First Thread: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/27693404/Second Thread: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/27726570/Third Thread: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/27759119/Fourth Thread: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/27796924/Fifth Thread: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/27835051/Sixth Thread: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/27877615/Seventh Thread: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/27918888/Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/QXuSBgGpTwitter: https://twitter.com/Knight_of_TGDeviant Art: http://knight-of-the-realm.deviantart.com/Hello /tg/! I'm back. I'm going to be writing again soon, but first I wanted to post the last bit of yesterdays work. Since I posted it just before the thread went into autosage, I'll repost it so everyone gets a chance to see it. It'll also give me enough time to keep working on the next bit.
And on that ominous note we headed off into the wilds, theoretically towards the Druidic Grove. As we climbed up the next hill we could see the wilds stretching before us. In the distance behind us we could see the lands of Albero Città. In the foreground, up against the distant mountains we could see the structures of the Drudic Grove, about the size of ants in the distance. Something about their small relative size struck a chord in my memory. I turned to Martina, “Say, Martina. While the sun is still rising, how about I take you up on that offer of seeing the sunrise from dragonback? Can you fly us over to the Druidic Grove?”Martina turned to me with a smile, “You know… I think I can.”The experience of flying on a dragon’s back was just as exhilarating as I remember. Martina indeed spoke true when she described how beautiful the sunsets were from the high altitude. The rest of the party may not have appreciated the view as much, seeing as they were clutched in the dragoness’ claws. It wasn’t long before we soared over the hills that separated us from our destination. We set down as the sun was finally peaking over the hills. As we landed, we saw the local druids and rangers running around in minor panic. As a ring of druidic and ranger guards began to surround us. As Martina shifted back to her human form I stepped towards the senior druid, “Hello sir. I’d like to ask permission to take shelter here for the near future.”After some persuading, the druids were convinced to ignore the giant dragon that was in our group and allowed us to stay in the grove for the next week or so in exchange for the typical donations to help maintain the land. We had access to the hot springs and a small cabin to stay in at the edge of the grove. We also got a messenger to send a message to the Albero Città docks to let Siegbert and presumably Captain Boniface know that we were alive and had reached the druidic grove.
>>27992495We then set about settling in to our cabin. There was enough beds for each of us, I took the master bed that was large enough for several. I recall hoping to put it to good use by the time the break was over. That day we started out or small vacation by eating a light lunch composed of some wild elk and collected berries. After that we decided to head for the famous hot springs. The local pools were divided into a mix of men only, women only, and mixed communal pools. There were also a number of private pools available for an additional donation. I paid to have one reserved for our use later in the evening, hoping that I could find a good time to take Martina there. After buying the light cotton robes required in the communal pools for the seven of us we headed down to the communal pool to enjoy a nice and relaxing day. However no sooner had we gotten down there, but we found the pool occupied. A large number of the younger women druidic initiates and female ranger trainees were waiting around someone in the center of the pool. As we got closer we could hear some of what he was saying.
>>27992527“So there I was, sitting in this tavern and all the guards and foul scum around me were talking about this Knight. However, they were spreading this rumor that he was this evil Deathknight and were talking about how they were going to hunt him down for the bounty. Now I couldn’t stand for this injustice so I stood up and said, ‘Hey now! I’ve met this Knight and this dragon! They are hardly the monsters you make them out to be! I was once one of you, mislead into thinking that the Knight was a brigand or someone else worth hunting! Me and my companions even attacked the Knight under that assumption. However after the battle, the Knight asked how I came to be fighting him and when I explained my cause, he showed mercy and spared my life!’ Now as you can probably guess, this wasn’t a popular opinion to voice in that tavern. Two of the foul ruffians surrounding me stood up and drew their blades. ‘We aren’t here for justice, we just want the money!’ one roared at me before lunging with his blade. Naturally I defended myself as best as I could but even as I took down scores of them, their numbers eventually overwhelmed me. However as all seemed lost, suddenly the door burst open from a mighty kick! There, in his gleaming armor and majestic white cloak, was the Noble Knight himself! He quickly dispatched the brigands and scum who were about to kill me and drove them off. It turned out that he and his party were stopping to restock their provisions and they overheard me defending the Knight’s honor. When things turned sour, he burst in to return the favor. And that ladies, is how I met the Noble Knight the second time.” As the assorted ladies oohed and ahed around him I shook my head quietly. I think I’m really coming to hate Gaël.
>>27992549I told the ladies to just ignore the braggart and head for one of the side pools. While it did irk me to let him get away with his wild exaggerations, I was at least treated to the sight of his face frozen in fear and terror as we passed by. We settled down into the smaller pool and began to truly relax for the first time in ages.As we were soaking in the hot water, Martina turned to Sieghild, “Say dw- Sieghild, could you help me braid my hair, I like the way that yours looks, with that single braid down the back.”Sieghild sighed, “Dr- Martina, you can’t just braid your hair like that. Dwarves have a lot of rituals attached to the way you wear your hair. For instance, these braids,” Sieghild indicated some braids towards the end of her hair, “indicate that I’m traveling on a quest. These ones,” she indicated some beaded knots further up along the braid, “mean that I was recently working with beers and other alcoholic drinks. These show my time working with Father at The Rusting Anvil Inn.”Martina looked closer, “What about those knots? The ones near the iron beads with axes engraved into them?”“Those… I’d rather not talk about those right now if its alright.”I remembered what Siegbert had said abut Sieghild’s time in the militia, “Yeah, she doesn’t talk about it much. Evidently she lost a few people and hasn’t really let go of them…” I frowned a little, concerned, but Martina evidently noticed the mood shift too and decided to let the matter rest. Martina shrugged, “So what braids would be appropriate for a dragon?”“Hmm… that’s hard to say. Dragons are a bit of a tricky combination of warrior, wizard, and scholar. I guess I could throw a few of those braids together and see how it turns out…”“Would you? That would be great.”>I think this constitutes Safe for Work, but Spoilered just in case.
>>27992583After some more banter about meaningless trivialities, I had to leave for a moment to relieve myself. As I was returning I overheard a bit of their conversation in my absence.“So Martina, what’s the real reason you asked about me braiding your hair?”“Hrmm? I just didn’t want it hanging on my shoulders. That’s all.”Felìcita’s voice cut in here, “So, after hundreds of years a dragon decides to change something about its humanoid form? Are you sure it has nothing to do with Master Knight? I heard something about something going on between him and Sieghild here.”Aimèe cut in here, “What’s this now? Come on, Sieghild, spill the beans.”Sieghild protested, “Oh, it was nothing,” but none of the other girls would have it.Veila spoke up, “Oh don’t give us ‘it was nothing!’ Now we know that something happened. Something big… Go on, tell us!”Rina coughed, “Well, normally I’d stay out of childish arguments like this, but now I’m really curious. What exactly did happen?”And so under their prodding and nagging, Sieghild eventually told the story of my armor fitting. When Sieghild came to the part in her story about the cup sizing, the entire pool erupted into gasps and giggling.Veila asked, “So Sieghild… how was it?”“Huh? What do you mean?”“Oh don’t give me that, you know perfectly well what I mean. How was it? Sir Knight’s mighty blade?’ His ‘powerful sword?’ You know…”Rina broke in, “She doesn’t have to tell us that…”Veila retorted, “Oh stop being so uptight, guardswoman! I can tell that you want to know too!”“What you couldn’t know – I mean, that’s not true at all!”Sieghild started talking again, “Well… it’s… it’s impressive to say the least. What I wanted to know was how Martina knew about all that. I didn’t think she was the type to spy on other’s private moments…”
>>27992604Martina sniffed, “Hrmph. I don’t need to. He told me all about it,” in a coy voice she continued, “We’ve been spending a lot of time together lately, after all…”Rina stammered out, “Wh-what do you mean by that?Felìcita’s timid voice cut in here, “Well… Master Knight and Martina have been getting rather close lately…”Rina’s voice almost quavered a little as she asked her next question, “Are they…” she turned to Martina, “Sorry, are you two… are you two together?”There was an audible intake of breath, I could even hear it from where I was standing, at this question. The silence that followed lasted several moments.“Well…” Martina answered, “It’s complicated.”Felìcita added, “It’s really complicated.”Sieghild continued, “It’s really, really complicated.”>And that was all from the last entry. More will come soon.
