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>>27877615
I chuckled a little, “Not unless you feel like a little more jealousy.”

Martina groaned, “Oh no. Just tell me now and get it over with.”

I explained about the offer of the armor upgrade and the little incident at the fitting. Martina simply shook her head. “Great. So now I need to compete with the dwarf barmaid. It’s a good thing that dragons are above such petty things such as jealousy otherwise this would be doing a real blow to my self esteem.”

I raised an eyebrow, “…Says the woman that I’m currently holding in my arms?”

She laughed, “Oh that’s nice and all, but I only thought that I had to compete with the elves and Aimèe. I didn’t expect the dwarf too. Can I at least trust that her brother is also not secretly harboring a crush for you?”

“Ha ha. From the way he was staring at you in that harness I would say that he would sooner go for you. And while you’re at it, you should probably count Aimèe and Veila as one competitor. They basically offered me a three way when I saw them in the market.”

Martina groaned, “Ugh. Now how am I supposed to react when you come in and drop something like that on me?”

“Hmm… I don’t know. Maybe you could start a team up of your own? I heard you express an interest in Felìcita as a house pet earlier?”

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>>27877624
Martina gave a playful growl and swatted at my ear, I returned one to her rump and enjoyed the mock outrage on her face. I chuckled softly and said, “My my. You’re getting to enjoy this aren’t you?”

She grinned sheepishly “A little I guess,” her face became serious for a moment, “But I do like spending time with you. I would like to…” her face flushed deep red, “… never mind.”

I pulled her a little closer, “No, no! Say what’s on your mind, please!”

She looked up at me, her face red and her lips were trembling a little, “I-I w-wouldn’t mind the a-advanced mount training. I-I’d l-like you to ride me any time. Even out of combat.” She pushed her face into my chest, “There! I said it! I want you to mount me! By the draconic lords, I am such – “

I cut her off there by pulling her head away from my chest and pressing my lips to hers. As her eyes opened wide, her body pressed closer to mine, eventually as time passed she shifted her body to straddle my legs and began to wrap her arms around me. We stayed like that for what seemed like eternity, but finally we broke away.

I spoke first, “Martina. I love you. I care a great deal about you. You’re not – whatever you were about to say. You’re a beautiful woman and an amazing dragoness and any man could count himself lucky to even spend a moment of time with you. Okay?” After that nothing was said for a while. Nothing needed to be said. We stayed like that for a long and pleasant moment.

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>>27877629
However eventually Martina broke the silence, “I don’t suppose you’re going to break the hearts of the other girls for me? No, don’t answer. I don’t think you could do that even if you wanted to.” She sighed, “Us dragons aren’t known for being generous with our things, but for you… I might try. Just don’t expect me to give up every territorial instinct okay? I’m still your first and main lover. Alright?”

I stared amazed. I never thought that that would actually happen. I mean I’d hoped that it could certainly, but it actually working out was entirely unexpected. In light of this I said the only thing I could, “Of course dear.”

We passionately embraced again, things were about to pass the point of no return, my hands were around her robe’s fasteners and I was starting to undo them when she held up her hands, “Wait, just one moment. You said that you were taking everyone out somewhere after this? Somewhere special?”

I was a bit surprised but I acceded to her wishes, I gave her enough details about the planned trip to give her an idea of what to expect, but not the full thing. She nodded slowly, “I may be a horrible person to go this far with you and then stop, but… can we wait until we’re there? Make this something special for the both of us?”

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>>27877636
I smiled back at Martina. “If you ever want to wait on something, all you have to do is ask. Of course we can wait until we’re there.” Of course various parts of my lower body wanted to veto this plan, but when a woman wants to wait on something like that, you damn well wait.

Unfortunately, this left a large awkward silence to fill. We sat there for a few minutes until I spoke up, “So… I understand you needed some help with research?”

“Oh! Yes, that.”

We both got up and spent several minutes rearranging clothes and straitening up before we returned to the private room where Martina was doing the bulk of her research. We sat there in another awkward silence until Martina coughed and began to speak. “So… I started to look into this Mr. Aldric. Evidently he only spent a small portion of his time here actually maintaining his control over the kingdom. Easy enough to do with enchantment spells I suppose, but that’s not why we’re here. The reason I bring him up is that he spent the entirety of the rest of his time in this library; in the Black Section.

Martina explained, “The Black Section is where the Albero Città Mage’s Council stores all texts and arcane knowledge that they deem too dangerous to be allowed to fall into the hands of just anyone. It is protected by arcane runes that are almost impossible to remove, even by the most talented of wizards. These runes protect against unauthorized entry into the section. Mr. Aldric evidently had authorization for the Section. There he began research into some project of his. I don’t know what it was, but it involved Necromancy. Lots of Necromancy. I couldn’t find out what he was doing exactly, so I instead began to look for who gave him access to the Black Section. Hopefully that person could tell me more about what he was looking for.”

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>>27877650
I interrupted here, confused, “Wait, why would that person know? Wouldn’t Mr. Aldric have just used his mind control on the wizard in charge?”

Martina shook her head. “Wizards tend to be wise to wizard’s tricks. They tend to have strong willpower and its unlikely that the enchantment magics would have been as effective on them, even if they worked at all.”

“So who gave him access then? Lets find them and talk to them.”

Martina sighed. “That’s just it. No one did. Part of the agreement the Albero Città Mage’s Council made when they were setting up the Black Section was that anyone who had work sealed in there would have permanent access to the area. They even wrote this into the runes. Mr. Aldric used that to get in there. I think I can use divination spell to work out what works allowed Mr. Aldric to enter the Black Section. That way we might have a clue as to his intentions. I could use some help though.”

I smiled. “Anything you need my lady.”

It turned out that the help she needed was mostly with holding lights for her and helping her carry the divination supplies, but it was nice to spend some time with her. Eventually Martina found a spot where she could do the divination. She knelt on the ground and began to cast it. The spell took ages. I was initially tempted to make a lewd comment about how long she could stay on her knees but decided against it on the off chance it made her lose her spell. Then I went to look for something to read, but nothing there was even remotely within my ability to comprehend, being unversed as I am in the arts of magic. I wound up sitting near Martina as she was working the spell and admiring how the arcane energy made her skin glow.

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>>27877657
Eventually Martina completed the spell and slumped down, exhausted. I hurried over to her and helped her to a seat. “So, Martina. Did the spell work?”

She looked at me with an unusual expression in her eyes, it took me a few moments to pin it down, but when I did it was like a knife cut through my gut. Martina was afraid. “Oh, the spell worked all right. But you won’t like the answer.”

“Well, its not like hiding from the truth will make it any less deadly. Let’s hear it.”

“The book that Mr. Aldric authored was Binding the Soul, the Hidden Connections Between Necromancy and Enchantment…” she broke off here looking me dead in the eyes to emphasize her next words, “… by Isocrates.”

That was a bit of a shock. Admittedly anyone reading this could have guessed as such already, but then again they would have the advantage of a version of my life that was free from extraneous details and worries. Either way, I have to admit that my next words weren’t particularly clever, “Isocrates? Are you sure?”

Martina’s eyes blazed, “Of course I’m sure! I wouldn’t make a mistake about something like that!”

I held out my hands placatingly, “All right, all right. Fortunately for us this changes very little.”

“Very little? How can you say that?”

“Well… before we knew that Mr. Aldric was Isocrtes, we still suspected that he would come after us again and again. This hasn’t changed. We knew we’d have to deal with him for good to be free of him. That hasn’t changed. We knew we’d have to take the rod to Isocrates’ former dominion. This hasn’t changed either. We knew Mr. Aldric was a powerful enchanter. Now we know that he’s Isocrates, a powerful enchanter,”

“And necromancer,” Martina cut in.

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>>27877668
“And necromancer, but ultimately nothing changed. The job is still the same, its just that the pieces fit together a bit easier, and that makes our life and our job easier to do. So there’s no need to panic.”

Martina looked at me, her mouth agape. “I guess you’re right… but how can you be so calm about this? Isocrates was years before my time and he was supposedly destroyed entirely.”

I shrugged, “I’m a human, lots of things in this world came before my time and I still interact with them. You were probably born before my grandparents were and I can handle your existence calmly enough.”

Martina sulked, “Thanks for reminding me about our lifespan differences.”

