With the help of his friends and some heartfelt speeches, Makoto managed to rescue a number of his allies from the clutches of the rival magical troupe, but only to learn that they believe *he* is the evil corrupter. Led by a mysterious advisor known only as Black Pepper, these girls stand opposed to his purification and have vowed to save all girls from him. Their reasons are unclear, but you aren't going to just let them do as they please. For now, though, you rest easy with what companions have remained with you.> Threads #1-8 Archive: http://archive.loveisover.me/d/search/subject/mahou/> Threads #9 onwards: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Maiden%20White> Twitter: https://twitter.com/questqyubey> Ask: http://ask.fm/Qyubey> Status: http://pastebin.com/02dU8UtdYou are Makoto Kiryoka; a teenage boy with a penchant for getting into strange situations. You bear the power of the Mahou Shoujo against the corrupted souls that seek to terrorise the innocent.> We did a destination vote last time, but I think people forgot most went to the Oomura manor. Do we still want to visit the shrine?
>>38702660"Whew." You sigh as you and your friends relax on the bleachers of the indoor sports centre of the school. The basketballer players from before have vacated the area as school is almost over, but your group is taking a breather. Things went a little better than you expected with Mai and her flunkies, but unfortunately your talk raised more questions than answers. Losing Hiroko to them was a blow, but her allegiance is tepid at best; assuming they can even fix Saito's magical imbalance to begin with. Regardless, your doubts and worries fade as Yui nuzzles under your chin, having repeatedly apologised for the past five minutes."You can stop now, it's alright. I'm just glad to have you back." You say, hugging her tightly to your chest."That's comforting to hear from you. I shouldn't have done something so stupid." She replies, rubbing her arm as you release the hug. "It's just between Hiroko, Mai, and their... 'black pepper' friend, they seemed to really believe in what they said; about corruption or awakening or whatever. They said they had a way of stopping the rampage without losing any powers or hurting people. I really wanted to believe." She sighs. It's hard to tell if that was one of their lies; they did seem convinced of their own position, however wrong it might be."It's... hard resisting the urge to indulge in your emotions like that. It can feel so good, Makoto, despite the pain and anguish. I thought that if there was even the slightest chance we could reconcile your purification with it then..." She bites her lip and pauses in her speech, looking away. "I'm sorry." She nestles her head onto you again, looking morose.> There's definitely more to this than we thought.> Just put it behind you, Yui.> Corruption is called that for a reason.[1/2]
>>38702722"And then you come in to 'clean up my mess', as it was." She giggles, looking up and down at you."Yeah, well, that's basically my job now." You reply, scratching your cheek. It's an odd remark, but you're just glad to see her smiling again. You take a step off the bleachers and turn to the group; Yui, Shun, Yuuki, and Naoki."Alright, it seems like Mai and her goons are going to cool off for a little while but I doubt they're going to let us go that easily. We need to be on guard for any more of their plans. We also need to find Shizuko and Saito. Shizuko could be useful for spying, and Saito is a target for his structure-forming powers, even if he doesn't realise he has them." You state, laying out your command."The rest of you should be safe, it's me they're afraid of, but that's no reason to let your guard down. They're our enemies now, and unless we can figure something out, we might end up fighting. I'd like to avoid that but I care more about keeping the people of this town safe. That sound good?" You ask, swinging out your arm. Your friends nod, and Shun gives a little whistle-cheer. You feel like you're getting the hang of this 'leader' thing, it feels good. You five head towards the doors of the room and exit out into the hall, where one of your classmates bumps into you."Oh, sorry, I was - Kiryoka!?" The girl says, clutching at some books at her chest."Uh, yeah. It's fine, just watch where you're... uhh?" You reply back happily to her, but peter out once you notice her stunned expression. She studies you for a moment, intently."You... are Kiryoka, right? Makoto?" She asks, pointing at you.> Yeah, what is it?> No, I'm actually a different Kiryoka entirely. *sarcasm*> Depends, why do you want to know?> If you don't mind, we are in a bit of a hurry.
>>38702743> There's definitely more to this than we thought.> If you don't mind, we are in a bit of a hurry.
>>38702722>> There's definitely more to this than we thought.The biggest problem of walking a tight rope without a net is that a single mistake can hurt both you and those you love about.>>38702743>> No, I'm actually a different Kiryoka entirely. *sarcasm*
>>38702743>> Corruption is called that for a reason.>> If you don't mind, we are in a bit of a hurry.So are we going to the manor?
>>38702743>>There's definitely more to this than we thought>>No, I'm actually a different Kiryoka entirely. *sarcasm*
So, right, I think that the Three Numbnuts are full of shit when it comes to "controlling" the corruption: letting it build up like a pressure cooker isn't controlling it, it's just making a bigger explosion.
>>38702912Probably. They need to have a way to either convert it, reduce it or release it.No matter how strong the structure, eventually it just will break under stress.
>>38702722>There's definitely more to this than we thought.>>38702743>Yeah, what is it?No need to be an asshole, and being semi-evasive is rather pointless
>>38702960I'm curious if there IS a way to actually use corruption so it dissipates: from everything we've seen using corruption doesn't make it go away, it just encourages the person to do more things that builds up more corruption.
>>38702722>There's definitely more to this than we thought.also, point >>38702912 this out. even if there is a secret to controlling the corruption, just using Structure to contain it clearly isn't enough> No, I'm actually a different Kiryoka entirely. *sarcasm*
>>38703122Uh, I'm pretty sure "There's more to this" is saying that we think Mai and the others are on to something, not that we think they are incorrect.
>>38702743>If you don't mind, we're in a bit of a hurryOh shit, don't tell me we're transformed or something
>>38702781>>38702875>>38702881>>38702910>>38703065>>38703122"There's definitely more to this than we thought." You mutter back to Yui as you caress her in your grip. She seems a little surprised to hear that from you. "I mean, I believe in my purification, but I don't know nearly as much I'd like to about what corruption actually is. If they weren't such jerks maybe we could have even collaberated." You tell her. The feeling seems to be mutual with her.--===--"No, I'm actually a different Kiryoka entirely." You reply sarcastically. You've had enough of people gawking at your androgyny, you don't need more, especially not right now."O-Oh, well you look an awful lot like him, but I never imagined he had the guts to walk around like that." The girl says, astonished."Like what?" You ask, raising an eyebrow. The girl stares at you, and you glance down. Your heart skips a beat when you realise, rather than your school uniform, you see the familiar lace and linens of a maid uniform. "AGH!" You shriek, stumbling backwards in surprise."Y... You didn't know?" The girl asks, her jaw dropping. You glance back at the group, particularly at Shun and Yuuki. Both of them take a second before they look down and see their own uniforms. Shun isn't too bothered but Yuuki goes bright red as he notices how many people are around."Again..." He mutters, slinking down to his knees in your custom-made dress. You glance back at the girl."So... who are you and why are you a maid?" She asks. A few people in the hall also seemed to have stopped to observe the conversation. You could swear some of them are there just to check you out.> I-I'm,uh ,in the cleaning club. We're... competing!> C-Cleaning, what else?> Um, no reason.> O-Okay, maybe I am Makoto, but...> I'm... Minako!> Mako... notoshi... sanzu... *continue rambling*> Oh, no-one important.
>>38703293> C-Cleaning, what else?> Oh, no-one important.
>>38703293> C-Cleaning, what else?> I'm... Minako!
>>38703293>C-Cleaning, what else?>O-Okay, maybe I am Makoto, but...
>>38703293>> I-I'm,uh ,in the cleaning club. We're... competing!>> Oh, no-one important.Seriously, we need to get back to the manor, because we sorta told Saito and Umeki to meet us there.
>>38703293>I-I'm,uh ,in the cleaning club. We're... competing!>Oh, no-one important
>>38703293>> I-I'm,uh ,in the cleaning club. We're... competing!>> Oh, no-one important.
>>38703293> C-Cleaning, what else?> I-I'm,uh ,in the cleaning club. We're... competing!> Oh, no-one important.
>>38703293>C-Cleaning, what else?>Oh, no-one important.
Rolled 2 (1d2)>>38703345>>38703366>>38703387>>38703411>>38703447>>38703473>>38703534>>38703549> No-one. Rolling for competing 1, and cleaning 2.Writing
>>38703575"Oh, no-one important." You say, smiling and sweating profusely. "I'm part of the cleaning club. We're..." You look around frantically but to no avail."...juuust cleaning. You know, how maids do." You shrug. Your excuses seem pretty weak to her and she leers at you, studying your face. You avoid her gaze and start edging away. "Sooo, we've got a lot to clean, yes. We'll just be going now." You mutter to her as you start to flee. She calls out after your group as you run, but you manage to escape fairly easily."Makoto, how could you walk around school and not realise you were in a maid outfit?" Yui asks, absolutely amazed."I didn't do it on purpose! I don't know, it didn't feel all that weird." You mutter back to her as you race through the hallways, trying to get outside as fast as possible. You see a glint in her eyes."W-Well, maybe next time you could try a uniform?" She asks, bringing her hands to her cheeks. "If you're willing to do this, I mean what's so bad about a skirt once in a while?" She suggests. She's trying to sound reasonable, but you can see the perverse ideas in her mind.> M-Maybe...> Agh, I don't know. Ask me later.> No way! I need to be twice as manly at school now.You utterly fail in blending in, but not everyone seems to peg you as a person they recognise. Those that do might have something to talk about though. Maybe you can lie about having a sister...Outside the gates of the school, you feel a lot more safe. Yuuki seems to be taking it almost as hard as you, but Shun is just twirling in her skirt."I don't wear these all that often. Heh, it's weird." She chuckles, tugging at the hem and spinning it. You could stand to see her in a cute dress more often..."So where are we headed?" Naoki asks. "You called everyone to the manor earlier but do we want to head back there?" He asks. The girls might be there, but that feels unlikely given they can't rely on Yui.> Manor> Shrine.> My House.> I don't know.