>>27992620Veila spoke next, “Go on…”With that Felìcita, Martina, and Sieghild began to explain the “arrangement” that they had worked out and how it came to be.As they explained, Aimèe raised a hand to cover her mouth in shock, Veila started to cackle, and Rina turned red from her face to her quivering ears.Veila continued to laugh, “Wow. I can’t believe that you agreed to that! And I thought dragons and princesses were supposed to have some class!”Martina sniffed, “Oh? And how is this different from you and Aimèe offering him a threesome?”At this point the girls erupted into a bout of pointless bickering for a few minutes, arguing over alleged differences between a threesome and the arrangement before Felìcita of all people stopped it.She said, “All right people! Let’s stop this before we come to blows over it. Regardless of what you think about who’s doing what, you know that the Knight wouldn’t want us fighting over it? Right?”There was a small chorus along the terms of “Yes,” or “I guess not.”Felìcita continued, “Good. Now seeing as that is the case, I just want to repeat what Master Knight told us when he had us set up this arrangement. He said that he cared about us. Furthermore he cared about us enough that he couldn’t bear to break any of our hearts.”Veila cut in, “Heh. I’ve heard that one before,” as a frozen silence met her words, she hastily added, “Hey! I’m actually reasonably sure that the Knight actually meant it! I’m just saying that I’ve heard that excuse before!”Felìcita continued, “Right, so he didn’t want to break our hearts by choosing one of us, so he gave us an ultimatum. We could come to a solution by ourselves or he would continue to ignore all of us. And none of us wanted to give up, so we decided to come to an arrangement.”Veila whistled a low whistle. “Wow. You ladies really fell for him badly, didn’t you?”
Who is here by the way?
>>27992707I might be
>>27992707I am, and shall always be.
>>27992673Maritna sniffed, “Hrmph. And what would you have done then?”Veila stammered, “Huh? W-Well… I already am okay with sharing!” a splashing noise indicated that she rushed over to Aimèe, presumably to place her arm around her, “After all, I’ve already agreed to a threesome with Aimèe here, so what’s the difference? I’m just surprised that a princess would be willing to share a man with a dwarf and a dragoness, but I’d suppose you’d do that and more for your ‘Master,’ eh?”“Wh-what do you mean by that?”“Oh you know. Aimèe filled me in on how ‘Master Knight’ secured your cooperation. You’ve been his little pet ever since haven’t you?”“I-I have no idea what that means…”“Sure you don’t… Let me fill you in, if your ‘Master Knight’ says ‘Jump,’ you ask ‘How high?’ If ‘Master Knight’ says crawl, you can already taste the dirt. If ‘Master Knight’ says ‘Play second fiddle to a dragoness and a dwarf,’ then… Well you get the picture.”Surprisingly the next person to speak was Rina, “I’m going to have to stop you right there, criminal scum. Just because you spend your time skulking amongst the worst people in the lands doesn’t mean that everyone is out to use others for their advantage.”“Oh, look at this. The uptight guardswoman comes to the princess’ defense. Are you already in the arrangement as well or are you just willing pick up whatever scraps are left over seeing as you came last to this little group?”
>>27992707I am. Going to check this thread in morning.
>>27993071>“I’m going to have to stop you right there, criminal scum
>>27993071Veila is pretty jealous huh?
>>27993071Aimèe cut in here, “Veila! There’s no call for that! Now apologize to everyone right now!”Veila sighed, “Come on Aimèe, you too? Why should I apologize to these tools?”“You’ll apologize to them, or else…”“Or else what?”“Or else I’ll let Sir Knight know what you were saying about his ladies.”There was a major pause at this. Sieghild chuckled, “Now who’s eager to please the Knight?”Aimèe sighed, “Not helping, Sieghild.”Veila spoke next, “I – I – I am sorry, everyone.”Aimèe pushed further in an almost maternal guiding voice, “Sorry for what?”Veila sighed, “I’m sorry Martina for implying that you had no class. I’m sorry Sieghild for pushing you to tell us about the armor fitting, although it was a fun story. I’m sorry Felìcita for implying you had no class and that you were desperate to please the Knight. I’m sorry Rina for implying that you were desperate to get anything the Knight would give you. I’m sorry Aimèe for causing a fight. There, everyone happy?”Aimèe replied in a cheerful voice, “That’s better! Now does anyone have anything they want to say to Veila?”Rina sighed, “I’m sorry for calling you scum, Veila.”Aimèe cut in, “Don’t you mean ‘criminal scum?’”Veila interrupted, “No, the criminal parts fair. I’ll own up to that.”“Okay then, let me say that I’m sorry for putting you on the spot then Veila.”“Its okay, Aimèe”Martina chuckled, “Now that that’s sorted out, for now at least – “Aimèe cut in “Don’t say that! Who knows, maybe this little peace will last!”Martina sighed, “Aimèe, I doubt it will last for too long, Sieghild, Felìcita, and I already came to one agreement and we’re still at each other’s throats sometimes.”
yay! more adventures!
>>27993623>knights face when listening to the catfighting
>>27993623Felìcita groaned with exasperation, “Can we at least agree that none of us are going to get Master Knight all to themselves?”There was silence at this proposal.Felìcita shouted, “Come on! Martina, Sieghild, you two practically already agreed to this! Why’s everyone mum now?”Martina groaned, “All right. All right. I agree. If it wasn’t for the fact that Sir Knight feels just as badly about this as we do, I’d eat him alive for putting me in this position.”Sieghild sighed too, “Aye. I guess I’m still in the arrangement. What about the rest of you ladies?”There was a silence that lasted several minutes before Aimèe finally spoke. “I guess I’m in. I suppose this isn’t the traditional knightly story…”Rina chuckled, “Heh. There probably aren’t too many stories like this, are there Aimèe?”“Oh, you’d be surprised Rina. There are plenty of stories like this, its just that I had to hide from my father to hear him tell them to his friends. He would never knowingly let me listen in to them,” she continued in a lewder voice, “I can tell you some of them later if you want. You know, so you know how they end…”Rina stammered, “Wha? That – that’s not necessary just yet. I’m still not sure if I want to try sharing Sir Knight…”Veila snorted, “Come on guardswoman, its not like you have much of a choice.”Rina sighed, “I guess not, its just… That would be a big step for me… I’m really not comfortable taking it just yet… Can I have some more time to think about it?”Aimèe responded in a comforting voice, “Don’t worry Rina. I understand, and I’m sure Sir Knight will too. Take all the time you need.”“Thanks, Aimèe…”Veila sighed loudly, “Whelp, I guess I’m in. I suppose a six-way isn’t too much more ridiculous than a threesome. Could be fun.”