I winced, “I’m sorry Martina. I didn’t think about – “

“No, no. Its okay. You were only trying to help. Its just hard knowing that I will outlive someone I love – unless…”

“Unless what Martina?”

“Well… there are some… call them techniques, that dragons have developed over the years.” Martina gave me another beaming smile, “I think there might be a longer future for us than you thought. Unfortunately its nothing that I can handle on the road or even here in this city. It would have to wait until we’re done with this quest, but I’d like to ask now; would you want to spend the rest of your life with me, Sir Knight?”

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>>27877679
I flushed a little at this question but returned her gaze and said, “Martina, every moment I spend with you makes me a happier man. I’d spend a thousand lifetimes with you if I could.” At this Martina smiled again and hugged herself closer to me. “We’ll see just how many we can get when this is all over. Until then, let’s try to get through this alive, together.”

>All right /tg/. That was my first time writing a real romance bit. What did you think?

>>27877679
Oh boy dragon magic, always a fun thing.

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And that's all I got. Leave your reviews and comments and I'll see you tomorrow afternoon after 4, Pacific Time.

>>27877689
Looks good to me, although the story looks like it has taken a turn for "First girl wins"

>>27877705

Aww, you're stopping? Dammit, I was using your dedication as inspiration/relief for/from a parallel fluff project I'm in the process of doing.

>>27877706
well its not like the other girls 'lose'...

>>27877705
loving it as always, we'll try to keep the light on

>>27877731
It is 2am pacific time and I'm only awake because I'm bad at life. So tell me about your project

>>27877755

Heh, well stated simply: I'm trying to fluff-out a faction for a Post-Apoc Civ. Quest.

The difficulty is in piecing together the glimpses of the world that the QM has granted his players through the course of 2 Civs (working on a 3rd) and trying to figure out everything that he has going on in the background, guess at how the technologies in the world work, make the fluff entertaining and give powerful benefits without it sounding like 40k-tier faggotry writing, and giving the section I'm working on right now a sufficiently clinical-evil "Just a routine top-secret government/business report." feel.

>>27877818

I'm also making it my pet project to figure out exactly how a Black-Ops tier NO ONE CAN KNOW technology works...without having any hints whatsoever as to how it works, or even why what's normally done doesn't work.

>>27877843
>>27877818
I'm going to politely sage from here on out, by the way. I don't want to take up the limit of this thread with irrelevant discussion.

sage in all fields is still how you sage, right?

WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST READ

>>27878002

Not-lewdness.

>>27878002
awesomeness.

anyways, this begs the question though.
why go after his old rod? why not make a new one?

>>27878002
A knight almost sheathing his sword ina dragoness

>>27878105

Maybe he's trying? Maybe he had a dragon-collaborator who's dead and he's trying to resurrect? Maybe liche-ness prevents him form making another one? Maybe Regulus has cast an epic-level spell to prevent it?

Any number of reasons.

>>27877689
I am surprised she didn't put a mark on him.
writing is looking good.

>>27878105
>>27878121
maybe he lost most of his power when he came back, maybe it was built form some ultra-rare material, maybe he can't retake control of the specific place he made the first one

>>27878105
>>27878121
>>27878865
maybe its his dick and he separated it from him when he lichified himself, so he could keep it afterwards

>>27878105
He probably could make a new one, it's just that finding his old one is far less time consuming/exerting.

>>27877689
>>27877705
looking good so far, sir knight.

>>27878014
>>27878105
>>27878107

well, its just their relationship is going too fast for me.The intimacy just weirded me out.

i guess its because there is a long time span between the journal entries...i just assumed that its just days, not weeks.

>>27878897
You might be on the right track, except replace the spoiler with Phylactery.

>>27878105
We Sauron now. The rod's clearly tied to his phylactery in some way. Either that, or it's one-of-a-kind in some way, or just prohibitively expensive, time consuming and difficult to make another. It may not even be possible; magic is an 'art', after all. You can's just photocopy a masterpiece and expect it to be as great as the original.

>>27879507
Yeah, as much as it's clear weeks, even a month or more has passed, for us, it's cut down a lot... KotR needs to pad it out a little more. While that seems strange to say, given its length; action and plot-driving scenes take up a LOT of space, relative to just a few little things, to show some time has passed and how they're drawing closer together as a group and as a harem.

>>27879947
This is exactly why filler scenes, such as those coming up, are so important.

Martina's out in front with a commanding lead. This is something I can get behind.

The Age of Half-Dragons is nigh

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>>27880515
>This is something I can get behind.
urge to make innuendo....
overwhelming!!!

>>27879947

Hey you, did you read the end of last thread?

We're all expecting some Rewording of the Arthurian Legend from you, pronto.

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>>27877706
Its less first girl wins and more of first girl gets the first place prize.
>>27877731
Sorry to dissapoint, but I had work. >>27878002
Eh. If you want to know, you should read the archived pages first.
>>27878014
Sorry about that. Its coming though.
>>27879507
>>27879947
>>27880269
Too fast? But... but... I've spent the last fifteen plus days writing this far! Its... okay. I'll take it slower with the others.

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>>27881293
Also here to inform everyone that I may have to push back writing to after 6:00 Pacific Time. Sorry, I forgot that I have my second job today.

>>27881293

I think your pacing has been just fine, I don't think you went too fast at all. Although, admittedly, the knight has gone from platonic to not in the span of the past journal entry or 3 so that's a little fast.

So your pace is fine.

>>27881293
Don't slow down now, you've already hit that pace so don't derail it. Just make sure the others come out of this one and seem natural.

Have a bump.

>>27881293
Only thing I think is going to fast is all the girls seemingly being okay with sharing now.

I mean I knew we were headed to harem, but that used to be just subtext and it's suddenly overt now.

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I can't help but think our protagonist is going to have a lot of explaining to do when he returns from his original quest several months after everyone else assumed he'd been eaten by a dragon.

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>>27882642

I foresee a lot more explanation will be needed by the end of this quest.

>>27882642
Have Martina disguise herself as the princess, Problem solved!

>>27882642

father of an half-dragon, 3 half-elves, an half-dwarf and an half-maid....

>>27882788
>half maid

I'm assuming that's our son?

>>27882796

although..... I suppose that if neither the knight trait nor the maid trait are dominant it could be a mix.....

Knight + Maid = Butler

>>27882921
You're ruining my image of a sword fighting maid son.

>>27882930

it depends wether he chooses armor like his father or like his mother.

>>27882788
This is assuming it's just one kid per girl.

>>27883047

knight of the realm, bane of princesses, conqueror of maidens, father of adventurers.

>>27881293
You've hit the pace now. Don't stop or alter it. Just make it clear how much time has passed and it resolves itself nicely. The thing is, between all the new characters and all of the plot advancement and action, it feels like less time has been and gone, than actually HAS. Now the pace is less frantic, it should fix itself.

>>27882642
That image is both pure /tg/ and perfect for this thread. I approve.

If Sir Knight ever displays a talent for music, poetry, oratory or other bardic skills, I will not be surprised in the least.

>>27883013
or both, hmmm, plate mixed with french maid... i like it

>>27883699
French Maid Battle Dress?

>>27881293

My impression of the martina->knight relationship was that it was basically avoiding the issue, then there was the riding lesson and then full lewd. Their recent interactions make it seem like they've been going out for a while, but we've not seen any of those intermediary steps.

>>27883977
This guy got the general idea. However as many people have noted, I made them seem way too familiar with each other for that to work.

>>27884798
In situations like theirs some people tend to be more open with such things, what with the uncertain future and all. So it didn't strike me as out of place, just two individuals trying for something comforting in a sea of troubles.

>>27881643
a quote from last thread from KotR

>There's actually a reason for that. One million internet points and my respect to the person who figures it out.

>>27882642
Actually, that raises a valid point.
I'm not sure If it's been already been answered (and I can't be bothered to scour the archives and check) but is the King the knight serves aware of his original mission? Has he sent any messages back to inform him that he'll be delayed, or maybe the dragons sent an envoy to smooth diplomatic relations.
I can imagine the diplomatic fustercluck that might arise if the Knight tells his king that he got strongarmed into doing their dirtywork. Granted, we know the knight wouldn't stir shit, but they don't.

>>27885977
THE ROD

>>27886035
what kind of message do you think he will send?