>>38703832>> M-Maybe..>> ManorNeed to make sure the Three Numbnuts are evicted.
>>38703832> Manor> M-Maybe...
>>38703832> M-Maybe...W-we've got to keep our cover up in front of naoki. Surely that's my only reason and no ulterior> Manor
>>38703832> M-Maybe...> ManorPeople are still waiting for us.
>>38703832>Agh, I don't know. Ask me later.>ManorRendevouz with Umeki and Yui's brother, demand that Yuuki/Robo spill on Black Pepper.
>>38703832>Agh, I don't know. Ask me later.>Manor
>>38703832>Agh, I don't know. Ask me later.>ManorGotta rescue the poor maids from Hana
>>38703886>>38703909>>38703919>>38703925>>38703979>>38704074>>38704119>>38704147"M-Maybe..." You mutter back to her as you run. It can't really get any worse than running around in a maid uniform as regular Makoto, can it?"REALLY?" You hear both Yui, *and* Shun respond as they clasp their fingers together with elated grins. Yui you understand, but Shun as well!? Uunh, this isn't going to end well for your masculinity, is it?--===--"Let's try the manor. But we need to make sure the three numbnuts are evicted first." You say, crossing your arms."A sentiment I can certainly agree with." Naoki retorts back, winking at you. You take a step back, hoping he doesn't try and make a move on you again. He pulls out his phone and orders an escort by maid, and sure enough their limosine pulls up a block away from the school."Cool! I've never ridden in a limo before." Shun gasps as the maid driver opens the passenger door."It's just a long, primitive combustion vehicle. What's the big deal?" Yuuki asks, frowning at it. Shun glares at him."Ruin this for me and I'll make sure Little Maid Yuuki becomes a first and foremost celebrity." She seethes back. That does wonders in shutting him up.The group of you pile in and ride back to the manor in style. The seats are plush and perfectly conditioned inside, and the vehicle is sealed in a way to even eliminate noise pollution from the engine and outside. It's honestly more comfortable than even your bed at home, so you slink back in your seat to relax. Shun enjoys herself by hanging out of the sunroof whilst Yuuki observes his surroundings, muttering "I could do better."> Ask Yui about Pepper/Mai and her gang.> Ask Yuuki about Pepper/Corruption.> Pop out the sunroof with Shun.> Silence Naoki about your 'moment' earlier.
>>38704169> Ask Yuuki about Pepper/Corruption.Make him spill the beans. He's been holding out on us and it almost cost us dearly.
>>38704169> Ask Yuuki about Pepper/Corruption.
But.... didn't we want to go to the shrine to make sure they didn't get caught up by the other group? Do you guys suddenly no longer care?
>>38704240Umeki and Momo are at the manor, as well as Hana and Saito.
>>38704169>> Ask Yuuki about Pepper/Corruption.>"REALLY?" You hear both Yui, *and* Shun respond as they clasp their fingers together with elated grins. Yui you understand, but Shun as well!?More things for them to bond over~
>>38704169>> Ask Yuuki about Pepper/Corruption
>>38704169>Ask Yuuki about Pepper/Corruption.Enough secrets Yuuki. You owe us the truth by now.
>>38704169> Ask Yuuki about Pepper/Corruption.> Pop out the sunroof with Shun.
>>38704209>>38704226>>38704277>>38704433>>38704447>>38704639With Shun enjoying herself and Yui and Naoki striking up a conversation, you turn to your own family to talk."Yuuki, what haven't you told me about corruption?" You say as he presses the windscreen up/down button repeatedly."Huh?" He replies, ceasing his action."I've had enough of your secrets, you owe me the truth by now." You say, crossing your legs and frowning. He glances down hesitantly."I-It's not like I want to be evasive, but there's just... agh, there some things I feel like you're better off not worrying about." He mutters, laying his head on the seat, watching the world pass by the window."I can appreciate you wanting to ease my burdens, but if you know something that could potentially put someone at risk, I won't forgive you for withholding it." You tell him firmly."Unngh..." He groans, churning up inside. "I... might not be able to tell you everything, but I'll tell you what I can. What did you want to know?"> Tell me about corruption.> Do you know who or what Black Pepper is?> Why have you been keeping Shun's focus?> Who is right, Mai or myself?
>>38704704>> Do you know who or what Black Pepper is?>> Tell me about corruption.>> Who is right, Mai or myself, neither, both?tell him we have one more question but will ask him in private.when we are alone.>> Why have you been keeping Shun's focus?
>>38704704> Tell me about corruption.
>>38704704>Tell me about Corruption>Do you know who or what Black Pepper is?>Why have you been keeping Shun's Focus?Oh, I think I know the last one.Because Yuuki and Robo have been becoming separate things. That's why he said he was circumventing something.
>>38704704> Tell me about corruption.> Do you know who or what Black Pepper is?> Why have you been keeping Shun's focus?Don't know if the last one could be answer without bias, even from an A.I.
>>38704704>> Tell me about corruption.>> Do you know who or what Black Pepper is?Don't ask who is right: we know that we are right, because we fight for Justice while Mai fights for her ego.
>>38704704all of them.
>>38704704ALL OF THEM.
>>38705017>>38705054More of them?We need to hug Yuuki when interrogations are done.
>>38704849Take out Shuns focus, I forgot they won't tell us about it at all.
>>38705108I am >>38704776 and i support this message
>>38705108Oh, we really do love our little brother, make no mistake.But now his secrets have led to people being hurt and a war between magical girls. We need answers if we're going to fix this.
>>38704776>>38704793>>38704808>>38704815>>38704849>>38704896>>38705017>>38705054"Then tell me about corruption." You flatly ask him. "I know it can cause girls to rampage if it grows unchecked, but how is that Mai and the others can use it like they do?" You ask, rubbing your chin. "Calling it something else doesn't change what it is.""It... might not be that simple." He replies, to your surprise. "Corruption isn't really a term we use internally. Don't get me wrong, it's technically correct; a change from the original state you might call erroneous, but almost every magical girl generates it as a result of emotional excess." He explains, pooling his hands in his lap."But I don't. How does it work for me?" You ask him, tilting your head."Your connection with the focus is important, but you get the most of your power from your will and emotions. It's all raw willpower for you, Makoto." He explains with a smile."The focus is... well, a focus for that energy. But use too much and it can overwhelm you. It's true that what you do helps these girls, but the main point of purifiying them is supposed to be to nullify the threat they represent so we can recover their foci. You do remember that was my goal, right?" He asks at the end. You had... forgotten a little."Well, what about Black Pepper? You seemed to react when they mentioned the name." You ask instead."Black Pepper is- ITZ" Yuuki seems to twitch for a second and speak in static, then looks down timidly. "Mnn, 'involved' with this for sure, but even Robo can't access what data we have on her. It isn't deemed relevant to the mission." He sighs, sitting with his legs on the seat and his arms coiled around his knees."She's dangerous though, that I can say. I don't know about Mai or her friends, but what little I have on Pepper suggests we stay away from her at all costs." He muses, rocking back and forth. You might not have that luxury...[1/2]
>>38705685"What about Shun's focus?" You ask, sitting back in the seat. Shun herself is currently hanging out of the car, so she can't hear the two of you talking."My goal was to collect Foci that were lost, Makoto, not to release them. I'm... not even supposed to give them a choice." He responds sadly. "Once removed, they're placed in stasis under an intense lock to prevent a second incident. Even Robo or I can't override it; at least not without alerting-" He flinches for a second, pauses, then continues explaining."I-I thought that if I had enough time I might be able to figure out a way to remove them safely. But so far, nothing." He shivers a little, burying his face between his knees.You wait for a moment before considering whether you should even ask your final question. "...Who do you think is right?" You finally ask."Who?""Mai," you reply, "or myself?" Yuuki glances down at his skirt and thinks."She's not... entirely wrong, but neither of you really are. Both of you just want to protect all the girls that are arising." He muses, continuing to try and hide his face. "I guess it's just... what *I'm* trying to do that seems like a threat to them. A-All magical girls, I mean." He surmises, letting his legs fall to the floor of the limo.> What matters is you care about doing the right thing.> You can take your time. Sorry I was rushing you.> You need to find a way to release them.> We're not doing your mission anymore.
>>38705779>> What matters is you care about doing the right thing.>> You can take your time. Sorry I was rushing you.There's really nothing wrong with his mission, since unchecked girls are dangerous. Just... alter the parameters a bit, make sure he's only taking them if they're not bound to someone or if the person is unable to control themselves.
>>38705779> You can take your time. Sorry I was rushing you.> We're not doing your mission anymore.
>>38705779>> You can take your time. Sorry I was rushing you.>> Write in: is there anything you can tell me that's not classified? do you know anything about how their structure works or how they keep under control, what their ideas are, what their powers might be?
