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    86 KB Still Unnamed Story P.2.5 !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)08:06 No.5080043  
    Some of you may know me from yesterday, some of you may not. I'm finishing up P2 today.

    When we last left all, you had brought the old man to the hospital only to see the woman you had fought about to "kill him". She gives you a challenge on the rooftop, to which you head to after a few minutes.

    Upon opening the door to the rooftop, you cracked your neck before your eyes focused on the unarmed woman that stood at the middle of the empty area. The wind was violent, blowing her hair wildly, but she didn’t seem to care. She stood in silence; her eyes penetrated the mental shield you had wrapped around yourself. Suddenly, you became dizzy and your eye sight became blurry.

    For a moment, the woman vanished and a giggling white figure replaced her harboring an expression upon its face that could only mean to condescend. The ache in your head subsided after several seconds passed and the illusion you believed you saw vanished.

    “Why are you doing this?”

    Her expression remained the same.

    “What do you want me to say? That I had a bad childhood and am taking it out on everyone else, or that I’m abused? I do what I do because I want to.”
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    While she talked, you scanned the rooftop for any traps or notable objects, but find nothing aside from hospital sheets flapping on a clothesline.

    “Tsk, tsk. Don’t you realize how insane this is, you’re a bad girl.”

    Her eye twitched as you spoke.

    “I want a rematch.”

    “You still owe me for the other match you lost.”

    “I’ll double the bet. This time, if you win, I’ll do whatever you want. Twice.”

    Before you can respond, she cuts you off.

    “However, this match will be different. There will be no weapons and no special attacks, only martial arts.”

    “Fine, don’t cry when you lose again.”

    “Oh, I won’t be losing this time around.”

    Simultaneously, you both assume your battle stance. You wonder if you can without Bear Form or Power Strike, and without a sword, but you seem to have an inexplicable knack for fighting hand-to-hand. Maybe if you win, you’ll remember something.

    [ ] Attack
    [ ] Defend
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:07 No.5080055
    Defend, maneuver her into position for a joint lock.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:13 No.5080101
    You're finally back, OP. How'd you sleep?

    [ ] Attack. Kick her ass.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:14 No.5080102
    I don't see what's stopping us from using special abilities. I wouldn't honour her rules for the fight, considering the fact she occupies herself with killing innocent civilians because she wants to. We'll start off with defense again, but I want to see some special ability pwnage somewhere in here.

    Also, it's best if you get a set time to do this each day (complete with timezone). That way you have the same crowd each day.
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)08:16 No.5080127

    Good, thank you.


    Yeah, I'm working that out now.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:17 No.5080137

    But, think about it: if we don't honour her rules, she'll never follow up on her deal(s). We really have no choices unless we just want to kick her ass up and down the town.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:19 No.5080146
    A man without honor is scarcely a man at all. Obey the terms unless she breaks them first.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:21 No.5080152

    Hm, I suppose I see your point. I'm still indecisive, though. There's not a whole lot I'd want from a bitch like this, short of no repercussions from her father or whatnot. That could be covered from the deal from the first fight, but I suppose this is all or nothing.

    Perhaps only use power strike if we're clearly losing (because then we wouldn't get the deal anyways), and only bear-form if the situation is absolutely desperate.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:23 No.5080168
    I missed part one of this. Can someone bring me up to speed?
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:27 No.5080197
    You take up a defensive stance the moment you see her foot slide forward. She has a large stride and reaches you in no time at all, her fist blazing with emotion in the air. She hits your arm and your muscles tighten in defense. Your fist shoots out but she blocks it with her leg which she raised in defense. The two of you back away from one another and begin to circle the middle of the rooftop while in stance.

    She steps forward again and begins to swing wildly. You weave in and out of her blows while holding your arms close to your chest; she’s significantly more aggressive than she was in her last match. In her mind, she must be trying to prevent you from attacking to avoid damage.

    When he fist shoots out again, you grab it and then wrap your hand around her arm. You pivot your body and turn, swinging her over it in the process, but she lands on her feet. Suddenly, she raised her head up and smashes it under your chin, causing you to reel backward while blood flew from your mouth. She doesn’t pursue, however, instead putting her fists up while you wipe the blood from your mouth. You notice she’s bouncing as if she’s trying to keep to a rhythm.

    [ ] Attack
    [ ] Defend
    [ ] Other
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)08:32 No.5080223

    Forgot my trip.


    You're running through a forest being chased by a group of people while you seem to be forgetting everything. You find out you can transform into a bear and proceed to maul your pursuers. You question one of the, but only get basic information.

    You then travel deep in the forest where you meet a being made of memories that has been eating yours. You fight them in hopes of getting yours back but lose. You then go through a "level up" interlude.