"Sire, it turns out that princess was a bitch so i beheaded her. Also Dragons are my bro's now"

that's just asking for a manhunt for him.

I also want to point out that we are dealing with a Necromancer. Did the knight ever bury that Bitcherella's body?

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>>27886353

i also don't mind some undead in the party...

>>27886353
didn't martina burn it?

>>27886431

save the undead waifu's for the quest.

>>27886353
>>27886431
>>27886441
If I recall, she got decapitated and then the knight got KO'd, waking up later in Martina's mountain lair.
She didn't say if the corpse got the BBQ treatment.

>>27886491
[foreshadowing intensifies]

>>27886507
If she is undead she's going to be a wee bit ticked off that the knight managed to score where she couldn't.

>>27886491
Just checked, doesn't say, going to assume, unless KotR says otherwise, the Martina had BBQ Princess for tea

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>>27885977
I did say that. As of yet no one has gotten the answer right.
>>27886303
One, you can't just say the rod. You would have to explain why.
Two, its not that. Related tangentially to that, but it's not that.

>>27887204
Because it's magic and a wizard did it. We've been carrying it this whole time. Perhaps the rod was created for dragon laying instead of slaying?

>>27887204
It's the sword.

The sword is ignited because of the passion of its wielder, yet also ignites the wielders passion in return.

>>27887204
Could it just be sharing and amplifying their feelings?

>>27887204
i got it!

Its because the knight feels that at any moment, his friends will die, and instead of shrugging off there signs he just accepts them.

or somewhere along those lines i guess.
maybe.

>>27887327
those thief girls really made an impression huh?

>>27887268
>>27887281
>>27887287
>>27887327
No to all of you. Maybe I should offer a prize or something. I'll warn you that the logic behind this is a bit convoluted and relies on assuming that things can turn out badly.

Whelp, I'm off to my next job. See you in a few hours.

>>27887582
Mind Control.

>>27887582
emotional bleed over from that telepathy spell
or a (semi)permanent bond between their minds

>>27887582
I'm going to stop guessing with that, I'd rather just see the story play out anyway. That and I desperately want to believe a happy ending is possible.

Man, the first thread was so nice until this shit started.

Well, that's what a subject filtering is for.

Need to go to bed now, so have this bump.

>>27887204
Maybe regulus was sneakier than we gave him credit for and set up a contingency spell on his geas - if it was ever broken, the knight gets hit with a love spell that makes him fall head over heels for the first dragon he sees.

>>27884798
Waitaminute, waitaminute...Knight defeated Martina originally, Martina get's away, decides to kidnap a princess of the realm that Knight is from, even though he had defeated her once before. Seems like someone fell hard for Sir Knight after their very first encounter, and was looking for any excuse to see him again.

>>27888141
I think she had already kidnapped the princess when our knight defeated her

>>27888141
>>27888167
Yeah, it started out we tried to rescue the Princess but she was determined to stay with the dragon because "She could fix "Him""

>>27888090
For a man whom he knew was originally trying to rescue a princess, and then tried to rescue the dragon because he felt it was right, this would seem like an excellent way to guarantee his service. Especially considering that Martina is under a death sentence if they don't do it.
Hell, the original binding might even have been there just to throw anyone looking for compulsions off the scent.

It would seem to be placed on both of them, though. Either that, or the fact that he's paying attention to her is enough for a lonely dragon.

>>27887926
I'm sorry to hear that. Just for my personal curiosity and improvement, is it the story type, the story itself, or my writing that you dislike so much?

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Oh, I'm back by the way. Will resume writing soon.

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>>27887926
>1000 hours mspaint

>>27889969
Welcome back KotR, looking forward to tonight's additions
>oh god I'm so bored at work... Save me...

>>27889957
I'm guessing he likes to read more about saving dragons from princesses and not the aftermath.

bump

>>27889969
Hath thou forsaken us?

>>27891057
No, I just got dinner. Sorry, I've already had an eleven hour work day. I'm just taking longer than usual to get back to writing.

>>27891123
Like we have any right to complain. How many days have you been doing this in a row?

>>27891123
alls good dude, we have faith in you delivering the awesome

on that note, i gotta leave for the range, looking forward to catching up when i get back

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>>27891140
Its going on sixteen now.

>>27891198
>and on the 30th day, he rested.

>>27891206
at a hotspring

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>>27891206
>>27891251
If I'm lucky.

Next update is almost up.

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>>27877689
With that settled, we set about learning everything we could about Isocrates, it was depressingly little. Evidently he was a major Archmage about six hundred years ago and he single handedly created a small empire named Édra ti̱s Exousías. He built this empire using a mix of powerful enchantment, undead armies, and hired mercenaries. However the records indicated that he disappeared after a confrontation with an unknown enemy and his empire fell into ruins thereafter. From what Martina and dragonkind in general knew about Isocrates’ Rod, we could easily assume that this unknown enemy was the First Dragonmoot Council, but it was almost impossible to find an exact location for Édra ti̱s Exousías. We found lots of descriptions of the land, mostly accounts from fearful travelers who claimed that everyone and everything in the land was one way or another an expression of the Archmage’s will, but no maps. However we did find a description of Isocrates’ tower-fortress, evidently it was built on top of a peak shaped like a devils head. That lead us to search the entire cartography section looking for a similar mountain. Finally after hours more of searching, we found a likely lead. In a large and cold land to the Northeast there was a mountain known as Diabolist’s Peak for its resemblance to a devil’s head. Notes about the mountain indicated that there was a massive ruined fortress of some sort atop the mountain. This looked like it was Isocrates’ Lair. We then gathered all the information we could on the region, a nation known as Omrachena Zemli. We tried to read some of it, but wound up collapsing and falling asleep midway through the book and rested against each other until the library staff woke us up with their scolding.

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>>27891704
The next day we delivered the news to the rest of the party. Reactions were a bit mixed. Aimèe was fearful and I had to give the same speech I gave to Martina the night before to calm her down. Siegbert looked a bit excited and commented about how he would need to create an actual version of alchemist’s fire, evidently the chill of death tends to make other sources of cold less noticeable, and Sieghild gripped her waraxe and grimaced saying she looked forward to returning the bodies to their rightful place in the earth. Felìcita took the opportunity to reiterate that she would follow me anywhere and do anything for me. Veila had to be reminded by Aimèe who Isocrates was and Rina simply nodded and said that she expected that they would be heading towards Omrachena Zemli or the nearby region. Evidently she had been doing some research of her own while Martina and I were doing our work. She had found out that the Golden Saber was a mercenary army that was formed in Omrachena Zemli after the fall of their King several years ago. While local lords had seized control of their own lands some enterprising and brutal soldiers had decided to make it on their own. They quickly established a name for themselves as being incredibly cruel and terrifying mercenaries, and soon began to charge the local lords tribute in order to avoid raiding their lands. And now they were working for Isocrates, one of the world’s most dangerous Archmages, just lovely.

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>>27890282
>mspaint
>Lucky you.
I figured that there was a chance that he had useful critique so I took it.

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Ugh. Sorry I'm going so slow today. Evidently this whole day took a lot out of me. I'm not done yet by any means, but it will be slow between posts.

>Capcha ihatao west
>I think I found my next steampunk character, Ihatao West, Cowboy-Samurai.

>>27892170
i really hope you would consider a long break man, i know what it feels to be burned out.

>>27892240
Trouble is with most writefags and questfags is when they take a break they tend not to return, just look at blindslug.

>>27892240
I would but -
>>27892269
This. This is what I'm afraid would happen. And I'm enjoying this story too much to stop.

>>27892269
or FriteWag

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>>27892289
Still alive. Just really worn out.

Rolled 9

>>27893223

Go to sleep, knight.

It's time to stop posting.jpg

>>27893408
Yeah, no sense staying up and posting an incoherent mess.

Go get some rest.

Captcha: thdseuc must
Captcha says you must.

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>>27894095
>>27893875
>>27893408
These guys have it right.

I'm sure we'll try to keep it bumped, but if worst comes to worst you can just restart it.

Pic is the only related one I have, but meant in the nicest possible way.

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>>27893408
>>27893875
>>27894095
>>27894153
Ugh. Fine, if you insist.

Goodnight everyone, thanks for reading and thanks for bearing with me! Keep the thread alive/archived for my return!

It's dangerous to go alone, take this bump

I wish one of these days I could catch this story live. Being in upside down koala land is truly suffering.

