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In a modern day with an Aurora sky, magic has returned to people that reach their breaking point.

We follow an Invoker named Omar Denis that recently lost both of his parents and has joined up with a mercenary organization called Renaissance that employs Overhumans.

He was recruited by a black-clad young woman by the name of "Fauna" that physically abused him in the process of recruitment. He currently has an odd fixation with her.

He's met an Evoker by the name of Walter or "Wallie" that's shown himself to be a pretty good teacher despite using an entirely different magic.

Waking up for another day in the isolated Renaissance facilities, he'll face s much adversity with his peers as he will training... Let's see where you guys take him.

Overhuman: The Story of Omar Denis continues!

Will we have gruel for breakfast again? Hehe..
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>>22742845
fuck yea we training hard gruel only work out till we pass out

we should study up on this stuff too
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So whos "gruel" are they eating?
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I wake up feeling sore as all shit. Nothing like feeling ragged from having a guy twice your size beat the living reason out of you right?

I rub my eyes and think of everything that happened during the assessment. To think that they said they have even more shit like that... It's crazy.. But... I slowly draw in energy and get that familiar feeling that I had from "Reinforcement." Sure enough, it's there.

The assessment was brutal but it brought out more of my power.. These guys know what they're doing at least, much as it freaking sucks...

Looking at the time, I realize that it's the next morning. I get dressed and wonder what I should do with this new day...

>A) Check mission console.
>B) Skip that, I'll just take some breakfast.
>C) Wander around the facilities.
>D) See someone(Fauna, Wallie, Violet, Kill.)
>E) Other
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>>22742934

Study would be a possible "Other" option if you're interested.
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>>22742960
Jesus christ that pic. My sides
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>>22742960
>>A) Check mission console.
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>>22742960
D-See if Wallie wants to help us pick a starting mission, and maybe even go with us.
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Annnd in case anyone's new, I have the recap thread,
here: >>22737965
Or Archive, Here: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22737959/
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>>22742960
>I wake up feeling sore as all shit. Nothing like feeling ragged from having a guy twice your size
>It's crazy.. But... I slowly draw in energy and get that familiar feeling that I had from "Reinforcement."
>The assessment was brutal but it brought out more of my power
>These guys know what they're doing at least
Holy shit, this is gay as fuck.
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>>22743098
Your that same anon that made that joke in the last thread
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>>22743110
Someone else made a gay joke? I didn't even read last thread, but now Im curious if this is the spiritual successor to Catamite Quest or something.
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>>22743057

The Mission console flickers on and shows that what's available for me, at my rank are mostly training objectives, assessment, or a lecture on the magical theory. Wallie could likely be an instructor for Magical theory.. Or we could skip that and go directly to training.

>A) Training
>B) Assessment
>C) Magical Theory
>D) Shut down terminal, I'm not ready for that shit yet.
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>>22743138
Fuck that, there's no way it wasn't you
>>22743144
Lets do A
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>>22743172
I swear that wasn't me, not that it matters.
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>>22743138

What was Catamite Quest about? Is it in Archive?
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>>22743192
>What was Catamite Quest about?
Uhhh, it was about catamites. You know, the little boyslaves of Romans. The quest started with getting fucked in the ass by your owner for three posts and then trying to avoid getting castrated.
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>>22743243

Wow, not at all.
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>>22743243
Are you retarded?
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>>22743254
>>22743264
Im just saying, all Ive seen so far is some guy complaining about how he got doubleteamed by two guys who were twice his size and 'knew what they were doing' and now hes eating their gruel.
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I select the options for training, I can deal with magical theory or that bullshit "assessment" later.

Looking through the options, I find that there are quite a few training assignments blotted out, either by rank or Over- Type. The most likely, and available assignments are...

>A) Warm-Up Chamber. Trains Quickening and Reinforcement.
>B) Most Dangerous Zoo. Good for shift types, increases idea-set for transformation.
>C) Atlas- Press. Trains pure Reinforcement.
>D) Nevermind, shut down terminal.
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>>22743323

see >>22737959
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>>22743359

tl;dr, Omar's abilities were tested under near torturous conditions. The last part was a spar, and he was beat unconscious by a guy nicknamed, "Kill."
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>>22743340
>>A) Warm-Up Chamber. Trains Quickening and Reinforcement.
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>>22743340
>>22743559
Seconded
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>>22743573
>>22743559

Well, out of these most likely training options, I decide that I should get a feel for that other thing that Kill had mentioned, "Quickening," was it? I mean, Wallie had said that to do well against him I'd need speed and power.. By that criteria, it sounds perfect, right?

I select that training option and after a short delay, it responds by displaying the time that the facility would be ready.

>11:00

The time is currently 9:20, so I have a couple hours to burn before the training. Taking another look, the screen shows that the rewarded credits for completing a session of the "Warm-Up Chamber" is.. 10,000... Huh... that's a good pay out.. Speaking of credits, I wonder if there's anything I could buy with them...

>A) Check Catalogue on console for interesting things.
>B) Wait until it's time for training.
>C) Go to breakfast.
>D) Wander around the Facilities.
>E) Other
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Omar Denis

Age: 17
Danger Class: E
Overhuman Type: Invoker
Biracial: African/Caucasian
Mental Status: Relaxed, adjusting.
Physical Status: Normal-ish
Injuries: None
Magic: Evolution(Natural), Reinforcement(Novice)
Adaptations: Impact Resistant body, Armored Scaling, Spiny Spine, hyperdense muscle.
Mark of Power: Silver marking on chest
Hair: Short, black.
Equipment: Gi top, Gi Bottoms, Credit Card.
Credits: 14,000
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>>22743660
A-lets see what there is in here
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>>22743660
>>A) Check Catalogue on console for interesting things.
then run to breakfast of gruel
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>Ordering from the Renaissance catalog, tell me of something you'd think we need or want and I'll return the quote.

>Renaissance can supply virtually anything through their benefactors.

>If you'd simply like to browse, Pick a topic and relevant goods will be displayed.
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>Browse list...

>A) Armaments

>B) Totems

>C) Creature Comforts

>D) Clothing

>E) Enter Topic
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>>22743736
Totems? Whats that?
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>>22743736

>A) Armaments
then >B) Totems
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>>22743763
Seconded, but I would like to know what totems are
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>Totems...

Unique items that Overhuman subjects find ease in the focus of their powers.

Totems are often used by Evokers and Animists in directing more difficult or complex practices.

Totems ease the burdens on their minds.

Invokers may also benefit from totems.

Totems are of an Overhuman's choosing and their use is based on the Overhuman.
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>Available armaments.

>A) Customizable D-Eagle (159,400)

>B) Customizable Black Exo-tec Suit ( 3,000,000)

>C) Manufactured Katana ( 25,000)

>D) Combat knife ( 9,000)

>E) Specify Entry

>F) Continue to Totems.
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>>22743864
How many credits do we have?
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>14,000 Creds Remain in your account, Omar Denis
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>>22743889
Continue to totems
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> Totems

>A) Brass Knucles (1500)
>B) Tarot Cards ( 1500-3000
>C) Pendulum (1000- 5000 creds
>D) Crystal (Specify, 500-3000 creds)
>E) Customizable Ring (200050,000
>F) Power Belt (9,999)
>G) Specify Search
>H) End Search

>Be Mindful Omar Denis, Totems vary upon your use.
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>>22743971
What's the power belt do?
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Ring 2000-50000*
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>>22743864
>>B) Customizable Black Exo-tec Suit ( 3,000,000)
looks like we are saving for a Exo-tec Suit lets get on it time to work
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>a quest run for one person and one person only
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>>22744001
>being this stupid
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>>22744001

So long as one person replies, I'll carry on.

