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>>36328568Good evening US, I just noticed ya, so I'm reading now, wonder if you went with the smut scene or not after the discussion we had in the thread.Readin' now.
>>36328943I went with the smut scene, yeah. Just vaginal oral followed by anal sex.
>>36328574Roll back onto the bed, with Chara on top of us and our cock still plugging her ass.Bring a hand to the back of her head and guide it towards us, kissing her deeply and forcing our tongue into her mouth while our other hand caresses her butt, thighs, and body."See, all you have to do is be honest with me, and you can feel good."
>>36328971Yeah, that was nicely done mate.>>36328574Okay, I think we should definitely not give her vaginal tonight, but I'm not sure on whether to have a bit more fun with her now.If we do, then I'd suggest>keep our dick in her asshole>lie over her, our body pressing against hers>"Now, wasn't that fun?">pick her up like this, sit down on the bed with her in our lap>when she turns to us to protest kiss her again, gyrate/rotate her hips on our cock>mess with her sex with our fingers, maybe encourage her to pleasure herself a bit (breasts maybe, if we aren't the one dealing with them)>maybe turn her around completely while still on our cock so she faces us in our lap, tell her to try out what vaginal sex would be like with us, have her move on her own, help her alongOr something, yeah?
>>36329104I like it
>>36329149We won't take her virginity tonight, but pleasing her pussy and convincing her to self masturbate by playing is good too. While we're away she'll work up that hole all her own until one day she'll beg for it to be filled.
>>36329206I just hope she doesn't break her hymen while playing with herself, that's part of the pleasure in deflowering her would be, working through that pain.
>>36329226Do goats have hymens?
>>36329256Good question, and one worth investigating, I imagine. Maybe a bit of fingering could answer that, but I don't know if I want to go that far yet, just the outer area and our tongue entering her slightly should be enough to get her really looking forward to it, I kind of want penetration to be a whole new sensation for her when we take her virginity.
>>36328943 >>36329104 >>36329149 >>36329151 >>36329206 >>36329226 >>36329256 >>36329432
So what do we have planned after this/for todays game?Think we should start dealing with our brother soon and head off on that quest?
>>36329577We still need to get around to giving Kini a nice dicking. Maybe finish turning Patina into our fuckslave, or raping Lorenne another time for good measure.
>>36329577We still need to break Lorenne.
>>36329577Might be an idea to go and get Lorenne properly acquainted with her new living standards and position. By which I mean more rape and abuse.
>>36329577I think we need to give Patina her daily dose of cum.Then spend a few hours with Kini to reward her since she's been so useful.
>>36329605>>36329606>>36329622Kini nicening and Lorenne rapening before we go? I can dig it.Actually the way I see it we might bring Kini with us since she's a very useful infiltrator.
>>36329606Lorenne'll probably be harder to break than normal, since a) she's human and b) she's a badass amazon warrior. I'm not sure it's good to really plan on breaking her properly in the time we have left to us.
>>36329605I agree with your first two points, actually.That fucking Kini brushing has been postponed too much already.>>36329564Find Despina, tell her about our little session with Chara, see if she can't do some subtle manipulation as she sees fit.Find Adelle, talk a bit, get her to come with us to give Patina a dose of semen.This is what I've got so far, maybe visiting town and seeing how things are going there and to show our presence?
>>36329634We just had a Patina scene two sessions ago though.Buuut, I would like to see a scene where we use Patina to humiliate Lorenne in exchange for our cum, that would be pleasant.
>>36329664>We just had a Patina scene two sessions ago though.It's supposed to be done every day.
>>36329685This one, presumably:http://s25.postimg.org/bcnybzzzj/394.png
>>36329714There's no set schedule.
>>36329652We're in a hurry to go somewhere in character?
>>36329723Huh, so we did.
>>36329685Yeah, right after we came home after the long trip. Adelle and us shared our favorite copper toy and dominated her aslo fed her to get her addicted to our cum.We left a hammer up her ass after fucking here there, it's a really great place to keep it always nearby and handy.
>>36329737Not really, but this is the wrap up part of the story and I don't think US wants us dicking around for several months as we slowly break Lorenne.
>>36329764Yeah, smut and plot are like fruits and vegetables. You need healthy doses of each.
Pick one/all:- Patina (with or without Adelle)- Kini (presumably without Adelle)- Lorenne (with or without Adelle)- Despina (to tell her to get Chara in the right headspace)- something else?
>>36329847Lorenne, with Adelle.
>>36329847Kini. Need some loving with the pet.
