Last Thread : http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/31544711/Twitter : https://twitter.com/81DEsW1xz4NYou were deep underground, in the lower levels of the old mega city. When they started constructing the Annihilation Wall, people and machines had been mining into the old aquifer bedrock, sprawling out into an impregnable fortress. Transportation was the worst part of it though; if a tunnel was deemed to have integrity, they didn’t bother reinforcing it and smoothing the hewn sides, so the electric cars would just bounce and rattle and bash against the walls.Couldn’t hurt you of course, but Lauren was only human. Your wife was sitting with her legs up on the opposite side of the car, her head resting on your chest. “You’re nervous,” she said as the tunnel started sloping up, to the outer reaches of UNAAF HQ. She was right.“I don’t like not knowing things, especially things I can’t really improvise around. What am I supposed to do if the tests come back bad?” you respond as you squeeze her tighter against you. The car bounces, but your grip on her doesn’t slacken in the least.“It will just mean that I’m only human. Most people call that normal.”“Lauren, I pledged myself to you for life, and I’m set to live for the next few centuries. I want both of us to make it out of this war, and live in the world we’ve been fighting for,” you tell her as electric lights start appearing on the tunnel walls. You were nearing the main complex, and the hospital will just be a little ways beyond that.
“We could just get out now, couldn’t we? Live inside the Annihilation Walls like everyone else. UNAAF certainly wouldn’t like it though,” she said as she tilted her head back to look at you. She was relaxed somehow.You smirked and took your hand off her, placing it on the metal of the car. With half a thought, you shot the car with enough electricity to bounce the suspension and send Lauren flying through the air with a short squeak, and onto your lap. “Yeah, but what are they going to say?” you asked, wrapping your arms around her waist. “I tamed the fucking Dragon. There is literally nothing they can do to hurt me.”“Then let’s do it. When you get back from your next mission, let’s retire. Transplant or no.”“You know I can’t do that. I’m their last weapon against the alpha demons. I’m not just protecting you,” you said, pressing your chin into the side of her neck. The stubble on your chin was scratchy, but you knew she liked it.The car finally started to slow, and you could hear the static noise of life. Most of the hospital was automated anymore, but there was still a staff of a few dozen nurses alongside the patients. Their souls shone like beacons through the stone, but even that was overpowered by the machinery
“Then after the Annihilation Wall is finished. What good is a wall if we can’t hide behind it for a little while?” she asked. You smiled. Her hair always smelled like that flowering vine you found in the wastes and brought back to her. An appropriate smell.“Sure, I’ll make it happen,” you said as the car finally stopped.“Good. I’m tired of the military life. We need to do something fun. Like, I don’t even know what, but we’ll figure something out other than VR sims. Maybe like, surfing, or something weird like that,” she said as she slid out of your arms and off your lap to exit the car.You laughed. “I don’t think they can make a board able to keep me afloat, and not break in half when I step on it,” you said as you pulled yourself out of the car behind her.“Oh, what’s this? The great and powerful Josh will be bested by water?” “Well, I could just levitate the whole time, but I don’t think you’d call that surfing.” The two of you enter the hospital laughing, but the nervous knot in your gut returns when you start walking towards your private room to speak with the AI and get Lauren’s lab results. When the two of you stop in front of the private terminal, Lauren elbows you in the side. “Lighten up or Lyrra will think you’re dying. Remember that time we ran into Victoria? She thought you were having a heart attack.”
“You mean the time she started hitting on you and you were just like ‘yeah okay, sounds good’ wink?” you ask, imitating her voice almost perfectly thanks to Scath’s genes.“Yeah that time. You totally killed the mood when you had to start fighting off the orderly drones. Well, maybe not for her.”“I know she’s part me, but she’s still my ex.”“Then I don’t get why you had the problem with it,” she said, elbowing you again.“Greetings Director Thirteen, Subject Thirteen,” the AI Lyrra said as she woke up on the monitor. “Good morning Lyrra, how have you been since I last checked on you? Are those engineers giving you enough processing space?” Lauren asked. She had been the primary developer for the AI, why she was promoted all the way to director. The AI had started as just a pet project with stolen data, but quickly swelled till it was capable of running half the world’s machines.
“It has been exceedingly difficult to estimate the growth of my heuristically generated subroutines to increase my efficiency, but they are doing their best,” Lyrra responded. “But you are here for your test results about whether you are eligible for the transplant of the Transdifferentiation Organ,” Lyrra said before pausing, and staying silent. Lauren quietly entwined her fingers in yours. “I’m sorry,” it finally said. Your heart dropped and you’re sure it probably triggered more than a few medical alerts. Your grip on her tightened while hers went lax.“But your test results have been sealed, by a director order.” Adrenaline flooded your system as your thoughts tripled in speed, running through dozens of scenarios that would cause them to seal her report, and overwhelmingly you already knew what that meant.“What the fuck is that supposed to mean,” you roared as you grabbed the monitor and ripped it from the wall to hold in front of you. Lauren was just standing in shock, but you couldn’t help but reply with force.“I’m sorry Subject Thirteen, but you lack the clearance to override a director’s order,” Lyrra said, the damaged connection making her voice drawn out and staticy.“Lauren, you can do something about this, can’t you?” you asked, your attention wheeling over to her and dropping the monitor to the ground.“Directors can’t override each other. If they don’t want us to know, we’re not going to find out, which means the test came back negative,” she explained as you dropped the broken device to the ground. She was standing strong, but tears were beading up in her eyes. You grabbed her and pulled her tight as you began to cry. “Looks like I’m going to die before you after all.”
