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    25 KB Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:42 No.15256952  
    /t/g I've got an idea.

    Let's make a Mary Sue chapter.

    Let's create the most perfect, pure, unstoppable and righteous marines ever via Deathwatch. Warriors so amazing and unbeatable that they make Ward's Ultramarines wish they were part of this chapter.

    First of, why was the chapter founded?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:42 No.15256956
    Counter: Everything
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:43 No.15256959
    I think it's been done already OP.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:43 No.15256962
    boring, we already have GKs and Ultras
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:44 No.15256969
    Counter: Necrons, Tyranids, Chaos, Daemons, Orks, Tau, Eldar, Squats, Renegades, Lost and the Damned, Old Ones

    >Captcha: inforg biomass
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:44 No.15256979
    Mentor Legion

    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:45 No.15256983
    Where and what?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:45 No.15256986
    To give all other chapters a chapter to look up to and really show them the correct ways of doing things... Wait... This is sounding really familiar... Hmmm....
    >> absurd !!0swx5mltBxM 06/13/11(Mon)18:45 No.15256987
    I haven't played 40k in literally years, and even I know that the Grey Knights are already that.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:46 No.15256995
    Sooo Ultramarines + Grey Knights?

    These guys too.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:48 No.15257012
    But we need a chapter even better than those guys! We need the absolute most perfect chapter ever!
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:49 No.15257019
    Counter for everything it is.

    Next up, when were we founded?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:50 No.15257027
    31st obviously
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    Got your marines right here.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:53 No.15257056
    Wait, hold up. Non-40k player interested in playing Dark Heresy or Deathwatch with his friends (we're a fan of the setting, I know, crazy right?) here. I haven't really followed the updates on DW and looking at that cover makes me wonder if they make Deathwatch rules for players playing as Dreadnaughts? A Deathwatch group of only Dreadnaughts might be the funniest thing ever.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:53 No.15257058
    First founding.

    We're one of the "missing" legions.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:55 No.15257074
    Ultramaroons + Guardians Exemplar + Grey Knights + Mentor Legion
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:55 No.15257079
    Rites of Battle does indeed have dreadnaught rules
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:55 No.15257081
    They have librarians, inter-species space marines.

    They are neither Chaos OR Loyalist.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:56 No.15257086
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:57 No.15257104
    Only they are loyalist. In fact they're considered the most loyal of all chapters. So loyal that they're allowed to use daemon artifacts/hosts without any fear of them getting corrupted, since their will is too strong for that to happen.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:59 No.15257117
    Alright, up next is our progenitor chapter. Who do we descend from?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)18:59 No.15257129

    Our "primarch" is the Emperor.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:00 No.15257142

    The chapter has no true progenitor, as has geneseed from all the original legions (including the traitors).
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:01 No.15257143
    Imperial fists or Dark Angels, any other chapter is for pussies.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:02 No.15257154
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    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:03 No.15257169
    Who but the perfect Ultramarines?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:03 No.15257171
    It is a strange chapter, with half the marines being descendants of Alpha Legion and the other half from the Ultramarines.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:03 No.15257177
    Created after the Horus Heresy. Rogal Dorn was tasked by the Emperor as he lay dying aboard Horus' flagship to secretly create a chapter with none of the flaws of the first 20.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:03 No.15257179
    shove your ultrabullshit up your ass and masturbate to how fagretarded they are. We're NOT descending from anything related to the words Ultra or that have a blue plot armor.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:04 No.15257186
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    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:05 No.15257197

    Legion 21
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:06 No.15257201
    You wanna make the best chapter ever? Tech, apothacary, librarian, terminator, aussault, scout, tactical marines. That also happen to be girls, that protect impressionable young guardsman, and captcha them to be used as sex slave on there fortress world
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:06 No.15257203

    50% Alpha, 50% Ultra, and 100% perfect at everything
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:07 No.15257213
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:07 No.15257220
    We descend from nobody. We're the 21st Legion, being our primarch Sigmar, the god emperor of WHF and our symbol the mighty daemon hammer he weilded, gifted to him by the Demiurgs.
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    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:08 No.15257234
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:08 No.15257235
    50% space accountants + 50% space spies = 50% space awesome
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:08 No.15257237
    Now that im done masturbating to this wonderfull shit youve taken on ward its time to be a writefag.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:10 No.15257253
    Legion XXI
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:10 No.15257254

