You are Ur'shal, Chieftain of the Stonetusk Clan, the body of the last chieftain is not yet cold, and you are already celebrating with your Clan, drinking and feasting as your Clan compete for the affections of the Orc females.As content as you are to simply enjoy your brandy and food and the warmth of your new woman pressed up against you, you figure you should try to get to know her better.“K'zala.”The slight orc woman looks up at you when where she is nestled, a slight smile on her face.“Even though we have been of the same clan from birth, for how much time Zo'ruz spent hiding you away, I know little about you.”K'zala nods, “Of course, my chieftain,” she whispers,turning to rest her arms and chin against your thigh as she stares up into your eyes, you've noticed she seems very fond of close contact.“I doubt my life has been as exciting as yours,” she smiles, closing her eyes.“Zo'ruz chose me for one of his mates when I was still a whelp, he liked how quiet I was, and he said I reminded him of the elven women he had once owned, before we were driven beyond the wall. He said I had the ears, the face, and the footsteps of an elf, and that I may be useful to him someday.”You nod, though you aren't all that interested in hearing about Zo'ruz, it would be hard to hear more about K'zala without her former owner being involved.“I think whatever plans he had for me, he forgot them, when I was still a whelp, he spoke much about taking back our lands, he taught me to be light on my feet, he said I would kill for him.”She sighs, and continues.“Then after a time, he stopped, he no longer spoke about taking back his lands, he longer wished me to learn, his fire went out, and he just kept me as a prize I don't think he even really wanted.”She lifts her head, smiling up at you with those exotic features. “I think, my chieftain, that you want me far more than he did, more than he wanted anything, and I think I will like that.”(cont)
>>36253830>Do the orc gods require shamen to be celibate? if not, we should promise the shaman that we are gonna get him a slavegirl or two from our raids, from our own share of the loot.ask him what kind he prefersAs far as you're aware, there is no requirement of celibacy for shamans.
>>36254106>he taught me to be light on my feet, he said I would kill for him.”Assasin, called it.
>>36254106wow, we got REALLY lucky here.We got an assassin wife AND a huntress wife.truly we are blessed.PS. what is the current clan demographic? that is, total pop, males, females, adults, childrenI know we have 6 females. And ~40 pop total. or rather, had ~40 pop, we killed 3. and the monster killed one 4 days ago
>>362542686 females, 36 males. You are right of course, when I said 40 before I forgot to account for recent losses.
>>36254268Yep definitely got lucky
>>36254291Now our population is 42
>>36254297>>36254268>Luckywe should tell her that.
>>36254291alright, thank you.is the pop entirely adults? no children?
>>36254313Yes.Yes we should let's do that now yes?
>>36254291a 6:1 ratio of males to females. Man, there going to be major blueballing in this clan.
>>36254268>We got an assassin wife AND a huntress wife.They need to be trained
>>36254106I am VERY glad I voted K'zalaFuck all these 's and shit in the names is a bitch.
>>36254330Okay, hold on let me put this population total in proper order, because I'm getting a tad confused and it's entirely my own fault.You have: 36 adult males.6 adult females.4 male children.1 female child.>>36254338Orcs breed fast, according to Ku'zag this is why when the Orcs were driven out into the Wastes, their enemies made sure to slaughter as many Orcish females as they could, to stop the population simply booming again.>>36254365Don't need to tell me that, I've made a list of names to remind myself what everyone's called, and I still think I've changed Gro'gul's name like five times since the quest started. Good thing he's dead, really.
>>36254338already is, huge part of why former chief was unpopular.this is why i say our first order is to have the men start scouting for potential raid targets
>>36254411>Orcs breed fastoh, that is good to know. can we get some specifics on it?namely1. at what age are orcs considered adults2. at what age are orcs usually too old to be fertile3. how long is each pregnancy4. how many kids per pregnancy (usually)
>>36254412rather than raiding other clanswe should challenge their respective cheifs for controll or simply have them join us once we get the ball rollin
>>36254457I meant raid humans and elves and the like.For other Orcs... well its really depends on the situation.Sometimes war, sometimes negotiation, sometimes challenge chief.
