has a set of metal chopsticks in one hand, and a half dozen rubber bands in her other hand.

….it is safe to say that I am really, really nervous at the moment.
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>>35623390
Currently she has her arms on either side of me and her blouse is entirely undone, exposing small, firm breasts and pale swatch of clean skin. Her eyes are open wide and boring into mine, and she's murmuring in that smoky voice of hers that sounds so lovely, so warm, and so very dangerous to me now.

“So, the choices you have at the moment come down to....these,” at which she tap the chopsticks together with a bright clinking noise, “or this,” she says as she nudges the thick, glistening rod of twisted and bead-decorated glass that lies between my exposed and lifted derriere and her knees. “One is a sharp, prolonged pain. The other is a dull, deep ache. But for you, both lead to that special place where you lose it all.”

I blush, and look down, but her hand coming up immediately brings my eyes back to hers. I do NOT want my breast slapped again. I'm still only at eight punishment blows because she counted that off right away. I'm not allowed to look away from her eyes until she gives me permission.

“Choose, Miss Xi.”

[] The chopsticks, ma'am.
[] The glass toy, ma'am.
[] Both, please, ma'am.
[] May I have a third choice, please ma'am?
[] Other?
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>>35623410
>All people and events are fictional. The situations and circumstances can be possible. Xi's choices can lead to fulfillment of her dreams or force her to live out a nightmare. Injury is inevitable, though the extent of said injuries is variable. Very wrong choices can end in fates worse than death.

Collective Game, The Tale of X, The Story of O, BDSM, fetish

Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/LqwSF44s

Previous thread: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/35603282/
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>>35623410
Is the toy going in Xi's ass?
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>>35623488
>Xi has no idea, though Belle said that she wouldn't go there earlier.
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>>35623536
Mrm.
>>35623410
>[] The glass toy, ma'am.
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>>35623410
[X] The glass toy, ma'am.
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>>35623410
[] Both, please, ma'am.
[] May I have a third choice, please ma'am?
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[X] The glass toy, ma'am.
[] Both, please, ma'am.
[] May I have a third choice, please ma'am?
[] Other?

My voice comes out as a whisper at first, and I have to start over, looking into her eyes as best I can. Her gaze is very intense. “The glass toy please, ma'am.” I have a good idea of what happens with the chopsticks, and I'm not sure I'm ready for that. Clothespins are bad enough.

“You can look away if you like.” I look down, though the view isn't any less intense. Me, tied and helpless and decorously adorned with rope and a blazing red hand-print across my right breast, visible even on my olive skin. Her mostly dressed, giving me glimpses of her softness, her lean frame, her breasts. Her nipples are coral colored. It makes me what color she is down there. And if she's a natural blonde.

Belle slides her body back and sit up, her hand moving slowly to caress me, to spread my nether lips open where the twin cords of red silk frame my sex. I can't help it: I squirm, my breaths fast and unsteady. Memories of her mouth, her hand, so strong, so vivid. She slips two fingers inside me and I bite my lip to keep quiet. I don't want more punishment. I whine behind my lips as she forces me open, slowly, and then places two fingers of her other hand into me.
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>>35623737
I give a short, sharp cry as she opens me with all four fingers, spreading me wider than I'm really ready for, seeing how open I am. She doesn’t even look at me as she says the number. “Eleven.” I clamp my mouth shut and squirm harder, the strange pull a sharp pain at the edges of me sex. Belle slowly lets my body close of it's own accord and slides her finger out the relief and the pleasure eclipsed somewhat by that wicked pull previous.

She lifts the glass toy, and at once I can see it's big. Much longer than I can take, but only a little wider than what she's given me before – all four of her fingers, tented. I have the terrible suspicion that ~width~ is not what I need to worry about.

“May I take a before and after picture, Miss Xi? With the same caveat?” No face. It won't show everything, but....maybe she can fix that.

