Previous: http://archive.moe/tg/thread/34936961/Finally you arrive at your destination. The campus gates. "Let's get today over with..." As you walk into the university campus you immediately felt an intense glare looking at you. Could it be one of your old clients who you refused to see? Could it be a loan shark? "You! My supposed uncle!" Suddenly a familiar voice calls out to you. "We need to talk!"Turning around you saw Yuri's daughter, Reiko with hands on her hips. "Ah, nice to see you Reiko, how's my cousin Yuri doing?""Drop the act, I got my mother to tell me the truth yesterday!" Just as you suspected Yuri was not a very good liar. "I need to talk to you."You decide to hear her out. Reiko takes you to a remote part of the campus to talk to you alone. Trying to lighten up the mood you make a joke. "It feels like you are going to confess to me, this is pretty weird..."Finally she stops and you were barely able to stop before you ran into her. "That's exactly why I brought you here..." Taking a deep breath she continues. "Kou... I want you to go out with me.The serious look in her eyes as she asks you to go out with her so boldly just makes you laugh. "What? What are you talking about? Reiko I think you should think about what you are saying." Turning around you try and leave but she grabs your arms stopping you from going any further."I'm serious Kou... I want you to go out with me so that you can make my mother happy... if you go out with me you can visit my mother at home without Shin being suspicious... you would have an excuse to see her without Shin being jealous..." It was admirable. You've never seen a girl that selfless.[ ] "You know my rate."[ ] "Fine, I understand."[ ] Custom
>>34957531>[ ] "Fine, I understand."
>>34957531>[ ] "Fine, I understand."Compliment her on her selflessness.
>>34957531>[x] "Fine, I understand."I almost missed this
>>34957531[ ] "Fine, I understand."
>>34957531[ ] "Fine, I understand"A little pro-bon(e)o work is always good for the reputation.
>>34957531>[ ] "You know my rate."
[ ] >You know my rate.
"Alright, I understand." You tell her. "I can't say no to a girl that is sacrificing herself for her mother's happiness now can I?" Reiko smiles excitedly. "Great!" Although you said yes to her because of Yuri, Reiko was still genuinely happy. Trying to test her out you ask her, "But are you sure you won't fall for me?"She just laughs. "Huh? Don't be an idiot! I only like ol-" Your body moved on it's own. It didn't take kindly to being looked down upon like that. Putting your arms around her hips you pull her in."Not even if I do this?"Reiko's face looked angry. It was definitely unforeseen for you for her to react like that. "W-what are you doing?!" She yells out loud before you felt a sharp pain on your left cheek. After she gives you a slap she pushes you away. "Y-You are such a pervert!" She then stamps off towards the university buildings."This is why I hate younger girls... It's impossible to read them..." Shrugging your shoulders you follow her to go to your first class.>Custom
>>34957531[X] "You know my rate."Make money AND fuck bitches.
>>34957861>Tsundere's gonna Tsun.Go to classes, daydream about the man we groped on the bus.Specifically kicking his face in.
>>34957861Yes, it's the girls, I'm sure.Welp, we're here might as well go to class. Text Nee-san too, tell her we still plan on meeting her later
>>34957861try to talk with her a bit more"come on this was just a little joke, don't take it badly.anyway, anything i should know about that guy?"
>>34957861Sit on her desk before class starts flirting with her so everyone knows she's our girlfriend
>>34957934I'd go with this.
>>34957861"W-what are you doing? Following me?" Reiko finally turns around and asks you. "Huh? I'm not following you?" At first you thought she was unaffected by your seduction, but now you could see just how flustered she is. "This is just the way to my first class..."To the surprise of both of you, the first class you had in university was the same. The same professor, the same classroom and the same classmates. You haven ever really noticed her before because you rarely looked at girls your own age."I... I never noticed you in this class before... are you sure you are just not stalking me?"You scoff at her as you say as you walk to a free seat, "You aren't really my type." Since the two of you were a bit late, she was forced to sit right beside you. You turn it around on her, "Are you sure you aren't stalking me?"The look on her face was priceless. The red-cheeked, embarassed look. The way she bit her lips to prevent herself from saying anything more. It would be lying to yourself if you said it didn't make you smile to see her like that. Her look changes the moment the professor comes in. "Good morning everyone!" Reiko's eyes started to twinkle. The smile she had was much different."Jeez... It's your fault I was late... I should've been in the front where I could see the professor better..." That was the moment you realized why Reiko has never noticed you in her class.>cont.
>>34957861Continue on to class wither and pry some conversation from her.
>>34957981Oh god, prof is gonna pull a our old teacher on her isn't he?
>>34957981Dude, if the professor is abusive, you may as well called this "Battered Housewife Quest".
>>34958046If all these fuckers are abusive we turn this into killing spree quest. we get some sharp objects and we murder each of them in rapid succession.
>>34958069Surely we must have some criminal connections?We get THEM to murder people for us.
>>34958069>sharpBut if they're dull, we can have a challenge.
>>34958030>>34958046Reiko likes older men.
>>34958069>wanting to go to prisonNo thanks, just file a police report and be there for the girls/women in the aftermath.
>>34958095I know that.If the professor turns out to be abusive so we can have a mother-daughter threesome, I'll drive this quest in a paddywagon.
>>34958030well, if he's not abusive, it's a win-win situationshe uses us to bang the teach, we use her to make her mom happy...unless she gets caught or the teach is dumb/crazy, everything should go fine especially if shin has a little accident
>>34958118typically with battered women they deny the incident. It typically takes about 12 instances of abuse before they decide to flee the subject. In the time that the police are informed and or they are ex filtrating themselves from the home they are in the most danger. Typically the standard violence escalates drastically once the authorities are informed/woman leaves.Also I can't remember the technical term for it but once the authorities arrive the battered spouse tends to become protective of the abuser and makes things difficult with the officers.
>>34958151It's not gonna happen.
>>34957981Sleeping through the whole morning class has already become routine for you. Today was different however. You were actually entertained by how Reiko's eyes followed and watched every single thing the professor did. It was impressive to see just how love could change someone. Finally the class ends. Reiko takes a deep breath as she smiles. "Ah... too bad it's over..." That was when she notices you watching her. "W-what are you looking at you pervert?""Ah, nothing." You smile at her. "Well I'm going, this is my last class of today. Good luck with the professor!" You tease her as you grab your bag and leave."H-Huh!? W-what are you talking about!?" She tries to act innocent but she can't fool you. Reiko was way too transparent for her to hide any secrets.Finally you were free to go to your sister's workplace and visit her. You felt excited, it's the first time you'll see your sister while she worked. "I wonder what Ayeka-nee would look like..." Women who was working with a passion has always been the most attractive to you. Although you try to ignore her at first, it seemed like this time, it was her following you. Halfway through your journey to the shopping district, where you sister's salon is located, you turn around. "Reiko? what are you doing?"Immediately she jumps up, startled. "H-Huh? I'm just going to the shopping district... It's not like I'm following you or anything okay?"[ ] "Shopping district? I'm going the same way, let's go together." Go with her together.[ ] "Is that so, well good luck." Take a different route than her. You don't want your sister to see you with a girl.[ ] Custom
>>34958168>[ ] "Shopping district? I'm going the same way, let's go together." Go with her together.
>>34958118If we can be present during a moment of abuse we can probably say that we were worried for their lives and get away clean
>>34958168[ ] "Shopping district? I'm going the same way, let's go together." Go with her together.
>>34958168>[ ] "Is that so, well good luck." Take a different route than her. You don't want your sister to see you with a girl.Big sis route is go.
