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>Valencia
I'm sorry sir, I searched all day but I couldn't find any decent Homunculi within our price range.

>Basil
Oh it's you. Where have you been all day?

>Valencia
...this morning you asked me to go to the market and look for Homunculi.

>Basil
Oh wow, I completely forgot. Yeah, don't worry about that, I've all ready found our new Homunculi.

>Valencia
That... seems unlikely. You only had 500g in the bank, the last time I checked.

>Basil
Well then it's a good thing I only spent 300g. Now meet the new member of our team! She doesn't have a name yet so I've just been calling her "Hey You"

>Valencia
...

>Basil
Yes? Something on your mind?

>Valencia
I'm... just not sure if she fits our needs.

>Basil
We're trainers. We're supposed to TRAIN these things. If we just started off with some super badass girl, then it wouldn't be nearly as satisfying when we win.

>Valencia
Hm. Interesting logic. So where did you find her?

>Basil
No time to explain, we have a fight in five minutes.

>Valencia
Ah, what? You didn't actually...

>Basil
I totally did though. We need to start somewhere and now's as good a time as any! So get ready for our first Duel!

>Valencia
No. I think we should withdraw immediately.

>Basil
And I think that maybe if a certain someone would stop being so goddamn uppity and be a little more positive then maybe we could .

>Valencia
...

>Basil
I was talking about you.

>Valencia
Thanks for clarifying. Do we even know if she can speak? She's just been creepily staring at me this whole time.

>Basil
Huh, I never thought to ask. Hey You, can you talk?

[BELL RINGS]

>Basil
Oh shit. Okay, well too late for small talk! Hey You! Get in there and win!

>Valencia
This can only end in tragedy...

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Rolled 2

>THE DUEL IS STARTING
You are in a bar. The center has been cleared, and now dozens of onlookers crowd around. This will be a simple rookie duel between two newcomers.

>Combat:
Combat is turn based. The players pick an action and then a 1d100 is rolled to determine how successful it was. Points will be added to your rolls based on your stats, and points will be taken away from your roll depending on how complex the maneuver is. You can spend you turn preparing for your opponents next action - for instance you can spend your turn preparing to block or dodge your opponents next attack.

The duelist who gets to make the first move will be decided by coin-flip:
1.) Hey You
2.) Olive

MONSTER RANCHER PRINCESS MAKER QUEST

I AM EXCITE

>>27154702
What does Flash do? What does Illusion do?

Is there a resource expended in order to cast spells?

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Rolled 57

As soon as the bell rings, your opponent wastes no time rushing at you. She aims her head down and lunges forward in a tackle, aimed directly at your torso.

>>27154642
Oh my god, it really feels like I'm playing a JRPG. This is amazing.

BANZAI

Maybe I'm just jaded, but I can't separate this kind of interface from porn games.

>>27154745
Are we supposed to do something now, or are you just typing?

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>>27154702
Additionally, it should be ponted out that STR is added to rolls for any actions that are meant to cause physical damage, DEX is added to rolls for any actions that are meant to require finesse, like blocks or dodging, and MAG is added to any actions that use spells.

>>27154719
Flash creates a bright flash. If successful, it can lower the opponent's next roll, making them more likely to fail.

With a high roll, Illusion can seemingly create multiple copies of your Homunculi for a few moments to confuse your opponent. With a low score, is simply makes her look slightly blurry.

Spells are currently infinite. But none of your spells do damage so it is impossible to win a fight through repeatedly using spells..

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>>27154745
>>27154745
(57+5 DEX = 62)
Olive makes contact! The tackle knocks your Homunculi onto the ground but leaves her otherwise undamaged. Your Homunculi is now on her back on the ground, with her opponent on top of her.

It is your turn.

What is your command?

>>27154892
Knee to the cunt.

>>27154812
The op image character is from a porn create a character thing. I recognize those soulless eyes.

>>27154909
Not technically against the rules. Go for it Hey You, knee that stupid dishwasher right between her legs.

Rolled 56

>Basil
"This is good. Good place for a surprise attack. No one would expect it now, right?"

>Valencia
"Dammit Basil! I'll deal with you later. All that matters now is winning. HEY YOU! KNEE THAT BITCH IN THE CUNT!"

[Every face in the crowd collectively turns to look at you]

>Valencia
Ah. Uh. Mmm....

You know having a golem that looks like a prepubescent girl is great and all but can we consider putting at least some c cups on that bad boy and maybe some built in armour.

Rolled 64

>>27155041
(56+5 STR = 61)
Olive was dealt 61 damage and has 439 HP remaining.

You hear a deafening shriek. Olive rolls off of your Homunculus and curls into a fetal position

>Basil
"Geeze, Valencia..."

>Valencia
"Don't give me that look. It worked, didn't it?"