>>27994005As I was about to return to the baths, I felt a tap on the shoulder. “Sir, I will tell your story as accurately or inaccurately as you wish throughout the land if you tell me how you managed to pull this together.”I turned around, and standing there with an awestruck look on his face was Gaël.I sighed deeply, “Hello again Gaël.”“Huh? How did you know my –““One of the women at the elven tavern said it. I have a decent head for names and faces.”“Oh, that makes sense. But still… how did you do that? Come on, let me buy you a beer and tell me!” I sighed, it would be worth it alone just to keep him from spreading lies and exaggerations again like before. “Let me make sure the girls are okay first. Then it’s a deal.”The women were surprised to find out that I was willing to deal with Gaël, but I explained that he did stay away from Hammerburg when he promised and I could probably trust him to keep his word to some extent. And with that out of the way, I went up to the bar to meet Gaël.
>>27994108I am enjoying it very much.
>How's the story going so far? Is it better than last time? A bit fewer diversions from diversions at least?
>>27994151Sorry, I reorderd my posts a little, I decided to put the Gaël bit in before I asked the question in case people were expecting/desired pure Knight and ladies interactions here.For the other readers, >>27994151 should be considered a response to >>27994169.
>>27994210I would second>>27994151
>>27994169very much enjoying things still
>>27994144As I sat down, he paid the bartender for two ales and turned to me, “You know, I was surprised to find out that this druid grove had a bar. Didn’t really strike me as typical druid behavior, you know?”“I know what you mean. I actually looked it up and it turns out that the druids bought this land from a lot of the nearby lords so they could prevent any… conflict over the land. Evidently it cost a fair amount of coin. It also evidently takes a lot of money to maintain the lands, covering the expenses of the druids and rangers for the items they can’t get off the land.”“So that’s why they rent out the hot springs and have all these accommodations?”“Yep. In fact we’re not in the heart of the grove. We’re in a small community built on the outskirts of their lands for the express purpose of catering to visitors. That way the druids keep the damage to nature limited and the entire grove gets maintained.”“Not a bad system. But that’s not what I wanted to talk to you about.”“No, I suppose it isn’t. Very well, I’ll tell you what I did; though I warn you that it may not be worth your money after all.”
>>27994608I explained how I got Princess Emile’s letter, how I tried to rescue her only to be rebuffed, how I returned to the tower, met a maid, fought the princess, and actually met Martina socially. I then went on to describe how the maid turned out to be Aimèe and how the Dragonmoot Council sent me on the quest to destroy Isocrates’ Rod. Naturally I glossed over the details of Isocrates’ Rod, too many people knew about that already, but I did explain that I retrieved a magic item that needed to be destroyed. I then told him about how we were heading out to Hammerburg when we were ambushed, and was pleased to see that he evidently felt bad about that little misadventure. I explained how his information helped us find The Rusty Anvil and how I met Siegbert and Sieghild who told me about the Schatten Gilde. I continued to tell how Siegbert and Sieghild joined us and we went on to Albero Città where we met Felìcita, Veila, and Rina and how we fought Mr. Aldric there. Since I didn’t tell him about Isocrates’ Rod, I felt that telling him that Mr. Aldric was Isocrates would only confuse the man. After that I then told him how we headed down to the grove for a relaxing break.Sorry for the recap, I didn't realize how lengthy it was until it was done.After I was done with my story, Gaël just looked at me confused. “But wait, that doesn’t tell me how you got all of them to agree to share!”I sighed, “In truth, I didn’t have a lot to do with it. I simply explained to them that I cared a lot about each of them, and that I couldn’t stand to break any of their hearts by choosing one of them.”“I’ve tried that before, it didn’t turn out too well…”
>>27994640“I can’t speak for your attempts, but I meant it when I said it. I suppose that must be what did it; the fact that I genuinely care for each of them. Basically, I was honest with them, I was forthright with them, I didn’t’ lie to them, I didn’t keep secrets from them, and I cared about their feelings and opinions; each of them. Hells, I feel bad about the way this turned out. It feels like I’m… cheating somehow. Each of them deserves someone to care for them as their one-and-only, and I don’t know if I can do that for six women, but I definitely know that I couldn’t stand to break their hearts so this is the best I got.”When I was finished, Gaël was staring at me with his mouth open in shock, “Are… are you for real? I’ve always heard stories about knights who always tried to do the right thing, but I didn’t think that there was any chance of them actually existing. Are you saying that having six women after you does nothing for you?”“Of course it does! However it is a guilty pleasure. I can’t stop feeling bad for what’s going on, even as I enjoy it. It’s not right that I made those women share me, they deserve better than that!”
>>27994669I hope the girls are spying on them and hearing this, it would be amusing.
>>27994669I felt a sharp blow to the back of my head and turned around. Gaël had just slapped me! He sighed, “Listen here Knight, I get that you’re an honorable type, but you should know when to turn it off. I know that you feel that they shouldn’t have to share you, but I was listening in on their conversation a little too. And guess what? They know that too! The fact is that they are still willing to share you! Even that one elf chick who was playing timid; trust me, I can tell. If there was anyone who they cared about even near as much as you, they wouldn’t have stood for the demand to work something out, they would have just moved on.”He shook his head exasperated, “So just relax for a change, acknowledge that they deserve better, realize that you’re still the best they got, treat them as well as you can, and then just enjoy the fun! You’re women aren’t idiots, they’ve decided that you split six ways is still better then any other man all to themselves so just trust them. There’ that’s my two coppers. Feel any better?”To my surprise I did, “Yeah actually. I guess that did help a little. I didn’t expect you to be so persuasive, not bad for a traveling archer.”He smiled, “Actually good Knight, I’m not much of an archer. My real talents are in storytelling. I’m a bit of a traveling bard to tell you the truth.”
>>27994813“Huh. That actually makes sense. The constant storytelling, the wild and reckless exaggerations, the desire to know how I managed to attract women…”“Hah! Exactly! And don’t worry about your story not being worth the drink! The limited parts of it that I was involved with have already scored me free beer in taverns from Albero Città to here! It’s the least I could do to return the favor!”“Oh Gods above. How many of those stories were the ‘Dread Deathknight’ variety?”“Only the one’s that I told before you were vindicated,” seeing my expression he held up his hands defensively, “Hey! I’m a bard! It’s what we do! If it helps, the ‘Noble Knight who spared my life and came to my rescue’ variety was far more popular!”I just shook my head and laid it in the palm of my hands, “And I just told you the whole story, didn’t I?”“Relax! I’ll make it something to be proud of! And I can spread word of your prowess with ladies as well!”“Please don’t.” Gaël shrugged with an amused smile, “If you wish. People are going to make their own assumptions when they find out that you’re traveling with six different women though.”I sighed, “That’s just perfect.”We shared a few more drinks and swapped our stories. Evidently Gaël became a bard to see the world and to meet interesting people. I told him about my career as a Knight of the Realm. Eventually we came to an agreement that Gaël could tell the story in its entirety, provided that he waits for us to finish our quest. With that settled, I left him to attempt to pick up the barmaid as I left to return to the baths and my own women.
>>27992495Did we conveniently lose the only other male in the party?
>>27995161The shipwreck of the Appât Flottant. The Knight would hardly call it convenient.Although from a narrative standpoint, it certainly was...
>>27995215And you will have us believe you did not plan it all out?
>>27995215Also, great to have you back Knight Anon. Enjoying the story so far.
>>27995307I suppose protests to the contrary would hardly help at this point.>>27995344Its nice to be back.
