You are Masako Ishikuno and right now you are blowing a pair of civvie's minds with the relevation of magic and your identity solely for the reason that they are actually good enough at magic to help out. Right now it seems like their minds crashed and they need something to get their minds off the revelation of their lives.[x]Take them to Akari, might take her mind off Aomi.You grab both of them by their hands and slowly drag them to the bundle of couches in the section of the seal chamber that Akari has called her own. She barely pays attention to you and your two charges as the cushion that smacked Aomi on the face is now flying around her and occasionally slamming into her ash she tries to smack it away, catch it or simply stomping it to prevent it from moving any more. You circle around the couch and look at the redhead from behind."Akari, cut that out." You say and you gently push the two magically sensitive girls onto the couch at her sides. That seems to snap them out of their...whatever it was that was going through their minds.For her part, Akari loses focus and the glow on both her finger and the cushion disappear as it unceremoniously falls to the ground. "What do you want, I'm the middle of something." She says to you while sounding a little bit irritated. Both of the the girls shudder and look to your clone between them."Well, first off. These girls here are Sasaki and Hiyori. They are going to be your magic students from now on." Yous say as happily as you can.1/2
"Are you retarded? Why did you bring civvies without any magical potential, what if they leak the everything." She seriously sounds pissed off right now."She's a bit rude isn't she?" Sasaki says and pats her on the head."Wait they can he-" She begins but you interrupt her."Yup. Think of something to teach them. Lubu gave me is OK to bring them here by the way. Oh and think of it as your punishment for fighting with Aomi. She's going to have to heal naturally from what you did to her so you get to teach these two." You put your hands on your hips and smile.Akari sighs and leans back on the couch while the two girls introduce themselves. Next up you are going to...[]Call the others, tell them whats going on. Don't want them freaking out.[]Talks some more with the girls.[]Talks with Aomi[]Talk with Lubu
>>31457663>[X]Talks some more with the girls.Leaving them with just this would be a bit cruel.
>>31457663[]Talks some more with the girls.Can't just dump them quite yet.
>>31457663>[x]Talk with Lubu>[x]Call the others, tell them whats going on. Don't want them freaking out.Talk with Lubu to get the details of their potential, how they may be able to help us. And if there's anything he wants us to help with other than forcing him to sleep.Then call the others to let them know that we have two new mage recruits.
>>31457663>[x]Talk with LubuWhat now brown cow?
>>31457663>[]Talk with Lubu"Ask the bear"
>>31457715>would be a bit cruel.And? Sounds like diet cherry evil to me.
>>31457773I'll try this appeal, then- they're out fan club, talking to them more might stroke our ego.I'll even suggest a topic. "So, how close did the forums get?"
>>31457663> []Talk with Lubu
>>31457663>[x]Talks some more with the girls.Fanclub bonding!
>>31457834Not actually all that confident about them staying fans once they get to know us well. Ego stroking is nice, but only from people we don't know that well. It just gets embarrassing, if they can tell we're seeking it.
Alright counting and writing!
>>31457663>[x] Talks some more with the girls.We should probably tell the newbies why we're doing this to them. Why are we doing this to them?
>>31458040>Why are we doing this to them?I think that's what we want to ask Lubu. We're just doing it because we like to collect minions, but some details on their potential would be nice.
>>31458040> Oh and think of it as your punishment for fighting with Aomi. She's going to have to heal naturally from what you did to her so you get to teach these two."W-we did totally not only bring you in to torment one of our existing members" doesn't sound too glamorous
>>31458040We need spellcasters.Akari has already proven the value of it, but having people who can move around the school relatively freely without tipping off Team Bad we're moving wards is worth its weight in gold.Also... Akari already made them curious. Bettwr to bring them into the loop than have them poking around.
>>31458162I am slightly concerned that getting to know us like this is going to drive them out of our fanclub.
>>31458289I'm more worried about Mathilda stealing them.Bitch be a fucking dragon, yo
>>31458349What, stealing their love for us, or claiming them as vassals? Cause she's already got her eyes on OUR bear.
