Twitter: https://twitter.com/seeker12789?s=09Archive: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Space%20Crusade%20QuestThe year is 2473 and the 400th year of the Terran Empire. Mankind has spread across the stars and forged a mighty Empire. The Glorious Empire is one of the greatest Powers in the universe. But this doesnt exactly go well with the other races of the universe. The greatest galactic powers of the Xeno's races have united to end Mankind and restore the galactic status quo. Even Genocide isnt too far in the war to end humanities power in the galaxy and the Xeno's will not hesitate to use it.Too bad the Empire isnt willing to allow that.You are Adrien "Amelia" Su. Your a Spec Ops agent with a high success record. Youve been groomed to fight for mankind since you were 10 and graduated from Spec Ops training at 21. That was years ago, but that doesnt mean you lost any skill. With the latest ships, gear, and nanotech implants you travel the galaxy Infiltrating, assasinating, and capturing Xeno's for the glorious empire. Last thread you:>SPESS BATTLE>Wrecked the enemy>Blew the crap out of their troops>Stole their supplies cause we gangsta>Became too gangsta. Got beat by a battleship>Popped dranks with Holsten>Held hands with Horok and had consensual sex in the missionary position. Were filth like that.>Time for Remina PTSD!>Character sheet incoming
>>38593402>Name: Adrian "Amelia" Su>Codename: Scarlet Queen>Armor: V30 Nanite reactive armorskin >Weapons: Power Mace, Estrianite BioMetal Tentacles, Sirian wrist blades, Hybod wrist plasma guns, >Miscellaneous: Camo Mod(implanted), "Goddess" datachip, Psy shielder>Bonus: Body of the Goddess(unspecified bonus to intimidate, seduce, and charisma rolls) Contraceptive nanites: You can feed through sex and dont have to worry about pregnancy Queens Dignity: Only the most BRUTAL pain will hinder youAbilities>Scarlet mode: Melee kill 10 enemies to activate. Gives you +30 to melee rolls and critfail melee rolls but penalty to stealth rolls>Death focus: Gives +30 to ranged rolls and +10 to melee rolls. Cant critfail ranged rolls>Crimson Burst: +30 to melee and stealth rolls. Enables high speed movement and actions. Major penalty to ranged and strength rolls. Can only last 3 turns due to being tiring.
As you finally leave consciousness and fall asleep you go back to a world. To a place you never want to return to.>Years agoYou and Ema sprint, full speed, through the cavern. You can still hear those things behind you, closing in, but neither of you care. You push yourselves to the limit, determined to catch Kreshden and save him from that monster. As the two of you reach a massive cavern you stop and look around. From the cieling you see fleshy protrusions, tentacles, and corpses along with a host of things your minds cant process. You then look down to see a large pit, full of some slimy, dark, bubbling liquid. You look at it all in horror and revulsion, until you see...Kreshden hung from the cieling! His body is limp, but other than his helmet being gone he looks fine, just knocked out."Quick! Lets get him down!"Ema starts to move until suddenly the pit bubbles furiously. Ema moves back and quickly the two of you hide as out of the water a monstrosity rises. Its covered scales and fleshy growths, and as you watch it reaches to the cieling and takes a corpse in a slimy hand. It brings the corpse to its mouth and crunches on it sickeningly, before going back under the water. You and Ema, hidden behind a monstrous, fleshy stalactite, slowly start to move, until you notice a green eye, sticking out of the water, looking around. You pull Ema back as it looks your way before silently motioning so she sees it. You put a hand to your mask, to tell her to stay silent and wait.Roll a d100>Slowly weave between stalactites and try to get to Kreshden>Stay hidden a little longer>Throw something, somewhere, so the eye looks away>Try to Leave. Kreshden is a lost hope>Other
Rolled 70 (1d100)>>38593909>Throw something, somewhere, so the eye looks away
Rolled 12 (1d100)>>38593909>Slowly weave between stalactites and try to get to Kreshden
Rolled 87 (1d100)>>38593909>>Slowly weave between stalactites and try to get to Kreshden
Rolled 48 (1d100)>>38593909>Slowly weave between stalactites and try to get to Kreshden
>>38593909>>38593940>>38593968>>38594004>>38594158You patiently wait until the eye looks away, then you motion for Ema to move with you. As the eye looks away you quietly move to another fleshy, disgusting stalactite. You then wait for the eye to look in the opposite direction and move once again. You all move slowly to the other side of the Cavern, nearing Kreshden, and stop at one stalactite. As you 2 hide you slowly notice more details about your hiding spot, like how its covered in meat and scales, how it pulses sickeningly, and how it has...a eye...and a mouth...and REALLY sharp teethThe thing suddenly looks down, and tries to snap at you, making a high moaning sound as it tries to take a bite. Ema recoils and hefts her axe, ready to cleave the thing in two. You look over to see the eye turning in your direction as it hears the moans.Roll a d100>Stop her(peacefully)>Stop her(intervene)>Kill it quick>Throw something in the other direction>Other
Rolled 94 (1d100)>>38594228>Kill it quick
Rolled 82 (1d100)>>38594228>Kill it quick
Rolled 57 (1d100)>>38594228>>Kill it quick
>>38594228>>38594290>>38594302>>38594324You bring your blade up abd plunge it silently into the things eye, as Ema's axe flies into the things mouth. As its pierced deep from two angles, the monster gives a quiet gurgle, befote falling silent. Ema and you pull out your axe and sword respectively from the bleeding corpse and look around to see the thing looking away. You silently sigh before moving to another stalactite. You keep up your movements until you reach a set of steps up to Kreshden, with nothing between you and the beast in the water. You look up and then look back at Ema. She silently nods and hefts her axe.Roll a d100>Find a safer way so it wont see you>Go up the steps silently and hopefully>RUN up the steps, cut down Kreshden, and run down to cover>Throw something away>Have one of you distract the beast while the other goes for Kreshden(Ema or Adrian)>Other
Rolled 43 (1d100)>>38594870>Find a safer way so it wont see you
Rolled 36 (1d100)>>38594870>Find a safer way so it wont see you
Rolled 18 (1d100)>>38594870>>RUN up the steps, cut down Kreshden, and run down to coverFortune favors the bold.The dice hate the bold.