>>34958168>[x] "Is that so, well good luck." Take a different route than her. You don't want your sister to see you with a girl.I don't want Nee-san seeing us with this girl
Vote count:4 - Walk with her to the shopping district2 - Take a different route
>>34958168>[ ] "Is that so, well good luck." Take a different route than her. You don't want your sister to see you with a girl.
>>34958163>using statistics to justify murder and not even considering any alternative or even talking to the woman about it>wanting to go to prison
>>34958331The women in this scenario will likely appreciate our concern but continue with their destructive relationships. Prison isn't the only option Suicide is also acceptable.
"Shopping district?" You ask Reiko. She nods. "Mhmm, why? are you going there too?""Yeah, I am, let's go together then." Reiko breathes a sigh of relief. "Oh good! You are going the same way as me so you can carry this!" She throws you her bag. Not reacting at all it bounces of your chest and falls to the ground as you watch it. "Carry your own bag." Turning around you start walking away from her."Kou! You jerk! This is why I hate boys my own age..." She was just like you. Finally you arrive at the salon. "Eh? your sister works here huh? Do you think she can get me a discount?""I don't know, maybe." You try and ignore Reiko as you try and search around for your sister. Finally you find her cleaning up in the back room. "Ayeka-ne-" You try and call out to her, but unfortunately a man in a suit gets to her first."Ayeka... can I speak to you in my office for a bit?" "S-sure, owner." Your sister obediently follows. As for Reiko she was just looking around the salon when all of a sudden she catches a glimpse of someone outside. Immediately she panics and she tries to hide by putting her head on your lap. >cont.
>>34958514>S-sure, owner.Oi, oi, oi I don't like this
>>34958514"What are you doing Reiko?" You snap at her."Sorry! Please let me hide here for a bit!" Looking outside you saw a man in a silver suit with two women, one on each of his arms. "I can't let Shin see me or else..." As Reiko hides you could feel her warm breath in your pants.Immediately you could feel the patrons of the salon look at you in a lewd manner. Their eyes were all saying, "Ah! How aggressive and bold of that girl..." Finally, after about 5 minutes Reiko comes out of her hiding. "Well, I think I'm going to go now Kou. I still have to buy some groceries since my mom will be working overtime today.""Eh? what about Shin?""I think I can hide from him... maybe?"[ ] "I see, I'll see you tomorrow then." Wait for your sister to come out.[ ] "I'll go with you, I'll make sure nothing happens to you." Go with Reiko in case Shin sees her.[ ] Custom
>>34958554>[x] "I see, I'll see you tomorrow then." Wait for your sister to come out.I don't like leaving Nee-san here and I'm super suspicious of them going to the office together
>>34958554>Custom"I'll go with you, but I'm going to check on my sister first."
>>34958554 this sounds good:>>34958594
>>34958554Custom - Try to listen in somethings not right.Fuck is this owner bastard. Another added to the kill list.
>>34958514>tfw mother daughter harem will never be ours
"I'll go with you, but let me just check on my sister first okay?" Reiko looked surprised. "Eh? you don't have to." She starts to laugh awkwardly. "I've done this a hundred times." The loneliness in her tone makes you realize Reiko is just trying to act strong."No, I'll go with you.""Are you sure?" You could tell Reiko is not used to having company. Just like you she has always been alone. In a way you could relate to her. While you have your sister, Reiko had her mother."Yep, I'm sure, I'll go with you, I promise." You smile at her as you stand. "Wait here okay?" You go up to the receptionist again. "Ah sorry again, do you know how much longer Ayeka-nee will be in here?""Hmm... let me check for you okay?" Just as the receptionist stands up, your sister comes out of the office. She sighs as she looks disappointed. "Ayeka-nee!" You yell out to her and immediately the sad look in her eyes disappears. "Kou!" It was now replaced with excitement. "Kou just a second okay! let me just get my bag and we can go home together!" Your sister gathers her things in a hurry and runs towards you. As she passes by her coworkers she bows and says goodbye to them. The moment she could, she wraps her arms around you with a smile. "Ah... seeing you just makes my day so much better... shall we go home?"[ ] "Actually... I promised a friend I'd keep her company." Introduce her to Reiko.[ ] "Sure, let's go." It seems like your sister has had a long day. Keep her company, apologize to Reiko.[ ] Custom
>>34958846>[ ] "Actually... I promised a friend I'd keep her company." Introduce her to Reiko.I think they'd like each other, Ask her if she minds walking Reiko home with us?
>>34958846>[ ] "Actually... I promised a friend I'd keep her company." Introduce her to Reiko. "Let's walk her home first okay?"
>>34958846Take sister with us, two females there make it look less bad if shin rolls around
>>34958882This seems good.
>>34958846>[x] "Sure, let's go." It seems like your sister has had a long day. Keep her company, apologize to Reiko.
>>34958846[ ] "Actually... I promised a friend I'd keep her company." Introduce her to Reiko.
>>34958877>>34958882Yeah let's do that, walk her home first, introduce her as a classmate
>>34958846>[ ] "Actually... I promised a friend I'd keep her company." Introduce her to ReikoSee if sis is amenable to going shopping with us.
"Actually I promised a friend I'd keep her company." Your sister looked a bit surprised. "Is that so?" She forces a smile. "I see, is she pretty or something?" Ayeka makes a joke."Not as pretty as you, but I'll introduce you to her!" You take your sister to meet Reiko. "Hello, my name is Reiko" Your sister shakes Reiko's hands."I'm Ayeka, Kou's sister." Although it was just a subtle hint, you could still detect jealousy in your sister's tone. After their introductions the three of you go outside to plan out your next step.You suggested walking your sister home first and then coming back with Reiko to shop but Reiko was against it. "Eh? I don't want to bother you that much... I can shop alone."The next plan you suggested was for your sister to come shopping with the two of you. However she protests. "I don't want to intefere." Your sister smiles. "I can go home alone, after all I need to cook lunch for us anyways!"[ ] Go with your sister. (Roll 1d20: Taking the average of the first 3 rolls)[ ] Go with Reiko (Roll 1d20: Taking the average of the first 3 rolls)[ ] Custom
Rolled 11 (1d20)>>34959157>[ ] Go with your sister. (Roll 1d20: Taking the average of the first 3 rolls)
Rolled 4 (1d20)>>34959157>[ ] Go with your sister. (Roll 1d20: Taking the average of the first 3 rolls)
Rolled 19 (1d20)>>34959157>[ ] Go with your sister. (Roll 1d20: Taking the average of the first 3 rolls)
>>34959183>[ ] CustomWhisper to Reiko: "I have to pretend to be your boyfriend, right? I'm kind of obligated to go shopping with you in that case."
Rolled 6 (1d20)>>34959157>[x] Go with your sister. (Roll 1d20: Taking the average of the first 3 rolls)The superior Nee-san
>>34959157[ ] Go with your sister
"I see..." Making the choice of going with your sister, you turn to Reiko. "Sorry Reiko, I'll see you tomorrow okay?"To your surprise, Reiko breathes a sigh of relief. "Yeah, I'll see you tomorrow!" She awkwardly smiles. "To tell you the truth I don't really know how to shop with a guy so I'm a bit relieved..."You were still worried for her however, so you decide to exchange numbers. "Here, let me get your cell number, if anything happens call me okay?" With a surprised look on her face she takes out her phone. "This is the first time anybody has asked for my number..." She was telling the truth. You were the first name in her empty contact list."Remember, call me if anything happens okay?"Reiko nods her head with a smile. "I will! Thanks Kou... I can tell why my mother fell for you."Going back to your sister you tell her. "Let's go!">cont.