>>38705779>What matters is you care about doing the right thing.>You can take your time. Sorry I was rushing you.One last question: who, exactly, is it that you answer to? We're stuck between two factions here and there is a boss figure out there who can pull all the strings. I want to know who it is.
>>38705779> You can take your time. Sorry I was rushing you.>One last question: who, exactly, is it that you answer to?
>>38705779>What matters is you care about doing the right thing. whether that means accomplishing your mission abandoning it or something else entirely.
>>38705779> What matters is you care about doing the right thing.> You can take your time. Sorry I was rushing you.I would also like to know what specifics on what exactly the difference is between removing this "corruption" and overcoming it are. The goal right now is to keep super powered girls from going crazy and causing lasting harm and both methods seem to work toward this.
Just a thought I had. His job is to collect the foci of magical girls in order to prevent outbreaks of whatever disaster, right? Somehow he was authorized to release our focus to us and use us as an asset. Are we considered "collected" to him? Is Yui's ebony strict "collected" by proxy because we're essentially working as agents?This could be a way to change the parameters of his mission
>>38705779Hug him I know its hard but next time you and robo have something you cant tell me just say so, instated of saying you don't know.Is there anything else you can tell me about who you work for or hoe foci work?
> What matters is you care about doing the right thing.
>>38706087Not really. In case of Mai, the corruption is still there, only encased in these structures. The corruption is still there, waiting for it's chance. Makoto outright destroys the corruption. While he might profit from having structures as well (protection against corruption? who knows what that stuff is capable off), his method is better.
>>38706276>The corruption is still there, waiting for it's chanceBut if it's never going to get out what's the problem? Though I do admit that line of thought does sound a little like Sith reasoning. "Naw man I totally got control of the dark side of the force trust me."
>>38706276I mean... is it? The only negative things we've seen related to structures or purification are Saito.I'm not saying the problem is Saito.... Buuuut... That might be exactly what I'm saying
>>38706418the only problem with Saito's structure at the moment is that we broke it. As for the berserker thing yah that's an issue but may just be poor "coding" on his part.
>>38706400never going to get out? Sorry, I don't trust reasoning like "Everything's under control, it will never get out." Should the structures ever fail (and under enough stress, they most likely will sooner or later), you fall to corruption again, forcing someone to stop you.Makoto's methods may seem like a de-powering to Mai, but it's way safer than what Mai is doing. Mai is playing with fire and sooner or later, she will end up burnt.
>>38706400Exactly. It just keeps building, because we haven't seen any way to "vent" corruption, only contain it.>>38706276Makoto could profit from structures by focusing powers, or reworking how the act.
>>38706472It's just kind of bizarre to me that everyone seems to be forgetting that we also were playing with fire of purification powers we really just straight up don't understand.And we already have gotten burnt in relation to Saito.
Recent posts remind me>>38705900can we additionally ask how our purification works, or if corruption can be detected, if they have a way to vent anything, if we can use structures, if we can put purification in structures...and maybe ask Yui what her structures are containing?
>>38706550Saito was a pilot case for these structures and we made a bit of a mistake by rushing into purification, not knowing what will happen. But at least Saito is still alive and human.What will happen to Mai and her friends when their structures fail and the bottled-up corruption spreads through them in a flash, I don't want to even imagine.
>>38706697and why there was that weird empty space in her aura.
>>38705814>>38705831>>38705900>>38705952>>38705998>>38706043>>38706087>>38706088>>38706139>>38706182Hm, running out of space so putting these down. Have been writing.
>>38706969You lean over and pull your arm around the shivering Yuuki, bringing him into a tight hug with you. "What matters is you care about doing the right thing." You tell him, rubbing your cheek against his. "You can take your time. Sorry I was rushing you." You say with a smile. He keeps himself from tearing up again, knowing he's bawled in your arms enough times already."Can you tell me anything that isn't classified about foci? Like about Mai's structures?" You ask, still embracing him."A little bit. We observed structure generation in those naturally proficient, and performed experiments to see how well you could construct in another being. They were fairly malleable." He explains promptly. "The exact structures determine the effects, but I'd say Mai is using some kind of containment/battery thing. She keeps the core of the corruption intact whilst siphoning off power to expend, keeping everything at a low level. The one you described Glory having sounds like just pure containment, but that would only work for so long." The theory sounds solid to you, but you can't be sure what else they might have."You said your task was to contain, right?" You ask him. "Am... I considered 'contained'? Is Yui?" You ask. He shakes his head."No, so long as you're bound and capable of using the foci, they aren't considered contained. I gave you this power under my own volition, without storing your focus, because I thought you could be a big asset. I'm not... breaking protocol by letting you remain bound, but I doubt they'd see it that way." He reveals, thinking intently."Can you... tell me who you work for?" You ask hesitantly. You can feel him tense up in your grip. "Classified, huh?""Not relevant to the mission." He states sadly. One secret he doesn't have a choice in revealing, it seems.[1/2]
>>38706969oh, sorry you have me twice there.these are me>>38706088>>38706697>>38705900so that you don't give me three votes. I was mostly asking if we know any of these things and if not, to append them to the question, if we can
>>38707038The limo finally arrives at the manor and your group steps out. Shun is sad to be out, saying that car probably cost more than her entire life up until this point, but Yui drags her out, rubbing her grubby fingerprints from the windows. They ring the buzzer to let themselves in, but no-one responds at the gate."Strange..." Naoki mutters, pressing it again. The driver maid unlocks the gate for your group and you head up to the manor. You keep a hand on your garter, just in case, and you slowly open the door. Inside is eeiryly quiet."Did Mai do something to the staff?" Shun asks. Your footsteps echo in the manor."Rrng, that little -" He grunts, balling a fist. A door to your right slams open. Standing in the doorway, holding a few maids at her side is-"Oh, hello Makoto!" Hana chirps, holding her hand up. You punch yourself in the face."OKAASAN!?" You shriek, watching her drop some of her maids and walk over happily. She has some kind of paint smeared on her face and a backpack with god-knows-what inside. "What... what... what...""What am I doing here? You called me here, dear. But they wouldn't let me in at the gate so I had to break in.""Runs in the family, huh..." Yui sighs, recalling the first time you came to her manor and did the same thing."Ah, I haven't done something like this in so long! I might have, uh," she glances at the pile of unconscious maids in the other room, "gotten a little excited. I mean, they go down in one chop, who can resist?" She exclaims, clapping her hands together. She blinks at you. "Speaking of which, why are you a maid?" She asks."It's a long story..." You mumble, leaning down in defeat. Hana glances over at Yuuki and her pupils dilate. In a flash she moves over and picks him up."YUUKI, YOU'RE SO CUTE!" She squeals in delight, rubbing his face against his. Poor kid...> Mom, stop chopping maids.> Everyone this is... my mother.> Have you seen a pink-haired girl?> Have you seen a blue-haired girl?
>>38707170>> Everyone this is... my mother.We have the best mom.Except for the bits about keeping us from fucking our waifus.
>>38707170Mom, stop chopping maids! ...and don't look at me like that, I'm NOT a target!
>>38707170>> Everyone this is... my mother.is shizuko the blue haired girl?
>>38707170>> Everyone this is... my mother.Might as well transform now and start healing everyone.
>>38707170>> Everyone this is... my mother.Ka-san have you seen Saito or Shizuko?
>>38707170>> Everyone this is... my mother.How embarrassing.
>>38707170> Mom, stop chopping maids.> Have you seen (whoever is suppose to fix Saito)
>>38707250> Hana doesn't want you getting pregnant. Responsible parent.>>38707291>>38707321>>38707341>>38707357>>38707432"Everyone, this is..." You sigh loudly, "my mother.""Hi, I know most of you already. Except the handsome boy." She says as a grappling hook drops from her bag. "Whoop, that keeps falling off. I need a new one.""No, you don't." You seethe back at her. "Ha~ Have you seen anyone not in a maid dress around the manor? Or Aoi Saito?" You ask her, changing the subject."Hm, not that I can think of. There was one maid that looked a bit like your Aoi friend, but I chopped her all the same." She recalls, making a karate chop motion. You can feel a slight crack in the air as she swings. What kind of monstrous power..."So you did see Saito? That's a relief.""Wait, Saito?" Yui exclaims. "S-Saito, was here in m-maid dress..." She shivers at the thought."IS here, dear." Hana corrects her. Yui's grin goes from happy, to ecstatic, to perverse in a millisecond, then cycles between the three. Come to think of it, she hasn't even seen the female Saito to your recollection. Given her interests, maybe the more masculine someone is originally, the more she might enjoy it.Suddenly your fear for your friend's life.> It's no big deal, she already dressed up for me before.> Come on, lets go wake her up.> Calm down Yui, he doesn't like being feminine.> Shun, go save Saito before Yui puts him in bondage or something.
>>38707668>> It's no big deal, she already dressed up for me before.
>>38707668>> Calm down Yui, he doesn't like being feminine.
>>38707668>Calm down Yui, he doesn't like being feminine.
>>38707668> Come on, lets go wake her up.> Shun, go save Saito before Yui puts him in bondage or something.> Shun does the opposite
>>38707668>> Come on, lets go wake her up.
>>38707668>Come on, lets go wake her up....you mean HIM, RIGHT?