Rolled 38 (1d100)>>38594870>RUN up the steps, cut down Kreshden, and run down to cover
Bump for tiebreaker. Les i roll a 1d2 for it.
Rolled 94 (1d100)>>38594870>Find a safer way so it wont see you
>>38595245Meant to do a 1d2 my bad
>>38594870>>38594959>>38594961>>38595036>>38595051>>38595245You look around the cavern, hoping to find some better way to get up there, and after some looking you see a tiny side cavern. You look at it, then up to see it comes out right where Kreshden is. You motion towards it and Ema quickly moves toward it with you. As the two of you enter the small cavern of hard flesh, you speed through it, not wanting to stay in it too long for fear of something happening. You make it to the exit and it comes out right to where Kreshden hangs. As you and Ema near him you look down to slowly see the beast rising out of the water, sluggishly and without a care. This could be REALLY bad if you dont hurry.Roll a d100>Cut Kreshden down quickly and get back in the tunnel>Cut Kreshden down slowly and efficiently>Hide before it fully rises>Take your sword, run out, and jump down on it, planning for your blade to sink deep into its head>Other
Rolled 23 (1d100)>>38595484>Take your sword, run out, and jump down on it, planning for your blade to sink deep into its head
>>38595484>Cut Kreshden down quickly and get back in the tunnel
Rolled 73 (1d100)>>38595531Annnd forgot my roll.....
Rolled 67 (1d100)>>38595484>Take your sword, run out, and jump down on it, planning for your blade to sink deep into its head
Hmmm. Waiting for one more post because reasons.
Rolled 52 (1d100)>>38595484>Take your sword, run out, and jump down on it, planning for your blade to sink deep into its head
>>38595484>>38595530>>38595531>>38595549>>38595554>>38595982You grip your blade in hand as the beast rises out of the water. The chances of it seeing you and attacking as you try to cut Kreshden down are too great, but leaving it alive and letting others fall prey to such a disgusting monster seems even worse to you. You spin your blade and run out and jump off the cliff. You feel a hand almost grab you, probably Ema's, but it misses and you land on top of the beasts head, your blade sinking deep. The beasts is no longer sluggish as it roars in pain. It starts to swing its head back and forth, trying to shake you off.Roll a d100>Push your blade in deeper>Twist your blade>Try to plasma whip it good>Yell for Ema to give her Axe>Jump off of it>Jump off with your blade(2d100)>Other
Rolled 16 (1d100)>>38596249>Push your blade in deeper
Rolled 66 (1d100)>>38596249>Push your blade in deeper
Rolled 94 (1d100)>>38596249>Push your blade in deeper
Rolled 7 (1d100)>>38596249>Push your blade in deeper
Rolled 37 (1d100)>>38596249>Push your blade in deeper
>>38596301>>38596315>>38596328>>38596359>>38596387Since weve got another 5-10 min before i post, i just wanted ta let yu anons know that last thread was archived. Considering how fun the SPESS battles where i was just gonna ask kindly for you all to upvote last thread. Thats all. Writing post now.
>>38596249>>38596301>>38596315>>38596328>>38596359>>38596387You push down on your blade, ignoring the beast flailing, and hold on for dear life. As more of your blade goes into its skull it roars even louder, the cavern shaking and your ears ringing, as it tries to get you off. As far as your concerned thats not happening because it DESERVES to die. It planned on eating Kreshden eventually, anf the thought of something hurting your friends sickens you. As you put all your meager might into the blade you push until the hilt is inside. The beast rears back, roaring one last time, before it goes silent and falls into the bubbling water...with you still on it. As your submerged underneath the water you see your armor sizzling and watch as it slowly starts to melt away! You try to pull your blade out but it wont even budge! If you stay down here any linger your dead, simple as that.Roll a d100>Rip blade out>Pull blade out>Swim back up>Stay in the liquid>Other
Rolled 81 (1d100)>>38596702>Swim back upFuck the thing, get out of here before our shit burns off, worst time to show everyone the heat you are packing under the armor
Rolled 75 (1d100)>>38596702>Swim back upWe still have our whip atleast
Rolled 15 (1d100)>>38596702>Swim back up
Rolled 36 (1d100)>>38596702>Swim back up
Rolled 16 (1d100)>>38596702>Rip blade out
Rolled 19 (1d100)>>38596702>>Swim back up
Is this a dream sequence?
>>38597101Yes. Remembering your past.
>>38597101Yes.It's a dream flashback though.PTSD is a bitch
>>38597132Whew. For a second there, I thought we could really die.