    Why decide?
    OBVIOUSLY all of those are their origins.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:11 No.15257257
    And the primarchs Alpharius and Guillman are both praised equally, and there is no bad blood at all between brothers.
    >> Mouse !eVbvRTKEWs 06/13/11(Mon)19:12 No.15257270
    They were founded to replace the incompetent Ultramarines.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:12 No.15257276
    Are you stupid? The whole point is to give these guys perfect plot armour, history, and origins. Ultramarines are go!
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:13 No.15257283
    Alpharion is a bro, but guilliman is fucking retarded. We can't descend from a idiot.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:13 No.15257290
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    And the entire chapter is made up of female marines.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:14 No.15257302
    i support this guy this shits gonna happen
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:15 No.15257304
    But he is a PERFECT idiot, while Alpharius is a flawed genius. Him and Al are opposites that balance each other out, creating THE ULTIMATE CHAPTER
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:16 No.15257316
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:18 No.15257335
    Why can't the chapter descend from all the legions?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:19 No.15257346
    Female Marines without vaginas.
    >> Mouse !eVbvRTKEWs 06/13/11(Mon)19:19 No.15257347
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    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:19 No.15257351
    Shut up fanboy and listen. Ultramarines are bullshit, they're stupid and retarded, and their primarch is a fagwhore that wrote the faggy codex astartes to regulate chapter's power, because they were too afraid to be overpowered, one of the things that's making the empire decay. So shut up, we're not descending from that idiot.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:20 No.15257357
    I got it.

    Our chapter's primarch is Omegon, who disappeared after the Heresy to create his own chapter.

    He took geneseed from all the other legions to create the ultimate astartes, who had the skills and abilities of all the originals.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:21 No.15257370

    As someone who actually liked ultramarines before matt ward fucked them up, I'm gonna have to politely ask you to shut the fuck up.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:21 No.15257372
    Someone's mad.

    Anyways, Ultramarines are still HURR DURR PERFECT MARINES which makes them the best option for progenitor.

    Although I also like the Alpha Legion + Ultras idea.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:22 No.15257377
    The chapter was created out of nothing when the Emperor sat down on his golden throne. They were his last work, willed into existence by the most powerful man ever, destined to replace his failed, weak-willed sons.

    Created out of the will to never see anything he held dear be spoiled and twisted ever again.

    They are the embodiment of the very IDEA of perfection and purity...

    They are...


    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:23 No.15257383
    Our geneseed contains all of the advantages of every other legion, we have the stoicness of the Imperial Fists, the devotion of the Word Bearers and the precision of the Alpha Legion.

    But despite all of this, we are never truly one with our fellow astartes.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:23 No.15257390
    My lasgun cracked as the laser flitted through the air, releasing its energy into a face of a cultist. Then I heard demonic roaring badly filtered through a large ancient vox speaker, I was already in shock from the surrounding warfare, and painfully aware of the hag like commissar not far from here. I saw the pauldrans, the mark, the trundling horned lunatics, axe’s asway and fear struck square in my heart. The commissar fired. A shadow flew up ahead. She landed beautifully, her hair grey, face pale and porcelain, she swept with force spear, making khornate head leave its body. She looked at me and I saw cold fury mixed with worry as the rest of her assault squad swept back into the field.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:24 No.15257403
    They're all unique special perfect snowflake in their own right.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:24 No.15257405
    This sounds like the saddest fanwank Matt Ward could ever come up with.

    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:25 No.15257417
    Mary Sue-isms? Sure.

    The secret 21st legion, made up of equal parts of the best geneseed from ALL the legions as well as the Emperor, who is also their Primarch. He commanded it be created after he made the Grey Knights, knowing that they were only 1000 Marines. They were secretly seeded on a far-off planet so they could develop, but despite their isolation have always stayed true to the Emperor and no Marine has ever fallen to Chaos in ten thousand years. They're friends to the Eldar in the area who often consult with them before launching a campaign because their TACTICAL GENIUS is superior to that of the Ultramarines - thanks to a different version of the Codex Astartes written by the Emperor that was presented to them upon the chapter's inception.