>>36254106You nod, caressing K'zala's head. Taking a moment to admire the way her lithe body bends as she moves."You may call me Ur'shal, K'zala, and you will learn soon enough how much I want you."Enjoying the feel of her up against you for a little while longer, you eventually pick yourself up, K'zala following as you go in search of Ku'zag. While this should be a night for forgetting your troubles, the crown is still a concern, and one you don't feel you can put off.You find Ku'zag at the edge of the party, as usual, watching the clan with his usual grumpy expression, though you feel like you can pick up a hint of something else in it, perhaps pride.“What're you doing out here, chieftain, shouldn't you be in the thick of things drinking and bellowing, as a young orc should be, not dragging your new mate over here to look at some crusty old shaman who's busy thinking he should go sleep.”“There'll be time enough for drinking and bellowing later. I have something else to discuss with you.”Ku'zag nods, “Is it that ugly piece of headwear you're sporting,” he grunts.“I found it with the axe, you said the axe belonged to an Orc King, a legendary warrior, so was this his crown?”“Perhaps, though legends never spoke of his crown as anything special. More likely it's someone else's crown, a trophy he took to his grave.”Ku'zag steps closer, squinting at the crown.“It's not Orcish make, though it was made for an orcish skull, or a human one, dwarven skull maybe. The ones who made it thought. I'd wager it was the Sluagh.”Ku'zag's lips peel back in a snarl. “No denying that those filthy little fae traitors know their magic, it'll make you powerful, but their magic is all tied up with the abyss, so if you ever feel like you're losing control, smash it.”You frown, you aren't certain, but you think the crown saved you earlier today, part of you feels very reluctant to simply dispose of it.“What would happen if I lost control?” you ask.(cont)
>>36254411>4 male children.>1 female child.Who're the mother's of these children?Not a big deal in the grand scheme of things, just curious to know.
>>362544401. 142. 603. 5 months4. 2-4>>36254572A'ska is mother of two of them, the other three were the children of the former Chieftain's third mate, who was one of the Boneripper's first victims a few months ago.
>>36254634Do orcs raise their children communally for the whole tribe, or individually?
>>36254562“Who knows, maybe you'd go mad, or burst into flames, or the crown would turn the inside of your skull into a portal to the Abyss and you'd have Horrors trying to rip their way out of your ears. Sluagh magic is powerful, but the Sluagh are mad and twisted things, and their magic reflects that.”You frown, you've been able to keep the crown under control so far, perhaps you can control it permanently, but then again, perhaps not...“Well, I'm sure you'll make your own decisions, as the clan shaman, all I can do is offer advice, just try not to explode, chieftain. Now, was there anything else you needed from me?”“You know the human tongue, don't you?” you ask, putting aside the questions of your crown for now.“I do, squeaky idiotic thing it is, but it's the language most other races know, so it has its advantages.”“I want you to teach it to me, it will be useful for when we take human slaves.”Ku'zag chuckles, fixing you with a cockeyed stare. “Ambitious, chieftain. There's no humans I've heard of this side of the wall, maybe the Crag Tribes to the north, if you want to risk the Howling Mountains. All the rest are on the other side, safe to murder each other without our interference.”“All the same, I want to learn.”Ku'zag shrugs. “A chieftain who wants to learn from his shaman, will wonders never cease, all these years with Zo'ruz I'd forgotten what it was like to have a chieftain who valued my knowledge. Very well, Ur'shal, when you're not warring and hunting and fucking as a true chieftain should, come find me, and I'll teach you to speak like a human.”>Anything else you wish to ask?
>>36254562Does it increase my power over time and remain me when the crown is off. Or does the power all disappear when its taken off?Same for any mental influences, do they build up over time and remain even after its smashed, or are they all gone with it gone.I am thinking.>Permanent mental damagedestroy now>Permanent boost, temp mental damageWear it for as long as possible, destroying it eventually when it gets too much to free our mind>Temp boost, tempt mental damageKeep it for emergencies. but rarely use it.
>>36254661Communally.Though most Orcs maintain something of an attachment to their parents, they spend their first few years amongst the clan, then latch onto a skilled hunter or warrior or craftsman or someone who they want to learn from, who ends up like another parent to them.
>>36254774"What are the perils we face in the near future?"
>>36254802we should keep these kind of things in mind
>>36254810that is good then.I guess we could sorta try and be a replacement dad to make sure they turn out alright.>>36254774We have much more to talk about, but it can wait until tomorrow
>>36254774>i wish to know about the nearby clans.
>>36254411Are we gonna have children?
>>36254869>>36254774This.Time for SMUT!
>>36254802Option number three
>>36254876That is kind of expected. The clan will probably look at the chieftain a bit strangely if he doesn't knock up his mates every now and again.One of the reasons people disliked the women being given to Zo'ruz's inner circle was that most were too old to father children, which is why your clan has so few young.
>>36254802heh, my timing is a bit off, as you already answered >>36254774 as "shaman isn't sure"based on that answer I say...well, actually lets experiment. Take the crown off now, and tomorrow push youself and see how you compare to from before you even tried it on. That would at least let us know if the enhancement was permanent or not.I am inclined to use it rarely and only in emergencies, if at all (I would prefer to get artifacts of our god instead)>>36254876A fuckton of them. we are knocking up both orc wives and we are going to
>>36254876A fuckton of them. we are knocking up both orc wives and we are going to have slavegirl harem in the future.>>36254774>No humans>Giant wallI am disappoint.well, tomorrow we can ask him about what races are here on this side of the wall.