[]Talk with Lubu"By the way, she is my clone so we're kind of like twin sisters I guess?" You shrug, "I'm the best one though.""You're as dumb as a rock." Akari grumbles and rolls her eyes and then leans back on the couch while thinking as the two girl looks at both you and her in confusion. "It's a long story, don't want to tell it right now." She says and both girls drop the subject."I'll be back soon, I'm going to talk with the bear." You say and leave the three of them to their on devices. Hopefully they'll get along and Akari could use more people to talk to.You stride up to the bear in question and you see him looking at his handiwork on some parts of the glowing magic circle and sighs, "It's going to take me all day to fix this. Efficiency is down and there's a flow block in sever minor areas." He seems to be talking to himself as he inspects and he finally notices you. "Masako, how're the girls holding up?"You put your hands behind your head as you answer "Shocked but they'll get used to it. I was wondering why you gave me the go ahead to accept these girls.""Their magical potential is exceptional, not the best I've seen but it is certainly a step above average. I didn't think humans in this day and age were capable of having that potential." He says, "Though it's a bit chaotic as it is with people with no training. It was a lucky find though, I don't think we will find more people like them in town." He sits on the ground and begins thinking."An idea how they would best use their power?" You ask, might be another reason why he chose them."That would depend on the person itself, on what they consider valuable and several other factors." He answers, "It is almost impossible to predict that."Huh so thats a thing.[]Go back to the girls, Aomi seems to have joined them..[]Ask Lubu something else (Specify)[]Tell the others about these girls so they don't freak out.
>>31458414Either or.Dragons got a thing for stealing maidens AND (whisper it) shes got serious potential to be The Ace.
>>31458431>[x]Ask Lubu something else (Specify)>[x]Tell the others about these girls so they don't freak out.Anything we can do to help you out?
>>31458431>[]Go back to the girls, Aomi seems to have joined them..>Aomi seems to have joined them..>Aomi RED ALERT! RED ALERT!
>>31458431[]Go back to the girls, Aomi seems to have joined them..We can't leave two new girls alone with Aomi and Akari, we just can't.
I can't help noticing that our new minions appear to be cuter than we are. This will not stand.>>31458431>[x] Go back to the girls, Aomi seems to have joined them..One must ensure that our sisters are not trolling each other again. We didn't even leave the room. We just turned our back for like... a minute.
>>31458431>[x]Go back to the girls, Aomi seems to have joined them..
>>31458463>Dragons got a thing for stealing maidensWe are a maiden.
Alright, counting and writing
I wonder what other kinds of swords we can conjure...
>>31458835My question isHow MANY swords can we conjure?
>>31458835All must suffer as I have suffered.>>>/d/5390555
>>31458835I think even just the two swords we have are good, if we abuse physics. Start a swing with fast sword then transform to strong sword to hit them harder than we can normally.
>>31458878....you fucking monster...
>>31458895I can only think of the crazy devil may cry stuff we can do with that.
>>31458878>He doesn't even fuck her with this penisMost disappointing doujin ever
>>31458916Only if we have to get swords in the same way Dante gets swordshttp://youtu.be/2r0tX6VxRUY
[x]Go back to the girls, Aomi seems to have joined them.Aomi is sitting on another couch but still near Akari if that isn't lighting a cigarette in a warehouse full of TNT you don't know what it is. Though it seems to be pretty calm right now you are far enough away from them to not be able to hear what they're talking about. You walk ever so closer to them and see that...nothing is wrong. Aomi is giving Akari the cold shoulder by reading a magazine and ignoring her whenever she addresses her. The palm of your hand meets your face, at least it is a step up from trying to murder each other but you get the feeling that this problem won't be fixed anytime soon...it reminds you a bit on how Misa was treating you. Those two can't really tell when they need to let something go.You sit down on the square of couches on the one opposite to Aomi and the other girls are over to your right. They keep talking to Akari and she seems to have told them that she's not allowed to leave the school or talk to normal people which is why only a small amount of people can hear her. She has avoided telling them why so far but they are bound to find out eventually.You keep looking at this awkward arrangement and you feel like you need to break the stalemate between Akari and Aomi somehow.[]Tell a story about something you did (Specify)[]Ignore this situation, fill the girls in with some more details.[]It's enough for today, go have them meed the others?>>31458768You are indeed a Maiden
>>31458994Being at work is the worst.I look forward to reading this in the morning.
>>31459125>[x]It's enough for today, go have them meed the others?We still haven't adequately resolved our situation with Misa, don't think we can help them really.
>>31459125>[x]Tell a story about something you diduhhhh....we robbed a convenience store once
>>31459193We still have some booze left over right? Maybe getting our sisters drunk together will help resolve their issues.