[] Yes, ma'am.
[] Not this time, please, ma'am.
[] Can you hide my face, ma'am?
[] If it's for you only....you can show my face this time.
[] Other?
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[X] If it's for you only....you can show my face this time.
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>>35623746
[X] If it's for you only....you can show my face this time.
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>>35623746
[x] Yes, ma'am.
Objectification factor is pretty great.
Hm, does she have a mask or something? Not necessarily full-face, and not necessarily with eye-holes, but enough to conceal identity?
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>>35623746
>[X] Yes, ma'am.
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[X] Yes, ma'am.
[X] If it's for you only....you can show my face this time.
[X] Other: Do you have a mask?

I take a deep breath. There's not really much difference in trusting her not to put these on the internet, and in trusting her to tie me up and play with me – hurt me. Belle has yet to prove me wrong in trusting her. So, I trust her.

“If the pictures are for you, ma'am....you can show my face.” She looks at me, startled, and sets the toy back down, going down to her hands and knees so I don't have to crane my head to try and look at her. There's something different in her gaze now, something more....soft, or maybe more shy. I shiver, because it feels good to make her feel good, even though it's nothing special or much. My head is starting to spin again.

“Thank you. Xi. These are all only for you and I.” Belle runs her fingers along my rippled belly, and I squirm, biting back a giggle. She smiles, a more wicked smile, the look in her eyes replaced by desire and heat again as she turns away. My tormentor....my lover crawls off the bed, and I watch her as best I can as she collects her camera. Setting it on the bed well away from the edge, she finally climbs back on. I learned the hard way satin sheets are very treacherous.

“Ma'am....do you have a mask....like....a plain one, with only....eyes and nose holes?” Belle looks confused, and suddenly smiles, sliding off the bed, she slips into the living room....and returns, carrying an unpainted porcelain mask, shiny and slick looking.
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>>35624025
Then she does something surprising. She slides off her pants....and her panties. Leaving only her simple silk blouse, and a patch of soft golden curls above her otherwise clean sex. Well, not quite clean – she has a ruby studded C ring in her clitoral hood, a piercing I didn't expect her to have. I stare at her. Belle is slender, but she's not skinny. She's healthy, just, slender and lithe. Climbing back onto the bed, she takes the camera and I unabashedly watch her as she snaps the photograph of me bound and helpless, one picture....

Hanging the camera off the footboard by the strap, Belle crawls over to me, her feet held high, her hips swaying wide with her movements because of that. Like....like she was trained o crawl that way. I can't help but wonder if that's why she's so good as what she can do. She goes to her elbows as she picks up the porcelain mask and crawls a little closer, strange and sensual, her bare bottom high and the blouse open. She places it over my face, blinding me, tying it on loosely with a ribbon. I feel her move across the bed again, and shiver, the heat in my body increasing, imagining how I look, soft, helpless, bound, a mystery girl ready for whatever anyone wishes to do with me.

The camera goes off....then she crawls back to me, and takes the mask off, setting it aside. “I want you to see what I’m doing,” she murmurs.
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>>35624039
She holds up the twisted glass toy, rounded at each end, and at least ten inches in length. Her eyes are wide and she looks almost shocked, surprised. Hot, hot is how she looks. Slowly, she rolls the end along my wet slit, working me up, making the toy wet.

And she doesn't stop, working it along my sex, carefully not against my clit or inside me. And still doesn't stop.

Oh god, she's trying to make me beg for it! And....it's working....

[] It's worth the punishment! Please give me more, ma'am....
[] Remain very quiet, like a good girl.
[] Bite your tongue, you lip, shake your head, stay quiet and don't let her win.
[] Try and wriggle to get her to put it in a little at least! Not against the rules!
[] Other?
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>>35624062
>[] Try and wriggle to get her to put it in a little at least! Not against the rules!
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>>35624062
>[] Try and wriggle to get her to put it in a little at least! Not against the rules!
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>>35624062
>[X] Bite your tongue, your lip, shake your head, stay quiet and don't let her win.
and when that fails,
>[X] Try and wriggle to get her to put it in a little at least! Not against the rules!
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[X] Try and wriggle to get her to put it in a little at least! Not against the rules!