>>36329847Can we do a Lorenne scene using Patina, and Adelle watching? That is, making Patina participate in humiliating Lorenne for our cum, while Adelle watches
>>36329847>Despina (but tell her to only do it if she feels it's a good idea, can do it subtly, and doesn't feel out of place)>Patina>go into town
>>36329847>- Kini (without Adelle)Can we combine;>- Lorenne (with Adelle)>- Patina (with Adelle)for maximum abuse?
>>36329908We can do a Kini scene with her on the road though, if we're going to bring her along with us when we go to settle score with our brother.
>>36329909Patina isn't hooked on our cum yet, she wouldn't do that for it, and we're risking them teaming up.
>>36329932We promised a while back though.
>>36329932Not that anon, but I actually do want to spoil Kini at home, just no yet, we don't have to go away today.
Is anyone actually against talking to Despina for some reason? I mean, I don't think it would take all that much time, don't see why we wouldn't do it.
>>36329940I know she isn't hooked on us yet, it would be part of the breaking process.As for the risk of them teaming up, we can always gag Lorenne so they can't speak, maybe even blindfold Patina so she doesn't know who she is molesting. There is always a risk of them teaming up so long as both of them are in our house, but as long as we cut communication between them it should be safe (just like we are doing right now) and in any event only Adelle knows how to unfreeze Patina.
>"It's okay, pet. I know you're a very good girl, so I'm not angry." She gives a very small nod. "I have a few things to do, right now, so I'm going to have to put you off. But that's just because I want to be able to spend all the time on you that you deserve, okay?"This is, I think, yesterday afternoon? We've fucked three other girls in the meantime. Kini needs some spoiling.
>>36329985I dare say, getting Patina to be addicted to us in the presence of Lorenne may even be safer, get her desensitized and even train her to treat Lorenne like trash and be subservient to us.
Lorenne/Patina:>>36329909Lorenne:>>36329861Kini:>>36329908>>36329928Patina:>>36329914I guess you could argue it's vote-splitting, but whatever, I need something to go on to write the next update, and you can rape Lorenne and/or Patina afterwards. Unless anyone has complaints, I'll do the "talk to Despina" bit as well.
>>36330061Kini for the next update. We owe here.I vote with Lorenne/Patina afterwards.
>>36330061Despina is fine, then we can do some talking with Kini that will transition.Don't forget to bring the brush!
>>36330061I'll switch my vote from Lorenne to include Lorenne and Patina.
>>36330247I'm writing already, sorry. You can do Lorenne/Patina after Kini.
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>>36330397>Be gentle but slightly controlling>Brush her hair and tail>Tell her to tell us what she wants to do, since this is her rewardWe'll decide after hearing her response.
>>36330397Some heart to heart was good last time, maybe a little talk before foreplay is good too.>>36330528Less a reward, more an understanding of her new place. As a master asks his servant and pet, a person, not a fucktoy i'm still sore we can't use that word anymore, but whatever
>>36330397Whatever else we do, we should say and do something reassuring for Adelle before we head out.By the way, I know we've decided to treat Kini much nicer, but do we have a policy about what's in and out of bounds for Adelle? I get the impression (perhaps erroneously) that she's still viewing Kini as a slave to be pre-emptorily ordered about. Do we want to try to get her to change?
>>36330568Fuck pet is better.
I'm going to bet that Adelle hasn't masturbated since we got married and that's why she's constantly randy.
>>36330579We told her to be nicer, as far as I remember.>>36330568It's also a reward since she's been such a good little tanuki though.
>>36330568Patina is our new fucktoy, and in a more literal sense too.
>>36330528 >>36330568 >>36330579 >>36330583 >>36330620 >>36330653 >>36330842God I hope I haven't completely lost Kini's voice/personality.
>>36330579>>36330653>Slave"servant" is a proper term, and Kini has even learned to call us Lord and Adelle (and presumably Arenne) as Lady, as she should.Don't be so phobic about Adelle. From what I am seeing of late, I do not see anything to worry about. Kini looks relaxed around Adelle, and she is treating Kini nicely. Like the lady of a house and her pet, this is working out pretty well
>>36330971Let's start with rubbing our cock and balls in her face and getting a tongue bath, and then maybe getting a massage? Does Kini know how to give one?
>>36330971>Tell her we're happy she thinks so>kiss her>let her give us a blowjob, maybe remark how long it's been I'm kid of hoping for some smell play/worship here from her>in the middle of it, pick her up and lay her on the bed, play with her sex with our hands, maybe with breasts as well>once she's really getting into it, warn her, and pick her up so we're in a 69 position, give her oral while she blows usCan we do this scene in chunks, or do you want to do it all at once, US?
