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>>35453839So as of right now, we are being shot at by Lorenne and taking cover inside our litter?Damnit, this is where we should have brought Chara or Despina's archery skills.What else is in the litter gear wise? A shield? A helmet? Anything?How cooperative is Orestiad at the moment?
>>35453960we are wearing armor
>>35454008I forget then, how effective has our armor been against arrows in the past?Kini indicating she came for us alone makes me wonder about the possibility of rushing her, somehow. Possibly of Orestiad can provide us cover using manipulation of rocks.
>>35453960>So as of right now, we are being shot at by Lorenne and taking cover inside our litter?Yes.>What else is in the litter gear wise? A shield? A helmet? Anything?You are wearing leather armor and a mail shirt.>How cooperative is Orestiad at the moment?Not really at all. You failed both your rape-as-seduction rolls last time.>>35454066>I forget then, how effective has our armor been against arrows in the past?You have never worn armor when you were shot by arrows in the past. If she has/uses bodkin arrows, they will probably penetrate your mail shirt to some effect; otherwise they will probably not.
>>35453839Ask Adelle and Erosette if they know where Kini is.Ask Adelle if she thinks she can do something to her from this distance, if not then ask the brown cutie to do it and we'll treat her nicer.Is there any way we can trap her with the landscape? MAybe send some undead to cut her off? Probably not, so get some undead archers to fire back, grab a shield to help against arrows, and ride towards her, maybe get Kini to go through the forest(if there's woods here), get near her, track/observe and cut her off/attack if we tell her to, give her some weapons, maybe a pair of daggers.This is my initial idea at least, feel free to discuss.
>>35454127>. If she has/uses bodkin arrows, they will probably penetrate your mail shirt to some effect; otherwise they will probably not.Also getting shot in the face isn't very fun either. Though we've taken a few hits elsewhere.>>35454232Kini is stated to likely be sleeping in a separate littler nearby. Is Erosette with us? I figured she and her army are still currently battling for control of the city and we ourselves were simply waiting here in the littler. I could be wrong though.
>>35454285>Is Erosette with us? I figured she and her army are still currently battling for control of the city and we ourselves were simply waiting here in the littler.She is. Well, it's not for "control of the city," the strategic goal is to wipe out enemy forces, not to take directly seize territory.
Rolled 20 (1d20)making a sacrifice to the dice gods
>>35454337As well as replenish her forces with the dead I imagine.
Rolled 13 (1d20)>>35454355Way to waste a good roll, you idiot.
>>35454364the dice gods want good sacrifices not bad
>>35454355That is somewhat comforting. I hope they are pleased. But what to do right now.>>35453839Ask adelle to try to give us her current location, if we can figure out where she is shooting from that is already useful.
>>35454387>Ask adelle to try to give us her current location, if we can figure out where she is shooting from that is already useful.I am sorry to tell you that it is already established that the litter blocks geomancy. That's why you were keeping Veronique in it. You could have Adelle crawl over the far side of the litter, though.
>>35454420do we have any undead archers near by is so have them return fire wile we make a move to go after her
Okay, to try to put everything in one post (I maybe fucked up with the OP):- currently, Erosette and her entire army are engaging the Terlise. There are no undead in your immediate vicinity.- the litter blocks geomancy, which is the focus of both Veronique and Adelle's abilities- Kini's elsewhere nearby, almost certainly- Veronique is ill-disposed towards you- you are wearing light armor, and have a weapon or two- Lorenne is shooting at you from nearby, you know her location when you last saw her (that's why you dived into the litter in the first place; you saw her)I think that's everything.
>>35454420Sorry about that, forgetful>>35454504Okay, not the best situation. But what to do with it...
>>35454504What is the litter made of by the way, any chance of us ripping out a piece of the floor or wall and using it like a shield? Just something to protect our head?Even if we can't do that, it's risky but the way I see this going down is we somehow get in contact with Kini, we have her transform into a fast small animal. Both of us start to run in separate paths, Lorenne will no doubt try to shoot us and we simply have to try to dodge her arrows. Kini will pounce to stop her from shooting arrows, distract Lorenne (who won't be fooled by then) but before she can harm Kini we'll be nearby and ready to take her.The issue now is just getting to Kini without being shot/killed.
>>35454504i got 1 plan: we are the target but she might try to hurt Adelle so i one plan thats risky is we make a run out in the open to buy time for Adelle to ether make defenses or caught her
>>35454580I don't think Adelle will be making any defenses or would do any good herself against what is probably a very strong and powerful swordswoman and archer.
>>35454504How far are Erosette's group? Do the undead listen to us at all, can we call out to them? Anyway, I assume the litter is some sort of wooden construction that covers the inhabitatants excep for the entrance(s), so can we get Adelle to get out on the side that doesn't have an arrow in it, and would theoretically protect her from Lorenne's arrows?Is Lorenne far enough that she can't just circle around us and endanger Adelle?
>>35454574>What is the litter made of by the way, any chance of us ripping out a piece of the floor or wall and using it like a shield? Just something to protect our head?It's wood, and seems thick enough to stop arrows so far, so yeah, sure.
>>35454504can we call out to kini to help by distracting her spcifacly telling her not to attack so she can stay alive
>>35454595>How far are Erosette's group? Do the undead listen to us at all, can we call out to them?They are a fair distance away, in the middle of a battle. They're thoroughly distracted.>Anyway, I assume the litter is some sort of wooden construction that covers the inhabitatants excep for the entrance(s), so can we get Adelle to get out on the side that doesn't have an arrow in it, and would theoretically protect her from Lorenne's arrows?It's basically a wooden box with a lid; the lid is currently off.>Is Lorenne far enough that she can't just circle around us and endanger Adelle?It's been like two seconds IC since she shot you, and she is a good distance away, so yes.
>>35454595Adelle and Orestiad might as well stay inside the littler, at least here they are protected from arrows. We know where Lorenne is, at least we saw where she was shooting from, and that already is close to the full extent of Adelle's usefulness in this situation.
>>35454672>shot youshot at you.
>>35454672Can Adelle just hang a food out so she can touch the ground but still be pretty secure? Ask her if she can't make some pitfalls or something at a distance anyway, I think she should be able to tell when orenne is about to fire at her to ground-senses and get back in the litter before she's shit anyway.
>>35454574Anyway, to sum this idea>Rip off some of the floor to protect our head with, like a shield>Run to Kini's place without being shot>Tell her to transform into an animal. Have her into the bushes to be hidden and run for Lorenne>We run in a separate direction while avoid getting hit, perhaps in a curve, or periodically taking cover behind trees and rocks, but moving closer>When Kini pounces on Lorenne, we make a beeline toward her with our sword and/or tackle her.
>>35454735>get back in the litter before she's shit anywayBut anon, Adelle's always been shit.