>>22743995
Omar would need to figure that out.
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>>22744015
I say buy the power belt
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>Power Belt... Confirm purchase?

>Y/N
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>>22744053
Why not? Lets go for it.
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>>22744053
sure
then lets eat and get to training

remember try to Chanel krypton strength
fuck bears
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Aside, anything could be a totem. For instance, the gi Omar's wearing could be a totem. It's just something to hold ideas together.

In this case, the power belt could help him focus on Reinforcement and tigheting his focus.
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>Purchase Confirmed. Item will be sent to your quarters within the hour.

Well, I ordered the power belt, there weren't many other totems that seemed inherently useful to invokers.. However I suppose this is as good as I'll get. The Totem synopsis had said that Evokers and Animists were more likely to use them after all..

I head to the Cafeteria and get in the short line for food. There's only roughly 20 people in here like yesterday, not many Overs in the facility, or they're often on assignment...

I order the gruel, much to the Over chef's chagrin at the newbie wanting gruel again, I roll my eyes... He's actually a good cook, and for gruel, this isn't bad.

I see a similar roundup of people, similar to yesterday...

>A) Sit with Wallie and chat it up ( Any questions for the guy?)

>B) Sit at the table full of women Overs.

>C) Sit with the brooding Violet.

>D) Search for/Ask around for Fauna.

>E) Sit alone.
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Omar Denis

Age: 17
Danger Class: E
Overhuman Type: Invoker
Biracial: African/Caucasian
Mental Status: Relaxed, adjusting.
Physical Status: Normal-ish
Injuries: None
Magic: Evolution(Natural), Reinforcement(Novice)
Adaptations: Impact Resistant body, Armored Scaling, Spiny Spine, hyperdense muscle.
Mark of Power: Silver marking on chest
Hair: Short, black.
Equipment: Gi top, Gi Bottoms, Power Belt Credit Card.
Credits: 4001
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>>22744252
Sit with Wallie bro for now.
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>>22744287
but wave and smile at Violet
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>>22744314
Sure this. We are of course a ladies man
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While I'd love to lose time harassing violate like yesterday, I decide against it and head over to sit with Wallie, glancing at the brooding Gothic, seeing that she's looking at me, I smile and give her a wave. Wait, did she just smirk at me? I bet it's because of what she did to me yesterday.. Wallie said that she had me drooling over my food...

Bah, enough with that embarrassment.

"Hey Wallie, mind if I sit here?"

Wallie's with Kill and a few other faces from yesterday, leaning back against the booth, eating a few sunny side up eggs, and a blt sandwich. He's wearing his usual open business suit, looking like some kind of shady cars salesman with his slicked back hair.

"Yo man, how ya doin? Kill here told me you did great in the assessment yesterday!"

That hit a bit of a nerve with me," Yeah, the assessment, it was great. Lots of running, near death experience, and getting my face pounded in by a demi-god..."

The table laughs and I take my seat.

Kill says," Hey, hey, nutt'n wrong with my divine intervention, eh kid? Tol' ya that I could only go so easy on ya." Kill's wearing a tanktop, showing off his muscles, seems that despite his power he keeps himself in top shape.

Wallie comes in again." Aright, well now that y' finally sittin with us, I'll have to introduce ya to my other friends. This Gentleman here with the 'patch is Brandon Noire. He's an evoker that locks onto things. The sexy lady here's name is Eliza Rendough, she's an animist that makes puppets."

Brandon's the first to shake my hand," Good morning Omar. Surprised Wallie didn't call me "Lock" He's got a weird habit of nicknames."

"Hey man, they're cool, an' ya can't say shit if yer callin' me Wallie!"

Eliza smiles, though she doesn't offer her hand," You should be careful about shaking hands new-blood. Invoker or no, Anis and Evoker can get you through direct contact. Though, we're all friends here." She winks through her blonde bangs.
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Eliza's wearing a short blouse and overall casual clothing. Her hair is a short cut and her skin is pale with delicate features for a merc.

"Lock" fits the bill of badass. Despite being an Evoker, his build is very fit, and he wields a swimmer's body. He's black with one eye uncovered with visible red Reticules. Bald, has a soul patch, and a turtle-neck despite the warm weather outside of the base.

>A) Make conversation(Choose subject)
Focus conversation on..
>1) Wallie
>2) Kill
>3) Eliza
>4) Lock

>B) Stay Quiet, let them carry on.

>C) Invite Violet over.

>D) Other
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>>22744660
>>A) Make conversation(Choose subject)
>2) Kill
how he moves so fast
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>>22744685
A-2
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What bothered me the most from the assessment yesterday was Kill's disturbing speed... He cleared distance before I even knew it. With what he had mentioned, it's a type of invocation.. My training today mentioned something about it and well... If I'm going to do well, I need to know more.

"Hey Kill, Yesterday, you moved... You moved so fast. How did you do that?" I ask, while the others kind of smile, knowing how new I am and all.

Kill scratches his stubble and thinks for a moment, "That'd be Quicken'n, ya see... Three General-like types of Invocation are Shift, Reinforce, and Quicken... See here, Quicken' makes you fast, real fast. Everything seems ta slow down, yer goin' so fast..."

Wallie rolls his eyes and buts into the conversation," Look kid, what Kill's say'n, is that Quickening makes Invokers like you speed up, altogether. Mind, Reflex, pulse, all that nonsense. It's how you'd get close to an Evoker that can defend-"

Kill growls at Wallie's interrupting, until he gives him a sharp punch in the shoulder," Hey, kid was talk'n ta me! But yeah, Wallie's right, Quicken makes you perform everything fas'er. Shifts find it great because it speeds transformation and healing."

Between the two of them, I think I have a good idea. Anything else to ask?

>A) Ask about Fauna
>B) Ask about the "How" Quickening is done..(If they can even explain it properly.)
>C) Ask about Renaissance/ Recruitment.
>D) Stay Quiet.
>E) Other(Possibly state additional questions.)

>Nearing time for Training.
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Side note, Page one of /tg/ laughed at Gruel pic again.
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>>22744898
B-
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>>22744898
E) Ask about any gear that's worthwhile getting from the shop or whatever the catalogue is
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>>22744898
>>B) Ask about the "How" Quickening is done..(If they can even explain it properly.)
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Ok, well that was a good, "What is Quickening." But more importantly..." So, how does one perform quickening?" I throw that question out, to any that my answer. Surprisingly, Eliza's the one that responds, "As an Animist, I'm capable of using Quickening to an extent. Though the magical principles may be different, the core is to focus on the body, and think of something quick to get started. For you, Wallie had said that your specialty is beast mimicry. Well, I'd think of a bird or a mouse, a creature who's heart beats many times faster than yours and has movements beyond your conventional frame of mind? My focus happened to be a clock ticking at high speed, and Kyle?"

Swallowing a mouthful of eggs and bacon, Kill downs it with some water and thinks about this," My first thought of "quick" involved a bee. Since I've been involved in boxing, I thought of moving as quick as one of those li'l bugs. Ever watch 'em? Like they're in a different time."

