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    687 KB Anonymous 01/18/11(Tue)22:38 No.13574563  
    >Female blackguards are utter sluts for men badder and stronger than them.

    I saw this post in another thread and it made me remember a character one of my players played once. She wanted to play a female blackguard, and indeed she followed that philosophy. She ended sleeping with several evil dudes, and being a downright sex slave to another.

    I asked my player why and she said that she imagined a blackguard became evil because of all the power they could attain. Unlike Paladins, who were restrained by their honor, a blackguard would live trying to become more powerful. So, power was a terrific aphrodisiac. So a PC like hers would consider normal guys as little more than insects, but someone capable of outranking her would be "too worshipful"

    Do you guys think there is any truth to this?
    >> Anonymous 01/18/11(Tue)22:40 No.13574584

    Yes, this is pretty true, but they are still blackguards so you should feel sorry for any other girl who tries to take the attention away from them.
    >> Anonymous 01/18/11(Tue)22:42 No.13574602

    >Female blackguards are utter sluts for men badder and stronger than them

    That is not a blackguard thing. That is a purely biological thing. Women will like more guys that are assertive and stand out in their field.

    The idea that girls like sensitive kind and shy guys is utter bullshit from anime shows
    >> Anonymous 01/18/11(Tue)22:42 No.13574604
    The only thing true about blackguards is that they're evilly aligned.
    >> Anonymous 01/18/11(Tue)22:45 No.13574624
    and american romances
    >> OnlySaneMan 01/18/11(Tue)22:45 No.13574631

    This is the truth. And given that Evil can be just as multi-faceted as any other alignment, that means you can create virtually any character you want. This interpretation of a female blackguard would be just as valid as a chaste one.
    >> Anonymous 01/18/11(Tue)22:47 No.13574660
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    >chaste blackguard

    Is more likely than what you think
    >> Anonymous 01/18/11(Tue)23:01 No.13574819
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    Well, holy shit. We must document this new finding!

    When have women ever been anything but raging whores for the 'bad boy' archtype?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)00:49 No.13575930
    We need more pics of female blackgaurds.
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)00:55 No.13575991
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    >Being attracted to strength means you automatically hate weakness, and it's impossibly to enjoy both.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)00:57 No.13576007
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    Because people playing evil characters are even more likely to be playing out their various power fantasies than good characters.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:03 No.13576067
    Meh, it's one person's take on it. I think that it would depend on the blackguard's evil deity, but I also think that becoming a "sex slave" to a more powerful character (without there being an underlying attempt to steal that power for the blackguard's deity/cause) is dumb, though.

    tl;dr she's just a cumslut
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:14 No.13576172
    ITT: misognyism
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:15 No.13576182
    ITT: illiteracy
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:23 No.13576288
    This is one possibility. Certainly the ability to obtain both personal power and power by proxy would be very attractive to a blackguard. There are other approaches.

    A female blackguard might also be maniacal about always being in control. Such a charecter would have no attraction whatsoever to a leader type, and indeed would find any attempts to get physical revolting in the extreme. She would only be interested in men that were weaker than herself that she could dominate utterly (no sexytime intended, such men really would be slaves to her every whim). If someone in charge of her attempted to force the issue, she would probably go to great lengths to kill that whore-son for his presumption.

    Then there are those who were badly treated in the past and just snapped. Some women get weepy and fearful when abused. Some get their kill on. Its not hard to imagine a blackguard who earned their demon partnership by catching, torturing, and murdering every man who has ever slept with her for any reason.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:26 No.13576316
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:28 No.13576336
    If that's cannon, then I'd expect any male to always be attracted to a female blackguard who's more powerful than him.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:30 No.13576364
    Not that I disagree with you, but that'd make for a bit of a weird social interaction system between blackguards. Ass kicking equals sex. Wait, no, that's not really that weird at all.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:33 No.13576396
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:35 No.13576417
    >Ass kicking equals sex
    no it would equal foreplay
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:37 No.13576440
    And foreplay generally leads to sex. So 80% of the time it'd be a case of ass kicking equals sex.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:38 No.13576452
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    What if she got her ass kicked by a paladin? WHAT WOULD HAPPEN?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:39 No.13576456
    >I'd expect any male to always be attracted to a female blackguard who's more powerful than him.

    But we are.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:41 No.13576488
    What if they are equally matched? 69?
    >> PaladinGuy !!0ZL3cy8TJ55 01/19/11(Wed)01:42 No.13576499
    Lawful Sexy Dickings. She gets screwed back into being good.

    Alternatively? Paladin decides he's going to make this crazy she-devil become a good person again. Cue Lifetime style journey of self-discovery for both of them. (Also, cue vomit bags for everybody who isn't a giant sissy. [Disclaimer : I am a giant sissy, so I can say that dammit!]) Ends up with her explaining her daddy issues to a very patient, but bored Paladin.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:43 No.13576513
    Blackguards not having a clear hierarchy of power?
    They fight until one of them is too dead for them to be equally matched anymore.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:46 No.13576538
    Some may be drawn to power this way, others may find the presence of one mroe powerful than them a personal insult, or be overcome with feelings of helplessness, or some such, quite the turnoff.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:47 No.13576556
    Speaking of multi-faceted.... Well, say for example that a sadistic Neutral Evil character (for whatever reason) has 'entertainment' as his driving force. Would he come dangerously close to Chaotic Evil territory in trying to pursue his goal?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:47 No.13576562
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    >Sluts for power

    Stop the fucking presses.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:48 No.13576570
    Time for a holy dicking!
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:53 No.13576629
    Why is he Neutral Evil to begin with, if his motivations tend toward Chaotic?

    This is why the alignment system is terrible and you should stop thinking in those terms.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)01:56 No.13576658
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:03 No.13576756
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    I'd like to second this. Powerful women are hot as fuck

    Doesn't have to be just physically powerful for some of us, though. I'm seriously turned on by "emotionally" powerful women, the type of woman with a level head and a go-get-em attitude. Doesn't let shit get her down, knows what she's doing. Reliable, you could probably say

    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:04 No.13576760
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    >Female Blackguard thread

    Lily was once a happy girl with a family and friends. She grew up in a secluded elven community deep in the forest where she would

    But all that changed on the day when their village was attacked for unknown reasons by a band of adventurers. One of them, a Blackguard, forced the young children to fight to the death. The only surviving child was adopted by the Blackguard and named "Lily".

    Now, Lily has been taken deeper into the forest, where she has been tormented, humiliated, and abused for days on end. This is her story...
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:04 No.13576769
    But with the random hand of fate (dice) the winner today could be the loser tomorrow. 2 Blackguards, same feats, same skill point allocations, rolled the same for HP, one day one will win the next day the next will win, what happens then?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:07 No.13576801
    Are you actually going to continue the story? If you are, that is awesome. Don't be a cocktease here.
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:12 No.13576874
    >women with power or seeking power are total sluts
    Wow /tg/. Just wow.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:23 No.13576986

    Good try, young troll, but the subject the OP brought up was whether or not women are utter sluts for men badder and stronger than them. As OP quoted one of his players, "power was a terrific aphrodisiac"

    And why shouldn't it be? Try to use an argument that doesn't come down to "you are applying the thoughts of an individual to an entire side of the species." We've been over that and any reasonable person agrees that is dumb

    Me thinks you should try to not get insulted just for the sake of being insulted
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:29 No.13577043
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    "Sir, what makes a person evil?"

    The young Paladin-in-training looked towards his master. The boy was resting on a log and sipping some water from a simple wooden cup.

    His master looked up from the codex he was reading. The man was old and wrinkled, but like an empty bag.

    "That is a matter of some debate, even within our own order. Some men suppose that there people born innately evil. But I'm not so sure. If a 'person' is anything, they are the sum of their experiences. I suspect that it is the sum of every ordeal in your life that decides who you are."

    The boy was fascinated by his master's words, "So it would be possible to train someone to be evil? If someone was raised from a young enough age, hypothetically you could control who they became?"

    "Yes," the master's face didn't show any emotion, "Come now, we're done resting."

    This master had always sensed that his pupil had some evil inside him, but he never would have guessed the depths of depravity that he would eventually sink to...
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:32 No.13577067
    Hey, I'll admit it. Power is sexy. Like my dad says "I could learn to love a rich man".
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:38 No.13577105
    Don't stop. dear god don't stop.
    >> Richard Motion 01/19/11(Wed)02:43 No.13577144

    She might be maniacal about always being in control, but once she met someone else who was indubitably her better she'd bow her head. It's how women work, especially 'evil' women.
    >> No Man 01/19/11(Wed)02:45 No.13577160
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    Know what, I'm going to stop this all right here with a prediction.

    Blackguard wins. At great cost, he now has everything he ever wanted. Weakened greatly, the girl kills him.

    His last words are 'Daughter, I am proud.'

    >mfw nothing went off-plan.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:50 No.13577196
    Lawful Evil characters respect power. The power to rule. They are social darwinists.

    So a LE Blackguard finding one stronger than them, they would submit to that higher power.

    UNLESS, they believed that "higher power" was in fact "wrong".