>>35453839Run to Kini, take some cover.
>>35454746>>35454978Okay, roll 1d20.
>>35453839I hate to break in at this late date, but Orestiad is kind of a silly name, because it's the name of a trilogy of Greek plays about Orestes.
>>35455130Her name is Veronique, she is an Orestiad (which is a kind of nymph).
is ever one also to scared to roll as well
>quest dies because no one will roll.Seriously though, you're not going to die because of one bad roll.
Rolled 13 (1d20)>>35455100please favor me dice gods
Rolled 13 (1d20)>>35455100I actually was in another thread. Rolling now
Rolled 3 (1d20)>>35455100>>35455197Fine.
>>35455197we have had 2 terrible rolls in a row and im scared dont know about everyone else tho
>>35453960 >>35454008 >>35454066 >>35454232 >>35454285 >>35454355 >>35454363 >>35454364 >>35454384 >>35454387 >>35454453 >>35454518 >>35454574 >>35454580 >>35454591 >>35454595 >>35454638 >>35454676 >>35454735 >>35454746 >>35454841 >>35454978 >>35455130 >>35455148 >>35455211 >>35455215 >>35455226 >>35455278 Going to take a shower to try to wake myself up (new roommate snores like a motherfucker, fucked up my sleep today), brb.
>>35455462What else can we do but draw on our skills as a swordsage? Draw our sword in defensive postitionAlso fuck we should've told kini run for reinforcements earlier.
>>35455462Go in for a swipe/stab, then use the wood in our hand to distract her(maybe by throwing it at her?), swipe her legs or try gettig a good kick in. I want to do a non-lethal takedown, but not sure how well that'd work.Also, maybe try looking in the direction Kini ran and shouting "NOW!" in an opportunate moment to distract her and knock her out or slice the tendonds in her leg.I'm going to enjoy breaking her in.
>>35455462Attack. This is our chance. Fight with whatever is Baron's most "natural" style, don't try to force anything just yet.
>>35455462this>>35455542but also tell kini to get adelle and tell her to help capture her from a distance with her geomancy
>>35455462Get in defensive, test her abilities.
>>35455542>>35455567>>35455587Looks like an offensive stance wins.
>>35455862Shit, I mean, roll 1d20.
Rolled 12 (1d20)>>35455862Do you think we could whip our dick out and plow into her and pin her at the same time with one flowing movement?
Rolled 8 (1d20)>>35455883We get bonusesfrom sword sagery, right?
>>35455908No.>>35455955This is the thing that you're best at, so yes. otoh, she's no pushover in combat either, so [??].
>>35455976>This is the thing tht you're best at>we're better at sword then sexShe has no chance.
>>35455976are you taking the 12 or the 8 im confused
>>35456041Taking the 12.
>>35455528 >>35455542 >>35455567 >>35455587 >>35455590 >>35455908 >>35455955 >>35456011 >>35456041
>>35456100If she's got a leg injury, capitalize on that. Keep circling and striking, keeping a mostly defensive game going unless we see a good opportunity. Try to force her to step, or at the very least turn a lot, and if we're in a position where she has to put her weight on the hurt leg to be in a defensive stance, press.
>>35456100Is the chunk of wood near us, and do we think we can kick it into her?
>>35456100i support this action>>35456152but also see if we cant get some information out of her like who sent her or hired her
>>35456152>>35456211Roll 1d20 for combat.
Rolled 11 (1d20)>>35456293Here we go
>>35456100Look at her leg when opportunity arises and shout "KINI, NOW!", then go knock her out.Maybe try picking up the piece of wood or kicking it at her/under/between her leg(s) to mess up her rhythm.
It's premature, but should we talk about what we ought to do if we DO capture lorenne?What should we tell her, our suspicions, etc.
>>35456430We should break her into our rape toy. I think Kini deserves to take something from her too. Is she into girls?
>>35456152 >>35456183 >>35456211 >>35456285 >>35456320 >>35456420 >>35456430
>>35456467Knock her out, tie her up. See if we can get Erosette to post a guard once she wins her battle.
>>35456467Don't let go for a second, have adelle to tie her down, or grab her sword or something.We won't be safe until we're sure she won't hurt us.Then we can start talking.
>>35456430We should probably start by Recapping with Kini what we do know for sure, and separate the suspicions.
>>35456467have adelle lock her in place so she is unable to escape and began interrogating her
>>35456430Capture her, take her back home, break her.We caught her trying to assassinate us multiple ties, that's easily enough to get he executed.>>35456466>Kini>into girls>confident enough to do what you're suggesting>doesn't just want our approvel, and hope for our kindnessyou're a funny guys, anon.>>35456467Punch to the face, solar plexus, or throat,maybe choke her until she passes out of we can't do punching well. Possibly use the hilt of our sword.Then tie her up and bring her back after frisking her thoroughly, and collecting her weapons and Kini.
>>35456430Brutal rape in every hole. Bondage, stocks, humiliation. Whips. Paddles. Oversized dildos.Mindbreak.It's a very open situation with plenty of options.Inb4 we never capture her.
>>35456500>>35456526Adelle is back at camp, people.
Remember guys, this is not a monstergirl so rape is not OK.Unless of course we get taunted into doing it / erosette / adelle asks us to do it.
>>35456561>rape is not OK.She tried to kill us in a warzone and got captured. This is 100% rape time.
>>35456561She tried to kill us, probably killed our brother, and has our little brother around her fingers.I think no one unbiased would fault us for a bit of dominance/denial/punishment rape.>inb4 abusefags back out of this while still saying that what we did to Kini was okay and we shouldn't try to fix her
>>35456530>We caught her trying to assassinate us multiple ties, that's easily enough to get he executed.The question is, is that what we truly want? Or would that be best?>>35456561Also this.On a serious note, let's see if we can't discern why she wants to kill us. Or if we should tell her what we know, such as she being in league with our brother.They probably want us dead so that Levy becomes head of the family for all the wealth and power. But we couldn't give two shits about wealth and power, we just like adventuring and monstergirls. Furthermore our marriage links the families.If our brother really loves Lorenne, surely, we could come into an agreement. He can have his power and prestige, hell we'll place him as head of the Nell while we're out "on business".I dunno, just some ideas, but having Lorenne killed and putting a rift between us and our brother would be unfortunate if it could have been avoided.
>>35456624>abusefagsAnon please, don't make this a tribal thing.
>>35456561>Remember guys, this is not a monstergirl so rape is not OK.lol what bizarre world do you live in
>>35456632Or we could execute them both.
>>35456632>not executing both Lorenne and our brother eventuallyI mean,sure, we can hold off on the rape and just talk to her and threaten her at this point. I'd honestly prefer just keeping her captive withsome light torture and shit at least until we get back home to get as much information out of her as we can, but she's gonna pay by at least being a fucktoy.And we are not helping her or our brother to power, evenifwe don't execute them.
