Shinobi Quest #11This quest takes place within the lands of the Five Great Shinobi Nations (aka Narutoverse) starting roughly around the beginning of the original series. The world of this quest remains similar to the original, with slight but notable differences in certain areas, based upon the passage of time from a single slightly altered event. (It’s a goddamn Naruto Quest, you bastards. Have fun, participate, and write in when you feel inclined. Most of the outcomes of this quest will be determined by you, the players. Critiques and questions are always welcome, as my knowledge of the weeby shit is not all encompassing.)http://pastebin.com/WiPdCqLHPrevious Threads: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Shinobi%20QuestLast thread, Tsuki Norihime spent some time with her new sensei, Itachi Uchiha, and got poked. We also initiated the timeskip, got some training done, and further developed the Stellar Release.
We join Tsuki the morning of the final day the chunin exams- the Semi-Final and Final matches will be available for the public to watch- a huge event, both for the Leaf, and allied shinobi across the many smaller villages. Maru came early in the morning to wake you- Father was expecting guests. Not just any guests, either, but important dignitaries from the Land of Snow. Maru wasn’t sure who exactly they were, though. Internally, you groan. Not only were these people depriving you of sleep, but you will be expected to be with father during the visit. You doubt it will take that long, though, as the timing of the visit implied these Snow people were here to watch the exams as well. It made sense- the Land of Fire and the Land of Snow were military allies.You…1. Dress up as expected- flashy, frilly and formal.2. Something nice, but functional.3. Don your Konoha shinobi uniform.
>>47654031>3. Don your Konoha shinobi uniform.
>>47654031>1. Dress up as expected- flashy, frilly and formal.Full princess mode.
>>47654031>1. Dress up as expected- flashy, frilly and formal.We're not here in any official capacity, so might as well go full tsukihime
>>47654031>1We looking fine today
>>47654031>3. Don your Konoha shinobi uniform.We're attending as a young genin hoping to learn some tricks by watching the Chunin examinations, and in doing so see what we're expected to be capable of as chunin.
>>47654031>2. Something nice, but functional.sorry, i'm not sorry
>>47654031>1. Dress up as expected- flashy, frilly and formal.deception ohohoho
>>47654031>1. Dress up as expected- flashy, frilly and formal.Why not we rarly get the chance, though lets ask dad what would be most appropriate hmm?
Full princess mode~Writing.
>>47654031>1. Dress up as expected- flashy, frilly and formal.still a princess
Go 1 so that when we go watch Neji vs Naruto while Nori screams support for naruto, we can be elegant princess looking down towards neji from behind our fan, letting our elegance and approving gaze do the work. With his 360 degree vision he couldn't look away even if he wanted too
>>47654134>Give him a handkerchief to mark him as our champion>It has the Main Branch emblem lovingly embroidered on it, just to fuck with him
>>47654134He's an ass, he's not getting cheered for.
>>47654162YES>>47654169No, we just act like a distraction so he gets beaten.
>>47654162pft! ha that might be fun but I don't know where we'd get such a thing on such short notice... unless Hinata has one?
>>47654169We ain't cheering, that's unladylike like, we are merely watching. If he inturprits it that way thats his call. Don't forget if we're a dick he'll take it out on Hinata.
>>47654183We're made of money, we'll PAY someone to do it quickly.A lot, if we need to.
>>47654176but we're here to see him go all out, no point in distracting him, yet
>>47654176Ah, well I'm not sure how much elegance and approving gaze would be distracting. >>47654162 would work but the gig would be up too early. If we wanted to fuck with him during the match I think the best shot would be exclaim support and than extreme indifference, barely even paying attention to the match.
>>47654202Well being distractable would surely hurt his shot at chuunin, which with luck and us possibly being in the NEXT chuunin exams might even give Hinata a shot at beating him to chuunin for the ultimate fuck you.
>>47654216or just like fake kissing hinata or something... or more seriously just get buddy-buddy with naruto since neji seems to hate his guts.
>>47654257It will be interesting to see this world's version of Naruto.
>>4765426819% less homoerotic attraction to Sasuke
Best to dress to impress. Especially since you don’t know anything about these dignitaries. Normally you’d ask father, but you expect him to be busy preparing for their arrival himself. You opt to wear a flowing gown of flowing silver, with blue accents to match your hair. You figure it might remind them of the their homeland- and besides, you think it complements your skin quite nicely.Two hours pass, and finally you hear the telltale sounds of guests arriving- right on time. Punctual, these Snow diplomats. You meet father in the hallway, with him dressed up rather handsomely in a 3-piece suit. Father rarely dresses up, but you’re happy to see him all cleaned up.“Tsuki, my princess! You are truly a vision to behold!” He bows and presents his hand-He’s playing at chivalry. Again.You take his hand. Best to humor him before his big meeting.He kisses the back of your hand, then gives you a little twirl. You laugh, despite yourself- Father always knows how to brighten your mood.Interrupting your moment, Danzo appears in the hallway- looking the same as ever.“Yoru-dono, your guest, General Doto, and his attendants have arrived.” he reports, smiling at the two of you bonding.“Ah, very well. Come, Tsuki. General Doto is a longtime client of mine- and the leader of the Land of Snow, to boot. He hasn’t seen you in many years- I appreciate that you’ve dressed up for this reunion.” Father says, his goofy smile only half gone. General Doto… the name was familiar, although you weren’t sure why. Admittedly, you haven’t studied much of the outlying lands beyond those of the 5 Daimyo.
>>47654257I'm not sure that would do it. Though, Hinata should know him better than we do, we could ask her what she thinks the best shot at fucking up his match would be.
>>47654310Christ our dad loves associating with bad guys. At some point we need to tap into him to give his opinion of notable potential allies of the leaf so we can do the opposite of whatever he suggests.
>>47654344I know right?Fucking arms dealer Dad.>http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Dot%C5%8D_Kazahana
>>47654322we damaged neji's composure just by bringing naruto up in conversation in a vaguely positive tone, but yeah hinata would know the best ways to mess with him.
>>47654344He probably just sells weapons or something
>>47654359Part of that was he had laid on the charm and then we responded exactly the opposite of what he'd been aiming for, rather than just Naruto himself. If he'd just managed to not be an ass to Hinata in front of her friend for one minute he would've managed fine, too.
