You awake to the your dimly lit bedroom. The only illumination coming from your blaring alarm clock, wich colores the darkness blue.You reluctantly push yourself upright, shaking your head to stave of sleep."Maid-" you yawn, adressing your domestic help AI, that you affectionaly named maid. Covering your mouth for a moment, you finally utter "Shut up." stoping the annoying alarm.You crack your neck, checking the time. 4:00 am, Sunday, June 15, 3015 AD. "A day I'll never forget..." you mutter queitly to yourself. Today's the day you leave Mars for Earth, thanks to a well earned goverment scholarship. Against all ods, this simple martian farm girl will be enrolling in one of the most prestigous educational institutions in the Solar system You will be going to...>Solar Merchant Naval Academy Preparing you for your duties as deck officer on ship, in atmosphere or out of it. Chart new Maps, Advance your business, or serve our Navy >ESEP pilot academyGet the best training from the most complete pilot training school in the system. Take control of aircraft, shuttles, ships, and more.>Terran Military AcademyBecome an officer in the armed forces of Earth. Fighting to secure the most obscure regions of the Human empire. >Choose!!Prepare for your new life in the skies and beyond
>>45275945>twitterhttps://twitter.com/makingwolvorineFucking almost forgot. I am the worst QM ever
>>45275956Ignore this actually, I want:>Solar Merchant Naval Academy
If your Parents were alive right now, your sure they would've been proud of your succes."Maid, lights" you command, having to adress the secondrate AI before issuing a command. Most other AI are smart enough to know when there being adressed. Of course, your family was never the richest. Even still, your glad to still have her. The lights erase the shade, revealing your sterile white bedroom. Blue lights flickering from random accessories around the room." Maid-" what a stupid name, what were you thinking."get my stuff the train""Acknowledged, your luggage is now being ferried to the station." Your glad your house was built closer to the railways than to the farm.Gives you morre time o sleep. You always remind yourself that your Ancestors never lived like this. For them a life like this would have been luxiourius. You live like aKing compared to them.In any case you have flight to get to. You take amoment to change into your favourite outfit. Skirt, Shirt and Hoodie, simple yet comfortable. All blue of course, blue is the best colorTaking a moment to admire yourself in the mirror, your pinkish white skin, brown eyes and brunette hair, you make your way out.
>>45276174Within a few minutes you reach the station. There weren't alot of people this time of day. But there were a few and one was waving at you."Abigail!!" says she, the ginger who haunts your life.You...>Try your best to igore her>Greet her(that took too long, I think)
>>45276235>Try your best to ignore herWe got stuff to do
>>45276235>Try your best to igore her
"ABIIIIIGGAAIIIIIIIL!!!" she says with a smile, like she was doing something enjoyable. Ugh. It's not like you hate her butyou can't really deal with her "interesting" personality right now.Tessa Archer can wait for nowWith that in mind you run, run as fast as you can to train entrance."Abigaiiiil! Where ya going?!" she cries from behind me.You pat your pockets to stop anything from falling out and double time it as much as you could. You're glad you have technologyto carry your bags to the train ahead of you instead of carrying them like some 21st century traditionalist._______You catch your breath as you reach the train. Carrying your very crumpled, almost torn, ticket. Good thing you had a seat reserved.Though you feel bad abut almost kicking a security drone in the face and about running from your freind... well acquiantance.But your here ow and that's what matters.Entering the graffiti covered train, you make your way to your seat and relax. It will take around 30 minutes for the Maglev train to getto the space port. You take a deep breath and close youre eyes, getting ready take a nap. Not the most advisable thing to do right now but what the hell.You thank whatever engineer tough coloring the train interior black, you fall into a light sleep."Your s'cute when you sleep.""WHA!!!" you squeak, jolting upright in you're seat Tessa's giggles are all that greet you're confusion.>What are you doing here?!>RUN!!
>>45276552>What are you doing here?!