Belle hasn't teased me like this before....and it's maddening! The ropes and ties don't give me much freedom of movement at all, but I do what little I can – relaxing my head and neck and the pulling up, which moves my legs and hips up and down, I try and shift my ankles and legs as much as possible, I used my harms and back to pull up and relax....she didn't forbid any movement, so the only risk I'm taking is that she might stop.

Which just makes her smile wickedly and move just a little more, or less, teasing me more and more! I close my eyes the sensual, slow rubbing exciting, pleasurable, the smooth slick glass feel cool and feels good....but just not good ~enough~! My breaths start to catch as I struggle, and she watches me, her free hand coming up to rest on my belly, feeling my muscles tense and relax, stroking my skin as I struggle for her, desperate. She's enjoying the hell out of it....

The she slowly pushes it inside me and I bite back the gasp before she can hear it. I moan through closed lips, and relax as she penetrates me with the toy. Deeper....deeper....all the way....then a little more firmly, which presses against my insides uncomfortably....then a little harder, which makes me whine. The ball at the end is pushing against my cervix in a painful manner, but the bumps and twist feel good inside me despite that. She she makes me muffle another yelp as she pulls the ropes, moves them from framing my sex to the glass toy!
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I whine softly with my mouth shut tight as Belle ties the toy inside me with a silken ribbon, deeper than is comfortable, leaving me aching: a kind of sharp, sweet ache that isn't pleasant even though the rest of the toy feels wonderful inside me.

She watches me breathe and squirm and struggle, because the ache is becoming just what she said it would – a deep, rich ache that leaves me as desperate to get off as it does for the release of orgasm. Belle murmurs softly, then speaks a little louder, catching my very distracted attention. “Miss Xi. Miss Xi....Xi!” I look at her, breathing hard and fast through my nose, not trusting myself to open my mouth. “Do you want me now?”

[] God, please, yes Belle, yes!
[] ….what will she do if I say no...?
[] Yes, please mistress!
[] ….I....I don't know!
[] Other?
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>>35624260
[] ….I....I don't know!
Once again, no idea what she's talking about.
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>>35624260
>[x] Yes, please mistress!
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>>35624260
[] Yes, please mistress!
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>>35624275
No answer? I guess I'm expected to jump through hoops and ask 'properly' then.

XS, could you please tell me what Xi thinks Belle means when she says “Do you want me now?”, because I don't really understand.
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>>35624360
I think this was brought up last time - if I remember correctly, the gist of it was this: you're playing Xi; you have just as much idea what Belle means as she does. You have the option to ask in-character what she means, but then again I doubt that would be very appropriate or in-character right now.
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>>35624384
What, so I can't ask for Xi's thoughts on the matter?
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[X] ….I....I don't know!
[X] Yes, please mistress!

I can't really tell what she means, the pleasure-pain of the hard, unyielding glass in my body is twisted up inside my head. My pussy, my ~cunt~ is hot and wet and slippery, but the pressure inside me is deep and hard and hurts. “....w....what d-do you mean, m-ma'am....” She touches the toy and it moves inside me in a way that my squirming doesn't make it move, and a bright flower of fire blooms inside my body, and I grit my teeth, hissing through them. The pain fades slowly, but it's left me even hotter, and more wet. My eyes are swimming, and she whispers something I don't catch. I shake my head, gasping for breath through the excitement and the hot throbbing ache

She sits up and moves closer, her hand on the headboard above me, her eyes gazing down at me again as she towers over me. “Do you want me to take you over the edge, to give you your climax, pretty Miss Xi?” That makes sense, that I understand, and I want it, I want it so bad....I want her to give it to me, I do want her....

