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I am Maria of house Antioch also called the House of Seekers, and, right now, it feels like that might actually mean something!

"So…" I begin "anyone know where Eriadne is?"

Silence. Odd. Did I say something bad again?

"Who?" The girl -Sora, I remind myself- looks at me curiously.

What do you mean "who", Sora? I am sure I didn't stutter. Wait! That's right, she hasn't met her yet. I fight down the urge to knock my fist against my temple the way I often saw my mother do whenever she forgot something. I have less luck with the sheepish grin and blush stealing their way onto my face, but progress is progress, right?

"Uh. My friend. I mean, our friend".

Evangelyne blinks before beginning to speak. Seems like that healing took a lot out of her.

"Girl could be basically anywhere. Sorry Maria, but this could take a whi--"

"--I still want to see her!" Oops, that might have come out too strongly.

"I didn't say we couldn't or shouldn't try". She smiles tiredly.

"Thank you!" I almost hug her. Almost. I restrain myself just quickly enough and turn the motion into a polite nod.

I turn to Sora again and find her wearing that grin again.

"You know the school, yes?" She just shrugs.

"I know people who do".

> Nagivation: 95
> Convergence 92

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Turns out, she really does! The way leads us all across the building, but after asking around we -well, Sora mostly, she's pretty amazing it turns out- really find some people that can help us.
> 1/2
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While we walk I finally manage to learn some more things about my friends, like how Evangelyne spent her childhood or that she's actually in the same House as I! Asking after her totem ends a bit emberassing however, the girl simply pulling up her blouse to reveal a Rabbit in the centre of her back. Somehow I get the feeling she enjoys teasing me sometimes.

At last we're standing in front of a large door, the black wood carved in strange lines and circles.

"Looks like we made it, eh?" Evangelyne gives me a questioning look and shrugs. I nod.

"Finally!"

"...so". Sora twirls a lock of her unruly hair between her fingers.

"...what now?"

[] Knock. Hope Eriadne doesn't mind.
[] Open the door silently -hopefully that will work- and peek.
[] Other

> questions etc welcome
> Note: This thread we shall be testing the Law of Golden Words, stating that a write-in that is particularily well justified/helpful to solve the situation at hand or otherwise beneficial is to be integrated into/taken over the majority pre-select option
> Let's see how it goes!
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>>33773507
>[x] Open the door silently -hopefully that will work- and peek.
We don't know what's going on in there.
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>>33773507
>[] Other
Listen at the door, we don't want to go bursting in and embarrassing everyone so we should do a little bit of recon first.
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>>33773540
Lewd things.
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>>33773507
>[x] Knock. Hope Eriadne doesn't mind.
>>33773438
Maria the adorablest
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>>33773507
Hexmouto's back!

>[x] Knock. Hope Eriadne doesn't mind.
Must be polite when visiting onee-sama.
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>>33773438
>>33773507
>"--I still want to see her!" Oops, that might have come out too strongly.
Uu-fucking-guu

>[x] Let's listen at the door first
>[x] Open the door silently -hopefully that will work- and peek.
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>>33773563
You lie! Eriadne would never do lewd things, never. Not without Maria at any rate.
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>>33773507
>[x] Open the door silently -hopefully that will work- and peek.


>>33773589
Who is the little spoon?
>>33773582
>Uu-fucking-guu
Note how she goes all cold-ass operator when not near her but melts into a puddle once she is.
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>>33773507
>"...what now?"
Really, we didn't really plan on what to do, we just kind of wanted to see her, do we ask to sit in or are we just going to peek inside and catch a glimpse of Eriadne and be like, okay all done
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>>33773507
>[] Knock. Hope Eriadne doesn't mind.
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>>33773636
>spoiler
Obviously they switch, anon. I can't believe you had to ask that.
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Where is lewdanon?

He promised he would deliver :(
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>>33773681
He lied
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>>33773507
>[x] Open the door silently -hopefully that will work- and peek.
We can see what they're doing.

>>33773681
lied, died, etc
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>>33773650
>do we ask to sit in
We ask her to sit on her lap
>>33773681
Maybe Kal will deliver. Maybe it won't be NTR.
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>>33773837
>Maybe it won't be NTR.
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>>33773837
>Kal
>deliver
>Kal
>lesbians
>Kal
>not NTR
Might as well bet on Hex consistently updating winthin a reasonable time-frame.
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>>33773837
Eh, I'm happy enough without smut. No sexualizing the Maria.
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>>33773903
I-it might happen, anon

I believe in him
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>>33773918
>No sexualizing the Maria.
Except for growing a magic ribbed cock
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>>33773954
>Except for growing a magic ribbed cock
That's Life 4, Forces 3 anon.
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>>33773954
Anon pls.
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>>33773903
FAITH.
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Closing and writing.
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Ooooh right.

Give me 3d10!
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Rolled 8, 9, 1 = 18

>>33774124
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Rolled 1, 5, 6 = 12

>>33774124
This is going to go well, I'm sure
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Rolled 2, 1, 6 = 9

>>33774124
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Rolled 8, 4, 1 = 13

>>33774124
Boom, you're welcome.
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Rolled 8, 8, 5 = 21

>>33774124
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Lookin good! Thanks!
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Rolled 7, 3, 3 = 13

>>33774124
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>>33774167
Looking good, or looking bad? Because that's a lot of 1s.
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>>33774216
Does he take the first result or?
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>>33773837
>Maybe Kal will deliver. Maybe it won't be NTR.
I have conversed with the Hexer and secured a direction for a story to unfold. I'm makin' notes on it even as we speak.

