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    181 KB Neon Ultima Exterminatus PART 2 Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:31 No.916466  
    Lets continue from last night, shall we?
    I have all the story bits in copypasta so they will be coming later on.

    for now, the introduction:
    Neon Ultima Exterminatus

    The Tokyo System is under siege by Chaos, all the system has fallen save for the Capital Planet of Tokyo III, where Planetary governor Gendo Ikari holds off the Chaos incursion with a set of heavily modified Titans created to be the bane of Daemon in ages long past, left on the planet by Grey Knights who are now long dead.

    A young boy from the PDF Whiteshields, Shinji, has a rare print in the warp which renders him able to control these ancient machines only the most pure anc command. To join him in this task is Sister Rei, a rare Afriel, cloned from the material of the purest men of the Imperium. Though only a young girl, she was formed to pilot the great Aegis Titans. The third member of this team is Asuka, an off-worlder broung to pilot the last Titan.

    The trio now face the greatest challenge yet, as the Changer of Ways sends 16 of his mighty Greater Daemons to break the world for purposes only the Gods know. The Lords of Terra have promised aid but untill it can arrive, Tokyo III will fight alone.

    Here begins the new ending.
    NEON ULTIMA EXTERMINATUS!
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:33 No.916470
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    >>916466
    Oh yes, I remember this. I even remember Chink drawfagging for it.
    Awesome indeed.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:34 No.916473
    >>916466
    Did anyone save the Angels of Chaos?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:34 No.916474
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    >>916473
    This one?
    >> Eix !!SdYdf5cxy1I 12/19/07(Wed)13:36 No.916476
    >>916466
    The trio now face the greatest challenge yet, as the Changer of Ways sends 16 of his ...

    I thought we broke down the Angel's by their respective Chaos gods?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:37 No.916478
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    >>916474
    yep that one.

    Can OP link the story in this pic plox?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:38 No.916479
    >>916476
    OP here, my bad, that was the original pasta, not the fixed one, sorry.

    also, the end bit, as requested:

    ???: Shinji, I am with you at the darkest hour
    Shinji: Who.. are you?
    Emperor: I am the Emperor, have you, in all your quest to serve me truly lost your goals this hard?
    Shinji: Forgive me, God-Emperor... My faith has grown weak as the war has grown long...
    Emperor: My boy, this war is far from over. The taint of chaos os eched upon this system and only the true light of faith can purify it once more!
    Shinji: What would you have me do?
    Emperor: Awaken.

    Shinjis eyes shot open, a light glowed behind them with the intensity of a thousand stars. He opened the control bay of the titan and hovered out. The world around him was asunder, the Inquisitor sent by Terra massacring what remained of the Mechanicus, Sister Asuka's Titan lay shattered and surrounded by the ravenous Daemon Titans, the twin form of the Ascended Rei and Kaworu Daemonprince loomed in the ditance, destroying all in its path.
    Shinji looked to the sky, now bleak and broken, and spoke but one prayer.
    "Let the Emperor's light shine to the darkest places"

    With these words the sky split. The long redundant Alpha-level psycic powers of Shinji now fully realised manifested themselves in a spear of holy wrath that sruck the planet like the fury of the Emperor Himself. All was bathed in the Emperor's radiance and clansed of all taint, a ring of light and fire extending from the impact point and incinerating all things upon the surface, shinji floating just above ground zero, screaming the Emperor's name.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:39 No.916480
    >>916479
    In the end all that remained was Shinji and sister Asuka, now re-knit by Shinji's will, both upon a small fragment of the shattered planet that was slowly floating away from the emptiness that had once been its core.

    Shinji looked out and saw the other planets, now ablaze by the holy fire of the Battleship Deus Imperator, sent from Terra to help purge the system of Chaos. In the distance, a gleaming star was growing brighter and larger.

    Shinji cast his eyes upon sister Asuka, who lay motionless on her bed. He extended his hand to touch hers and uttered with the last bit of air he had
    "This is the end. But to the Imperium, nothing of importance was lost"

    A short heartbeat later, the growing star that was a Lance Torpedo scythed the last fragment of Tokyo III off the starmap.