“Y-yes, yes, p-please, yyess, m-hic-ma'am....” Belle smiles down at me, still barely dressed and rises up on her knees, her hand coming down.....
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>>35624421
Goodbye, ability to have children. We weren't going to use you anyway.
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>>35624421
Oh god, she's going to fuck me!

I groan through shut teeth as she presses the other end of the toy into herself, and then slowly and firmly starts moving it in and out of her body, every slight movement causing the toy – still tied in place n ~me~ to press and shift in hot, burning pleasure laced with beautiful fire! She moves slowly and deliberately, her hand on my cheek, touching me, her pinky along my neck....I press my cheek into her hand. Belle moves it away, but only to untie the toy that is buried in us both, and then it is back, resting against my burning chest, my breast, over my heart.

Gripping the headboard she slowly moves her hips, and uses the toy in me, making me feel it more intimately, and every time she pushes it too deep I have to bite back a cry of pain, but the pain and the pleasure are mixed up now, and I can't think, I'm crying and shes saying things, kind things and ohgodohgodohgod

It took her some time to untie me after the screaming and crying and sobbing have stopped. I'm curled up against her naked body, my face still tear streaked, but she's helped me to blow my nose and has a cool washcloth along the back of my neck, which feels wonderful. Belle's hands are gently stroking my hair and I've got her other hand clutched in mine.

[] Thank you Mistress....
[] Ma'am...you didn't give me my eleven.
[] Is it like that every time, Belle?
[] That was....amazing, Belle, thank you.
[] Other?
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>>35624437
[x] Make puppydog eyes, begging for permission to speak.
-[x] Thank you Mistress....
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>>35624437
[] That was....amazing, Belle, thank you.
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>>35624436
Belle's a little better than that. Not that Xi wont be bruised for several days....
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>>35624471
No comment on Xi having Belle's children?
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>>35624437
>[] Thank you Mistress....
>[] Ma'am...you didn't give me my eleven.
Gotta see this all the way through.
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[X] That was....amazing, Belle, thank you.
[X] Other: Adore her and make her give you permission, even though you're done, naughty Xi.

I shift my head and look at her....well....stare at her, sniffling a little. Belle glance at me, and laughs that slow, liquid chuckle; those sleepy, sated eyes are soft and warm. She kisses my forehead softly. “You don't have to have permission, you know.”

“Thank you, Mistress Belle....that was amazing....it was beautiful.” She makes a soft noise of assent and kisses my hand softly. I don't blush – it takes too much energy. Or maybe I'm used to her now. And moving is really not an option at the moment.

“Well, I didn't get to give you your eleven. If you decide its worth while, and you haven't found a master or mistress to suit you, maybe you'll ask me for them later.”

It's my turn to laugh, a shaky, uncertain laugh. “You'd do this again with me so easily? It didn't seem to get you off nearly as much....”

Belle take the cloth from my neck and turns it around, gently cleaning my cheeks and face. I'm a total mess. “Oh, believe me, I did. You weren't in any condition to notice.” I nod slowly, sighing, not unhappily, but relaxing.

After a few more minutes I murmurs an apology for making her miss her scene tonight. That brings another chuckle and she kisses my nose. “That's not for another three hours.”

That gets my attention right away. “How long have we been in here?”
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>>35624592
She strokes my hair, but I can't relax – though my abused center lets me know I'm not ready for sitting yet. “Little less than two hours. It's not even past six.” I shudder violently even though it hurts Less than two hours and I'm a fucking wreck. My lover kisses my forehead again and moves a little closer. “We can go tonight, if you like. After you sleep a little.”

“....all right. Thank you, Belle.” I kiss my friend and snuggle close to her, and fall asleep wit her petting me like she might a kitten. If I don't find a master or mistress, I will definitely be coming for my eleven this weekend.

I need the practice.