Wait, guys, Dad is NaruTony Stark.
>>47654403Yup.Just selling all sorts of murderous stuff to people.I wonder when we'll hear of a special plan code named Jeriko.
>>47654310>flowing gown of flowing silverThat's a lot of flowing. Is it Tsukus time of the month?
>>47654403and I couldn't be prouder, Imagine the puppets he could make for us!
>>47654436Ah fuck, that could be some awesome shit right there
So is anyone expecting our dad to NOT be in bed with Akatsuki at this point?
>>47654433Tsuki's. Fucking spell check.
The two of you walk down the central stairway into the foyer- standing there, near Maru, are a group of four people. Three of them look like shinobi- two men, and one woman. On their foreheads, you see the headband of what you assume is Yukigakure- the Village Hidden in Snow.The fourth man, though, looks nothing like the rest. Tall, and broad of shoulder, wearing what looks to be a military uniform. He wears his hair long- as both of the male Yuki shinobi do, as well. The female has nearly iridescent pink hair, cropped short.“Ah, General Doto Kazahana! It’s been too long, my friend!” you father greets the group. They all turn to look in your direction. “Yoru Norihime. It’s good to see you as well. You don’t look like you’ve aged a day in these last 10 years- I don’t think I can boast the same.” Doto says, laughing- his voice is deep, his laugh a thunderous boom. “I can only imagine this is your precious daughter? She was so small when I saw her last….”“Why yes! Tsuki, please introduce yourself to the General.” Father says, turning to you.You….1. Introduce yourself politely2. Introduce yourself curtly3. Don’t say anything.
>>47654468I think it's more...who cares, we do need a puppet teacher after all
>>47654484>1. Introduce yourself politely
>>47654433Derp. One of these days I'll proofread my shit better.
>>47654484>1. Introduce yourself politelyRemember Tsuki, be friendly with customers.
>>476544841. Introduce yourself politelyNever be rude to a potential ally
>>47654484>1. Introduce yourself politelyIt really has been a long time, a pleasure to be reacquainted i'm sure. curtsy just a little >We will win the Game of thron...Hats
>>47654484>1. Introduce yourself politelyLay on that Norihime charm. And curtsy.
>>47654484It's M. Night Shamalama-sama-kun!>1.Introduce yourself politely.
Being polite to the nice customer.Writing.
>>47654627Quick question how many of the movies are ya going to use?
>>47654646Case by case basis. You won't be reenacting them, in any rate. I just feel it fleshes out the world more.
>>47654646all them at the same time
>>47654681Okay cool. Just curious as now that's two? so far out of 8??
>>47654705Raiga wasn't in a movie, just a filler arc. Did I mention something out of another movie that I didn't notice?
>>47654732I thought he was! Sorry my bad. I know about naruto up until the timeskip and the quest threads.
>>47654760This is why no one likes you sleepy. You are only good for the occasional good roll.
“Tsuki Norihime, General Doto. It is nice to see a family friend again after so long.” you say, curtsying. “Haha! Family friend indeed! Your father has raised you well, little Norihime. I can only hope you take after your father’s genius.” the large man responds with his booming voice. “How are things in the Land of Snow, General?” your father asks politely.“Secure. Prosperous. As always, Norihime, your inventions have never let us down. Worth every ryo we paid for them. Speaking of which, it’s related as to why I’ve stopped by. One of Yuki’s shinobi has performed well enough to be in the semi-finals, and it was a good enough reason as any to see you. I was wondering if that little project of yours has bore any fruit.” Goto says, his last words piquing your interest. “The ship? No, unfortunately not. I’ve yet to find a reliable way to power the thing without overburdening it. Conventional steam engines are simply too cumbersome. I haven’t given up, mind, but the project itself is on the backburner for now. Contracts with the Fire Daimyo keep me busy enough.” your father says, rather flatly. “Shame. If I knew of such a resource, I would share it with you- for access to the prototypes, of course.” Goto laughs- although you don’t think he’s joking, either. The two men exchange more words- pleasantries mostly, with occasional prodding from Goto into your father’s work. But as is normal, your father is mostly tightlipped. This doesn’t seem to irritate Goto, though. “Very well then, Norihime. We must be off- although I expect to see you both at the exams?” He inquires.“Tsuki will be there- she is a genin, after all. I cannot promise that I will attend- whole thing is a bit noisy for my tastes.” your father responds.“Of course. Keep in touch, Norihime. I won’t have the Land of Snow be anything less than what it was destined to be.” Goto says, with some matter of finality.
Eventually, General Goto and his shinobi leave, presumably to head to the exams.You…1. Ask Father about Goto.2. Ask Danzo about Goto.3. Go ahead and head on to the exams.
>>47655128>1. Ask Father about Goto.Then Danzo as we head to the exams.
>>47655128>2. Ask Danzo about Goto.
>>47655104Definitely Started calling him "Goto" instead of Doto. Maybe I should crack into that red bull, already.
>>47655104>2 Ask Danzo about Goto. He has his ear to the ground on everything, right?
>>47655128>1. Ask Father about Goto.
Asking Danzo about Doto.Writing.
>>47655104He seems pretty cool desu.
>>47655128>2. Ask Danzo about Goto.>3. Go ahead and head on to the exams.He seems like a man whom rules with an Iron fist, nothing wrong with that, but I sense a strong feeling of personal preference, he is doing this for him..not his village.
I had a dream that Tsuki married Shika. They had four kids. Their eldest son had a drill pompour and was the leader of a gang of Greaser ninjas. It was weird.
>>47655390Anon, that's fucking awesome
>>47655450Who ever we marry, Except Lee cause fuck Leewe must have a son with that hair style.
