You are a Magical Girl, and you've just......No. It's...no. You didn't have any choice. You had to know.It's not your fault. It was important. There wasn't any other way. You had to know, or else you would've--The muffled, fearful crying in the corner - more of a weak, helpless whimpering - makes you turn to look at what's left of the timid girl whose mind you violently ransacked a few moments ago. Forcing your way into her mind, into her memories. Ripping through them, tearing them apart with the psychic equivalent of cruelly-hooked slashing claws. Just so you could get at what you needed to see. What you wanted to see.And you did.
>>31821394Through her own eyes, through the hazy colors of her own memories, you saw the girl cowering in front of you stagger into a bar, ordering drink after drink. You saw your Warmaster, tall and bladed and grinning, meeting her and talking about a certain blonde Vindicare. A Vindicare with a saint's smile, a sun's warmth and the sweetness of honey in her voice.Insults and jibes were traded, until the girl herself staggered off again, clearly irate. Stumbling off into an alley, cursing every step of the way. Ignoring the iron-shod footfalls of your Warmaster behind her, and her half-laughed, half-cackled calls.It was here that the assassins made their presence known. Dark forms, seeping out of the shadows, shimmering with the tell-tale concealing magic of a Callidus.Even with her vision blurred and unsteady, Girl A manages to dodge the first blade flying towards her, and ducks underneath the second. The third is shot out of the air with an oversized firearm that had not been there a moment ago, and the wielder of the fourth is killed before they could even charge at her.Then, a burst of crippling pain. And another. And Girl A is sent crashing to her knees, two blades buried deep into her spine. More and more shadows converges upon her, intent on taking her to pieces. A growled denial, a gun raised, and Girl A prepares to die fighting.Kharn arrives with the instantaneous death of three of the assassins, all of them bisected at the waist. But unlike the many instances where you've seen your Warmaster slaughter her enemies, no laughter colors her voice, no cackle leaves her lips along with a gleefully-uttered screed of insults. She kills in panicked, desperate silence, black eyes wide and staring, completely focused on rescuing Girl A.[1/2]
[x] Place soulgem in hand along with Midori's, lick both at same time.Hi decu~
>>31821414She kills and kills and kills, but the shadows kept coming. As if whoever had planned this had brought an entire rank - no, an entire Officio. More than enough to kill a monster like the Warmaster of the Ninth - or maybe barely enough, as they continued to die with each butchering stroke of Skulltaker's burning blade.Thirty shadows die before Kharn is struck down. Her sword arm chopped off at the shoulder with a lucky, desperate ax blow - the culprit's skull cleaved in half with a savage retaliatory kick from the Warmaster's bladed feet. She picks up the sputtering, meat-choked hulk of Skulltaker with her remaining hand and kills five more before the most ruinous wound she will ever get bites into her flesh.A black dagger, stabbed right into her heart, slid between her ribs. Kharn's mouth opens in a surprised gasp, and Skulltaker crashes to the floor, shattering concrete and asphalt. Her free hand - clawed and dripping with gore - scrabbles against the shadow embracing her, attempting to claw its face off. Blood, frothy and black, bubbles through her gritted teeth, trickling down curled-back lips.You...you didn't bother viewing the rest. You could imagine.Malal was telling the truth, right down to the last detail. Your paranoia and mistrust debunked, proven to be just as baseless and flimsy as your suspicion of her betrayal.You should be overjoyed right now, or at the very least, content. You've proven Malal's innocence - both to yourself and to anyone who might ever suspect her.The only thing you feel right now, however, is cold. Just a cold emptiness coring you right through.At the corner of the room, her dress soiled with her tears and the blood from where she'd bitten her tongue during your ransacking of her already-shattered mind - Girl A starts to cry for anyone to save her. A barely-coherent appeal for her Angel to rescue her, to make everything stop hurting.Leave without another word. You've done enough.Try to apologize.
>>31821428>[X]Try to apologize.I want to, but... I have no idea what to say.
>>31821428>[x]Leave without another word. You've done enough.I hate you, anons.
>>31821428>[X]Try to apologize.Except fail miserably.
>>31821428>[x]Try to apologize.Guilt ho!
>>31821428[X]Try to apologize.No breaks on the fuck up train.
Most exciting day of the year has finally come!
>>31821428>[X]Try to apologize
>>31821428>You...you didn't bother viewing the rest. You could imagine.That's not the damn point, Omegon.You're supposed to see EVERYTHING. You NEED to see everything. You need to make this count for something.>Leave without another word. You've done enough.
>>31821428[X]Try to apologize.Good job guys...
>[X]Leave without another word. You've done enough.>[X]Commit suicide
>>31821494>Good job guys...Honestly, I'm kind of surprised that's all she saw, especially with Homerun in this condition, at this time.
>>31821454"Sorry I raped you for absolutely no reason"?"Just wanted to violate your mind a bit to satisfy my curiosity, sorry about that"?"Don't worry, you will forget that I raped you so no worries, you won't feel this way for long"?[X]Try to apologize.Love to see what Deculture comes up with that could possibly make this better.
>>31821428I wonder why Girl A refers to Malal as an "angel"?I guess pre-corruption Madokami was a sort of angelic figure. Maybe the approach of WN(can't spell the damn thing) has caused Homura to somehow subconsciously remember things and Girl A views Malal as an angel because she somehow senses who she is?
did i miss part of the last thread? since the archive is down could someone fill me in on how we went from yelling to mala for mindfucking her, to turning her brain into frozen yogurt ourselves?
>>31821428>Try to apologize.
>>31821428Leave without another word. You've done enough.Yuma did nothing wrong.
.....how did they survive?
>>31821541Malal told Yuma what happened to Girl A and Kharn.Yuma did not trust Malal, thought she was a traitor.There were two votes between rape and leaving (first was tie). The vote that won was to mindrape Girl A in order to get all the information out of her head.Then a shitstorm with people arguing whether Yuma was an irredeemable monster, and if not what could she do to make it better.
Don't just bitch, analyse you worthless fucks.36 confirmed kills. An entire officio.It presumably can't be one of the bigger ones, and whichever one it is just lost 36 members.>>31821536or Malal told her she was an Angel and in her current state she's soft enough in the head to believe it.>>31821549No idea because Omegon pussied out.
>>31821536I am sure she talks about Pinky, not Malal.
>>31821428>[x]Try to apologize.Oh boy oh boy.
>>31821562The irony: Homu is all about "the ends justifying the means">>31821564I'm not.
>>31821428> Girl A starts to cry for anyone to save her. A barely-coherent appeal for her Angel to rescue her, to make everything stop hurting.[x]Try to apologize.
>>31821428>[x]Try to apologize.not like expect it to work, but hey...
Do we even know if the memories we viewed are genuine?
>>31821428>[X]Leave without another word. You've done enough.
Thank you for your participation!
>>31821541You didn't miss a thing. Yuma is a massive hypocritical bitch.
>Yuma is a monster, Yuma needs to die, Yuma did everything wrongSounds like what people are saying about a certain rebellious devil. She's just a girl with tons of emotional baggage, guys.
>>31821609Because the voters are retards. Not the character is to blame but the people who thought that this is a good idea and that we totally should do that.
>>31821609Well, she is now.I still don't see how this ultimately translates to Yuma hating our fucking guts down the line.
>>31821576The problem is that this is not really Homura. Heck, even Chiaki is no longer like that. So it does not really apply.The second problem is that Deculture wrote in the previous thread (when the rape happened, it was disturbing to read with Girl A begging for mercy) that Yuma was not doing it for noble reasons, but simply to satisfy her personal need to know. So the ends did not justify the means, since the end result was always pointless.
>>31821593Omegon apparently believes them to be so.
>>31821624Probably a guilt thing.
>>31821624There's still gaps to be filled.
>>31821632Yeh, I saw people saying that. But I still don't see how that would work.
>>31821641Because seeing her reminds her of what she did. So it starts to form resentment.
>>31821621I disagree. Well partly. I do think the people who voted for this are indeed retards, but the way the story works is that the characters act how we telll them to act, and their personalities are what we say they are.So yes, in the story, Yuma is now the kind of person that would mindrape a helpless girl to satisfy her personal curioisity. The fact that the players voted for it does not change that basic fact. Thats how quest threads work. We said Yuma is a mindrapist, so now she is one. Can't turn back the clock.
>>31821624Lashing out from guilt supposedly.She's projecting her own monstrous guilt onto Chiaki.I honestly think it'll be really interesting if chiaki ever finds out.
>>31821657>I do think the people who voted for this are indeed retardsI voted for it because it seemed like a more interesting way to progress the plot.
I, for one, don't see the problem. This is certainly a lot more interesting and fun than I'd expected the flashback to be based on its first thread.
>>31821627Well we do know that Malal outclasses pretty much everyone when it comes to mindfuckery.So either we watched a genuine memory and Malal did not mindfuck Girl A or she did, reformatted her on the spot and implanted false memories.Either way it was a pointless exercise.Kharn never seemed particularly eager to discuss the topic of Malal with Chiaki, so it could be either way really.
>>31821641Because people work like that. There is no logic behind that, its pure emotion. You see something everyday that reminds of how hard you fucked up you react with spite. Same reason why some parents abuse their children and threat them like shit. Because they know they are shitty parents the child acting in fear or responding nagetively to the abuse reminds them of how they are shitty parents.
>>31821668Which ironically makes it worse. She is the rapist, and now she is blaming the victim for her own crime.(Ofcourse this is not the original reason for her bitchiness, since obviously when Deculture wrote her as a bitch, he did not know this would happen).
>>31821674Then I hope you got what you wanted, you retard.
>>31821699Or did he.
>>31821702Man, you are really salty, do you need to take a break and come back after the flashback is over?
>>31821702I got exactly what I wanted.
>>31821428[x]Try to apologize.We will fail pathetically at it, but it's better than not trying at all.
>>31821699Yep, I hope chiaki gets this memory back. If only for the confrontation
>>31821705Well, he gave us a vote (which was extremely close, which is probably why there is so much conflict about the decision) so no. Last thread, we got the chance to choose the character of Yuma. Was she the kind of person who would mindrape someone. Or was she the kind of person that would not do something sick like that. We chose she was a rapist (well I voted to leave girl A alone but the majority rules).We could have chosen that Yuma is not the kind of person who would do that, in which case presumably Yuma would have had other reasons for her bitchiness.
>>31821428>[X]Try to apologize.made it in time!
>>31821699>this is not the original reason for her bitchinessI think it's a contributing factor.Honestly I was expecting her to get a really trippy and incomplete version of Homu's past.
>>31821752No you did not. Voting is over. Sorry
Let's go mindrape Kharn just to be sure.
>>31821761Me too. Since she would essentially be digging through over 1K years worth of memories, most of which would all look basically the exact same, and locked away. Just to find a single 5 min long incident.
>>31821761What I meant was that its a valid reason _in-universe_ for Yuma to feel guilt and then blame her victim, giving a reason for her bitchiness. A disgusting reason, but a reason.However, in _real life_, the thread where Yuma was a bitch came BEFORE this flashback did, which means that as far as Deculture and the players were concerned, the rape had not happened yet (the vote could potentially have gone the other way).So unless Deculture can see the future, that was not the original reason for Yumas behaviour.
>>31821761>>31821791Oh man, that sounds awesome. I hope this is, like, a delayed reaction or something and that Yuma gets to see that. It would be interesting and horrifying to see, what? An 11 year old girl suddenly have to deal with over a thousand years of failure. Amazing
>>31821771We probably don't need mindrape for that. We can check for inconsistencies between her current state and what we learned from Girl A.Pic Related:What Yuma Saw
>>31821816I voted for the rape option hoping to see that come up.
>>31821752>>31821762yea just saw that I didn't see it because the voteisouver post was not linked to Deculture's postbut at least I made it to the thread
>>31821806But what if Decu can see the future?