    Shall I continue?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:27 No.15257433
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    Alright, so for progenitor we've got two ideas so far:

    1) Ultras/Alphas hybrid chapter

    2) Mixed genes from all legions

    I'm cool with either of these.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:28 No.15257447
    OH and also being the secret 21st legion. Forgot that one.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:29 No.15257454

    DO SO
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:29 No.15257467
    Progenitors? Yeah, of course that's nice.
    But we don't need progenitors. We're bioengineered, but not by the emperor, but by the Mechanicus. A perfect chapter of Tech Marines, Forgelords and Titans.
    >> !SP5BRo9IC2 06/13/11(Mon)19:30 No.15257481

    I'd prefer mixed from all personally. Including the 2 lots ones.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:31 No.15257483
    I don't know guys, being part-human still makes them imperfect. They're biologically on almost the same level as those easily-tainted loser-chapters.

    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:32 No.15257496
    Yeah seems best. And we could still have battle sisters with Ultra/Alpha genes with it too.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:32 No.15257498
    If we go the artificial route, >>15257377 is even more mary-sueish.

    Though I like the constructed idea, too.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:32 No.15257500
    Each marine is a tech, aussault ,terminator, apothecary, librarion, scout,and tactical marine rolled into one. Also there all dreadnoughts, and girls
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:33 No.15257510
    Maybe for the techmarines, but not the whole chapter.
    >> absurd !!0swx5mltBxM 06/13/11(Mon)19:34 No.15257533
    I'm going to make the Nega-Sue chapter. The most shit-on, fucked-with, dicked-over chapter of Space Marines to ever swim out of the Emperor's Balls.
    Here we go.
    Imperial Fists successor chapter:
    Only their armor is brighter yellow. Like some one took a highlighter to everything the chapter owns.
    They have a gene-seed mutation that results in uncontrollable racist tendencies. Any variation is something they will latch onto and subsequently hate.
    They are very proud of this feature, claiming that it helps them root out heresy and mutation even better than any other force.
    Their primary battle barge is called the NiggerPuncher.
    This particularly infuriates their brothers in the Salamanders.
    They have lost many battle brothers in clashes with the White Scars, after apologizing for various slights with even more racism: "Oh vely solly, prease to fohgeeve me!"
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:34 No.15257534
    You forgot Psyker. And they're immune to any warp-side effects because their minds have been steeled by the Emperor himself, which also makes them immune to any kind of Chaos-seduction.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:37 No.15257573
    And they can shoot lasers out of their eyes.

    Because seriously, nothing is perfect without laser-eyes.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:37 No.15257574
    I think all the marines should have dual roles. For example; tactical librarians, assault techmarines, scout terminators etc.

    And yeah >>15257534
    All pyskers.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:40 No.15257585
    LIbrarians are psykers?
    >> absurd !!0swx5mltBxM 06/13/11(Mon)19:40 No.15257589
    They frequently take to the field armed only with combat knives, their bolters having fallen into disrepair after years of using servitors for target practice/bowling pins.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:40 No.15257595
    The potential here for fapfiction is amazing
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:40 No.15257596
    So I'm assuming we're going with the "mix of all legions" progenitor?

    Alright then.

    Up next, what is our chapter's demeanor?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:42 No.15257609
    i assume were going with girl marines
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:42 No.15257611
    None, as all battle sisters have their own unique demanour.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:43 No.15257619
    All mary sues are special snow flakes, even when in numbers.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:43 No.15257623
    Much like the Grey Knights, a forge world was granted to them so they could have only the best equipment. Each of their captains, therefore, carries two force katanas (many of the marines develop psychic powers but thanks to the skill and purity of the Librarians and recruits they are in no danger of corruption) and a revolver that fires bolter ammunition. The Chief Librarian carries a force staff that changes shape depending on how he wants to fight, between a force katana, greatsword, bolter, staff and lightning claws. Their Crux Terminatii contain far more of the Emperor's armour in them due to their being his favourite chapter, and in fact the Chapter Master's armour is smithed entirely of the armour worn by the Emperor in his battle against Horus, this being one of the requests of the Emperor to the Chapter Master who found the Emperor's body first, but left before Rogal Dorn made it to the bridge. He was also imparted the secret knowledge of how to resurrect the Emperor, but the incredibly wise chapter knows that it is not yet time and have vowed to defend the Emperor until it is.

    Give me questions about the chapter and I'll try to think up some more disgustingly Mary Sue descriptions.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:43 No.15257625
    Perfect, obviously.