I shall present no guarantee of delivery nor time of arrival.
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>>33774086
>Katt

Hnnnnnnnng good taste
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>>33774216
I play a bit loose with Storytelling System's botch rules and we got enough successes to not fail int too catastrophic a manner.

>>33774132
>>33774156

Anyway, back to the editor.
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>>33774241
Now would be an appropriate time for a doompaul.jpeg.
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>>33774241
>No mention of it being NTR or not
K-kaleun, pls
pls
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>>33774281
>>33774293
Hex wouldn't have okayed NTR.

Right. ...RIGHT?
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>>33774241
Feel free not to.
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>>33774293
>>33774313
The Hexer has decreed that Maria does not believe that girls loving girls is a thing.
I'm sorry, anon.
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>>33774241
Wait, Kaleun was the lewdanon all along?
I suddenly have some mixed feelings about this.
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>>33774348
Of course it's not a thing it's a phase.
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>>33774348
Nobody likes you.
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>>33774348
Of course not. How else could she slowly discover it over the course of the quest? It would be pointless if she did already.
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>>33774348
>The Hexer has decreed that Maria does not believe that girls loving girls is a thing.

Welp, Kaleun has infected Hexer, time to jump ship.
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>>33774348
That's why you wrote an assertive Eiradne showing her differently, right? Right? please?
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>>33774361
>Wait, Kaleun was the lewdanon all along?
Negative. I only got pulled onto this lewd train by forgetting to drop my trip in QTG.

Anyway, enough about that. Let's talk about how great Eriadne is whilst I take my trip off.

>>33774370
>it's a phase.
It is indeed.
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>>33774393
>Welp, Kaleun has infected Hexer
Except that's been a canon aspect of the world since thread one.

inb4 eri falls for a dragonboy and everyone is mad.
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>letting Kaleun post in your quest
Hexer pls
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>>33774393
With an update rate this slow there really is no other reason to be here.
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>>33774437
> letting
How would he keep him out?
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>>33774348
I'm done
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>>33774457
By not letting him do write-ups for one
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>>33774348
Kaleun pls
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>>33774427
You know what? That right there actually has significant shitstorm potential. Maybe a 6 or a 7?
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>>33774412
>That's why you wrote an assertive Eiradne showing her differently, right? Right? please?
That's obviously the idea. It's like all these "yuri fans" have never read a single yuri production in their life.
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>>33774427
>inb4 eri falls for a dragonboy and everyone is mad.
well that would kill this quest
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>>33774505
>Maybe a 6 or a 7?
Yea. The last time it happened it CREATED the shitstorm scale.
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>>33774525
Most Yuri by definition is terrible material to learn how to Lesbian.
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>>33774525
I think it's more nobody believes Kaleun has done so, and he could therefore not replicate them, honestly.
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>>33774525
But basically all animu/mango, /u/ or not, has a terrible grasp of, and approach to, romance. Well, so does /tg/ but still.
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>>33774505
I'm not sure I think it would just die because it's a Hexer quest and the vast majority of the players will have no reason to give a fuck anymore.
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> everyone overreacting this hard
Hex isn't stupid and I don't think he wants to hurt us.
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>>33774635
>don't think he wants to hurt us.
>Supporting Kaleun
I'm not so sure Anon.
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>>33774635
But if we don't take the bait, what are we supposed to do the next 10 hours while waiting for an update, anon?
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>>33774635
>>Hex isn't stupid and I don't think he wants to hurt us.

But Hex is too nice for his own good.
And Kaleun on the other hand...
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>>33774659
Discuss girly things?
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>>33774654
Show me on the doll where Kaleun touched you.
>>33774659
Can't refute that.
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>>33774654
It's not actually that bad, it'll only develop into an actual shitstorm if for some reason Hex decides the lewds are canon
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>>33774676
>Discuss girly things?
Like how terribly we're dressed and how we'll need to learn potionmaking ASAP to get some fucking funds?
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>>33774676
We do that either way, anon. And the past few threads have shown that it's slowing a little lacking new material anyway.
Of course, this update did give some new material, like Maria 2cute and Eriadne-starved, or Eva 2lewd.
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>>33774679
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>>33774710
We need money. Eriadne likes rich people, right?
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>>33774718
>or Eva 2lewd.
>>33773507
>he girl simply pulling up her blouse to reveal a Rabbit in the centre of her back.
We know her spot now. We need to learn how to channel magic through it for fun and profit.
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>>33774710
>we'll need to learn potionmaking ASAP to get some fucking funds
true to the daughter raised by a guardsman, we need to traffic and profit from booze making
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>>33774759
>We need money. Eriadne likes rich people, right?
She likes people that are refined and elegant.

;__;
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>>33773507
I don't understand Law of the Golden Words at all. So, what, you give... uhh... success points (or something) from well-thought out posts?
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>>33774765
>true to the daughter raised by a guardsman, we need to traffic and profit from booze making
Or other drugs if they exist.
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>>33774831
He's saying good write in > Majority in Hexspeak.
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>>33774831
If someone comes up with a good idea, he'll use it regardless of whether it got voted or not
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>>33774542
Pretty much. I'm here for cute girls doing cute things while doing kind of cute things to other cute girls. No boys allowed.
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>>33774859
>>33774862
Ohhh. I get it.