>>27995065When I got back to the pool, I could see that something was up. The way that the women were talking seemed… almost staged. As I got in, Martina very casually asked me if I had a good talk. Suddenly I realized what was up, “Yes, yes I did. So how did you listen in? I didn’t see any of you up there…”From the way they all blushed, I could tell that my guess was on the money. Martina stammered, “Well… I realized that these pools could work as natural scrying pools, so I decided to show the other ladies that. I used you as an example target and… when we heard you talking about how we deserved better we couldn’t help but listen in.”Aimèe smiled, “It was very sweet…”Veila snorted, “A bit too much if you ask me. ‘Each of them deserves someone to care for them as their one-and-only,’ bah! Some of us are just annoying shrews after all!”Rina added in, “But from what I heard Gaël say about him ‘listening in on their conversation a little too’ I’d guess you’d know that already.”I shrugged, “That’s right, so we’re even. I wanted to see how you would handle it without me there to intervene. I’ve got to say, I’m overjoyed that you handled it so well. Thank you all.”>Another barely Safe for Work image.
>>27995817And this, is how life will be with a mage as a wife.You will never be able to cheat on her. Never be able to lie to her. Even if you say Honey you look good in that suit she knows what you mean.And I am perfectly fine with that.
>>27995875>You will never be able to cheat on her.How... how many women do you really think the Knight... neeeds?
>>27995875Like the Knight would ever do something so disrespectful to his ladies.
>>27995918After the adventure is over?0.How many will he get?Hahaha!
>>27995817>This is progressing a little faster than I want, but I can't seem to make the story go a different direction now...Martina smiled coyly, “You’ll get a chance to thank us later tonight, I hear there’s expected to be a lovely sky out tonight. It sounds like a night for something… special.”I returned her smile, “Well… I did reserve a private pool for tonight. I suppose I could make room for others.” Aimèe gave me a sly smile as well, “Well… while we’re out here I wouldn’t mind doing a little bit of stargazing tonight myself.”Sieghild cut in with “And after that I’d like a turn myself.” Seeing the other girls exasperated looks she took a defensive posture and exclaimed, “What? Were we supposed to keep dancing around the matter all night?”After a few minutes of debate on the etiquette of organizing these affairs within a group, Felìcita spoke up, “So… are we planning to take turns or… do this all at once?”>Yet another barely Safe for Work image.
>>27996259Hahaha. This is sounding like a hentai game.And I love it.
>>27996259I'm just waiting on everything to catch fire...
>>27996346Or for the bro-alchemist to come back in the middle of it.
>>27996259I love Sieghild's candor on the subject. Gotta love them dwarven women.
>>27996378Where do you think the fire was going to come from, Aldric? Please, nothing burns hotter than brotherly love, son.
>>27996528Perfect.We are just feeding Knight ideas now are we?
>>27996564That is half the reason I ask for feedback...
So either lewd's gonna happen or the standard harem animu moment killer's gonna happen.Place your bets, gents.
>>27996665I actually would be more amused by the anime harem killer scene.And how Knight can make it hilarious.
>>27996259As you could imagine, an intense awkward silence was the main response to those words.Eventually Martina broke the silence, “Well… I’d like my first time to be something special, so I’d prefer one on one.”Veila raised her eyebrows, “What? Your first time? You’re still a virgin?”Martina sputtered with outrage then drooped her shoulders sadly, “What? I am – Well yes. Yes I am.”As Veila was about to continue to mock Martina, Aimèe cut in, “I’m sure that others would like to be with Sir Knight one on one as well. Maybe we can do a mix of both?”In the end it was decided that the girls would each get their own turn before we tried anything as a group. Veila of course was insistent that a group was more fun, but was overruled by almost the entire rest of the girls. So I have a fun night to look forward to, even if I had to disappoint the girls by saying that I didn’t think I’d be able to go for a second round with any of them. Fortunately Veila was able to help me explain the… logistics behind “reloading your crossbow” to the less experienced ladies and helpfully suggested that I might take tomorrow off too. Leaving the ladies to sort the order out amongst themselves, I decided to head back up to the bar to purchase several drinks. I was going to need to stay hydrated tonight evidently…
>MFW I committed to either disappointing a lot of people with a moment killer or writing six different sex scenes in a row.
>>27997034Just do a fade to black and pick up the story the next morning.
>>27997034Either way, I'll need a few moments to deal with the next bit. Be patient good anons.
>>27997034you can write out and post the first one then continue the morning after and slowly over the course of the story post the others in a pastebin every now and then, no need to go to either extreme
>>27997154Honestly, I think we could get the best of both worlds if it just ended up being Martina lighting something on fire by accident. Acts of passion and all that.
Hold up. I need to grab some more inspiration.
>>27997318hay that's what I am going to grab when You post, I call my dick inspiration.
>>27997318A bump for you sir knight, looks like you're going to tire yourself out writing almost as much as our hero is about to from working his blade.
>>27998529Thank you. There might be a few of those needed. I'm still in the foreplay of the first scene.This is way harder than I thought.
>>27998631>This is way harder than I thought.I bet the knight is thinking that too, in several ways...
>>27998631Said your mom, boom!
>>27998631I suspect that this thread will not outlast the amount of time it will take to write all six of these scenes, good sir. That is, unless you plan on chasing this mad quest into the wee ours of the morning. In either case, I salute your valiant efforts in the service of smut.
>>27998631Take what time you need. Hell, I'd be fine if you spread this out the week giving each scene your focused attention.
>>27998631One last bump for the road. I look forward to catching up in the morning.
>started reading this for a knight protecting a dragon from a princess>get 6 sex scenes oh
>>27999577Sorry. Things just kinda developed that way.
>>27999577>come for the sex scenes>get a 300-page novel
>>27999623Don't exaggerate. Its only 165 pages in Word.
>>27999641>I realized that the humor in that prior sentence didn't come across clearly. It was a stupid joke.
>>27999641I just did the math, the absolute lower bound is around 200 pages.
>>27999812I'm not sure how that works out. Because I'm typing up this story in Word first and I'm on page 165 right now.
>>27999827Few books intended for adults are 8.5x11.
>>27999843...Good point. Never mind then. You said 200 pages at least?
>>27999860Most novels have around 350 words per page. At 80k words and 400 words/page (or 75k and 375/page), that works out to exactly 200 pages.
>>27996678Well... here you go. My first, actual sex scene. Hope it pleases!http://pastebin.com/uxHtXHsfLet me know what you think of it.
>>28000380Not bad at all.
>>28000380delicious, now all we need is some hand holding and wwe are propperly lewd
>>28000380oh wow, nice
>>28000380looks good to me, it was a pleasant read. just the right amount of lewd you'd expect out of Martina if you ask me. You know, this makes me wonder about Sir Knight's past "Campaigns".
>>28000380>mfwI liked how it wasn't just shameless smut, but an intimate moment between two people who really care for each other.
>>28000898>intimate moment between two people who really care for each other.L-lewd
>>28000898You realize the guy in the picture there is clapping for appearances while holding unending rage towards what he's watching?
>>28000947Someone think of the children!
>>28001011 I just don't have any other clapping pics or gifs on my phone.
>>28001013They are. You don't expect these half dragon kids to pop out on their own, do you?
>>28000453>>28000457>>28000650>>28000700>>28000713>>28000729>>28000898>>28000947>>28001156Thank you all for the great reviews.>>28001156Thank you especially. I will treasure that .png file forever.Unfortunately due to a combination of Writer's Block and my need for sleep, I cannot get the next Pastebin section up tonight. You'll get your next dose of lewd sometime tomorrow.In the meantime have another sexy caster picture.
