>Wait a minute, we all saw the magic circle, she's a demon! Why aren't we going to kill her

this is still applicable for a response to my party instead of the preist
I say I can not in good conscience slay a creature I have seen commit no wrongdoing. Do you have any evidence of malignancy or malice? or is this pure presumption because of her nature?
then I explain to her what her mother said

>>5388982
Explain the situation to our allies. Surely they'll be understanding, and if we can do anything to protect the royal family they will be in debt to us. Besides, it's my duty as a paladin to defend the innocent and some jazz. It's real obvious I don't usually do paladin.

Try to calm down Karen. Don't be afraid to touch her, comfort her as nicely as possible. Tell her that no one's going to be hurting her or her family under your watch.

>>5389027

I try to steer the conversation with Karen into confronting her mother and/or father if the party accepts my moral faggotry

>>5389030
You're doing it right. I also second this.

>>5389027

You explain to the fighter that you cannot slay something that you have not seen commit some kind of evil in the first place. She has yet to do any wrong and you will not allow any of them to place a hand on her unless they can prove to you she is evil.

Huh, you think to yourself, fifteen minutes ago i was just another adventurer, and here I am, about to marry a half succubus girl that i met ten minutes ago. Well hey, It sure beats the hell out of killing kobolds.

"But...it's a demon...doesn't that mean she's evil?" He was never particularly good at figuring things out for himself.

Your gnome warlock seems to fill in the gap for you however "Hey you dick, just because she's a demon doesn't mean she's evil. I may be a warlock but I'm no monster, and besides, he's a paladin, I think he knows a little bit more about evil than you do pal."

You let out a slight sigh as your party begins to debate about the nature of evil, but they no longer seem to be interested in you or Karen.

>>5389170

"So, does that mean you're going to marry her after all?" Asked the Eladrin. Whoops, spoke too soon, he was always good at staying on topic.

Yeah, you're going to marry her anyways, but you'll need to talk to her for a minute. You turn to her and calmly explain to her what her mother told you. She seems somewhat relieved that you're not going to kill her and she thanks you for saving her. She gives you a hug and just stands there, leaning against you for support. She says that she doesn't believe what just happened, and that she's not sure you're telling the truth, but she's willing to keep going along with you because you defended her. With that out of the way, what are you going to do now? You still have the priest to dispose of, you still have this very hot young girl clinging desperately to you for comfort, and you still have a wedding to plan. She seems to be confused too, maybe you two should talk to her mother. Maybe you've had a change of heart and feel like smiting evil What's next men?

>>5389172
why do you have to dispose of the priest I am sure you have the king on you side, take the issue to him

>>5389181
Of course! The king is about to to be your father in law! You ought to talk to him about the priest. You turn to the party and ask them to take the priest to the king and have him get rid of the priest. Make the town think he's just crazy, have him killed, move him to another continent, you don't really care, just get rid of him.

The swordmage speaks up again "And I suppose that you're asking us because you have something else in mind for yourself to do?"

You roll your eyes. The guy is as sharp as his sword.

You tell him to just take the priest and go. Your fighter easily hefts the man over one shoulder and walks out the door with him. Everyone else quickly follows. The cleric lingers behind for a moment, unsure of what to do. He sighs, says a small prayer to Pelor for you and walks out the door.

You and Karen are alone now. She still seems to be confused as to what's just happened, and she still seems a little frazzled. She is also extremely hot. The whole Damsel in distress thing really works for her. You find that you need to once again think about a cold bath to stop yourself from stripping down right now.

What next?

Heh, is anyone even reading this any more? And if you are, let me know what you think about it.

>>5389239
I'm reading it. And I'm liking it - that's why I make suggestions.

>>5389239
I am a although I only contributed some slight idiocy earlier. See we still have hands to choke a bitch.

It's bloody fantastic and you shouldn't stop

>>5389230
Definitely calls for a make out session. At the least. Maybe it's too early for sex but god-damn, I can't keep just NOT doing anything to her.