Ok, so I've got the deal... It's just focusing on speed instead of strength, small rapidly moving things would be good for that. I take note of the time, the others seen to glance with me. Wallie gets up," Hey kid, I'm head'n out. Got a spar around this time, take it easy, or hard, however ya float."
Wallie gets out of the booth and walks out of the cafeteria.

"Ah, I think I get all of that... I'll have to try.. h, and is there anything worthwhile from the catalogue?"

The group ponder a bit and they shrug," Well yeah, there's pretty much whatever you'd want for a price. Depends on you. We could reccommend a few things, however they're likely beyond your price range or rank." Eliza says, an inconclusive answer..

Well,I ordered the Power Belt, I'll have to decide for myself how I use it, I guess.

It's time for me to go to the Warm-Up Chamber...

I drop by my room and put on the power belt, it forces me to tighten my core, and it makes me feel like a champ, but I don't feel any different..
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At the door to the Warm-Up Chamber, I see that it's different from most other doors in the facility. It's heavily locked and seems thick. Upon taking my Cred-Card, it opens. I enter, not knowing what to expect...

The room is cold, very cold. The door slams shut behind me and fastens itself closed. On the intercom, I hear a female voice," Good to have you engage in my chamber Omar Denis! Seems that you're new and looking to die, huh?"

I put my knuckles to my head, oh dear god what did I sign up for...
"I'm actually quite attached to my life, ya bitch!"

"Ohh, Quite the fiesty one, I like it. Well, as a Shift-type, you may die, or you may not. Whatever!" The voice pauses before continuing on.

"Ok, down to business, this is the Warm-Up Chamber. We measure the Degree is measured in Celsius as any intelligent individual should. This room begins at 0C and drops by 4 every time you trigger a target.
Targets are triggered by set amounts of force measured in PSI, for nimrods such as yourself. The first is triggered at 2k, and they go up by 500 a pop. Oh, I said the temp drops, right? Well, that's when you're not a dainty piece of shit. When I start the program, the room will increase by 1 degree of Celsius ever 2 seconds. That means at 1 minute, you're at 86 degrees Fahrenheit... Ya know, if you're retarded."

What the hell is up with the management in this place....

"Oh, and 100C is boiling if you didn't know that. We go up until you can't go on anymore."

>A) Wait for it to warm up a bit and then start.

>B) Start straight away.

>C) Call this Chick a bitch and demand to leave.

>D) Other

>1) Focus on Reinforcement.

>2) Focus on Quickening.

>3) Let the heat go up and adapt.
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Fyi, when you guys chose the warm-up chamber, I laughed.
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>>22745405
>We measure the Degree in Celsius as any intelligent individual should.*
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>>22745433
>fuck you
>>22745405
B-2
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feel like a champ

because we are now float like a butterfly sting like a rail gun
>>22745405

>2) Focus on Quickening heat us up

>1) Focus on Reinforcement.
then slam the targets think back fur
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>>22745449

I was correcting that line. But yeah, I'm on Fahrenheit myself.

>>22745481
Damn straight like a champ.

We can do both, however do we wait for it to get warmer or go in on the start?
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>>22745511
Im just fucking with you, I don't care
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>>22745530

Aside Bobo, from your statement in the last thread, I'm assuming you wouldn't want to deal with this shit if you were Omar?

Personally, I too find Renaissance a bit too extreme. They are rather goal and result oriented.
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>>22745563
I would deal with it, but only up to a point in which I was strong enough to defend myself from recapture. it seems these are the kind of guys that if you don't join them, they dont let you live.
So I'd use em and leave em
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>>22745615

That's actually a good point there. The "Don't let you live" part...

How'd Fauna get to Omar so quickly?
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>>22745657
>
I'd assume the trail of destruction we left. Probably though we were our Mom actually.
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If you're doing a one-on-one thing, you should really take it to IRC but at least use sage to keep it off the front page for other folks.
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Not wanting to fall behind and have this room get ridiculously hot as the bitch on the com says, I ready myself, slowly drawing in energy with careful breathing. Ince more thinking back to my training in Karate. It hasn't yet served me in spars, however I'm sure that between the breathing, and the discovery of Quickening, I should see a large improvement in my striking potential.

I nod and the chick on the com says," One Invoker, extra crispy! Start!"

At a Buzzer, the first target is deployed from the flow, it has a digital number that reads "2000."
I draw in my power further, feeling my marks glow. Kill said he had thought of a Bee, so... My speed and perception improves, I step in and deliver a chambered punch, smashing into the plate. It triggers and colder air pours in.

"First one noob! Keep it up!"

Another Target is deployed not too far from the first one, I strike that one, yet it doesn't go off, I felt slower that time. Backing off, I breath deeply again and think of a bullet as I deliver another punch, smashing it and gaining more cold air.

With the next one, I know it'll just be harder. Once more, a bullet. Chambered, and released. Another trigger.

I can see my breath at this point.
"Oh, oh, that's a good start Omar! I might have to respect you next time!"

Ugh, this bitch... Shaking my head, I let it come to me again. Unleashing another powerful punch that attains a trigger.

With the chill, I start thinking of fur of some sort, or simply something to keep our heat in. My natural ability causes my hair to thicken upon my exposed arms, legs, and neck as I deliver another triggering punch. So far so good. Without the inherent advent of death, I can relax and just let the power come to me.

I continue on, facing difficulty with the 11th target, reading 7k psi. . . Even with my chambered bullet punch, I'm having trouble...

>A) Focus on reinforcement for further strength.
>B) Focus on shifting to attain a form that may be capable.
>C) Quicken further.
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>>22745782

If you know how to read... and look at the thread...

I post so long as 1 person chooses an option. If more people get involved, then they're included. I hold no favoritism or special selection.
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>>22745796
And

>D) Other is always an option if you have something creative.


As a note, these exercises are developing Omar's base skillset. And to keep from being bogged down with training days, there will be a time skip to his first mission deployment,
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>>22745782

Also, Woot! Gruel pic on the first page!
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>>22745796
B-why the fuck not
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>>22745796
>>A) Focus on reinforcement for further strength.
fuck bluets we are a planet smashing hulk the incredible hulk we smash all
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>>22745820
But that's not happening. No sense shitting up the board for no reason.
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>>22745868
>>22745895
combing go green T rex strength if we need to say beast for cover
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>>22745903
Theres more than one person retard
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>>22745782
pleas remember this song the next time you feel like posting

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0la5DBtOVNI


and remember you can thread hide it at any time I have 30+ at a time hidden because i don't care for 40k or mtg
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I draw back for a bit, it's gotten very cold, and despite the fur adaptation, I can feel it. I can see my breath.

Drawing in my chambered arm further, I focus on reinforcement, feeling that similar feeling of pure power, adding on my natural proficiency for adaptive shifting.. yes, I'll call it that... Still, to them, beast mimicry.. I feel a good form come to me and increase my energy absorption to achieve it. My fist becomes a nearly solid bone, and I feel coils of muscle in my arm as I potential striking force is accumulated.

After feeling that it's a bit too warm to be wearing fur, and some more chidings from the bitch over the come, I smash the target with such force, it effectively breaks it.