>>27895919
As a britbong, I know your pain. I have to stay up past 1am to catch it.
I've had fuck all sleep fir the past fortnight

>>27895919
as a fellow upside down land anon I can say, you don't want to catch it when its live, because its like crack, you just sit there staring at the screen hoping for more to magically appear for hours and can't tear yourself away

note to KotR, this ain't a bad thing, keep being awesome

>>27896093
But I want to experience that!

>>27896843
Well then, you have two options.
1)pull a sickie for two days, tank up on caffeine and stay awake
2) tank it, turn up to work looking like a zombie, get so knackered over the following days that you get tiredness related dizzy spells/temperature changes that simulate a case of flu, and get given days off. This is the option I took.

Stand proud KotR, people with funny accents are literally losing sleep over your story. Give yourself a pat on the back m8.

>>27894541

Just wanted to thank you for your time to write this story, it is really appreciated.

>>27887582
This is me taking a shot in the darkest of darkness, with a blindfolded gunman that's both deaf and blind, but... I-is the Knight buying insurance?

Martina is 1) a dragoness, which means 2) she's susceptible to the rod. Disregarding her 'first grill' status, might it be that he purposefully started romancing her, just her, such that in the worst possible event the rod falls into the wrong hand, he would still have a sliver of chance to reach her? An ace in the hole to bring her back through the power of love?

Knightly bump.

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Hey, with regards to blind guessing, some of you are really close others are really far away.

The two closes are:
>>27888090
>>27887619
But even still they aren't remotely close to the truth. Remember! The logic in this is convoluted and it relies on the reasonable assumption that some things that actually might work, wouldn't work.

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>>27895919
>>27896043
>>27896093
>>27896843
>>27897264
>>27897348
Awww... Thank you gentlemen! I'm really flattered to hear that! I'll be posting again soon so if you're still up, you're in luck!

>>27899156
the Knight accidentally swearing a binding oath to Martina during the Dragonmoot?

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>>27891725
After that meeting, we all went our own ways for the day. Sieghild said that she had a few new ideas for my armor, and asked me to meet her and her cousin later that day for the finishing touches. Aimèe and Veila went shopping again, this time to pick up some supplies for traveling into cold regions, as well as some mountaineering equipment. Captain Rina retuned to her precinct to obtain as much information as possible on Omrachena Zemli, the Golden Saber, and the political situation between them. Siegbert left for the temple of the elven gods, explaining that he wanted to learn about their policy on blessing liquids that weren’t quite water. I look forward to the results. Martina returned to her library to continue research into everything related to Isocrates, particularly looking for information on undead creatures that the Archmage may have turned into. To my surprise, Felìcita offered to help her, which Martina cautiously accepted. As for myself, I left to make some preparations for the trip to the Druidic Grove before I went to meet Sieghild and her cousin.

I set out to head towards the elven/dwarven forge that Sieghild and her cousin were using. Once I neared the building however the voices inside made me halt and listen. Sieghild’s cousin was talking, “All right Sieghild. I added the additional wards that you asked for. You’re lucky I still had everything out and hadn’t completed the proceedings yet. Otherwise this would have taken ages to complete. As is, the armor is ready for the Knight. So… how about you help me clean these tools. Let’s start with a hammer. No, not that one, this one. A good eight inch handle and a large head. Seems good enough. Now let me show you how you should clean this…”

Hey, does anyone know would outright blowjob instructions need to be confined to Pastebin, even if they are in the weak guise of polishing a hammer?

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>>27899437
I didn’t catch her next few words due to her slipping into a whisper, but Sieghild’s reaction was loud and clear. “What? Do you take me for a fool? I know that’s not how you clean a hammer! I mean, spit shining is one thing, but sticking it in your mouth? What’s your game cousin?”

Her cousin sighed, “Listen Sieghild. This isn’t about cleaning a hammer. Its about teaching you a useful skill. One that you’re going to need in your little… competition for a certain Knight.”

“Huh? What do you mean –“

“Now don’t you take me for a fool. I heard the way you were talking about him and the rest of your party. I saw the look in your eyes during that fitting. You want to play sheath to his sword, don’t deny it. I’m just trying to help you. After all, there are three elves in this group, aren’t there? You know how they are, they’ve probably offered him sex in positions you can’t imagine, let alone replicate. The only way a good dwarven lass is going to get one up on a group of elves is to use her head… if you catch my meaning. And that’s what I’m going to teach you. Alright?”

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>>27899453
Sieghild didn’t say anything but she must have nodded because her cousin continued, “Good. Now the place to start is ironically not on the hammer at all. You want to get him ready for this. Start by nuzzling or kissing the area around his blade, the stomach or the legs are a good choice. Wait until his blade is drawn out a little before you continue. Once that is done, start with the head of the hammer, now we’re reversing this on the Knight himself. The head of his sword isn’t the end of the handle, and the head of this hammer are his pommel stones. Now, start polishing that hammer head. Good… that’s it girl. Move your tongue around it, give it a good polishing.”

I had to admit, that I was having a good time simply listening to them. I sat down on a nearby rain barrel and waited for them to continue.

>Out of idle curiosity, who is here?

>>27899553
reporting in

>>27899553

spanish fa/tg/uy here

>>27899553
here

>>27899553
Mind Control dude reporting for duty. I'll muse more when my brain isn't mush.

>>27899553
really late here in the Philippines, but yeah.
Awaiting further sword-unsheathing, forging, and polishing action.

The knight is slowly getting inoculated to lewdness, isn't he?

>>27899553

here, too.

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>>27899529
“All right, now by this point his blade should be fully drawn. Now you can begin moving down the handle. Start with the base where it meets the hammer head and begin to slowly worship it with your tongue. Work it well, vary your tongue’s patterns to keep the sensation fresh and slowly make your way to the end of the handle. Good. Now put the tip of the handle in your mouth slowly, just the tip for now. Now begin to slowly rotate your tongue around the tip inside your mouth. As you do that slowly begin to suck the tip. At this point you should be making constant eye contact with him, a man tends to like it when you look him in the eyes, it makes him feel powerful, so don’t look away. At this point, you can use your hands to help out a little. Start to rub his shaft like you would when polishing a hammer the normal method, not quite as rough though. Use a gentle touch. There you go… that’s right. Now its time to let go and use your mouth a little more, start to go deeper.”

I heard a rather horrible gagging noise before Sieghild’s cousin spoke up, “Yeah. That will happen the first few times. You’ll get used to it, but before you try anything on your Knight you should probably learn to suppress that reflex there. I’ll let you keep the hammer to practice on, I’m probably not going to be using it after this anyways. Now try again. That’s better. Don’t forget to play with the handle with your tongue still. As you get better at this, you can go further and further. Eventually you’ll be able to get it deep enough that you could fit the hammer head itself in there, but that’s something for another time. Now keep on sucking that handle!”

>>27899702
I think you're going to have to wait until the start of the age of half dragons before anything other than implied lewd.

>>27899553
Finland reporting in!

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>>27899783
A few minutes passed, the only noise being a rather lewd slurping and sucking noise and the occasional word of encouragement from Sieghild’s cousin. Then she spoke again, “All right, so you learned how to tease him with your tongue, how to use your mouth and your hands, you started to figure out how to suppress your gag reflex, now its time to show you how to take him to the finish. As he comes closer to the finish, you should be able to feel it a little, even if he doesn’t say it outright. There are several ways you can take this then. You can guide him to another hole in your body for the finish, you can attempt to delay the inevitable and prolong the experience, be careful with that one, sometimes it doesn’t work and you just wind up giving him a lousy finish, you can let his blade free and take the deposit on your face or the body part of your choosing, or you can hold on to the end and take it in your mouth. Whatever you do, remember that his blade will be more sensitive at that point and that you shouldn’t use a lot of pressure or speed then. Slow down your movements a little and reduce the pressure. That way you can give him an excellent finish. You can stop practicing on the hammer for now. Your Knight is due here any minute. I suppose you could ‘let’ him catch you practicing on a hammer if you want though…”

Sieghild spoke up for the first time in a while, her voice sounded like her throat was sore. “Oh! Right! Um… thanks for the advice cousin.”

“No problem. Now do me a favor and show that Knight the sort of loving that an elf could never give him! That and help me clean up this forge. Seriously the place is a mess.”