That's cool, I guess. I don't see it becoming a problem since usually good stuff like that gets player votes as well.
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>>33774889
>No boys allowed.
I wouldn't mind them as occasional side characters. No straight hook ups please and thank you.
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Eva and Sora forming the Onee-san Alliance, and spending entirely too much time shipping EriadneXMaria when?
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>>33774940
Already in the making it seems.
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>>33774940
Do they make sure Helena doesn't get in trouble with the dark priestess?
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>>33774917
Hmph, I guess that's fine then.
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>>33774940
They're already on it. I fucking love the relationships in this quest and not just the main ones.
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>>33774973
>Do they make sure Helena doesn't get in trouble with the dark priestess?

> Sora
> not finding that entertaining as fuck
Suuuuuure.
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>>33774973
>get in trouble with the dark priestess
Why does that sound like a euphemism? Is the lewd getting to me?
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>>33775092
I thought it was too until I realized they were talking about that dark-haired girl Helena knows
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>>33775092
>Is the lewd getting to me?
Unless it's dealing with Eva the quest is almost offensively non-lewd so everyone is overcompensating.

>>33775116
The rate at which plot hooks are resolved is eclipsed by the rate at which they are introduced. We only learned of Eva's totem like half a dozen updates after we asked.
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>>33774917
>>33774976
These.

Eva is already lewd so I won't mind if she does anything. Or anyone.
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>>33775261
>Implying Eva isn't just flaunting the slight bit of maturity she has over the other girls.
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>>33775261
Maria is onee-san. We're not in a position to allow or forbid her anything!
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>>33775295
>Ohohoho, you jealous of my ample assests?

Like that?
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>>33775459
Not him but more
> Behold my experience and tremble!

Maria, Eriadne and Sora fighting over who can dote on us harder when?
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>>33775480
But we're Maria.
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>>33775493
I meant Evangelyne, disregard that I suck cocks.
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Did Hexmouto fall asleep?
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>>33775914
It's only been 2 hours anon. It normally takes 8-12.
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>>33775914
Of course he did. All the heat from his computer must be comfy to fall asleep to.
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>>33775914
It gets very cozy in the box.
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>>33776045
But XS is busy running and can't monitor the box right now! Maybe that's why Hex-mouto disappeared, tasting illicit freedom while she can.
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>>33775914
>>33775948
>>33775970
>>33776045
>>33776148

Last time he wrung over a thousand words of back and forth character interaction and dialogue out of a single short fight scene. Probably the same here.
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Eeesh. Need to grind so much more still.

Step it up, Hex. Getting dull.
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>Herbert Kleinsman @ConvictCyborg
>If just happened what I THINK just happened I'm going to be very, very upset. #thunderstorm #ZentradiCustoms #notFunny

Uh oh, a storm is hitting Hex
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>>33776473
Grind dem skills drawfriend.
> dat scene
Maria is so.adorably stupid.
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>>33776473
Great work anon!
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>>33776473
>those clothes
Witch Academy doesn't have uniforms does it?
I forgot WA's actual name
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>>33776535
> ZentradiCustoms
wat
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>>33776567
Mooncrest.
>>33776473
Cheers.
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>>33776540
She is. It's okay though, she is also the cutest.

>>33776547
Thanks. At the pace Hex runs his quests, I'll be a lot better before the first day is over.

>>33776567
Not that we know of. That one's based on ye olde german peasant outfit.
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> >Herbert Kleinsman @ConvictCyborg 1m
<Azatothic connections restablished>
<Dialling Sephirotic Gate>
<Elemental Grid Linked> Let's see. Looking stable for now. #dammitrain

REJOICE. Why so Chuuni hex.
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>>33777055
I wonder if he's that chuuni in RL, what if it accidentally leaks out sometimes?
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>>33777161
He's probably the chuuni equivalent of the homophobe secretly in the closet. So full normie when among people and even dismissive of his own kind.
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>>33777055
>not checking Symphonic Stabilizers

Jesus christ
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>>33777219
>>33777161
>>33777055
I want a quest based on Hexer's chuuni.
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>>33777470
>Hexer Quest
It's already a thing
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>>33777470
That is or was hexer quest. It was okay.
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>>33777478
>>33777500
Gud?
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>>33777650
Short, like super fucking short, he ran two-ish threads here before he moved it to Akun, that one is even shorter, it's filled with Hex's chuuni ramblings
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>>33777685
>it's filled with Hex's chuuni ramblings
What frightens me that internally it all made sense.
>>33777650
Okay but short.
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>>33777650
dead
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>no yuri
Dragons when?
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>>33777873
>>no yuri
[citation needed]
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>>33777873
>no yuri
How gay can you get?
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>>33777873
>Dragons when?
Eriadne has been there since thread one. Except now, and it upsets our little girl psyche greatly.
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>>33778117
That's why the universe set out to rectify that, by the way, what won the vote, knocking or peeking inside?
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>>33778117
But Eva's a dragon too?
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>>33778151
>But Eva's a dragon too?
She has white hair but we don't know if that means she's a dragon.

>>33778139
Peeking and listening.
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>>33778139
>>33778171
My count.