>>31821806There's probably an alternate possibility in case the vote went the other way, but I wouldn't be surprised if Decu had something like this in mind back then.
>>31821816Naah. Pretty sure Girl A would commit suicide on the spot. Apparently when the Three stooges told a past incarnation of Chiaki the whole truth about everything, that incarnation did just that.
>>31821816>>31821761damnit guys, stop fantisizing about Yuma being overwhelmed by a thousand years of failure.
>>31821840I mean, Decu was the one who included the prompt in the first place. He definitely had the possibility in mind before anons ever knew about it at least.
>>31821849Green is the danger
>>31821849Naah, they are fantasizing about Girl A suddenly having to suffer through all of that horror, not Yuma.There are some real sadists here it seems.
>>31821843It's different when it's someone elses failure.
>>31821849But it's such delicious suffering...
>>31821816>Yuma has nightmares with flashbacks of Homu's lifes for the rest of her life>relives the world getting thrashed by WP in a thousand different ways every nightAll this healing.And we haven't even reached WP itself yet.
>>31821849Yeah, she's already depressed and is about to lose her entire psudo-family of calidus, including her own idol who she now probably feels that she has horribly betrayed and let down.1000s of failed cycles on top of that seems like an overload of suffering.
>>31821858Who was it that told us that in the first place?I remember that Dildoes yelled it, and odds are the incarnations in DEagle remember this incident even if Chiaki does not. If we assume that Deculture planned to have Yuma do something nasty in this flashback, then that could be the reason why Dildoes warns us about Yuma.No wait, her helmet is still on right? So Dildoes would not know her hair color right?
>>31821860No, >>31821849 has it right. I think it would be really interesting if Yuma understood a little of what it means to be Chiaki and was so perturbed by it that it influenced her future behavior.
>>31821899Oh. Misunderstood.Yeah, that would be a sort of karmic justice I guess. The trouble is that I don't see how it could work. It would instantly reveal who Homura is, and that she is a time/dimension traveller. Presumably Yuma would have told QB.
>>31821892Dildoes went through many, many timelines. Think she never met Yuma?And Pinky, if memory serves me right.
>>31821916But why would QB believe her it's to insane to be real.
>>31821892Our darling phone did.I think.
>>31821891That's why she doesn't get the full thing. Just a mess of confusing images of pain, betrayal and suffering starring quite a few people she recognises - and many she won't, like Madoka - in times and places where they can't possibly be.
>>31821728I am sweet and sour and spicy, thank you very much.
>>31821923Oh right. So Dildoes could be referring to this.I really want to have a talk with those three soon and ask more questions about the green thing and everything.
>>31821916Yeah. But why would Kyuubey tell us about that?
>>31821938This would be fitting.
>>31821394Hey does anyone else have problems getting the last 5 threads off sup-tg?
goal for this flashback: break girl a
>>31822008You can always use foolz instead.
>>31822008Yeah. The archive is down it seems.
>>31822008sup/tg/ is having difficulties right now, it's really slow for me.
>>31822008Suptg a ded.
>Girl A starts to cry for anyone to save her.Yuma will pay for that.
>>31821394>it's not your fault, you didn't have a choiceYou fucking MINDRAPED her you fucking GREEN HAIRED bitch!
>>31821891>>31821899>>31821938>Yeah, she's already depressed and is about to lose her entire psudo-family of calidus, including her own idol who she now probably feels that she has horribly betrayed and let down.1000s of failed cycles on top of that seems like an overload of suffering.So its merely the hors d'oeuvre on the Nasu/Urobutchi-Scale of healing?
>>31822047>>31822055Why do you blame the character for the voters action?
>>31822055>>31822055>Deculture's face to all this
>>31822070Because flamewars. What else are we meant to do between posts.
>>31822080Masturbate to PMMM doujins
>>31822047>>31822055We asked for this.Now enjoy what you have sown.
>>31822070You have already been answered this question. Yuma did the raping. Thats that.
>>31822059I'm really, really hoping for that delayed reaction and I'm doing my best to not scream at Deculture to make it happen. As happy as I am that Chiaki is finally getting on with her life, I also miss horrible things happeningYuma is just a convenient target for my healing needs at this time
HA HA TIME FOR MAGICAL RAPISTS THAT DID NOTHING WRONG
>>31822070because the voters actions are the chacters.Welcome to the other side of player agency.>>31822087oh, I am, I am.The tears are delicious.
>Still running through the archives to catch up.>OP picI'm getting pretty hyped.
>>31822091Agreed. Would love to see somekind of backlash for what she did.
I hope Chaika regains her memories of Yuma mindraping her
>>31822117My first live thread.And it's a thread of pain and suffering.I'm not sure I've prepared myself enough.I am weak. I want to be strong..
>>31822126If Chiaki remembers this, I vote that instead of immediate retribution, we implement do lots of small things.Like making Yuma's reindeer costume her official uniform.
>>31822135Not sure it would create much chaos. In the previous thread it was asked what would happen if Yuma confessed and apologized to Chiaki, and most said that after a beating (like the one Chiaki already gave Yuma), they would have Chiaki forgive.Murderface is long gone.
>>31822140Give it a bit of time and you'll be ready to join in with the chorus of autistic shit-posting before you know it.
>>31822153If Chiaki ends up remembering this we should just go out of our way to be friendly to Yuma and see how her guilt responds
>>31822156I would like to append this >>31822153 reindeer costume idea onto the end of that response. It's just too good, even if it makes no sense in character.
>>31822156Chiaki os rather pragmatic. I really don't see her killing off an asset like Yuma put of anger. She'd definitely vent her frustration though, maybe with a beating or kneecapping, and then move on with her life.
>>31822156honestly, i'm not sure that wouldn't bother Yuma more.Hey, you know how you think I'm the devil? Well, you're right... and I totally forgive you and would have done exactly the same thing in your place.
>>31822173Yeah. And maybe have Midori create a character for her in MM&MM and make her a twisted villain!Yuma is a fan of MM&MM right?
>>31822160B-but, I don't want to be an autistic shitposter.
>>31822091>>31822126>>31822135>>31822153You make someone do something awful, and then get hyped at the idea of retribution on that person.You're all as bad as God.
>>31822187I think we should rape her right back
>>31822153I vote for killing her with Blood God Chainaxe and letting Pinky eat her soul gem. Pinky will be pleased and we will get a lot of points.
>>31822194Then why are you on 4chan. Don't you have something better to do with your life?
>>31822195Nope. I did not make her do that. Not my vote that made her a rapist.But now that its done, hell yeah I want her to pay a price for being a rapist. I don't like it when rapists don't have to pay for their actions.
>>31822191This.. this pleases me.
>>31822205Chiaki OS would have some Windows ME-tier stability
>>31822193>make her a twisted villain!I dunno man, mind rape seems like a pretty Murder Mayumi thing to do, it'd fit better to have her as the knock-off tryhard wannabe, the one who doesn't have the skill or charisma to pull off the same edge.
>>31822096>because the voters actions are the chacters.But that's just blaming the puppet for the commands of the puppetmaster.
>>31822187>kneecappingWouldn't that be like cheating in Midori, though?
>>31822226>deletes its settings and wipes the hard drive at completely random times>the only way to preserve anything is by putting it on a small floppy disk
>>31822246We're going to cheat on her eventually, might as well do it like that
>>31822237My point exactly.
>>31822226>>31822187I thought on another type of OS
>>31822237that certainly is how puppet shows traditionally work
>>31822221>I don't like it when rapists don't have to pay for their actions.Kharn is happily married and expecting twins.Chiaki put Midori's soul gem in alcohol and sexually assaulted her fucking soul against her will. They are now dating.This seems like it isnt the quest for you.
>>31822233 Dark Witch EdgeMurder? Dark Witch Murderface?
>>31821454 >>31821471 >>31821475It's...you can't leave her like this. You can't do what you just did and then leave as if it didn't mean anything. You have to say something. Anything. Just...say something.You open your mouth from behind your helmet's faceplate, trying to give voice to the very concept of impossibility, to futility - as the reality of just what you did continues to sink in. As the full realization of the sin you've just committed - all in the name of balming your own fucking conscience - finally dawns on you.What do you say to someone whose trust you just betrayed in the most horrible way possible?What kind of apology heals a wound inflicted with such cold, unflinching cruelty, to someone who had earlier smiled and talked to you like you were her friend?..."I'm--"One word. One fucking syllable is all you get out before Girl A screams again, not just in alarm but in complete hysterical fear. More empty, half-assembled rifles clatter to the ground as she continues to kick away from you, pressing herself further into the corner she's cowering in, as if desperately trying to put as much distance between the both of you as possible despite already pressing up against the walls.More sobbed appeals for her Angel to come and stop the monster in front of her from making her forget again. Bloodied fingers and palms pressing against her tightly-clenched eyelids, frantically seeking that one last bastion of calm by just blocking out all sight of you and pretending you're gone. Smearing her face with crimson fingerprints and lining her cheeks with muddy carmine tears....What have you done?What the fuck have you done, you stupid FUCKING IDIOT?[1/2]
>>31822265>>31822271So the blame should be placed on the voters, the puppetmasters who chose what the puppet would do, when there was a choice not to do it.
>>31822289You close the door to Girl A's quarters behind you, exhaling only after you hear all the locks re-engage themselves automatically. The thick, solid door between the both of you muffling the girl's cries to a sound you can ignore but never forget.This...no one can know what you did. Not Cavefish, not Kyoko, not Malal. What you did went far and beyond what you falsely accused your Rank Leader of. It was one thing to torture an enemy for information, to use excruciation as a means of supplementing interrogation - but to force your way through an already fragile mind, an ordeal already torturous and possibly fatal on a healthy one--A sudden beeping sound out chirping out of nowhere very nearly makes you jump out of your suit, and you nervously spit out an epithet as you realize that Malal is calling you. ...Shit. Shit shit shit. ...She couldn't have known so fast, t-that's impossible. Not even she was that good.You take a moment to compose yourself, to calm your quickened, frantic breathing, and it's here that you accept her call. Praying fervently that your voice wouldn't tremble this time."Omegon, how are things going?" Malal greets you without any preamble or hesitation. "Said goodbye to Haruka yet? We're a bit short on time, though, so I'll have to ask you to wrap it up. Oh, and how was Kharn, by the way?"...Wait, what? Haruka? But you haven't even visited Kharn yet!It's here, then, that you see the Walpurgisnacht counter at the upper right corner of your retinal display. The display reading 00:01:28:33.What. WHAT.You still had the best part of three hours earlier, back in Girl A's headquarters! How did you lose an hour and half by just talking to her?! It was--[2/3]
>>31822289This is some delicious HEALING.
>>31822299The cold sensation returns, colder than it had ever been, your throat growing painful and dry.N-no. That...what you did to Girl A, that didn't take that long, it didn't feel that long!"Omegon?" Malal tilts her head here. "You alright? I was asking how Kharn was when you visited her." A moment. "You HAVE visited her, right?"N-no. You...Malal can't find out. You can't tell her.How do you respond?Tell the truth.Lie.
>>31822237So, what? In the puppet show, the bad doll dies for her sins anyway.
>>31822313[x]Lie.Just a little white lie.
>>31822313>[X]Lie.This will end well.
>>31822313>[X]Lie.Confused. Disoriented.Yeah, I can see this HAPPENING.
>>31822313>[X]Lie.Oh uh, yeah, she was just fine. Tried to make a pass on me and everything! That Kharn! Hahaha!
>>31822313>Tell the truth.
Lie.We've already taken a running start, now all we can do is jump off the slope.
>>31821394>>31821414>>31821428Oh me oh myThis entire scene is very evocative. All those implications, all those parallels, all those rape comparisons. Certainly makes Yuma a more interesting character, as far as I'm concerned.