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Great work so far, KoTR!
I'd stay up for your stories any day!

>>27899854
You know, my childhood dream was that I would become a blacksmith and a miner.
It still is.

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>>27899581
>>27899702
>>27899854
So many places! I suppose I shouldn't be surprised with the internet and all, but this really makes me want to conduct a reader poll. Find out answers like where are you from, age range, gender, etc. Maybe I'll try that at the end of this day.

>>27899942

When is your end of the day? :D
In Germany it is past 9 o'clock p.m already.

>>27899988
I'm in the United States on the West Coast, that mean's the Pacific Time Zone so it is actually just past noon here.

>>27899988
>>27899581

UTC+2 here

>>27900005

>>27899854 here, I usually check the thread through the day and go to sleep 22-23 GMT+0. In morning I check the thread before going to school. During summer I could stay awake through the night to participate in few quests easily, but sadly it isn't possible now.

>>27899942
The aforementioned 1am Britbong here.

>>27899942
California

>>27900005
>>27899988

I'm 9 hours forward, duh.

So... I have to pull an allnighter

>captcha: governor dverie. Somebody I know?

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>>27899913
After hearing that, I decided that I should wait a while to enter the forge. I took the opportunity to calm down so that the more… visible signs of me listening in were not obvious. Then after several minutes had passed and the two dwarf’s conversation had moved to more normal topics I entered. Sieghild’s cousin chuckled, “Well if it isn’t the man of the hour! Lets get this armor on you and see how it fits!”

It was a relief to get back into my armor, even if it was different. I could see the signs of expert dwarven workmanship on the armor and it clearly was stronger than ever before. It felt lighter too somehow. As I donned it I could feel the new enchantments taking effect. As Sieghild promised, I was indeed felt improved in many ways. I felt faster and stronger even with the reduced weight accounted for. Somehow I also felt heartier, and safer as a whole. I expected something from what Sieghild told me, but I never expected the magic to feel this good. There was also another lingering effect that I couldn’t place. Somehow it felt like I had another layer of armor around my mind and guarding my heart. I turned to Sieghild to ask what these were.

She shrugged awkwardly. “They are enchantments meant to ward your mind and life force. After all we’re going after a powerful lich who is also an expert at enchantment. I figured that you might need it…”

I crouched down and surprised Sieghild by giving her a hug. When I released it, her face was glowing red and her cousin was trying to hide a smirk on her face. “Sieghild, you’re the best. Do you know that?”

She stammered out something about how it was nothing, but I could tell she was pleased. After expressing my sincere gratitude to Sieghild and her cousin we left to meet up with Martina and Felìcita at the library.

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>>27900101

>>27899914 here. I have a bad habit of staying up until 3-4 and force myself to wake up around 6:30.
I've been able to handle it so far, but it wont be long until it'll hit me. And when it hits, it's gonna hit hard.
I have no regrets.

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Alright, inspired by the influx of answers to my question about where people were from I decided to launch a small reader poll. You don't have to give me any information you're not comfortable with, but please don't lie.

1) What country are you from? Where in the country do you live?
2) What gender are you?
3) What's your age range? a) 6-12 b) 13-19 c)20-26 d) 27-33 e) 34-40 f) 40+
4) Anything else you want to share?

Don't worry I'll still keep writing this story, I'm just really getting curious.

>>27900224
>US, east coast
>yes
>a
>no

>>27900224
Germany
Male
c

>>27900224

1) Germany
2) Male
3) Cat. C
4) Love your story so far. For your first attempt at writing sth like this it is impressive.

>>27900224
1) UK
2) Male
3) C
4) The largest desert on the planet is Antarctica. Also, considering that this is your first attempt, this is a great story.

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>>27900224
>1) What country are you from? Where in the country do you live?
Finland, Northern Ostrobothnia
>2) What gender are you?
Male
>3) What's your age range? a) 6-12 b) 13-19 c)20-26 d) 27-33 e) 34-40 f) 40+
B. Going to the army on spring.
>4) Anything else you want to share?
Who needs sleep, anyway?

>>27900224
>USA, East Coast, Sunshine State
>Manly
>C
>I will never unsee the knight without the elite knight set or fluted knight set from DkS or DS.
>Keep it coming, lad. There must be a big bad somewhere who wishes to challenge us to fisticuffs.

>>27900224
USA
Male
C
You've kickstarted me back into writing.

>>27900224
1) >>27899854 here, so Eastern parts of Finland
2) Male
3) C
4) I like shorts! They're comfy and easy to wear!

Great stuff, imo the Sieghild scene is possibly little bit too lewd. Lewd to other stuff ratio needs recalibration.

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>>27900347
>>I will never unsee the knight without the elite knight set or fluted knight set from DkS or DS.
This.
fucking this.

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>>27900386
You know, if I had that picture earlier it would have been the one I chose for the Golden Saber's birds.

>>27900347
>I will never unsee the knight without the elite knight set or fluted knight set from DkS or DS.
Shit, I thought I was the only one who pictured this

>>27900413
>>27900386
>>27900347
And here I thought I was the only one.

>>27900319
Another Finn, Nice! Same for army, Karelian Brigade Stronk!

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>>27900408
Have another Dark Souls one, just in case.

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>>27900224
I suppose I ought to answer my own poll, for the sake of fairness.
1) I'm from the United States of America. Specifically I'm from Southern California.
2) I'm male.
3) I'm currently 23 years of age.
4) Like many of you, I was interested in joining the military, however some medical issues postponed those plans. Currently I'm seeking to join the Border Patrol as an intermediary step, but am currently working with my local school district. This is my first attempt at writefaggotry and after this I plan to make good on my promises to run a quest. Ironically, I'm not a very large anime fan (although I have watched more than my fair share of shows) so I haven't really seen many harem animes.

>>27900551
That's a good thing. The typical harem anime is a complete wreck of little to no characterization, the guy being a moron and no plot.

Despite this I still watch some...

>>27900224
1) England, England
2) F
3) c
4) you are awesome

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>>27900148
On the way I felt that I had to tell Sieghild some things. I waited until we were in a relatively deserted area and turned to her, “Err Sieghild. I just wanted to let you know, I heard a little of your ‘practice’ with that hammer.”

She turned quite red at that. “Er… how much.”

“A fair bit. I probably should have stopped you two, but regrettably I didn’t.”

Sieghild turned to me and looked up uncertainly, “Umm… did you at least like what you heard?”

I smiled back, “Very much. Very much indeed.”

She sighed a deep sigh of relief, “Good. I would like to show you what I learned sometime, is… is that okay with you?”

“More than okay. However I also need to let you know that Martina has expressed similar desires.”

“The dragoness? I’m surprised she’d lower herself to sleeping with a non-dragon, but if anyone could get her to do it I suppose it would be you. Umm… you’re not interested in her are you?”

Now here was the acid test. I shrugged, “Yes, but the whole matter is a bit complicated. You should talk to her when we get to the library. It would help clarify the whole mess.”

She looked deeply suspicious at that, but at least wasn’t running off in tears, so I counted that as a win for now.

We eventually got to the library, we found both Martina and Felìcita in the private room reserved for our use. To my horror, they weren’t doing more than giving their books cursory glances, and spent the rest of the time glaring daggers at each other. They looked up, momentarily happy to see me but when they saw that Sieghild was following they began to glare at her too.

I thought to myself, “Oh Gods. This is going to be painful.”

>>27900224
>UK
>Male
>C, no wait, D since a few days ago.
>You're a pretty cool guy, KotR. Despite having decent writing skills I lack the focus to ever keep something like this going.

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>>27900850
What I said was, “All right. Everyone sit down. What’s this all about?”

Martina gave me a look, “I’m pretty sure you know what this is about, Sir Knight.”

I sighed, “True. But I was hoping it was something else.”

I closed the door to the room sat down at the table myself. “All right, from what I can gather, all three of you are interested in me. Am I correct?”

There was a minor awkward shuffling around the room, but eventually everyone acknowledged that they were indeed interested.

“Okay then,” I continued, “and I also understand that you want me for yourselves, which is perfectly normal and understandable. Is that right?”

This time the agreements were much more vigorous.