    Kind to the good, merciless to the wicked, worship the Emperor with a passion that's unheard of, respect their fellow man equally (even the Imperial Guard, which they honor and respect for the sacrifices they bring), rush to the aid of their battle-brothers when needed, and even though they're better at everything than everyone else, nobody can quite dislike them.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:45 No.15257635
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    Chapter master is a Daemon Prince of the Emperor.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:45 No.15257646
    What should we call them?

    I kinda liked "Golden Aquilas"...
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:45 No.15257647
    >So I'm assuming we're going with the "mix of all legions" progenitor?
    And the Emperor ofc

    >Up next, what is our chapter's demeanor?
    Calm but when the people they love are hurt they get angry and fight extra hard to defend them, becoming exponentially more powerful.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:49 No.15257671
    Lemme see, we have a mix of genes, thereof whe have a mix of demanors... We ride to battle while we think superior to everybody in motorcycles that have dual linked flamethrowers attached, wearing powerfists and hunting our brethen that has fallen to the dark rage , while we drink vodka with our bionic engineered hand and prepare ourselves to jump from the motorcycles into the skyes to battle, as we also wear a jumpack.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:51 No.15257690
    How about if they always give the chance for redemption to the "wicked" and are so blessed by the Emperor that it can turn them away from Chaos and onto their side?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:53 No.15257708
    That's even better.

    They're so fucking shiny-good-hearted that a mere look at them purifies their brothers lost to chaos, and they instantly turn good again.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:56 No.15257735

    Mary sue?

    Complete mary sue?

    Lets do this mosiac style. One person contributes a piece of flufff - something, anything, as long is its fantastic, op, and fucks the established fiction.
    All posts are canon. One piece per poster only. Make em -good-.

    I'll start the ball rolling
    1) Our primarchs were Gork AND mork! Yes! Both of them! Twice as much geneseed as the human body can handle, but it fits because GORK AND MORK.

    who's next?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:57 No.15257748
    Right then, moving on.

    What is the chapter's characteristics? I'm thinking +5 to everything.
    >> Spawn_More_Synaps 06/13/11(Mon)19:57 No.15257749
    It's finaly happened, they managed to contrive a non-rage inducing way bring up Female Marines, it's the end of the world
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)19:58 No.15257765
    >I'm thinking +5 to everything.
    Yeah....pretty much this.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:01 No.15257790
    Agreed. However, each individual company AND squad should have their own unique names.

    Oh and every marine has a title.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:02 No.15257801
    Alright, so we purify those fallen to Chaos, pulling them back to the Emperor and wiping their mutations away.

    What about the foul xenos? Or, . . . Oh, of course. We transform them into human females. So that they, like the girlmarines, can breed forth mroe humans. It has to be female because only the emperor's genes can transform a xenos, which the girlmarines luckilly have. They breed with lowly guardsmen to improve the genetic code of all mankind, and bring them closer to the Emperor to protect them from the taint of chaos.

    Oh man this is so disgusting I can barely stand it. Not only do they know how to ressurect the Emperor, it involves tehy bearing a male child that will have no higher thought functions. An emopty husk of living flesh they will raise until it is a fit vessel for the Emperor. Thus far, they have sadly borne only females.
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    Shit has been archived!
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    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:09 No.15257870
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:10 No.15257881
    Lord Shatterfall knelt in the circle of silent Marines glad in gold armour. The gods would not be kind to him on his return to the Eye, he knew. Failure could not be tolerated, and his dark patrons would likely consign him to an eternity of torment. It was just so unfair! How could these perfect Marines know where he was going to strike?
    A gauntlet floated into his field of view. He looked up, and there was a Captain of that infernal chapter, katanas at his side. His eyes met those of his nemesis, and widened in surprise. They were kind eyes, eyes that spoke of forgiveness, of service to the long-forgotten Emperor.
    "You have been lost, Brother. Lost for a long time," uttered the tall loyalist, his hand still outstretched. "But we have faith that in time, you can find yourself. Come with us, and serve in the name of the Emperor once more. Our father forgives."
    Long minutes passed, then slowly, slowly, a twisted gauntlet rose to grip the proffered hand. The shamed Chaos Lord made his choice. It had been so long, and these Marines were showing hm the kindness that Chaos would not.
    Lord Shatter- no, Brother-Sergeant Erasmus rose and the shackles of Chaos broke under the smiles of the Marines. "The Emperor will have my blade once more in his service. It has been a long time. Thank you... brothers."