>>31822313>[x]Tell the truth.
>>31822313[x]Tell the truth.It's not like lying is going to work, just like trying to apologize only made things worse.
>>31822313>[x]Lie.Pay for your sins, Yuma.
>>31822313>[x]Lie.Does Yuma blame herself for Malal's death?
>>31822313Tell the truth.
>>31822313Lie.Ain't nobody got time for this.This way she gets to know that one of the last things she did before Malal died was betray her trust twice, without getting found out.
>>31822313Ahahaha, oh wow, this is amazing [X] Lie
>>31822313REAL good job guys...
>>31822313>Lie.I think I blacked out for a moment. What time is it?
>>31822313>[x]Lie.we were... caught up in our conversation. Or something.
>>31822313>[X]Tell the truth.It might be the last time she is going to talk to Mala and I bet she would not like to their last conversation be full of lies
>>31822313>Tell the truth.[Hahaha intensifies]
>>31822299>>31822313Yees. Hide your crimes Yuma. Fall to the dark side!You know what would be ironic. If Kharn kills Malal because Yuma did not check on her due to being too busy mindraping Girl A, making Yuma directly responsible for Malals death.
Life is so much more entertaining when we're not being 100000% Dildomancer
>>31822289>>31822299>Two entire hours of rapeWow
>>31822313>[X]Tell the truth.Yuma, why must you be a bad girl. Kyouko was a good influence!
>>31822379That's not ironic it's delicious
>>31822313[x] Tell the truth
>>31822313>[X]Tell the truth.We can pretend we had been talking with Girl A.
>>31822313>[X]Lie.Everyone dies in an hour and a half anyway
>>31822313[X]Lie.You just raped someone Yuma. A little white lie is nothing in comparison.
>>31822313Why lie, is it for the fun of it?
>>31822399>votes tell the truth>says we should lieWhat
>>31822389You stole the words from my mouth, anon.I don't even mind Yuma doing the mindrape, I just vote for lies because I love HEALING.
>>31822379Malal already did foresee her death.
>>31822407Because Yuma massively fucked up right after accusing Malal of doing something similar. It's actually in-character.
>>31822313[X]Tell the truth.Decided to vote after all.
>>31822407because we're confused, disoriented and we don't want Malal to know about... whatever the hell we were just doing for the past two hours.
[x] lietheres no breaks on the rape train, and no remorse either! besides everyones going to die anyway.
>>31822406to be quite honest it was way worse than rape, she violated the sanctity of someone's own mind when they were at their most vulnerable in an apparently horrifyingly traumatizing way that may or may not have been viciously painful
>>31822382I am inclined to agreeSuddenly, interesting characters! Noir! Tumbling Down! This is what our choices have wrought, and I am 100% okay with it!No happy ending for Yuma. In the final hour, all her friends die and she betrays everyone who trusts her.
>>31822410The truth about not seeing Kharn, presumably. Doesn't mean she can't lie about what happened at Girl A's room.
>>31822407Presumably so Malal won't ask why we talked with Girl A so long, or worse go and check on Girl A herself.Telling the truth risks Malal learning about the rape. Lying hides it. Yuma said it herself. "no one can know what you did".
>>31822313[x]LieLie your ass off, no way you can admit to what you just did. Why did people vote for that again?
>>31822410Tell the truth about Kharn, lie (not really) about reasons.
>>31822313>[x]Tell the truth.guys plz, this is Malal. Mind-reading Malal.
>>31822407Because Yuma fucked up and feels like a monster, everyone dies soon anyway, and disappointing Malal is not something she wants to do.
>>31822313[x]Tell the Truth."Boss, I made a big mistake. The well-I'm-glad-I'll-be-dead-soon-big sort."
>>31822407Because it's what most people would do at this point. It also makes for a better story, though I concede that's not a good enough reason to vote for it if it's out of character. I just don't think it is OOC at all.
>>31822442She can't read minds over a commlink
>>31822424Huh. I wonder if Yuma maybe just picked up a hitchhiker
>>31822441I'm just playing the character dude
Yuma.Yuma has changed.
>>31822444Hmmm... I like your reasoning. I'll switch my vote to Truth, but it doesn't seem like it'll make much difference now
>>31822451And you know this how?
>>31822442She's distracted anon. Burgernight's coming.
>>31822441I would've voted against it, wasn't here for the vote, but I'm voting for the lie here. It seems more appropriate for the situation anon. She obviously doesn't want to tell anyone ever let alone 2 minutes after she did it.
>>31822462Yuma never changes, anon.
>>31822442eh, no problem. We're at a remove and we'll all be dead in an hour and a half.
>>31822451Of course she can. She is FUCKING MALAL. She doesn't even need a commlink.
>>31822450>>31822460>>31822461It's not in-character, you're choosing to make this a part of her character when it wasn't before.
>>31822483I bet Yuma wishes she was fucking Malal
>>31822450Hell I think telling the truth is ooc here actually. Not after what she just did, especially with the end in just one hour.
Waifu filler made us soft.I for one welcome the healing.
>>31822483Well if we're going down this line. She already new it happened before Yuma did it so its a moot point.
keki wa sayaka?
>>31822430Yeah. True.Yuma turned out to be a really scary character.
>>31822483if she was that good she wouldn't have left Omegon alone with Homucifer for over two hours.
>>31822466I was actually advocating lying, but o-okay Hat-chan, if that's how you feel
>>31822485She literally stated her intention to never let anyone know in the update, anon. And almost nobody would have enough integrity to admit what they'd done at this point anyway.
>>31822462Oh yeah, it certainly gives a whole lot of perspective to her scenes in the future.
>>31822494Well, to be fair she is totally broken in the head... just like everybody else.
>>31822493Chi-ga-u~Watashi wa razuberī Ma~a rui kēki wa akai Kēki wa Kyouko?
>>31822496Malal; "Just as planned!"
>>31822493chi ga u
I will have to leave now see you guys later dood
>>31822483>She is FUCKING MALAL.She's already made the preparations and the messages and recordings by this point, so she knows how fucked up Murderface/Chiaki's memory is going to be in the future.Its all part of the plan.
>>31822462Nope. She has not. She still conceals her crime. She is still a monster.>>31822485I actually think it is in-character as Yumas character stands now. Deculture made it clear that Yuma wants to hide this at all possible cost. Even if that means lying to Malal.
>>31822519Chi-ga-u~Atashi wa ri-n-goMa~rui keeki wa bebe ga sukiKeeki wa mami?
>>31822313I don't have many banners on my phone... Thank you everyone who participated!
>>31822538Chi-ga-u Watashi wa chizu Ma~a rui keiki wa korogaru Keiki wa Akemi-san?
>>31822485Her characterisation was sparse, at best. This interpretation is much more interesting.
Considering the train of despair Yuma's been on since even before contracting, I'm amazed she hasn't Witched Out several times over by the time the present has rolled around.
What's the policy on Bad Ends? Do we get a reset of some sort or is it /end quest?
>>31822313>[X]Lie like a motherfucker, like the monster you are.
>>31822546Chi-ga-u Watashi wa whis-kēMa~a rui kēki wa akai Kēki wa Malal?
>>31822546I don't think Homura's up for cake song time...
>>31822521It's not that Yuma is the only one she could trust with this, its that Yuma is the only one she could trust to fuck it up.
>>31822557The End is the End. No resets, no do-overs.Why the fuck would you think we'd get a reset, like reloading a save game?
Yuma a shit[x] truth, let's not dig this hole any deeper
>>31822566Chi-ga-u Watashi wa hamu-bər-gərMelon ga waretara amai yumeKeiki wa Dio?
>>31822557It's complicated.>>31822574There was this one weird moment when we took QB into timestop in thread 98.
>>31822580KEIKI WA KONO DIO DA
>>31822549she's amazingly resilient but if these events aren't addressed, she'll likely witch out sometime in the present and I really don't want that to happen.The choices made might have made her a bad guy this flashback but Kyoko would be devastated if Yuma died or witched out, possibly causing her to witch out too.
>>31822557I figure there won't be any resets. If we get say Kyoko killed and Sayaka witches out as a result, we will have to live with it.I figure if Chiaki dies, Deculture might bring her back. It has been established that Pinky can do that (Wendy). However I figure that too would have major major consequences that we would have to live with.
>>31822585>There was this one weird moment when we took QB into timestop in thread 98.That was due to a miscount, nothing more.Players still have to deal with the consequences of their actions.
>>31822580>Watashi wa hamu-bər-gər
>>31822599I doubt Yumas death would cause Kyoko to actually witch out. That would require Sayaka. Though you are right that she would be really upset.
>>31822549Malal probably left her a note too and asked her in it to stay alive anyway.
>tfw you realize Yuma fucking with our head messed up Malal's patch job
>>31822599Yuma's not going to witch out, no matter how much she wishes she could. SOMETHING just happened to her that she can't remember.
>>31822618Wendy is inu
>>31822639>messed up Malal's patch jobIn the exact way required for Malal's plans to come to fruition.
>>31822650Keleiku means Malal
>>31822650Either that or Yuma doomed the universe.Did Pinky ever manifest to Girl A?
>>31822650Almost certainly.It's pretty clear that whoever set up the hit on Murderface/Kharn is probably another incarnation of Malal, and the knife seems to suggest pretty clearly which one.
Something from the "will the never get finished pile" I'm really enjoying this flashback, much more than I initially expected. Even if I voted against the mind rape, it's resulted in some beautifully disturbing scenes
Lolling at Yuma's shitty mind meld
>>31822685And isn't that what is important, when you get right down to it?
>>31822685at first I thought Haruka was SUPER HEALTHY but then I realized it was the pauldrons.
>>31822685Haruka knows what's up.
>>31822685She's right thoughYuma did nothing wrong
>>31822685Yeah. I too voted against it, but the way Deculture wrote it was really disturbing.Deculture really managed to show how horrific what happened was and evoke some real emotions. And based on comments I figure I am not the only one.Is that not what good writers do?
Why do I get the feeling we're doing this just to try and fuck up Malal's plan.I kind of support it since it seems everything was always within her calculations. Though I hated this ending up this way I'm kind of glad Yuma was the one that fucked up the infallible Malal
Given than Malal is just about to go die, and she'd be the natural 'solution' to the current state of Girl A, I'm interested in finding out how we got to thread 1 Chiaki from here.
>>31822724So Yuma is That Guy (Girl), basically?
>>31822685Now there's a frightening thought Yuan being affected by her influence, corrupted with nothing more than gentle words and kindness. "It's all Muderface's fault. She's going to kill me. I have foreseen it. You have to protect me from her. You've done it before..."
>>31822685Haruka speaks the truth.
>>31822724>Why do I get the feeling we're doing this just to try and fuck up Malal's plan.trying to fuck up Malal's plans is an excercise in futility.Anyone trying is wasting their time.
>>31822724It's all part of the plan.
>>31822737Bicchi means slut, not bitch
>>31822738She'll go back to "normal" after Walpurgisnacht is forced into retreat.
>>31822724Well, even Malal is not totally infallible. No prophecy is. Malal also has an advantage in that she is connected to Madokami and Homucifer, so I would presume she gets more when those things are involved (since she IS Madoka of this universe and all that).She probably has much less future sight about what someone "unrelated" like Yuma will do. Neither Madoka or Homura ever really had a major connection to Yuma.
>>31822747I want of Mrs.Malal's wild ride
>>31822740No, the voters are That Guys. They made the choice, after all.
>>31822764Who did she marry?
>>31822764give it an hour and a half.
>>31822769It was Yumas choice too, because what the voters choose IS what Yuma chooses. The two are one and the same.
>>31822786But some people seem to only blame Yuma and not accept that it was their choice that created this situation.