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>>27155065
Our battle-loli has no need for tits. They would only get in the way of our brutality.

>>27155105
Ground pound! Straddle Olive and punch her in the face over and over and over again making her head bounce onto the ground. NO MERCY!

>>27155105
>>27155126
I'm suddenly feeling horrible about this whole thing.

Olive doesn't even like fighting!

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Rolled 33

>OPPONENTS TURN

Your opponent is on the ground. She desperately tries to roll out of the way to create room between her and your Homunculus.

>>27154619
>Valencia
i seriously didn't think that was a possible first name considering my uni had it.

>>27155149
Bitch got into the ring. We are going to win this fight and become a great Homunculi crafter if we have to drag Basil's stupid lazy ass all the way ourself.

And if this means ground pounding some green haired dishwashing bint, so be it.

Rolled 7

>>27155151
(33 + 5 DEX - 20 difficulty = 18)

And she fails miserably! Your opponent barely manages to roll over once, leaving her on the ground, completely open.

It is your turn.

What is your command?

>>27155196
GROUND AND POUND NIGGA! WRECK DAT BITCH!

>>27155196
I'll second >>27155206

I'M SORRY OLIVE!

>>27155196
Have Hey You get into a mount position, knees on Olive's shoulders so she can't get any leverage to move her arms and can just flail her legs ineffectually.

Then have Hey You punch Olive in the face over and over and over until Olive manages to escape or the fight is over.

Ground and Pound, we're going full MMA up in this.

>>27155151
>Human/Male
>Clearly a woman in capri pants

>>27155196
Rearrange face.

Loli brutality.

>>27155065
> tits
Why, they distract in combat.

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Rolled 68

>>27155206
>>27155228
Wasting no time, Hey You leaps onto Olive and attempts to position her legs over Olives arms to prevent any counter attack. Hey You cocks her right arm back and just before she unleashes it you see a look of terror and confusion flash across Olive's face.

Our MC is... quite the worrywart.
>>27155206
See
>>27154702
We've got half the STR of her.
You sure?

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Rolled 37

>>27155305
(68 + 5 STR + 30 advantage = 103)
Olive was dealt 103 damage and has 336 HP remaining.

>OPPONENTS TURN
Olive is pinned on the ground, unable to move. She desperately kicks her legs and tries to throw your homunculus off of her.

>>27155305
NO MERCY bitch got in the ring.
we will make them all fear your loli pet.

>>27155380
>>27155380
Break her neck or at least threaten to till she taps out.

Rolled 40

>>27155380
(37 + 5 DEX - 20 disadvantage) = 22

Olive struggles, but makes no progress.

>>27155242
>>27155228
Hey You goes in for another punch.

>Basil
And you were worried. Look, she's a natural!

>Valencia
Mmm, don't get cocky yet.

>>27155447
Pretty sure that'd be against the rules, anon.

>>27155380
>>27155470
WE MMA NOW
grab her hair/head in place and just start wailing on olive.

>>27155495
>WE MMA NOW
>grab her hair/head in place and just start wailing on olive.
ZERKER!!!

>>27155510
>>27155495
Hair grabbing is also probably against the rules.

Rolled 100

>>27155470
(40 + 5 STR + 30 advantage) = 75
Olive was dealt 75 damage and has 261

The punch connects with Olive's right temple, sending her head bouncing against the ground.

>???
"Olive! It's time to use 'that'!"

>Olive
"Ehhh? Are you sure?"

>???
"It can't be helped."

>>27155495
>>27155510
No, no no no. Belay that, grabbing and pulling the hair is against the rules. No hair grab.

Just keep on punching her face into the pavement.

>>27155541
rip Hey You, she had a good fight.

>It's time to use 'that'!
>Rolled 100
OH SHIT

>>27155572
IF YOU WANT TO SEE SOME ACTION.

>>27155541
well shit, is there anyway that can get lowered with disadvantages?

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>>27155541
It was fun while it lasted

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>>27155541
>"It's time to use 'that'!"
>Rolled 100
>Olive's face

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>>27155541
Well, that's a thing

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Hey homu, how much damage does a choke hold do?

>>27155554
>>27155572
>>27155593
>>27155610
>>27155621
>>27155671
>>27155674

More like penniless homunculus trainer quest, huh?

>>27155685
suffocation damage plus fatigue

Rolled 31

>>27155541
You see a sudden smirk flash across Olive's face.

>Olive
POWER WASH!

A massive spray of burning water erupts from Olive's body, sending Hey You pirouetting through the air and landing with a wet thump in the corner, scalded.

(100 + 5 MAG = 105 x 1.5 = 158)
>Natural critical hit cancels all disadvantages and gives (damagex1.5)!
Hey You was dealt 158 damage and has 342 HP remaining.

>>27155707
>Homunculus
> breathe

>>27155718
Oh, it's on bitch. It's totally on. We're still winning, which is good.