As she pressed her face into your chest and cried, you dried your tears. She was clutching your shirt, digging her nails into you as she held on. You scowled at Lyrra’s avatar, and drove your foot through the monitor. There had to be something you could do for her. You just needed a plan, and you knew exactly who could help you.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~You are Joshua Thirteen, UNAAF Special Forces Division Seven. A soldier of the highest degree, and have been fighting the war against the demons for the past eighty years. You were winning the battles, but losing the war. Even in the horrors of war, you built a life for yourself with a woman, Lauren, whom you had saved. But humanity was betrayed, you were betrayed. When you recovered, you found yourself in an unprecedented world, a backwards world living in fear of the demons you very nearly triumphed against.But the strange world you’ve found yourself in is not without allies. The Dragon slumbers nearby. Your lesser demons seem to be scattered around the capitol city of Lyr, though they are resisting your contracts with them. You were just reunited with your younger sister Alice, another child of Special Forces Division Six, and she’s as energetic as always. And if anyone could survive the betrayal that incapacitated you, it would be your brother Matthew, he is surely somewhere in this country, waiting for you to find him.You had just regained a portion of your great strength, the part held by your magpie, when you had to chase the creature down, lest it return to be slaughtered by the palace. When you arrived over the castle walls though, you didn’t encounter guards, or the political elite, or anyone you expected at all. You found Victoria, you vampire who seemed very happy to have the chance to beat the last of her power out of you.>Say something to her>Flee>Stay on the defensive>Other
>>31687395>Say something to her"Looks like you haven't even aged a day."
So yeah, that whole thing was the memories recovered from your magpie. I wish you the best of luck deciphering it, and hope you enjoy the occasional edited story inserted.
>>31687395"Listen, Victoria, I've had a rough day. And I'm planning on doing a bit of...spring cleaning around here. So I'll make you a deal...you return your power, and I will bring you, alive, one person of your choosing so long as it's not someone I already know. You know me, and you know I'll honor my word."
>>31687527...Would you like an explanation of vampire biology in this setting?
>>31687574Probably, yeah...that would be useful.
Do you like the new picture, Frank?
>>31687395>Say something to her"ur a faget and I fukked yo momm!"
>>31687395"before you say something.I have a rebuttal!My penis."Okay, okay> Stay on the defensive"Is there anything I can do to avert this demise?"
>>31687592lets see how well I can sum this up.Two things are important when it comes to the difference between Vampire and Human. The Transdifferentiation Organ, and their poison. Their saliva contains a very peculiar macro-protein structure that science hasn't had the luxury of studying the mechanics of. When they bite you, they will often drain you of enough blood to make you woozy, although this isn't to feed them, they can eat just like a normal person if need be. They drain your blood to make you light headed, and thin your blood to let their poison flow up to the brain easily. There, it will usually deposit along the ocular nerve. This then allows the vampire to impress their will on the victim, order them to do various tasks, but nothing obscene such as suicide or murder of a friend.After enough times feeding on a single victim however, enough poison will accumulate in them to render them into a ghoul, a person incapable of freeing themselves of the vampire's will.On top of this, they are faster, stronger, and have reflexes simply unimaginable by human standards.True to the old stories however, men of faith have been reported to repel them with their holy symbols, but according to the Dragon, that is merely due to their own force of will bolstered by their false beliefs, nothing inherent in their creeds.They don't have a particular weakness to sunlight, but it breaks the poison down rapidly.Questions?>>31687596Yes of course. Why wouldn't I?
>>31687763What does the transdifferentiation organ do?
>>31687815It reverses cellular aging periodically to render the individual immortal. Like the jellyfish.
>>31687395>>OtherForce the fungal symbiote to acknowledge your will
So, I'm sure I may have changed a few votes with that explanation just now, do you all mind linking here and revoting for clarity's sake?>>31687900You've never heard of the immortal jellyfish?http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Turritopsis_dohrnii
>>31687937>OtherForce the fungal symbiote to acknowledge your will
>>31687365>Victoria is our ex>We almost had a three way with her and our wifeDid... did no one notice this?
>>31687763uhm... can they have childs with normal humans ?
>>31687947I'll vote for this, if possible.Nothing like a bit of panic to wrest power from an unwilling subordinate
>>31687986They're sterile. There were only so many of them born when the Dragon emerged, and they've been dying off ever since. That's why they had to defect to the human side of the war.The closest they can get to making a new vampire is making a contract with a human, and that rarely transfers over the mind control.