We need more 25 year old office ladies.
>>31822814I commited the sin of ommision, so there's that.I wanted to do it to fuck up Malal's plan a bit, but...not with mindrape.
>>31822841take responsibility, anon
Oh man what if this is braids. Did Yuma just mind-diddle braids. No wonder Yuma is the enemy
Green hair is the danger indeed.
>>31822869Nah, braids has here own timeline where she shagged Sayaka, this is just a temporary, blank slate Homu.
>>31822814Probably the people who voted against rape. You do realise that there were two votes for this. The first was a perfect tie, and in the second vote, rape won by 1 vote. The playerbase was divided in half about this.Yuma is what the majority says she is. Thats how the game is played and everyone has to accept that. But that does not mean that the minority cannot hate her for what she has become now.Some may be upset simply because their side lost the vote, but I suspect most are immersed in the story and are disgusted with what Yuma has done and become. As others have said above, Deculture writing it as it was and bringing the horror of it to the text probably helped there.
>>31822883Why not?Braids is part of the Homu cluster.Maybe the primary Homu got so mangled she retreated/went catatonic and Braids had to take over the while she's recovering.
>>31822901>Probably the people who voted against rape.No, it seems to be the people who voted FOR the rape that are like this.
GuysGreen Hair is the dangerGREEN HAIR IS THE DANGER
>>31822931Yes. We get it.Ruri a shit.
>>31822931YUMA IS THE ONE WHO KNOCKS
>>31822931Holy shit it all makes sense nowGreen Hair IS the dangerAlso this just reinforces my belief that all catpeople are awful. NECO and Yuma can both burn together.
>>31822922Oh? How do you know?
>>31822943>Now...say my name.>...O-Omegon>You're god damn right
>>31822952But anon, Yuma did nothing wrong.
>>31822952I had forgotten the cat ears.KILL ALL CATS! hehe
>>31822943HE WILL KNOCK FOUR TIMES
>>31822931The danger is over. Unless Yuma plans to go back for more.
>>31822943>Yuma is a city in Arizona>Arizona borders New Mexico>Heisenburg lives in NMTherefore Yuma is the danger
>>31822982not Yuma. Her hitchhiker
>>31822956There's no way to confirm it, and people are unlikely to come out and say it, but just from my position as someone who voted against the mindrip and who views the players as being more responsible for this result than the temporary PC of Yuma.
>>31822493>>31822519>>31822538>>31822546>>31822566>>31822580>>31822595This is clearly a reference to something but I have NO FREAKING CLUE what that would be.
>>31822982We are in the fucking past, how could it be over.
>>31823007Rebellion Story. You should really watch it, it's been out for a while now and it's really good
>>31823007it's the cake song from rebellion story
>>31823007Rebellion.Third PMMM movie.Homura did nothing wrong.
So.What's wearing Yuma in the present?
>>31823014Commence operation shit-storm.
>>31823014I've been waiting for a chance to marathon all three movies. I just finished rewatching the original series so they are next on the list
>>31823009I'm saying Yuma being the danger is over. Unless she just can't get enough of Murderfaces sweet sweet mind scape.That's why Yuma hates us, it's not guilt. It's frustration. Like an a former alcoholic that has to keep looking at alcohol all day long.
>>31822992Well, I voted against the rape too but it happened and it has significantly changed how I view Yuma. Yumas character was pretty undefined before. I figure in this flashback, Deculture gave the players the chance to define Yumas character and morality better.This is what was chosen. This is what it now is.
>>31823031How is it bait? The rebellion movie was a wild ride I did not want to get off.
>Yuma is the danger>she is the prophet all along>Guilt from mind rape drove her mad>Also missed chance to say goodbye to friends that are all gonna die>blames it all on Murderface
>>31823052Or she is being a meatpuppet for some self-hating shard of Homu's personality (inb4 all of Homu's personality is self-hating) that got tired of being decommissioned and took her over during the mindfuck.
Oh for fuck's sake. How much can people bitch over their own decisions?Okay, mindraping Girl A wasn't our brightest idea. Moving on to damage control.
>>31823043>This is what was chosen. This is what it now is.Your view and interpretation is, however, not the only one. What happened is canon, your opinion of the character is not.
>>31823092>Okay, mindraping Girl A wasn't our brightest idea. Moving on to damage control.We should tell her to fuck off
>>31823096As you say.Yuma raped Girl A. Thats a fact.Whether you think she was justified, or if you think she can be forgiven or whatever is obviously up to every individual person.
>>31823031Not the guy you responded to, but Rebellion was great.The original series' ending always felt incomplete especially with regards to Homura's character arc, which was left hanging when her motivation to keep going suddenly up and vanished from the universe.Rebellion was a great exploration of all those hanging questions and plot threads, and a great Act 2 to the story as a whole.Now I can only hope that they get that second season, so we can get our Act 3, and find out where this Wild Ride goes.
>>31822320 >>31822322 >>31822325 >>31822327You clear your throat a couple of times, before replying to the affirmative. Yes, you...you did visit Kharn. You did, in fact, go down to Silent Room Regalia earlier. And the Warmaster was just like Malal said - dying, and a hair's breadth from Witching Out.First suspecting your role model of betrayal and subterfuge - and now lying to her? Right to her face? "Hnh." You hear Malal grunt here, and you could swear you could feel her eyes boring at you through the visor of her own Anima Speculum helmet. As if seeing right through your deception even before you've uttered it, and simply waiting for you to come clean. "...No change from the last time I visited, then." The Culexus finally speaks up a few heartbeats later, her spiked shoulderplates jostling slighty as she shrugs. "Could mean that her body's started the healing process already. Could mean the exact opposite, too. But at least she hasn't gotten worse." Y-yeah. Of course. That should be good news at least. ...You're pretty sure the Warmaster will be fine, though. She's like a weed - too hardy and annoying of a nuisance to actually die.Malal guffaws at that. "Hah! I like that so much, I'm going to steal it for myself and tell it to her face when she's up and about. Snow-shoveling yokel like her'll think it's a compliment, and probably give me that raise I want." She chuckles again, before nodding at you with something approaching approval in her voice. "You know, Omegon, if Walpurgisnacht isn't about to bust into reality an hour and a half from now, I'd step down from Equerry and name you my replacement."H-huh? Replacement? B-but--"On a temporary basis, at least. Just to get your feet wet for this role when you actually DO Have to replace me." Malal shakes her head, incredulity coloring her words. "What, did you think I was going to be Equerry forever?"[1/2]
>>31823135"It's really either you or Kyoko, you know? But I don't think she'd appreciate it much if I tore the eternal lovebirds apart just because I wanted to retire while I'm still alive." Another gargling chuckle. "But yeah, if all this shit wasn't happening..." She shrugs. "Well, we don't really know what's going to happen when we deploy. Hopefully it'll all go as planned and we won't have to add too many portraits to the Hall of Anamnesis."Y-yeah. Yeah, of course. You hope so, too.You close your eyes momentarily, unable to meet Malal's gaze for a second more. It's...it's ridiculous. You can't even see her eyes, but you can't even look at her fucking visor. This must be what a fucking coward and liar feels like, you think bitterly."Anyway, I just called to check up on you. When you're ready, get to the General Assembly Hall - Kharn's finished her speech and the Eversors're filing out. If you hurry, you can catch Kyoko and Sayaka before they leave."Malal ends the call, her portrait vanishing from your retinal display - and it's here that you feel your knees begin their slow metamorphosis to weak, boneless jelly. Very nearly buckling your legs underneath you.You did it. You actually fucking did it.You lied to Malal. It's not your proudest moment.And now you have to make a decision. With the rapidly-dwindling amount of time left, you can only pick one.Go straight to the General Assembly Hall to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka, and meet with Malal.Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.
>>31823049>>31823130I agree. Others may not, it's a huge can of worms
>>31823092>their own decisionsYou don't know how voting works do you? I wasn't here last thread and I don't really care what happens to Yuma but I am enjoying the collective I TOLD YOU SO shit going on here
>>31823151>[x]Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.
>>31823121>Yuma raped Girl A. Thats a fact.Well, thats not literally true, she brutally ripped a memory from the shattered remains of the psyche of a blanked out version of Girl A. But since thats the terminology we've adopted I am basically just arguing semantics there.
>>31823151>Malal's knows but forgives >Girl, Yuma gonna carry that weight
>>31823151>Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.
>>31823135>"You know, Omegon, if Walpurgisnacht isn't about to bust into reality an hour and a half from now, I'd step down from Equerry and name you my replacement."okay that's just hilarious
>>31823165>You don't know how voting works do you?Oh please enlighten me, shitface-kun.
>>31823151>[x]Run for it and meet Haruka one last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.Let's confess, at least to someone.
>>31823165I for one voted against the mind-rape, but am enjoying the story a lot more now that it happened.
>>31823151[X]Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.
>>31823151>[x]Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.Will Yuma even see Malal again before it happens?
>>31823151[X] Check on Kharn
>>31823151>[x]Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.Bad decision after bad decision after bad decision.
>>31823151>[x]Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.Shit, why no option to check up on Kharn?
Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.Visit. Waifu.
>>31823151>[x]Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.All will be moot in a few hours anyway.
I think Yuma might be a bigger fuck-up than Chiaki at this point.
>>31823151>[x]Go straight to the General Assembly Hall to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka, and meet with Malal.This might be the last chance we get to see Malal.
>>31823151>Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.Lying through a visor is one thing. Lying to Malal's face is a different matter.
>[x]Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.More stupid choices to make!
>>31823151>Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.I don't think Yuma could look Sayaka or Kyoko in the face right now.
>>31823151[x] Go check on Kharn. If there's one last thing Yuma does, it's to make sure that the potential Witch who is living right next to her girlfriend doesn't Witch Out.
>>31823151>Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.
>>31823186>49% vote not to mind rape>They bitch about the mind rape when it happens>DURR IT WAS YOUR DECISIONPlease, continue the shitstorm dumbass-chan.
>>31823151[x]Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.I think I see where this is going...
>>31823228Not even close. This is pretty much what Homura was doing, but Homura was doing it near-constantly for 1000+ years.
>>31823151[X]Run for it and meet Harks one last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.
>>31823151>[x]Go straight to the General Assembly Hall to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka, and meet with Malal.None must know what we did, not even haruka. Or especially Haruka.
>>31823204>Shit, why no option to check up on Kharn?Write-ins are allowed, you know.
>>31823204Nobody cares about Kharn, not even the narrative.
>>31823151[x] Check on KharnThis sounds pretty fucking important
...Congratu-fucking-lations TG. You fucked up Yuma's life. For nothing. Seriously. Well done.
>>31823151And the plot thickens. Now Yuma plans to make Haruka an accomplice (of sorts) in her crime and web of lies. She really is something.But I think she has done enough already.[X]Go straight to the General Assembly Hall to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka, and meet with Malal.
>>31823228Depends. Are you using cumulative fuck-up measurements or a "what did you fuck up recently" metric?
>>31823151[X] Check on Kharn.
>>31823188I did that too and I am enjoying having someone to blame. Horrible shit is happening, and it is totally not my fault, what could be better?
Yuma lied, Kharn died.Enjoy Paradox raping the world into compliance.
>>31823151[X]Run for it and meet Harukaone last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.We could really use a shoulder to cry on after fucking up so badly
I can see it now, Yuma hates Murderface because Yuma can't apologize for what she did. Murderface thankfully doesn't remember, but Yuma does and it agonizes her. She did something terrible, something that cannot be undone an the one she did it to doesn't even remember.There can be no redemption, no forgiveness, and Yuma has to live with that unless she forces chiaki to remember which could just make things worse.How would the officio react if they found out the last culexus mindraped their warmaster? I think that is why Yuma hates chiaki, because everyday she reminds Yuma of something that Yuma can't get rid of the guilt of doing. Yuma can't even find sanctuary in being hated, she can only hate herself.