Tell her it's a good idea to run the events by her mother, probably not her father. He won't buy the succubus thing, probably will call us slanderers and revoke my right to marry this hot thing. It's better if you both go and talk to her, but hey, there's no rush, we could afford to wait a bit and hang out before we go...

>>5389230
Take her to her mother, get the mother to explain while you share a drink with your soon to be father.

>>5389264
That said I also need to get some sleep. It's almost 4am here & I have to be up in about 4 hours.

>>5389239
I like it. I'm the guy that suggested the races, and knocking out the cleric. I decided that I like your writing style when you said the cleric was confused, surprised, then unconscious.

>>5389230
assaulting a princess, claims of demonhood or not from the priest seems like reason enough to have him "dealt with" but I think a paladin would wait until everything was all sorted out before he let any thing permanent happen to the priest

>>5389239

Relax man, it takes more than a minute for a response to be made.

Speaking of which, put the princess at ease. Yeah, your mom's kind of a demon, but hey! She's also kind of touched by an angel in all the right ways. Also, your dad seems a pretty understanding fella' who rather likes you. And as I said earlier- you are smoking hot. Relax honey, swords getting pointed at you? Just another thing in the world that can happen at random. Crazy stuff happens all the time, and if you don't object, I'd like to be nearby with me, my body, my plate armor, and my healing powers of awesome in case something ever goes down. Dig it baby?

>>5389230
ask her what happened to the other suitors who visited her mother, the question has been bugging me for a while

>>5389274
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You draw away from her a little bit and look her in the eyes. She looks a lot calmer than she did a minute ago. You can't really stop yourself. You lean in and plant one right on her lips. She doesn't resist and the two of you stand there for what seems like forever. She eventually pulls away and stares back at you. She's blushing slightly. She giggles and says "That was pretty good for a so called paladin."

You chuckle, but before you can show her what else a paladin can do you remember that she still doesn't know whats going on. You figure it might be better for the two of you if you had a talk with her mother before you continue onward.

You tell her that it might be best to talk to her mother before going any farther. She frowns and asks why. You tell her it's important. She sighs and grabs her robe before walking out the door with you.

Off to see her mother.
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What're you going to do when you get there?

>>5389297
>Dig it baby?

Solid.

Tell the mother there might be a problem, ask her opinion.

>>5389335

Ask her to explain shit to her daughter, like/such as why she was almost run through by a party of four a few minutes ago- but it's chill, child of angels and demons and all that jazz. You get to act like a complete slut AND still be holier-than-thou!

>>5389335
explain that there was a cleric that detected she was a demon and that shit could end up getting real, and fast.

fuck, why not carry karen to the mom's room. girls love that dont they?

>>5389335
amongst other more pressing maters ask why they are so desperate to try to hook her up with me

>>5389335
You explain it to your daughter. NOW. I wish to avoid any future mishaps when dealing with paladins or the like. And keeping her cooped up in a room is not acceptable either, I want my queen to rule beside me and my subjects to accept her for what she is. (This is a better response than choke a bitch :D)

>>5389304
On the way to her mother's quarters, you non-chlantly ask her what happened to all those others that went to see her mother after meeting her. She thinks for a moment and says she doesn't really know. She never really heard about most of them again. Some of them left shortly after, some of them didn't leave till the morning after, or at least she assumed that because she never saw them leave. And she knows that at least one of them tried to attack her but the guards took care of him.

Hmmm...this is interesting news. Maybe this girl's mother isn't as innocent as she appears to be.
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What now?

I really enjoy this; too bad that I really, really need to get to sleep. I'll be looking forward to seeing how it ends tomorrow on the archives.

Failure of a DM, you are a success!

I'm actually going to choose my favorite response out of the 4 or 5 that are posted after me. I keep missing ones that I wish I had done because i just take the first one.

QUALITY MY FRIENDS! Think about it.

Your party, they're plotting aginst you, ALL of them. They seemed a bit too willing to take the priest away, they were going to kill her a second before that, think about it, think about it, they're probably plotting to kill both of you now.
She's a quarter angel, angels are good but, your party tried to kill her, they tried to kill an angel, thats evil. How do you know they're even your friends, they might have been kidnapped and replaced by polymorphed kender and we all know how evil kender are... very evil... you have to kill them now.