    An example of this would be a lawful evil character, who would willingly go against the government. Yes the government is the law, but said is falling apart, there must be a new government, and thus would participate in a revolution, overthrowing the old law.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:52 No.13577209
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    Lily wanted to die.

    Without warning one day, the Blackguard announced that he had an idea. He had then tied her up and gagged her. Then, in front of her, he packed up all his belongings and left. And so she was alone in the wilderness.

    It had been almost a week now. Her agony was unimaginable.

    The pain she felt was diverse and constant. The first pain was a mild ache in her wrists, ankles, neck; anywhere where she was tied up. The next was the slow pangs of hunger and thirst. Then came a wetness at her thighs and buttocks. She had held in her toiletry needs for as long as she could. When she finally relieved herself the initial humiliation was quickly overcome by intense itching, stinging, and discomfort that soon followed.

    And in the days that followed, it got infinitely worse.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:53 No.13577226
    Maybe I should delete these and post in a new thread?

    I feel kind of bad for derailing a discussion.
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)02:56 No.13577243
    please do, this writefaggotry please me greatly.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:02 No.13577279
    She could also use sex as a way of gaining some sort of power, even if it is just in her own mind.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:07 No.13577317
    please, this is /tg/

    its what we do, fuckit cant find pic
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:14 No.13577357
    By the end, her skin was beat red from the sun and pus-filled sores had formed all across her inner thighs. Flies and vermin swarmed all over her body and stung her relentlessly. The pain in her throat and stomach had calmed to a dull, constant throbbing. Her mouth was so dry that it hurt to move her tongue.

    Lily didn't know what to do for a long time. At first she cried and thought only of the pain. She even harbored ideas of escaping, but those plans were soon abandoned as her thin wrists became lacerated every time she moved. She tried praying for help, but no gods ever came. Eventually she decided that the best thing to do was to close her eyes and try to think of something else.

    She started imagining her family and her village. She thought of all the great cities and mountains and creatures that wandering travelers had told her about. She dreamed about what she wanted most out of life: to be a good wife, with a husband that cherished her, and children who loved her. But she knew she'd never see any of those things though, so she stopped thinking about them. They just made her sad.

    So she just thought of simple things like grass and rocks, and focused all her attention on those things. And she waited to die.

    "Good morning Lily" a familiar voice said, "I brought you a friend."
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:14 No.13577362
    Sorry, I won't be awake for long enough to warrant an entire new thread.

    But I should be able to finish this episode.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:16 No.13577372
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    >mfw every poast
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:17 No.13577381

    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:20 No.13577391
    >implying the paladin would be remotely attracted to her
    Blackguards are *disgusting* man. You don't get called that just because you wear black, but because you're as actively evil as a paladin is actively good. Paladins wouldn't touch that with a ten-foot holy avenger.

    There will be in a rejection, or more likely in frustration because the relationship couldn't even go that far. And scorned love can only make the blackguard worse. The resulting bitterness will turn the blackguard into the paladin's nemesis, only this time it's personal - going after the paladin's loved ones, or worse.

    It'll all end in a climactic duel to the death, where the winner, whoever he is, will still be a broken human being.
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:21 No.13577394
    Can't you take this guroshit elsewhere?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:28 No.13577442
    spite bump for Malal
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:28 No.13577443
    Fuck off, this shit is right where it belongs.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:31 No.13577467
    I'm sorry there isn't a specific board for your loli-scat stories, but /tg/ shouldn't be the place.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:37 No.13577492
    The woman moved the wet towel across Lily's body. She leaned in close and smiled warmly.

    "Don't worry, okay?"

    She was named Bafty, or at least that was the name the Blackguard had given her. Lily wasn't sure how their "Master" had kidnapped her, but she had enough tact not to ask. If it was anything like how he had taken Lily, it must have been very hurtful to think about.

    Bafty was nursing Lily back to health after her ordeal. She was very gentle and always smiled. She was a human with dark brown hair, which she wore tied behind her in a ponytail. She loved to converse with Lily, and didn't talk down to her like a child.

    In the days after she arrived things got much better. Lily recovered quickly, and Bafty followed all the orders that the Blackguard gave her. Most of the daily chores around their tent were taken up by Bafty, including the regrettable nighttime ones. Lily would sit outside the tent and cover her ears. Lily often asked her why she didn't resist, and she said that it would be easier this way. One day they would escape, Bafty told her, but that could never happen unless they played along for now.
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:43 No.13577524

    You're now aware that the Arch-devil Baalzebul has two consorts named Lilith and Baftis.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)03:54 No.13577584

    wow spoilers thanks

    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:00 No.13577628
    The Blackguard continued to lead them deeper into the forest, with no apparent destination in mind. His only concern seemed to be getting as far away from civilization as possible.

    Bafty would comfort Lily whenever they had time alone. Lily confided in her how much she regretted not dying with her family; how disgusted she was with herself for following the Blackguard's orders; how she helt that she was ruined for life, and no boy would ever marry her now. But Bafty told her it would be alright. And Lily learned to hold back her tears.

    For the most part, the Blackguard tolerated this relationship, although Lily didn't know why. He seemed more lenient all of a sudden, and rarely beat either of them. But Bafty continued to secretly plan their escape. One day, when they were alone, they would split their supplies and head in separate directions.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:01 No.13577630
    Dammit I know Bad End is incoming and the suspense is KILLING ME.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:13 No.13577685

    It's an unapplicable philosophy in real-world application. The criteria for "power" isn't defined in real terms. Success or defeat isn't measure in actual power but in stratedgic application of power and uses of advantages.

    For example, your party defeats a BBEG. Were you stronger than him? Statistically no. Was your team collectively stronger? Probably not. But he's dead and you're alive. You beat him using teamwork, skills, and effective support. You didn't out muscle him or out fireball him you simply killed him before he killed you... And still no ass from your blackguard.

    Power can only goes as far as survivability.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:16 No.13577705
    One day, Bafty and Lily were cooking some food in the fireplace. Out of nowhere, the Blackguard left the tent and tossed a small bag onto the ground.

    "Right, you can leave."

    The expression on Bafty's face changed immediately, "It's about time."

    She opened the bag and began counting the gold coins inside. While still counting, she strolled towards the tent. Lily looked up from the steaming pot of soup, not understanding.

    The Blackguard smiled slightly, "Lily, let me introduce you to Greta."

    He waved towards the tent. Inside, the woman who Lily knew as Bafty was gathering up various items.

    Lily looked back and forth, confused, "Um... I don't..."

    "She's a whore."

    Greta turned around and glared at the Blackguard.

    "Well," he added, "she has a few talents, but the main one's still whoring. I paid her to come out here."

    Lily shrunk down, "O... okay... what does this mean?"
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:24 No.13577773

    I see where this is going. And I like it. You evil motherfucker.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:26 No.13577779
    Iiiii was expecting bloody death. Now I am uncertain...

    Also dammit I need to sleep and this is the one reason I am staying up!
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:28 No.13577790
    The Blackguard rolled his eyes, "She never liked you. How could anyone like you? Now say goodbye to her."

    Greta walked out of the tent carrying a bag filled with clothes and a few old weapons. She looked at the Blackguard and pointed, "Bye the way, I'm a actress, not a whore."

    Lily started shaking and couldn't look away from the woman in front of her, "B... Bafty?"

    The woman grimaced and in one swift move kicked Lily in the chest, "You're disgusting, you know that? All you do is moan and whine like a weak little cunt."

    Greta leaned over and spit in Lily's face. Lily's eyes were watering and she was wheezing and she breathed.

    The Blackguard looked down at Lily and smiled, "You are so lucky, you know that?" He unsheathed his sword.
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    I was expecting him to make them fight to the death too. Rinse repeat until Lily never trusts anyone etc. This is unexpected and therefore awesome
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:37 No.13577853
    I have a question: Did he rape her? It seems like he did, but it's not explicitly stated to my knowledge. :X just wondering, because she seems kind of young. I know he, er, 'raped' whatsername though.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:38 No.13577854

    You sick fuck.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:41 No.13577864
    "regretable nightly chores"

    yes, though the writefag was decent enough to imply a fade to black
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    waitwait im not sick I was just wondering! I don't WANT him to D:

    It said she was 'supposed to be chaste' and I was like WHAT. D:
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:44 No.13577874

    Read again. "Bafty" took care of those.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:45 No.13577879
    What about the weeks beforehand?
    >> Green-ranger !!rEkSWzi2+mz 01/19/11(Wed)04:46 No.13577881
    Ops picture will now remind me of lilly the backdoored blackguards.

    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:46 No.13577884
    The Blackguard held Greta down against the cold ground. Greta's eyes bulged from her bloodied face, "Stop it! Please!"

    Lily's Master looked over to the little girl, who was breathing frantically. He tossed a tiny black knife over to her, the same one she'd used to kill her sister.

    "Do it Lily," he said.

    "No..." Lily's eyes were dry but her voice was crying, "please don't make me do this..."

    The Blackguard sneered, "Lily, you don't have a choice. Do it!"