Have Hey You stand up and use Illusion.

>>27155707
if homu goes with this how much fatigue would it take for olive to pass out.

I just gotta say, OP, I'm really enjoying the pictures with the updates.

>>27155741
Second.

>>27155746
>>27155685
Technically the rules only forbid choking with the hands, but this seems like a grey area.

>>27155718
Why did I giggle at this?
Get into a defensive position, use illusion to distract her.

>>27155718
use dex to get close and choke hold the bitch.

Rolled 5

>>27155718
you said we can also roll or only your rolls count?

>Basil
"Haha well that was unimpressive. I was expecting"

>Valencia
"Look closer"

>Basil
"Hmm? Everything seems normal. Olive is standing and Hey You..."

>Valencia
"Isn't moving. An attack like that isn't normally used for doing direct damage. She just got lucky. It's real use is to inflict burns that deplete enemy HP over time."

>Basil
"Cool beans. So what does that mean for us?"

>Valencia
"It means that we need to finish this fight as soon as possible."

It is your turn.

What is your command?

>>27155826
Use Flash into Illusion to distract! They won't know which is the real one if they have to shield their eyes!

Gain advantage!

>>27155826
Take out her legs!

>>27155826
Fuckity fuck fuck.

Throw up an Illusion to keep us from taking more damage. And then we'll go after that bitch dishwasher.

>>27155826
Illusion+Running jump kick with both feet.

>>27155826
Fuck. Flash and do a flying kick.

Rolled 76

>>27155826
CHOKE HOLD
then start wailing on her passed out body, its no time for pretty parlor tricks.

>>27155859
An accidental disqualification might suck. She hasn't been in a fight before, so if she uses her hands.....

Rolled 47 + 10

>>27155859
for got to ad use your superior dex to get close so that you can do said choke hold.

>>27155850
>>27155858
Magic kick go

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Holy shit this is funny. Will be staying for a while.

>>>27155850
>>27155858
>>27155840
>Basil
All right, time to take the kid gloves off and get serious. Olive! Use Flash, Illusion, and then kick her in the face! TRIPLE ATTACK!

>Valencia
Doing multiple attacks at once will put us at a disadvantage! That's retarded!

>Basil
Yeah. So retarded it's genius! TRIPLE ATTACK!

Homu is this a one-shot quest or you planning more?

If more, ya got a twitter set up to announce times and such?

Rolled 95, 76, 39, 87 = 297

>>27155899

>>27155935
I hope that's good for us.

>>27155946
Depends on how bad the disadvantage is....

>>27155935
shouldn't it be 3 dice?
>>27155873
Where are these rules your talking about there is only to rules.
>>27155899
Does that mean we can use my choke hold plan with added dex plan?

>>27155935
That is a remarkably good set of rolls for 4d100, hopefully the 39 doesn't trip us up too much.

But an average of 74.25 for each d100 is really damn good.

Stupid dishwashing bint is going to get a RIDER KICK right in her stupid face.

>>27155973
Rules are here.
>>27154745

>>27155946
>>27155970
>>27155980
A quick guess, but it looks like the first three rolls are for the actions, and the fourth die might be for a subtraction to each other roll's result.

>>27155994
i'm talking about a grapple move which is aloud anon.

I honestly don't get these rolls or whats going on at all.

>>27156015
*allowed

>>27156027
Me either. And I don't even care.

Best quest on /tg/

>>27156015
Grappling is fine, choking with the hands isn't, but choking with the arm seems to be technically allowed.

I was simply answering you when you asked where the rules were.

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Just my 2 cents here: but wouldnt going for another grapple just end up like the first? with us getting sprayed with boiling water?

>>27156077
Not if the bitch passes out due to a lack of oxygen.

>>27156077
That's why we did a flying kick to her smug loli face.

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Homu should just change this quest title to loli fight club.
>>27156077
Gotta knock a bitch out anon.

>>27156077
No, it's probably a kill move that needs recharging.

>>27156118
>loli fight club quest
I'm pretty okay with this. A little.

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>>27156118
>loli fight club

>>27155935
>Flying Kick (95 + 5 STR - 15 difficulty = 85)
Flying kick very successful!

>Illusion (76 + 5 MAG - 15 difficulty= 66)
Illusion successful! Olive distracted.

>Damage taken from burns - (39)
Hey You has taken 39 damage from burns! She has 303 HP left!

>Flash (87 + 5 MAG - 15 difficulty = 77)
Flash successful!

Olive closes in for a followup attack when suddenly Hey You seems to split into three different people. She follows one of the illusions, only to be hit with a blinding flash. In her dazed state she doesn't even notice the foot flying directly into her left cheek...

>Olive takes 85 damage. Olive has 176 HP left.
>Olive is stunned and loses her turn!