>>28000898Thanks for noticing! I was hoping it would turn out that way!
All right, I need sleep.Keep the thread alive/archived for me!Thanks for reading again,Knight of the Realm
Mister Knight.Could you please tell me what our Knight of the Realm's armour looks like?I wish to make a drawing.
>>28001751Probably something practical, with a visored helm... I don't think it'd be full, gothic plate, but possibly full-plate and chain? I think it's important to have a visor that lets you show his eyes though.>>28001462Also: Huzzah! I'm lurking these threads obsessively, but I think I'll save the pastebin for tonight...Everything else is still spot-on however! I love how we now have a satellite character as well; it kind of fits and it helps flesh out that there's more happening in the world than just whatever (or whoever) Sir Knight happens to be involved in.
>>28001462That other Finn here.I believe that you're doing your best here and that you've done great work. On a side note, I like the way you sometimes repost parts from older threads for the sake of 'late readers'. Sleep well, Sir Knight.
>>28002072So basically the Astoran Knight armour from the OP, but with more shiny and less damage?Or something like this picture?
>>28002162Hell if I know. I'm just guessing. That was just how I see Sir Knight in my head, with a helmet kind of like the soldiers in Valkyria Chronicles.Dude, if you're drawing fanart, you put your own spin on things! Happens all the time. I look forward to seeing what you come up with though!
Whew, finally caught up with the story. Something's been nagging me; in the part where they were keeping Martina warm, why couldn't the party just chuck her into the fire they started? It's not like a little fire is going to hurt her?
>>28002508I made some helmets that I like.I really wanted to hear Mister Knight's opinion on them, but I guess I'll make do with the readers.
Martina in dragon form?
>>28002804I was once told I am good at female dragons.
What if the knight starts to cry during sex with the others as he realizes that he only really loves Martina?Would he tell the others or would he pretend it didn't happen because he doesn't want to hurt the girls' feelings?
>>28003904I'm actually curious about what will come of her status as first among equals.
>>28004830Get married and live happily until death?If you read this, Knight, I really want that to happen.
>>28005152a happy ending is just the end of an adventure. We want it to keep going
>>28001751Well... I initially pictured it as being similar to the picture I post at the start of every thread. However since the dwarves worked on it, its been considerably... fortified since then, even without the magical enhancements. >>28002072With the dwarves' aid, I'd say its full gothic plate or at least by now...>>28002162Less damage certainly, but I've always had a preference for darker armor. However, you're the artist so please do whatever you think looks best.>>28002600I love them all. I'm particularly torn between the Great Helm (upper left, I believe) and the Astoran Helm (I'm not sure of the actual name, but upper right).>>28002903You certainly are. I like the - Is sleeker the word I'm looking for? - appearance that you used for this dragon. It reminds me of the D&D silver dragons. >Have a Knight in less-than-shining armor as a a way of saying thanks!
>>28005443to be honest, I'd rather have a happy ending, an epilogue of the future (which, given that the Knight/Martina will outlive the others, will be a touch bittersweet) and have it end on a high note.One of the major reasons people really dislike quests (other than there being far too many) is that too many of them drag on for far too goddamn long and hence outstay their welcome and/or become infested with circlejerkers.KotR has managed to dodge the circlejerk part, given that he's always up for critique and people are always willing to give it, but I really wouldn't like to see it become a zombie story.
>>28005566The Astoran Helm is just called the Elite Knight Helm in game.Given that it's used primarily by Astoran Knights, Astoran Helm is probably as good a name as any.
>>28005443I... I don't think I can do that. I couldn't keep this up forever, and every story has to end one day. I'd rather give it a proper ending than keep going and abandon it without a resolution.
Hold on, I'm off to grab some lunch then I'm back to writing.Have some ultra-heavy armor in the interim!
>>28005649Just one quick question. What colour is his tabard and does it have an insignia?
>>28005946I hadn't thought much about it actually...Unless you have a better idea let's go with Royal Blue and Gold. The insignia would be a Royal Seal of the Realm. Basically a crown above a shield with a sword crossed over it. But if you can think of something better I'll yield to your idea.
>>28006126Actually make it Royal Blue and Red. Golds overplayed.
>>28006346Heh. I was actually thinking about a solid blue field with a crimson red emblem, but really I'm leaving it up to the artist.
Right so lunch is over, but it'll be a few before I can return to writing. I guess I can answer questions in the meantime.
Here's a quick sketch.Is this how you imagined him?
>>28006437I always thought that Knight had brownish/greenish tabard to conceal the fact that he is Knight of the Realm. It can be rather troublesome if it attracts attention much.
>humble request to use a different OP image because I keep getting excited this is that Dark Souls quest
>>28006503Not bad. I love it.
>>28006517next stop for KotR, acquire Dark Souls and play it through. Multiple times. And then do Dark Souls Quest!
>>28006531I can do better, but it's getting late over here and I'm a bit tipsy.
>>28006560I look forward to seeing your sober efforts then! I've personally found that one or two beers help me write, but after that the benefit wears off.
>>28006628Grab a lager then and get writing!
>>28006481Just got back, I'll be writing up the next scene. Of course I will continue to answer questions you may have so go for it!
>>28006963any chance of our knight/siegbert getting some male friends?
>>28007025Gael. The Party need the bard! Part needs their own Geoffrey Chaucer!
>>28006963I always wondered why the knights military career never factors in to his character.Unless he was always in peacetime you would think he would have some sort of issues from some protracted siege or general meat-grinder of a battle he went through. From what Afghanistan vets i know (like the guy who bursts into tears everytime he drinks because he had to shoot an armed kid) you are going to have a hard time being all noblebright.Or he's just really really well adjusted
>>28007092Mostly his career gave him combat experience, and a knack for winning fights. If there is interest in exploring the Knight's history, I may do so in future installments.With regards to trauma, please give my regards to the Afghanistan Veteran that you know. I'm sorry he had to go through that.However with regards to the story, the Knight wouldn't likely have a problem such as that. Not to diminish your veteran friend's service and feelings about the matter, but the whole childhood/adult line is strongly rooted in modern western culture. In other areas of the world and even in the west's past, the age of adulthood varied and was considerably younger. In some parts of the middle ages, a person could be tried and executed as an adult at as young as seven. Again, I don't mean to diminish the sacrifice and the emotional burden that your veteran friend feels, but this isn't likely to be a problem in a story set in a fantasy version of the middle ages.
>>28007259Sorry, it really makes me feel like shit to say something like "Oh your real friend who is in a career that I respect and has served his country well has this issue, but this fictional character I just made up wouldn't."Again, please thank your veteran friend for his service on my behalf.
>>28007092The world back then was completely different. And thats why PSTDs and other acronym stuff where harder to catch. Of course you could get one but the situation you where in was completely different.>Get levied to fight for your King and Country>You and 100 other men from your village and nearby lands make one unit>You have your friends and acquaintances with you>You spend several months with them in campaign, marching towards the enemy>One huge battle and enemy is killed>half of your unit was also killed, with your best mates>you then spend few months to march back to your home with the rest of the armyWhole campaign situation is huge therapy session. And that it was common to see death made it easier to survive those situations.
Everyone still here? I don't mean to keep you, but this next scene is taking a while.
>>28007755Trust me, we are still here.Lurking in the shadows, feeding off of your words.
>>28007755I am for awhile, need to catch some sleep in 10-20 mins
>>28007755Still here, but will got to sleep soon.Take your time writing, good smut and good stories take their time.> I'm starting to produce unintelligble gibberish, I should see to my mattress soon.