>>33773540
>>33773582
>>33773636
>>33773720
Silently

>>33773566
>>33773574
>>33773659
Knock
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>>33778171
>White hair
>Not a child of the Dragon

Do you even Valyria?
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>>33778251
http://ask.fm/ConvictCyborg/answer/115327861826

She's a clockmaker and artist.
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How do I get a daughter like Maria?
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>>33778611
Build one
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>>33778611
Be a badass guardsman that beats thugs with his bare hands and doesn't afraid of anything.
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>>33778693
Maria's papa is a badass
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>>33778611
Why would you want a dyke daughter?
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>>33778717
Get out
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>>33778717
That's crude and uncalled for.
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>>33778717
It was established that Maria's straight.
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>>33779008
>It was established that Maria's straight.
Nope.
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>>33779019
>>33778717
>>33779008
Maria's orientation is Cute.
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>>33779008
It was only established she hasn't discovered
pure love yet.
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>>33779019
Yep, see >>33774348
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>>33778717
To watch her get all embarrassed when I ask when her girlfriend is going to be coming over for dinner.
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>>33779078
> is a thing
See
>>33779072
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>>33779078
>Believing Kaleun's lies
Nope
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>>33779008
Maria isn't straight, bi, or lesbian, she's Eri-affectionate.
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>>33778664
Mad science is a go.
>>33778717
Why should I care what she likes or who she loves?
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>>33779251
>Why should I care what she likes or who she loves?
Same reason your parents didn't like you hanging out with delinquents.
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>>33779251
>>33779369
Listen to this Anon. You shouldn't hang around here, kid. Might be you'll get...hurt.

Ya don't wanna mess with Boss Maria, see?
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>>33779369
Because the smell of smoke is really hard to get out of clothing?
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>>33780412
And out of the lungs, too.
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I remember that one time my father slapped me for peaking into a window frame when I thought I heard someone singing and dancing. I was so curious! But he didn't think it was polite. Well, he's not here now!

I really want to know a bit more about what Eriadne too. She'll never tell anything personal to such a brutish, boyish girl.. I'll apologize later if I get in trouble I guess.

I feel my body freeze as I get a glimpse of Eriadne. Hanging by her neck from a rope tied to a hook on the floor, the elegant naked body of Eriadne oscilates ever so slightly. I'm vaguely aware of my jaw hanging down, but I'm transfixed by the bruises in her belly and chest, as well as the perfect ruby lines of dry coagulate across her forearms. It takes me a bit to smell it. There's actually a strong smell of pee in the room. I look at Eri's legs, and at the stream running down her.. lady parts. A pool of pee is forming around the overturned chair she climbed to hang herself.

I feel myself flush. No, I shouldn't be..! What is wrong with me!?

"Get out of the way!" Evangelyne shoves me aside. She doesn't care about dirtying herself when she grabs hold of Eri's legs and pulls up.

"Don't just lay there, get that noose off her neck!" I realize I landed on a pile of books and was too shocked to realize it. I clamber to my feet and climb on the piss-stained chair to reach the noose.

Eri's cold to touch, at least it feels that way when my hands brush against her face, sullied by tears and drool. She drops like a sack of lead on Eva the moment I yank her chin over the noose. They both fall into the puddle.

"Alright, now get out! The both of you! Go get a teacher!" Eva gently but firmly lays down Eriadne's inert body on her bed. I can see a letter written in a fancy script, something about arranged marriages. The letter opener is soaked in a coppery substance in the tip. "Wake up!" Evangelyne slaps me. She's right, I'm useless.

I run through some corridor, looking for someone, anyone...
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>>33780726
Nice attempt.
7/10 for effort.
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>>33780726
>>33780821

Thats not fair.
This is actually well written, I hope he continues it.
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>>33780726
Cutegirlsdoingcutethings/10
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>>33780726
I won't hate you because you included my fetish
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>>33780726
Ha, good try but I could tell immediately because I couldn't see the trip. I have custom stylesheet through Stylish extension hiding names but leaving trip blocks visible.
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>>33780888
Maybe when Hex breaks the 6 hour mark between updates after the next one, AToW: Magical Realm Edition will continue.
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>>33781573
Who would have guessed that Maria was into snuff.
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>>33774086
>>33774264
sweet jesus Katt
she was my waifu for a really long time
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>>33781656
That 12 year old taste.

BoF3 Nina forever.
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>>33781693
then i went kuno tatewaki style trying to decide between her and felicia from darkstalkers
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>tired, but don't want to miss the next update
I should have slept hours ago, you think I would have learned by now
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>>33782665
In all likelyhood, you can go to sleep right now and miss absolutely nothing.
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>>33783254
Not that anon, but that's what I always do, but I always miss everything.
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>>33774348
Are you really so desperate for attention that you'll shitpost in and try to derail quests that are more popular than yours?
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>>33783465
I think it was rather relevant to the quest.
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>>33783488
>lel my dad works for Questendo and he told me that hexy wexy told me that Maria is a slut for dragon cocks but he won't tell you guys because I'm da specialest to him~
>remotely relevant to anything
Don't kid yourself, Kaleun