>>38707668>> It's no big deal, she already dressed up for me before.>> Come on, lets go wake her up.She probably likes it more the less the crossdresser likes being feminine. I have no basis for this, but it seems likely
>>38707715>>38707747>>38707753>>38707783>>38707813>>38707851>>38707965>>38707996> Lets go wake him up.Writing
>>38708187"Come on, let's go wake... erm, Saito up." You say, stepping over some maids that Hana dropped. You search the pile in the other room but don't see any that look like Saito in there. You spend some time rousing them from sleep and recruit them to assist in the search. After about half an hour, you've seemingly recovered all of the Oomura staff, but still no sign of Saito anywhere."Ngh, nothing?" You ask the group."I checked the basement." Naoki replies."Nothing on the ground floor." Yui sighs."You guys have a shitload of money!" Shun calls out from the balcony. You glare up at her. "Oh, uh, nothing I can see.""Kaasan, are you sure you saw Saito? Blue hair, crabby attitude, most likely blushing at the thought of being in a dress?" You ask, describing him."Perfect..." Yui coos in the background, sparkles in her eyes and hands on her cheeks. Hana thinks to herself."Hm... I think, OH! I know where I put her." She exclaims, dragging the lot of you upstairs. Shun had already checked up here and recuperated the staff, but Hana stops at an innocuous closet, then opens it. Aoi, clad in maid dress and white stockings, falls out and lands flat on her face, knocking a few brooms from the closet with her."Tadah!" Hana cries out, raising her hands. "Ogh, I hope she's alright." You lean down and shake her by the shoulder, pouring what healing you can in to awaken her. She blinks and holds her head."Aggh, what happened?" Saito asks, blinking at your group.> You were in the closet. You're out now.> A long story.> Why are you in a maid outfit?> Yui, Shun, restrain yourselves.
>>38708449>>38708449>> A long story.Then I realized, mom was probably playing live action metal gear solidnice phrasing on the closet line
>>38708449>Yui, Shun, restrain yourselves.>A long story.>Why are you in a maid outfit?In roughly this order.
>>38708449>> You were in the closet. You're out now.>> Yui, Shun, restrain yourselves.>> Compliment Saito on getting the maid uniform right on her own this time.
>>38708449> You were in the closet. You're out now.
>>38708449>> You were in the closet. You're out now.
>>38708449"You fell asleep on the job and must have had some sort of nightmare because you started mumbling about magical girls and being a guy. We're maids employed to the Oomuras remember?">Naw seriously dude long story>Why are you in a maid outfit?
>>38708692 hereadd this>> Compliment Saito on getting the maid uniform right on her own this time.
>>38708728This. So hard.
>>38708449>>38708728> You were in the closet. You're out now.> Compliment Saito on getting the maid uniform right on her own this time.
>>38708498>>38708589>>38708723> God I love this option. Jotting it down for a short omake where you play as Saito.>>38708600>>38708613>>38708692>>38708728>>38708759>>38708791> In the closet wins. Compliments also.Writing
>>38708852> God I love this option. Jotting it down for a short omake where you play as Saito.Its funny I was debating writing that down because I saw an opportunity to fuck with Saito hard but wasn't sure if that idea would be harmless in the long run. This outcome is better than I expected.
>>38708979i was struggling not to second it
>>38708449>> You were in the closet. You're out now.>> A long story.>> Why are you in a maid outfit?>> Yui, Shun, restrain yourselves.
>>38708852"You were in the closet." You tell him with a smile. "You're out now." She stares at you for a second in disbelief."T-The hell I am!" She shouts back, blushing. "I was never in there to begin with!""Of... course you were?" You say, raising an eyebrow. "Look, it's nothing to be ashamed about. I've been in a closet too. Yui puts people in there all the time." You explain to him. Saito glances at her with a concerned look."Only Ren & Kyo, and honestly they were in there to begin with. I just opened the door." Yui comments, rolling her eyes. His jaw drops further."W-Well it makes sense if you were, Makoto, but I wasn't!" She says, jumping to her feet and grinding her teeth. Saito's not making any sense to you at all right now."Okay, okay, fine, be in denial. I don't see what the big deal is." You sigh."I'M NOT IN DENIAL! I... I-I like... girls..." She shouts, wringing her hands and holding her head. You glance back at the rest of your group in confusion and get only confusion back, apart from Shun who looks like she's about to die from holding back laughter."Well, nice job putting on the maid outfit properly this time. You're getting better." You comment, tugging at her collar."H-He's done this before..." You hear Yui whisper under her breath, breathing heavily. Saito continues to mince and blush, wishing she were somewhere else right now."I-I couldn't get in so I disguised myself and got in." She explains."Will you people stop breaking into our manor!?" Yui and Naoki yell at all of you, veins popping on their foreheads. The fence doesn't seem to be working; maybe they should invest in a moat.> Tell Saito about the girls/they can help.> Have you turned back at all?> Hug her, tell her it's alright.> How have you been?
>>38709453> Hug her, tell her it's alright.> Have you turned back at all?
>>38709453>> Tell them there's a bunch of girls who knows about structures, but they're a bunch of jerks who think that corruption is a good thing. So, yeah.
>>38709453>> Hug her, tell her it's alright.well, he's been unconscious, we can probably gather that ourselves.
>>38709453>Saito continues to mince and blush, wishing she were somewhere else right now.also:> Tell Saito about the girls/they can potentially help.> Have you turned back at all?> Hug him, tell him it's alright.> How have you been?
>>38709453>Ren & Kyo, and honestly they were in there to begin with. I just opened the door.I... God damn it, I want to know their genders.> Hug her, tell her it's alright.> Tell Saito about the girls/they can help but they're a bunch of asshats who think that her going into a crazed berserker state is a good thing.
>>38709453this >>38709556 tell him the whole story and that we think they may be able to help but we are worried about trusting them. Especially because there leader has talked about you as some prize to be won not a person to help.
Oh, right. We actually have a prime opportunity to try to help Saito WITHOUT the help of those girls: Yui has Structure in her, so Makoto and Saito can study her throughly to see how Structure works, and Saito, who is apparently a Structure savant, can try to rebuild her structure. Also, Makoto can figure out how to purify without destroying Structure.
>>38709453> Hug her, tell her it's alright.> Have you turned back at all?> Tell Saito about the girls/they can potentially help.
Has Robo checked us for structures? What if Makoto has a "Can't see structures" structure?
>>38709453>Hug her, tell her it's alright.>Have you turned back at all?>Tell Saito about the girls/they can help.Also, tell Yui and Naoko that they should then let people in when we ring the doorbell so we don't have to break in.
>>38709875>Also, tell Yui and Naoko that they should then let people in when we ring the doorbell so we don't have to break in.I knew there was something I was forgetting. We wouldn't have to break in all the time if someone would answer the friggen door.
>>38709706Oh, yeah, we should ask Yui how she did it, and how it works, what she can do with it, and if she can do it again (and what's inside)
>>38709502>>38709556>>38709557>>38709613>>38709657>>38709671>>38709709>>38709875>>38709920"Maybe you should invest in a simple doorbell and leave the gate open?" You suggest to the Oomuras. They take your suggestion under advisement, which really means they both stick their tongues out at you. You step forward and slide your arms around Saito's waist, feeling her flinch as you do this."It's alright, Aoi." You say, nestling her against your shoulder and rubbing her back. She's still as a board with her eyes bulging. She probably wants to resist, but none can break from a Kiryoka hug. It is law."Just a li-ittle closer..." You hear Naoki whisper, leering at the two of you. At that you release the hug and take a step back. He snaps his fingers and frowns. The group of you decides to relax in the parlor as you explain what happened today to Aoi. She listens intently to your 'colourful' descriptions of Mai and her friends actions as you run through the events."Wow... I had no idea." She replies to your nodding. A maid sets down some tea for all of you, except for Shun who gets iced tea in a bottle."Heck yeah!" She exclaims, unscrewing it. Yui, Naoki, and the Oomura maids all glare at her, and she shrinks down in her chair."So, do you really think they can turn me back?" Saito asks, holding her cup with both hands, her knees pushing together timidly. You're all still in maid outfits, it seems."I'm not sure, they seemed convinced that they could." You reply, blowing at your own cup. "But they could just be plotting.""I think they're telling the truth." Yui chimes in. "The small one, Jun, created the structure within me. She melded with my focus, much like you do, then used the light of my own soul to build those strands, and the central core. You saw into my focus briefly so you know as well." She explains.> The central what?> That's still no reason to trust them.> Drink your tea, Aoi.> Check Saito's focus. [Roll]
>>38710202The central what now?
Rolled 3 (1d20)>>38710202>> The central what?>> That's still no reason to trust them.>> Check Saito's focus. [Roll]
Rolled 50 (1d100)>>38710202> The central what?> Drink your tea, Aoi.> Check Saito's focus. [Roll]
>>38710202>> The central what?>> That's still no reason to trust them.>> Check Saito's focus. [Roll]
Rolled 33 (1d55)>>38710202>>That's still no reason to trust them.Because, you know, the whole kidnapping and memory wiping and suit stealing and trying to make me corrupt thing.>> Check Saito's focus. [Roll]I'm assuming we'll be prompted to roll something.
>>38710202>"Just a li-ittle closer..." You hear Naoki whisper, leering at the two of you.This nigga knows what's up.As for choices:>The central what?