>Keep writing next scene.>Finally get over writer's block.>Really getting into writing.>Alarm goes off, I need to leave for work!>MFWSee you guys in an hour or two.
>>28009517Damn, welp then i'll see the rest tomorrow then
I'll just voice my opinion that having six consecutive sex scenes is gonna be too much lewd and not enough story. Lewd is fine in moderation, but the amount you're talking about will outstay its welcome.
>>28010387The pastebins are great as a fade to black as you don't need to read them.He's going to fuck them all, there's no way around that.
>>28010477And it'll take a week of realtime for knight to write this all out. Him fucking them all doesn't mean we need to get detailed blow by blows about it.
>>28010637No, probably one thread. If he as any appreciation of realism the knights going to have less and less energy each time.
>Bumpin'As much as i love lewdness, i think >>28010387 might be on to something here. If KotR is as smart as i think though, he'll probably have a plan for this. For instance:Maybe Veila has convinced Aimeé to have that threesome after all...Maybe Seighild/Rina/Felicita just can't wait, and interrupt early?Maybe the knight's just outright gonna pass out.But regardless, I look forward to the next installment. It might be 2am here, but I'm sure I'll be awake a while yet.
First of all, I'm back.>>28010387>>28010477>>28010637>>28010696>>28011759Second, I'm beginning to agree with you. Its pretty exhausting just writing these scenes up, and they are taking forever. However, I've also kinda set myself in this course, and I'm already halfway through Aimèe's scene so the chance of combining her with Veila is more or less out.I'm probably going to try to power through these as fast as I can and hope it turns out acceptable. If its any consolation, the next scenes are hardly going to be as long and intense as Martina's.
>>28012256Sorry to let you down but I really don't have much of a plan. I'm just going to do the best I can with the situation I got myself into.
>>28012295I'll try to come up with something though.
There is a lesson to be learned here, I'm sure of it.
>>28012522Don't try to have sex with six different women in one night without a lot of drugs.
>>28012522Yeah. "Don't be an idiot when writing your story."
I...I tried...D..do you l..l..like it?
>>28012746Oh yeah! This was based off of Velarn's, here.>>28006503
>>28012746fuck yeah, now you just need to do one with Sir Knight riding Martina in her dragon form and one in her human form
>>28012907>now you just need to do one with Sir Knight riding Martina...in her human form
>>28012907>her human form>mfw I can't draw human females
>>28012994Make sure to include the riding harness.
>>28012994who said it had to be lewd, she has that harness after all, maybe after a few too many drinks Sir Knight rides her around the tavernoh who am I kidding, LEWDS FOR THE LEWD GOD, CUDDLES FOR THE PLUSH THRONE
>>28012746Those handles on the arms look very convenient for an enemy to use.
>>28013232they're for all his bitches to hang off of, or so he can tie they're leashes to them, like a bike rack
>>28013232Supposed to be supports for a shield; I remember reading that a shield arm should be more armored to absorb impacts.>>28013324this too>>28012907>>28012994>>28013080>>28013085ARE YOU READY TO CRINGE
Hey guys, I'm almost done with this section and - >>28012746OH MY GOD WE HAVE ANOTHER ARTIST! I'm sorry, its just that I am continually surprised that my story is good enough to warrant someone else contributing their creative energies to it. And that picture is great! I love it!>>28013496Hell, even that is great!Thank you sir!
>>28013496It's been over 20 minutes and I'm still laughing.Well done, good sir.
>>28013842I'm hitler on DAand there's nothing you can do to stop mealso, siegbert is the best
>>28000380Well I'm 1/3rd of the way through the girls now.http://pastebin.com/MnibYbMm
>>28013993Ah, I was wondering about that. Thanks for the compliments by the way.
>>28014092Keep pumping them out man!
>>28014171I feel that a rimshot or an "If you know what I mean" would be appropriate here...
>>28014171>>28014180>pumping them out>rimshotDOHOHOHO!
>>28014092So what did everyone think of that one?
>>280145168/1010/10 is reserved for the next Martina scene
>>28014860Now that maid me laugh
>>28014934My sense of humor isn't flexible enough to cum up with a proper response.
>>28014516Very enjoyable. They are appropriately lewd without dragging on too long or seeming fake.>>28014860>pic related
Bleh. I might have to finish this next piece tomorrow. Hopefully I'll get back on pace soon. Sorry to keep you all waiting.Keep the thread alive/archived for me.Thanks,Knight of the Realm
>>28017487Archived for ya
1) USA2) Its my privilege3) C4) This quest is my jam right now
>>28017757Do you still write?
>>28018103hahaha yes. But Blind Aliens got shitcanned hard when my hard drive died. 10,000 words more and a rather predictable conclusion all lost because I didn't think to back my work up somewhere.I'm working a new low/high fantasy project right now, I'm hoping to start posting soon.I might come back to Blind Aliens once I can work up enough energy to rewrite it all.
>>28012746That's awesome!I had problems with the helmet in three-dimensional space, so I made him in two dimensions, but you did really well.
>>28012746may I comment some details?he's a knight so his armor should be for mounted combat, so...-individual tassets-mail skirt-coupling a lance-rest on the right side of the torso- the coupling for the shield should be on the torso, not the arm
is the thread archived yet?
>>28020492yes, but its still got plenty of life left in it, 103 posts before bump limit, so we should keep it alive for KotR
Question for everyone: Who is your favorite girl?
>>28021349is all of them an acceptable answer?jokes, Martina is my fave, gotta love me some hand holding
>>28021349Maybe Rina if she was developed more.
>starts as some fun write-faggotry about a reversal of the traditional Princess/Dragon Captive/Captor roles in comedic style>devolves into a fucking harem animethis is why we can't leave you alone with narratives, /tg/
>>28022519Everyone has their guilty pleasures, this is ours. And KotR writes it in a good semi-original manner which makes it even juicier.
>>28022519the differences between this and the average harem anime have been made very clear.Mostly it's that the Knight isn't a whiny little bitch about the scenario.
>>28022519 The Road goes ever on and onDown from the door where it began.Now far ahead the Road has gone,And I must follow, if I can,Pursuing it with eager feet,Until it joins some larger wayWhere many paths and errands meet.And whither then? I cannot say.
>>28022609>the scenarioOne of these days I'll be able to hear that without thinking of Evangelion.
>>28022609At least there's that. He isn't afraid to do his Descartian duty
>>28022660I think of Tenchi Muyo
>>28022519I think KotR has been dropping some pretty clear hints in this thread and others that the Knight isn't necessarily acting normally. Could this just be a harem arc?
>>28022609Exactly, he doesn't get caught up in too much drama. He basically just says "I hope you get along girls because I'm going to fuck you all"
>>28022694most like he said. "or we all fuck or no one does"here we say "or we all fuck or we throw the whore to the river"
>>28022721>>28022694Truly, he is a man wise beyond his years
>>28022728http://youtu.be/mzJAmsEpYN0?t=4sThis seems eerily relevant
bippity boppity bump
>>28023475Is blind aliens dead? Or just not getting archived?
>>28023523see>>28018165for Blind Aliens tragic fate To be completely honest, Blind Aliens popped my writefag cherry, and while it may be on the back burner for now, I'll probably repost it in the future, and hopefully as a better executed work.
>>28023554That would be alright. I have to admit that it was a tad hard to get in to at times.