"Aw goddamnit! I didn't get a good read on that! Didn't you're mother teach you to not break things?"
Oh my fucking god... I'll kill her, I'll find her and I'll kill her.
"My mother's dead you fucking cunt!"

"Oh, really? Well, I guess you'd like to be too. Since you broke that thing, it's stress limit was about 15k psi. I'll bring you to that and watch you burn!" It ends with laughter over the intercom.
The next target that's deployed, sure enough reads just that. I rechamber the adapted striking implement and drawn what power of quickening and reinforcement I can, focusing on my belt.. I've got to be a champ for this...

I strike the new target and fail miserably, I'm too pissed off to relax for a proper strike..

It's starting to get hot again as she only dropped it the normal amount of degrees last trigger.

>A) Reinforce
>B) Adapt
>C) Quicken
>D) Ask for dismissal.
>E) Other
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>>22746099
C
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>>22746099
>>B) Adapt
be the fire live the fire become a burning rage it flues us it fills us we are heat fire is our blood

phoenix mimicker
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Aside, this adaptation is brought to you by: The Mantis Shrimp.

http://video.nationalgeographic.com/video/animals/invertebrates-animals/crabs-lobsters-shrimp/deadliest-mantis-shrimp/

I should have included a shockwave in that.. However...
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>>22746181
I actually like this
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>>22743072

awesome
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>>22746181

With how these powers work, that is wholly possible, however absorbing such a powerful concept could cause backlash.

Are you sure you'd like to do that?
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>>22746207
after wards I suggest we pass out suck our thumb and cry about mommy
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>>22746236
don't bring up our mom .
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>>22746236
Like what?
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>>22746236
well I am sure there is some kind of healer here and if we don't push our selves we wouldn't advance
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>>22746236

Elaborating more on that...

For an invoker the more mundane or "real" a concept is, the easier it is to perform.

I mentioned in last thread, that the "plane" that their powers originate is the "Flow" a parallel that encompasses thoughts, ideas, souls, spirits, dreams, and gods. This would also include such legends.

Also, yes, I included gods, technically, they can be absorbed and used, though that's another risky move..

The backlash would be either losing yourself to the concept as it's not fully "absorbed" or the failure of absorption could cause invoker related breakdowns, hemmoraging, inability to absorb for a while, death....

I've thought out deeply how this magic works.
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>>22746323
Fuck it man. My body is ready
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Rolled 93

>>22746406
for
great
phoenix
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Phoenix mimicry...

I'd label that as an A to S class danger level ability.

I'll take the first roll out of 100 to determine his level of success.

90+ 100% successful

75+ Successful, however some of the thoughform remains.

60- Failure, no drawback.

50- Failure Hemmoraghing
30- Failure, muscle and organ breakdown
25- Death

Roll and specify what kind of Phoenix, or if you'd like >>22746181
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>>22746426
Oh god op please tell me youll take >>22746423
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Mother.... Wow.
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>>22746436

Yeah, I was just correcting a typo...
Holy crap...

I'm more surprised that 25% chance of instadeath didn't deter you.
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>>22743110
It was me, actually.
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>>22743243
>>22743254
>>22743264
>>22743323
Oh my fucking God. My sides.
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>>22746451
Sometimes you just gotta go balls deep man
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>>22746451
we chose to do it before the odds changing our minds when we learned of them would be meta gaming the worst possible crime

we should take the magic class so we learn not to do dangerous things
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>>22746603
Ya this, after we go full on phoenix we should take the class
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I feel the heat welling up around me, it must've passed 100F not too long ago.. what is that, like 40-50 C... I don't care anymore... I just want to show that bitch what an oven really is...

This exercise, this training... I know what it's for, but I know that my power is adapting, evolving, changing. I'll see just how far I can take it. My mother is dead, my father is gone, and both of them burned... My mother's stars burned so brightly before she died...

I want to be a phoenix. Living, eternal flame.. focus on that creature of legend... I know it's just an idea, however I know I can become it!

I feel the mark on my chest burn and glow white as it spreads across my body, the silver becoming crimson as I embrace the legend of burning death and rebirth.

"Kid, the fuck are you doing in there!? Hit the targets or you're gonna bur- What the hell?!"

My body ignites, however I feel no pain. I feel like I'm a part of the flame as it's drawn across my body. My flesh burns, however I only smell Myrrh, or what it should be...

A new voice is heard on the intercom, it's the one from the assessment," Omar Denis, what are you doing? The training is to smash the targets, the temperature has just hit 100C and you're burning, what is this?"

With the flame in my heart now, I laugh at the comm," This is my power! Look at this, I've taken the Phoenix!" I feel flames whirl into ethereal wings as the form takes shape, the rising heat no longer concerning me.

With the power of legend I touch the target in a taloned hand and melt it.

"This good enough for you assholes?!" My voice roars, a flame.

This is for you mom.

>A) Request to leave
>B) Continue melting the targets,.
>C) See if you can't find the people behind the intercoms...
>D) Other

With the absorption of a legend, it has come into this world, Omar the embodiment.
He'll be able to draw upon its power when he needs it, though at the typical cost of invocation. His full absorption is nothing short of a miracle.
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>>22746649
B-smash and melt those targets Howie
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Omar Denis

Age: 17
Danger Class: A
Overhuman Type: Invoker
Biracial: African/Caucasian
Mental Status: Enraged
Physical Status: Mythic
Injuries: None
Magic: Evolution(Natural), Reinforcement(Novice), Phoenix(Legend)
Adaptations: Body Of Flame, Rebirth, Wings,
Mark of Power: Red and gold marking over entire body.
Hair: Short, black.
Equipment: Credit Card.
Credits: 4001
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>>22746649
we they want us to hit something hit the targets hard
move as fast as fire strike as hard as the sun
beat the targets with fist like claw
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>>22746649
EYSYEYSYYEYSYEYSYEYSYSYEYSYEYYESYEY.

Also, B for like 3 more targets, then A. (we don't want him to tire out too much)
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>>22746704
PRAISE THE SUN!
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>>22746699
Oh shit.
We've gone up like 4 Danger Types in one move.
This is going to draw a lot of attention to us.
BUT I FUCKING LOVE IT.
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>F: Civilian: Incapable of doing anyone harm with their ability.
>E: Civilian: Capable of inflicting harm.
>D: Civilian: Capable of inflicting death upon someone.
>C: Soldier: Small scale terrorism equivalent.
>B: Soldier: Highly resilient to Conventional weaopons. Hard to capture, and capable of causing a large amount of damage.
>A: Elite: Immune to Conventional weaponry. Can only be subdued by another Overhuman.
>S: Theoretical class: None to date, they are to be treated as a nuclear weapon, or a natural disaster.

So Omar is now A class
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>>22746699
Forgot to add in Quickening.
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>>22746724
Only in this form, which is incredibly expensive to maintain.
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>>22746738
>>22746649
>He'll be able to draw upon its power when he needs it, thought at the typical cost of invocation
Normal cost, brah.
It'll suck if we have to go back to High School and do a swimming carnival, though.
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>>22746738

Being able to attain it though is what makes him A-class. And as a shift, it's more costly to enter than it is to attain. So that means while he can't Turn it off and on as he like, he can maintain it with little stress.

With full absorption and no backlash... he's also able to return to human form.
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>>22746783
Alright
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Shift= High cost on change, small upkeep
Reinforce= small cost, medium upkeep
Quicken= No cost, high upkeep.