Sorry for the delay, finals and all. I feel bad taking a revote that only got one post when the first vote got quite a bit more.Regardless, please give me a d100 to determine your current footing with GRD
Rolled 49>>31688196go go booted heel of oppression
“Nice to see you too Victoria. You haven’t aged at all,” you say as she walks over to the edge of the guard tower roof. She smiles and casually retrieves two blades from behind her back. Small things, expertly forged. They certainly wouldn’t be able to do anything to your sword, but you don’t have it and she has the strength to slice your limbs off if you aren’t careful.“How nice of you to say you old bastard. You must be jealous that I still look good while you aged as well as dog,” she responds. She crouches down just a little, her toes just barely over the edge. Anyone else would think she was just going to drop down, but you’re already jumping back by the time she pushes off. The force of her leap rips half the roof off the tower roof, but you’re well clear when she lands where you had been a moment before.“At least guys can look good older. Older women though?” you say, making a grunt of disgust.“Good to hear you telling the truth again, because that’s totally not what you told Lauren. You went on and on about how you’d love her till the day she died. You made a lot of shitty promises back then, didn’t you?” Victoria asks as she starts walking towards you.Glancing down at the courtyard, you can hear a few servants and guards shouting in surprise as the debris lands below, but they shouldn’t be a problem for you. Dealing with Victoria is your issue now, and you don’t have enough strength, in body or hand.1/2
“I need your strength GRD,” you command as you invoke the seal on your chest and drag his consciousness to the surface.The fungus is fully alert, enough to make his previous conversations seem groggy. “She’s not going to kill you until you relinquish her power. If you die, her power goes with it. But that doesn’t mean you can lose the fight. There’s no way I’m going to suffer through healing torture.”“Then I have your aid?”“Temporarily, but we’re cutting a deal while we do this,” he answers as you feel part of his power start to return to your body, but it won’t be enough. You draw the sword that Cyn gave you. It can’t withstand much combat, but it’s better than nothing.>Pose a deal>Force the power from him>Listen to his deal>Stay defensive>Go on the offensive>Flee>Say something else>Other2/2>>31688399bet that hurts.
>>31688469"If only I could remember them..."
>>31688494Screw that fungus. Take your rightful power.
Rolled 83>>31688494>>Force the power from himHis deals have consistently been shitty.>>Say something elseAny promise in particular you're thinking about?
>>31688494Fuck you, GRD. That's my power and you know it.Say something else, "What kinda vengeance will you get from a man who can barely remember what you're so upset about in the first place? Will it truly satisfy you if I die now, not even remembering our time together?"That oughta whet her curiosity
>>31688498You fully remember your time with Victoria. She only contracted with you because she liked you and the two of you were kind of sort of dating, when neither of you were on suicide missions. This was before you met your wife.That aside, she's probably referencing the fact that you fucked off in the drink for a century without relinquishing her power.
>>31688639Bah...wait, I can use this."She's dead, though. Almost all of them are...I've been gone too long."
>>31687301>>31687327>>31687346>>31687365>>31687377>>31687395>dat dumpTime to get reading
>>31688494>Force the power from himhere's my proposition, "give me power, now".>Go on the offensive"so i did shitty promises? where were you the day the HQ got wiped out ? weren't you allied with us ?"
>>31688494Force the power"Maybe I want to change that, Victoria. Maybe...maybe I want to make things right. I've been drowning for a century, and now...I need to make things RIGHT again. And I can start with you."
>>31688494>Force the power from him>Go on the offensiveIf we just flee, couldn't she just find us? Or can she only feel us if we are really close?If she can not find us i vote to flee.
Forcing your power from him has . Give me a d100>90-100 : Perfect Success. Power permanently acquired>70-89 : High Success. Power acquired for this fight>40-69 : Success. Power acquired for this fight, but GRD might interfere.>20-39 : Failure. You will not be able to force power from him for a while>3-19 : High Failure. GRD will have control for a time, but you can resist, and you are stronger than him.>1-2 : Complete Failure
Rolled 90>>31688947We got this.
Rolled 99>>31688947c'mon baby! DADDY NEEDS NEW SHROOM SHOES!
>>31688972>>31688974i love you guys
Rolled 38>>31688947Rollan...damn, man.
>>31688972Well, you got by far the absolute least interesting result.A pityI need another d100 for the actual combat though.And I'll have another story by next thread.
Rolled 52>>31689029I am a master of combat.
>>31688974>Dis rollI am so happy right now, my first goddamn 30+ roll ever
>>31688972Thank you! Finally. Should've done this a long time ago.
“No, there will be no God damned deal,” you growl as you grit your teeth and slice your chest open above GRD’s seal. Victoria immediately recognizes what you’re doing as you invoke the will of your soul. GRD howls as you reach out and grab onto his soul, ripping and tearing it from this blackened tentacles.Victoria dashes forward, pressing the attack as much as she can. But you’ve already gotten hold of most of GRD’s power, and the wall gives you a long distance to retreat along. The clash of steel bounces around the palace as she chases you down, slicing apart the concrete. But you can only afford to keep some of your attention on her. Every few slices, one of them gets through and cuts.Your blackening blood splashes out, and the fungus explodes through your wounds to spread to the air. You can feel his creeping mycelium forcing its way around your body, searching for a way to fight back, but his will is naught, and his power is yours.With all of his strength at your disposal once more, you stop your retreat. Victoria continues the attack, but you manage to catch one of her blades with your sword, and grab her other wrist with your offhand. The two of you lock against each other, barely a foot away, with your feet breaking through the concrete in your attempts to overpower each other.“Doesn’t this bring back memories?” she says.“It’s been a while, but yeah. I won that fight as I recall.”“You had three more demons back then.”“And you had all of your power.”“Better days.”“Dante wanted to kill me as I recall.”“Why do you think I slept with you?” she asks, smirking.>Go for a pin>Break off and flee>Disable her>Say something>Other
>>31689274"The same reason you're going to sleep with me now, I'm assuming." Then go in for the kiss.
You know, you guys could give me some feed back on the six page story I put like an hour into. I worked in a quite a few subtle plot points that you probably want to discuss, right?