~End
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Prologue forthcoming.
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>>35624609
You mean epilogue?
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>>35624609
>Prologue forthcoming
Oh god, we haven't even begin.
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>>35624609
Thanks for running at any rate!
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Prologue:

I've settled into San Francisco well. I am working at Shreve Company as a jeweler, rather than customer assistance, and Belle and I are still close friends; I've met her submissives and she's met my friends. We might be dating, just a little, sort of, but it's more that she is the person I m closest to. Someone who understands me even better than my potential master.

My potential master is a calm, steady man whom Belle likes, and thinks might be closer to what I need in a master. She hasn't steered me wrong yet.

There have been several murders, and rumor has it that there's a serial killer stalking the Scene. It might be just a coincidence, but three out of five have been to the munch at the cafe. Belle and I agreed we aren't going there for a while.

Shane Company turned out to be a bust – apparently, the manager had a very messy divorce, and there were several issues concerning the female employees. Howard told me Mr. Kinkaid wasn't merely sleeping with one or two of the female employees, but were his 'sex slaves'. Poor Howard has no idea, though he's sweet enough. Too vanilla for me!
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I finally met Cam Harper in person, and she's a terrifying beauty. She is also not entirely a she, but suffers from Klinefelter's Syndrome – a man who's body tries to be female. She goes by she mostly because it's hard to hide breasts, but she's apparently nicely endowed. She also has an interesting and strange little harem of handicapped and unusual men and women who all are very protective of Cam.

The Markhams are a frighteningly intense couple, and given to running the lives f those they can get their claws into. At the same time, they treat their human pets like adored animals, and the submissives like servants....still, I think I'm glad I never got caught up with them personally. I don't think Belle is quite aware of that side of them

All in all, I'm glad that I met Belle, and she's been nothing but supportive and sweet to me. It hasn't been all take though – she takes some things too seriously and is awfully hard on herself when she shouldn't be. I think I've made a friend for life in Bellwether Fiche....and I know she's made one in me.

Take care, Em!
Love, X
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>>35624729
Huh.
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>>35624622
>>35624659
Epilogue sorry! Not much sleep today.

Questions are answerable and I am updating the pastebin

Thank yo for playing and I hope i was enjoyable.
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>>35624739
Sure, it was definitely fun.
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>>35624712
>>35624729
... so aside from Belle there was the only one 'good' possibility? Geeze.
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Thanks for running!
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>>35624739
It was very enjoyable.

VERY enjoyable.

By that I mean I fapped to several of the threads.
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Pastebin is completed, though I'll probably do another read through or six for typos

>>35624742
>>35624688

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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>>35624739
What were our friends' reactions to the message we sent them?
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>>35624788
Oh, yeah, wanna know that!
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No - there were two other "good" possibilities in addition - one at the munch, and one at the Scene. They were as yet unnamed.

Kinkaid would have been an enjoyable route, but it would have ended badly in the epilogue, or if they got aught together. Sadly, Howard would have been a sweet route, but ultimately disappointing for Xi. Cam was a master, but Cam's friends are definitely strange and one is somewhat dangerous, while the others would be off puttign to the weak soul, being something of a a KS style harem (eith more gender mix).
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>>35624739
If we'd gone with the psycho, could we have convinced him to keep us (and anyone else he grabbed) alive?
Could we have saved Kinkaid's business? Is Kinkaid aware of how hilarious his name is?
Did Xi ever try the cage? Did she ever share it? Did she ever meet Belle's siblings?
>>35624810
... how the hell were we ever supposed to get with Cam?
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>>35624788
>>35624808
Emilia's response was
>Okay sweetie, call me later! <3
Jorge
>O.K. QT 3.14 B GUD! NO PILLO FITE!
Kimball
"What the fuck? Well, okay...."
>That's cool. Sleepover?
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>>35624823
Depends. At great personal cost, you could have held out for the police rescue - as in, losing a limb.