>>31459125>[x] Ignore this situation, fill the girls in with some more details.We should probably give them a rundown on Marcus, Sushi, and a couple of other people whom they should definitely stay away from.
>>31459125> [x]Tell a story about something you did (Specify)Remember back in the day we were plundering for alcoholics with a bear, having only the Vomit as our special move? How nostalgic.
>>31459125>[x]Ignore this situation, fill the girls in with some more details.At least they behaving for now.
>>31459277>dat picWhy am I laughing so hard?
>>31459125[]It's enough for today, go have them meed the others?
>>31459125>[x]Ignore this situation, fill the girls in with some more details.If they're not killing each other, that's good enough for me.
>>31459125>[x]Ignore this situation, fill the girls in with some more details.We could tell them stories but when you think about it, not many of them put us in a remotely good light.
Counting and writing
>>31458878can you unsee ?
[]Ignore this situation, fill the girls in with some more details.You cough loudly to get the attention of the girls and and when you see that both Sasaki and Hiyori are looking at you, and your sisters as well. "I was thinking that maybe we should explain some things while we're here. If you have any big glaring questions feel free to ask them!" You exclaim, trying to sound more excited than you are which only draws a sigh from Aomi and causing Akari to shake her head slightly. Yeah, they know you better than what you're showing alright.Sasaki asks first, "I was thinking that this must have been here before the archeologists found this school right? Why now? What about the ones taht keep making monsters out of people? What's up with them?"You recall what Lubu told you about your dad, "The ones that turn people into monsters are Kind Diavolo's generals, lieutenants, elites? They're some of the strongest on that side of the seal. He conquered another world, the one where Lubu comes from. And he wants to take over this world"You say that last part in a weaker voice, making sure that Lubu doesn't hear that.Sasaki puts her hand over her mouth and says, "That's horrible." As she looks over to the bear in the middle of the room working.Hiyori raises her and before speaking, "If you don't mind me asking this but, What is the deal between the two of you?" She points to both you and Akari,"Your faces are exactly alike as if you were twins but your hair and eyes are a completely different shade. You said you were clones but that doesn't really fit. Your personalities are completely different and Akari said she didn't remember anything before she met you." She asks, and you wonder why no one has noticed this between you and Momoko.You look at Akari who is looking intently at you. What will you do?[]"Magic, that's all you need to know for now"[]Tell them all the details about the thing between the two of you...even the bad ones.[]Something else (specify)
>>31459950>[x]"Magic, that's all you need to know for now"they need to grasp the basics before we bother introducing the tricky stuff
>>31459950>magic
>>31459950>[x]"Magic, that's all you need to know for now"They can find out when they get to know her better.
>>31459950>[x] Tell the truth, but skim through it.Just an alternate personality built by the bad guys to control me, but I'm too awesome to control, so we gave her her own body instead.
>>31459950Now is probably not the ideal time to spill all the spaghetti
>>31459950>[x]"Magic, that's all you need to know for now"
>>31459950>[x] Something else (specify)Facepalm. "Dammit, Akari, this is exactly why I tried to keep the story simple. Should I tell them that you sprang fully formed from my head, or do I have to go into all the sordid details?"
"Magic, that's all you need to know for now" You say as bluntly as you can, there are a lot of morbid details to the story and some very complicated things regarding magic and memory crystals and all sorts of things.They look at each other, unconvinced, then at Akari."Lets just say that we sort of got along at first, I helped her make and important decision. Then I did something really stupid and we fought about it and we're all better." She says, "It isn't a pretty story but we'll tell you about it later." The two girls seems satisfied with that answerWell, that makes things a lot eas- You hear the sound of paper ripping and by the time you turn to look Aomi is already walking away from you and towards the entrance. She is moving quickly and she didn't even bother to look back. Just what the hell is wrong with her? Sasaki and Hiyori look a bit uncomfortable with this but don't say anything. You chase after Aomi and wait until you are almost at the exit from the seal room that your sister turns around. You are only a few steps behind and you can clearly see what she didn't want the others to see. She's been crying the whole time you were walking towards the exit. Her eyes are red and well...this isn't the sister you are used to.>[x]HugYou open your arms and hug her, something is definetely wrong with her, you've only seen her like this once before.[]Ask her whats wrong.[]Wait for her to tell you.