    Afterward, it's part 2. You wake up in a house where a woman is taking care of you, you decide your name, and eventually leave. You go to the square where the woman you're currently fighting is abusing an old man and fatally wounds him.

    You eventually cannot ignore her anymore and proceed to fight her, and win. Then, instead of extracting revenge, you bring the older man to the hospital where he's in intensive care.

    That's about it.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:32 No.5080225
    Attempt to synch up with her rhythm and read her movements. She's a pretty aggressive fighter, so try feinting to throw her off balance.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:35 No.5080246
    Attack, kill dat ho
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:35 No.5080247

    Gracias. I like the story flow so far. A nice change from typical quests which don't tend to have much textual description.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:35 No.5080250

    This. It looks like she's not going to just let us attack like last time.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:38 No.5080269
    What? Keep relentless pummeling her until she falls. Assert your dominance.
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)08:42 No.5080298
    You start bouncing along with her, trying to get into her rhythm, but, at the same time, defeat it. You may get sucked into her stride, but it’s the only option you can think of. When she steps forward, so do you. You mirror her movements almost perfectly, you both throwing identical punches at the same time, dodging the same attacks the same way. You wonder how you’re able to do this so well, but that’s something to worry about another time.

    While you two attack each other, you notice she stops for a split second. “There!” you should in your mind. Your fist rockets forward toward her face, to which she immediately defends. But, much to her surprise, the fist she thought she saw turned ghostly and vanished.

    You learned Feint.

    You crouch and turn your arm, sending a punch straight upward toward her chin, which is now exposed. Your muscles tighten and your shoulder arcs into the attack, giving it more power. You land it successfully, sending her spiraling into the air. She remains airborne for a long time.

    [ ] Follow Up
    [ ] Wait
    [ ] Other
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:44 No.5080313
    Follow up while she's vulnerable.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:45 No.5080317

    I don't think that would work. She's too adaptive, and we haven't even got a hit off yet.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:48 No.5080338
    Follow up with a flying axe kick.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:52 No.5080372
    Break her spine!
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:52 No.5080375
    Follow up.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:54 No.5080389
    You leap into the air in an attempt to follow up your attack. You extend your leg and spin, the heel of your foot aiming to land against her stomach. One moment, you see her eyes closed, but, the next, they’re open and full of anger. She grabs your foot and stops the attack right before it made contact with your body. You both freefall for a few moments before one of you attacks.

    She turns her body and puts her feet together. Her knees curl and extend with great force that barely misses your head. You’re now under her and she’s seemingly vulnerable.

    [ ] Attack
    [ ] Defend
    [ ] Continue freefalling
    [ ] Other
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)08:56 No.5080415
    What is this, a low-gravity world?!

    Attack her.

    I'd like to comment that I like the way text quests pan out. You don't get much for fighting scenes in picture quests, but this gives them a lot of detail and is also much easier to do.
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)08:58 No.5080425

    Thank you. And I PFFFT at your gravity. It's the Rule of Cool, man.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)09:00 No.5080440
    OP, you have a major grammar problem with past tense and present tense.
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)09:01 No.5080452

    I wouldn't say it's a problem. It's just that I'm imagining the battle in my head so I'm typing what I think sounds best. This also adding to the fact I'd rather not keep everyone waiting while I go all OCD on my writing.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)09:02 No.5080458
    Grab her and spin around so she's now under you and powerslam her into the roof.
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)09:09 No.5080511
    This one might take longer than usual. Fair warning.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)09:14 No.5080546
    Yeah break through what ever floor you're fighting on and continue falling for +style points.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)09:23 No.5080596

    Big deal. He's not the best writefag, but this is entertaining and it's not a book. Ignore the grammar mistakes, they don't detract from it unless you make them.
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)09:32 No.5080663
    You fist implants itself in her abdomen. Her clothes contorted when your fist moved, returning to its wild flapping when you took it away from her body. She jerked forward as if vomiting but nothing emerge from her mouth save for saliva. While she was recovering from the attack, you wrapped your hands around her and hugged her body. In mid-air, you turned and positioned her head toward the rooftop and wrapped your legs around her chest. Unable to move, she had no other option but to endure.

    You both slammed into the ground with great force. The roof cracked and broke apart as a surge of wind burst outward from the point of collision. You remained in position as you felt the inevitability of falling through. You gave the unresponsive woman a quick glance, noting the thick red liquid that was pouring from her head. With that, you fell through to the other floors. As you did, you let her go, assuming the battle was over. She floated in the air almost gracefully before her body suddenly turned around and dive-bombed toward you, her leg extended in aim of your face.