Scratch that
>Kaleun
>Relevant to anything
Nigga is only known for running a grimdark little girl quest yet all he fuckin does is dump on little girl quests. He's a hypocritical faggot of the highest order.
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>>33783712
He's writing lewds, which is the relevant bit. I'm sorry you've got a vendetta, but tough luck.
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>>33783883
have you read Kaleun lewds. They're all shit in the first place.
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>>33783928
That goalpost moving
They're lewds, which is what counts.
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>>33783883
>He's writing lewds
Which makes him relevant how again? The fact that he has to piggyback off the success of Hexer by being a second rate fapfiction faggot for ATOW instead of doing his own goddamn quest is proof enough how irrelevant he is.
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>>33783950
I'm not >>33783712

The point is that Kaleun normally just uses hi shitty lewds to troll what ever pairing is popular at the time.
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Why is this quest angry all of a sudden? There is nothing to be angry about other than Hex's update speed. All is well.
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>>33784014
I think it has more to do with Kaleun making a shitposter out of himself rather than Hexer being Hexer.
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>>33784014
Because people decided to freak out a Kaleun.
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>>33784070
8 hours after he posted anything, oddly enough. Clearly someone has sworn a blood feud.

>>33784014
It's hard to be upset at Hexmouto's update speed when you know, sooner or later, it will arrive and it will be worth it.
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>I stayed awake for a Hexer quest
It's such an obvious mistake in hindsight
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>>33785998
Yes, yes it really is. I assume the only reason he's so slow is because both of his arms have been cut off and he has to write with his feet, while underwater and suffering from extreme hypothermia.
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>>33783712
>>lel my dad works for Questendo
I shouldn't have laughed.
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>>33780726
Good except Maria doesn't use words like oscillate or transfixed.
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>>33786615
I'm waiting to see if anon will post the next part in an hour like he said he would
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>>33786615
I'm curious if there are any other significant differences between the ways characters speak.Almost blind to it myself.
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>>33786653
He said after the next update.
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> writing resumes, thanks for your patience in the face of these conditions
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>>33786903
You'll be facing my fists soon, son.
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>>33786903
Just as I was about to sleep. Ah well, I'll catch up in the morning. Fight the good fight for me, anons!
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>>33786917
Hey now, it isn't Hex's fault that his computer is haunted by vengeful NEET spirits who become enraged by any sign of productivity.
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>Herbert Kleinsman @ConvictCyborg 12m
>Don't go telling Kaleun lies like that Hex, you'll break someone's heart like ... — I'll protect your smiles, anon. http://ask.fm/a/b10f0kkp
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>>33786985
It is exactly his fault for not purifying it every month.
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>>33786990
> faith increasing
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>>33787549
I'm not so sure. He might be planning to make us cry later.
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>>33787661
Anon why.
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>Hexer researching youth weightlifting
Is that because we were talking about how buff Maria might or might not be last thread?
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>>33788042
>Is that because we were talking about how buff Maria might or might not be last thread?
Probably from before. She's stated she doesn't consider herself attractive because she's sturdier than others somewhere I'm pretty sure.
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Ffff---

Okay. I really WISH this were an excuse but... Anyway, I have to bring something from here to someone because they left it, the way to here and back will take about two hours.

Then again, it's my fault for not finishing this seven hours ago.

Sorry.

>>33788042
Ah, general interest in training and how it works when done from early on.

Anyway, I'll be on my phone so if you have questions please ask.
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>>33788992
Will there be a chance for trips to local cities or someplace to go clothes shopping?
Dress up is one of my favorite parts of a quest
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Okay, I'm gonna take this chance to go to sleep, don't fuck up guys
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>>33789048
It's okay. Eriadne couldn't possibly hate us more than she already does.
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>>33789069
We should really just get another room mate. Maybe if we explain in a letter she'll understand it's not her but us?
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>>33789194
yeah nah we ain't doing that
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>>33789030
> type response
> phone goes out
> ???
> HURR

> a chance
You'll be expected to, even if it's just because one of your betters felt like eating Faranga Stew (a dish prepared from the meat of a quail-like bird, three types of mushroom and an assortment of vegetables and spices pickled in Blackbean sauce and stirfried in a pan, pretty popular but expensive which means it's not being made in the school kitchens) or some sort of more official mission.

Provided you gain enough trust and connections it should be easy to acquire permission to extend such a visit beyond the required timeframe or perhaps even get leave to pursue your own private interests.
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>>33789896
>pursue your own private interests.
Does Eriadne count as a private interest?
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>>33790058
>Does Eriadne count as a private interest?
Seeing how she's just another student, yes.
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>>33790109
Do the witches get school uniforms?
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>>33790109
Do you still love Pandora?
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>>33791473
QM aren't allowed to love QM.

>>33791320
During the planning phase I had it so wearing the uniform was a privilege, not a right, so they'll get one only later.
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>>33791955
What is Maria wearing right now, apart from the linen dress previously mentioned?
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>>33791979