>>31460866>[x]Ask her whats wrong.this is gonna give me diabetes
>>31460866>[X]Ask her whats wrong.Poor Aomi, now she's the middle child.
>>31460866>[x]Ask her whats wrong.
>>31460866>[X]Ask her what's wrong.
>>31460866>[x] Ask her whats wrong.
>>31460866>[x] Ask her whats wrong.We had to find out what was wrong with Misa. We can do no less for our little sister.>>31460923If Akari hadn't come along, Mirror Spear and Mirror Shield probably would have. They still might.It's okay. We can be onee-sama for as many adorable mental cases as we have to.
>>31460866>[x]Wait for her to tell you.Asking will only make her cry harder.
>>31460977>Mirror Spear and Mirror Shield probably would haveOne failure is happenstance. Two is coincidence. Three is enemy action.I don't think they will try the clones again, not after fouling Mirror Blade and then Mirror Axe.Or if they do try again, they'll put so many failsafes they'll either be immune to our conversion attempts or will explode or similar if they do end up converted.
>>31461150That's a heartbreaking thought.Perfect season finale material.
Counting and writing.
>>31461150So...we need to steal the technology responsible for our creation and get Lubu to rework it so we can humanly create more Mirrors. I wonder what a Mirror Pride Princes would be like?
>>31461233>humanly create more MirrorsAssuming that's possible. I bet there's a possible tragic side effect that's going to bite us in the end.
>>31461150Well, the Doc does seem motivated to show that he can create a Mirror Cure who doesn't immediately turn immediately betray Team Rage. It sounded like he wanted to capture Masako and Aomi for that purpose last time we saw him, but he might very well be flexible enough to aim for Michiko and Amano instead.I should note that while sparring with them does help develop their skills against the eventuality that the doc will send someone to get memory shards out of them, it also means that if and when our remaining little sisters are born, they'll likely know exactly how to wreck our shit.
>>31461233At the end of the story, can we reveal ourselves as the true villains with our scheme to replace all humans with superior mirror clones?
>>31461367Or we can just repopulate the Rage World with people that are slightly less assholish. And yes I am proposing a genocide against our father's people.
I'd be happy with just staying alive and exploring the world.
>>31461324>it also means that if and when our remaining little sisters are born, they'll likely know exactly how to wreck our shit.I imagine we are saving our abuse of physics sword-switching technique for this scenario.
>>31461367Being megucca is suffering.
>>31461504travel to far away exotic locationsmeet new interesting peopleand then beat them up
>>31461539Visit a certain district of Tokyo to pick a fight with a red-eyed monster...
>>31461301Wouldn't Lubu know if the process was imperfect?Also, who says the seal we're at is the only seal in the world? Or that Blade, Axe, Spear and Shield are the only cures?
>>31461600We international precure now
>>31461600There are no guarantees, but we're restricted to the local area by magical means. We can't go chasing after rumors of other PreCures, so if we're getting any crossovers, they'll have to come to us.Fortunately, our enemies don't seem likely to wander far from their mission objective either. So the possibility that we'd have to deal with Mirrors Black & White is thankfully extremely low.
>>31461600>Wouldn't Lubu know if the process was imperfect?Maybe, who knows.
>>31461710>Mirrors Black & WhiteWe'd switch sides again immediately if we came across them.
>>31461663Future jobbers
>>31461754Mirror black and white would be hard gay for their counterparts, though.
[x]Ask her what's wrong.She keeps crying on your shoulder and you are reminded of that one night. "What's wrong Aomi? You can tell me." You ask her as you pat her back and you are greeted by more sobbing for the next few minutes. She isn't in the condition to talk or anything. Her sobbing slowly subsides enough for for her to be able to breathe properly .She doesn't pull her head away from your shoulder when she starts speaking, "It hurts me sister." She hugs you tighter, "You get along so well with the one that tried to kill you. Why?" She sobs some more and you really find it hard to know what to say, "I can't just forget what that thing made me go through for two whole weeks. I thought you were going to die so many times that time that I was afraid to leave you because I didn't want to be alone." She squeezes even tighter now.She continues, "I cried my eyes out for two weeks, I was afraid you might die for two weeks even when Lubu took you away." She is shaking and finally looks up. Her face is a mess of tears and snot and you imagine that your shirt's shoulder is much in the same condition. She did care for you in Michiko's dad's clinic didn't she? And you were pretty close to dying back then.You really suck at dealing with people but you still feel like a scumbag for not noticing why Aomi was acting that way earlier."I will never forgive her even if you already have sister." She says while barely holding back her sobs.Your reaction?