>>36254956implying a wall willbe enough to stop us
>>36254956I should point out that I fully expect you to overrun the wall as part of this quest, so don't get too discouraged, and he did say there's humans to the north, albeit primitive tribal ones.
>>36254975>>36254983I meant in the immediate future. Obviously we will eventually take the wall.But at the moment we only have 36 warriors. ok for a stealth raid on a small town or capturing travellers.not ok for taking the great wall of china
>>36254983all the better to capturealso time skip or what we doing now?
>>36254983who the hell do you think we are ?
>>36254918So we're going to manage a civ, right?
>>36255052I believe some people are awaiting the promised smut. Which will be after my next post, then I'll probably call it a night before we get on with your plans to seek out other clans and whatnot, which will happen next thread.
>>36255101I'm still waiting for the Sho'ka you promised Warlord.....
>>36255125You'll be getting her soon enough, at about the same time as the promised smut.
>>36254774>>36254869Questions to ask the shaman tomorrow>Other than orcs, who lives on this side of the wall?>Do you know of any other orc clans?>What does he think of the plan to domesticate (steal cubs, slay parents) or exterminate all predators in the tribe's immediate area to increase hunting yields?>How come the gods got weaker when we were driven to the wastes? (they clearly still have power though)>Why doesn't he have an apprentice?>Any suggestion he has for improving our tribe's lot in lifeI am also considering the idea of us becoming a "paladin" (holy warrior) of the orc gods.Can the tribe do things like rainbringing dances and other rituals to gain the blessing of the gods?
>>36255152Well could go full retard and do what Blizz is doing with the orcs in the recent expansion. Dude one of them have a ritual where you can scarifice an eye to see your death. As long as you don't wind up near the conditions that lead to your demise your guarenteed NOT to die at least until that time comes. So double edged sword there for rituals and shit.Also I want to look into the domestication of animals, we need animal companions for the hunt, beasts of burdern for our travels if we need it, if need be some type of cattle for food and diary as well. Maybe goats if this climate is too fuck off cold. Is it wrong that I kinda have a boner for making a small orc tribe grow and grow into a large empire that kicks ass without having to be given a duex machinma via Green Jesus? Poor Thrall, we knew ye well...Still better than that knuckle head Garrosh at least fuck that guy, fuck that guy hard
We should make our wifes our personal warriors/bodyguards, i mean we already have an assassin with a potential warrior. Sometimes taking them to quests
>>36255242its not wrong, its very very rightI was thinking wargs. or bears. armored bear cavalry.Or giant boars, or really, whatever giant but obedient predator they have here.>>36255275I suggested that earlier and everyone told me "obviously"
>>36255301Well to be specific i told you NSS
>>36255275Recomneding this, I want waifu that can kick our ass in case we get the idiot ball in our court!>>36255301Part of me likes the aesthetic behind having giant ass wolves at our beck and call, it really really does, however on the other hand the other critters mentioned give me tingles in my spine thinking about some of the scenairoes.>The drums of war beat and so does the ground as hulking masses of armored bears with their masters atop them plod towards the human armies which glint upon their horses. >With a sound of the battle horns the bears raise up and roar as one mighty beast sounding as if a dragon had decended on high to grace this battle in the tribes favor.>The ground shakes as the two armies race towards each other and with a crash collide in a melee of claws, axes, swords, lances and hooves.Oh wait better idea, if we had the option to do so we should do all three for variablity, after all once our numbers are up we could get different legions of mounts, bears for war, boars for skirmishes and wolves for scouting and tracking.Best of all three!
>>36255101you do smut too god bless you <3
>>36255455I am a smut novice, so I hope it will live up to /tg/'s exacting standards of fap fodder.
>>36255466Just remember this one thing:/tg/ LOVES female abs
>>36255437or simply>Bears=Heavy cav>Boars=Shock cav>Wolves=Light/all rounders
>>36255490>>36255466And loli. And having a big dick and being better than other men
>>36255437I think the wolves can be used like dogsprimarily for tracking, and to sic on an enemythe bears we ride.