Pantyhose obviously.
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Helena x Sora x Eva threesome when.
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>>33792143
When Maria grows a magic dick to make them dance on it
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>>33792143
Never
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>>33792143
Helena is the dom.
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>>33791979
>>33791979
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>>33792448
Much obliged.
>Nopan
Huh.
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>>33792507
Anon pls, Hex simple won't acknowledge your lewdness by providing an example.
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>>33792448
So she goes commando? Unexpected.
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>>33792507
>>33792520
Contain yourselves.
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>>33792448
Simple but classy. I like it.
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>>33792540
Well she goes commando because she can't contain her magic dick
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>>33792540
What do you mean?
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>>33792540
Nopan until indicated otherwise, at which point we need a specific kind of pantsu to be detailed, in the interests of fidelity.
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>>33792507
>>33792520
As the ask.fm has indicated, witch panties are restricted information.
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>>33792601
That's actually smart.
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Since everyone's at it, I thought I'd give it a shot.
This is just the first draft, I'm looking to fill the rest of the scene out. What do you guys think?
http://pastebin.com/9cQF6qWh
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>>33793019
...go on.
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>>33793019
You have my attention.
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>>33793019
The writing was actually surprisingly on-point for Hexer's style, dialogue and all. For nitpicking, Eriadne seemed more forward than I'd think of her, and things in general escalated waaay fast, but those are fairly typical for smutfics really.
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>>33793019
Maria trips over her own thoughts and words a bit more when flustered but otherwise pretty good.
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>>33793061
>Eriadne seemed more forward than I'd think of her, and things in general escalated waaay fast
I agree, actually. I'm really unhappy with how quick it starts.

>>33793070
Noted. I actually did have her stuttering more, but cut most of it since she was barely coherent.
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>>33793092
>Noted. I actually did have her stuttering more, but cut most of it since she was barely coherent.
Not actually stuttering. More like mixing sentences together.

>>33723895
> I thought maybe… we, you know, teacher let us go and maybe you and us, like, walk a bit if you are allowed?" What in the… really now!
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>>33793019
> Pimp Eva
Best Eva.
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>>33793092
>barely coherent stuttering
That is my fetish.
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Poor Hexer, the lewd is overtaking his thread absolutely!
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>>33793211
>Poor Hexer, the lewd is overtaking his thread absolutely!
That's how we show we care.

Fapfiction and futa.
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>>33793092
Have her test the waters a bit. Rest hand on her knee, brush her hair away from her face, go down her hips and up again, brush up against the front of her dress, etc.

Having your lover get a bit handsy is awesome if you like them.
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Okay enough lewd.

Who is better Onee-san, Evangelyne or Sora?
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>>33793651
Need more data.
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>>33793651
Sora is the kind of girl that will treat her imouto's broken heart by physically throwing her out of bed every morning and demanding they go for a run. Eva would just read stories to you and listen what you have to say.
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>>33793714
So together they produce the best onee-san?
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>>33793746
>We shall see soon enough, but consider this: Isn't everyone a little bit naughty deep, deep insider?
Hexer confirmed naughtiest witch.
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>>33794372
You mean slowest.
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>>33794372
>that entire reply
Fuck the chuuni got him again.
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>>33794379
Seriously it's almost been fucking 24 hours for one update. That's got to be some kind of failure record.
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>>33794447
No bully Hex
Hexer pls
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>>33794447
>Last thread of Cyborg Convict
That thread was alive for like 3 days and it never even got the last update
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>>33794447
>>33794488
it took roughly 2 months for CCQ to get its latest update from when the threads ended to the first actual update on Akun
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>>33794488
>>33794496
>worry
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>>33794447
It isn't even Hexer's personal record.
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>>33794488
>>33794496
I've made a terrible mistake getting invested in this quest.
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>>33794488
>>33794496
I'm sure Hexer has vastly improved since then and his burning dedication will be more than sufficient to keep this updating at a pace of some kind.
Oh god please
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>>33794532
It really makes you appreciate people like German. He's fucking crazy good at keeping a scheduled and updating.
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>>33794509
New here? Honest question not trying to be snide.
>>33794567
But all his characters talk in the same voice.
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>>33794625
Not really I just don't go to QTG and I didn't know about Hexers other stuff.

I'm not saying Germans the best Writer or anything but he is super reliable.
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>>33794659
It's a QTG meme to say that all a QM's characters talk in the same voice, and German took it seriously once and asked for advice so it stuck to him.
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>>33794567
Hexer is supposedly German.

But I've begun to doubt that, since the Germans are really good at being punctual, while Hexer doesn't really seem to give much of a fuck and just updates whenever.
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>>33795212
I was referring to German Schteel the QM who runs LGA.
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>>33794702
To be fair he really does have that problem sometimes especially in that meguca quest he ran.
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>>33795316
I though the Liberty gang were usually pretty distinct, and I never had a problem knowing who was talking.

Either way I think it's more QTG joke than actual criticism.
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>>33792448
So is the thread done?
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[X] Listen at the door
[X] Open the door silently -hopefully that will work- and peek.

> Two successes = Decent success

My hands move before I can stop them, fingers weaving into patterns as familiar as breathing. When nothing happens I look first behind myself then my raised arms. Slowly, ever so slowly it dawns on me what I just did.

Evangelyne looks at Sora, who shrugs and returns the glance.

"Sorry to say but that ain't lookin' like a spell I know".

The redhead shakes her head and musters me like a very interesting painting. I might as well be, as I can feel myself colour again. Goddess, this so isn't happening.

"So?" Evangelyne's expression is softer but no less curious.

"They… law signs". I try to keep my voice low. The door is closed but who knows. My gaze sweeps the surroundings as I draw them into a shadowy niche the faint light from overhead can't reach.

"That's ain't explainin' much". It doesn't? Why not?

"Oh, you kno--"

"I don't. S' why I'm askin'". I bite down the urge to glare at her.

"--we use them to, you know, talk to eachother. Without sound, when we can't speak. Like, when we need to get into a house".