    In the silence of now empty space slowly drifted one last figure, the empty shell of The Emperor's hand. The last memory of a great war agains Chaos. One like a million others. Fought by those like countless others. Remembered by none, just like most others.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:40 No.916482
    I saved this character list early on, is is still valid or did we change someone?

    Shinji: EX-Whiteshield who went AWOL during the chaos war because he was afraid. Redundant Alpha-Level psyker, pure to the core. Pilots Aegis Titan 01 "The Emperor's Hand"

    Rei: Afriel cloned from a grey knight. Pilots Aegis Titan 00 "The Emperor's Bulwark". Ascends to Daemonhood alongside Kaworu

    Asuka: Off-world Sororita sent by Gendo'd friend. Pilots Aegis Titan 02 "The Emperor's Wrath"

    Inquisitor Gendo: Radical Malleus Inquisitor working to see the Star Child born and return his wife from the dead. Assumed position of Planetary Governor and Lord Militant.

    Magos Ritsuko: Leader of the technoheresy that led to the resurection of the Aegis Titans

    Kaji the Rogue Trader: Pirate who secretly works for the Lords of Terra. Ratted out Gendo and Ritsuko. Executed by Comissar Misato

    Comissar Misato: PDF Comissar tasked to train and house Shinji. Loves Kaji. Was killed during the Lords of Terra's intervention

    Inquisitor Unisius: Inquisitor sent by the Lords of Terra to kill Gendo and Ritsuko and stop the Starbirth.

    Kaworu: Seemingly pure boy found on the planet during the war, assumed command of The Emperor's Wrath during Asukas leave. Possessed and later ascended to daemonhood

    Guardsman Toji: Pure guardsman from the PDF. Piloted 2nd Generation Aegis Titan "The Emperor's Judgement" untill it was possessed by a Greated Daemon. Killed by Shinji. Possession resulted from failure to properly build Aegis guards in such short time.

    The Emperor's hand: Aegis Titan 01, corrupt Machine Spirit with a tendancy to berserk and a warp signature. Attains connection directly with the Emperor at the loss of Shinji and awakened Shinji's Alpha-Level powers.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:41 No.916486
    >>916482
    It lacks Pen-pen the Kroot and Inquisitor Unitenus of Terra.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:43 No.916491
    It's a united daemon army, secrety masterminded by (who else) Tzeentch. There's, I think, at least one (angel) to each of the four ruinous powers.

    Shinji = PDF whiteshield
    Rei = afriel
    Asuka = off worlder battle sister
    Toji = PDF guardsmen
    Kaworu = afriel sent by the High Lords of Terra (really a daemon of Tzeentch)

    Lord-Inquisitor Gendo Ikari has been trying to summon the Starchild. He uncovered the ancient Titans in his research, and that's when the forces of Chaos started attacking.

    Chaos wants the Titans, but that's really a ploy Tzeentch has used to try to get Shinji, who is a dormant Alpha Class psyker, to awaken and become a servant of his that he can have masquerade as the Star Child.

    The High Lords of Terra were just being douches not sending reinforcements, but when Rogue Trader (really their spy) Kaji uncovered that the Titan project is really a cover for Gendo and his team of radical AdMechs to try to summon the StarChild, the High Lords, not wanting their power challenged, sent Inquisitor Unilius and his stormtroopers in to kill Gendo, the AdMechs, and the pilots.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:44 No.916493
    In the end Asuka gets over her feelings of inadequacy in service of the God Emperor and realizes that he's watching over her, just before getting killed by Unsilius' experimental Titans that were using Chaos tainted engines (Tzeentch is behind a lot of these bad High Lord decisions, and they "decided" that even Chaos was worth using as a weapon to stop Gendo). However just as the Tzeentchian plot unfolded with Rei ascending as a greater daemon, Shinji realized that the machine spirit in his Titan WAS the Emperor's warp presence and awakened as an Alpha Class psyker.

    He blew up the planet, Rei and the Demon Titans and everyone else with it; leaving on he and Asuka on the planet's habitable moon; having ressucitated her with his psyker powers.

    "And nothing of value to the Imperium was lost" he says, just as a Inquisitorial missile blows up the moon, and all other traces of this heresy.