>>>36252248>the fertility goddess Y'zagya ZokaMy desire to know more intensifies
>>36255528>I think the wolves can be used like dogsanon do you even orc
>>36255519Yes, I also read Modern Satyr Quest>>36254774“Alright Ku'zag, I'll let you go get your sleep soon, but before you go, have you seen anything in the future, perils we face?”Ku'zag shakes his head. “My powers have been weak these past few years. I am glad to hear that they served you well facing that Horror, and honestly I'm surprised they even did that much. I see very little in my dreams, hazy visions of places, peoples, and black teeth.”Ku'zag shrugs, “It's meaningless gibberish, but if you see someone with black teeth, they're probably bad news.”You nod, “One last thing, what do you know of nearby clans?”Ku'zag groans, leaning on his staff. “You just can't let an old man rest, can you, not even chieftain a day and you're already working me to death. Let's see, there are many clans I don't know of scattered the wastes, or dead, but I can name a few. To the East is nothing but the wall, no clans closer than ours on that side, to the south, the Stormhowl Clan and the Goatfoot Clan, to the West, the Tongueripper Clan, north I heard is the Rockbrute Clan, past them you hit the Howling Mountains, and there's no Orc clans up there I know of, just Crag Folk, Ogres, Harpies and the like.”Ku'zag takes a breath, continuing. “The Stormhowl and Goatfoot have been at each others throats for ages, made both of them small and weak, could be easy pickings, though they've been fighting long enough that there's some very hardy orcs in their number. The Tonguerippers are bigger, and deranged, too much Cave Fungus in their diet, we're just lucky we don't have enough for it to be worth them making the trip here to take it from us. The Rockbrute Clan I don't know much about, I hear they raid the Crag Folks in the mountains for slaves, but beyond that, they keep to themselves.”“Now, I think I've earned my rest, so let me get to it,” Ku'zag grumbles, shuffling off to his tent.(cont)
>>36255639>Yes, I also read Modern Satyr QuestI know. you're the one who told him to run on moe. Thanks for that.
>>36255639You head back to the fire, but the bloatfrog is down to its bones, and the barrels of brandy are almost gone. You decide it would be time to retire for the night yourself, giving a nod to Zo'rok as you pass him and Y'zoa, leaning against each other, both obviously blind drunk, working their way through the last of the brandy as they laugh over some private joke.You spot Dru'ak returning to his tent, a hand squeezing A'ska's impressive backside as they disappear inside.You see no sign of the other three Orc women, you suppose they've all decided where they want to spend the night already.(cont)
>>36255681>You spot Dru'ak returning to his tent, a hand squeezing A'ska's impressive backside as they disappear inside.Mah man.>>36255681>Y'zoaWho this agian?Also our wife is the oe that wanted to be a hunter, but what about the other girl?
>>36255658>told him to run on moe.what do you mean by that?I noticed he was banned and something was going on, but couldn't find it
>>36255681You lead K'zala back to your tent, pausing to consider that now that you're chieftain, you should really get a larger one, to accommodate you and your new woman, it's going to be a little cramped for the two of you.As you push open the flap to your tent however, you are greeted with an unexpected sight. Sho'ka lies draped across your bedroll. She has discarded her leathers, her firm body rippling as she stretches languidly, green skin glistening with sweat, giving you a catlike smile.“Chieftain, I was worried you weren't coming,” she purrs.“You let me choose for myself what man I would give myself to, and there were many who fought for that honour, but I have been watching you for a long time. I envied you, going out into the waste to hunt while I was stuck in a tent playing the good wife for a lazy coward. There is no-one in this clan I would rather have than you, if the new chieftain finds me to his liking, that is?”Sho'ka punctuates the question by rising to her knees, shoulders back as she stretches again, breasts pushed foward, pert and tipped with dark green nipples, toned stomach flexing.You hear a shuffling next to you, and see K'zala stripping out of her leathers as well, though with how hard her face is to read, you can't tell if she's trying to compete with Sho'ka, or just going with the flow. Her body is slim and light, her breasts small and hips narrow, but she still has an orc's strength to her, lithe and firm. She looks up at you with her exotic elfin features and slanted eyes, favouring you with a small smile.It seems that being chieftain is turning out to be everything you ever dreamed of.>Write in if you have any particular plans for how you want this to go, otherwise I will just go with what feels good to me.
>>36255732>I noticed he was banned and something was going on, but couldn't find ithttps://archive.moe/tg/thread/36241516/#36241516He ran the quest on the archive
>>36255738I'd prefer you surprise us QM.just as long as we do both and end up cuddling
>>36255793I can agree to this.WE ARE UR'SHAL,MASTER CUDDLER!
>>36255765I didn't even know that was possible.
>>36255738I'm cool with whatever as long as the new chief makes it clear that he's going to do his best to knock them up. Maybe have them pray to the orc fertility goddess while we fuck them rotton.
>>36255793Right. Don't play favourites, and bonding time afterwards,
>>36255738Fuck K'zala, be sure to pay her the most attention at the start, her being our chosen wife she feel like she truly is.Have Sho'ka eat our cum out of K'zala, while we fuck her next. Honestly, it's probably best you set the tone for the Sex scenes, then we build up from that in later ones.
>>36255738what ever we do impregnate them both!
>>36255885oh yes, its practically our duty to the clan.
>>36255917>its practically our duty to the clan.It IS our duty to the clan
>>36255917it IS our duty, along with being their chieftain of course.
Alright, so if I'm getting the general gist, fuck them both, finish inside to ensure the future of the clan, then engage in the most hardcore of orcish cuddling techniques.Writing.