I nodded, “I thought so, but there is one problem. I can’t choose one of you. Now before you condemn me for being a womanizer or indecisive, please hear me out. I’ve never been good at abandoning friends. I’ve never been good at handling disappointment. When someone is relying on me, I do the best I can to live up to and exceed their expectations. And I care about my friends. I gave myself up to save Siegbert and I would go as far if not further for any one of you ladies. While these tendencies have served me well in my military career, they are a hindrance when dealing with multiple women who are interested in you. You see, I can’t break any of your hearts. Any of you. It would tear me apart. So I’m going to leave the room for a while. If you ladies can’t come to an arrangement, then the old one will stand. As in I won’t respond to any of your advances. Is that understood?”

>>27900551
Are... Are you almost-me? You don't have a chest defect, do you?

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>>27900902
An uncomfortable silence was my only response, so I tried again. “Is that understood?”

This time, there were general mutterings of “Yes” so I left the room. From the outside, I could see that they waited a few minutes in awkward silence before Martina started talking. The women were soon in a heated argument, so I decided that it was time for me to leave and let them take over. As I left, I reflected that Aimèe, Veila, and probably Captain Rina should be in there as well, but I decided that hunting them down and introducing them to the little group in there wouldn’t really be conducive to a resolution being achieved. I wandered through the library until I found an old tome on magic for beginners and sat down to read it a while.

I was beginning to note that A Layman’s Guide to the Arcane Arts was an incredible misnomer when Martina came up to me. All she said was, “We’re ready.”

>>27900551
We Finns have to join, conscription you see. A remnant from Napoleonic times, but still very useful.

>>27900940
What about WWII? ;_;

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>>27900910
No. When I was in college freshman 15 brought a few friends and they brought more friends and I'm still trying to break that party up. Basically I am a fa/tg/uy, but less so than I was a year or two ago. Fortunately Border Patrol doesn't have a set weight requirement and they actually have mandatory workouts so that should be able to get me closer to my desired career as I improve.

I'm sorry about the chest defect though. Is there any chance of a waiver for it?

>>27900940
I know that, but -
>Rereads his old post and realizes that he implied that everyone was volunteering for the military.
Never mind.

>>27900997
Nah, probably not. Concave chest that would require multiple ribs to be broken as well as the sternum to artificially protrude like a normal chest until the cartilage ossified, I'd imagine. C'est la vie.

>>27901040
Huh. I had a friend like that. He wound up getting the procedure done at a young age. Sorry to hear that though.

>>27901053
As did I. Stupid sternum. Anyway, don't let me distract you.The knight should totally get Magicks for Dummies.

I feel as though the knight would either have a very generic name or a very unique one. Glad that he's still nameless. John Doe works.

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>Realizes that I have been delaying my own story.

All right, I'm back in gear. Next update comes after I get lunch.

>Will the harem accept their role? Will the Knight's ultimatum break the party apart? Find out next time after the break! [Cut to commercial]

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>>27901183
Huh. That's not at all the picture I had selected...

Try this one.

>>27900224
>US, East Caos
>Male
>d
>you inspired me to do some writefagging for the Bob Ross and Mr. Rogers in 40k thread.

>>27900386
There better be a De/aS reference somewhere.
>You better have sparkly twinky this time motherfucker.png

>>27901277
>Isocrates died when he fought the 1st Dragonmoot.
>His soul got captured by Seath the Scaleless and he revived as MrAldrin.
>The king will be known as Gwyn Lord of Cinder in the futur.
>Seath and Gwyn will bro it up to destroy the dragons.
>Sir knight is his 1st son that he will disowner for falling in love with a dragon.

>>27900224
1) USA, New England
2) F
3) D

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>>27901519
>Sir knight is his 1st son

C-c-could it be?
Is Sir Knight... him?

>>27901519
>Sir Knight and his harem will create a country where dragons, dorfs and w/e will live in peace while the world gets fucked.
>This country will be known as: Boletaria

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>>27901277
Considering that I haven't played it that seems unlikely.

>>27900224
1)The true north strong and free.
3) C
4) I have enjoyed this much more than I imagined I could. Keep up the good work good knight anon.

>>27901574
Not Brohalla?

>>27901277
I read DkS first as Dragon Knight Saga (Divine Divinity II).

Then I realized no one really played that game.

>>27901574
>The Dragon God in Stonefang Tunnel is called Martinus....or is it?

OH the implications...

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>>27901602
fuck, forgot my image.

>>27901591
If I can repay you for your story in any way, I will do so thusly.
Play DaS. It has it's flaws, but it's fun as fuck.

>>27901619
Oblivion?

>>27901626
Actually I think Dragon God is a boss in Demon's Souls.

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>>27901574
Sir Knight in a few years.

>>27901731
Ahhh. Thanks anon!

>>27887204
knight got mindconbtrolled by dragons, with that gone, he's more prone to... distractions

>>27901911
Hahaha!

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>>27900922
With a fair bit of nervousness, I entered the room. I sat down and waited. An awkward silence dominated the room for several moments. Then Martina spoke, “Well, we all agreed on a few things. First, you’re an arse.”

Sieghild nodded, “Agreed. What kind of man puts women in that situation. Really?”

Felìcita nodded too. “Its really unfair to us.”

I blushed a fair shade myself, “I’m sorry ladies. I really do feel bad about that though and –“

Martina interrupted, “We believe that. And that’s pretty much your only saving grace, apart from your good looks, pleasant demeanor, steadfast loyalty, personal charisma…”

“And strong hands,” Felìcita added with a blush of her own.

“…yes and strong hands,” Martina finished.

Sieghild continued, “So that’s why we decided that we’d give this group effort at least an honest try. I was all for starting tonight, but Martina is insisting that we wait for this surprise trip you have coming up. Either way, we all expect at least one good dance at the ball tomorrow.”

>>27900224

> Spain, Basque country
> male
> d

>>27900224
austria reporting in

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>>27901999

>>27901160
i still like 'Rankon Vile' that way suggested a few threads ago

>>27902347
Rodney 'Rod' Hardmeat

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>>27901999
>I remember earlier that a lot of people were saying I went too fast with Martina. Do you still have that vibe about the rest of the girls or is this pace better?

>>27902442
Nah, I think it's fine now that you've established a certain pace.

>>27902442
I'm cool with whatever you do, you've done an excellent job so far so I trust you to make it good no matter the pace you set.

>>27902442
As I recall, most of the issue was that, due to the journal style of writing, we didn't get a proper feel for the time that passed

>>27902476
I can see Martina going faster than the others because the rest all tagged along for their own reasons. Relatively speaking, she's probably the most vulnerable of the group by a long shot.

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>>27901999
Honestly, with everything that was going on from the revelation of Isocrates to the moments I’ve been spending with Martina and the others, the whole ball had slipped my mind. Fortunately there wasn’t any need to frantically run about running last minute errands to buy appropriate clothes or anything, the royal family tailors had my entire party covered. The real concern was remembering what the proper etiquette was for dancing with multiple women at a single dance, as one might expect, there are not a lot of situations where you can do that successfully. I simply wound up resolving to go through with the ball with as much dignity, honor, and integrity as I could.

On the night of the ball, there was a bit of a stir as I showed up with six women in tow, but most of the crowd recognized them as being fellow travelers of mine so the extravagance was forgiven. As we entered we were met by the royal family who greeted us with a mildly amused expression on their faces. As the ladies were whisked away to their dressing rooms, I found myself alone with the king for a moment. I shuffled my feet awkwardly, knowing I should say something.

“Your Majesty, I –“

“It’s alright Sir Knight. I heard. While I can’t say I approve, you at least are conducting your affairs fairly and honestly. So I suppose that’s all I can ask for.”

I shook my head, “Still sir, it doesn’t feel right to do that. I care about each of them, but its not right to… well… I just wish there was a better way.”

To my complete amazement the King smiled a little at that, “Well that’s something I wouldn’t expect most men to say. Ironically despite all of my daughter’s assurances, those words are the first I’ve heard that makes me feel that this… ‘arrangement’ of yours might be something other than a complete and total disaster.”

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>>27902803
I bowed deeply to the King in respect, “Thank you sir. I can’t tell you how much that relieves me. I wouldn’t feel comfortable about doing this without your approval or behind your back.”

“Your sense of honor does you some credit, Sir Knight. As before, I only ask that you be good to my daughter. Ah, your attendants are here. I’ll see you at the celebration.”