>>36330998Also I wonder if Kini is legitimately happy when she makes us happy or feel good, like she's fulfilled when she's a good pet to her master. If so that is great.>>36330971I did miss that blowjob we could've had when she kissed us during dinner last time, I would like to see just how good she can make us feel with that dogs tongue of hers lapping us.>>36331066She can massage our balls or around our groin while she licks us, that'd be good.
>>36330998>"servant" is a proper term, and Kini has even learned to call us LordShe's our pet, not our servant. More intimate, but lower position. And Kini calls us master, not Lord.
>>36331103>Smell/play worship>69Yes please, want to see us fingering her bum and licking her clit as she tries to give us oral.>>36331177Right. My mistake.
Reposting from a while back:ideas:- petting/ear scratching while receiving a blowjob- fucking her with master/pet dirty talk (i love master, i want master's cock, good girl, you're a good little fuck pet, give master a kiss, etc).- maybe take advantage of shapeshifting somehow? If we don't do so soon, we never will.- collar her (maybe take the collar from Chara) so that everyone can see she's a good little pet- tail wagging as we fuck her- kissing/nibbling her ears.- fuck her doggystyle while scratching behind the ears, get her really panting with her eyes rolled up as we fuck her.
>>36330971Disrobe, and have Kini take off her clothes in front of us. Do a little dance for us. Then have her get back in our lap as we brush her tail and use a rag to clean her ass. Kiss her, invade her mouth and have our tongue claim every inch of it. Kiss her all over, hold her body against ours as our hands roam all over her.
>>36331209> If we don't do so soon, we never will.I like >>36331289 idea of her doing a nude dance for us, maybe even grind on us to get us hard.Maybe ask her if she ever had to dance in one of her many disguises on her adventures. As Liadra or whoever.
Let's all pretend Baron washed his cock between fucking Chara's butt and now, even though that hasn't been said in the story. Say, between talking to Despina and looking for Kini.
>>36331565Yeah, that's probably a thing he would have done when picking up the brush and such.
>>36331209Why not brainstorm potential shapeshifter ideas?How do you feel about conesntacles, letting her pleasure and massage our wife Adelle all over her body, penetrating and groping her ass, squeezing her breasts, maybe even gently lifting her in the air like a sex chair we fuck her?>>36331565lets
>>36331565Yes, that's good. Also prepared the washcloths and buckets for cleaning out Kini's asshole and getting her ready?
>>36331605Can Kini shapeshift specific parts of her body?Let's play with her clit in our fingers until she's very sensitive and stiff, and then ask her to make it slightly bigger and watch her squirm with pleasure.
>>36331605I don't like the idea of Kini pleasuring Adelle, or Arenne, or mostly any of our girls.I could take like fucking her as her human persona, or making her do some body modifications on the fly, bigger breasts, longer hair if we want to grab her by her hair, making her enlarge her own clit for us to play with, fucking her in different forms, seeing if she can maintain them, seeing how it feels different for her, and of course doing something along the lines of what Levy did to her while she's in the shape she was in at the time, to demonstrate how much better we are, but of course doing it more gently.But anyway, yeah, not a fan of tentacles idea since that can't really be done submissively to us, maybe just making her grow one/a tail and sticking it up her ass?
>>36330998 >>36331066 >>36331103 >>36331114 >>36331177 >>36331196 >>36331209 >>36331289 >>36331384 >>36331587 >>36331605 >>36331615 >>36331679Actually, I think I'll do a half-scene and a vote. Bit different from normal, but whatevs.
>>36331687>of course doing something along the lines of what Levy did to her while she's in the shape she was in at the time, to demonstrate how much better we are, but of course doing it more gently.Did we ever get confirmation that Levy fucked her when she was disguised as Elisetta or did we go with "don't ask, don't want to know"?
>>36331690>"I will, pet, if you're sure you want it there."
Catching up. Fuck saturdays.
>>36331679>>36331687I definitely want to see some clit play. Maybe even growing her breasts and we play with them, possibly even milking them.
>>36331726We went with don't ask, IIRC.
>>36331690Tell her we'll give her our cum if she keeps being a good girl a little longer.That way we can do a few more kinky things with her body and enjoy it, and then reward her for following us with our cum.
>>36331690If we cum in her mouth now, can we still play with Kini with another smut scene until we're hard again?