>>31823151[X] Go check up on Kharn
>>31823272>sole living culexus in our officio after all the rest died horribly>traumatized>we've ruined her lifeNo, anon, her life was already ruined.
>>31823272All MGs have fucked up lives.I don't see why you're upset.
>>31823135>>31823151>Read this part>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sqp-ZRlx9ho starts playingT-Thats not ominous at all. Thanks playlist.That said, you people are shit. First you vote for a retarded action and then you "punish" Yuma with voting for even more retarded shit. Get a grip, people.
>>31823151>[x]Go straight to the General Assembly Hall to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka, and meet with Malal.Can't bring Haruka into this. We've done enough bad shit already.
>>31823151>[x] Check on Kharn
>>31823151>[x]Go straight to the General Assembly Hall to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka, and meet with Malal.
>>31823276Homua got do-overs and only really cares about one thing, saving Madoka at ANY cost. Yuma is thoroughly fucking up every aspect of her ONE AND ONLY life.So I would say Yuma has a more fucked up life because it's more concentrated.
Well I mean at least we know Murderface isn't the worst fuckup in the Officio.
>>31823151CHECK UP ON KHARN
>>31823300You know what? I'm changing my vote[X] Check up on Kharn
>>31823135>>31823151Go straight to the General Assembly Hall to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka, and meet with Malal.
>>31823151[X]Check on Kharn
[x]Check up on KharnThis will be what kills Malal.
>>31823311>I don't see why you're upset.Because we could have stopped it you mongoloid. You people literally just voted for RETARDED SHIT and blame the character and push more shit on her by voting EVEN MORE RETARDED SHIT.Its chucklefuck central in here and even the Tripfags are having a blast. I hate you fucking all.
>>31823151>[x]Go straight to the General Assembly Hall to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka, and meet with Malal.>Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.Fuck no, you cant tell anyone about this shit, are you serious?
>>31823309>>31823311It's more on the lines of making it worse than what it already was.Yes, her life ALREADY sucked, but now we can add "disobeyed and lied to Malal, aka person she respected most, for nothing" to the list of why her life sucks.But whatever. Shit's done.
Yeah, we so need to see Kharn, even if it's overdue.We had two jobs, and we've only fucked up one of them so far.
>>31823272I don't see how you are blaming us for thisWe played a character and helped tell a story. This isn't a game, it's collaborative narration. There is no win condition. I think Yuma is far more interesting now that she's rejoicing.
>>31823375She can join the betrayal club with Chiaki
[x]Run for it and meet Haruka one last time. Not being able to say goodbye to Kyoko and Sayaka is a shame, but...you need to talk to someone. Someone who won't judge you and forgive you for what you've done.>>31823231It's the last chance we might get to see Haruka.
>>31823151Changing my vote, I agree with[x]Check up on Kharn
>>31823375>But whatever. Shit's doneShit's NOT done. We're still making choices for her, choices that make her life worse or try to mitigate the damage. We are still the one's making choices, and it's not over till this flashback is over.
So what you're telling me is what happened on Walpurgisnacht isn't at all Chiaki's fault and it is entirely because of Yuma but Kharn gets blamed for it.So does this mean that if Yuma is the danger, Midori is in the clear?Also guys what do you think will happen when we check on Kharn? It's not going to change the fact that she's about to witch out and become the Betrayer.
>>31823366Winner winner chicken dinner!
>>31823351if I see that kotomine one more time
>>31823395>It's the last chance we might get to see Haruka.I'm not sure we want her to see us right now.
>>31823347She is. These are the only fuckups Yuma did, while Chiaki's life as Murderface was a long string of fuckups before we took control over her.It doesn't hit as hard because Chiaki drowned her hate for herself in alcohol and painkillers. Yuma didn't.
>>31823135RENYAGADE INTERRUPTHow's it going, nerds
>>31823274Ok. If its allowed, changing to [X] Visit KharnOfcourse, I wonder if this is the correct vote. I am now worried that we will end up being the trigger that causes Kharn to witch out in the end because we fuck this up too.
>>31823385You didnt play a character. You voted for retarded shit because you voted, please dont hide behind the character for shitty votes. People like you are the worst scum. You are pretty much THATGUY going "Well thats what my character would do!" right now after he pulled copletly stupid shit.
>>31823413It's better than going to see Malal.
>>31823405>So does this mean that if Yuma is the danger, Midori is in the clear?no.because Green Hair is the Danger.It Never Ends
>>31823415More like Renyagaaaayde.
I think Yuma is a much more interesting character this way. Honestly, while I may be alone in this, I also find her a much more sympathetic character now.
>>31823405>It's not going to change the fact that she's about to witch out and become the Betrayer.But we still can as well provoke it.
>>31823415NECO how would NECO react if one of the Culexus mindraped her? This is important.
>>31823424that's why I voted to go see Kharn and do all the stuff that Malal asked us to do, even if belately.
>>31823440It's not rape if it's Malal!
>>31823415feeling sort of down.The situation is getting a bit out of hand.
>>31823440>implying anyone wants to see what's in NECO's headYou couldn't pay me enough, man.
>>31823385>This isn't a game, it's collaborative narration. There is no win conditionFuck you, you stupid fuck.Of course this is a game, as defined by having discrete choices which lead to individualized results and consequences. Since choices lead to different and unique ends, some ends will be more desirable than others, and the game is to try to get to an end that is preferred over others, resulting in a matrix of choices and allowing them to be ranked by desirability.
>>31823435I can kinda agree with this. It's a breath of fresh air after McDidloface.
>>31823449Malal is deeeaaaaaaad.
>>31823453The world is ending, there's nothing much we can do that will make it worse is what Yuma is telling herself over and over in hope of wanting it to be true
>>31823460Table of min/maxxing relationships with golden weapons when?
>>31823453Don't worry anon.>>31823460ohohoho, Check it out, it's a real life That Guy. Specifically, one of those "I can't have fun if i'm not winning" ones.
>>31823415you're waifus a shit
>>31823460I see it more as a story then a game, feel free to powergame all you want though.>>31823435I agree.
So Yuma missed her meeting with Malal because she was busy visiting her gilfriend. So all other culexus went on a mission without her and died there.
>>31823415>>31823435Shitty. The same people who made Yuma do dumb shit yesterday now proclaim how they hate her because she did what THEY voted for. This is fucking 1984 levels of Doublethink.
>>31823414Once tg took control of Chiaki, who was a total fuckup, we have greatly improved her life. Even Sayaka kinda likes her now.Once tg took control of Yuma, who apparently made a completely selfless wish (thats what makes Culexus right?), we totally destroyed her in just a couple of threads.Yeah...
>>31823460Your definition of game can literally apply to almost everything.The end that I desire is the one with the most interesting story, not the one where everyone ends up happy. You can vote against me in this, but don't tell me that my interpretation is any less valid than your own. I think Yuma is more interesting and narratively solid now that her hands are stained with metaphorical blood that she can't wash off, and it gives a whole new light to her previous scenes in the future.Basically, stop telling me that I'm having fun wrong and go fuck yourself with a cactus.
>>31823507good end: cutest meguca is still alive
>>31823307This anon gets it, Deculture has planned this all in advance. The voting, the suffering, the euphoria, the faggotry, the rage.Just let it all go, what is done is done. We need to stop slapping each other and start figuring out what it all will mean when the flashback is over.My fear is that Yuma will fall into despair an the only way to save her will be for chiaki to remember what Yuma did to her, the pain, the fear, the shame, the betrayal, the lying, all of it will come out and cause chiaki some possibly serious mental harm, and cause her to seek d eadly answers, such as who was bitch with the black dagger.
>>31823453...The situation is so out of hand that we've let it be intercepted by the opposing team on their ten yard line and they've just scored SEVEN touchdowns at the same time and they still have possession.The situation is so out of hand that we have no hands. They left us for the situation and they're having their honeymoon on the other side of the world. We weren't even invited to the wedding.The situation is so out of hand that it bounced into space and the First Officio is investigating what seems to be a situation shaped hole that has pierced through the Moon.
>>31823392And KharnWho else is in the betrayal club?
Best thread in a while. This is the kind of shitstorm I can get behind.
>>31823530Risa is trying but they won't let her in.
>>31823504>>31823435And think you should go kill yourselves.
>>31823440>implying Malal hasn't and she just doesn't rememberProbably about as well as Girl A.>>31823453>>31823508Nyaa, I can see that. Lookin' pretty crazy in here today. I guess it'll be nice to go back to the waifu wars, though.Any strong emotional reaction from the readers is interesting, nya.>>31823503aw
>>31823521I bet Decu voted 1.
>>31823537Please explain to me why this is good thing without sounding like you are from /b/.
>>31823545The scarf's positioning in that image makes Wendy look like she has a shell.
>>31823545>>31823566Fine, geez. I have tomorrow off. I'll redraw it...
>>31823558It's hard to explain, but basically...we dun all got various feels
>>31823545I don't like the Waifu wars any more than how things are going now...I do have faith in Decu though.
>>31823526....you may be exaggerating. Just a little.
>>31823530Mami. Her superdumb betrayal left us without our favourite masturbation arm.
>>31823566The mental image of turtle-Wendy is strangely adorable.
>>31823545Waifu wars, what a pleasant memory.
>>31823545>Any strong emotional reaction from the readers is interesting, nya.If it was a strong emotional reaction about what happened in the story, I would be fine with it. Instead its strong emotional reaction people making retarded votes. Its self-baked. Its something entierly different and the fact that I have to actually explain what the difference is just makes me lose my faith in all the people who read this Quest some more.
>>31823602what the fuck is this
>>31823615I'm imagining a MGNQ version of this with Midori riding the dragon like "sup nerds" because of how much she's winning.
>>31823586>>31823602Has this doujin been translated?
>>31823595Alright, now fuck off to /b/ again.
I voted against the mind rape and I'm glad I lost. NOIR is INTENSIFYING and I love it.
>>31823630I love the way you think, but I don't think I could pull it off>>31823637Same here
>>31823619The difference between a quest and a story is that reader input can guide it, but you can't call it less of a story just because people made a choice you didn't like. Also I like this, it's a really dark but understandable action that's given us all someone to root for or against, and strong feelings about it.
>>31823619Yeah, this is regrettably true, because anon is REALLY quick to start hurling blame at anon. And that's what happens when people get mad about difficult decisions, it seems like. But if the story weren't affecting them emotionally then this shitstorm wouldn't be happening, I should think.Well, except for the guys who are talking about the objectively correct choices to make for the ideal ending, or whatever. But I'll keep my opinyans on that to myself.
>>31823635He can't, he's too busy drawing GRAPHIC RE-ENACTMENT of MIND RAPE now.
>>31823515Okay, you dumb shit, let me explain it to you again.You're already playing this as a game since you're making choices against your own internal metric of what is interesting versus what is not, trying to get the ending that YOU want. I never said that your interpretation of choices was any less valid than mine. What I said was that this IS a game, not collaborative narration, because everyone is trying to achieve their ends through votes for choices at points determined by a QM. Collaborative narration would allow any one of us to suggest something completely different, the addition of a character, the removal of one, adding, removing, or modifying a part of the world.That's what the writers of the write-ups do with Deculture, not what we're doing here.Do you understand the difference now?
>>31823637I'm fine with the story decisions, I just wish the readerrbase could stop being cunts about it to one another.Ain't gonna happen, but still.
I'm really to say this, but I'll have to pause the thread now! Work really tired me out earlier, and I'm almost falling asleep. I wanted to finish this arc today but it will have to be finished tomorrow! (At least it'll still be Walpurgisnacht somehow, right?)Thank you for your participation and support for 200 threads so far! I'm really lucky to have everyone reading what I'm writing, and I hope you're having fun just as much as I am!I don't think we have any writeups tonight, so questions answered before I go to sleep!