>>47655514So we want to have Josuke as our son
As soon as Doto and his men leave, Father exhales loudly.“He’s a good customer, but he’s a bit stiff. I’m surprised he asked about the ship, though. Haven’t worked on that schematic in a while….”-and like that, he’s off, walking towards the office, talking to himself. The jacket of the suit is off before he reaches the top of the stairs. Same old Father.Once he’s out of earshot, you turn to Danzo. “So, who exactly was that? We don’t exactly hear much news out of the Land of Snow.” you inquire.Danzo begins to speak, while still staring at the front door.“General Doto Kazahana, uncontested ruler of the Land of Snow.” he starts. “Ten years ago, he used a large amount of ryo to buy large amounts of your father’s machine technology- some that hadn’t even been perfected yet. Using these weapons, he armed his men and overthrew the old Daimyo- his older brother. The whole situation was quite violent, really. But it was classified as a civil war of a sovereign nation, and no other Shinobi nation interceded. Once he took power, Doto spent even more money rapidly industrializing the Land of Snow, making great use of it’s swathes of mineral resources. It’s become quite the marvel, so I hear. Steamships, trains and the like. Things the other Daimyo have only sampled with, at best.”“What about the shinobi village? Yukigakure?” you say.“Yuki had been on the decline for a very long time. Part of why Doto was so successful was because he didn’t need to rely on them- your father’s weapons were easily usable by peasants as well as shinobi. Although, I do understand that they’ve begun modernizing as well. In a way, one of their genin making it this far in the exams is a big development.”
>>47655525I was honestly thinking more Kuwabara from YuYu Hakashou. Except not useless. And with better grammar.
Very interesting. This information….1. Concerns you. Father is selling weapons and technology to warmongers?2. Doesn’t apply to you. You aren’t from Yuki, and the Land of Snow is an ally.3. Interests you. You had no idea father’s contracts were so in demand.4. Are more interested in the skills of the Yuki ninja than father’s business ventures.>Write-in
>>47655514Lee is best husbando.
>>47655543>Do you think they will be a threat to the leaf?
>>47655559>4. Are more interested in the skills of the Yuki ninja than father’s business ventures.
>>47655559>3. Interests you. You had no idea father’s contracts were so in demand.>4. Are more interested in the skills of the Yuki ninja than father’s business ventures.Impressed by father's technical skill and business acumen, and also curious at what the Yuki ninja can do.
>>47655559>3. Interests you. You had no idea father’s contracts were so in demand.
>>47655561Lee looks goofy as fuck and would probably have like a 50% chance per child of producing a dud that can't even use our Kekky or any ninjutsu.
>>47655559>1. Concerns you. Father is selling weapons and technology to warmongers?>3. Interests you. You had no idea father’s contracts were so in demand.Though my flavor for 1 is less warmongers and more foreign countries in general. Shouldn't that be some form of treason?
>>47655559>3. Interests you. You had no idea father’s contracts were so in demand
>>47655559>3. Interests you. You had no idea father’s contracts were so in demand.Daddy's mechanical expertise would be awesome for building puppets.
>>47655559were so in demand.4. Are more interested in the skills of the Yuki ninja than father’s business ventures.
>>47655608>Lee looks goofy as fuckThat's why I like the idea of him and Tsuki.Total opposites, but they'd be cute together.
>>47655621It was mentioned that the Snow is a military ally.also>>476555593. Interests you. You had no idea father’s contracts were so in demand.
>>47655559>1. Concerns you. Father is selling weapons and technology to warmongers?I mean sure that's what weapons DO but ideally you're not selling to someone who immediately proceeds to start up a civil war.
>>47655559>3. Interests you. You had no idea father’s contracts were so in demand.Also good for them. Nice that even with out a strong ninja village they can defend themselves.
>>47655559>3. Interests you. You had no idea father’s contracts were so in demand.>4. Are more interested in the skills of the Yuki ninja than father’s business ventures.It's fascinating stuff Danzo-sama, now I better go get changed to go to the exam and watch the matches
>>47655668Opposites may attract but they rarely last.
>>476555593. Interests you. You had no idea father’s contracts were so in demand.4. Are more interested in the skills of the Yuki ninja than father’s business ventures.
3 with some 4.Writing.
>>47655728They're not actually that opposite, Tsuki is one of the few in leaf that can give Lee and Guy a run for their money in Intensity.
>>47655803She's got pretty high willpower.
Tsuki and Lee only SEEM like opposites because they put very different flavors on a very similar personality.
>>47655882I was thinking of naming one of our techniques or weapons after him.>>47655913But Shika is best boy with best brain and genes. We must keep the Norihime bloodline strong.
>>47655803On a completely different note, going by the trend he is probably going to be dead or crippled by the age of 40.>>47655913I have no idea how they can be construed as similar.
>>47655935Best brains, decent all around genes. Not a bad choice per-say but I feel like we should keep our options open. He is definitely on the list however.
>>47655942>I have no idea how they can be construed as similar.Intense willpower and desire to become the best for the village.Tsuki is more reserved and quiet, while Lee is loud and is not afraid to show you how great he is.
>>47655935>We must keep the Norihime bloodline strong.Getting subsumed by and adding a new thing to the Nara bag of tricks sounds like a bad way to do that.
“I knew Father was supplying the Fire Daimyo- I had no idea he sold his designs outside of the Land of Fire, though.” you inquire, genuinely impressed.“Your father is a big proponent of international trade. Although the Five Great Shinobi Nations have not really bought in, many of the lesser nations saw the effect they had during Doto’s revolution. It was win-win for him, really. Gain a loyal customer with a large purse, and also show the world the worth of the things you were designing. One giant advertisement, writ in the blood of the blood of the fallen.” Danzo says, with just a hint of amusement in his voice.“He was swamped with offers after that. The old Fire Daimyo tried to put his foot down- but your father simply said he’d stop designing if they didn’t allow him to sell his equipment independently. The designs were his and his alone- the Capital had no right to claim them. But, he would sell them the technology at a reasonable rate. They had no choice but to agree. Our current Daimyo is definitely taking advantage of your father’s choice to stay within the Land of Fire.” he finishes.Interesting. You knew father was born here, but you had no idea that his reasons for staying were so business-centric.“What about the Yuki-shinobi?” You inquire while still pondering your Father’s accomplishments.“They specialize in the manipulation of ice- but they do not create it, as one with a Ice Release would. The techniques they use focus more on the manipulation of pre-existing ice, which has always limited their effectiveness away from their icy home continent. However, if an Yuki-nin has made it to the semi-finals, maybe they’ve found away around it?” Danzo reports.That’s enough questions for now, you think. You need to make you way to the exams.You…1. Stay in your fancy garb2. Change into your uniformYou also…1. Go alone2. Ask Danzo to accompany you
>>47655964>Tsuki is more reserved and quietIf you ignore all the OHOHOHOHOHOs maybe.