>>31689274>Disable herI don't think anything we say could get to her now. Maybe disabling her and then leaving her a note would get to her better.
>>31689321yes plzand then suck our power back through her mouth
>>31689324I loved it. It's why I KNOW this will work.
>>31689324they were ok
>>31689324this anon here>>31688791I got into the current story since i realized it would take me too long to read. I decided to read it when i have time between updates.
>>31689274>>Say somethingWhat the hell happened, victoria? I wake up a couple days ago and its several centuries later than it should be, everyone's living in the stone ages and all of my demons are gone.
So the vote is to go in for a kiss.I'm going to need a d100 for this
Rolled 61>>31689516Rollan for seduction
According to Gabe in hugbox, we need a smutfag in here stat if we want the kiss to work correctly.Go man go!
>>31689530That gotta get her wet.
>>31689535like kiss smut or....?what is he looking for here?
>>31689580Silver-Tongued was trying to argue that she'd be more helpful post orgasmFrank said "get a smutfag on that and we'll talk"Frank is a whore for fan content. I doubt he was being sarcastic.
Some observations I've made. First, most noticable to me: Lauren was the crucial actor in making Lyrra. Obviously Lyrra Lyr blah blah blah but that's not what I found interesting. At the base we found Lauren in, the AI was totally fucked up. Couldn't render, couldn't talk, was the reason why HQ couldn't connect to the site. Now, while the first reaction would be to assume that the Animator demon was responsible, that doesn't really make sense. If it had enough presence in the base to damage but not destroy its AI, which is probably more particular than just breaking it, surely it could steal the Compass. Not only that, but leaving the AI alone benefits it. If HQ was able to look at the site they would see that the Compass was still there. This would make retrieving it an even higher priority, people would be sent there sooner, the Demon would get its chance sooner.Similarly, the researchers would have no reason to damage the AI either for that very reason. But something must have. With these things in mind, let's consider that Lauren snuck up on us right by the AI Core. Hmm.Then there's the stuff with the organ report. Now, this doesn't make sense. Lauren is blocked out from a report by the AI she built? What sort of enterprising young AI dude lets that happen? Sounds like bullshit to me. So that's a lot of suspicious stuff surrounding Lauren.
>>31689686Bravo.You'd have more answers to this if I had continued the flashback. I'll have to do that eventually.But I kind of doubt the thread you're pulling on leads where you think it does.
>>31689535>>31689609If there was smut, what would happen, exactly? We talking angry hate-fucking, flashback, what?
“What the hell happened? I spend a century regenerating after someone blows my brains out, and the world is back in the stone age?” you ask as you hold her back. Speed was always her specialty, not brute strength. But there’s still enough force between the two of you that you can feel the guard on your blade cracking.“You can blame Lyrra for that. She figured things’d be more stable this way,” Victoria answers, but her breath is strained.“So what the hell happened to HQ? And me? Where the hell were you?”“I was away. You sent me away just before it happened. I should be asking you what the hell happened. Half my kin died in that gas attack.”You furrow your brow a think for a moment. You can tell that she’s trying to figure a way out of this stalemate, but you’re certain she’s telling the truth about the attack. Which means you knew about the attack before it happened, so the betrayal must have started sooner.Then the guard starts to crack more, and you put the thoughts aside for the moment. With a quick jerk, you push both blades away, snapping the guard in half. As her blade breaks through, you pull back abruptly. Her eyes go wide as she falls forward. Her blade slices through a good deal of your bicep, but you’ll be able to heal that.As she falls into your bloody arms, you quickly wrap your free arm around her, pinning her arm to her side and pulling her in close. And then it’s just like dancing as you gently grab her, pull her in for a kiss, and twirl her around, flaring her hair through the air. She’s far too surprised to react, let alone return he kiss properly. You come to a stop when you press her up against the crenellation. Her blade in the air falls out of her hand when she hits the stone, even though you made sure to keep most of the impact on your arm.You pull back just a bit, grinning. Her mouth is agape, and she’s blushing.>Go for the pin>Disable her>Say something>Push your luck
>>31690114>Push luckdid you really expect people to pick anything else?
>>31690114>>Say somethingI missed you too.
>>31690148Last time they pushed their luck I got like two or three QB deals if I recall correctly.
>>31690114>Go for the pinMaximum SuggestiveCaptcha: ham Isolust
>>31690175kI don't mind taking some of thosein fact, I'd prefer to have 2-3 out
>>31690114>>Go for the pinThere'll be time to fuck her later.
>>31690175>QB dealWhat is this?
>>31690094not a flashback, that'd be lame. But the way this scene is going, I dont' think it'd be hatefucking so much as shamefully giving in to the sexual tension. Since there is implicit NTR.
>>31690114>Go for the pin
>>31690256Pass any roll you want, except overpower rolls, with the only catch is I get to make you fail a roll in the future. Deal is always available.
>>31690114>Go for the pin"I recall you liked it rought"
>>31690114>Say somethingI've missed you. Could we not fiht please? I just woke up after a century, and somebody will pay for what they did. I need you with me.
>>31690114>Go for the pinnot sure we should push it in, but yeah, there's a lot of tension...
>>31690290Oh man, that sounds evil.
>>31690344Why do you think I call it a QB deal?Going for the pin overwhelmingly has itI need a d100 for that
>>31690275Like this?>You press her body up against the wall again, your chest meeting hers with force. Your tongue begins to explore her mouth, and she bites at it, painfully, but not hard enough to properly dissuade you. You grab her free arm around the wrist, and pin it to the wall. After a long, painful moment, you pull your tongue back from her mouth, tasting your own blood and breathing heavily. You eye her, hungrily, and her expression seems to challenge you as she meets your gaze.