>>38596702>>38596745>>38596772>>38596775>>38596790>>38596809>>38597053You release your blade, allowing it to stay in the dead monsters head, and swim to the surface. You climb out of the water quickly and after checking, find that none of your armor has been fully penetrated. You let out a sigh of relief and as you look back up you see...Ema fighting against a hoard of monsters, the same ones that attacked you earlier! She stands desperately on the cliff edge Keshden laying on the ground behind her. As the monsters press in you see a sweep of her axe rip a few into pieces until more come up and replace their losses. One swipes at her, and as she blocks it you think fast and:Roll a d100>Run up the steps and engage them directly>Run through the cavern and come around the back>Throw something>Say(insert)>Do(insert)>Tell Ema to throw you Kreshden>Other
Rolled 52 (1d100)>>38597271>Run up the steps and engage them directlyGotta go fast.
Rolled 99 (1d100)>>38597271>Run up the steps and engage them directlyI'm seeing red!
Rolled 84 (1d100)>>38597271>Run up the steps and engage them directly
>>38597334Holy shit i am seeing red!
Rolled 1 (1d100)>>38597271>>Run up the steps and engage them directly
>>38597459Umm. Nevermind me. I will just wait in the car.
>>38597271>>38597308>>38597334>>38597353Upon seeing your allies in danger, your vision goes red. Your mind stays where it is and yet is sharpened as both your rational and irrational mind work together to kill yoir enemies and save your friends. You rush up the steps faster than youve ever moved and:No roll required. End result still brutal.>Slash them down brutally with your whip>Beat the living hell out of all of them with your bare hands
>>38597489Hope the car is rigged with explosives.
>>38597503>>Slash them down brutally with your whip
>>38597503>Beat the living hell out of all of them with your bare hands
Rolled 2 (1d2)>>38597503Both of these would be my fetish, I can't decide! Have a roll instead.
>>38597503>Slash them down brutally with your whip
>>38597503>Beat the living hell out of all of them with your bare handsANOINT THEM WITH THEIR OWN BLOOD!
>>38597503Oh i found the perfect song for this.....https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WB-UA3UsP5o
.....You still alive Kefka?
Falling asleep, Hope someone can keep this alive til Kefka gets back
Alright sorry. Fell asleep.
Alright anons you ready to continue? Fell asleep at desk by accident.
>>38597271>>38597503>>38597523>>38597529>>38597531>>38597541>>38597578>>38597714>>38597751>>38599555You rush up the steps, fist clenched, ignoring the whip at your side. As soon as they see you a few charge at you as if expecting you to flee or scream, but personally, in this situation, charging into a horde of monsters as you try to kill them despite them having a major numbers advantage and being able to overwhelm you, you could honestly...Give less than a fuck.As the first one reaches you, claws outstretched and mouth open, you bring your fist up to its jaw in a uppercut. Its head flies back as blood shoots from its mouth at your brutal punch. You then give it a right hook and it flies into the liquid below you and screams as it melts. The others then charge you, screeching and claws outstretched. You scream at them in fury abd charge into them. You are unstoppable as you punch one into the pool, break(what you assume is)the jaw of another on your hard elbow, and kick another in the knee and break it before you kick it again and crush its head.Soon all the monsters are charging you and you charge into them, body covered in alien blood, and brutally end every last one of them with your bare hands! Eventually only one monster remains and as it screeches you duck its claws, grab its throat, hold it down with a hand on its shoulder, and pull upward hard. You are rewarded with the thing screaming as you rip its disgusting head off of its body. As its screams die you stand tall, armor covered in blood and hands clenching an alien skull, before you throw it and the body into the pool of acid. You then walk up the steps and:>Ask Ema is she's alright>Ask her did she enjoy the show>Ask about Kreshden>Stay silent>Calm the fuck down>Other
>>38602687>>Calm the fuck down>Ask Ema is she's alright>Ask about KreshdenI'm about to head to sleep here, getting late in my timezone
>>38602698Yeah it was like 1:00 in mine. As such i was fairely gone. Fell asleep at my desk actually.
>>38602706geez dude, no need to run so long and collapse like that, you should go to sleep at normal hours and take regular breaks
Bump for post...
>>38602687>Ask Ema is she's alright>Calm the fuck down
>>38602687>Calm the fuck down>Ask Ema is she's alright>Ask about KreshdenAny chances of agent trainees we run into in dreams meeting us in Current time?
>>38602921I sure hope so, but it doesn't look like it.
>>38602687>>38602698>>38602891>>38602921You slowly calm down, pushing your rage away as you go to see that your friends are still ok. Ema kinda stares at you for a second as you take a deep breath and stand in front of her."You alright Ema?"Ema slowly lowers her axe as you speak and you hear a sigh of relief through her helmet."Yeah im fine. But good gods what happened!? Was there something in the pool?! I see you suddenly charging up the steps, sword gone, armor flaking away, and you looked like one of those things! Are YOU alright?!""Yes Ema. Im fine. Now lets make sure Kreshden is ok."Ema and you walk over to where Kreshden was laying and you suddenly see Ema recoil and shout in fear. You rush up, trying to see whats wrong, and in horror you see the face of what used to be Kreshden. As his face melts away horribly you and Ema back away. Ema grabs her helmet and starts shaking her head."NO! NO! NO! This cant be happening! He was just fine a second ago! Why is he like this, why?!"Ema slowly keeps backing up, and as the "face" of Kreshden lies there it suddenly looks at you two. Ema screams and you two watch as Tentacles slowly come from the mouth of the thing.>Mandatory d100 sanity check
Rolled 92 (1d100)>>38603139bedtime for me, take care OP and anons
Rolled 16 (1d100)>>38603139
Alright whos here? Gotta make sure there are enough anons before i keep going.