Possible, if you made him be more careful about getting caught than he otherwise would have been; and no, because it's pronounced KIN-cade.

Cam was one of three possibles at the Scene Belle offered to take you to, those being the Nice Master As Yet Unnamed, Cam, and the Markhams.
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>>35624840
>Kimball
The vanilla one then.
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>and no, because it's pronounced KIN-cade
But- but it's written-
Oh whatever.
>>35624872
"I prefer rocky road, actually."
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>>35624872
Yes he was, which is why Xi describes him as a friend and not ex-boyfriend. Em knows all about Xi's little secret but isn't involved in any such things, being a fairly ordinary young woman herself (and maybe a little gay for her strange friend, but only a little). Jorge is a flaming faggot, and would be proud to be called such.
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>>35624840
>3 out of 4 use proper grammar and spelling
Why must you be the odd one out, Jorge?

So, what did we tell them after we were done? We'd obviously have had to message them again to say we were still largely intact.
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>Did Xi ever try the cage? Did she ever share it? Did she ever meet Belle's siblings?

No, and no. She did, however pose for Cam several times, and allowed Belle to put her on public display and a leash at the Hookers Ball that year. She hasn't met Bell's siblings yet, but one day, they may.

If Xi ever became more masochistic, Belle and she wouldn't be dating, but Mistress and subbe.
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>>35624937
>missed out on Best End because Belle was just very slightly too sadistic
dang
I would have been fine with more 'medium' cropping, but that 'because I feel like hurting you' spanking was just excessive; if you'd put it to a vote, I would have gone for the safeword.
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>>35624898
Xi:
>Back home now, all good. Thnx!

Em:
>Call me! Details, sweetie, details! <3
Jorge:
>NO PICS OF NLS & MKUP? SO MEEN!
Kimball:
>Coolio. When you coming up to visit next?
Yvette:
>k gld 2 no all gd thx

Yvette texts one handed because that's all she has to text with. She is missing most of one arm and most of one leg, one of Cam's broken dolls - and the subject of some very strange art by Cam. The accident occurred after Xi and she parted ways, so it was something she'd have found out in person if the Cam route had been taken.
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>>35624980
Belle is careful about spanking - she pushed right to Xi's limits there. She learned Xi's limits pretty carefully, and rode the edge. Belle likes to hurt people more than she hurt Xi, is all - piercngs and a little harder wth the crop. Xi is just less masochist than Belle likes her own submissives. But they're still close friend, and when Xi needs a firm hand or Belle needs someone to give her attention, they're there for each other.

Belle keeping those eleven for herself was so she could try and tease Xi into another session later if Xi was single for a while. Belle finds Xi's gentle yet pushy nature adorable.
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>>35625076
Well, I have to say XS this is best end for me. Thanks for running this.
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>>35625100
Glad you enjoyed it.

A much more up note than The Story of O.
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>>35625023
>Yvette
Oh cool.
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This was en enjoyable read, now that it's over and I don't feel scared for Xi anymore. Nice short story!

Who was the best end, based on the chargen? Unnamed Master?

Are themarkhams the ones who would force Xi into petplay with the pseudo dog?
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>>35625378
>>35625378
Unnamed Master at the Scene was the best end but there was a good one at the munch, though less adept than Xi would have liked. This was the "Friends with Benefits" end, and on the high end of middle.

Kinkaid was very middle of the road. Fairly good master with bad situational issues.

The Markhams were the ones who would have done that. She very quickly would have found herself blackmailed and controlled in the bad way - the low end of middle, but not bad end.

The psychopath and Howard were the worst ends - one being vanilla, and one being horrible, horrible things.
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>>35625110
So basically it's a Xi X Belle end then?
I'll just ignore the parts about other guys and all of that.
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>>35625437
Story of O? No. She did do what her master wanted, but then her master wasn't interested in her any longer, and just turned her into furniture at Roissy.


And the author states that there was a worse end.