>>36255967>then engage in the most hardcore of orcish cuddling techniques.That sounds adorably cute for some reason and I don't know why.
>>36255967>then engage in the most hardcore of orcish cuddling techniques.Yeeeeeeessssss.....
Man, I am a slow smut writer, first part coming up, since god knows how long you'll be waiting if I do all of it in one go.You lead the now naked K'zala over to your bedroll, Sho'ka sliding aside to make room for you both. You take a moment to admire your two new wives side by side as you sit before them, their green skin shining in the moonlight and the flickering of the bonfire outside. You don't have to say a word, and the pair get to work stripping you of your armour and clothing. K'zala tugs at your boots, her chest and face rubbing against your leg as she works, giving a quiet whimper as her nipple grinds on your thigh. Sho'ka lifting your chain shirt up over your head, leaning in close as she pulls it up over your arms to inhale deeply. You must stink of sweat and blood after the past few days, but that doesn't seem to bother her, she presses up against you as she removes your shirt, her tongue tracing a line up your neck, sniffing and moaning.Your chest bare, you see K'zala move on to your trousers, you lift your hips to let her tug them down over your legs, past your swelling cock. K'zala gives a little gasp as it springs loose, echoed by Sho'ka a moment later as she catches sight of your spear.“A weapon worthy of a great chieftain,” Sho'ka whispers, breathe tickling your ear, sliding round behind you. Her breasts press against your back and her tongue continues to drag lines of saliva up your neck, each accompanied by a little moan of pleasure, her arms exploring the firm muscles of your chest.With how aggressive Sho'ka is being, you lose track of K'zala for a moment, until you feel a slim hand brush against the head of your cock. K'zala gives you a slight, innocent smile as she looks up at you, her tiny palm caressing your thick head. Her other hand works its way down to the base, fingertips gently tracing the side before resting at the root, cupping a testicle lightly and rolling it in her palm.(cont)
>>36256734It seems a shame to end the feelings your two wives are giving you, but you have your own duties to attend to. You place a hand on K'zala's shoulder, pushing her back to the bedroll, raising to your knees as you spread her legs with your other hand. Despite her quiet disposition, K'zala seems more than happy to expose herself to you, that tiny smile you've gotten so used to playing across her features. You run a hand down her thigh to the darker green of her lips, spreading them slighty, feeling the wetness of her crotch.Sho'ka slips out from behind you, lying on her side to watch as you line your head up with K'zala's entrance, rubbing the head between her lips.“Are you ready to bear your chieftain's children, K'zala?” you growl, as you slowly tease the head into her.K'zala bucks at the sensation, trying to push herself fruther onto you. “Please, chieftain, Ur'shal, I want it, please,” she moans, hips rocking as she desperately tries to force her way down your shaft.Grinning, you lean forwards, taking her chin in your hand and kissing her hard on the lips as you thrust in the rest of the way. K'zala moans into your mouth, her tiny body bucking against you. You pick up a slow, deep rhythm. Pulling out nearly to the tip only to thrust in all the way to the base. Your enjoy the moans and squeals of your mate with every push, her insides impossibly tight and hot, squeezing around you. You pick up your pace, making K'zala wrap her arms around you, nails digging into your back, heels locked behind you she clings on, desperately grinding against you with every powerful thrust. You feel her heartbeat quickening, a shiver running through her body as you press your lips against hers again, feeling her insides clamp around you as she cums with a high pitched moan.(cont)
>>36256750The sensation pushes you over the edge as well, and her walls milk you for every drop as you pump thick ropes of your sperm up, pressure built up from years denied access to the clan's women, into K'zala's womb. Even when your load is spent, K'zala stays clinging to you, unwilling to let go until you gently pry her loose, your cock slipping free of her tight confines with an audible schlup as she moans, another orgasm rocking her tiny body.>Next part incoming when I write it.
>>36256768Orcish loli a best
>>36256844She is bigger than you
>>36257096You're think of our friend's mate.
>>36256768K'zala lies back on the bedroll, tiny breasts heaving, a dreamy smile on her face and her eyes half-lidded.You have little time to admire the sight however, before you feel two new hands on your cum-slick cock. “I doubt she's ever been fucked that good before,” Sho'ka whispers, hands sliding across your heavy meat. “It would be a real shame if you only had energy enough for her though,” she whispers, even as you feel your length rising under her attentions.You turn to the amazonian orc, your shaft once again standing proud as she licks her hands clean of the cum and juices coating it. She turns her back to you, face pressed to the cool earth, her perky green rear raised, giving you a stunning view of her perky ass and slit as she grins that catlike grin at you over her shoulder.“No need to be gentle, Chieftain. I want you to fuck me, hard,” she purrs, shaking her rear at you invitingly.You place your hands on her buttocks, feeling the muscles tense within as you kneed them, provoking an “mmh” from Sho'ka as she rubs against your hands.With how eager she is, you waste little time, gripping her hips in place as you line up with her opening, pushing the head in, then slamming to the base in one sudden movement. Sho'ka cries out as your thrust into her, balls slapping against her thighs. You growl possessively as you pick up your pace, the sound of flesh slapping against flesh echoing through the tent, matches only by Sho'ka's brazen cries. You squeeze the springy flesh of her ass, enjoying the trembling accompanying every thrust.“This is it, this is what I wanted,” Sho'ka cries out, fingers digging into the packed earth, panting wildly as you take her.(cont)
>>36256844loli by orc standards, maybe.