>>47655964We really haven't shown that strong of willpower and being the best is hardly an uncommon dream.
>>47655991>1. Stay in your fancy garbBut add in our headband.
>>47655993Or straight up telling off the 4th, Kakashi, and Itachi; even if we felt kinda bad about it later.
>>476559911 and 2.
>>476559911. Stay in your fancy garb2. Ask Danzo to accompany youTime for him to scout the competition
>>47655991>1. Stay in your fancy garb>2. Ask Danzo to accompany you
>>47655991>writ in the blood of the blood of the fallen.1. Stay in your fancy garb2. Ask Danzo to accompany you
>>47655993Compared to Lee she's pretty reserved.>>47655998We will show it at some point.
>inb4 Naruto and neji both get a crush on Princess and distract alot of people in the match.Don't forget to bring our fan so we can gaze over it hauntingly
>>47656026Yeah, in general my point is Tsuki acts with the FLAVOR of absolutely-assured-of-superiority princess and Lee acts with he FLAVOR of... honestly not sure how to define it, but both operating off a very loud, fairly similar base.
>>476559911. Stay in your fancy garb2. Ask Danzo to accompany you
>>47656049Don't we already use that who determined shtick in Boruto Quest?
>>47655991>2. Change into your uniformand>2. Ask Danzo to accompany youDoesn't hurt to be prepared or to have our loyal family butler there to keep us company.
>>47656087Okay.>But it refused.
>>47655991>1. Stay in your fancy garb2. Ask Danzo to accompany youBest dad is a best.
Fancypants field trip with DanzoWriting
>>47656110>inb4 the Snow kidnaps him to make him BOX OF SCRAPS and Team Princess has to go get him>inb4 we lose another be-spectacled male authority figure>inb4 Danzo is our legal guardian and we ROOT Princess
Can we create an attack that's like a mini metor shower if we get the chance? I think it will be a great way to distract our enimies. Though I think that might be too advanced.
>>47656226Anon,plz. Wargle wouldn't be that sadistic of taking away our loving father. R-right?
>>47656238Sure. Ask again when your stellar mastery allows you to use it more effectively.
>>47656226pls, as if dad wouldn't build something to get himself out
>>47656251Look at your reflection in the cracked lenses of sensei's glasses and ask that question again
>>47656226I am surprisingly okay with this. I mean our back story is way too happy. Dead dad? Perfect!
>>47656284In comes the Narutony stark armor
>>47656326Well, the mother dying in childbirth without the baby dying too is exceptionally rare, that part of the story is a little suspect.
>>47656326I don't think our backstory is too happy. Our mother is dead, father is too busy with work, Danzo is leading us to a "dark" path and we're going to make enemies.And prom is tomorrow!
>>47656384Don't forget our first teacher dying to his own backstory on the very first mission.
>>47655104>I’ve yet to find a reliable way to power the thing without overburdening itWhy don't we power it using our miniature suns?
>>47656433We become the heart of a warship?
>>47656384>>47656428On the other hand we are rich and talented, have rich, talented friends, an awesome superpower, a fucking batcave, and a pretty great surrogate father/role model
>>47656433>>47656457suite yourselves, i don't want to be a livin battery that part of matrix made no sense
You don’t really feel like changing. You really like this dress, and you don’t really get to wear it enough anyway. Quickly, you grab a few things from your room- your ninja tools, primarily. You also grab your headband and tie it around your arm. You’d look silly wearing it normally with this outfit.As you leave, you stop by where Danzo waiting. “Would you come with me, Danzo? I’d like to have you accompany me, if you would.”He actually seems a little surprised.“I don’t know if that’s wise, Tsuki-dono. I wouldn’t want their opinion of me to affect their opinion of you…” he says.“Nonsense, Danzo. You’re my loyal retainer, teacher, and friend. Besides, you need to get out in the sun more.” you tease.“I concede. Give me a moment to get ready.” he says, smiling.After a few minutes, he returns, and the two of you set off towards the arena where the exam is being held. It’s hard to miss- you could almost hear the cheering of the crowds from your front yard. As you approach, you see the guards eye Danzo, but otherwise let you through without any trouble. You head up into the stands- it’s certainly packed full! You can see many of the villagers come to watch the sport, as well as some shinobi from other Villages. You count them off- Amegakure, Kusagakure, Takigakure…. And, off to one side, in a private booth, General Doto and his shinobi from Yukigakure. You also see many of your friends- although they seem to be spaced out amongst the crowd.You…1. Go visit someone. (Who)2. Go to the Hokage’s Booth3. Try to wrangle a private booth of your own4. Just sit with Danzo
>>476565121. Go visit someone. (Who)Nori or Hinata, whoever we see first.
>>47656512>3. Try to wrangle a private booth of your own>4. Just sit with DanzoGet a good view can Danzo can drop us hints as to what he thinks is going on. Most people are also loathe to piss of Danzo even now
>>47656512>1. Go visit someone. (Who)Hinata
>>47656505Quite clever to make the rules of the simulation such that the very purpose of the simulation becomes unbelievable.
>>47656512>1. Go visit someone. (Who)One of our teammates, or anyone we're friends with.
>>47656512Hinata, for advice on how to try to mess with neji's game.
>>47656512>1. Go visit someone. (Who)Hinata.
>>47656512>4. Just sit with DanzoGet some popcorn cause this is gonna be good.
>>47656512>4. Sit with DanzoPeople still don't like him and we should cheer him up.
>>47656529Supporting the Princess Booth, pay someone off if we must.>Money is its own superpower.
>>47656512>3. Try to wrangle a private booth of your ownIf that fails sit with Hinata or Danzo.
>>47656512>1. Go visit someone. (Who)Our lovely teammates
>>47656512>4. Just sit with DanzoDanzo needs some cheering up, dude just sits in our manor and is disliked by most people in the village
>>47656531It was a case of executive meddeling the original script had the humans used as cheap bioprocessors.besides : Matrixcursion grubles avout the missuse of inception
>>47656589Yeah but I'm just saying it doesn't HAVE to break physics because physics doesn't have to work the way we think it does in the "real world"
>>47656589Using people as bio-computers makes much more sense.
>>476565123. Try to wrangle a private booth of your own4. Just sit with DanzoBut first find and invite Nori and Hinata to join us.