>>35456644A world where raping monstergirls is completely fine but raping people isn't?We have been told this before you know.
>>35456561>Remember guys, this is not a monstergirl so rape is not OK.But anon, that just makes it even better.
>>35456467knock her out tire her up and drag her back to the camp make sure to keep both prisoners separate also check on kini after
>>35456709>>We have been told this before you know.No we haven't. Remember when we got Kini? They didn't know she was a monstergirl then, and they let us rape the shit out of her in the bloody jail.
>>35456705>And we are not helping her or our brother to power, evenifwe don't execute them.Why not? Not as if we care for that sort of thing.He wants to play armchair general with the Nell forces and bathe in money while we sip beers at home surrounded by our harem, go ahead.
>>35456488>>35456530>>35456742Knock her out looks to be winning. Roll 1d20.
>>35456644>>35456561Look, I'm just saying we shouldn't rape her straight away. Try to get some information out of her and clear out this mess. Figure out what's going on.We never really cared what was ok or not, I know.>>35456752Hmm, point taken.
Rolled 3 (1d20)>>35456785This is the part where we fumble the ball
>>35456742Eh, we can use Lorenne to show our guardian spirit cutie how nice we are to her, and how nasty we can be to bad girls/prisoners or something.
>>35456785>rolling to knock out a defeated opponentCome on understudy.>>35456802Knew it.
>>35456802did you fucking have to say that make a sacrifice to the dice gods right now
>>35456802thanks, anon, you fucked everything upI can't believe Baron can't even knock out a girl, for fuck's sake
>>35456821You've only got one arm pinned.
>>35456767Holy shit anon you cannot be this dumb.They murdered our brother, they tried to murder us, why would they let us swan off just because we agreed to let him have it when we still have a claim on the entire thing? He'll agree to it, and we'll be riddled with arrows before we're an hour out the gate.
>>35456841We knocked away the sword, right?I mean, fuck, if you'd pointed out she can do shit with her free arm, we couldű1ve went for pinning her other arm and headbutting her until she sleeps.
>>35456867The sword is in her hand still, but she can't actually use it because you've got it pinned.
Rolled 3 (1d20)>>35456834Dice for the Dice GodsRolls for the Roll Throne
>>35456921vaelys? is that an infamous QM?
Rolled 19 (1d20)>>35456922I will try to make a sacrifice on your behalf.
>>35456921Pretty sure Vaelys doesn't like rape, so probably doesn't read TAQ. I can see the guy's point though, this encounter has prompted a lot of dicerolls, comparatively, and yet more rolls just asking for failure to reset the entire thing and invalidate the successes.On the other hand, going on previous experience Understudy can be trusted to not actively fuck us on a single bad roll, so yeah, he may be over-reacting a tad.
>>35456952He is a retard who fags up threads because QMs don't carefully label every potential failure. He doesn't trip or namefag but he does harass people in the IRC (including GermanSchteel) so he's acquired a reputation.>>35457005Check US's twitter followers.
>>35456488 >>35456500 >>35456522 >>35456526 >>35456530 >>35456537 >>35456549 >>35456561 >>35456615 >>35456624 >>35456632 >>35456640 >>35456644 >>35456666 >>35456705 >>35456709 >>35456742 >>35456752 >>35456767 >>35456773 >>35456798 >>35456802 >>35456809 >>35456821 >>35456834 >>35456835 >>35456846 >>35456867 >>35456921 >>35456922 >>35456952 >>35456961 >>35457005 >>35457005Vaelys is one of my twitter followers.
>>35456952Infamous quest player and an admin of the quest runner IRC channel known for demanding total transparency from QMs, insisting that MCs should have no chance of failure and for harassing QMs who don't do exactly what he wants via twitter, IRC and any other avenue he has available. Also notable for having never actually run a quest despite all the 'advice' he gives.He's been a QTG meme recently.
>>35457074pick up her bow she dropped earlier and threaten her to give up
>>35457170Also, fire an arrow in her good leg.
>>35457074>"drop it now and live through this encounter">be agressive once she doesn't surrender, she has a knife and we're a sword sage ffs>pick up her sword, a branch, the piece of wood, or some dirt, throw it at her if wood or dirt>kick her in the cunt/leg>get the knife away and knock her outI dunno
I'll try to catch up with happenings.
>>35457170>>35457189We'd need to drop our sword and give her a prettylarge opportunity to escape, we aren't very good with a bow anyway.Not a good idea, imo.
>>35457074Let her know that she can surrender now and she won't get any more serious wounds.Physical at least.Also, don't pick up a bow when we already have a sword pointed at her.
>>35456430Rape her over and over, keeping her in our basement as our personal cum dumpster and humiliating her with Adelle until her mind snaps and she becomes a vacant shell of her former self for us to rape some more.
>>35457074Either she surrenders now and lives a little longer, or we kill her now. Slowly move forward with our sword at the ready. Get her to attack so that we can counter and disarm her. Figuratively or literally, doesn't matter.
>>35457074Circle her with swipes into the dropped plank-shield. When she loses her awareness or balance go for her arms.
>>35457193>>35457349>>35457353"Surrender, or else," followed by violence if necessary, seems pretty popular. Roll 2d20, first roll for getting her to surrender, second for beating her down again if she doesn't.The DC on getting her to surrender will be really high, though.
Rolled 19 (1d20)>>35457469good, I want to beat her, was just being civil
>>35457510The one time we don't want to roll high...
Rolled 18 (1d20)>>35457469Second dice
Rolled 17, 19 = 36 (2d20)>>35457469I've fit a bad feeling about this.Dice Gods, have mercy!
>>35457510>>35457538what is happen
>>35457510>>35457538Woooo! Our first high rolls in forever, feels good boys
>>35457510>>35457538>>35457562what the shit is going on
>>35457510Okay, yeah, that's a really high roll.I guess I'll put this to a vote. Does Lorenne surrender willingly, having realized that she has no chance? Since the combat roll is also really high, you can obviously beat her down. What I mean is, pick one:- Lorenne surrenders "voluntarily" now, having seen that she has no chance- Lorenne does not surrender, and you have to beat her down, which you do, easily.
>>35457655>>- Lorenne does not surrender, and you have to beat her down, which you do, easily.Avoiding significant permanent damage though, I assume.
>19>18>17>19something is wrong, I feel like this is just a last bit of hope, the calm before the storm>>35457655She surrenders willingly, but we're going to be somewhat rough when tying her up and dragging her to her prison.
>>35457655>- Lorenne does not surrender, and you have to beat her down, which you do, easily.
>>35457703>her prison."Her prison" being "our cellar," right?