>>31823672why so much healing, deculturewhy
>>31823558because something interesting and dramatic happened
>Obama's a shitty president>OH YEAH THEN WHY'D YOU VOTE FOR HIM>But I didn't>ORLY THEN WHY IS HE PRESIDENT? STOP YOUR STUPID WISHYWASHY DOUBLETHINK AND LIVE WITH YOUR DECISIONS BABYI'm seriously at risk of tearing my face with smiling too hard.
>>31823672Thanks for running this Decu! It is much appreciated.
>>31823672Has this flashback changed your opinion of Yuma or how you are going to write her in the future?
>>31823672Will Malal ever know about what we did?
>>31823672>'But it'll be much longer than last night's!'>3 hour threadDecu pls. Don't do this to me.
>>31823672How many push-ups can Chiaki, Sayaka, Mami, Kyouko, Midori, Kharn, Malal, Wendy and Yuma do and who would pass out first?Does Chiaki like real or super robots better?
>>31823672Thanks for the thread, how easy is it to adjust and/or create new plot to our votes that went off the rails?
>>31823672Is this what you hoped for, Decu? Are you rejoicing in this furore? Thanks for running!
>>31823675>find pixiv>suddenly futa
>>31823710honestly, i'm just glad it happened at all.And you know what, I love you guys. Even the retarded shitflingers.
>>31823730Surprise futa: best futa, or worst futa?
>>31823703Thank you for playing, too!>>31823708Hahaha!>>31823706Ah, slightly, yes, but within the limits I've planned for, anyway!>>31823710I'm really sorry! I really wanted to last as long as I could, but even the scenes were getting a bit hard to write...I'll try for an extra-long thread tomorrow, though!
>>31823672Did you intend for people to be baying for Yuma's blood, or were you expecting a more nuanced reaction?
>>31823740Alright, I'll let you off the hook again.Don't pass out at the computer Decu.
>>31823672>(At least it'll still be Walpurgisnacht somehow, right?)Not really, Walpurgisnacht is in 4 hours. But I would be put off by all the anger in this Thread, too.
>>31823738Generally worst.I can get off to futa no problem when fapping, but it's pig disgusting when I'm not looking to fap, or am not prepared for it. Ruins the characters for me.
>>318237201 / 9999 / 100 / 8000 / -10 / 1,000,000 / - Hamburger / 50Chiaki likes real robots, because she adores weapons somewhat based on reality.>>31823724Oh, just at the sweet spot! It's an enjoyable challenge!>>31823727Hahaha!>>31823739What! Well, tears do have sodium!
>>31823672Thanks for r-running!http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Magical%20Girl%20Noir%20QuestThread will hopefully be archived correctly!I hope the poo flinging stop soon and also that everyone has a pleasant remainder of the night.
>>31823776Kinda a question for you and/or Wendy:Is the Wendy/Midori meetup that was hinted in the last Wendy writeup going to happen in an upcoming write-up?
>>31823776>9 characters>8 numbers of push-upsNow I don't know which can do what! Guess you really are sleepy!
>>31823808He probably missed Malal (cuz she ded).
>>31823808Hard for Malal to do push-ups, what with being dead and all.
>>31823802Yes, that's totally a thing that's going to happen.
>>31823817>>31823823Pls no bully
>>31823653>But I'll keep my opinyans on that to myself.Alright, you dumb cat, since you can't seem to understand this.A choice can't be objectively correct, because a choice has to be measured against a desired outcome, whether that's toward an "ideal end" or an "interesting end".A choice can be correct if End A is desired, and be incorrect if End B is desired. The people saying that such thought is powergaming bullshit are themselves guilty of the same bullshit, since their goal is to get an "interesting end" and they make their choices based upon that goal.As for this definition of a game being applicable to just about anything; yes, that's the goddamn point! Most things are games, because interesting choices are being made that lead to individualized outcomes between decision makers.
Damn, missed ou chance to check on Kharn. That was important, and not just because Malal asked to do it. A piece on Murderface's puzzle.
>>31823836Can't bully a dead girl, anon.
>>31823776What would you do if the second vote did end in a perfect draw too? It was dangerously close.
>>31823848What if people are making choices based on their interpretations of character motivations and personalities, without any regard for whatever 'end' they'll get? Where does that fit in your outlook?
When will Midori fuck Wendy?
>>31823848>I'll keep my opinions to myself>ALRIGHT, BUT HERE'S WHERE YOUR OPINIONS ARE WRONGBoy, that sure is a lot of autism.
>Midori winningShe shouldn't let up just because she's ahead. I see Wendy pulling a great comeback.No idea about Pinky, though. She's a distant third. How are we going to get her into the watermelon?
>>31823672how deep does the rabbit hole go?
>>31823894>How are we going to get her into the watermelon?The same way you get the marshmallows into the watermelon: with a correctly-sized spoon.
>>31823894insane goddesses go where they want, anon.a better question would be how would you keep her out.
Decu's given me some permission to post my write up. Give me a minute.
>>31823886Then their metric is based upon how closely the choice they make hews to their interpretation of a character, and their end goal is to have an end that most closely resembles a series of choices that the characters would have made without outside interference.You can't get away from a goal, because that's always in the intention of a choice you make.
>>31823923Praise Deculture and you!
>>31823808Oh, sorry! Malal can do 200 pushups too, until she has to fix one of Kharn's messes!>>31823802I believe so!>>31823866I would have asked for a third revote, but with a shorter time period. I really don't want a repeat of ShowKyuubeyGate, so all really major choices like that will really have to be decided by a proper, countable vote!
>>31823923“… is it valuable?” “Yes.” “… how much is it worth?” “I don’t know.” “Well, maybe I could-“ “Lightning, are we going to do this every time?” Magical Girl Lightning stood over her compatriot, coworker, colleague, friend, etcetera, Magical Girl Liberty. The two of them were agents working for the United States Strategic Services Office (SSO), and their current mission for the day was to retrieve a very particular artifact. As it stands, the artifacts that they’re occasionally called to retrieve to be put into “special storage” to be examined by “top men” usually fell under archaeological standards. Liberty’s mother would have probably throw a hissyfit over what was done with these artifacts, to Liberty’s silent amusement as she thought of it. Whether it be some fertility idol that actually does enhance a person’s fertility, or a sword said to be lost to time and space reappearing and trying to convince people to wield it, Liberty and Lightning have more or less seen it all. This was different. They found it while exploring the darkest reaches of the unstable and ferocious island of Skull Island. It was in one of the older temple ruins in the inner part of the island, just sitting there on a pedestal, lit only by a ray of light beaming from a hole in the ceiling. It was small enough to fit in the palm of Liberty’s hand. The black little egg shaped wonder had thorns out the top and the bottom, and from inside Liberty and Lightning could see it swirl like a dark cloud. Something about it felt off to Liberty, as if wrong, alien even.Liberty curled her hand around it, gripping it tightly. “Well, there’s no time to talk about it. We have to get out of here.” Lightning pointed to the little thing in Liberty’s hand. “Dibs on the money we make from that though.”
>>31823954Why are Chiaki and her waifus so shit at push-ups?
>>31823978Because Midori a fat.
>>31823970“What is it about you and money?” asked Liberty. “I would’ve expected this from a girl with the last name of Goldstein, not Kawanishi.” Lightning shrugged, smirking. “Hey, money makes the world go round, doesn’t it?” “That-“ Liberty stopped herself. Who knows what would happen if she got dragged into this darn argument again. “Come on.” Liberty led Lightning back down the way they came up the stone, mossy hallway. The old Natives of Skull Island were a mysterious bunch even to the most dedicated historian. Their way of living wasn’t exactly Mayan, nor Incan or Aztec, nor was it exactly cannibal even though they do practice cannibalism, nor was it aboriginal. It was just pure and simple, savage. Skull Island was more or less a recent find, and what Liberty’s Dad had taught her about it, apparently it wouldn’t be a find for long. Lightning still glanced at the artifact occasionally, as if summing up all the dollars or yen or whatever she used as currency she could get if she sold the thing. Liberty ignored it for now, it wasn’t like it was harming her anyway. Besides, Lightning and Liberty have worked together for a good while, betrayal wouldn’t just come out of the blue like that. Lightning said, “Strange really.” “What?” asked Liberty. Lightning wagged her finger, looking around. “You’d figure that this temple would have some traps or something to keep grave robbers out.” Liberty said, “Well, think of it like this, Lightning. Would you really be able to design traps that would survive hundreds, if not thousands, of years into the future?” “You’re asking me?” Liberty said, “That was a rhetorical question.” There’s a brief pause, to which Liberty adds, “You do know what a rhetorical question is, right?” Lightning smiled. “Sure! How does the cow shit get on the roof?” Liberty sighed. “I suppose you’re not wrong.”
>>31823978Chiaki is weak, and she attracts weakness!
>>31823991She has an excuse. The other two don't.
>>31823978Honestly, I have no idea. Other than lack of practice.I guess the side effect to having a built-in bag of holding is your Vindicare Physiology doesn't develop properly.
>>31823823He estimated and she blanked it from the thread as it was postedEven now secretive as fuck
>>31823994With that, their eyes were blinded as they sighted the exit out. There’s always something about seeing the light at the end of a tunnel, as if it were finding your way into heaven. Liberty was no God fearing girl like the rest of her former Girl Scout compatriots. She sung the hymns, but she certainly didn’t pray before she slept or say grace before she ate. Something about being a Magical Girl made you a bit less religious. It sure wasn’t enlightening nor was it euphoric. It just kind of was. And to that end, they stepped outside to the cocked guns of a platoon of Nazi soldiers. Not just any soldiers mind you, these were soldiers of Hitler’s own Magisch Korps. Huge, hulking troops in black heavy body armor, trenchcoats, gasmasks and helmets. They had assault rifles, anti-magic rifles, anti-magic machetes, everything to combat Magical Girls. These were Gegenmagischtruppen. >>=[| GEGENMAGISCHTRUPPEN |]=<<>>-[| Tier Four Wundersoldaten |]=<< “Oh boy,” said Lightning, glaring at them. “It’s these Gegen…” Lightning paused, shifting her eyes a little. “Gegen… whatever the hell they’re called!” “-Magischtruppen.” Into the ring of troopers walked a woman. She was clad in her immaculate military uniform, an armband with a swastika signifying her allegiance to the Nazi Party of Germany. Her peaked cap shaded her scarlet eyes hidden behind a smart pair of glasses, and between her lips was a fresh cigarette. She smirked, gesturing to Lightning. “You have worked in the Fuhrer’s service before, have you not, Lightning? I would have assumed you would have picked up on the terminology.”
>>31823970Liberty and friends in MGNQ...Trying your hand at writing SUFFERING then?
>>31824022Lightning crossed her arms, puffing her cheeks out at the Nazi girl. “Well, Engelhardt. If you didn’t have like twenty different guys with thirty different names, I probably would have remembered!” She kicked the dirt a bit, walking behind Liberty. “Didn’t even work with you guys that long anyway, should have paid me better,” she muttered. Liberty said, “Why are you here, Engelhardt? I thought the Nazis were all about burning books and erasing history, not archaeology.” >>=[| STANDARTENFUHRER ELSA ENGELHARDT |]=<<>>=[| Commander of the Magisch Korps |]=<< Engelhardt frowned mocking. “I am shocked, Liberty. I happen to be a good friend of the Ahnenerbe. They’re all made up of very good and well-respected historians of the ancient era. They work hard to prove Aryan superiority unlike you and your mother who simply rob the graves of the old and ancient.” She shrugged, holding her hand out. “I suppose it cannot be helped. Hand over the Grief Seed.” Lightning and Liberty glanced at each other. “The what?” asked Liberty. Engelhardt looked at them as if they had just frenched each other in front of her. “Excuse me? The thing in your hand. The Grief Seed.” Liberty and Lightning looked at each other, still confused. “Are you serious- Do you call yourselves Magical Girls and not know what a Grief Seed is?” “Yes,” said Lightning.Engelhardt huffed. “Hand it to me, now.” Liberty and Lightning stepped back, readying themselves. In response, the troopers cocked their weapons, the anti-magic rifles glowing and whining to life. Liberty assessed the situation, they had the drop on her and Lightning. This would get ugly fast and she didn’t know how fragile the artifact was. “You are in no position to argue. Hand it over,” said Engelhardt firmly.Lightning looked over at Liberty. Liberty looked back, raising an eyebrow. Lightning shrugged, and gestured over to Engelhardt wordlessly.