    Meanwhile, Shinji's Titan drifts through space, a testament to the battles that have been fought in the name of the God Emperor.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:47 No.916501
    >>916494

    The UN that Seele sends to kill Nerv when all the angels are gone. They convinced the UN that Gendo was going to try to use his the Evas to take over the world or something like that, so the UN sent in a special forces army or something, and arranged for the N2 evas (those freaky white flying things) to join in.

    Of course Seele was just trying to pwn Gendo for backing out on the real purpose behind the Eva project, which was Instrumentality (everyone merging as goop). Gendo just wanted to bring his wife back, and in the process had saved earth with giant robots piloted by teenagers.

    So Seele wanted the UN to wipe everyone out, and then send someone in to activate the instrumentality.

    However Gendo's attempt to ressurect his wife activated instrumentality on it's own through Rei, and the goop world was only reshaped by the power of Shinji finally developing stable ego (a sense of self/self-preservation) with the help of his mom, who was the spirit inside of his eva.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)13:58 No.916531
    Pen-Pen is a evolutionary dead-end pygmy Kroot exposed to chaos enought to warp it into a speechless and flightless mewling of a proper kroot vulture.
    Comissar Misato keeps him as a pet.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:00 No.916536
    >>916482
    Thsi threrad needs so much more drawfaggotry...
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:04 No.916541
    >>916491
    Slight question of continuity here.

    We have some offworlders here, namely Kaji, Unisius, Kaworu and Asuka
    Kaji was there before the thing began, right?
    Unisius got there with his fleet
    Kaworu could walk past the chaos incursion with warp-warping or JUST AS PLANNED
    How did Asuka get there, seeing that the entire system is overrun with chaos?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:07 No.916550
    >>916541
    She was escorded by a Hereticus Inquisitor. They came in from the other side, goign aroudn the rest of the system to dodge the major chaos forces and as soon as the delivery was made, the Inquisitor left in a hurry as the transaction wasn't exactly legal or official.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:09 No.916554
    >A young boy from the PDF Whiteshields, Shinji,
    Whiteshields are not PDF, they are Guard, and they are Cadia only.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:15 No.916568
    Fucking faggots
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:17 No.916574
    >>916554
    Tokyo-3 has a related force of teenagers to aid the PDF. Whiteshield is a term used for them for the sake of clarity to /tg/.
    >> Sagewatch master of Recruits 12/19/07(Wed)14:20 No.916583
    >>916568
    Leave the work to the professionals, boy.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:22 No.916595
    >>916574
    That explains a lot, thanks.
    Perhaps we should give these Youthguard some better designation?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:27 No.916610
    >>916583

    lol namefag
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:29 No.916617
    >>916595
    Planetary Frontline Tactical Insertion Frontline?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:33 No.916627
    Why don't we just say Tokyo-3 is home to one of those military schools. The Progenia? Shinji was transferred from the Cadian Whiteshields there by his father's machinations. The class is really just meant to find pure young souls to pilot the Evas, and in theory to act as a catalyst for summoning The Starchild.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:36 No.916638
    >>916627
    I like how you think!
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:43 No.916670
    All this Starchild talk requires the inclusion of the Sensei, who sound weaboo enough to fit in.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:45 No.916678
    >>916627
    Now that that is clear, as well as asuka, is there still some point in the story we missed to explain properly?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:48 No.916685
    >>916670
    the whatnow?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:49 No.916686
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    <--The Star Child
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)14:50 No.916691
    itt Evengelion porn
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:50 No.916694
    >>916685

    http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Sensei
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:51 No.916695
    Exactly what is the Starchild? All I really know of W40k comes from the Dawn of War game and a few random novels.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:51 No.916700
    >>916479 SHINJI MAH BOIIIIIII
    I saw wut u did thaar
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:55 No.916705
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    >>916696
    >> lurk moar Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)14:57 No.916712
    >>916695

    The Emperor is the incarnation of the extinct Shamans who, with their prophetic powers and connection to the warp in its natural and uncorrupted form, had guided ancient mankind. After Horus rebelled and destroyed the Emperor's mortal frame, his body and soul could no longer remain as one; his soul melted into the warp, only a tiny core of the Emperor's humanity remaining whole, which was like a small child in a tiny reed boat adrift in the storm of the warp. Since the Emperor's soul survived, there was a possibility that his whole essence could be reborn once more.