However the "costs" change on the Overhuman's capacity to invoke, along with how efficiently they do so.
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>>22746822
If we get more practiced on the Shifting, can we change with less strain, or do we just get better at dealing with the strain?
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>>22746850
It seems like we just need increase our capacity
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>>22746856
Still can't get over the fact that we have a nig-nog fire wielder. WITH MOTHERFUCKING WINGS.
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>>22746850

Practice in shifting would cause the strain to go down.

Capacity would make it far more manageable.
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With my near tantrum-like fury, I strike at more of the automatically deployed targets, failing to trigger them, however melting them in my swipes.

Rather fast, hot, but with low actual strength. Bah, with this form, I don't need pure force. I end the channeling of reinforcement for power, easing the strain on my body. I slash-melt another target and spit a was of flame before looking about obstinately.

"I'm done with this fucking room! Let me out!"

"We're afraid that's not currently possible Omar. We need to test the capacity of this form of yours. We're reading incredible heat signatures from your body and this change is beyond the scope of what we've expected. Until you pass out from exhaustion, we'll need to see more of this form."

"What was that? Haven't you seen enough? Isn't this what this training is about?! Pushing us to our limits until we show something more! I'm leaving flame! What more do you want from me!?"

"Please show us how well you fly with those wings of yours."

These pieces of shit...

>A) Comply.

>B) Melt the fucking door.

>C) Refuse and demand release.

>D) Other
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>>22746961
D. Get hotter, not rapidly, but not slowly.
Get hot enough to melt the walls in the room.
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>>22746961
We could go berserk with B....but that might be fucking insane, so I say we A
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>>22746961
want to see us fly?
go straight up
fast increasing heat

shift again and sing http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U6tV11acSRk
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>>22747040
Jesum crepes
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Providing these cunts don't betray us, we can provide a moat of fire around the campus, right?
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>>22747072
I say we get a crew and ditch this hood nigga
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>>22747040
I don't think even we could contain the power of the Beatles and survive
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More on the magic. Each Over awakens with a certain natural talent in their field of magic.

Omar awakened with a natural talent for evolution. Evolution is a combination of Reinforce and Shift as logical formchanging and adaptation.

Shift can apply to beast mimicry, beast forms, changing into others, bone manipulation, and skin manipulation.

Reinforce is more of a "pure" skill, however it can be divided into "Strength, Reflex, fortification."

Quickening, while said to be associated with reflex is really changing one's sense of time to increase speed. Quickening of the brain increases processing speed, heart increases core speed and warmth, balancing it out with fortification, the user can withstand the impossible blood pressure.

Just examples.

Invokers are pretty cool, right?
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>>22747092
>mfw we shift into Ringo Star and start singing Octopus' Garden
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>>22747000
>>22747040


I'm seeing two posts relating to "Fuck these guys" Is that how we're going to act?
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>>22747130
Sure. Fuck the police
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>>22747130
na the still seam to be helping?

fly but you know fast make like a tornado of fire
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>>22747114

Interesting point on shifting. as invokers absorb the idea, concept, or soul( Souls are harder than legends) they could shift into another person with complete skillset and memory (unless it's an Over, absorbing other powers through any method is impossible.)
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>>22747130
Just melt the walls, show them what we're capable of without making them feel threatened?
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>>22747165
>>22747160

Understood.
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>>22747162
Our new theme song idea
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mVWeqAPQUXc
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>>22747162
And Fauna is both an Animist and an Inoker, is that right?
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>>22747209

Fauna is an evolutionary Invoker.

A very good one. Though with some issues.
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>>22747209
fuck yea great song

>>22747227
so are we ;)
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>>22747227
And she's an A Class too, right?
So does that mean she's a rad-as-fuck Tier Concept/Legend/Soul?
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>>22747227
>shes a batshit crazy bitch
But apparently fucks so hard she on top it
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>>22747245
Something like that
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>>22747245

I won't answer that yet. However we'll find out soon enough.

And she's listed as B.
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>>22747270
Remeber she told us to hide our power level, hinting she hid hers. So shes probably S or some insane shit
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>>22747270
>listed as B.
>>22747286
seem to be right, man.

So she'll be like 'dude, you're a fucking idiot.' when she hears we showed it all=harder to fuck her :(
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y-y-you really expect me to eat a-a-all that?
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>>22747306
we says i show everything?

it was my second day.. didn't even take a class yet NOW i got some real good ideas :)
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Well, then.. If these assholes want to see me fly...

"Alright, I'll fly, however I demand five million credits. If so, I'll show you more!" I glare about the room as my flames roar out my request. Where the hell are they...

"Very well. As you've just shown potential to become one of our greatest commodities, we will comply with your demanded credits so long as you comply with our next requests. Further, future tests of this state will yield a quarter million credits a piece. Is that well enough to Garner your attention Omar? We will take care of you here."

I spit another wad of flame and begin to increase the heat of my flames until they're about white hot. bringing my wings down and blowing out a wave of burning air that makes the metal walls glow, I lift, and hardly need to flap as my body feels so light. Looking down past my flames, I look to the metal of the beneath me. The metal itself burns!

"Next, Omar, We have recording devices suitable for your power. please show us the extent of your heat output."

>A) Comply, it's money after all.
>B) Refuse, you're done.
>C) Melt or burn the walls, whichever occurs most easily.
>D) Other
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>>22747306
Its fine man. Bitches love phoenixes
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>>22747362

Raging Fire Cock.
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>>22747356
A-jesus christ we fire god now
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>>22747356
A, and ask them if they have heat resistant clothes for next time...
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>>22747406

I see you noticed that the Gi... AND powerbelt are gone....
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>>22747421
Oh god damn it I spent my hard earned 9,999 creds on that
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>>22747356
>>a but start to falter after a few 5 minuets of a moderate increase in heat at 8 minute stop heat increase and have it wax and wain a bit at that level like were trying to push it

Is it getting hot in here ? cause I am on fire hahahah
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>>22747421
unless we can create a fire cloak for as long as possible? (flames toned down to bare heat, ofc)
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>>22747421
Also can you explain to me why we always end up with our clothes off?
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>>22747501
.
Well, Fauna's Fauna from earlier...

and you guys decided to go all "FLAME ON!"
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>>22747501
we a sexy bitch?
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>>22747520
Ya, ya.
Im just saying we've been naked entirely too long for one quest thread hehe
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>>22747557
>Fauna
We haven't even banged Fauna yet? ;)
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With reward in my mind, I touch down and feel the innate breath of fire in this form as I begin to increase the heat I put out into the room.

I don't think I've ever felt this good in my life! I laugh with an almost insane joy as a increase the heat of the room, unaware of the true change in this form. I am only aware of the burning metal underneath myself, and the distortion of the metals in the walls.

The intercom barely makes it through," Omar... Hear me.... Hotter... -ait... -op..."

What's that? I didn't quite hear them...

Oh... I'm starting to not feel so good... My vision begins to get distorted and I become dizzy..

>A) Cease, and rest.

>B) Burn out of the room for safety.

>C) Keep it up, a little longer.

>D) Other
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>>22747590

Haven't even seen her since arriving here.