>>5389396
I say to her, trying to get her mind running before she meets her mum. you woke up today thinking your normal, then you find out you are some sort of demonic construct, combine that with suitors have disappeared or tried to kill you in the past, don't you want to know what your mother and father are up to? If she remains aloof and disinterested I might just give up on her, because she clearly has no personality or drive

>>5389396
knowing it will seem like a silly question I ask her to describe her mother to me to see if her description matches my observation. in case there are powerful illusions afoot

>>5389455
You mention to her the entirety of what has happened today and ask her hwo she's taking it so well.

She sort of sighs and stops walking. She tells you that she's really not sure what's happening. She has no idea what that magical circle was or how they figured she was a demon from it. "I...I'm not even sure if I believe everything that you've said to me, but when you put it like that I guess...I need to talk to mom myself. I'd still like for you to be there though. If it's all true, i mean, how could she lie to me about something so big for my entire life? Is that why they always kept me in my room? It's not fair. I need to know."
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You're outside her doors right now. Plan?

>>5389422
Wonder why there is a voice in my mind bent on killing a my party, might it be related to the girl and her mother...

>>5389391
Bust in and say that.

>>5389497

>:(

>>5389493

Let her talk. Interject if she forgets anything. Try not to get too directly involved. Keep a hand on her shoulder for support when she's talking. Be on guard, in case something's weird with the mother.

Try detecting evil again on the mom too. It didn't detect evil last time, but maybe there's some effect or item that's preventing you from being able to tell?

>>5389493
seems like she will do the talking for me, so I tighten my grip on my weapons hilt...just in case...I take a deep breathe and open the door

Walk into her mother's room, staying close to her at all times and ask the mother if she could please explain what is going on. Also, warn about that crazy fanatic who found out that the daughter is demonic. ALSO, mention that they should probably increase the quality and quantity of the guards around the daughter. They were non-existant during the last life-threathening situation, you know.

>>5389513
You nod at Karen and open the door to her mother's room.

The queen is still in bed, reading her book. You take a closer look this time and realize it's the Kama Sutra. The irony seems to be too much for you.

You walk straight up to her and slam your hand down on her bedside table. She starts and looks at you, annoyed. She opens her mouth to speak, but before she can say anything you cut her off.

"You need to talk to your daughter. NOW. Some crazed priest almost convinced my travelling companions to kill her because he sensed that she was a demon and she had no idea what was going on. She deserves to know."

The queen looks genuinely surprised and looks at Karen to make sure she's okay, and breathes a sigh of relief to see no injuries on her. She begins to explain to Karen who her grandfather and grandmother really were. After hearing the story Karen speaks up.

"But how could you lie to me my whole life? You didn't tell me a damn thing and I nearly died because of it."
"Karen, me and your father thought it would be best not to tell you. We thought it would be better to let you have a chance at a normal life."

"You locked me up in that damn room for so long and call that normal?"

"It wasn't supposed to be like that. We didn't know that there would be so many people that would be able to tell you were part demon, and most paladins don't ask twice, they just cleave and smite every damn thing in their way. We were trying to protect you."

"Well maybe you could have told me why you were doing all this to me. Maybe I would have been able to do something about it if I ahd known."

"Like what?"
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Interrupt? Let it keep going? What do you do?

Reroll and become a barbarian

Lead raid to rape and pillage the country we're currently in.

>>5389577
I am getting too tired to write coherently so I let it keep going

Better let them clean the air first, then talk.

>>5389590
You consider what your life would have been like if you hadn't been born a paladin. What if you had been a barbarian? Things would have been o much easier. All you have to do is burn, rape, kill...but all of these things are an abomination against what you stand for. It would have been simpler for sure, but it would have been a life of meaninglessness and hatred. You realize that the life you have chosen for yourself is the life that you want, even though it has netted you a half succubus, half angel, half human bride who is just now realizing who she is.

Simple would just be too...boring.

>>5389577
Put a comforting hand on the daughter's shoulder, in reassurance, but say nothing. This is between mother and daughter, and it would be rude to interrupt unless things seems to be going awry.