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>>27902831
The celebration itself started out with a recognition ceremony for me and my companions. We were proclaimed national heroes for our work in driving off Mr. Aldric and his Golden Saber minions and were dubbed “Protectors of the Throne,” which basically means that I’m a knight in two different nations now.” Afterwards there was a small portion of free time to mingle and get drinks while everyone and their cousin came up to personally introduce themselves (and in some cases they came to introduce their lovely daughters) to me. However I noticed that a group of young elf males were keeping themselves apart from the celebration. Now, when you travel with a large group of attractive women, you become accustomed to a certain amount of hostile glares in your general direction, but these young elven men seemed to be much more resentful than average. It wasn’t until Felìcita explained that they were suitors of hers that I understood the exact nature of their anger. I turned to Felìcita, “I didn’t even know that they existed; er… not that you don’t warrant them or anything.”

To my relief, Felìcita just laughed at that, “I think that might be part of why they’re so angry. All their efforts to obtain my hand just got bypassed by someone who wasn’t even trying! Don’t worry about them Master Knight, in a few minutes the dancing will begin and they’ll find other things to do than glower and sulk. Speaking of which, have you ever danced La Furlana before?”

“Well my dear Princess, I am a Knight of the Realm. My training includes some dancing, I may have learned La Furlana at some point but I’m still a bit rusty on it. Would you do the honor of helping me refresh my memory?”

Hold on. I need to run a quick errand. I'll be right back.

I also want to thank everyone for their participation in that poll!

>>27903843
My pleasure, looks like you've got something of a multicultural group of readers.

Fuck, just passed midnight, hurry back from your errand, KotR, I can probably stick around for one more post.

I am really enjoying the fact that you've tackled the two big failings of harem stories. That being the protagonist is usually a bumbling beta male and the issue of having to choose a girl. I look forward to seeing how Ser Knight will figure out which girl wins....if any

>>27900224
1) Australia
2) Male
3) C
4) Nothing that hasn't already been said

>>27904207
It seems pretty clear this is a straight up polygamy arrangement rather than any particular girl 'winning'

>>27904406
I think right now Martina will "Win" Insomuch as I think Sir Knight will likely outlive many of the rest of the girls if he goes along with her idea.

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Hey everyone. I'm back. I'll be back to writing in one moment.

However I wanted to ask yet another question of you guys.

I recall looking through Boone Quest a while back and evidently Colossal Faggot/Mr. Culexus used his deviant art page to keep people updated on his schedule. Would this work for you guys? That way I can keep a schedule and keep versions of this story available to read.

>>27905165
>DA
Ewwww.

Why not use Twitter for schedule updates, a few quest runners do that. As for the story, it's all up in the archives.

>>27900224
1) England, South-west London
2) Male
3) C [20]
4) Considering i work night shifts, your stories have been a fantastic read on the bus home from work each night. That this is your first attempt at writefagging gives me hope that i might one day prove to be even half as talented as yourself if I ever get round to writing a CYOA.

>>27905165
You'll need to put it somewhere, if only to have it all in one spot, with any spelling/grammar issues fixed. Not sure what DA's rules on lewd are though.

>>27905241
>South-West London
It always feels weird when I realize how close by some fa/tg/uys are to me irl. I just moved to Reigate for a new job.

>>27905276
Heh, I know right? I had the same experience on /mlp/.
You aren't terribly far from where I work actually... Pop down the bowling alley in Kingston sometime, I'll probably be working the bar.

>>27905364
I might just do that, anon, and freak out the person working there as I make subtle /tg/ references to test if it's really you.

>>27905385
I think there's a few of us fa/tg/uys around the area, apparently there were a couple of people in playing MtG a week or so ago when i was off shift.
Why not just book ahead as Rankon Vile?{/spoiler]
Anyway, I think KotR was trying to tell a story.

>>27905500
Because I just moved to the area and know no-one here, and booking myself in solo to a bowling alley would just be sad.
Anyway, sorry for interrupting, KotR.

>>27905165
Twitter and a wiki page.

>>27900224
1) Australia
2) M
3) C
4) I wish the Earth was flat and we can do away with timezones.

As for the story itself, props for writing a harem lead that actually gets shit done, and not some spoony indecisive runt. Also as with others, I think Twitter is the better choice for updates.

>>27905500
>>27905599
It's fine. My computer is giving me trouble anyways. I'll be back up in a second.

>>27900551
I think you should stick to writefaggotry rather than quests.
Theres too many of those already and the general stupidity ruins otherwise good storylines.

Seconding the twitter idea.

>>27904543
So she laughs in the end?

Honestly, i rather the good captain rather than the princess. The knights relationship with her is almost parental, making it creepy.

>>27906561
Yeah, but only because she lives longer. I think they'll all get some laughs in after they deal with the Lich guy.

>>27906739
For you, maybe.

>>27906765
So the whole harem goes lich?

Excellent. Then we can begin the skeleton quest.

>>27906871
We will be too busy boning them for that.

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>>27907008
I don't think Rina took that many dicks when she was a captive.

>>27907008
fuck you for making me download that hentai again.

>>27907008
I wish to cause you physical harm for reminding me that exists. I will have to accelerate development of my Techno spider project.

>>27907008
the second elf on that hentai was Felecita's mom wasn't it?

Sorry this is taking so long. My computer basically decided, "You know what? Lets crash entirely right now." Should be back soon.

>>27907008
You know, this is the second hentai that my story has reminded people of. Not sure what the first one was though.

>>27907033
this, she did thank the knight, before anything else happened.
>>27907234
i really really feel bad for felecita now..
and i can just imagine the king just holding back for the sake of celebrating that it is over. by the time the party leaves his rage will burst out in full force.

>>27907328
>>27907234
>>27907100
>>27907037
>>27907033
>/tg/ - Hentai

>>27907346
it will be like the U.S. waging war on terror.
whatever that meant.

>>27907346
>this, she did thank the knight, before anything else happened.
Ah, but the gratitude was for preventing things on _that day_. What about the days before that?

Sorry Rina-fags, your waifu is used goods.

>>27905165
a twitter for updates and a 1d4chan wiki page for the whole thing and anything you add to it or base off it would probably be the best option for keeping an archive/backup

>>27907517
You shut your mouth, or I will sit here and wish bad things upon you.

>>27907517
and we don't care, but hell I'm a gottacatchemall fag

>>27907735
She can't get Zinoviy's T-90 out of her mind, you and I know that. Once you go Russian, you can't go, errr, something something.

>>27908059
I am hating at you as hard as I can right now.

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>>27903202
Naturally she was overjoyed and as soon as the dance started she led me to my position in the circle that was forming. The La Furlana was simple and pleasant enough to dance, we started off in a circle holding hands as a group, on my left I had Felìcita, on the right some noblewoman who was far more interested in me than her dance partner. The dance started off with the circle rotating to my right for about a quarter rotation, then left to our starting position, some footwork was done and back we were to the rotations. Then we broke off to be with our individual partners for a second stage in the dance that involved linking arms and essentially twirling around each other. Then we were back in a circle but this time instead of rotations we moved in towards the center and backed out twice before splitting to twirl with our partners again. This time when we returned to the circle us men closed into the center and clapped our hands together before backing back out and allowing the women of the group to form their own small circle where upon the whole group went through the same footwork steps as before. I had to admit, that the leg centric footwork looked very nice on Felìcita, especially in the slit dress she was wearing. These steps were repeated again before we took another twirl with our partners, a little bit of footwork later and the dance started again from the top. However after two cycles of it, it was done. As I said, not a very complicated dance, but it was fun to perform and easy to learn.

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>>27908307
Of course immediately after that the song changed into a more traditional courtly dance, the galliard. The galliard is simple five step dance, but they are a very athletic five steps. They involve leaping, jumping, hopping, and otherwise athletically moving yourself around the dance floor. The real question was the lavolta but there was no time to confirm its presence before the dance started. As we went through the various steps, cadences, and postures of the dance I felt it was time to try for the lavolata. In hindsight, I should have recognized the minor confusion in Felìcita’s eyes as I guided her legs into position and set her on my knee, but the look on her face as we actually performed the lavolta was one of excitement tinged with desire. The lavolta was met with a few gasps, ohs and ahs, and a smattering of applause. Later Felìcita told me that the lavolta was rarely performed in elven galliards as it was sometimes considered inappropriate. However evidently I pulled it off well enough that soon others on the dance floor began to imitate it. As the dance came to a close Felìcita and I were applauded as we left the floor.