>>38710276>>38710294>>38710341The dice gods are seemingly displeased with us as of late. Who here hasn't been making their daily sacrifices to them?
>>38710202>> The central what?>> Check Saito's focus. [Roll]I'm still convinced Makoto not being able to see structures is due to someone doing something to him.
>>38710350But he thinks it's just girls getting touchy. He doesn't even know it's a guy and a guy-in-a-girl's-body getting touchy. At least he doesn't seem like he knows. We are talking about Saito's problem aren't we?
>>38710413Well, first off we've all been rolling random dice.
>>38710413Only one of those was a d100.
>>38710202> The central what?>when i tried to purify you earlier there was an empty spot in the center>> Check Saito's focus. [Roll]
>>38710486Then don't we technically have 2 rolls left to beat the 50 then?
Rolled 59 (1d100)>>38710202>> Check Saito's focus. [Roll]
>>38710202>> The central what?>> That's still no reason to trust them.>> Do you think I could try it?is our power actually a destructive force and someone on the opposite team has a constructive power?
>>38710268>>38710276>>38710294>>38710327>>38710341>>38710447>>38710517> Central what ho?d100 for rolls. Best of three.
>>38710413luckily they don't count until Qyubey tallies the votes for the rolling choice
Rolled 76 (1d100)>>38710558Let's rock.
Rolled 75 (1d100)>>38710558
Rolled 89 (1d100)>>38710558
Rolled 75 (1d100)>>38710558I could be running my quest, but instead I roll good.
you know, I didnt even vote for that option, but i managed to roll one of those.Maybe I should have.
>>38710597DICE GODS BE PRAISED
>>38710545 that was saito actually so yes
>>38710653>>38710632oh, guess that one was me.Isn't this just like, a degree of success test for a perception check? rolling in the upper percentile is nice, but it's not like we're in a life or death situation here.
... Hey guys? Where are Umeki and Momo?
>>38710777true, but a high roll might offer insight in how to upgrade our powers
>>38710558>>38710588>>38710589>>38710597"The central what now?" You ask suddenly, jerking your head up."The central structure?" She asks with a cup at her lips. "Sure you saw it? It's hard to miss something like that. It's a huge spiralling lens at the centre of my focus. Mai and the others use it to amplify their powers and- OH!" She puts a hand over her mouth."And what?" You ask, leaning forward on her chair."A-And protect themselves from... you." She says timidly, putting her cup down. You mind recalls when you tried to purify her last time. You saw no core, just a strange, blank absence before you were shocked and forced out."So... it's invisible to me?" You ask, leaning back in surprise."That's possible." Yuuki comments, putting a hand at his chin. "Not every focus is the same, some even report seeing their powers manifest as a specific colour. It could be similar to wave-lengths of light; you're blind to a certain kind of structure or component, at least right now." He theorises."Then-" You glance at Saito and place a hand at her chest. She yelps, but your two foci mix. Inside, you still see nothing but a blank, pure foci. You stare, intently, focusing your vision. With the metaphysical equivalent of going cross-eyed, you start to see slight speckles inside her focus, like shattered masonry floating in a void."Amazing." You say, releasing your grip on her. "If I stare hard enough, I could see bits that I passed over." You mutter."Well we have our explanation then; they're using a method that makes something invisible to you, protecting them from your powers." Yuuki says with a nod.> Can we make it... visible?> Saito, can I come inside you again?> Yui, can you check Aoi?> Those bitches!> ...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?
>>38710803Momo WAS at school... did umeki go to the wrong mansion?
>>38710832>> Saito, can I come inside you again?>> ...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?
>>38710832> ...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?> Yui, can you check Aoi?
>>38710832>>> Can we make it... visible?>> Saito, can I come inside you again?>> Yui, can you check Aoi?> ...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?
>>38710832>Can we make it... visible?>Saito, can I come inside you again?>Yui, can you check Aoi?>...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?The Saito option is too tempting to pass up.
>>38710832>> Saito, can I come inside you again?>> Yui, can you check Aoi?we might need to be an intermediary> ...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?these innuendos are fun
>>38710873Read the status from last time again.
>>38710832>> Yui, can you check Aoi?>> ...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?
>>38710832>> ...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?>> Can we make it... visible?
Rolled 8 (1d20)>>38710832> Can we make it... visible?> Saito, can I come inside you again?> ...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?
>>38710832>Saito, can I come inside you again?Can't pass up a line like that. Also, > ...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?
>>38710873>>38710884>>38710941>>38710960>>38710964>>38710967>>38710987>>38710994>>38711069>>38711082You have to love innuendo.Writing
>>38710832> Saito, can I come inside you again?Not that we asked the first time.
>>38711105If it's just invisible, you might be able to cure Saito by purging him again. Or at least it's worth a shot."Saito!" You exclaim, grabbing her hands."Huh, what is it?" She asks, blinking."Can I come inside you again?" You ask in a heartfelt tone. Yui spits out her tea and Naoki flinches in confusion. Saito's jaw drops and she shivers. Shun slams her hand on the arm of the chair, stifling herself."W-Wh-What do yy-you mean again!?" She asks in a panicked tone, blushing brightly."Last time I might have messed up but I promise you this time I'll do it right. All I need to do is make sure I fill you up entirely with my white essence this time. Right to the brim!" You assure her with a determined grin. Everyone spits out tea this time. Saito looks like she's about to pass out with how much she's trembling."I-I-I-" She mumbles, her eyes spinning her skull. Her timidness suddenly reminds you of something."...Wait, are we forgetting two shine maidens?" You ask. Everyone seems to settle for a second as you all realise Umeki and Momo aren't present."Did you call them here?" Shun asks, wiping her lip."I swear, if they broke in as well..." Yui mumbles with her face in her hands. You release your grip on the still-trembling Saito and stand up."I'll go find them. Yui, can you go inside Saito in my place?" You ask."I suppose~" She replies, grinning a little too widely. Saito's heart sinks."I'll go find the girls, thanks." You say, heading outside. You skid against the floorboards as you run around, asking the passing maids if they've seen a tall blonde girl and her smaller sister. They all seem to shrug though, until you reach a maid in the gardens."I think I remember seeing them. They had trouble opening the gate then the small one tried to climb over." The maid explains. That's Momo alright... "I think they went back to the bus stop. They might still be there." She says.> Go grab them.> Text them to come back.> Let them go, they're fine.
>>38711398>> Go grab them.We gotta apologize for making them jump through such hoops.
>>38711398> Go grab them.Fox form quick snatch
>>38711398> Go grab them.
>>38711398>Go grab themThose hussies might kidnap the miko's and hold them for randsom, can't let that happen!
>>38711398>Go grab them.We're at war now. Gotta make sure everyone is safe.
>>38711398>"Last time I might have messed up but I promise you this time I'll do it right. All I need to do is make sure I fill you up entirely with my white essence this time. Right to the brim!" You assure her with a determined grin. Everyone spits out tea this time. Saito looks like she's about to pass out with how much she's trembling.PHRASING
>>38711593Gotta love double entendres man.
>>38711398>> Go grab them.
>>38711398>> Go grab them.Poor Saito, throwin him to Yui
>>38711398>> Go grab them.Saito is going to be tied up when we get back isn't s/he?
i'm sad Umeki wasn't here for those delightful phrasing errors. i can only imagine how she'd react
>>38711458>>38711472>>38711521>>38711556>>38711557>>38711593>>38711658>>38711663>>38711669>>38711844It's your fault for dragging them out here, the least you can do is run the extra length to grab them. You pick up the hem of your dress and dart out of the manor grounds, heading for the bus stop. You can easily spot Momoko nearby, twiling a fake gun and wearing a hat two sizes big for her, along with Umeki in... causal clothes?"What the-?" You skid in your tracks as you gaze upon Umeki in a casual white sundress and wide-brimmed hat. She glances at you and waves."Oh, are you one of the Oomura maids? Sorry about her." She says, placing her hands on Momo's shoulders. "She only bent a few bars, I-I'll pay for them."> Umeki, it's me. Makoto.> That's fine. The, uh, Oomuras will see you now.> Bad Momo, don't break other people's things.> You didn't see any loud bitches, did you?
>>38711844The rest of our party is with him/her, so nothing bad should happen without a struggle.>>38711890Indeed, what a great pity. I bet she even felt that one somehow. Like a great many phrases were uttered, and yet she wasn't there to point it all out and laugh.>>38711901Admonishing Momo sounds fun.
>>38711901>> That's fine. The, uh, Oomuras will see you now.
>>38711901>> Umeki, it's me. Makoto.
>>38711901> Umeki, it's me. Makoto.> That's fine. The, uh, Oomuras will see you now.
>>38711901>> Umeki, it's me. Makoto.>compliment her dress> Bad Momo, don't break other people's things.
>>38711930>The rest of our party is with him/her, so nothing bad should happen without a struggle.I don't think he was referring to our enemies tying him/her up.
>>38711901>Wow, like, metal bars? That's impressive.
>>38711901> That's fine. The, uh, Oomuras will see you now.
>>38711901>> Umeki, it's me. Makoto.They came to see makoto right?
>>38711901> Bad Momo, don't break other people's things.> Umeki, it's me. Makoto.If we have them > Bust out the fox ears/tails
>>38711901>Umeki, it's me. Makoto.>That's fine. The, uh, Oomuras will see you now.>Bad Momo, don't break other people's things.Also, compliment Umeki on the sundress and hat. She looks really pretty.