It is your turn.

What is your command?

>>27156118
>>27156151
I think it'd attract the wrong kind of attention.

>>27156171
Beat her into the ground.

>>27156171
Supplex her.

>>27156171
One. HARD. Punch. Right to her face,

>>27156171
Body slam!

>>27156177
well it is basically loli fight club unless homu introduces guys or adults.

>>27156171
CHOKE HOLD the bitch and use dex to get as close as possible.

>>27156208
Oh, yeah, no doubt. I just meant putting it in the subject line would probably be a bad idea.

>>27156171
Keep up the pressure. Don't stop attacking.

Aim for vital areas, nose, spine, kidneys, groin, chin. There are no stops on the brutal beatdown train.

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>>27156208

Body slam yes. Suplex no (dangerous back of the head issue - let's not test our luck too far....).

>>27156192
Second!

>>27156171
its time to choke a bitch

>>27156247
That gives me an idea... maybe we should fit out girl with blades once we get the time.
CALL ME CLAWHANDSSSSSS~

>>27156265
I'm going to laugh so hard if you get us disqualified.

Valencia will not approve!

>>27156231
eh, we probably can scare off the guys from /u/ with talking about punting the other character in the cunt and wailing on her head.

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>>27156265

>>27156298
>implying we don't have a CYOA about a lesbian delinquent rapist
Not really, anon. Girls are vicious.

>>27156276
That's against the rurururuuuus, anon.

>>27156298
I meant trolls and white knights.

>>27156316
>>27156265
Yeah, let's not get DQ'd in our first match.

>>27156204
>>27156198
>>27156187
>>27156253
>>27156245
>Bodyslam
>Punch

>Valencia
"BODYSLAM PUNCH!!"

Hey You clasps her hands together leaps into the air. As she flies through the air she airs her hands above her head, ready to bring them down on Olive's face as soon as her body makes contact...

Rolled 34, 87, 97 = 218

>>27156342

>>27156328
>That's against the rurururuuuus, anon.
Wait, link me to the relevant image please, thanks,

>>27156298
>implying /u/ wont want to be there to kiss everything and make it all better

>>27156342
>all these dice fails
Homu2moe4me

>>27156361
see
>>27154745

>>27156362
Oh, we can do that too....we're just not entirely opposed to violence.

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>>27156276
>>27156265
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PwZSzlk4JHA

Rolled 94, 24, 100 = 218

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r65qk8BIRBM

>>27156325
>>implying we don't have a CYOA about a lesbian delinquent rapist
Oh, is that that /u/ & Anonkun Quest I've heard of?

>>27156359
>>27156468
218 and 218, huh, that is rather unlikely.

>>27156473
Yep.

Honestly if Homu didn't post those rules we probably would be curb stomping characters and stuff.(here is hoping we can do some illegal/underground fight clubs.)
>>27156468
ok you lost me?

>>27156484
post it i never seen it.

>>27156359
>Burn damage (34)
Hey You takes 34 burn damage. Hey You has 269 HP left

>Body Slam (87 + 10 DEX - 10 difficulty = 87)
Body slam is effective!

>Punch (97 + 5 STR - 10 difficulty = 92)
Punch is super effective!

Hey You flies through the air and lands on Olive with a deafening SMACK. Olive clenches her teeth and prepares to take the full force of the attack. Hey You swings her fists down vertically, backing contact with the crown of Olive's head and sending her collapsing in a heap on the floor.

>87+92 = 179
>Olive receives 179 damage
>HEY YOU WINS BY KO

>>27156492
I think it's theme music for the beat down we are about to unleash on that stupid dishwashing bitch.

Hajime No Ippo is about boxing, and we got a set of rather good rolls for beating the fuck out of a stunned opponent.

>>27156492
>Honestly if Homu didn't post those rules we probably would be curb stomping characters and stuff.
I'm pretty sure that's exactly why he posted the rules, anon.

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>>27156505
VICTORYYYYY

>>27156505
Fuck yeah. Victory is ours. Fistpump in the air, we are the best loli cage match trainer.

Check on Hey You, we should probably deal with that burn damage right about now. Try to heal her up and so on.

Ignore Olive, she's her Master's problem.

>>27156505
Hey You, help Olive up. It's TEA TIME!

Thread is already archived, in case anyone wants to know and it looks someone beat me to the punch of naming it loli fight club.

>>27156588
ugh, they didn't even tag it correctly.

>>27156597
any way to change the tags?

>>27156620
No. Unless you petition LL, and that can take a while to get a response, if you get one at all.

>>27156597
It's just the faggot who misarchives things because autism.

>>27156620
You have to contact Lord Licorice, the site owner. He's pretty good about fixing things.

>>27156505
Fuck, this is hilarious. I mean, it's horrifying as well. But mostly hilarious.