    Now if you'll excuse me gentlemen I need to scrub my brain clean of what I have done.
    >> Spawn_More_Synaps 06/13/11(Mon)20:14 No.15257914
    I think I just threw up in my mouth, which in this context means your doing it right
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:14 No.15257916
    Damn, I'd love to see what would happen if a Glistening Host marine encountered one of these battle sisters.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:15 No.15257923
    The greatest marine fapfic ever. That's what would happen.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:15 No.15257925
    It's beautiful. Know that your sacrifice is not in vain, brother.

    Actually, that's a pretty good line. Maybe our perfect marines should pep-talk IGs before large battles, and this inspires them so that they fight doubly hard, which makes the presence of Commissars on any battlefield, where the Golden Aquilas fight, completely unnecessary.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:20 No.15257956
    You mean like the Mentor Legion.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:21 No.15257962
    I guess we're going with the +5 to everything characteristic...

    NEXT! Who is the figure of legend and what is her deed of legend?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:21 No.15257968
    They are secretly the reason for every good thing that has ever happened in the setting.
    Creed studied tactics under them, etc. . .
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:23 No.15257985
    >Who is the figure of legend
    Every single fucking Marine

    >what is her deed of legend
    Every single thing they do.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:23 No.15257989
    Chapter master/chief librarian/master of forge.

    Send a dameon primarch into the warp. Was put in a coma but lives on as a dreadnought designed perfectly after her originally shape.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:27 No.15258022
    First Chapter Master. Fought off Chaos to protect the Emperor's body before Dorn got to the bridge. Then went on the chase the Traitor Legions all the way back into the Eye, inflicting crippling losses on all the traitor legions single-handedly as revenge.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:27 No.15258024
    Chapter Master who managed to turn a daemon prince back into a normal marine, then convinced him to become a loyalist again.

    Also saved an entire sector from destruction, which the chapter was later given control of.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:30 No.15258051
    She also became a living Saint.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:30 No.15258055
    Yes, except better.

    Their figure of legend is Darius Alaric (or whatever, I'm horrible with names), he single-handedly created the defensive gauntlet surrounding Terra, co-wrote the Codex Astartes with the Emperor (who was like a brother to him), bested a demon prince in single combat and died while fighting back to back with the Emperor himself during the Horus Heresy.

    The holy artifact of the chapter is a warhammer, forged out of Darius' and the Emperors armor, imbued with Darius's soul and used by the Primarch of the chapter. It is said that a single blow of that hammer could wipe out the Chaos taint on an entire planet, cleansing the souls of the afflicted and returning them to the light that is our Emperor.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:33 No.15258088
    All of this.
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    >managed to turn a daemon prince back into a normal marine
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:35 No.15258103
    Uh, I though the chapter was founded after the Heresy was done, to create a perfect chapter which would prevent such an event from ever occurring again.
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    Jesus christ man calm odd own it's only a game. Add that to your hate is completely irrational and stems solely from perosnal opinion. Never in any 40k fluff is gulliman, or any primarch, portrayed as an idiot. Your hate towards the ultramarines, considering their fictional characters that never existed, must stem from something else. Maybe you got picked on by someone who enjoyed ultramarines?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:39 No.15258137
    Their figure of legend is also the chapter master who created the chapter after his brotherly friend the Emperor died.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:41 No.15258143

    Or wait, would she have been one of the custodes?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:42 No.15258153
    >Or wait, would she have been one of the custodes?


    She was the only female Custodes ever, and had fought alongside the Emperor during the Unification Wars.
    >> Spawn_More_Synaps 06/13/11(Mon)20:43 No.15258157
    they'er awsom enuf to have moar then 1 origin
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:44 No.15258163
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:45 No.15258170
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:45 No.15258181

    So... slap all of this together?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:47 No.15258193
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    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:50 No.15258212
    NEXT! What is the chapter's homeworld(s)?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:50 No.15258219
    maybe he regarded her as his daughter or something like this?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:51 No.15258222
    So... we have our female chapter master, one of the custodes, who fought alongside the Emperor (who was her brotherly friend) during the unification wars.

    Later she developed the defensive system around Terra, wrote the Codex Astartes together with the Emperor, thereby creating Space Marines as we know them.