>>38603351Going to be here and there all day myself.
>>38603351>>38603397>>38603558>>38603916>>38603922Alright ill write up post now that more people are here.
>>38603351Just got back up glad to see this is alive
>>38603397>>38603558>>38603916>>38603922>>38604060Hey actually since you all are here now can you roll for me?
Rolled 91 (1d100)>>38604213
C'mon guys just because i rolled good doesn't mean you'll roll badly and ruin the roll!
>>38603139>>38603151>>38603164>>38604282You step back and quickly pull yourself together. You focus on how this IS happening, and nothing good will come from staying here. You turn to Ema, who is repeating a mantra of No and clutching her helmet, and rush over to her. You quickly step in front of her, making sure she can see only your helmet, and look her in the place where her eyes should be. You bring her hands down, tap her head, and hold her."Ema! Stay with me! Pull it together ok?!""But! But...""Listen! If you freak out then we'll end up just like that! Now calm down and lets go!"You hear her taking deep breaths for a second before she steps out of your grasp. You pick up her axe, put it in her hands and snap your fingers to get her attention."Alright lets-"You dont finish, as suddenly you and Ema are knocked off your feet. As you two hit the wall and slide down, you look back to see a large tentacle coming from where Kreshdens body lay. The Tentacle sweeps at you two again and you:Roll a d100>Whip it good>Duck with Ema>Stop it with your bare hands!>Have Ema axe it>Other
Rolled 24 (1d100)>>38604500>Stop it with your bare hands!
Rolled 46 (1d100)>>38604500>>Whip it good
Rolled 85 (1d100)>>38604500>Stop it with your bare hands!STRONK!
Rolled 84 (1d100)>>38604500>>Stop it with your bare hands!
>>38604500>>38604525>>38604537>>38604570>>38604719As the tentacle comes for another sweep you grab it with both hands. You hold on tight as it tries to pull away from you, and as you hold on tight you turn back to Ema. Shes's slowly getting back to her feet, but as you hold on the tentacles starts to pull you closer."Ema! Could use some help right now!"Ema looks at you and slowly grabs her axe. She picks it up and rushes over, bringing the glowing edge down on the tentacle. You hear a loud screech from where Kreshdens body lies. She raises the axe and brings it down again, and again, and again, until finally it severs. The thing screeches again and the stump of the tentacle slams into Ema and sends her flying over the edge. She lands in the pool of acid with a loud splash and you:Roll a d100>Dive in after her>Take her axe and kill that thing!>Other(insert)
Rolled 21 (1d100)>>38604995>Dive in after her
Rolled 10 (1d100)>>38604995>Dive in after herI'd find it a surprising turn of event's if Ema actually survived Remina with us. Would certainly make the story more interesting if you ask me
Rolled 62 (1d100)>>38604995>Dive in after herMan i hope ema doesn't die....
>>38604995>>38605037>>38605054>>38605066You immediately run to the edge and dive into the pool of acid. You already lost Kreshden and you couldnt bare to lose Ema! As you enter the liquid you see Ema falling deeper into the dark pit. You swim down, determined to save your friend, and as you reach her you see her armor corroding...and yours. You grab her and swim to the air above and as you do you see more tentacles! You take off your whip with one hand, and hold Ema close with the other. You swim upward and:>Try to dodge the tentacles>Whip it good>Leave Ema behind>Push Ema ou then go back for your sword. You may need it>Other
Rolled 92 (1d100)>>38605851>>Whip it good
Rolled 91 (1d100)>>38605851>Whip it good
You didn't fall asleep again didja Kefkaa?
>>38606234No im waiting for a third person...like always sadly. Guess my quest is easily forgettable or dislikeable compared to others.
>>38606264Slow today across site, sadly.
>>38606264Nah just a slow day Kefka
People might join if the story continues maybe? Sorry if i'm sounding like an ass....
Rolled 84 (1d100)>>38605851
>>38605851>>38605894>>38605902>>38606485You clutch your whip and swirl it around at the tentacles. A few tentacles are caught in your swing and are slashed by the sizzling plasma. You keep swimming up, and as more tentacles come out of the walls of the pool you keep swinging your whip around and swimming at the same time. You reach the edge and push Ema out. Thank gods you saved her! You start to climb out with her until you feel something grab your leg and pull you back down. You look down furiously as the monstrous tentacles raise out of the pit to grab you and pull you down. You raise your whip and bring it down on the tentacles. You keep swinging away, burning through endless amounts of tentacles as more come out of the pit. Your armor burning away you have to do something now before its too late!3 turns till armor breachedRoll a d100 each>Kick at the tentacles>Keep swiping at them>Swim down and try to grab your blade. You need it>Other
Rolled 43 (1d100)>>38606685>Keep swiping at them
Rolled 98, 20 = 118 (2d100)>>38606685>>Kick at the tentacles>Keep swiping at themConsidering how long our blade ahs been down there it's probably gone now.