>>31461825"Then don't. But there's a difference between forgiveness and hate."I'm not good at this.
>>31461825This is tough. We can kind of understand where she's coming from, we get pretty upset at the thought of someone hurting Aomi. At the same time we can't really hold a grudge against someone trying to survive like we would ourselves. I think the true issue may be that Aomi knows that. And is upset that she can't forgive her when we can.
>>31461825[x] continue to hug, Even if you refuse to forgive her, please treat her as someone fighting alongside us.
>>31461825"I can't condemn how you feel. I can't imagine what I'd have done if it was you in that situation. But she didn't ask to be in that situation. We should know better than most what people will do for self-preservation. You don't have to forgive her now, but as we all work together to fix the mistakes we've made, I hope time will heal the rift between you two."Phew. Sentimental enough?
>>31461825She wasn't given a choice. Take over our body or die. Try to take over our body and still die, or just remain a rock with intelligence and awareness but be forever imprisoned.If you can't forgive her, you don't have to hate her. If he knew that we suffer like this even in thwarting his designs, father would be pleased...and I cannot aide the thought of him so.
>>31461825"I'm not going to tell you how to feel about this or anything.Your feelings are yours and yours alone. Just don't let them control you."hugwhisper "I'm sorry I made you cry sister."
>>31461825You don't have to forgive her, just don't hate her, that's what HE would want.
>>31461825Aomi shouldn't have to forgive her, but for her own sake she should act classier around even somebody she despises. Petty fights are gonna hurt Aomi's reputation more than Akari's, really. Plus, little red's a useful asset right now and you don't break those until they stop being useful.Plus, look on the bright side. If Akari does turn on us Aomi will get to kill her after all. And won't that feel good? Just gotta be patient.
>>31461825>[x] All the way pink"I know how it must look. She tried to kill me, and I was kind of egging her on at the time, but now only a couple weeks later we're getting along so well. It's not like I've forgotten what happened, just... she went and risked her life too. She doesn't even have the magical endurance that you and I have, but she went out there and fought anyway. I have to respect that... and I don't want to stay angry at her. I spent the first part of my life with a rage in the back of my mind that just wouldn't go away, and now that it's gone, I don't miss it. If I stay angry with her, it's just what Dad would want, and more than anything else, I don't want that."
>>31461710>Mirrors Black & WhiteWe can take them. It's Cure Heart and Cure Lovely what scare me.The former will add us to her harem, no chance of escaping, and the latter will just tear us apart.
>>31462127As long as it's both, we can just point them at each other. The problem will take care of itself.
>>31462127I'm more scared of Honey.
>>31462127It's like this picture was made to reply to your post.
>All this pinkMasako's going to need to start worrying about going full Momoko, isn't she?
>>31462191This must be Mirror Nagisa's fault
Lets see what I come up with this mishmash of responses, final post incoming
>>31462209Nah. There's no reason Masako should have to change when she's the superior one. If anything, Momoko should worry about being mistaken for us.
>>31462217
>>31461825Call it an inherited flaw from Momoko. We got an ungodly high level of tolerance for our own bullshit
>>31462299Midriff = power She must be the strongest cure
>>31462155Honey didn't beat a motherfucker with two other motherfuckers.I do admit what she does is worse. She mindrapes the motherfuckers with songs.
>>31462394I take you haven't seen the latest? That webm is titled colony drop for a reason. Honey isn't just songs.
>>31462343That's a flaw? You must be mistaken.
>>31462343luckily we are perfect and have no bullshit to speak of
>>31462427I did. She went full Mami Tomoe and ribbon'd smash a big motherfucker. Nothing out of the ordinary and far better than a musical mindrape.
>>31462462This is correct. We are Mirror Blade. Even if our actions appear contradictory, we remain perfection embodied. Bullshit is a thing that other people do.
>>31462522Technically, that was last week's episode. Personally, I'm lazy and haven't gotten around to this week's, and I think that's justifiable because it just aired today.
>tfw you're the only one in the thread that's never watched any precurefills me with a deep sense of neutrality
>>31462566Justifiable if you're too impious to miss the livewatch, maybe. Heretics.
>>31462667You can start at any time!
>>31462667*raise hand* you're not the only one.