    In the same way the Shamans died together to reincarnate as the Emperor, the Emperor's death too could herald a new savior. That time would lie far in the future, when mankind's desire for a new savior would strengthen the core of the Emperor's soul and rekindle it to new life.

    The soul of the Emperor adrift in the warp is the Star Child. The humans that were left in charge of the Imperium had no real understanding of what had happened to the Emperor. Though the Emperor's body continued to live within the Golden Throne and his mind continued to be a beacon for humanity, his soul is a god waiting to be born.

    The Star Child is also suggested as being the compassion which the Emperor thrust from himself in order to destroy his most beloved Primarch-son, Horus.

    The Inquisition (particularly the Ordo Malleus) has always been at war with the Sensei, the "Emperor's Sons." In 997.M41, Inquisitor Fortez reports that he and his colleagues Alexio and Credo determined the Temple of the Star Child on Levilnor IV consisted of unwitting pawns of Tzeentch, so they eliminated it.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:00 No.916720
    >>916696

    WTF!?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:02 No.916724
    The Sensei = Nerv. I mean obviously Inquisitor Gendo is part of the Son of the Emperor sect of beliefs (which really is infiltrated by Tzeentch, not guiding them towards a bad goal just waiting in the wings to JUST AS PLAN).


    Of course Nerv doesn't admit to being the sensei, at first they seem to just be a joint Inquisitorial/Admech/others project to save the Tokyo system and exploit these ancient Grey Knight mecha.

    So I guess in Eva terms...the Sensei are the Magi computer equivalent, with the St.Marduk report being a cover of it being some sort of Inquisitorial study on the pure pilot canidates.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:02 No.916727
    >>916712
    Ooh, thanks for especially the sensei bit, it's always cool to learn new fluff.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:06 No.916735
    >>916724
    The plot is getting so deep we can soon write this into a bloody novel of uber fluff.

    Jus tneed to change all names to more GRIM AND DARK to hide the origin then :P
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:10 No.916748
    >>916735
    Prohesies of the new End, (c) Black Library, Citadel, GW and 4chan 2008
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)15:14 No.916758
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    ARGHHHHh
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:16 No.916764
    >>916724
    then how do we explain the mainframe hacker angel?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:20 No.916778
    >>916758
    OH LAWD IS DAT CHINK!?
    THIS THREAD IS HOLY!
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:21 No.916786
    >>916764
    it wasn't sent by Tzeench but instead Nurgle?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:22 No.916791
    >>916758
    BY THE EMPEROR! Chink! HE BLESSES UP WITH DRAWFAGGOTRY!
    Is there anything we can get you?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:24 No.916797
    FOR THE EMPEROR です!
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)15:25 No.916800
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    ASUKA COUNT AS HARUHI
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:25 No.916801
    >>916758
    Now all we need is unit 00, 03 and the Corrupt Penintent-Drive Titans
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)15:26 No.916803
    >>916791
    i say again
    P O R N
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:27 No.916807
    >>916803
    specific standards/types?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:28 No.916811
    >>916801
    I'd really want to see awakened Shinji casting Exterminatus while the Emepror is projected behind him, smiling.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:29 No.916813
    >>916800
    I thought Asuka was a Sister of battle in this...
    MY FAPPAGE IS RUINED NOOOOO
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:32 No.916824
    >>916803
    I'm going to need some specifications to fill this order, sir...
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)15:33 No.916828
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    >>916807
    anytype
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)15:40 No.916845
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    >>916813
    ok she is sob now
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)15:47 No.916866
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    the eva titan
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:53 No.916880
    >>916866
    I love you so much right now...
    But i loved the OP one too...
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)15:55 No.916886
    Arbite Dredd vs Chaos Cultist.
    Also, rape.