Had options to look for or ask about her too.
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>>22747590
We need to get on that front
>>22747614
B-The room is still burning remember, yell to them that your going unconscious so they maybe turn the heat down
>>22747632
Had to become a strong man first
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>>22747614
B, release the flames at a medium level, whilst going out of the room, try to go outside the complex, instead of fucking up all the rooms.
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>>22747614
A) even if it's not our full power act like it is, it might be useful to keep something hidden from these guys just in case.
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>>22747674

This can be incorporated.
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>>22747665
Actually change to this, but try not to power up to much leaving I guess.
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>>22747665
>>22747674
Er ya, don't want to kill anyone. Just make sure the heat doesnt kill us when we power down
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>>22747674
I fully agree with this.
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>>22747657
As a note... I'm not sure if you guys noticed, but marks of power shine through clothing when powers are used.

We don't know Fauna's mark.
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>>22747720
IT'S ON HER VAGINA!?!?!?
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>>22747614

I I think I am going to pass out ....

A
lets keep our true power levels low
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>>22747733
We must investigate!
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>>22747752
Definitely.
Unless she's a futa, then wut.
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>>22747733
no thats wear we place ours
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>>22747760
>mfw shes a trap
>mfw this quest gets weird
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>>22747720
Also just wondering, where are the police and swat through all of this? We were getting chased hardcore then nothing at all, is this location secretive as fuck?
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>>22747769
Not trap, I think she's be futa, more like.
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>>22747795
/d/ 2.0
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>>22747795

Not trap or futa. Missing the point.

>Marks Shine through clothing when powers are in use.

>We don't know her mark.
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>>22747813
>implying everyone on 4chan won't enjoy /d/ after a while
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>>22747822
Shes so strong she dont need no mark
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>>22747822
she's a construct..?
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>>22747822
>>22747822
she is that strong with out actively using her power

so there is a way to transform permanently?
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>>22747865

Bingo.
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Shaking off the dizziness, I try to maintain focus and bring the heat down, it's become harder to concentrate and the room is full of burning metal and heat waves, making this all the harder to handle.

"Hey.. I-I think that's my limit... I'm, about to pass out here.. I need.. I need to get away from this heat.."

I don't hear a response from the com... it must have melted from the heat. I stumble and make my way over to the metal door. I don't want to risk other people's lives... But I can't risk my own either. I claw at it with my remaining flames, metal dripping off of my claws.

Suddenly I get a strange compulsion to back away from the door, against my better judgement, I take stumbling steps back..

"Wh-what is this?! Help!"

The visible heatwaves have hardly dissipated, and I find my consciousness fading...

>A) Force myself out of that door.

>B) Burn through one of the melting walls.

>C) Sit, nothing more can be done..

>D) Other.
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Also, right now, he doesn't look "naked" he's covered in fiery feathers.

Think humanoid phoenix. Though much of it is just flame.

>>22747877
And that's more bingo to the first point, less to the second.
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>>22747877
Soaring through the air, resting on the highest peaks.
Whenever a child sees a bird of soaring flame, he will turn to his mother and ask 'What is that!?' and his mother will reply with a faint smile 'That's Omar, son, Omar Dennis.'
A look of wonderment crosses the child's face as he asks 'B-but...how did he turn into that!?'
'He's the most powerful of the powerful, son, he's the Phoenix' his mother'll say with a proud smile.
'AND HE STILL HASN'T FUCKED FAUNA, GOD FUCKING DAMNIT.'
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>>22747935
That emo bitch is stopping us, so B. get out asap.
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>>22747935


>C) Sit, focus on taking all the heat into us and lay an egg
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>>22747935
Can we get out the roof? Turn down temp as low as possible once we get out as not to kill heaps of people, that would piss them off.
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>>22747972
Seconded. We probably shouldn't go out into the general population anyway
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>>22747959
And in anger of sexual tension we will shout "CAW CAW!" into the sky
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>>22748012

In middle of desert, populace is not an issue.
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>>22748030
Going through the door I mean, where the other overs are
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>>22748005
Okay... So I change every future vote of mine to this.
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>>22748045
oh fuck I just remebered that OP said we had a Rebirth skill
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>>22747935
Melt hole in roof
Let rising heat escape
???
Profit.
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>>22748055
Where did he say that??
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>>22748105
It was in one of the updates, our adaptions included rebirth. WE GOD NOW
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>>22748058

Speaking of physics, had a physics thought.

If the room were air-tight... the heat would cause massive pressure. That would actually be the cause of much of the metal distortion along with heat...
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>>22748114
>>22748105

Yes rebirth skill is in adaptations. It only occurs with death by fire, which this would entail.
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>>22748147
Alright fuck it, changing answer to c
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>>22748147
>>22748128
>>22748152
But wouldn't C bring us back to child form...
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>>22748159
Good question
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>>22748159
There's magic for that.
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>>22748147
But does rebirth also make us a baby again?
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>>22748159
This. We now play as an extremely powerful infant!
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>>22748159
NO! We have to be an adult! We need to bang Fauna!
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>>22748176
>reborn
>reborn with body of infant
>reborn with everything of infant
I don't think it's a good idea, but it's gonna happen regardless...
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>>22748169
Specialised Evo, right?
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>>22748199
Actually, Quickening.
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>>22748211
Lets go with C then I guess.
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>>22748211
But the question is, do we retain knowledge, power and everything else we had before?
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>>22748222

Powers of the flow are more spiritual...

Provided that the soul doesn't disperse into the other world, that should remain, though he'd likely forget a good portion of his last life. The legend of Phoenix should be tied to his body and soul now however...
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>>22748249
>likely forget a good portion of his last life
Well. Fuck.

Hopefully we remember to bang Fauna. But i guess forgetting wouldn't be too bad, all the shit he's gone through, either C) or try D) and fly through the roof to escape from being re-born?
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>>22748314
Going with this D
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>>22748314
>>22748338
me three.
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Feeling that I'm at the end of my flame, and seeing the room burning and distorting all around me, I decide that I might as well accept death by flame quietly. I sit in as close to the center as I can make of it and begin to meditate as I feel myself slip further into unconsciousness. I feel the idea become more and more firm as I start to feel the burn of the heat...

Suddenly, I feel a gust of cool air and open my eyes to see a figure of black walking into the room, walls forming behind her. The suit is slowly incinerated by the flames, soon leaving nothing but her mask that also begins to crack and melt off.

The form of the person that entered... hardly even looks human. Cat-like slits for eyes, horns running from her crown and to the back of her neck. Her breasts are black and solid, patches of discolored flesh and scale all over her body. Her lips, hardly able to be called lips soon seal shut as her nose takes a slitted shape.
Her feet appear to be hooves, cloven and twisted with red fur. Quite honestly, she looks like a demon and the flame seems not to bother her.

Her eyes tell a great degree of rage as she strikes my burning body, knocking me unconscious...

The marks on her were burned into my mind, Helix symbols sprawling over her entire body...

Was that... Fauna?
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>>22748385
Fauna's a faun, fkn knew it.
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>>22748385
Well we're in trouble
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>>22748399
Well shit. We move onto the depressing goth chick?
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>>22748475
Nah man, we can still get her
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>>22748489
B-b-b-but... That description....

On the plus side, we did see her naked.
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>>22748505
Maybes shes just mad we didnt look for her yet
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Waking up, I feel like my entire body's been burnt, primarily my extremities, hands and feet. Looking at them, I find that they look entirely normal, maybe it's just a side effect of overuse?