>>38711930>>38711980Its more Yui and Shun having their way with him/her.
>>38711931>>38711951>>38711955>>38711969>>38711980>>38711985>>38712004>>38712009>>38712013>>38712014>>38712017> Momo is stronk.> Pretty dress.> It's me, the Oomuras will see you.Writing>>38712036A bad thing, how?
>>38711980Man shit's so wack my paranoia drive is set to full tilt. Bitch even said "whatever it takes". Tis why I said I was surprised she hadn't killed anyone yet. When you truly believe "the end justifies the means" the bodies start to pile. Just sayin'.
>>38712045>A bad thing, how?I'm not saying it's a bad thing, I'm hoping thats what happens.
>>38712211B-but they were supposed to team up on Makoto for their first time together!
>>38712045"Wow, like, metal bars?" You ask, bowing down to Momoko's height. "That's impressive.""I hung on them until they snapped!" She exclaims happily with a smile. Umeki scratches her chin."I think they were already weakened though...""No, they were totally super-reinforced!" Momo continues, holding her arms up to the air. Umeki covers Momo's face with her hat and smiles to you."Can I help you with anything?" She asks, her hair gently wafting in the breeze. You could only wish your hair was long and thick enough to do that... Wait, why would you think that!?"Uh, you don't recognise me?" You ask, pointing at your face. She blinks and studies you for a second."Uhm, wait... You can't be... Makoto?" She asks, bringing her hands to her face in shock. Momo gasps as well, letting the hat fall to the ground. "You're a maid?" She asks, looking you up and down."Hehe, yeah, it's a long story. We're all inside so come with me. The, ahem, Oomuras will see you now." You chuckle, rubbing the back of your neck. Momo tugs at the bottom of your dress."Working for for friends." She comments, walking with you back to the gate, "are you really that hard up for a job?" Umeki asks out of concern."Un no, that's-""Well, it really suits you though!" She says, smiling warmly, her cheeks rising as she smiles."T-Thanks. You look great as well. I've never seen you out of your robes before." You tell her, making sure you don't drool or anything. She pulls at her dress."I don't go out much, so I guess that's a given." She chirps, putting her hat back on. "I thought I looked a little weird, to be honest. I don't even have any sleeves. It feels like my arms are naked." She shivers, holding herself and blushing. "But you wear this kind of stuff all the time for your school and that, right?"> Yeah, why don't you go to school?> You should dress like that more often.> I like your robes better. No, um, arm nakedness.> You can't be this innocent...
>>38712587>> Yeah, why don't you go to school?>> You should dress like that more often.
>>38712587>Yeah, why don't you go to school?>You should dress like that more often.
Rolled 36 (1d100)>>38712587> You can't be this innocent...> You should dress like that more often.It's a different type of corruption, so Makoto should get her to indulge in it~
>>38712680Something about calling wearing no sleeves 'corruption' makes me laugh. That's Umeki's bar for societal decay and depravity.
>>38712733If we keep this up soon we'll have her staying up past 10 and drinking soda pop.
>>38712810Dear god.>>38712658>>38712664>>38712670>>38712680>>38712688>>38712706"Yeah, I've never seen you at school before." You comment to her. "Don't you go?" You ask. She shakes her head."No, I used to as a kid but I was never very good at it." She says, looking down and tugging at her skirt. "Running the shrine... takes prescedence anyway. So I don't know as much as other people, I make up for it by being twice as nice." She explains with a smile. Sounds like she didn't have much of a choice in the matter. When the shine had less people, she was doing the vast majority of the work. She didn't even have time for her sister, let alone improving herself. You never considered the shrine might actually be... bad for her?"I'm not sad about it." She chirps up. "My parents entrusted that place to me. I'd never want to let them down."> You should attend. You've got others to take some of the load.> It's up to you, but do you really want to spend your whole life there?> I guess as head maiden you've got everything sorted early, huh?The three of you enter the mansion and head for the parlour, where you can already hear commotion going on inside."Yui, how's it going?" You call out as you push the doors open. You flinch as you see a big pile on an overturned couch consisting of Yui and Shun sitting at either end of Saito, and Naoki face-down behind a flipped armchair.> What the...> Get off of her.> Hey, why didn't you wait for me?> Uh, look who I found!
>>38712810If she stays up past 10, how is she supposed to wake up at 4?
>>38713153>Hey, why didn't you wait for me?>> Uh, look who I found!
>>38713153>> You should attend. You've got others to take some of the load.Write-In>Why am I not surprised?
>>38713153>> It's up to you, but do you really want to spend your whole life there?> What the...
>>38713153> You should attend. You've got others to take some of the load.> What the...
>>38713153> You should attend. You've got others to take some of the load.eh, why not? momoko attends>> Uh, look who I found!>> What the...
>>38713153>> I guess as head maiden you've got everything sorted early, huh?It honestly seems that, even though it's stressful, she really enjoys the job. We just need to make sure to give her a hand whenever we can.>> Hey, why didn't you wait for me?>> Uh, look who I found!
>>38713153>You should attend. You've got others to take some of the load.Read: we're here to help onee-san.>What the...>Uh, look who I found!There MIGHT be an entirely good and valid reason pertaining to structures as to why this scene is currently in front of us.Maybe.
>>38713153> Hey, why didn't you wait for me?I feel the funny flowing through this choice. And God do I love silly!
>>38713153>It's up to you, but you've got others to help right now and it never hurts to learn more.>Hey, why didn't you wait for me?
>>38713153> You should attend. You've got others to take some of the load.She's just way too sweet. She needs to make some good friends so that running the shrine can be a purpose without being a sacrifice.> Uh... Look who I found!
>>38713153> You should attend. You've got others to take some of the load.> It's up to you, but do you really want to spend your whole life there?> Hey, why didn't you wait for me?I don't know what this is but I told you guys to enter Saito and full him up I don't know how you could misinterpret that.
>>38713209>>38713240>>38713253>>38713260>>38713327>>38713221>>38713230>>38713233>>38713240>>38713260>>38713253>>38713263>>38713274>>38713332> You should attend.> Look who it is! What the- Wait for me!Writing
I wonder if Naoki got fresh with Hana. Or did he confess to doing so with Makoto?
>>38713459I wonder if he told Yui he has the hots for us. I kind of hope he did, so she gets super lewd and possessive in front of him
>>38713422The two girls eyes go wide as you enter the room with the maidens in tow. Umeki blinks at the sight and starts to blush, then waves a hand in front of Momo."Look who I found!... What the-" You blurt out. The two quickly climb off of him, and you hear Saito take a breath. You sure hope one of them wasn't sitting on her..."Makoto, it's not what you think!" Shun quickly says, waving her hands. Yui smacks her."You idiot, now it's exactly what he thinks!" She squeals at Shun."But I said-" Yui tugs at the collar of Shun's shirt."Yes, and that never makes it any better!" She continues to mewl, shaking Shun back and forth."Hey, did you start already? Why didn't you wait for me?" You ask, wringing your hands. Saito seems to yelp at your question but the two just glance away."W-Well, I thought maybe I could get a better look if Saito wasn't wearing so much." Yui mutters, tapping her fingers together with blushing cheeks."And I thought that was dumb. All we needed to do was get Saito emotionally hot." Shun proclaims with no hesitation. These two..."What about Naoki?" You ask, glancing over at him, slowly picking himself up from the floor and rubbing his head. The two glance over and back to you."Ugh, your mother's a hell of a woman, Makoto. I like strong women... but whoo, man." Naoki says, cracking his neck and moving stiffly. Your jaw drops as you realise he tried to hit on Hana. This guy..."Glad you turned out the way you did. Wanna kiss it better?" He smiles, leaning on your shoulder. Yui raises an eyebrow at that."What are you..." She mutters, staring at the two of you. Crap...> Maybe... but later.> I didn't have a choice, Yui!> Uh...> Haha, nice joke. You... joker.> N-Nothing, at all. As if I'd ever.
>>38713840>> Haha, nice joke. You... joker.
>>38713840 > N-Nothing, at all. As if I'd ever.
>>38713840>> I didn't have a choice, Yui!>Your brother also has come out of the closet!
>>38713840sigh heavily"Naoki, I'm a guy. Also, I'm in love with your sister. Yui, he kissed me after we saved him, I didn't want to."
>>38713840>He didn't give me a choice, Yui>I hope you can accept that your brother is gay
>>38713913this, with a heavy helping of >>38713928
>>38713840>Your brother's a horny assholeSeriously hitting on Hana? I hope this guy gets turned into a girl.
>>38713840> N-Nothing, at all. As if I'd ever.
>>38713954He's a bishe dreamboat. Up until this point he's never met a woman who turns him down.
>>38713840Punch him again"your brother's a pig, yui"
>>38713840"Dude, you are an asshole."
so not that it particularly matters but I mean, I think we transformed our downstairs quite a while ago and never changed back or got dropped unconcsious. So I mean technically...Anyways this is pretty silly and Yui knows her brother's addicted to the sexahol and any prior action wasn't on us
>>38714002Tsundere star punch mode activate! Can't let him womanizing those we love! Give his ass the Kentaro treatment!
>>38713875>>38713886>>38713897>>38713913>>38713920>>38713928>>38713951>>38713954>>38713984>>38713991>>38714002>>38714022> Naoki is an asshole. Reveal your male-ness and break him.Writing
>>38714038Break him with a fist that shall pierce the heavens! He must learn to reform his womanizing ways!