>>47656628but then you're using people as bio-computers to keep them from realizing you're using them as bio-computers
>>47656664I didn't say it made COMPLETE sense, just more sense.
>>47656512>>47656529This give the poor guy a little time in the sun and a little joy. He may be serious and a war hawk but everyone needs a day to relax.
>>47656512>1. Go visit someone. (Who)HinataJoin us down in the dark...
Hinata, then Booth and Danzo.Writing.
First thing’s first- you require a booth. The unwashed masses might damage your dress, and you can’t have that. You head inside, towards the registration desk.The young woman working the desk looks up at you as you approach.“Yes, miss? What can I help you with? The clerk asks.“Hello, I’m Tsuki Norihime. I cannot seem to find my booth- could you please point me in it’s direction?She looks down at her papers…“I’m sorry Ms. Norihime, but I don’t see any registered booths under your name…”Your eyebrows twitch.“Surely there’s been a mistake….”You….1. Bribe her2. Charm Her3. Intimidate Her
>>47657024>2. Charm Her
>>47657024>3. Intimidate Her
>>476570242. Charm HerThrow it up to 11 on the cuteness factor, start playing with your hair if you have to
>>47657024>1. Bribe herMoney, get backI'm all right, Jack, keep your hands off of my stack.Money, it's a hitDon't give me that do goody good bullshitI'm in the hi-fidelity first class traveling setAnd I think I need a Lear jet
>>476570242. Charm Herif that fails1. Bribe her
>>47657024> Charm herWe are cute princess
>>47657024>Charm her with moneyUse both of our strengths."Are you sure? I can see my name right there. *Hand a stack of ryo*"
>>47657024>1. Bribe her>2. Charm HerStart with the charm, then a little bribe to thank her for her help in this matter.
>>47657024>2. Charm Herwith bribe as backup.
>>47657024Charm only! If that fails, having to deal with the masses is our punishment for not having been charming enough, to motivate us to so better next time!
Money got us that fucking headbanddon't fix what ain't broke yo
I don't know if any o this is a good idea
I'd have though having fuckin Danzo over our sholder would make things go smoother, no one fucks with Danzo.
Charming Princess no Jutsu!(Roll 1d100, +10. First three.)
Rolled 82 (1d100)>>47657154ohoho
>>47657024>2 Charm her.
Rolled 20 (1d100)>>47657154OHOHOHOHO-
Rolled 17 + 10 (1d100 + 10)>>47657154WE CUTE LADY!
Rolled 14 + 10 (1d100 + 10)>>47657154
Rolled 70 + 10 (1d100 + 10)>>47657154Will of fire
>>47657154>>47657173>92Charming as fuck.
>>47657173Bless you anon and your subtle "ohoho".
>>47657120We had to start using underhanded buisness ways some day. How can we inherit our father's business if we can't handle a bit of briding?
>>47657173good job anon.
>>47657173>>47657178>>47657179Please be best of three.
>>47657200well we can only be an effective bride once, and we better snatch up a powerful name or genes
>>47657237Haku could be a choice
>>47657237I miss my autocorrect.>>47657251No, thanks. His heart already belongs to a certain someone.Also,>being a pseudo-lesbo
>>47657251Yeah but you really think anons are going to wait till then?
>>47657303With the other prospects that we have now, yes
>>47657251only thing he brings to the table is his kekkei genkai, but we have Stellar release alreadyso he ain't got nothing
>>47657319We should hookup with a family who has a secret technique or unique none chakra based mutation
>>47657251I was the first one to bring Haku up as a compromise between the anons that wanted yuri, anons that wanted an heir, and anons who wanted someone who wasn't Lee. I'm for either Lee or Haku.
>>47657319Pretty face, new Kek Kek, strong shinobi, intelligent?
Neji is legitimately the only good choice from canon for bringing the Norihime back to prominence since basically everyone else is a clan heir and would just mean the Norihime have been absorbed. Unfortunately he's also a dick.
>>47657359>Neji is legitimately the only good choiceBooNeji a shit.
>>47657391You'll find that I noted that.
>>47657359dosn't matter if he's a dick, we'd just have to break him down until he's nothing but an obedient puppy like any good wife
>>47657359> Clan heirsTechnically they're not all heirs.Everyone and their mom just headcanons it.
>>47657398I stopped reading after you said Neji was a good choice.
Neji literally a shit, can we get somebody who doesn't hate our BFFs guts?
DC: 90! PASS!You lean forward unto the desk, and smile."I'm just trying to easier on the contestants, you know? A cute girl like myself, all dressed up, vulnerable and alone, ready to be swept off my feet at any moment? They would simply clamor all over themselves to be in my presence! Oohohoho!~"The clerk just looks at you for a moment.... and nods her head."Very well. We had a booth saved for any other potential VIPs; obviously you fit that bill perfectly. Enjoy yourself, Ms. Norihime."You aren't sure if that actually worked, or if she just gave up to be rid of you- you aren't that great at charming ladies.Regardless, you have your booth. You head back to Danzo and tell him it's location- then you go to find Hinata.(cont)
>>47657403But slave and master is boring. Two strong-willed people fighting for domiance but at the end of the day, they still love each other dearly.
>>47657403If there's anybody we're gonna be pegging it's gonna be Haku!
>>47657430>>47657436we got at least 4 year IC do decide on anyone really
>>47657425We absolutely can, but it's not going to be great for bringing a good technique or bloodline into the Norihime line, was my initial point. Unless we go into OCs.
So, will our eternal rival be a fire user with a bird motif?
You find Hinata sitting by her father, Hiashi, and several other Hyuga clan members.“Tsuki-hime! Over here!” she waves you over, excitedly.You sit down next to her on the bench.The crowd is murmuring- it’s so loud you can barely think straight. Good thing you’ve got a booth.You and Hinata make a bit of small talk- it seems the first semi-final match, Neji vs Hyo- the genin from Yukigakure, is coming up shortly. Seems General Dato will get what he came for very shortly.You…1. Ask Hinata Something (What?)2. Go back to the booth to get ready for the fight.
>>47657532Ho-oh is our rival
>>47657536>2. Go back to the booth to get ready for the fight.