    During the Horus Heresy she fought side by side with the Emperor, defending him from the forces of Chaos, even after he fell. When Dorn got there, she set out in a crusade of righteous fury, single-handedly driving the forces of Chaos back into the Eye.
    She then returned to create the Golden Aquilas to prevent such a terrible thing from ever occuring again.

    Her sacrifices and accomplishments eventually allowed her to ascend and become a Saint.

    Other notable accomplishments: Single-handedly defeating a daemon prince, then turning him back into a human and purging the taint of Chaos from him by sheer power of her will and benevolence.

    Her armor and that of the Emperor were used to create a mighty hammer, the holy relic of the Golden Aquilas. It has the power to wipe out the taint of Chaos from an entire planet with a single blow.

    That sound about right?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:51 No.15258231
    The sector which their Chapter Master saved. It has one of every type of possible planet to roll, including a forge world and fortress monastery.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:53 No.15258240
    Nooooooo !
    Matt Ward will read this and this will be the next codex released.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:53 No.15258245
    I like the sister thing better.

    All the primarchs and astartes are considered children of the Emperor. To be like a sister to him would make her waaay above everyone else.
    >> Spawn_More_Synaps 06/13/11(Mon)20:53 No.15258251
    SO.... DISGUSTING!!!! It's perfect.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:55 No.15258269
    This sounds like some 12 year old girl with a hard-on for the Emperor and power fantasies wrote horrible fanfiction.

    So yeah, it's good.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)20:58 No.15258306
    This FTW
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:03 No.15258370
    NEXT! What is the relationship with our homeworlds?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:04 No.15258377
    What does our chapters armor and regalia look like?
    What about their creed?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:04 No.15258380
    Best codex ever.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:05 No.15258389
    He'll probably make them a subchapter of the Ultramarines.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:09 No.15258430
    Direct rule FOR ALL

    Every marine can have their own colour scheme, but the main one is a mix of blue, gold, red, white and black.
    Warcries are various inspiring short speeches about the power of the Emperor, courage and friendship.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:11 No.15258458
    >midnight blue, orichalcum gold, crimson red, silver and the pitchest black.
    Fix'd that for you.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:14 No.15258503
    This thread is a goddamn cesspool of fanwank and slashfic.

    And I'm loving it. Please continue.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:17 No.15258528
    What about the banner? Since we're the Golden Aquilas, I guess having the twin-headed eagle is only appropriate, no? Maybe we can spice it up a bit.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:20 No.15258580
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    >> Magi 06/13/11(Mon)21:20 No.15258581
    How about have it heavily implied that she wasnt made by the Emperor, but rather rose to that position as a humble guardswoman through her faith and purity. Later it is implied that as the Emperor lay dying he whispered a message to her to look after their still-in-the-womb son as he will inherit the stars and Imperium of man.

    Not sure what i've written there, but nothing makes a mary sue like some godaweful shoehorned illigitamate child drama purity bollocks.

    ...I have shamed myself.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:22 No.15258605
    they need a over the top sanguinor like figure ...
    I vote for captain planet style combination of champions
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:22 No.15258608
    Oh god, it looks like a clown in power armor.

    I think gold and white should be dominant, with black highlights (damn, I sound gay right now).

    If you could direct me to the template...
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:22 No.15258620
    Wait, he screwed his sister-figure? Ewww!
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:23 No.15258636
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:24 No.15258639
    The eagle should have tiaras, roses in his beak and some kind of pink ribbons
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:26 No.15258674
    Color is just Gold. Covered in Diamonds.
    >> Magi 06/13/11(Mon)21:31 No.15258736
    See at the moment i'm thinking some aweful doctrine whereby one of their first acts must be to travel into the eye of terror and single handidly bring back a daemon weapon, quelling its fury with their retorhic and turning them back into regular weapons, the weapons now having happy, jovial voices in them that act much like quipping side characters.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:32 No.15258748
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    I'm not so firm with my SM chapter fluff, so if there already is a chapter with comparable colors, don't kill me.
    >> Spawn_More_Synaps 06/13/11(Mon)21:34 No.15258764
    this has now transended from just bad to gloriously bad
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:35 No.15258776
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    Silver bits represent parts made out of Diamond.