    For a moment, Lily didn't move. She looked into Bafty's ferocious eyes and calmed her breathing. Her thin fingers wrapped around the blade, and with a sudden jerk she raised it to her neck.

    The Blackguard's eye's widened.

    "Promise me!" Lily gritted her teeth, "if... if I do this, if I kill her, then you let me go!"
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:47 No.13577887

    >Most of the daily chores around their tent were taken up by Bafty, including the regrettable nighttime ones

    I think it's implying she had to do it before Bafty showed up.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:52 No.13577915

    Reading Comprehension again.. Lily was tied up in a forest after being "adopted" by the Blackguard.

    Nowhere in there does it imply rape. Also "Bafty" was there immediately when Lily woke up. This implies that from the time Lily was no longer tied to a tree "Bafty" has been around. And the story implicitly states the Blackguard had been gone until then.

    tl;dr NO. You pedo.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:54 No.13577928

    ...keep going
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:55 No.13577929
    No, they spent some time before hand moving through the forest before she was tied up. But whatever. I'm reading under the assumption she's already been raped.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:55 No.13577932

    No, if you read the OTHER thread it goes like this,

    >Lily adopted
    >Taken out to woods
    >Told to go hunt- she is NAKED, then thinks something about how she should be 'chaste' and therefore resists the Blackguard's 'orders.'
    >Bafty 'takes over' the 'chores' including the 'nighttime' ones.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:56 No.13577934
    ...I wouldn't be throwing around reading comprehension if I were you. She was chopping wood at one point, and had time alone with Mr. Black.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)04:56 No.13577936
    Let's just say this isn't the first story Lily has shown up in.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:01 No.13577960
    The Blackguard's face calmed and he knelt there in silence for a long time.

    "I can promise you this: if you kill her, then I won't hurt you unless you try to escape."

    Lily's face pinched up in rage, "No! That's not good enough!"

    "If I let you leave," he said "then you're as good as dead to me. So go ahead and kill yourself."

    She held her breath. The wind was cold.

    "I thought so." The Blackguard looked her directly in the eye, "Do this for me, and I won't punish you for not following my orders. I won't ever lay a finger on you unless you try to leave. That's the best I can offer you."

    Lily wasn't in the clearest state of mind, but she knew that for some reason this man wouldn't let her leave. Without saying a word, she nodded and crawled over to Greta.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:03 No.13577974
    Look here, guys.

    Lily is a sweet girl, why it matter if she's had the sexes?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:04 No.13577980

    Yeaaahh.. It was only when I went back and read the first post of Lily in the thread that I saw the archive link.

    I was like: "...Oh. Damn."
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:06 No.13577994
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    Awww Mr. Black really is a big softy deep down, isn't he? :3
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:06 No.13577999

    >> WriterWolf !!0ACE4+wqD7A 01/19/11(Wed)05:07 No.13578003
    Christ... /tg/, I think you've found yourself the new Blackguard mascot... once she grows up...
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:08 No.13578018
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    >> WriterWolf !!0ACE4+wqD7A 01/19/11(Wed)05:13 No.13578051
    That would be awesome... and fucked up...
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:16 No.13578078
    Greta closed her eyes and thrashed around, "No! No no no no! Stay away from me! Cunt! Slut! Murderer! I curse you! I curse your mother! May her corpse be raped by all the demons of the abyss! Die die die!"

    Lily closed off her mind, and didn't even hear her insults. She pushed the knife into Greta's abdomen. It was tough, and she had to lean into it before the blade sunk in with a wet slap.


    The Blackguard nodded, "That's not enough. Again,"

    Lily yanked the knife out and drove it into her side.


    A crunching snap.


    A low groan.

    Lily had to continue stabbing for many minutes. It takes a long time to kill someone with a tiny knife to the stomach. She didn't think of anything. She felt more like a machine than a person. By the time she was done, her fists were just digging into a soupy mess and she was caked in blood.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:21 No.13578111

    Hey, make her a chocolate elf.
    Chocolate Black Guard Chan.

    Imagining that..
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:22 No.13578119

    Captcha: Secoatoo funds, Wow captcha I didn't know you liked writefaggotry so.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:22 No.13578120
    Wait... why didn't she just slit her throat like she did her family?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:23 No.13578129
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:23 No.13578133

    They do say fear is the mind-killer.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:23 No.13578135

    Cuz the bitch had it coming.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:28 No.13578172
    >ITT Refugees from /r9k/

    We don't want your kind around these parts.
    >> WriterWolf !!0ACE4+wqD7A 01/19/11(Wed)05:30 No.13578184
    We've got a cute little girl who's being forced to kill people, and you guys cheer her on? I don't know why I'm saying this... but never change, /tg/... never change...
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:30 No.13578187
    Her master stood up and walked behind her, "What did you learn from this?"

    Lily continued to stare at the reddish brown muck.

    He spoke again, "If I have to explain it, then you haven't really learned anything."

    Lily slowly looked up towards her master. She had completely forgotten how she was supposed to feel right now. If she felt anything, it was just emptiness. The Blackguard sighed slightly and knelt down in front of her.

    "All things are impermanent, Lily. Everyone suffers. Everyone dies. You need to embrace that."

    He pulled out a handkerchief and held it out for Lily, She slowly took it, and began to wipe the blood from her face.

    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:31 No.13578190

    Well it's better than being a doormat, right?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:33 No.13578201
    She fears death. Despite what she says and thinks sometimes, she really wants to live at all costs.
    >> WriterWolf !!0ACE4+wqD7A 01/19/11(Wed)05:33 No.13578202
    Yey! Once again, good job anon writefag!

    Someday, you're probably going to have enough entries to make a freakin book.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:34 No.13578214
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    By the way, I've been trying to get a drawfag to make a picture of Lily, but no luck yet.

    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:35 No.13578218

    Hell yes it is.
    You know all those sexy chocolate elf pictures floating around?
    That would basically be Black guard Chan after you beat her like OP's original post.
    But, you dominate her, Chocolate elf slave!
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:36 No.13578228
    >Do you guys think there is any truth to this?

    >Countless faiths, all with a different attitude, but if they're female, they hunger for the juice of the cock exclusively.

    I dunno. You tell me.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:39 No.13578245

    Why not use >>13574563 ? For adult version anyway... shouldn't be too hard to find a cute little girlelf. :/
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:41 No.13578264
    Allow me to connect OP's post and this Lily stuff:

    I suspect that thanks to Lily's (supposed) constant brutal rapings she will be the one female Blackguard who is uninterested in sex.

    But she will probably be interested in weird S&M stuff.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:42 No.13578268

    who the fuck is lily?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:43 No.13578270

    Yay, Chocolate Elf slave who likes being tortured.
    Still, what could possibly go wrong?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:44 No.13578281

    Also in the future she will burn down a house full of children. Why? Because she can.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:45 No.13578282
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:47 No.13578287
    Thanks for the story OP, looking forward to the next chapter. Keep archiving them under the "Blackguard's Daughter" name please? Thanks
    >> Green-ranger !!rEkSWzi2+mz 01/19/11(Wed)05:47 No.13578288
    >Yay, Chocolate Elf slave who likes being tortured.

    I imagine she'll be a like raidy, except with derision towards sex rather than naivety.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:47 No.13578289
    Fuck yes. I almost don't feel bad about suffering insomnia right now.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:48 No.13578298
    Pictures of Lily made my life so wonderful
    Pictures of Lily helped me sleep at night
    Pictures of Lily solved my childhood problems
    Pictures of Lily helped me feel alright
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:48 No.13578303
    Oh, author guy here.

    I'm going to bed, sorry. Other people can add if they want. I wasn't the original author in the first thread, for example.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:52 No.13578323
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    Ok you just blew my fucking mind.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:52 No.13578326
    Someone needs to archive this shit.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:53 No.13578330
    the story of lily makes me giggle.

    haven't ever tried to make an anti paladin, myself, but am now willing to try.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:55 No.13578342

    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:57 No.13578355
    I just had a great idea! See, if we ever did end up with enough entries to write a book, we merge all the entries together, send them to a publishing company, and because we can't really share the profits (because of the status of the writers so far as anonymous, plus how hard that would be anyways), we request that the profits be donated to a charity to end child abuse!
    Can't you just TASTE the irony?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)05:59 No.13578370

    Honestly, that would be very cool. A story that shows, from beggining to end how bad child abuse is and that the abused can later become the abuser with all funds to a charity to stop child abuse. I'd buy a copy.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:00 No.13578378
    It would never be published.

    Nice idea, though.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:01 No.13578384
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    Wow, that's.. actually a good idea. Maybe have the whole thing compiled and cleaned up by one author, but follow the story of the multiple posters. That way dialogue and characterisation stays consistent.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:02 No.13578388
    You don't know that. Remember the pedophile's guide that popped up on Amazon? If a company can publish THAT...
    >> Espagnoll 01/19/11(Wed)06:02 No.13578390
    I don't like evil bitches, I preffer cute and nice feminine lawful good paladins.
    I mean, who the hell is going to feel some interest towards a woman who can overpower you in bed, haves friendly relations with demons and devils and also could cutthroat you because you don't bought her a Carolina Herrera perfume?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:03 No.13578399
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:04 No.13578403

    I kid. We'd have to go to some morally corrupt country to even PRODUCE that.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:05 No.13578410

    It'd have to be animu, and up her age to 14.
    >> Newbie 01/19/11(Wed)06:08 No.13578428
    ask Uwe Boll...
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:12 No.13578443
    That's not why it wouldn't be published.