>>35457655>- Lorenne surrenders "voluntarily" now, having seen that she has no chance
>>35457655- Lorenne surrenders "voluntarily" now, having seen that she has no chance
>>35457655>- Lorenne surrenders "voluntarily" now, having seen that she has no chanceThe violence will mostly come from Adelle, possibly Veronique, who was in danger of being arrowed.
>>35457655- Lorenne does not surrender, and you have to beat her down, which you do, easily.A fitting end to the fight against our assasin
>>35457719well, I was thinking a liter since we're in camp atm, but something similar, yes
>>35457655- Lorenne does not surrender, and you have to beat her down, which you do, easily.
Next vote is a tiebreaker.
>>35457655- Lorenne does not surrender, but does not put up a fight
>>35457762- Lorenne does not surrender, and you have to beat her down, which you do, easily.I dont think theres a tie
>>35457758>>35457762...or previous vote. Right. No surrender it is.
>>35457785ah, well, fine
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>>35457879>Paranoia frisk continues, remove everything
>>35457879bring her back to camp, gag her with some cloth, the throw her in a litter, we'll deal with it later
>>35457916Why gag? This is the perfect time to try and get her to spill her secrets
>>35457879To the Empress, the Empress!She will wait tied in the camp until Erosette dispenses noble justice>Lorenne could get whatever we got, but with more dom-control
>>35457879Bind her ankles together too. She could be hiding something else in her clothes, rip/ cut that shit right off. Then drag her back into camp, and show our catch to the wife, enjoy our new-found sense of safety.
>>35457936to make her fear/anticipate>this guy I just killed beat meand took me prisonerwhy hasn't he tried talking to me, what's going on, fuck
>>35457967I doubt she's one who would be afraid so easily. From what she told us at the festival, she's probably seen some shit.I mean, hell, look at the scars on her.
Why not interrogate here right now? Not like anyone else with bother us out here.The littler is literally running distance away and all who is there is a very irritated mountain goddess who won't be of any help.
>>35458085we can calm down a bit first, let our wife and Kini know she's been taken care of
>>35458085In my view, mostly Adelle. She won't be happy meeting Baron's would be assassin, and she can bring many ideas to the table.Also, Erosette. She could necrodom Lorenne or curses her into weakness. And undead will make keeping her in place easy.
>>35458085>>35458144Oh and I forgot. Kini definitely helped us and was expecting a reward. Se we could leave Lorenne tied up and reward Kini for her services.
>>35458170I would like that, but I think we should wait until we've got Lorenne tied up more and under guard first. Just so she can't escape.
Let's not interrogate/rape her just yet, get her back to camp first.I'm sure adelle wants to take part. Erosette too.
>>35457912 >>35457916 >>35457936 >>35457942 >>35457947 >>35457967 >>35458000 >>35458085 >>35458122 >>35458144 >>35458170 >>35458261 >>35458429
>>35458651Let's go at least try to observe how the battle's going, and then go check up on Kini.
>>35458680If that can be done, ok
Okay, fair warning, I'm tired. I think this chapter may end prematurely. I'm going to go dose up on some more caffeine; if it doesn't work, I'll probably end the chapter within the next hour or two.
>>35458826Ugh, know how you feel. At work myself and have to watch this on mobile.
>>35458826Well ok, smut with Kini first?Also, we have two litters don't we? Move veronique to the other litter then I guess.
>>35458651Package our prisoners securely, we have wood and rope to make it so.Go see Kini. Lay her down for a massage, remind her all she's done well (spying, tracking Lorenne, helping Baron twice), then try to get what she'd like when we're back at the manor while teasing her.
Okay, notes.Make sure Oriestad DOESN'T USE THE HOLE we made to free herself or Lorenne.
>>35458908We're not going back to the manor anytime soon, we still have a flask to find. Furthermore the "what to do with Lorenne after the smut" is also another issue we need to decide on.Do we have sufficient evidence to turn her in or her brother?
>>35458946its our brother
>>35458946>turn her inHell yes>our brotherNot yet.After interrogation, probably.
>>35458916Properly gag both of them, then?Oh! What if we switch the prisoners to our undamaged litter?
>>35458651>Securely tie Lorenne and make sure Oriestad doesn't try anything>Get Kini, thank her for once again saving our life.Perhaps this is the best time to have the "heart to heart" "Fixing" that some of you guys want.>>35458971I know that, typo>>35458981Then we had better start asking questions right now. And thinking of what we want to ask.
>>35458998That works even better, but again, gagging gets in the way of talking which we need to do.I have no qualms about gagging Oriestad however.
>>35458946>Do we have sufficient evidence to turn her in or her brother?If you want to, we could have Kini and our human maid (Eli?) do a final mission. Kini appears as Lorenne angry at Levy about the maid. Get Levy dommed and to write a letter as collateral.Wait some time, spring the letter. Lorenne will be dominated by Erosette doing her thing.
>>35459000>And thinking of what we want to ask.She probably won't be in the mood to speak anyway. Nothing will be coming out of her mouth except insults and spit.Might as well ask why she wants to kill us, as a start.
>>35459066ThisSounds very very fun.Also of note, what are we gonna do now? We have Lorenne in tow, do we settle that score now or keep sticking with Erosette and looking for the flask. Even as a prisoner Lorenne is likely a huge liability.
Okay, so:- secure both Veronique and Lorenne- talk to Kini, healing sceneYes? That about the size of it?
>>35459121Yeah. I mean, unless you want to add gags and symmetrical docking bondage, I don't know.
>>35459121I think so. Also switching the two prisoners to our undamaged litter. After the healing scene, I guess Kini will be riding with Adelle. I hope that goes okay.
>>35459121That, and check to see how Erosette's battle is going.
>>35459066Since he apparently does actually love Lorenne, could we not just send him a letter with something along the lines of 'I've caught your assassin, if you have a shred of honor and want to see no more harm come to our family then you will confess' and hope he gets the implication that if he doesn't, Lorenne will get the 'bad end' treatment. She does either way, but he doesn't need to know that.
>>35459164Adelle and kini have gotten along much better recently, should be fine.>>35459121That works
>>35459151>>35459164>>35459170>>35459199Any particular topics you want to cover when talking to Kini, then?
>>35459211Let's start from the beginning, how she stole from us, and we had to punish her for that, but since then, she's been a very, very good girl. And she's paid us back for the trouble she's caused us, and you'd like to promote her, put her on a level as say, Despina. Maybe even pay her, if she wants that. Say how she's been amazing, well above and beyond what was required of her, and you want to hear something that she wants, not what she thinks we want, but something she wants for her own sake, and then give it to her.
>>35459211Background exposition- How did she arrive at the castle and settled in- What did she like and hate the most out of living incognito in the castle.- Is she envious of anyone, Despina's role, Juniper's freedom, Arenne's peace?- What did she want to do with all her loot?