>>38713928Fucking this.Also,>tried to hit on momThis fucker. He's us, but a less cool version.
>>38714084Either that or we just grab his hand and "Show him" that we're a dude.
>>38714103while licking our lips?
>>3871410312 year olds in the roommaking somebody who is not your girlfriend grope you in front of your girlfriends.But you know, you do you.
>>38714103We are still a flat chested girl, I think.
>>38714103Not in front of pure, innocent Umeki!
>>38714038"Not like you gave me a choice!" You give him a quick punch to the gut and he goes down pretty quickly, but far from out."Agh, okay, I'll take that one." He chuckles, scratching at his chin and nursing his gut. Yui stares at her brother in disbelief."Naoki! I let a lot of things slide but you do not go around trying to hit on my friends, and certainly not their mothers." She says, pouting her lips."Okaay, jheez. Touchy today." He says, crossing his arms. Yui glances at you, not with any animosity, and sighs. Then she stares at you for a few more seconds and grins. She whispers something to Shun and she starts to lead Umeki and Momoko away. You *think* you know where she's going with this, and you're up for it as well. You place a hand on your chest and sigh heartily."I can deal with it, Yui. I just hope you can accept that your brother is gay." You say to her, trying to appear sincere. Yui smirks and flicks a finger past her lips."I suppose. He stole your first kiss with a guy, it's only fair you stole his in turn." She laments, flicking a hand over her forehead. Naoki stares at her with a leer."What the hell are you on about. Makoto's a girl, you introduced her to me." He says, gesturing to you. Yui puts her hands behind her back and smiles."Oh, he is, well half of the time. Thanks to his focus, he can assume a girlish form, but he's most definitely a masculine male." She explains, seating herself back down on the couch. You cross your arms and smile."T-That's... ridiculous." He says, sweating a little.> Care to find out?~> It's true. *shift back and forth*> I've never been with a g-guy before... *blush*> Saito's a guy as well. Aren't we cute?> But you still love me, right? *grab arm*> Just smile.
>>38714417>> I've never been with a g-guy before... *blush*>> But you still love me, right? *grab arm*
>>38714417>Saito's a guy as well. Aren't we cute?>Shift into meido trap form, press ourselves up against Saito, and look at Yui and Shun all seductive-like
>>38714417>I've never been with a g-guy before... *blush*>Saito's a guy as well. Aren't we cute?>But you still love me, right? *grab arm*
>>38714417>> Saito's a guy as well. Aren't we cute?
>>38714417> I've never been with a g-guy before... *blush*> Saito's a guy as well. Aren't we cute?Go full blast female.
>>38714417>> I've never been with a g-guy before... *blush*
>>38714417so many good options i can't decide.i'll abstain from voting to see where this goes
>>38714417> Saito's a guy as well. Aren't we cute?> But you still love me, right? *grab arm*> I've never been with a g-guy before... *blush*> smile.
>>38714417> It's true. *shift back and forth*Let us milk this, for no other reason than to get her bro to question his sexuality. He may have taken our first kiss as a girl, but I want him to agonize over his sexuality when confronted with a true primo trap.To give him a glimpse of Yui's world, a world of perfect traps and questionable sexuality. Let us break this bastard in a way only we can! Eat it you pervert!
>>38714472Let's do thisI really want to see what Saito does when it happens
>>38714417> It's true. *shift back and forth*Our natural male form is a bit androgynous so I hope this is enough. Makes me want to try reverse transforming into a big muscle bound man.> Saito's a guy as well. Aren't we cute?> But you still love me, right? *grab arm*
>>38714417>all these choicesWE SHALL DO ALL OF THESE THINGS
>>38714417>It's true. *shift back and forth*>> I've never been with a g-guy before... *blush*>> Saito's a guy as well. Aren't we cute?>>38714472this write-in should also happen
>>38714553is it bad i want to hug that?
We gotta make fucking sparkles everywhere and go full pic related.
>Actually gay now>We didn't give the D to any girl yet either, we only got our ass penetrated with dildosDropped.
>>38714569No, it ain't "a bit" androgynous, it fully is. Makoto is a trap amongst traps. When in female garb, you'd be hard pressed to tell the difference.Ya just can't tell until you commit to the sexiness. That's his draw. You just can't know until you go "all in" y'know.>>38714612No it isn't. For all we know all she wants is for someone to love her. Is "love" such a bad thing to want?
>>38714417> Saito's a guy as well. Aren't we cute?
>>38714417>>38714604I'll have what he is having.
And in that moment, Makoto truly became a trap.>>38714469>>38714501>>38714506>>38714509>>38714522>>38714534>>38714549>>38714553>>38714566>>38714569>>38714591>>38714604>>38714612>>38714652>>38714679> I've never been with a g-guy before... *blush*> Saito's a guy as well. Aren't we cute?Looks like we want to go full demure female mannerisms to troll him. And also dragging Saito into it, you sadistic people, you. I love itFor reference, Shun took Umeki and Momo outside so you can be as lewd as you desire.>>38714472For clarity, what's 'meido trap form'? Because I read that as just male Makoto.Writing
>>38714651Not gay, just taking advantage of a situation for the lulz and shenanigans. And getting rid of annoying person that wants to fuck.Like Tada Banri:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gn5Lb1DQez0
>>38714700pretty sure they just mean shifting to male, since we've got our maid outfit on
>>38714700You my good sir, are now ranked amongst based GM's. I'd give you cash, but sadly, I don't have any to spare.
>>38714651What are you on about? Makoto pretty obviously isn't getting with any guys in this chapter, and has been upset at Naoki's behavior. Are you drunk?
>>38714651>legitimately angry at the only 100% guy who showed interest in us, BECAUSE they showed interest in us>gay
>>38714700>Looks like we want to go full demure female mannerisms to troll him."I-I hope you don't mind but I like to go in dry."
>>38714700You are a pervy saint amongst men.
>>38714794Indeed he is. Based QM is Based. Make it good dude!
>>38714752>>38714778homophobic logic for ya
>>38714778To be fair to the questers, even before Saito turned into a cute girl, and wanted to get together with "Minako", reactions there were more positive.
>>38714847regardless we're at most bi-curious
>>38714882Well, yeah. With some luck, that curiosity will get sated, but that's where we're stuck for now.
>>38714882and now it's just trap on trap, which is basically yuri
>>38714882At this point I'd say even that's a stretch. The only possible reason I could think of why Makoto would be even remotely interested in a guy is if that guy looked like a girl and how often does that happen right?
You know, I have a feeling that if we keep on making every student in the school question what kind of plumbing we have, we'll eventually get to the point of revealing it via magical transformation.
>>38715056wait. are we temporarily naked when transforming into our mahou shojou outfit like a good portion of other transformation sequences do?
>>38715176Wouldn't mind that. Part of being a magical "girl" is the transformation sequence. Everyone seems to acknowledge that fact.To gain the power of a "Magical Girl" you must become a "girl" in some form. And boy does our MC become one when needed...
>>38715056>>38715176I thought our transformation was pretty much instantaneous. So anyone looking would see us nude for around less than a second or so. (Though to us, it would seem like a standard henshin sequence)Or we can pick a 3rd option like that "one time" Yui thought we had "both", though that would cause a massive "EEEEEHHHHH???!!!!"
>>38714700Naoki glances down at you, his forehead sweating. He closes his eyes and flicks his hair back with a smirk."I get it, you're mad about me kissing her." He says in relief, holding his chin. "Okay, I apologise Yui, and to Makoto. There's no need to come up with dumb lies like that." He opens his eyes and clenches his fist. "I-I mean look at her, there's no way you're telling the truth." He swings his arm, pointing at you and slightly wavering."It's true." Yui says, sipping her cup. Shun, who has rejoined your group after putting Momo outside, sits on the couch beside her and nods. Naoki sizzles on the spot for a second."O-Okay, even if that is true, I kissed the female form, right?" He reasons. "It's f-fine." He scratches at his stubble as a flash of white light erupts from behind him. He blinks and glances back to see you, now in your female form; beautiful with long hair, thick eyelashes, and ample bosom. You bounce up and down, then smile."THIS... is my female form, Maiden White." You exclaim, striking a pose to show off your assets. You even wink back at him, repeating his seductive gesture from this morning."Then... that form is..." He gulps. You shift back and continue posing."My male one." You say casually. Something bursts inside his head."HOLY SHIT!" He yells, stumbling backwards in surprise, shaking. You can't help but start laughing at his reaction, and neither can Shun. Even Yui and Umeki are sharing a giggle. Naoki stares at you with a death glare, his eye twitching. "You tricked me!""I did no such thing, you just never asked." You say, taking a few steps towards him and sliding your arms up his arm seductively. You can feel the goosebumps on his arm. "But this doesn't have to change anything. You still... like me right? A guy like you wouldn't lie about something like that, would you?" You ask, slowly caressing the arm. He hasn't blinked for a few minutes now.[1/2]
>>38715378"B-But you're-"" I've... never been with a g-guy before." You say, demurely bringing a hand to your cheek. "I mean, I hadn't even considered it... until now." You say, giving him a lewd smile. His face is solid and stoic. You've essentially made like the medusa and petrified the poor guy now. You slide a hand under his chin, making sure he feels your skin against his, and whisper into his ear, "I-I hope you don't mind but I like to go in... dry.""OKAY!" He shouts, throwing his hands up and landing back on the couch next to Aoi. "I-I-I g-get it!" He yells, his face red and trying to keep his cool. "At least you're the only one...." He sighs, holding his head. You glance at Saito, assuming Yui's cheeky grin, urging Saito to join the dark side."Uhmm..." Saito taps her fingers together. Naoki doesn't move, but his eyes swivel to look at her."No..." He mutters. You sit down on the opposite side and smile, grabbing one of his arms."Saito's a guy as well! Aren't we cute?" You ask, rubbing against him. Saito doesn't copy your motion, but her demure shyness seems to work on Naoki in much the same way."YOU'RE KIDDING!?" He twitches more and more as you caress him, pushing him into Saito's side as well to increase the sensation. You even, however lightly, slide a hand onto his lap and lift your skirt a little, just in case he still had any doubts. By the time you're finished, you leave a broken man on that couch."He... was a..." He mutters with a dark cloud hanging overhead. You get the feeling he's reassessing his life and thinking about how many other traps he could have fallen for in the past. Yui and Shun walk up beside you, smiling and gasping from laughter."Home run." Yui praises you, and Shun nods.> Kiss his forehead as a final blow.> Don't worry, Naoki, I can be whatever you want~> You should think long and hard about me before you act next time.> I may have gone a bit overboard...> Let him re-evaluate in peace.