>>34959281Mother daughter harem end not wholly dead, we can still do this, just gotta not be a whiny twat like the rest of our age group
>>34959281"So how was your day at work Ayeka-nee?" The look on her face told you everything you needed to know."Augh... my boss is such a loser..." You could tell from her face that he disgusted him. "He called me into his office today you know..." Immediately you remember the man she called owner. "Oh? what did he want?""Nothing... he is just giving me a hard time because I rejected his confession 3 days ago..." You didn't know why, but hearing your sister tell you she rejected someone's confession puts your heart at ease. "I see." It was understandable that your sister wouldn't want to get into a relationship with other men."I told him the reason too but he was pushy..." All of a sudden your sister's lips curl into a mischievous smile. "Ahh~" She yells out to make it obvious to you. "I wonder if I made the wrong choice... should I have just gone out with him after all Kou? what do you think?"Right away you knew what she was doing.[ ] Custom
>>34959386No, I don't want to end up in jail.
>>34959386"W-what? Nn-NO! If if he's too pushy you did the right thing!"
>>34959386>[x] CustomAbsolutely not, you made the right decision
>>34959386"I'm the only man you need, Ayeka. I'll always be here for you, and I love you more than any other woman in the whole world."
>>34959401This, we would be forced to murder him
>>34959386>[ ] Custom"I don't know anything about him, but from what I've seen from him afterwards, I don't see why you would have gone out with him.""Besides, I'm not too interested in that department, especially considering whatever partner I did have would need to deal with me fucking every other woman on the block."
>>34959386>[x] CustomNo way, he's not good enough for Nee-san
>>34959431This seems like the best idea currently
>>34959431Can you explain the second part of this one to me?This part:"Besides, I'm not too interested in that department, especially considering whatever partner I did have would need to deal with me fucking every other woman on the block."
>>34959499We're a prostitute.Unless we get another job, our partner would have to deal with us whoring ourselves out, which would obviously be bad for us.
>>34959499We're a whore
>>34959499I think it's sort of a, "I don't think anyone could date me anyway. I'm a man whore."
>>34959499I think the implication is that Kou isn't particularly interested in getting a partner at the moment, since his job is something that would be difficult for most women to accept.
>>34959517We weren't talking about is though
>>34959499Normally it's considered bad practice to cheat.Our JOB is to fuck other women
>>34959521>>34959526>>34959530>>34959534Shit I don't even think the people voting for it know what they mean.
>>34959534We're reassuring Ayeka that she still has a shot with us.
>>34959534She's asking us for advice, we're displaying that we don't know too much about the area because we haven't had an actual relationship
>>34959530>>34959526>>34959521>>34959517So you guys are making sure your sister knows that you aren't interested in a relationship?
>>34959552If it's this I'm all for it.
>>34959565We're making sure our sister knows, IF SHE WANTS TO FUCK US, SHE HAS TO DEAL WITH OTHER PEOPLE FUCKING US.And that we're not good on dating advice.
>>34959565Let's not do that
>>34959580Ok, I'll go with this intent then.
>>34959526 This is me.>>34959565No I thought it was a I don't think anyone would take me. Not an "I'm not interested.
>>34959565No, I wanna make her know we don't know jack diddly about real relationships, we are a whore who was abused by our old teacher
>>34959565that'd be too much of a dick move (especially because of yuri and her daughter)but yeah, i don't really see her as something else than our older sister
>>34959565I wanted it to be a no one would love used goods like me thing
>>34959580That seems so rude to say, out of place, and out of character really considering every action up until now.
>>34959631That anon was putting it exceedingly bluntly, you know.
"Hmm... I don't know about him but from what I've seen from him afterwards, I don't see why you would've gone out with him." You tell her bluntly. "I don't think you are in his league at all Ayeka-nee" "Is that so?" Your sister smiles. "So you think your sister is beautiful then?""Of course! You are my sister after all!" You continue. "Although, I wouldn't be too keen on taking my advice, I'm not too interested in that department.""Department?""You know, the love department." You start to laugh. "Especially considering that if I ever do get a girlfriend they would have to deal with my job you know?" You make sure that the message was clear."I-I guess..." Your sister's enthusiasm slowly dwindles. "I guess that's true huh?" Suddenly you felt that there was a noticeable gap between you and Ayeka.>cont.
>>34959701>this postDisgusting, dropped
>>34959701Welp Sister route shot. Let's pack it up boys we've got other quests to see.
>>34959715Anon's trying to sabotage Nee-san route
>>34959715>>34959784>>34959790It's >cont, don't throw in the towel just yet!
>>34959806I hope so
>>34959806Tale better fix did shit
>>34959701The moment the two of you get home your sister tries to change the mood. "Let's bathe together again Kou!" She successfully changes the mood for the better.After a little bit of skinship in the bath the aura between the two of you lightens up a bit. You felt good knowing that you have put your feeling across to your sister. "Thanks for the food." Lunch comes after the bath finishes. With your sister living with you, the food you eat actually tasted like real food unlike the frozen foods you used to buy.The day pass while you hung out with Ayeka. Watching television dramas and various anime made time fly by as long as you were doing it with your sister. In a flash it was already time for dinner and you received an unexpected guest come dinner time."Ayumi?" You say in surprise. "What are you doing here?""Hello Kou... I brought you guys some food. I wanted to welcome your sister to the neighborhood."[ ] Invite her to join you and your sister.[ ] "Thanks for the food." Take the food, eat alone with your sister.[ ] Custom
>>34959840We have to do that if we want it anon
>>34959847>[ ] Invite her to join you and your sister.
>>34959847>[x] Invite her to join you and your sister.Introduce her to the love of our life
>>34959847>[x] Invite her to join you and your sister.
>>34959847>[ ] Invite her to join you and your sisterIt would be rude not to.
>>34959847[ ] Invite her to join you and your sister.
>>34959847Snap her neck
"Ayumi? Do you want to join me and my sister for dinner?" "Eh!? I couldn't possibly!" Although her words are all rejecting your offer, her body is doing the exact opposite. "Ah I couldn't possibly impose on you like that Kou!" Ayumi says while she comes in and starts taking of her shoes. "If you insist though I will!" You couldn't help but smile. Ayumi must want company too. "Kou? we are out of shampoo! which shampoo should I get? I mean we do take baths together so I think we should decide this together." Your sister comes out of the kitchen suddenly. "Ara? who is this?""Oh, Ayeka-nee, this is our neighbor, Ayumi." At that point Ayumi was shocked at what your sister just said. "Nice to meet you Ayumi, I'm Kou's older sister, Ayeka."Ayumi comes back to her senses. "Nice to meet you, my name is Ayumi." After she introduces herself your sister asks you the same question again."So which shampoo should we get?""Hmm I'll leave it up to you Ayeka-nee." With a shocked look on her face Ayumi leans in and asks you in a whisper."Kou... do you really take baths with your sister? She just meant that you use the same shampoo right? Not that you take baths together?""Nope, we actually do bath together." You smile at Ayumi. Slowly her cheeks start to turn red. Wanting to tease her even further you continue. "Yep, we take baths together, our naked bodies rubbing together.""E-Eh!?" Ayumi couldn't take it anymore. You could tell her mind is being slowly filled with lewd images. "If you want you could join us too you know!" "I-I would never!" That was the start of a lively dinner you had with Ayumi and Ayeka.>cont.
>>34960073"I'm sorry! I just got flustered!"