Time to give Hey You a new title. Like Dish Breaker. Just to commemorate the occasion.

>>27156597
>>27156620
>>27156588
anyone know why there is at least 10 guys downvoting everything recently

>>27156648
>anyone know why there is at least 10 guys downvoting everything recently
Bot.

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>>27156505
The crowd roars and hoists Hey You onto their shoulders.


>Basil
"Man, we fucking nailed that maneuver!"

>Valencia
"What's all this 'we'? Do you have a mouse in your pocket?"

>Basil
"I'm so hyped I don't even care about your passive aggressive bullshit. We one! Do back to cleaning the curry off my plate you dishwashing bitch!"

>Valencia
"So what was the prize money for this fight anyways?"

>Basil
"Prize? Ah, 50g I think"

>Valencia
"...WHAT!?"

>Basil
"Don't worry, don't worry. You'll be glad to know I bet my entire life savings on this. And at 3 to 1 odds, that means we have a cool 950g to get started training"

>Valencia
"You really think she's ready for all this?"

>Basil
"Bitch did you just see that fucking curb stomp? She's ready for the major leagues!"

>Valencia
"Well... Fine. We'll keep her. For now. We need to give her a name though."

>Basil
"What about Hayu?"

>Valencia
...

What name would you like to give you Homunculi?

>>27156647
Claws might not be allowed, but can we still call her Clawhands please?

>>27156647
I second this and maybe turn it into a patch and she would wear a girl scout sash.

>>27156662
Joslynn.

>>27156662
Ask Hey You what her previous name was.

>>27156662
Laughter, because you can't spell Slaughter without it.

>>27156696
Second.

>>27156697
I second this option
>>27156690
And want the nickname as well.

>>27156662
Name her Pain.

Ripley.

Or maybe a really girly name like Lily, for humorous contrast.

>>27156499
>post it i never seen it.
Check the Yuri board: http://anonkun.com/yuri

http://anonkun.com/stories/The-Delinquent-Lesbian-Rapist/f9815710-2b5a-4603-b82a-fc2bd018753c

Part two after /u/ got a Rage End™.

http://anonkun.com/stories/Alice/c65745c3-27c8-4f4a-ad55-72d91c1997f5

>>27156658
>believing bots exist

>>27156760
>humorous contrast
Nelly

Nobody expects a Nelly to crush skulls and eat faces.

>>27156773
Hey, YOU were trying to convince me yesterday that Mages existed, so fuck you.

>>27156697
God, thats awful.

>>27156785
I like it. I still want to know her old name, though.

>>27156785
Supporting Nelly the Skullcrusher

>>27156785
seconding

>>27156662
Dacia? Let's go with with Dacia.

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>>27156787
>believing I exist

>>27156785
I like Nelly, it's classy.

>>27156812
heres hoping no bad puns are made about nelly

Nelly Painlord

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>>27156696
>Valencia
Wait a minute. We never actually asked her what her name was, did we?

>Basil
Don't ask rhetorical questions, please.

[Valencia makes her way over to Hey You]

>Valencia
Ah... congratulations. We really appreciate you doing this for us on such short notice.

>Hey You
...

>Valencia
I hope you weren't hurt to bad. I, ah... I tried to stop this you know. I didn't want you do get hurt...

>Hey You
...

>Valencia
Ah, what's your name?

>Hey You
...

>Valencia
Whew, that is frustrating. Now I know how other people feel when they talk to me...

>Hey You
Violet.

>Valencia
Hmm?

>Hey You
My previous owner called me Violet.

>Valencia
Oh, great! Well, nice to meet you Violet. I'm Valencia and I'll be your, ah, well... let me ask, do you want to fight?

>Hey You
...no.

>Valencia
Oh... Well ah...

>Hey You
I don't want to fight. I want to win.

>>27156844
>I don't want to fight. I want to win.
You. I like you.

>>27156844
>Violet
I wanted a Nelly...

>>27156844
>I don't want to fight. I want to win.
YESSS

VIOLET YOU ARE THE BEST BATTLE-LOLI

>>27156844
End of the thread?
Thanks for running Homu, it was fun.

Will there be more pictures and stuff? They were a really nice touch.

>>27156844
Next thread when? Considering getting a twitter for the quest?

>>27156866
I like Violet. Violent Violet the Violater.

>>27156844
>I don't want to fight. I want to win.
I like her already. I really, really like her.

>>27156865
>>27156871
Its kind of sad in a way. She gets no enjoyment out of the actual battle, only the end result.

>>27156844
Well, too bad we don't just have win here. What we got here is FIGHT AND WIN! FIGHT AND WIN! FIGHT AND WIN!

>>27156844
"I like you Violet. I truly do.

We're going to climb all the way to the top no matter who we have to crush and destroy along the way."