>>28023648indeed, bit of a bitch to write too. Trying to post it quickly, while maintaining the alien perspective, while keeping the plot coherent was probably biting off more than I could chew.So yeah, I'll be posting something more conventional soon, different name, same trip, and will start re-working Blind Aliens into a less on the fly concept piece. I'm almost done writing out the setting and the skeleton for the first plot arc, would you be interested in the google docs link?
>>28023699Thanks, but I try not to get too wound up about something until its out.Bugs the hell out of me when someone keeps insisting i watch this great new preview/trailer.
>>28023749Hahaha, yeah I know where you're coming from
I'm alive. I'll be back to writing again soon.>>28022679It wasn't that he isn't acting normally, it was that he wasn't acting normally before....>>28019736The Knights of the Realm handle combat both mounted and dismounted, so it could go either way.>>28022519Sorry about that. It just happened.>>28022650That... sounds about perfect. Good choice.>>28023554Great to see you again!
>>28024374Will they be joined by a female beholder at any point?
>>28024374Great to see you too! Finally caught up with your writing.
>>28024435You know... it has been a while since I could use this picture...
>>28024374>>28019736the thing is armor for ground combat lacks some details that make mounted combat a bit harder. But armor for mounted combat serves right for ground combat, although spurs are a bit tricky while using stairs....Also, I hope the Darves enchanted the armor with feather fall, is a must for dragon riders.
>>28024962Huh. I didn't know that about armor. I thought that each was specialized for its area. Good to know. Just curious, where did you find that out? I wouldn't mind looking the matter up more as well.
>>28025462jousting armor, hyperspecialiced to mounted combat
>>28025462don't worry, at most they are little details. It's just that mounted armor should allow to freely use a saddle while still protecting your royal jewels.
>>28025532But regular mounted armor isn't you say?>>28025781Still this is for my own personal curiosity as much as anything.>>28025622Added to my "Watch Later" list. Thanks!
>>28014092Boom 50% done!http://pastebin.com/tybDT8EqHave some secret dwarven blowjob techniques.**A combination of words I never expected to write.
you know guys... i can't help but imagine the girls tagging in (like what they do in "pro" wrestling) whenever one is finished.
>>28026475As usual, let me know what you think.>>28026478Heh. I can see that too now...
>>28025622>>28026014I'll be perfectly honest; I have never liked fully-enclosed armour like that, ESPECIALLY for knights errant. Apart from anything else, it's uncomfy to wear for long periods of time and embellishments like that frankly ridiculous codpiece, simply serve to highlight that it's a show-piece for well-off, landed knights and nobility.As I'm guessing our knight is un-landed, even if he is of substantial means, he would have need of armour that allows him to move freely and be worn with relative comfort for long periods of time. Obviously nothing as crass as half-plate and chain will do, especially after the recent re-tooling and upgrade (hoping for something truly epic later, as well. Regular magic armour is nice, but a Dragon Knight deserves something truly impressive. Yes, I am going to KEEP calling him that), but full tournament armour is mostly for showing off and providing protection, while worn for relatively short spaces of time. Any re-enactor will tell you how hot and uncomfortable full battle armour, let alone tourney armour, is. Even if you factor in magic, surely it would make more sense to enhance factors (such as comfort, or protection) that already exist, rather than to compensate for shortcomings, by making the effect whole-cloth. Frankly, I'd personally consider Dwarves more into that sort of thing, as showing off their craft as simplicity and quality in one package (Dwarves would love the AK-47), as opposed to having to rely on magic to back up a deficiency in their design.Naturally, other races may have other ideas. A highly magical race coughDRAGONScough might take pride in having the armour itself be more ornamental, putting their faith in enchantments, over iron/steel/mithril/adamantium/orichalcum, while valuing the latter ones for their mystical properties and beauty.That's just my opinion however. I've been on a culture creation kick lately.Looking forward to more, KotR! Pastebin, or otherwise.
>>28026633Hey Britfag, it's been a while since I saw your comments on my threads. How've you been?
>>28026475looking goodI like how each one is quite vividly different, and I'm looking forward to see how you're going to keep it up (no pun intended)
>>28026735I'm trying to make each one as unique as the girls. Its more difficult than it seems.Thanks for noticing!
>>28026475you should rephrase "arm" as "fingers" if possible.unless of course the knight is fisting them...anyways all three looks good so far!though i kinda feel a bit nervous for the elves.
>>28026758You're doing a great job so far! I'd still say my favourite is Martina though. I'm hoping when Felictia gets her turn, we can see a little development... Apart from anything, Sir Knight's gotta be feeling the strain by now! I suspect he wouldn't want her completely debasing herself anyway. Hey, nothing says a sex scene can't advance a character as well. There's a big difference between pride and arrogance after all. Felicitia's been broken down from her lofty tower, now it's time to slowly build her back up into a true castle. The foundations have been laid, but they're not enough on their own. Utter submission is as bad as total arrogance, after all.And I've been pretty good. Just lurking, so I don't make the place seem so namefagatrocious.
>>28026863>FelìcitaWorking on that bit now. This may be the longest Pastebin I've written, it turns out that adding character development significantly ups the word count...Don't worry, you're still getting delicious submissive elf sex though....
>>28022519I agree with you man, but what can we do? The haremists win again.
>>28028075Again, my apologies, but the story just developed that way. Hopefully you at least find the quest portion of the story entertaining enough to stick around for.If it helps, I doubt my next project will involve a harem.
>>28028211>If it helps, I doubt my next project will involve a harem.Dropped
>>28028211>If it helps, I doubt my next project will involve a harem.and so it was no one would read it
You've actually been doing an amazing job at not letting the harem shit get out of hand.
>>28028371You can't make everyone happy man. Write what you want.
>>28028371Both sides are full of whingeing little shits, and it's impossible to please everybody. I'll check out whatever you do after this because I really enjoy what you've done so far.
>Dropping name to avoid shenanigans>>28027618>submissive elf sexThe guiltiest of pleasures. I always somehow feel guilty about submissive girls... But at the same time, it's really nice to have someone who looks up to you so much.>>28028211Make no apologies for it. Some people will hate harem route no matter what. This does not make it inherently good, or bad. Any setting or story can be done badly, or well. All that it requires is to look at it objectively and focus on the story's merits, weighed against its flaws. Some people are unwilling to do that, taking a story at face value. Everyone has something they despise, even if they are otherwise objective. I, for instance, will not even consider reading a story where a character is mind-wiped, brainwashed, hypnotised, mind-raped, or otherwise robbed of agency and free will. Likewise, I have a predisposition towards certain character types and genres, which I try my hardest to set aside and do not always succeed in doing so.From as objective a standpoint as I can manage, however, this story is just great so far and getting, mostly steadily, better. Make no apologies for the themes, or setting, but only for genuine, literary hiccups, of which there has been exactly one major example, which you acknowledged and seem to be trying to learn from.>Bed time. Elf lewdings tomorrow, for me.>Good night /tg/. Love you all.>Yes, including you. You're loved too. Remember that.
>>28026475And another one down...Have some very submissive elf love.http://pastebin.com/sPfwT93U
>>28029497On a related note I can see why so many amateur authors use S&M for their sex scenes. Its really easy to get a lot of words out of it. Like, ridiculously easy.
>>28029564Why thank you.Can I ask what could make this story a 10/10?
>>28029497Its a nice break from the feisty princess from literally every other piece of fantasy in existence
>>28029594See >>28014663Seriously though, that was pretty fucking good.
Next the answers we've been waiting for: Who's better toned, Rina or Veila?
>>28029779Man... I'm tempted to make the two part of a threesome with the Knight, just to play up how they don't particularly care for each other, but I've already started the next bit.