>>5389615
>half human
>half demon
>half angel

>>5389577
Allow it to continue. Wrap your arm around Karen's waist and whisper that her mother is just trying to protect her, and that she should try and remember that.

Also, uh, detect evil sense says...???

>>5389577
"You're both wrong. Not telling only leads to anguish and knowing changes nothing. You should know to be prepared for what it may bring, but even then should not let such things as heritage determine who you are or who you become whether in denial of it or in losing to it."

>>5389597
Hehe, getting there as well, but im doing my best to stay awake and write.
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"Like...like..." Karen sighs.

"I wish we could have done something else for you Karen, but we didn't see any other choice. I guess we should have told you who you really were, at least then you would have been able to understand why we were doing the things we were doing to you. I'm really sorry it had to come to this. We figured that if you got married to a paladin then no one would bother you any more, and we were going to tell you after the marriage, but I guess it just didn't work out the way we planned. Can you ever forgive us Karen?"

Karen takes a deep breath and sighs. She looks wearily at her mother and says "I'm not going to forgive you for not telling my who I am mom. But i don't hate you for it. You're still my mom, I'm still mad that I you lied to me, but I love you anyways."

The queen breathes a sigh of relief, gets up and hugs her daughter. She's wearing a robe that is very non revealing. You're surprised that everyone seems to think she's so beautiful.

Mother hugs daughter, and they seem to be getting along now. Karen walks back over to you and asks you what to do now?
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Well? What do you do? Try and fuck her? Talk to her father? REROLL ANOTHER CLASS GOD DAMN WHY DO YOU KEEP SUGGESTING THIS?

>>5389642
I somewhat agree with this guy... I think...

If she's half of all three then... uh... yeah...
If you meant she's a third everything, then that would mean her father is also some sort of hybrid too.

What you meant is quarter demon, quarter angel, half human.

(I have no idea what the who posted the gif is thinking but he pointe dit out.)

>>5389686
continue tomorrow evening when were are all in better states?

Go see what your party is up too. (Bastards are probably betraying me as we speak!!)

>>5389686
Tell her to meet you at her room in a few minutes, you need to go ahead and tell your companions to get an inn without you. Provide gold for their inn if possible, or if possible, ask bride-to-be if she could arrange rooms for your companions.

Definitely go to her room, try and fight the urge to fuck her in favor of ACTUALLY getting to know her and plan wedding, succeed for a while, eventually fail, then fail and fuck her.

>>5389692
=/

You know what I meant by it, her mother is half and half, her father is pure human, Im saying half and half and half because i dont feel like doing the fractions exactly and i figured you guys would get it and not care.

>>5389700
Well, i'm going to continue it tomorrow evening for sure, but i want to finish up this section tonight. It wont be long, like one or two more posts, so bear with me please.

Ask the queen if the fate of the other suitors who never were seen again was because they came to her, and tried to smite&cleave her at sight, or something along those lines. If the answer is yes, tell her that they weren't worthy enough to be paladins anyway.

Then go talk to your party, choose a best-man and start planning the wedding with Karen.

>>5389686

Reveal the queen for who she really is.

Dracula.

hmm, anyone wanna try at giving Karen a brief description? I'll see if I can round up a drawfag to have her ready by tomorrow. Maybe the paladin too.

>>5389780
someone yes please describe karen in detail.

>>5389704
You look at karen and ask ehr to go wait in her room for you, there's a few things you need to do before you start planning the wedding and stuff. She smiles and gives you a kiss on the cheek before walking out of the room. You turn to her mother. This question has been bugging you for a while.

"Why is it that everyone seems to think you're some kind of god of beauty? You're fair indeed, but you're not quite what everyone says you are."

The queen laughs and says "I've got my charm turned off right now. Maybe you'll get to see it at the wedding."

You shrug and say your goodbyes to her and head back down to the king's chamber to talk to him about your party and the priest.

Upon walking into the king's chamber you see that your party is still here, they're currently partaking in a bit of a feast with the king. He's laughing profusely at what you're sure is one of your bard's many stories of how he escaped X tavern after doing bad thing Y and outsmarting bad dude Z. You approach the party and tell them that they're going to have to find somewhere to sleep for the night.