>Captcha: abilliC Descartes
>Well, I suppose this might go that far...

>One, I'm back.
>Two, sorry about the wait. I had to run an errand, restart my frozen computer, and then look up Italian dances, which took longer than I thought to understand them properly.

>>27908059
Pretty sure she implied that she hadn't been befouled yet.
Both her and the ruskies were busy hunting the knight most of the time, and there was plenty of other grade A elven tail around.

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>>27908352

[Desire to idly stare intensifies]

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>>27908352
The other women evidently spent that dance watching the two of us. Martina nodded slowly at the two of us, “You know, I’m both impressed and jealous of you two. You made a good pair out there.”

I was pleasantly surprised at her goodwill, evidently she meant what she said about trying to cooperate. “I’m glad to hear it because one of you is next. Give me a little time to rest and get a drink and then I’ll take another one of you out there.”

Of course while I was getting that drink one of the brasher young elven nobles decided that this was a good time to confront me. “You there, human!” he called out, “I would speak at you.”

I noted the use of the word “at” and sighed, “Of course you would. Gods forbid you speak with me about anything. Particularly if it’s my success with Princess Felìcita or whatever else you take issue with.”

The young elf started, “Wait, what? You kn –“

“Be careful there! You nearly broke your rule about speaking at me! If you respond, you’re speaking with me after all, not at me.”

“Err… um… yes. Well human, I represent a large number of the elven nobility that take issue with some scruffy human soldier courting our fair princess.”

I said nothing at this and merely poured myself another drink.

“I say, human! Do you hear me?”

“I’m sorry, were you expecting a response? Usually people who speak ‘at’ others don’t care for their targets desire to argue back. I figured I’d spare you the trouble. But it it’s a response you want, then one you shall have. You make take issue with me courting Princess Felìcita but, fortunately for me, she doesn’t. So I’m afraid your desires simply don’t mean a thing. Now goodbye, I must depart.”

“Do you know who I am human?”

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>>27908953
“No and I don’t particularly care. You see, in the time I’ve spent with the royal family I’ve been introduced to pretty much the who’s who list of Albero Città. In that time, I’ve also come to make the acquaintance of many of the people whose skills and efforts enable the movers and shakers to… well move and shake. Since I still don’t know you, I doubt I will ever need to. Now good bye.”

“You’re just going to walk off and go back to dancing with our Princess? Why I – “

“No, she’s had her turn. I’m going to walk off and dance with another beautiful woman. Good day.”

From the way his jaw was flapping aimlessly, I thought I had rendered him speechless, but as I walked off, the young elven noble shouted after me, “You haven’t heard the last of me Knight!”

I called out casually, “That depends on how loud the musicians play, now doesn’t it?”

As I was about to meet the women again, I reflected that I could have handled that much more diplomatically. But that elf was rather annoying enough that I didn’t really want to be his friend anyways. I walked back over to the table and offered my arm to Martina who was waiting patiently, “My lady, shall we?”

>>27908978

Knight: alpha as fuck.

>naadin psychosis
You're right captcha, i think that elf is gonna need some therapy.

>>27908978
Like a boss

>>27909106
>>27909113

It'll bite him in the ass one day.

>>27909163
Likely by a beautiful woman whos into that sort of thing.

>>27909163
>>27909189
I'm guessing Martina. Four legged animals tend to be a bit more bite-happy because their front limbs are occupied with walking.

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>>27908059
>>27908390
You two should keep going. Its nice to have something entertaining to read between posts.

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>>27908978
I wound up spending a lot of that night dancing. I did a galliard of my own with Martina, complete with a more casual lavolta and followed it up with an equally lively Pavane. After she retired I moved on to Sieghild, who was rather difficult to dance with as the height difference was more extreme, but was skilled enough to go through two basic basse danses before we retired to give my feet a chance to heal from being stepped on. After several minutes of rest, which was still not truly enough, I had the privilege of dancing with Aimèe which was a fun experience as we both got the opportunity to dance a few types of Minuete which impressed everyone in the room as it wasn’t a common dance in Albero Città. Veila surprisingly gave me a bit of time to rest my feet, but that appears to be because she was waiting for another La Furlana which she danced with great gusto and some variations that attracted the eyes of many men, including myself.

I was about to accede to Felìcita’s indecent requests for a second round when I felt a small tap on my shoulder. I turned around to see Captain Rina there, looking quite lovely in a low cut, backless, blue evening dress. At that moment, I realized that I hadn’t got a chance to speak with her all evening. She cleared her throat nervously and asked Felìcita, “Mam, would you mind if I cut in?” Felicita looked annoyed for a moment but then smiled and stepped back to allow Rina to cut in.

>>27909380
Theres at least 3 in that conversation.
Me:>>27909189
>>27908390
That guy:>>27908059
>>27907517
And that guy:>>27907735
>>27908123
Waste etimae

>>27909770
Huh, i typed the captcha into the box. no wonder it took 2 tries.

>>27909770
I'm the one at the bottom of your list. I was getting belligerent because I just finished patching up my fence yesterday and don't want to put any new holes in it.

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>>27909574
The two of us began to dance a lively Courante that carried us around the ballroom. As we danced, we got a small opportunity to speak. “You know,” I started, “you look lovely in that dress. It’s quite flattering. I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to stare, but I was half expecting you to show up in border guard dress uniform.”

Rina smiled at me, “Why thank you Sir Knight. And I would normally be in dress uniform at events like this, but I decided that since I won’t be wearing my border guard uniform when traveling with you, I might as well get used to it now.

“If all your civilian clothes are as lovely as that dress you should have started earlier. I think this is the first time I’ve seen you out of uniform.”

To my delight, Rina blushed at that, “Thank you Sir Knight, I think this is the first time I’ve been out of uniform in a while. Well… there was that time with General Zinoviy and the tabard afterwards, but that hardly counts now does it?”

“True, I suppose not. Although you did look cute in the tabard.”

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>>27910145
She gave me a playful frown, “Hrmph. You would think so. I should just be glad that that you didn't complement me on the shield,” seeing my pained expression, she added, “Don’t worry. Nothing that happened was your fault. You did everything you could have to help.”

Fortunately, the dance was changing to a slower tempo basse dance which suited the mood better. I sighed and replied, “Either way I feel bad about everything that did happen.”

She looked at me crossly, “Alright fine. Lets say its your fault. Dance with me this next galliard and give me one of those moves you gave the princess and we’ll call it even, okay?”

“One its called a lavolta, and two, your dress lacks the busk point to properly lift you, although…” I glanced at her hips and well rounded lower body, “if you don’t mind things getting a little personal, I think I could make it work.”

Fortunately the ballroom portion of the night was almost over and the few remaining dancers were more interested in their own partners than ourselves, so no one noticed the variant of the lavolt I pulled with Captain Rina. Substituting the grasp of the busk for what was in multiple ways, a “rear” grasp I performed a modified version of the lavolt with her. I doubt it would have won me any points with a competition judge, but it certainly did with Rina. She had this funny, slack jawed smile and was blushing up to the tips of her quivering ears. As the dance ended, we stood there for a moment before the head butler announced that the ballroom portion of the evening was ending and that dinner was ready.

How was that last bit? Sorry it was so slow in coming.

>>27910187
Its okay, im running missions in an MMO in between posts. Its like nerd heaven.

>>27910209
>>27909770
Also, i'm going to namefage since I'm always on your threads.

>>27910187
Good, mildly lewd, but good.

>>27909380
Not them, but I have a story from a recent game that is sort of related.

I was a fighter with a hatred of orcs. Our DM thought it would be a good point to play off of, so he set up a raid against my hometown. When we finally arrived the town was in flames, bodies littered the streets, and a commotion was heard over by the convent. I'm just going to assume you all know what was happening to the nuns. The DM felt it necessary to describe what was going on in detail, and it sickened me. Instead of leaving the game, I had my character do what he would do in that situation, cleave and smite with righteous fury. After the bloodshed I knelt before the ruined alter and swore an oath to avenge this atrocity. It was then that I became a paladin, raised an army, and led a crusade of blood and vengeance that lasted ten game years and saw the extinction of the orc race.

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>>27910145

>General Zinoviy