It has occurred to me that Amiee's kid will be the odd one out. Shit I bet Sir Knight is gonna be the one to do all the shit like parent teacher conferences.
>>28030132> Half dragon child set the school on fine again and has been hoarding all the stationary supplies> "Martina, why don't you handle it this time around?"> "Handle what? I don't see a problem, seems like perfectly normal behavior to me."
Next bit is almost done.
>>28029497"Servant, assume the position"I lost it
>>28031473Like the others, I do find your writing quite amusing, good sir. My principal question is where you intend to take this from here. It is my sincere hope that now that we have jumped the shark in terms of sexual exploitation of all of the knight's female followers that we can get back to actual story development.
These pastebins are good, well done and all... but something in my head is screaming "something isn't right here!"The knight went from reluctant hero to absolute ladies man awfully damned fast. And then there was the idiotic princess who he had to rescue Martina from: she was carried away with passion, too, although more crazy.Is Isocrates' Rod exerting some type of mind altering effects, where the person carrying(or handling) it becomes more...Amorous, no...passionate? Emotional? Are pheromones involved?Or is it control. Is the Rod causing the person who carries/wields it to exert a mild control over those who come in contact with him, the more intimate the contact, the stronger the control...Meh, those are just my ruminations on it...Again, good story so far.
>>28031827Or is Isocrates' Rod Isocarates'..."Rod?" Maybe that's why he's so desperate to get it back... It exudes Virility.
>>28031808I'd say we're done for the foreseeable future. I don't plan to nor do I desire to write another sex scene for a while after these few are finished. There's a reason I named this thread "A Brief Interlude."
>>28031863Nah. Always had my suspicions, but these pastebins are triggering the "oh shit" button something fierce.
>>28031827We've speculated that the sword he picked up was enchanted a touch more than just the fire effect
>>28031943Yeah, forgot about that speculation...This sword of mine burns with an awesome power. It's burning blade tells me to defeat your virginity!
>>28029497> SO I WILLFuckin hilarious
>>28031827>>28031911It's less what's happening now than what was happening earlier in the story. I think one person came really close to guessing it, but never explored that argument further.
>>28031473Sorry about the wait. This bit is taking a while. And going strange directions too.
>>28026633let me assure you, as a reenactor, that all armor is uncomfy to wear for long periods, and helmets are even worse. and that fashion is a very important part in armor desing.even questing knights wouldn't carry their armor 24/7. it's not cloth, it's for war.
>>28033498I'm certainly not an expert on the subject, but I had the Knight wearing his armor for a significant portion of his time.In the case of the Knight, its less about physical comfort and more about psychological comfort. Everyone has an outfit or a set of clothes that they wear when they're in certain situations and when they are out of that outfit, they feel uncomfortable. For instance I know many people who become a little bit uncomfortable when asked to remove their shoes when entering a home. Why? Because that is part of their "outfit" for being out and about. Have you ever noticed that you were missing something small, like a watch or a phone, once you started your day? Do you remember the mild discomfort you felt? It was nothing major, but just awkward because you lost part of your "outfit."To the Knight, his armor is his outfit. Its not physically comfortable by any stretch of the imagination, but it is what he wears when he's out.>Of course, I could just be talking out of my ass and anyone with more knowledge in the matter could shoot me down easily.
>>28033573Or you're the author and whatever you say goes, all papers in related fields be damned.
>>28033378Seriously, writing this bit is confusing.>Girl shows upCool. Initiate small talk>Small talk initiatedGood, now lets start up foreplay!>Heart to heart conversation initiated.Huh? What the hell... Oh well at least she's interested in having sex. Initiate sex!>Foreplay initiated.Well then. I'll just wait for this to finish, and she's ready for sex again! Initiate sex!>Heart to heart conversation initiated.All right... lets see what's going on here...Should be finished soon though.
>>28033594If someone's wrote a paper in this area, please let me know. I try to yield to reality whenever possible.
>>28029497Here you go, have a very surprising turn of events.http://pastebin.com/nWB7keKy
>>28033838Well, let me know how it is once you finish. I'm not sure myself how I like it.
>>28033891Hm, certainly a change from the other scenes, though I liked it. Rina isn't just there for the D, always seemed like the character which is attitude wise closest to the Knight and bothered by the same emotinal problems like him. Now they had time to talk in private for the first time and apparently they took this chance. It was less of a smut scene and more feelings and I'm totally okay with that.
>>28033838Sir knight once again proves to not be an asshole, Although I can see this trait coming back around to bite him in the ass in the future. The only thing I'm worried about for our knight is someone he knows stabbing him in the back, as I'm not sure how he would take a thrust to that hole in his armor.
I'm thinking I'm going to turn in for the night right now. I'll finish the last one (Veila obviously) up tomorrow.In the meantime, keep letting me know what you think of the story so far. Could always use more feedback.
>>28034065> an asshole>in the ass>in the back>a thrust to that hole in his armorI see what you did there, and I'm ok with it.
>>28034261I couldn't back off from the opportunity. KotR left himself open, presented a rather large target if you will. It was still a solid interpretation, I do not half-ass my buns.Ima sleep too, its fucking late
>>28033573no problem with that. I've been out drinking with friends for 8 hours with mail and a helmet. It can be done, it's not comfortable, but sometines there is no place to leave the armor and doffing and donning it in a sort spam can be REALLY bothersome.
>>28033891Is this what Rina looks like or is it just to show what the dress she's wearing?
>>28034154I'm not even reading these for the lewd anymore, though it is a nice little addition. I'm really liking the moments they are sharing together. Instead of hiding in the bushes and taking pictures, it's relief at seeing people who should be together finally do something about it.You have made me care more about the characters than the smut. Bravo sir, bravo.
>>28036172The true measure of success for any story that include lewdings. By this measure, we can, by all standards available to us, judge this story and its author's talents to be A Very Good Thing.I present the highest aware I have: The most magnificent technique of the Glorious Solar Thumbs-Up.
>>28036729Oh God, I just watched that movie this week.God that was glorious.
>>28036729Redline, right? I need to watch that one of these days.
I'm back everyone. Writing resumes momentarily.>>28035190That's supposed to be a picture of her dress, or at least some concept of it. Rina looks a bit closer to pic related.>>28036172Thank you, I'm flattered to hear that.>>28036729I'm honored good Anon.>>28034584That... sounds really fun actually. I'm a bit envious.
>>28039069We've got to be near the bump limit, so I'd advise letting this thread die and making a new one instead.
>>28039942We aren't even close.
>>28039069That half-elf reminds me of Korra...
>>28040087Its the clothes.And I'd forgotten how awesome the first episode of LoK was. Show is quite meh now
Four from bump limit.
i am pleasantly surprised about these pastebins, the writing actually gets better, albeit slightly, every time.
Sorry about the wait. I got pulled away on something for a few hours. Good news, I got my old computer replaced. I'm setting up the new one right now. Next post should be the next pastebin.>>28043927Thank you for your compliments.
>>28044411so how's the new comp working for your Knight?
>>28047913Very nicely so far. The computer I was using was about a decade old so the change is an improvement. However moving all my files over is a pain. Reader Note: I may have to make a new thread for the next pastebin.
>>28044411wait wait wait.did you actually buy a new comp for this or was this planned for a while?
>>28048129No. A few months ago my computer had a major break down. I had to revert to the older model until I could pick up a new computer. That just happened today.
Bumping for knightly virtuousness and delicious lewdings.
>>28051921thread went bast bump limit 3 posts before yours, this threads terminal
>>28052032damn anon, that's grim