The king laughs heartily and offers to let the party rest in the castle for the night, anything for the men who saved his daughter from the mad priest and found her a suitable husband. The swordmage rolls his eyes at you, he knows whats going on.

You wink back at him and head off to find karen.
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Any last suggestions? Next post is the last one for now, and I'm going to start up again next night some time.

>>5389780
>>5389786
I purposely left her undefined so that you could fill her in for yourself. You want me to describe her and the pally now?

of course

>>5389615
"half succubus, half angel, half human". You start to second guess yourself. This is absurd, what kind of life do I have where I'm stuck with some horrible mutt child and her mother? So that I can eventually rule this kingdom when the little girl's father finally keels over?

No. This ends now. The world finally makes sense now, and you don't know why you fought this epiphany with your blind devotion to protecting the weak and upholding your god's ideals. You give a blood-thirsty roar, "SHUT YOUR WHORE MOUTHS, THIS DRIVEL IS ENDED. YOU DIE NOW FOR WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO MY WOMAN.".

You unsheathe your sword and plunge it through the mother's heart. Both women are to surprised to stop you, and the light from the impaled woman's eyes soon fades. Turn to the girl who is still struck speechless with horror, "YOU ARE MINE NOW, PLEASE ME AND YOU MAY LIVE". You smash her in the side of the head with the flat of your blade, rendering her unconscious and sling her over your shoulder.

Heading off to the throne room, your fearsome demeanor and bloody sword causes people to flee at the sight of you and you encounter no problems until you are at the ceremonial archway. The two guards posted fall easily to your blade, even hindered as you are by the maiden on your shoulder, "IDLENESS HAS MADE YOU WEAK, YOUR CIVILIZATION IS NOTHING WHEN THE STRENGTH OF YOUR MEN FADES". You kick the bloody corpses out of your way and storm into the throne room. The king and his court look on you with fear. You are quite a sight to behold now, soaked in blood with a crazed look in your eyes. To his credit, the King manages to squeak out, "Who are you? What have you done to my daughter?".

>>5389841
The King shrinks back into his throne, "Stay back! GUARDS SEIZE HIM!". The so-called guards stand and do nothing. You can almost smell the foul stench of their cowardice in the air as you taunt, "YES, SEIZE ME IF YOU WISH TO MEET YOUR MAKER THIS DAY!". No one moves to stop you as you make your way to the throne. Pressing your sword's tip to the king's throat, "I claim your crown and your lands, by right of strength. I will make your land strong again by culling the decadent and useless from it, starting with you.". Your sword sinks easily into the man's throat, he's unable to make any sound as his head tips forward causing his crown to fall. You catch it with your other hand and adorn yourself with it.

"Any man that thinks he can take this crown from me is welcome to try, but should you fail your life is forfeit." You pause a moment, inviting anyone to come forward. You knew there wouldn't be. Taking a seat on your throne you address your people, "This is a new era, make yourself useful and you may live to see tomorrow."

>>5389825
Well, you could describe her a bit in the process of expanding just a little bit of what happens in the room. A little bit of teaser before you pick up again tomorrow.

>>5389847
Hahahaha

Oh lord, that made me laugh.

>>5389825
no interest unless relevant to the plot

>>5389847

Story finally got good.

>>5389841
>>5389847

AHAHAHA.... no.

>>5389855
Alright then.
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You head back to Karen's room. You wonder what exactly the two of you are going to do about the wedding and how it's all going to turn out for the two of you. I mean...you're only 22. You've only been adventuring for a couple of years and now you have a wife? How are you going to work this out.

Upon opening the door, these thoughts are pushed from your mind when you see Karen standing there, almost completely naked, nothing but a pair of pink panties on her.

You can see how people would fall for her. Shoulder length pink hair, probably because of her mother's mix of races, emerald green eyes, fairly nice chest. She wasn't as big as her mother, but she looked fine anyways. And man, Dat ass. Who could resist?

"You ready this time?"