    Also they all use MK9 armor, and their first company, and all their sergeants and captains use Terminator Armor.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:36 No.15258784
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    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:39 No.15258808
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    Another version.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:41 No.15258841
    Wait what is that Dawn of War?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:41 No.15258847
    >> Magi 06/13/11(Mon)21:42 No.15258854
    fucking. terrible

    but in the context, very nice
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:42 No.15258856
    DoW II: Retribution.

    Is that a Grey Knight model?
    I am confus.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:43 No.15258870
    It's Firestorm Over Kronus, an awesome mod for DoW: Dark Crusade.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:44 No.15258874
    Much better.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:45 No.15258896
    noo we need something MORE mary sue-ish...

    how about a special power armour model only availabel to them, granted by the adeptus mechanicus because they are so loyal to the emperor. needless to say this model of PA is clearly superior to Terminator armor in any and every aspect.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:46 No.15258903
    Thats Firestorm over Kronus mod. The units look cooler and are way better in geenral.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:46 No.15258907
    In honour of their founder, the Golden Aquilas' first company are all granted Custodes equipment.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:47 No.15258912
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    This should happen to that Marine!! Blood for the fucking Blood God!
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:47 No.15258920
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    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:48 No.15258925
    Aegis Runic Tactical Dreadnought Armor MKX.
    Like Terminator Armor, except with anti-magic powers and the agility of Beakie Armor.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:49 No.15258943
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    This is how you should all be role playing Space Marines. Just replace 'Rich' with 'Pious' and you're golden.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:51 No.15258951
    Standard issue for termies.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:51 No.15258952
    They made an RPG about bitchy schoolgirl rivalries?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:51 No.15258954

    Good good, throw in a +3 invulnerable save for good measure.. ( not a +2, after all they are not omnipotent..just really really nice and good marines!)

    I'm totally disgusted, good work people!
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:51 No.15258955
    OH FUCK YES wait, don't Custodes make their own stuff?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:53 No.15258966
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    Dude can you gimme the input numbers for the paint template? The little numbers that associate it to the color on the edge of the color coding section? I want to create this chapter and have them thrashed by chaos marines.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:55 No.15258976

    The chargen is amazing.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)21:57 No.15258997




    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:00 No.15259016

    what mod is that pic from?
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:03 No.15259046
    Warcry is a combination of multiple extremely overused/cliche boasts and lines.

    "Like a phoenix from the ashes, we shall never lose our freedom!"
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:04 No.15259059
    "Mark my words! Evil shall never prevail! For the people!"
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:06 No.15259080
    With great power comes great righteousness."
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:06 No.15259082
    I was also thinking they could have a variety of powers available to them, ranging form the sisters faith to openly usin xeno tech. The inquisition doesn't mind because the chapter is so trustworthy and can't be corrupted by chaos.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:08 No.15259104
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    That right? I didnt know what insignias to put so i did random ones.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:09 No.15259113
    Firestorm over Kronus 3.6, but get 3.5 and 3.53 d because you get all of the good shit plus tyranids as playable and opposobale.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:14 No.15259154
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:22 No.15259230
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    Golden aquis in battle
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:34 No.15259322
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:37 No.15259342
    Got my ass handed to me on a silver platter, 2 land raiders and 3 dreadnoughts and 2 preds broke apart 4 tac squads and a 20 man berserkar squad and my 2 preds and a defiler, they bring in termies and orbital drop 2 tac squads on my base and a orbital strike. Overwhelming defeat. Fucking Goldies own!
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:37 No.15259346
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    From this angle, it reminded me of the coat of arms of Ukraine.
    >> Anonymous 06/13/11(Mon)22:53 No.15259501
    Oh i dont think this the official insignia, I just slapped it on because there was nothing else that would fit so I thought, Angels of Death. Death = sword and Angels= wings. so yea pretty lame.
    >> Spawn_More_Synaps 06/14/11(Tue)00:23 No.15260167
    bump for triumphant badness
    >> Anonymous 06/14/11(Tue)01:22 No.15260708
    Bumps for the Bump Throne!
    >> Anonymous 06/14/11(Tue)03:13 No.15261729
    I feel like I need to take a shower after reading this.

    We've done it /tg/: we've out-Warded Ward.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/11(Tue)03:16 No.15261763
    > Let's make a Mary Sue chapter.
    > Let's make a Space Marine chapter

    Fixed that for ya, OP. Also...Ghey Knights and Ultramaroons already exist.

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