>>34960113Sister confirmed for Ara. Now best and only girl. Good luck everybody else.
>>34957531Moshi moshi! Manwhore desu~!
>>34960113"So Ayumi, tell me a little about yourself?" You felt at ease seeing your sister and Ayumi hit it off."Eh about myself?""Yeah! like what is your love life like? do you know any hot guys around here?"Ayumi starts to blush. "S-Sorry... I don't really have any love life or know any hot guys around here." "You're out of luck Ayeka-nee, Ayumi only hangs out with high school boys!" She has mentioned to you in passing before. Ayumi has had a lot of confessions from her male studens."Huh! It's like like I like them or anything! They just keep confessing to me!" Ayumi snaps at you as she takes another sip of her beer. Although you were hesitant to drink at first because you knew how little tolerance Ayumi had, with your sister's insistence you give in. You couldn't tell if Ayumi was red with embarassment or was it her becoming more and more drunk. "I never told this to anyone... but the reason I went to this city was to follow an upperclassman!" "Oh?" Both you and your sister say in unison. "That's right! I followed him here because I fell in love with him... I thought he was in love with me too but it turns out he already had a girlfriend... that was when I decided to give up on love altogether..."You couldn't help but laugh. "Ayumi, you sound like your usual tragic heroines in manga! Are you sure you didn't just rip that off a shoujo manga?" You keep teasing her."Kou you idiot..." She whispers under her breath. The night continues, the alcohol flows. "I'll get us some more beer! Ayumi you are fun to drink with! We should invite her more often!" Now both your sister and Ayumi was drunk. "Ara? it looks like we are out of beer Kou... I'll go get us some more!" Your sister puts on a jacket and prepares to go out.[ ] "I'll go out with you Ayeka-nee!"[ ] "I'll stay here with Ayumi then."[ ] Custom
>>34960396>Custom"Let's all go together!" Sounds like the best drunk idea
>>34960396Nee-san will stay with Ayumi, drunk people shouldn't go out at night by themselves
>>34960396"You two stay here. I'll be back with some more, and I expect you to be partially undressed by the time I get back."
>>34960396this: >>34960443sounds fun
>>34960396>>34960452>[ ] CustomGo get the beer yourself while the girls stay.
>>34960396Group trip to the store!
>>34960396[ ] "I'll go out with you Ayeka-nee!"
>>34960452>>34960498SecondAND REMEMBER, WE TAKE THE KEYS, AND LOCK THE PLACE
>>34960526This, take the keys and lock the place
>>34960546>>34960526Seconding locking up.
"Ayeka-nee, wait!" You stop her as you realize it would be best for her to stay at home while you go get the beer. "Just stay here with Ayumi, I'll get the beer, it's too dangerous for you to go.""How about I go with you?" Your sister asks you. Unfortunately you weren't too confident about your ability to defend her if something does come up because of the alcohol in your system. "No, it's okay, I'll go." As you walk past her to put on your shoes she grabs your hand. "Ayeka-nee? What are you doing?" She was looking down with a determined look on her face. It was as if she was gathering her courage as she remains quiet. "Ayeka-ne-" You were caught off-guard when she suddenly jumps up and gives you a passionate kiss.[ ] Kiss her back.[ ] Push her away.[ ] Do nothing and wait for her to pull back.[ ] Custom
>>34960665Lock up and go bug eyed, nigga our sis just us
>>34960665>[ ] Do nothing and wait for her to pull back.if she says "i love you", just answer "i know"
>>34960665>[x] Kiss her back.Nee-san a best
>>34960665>OtherIs there a place where we can pick her up and hide her from Ayumi?Like, picking her up and moving her around a corner?If so, kiss her, if not, option 3 please.
>>34960665>[x] Kiss her back.
>>34960665>[ ] CustomWait for her to pull back, giggle, pat her head, and head out to get the beer.
>>34960665>[ ] Kiss her back.
>>34960665Kiss her back, go get beer. Come back, kiss her more
>>34960665>[x] Do nothing and wait for her to pull back.Let's do something awkward before Ayumi. Even if she is drunk.
>>34960736I've been there with a cousin. This.
>>34960812You didn't fuck her? Fag
>>34960665Wait for her to finish "Are you okay with used goods like me?"
>>34960907Shit, we are used goods aren't we
>>34961016We were even before we were a whore
At first you didn't do anything. The shock of your very own sister giving you a kiss froze you. When she pulls back your sister's sad face brings you back to your senses. "I-I'm sorry Kou... I didn't know what came over me, forget I ever did this..." The guilt on your sister's face was unmistakeable. Looking behind her you could see that Ayumi was now fast asleep in the living room where you were eating dinner with her. "Ayeka-nee..." You whisper to her as you put your hand under her chin. Holding her head up you tell her. "You don't need to feel guilty..." Slowly you lean in and you kiss her back.Putting your arm around her you give her an embrace as you feel her body tense up. You've kissed a lot of women in your life but this is the first time you've felt this much excitement and joy while kissing. It lasted mere minutes but it felt like forever.After your kiss the two of you head out together to get beer. All the way to the convenience store, you held onto your sister's hands tightly to make sure she knows you will always be there for her. "Ayeka-nee, are you sure you are okay with used goods like me?" You ask her jokingly."Huh? don't be ridiculous Kou! You are you, You will always be Kou no matter how many women you've been with!" >cont.
>>34961114>jokinglyNah mang it's srs, sis knows
>>34961114Nee-san heals the heart
>>34961114>"Huh? don't be ridiculous Kou! You are you, You will always be Kou no matter how many women you've been with!" Best sister
>>34961114>tfw we don't deserve her love
>>34961114After the two of you come back you drink for another hour or so before deciding to call it a night. You carry Ayumi to the couch and you give her a blanket. Without a choice you share the bed with your sister. "I guess we have to share a bed." "I don't mind it..." Ayeka tells you.Although you've shared a bed together numerous times before, this time it was a bit more awkward. Especially as you keep thinking about the kiss the two of you shared. You lay there, with your back against your sister's back, your heart racing on your chest.The effects of the alcohol is slowly fading away and your inhibitions as well as Ayeka's is slowly coming back. "Good night Kou.""Yeah... Good night Ayeka-nee..." You close your eyes to force yourself to sleep, but everytime you do, the image of your sister's lips keeps flooding back to you. "Kou... are you still awake?" "Yeah, I am." "Kou... I think I'll try my best to start over again." Your sister's tone was genuine. "I didn't tell you this before but after what happened to me I was afraid to fall in love again... but seeing you again gave me courage." Her courage was admirable but you could tell she was still afraid. "Kou, will you be there by my side? will you keep your stupid sister company?"[ ] Custom
>>34961252Of course. I love you, Ayeka.
>>34961252Of course Nee-san, as long you'll have me
>>34961252>[ ] CustomFor as long as she'll let us
>>34961252hug her"of course, you're my sister after all, there's no way i could just abandon you"
>>34961252>[ ] CustomTurn around and hug her and tell her we'll stay forever if she'll let us
>>34961252I owe you for staying by me, so sure
>>34961252As long as you do the same for your whore brother
>>34961252As long as she will be our fuckpet
>>34961408>>34961432>literal whore>not the fuckpet
>>34961408Sure. Can we jam it in now?