    PS. I fukken love china <3
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:02 No.916898
    >>916886
    stay on target, soldier!
    This is a NUE thread, not a request anything from the great drawfag -thread
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:10 No.916917
    >>916898

    Fuck.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:11 No.916920
    >>916898

    How about some Chaos infested Mech tentacle raping a driver in the cockpit?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:15 No.916925
    >>916920
    Either Angel #2 or #11 would suit that...
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:21 No.916936
    >>916920
    I'd go with the Penitent Drive Titans agains sister Asuka for that...
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)16:26 No.916945
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    >>916886
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)16:28 No.916955
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    >>916898
    no worry
    i can still draw ur eva titan
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:28 No.916956
    >>916936
    kinky.

    We still want Shinji going Alpha on TokyoIII
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:29 No.916958
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    >>916945

    OH MY FUCKING GOD I CAN'T BELIEVE IT

    PS. FUKKEN SAVED
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:31 No.916962
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    >>916955
    Can you draw Gendo, Misato and Ritsuko looking at all three of them? Maybe throw in Kaji talkin to Terra on a hidden radio? also pilot kids?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:35 No.916968
    Enough! If you would request pictures be more concise in what must be drawn. Set a scene, just listing off characters is not enough.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:35 No.916969
    >>916962
    TL;DR: Plox draw everyone, and we'll drown you in porn.
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)16:41 No.916984
    >>916962
    i can if i know who they are....
    still googleing about that damn eva
    i didnt watch any part of EVA
    da only char i know is asuka
    she is such a slut
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:42 No.916986
    Thread fuckin' archived FOR GREAT JUSTICE
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:43 No.916989
    >>916984

    Asuka + Cockpit + Chaos infestation OMG TENTACLES

    GO GO GO CHINK, WE KNOW YOU CAN DO IT
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:47 No.916996
    >>916968
    OP and autor of most of these story bits here, let me try to pint a picture.

    Inquisitor Gendo had called all the four pilots to the command bay. As they arived, the youths saw not only the Inquisitor, but also Magos Ritsuko and Comissar Misato, alongside her Kroot pet, standing in the bay.
    Shinji: Glory to the Emperor, Lord Inquisitor.
    Asuka: You whished us here?
    Rei: ...
    Kaworu: The daemons are coming again.
    Gendo: Indeed, brother-afriel Kaworu. We need the four of you geared up and ready to blast off! We fear the next daemon may be harder to kill than any of the ones you'v seen before. MOVE OUT! EMPEROR BE WITH YOU!

    As the pilots made off to their titans, Kaji the rogue trader sunk back into the shadows. He opened his greatcoat and spoke into the consealed transmitter "Another one approaches, Lords of Terra. This war grows close to its end..."

    Gendo, Ritsuko and Misato looked as the three Titans were lifted to topside and though none spoke a word, each knew the other's thoughts. The fate of this world was to die. Only the Emperor knew if the moment was to be now or later.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:49 No.917002
    >>916968

    Shinji in IG armor inside of the cockpit going "The Emperor wills me to not flee!"

    Battle Sister Asuka standing on the deck off a spaceship.

    Rei getting all big and corrupted OR Rei's melting imperial guardsmen while; for both: Tzeentch looking on and saying "JUST AS PLANNED"

    Guardsman Toji punching Shinji while Enginseer Kensuke tries to break up the fight

    Commissar Misato BLAMNING shinji's Titan 01

    All good pics, but why don't you just take as long as you need and just draw:

    A cast lineup, like you see in promotional artwork. You can draw the mechs and humans the same scale, do em all SD if you want to fit them into the page or whatever.
    -Gendo dressed as an Inquisitor
    -Ritsuko as a Techpriest
    -Misato as a Commisar
    -Shinji as a Guardsman
    -Asuka as a Sororitas
    -Rei as...well she's already an afriel (creepy albino) so I don't know how she should dress
    -Kaji as a Rogue Trader
    -the 3 main eva/titans
    -one of those white flying n2 engine mass produced evas from the end crossed with a penitent engine