There is a silence as you're brain tries to catch up."Abbie?" she asks tilting her head.You feel the train start to move as your brain takes in this bullshit. The first thing that it tells you to do is RUN!!You jump to you're feet, ready to run. But it seems the god of bosily hates you're ass. You end up tripping into the peron you're running.Before you can get of her, she pulls closer and hugs you tight."I got ya!" she giggles "That was fun, now it's you're turn to try and catch me!"You feel like crying.__________"I'm going home!!" she says enthusiastically, sitting across from you.Wait. Home? You're not sure were that is, you never asked, but it's definitely somepwhere not where you are!"Thats great!" you say with a wide sincere smile."Isn't it? I always wanted to see Earth." you're smile freezes "What?""I'm going to Earth, to Solar Merchant..."she pauses, putting a finger to her chin"...something Academy."Oh gods why.You bump youre head against the window.[1/?]
>>45276235>>45276552>>45276821We keep on voting to avoid that damn girl, but she keeps on coming.Are we powerless? How pointless are our choices?
>>45276821You reach the spaceport in due time. Everything is on schedule, so all you have to do is board a shuttle. You pride yourselfe in planning ahead.Unfortunately, you did not plan for Tessa, who has a seat reserved RIGHT BESIDE YOU. It's lik the cosmos enjoy you're suffering. The only thing that could make this worse is if she'll be your roomate on the transport ship....You jinxed yourself. Goddamit."I can't believe will be on the same shuttle, in the same seat..." thats in the same row of seats you smartdumbass. " This is gonna be the best trip ever.""Yeah, great..." you say with the UTMOST enthusiasm.>Ask her a question (What?)>See if you can get you're seat changed>Accept you're fate as the Universe's chew toy
>>45276904It's an anime thing.>>45276821>>45276916I beg of you; stop mixing up "your" and "you're"
>>45276904Fear not friend you will finally get a choice that matters. Even though it doesn't seem like it.
>>45276916>See if you can get you're seat changed
>>45276928Yeah sorry, not really in the best state of mind right now.
>>45277201...Are you voting in your own quest?
>>45277201If you say so boss...
>>45277218>>45277221Unlikely, he is counting votes as always.
You sigh after a few minutes of shouting at a computer. You got you're seat changed, thank God. Tessa however is still with yu."B-but why?" she whimpersYou sigh.Now how to deal with this?"It'll..." you scratch your head "...be good for you."It's only know you notice she's wearing a blouse as you stare at it.Determined not to look her in the eye."Its... a good opportunity to make friends." YOu snap your fingers internally, somehow.She wipes her eyes "I g-guess so." she sniffs. "B-but you're the only one who likes me" she lies. Were the fuck did you get that idea."Look, you're a smart person..." that much is true, well kind of. "I know you are capable of... interacting with other people.""Yeah your right." She raises her chin and pushes out her chest. Running ahead to the shuttle. Good. You look out the window of the umbilical, slowly making your way to the shuttle._______At your seat you wait for the shuttle to take of. All the seats are pretty much full, all we're waiting for is your seatmate.You hear footsteps aproaching. Looking away from the window, determined to stop tessa from taking the seat beside you. You swear you'll-Thats better, way better."Oh, hey" Isaac Allman greets you with a smile that melts. His blue eyes piercing, seeminly glowing against is jet black hair >"Hi, how have you been">"What's an idiot like you doing here">"H-hi."
>>45277218Well not yet. Unless I have a evil twin out there, I haven't.
>>45277392>>"Hi, how have you beenTry not to spill spaghetti girl!
>>45277392>>"Hi, how have you been"
>>45277451Hello, their other QM.
>>45277479Gah, I forgot to untrip.Also, its "there", not "their."