>>34961408I would rather not, extremely don't want to
"Of course I will, I love you after all Ayeka-nee..." You tell her the truth. "You stayed by my side even though our parent's left me so I'll stay by yours for as long as you will let me..." Just then you felt Ayeka turn over. "Thanks Kou..." She puts her arms around you and she presses her body against yours. She felt warm and gentle. The confusion in her tone is gone now. "I want to be with you forever..." That was the last thing you could remember before falling asleep. The next morning you wake up with your sister still hugging you tightly. "Ayeka-nee, it's time for us to wake up... let's go, rise and shine!"Slowly she wakes up as she clutches her head. "Argh... I shouldn't have drank so much last night..." You could tell she was in pain but the moment she wakes up to you, her lips curl into a smile. "Good morning Kou." The two of you woke up pretty late so you decide to just get lunch on the road. "Ara? it looks like Ayumi went already..." Your sister points out a note left on the couch.Picking it up you read it. "Sorry for the inconvenience yesterday! -Ayumi" However, it didn't seem like the note was the only thing Ayumi forgot yesterday. On the couch was her ID badge. "That Ayumi..." Putting it aside you plan on dropping by her class to drop it off later."Kou! Let's get ready!" "I'm coming!" You tell your sister. To save time, the two of you share the bath again.>cont.
Quick tip, OP, if you ever make a Manwhore MC in the future, use this as a basis of who he ishttp://youtu.be/QuVS0b3Cseg
I'm off, keep being cute with Nee-san for me
>>34961660"I'll see you later Ayeka-nee!" You bid her farewell as you separate. "Bye Kou!" The bus ride was lonely without Ayumi. "How clumsy could one get?" You think to yourself as you hold up her ID badge. Was she telling the truth earlier? Did she really move out to the city to follow an upperclassman? "Nah, can't be, girls that naieve can only exist in fairy tales!"Finally you arrive at the school. You talk to the front office and they inform you what classroom Ayumi was in. "Ayumi-sensei? She should be over in class 3-1""Thanks" You smile at the secretary.Walking around high school made you feel nostalgic. It's been a while since you've worn uniforms and seen high school students. "I wonder what Ayumi would say when she sees me?" You couldn't help but smile as you imagine Ayumi's students happily tease her about having such a cute boyfriend. Of course you would play along and call Ayumi honey which would make her blush even more."Ah! There it is!" The sign 3-1 hangs above the door right in front of you. Even before you open the door the class was ominously quiet. "I wonder if they are doing silent reading..." Slowly sliding it open you could see that the only one there was a distraught looking Ayumi in front of an empty classroom."K-Kou? what are you doing here?" Even behind her glasses you could tell she was crying. "I came here to drop this off... what happened to your class?""O-Oh It's nothing really... they are boycotting my classes." Ayumi says as she forces herself to smile.
>>34961875Suck it you Zionazi!
>>34961875I'll be back in a bit. Give me a couple of hours and I'll continue again.
>>34961875heh, kids these days...
>>34961875>Give out a flat 'What'.
Yuri's husband is abusive as fuck, Ayeka's fiance was abusive and a control freak, Ayeka's boss is also a desperate bitch who can't stop despite being rejected, and there was that one guy who was groping Ayumi.So what are the chances the professor is a decent guy and not a mass murderer drug addict child molester?
>>34961875You are huge! That means you have huge settlements!
>>34962053probably slim, but hey, there's always a gem or two...
>>34962053Well, if the professor turns out to be a cunt, we'll have to add at least three charges of murder before quest end.
>>349620530, mc is the only not shit guy in existence
Damn, lots happened. So so Nee-san route is a go, new people on our hit list, and lots of assholes to beat up. I say we say 'Why would they do that? You're so cute/interesting I can't imagine why they would!"
>>34963190I say we just hug her
>>34963190>Nee-san route is a goAyeka's never going to move on if she clings on to us. It's not healthy, and that's incest notwithstanding.
>>34963585She's not clinging, she's letting go of her fear of love and pursuing the guy that treats her nice
>>34963190>Nee-san route is a goNah, the incestfags will have to keep constant vigil if they want that to happen.
>>34963833You act like they are a minority
>>34963902We are everywhere.... *Evil laughter intensifies*
>>34963811She's not afraid of love, she's afraid of losing MC and in an unstable enough state of mind she's mixing up sibling affection with romantic love.If even that. She might be so desperately trying to hold onto him that she doesn't even care what kind of relationship sticks as long as he stays there for her.
>>34964002Read what she said, she was afraid of love after the whole control freak abusive shitler fiancé
>>34964002>>34963585At the same time, aren't we clinging to her? It's been explicitly stated that our sister is pretty much the one pillar of stability in our lives, and so to fix the problem, we'd have to distance ourselves... totally. I don't think that would be a good idea. Shit like this is always complicated, but you know what? Siblings fuck all the time in nature, animals n' shit, but most of all? I say love is love. I'd want to go slow though, see if she actually does love me, and isn't mentally broken. If she is, fuck that I'm not letting her do that to herself.
>>34964247Everyone interested in us is mentally broken, we are mentally broken, we can't judge, only heal
>>34961875[ ] Stay and keep Ayumi company.[ ] "I'll listen to it later" Right now you are late for class.[ ] Custom
>>34964490>[ ] Stay and keep Ayumi company.
>>34964490>[ ] Stay and keep Ayumi company.Was that even a question?
>>34964490>Stay and keep Ayumi company.
>>34964490>[X] Stay and keep Ayumi company.
>>34964438Ayumi isn't mentally broken, just love shy.
>>34964675Not the anon you were asking for, but I'D just think she wants someone to talk too. maybe help boost her confidence...
"Huh? why would they even do that?" You decide to keep Ayumi company. It wasn't like she was doing any teaching or anything. Walking over to the empty seats, you take take one and move it over closer to her desk. "If they are going to abandon you, then I'll be the one to listen to you teach!"The look in her eyes was pure joy as she sees you sit down beside her. Ayumi was never good at lying or will she ever be. She was easy to read like a book because of her naivette and innocence. For a split second you could see that just by staying and doing one single act of kindness, you have made Ayumi's day that much better. "E-Eh!? Are you sure?" Ayumi turns her office hair around to hide her face from you. Was kind of face was she making? Was she crying out of joy? Smiling uncontrollably? or blushing?"Yep, I'm sure." "A-alright fine! I'll teach you then!" With her back still towards you she slowly moves towards the blackboard. After taking a deep breath and whispering something to herself she takes the chalk and she starts to write your name on the board. Turning around with the most teacher-like smile she could muster she starts to introduce you to the empty classroom. "Today we have a new exchange student! His name is Kou!" You play along, going up to the front of the empty classroom you do your best impression of a younger version of you and you introduce yourself. "Hello everyone, I'm Kou, please take care of me." For the rest of the morning you would play along as her student as Ayumi enjoys every single second of it.>cont.
>>34964902Stop being good at writing likable characters god damn it
W00T! I made it in! Anyway, we still need to lay a beat down on the fucks that cut her class. Any theories on WHY they'd do that?
>>34965014They found out she sleeps with her students or something?
>>34965043Maybe because she turned down so many confessions some dude got angry and started some horrid rumor?
>>34965043That's a theory, but I don't think she'd do that. Maybe a rumor started by those she rejected?
>>34965108I see that great minds think alike.
"Eh? thats the reason why they started to boycott your class?" During lunch with Ayumi she explains it to you."I think so...""But don't you reject a lot of your students anyways? so what's the difference with this kid?" You couldn't believe how petty kids now these days. Your nostalgia for high school immediately disintegrates."I heard he is a popular guy." Ayumi smiles. "I guess.. I guess this is for the best anyways... I'll quit school and just do something else." She turns to you with a hopeless look. "Teaching is just not my strong point..." "If that's your decision then so be it." You tell her coldly. There was no point in trying to baby her. "I mean it's your life right? If this is not making you happy then might as well just quit." You lay back down on park table that you were eating in."I guess you are right Kou..." She takes a look at her watch. "Ah! Crap! I'm late!" "Late?" What was Ayumi panicking about? "It doesn't matter, no one is in class anyways, so just relax Ayumi, I'll even walk you back to school.""Eh? I'm not talking about class! I'm talking about a marriage meeting!" >cont.