>>31462694This is not a theocracy, and your God-Emperor is dead!
"You know Aomi." You pat her on the head, "You don't really have to forgive her." You say reassuringly. "But don't hate her for what she is." You tighten your grip on her."But-""She tried to kill me to survive after being put in a situation she never wanted to be in. I would have done the same thing in her position so I don't blame her. We were like that at first but I got us out of that. But after she did all that she went ahead and risked her life to help us defend the seal even though she doesnt have our magically enhanced defenses, endurance or strength.""I think I'll try." She says weakly, "For you.""And if she ends up betraying us you will be right and you get to kill her. Besides, having petty arguments and catfights doesn't suit you. That's more of my thing." You smile, "Also hating people is something dad would have wanted us to do so lets do our best to disappoint him even more than before.She sobs but smiles at you, her face is a mess, "It's why we ran away in the first place."Sorry for the shorter posts today. I found it hard to write big posts today due to lack of focus.also>>31462667>>31462710I'm curious as people who haven't seen preccure how do you feel about this quest.Also I'm sorry but I'm going to postpone the Momoko Q&A session because I'm not feeling it right now.
>>31462440>>31462462Thats as maybe but Akari and Momo have plenty
>>31462830I find it entertaining.
>>31462830came for the "evil" (HAH!)stayed for the clone with aspirations beyond fighting the original.nice playing a bitch and a nervous wreck instead of shonen cliche #14376has enough of a power rangers feel (I never watched sentai, sue me) so I dig it well enough
>>31462830>I'm curious, as people who haven't seen preccure how do you feel about this quest?I've been here, off and on, since thread one. I still have no idea what the hell's going on most of the time, but the setting's fun and your write the characters well. Actually, all your writing's been good and I love the humor. So, in summary I'm thoroughly enjoying the quest and the exploration element of slowly uncovering more about the setting.
>>31462830>I'm curious as people who haven't seen preccure how do you feel about this quest.I have only watched Smile, DokiDoki and what aired so far of HaCha. I hear the earlier seasons (Yes in particular) are full of Brians, so I'm giving those a wide berth.Even with that, I don't feel like I'm missing references.
>>31462830I hadn't actually noticed that the posts were any shorter. The timing felt about the same, and it was enjoyable, which is what matters....I should load up my image library onto my phone. I'm gonna be on vacation for the next couple of threads, and I still feel the burning need to quest.
>>31462830Thanks for the thread Kintolesky
The source material doesnt really factor much into how good the quest is for me since you explain or provide necessary fluff to compensate my lack of knowledge. Other the panties -> sword, this quest seems to go along predictably the good and careful route in a martial magical girl settings.
>>31462938>has enough of a power rangers feel (I never watched sentai, sue me) so I dig it well enoughWell, Pretty Cure is sentai for little girls so that means the quest is hitting the mark perfectly.
>>31463060all it needs is a youth center. and some kind of power stealing candles.
>>31463001You're missing out on some great /het/ romance in Yes5 and 5GoGo. see pic for reference.>>31463060Precisely, I'm glad I'm getting the feel right on target.>>31463038It has to stand on its own but I was curious on the opinion of people that never saw any of the series.
>>31463144Also this
>>31463144>/het/ romanceMy kryptonite. And exactly the reason I stay away from the rest of the series.
>>31463575Splash Star doesn't really have any and is really good. You should at least watch it.
>>31463637Neither does HeartCatch. Technically.
>>31463637>doesn't really>>31463708>Technically.Worrying. Still, my tolerance limit is exactly three non-continuous Brian episodes per series.On to Splash Star and HeartCatch.
>>31464505I don't think there is a single series that fulfills that. It's as light on romance as any magical girl show can possibly get. Romance of any kind.
>>31462830It makes me feel good inside. It's like you're holding my hand, Kinto.
>>31463144This quest is the only reason I've seen any Pretty Cure at all.
>>31464907Actually, no. Thats not entirely fair. I wouldn't be watching Happiness Charge if not for the thread, but I'm enjoying it enough that I'd keep watching it even without.
>>31462830>Sorry for the shorter posts today. I found it hard to write big posts today due to lack of focus.You might want to try sticking with your shorter posts if it's easier for you.The general standard of the posts seems to be up. Dialogue is a little rough and pacing is a little wobby, but generally your writing seem leaps and bounds ahead of where you were when you started this quest.