>>36257213She cries out, her every muscle straining and flexing under the skin as you give one heavy thrust, her juices running down your balls as you continue to slam into her. Soon you realise you're getting little more than dazed moans from the woman, chest heaving, cheek resting on the dirt as she drools openly, her eyes looking back at you, hazy with lust.“You will give this clan strong children, Sho'ka, I will see to that personally,” you growl, leaning over close to her ear as you thrust deeper and harder, pushing yourself over the edge as you empthy your balls into the second of your mates. Sho'ka moans and gasps, scratching furrows in the dirt as you hammer home again and again.When you pull out, her hips flop to the ground, her body shaking. She gives you a dreamy smile.“That was it, I've been waiting so long,” she mumbles, a puddle of drool on the ground beneath her face.You brush some strands of hair out of Sho'ka's face, lifting her off the dirt and onto the bedroll alongside the still half-awake K'zala. Cramped though it is, you lay yourself down between the two women, one hand wrapped around each as they nestle up against you, K'zala mumbling as she slips into sleep, Sho'ka giving you a grin before she buries her head against your chest.Tomorrow you will have to plan for war, the lives of your clan will depend upon your leadership and strength, but right now, as you lie between your two new mates, their bellies filled with your seed, you wish only to enjoy this moment. All that you have done these past few days has been worth it for this.>Thread EndAs per last thread, I am willing to stick around for a short Q&A session if people are so inclined. Also as per last session, any thoughts, suggestions, advice etc. would be greatly appreciated, this QMing gig is still new to me, smut writing especially, and I'm always eager to improve.
>>36257231Are there any fetishes that you are unwilling or uncomfortable writing?Guro, scat, bestiality, and incest seem to be to main ones that are avoided.
>>36257231You're doing good as a QM, could do to vary your language and cut down on run on sentences in your writing though. Honestly those aren't much important to the general quality in my opinion though.
>>36257231>>36257213awesome, thank you warlord.btw, I didn't notice a twitter. do you have something to announce new threads with?
>>36257282Guro and Scat are big no-nos for me, Bestiality is an "I think I'll get banned" kind of unwilling, and Incest is something I'm perfectly fine writing, though since Ur'shal has no siblings, I'm not sure how that will come into play. In general though, I am pretty open on the fetish front, suggest something and I'll give my opinion.
>>36257231Hang around the Weekend Smut Threads for advice if you want to work on your lewds. They get flak, but a lot of those guys know their stuff.
>>36257231Sex scenes felt a little static, but that doesn't mean they were bad as such. Try to avoid the mechanical Man puts X into woman's Y speech though, attempt to focus more on emotions, feelings and less about the genitals themself.
>>36257231Could you create a pastebin with all of the major characters to post with at the start of the thread please (Expanded descriptions of the wives would be nice too)? Inventory would be nice, but not exactly needed for now.
>>36257295Duly noted, I have been trying to do so, but bad habits can be hard to break. Will try harder in the future.>>36257296>https://twitter.com/BrightTeguI forgot to include it in the OP today, will do so from now on.>>36257312I'll check them out, thanks.>>36257318Will do my best, guess I've got to do some more intensive smut research.
>>36257338Sure thing, I had been considering the need to for a character pastebin. I actually do have a character list on my computer, I just have to change around the formula a bit. I'll try to have it sorted out by the next thread.
>>36257231How tall and old is K'zala?
>>36257342thank you>>36257318eh, felt like there was just the right amount of both to me
>>36257342Dont feel bad if people think your smut sucks. This isnt exactly a purely smut quest.
>>36257342Alright, here's little challenge. Take a week or three on it. Do the research on smut, then come back to this scene you wrote here today.See what you wrote, then re-write the scene completely differently and then compare the two. Or let us compare them, your choice.
>>36257359Whoa whoa, I never said that, hell I'd say It's far better than MSQ in some ways. And as a whole the writing is relatively good.
>>3625735514 (just barely considered a grown up orc), and around about 5'10", making her tiny by orc standards.>>36257359I don't think people think it sucks, if they did they wouldn't have stuck around long enough for the Q&A! Constructive criticism never hurt anyone though, so I like to know where I'm going wrong.>>36257389Yikes, not sure about getting quest homework, but if I can squeeze it in with my real life stuff I'll try.