>>36331690Actually, I'd like to add on to >>36331754 that if she gets what we mean then we can>pick her up, lay her on the bed, start fingering her pussy>tell her to work our cock gently and slowly, instead of fucking it just enjoy the taste>make her cum once, then switch to 69 position and give her oral>ask if she wants it *there* or *here* or *here* while still playing with her, maybe while massaging her body and giving her oral slowly
>>36331858Sure, if that's what people want.
There are a lot of good suggestions here I'm wondering how we can possibly fit them all.>>36331690How about-Feed Kini our cum-have her sit on our lap facing away from us, play with her pussy/clit while nibbling her doggy ears. Tell her to make her clit bigger while we rub it between our thumb and index finger, while putting our other hand in her mouth, keeping it open as she moans, drools and slathers around it-Once our hand is lubed up, place it in her butt and do a double pronged attack, wiggling our finger in her ass and playing with her engorged clit until she cums-By then we'll have become hard again, and do >>36331893-lay her on the bed, in 69 position-tell her to work our cock gently and slowly, instead of fucking it just enjoy the taste-ask if she wants it *there* or *here* or *here* while still playing with her, maybe while massaging her body and giving her oral slowly
>>36332038*also in 69 we suck her big clit with our mouth, maybe even lightly (very lightly) pinching it between our tongue and upper teeth
>>36331690Scratch her behind the ears, and tell her that she's a good girl, we'll give her plenty of our cum. We want to play with all of her holes first.Have her crawl onto the bed, present her body to us. Spread her legs wide for us, so that we can nibble our way down her thighs, and eat out her pussy till she comes.
>>36331893>>36332038>>36332082These are all acceptable, but we'll feed her after we have our fun.
Okay, finished my meal. Let's see... how about this:- cum in her mouth- have her lie on the bed, start pleasuring her (use shapeshifting to maybe have her make her tits/clit bigger as we play with them)- when eventually erect once more, do a 69Sound good?
>>36332346Sounds nice to me, let her suckle a bit on our dick to taste it once we cum, while we exploringly play with her pussy a bit, as well as scratching her ears, maybe once she's done sort of cleaning us off we can pull her off our dick and push her face down so our dick slides up her face and she ends up next to our balls/start of our shaft so she can lick/smell a bit more before changing position?
>>36332346> start pleasuring her (use shapeshifting to maybe have her make her tits/clit bigger as we play with them)I still liked the idea of us doing that while she sits on our lap, makes it easier for us to whisper and nibble her ears. But it's good overall.Still throwing in my little tidbit about some finger mouthplay, and once our finger is slick putting it in her butt.
>>36332416>I still liked the idea of us doing that while she sits on our lapHmm, yeah, that sounds like a good position to do that in.
>>36331726 >>36331754 >>36331772 >>36331778 >>36331779 >>36331803 >>36331858 >>36331893 >>36332038 >>36332068 >>36332082 >>36332189 >>36332407 >>36332416Looks like this scene is still going.
>CharaI wonder if playing random grabass would work. Catch her, take her behind something, give her a good kiss, suck or fingering. Make sure to say we want her soon, then continue.If she finds a way to catch us alone in a room, just keep pushing boundaries.>LevyStill voting for getting an official statement regarding her actions from Erosette/Veronique. If Levy wants to challenge it, we can stand on the other side.Push the idea we will be verifying her involvement in our brother's demise, wait for the reaction.
>>3633297669 her. Have her lie on the bed with her head over the side and lean over her, suck on her clit, play with her tits (also have her stop growing them, they're big enough now), and fuck her face.
>>36333072Don't forget to let her draw us out again. And maybe light nibbling of her sensitive clit.
>>36333093>Don't forget to let her draw us out again.??
>>36332976Lie down and have Kini ride us. Tell her the purpose is to make her cum hard. She can ask for more touching, force, etc. Let her fuck her brains out.When she's worn down, pick her mind about what kind of reward she would enjoy the most for being the best pet.
>>36333109As in, the purpose isn't to make us just come quick and clean. Let her and us savor the sensation, the best orgasms have lots of anticipation behind them.
>>36332976Turn her around on our lap, and suck on her tits while we continue playing with her ass.Pull her with us as we lay back on the bed, then have her crawl up so that we can kiss down her body as she travels up. Then turn around, tell her to put her ass on display for us, entice us, the good sex pet seducing her master to claim her ass for his pleasure.
>>36332997 >>36333072 >>36333093 >>36333109 >>36333150 >>36333230 >>36333597Okay, that should be it for this Kini scene. Jesus it went long. Hopefully it was good for you guys, though?