    I've known some authors, published and aspiring. Being published is hard. Let's leave it at that, 'cause it's 6am here.
    >> Yet Another Writefag 01/19/11(Wed)06:16 No.13578466
    "What did you do to this girl? Why are YOU keeping her by your side? Why doesn't she speak?"
    "It is none of your problem."
    "Hell, yes, it is. We recruited you because you were good at what you do, and by that I mean the other thing you do besides enjoying little girls."
    The man coated in black garment looked at the commander of the expedition without moving. His hand hovered towards his side, yet his face remained composed.
    She didn't answer, but he knew every word of his reached her. He made sure of that.
    "I want you to go to our tent. Don't worry, I'll be there in a few. Pack your things. Maybe we'll be going tonight."
    He locked his gaze to her while she was still in sight, then turned back to the richly armored man.
    "Do you know why she feels more secure by my side than everywhere else in the camp, even though I am who I am?"
    "She saw what you did with the goblin entranchment."
    "How does it speak of you, my lord, how does it speak of you, I wonder. I'll be going now, I'll collect my fee before leaving you gentlemen amongts civilized people, and the girl will be coming with me."
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:18 No.13578474
    wait, with the whore gone, that means that Lily is on sate the blackguard's lust duty, right?

    could be interesting, you know, now that she's all empty inside, what kinda perversely erotic things he'd try to get an actual response out of her. mocking her with tenderness and affection, perhaps... hmmm.
    >> Yet Another Writefag 01/19/11(Wed)06:19 No.13578478
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:40 No.13578580
    From what I've read he hasn't touched her sexually, he's beat her but only to get her to submit.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:41 No.13578589
    It has little do deal with lust.
    The act is performed for the effect is will have on Lily's development into perfection.
    The Blackguard clearly displays enough self-control that he would not act on simple lust
    >> Amateur Writefag Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)06:53 No.13578628
    Trying to bang out some quick writing before I go to bed. Almost done.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)07:03 No.13578683
    previous thread, towards the end, one authorfag mentions her having been raised to be chaste and what not and having that spoiled by the blackguard. dreams of marrying and having a family completely spoiled.

    not saying it has to be now, anyway. just... at some point, when she's feeling all secure, just bring it up. Remember that time you thought someone cared for you, yeah...
    >> another writefag 01/19/11(Wed)07:19 No.13578752
    Not this guy >>13578628

    Jumping forward a bit, and writing from and outside perspective

    She looked like a fucking child, but the Blackguard claimed she’d look that way 5 years ago when started training her near a decade before.
    Fucking elves; who knows how old she was. At least she didn’t have one of impossible names like others of her kind. Lily she was; nice and simple.
    Anyways, the little bint scared the shit out of me, almost as much as the Black bastard himself. Neigh, more than him. His type I’d met before, I could understand them. Brutal bastards dedicated to a god as black as his heart. At least he was one the calm effective ones, got the job done quick and clean and didn’t go nuts and decide to kill the whole gang because he slept funny.
    Not that he wasn’t dangerous, hell his types far more dangerous if you get on their bad side. But at least you know where that side is, and if you’re a smart cuv like meself you can stay well away from it
    >> another writefag 01/19/11(Wed)07:20 No.13578756
    Yeah, yeah, you want to hear about the girl. Right, so she scared me good and fierce and I don’t mind saying it. Maybe heard ten words out of her the whole campaign, she just stood there watching and listening.
    Dead eyes? What the fuck you mean by that. No, her eyes were alive and sharp as an adder’s fang. Look at you like a fucking wolf she did, sizing you up, seeing where’s you strong, where’s you weak. Seen eyes like that on and assassin a worked a job with a few years back, but his like the fires that burnt behind hers. Couldn’t tell you that made ‘em better or worse.
    Only one she didn’t look at like that was the Blackguard. There was fear in that look, fear I never saw her show even when the Orcs had us pinned down ten to one with forest on fire behind us. What’s it take to put fear into a heart like that? I don’t know, she looked at him with the fear of a child, and maybe the love of one too.
    >> another writefag 01/19/11(Wed)07:21 No.13578769
    I know that look. I couldn’t explain it, but there was something there in the way she followed his every move, and hung on his every command. Your don’t obey like that just from fear, I would know. Call it love, call it worship, call it what you will, it was there. Fear, and love, and hate.
    Fear and love only for him, but hate for everything.
    Buy me another round, but I’ll say no more about that one. You’ll hear more about her soon enough, believe you me.
    >> Amateur Writefag 01/19/11(Wed)07:24 No.13578787
    That actually ties in nicely with what I just wrote

    Pushing her way through the brush, Lily swiped at the hair that dangled in front of her eyes. She would have to do something about her hair, it was becomming bothersomely long now that Master had ceased to yank on it when she disobeyed. Perhaps her knife would be able to solve that problem. Her hand moved down to brush the leather sheath hanging at her side. It was the first thing the man who insisted on being called Master had given to her. While she no longer felt anything that could be called by such sentimental names as fondness or comfort, she did often find her fingers tracing the patterns on the black leather in moments when her attention wanderend. There had been many such moments of late.

    Her other hand kept a firm grip on the torn fabric of the heavy bundle she dragged behind her. The furrow it left in the dirt stretched out of sight behind her, a testimony to the distance she had covered in the hours she had been walking. Her stomache rumbled at her, but Lily had little use for such sensations anymore. Ever since her time in isolation, small distractions like hunger or discomfort had lost their hold on her. She knew she was days away from actually needing food, and so the complaints of her stomache were promptly ignored.
    >> Amateur Writefag 01/19/11(Wed)07:25 No.13578791
    Trudging onward, she finally came to the clearing she knew she would find. A large pit marred the center of the even ground, and gazing down into it even the late afternoon sun could reveal no bottom. She had been here a few times before, following Master's instructions. He had given no explanation for the existence of the ragged gash in the landscape, mearly instructed her on how it could be of use. Glancing down at the bundle that lay behind her, Lily noticed a section of the tattered cloth had been disturbed, allowing a pale arm to flop out and drag beside the mass, leaving a slightly smaller furrow where it skimmed the ground. She bent down to tuck it back in, then stopped as she realized the pointlessness of such an act. The flesh was dead. It would not appreciate her actions. Standing back up, Lily proceeded to drag the body to the edge of the crevasse, and with a kick rolled it in. She watched as it disappeared into the darkness below, falling out of the sunlight where no one would ever find it. She knew not to expect a thump, having never heard one the three times previously she had been tasked with disposing of such burdens here.

    Raising her gaze from the depths, she gave no sign of surprise or recognition to see her master standing across from her, perched on the opposite lip of the massive hole. His gauntletted hands rested on his hips as he watched her straighten and return his stare.
    >> Amateur Writefag 01/19/11(Wed)07:25 No.13578795
    "You're late." Was the first thing out of his mouth, his words covering the gap of the chasm and pouring into her ears. "I told you it should take a day and a half to cross that section of the forest. It's nearly sunset. You know I won't stand for that sort of tardiness. Time is a resource just as valuable as any other. And there is no excuse for waste."
    She gave no sign that she had heard, but he knew all that she was, and seemed to know how her mind worked better than she herself did. Her eyes flickering to the pit between was all he needed to ascertain that her thoughts were on the bundle she had just finished disposing of.
    "You consider that a waste? Ohh Lily." His voice seemed to soften for a moment, and with it some of the hardness left her eyes. Lily was left for a moment looking less of a soulless automaton and more of a small animal, hoping for some small praise from its master.
    "My girl, you must understand the difference between resources wasted and those spent properly. When the right moment arrives, you must be willing to use what you have, to expend the assets you have carefully gathered, and make the leap to gain more. This particular asset had been expended, and its termination guaranteed further benefit. Now. You look filthy, and I can't have you accompanying me among civilized beings like that. There's a stream 200 yards that way, you will wash yourself and have a fire started in a suitable location before dark."