Rolled 98 (1d100)>>38606685>Kick at the tentacles
>>38606707>>38606769So we totally get a bonus for doubles right?
>>38606784Yes. You kicked with TWO legs instead of one. Good job anons!
>>38606830>You kicked with TWO legs
>>38606685>>38606685>>38606705>>38606707>>38606769>Double 98Your sick and tired of these god forsaken tentacles! You kick hard at the tentacles trying to pull you down, and as you do you free yourself! You kick again and again, hitting the tentacles hard, your strong armor sending the tentacles flying through the pool. As they fly away you swim back up and come out of the acid, your external armor slowly dripping off of you. You reach the lip of the pool and see Ema reaching her hand down. You reach up, grab her hand, and she pulls you up. As you come out she holds you steady for a second before speaking."Are you alright?"You check your armor over, finding it unbreached thankfully, and let out a sigh of relief. You then give her a thumbs up and check her armor for breaches which you dont seem to find. As you finish she looks at you then points back up to where Kreshdens body lies. You look up to see the Tentacle has grown larger and longer. "What are we gonna do about...that?"You feel the disgust in her shaky voice and as she points you put a hand on her shoulder to steady her.>Ill go kill it>We'll go kill it>Leave it>Other
>>38607110>Ill go kill itYou watch out for any thing else coming along.
>>38607110>Leave itI'd rather not risk it.Best to find a safe spot to bunker down....
>>38607110>>38607136>>38607154>>38607167"No. For now lets just leave it. If we need to kill it we can do it later. Remember Ema. Its not your fault, or my fault, or anyones fault ok?"Ema puts her hand down and you hear a soft sob."But i couldve done something..."You put your arms around Ema and pull her close into a hug. She slowly brings her arms around and hugs you in response"You couldnt have anymore than i couldve. Its alright Ema. If you need to say anything im here for you alright. Just remember. Keep calm and we can get out of here together."You pat her back as you feel a few more sobs before she stops crying."I...i need a minute...if you dont mind."You pull away and pat her shoulder. She walks away, axe in hand, and goes into the cave. You personally sit down against a rock and take a few deep breaths too steady yourself. This all has been far too much and too quick. You lay back against a less fleshy wall and sit and try to calm yourself down...until you hear a sound from the cavern entrance. The sound is slowly growing louder, and it sounds like a few more monsters. You hold your whip and:>Hide next to the entrance>Prepare to confront whats coming in>Hide behind a rock>Get Ema>Other
>>38607548>Get Ema>Hide behind a rock
>>38607548>>Hide behind a rock>>Get Ema
>>38607548>>38607630>>38607642>>38607657You run to the cave quickly, and look for Ema. You see her sitting in a ball, armor still fully on, and quickly shake her until she looks up."Shh! Weve got company."She nods and grabs her axe before coming with you. The two of you hide behind a rock and watch the doorway until you see what comes in finally. When you see it your mind tries to male sense of what your seeing, not because its monstrous, just because you cant believe its real.
>>38608433>Forgets to put CONTWell im retarded. Gimme a sec for next post.
>>38608433>>38608453Before your mind makes it to the rest of what your seeing it distorts things, speeds up, and shows you every other horror you saw or experienced on remina. As the visions hit you hard your eyes snap open and you come up screaming as everything hits you at once. Your screaming wakes up Horok next to you who snaps up and looks at you."Darling! Whats wrong?!"You scream a for a few more seconds as tears come into your eyes and you hold your head. Horok wraps his arms around you and holds you close."Darling calm down! Im here for you, calm down!"Horok hugs you close and you slowly calm down as tears stream down your face. Horok looks up at you worried and holds you closely. As you calm down you:>Hug horok>Kiss Horok>Hold his hand>Cry into his arms>Calm down(roll)>Say(insert)>Do(insert)>Other
>>38609023>Hug horokMemories best left unremembered.
>>38609023>Hug horok>Cry into his arms
>>38609023>Cry into his arms>hug Horok
>>38609023>Hug horok>Hold his hand>Cry into his arms
>>38609041>>38609049>>38609065>>38609070Tried my best to express that it was a pretty terrible place, but its hard to express that something was bad when You dang anons beat the SAN roll dr its not typical war and explosions and death and stuff. Did i give a semi-good showing on the fact that it was hell?Or am i still Horrible QM?
>>38609181Nah you expressed it perfectly if you ask me
Rolled 82 (1d100)>>38609023>Calm down>>38609181No, you expressed it pretty badly. It was pretty farcical, to the point of nearly being comical.
>>38609023>>Hug horok>>Kiss Horok>>Hold his hand>>Cry into his arms
>>38609243>Token anon to say it was badIm glad you exist. Its very important to have negative feedback every once in a while. As you know im still new to this->Nigga youve run over 20 threads on it-Whole writing thing. Period. As such i still needs ma feedback. Thanks Mean anon. I'd ask why it was bad but i only have so much self esteem left.
