Posting mode: Reply
Password(Password used for file deletion)
  • Supported file types are: GIF, JPG, PNG
  • Maximum file size allowed is 3072 KB.
  • Images greater than 250x250 pixels will be thumbnailed.
  • Read the rules and FAQ before posting.
  • ????????? - ??

  • File : 1295753408.jpg-(258 KB, 1800x2289, 1291441627202.jpg)
    258 KB Sororitas Quest 3: The soulless Taint IV His Divine Wrath 01/22/11(Sat)22:30 No.13623078  
    Archive: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Sisters%20of%20Battle

    Chapter 2 pt1: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/12385200/

    Tessa was first down the hole, followed by Rodwen and finally yourself. Fortran was gripping the wall, trying to stay stable as the entire structure rocked and swayed, chunks of it already peeling away. The ice in the room was shattering, sending razor like shards raining down on you and your party.

    You grabbed Tessa by the waist and was about to do the same Rodwen, but the Farseer was already gone, vaulting out the window, psykic power crackling around her as she cushioned her fall.

    You grab Fortran quickly, pulling both girls toward and out the window. Your urgency left your mind clouded momentarily, summoning your powers only after you had begun to fall.

    You hit the ground a ways from the farseer, the impact burying you deep in the snow. You struggled out of it quickly, your dazed companions rising to their feet beside you soon after drawn out by the dying cries of the structure. Your gaze too was drawn to the building as it gave another agonized screech, twisting in ways that defied all rational law. The realm around you began to buckle and sway in turn, the psykic pressure of the chaos god lessening on your mind.

    The farseer shouted to you, bringing you back to reality. She had already begun moving away, Fortran stumbling after her in the deep snow. Tessa tugged at your arm, pulling you quickly along as the building imploded behind you, sucked into a non-existent point.
    >> His Divine Wrath 01/22/11(Sat)22:30 No.13623079

    As quickly as it started, everything stopped, the world around you ravaged and warped by the massive displacement of energy. Stone and concrete buildings, once tall, were now twisted into horrible shapes, the souls used in the construction of the realm pressing out of the walls in atrophied, vaguely-humanoid shapes. Fog began to roll in as an icy wind blasted you from somewhere deep in the realm.

    Behind you, where the building once stood, gaped an enormous pit. A massive, ragged tear in the very fabric of warp-space.

    You could feel dread's cold talons working their way into your mind as you gazed into the wall of fog, your limbs heavy with fatigue. Your companions looked similarly, their bodies hunched and shivering.

    Rodwen's whispered voice cracked the silence. "It knows we're here..."

    You shook your head, swallowing hard, determined to keep strong. It didn't go past you that the swarm was gone, either destroyed or having fled from the crushing blow to the structure of this reality.
    >> His Divine Wrath 01/22/11(Sat)23:40 No.13623790
    bumpin for my questers back.
    >> Anonymous 01/22/11(Sat)23:45 No.13623835
    I'm right here with you, OP. I'll write up a reply really quickly.
    Also, in case anybody missed it, here's a new fic between Elizabeth and Sonja.
    >> Anonymous 01/22/11(Sat)23:55 No.13623941
    "Excellent job, everybody. If it is this angry, then we must have struck a powerful blow."
    I gesture for everybody to draw near me, and I cover everybody with a heavy dose of my aura.
    The god seemed absolutely pissed at us, and I didn't want to present an opening for it to strike at us.
    I glance at Rodwen. "Would we be able to switch out people right now? I would like to send Fortran back, since I don't think she will be able to help us any further."
    >> Anonymous 01/23/11(Sun)00:23 No.13624203
    As for who we bring in, I say in order of preference: Anna if she is awake, Sonja if she feels up to it, and Florencia if she has her armor fixed.
    I'm assuming that the fog is also the boundary to the god's realm?
    Once we change everybody out, push on!
    Maybe something along the lines of, "Come, everybody, the beast is on its heels, we completely surprised it. Time to push on and do more damage, before the thing recovers."
    >> Anonymous 01/23/11(Sun)00:43 No.13624381
    Bump for fellow questers. Get in here everybody!
    >> His Divine Wrath 01/23/11(Sun)01:53 No.13625046

    Read and reviewed my writefriend. There I explained why it was epic win :P
    >> High Lord Writefag 01/23/11(Sun)02:16 No.13625211
    I thank thee, Most Revered Dungeon Mistress of the Ecclesiarchy.
    I shall bear my title with pride.

    I'm glad you enjoyed the story, especially since I was going for a little more risque and combat orientated piece.
    >> Anonymous 01/23/11(Sun)04:08 No.13626110
    Why is this archived already?
    >> High Lord Writefag 01/23/11(Sun)04:14 No.13626150
    Probably just in case it falls off the board.
    Don't want to lose any story that we would have developed, after all.
    >> His Divine Wrath 01/23/11(Sun)04:50 No.13626391

    That and if the thread ever 404s without me posting a link to the new one, i'll archive the new one instantly so you can more easily find it.

    also the descriptions may also contain hints or spoilers
    >> Anonymous 01/23/11(Sun)05:06 No.13626497
    Ah ha!
    Found it!
    "... Let it. It was going to happen sooner or later. Better that we have struck it while it was still unawares."
    I sigh, and cross my arms.
    "Still, I guess the going will be tougher from here on out. I think that as soon as we come across another tear in reality, we should switch out again."
    I turn, roughly facing what I believe to be the straightest route to the center of this place.
    "Come on. Where there's smoke there's fire. And I don't want to see what the chaos god will send to put *that* fire out." I say, pointing to the tear in reality

    Delete Post [File Only]
    Style [Yotsuba | Yotsuba B | Futaba | Burichan]