    “Cool Blue Kick!”

    Off guard, the attack collided with your cheek and sent you flying. You made a miniature indent against the wall in the empty white room. There were several plans strewn about, as well as several machines that had drinks on it. In the center was a couch with a table in front of it; you were in a break room. You removed yourself from the wall with some effort. The pieces that had become dislodged fell against the ground in silence. You opened your eyes which you had instinctively closed, almost immediately noticing that they had become heavy. Maybe it was the blood pouring over them or maybe you were reaching your limit. Either way, the battle was not over.

    [ ] Other
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)09:36 No.5080690
    That was a special attack if I ever saw one. No more mister nice guy. Grab a nearby vending machine and hit her with a home run swing.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)09:44 No.5080756

    Hm... if we're tired, she's probably almost out too considering we just powerslammed her through a floor. However, we can overextend or we'll lose.

    Throw dirt at her and finish it while she's blind.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)09:59 No.5080841
    God damn it, OP. Just how strong is she?

    We're fighting in a hospital, I'm pretty sure people have noticed the ceiling collapsing.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)10:03 No.5080852
    stop spamming http://www.AnomTalk.com/ (Anom = Anon) gg dyglmf fjjjisy lffghnmfjokdol
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)10:16 No.5080914
    OP here, taking a break for an hour or so.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)10:20 No.5080938
    Bah, alright. When you get back, we need to put that bitch down for the count.
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)11:14 No.5081236
    You wipe the blood from your eyes and fling it to the ground; you stare at her with empty eyes without saying a word. Her jaw begins to clinch and her eyebrows furrow in anger.

    “You have no right to look at me like that. It’s just a way to pass the time – the daily grind.”

    “You’re just a perverted killing maniac.”

    She grows angry and clenches her fist.

    “Killing for fun and killing for whatever other reason is, in essence, the same thing. Don’t go on thinking you’re better than me. Who the FUCK do you think you are? You’re going to pay for looking down on me with your fucking LIFE!”

    You can sense the growth of her killing intent. With each passing second, it grows. You feel that you may not be able to hold back anymore.

    [ ] Go all out; kill her
    [ ] Hold back; incapacitate her
    [ ] Other
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)11:21 No.5081299
    Great. Now she's pissed. If we kill her, I sense some serious repercussion, but, if we don't, there's the chance we may lose.

    [ ] Go all out; kill her

    We really have no other option
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)11:28 No.5081344
    Hold back. If we can't hold her to her deal(s) we're fucked. There's no way we can talk our way out of killing the owner's daughter.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)11:35 No.5081380
    Attempt to incapacitate her.
    If neither of you can manage a decisive blow, than perhaps it's time to consider calling it a draw. As crazy as she is, it's doubtful this can end without someone horribly crippled or dead.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)11:44 No.5081425
    The moment you finished deciding what you were going to do, she was already airborne. When she had invaded enough of your space, she continuously kicked against your arms that were held in defense. You noticed that with each kick her power and speed declined. Eventually, she stopped and dropped to the ground slowly. You took this opportunity to finish the match.

    You grab her shirt and her leg and slammed her against one of the vending machines. It shattered and glass fell against her being when you had thrown her through. Her head dropped as if she were unconscious, but, given your past experiences, she may not have been.

    [ ] Inspect her
    [ ] Back away
    [ ] Kill her
    [ ] Other
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)11:49 No.5081458

    [ ] Inspect her.

    Even if she could fight back, anything she could do in that position wouldn't be that damaging.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)11:49 No.5081461
    Check for a pulse. If she's still alive, heft her up and toss her onto the couch and grab a drink from the busted vending machine. You earned it.

    If she's dead, it may just be time to get the fuck out of Dodge.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)11:51 No.5081476
    [ ] Other: RAEP
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)11:53 No.5081488
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)11:56 No.5081506
    You lift her face up like a brute, staring at it intently as you inexplicably waggle your eyebrows. You glance at her chest and notice she’s breathing – slowly, but she’s breathing. You remove her from the vending machine and toss her on the couch. She makes a small noise, but she remains unconscious.

    You stare at her limp body for a few moments before you reach your hand in the vending machine and take out a drink. It opens with a hiss and you chug it down, making large gulps every time you swallow. You toss the can in her direction and it hits her temple. With the battle over, you stealthy leave the hospital without being noticed. Now outside, you’re unsure what to do.

    [ ] Go to Karen’s
    [ ] Find the city exit and leave as soon as possible
    [ ] Other


    If enough people voted for it, I would have done it. Too bad for you.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)11:58 No.5081519
    Wait a minute, she promised to do whatever we asked. Twice.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)11:58 No.5081522
    Holy fuck, it's finally over.