>>38609372Not that anon, but I dumped a bunch of helpful stuff on you last thread and you didn't even acknowledge it So you get site culture violating smilie faces. :(
>>38609023>>38609041>>38609049>>38609065>>38609070>>38609243>>38609260You wrap your arms around Horok and cry into his arms. He hugs you back and holds you tightly as you lean to him. He runs one hand through your long hair while the other wraps fully around you. The elf looks up at you, eyes filled with worry."Whats wrong Scarlet. What did you dream about?"You take a few deep breaths, but as soon as you calm down everything comes back and you cry some more. Horok tightly holds you close as you cry some more."Shush darling. Im here for your now."The door opens and quickly Dethoden and Droma rush in. They look over at you and Horok, but Horok waves them away as you continue to cry. The two look at Horok for a second before leaving. With those two gone Horok goes back to the matter at hand, you."Now darling. You dont have to tell me anything. But if you do i promise i can help."You take a few more deep breaths and calm yourself backdown. None of that was real. Its all in the past and your a woman of the present. You open your eyes and look into Horoks face.>Tell him everything(roll)>Tell him snippets>Tell him a little>Tell him it was just a nightmare>Regain your confident and calm attitude(roll)>Say(insert)>Do(insert)>Other>>38609554Thank you based anon for all your help.
Rolled 59 (1d100)>>38609799>Tell him everything(roll)
>>38609372If you don't want honest feedback when you do something badly, don't ask for feedback. You can write a large volume and still be shit at it.
>>38609799>Tell him a little
>>38609799>Tell him a littleDon't think we're ready to spill our guts just yet...
>>38609799>>Tell him everything(roll)INCOMING CRIT FAIL
Rolled 86 (1d100)>>38609799>Tell him a little>Regain your confident and calm attitude(roll)
Rolled 89 (1d100)>>38610061forgot the dice fuck
Rolled 48 (1d100)>>38609799>>Tell him everything(roll)This is gunna be gud. Cry while you say it
>>38609799>Thank you based anon for all your help.Did you even read it?
>>38610192The question isnt did i. Its why wouldnt I?I remember what your talking about but im very retarded(and sleepy)quickly remind me so i may give due credit to you.
>>38609799>>38609860>>38609927>>38609965>>38610010>>38610061>>38610084>>38610092>>38610117Crap i dont know how to write it Cause im a failure at QMing want me to do my best or just skip to something else?>QM! STOP BEING A FAG AND WRITE IT>Sure Qm. A short summary will do.
>>38610632>Sure Qm. A short summary will do.
>>38610632>QM! STOP BEING A FAG AND WRITE ITI want dem feels man!
>>38610632>QM! STOP BEING A FAG AND WRITE IT
>>38610632>QM! STOP BEING A FAG AND WRITE ITBut you'll never stop being a faggot, so it's kind of futile.
>>38610632>>I am following since thread number one and i believe in you QM, you can write it.
>>38610632>>38610669>>38610687>>38610706>>38610707>>38610727You start to speak, but telling everything is just too painful to bear. Its best to tell him only a little bit, for your sanity and so he can understand. Horok patiently awaits your response as you finally decide to speak."Horok. As im sure you know i am a agent. A spec ops agent to be precise. Im meant to be the best of the best, feel no fear, feel no pain, and always be ready to carry out my orders. But of course to get to that point i had to be trained."You falter for a minute and Horok hugs you tightly."You dont have to say it if you dont want to darling. It can wait.""No Horok, its best i say at least some of it now or never. Just needed to gather my thoughts. As i was saying i needed to be trained. It was grueling and hard, with us being hunted, fighting each other, constant weight and cardio training, but the hardest and most dangerous part was the survival training. Do you want to know why?""Because they gave no mercy?"You give a light laugh at that and he cocks his head."Your right. They didnt give any mercy. But "they" werent the instructors, the army or even humans or Xenos in general. But the real reason why was because i had two friends. Two friends i'd known for over 6 years at that point. They sent me and my friends to the training planet and..."You fight back a sob as Horok runs a hand through your hair gently."Not one whole day there and one of my friends was dead. He didnt get eaten, or eviscerated, or killed by the things. No his helmet was taken off, and when he was lying on the ground...he died, due to the air or because of the planet im not sure how, but he died and turned into a monster."Horoks ears go down a little and he frowns."And the other?">She died>She survived but went mad. Shes still a agent though.>She survived sane and we were split up>Other(insert)
>>38611892>She survived but went mad. Shes still a agent though.Imagine what I am magnified tenfold without sex, now imagine it shot at a planet. She's never left a survivor in her wake, ever.
>>38611923Second.But she still recognizes us as being her friend
>>38611892>She survived with me but...She....she killed herself a day after we got out . Took her own life, couldn't stand nightmares and memories. I keep reminding myself that was a coward's way out. But sometimes....i envy her.
>>38611950Eh second,Yeah i know i'm being a fag by seconding this but i need those feels
>>38611950Well yeah, she's never friendly fired, which is why they didn't shoot the planet out from under her after she's done killing.
>>386119592grimdark4me anon. But hell let's second it.
>>38611950Second,Hope this quest stays up til i get back from passing the fuck out
>>38611892I'm going to back this >>38611923
>>38611892>She survived sane and we were split upFuck the others.
Brb busy with life.Is she a eversor assassin?
>>38612470Sounds like she's part Eversor, Not fully
>>38612470She's an Eversor like we're a Callidus.
So I just flipped through the archive, and I've got a question.Why is this on /tg/? I'm serious. It's a quest about sex, futas, and all manner of fetishes. This should be on /d/. /tg/ is nominally a worksafe board and this is smut with a tint of plot.
>>38612706Combat, and interpersonal relationships. Also tg is known as D/lite for a reason.