>>31824022>GEGENMAGISCHTRUPPENGermany, why you gotta use such silly names?
>>31824041To that, Liberty said, “Fine.” She underhand tossed the Grief Seed towards Engelhardt, who quickly scrambled to catch it as if were a fine painting of the Fuhrer himself. She dusted herself off, tightening her fist around the Grief Seed, then smiled at two Magical Girls. “Thank you.” She turned around then began walking back into the woods, escorted by a personal bodyguard of two Gegenmagischtruppen. She stopped towards the platoon leader, then looked back at Liberty. “You know the principles of anti-magic, don’t you, Liberty?” Liberty glared at Engelhardt, balling her hands into fists. “Oh, of course, it was your father’s work after all,” she said. She looked over at the platoon leader. “Kill them.” With that, Engelhardt left. The Gegenmagischtruppen readied their weapons and prepared to fire. Lightning smirked. “So, it’s about twenty to two.” Liberty nodded, steadying herself. “Yep.” “They don’t stand a chance.” Lightning willed her magical naginata to appear, spinning it above her head and then slamming the blade into the ground to the sound of thunder. >>=[| MAGICAL GIRL LIGHTNING! |]=<< Liberty pulled her shields from her gloves, spinning them like saws and letting them come to rest instantly, a glimmer of light hitting the star emblazed on them. >>=[| MAGICAL GIRL LIBERTY!|]=<< > -= FALL OF LIBERTY =- <> - Part One: Idumea - <
>>31823892Nyahaha!>>31823978Hamburger is a variable that could mean any number, on Wendy's end. The other two are just hopeless.
>>31824051The Battle of Agincourt was well known for its one-sidedness. There, the English stopped the French with huge amounts of arrows as the latter came rushing at them on horseback and on foot through a muddy field. Massive casualties for the French ensued, and it still serves today as an important lesson in rushing a superior force that has the advantage even despite outnumbering them. A Gegenmagischtruppen howled as he rushed at Liberty, anti-magic machete held high over his head. Liberty turned around after bashing one’s skull in, then slid down to a crouch and slammed her shield’s rim against the trooper’s knee to a meaty crunch. The trooper fell over, gripping his leg. Lightning dropped down from a flash of violet energy, smashing the trooper’s neck with her boot and slicing a charging trooper in half at the chest with her naginata casually. Liberty back-flipped over her and then tossed her shield at a trooper, smashing his rifle in his hands. She tossed her other shield, applying a good spin to it as the shield zoomed and flew right into the trooper’s gut with a loud ping, sending him flying into a tree trunk. Liberty’s shields returned to her like boomerangs, and then shrunk to buckler size at her command. Lightning looked around, a bit peeved that twenty guys specifically trained to kill Magical Girls just got wrecked by them. Their corpses and body parts all laid on the ground, blood pooling into the dirt. “Man,” said Lightning. “I was expecting a challenge.” “We’re not out of the woods yet,” said Liberty as they stood in the woods. “We have to get that artifact.”
>>31824068They blazed through the woods, hopping over roots, smashing through trees, jumping through branches and shrub. They didn’t have time to admire the long-thought extinct fauna of Skull Island. Not even the killer birds or insects could catch them as they flew past, disturbing the forest and leaving a wake of floating leaves, kicked up dirt, and scorched grass. The two of them stopped at the edge of a steep cliff, right outside of the forest. Liberty pointed, yelling, “There!” She pointed across the deep valley and towards the convoy of vehicles moving up the steep narrow mountain road. Everything from armored cars, to tanks, to halftracks and trucks. Thirty vehicles to be precise. Right behind the leading vehicle was a heavy car with Engelhardt sitting comfortably in the passenger seat. Lightning grinned, gripping her naginata at the ready and crouching at a pounce. “Let’s do this!” she said. Liberty stepped behind Lightning and then brought her shields up. She spun around for a punch at Lightning, bringing the full broadside of her shield at Lightning. Lightning jumped at Liberty, feet first. With a loud ping, she went sailing across the valley like a rocket. She slammed full force into the middle vehicle, an unlucky truck full of troops, sending it flying into the mountainside full force and crushing the men inside. Lightning flashed into the air above her and landed in the bed of a halftruck, slicing and dicing her way through the troops inside casually.
>>31824078Okay, that was one thing done. Liberty tossed her shields across the valley one by one. Then she jumped, using her shields as stepping stones to get across. At the final jump, she hopped up with great power and landed on the hood of another truck, sending it end over end on top of another truck, sending it out of control and flying right off the road into the valley below. Liberty landed on the road with a dusty thud then caught the next vehicle coming, hopping into the back. Right amongst a squad of Gegenmagischtruppen armed with shields and stunprods. Liberty held her arms out, and her shields flew back to her wrists. It’s time for a little bit of freedom. They all charged at her in the narrow space of the truck, to which Liberty punched and bashed their faces in. One tried for a stab at her gut with his stunprod, only for Liberty to sidestep, grab him by the neck and toss him under the wheels of the following vehicle. With the bed of the truck secure, she hopped up onto the cab and then swung the door open, quickly pulling a stormtrooper out and tossing him off the roadside and into the valley. She swung inside feet first, kicking the driver out, slamming him into the mountainside. Liberty quickly found her footing, and then sat up in the driver’s seat, to the sight of the Panzer II in front turning the turret around at Liberty. The autocannon aimed and blasted the cab with a full burst of 20mm armor-piercing high-explosive rounds. Good thing Liberty ducked at the last minute, as the truck’s engine was now ruined and completely on fire, not to mention the cab looked a bit like melted Swiss cheese now.
>>31824059It's -Hamburger though. So, negative, and worse than Chiaki.
>>31824087“Heads up!” Lightning hopped over Liberty’s truck, yelling as she brought her naginata over her head, then landed behind the tank, slicing the tank in half with a burst of violet violent energy. The two pieces glowed red at the cuts as they split off in two different directions, one going off the cliff and the other crashing into the mountainside. The unfortunate crew bailed out end over end. Lightning backflipped over and next to Liberty, grinning. “Impressed?” she asked. Liberty stood up as the truck began snaking out of control. “I will be if we catch Engelhardt. Let’s go!” Liberty and Lightning jumped away from the truck, letting it explode violently behind them as they caught the next vehicle, a halftrack right behind Engelhardt’s personal car. Engelhardt raised herself up from her seat, looking to see Liberty and Lightning make short work of the occupants in the halftrack’s bed. She motioned to the four girls in uniform sitting in back, to which they stood and hopped onto the hood of the halftrack. They grinned, drawing their weapons, fine swords and blades glowing with anti-magical energy. Liberty gritted her teeth, glaring at the one holding the two Knives. “You guys again.” >>=[| KNIVES, SABRE, COURT SWORD, AND RAPIER |]=<<>>=[| Engelhardt's Ace Anti-Magical Girls |]=<< Knives said, “Liberty, we should stop meeting like this!” The other girls stood behind her, readying their Sabre, Rapier, and Court Sword respectively. “I would respect something a little more…” she licked her sharp teeth, her eyes brimming with madness. "… romantic.”Lightning huffed. “Like hell!” She swung her naginata, only for Knives to block it, balancing right along the edge of the halftrack’s wall. Rapier stood behind her, at the ready.
>>31824095No, "Hamburger" implies a bad thing! So negative hamburger is probably a positive modifier.
>>31824095Variables can be negative numbers. Probably. Shit.
>>31824109>Hamburger>bad thingExcuse me, anon?
>>31824095I'm going to draw Wendy failing at push-ups when I get home from work tonight. Someone remind me over twitter in eight hours
>>31824108Liberty hopped onto the other wall, keeping her feet steady as Court Sword and Sabre, the twin girls, drew their weapons at her in identical stances. The two girls slashed and sliced at Liberty’s shield, forcing her onto the back wall as the halftrack shook with every bump and rock in the road. “You could be more!” said Court Sword. “You could be superior!” said Sabre. “You could be one of us!” they both said. Liberty ducked a slash then uppercut Court Sword off the halftrack and back into Engelhardt’s car. She then shield bashed Sabre back into the bed. To that, Liberty said, “With a performance like that, I’m not keen.” She hopped onto the halftrack’s hood, then skipped across onto the trunk of Engelhardt’s car. “Give up the Grief Seed, Engelhardt!” Engelhardt grinned madly, standing her seat and holding the Grief Seed in her hands. “Or what, you’ll kill me?” Liberty smacked the rim of her shield into Engelhardt’s chest, doubling her over and dropping the Seed in the backseat. Liberty scrambled to pick it up, only for Rapier to hop over and slash at her, drawing blood across Liberty’s cheek. Too close. The two fought, throwing punches and slashes, uppercuts and stabs, but neither managing to land a good hit on each other. Rapier chuckled as she brushed her braided ponytail off her shoulder. “You can’t hope to defeat me! I am Lady Engelhardt’s most favored swordmaster!” She was immediately checked by Knives’ body plowing into her at full speed, knocking the both of them onto the road. Lightning hopped onto the trunk, smiling. “Ha! You owe me!” she said.
>>31824110How are you so bad at numbers, Noodlearms?
>>31824120>>31824134Sh...she really isn't in Midori-esque shape, dammit...>>31824134SHUT UP
>>31824124Liberty rolled her eyes then picked up the Grief Seed. The driver made a move for a pistol, only for Lightning to quickly slice his head off, his body falling out of the car and sending it spinning out of control. It caught a rock on its wheel, and Liberty and Lightning hopped onto the road right before it capsized, throwing its occupants onto the ground. The two Magical Girls quickly dusted themselves off and checked that they had the Grief Seed still. Liberty held it in its hands, it was still no worse for wear. Then they turned around to see the lead vehicle. A massive armored truck backing up to them. The doors on back flew open as the hulking trooper stepped out, the ground shattering from his sheer weight. He stood at seven feet, clad in the heaviest armor, wielding a 30mm Cannon, his face hidden behind gasmask and helmet. His eyes were obscured by the glowing red lenses of his gasmask. On his belt were three soul gems, their lights dimmed as they shook and clattered with every step he took. Lightning and Liberty balked, stepping backwards as he climbed out of the truck, cocking the Cannon and letting his immense shadow engulf them. They knew who he was. >>=[| THE STORM ACE |]=<<>>=[| Tier One Wundersoldaten and Ace Magical Girl Hunter |]=<<
>>31824120Good, good. Priorities are firmly in order.
>>31824068>Troops specifically made and trained to kill magical girls are complete pushoversReminds me that I need to start reading UQ holder. A squad of anti-immortal troops showed up and instead of getting whipped by the immortal MC they actually manhandle his ass. /a/ had a field day.