>>34965301"Marriage Meeting?"Ayumi panicks as she cleans up the park table. "Yeah, my mother has been wanting me to get a boyfriend recently... she told me if I don't get married soon nobody will want me." She continues as she scoffs. "Can you believe that she compared me to a christmas cake past my expiration date? I can't believe it! My own mother calling me expired goods..." Finalyl she finishes cleaning up the table and she calms down. "Well... I really appreciate today Kou. I don't think I'll ever forget today... this is the nicest thing anybody has done for me..." "Don't worry about it." Jokingly, you continue. "If you ever get bullied at school let me know! I'll let those kids know you have someone protecting you!"Ayumi couldn't help but smile. "Bye Kou!"[ ] "Wait! I'll accompany you to your meeting marriage!"[ ] "Bye Ayumi!" Follow her secretly.[ ] "Bye Ayumi" Go home.[ ] Custom
>Wait! I'll accompany you to your marriage meeting!
>>34965355>[ ] "Bye Ayumi" Go home.Showing up with some rando will look really dumb, though.
>>34965355>[x] "Bye Ayumi" Go home.
>>34965425Or we could claim to be someone she met and hit it off with, WITHOUT saying we're her boyfriend.
>>34965411this, harem route is go. Nee-san already said she was okay with it.
>>[ ] "Wait! I'll accompany you to your meeting marriage!"breddy suspiscious
>>34965355She's gonna get married off to some dick sucker isn't she? Why is the literal whore the only good guy?
>>34965477She said she was okay with our job, not with us accruing a harem.
>>34965498Nigga Jesus was right, whores ain't that bad
>>34965498A substantial part of many prostitutes' job is nonsexual. Just talking to clients is a big part of things, and it relies on empathy and courtesy. It's literally our job to be nice to people.
>>34965477We can't say boyfriend, because that WOULD come back and bite our ass >>3496550 Methinks Nee-san wouldn't want to share. Hell' I don't want the harem route for once because mental issues.
>>34965355[ ] "Bye Ayumi!" Follow her secretly.
>>34965355>[ ] "Wait! I'll accompany you to your meeting marriage!"
"Wait! Ayumi! I'll accompany you to to marriage meeting!" You stop her to her surprise."Eh? why would you want to do that Kou? I'm just an old woman, surely you have other younger, prettier girls to be with." Still looking at her with the same smile on your face you tell her. "That's the thing Ayumi, I like older women." "I-Is that so?" You could tell Ayumi was trying to hide her surprise. "Are you sure you aren't just teasing me again?""Nope, I'm absolutely not teasing you!" Putting your arm around her shoulders makes her tense up. "Now then, let's go to your arranged meeting! I'll be the judge whether this guy is good for you or not!">cont.
>>34966158Stop writing so good, I don't wanna pick.
>>34966206Clearly the answer is Shin. He's just acting out and looking for a real man to show him true love.
>>34966229See, I like you. You know what you like, and you're not afraid to take it.
You would admit, you have never been to a marriage meeting before so you didn't really know what to expect. To your surprise the guy Ayumi was meeting with also had a companion. "So what is it that you like to do Ayumi? You know for a hobby?"Ayumi struggles for a bit. "Hmm I guess reading books? how about you Makoto?"His companion answers for him. "Makoto likes to play sports! Isn't that right Makoto?" He turns to Ayumi. "Trust me Ayumi, Makoto is probably the best soccer player you've seen!" "Stop it Anno!" Makoto tells his friend. "But yeah, he is right, I like sports."You didn't know what it was but something just didn't sit right with you whenever you take a look at the two of them. The marriage meeting continues. They keep asking each other questions back and forth.They were impressed when they find out Ayumi is a teacher, She was equally surprised to find out he is a bank manager. "Wow! that's pretty cool Makoto..." Ayumi fakes her enthusiasm. Even you could tell that Ayumi hates being alone and was trying her best to appear as attractive to them as possible. "Thanks Ayumi" The look on Ayumi's face yelled out, 'I don't want to be alone for life.' Makoto then excuses himself. "I'll be back okay Ayumi?"Following Makoto, Anno excuses himself as well. "I think I'll go to the washroom as well." Ayumi breathes a sigh of relief. "I can finally take a breather..." Your suspicions still haven't left you so you decide to follow them. "Ayumi, I'll be back as well." As casually as possible you go into the same washroom they did. >cont.
>>34966473"So? what do you think of her?" You hear Anno's voice with the sound of running water in the background."She isn't the best but she would do I guess..." Makoto fixes his tie as he looks in the mirror. "Girls like her are easy, just give her a couple of flowers and chocolates and they'll melt right in your hands." "Ah, you are so scary when it comes to women Makoto!" Anno just laughs."Anyways, there is no way in hell I'd marry a girl like that... she is pretty much expired goods already!""Right! There must be a reason why she hasn't gotten married all this time! Maybe she is really bad in the sack? Maybe she just lays there like a dead fish?"Makoto shrugs his shoulders. "Well we'll find out later tonight." When they turn around they see you standing there in the doorway. At first they had a look of shock on their face but after a while they try and pretend they said nothing. "Sorry about that, I didn't see you there." Makoto tries to act friendly with you by patting your shoulder.[ ] Custom
>>34966497Smile back like we didn't overhear them, then tell Ayumi (privately) what we heard them say.
>>34966497[X] Custom"You were wondering why just now why she hasn't hooked up with anyone. That's funny, she was just asking the same thing about you. She figured you must be a child molester or something."
>>34966497Something like this
>>34966497You have a personal knife, in case your clients get too violent. Practice making sashimi.
>>34966497Look at the hand patting your shoulder, then look at him, and calmly say that if they leave now and never show their fucking faces again, you won't make a scene.
>>34966497Wipe out your phone just as if you finished recording their conversations and leave the toilet. Keep it simple, let them think you've got them by the balls.
>>34966497Time for Yandere it seems. Never the wrong time for Yandere.
>>34966497I suggest you fuck off now before I find out how good you are in bed.
>>34966825We have a habit of sexually harassing men don't we?
>>34966497>>34966825Yes, this omfg
>>34966825This, if he tries to talk shit go behind him fish hook him, grind into his ass, grope his crotch and whisper into his ear about how he's a dirty whore
...this is going to end poorly, isn't it?
>>34966924Well, with all the abusive asshats around, we were bound to vote for something that would put us in jail.
>>34966924We are scaring off a douche and his friend, I wouldn't be surprised if he beats our ass in, he's a jock, thing is if he kicks our ass he'll look in the wrong even if we don't talk about his douchness
You take a look at the hand patting your shoulder. Then you look up at him. As calmly as you could you smile at him as you say. "You were wondering why she hasn't hooked up with anyone right?" The two of them look at each other. "That's funny, she was just asking the same about you! She figured you must be a child molester or something..."Taunting them got you the exact reaction you were looking for. "Huh? what the fuck did you just say?" Makoto asks you."You heard me... leave Ayumi alone or I'll make you regret it..." You grab his hand on your shoulder and you slowly bend his finger back as his face shows incredible pain.His friend, Anno, wasn't going to stand for this and he tries to hit your face. He lands a clean punch but he punched like a girl. Letting go of Makoto as you kick him away, you block Anno's second punch with your left arm while you hit him in the gut with your right. Although you were outnumbered two to one, you still dished out some punishment to the two of them. Your fists were backed with justice after all. Although you were bloodied and bruised as the guards pulled you away from Makoto and Anno, they weren't any better off. In fact whatever punishment or pain they gave you, you made sure to return it 100 fold."Kou!" Ayumi immediately runs up to you and takes out a handkerchief as the guards escort you out. "What happend Kou!?" The concern on Ayumi's face as she sees you hurt like this makes the pain you felt go away. >cont.