I hazily remember the form of the creature that came in... That black suit, it had definitely been one that Fauna had been wearing...

As I think of her, I begin to turn at the sight of a black shape in the corner of my eyes before I feel a hand crushing my throat and see her armored black form looming over me.

"You... You fucking piece of shit. I should snap your neck and be done with you. I TOLD you to be careful, I TOLD you to show restraint, You spit on what help I offer. And now you've seen what I fucking look like.."

I can't respond due to the pressure on my neck, gasping for air, everything begins to go fuzzy right before she lets go.

"You're lucky, they expected you to die in there along with the loss of that chamber. However, I'm responsible for your sorry hide."

>A) Apologize.
>B) Ask her why she looks like that.
>C) Stay silent.
>D) Ask other questions(State)
>E) Tell her to piss off.
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>>22748475

>implying that we really know violet after a few lines of dialogue.
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>>22748544
A) lets get in her good books again, ask her what we can do to fix this.
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>>22748544
your beatufull

mak a mouth on our hand if we need to
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>>22748544
A-"Sorry, didnt think i'd worry you"
Gotta stay smooth niggers
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>>22748573
Also this because its gonna be fucking funny
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>>22748544
A.
Tell her you're a furfag.
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I shake my head as I rub my throat, I had never thought I'd incite such anger from her because of this...

"I'm sorry I di-"

"Off course you didn't fucking know, you moron! That's why I TOLD you to be careful, and I told you to watch how you use your powers. Sorry isn't any fucking good when you've already fucked up." She cuts me off and just chastises me... She actually makes me feel small and like I've done something wrong,

"Were you worri-"

"No, I wasn't worried about an idiot new-blood like you! Look, here's the thing. I recruited you, I get twenty percent credits for whatever you bring in. That's how it works. Also, I'm responsible for your bullshit, I'm the one paying for that chamber you melted down!"
It seems apologizing has just made her angrier... I can feel the red waves of anger coming off of her mask...

>A) Ask her why she looks like that.
>B) Go silent.
>C) Argue back.
>D) Ask other questions(State)
>E) Tell her to piss off.
>F) Other
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>>22748717
C
WELL EXCUSE ME PRINCESS
Also did we actually get those creds?
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>>22748736

What will he say?

And... Yes... As Fauna's the one paying.
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>>22748751
How much did it cost to repair
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>>22748717
>this bitch is mad about money

Incinerate that ho
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>>22748717
So we can feel fiery emotions too?
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>>22748751
I think we should see if the company will pay for it, i mean we wouldn't have melted the room if they didn't ask us too?
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>>22748779

That's more a feeling.

>>22748784
They are paying for it. The credits are "money" distributed by the organization. They redacted Fauna's accumulated pay, to use money her missions had garnered her.
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>>22748784
This
Argue that we made 5 million so taht she will get her cut, and argue that she shouldnt be the one paying as they told us to go further. Also tell her that your going to be able to take good jobs on now so that she should just relax
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>>22748784
This.
And remind her she got 200,000 credits for that...
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We have the option to learn about her...
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>>22748717
shift she wants to be a devil we can play too

light bright white wings covered in eyes lion man ram all look at her think not of her pants but that heavenly moment we will giver her

we shift into seraphim and every mouth says

"your cutie when angry "
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>>22748825
Changin to A
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>>22748766

And to this, she walked into the burning room, suffering little discomfort... as if going flame one wouldn't have her snapping our neck...
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>>22748831

What.... What is this even....
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>>22748831
I also like smoking weed.
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>>22748831
what in the fuck
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>>22748853
>>22748875
Hahahaha! Best reactions to that ever!
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>>22748853
Hahaha I cant stop laughing. fucking hell

>>22748831 Also going for this whatever it is
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>>22748831
let me try that again

she looks like a devil we can play too

think of light bright white wings covered in eyes lion man ram all look be the angle hift into seraphim

think not of her pants but that heavenly moment we will giver her


every mouth says

"your cutie when angry " big grin
>>22748853
haven't in 3 and 1/2 weeks looking for a job that tests so i cant :(
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>>22748908
.....
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>>22748908
u wut m8
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>>22748908
I don't even... What...

Any how, let us continue trying to get into Fauna's pants
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>>22748927
>>22748927
we evolved into a fire bird

now we go angle break her grasp we equals and do not deserve to be treated like this

I have been up for 39 hours so typing a bit odd >>22748951
got to pin her first ;)
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>>22748951
Lets go with A
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>>22748977
All right, that was more clear kind of
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All of a sudden I feel just a tad, no quite a bit pissed off.

"I nearly died and this is about money?!" I yell, almost expecting the roar of flames from that form.

She seems to calm down in her anger," Well, there's no need to yell like that, just makes you look bad. See, I'm concerned about money because some dumbfuck decided that he'd go against my warnings, gamble with his life, and destroy valuable training equipment. I'm concerned about money because I warned you. I warned you and you didn't listen."

Touching a hand to my head, I try to calm the migraine of rage building in my mind... Oh... she just... she just went and pulled the, "Now you're yelling" shit on me...

>A) ask why she looks the way she does.
>B) Silence, let's see how she likes that.
>C) Ask other questions(State)
>D) Tell her to piss off
>E) Other
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>>22748951
>>22748927
>>22748921
Think of it with commas.
>>22748908
She looks like a devil, we can play too.
Think of light, bright white wings covered in eyes. Lion man, ram, all making you look like a seraphim.
Think not of her parts (evo shit brah) but that heavenly moment we will give to her (orgasm, I gather)
Every mouth (lion, man, ram) says 'you're a cutie when you're angry' with big grins.

Please tell me if I made a mistake.

And you can just detox yourself before you go into work the next time, ahahaha.
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>>22749014
A.
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>>22749022
Thanks man, truly the words of a poet
going with A for understanding
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>>22749022
its like your in my mind
some how I forgot completely about ,,,,,,,,,s
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I sigh and lay back down in the comfy hospital pillows, looking at her silently for a moment.

Arms crossed, she looks away from me.

"Why.... Why do you look like that?" I ask, as they say curiosity killed that cat...

Still looking away, I hear a sigh. "Well, you really want to know? I guess I can tell you since you've seen it..."

"Long version, or short?" She asks.

>Long)

>Short)
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>>22749150
A. brownie points.
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>>22749150
long) Not like we are going anywhere for awhile
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>>22749150
>>Long)
;)
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Not turning to look at me, she starts....

"Years ago, before the sky changed, I was sick. Really sick. I had severe Leukemia, cancer of the blood. I had miraculously, as my parents called it, been fighting, suffering and withering from it for years.
My parents were quite religious and prayed every day that their little girl get better. Everyday they prayed, but I was the one that did all the fighting. I suffered and I kept on because I wanted to live. I wanted to stop being in so much pain from my condition and the treatments. Both of which tore at my body and mind in equal measure.
Eventually, my parents decided that their daughter's suffering and inevitable death must be God's will, and they decided to stop giving me treatments. They never knew the hurt that I had felt when they essentially gave up on my life. I wanted to kill them, I was so angry. But too weak and broken to do anything about it, but wish their deaths.

The day the sky changed, I felt my life begin to fade, as my parents came into my room to hold my hand and pray that I go to God in heaven. They sat there and prayed still as I was dying!" Fauna's body trembles at the memory. On verge of tears, or rage, or both... I can't say..