>>47657536>1. Ask Hinata Something (What?)rooting for anyone in particular? are they cute?ohohoho
>>47657359As far as Konoha goes then ya but we have better options outside the villageWe could go for Kumo:CDaruiAtsuiOmoiSuna:KankuroSasoriMist:ZabuzaHakuSugetsuChojuroIwa:AkatsuchiKonoha:NejiLeeKabutoShika
>>47657536>1. Ask Hinata Something (What?)Tell Hinata where we are if she needs us. Tell her we're looking forward to seeing this and don't worry we'll be watching and figure out tips to help her, we don't forget what we promised.
>>47657536>1. You managed to talk your way into a booth, ask if Hinata would like to help you find Nori and join you.
>>47657536>1. Ask Hinata Something (What?)this >>47657555always tease Hinata>>47657560She's 12.
>>47657536>1. Ask Hinata Something (What?)She exited? Wanna come to our booth?
>>47657536"So hypothetically speaking, if a girl wanted to fuck with your cousin's focus at the worst moment of a fight. How would you recommend that?"
Tease and Invite to boothWriting.
Might as well get working again, wich i could draw better.Hairstyle ok?
>>47657555>RootingHAHAHA I get it! Cause Hyo is from Root
>>47657611Maybe have the drills closer to the face? They seem a bit distant.
>>47657611 I realize this is an anime quest. But goddamn that hair is pretty fucking anime.
>>47657611I knida like your style anon. I agree with that other anon about the hair being closer. Maybe make the skin slightly darker in case our mom is black?
>>47657664Dad like the chocolate, is he an Akamichi?
>>47657664We could be Samui's cousin anonTeam Megamilk confirmed
>>47657611Pretty good though the drills might need to be closer to the head and a bit smaller.>>47657664But darker skln tone doesn't really look good with our hair color
“So, Hinata. Rooting for anyone in particular?” you say with a wry smile“N-no, not really. I’d like to see Neji and Naruto in the final bout, though.” she says, glancing over to her father.You laugh.“Also, I managed to get a booth- you can come sit with me, if you’d like.Hinata smiles. “I’d like to, but I should stay with my family until Neji’s match is over. I can stop by during Naruto’s match, though.”Fair enough.“Have you seen Hinata anywhere? You inquire, while standing up. “I think she’s with her father in the Kage booth, although I’m not sure.” she answers.You bid her farewell- and head on up to your booth, where Danzo is waiting.“The fights should start soon, Tsuki-dono. Is there anything in particular you’re looking to accomplish?”1. No, I just want to watch the fights2. Tell him of your promise to Hinata3. I want to know more about the abilities of Nori’s brother.
>>47657698>2. Tell him of your promise to Hinata
>>476576983. I want to know more about the abilities of Nori’s brother.
>>47657698>“Have you seen Hinata anywhere? You inquire, while standing up.Ha!>2. Tell him of your promise to Hinata>3. I want to know more about the abilities of Nori’s brother.
>>47657698God, I'm fucking it up tonight. It's supposed to say "Have you seen Nori anywhere?"Time for that Red Bull
>>47657698>“Have you seen Hinata anywhere? You inquire, while standing up. Nori?>>476576982. Tell him of your promise to HinataAny flaws you see would be wonderful Danzo, you have more experiences and a better eye than I do.
>>47657698>2. Tell him of your promise to Hinata>3. I want to know more about the abilities of Nori’s brother.Also think ya meant Nori is in the Hokage box yeah?
>>47657698>3. I want to know more about the abilities of Nori’s brother.besides making Hyuuga bitches moist
>>47657681Since when has darker colors not complimented brighter colors? I can see it in my head and it fits just as well as the current color artists use for her skin.
>>47657698>2. Tell him of your promise to Hinata>3. I want to know more about the abilities of Nori’s brother.
>>47657755But I like the current color already. No need to change it.
Lets just ask Wargle, is our mom black or white?
>>47657772You would like white you...you... racist! its just a prank bro
Ask if Danzo would lik ea drink or something, ensue we are comfy and set for a good time. Tell Danzo how we wanna help Hinata beat Neji so we are going to try to search for methods to beat him
>>47657792a nice tall glass of the blood of his enemies with Hiruzen's tears as a chaser
>>47657785I like the skintone she has in most of these pictures. She's like a light caramel color- darker than all the konoha shinobi, anyway
Also, 2 & 3Writing.
>>47657848dedbisu makes me depressed
>>47657848>>47657881We need a new pic with Itachi.
>>47657887Let's leave that up to our kind drawfag.
>>47657848So Tsuki is white chocolate?
>>47657919I know. Just mentioning it.
>>47657938Wow...i must have been tired when I did that, that grammar failure, sorry folks
>>47657938That's so cute!
“Well, for one, I promised Hinata I’d help her beat Neji.” you say, while looking out the booth window to the battlefield.“Oh-ho, did you now? That would be interesting. You’ve never seen Hyuga fight each other, I’d wager. Poetry in motion.” he says with laughter in his voice. “She probably shouldn’t rely on her clan skills- we’ll have to see what else the boy can do.”“I do know a few things-” you start. “The blindspot of the Byakugan is above the third thoracic vertebrae, and I know Neji knows the Gentle Fist arts of the Hyuga clan.” This time, Danzo quirks an eyebrow. “Found that out on your own, did you? Good. Also know that Byakugan users have issues seeing things coming from below ground, as well.”You make a mental note of this new fact.“Also, I’d like to see what Nori’s brother is capable of.” you muse aloud.“I’d wager that’s why a good many people are here. Not often does the child of an active Hokage participate in these events. People want to see what he’s capable of. We’ll just have to see.”The crowds murmurs grow even louder- the fight is probably about to start.You…1. Sit and watch the fight between Neji and Hyo, without interfering2. Try to distract Neji3. Do something else (What?)
>>47657967>1. Sit and watch the fight between Neji and Hyo, without interfering
>>47657967>1. Sit and watch the fight between Neji and Hyo, without interferingDon't be rude. Maybe just wink at him, he'll see it and may try to show off. But nothing more we must not be seen to influence the contest.
>>47657967>1. Sit and watch the fight between Neji and Hyo, without interferingDon't want to damage our family's name and standing.Can we pratice our hand signs?
>>47657997Forget about that last part. I say studying them closely.