>>27156844
WE SHALL FEAST UPON THE TEARS OF OUR ENEMIES, VIOLET.
Fist bump her, then take her out for tea.

>>27156888
Nigga what? She's saying that she wants to grind the other lolis into dust.

>>27156844
Great first thread, Homu. Lots of rough edges, but they can easily be fixed.

I highly suggest keeping updates to once or twice a week so that you don't burn out.

>>27156933
>take her out for tea.
Absolutely mandatory. Are you reading this, Homu?

>>27156933
Hex knows how to handle lolies.

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>>27156875
Only one left. I'd like to make more but it takes time.

>>27156880
I actually know very little about Quest Threads. But I would like to make more. This first one was to gauge interest, mainly. So if anyone has any advice I'd really appreciate it.

>>27156866
>>27156818
>>27156785
Very sorry. I began writing before you posted. I'm a slow writer so I really need to start writing as soon as that five minute time limit is up or else I'll end up taking all day.

>>27156939
>She's saying that she wants to grind the other lolis into dust.
No, she said she wants to win. How she does so is irrelevant.

>>27156933
This man knows whats up. Take notes, class.

>>27156958
>So if anyone has any advice I'd really appreciate it.
Did ya read ya olde Quester's Starting Guide?

>>27156958
I'm very interested, and I would like to be around to catch the next one.

Most QMs have a twitter for their quest to post starting times, if they have to cancel for whatever reason, and other such things.

If you don't want to get one, that's fine too, but you'll need to stick to a consistent schedule more rigorously in order to get people in to the threads and keep interest.

>>27156958
You don't need to hold strictly to the 5 minute thing, some wriggle room is allowed, and for big decisions or important talky bits you should give people a bit more time then that to mull it over, formulate a good response, and post it.

Don't worry about time between posts too much, focus on meaty updates that advance things in some way.

And we are going to wipe the smile off of Lily's smug bitchy bitch face and make her eat boot. One day.

Don't forget to upvote, people. It's archived under "Loli Fight Club Quest".

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Loli%20Fight%20Club%20Quest

>>27156958
>Only one left. I'd like to make more but it takes time.
I don't mind waiting longer for new threads if it means we can get more images. They add a really nice touch to the quest.

>>27156960
Winning involves grinding lolis into dust, and she seems totally on board with that.

>>27157009
>fetish
>guro
I- I read it for the action scene, I promise!

>>27157021
But she doesn't enjoy the act, just the result.

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>The Misarchivist misarchived the thread so that we would all get angry and make doubly sure everyone votes
>He made Homunculus Quest get a good score
Holy shit, I think we all just got fooled.

>>27157044
I think you're reading way too much angst into it. "I don't want to fight" was just a setup for the "I want to win" punchline.

>>27156991
Thanks, I'll look into that and post it in the Quest Thread General once it's ready. I haven't come up with a proper schedule yet, since I wasn't sure how this would be received.

>>27156992
Thank you, good to know. I was worried because would get bored if I didn't keep posting.

>>27156985
No, sorry. Do you have a link of image or something?

>>27157077
>No, sorry. Do you have a link of image or something?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1emQ6IYzRYN4MG45Zl9a-0UH0ARuWLaBB_U924NXc-DY/pub
It's pretty good if you ask me (I run a Quest myself and found it helpful).

>>27157093
But do keep in mind that these are guidelines. A successful quest could be run without most of them.

>>27157077
Don't worry too much, we're generally doing other stuff at the same time so we won't get bored, and we can always amuse ourselves by saying how much we want to take our opponent and stomp their faces into the ground.

We shall turn Violet into the single most hardcore, brutal, battle loli the world has ever seen. Mercy shall hold no meaning to her, there is only victory and loss.

And then we enter the underground circuit, replace her hands with vicious claws, and then NONE SHALL STAND BEFORE US!

>>27157109
Yup, guidefag himself (who the fuck IS that guy, I swear he must be either Professor Chaos or Exabutt) says as much.

>>27157132
My personal theory is that it's Joker Quest OP, but I really have no idea.

My guess is that whoever it is has some background in technical writing.

I wouldn't guess Exabutt, it just doesn't feel like his writing.

>>27157109
Most except the ones in category one.
> Know your characters, know your setting.
> Use a simple system.
> Make every update count.
> Give your players options.
> Pre-write, but be flexible.
> Be larger-than-life, dramatic, memorable and never boring.
> Know who you write for and keep your nerve.
Almost always apply.

>>27157132
He won't say. At least we know it isn't ego since the writing style is too crisp and ego HATES prompts.

>>27157077
>Thank you, good to know. I was worried because would get bored if I didn't keep posting.
Anything shorter than 45 minutes is still okay if you give some signal you're still alive.

>>27157132
He avatarfags as that guy from [C], and Akuma Quest's QM has posted in-character in the QTG, right? I'm not saying it's aliens, but...