>>36257311I figured that Guro and Scat would be not on the table; to be honest,they're BIG NO's for me as well, so no loss there. And nixing bestiality seems to be a smart move.As for incest, maybe the chief won't engage in it but maybe orc woman ultimately are open to whoever plowing them, be they Father, brother or son. Maybe later we could catch a glimpse of A'ska teaching her boys how to fuck when they become of age.
>>36257411It's like 9k characters mate, hardly a super-duper challenge across three weeks is it?
>>36257428I like the way you think, anon, rest assured that idea will be stewing away in my subconscious for later.
>>36257433Alright, I'll do my best.
>>36257411So she IS an Orc loli!I'm so happy we chose her now. Who would she have gone with if left to choice?
>>36257411Just 14 huh? Wonder if Orcs have cherries. Darn, almost jealous of that bastard for popping here.
>>36257490How long did he have her? If she's only 14 now, and he's been keeping her a while, that must have been pretty messed up.
>>36257472Would've ended up as one of the ones who didn't get chosen, to be honest, ending up with one of the other as-of-yet unnamed orcs after the celebration. I figured you'd probably give one each to your two friends beforehand, and so I had a general idea for who they'd take as a first choice and second choice, depending on if you took their first choice.Poor K'zala was not either of their first or second choices.Zo'rok likes his musclegirls, and Dru'ak likes 'em curvy and jiggly.
>>36257467Well, if you're really not feeling it then I recommend not doing it, but if you find it really really hard to write when not doing quests, you may start finding it's very very hard to write without a kind of peer pressure on you, which can lead to some bad shit. Fell into that trap myself once
>>36257514>ending up with one of the other as-of-yet unnamed orcs after the celebration. Kind of surprised she wouldn't come to us actually.
>>36257514Who did you think we would pick?Are you enjoying running this?Are we good as players?
I gotta say, even with the smut (its perfectly fine, just not my cup of tea), you did great.Its pretty ironic. A lot of quests on this boards start out with action, yet devolve into waifushit within 3-4 threads, never to stay with the original purpose.But this quest has a good chunk of it intended for porn and somehow has packed more action in 2.5 threads than most quests hold in 8 threads.
>>36257389I thought it was awesome.
>>36257557A clear direction and the promise of smut can be a powerful thing when handled properly.
>>36257596Clear direction, lack of chargen, good writing and an interesting premise.These four things can assure a very good starting threads.
>>36257518Believe me anon, I'm not doing this for peer pressure, if I wasn't enjoying it, I wouldn't have spent the last... jesus... going on 11 hours running this quest.>>36257536She might have considered it, but in the end she's not all that forceful, not like Sho'ka.>>36257555>Who did you think we would pick?I wasn't sure who you'd pick, I'd expected Sho'ka to get some decent votes, but I'd kind of expected Y'zoa the musclegirl and A'ska the milforc to get more votes, since I know those are both things that /tg/ appreciates. Really wasn't expecting the overwhelming love for K'zala honestly, not that I mind your choice.>Are you enjoying running this?Yes, yes I am. I'm actually enjoying it more than I'd expected. I've run one or two stillborn single-thread quests, and on both of them my motivation died before I'd done so much as a half dozen posts. This one has really just clicked with me in a way they didn't, and I'm loving it.There was also that one time I got drunk and hijacked an anime quest into the story of a drunken scottish rapist, but I don't think that counts!>Are we good as players?I am very happy to see how much you're all getting into this. I was a little nervous moving into some >write-in options today, rather than my first thread which was all pre-selected choices, but you've all risen to the occasion admirably.
>>36257631Yup, they can. Good staring execution on Warlords part.
>>36257652>Not thinking /tg/ didn't want loli poon
>>36257652So DO orcs have cherries? As in hymens.
>>36257652Will worship of the orc fertility goddess Y'zagya Zoka be detailed in later threads? Or is she there for just some flavour?
>>36257652Honestly? I knew Sho'ka would come to us, so I voted for the opposition. I am very glad I did, K'zala seems like a great character.
>>36257688I was naive.>>36257698Yes.>>36257715I intend the orcish gods and goddesses to be more important in the future. Right now the worship of the orcish pantheon, like so many other things in orcish society, is in tatters. Perhaps you can be instrumental in bringing it back.
>>36257652A'ska the milf orc needs more love.
>>36257652>but I'd kind of expected Y'zoa the musclegirl and A'ska the milforc to get more votes, since I know those are both things that /tg/ appreciatesI did too, and I love both. especially with their extra traits of>Smithand>Most fertile woman in villagerespectivelybut I abstained from voting because I loved all the girls you came up.