"So you wanted to assault Eriadne's position, is that it?" Come on Evangelyne, don't copy Sora's grin like that!

"It was an accident!" Come on, you have to understand.

"I know, I know, sorry, that wasn't nice of me. However, I believe you wanted to simply drop by". Evangelyne bows stiffly, fist against open palm. The Plea of Forgiveness and Cleansing. I didn't know she could be so formal.

"It's okay! I'll just look myself". Without another word I turn back towards the portal, this time keeping my hands firmly to themselves. Turns out I've begun walking in cloud stance anyway, but they won't see that so it's okay.
> 1/?
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>>33796313
>assault Eriadne's position
I knew Eva was too lewd!
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Pressing my ear against the wood I strain to hear anything -anyone- beyond, but it seems pointless. It should okay. Just a peek. Just a little making sure she's inside and doing alright!

Slowly, ever so slowly, my hand searches for the doorknob and pushes it down till I feel the click I was hoping for. Hope this door is greased well and nobody looks this way.

"--makes Rotes of Rank fifty upwards often dependent on more than just our words. Increasing power equals increasing complexity equals increasing susceptability to outside interference such as the phases of the moon. Hmmm… yes~?" The voice reaching me through the crack is warm and dreamy, like a summer cloud. Strange, I thougth such a teacher would be severe and scary! I edge closer, feeling more confident and peer through the shining crack into the room behind it.

Inside it looks like a First Empire theater, the chairs standing in half-circles around the center that is the deepest point of the hall.

"Uhm, Mistress, does that mean some days of the month bar us from casting certain spells?" The voice comes from a redhead very close to the door. Come on now, even I got that!

Where is Eriadne, hmm. Ah, there! She's in the lowest row and looking at the teacher intently. I'll have ot thank the gods for my eyesight tonight. Ha, she probably understood everything teacher said till now.
> 2/?
>>
"That's right Lady Elaine, the stars, moon and even our sun are quite important to the craft. Since we are on the subject, would you tell us the finger aligned with the Headman's Star?" It seems the teacher doesn't mind being asked such questions. Well, she is really professional after all. Her brown -or so I think, it's hard to tell at the distance- eyes are hidden behind glasses and she looks quite kindly while the girl seems to wilt and crumple.

"I, no..."

"You'll learn, do not worry. Would anyone else step up or would you have me demonstrate again. Ah, yes, you?"

Eriadne stands after the teacher nods to her and turns to the rows of chairs above her.

"Calling upon the Headsman is done through the fourth finger of the le--" Yikes, I think she just looked this way. I dive-roll away from the door and slink back to Evangelyne and Sora. Well, at least she seems fine. Hopefully she hasn't seen me.

"Ya gotta show me that trick". What, the roll, Sora? That wouldn't have me saved from the slowest arrow, but I guess it was good enough this time. Evangelyne just motions me to turn around and begins beating the dust out of my dress while tutting disapprovingly.

"Tell me the next time you want to roll in dirt". I didn't want to, I had to!

"Sorry, I didn't think".

"Doesn't matter. You saw what you wanted?"

"Uh, yes". Evangelyne nods and rubs a spot on my cheek with her sleeve. Hey if you do that you'll get dirty too.

"Good. Let's go, or else there won't be much class left once we get done crawling through this blasted maze". She's right. As we make our way back Evangelyne lays out the rest of the plan for today. I can feel myself yawn so I am glad when it turns out it's not too much.

[] Class
[] [Skip] Dinner
[] [Skip] Night
[] Free
> if the merits of the choices are unclear in this case, I apologize and will explain
[] Talk/say/think anything to/about anyone?
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>>33796391
>[x] Class
Let's chat about law signs on the way, sounds fun.
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>>33796425
>>33796313
Did we just go full Spec OPs just to snoop in on someone?
>[x] Class
Let's chat about law signs on the way, sounds fun.
Seconding.
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>>33796391
>[] Class
>[] Talk/say/think anything to/about anyone?
Chat about random topics, learn a bit more about them if we can, they seem like interesting girls.
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>>33796391
>[x] Class
>[x] Talk/say/think anything to/about anyone?
Did we find out Sora's House and Totem?
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>>33796391
>[x] Class
Tell them about Eriadne's amazing answer in there, she's so smart.
Ask if they didn't have any 'secret' or silent systems of communication when they were younger too.
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>>33796391
>Lady Elaine
Wasn't that one of the name we could have chosen for Maria, did you make them characters too?
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>>33796527
>Ask if they didn't have any 'secret' or silent systems of communication when they were younger too.
Dude it's full blown Fantasy!FBI signals.
>>
>>33796646
Well yeah, in this case it is. But it's not like that kind of thing, if more rudimentary, is uncommon among groups of kids. Well, was, the information age doesn't exactly facilitate that kind of thing nowadays.
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>>33796391
>[X] Class
>Find some way to ask if Eva has younger siblings, also try to learn a bit more about Sora.
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>>33796683
>>Find some way to ask if Eva has younger siblings,
She'll so not react well to that.
>>
>>33796313
>>33796352