>>31690431My dick says yes. Don't know about anyone else though.You might want to pry a full appearance out of Gabriel for Victoria though.
>>31690426Damn you anon
>>31690495>You might want to pry a full appearance out of Gabriel for Victoria though.Tch, you only need the vaguest of appearances - tall, short, petite, busty, etc. The real problem is that I have no idea what she's actually like as a person.
>>31690426haha oh wow
>>31690527 i still think we should have a "best of X" system (with X depending on our power level)... oh well that deal is really tempting right now...i mean, what happens if we fail? we'll probably go back to fighting her without an opportunity like this, to stop the fight and talk it all out ghah, let's do this
>>31690579the dice god giveth, the dice god taketh away.
>>31690527wow, forgot my trip. >>31690534Tall, very athletic but she's let herself get a bit soft, long blond hair. She has the kind of intense stare that makes a man stop and think for a moment, just long enough for her to sink her fangs in.As for her personality, that will take quite a while of story progression to fully explore. But she's bitter about being nearly alone for the century, and due to the contract has remarkable personality overlap with Joshua.>>31690565have a .gif
>>31690499>>31690527>>31690579>>31690598Oh, come on, you guys. 24 isn't that bad. 23% of all results are worse than it.A 24 is roughly equivalent to a 13 in a 3d20-best-of system.
>>31690606Who is that cat, I see it all over 4chan it even got a banner
>>31690678kyubi, from puella magi madoka watch it and you'll get it
>>31690678The alien from Madoka that offers little girls poisoned deals to become magical girls and have their wishes fulfilled, only to bring greater despair.
>>31690606>As for her personality, that will take quite a while of story progression to fully explore.Yeah, I know. But you can't write a proper smut scene without having a good grasp on the characters' personalities. It single-handedly defines... I dunno, half the scene, at least.
>>31690730I'm bad at smut. Can't really help you, but I guess I'll start writing with that 24
>>31690628You might want to check your math
>>31690760http://anydice.com/program/21d9 (hit "at least")76% of results in 1d100 are at least 24. 78.4% of results in highest-of-3d20 are at least 13. (If you include critfails, it's 14.)
>>31690824>76%*77%, fuck me sideways.
>>31690824Yeah, my bad, I skimmed and thought you were talking about 3d100 best of
“My, you haven’t acted like this since you met Lauren. I guess you regenerated your spine and all those whip scars,” Victoria says as you eye the blade still pressed against your chest. Getting out of this position without taking that through a rib will be tricky.“You do what you do when a girl likes it rough,” you respond as you work your blade across her back to control where it will fall.“Aw, how romantic of you. You’re just working so hard to endear yourself to me, I understand I really do. We should totally have make up sex. It’s been so long,” she says, pouting her lips just a bit.You roll your eyes and take a deep breath. You yank her off the wall, dropping your blade on the ground to grab her arm. But as your slide your arm along her back, you notice a third blade hidden beneath a thin hood hanging from her back. AS you fumble about, trying to pin her arms properly, you see her drop the large blade. An instant later she has the third blade buried in your lung, but you have her pinned and bent over the adjacent crenel. You can feel the blood filling your lung, and you gasp out a painful breath before sealing the wound as best you can.“How long do you think you can keep this up? I know stamina was your forte and all, but come on,” Victoria asks as she simply lets you press her against the concrete, her arms twisted around behind her back, and you can see your blood dripping down onto her. It will be a while before you fully recover from this.>Pull the blade out>Say something>Disable her>Other
>>31691007Description for this thread>You could cut the sexual tension with a knife.>Oh wait, that's my lung.
>>31691007>>Say something"Please stop trying to kill me" or words to that effect.
>>31691007>>Say somethingIf it means anything to you, I'm sorry I was gone for the last century. I never asked for this.Then>Disable her
>>31691007>Disable herCan we disable her already. Cant you people see that talking will not stop her?
https://archive.foolz.us/tg/thread/30965382/#30971604This you Frank?
>>31691007>Say something"i know you can be as stubborn as me, so let's see if i can hold you long enough for you to calm down"
>>31691007>>Pull the blade out
>>31691117>https://archive.foolz.us/tg/thread/30965382/#30971604That post is literally over a month old. Why do you even remember that?It's not masterbation if she's described as our ex.
>>31691222>Why do you even remember that?I read every QTG and have a pretty good memory.
So, vote is to disable herI'll need a d100
>>31691259We are on fire today.
Rolled 61>>31691245https://archive.foolz.us/tg/thread/30889845/#30890385>I'm going to include a younger adopted sister who is a three hundred year old loli who has gone turboslut because no one ever wants a ten year old girl. Incest is best cesthttps://archive.foolz.us/tg/thread/30889845/#30890487>And I'll make MC married to a missing wife he is seaeching for in vain. >>And then I'll have the prime waifu ctually be his granddaughter from the future, and the other wifu will be a ruke 63 of himself.
>>31691360I remember those post now that brought them up. I actually took part in that discussions.