>>47657967>1. Sit and watch the fight between Neji and Hyo, without interferingAsk Danzo if he can give increasingly difficult questions so we can work in our tactics while watching a fight?
>>47657997Hey if he's that distractable he clearly wouldn't make a good chuunin yet anyway. its merely not the right time.
Sit and watch.Writing.(May take a bit, will post as I finish them.)
>>47657967If we catch his eye, wink at him but nothing more
Everyone just ignoring the fact the Hyo is from Root?
>>47658188We're playing it cool, Anon.
>>47658188Noted, not much to do with that knowledge
>>47658188Why would the princess know?
I don't think Tsuki knows that.
>>47658248>>47658231>>47658188Different Hyo, anons. Didn't remember that there was an ANBU agent named Hyo. His full name is Hyo Arashi, or hailstorm. My bad.
We know OOC but not IC. IC we' suspect Danzo hadn't just stopped but we have 0 info on ROOT atm so nothin to go on.
The crowd begins to cheer- you see Neji appear at one end of the arena, followed by a boy you don’t recognize; probably Hyo.You see the match proctor jump down and say something to the fighters, then he turns to address the audience.First Semi-Final Match!--Neji Hyuga!--Loud cheers echo through the arena….--Versus!----Hyo Arashi!--Comparatively silent- although you see Doto’s shinobi cheering him on, while Doto himself stays quiet, observing.--Begin!--The two ninja immediate jump apart, and the proctor leaps up to the judge’s booth.They begin by throwing kunai at one another- you don’t think either of them believe it will work, but are just testing out the enemy ninja.Quickly, they both shift gears. Hyo begins throwing small things that look to be smoke bombs- but very quickly you release these things pack as much explosive power as an explosive tag. Neji must have already known this, as he continues to dodge. You can already see what he’s trying to do- dodging away from the bombs while trying to close the distance between them.Hyo must also see this, as he’s attempting to stay away from Neji at all costs. This goes on for bit before you notice it- slowly, Neji is catching up. If this continues-Suddenly, as Neji get closer, Hyo produces two scrolls, splashing them both with blood as they unfurl. Bombs begin raining down on Neji from all sides….
>>47658280I'm really not sure we IC suspect that. Danzo wouldn't lie to us!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UWwlo5DdOos“Eight Trigrams! Palms Revolving Heaven!” you hear Neji shout- suddenly, he’s a whirling cyclone of chakra! The bombs are being deflected- showing off in a multitude of directions. As they explode, Neji jumps up through the dust kicked up by the explosions. His Byakugan are active- trying to track his enemy through the cloud. He darts off again, their combat punctuated by the sounds of explosions. You notice something else, though- the dust isn’t getting worse. If the bombs were continually exploding,shouldn’t it perpetuate the cloud? The, you see it- glistening ice patches, covering parts of the field. How…? Then, you see it. You imagine Neji does, as well. At some point, Hyo switched bombs- these ones he’s throwing now are creating the icy patches. As the dust finally clears, you can see that almost half of the arena is covered in ice. For the first time, Hyo speaks.“Ice Technique! Creeping Glacier!”The ice, slowly, begins to spread.Neji immediately takes off toward Hyo-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oU7zEJMZIVY“Ice Technique! Swallow Snow Storm!”Several icy blue shapes begin springing from the ever growing ice patches- they sort of look like birds.Collectively they all fly at Neji-“Fire Release! Great Fireball Technique!” Neji yells again. The erupting blaze consumes the icy birds- enough that he’s able to get by them, and land.The birds, however, keep coming.You see the veins around his eyes bulge-“Eight Trigrams! 32 Palms!” He unleashes a flurry of blows- shattering the birds with every strike. You had seen Hinata use this technique before-“64 Palms!”There’s more?“128 Palms!”You can barely see the strikes- it’s seemingly a continuous flurry of blows as Neji’s fists continually destroys the icy birds.Hyo has landed nearby- he seems entirely focused on creating the ice birds as the ice patches continue to expand.He seems to have Neji entirely pinned down-“Ice Technique! Thousand Ice Needles!”You see icy spears begin to poke out of the ice patches- and launch towards Neji!Just as you think it’s over-
“Fire Release! Flame Whirlwind!”Neji is spinning towards Hyo- his body a flaming projectile. You’re not sure if the ice needles are able to pierce his technique or not-But the technique his Ryo dead-on. He’s launched far into the air- and the fireball detonates.You see Neji, standing underneath. He must’ve released it at the very last second. He’s covered in slashes, from the birds and the needles, no doubt. His hands are red and swollen.Hyo, however, is covered in ash, laying in a heap after falling."Hyo is unable to continue!"“The Winner is Neji Hyuuga!"
Neji has won. How do you react?1. Cheer!2. Smile, but nothing more3. Keep an even gaze behind your fan.4. Boo audibly
>>476585712. Smile, but nothing moreOnly if he looks at us
>>47658571>3. Keep an even gaze behind your fan.
>>47658571>Ohohoho behind your fan
>>476585713. Keep an even gaze behind your fan.But ole X-ray eyes may see us doing 2. Smile, but nothing morefrom behind the fan.
3 but also maybe 2, just a little.Writing.
>>47658571>3. Keep an even gaze behind your fan.Let him see a flicker of a smile
>>47657611OC is always great but I feel like that 1st picture got the hair style down pretty well. Nifty anyway.
You extend one of your war-fans, keeping eyes on Neji with an even gaze.But behind the fan, you smile. It was a good victory, for both Neji and yourself.You now know that there is no way Hinata is going to be Neji conventionally. He’s several magnitudes above her in mastering the Hyuga close combat techniques- Hinata could spend time catching up- or, she could spend time learning other things, things she could actually damage Neji with.All things to think about.As the cheers roars throughout the arena, you see General Doto stand and leave. He isn’t going to watch the rest of the matches…?While considering this, the door to your booth is burt open!However, it’s just Nori- dragging Hinata behind her.“Hey princess! Heard this booth is all yours!” Nori greets you, in her usual brusque manner.She produces Hinata- who glaring angrily at Nori.“You didn’t need to drag me here, Nori. I could’ve easily walked.” Hinata pouts.“Yeah right! You were too busy boring holes into the arena floor with those super-eyes of yours, ya know?” Nori says- although she’s laughing about the whole endeavor. “What a fight! I’m excited to see my brother beat his ass, though.” Nori is smiling widely- you can tell she’s really enjoying the fights.“...oh, uh, who’s the geezer?” Nori says, pointing to Danzo.He’s…1. My loyal servant!2. A teacher and friend.3. A friend of my father’s.4. He was here when I got here!