>"So you wanted to assault Eriadne's position, is that it?"
I like this girl.
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>>33796391
>[X] [Skip] Dinner
Why is nobody trying to speed things up?
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>>33796802
We gave up on going fast.
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>>33796391
> [x] Class
Where's Helena?
>>
>>33796777
Definitely waifu material.
>>33796802
Because it doesn't matter, the quest is based on character interactions and relationships not powerlevels so "speeding up" is missing the point. The only thing that needs to speed up here is OPs writing.
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>>33796969
>Where's Helena?
Ask Kaleun.
>>
What's our next class anyway? Is it one we share with Eriadne? Forgive my Maria-like obsession with her.
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>>33796751
It could be as simple as a "It almost feels like you're my big sister" from Maria.
Eva probably misses her siblings a lot.
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>>33797000
>Forgive my Maria-like obsession with her.
It's okay, I think it's generally accepted that the players are thinking more like the character than vice versa in this quest.
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>>33796969
>Where's Helena?
In Evangelyne's pocket.
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>>33797000
>What's our next class anyway?
Spell basics according to Lady Vivviane of house Nefesh mistress of the Thousand Cuts Blazing Judgment style (sic?)
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>>33796969
She's busy having fun times with her dark priestess counterpart. They only hate each other in public.
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>>33797312
>Eva busts in
>Helena and the dark one are having a tea party in pajamas
>they also made a pillow fort and are reading each others diary
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Rolled 7, 5 = 12

> okay back
> closing and writing
> Class time! Talk of law signs, snoop out info about Sora, get some intel on Evangelyne's situation, got it
> please wait warmly

>>33797000
>Is it one we share with Eriadne?
Let's see. Rolling convergence.
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>>33798498
>please wait warmly
>wait
The cycle of torment continues.

You're an integral part of an experiment to induce Stockholm Syndrome aren't you? Admit it.
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>>33798498
Huh. What does that roll mean I wonder.
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>>33798498
Archive this thread, since we're so close to autosage.
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>>33798498
>Rolled 2d10: 7, 5 = 12
C'mon universe, you know you want to see Maria and Eriadne together
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>>33798653
>Huh. What does that roll mean I wonder.
Obviously percentile dice roll to see how much the universe ships MariEri.
> 75%
Nice.
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>>33798702
That's a 60% though.
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Rolled 4, 4 = 8

>>33798498
Do we get to roll convergence for anyone else or is it just Eri? I wanna be in a class with allll our friends.
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>>33798702
>>33798722
Explain this to me. I'm too dumb for anything other than d20.
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>>33798771
The first anon was reading the dice like a percentile, where you roll 2d10 and each number is a place, 7 in the tens place and 5 in the ones, making that 75 out of a possible 100

The second anon was using the sum of both numbers out of the theoretical total, 12 out of a possible 20, or 60%

I hope that made sense
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>>33798771
>Explain this to me
Hex is a filthy dice-molestor. I bet he gets off on fondling as many dice as possible.
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>>33798771
I'm not sure what they're doing, but I'm pretty sure the d10 rolls are a dicepool system. 7, 5 is probably one success? The highest total is the one chosen.

With the peeking roll, we got 8, 8, 5, which gave us
> Two successes = Decent success
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>>33798901
The last convergence roll was d100 though, the other d100 was for navigation.
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>>33798900
Not Hex but that is one thing I like about dicepools, throwing twenty dice around is really fun
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>>33798920
Who knows, then. He didn't roll d100's here.
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>>33798944
>He didn't roll d100's here.
2d10 = d100
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>>33798972
Why though, it's not like he can't just roll a d100
Hex is probably just fucking around with the dice again
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> playing shipping dice poker against reality
This fucking quest.
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http://anydice.com/program/392
http://anydice.com/program/504

Nerds.
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>>33798901
It's a mix of WoD with something else. WoD uses 8 and above as a success, with dicepools thrown in.
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>>33799111
Doesn't 8 and above make successes too rare? You'd need to sling a lot of dice to not fail constantly.
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>>33799171
You usually have a pool of around three to six depending on splat and skill used at the moment.
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>>33799171
It's either WoD and 8 and above or Exalted and 7 and above
I think WoD uses exploding dice though and we haven't seen that if Hex included it at all
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>>33799226
Have we rolled a 10 so far? IIRC, only 10 explode.
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>>33799254
Hex gives us stuff like Chantseeker when we get a 10.
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>>33799254
We have, Hex counted it as a great success
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>>33798739
>Do we get to roll convergence for anyone else or is it just Eri? I wanna be in a class with allll our friends.

1. Sora
2. Evangelyne
3. Helena
4. Twins.

2d10, 4 minutes.
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Rolled 4, 2 = 6

>>33799332
Come one fate, you know you want it
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Rolled 2, 5 = 7

>>33799332
Rolling.

Archive the thread.
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Rolled 6, 8 = 14

>>33799332
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Rolled 4, 8 = 12

>>33799332
Dananananana
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>>33799332
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>>33799363
Looks like Eva didn't make it.
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Rolled 4, 10 = 14

>>33799332
Oh fuck these rolls.
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Rolled 6, 2 = 8

>>33799390
Bah
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Rolled 5, 6 = 11

>>33799332
Come on, Twins.
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Rolled 2, 4 = 6

>>33799332
Look at this grody roll.
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And close.
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>>33799453
These crappy rolls. I suppose we'll find out what happened when we get to class.
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>http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/33773438/
And archived.
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>>33799955
> just when I was getting to it
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>>33799955
> In which we spy on our friend.
That makes it sound so wrong.



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