>>36334064Sit on the bed, let her face lay in our lap while she suckles us, then brush her hair as she does so, let her get herself together, tell her we enjoyed pleasing her.Also, get her breasts back to their normal size.Honestly I would have preferred fucking her and doing 69 with her breasts back to regular size.
>>36334230I liked it eitherway. Tell her more that we enjoyed pleasing her, tell her she made master happy. She was a very good girl. Brushing and ear scratching are ok too.
>>36334064>Hopefully it was good for you guys, though?No, it was terrible. Jesus. At least we're moving on, now.
>>36334064Sheets are ruined anyway, so use them to clean her up. Reassure her we'll keep her around and safe, for she is a good pet. Send her back to Adelle, and tell Kini she can share all the details if she asks.Idea: Let her pick a trinket from our room, as a keepsake.What's next on the list? We still have no plan for Levy. We could try to trick some information out of Lorenne.
>>36334367>We still have no plan for Levy. We could try to trick some information out of Lorenne.Have Kini pretend to be Levy, somehow? Trick Lorenne that way?
>>36334398>>36334367Ideas were proposed a few threads ago by both Adelle, ourself as US, and some players. Let me see if I can find any.One big one is letting Levy know about Lorenne's situation as our prisoner for trying to murder us, and see if he'll act on it and we can catch him.
>>36334367Also before we go on an adventure, we still have a Lorenne/Patina scene to do before we go.
>>36334398Well, we could tease about her fucking the wrong Nell. Or having to always use a bow because she can't do it properly.Mainly bait her until we have things to corroborate with Kini, who followed her for weeks. If we find out about regularity of contact, letters and stuff,we can probably forge our way into something.
So when did Kini turn from terrified fuck toy to loyal fuck pet?
>>36334602Saved our life once. Helped us take down Lorenne. Had an honest convo about her being good and that she doesn't need to fear BAron.Baron and Adelle started being nice to her (as a pet). So Kini is now into it, at least because she's certain to get treated better.
>>36334602It took a while, a lot of talking, some near life/death incidents being shot at by Lorenne, but we've finally stabilized into a position we can be comfortable with.>>36334692Might be just a smidge of cum addition there too, which is good.
>>36334064What time is it now, in character?
>>36334709God, I don't even know. You went on a date with Arenne, fucked Chara, and now fucked Kini, so... dinner time-ish, I guess?
>>36334741Dinner, then feeding and teasing Lorenne with our wife?We should probably gauge our household at dinner. Chara got something out of the buttfuck. How Adelle reacts to having Kini around after being used (amused, curious, stone face, etc). If Arenne is actually in a better mood, etc.
>>36334830I say just spend some time cuddling with Adelle while Kini sleeps.
>>36334830This. Dinner, reassure Adelle, and then we gather up Patina and first wifey to start breaking our new bitch.
>>36334830Dinner does seem like a good place to guage the household interaction.>>36334877She is on her period, so cuddling is good.Tommorow we humiliate Lorenne, and maybe get something out of it, and after that that literally covers everybody on our return home (bar Elisetta and Melisende) and we're ready to head off with Kini to deal with our brother.But for god sakes we must come up with a plan somehow, we already talked to Adelle and she's stumped as well, though we have options we don't really have a definitive choice.
>>36334933She isn't on her period.She's fucking pregnant.
>>36334230>Honestly I would have preferred fucking her and doing 69 with her breasts back to regular size.Then you should have said something.
>>36334976Votes were not leaning towards it.Not complaining, just being honest.
>>36334967and I'm a dummy who forgot that entirely.Welp, gonna lurk.
>>36334230 >>36334339 >>36334344 >>36334367 >>36334398 >>36334456 >>36334472 >>36334523 >>36334602 >>36334692 >>36334702 >>36334709 >>36334723 >>36334830 >>36334877 >>36334915 >>36334933 >>36334967 >>36334991 >>36335108If you want to do anything in particular at dinner, vote for that as well.
>>36335130At this point, I just want to keep my eyes and ears open, see how the others are doing.
>>36335130Yeah sure, be affectionate with our wives, and get the word on what's happening in the streets.
>>36335130Git rags. Comment to Adelle we may need her presence with Lorenne later.>do anything at dinnerBesides >>36334830 and casual convo, not much. Later we can ask Despina how Chara's mood changes after being fucked.Lewd ideas? Tease Arenne, feeding her while going for her thighs. Doubt it can be pushed all the way, though.
>>36335200 >>36335289 >>36335299You can just skip the rest of dinner if you want to.
>>36335661Let's just skip it, and reconvene with Adelle and Patina ready to break in our new bitch.