>>36257740Grr. That fucker of an ex-chieftain needs two pikes up his neck. I certainly hope he didn't get either of them pregnant beforehand.
>>36257740>I intend the orcish gods and goddesses to be more important in the future. Right now the worship of the orcish pantheon, like so many other things in orcish society, is in tatters. Perhaps you can be instrumental in bringing it back.I really really want to. especially if it means being a dnd style cleric or paladin.But even if not, our gods must be restored. We already have proof of their power, the way the demon was turned by the holy symbol.
>>36257753Rest assured Dru'ak is giving her plenty of that, and you'll get to meet other milfs in the future.
>>36257827You're a good man, Warlord.
>>36257797Shoka was the wife of the orc who insulted us, whom we killed before the chief.The chief's two wives were kzala and the milf our best buddy got.He knocked up the milf at least once (some of the kids are his). But by the time he got to kzala he was too old to knock anyone up anymore.see>>36252431
>>36257827I'm guessing unlike Satyrs, Orcs are unlikely to share their women?
>>36257863>But by the time he got to kzala he was too old to knock anyone up anymore.Doesn't that mean she should have had her cherry then?
>>36257873they might do gangbang with some slaves. for the use of the whole tribe.But personally I prefer the non sharing. We can and WILL get more women as we conquer the world.
>>36257827How do orcs feel about wife swapping?It probably won't happen because "NTR!" but a man can dream.
>>36257888You are assuming erectile dysfunction instead of low sperm count.also, it could be i was wrong and its just that she was too young.
>>36257557My sides exploded into laughter when I realized we accomplished more in regards to romance in half a thread than those quests could do in at least twenty bloated samefag threads.
>>36257898I'd be fine with doing it with anyone but K'zala, I'd even encourage threesomes and whatnot with others.
>>36257898>Wanting to let another male touch our waifusnever, not even our best friends>>36257907huh, that is true!also accomplished more in terms of non smut.the hunts, the monster, the loot.and it wasn't like anything was rushed, pacing was perfect
>>36257898NTR literally means "to take away". swapping isn't NTR unless one of the guys has a much bigger dick and mindbreaks the other's wife and ends up with both while the loser cries and commits suicide.that being said, people are gonna be heavily against sharing
>>36257797Very unlikely, the chieftain was long past his prime and hadn't actually fucked either of his women in years.>>36257807This is something I was probably going to include as OOC information in the next thread, but I don't mind posting it here as well: Orc Shamans and Orc Priests are too separate things. The clan Shaman is equal parts all-purpose holy man, alchemist, healer and spiritual/historical adviser to the chieftain. A shaman knows many of the basic divine rituals and magics of the various orc deities, but lacks access to the higher mysteries. Priests on the other hand are dedicated solely to a single deity and are, within a more narrow field, far more powerful and focused.Currently your clan has no priests, and indeed your shaman isn't certain if there are any priests who survived the purge. It is something that would benefit your clan greatly, if you could bring back the priesthoods of the orcish gods.>>36257873Technically as the chieftain, you can demand access to any of the clan's women. Taking advantage of that right, however, is a good way to get an axe in the back of the skull.>>36257888He fucked her young, very young, the former chieftain was a pretty messed up individual, even by morally flexible orcish standards.>>36257898Provided all parties were on-board, no-one would have an issue with it. Whether you could get all parties on-board is another matter entirely.
>>36257898Yeah, I have zero interest in sharing our harem with anyone.
>>36257954>Currently your clan has no priests, and indeed your shaman isn't certain if there are any priests who survived the purge. It is something that would benefit your clan greatly, if you could bring back the priesthoods of the orcish gods.We need to have the shaman and some assistants search the tomb, looking for anything holy relic related or that might shed light on the orc gods.
>>36257983Might as well, also have the orc loot the place like a blood raven in an empty battle barge.
>>36258030I laughed.and yea, we might as well.
>>36257954>He fucked her young, very young, the former chieftain was a pretty messed up individual, even by morally flexible orcish standardsYup.Make that three Pikes. Maybe more.Could we cut his head in half and put them on differing pikes? That would be cool.
>>36258075that kinda defeats the purpose of putting his head on a pike. And he can't get anymore dead.And as much as I would love to, desecrating his corpse makes us look bad to both the people and potentially the godsAt most, just throw it to the scavengers without a proper burialBest we can do is be the best husband ever.
Right then, as much as I'm enjoying spending time with you anons, it is 11 and a half hours since I started running this quest, and I'd originally intended to stop and go to bed 4 and a half hours ago.Good thing I don't have work tomorrow, but I should go get some sleep all the same.Keep an eye out on the twitter, and I'll probably try to get the next thread up same time thursday barring unforeseen irl complications.
>>36258178Thanks for running Warlord.
>>36258178Is it 4AM over there?Good night at any rate.
>>36258178good night, thank you, and see you next time.