    Or if you don't want to do something that huege, just draw a Neon Ultima Exterminatus logo, and above it Gaurdsman shinji posing with the head of his mecha and the spirit of the Emperor looking down on him.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)16:57 No.917020
    >>917002
    "Rei as...well she's already an afriel (creepy albino) so I don't know how she should dress"

    plain white dress down to the ankles tied on the waist whit a small length of chain/ wide dull belt , work boots, a tan vest and a small iron Aquilla necklace
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)17:00 No.917033
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    >>917002
    Heres a rendering of the casting
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)17:02 No.917040
    >>917020
    If we want to have the "fluff" approach to afriels, she should have a sleeveless cadian suit with no helmet and lots of tech bits on it. Think Cadian meets Catachan meets SWAT
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)17:05 No.917051
    >>917002 Commissar Misato BLAMNING shinji's Titan 01
    She only gets to *BLAM* Kaji for heresy, sorry.
    Maybe this will help to get more ideas?

    Misato: You! Whiteshield! The Lord Militant demands your immediate arrival to the planetary HQ, you have been chosen as a result of a planetwide screening to have the purity and mental fortitude to pilot our Aegis Titans to protect this planet in the Emperor's name!
    Shinji: Who? Me?
    Misato: YES YOU! NOW STOP ARGUING OR I'LL ACCOUNT IT HERESY AND EXECUTE YOU WHERE YOU STAND!
    *Basilisk Shell lands nearby*
    Misato: By the Emperor! The damned thing is still standing! YOU! COME WITH ME! RIGHT NOW!
    Shinji: Very well, comissar...

    Kaji - Do you see what they are doing, Misato? They seek to awaken a star child within the titan itself, to cause a new entity to come screaming into the warp! What do you know will happen? There are places that even the Emperor cannot see and...
    Misato - All I see is a heretic, lacking in both courage and faith, questioning the will of the Emperor himself.
    Kaji - The High Lords of Terra have...
    Misato - THEY ARE WEAK, AND BY THE CLEANSING FLAMES FROM THE EMPEROR'S REBIRTH SHALL THEY BE PURIFIED. Rogue Trader Kaji, you are being charged for Heresy and Cowardice!
    Kaji - Right. We both knew this was coming. I hope your faith can see you through this.
    Misato - As the Emperor wills.
    *BLAM*
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)17:06 No.917056
    >>917033
    THANK YOU.
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)17:08 No.917061
    well...brb

    have something must do
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)17:09 No.917062
    >>917061
    We'll be waiting <3
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)17:15 No.917085
    >>917062
    and how!
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)17:17 No.917091
    >>917042

    Sweet, now I got 3 fullfilled requests.
    love you chink, all my gay love is for you.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)17:49 No.917163
    OP here, I have the maker of the 1st pick coming to make new stuff for us, but i'll brb.
    >> Abaddon 12/19/07(Wed)17:58 No.917177
    well it really does look like the end of the world.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)18:20 No.917237
    >>917051
    See, while it seems very awesome, this fanfiction work is also, VERY, VERY Out of character. Misato, no matter if she's a commisar, would have hesitated a lot.

    Moreover, while this Neon Genesis Evangelion + Warhammer 40k crossover CAN work well, there's something to be said about mantaining each individual character's personality to remain as they were, at least partially related to their original universe.

    What I see here is a LOT of OOC'ing.

    Katsuragi as a Commisar is fine, and all good...but she'd still be warm and loving towards Shinji in the outside, if despotic and cruel-like on the outside or public.

    We'd have to remember, the dichotomy of their personalities versus their new positions within the new planescape/universe.Misato, no matter HOW Commisar she is, would still feel a lot of regret and pain at having to shoot Kaji. She'd do it, as the Emperor Wills, but she'd still cry about it, in the privacy of her own room.

    And Shinji? Well, it'll be hard to see the whole "Emperor be My Guide" from old's scaredy cat Shinji. Shinji having an Iron Will founded on the Emperor would be something VERY strange...you'd have to write it very well.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)18:31 No.917272
    >>917237
    No need to remain perfectly faithful to the base material.

    Rule of Awesome: If it's awesome, it doesn't matter.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)18:34 No.917280
    >>917237

    It is possible for persons to fall low of the "lofty" ideals of the comissariat.