>>35459337Yeah, she did touch upon her backstory earlier but we never got the full picture.We should also say how we owe her our life, multiple times.If she's willing to give us what we want, then what we want is that she won't tremble in our presence, that when she thinks of what we might do to her she thinks of comforting, pleasant things. Not how to avoid punishment or fear.
>>35459419We could drive this in further by saying the new her has only been good, and the bad things we did was to the old "bad" her, so she doesn't need to be afraid anymore.
>>35459304Bringing up what she did, and what we did to her in response, only made things worse last time. Please don't make the situation worse than it already is.
>>35459475>and the bad things we did was to the old "bad" herNo, absolutely not.Especially if we're going to be bringing up her backstory. We are NOT gonna make her ashamed of her history.
>>35459304>>35459337>>35459419>>35459475>>35459622>>35459631What if she brings up wanting to leave? Not saying she will - I've just started writing - but it's very possible she'll mention it.
>>35459622This. Although I'm wondering if avoiding that issue instead of facing it head on might be one of our problems, but it likely isn't.
>>35459475That failed horribly the last time, you know. Just talking about topics that steer clear of any mention of punishment, and praising her diligent work, saying we're proud if her, worked much better.
>>35459647Some things aren't obtainable.
Also: what is your ideal outcome for this conversation? Kini as your loyal fuck pet, just happy instead of afraid? Something else?
>>35459709>Kini as your loyal fuck pet, just happy instead of afraid?Exactly that.
>>35459647Actions have consequences. Good or bad. The consequence of her great thefts meant she would become our fucktoy and servant.But conversely, the consequences of her exceptionally good behavior going beyond and exceeding the others is that so long we are near, she will never have reason to fear us. Those actions were good, she has been good, and so her consequences will be good.
>>35459647One, Baron is responsible for her not being bad anymore.Two, she can get better treatment through Baron than alone.Three, traveling isn't out of the question, but we need her safe and back.
>>35459732This. Her loyalty is already secured, now we just want her happiness.
>>35459647I think her saving our life balanced out her stealing the Celestial Fire. We'd be sad to see such a competent and skilled servant leave our service, as our bed. But she saved our life, and that needs to be repaid.
>>35459709>Kini as your loyal fuck pet, just happy instead of afraidIs good, maybe with a bit of the spunk back. Not too much though, so she can be smart and take a bit of initiative, but not to the point of disobedience.
>>35459709Ideal is Kini as our happy, loyal fuck pet and spy, who we may grant travel allowances to.
>>35459709Kini feeling safer, using her guile and skills to earn something for herself.
>>35459647If she wants to leave, tell her we'd like for her to stay, and we think it's better for her to stay with us, point out that she gets food, protection, shelter, and dick if she stays our servant, but if she really wants to go, we'll wish her luck.>>35459709Precisely this.
If she brings up wanting to leave, ask her why and where.Instead of saying she can't leave, suggest we go there with her, once we are done with this of course.
>>35459830>who we may grant travel allowances to.This too.
>>35459857>>35459830I don't really feel travel allowances are something she should get.Too many chances of outside influences.But we could let her decide a travel location or something if she desires and we could go with her like >>35459843Also gives PLOT.
>>35459929Okay, going with her to locations as reward trips is an acceptable compromise.
>>35459843>>35459929>>35460005You guys do realize, that if she's asking to leave, the most likely reason is to get away from us, right?
>>35460054If she wanted to leave to get away from us she wouldn't be asking.
>>35460158She's terrified of us. There's a big difference if she thinks we're going to hunt her down or not
>>35458680 >>35458772 >>35458865 >>35458877 >>35458908 >>35458916 >>35458946 >>35458971 >>35458981 >>35458998 >>35459000 >>35459017 >>35459066 >>35459069 >>35459112 >>35459151 >>35459164 >>35459170 >>35459174 >>35459199 >>35459304 >>35459337 >>35459419 >>35459475 >>35459622 >>35459631 >>35459674 >>35459686 >>35459701 >>35459732 >>35459746 >>35459769 >>35459778 >>35459801 >>35459804 >>35459830 >>35459832 >>35459839 >>35459843 >>35459857 >>35459929 >>35460005 >>35460054 >>35460158 >>35460227 Okay, long ass update. She's not 100% fixed right now but give her some time to fully internalize what you've said and that should be enough.
>>35460597>five screensWelp, time to read.
>>35460597>not my fucktoyehhh, I kinda liked that, wish it didn't have to go. Even Kini seemed to "like" it. But other than that it's good we're getting headway on this issue.
>>35460694I liked it too, but I guess it had to go. We can always call her our pet still.Hmm, this could be a Kini smut moment or we could go back and have some. . .exceptional fun with Lorenne.
>>35460694>Even Kini seemed to "like" it.She said she was our fuck toy because she was terrified of us as a consequence of the rape and abuse. It's not, like, actually her fetish.
>>35460757I get that, still pity that term had to be tied into all that she feared.>>35460597Rub and relax with Kini, let her feel safe for a bit.Then we go to Adelle and discuss what we should do with Lorenne.
>>35460597Discuss with Adelle what's the most we can do about LorenneEngage double petting on Kini while we wait for Erosette(Should we send Kini to scout the battle?)
>>35460900Can we. . .can we brush the hair of our dog yet?
>>35460900Kini should probably just relax for now.She saved our life, no need to put her any closer to more danger.
>>35460936God, what the fuck is up with you people and brushing hair? This is a quest about sex and rape, not hair-dressing.
>>35460968Don't bully the hair fetishist anon, he doesn't get a lot of chances to indulge himself.
>>35460936Chara is getting the B. In fact, since she already gets the D through A, we may be lacking a C to give.>>35460968This is beyond your understanding, anon.
>>35460597Sit Kini up in lap as we take off our shirt and drop our pants. Kiss her, have our tongue explore every corner of her mouth as we fondle her ass and grind her groin against ours. Circle around her asshole, but don't penetrate; I want to clean it later and take it completely in a different scene. Get her nice and wet, and get her off once just like this. Then let her suck us off, and come fully in her mouth so she can taste our full load.
Ask if kini wants a more pleasurable reward as well smut.If not, move back to adelle and the captives and start the interrogation smut.
>>35461051I would rather not create a situation where she does something she thinks we want her to say or do, after our previous conversation.If however, Understudy has Kini intentionally ask us for sex of her own accord and wants it, I will support that.
Hence the second option being available.Although I do want kini smut. She is a monstergirl after all.
So guys, what do you wanna see in the Lorenne scene?
>>35461534Torture, rape, and mindbreaking. After all, if we're releasing Kini from fuck toy status, I think we need a new one. And I think we should give her a new name, something demeaning. Punish her every time she uses her old name. Or pronouns.
>>35461534Forcible sex of the anal variety.
>>35461562Forcible sex of the vaginal variety.