>>38715464>> I may have gone a bit overboard...
>>38715464> Kiss his forehead as a final blow.> You should think long and hard about me before you act next time.>Captcha ddick
>>38715464>Don't worry, Naoki, I can be whatever you want~>If Mistress Yui lets me, of course~
>>38715464> You should think long and hard about me before you act next time.
>>38715464> Kiss his forehead as a final blow.Only LOVE will keep him from defecting to Mai and her shameless hussies! Good thing love is a bit subjective...
>>38715464>Let him re-evaluate in peace.>I may have gone a bit overboard...That'll do, son. That'll do.
>>38715464> Let him re-evaluate in peaceWe're dangerously close to making the girls that got him hammered and locked him in his basement seem like the good guys to him.Also> Congratulate Saito on the assist.
>>38715516Actually I changed my mind. I think that line can be taken all the wrong ways. What I really want to say is>I hope this has taught you a valuable lesson about hitting on people indiscriminately.
>>38715464> I may have gone a bit overboard...> Let him re-evaluate in peace.
>>38715464>> Let him re-evaluate in peace.
>>38715494>>38715518>>38715550>>38715553>>38715557>>38715558>>38715495>>38715498>>38715517Ah, we're laying off the poor guy. Good thing, Makoto was enjoying that a little too much, and there's an entire school's worth of this that he could potentially indulge in.>>38715495> Even the robots like this outcome!>>38715553> But the innuendo...Writing
>>38715464> You should think long and hard about me before you act next time.>Long. And hard.> Let him re-evaluate in peace.Let those two words echo in his mind.
>>38715464>this entire sequenceDear god it's perfect.>You should think long and hard about me before you act next time.>Kiss his forehead as a final blow.>WRITE IN: Leave your number written on a piece of paper for when he wakes upIn that order. We shall troll from beyond.
>>38715599>>38715610>>38715625Okay, we're not delivering a killing blow, but do we want to say the 'long and hard' line as a final blow?
>>38715643Agh, I worded that poorly. As the final WORD, not blow.This'll be the last update for the session btw.
>>38715643no let him be.
>>38715643yesIt goes well with all the innuendo we said some time ago.
the end end status will be fun
>>38715643Why not give it as a parting shot when we say goodbye?>And Naoki? I'm sorry - I didn't mean to go that far. But next time, you should really think long and hard on who you hit on before you starting coming onto them.
>>38715643I don't know if we should advertise that. We still don't know the particular virtues of Makoto's penis ourselves!
>>38715643Wouldn't mind that, let's... Deliver a "final blow" in other ways. Let us... get him to question things in more indirect ways. His heart is already throbbing for us in a way, let us stoke that fire.For the good of our mutual futures, let the flames of love and lust burn so that he/she may remain resolute in the face of Mai's temptation.
>>38715687Naoki's status: [Incoherent muttering]
>>38715599You figure Naoki's had enough and decide not to deliver any killing blows. Kissing him, using sweet words or, god forbid, getting a little personal might just break him. You're trying not to out-hussy Mai here, after all."Thanks, that may have felt a little too good." You admit, scratching your cheek. Naoki is practically smoking from your assault. He slowly leans his head up to see you in his field of vision. You lean down and smile."Naoki? I'm sorry - I didn't mean to go that far." You admit shyly. "But next time, you should really think... long and hard on who you hit on before you start." You tell him, then turn around to face your friends. His mind seems to process your words for a second, no doubt two of them resounding in his skull. His head shivers, then jerks back and he slumps on the couch, passing out where he sits. That was just about all he could take.Saito is leaning away, watching in awe at what you just managed. In a slightly different series of events, that could have even been him taking that revelation in regards to you. You clap for Saito."Well done, you were great Aoi! We make a great team." You cheer to her. Despite the matter, she seems to smile a little."Uh, thank you." He says, smiling slightly, not sure of what she did."Yeah, coming out of the closet must have really helped." Shun snickers, covering her mouth. Yui spits air from her cheeks at that remark. Saito growls at her, and stands up from the couch to leave the room.You still have no idea what they're talking about.END OF SESSION
>>38715871Consentacles with Yui taking Makoto, Aoi, Yuuki, and Shun when?
>>38715939Hey now, still not sure if "Structures" are a good thing yet. Far as we know it's the "quick and easy" path to power. And yet we all know such paths usually lead to disaster. Should we try to gain some or not? Only time will tell...
[Anticipation of status updates intensifies]Pumped for the next session. Most of all the thought of Hiroko learning that Saito is on our team now and him probably telling her that she's on the wrong side. A bit sadistic, but still.
We spent almost an entire episode on innuendo and teasing.I'm OK with this.
>>38716013Personally I'm looking forward to when we start blending Structure and purification, to the horror of Mail and the bitch brigade
>>38716055I'm sorry, I didn't quite catch that. I thought you said "I'm OK with doing this more often."I happen to agree.
>>38716073>our faces when
>>38716013I hope this eats her up. Especially since I doubt Saito will anytime soon.
>>38716144Probably never. He wants Makoto's ass-pussy now
>>38716144Good thing she's made of water, because that was a hell of a burn.
>>38716144We need to remember that for the next time we meet
>>38716144>>38716155Congratulations. We are now congratulating ourselves for taking the affections of a boy away from a girl who was mean to us because we upset her. We're kind of a bitch.
So Naomi's one too
>>38716254Sorry, Naoki, fuckin autocorrect
>>38716198eh, she deserves it after saying we are awful for lying, and then doing ten times worse to us.
> Status: http://pastebin.com/keNryBsm> Twitter: https://twitter.com/questqyubey> Ask: http://ask.fm/QyubeyHah, oh, that was a good one. I love me some innuendo in my end- OH!Breaking Naoki was something I was looking forward to, even if we did go overboard with it. We had to spring a trap at some point.You know a little more about Yuuki and structures now, so things are looking up.>>38715939You have to convince Saito first.M "Hey Aoi, do you like squids?"S "I guess, why do you- AHHHH!"Y "So tight~">>38716013>>38716144That... sounds very similar to Mai's plan, actually.Huh.>>38716166OH!
>>38716311Guilt and emotional manipulation are good for drama warfare.
>>38716311I think people have started guessing that Mai's plans revolve around blatantly obvious emotional manipulation. Really excited to punch her in the face a lot
>>38716375>>38716388I'm not saying it's a bad tactic. Just saying... it's kind of the same plan.
>>38716311>Saito: "I'm not out of the closet... o-or in it in the first place! Ohh, what are you people doing to me?"Good... good...>Umeki: "Makoto and his friends have such strange fun. Maybe it would be nice to see their school..."YAYIFICATIONS!>Naoki: "INTERNAL SCREAMING INTENSIFIES" (Store Clerk: I felt a great disturbance...)Lost it with the store clerk.>bitch brigade...they're totally at a karaoke, aren't they?
>>38716311>That... sounds very similar to Mai's plan, actually.I'd rather not stoop so low. We should give people happieness instend.
>>38716398Except that we don't resort to mind control and shit. What we want is for them to basically experience this:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hn1VxaMEjRU
>>38716398I'm not saying its bad either. Just blatant, obvious now that we've got her pegged, and wicked fucked up. Also, the stuff you out in the ask about Naomi makes me hate him almost as much as Mai. Makes it sound like he's a sexual predator that justifies it with his good looks and social standing
>>38716404Store clerk and Naoki could form a support network.
I really hope Yui isn't implying Naoki's a magical girl too. Guy's too much of a douchebag to deserve a focus
>>38716571I'm pretty sure she meant "awaken" to her particular fetish.
>>38716432If Mai did this, it might have worked. Especially since Robo/Yuuki were so tight lipped and questionable.Good thing her ego rivals Makoto's.
>>38716437I'm not sure what part of 'womaniser' you didn't get the first time. Of course he's a douche, but it's not like Yui was a saint when you met her either. Given enough time she'd probably develop similarly, at least in the absence of Makoto.