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Dear Diary,

Today was really fun! Did you miss me? Master let me go away from the sink for two whole hours! He let sit on a bar stool and eat some peanuts! Can you believe it! And I got to meet a lot of interesting people. I'm getting pretty popular actually! There was this one girl named Hayu who was really cool. We got to play together for a while, but she one really easily. She's so cool, I wanna be like her one day! Haha but don't worry, you'll always still be my best friend, diary.

>>27157224
Not sure if moe or just really depressing...

>Hayu
Who?

>>27157253
Say Hayu out loud

Say Hey You out loud.

>>27157253
>Hayu
>Hey You
Oh fuck, I'm retarded.

>>27157224
AAAAAAGGH!!!

>>27157224
This should be making me feel horrible.

But I'm laughing my ass off instead.

>>27157272
Me too, anon.

>>27157224
That reminds me of that Poorfag writefaggotry /a/ did upon discovering that one of the characters in Madoka didn't have her own laptop.

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>>27157224
>This whole thing
What even is this?
Grimbright?
Moedark?

>>27157224
>but she one really easily
won*
That's twice in this thread alone. One is a number, indicating a single object. Won is to have achieved victory, or to succeed.

>>27157311
Don't be even meaner to the poor girl. She's just a stupid unloved homunculus, it's not like she's a good writer.

>>27157109
>>27157132
>>27157186
Dont make this a metaquest.

>>27157311
>Won is to have achieved victory, or to succeed.
You shouldn't correct people on things if you're incapable of keeping consistent verb tenses.

>>27157321
The quest to crack guidefag's identity?

>>27157310
>Moedark?
Pretty much this. Moedark. I like that.

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Loli%20Fight%20Club%20Quest

WE JUST HIT PURPLE.

Also, one last thing. I wasn't sure what writing style was appropriate. I tend to enjoy writing dialogue, but is that okay to use in this fashion? I definitely need to sort of codify things more so that each post has the same type of format and doesn't jump between them.

>>27157311
I know right? I'm bad with typos but that particular one never happens normally, I swear.

>>27157367
The dialogue is fine like this. It's fairly different from the other quests I follow, but it works.

>>27157367
The dialogue is my favorite part.

>>27157367
I quite enjoyed it. The style of writing in quests can vary a ton, so long as you remain internally consistent.

This quest is brutal

Ah, something, OP.
Make an imgur gallery/album with the relevant rule and stat images and a pastebin with the essentials in text form. This way you won't have to endlessly repost if you need the space for something else and people will have it handy if they want to look it up.

>>27157224
Oh god it's like Nana's Everyday Life all over again

OP, keep it up. I want this happy and charmingly corny quest to be full of suffering and depression just below the surface.

>>27157367
It's refreshingly different.

Cheesy as fuck, but in a nice way.

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Just trying out something.

>>27157367

I agree with that anon that said it felt like playing a JRPG, and I like JRPGs so I think it's great. It makes the quest stand out from the crowd, which is good in my opinion.

>HomuncuLust

>>27157568
Which generator is that?

>>27155380
WE ASIMOV LAWS NOW.

>>27157568
Do Violet next.

>>27157568
2moe4me

>>27157568
She looks too nice, in my opinion.

>>27157682

Yeah, we need Deculture up in here. He can do vicious moe, angry moe, evil moe and angsty moe.

>>27157715
Deculture's got enough on his plate, and I rather like the character generator aesthetic.

>>27157682
Yea, aren't we kind of a drab bitch?
Us as in the PC, not their Homunculus.

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>>27157630
Coming up~ If OP doesn't mind, that is!

>>27157620
Loli Generator 2ch version.

>>27157659
inorite

>>27157682
Hmm, too cute or too pleasant?

>>27158011
Work on the visibility a bit.

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>>27158011
11/10

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Oh wait, there are some old pictures from the Quest Thread General, when Homu was trying to flesh out his idea.

Not much, but kind of interesting.

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>>27158113

>>27157881
>Loli Generator 2ch version.
It's in moon...

>>27157784

Since OP did announce that the concept included Princess Maker... Can we develop our homunculus towards other goals besides fighting? Make a bard/entertainer one that can sing and do tea ceremonies? A protocol lolidroid? Some kind of mentat machine for number crunching in administration? Can we branch out to other areas?

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>>27158125

>>27158113
>>27158125

I would SO play this if it was an actual game.

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>>27157715

Did someone mention money?

Well, you guys seem to have it handled, anyway. I can do a portrait or something if you guys settle on an appearance.

>>27158206

I suppose a battle scene is too much to ask for. Like Violet straddling Olive and punching the shit out of her.

>>27157224
OliVio

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>>27158185
>>27158166
Power overwhelming...

>>27158159
Probably, but it seems those aren't even half as lucrative, plus Violet is a bit wrong in the brain it seems. Can't hurt to try though.