>>38612739False/d/ Is /tg/ lite
>>38612739/d/-lite sure. But there's explicit stuff too. And the porny segments are just bad.
>>38612864What is this a thumbnail for ants?>>38612887Talk to the qm, I'm here for the fights and insanity.
>>38612903Glad i'm not the only one.
>>38612903I'm here for the story shockingly enough.It interests me to see where it's going to go
>>38612903I'm here for d'aaaws and hugs, cuddles and hand holding
Honestly this quest is basically Corruption of Champions. We even mutated after having enough sex. I blame the players for choosing the lewd votes, and the GM for allowing them. This could've been something cool, instead it's just cheap fap material.
>>38613590The door is thataway shitposter.Also you only bring this up now in thread 20? Nice going there bub.
>>38613590>>38612887>>38612706Look what you did, you scared the QM away.
Im back! Let us finish
>>38616120Woot woot! Glad to see you back Kefka!
>>38611892>>She survived sane and we were split up
>>38611892>She survived but went mad. Shes still a agent though.Its even odds. You become crazy, or you're a chill Scots-Russian.
>>38611892>She survived sane and we were split upI'd rather she didn't go full retard crazy insane and that we're still friends when we see each other.
>>38611892>>38611923>>38611950>>38611959>>38611967>>38611991>>38611993>>38612040>>38612091>>38612404You look into Horoks eyes, a part of you happy one friend is alive physically...and yet dead mentally."She survived with me. Sadly she went mad from the experience but shes still an agent. To picture her imagine me, magnified tenfold, and with no sex. You might actually get close to how dangerous she is in action. Shes never left a enemy survivor of her missions and probably wont be starting a trend of that any time soon. Luckily she still recognizes allied civilians, allied forces, and me but if your not in one of those 3 catrgories, which is basically everything else in the galaxy, your probably dead."You swallow as you recall distant memories. Before you finish speaking Horok rises and grabs you a drink before sitting back down."Thank you.""Your welcome darling. When was the last time you saw her?""The last time i saw her we actually worked together. We were both tasked with attacking and killing a commander. I went for the subtle approach, i cloaked, went in through a vent, and killed a number of enemies on my way to the officer. I heard a number of explosions and screaming on the way yet she never answered my comms. When i got to the target he was dead, ripped in half by her bare hands, and the whole side of his office blown away. There she is standing covered in the blood of enemies she killed with her bare hands and when i yell to her she turns to me, takes off her helmet, smiles and waves, gives this soul wrenching laugh, then runs to kill more enemies. After that we were deployed to separate parts of the galaxy and the rest is history."Horok makes a contemplative face before looking at you and smiling."Im sorry its been rough darling. On the brightside one friend is alive, insane yes but alive, and now you have more friends."You stop drinking, taken aback at the thought of other true friends."I have more friends?">Cont
>>38617090Horok smiles and looks in your eyes."Why yes you do darling. Have you not seen? They are all on your ship, just waiting for you to acknowledge them after all."You think for a second to all the people who you actually know. The elves you always considered allies who liked to have sex, Holen being the one you actually like the most of anyone. Tempas and Fe'lam are your first cherished slaves, Violet was a very powerful asset, Kemos is a soldier who gets work done and Holsten...is a good ally. You like all of those people but you dont feel like they are...friends to you. You turn back to Horoks smirking face."How are all these people my friends?""Well darling look closely. Me and the Senthians like you very much. We protect you, your ship, and its crew, not out of obligation mind you, but because we like it here and we like you. Your commanding attitude and natural charm are very endearing to us by now. When your gone for a long time, we talk about how much we like you and miss you, and what we like about you other than your body. Other than us, the two you consider slaves obviously love you dearly especially the called Tempas. Such quality friends you have in those two. While i may not be able to accurately speak for them i do know that Kemos, the recruits maybe, and the called Holsten, more or less like something about you, or at least i hope so..."He puts his hand on yours and you look down between it and him."Well darling? Dont you consider all of the people on this ship your friends? Dont you value us like we value you?"He raises his hand from you and sticks it out.>Yes. ENGAGE IN LEWD HANDHOLDING!!!!>Yes(insert)>No Horok. I dont.(insert why)>Other
>>38617563>>Yes. ENGAGE IN LEWD HANDHOLDING!!!!
>>38617563>Yes. ENGAGE IN LEWD HANDHOLDING!!!!
>>38617563>>38617599>>38617630>>38617657>>38617664>>38617880You smile at Horok and realize hes right. All these people are your new friends! And your job is to prove it. People like you for who you are, so why shouldnt you show that you like them? You can get to know the elves without copious amounts of sex, you can show that you truly Love Horok, Holen, and your slaves dearly one and the same. You can be a mother to your men, something you will do when your on the ground in battle, not a weak mother but a strong uplifting and protective one. The same goes for the recruits who probably dont like you very much. And in truth the person you can relate to the most is Holsten. Hes got stories similar to yours, hes got experiences similar to yours, hes nice, likes to talk and drink, and overall is one of the few people closest to being call a friend. You turn to Horok, his hand still outstretched, and take his hand in yours."Yes Horok. I do value everyone on this ship for who they are, and i promise to show that to everyone. Thank you for the support Horok. Im glad i have a...friend like you."Horok smiles and wraps his hand around yours."And im glad to have you as a friend Scarlet."You two savor the moment and then Horok looks you in the eye, sadistic smile back on his face."Now darling. Didnt we have a certain Commander in the other room that needed to be punished?"You smile back into his eyes, your sadostic side coming back to you."Yes we did Horok. Yes we did.""Well then, its been some time and im sure the ship is almost ready to go! We wouldnt want you to miss anymore the war now would we? Lets go turn her into her into your newest slave!"You and Horok, hands still entwined, rise and leave the room. If theres one thing your feeling right now its that after this, today will be a good day.>Thread endThread Archived vote it up: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Space%20Crusade%20QuestHow was teh thread? How bad was I
>>38618438JESUS CHRIST MAN SPOILER THAT SHIT!