>>45277489Wait, what?! Oh goddammit ! How did I not see that
>>45277435>>45277451Writing. Might be my last post for tonight ( or today were you guys probably are)
"Isaac!" you say happily. "How have you been?""Fine." He says noncommitaly, as he takes his seat. "How 'bout you." he asks."Great." really great.Although that feeling of greatness fades away though as an akward silence enseus."Uuuum, so..." you clear your throat "... where are you headed." you try."Earth." he says looking at his phone, doing something."Let me guess Solar Merchant Naval Academy?" Wow, it's only now you realize how bad that name was. It grates against your tongue."Yeah!" He looks at you. "How'd you know?"You chuckle."Let's just say the gods have been forgiven." He raises a brow. "Was that suppose to be a joke?"You sigh. " Yeah, one only I get.""Yeah well atleast someone gets it, right?" He scratches his lower lip. "There is nothing worse than telling a joke no one laughs at."He says laughing."You mean like waht you just did?" He stops laughing. He grins "Wasn't a joke though." He smiles at you. You can't help but smile backWhatever the reason, your glad is here.___________As the shuttle aproaches the transport ship that will take you the rest of the way to Eart, you engage in idle chatter with Isaac."...when Earth and Mars reach their closest piont, known as "opposition" than it shortens the ti..." You drift off letting the sound of his voice soothes you.[1/?]
>>45277862"Abby..." someone distant says"... wake up we're here"You yawn. "Where?" you ask a little annoyed. "Here, silly." he jokes. You open your eyes, and are greeted by the amazing visage of his face.You don't really know why you like him. Is it because you're in the same circumstances?It couldn't be physical attraction, most boys, espescially rich boys, beat him in that area. Altough that rounded face of his is pretty cute, you'lle admit."Good, you're finally awake. Have a nice dream?" who needs dreams when you're here."I guess." You offer, cracking your neck."We'll come on let's get to our room." Wait."We're roommates?" you ask carefully"Yup" he says. You've never been so happy to get a dirt cheap room. For once your frugality has paid of. You were even afraid of sharng a room with some stranger.But know there is no need to worr- Wait a minute."Isn't the room for four people." He tilts his head. "Yeeeeaah. Why?" He snaps his fingers"Right! I aready know who our roommates are, I met one of them""Who?!" you ask in horror."Well one is my sister..." good, thinking about it you've never met her before"... and the others that cute girl over their"He points at a girl who is not Tessa, thank god. You have to admit that girls pretty stunning."Her names Eve..." he nudges your shoulder. "what do you think, do I have chance with a girl like her."Wait!NO!>Yeah, sure you do buddy>No chance. AT ALL!!
>>45278104You might, but what are my chances with you?
>>45278306Well then you are the only one who replied. So you win.Writing.
>>45278104>>Yeah, sure you do buddy>>45278306please no
"You might, but what are my chances with you?" you ask without thinking. After a pregnant silence, you realize what you had done."S-sorry!" you say akwardly. He blinks, the only action he had taken in a while now."Ladies and gentlemen, the eagle has landed" the relaxed pilot anounces through the speakers. "All passengers , please disembark from the craft. It's not like you have anywhere to go, right?" He jokes."Please watch you're step as you leave the craft and have a nice trip."He addsWithout talking, Isaac, Wide eyed, just stands up and leaves, looking like he saw a puppy die. You facepalm, why did you say that. "Good job!" Someone near says. It was Terra, holding her thumbs up with that goofy smile of hers. You would do something to show your skepticism at the statement but you had no life left."Now that he knows you like him, he doesn't need to hide his feelins anymore!"You glare at her. "What are you talking about?"She smiles like someone who had done something clever. " He likes you to dummy!"And there's the thread. Ending it here since no one seems interested anymore and I need sleep.So live your opinions and stuf and the twitters is found above.Other than that, Failing Utopia quest seems to have failed. I've archived it for future referenceGood Night, Happy lunch, Good afternoon, or good morning wherever you are.
>>45278610 might post again on this thread or make anew one, depends on how long it takes for me to get back to this. I don't really have a lot of time on my hands
http://theoatmeal.com/comics/misspellingFix your grammar and people might not stab their eyes out the minute they read your writing.
>>45280944I don't notice any misspellings, just some comma misuse and capitalization errors.