>>35461534A trial and Erosette applying her "healing" on her. Even if we can't get Patina, at least we'll have another tank.
>>35461621Gonna have to be careful on this one, she's human so best not knock up our assasin.
>>35460641 >>35460694 >>35460752 >>35460757 >>35460871 >>35460900 >>35460936 >>35460961 >>35460968 >>35460998 >>35461016 >>35461028 >>35461051 >>35461088 >>35461156 >>35461534 >>35461554 >>35461562 >>35461621 >>35461641 >>35461644
>>35461641Eh, zombifying might present legal issues when we want to try lorenne for treason.We need to pin the blame on her for our brother's death and away from us if possible. I don't think Lorenne is someone we could ever add to our harem.
>>35461644>not knocking her up so that she's forced to carry her rapist's childFull pleb.
>>35461644So far we have solved that the "don't cum inside" route.If worst comes to worst, we have the option of falcon punch or simply slitting her throat.
>>35461534These things >>35461554
>>35461681Killing her won't solve the issue of her involvement with our brother, nor her potential involvement with the death of our late brother.It isn't likely she'll be very cooperative concerning her personal testimony anyway, but surely there is a way we can link her to previous conspiracies and conspirators.Does adelle have anything to say on this note?
>>35461790How would you get her to confess to killing our brother (if she did) and working with Levvy anyway?
>>35461847We don't have to get her to confess, she likely won't. What we do need is to secure evidence from her or our brother. The question is how.We DO have herself and her personal effects now. Perhaps we could go to the seer and use that to find what we are looking for.
>>35461681First we're showing off Lorenne to Erosette, with good rope work.Tell Adelle Orestiad is probably staying behind, so there's a chance we don't want to lose.>>35461847>>35461886There's >>35459066It doens't need Lorenne at all
Go full on >>35461554We need a new fuck slave.She won't willingly give us any information unless we damage her anyways, so might as well go all the way.We could chain her up, keep her in the basement of our house or something.Anyways.>Tell adelle that she can continue, but she can return to her original topic>Send Kini away to get an update on the battle as an excuse so she doesn't have to experience this again, even if it is on someone elseWe have kini to pretend to be lorenne.Adelle always wanted to see what we did to Kini, let's show her. This time she can help too.
We had better get some smut before the end of this thread, I swear to God you faggots have to have your fucking cocks grabbed and shoved into a girl's cunt in order to actually have sex with something.
>>35461922That plot though hilarious is risky, especially when rolls come into play. I would like to pursue the seer in the least first, then failing that we try that avenue.
>>35461945She won't give us any information even if we "damage" her. From her scars and what she has seen, she might even be more resilient than the damn guard of the Bayamard town.Keeping a woman who will always try to kill us, especially a non-monstergirl human one, under our bed is not a safe thing to do. Eventually we'll have to turn her to the Nell favored form a justice for attempted murder.
>>35461980Your definition of sex is as limited as the post going full edge
>>35462046then we kill her later.Until then she can be our torture experiment. I'm sure she will break eventually.
>>35461681Also yes, bring on the Fun with Lorenne. This is gonna be a smut scene like no other.
>>35462061Every other thread in this entire stupid quest's history has had at least one smut scene. This had better not be the first one to be completely clean of any fucking.>>35462046>Keeping a woman who will always try to kill us, especially a non-monstergirl human one, under our bed is not a safe thing to do.I'm pretty sure Adelle is *literally* saying we should do *exactly* that.
>>35462107No she fucking isn't. But you better believe we'll have multiple rounds of fun with her.
>>35462107>This had better not be the first one to be completely clean of any fucking.It damn better not be, I'll be sure of that.
>>35462154"Even the most depraved of things," "no one would much care about her treatment," "there's no real limitations," etc.
Rape Lorenne with Adelle y/n?
>>35462107You're drunk, get outDo I want smut? Yeah. But Lorenne so far is an open, obnoxious plot. Same thing with Erosette's battle.Orestiad, Adelle, Erosette? All available and with more potential than bash, fug, piss.
>>35462204None of that implies or points to "keeping her in our basement forever" or that she's advising we do that.Just that we have very little limitations on what we can do to her.
>>35462238Yes. As brutally, nastily, and depraved as we can.
>>35462260It's glaringly fucking obvious that is exactly what adelle wants us to do.
>>35462238Rape Adelle while she takes retribution on Lorenne for trying to kill us twice. We brought Lorenne for her.
>>35462270No blood bruises or broken bones though, major turn off personally. The rest is free game.
>>35462238Y>>35462287You can't rape the willing.But giving Adelle some attention too would be nice.
You guys do realize this is our brothers paramour and while he is a shit brother, he still deserves some happiness.
>>35462286No it's not. Just because you try to keep saying something is there when it isn't doesn't mean anyone will believe you, because you're a fucking retard.
It's kind of amusing how Understudy keeps including girls that are pretty clearly designed solely to be constantly raped and abused, then all his faggot players want to be nice to them.Kini, our mindbroken fuck toy? "We have to fix her."Patina, our paralyzed abuse victim? "We have to make her like us."Lorenne, our captive who we have every reason to hate and who our wife wants us to brutally rape the shit out of? "No, no! We have to investigate her or something first!"
>>35462390Adelle wants us to abuse her.Whether we kill her later or keep her is up to us, she doesnt care, but she explicitly mentioned it would be perfectly fine.
>>35462372>he still deserves some happiness.Murder. Attempted murder. To hell with them both.
>>35462372For all we know, he was in on the plot to kill us too.
>>35462372Yeah, let's return his attempted assassination with hugs and good wishes.
>>35462372What he "deserves" is to get transformed into a girl, then stuck in the rape cave with Lorenne where he can live out the rest of his days being our rape toy.
>>35462421But there is absolutely nothing in there that indicates she's saying we should keep her locked up in our basement forever.
>>35462405>breaking the flat utility shapeshifterShit choice anyway>PatinaNot my style to let other things get in the way of the D>LorenneJust kill her, or give her to Erosette. That problem is better undead or buried.
>>35462405White knights are a fucking plague. Fortunately Kini is pretty much a non-issue from now on 'fixing'-wise and with Patina we seem to have come done on the side of inducing addiction while abusing her.
>>35462472"So long as it is kept rather quiet." If it's a one and done thing, it's kept rather quiet already, no "so long as."
>>35462405>KiniAlready had our fun with her>PatinaEh, I'm fine either way but some people want an invincible tank bodyguard made of rock. Do like pissing on our angry statue though.>LorenneNo, I'm totally down for raping the murderer of our brother and for trying to kill us. Twice.
>>35462472She said that we would be able to keep her around if we wanted as long as it was kept quet.How the fuck is that not saying she is fine with us keeping her around?