"I couldn't stand it, I wanted to live and my parents and their creator wanted me dead. It happened then. My mark appeared. On the very day that this world changed, my will was answered."

Fauna pauses for a moment, her trembling stops. "I... I killed them. I made my death bed theirs. It was hard. I wasn't strong as I was now. They cursed me, calling me a demon, a monster child. My power... I hadn't the control of it then. I may have absorbed them, with their final resentment towards me... Or I took in the images that they had cast me into."

She leans in close, glaring at me behind that black dome,"That is why, Omar Denis, you need to be careful."

She leaves the room. I touch my cheek to find that I had started crying at some point in her story...
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>>22749255
lol, she'd be easy to seduce
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>>22749268
Let's do it

Also are we strong enough to follow her? Try comfort her?
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>>22749281

Naturally fast healing. Strong enough to follow.
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>>22749302
Fucking follow the bitch then. As long as we have clothes on
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>>22749306
Meh clothes or no clothes, pretty sure we've both seen each other naked
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>>22749329
she took off our pants last time we saw her so
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>>22749334
She would've carried our naked body (once out of fire mode?) or at least have seen it?

Ask her if she liked what she saw? also ask her what she thought of our power?
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With the residual tinge of flames still in my body. I lay in the hospital bed and take in Fauna's story. That could explain why she's so... Scandalous in her actions... But wait..

If she was so sick years ago... and what Wallie said was the truth... Could she...

My thoughts are interrupted as Wallie and Kill come into the room like they own the place.

"Kid, what the fuck was that about? How'd you do that shit? You ok?" Kill seems concerned for me, just as much as he is curious.

"Man, you're lucky I was on the seen to keep the heat in after that crazy bitch walked into the room after you. Just saw her too, awww man, are those fingermarks?! Fuck was she doin' to ya kid?!" Wallie goes on, as I roll my eyes.

"Wallie, I'm fine, and.. I don't think she's all that bad man... Really.. And Kill, I don't know man, it just happened... I'm fine though.. I feel powerful.." I flex my fingertips. They still feel burned, though I figure I'll get used to the feeling. The skin shows no marks or blemishes related to a burn.

I do however notice that there's a flowing red and gold marking on my hands and body. Similar to the original design, though far expanded...

>A) Ask Wallie and Kill about what happened after I passed out.
>B) Leave the room, look for Fauna.
>C) Go to sleep, need that rest.
>D) Ask about Violet.
>E) Other
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>>22749353

>Implying she didn't drag a poor body by their neck.
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>>22749397
True haha

>>22749385
Explain to them that you need to go see someone and you want to talk to them in a bit as not to seem rude, then proceed to run like a bitch after Fauna
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>>22749416
Seconding, then come back later and ask what happend when we passed out
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Aside, what do you guys think of this brand of magic along with the rules associated?

I mean, granted that I haven't expanded greatly only Animism or Evocation due to the character focus...
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>>22749451
Its pretty cool
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>>22749451
Pretty freaking sweet, you're doing a great job OP
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>>22749479
I liked the part when phoenixes
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Though it's nice to see these guys, and they're bros for chucking up on me, I want to see Fauna... I don't know... her tragedy.. and mine.. They're similar and yet not... I feel like I get it though...

"Look guys, I..." Beginning to rise from bed, Kill puts a hand to my chest and I see his marks flash as he pushes me down.

"Kid, I'm sorry, but if you were look'n to leave, we can't let you do that right now. We're trading shifts with Fauna." Wallie light a cigarrette and takes a drag.

"You went far beyond any expectations that they had for newbies. Typically newbies get strong or die... but this... What you pulled off in there landed you right in Danger class A. We're here to watch you until they figure something out..."

My heart drops, as I realize why Fauna had chastised me earlier," I.. What?"

"You heard me right kid. You're on lockdown, and quite frankly, you've got the wrest of us on lock too. You melted, and burned a chamber made of Tungsten alloy that can take up to 3000 C. They're actually considering putting you in S class based on that. Benefactor's interest and all, you might be too dangerous for them to keep. . .

Out of the Oven and into the goddamn fryer...

>Annnnnnd leaving this on a cliffhanger for tonight. I think that's a good spot to leave off.

I'll see you guys another night, I don't typically announce in thread when the next story will take place, I inform via email. So, if you'd like to know a day in advance of when the next will take place, and even right when I start, email me and I'll add you to my list!
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>F: Civilian: Incapable of doing anyone harm with their ability.
>E: Civilian: Capable of inflicting harm.
>D: Civilian: Capable of inflicting death upon someone.
>C: Soldier: Small scale terrorism equivalent.
>B: Soldier: Highly resilient to Conventional weaopons. Hard to capture, and capable of causing a large amount of damage.
>A: Elite: Immune to Conventional weaponry. Can only be subdued by another Overhuman.
>S: Theoretical class: None to date, they are to be treated as a nuclear weapon, or a natural disaster.

Posting danger classes again to refresh that little tidbit.
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>>22749532
Well shit, knew this would happen
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>>22749561

Too dangerous, or I go to cliffhanger?
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http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html

Uploaded to Archive. If you guys enjoyed, please upvote.

I know that original settings tend to be less popular as they're not as... "Known," however, it's fun writing for you guys.. even if you do want to become a creepy thousand eyed seraphim and tell a demonic chick that she's cute when she's angry...
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>>22749606
seriously man? What in the literal fuck was that?
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Oh, and there was a question about police and government pursuit that I had not answered.

The company's headquarters are rather isolated, and their benefactors are quite wealthy. Government/ Law enforcing intervention isn't likely. Further, Waging war on Renaissance, that's filled with trained Over's would be a bold move. Way too bold for most politicians.
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>>22749617
Unless they are backed by a phoenix/faun/wall guy combo
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I'll be here for a bit longer.

Any other questions about how the magic/flow works?

>>22749639
I could see some potential in that... however three of the more adept Overs vs the rest of the organization would be even riskier... We'll see what it comes to in the future though!
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>>22749668

Also, questions in general.
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>>22749673
What rank are Kill, Wallie, and Violet respectively
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Kill is ranked at B due to his prowess at reinforcement. He's basically a fast and rather intelligent hulk even if he has difficulty explaining his "magic theory." He's almost A rank when he focuses more heavily on Reinforcement.

Strengthwise, he can lift a Semi, and puch with force in excess of 15k psi.

Wallie, being a rapid construct specialist, has a kind of skewed rank. When he's not out for damage, he's effectively F or E. He's highly effective however at defense, and capture.

Using his primary and secondary abilities for offense, his real rank is about B or A.

Truth is, A class is automatically achieved when normal humans can't do shit-fuck against you.

Violet is ranked as a C. Her innate ability however is persuasion or Suggestion. In a field or to a specific person.

Technically, if she walked into a park and required someone dead, she'd just need to plan the thought of suicide and leave.

However, she faces limitations on this range due to mental stress and conceptualization of the reach (can't necessarily fathom the size of a mountain even after climbing it sort of thing.)
If she worked on the range and more deeply into other aspects or natural ability encompasses, she could become S.
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>>22749758
So what, the Orginisation is one side of extremists, the Government the other, and if we splinter off and create our own sorta thing, we'll be the neutral side of things?



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