>>34966981Our pretty face is our living, man.
>>34966924He's holding our shoulder so yes, we are in the perfect KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT range
>>34966991Chicks dig scars
>>34966990"You won't get away with this you stupid scum!" Makoto yells out at you as he gets escorted out of the premises just like you. The sound of Makoto's desperate cries makes you smile. "It's nothing Ayumi." You tell her as she gently dabs her handkerchief on your face. The guards kick you out and Ayumi follows. Finding the nearest bus stop bench you tell her, "Let's rest here for a bit Ayumi." Fighting for Ayumi has tired you out quite a bit. Ayumi keeps cleaning off your blood. Although you have made fun of her numerous times before, Ayumi doesn't care."Kou... tell me the truth... why did you fight Makoto and Anno?"[ ] Tell her the truth. "They called you expired goods and an easy woman."[ ] Sugar coat it a bit. Spare Ayumi's feelings. "They just rubbed me the wrong way, besides I can't let them steal you away from me."[ ] Custom
>>34967015Don't be specific, but make it clear they were being very crude and inappropriate in their discussions of Ayumi, and clearly had no real interest in her.
>>34967015The truth will set you free, they are huge wankers, be sure to tell her none of its true, you wouldn't have gotten into a fight against two dudes otherwise
>>34967015>[ ] Tell her the truth. "They called you expired goods and an easy woman."[ ] Tell her the truth. "They called you expired goods and an easy woman."
>>34967038Agreed. Articulate on th fact that he meant to "try her out" tonight, then toss her out.
>>34966991Now we can go full dashing rogue
>>34967015[ ] Sugar coat it a bit. Spare Ayumi's feelings. "They just rubbed me the wrong way, besides I can't let them steal you away from me."Can't break her spirit
>>34967015>[ ] Sugar coat it a bit. Spare Ayumi's feelings. "They just rubbed me the wrong way, besides I can't let them steal you away from me.""They were scum and not really interested in you."
>>34967015>[x] Tell her the truth. "They called you expired goods and an easy woman."
2 - Don't be too specific, but make it clear they were being very crude and inappropriate.2 - Tell her the truth2 - Sugar coat it a bit.This is my count. Are you guys okay if I just combine the sugar coating it a bit and not being too specific?
>>34967179Nevermind >>34967159 I'll write this one.
>>34967179Ya go ahead
>>34967196Good, I'm not unconvinced that she would have given it away to that chump for some pretty words and attention. Bitch needs to harden up.
There was no point sugar coating it. "I heard them calling you expired goods and an easy woman desperate for attention." You expected her to be a bit more shocked but Ayumi just sighs. "Is that so? Ah, I can't believe you got hurt like that because of a little thing like that..." Being like that was no good for Ayumi. She needs to be more confident in herself. Grabbing her by the shoulders, she gets flustered. "K-Kou!? W-what are you doing?""It's not a little thing, I couldn't stand them talking bad about you like that because you are a close, special friend to me okay?" She tries to avoid her gaze from you, but you hold her chin and you force her to look into your eyes. "Ayumi, you should have more confidence in yourself, you are beautiful. The things they said about you is not true at all, you aren't expired goods or an easy woman, you are great."Hearing you say that must've been embarassing her too. "E-Eh? w-what are you talking about Kou? How can you say such embarassing things..." Although Ayumi tries to hide it, hearing you say those words makes her smile. "I-It's okay Kou... Santa won't visit them for christmas! I know that for a fact.""H-Huh?" You couldn't believe what you just heard. How can a woman in her late 20s still believe in Santa? "You know! Santa is always watching right? He must've seen how bad those two guys must've been so he won't give them presents for sure!" You start to smile. "Santa huh?""Mhmm! You know he visits me every year Kou." Ayumi puffs out her chest with pride. "That means I'm always a good girl every year!""Really? is that so?" All the way back to your apartment complex Ayumi would tell you about what she knew about santa. When you arrive at your apartment Ayumi insisted on helping you dress your wound. You could never say no to her when she started to get stubborn like that so you allow her to take care of you, even just for a moment. >cont.
>>34967355Did she just turn the whole " feel better god damn it" around on us because we were worrying so much? I love her
>>34967355"Tada! See I told you I'm pretty good at this right?"You were surprised. "Wow... this is actually pretty good." You look in the mirror as you turn your face from side to side. "This is impressive..." For someone who makes a living with his pretty face, Ayumi has done a great job of preserving your livelihood. "Ayumi, thanks, you will get rewarded for this for sure!""It's nothing Kou... I just hate seeing you in that state." After she takes care of you Ayumi goes back to her room next door while you plan a surprise for her later that night. "Eh? you really want me to wear this?!" That night you invite over Reiko to your house. Your sister had a late night party with her coworkers so you had all the time in the world to initiate your plan."Yep! Of course, I bought it with my own money so you better follow through with this!" You take a look over to Ayumi's house to confirm she was already sleeping. Reiko was as red as the suit that you gave her. She hesitates again. "D-Do I really have to do this?""Yeah, you said you wanted to make your mom happy right? so just do it, if you do that I promise I'll make her happy."At first she was hesitant, but she couldn't go back on her word now. "F-Fine! but promise me that you won't leave my mom okay?""I promise." Your lips curl into a mischievous smile.Finally she puts on the santa suit. "Okay... what do I do next?" Taking her to the terrace of your apartment complex you help her to Ayumi's terrace. "Okay, now just give the present I gave you to Ayumi and that'll be it for tonight!" Reiko still had a look of embarassment on her face but she knew the faster she completes this the faster she can go home. As Reiko goes inside you could hear everything happen from your apartment room.You didn't even have to be there to imagine just how happy Ayumi was. "S-santa?!" You hear her gasp through your thin wall. "I-I can't believe it!"end part 1.
This is going to end horribly
>>34967521cute/10ya got a twitter OP
>>34967521>end part 1.Santa-san pls.
Hey guys, Sorry I couldn't finish this today. Tomorrow I'll be running the last part of the quest. It would be more Reiko/Yuri centric and then the choice who you want to be with.This choice isn't really an ultimatum so feel free to choose who you like the best. If you choose a girl, the other girls won't go through living hell and I promise they will also get their own happy endings in their own way.
>>34957531>Ara Ara Quest: Final>>34967521>end part 1.???
>>34967583It's a two parter
>>34967560https://twitter.com/taleanonFor those who prefer suptg instead of foolz, I have also requested for this to be archived there.Thread 1:http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/34936961/Thread 2: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/34957531/
>>34967641You are getting better and better at this, that with your damn good writing skills you gun be a god damn amazing QM someday, keep up the good work tale
>>34967576thanks for the story op, I'm enjoying it so far
OH JESUS CHRIST THIS IS ADORABLE!
>>34967685Thanks!>>34967738I'm glad you enjoy it.