>>35462503Right. We could kill her, we could lock her up, we can do whatever the fuck we want.But she isn't pointing to anything specific, especially not "literally wants us to keep her locked in the basement for the rest of ever."
>>35462543She IS fine with it.But she is NOT advising we do it, for or against. Try to wrap your very tiny brain around this concept.
>>35462595Right, but if it were as terrible an idea as some people are suggesting, she would be advising against it.
>>35462595no, that is because she doesn't command us around.She has preferences, and her fetish is for us to dominate others.Even without her explicitly saying it, most people would have picked up on her personality by now.
>>35462657The idea hasn't even be spoken about in character.
If undead can gangbang, I kinda want to try an undead gangbang.
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>>35462681No, obviously what she meant by us keeping her around was to let her walk around in our house freely!
>>35462661Domination =/= Lock a dangerous assasin under our beds who will constantly attempt to murder us in our sleepIf we bring up the idea to her and she says "yeah, that'd be great!" then I'd be all for it, but until then she can't read our fucking minds.
>>35462690I like this idea.Once we are exhausted and done with her, we let the undead army gangbang her.Not to death though, that would be too kind.
>>35462729>"Even the most depraved of things," "no one would much care about her treatment," "there's no real limitations," None of this equates to "keep her around"
>>35462754But she can, because she's US's self-insert character and he can read our conversations.
>>35462754>but until then she can't read our fucking mindsIf there is ONE thing you should have picked up so far it is that she mirrors every fucking thought Duke has.>>35462775No, which is why nobody quoted that part and instead quoted the part relevant to keeping her round, what the fuck is your problem?
>>35462803>quoted the part relevant to keeping her roundYou mean the part that doesn't exist right? Because some idiot is trying to say "adelle says we should keep her at home!" when she said nothing of the sort.
>>35462718Beat her. Not even in a demand for sex yet, just beat her. And we should give her a new name, I'm thinking "Ride". Call her that, get Adelle to call her that, and punish Lorenne if she calls herself, or refers to herself by anything else, even "I' or "Me".
Please stop arguing over whether or not Adelle would like it if you got a(nother) rape slave. The answer is always yes.
>>35462718First thing, we stay away from her mouth and leave her gagged ideally. Kick her in the gut to wind her, hard but not too hard, then shove her face into the ground. Put a boot on the back of her head, push her face into the mud, prop her ass up on her knees than spank her raw with the flat of out sword.Adelle can plow us to get us lubed enough to not hurt ourselves, then when Lorenne is nicely red and painful, we kneel on her calves and ram it into her ass. Adelle can sit on her back and we can make out and finger her while we do so.That's some starting ideas, are other people okay with more watersports/ harder bondage?
>>35462921and thats why Adelle is the best girl
>>35462921Very well. That is all I needed to hear.The problem that has been in the past has been people putting words into the characters mouth that weren't spoken, like trying to dominate the captain of the guard because "surely that's what Adelle would like" when she didn't.
>>35462718Rope bondage into immobility. Scrape the ropes against her until she gets red.Set her up with her legs open. Let Adelle play with her breasts and pinch her body while Baron teases her holes.Switch positions. Adelle tribs or fingerfucks Lorenne, Baron goes for titfuck. End with facial for Adelle to see.
>>35462899This is a good start.>>35462967Her limbs are tied up, just dont flop our dick near her mouth.We can put the gag back if she doesn't spill anything.Now, the best part is if we completely tie her down and leave her immobile, blindfold her, gag her.Best would be if we could lock her head in place too.Don't ask her any questions, she expects us to interrogate her, we don't want to give her a reason to "resist". Hell, pretend she isn't even a human. Ignore her and talk to her indirectly through adelle.
>>35463083>Don't ask her any questions, she expects us to interrogate her, we don't want to give her a reason to "resist". Hell, pretend she isn't even a human. Ignore her and talk to her indirectly through adelle.I would like this part to be the anal scene if possible.
>>35462899I don't like Ride. While I like the idea of replacing her name with something really degrading, "Ride" just makes me think of cars.
>>35463083>Her limbs are tied up, just dont flop our dick near her mouth.We can put the gag back if she doesn't spill anything.Meant to remove that as I started writing something else.She expects we want to find out what happened to our brother and why she is after us, if we show absolutely no sign of caring about this, she will become confused and helpless.
>>35463139We could ask Adelle for something appropriate. I'm sure she has a good idea or two, and it would be amusing to discuss it in front of our victim.
>>35463318Indeed, we could bring up the fact that she was sad she missed Kini's breaking and that for this one, she can participate herself.
While we fuck her in the ass, can we find some vaguely phallic object to shove into her cunt?After we're done with anal we switch to her cunt, we take it out and shove it in her ass.After we're done with her cunt, we'll have one more round of anal and use it as her new gag, shoving her own shit into her mouth.
>>35463410Do not stick your dick in the mouth of your angry rape victim unless you want it bitten off.
>>35463436Hence us not sticking our dick in, but the shit smeared vaguely phallic object.
>>35463436That's why I meant we use an object, rather than our dick, to shove down her facehole.Preferably something that has spent a reasonable amount of time in her other orifices.
>>35463461Adelle could even have some fun pistoning it in her butt while we fuck her pussy.
So, how about that undead gangbang?Leave her tied and chained to a pole or something, then let a dozen zombies have their way with her.
>>35462967>Put a boot on the back of her head, push her face into the mudIf we can, I'd like to see if we can't aim it near an ant hill. Add to the humiliation of not being able to move.
>>35463537Once we are done with her ourselves of course.
>>35463545Vetoed. I hate ants.
>>35463537That would necessitate Erosette arriving and her army.
>>35463568This is going to last some time.
>>35463495More fun for the whole family.
>>35463560>>Vetoed. I hate ants.Oh thank god, I thought I might have to argue that.
Fisting? Watersports? A more humiliating position to tie her in?Stuff to save for later?
>>35463318Adelle suggests Bitch, since that's what Lorenne called Adelle (it also adds a layer of nonsexual degradation). Does Baron accept or reject it?
>>35463725Don't like fisting, but don't mind it either.Watersports, yes, this deserves another round of golden shower to the face.Humiliating positions? Why not list some anon.
>>35463742Sounds good to me.
>>35463742Baron likes a lot.
>>35463742A bit standard, but if adelle wants it then we are all for it. Her reasoning is sound as well.
>>35463753>Why not list someNot him but if we have some rope we can tie her hands and wrap it around a tree branch, lifting her body by her arms. We can use other ropes to spread her legs in a V, exposing her whole body ripe for us to molest.We can fuck her from the front while Adelle fucks her ass with that phallic object, or fuck her ass while Adelle molests her body from the front.