    Without a further word the dark figure strode into the trees. As he vanished from view Lily turned toward her new task. Yet even after he was gone, somehow Lily knew that his eyes still followed her. And despite how long it had been since she even remembered how to feel such things, somewhere deep inside, this knowledge brought her warmth.
    >> another writefag 01/19/11(Wed)07:26 No.13578803
    >She looked like a fucking child, but the Blackguard claimed she’d look that way 5 years ago when started training her near a decade before.
    show me for not rereading my work. Drop "5 years ago"
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)07:36 No.13578871
    I love the idea of her aging more slowly. Imagine her coming into her new role in a younger age, beginning to learn some of the lessons Mr. Black is teaching her and applying them at his side. All while in the body of an immature elf girl.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)07:41 No.13578897
    Prompt: A female blackguard enters a ragelationship with Mr.Black.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)07:48 No.13578939
    ITT: elf slave wat do

    But with more slowly shaping her into the face of Evil for the thousands of years to come.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)07:54 No.13578969
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    Female Blackguard you say? In the pre-sticky days of Ye Olde /tg/ I rolled Sudden Death mode and Black Guard on this chart and and made a bit of writefaggotry.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)07:57 No.13578986
    Scalrick looked at the men surrounding him. Like him, they were chained up on a wagon, wearing next to nothing. Everyone of them had an athletic build, a pretty face and was covered in flowers. Next to them on the wagon were untold riches. Great flagons of gold, gem encrusted pieces of finest armor, carved statues of shining black dragonbone. The cart was pulled by four huge oxen and led by a few orcish warriors who talked among themselves in their guttural language. From time to time they cast sneering glances at the men on the cart and laughed. While the cart was dragged through the warcamp Scalrick made out numerous different factions who seemed to remain among themselves. The orcish section of the camp was huge, almost as big as the part that belonged to the Necromancer Lords of the city of Gorast. The orcish guards grew a bit nervous as they entered the Gorastian warcamp. The few living men and women Scalrick could see from the cart wore black robes and directed troops of armoured skeletons and zombies into precise military formations.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)07:58 No.13578994

    One such a group approached the cart, shielding a robed man in their midst.
    "Well, well." he called out to the group. "What do we have here? Some greenskinned savages that want to join the glorious forces of Gorast? And such fine exemplars, you would make good warriors..."
    "Out of way, corpselover!" the biggest of the orcs shouted. "We bear gift from city for great Morven!"
    "Is that so?" the Necromancer seemed thoughtful. "As far as I know no such gift is expected from the city we are about to besiege. So what keeps me from killing all of you and raising your bodies for the Gorastian cause, while keeping these gifts for myself?"
    "Morven smart! She`ll find out and you be sorry!"
    "Indeed, you have a point there, my dimwitted friend. She is very smart and I would be very sorry." The Necromancer gestured and his troops moved aside. "On then, and bring my best regards to the Lady Morven."
    The orc just grunted iritated into the mans general direction and got the cart moving again.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:01 No.13579008

    While slowly climbing towards the top of a hill they passed the campfires of a tribe of Ogres, a group of Gorgons practicing with powerful dragonbone bows and discussing strategy with a man in black full plate, and a summoning circle where demonologists summoned and bound demons. As they neared the top of the hill Scalrick could see the gilded towers of the city he called home. He asked himself if they would still be there tomorrow. On top of the hill there was a large tent with a massive table in front of it. There were guards in heavy black platemail and around the table a number of important looking figures were assembled, seemingly planning the movement of troops on a large map. Between a massive Hobgoblin with a scared face, a Gorastian Necromancer in pompous robes and a Gorgon covered in golden trinkets from head to tail stood a woman that was almost seven feet tall. She wore a heavily adorned black plate and a flying red cape that gave her a lordly appearance. She wore no helmet and when she aproached the wagon Scalrick could see shoulderlong silver hair and a face that was both beautyful and coldly aloof. The orcs quickly sank to their knees.
    "Report." Her voice was like sweet music and an icy chill combined and commanded imediate attention.
    "Great Morven! We bear gifts and message from city-people! They want peace!"
    The leading orc offered a scroll to the woman. She took it from his hand, dismissed the orcs with an absentminded gesture, broke the seal and read the message. The hint of a smile twisted the corners of her mouth.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:03 No.13579028

    "Calistra! Bring feather and ink!"
    From the shadows of the tent emerged a scantly clad woman, with her eyes cast down, bearing the writing utensils her misstress had called for.
    "Write down what I tell you. High Lords of the City of Aubairne. I received your most genorous gifts. While I always appreciate gold and slaves, your city is of key strategical value to my further plans and so I can not afford to leave it behind untouched. But I see your will to be reasonable about this matter and so I hereby make you an offer to resolve the situation with as little bloodshed as possible. Tomorrow my troops will move against your city. We demand your gates to be open and your troops to be disarmed. Furthermore we demand the following people delivered to us this very night: Lord August of the House Hatorn, Marshal Fentick Eltir of the Aubairne Army, the High Bishop Alacartus of the Temple of Sol, Lady Elisabeth Thorne, High Comander of the Eyes of Aubairne and Baron Tolward of Highcastle, who hides behind your walls. If you comply to these demands, no citizen of Aubairne will be harmed, as long as he or she doesn`t take up arms against the forces of the Crusade. Excluded from this offer are the temples of Aubairne and their clergy, members and servants of the high house Hatorn, and those who serve the Eyes of Aubairne. If you fail to comply, your city will be sacked and all its citizens will either be killed or sold into slavery. I hope you see reason, for your own sake and the sake of your people. With highest regards, Morven, Chosen of Bhaal."
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:10 No.13579060
    While the Hobgoblins features were twisted with a cruel smile and the Gorgons face was alien and unreadable, the Necromancer looked outraged.
    "Lady Morven, this is unacceptable! What if they give in? We can not allow Gorasts most ancient enemies to persist!"
    The womans face was cold when she turned. "While the Magister-Lord speaks for the mighty High Council of Gorast, he should not forget that I speak with the voice of Bhaal. Does he doubt His judgement?"
    There was a short moment of tension, the Necromancers face pale with supressed rage. Then he bowed his head. "Of course not, Chosen One."
    "Good. This meeting is dismissed."
    The group disassembled. The armored woman ordered some of her servants to take care of the goods on the cart. Then she mustered the men chained up on the cart. There were four of them.
    "Hmm, what to make of you... All of you are fine exemplars, but I don`t actually need the service of more than one of you."
    Scalrick tried not to draw any attention to himself and just looked down to the floor when she stepped up to man chained up next to him and lifted his head so that he would face her. The man was shaking uncontrolably.
    "Awww, such a pretty face, but I have no taste for cowards." She gestured to the guards. "Give him as a present to the Gorgons. I heard they like it when their playthings squirm before they die."
    The man was dragged off screaming.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:13 No.13579086
    She stepped further to the next man who looked up at her defiantly.
    "There is much more fire in you, I can see that. But you don`t have the attitude of a slave. Which reminds me, as far as I know the feeble gods of your city don`t look favourably on slavery. So I ask myself, what kind of people did the High Lords send to appease me?"
    The man spat. "If you must know, they took us from prison. Men who were codemned anyway. But don`t get the wrong idea, just because I was a criminal doesn`t mean I have no morals. I`d rather die then serve the bitch of the tyrant god!"
    "I see."
    There was no emotion on her face as she raised her hand. A storm of red lightning cascade over the man in front of her and slowly peeled away his skin, causing the man to flail and scream in unbelivable agony. When she stoped, the face and body of the man was a red, smoking ruin, but he was still alive, moaning and moving weakly.
    "As you can see I don`t take well to insolence. Throw him to the worgs."
    As the guards dragged the man away, the woman turned her attention to Scalrick and the other man that was left.
    "That leaves you two. It appears both of you are still in full control over your bladders and also know when to hold you tongues. But how should we disolve this dilema? Maybe a fight to the death?" She smiled cruely.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:16 No.13579109
    Provoking no imediate reaction from neither Scalrick nor the other man she seemed pleased. "Ah, but I am not looking for a bodyguard, am I? I think I know a quicker and less wasteful solution. Remove those flowery things they are wearing."
    The female servant who had written down the message to the lords of Aubairne stepped up and followed the order given to her, exposing the mens genitals.
    "Hmmm, I think we have a winner." She turned to the man next to Scalrick and for a moment his heart sunk.
    "But don`t worry. It is not your fault you are not as well endowed as your friend over there. And so I will put you to use and not just discard you."
    She turned to her guards. "Put him to work in the baggage train. And give him something to cover himself after you have branded him."
    Then she walked up to Scalrick. He felt how his chains losened. "Rise."
    Her voice was still sweet, cold and commanding. Scalrick rose to his feet, stretching his aching muscles. The woman called Morven was more than a head taller than him.
    "What is your name?"
    "Scalrick." he answered, his voice even and calm.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:19 No.13579126

    "Then know this, Scalrick. Even if you are slave now, you are still in control of you own fate. Serve me well, please me and you shall prosper. Disobey or displease me and you shall suffer. Try to flee or attack me and you shall die. Slowly. Do you understand?"
    "Yes, mistress."
    Morven looked pleased. "Then it is time to go to my tent."
    The inside of the tent was spacious and luxurious. Racks for armor and weapons filled most of the first room which was seperated by curtains of satin.
    "Scalrick, help Calistra removing my armor."
    The female servant worked quick and precisely and Scalrick did his best to match her speed and skill, removing what seemed to be half a ton of blackened metal from the body of his new mistress. Underneath it was a well trained body, muscular but still feminine. With a body like this she would be able to easily overpower Scalrick if he should try anything on her.
    When the armor was removed from her body they moved on to another room that was dominated by luxurious devans and big plushy cushions. She moved her hand and the female servant removed the bands of clothing that had covered her body up to now. When she turned towards him, Scalrick couldn`t look away. She was really beautyful, her body like a work of art. Despite her muscular build her breasts were full and her hips entrancing. Naked as he was, Scalrick couldn`t hide his growing erection.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:22 No.13579141