>>36335661Looks like Adelle could use some loving tonight. Juniper's still sore I see, heh, maybe later we need to show her no hard feelings, later.boy am I glad the fact that we buttfucked Chara isn't extremely obvious to Arenne, Despina is rightly concerned>>36335866I am a bit curious to what Elisetta and Arenne are discussing, if only as a chance to learn more about the setting at large. We can skip the rest though.
>>36335661I'd like to see just a bit more from the dinner scene, but then we have our playtime with Adelle, Lorenne, and Patina.
>>36335866 >>36335901 >>36336113Is everybody banned because of the quest thread general thing?
>>36335661>wholesome family dinnerNice shift, this one.>Chara still smug after powergasmingHow does she dew it.>Despina needs to teach Chara how to hide post-fuck lethargy>ElisettaWell, at least she is getting an education. Guess dickings would get in the way.
>>36336318There seems to be a pattern of a peak time of activity at about a few hours into the game, and then mellowing out near the end.People have schedules I guess, some people can't be here all the time or even make it until much later.
>>36336318>Lorenne/Patina sceneOh this is gonna be fun, lemme think of some ideas.
>>36336318We should go with an icily polite but pure nasty tone. Say hello, ask her how she's doing. Every time she says the word 'I' or 'Me' or refers to herself as anything other than Bitch, we either slap the shit out of her or have Patina do it for us. Ask her how she's doing, a bit about the plot. Less to get information, but more to punish her every time she doesn't show the proper deference. Break her down, but let her know that if she does behave, if she holds to our nigh-impossible standards, she gets a reprieve.And maybe piss on her to start if we haven't gone to the bathroom after dinner. I at least was having some trouble with 4chan, I don't know how widespread it was
>>36336318I for one just didn't have anything to say.Don't have much to offer now other than to voice my support for the most disgusting, abusive and degrading things anon can come up with.
>>36336318Haven't posted there today. All the uber-deletion?Well, start by freeing some bindings and feeding her, perhaps some wine. Get Patina to grind on Baron's leg and start teasing Lorenne.Why kill our dear brother? Why fuck the wrong Nell? Why be a coward with a bow? Order the zombies to manhandle her during it.
>>36336318I kind of want to speak with Lorenne a bit, ask what she feels gives her a reason to look so smug.
I'd like to see something where Lorenne sits on Patina's lap, who will become something like a living copper cage device, wrapping one metallic arm around both of Lorenne's arms, and using her copper legs to spread her lorenne's legs (like a Gyno chair), locking Lorenne into an open and vulnerable position.Even if that isn't feasible, I would like Patina's copper fingers up Lorenne's butthole, order her to play with it. Gape it, spread it to the open air, move her fingers around and feel the inside of it. She'll be doing that everytime we're not currently using that hole.If we can do the copper cage thing, Adelle with lock her in pace, we'll put some lube on her and she'll be playing with Lorenne's butt for the rest of the night, like a good little coppergirl, we know her fingers won't get tired. (we'll aslo gag Lorenne so she doesn't give Patina any ideas).
>>36336696Actually, just bind Lorenne normally and place her in a position Patina can molest her the whole night. Instead of gagging Lorenne, have Patina grab her tongue with her fingers, keeping her mouth slightly open, so all she can do is drool and moan around it and futile try to bite her copper hand, while her other hand is working on her butthole, fingers spreading and keeping both those holes open to the world all night.
Have Patina sodomize Lorenne from behind with the end of the hammer, and penetrate her mouth with her fingers while we fuck her cunt from the front. Use verbal teasing, asking her if she likes being fucked in the ass and taking whatever noise she makes through Patina's fingers as a "yes" and a signal for Lorenne and ourselves to pump harder or to pinch her tits or clit some more.
Do we want to get Lorenne pregnant? I personally think it'd be fucking hot to make her into an involuntary broodmare, but maybe other people disagree.
>>36336989I'd rather not do that to our potential son or daughter, who will have to live with the fact that they cannot be treated as equals to our actual legitimate heirs from Arenne or Adelle.
Can we have the zombies or Patina open her mouth so we can piss all over her face and have her taste it?
>>36336989>>36336989>knocking up our assassin before our dear second wifeNO
>>36336933After we're done with her cunt, switch spots. Have Patina put the end of the hammer into Lorenne's mouth so she can taste her own shit, while we fuck her ass.At the end of all this we'll cum into Patina's mouth since "we're pleased with how our property performed". Since she's not really a person, but a thing we own. Don't forget to put the hammer back into her ass where it belongs.>>36337118Also yeah, that's another reason.