“Look, I really wish we could have just talked this out and come to an agreement, instead of this,” you say as you glance around. The guards are lighting lanterns and looking for you by now. You can’t stay here forever.“You want to talk? Give me all of my power back, right now,” Victoria states before she kicks your foot as hard as she can. It hurts, but not enough to make you flinch.“You know I can’t let you do that. I need this power. I have to keep fighting, at least until I kill whoever betrayed me.”“You’re not going to, I can assure you of that,” she says quietly. “Whatever you’re going to do, be quick about it or the guards are going to think we’re having sex over the side of the wall.”“And why won’t I?” you ask, leaning over her to growl into her ear.“Because,” she says, looking at you from the corner of her eye. “You’re still alive. They didn’t finish the job. If they didn’t have a plan to deal with you, they would have burned every cell in your body rather than let you regenerate for a century. You’re just a pawn. You always have been, and always will. Now let me go.”You scowl and pull back. “Time for a promotion,” you state before releasing one of her arms and driving your elbow into the back of her skull. A twist with your other hand snaps her right arm in half. She screams in pain and twists around to try to kick you away as you rip the blade from you lung. Before she can plant her feet on you, you slam it through her sternum.She stares at you blankly, blood dripping down her chest before sliding off onto the stone. She won’t be able to pursue you in this condition, and it probably won’t kill her. You can hear the guards shouting, seems that they’ve caught sight of your battle.>Grab your magpie and flee>Leave both of the demons and flee>Disable the guards >Take her with you>Say something>Other
I'm not against a little 300 year old loli notIncest. Shes an adult a healthy sex drive is to be expected.
>>31691677It might be better to take her with us while she's weak and finish dealing with her. Leaving her behind will just give her time to regroup and plan. Take the magpie too, assuming we don't have to carry it or something.
>>31691677>>Take her with youSo a question here - can we give her power back without killing ourselves?
Leave both of them and flee, she wont kill the magpie. It would kill us and in turn screw her over as well.
>>31691738The magpie isn't going to kill you. Mostly because it's physically incapable of doing so.>>31691730Yes, but she's 15% of your raw power, and provides a slew of combat necessary abilities.
>>31691677>>Leave both of the demons and fleeShe'll probably take better care of the bird than us anyway.
>>31691677the only person we'll have a hard time to kill (not physically) hmm... i guess we all guessed it... >Take her with you
>>31691761>>31691738OH, I understand what you meant now. Yes, she isn't going to kill the magpie and by extension you
>>31691677>Grab them both and flee.>Leave them somewhere noone will see until she wakes up
>Grab them both and flee.if we leave the magpie alone they are probably going to kill it.
>>31691761I was ok with overpowering GRD cause it was essentially an evil id version of ourselves. The magpie was little more than an animal. She is a person, who apparently gave us this power voluntarily and was allied to our cause. She has legitimate complaints against us. I'd vote to give her the power back.If it's absolutely necessary for survival, try to convince her to enter a contract with us again.
>>31691884Why would they kill it?
>>31691898i dont really care for power, but we need our memories back and figure out who is the betrayer before it's too late.
Vote is to take her with you, and grab the magpieCan I get a d100 for excellence?
Rolled 21>>31691993we are excellent
>>31691933Because it is a demon inside the city. They will sure as hell wil not be friendly.
>>31691993Why the fuck do we need a dice for this? It is just some mundane bodyguards.
>>31691933Advisor Orion wasn't very happy about it being alive.
>>31692042Because they are between you and the magpie. They don't stand a chance of beating you in a fight, but unless you kill them all, they stand a good chance of seeing you and reporting you.
So, how much power do we get from the vampire right now? Seeing as we've just beaten her, we should be able to force her to give us the full power right?
>>31692157You are getting 0 power from her at the moment.
>>31692194Well then we can force her right now? This should be ideal. Our whole deal with her was us beating her and forcing her to give power. We have a perfect chance right now.
>>31692238No, that was your deal with your marauder. You proved yourself to her, circumstantially seduced her to an extent, presented a reasonable argument, and offered a fair deal to her.But you could force her, yes.
>>31692194I we're getting no power then why is she complaining?
>>31692303The power tied up in creating the contract, also the effort of keeping the power from sliding back to you. Presumably.
>>31692296Let's get our power from her now then. Once we get away from the human guards. This is a great oppportunity. We need that power.
>>31692386Does she have to be conscious to give us her power?
“Come on, I have questions for you, so I’m not going to just leave you here,” you say as you gather up the dropped blades, sheathing your own and stuffing hers in the back of your belt.“I should have known better than to think I would be able to keep this top,” Victoria says as you gently lift her by her good arm and tuck her broken one atop her chest. You look her up and down. Her top is some kind of soft wool cotton blend and cut to be something similar to a sleeveless hoodie. You hadn’t paid it much mind, but it does seem rather anathema to the current fashion. And you put a bloody knife straight through it.“Sorry. But you did kind of attack me,” you say as you lift her up and turn back towards the magpie.“Wouldn’t have been such a bad idea, but you did two unbelievable things mid fight, and it turned out like this,” she says as she wraps her arm around your shoulders to support herself a bit.“When don’t I do unbelievable things mid fight? Isn’t that like my specialty by now?” you ask as you jump up atop the crenellations and start running towards the guard tower with the magpie still atop it.“I suppose it is. A century without seeing you and I must have forgotten,” she says as she painfully adjusts her broken arm. You frown and try to smooth your running more for her.A moment later, the guards spot you. A group of four of them were moving along the top of the wall, searching for you with their lanterns. “The vampire! The vampire has been defeated!” one of them shouts as you run past them. “Protect the Queen!” he bellows out as you leap up to the top of the guard tower.“What the hell are they talking about?” you ask as you kick the bird.It lazily flaps up and lands on your back, hanging like a sloth. “I have a bit of a reputation around here, and you’re an outsider. What do you think they’re talking about?” Victoria responds and you jump down to the city below.