    Morven smiled in satisfaction as she lay down on a devan. "Stay were you are and watch." she commanded. The servant, Calistra, had also removed her clothes. He had been so focused on Morven that hadn`t noticed it earlier. But while she lacked the stunning, inhuman beauty of Morven, she was still an attractive young woman. Now she dropped on her knees and buried her head between the tighs of her mistress. Morven closed her eyes and and let out a sigh of pleasure as her servants tongue started working on on her moist lower lips. Scalricks penis was now painfully errect at the sight before him, but he didn`t move and watched. Calistra started to work her tongue quicker and used two fingers to enter her mistress, who let out small cries of pleasure. After a few minutes the skillful maidservant had worked Morven to shuddering, breathtaking orgasm. When Morven opened her eyes she gestured at Scalrick. "Now I am ready for you."
    Scalrick stepped over to the devan, calm, even as his cock was throbbing with anticipation, showing no signs of haste. She lay before him, her legs spread, her juices flowing freely. Calistra was behind her, caressing her breasts and teasing her errect nipples. "Come on, do it, now!" she comanded. "I want to feel you in me!"
    He didn`t hesitate and entered her with a force he would have never used on a normal woman. She led out a loud moan of pleasure and then gripped him at the throat, strong like a bear.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:24 No.13579154

    "Don`t cum before me. I would be very displeased." she poured. "And now fuck me! Fuck me as hard as you can!"
    Scalrick was eager to follow that order. While he was not as powerfully built as Morven, he was still athletic and he pumped into her with a speed and stamina that matched. Using one hand to steady himself at her hip, he wetted the fingers of the other hand with his salvia and started to work on her clit. She reacted with cries of pleasure and soon with another mindnumbing orgasm, almost crushing his hips with her thighs. He didn`t stop and she didn`t complain, her screams of pleasure only growing louder and more enthusiastic. Even as he came and filled her with hot semen he still didn`t stop. He only concentrated more on every muscle in his body, slipping into a trance, while fucking her to two more orgasms that almost lasted a minute. Then, when she shuddered beneath him in her fourth orgasm, her hands tearing the silk from the devan in ecstasy, something in his mind connected. It was like clockworks suddenly gripping into each other. His mind filled with calm and clarity and cold energy flowed into his right hand. The thing that formed in his hand was like a shadow intensifying until it was a shard of pure blackness. Morvens eyes were closed and the maidservant had buried her head in her mistress silver hair. So he plunged the shard down unhindered and buried it deep between the womans breasts. Her eyes opened wide in pain and surprise and she cramped beneath him, a sudden croak emerging from her throat.
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    >She led out a loud moan of pleasure and then gripped him at the throat, strong like a bear.
    >gripped him at the throat, strong like a bear
    >like a bear
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:24 No.13579158
    OP: Science backs this up. In a medieval society women will always go for the most powerful or masculine, due to the biological need to be with someone who can possibly protect future children.

    Unlike in the modern world, where things are different. Though /tg/ seems to have been picked on by too many jocks or rejected by too many cheerleaders to see anything but stereotypical tropes.(Or they're from latin america)

    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:25 No.13579167

    Starteled from the sudden change of movements and sounds the servant raised her head. As she saw what was jutting out between her mistresses breasts, she gave away a starteled choke. Then she scrambled of the devan, darting out of the tent, screaming.
    Scalrick had his eyes fixed on the dying womans face. She stared back at him. "You... You have achieved nothing, Assassin." she whispered. "Your city will burn."
    "No." Scalrick answered calmly. "Without you to hold them together this army will be at each others throats in notime. They are leaderless and hate each other as much as their enemies."
    "You will... die..." she whispered with her last breath, hate strong in her voice.
    "I know." he answered. He closed his eyes, thinking about his mother and sisters back at the city and offered a quick prayer to Sol as the first sword plunged into his back.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:29 No.13579195

    Nice to see my choice of words made Heavy happy. But I`m curious, does my writing style show that I am not a native english speaker?
    >> Dantalaeon !!2TQS185pmIh 01/19/11(Wed)08:31 No.13579205

    You used the term "like a bear" in relation to a woman's performance in bed.

    You're from eastern Europe, aren't you?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:33 No.13579219
    Referring to a specific animal in such a situation is a faux pas. It would be more appropriate to say something like "she grabbed him with an animal strength" or something. Also beautiful not beautyful. I didn't notice you weren't native, however, because most native speakers are terrible at actual syntax and semantic organization.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:34 No.13579224
    Oh, sweet, another Blackguard's Daughter thread. Anyone mind if I post some OC?

    Fuck, someone beat me to the outside perspective shtick...

    ...amongst other things.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:34 No.13579228

    Germany. Don`t forget we are talking abut a seven feet tall musclegirl with the power of a dark god flowing through her veins.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:38 No.13579261
    Yes, well, bears are regarded as strong but also hairy, earthy, and manly. Bear-like strength is something one ascribes to a masculine figure rather than a feminine one, at least in America.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:40 No.13579272

    Kurt was a simple man. He likes his food hot, his coin silver (or gold, if he could get it), and his women on their knees.

    He smiled to himself, now, as he counted out his little cash box. It had been a good fortnight for the Red Rose; all and all a very tidy sum. Even with the expected “taxes” and “tips” that were sure to be collected by the city guard and the Questors left with more than enough to buy that new place in the middle district; maybe enough to hire on a classy new girl, too.

    His reverie was broken by a slight rap on the door. That would be the new girl, with dinner. It was too late for customers so he had given the rest of them leave to bed early. “Just a second, ya minx,” he called as he scooped the piles of coinage old and new into their proper wallets. Slowly, he got up out of his chair; and even then with a grunt. He stretched back to let his old spine get used to motion again, cursing the aches with a gruff cough.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:43 No.13579298

    Another grunt of effort saw him take a knee as his lumpy, calloused hand fumbled around the wooden planks, looking for that damn niche. With a satisfied burp he pried up the board and deposited his savings.

    Now came the hard part.

    A few more moments, accompanied by a choir of groans, wheezes and those damned back aches brought him to his feet once more. He would have to remember to have thing put into the wall if he got the new place; he was getting too old for this.

    “In!” he ordered as he through the latch open.

    There, more petit than ever standing there in the large doorframe she stood. A well shaped head reached just up to the doorknob, steaming raven-black hair down to her waist. She chewed her lip nervously; one of her few bad habits. Only her young age kept her in that little white gown in a profession that the city demanded at least a display of red; but that was part of her charm. Her eyes, large and experienced beyond her years went to the ground as she glided into the room making nary a sound.

    He smiled again, gazing in wonder as she carefully placed the tray on his desk. He fought the urge to drool as he eyed the shank of roast mutton, rich bread, and thick gravy; amongst other things.

    Wiping the grin from his visage he gave her a sharp flick to the head. “Ya forgot the ale, ya little idjit,” he chastened. She mumbled an apology as she flew from the room to fetch a mug and a jug. Of course she hadn’t forgotten; those skinny little arms could barely hold up the meal without piling up a heavy tankard on top, but it never hurt to keep the help in their place.

    Her surprising speed blew her hair back behind her and he caught a glimpse, just a glimpse, of a delicate, pointed ear. An elf ear. He felt himself stir, “and be quick about it!” he called through the empty door.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:44 No.13579305

    Ah, I understand, so its a cultural thing. Strong like an ox, strong like a horse or strong like a bear are common things to say if you describe someone with incredible strength in german.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:45 No.13579308

    What a fool that man was to sell her off so cheaply, he chuckled to himself as he sat back down with a satisfied wheeze. Thirty silvers for an elf, and a child at that! Fool. But that was why he wielded a sword instead of running a brothel; all brawn and no brains. Not like Kurt who had already made a killing off of that little investment. It had been well worth it to talk to that cold bastard after all.

    In the fortnight she had been at the Rose, little Lilly had become its number one attraction. He charged five silvers a go for her; or a whole gold piece for a night, and the people payed. Not many could pay that, of course, only the high-class kind that he needed to brown nose anyway. But every once and a while there was a lordling who would let a few peasants watch; as long as he got a cut of the coppers and a free meal.

    Sure, the other whores where testy as a paladin with a lit candle up his ass, jealously and all that, but a few angry cunts were hardly a worry when he had a gold mine like that little elf in his dubious employ.

    An elf girl, truly amazing. How that raggedy bastard had gotten a hold of her, Kurt couldn’t say, but he had robbed the right harem or had trained her well personally. Kurt could attest to that personally.

    His smile widened with the memories. Tonight he was going to treat himself. Tonight he was going to make some new memories.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:46 No.13579322

    One very satisfying meal latter and he was eager to fulfill an equally base hunger. He hardly noticed his aching back as he stood up once more. He turned, looking towards the bed where she sat legs together, arms resting on her tiny lap like a quiet kitten as he brushed mutton and gravy from his face with an already stained sleeve. She hadn’t made a peep while he ate, ‘cept for that apology when she almost spilled the ale while pouring.