>>31824149His cannon whirred as he brought it up to his hip. Liberty and Lightning jumped out of the way as he fired a full burst of 30mm Minengeschoss ammunition, blasting the road to pieces and setting nearby moss and brush aflame on contact. Lightning flash stepped around to his side and swung, only for the Storm Ace to block it with his cannon and push her away. Liberty charged, her shields spinning like circular saws and glowing with red hot energy. The Storm Ace dropped his cannon and planted his feet firmly on the ground, catching both punches from Liberty in his hands. Liberty pushed against him, her shields cutting into the Storm Aces hands, the smell of burnt flesh not even affecting her as the Storm Ace took the damage in the same way that a mountain took wind erosion. "He's mine!" Lightning yelled as she recovered. She rushed at him, only for the Storm Ace to grab on tight to Liberty's shields and toss her right at Lightning, knocking them both to the ground on top of each other. They quickly picked themselves up and looked to see a charging squad of Gegenmagischtruppen running at them past the Storm Ace.The two Magical Girls charged in return, bashing, punching, and slicing their way through. The troopers tried firing their rifles, their shots getting absorbed by Liberty's shields or missing Lightning entirely. Liberty punched and threw troopers out of her way, but the Storm Ace cut in with a hard fist to the face, sending her sliding across the ground and into the back of the truck's wheel. Lightning grabbed a fallen trooper's rifle and fired full auto at the Storm Ace, the bullets putting visible holes into the Storm Ace's heavy armor, but doing nothing else but get his attention. He stomped over and backhanded Lightning, sending her to the dirt ground. Lightning yelled as she held her cheek, "Why won't you die!?"
>>31824168The Storm Ace responded with a boot to her face, being only a good step away from crushing her head against the ground. Lightning yelled incoherently, kicking and screaming. "Let her go!" shouted Liberty as she tossed her shield at the Storm Ace. He caught it an inch from his face, throwing it to the ground. Liberty rushed at him, screaming as she punched the Storm Ace in the gut, forcing him off Lightning. The Storm Ace took Liberty's punches like a complete champion, then raised his arm to punch. Liberty quickly brought her shield up, blocking the punch with a loud clang which echoed throughout the valley. The weight of the Storm Ace's punch dented her shield with an imprint of his fist and forced her a few inches into the ground. Lightning got up and stepped next to Liberty, brandishing her naginata as the Storm Ace pulled his fist from Liberty's shield and stepped back. Liberty willed her dropped shield to return to her free wrist and prepared herself as reinforcements came in, more Gegenmagischtruppen, lesser Storm Elite, and larger and more powerful Magischjaeger wielding chainguns. They stepped back, wielding their weapons defensively as the guns were brought to bear. Numbers were just about to win the day. Engelhardt and her four girls stepped out from the crowd, apparently no worse for wear. Engelhardt's face was hardened by a bit of frustration. "Enough games, Lady Liberty. The Grief Seed. Now." Lightning said, "We can take you all on! Come at us!" Liberty nudged her with her elbow, urging her to shut up."What's so important about this thing?" asked Liberty. "Is it worth sending a quarter of the Magisch Korps at us?" "I'd sacrifice the entire Korps for one," said Engelhardt. She held up a hand, to which the troopers raised their rifles, cocking them threateningly. "You know I honor my word, Liberty."
>>31824176Liberty and Lightning frowned, standing back to back. There must have been dozens, but with the Storm Ace and the Four, they'd get overwhelmed eventually. Not to mention Engelhardt's true power. Then Liberty's ears perked up. The air was getting disturbed. Liberty grinned. "You want it, Engelhardt?" She willed her shields back into her gloves, holding the Grief Seed out. Engelhardt looked confused a second. Lightning stepped behind Liberty, grabbing her arm tight. "Come get it," said Liberty. In a few seconds, Liberty and Lightning were pulled up by a ladder hanging from a Hughes Autogyro, piloted by Magical Girl Bomber. Engelhardt swore in German, yelling loudly for her troops to fire. Tracers filled the sky as the Autogyro ducked and weaved, missing shots as Bomber expertly piloted the contraption away. Lightning and Liberty clung to the ladder, grinning as Engelhardt screamed to the heavens. Liberty yelled, "So long you lousy Kraut bastards!" Engelhardt screamed to the sky as her troops rushed to their vehicles, keen on following her. "Curse you, Liberty!" The Autogyro flew away as Liberty and Lightning climbed into the backseat, ready to return to their zeppelin of call.> The world of tomorrow needs a new kind of hero!> Tune in next time for another exciting episode of Magical Girl Liberty!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5I_74MVsP0I
>>31824197Thanks for the write-up, it was fun.
>>31824197What do you know about that, my math was right.Thanks for reading, pastebin is right here. I think next time I'll just relegate these things to pastebins.http://pastebin.com/pwjiDv0i
>We lie to Malal about Kharn's condition>Kharn earns her epithet when she kills the 9th's Culexuses during WalpurgisnachtHMMM. I WONDER IF THOSE TWO THINGS ARE CONNECTED.
>>31824209Nicely done, Schteel.
>>31824197And here I was just thinking it read like an old pulp story. Might want to work on the style, though. The action gets clunky in a lot of places and unnecessary writer-tidbits, whatever you call them, break the flow and slow things down.
How does one perform a negative pushup, anyway?
>>31824305I guess one could try to perform some sort of pull-down?
>>31824305They have their knees on the ground and their butt in the air. They do a pushup so badly it makes them less fit.
>>31824305Someone pulls you up and then pushes you down
>>31824318>knees on the ground, butt in the air
>>31824355Midori is the lewdest.
>>31824404Only if 10 > Hamburger
>>31824404No, Wendy is
>>31824464Wendy's pretty lewd but she's not a slut like Midori
>>31824458The thumbnail makes her look like she's melting into a puddle
>>31824480Speaking of sluts, why isn't Enishi in the running for lewdest?
>>31824499An accurate description of her reactions towards Chiaki
>>31824318So Wendy and Midori competing in a 'push-up' contest should basically be Chiaki's greatest fantasy that doesn't involve alcohol or pancakes.
>>31824518Wendy's in better shape than that, it's just that everyone seems vulnerable and soft next to Hugeculture.
>>31824508>why isn't Enishi in the running for lewdest?Come to think of it, she offered herself pretty openly, didn't she?
>>31824537Facts are inconsequential in the face of jiggling butts.
>>31824537Her combat track record begs to differ. Burger~ :3c
>>31823970>>31823994>>31824022>>31824041>>31824051>>31824068>>31824078>>31824087>>31824108>>31824124>>31824149>>31824168>>31824176>>31824197>TFW zhe MC of any WWII related fiction ist alvays American, British, or sometimes Russian, but never German.>TFW you vill never take over zhe world>TFW you vill never exterminate genetically inferior untermenschen>TFW zhe Allies will never be frowned upon for zheir own dubious morals during zhe war>TFW zhere vill never be a glorious zhird reichGOD FUCKING DAMMITWhy did Nazi's in Fantasyland Quest have to die? That was the best fucking thing ever.
>>31824537Sure, sure. Whatever you say.
>>31824598get out nazi scheisse
>>31824508>>31824589Enishi is just too inexperience. Sure she has a good slut attitude, but no slut appeal.
>>31824598i cri everytiem D':
>>31824598I dunno, the US gets some shit for Dresden, though probably not as much as they warrant
>>31824658Don't worry about it, no push-ups just makes Wendy more appealing to Chiaki!
>>31824658You know this means that I'll have to do my own Nyoron :3c comic now and end it on Burger~, right?
>>31824693I never thought Wendy would be on that end of nyoron~. Annie, sure, with Wendy as the dude, but...Poor Wendy. I'll make you cool again. They'll see. They'll all see.
>>31824708She might just be too cute to be cool
>>31824722Noooo she's a killerrrrrqueeeeen gunpowder gelatine dynamite with a laser beam
>>31824708It's too late. Wendy's too lewd and cute to be cool now.
>>31824727Back off, Killer Queen is my theme song. I'll cut you
>>31824741Motherfucker come to 'Murica and say that
>>31824708Does Wendy have a little sister? Oneesama Wendy would be cool.
>>31824801She's got a couple of girls that are imoutos, but no biological little sisters.
>>31824757I'll go up there, say it to your face, and then put you in a kennel! >>31824830Need to do something for Yuu and Misaka some time
>>31824830Does she have a piano teacher?
>>31824844Well now you're just flirting!And yeah, I should do more with Lily and Eve.>>31824867She did, and she mostly remembers how to play.
>>31824830When do we meet stabby hamburger's imoutos
>>31824830I don't believe you
>>31824888>Well now you're just flirting!You'd like that, wouldn't you, hmm?
>>31824920Lily's had small parts in a couple of writeups but probably won't show up in the main quest for a while, and even then not in any strong sense. I've been surprised before.Eve is pretty firmly in the Eighth and probably won't show up in the main quest, but may feature a little bit more in another thing I'm kicking around.They're both major characters in an AU a few years down the line where the Unified Nations Party of Japan used the Yakumo to control witches and launch a large-scale attack on the United States as Warchief Lily Hartford of the Eighth and Eve Pearlharbor, the successor of the will of the El Santo Student Council, the US's finest defense against the nationalist puella.That is actually a thing I've kicked around writing, but probably won't actually do.
>>31825039>used the YakumoGo on...
>>31824598Because the accent of a germanborn person speaking english is entierly different from that you just presented and you are a tardlet that has been taught by Hollywood.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fH55rwgx1nYThis is how it actually sounds.
>>31825112keep your shitty old lady waifu out of this archivalI'm totally saving that image though, delicious suits.
>>31825136Not my fault you can't respect elegance~
>>31825190You CALL that elegance but all I see is some kind of granny trash.
>>31825207Sorry, I didn't realize you were into children. I'm sure this is more to your tastes?
>>31825217500 is plenty legal in most statesFight me ArchieYukari is pretty cool too though, and Hina best girl
Just fuck already x 2
>>31825274I think I can take ya, negative hamburger.Hina's a pretty cool guy. Can't hate Miracle Hinacle.
>thread ends with toehoe fightsCould be worse.
>>31824234Don;t forget she also completely eradicate's the 2nd's dark Templars too.
>>31825457>Don;t forget she also completely eradicate's the 2nd's dark Templars too.Maybe she already did so? We don't know who the assassins were.
Missing the thread again leaves me feeling very torn up.
>>31825629That doesn't really sound like the Dark Templars' MO
>>31825673You should clearly move to a better timezone then.
>>31825673That joke left me in stitches
>>31825683Yeah if Mala's flashback is any indication, the Dark Templars are honor bound simpletons who announce their presence and intent to do honorable combat Sneaky bullshit from the shadows sounds more like the sixteenth.
>>31825754While a very harsh way of putting it, that's about right. The Second does have a Callidus division (like just about every other Officio) but the Templars sure ain't it.
>>31825780Just saying, anyone who acts like Solitare in a setting like this isn't all that bright Burger-chan.
>>31825859Varies from person to person just like any other group, really, but they're not likely to skulk around.
>>31825683Agreed. Officio who is most concerned about taking down witches in the most efficient manner is least likely to employ Callidus'es in their operations. However I deposit that them being invovled in the attack, while unlikely, is still a possibility. The losses suffered by their Black Templar squad fit the timeframe. They are foremost Witch hunting group so supposedly they have an advantage against Kharn due to the things done to her in the past. The bodies were removed from the site, which makes a cover up possible by showing up after the Walpurgisnacht has blown over to make their claims of betrayal. The way Kharn disects her victims is distinctive enough to act as proof for such an occassion. Lastly I'd say with how Ahriman turned about to be cuckoo for cocopuffs, there is a chance some are like that in other officios.Now that is just baseless speculation on my part. QB was informed by Malal what happened to Kharn, so if the 2nd's claims of betrayal were filthy lies then he would have known and acted accordingly. Feel free to disregard my ramblings.
I didn't even realize there was a thread yesterday, and now after reading it and this one:WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DOOOOOO?
>>31826101Green hair is the danger
>>31826101We needed some healing, anon. Don't mind us.