>>31692438No. Our fungus was basically just that, a fungus and we still got power from it the first time.
>Take her back to Alice>Take her to Henry>Take her somewhere >Say something>Other>>31692438Yes.>>31692521GRD had no consciousness to resist with. An unconscious person still has one, and will instinctively resist.
>>31692541>GRD had no consciousness to resist with. An unconscious person still has one, and will instinctively resist.That doesn't mean she should be concious for us to take power. Just that she can resist even when unconcious.
>>31692541>>Take her somewhereAbandoned warehouse.Or a regular warehouse.
>>31692541>Take her somewhereJust somewhere with noone around. Shouldn't be hard to find in the city at night.Definitely do not bring her to the others.
>>31692541Let's take her back to Alice, two on one is much better odds when she recovers.
>>31692541>>Take her somewhere
>>31692541>>Take her somewheremy apologies that was supposed to say "Take her somewhere secluded"
>>31692623wut. Alice would get shredded from being in the general vicinity of the two of us fighting
>>31692541>Say something"I heard that Matt is still around, do you know anything about it ?"
>>31692666Alice is the eternal loli sister. You are mistaking her with Cyn.
>>31692666Alice's greeting when she met you destroyed half a building. She's still a child of Division Six, prepubescent or not. Solo she'd get wrecked, but she wouldn't get in your way, and would indeed be quite helpful in a fight.
>>31692762Don't take her to the others. We need to talk and sort it out with her alone. Also we need to ask her about Alice too, what she has been doing this past century.
Okay, the vote is to take her somewhere secludedBut I frankly don't understand what you're trying to accomplish by this. You'll have to explain. She does need medical treatment of some form, she doesn't have a GRD colony in her to regenerate her, she's just a hard to kill demon.
>>31692876can't we heal her using ours?
>>31692896That's possible, but that wasn't in your plan originally.
New to this quest and didn't see additional info. Guessing this fungus heals us?
>>31692876goals:heal hernegotiate for power, possibly return it if negotiations fail
>>31693041Pretty much. I really need to clean up my notes and post a character sheet.>>31693088And you're doing this solo, because?
>>31692876>>31692917Negotiate with her again. Also ask her what our friends (Alice and Matt) have been doing in the last century. After that we can take her to somewhere for treatment. Don try to heal her with GRD because we are likely to fuck it up. because dice
>>31693088>possibly return itno
>>31693153guess we'll see who votes where when the situations comes up
>>31693106Solo beacuse... privacy.
Well, writing the last update of the night then.
>>31693106>And you're doing this solo, because?Because we are alone. I want to ask her about the others and can't do that when others are there.
>>31692876I do have to ask, why did you include that option if it made no sense to you?
>>31693292I will often include options that are possible to take, but I don't expect you to actually take, such as Push Your LuckAlso, I believe some anons where proposing it before I posted the options
“Where are you planning to take me?” she asks as start running down alleys, looking for somewhere secluded.“Somewhere we can talk,” you respond, before a spasm in your side reminds you that one of your lungs is a pool of blood. You wince and slow to a walk.“Can you even talk? I drove that knife pretty deep. I’m honestly surprised I didn’t sever anything important other than your lung,” she responds as you choose a derelict shop. When you step inside the smell of narcotics and tar fill your nose, but as far as you can tell, no one else is in the building. Just an out of use drug den.“I’ll heal, but I’m going to need some food. It’s a pain in the ass to get good food anymore,” you respond as you let your magpie climb down from your back and curl up in a corner.“Not for the nobility. We can dine on enough fatty meat to kill us, if we want to,” Victoria says as you carefully put her down on the ground. She’s lost a lot of blood, her arm will have to be reset, and you’re sure that you concussed her. She needs some kind of treatment.“So you’re nobility now?”“Something like that yeah. Now are you going to treat me or not?”“We need to talk about our contract before I do that. And there’s something else I want to know first,” you respond.She looks over at you. She’s had a hint of a smile this whole time, until now. “That’s cold.”“I was betrayed. Now, tell me what Alice and Matt have been up to while I was gone.”
And that's thread. Hope you enjoyed. Next thread might be Wednesday?It's archived already.What are you thinking? What are you liking? What are you disliking?
>>31693483I'm glad that we won't have to cut a deal with a glorified mushroom again.I hope that you won't be offended if I say that I think you try to bargain with your players too much.
>>31693483A character sheet would be cool. Liking pretty much everything.
>>31693483Thanks for running
>>31693590>I hope that you won't be offended if I say that I think you try to bargain with your players too much.what
You guys realize that you're kind of being dicks to Victoria, right?Also, is smutfriend going to come through for us?
>>31693763>Also, is smutfriend going to come through for us?Probably not, all of Fronk's characters speak with the same voice.
>>31693795I believe you are objectively wrong.Oh god someone refute him
>>31693740I'm not sure how to better explain it. You make requests of the players or ask questions to them which aren't really necessary. Not in a, 'this is an unrealistic expectation' sense but in a 'the requested stuff will happen anyways if it's going to.' Like trying to force something instead of letting it happen naturally. Makes your position seem weaker. Probably a poor explanation.Don't get me wrong, I'm enjoying the quest. I like the writing and world building. Lots of questions to be answered and the resolution could be fun.