Hmm. Okay, how's this:- interrogate Lorenne again, mostly just as an excuse to abuse her. Every time she answers a question "wrong" (which will be pretty much every time she answers), slap her, abuse her, have Patina or Adelle do something nasty to her, etc.- when the faux-interrogation's through, have Patina move around behind Lorenne, use one hand on her butt to hold it open/spread it wider, the other on her mouth to gag her with fingers holding her tongue.- fuck Lorenne, threaten to knock her up (but don't actually), watch her squirm at the idea of being forced to carry her rapist's child.- have Patina pull her hand out of Lorenne's butt, put it in her mouth and use it to hold Lorenne's mouth open, watch as she gags and chokes in response to the taste of her shit- fuck Lorenne's ass- piss on Lorenne's face- cum in Patina's mouth
Lorenne will probably have to shit sometime tonight. Tell Patina to switch hands when she feels something squishy running down the hand up her open ass. Make sure to put the fingers with the shit into her mouth first, and then pull out her other hand from her mouth and put it in her ass (so she doesn't have a chance to say a damn word). It'll be all lubed up with drool, solving the lube issue rather nicely.
>>36337346Just assume the zombies are taking care of Lorenne's bodily functions in a fairly sanitary way, otherwise she'd be sitting in piss and shit by this point, probably half-starved.
>>36337310Do ask her about why she chose the wrong sibling. Even our elder brother was easier to negotiate with than stringing Levy.>>36337046>>36337118>Chara could get knocked up losing her virginity>Can't deny she takes dickings, decides to own it>Raises a bisexual tomboy top, best fuck after Baron
>>36337310Don't just hold her ass open, keep moving, play with it, spread it in different ways all the time.I want to see some spanking. Lots of spanking on her ass and tits, let's turn her skin red. Don't forget lots of clit/nipple pinching.Other than that, looks good. Gonna try to make sure I'm putting something in here I won't think of tommorow and say "damn, I wish I knew to put that in then">>36337372That's what I gathered, they were in charge of feeding and cleaning
>>36337372>>36337310Remember to put the hammer back in the hole it belongs when we're done.
Oh, hmm, what's Bitch's role supposed to be? Supposing you did break her down completely, what do you want from her?
>>36337567maid or guard
>>36337605I meant more like, Kini was a toy and is a pet, Patina's an onahole, etc. What's Bitch's role? Slave? Toy? Masturbation aid?
>>36337628She's a piece of meat. A bag of flesh and shit we own.Like Patina, except not made of metal.
>>36337567I don't think this would be a very popular opinion, but if it were solely up to me, I would make her serve Adelle for a while, testify to whatever she knows about the plot to have us killed. Then I would kill her. You don't tolerate a threat like that; but I want to be Big Brother here, first we get a forced conversion, and only eliminate once we've demonstrated we've won.
>>36337669US was meaning more in a smut sense of what her role is. >>36337628
>>36337567Warrior Trophy.Good wrestler and huntress.Keeps her body fit to fight and take it hard. Complaining is weakness, orgasming is not.
>>36337658>>36337669>>36337698>>36337700Basically, fill in the [x]:[Lorenne relents her attempts to insult you for the moment.]"Good, Bitch," you say, voice sadistically smooth. "You've already made the first step towards becoming [x]"
>>36337713I would leave it vague for now. Something like "becoming acclimated to your new life".
>>36337713Well, we already used Fucktoy for KiniPatina is our property.Hrmm, this is a tricky one. We can use slave as a failsafe. But there might be a better word out there.Meatbag?Bimbo?Slut?Hole?
>>36337713A maiden.I think Lorenne is anything but. However, being stoically mannered and demure with Baron while staying a powerhouse feels like a good "gap".
>>36337823"slut" or "hole" works with me. So yeah, another masturbation aid, like a living sex doll.
>>36337823Cum bucket, cum slut, sex slave, cocksleeve...
>>36337934personal cum slut just reminder her that she belongs to us now
>>36337969Cum slut. Fitting since that's how we work over our other monstergirls anyway.
>>36337934Still prefer maiden.We'll make her quiet, mannered and obedient. All the while plowing her holes and roughing up her body.
>>36338055somehow, I like this idea too.
I actually went with the vague answer for the moment. Didn't really get that far breaking her down.
>>36338288She's a trooper. She will take it in silence, climax repeatedly, then calmly bow and excuse herself. Being HUGE is the perfect icing on the cake.