    Karen did say if we needed a place to rest, we could always go to her place. Right now, we're tired, hurt, and probably hungry.

    [ ] Go to Karen's
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)12:00 No.5081535

    Yes, yes she did. But she's not awake, that's something to bring up when she's conscious. Of course, leaving the city may cause problems in deal fulfillment...
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)12:01 No.5081537
    Go to Karen's, but keep an eye out for a tail. We did just beat the shit out of the king of town's daughter, no need to bring trouble down on her head.
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)12:08 No.5081597
    You waste no time making your way to where you believed Karen’s house was. You weren’t in the best shape, and you felt tired and hungry as well.

    The moment you touched the doorknob, the door itself opened. You were taken by surprise, which surprised Karen as well, who was standing in the doorway. “What happened to you?” she questioned with a worrisome tone. “Don’t worry about it” you mumble as you enter her home. She stares at you with unsatisfied eyes, but decides not to pursue it. “Help yourself to whatever is in the house. I have to go out; I heard my father was recently hospitalized. I have to go see him.”

    Your eyes widen at the revelation. You turn toward the door, but Karen had already left. You shake your head to rid yourself of negative thoughts; you believe she’ll be fine. After all, you doubt that your previous opponent would be getting up anytime soon. You rub your nose as your shoulders relax and your eyes scan the house.

    [ ] Patch up wounds
    [ ] Eat
    [ ] Sleep
    [ ] Other
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)12:11 No.5081616
    Put something on to cook and raid the medicine cabinet for some industrial strength pain killers. Check the news.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)12:22 No.5081677

    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)12:31 No.5081733
    You scavenge for food and find ingredients, but nothing that can be quickly eaten. With a little search, you find a cookbook nearby and decide to open it up to make something to eat. A few minutes passed and you had a meal being cooked.

    In the time it’s taking to get ready, you look for the medicine cabinet to find various things to patch up your recently inflicted wounds. You yawn as you attach the gauze to your forehead and tape it down. You stare at yourself in the mirror for a few moments before walking away and toward the TV. You turn it on and search for the news channel.

    “-ently. In other news, the Governors daughter was found covered in blood on the couch of a nearby hospital. Authorities were alerted when the hospital had collapsed and were dispatched to assess the situation. There are currently no suspects, but eyewitnesses say that she had been fighting with a man earlier in the day.”

    While listening to the news, you smirked as you quickly downed the food you had recently made. After you finished, you sat on the couch and thought about what you should do next.

    [ ] Sleep
    [ ] Other
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)12:37 No.5081761
    Jerk off to the girl who's ass you just kicked. Sleep.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)12:40 No.5081773
    [ ] Sleep. It's been a long ass day.
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)13:38 No.5082056
    Your exhaustion from the recent events overcomes you. Your eyes slowly begin to droop and your head lolls to the side; your body slouches and tips over. Not long after do you feel a warmness overcome your person.

    Your eyelids slowly raise themselves. All you see around you is darkness, but a light soon shines bright from underneath you. You remember this place and its appearance gives you a soothing feeling. You bring yourself from your laying position and glance at the 3 doors that have appeared once more – however, it appears the one on the far left that read “Power” is open. You don’t know how, but you know if you pass through that door once more, you’ll be brought to more.

    [ ] Power -> ???
    [ ] Transform
    [ ] Trick
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)13:42 No.5082082
    Power is good. You can never have too much power. Especially if street brawls with crazy people is going to become a regular occurrence.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)13:45 No.5082099
    Stop spamming: http://www.AnónTálk.com/
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    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)13:46 No.5082105
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    Oh you. It... I...
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)13:51 No.5082139
    [X] Trick
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)13:51 No.5082140
    [ ] Trick
    Power that is sudden can consume a person.
    >> !ZaiyoM.Dpk 07/03/09(Fri)13:58 No.5082190
    You approach the door that is on the far left. As if sensing your presence, it begins to glow brighter and brighter the closer you get before it consumes you completely.

    >You gained Trick
    >Your stealth and overall speed has risen
    >You learned Wind Step Lv. 1

    >End of Part 2

    Current abilities:

    Power Strike
    Wind Step 1
    Transform: Bear



    Character(s) Status(es):

    Adahn: Good

    Story continues with Part 3 tomorrow at 10 AM EST
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)14:02 No.5082215
    Wind step, fuck yes. Also, need our double do whatever to badgirl/jean next part.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)14:04 No.5082224
    If it were Jean he'd be fucking dead.
    >> Anonymous 07/03/09(Fri)14:04 No.5082225
    Awesome OP. I enjoyed this. See yah tomorrow.

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