    Her cheek was still a little pinkish where he had slapped her.

    “You know the drill, close the curtains and get under the covers,” he ordered while dousing the lantern sitting behind the now empty platter. The sound of fabric rustling told him that she had darkened the window and the little peep hole on the alley door. It was quite late and nobody would be digging around an alley in this cold anyway, but it never hurt play it safe.
    Unlike a certain few nobles he could name, Kurt liked his privacy.

    “Arright, now on the bed,” he grumbled while struggling to pull his woolen jerking over his head. Just as it began to crest his bald scalp another acute spike of pain shot up his back.

    “God be damned!” he cursed as he trough a hand back there to kneed out the ache, only to have it jerk back as a needle of ice punctured his finger.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:49 No.13579341

    Yep, we have those same expressions. It's not a bad similie, but bears are usually a masculine animal.

    We also have hung like a horse, cunning as a fox, eyes as sharp as a hawk, ears of a fox, speed of a hare, and the grace of a big cat. Off the top of my head.

    Is it true that there's a lot of Horse metaphors when it comes to expressions of military strength in European language?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:49 No.13579342

    “What in the blazed?” he mumbled as he wriggled his fingers in front of his face. It was too dark to see, but they felt… sticky… wet, somehow.

    “Lil, come ‘ere-“ he began as he turned back towards the center of the room. That slight twist drove daggers into his back and his old legs turned to water under him. With a load thud he hit the floor, his right arm twisted painfully under his body weight.

    “L-Lil-” “-Did an excellent job, I see,” came a voice deep and cold like a cave in the mountains. He knew that voice. A shiver ran down his spine to the icy pain in his back; but no further.

    In the dark he could just barely sense the shadowy figure crouched over him. His dark silhouette was outlined by the faded moonlight steaming through the open alley door.

    The Blackguard.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:51 No.13579353

    A hand brushed around his back and roughly jerked something away. Like hot lead shooting up his spine it was the most dreadfully painful, but he could do little more than wheeze as the tears streamed down his face.

    “Good work, girl. Nice placement, he won’t be walking again; not in this lifetime, anyway.” Kurt could almost see the smug little smile on his face. “Now get the box,” he commanded crisply.

    Sensing the elf girl moving towards him he choked out a curse, “b-b-bi-tch!” only to be rewarded with a swift blow to the stomach as she walked by him.

    He heard the latch on his secret alcove open with creak and began to sob even more deeply at the thought of this thieving bastard and his little hellspawned whore-bitch leaving him like this and taking all that money away with them.

    He wouldn’t stand for it…
    >> the end Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:53 No.13579362

    He wouldn’t let this go, he’d have his revenge. He had a second cousin, twice removed, in the city watch. Once his noble customers heard about his plight, they’d scour the country side with bloodhounds and blood on their minds. When he got a hold of that little cunt he’d-


    Something dropped to the ground next to him.

    “I feel like I should apologize.” Damn right, ya thieving ass-cunt bastard, Kurt roared in his head. “It took me longer than I thought to find one in your size. “I trust it wasn’t too…unpleasant for you?”

    That question, not directed to Kurt at all, it would seem, was answered with another kick, this time right in his aching back. He’d have howled in pain, if he could. Right now, it was getting hard just to breath.
    The Bastard laughed. “Oh, I see. Did you remember to lock the doors?” he asked in a near whisper.

    Kurt couldn’t hear her if she replied, but the Blackguard was evidently satisfied.

    “Excellent,” he said, “time we should be leaving, then.” Good riddance, whore-thief.

    “But first…” half a heartbeat later there was a creak of metal above him. She had passed him the lantern. With a deft, quick motion he did something with his hand and he lit the fuse. “Care to do the honours?”

    The lantern passed back into her custody.

    With a little whirl and a crash it broke against the side of his desk, instantly engulfing half the wall in a bright flame.

    The last thing Kurt saw before the fire reached him was the man in black and the little elf girl in white quickly strolling out into the night and closing the door behind them.

    That, and the fresh corpse of a raven-haired little girl in a heap before him.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)08:58 No.13579389

    Not in german as far as I know. Can`t think of a single one at the top of my head.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)09:06 No.13579441

    And I'm spent

    Last time I write after getting off of work. Also the last time I post without editing.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)10:20 No.13579890
    "Strong like a fascist" no long in popular circulation.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)15:12 No.13582008
    That story is messed up.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)17:36 No.13583539

    Which one?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)17:48 No.13583706
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    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)18:42 No.13584262
    Live! Live you son of a whore, live!

    The thread, I mean.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)20:36 No.13585225
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)22:02 No.13586355
    Wait, wait. I was gonna get upset about Lily being a prostitute, but I think there was a twist where it turned out not to be her, right?

    Either way, this was well-written.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)22:05 No.13586394

    I refuse to read any Lily writefaggotry unless it comes from the original writer.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)22:43 No.13586866
    First Lily writer here.

    I have about 8 more pages done, I'll post them tomorrow night along with whatever else I add to it between now and then, and a revised first half (mostly corrected grammatical issues, reworded some lines that sounded a lot better in my head than in print, etc.).

    Is there somewhere we could archive all the different authors' contributions?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)22:47 No.13586923
    1d4chan, if you're not content with sup/tg/.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)22:47 No.13586939
    It's archived in the sup/tg/ archive. The links are in this thread ( >>13578342 ).

    I was the second writefag, the one directly after you, and the one who continued the story in the first part of this thread. Eh, hehe... I know this is awkward since so many people are jumping onboard, but is yours going to be totally separate or...?
    >> writefag !cPUZU5OGFs 01/19/11(Wed)22:54 No.13587024
    Yeah this kinda got out of hand with a bunch of people pitching in.
    >> writefag number x 01/19/11(Wed)22:55 No.13587039
    Wow I did not mean to tripfag that.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)22:55 No.13587043
    1d4chan seems ideal. I'll create a page for it tomorrow if nobody does in the meantime.

    I'm fine with suptg's archive, but this way we can have one place for all people interested in expanding the story to read it and attempt to create some continuity.

    I'd like to get them working together, ideally. That way this can be a sort of /tg/ collaborative effort. THROUGH ELF-CHILD ABUSE WE ARE UNIFIED.
    >> Writefag Ω 01/19/11(Wed)23:01 No.13587141
    Hmm... a perplexing dilemma.

    On the one hand, we want people to contribute, but on the other hand, major contradictions will cause confusion. Maybe we should set up some ground rules for what a Lily story should entail? Or... maybe she can sort of be a stock-character, who sort of exists in a bunch of different timelines?

    Even better idea!

    I think with proper summaries along the way, people should be able to keep track and combine all the events.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:11 No.13587306
    Assuming we can use the main page for content, then the discussion tab can be used as a sort of markup section for the various authors to post potential spoilers about their intents going forward (like they're going to immediately follow one section with another that is still WIP, or if a character is going to be important later, so don't kill him/her off in your piece, etc.).

    That should allow everyone to work towards the same goal without stepping on too many toes along the way.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:17 No.13587410
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:25 No.13587554
    Drawfag here. If you'd like, I can make some character concepts of this girl.

    Maybe post them tomorrow with >>13586866 's thread if I see it? If not, I can just post it to the 1d4chan page when its made.
    >> Writefag Ω 01/19/11(Wed)23:27 No.13587592
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    Lily, a young elf girl, has been adopted by the man who brutally slaughtered her village. He has taken her away deep into a secluded forest, and subjected her to months of cruel physical, mental, and emotional torture. But now the two have finally come to a tenuous agreement:

    The Blackguard has agreed to cease his constant abuse as long as Lily does not try to escape...
    >> Writefag Ω 01/19/11(Wed)23:29 No.13587627
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    The tiefling sat in the corner of the bar, sipping his firewine. While he curled his forked tail around his finger, he stared towards bar. It was carved entirely out of stone, and countless gashes had been carved into it. The Tomb was the most popular bar in the city of Hopeless, and the last stop for many mercenaries in the Blood War.

    The tiefling was looking at the petite woman sitting on the stone barstool. She was only slightly over five feet tall, and wore simple armor. Her clear, fair skin and beautiful features were a shocking contrast to the dozens of battle-hardened men and monsters that crowded around.

    The tiefling was very curious about this girl. Why was she alone at the bar, when the building was so crowded? And why were there dozens of corpses laying strewn about her on the barroom floor...?
    >> Writefag Ω 01/19/11(Wed)23:31 No.13587643
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    Lily was annoyed.

    With their new agreement, it seemed as though the Blackguard had found an excuse to become stunningly lazy. he no longer asked her to make food, pitch the tent, or do any of the other hundred daily tasks. He would lounge around all day and simply shrug if Lily asked what she was supposed to do.

    Lily had taken on all the responsibilities of daily life. She was sure that he would help her if she only would ask, but she refused. She learned on her own how to catch and gut animals. She cared for herself, and found a kind of pride in the hard work.