>>36336352 >>36336368 >>36336436 >>36336449 >>36336497 >>36336524 >>36336560 >>36336696 >>36336780 >>36336933 >>36336989 >>36337046 >>36337083 >>36337118 >>36337190 >>36337333 >>36337346 >>36337411 >>36337422 >>36337492 >>36337605 >>36337658 >>36337669 >>36337698 >>36337700 >>36337807 >>36337823 >>36337833 >>36337892 >>36337969 >>36337971 >>36337994 >>36338049 >>36338055 >>36338288 >>36338668 Wound up going long, hope that's not a problem.
>>36338867Not a problem at all.Put them in their place for the night, the Lorenne is going to spend the night with Patina's fingers playing with her mouth and ass, and the hammer goes back in Patina's ass if it isn't in there.It would be nice for Lorenne to keep that muscled figure, somehow. Perhaps forced exercise and labor? We could make her run nude in the night, maybe even work at the copper mines one day.
>>36338867No problem at all. We should be ready, however, for harsher punishments with Lorenne than just slapping.
>>36338867Lorenne can be Patina's sister, and iron maiden.We should let Adelle straddle Bitch, then take her ass while she mouths off the prisoner. That way Adelle can get her freak on without worrying about the baby.
>>36339429Imagine Adelle after nine months with no Baron dickings. Just imagine. Your plan is undone before it even begins.
>>36339487Our son better enjoy sharing Adelle's insides
>>36339562I googled it earlier and doctors say there's not really any risk to the baby from rough sex.
>>36338867I'll second >>36339340; get Patina into proper position and leave her with some fingers in Lorenne.
>>36339635>>36339340Make sure to tell Patina not to relax now, she's too keep herself busy feeling up that butt from the inside. If Lorenne isn't squirming every-now and then, she's isn't doing it enough.
>>36339340 >>36339367 >>36339429 >>36339487 >>36339562 >>36339583 >>36339635 >>36339700Probably won't be running next Saturday, Thanksgiving and all.I hope you enjoyed this thread! What did people think of the scenes? I tried some different things with the Chara scene, did it work well, structurally? Did the odd lengths of the other scenes bother people? Etc. There was some stuff that was different with the smut this time around, I'm curious if people noticed and (if they did) if they thought it was good/bad/meh.
>>36339892I normally really digest the smut during the week after it's been made. I will say that the quality of your work often doesn't decrease with it's quantity, which is nice.Looking deeper, I think you added some italics to to emphasize certain words. That's great, though don't overuse it or it loses it's effect.I also was really looking forward to the Lorenne/Patina scene personally, and like how it turned up.
>>36340145Yeah, reserve the italics for the really juicy sensations. No need to emphasize that we're looming over Chara or that we need to ask for her virginity.
>>36340145>>36340250>italicsThat's not what I was thinking of at all, actually. Ah well.
>>36340268Well, yeah, sorry but if it was a snake I'd probably be in its belly
>>36340297It's fine. The big change was with the Chara scene, tried to move a bit away from play by play and focus more on emotional elements. A bit harder to manage that when you're running but I tried to do it still.
>>36340041Damn, only three votes. Kinda sad to see this quest dying.
>>36339892Was it the rhythm? All the short actions and breaks. It wasn't weird to read. I always find the longer phrases harder to "feel".Didn't notice odd lengths.
>>36340326Well fuck. Didn't notice exactly, but did enjoy it. Mainly because Chara is struggling feels.It's weird, but I think the most successful girl at life, Elisetta, has the least scenes. She's coming up nicely.
>>36339892>>36340250>>36340145I noticed them too during the first post, putting words in italic for emphasis. Honestly they feel a bit forced when I read them (not in your text specifically, but in general).I understand they are there for emphasis but I don't realy like it.The "She doesn't taste good, but doesn't taste awful either" worked (although it only needed it for the "awful" part), but the next time you used em for manic and desperation felt really out of place.>>36340326I didn't notice at all.That's a good thing I guess? It was really enjoyable.
>>36341604It's probably just that I got off a two-day kick of catching up on Pact when I was writing that, and Wildbow (the guy who writes it) uses italics a /lot/.
>>36341768Can we reward Patina after the torture, bringing her over and getting her washed?We still have a cetapede matron left in a cozy little den of her own, but she'll need to earn her keep wont she? Can we ask her with help in digging ditches or plowing fields, endere the townspeople to the idea of helpful monstergirls?>and help repair the damage of 'Shut up and look at my ass stupid, anal is great' kid
>>36342513Anal IS great, anon. And after some leg rubs and teasing vaginal will be too.
>>36340326I liked it, do it some more
I'm glad the mod likes this quest.