>>38618470Dont you like Hi def porn anon?
I wonder if i make all of next thread the ground war nonstop would you all like it. Would you?
>>38618438The flashback was good. For me those were the most compelling parts of the quest. The writing was generally better for them and her relationships with Ema and Kreshden felt like they actually had some substance to them. Now that those are finished I'll probably just go back to skipping anything that isn't a battle.
>>38618438I just got home and caught up, thanks for the thread.>>38619918As long as there is some pacing to it, downtime when appropriate and such, it shouldn't be too bad, everything has to have balance, and as long as crit fails don't fuck us again.
Lol the thread is actually still here. Any anons here right now?
>>38626001Write it and we will come.
>>38626001I just got home from work and I'm about to sleep, and sadly I won't be around available to play until next week, though I look forward to catching up.
>>38626555Anon if your there. Is there a way to make my quest better overall? Like how can i make people like it more?
>>38627216>>38626568 hereyou've been doing pretty good so far OP, I'd say maybe tighten up the spelling and grammar, and keep a consistent schedule that your players can keep turning up to threads to and you'll keep doing fine. currently during peak times there are anywhere from 6-10 active players on at the same time which is pretty damn good.and now I really do need sleep, take care OP
Bumping for anons to arrive so i can discuss stuff with them.
>>38628050Reporting for duty!
>>38628076Well since your here lets start. How do unfetish this quest? While its great and all i want to try and do something other than smut for a few threads. I plan or on either going straight to landing on the planet for the ground war, more spess battle, or for us to break the commander(hopefully without smut)into being our slave.What do i do and how do i unfetish the quest?
>>38628174I hope you don't mean forever because it's already a central part of the quest.I mean yeah you can tone it down a little but up til now it's always been a central part of the quest so getting rid of it for good is basically destroying your own quest and i can definitely say you'll lose alot of your followers by getting rid of it completely
>>38628174Simple, don't write smut. When people bitch about it, simply tell them you don't wish to have this kind of content anymore. Also, pick a less fetishy char potrait.
>>38628358>>38628367So tone it down basically. And how should i run the ground war? Any suggestions?
>>38628808https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KUB9QGKCNmIAll Out War
>>38628808There are some map generators online. Run one of them and make one world you like. THen you should consider where the baddie bases are and in which enviroment.
>>38628883>>38629013Hm alright ill do a map generator. As for all out war how all out we talking about? Pretty big battle All Out or WH40K All out?
>>38629063WWii style battles would be nice.Shit ton of trench fighting ambushing and defense
>>38629217Any other suggestions.
>>38629217Because that seems nice and im definetely gonna incorporate it but anything else that you think i should add?
>>38629583Nothing i can think of off the top of my head sorry mate
>>38629604Well anything else you have a question about?
>>38629786I suppose i can ask a fewCan Horok make us weapons and armor for our troops? Can he also make mechs? Because i'd love to see our troops outfitted with pic related style gear. (Posting mech pic also)
>>38629885>>38629907>>38629946>>386299661. Yes. When Scarlet gets down to the planet she can request better armor and weapons and materials and recieve all of that. Cause she Spec Ops.2. Horok cant because he only has so many materials, and its 500 men.3.Them pics are awesome. Dump some more m8!
>>38630061Can Holen teaches us psychic powers ? I think she used some in our fight.
>>38630061Will look for more pics.Brb
>>38628174It's a little late for that. Like it or not to most players this quest is about a hypersexual commando flying about the galaxy capturing slaves to add to her harem. Her suit drinks cum ffs. If you want to run a smut quest why the hell did you keep writing it that way?
>>38630225didn't want to*
>>38630127Were a nigh unbeatable melee juggernaut. Why do we need psychic powers?>>38630184Cool thanks m8.>>38630225*Shrug*
>>38630440Posting more pics i found
>>38630440Because i don't want to be mindraped next time a psychic appears, or lose another crewmate to said psychic.
>>38630591And that's all i got
>>38630613Eh i'd rather not be psychic to be honest
>>38630613Also, i want more TRAUMA moments as to unlock our potential we have to face our memories. Plus, we'll bond with Holen even more, having more chances for hand holding, and shy confessions of love
>>38630689Eh i'd rather not have TO much trauma moments.Every now and then is fine i guess though
>>38630504>>38630511>>38630530>>38630546>>38630558>>38630575>>38630591>>38630617Noice. Really liking the trencher one.>>38630689Yeah...no psychic powers. But i promise you trauma.Any other questions? Aliens, soldiers, setting?
>>38630966Only one question i got.When you gonna start up the story again? This thread or next one? And if next thread when's the next thread?
>>38631047Next thread is tomorrow. We shall advance the storyline hopefully then. I plan on it.
>>38631356Kay, Gotta go now hope to see ya tomorrow!