>>35463742Accept>>35463753I agree that the humiliating aspects of pissing on her are good, but I want to keep her around for a bit more fun than just once. And remember that we're keeping her in our litter; that's the same as pissing on our own bed. So, unless we're going to clean her afterwards to deal with the smell, I have to say I'm against water sports.
>>35463922Should be a river nearby to toss a bucket of water on her.
>>35463922I was going to suggest we just chain her by the latrines but I realized there are none in this army.No waste at all actually.
>>35463885Got the term, it's a strappado, but instead of bending over she's lifted to stand up straight, possibly on her toes.This gives us a better position to slap her tits or ass or any part of her body.
>>35463991Best if its positioned at the height where her toes barely touch the ground so she has to exert herself to not put all the pressure on her arms.
>>35464089Precisely. Also standing up makes it much easier for us to use our sword to paddle her.Maybe we do that first, paddling her ass while Adelle fucks her cunt with a not-Dildo and pinching her clit till she comes. Then when she's exhausted and less able to resist, Adelle shoves it in deep, we cut the ropes and then pin her down once she falls for sudden and abrupt anal sex.
>>35453839Hey, Understudy, should you make a new thread? This one's almost gone, I think.
>>35464089>>35463991>While the technique shows no external injuries, it can cause long-term nerve, ligament, or tendon damage. The technique typically causes brachial plexus injury, leading to paralysis or loss of sensation in the armsImagine the mental damage from having your future torn away. She lived by the sword and bow, seems like a good punishment.
>>35464186It's on page seven, plenty of time yet, probably enough to finish.
>>35464186It's only page 7. I'll finish the smut and have time for another (non-smut) finisher update before it falls off.Probably there will not be simulated sex with toys this round, sorry to folks who want them.Currently, it's:- get violent, rename her- tie her up further- Adelle sucks while you spank- rape Lorenne's assThere'll probably be some adjustments to make the last phase involve Adelle more, and that'll be it for this scene. I've managed not to fall asleep yet, but I don't really expect to be awake at eleven.
>>35464211Eh, maiming is not my thing personally. Still, she did try to kill us and likely killed others.
>>35464282I don't really care about the physical trauma, the mental damage is more important.They will still function, just not well enough to shoot a bow and swing a sword properly, and that is where the mental distress comes in.
>>35464271>- get violent, rename herRight>- tie her up furtherThe strappedo thing, throwing a rope around a tree and making it "where her toes barely touch the ground so she has to exert herself to not put all the pressure on her arms.>- Adelle sucks while you spankActually, I think have Adelle suck us before we start spanking.Then once we're lubed, start spanking, and have adelle rape Lorenne with a convenient phallic object, like a wooden handle or something, while we spank Lorenne raw with our sword. Possibly making her orgasm.Then we cut the ropes after she's tired, >- rape Lorenne's ass"Shove her face into the ground. Put a boot on the back of her head, push her face into the mud, prop her ass up on her knees""ram it into her ass"
>>35464310Hey, works for me. The altnernative to (slowing) her murderous ways would be to kill her and that is somewhat more offputting.
>>35464366It's worth mentioning we won't manage these results unless we skip the "toes touching the gound" part and go for completely airborn.Sudden jerks will completely break her shoulders though, so be careful when hoisting her up.
>>35464469> go for completely airborn.Let's not, please.
Okay, I'm about to fall asleep, so I may miss the end, just make sure we're nice and brutal, and make sure she knows that whatever we do now is just a taste of how the rest if her life is going to be.
>>35464716I'm doing my last edit pass where I try to remove any fucked up your/hers. Couple minutes, tops.
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>>35464876Excellent. Put her away wet, (seal her up in a litter without cleaning) then make preparations to reward Kini with Adelle, next time.Also check up on that battle or whatever I GUESS.
>>35464876Lean over Lorenne/Bitch, tell her that this is her new position in life, and that there will be even worse coming to her. Then kiss the wife.
>>35465008>gagged, tied up, with shit smeared all over your tits and cum over your faceSounds comfortable.
>>35465238Pretty sure that's the point.
>>35464876Invert positions. Orestiad goes on top of Lorenne.Ask Adelle if she can feel something from the battle. Otherwise get to checking.
>>35465271I don't see why she should have to be near lorenne.No personal gripes against her, and she is a monstergirl isnt she?
>>35464876Put Lorenn back in the litter for now, but take the Orestiad out, and just keep her in our lap until Erosette comes back.Remember that while the Orestiad is a POW right now, she said that she will switch her allegiance to Erosette once she comes back and performs the necessary rituals/offerings.She's a future ally, even if she is a dangerous prisoner right now. I think we should start treating her differently.
>>35465332>>35465302Yeah, she might not like us, but no need to rub salt in the wound if she is going to serve the Queen.
>>35465332>>35465379I just remembered Orestiad mentioned young boys, and Baron is in the market for a son.
>>35465332>>35465379Right, absolutely don't put them in the same litter.
>>35464876I want to say this felt a little shorter than it could have been Understudy, maybe you were tired or whatnot, but there was just a little less detail in this than the Chara anal taking scene.Stuff like mentioning more of the noises she made as we paddled her, how red and sensitive her ass was as we groped it, or how long it took to ease us into a virgin ass like we did Chara.Make no mistake, I love the scene although I wonder if it is possible for you to add onto this scene, if you want, since it's only a text-image and is added onto the archive. Nobody is making you, and I am certainly pleased with the way it is now.
>>35465008 >>35465034 >>35465238 >>35465268 >>35465271 >>35465302 >>35465332 >>35465379 >>35465436 >>35465464 >>35465532There's always next time. Or maybe I've become a soulless monster and will never write a rape scene as good as the Chara one ever again. Either/or.
>>35465633Have to say you put the bar kinda high with that one, so it's understandable. But you can only take a virgin ass once!
>>35465633I personally thought the Kini one was better and is totally worth all the fallout now.Thanks for running Understudy!
>>35465769>>35465824Part of it is probably that Chara and Kini "gave up" during their scenes. Lorenne still hasn't.
>>35466024Actually, the moment Chara gave up was when we stopped the anal part and switched to oral. That's part of what made that scene.Resistance is so sweet, all the more reason to savor it.
>>35466339Maybe I don't know exactly what you'd call it, but it's Chara's "Please-" and Kini's "I'm your fuck toy." Lorenne hasn't had that moment yet.
>>35466392I was talking more about the sweetness of resistance, but yeah we haven't "broken" lorenne and I doubt we will anytime soon.>>35466339Too add it did help a bit that we built up that moment, in between Despina licking Chara's ass and then us telling Chara we're gonna fuck her butt.With Lorene treats like, the changing tone of her voice with each additional paddle, the visible red and heat rising from her ass, the way her hole clenches around our invading dick for dear life, the look and twitch in her eyes as we piston back forth, would have been so tasty. But overall, the scene was still good.
>All this analChara is still resisting, in her own way.