>>47658708>2. A teacher and friend.
>>47658708>5, My Butler and my friend
>>47658708>2. A teacher and friend.And he is not a geezer Nori! Be respectful.
>>47658708>A loyal servant, teacher and friend.
Lets not reveal that were being trained by Danzo to the Hokage's daughter
>>47658708>2. A teacher and friend.>3. A friend of my father’s.
>>47658729We could just say he's a teacher of the fine arts. Not really a lie.
>>47658729He trained us at home on the basics, anon, and only the basics.That's how we got so good so early.That's the official story, anyway.>>47658708>2. A teacher and friend.>3. A friend of my father’s."He taught me stuff when I was still in the Academy."
>>47658708>2. A teacher and friend."And he's not THAT old! Geeze."
2 & 3.Writing.Will probably be wrapping up, because my grammar and syntax is going out the window quickly.The red bull was not enough.Guess I'll just have to run tomorrow. Darn.
>>47658708>OtherThis is Danzo my Father's Loyal friend and also mine, Please try not to be to rude Nori. Introduce everyone get that out the way. Something tells me Danzo may bail at this point, not that I blame him.
>>47658760oh noooo, my fav up and coming quest is happening again, woe is me.
>>47658760If we're saying both maybe the right term would more be family friend?
>>47658760>Guess I'll just have to run tomorrow. Darn.Oh what a shame~!
>>47658777>Best up and coming quest>Not Mecha Space PirateCome on anon
>>47658799That's past thread 30 or so. It's not up and coming anymore.
“This is a friend of my father and I’s, and my tutor while I was in the academy. His name is Danzo.” you respond.“Afternoon, girls. I take it you’re enjoying the fights?” he says with a smile. You can tell Danzo is trying hard to be sociable.“Oh, hey! I’m Nori, and this is Hinata. But I guess you probably knew that already, huh? Yeah, I’m having a blast- Hinata needs to cheer up, though.” Nori says, prodding Hinata further.“I’m not upset, Nori! I’m just trying to think…” Hinata blurts in response.You can imagine she’s thinking quite hard, theorizing after that last bout.As the four of you interact, you hear the crowd murmuring again.Neji has left the arena, and Hyo has been collected by the medical-nin.You here the proctor announcing once more.Naruto Uzumaki!VS!Sai Hatake!The next round is starting….
>>47658851>Sai Hatake!>HatakeSo he's related to Kakashi here?
And that's a wrap gentlemen. I'll be running tomorrow as well, as it's getting late. I'll probably try writing out most of the fight sequences ahead of time, to save us time.@WargleQM for death threats and other fanmailThread will be tomorrow sometime- check the twitter for more reliable updates.Post thread begins now!
>>47658873Thanks for running, Wargle.
>>47658851>>47658873did he get a childhood in this universe?Sai with a personality is weird and scarythanks for running
>>47658864>>47658886Kakashi adopted him as his brother.
>>47658873So who is twitching herder from Nori's etiquette Danzo or Tsuki?What are the stats of Neji and his team like?Seems everyone is running around with fire jutsu at the moment, nice fight though.
>>47658914Neji's adept in fire, so him knowing some made sense, especially given how much of a tryhard he is. He wasn't gonna win with just Gentle Fist- at least not right now.
>>47658919When Root folded, a lot of orphans didn't have homes- and Kakashi WAS in Root, lest you forget.
>>47658944So who's twitching harder Tsuki or Danzo? Lorebin of changes of canon?
>>47658935Interesting.>>47658944I did read that a few days ago then forgot.Does Kakashi have any loyalty to Danzo at all? Or any affection?
>>47658914Tsuki. Danzo really doesn't care how Nori acts.Neji is his canon self at this point in time, with some jutsu taught by Kakashi and others. You'll see what the other two are capable of.
>>47658952He wasn't in Root very long before it folded, so he wasn't ever fully indoctrinated. He understands Danzo's thought processes and motives, though.
>>47658950I haven't made a lorebin because too much of it would be spoilers. Nothing Pre-end of Shinobi World War 3 has changed at all.
>>47658973I bet he does.>>47658981Curse Seal!Tsuki when?
>>47658981General History that Tsuki knows then? Just really curious what's different.
>>47658985You honestly think people are gonna try to go find ebin snek man? Because I don't lol
>>47659006If he gave a complete list of changes, it would probably spoil a lot of great twists that are coming up. Half the fun is piecing together the history based on what we know from canon and what Wargle tells us. Enjoy the ride.
>>47659006The biggest difference you would learn from that is that the 9-tails attack never happened- but that isn't the change I made, just a symptom of it.Most of the juicy stuff isn't general knowledge. Some things are obvious, like the Uchiha are obviously still present, but the why of which is spoiler territory.
>>47659007best Puppet/bot for life
>>47659007We won't need to find him.He'll find us.And I was just wondering, since she's a rich only child with a strange new release.
>>47659033>but the why of which is spoiler territory.Danzo bribed them all?
>>47659036He has to find out, first. He's a little busy right now, anyway~
>>47659033Is the change that Kaguya died rather than being sealed?
>>47659062As much as that would simplify things, no. Like I said, I haven't purposely changed anything that happened prior to the end of ninja ww3
>>47659040Danzo removes Uchiha, he doesn't pay them.
>>47659086The Third or Fourth, then?
maybe Obito really died, nah.
>>47659094The Fourth being alive to deal with them helped. But it wasn't him alone that stopped the coup
>>47659115what i wonder is, why nori has Kyubi powers when kushina is still alive
>>47659135maybe they Divided Karuma into Yin/Yang and put it into the kids, Uzamaki can survive the extract.
>>47659154Possible, but why would you take a tailed beast out of a perfectly fine jinchuriki and then split it in two?
>>47659135>>47659154>>47659175All will be revealed in time, anons
>>47659211Looking forward to it.It just strikes me as odd.Most curious if naruto has any part of the kyubi at all, but i guess we may see some of that during his fight with neji.
done with this....