O asks her master for permission to die, and he gives her permission a few months later. She commits suicide.
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>>35625464
I meant the quest, Story of O had a pretty bad ending
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>>35625437
Oh, yes. It's a Xi +Belle friends with benefits ending. They will have a lifelong friendship....and the occasional playtime together.

On the scale of 1-10, Belle ending is either an 8 or a 7 depending on kinkiness.

10 Unnamed Master at Scene
9 Unnamed Master/Mistress at Munch
8-7 Belle
7-8 Cam
6 Kinkaid
5 Markhams
4 Loli Mistress at Scene
3 Howard
2 Gorean at Munch.
1 Charming Psychopath at Munch
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>>35625590
>With benefits
I'll just ignore that part, and pretend they had a healthy romance instead.
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>>35625590
>4
GOD
DAMN IT
XS
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>>35624937
>If Xi ever became more masochistic, Belle and she wouldn't be dating, but Mistress and subbe.
Well, I thought we were at that stage?
Like the whole whip thing, we enjoyed it, but didn't want to go too deeply into it at the first time. That's how I saw it anyway
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>>35625661
You wouldn't have liked her, she was an insecure and dangerous bitch. There would have been blood.

>>35625642
It would easily become one. Room to grow is what made Bell a pretty good end.

>>35625692
It could easily go there too.
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>>35625735
BUT LOLI DOM
LOLIIIIIIIDOOOOM
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>>35625753
There there, there's always next time, or Tager quest.
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>>35625735
What was Belle's bad ending?

>>35625800
>there's always next time
THERE'S A NEXT TIME?
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Thanks for running XS
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>>35624937
>Belle and she wouldn't be dating,
You know what? I find her and Belle dating to be much better and more adorable. I'm satisfied with that.

>>35625590
>10 Unnamed Master at Scene
>9 Unnamed Master/Mistress at Munch
Why are these two the best? Is one of them Ryukusa?
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>>35625805
Belle's bad end would have happened if you'd showed a lack of trust, or if Xi had panicked. She still would have been kind and friendly, and taken you happily to the Scene, but it would have killed the romance and closeness of their friendship, because Belle would have blamed herself and taken it hard , which would not have been Xi's fault. They would have been friends, but not much more. This possibly could have also resulted in no warning about the loli-domme being a danger to any submissive she convinced to spend time with her, resulting in blood and scarring.

There is always a next time, somewhere, somehow.

>>35626880
Because those two were specifically tailored for Xi's kinks. Neither one is Ryukusa.
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>>35627208
>Because those two were specifically tailored for Xi's kinks
The dogs and cats one, or the exhibitionism and whatnot?
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>>35628265
Thank you for asking the question I was hesitant to ask.

>>35627208
What is the likelihood of Belle getting more intimate with her sister?
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>>35628265
The actual kink level would have made it either-or for who was number ten, but I never fleshed them out because the story didn't seem to be going in that direction. It doesn't take me long to flesh them out properly, but I follow where I was lead, and i was led to Belle's apartment. In both cases they were designed around Xi's kinks rather than being cut from whole cloth, hence their higher 'good end' rating.

Which is somewhat subjective, mind you. Like Cam and Belle, a 10 for one person could be significantly lower for the other. The mistress would have had a dog (whether or not Xi was allowed to have sex with it), and the master would have shown her off in a personal and private venue for certain though.

>>35628336
Pretty low, actually, they were very young back then. On the other hand, Belle's sister might have developed into an interesting young woman. that's a misty cloud of possibilities too. Belle was experimenting and her sister was curious.

Xi, as gently pushed by anon, would have been interested in seeing if the would get together again though....or at least played with her together.
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>>35624712
>>35624729
Just got finished reading the archives of this quest, not exactly my kind of material but it was a nice read nonetheless, thanks for writing it XS.

Belle end hehehehheheehehe
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>>35629662
Glad you enjoyed it.

Bell Fish.



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