>>27158351
On a scale from 1-10 how illegal would it be to give Violet claws?

It technically might not count as a weapon if it's grafted to her body.

>>27158378

Is there some kind of underground fighting circuit where illegally modified homunculi with lethal grafts fight? Because that would be awesome.

Also, HOMUNCULI RACING. That has to be a thing.

>>27158378
Six. Use of claws would be seen as a scratching ((>>27154745)) attack which is explicitly forbidden so...
I guess grafting subdermal metal implants onto her in order to reinforce her strikes might work though. Or, hell, we could just give her reinforced gloves (no spikes, naturally).

>>27158159
>>27157784
>>27158351
>>27158378
>>27158411
>>27158432
> not sure if posting in loli thread or Robot Wars planning commitee

>>27158432
>I guess grafting subdermal metal implants onto her in order to reinforce her strikes might work though

This actually seems plausible, assuming that the implants don't inadvertatly cause damage to herself while fighting.

Also: wow I did not expect to have a discussion about giving young girls body modification surgery in order to make them better at bare knuckle boxing

>>27158500
> homunculi
> people
Which ass-backwards village did you come from?

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Loli%20Fight%20Club%20Quest
We're almost gold, hot damn.
>>27158411
>Because that would be awesome.
Poor Violet...

>>27158500
/tg/ - It's a magical place.

http://imgur.com/a/CqN6S
https://twitter.com/HomuQuest

>>27158492
I forgot how sexy this everything about this series and the robots was.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y_J8oO5UrS8

>>27158500
>This actually seems plausible, assuming that the implants don't inadvertently cause damage to herself while fighting.
Well, it should work if the implant is properly fixed and she doesn't punch hard enough to cause skin lesions.
Of course, if we can teach her Flesh to Stone or Stoneskin/make it an innate ability it would be easier. After all, magic is allowed.
> Also: wow I did not expect to have a discussion about giving young girls body modification surgery in order to make them better at bare knuckle boxing
Such is the power of /tg/...

>>27158713
Thanks!!

>>27157419
>internally consistent
This. There have been so many quests in so many different styles. It is all up to you really.

>>27158411
>Is there some kind of underground fighting circuit where illegally modified homunculi with lethal grafts fight? Because that would be awesome.
MOST LIKELY, I don't think Homunculi are seen as people.

>>27160511
>>27158411
There should be, but I think QM will expect us to make contacts first.

Also damn, I somehow can't get Violet's hair right. Ah well, next time.

>>27161123
So we go full GTA on this or what?

Bump.

>>27162197
Let's discuss upgrades.
Stoneskin as a spell-like ability, implants and claws where discussed. What else?

>>27162665
Hopefully we can give her a stamina boost in the form of boob shaped energy tanks.

>>27162716
> ruining perfect DFC
You, sir, are a heathen.

>>27162722
>DFC
>perfect
>>>/a/
>>>/y/
>>>/cm/

>>27162716
>>27162722
More like
> off-setting the center of mass when the combatant is already fairly inexperienced
Eeeh.

>>27162806
>> off-setting the center of mass when the combatant is already fairly inexperienced
Then clearly we need a gyrostabilized butt to go along with the tits.

>>27154619

OP, I gotta ask, did you read the previous Dollywars threads that I did? Similar concept, got almost no replies.

http://emlia.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php?n=DollyWars

>>27163335
Why are there no archive links on that page?
>>27162847
> tfw 100 pounds of ass-n-tits combatant gets taken down by Perflat Immortal Machine™ Loli because she's simply too slow
Waaaaait.
Flying.
What if we make her fly or at least give her a hyper jump?

>>27158878

Robot Wars was awesome. I had the good fortune to work with Reason Bradley and Alexander Rose (aka Team Toro)


>>27163438

Because there was no point archiving something on suptg if it only has 3-4 replies. I suggest you look for emlia.org on foolz if you want to find it; you will.

>>27163438
>implying oppaipowered isnt overpowered
Somebody hasn't played Dragons Crown.

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>>27163438

FWIW, that page does house Space Princess Quest.

http://emlia.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php?n=SpacePrincessQuest.SpacePrincessQuest

I've been providing hosting for /tg/ quests for a while, if people ask, they can make a page. The only catch is that the ENTRY page may not have NSFW content, and a warning about any such must be displayed. Your call if the quest is listed on the root page (for example I'm also hosting the Nazis In Fantasyland quest force rosters)

>>27163491
>>27163464
Oh so it's a home for quests that turn out to be duds in spite of having a neat concept on paper.

>>27163506
But thats what /tg/ is for.

>>27163491

SPQ is doing pretty well, 66 installments so far, and I enjoy participating in it.

It's a home for quests that may benefit from having a persistent data set across sessions, that can be quickly linked to.