You put on half smile and say "Well, I was hoping we could figure out what we're going to do about the wedding..."

Karen walks up to you and you sort of trail off as she presses her lips to yours.

The wedding plans can wait until tomorrow.
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We're done for tonight folks. What they do in bed is up to your imagination! Sex starved pally meets sex starved Part succubus, you can imagine how that's going to be.

I'll be on tomorrow night since you guys liked this one so much. It'll be a continuation of this story, so stay tuned for more.
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Talk with the author time now i guess. Im going to be on for a little wbhile longer, so feel free to ask me questions, give criticism, troll me, I got nothing better to do.

Also, what does archive mean?

>>5389913
I like the way you write. I've had campaigns with non-evil succubi, and /tg/ers had their share of criticisms. I've had two non-evil succubi since I've started DMing. The one in the current campaign I'm running though, the succubus is quiet evil.

Archive means it gets permanently copied onto some archive place, so the coolness of your story can be linked to friends and co-DMs after today.

>>5389913
Pink hair? really? this would have raised suspicion early on
>Also, what does archive mean?
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/
I presume

>>5389933
Haha, Well, I thought to myself "Blonde hair is too...ugh, over done. Brown hair is kind of plain. Red hair is ugly, so I just went through the rainbow and picked a color I thought wasn't ugly.

Honestly though, you can picture her as looking like whatever you want. I only threw that in there because someone asked for it, and I guess some people need a description or they can't get by.

>>5389913

>>5389965
oh christ. What have I done?

God damnit...I didn't even make that connection until just now. Fuck fuck fuck.

I don't suppose i can just say "Okay see that paragraph where it has her description? That never happened." can I?

>>5389979
click the little box next to your offending post, then scroll down to delete if you wish

>>5389954
>Red hair is ugly
You sir, need to die for having such horrid taste.
>Pink not ugly
You are also a hypocrite, pink is a shade of red.

>>5389979
Make the hair purple, it's exotic enough for your purposes.

>>5389993
Hmm...Nah, I'll leave it in there I guess...But for anyone who reads this far, It's not cannon.

Keep on imagining her how you want. I'm not going to describe her again. Nor the pally for that matter.

Maybe your party will get a bit more description, but Main character and Wife are not getting real descriptions, they can look however you want them to.

>>5389965
KILL IT, KILL IT WITH FIRE!

>>5390018
I'd rather have blue or teal.

>>5390025
she'll always be a hotter version of the snorg banner girl to me

RIDER!!!

>>5390038
I don't see the connection between having the chick have blue hair and posting a pic of Rena having wet her bed.

D:<

Hahaha, thanks for the suggestions guys and gals.

Was it a good read? Are you guys actually interested in reading more of it? Should I just leave the story here? I thought it was kind of mediocre, but It's my first time writing something up here so I don;t really know for sure.

>>5390068
the beginning was fun, then it seemed like you got a bit tired of it at the end and just pulled out some cliche's to meet time constraints(like a professional writer)

>>5390068
I'm getting to much of the, "I want a sex beast for my lover, but I don't want to have to deal with the soul sucking out part kind hopeless loser encrusted romance."

>>5390088
Eh, I was just ad libbing the whole thing. I had no real intention of doing this, it was all sort of by accident.

>>5390087
Maybe I could make a living out of it!

>>5390100
well if you ever do it again the mystery and trying to outsmart you was the best part, I had little interest in the girl or queen except as keys to figuring out what was going on

>>5390106
I'll keep that in mind.

I have no Idea what to do for the next part that would involve the same kind of mystery though...

>>5390100
Keep going if it uses up your time and leaves you with a fuzzy feeling inside.

fa/tg/uys seem to enjoy brushing up and practicing on their RPing with these things.

>>5390119
we still don't know if the queen is up to something/sly grin from king, why we saw her as plain,where the priest came from, why he came and why he would cast a circle. Are the king and queen plotting against church? why would a angel mate with a succubus, seems enough to make a plot

>>5390169
Hmm...I'll think about it.

Thanks for reading my story /tg/, abd thanks for the advice.

Hope you all have a good day. I'm off.