    See: Cain.
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)18:38 No.917290
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    >>917051
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)18:44 No.917311
    ...Wow, I thought you guys would never find the drawfag you wanted. After all, said anon had to be:
    1. A Drawfag
    2. A WH/40k fan
    3. An NGE fan

    And along comes chink who'd drawfag for a series he's never seen!
    lol wut.
    Also, respect.
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)18:47 No.917320
    >>917311
    i m not EVA fan.....
    ME saged most anime even EVA

    i draw those because me feel totaly BORED!!!
    /tg make LOL everynight
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)18:48 No.917321
    >>917320
    you have to wonder if he's doing this on purpose, and also if he is just as inarticulate in chinkspeak
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)18:51 No.917329
    >>917290
    Commissar Misato, awesome.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)18:51 No.917332
    >>917320

    I dare you to write 20 words of perfectly articulated English whit your wacom tablet , so we can check the penmanship and make sure it was done by you
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)18:58 No.917345
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    Can we get some mana kirishima? She's the one on the right.

    Erm....she'd probably be a Callidus.
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)18:58 No.917348
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    >>917332
    answer is NO
    u know how my engrush SUX

    <desu is my highschool life
    sleep 3 years, nothing else
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)19:03 No.917363
    >>917348
    what about doom?
    >> chink 12/19/07(Wed)19:04 No.917367
    >>917345
    sorry dude
    i m going to play Company of heroes
    then back to my sweet home.....
    should be no more fagart today
    se ya
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)19:04 No.917368
    >>917348
    The entire class is sleeping but the teacher doesn't notice?
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)19:06 No.917378
    Chinky started out typing perfectly, but when they got to discussing who he was, he got flamed about how he's... well, chinese. So he played along and here we have our own little incomprehensible-on-purpose drawfag.
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)19:07 No.917382
    >>917378
    Not perfectly...but a lot better than what he's doing now.
    >> Inquisitor Lord Elias 12/19/07(Wed)19:07 No.917383
    >>917367
    Wow, that seems too coherent to be DRAWCHINK, not sure if him...
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)19:10 No.917392
    >>917368
    just like in america, but here in mariachiland they throw the eraser at you
    >> Anonymous 12/19/07(Wed)19:16 No.917415
    >>917237
    FUCK OFF TROLL!
    >> Dagda !hTbo821v7U 12/20/07(Thu)00:03 No.918185
    >>917378
    I dunno if it was entirely that. He's not 100% fluent in english, and while he could communicate to us pretty clearly he sometimes had problems following what others were saying. My impression was that that difficulty was what really led him to screw around more.

    Also, he's not *exactly* chinese.
    >> Anonymous 12/20/07(Thu)00:07 No.918200
    Asuka tries not to fail, but fails harder than ever.
    Rei tries to stop the daemons with suicide, but almost succedes.
    Shinji pussies out, as usual, and doom's all life.
    The End.

    Alternate Ending:
    Asuka fights as hard as ever, but still fails.
    Rei-3 helps hit the world restart button.
    Shinji fucks it up.
    And Shinji is reborn as the Empoerer of Man.
    Teh End
    >> Anonymous 12/20/07(Thu)02:16 No.918636
    >>916955
    i just love this design for eva 00, i mean, this eva was meant to be the tank of the team.
    >> Anonymous 12/20/07(Thu)02:23 No.918654
    >>918200
    I thought the idea was to make this version of Shinji less of a failure? (which is what Anno intended)

    We should stick with the FUTILITY of their struggle. Keeps with the GRIM N DARK feel. So Shinji and Asuka give it their all, but inevitable lose.
    >> Anonymous 12/20/07(Thu)04:17 No.919078
    >>916466
    Don't forget the all-important part of "nothing of value was lost"

    No matter how epic their battle, the imperium lost nothing.
    >> Anonymous 12/20/07(Thu)04:32 No.919141
    >>917378
    We always hurt the ones we love, don't we...
    >> Anonymous 12/20/07(Thu)04:36 No.919150
    Is there a Rapidshit/gallery/somesuch of Chink's work? Or hell, could someone upload what they have to Rapidshit?
    >> Anonymous 12/20/07(Thu)04:56 No.919209
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    Hey guyz, am I late to the party?


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