>>31693853yeah, that explanation didn't clarify anything at all.
So, Lauren is dead as hell, especially considering the OP imageGet back together with Victoria? Bone our little sister? Or just waifu our rage?
>>31694051>Get back together with Victoria? Bone our little sister?Why not both?
>>31693822>crickets chirpTough, Frank. Looks like you're a hack after all.I'm just fuckin' with you, man.
>>31694103I know it's a common insult to throw at QMs, and that's all it was. But it's a common insult because most shitty writers fall prey to it.And I don't have much confidence in unedited writing.So it'd be really nice if someone other than you said that no, I'm not fucking everything up. But even then, I'm the kind of guy who doesn't want to be compared to his peers, but to professionals. and continuing in the fashion is a cycle of shit.And yeah.
>>31694199My only recommendation is that you git gud.
>>31694340I hate all of you.
>>31694387You're only encouraging me.
>>31694394Can't you talk about waifus, or shadowruns, or the fact that Lucian probably tried to get in Alice's pants, or the dozen things I slipped into the opening story?Or specific criticisms.
>>31694440Waifus: eh. I don't feel that I have enough information at the moment. I guess turboslut imouto seems good for a tumble.Shadowruns: I no longer pay enough attention to quests to properly get involved in shadowruns.Lucian probably tried to get into Alice's pants: see above.Dozen things you slipped into the opening story: see above.
>>31694519What the heck did I do to get like, the chillest players of any quest?
>>31694440So is Alice into shotas?
>>31694714Last time you checked, no.
>>31694440>waifusthe stupid part of me wants to stay faithful to Lauren>shadowrunsLauren is behind everything somehow, or she was just a pawn from the start probably more like the second one, whatever hit us didn't really want to kill us, that whole "classified so negative" thing could be a way for some people to manipulate her>lucian trying to get into Alice's pantsha! he can have fun, or at least try at his own risks
>>31694796Same kinda thing for me as this guy >>31694519But I'm more just interested in just reading the story. So waifus don't matter to me, neither does lucian trying to get into Alice's pants. Loved the shit you slipped into the opening though. It was quite well done and I definitely enjoyed it. I just don't post an awful lot.
So, if Frank was that guy in qtg, he seems to be failing to get the giant waifu shitstorm he wants because none of us care about waifus, we'd all be fine with casual sex with any of them.What would he have to do at this point to achieve that giant shitnado?
>>31695299>What would he have to do at this point to achieve that giant shitnado?Have it look like we can get all the waifus we want at the same time if we work hard, then let us collect them into a harem that has good chemistry and looks to be full of people who generally like each other, then destroy it completely in the style of MHQ.
>>31698080was >>31695299 you? it definitely was, wasn't it. how that must rankle, to only want to stir up shitstorms among your players, and yet you can't because they don't care enough to sperg out.
>>31698203shitstorm or no, I honestly do wish I had a bit of sperg from my players. Such is the life of a reaction based QMDon't judge me for fucking around without my trip on. I do what I want.
>>31698256Ok. Don't judge me for screencapping the last couple of posts, and showing them around in future threads. I do what I want.
>>31698343I'm rather certain you won't take the effort to. You also have no proof that I'm not using reverse psychology to insure that there will never be shitstorms. A QM saying he wants shitstorm is a pretty easy way to prevent them.Speaking of which, I needed to post this to show to Schteel
>>31698203>>31698256>>31698343Honestly I am just rather confused by this back and forth. Also interestingly enough, I personally don't care if >>31695299 was indeed Gabriel, since I happen to agree with it. Well, I hope Gabriel gets his shitstorm if thats what he is looking for, not going to come from me though.
>>31698451Your plan of using reverse psychology to ensure I screencap and share has succeeded.Fuck.
>>31698532I am well trained.
>>31698862>93712Ladies and gentlemen, this is Silver-Tongued's rating of the sexual tension between Joshua and Victoria, on a scale of 1-10Just saying.
>>31699052who is silver tongued?
>>31699286A guy in hugbox. It's not important, I just felt like being a bit condescending.
And once again, a thread will slip on for another day due to lazy, half-hearted bumping, instead of catching traction with discussion.
>>31699799Frak me, I just missed the whole damn thread.
>>31693483>What are you liking? I really enjoyed the recovered memory part, it really show how much MC cared for his wife and how he overreact with anger and sadness, he's a tough guy but still he's human.I like all the gore you write, very detailed and brutal.The lowest the roll the more badass is Joshua, to almost hilarious levels. I kind of regret we won over GRD. Why would we ever want a QB deal?>What are you disliking?Nothing in particular, maybe you should have described those sweet moments with Lauren a bit earlier.
>>31704285we'd take a QB deal to avoid things like getting stabbed in the lung
Man, I was really hoping a smutfriend would come through on this one. Surely we've gotten enough characterization for something satisfying by now, no?
It doesn't matter terribly much, but I'm going to confirm that Immortal is canon with EDEN, in fact Lyr is built on the buried infrastructure of EDEN after the intended resolution of that plot.Don't be confused if I start referring to the tunnels as Epsilon and GammaAlso, I'm predicting at some point I'm going to slip and write Rikku instead of Victoria, she had her planning name for a while and it's kind of stuck in my head.