>>34967552Agreed. While I think the premise of "You're a good guy surrounded by nice women and their awful significant others" has some merit as a premise for a social drama, in practice I'm really not feeling it. The fact that all of these men are colossal dicks to an absurd, cartoonish degree leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Furthermore, I have serious issues with the way the main character is portrayed - this one is a particularly bad example:>Although you were outnumbered two to one, you still dished out some punishment to the two of them. Your fists were backed with justice after all. Although you were bloodied and bruised as the guards pulled you away from Makoto and Anno, they weren't any better off. In fact whatever punishment or pain they gave you, you made sure to return it 100 fold.Fists backed by justice. Fighting two men at once and hitting them both collectively a hundred times over. The protagonist is either Kamen Rider or more than a little disturbed in my opinion. At the very least he doesn't perceive the world accurately, and is (at best) an unreliable narrator.I'm not trying to bash the QM here, just trying to point out my personal biggest issues with the writing so far.
>>34967842Yeah, I miss the days when Tale MCs got their asses whipped in fights.
>>34967842Too be fair you can't be wholly sane to become a whore in Japan, and dude there are a lot more douchey men that are cartoon level evil irl than you would think
>>34967842The 100 times over is a "Hit me I hit harder" thing not a i fucking went fist of the North Star thing, I would like to see a whore beating the snot out of two dudes with rapid fire punches though
>>34967940He's a manwhore, so he probably keeps in shape unlike 90+% of dudes.
>>34967969Don't think he could pull off gave pulping combo though
>>34967576>I promise they will also get their own happy endings in their own way.I'll believe it when I see it
>>34967842Hi there, thanks for bringing this up. Most of my stories, including this one, is usually inspired by shoujo manga. That's where I usually model my characters from so I can see where you are coming from when you say they are exaggerated to a cartoonish degree. I do try to put some realism on the story, but at the end of the day, they will still be inspired by Shoujo premises.As for the fists backed by justice, I will admit I only wrote that after I saw the gif someone posted of the transformation scene. As for the returning it 100 fold, it was just a little hyperbole on my part.I really appreciate your input though. This is the only way I can know what I can do better. Although I wrote down my justifications, be assured that I will be taking your complaints to heart. Again, thanks for reading!
>>34968044God tale is cute as shit and takes criticism the right way
>>34968070Tale for best QM of 2014
>>34968044Thanks for the mature response. I actually really enjoy Shoujo manga, but this post >>34962053 sums up my problems with the Quest neatly - you've hit Critical Asshole Density. Everyone but the main character and the love interests are awful people, especially the people the main character might view as a potential 'rival' or antagonist towards the happiness and wellbeing of his love interest(s). It's frankly a little disturbing, setting up a huge Us vs. Them viewpoint of the world, wherein people are either righteous and pure who need love and sympathy... or despicable, debased creatures that you want to kill or drive off.Count the number of times players in this Quest have voiced their desire to outright murder one of these 'rivals'. I think it indicates how fundamentally bizarre and unnerving this Quest feels, at least to me.
>>34968260Dude, 4chan is full of people who got bullied all through school and came from broken homes, a lot of people are pretty hateful of bastards, that said you are right, but us vs them is a cliche in A LOT of things
Preview:"Eh? is that so?" She excitedly smiles. "Yes! Our professor finally noticed me!" You could tell just how happy Reiko was. "I can't believe it!"You didn't know why but you felt a bit jealous. "So tell me, why did he do it?""Huh?" Suddenly you put a damper on her happiness. "What do you mean?""Reiko, if I knew anything about men, it's always that they always have an ulterior motive."Hearing you say those words makes her concerned. "Eh? well he did ask me out after doing a house visit..." Reiko smiles again, trying to comfort herself. "I'm sure our professor just saw me and fell in love with me for who I am!" Reiko's optimistic smile didn't do anything to get rid of your suspicions.
>>34968318Well, let's sharpening those knives. Jesus Christ, stop the creep parade.Unless of course, the Professor is being abused by his girlfriend.Nah, that's still terrible.
>>34968318She's gonna get drugged then get date raped isn't she? I seriously don't believe a professor will be a good guy, nigga I hear about this shit from real life professors all the time and I don't live in most dudes are shit land like we do here, I'm worried as hell mang
>>34968318>not keeping student teacher relationships professionalHe's one of those teachers that's good looking enough to fuck all the girls in the class and the does it isn't he?
The real twist is that he's actually genuinely interested in an LTR with Reiko.
>>34968314Hi, >>34968260 here. I was physically assaulted almost every single school day for four years, with zero punishments handed out to my attackers due to a broken and useless school policy (that has yet to be revised I might add). Both of my kneecaps were broken repeatedly so badly that I can't run or jump without pretty sharp pain, and my right (dominant) arm was broken so many times that I had to quit playing baseball entirely.All of this happened before the age of 12, and believe me when I say it only got worse from there.I am better acquainted than most with what it's like to be a victim, to be abused, and to be trodden upon. I know what it's like to grow up with only one parent in the home. I know what it's like to get beaten by a family member for getting a fever and 'acting like a pussy'.Even I, after being through all of that, find this view disturbing. Perhaps it's because it's the way I once saw the world, and it reminds me of the shit I've been through. Maybe it's because that part of my life was a period where I ended up hurting those around me far more than I helped them, even when I had the noblest of intentions. I don't know. I just... don't think that this Quest handles the subject matter properly.I should probably just shut up now. It's not like anyone on 4chan gives a shit.
>>34968495yeah, we should probably warn her to stay safe but not try to stop her... people learn from their mistakes anyway
>>34968532You need a hug man?
>>34968532Christ, I'm glad I got homeschooled.
>>34968752long term relationship?
>>34968599They don't though, at least a lot of people don't
>>34968260Hmm, I'll definitely keep this in mind for my next quest. I admit, I have gone overboard with making the villains in this one despicable. Do you have a twitter? We can talk there further via PM. I'm interested in your past experience.
>>34968495Even if that happens (god knows I doubt it, but he might be the guy that reminds the protagonist that not every X is Y) it's still kinda bad to date a student
>>34968816That can be the drama. Will they get caught? Stuff like that is good drama fodder.
>>34968811>toning down the cliches and anime logicThis saddens me deeply
>>34968826Dude it's not the drama part it's the moral problem. You don't do that shit, you let them graduate before you do anything
>>34968829I feel that I want to make everyone happy, but at the same time I know that it's impossible. I will make sure to run both types of quest, both the incredibly melodrama one as well as the more realistic laid back one.
>>34968860No, I mean, tale quests live on drama, so having an illicit, inappropriate relationship between two basically decent people also works as drama fodder (rather than another abusive relationship).
>>34968899>dating a student>decent person No.
>>34968919Decent people can make bad decisions.
>>34968899that reminds me, maybe it could be fun to see tale running a quest that's totally not ripped off The Professional (so contract killer x (loli) orphan romance/training) >>34968919aand that's because of people like you that innocents go to jail and that lives get broken over nothing
>>34968938Fair enough>>34968946Blow me shitler, shits not okay, couple years not that long to wait for them to graduate, if you really love them you would wait it
>>34968988nothing good ever comes from making someone wait, nothing
>>34969008If they can't wait that's a good sign it wouldn't have worked out
How do you guys feel about this song as the theme?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guvY8Qbac7E
>>34969206sounds good to me
I think the professor is gunning for Yuri, actually. Poor Reiko is gonna get rejected. In response to people talking about the murder everything strategy, I wasn't taking this seriously. This quest is fun with a little dash of feels and a whole fuckton of adorable. I was joking, and i'm pretty sure the others were too.