    But she had come to understand a little bit about the Blackguard. He valued power and strength. He'd only given in to her demands because she'd had the upper hand. If she wanted freedom, she would need more power.

    "Teach me to fight" she said.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:32 No.13587661
    That would be absolutely amazing. Whenever you feel like it, it would be very appreciated.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:35 No.13587698
    What is it with you people and gorn? Why do you have this abuse fetish?
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:37 No.13587724
    I have a fetish for interesting stories that are well written.
    >> Titanium Man 01/19/11(Wed)23:39 No.13587747
    You guys are kinda sick.

    But your time will come. Oh, yes. You will return that life to God.
    >> Writefag Ω 01/19/11(Wed)23:41 No.13587767
    The Blackguard's face didn't change, "That's a big commitment. You might her hurt."

    "I don't care." her eyes were steely, "I want to be strong."

    The Blackguard barely managed to hold back a grin. He rummaged around a bag and found a two swords. One, he handed to Lily.

    "Careful, it's sharp," he smashed the other sword against a nearby rock with a piercing twang.

    "Wh... what are you doing?" she asked.

    "I'm making sure it's blunt. You're probably going to be hit by this," he looked at Lily, "a lot."
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:42 No.13587783
    If God is real, he stands by and lets men rape infants.

    I'll not listen to moral chidings from someone like that.
    >> Titanium Man 01/19/11(Wed)23:44 No.13587806

    Fortunately, I just so happen to know a few good men...
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:45 No.13587815
    Fortunately, my Gods are a lot more tolerant than yours is.
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:47 No.13587841
    Oh, Darth Bane and Zannah. You're awesome even when you're high fantasy.
    >> Writefag Ω 01/19/11(Wed)23:49 No.13587862
    "W... wait!" Lily backed up, "we're just gonna fight each other? That's not real training!"

    "Yeah," the man stood up, "it is. You learn by doing. I could teach you a bunch of fancy moves, but what works for me might not work for you. You'll figure this all out eventually, if you really want to."

    Lily didn't move, "...okay. But what's your name?"


    "You're not "master" anymore. I'm not a slave. I'm just learning because I want to. So... what do I call you?"

    The man smirked. "Call me 'Sir'."

    He raised his sword.

    >> Writefag Ω 01/19/11(Wed)23:49 No.13587871
    I just wanted to tell a good story...
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:51 No.13587887
    I rather like that.
    >> Titanium Man 01/19/11(Wed)23:55 No.13587930

    And you may do so! But I am a writefag as well, and with the written word at my command, let's just say that I can fight back on my own terms. All in due time.

    >takes things too seriously
    >> Anonymous 01/19/11(Wed)23:58 No.13587978
    Oh good god, we're gonna have a Paladin's daughter thread soon, haha.
    >> Titanium Man 01/20/11(Thu)00:01 No.13588031

    Not exactly. You should keep up with the current story I'm writing for /tg/. I think you'll like it.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)00:01 No.13588032
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)00:03 No.13588057
    Or she'll save Lily and they'll kill the blackguard for great justice.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)00:04 No.13588066
    I kind of see Lily as the anti-noh actually.
    >> anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)02:49 No.13589937
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)02:51 No.13589949
    Oh boy, I sure love me some loli rapefics.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)03:11 No.13590156
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    Xiombarg approves.
    >> My Two Cents Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)04:04 No.13590610
    Writefag of:


    here. For clarification, yeah, she was a prostitute in the story. I feel the same way about keeping her a virgin as everyone else. Having her stay pure is our little way of white knighting even though we're doing horrible, horrible things to her.

    But I just don't find it believable.

    The Blackguard is a truly evil bastard. His plan is to humiliate, degrade, and abuse the child Lilly once was into oblivion before building her back up in his own image. I see him as wanting her to be able to face ANYTHING without flinching, and doing things like this would just be another part of training for her.

    I just don't want her to end up like Arya from a Song of Fire and Ice. spoilers: Arya is one of my favorite characters, but I cannot believe that she went all the way across two countries with thieves, murderers, and rapists around and nearby her for a year and a half without having something like that happen to her. Don't get me wrong, I didn't WANT that to happen to her, but Martin said he wanted his story to be realistic, and that certainly wasn't.

    That being said, I would find it strangely fitting if the Blackguard never personally abused her like that; as if he was above rape, that it was too personal a method of exerting his power than he was willing to lower himself too.

    And that is what lead to my story.

    Also for clarification: he left her there as a prossy until he could find another girl, possibly another elf, that could pass for Lilly. He would then leave her corpse at the brothel as it burned down so anyone who went digging in the rubble wouldn't notice anyone missing.

    Lilly was aware of this plan. It was her job to bar the doors so no one could escape and to incapacitate Kurt. She willingly burned everyone there alive at the end of the story, showing how far she has become; though it was more than likely because she had been so badly abused by them as well.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)04:05 No.13590622
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    We posting our figs? Aww yeee.
    >> writefag number x 01/20/11(Thu)04:10 No.13590665
    Wait was there confusion on any of those points? I thought you did a good job of making all that clear in the story.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)04:13 No.13590699
    I thought so too, but then I read this comment:


    and wasn't so sure anymore.

    How did I do in making the reader despise Kurt, btw?
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)04:19 No.13590732
    Was clear to me too

    writer of >>13578752
    admittedly less clear because I forgot to edit my shit.
    Picture Lily has being a young adolescent when kidnapped and aging at about one third of human rate at this time. Being an elf she also looks younger than she actually is maturity wise, so people mistake her for a child
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)04:19 No.13590733
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    It's been well-documented that even ambitious women who strive for success tend to marry up.

    That is to say they prefer men who are even more ambitious and even more successful.

    It's pure evolutionary psychology.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)04:20 No.13590744
    Sadly half of evolutionary psychology is quackery.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)04:24 No.13590766
    only half?
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)04:25 No.13590774
    The other half is snake-oil peddling.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)04:47 No.13590873
    No no, Paladin's son.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)05:03 No.13590935

    Female paladin. Natural son.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)05:23 No.13590995
    He's full of pep and optimism.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)05:33 No.13591036

    And she's supportive and caring.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)05:35 No.13591047
    He looks at a glass and sees it half full

    Lily looks at a glass and says : What's up with this glass? Excuse me? This is my glass? I don't think so. My glass was full! And ti was a bigger glass!
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)05:42 No.13591074

    Both of them are idiots and will eventually get killed by one blackguard that does not go one on one against any other that might be a challenge.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)06:36 No.13591322
    Heh, Lily's story is actually going rather well.

    Good job Anon
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)06:48 No.13591356
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    Guys, guys,

    don't we already have the perfect paladin to put up as a test against Lily once they're both ready?

    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)10:04 No.13592170
    There hasn't been enough Sandwich stories IMO. There are what, 2 archived threads and maybe one or two that got lost?
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)13:43 No.13593908
    1d4chan seems to have a few more in their entry.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)16:00 No.13595250
    "darkelf040"? She actually looks like Evangeline from Wakfu.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)16:22 No.13595446
    I just saw this lady on my tv and found out she's got a huge following.

    A blackguard, a pirate, and a superior, all in one!
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)16:24 No.13595469
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    forgot pic stupid-ass captcha failures deleting them all the time.
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)21:00 No.13598486
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    This thread will never die!
    >> Anonymous 01/20/11(Thu)23:20 No.13599894
    It is in my town, but then, that's because they supplanted the old 'scare kids straight' tales of hobgobs and other assorted nightly boogeymen. So it comes with an additional tag-on. (this guy is monstrously strong, but also a monster)

    I admit I sniffled. Poor Morven. Someone drawfag Morven!
    >> Writefag Ω 01/21/11(Fri)03:21 No.13601646
    This pleases me. Maybe I could write something more, although it is late. It'd have to be something short...

    Any suggestions?
    >> Anonymous 01/21/11(Fri)03:37 No.13601724
    More degrading! She seems too happy lately.
    >> Anonymous 01/21/11(Fri)03:40 No.13601735
    >this fucking thread
    Goddammit, nerds. And you fucking wonder why women won't touch you??
    >> Writefag Ω 01/21/11(Fri)03:43 No.13601750
    No, no! I only think things like that should be done to enhance the story. It really hasn't been too graphic so far.

    Idea! I think I'll draw up a simple timeline of the events so people can keep things straight.
    >> Anonymous 01/21/11(Fri)09:34 No.13603377

    Steal a page out of Song of Fire And Ice; the Blackguard lets her have a cute little puppy for a year or two.

    Then makes her strangle it.
    >> Anonymous 01/21/11(Fri)14:45 No.13605915
    I think the main character did that as a child in Bioshock as well.
    >> Anonymous 01/21/11(Fri)15:24 No.13606274
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    >> Anonymous 01/21/11(Fri)15:30 No.13606325
    Evopsych has been discredited by far smarter people like Stephen Jay Gould. I like Chomsky's response to it:
    "You find that people cooperate, you say, ‘Yeah, that contributes to their genes' perpetuating.’ You find that they fight, you say, ‘Sure, that’s obvious, because it means that their genes perpetuate and not somebody else's. In fact, just about anything you find, you can make up some story for it."

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